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WOOSH!WOOSH as the waves were slamming into the ship we were falling from how wet the ship was.

It all started when I was getting into my house and then I heard a knock on my door and then I opened. Don Reist was inviting me to go to Europe on cattle boat. I coulden't say no.

It was 1945 world war two was going on in Europe many countries were ruined from the war.

How they needed to recover was to have some suplies and food from me and other people.

Fourty-four nations joined together to form the UNRRA.

The hired "Seagoing Cowboys" to take care of the horses and young cows and mules that were shipped oveseas. Don and I had sighned up for this job as a Seagoing.

We arrived August fourteen the day that the Pacific war had ended.

Don and I got our seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W.Wooster headed for Greece. We had cargo of 335 horses and enough food to feed them.

It was a bad time to bee 18 because they could of sent me to the military service.

By the time that I was discharged in 1947 I had made nine trips the most of

any Seagoing Cowboy. The cattle trips were unbelievable. It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean from the eastorn coast of the United States pluss caring animals and we fead them three times a day.

Help my aunt Katie's farm really helps me while all these thing but not as much for all the dangers that you face during this.

I also had a fun time on board with everybody on there.

We played baseball volly bal and many more activities.

While I was there it made me more aware of people and there needs the awareness stayed with me all my life because people from all around the world needed things that I had.

That it helped them more than it did to me and I had learned a lot from that trip. That trip was mostly about being with my friend because he was the one who had invited me to Europe.

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