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The Driverless?

Some people say cars shold be driverless others say they it should not become driverless. I agree with the people who say it should not go in the driverless deriction. There are so many that will happen or go coplety wrong like the law, can they fix it, and not complety drivless.

First they are not complety drivless because the car can not drive throught every thing like work zones and around accidents. So the person has to stay aleret to take over then be relaces and enjoy the ride.

Next is the law will it change a lot because of the new car? As a result, in most states it's illegal to test the computer driven cars. Sone more states will follow suit as soon as the cars are truly safe. If the technology fails and some is injured, who is to blame-the driver or the manufacturer?

Lastly can they fix the posbile damege that they do. They are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be sloved. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 precent of the time. Guys what about the 10 precent even thought it's a small prcent why not try to make it the safest car around.

Well we have come to the end of it all. Even thought it was a tought argument with our luck it is going the dorection of driverless with or without us. So with that said and done good luck to you all.

Score: 3