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Would you ever like to know what your classmate next to you is feeling about you or being in class? The new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. This new system would help students, teacher, or anyone you know what they are feeling based off their emotions. This new way of technology will help us understand what we can do to improve student's emotions in the classroom. This technology is valuable, it will help us know how students are feeling, help us figure out when someone is lying, and may also help produce happiness to students.

The Facial Action Coding System will give us an idea how the students are feeling during class. "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,"(Dr.Huang). With this technology we can now figure out what students are going through during class, and know if there needs to be a change to improve their learning skills. This technology would help teachers have an idea that the students are not following or undertanding the class. The teachers then can find new ways to modify the lesson to get the students on the right page.

This new technology will also help give clues when a student is lying. "These muscles clues are sometimes used to spot when a "smiling" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful,"(Making Mona Lisa Smile, D'Alto). This can also help teachers figure out if a student is lying about a serious problem. This technology will also help improve our schools and help find new ways to improve students emotions if other teachers or students know about their feelings.

The Facial Action Coding System can be a way to produce happiness to students. "Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them,"(Facial Feedback Theory of Emotions). It is healthy that students smile rather than be angry, sad, or stressed. Practicing to create a smile is a good way to be happy.

In conclusion, this Facial Action Coding System is a valuable piece of technology. It is helpful in so many ways, like knowing how students around you are feeling, gives clues when a student is being untruthful, and may also cause happiness to students who are having a tough time. This technology should be used for schools all over the world. Technology improves everyday and we should take an advantage by using it all around in schools, work, or even at home.

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