Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves

Beginning - resson to join

You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys , because you will have the opportunity to go to many places such as different cities, and countries places you never been before that you been hoping your entire life to go. You can see many animals , Animals you never seen before. Being a Seagoing Cowboy means you get to experince many things in the world. you could be the person to tell everyone that how you made an trip to the Pacific Ocean , Atlantic Ocean , New Orleans, and mabey even to Flordia.

Middle - Luke claims

Luke claims that he had no idea his life would change soon after his high school

graduation. Luke also claims that he finds times to have fun on board ,exspecially on return trips after the animals has been unloaded. August 14 Luke claims that the Pacific war was ended. He claims that the Cattle -boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy he says. He claim seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.

End-

If i were you i would go ahead and participate in being a Seagoing Cowboy

because it seems really fun and awesome. think of how many places you would be visting.

Score: 2