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The Facial Action Coding System is it useful? Yes, it would be useful because people might be able to be into things that they would probably get board with. Students may finally be willing to learn stuff on thier own instead of being forced to learn something they are not intrested in. this can all come true if we make the facial action coding sytem available to stores around the world.

The Facial Action Coding System is a program that can read a person's emotions. When a person is frustrated the program can alter the screen to help the person better understand something or to help them become less frustrated. This program can also inform a teacher that a student does not understand what they are doing. This also can help the teacher do his or her job better. the advnced science at the university of illinois working in colaboration with prof are developing better ways for humans and computers to comunicate.

This program is able to help read emotions and determines what a person is feeling. It does this by reading complex algorithms that were also used to decode mona lisa's smile. This program picks up the smallest details like when you raise the corners of your lips. Also it can pick up when you squint your eyes you produce a wrinkle called crowsfeet at the croners of you eyes.

This program should be available to stores world wide because it could create a solution to much confusion and frustration. This program could make people want to learn stuff. Also this program can be cool and fun for people to try. Another thing would be that Ferinsics caan use this to tell what people are feeling and determine if the are nervous about somthing or not.

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