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Having emotional expression scanners in class can be very helpful. It would make it easier for teachers to read students without talking. And it possibly slow the bullying dillemma down because students would be able to tell how they made others feel.

I think that having technology that reads emotional expressions is very valuable. We could be able to use that to be able to further help out the student if he does not like to talk. It could also help the students because they would be able to tell how they are making other students feel. By taking notice on how the student feels it would possibly stop the student from making a dumb decision and help that student out. "The facial expressions for each emotion are universal", observes Dr.Huang, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression(like not smiling as broadly)."

I think that having computers that can also scan your face is also a pretty good idea. When the camera on your computer can tell your emotions by facial expression is a great thing, because it can stop certain ads from appearing on your computer when you smile or frown. The computer would also be able to tell when you like an ad so that it can keep showing similar ads. " Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. But we can write down simple instructions that "encode" different emotions." Now with the face ID that phones have I think that technology keeps amazing us."

So with the emotional expression technogy being available I think that it would be a more than amazing thing to be able to use or just to be able to have. With technology coming up with new all the time I think that it would help if we just kept moving along with it. The emotional expression technology should be accepted by more and more people and more businesses.

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