Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
This will be an argument from Luke's point of view convincing others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. This will include reasons to join the program. It will also include some of the benefits of joining this program.

These are some reasons why you should join the program. The reason you should

is because we get to go on adventures and to many unique places. One of the places we have been is New Orleans. The reason we were in New Orleans is beacuse we stopped there on our way to Greece. I also got to on a tour to an excavated castle in Crete on my way to China.

In conclusion these are the reasons why you should join the program. You should also join because it could be a great opportunity for you, like it was for me. Also it could help you better understand people's needs. It could also help you understand countries' needs. If you join this program and enjoy it, you could also help your family have a great opportunity.

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