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I am going talk about how studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. If studies show that exploring Venus can help us find new ways of helping our planet, then you have to take that risk despite the possibility that it may not help our planet at all.

The article tells us that there are many ways to attempt the expedition to Venus. While all of them still have a good chance of failure, they still have a chance of success. "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." There will be failure in some of these attempts, but we can't let it stop us from taking risks if it could help create a better future for our planet and for everyone.

Therefore, the author's claim to study Venus despite its dangers should be a risk well worth taking. If Venus can be used in any way to provide for our planet, then we have to be willing to take matters into our own hands to further help our planet. While there is still a possibility that it may not provide at all, there is still a good chance that it will provide a better future for everybody on Earth. There will be a plenty amount of failure heading our way, but we can't let it stop us from taking risks knowing that Venus could help our planet. We have to move forward and if need be, we better be willing to sacrifices ourselves for something bigger for the future of everyone else and for the future of planet Earth.

Score: 3