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"OTHER_PII, why do you have to bring this up again?" I tried to reason with her, ('she' was my conspiracy theorist sister) we had been arguing again over wether or not the "face on mars" was really that,

"OTHER_PII i'm telling you they hid something from you, the public, and me, too. You may be more like mom with all the brains and being a NASA scientist and all that, but I take after dad and have it within in me to look deeper than the facade the government has put up. That face on mars isn't just a butte or a mesa, it is an alien spacecraft!" OTHER_PII ranted to me, and after only five minutes, I was beyond exausted with her and firmly told her, "You are tired. I am tired, we both need to get sleep or else we will be here all night. We can continue this in the morning, we'll even talk about it all day if you want. I have the weekdays off now, remember? Good night sister, sleep well."

I knew that the first thing out of my little sister's mouth would be some crazy, irrational idea to convince me about on of her theory's, so imagined how surprised I was to hear "Good morning sis." when I woke up to get my morning coffee. Though I was not to surprised to see that the next thing out of her mouth was, "About that thing on mars, the face, I want you to know I will never change my views on it no matter how many facts and statistics you hit me with." feeling relieved she didn't want to argue any longer, I simply said, "Okay OTHER_PII. whatever you want." and that was the end of that. Apparently, even if you are somone like my sister and you've seen the picture confirming with absolute resolution that it is just a landform, you still don't change your views.

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