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Evidence: venus is one of the brightest points of the light in the night sky making it simple for an amaterur stargazer to spot. venus is a planet that you can float on and its the second planet from are sun it has proved a very challenging place to examinr more closely. People call venus the earth twin because venus is th closest planet to the earth in terms of density and size. venus, and mars, our planetary neighbor they both orbits the sun at diffrent speeds. these diffrences in speeds in othere to venus will be around the corner in space terms people have sent plenty of spacecrafts to land on the cloud draped world

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