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Venus could present a new ground on which to lay ideas and should be taken into more consideration in our spacial explorations. As quoted from the article, "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." - "The chalenge of eploring venis."

Selling ourselfs short on the idea of researching venus and its potential gain will never allow us to advance. Furthermore the information gather could provide insight on the distruction of our so called "sister planet" which was once thought to be able to carry orginisms of life. The various rock formations such as mountains, valleys, and volcanoes can also prove that restoration may be possible. What we need is a push a way to udilize our limitation and to research which the aurhtor of the article does a great idea of explaining.

He states that using a ship floating above the surface at a safe heght; would allow for the dangers to be minimized. The only problem would be that the clouds block the view from even our most advanced of cameras.

Although as stated in paragraph 8 "...human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors." in which we believe we can surpass and exceed.

Score: 2