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To support the author idea I'm gonna say that the article says that Venus is a really

dangerous and interesting planet because all this things:

- On the planet's surface, temperatures average are over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.

-The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.

-Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.

-thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.

-Solar power would be plentiful.

-Radiation would not exceed Earth levels.

-It doesnt have easy conditions, but survivable for humans.

-Also important programmes like NASA are working on travell to Venus:

NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers

-Also he should study it because Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.

Score: 2