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Evidence: Kids look forward to getting older and being able to drive.

Now they would learn to be even lazier by sitting there and not doing any work.

Aren't we lazy enough now with all of our technology?

We have phones, iPads, Kindles, computers, laptops, iPods, and so many more things that we put all of our attention in.

Technology is addictive and we have plenty as it is.

We spent countless hours on our devices already.

We've lost contact with actual human beings.

We can't keep relying on our devices to fix all of our problems.

The younger generation doesn't even know what a dictionary or encyclopedia is, let alone how to use them.

Yes, using Google is convenient, but we need to learn how to do things on our own again.

The smarter technology becomes, the dumber we will be.

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