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Imagine a world were a every student can go to school feeling safe and excited to learn. Most schools do not have the right fundings to provide the best education for our students. A lot of students are afriad to go to school fearful of other students. A new software that has been developed can detect the emotions of others. This technology should be brougth into classrooms to read students' emotional expressions because it can detect when a student is sad or in need of help.

Although we want our schools to be the saftest place for our students, in some cases it is not. Some students experience bullying and are too afriad to tell an adult. Instead of telling an adult, that student "puts on a happy face" so that no one gets suspicious. In paragraph 8, the author states, "Faces dont lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a 'smiling' politician or celebrity isn't being truthful." If the FACS can detect a fake smile in a lying politician then it can detect a fake smile in sadden child who is being bullied in school. With this, we can reach out to the student and offer help so that the bullying does not continue.

Another advantage to the FACS is how it can improve a students learning enviroment. Every student learns differently. Some understand things more than others. Dr, Huang states that, "A classrom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored so it could modify the lesson." Most teachers do not recognize when a student is struggling. With this, a student can get the right materials they need inorder to understand everything better and improve their eduction.

Therefore the FACS should be introduced into classrooms to read students' emotional expressions so it can detect when a student is in need of help in any way. This technoloy is very beneficial for students and can help improve their learning enviroment. The FACS can make our schools safer and more educational for our students and thats all we should ever want.

Score: 4