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Venus know as the sister of earth. Sometimes called the "evening star" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky astoronomers are fascinated by venus becaue it may well once have been the most earth-like plaent in our solar system. Venus has the a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even more callenging are the clouds are highly corrosive sulfric acid in venus's atmosphere. This nickname is misleading since venus is actually a planet. Venus is very close to earth but there atmospheres are very diiferent. Earth can handle life but venus can not.

Earth, Venus and Mars, is our other planetary neighbor, but

they orbit

the sun at the different speed. Venus surface temperature average is over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the stmospheric temperature is 90 times greayer than planet earth.Earth, Mars and venus all three planets have diiferent speed to orbit the sun these diiferences mean

that soemtimes earth is closer to mars and other times to venus. No spacecraft can survive after landing on venus more than few hours. Reasearch says long ago, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth. But today venus still has some featured that are anologous to those on earth. This information from the article shows how venus still have life on it very similar to earth. Even though venus is full of volcanoes it can still support life.

NASA is working on other apporaches to studying venus. some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the choas of venus's surface and have tested for three weeks in such conditions. to th conclusion o this article there are still researching about venus. however is it really similar to earth and mercury. mercury is more closer to the sun but venus have a high surface temperature but stills holds some life on it.

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