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Venus is a challenge from the humans because Venus is the second planet close to the sun. The humans want to study the planet because they want to know more about the planet bucause the from the Nasa are traveling to Venus

to know more about and give information to the persons the want to know about Venus.

The Venus is the hottest planet surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even thought Mercury is closer to our sun.

Venus is a planet the humans can travel because is amost the same as Earth just because Venus is hotter.

The Challenge of Exploting Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present because venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.

Venus is sometime right around the corner is space terms humas have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world.

A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.Even more

challeging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere.Astronomers are fascienated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.

Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.

Venus is a planet can we go visit because it is amost the same as the Earth but in the Article say the Venus has to many volcanous because is closer to the sun and because the planet is really hot.The Nasa is working on other approaches to studying Venus, For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such condition. The Nasa are using technology to know about Venus and not travel all the way to Venus.

Venus can be a challegen for us because most of the humans want to study the planet will it looks interesting to study the planet because is close to the sun and see how the planet works. And maybe I want to travel Venus because in the Article say's the we can travel to Venus because is amost the same as the Earth. Venus can be dangers because is close to the sun and the articles say's

the Venus can have erupting volcanoes because is really hot, but it will be great to study Venus.

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