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I think that schools should use this techonlogy to tell when a student is going through a tough day. If schools had that technology schools would be a lot safer and we wouoldnt have to worry about

violence on school property. In the story it state that “A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,” Dr. Huang predicts. Can you imagine how sage schools would be if they were able to detect how a student how has his head down with his hood up or the kid that doesn't speak??

With this software cops could see if a suspect is lying or not by just decoding their expression. The author states that

“The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,” observes Dr. Huang, “even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression” I mean of course it would be to decode a actor or actress's moods since they get paid to use various of mood.

Now with this oftware you detect if your girlfriend is angery,upset,disgusted, fearful or happy without getting on her nerves by asking . When I first read the article is against it because that's kind of personal but theen I began thinking about how helpful ad useful this could be to put an end to school shootings.Now if we have this technology we could detect who isn't happy and could make sure they get to feeling better and make sure nothing happens the could be detremental to society even for the kids 12-21 .

Lastly, this technology could improve the crime rate a lot more by being able to have access to this techology police departments can find out if a victim or suspect is lying.

In conclussion I would like to see to see the Facial Action Coding System in schools and within the use of police deparmnets across the nation. Farther more with this technology in schools i hope to see the number of school violence decrease with the use of this software.

Score: 3