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Have you ever wanted to live on another planet? Venus may have once been the most Earth-like planet and may be survivable for humans. Which is why Venus is a worthy pursuit.

It is the closest planet to earth so it would take very little time to get there.

In the text, "Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.". So if we end up going to another planet it would likely be venus for times-sake.

It could be inhapitable soon after we reach it. The text states, "thirty-plus miles above the surface, tempatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.". So if we were to discover a way to Venus and a way to fly above it we could live (technically not) on Venus.

People love challenges and this currently seems one of the most challlenging of all. In the text, "researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.".

I would rather think getting something without being able to reach it would be quite challenging if you are not psychic.

This is why Venus is a worthy pursuit. It is the closest planet to earth, it could be livable, and it would prove a challenge. Can you see any reason Not to go to Venus?

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