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Do you still think that the "Face on Mars" was created by aliens? Well if you do, here is some information that I have on the case that will probably make you change your mind.

My first piece of evidence is that not everything you see is really what you believed. If you look at the image of the "Face on Mars" it really does look like a face, but it turns out that the shape was formed by rocks. These rocks formed together and made it have the shape it has. Just like the montains and hills you see outside. They all have different shapes and that doesn't mean it was made by aliens. Same with clouds, there are many clouds that you see and think "Oh, It looks like an animal." That just shows that anything can have different shapes and doesn't mean it was formed by something.

My second piece of evidence that shows that the Face is really just a natural landform and is even proved by scientists. Since the topic of the Face got so popular they actually flew over the area again to get another closer shot of the face. When people saw the new photo they were disappointed to see that it really was just a rock formation and a natural landform. Some people still disagreed and made the team take another picture that revealed it was just a butte or mesa, a landform common around the west. Even someone said, "It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho." Saying that there are landforms just like the Face. He also said these landforms in Idaho were about the same size of the Face.

There was my information and evidence that proves that the Face really isn't a face and just is a normal landform. You can't always assume that some object is what you think it is, until you actually look closer into it. This was just telling you that it wasnt something made by aliens, but just a normal landform with an odd shape. I hope this made you change your mind on the whole topic.

Score: 4