Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
I'm going to tell you now, it wasn't easy. But it changed my life, and i believe if you sign up too, it will change yours. You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because it will open the world to you, it will make you more aware of people of other countries and thier needs, and you will get freetime to explore, play games, and read.

The Seagoing Cowboys program will open the world to you. It's more than an adventure. When you explore places, you see that some of these people just need help. You will face many dangers, but you will get hurt doing the right thing. After I cracked my ribs, I didn't leave, I stayed. Now i'm here, trying to convince you to join this opportunity of a lifetime. Now i'm trying to get these boys in this amazing program.

You will be more aware of people of other countries and their needs. I made nine trips, the most of any Seagoing Cowboy. You'll see the problems once you visit the sites. All places have problems, and they can get fixed. You can help them, if you just put in a little work.

When your not working, you get some time to explore, play games, or read. After I cracked my ribs, I didn't get to work for a couple of days. So i found time along with the other cowboys to play baseball and volleyball games. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games helped pass the time. You can also find time to explore.

Now i've shown you some good reasons why you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.

Score: 4