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i think it would be valuable because you could help the kids stay focused and you can make it so they dont stress over little things. if you could change your emotions, that would be great because anytime you were sad of something you could just change your emotion, because why not. i'drather be happy all of the time then sad. like if you're having a bad day. just smile and change it. in my experience, i feel happy when the people aound me are happy. if im having a bad day i just surround myself in happy people so then i will get happier. if i dont feelwell of wanna throw up or something then i just smile, because i probably could have a good day if i just smile. its hard to deal with emotions and stuff because they dont work out the way you always want. emotions are a big part of us though, if you were emotionless then what would you be. you would definitly be a robot. in this world so much has changed; like now there are so many school shootings and other things like that, most people's emotions are wack. because if you dont have a solid base to work off of, you're gonna get no where because you will crumble. dont stress it, just bless it. this essay may not be the greatest, but it could put a smile on your fac, because apparently emotions are everything.

Score: 2