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I believe that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers because its the closet planet to the Earth . NASA is thinking about sending human to study Venus . Wouldn't it be fun to go visit Venus ? Think about all the stuff you coud learn about like how warm it is , Whats there , and what made people start calling it

" Earth's twin ."

Because Venus is near the sun its very hot there . The temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit , and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then Earth . In Paragraph 3 it states " These conditions are far more extreme than anything human encounter on Earth ; such as environment would crush anything a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our pceans an would liquefy any metals . "

Venus is referred to as Earh's twin because its the closest planet to Earth in density , distance , and szie . Since , Venus is around the corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world . An spaceship hasn't touched down on Venus o more than three decades .

See learning about Venus is very worthy despite the dangers . Its always great to learn about another planet . Especially the ones near us .

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