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Technology has made amazing advancments throughout the years.There's this new talk about driverless cars and from my point of view I can say that it's a good idea but it could be a bad one.

According to the passage Google has been testing on trying to perfect a car to drive by itself but needs some improvement.I can say that this is a good idea no only does it give the drive free time to do things its also safer.Smart cars notify you when your in danger so that you can know when you have to take over the car and drive yourself.This however has its faults.The reason I say this is because why would the cars be named drivereless cars if you still need a driver to take over when its time.According to the passage by 2020 Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that drive by themselves.The technology we have can get us there but how we use the technology is what is going to get us to that point.

Next I say that this is a good idea because it relieves stress off off poeple who can't drive themselves.It enables elderly people and people with amputated limbs to get around and get to the places they need to go.With the technology we have and the constant demand of improvement it won't be a short time until we actually have a driverless car.Also it helps people if there is an emergency in their car they can just turn around and pay attention to that emergency instead of waiting until they get somewhere to do it.If the emergency isn't that bad then in that case its ok but if it needs imediate attention then why not have a car that can drive for you and you can get to whoever needs your help right at that moment.

However, I say that it is bad because someone can fall asleep behind the wheel and can cause an accident if the car is unaware that someone is still in the car.But in all reality with the sensor technology we have today and its constantly improving there isn't a reason that the cars sensors shouldn't pick up that a human is still inside the car.Also accroding to the passage people are thinking that entertainment and information systems would solve that problem. "We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way."Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver said.This quote shows us that we are not the only ones thinking, "Well what if I get bored and fall asleep behind the wheel."

In conclusion I believe that driverless cars are a good thing to think about and could be a possibility in the near future.However, there are some faults and that is why people are working to fix those faults so that our world can be a better place.One more thing that the driverless car offers us is less gas usage which means the non renewable source if oil will stick around for a longer period of time.One more thing that the driverless car downfalls us at is even though we can have a driverless car it still requires alot of work.With the technology we have anything is possible.We the people,by the poeple, for the people.We as Americans can help make the driverless car dream come alive.

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