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The author investigate all about the planet Venus. Is our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Numerous factors contribute to venu´s reputation as a challenging planet of humans to study, despite its proximity to us. Is a good idea for people who studying about the planets, and that they share with old the world and that we know about planets.However, have dangers. A thick atmospjere of almost 97 precent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus´s atmosphere. On the planets surface, temperature average over 80

degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experienve on our planet. The NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. In conclucion, not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. Thanks to NASA for studrying about plants that was we know about all of type of planet that was exist. And now NASA studying Venus. It it not a easy work.

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