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There are many things that we do not know about life in the universe. There are many things that are around us that we do not know about. One of the planets that we don't know about is Venus. What could possibly be on Venus?

Venus is the sister planet to earth. This planet has very hostile situations to where we can not land on it. Many scientist have sent spacecrafts to Venus, but they have been destroyed in the process of landing. Thirty-plus miles about the surface is 170 degrees Fahrenheit.

NASA has a compelling idea to send humans to Venus. They would send people to hover over the surface of the planet. They would look around and evaluate the suface to see what kind of things are there. It is dangerous to get to close to the surface because the heat of the planet is very high.

The planet has a think atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket. The clouds int he atmosphere of venus contain highly corrosive sulfuric acid, which puts it in Venus's atmosphere, Which could harm humans. We talked about 30 miles about the surface, but the surace of Venus can get to a total of 800 degree's Fahrenheit. That's crazy!

We came to the concushion that Venus is not able to be reached by human's at the moment. Scientists could come up with the technology that could take us to Venus. Think about it, years ago no one could ever think that technology would be everyone you went. It's not really that crazy to think in a few years we could be able to go to another planet and be totally fine. This topic is crazy to talk about. Even crazier to think about, but it won't suprise me when the day comes that we can go into space for weeks and have the technology to keep up alive.

If you could travel to Venus would you? Maybe one day we will be. Having a plane flying to another planet seems crazy now, but in the future it could be considered normal. Right now Venus is still a very dangerous planet and no one can go there, so just wait!

There is still many things that we do not know about in the universe. If there is other life or if any planet is safe for landing. Venus is a very dangerous planet that no human could survive on their own. No one is going to be finding out anytime soon if there is anyone else in this universe.

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