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Venus is a place that is close to the sun. Scientists say that it is the twins with earth. The thick atmosphere is 3% shy from being all carbon dioxide, as stated in paragrahp 3. Yes, it is every hot in the plant. It is the hottest plant in our solar system. It averages just over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atomspheric pressure is 90 times greater than plant earth. If scientists say that's are twin planet. Why do they

discuss further visits to its surface. Venus looks like a rocky mountainy place. Venus probably was covered largely with oceans and could have supported carious forms of life! Venus would not be easy place to live, but it is survivable. Yes, it would be hotter. Way hotter. NASA claims that its working on other appriaches to study Venus. Last time Venus was looked at was during the 1940's. When World War ll was happening. Scientists stay that Venus is first place to look at when in look for a new home. I don't how that's possible if the surface is so hot in the plant.

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