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A New Place

In the article "The Challenge of exploring Venus" the author talk about the distance between the Earth and Venus. Also he wrote thing refering to the tempeture on Venus and comparing both temperatures Earth and Venus. And then he talk about how the NASA is working to study Venus.

Venus or sometimes called the "Evening Star" is considerate a planet. Venus is the planet closer to Earth, but also Mars is another neighbor from the Earth planet. "These differences in speed mean that somethimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus" said the author. This is one of the reasons why it may be a new place for humans live.

The temperature is appropriate for humans. In the article the author show us the planet's surface temperature, it has an average over 800 drees Fahrenheit. He also indicate that the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater, "It is more than what we experience on our own planet" he said. He discover that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in the solar system. In other words Venus has become a great option to life.

"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus" he said. Personal who work for the NASA and has the mission to study and understand Venus have obtain amazing results. One of the results is that the conditions are not easy, but survivable for humans. Machines contribute to their knowledge of Venus, "those machines make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all". This study of Venus has comverted on a challenge for humans who have the curiosity to know more about this planet.

The author expres the idea very well, because he show arguments from all the contained. He always have a point to talk about, and always have an argument to suppot it.

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