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The day-to-day need of your own cars may not be as needed as you think. Cars aren't as nice as they seem to be. First of all they cause smog and pollution. But people say that not driving themselves is a stress reliever. Although can be handy people just don't see a drivers license a priority.

Paris is one of the most polluted capital in Europe. They decide to cut the smog and ban some cars of being on the road. "On Monday even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day." You can imagine people weren't happy about it because around 4,000 people were fined; and 27 people denied the fines and their cars were impounded. "The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday."

Although some people were not friends without their cars others thought it was a stress reliever. In Bogota they have a car-free day where no one is allowed to drive their cars; they are only allowed to bike, walk, skate, bus, or take taxi. Anyway to get around with out useing your car. "It's a good opportunity to atke away stress and lower pollution,".

Young people in America have lost a prority in getting their drivers license. "He and I have similar observations about our childeren. Mine (19 and 21) have not bothered to get a drivers license, even though they both live in places where one might come in handy. They are intrested, but it's not a priority. They orginize their summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public transportation or car-pool with friends." A study has found between 2001 and 2009 23% of young drivers decreased.

In conclusion we are all better off with out cars. To decrease pollution, to relive our daily stress and we just dont need them.

Score: 3