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"Venus, sometimes called the "Evening Star," is one of the brightest points of light in our sky." The planet Venus have caught scientists attention for years. Venus which is the 2nd planet closest to the sun is also known as Earth's Twin. Venus however has misleaded missions that were hosted my NASA because of it's hostile and arid environment.

No one has ever been to Venus but machines have. Machines have prooved that Venus is incapable of taking people into it's atmosphere. Machines on Venus are tend to fail in the first couple of hours after landing. Venus not only has a bad side but it has a good side to. Since the discovery of Venus scientists have been wondering of how to get some samples that Venus has to offer such as rocks.

Venus has frequented in it's own dangerous atmosphere. In fact Venus average temperature is 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is that of 90 times greater than on Earth.

An environment such as that is of no chance of having humans in it.

"If our sister planet is so inhospitable why are scientists even discussing further visits to it's surface." People are practically incapable of going to Venus because of such a harsh environment. Scientists are only limited to just having drones stay above the plante to overlook it and recieving data about the landscape of Venus. At times though since scientists are intrugied about the existence of such a planet they will probably never stop studying it until we develop a technology that can withstand the atmosphere of Venus.

NASA at the moment, is currently trying to figure out how to get a drone or a person on Venus without causing the drone or person harm. NASA has developed silicon carbide to withstand Venus surface. The silicon carbide can withstand 3 weeks of it and after that it is destroyed. Another project that proofes that Venus can destroy anything in a short amount of time is the mechanical computer. Mechanical computer's stretches back to the 1800s and that they were later used in the 1940's during World War ll. "The thought of computer's existing in those days might sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all" Older computers can actually withstand Venus climate than Brand new computers. Technologies from today can barely last 2 minutes due to the fact that they are delecate and made out of tin. "Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many euqually intimidating endeavors." This prooves that no one is likely to stop studying Venus until we have collected enough samples. Gathered enough Data sheets and test out more technological appliances that can withstand Venus atmosphere for long periods of time.

Score: 3