Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The use of technology indicated in a classroom of students is valuable. It'd be very useful to a teacher. Their job would be easier since they'd comprehend their students better.They'd know more well how to explain everything they need to.

First, what if a student was mad because they got irritated that they didn't understand anything...but they also don't want to ask for help? If the teacher realizes, he/szhe would be more patient/flexible and try to help. Not yell and embarass them or anything. The student wouln't get such a low score because of the effort that was given.

Then, a student's grandma, etc. could've died, or that person could be the victim olf a bully. That person would be extremely sad.It just plainly wouldn't be their day. Also, they would'nt like to get bugged in their feelings moments. A teacher noticing could prevent terrible things like suicide.

Next, a student can also be a little too hype. They could get seperated from their friends for focus. Plus the teacher could even blame someone else for them being talkative. Less conflict would evolve. In paragraph 1 for example, it gave us the exact percentage of each emotion felt by the Mona Lisa.

Finally, I conclude this technology can help us read others better. We'd save all the questions w'd make. Time is valuable, and so are our peers.

Score: 3