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Evidence: venus is also named after a strip club but any who its sometimes is call the 'evening star' its one of the brightest points of light in the night sky .Venus is also a planet well a second planet from our sun ' earths twin'.A thick atmospheric of almost 97% carbon dioxide the clouds of highly sulfric acid in venus atmosphere on the planets surface the tempetauras avrage is over 800 fahrenheit and the atomsopheric pressure is 90 times then we experience in dusty indianapoils ok im done talkin about venus something naamed after a club bur anyways striving to meet the challange presented by venus has value not only because of the insight to ne gained on te planet itself this teacher in my testing room look like a allen so I think she from venus but alsoo because of human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors .

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