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Do you think you could suvive in another planet like Venus? Well, in the article "The Callenge of Exploring Venus" it tells us all about how the Earth and Venus are similar and different. The author thinks that even though Venus doesn't have easy conditions to ive in, it a survivable place for humans.

In paragraph 3, the author states, "...temperatures average pver 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience." That would be extremely hard to live in, almost impossible. However, If people were to go 30 plus miles above the ground in Venus, it would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. In paragraph 5, its states, "...the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exced Earth levels."

In the end, it is suvivable for humans but, I would not want to live there. It would be so hot and nothing to do really. I think i would be really go for NASA to have some astronuats go and explore it since they would be able to survive.

Score: 2