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Ther is a movie about "Trip to Mars", in the movie they were talking about mars how they were going to take a trip to mars. They were going to sent 15 men and women to mars. the men and women had diffrent ships so they could focus more. when it was time they went to space but the men and women seprated because they had lost signal with earth. The men did not reach to mars but the women did and they were sad but they just studied the plantet and tryed to contact earth. The next thing i'm going to say won't be like this story but very different. The challange of exporing veus is the differences in speed, carbon dixodie, and trying to study the planet.

One challange of exploring venus is the differences in speed. One day we are closer to mars but other days we are closer to venus and it could mess up the time an date. "These differences in speed mean that sometime we are closer to Mars and other times to venus". Spacecrafts have been sent to venus to check out the planet but cause of the differences in speed we have sent spacecraft to different place. "Because Venus is sometimes right around the coner--in space terms--humans have sent spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world".

Another challange we have face is the carbon dioxide."A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dixoide blanket venus". It is really hard for us to be at that plantet because the carbon dixoide. Another thing that is bad that it has a high

sulfuric acid. On the planet the temperatures are over 800 degreeds Fahrenheit. "The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet". Venus not a place to go because it is not good for humans to live or visit here.

Last reason of The challenge of exploring venus is we can't go to close or we could die. Venus is not for human to vist because it is very challenging but we have to try to study the planet. Their are spacecraft hovering saftley around venus because it is very dangreous to land or getting to close to it. "more imprtantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distanse. If they got closer they could probley get a sample but they can't because it is dangreous to get close.

In conclusion The challange of exporing veus is the differences in speed, carbon dixodie, and trying to study the planet. The author who wrote this did very well explaning how it is challanging to explore venus.

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