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Would being able to read a students emotion be good or bad? This essay is based off of opinion. However, I will tell you my opinion on the "Facial Action Coding System."

I think that being able to read students emotions could be a very good thing. Most people think hiding their emotions is better for them and sometimes it works but I think if teachers could read their students it could help with so many things. It could help teachers know when their students aren't doing well. When kids get upset they usually tend to not want to talk about their issues. This invention would help a lot in my opinion because if kids are wanting to harm themselves teachers acn get the kids help so that it doesn't happen.

In conclusion I think having that tool of being able to tell emotions without having to ask the student what is wrong, I feel it is a great things to have. I also feel there would be less and less people harming themselves.

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