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The idea that author supports the studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers in article says Venus sometimes called the "evening star" is the of the brightest points of

light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur starganzer to spot.

The evidence from the article that supports my claim is on the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times

greater than what we experience on our own planet.

The introduction aand conclusion of this essay is second planet from our sun while is simple to see from the distant but afe vantage point of Earth it proved a very challenging place to examiine more to extreme, and Physical conditon exposig a cell phone or tablet to acis or heat capable of malting tin by comparison systems that use machanical parts can be made more resistwnt to pressure, heat , other forces.

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