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Have you guys ever heard of Sergey Brin? Sergey imagines a time in the future when

no one will buy cars, because we wont need them anymore. Sergey envisions a future with a new way of transportiation system. The car Sergey is working on will be pretty cool, because it doesnt take as much fuel as our taxis today do. This will be a good way to drive when your tired.

I think we should get these car, because

it will stop alot of crashs. Sergey should just make them. They should look the way they do in movies. The google perject that Sergey is coming up with will be cool for the world to see. Maybe it will help us stop the drunk driving.

To me this google project is something the world has been waiting on and we can really use. I hope we get to use these driveless cars. For everyones safety. I hope Sergey really does this project. Its going make it easyer on everyone.

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