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Exploring Venus

What are the dangers of visiting Venus.Venus, is sometimes called the "Evening Star," is one of the brightest of light in the night sky. It's nickname is sometimes misleading since

Venus is simple to see from earth.But don't let that trick you for, it's one of the most challenging place to examine more closely.

Venus is ofter referred as Earth's "twin," it's the closest planet to the Earths in terms of size and density, and it is closest in distance from us. No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. The issue is not a single spaceship has touched down of Venus in more than three decades. And numerous factors contribute to Venus reputation for beinh challenging to land due the the condition. And the article states that the temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. And the atmospheric preasure is 90 times greater than what any person has experience on our own planet. And Venus is the closest planet to us. For if not Venus wasn't there well be living through those conditions but, maybe little bit diffirent. And even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Venus has the hottest surface temperature. And even though is the most challenging place to visit scientists are discussing ways to visit the surface. And in the article states that

NASA found some possible solutions to get on Venus even with there conditions on the surface. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian land scape. The article also states.

But even though the conditions may seem impossible. But, that's a challenge. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. Also NASA is working on other ways to approach to studying Venus. The article stated. Also "Venus has value, not only beaucase of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likley lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors," Striving to meet the challenges presented stated.

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