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Venus, our sister planet is difficult for scientists to study and learn new things. Due to some circumstances, scientists are trying to make machines to survive the ugly weather. Scientists want to study this planet so some point we can live in the planet so we can survive. Many think we should find another and some say yes study this planet. Venus should be a worthy pursuit.

Venus would be worthy to study because if our planet earth fails we can move there.

Due to the hot and the ugly weather scientists cant do anything about it. They can only make machines that are possibly to survive the weather. Scientists can make history if they find a way to study Venus. If studying Venus comes out succsesful then we can study other planets that we couldn't study before. Some people will say its pointless to study a planet that we cant even send a drone or some type of tool there to study. If scientists can get a few samples of Venus surface then scientists can make a tool that can help a drone move around the surface. The pursuit of Venus will be in every scientists mind.

Venus is a planet that we will learn more about. Scientists will one day make a tool to send up to Venus and study the planet. If they learn about Venus a lot of people's fantasy will come true or not. Scientists will have a goal done by studying Venus and its crazy life. Venus and some other planets will be worthy to study for if the Earth will come to an end.

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