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The author of this article makes some very good points to supporting the idea of studying Venus or also know as Earth's "twin" planet. In their article they talk about how Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. While it seems like a great idea to think about the planet to visit in the future, it's atmosphere and enviroment is lethal. It's thick atmosphere is about 97 percent carbon dioxide and most challenging is that Venus's clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid and the planet's average temperatures ranges over 800 degress Fahrenheit. Never the less, Astronomers are deterimned to study the planet even if it means getting up close and personal. By study what they could, NASA is determinded to find solutions and oppritrunities to study the planet for near future visits to the planet for humans. Even though the challenge presented by Venus has value, but its a cost that is worth for future space explorations and travels.

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