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I believe that it is a good idea for driverless cars to be coming soon. I say this because, even though I'm not driving yet but I will be soon, as I get older or also anyone around the world, if someone is driving and maybe if the person receives a text or a call, it could be something very important.

I can imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore. When I was younger I started to play with toy cars with my cousin Johnathan. Once I started to play more and more with him, I started to like them a lot, of course I didn't realize when I was younger there were thousands of cars out there, I thought maybe the cars that were in Bremen, Indiana were the only ones.

I'm going to be sixteen very soon, and going to be able drive and can't wait to own a car of my own and I'm also very excited. I know that I also have to be very careful when it comes to situations like this, because you start to drive as a teenager and it might be scary and you have to be extremely careful and pay full attention whatever what's coming at you. As I read the passage it said that they plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. By the time 2020 will come, I will be 20 years old and would have already graduated by then. I know when I'll be 20, I'll be much more mature on things and can't wait to see the driverless car.

It would be pretty nice to own a car, where you don't even have to bother watching the road and can text or call anyone whenever you need to, but just because it drives by itself, doesn't mean you don't have to be aware on watching the road or paying any attention, a person has to take full responsibility to own any type of car, whether its an ordinary or driverless. If an accident happens, you would have to blame the person because they put it on theirselves and wasn't paying attention.

Then again, there might be some positive and negative things about a driverless car, but it doesn't matter. It's the person decision if they want to own a car like that. Everyone is different and have their own thoughts on any type of car.

Score: 3