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Concluding Statement: Overall my thought about the Facial Action Coding System is great. You can take it so far and you can keep it how it is. Even if graphing shows that people don't like it I still think it is a good idea for me thinking saftey wise.

Thats just the people life and you can also take it very far with paintings. I think this idea is a million dollar hit and it should be tested out.

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