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When limiting the car uses to many of people it helps the world because of all the polution that the cars are letting out. The problem with that is its killing animals, trees and plants, and its messing with the global air.

Almost 4,000 drivers were fine because people their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine. When having a car it can make you tense. When not driving it saving the trees and air and you dont have loud car noises and dont have to worry about children and aduilts dieing by getting hit with a car.

When having a car you have to pay for gas which is alot money and can add up when or if you drive alot. Gas was alot of money and with out gas you cant drive no where so you have to use make money just to be able to go places. Cars that take deisel gas are ruining the worl because it releases alot of polution that killing many of anilmals and trees and people are not going to not use their car if it deisel because they need to get to places. The cars are creating alot of smog.

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