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I'm against these cars 100 percent just for the simple fact that computers are trying to take over this world. They take jobs from people everday and it really sad, and now they are trying to take driving away from us, like one thing where we can still actually control.

That is really funny in my opinion, if it madders? Well, anyways I feel that this is not the way to get around it will eventually have wrecks which will have bad rep if they start wrecking a lot, and they will if you get enough on the road. What I do not like is that you have to stay alert while driving it I could see if you could sleep on the way while it drives. This is crazy you have to stay alert to drive a driverless car why not just drive a real car youself what do you not stay alert driveing a real car? I know I am a good alert defensive drive like everyone should this driverless car idea just comes down to being lazy honestly. On to the gas well this might use half as a real car, but if the goverment was not so messed up then maybe we'd get paid decent money and gas could be a fair price that way we can find a happy medium for everyone. you just need to stay safe do not use your phone in the car if you have to pull over to see where you are going or to make a call/text. Just get a map they still have those you know that would be better to pull over and use in my opinion.

In conclusion, this new "car" is dangerous I think it should not make it on the road we do not need it just drive why are we so lazy. If you cannot be an alert driver in a real car what makes you think you will be in this car. To many people will fall asleep not doing anything and then when something comes up and the do not feel the chair vibrate they will wreck and them and others. Not ever will feel the chair we are not all the same especially while sleeping that will happen someone will fall out. You cannot blame the car ether if you get pulled over and the new laws do not work you will be paying a ticket for a "car" that is to be blamed. So, I really do not like anything about this car nor do I want anything to do with it in the future. Drivers with no experience will have and even harder time learning how to operate this "car" also everyone will probably have to take a new hard test for it, and have to get a new liesences to drive the machine. That just depends on what new weird and crazy laws come out with this new no good "car".

Score: 3