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In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile", the author makes really good points on how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System can benefit us in the future. In the article, Nick D'Alto makes a few points on how this new technology can benefit students in a classroom. Having this new technology in the classroom would be great so teachers can detect wether their students are bored or tired.

Having a Facial Action Coding System will benefit an ordinary classroom in various ways. In the text it states," A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored," This shows that if the students get confused or bored then it'll instruct the teacher who will then explain it to the student or make the lesson seem more interesting. This is important because it can help teachers out when they teach a new lesson.

In conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System will benefit classrooms all across the globe. It'll be able to detect the students' emotions and report the information back to the teacher. Then the teacher will then know how their students feel about the curriculum and if they need extra help or not.

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