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The Fatal Action Coding System is an invasion of privacy. Our schools staff and others don't need to know exactly how we feel, percent wise and everything. We have the right to feel whatever way we want. This is a very free country. If we want to be angry about something and not let anyone know we are sure allowed to do so. Although it could help teachers better understand their students and the way they could better their teaching methods it is still in our rights to keep our emotions to ourselves. i see both sides of it. i see how it could improve things but i also see how lots of people would protest it and fee invaded or violated. We already have the freedom of speech an freedom of religion, emotions too. With most students being minors it would be up to their parents if they would want their childrens emotions to be able to be read or not, but then the kids might grow to resent their parents for that exact reason lots of kids grow up hating their parents for reaosons like their parents always invading their privacy and not letting them live their own life.

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