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Venus is a planet in our solar system that many scientist want to explore. Scientist also say that venus has many dangers to why they are being prevented on going. The author suggest that venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it plresents. The author gives us many examples on why venus is a worthy persuit for scientist. Many of the examples that the author gives us are things that scientist today are searching for.

The author says that their can be life on Venus. In the text, the author states, " Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life." The author also states, " Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on eath." Another thing that the author states, " planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters."

In the story, the author says that NASA is working on a way to get a blimp like vehicle to space. In the text it says, " NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientist to float above the fray." The author also says," Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian land scape."

The author say that technology is a way to be able to see Venus in a safe way. In the text it says, " Many reaserchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus." The author also states, " Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions."

Score: 3