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In the Article "Making Mona Lisa Smile", author Nick D'Alto claims that the United States should start using their new technology equipment called "FACS". This new technology FACS is a new computer software that allows computures to identify human emotions. In the text it states, "The facial expressions for each emotions are universal." Meaning that the computer will recognize almost any facial expression

that a person makes.

In the text it states, "The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles." This is how this computer all started and began in the making of a facial expression computer. This computer will one day be able to know how you are feeling that day based of off how your facial expression is.

The facial expression computer will also help college studies and labs all over the world. In the text it states, "By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions as it did in Da Vinci's masterpiece, each expression is compared against a neutral face." By using this technology studies have came to the conclusion of how Mona Lisa was feeling in Da Vinchi's famous artwork piece.

In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" Nick D'Alto talked about this newley developed technology, that allows computers to recongize human facial expressions. I am for the use of this new technology becuase it can lead to greater opportunities in the technology world and the whole world. This technology will unlock new ways on how people look and study the life of human beings.

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