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My argument is going be about why other poeple should join the program. The program " Seagoing Cowboys " is about getting animals to other states in a boat. They will take care of the animals l;ike feed them.

Why i feel that other people should join this program is because they help animals . They will help people , meet different countries ,states . For example , Europe , Canda , and even Italy. They can also meet other persons in the world , kids , maybe even famous people .

Luck bomberger joined the Seagoing Cowboys program and had a good time with his friend Don Reist . Luck and Don both went to Europe in a cattle boat . They took care of horses , young cows , and mules. Luck said " the day the pacific war ended." " They got their seaman's paper's and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster , headed fror Greece ." With a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.

That is my arguement about why other people should join the " Seagoing Cowboys " program. I hope that incourged you to join the Seagoing Cowboy program and help animals in need .

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