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The reason for Luck Bomberher to join

the UNRRA program so he can help people,take care of the animals and to see different states like China and Europe.The letters UNRRA stand for United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration.Some of the animals he help was a horse,young cows and mules that were shipped overseas.

In the mounth August 1945,they had got a order to report to New Orleans,when they arrived August,14 luke said,the day the Pacific war ended.They got on the ship called the SS Charles W.wooster headed for Greece with 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.One of the most crazy thing is that he had turned 18 on the ship and before he got there.He wanted to be in the military but they told him to stay in the program UNRRA.BY the time he had been discharged in 1947 he made nine trips more than any Seagoing Cowboy.

The cattle boat trips were unbelievable opportunity for the small town boy luke.He said besides helping people he saw China and Europe.But seeing Acropolis in Greece was special,he said. He said so taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,a city with sreeets of water.Luke also toured an exacavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.Luke had to care for them animals and that keep him busy because it took them a month to get to China.He had to feed them and watered them three or two times a day.The dangeres part was night watch he was

coming down the ladder and slipped but a small metal along the edge stopped him from slidding. He said that he cant do that for a couple of days.Luke said that trip opened the world to him.Im grateful for the opportunity,he said.

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