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Challenge of exploring Venus wouldn't it be fun? Like many other challenges in the world today that are dangerous, the challenge of exploring Venus is also dangerous but exploring Venus is worth it unlike the other challenges in the world now. If we actually wanted to explore Venus than we have to get up close to Venus cause we cannot just merely look at it from afar. Challenge of exploring Venus could also help us expand our imagination to the extented. Our innovation could meet the very edges of our already have innovation.

First, wanting to acually know the planet itself. We must be able to get close to the planet if we want to get a samples of anything from there since getting it from afar is not gonna help. The author stated that " More importanly, reseachers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance." This shows that we have to get up close to the planet to know about the planet. Therefore some scientists are now conducting away to get up close to the planet, even though there are much risk to it.

Secondly, our imagination of we know more about Venus. Our imagination are limited, but if we know more about Venus our imagination could go wild. The article stated " imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape." The author is basically telling us to imagine the impossible that could happen if we know about Venus. Therefore knowing more about Venus might even be a good thing.

Lastly, our innovation could be at its very edge. Our innovation right now are very amazing but imagine the new ones we could build if we know about Venus. The author stated in the article saying "Our travel on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expended to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."

Our innovation right now are limited to do simple things as of now. If we know more about Venus we would have no limits to our innovation we would even have more access to a lot of things.

In conclusion, taking the challenge of exploring Venus would be dangerous, but would also benefit us. In many different ways we could have a better innovation. We could imagine the impossible that we can't right now. So taking the challenge is not a bad thing, we just need to have a safe conduction so that we could know more about the planet itself.

Score: 4