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Facial Action Coding System is a step towards the future ,but is a good one ? There are lots of pros and cons to the new invention. Many people think that this new contraption is of no use. Many people think that this new invention is the gateway to the future. I think that the FACS could be valuable to students. I could uderstand why adults would find FACS irrelevant.

There are reasons to why i claim FACS is valuable towards the future of schools. As a student myself, i think FACS would be a great addition to my learning process. In the article it sates that FACS could sense when a student is bored of the lesson and can switch up the lesson. This in my opinion would be a great thing to have in schools. I easily get bored in school and Im sure lots of other students also get bored, so the FACS would be good to have in schools.

Now im not saying that there is no down sides to FACS, because there is. FACS in my opinion is more for the younger generation. By younger generation i mean 25 and younger. I say this because if you are out of school and have a job or career, there is really no use for FACS. FACS has no use for out of school people .

FACS has a lot of potential. This could be the new way of teaching students. We all know that everyone in the world is different, so we all have are own way of learning. I feel that FACS is the new and improved way of teaching, it teaches students the way they learn best. FACS can change the schooling system forever.

In conclution the FACS is a step towards the future for schools and students. The FACS won't help people outside of schools much , but it will effect may peoples learning experience.. The FACS has lots of potential and i hope to see it in schools in the nearby future.The FACS is the future.

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