Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
There is a lot of things people want to do in this world. Usually people would want to just go to a beatiful place but reading this passage theres a different goals going on in this passage and in life.

When I had started reading this passage I hadn't known that much about the planet venus at all. I knew in my head deep down that venus is closer to the sun. Deep down its scary to think that someone wants to go to that planets its so hot on the planet and there a lot of dangerous and unhabitable things going on there. An example of what goes in venus would be there being a heat wave of 110 degree's farenheit. Venus would be 8 times more heat than that of earth and thats just the climate that is on that planet. In one of the passages it had that '' If our sister planet is so inhospitable, Why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?'' I would say that scientists want to explore more planets because they want to see what is out there in space even though the risks. The thought about going to a different planet has been in scientists head for a long time so doing so would be a huge accomplishment done by us. One of the goals the scientistes want to do is inhabit venus because it was once like earth time-ago.

I would say that there is a lot of goals in this passage and in life, I had talked about somewhat the goals in this essay. The passage was good and interesting learning all the thing that I had read.

Score: 2