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In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" it talks about how technology could read the faces of peoples mood. Hearing that right now shows how much technology has advanced from how it used to be. A few years back we would have people specilize into reading peoples facial expressions, they would study them and tell what they where feeling. But now they are going to have computers come in and either put them out of work or help them out. Eithier way i think that computers should be used in classrooms.

Why FACS should be let into classrooms is because of how in paragraph six where it states that if a student is becoming bored or confused that the lesson woud be changed and modified like a regular human instructor. That reason alone made me agree that FACS should be allowed in classrooms because there are students out there who are either confusd or bored, but most teachers would not be able to tell if a student is feeling in any of those ways.For why is because they have many students and they woudnt se every one of there students faces to recgonize that they are confused. Also if a teacher is a bad mood they would just be mean and not care about the students. But a computer it would never have to deal with any of those things. A coumputer would always know what is going on with every student. It would always know what to do and always be more accurate

to a students level.

To conclude i would agree that FACS should be brought into classrooms. They could really do some good for students especially because im a student and i believe that it could help some one like me.

Score: 3