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Technolgy is changing and fast.In this aricle "Making Mona Lisa Smile" the author descirbes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding Sytem can identify human emotions.They used Mona Lisa because of the many varity emotions she has on her face.In our generation we as students are changing the way we study/learn.It has been proven that we will be seeing stuff like this.

The new technolgy called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to idenitfy human emotion is by using video imagery.The software tracks these facial movements into a real face.The text state"His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code".This is concluding that the use of this technology to read emotional is

some-what realiable.

In this article the use of this technolgy to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is vaulable because if students ever get bored during a lecture ,and the computer see it, it could change the way the letcure.The text states "A classroom computer could recongize when a student is becoming confused or bored".This states that having this new technology could mean that students can find ways to study or learn a new way.

In conclusion,The way technolgy changes in a classroom as the author says means that the use of this techonogy could be used in a classroom is valuable.

Score: 2