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Introduction: The reason why you should join the program Is because you will help the animals when they are on a ship going across the ocean. They are helping

europe and china because they just got done with war. The animals will help produce food. So I hope farmers or anybody that knows how to take care of animals join the program.

Details from the story to help support my anwser is they take care of the animals every hour. They also have to be on a boat for two weeks or more. I also know that It Is not a easy job sometimes you get to play games but it is still dangerous. It is dangerous because in the story he almost slide of the boat and whent in the ocean but he luckely hit a pole to stop him. The bad thing is he broke his ribs.

My conclusion for this essay is that if you are on the boat you will have a little bond with the animals. I also know that you are doing a good thing helping europe and china. It makes you look like a good person and you care about the contries and animals. In the story It also said that there was water on the roads. This Is the ending of my essay so I hope you like It.

Score: 2