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Emotions are complex and can be confusing. Using computer software to determine how someone is feeling is an extremely valuable resource. A computer being able to change a learning experience to more satasfy a student woud be valuable.

School is not liked by most stidents but this software could help change that.

"then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor (paragraph 6)." This implies that it will modify the lesson to better involve and satasfy the student that is learning and doing work. A student that doesnt hate learning and doing work is more likely to work harder and be more successful.

School is supposed to teach students and give them good habits. This software could help give students a good working habit. If an entire generation gets a good work habit then when that generation becomes adults that could cause great leaps forward in all fields of work and study.

Score: 2