Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Am atgument form Jukes poiny of view convincing others to participaye in the seagoing Coewboys programe.

The text states

states that Luke Bonbugher had not idead thast his life woulld change soon after his high school graduation, He was working two part time jods one is in a gracery staore and a bank,He knew it was an apportunity of a lifetime.

The passage states that,It was 1945,World War teo was over in Eurpoe,and many contries werer left in ruins.The text also statses thst even seagoing cowboys to take care of the horses,youngcown.and mules that were shipped overseaes.Luke and on signed up.

THis passage is talking abot how Luke and Don where toghther all the time and they used rto great and fun things to do when Lurk turned 18 before arviving in Greece,They got their SS Charles W.Wooster.

A reason to join this game is. u get to do fun things with for friends or whoever u are with in the game and i think the game would be fun bacuse u get to explor.

Score: 2