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The auther gives out good examples for the reader why we should study Venus more, like he said in paragragh 4 "long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth." The auther wants venus to be a living planet so humans can live in Venus. Venus have some type of mountins, valleys and craters. The auther states "Futhermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearset option for a planetary visit, a crucial considering given the long time frames of space travel." This is probably why the title of this story is called "The challenge of exploring venus" because its going to be a challenge trying to make Venus a living planet.

The auther does state some resons why its going to be a challeng

living at Venus he states "On the planets surface, tempertures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet." So its likely that this is going to be impossible to live in Venus but thats why this is a challenge for the people that are going to try and make this a livable place for humans.

They have tried landing space ships but they where unsuccessful trying to land the space craft at Venus. But NASA wont give up they trying have study it even harder. In paragraph 7 it state" some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus surface and have lasted for three weeks in shuch conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers." So NASA have some powerfull stuuf to study Venus even harder and there not going to stop studing Venus until they found a way to live there or there is no way to live on Venus.

Score: 2