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Exploring Venus is one thing poeple in NASA want to do, becasue it close to our plant.Venus was once the closest plant to be Earth.We know that if we study more about Venus and learn more about it we can make it like Earth. Just thinking that we can live in different plants and learning more about outerspace.

If we can live in different plants we can fix our plant as will but one mistake and we can say goodbye to our plant and Venus.

So before anything we should learn more send drons than if we can somehow fix the atmosphere we can do live in Venus.No matter what happens if we do failed we can try again and find a better plan. Scientist and other people say they know how old our plant are but who real know. Our plant can be close to the end and we don't know it. We should find other plants to live just in case if we do lose our plant.

No matter what other people think we should explor Venus. We don't know what things could happend or what discoving we can find. The thoughs of Venus and other plants are endless. What if we can life in outerspace. Only we can find out what things wait for us.

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