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A summer day on Earth is not that hot, campare to Venus its way off .

Tan on a nice summer day with a nice 80 degrees Fahrenheit, life is good. On Venus the temperature can reach 100 times that, 800 degrees fahrenheit.

Venus use to have water, and could maintain life a long time ago. Now the surface is hotter, all the water is gone, no space rover can spend more can couple of hours before being destroyed. This challenge more difficult then anyone can think of. The is just so much more to explore in Venus.

Sciencetist can study lots of things about Venus. Can't judge a book by its cover. Venus sound hard on paper, our technologies are getting better. The idea of floating on top of the clouds, is just amazing. Its more safer then landing on the ground, and not a lot of damage is going to accure to the astronaut equiments. The good thing is that, it hovering 30 miles or more above the surface. No need to worry about

storms and other kind of desassters.It will be powered by the suns energy, not much battery power needed to make the machine more heavier.There are some downsides to the idea of floating above the ground, the air pressure would be close to sea levels on earth. The scienctists who observe rocks wouldn't be able to take rock sample.

If the astronauts can make it to Venus, it wont be long to check out mercury. There might be other planet more hotter then Venus, but step by step we can do it. The future is closer, human curiosity grow larger, the farther more we know about space. Venus is just the first obstackle, will it be our last?

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