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You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. This would be a great opportunity to see diffrent parts if the world. I think for the most part it would be a great time and a good experens for people.

Oneof the reasons for this you would be able to see new shights and see new thangs. Now whould that be fun to see new thangs that you never seen before. Think about that for a second thank about all of the monuments great things that in your every day life you whould mot get to see. Luke said " it was a great adveture."

There is outher reasons to here is one more reason. You whould get be on sea and see the ocean every day. Now you tell me whould that be nice just to wake up and see and smell the ocean. Luke said" he loved being on the ocean. Maybe if you were you whould get to see a whale on while on the ocean you know.

Here is one more reason to tie it all up animals you would get to take care of animals. Now i'll tell you this if I got to wake up to an animal happy to see me. Whould that make you happy. So in conclution whould you like this job cause I know Luke did.

So whould you agree whith me would you like this job. Or do you not it's all up to it's not my choice its your. If you want to know my apinon I whould take the job it sounds fun. It whould be fun.

Score: 3