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Have you ever wondered how students may learn better. Well what if I told you it is Facial Action Coding System? Does'nt it sound complex and difficult? This technology is able to read human facial expressions and determain if a person is mad sad angry or happy. This type of technology would be so benificial in student school life and this is how.

What if your son or daughter is having trouble in school because the words that are on a passage that is being read on the computer is to complex for them. Would'nt you want the teaacher to give them a simplified edition of the passage. If FACS was used on this computer the program could sense that the student is confused and it will automaticly switch it to a simple edition.

Bullying is becoming a big problem in the world at schools. What if a student is being bullied and they do not want to show there emotions. This technology could find out there true emotions in a attempt to help the student overcome their problem.

What if a student stole something of another kid and you want to find out if he really did it then you can use this program to figure out by the students facial expressions. This could make it so much easier to solve issues in the day to day world to solve crimes in school or conflicts.

These are all great resons on why the FACS program should be used in schools. This would be very benificial for students, teachers, and even the parents of the student.

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