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"Joining Seagoing Cowboys"

In 1945 Luke was offered to go to Europe with his friend Don and he knew that this was an oppertunity of a lifetime. When he got there he signed up for "Seagoing Cowboys" to take care of people and animals. Luke thinks that it was the best experience of his life and that it would be to you to.

According to the text, Luke stated that on his trips he was on a cattle-boat and that it was an amazing experience for him. The text also states that besides him helping people he got to oversee Europe and China, and if you joined you would get to see even more. Luke also got to tour a excavated castle in Crete, so if you went you would probably see something even better.

The text also stated that joining the "Seagoing Cowboys" you get to care for animals during the crossings and you had to feed them and give them water to keep you busy. Also going to join the "Seagoing Cowboys" you have to be prepared for dangers at sea, because if your not you might have something horribly happen to you because you might get the nightwatch job and have to check things and make sure everythings okay and might fall or slip in the process.

Also, when the trips were over you were able to relax or play games while the animals had been housed for a little. Also it opens up a world to people and it makes you more aware of others in different countries in need. It also makes you feel like you accomlished something that makes you feel grateful that you got this oppertunity to make others and yourself feel loved.

In conclusion, if you join the "Seagoing Cowboys" like Luke did then you might bring joy to people's life and to yours. Just know that if you give up an oppertunity to join, then you might regret it for a lifetime, because it makes you feel like you did something that you wont forget. Who knows, you'll probably even persue it and wont give it up.

Score: 2