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Venus

is a worthy planet despite its dangers

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Goodday sir I am

a student of ela, and i am in support with the author that says Venus is a worthy planet despite its challenges. Because Venus ,is right around the corner its offten referred to as Earth 's twin, this reason is because venus is the closest planet to Earth in term of

density and size and the closest in distance too.

And yes i

agree that venus is a challenging place for humans ,despite its proximity to us

Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and far more challenging are clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid, in venus, on the surface, Veuse has a temperature average over 800 degrees fahrenheit , and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times higer than Earth such an

a word would crush even a submarine accustomed to dive the depesst part of the oceans , if our sister planet is so inhospitable ,then why are scientist even planning further vists to its surface ? its because scientists are fascinated by venus because it may well once ave been the most Earth like planet in our solar system.

Striving to meet the challenges by our sister here (Venus) has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself,but also human curiosity will likely lead us to many equally intimidating endeavors .oue adventures and exploration on Earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.

In conclusion Venus is a

open planet in case of evacuating of Earth in being in danger and should be considerd exploring not only in venus in addition more planet should be explore like mars nest to Earth or jupitar the biggest planet in our solar syetem even pluto the clodest planet , to know a sutable planet that can hold live.

Thank you .

Score: 3