Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: When it first came to NASA and the public it was shown as if there was a human face becuase like it says in paragraph three, secound sentence, "The caption noted a "huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving it the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth." That to me tells me that there could have been life on Mars at some point in time but we were probably not exsiting back in the time life could have been in Mars. Its just a mesa becuase on paragraph seven, first and secound sentence, it says, "So on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharpers than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform."

Score: 1