Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
"The Challenge of Exploring Venus"

In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus." The author makes the claim that the study of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. In the artical the author informes his or her reader that "Long ago,Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.

"In the text the author starts off his senteces with "Long ago," This simply proves "no spacraft survived the landing for more than a hours," which is also stated in the text in paragraph 2. In paragraph 2 the author also states Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us." The author is making it clear it want be easy doing research on Venus.

In the text paragraph 3 states "A thick atmosphere of alomost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clounds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmoshere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times than what we experience on our own planet."

The author is make his or her point how exploring Venus can be very challenging.

In the text the author states "Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though mercury is closer to the sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface."

The author is making it clear as posible of the danger that comes along with studying Venus's atmosphere. The author states in paragraph 5 "The National Aeronautics and Space Administration ( NASA) has one particularly compelling ideal for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the Hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray." The author is backing up his or her claim by using a outsiders voice. In this case The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA).

In the text the author state in paragraph 7 " NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus."Once again the author is using a outsiders voice to state his or her claim. The textes also states in paragraph 7 " Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War ll." The author is just interducing some of the project he or she had in mind.

In the text the author states in paragraph 8 "Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has Value not only beacuse of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also beacuse human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and Beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."

The author is simply resting his or her claim, based on the suggestion they made to study Venus, and why they think Venus is worthy pursuit the dangers it presents.

Score: 4