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The author says "Venus, sometimes called the "Evening Star", is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky". Almost refering to it being one of the best plant to work on or examine. At lest couple os astronaunts have been to many planets including Venus. The only problen there is, is landing safety. Venus is kindd of like the twiin of earth because it had water and air to breathe just like we do down here in Earth. It just couldn't resist all the water and air.

Vensus also has mountins, valley, and rocky surface. They had said that they would allow scientific machines go on Venus and do some research on the plante. Also being able to take pictures and video to have proven facts about Venus. The machines could also have told us more about that planet and how it's like Earth.

More people woulld obviously use computers to fin dmore and powerful facts about Venus but with maybe just the old computer, because using modern compuer would kind of just have simple information. What people need is more powerful news and information. Plus having a modern computer could bring up virus and could just freeze or delete the whole information you have figured out. That's why Venus is a sfe place to go or for professional people to go visted also thinkiing about it it's like Earth twin.

Score: 2