Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
In Luke's point of view, people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program for these reasons.

According to the text ," Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China." The text also states,"The cowboys played baseball and vollyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed." This is two reasons why people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.

The text also states," Table tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time." The text states,"So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water." These are anothor reason why people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.

According to the text,"But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him." This is my last reason why people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.

This is all of my reasons why in Luke's point of veiw, people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.

Score: 3