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Venus, a planet that is the second closest to earth, and maybe second earth to be. The author suggests that the study of the planet Venus is worth pursuiting despite the dangers it with holds.

Venus is a planet that once had bodies of oceans and perhaps life living on it. The planet does contain high heat tempuratures as well as atmospheric pressure that is 90 times greater than what we experience here on earth. The conditions of Venusian geoloogy and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquales, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface(paragraph 3).

The solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. These are not easy conditions but tolerable and survivable for humans.

In conclusion, the planet Venus should be worth studying and finding discoveries that would make living on Venus easier. The dangers and doubts should ot keep us from striving at our best to succeed.

Score: 2