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I persanuly love to be a Seagoing cowboy becuase I get to go sightseeing. One time I was so lucky to go on a gondola ride in venice,Italy, a city with streets of water. It was a opportunity of a life time my frend helped me so much with this two. I use to have 2 part time jobs and with don I could have just one job and best part I love it.

I hope that you join becuase it woud be wonderfull to have you. You would be helping horses,young cows, and mules get to go sightseeing when you are done and explore. and thar is a way to pass time, especially on your way home. you can tabel tennis fencing boxing reading games. Its all rilly fun plus it helps time pass no matter what thar will all was be something going on.

But seagoing cowboys was much more then a adventure. it opened me up to the world to me im gratefull for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs. My first mision was to go to greece and i had 335 horses plus. I all so be for ariving i ternd 18 when i got thar the pacific war.

In conclusion i hope you join and have a good day. Also this is not a joke you need to be focest and willingly help the team if thay need help. If you need help ask if you dont you might endup fired. And be carfull THAR IS WATER you may slip and fall. but i hope you join and help the couse.

Score: 3