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Do you like helping animals and taking them to safe places?Well thats what we do,we take the horses, Young Cows, Mule and other animals that were shipped overseas and take care of them. You can be hurt, worn out, tired,and even afraid but it still dosen't mater because think of how afraid the animals are before peple like us helped them out.

Do you want to become a seagoing cowboy? Well I bet your like what's a seagoing cowboy. If you participate to be a

Seagoing Cowboy then you get to explore the world, help others, create memories and get an amazing once in a lifetime oppourtunity.Or you can be like Luke and have a friend convince you or even join with you.

You could be going on vacation but also taking tasks all around the world. For instince say you have to check on the animals every hour, well on your freetime you could be exploring. Being a seagoing Cowboy can be risky but your doing a good deed and at least you tried. In paragraph 7 Luke got hurt but did that stop him from helping? No he jus waited to he was all better and went back at it.

Think about Luke he had two jobs and left to help the UNRRA with Don. Just remember your not choosen to do this you have to have the courage and sign up yourself. Yes , your taking a risk to lose your life, family, and childhood but the animals dont. You have to have patients, time, and love animals. n

Well now that you know what a Seagoing Cowboy is and what we do, maybe you should think about becoming one. It's not really a hard job, its actually entertaining and shocking. If you do sign up and participate you could learn new places and animals. You get to ride the waves, take care of animals, learn new things and meet new people. Think about it and spread the word with your spouse or even family and friends

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