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In the article "Driverless Cars Are Coming" the author states both positive and negative views of driverless cars. I believe that cars should be controlled by a person and not driven based off of a computer.I think if we let the computers take over there will be more crashes and problems with traffic there will also be more technology issues and after all it would be very exspensive.

The problems with a car that is not controlled by a person is the computer does not have a better reaction time so if the person in front of you braked really hard you would just run into the back of their car because the computer could not see that that person braked and so your car

could not react and stop. This car is also banned from being tested in most states as it says in paragraph 9. So that shows that they are scared to let technology fully take over because it is not allways ready.

Another problem is that the technology will be way to exspensive for just your regular everyday person like it says in paragraph 6 "Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. It wasn't somthing you buy from Radio Shack." Most people wouldn't even be able to buy this car because of the technology that costs so much that does not even do it's job and if your car gets into an acciedent you have to take the blame for their technology.

The last problem is crashes and having to take over it says that the cars could not navigate their way threw road construction or if there was an accident they could not drive themself but the person in the car would have to drive what is the point of getting a car that is supposed to drive by it's self but when the road gets bad you have to take control to me it just sounds like a bunch of useless technology that they installed so you can pay more for your car.

I think that cars should stay controlled by a person because if they don't then you are basically paying more for a car that says it can drive by it's self but when it comes to the hard part it does not do it's job of keeping you safe or keep it's promise of it driving it's self. I think it should stay banned becuase if someone gets hurt then who is going to be responsible for the acciedent the person who is not even supposed to be driving the car or the automakers who's technology caused the problem ?

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