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In 1976 a photo was taken by a Viking of a shape on Mars.To some the shape looks like a face,but to me it is just a natural landform.Research has been done over many years trying to figure out what the shape is on the face of Mars.In belief that it was just a natural landform,in 1998 another picture was taken of the figure.Michael Malin and his MOC team flew over Cydonia for the first time and snapped a picture ten times better than the original picture.

The image appeared on a JPL web site and showed that the shape actually was a natural landform.This proved that no aliens monument was on the face of Mars,but not everyone was satisfied with the outcome of the image.Do to the clouds the landform was not clearly seen in the image taken in 1998.People wanted to see a better image to have a better belief in the landscape on Mars.Mission controllers prepared to take another look at the figure for a third time.

In 2001 there was a cloudless summer day in Cydonia.Mars Global Surveyor went close enough to take a second look of the figure.The spacecraft had to be rolled 25 degrees to center the shape in the field view.Malin's team had captured the most extraorrdinary image usig the camera's maximum resolution.The pixels in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters proved the theory that the shape was just a natural landform common around the Amarican West.And finally after 28 years of going to Cydonia we found the truth of the landscape shape on the face of Mars.

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