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Have you ever thought of reading expressions but by the use of technology.? Today scientist have created a system that helps read expressions. It reads six basic emotions and many others like happiness, surprise, anger, disgusted, fear, and sadness. Do you think is should be used for classrooms?

Mona Lisa is an example of the use of the Facial Action Coding System. They detected that she was 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. Also, this system is the use to recognize emotions that was invented by Prof. Thomas Huang. The process

of this is when the computer conduct a 3-D model face. The Facial Action Coding System recognize the emotions of Mona Lisa. Computers chould do the same. As a matter of fact, a computer should know how you are feeling towards the ads and webs. In the article, Dr. Huang states that

"A computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then is could modify the lession, like an effective human instructor". However, this system could also be used to make computer animations faces "more expressive". Lastly, this system could be useful for schools because it will know how students will feel towards the lessons.

In conlusion, the Facial Action Coding System should be used for classrooms. To begin with, It shows that Mona Lisa was a great example or the use of this system. It detected of how she was feeling. So when a computer detects a students face of a ad, it will know what he/she don't like. In fact, just by using our minds will be difficult to describe an emotion but by the use of this would be a great help.

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