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The Seagoing Cowboys need more people to send over to Europe and China to help people recover from the World War II. You will be taking care of the animals and cleaning out their stalls. Not only do you take care of the animals, you also help people in need for the animals for food, and milk. You will also get to experience adventures and vist unique places from all around the world.

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Lets say it can be boring on the boat the whole time after the animals are gone, but you will still have alot of fun. When the animals are gone; the room that they were in can be turned into a game room were you can play vollyball, table tennis, read, fencing, boxing and many other things. All of these games will help pass the time, and make it seem like a week journey and not a month journey.

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One thing to be careful about is the dangers that could happen. You could fall off the boat and into the sea,or if a storm hit the big waves could drown you. Always remember to be prepared and always be careful while on the ship at all times. Do not play around and walk on the railings of the boat, or then you will fall off the boat.

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This program will open your eyes, just like it did for Luke Bomberger. He is a small town boy, and he didnt really know about the other countires problems. When he helped thos people he relized that he understood how life was for these people. Luke Bomberger's life changed after the program because he had the chance to go all over the world, and to see the world from another prospective.

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The Seagoing Cowboys program will surely help you open your eyes to the world and see how the other countries live. If its your dream to travel the world and help people from wars, or battlles, etc. this program is for you. You will go on adventures that you cant go on everyday, so if you would like to help out these people, travel world, and go on amazing adventures; come join us!

Score: 4