Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Claim: This story is really about how many people studying about Mona Lisa and how the way her mood is.

Evidence: Lots of people try to figure out her history on her emotions. Someone uses a 3d computer and he figures out that she has 6 other emotions of herself.

Intro: Some people try to study her history from back in the day because of why she dosent smile that often and why is she always angry.

Body: Some people perform an impressive calculation on her feelings by the look of her face.

Conclusion: The whole story is about why people wonder why Mona Lisa never smiles that often. People uses lots of technology to try to figure out the way her mood was before she had 6 different emotions someone calls the person who knows lots of history about the story. Then they figure out that she did finaly smile during a painting class. By the look of her face the first time that someone notist lots of people were impressed it raised your eyebrows when you where surprised. Her smile really did change some back story about her first mood.

Score: 1