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Evidence: In 2013 they said that they put a ''Traffic Jam Assistant'' on a 2013 BMW.

It can drive its self with the help sometimes of a human touch if in any trouble.

Manufactures sais that they will have a camera in a car and will watch the person as the person watches the road. Manufactures are also bring a system to where if the human needs to drive then they can turn off the system and they can start to drive without it.

Score: 1