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Driveless cars, good or bad? Technology can malfuction espically when there is a lot of it in one object such as a car. This idea could be a very big and bright part of our future or cause more and more accidents every year.

Many of the kids our age have a cell phone of some type. We love and charish them so much but they never have a lifetime warrenty contract. That is because they just cannot last that long. Apple puts out an update to update phones but very few people know the risk of that, that risk is the udates all have little viruses that can destroy your phone. The technology often slows down the longer you have the phone, updated or not. This then causes several problems in the future for the operater.

If cars were made to rely on solely technology and nothing else we could run into problems that our phones bring us too. The car often has a contract with it too but it is not a very long contract usually. If the technology started to malfunction while someone was in the car it could very well end up horribly for both the people in the car and the other drivers around them. If the technolgy starts to slow down like how the technology in our phones does after sometime it will definitly lead to disaster for us. There is no saying what can happen to the technology while you are operating the vehicle.

Technology can malfunction espescially when there is so much of it one object such as a car. The idea of a driveless car is a very interesting idea but certianly spells disaster. If these cars are not proccesed and tested as many times as any man can count than they need to be tested more. If these do get produced than there needs to be yearky check ups on them to make sure that the cars are still in tip top shape or the car could have bulit in notifiacations to let you know when you need something checked out.

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