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The author fom "The challenge of Exploring Venus", said

that

studying vanus is worty pursuit despite the dangers it presents.They say Venus is the twin of earth because its almost the same the only thing they dont have the same

its not nobody can't live there.For years they been trying to go there and walk around and see what

wrong with it , but everytime they go something wrong always happends with the mission.They say Venus os a very challenging place.

The author say that if something wrong ever happend

to our earth we will need

to go to Venus.The NASA is trying to find a way how to send human to Venus to see what wrong with it , they think they have sum idias how.Why would a be Venus like i told you before Venus is the closest planet to Earth in the terms of density and size.A would take us months even years to find a way to get there and how to make it seem like earth the place we living right now we can even call earth 2.

If we ever go to Venus we would need to wait

for Venus be close to us, but still a would to hours for us to get in to Venus and you would never know

if something go wrong

when we our

way other there. What if we go and we need to be in the space shops for months we cant do that because a would be so much people that are food might go away.That why need need to make sure that everything its ok for us to fly over space.

But do youe ever wonder if we ever live in Venus but we did something wrong with it that we need it to move to earth.

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