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The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger by know what kind of planet it is. Numerous factor contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for human study, despit its proximity to us. Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size. Venus is also the second planet from the sun. Venus has the hottest surface tempaerature of any planet in our solar system. It sometime call the Evening Star.

Next, Venus, Earth, and Mar is the neighbor. the text say," These differneces in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus." No spacecraft has survive no more then a few hour in Venus. They haven't gone in Venus for three deacdes. Venus still has some features that are analogous to those Earth. NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.

Conclusion, deacdes ago they don't have the technology to stay safe in space. Now they have all type of technology to go to Venus. They should make them wear something that could cool them off. Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of VEnus's surface. They should sent two people to check out Venus because they could help each other.

Score: 2