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Evidence: Their is  place called Bogota and there they have a car free day, but has beed the third year they have been banned with buses and taxis permitted for a day without a car. to begin with alot of places have banned without cars but some have not, for example to banned without a car would not be good because if have a car and cant drive it because the city is banned or the country is banned from then the bus abnd taxi and everything else is banned then your permmtted withour a car to drive,ride. people come Bogota come to see how enthusiastic they have been ,now they improvement without cars,which sounds good becasuse the mayor improving something new for them or just changing things around. now new things are starting to come in sidewalks are being replaced,they have cut traffic, new restaurants,so with everything improving then maybe cars wont banned no more restriced things maybe everything might be limting to what the mayor is saying.

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