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Ever wondering about the Face on Mars? If so, has anyone discovered about who creates this Face on Mars? This Face is just a natural landform no human will be able to lived in this place. On paragraphs 7 it stated, " Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform. There are no alien monument after all." This is saying there are no alien who created the Face on Mars or no person can survive there to created this Face.

First of all, no one should tried to believe the alien are the one who creates the Face on Mars. Alien are myth not real. This Face is just a landform of Mars, on Mars, there is nothing but only rocks. If there were a creatures on Mars, how different would it be? On paragraphs 8 it cited, " The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98-a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet." This is telling us about the temperature and it is saying if the alien or an ancient people are there. Then the temperature has to be normal like earth.

Second of all, there will be a lot kinds of consequences if alien or an ancient people were living in Mars. On paragraphs 11 it cited, " So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!" This paragraphs is figuring there are no alien or ancient Egyptian. But if there were, the scientists would have already discovered lots of materials to proved there are people and alien. No materials have been discovered on Mars yet.

Third reason to proved the Face on Mars is just landform is to let people know that it is pretty windy on Mars. Mars is windy but real hot too. Not just tectonic can changed the landshape like here on earth, but the the erosion could do that too. Mars does have erosion. On paragraphs 12 Garvin says, " That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars." By visualizing at this paragraphs, it is giving us an ideas of creatives thinking progress. Because Garvin is comparing the Face on Mars and the lava dome, and saying it could be shaped from the wind.

Finally, to sum this up the Face on Mars is just landform no one can just appeared there on Mars, and creates faces. There could be more than one evidence how, why, and who creates the face on Mars. On paragraphs Garvin stated, " It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho." He meant that the Face could be shapes by its own.

Score: 3