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Many students go to school with different facial expressions. What if it was possible to know exactly what they were feeling. Well now there is new technology called Facial Action Coding System. I believe that reading emotional expressions with this system will be valuable to schools.

The Facial Action Coding System is a computer software that can recognize emotions. This could be really helpful in the classroom. In the passage it says "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor." This is saying that if the comuter recognizes you are becoming confused or bored it will switch the lesson up so that you are more interactive. This would also help the students so they can stay on track and pass their classes.

If schools could know what the students are feelings I think that it would be so much easier too teach. I believe that the Facial Action Coding System is needed in schools. It should honestly be used all over the world.

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