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In the article "Driverless Cars Are Coming", the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless car. I think that the idea of diverless cars is a bad idea. Driverless cars can lead to lots of money being spent to constructe these cars, they have to be up to date with the latest roads and can cause a lot of damage when these cars get into accidents. Many of these problems is why computer driven cars should not be built.

Right now cars are being used everyday to get to certain destinations like school and work. Now manufacturers want to make these cars that can drive themselves without drivers actually driving the car. In the late 1950's, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a test track but the track was embedded

with an electrical cable that used radio signals to make the car run. These smart road systems worked well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was too expensive. And now that technology has been advancing, these cars have to know where there is a traffic jam or an accident has occured, but mainly these cars have to be updated because more and more roads are being constructed to make the trip a lot faster. But when cars get into accidents, there can be a big problem.

Now that driverless cars are becoming a thing, laws need to be made in order for pedestrians to be safe, which is a big concern. It is mostly illegal for people to test drive these car becase they don't know if the car is even safe for a person to drive.

Manufacturers believe that the more states will follow as soon as the cars are proven more reliably safe, but if there is an accident or the technology fails who it there to blame, the driver or the company that made the car?

Even though technology is improving in cars, there will always be a big fail. And even though people want the lastest things from the market, they may not alwasy be the greatest and saftest.

That's why I think that cars like these shouldn't be made because then there will be a huge contraversy weather or not these cars should even be on the road due to safety issues and technology problems.

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