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Having feeling or no feeling?I agree with this new advanced technology being placed in a classroom setting because it is educational and beneficial to students because being in an educational setting,it may make it more entertaining and fun for students to learn about the expressions of one another.Students are able to learn about the importance of expressions and this new expression technology could be great for a psychology course,for students to learn how the mind and emotions work.It could also be a great source for students in an anatomy course.This device could not only be used for students to learn about different expressions but various technologies put within the device to help determine a persons feeling and or expression.

When reading this article I came across Dr.Huang mentioning how the artist of this painting (Leonardo De Vinci) studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specicfic emotions.With new advanced technology,students are able to use it to calculate one another's expressions and learn about human anatomy and how the face muscles work togther to form an expression.Which could potientially be used for an anatomy course.

Having an emotional expression advanced piece of technology will motivate students to be more interested in learning more about the characteristics of facial muscles and emotions within.It will be useful for everybody to be involved such as shy students or students who always look mad,like mentioned in the article we can easily judge or misinterpurt ones expression just by the look on their face,but with this technology students are able to learn about their classmates expressions without being confused about why they always look mad or sad.

With new computer softwares,they are able to store ones emotions and it is similar to anatomical information as the electronic code.Using video imagery,the new emoton-recognition software tracks facial movements allowing students to see and learn different expressions.I see it as a way for students to connect with one another even though the emotion-recognition classies six basic emotions students are able to know the others emotion and go on from there.This is a great way for students to interact with one another respectfully and entertainingly.

In conclusion,I believe that this piece of technology is very valuable to be placed in a classroom with students because of the benefits brought along with it such as learning about the importance of expressions.This new technology will help determine a student's action and behavior.This is great and valuable object to have around in some classrooms such as psychology,anatomy,and technology courses.Overall this would benefit and assist alot of students.

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