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The author supports the idea that studing Venus is a worthy persuit despite the danger is there's alot going on Venus which we dont know. Venus is close to the Earth , in short term we are neighbor becuause Venus is the closest planet to the Earth in term of density and size. If you to visting or landing in Venus you cant stay there for long, you can only stay for an hour becuase the author said in the text"since no spacecarft survived the landing for more than a a few hour" and also the reason Venus is almost same as Earth.There can also be danger in Venus just like Earth, we have alot of things happened.

Venus has 97% carbon dioxid and the temperature is also higher than Earrth.Venus has 90 times greater than we can experience here our own planet because those condition are far more than anything.What we have on Earth , Venus also has becuause Earth tiwn is Venus and we are close to.Venus is the hottest surface temperature of any out planet even though Mars is the cloest to the Sun.There's also ocean and rock at Venus and Venus also have weather and geology present, just like the Earth have.

In the text the author said "just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin" what the author trying to say is , if you live at Venus then you will feel very hot and feel like your whole body is exposing. Venus is fully cover by large ocean and if you look it , you canonly see blue color.this planet has surface of rocky sediment and alot of familiar features, just like the Earth.

In conclusion venus can sometime our nearest option for a planetry visit, just in case if something happen to the Earth .Acorrding to the text" NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus". Many NASA worker study becuase electronic made of silicon carbide and electrionic is what we need the most at Earth.If we travel on Earth and beyond it shouldnt be danger because venus is mostly like Earth.

Score: 2