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Evidence: The article "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves" talks about a boy named Luck who recently graduated high school. Luck worked two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank, when Don Reist Luck's friend invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat Luck could never said no, because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.

To help the European cuntires recover from World War 2,the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration hired "Seagoing Cowboys" to transport the horses,young cows,and mules Luck and Don signed up.

Luck and Don received their ordes to repot to New Orleans, they arrived August 14,the day the Pacific War ended. They were headed for Greece with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.

Luck had just turned eighteen before they arriving in Greece. By the time he was discharged in '47

Luke had made nine trips. To past the time on return trips they would play baseball, volleyball,table-tennis tournaments,fencing boxing ,reading whitting and games also helped to pass the time.

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