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He graduates from high school and his friend changes his life. His friend changes his life beacuse he goes on a opportunity of a life time. And that's where his life changed they joined the UNRRA a program to take care of animals horses young cows and mules.

I would join this program beacuse it was when world war 2 was going on and that would be nice to experience that. Another reason is that you get to take care of cattle on a ship. The 3 reason is that anyone can sign up even if your in a small town.

They we're going to Greece ands it was special to go there.and you could tour places that you went to and they practically went all over the world. And it kept them busy and his job was to check on the animals. The last thing it was more than an adventure and it was just the beginning.

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