Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The author does explain the topic all around and supports his ideas with facts. In the textit states "Striving to meet the challange presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equilly intimidating endevors. This proves that human would like to learn more about venus and understand why venus is the way it is. furthermore the text states that "just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin.". This showsthat the author uses information that people that dont knoe the dangers can understandmore clearly and get the full idea. NASA is working on trying to figure out a way to make instruments to let them study venus long enough to get factual information. to support this" by comparison, system that uses mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces".

in the article i feel like their was plenty of information to learn about the dangers of venus. the text sates "maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades". this proves that venus isnt even touchable by humans and intruments would have to be made heat resistant to even get enough information to make a conclusion about venus. venus is a planet that people havent done alot of experiments on it and is misleading. to further prove " Each previous mission was unnanned, and for good reason, since no space craft survived the landing for no more than a few hours".

venus is a hard to explain planet. their is not enough information to know enough about this misterious planet. I felllike the author did explain this subject very well but using nasa research and other sources to make this article factual.

Score: 3