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Luke's claim was that when his friend Don invited him to a trip to Europe on a cattle boat and Luke knew right away he had to say yes because it was a once

in a lifetime opportunity. Also that he got to travel and exploer many diffrent

places! Another one of Lukes claim was that he was greatful for the opportunity he got to have by being a seagoing cowboy.

A few reasons to join the club it that you get to go places you probobly never been before. Also that you get to travel all over the world and explore diffrent places and see many diffrent things from many diffrent paces, just like Luke!

It may have taken him two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to china but, it may have been worth it because Luke got to see many diffrent things and explore unique stuff! Luke would normally be caring for the animals and so it kept him busy for a long time.The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games so, if you like those games you might want to join them! Being a seagoing cowboy was much more fun than an adventure, it opened the world to Luke. Luke said he was greatful for the opportunity.

" I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China. " That is what Luke said because he enjoyed being a seagoing cowboy and going on all the adventures that Luke got to do! Maybe one day if you become a seagoing cowboy you will be able to adventure all the things Luke got to do. There may

be some rough time like what Luke had when he couldn't work for a few days, for an example,

when he was a watchman and it was a rainy night Luke sliped

and fell and he had a few broken ribs but he was saved by a small strip of metal

along the edge so it stopped Luke from sliding. Luke aws happy to be alive

though! Luckly for Luke he recovered in a few days. Luke was happy to be a cowboy and you might too!

So now maybe you can consider about being a saegoign cowboy.

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