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People believe that the "Face of Mars" was created by aliens. I say that statement is false. "The Face of Mars" was not created by aliens it is a natural landform. I know this because I work with NASA on this very investigation and I'm here to tell you that it is indeed a fact that the "Face" is a natural landform.

This worldwide phonomenon started with just a picture. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was up on mars roaming around and just with one snap of a picture it got it. This picture was a face that apparently according to the article looked like a "Egyptian Pharoah." NASA thought that the people would love to see this. Indeed they did. Immeditley the picture was on talk shows, radios, newpapers, etc. This picture just became the number one thing in the world. Just by one snap of a camera.

Peopel may say that,"that's just your opinion," or maybe just a rolling-your-eyes look. But, according the the article "Unmasking the Face of Mars," and NASA it a natural landform. When NASA first got he picdture they were stunned but then figured "it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like a Egyptian Pharoah." So, even when they got the picture their first thought was not aliens, it was just a Martian mesa.

"NASA didn't confirm it was not aliens. They didn't even give out any information about it." False again. We (meaning NASA) did give out information about the "Face of Mars" but we didn't give out anything saying it was made by aliens. We gave out information about how it wasn't made by aliens. "What the picture actually shows is the Martain equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West. If something from Earth can even be compared to something form a differnet planet, NASA can hardly believe aliens. One person even said "It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho," says Garvin.

In conclusion to my speech, we here at NASA don't believe the "Face of Mars" was not created by aliens. It's just a natural landform like we have been saying since day 1 of out investigation. Hopefully we have convinced some of you to step out of that "alien phase." But, out of all, we hope you enjoyed listening today. Thank you.

Score: 4