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Have you ever thought about going places? If you have you should paritcipate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. You will feel the same exciment that Luke did. You will not regret it. You will be on a ture of awesomeness. Insted of just sitting down on the couch at home.

In the story Luke goes place's with his friend. When his friend asked him he says "it was an opprotunity of a life time" that is you are you going to be saying when you are done. It will be fun you can bring some one to just like Luke friend did. It would be nice you and your friend out going places.

In the story Luke goes to a lot of places like China,Europe,New Orleans,etc. Think of how you will feel going to all them places metting making new friends. it sounds like fun. Did you know people almost all over the world will meet you.

You might learn new stuff and you might get new stuff.

So you should sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program. You will be able to do a lot of stuff just like Luke. How fun will it be just you and your friend going to diffrent places. So don't sit on the couch watching t. v. go to the Seagoing Cowboy program. You love it garunted just go and have the time of your life.

Score: 3