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When in class one of my least favorite things to do is computer work. It's an excuss for teachers to not do their job and be lazy. All while we students are working. I understand how work on the computer might be convinent, but it is at the cost of our educations. Though if work on the computer has to be done in class I would not mind if my facial expression was read so more enjoyable content could be presented.

I think that if this technology was used in a classroom setting learning new information would stick in your brain better if you were in a joyful state when learning it. Since the system can identify confusion as well you would be better able to understand the information, provided that it will be altered to simplify the lesson to where you could understand easier.

All in all, I believe that the Facial Action Coding System would be benificial to the classroom setting. I feel that it could help a lot of kids in their learning. That is just what we need in our country today, better education.

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