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Have you ever wondered how the kids feel in class but they dont ever participate and/or express themselfs. Well this article about "Making Mona Lisa Smile" is a great way to figure out some ways that some kids feel based on what they are learning. It is smart, unique, and valuable. These are the reason why the Facial Action Coding System is a great idea.

The Facial Action Coding System is smart because it allows you to see if the students are bored, interested, or just out of it during the lesson you teach. And you could also figure out different type of ways to manke a lesson or activity better that excites the children you are teaching to. In the article it states " Most humans communication is nonverbal,including emotional communcation." So this is basically saying that if we are not communicated with our mouths then what better way then communicating with facial expressions. This is why the Facial Coding System is smart.

It's is unquie because no-one has ever thought of this until now so the fact that teachers action care about how there students feel should touch some people. its also unique because it can tell the way your face is moving and the way your muscles move. In the articke it states that

"the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face: all 44 major muscles in the model must move like the human muscles."This just pushed to shove that if a computer can track all of your muscles in your face that that's pretty unique and different. And on top of that, they would pay that much money to make sure the kids have a good education is cool.

Lastly its valuable because if it's bettering the kids education and making a difference in their community, thats good. In "Making Mona Lisa Smile" its says "feeling someone else's emotional state may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expression. Whoever tought thta making faces could reveal so much about science of emotions." This is why its valuable because it can tell us things that we might not know but the computer knows.

This is why the Making Mona Lisa Smile and the Facial Action Coding System is smart, unique, and valuable in so many ways. If you dont think that you should get the Facial Action Cosing System you might want to think twice if you really love your students.

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