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A future where I won't have to pay 100 perent of my attention on the road sounds great. One of the reasons are if I have to make important calls, I can talk to the person without having to multi-task. My second reason is that more gas will be saved, saving drivers money. The third reason is the smarter cars would alert drivers in case of emergencies, which I believe is fantastic and significant. I agree with Srgey Brin, saying that such cars would change the world. It would be like living in a movie that has self driven cars, except even better!

In the future, if smarter cars do take over the world, teenagers would not get in trouble anymore for calling or texting as much as today. One can talk to the person without having to multi-task because a research found that when one does more than one activity at a time, they lose focus to one and put more focus to another. According to the article, the Google cars aren't truly driveless. They alert the driver with complicating traffic issues. That is better than having to pay close attention to the road when you have significant things to do. The car itself alerts the driver, how great is that?

Today, so many drivers, adults and teens, spend a lot of their money on their cars, depending on what kind of car they have. According to the article, the smarter cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis. If the gas of taxis went down, the taxi drivers would charge less, saving people money. For people who cannot afford cars today, they spend quite a lot of money on taxis, especially if they have to go somewhere far. Google has had cars that drive by itself, and they haven't had any crashes so far. The fewer the accident, the more money being saved and who doesn't like saving money?

WIth smarter cards, people do not have to put all of their focus on the road. What's great about the smarter car is that when it arrives at a stop where it faces

traffic problem, it alerts the driver, according to the article. Many people today pay attention to the road and their phones. If something is about to happen, they do not get alerted. If they get into an accident, it just happens. However with the smarter car, before the accident happens, the driver would be alerted so that they can make a movement. According to the article, lawmkaers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.

I would not have to put all of my attention on the road. If I have to make important calls, I can without having to hold the steering wheel. With today's gas price, many people's money are spent. With the smarter car, it will save half of the fuel being used today. Being alerted before a tragic happens is awesome. With smarter cars, if the driver is arriving to a working condition road or accidents, the drivers will be safely alerted. Few problems may arise. However, the world is improving in technology and engineering so the issue will be solved. If the world can send a person to the moon, how hard will it be to fix a car issue?

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