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Join the UNRRA Seagoing Cowboys

Did you know that many European countries are in ruins from the catastrophic World War 2? What are we doing,what are we doing this for, and why should you join are the most asked questions. By the end of this you will want to join myself along witht he rest of the crew.

We are helping the people who's homes and lives were destroyed. We help in recovering their food supplies, animals, and much more. We also try to relocate them to an area where they can thrive. Somewhere they can live in peace with the war ended.

We all do this for the good of the country and the innocent people who were wrongly invovled in the war. We are trying to help the ones who can't help themsevles. So ,with our help, they can sleep in their own beds instead of on the ground where your house used to be. Imagine you were in their place with no idea what you were going to do. Without knowing where your next meal was coming from, or even worse, your children's meals,

You should join us and help the many people in need. You would see the happy faces of many for helping them in this time of extreme need. You would be saving people and children all across Europe. You would be venturing and be able to sight see. See the places you dreamed of. Seeing the sparkle in people eyes is enough to make your heart nearly glow. You will give them a home and even inspiration to help humanity.

In conclusion, you should join us in our little adventure helping humanity. You have learned what are we doing, what are we doing this for, and why should you join. I think everyone would be suprised if you turned down this great oppurtunity.But hopefully, in the future, there will be no need of groups like these becuse mankind will cease to continue to have wars and catastrophes like this one.

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