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Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. This is because there are many diffrent things you can learn about Venius just by studying it. Venus is worthy to study because you can learn many diffrent things.

In paragraph one it states that , one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. The text states, " Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. " That is saying that venus isnt to far from earth where we can still see it. Venus is also a planet. Venus is the second planet from the sun.

In pargraph two it says that Venus is right around the corner. Which means it is right by the sun but right around the corner from earth. Us humans have sent many spacecrafts to land on this cloud -draped world. The text states, " Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. " That issue has exlained why many space crafts havent touched down on venus in more then three decades.

In paragrpah three , Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide . That blankets Venus. The planets surface temperatures average is over 800 degrees Fahrenhit. The text states, " These conditons are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. " Venus has the hottest suface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Even though Mercury is closer to the sun.

That is many diffrent ways why the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. He suggest this because it is very interesting on how many things you can learn from just reading about it. And not going there. Even though it is impossible.

Score: 3