Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
One reason you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is beacaues you get to travel to places you never went before.Luke liked the job Don which is his friend, had told him about.Plus Luke like adventures,and like to go to fun places.Another reason is it's fun, I say it's fun because you get to be the look out like Luke,did and yell so the people can hear you,so no animal will come and eat the people. Luke also want to be a Seagoing Cowboy because he wanted to help these countries( it say that in paragarph 2, line 2).

If I was a Seagoing Cowboy I would be the lookout, because I would like to help and sever my contry just like Luke.

Luke had made nine trips, the most trips any Seagoing Cowboy ever did.

Also I think Luke is a brave young man to be a Seagoing Cowboy.After Luke had craked his ribs he have not been doing work for a couple of days.

Score: 2