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The author idea that studying Venus is worthy enough to study besides all the dangerous things that could happen. They had n't any spaceships go down to Venus for three decades because of how long it last there for couple of hours. It would be a challenge because of how high the carbon dioxide is in the atmosphere, and the temperature is so different compared to earth's. They can't do anything because of how much pressure and heat there is in Venus, because it's like the second planet closest to the sun it will just melt anything. Venus can not take humans up there, because the weather is like more instense than anyone has experiences at earth. Scientist believes that Venus was a place like how earth was with mountians and stuff..

I think in the article that it could be danger because of the different radiation there is and how your body could be affected by it and you might live just heal way harder. I think there shouldn't be any researchers trying to go up into venus because of the risk it could be to and the challenges of how to be able to surivie through all of that. NASA is trying to make a better more feature to make sure that the something can last up in Venus like how they used an example of the cell phones how better it has bcome over the years. I hope that if they try to go up there and do some experience to test out Venus they should be careful and think of all the risk that can happen when they are up there.

Score: 2