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Despite of what Luke said about it being hard work taking care of animals all day and night,he still loves to be a seagoing cowboy.Even though it is hard work taking care of animals, it is all worth it because you travel to places around the world. There are lots and lots of animals who need help in many ways including with;food shelter,and water.Animals need people that are called SEGOING COWBOYS!

If you want to help animals survive, then sign up for the UNRRA today.If you sign up for the UNRRA you could probably go to more trips then Luke with,9 trips.You can also be able to travel to places where you never even imagined of going.If you sign up you won't regret it if you like animals.So if you are a animal person sign up for UNRRA quickly!

What Luke did was a great job with taking care of animals,but you can do even better.Also when you are doing the work that you are required you can have fun in between the breaks that you have just like Luke did. You can be a bigger help to the animals than any other seagoing cowboy was.Think positive, beat Lukes record and PLEASE SIGN UP FOR UNRRA TODAY!

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