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The idea or ideas of a driverless car system do not seem all that smart. With a driverless program there is a lot of high maintance that comes along with building these cars.

Even though the idea of new technology is great you also have to think about the counter acts of these machines also. With all the new improvements to technology you would think that having a driveless care would be the ideal future. In return you have to think about how much it cost, safety percussions,liability and more.

In most states it is illegal to test drive auto-produced cars on mainroads leading to other citizens. Of all states that do not have a illegal ban on testing these cars are still trying to figure out if they will be safe enough. mean while they are testing these cars on open roads whicch could cause multiply accidents on the way. There are many ways to test the saftey of these cars. Some of which are sensors. The car could have every sensor possible,but since it is a computer made engine things could still go wrong in the processing. The car could mouthfunction while the person is driving and an acciedent could happen because the software didnt meet up to code.

Not only is there safety risk with having a auto-driving car think of the cost. Radars alone are over two hundred million dollars. Thats just for one car so for manufactures to have to make multiply cars at that price would be outrages. The manufactores also would have to pay for all of the other driving made things. Sensors,radars, engines, safety equipment and more cost over the normal amount if it were just manual cars.

90% of the car would rely on the computer programing and 10% would actually really on the human. That 10% can be a tricky thing because if something were to go wrong in the programing the driver would have no control or be aware of what is happening

or how to control the car is it stops working.

Another downside of having a computer programed car to rely on is the upgrading. Most new equipment that would be provided for the car would be high end. The programing would have to be updated regularly in order for the car to manufacture right. Most people wouldnt have the time nor money for the constant upgrading. As the years go on people would learn less and less how to drive so if the computer programing would happen to stop working then the driver would be completely lost and would have no idea how to control the car. This can cause many dangerous situtations. The car and possibly people could wind up damaged from the messed up manufactruing.

In the end even though cars that would drive themselves would be a cool thing it is also very dangerous. It is okay to have all the high end equipment for cars,but they should be driven by humans not computers. It wil be a lot more safer for everyone involved.

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