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I believe that going for a trip to Venus would be a very difficult challenge to face. Venus would have to be a very well round planned trip: it might take some tries

that´s what I believe. It´s worthy enough to go to Venus but, despite the fact that the extreme temperatures, and high pressured atmosphere are it´s two biggest challenges to overcome to make it there.

The average surface temperature is 800 degrees Fahrenheit. That´s overly extreme temperatures for any one on Earth if you´d ask me. It´s a fact that Venus

temperature is about twice as hot as the food you cook in the oven. As said in paragraph five,¨At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit.¨ Temperatures would have to be quite lower than that for humans to survive on Venus.

Venus atmosphere is still second on its biggest problems. The atmosphere of Venus is similar to Earth´s sea level only when your higher up though. When you hit rock bottom on Venus the pressure would be over the boards high. In paragraph 3 it says,¨ Atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experienced on our own planet. The atmosphere is pretty thick almost full of carbondioxide

blankets.

Venus probably can´t be live able, but there is always a bright side to everything. It´ll take years on top of years on top of years to make. It´s like a strategic plan using all smarts. NASA and other scientist are working to work past these challenges by innovating such devices as Mechanical computers, and a workable metal to substain these purposes. I believe that there is hope to this project overcome the exploring of Venus.

So if you asked me living on Venus would be almost impossible even if these devices work.

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