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Soon the world may be using driverless cars. This means no more human use of driving. Driverless cars should not be used because driver would get bored waiting for their turn to drive, driverless cars may become safety hazards, and human skills are still required.

First, driverless cars are not the best idea because drivers will get bored waiting for their turn to drive. As said in paragragh eight, "Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?" Many kids around the world are waiting to get their license and if you make cars driverless it takes away the opportunity of some kids wanting to be able to drive their own car. Also drivers that already have their license may love driving and then there is not point in driving if you do no have to do any of the work.

Secondly, the cars may become safety hazards. In paragraph nine it says "Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers." If the human drivers are not fully alert to due waiting too long for their opportunity to drive, some may fall asleep or just lose complete focus. Maybe the cars programming fails, then what if the car can not stop itself, pedestrians and others may be killed or injured.

Lastly, human skills are still required, so why not let the human driver have complete cotrol at all times. BMW says "The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 miles per hour, but special touch sensors make sure the keeps hold of the wheel." If the car still requires human assistance, then why are they calling them "Driverless Cars." Humans are more effective than computers when it comes to driving.

In conclusion,driverless cars should not even be considered available to the public. Driverless cars should not be used because driver would get bored waiting for their turn to drive, driverless cars may become safety hazards, and human skills are still required. Technolgy fails all the time and who can guarantee it will not fail this time.

Score: 4