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The development of driverless cars is a good thing. Reasons why driverless cars will be better than cars fully driven by humans include gas usage would be lower and accident would occur less often due to sensors and built in entertainment devices turning off unlike cell phones.

The first reason why driverless cars would be better than human driven cars is gas usage, in paragraph one it says Google cofounder Sergey Brin foresees a car that would use half the fuel of today's taxies and offer far more flexibility than a bus. Lower gas usage means the world would be able to keep using the same fuel resources for longer before we have to start looking for alternatives to power cars.

The second reason why driverless cars would be better than human driven cars is saftey. In paragraph 4 it says "The sensors in driverless cars create a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings" this means that the car will be able to sensor things and avoid them that the driver might not be able to see or react to as fast as a computer. In paragraph 8 it says "entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can turn off instantly when the driver needs to take over something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern"

the displays that would keep drivers entertained while waiting to drive could be instantly shut-off and then put the driver in charge a person using a cell phone isnt shut off and is a constant danger while driving.

In conclusion driverless cars are a good idea because they will be safer on the road and less expensive in the long run as they shouldnt crash as often or use as much fuel as cars driven by humans do now.

Score: 3