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Evidence: Thats just not it, The united states has been the worlds prime car cultures.  "Its also the birthplace of the model T; the home of Detroit; the place where Wilsom Pickett immortalized "Mustanf Sally"" " Demographic shifts in the driving population  suggest that the tend may accelerate. There has been a large drop in percentage of 16-to 39 years olds getting a license, while older people are likely to retain thier licenses as they age" Mr. Sivaks research has found. (paragraph 39) In New York , there is  a "proliferation of car-sharing programs acroos the nation" (paragraph 37)  there are many car limiting advantages like is stated above  car-sharing that was devolped in New  York and now travling all over the United States. There are many elder people reatinging their license. And less younger people getting thier licenses.

Score: 1