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Evidence: With an increased work ethic, students will remain productive and efficient with their time and materials. The content of the student's lesson can also be adapted based on their emotional behavior. Dr Huang, the innovator of this technology, describes that at school, "'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor"

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