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I say that making driverless cars would be great you would be able to talk in a car more efficiently, watch your kids, play games do all the things you've ever wanted to do in a car, done! Technically the technology has been out since the 1950s so why not let's move towards the new age!

Google seems like the company leading in this technology so far. In 2009 their cars could already handle everything but pull in and out of driveways and navigate through roadwork or accidents. Originally many thought that self-driving cars would begin with smarter roads. Back in the 1950s General Motors (GM) made a concept car that drove on a track embedded with electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car. Engineers at Berkeley thought magnets would be the answer, using alternating polarity. The car read the positive and negative polarity as messages in binary code. Both of these systems worked well (and I know you're thinking "then what was the problem) but they were way to expensive.

Now back to Google. Google has recently produced a modified Toyota Prius equipped with lots of sensors. One on the rear left wheel,one that rotates on the roof, an inertial motion sensor and four automotive radar sensors but the most important sensor is the one the spinning one on the roof named LIDAR. LIDAR uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of its surroundi

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