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Venus is very dense and very thick with carbon-dioxide and because none of our spacecrafts can reach Venus because of the extreme temperatures of 800 degrees fahrenheit , it also can melt our spaceships like its nothing , it has volcanoes ,earthquakes , lighting because of all this our scientists can not get through the cloud of carbon-dioxide

and study moon rocks and the surface of Venus.as for NASA they are creating new ways for us to get to venus and hopefully land on the surface of it. maybe get a moon rock or two, they even are thinking about how long will our powerful machines will stay in the planets atmosphere but our spacecrafts should be made strong enough to get close enough to the surface and get some pictures and then those pictures will be sent back to NASA for further investigations for about how we can see the past and history of Venus. and thats why we will be able to get as close to Venus as we can.

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