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Venus is a dangerous place for humans but what about tecnology. Acording to scientists venus is a dangerous place but they want to find out more about it. With venus beeing over eight hundred degrees fahrenheit and an atmosphere if almost ninety-seven percent carbon dioxide.

Scientists still want to find out more about it. They have had many space ships go up there but they could not land them. They want to make somthing that floats 30 miles above the seface of venus so that they can study the planet more. It would be onehundred and seventy degrees fahrenheit and the air pressure would be clsoe to that of sea level on earth. The ship would be powerd by solar panels and the radiation would not exceed Earth levels.

All this shows that the author supports this idea by showing that it is possible for the journy to be safe and it would get us closer to finding out more about venus. Whit the ship floating above ground it will provide little insight on the ground.conditions because most forms of light cannot penatrate the dense atmosphere. This makes standard photograghy and videograghy useless. This also means that scientist would have to get up close and personal to get rock and gas samples.

NASA is working on other ways to studing venus. This mean we might not have to take a risk to get hurt or harmed in any way. They have made something out of silicon carbide and it lassted up to three weeks in venus conditions.

The text states in paragrapgh eight that" stiving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also human curiosity will likly lead us into many equally intimidating endevoers". This shows that the authors ideas about figureing out more about venus are good ideas now we just have to figure out how to make it work.

Score: 3