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The world of technology is rapidly increasing. Along with this comes new inventions. One invention in particular is the driverless car. This car has both positive and negative affects on society. However, the driverless car is not safe and could be bad idea.

The driverless car could potentionally be a great thing. For example, this would be a fun or new way to drive and you could have in-car enterntainment. These cars can brake, accelerate, and even steer by themselves. Many people see this as a dream, but in reality it's a lot of pointless work.

At this point, driverless cars are not fully driverless. These cars need a human operator to get in and out of driveways, navigate through traffic and construction, and to go around accidents. The driver never really gets a break from driving like they would expect. The driver must remain alert while sitting in the car because the car is uncapable of doing everything itself. Some companies even stated that they would place cameras in the car to ensure that a driver is paying attention to the road. Not only is this an invasion of privacy, but it is unethical and strange. Another reason as to why this would not be a good idea is because all traffic laws would have to change regarding the use of driverless cars, and new laws would have to be written and enforced. An issue with this is figuring out who would be responsible in the case of an accident. This would either be the driver, or the manufacturer of the vehicle.

All in all, the driverless car would have to be a lot more updated if it was ever in full use. There are many problems with this idea, involving accidents, new laws, privacy, and the idea of still having to pay full attention. Many people would expect a whole new way of driving, but really the only thing a person would change is not steering and braking the entire time.

Score: 4