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Evidence: Venus is the second planet it also is the hottest planet which is never be touched i a spaceship since 3 decades. It is sometimes called "Evening Star' becuase it is one on the brightest points of the light in the sky. It was often told that the planet Venus was the twin of Earth because they have the same size, they often send numerous of spaceships to Venus to see if it would work out because when they would send some it would always burn through.

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