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Venus is a beautiful but horrible places to live. It getts very hot and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than ours. Metal can not last for a long period of time down there, we could not stay on the ground. The dangers of sendig human life down there is not great.

On our twin planet it can get up to 800 degresse fahrenheit. That is about 9 times higher than our normal temp on Earth. We could ot survive that heat. The atmospheric pressure on the planet is 90 times greater than our planet. We could not be on Venus with out special gear, like a space suit. This planet can liquify metal basicly instantly. The weather on the planet is horrible. There are constiant earthquakes and erupting valcaones and very bad storms.

The way the heat is on Venus we could not be there for long. It melts metals, out probes that were sent there can not survive, how are we. The conditons are not ideal for human life. Even though about 30 MILES above the ground we could survive in a ´hot air ballon´ The air pressure would be about ours on Earth that far away from the gound on Venus. Nasa wants to explore and send human testing groups there for experiments, we should not. If strong metals cound not survive we can not survive.

sending our people down there is not great at all. risking human ife for science happpends but if we can stop it we should. Venus looks lovely but the conditions are not great at all. There is radiation everywhere. sittingifront of tvs, computer, microwaves we can get radiation. In the hot air ballon 30 miles away for Venuses ground has about as much radiatio as our whole earth has. These not so easy conditions can harm anyone over time.

Venus is not the place feo human life. we need to find diffrerent planet for us. the conditions are not right for us, they are too dangerous. If we have no choice to go there and test it out we cold but we should fight agianst going ther if we have to. People could not survive in a ´hot air balloon´ forever.

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