Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: Scientists take a big role, they are the ones that plan everything. The amount of time and effort placed into their work determines if we get to travel to Venus. For example "scientists seeking to conduct a through mission to understand Venus would need to get uo close and personal despit the risks."(para.6.) Getting up close and looking at the real thing there... standing in front of you, unsure on what to to do.

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