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He is very smart. He found that Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the sky. He also found out that Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. And sometimes the closest in distance to.

Venus has a thick atmosphere of amlost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets covering it. There are even more dangers in Venus like the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in it's atmosphere. The second biggest danger is that it's average temperatures is over eight hundred degress Fahrenheit. That average temperature on Venus is way to hot for anyone to survive. The biggest danger is that the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. And on Venus there is signs of additional impediments like erupting vlcanoes and powerful earthquakes.

The biggest reason way I like it is because Venus might of been the most earth-like planet in our solar system. So that why i think they should try to build a blimp-like vehicle. They are trying to make a way so that humans can go to Venus and survive. Or get a machine that's strong, able to handle the heat, take pictures, and even evidence.

Score: 2