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Hello. My name is Luke, the boy who joined the Seagoing Cowboys. I had such a fun experience and so can you. There are many reasons on why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys. Sit down for a few minutes while I tell why you should join.

Here have some tea! You should join because you can have a fun time and experience. While we go back to where we live, we can play were the cows used to be housed. We can play either basketball, volleyball, and we even have table-tennis tournaments! You can also travel the whole world like for instance, China or Greece or Italy. This is one reason on why you should join.

It can even help you be a better person. You can help out animals by feeding them, taking care for them, and changing

the stalls. They have to be watered and fed two to three times a day. International students come from foriegn lands and we help them be a part of our crew. With the help of yours, you can change the world and make it a better place to live in.

So, take some time to think about joining the program. Here's a handout and there is no fee or admission. All we need are people who are hard workers with a positive atitude. Well, I had a fun time talking to you and thanks for your listening. Thank you!

Score: 3