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liveing in a place with no cars or garages are forbidden sounds terrible but there are some advanteges to it. one you save money on gas also less traffic. Over 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars. People are even much happier with out the stress of owning a car, now they dont have to pay for gas or payment on the car. Also it more health for people to walk or bicycle every where they go.

With less cars means less polution in the air. Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissionsin europe. with less cars means more stores are just a walk way, rather than haveing to drive on the highway to get to a mall. Some people think that the hybrid was the answer to less polution and less money on gas.

The environmentel protection agency is promoting "car reduced" communities. After a near-record pollution, paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air.

People were fined for driving even though there was a law passed thats all cars would be fined $31 ,almost 4,000 people were fined and 27 people had there cars impounded.

Beijing China is one of the most polluted cities in the world. Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions poluting the air even more so. Diesels make up 67% of frances vehicle population. Diesels are one of the most poluting trucks know to man. less cars would help the world but also slow us down.

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