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Join the Seagoing Cowboys

Hello its Luke. I was wondering if you would like to join the seagoing cowboys. I enjoy it very much. You can make a difference in so many peoples lives. The seagoing cowboys are a group of people who help others during the war. We take and bring things overseas.

If you join the cowboys then you will get to go to different places.You will be able to meet new people, some of the people you meet are excellent mentors and friends. While on the cowboys you may be able to go places you will never get the chance to go again.Also the cowboys do what they do for a great cause. We help so many people. The cowboys all started because of the 44 nations who joined together to create the UNRRA. The UNRRA stands for ( The United Nations

Relief and Rehabilitation Administration).The UNRRA hired "Seagoing Cowboys" to take care of the horses, young cows ,and mules that were shipped overseas. Besides helping people you can get the side benefit of seeing and adventuring the place town or city your in.

There are many good reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys. It is a great thing to be a apart of. Other then helping people you get many benefits. So if you have a good heart and like helping people this may be the job for you.I will look forward to seeing you join the Seagoing Cowboys.

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