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They'res ton of advantages of limiting cars usage. For example, walking, hiking, biking, and for the younger crowd skate. Turns out if we were to do this we would'nt be alone! Communities all around the world try to alter driving cars. People in BOGOTA, Columbia. Even VAUBAN, Germany. In Germany people have given up on cars and street parking, driveways and home garages are not allowed, according to "

In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars

" By Elisabeth Rosenthal.

In BOGOTA, Columbia, cars are banned leaving only buses and taxis which are permitted for the Day Without Cars in the capital city of seven million. In There city, their goal is to slim down the usage of cars with even a twenty-five dollar fine if caught. They've been doing it for about three years, according to "

Car-Free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota

" By Andrew Selsky.

If people all around the world can do it, I'm sure ours can too.

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