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Venus sometimes called "Evening Star". This nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a palent. In our solar system, venus is the second planet from our sun, while venus is a simple to see from the distant but safe vatnage point of Earth.The Atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Onthe planent's surface, temperature average over 800 degrees.

The National Aeronautics and Space Administration of

"NASA"

has particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientistic to float above the fray. NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. Like some somplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Striving to meet the challange presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many aqually intiminating endeavors. Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the every edges of imaniation and innovation.

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