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Imagine being able to live another planet other than earth, mars sounds nice but venus sounds better. Venus is a worthy pursuit in despite the dangers it presents. Studying Venus is a challenge worth taking but it takes extreme physical conditions to descover more of Venus. The author suggest studying Venus is dangerous becuase no spacecraft survived the landing on venus, Beyound high pressure and heat, and air pressure would be very hard for humans because its close to sea levels on earth.

"The Challenging of Exploring Venus" the author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy of pursuit despite the dangers by many reasons. In paragraph 1 it says "Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely." This means its not easy to exmine Venus. No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours and it took so many years to try to examine and get a piece of Venus. Venus is challenging planet for humans to study even more challenging with the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid that Venus has, Venus high pressure is high and the temperature is very hot because of how close it is to the sun, "800 degress fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experince on our own planet." This explains how its a challenge for humans to descover more things about Venus.

The pressure humans can take is not enough for Venus it is a little risky to take. "Beyond high pressure and heat." This explains how dangerous it can be to visit Venus.

Venus is worth taking the risk to descover because its out second close planet to earth. "Many researches are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus." This explains how people wants to get to know more about venus and its worth the risk because some day we can probably live in another planet.

Score: 3