Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
the author suggest that studying

venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because he believes venus has value. also our curiosity will lead us somewhere. he believe us traveling should not be limited of the danger or doubts.

the danger will expand our curiosty of the world and beyond i. the author gives many and good a things to support his claims. He wants people to explore expand the imagination and curiosty by travelung and studying.

The author says in paragraph 8 "venus has value not only because the insight o be gained on the planet itself" the author is saying that there are many opportunites we have from studying venus he says how it could inspire our curiosty. paragraaph 8 "human curiosty will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors". He's bassically saying how us studying venus can inspire us to find new things and explre many things our human curiosty can make studying venus more worthy of doing it he wants us to get inspired and find many intimidating endeavors. The Author says how we shouldn't let our travel on earth and beyond be limited because of the dangrous posibilites. The author wants us to keep studing and exploring he wants us to expand or imagination and innovation to the edge. paragraph 8

in conclusion the author wants us to study venus and other places not just earth to expand our imagination. the author wants us to expand our curiosty to new things he wants us to travel and see a lot of things on earth and beyond. I believe we should study on venus and other things. i think is worthy for us to explore. We shouldnt let anger and doubt hold us back from explring and see new things in life and outside of our home. the danger will only get us more curios and will want to expand our imagination and curiosty from it.

Score: 2