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After highschool Luke Bomberger never thought his life would not change. He was worked two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank when his friend Don invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldn’t say no. He knew it was a once in a lifetime opportunity.

Don and Luke went to help they people my taking care of their cattle after everything is left in ruins. Right before arriving to Greece, Luke turned eighteen. Now that he was a legal adult he could be drafted for the army. When they heard of what he was doing they told him to carry on.By the time he was discharged it was 1947 and he had made nine trips most as a Seagoing Cowboy.

After the animals had been unloaded they had fun playing baseball, volleyball, and many other activites. Being a Seagoing Cowboy opened the world to Luke. Like said that he was greatful for the opportunity and he is now aware of the people and countries in need.

Score: 2