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In the story "Unmasking the Face in Mars" it talks about a lanform looking like a human face.

It had eyes, a nose, and a mouth formed by shadows.

Some people believe that it was put there by aliens but somepeople believe it was a natural landform.

I belive it is a natural landform.

When they first found it they figured it was just another Martian mesa with unuasual shadows to make it look like an Egypian Pharaoh.

While conspiracy theorists believed there was an ancient civilization.

So when NASA got a chance they took another picture of the landform.

When they did they revealed that it was in fact just a natural landform.

Although NASA proved that it was a natural landform not everyone was satisfied.

They said that NASA took the picture on a cloudy day so you could not see the face through the clouds.

Then NASA took a picture with an even better camera and found that the face was a natural landform they even compared it to one on Earth.

Garvin said "So, if there were objects un this picture like airpkanes in the or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, your could see what they were!" So it was just a landform.

The conspiracy theorist think that the face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars evidence that NASA would rather hide then share.

But NASA wishes that there was a civilization on Mars and if it was then they would share it.

So NASA has all of the facts to say that is just a natural artifact and it was not created by aliens.

While conspiracy theorist do not have an real facts that aliens buit it.

So in conclusion " The Face" was just a natural landform that happened to look like a human face.

If it weren't for shadows to make it look like it had eyes, a nose, and a mouth it wouldn't have looked like a face at all.

Conspiracy theorist beleived that there was an ancient civilization but the have no facts to back them up.

So they are not very acurate.

I belive that "The Face" is just a natural landform because we have facts to back us up unlike conspiracy theorist.

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