Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
"Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people is feeling even when they are trying to hide their emotion,".

Did you know moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even produce them? "The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face while it show how much the computer can really do",. Also just by making someone day you can make his/her smile and yourself smile because it feels great to give back to people , now i understand why leonardo da vinci made this because he had gotten tired of seeing people sad faces so by making the Mona Lisa he brought cheer and smiles to the world." A renowned drama coach Constantin Stanislavsky had his actors to carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating theses emotin on stage".

Overall Facial Actin Coding system was a great idea to put that in action and get the world to know and Nick D'Alto has made it better.

Score: 2