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After World War II many countries have beebn left in ruins and in need of supplies. To help these countries in need, 44 nations joined together and formed the UNRRA. The UNRRA Hired "Seagoing Cowboys" to go overseas and help deliver supplies to the other countries.

As a Seagoing Cowboy it is your job to take care of the horses, young cows, mules, and other animals kept aboard the ship that are being brought overseas to the countries in need.

It will take about 2 weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean and about 1 month to cross the Pacific 0cean.

Caring for the animals will keep you very busy, they will have to be fed and watered about 2-3 times a day.

The animals foods will have to be brought up from the lower holds of the ship and their stalls had to be cleaned. Besides just takijng care of animals and helping people you will have the added benefit of seeing places like Venice, Italy or Greece or other places.

It wont be just all hard work you will be able to see places you might have not seen before. On the way back there is plenty of fun to be had, like play games where the animals were held. You will be grateful for taking the opportunity ot do this, it hopefuly will make you more aware of the people in other countries and their needs. It will surely open up the world to you.

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