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Venus is the twin of earth in earths terms of denzity and size plus its the closest to earth. although earth ,venus and mars all circle faster than he other planets mars being closest gos faster. we at some times are closer to mars and sometimes were closer to venus. humans have sent drone after drone to venus witch is draped in clouds.each drone is unmanned because each time one lands it dosent last but for a couple of hours. the atmosphere that blankets venus is almost 97% carbon dioxide. with is a very poisonis gas to humans. the pressure on the suface is 90 times that of earth and the tempetures can reatch 800 degrees fareheit nothing humans could survive. venus has the hottest surface tempeture of any planet even though

mercury is closer to the sun. freaquently beyond the heat there are erupting volcanoes, very powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. its all around a dangous place to be. although venus has shown sighns of a atmosphere like earths long ago. Our sister planet could be a possible escape to venus if we can no longer rely on earth to suport us. scientists think that building a structure that hovers 30 miles plus above the surface would work although it is still 170 degrees 30 miles above. Striving to meet a challenge scientists stillneed time to take sample and get more resurch done but think about the future generations and what they myght find that could help humans reach out to other planets.

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