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The author claims that Venus can be our escape plan if earth becomes unhabitle .He supports this by explaining to us that NASA has made many attemps for a spacecraft to land and collect samples for people to study. But due to the extreme heat ,that ranges over 800 degrees. And pressure that is 90 times heavier than what we have here on earth. Is basically impossible for a spacecraft to survive.

Many plans ideas and plans are being put into perspective like a mechanical computers. That can stand the heat from Venus. And there's also an Idea of a blimp

to travel in ,instead of touching the surface.Even with all these great ideas,there are limits to what we can do.Heat and pressure are not the only setbacks. There are active valcanoes ,powerful earthquakes and even lighting. The possibilities to living there are slim to none.The only reason Venus is being considered is becouse it's closer.

Maybe there will be one day where a man set's foot on mars and a famous line that will be put into the history books ,or internet. Depending on how long it takes. Mankind has done impecable things. And venus is just gonna be the next milestone

Score: 2