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Who's tired of driving? Who's tired of buying new cars? I am. Have you ever thought about Driverless Cars? Driverless cars is a new invention just waiting to happen. There's so much good things about this new invention that can be developed. I think our cars that we have now should be more advanced. Our world is advancing as years go by, it's time for the cars to start advancing, and it starts with Driverless Cars.

Driverless Cars have a lot of technology to it, but good things come with it. They're more smarter than the cars we drive now, they're more safe than the cars we drive now. You don't even have to drive it yourself, it does most of it for you! The cars that we have cause wrecks, doesn't have a lot of technology in it. Who wants a car with updated technology? I surely do. What about spinning spensors on the roof, or a video camera? Driverless Cars has all of that. Driverless Cars has a dubbed LIDAR that uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings. The sensors can even cause the car to apply brakes on wheels and shorten the power from the engine. That's a way better response and control that you could manage yourself.

Safety has always been a big concern. Don't worry, the safety with these cars are wonderful. It has flashing lights on the windshield and other head-up displays. It also has a driver's seat that vibrates when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. If you get tired, or your just not watching the road, their actually considering fixing that problem too with cameras to watch if you remaining focused on the road. It senses things a single human couldn't sense fast enough. You'll still be in control of the car, it just helps you react faster to incidents and inform you when danger is nearby.

Who wouldn't like this new invention? I think it's perfect for our future. It's something that should be developed. I would love to be more safe in my vehicle and have a lot of technology. It's time to look past these cars that we have now and look forward to cars that will help us more and require less stress. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.

Score: 4