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First, I dont agree with the making of driverless cars,there are too many faults that can happen with this technology. I believe technology consumes too much of our lives already, now they're trying to take the freedom away of driving yourself. When all the problems with this subject are fixed and the driveless vehicle is proven safe , I still won't support it.

There are many well thought out reasons I have on which people should not buy these cars. First of all who feels comfortable with letting the car drive itself with all the homocides and extremist group bombings going on. I don't know about you, but I will not put my life in a driverless cars' hands. Also with more technology comes more hackers to get into the software, which is going to be my next point.

An hacker can get into credit cards , computers, drones, and even phones which have all types of security to stop this. So what makes you think a driverless car can't be hacked some hackers might even call it mediocre to even try to be honest. So you could be in this "driverless car" as they say with your family and what if it gets hacked? I know for a fact the company which you bought it from is not going to have a track on each and every cars software status, you could be driven somewhere by the hacker without anyone even noticing because you just let the car control where you go. Once again I won't be letting this car take my freedom of driving .

From my standpoint I will never suport this idea. In the future to come I know these cars will be finalized and glitches fixed. The world will be completely run by all technology. Then we will see that one of the cars had a problem causing multiple fatalities. Once more evidence comes that these cars aren't fit for the world's problems going on they will stop being manufactured. Proving that as humans we should take the responsibility of driving ourselves around as it was before the idea of driverless cars evn generated.

Score: 3