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The election is an very imoportant thing that everyone really needs to pay attention to it can interfere with us or it can be a good thing for some people. we should not vote for the person wants to make our lifes difficult and miserable and want to take away things like medical insurance and weak for a new born.

To start off with,we should not just pick a random person who looks like there going to be a good president of a good vice president. In source 3 it says that,"It can be argued that the electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state-Democrats in texas."

At most basic level,the electoral college is unfair to voters. because of the winner take all system in each state,candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning,focusing only on the tight races in the "swing" states. The electoral college is unfair ,outdated,and irrational. we dont want segregation in the state,it casually states that,"segregationist in the louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.

To conclude my essay,we should not let any person win all votes and turn everything around for people. i just want to say that if the electoral college avoid the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast then i agree to keep electoral college,but it needs to help not cause any confusion and not take away important needs in life,I just want end my essay off with an quote "if anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency i the hands of a few swing voters in ohio, they have yet to make it....

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