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The claim for the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions are amazing, and could benefit a low risk of suicide and bullying of other students or people. The technology could keep peoples mind focused and maybe make them more open minded. Like if you were sad and the computer detected that then the computer might pop up a game or video hat could make you feel differently.

The computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. All 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. The muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a "smiling" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even produce them.

The conclusion to this statement is that new technology could be a good thing doing through the decades of the universe. Mostly because some people dont know how to show their emotions, or hide them from their friends and family and could really be feeling self vulnerable or have a very low self esteem of themselves.

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