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The author shows us the many benifical factors of going to Venus. His claim is very strong of leaning towards going to Venus he belives that there is more reward than risk but is that true? He even tells us how researches are trying to find a way are machines could function and last a long time on Venus.

The author is very strong on his belives on how we should try and vist Venu. Yes, there is a lot of rewared if we can going to a new planet maybe finding new life or answers to sincest questions they have had for years. The problem is that the tempture on venus 30 miles above the groud where they would be is still 170 degeres. They would have to have a space craft able to obtain that tempture and not be faced and still let the them stay at a confertable temputure.

In connclusion the other author is very strong on his views and he has some great points but the big question i have is is it woth possiblby lossing lives and millions of dallors for the huge chance of nothing. Is it worth all the man hours all the time and hardship for the huge chance of it all being for nothing. That is the final question im sitting on. Yes, We could make create great advancements in since and in many other catogries it could maybe answer the question of how the world got here there are so many possiblities but also the danting reality that most likely the mission will fail and they would be losing money and people would lose loved ones.

Score: 2