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Many things have happened that we thought was gonna change the world but this might really do it driverless cars.I think there are very good

reasonings on why there should be less accidents,deaths,and people hit by cars are just to name a few.

Alot of people that has been driving for years had still

get in accidents we cant make sure everything goes right thats why they should have driverless cars one reportly drove more than half a million miles without crashing.You try

drivinging that long and crashing not once.Right now in thecars

you still have to take over for driving in and out of driveways or dealing with

traffic issues.

In this time of age technology has gotten very advanced Google's modified Toyota Prius uses many new technology like using position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel ,a rotating sensor on the roof,a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror,four automotive radar sensors,a GPS reciver,and an inertial motion sensor.The most important bit of technology is on top the roof.Dubbed LIDAR, uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.

There are cars that are some driverless but the driver has to do some and that's why they are trying to make advance in technogly and change the world. If they can start making driverless cars it will become a common thing but everything has to start out to something even if others dont have the same opinions.

I think driverless cars is a very good idea and has been tested and shown that they have technology to do it so why don't we put it to the test and let technology move on and advance.

Score: 3