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Have you ever wanted to join the Seagoing Cowboys program? Well if you said yes this essay is for you. In this essay you will be hearing about the best reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.I know it sounds weird but it is a lot of fun. If you said no at the end I will guarantee you would want to join.

Here are some reasons why you should join this program. If you like to travel the world you can go many places this would be the best place for you. My name is Luke Bomberger and I have been to places like on a gondola ride in Venice, Italy the Panama Canal and the excavated castle in Crete. You can even find some fun things to do on board such as table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games can also help pass the time. We even played baseball and volleyball in the empty holds where animals had been housed.

It was so much more than an adventure. It opened up a whole new world for me. It made me more aware of people of other countries. That awareness lead me to lead my family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. When my friend Don Reist asked me to go on a cattle boat I knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime. I guess I was right it was an opportunity of a lifetime. I actually didn't I was going to become a Seagoing Cowboy. Yet it happened and I am greatful for it happening too.

In conclusion, being a Seagoing Cowboy is a lot funner than you think. These are just some of the wondenrful things about being a Seagoing Cowboy. There is much more to it. As I said earlier I wasn't expecting to become a Seagoing Cowboy,but it happened. Yet most of all you make a lot of new friends. So if you said no at the beggining have you changed your mind.

Score: 4