Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: 'as a result ,70 percent of vauban's families do not own cars,and 57 percent sold car to move to move here''i think those the talk about in this paragraph are acting smart,if all of those have been following those others example  sold their and take the money you could probably feeling better or let them take it away from you won't feel good.

Score: 1