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I think that this new devolpment in car technology is very interesting, but it is dangerous and needs to be used with great caution, if these become allowed to be used on the road. Driverless cars could become safer overtime, yet at this moment with the unideal road conditions and reckless driving of the young and old, I do not belive it would be safe for the public to use these cars. Once the technology of companies like Google, BMW, and General Motors are advanced enough to create a safe enough environment, so that these cars are not a hazard, is when these driverless cars can be applied to everyday life.

These driverless cars are a hazrd to unexperienced drivers, teenagers and elders could cause serioud injury. It is proven that young teens, who are just starting out with their license are lacking experience causing them to make bad judgement calls, throw in the fact that there aren't real humans behind the wheel of a car right next to them, and that could create a real problem. Machines do really help out and take some of the pressure off of you but, "the only safe car has a human driver". The only actual safe way to assit in avoiding accidents, is by only allowing human drivers on the streets. It is already bad enough with just real people, imagine adding driverless cars to the mix.

Next, machines are very eratic. Even an iPhone, which has been pretty much mastered, glichtches like crazy if you do not keep an update. Even if you do keep an update, sometimes it just happens. This is alright for something as small as a phone, but if you can imagine a row of driverless cars glitching without warning? This could cause massive accidentsand could seriously injure people. If we took the chance to asses the risks ,I believe the opinion on these cars would change.

Another point that could be made is this, it takes the fun out of driving. Getting your license and getting behind the wheel is exciting, and with these driverless cars that is sort of being taken away from the young and old drivers who are just getting their license. "Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?" I completely agree, drivers these days consider driving a fun privleage that they get. Driving should be an exciting, new experience, but with these driverless vehicles,driving would not be much fun. The driver would have to stay alert, yet they would not actually get the feeling of having complete control and drving the car.

Overall, I belive that driverless vehicles are very dangeroud. If these cars do become legal to be used on highways and interstates, they would need to be used with extreme caution. Drivers would need to stay alert while not actually driving, and I belive that this could be the greatest risk of all. Driverless vehicles should not be allowed on the roads.

Score: 4