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People always imagine the future with flying cars, robots as servents, and everything white. Similar to this idea, car manufactring companies are coming up with driverless cars. This is an idea where you dont have to have a driver in the car. The car drives all by itself to your destination. Most people would think that this is an amazing thing to accomplish/build. People are thinking so much about the poitives of this idea, that they are not thinking of the negatives. So many things to think about. Would if you got in an accident? would you blame the driver or the manufacturer?, not to mention that the cost of making these cars would be outrageous!, and if we had these cars , people would be so dependent on them and they would be so independent as a person.

Imagine yourself just crusing along in your car and your relaxing because the car is driving itslef. All of a sudden you get in a car crash! someone id badly injured. you get out of the car to talk to the peson about your insurance an everything. Who do you think they would blame for the car crash and the accident? the

driver or the manufacturer? "Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?" This quote indicates that there are a lot of thing that would need to change if we actually made this car, including car insurance. You never know what could happen with a car like this. Its just safer to driveon your own, than to put your life in the hands of a driveless car that has the potential of hurting not only you, but other people as well. has anone even realized how the car will be built?

People think that this car is just going to be made plain and simple. Thats not the case. These cars are going to be expensive to make. Its not like they are only going to make one driverless car, they are going to make hundreds of thouands of them. And they are going to be very very expensive to make.The tax money that we all pay would probably go to making these cars instead of something important like filling potholes, or making better streets. Our hard earned money would go to this instead of something that we are in dire need of. It would be a waste of our money.

We as people would be so independent if we had this car because we would rely on it to take us to all the places that we need to go. We would be so independent because we wouldnt know the city of country like we did before the driverless car came out. Its almost like we wouldnt know where we live anymore. We would probably forget how to drive and everything.

Overall i think that this is just a bad idea because we have a lot of problems in this world and this does not have to be one of them.

Score: 4