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People should concider becoming a Segoing Cowboy because it is an amazing experience that if you try it you will never regret doing it, because you can travel the world to help people who are in need, you can visit places such as Europe, Greece, and more. While you are on the boat travaling you can take care of the animals on the boat ! If you do decide to become a Seagoing Cowboy then while you are traviling you can learn the cultuer of the people you are visiting. Even though you are on the boat for a while you will have plenty of things

to do such as feed the animals, because the animals need food and water at least two t three times a day. And you will have to clean the animals stalls . In your spare time you can play games such s baseball, vollyball, tableyennice, fencing, boxing reading, whittling, and whole lot more. In concludsion it would be an amazing ecperience for you to

become a Seagoing Cowboy !!!! Why don't you give it a try ?

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