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In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it prestents. In the article, the author explains the difficult conditions in Venus and the risks humans have by exploring and studying Venus. He explains that studying Venus is effective because astronomers are fascinated by Venus and it may well once have been the most Earth-like plant on the solar system.

The author explains about the possibility of Venus being the most Earth-like plant on the solar system, and compares the similarities both the planets, Venus and Earth, might of had. The dangers of human studying Venus are evident as he explains Venus atmosphere, that renders standard forms of photography and videography ineffective when a ship is orbiting or hovering safety far above the planet's surface.

NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some electronics are being tested in a chamber stimulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such condition. Another project is looking back to an old technology in the 1800s that played an important role on WW ll.

New and old technolgy are being tested to be useful and made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces found in Venus. Venus has value, as stated on paragraph 8, studying Venus is a challenge, but it is worth being studied for to meet the edges of innovation.

Score: 2