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Venus is one of the brightest shinning planet in the night sky, which is also refered to Earth's twin, easy say, Venus is the closest planet to Earth by the terms of density and the size. but not always the same, sometime closer than Mars the reason orbit rountine or spining of the Sun.

The prblem and issue is not even a spaceship has touched down to Venus's reputaion. have amlost 97 percent carbon dioxide blackets Venus. more challengng the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. 800 degrees Fahrenheit. pressure is 90 tims greater than what we experience on our own planet.

The reason scientists even disscussing futher visits to it's surface in Venus because it may be once in the whole like that resemble our planet

; Earth.

it's really worth it for explore Venus because imagine If there similar country in different, that would be awasome, and that's how we think in planet for it's the big event and challenge .

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