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Could you imagine a world with driverless cars? Now think, are you okay with this ideal,with this world? I know I am not. Driving is one of our human rights. it helps as connect to others, do we really want to lose that? Don't you want to go through the fun but stressful time of teaching your son or daughter, how to drive. We lose family traditions,bonding experices, our independce and jobs. Cars don't just help us in our everyday like we help them.

What's going to happen to our econmy when people who spent money to go to college to be a car engine, car only get a job at one place. One place that needs less people. What do we do when this car brakes down? It's electronic so our regular joe of the mill enginers can't fix. But

it's not our car it may just be a cab car, then what we leave it sitting in the middle of the road because, hey we dont own it. Wait here comes another smart car, thats just an acident waiting to happen. With this acident comig up what if we dont have enough time to take control.

Then what happens if we do have time to get control. Do we swive taking the chance of hitting something maybe even another car. Saying that by this point we are atleast paying atention to the road now. For the cars that let us watch a movie while the car decides to shuts off when we need to drive.What if the screen gletches. We can't see yes this is a if question. Which makes me have a question to you, has your computer ever glitched even though theres nothing wrong with it mine has. With all these posiblities if we do get into a wrek, who's to blame.

I(t's a driverless car so the driver can't be at fault right? But wait weren't you driving when it crashed, even though the screen glitched. By law you were the driver so this must be your fault correct,but its a driverless car how could you be the driver. Who pays for the damage the company or you, my guess to save money some how in some why this will be your fault. nothing to do with the company of this so called "driverless car".

To conclude this aguemental passage i would like to sumarize why not to use driverless cars. I believe there are so many things that could go wrong. Why take the chance, because it would be cool! Right up until legal debates happen on who is to blame foe acidents in this car. Is it still cool when your family or friends lose jobs they have had their whole life, that they worked for. what to some "driverless car" that truly isnt driverless.

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