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People say that a job can't be fun. Well i'm here to prove them wrong because cattle boating is something that you don't want to miss out on for reasons like you get to see some of most amazing things or that it is just worth helping people in need.

First off, if you join this program, you will get to see some of the most beutaful sites one can see. When you are out on the sea, you can truely realize that life is a pice of art. If you have been wanting to go seight-seeing, you will get to see lots of nature's art from a distance where you can see it all not just once, but many times.

If you are concerned about the time issues, no worry, there are plenty of things to keep you busy. The article does state " It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China." Although the artical does state that it took some time, it was never hard to find something to do. Supporting this, "The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed.

Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time." Although it would take a while, the only way to get board is not to join and I don't think anyone is in there right mind when they say "I want to be board."

If you ever feel like you do not do enough for the needy, this is your place. In this programs aim is to help the needy and give them things that they need to have a better life. If you join, you will also learn valubul lifeskills. This program will make you more aware other people of different countries needs and will stick to you to make you a better person.

To bring this to a conclusion, this program will make your life a whole lot better in three ways like geting to have fun, and seeing the true world and some of the wonders it holds, and you will become a more carring person. Now will you join?

I would.

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