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Have you ever had a job in high school when it was a huge deal. Well if you did not i'm going to inform you about a teenager who has one. If you have a bet it is nothing like this one! So, now I am going to give you some deatials about this passage. Which side would you pick.

First who would want to miss out a job of a life time! In the passage it states , "Luke could not say no." If Luke could not say no then why would you. Also the text states, "He knew it was an opportunity of an life time." That should be another reason why you should be apart of the Seagoing Cowboys program. All the things that Luke was saying I would want to sign up myself.

Next ,but on the other hand it is a terrible idea to go to the prgram. One reason is it is a long way to travel . In the text it states, "It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from eastern coast of the U.S.A and a mouth to get to China. also you will miss all of your loved ones. These are some reasons why

you should not join the program.

In conclusion I think it was a good Idea to join the prgram.I have stated

why and why not to join. Also they exsplain them to to give you more deatials. This job is a great opportunity . Luke side of this essay is right.

Score: 3