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Evidence: Soon the Mars Global Surveyor was sent to take more pictures of the face to better find out what it was.

In 1998 the Mars Global Surveyor reached the red planet and took the pictures NASA needed. The pictures it took were more detailed then the ones in 1976. At home, thousands of people waited for the image that the Mar Gobal Surveyor took to reach to web.

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