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The story "Driverless Cars Are Coming" they give a lot of information about how the some of the new cars that car coming has sensiors in them that alters drivers that are to close to an object. The car that mention that has the sensior in it is the Toyota Prius.

The Toyota Prius is a better outlook then other cars because the insurance is still probably high but its saving money because its bot causing alot of acdents as though the cars with out the sensiors. Drivers text while driving and some do not pay attention to whats going on around them while they are texting so with the sensiors if they are coming to close to an object it will alter them. The only bad part about is the sensiors its going to alter the driver is passing threw a red light if that person isnt paying attention because they are texting. The GPS They are also putting in the newer cars are better because people that are not really good at knowing the North, East South and West and that doesnt know the directions to a place it can help them but not only thoes kinds of people aslo people from other cities that dont know they way around town.

If i was to go buy a car I will get one the newest smarter car over the older cars because its preventing alot of car acdents and saving people alot of insurance money. The sensiors and the GPS are great out looks on the newest cars.

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