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The author suggest that studying Venus is worthy persuit despite

the dangerous it presents, He refers to that because "noting" Venus is one of the most brightest point light in the sky, and one of the planet's of our system solar, with the most "highier" or "hottest" surface of the intere system, with 800 degrees pharenheit, even though Mercury is closer to our sun, and is not closer

to Venu's temperature.

The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.

These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth;

such an evironment

would crush even a Submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our Oceans

and would liquefy many metals.

Venus

is complicated to study becase has a lot of impediments, Venusian geology and whether present additional impediments like erupting Volcanoes,powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.

That make Venus complicated to study, the conditions, whether,temperatures, and preasure is hard to study his surface.

Even the light can't penetrate the dense atmotphere, and

the mores importantly, reseachers cannot take samples of rock,gas, or anything else, from a distance.

But NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus, Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were the first ebvisioned in the 1800s and palyed an important role in the 1940s during Word War ll [ 1642 ] WWll.

This project look hopefull, maybe they can study Venus on that way.

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