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Why should you join 'Seagoing Cowboys' because you get to cross the Alantic Ocean 16 times! Not just that only, you get to take care horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Just like real cowboys, instead you get to be riding a ship while taking care of the animals.

Also, as a Seagoing Cowboy you don't just take care of animals, you can also help people that needs help. By doing their jobs for them. When cowbys are done putting animals that had been unloaded they get to do their fun games, like playing baseball and vollyball games!

When you get served as night watchman you get check on all the animals every hour but have to watch out where your going because you might slip or fall down during night time. You have to be calm and wait because it takes long days to arrive the place they have to go. Crossing Atlanic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States takes 2 weeks and a month to get to China.

For traveling you get to see new places you never seen before! Like Luke seen the side of Europe and China! In China you get to see the castle in Crete and marveld at the Panama Canal!

I think being a 'Seagoing Cowboy' is fun when getting do to these things.Visiting new places, taking care of animals, different jobs for 'Seagoing Cowboy'. Also helping people in other countries for their needs makes Luke happy.

Score: 3