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Do you want to be a seagoing cowboy? I would I think it would be fun.You get to see alot of beautiful places,and you can play games to pass time.Especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded.The cow boys played alot of games like volleyball and baseball,where the animals was being housed,table tennis,fencing,boxing and even reading.

First,the trips was an amazing opportunity for a small town boy.I had the side benefit of seeing china and Europe. Even some places I never heard about its so wonderful.When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle boat trip,they told me to just keep doing that for my service .By the time i was discharged in 1947,Then I had made nine trips,the most of any seagoing cowboy.It took about two weeks to cross the atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to china. Caring for the animals during the crossings kept me busy.

They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Last,but being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for me. It opened up the world to me,im grateful for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.

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