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In this article, "A Cowboy who Rode the Waves", Luke finds a love for being a Seagoing Cowboy.

There are many things to like about it.

Some examples would be; you are helping people, you get to see new places, and you have a lot of fun while traveling!

On Luke's trip, the Seagoing Cowboys, he helped the countries whom where in ruins after World War II, as it states in paragraph 2.

The atricle states World War II had just ended in Europe.

The UNRRA hired the Seagoing Cowboys so they could take care of the animals such as; horses, young cows, and mules.

Paragraph 2 states they shipped these animals over seas.

Another thing to enjoy about being a Seagoing Cowboy is, seeing new places.

Many people enjoy seeing different places and the intresting structures built there.

Paragraph 5 tells us that, Luke got to see Europe and China.

It also states he toured an excavated castle in Crete on his way to China.

Lastly, the boys had fun while traveling.

Pargraph 8 states, they played baseball and volleyball in the empty holes where the animals had been housed.

They also had table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and more to help pass the time while traveling.

Luke had a great time in his days as a Seagoing Cowboy.

If you like helping peolpe, witnessing new surroundings or fun games with your friends, you would like being a Seagoing Cowboy.

Score: 2