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Do yo know why you should join The Seagoing Cowboys Program?

You should join Seagoing Cowboys Program because you can go to different and unique places around the world. Plus I also went to Europe and China to bring food and water for the animals.

To begin, I went to Greece to help bring food and water for the animals. I had a cargo of 335 horses plus the hay an oats to feed them. Knowing that the the Military might draft me they said " When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service."

Also, I went to China to feed the aninimals. It took a whole month to get to China. Then he says" The cattle boat trips were an unbeliveable opportunity for a small town boy."

The cows had to be fed three time and watered two times a day.

In conclusion, these are some of the reasons why people should sign up for Seagoing Cowboys.

In this story i gave many details why you should sign up. Now you can take into intrest about signing up for the Seagoing Cowboys.

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