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My position on driverless cars are that I am a total advocate for it. I think driverless cars will become a safer way into the future. I also believe that it can have an huge impact on a becoming a green earth, or reducing pollution.

Details from the story that provides valid info will definetly be passage 3. Passage 3 explains what and how many sensors the expiremental testing car had, which would also be on the final driverless cars. Also passage 7 explains what BMW has designed with the "traffic jam assistant" this is can be an aquired postive or a negative, because of people preference.

Passage 7 explains what will happen when the car's computer system can not handle intense driving situations only humans can handle. Such as road work or traffic jams. The computer or car will sense if the driver need to tak over and a gret question comes up in this passage about what is the point of buying a car that is driverless but you have to wait until you might have to drive?

This is a great question becuase it will lead more developement to the car but not all people have to buy the car. I would still drive it becuase it is safer that the average car, it designed very well to keep you afe during these drives and can give the driver a break at most of the time. It's just like every pilot needs an auto pilot for a break.

I truly believe if pople accept these driverless cars to revolutionize the car business it will change lives and also some them too. I aslo am a strong advocate of the belief on that there are more postive than negatives about the driverless cars.On a side not, this can reduce taxi pollution by half leading to a cleaner world on earth.

Score: 3