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Do you belive in Aliens? There are lots of people that belive in Aliens but there are also lots of people that dont belive in aliens. There is not really facts or proof that aliens exsitst but there is not much proof or facts that can say there not real or where real. Im A sccientist at NASA and the Face on Mars in not really a face afterall. It is just a Land form.

25 years ago something funny happened around Mars. NASA's Vicking 1 space craft was sircling the planete snaping photos of possible landing sites of its siter ship Vicking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous head nearly two miles from end ot end seem to be stating back at the camers from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia.When you think of aliens you think of green figures with big heads and big eyes right? Well when you were thinking about big head were you two miles from end to end big? No proubly not. If there were aliens with heads that big I am pretty sure that we would have found one by now at at least seen one , or had some kind of eveidence.

Scienstis figured it was just another Martian mese , common enought around Cydonia , the only thing that made this one uncommon was the unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptiam Pharaoh. The shadows are not all going to be the same on/ by all of thease Martian mesa's. Some are going to be weird/Unusal. People schould expect that and not expect the first unusal shadows to be something this important. An Alien head. A few days later NASA unveilded the image for all to see. The caption noted a "Huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illustion of eyes , nose and mouth"

This face on Mars gave NASA a lot of attention. This idea of a face on mars ended up in Hollywood films , appreaed in books , magazines , radion talk shows and even haunted grocerty store checkout lines for 25 years. The face had become so pouplar there were proubly people out there trying to say/prove the head was actually a head and not a landform. That could of made lots of people belive that there is really a head. Some people think that Face is bona fide evidence of life on mars-evidence that NASA would rather hide says conspiary theroirtst. Meanwhile defneders of the NASA bugget wish there was an ancient civization on Mars. If there was a face on Mars why would NASA try to hide something that huge. That could get there space program more attention and prossibley more money even.

The "Face " had its picture taken 3 times with 3 diffrent cameras.Each time NASA took a picutre of the face the picture was more clear. The first picture was in 1976 , the secound picture was in1998 and the last and most recent picture was in 2001. In thease picutes you can almost see a face in the first picture taken in 1976. When NASA took a picture of the face in 1998 you can tell there is not really an entire face there. In 2001 NASA's photo is more clear than the other two and you can tell that there is not a face. It is just a landformation. Some people argure that in April '98 it was a cloudy time of year ont he Red Planet. The camera on Board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. Phehaps , said skeptics , aline markings were hidden by haze. Nevertheless , pn April 8, 2001 - a cloudless summer day in Cydonia- Mards Global Surveyor drew close enoguht for a secound look."We had to rool the spacecradter 25 degresseto center the Face in the deild of weird," Said garvin. "malin's team captured an extraordinary photot using the camers's absolute maximum resoultion.

What the picture actually

shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the Amercian West. "Thats a lava dome that take the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars"If you still belive in aliens that is okay , if you dont that is also okay. But to belive that the "thing" in the picture was a face and not a landform is kinda bizar. You call tell in the 2001 picture that it is not a face after all if is just a landform. There was no alient mounmet after all. Yes there were clouds and we didnt have the best technlogy but now we have advanced tencholgy and we have pictures of the that are clear. (All of my evidence is in the article Unmaksing the Face on Mars."

Score: 4