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The "Evening Star" or Venus the second closest planet from the sun. The author supports the idea of studying it but despite the dangers. It is very dangerous to be examine more precisely. Since it is referred as the Earth's Twin between size and everything; It has other difficulties to it. As the author supports this idea; he proves some very important facts on why we shouldn't examine it. It would not be safe for any human beings to travel.

Venus or the "Evening star"; it has it very own difficulties on its planet alone. As the autor writes, "A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere... temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,". The author proves a point here since we don't have that experience on Earth. The conditions are far too extreme that any human have ever experienced before. The author proves another point here in this statement. "... over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way...but the air pressure would be close of that sea level on Earth." The humans wouldn't be able to handle the conditions in Venus. The author supports the idea that it shouldn't be a good idea to study about Venus with all it's dangers.

In conclusion, The author has proven many many points on why this study would be very dangerous. Human beins can't handle the pressure or the heat that takes off from Venus. It has a thick atmosphere that would be over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. It would have a worthy pursuit but with all the dangers that it has. The author has proven his point clearly on why it should be a good idea despite the dangers from it.

Score: 3