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Luke had no idea life would provide him something like a job. He was working two part-time jobs, he was working at the grocery store and at a bank. Then one of his friends invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. He knew it was a chance of a life time. Luke didn't want to say no.

Here are some reasons to join the program, I think you should join the program because to help people in need. Also World War II just finished and if the people's family members died you could go comfort them. Another reason why is " To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA. Also to go take care of hores, young cows, and mules that were shpped over seas.

Some of the claims are " When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service." " Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China."When Luke was helping his aunt Katie when he was little it had prepared luke for hard work, but not for the dangers at the sea.

So the main point of this was to always help those in need because once you do kindness might come back to you like a boomerang. Also once when Luke was done his awareness stayed with him leading his family to host students and exchange visitors for many years.

Score: 2