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The Facial Action Coding System is a technology created to help analyze a persons expressions. To use this in school it would help students in many different ways. With this technology it could also help adults to understand children emotions better. This could be a way to help find depressed students quicker and more efficiently. With this technology you could do so much more to help others.

One way to use this technology is by helping kids study. If the student shows boredom or struggles to stay on task. The machine recognizes it and changes it to another to see if the students becomes more interested. In that way students study in a way they like and they start getting good grades that will help them grow into mre successful adults. another way is to help teachers change up the way they teach when the machine notices students dozing off or not paying attention.

With this machine in schools this could help students grow to become even better functioning members of society. This could also help teachers become better at thier job by changing the way they teach to keep students more attentive in class. This could also help not just students and teachers. It could also help therapist to help them recognize if a person is depressed or not quicker to help them faster. Maybe one day it could even help robots have emotions.

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