Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The reason you should join Seagoing Cowboy Program because they get to travel around the seven sea on a boat Luke thinks it's fun because he is having the time if his lifetime, and he likes it because he work at a gas station and a grocery store

If Luke want to go to a place thats far a way then he can pick his boat or a plane. A plane Luke would have to pay the passport but. If he goes on his boat he would just have t pay for the gas. On a plane it will be shorter however on a boat it will be longer to get on a plane.

Luke's like the water so going on a boat will be good for him. He also like the sound the waves make when they go by and the rocking noise the boat make on the water. He can make knew friends on the way there.

Score: 2