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Nick D'Alto wrote this passage in the mindset of informing us how this new technology works with analyzing and even producing seemingly accurate emotionsal information theough a computer analyzing the muscles in individuals faces. Prof. Thomas Huang is primarily the man who produces or made this program for a computer. They used this to determine the emotions of the magnificant work of the great artist "Leonardo da Vinci", called the "Mona Lisa".

They claim that it can produce the same or even better results for many different jobs than people can today.

They say that they can set up a computer that can do a teachers job, in the classroom. They say that it would be able to read students facial expressions and emotions and determine if the students are confused, bored or even any other emotion. Then it can reteach the lesson in a different or more simple way than the previuos way. The people also say "most human communication is non verbal, including the emotional communication". Therefore, it would make this computer even more relevant. They also say that using this could improve many digital subjects such as video games or video surgery to make the faces more expressive.

The prefessors have a reasonable argument for their program and they might be on to something. If this computer/program can aid teachers in teaching their classes, this computer would be the perfect fit for further the kids learning experiance. Therefore, it would be a great aid to the teahcers for them to get to better teach the students if the teachers themselves dont pick up the students confusion or frestration.

Score: 3