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In the article,"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves."which was where you would go on aboard a ship and took/watched farm animals that had to be cared for and carried across the ocean. Reasons you should join Seagoing Cowboys is You can go see many different sites, you will also be helping someone or a family, and you can also meet new people.

One reason you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is, you can see many different sites. You can see many places you have never been before, maybe some of the rarest places on Earth, depending on where you are. In paragraph 5 it states "I also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canel on my way to China." Showing you can see many different sites. While being aboard a ship, seeing something unforgettable is one of the best things you can possibly even image to see.

Another reason to be a Seagoing Cowboy is, you can be saving a person's life. You being a Seagoing Cowboy can help a family in need of milk from a cow, or a goat for cheese. You taking care of those animals can be a last hope for a family's breakfast/Lunch/Dinner. You could also be possibly be saving other animals, not just the animals you are saving, but animals at a family's house. They might have a dog that hunts, and you could be saving the dog for the family as well. So you can join and save a life, putting yours before theirs.

A last reason you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is that you can meet new people. In paragraph 8 it says that the after returns on trips the cowboys would stay and play games like Baseball, Volleyball, boxing. All with those games you can meet new people. You can find someone like you because trust me, you will find someone like you. You can find a bestfriend and do what you like doing with a best friend.

You should become a Seagoing Cowboy because you can see many sites to see, you can save a life/family, and you can meet someone new. So be a Seagoing Cowboy today.

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