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The author suggesr that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.I think the author is making a good idea about exploring te venus planet because it will bring new stuff to the Earth the will never know that was in the universe with the other planet.This quote is interesting "Venus,sometimes called the "Evening star".in the text said the is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky.I heard before that the Venus planet was one of the most close planet in the Earth.In the text said "Earth,Venus,and Mars are the planetary neighbor,orbit the sun at differebt speeds."This is a good evidence because its explaning how those three planets are cored to the sun.But sometime the Mars and other time venus are more closer becase sometimes Venus is around the corner.When i was reading paragraph 2 said the each previous mission was unmanded because the spacecraft would not survive more than a few hours."Numerous factors contributed to Venus's repuattion as a challenging planet for humans to study,despite its proximity to us."So I think is very dangerous if the author study the Venus because it will not be a good chance if they got to venus maybe they will not come back.

I thik it will be a good idea if the NASA plan better that trip to Venus planet because it will be to dangerous if they just go without a plan."NASA is working on other appreaches to studying Venus.for example,some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions" This is a good idea because the who will go they will be ore protectice.

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