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Would you ride the waves?

Well im going to be telling you about a man who rode the waves his name is Luke.

Im also going to tell you about him and what he does for a living.

Luke is a person who works two part time jobs which is working at a grocery store and at a bank.

This story alll started one day when his friend Don invited Luke to go to Europe on a cattle boat.

Luke couldn't say no.

He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.

In 1945, world war II was in Europe. Many countries in Europe was ruined. In order to help those countries they need to regain thier food supplies, animals, and more.

About 44 nations joind echother to form a UNRRA. UNRRA was hiering "Seagoing cowboys" to watch after the cows, horses, and mules that were being sent oversea. Luke and Don was two of the man who had signed up for the job.

In August 1945, the two men received thier orders which were to report to New Orleans.

They arrived August 14, Luke said, " the day the war on the pacific ocean ended." The men got thier seaman papers a nd then they boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, was headed to Greece with a cargo with 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them all.

Luke was 18 before they arrived at Greece, whitch ment he could be drafted for military service. " When my draft board had learned that i was on a cattle boat trip, they told me to keep doing that for my service."

Be time he waas discharged it was 1947, Luke made nine trips. The most of any seagoing cowboy.

The boat trips was unexspectivly opportunity for Luke.

Luke said besides helping people, had some side benefits of seeing Europe and china. But seeing Accropolis in Greece was special," Luke said.

It took 2 weeks to cross the atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the united states of America and about a month to get all the way to china.

Caring for the animals during the crossings kept Luke busy. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day.

Bales of hay and bags of oats needed to be pulled from the lower holds of the ship.

Stalls had to be cleaned.

So after what i just exsplaind to you would you still be a seagoing cowboy or not.

Score: 3