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The development of driverless cars is a good idea.The features that these cars have are more advanced.Less car accidents would accur with the driverless cars.The drivers in these driverless cars would be more alert.The development of driverless cars is a better option for drivers.

First, the driverless cars have features that are more advanced then the ones where drivers have to drive all the time.One driverless car for example like the Toyota Prius has alot of features that are advanced.In the article it states the features,"The Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel,a rotating sensor on the roof,a camera mounted near the rearview mirror,four automotive radar sensors,a GPS receiver,and an inertial motion sensor."It also states the more important feature in the driverless car."The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof,dubbled LIDAR,it uses laser beams to forma

constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings...the combination is all this..is necssary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.""The combination of all these advanced features are well put together.

Second,there would be less car accidents with the driverless cars.Even though its driverless it still alerts the driver.The car detects danger faster and can save people from having accidents as when they would be driving by themselfs they would realize the danger too late.In the article it states ,"Within 10 years ,those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out control skids or rollovers." It also states that ,"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on the individual wheels and reduce power from the engine,allowing far better response and control than human driver could manage alone."These features would help the driverless cars have less car accidents.

Third, the drivers in the driverless cars would be more alert.The driverless cars have the combinations of features and more features been added to them that car drivers will be more alert then ever.In the article it states,"Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road.While the driver watches the road , the car watches the driver."The car also lets the driver when to take over.When the driverless car can't do something in a especific situation it alerts the driver.In the article it states,"The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over."It also states,"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object."These features help keep the driver alert with the driverless car.

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driverless car is a better option than the normal cars.The driverless car has more advanced features which have more techonology then the normal ones.There would be less car accidents with the features that it offers.The driver would be more alert in the driverless car then in the normal car.

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