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I agree with the authors perpose with studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. Venus is the second plant away from the sun and the Earth's twin. At first it was called the Evening star because it's one of the even and brightest points of light in the night sky. We all know that it's completely different from the Earth's atmosphere. Theres a rick going to venus becuase of all the lost signals from there and there's probably no life in the other planet.

The thick atmosphere that is 97% carbon dioxide is Venus there is no life in that planet nothing. The clouds are higly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus and the weather over there its crazy 800 degress fahrenheit and the pressure is 90 times greather Earth's. So why to NASA and everyone wants to study the planet venus, is it for a project,research,are they planning on going there we don't know but soon we will know. There's probably something living on venus planet right now and that we don't know about if they try to find it it will be difficult to find because of the lost signals they had before. Before people think that this planet Venus had a body water.

The author has a point with the statement he said with out risk and a lot of courage there can not be nothing. That's the whole point of everything is people didn't take risk where would they be today where would the people be at right now. It would be hard to get there and NASA can not get no sample of rocks, gas, or anything else froma distance. Scientist even said it, it would take risk and a lot of challenges for them to reach Venus. we will get there on day it wont be today or tomorrow but if the keep pushing and working hard the will reach Venus one day.

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