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It should be valuable in classromms because it could help teacher, principle , or even school security. It could help techer figure out if they turn in home work or do not know the lessen because now most children don't want to speak up for a question and teacher would not know if they are telling the truth when asking a student if they know the lessen becasue most students would say yes. In paragraph six explain how it would be used

" A computer would recognise when a student is becoming confused or bored". Then the teacher would give the student assistance. It could help a principle like in finding out who did what like when someone gets in trouble and then there is lots of witness and no one speaks up then they would use the device but not only that would be the case we could figure out people who bully others and put a stop to it. It could even help a school security in the way of finding out crimes in school like recently there have been school shootings and if school security or teacher or even principle use that technology around every week we could probably prevent school shooting before it even happens . Counsler could use it to help and understand students better like in depression.

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