Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The author explains that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by explaining why there numerous facters to contribute to Venus. The author wants us humans to contribute or learn and study all about venus. The author wants NASA to give humans the chance into studying venus because its has a possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus.

" Nasa is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chameber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions."(paragraph7) The author explains that we need to study all about venus becuase maybe sooner or later we could be using electronics that is from that planet or like something that is from that planet that we made into an electronic.

In conclusion the author provides many textual evidence to support his idea of studying Venus and despiting the dangers of Venus.

The author explains that Astronomers are fascinated by Venus becuase it may well once been the most Earth-like planet in iur solar system, this shows that our scientist and our atronomers are going to also get in involved with this study and would want to know alot more about Venus becuase maybe we just might inhabit this planet soon.

Score: 2