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The author study the Venus planet doing a good jobs in his laboratory whith his all experiments that he make whith a good equip fo workers for him even finding somyhings asowums for his life.

He dicovered that the Venus planets is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Even that Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds these diferences in speed mean that somtimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus is because Venus is sometimes right around the corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this could draped world where we the humans live whith all familiers and sharing good ideas each other with friends, witgh families, and neighbor. Also like the author says in paragraph 2 "Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a cgallenging planet for human to study, despite its proximity to us". How the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet the and these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth, such an enviroment would crush even a submerine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Also notable Venus, has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solara system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.

And as a clonclusion, I think that the author did a very good job discovering all this somthings with the Venus planet because this is not easy to do in our live for that I think that him is a good sientific.

Score: 2