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To begin with, "Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot (author 1). This statement potrays the fact that Venus can be easily spot.

Secondly, the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the danger it presents. Supporting this claim the author states in the 2nd pargraph of the pasage, that nemerous factors contributes to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for human to study, despite it proximity to us. This proves that venus is a planet with obstacles that is preventing us as humans from studying it. Venous is worth pursuing because it has some features that are analogous to the people on earth. Example of which is making people on earth view it as a challenge to be conquered,

In conclusion, we shouldn't base our exploration on earth by dangers and doubts. instead we should push ourself beyond our own imagination. The only way to discover something is to challenge oneselve in carrying out a positive action.

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