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There are many ways and oppinions that this may be put in but I say that this is valuable. This is valuable because if you were taking a drama class you could understand the real meaning of anothers feelings and become a more proffesional actor if you were to persue that career."Constantin, a renowned drama coach, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage." This device would be used as an educatonal purpose as one of it's uses but it can be used for other thing's aswell. You can also use it during a surgery.

For instance, if you were performing surgery on a person and he/ she decides to all of a sudden show sighns of pain through the device they can quickly give another dose of pain medicine and more gas to make the patient go back to sleep.

Again there are many uses for this device and I agree that it should read student's emotional expressions because it would be benefitial and others would be of the understanding of one anothers feelings. This valuable information can also help students if one is feeling sad then a counselor can help. This may even save lives in the future, such as if someone is very suspicous the technology can read there emotional state and may even predict what they coulve done in the future to hurt somebody. This could even detect wther a person is on alchohol or under the influence of drugs.

This new technology is down right phenominal and I hope this proceeds to be a succesful type of technology for the future of humanity.

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