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The Challenge Of Exploring Venus

Venus Is one of our next and closest planets, However Its a very challenging place to examine more closely. Sometimes Earth is closer to Mars and other times we are to Venus beacuse of different speed. Humans have sent a lot of spacecrafts to land at Venus, but no spacecraft survived the landing for more than 2 hours. Thats why its challenging to explore venus.

Venus is a very dangerous planet to explore beacuse temperatures average over 800 degress Fahrenheit. The atmosperic pressure is 90 times greater than what we had experience in earth. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet which means high pressure and heat. If we thought it gets hot around the summer time in earth imagine how hot is in venus on a daily. Since its hot theres weather present additional impediments such as erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strike to probes seeking to land on its surface.

In my conclusions i feel like theres no point on exploring venus. I say that becasue from the stuff that i resd in the article i know that they havent really found good things about It. If they are trying to explore Venus and see of the planet has life they shouldn't because even if there way land who would want to go? Not me Itnwould be too hot to even want too go earth already hot enough. Also the weather

would bad which means we would be risking our life and dying since theres frequent lightning strikes.

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