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Hello, my name is Luke Bomberger and I am a Seagoing Cowboy. Seagoing Cowboys are very fun to be! You should become one. Seagoing Cowboys are hired at first to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. After you master that then they have to start going over seas and traveling different places. This is what you do when you start to become a Seagoing Cowboy.

It is very hard to become a Seagoing Cowboy. They have to take care of a lot of different jobs. They have to travel all around the world. You must practice and practice to become very good at what they do. You have to learn to jump out of boats and sometimes you have to watch gard of the places the workmen stay. They also have to learn to swim. This is why you should become a Seagoing Cowboy because it will give you a lot of workout and you can get very very fit.

Becoming a Seagoing Cowbot is very fun. You make lots of new friends when you go to the trainy camps and things like that. I think that traning with all your friends is very fun to do. You get to be with them all the time and even stay with them in cabins. Theser are some other resons whe you should think about becoming a Seagoing Cowboy.

At first Seagoing Cowboys can be a very scary job. Sometimes you even have to fight people and make sure that you don't get hurt to. You have to learn not to be scared and just do your job. Sometimes there will be very tough times like if one of your friends die but you just have to get through it nad not let that make you stop trying. This is a coulple resons why you need yo become a Seagoing Cowboy because it will teach you to be not scared at time.

This is why you should become a Seagoing Cowboy. It is very fun most of the time but a times is can be very sad to. Seagoing Sowboys are so much fun. Do you think you become one?

Sincerly,

Luke Bomberger

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