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Luke Bombeger was a cowboy and also about Luke he crossed so many ocean he can't harley remeber 1 but he did in fact to he remember that some ocean was Pacific and Atlantic and he remember that it was 2 that he crossed those ocean and he said it was affcted with world was 2 and when he said it would also affected with his high school gradulation.

Luke said it was about in august 1945 And he said he did arrived at augest 14 and it was in new orleans

when they arrived.Luke did turned 18 before arriving greece and luke had said he had made at least 9 trips and he said maybe even more trips but he couldnt remember when he couldn't remember when they discharded him in 1947.

He said it took about two weeks about trying to get to atlantic oncan and prafict oncan and he said he fed him self and waterd about 2 time a die and he said so he could be in the war.and he said to his family that you might not see him for not all the time i will be gone for a coulped of years and he has rised the ships and he check out if the family was ok with it.

The family have not agreed with so he deos not want to go but they said what ever you want to do you can do it so he said goodbye before he left to go to the world war two and let them deside if he sould be a gunman and first he set sail and he for got to check if anything was good on this ship and he saw alot of gun powder and he found him self with a bunch of food and water and he said to himself that he was grateful.

So he have made it to the shooting range to test his shooting so he could be in but he was stungling but and then he remember about the book he read about world was 2 when he was a kid and they said not to shake it just check for ammo in it and just take the pull and take it back and you should see if he saw any ammo but he did so he pulled the trigger and went kaboom and he was a good shot and he has went to the world was two sence he did it right in the middle and he was so exitted for passing the shooting range with the 1st bullet and going to the war.

Luke Says That he was going to do good at the world war two and also and he was sending cards everyweek to his family and he says Hello Family i have lerend about alot of stuff about running,shooting,hiding and even made some few friends and some of them helped me shooting mosley and i hope you are not worried because if have been stronger and faster and i lerned how to slide my gun and keep them hostage so they dont shoot me and some of my people died but i am not done giving up yet but im still standing on my feet so from you 18 year old Luke Bomberger And also they give luke some postcards and they do it after he does it.

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