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In recent years many citicens have stated that the so called "face on mars" is a martion monument. Well I have but one question for those few citicens. Do you have any proof? there is nor was there ever any real evidence supporting the martion monument claim. However there is evidence proveing that the face is realy a mesa!

When we first released the origonal photo we had hoped the public would take notice of mars. Unfortunately many therorist now say that the face was undeniable proof of alien life! NASA decided that better photoes were requiered to qwell theas rummors. It took us twenty-two years to get better results. Even so the public still believed in what they thought rather than what they saw.

Three years later we recieved the best results possible. the photo not only showed no carvings but it also showed that there was no face at all! Instead we found that the face was but an ilusion! Shadowes were made by the landform creating a non-existant face!

Thus the face on mars was proven to be fake and the public became dissapointed.

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