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He is saying that mabey one time there was things living there like there were trees and water . Many things like nature and that its really hot and that its possible that humans can go . but that it will be hard to stay up there because there happends to be a challenge of who can get there first and NASA wants to send people to Venus to get and gather research . NASA is looking at electronics that they are making so that they can last up there just becase it can be up to 170 degrees in venus and they need to make everything to be resistant to the warmness and heat . Also the prssure that it will give beacsue all those things can just melt and that we should keep learning . not being scared of whats ahead to see what else is out there and to see what other kind of information we can get from going to Venus and exploring more and more and also that the scientist need to get really close to see what

is happening and to gather material tto see what they happen to contain and to see what minerals there is inside . they aso want there inventions and machines to last a long time to gather as much research as they can .

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