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Do you ever get bored in class?We tend to get very bored in class due non of us wanting to do work and mostly lose attention in class frequently. The idea that we can track our facial movement to track how we feel, can improve or create ads or programs to benefiit our mindset. I claim that the author for technology facial reconiztion, can help many others in class.and hears why.

In papagraph 6 it goes into further detail on how the computer can track your facial expreesion to determine your emotions.It also goes further as the computer will change ads or feature to boost the desired mood."If you simle when a web ad appears on your screen, a simlar ad might follow.But if you frown,the next ad will be different."

In paragraph 6 it also states that they can modify the technology to make an more effective lesson in the class."A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.Then it could modifythe lesson,like an effective human instructor.

In paragraph 4, it states that human have vary degrees of expression."The facial expression for each emotion are universal,Even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression."By that logic it self, this can futher boost the most desireable emotion to either keep them happy or track their attention to an lesson or assignment.

Going by these fact and logic, I claim for technology to track students emotions.This has shown to help student quiet frquently to keep them on track so to speak.Student grade would start going up, they be more motivated to learn. Now a days,kids are not focused in learning or are unhappy about learning or paying attention in general.Whith this new technology, I think this would be something to give a chance too.

Score: 3