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In my opinion there many positive and negatives about using driverless cars. Driverless cars can even be very safe and very dangerouds in the matter of seconds. Personally I dislike the idea of making these cars, because i think i would help on ocassions but could really hurt someone . But there is one thing I am worried about manufacturing these cars. Since the car is practically taking over what if the driver falls asleep and dosen't wake up when the have to do something on their own, like going around a work zone.

In 2013, BMW announced the "Traffic Jam", and i think it is a good idea about how the car can announce when the driver need to take over and that the car can practically be on its own to do most things. But also on the other hand if you did have a car drive and it is not like a car has a human brain and can think when a animal runs past on a dark street. Even the fact that BMW is trying to put in "in-car entertainment". Because if they do that the driver has another reason to not pay attention to the road.

I am for the few states that are making even test driving these cars illegal because the car are not reliable enough to have the cars on the road. Tesla is even trying to release a car that will be driverless 90 nprecent of the time in 2016. Which in my opinion is a terrible idea because they are making it so when you drive you pretty much have no control over your car. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan are planning to even make a car in 2020 that drives itself. I think it is unbelieveable that manufactures want to make make a car completely driverless and let the accidents and deaths depend on the driver and not the automakers.

In conclusion I dislike the ideas of making cars that can be almost driverless and even consider making a car in 2020 so you do not have to drive at all and just let the car drive for you. Hopefully someone will aslo see that this is something we shouldn't be doing and try to correct it before it is to late to correct it.

Score: 4