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Evidence: because of the winner take all system in each state,candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning,focusing only on the tight races in the "swing" states. The electoral college is unfair ,outdated,and irrational. we dont want segregation in the state,it casually states that,"segregationist in the louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.

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