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One beleives,that limiting car usage can have a positive effect and we can gain

Advantages to this. Source 1 "In German Suburb, life goes on with out cars" (Rosenthal) and source 2 "Paris bans driving due to somg" (Duffer) what both these sources have in common is the fact that both authors talk about the advantages of L

i miting car usage. In Source 1 "German suburb,life goes on with out cars. "Vauban, Germany have given up their cars As a Result, 70

Percent of vauban's Families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here"

In this incident, Families do not own cars or have sold a car to move to Vauban Because most of the families and mothers dont feel as tense and feel happier it also help reduce air pollution.

"Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs where middle-class families from chicago to shanghai tend to make thier homes" Here Cars are the linchpin of suburbs where experts say, It is a huge impediement to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas. In source 2 "Paris Bans driving due to smog  "After days of near-record pollution, paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. In this incident, Paris enforced a Ban on cars so it can clear up the polluted air with somg in the city. "On Monday motorists with even-numberd license plates were orderd to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine (31$) the same would go for odd numberd plates. Here, Cars owners would be fined If they were found driving and not leaving thier cars at home in effort to reduce the Air pollution smog of the city. In essence I feel that If we continue this in diffrent countries our Air pollution Rates can go down in percentage and we woulden't need to worry about It anymore don't you?

Score: 2