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The worthly of studying Venus pursuit despite the danger it presents. studing the Venus comes in a whole bunch of pros and cons.

One of the good things are they get to explore what they have always wanted. They get to fingure out a awhole other life on a different planet. And because if you do study it and really get to go, then youll be maybe the first few people to go in a long time." Humans nimerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.Each pervious mission was unmanned, and for good reasons, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours." So if more people learn about Venus and want to go up to Venus then we would have more people surviving it and having more spaceships touching Venus and maybe a life

up their.

That is why i think more people should study the planet Venus even though it might have some ups and downs, but at the end of the day more people would want to get involved with the space things and we would have more people traveling up their learning all sorts or new things and bringing it back to the earth.

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