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Driverless cars might sound cool or interesting but are they really a good idea? Although the idea of driverless cars sounds really cool, it has some negative aspects. Driverless cars may not be as safe and fun as they make it seem. Some of the ideas that make the car seem safe may cause more problems. Developing completely safe and driverless cars seems very hard.

In paragraph 7 it says the car notifies the driver when the road ahead requires human skills; the car might not be quick enough to notify and it could cause and accident. Maybe something gets in the way and it all happens so fast, the car would not be able to notify the driver so that the driver takes over. Paragraph 7 also mentions that the driver must ramain alert but that seems a little difficult due to the fact that your not driving and might get distracted easily. Paragraph 8 talks about in car entertainment but I think the would completely distract the driver; although the entertainments turn off when the driver need to take over, the driver would probably need more time to try to focus on driving. Just like texting and driving, the incar entertainment can be a distraction.

Paragraph 7 aslo talks about the car watching the driver while the driver watches the road, so would it be another human watching through a camera? If it is not another human how would the car be sure that the driver is paying attention? Even though the camera thing seems like a very good idea, it might not be very effective. Paragraph 9 talks about the technology failing and whos fault it would be. How could they decide if its the drivers fault or the manufacturers fault? Maybe the car took too long to notify the driver and an accident happened, how would they know who to blame?

Safe and completely driverless car would be amazing but it seems hard to create a safe driverless car. Some people think diverless cars are more safe than regular cars but they might be equally as dangerous.

Score: 3