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Hi my name is Luke.Im going to tell you why you should join the seagoing cowboys.Here are the reasons why.Also dont forget to join.

Your probably asking yourself why should i join and the reason is that you can help many people who were affected by world war 2 and many other wars.You get to help people who have been injured or need help with something.It takes awhile to get to them,but its worth it.You help them get there animals back if they lost some.Give them food and water if they dont have some or if they barly have food or water.You also can meet up with different nations.I met up with 44 nations when I went.You take care of animals that got hurt or need help.Then give the animals some food and water to drink and eat.You do alot more,but you will have to figure them out.You can see places that youve never seen before like China.When your on your way to somewhere on the boat and your bored you can do things to make it go faster.You can do things like table tennis,fencing,boxing,reading,baseball,volleyball,cattle riding,Whittling,etc.Another thing you can do is when your on the boat you can see some places you have never herd or seen before.I went to Greece and saw many different things you wouldnt see where you live.While your there you have some time to spare so you can look around or go on rides or something.You can also tour some things like an excavated castle.Dont worry of getting hurt because around you you are always protected.Another thing not to worry about is the food you dont have to bring your own food they already have some for you.Once you done with the seagoing cowboys i think you will really see the world and what it is made of just like I did.

Those are the reasons I think you should join the seagoing cowboys.I hope you join.Also I hope I see you one day.You will be also rewared.

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