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The way in which the author had describe Venus was to get the feeling of knowing how it would look like and how it works. Venus has so much for it to become like earth. It does and it is really hot because it is the 2nd planet from the sun. Venus has parts in which there is very bad storms from how close it is from the fun and not have life there. NASA are trying to find out more about what is really going there.They will soon be able for people to go there someday and also explore Venus. When NASA people go up there, they aren't able to bring anything back like rocks,gas,etc. There is still many risk being taken for this kind of situation because of how bad it is. Venus Many be soon another earch where you can able to visit. NASA has been studing Venus for a long time close when World War ll was going on and computers have once came out. I do think that now that there is more technology they will keep advancing more to the point in which they can soon have people going threw Venus and having to stay there. I this such a great idea that they are not being able to do more and having that chance of going to Venus and making it like Earth. The more that people get to study about Venus the more it would be possible for them to go there and help out with NASA. NASA still has a ways to go annd many resources they would need to make Venus a once of a good of a place. Yet there will be so much heat in Venus and many people won't be able to survive that so they would take the risk, since it is close to the sun.I do think that someday it will be possible for Venus to become another home like Earth but there is still so much to fix around Venus. If there was ever live there , there will have everything flying around like cars that would fly much higher then a airplane/ jet. Everythign will of couse not be the same but I do think that evrythign will trunout how it is suppose to because they mostly every equipment that they would need to stay alive there in Venus. This is why it would a challenge for anyone to visit Venus right now.

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