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I think we should visted other plantes. I feel like this because maybe it will just just other plantes but it might help the eath to. I think we will find things on other that will have the world shocked. I also do think it is worth going to venus to see whats over there are to try to get things back that they will be have something to bring to bring back home. Or also i feel like they should send people over there to see if there is life or others things that might live over there. So I think it is worth to pursiut going to venus even though it might be dangers but I think it will be better when you come back and come back and tell people about how venus is and also your name will last in history evn after you die your name will still be known as the first ever to went to venus. It will also help us on our back history like wars and thing like that. It also help us look back on old technology.

One reason why I feel like we it is worth going to venus is because we will be able to look back on our old technology. I feel like that will be grate because our world is becoming more about technology everyday so that will be able to help us out an lot. The text states"Another project is look back to an old technology called mechanical computers" So go over ther and find this technology it will help us understnad more about back then. So all of the details we don know now we will know

Another reason why it is worth it is because we will have have good devices that whelped us back in our old wars witch means the device could help us win a big time war. The text states"these devices wewe first envisoned in the 1800s and palyed an important role in the 1940s during would war 2" This is important because this mean during wa we will be able to go back and used the things we used to.

So these are the reason why i feel like it is worth going back to to venus. It will help us out now big time time even though it is old.

Score: 3