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First, the author begin talking about Venus, the things we should know, but the challenge place is to examine more closely. Also the author says that is referred to as Eart's "twin", and is very similar in size and, is ogaerur planetary neighbor, the thick atmosphere, the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, our sister planet is so inhospitable.

Then, the author talks about the thick atmosphere and

that is more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.Also talks about our planet surface, and atmospheric avarege over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, fainly they says that these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.He says that are not esasy conditions but the NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. And also Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.

Last the author is ending with a refection, they says that is a challenge go to Venus, and how this option is value,and he also says how human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors, last how our imagination and innovation are doing us exploring the Earth and the moon. "Striving to meet the challege presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."

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