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Many people believe that the Face was made by aliens while others believe it's a natural landform. Many scientists believe that it was a natural landform which they are correct. Many people believe it was created by aliens becuase of where it is located till this very day. There are many other things on Earth that were created natural such as many mountains and volcanoes.

First, there has been many people since the pictures have came out that believe that aliens made this but why not think of natural landform. There are many and many landforms that were created naturally and many of these landforms didn't make us believe that an alien were to create it. So why believe that aliens created the Face on Mars? I guess they think that since it's in space and nobody lives on Mars it is assumed that aliens were the ones to create this.

Next, scienctists in Mars Global Surveyor has already proven that the Face was created naturally as said on the text. The first time that they came to see the amazing figure, the figure still looked a little bit fuzzy making people still believe of aliens forming it. When scientist found out of people stll believing it was aliens Gavin states, "It's not easy to target Cydonia." As they take the trip back again and took a picture the usage of their camera made the photo be seen very incredible. You could see everything very cleary making many people believe now that aliens weren't the ones to create such a beautiful figure like this one.

All though there might be still a few people that believe aliens were the ones who made it, many people can agree of how beatiful and creative this figure was made in Mars. As said on the text the Face reminds many people of different things like landforms here on Earth that was by nature and the appreciation of the Face that is still on Mars making history.

Score: 3