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Hi my name is Luke Bomberger and I am here to talk about the seagoing cowboys program. Belive it or not I was in that program back when I was younger oh and what fun it was. We whent everywhere the crew and me. Im tell you it was amazing I was about 17 or 18 and we crossed the pasific ocean to China and all kinds of other places!

We joind that program because it would be an exiting adveture. The other most importan reason we joind is because we get to help many peole acrossed the world and isent that what its all about?

The jobs you could have on board are somewhat fun but some are not fun at al like the droppings of the animals someone has to clean thoes up but not all are so bad, my personal favorit was lowering the flag to set sail when the wind was blowing.

Now on the boat you also have to be carefull it is slippery when a storm comes by and you could slip on the wood. But I do have to warn you about lowering the flag, I was up on the ladder on stormy night and I slipped and slid dow the ladder on my backside and heading strigt for the edge of the boad but I was stoped by some metal rims on the side but I still could not work for a few days because of broken ribs! So as I was saying be very carefull on the ship.

The top is also very fun you and your crew could crack jokes and on the way back we ues to play games read, wittel, and boxing so you kids these days can do what you normaly do in your free timelike play on thoes ear phons of yours OH im sorry i ment Iphons or you kindel ices oh fire kindel fire not kindel ices how silly of me but you know what I mean

well it is now time for me to go but I do hope you think about joinin the program and goog luck on your future adventurs.

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