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Evidence: So when that hapend every one was bumed because they thought that they had actully found live in a nother planet called the red planet.

So everyone was happie because they actully thought they found live in mars but the dint. After that they just left the mission stuff were they were because they were sad because there was no live they just left every thing were it was.

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