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Why is riskly to examine Venus more closely? Venus is a planet but some time called as "Evening Star". Venus in the colest planet to Earth in our solar system. Every palnet in solar system are different and Venus is the unquie one. It's risy to study Venus colsely. NASA is planing to send humam to study Venus.

First, every palnet in solar system are different. Venus have some interesting fact like every palnet. Venus is also know as Earth's "tiwn" because they have colest denstiy and size. Venus is the second planet but the hotest planet in our solar system. The planet's surface is aroud 800 Fahrenheit. Also, the weather is dangerous like earthquakes and lighting. Scientist believed that Venus used to cover with ocean. Venus surface has valley and mountain.

Second, studying Venus closely is dangerous. The atomosphere of the Venus is 97 carbon dioxide. Venus is the hotest planet in solar system. The spacecraft can only survied only a few hour after landing. The enviroment is extremely dangerous. However, the author of "The Challenge of Exporing Venus" think sudying Venus is worthy.

Finally, NASA is planing to send human to study Venus. A lot of researcher are working on creating new machines. "Some simplified electronics made of silicon cabide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such counditions". Hopefully, human can get to Venus without problem. Sometime, human way too curious and forgot about the risk.

In conclusion, Venus is very unquie and value. There are some people who is willing to take a risk to study Venus. I think it's worth to study Venus. Every planet are dinfferent and also interesting.

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