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Hi,I am Luke.I want you to join the Seagoing Cowboys program.Oh,you want reasons why you should join.Well during the adventure I got to sight see.And I got hard work. to do which was fun.And when the animals are unloaded we play fun games.And I will tell you about it.So I sugest you to be a seagoing cowboy.

I got hard work but it was fun.Two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean and from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China can give you hard work.The animals had to be fed and watered two or three times a day.Bales of hay and bag of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship.And the stalls needed to be cleaned.All of these things was hard work.

During that trip I got to sight see.I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.So was taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,a city with streets of water.And I have also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panana Canal on his way to China.It was great seeing them.

And I got to play games with the others when the animals were unloaded.I played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals were housed.Table tenis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and games also helped past the time when I was onboard.All of these things are fun when I was onboard.

These are the reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.I hope these three reasons convince you to join.So this is why you should join this program.

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