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I believe that this is not valuable for studetns in a classroom. Sure it could help them make those faces more, but it doesnt't have much of a use other than that. It is not like it helps lose weight or improves health it just shows emotions. Especially in a school setting most students express their emotions freely anyways. There may be some cases of students hiding emotions, but for the most part they tend to be very expressive.

First, many students may not rralize how much they show their emotions already, but generally they are incredibly easy to read. This technology would

not be that usefull becuase of that it would only help in very select cases. Also, some people would no twant their emotions to be scanned by a computer. They may be going through a hard time and want to keep that as personal as possible.

Second, it could be invading someones private life. By this I mean some people hate when everything is know about them. For example, people who put tape over their computers because they are worried about the FBI watching them. I think that becasue of people like that it would not be very accepted into schhols without forcing it onto students. Also, I do not think the students really care about expressing their emptions to a computer.

Third, although it could be used to detect emotions of items in history it would not have a place in schools it is an invasion of privacy and would be very prying into a students personal life.

In conclusion, I do not hink this technology will be very well accpted into schhols I think it will have to be forced onto the students whuch would just cause more problems from parents and students. Although it does have some used they are so situational I do not think it is that amazing of a discovery.

Score: 3