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The author studies Venus the way some people study science and how others study math and English. The auhtor studies really hard on what he wants and needs to know. Some dangers that it persents would be that not all of Venus is safe and not all of space is safe either. Venus is a worthy planet because it does not have all of man kind on it destroying it or usig it. Venus is a place where some people go to see outisde of our world to see what space really does look like.

In parargraph 1 it talks about about of Venues is sometimes called the "Evening Star" and it is one of the most brightest points of light in the night sky. It is also known as Earth's twin because Venus is closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. It says in paragraph 2 " Each perious mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours." A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.

In conclusion is states in paragraph 8 " Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itslef, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into mnay equally intimidationg endeavors," Thoes words that came from paragraph 8 would probabaly be some what some danger but nit that much.

Score: 2