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I think that the author is right about the idea of studying venus is worthly pursuit despite of the dangers NASA is working on studying venus. Why not study it it use to be like earth. and also it a star you see at night.

Venus is one of the most intresting planets near earth I think it would be intresting to study and so does NASA the text says, "NASA is working on othe approaches to study Venus for example, some simplified electronics mode of silicon carbide have bee tested in a chamber simualting the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted 3 weeks in such conditions". See we could try and study Venus we could be on there for a 2 weeks and leave.

Venus is called the sister planet because of how close it is and like family Venus has the same looks aswhille the text says, "Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters". See if Venus is like earth we could look at what happened to it and make sure that doesn't happened to us.

Venus is a star we see at night have you ever wonder what it was? Or how it's like earth and has no life that is what NASA and so

many more space programs are trying to find out.

I think that the author is right that we should go study Venus even if it dangerus it's worthy of that risk. it a star and planet in our solar system. Venus is our sister planet and looks like us too, and NASA is finding ways for us to be able to walk on Venus and study it aswhile.

Score: 3