Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
In the passage the author gives facts and statements to pursaude us that exploring Venus is wortht he trip. The author includes details on how we could do it, and how difficult it would be.

This passage includes the author stating how he thinks it would be beneficial to go to Venus, he thinks it would be very interesting to be able to explore this planet. He knows it would be extremely dangerous and hard to explore Venus. He says in the passage that there are ways of keeping information with out electronic devices, in paragraph 7 he states "systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces."

I personally think the author did a very well job of telling how exploring Venus would help us, but yet every adventures has its dicfficulties. In the reading he is trying to tell how its dangerous, but its do-able. With out preparing and studying, there will be no trip. They want to get closer to venus to be able to find out what the planets texture is like, but as of now they would only be able to hover over it in a ship. Scientists want to figure out ways to get on Venus by using machines that can withstand the weather on the planet, in paragrapgh 6 the author states "Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus."

Score: 3