Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: "Congestion was down  60  percent  in  the  capital  of  france  after  fivedays  of  intensifying  smog."smog  by  meaning  pollution  went  down  just  60  percent  in  five  days. Thats  a  great  adavantage  just  by  limting  car  usuage. In  source  number 1  explains that " Passenger  cars  are  responsible  for  12  percent  of  greenouse  gas emissions  in  Europe.. and up  to  50  perecnt  in  some  car-intensive  areas  in  the  Untied States." We  as  a  country  shoud  lower  that  and  the  best  way  is  to  limting  car usuage . Limting car usage is one of te some advantges to lowering pollution ( greenhouse gas, smog).

Score: 1