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In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile", the Facial Actions Coding Systems symbolizes a change in technology.

I think this could change our country because it will open our eyes up a bit for the kids sake. This could help us in many ways. Eckman has cassified six basic emtions- happiness, surprise, anger,disgust, fear,and sadness are all very important for children and adults.

The article says " In fact, we humans peform this same impressive "calculation" everyday. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face." I completely agree with all of this because it so true. Everyon eknows that they use this in every day life and you probably don't even know it either. I use it his at school every day because I care for the people around me.

This could show who in the classroom is depressed and could help our world be a better place. by the new technology using this, it could save lives by suicide. I'm saying this because our world had become dark with all of this. we need more help.

The Article says " a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored," Dr. Huang predicts

and then it could modify the lesson, likean effective human instructor". This could be huge for the schools we send our children too. "Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication," notes Dr. Huang. So what he is getting at is computers are going to have to start to understand that

and i completely agree with him.

In the article " Making Mona Lisa Smile," the Facial Actions Coding symbolizes a change in technolgy and I agree that we should do this for our children. We need to do this cause it will change our ways of how we learn forever. The computer will not misread peoples faces and

if they ever get bored of the lesson he/she is learning. Then, the computer will regonize it and make the lesson funner and will benifit the kids much more than what they are doing now for us.

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