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I believe the author did a really great job on stating his idea and supports his idea very well-informed. The author includes how NASA was trying to study Venus and that NASA still try to found a way to study Venus more. The author also explain why Venus exploration is a good idea and how dangerous it can be.

NASA has been trying to study on Venus but the Venus has thick atmosphere almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide that covers the planet. So NASA uses chamber simulation close to Venus but only lated for three weeks in such condition. But they have a idea which to build spacecraft that hover above Venus atmosphere and there study it.

The exploration of Venus is well worth because Venus used to Earth-like planet long ago. The study said that long ago, Venus probably has ocean like Earth and could support kind forms of life. However today, Venus has average temperatures of 800 degree Fahrenhiet, but Venus still has similar features to Earth like mountains, valleys, and creters. It is also sometime the closet planet for planetary visit.

I believe the author makes a good points. I agree with how Venus is worth the visit even its dangers. Humans has be expolring all around the world including ocean and the moon. However, there are still things that are unexplore and Venus is one of them and it is worth it to explore. The mission of Venus exploration might bring the world togather and will inspire the children of the future.

Score: 3