Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: "When I had a car I was always tense." Im much happier this way" said Heidrum Walter." as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor." This quote from the article shows how walking turned out pretty good for her instead of driving all the time.(Source 1)

Score: 1