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Have you ever wanted a much more cooler and not so boring teacher? The

use of the facial action coding system to read the emotional expressions of

students is very valuable because it can helo teachers understand how a

student is feeling and possibly what causes them to feel the way they are. Having

FACS can also help because if a student comes to class because of a bad day

the teacher can try to comfort them. If a student is bored this system will also help because maybe then a teacher will switch the topic and/or try to make it more fun for us students.

My second reason why FACS is also a valuable system is it may also help, or save marriages and relationships because if one of someone's partners isn't being expressive they can easily find out how he/she feel and find a way to solve it. The system might alos help bring more family and friends together as one and help each member communicate more better instead of arguing, being distant, or keeping quiet about something or someone.

My third reaon why FACS is a helpful system is human society won't have to walk around in public with a fake smile on their face, or try to be somone they're not. Human society may be more understandable of other people's feelings and think about what's on the inside of a person rather then what is showing on the outside.

In conclusion the Facial Action Coding System is a valuable system because it's very helpful when it comes to emotions, and it will help others who have trouble expressing themselves, or someone, or something. This system may help people have a better understanding of others, and why they might be acting a certain way.

Score: 3