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I don't think it is necessary to have a Facial Action Coding System. People can tell from other people. Some students might be uncomfortable showing emotions.

Facial Action Coding System is not that important. I think that it is just getting in the way, and it's a waste of money. Students don't need to know other students emotions.Some students can feel really shy and uncomfortable to let everone know. I would be uncomfortable also, if I had to go through the Facial Action System I would have so many emotions.

It's really easy to tell what kind of emotion they have. Some examples are when your frontalis pars lateralis muscle raises your eyebrows when you're surprised. Another example is when your orbicularis oris tightens your lips to show anger. Those examles are proving my piont, you can tell what there emotions are.

You don't need Facial Action Coding System to tell you what emotions you are feeling. Anyone can tell what your emotions are. It's a waste of money. It might be uncomfortable for some students.

Score: 2