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Evidence: In doing this you are having a fair vote in the election with everyone who is eligable to vote, voting whomever they please. If you vote for your own president of your choice there will not be any elector deciding for you if they do not like what you have elected. We need to have a say in what we want. I mean if we want someone to be watching over us, and deciding what to do, we want someone who everyine agrees on. Just a few hundred poeoplpe choosing for you is nothing compared to approximatley more than a million people choosing for themselves. In

Source 2 "The indefensible electorial college : why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer"

it says that the electors can always defy the will of the people. In my case I believe that no one would want that. I mean, would you want that?

Score: 2