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"The Challenge of Exploring Venus" talks about how one day humans could explore Venus despite its harsh and uninhabitable climate. In the article, the author suggests many ways we could explore Venus such as using a blimp-like vehicle to hover about 30 miles above its landscape, or the use of old-fashioned mechanical computers. The author does have some decent points on the matter of exploring Venus, but the overall idea still is unrealistic due to how uninhabitable it truly is.

The main reason that exploring Venus is unlikely and out of question has to do with its unforgiving enviornment. According to paragraph 3 Venus has an atmosphere of 97% Carbon dioxide, and clouds of Sulfuric acid. Furthermore, the average temperature of the planet is 800 degress Farenheit, and an atmospheric pressure of 90 times more than our beloved Earth. Finally, the fact that even well built machines only last a few hours is enough in its self that Mankind could not survive a exploration on Venus.

As previously stated while the author has noble intentions, the idea of human exploration to our neighbor Venus is still unlikely at this time. While one day it could be possible that man could come up with the technology to endure blazing hot temperatures, it is most likey not going to occur with the 21st Century. In conclusion, while the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" has well thought out points, it is still flawed in its overall message.

Score: 3