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The use of technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom in my opinion isn't valuable at all. For one we can souly rely on a machine for recognize and scan our moods or emotions. Yes, technolog has come a long way in the years but, its not all 100% accuret. A human can smile that doesn't mean thier happy. Now i'm not saying that this idea isn't a good one but, theres nothing in the world that can tell how a humans feels all the time.

Dr. Huang's idea is a good idea don't get me worng but, at the same time the idea is kind of far fetched. Yes a computor that could make lessoms better when seeing that a student is bored, yes that would change alot but at the same time so much could go worng with this idea. A computer might mess up and shut down, or the computer still might not do anything to change a persons mind. If a person finds something boring you can't rely on a computer to fix that.

The article say it it's self, the computer will scan our emtotions by reading muscle movments within our faces. Now that won't be completly accuret, why

because alot of times our faces may make us seem like we're in one mood but at the same time we could be in a completly whole diffrent mood. Honestly this whole thing is a far fetched idea.

The idea of a computer reading our facial expressions to figure out our mood is cool or what not but at the same time we must think about all the factors that will be apart of this. Like for example, computers they break down all the time we can't stop that, sometimes they just get old and break down. Then what if a computer is old and starts malfunctioning the readings of the facial expressions and moods could be all off and worng. Antoher thing humans don't always show thier emotions, to some a person could seem mad on the outside but really that person is happy they just don't show it. There are so many parts that go in this idea that are good and bad but in my opinion this whole thing is a far fatched bad idea.

Score: 4