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Luke took a trip with a friend and he went to may uneque places as a part of the

UNRRA AKA the united Nations

Relif and Rehabitation Administration. Would'nt you love to be on a cattle boat and sail to unique places and help people in need? In the passage Luke does exactally that. He sailed across to many places providing food, cattle and shelter for the people and animals lost there food and homes in the war. Just imagine how much you would others that had just experianced alot of pain ina war and had lost there homes and had no food to eat of no place to sleep and may have even lost friends and family.

In this passage Luke is also worryed about him having to go into the tmillitary because of his age and at the time you would often be shiped off to boot camps and millitary schools at the age of 18.

The main idea of this passage is a man and Luke going to sea to help others in need of food and shelter. One of the many places they went where New Orleans they arrived in New Orleans in 1945 where they where told to go to and take 335 horses and food items for the hoses so they didnt die on the way to New Orleans.

Score: 2