Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: They want their personal space and they want their thoughts to be kept to theirselves without the whole world knowing or people knwoing what is wrong with them and what their thoughts are. This machine does not need to be bulit because people can just tell you how they feel you dont have to go make a machine to knwo.

If they wanted you to know then they can tell you theirselve.

Score: 1