Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: For example, in the articule is used the picture of the Mona Lisa, because this is a great example, she has detected many different emotions in her smile, something like, stay happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. She have many emotions in her face, can be change her smile. "The process begins when the computer consturucts a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles". " The facial expressions for each emotion are universal". "In fact the humans perform this same impressive calculation every day. "For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face."

Score: 1