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Concluding Statement: Inconclusion, We the people deserve to have our votes count for something. We go out of our way in our daily lives to vote, and they dont even matter, because we vote to have someone else choose for us. "

The Electoral Colledge is regarded as a non-democratic way of choosing a president...

", ( Richard A. Posner ). We the people have the right to vote, so give us the right to.

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