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Luke Bomberger reasons to join were. He was working two part time jobs at the grocrey store and the bank and. It was a opportunity of a life time so he had to take it his life was just begning When his freind wanted him to join.He was only 18 whe he was drafted to be a seagoing cowboy.

Luke also made fun aboard with when they unloaded they played fun games like. Baseball, Volleyball ,Table Tennis tournements , Fencing , Boxing , Reading, Whittiling and alot more.But they also had hard work to do like the dangers of the sea. One day luke was night watchman he had to check on all animals every hour one night he fell and almost landed in the sea but he cought. Himself before he did but even though he was happy to be alive he suffered an injury from cracked ribs.

Luke is more than Mr.Bomberg he is a hero and opend up the world to other people. Around the world so that's why Luke wanted to become a seagoing cowboy.

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