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While reading this story, I noticed that there where alot of of negative things about Driverless Cars. These things are what cought my eye. Even though having a car without having to drive it is an awesome thing, I can see that it can also put the riders in the car at risk. While thats said, I personaly do not think that driverless cars are safe. For many reasond of cause.

Reason number one is, that they are not totally diverless. In the story it saids," They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are desighned to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navagating through work zines and around accidents."

The scary thing about this is, the driver might not always hear the alart in time to react and then comes an aweful accident. These cars are designed to give the divers a break (I'm guessing) but if the driver are totaly relaxed, than that could resolve in a huge problem.

Reason number two is, that even though you are not driving you still have to pay attention to roads. Which now tells me that this car was not made to give the drivers a break after all. I read," Manufacturers are aslo considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road."

Now, this article has me wondering. Why was this invention was even made? it doesnt give the driver a break nor is it able to handle any road conditions.

And reason three was, thats this is not even legal in all states. Which now has me thinking about why other contries think that this is not such a good idea either. The article said," Presently, traffic laws are written with the asssumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is ilegal even to test computerdriven cars." This has to tell you something about how safe this really isan't for humans if it is ilegal in other states.

Even thought this sounds like a pretty cool idea, I dont think that it owuld be safe at all to put out for humans to buy. They dont alwasy drive themselves, they are ilegal in some states to even be inventing, and they could be the cause of many accidents. Now, they dont sound all that safe. But, of course, the choice is all yours... Would you give it a try?

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