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I a gree with the cars that can brive themselves so people don't have to driven them because sometimes people are tired and they fell sleep and we have a lot of accidents or

a lot of people die every day because they fell sleep but i'm not sure if they can make that caing of car and if they do they are goint to be really expesive. if they make those cars they have to make sure if they are safe so people can buy hose cars. people from the cars companis they have to talk about how much the cars are goint to cost because if they sold them to expensive nobody are goint to buy them but if they sold them chip poeple can buy them. but they have to make the car with different thing like they can drive by themselves but some times people want to drive them and they have to make sure that every thing they put in

the car have to be safe and countribel so people buy them and i think they have to make the cars really nice so people think they are pretty looking cars and i think old people can be more safe if they buy them because old people sometimes they can't drive it all. poeple will buy them if they watch people briving them or if the show them in tv or if they talk about them at a radio station and if people who knows how they make them can explain every thing that have the car and show and prove that they are safe and they have the best things in the car.

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