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One reason to join the UNRRA(the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) is that you will experience adventures and visit many unique places. Like China, Europe, New Orleans, Acropolis,Greece, Venice, Italy, and an excavated castle in Crete, and marvel at the Panama Canal in China. Luke Bomberger and his friend Don Reist had seen many of these places and many more.

In August 1945, they received their orders to report to New Orleans. "We arrived August 14," Luke says, "the day the Pacific war ended." They got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece---with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.

Luke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. "When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle---boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service."By the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips---the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.

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