Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The author supports the claim very well by incdicating the ways we could battle the cilmate and the other problems such as the ground conditions and the pressure. He or She defends how they feel about it using good information and explains it to the best of their ability.

Venus is a hard planet to view or study because of the heat and the autosphere around it. It would take a lot of planning and work to go to vist and study Venus for a certain amount of time. Luckly this author shows great ways and good reasons to why we should take the chance and plan towards the idea to at least study Venus. The author does list the reasons why it is really hard to visit but he or she does a good way by doing that to list the reasons as to how we could beat them all as so here.

The ways we can survive and reasons to why we should go to venus are a given, it is quite known to be the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. It has valleys, mountains, and craters. Yes the hot temp and the hostle conditions on the surface keeps us from touching down on venus there are many ways to beat that. The author says NASA could make a "blimp-like vechicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roliing Venusian landscape" thats a good way to deal with the landscape problem. "Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed earth levels." For the hot tempatures that venus has the solar power would be able to power some sort of AC unit in the blimp. NASA has also made machanical parts for machines and ships that can be heat resistant and pressure resistant for the trip to Venus.

In conclusion to the trip and how hard it would be to make all these requirements. Making it to venus is something we must plan hard to do. Studying Venus might give us information we might have never knew. We could possibly find ways to actually get a man down there even through the hot tempature and harsh conditions. One day we will finally get to Venus and then study and work on finding new features and information. This is why we need to take the risks and try for a trip to Venus.

Score: 4