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What do you think is more fun going to defernt contries or spending time with aniamals or if niether of those is fun enough how about playing difernt games in your free time when your a Seagoing Cowboy you do all of those.The Seagoing Coyboys program is really fun. If you like to try things new then this is for you. You get to meat new people, also you get to see new things. If you love animals, such as horses,young cows, and mules you get to take care of them too. The thing is though you take all of these over sea. You will have so much fun and you will never be bored from working or injoying time with other people.

If you are a small-town boy or girl like I was its way better then working at banks or what ever you do for a living , this is way better. I loved helping people but if that wasnt enough then I also got to See Europe and China. Try new foods, see new art and meet new poeple. Also taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. If you wouldent enjoy that then we got toured an excavated castle in crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China. That was one of my favorite times and I had so much fun. Not only do we do all that we had enough free time to play games such as, baseball and volleyball, table-tennis, fencing,boxing,reding, and whittling to pass the time that we had. Like I said you always have something to do and plenty of people to enjoy it with.

But it wasent all ways fun and games it opened the world for me. It made me aware of how lucky were are. Seeing all those other states or contries have what we dont. How much we take for grante. Next time i will be the person telling you to come with me to Europe on a cattle boat. Dont miss you time to go. I am very greatful for this opportunity and when its your turn dont miss out.

Score: 3