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Lead: Being assingned president of the united states is a very big deal, especially to the millions of people that live in this god blessed country.

herThe united states of america has had different presidents ever since the beginning of this country. These presidents are not in it for the money, but they are holding the title

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because these people want what is right for this country. But, how do we pick who gets to be president? It all comes down to the electoral college. Citizens of the united states are allowed to vote at the age of 18, these votes are said to mean so much, but that isnt always the case. It really all comes down to the number of electoral votes. Why make all these citizens vote, when the outcome might not even follow along with these votes.

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