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The author supports his idea to further study Venus very well and I will show you how. The author supports his idea by giving different things NASA and other countries have down to explore the planet, but he also helps introduce the reader to the planet in the first paragraph.

The author starts by giving different facts about the planet including the following "Venus sometimes called the Evening Star, is one of the brightest points in the sky, making it simple for even an amatuer stargazer to spot." this is from the first paraghraph and even though it may not seem like he supported his idea he introduced the planet to the reader, which in turn helps the reader to understand the planet a bit more. He also explains how human beings have been fascinated by it with the following from paragraph 2 "Earth,Venus,and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner_in space terms_humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world." also there is this from paragraph 4 "If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing further visits to its surface? Astronomers are fascinated by Venus becuase it may have well once been the most Earth-like planet in our solor system". this is proving that for decades humans have been fascinated by this gas cloud-draped planet. He also explains that NASA is trying to figure out ways to get to the surface safely in paragraphs 5&7 with the following "NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been teseted in achamber simulating the choas of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions." this is really some compelling information. This information really helps set the tone that we just might be able to study Venus's choatic surface.

I think that the author really supports his idea with all of the infromation provided even though this mission might seem impossible people like this author s trying to keep the hope alive. The author explains how NASA is trying so many different technologies to try and send them to the surface, also while trying to figure out if scientist could try and hover over the planet while studying the planet from the outside. There you have it so many ways this author supports his idea that there is still hope for studying Venus.

Score: 4