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I think we should study venus even if there is some dangers to it. we should study venus because we can learn alots of things about the plant that we have not learned yet.

In the aricle it says venus used to be earth like this means their was oceans and someone had to be living their. Which means it still has some of those things and that means humen might be able to sarive there. venus is the second plant from the sun which this means it's very hot in the aricle it said it 800 degres 90 times greater then earth.this means humens can't deal with this type of heat. and the groud would be very hot a car can't just drive on the tires would mealt they would need to make special type of viecle.and for that to happen they need to study the plant closely and figure what they should do.

you might ask if it has all of thase things humen can'y surive in why would we even condsire visting

to venus. it's still earth like stuff like moutains and valleys. this means humens can probbaly vist there and for that to humen they need to do expermints like puting "chember simulating the chaos of venus surface and have lasted for three weeks in such coditions".which means they would need to make new techology becasue old ones would not work.

In conclusion we should study venus more and we should not me scared of the dangers of it who know we might find something that could be useful for our lifes maybe one we can go there. but we should never stop being curiois about the plant.

Score: 3