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Driveless cars are a rising project that may actually be revolutionary. To begin, driverless cars that are just in beta now, are not totally driverless, but are specifically independent and keep the driver alert. The idea is that driverless cars will improve the safety of the driver than the regular self-driving cars can. With the more so manual cars, the driver has only themselves and maybe anyone in the vehicle with them to be sure to keep a look out and be as safe as possible. With the driverless car, the car is manufactured to sense any dangers and alert the driver to be prepared when should need to.

I believe that driverless cars can be a helping technology for the world. A large fraction of the worlds death come from car accidents. If this project will help reduce that fraction then yes, I am all for the car. Humans can be easily distracted from simple actions like, turning on music, checking their phones, grabbing something from the back or rear seat, or just checking their mirrors. These driverless cars will help sense danger and alert the driver to be prepared for anything that may be coming. Safety is actually a big concern when driving, and I believe that this project may help all drivers come back home in healthy shape.

As a driver myself, driving while being alert and trying not to be distracted can be a huge problem. With the driverless car taking over in small situations like driving in traffic, I can take a break and practice being able to remain aware or prepared to take control for anything only a human can control. The vibrate function could easily be a simple solution from getting in a small accident when back ending a car. If a driver can be easily distracted from simple things, than the alerts on the driverless car can be easily seen by the driver themselves. Especially with drivers that can be distracted on the phone, the in-system safety feature will be a great touch for people who need a heads up when coming into any dangers.

Actually, this type of car would be perfect for the more elderly, who from age, are sure to decrease in hearing, seeing, etc.. With the driverless car, it will be a much safer place for elderly, and those driving along side or coming into these drivers. Human driving cars, can really stop the eldery from being fully aware of the conditions around them, and make everyone vulnerable to such driving. With the driverless car, it would be much easier for the elderly to take control of what they need to, which will benefit everyone on the road.

Yes, I agree that driverless cars should be a high-rising hope to the future of driving. If everyone is driving a driverless car than it'll be much safer, with less deaths a year. I mean for now, human drivers are the safest things being there isn't any advanced technology on the roads, signs, lights, etc, that a driverless car cannot sense. Only the human can work out the words on signs and color of the lights, until everything is upgraded so its compatible with the sensory car, its not the best, or safest. In the near future, I am on the side of driverless cars and hope that everyone agress when presented with the fact that this may be the safest possible idea for man.

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