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The technology presented in the article is quite impressive and very useful. Although there are many good uses for this tech I don't believe it should be used in a schooling environment. Granted there are many pros to using it. These can include knowing when a student is bored and changing the lesson to something more exciting, or finding out when a kid is infuriated and ready to explode. Also this technology could potentially prevent school shootings by finding out the emotions a student might have. I believe the issue boils down to the lack of privacy students would be feeling and the discomfort of knowing we're being watched.

As a student the thought of always being watched a monitored concerns me. As a teen we sometimes keep our emotions hidden like secrets, and want them to stay that way. The lack of privacy would feel immense. In my opinion the pros and cons have a distinct balance. I would feel safer knowing that the kids on a short fuse would be known about, and worried cause the technology would be violating my privacy.

Really I don't think this technology should be used in a schooling environment. I think the comfort gained by knowing school shootings could be prevented is shot when my privacy comes into question. I think there are many uses for this technology and that many advancements can come from it, but it just doesnt belong in a school.

Score: 3