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So today, my friends and I are going to meet up about joining the UNRRA. I hope they say yes (which i'm pretty sure they are going to).

"Hey, Luke," says Mort and Jake.

They say,"Uh, we have something to tell you. We aren't joining the UNRRA."

I say,"What? How come you don't want to join the UNRRA?"

Jake says,"Well, I'm sort of afraid of oceans or lands of water."

"No need to worry about that," I say,"You would be distracted by all the amazing places we get to see such as how I got to see Crete and I got to see the Panama Canal."

"Oh really?" says Jake,"I've never knew that, thanks for telling me. I might join the UNRRA, now.

"Would't you be on the ship all the time? I want to have some sort of fun while i'm on the ship," says Mort.

I say,"No need to worry about that, Mort. We do a lot of things to past time on the boat."

Mort says,"Really? What do you guys do?"

I say,"Well, there's Table-Tennis, Fencing, Boxing, Reading, Whittiling, and games to pass up the time."

"Oh, that's all I wanted to know," Mort says.

I say,"Now, are all of you convinced to join the UNRRA?"

Both Mort and Jake say,"oh, yes we are!"

So, as you can see, convincing friends to do something can be hard at times. Sometimes, you just have to have the facts to come with you. I'm very glad I signed up for the UNRRA in the past because is I didnt, I problaby wouldn't have been able to convince them to come.

Score: 3