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Concluding Statement: The new-age technology provided in the driverless cars will make for a smarter car with the ability to be aware of the road, cars, and people, as well as any trouble that happens unexpectedly.

This technology also creates a safer drive while being efficient to the passengers and the environment.

With all of these self-driving features, the human driver will feel in control when navigating the required situations.

All of these technological advancements lead to a promising future of driverless cars everywhere.

Score: 2