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Evidence: "It's a good opportuntiy to take away stress and lower air pollution, "said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle wiht his wife"(Selsky, "Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota"). Without cars theres people walking along the side walks talking, people not having to worry about saftey on the road as much, people riding bicycles and skateboarding, and just a great way to excerise just by walking outside. "The rain hasn't stopped people from participating,' said bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus"(Selsky, "Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota"). The fact that people dont care about the rain makes me think that people are enjoying this car-free day and there's no reason to stop it.

Score: 2