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FACS

Telling somebody their emotions is cool, but it is also

useful. The online classroom and classroom is a good setting to have the technology in.

It can detect if a students emotions about the subject they are learning. Having FACS is valuable in the classroom.

Being confused in the classroom sucks.

Being too shy to ask questions is very common among young people.

Having FACS will make it so kids won't have to ask for help directly.

The technology will recognize if the student is confused and could modify the lesson.

Also students may not like or understand the way a teacher is teaching.

With FACS the technology will recognize the facial expressions a student is making and will alter the way the computer is teaching the lesson to a better liking of the student.

Having this technology will improve grades in the classroom.

Having Facial Action Coding System in the classroom will greatly improve student's attidude towards school.

With no longer having to embarass yourself by asking a "dumb question" and getting taught at your liking is very valuable.

FACS is the next big technology to be in the classroom.

Score: 2