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Venos is a planet so is a second

planet of the sun amateur is a person how do the challenge to stop in there from sun.While venus is simple to see from the distant but safe

vantage

point of Eart, it has prove a very challenging to examine

more closely venous it's danger

because

is some tines right around

the coner- in tthe space

terms-humans

have sent numerous on this cloud-draped

in the atmosphere

of almost 97% of carbon dioxide

blankets Venus.

On the planet suface temperatures

average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times grater

than waht we experience

on your own planet.

Astronome are fascinated

by

Venus becaus it may ell once

been have

the most Eart-like

planet

in you solar system.long ago Venus

was

probably

covered largely with ocenad and could have suported various forms of life just like Eart.

The value

of returning to Venus seems indisputable,but

what

are the options for making such a mission (NASA) has one particularly compelling

idea foor

sendings humans to study Venus. NASA

possible

solution to the hostile conditios an the surface of the Venus would allow scientist to float above tha fray.For tha (NASA)

the planet Venus has life

and they keep goin wiht the oinvestigation and they woork too on another

approaches to studying Venus.

For example, some simplified

electronics made of silicon carbide have

been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface

and have laasted of three weeks in such conditions.Another proyect is looking back to an

old technology called

mechanical computers.The good significate

is que hay otro futuro mas adelante because

the NASA is investigate the new world or new things for the future and the peopple quiere cosas nuevas para que dia a dia ellos vayan evaluando y poder aser mas de loo que estan asiendo y tener un mejor

futuro para los de la nueva actualidad por wue la nasa fue hecha para invertigar

a fondo las coas que estan pasando hoy en dia y las que vienen para el futuro.

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