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Have you ever thought of living in Venus or how it looks? some people believe Venus will be the next earth in the future but some people aslo believe there will never be another planet like earth. well this article will be talking about studying Venus is a worthy pursuit and the dangerous of Venus.

In the article studys show that Venus is like earths twin because "Venus is the closets planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the colsets in distance to earth."

this is one reason why we should study Venus becasue its like earth's sister which comes to my second reason why we study Venus. Second reason is " long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth." But there's dangerouses to this. something that's dangerous about this is how far it is. In the artical the author states "each previous mission was ummaned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours." then procceds to say "maybe this explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus." this shows that getting there will be a challenge. another dangerous thing about Venus that the author states is "evn more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere." this will take years to find a way to take care of the acid.

This basically tells you how Nasa is working on how to land on Venus and showing us that there might be another planet like earth.

Now do you change your mind on believing on another earth like plant is out there or do you still think earth will be the only planet with living organisms on it?

Score: 3