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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despitebthe dangers it presents.The first paragraph is going to be about the worthy persuit in things about venus.The second paragraph is going to be about the the dangers in the challenge of exploring Venus.

The worthy persuit in thing in venus are that they are closest planet to the earth.The evidence is that it says that "Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size,and occasionally the closest in distance too."Another piece of evidence is that these is some differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars

and other times to Venus.

There are very many dangers in the challenge of exploring Venus."A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent caron dioxide blankets Venus.""At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to the sea level of the Earth." Humans could be able to live on Venus."Not easy conditions, but surviveable for humans.The might not be able to complete the challenge."They are striving to meet the chellenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors."

Score: 2