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Venus needs to be study, because we may need it later. Venus is the most like Earth in the solar system. Some of it's difference are pretty bad, but it's closest and maybe best opition for planetary vist. It's known about some of Venus diffculties, but if there is even a chance we could survive on Venus, shouldn't we try? One of the good things about Venus is that it's same size as Earth. If not the unbearable heat and carbon dioxide blankets we all would be able to be a on Venus. Another thing is that density matches ours, so we could stand on it. And then is basely our neighbor planet so we wouldn't have to travel that far to get there. But now you have to know the bad things about Venus. Firstly the atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth's, so we wouldn't be able to walk on there. In fact the would crush us completely. Then there's no water on Venus so we have to brings our own. Finally it's just too hot, with temperture of 800 degrees. So w/ all that in mind, Venus has it's ups and downs, but it's still worth studying to see if we can make it better.

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