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I think there should be driverless cars. The reasons for this is, the future is always inovationg making life easier,it helps people with disabilities, and it is better for safety reasons.

Inovation makes life more convenent for us,and safer than it has before. Like how we have dryers to dry our cloths instead of hanging them on closth pins. Also, how we have vaccines to make sure we dont get diseases. Those are examples of things that have helped the world in making things easier and safer. So there is nothing wrong with a driverless car that is safe and convinent for the average houshold family.

In the passage it tells us in pargraph 7 that they are already invovating how a car will drive itself. Yes they say that it can not yet navigate itself through work zones and accidents, but they are still improving how to make it fully driverless which can be very helpful to those with disabillities. Disabilities such as paralysis,loss of limbs, blindness, and

Epilepse ,which is the cause of sudden seziurs, which prevents them fom driving. These cars can help them get around without the assistance of another person making them feel normal or indapendent in society.

Laslty, we should have driveless cars because,it actually is safer for every person. Say if a person was driving under the influence. That person could harm themselves and others, but with driverless cars you wont have to worry with that person causing an accident and hurting themselves and others.The only concern with safety is in paragraph 9,that if the technology fails there might be liability issues. These issues can be worked out by setting out laws and procedures for these types of situations to prevent them. which is what auto makers are trying to solve now.

Thecnology is always growing, helpin people out, and making it safer for us to live. The driverless car is one of those things.The driverless car gives everyone the equal opertunity to be independent and safe for future generations to come.

Score: 4