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One of the biggest part of a human are feelings. Why? It is because we always feel something all the time. Whether it may be happiness, sadness, anger, or whatever basic feeling. Everyone does no matter what age. At a young age, we like to show emotions to get attention such as crying at the store because your mom didn't buy you candy. As you start to age, feelings start to get more personal. Have you ever wanted something that you are working for but someone else gets it? What would you tell them? "Congratulaions" or "That should've been mine". Yea I would go with the respectable one. What if they really knew how yo felt with computer technology? Well now one of the latest developments of Thomas Huang & Nicu Sebe is software to reval and tell what a person is feeling.

This is defenitly a huge innovation when it comes to technololgy. But will it benifit? In the artical, it states how a student will feel in a classroom if they are bored or confused. That is the part that the technology should not be involved. If we use on the students and they feel "bored" or "confused", will the technology be advanced enough to tell the reason why? What if the student had personal reasons to feel that way and it's not because of school. Family issues, sickness, depression, even the students around them influencing the feeling. Another thing is how will the teachers have control of it? WIll they have responsible use or use it with power? Therefore this type of technology should not be in a classrom.

As the years go on, technology will always inovate one way or another. It will influence the way life on Earth is. Technology is now a big part of our lifes but we must find ways to inovate it and benifit others physicly but not personaly. Putting more technololgy in the schools and to tell feelings and emotion is not a good step for public schools.

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