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The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because the Venus is actually a planet and also the second planet from our sun. He also mention that Venus is simple to see from the distance but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distant too. Venus is something right around th corner - in space terms - humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.

Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The planet's surface temperature is average over 800 degree Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Also the Venus has the the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.

Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. Recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a curcial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.

The National Aeronautics and Space Administration(NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would aviod the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.

However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insighton ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else. Therefore scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges.

NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.

In a conclusion the striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but alos because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should br expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.

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