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In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile," the autor describes how the new technology is good because it knows what a lot of stuff "the process begins when the computer construcets a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44major muscles in the model must move like huan muscles".

I think that this is kind cool because if it can tell if you are sad or happy that would help out a lot of kids and adalts to see how ther kides are doing. "To an expert, faces dont lie; these muscle cules are sometimes used to spot when a "smiling"politician or celebrity isn't being truthful".

This is cool because i makes things that are old and that helps a lot of people that love old things and they would be happyn to have them and seem how it was from the beging. "The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, While it shows just how much this computer can do".

I think it woud be good that this techmology was out it could do some good and help a lot of peopl and keep them busy. They would put a lot of time and money in it so they can see what happen way back then and maybey see some old pitchers of famley

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