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In the paragraph it talks about how the planet Earth has a "twin" which is Venus. It's the most Earth-like planet on the solar system.The auother asks "If the sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?" Venus is a worthy pursit despite the dangers it presents for these reasons. Long ago, Venus had probably been covered with large oceans, and lives could have been formed in the planet Venus. Venus, today, still has some features just like Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediments, valleys, mountain, creatures and other Earth-like species.On Venus you can also use technology old technology called mechcanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s as well in the 1940s during World War ll. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) and scientist has been exploring Venus and how much people can act just on Earth. Just like on Earth our travels and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts it should expand to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Not everyone can be scared without having to try it out. Everything is new and different and also scary but not just because of that people should stop.

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