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venus a star from eath is one of the brightest pionts of light in the night sky, because is making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot because the earth is going to get killed.

because some people think the earth is flat but not other planets because is there choice if it true or not like venus is the second smallest planet in the universe. pg.2

the national aeronautics and space adminstration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea to do the nasa to go to outher space and go to venus to learn more about it. because other people wants to learn about venus and mars because mars is kinda closes to the sun so it really hot in mars in venus is kinda like earth like is kinda cold sometimes and the afternoons there are really hot in venus and the regular earth is winter then spring then summer then fall then yea and keeps going and going but venus is the most important star in the planet and earth.

and some people dont know in planets like mars and venus and all kind of planets but they are still learning about the universe and the stars.

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