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In the article Challenge of Expoloring Venus. the scienctist want to explore Venus despite the dangers.

Venus nickname is called the (Evening Star) because its one of the brightest points of the light in the night sky. humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on venus each previous mission was unmanned and for a good reason. Venus reputation as a challenge planet to study despite its proximity to us.

my claim is that Venus is a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. the more challenging are the clouds of high corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere on the planet surface temperature average around 800 degrees fahrenheit. and the pressure is about 90 times greater than we have expericence on are own planet.

Venus has value not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself. but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally endeavors.

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