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In many classrooms around the globe, students are struggling to keep up with their work due to either confusion or boredom. If students aren't getting their work done, that leaves them at risk of getting left behind in a certain subject. This is why I believe that the use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.

Just like in paragrapgh six, I believe that "a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor."

This could definitely help somebody with the determination to learn to stay on track of their work with that subject. Although, people who disagree with my claim may say something along the lines of, "But what if it accidentally predicts the wrong emotion?" And although I definitely agree with this claim, we cannot just forget the fact that a computer will make mistakes sometimes, and this is why I think that , with some serious upgrading, this computer technology could make something amazing and help others along the way.

My claim with this essay was that I agreed with the fact to let FACS into schools to help those having issues. I believe that this program could help many in need.

Score: 3