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There are numerous stories and poems that convey the message that technology will control people one day. In many of these stories, the ending is always bad because of the technology. Currently, people are very caught up in technology such as phones and computers and their lives revolve around these things. Driverless cars will add to these technologies that control who we are and add to the many things that take away from us being human. I believe that driverless cars should not be created.

Technology does not have the intellect and cannot make decisions like humans do. There are so many driving situations that require human skill and decision-making that driverless cars may never be able to do like "navigating through work zones and arround accidents." This means that a driver will still be needed and what is the point of driverless cars that require a driver? People will become more used to not paying attention to the road that they may not pay attention to when the car is trying to get their attention.

People that support driverless cars may say it gives people time to enjoy entertainment or do work while the car drives by itself, but I believe that driving can be enjoyable too. How often do people get to enjoy their surroundings and nature? Driving can be a time where someone relaxes and reflects on their day. Driving is also a very important skill that helps people's decision making skills and their reflexes. Getting rid of these skills only hurts us.

These driverless cars may prevent many accidents caused by humans, but technology will always malfunction at times, which may cause even more accidents. When this problem occurs, there will be many controversies over who is at fault, which may cause even more problems. Humans will make mistakes, but technology will also always make mistakes that may not be as fixable.

I believe that technology should not control who we are as humans. Driverless cars may be very helpful, but in the end, it can only hurt us. We are given the ability to make our own choices so why can't we use that ability?

Score: 4