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You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program! Here's a reason why, You could go sight seeing to places you've never been to like Venice or China! Keep reading to find some more reasons.

You could help all kinds of people get better from sickness or other kinds of problems they might have. You might get a chance to do a job you've never done before. On board after all the hard labor is done you could play games and meet new people while your at it. It could give you a special look at the world around you. You could go to all kinds of places like China, Greece, or Italy.

You get to take care of all kinds of animals. It depends where you go on your trip but you could go to Greece and see the Acropolis or take a gondala ride in Venice, Italy. You might be able to break the record of the most trips as a Sea Cowboy. It would probably make you feel good knowing that your helping people. While on board you could get really good at games you've probably never tried or were really bad at.

You could go sightseeing. "But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special, So was taking a gondala ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water." You would always be busy. "Caring for the animals kept Luke busy. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day." An expeirence like that can open up yours eyes to the world. "It opened up the world to him "I'm grateful for the opprotunity."

And that is why I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboy Program.

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