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According to the article, I support the author in studying Venus. I believe this is a great idea because we all need to be informed about our solar system and what's going around. I believe we all need to be aware of the dangers it could cause, and what could happen.

If you take a look at paragraph 2 and 3, it gives us a good explanation about things that they have studied in the past and things we need to be aware of. Like, did you know that the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here on Earth? I did not know that and I find it amazing how that works or how we can just be so aware about things like this. It is good to know the goods and bads of everythings and this is why I support the author. These are some important need to knows and I think we all need to stay and be aware of these type of things. Just to be more informed.

It is good to know the dangers of things because none of us want to be living and wondering what could happen to us if we don't understand something.

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