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we shouldn't use this techlogy to our students because we shouldn't know what your feelings our because thats our priviacy. the only people who should be able to use this technology is our consoulers, and our doctors. This will show them what we are feeling and they could find ways to help us.

The reason why we should use this is that it will help us cut down all the sucides and will help us make a lot more people happy. We would be ableto get helped in different ways then we do already now. this is a new piece of technolgy that could help our world in a big way but the only way we should only be able to use this is if the parents of the or the child if eighteen sign the waiver to tell us we can use it on them. This is a new thing that could help us in school and with everyone who needs help.

The reason why we need this is to help us get more with people trying to endanger them and to make sure everyone can feel better. We can always get help and do everything we can to make sure we have our students to know if we are cinfused or bored on what they are learning. This will help our world out big time and help every student to get better in school.

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