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The challeange of exploring venus

Study venus is a pursuit to dangers, Venus is the challenging planet to humans because of the diffculties. This planet is one of the closest planet to earth which is also dngerous to earth if anything comes up at anything and we do not find a way to overcomme the challenges in venus it might destroyed the earth. this passage explain to that it is called the "earth twin".

" 97 percent carbon dioxide blanketts cover the venus evedn more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atomosphere" venus also have the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system no human can surive carbon dioxide without oxygen it is one of the hottest planetno xspace crft haver ever landed on the ground.

No livingthings lives on this planet if we caan find a solution to this problem we be one of the greatest achievement that human accomplish on earth. we can also make this planet our planetary, venus is one of the most challenging exploring planet on the slolar system.

if we can find a way to overcome this challenges we should be able to over come all other planet on the solar system challegings this we dont have to worry about this earth twin to affect our own earth. i

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