Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
"Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldn't say no. He new it was an opportunity of a lifetime." "The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy," he says. "Besides helping people , I has the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special," he says. "So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water." "Luke also found time to have fun on board, especialy on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The coyboys played baseball, voleyball games in the empty holds where animals had housed. Table-tennis tornaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittiling , and games also healped pass the time." "But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more the an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him. "I'm greatful for the opportunity," he says. "It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs."

Some good reasons to join are you get to have fun once in a while, your helping people in need, and your helping animals. Also you get to go on your own adventure with others of course, but you can see some other countries and see stuff you never saw before. Being a Seagoing Cowboy can be fun because you can play games and time will fly when your having fun. You can be the one to take care of helpless animals and feed and water then as well. That is why you should be a Seagoing Cowboy.

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