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Venus is a planet that is like the second planet Sun. It is bright and has it's own good. It is also close to the Earth, which they call it Twin. It is very easy to spot. Not alot of humans studying Venus can actully be on the planet for too long.

It's got "a thick atmosphere of almost 97% of carbon dioxid"

which meaning the air around it is very thick and it is not an easy area. Getting close to it is impossible, studying it is impossible, and thats why were are still on about how to really get a real definition of what venus is, a hard to learn lesson.

They say that Venus is a place that we can't really figure out but we still learn about it because it was once a place that was filled in with water, and was supported it in with various forms of life, just how where we are living, the Earth, today. Venus is close to the Earth whcih is an easy place to visit, and it is covere with a sediment surface of rocks and have the similar features of what we have now in the Earch. We are trying to learn about Venus so the NASA group is trying to discover hoe it works and so they came to the point of flying jets and stuff around there. They are also trying to test some testing therte to see what it can handle or hold. They using some divices that was used bnac in 1940 which was during the World War ll. Venus is resistant to heat so when using teachnology there, it all is gonna have to be used in different.

We try to do what best we can to get to the Venus and to study it by using imaginations, and innovations

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