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In this article, a new technology that can recognize and detect subtle human expressions and the emotions tied with them is beginning to become introduced to school districts. For the school's use, the FACS (Facial Action Coding System) will assist teachers and faculty members while dealing with students. Although I believe in the traditional teaching, I do understand how this new system may help students.

Since most feelings are conveyed in actions or facial expressions, the system will be able to detect whether or not the student understands the lesson they are being taught or needs reprimandment or additional assistance. The computer would also be capable of recognizing confusion or boredom and change up the lesson being taught. This technology could help students bring up their grades and truly help them understand what they are being taught.

With this, I think that the FAC system would be extremely helpful to both teacher and student.

This new technology could also help students learn about more STEM-related subjects. If a student wanted to learn more about the workings of the FAC system, the school should give out more oppurtunities related to STEM based classrooms. Not only will this help more students with future jobs and careers, it will also raise the school's popularity. If everything goes well, the school can recieve more money to spend on many classes that will assist students on their journey to adulthood.

Lastly, the FAC system can also help students learn more about social interactions between themselves and others. It can teach students how to be a good friend or helpful, or just how to socialize in general. Reading more in depth of another's face can help with careers, relationships, and everyday interactions. I believe that this would be good for the students to learn how to save face and to support each other.

In conclusion, the FACS can really aid a school and its students; And although a more traditional approach can be helpful, I believe that the new technology can really help guide students to adulthood and help teachers understand student's modern struggles. The new system will generally be a good thing all around if treated right by students. It won't happen right away, but if there's faith involved, I'm sure things will work out just fine.

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