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Computer technology is evolig every year and its begining to change the way the clssrooms are held as well. From books to computers, emails, grading systems etc. Recently there has been something else in place in schools too. Facial Action Coding System, which enalbes computers to identify human emotions. In schools the computer can scan your facial expressions and make the activity your doing more intresting.

There are universal signs of emotions like happiness, sadness, anger, fear, surprised, and disgust. Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements. They tested this on the Mona Lisa and it could detect her mood in the painting. It calculated that her facres was showing 4 different moods just by her face. Imagine what it can do for schools in the world.

I believe it is a great idesa to have these software emotion-recognition in schools because it can give students a better way to learn. If the computer can see that a student is annoyed by what they are doing it changes the way the activity is going to get the students more interested in what they are learning. The more the student gets interested the more that he/she learns just by actually paying attention. The computer can also help make grading easier as well. When a teacher is grading the computer can see that he/she is surprised at all the grades in the system.

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