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People all over the world have long lived for the day that technology could read your mind. Maybe you wanted to know how your spouse felt about your gift or what your co-workers reallly thought about the home made pizza your brought in. Now that this technology is availible, there are just some things you shouldnt have to use it on. The classroom being one of them, here is why.

The main job for teacher is to teach the students something new, something that they can use later in life. Teachers are also supposed to be able to know when the content they are teaching is helping the students. This technology is going to do nothing but distract or make it harder for the students to learn. This next quote talks about having computers that can tell the emotion of the student. " A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,"(Huang) Computers are already a big distraction to the students in the world, but now we're talking about putting a software in the computer that watches the students everymove and facial expression. This just seems like another distraction for a child lose focus with.

Another reason these softwares don't need to be on these computer is because it is an invasion of the students privacy. Children don't want even more eyes on them because then its going to make them nervous and feel like they can't get anything done because there is someone behind the screen seeing if they mess up or do good. "Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements" (D'Alto) Tracking a students work good will help to see if they are improving or not, but tracking there face just doesnt seem ethical.

A computer that recongizes your face just doesn't seem needed for the classroom. We have teachers that can tell whether the lesson is helping the student or whether it's not helping them learn. Teachers all around the world don't need a software that can see how the student is feeling about there class work. We shouldn't have to replace our teachers eyes with a computer software that can tell if the students are having a hard time or not.

Score: 4