Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: Luke had said" The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy," He says." Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special," he says." So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water."You will travel a lot and see so many places. You could also try new thing like the food. Their are so much cultures, and you will get to see many more you may also try and wear the clothes they wear, and do stuff like they are used to doing.

Score: 1