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"Unmasking the Face on Mars" some scientist says it was created by aliens. I think that it wasn't created by aliens because no one has proof that aliens are real. Also because they haven't checked the other planets to see if there was faces on them. If the face on Mars was created by aliens, did they go on Mars to check for alien footprints? Did they go onto Mars and looked closley at the face? If it was an artifact made by aliens what did they make the face out of.

The scientist sya the face looks like an Egptian but in 2001 it doesn't look like an Egptian anymore.

The scientist used a machine that can see if there were any objects, like airplanes in the picture you would see it cause of the machine. The face on Mars could just be an uncommon landform. Its probably not an artifact made by aliens because the face wasn't showing that much in 1976. In 1998 the face was getting clear but in 2001 the face was disappearing beacause of the cracks on the face. If it was made by aliens why wasn't the face clear enough if it was an artifact sign for the aliens. if there were aliens on Mars why wanst there any bones of aliens found. So maybe the Face of Mars could just be a landform.

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