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Have you every herd about the story " A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves"? If you haven't you get to become a Seagoing Cowboy. You also don't just watch farm animals you can stop at places like Greece,Itay,& China on your trip. You have to try this out and I will tell you why right now.

When you go and become a Seagoing Cowboy you get to live on a boat with farm animals. Also while on your way to your distanation you get to stop at cool places. You can stop Greece,Italy,& China. Also even a castle. You get to see different cultures. When your fun and amazing trip comes to an end and you have to go home. Where their were animals is a big and open, because they are gone now. So you play sports like baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, and boxing. Also it wastes time on the way back.

I belevie if you do go you would have one of the best time of your life. Also keep in mind this is to help paces after World War II. And you get to see how this world changed from a war. And how people are doing in their new home that was maybe was distroed. And when you do help you see how the people are happy and so thankful for you help with supplies. So they can now live again with some comfort.

Score: 2