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The author suggest that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The resaon is we have to find out things about the planet venus. It's important to know what is going on with this planet. The planet could have things on it that we could use.

If we need to find certain things to learn about the planet we have to go there. Also this isnt a safe trip to be going on. It's been three decades sense someones went to venus. a example of thing we could use is resourecs from they planet venus.

We could get sediments from the planet to study it. also its good to know what is happening to venus to have data. evan tho their are risks we have to know for alot of reasons. many researcers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledgeof venus. This is the evidence from they author that studying venus is a worthy pursuit.

By studying venus there is alot of positives and one bad thing is you could die.

my claim is that it would be worth the trip for all the data. my evidence is that studying venus for things like simplified electrons and more.

The planet is the hottest planet of them all. we have to creat innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus.

Score: 2