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I am against driverless cars and here are my thoughts on this topic. The manufacturing company hasn't fuly developed these car advancements like the car still cannot function properly around construction sites and accidents. I am against driverless cars for reasons such as the manufactures of the company are worried that drivers still need to pay attention and they want to install cameras to watch the owner of the vehicle I believe that would be an invasion of personal time and space. (In paragraph 7) Such things are listed to get the drivers attention incase of the fact that car can not handle something ahead.

I believe from the facts given that this car is not yet ready for the world or the bumpy roads ahead considering the fact that it says the car could still get out of control or technology could have a malfunction. (In paragraph 5) It says that sensors have been developed and tested if something was to have these sensors go off and the car were tobreak and let's say soemone wasnt secure something could happen that would end in injury.

The humans today are greedy as well something could go wrong and they could sue the company for a lot of money. To me this sounds like these driveless cars still need to let the drivers do the work. (In paragraph 9) It says in some states that it's not even legal in Claifornia, Nevada, and Florida. This

just shows even our authority doesn't think they are safe yet.

Score: 2