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Venus is really dangerous. All of "The challenge Of Explroing Venus" is about exploring Venus. If you go and explore it be ready to be hurt when your done exploring Venus. Nasa is trying to get a big blimp to hover over Venus so you dont hurt yourself inside Venus.

How Venus is really dangerous? People have been up their and said that there are really bad surface conditions. In Pargaraph 4 it is saying "long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth". Thats how bad they are saying it could be really dangerous inside of Venus. So to fix the problem of people getting hurt now NASA is trying to get a 30 or so mile blimp to hover over the roiling Venusian landscape. At the endof the article It says that they strived to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endavors. At the end of all of this i would still not go because you dont know what is around it or in it to get you hurt.

The purpose of this essay is persuade people not to go to Venus beause its deadly. I dont kno if i would trust the inside of Venus or a 30 or miles so blimp floating of the landscape. Never go to Venus because of what can happen to you while your in it or out.

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