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Even thouugh exploring venus is a dangerous pursuit and there are many dangers many reasearches still want to study venus. Why is studying venus a worthy pursuit you might ask. It is a worthy pursuit for several different reasons. One reason studying venus is a worthy pursuit is because it will help innovate or technology of today for the better of tommorow and because we should fear these dangers but they should not stop us from learning and making new innovations. One example from the text to back this statement up states, "Our travels on Earth and Beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."

In conclusion to this i believe that we should go visit venus in the safest way possible so that we might know more about our solar system. I also believe it may help us advance our technology. And with that lets go to venus.

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