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An Almost Perfect World

Imagine a world where cars are not driven by humans, but instead, are operated by themselves. When you take a closer look, they are not driven completely by themselves, with no brain to control them, but are operated by computers. Thinking of this possibility is truly exciting. It is so futuristic to think that the world might be close to such a possibility. In a few years, people may never purchase cars again. There are many reasons for why driverless cars would be a wonderful idea. I believe that driverless cars would be more beneficial than human-operated cars because they are more sufficient when it comes to gas, they allow the passengers of the car to relax, and they would prevent wrecks and other road accidents.

One reason why driverless cars are a wonderful idea is because they are more gas-sufficient than ordinary, human driven cars. In the article, "Driverless Cars Are Coming", Google Cofounder Surgey Brin believes that driverless cars will use half the gas of normal taxis. Humans, with so many flaws, probably tend to accelerate faster than what is needed and rev the engine of cars, causing the the car to lose fuel much faster. Driverless cars would not have the same quirks and urges of humans, and would save more fuel by not engaging in these human acts. If the driverless cars are part of a city system, such as taxis or buses are, then humans would also not have to pay as much money to fuel these cars as they do their own cars. They would simply have to pay a tax instead. All of these things alone suggest that driverless cars may be the answer to spending less cash on gas.

Another reason why driverless cars are more beneficial is that they allow the passengers in the car to relax. Usually passengers of normal cars have to be completely alert. They must give all of their attention to the road, and may not relax, or a fatal crash may come their way. With driverless cars, people may simply jump in the car and relax after an exhausting day at the office. They may even take a nap as the car wheels them to their destination. There would be no more worrying about "Who will drive?" Everyone will be able to kick back and relax as the car travels. Sounds quite simple, huh?

One final reason why driverless cars would be an intelligent investment for the future is because they would prevent car wrecks and other road accidents. Many wrecks, as of the present, are caused by human error. Usually people are texting, or simply not paying attention to the road signs. They may even be drinking and driving. There are many different causes of car crashes, yet all of them seem to stem from the same exact thing - human error. People are not perfect, but computers could possibly be. Google has reported that some of their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. This is simply amazing. If these cars can drive more than half a million miles without a wreck now, just imagine what they may accomplish in the future when newer alterations have been made. With all of the cars on the road having the mind of a computer, humans may never wreck again. It just may be the solution.

After discovering all of these facts about driverless cars, it almost seems that there would be no downfalls when using these vehicles. Driverless cars would be more gas-sufficient by using half the gas of a normal taxi. They also would allow for human relaxation because people would not have to operate the vehicle. Finally, these cars would prevent wrecks and other road accidents by all having the same, computer-driven mind. The future appears promising; it seems as if driverless cars just might be the solution. So instead of being cautious of what the future might bring, I believe we should embrace this possibility, and welcome driverless cars into our world.

Score: 5