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I agree and disagere with The Challenge of Exploring Venus i got becasue i got reasons why we should and sholdn't explore venus.

My frist reason is that we should explore veuns becasue venus is the brightest point of light in night and to spot and its nickname is misleading but back a long time ago it was probably coverd by largely oceans and could had various form of life just like in Earth today.

My second reason is that it is actually a planet in our solar system and is the second plant from our sun and it is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and the closest in distance to earth we should land in venus and study more but it is dangreous.

For my diagare reson is the venus is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric scid in venu's atmosphere and its surface temperatuers are average over 800 degrees fahrentheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what they experience on our planet no thats a lot and dangreous.

MY second disagre is that is it over 800 degrees and it is the hottest temperature and that it is a challenging planet for humans to study they examine more closely they sent a machine to last long but with the tempuarture

and they cant take rocks or gas from a far distance and we are looking back at old technology called conditions computers

Venus is the nerset option for a vist but we have to extaime it more and closely it has to be safe and scientificaly reductive amd of course it is closer to earth and it is a planet and a long time ago it was almost like earth but its tempuarte is higer ut sicentice are studying machines to survive long in venus.

Score: 2