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Evidence: Many people thought that is was an alien momument, but on April 5, 1998 Mars Globsl Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. A Man named Micheal Malin and his Mars Oribter Camera team wanted to prove that there were no aliens. Him and his team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos

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