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In the story, The Challenge of Exploring Venus, the author suggests that Vensus would be a place where people could live in. Despite the dangers and conditions

that Vensus has showed the author suggests that Vensus could be a potential new plant to live in.

Vensus could be an option for people to live in. But Vensus has its drawbacks and conditions. The planet's suface temperatues are over 800 degrees fahrenheit and it's atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than on earth. Those condtions would make it inhabitable for the people on earth. Vensus is also the hottest surface temperature in solar system. Vensus is coverd with erupting valcanoes, and frequent lighting strikes.

Vensus is an option for people to live there because there was life on Vensus. The planet has some familar features towards Earth. It had a surface of rocky sediments, valleys, mountains, and creaters. Vensus is also the nearest planet towards earth which makes an option for us.

Vensus is an option for the people to live on if our planet becomes inhospitable. It would be the closest planet

towards us and it would make it easier to travel there. But Vensus has it setbacks and extreme conditons for people to live there. The author supports the idea of living vensus even with it drawbacks.

Score: 2