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Lead: In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile," the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify humans emotions to see humans' reactions while they are using their computers. Computers can recognize emotions by the way you look, and it is allow to the computers to understand your feelings, and to change the topic because they used this technology to see Mona Lisa's emotions. "The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model on the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles." When technology developed they started their project with a 3-D computer.

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