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I do think it is possible to research venus even tho its deady in its ways. I am going to be stating on where in the paragraph and why i beleive it will support my answer.

The author states in paragraph 5 that they can stay 30 or so miles above the planet in a blimp-like vehicle but, they would still be toasty at 170 degrees fehrenhiet and they can have a jet to go above the storms. The pressure is about as strong as earths sea level at the level where the jet could be. With this information i read, I beleive it is possible to research venus with, maybe, no casualties. Venus is earths sister so its very similar to what earth has so it could have the needs to support life if, we know on what infromation it can give is good infromation.

From what i read and from what i know i can inform that it is worth trying to explore venus. Sure it has problems that might never be passed but, its worth a shot to increase and thrive our human race. The planet had some of the things we need like water, life, a hospitalized place, and yet it has things we dont need like high killing temperatures, almost no sunlight, no breathable air. Venus is worth exploring because it might gave a chance to help us thrive or even have the things we need to thrive like mars.

Score: 2