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I dont think that the technology that shows peoples emotions should be for everyone.I think it should just be for scients to see more into human emotions and to see how it effects us. Letting anyone to have the ability to see emotions just from one simple picture could be harmful at times.

For example, someone could be very happy then a second later something sad popped into there head like their animal died and it makes them slightly sad, and then they send a picture to their friend and they might think that something really bad happened

but in reality nothing really did, but they keep on bugging them about it and it makes them get to get into a fight and ruins a friendship.

I am not saying that it wont be helpful but it could ruin something.There are different ways to see this, some people could see how it will help others, some see that its a threat or invasion of privacy.

But i think that it shouldnt come out yet because it could harm someone if it gets out of hand.

Score: 3