Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
In the article called "Making Mona Lisa Smile", the author talks about a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System. This system allows computers to identify human emotions by studying the facial features of that person. This is a very valuable piece of technology to have in the classroom.

In Paragraph 6, it says "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored" "Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor". This could easily make test scores go up in many of our schools.

In Paragraph 1, when describing Mona Lisa, it says "She is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry". If it can truly see emotions that specifically, we would be able to find out if a kid is feeling depressed, which would definitely drop the suicide rate thats spiked over the years. We could also identify if a kid is feeling angry, and find a way to calm him/her before there are any fights, or even worse, shootings.

Also, if we can see how a student feels about a particular lesson, we could adjust it accordingly.

In conclusion, this new emotion-recognition-technology described in "Making Mona Lisa Smile" could be very valuable to the classrooms.

Score: 3