Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
I went on a trip to Europe on a cattle boat with my best friend Don Reist. After World War ll people needed help, so Don and I signed up for a UNRRA( the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). Our job was to carry cargo of 335 horses including enough hay and oats to feed them.

Even though I have hard work to do about everyday, I still get a little bit of free time. I like my job because I get to help people in need for help and still get to see the most beautiful sites.

Everyone who loves boat rides, can handle hard work, and still wants free time should join the UNRRA program. The text says, " Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded." This most likley means that other people is happy about their job too, and can have fun while doing their work.

The text says, " UNRRA hired "Seagoing Cowboys" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas." This means that you are the one who needs to sign up to be apart of the crew. Being apart of this crew can be a once and a life time opportunity, like the text says, " He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime."

Score: 2