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There are a lot of reasons to join the program you could always help all the people that need the help.The people that need the help most are the people that are hurt or need to save their kids so they dont die.People like Luck can or could of helped the people or kids that got hurt in any war we can have some day.People like Luck can help all the kids that arent sick save their moms,dads,aunt,uncels,grandmas,grandpas all thoses people that want to save the people that dont even know.They could help the people that want to save ther cats,dogs,fish,or any animal they want to save they can save.

Like Luck he may have got hurt but when he could go back on the seagoing cowboy experience he still wanted to help all the people,kids,and animals that they want to keep everyone happy with who they love and not lose any of them.They can help anyone that they can get to in like the time they have if they have a time to save as many people they can.In the begining before Luke waned to go on the trip her was working two-part-time jobs one was at a grocery store and then at a bank.Then Lucks friend Don invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat yes he could say no but he didn't want to so he went on the trip.So he did what he could do till he got hurt but when he was better he when to go help the reast of the people that needed help.

Luck wanted to help all the people he could im sure of it but when he got hurt he left just the people that were already helping people get better.So when people want to save people they just didn't want to save just people they wanted to save animals to.Then Luck knew he could help the animals or all the animals that he could in stead of just helping people and kids.So Luck tried to help all the people,kids,and anilmals there.They might have saved every one there no one knows if they got saved.

Score: 3