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I think that this is a great piece technology for school laptops.

In school kids will get confused about many things that they are learning.

This invention could help students who struggle to understand a lot of content.

Students in high school have a lot of pressure on them in those 4 years.

It can be very hard to keep up with every lesson.

If the technology is able to tell if a student is confused or not and, be able to change the lesson to help it should be implemented in to everyones laptop.

Many students also don't have the nerve to raise their hand and ask a question becuase they think that they will be mad fun of for it.

With this technology a student would is afraid of that won't have to ask a question in front of everyone becuase the technology will know he/she needs help. This can be used for many different reasons also it could tell if a student is sad, and that he/she might need to see guidence.

This would be a great piece of technology for schools to have. This invention would help students get better grades to be able to have a chance to go to college.

Inventions like this are what is helping many people succeed, going outside the box to help others.

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