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Twenty five years ago, when NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling Mars, taking pictures of landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, they found shadowy likeness of a human face. It was captured in the region of Red Planet called Cydonia.

NASA made the picture of the Face public, and the people believed that

the Face was bona fide evidence of life on Mars. The people said that NASA was hiding the fact with conspiracy theories. If NASA would've found lifes on Mars, they would've told the people. It will benefit NASA since that will make them the first to find life on Mars. It also says in paragraph five, "...Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilation on Mars."

On April 5, 1998 Mars Global Surveryor flew over Cydonia for the first time. Miichael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team took the picture of the Face ten times sharper than the orginal Viking photos. The people was disappointed with the result. The Face was nothing but just a natural landform.

Since not everyone was satisfied with the result, mission controllers prepared to look again. It was difficult since the region, where the Face was located at, was cloudy. Finally, on April 8, 2001 Mars Global Surveyor rolled the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view. They used camera's absolute maximum resolution to take the picture. In this image you can discern things three times bigger than the pixel size, so you can see any object on the Face. The result was no different. It was just a Martian equivalent of butte or mesa.

This is why the picture Viking 1 took isn't any evidence for life on Mars. NASA didn't hide anything from the people, or make up any theories. If you take a closer look at the Face located in Cydonia, you can tell it is nothing but just another Martian mesa, which is common in Cydonia.

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