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This software is valuable, for the simple fact of i"ve seen alot of photos. knowing whats this painting is feelings can help you understand. In the "Mona Lisa" she has diferent emotions going on. Just looking at the painting you woudlnt think that there is any type of emotion, but thats when the machine kicks in.

Mona llisa lacks a big smile, but she 83% happy. If thats the case more paintings need to go thru this machine. Also Mona lisa was 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. Just from looking at the painting what would you think? I dont even know what I thought her expressions were. It's hard to tell but this machine helped out alot.

So, yes the software is vaulable, not every day you hear about a machine that calculates emotion. If we had this machines in school you'd know whats wrong with your girlfreind or friend. Reading about this makes me question alot of pictures now. Now i think and ask how many other paintings have a meaning to it.

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