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By stating that astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may have been the planet like earth in our solar system as it was probably largely covered with oceans that may have had a veriety of life forms like Earth. And can be our nearest option for a planetary vist, given the long time frames of space travel. It is a possible solution to the dangerous conditions of the surface of Venus would allow them to float above the fray. A vehicle hovering over Venus would aviod the bad ground conditions by staying up and out of the way. Of cource, the temperature would still be high at almost 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to the sea level on Earth. The travels of Earth and beyond in the sloar system should not be limited by the dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the edges of our imagination and innovation.

Score: 2