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The Viking one spacecraft has just sent pictures to NASA from what appears to be a face on mars. I personally believe that this is just some natural landform on mars made from weathering. It did look good but our sensation was short lived. Other scientists and I believe it was just a Martion mesa, they are common around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like and Egyptian Pharaoh.

A few days after we found this formation Nasa unveiled the image for others to see. We put a caption that noted it was a huge rock formation. It resembled a human head, formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. In the America West there are landforms like the face and of the same size. The face reminds Garvin of the Middle Butte in the Snake river Plain of Idaho.

On April 5, 1998, when Mars GLobal Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on JPL website, revealing a natural landform. There was nor alien monument after all.

What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. Landforms around the American West. It reminds Garvin most of the Middle butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That's a lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. There is no aliens on Mars.

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