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How would you feel if I knew your emotions all the time? Would you like it? Would you hate it? Yes, I think we should use the facial coding system to students actions to prvent something bad from happening, such as depression.

One way that this facial coding machine can also help is by detecting whether someone is happy, sad or angry. Some textual evidence that supports this is "She's 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry." These are just a couple things this facial coding device can detect.

A couple other things that this facial coding can detect is whether you are lying and fake smiling. Some text evidence that proves this facial coding machine can do that is "But in a false smile, the mouth isTo an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a "smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful."

In conclusion, I think all these ideas of this facial recognition device is a good idea because it may help us atch earlier signs of bullying or people fighting. I think this is a great idea.

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