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I think the author supports his idea well. I think it´s worthy to study Venus because Venus was probarly somewhat like Earth. If we continue to study Venus a ¨Earth Twin¨, We´ll probarly know something new about our own planet.

In the passage, it states that Venus is known as Earth Twin because Venus almost have the same density and size as Earth. It was also reported that Venus once have been Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus still has some feature that are the same to Earth. It has a surface of rocky sediment and features like valleys, mountian, and craters. This could mean that Venus probably had an ocean and could of supported some type of life. NASA is working on approaches to study Venus. They have some simplified electronics made out of silicon carbide and have been tested in a chamber that simulates the conditions of Venus´s surface. They lasted in the chamber for three weeks in such conditions. Which means that are more resistants to pressure, heat, and other forces.

In conclusion, human might have the power to go to Venus and study the planet. The temperatues may be around 170 degrees Fahrenhiet, but it still survivable for humans. With the technology and the brains we have, I am

pretty sure we´ll be able to land on Venus to expand space experation.

Score: 3