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The author finds ways to evaluate the dangers of exploring Venus as they find it as a worthy pursuit. Since Venus is a planet and it's next to earth, it only makes sense to explore more of what's already been explored. It's been decades sense something has landed on Venus, and no man has ever set foot there. Venus was once Earth-like in it's time.

Venus is something we see all the time. "Venus, sometimes called the "Evening Star" is one of the brightest points of light in the sky, making it simple to spot." It won't be easy but at least it's close. Every spacecraft sent to this land is unmanned. "Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world." With this they can build something stronger. They can examine what didn't work and what technologies could be better to use so they can work their way up into being able to go for themslves. Also if Venus was once like earth, theres more they need to look into, as in how and why it isn't so much like Earth anymore. "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."

As these datails could go on, Venus is something we don't know too much about because of it's dangers. But from past experiences, we could change some things to get us there. By working on new equipment and examining things extra causiously, it could get us to where we want to be to be able to explore this planet we call Venus. As it is dangerous, it can lead to something wonderful as we can discover more things. It's worth a shot!

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