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Using facial recognation to try and exzamin students emoition's is completely immoral. It's an completly obstruction to privacy. Students should be able to feel emotion without having some crepper staring at you through your screen. That's like down right almost brain reading. I don't only think it's bad idea I think that kind of thing should be illegal. Or there should at the very least be a setting to turn it off, kind of like Privavcy mode or something within that collum.

Also, who's to say how accurate this can a be. A lot of people make a certain expression when thy're feeling the compltete opposite. When I'm doing class work and I'm pretty focused my face goes pretty blank on the face. But that does not mean I'm not happy while I'm working.

I believe Da Vinci was just trying to decode the Mona Lisa to understand her better, thats fine if you're a piece of art. NOT when you're a human being with private emotions!

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