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The advantages of limiting car usages is that it lowers green house gases, less traffic, and a reduction in enviromental problems.

By lowering green house gases our enviroment will be better. Less lung porblems or other desieses. fresher air and less enviromental problems like global warming. Even smog in Paris or Beijing, even China.

No traffic to worry about, no lights to stop at for 10 minutes. The only thing that could make you late for work or school would be you walking to slow or taking a transit or subway. Also, people will be fined for parking in the wrong area, making people want to drive less.

A reduction in enviromental problems. Like, global warming or green house gases. less trees would be cut down for parking lots or paved streets.

The advantages to limiting car usage would be that it lowers green house gases, less traffic, and a reduction in enviromental problems. Such as global arming, green house gases, and smog.

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