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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" The author suggests that Venus is worth studying despite the dangers it presents. Firstly, The author supports the idea of why we sould go to Venus and explore venus and as stated in the article "Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of denisty and size". On paragraph 5 the author sayed that, "not easy conditions, but survivable for humans" He said this because on paragraph 5 he explained the conidtions of Venus and came to

conclusion of saying we can survive with rough conditions he said "thirty plus miles above the surface, tempatures would

still be toasty at around 170 degrees Farenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level of earth" we can survive Venus but we will have to be in very rough living conditions this is why it is worth to pursuit Venus ever with these rough conditions. Firstly, NASA for example on paragraph 7, "Nasa has been working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplfied electronics made out of silicon carbide have been tested inside a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface". If we can perfect the atomosphere of Venus and perfect the technolgy to explore Venus we can send drones and people to see how Venus truly is on the surface. Secondly, If we can be able to use Solar power on Venus 30 miles above the ground we will be able to survive with those rough conditions. Lastly,

stated on paragraph 6, "Many other researchers are working on inovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to or knowledge of Venus". I believe that we are capable to go to Venus and be able to survive the weather and storms that can be caused if we where in Venus if we can just get our technolgy advanced enough we will be able to just move to Venus and live there it will be hard gettig to Venus i know we will be able to acomplish this in the near future and finally be able to colonize outside of earth. This is why I agree with the author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus"

Score: 3