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Do you think Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present?

Studying Venus should be worthy because its so close to earth we have to worry and also have to be concerning.

Studying Venus should be worthy to us because its the fact that its so close to Earth. For example in paragraph 8 it says "Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of immagination and innovations."This showing we shouldnt have to worry or imagine it.

Studying Venus should be worthy to us because we are now having to worry and imagine the worst coming to us. For example "Each previous mission was unmanned,and for good reason, since no space crafed survived the landing more than a few hours . Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than 3 decades." This is important because this shows why we worry and why no one has went to study the planet Venus.

Another reason why studying Venus should be worthy to us is

because theres a thought of something happening if you even thought to go try to study Venus. For example "Just imaging exposing a cell phone to acid or heat of melting tin."This is important because the thought of taking a cell phone or just exposing any device to Venus would be dangerous.

This is all significant because theres lives and things on our Earth that Venus for example when you expose any kind of device that was tested the chaos of Venus surfac it only lasted 3 weeks in such conditions. Venus is way to close to this earth that we have to test and study lots of things about the planet by it effects the devices.

Score: 3