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i believe that its actually okay to use this tecnology, because why not i mean to me it seem like all that its doing is scanning your face no harm done to you or anything.Most people would probaly belive that this device could seem

dangerous if they dont add enough details about it, but im getting off task from the topic of this essay so yeah. Yeah im for using this tecnology in school because the teacher could be able to tell

if just by looking at a computer to see if the class is instrested in the matarial the teacher is teaching. That way they will be able to change their plan of attack while trying to teach the class how to do the work. and there is just so many benifits with this teconolgy, teairler the artical said tha they could even be use to tell if someone like a major celebrity or politician is lying so just imagaing how far this teconolgy could go just by scanning you face to see how your feeling or even just to see if your lying all just from your faical expressions.

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