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I am full on for driverless cars because it would be a benefit to our world.In the passage it lists many details about how driverless cars would and can

function.Today Google has modified a Toyota Prius and it uses position estimating sensors on the left rear wheel,a rotating sensor on the roof,video camera on the rearview mirror,four automotive radar sensrs,a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor.The combinatioin of all of this technology being modified to cars is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human being at the wheel of the car.

Having Driverless cars could benefit us tremendously and keep us safe at the same time.They already have cars that can detect and respond to the danger of out of control skids or rollovers.With this kind of tech it can basically reduce most accidents.Driverless cars have sensors that can apply brakes on individual wheels ad reduce power from the engine,allowing a better outcome and can control more than a human being could manage.With just a little bit of improvements done to Driverless cars the sensors, computer hardware, and software,driving would be safer and could also lead cars to handle more and more driving tasks on their own.

Sebastion Thrun founder of the Google Car project said "There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting.The sensors weren't there, the computers weren't there and mapping wasn't there.Radar was on a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars.It wasn't something you could buy at Radio Shack" Let alone companies are striving to perfect the best Driverless car there can be.In 2013,BMW had announced their development of the "Traffic Jam Assistant". The car they created can handle driving functions at speed up to 25 mph.The wheel of the car has touch sensors that make sure that the driver is handling the wheel.Today cars can steer,accelerate, and brake themselves so why not make it so we humans have to do a thing.

Options are being considered like having flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays.While the Driver watches the road the car can watch the driver. Dr.Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver said,"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way."In some states like California,Nevada,Florida, and the District of Columbia said to had led the country in limiting some use of semi-autonomous cars,some manufacturers believe that if more states soon follow

cars can be proved more reliably safe.

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company names Tesla has said to projected a 2016 release for a car to be capable of driving on its own meaning on autopilot 90 percent of the time.Cars like Merceded Benz,Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars created that can be able to drive themselves by year 2020.Soon we can start going out and not have to drive as much and enjoy ourselves more.With Driverless cars and technology getting us to point A and point B all in just a matter of years will be a piece of cake.With technology moving at a good rate Driverless cars will be the future.

Score: 4