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Evidence: First of all, Venus is the second planet from our sun. In paragraph 2, it states," Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too." Second of all, Venus atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. The conditions are far more extreme than what human encountered. Third of all, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. There might be additional volcanoes and powerful earthquakes. Last of all, Venus is called the " Evening Star."

Score: 1