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I firmly believe that technology like this would greatly improve schools all across the nation. Statistics show that students who tend to be more bored or confused in class, dont do so well in school.

The passage stated that "Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness- and then associated with each characteristic movements of the facial muscles" (D'Alto paragraph 3). That explains how incredibly smart the FACS machine is. If it can recognize the emotions of a painting that was made hundreds of years ago, then it can definetly tell the emotions of the students in todays age.

Another great reason why this machine would be greatly appreciated is because it could improve your daily mood. The passage stated that "For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on you screen, a similar might follow. But if you frown, the next add will be different" (D'Alto paragraph 6). With that statement, it shows that the FACS machine will be able to collect you emotions and then show you something different to improve that current emotion.

So in conclusion, I believe that this technology can greatly improve schools anywhere in the world. If something so small can simply just improve youre mindset, by just scanning you face; it is definetly needed in our schools.

Score: 3