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Have you ever woner what the Face on Mars really is? Some people say that it is a rock formation that resembles a human face. Some say that it was an alien artifact. I think that the Face is just some kind of rock formation. If the Face has anything to do with an alien, we would be as suprise and intrested as all you guys would be.

First of all, if the Face relate to some kind of alien things, why do you think we would keep it a secret? Imagine that it actually had to do something with alien and we told everyone. That would be a benefit for us because more people would be intested in NASA. It will make us get more money make good profits. We as a scientist would actually want to see some kind of alien artifact too but that is not what we are finding right now.

Second of all, the people who said we are hiding something don't even have any prove. Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, said that " We felt this was important to taxpayers". That shows that we are not hiding anything. We send a spacecraft twice after the first picture which was in 1976 with a better camar to really make sure what we say is true. We even show the would all the picture. The people who said we are hiding something have no idea what they are talking about.

In conclusion, I am telling you that the Face we saw on Mars was nothing but a rock formation. Don't believe in everything you hear because some of them do not have prove of what they are saying. To make sure it was what we think it was we send Mars Global Surveyor in April 5, 1998 and we send it again on April 8, 2001. If we find some things that have to do with alien, we will tell you guys. But for now that is not the case, so lets not think that the Face have something to do with aliens.

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