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Evidence: First,Professor. Thomas Huang of the beckman Institute for advanced Science at the University of Illinois working with

Professor. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate which the proces begin when a computer constructs a 3-D computer Model of the Human face that contains all 44 major muscles in the model that must move like Human.

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