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In the article it talks about a man that just got out of college and he is working a 2 part-time jobs working at the bank and the grocery store. So, his friend asked him if he wanted to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke said "Yes!" So, next he got to go on his 1st trip.

Lukes friend told him that UNRRA was hiring "Seagoing Cowboys" to take care of peoples horses, cows, and mules. Luke and his friend signed up and they coundn't have been more happierin their life if they didn't do that because the got to help other animals and save peoples farms from being destroyed and the food supply. Next they headed for Greece with a ship load of 335 horses and enough hay and oats to feed them.

Luke helping his Aunt Katie had prepared him for all of the hard work he needed for this trip. On his 2nd trip Lukes job was to check on all of the animals every hour. He got to go to many different places like Italy, Europe, China, etc. He says he was "Grateful for the opportunity." The awareness stayed with him, leading his family to a big number of people and exchange visitors for many years. Now, would you like to do something like that? Do you want to do what he did? Just think about it.

Score: 2