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Earth got a twin? yes Earth does have a twin called Venus. Venus is a place where you wouldn't want to be living right now. In fact, they could be dangerous in many ways. venus was a place to live before according to the autuhor they said "long ago,Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various form of life" basically what the author is trying to say is that as earth we have water and have life and so did venus but later on that had changed.

Venus can be dangerous in many ways. some of the ways are that Venus is so hot that the tempeture is about to 800 degrees fahrenheit and the pressure is about 90 times worse than what earth has. on the article the author said "temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenhiet, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experince on our own planet". this quotes tells me how hot it is and how bad it will be if we end up living in venus.

also even though mercury is closer to the sun, Venus is still hotter than any other planet. The author said

"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though mercury is closer to our sun" basically what the author is trying tp say is Mercury is not hotter than Venus even though its closer to the sun.

Another important point is that Venus has a bad weather. according to the author they said "Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface" basically what this is trying to say is they have more bad weather than what Earth does. when youre on earth you barely get any earthquakes or lighning strikes, we do get them but it is not as bad as if it was on Venus.

In conclusion, i think we shouldn't really mess with venus because even if we try to find a way to live on there it woudnt work. if we were to live in venus everyone will die of heat,hunger because if the heat is way to hot than there will be no vegtables, fruits or animals. and if there isnt none of that than we wont eat and we will die. why bother some place where there no living and we will end up dying. but they could investigate more about venus.

Score: 3