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Cars that drive themselves. Seems a little like a science fiction movie doesn't it? As soon as I heard this theory, it reminded me of the Jetsons. Self-driving cars just seem a little too farfetched to be believable. Not only are they fantasy-like, they seem expensive and unnecessary. Cars that drive themselves are not something that we should introduce into our daily lives.

Picture this- New York City, a busy afternoon. If you've ever seen a movie set here, you can just image the thousands of taxis swarming around like busy bees making honey. The only thing is, this honey is money. If self-driving cars were introduced into society as a serious addition, there would be millions of Americans who would eventually lose thier jobs. As the author states in paragraph one, "Google cofounder Sergey Brin... envisions a future with a public transport system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system." This means taxi drivers, bus drivers, and eventually car dealers and manufacturers will slowly lose their jobs.

Besides the point of job loss, think about the safety of these vehicles. What if a driver is just driving along one day, and suddenly the technology fails. What if there's the tiniest glitch, or maybe even a hacker? What if the driver loses total control of their car? This is a very negative and scary possibility that can risk many people's lives. Technology can't see in real time through human eyes and react to situations like we instinctually can. There are just some things that should be left to people, and I think driving is one of them.

In conclusion, I honestly think self-driving cars will just cause more problems than they'll actually fix. The cost of manufacturing and retailing these cars is potentially very high. Not only that, but you may be risking someone's life. Cars that drive themselves should just stay a dream.

Score: 3