Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The authors says that it is important to go to venus and explore. He feels that yes it is dangerous but he thinks we should push through that. because theyre will be alot to learn on venus. He shows this by saying all the dangers with going theyre. Then goes on why they should and go travel to venus to explore the planet.

He states that some importances of going to venus. Like along time ago it was probably the closest planet to earth. And that venus is the best optin to visit because it is close. He states thes things by saying." The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar feature such as valleys, mountains, and craters, furthermore.

He also states that " recall that venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visits, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel. He says the travel would be very neccesary for science that could learn alot of stuff if theyre were to go vist venus.

On the other hand theyre is alot of risk if they were to go there. That people could get hurt because pof the harsh elemenst on venus and the harsh terrain. He sates that by saying. " NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. imangine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscpe.

All in all he feels like venus would be a good planet to go explore. Because it was like earth at one time and still is. It will let us learn alot of stuff. He does understand the danger that will come with this mission. But he is ready to go through that danger.

Score: 3