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Using FACS to read the emotional state of students in a classroom is a bad idea. I think this because this technology has better uses and if a teacher can't tell if a student is bored or confused, they shouldn't be a teacher.

Beginning with, this technology has better uses. Reading a students facial expression seems like such a waste of so much potential. This technology could be out there in courtrooms detecting if someone is practicing perjury or something similar. This could be in interrogation rooms but not our personal devices.

Continuing with, if a teacher can't tell if a student is bored or confused, they shouldn't be a teacher. It is a teachers duty to know if a child is actually learning and if they don't know then they failed at their jobs. Teachers are who make us and if they can't tell that we aren't learning in a way that is beneficial to us, they don't deserve to be a teacher.

In conclusion, I think this because this technology has better uses and if a teacher can't tell if a student is bored or confused, they shouldn't be a teacher.

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