Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The author strongly believes that our Earth "twin" planet, should have more attention than what it has. As in more research over it and more resources to gain from it. The author also suggests that more attention should be forward to Venus "If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?". The author later on spoke about NASA having thoughts of sending humans to Venus because of the benefit that they'll gain from it including the advances from the machines that they have been working on.

Not just that the author also belivies that Venus should aso have care for,

it's a planet that is close to similiar as Earth.

It's temperature average is over 800 degrees fahrenheight and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than our experience in Earth. Other than the author knowing research for their argument, the author persuasion tolwards traveling and studying Venus also describes the perspective of it "Human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation". The author is trying to prove that besides the risks and dangers the studying of Vneus she be reconsidered.

Score: 2