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Do you remember when you went on a long trip from Indiana to Texas and it took 24 hours or more of constant driving? Or the time that your dad was falling asleep on the road on the way home? Or even heard of that guy that got in a car crash while he was intoxicated? What if there was a car that didnt need you to drive but drove you from Point A to Point B? Well, Google is coming up witha driveless car. Driveless cars would a big change and benefit because it would reduce accidents, give more freedom for drivers, and there would be a less need to buy cars.

Many people have been in many car accident due to intoxication, sleepiness, and texting and driving at the same time. People lose focus of the road when they are distracted of different things around them also. Google has been creating and programming cars so theycan drive accident free and so cars become more efficient. Driveless cars have many sensors to help with conditions of the road and work zones. If Google was to develope a perfect driveless car we would have nothing to worry about.

Also it would allow the drivers to have more freedom to talk to their family and friends without keeping their eyes off the road. Google has created driverless cars but are not technically driver free. Google's driverless cars are not entirely driverless. The cars need the driver for pulling in, pulling out, traffic jams and work zones. If any of these things were to happen the driver would need to take

control of the car so they wouln't crash. In the 1950s, General Motors created a concept car that could save energy and gas.

With the supply of driverless cars, the less they would need to buy a car because there would many taxi driverless cars that will drive people to their destinations . Many people have different opinions about driverless cars . Although Google says they try to make your car safe as possible for you and your loved ones. Driverless cars are coming and will make a huge impact on everyday life.

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