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It was a opportunity of a lifetime for Luke. He had the choices of becoming a Seagoing Cowboy or stay at his two jobs. He chose the one that would help countries. The reason he chose this is because, animals needed to be shiped over seas, countries needed to be rebuild, and he would get to travel all over the world.

Lukes claims are that he got to see things he never saw before. He was able to nine sea trips around the world.

Luke had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. Luke had alot of things to see on his trip, he got to see Acropolis in Greece, Venice, Italy, and the Panama Canal. Luke also had a chance to take a ride a gondola in Venice and Italy.

This was a great opportunity for Luke to help people all around the world. By

doing all these thing 44 nations joined together to help each other. It made him feel aware of people of other countries needs.

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