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Are driverless cars good or bad? Developers today are trying to create driverless cars. These cars have some negative aspects. In "Driverless Cars Are Coming", some issues were money, sensors, and pop-up displays inside the car. These aspects could cause crashes which could allow for injuries and even death.

Many developers want to make "smarter" roads instead of "smarter" cars. General Motors came up with a track the cars could run on. On the other hand, these road systems would "require massive upgrades to existing roads" which in turn would be very expensive. On top of that, building these "smart" roads would take up a great amount of time- not practical for people trying to get to specific places in a hurry.

In the text, these cars "need a whole lot of sensors". The sensors allow the car to "know" it's surroundings and what to do. The information carried from the sensors can apply brakes and even reduce speed. These sensors also alert the driver of danger and when he/she should take the wheel. What would happen if the sensors malfunctioned? With malfunctioned sensors, the car could crash because the car would not "know" its surroundings. This could cause injury or even death. Sensors could also increase the speed of the engine making the car unstable and making the roads unsafe for fellow drivers.

Manufacturers are "hoping to bring in-car entertainment and information systems as heads-up displays". These displays would take over texting and driving, a common issue, but could distract the driver more. If the displays don't go down when the driver takes control of the car, it could cause an accident. The heads-up displays also takes the driver's attention off the road.

Thus, there are negative aspects of the driverless cars. In the article "Driverless Cars Are Coming", there were several issues found embedded in the text. The negative aspects included: expense, sensors, and displays. As these cars become more developed, the risks may increase.

Score: 4