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Having a computer that can tell the emotions of an individual in the classroom would be a very valuable asset. The computer would be able to read the expressions on a students face, which ends up helping the entire class. It would help teachers know what they need to change or modify for the over all success and understanding of their students. It also allows for the teacher to know if his(her) students are understanding the work given to them. This also allows for the teachers to understand more of how the students feel throughout the lessons given.

In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" the developers of this facial recognition tell how the computer is able to recognize the expressions of the individual sat in front of it. When the student becomes disinterested, bored, or confused the computer is able to modify the lesson like a true human instructor would. This engages the students and also helps relieve the stress of confusion. Having these computers creates a better and more engaged classroom. The teachers benefit as well, being able to use the information given from these computers to assess their teaching and then edit or tweak the lessons to better fit the learning styles of his(her) class.

These computers will be able to change the environment of a class and the people inhabiting the class. Once a classroom that was boring and tense can change to a brighter and well-rounded classroom, due to the facial recognition. The lessons will become easier and many students that were once struggling could end up growing and learning more than they ever imagined they would. The students become more involved in the lessons and excitement for what is taught is most likely to occur. The teachers would also be relieved from some stress because they wouldnt have to worry about whether or not their students are engaged and understanding what is given to them. Giving computers that can recognize the emotions of the students and peers around it, would be extremely beneficial to the classroom.

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