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In this story you are going to read how luke is trying to get people to be a seagoing cowboy. Like what they do what they get and how they do there job.

In my job we get to help out. You get to take care of animals, you get to go places and cross oceans. You also get to take care of animals like horses and other animals. Also you get to see things you have never seen before. You get to help the animals and you help and then you fell good for helping something or someone. You will be able to see things and do things that you always wanted to do and you will have fun and just help.

As you read my story i hope now you want to be a seagoing cowboy because you will get to help and fell like your being loved for doing something good.

Score: 2