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Evidence: If implemented in daily computers, this technology will revolutionize the environemnt and usage of the Internet. Because this technology can map emotions, "if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different" (6). With the implementation of this technology, students will be able to influence which advertisements and pages appear on their screen. This will reduce their impatience on the computer, and actually stay focused on the task at hand, rather than getting frustrated and walking away.

Score: 2