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This is such a life changing expirience it is the opportunity of a life time and if you dont do it then that really stinks for you. you can see plenty of famous artifacts all around Europe that you can visit.Then if you just love ships and boats then you should go beacause there is alot of that where I go. Also if you love horses then you should do what i do you can get to feed them all day and you get to pet them too. The best part is helping the needs of others if you dont want to do that then, I think that something is wrong with you. If you like vollyball then you should come on with me becauce we have plenty of time to play it. If you dont go you are missing out on a lifetime amount of fun and plenty of stuff way better than sitting down watching tv.

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