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I want to create an argument against these driveless cars. i believe that these cars are not safe , because i think that all the technolagy in the car can like screw up and it could cause a explosian or a circuit. It may sound really cool to have a driveless car but there is some negative stuff about these cars. For instance when you have a teen thats learning how to drive , how are they going to learn when this car does it for you.

I mean yeah the car can tell us when to stop or when to drive with caution but what if and elderly person was using this car, they wouldnt be used to the car telling you all of this and whats gonna happen? , crashes are gonna happen and people are going to die because of these cars. Also what if one day you forget to pull up your window and it starts raining, all that technical stuff is going to get wet and it may stop working or when your getting ready to drive it and it messes up and tells you diffrent things , like "turn here" when your not sopposed to .

These smart cars are not going to be good because the motor they have are to silent and your not going to be able to hear as loud as a normal motor , and that means thay when you cant hear a car coming your going to want to cross the street and your going to get ran over.

If your bind or you cant hear then your not going to know when these cars are going to be coming. What we need is car that slows us down when we are going to fast or a car that doesnt let you drive it if your drunk. Lets say your driveless car one day stops working for some reason , or like something goes wrong with the elictrical stuff, that would take alot of time and money to fix because your not just fixing any car or getting in to just any motor, these cars are going to have a lot of wires connecting everywere and its going to take a person with alot of expierience with these cars to fix , not just any machanic is going to be able to fix this car , and since theres going to be alittle bit of people that know how to fix these cars there going to want to charge alot of money to leave your car nice and running again, and if they cant find the part you need your gonna have to waite more time until they find it and that means your not gonna have a car until its ready.

Yes this car sounds fantastic because it tells you when to do this and when to look out for stuff but my oppinion is that if you want one of these cars your going to have to be REALLY careful my friend.l

Score: 3