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Do you want to be able to feel more safe while you are in the car? If you answered yes, then you might want a car that can senses all the dangers that's surrounding you before you can. Car is a great transportation to go to places, so it's important that you are safe while you're in the car. Diverless cars are being develop; driverless cars are cars that can drive itself without you touching the steeling wheel.

While you are in a car, it is important that you're safe from all dangers that is surrounding you.Most cars company are developing driverless cars, meaning that the car can drives itself without you even touching the steeling

wheel. Almost every cars have safety featers. For example, in paragraph 4 it said, "Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor." All these sensors will help you be more safe while you are in the car.

Another good thing about driverless cars in the furture is that the car would use half the fuel of today's taxi system and offer far more flexibility than a bus. Another good reason to have driverless cars in the furture is that, say that you are going on a vaction and you are driving about 4-5 hours, but you don't want to take a rest before you would slow down the time of getting there; so by having a driverless car, you can set the car to drives itself while you can relex and rest for a bit. After you got some rest and feel better, you can set the driverlss mode off and you continued driving.

Cars that can detect dangers before you can it's important feater to have. In paragraph 7 it said that " In 2013, BMW announed the development of " Traffic Jam Assistatn." The car handle drivong functions at speeds up tp 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel." this means that the car will help the driver focus on the road. Also in paragraph 7 it said that " They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves." meaning that if you are not paying attention the car can stop itself before an accident happens.

So yes developing driverless cars is a good idea in the future. It has a lot of safety featers that can help to stop an accident before it happens. it's important that you are safe while you are in the car. Most of cars company is developing cars that can drives itself without you even touching the steeling wheel.

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