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Evidence: with the new electronis NASA are trying to use to start studying Venus could help. stated in paragraph 7 "NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chais of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions" is showing readers that even with the dangers getting

Venus to be a planet with living things and people could possibly happen in the long run.

Score: 1