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I will be talking about the dangers of venus in the story of " The challenges of Exporing Venus. Venus is the closest plant to Earth, to study Venus researchers have to take a risk, Venus is a proven challenge place to examine more closely too.

Venus, also known as "Evening Star" is actually the sencond planet to our sun. Venus is a planet that is vary close to the planet we live on now Earth, Earth has everything for humens to live on. Study shows Venus would be the place all humans might have to go to if something happens to Earth. As they still study the plant it gets more challenges everyday.

Venus is a proven challenge to all researchers, Studys does say its the most resourses humans can have when something ever happens to Earth but has researches dig more up from Venus it shows there is no spaceraft that can survied the landing more then a few hours. What does this say about the researchers you may ask, well if humnas can't land on Venus longer then a few hours how will they get all the study's done? Well now right theyare recreating an object that can do it for us. The object can help us out a lot by finding the things we can't

Researchs are trying to uncover so much from Venus, they are all taking a big risk to see if it is Earth like, and if it is a place for humans to go if we ever need too. Takeing a big risk for millions and millions of hums sounds like superheros right? Well they are, researching may have the scarest job but it could be a lot of fun learning so much both how to help hamans, and to stud other planets.

In conclusion Venus is dangers right now as were speaking but it is the so close to an Earth like planet, researchers do take big risk to do as much as they can to find out much out about Venus, and Venus is a proven challenge to try and study because our spaceships can't be on there longer then a few hours. in my point of veiw is see venus can a plent we might go to oneday, rather is just to view, or if it to actually life on.

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