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I disagree with having Driverless Cars . It's absolutely dangerous , and in the passahe it says it'll change the world , yes it will because it's going to cause the percentage of death to really rise up . It's a horrible idea . So many accidents would be done in just one day , then were going to be scared when we drive with our kids and family .

All for looking for a tecnological way to drive . Also , it's not even really Driverless Cars because you still have to be alert to take over when there are accidents , or taffic and that's basically the worst part . Whith so much traffic we have so far , that would not be good . Imagine yourself on the phone or looking back , or just not paying full atention and then you have to drive . That will totally mess you up in your concentration . Having a driverless car will be so stressfull , I would not even buy it .It would cause so many eccidents . I agree with this traffic law , the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times . In most states it's illegal even to test computer driven cars , I hope it's illegal here in Indiana , too

Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver ? If they still need a driver to pay attention , that means there not good to trust . As it says in paragraph 7 , the necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the drivier's attention whenever a problem occurs. What about if you don't look on time ? You never know when something is going to happen , imagine just a computer sensor ?

Dr.Werner Huber a BMW project manager driver said "We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way" . You can't play around with cars . It could explode or malfunction no matter how much technology it has in it . The computer system isn't a human , it will not be any better than one . If you're comfortable driving your car , why will you buy a driverless car that you'll still have to drive and not be totally safe in it ?

It's horrible how someone just for being lazy or to look better than someone would get something like this that will just out her or his life in danger . Technology has been very advanced , true , but it would be good to use it as something to help us not to take us to the death . Something that will help us get through life , or important ocasions , not a car that someone can easily drive . There's so many accidents now a dance and humans are the ones driving , imagine just computer sensors that can easily not work when you least expect it .

Score: 3