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There are advantages to limiting car usage. If we limit car usage there would be no smog. There would be less or no traffic or crashes. There will be more room for stores and restaurants. This is where i will tell you about why we should limit car usage.

If we limit car usage there will be no smog. Our air would be so much cleaner. we couldnt get sick as much as we do be cause of the smog. Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe. they are also up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. Car traffic was down to 60 percent in the capital of France, after five days of intesifying smog. Diesel fuel was blamed for all of the smog. the real reason is the fact that we have so many cars/trucks on the road at all times. Some of the trucks leak fuel.

There will be less traffic jams if we limit car usage. For the most part there will be less reckless driving. That also means less stress. The rise in cellphoneand car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work. With all of these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit. There has been shifts in the driving population suggest that the trend may accelerate.

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