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The gorveners and presitdent are trying to bane cars for good. First they're trying to bane car so that are eviroment get's better and so that's what there doing. Second in German they banned cars for couple days and if you refuse to not drive your car you'll have to pay a fine. They have also started this community were you can't drive cars and if you wanted car space it' 40,000 along with the house you're paying for,some people even had to sale their cars just to get an house in that new community. Thrid as a result of 70 percent of vauban's families do not have cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move. Frouth middle class families from chicago to shanghai tend to make their homes and reduce greenhouse gas. Also all of our development since world war 11 has been centered on car, and that will have to change said " Daivd Goldberg".

I think it's crazy that Paris has banned driving due to smog. First on every Monday no one can drive their cars do due to smog so they're trying to reduce the smoke in the air. Second on that same day people with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 31$ fine. Thrid almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to reuters twenty-one people had their cars impounded for their reaction on the fine. Frouth Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals.

First in Bogota their is car free day spinning into a big hit. Second they pay for you're ride so that you don't drive you're car. Thrid so their turnout was large,despite gray clounds that dumed occasional rain showers on Bogota.

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