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In the story the challange of exploring venus the author says that we should keep studying venus or even if there are alot of risks well right now nasa has been sending robots and alot of other stuff to venus to take picture so they can see how the planet looks like which helps them decide if the planet is even safe or humans if it is safe to live on and the dangers are real and the cost of all this does take in this the risk is that maybe the thing they bulit does not end of working you wasted money right there and in the the story a spacecraft has come back umharmed and it only takes the spacecrafts only a few hours to reach venus nasa only does this becuase no human can last that long in space for humans it would take years to reach there and the for nasa the risk is high no wonder they do not not risk it ad they would have to pack so much food and who knows if they will last and studyig venus is not easy beucase the spacecraft has to go around the whole planet takeing lot of pictures and those pictures go start back to nasa where thhey check out the planet to see if humans could liv on that planet and that risk is very high the weather in venus is waymore diffrent then the weather here on earth and the weather there is 90 times greater then it is on earth and there is high presure heat there no human could stand that and then people ask if the planet is so inhospitable well they say venus used to be just like the earth but now not really but they could be a possibe way it could and the space travel there is less then mars and any other planet but who knows when a human is actually go to venus it will take some years to see if we actually go there but nasa is working on other ways to to study venus they can use computer and alot of other stfuff which will help them study more and technolhy will help and by the time you know it we will be sending to venus and they will be going but who evens know if we will the risks are high lives we wil be on the line the dangers are rea but it will the onlly way we will know about venus but there is also a strivring challenge and venus does have value and the nasa team will get there someday and then we will go and explore the whole solar system.

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