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The technology in the passage "Making Mona Lisa Smile" is incredible and is very revealing to the science of emotions. The Facial Action Coding System is also very helpful to everyone and lets us, in a way, "dig deeper" to people's thoughts and emotions. The use for the Facial Action Coding System can be very useful when reading student's emotional expressions and can very easily help the student learn.

This technology can be very useful to not only the students, but also to the teacher in the classroom. She/He would not have to beg or keep asking the students if they understand the lesson or not, but rather have the robot read their expressions to see if they understand the information that is being brought to them. In paragraph 6, Dr. Huang says "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor". Students would not have to reliey on teachers to make the lesson exciting and fun. The program would make the lesson fun and exciting for the student, which translates to better grades and better oppurtunites for the future of the student.

Classroom computers that read emotions could very easily become the next big thing because of their smartness and ability to adapt to students needs when learning. Many people, whether they are students or not, will benefit from these computers that read emotions.

Score: 3