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Evidence: The "Face on Mars" was found during a search for a possible landing site for the sister ship of Viking 1,

Pictures were taken during the search, a showy likeness of a human face was spotted.

An enourmous head close to two miles from end to end, was looking back at the camera.

Scientists believed it was just another Martian mesa, common around a region of Mars called Cydonia. But it had unusual shadows that made it look similar to an Egypt Pharaoh.

The "Face on Mars" is a huge rock formation, which resembles a human head.

Shadows gave the illusion of eyes, a nose, and a mouth, and because of this, it caused alot of attention to Mars. People believe that it was an alien monument, but proof showed that it was, just a natural landform.

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