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One reason to join the program is because when you gradulate, you can cross the ocean more than one time if you wish to. Another reason is to do fun things for our goverment. Also, because you will travel around the world and meet new people ,and feed animals. You can do more when you gradulate and have the right attiude for the goverment. Another reason the program would be a great idea is because you will change people mind and thinking about things. You will also get a chance to join the United Nations Relief and Rehabilition Administration, and take care of all the horses overseas.And also traveling the highs seas, there is just more than during or going on the adventure you have to do work to. Also you can be able to change vistors and other things once you are done or have to take a vacation somewhere and pick someone take over your spot.

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