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As a scientist at NASA, I think the face that was captured on Mars is just a natural landform and not something that was created by aliens. When Micahel Malin and his group of Mars Orbiter Camera snapped a photo ten times bigger and clearer than the original viking photos, People were excited and were watiting when the was image was first posted on JPL web site, it revealed.... a natural landform. Yes, there wasn´t any alien statue. It has nothing to do with aliens.

Even after that. People stilll believe that perhaps the real alien monument was hidden by a wind since it was winter in the Red Planet. So, mission controllers are preparing to look again for some real eveidence. They said that it was a real hard work since they don´t pass around that particular alien statue look alike very often.

As they keep looking, they finally take the picture they wanted to take but it was not a good quality. ¨As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,¨ explains Garvin. Guess what they found? but before that, he also says that if there are any objects or anything on the planet, they will be able to see it by zooming it. When they actually study about the photo that they have taken, there is no such things as alien monument or anything extraordinary. Garvins expressed his thougts, ¨It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho,¨ and added, ¨That´s a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on Mars.¨

So, I hope you understand my point now that you know NASA have studied Mars over and over for a lot and a lot period of times and still, there are no alien discovery. If there are ever any alien discovery or something

extraordinary that NASA have found on Mars, or say any planet. It is most likely that we will want to share it to the public about it. No, we wouldn´t want to keep it a secret because we wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.

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