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The danger of the development of driveless cars is a terrifying thought. Car accidents can cause a plentiful amount of tramatic disorders like PTSD, sleep insolmnia ,and night terrors. On some occations people that are involved car accidents never want to be in a moving vechicale again. Driveless cars would run on computers. Computers can short or glitsh on occasion every device glitshes.

When childeren are young they don't think about the danger of being around a moving vechical. A driveless car would be running off of sensors and cameras. There could very well be a toddler running out in the middle of the road and the camera doesn't catch it and the sensors glitch the only outcome is either a dead child or a severly injured child. Teenagers will be in cars drinking and think they won't have to worry about driving then there breaks lock up on a patch of gravel that they didn't know was there next thing you know teeengers get killed in a car accident. If something goes wrong it wouldn't be the drivers fault,privacy and things like tickets wouldn't exist.

Youre giving away youre privacy and location. Anyone will be able to tell were you've been, how long you were there, and where you went after that. Kids, parents, spouses and the government all will know or will be able to find out. Who you are with and when you when and got them. What you have when you got in the car and what you had when you got out.

Why would you want to put your life or your childerens like into the wires of a computer. The risks of putting not just yourself but the people around you in jeopordy because a car that drives itself. Computers can't be trust with the lifes of people. Peoples location will always be known and so will peoples buisness.

Score: 3