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The story is called "The Challenge of Exploring Venus " This story is about trying to explore Venus even though it could be risky people are still curious on what Venus looks today.

Venus is a worthy pursuit even though it could be dangerous.The danger's of it would be that spacecrafts couldn't land on the surface without it melting.Venus also has a lot of eathquakes,and has a tempture of 800 degrees fahrenheit.Even though all these dangers are still accurate people are still wanting to risk there life for it.

Here are some reason why people want to risk there life to see this amazing

planet.The planet venus

a long time agp was the most earth like planet to be seen form astronomers.Venus had water like oceans life forms could've lived on

venus.

NASA is also working on another way to stude venus.

NASA uses some simplifed electornics made of slicon carbide.This has been tested on a chamber simulating chaos of venus's surface. NASA has tried to let the astomuners around the planet ,but it did not work.

Do you also think venus was like earth back in the day? How are earth,and venus alike?

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