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The author suggests studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.

Studying Venus can be dangerous but NASA thinks it will be a compelling idea. In "The challenge of Exploring Venus," it says "Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." (8) Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Venus has the hottest surfaces and rocky sediment but can be our nearst option for a planetary visit.

Venus can be a hard place to go because of how dangerous. Humans have sent many spacecrafts and each mission was unmanned because the spacecraft didnt survive the landing. In "The challenge of Exploring Venus" in the text it says "Scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understant Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk." (6). Venus conditons are not easy, but survivable for humans. Venus is a challenge but humans are trying to go and explore even with the dangers they might face.

Venus has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon that covers venus. The planets temperature is over 800 degrees. In the text it says "Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely."(1) Venus is dangerous place to visit but scientists want to risk going to gather up information and explore. Doesn't sound like a good and safe idea but the author and NASA think it's a good oppurtunity.

In conclusion in "The challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests "studying venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers it presents." There are many reason Venus is a dangerous planet to visit. The authors and scientists think it is a good idea, it says "what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive," (4).

Score: 3