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Young people of this generation just sit on the couch and wach t.v or on their phones all day, not one of them want to explore because they're scared. Well i say" live for the day!" Only because you don't know whats gonna happen tomarrow.

Join the "Seagoing Cowboys", you can travel to Europe China and more, plus for some kids you can be drafted in the military service(thats a good way to start something after high school).If you still think it's not fun you get to play games like volleyball or tennis fencing and all on the boat.If you like animals then you can take care of the cattel or horses.

A boy named Luke joined and he loved it he had fun and he saw China,Euope,andCrete.Luke stated that he was grateful for the opportunity, and it made him aware of other people in other countries needs, so his family became host for international student and exchange visitors for many years.

So come join to be a "Seagoing Cowboy" it's

be a once in a life time experiance that can change your life for the good (it changed Luke's life).

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