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The development of driverless cars, although is a step into the future for society and the world, should not be continued. These cars offer more negative aspects than positive, and suggest many conflicts for the future.

With today's technology, even though there is usually someone in complete control of the car, many faults occur and lead to issues anyway. Technology of all kinds are known for breaking down and malfunctioning; so if you can't trust a human to operate a vehicle with the chance of there still being some sort of problem (collisions, breakdowns, etc.), then you can only infer that when a driverless car is put into the same situation, that there will still be problems. Also since these driverless cars will consist of newer and unknown technology, they will be more prone to breaking down and causing difficulties for the passengers.

This leads to the problem of: who will be blamed for the accidents? Will the owner of the vehicle be blamed for, or will the manufacturers? What will happen when the technology fails? According to the passage, completely new laws will need to be made to cover things such as liability for accidents and new traffic laws will have to be created as well. A few states actually have a band on driverless cars which means that

if these vehicles do prosper, then there will be a few roadblocks ahead for those who choose to operate these cars. Unless the states lift the bans, owners of driverless cars will not be able to travel through certain states.

The ban could potentially be lifted, but what is the ban really protecting people from? According to what companies have already created, cars are still not fully capable of driving on their own. They require human asisstance in certain situations, which means that the driver will have to remain focused on the road as well. This is most likely not the point of having a "Driverless Car".

With today's technology, current laws, and the developement of what you could call semi-driverless cars, the world- or at least the country of the United States- is better off without these vehicles for now. Untill further projects and research has been done, these cars should not be developed and driven on roads unless the correct technology is created.

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