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Venus is one of the planet in our solar system.The most closet to planet to

located beside earth.And it's so close to earth that we can see it's with our own naked eyes.The earth and Venus has a long history since the damn of the human civilzation, throught out the human history.It's an instercting place to study,since it's similar to earth.But there are some difficulites,when it comes to explore Venus, which wolud be a great challanging.

One of the proble with the Venus is,it's has a thick astmosphere fill with carbon,highly acidic cloud and burning temperature to melt metal.And it's a extreme condition to form a life.On the other hand,Venus once use to form ocean and organism.It's have a similar geographic structure to earth.Because of those dengrous risk,there are some concern to sent space craft to sent to Venus.However scientist

still have a plan to sent

to observe Venus furthermore,to explore from a safe distance.According to passage,some of the space craft can only survive up to 3 week.There are an alternative to use some of the design material from a useful old computer from 19centuries if it's require to study Venus if it's in emergency.A material from old computer can be helpful,which could be capable to stand agaist extreme physical force,unlike the new modern computer.It's will be worth it to study Veneus,despite it's rick:there will be alot of benefical when it come to studying Venus.Look no furthermore,even the author approve that some of the information from the result

of studying Venus would be helpful to scientist.And some of the thing from venus,such as rock and soil could be use as an evidence to study the venus and the abilities of human capablities of doing imposible thing from scartch.Venus could be a great place to visit at some poin if the technologies are well developed.It's could be build into a gigantics space travel station at some point.

In conclusion,doing a mission to Venus is difficult and challinging.But there are some hope to for the human to over come that challanging.And just like the space has no boundries,our capablitie of effort will have no limit as long as we keep trying.We will keep expandind our space discoveries beyond the imigination.There is no way of going back!

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