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Studying Venus is important. Venus is called the Evening Star and is the second planet from our sun. Venus is a challange for Venusian geologiests to study. Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantafe point of Earth, it has proved a very challanging place to examine more closely, says in Paragraph 1. Everything is going to be challenging if one wants to actually make a change or if one wants to discover something. It says in paragraph 4 that, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth today. It would be so amazing if someone could find another planet that could support forms of life.

There is many things to learn about Venus. There could be things in Venus that scientists havent discovered, and scientist shouldn't give up on Venus. It is is worth it. If long time ago, Venus could of had largely oceans, then why can't it have oceans now? There is tons of questions that may not be answered. It might of dryed off but why can't it be refilled again? If there was possibilities of life in Venus, why can't it be life in Venus now?. Venus is totally worth studying and discovering despite any dangers it presents.

There is many things that can be possible, Venus is an interesting planet to study.

It is referred to as Earth's twin. If there is many things scientists are discovering in Earth itself, there will be more things they will discover in planet Venus. Even if its a challange to land in planet venus there should be a way that they can make things work and discover more things about it.

Discovering venus is more than worth anything and should be continued to be dicovered.

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