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Evidence: There's some of us who suffer from stress and anxiety. There's some of us who look at our community and are probably never wanting to go outside again. That is not a community to live in. We deserve to feel relieved, relaxed, and renewed from time to time. In 'Car-Free Day Is Spinning Into a Big Hit in Bogota' by Andrew Selsky, it demonstrates a perfect example. Selsky writes about a "Car-Free" day in Bogota, Columbia, and a man shares his side of this event. Carlos Arturo Plaza tells us, "It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air polluton." Selsky writes in paragraph 28 the benefits of this event. He writes, "Parks and sport centers bloomed... Dramatically cut traffic... New restaurants and shopping districts developed." Look what we can accomplish from not using our cars as much.

Score: 2