Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
In the article "Driverless Cars Are Coming,"that the postive and negtives about

driverless cars is that a postive is in paragraph 7 states that "the Google car simply announces when the diver should be prepared to take over."This is a postive thing that is if a driver asleep or unware it will alert them;nother thing

that manufacturers are also thinking of is that to use cameras to watch the

drivers sre remaining on the road and focused.A other good idea would be

is that if the manufacturers uses both of thoese ideas togather

you never know what could happend.

The negtives about this article is that none of the cars in fact are not fully capable of being driverless it will still requier a driver.Designing

a car that

use a seat that vibrates is not that good of a idea therefore that bad things

can happend, which GM designers had created. The other thing is that it's

not completely diverless that is the car have to still notify the driver for

roads ahead, work zones,accidents, and navigation.Which this just till about the

development of the driverless car that a new ideas that are not vary good

at being driverless.

I belive that form the article that the aspects of driverless cars is that it is more

negtive than a postive. That is it's not fully capable of being a diverless car there is more that they have to do, to be able to get on the road they need to be on .

That what they should do is all of the car maufacturers come togather and create this car,make it what it stands for a diverless car that needs no driver

to contral the car period.GM had cars that was having bad breacks in there

cars which made many accidents an the court got involed which tell you do

not get ideas form GM they make bad ideas and some are good but most can be bad.

That just working togather can help

the deveolpment of these cars an realy

good ideas would make this dream become real to the

people and manufatures,car designers,compenys,and to the world as will.

There will be always a roadblock lie ahead in less you stop it an work

through it as best as you can even though you got your car to half a

million miles without a crash so far is accplishment in any book even though

there is more work ahead an development of driverless cars but people will

hope for it to be done in 2020 or less than that.

Score: 3