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Driverless cars are coming, I honestly thin this is not the best thing to come up with. This could alo be a good thing in some ways. An example is people can get work done they havent finsihed or something but the only problem is you have to pay attention to the car and whats going on. If you dont pay attention then you could get hurt.

Driverless cars could be very dangerous. First, the text states you have to pay attention to the car and everything but most people will do what they want and not pay attention to whats going on. If this happenes then the car may crash or something and the driver will get hurt.Second, you need the driver to drive or apply brakes, etc. so this isnt the best thing to come up with. Plus some people would get really lazy with driving and not pay attention at all then the world wouldnt be that great, because people would have everything being done for them.

A good thing about this car is it has sensors that will detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. This will apply on the brakes and reduce power fom the engine allowing a far better response, but the person could still get hurt because of drivers behind them not knowing that they are stopping or something and crash into them. Overall I think the driverless car is a good idea but mostly a bad idea until it is more advanced.

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