Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Lead: The author supports his or her evidence by giving us what Venus is like before astronauts try to explore Venus. They give a brief paragraphs of what Venus is like and the last time NASA to explore Venus. Venus is a hard planet to go even though it right behind the sun. Human being can probably not handle the preasure that is on Venus so it can be dangerous

Score: 1