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I think that exploring Venus would not be a good way to see how similiar it is to Earth if it contains the same environment to start life and grow food on it.The risks are high and it can be very dangerous.

According to the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author call it our twin sister because of its size and density the only problem is that each time they tried to explore Venus using spacecrafts they have failed."Often referred to as Earth's "twin,"Venus is the closest to Earth in terms of density and size.Maybe this issue explains why not a single spacecraft has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.Accroding to NASA though they will stop at nothing to make sure they have the proper reasearch from Venus to make sure its if its safe to live on.

NASA is figuring out other ways to get close to Venus while doing different types of test to make sure the right spacecraft can handle Venu's harsh conditions "some simplified electronics made of cilicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for 3 weeks."Another reason why they want to get close and personal is because observing Venus from a ship won't be as useful to look at ground conditions."peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere,rendering standard forms of photograpghy and videography ineffective."Not only is Venus being difficult they also won't allow proper photographs nor videos it won't even let the rovers land safely to collect samples."researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas,or anything else,from a distance."

So despite Venus's conditions scientists are figuring out a way have an actual person land and collect the information they need.They don't think Venus is a threat they treat it more as a challenge but since humans are fragile they will continue working with rovers.If machines can barley handle Venus imagine what would happen if we were to send a human he/she would be obliterated."temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit,but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.

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