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I think it's because venus is the closet plant to earth so it could be dangrous for earth

and human so

they need to study and research more about vesus to see if it's safe or not or if it's effecting earth.

And it also

system says that venus is a challenge plant for people to study

and scientist has found out by studying that the surface is astronomers are fascinated by venus also the solar system

so like i said venus can effect things near to it so that's what they got when they study about venus maybe of they keep studying they are going to find more things about venus.

Their are a lot's of danger over there so he sugest to scienists

to study more about venus so nothing happan on the future to the earth or other things that they are beside venus also they need to expoler more about venus cause it could be some things that they haven't found about venus yet so they can know how far it could be dangerous.

The author suggest that because on this story he found things about venus that he was not sure about and he wanted them to study more about venus to confirm it

for him.

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