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Have you ever thought about what life would be like if we didn't have to drive? It wouldbe pretty surprising right? People all around the world wouldn't have to waste time learning how to drive because the cars would already know how the drive themselves.This would be amazing! How would you feel about a car driving you everywhere? The future will be truly special someday!

There are many discoveries to driverless cars that have been made throughout history. For instants,

Google discovered cars that could drive themselves under certain circumstances since 2009. The cofounder of google named Sergey Brin, believes that the cars would fundamentally change the world in many ways.

Even though the cars aren't all the way driverless they can still help actual drivers when they are in the car by alerting them of issues when driving. There has also there had been smart road that have worked amazingly well, so who's to say the driverless cars won't?

Google had even modified different cars to where there are sensors, video camera's on the rearview mirror's, GPS recievers, motion sensors, and many different other things to help the diverless cars mimic the skills of an actual human wheel. The different sensors have progessed of time. They can detect and react to the dangerous skids and rollovers that can happen while on the road. The sensors can also inform drivers when they need to use the brakes, making it safer for people and other drivers around them.

Although you may think the cars are all driverless, they still need the help of human drivers. Drivers can help navigate through varies work zones and avoid accidents around them. This requires that pople must be alret when they are in the car at all times. There are also vibrators in the seat that alert the drivers if they are too close to another car when they are backing up too. The manufactures are also looking into different types of camera's that help the car watch the driver, even if the driver is watching the road. That's great!

These driverless cars are really amazing. There are different things that help them makes the roads and human drivers drive safely. The idea of having a car that can drive it's self is wonderful. This can truly help the world be a better place in the future that's yet to come!

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