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I can imagine a time without people buying cars for themselves. But isn't that what we're trying to escape from in the technology world? Don't we want to be free of becoming lazy slobs? So how would inventing a car that can drive itself be useful?

I don't believe having self drivable cars would be necassarily a good idea. The reason why I say that is because no one would ever expierence the joy in buying their first car. No one would feel the excitment when passing their driver's test. Life would be a little bit more boring than what it's already becoming.

Also, what about malfunctions in having a self driving car. Like the paragraph said, would it be blamed on the owner or the manufactorer? I personally would blame the manufactuour for not checking in these precautions. It's very necassary to make sure all precautions and functions have been checked before selling a self drivable car.

So what woud happened if an accident were to happen? We'd blame the car, corret? If we're not driving the car and the car functions on itself, in reality it would be the car's functions fault for causing damaging. Now I can imagine a world without people buy cars, but can you imagine a world without fascination? I can if self driving cars become reality.

Score: 3