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I personally think that there shouldnt be a facial expression reader if some one isnt genuinly smiling ok thats them. Its just to personal an i dont want to be monitored. The paragraghs states evidence that it might inprove certain things such as gaging when a person is bored or getting cofused i think that is graet an could help the world. My personal feelings differ thou we shoud strive to understand eachother more with out technology. Face it almost every human can tell how someone feels just by looking at there facial expression so why do we need computers to monitor or faces as we do activities. I think people wont approve of being monitored also . Emotions are not to be caculated anyway so i think we should not use this technology. The article states that i could help the student in the long run but maybe teachers should try harder to prepare the future of this world. Also lets say the machine malfunctions an we get a wrong reading an someone is forced to do extra classes an have someone help him because the monitor read him as confused. This is a great technological discovery but i dont think it shoud be part of the school system. Iam against using it in any educatinal faciliy. My conclusion is that we shouldnt use it.

Score: 3