Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: A good arguement was when the system allowed for far worse when the electors for defy the will of people like in passage 2 it says "in 1960 when segragationists in the louisiana legislature almost succeeded in replacing electors who would appose John F. Kenedy" that is just evil.  Although the law has not been changed since the Constitution was made.

Score: 1