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'' Why You Should Join the Seagoing Cowboys''

You should join Seagoing Cowboys, because you get to all over the world and you might not be able to do that if you don't join.Joining is more then just an adventure it made me see the world in a different way.Also you are helping our country and many more.UNRRA hired us to take care of horses, young cows, and mules.

Also we don't work the whole time we also play games like baseball,volleyball, table tennis tournaments, boxing, fencing, reading,whittling,and much more. We visit other towns, we went to China and Europe. We saw Italy and excvated a castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal.

Working at my Aunt Katie's helped me get prepared for the Seagoing Cowboys.So do have any places where you could prepare for this?

So you should join for reason like you'll get to places that you would not be able to go. You'll be helping our country and other countries.You don't just work the whole time we play games to. It's made me see the world in a different way and

it may make you see it a diffrent way too.

Score: 3