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Concluding Statement: This article is very good. I like this but of coarse there are some down falls to everything. I like how they did this software on "Making Mona Lisa Smile" becuase this picture inspired other people. But the computer expressions isn't a good idea. They aren't doing this for a good cause. When people have a chance to skip an ad or an advertisment they will.

Score: 1