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The Author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" suggests that Venus would be a worthy pursuit even considering all of the dangers that it poses. And yes, Venus would be a worthy place to research, the only downside is how dangerous it can be. Venus poses to be very challenging to study from the plant itself being hard to reach, also given the planets conditions. You wouldnt be able to get accurate data without being on the surface from the thick atmosphere of 97% carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid. While the tempurates above most of the atmosphere are roughly around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, you still could barely see through the thick blanket of athmosphere. While it being 800 degrees on the surface, with higher pressure than the deepest parts of our ocean, Venus still is a worthy planet to study. Venus is known as our sister planet, from how it's size and density is relative to our own. On Venus, there is also evidence of the planet having water on it at one point. with Canyons, mountains, ridges, and valleys. Meaning it probally supported life like our's on Earth. Venus is also the closest planet that is relative to our's besides Mars. To sum all of it up, Venus is a very worthy subject to do more research on, besides all of the dangerous factors.

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