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In "the challenge of exploring venus." the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present by telling the good thing about challengeing the venus.

In the beggining, the author introduce about venus and distance. the author said it the evening star. Also claim that Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. There difference in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to mars other time venus. Because venus is sometime rigth around the corner- in spacr terms- human have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. He explain about how trouble is wothout venus and telling about venus is and works.

second of all, he claim that numerous factors contribute to venus is reputation as a challenging planet for human to study, despite its proximity to us. This mean venus is extremely imporant for the planet. How venus imporant.

Next, author supprt that if the planet is inhospitable, why are scientics even discussing further visits to its surface? if astronomoer are fascinated by venus because it may well onece have been the most earth-like planet in the solar system. At this point the author is supporting that the venus is the most main point then any other. He want poeple to learn or fix the imporant want first. Author explain about how the airplane won't fly high with out air and venus. He though venus is very important.

Then, scientists seek to conduct a thorought mission to undertand venus would need to get up close and personal despite that risk. Author though they should thing this as a challenging. NASA is starting to study venus. Using computer would help reserch on planet and pressure, heat, and other forces about mechical. And the research learned about the imporant of venus challenging.

In conclusion, the author want people to research and study about the venus to overcome on what they did. He claim many situation and reason about how important to study about the venus. Author assume venus would help them learn about what they working on. According to paragraph 1, he mention that

"venus is like a evening star." He saids that hungry to about challenging the venus not also help the plane, also help them from danger and expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.

Score: 3