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Venus is the second planet from our sun. Sometimes called the "evening star", It can be referred to

as Earth's twin. Venus has been proved a very challenging place to examine.And there are many reasons listed for Venus being an explorable planet.

The author suggest that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the the dangers it represents because Venus has many features that are interesting. There are many reason why people still go and

explore venus. One of the reason why people are exploring venus is curiosity. Curiosity because we want to know what's happening in Venus. Us, Human are brave, we

love to explore new things. There might be one braver than another but at the end we are all brave. We all take risks everyday.

Another reason why people would explore Venus is because it was once the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus probably had oceans and supported some of the various form of life, just like Earth. Even today, Venus might still have some features that are alike to those on Earth. This would be a good reason why Astronomers are fascinated by the exploration of Venus.

Although venus is one of the planet that is not safe to Human. NASA is still willing to explore Venus. Venus is one of the interesting planet that has features related to some of the features on earth.

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