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The world need the cars not just for hang out with your friends or family the are a lot people who need a car like transportation when they going to the work also for emergency that means car they has to continue in the world peolple they neede.

Car they are necessary for a better style of life that way the humanity but aslo how many life are they die driving a car something people they don't control what they are doing and that kind of people put on danger other and that way can be affected that both.

People they atre traying to use the tecnology to made a car more save and inteligent for the humanida and that way less car crash but the thing most important is the life of billion of people who are driving in the world.

The world need peolple who invent new thing that work better in the car or if really necesisary destroy the cars in the world or invent a new transportatio for the humanida.

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