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I think The challenge of Exploring venus is super wrong and i disagree with the author claims there are so many reason why this is a bad. One of many reason i have that, going to venus is super wrongand that going to venus is going to cost alot of money. In then text it talk about how venus is the second planet to our sun i really dont think thats a good claim because the sun is super hot and venus is located where the sun hits the most with its heat waves and the heat that sun provides is not safe for any human.

I disagree with the author because of his claims he makes he dosent make it sound too safe or a thing we should be reserching and putting time in, in the passage he states that humans have sent nuerous spacecrafts to land on the cloud draped world. Each of the spacecraft the have sent out to that world has only survived the landing for more then a few hours and that tells me that if we ever sent out a human out there in that with those conditions, if a metal car cant even last one hour how is a human going to surive out there.

Another reason is that if we ever put a human up there, theres no way they could live and make it because in the text it states that the atmosphere is made of nine sevent percent carbon dioxide and that on venus the suface the tempertures average over 800 degrees fehrenheit.

Nasa has one idea that i think could go very wrong why do i think is because nasa wants to send humans up to venus and try a car that floats and they are going to use jet engines to make it float and make it solar powerd. I really dont think thats a good idea because what is the jet engines going to take to fly and start i dont think using the sun can start up a jet engine.

If they mange to do it there comnaction are going to be bad becasue in the text it said that the world venus its really cloundy and bad to even see and they want to use old things from the 1940s to talk to each other overall i just that reserching ways to go to venus is a bad idea and that the author makes bad claims to support his dream.

Score: 3