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Evidence: NASA is making a silicon carbide that could last for up to three weeks in such conditions that meaans eventually we will be able to visit venus and learn about how the planet turned into gas and NASA is trying to make parts that would be more resistant to venus as it states in the passage." we are creating a system of mechanical parts tht could be more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces."

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