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Picture a group of little kids playing near the road and their toy gets thrown into the road by mistake. The way that kids are without parent supervision, they'll just run out into the road not looking. Fortunate for them the almost near driverless car warned the driver about the kid and then procceded to hit the brakes before the kid got hurt. That's an amazing thing and that inventive idea just saved a little kid from getting fataly injured.

In the article, "Driverless Cars Are Coming" it talks about some great pros and cons about driverless cars. In addition to that, it talks about how there's a while ways away to go. In my opinion I'm all for this inventive addon to the automotive industry. This new idea may stop accidents, allow for texting and driving not to be a hazard, and drunk driving can be avoided. Mostly I'm all for it, let me now explain why.

My first point to point out is that this new invention may stop accidents. I picture a stormy night and your driving, barely not able to see the road. All of a sudden, a deer jumps out and you hit it, swerving and crashing your car. With a mostly driverless car, that problem can be avoided. With its sensors and cameras attached, the car will tell you that a deer is coming your way and it'll hit the brakes for you, eliminating the accident.

My next point of reason is that with teens texting and driving, this hazardis habit will be non hazardess. Teens and older folk text and drive. Most don't, but people do. This habit is the cause of deaths on the road almost 25% of the time each year. With the mostly driverless car though, people can text and drive while the car drives for them. If they need to get back on the wheel, the care will notify them that they need to put the phone down and get to driving the care, avoiding any possible danger they may face if their face is buried in their phones.

My final point kinda ties into the non hazardess parts of the texting and driving thing. Many adults do this and it's a very bad habit. That's when on an evening night, adults will drink and drive. Now this isn't titled to just adults, some teens do this and I understand. I'm pointing this to the adult side because it happens more often then teens. With being drunk, people's eyesight and cognitive thought and function becomes bery challenging, causing drunk drivers to get into and possibly die from collisions and accidents. With a driverless car though, that possibiliy is dumbed down a bit. Now it's still not fully taken care of as driverless cars arent' driverless cars. They still need the human aspect to take over if needed. So the next time you go drinking, bring a friend or something, because this concept is still a work in progress.

With all that being said and done, I think the driverless car is a pretty good inevedebility. Though the concept of drunk driving can be worked on the car that drives itself is a great thing and can be a reality if worked on properly. That's my take on the driverless car and I hope I got the point across.

Score: 4