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The author suggestes that we keep on exploring Venus. They want Venus to be another planet that humans can live on. Scientist believe that Venus was a livable planet back than. But the conditions are bad that even space ship can't even land there.

Scientist have sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus. None of the spacecraft have survived the landing for more than a few hours. Scientist have been saying it's been a difficult challenge to overcome. Every mission thyey have done has been unmanned. In the story it says, " Numerous factors contribute to Venu's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.

Venus has a lot of bad conditions for humans to handle. In the story it says, " such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oocean and would liquefy many metals." Humans can't handle a lot of heat temperature but in Venus it has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. There's a lot of lightning strikes and powerful earhtquakes.

Score: 2