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The article is write about the exploring of the Venus. Venus, here is a nick name call "Evening Star", it is the brightest point of light when you see on the surface. In the solar sysyem, Venus is the second planet from the sun, and it is the cosest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and lot of thing too, its referred like "twin" as Earth.

In space terms, there is no singal spaceship has touched down Venus in more than three decades, because of the each previous misson was unmanned and since no spacecraft survived the landing for a few time. there is one reason is because of the Venus atmosphere is thick and it almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, so that would be a challenging to the human.

Also, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in solar system with out Sun. Either the Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking on Venus surface. Solar power not would be plentiful. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.

The challenge of meet to Venus has value, because of the human curiosity will likely lead human into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be danger and doubts.

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