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Have you ever thought about being able to read how someone feels even if they show no emotion ? In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile"by Nick D'Alto, new technology is being described. Many examples are given on why the new technology is helpful.The use of technology to read the emotional expressions is valuable because it helps out students,and stops the problem of having to wonder about someones emotions.

The use of technology to read emotional expressions is valuable because it helps students.

In the article it stated, "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored," it also states," Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor". Having a computer being able to tell that a student is bored or confused allows the computer to change those emotional facial expressions so that the students enjoy learning and able to learn better.The computer may not be a human instructor but it would be able to help like a human instructor.

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the use of technology to read emotional help out students,it also stops the problem of having to wonder about someones emotions. In the article it stated, "Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trtait that conveys happy, worried, etc." it also states, "yet...studied human anatomy to help them pain facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions". Those examples show that because we have this new technolgy to allow us to read the emotional expressions,its not easier to be exact on how someone is feeling without hsving to guess.

The use of technology to read the emotional expressions is valuable because it helps students and stops the problem of having to wonder about someones emotions.There were many examples on how those things helped out.

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