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Today, I will disguse why people should goin in the "Seagoing Cowboys" program. I will be talking about, how you could have fun, make friend's, and see place's you've never seen befor.

First, You could go place's you'e never been befor, you could try new food's that you neve had tasted.

Next, It also give you chance of to make new friend's. You coould also get a chance to try new food's, why you are there.

Lastly, You will get to sail on the ocean, as never befor, you can go site seeing with other peole that you have meet.

It will be fun because, you will get to see "Europe, Greece, China, and so many more". You could make friend's on the ship, as you are working. It will also be good because, you could show other people around just like Luke did. You could

take "Gondola" ride's in Venice, Italy which is a city with streets of water. The claim is that, over all you would have fun and the world could open up to you, as Luke said " I'm grateful for this opportunity, it made me more aware of people of the other countries, and their need's. In conclusion, this esay explain why you should goin the "Seagoing Cowboys", and how you could make friend's, have fun, and see place's you've never seen. It can also, give you an opportunity to open up to the world. Also, if alduts or teenagers want to help, and make a diffrence this program could help.

Score: 3