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In this essay the author supports well the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author presents us wih many advantages there is to furthure exploring venus. Venus is the closest planet to the Earth in terms of density and size, and on some occasions the closest in distance to. Venus may very well have been the most Earth- like planet in our solar system due to its very familar forms and possibly long ago could have had the same features and asspects that Earth has today. There have been many rising ideas that could help with a more thorough study of Venus. These are some of the ideas that the author presented us with in this article.

To begin with the author explained how similar Venus is to Earth. Although Venus is the planet closest to Earth in terms of desity and size it has been very difficult for us to study the planet. A thich atmospherte of almsot 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. What has been even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Here the authos has been giving us specific ideas on why the Venus us so hard to study. But the autgor has presented us with a very important detail. Venus is sometimes right around the corner from Earth in space terms, which can be our neartest point for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.

Not only does the author give those deatils but also explains how Venus could have one been very silimar to Earth in many asspects. The author says that

Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The author also includes existing facts. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features suck as valleys, mountains, and craters.

The author also presents us with some possible ways to fix the prbelem of bein able to study Venus. The idea is that NASA has a possible solution that would allow scientists to float above the fray. Being able to float 30 or so miles above the planet could avoid the unfrienly conditions but they would be survivable for humans. There are also other ideas given by the author like simplified electronics made of silicon carbide that has been able to survivie in the conditions for 3 weeks. And mechanical computers. All of these could give the opportunity to better study Venus.

In conclusion the author has presented us with sufficiant details that suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. Not only because it could be a great scientific study and make us more knowledgable. But the author says human curuiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. The authors is saying that being able to study Venus which is the planet most similar to Earth could benefit us becasue one day Earth as we know it could chnage and could become as dangerous as Venus is to humans now. Knowing more about Venus could help us prevent futhure harm to the Earth and ourselves.

Score: 4