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This is one reason why you should join the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration (UNRRA). Reason number one is because you get to go and see many places you have never seen before like China. The text states Luke said Don and him got to travel all the way to China. The text also states that Luke said caring for the animals help keep him busy.

You should join the program because you get to go and see places you never saw before like China. When you are taking the trip to China or where ever you are going you can take care of the animals so you won't be bored. The text states that the animals need to be fed and watered about 2-3 times a day. The text also states that bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Plus the stalls had to be cleaned.

That is why you should join UNRRA. Not only do you get to work with animals such as horses, young cows, and mules but you get to help them to. You get to feed them 2-3 times a day and clean their stalls. They keep you busy so you won't get bored. You get to help them when they get off the ship to.

Score: 3