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Hes saying that venus is a planet that is the second plant around the sun hes also saying that Venus name was giveing to him by the earth twin beacuse is the second planet around the sun hes also saying that 97 percent is carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Hes also saying that Venus has danger like highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atomsphere there is also temperatures averages over 800 dregrees fahrenheit he also said that no spaceacraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.

The author is also saying that why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades the author is also saying that Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may every well once have been the most-like planet in our solar system. The author is also saying that the blimp-like vehicle hovering over 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape just as jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has not only vecause of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also has not onlt beacuse human.

Curiosity will likely lead us into many equally imtimidating endeavors so they fore hes saying that poeple dont take Venus as a planet nor de they want to explore as a planet besacuse its to dangrous as a plant constieing its the second plant near the sun so therfore there not wanting the explore it vaules.

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