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The idea of cars driving on their own is something that everyone believes is the future of our generations and they are right. Self-driving cars will be one of the greatest inovations that are coming in the near future. Back then in the 90's, driverless cars was just a joke, but now with the new technology we have today, driverless cars are now something to be taken seriously.

Sure there are many pros and cons to the idea of a selfdriving car that runs soley on the new technology we have created, but that risk is worth taking. The odds of a selfdriving car having an accident compared to a person driving a car is very low. Using the codes that have been imprinted on to the car's harddrive, will most definetly decrease the odds of a driverless car having an accident. If a code was some how incorrect or input improperly then the human driver will have the ability to take over the car. The human driver must stay alert as if he was driving the car himself. To secure the safety of passengers even more, the goverment must now implemnt new laws. Laws such as, who ever sits in the drivers seat must mantain focus on his surrondings while focusing on the road, passengers must be seated at all times, and tampering with the car's driving system is a crime. These laws will help protect everyone driving and those who are driving a driverless car themself.

The less chance of accident happening is fantastic, but also new jobs will be created too. Coders, techinical engineers and hackers will be need in the new driverless car era. You may be wondering "Why would we need hackers for driverless cars?" There are hackers that hack to test how well a

piece of technology can handle against a virus, scripts, and much more. Those hackers can attempt to hack the driverless cars and if they were to succeed then they can alert the manufactures. Knowing that a hole in the operating system in the car is filled, will increase the safety of those who drive.

Jobs will be increasing while also boosting the idea of the neccesity of college. Our generation is no longer based around office work and difficult labor. This new generation is going off the explosion of technology. If we were to slow down on the advancement of technology then we are just slowing down the progress of students.

Self-driving cars will be our next step towards our futures.

Driveless cars will be what is known for the 21st century. New jobs will be created,the safety of others will be improved, school will become a bigger importance, and think about it, wouldn't you want to own a driverless car.

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