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Evidence: As said in Source 2: The Indefensible Electoral Collage: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong, "Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. This dosnt even sound right does it... This is one example of United States government trying to rail  the presidential elections, and i can asure you that this is not the first time this has been attempted by the government. The U.S Constitution delcares that

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citizens of United States of America have the right to vote. What this looks like is the government trying to vote for us

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