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"The Challenge of Exploring Venus" is a passage about how Venus is the twin of earth. The second planet from the sun but yet the most hottest one of all.The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents becuase it shows us that Venus is important even though its a dangerous place.

The author's idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, because Venus is referred to as our Earth's twin. In paragraph 2 it states "Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too." Thus saying that we should learn more about this planet and how Venus functions. It states "Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel." This quote demonstrates how Venus can be a place we live on which the author meant by worthy pursuit.

Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present according to the author. In paragraph 3 it says "On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet." This means that our "twin" planet, Venus is way hotter than what we are used too. When the author suggests despite the dangers that means that even though Venus looks like its impossible for man kind to live there is a way and we have to not be worried.

The reason why the author suggest these things is becuase Venus has similar features to Earth. In paragraph 4 "The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. This goes to show that Venus isn't that far away from dangerous. Studying Venus can't be so hard. In paragraph 7 it states "Solar power would be plentiful, and radation would not exceed Earth levels." This is showing us that we can learn more about Venus as in some parts does not succeed Earth in like air pressure although it is close.

To wrap this up, the journey to study Venus as the author suggests will be hard, but its the way you got there. Life is not for eternity we have to grow and push the limits. We can not be scared of dangers but improve on them so when we fall, we get back up and build up till the peek of the sky and pass any limts that stop us even if it's Venus thats what the author suggests in this passage.

Score: 4