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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. However, some are not aware of the dangers of exploring Venus. It's so dangerous that NASA wouldn't dare send anyone to Venus with such harsh conditions.

The reason why exploring Venus is a dangerous thing to do is because of the fact that every spacecraft that was sent to Venus did not survive landing for more than a few hours, luckily for NASA, no one was in that spacecraft. I feel as if these spacecrafts didn't survive because of Venus' daily temperature, which is 800 degrees fahrenheit. Venus even has 97% of carbon dioxide in the air. If that weren't enough, Venus' environment is so Extreme, it could "crush a submarine accustomed to driving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals." All of this states why Venus is a dangerous planet to explore.

Venus has not been explored yet, and it probably never will due to it's conditions. No man can ever experience the harsh and unsafe environment of Venus. The conditions in Venus is not stable enough for humans to explore or survive on. The conditions are even tough for the spacecrafts to handle. This explains why we can't explore Venus anymore.

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