Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Concluding Statement: This is way i think we should use this technology in the futer. It could help with so many things. People could get the help they need. Life would just be so much better if we all could understand each other. This will be one of the best things you can do for someone needs and wants help to make their life and friends and familys lifes better.

Score: 1