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Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. It's a worthy pursuit because in the text it says that Venus is sometimes around the corner, not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades, it's a challenging place to examine more closely, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.

Venus being around the corner makes it a worthy pursuit because whenever it's around the corner, it can make it easier to get there. When it's not around the corner from us, it can be harder because of how far it would be. It can also take lots of fuel to get there and it might be hard to refuel the spacecraft in space.

Venus has not been touched by a spacecraft in three decades. This proves that it is a worthy pursuit because we can set a record maybe. The NASA would get known for working hard and risking their lives to explore a dangerous planet for our entertainment. This also makes it a worthy pursuit because things might have changed since the last spacecraft touchdown. New land might have grown, new rock, and maybe new mountains.

Venus being a challenging planet to explore also helps to show that it's a worthy pursuit. This helps because most people like challenges. Venus being a challenging planet to explore might attract lots of people wanting to explore Venus. The temperature is dangerous and can probably kill you instantly and there are many people who would still want to explore Venus.

Venus having a pressure 90 times stronger than what we live on can also help to show that Venus is a worthy pursuit. It helps because the scientists would want to know how it would feel like to be on Venus. They would want to know if people could adapt to living there in the future. They would also like to know if food such as vegetables or fruit can be grown on Venus. They would also like to study the soil and weather changes on Venus.

These are all ideas and reasons that show why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Despite all the challenges they might go through, it can be a fun thing to do.

Score: 4