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The author suggests that studying Venus is a worhty pursuit despite the dangers it presents because Venus has a lot of similarities and differences with Earth. Venus is very hot, the atmospheric pressure is very high. That is why studying Venus will be such a hard task. But it also has a lot in common with the Earth. Venus is close in size and is the closest planet to Earth.

The author says that studying Venus will be a difficult task because Venus and a lot of similarities and differences than the Earth. The average temperature on Venus is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Your book will burn up because it is too hot and Venus will melt any phone or tablet as well. In the article it says "Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system". Venus also has a thick atmosphere of 97% carbon dioxide that surrounds Venus. Which makes it even more challenging because of its clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Another reason why it is such a hard task to get to Venus is because the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we usually experience on Earth. In the article it says "Such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals". This means that we have never experience any atmospheric pressure that high ever. Venusian geology and weather present has erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and more frequent lightning strikes than Earth.

Venus is one of NASA's hardest task to try to make it to there. Venus has such a crazy high temperature and a very high atmospheric pressure. Venus has a highly corrosive sulfuric acid in that surrounds it. There are many more reasons why it is so hard for us to try to study Venus. But so far no one neither a spaceship has touched Venus yet for three decades and only time will tell when we will be able to make it to Venus.

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