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Hello my name is Luke, I work for the seagoing cowboys. We have many fun jobs. We travel, play games,and care for animals. we need more recruits so come join us. I will give you a little more information.

We travel to amazing places! We once went to China and I just adored the Panama Canal. We went to Venice, Italy and went on a gondola ride it was beautiful. When we went to Greece, the Acropolis was the grandest thing I have ever saw! So if you like to travel why don't you just travel with the Seagoing Cowboys.

We also play games on the long trips. we play baseball and volleyball in the animals old holding rooms. We also do fencing, table-tennis, reading, and even more fun sports. So if you want to play sports, read, and even more come join the Seagoing Cowboys.

We also care for animals that are being shipped overseas. We care for young cows, horses, mules, and even more animals. We once had a cargo of 335 horses but we had enough hay and oats to feed them and we traveled from New Orleans to Greece. So if you enjoy caring for animals you should join us and help us care for them.

Do these things interest you in any way?

So if you love animals, playing sports, and travel you would be perfect for the Seagoing Cowboys. When I became a Seagoing Cowboy so many new oppertunities opened in my life, so if you want new oppertunities in your life you should sign up and join.

Score: 3