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The author suggest that study of Venus is a worthy pursuit despites the dangers it represents. Even if it is dangerous to go into the Venus and study, it is worth study. The author said that people sent spacecrafts to Venus. But unfortunately, they could get to study. But they do not and would not give up their work. So, author suggest studying Venus is worthy.

Studying Venus is worthy. In the article, the author mentioned how hard and how long people have been trying to reach Venus. The author explained that people have sent the numerous spacecrafts to Venus but spacecraft could not survived the landing more that few hours. "human have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more that a few hours." But knowing that even landing was hard to survived, people try to keep on trying.

Knowing the danger encourage people to keep on trying. The author support the idea by talking about how people have been trying to reach Venus. Also, how people do not give up, but keep on trying to reach the Venus.

Again the author supports the idea by saying how Astronomers were fascinate by the Venus. "Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system." We can see how it was and why it was important to study the Venus. The author also support his idea by talking about The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) was willing to send its people to study the Venus. "The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus." We can see in here how the author supports his idea again.

Also, the author supports his idea by talking about how people were willing to risk their life for studying the Venus. "Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks." The author well supports his idea by mentioning how people were willing to risk their lives. The author also talked about that the some think of the risks of studying Venus as challenges. Also, that many researchers working on innovations which would allpw their machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. "Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus." The author supports his idea by telling us hwo people and researchers were eager to study the Venus. The author also mention that NASA is working on approaches to study Venus. "NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus." The author supports his claim by saying how hard NASA work to study the Venus.

The author said studying Venus is worthy. The author supports his claim by talking and mentioning how people have been trying to reach the Venus. Also the author mentioned that even if how hard and dangerous it was to reach and study the Venus, people did not give up. The more they know how it was hard to study, the more it encourages people to study the Venus. So, the author supports his idea by mentioning all the things people did, and how they did not give up.

Score: 4