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Evidence: This planet is one of the closest planet to earth which is also dngerous to earth if anything comes up at anything and we do not find a way to overcomme the challenges in venus it might destroyed the earth. this passage explain to that it is called the "earth twin".

" 97 percent carbon dioxide blanketts cover the venus evedn more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atomosphere" venus also have the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system no human can surive carbon dioxide without oxygen it is one of the hottest planetno xspace crft haver ever landed on the ground.

Score: 1