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I am with the developement of computer-driven cars. I am with it because it uses half the fuel we use today,more safe for the drivers and passengers, and more fun for you while driving.

I am with the cumputer-driven cars because it uses half the fuel we use now for cars. This is good because then it would be less pollution and we wont have to worry about running out of fuel so quick. In the text it says "The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's

taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus." Thats good because we'll have less fuel needed.

Also why im with the development of computer-driven cars is because, its more safe for drivers and passengers. That is also good becasue then it will be less wrecks that will happen and more lives we have not dying over a car wreck.The text says "Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without crash." Thats good because they will be driving more and not have to worry about crashing and that will keep the people safe.

Lastly why i am with the development of computer-driven cars is because it'll be more fun.This is because you can text and do other things while the car is driving its self. The it says the car will alert you when the car needs human skills. So until then you could be texting, on the phone, and doing other things without worried about getting into a wreck. Also its more fun is because now you can talk more to your friends and do oyher things instead of keeping your eyes on the road the whole time not doing nothing.

The reasons why im with the computer-driven cars is because, it uses less fuel, its more safe, and its more fun. I think that the computer-driven cars will be a great success and alot of fun for everyone.

Score: 3