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The author supports the idea of studying Venus despite the dangers. The text gives us some exaples of dangers. One of them are "the tempeture is 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 degrees greater than Earth's." The other examples is gives us is "can crush a submarine", "Venus has the hottest surface in our solar system", and is also says that humans can survive on Venus but the conditions are not easy. There hasn't been a single spaceship in three decades and it cannot be on Venus for more than a few hours. This is why NASA is working on a vehicle so the can hover above Venus. It can only hover above Venus for 30 miles or so. This is a stroggle for NASA because they cannot get close enogh to take sample. Some samples they want to take are" rock, gas, or anything else." This is why NASA is working on trying to get to Venus or it is also known as the "Evening Star." It is also Earth's planetary neighbor and it is also the second planet from the sun. In the text it says "in the late 1800's there was a something called mechanical computers." All of these examples are helping NASA trying some approaches to Venus. So, this is all the different reasons why the author supports the idea of getting to Venus. Even though there are many many different dangers of going to Venus the author still supports the idea of studying Venus.

Score: 2