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The planet venus is a danger place according to this article. The article talks about Venus the planet that hasn't being explore. in paragrapg 3 the author talks about some challenges. to begin with ''The thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus'' (paragraph 3 ). what the author is saying is that the atmosphere on Venus its so thick juts like if it was covering it up like a blanket. witch it's challenging for the space craft's. witch it could make the air craft explode cause the atmosphere its just like a shield for venuns that why in most of the space crafts that had tried to land in venus had failed and their has not beign one that had land in Venus for three decates. the author even talks about the temperature in venus in (paragraph 3 line 4) it saids " on the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit". If you think about what would happen to a human if it lands in Venus at that type of temperature or anything my guess would bw that everything that either land's or passes through venus burns. Although Venus is just like the sun

but its described as a big star. "Also notable, venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though mercury is closer to our sun " (Paragraph 3 line 9). In this line the author is refering of how hot Venus is mercury is the closet planet ot the sun but Venus still the hottest one.

Score: 1