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you should join the Seagoing Cowboys becuase the Seagoing Cowboys travel all around the world helping others around the world. If you love adventure or going all arouund the world seeing every unique thing about other countys this is the job for you. some support if you dont belive we will travel or see almost every corner of the world here is some text to help. "The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy," he says "besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special," he says. "So was taking the gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water." luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.

If these reasons dont convince you to join i dont know what will. Any body can join. will you take the one in a life time chance will you join us?

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