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In the story of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus,". The author is planning to move people to the planet. If people where to live there it is going to be to hot. In some

people often referred to as Earth`s "twin," that Venus is the closest planet to Earth in the terms of the density and the size is occasionally the closest in the distance too. When Earth, Venus, and Mars, are the other planetary neighbor, that orbit around the sun at differnt kinds of speeds. Venus is also sometimes called the"Evening Star,".

With how thick the atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets over the planet of Venus. Some other challenings are the clouds of the highly corrosive sulfuric acid on Venus`s atmosphere. Also on the planet`s surface, the temps are also averaged over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, it has a atmosperic pressure that is about 90 times greater than what we have expected on our own planet. This planet also has volcanoes, and has a verity of earthquakes.

The NASA uses mechanical computers to study with about Venus. All of these devices where first envisioned in the 1800`s. It also played an important role in the 1940`s while World War 2 was going on.

On our travles on Earth is beyond should not be limited by all of the dangers and the douts but should be expanded to meet all the very edges of imagination and the innovation.

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