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Evidence: As stated by Mr. Bradford Plumer in his article "

The Indefensive Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong

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" Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of elcetors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to cote for [John] Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the statewide elcetion, they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes."

This claim tells how the president is choosen and its not by our votes its by the slate of electors votes.

Score: 1