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The Author is sugesting us to learn about "The Challenge of Explorinf Venus" Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the threats it present. To challenge this planet we would have to studie about Venus. Hot sister planet,Hot planet, or is it possible to live in Venus could it work.

First, The Author sugesting us to learn about Venus in the solar system. Venus is our second planet in the solor system, and the hot in the surface and twins. Here why "Often referred to as Earth's "Twin," is the closest planet to Earth in terms f density and size, and occasionally the closest in the distance too." so there you have it.

Next, The author wants us to know about the challenging of Venus surfaces, Atmosphere, and life. Here one i fact that "the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket Venus.". Venus surface temperature would be like 800 degrees and it can do more times great than what we can experience. I don't think that venus has life on the surface because their hot land can be a problem once go rough it may burn you with acid so dangerous

Then, The author want us to know if it possible to colonize Venus as new home. Well, NASA has been visits to Venus like 2 times. people may say that it is dangerous to go to Venus with the man on the planet because the athmosphere can cause limits. I don't think they should colonize Venus There is no water, no life ,

it's just full of rocky, winds, hot.

Finally, The author want wheather people should learn or visit to Venus to see if we can visit, We should not colonized because who knows what could happen. They should keep studying more about Venus and learn from the others planets they should colonize for the future.

Score: 4