Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Being in the Seagoing Cowboys program is a opportunity of

a life time.Ever since I joined the

Seagoing Cowboys program it has been rough but fun . I think everyone who likes adventure and fun should join the

Seagoing Cowboys program.

One reason you should join the progam it is a opportunity to help people." When World 2 was over in Europe, and

many countries were left in ruins., UNRRA hired the" Seagoing Cowboys "

to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shiped over seas." Another reason is we get to do fun things like volleyball, basketball, tennis- table, boxing fencing, reading, whittling, and games to help pass time. Finally it made me aware people were suffering and it might help you notice people are suffering far greater than you

are." It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.

As you can see being a

Seagoing Cowboy is not all that boring as you probably thought it was. I hope you will join the Seagoing Cowboys program. If you like adventure and fun the Seagoing Cowboys program is a perfect fit for you.

Score: 3