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Evidence: Second in German they banned cars for couple days and if you refuse to not drive your car you'll have to pay a fine. They have also started this community were you can't drive cars and if you wanted car space it' 40,000 along with the house you're paying for,some people even had to sale their cars just to get an house in that new community. Thrid as a result of 70 percent of vauban's families do not have cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move. Frouth middle class families from chicago to shanghai tend to make their homes and reduce greenhouse gas. Also all of our development since world war 11 has been centered on car, and that will have to change said " Daivd Goldberg".

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