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"I have a dream" that one day driverless cars will outnumber the amount of drivers on the roads (Martin Luther King Jr.). Most accidents caused today are by human error, not by the car. Many people do not focus, nor do they always have the right capabilities to be drving in the first place. Having driverless cars can create a safer environment and better road conditions for many.

The amount of people that get hit or run over becasue of lack of attention from the driver is not even numberable. Many people text and drive when it is unneccesary which causes more accidents than needed; however, with a driverless car, that is not the case. With the technology of the driverless cars today, they "[use] laser beams to form a constatnly updated 3-D model of the car's surroundings" (Driverless Cars Are Coming, Paragraph 4). This increases the safety not only for the driver but unaware pedestrians as well.

Sleepiness is an unknown feeling for driverless cars. Since there is no person driving, sleep or rest is not needed. The advantage of this is that someone who may work late or are simply just exhausted from a hard days work will not have to risk his/her life on the road. Falling asleep at the wheel can cause not only an accident for one's self, but it can also cause an accident for many other drivers as well. However, if the driver is in control at the time, driverless cars may have "cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road" (Driverless Cars Are Coming, Paragraoh 7). All precautions will be taken so no one gets injured.

Now, not only can driverless cars increase safey, but they can also decrease tiredness and stress. No one truly loves driving for many hours at once. It ends up becoming boring, and eventually one would get tired of staring at the road all day. However, with driverless cars, there would be no more worry on planning out whos turn it is to drive next. Inventors are even trying to come up with fun "in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays" (Driverless Cars Are Coming, Paragraph 8). Road trips could be more enjoyable than ever before.

In conclusion, driverless cars can relieve stress and tiredness, reduce accidents, and can possibly keep one entertained for hours. Even though there are times that the driver must be on his/her guard, the driverless car mostly does all the work letting the driver stay at ease and relax. There is a long way to go before any big advancements in this type of technology can be made, but it is possible, and it can change the world forever.

Score: 4