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Evidence: if a reallybad accidnent happen and a hospital was too far away how are we goona help them if we cant find a way to get to one as quicly as possible. cars are one of the best transportation devices so why would you try to get rid of them even if they just cause a little daamge to the earth it really isnt that bad. we really need cars for a whole bunch of things like going to any of your families houses that live  and going to a road trip that might be a couple of hours away , so imagine if you didnt have a car, how would you be able to do any of those with out one.

Score: 1