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The story "The Challenge of exploring venus is that they are one of the evening starts and maybe the brightest star you can see in the night sky. The author might like studying the venus star but it can be dangerous because you are lookigng very closey to see how bright they are and it could hurt there eyes.

In the text is said tha Humans hae sent numerous spacecraft to venus to see it but you cant land actually on venus or yiu will die because it is not safe to land on because if you leand on venus for more then a couple of area you could survie or not surie it either one these days. A thick atmosphere has almost 97% carbon dioxide which is good and bad at the same time.

The story The challenge of the venus talk about how

bright the star is in the night sky and also how you can leand on venus is actually survie for a couple of hours on the moon. Venus can rotate aroound three moons Earth orbit and Mars. they have also sent numerous amout of spacecraft to venus and see how long they have lasted. even tho venus has almost 100% carbon dioxide it could still be alittle nerve wracking because you dont know whay is going to happen to you boyd after you leave venus to get back on earth whoch earth is more safrer the venus beause Veuns is right next to mars .

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