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The idea of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite of the dangers beucase Venus it like the closest planet to the Earth because of the density and size and even of the occasionally closest in the distance too. Even though the other plantes orbit the sun as a differnt speed. The speed be changing because sometimes we are closer to Mars or Venus depending on the speed of the Earths. When the spacecraft would go try to land on venus there mission were unmanned. There missions were unmanned becuase most of the spacecraft did not survied on there landing for more than a few house and that's when they knew they could not send spacecraft to Venus because they would not be able to survie thier so about more than three decades no sapceship go sent there aging.

Venus is also sometimes called the "Evening Star" because it's one of the brightest planets. Venus is also the second planet from the sun but even though we not able to see the sun we are able to see Venus from a distant poin of the Earth. Trying to go and examine Venus more closely is like very dangerous for you because

you will not be able to survie the for long. The spacecraft really want's to know morw about Venus and try fo there and there research and they also trying to take a risk by going. Even though they can't really go to Venus many of the reashers are trying to make machines that can last in Venus.

Reashers are trying to make innovation that can allow the machiens to last long engough to knowledge of Venus. They have send electorns made of silicon carbide and got test in surfeace of Venus but it only got to last for about three weeks only.

The NASA is the one working on the approaches of the studying of Venus. The NASA is looking at another project of an old technology called chanical computers. This technlogy was made in the 1800s and was used in the 1940's during World War II. It sounds a little weird that they had technlogy that old.

It sounds werid that they alredy had computers but these computers were really powerful, flexible, and very quick. If the computers were really pwerful, flexible, and very quick these could really help. The computers could really help on the studying of Venus because you need something that technology not a spacecraft because will really not survie in Venus. You need like good technology that can be able to go to Venus also becuase the technology in Venus could expoled or something can happen to Venus and you will not be able to get good reachers about Venus. That is why you should really have good technology to study Venus.

Venus should be able to have people study it and see what's around it and everything. If you go to Venus it would very changllening but there has to be something that you can be able go to there without somethig happing to you. Traving on the Earth and other stuff should not be limited of dangerous. There has to be stuff that you might do and it might be chanllenging to do Venus. There might be doubts also but you should expanded and meet you imaginatio and ivvovation of Venus.

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