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Helping out people in other contries with the UNRRA makes me feel good inside. Let me tell you why everyone should join the UNRRA's seagoing

cowboy program

First and for most , it is very fun. We play all the average games like baseball , volleyball ,

table tennis , fencing , boxing and ready. Another

way we have fun is with the animals. Watching the baby horses play is adorable.

Last but not least my friends and I have fun. We tell jokes and play pranks . You know the usual guy stuff.

This program teaches responsiblity. I am in charge of the animals and I have to feed and water them 3 times everyday and clean their stalls once a week. It may not sound fun but it is worth it when you see the light in peoples eyes when they recive one of our animals.

As well as responiblity you get certain rewards. On my free time I like to see the awesome structures that the people have in their cities. In total I have gotten

one gondola ride , 2 trips to Acropolis and 1 trip to the Panema Canal.

These are only the three top reasons why everyone should join this program. and if you are interested the UNRRA always needs new people!

Score: 3