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Venus is one of the most unknown planets to exist to hot to land on to dense and to challenging to land rovers on heres my evidence. Also explaining

why this planet is so mysterious.

Venus is an extremely dangerous planet to study but well worth it because, little is known about it. "No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours", this states sits near impossible to even send rovers so gathering data is truely not possible. Risking things to learn more and more about this planet everday is being done. Even hovering the planet is not enough to gather the most information needed. "More importantly, researchers cannot take the samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance Even if pictures are taken the lights cant pass through the dense clouds and atmosphere "Most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere", Also hurting chances of getting any look at the actual floor/ground of the planet.

This statement is facts each detail well explained in conclusion Venus will take a very long time to learn more if ever its beautiful and a neighbor planet but will always be unhabitable. Our travels beyond earth should not be limited by the dangers.

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