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There are some reasons why you should join the seagoing cowboy program and how you join the program and what you have to do while you are there. You will be going to other places helping people and help others like animal like from a war or something like that.

The reason we want you to join because if you like to helping people you are going to help people too. Like if they are in the hostpitol you can help them or if they are out their then you can help them by telling them whats wrong and will maybe be tell you something like if they got hurt or maybe not but you can try your best to tell them whats wrong.

Another reason why we want you to join is that if you like animals then you can help animals like Horses, young Cows, and Mules we really want earth to be a happy place and that. We want animals to stay alive becasuse if we wouldn't have animals we wouldn't have any protien in our bodys and we wounldn't be as strong as usually.

Also if you join the program you will be going on trips like to China, and Europe so if you like to go trips and helping people and helping animals you can join this program.

So if you like this program you can join and you can change the world. You can also save someones life and you can help over thousands of people that were in a war.

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