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In the article making mona lisa smile by Nick D'Alto talks about how this new technology can read a humans emotion .and i think the new technol can be used durinh class to tell how a student is feeling .not only can it be used during schools it can be used outside of school to.the new technology can solve many other problems in education and personal problmes .

i support this idea because teacher can used the new technology to take students that don't get the lesson that there are being teached can be help out by the teacher because some students are afread to ask , The new technology can also help the teacher know what lesson is working and what lesson is not.as written in the articel pf makink mona lisa smile in paragraph " a class rom computer could recoginize when a student is

becoming cofused or bored '' which could help the teachers modifiy the lesson ,like an effective human instructor this technology can improve the way we learn and make students more intrasted on learning new things that could impacted many other schools grades

new technology that reads emotions not only can help improve education but it can also help use bulit relationship between students and teachers which can casuse less problems in schools like cheating ,fight ,get kicked out of schools ,drugs and copying .it can also help students with personal problmes that they may be expericeing that effected there education and life style by reading there emotions with the new software to help the student fell good about ther problems weather is bulling or some other type of problems this new softeware can improve reationship and edducation no matter what .

i support this soft ware not only becasue it can improve eduation and relationships but also becasuces it helps out a student ,family member or even a friend in there life to make a right decicion by read there emotions and adtitude to a

person which they can fixe ther emotions that impacts there class mate and teacher

not useing the soft ware would be a big mistake becasue there would be nothing to know how a student is felling about school and what lesson are not work there would also be no major impacted in education growing

Score: 3