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The FAC systes is not neccessary in a students classroom. It does not give people a fair shot to handle their emotions the way(s) they would like to handle them. Something that may be bothering a teen or a child is their business. They should have the option of sharing how they feel and what it is that may be bothering them. Or even if there is nothing bothering them, students may be happy. They should be granted the right of expressing their emotions freely.

If a student feels they want to talk to anyone about their emotions, they should verbally explain them. Having a machine explain a persons feelings may be inaccurate, or teach students to depend on technology to do everything for them. Technology is what creates laziness. For instance, the text states that " we humans perform this same impressive " calculation" every day." That quote alone explains the "natural" way of life. people are naturally able to read emotions from other able organisms. any organism with a facial sturcture is able to recognize emotions. The text also explains what happens to the major muscles and bones in a face whenever someone feels a basic emotion. I feel that we, as people are able to do the same thing.

In fact, verbal communication isn't even required in order to be able to read a persons emotions. That is a statement from the text that is proved to be true in everyday life. the complications and inaccuracy of the reading from the computure may be caused due to natural genetic facial structures and expressions. a person may feel happy but due to the sturcture of their face they may look angry. just because of the way their face is genetically structured. Therefore, being that a machine is not capable to distinguish a natural facial structure from a mental emotion, causing the readings from the machine would be inaccurate.

Score: 3