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The author said Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because of each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. It shows that if we want to more study and get education about venus we should upgrade are meachines and aircrafts so they can survive more time on venus and scientist can more and deeply research.

A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. On the venus's surface, temprature avrage over 800 degrees fahrenheit. Veanus's atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then we experince on the earth. This is why we cannot survive at veanus too much time. It is not neccessary that on venus is everything different from earth like the air pressure on venus is close to that sea level on earth. So some things are same between venus and earth but some things are so different between earth and venus. Venus is second planet from our sun. So i think this planet can be hotter than the earth.

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