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They call venus the "Evening Star" which sounds like a beautiful name for a planet but it's actually one of the most dangerous and hardest planet to discover that's closet to earth because of how the wheather over there could change in a constant flash and the temperture could go up to 800 degrees, NASA has been trying for over 3 decades to study Venus because NASA has been sending ships and shuttles to the planet but it would always be destroyed, and the author supports in studying Venus because the author could see that NASA could make a break through and get a ship to Venus and they have been trying for over 3 decades and he also supports that studying Venus is good because he wrote a article of what NASA has been doing and let people know facts about Venus.

Venus is earths next door planet neighbor which is cool but it's one planet that has almost has the same resliance shape and density wise and Venus is a planet

that has "almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets" that cover the whole planet basically and "Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere" and which it means that this is why NASA is having trouble reaching out to venus sending out a ship to go explore but it cannot survive the conditions and the constant pressure of Venus is 90 times greater than our planet and the planet could even go over 800 degrees Fahhrenheit which no human could survive that heat.

NASA has been having trouble trying to explore Venus not because of the distance but because of the conditions of Venus are over the charts no human or machine could survive for hours because they would either get burned of the 800 degrees of th planet or of the pressure that is 90 times of earths pressure but NASA has been trying to study Venus now for quite some time for over 3 decades now which is a long time but NASA has not given up because they have been batting to study because of the conditions Venus has and why does NASA want to study these hard condtions? maybe so us humans could be prepared for any crazy conditon weather or any climax that comes to earth or to help migrate to a new planet and see if us humans can go out and live in a whole new planet I would say NASA is doing a great job not giving up and still trying to figure out ways how to staudy the planet and get access to the inside and have ships explore the planet.

The author very well supports the idea of studying venus for many reasons like migrating to a new planet, new resources for earth, closest planet to earth, and because of the outstanding conditions Venus has and the author supports

NASA very much giving facts and detailed facts about how long NASA has been trying to study and explore Venus for quite some time and the author wrote a article about "The Challenges of Exploring Venus" stating facts and giving you his opinion about exploring Venus can do.

So this article has many facts about Venus becuase of the author very well supporting the idea of why we should still study Venus no matter the condition and which I also want to give a little bit of my opinion that I also agree with the author that we should still try to go study and explore the planet Venus and help support Venus.

Score: 4