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You shoud joi the sea going cow boys because it is an adventure.It is fun.You get to help people gather suplys shelter

and you get to help aor country get a better veiw on what we with do forv them and that we will not let them down and that we care about that country and that is a good thing and that if they think that we may have some countrys. helping us when a war destoys our coutry.It is always a good thing to help other country like our country that is also a good thing to

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for them that is that is why you should join them because we are a helpful country we have the fredom of speech the fredom to tell the truth and thev fredom to tell the truth the fredom to do what we want to do and say what we want to say.We have a free country this is one of the best countrys to be at but we are the poorest country in the wourld because of the goverment and we could get it up if we start to make the cost on everthing more but cofee and candy and toys but that is a nother topic and if i could i would talk about it .

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