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Driverless cars are and should be the future. We wouldn't have to worry about that one guy driving red lights and aciddently smashing into another person. But what if I told you that people could still crash even without doing that and the driver would still be blamed. Cars are easlily hacked nowadays. In early 2010's someone was able to get into a car that had some computer stuff built into it. He was able to change the tire pressure and how much the car think it had of gas. Some reports say he was able to drive the car without even being in the car. Imagine what people will do when full on computers are able to get into cars. They would be able to lock you in the car and smash into someone, delete the tracks that he messed with the car then the driver had to blamed. The police wouldn't know what to do and then the cars would be outlawed or something. So I am all for the driverless cars but I believe that better protection from hackers is alot more safe than the angry birds app in my car.

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