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In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" it talks about the different emotions and what muscles help that facial expression function. I think that the use of this technology to read emotions will help students in classrooms.

As Dr. Huang says in paragraph six " A cassroom computer could recignize when a student is beciomung confused or bored;" This would alarm the computer and the teacher that the student is struggling with their work and help them.The computer could acess the problem and try to solve it like a teacher as it says in paragraph six "then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instuctor ." This would help teacher if they had big classes and all the students were struggling with something different.

In conclusion using these facial recognition devices would not only help the students but also the teachers in their classes. Thus solving both the students and the teachers problems or concerns.

Score: 3