Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: I had been to europe,china greece and have even crossed the ocean 16 times!

The favorite place ive been to was venice,Italy,a city with streets of water.

Theres also so many places you can go.

Ive been to China,Greece,Europe,Venice,italy and even crete.

There I toured an excavated castle.

This program is the perfect opportunity to visit any place you want to.

Score: 1