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Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy is a once in a lifetime chance that you have to take.

Luke was very lucky to be able to help people in different countries that were left in ruins after the war ended.

In Luke's life, Don was very important.

He helped him become the person that Luke was supposed to become. Luke is very grateful for Don.

Without Luke and everyone else it would have been a lot harder to transport the animals to different places in the world.

You should become a Seagoing Cowboy because you get to experience the feeling of helping others who are in need.

Another reason why people should become a Seagoing Cowboy is because you can take tours and

go see different places.

For example if you went to France you could go to Paris and see the Eifel Tower!

Being a Seagoing Cowboy can be very fun!

People need Seagoing Cowboys because they might not have enough money to stay on the boats with their animals.

Also, people won't want their animals to be alone during a long boat ride.

Seagoing Cowboys can also help with giving animals comany.

Seagoing Cowboys are also needed to take care of the animals.

For example, if the captain of the ship is too busy to feed the animals then no one will feed them!

Then the animals could die!

Right there on the ship!

If the animals die, the people have no where to put them.

What is next?

Throwing them overboard?

We need Seagoing Cowboys for many reasons.

These are just a couple of reasons.

Being a Seagoing Cowboy is not easy.

Some of the trips that Luke took lasted two whole weeks!

That is pretty long.

It is also expensive.

On one of the trips that Luke took they had about 335 horses plus enough food for them to eat!

That is a lot of food. On that same trip, Luke arrived the day the Pacific war ended.

Being a Seagoing Cowboy is also difficujlt because they probably had to cross through many storms.

Also,

they were on the ship during the Pacific war.

Serving as a Seagoing Cowboy takes courage, responsibility, hard work, and possitive attitudes.

That is exactly what Luke had.

We are thankful for what Luke did.

Luke is an inspiration to us all.

We look up to him as a friend and as a follower in his foot steps to become the best person we can be.

We thank not just Luke but everyone else who was there right by his side, helping him.

We thank everyone who was not by his side but did what he did to help others.

Luke did great things, great things that we all want to do.

Luke was amazing!

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