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In this story, Luke Bomberger was a Seagoing Cowboy who helped people during World War ll. Other people should participate in being a Seagoing Cowboy for a couple of reasons. Read this article on why more people should sign up for Seagoing Cowboys.

First of all, many countries in Europe were left in ruins and needed help. The countries are in need of their food supplies, animals, and more. With the help of more men, those needed supplies could be delievered with ease.

Along with all the hard work, there is also some fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games are also other activities that they enjoyed.

Even with everything the Seagoing Cowboys do, they are grateful for the opportunity. Besides helping people, the cowboys had the side benefit of seeing some beautiful countries. It also made the cowboys aware of people in other countries and their needs.

In conclusion, that is why more people should sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program. There are people in need, there is some fun on the board, and then there's the side benefit of seeing countries in or near Europe. Someday, maybe even you will be interested in joining the Seagoing Cowboys.

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