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I would not want driverless cars on the streets that I walk every single day. Why its three reason why I dont want them on the streets. Because they will be dangerous at night time, not safe for kids to walk across the street after school, and beacuse how could a car drive it self come on now.

First one of my reasons was because it would not be safe at night time.Every day there is a drunk driver out there some where be drunk and driving.So tell me why would they put driverless cars on are streets, come on the streets are safe as it is now and we gonna make it more dangerous if they put driverless cars out where people walk across it will be a wreck if they make them cars.

Second reason is that kids cross the street everyday after school. Some of the elementry kids are not that smart to look both ways before cross so how would a driverless car know when they are about to hit some one. I really dont think those cars will be that smart toknow when sombody is crossing the street and the kids will not be safe at all i promise you thats why those cars should not be out here .

Last is that how will these cars support thereself. They will need gas,they will need oil changes,and they will need to put air in the tiers when they pop or a hole gets in the tire. Maybe if we dont make the cars we would not even have to worrie about those problems because us human beings can handle tall that work for the cars to be safe.

Inconclusion I would not want driverless cars in the streets i walk every single day.It's the three reasons I talked about today why i dont think their safe because it will be a messed up world.Who ever wanted to make that driverless car stuff should just say forget it because they will not be safe at all out in this world its not safe in the world today what makes you think it will be safe when they put "DRIVERLESS CARS".

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