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" The Challenge of Exploring Venus" is an article about Venus. The article gives us infromation about venus and the conditions of it as well.

It also includes infromation from NASA (The National Aeronautics and Space Administartion).

Even though after reading the passage, Venus sounds like a huge death trap, the author still suggetsts that Venus is a planet worth investing in and gathering informationon. However, the author doesn't include enough deatil about why Venus should be explored and researched. In this essay, I will use evidence and or informtion to suggest that the author does a poor job with naming reasons why Venus should be looked at.

To begin, the author states that Venus would be a challenge to study. " While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely." This statement suggests that Venus could result in seroius injuries if one was to make its way over to the planet. Also stated in the article, "no spacecraft has survived the landing for more than a few hours," meaning that death would occur more often than not at all. Also, the environment of Venus indicates that there would be trouble if someone actually managed to survived the landing.

Erupting volcanoes, earthquakes, and lightning strikes as well as a temperature of 800 degrees fahrenheit provides us with enough information that humans wouldn't be able to stand the extreme conditions.

In conclusion the author did a poor job. The author did a poor job with explaining how worthy the pursuit of Venus would be to explore. The author offers more reason as to why Venus should be left untouched. Venus is really challenging planet to explore. The conditions are far too extreme for any human. And the percentage on losing your life is high. Think about it, is Venus really worth it?

Score: 3