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What would you do if you were left in ruins? Have you ever thought of being a Seagoing Cowboy?

Well here's your chance to be that person to help all those people that are left with nothing. A person that is a hero to those who need one.

Have you ever thought of helping someone who can't even help their own family? If you don't want to help them. You should be ashamed of yourself. Put yourself in their shoes. You would be starving, sleeping on the ground with no bed, you would have nothing to cover yourself with, and watching your family starve too.

Have you ever wanted to take care of a animal for a good cause? If you have you can become a Seagoing Cowboy. "Its better than having two jobs." Just think of taking care of the horses. You can feed them , and give them a baths , and even pet them all day.

Have you ever wanted to see the world? Is it to much to go places. Well know you can go for free. You can become a Seagoing Cowboy, and still see beautiful places. Where ever your going I bet they have something you would love to see." I had a side benifit of seeing Europe and China, but seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special."

So put yourself in a person who needs help. What would you do if that was you and your family that were left in ruins. You would have no money to even buy meat. So if you even give them one cow that means a lot to them.

What would you do if you always wanted to become a animal care taker, but you can't because you can't find one in your city. Well you can always become a seagoing cowboy, or girl.

Is it to much to go places. Well you can become a seagoing cowboy, and still see amazing places. Every courty has its beautiy. So if you wanted to become all these things. I think you should join me, and become a Seagoing Cowboy.

Score: 3