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Evidence: As soon as word got out on April 5th 1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time.

They snaped a picture ten times sharper than the originak viking photo . Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting for the JPL website to show the picture scientist revealed the picture as a natural landform there was no alien monument after all , stated in paragraph 7 .

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