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Would you be against or for the use of technology to claim emotional expressiosn? Many people will go for it and many will go against it, it really depends on how you look at it. There are plenty of supporting examples that you can use wheter you are for or against it. For me I do not like the use of this technology.

I do not like the idea of the use of this technology. For one reason this could be way inncorect and give you false information. It is most likely that this technolgy will not be all the way correct. Based on looks you cannot tell what percent is sad, angry,happy, or fearful. Also, like the passage said in paragraph seven the steps "While looking in the mirror." Just one slight expression on your face can change the percents. So, if you smile and your not happy there will be more percent happy than you really are. Many people cover up sadness or being angry by smiling. So if they smile the technology will be incorrect. That smile could change a lot of the percents. The only one who knows how happy, angry, or sad you are is yourself. You may be able to cover up all the sadness in your life by smiling and not being down, even though you really are.

Therefore thoes are just a few of my reasons that I don't like the technology. One expression could change how the results come back. Also, there is no way the test could be all the way correct. Whether you ar efor it or against it, I just don't think this is how to figure out how you are feeling. Like I said earlier in the essay the only one who knows how you are feeling is you.

Score: 3