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This is a great idea, because with those kind of cars there will be no more accidents. People are tired of driving, most of them fall asleep while driving. It will be like having a butler doing things for you exept the part that you have to do by your self for example; showering, brushing your teeth, and eating. The car is going to drive until it requiires the human skills. This project should be approve.

This project has been tested and there has been no problems with it. The car has sensors all over. One of those sensores tells the driver when too take over. Also, the sit vibrates when the car gets of track . The car will required human skills when there's an accident, constriction issues or traffic.

This project should be approve. If they approve this car there will be no more accidents and less people hurt. Everyone will be please by this car.

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