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The Author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. There's many unknown plants and other objects in the universe that humans haven't studied yet. So why not get knowlegde from the universe and get to know it better.

In studying theres always curiosity, or wanting to know more things. Even traveling, but there's always a "but" or "what if ". In paeagraph 5 it says "The National Aerovautics and Space Administration( NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus." In this sentence NASA wants people to got to Venus and study. But Earth and Venus are two different palnts with different pressure levels and oxygen levels. It's not easy to be there but it is "surviable for humans."

The Universe is so much bigger than it is expect. Probably only 5% is explored, and the other 95% is yet to be explored. Earth, Venus, and Mars is known becasue Earth is next to those planets. But what about the other planets? Paragraph 8 " Our traveks in Earth and beyond should not be limited by the dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." Yes, studying Venus is a worthy pursit despite the dangers that can be present.

Score: 2