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Why venus is worthy of studiying,Take this as an anology venus is that girl thats hard to get yet when you do get her she is so enjoyable.Venus is worthy of exploration because once upon a time venus was like earth.Here are three reasons why we should furthermore explore our sister planet venus.

Giving enough time venus can be inhabitable agian as it once was like our own earth some time ago venus looked like earth.I know this because in the text it says"Venus was probably covered in largley with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like those on earth.Today,Venus still has some features that are analogus to earth.(Challenge of exploring venus)."This shows how venus was at one point in time inhabitable and can somehow revert back to its old ways according to the text.

Another reason to keep studying venus is that it is completely possible to do so.Why you ask,Because there already is techonology being develpoed to initate study.The technology i speak of is a technology that can withstand the harsh conditions of venus.A great display of this is in the text in paragraph seven when they talk about it.Here it goes,"Nasa is working on other apporches to studying venus.For example,some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such condidtions".This shows that nasa is on to something and that there is hope and purpose in studying venus.

The final reason is that this can be the way to human evolution due to us not knowing the future we prepare.What if one day earth is uninhabitable like venus,where would we go?What if we can go to venus and live on there.The thing about evolution and innovation is change and we can prepare for anything.This human evolution thing is backed by nasa themselves in paragraph eight."Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation".This shows how we should think of things like this to move forward.

There it is my three reasons why we should furthermore explore venus.That shows how earths twin sister has purpose to be studied,remember venus was once like earth.

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