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Imagine you could tell exactly how someone felt, just by looking at their face. This is precisely what a new technology, named FACS (Facial Action Coding System), does. This technology could have some amazing applications in the real world, like to suit web page ads to someones liking, to make computer-animated faces more expressive, and to monitor students emotion in the classroom. FACS should be used to read the emotional expressions of students in the classroom.

FACS should be used to read the emotional expressions of students in the classroom. One reason FACS should be used in classrooms is because it can monitor if the students are becoming confused or bored. The article says this here, "A classroom computor could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored." This is valuable information for the teachers, because it can help them make lesson plans that are liked by and are more efficient for their students. Another reason FACS should be used in the classroom, is because it could adapt the lesson based on the emotions of the student. The article says this here, "Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor." This is important because it can modify the lesson plan to help the student directly, when they need it, even if they are not wanting to seek help.

FACS should be used to read the emotional expressions of students in the classroom because it can monitor if the students are becoming confused or bored, and adapt the lesson based on the emotions of the student. This could be one much needed, huge change in the educational system. All in all, FACS is a great piece of technology that could help brighten up the future the same way the lightbulb did.

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