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The Challenge of Exploring Venus

Venus is a worthy pursuit to study because scientists can find a way to develop life on Venus. Also, despite the risks, it can be a good way to find out more about Venus and what's happening on there exactly.

Venus is capable of having life and people if researchers is willing to study for as long as they can. Even though Venus weathers are very dangerous and can cause severe harm, technology can be invented so astroanuts won't get killed by it. In the passage, it talks about mechanical parts is being made to be more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.

It can be a great opportunity for Nasa scientists to study Venus atmosphere and air temputures so it can be safe for them to travel there. Also, an advantage of going to there is that it is close to the Earth and the sun. This can be heavily explain in the article by mentioning that Venus can be sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit. Nasa has believed that they have found a possible solution to hostile conditions on the stray. This evidnece is further explained by allowing scientists to float above the fray so they can not get hurt by the it.

Venus is not a lot different from Earth. For example, Venus still has some features that are analogus to those on Earth. In the passage it says that the planet has a surface of rocky sediments that Earth has in many ways. Venus has valleys,mountains,and craters that scientists have found on the planet a while ago. This specific pargaroh can tell readers that scientists have a lot of exploring and studying to do for some time.

I have explain my three reasons on why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Researchers can still foind a way to help scientists study Venus without getting hurt by the intense weathers. All the people needs is time and money in order study the planet and pay for the equipment to better handle them selfles in that dangerous environment.

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