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If you had the motive and oppurtunity to explore Venus, what would it take for you to go? Would it take a million dollars or a simple high five from a buddy? Author of 'The Challenge of Exploring Venus' says studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it does present.

Studying Venus would present some danger and conflict in the course of its event. This is because not only is the temperature over 100x more dramatic than a regular September day for a hoosier, but it also contains sulfuric acid all throughout the planet and the surface. The author states, "such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving in the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquify many metals". This is not the kind of environment that the Property Brothers are just dying to build some houses in... Although, it has it's many perks.

Studying Venus is a 'worthy pursuit', says author, but why? With every pro event comes its cons and vice versa. Though an extremely dangerous environment to step foot on, there is more to it than the ability to melt a submarine. The education behind Venus is the most attractive part being that Venus once was the most Earth-like planet and could potentially have held Earth like creatures in the depths of it all. Not only is it an educational expirience for just you, but visiting Venus would give so much to scientists and austonomers to work with for upcoming life events.

Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Now that you have read this, think back to the beggining statement, what would it take for YOU to explore Venus? The Author of 'The Challenge of Exploring Venus' would and he is smart for saying so. The author uses evidence and claim to support his idea thoroughly.

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