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Driverless Cars vs. Human Driven Cars

Growing up in the age of technology, many scholars like me have been able to see the increased growth of technolgy around us.

Technology in the last 20 years has rapidly grown in ways not seen before.

Even in cars safety has increased in the last ten years with the introduction of safety sensors, anti rollover protection, and brake assist, all advancements have made cars much safer according to the Insurance Institute of Highway Safety (IIHS).

However this day in age the push and roll out of self driving veichles is advancing rapidly.

With the increased push for self driving cars I can't see self driving cars within the near future.

First off self driving cars and their technolgy is very expensive, especially for the lower class to afford. All this great technology and advancements comes at an unpresidented price that many may not be able to afford.

As shown in paragraph four of "Driverless Cars Are Coming", "The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car surroundings".

This day in age this technology is to expensive many and is not tested on enough.

Second the safety of many is at jeapordy, as we all know technology is not always reliable so how can we trust the safety of cars? Especially in places where road conditions are not favorable like icy roads or steep and mountanous places. How can veichles properly drive these road conditions without avoiding a crash or dangering surroundings like pedestrian and bikers. As shown in paragraph seven this quote proves that cars can not be completlely driverless, "They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are deisgned to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills".

This excerpt greatly shows the dangers self driven cars poses, especially if the car needs human assitance and the human is not paying attnetion, which most likley occur if driving isn't done most of the time.

Lastly in the liklely hood a selfdriven car is involved in a crash from minor accidents to wrongful death incidents, who is liable? The advancements of self driving cars will create a new problematic situation for many who may become in self driven car accidents. As shown in paragraph nine, the introduction will create new changes to current laws, "Still even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover the liability in the case of an accident". This quote exagerates the legal vs. ethical dangers of self driven cars which is another debatable topic.

The introduction and testing of self driven cars and increased safety is a great advancement for the well being of human kind. What so ever I disagree with introducing self driving cars this day in age. With self driving cars we need to conduct more tests and be certain that these will be the safest mode of transport. Also before the introduction of self driving cars laws and legal issues need to be taken care of before the rollout of self driving cars. If all these are conducted I can see human driven cars a thing of the past in half a century or so but for right now it is best and safest if we stick to human driven cars because

of all the unknowns.

Score: 4