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The technology used in the story is valuable while it reads facial structure, it can evenpin point what exspetion Mona lisa has. They can figure out what she has by the computers information.

First, the calculations that this computer has made is reflecting on her facial features. Paragraph 1 says, "She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent discusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Tis shows how the computer calculates to her facial features depending on muscle in the face. In paragraph 3 it states," The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer modle of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.

Second, the desciption of this software take out different inits of emotions by you face structure, In paragraph 4 it states, " The new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements, in a real face or in painting face of Mona lisa. By weighing in different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions".This shows how the device works and what is exactly calculates.

Finally, the many ways the computer claculates your facial structure depends on how you feel. In paragraph 6 it states,"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do". This shows how the demonstration of Mona Lisa makes a person feel happy and how they choose to mrket their product. Pragraph 6 also states," The same technology can make compuer animated faces more expressive". This shows how they could furtther their computer development.

This computer is valuable and helps people figure out how people are feeling. The computer will be a good peice of equipment on the market is it is able to be used by proffessions and teachers.

Score: 3