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The author of the article states that "Earth's twin, Venus. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionaly the closest in distance too." But the fact that Venus is close to the Sun make it difficult to be suitable for humans even though the planet is also close to Earth "Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us".

The issue that "Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world (venus) and not spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours" explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Venus has temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the athospheric pressure is 90 times greater that what we experience on our own planet. The author gives all of this information in order for us to evalute and understand that Venus have difficulties to be explored and to live in.

But what would happen if our planet one day stop being suitable for human live? Which would be our new home? Scientistics prove that Venus can be sometimes our nearest option for a planetary visit. "Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was propably covered with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth" This sentence prove that Venus may not be as dangerous as we think if scientistics give a close look and study the land closely. "Today Venus has some features that are analogous to those on Earth".

Despite it dangerous of going and explore Venus land. The author state that is not impossible to go and explore our neighbor planet. NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Scientistics said that if modern technology can't do a lot surviving in the high temperatures on Venus they will use old technology such as the machines that were used in World War II."Another project is looking back to and old technology called mechanical compurers." Modern computers are enormously powerful but when it comes to extreme physical conditions they are not very flexible in contrast with old technology. "Old technology devices..make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all"

Like the author says "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangerous and doubts but should be explanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation" So, human curiosity should give a chance to old machines and try to make a second Earth. Who knows if in 10 years or so we would need a ew planet to live in?...

Score: 4