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This idea dosnt seem like a very good one because of the fact that some people dont really want other people to know how they feel emotionaly. It's a way of invating there privacey. If someone would want to do it that would work but most probably dont want people to know how they feel. If it was you and you are very upset or down would you want people too see how upset you are. Probably not because thats your privacey. It's like opening someones diary. It can be rude and difficult to deal with because when people ask questions on why your so down it can get anoying.

It depends on who you are, if you would do the test then thats great, but if you didnt want to then you dont have to its a very understandable aproch. There are some pros and cons of this. For example, a pro about this is, you could see how you feel and then think about what it says. If it doesn't really match what your feeing then the computer doesn't really work that well. Another example of this idea is that if its in a class room and the teacher basicly makes you take the test without your say so then that means you have to deal with the embaressment from the fellow class mates. It seems like a big deal because of the fact that it would be cool to see how people feel but, it would beeven better to see how sme people in paintings feel. Like Mona Lissa, how did they have known how she fett if it wasn't for this device.

If we did this with all of the paintings we come acrossed it would be amazing. Some teachers that are in art class are very confused and lost when it comes to pintings and pictrues. So when they do an assignment for the kids they go off of what they think the person in the painting feels. It can be very difficult for people to interpret what someone is feeling when they look at the painting or picture so why not use if for thoes things and not actual people, unless you valentier. It does seem fun and all but it would be best to use it on a day you were like reeally happy and excited. Some people would really enjoy having that, but it seems very costly. If you used it on people you would have to do alot of steps to get the correct results.

It would be good to use for all paintings pictires and people. You would just have to use them wiseley and carefully. It is all a very good idean but sometimes it can also be a very bad idea. Think about the kids at school who dont want to be known as the one that sad or upset. They want to be known as them nothing more or less. Using them for paintings would be such a great idea for projects too. Just somehting for people to do and then they can explain how it works and what there thought of it is.

Score: 3