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Exploring venus can be challenging, On the article it says that venus is one of the brightes points of light in the sky. It also says in the article that venus is the closest planet to earth, in density and size. As we know, many astronomers have been wanting to go to venus for a long time due to the fascinated thing it has for example it has beautiful oceans that has majority of life just like earth has now. Venus also has valleys, mountains and also craters. But the thing that makes it dificult for astronomers to go out in space to venus is, the ninty-seven percent carbon dioxide and it is eight-hundred degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is ninty times greater than the expierence here on earth. Overall it is challenging for an astronomer to last long in space for that reason. astronomers are creating a machine that will last longer on mars and will be able to get more footage and bring it back safe without getting destroyed. They've tried to send a machine to venus before and it successeded but it only last three weeks. hopefully in a few years they will be able to invent a maching that will be able to last a long time and then a spaceship for a human to go and explore venus. A lot of people were saying that it is risky to send someone to venus because there is more chances that the person dies than making it back alive and safe. NASA requires money to create a spaceship to go to venus, that money has to be raised before making any plans to go to venus.

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