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Venus is often referred to as "Earth's twin". It is the most relatable planet in our solar system to earth. It is around the same size and has almost the same density. Venus has the hottest surface of any planet in the solar system which makes it hard for the people at NASA to study it. Many years ago venus wasn't extremly hot and had many oceans which could of allowed more life to live there.

Over a decade ago NASA sent a a rocket to venus. After it being to on and them only being able to be there for a few hours they came back. NASA haven't tried to send anything thing else up to venus because they would only be able to be there for a couple hours. The surface is so hot they might not even be able to be there for that long.

NASA is thinking about sending a rocket to venus which then they would have a vehichle flow above the planet to try to study more about it. They would be around 30 miles above venus studying to micrscopes or othe devices which let them see the planet easier. With them being 30 miles above the surfave it would still be extremly hot at 170 degrees Fahrenheit.

NASA is also trying to find other way to study venus. For example they are making electronics made of silicon carbide and test them to see if it can hangle the heat and other challenges it might face. In the article the author explains that the electronics they need to study venus would be nothing like the computers people use here on earth. Studying venus is really hard and figuring out the right way to do it is the hardest part.

In conclusion we are trying to figure out how to study venus. We are coming up with multiple options that have to be perfect before we try. The author of the article gives many examples after every statment. He also gives facts which makes the reads believe what he is saying. For everything he says he has an explanation for.

Score: 3