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I agree with this author whenit states that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangerous it presents. I agree with the author because although studying Venus might be dangerous i dont think

it could be worth it after all. in paragraph 3 it quotes " the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than we experience on our own planet these conditions are far more extreme than anything human encounter on Earth." This quote shows how dangerous it could be for humans to go to venus. In Paragraph 5 it states " At 30 plus miles above the surface, tempertures would still be toasty at 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful. and radiation wound not exceed Earth levels. Not Easy conditions but survivable for humans." This quote shows that it would be very hot for humans, Yes they would be able to survive but what human would wanna live all their life in 170 degrees which could most defenitly casue heat strokes. In conclusion this is why i agree with the author when he stated that Venus could be dangerous.

Score: 2