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Have you ever wanted to travel the world, and help people? If you join Seagoing Cowboys Program you can do both. This program help the people who have been effected by World War II.We help them by sailing cattle boats across the sea. You should be a Seagoing Cowboy for these reasons in the following.

The first reason you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is you can travel the world. Luke Bomberger said that " The cattle boat trips were an unbelievable oportunity for a small town boy". Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China. He also said that

"Besides helping people, I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China. But to see the Acropolis in Greese was special."

The last reason you should join is you can help a lot of people. What if you were one of the people that needed help? They would want you to join too! They would not get help if people did not join. Luke said that " It made me more aware of people of other countries in need." Would you want find that awareness too?

Sight seeing and helping people are why you should be in the Seagoing Cowboys Program. Seagoing Cowboys are amazing ar'nt they? It would be really fun to be a Seagoing Cowboy. Would you like to be a Seagoing cowboy? It seems like a lot of fun does is'nt!

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