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Venus

The author who wrote "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" suggests despite the danger of studying Venus it is worth it. Venus have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. He stated that "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth". Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys,mountains, and craters. Futhermore, Venus can somtimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit."

Nasa has been trying to send people to Venus to study Venus. Nasa is trying to create some kind of vehicle that would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. "At thirty-plus miles above the surface, the temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels, Not easy conditions, but survivable for human." Also "many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus." NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have been lasted for three weeks in such conditions".

The adavantage of studying Venus. Not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itselfs, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors." And also if anything happen to Earth, Venus could be a place for us to stay. The author support his idea by writing down that people have been already trying to study Venus, and talk about the advantage of Venus and writing down about how Venus is similar to Earth.

Score: 3