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Even though venus seems to be very dangers. Haven't you even thought of about it whati looks like or wats on it at least. Well this is what the story is about wanting to explore venus. Also the good and bad about venus. The test that have been ran up to test venus.

In the story it talks about venus and the good and ba about it. What could damge us and what it benifits us with. Soemthimes venus is refered as earth's twin, The reason behind that is that it is the planet closest to us. But not just that it also has the sam e size and density as earth.

Here is what coukd benifit us from exploreing venus. In the story it talks about how we would gain insight on earth its self. It tals about how venus is the most lije planet like earth. Long ago venus was ful of oceans and there could hve been life on the planet at a point. But now we belive it looks noting likw what it used to look like.

There is a lot that could aftect the air in venus is not good for us at all.The atmosphere is very thick. It talks about how the atmospheric is

90 times greater then the one we have on earth. There is also hhigh pressures and heat. There is valcaos that could eruot that we don't know when they possible coukd even do it. It talks about how there is also lighting.

This what we could gain from it could possible make it better and have another planet where thre is life on it. But it is dangerouse thinds that you could posible end up dying from. We have treid sending stuff there we have but when we do they don't last long. Possibly like an hour and then it stops worling.

Score: 3