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Using technology to read someones emotions is not valuable. Computers dont understand people like people understand people. Having technology in the classroom wouldn't teach anyone anything about how to read emotions. The technology can't read peoples emotions like we can. We know the emotions better than the technology people want to use.

If the technology can use math as a way to read emotions than we could do it too. People dont want to use math to read emotions, they want to use their instinct. Humans know human emotions better than anything else. If someone is around that technology who is sad and wants to hide that saddness, then the tech will read that and will tell everyone.

I strongly disagree with technology being made to read emotions. I also strongly disagree with putting that tech in schools where people dont want others to know they are sad. In conclusion we should not create the technology to read a humans emotions.

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