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Have you ever felt like you had nothing to your name and you wanted someone to help.

Well if you have then you have something in comen with the Seagoing Cowboys operation.

Cowboys help people with nothing.

How do these people end up with nothing you may ask, well when a country is in a war and their country gets destroid the citizens have nothing at all to go back to but rubble.

The UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) gets involved with broken countries by rebiulding.

They use us Seagoing Cowboys to bring the needed cattle from other countries by boat.

We travel by sea with hundreds of horses and other needed aniamals.

They are given the job of feeding the aniamals three times a day as well as giving them water and cleaning the pens.

Also we are tasked with night watch, in paragraph seven it tells us this can be a dangerous.

But the danger is worth it when you think of all the joy the days on boat have.

When the animals are gone we play games where the cattle were held. Another up side would be that you are not only serving your country but your serving someone else's as well.

The boat rides to the cattle's destination is worth the our time as well.

The sight seeing is amazing wherever you go whether it be Itily or China, there are great things you can see.

By becomeing a Seagoing Cowboy the world has oppend up for me and it could for you to.

It may be a dangerous job but when you think of the great adventure and glee you will perticapate in, the life of a Sea Cowboy does not realy seem terrible at all.

The danger is worth it and even if you think you may not be cut out for the job try it because it is a once in a life time opertunity and lets just say they don't come around to often.

Score: 3