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This passage is talking about cars an how it's polluted. Then how we "diving ban to clear the air of the global city."(10)How many cars are on the roads?

"Almost 4,000 divers were fined, according to the Reuters. Twenty-seven people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine."(12) "That's easier to imagine than a car-free Champs-Elysees."(13) "congestion was down 60% in the capital of France,after five-days of intensifying somg. Rivaled Beijing,china,which is kown as one of the most polluted cities in the world."(14)

The gasoline that was blamed was diesel fuel."Since France has tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67% of vechicles in France. Compared to a 53.3% averagof diesel engines in the rest of Westen Europe,according to Reuters."(16)

"Car-free dayis spinning into a big hit in Bogota."source(3)Millions of Colombians hiked,biked,skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday,leaving the streets of this of capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams."(20) To me that's a good idea. With only buses and taxis permiited for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. This goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violattors faced $25 fines.

The End of Car Culture. Out of  all that I care about what's going on in the world. We all should this is a place we live,breath,eat,sleep nad play on. Do the right thing try to make a differentes in the world around you."With all these changes,people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit."(36)

Finally I think sould happen peolpe should stop polluting the air that we need to breath. Because it's harmful to atomhisphare. If that gose we all will go with it. Everyone should do something nice for are mother earth. Witout  her we all wouldn't be here today. How much do you care about her?

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