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Have you ever been curious to visit any other planet than Earth? Have you ever actually took your time out of your day to think about it? What If I were to tell you that it could be become true but in order to know how you have to read my story.

The author is saying if Us as humans can be sure Venus is for sure safe itll be game changing and claming its worth figuring out because a number of new material and items. As us humans alll know earth Is our home but cant forever be our home and as the author has said "The thought of having humans at another planet is a scary thought but it could forsure work if having studies correct.

The more we know about the planets around us the more safier well feel knowing we have options If anything were to ever happen to planet earth. Us humuns figuring out Mars had water on it made everybody curious and want to go there just inmagine Venus. Yes it is the hottest planet but if we can cool the surface down and do something to make the weather there a little more cooler than who knows what could happen.

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