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Have you ever wonder how it would be like to live on another planet ? or if there was another planet that was like Earth? Well now you can. Scientist have benn trying to reaserch on Venus and how many years ago. Scientist belived that Venus was covered with large oceans and that it may have supported various forms of life. Why cant humans or other form of life live there, scientist have been studing venus for a long time. Venus average weather is up to 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the air pressure is 90 times greater than the one on earth. Our sister planet still has some features that resembled rocky sediments and features valleys, and moutains. Why studing venus is a important ideas. Studing Venus is important because if there is another planet that reasembles Earth so that it wont be overpopulated and see if there could one day be a way to live in another planet. In conclution it's a very smart choice that scientist keep studing earth and see if one day it could be a planet to live on.

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