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this story is about how hard it is about how hard it is to study about Venus.venus is onr of the most hottest planet in our solar system. We are going to need better technology to get to Venus.

I think that Venus would be really hard to study becayse how hot it is and how big it is . Venus clouds are made up of acid .Venus is really dense and nothing would be able to stand a chance on landing there.

the author is suggesting that the planet Venus is a dangerous thing to study. " On the planets surface, tempature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atomosphereic pressure is 90 times greater thanwhat we experience on our own plant." Our planet can't get that high in tempature wise.

the hole artical is about how we are going to study Venus

and how we are going to get there .The clouds are made up of acid and the planet is really dense.

and that it will crush a sumerine that go down to the dense part of the ocean.

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