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Twenty five years ago the world was amazed by the Face on Mars. NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when the Spacecraft had spotted a shawdowly likeness of a human face. It had an enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia.

A few days later NASA started studying the face and unveiled the image for all to see. NASA caption the photo "Huge rock formation.. which resembles a human head.. formed by shawdows giving the illusion of eyes, a nose, and mouth. This engaged the public and attracted attention to Mars. The " Face on Mars" had became very popular.

Few scientist believed the Face was an alien artifact. Photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mar Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet. When Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original photo's taken.

Thousands if web surfers were waiting for the image. The image first appeared on a JPL web site. The image reveaked a natural landform , evidence showing that there was not a alien monument after all. Because it was winter when NASA went to go capture the image it was some what cloudy and not many people were satisfied with the image.

NASA has provided evidence. Nasa also proved that the "Face on Mars" was not created by aliens , in fact it was created by human form.

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