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There was one cloudy morning in a Monday afternoon. The day was a busy day. It came to Tamala's (one of Professer's scientists) attention about the "The Face on Mars". She showed the scientist, Professer Lryc while she was observing a sick frog, new high-resoultion images and 3D altmetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa.

"What is this that you are showing me?", said Professer Lyrc

"Well, said Tamala. This is Viking photos from a Mars Global surveyor from 1976, 1998, 2001."

Professer looks puzzled. It came to her attention that she learned about this from college. She remembers that she did a project on this long time ago.

"Very interesting, said Professer. I think we should have a discussion about this."

"You think.", said Tamela

"Yes, because this is very interesting."

So, Tamela called everyone to come to the court room to discuss the interesting news.

" Ms.Tamela, I was really trying to get my project over with.", said Niguel

" No time for that right now Niguel, said Professer. We have some business to discuss. Now Ms. Tamela has some business to tell you. And it is very interesting."

"So, you know I was looking all over the internet about Mars, said Tamela. And I have found this." Tamela struggles to turn the projector on. After a couple of seconds it show the photos. The visitors were looking surprised and confused.

"That looks familar." said Niguel.

"Very familar. Is it the...the...um?', Sam hesatated.

"Face on Mars?", said Dave.

"Yes, it is. Thanks Dave. said Tamela. So I've called everyone here because...I believe this is real." Everyone gasp.

" How can you prove that, Ms. Tamela.", said Professer.

"Well, Professer, Tamela explains. Twenty-five years ago something funny happened around Mars. NASA's VIking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called...Cydonia."

"Wow, so that's what you researched.", said Professer.

" Basically, Tamela said. The "Face on Mars has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazine, radio shows, even haunted grocery checkout lines for 25 years!"

"Oh really.", said Professer.

"Some people think the Face is "bona fide evidence of life on Mars-evidence that NASA would rater hide.", said Tamela.

Professer looks surprised. " Any final words. Because I have a class in four minutes.", said Professer.

"Oh, what the picture acutally shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa-landforms common around th American West. That's what I've learned."

"Okay, round of applause."

Everyone claps. Tamela really gave some good interesting news.

Score: 2