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The author explains fairly well the reasons why we should visit Venus, knowing how inhospitable it is. The author uses scientific studies and machinery to support how studies on the planet can be done. I too believe that it is possible to study Venus despite the harsh conditions.

On reason why we should study Venus is to learn more about its past. The author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" explains that Venus has terrain that resembles ours. The author says, "The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mointains, and craters." The author also explains that Venus most likely had large oceans that covered most of the planet and could support wild life. Although now, the author describes Venus with, "...the hottest sruface temperature of any planet in our solar system..." and "Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediment like erupting valcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes..." Another reason why we should visit Venus is because of its proximity to Earth. Because Venus is close, we are able to send more probes and exploration ships. All we need to do is to figure out how to collect data from Venus. One solution that NASA has is to have scientists float thirty miles above the planets surface. At this height, the temperature will be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit and radiation wouldn't be higher than that on Earth. Another pro about hovering above the planet would be that he pressure would be abut the same as that of Earth's sea level. From that hieght we would have to send probes that could withstand the atmosphere on Venus. One way to do taht is to send electronics tat are made of silicon carbide. Electronics made with this have been tested, and it was found that they could last abouth three weeks on Venus. Another way to collect data is to use mechanical computers instead of electronic computers. These computers do math with gears and levers and would be able to last longer. All of this evidence supports that it is possible to study Venus.

Throughout the article, both the author and I believe it is worth it to study Venus. The author has compelling arguments on why it is possible, such as hovering over venus, using silicon carbide electronics, and using mechancal computers. The evidence used in the article is sound and plausible to occur.

Score: 3