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97% carbon dioxide blankets venus. the planets surface tempatures average over 800 degrees in farenheit.

venus has the hottest surface tempature of any other planet that is in the solar system. venus has a suraface rocky and sediment and includes familular features just like earth such as things like valleys mountains and also craters. i think they are gonna try to find a way to study it more and alot closer without dying. many researchers been working on innovations that would allow machines to last long to contribute

to the knowlage of venus so they can find out more about the planet in a safer way. i think that they will meet the challenge faster if they use the machine instead of sending people up there because itbwould last longer and give them alot more time. the reasearchers cant take samples like rock or gas or anything from a distance. they would need to go up but in a more safer way. they could make the challenge if they keep trying and are careful. from far above the planet it can only provide limited insight on ground conditions alot of forms of light cant penetrate the dense atmosphere. they mustuve already tried to do that.they will probably start using devices or machines for the rest of the studdying of venus beacause in this passage they were talking alot about devices and what they could be used for and how putting a machine up on the plannet would last longer so they can get more knowlege. i think that they will most likley meet their goal. even though there may be some dangerous and doubts and less expectations. venus is closest to the sun. venus is reffered to as the earths twin. i think sciencetists want to keep finding out stuff about this planet beacause they think its somewhat like the earth. they said they belive it has some of the same features such ass rocks mountains and valleys.

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