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Do i think Facial Action Coding System would be a great idea. Yes i think they should try using the new technology. I feel that it would help, us humans more and better. Its so many daily problems that could be solved with this Facial Action Coding Sytem.

Like the criminal Justice system criminals wouldnt be able to get away with simple things rape charger would be solved easier all those thngs. Its so many rumors and lies the goverment has but we dont know if there true or not. Thats why Facial Action coding would help the Undited states in so manny different ways. Terriost in America would be caught and solved.

Alot of murders also happen because of relationships a bad break up, might not go as well as planned. Thats why with this Facial coding they would know whos lieing, whos no bieng honest and all. So my opinion on the Fcial Action Coding is yes give it a go see how many daily problems it solves.

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