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"Venus, The Earth's twin.''

by STUDENT_NAME

On this proyect am going to talk about ''the earths twin'' Venus, i am going to tell some important things about why venus is a worthy pursuit of despite the dangers.

venus is one of the bringhtes points of light in the night ski, venus is the second planet next to the sun. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and ocasionaly the closest in distance too.

Venus has some different things caompared to Earth, the atmosphere is almost of 97 porcent carbon dioxideblankets, the clouds has a highly corrosive sufuric acid. On the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric presure is 90 times greather than the Earth.

Venus is the most Earth-like planet on our solar system, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth. the planet has a surface of rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and caters.

The NASA has one particular compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus, NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientistics to float above the fray. At thirty-plus miles above surface, temperatures would still be teastyat around 700 degrees fahrenheit, but the air presure will be at sea level.

On conclusion venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because if a human would not can touch because of the danges that are the clouds amd the really hot weater that this planet has.

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