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Facial action coding system, is a source of technology that knows how your feeling through facial recongnition. It is used to identify with the muscle movments on a human face. Using this type of technology to read emotional expressions in a classroom filled with students shouldn't be valuable.

Yes the Facial Action Coding System is helpful with identifying exactly how your feeling, but why in a classroom filled with students? Having computers know exactly how they're feeling isn't something that students

would be able to be

comfortable with. If someone isn't happy, the computers shouldn't have to be programmed to go out of its

way to help a

person doesn't

want to be helped.

In the article in paragrph 3

it states that there are 44 major

muscles in a model that move just like a humans face to identify facial expressions. With that kind technology with the

computers knowing, its an invasion of privacy

to

the students. Students like to to keep to themselves, keeping

their

emotions private. Paraghraph 5 It states that humans can also read eachothers facial expressions. Why let a computer find out what your feeling when humans can do the same thing? Also in paragraph 7 it shows steps on how to encode different emotions, the students don't even need

that sort of technology if they can find out what theyre feeling for themselves.

This is why using the

Facial Action Coding System shouldn't be valuable. That students don't need advance technology to read exactally what they're feeling. That humans should be able to read eachothers emotions or just keep it to themselves either a device knowing.

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