Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Lead: "Honey, could you go to the CVS and get me some nyquil.

I'm dying here," mom says.

"Yeah, I'll be back in a bit."

I grab my keys from my pocket and head outside. I unlock my new driveless car and climb in. "Take me to the CVS," I tell the car. It roars to life and backs out of the parking lot. It's been not even two miles and this thing is starting to glitch. "You will be taking possesion of this car in five minutes, ma'am," the car commands. I panic and take hold of the violently shaking steering wheel. Traffics harsh tonight meaning there's some kind of party out in town. The driveless car just unexpectedly starts going in the wrong direction, making me go in shock.

Before I do a full turn I see a lady talking to her baby inside the car. I try to brake, but it just won't budge. I pray that I won't do any harm to them. Unfortunetly it does. I run smack into the front rear, making me black out. They say that before you die, your life flashes back through your eyes. But mine didn't.

I instintly think of mom, dying there in her room, waiting for me to come back. But I won't and this is all because of this driveless car.

Score: 2