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In "The of Exploring Venus" that they want sent humans to study the panet. The scientices double think to send

humans to Venus because the condition aren't easy and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience. NASA still wants to approach to Venus to study the planet knowing the danger. According to article Venus has the hottest surface out of all the solar system even though it's not the closes planet to the sun. Besides all the pressure and heat, Venus presents additional impediments like volcanoes erupting, earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes.

Besides all the dangerous things in Venus, scientist say it's the most Earth like panet in our solar system. Long ago scientist believe that Venus was covered with large oceans and could have been some way of life. Today, Venus still has some feature that the Earth such as valleys, mountains, and craters.

In conclusion, I believe that Venus has it up and downs but I believe that it is worth scientist to keep on studing the Venus because it's the most Earth like planet in our solar system.

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