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I do not think that having a 'Facial Acrion Coding System' in a classroom would be helpful. I simply believe if a student wants to learn properly then they will change their attitude instead of keeping it plain, mad, or sad. If someone wants to do something they will and their emotion will change. If they have fun in what they are doing then their mood will change into a more positive one. It all depends on what they want to do or are doing.

It could be helpful by seeing if students are happy or not but maybe if somebody is not showing their emotions then they just want to keep it to themselves. Sometimes students' just do not feel well and they act happy so no one will ask them what is wrong. Maybe they just are plain and smile just to get others into a good mood. Some students' will also keep things in their mind that they do not want others to know so they do not bother them. They should talk about things that get them into such a mood with others, and sometimes they are not given that opertunity to take the chance and talk with someone for help. Sometimes they just have to sit there.

The emotions of students should not be detected by a robotic mecagnism and be told that their mood is, like how Mona Lisa's is, 83 percent happy, 9 disgusted 6 fearful, and 2 percentile angry. Students should be able to tell their own emotions and not need to have 'FACS' tell them how they feel. The machine could get it wrong and they could completely have a change of emotions. They also could feel less comfortable knowing that someone or something else knows how they feel. Again, they might not want anybody or anything to know how they feel.

It is always okay to express emotion and hide them. I feel that having 'FACS' in a classroom would also be a breach of privacy because. People may not want to share how they feel. So this is why having a 'Facial Action Coding System' in a classroom would not be helpful because it may make the situation that they are in worse. They may be trying to ignore it their situation that they are in because they may be trying to forget this temporary problem.

Score: 3