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I believe students should be able to use the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System.

It could help improve student's interest in the subject.

The technology could also enforce students to want to get better grades.

Using the Facial Action Coding System could benefit the classroom and students.

The software could help improve student's interest because it could modify the lesson like an actual teacher.

The system would detect that you were bored and most likely make it entertaining.

It is valuable because the coding helps teachers understand how to change their teaching format.

In the text it states, "A class room computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.

Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor"(Dr. Huang).

It could also help students want to get better grades.

If they notice that the software is changing to the students benefit, then maybe they will start enjoying the class more and take it more seriously.

With the Facial Action Coding System, I could see no downfall.

The new technology is valuable for students in class or at home.

It helps them understand what is going on in class.

There is also a more personal experience with the software compared to basic lessons.

The Facial Action Coding System makes it to be as if there is a teacher in front of you when you are at home.

In the future this technology will probably make classrooms and students more advanced.

Score: 3