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Evidence: Because of this new and itelligent technology, doctors and others are able to read emotions of people in a way never previously possible. This brilliant computer "constructs a 3-D computer model of the face" (3). including all major muscles. With the ability to do so, this computer scans and creates a human face and, based on the position of the muscles, is able to determine the distribution of emotions felt at that moment by a person. Tested with the Mona Lisa, this model "can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face" (4). By comparing the chosen face against an emotionless one, this advanced techonology allows the ability to use muscle positions to analyze the feelings of a person

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