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The author made a great point about how we should still or should study Venus. Even though it might be dangerous there is a goood reason why we should still study it. For example lets say you want to do a carreer that is about being a mechanic but you want to make your own car. what would you do to accomplish that? well of course you would study and even though it might be dangerous cause you might get shoked or might crash for a few times. Anyways back about Venus, Venus is a very very hot planet. We are still studying other planets like how they were made. Even though we still can't get stuff on Venus we can still study what things we could send to venus and again the stuff may not be able to survive or last long but it's a attempt we should try. In paragraph 5 says that NASA possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Vnus would allow scientist to float above the fray. Even though there is a problem there will always be a solution to a problem , just by studying can that be possible.

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