Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom isn't very valuable. I believe this because we can already tell the emotions of others, just from looking at the people around us. You shouldn't need to open a computer in your friends' face just to know how they are feeling. Good and true friends would tell each other how and what they feel, without the lies, and without the technology. It's an extremely great thing to invent and experience with, but if we now need tech to see one's emotions, i wonder where our humanity will go.

You walk into a room full of family, everyone is happy and communicating just perfectly fine. You pull out this laptop and throws it into everyone's face, mood change! Why are you running around flashing a laptop into everyones faces when you already see the happy emotions upon their face. We humans should keep the parts of us that makes us human. Reading emotions is something that no technology is needed for, what's next laptops that tell you what to wear to school, and when to clean your room?

There are some people that just don't want to show how they feel today. Maybe that person went through something and tries not to think about it. The day goes great until another guy takes his laptop out and detects this persons emotions. Having his or hers emotion detected now brings back the memory of something bad that may have happened , that they just don't want to talk about. Various classmates and the teacher then bug this person about what's wrong and she or he begins to panic and grows more and more nervous.

People don't want to be judged upon how they might feel on a certain subject. For instance, you and a buddy are surfing through various internet topics on the laptop, reading about superheroes and everything else. The laptop picks up the emotions of your face and the friend figures out how you really feel about this character. You don;t like the character very much, so your friend starts judging you. He makes you feel like you can't have your own opinion or outlook on things, like you have to agree with what he likes and says.

Overall, the emotion sensing technology is great, it means that we are growing in knowledge. What's the use of knowledge if were going to have technology think for us is the question. Keeping humanity is key, don;t go and have laptops speaking and singing as our voices. We can read emotions ourselves, i don't need a laptop to tell me how my brother or sister feels. If they feel like it's something they want to talk about ill leave it to them, to determine whether or not they really want to talk about it.

Score: 4