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Evidence: The author explained that the surface was over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric is pressure is 90 times greater than earth. NASA's soution to to the problem the author state is that scientists to float above a tray, then the author going on saying imagine a blimp like vehicle hovering of 30 miles or so that was not supported. One thing the author did support is that electronics made od slicon carbide have be tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus surface. The author wasn't giving supported deatail's about the technology to survive on Venus.

Score: 1