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I think the development of these cars would be a good idea,

Firstly, the cars would use half of the fuel so

It would be better for the environment .Also, It would produce less pollution.People who care about the nature would buy these cars, helping the process to get rid of the pollution.

Secondly, the information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.

Although,none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless so It means that if we keep developing these technology we can reach the point of cars driving without a human being.Also, these cars remains alert to the human driver to be ready to take over when the situation requires, so people can manage the situation.

Thirdly,It's safer in all the aspects.Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.

The way that Driverless cars use the technology is increible, If the

Driverless cars can do this now, who knows what they will do.

Finally, I think Driverless cars would make the world so much easier

for the drivers and also, for all the people who life in our planet because there would be less accidents ans less pollution.

Score: 4