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Exploring planet Venus is dangerest because its a planet that is most people die from and if u ever go there u will die before u even go there. Its important to not give up your life to go there and its to important to just stay in the planet Earth. Scientests says planet Venus is not good and it could harm you and kill you so if that right about what the the scientest says u gotta believe it.The temperatures are very high its average ver 800 or more temperatures. Theses conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encount on Earth. "If his sister planet is inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?" because scientists wanna know why planet Venus is so strong and to much het and can kill much people and its to important to know why its not safe to be at planet Venus. systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other surfaces.

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