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Venus may be the most brightest points of light in the night sky, but it is the most fascinating planet. Venus, also known as the "Evening Star," has many interesting facts including how it is Earth's like twin. Which because of that has various forms of life and is the nearest option for planetory visits.

Venus is the second planet closest to the Sun but is also the closest to Earth. Either in terms of density and size. Venus has various forms of life which include valleys, mountains, and craters. Althogh Venus is the nearest option for planetory visits there are many dangers to those who travel there.

On Venus' surface, the "temperatures travel average over 800 degrees faherheit, adn the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our planet." Even with the dangers, NASA is working through ways to still examine this amazing planet. NASA has certain jet airplanes that can travel in high altutides which hopefully will allow them to float above Venus and stay out of its way.

Venus, yes has many dangers, but with the right equipment it is surviable for humans. With our fast growing technology, astromomers will soon be able to explore Venus and its fascinating ways.

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