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I believe the Face is just a natural landform. I disagree that the face is created by aliens. First, the "Face on Mars" has since become a pop icon, so of course there will be fasle information in magazines and etc. Second, What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa landforms common around the American West. Third, Mars Global Surveyor also drew close enough for a second look. When the first time on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera MOC team snapped a picture ten times shaper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, realing.. a natural landform. Like all the others are coomon landforms around the American West. There was no alien monument after all. But not everyone was satisfied yet. Others still not believing there were no alien monument. Prepaps said skeptics, alien marking were hidden by haze. On April 8, 2001, Malin's team captured an ectraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maxumum resolution. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. Garvin also said, "So, if there were obejects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks you could see what they were!" Overall, Mars Global surveyor, Micheal Malin, and his Mars Orbiter Camera MOC team did their job of going back three times and checking about the alien monument skeptics were wondered about.

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