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People should participate because it could be fun to cross the world.Some reasons people should participate are maybe you want to see the world or maybe you just want to help others. Some ways that you would be helping could be that you are delivering horses or cattle.

My first reason is Ways you could see the world might be you are going to different places to do certin things like drop of horses or cattle.Some other ways might be that you are

going to meet someone to give them something that they need. There are other things that might happen on the journey to the place you are going to.

My second reason is there are many oppertunaties to help others in the UNRRA. some ways very one what they have you do on the way to where your going.some other ways you could help are you can help the UNRRA get more supplies to give to the people who need it.

My final reason is that if you love exporing you would really like the UNRRA. They go all over the map to help people and save others life. They litterally go from the USA to Greece maybe even farther. They also travel alot in one week.

People should participate because i could be fun to cross the world. Some reasons people should participate are maybe you want to see the world or maybe you just want to help other people either way more people should help in the group.

Score: 3