Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Thaithor did a decent job in supporing his idea about studying Venus is the first paragraph is talking about how Venus is also known as the Evenin star he is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky . Is also sayig that Venus is in our solar system, one example from the text is that venus is the seconf planet from our sun .

another example is that venus could give you a lot of information about earth and it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely .

Venus however is the closest planet ot earth in terms of dentisy and size the author is supporting he's ideas pretty good he's giving a lots of detail and he is also making them understant what his talking about. The author has a lot of information about venus and the author is giving detail in every single paragraph he wrote .

In the 3rd paragraph is talking about a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket venus. The author is saying that on the planet's surface, temperature average over 800 degrees and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times grater than what we experience .

as a conclusion NASA is working on toehr aproaches to studying venus in my opinion he did a really great job because he is not only talking about venus he is also talking about how it can change the world and the authos is giving a lots of information . in every paragraph he talked about how venus can make a change in the world and how NASA was trying to do that .

Score: 3