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Venus or better known as the "Evening Star" is a fascinating planet. Venus is the closest planet to Earth. Even though no human has had the chance to step foot or experience life on Venus, the evidence gathered from spacecraft it much like our Earth we live on today. Despite the dangers Venus brings, the study of this planet is much more interesting,

As following, like previously stated, Venus is Earth's "twin brother". As evidence in paragraph two it states, "Often referred to as Earth's "twin", Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too". Research proves that Venus maybe used to be just like the way Earth is today. For example in paragraph four the author states, "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." Venus is the second planet away from our sun so life on Venus will be much more diffucult than life on Earth.

Although these planets have much in common, they also have differences and reasons why life can't be lived on Venus. The reasons behind that , like stated in the third paragraph, "A thick atmosphere of almost ninety-seven percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus". That means we are left with three percent of oxygen that will not be able to substain a human's life. In addition, the pressure that the planet Venus hold is not substainable for humans. In pragraph three it states, "(...) the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. The conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metal." This research itself explains that living on Venus is much more diffucult than living on Earth.

Even though Venus is the second plant away from the sun the temparatures are excrustriating. Research proves, "On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit (...)". On Earth temparatures will rise no more than 120 degrees, but an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit will cook humans like hotdogs on a grill. Besides the heat and Venus atmospheric pressure the weather Venus experiences is devastating. In paragraph three it states, "Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes probes seeking to land on its surface". No matter the research or things that NASA try to do to make Venus a liveable plantet, economically it's not possible unless you have a death wish.

Finally, in my opinion I agree with the author that the study of Venus is worth it because from this article I was informed on a lot of interesting facts about Venus. Although no human life can be conducted onto Venus the research done on this planet is worth the time, effort, and dedication. Hopefully in the future we can expand our knowlegde and research on Venus.

Score: 4