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Have you ever thought of living onanother planet ? well scientists are studying venus. venus is earths twin. It states that "longe ago , venus was probaly covered with oceans and could have supported various forms of life." This means that venus had similar features of eath long ago. this one reason why we should study venus.

Another reason is that veanus has a similar surface. It states that " the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar featuers such as valleys, mountains, and craters." This means that the author is trying to study venus because it has familiar features. NASA are working on different ways to study venus. It states that " some simlified electronics made electronics ...and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions." this means they are testing electronics to with stand venus's condictions. If electronics could gather the information for us then thiers no reason for us to not study venus. this is why studying venus is a worthy pusuit despite the dangers it presents.

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