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Hey want to join the seagoing cowboys program.It will change your life a boy from this town right here has already graduated.His name is Luke Bomberger.World war 2 has just ended.So its safe seas.And its a giant adventure.Actually it is more than a adventure.

You will be drafted into the military service.If you have ever been on a cattle boat trip this is the most perfect job.You will help people and get to see China and Europe.It will take about two weeks to cross the atlantic Ocean.You have to be on your feet though because those animals need fed 3 times a day.And the stalls need to be cleaned every day.

hopefully you do hard work on your farm every day because it gets rough sometimes in this program.Try not to get the night watchmen job because thats a dangerous job.Thats what Luke bomberger had.If you get hurt in any way you will actually have fun ecxept the pain.There is baseball,volleyball,table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,widdling and games also help pass the time.

but it is more than a adventure it opens up the world to you.You'll be graetfull for the oppurtunity.It will make you more aware of the other people in thier countries and thier needs.

Score: 3