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The author of " The challenge of Exploring Venus" suggest that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author did not support the idea of that. The author gives information on how Venus is a dangerous place to got to, for humans, but not so much on why it is not dangerous and it being a worthy pursuit. As said in paragraph 1 " While Venus is simple to see from the distance but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely". The author gave information on why pursuiting Venus would be not worthy.

In paragraph 2 the author stated " Each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for mor than a few hours". That statements is supporting that Venus is not worthy of pursuiting, where the author does not support his claim. The author gave information on the dangers of Venus and not the good things that'll take place by visiting Venus. Also stated in paragraph 3 " These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth..." stated by the author. The author gave more information onto why pursuiting Venus is dangerous, the conditons on Venus is moe dangerous compared to the ones on earth. The author is not supporting his claim in that statement eitheir, he is opposing it.

My claim is the author is not supporting his caim onto why Venus is worthy of pursuiting, the author is saying why its not. " Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itslef, but

also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors". As stated by the author, the author is saying that trying to meet the challenge that Venus is presenting is dangerous. So in conclusion the author of " The Challenge of Exploring Venus" did not support his claim, that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.

Score: 2