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The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, by Bradford Plumer, says

"It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best." I think its best to say the Electoral college IS outdated, it IS unfair and irrational. Its simply taking away from your one voice of a citizen of the United States of America  and vanishing it into thin air. Stick up for yourself and abolish the Electoral College.

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