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The Dangers of Venus

Venus is the second planet from the sun. The surface temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenhiet. In that's a fact. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. The planet is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth.

Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. On the plante's surface temperature is average is over 800 degrees Fahrenhiet. A human wouldn't survive there. It's extremely hot.This is why spacecraft don't last a few hours on Venus. The planet is just like walking on lava and it's dangerous and hard for scientist to study. Scientist can't take samples of rocks gas, or anything else from Venus surface cause of the heat.

In the article it says, "No spacecraft survived the landing from more than a few hours. Maybe this issue expains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.", meaning Venus is a chanllenge planet that the scientist are studying. It also means spacecrafts can't last and there reseach is difficult. In Venusian geology and weather they go through impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes.

The challenge is presented by Venus solar power it would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, survivable for humans. Human curiosity should not be lmited by dangers and doubts, but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and novation.

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