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Evidence: Some more not so good facts about venus will be some of the clouds have highly corrosire sulfurie acid. Also on that planet surface temp is over 800 degrees ferhight. Then the atomspheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experrence on our own planet. This may scare you away but dont let it do that. People is coming out with new things everday. It just takes time.

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