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Let's talk about Venus! It doesn't really get talked about ; However, Venus is the second planet from the Sun. That also means it's a extremley hot planet.

Venus is sometimes called the "Evening Star" because of how bright it shines at night. It is also states in paragraph 2 first sentence, "Often referred to as Earth's "twin". Venus is called the Earth's twin sometimes because Venus is the closest plant in density and size. However, depending on the speed Earth's going along with how fast Venus goes. There might be a quick chance that those two planets will run past each other.

No spacecraft has been able to land safetly on Venus just for a few hours they can't survive. Maybe this explains why spaceship's haven't made it to Venus in more than 3 decades. Venus is covered in 97% of carbon dioxide blankets, Also; what's more challenging is the clouds of highly corrsive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. Therefore the temperatures on the planet is an average of 800 degrees fahernheit.

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