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I feel that this aspect is posatuve. If the car would be driverless then you pretty much wont need to use alot of gas, like in article 1 its says the foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus. They have been trying to upgrade the cars today now they have cars that brake by their selves if the human isnt responding on time, they having systems in the car that help them out if they cant see what they are doing, like backing out of a drive way and they dont see a parked car, they have cameras now to help them out and they vibrate the seats when they are getting to close to a car. Some companies are making computer- self-driven cars. Originally, many futurists believed the key developing self-driving cars someday wasnt so much smarter cars as smarter roads. If they are going to make the cars driverless they are going to need a whole lot of sensors. Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an intertial motion sensor. But the most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings. Technology already has speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes, just in case the driver doesnt stop on time. They are testing computer driven cars to see if its safe, manufactures believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are prooved more reliably safe. That is why i think this aspect is posative.

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