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I think that The challenge of Exploring Venus is worthy to study becuse when you study that you can explore the planet and I think that it is obiously interesting but it is aslo a little hard because you cannot explore the planet closely but venus is the closest in Earth i terms of denssity and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too but mars and other planetary neighbor orbit the sun at different speeds and the difference in speed mean that sometimes they are closer to Mars and other times to venus because the venus is sometimes around the corner in space terms humans have also sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world but sometimes the spacecraft didn't survive the landing for more than a few hours and maybe that explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study despite its proximity to us. but venus has also the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solat system even though Mercury is the closer to the sun. Beyond high pressure and heat venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanos,powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning srikes to probes seeking to land on it's surface The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable because venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth but today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth .The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has one particularly compeling idea for sending humasn to study Venus and there is no easy conditions but survivable for humans. Also human curiosity will likely lead them into many equally intimidating endeavors and their travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation and that's why i think that this challenge is interesting for people to study it.

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