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The technology to read emotions should not be used in classrooms. The reson I say it shouldnt be used is because in the passage it describes how if your lips tighten up it shows anger, but what if you smile with your lips closed as you are smiling your lips are getting tighter but you are happy and not angry so the emotion reader would be wrong. Anouther reson why the emotion reader shouldnt be in a classroom is because what if you came into school realy sad because someone had just passed away or something you wouldnt want the teacher coming up to you

trying to put this computer in your face trying to tell if your sad or not then you would be mad. I dont feel like people should know the way im feeling by having a computer tell me if someone wants to know the way i am feeling they can look at my face ans see they dont have to have a computer to tell them how im feeling. that is why the emotion readers should not be in a classroom.

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