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Venus is a planet that is in our soloar system. Its our second planet from the sun.Yes there's are a lot of dangers but we been wanting to be closer to it we want to get to know it better. Venus is so to called evening star but why is that they say that its the brightest light in the evening at night. venus is sometimes referred to Earth's twin because venus is so close to the Earth, meaning in density and size and with distance. As you might already know Earth, Venus, and Mars are our

our neighbor to the orbit sun but with different speeds. We sometimes closer to Mar or Venus it depentes. Alot of people have tried to go visit Venus but couldn't make it. or they unmanned because they knew it was dangours. There's are a thick atmosphere of almost 97% of carbon dioxide blankets in Venus. What made it challenging were the clouds of highly corrosive. on the planet surface, the temperatures are the average of 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmosheric pressure is 90 times greater than

whta we live in. If you thinnk of that its really hot it can burn down anything in less than a min or seconds. Venus is the hottest temperature of any other planet that we have even if Mercury is closer to the sun. The sun is extreming hot. Astrono are fascinated by Venus because it has been the most Earth like planet in the solar system. Venus had or have features liek earth bbut not so many like we do. Like we have oceans they have that too. our planet has a surface of rocky sedimet and familiar features like i said, oceans, valleys, mountains, craters all that. NASA been trying so hard and they have a plan to sent humans to study Venus.

They arethinking of buliding a so what called a blimp-like vehicle that was a hovering of 30 or so mile above the roiliing Venusian lanscape. They want to sent to study Venus but in a safe easy way. With there plan that they got gwant to make sure because temperatures,

so they want it to be thirty miles above the surface so they don't have to touch it. yes they would be 170 degrees fahhrenheit but the pressure would be closer to the sea level on earth. No they might not be so easy conditions but they are survivale for humans. so thats the callange of exploring Venus.

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