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Can you image a day without cars? with pollution in a high rate, and smog began to cover the roads and sky. A capital city of 7 million how is these possibe,well the goal is to promote alternitive transportation and reduce smog. Violators faced a $25 fines. when people have cars they began to become tease because of the stress of driving especillay all the crazies behind the wheel. with cars free day is stop all traffic and provide a day away from stress and lower air pollution.

car free day was started in Bogtoa,Colombia in the mid 1900s with a plan to spread car free day to the countries, to encourage millions of colonbians to hike,biked,skated or took buses to work during car free day and to create a 118 mile bicyle path. even the side walk that was once uneven and pitted,and replace by broad smooth sidewalk. rush hour restrictions have cut traffic and new restaurants and upscale shopping disricts have cropped up. parks and sports centerts also have bloomed throughout the city.

for the first time two other colombian cities,cali and valledupar,joined the event. the turnout was large,despite gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on bogota. but the rain hasn't stopped people from participating in car free day.

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