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The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursiut because of the fun and amazing discoveries. For example, life is full of risks and without taking some risks in your life, how are you living your life to the fullest? Somepoepl like to go on adventuries and explore things without thinking about the cost and the dangers. The same goes for this. Discovering something new can be exciting but also scary because you might never know what you are going to find. Going to space and learning about Venus might be fun but it also might be a one way ticket. You'll never know when you'rew going to come back to Earth.

" Striving to meet the challenges presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors." This quote from the text is explaining that finding out and learning the challenges of Venus can be fun but it will likely lead to something intimidating, something scary. " Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation," means that the travels we all take should not have any doubts and regret but happy memories and new knowledge.

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