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In the story "Unmasking the Face on Mars," the face on Mars could be a natrual landform of a very new volcano or it could be the surface of Mars rising up. If its not that it could be just markings from when a volcano on mars had went off and when it had finished erupting the markings from the volcano could of just still been there. There are many reasons why this could possibly be a landform. For example it could be like they said "a huge rock formation." Like on Earth the face on Mars could probably be a lava dome because if your look at the third picture at the very top it looks like it has cracks from either a river flow or it could be cracks from a lava dome. It could also just be the forming of a new area around there. So in conclusion to the paragraph, I can tell you that we may never know if this is a land formation like we have on Earth of if its really a alien monument, but im sure that it is most likely a landform because we could possibly have a mesa like this on Earth.

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