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I think it would be fun joining the Seagoing cowboys. We would have to work hard macking sure the animals where cared for rightly. Also it takes a long time to cross the Oceon. Lastly we do have a little time to have fun onbored maybe.

We would have to work hard macking sure the animals where cared for

correctly. They had 335

horses plus enough oats and hay to feesd them. That is a whole lot of horses to take care of see I told you we would have to work very hard. It will aslo keep you busy, infact we barley get to sleep.

Also it takes a long time to cross the Oceon. It takes about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Oceon from the eastern coast to the United states and a month to get to China. Try doing that without getting sleep. It is hard to do all this work.

We do have a little time to have fun onbored. Especially on return trips when the animals have already been unloded. We would play baseball and volleyball games in empty holds where animaks had been housed. Table-tennis tournements, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.

That is why I think it would be fun joining the seagoing cowboys. WIth all the hard work having to care for the animals. It takes a long time to get there and back so it is lick a very ling vacation. We have time to have fun when the animals have been unloaded.

Score: 2