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Hi, i'm Luke and I think that you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can visit many place while on your trip.According to the passage "I toured an excavted castle in Crete. I marvled Panama Canal on my way to China.Look at all the adventure you can take while going on the Seagoing Cowboys program.

Did I mention that I went to Greece. You might not be convince yet, but

i'm going to give you more detils on all the adventures you can take.I made nine trips that was more than any Seagoing Cowboy. You can think of it as a vaction.Like I did you can also find time to play games and things when you get back.It can also open up the world to you and you can explore things that you you never thought you could in your life.

That is all I have to offer. Now it's up to you. Being on the program can make your life open up and you could see brighter brighter days. You can have many admires as you want. This your opportunity. You only get one and I think you should take it

cause not may people can get this oportunity. Make the right decision and join the Seagoing Cowboys program.Have a nice trip Seagoing Cowboys.

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