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Concluding Statement: Why he is convincing others is because he is trying to say that this trip will open the world to you and make you relize other peoples needs in different coutries.

Luke's point of view convincing others to particapate is to show that he had a fun time doing it and he had a more understanding or awareness of peoples needs in other countries.

He is also convincing you becasue he said that the awarness stayed with him.

This changes the point of view by saying if you participate in the program then this awerness will stay with you and make you want to convince other people to participate.

In conclusion Luke wants to convince you to participate in this program and relize the needs of people and to also convince other people to join the program becasue of what learned and what you understand know from the program.

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