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Would you ever want to live on an planet that only stays hot every day. That is the second planet that lives closer to the sun. Sometimes called the "Evening Star," is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Then this story should grabe your intrest. Studying Venus is an worthy pursit despite the dangers.

The heat at Venus is a real life problem. "On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet(3)." For example, this can cause masive heat strokes if a human arives at Venus because our bodys would not be able to handeal it. "Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun(3)." For example, you would not know how to suvive if you would to go here.

Why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface. "Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system(4)." For example, how would they know that its the most Earths like planet with out giving an interview with other people."Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel(4)." If scientists would of made space travel then more people would come back to earth sick and hungry because of the heat temperature.

How is NASA going to be an impact in this study of Venuse. "NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus(7)." For example, this can be a huge impact over a lot of people lives because what if this can be a dangers planet and some of the scientists had messed up on their research then whats going to happen next. "NASA’s possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray(5)." For example, this would be back because if you are floating above Venus you would not feel the heat.

Studying Venus is an worthy pursit despite the dangers."On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet(3)." "Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun(3)." "NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus(7)."

Score: 3