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I am for driverless cars although I do see some problems that could be adressed when it comes to notifying the driver and ways to keep the driver alert. Also the safety of the car needs to be exactly the same like a regular car. But other than a few "kinks" here and there I think that this could be a great thing for the people who can but can't drive.

My position on driverless cars. My position on driverless cars is that I'm for them although they could have some issues. Like in paragraph seven lines twelve and thirteen I think that the cars should have more than a announcement about them needing to take the wheel. For example what if the driver falls asleep what would happen if the announcement doesn't wake the driver up? It would more than likely result in an accident or even a possible death. Also the price worries me I think the price will be too high for several to afford it making it hard for the people that could really use it to be able to.

There are multiple good sides to this though for example teenagers can drive safer because the car does it for them until they need to manualy take over. For elders who can't see very well or can't drive anywhere this would help them to get to places they need to go for example the grocery store and the pharmacy and the doctors. People would get around much easier and much more efficiently.

So in conclusion there are more good sides than bad ones. Im all for the the developement of these cars. I hope they get out soon. Although I am worried they will be so expensive that barely anyone will be able to afford them.

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