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These cars are not dependable for they can not be trusted on their own to do what they are made to do. Even though machines and electronics have helped us through many years and have advanced throughout the years, not all electronics are compatible. They are not always able to do what they are made to do.. They have flaws, bugs, and error problems. Even though drivers theirselves have these problems, they are capable of fixing the problem quite quickly and are able to learn from their mistakes. Machines have to updated, fixed, programmed certainly, and on a regular maintanence. Even though this product could be reliable in many different ways, there are also consequences in this product. What if the car doesn't stop when it's suppose to? Or what if the car's way of use doesn't get around to the people? If you are going to want every person owning anything that is sold, you have to study it more and evaluate the options available. Should you buy it, or not?

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