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Absolutely Yes, you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Why? Because it helps living animals and creatures. Livings things that me and you see every day. So you may be thinking why would I want to do this? Or why should I do this or maybe even what is in it for me? Well, I'm just going to answer those questions with one word,HAPPINESS! You might not know what I'm talking about but, you'll catch on later.

So, earlier in the passage you heard about me persuading you to join the (SGCP).

Well, now I'm going to tell you why. You should

join because there are animals such as;horses,young cows,and mules that need your help.There was a World War II in Europe where all these animals lived and they need help. Many of things where destroyed and people and countries where left to ruins. so, 44 nations joined together to make a group/union, called UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). That group hired us the Seagoing Cowboys to take care of the animals.

So, I've giving you details of why and what I'm persuading you to do now I'm going to tell you how helping will be good for them and how it might

bring you happiness afterwards. It might bring you happiness, which it should because you will know that you did something good to help someone or thing else. If you are not happy and feel as if you were used and not getting anything you should stop and think about that because somethings wrong.I say that because you just did something amazing for something that has nothing to do with you which means you clearly have a great heart.

Next, I will be explaining what type of things you will be doing if you join the SGCP. So first of all, if its your turn to be the night watchman or women your job will be to check on the animals every hour. Secondly, the stalls always have to be cleaned, so some one will have to do that. Thirdly ,caring for the animals is a big part also so you have to make sure that the animals are watered and fed two or three times a day.

So you have

heard what I was trying to persuade you to do and why. Next you heard why you should do what i was trying to persuade you to do. Third you heard how helping will make you happy and help someone/thing else.

Fourth what type of things you will be doing if you help. Then, lastly all the details from each pragraph. Now you know why I want you to join the SGCP.

Score: 4