Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
I have read a article called "A Cowboy Who Rode The Waves " it is about a boy named Luke became a Seagoing Cowboy.

Luke was a town boy and some one convinced him to join. Now it is your turn to become a seagoing cowboy/ girl . They travel far away, there are big cattle ships.

They have to help people who need it, they can be called heros but in a different term. When they travel it take them a long time to get to there.

Luke said hisself "I'm grateful for the opporunity" . It helps him aware of the people in the other countries and their needs.

Second, you can also lead your family to host a number of insternational students and exchanhe vititors for many years. Luke never stayed borad there was always something to do from Table-tennis tournaments, fencing,boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time. The cowboys also played baseball, volleyball games in the emepy holds where the animals had been housed. They became UNRRA when they were hiring Luke and Don sighed up now they are seagoing cowboys and they are hepling people who need it.

Score: 2