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The best option of a substitute planet in our solar system is Venus, if our world get destroyed by us or eny other entity people could go to Venus because it's the planet more likely to our own planet. Mars also is very likely to the Earth, but is this particular case, we will focus in Venus.

First, one of the reasons we should consider Venus as an option to live if our planet gets destroyed for a disease, apocalipse or any other reason, is bacause Venus is in our solar system, this is a really big advantage because the population don't have to travel for a long time to found another place to live in. There is a lot of other planets people can go because there are more likely to the Earth, but there are years light far from our planet, and we don't still have the technology to go to that other planets.

Also, the temperature in the atmosphere of Venus is similar to the temperature of the Earth. This is really important because we can't go to a planet that is a lot cooler or hoter that the Earth for a simple reason, people would die if we go to any other planet that has a high or low temperature. Also not only people would die, animals and plants too, people need plants and animals to eat, if we don't have animals and plants we don't have food and medicine and people would die.

Finally, the size of Venus is almost the same size of the Earth. People can't go to a planet that is smaller that the Earth, because it wouldn't be enough space to live in, if it is bigger nice, if people would have a bigger planet and population can grow up, but it can't if the planet is smaller.

In conclution, if the people have to leave the Earth and go to another planet, the best option would be Venus, or even Mars, because these two planets are more likely to the Earth and there are the nearest planets we have bucause there are in the same solar system.

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