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In " the challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. In the article it states that due to the harrsh environment of Venus from anything here on Earth it's more then likely to be able to explore the twin planet of Earth, Venus. They'll need to create a vehicle able to maintain itself in Venus.

By hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly

ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, but the temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of the sea level here on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.

Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography

and researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else. So giving the chance of making something strong enough to sustain Venus will be a longshot.

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