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Imagine if you went to Mars, and you saw a face shaped like a Egyptian Pharaoh? You saw the same shape in Cydonia, and you thought it was the same monument? You thought it was a real human face? What if I came to the end of it, saying it's just a natural landform. NASA reveiled the picture, it sure grabbed the publics attention, What if all that was just a lie to get money off of people that found that picture interesting. They could have edited who knows.

On April 5, 1998, when a team flew over to Cydonia, for the first time a few men named Michael Malin and his team snapped a few pictures. It was sharper than the original Viking photos. When the picture was reveiled, it was just a natural landform. After all that their was not a monument with an alien on it (Unmasking the Face on Mars 1, 2, 3, 7).

The "face" you see in the picture is just a plain landform. The group went back again, it was not easy to target Cydonia again. When they finally found it, they took the pictues where you could see closer than you thought to see if there were pyramids, airplanes, or small shacks. They came upon the picture there were butte or mesa, and natutal landforms. That reminded them, that was a dome of lava, that looks like a form of a mesa that's deforming and looks the same height as the Face on Mars. This comes to the end that it's just a natural landform. ( Unmasking the Face on Mars 8,9,10,11,12).

Score: 2