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Venus, sometimes called the "evening star"is one of the bightest points of light in the night sky.

But, the nickname is misleading because Venus is actually a planet.

Venus is a challenge place to examine closely.

Venus is a worthly pursuit despite the dangers it presents because Venus could potential have life forms, can be the nearest option for a planetary visit, and people can gain others things from it not only information.

Venus could be the nearest option for a planetary visit if something happened to Earth.

The article "The challenge of Exploring Venus" it states,"recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long frames of space travel"(4).

This shows that if reseachers find a way to visit Venus without trouble, it can change the world.

This ties in with the thesis by doing this could be dangers,but it can open the world by new ways.

Also this shows that if something could have happened to Earth, people could go to Venus.

People can gain other things from going to Venus not only information.

The article states, "striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself"(8).

This shows that we could gain other things not only just the planet itself.

This also shows that the dangers of getting this information is going to be hard, but in the long run it will be worth it.

Venus could have life forms and feature if we don't go and discover it.

The article "The challenge of Exploring Venus" states, "could have supported various forms of life"(4).

This shows that Venus could have support life if we explore it and find out.

This ties in with the thesis by even if the dangers are big it will be worth it if Venus could support life. This also shows that if Venus has life forms we could potential could make it in the long run.

Venus could have potential of having life forms, can be a closest option for a planetary visit, people can gain information these all are a worthly pursuit despite the dangers it presents.

Venus is a challenging path but it shows promising stuff.

If the risk factors are great, we will find a way to get there.

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