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I agree that Venus would be a worthy pursuit even with dangours risk it may have because nobody has ever been to Venus and they could be the first ever to do so.The text states that " (NASA) has one particlary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to flot above the fray." This is a way that humans could study Venus and not get hurt.

Venus is a dangours planet to go to because it is really hot and the text states that " temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit," that is really hot but they would die and it would be worth it because we could get information about Venus and we would know more about it.The text states that " Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus." If they can get that to work we could be the first ever to go to Venus and we could use it to explore other planets and learn about them.

Overall Venus would be worthy to explore evan though it comes with allot oh harmfull risk.But it also could really be benifical if we could go to Venus and get information about that planet and we could go in and maybe vist another planet like Jupeter we could get a lot of information.

Score: 3