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Venus, whats it made out of? What are the dangers? Why haven't we gotten so much information on it? There are lots of questions people have about Venus. "Evening Star" they call it. It's not really a star but it is very bright. Venus is the closest planet to Earth despite Mars. Venus is made of gas and the surface is 800 degress Fahrenheit,which makes it impossible for any spacecraft to survive on its surface. In paragraph 2, it states that humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on the planet, but can only last a few hours. It is worth trying again and again to try and get up to Venus and try to study more of it. Heres why.

Venus is a gas planet,right? The tempature on there is extreme but we have devices that can actually get close to the planet. In paragraph 7, it says that in the 1940's during World War II there were devices that could make calculations without using any electricity at all. They are mechanical computers that can possibly stand the heat near Venus. The modern day computers are powerful and very useful but they cannot stand a chance between the extreme heat on Venus. It would just melt.

Even if technology does not work, we still have humans. In paragraph 5,it states that they can in fact send humans to Venus. They can send scientists to float above the planet. They wouldn't be comfortable because they would still be in 170 degree tempature, but they can still with stand it. The author compares it to a jetplane that can hover across storms and extreme weather at a high altitude. The scientists would be miles away from the planet but they can still make observations while being far away.

Venus is a beatiful planet, but if you get too close to it you might just burn to a crisp. Thats why we have NASA and other wonderful reasources to study Venus.Tune in next time on, "The Challenge of Exploring Venus"!

Score: 3