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Wouldn't you want to be in control of your own saftey? I would, with driverless cars the driver will never be in charge of that. They are very dangerous and could cause damage to not only the driver but others around them. Just like all technology it could have a slip up that could cause people their lifes.

There are many different reasons why the driverless car is a bad idea, mostly it has to do with who has control. With technology something could always go wrong, in this case the driver could have no control, or the driver could have control when they were not ready. Both of these issues could cause a wreck to accure.

In paragragh 7 it talks about ways that the car can tell the driver when it needs to take over. Such as seats that vibrate to tell the driver that he or she needs to take over. Would this seat wake the driver up if the driver had fallen asleep? A vibrating seat would not wake some people up, also it might help some people sleep more. This is a good example of paragragh 8 when it says, "Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?" While waiting to drive many drivers could fall asleep and the car could possibly not wake them up, possibly costing the driver their life. Now yes in paragragh 7 it says that the car could have a special touch sensor in the steering wheel to make sure the driver is alert. The only problem there is, what if the driver has his hands on the wheel, but isn't alert? What if the sensor malfuntions and can't tell if the driver is alert? Both of these questions could cause a problem for the driver.

In the end I think that cars should be driven the old fassion way, where the car is controled by the driver and nothing else. That way there is no mistake of whether an accident is the driver's or cars fault.

Score: 3