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Technology can not tell you about someones emotions. The closest thing that is the lie detector test and not even that is 100 percent correct because it is very easy to beat the system just by slowing down your breathing or tricking your mind into thinking your right. Same thing with this "Facial Action Coding System", if you smile in a picture but your really actually sad then this system will most likely think your happy from the smile. Not even people can tell someone how they feel because the only one who truly knows how you feel is you. Obviously technology is right somewhat most of the time but this system doesnt seem like it would be anywhere near possible. There would be ways to make this test better though, like when you use a lie detector they put sensors on your pulses, So maybe if you used the same thing on this test it would give it a somewhat more realistic calculation. Over time this system will most likely get better but at the state its in now, it doesnt seem very reliable.

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