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The author of the passage suggests many reasons why Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents. In this essay there is going to be many reasons to help support the author. Scientist could learn more about different planets if they ca successfully study the surface of Venus. Then scientist could try to discover new planets and galaxys out in the void of space.

The author explans that Venus is a very dangerous planet to study due to its surface temperature and its atmosperic pressure could crush about anything that trys to land. In the passage the author tells us facts about Venus, "a thick atmospere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet." Which shows that Venus could melt any metals with ease and could crush submarines.

The author also states that long ago Venus was probably like earth. In the passage it states, " the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters." Which both Earth and Venus have the same kind of surface sediment, mountains, and craters.

In conclusion this eassy will support the author's idea that in the furture we will be able to go to Venus for more studies. We can gain more knowledge of space and can explore more of space. Mabye in the future we could find more hospitible planets to continue human life. Thats why this essay supports the author's passage.

Score: 3