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The author feels that further studys on Venus are dangerous but worth the time and effort. In this passage he discribes the conditions and states the challenges that come with the exploration of Venus

Venus, our lovely "Evening Star" or our "Sister planet", sounds beaustiful doesnt it. Don't be fooled by the nicknames of this planet, have you ever heard "Looks can be deseaving? If so you shoud keep that in mind when you are thinking about Venus. Venus is the second planet from the sun but

has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in the entire solar system, even with Mercury being the closest to the sun. With an atmosphere of almost 97 perent carbon dioxide, and temperatures 170 degrees miles away, living there would be impossible. On the surface there are erupting valcanos, huge earthquakes, and probes that land on its surface have been reported to be shocked by lighning. Venus got the Sister planent name due to its similar dencity and size to planet earth, there also is a therey that Venus was one coveredwith oceans, rocky sediments similar to valleys and mountains and could have been obtaining

some type of life forms.

Humans are known for their curiosety, even when it could leave them dead. In order to do any further reacurch on Venus, technologys that can withstand insane amounts of heat would have to be created then tested. Scientists have yet to explore enough of Venus, it is difficult to collect rocks, dust, or gasses for any type of examination. I feel that in the future, a scientist will create a device that can help explore the surface of Venus safely amd effectively.

Reading this passage really made me interested in learning about venus, and i also feel that further exploration would be worth waiting for the correct technology. Further studies would be effective because we would know more about the mystories of space.

Score: 3