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The study of Venus may be dangerous for some of the sciencist considered before, venus has a really intresting structure what makes science go around the planet. Finally by the information given we can determinate if Venus may not be a planet what we could explore today.The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite

the dangers it presents.

The article "The Challenge of exploring Venus" relates many ideas and facts that makes venus a challenge to be explored today, the article has thought to be a explanation of realitiy to make to known why Venus is far to be explored. The author wrote: "Humans have sent bumerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped worl. Each previous mission was unmanned, and ofr a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours." The atuhor write a fact that any spacecraft survived more than a few hours in Venus. The risk to send humans are very high becuase even a machine can't resist a big pression and climate change in Venus. Another fact that explain better why is a risk explore Venus is: "The planet surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet" The average of risk from Venus are very high, we have a unknown planet that has a pressure "90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet." It is dangerous send today without advance technology someone or something to explore Venus with good results.

In conclusion, today we can not explore Venus. We need more information and what is given from the author is a reasonable answer. The author has reason in be a worthy pursuit with the danger front of ours eyes. The ideas given and the analysis makes think about if we are really prepared to explore Venus, and the answer is we are not ready to explore because it reperesent a big risk for explorers and machines.

Score: 3