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The idea of studing Venus has always driven humas curiosity. Well wanting to explore Venus is easier said then done Venus

exploration is very tricky but very meaningful to NASA.

NASA has discoverd the Venus has Earth like featers such as Valleys, mountains and craters. But it is very hard to get much infomation due to the " Blanket of carbon dioxide in Venus" also "no singel spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades " meaning that it's time to explore again .

Researched shows that Venus was once "venus was onced coverd largely with oceans " and with that information Venus could have supported wild life . Nasa is now working on a better drone to explore Venus . The ones before were very delicate and couldnt surpass the heat ,pressure ,and force that Venus provided .

With these olterations Nasa will be able to collect way more information on our sister planet.Despite the danger and money humans shuld explore Venus and other planets in the solar system to gain more information .

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