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Wouldn't driverless cars make the world a much easier place and less acidents? I am not against the development of the these cars. In fact, I believe it'll be safer for those who are still learning how to drive. These cars have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash. Of course, the driver still have to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic.

I believe that driverless cars would make it easier for those who's still learning to drive and even for elder people. These cars will help prevent people getting into accidents. The driverless cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. Although it can do all those by themselves, driver has to be alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. The GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. Manufacturers are also trying to set up cameras, which will watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. This simply means that while the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.

There are companies that plans to have cars that can drive themselves. Such as the Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and even Nissan, they plans to have those cars by 2020. That'll be cool but the cars we have now is nice as well. There are people who doesn't want a driverless cars because they believe it is safer when the driver is in controlled of the vehicle. For some case it's true but I just think that driverless cars would be much easier. I like how the Google cars simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. They also have other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up display. I feel much safer, how we have all these options when the car is in danger or when we have to take over.

Those are the main reasons why I am not against the development of these cars. I think it'll make huge impact on everyone all over the world. They are much easier and safer. These cars can even be driven more than half a million miles without a crash. There not truly driverless but it sure will help prevent accidents that's happening everyday. This will help everyone but mostly teens and elders. Some teens are careless when it comes to driving. Elder people sure do need a heads-up when driving because their getting old.

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