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Driverlees cars are coming and there are my whole thing on the driverless cars is that is there safe for the road safe on highways do they need gas in there how long can it ride does it need to be charger up well the psotive thing is that the diver less cars have gone miles without anything

happen to them but the only problem with them is that they still need help when pulling out of drivewyas or dealing with complicated traffic issuess, they have problems navigating through roadwork or acciends so what does that mean does it still need are help with thoes things well for the car to be smart you must need a lot of sensors in the car when google had use the toyota prius they had estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, rotating sensors on top of the car and a video camera near the rearview mirror plus all thoes thing you have four more sensors in the car evan a gps but the one thing on the car thats good is the sensors on top of the car why it has a laser beams that constanlty updating usesing 3-d model and check the surroundings of the cars and with that help the car can mimic the skill of the person that inside the car of ther driver with thoes sensors in the car diverless cars can but the brakes on its self or it can just turned the whole car up thats a good thing cause most people won't get into lot of crash.

in 2013 the bmw had made a thing called "traffic jam assisant" what the car can handle up to 25 mph, but with that we still goiing to have to hold the wheel of the car thats not a driverless car but what it can do is steer,accelerate, and break with other things the car might need are help such as going throught work zones are around other cars accidents so that means for us that we must always be ready for anything that could happen.

with that gm has made a thing for us inside the car that has sensors in them that tells you somthing going to happen you seat will vibrate when the car is in danger backing up into an object with the google car it tells you when you have to take over the wheel but there laso thinking about putting cameras inside the cars for you can be watching the road and while the car watches the driver.

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