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In our world today, having the biggest fanciest car on the street is important to some people. But think to yourself for a minute. What is the point? Cars mow down your wallet, Cars are harmful to the enviorment, And lastly cars take up way to much room.

In Freiburg Car ownership is allowed but there are only two places to park your car, Both are on the edges of the development. In order to own one of those spots the car-owner " buys a space for $40,000, along with the cost of the home. " This is an Outrageous price just to park a car. If you didnt have that car You would be saving $40,000 dollars alone. You could use this for your childrens college or even house renovations. As a result of this, " 70% of families do not own cars, and 57% sold there car to move here. "

In addititon, we all know that cars are harmful to the enviorment. But why do we still use them? Well i can tell you the answer to theat question, Because we are just to lazy. " Passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe. And up to 50% in some car- intensive areas around the united states. "

Lastly, even though cars have reduced in size from many years ago, they still take up way to much room in our garages. " Precepts are being adopted around the world in attempts to make suburbs more compact and accesible to public transportation, with less space for parking. "  What is the point of having a car in an area where you cant even park it. If you dont have a car you have more starage in a garage. Then you wont have to spend even more money on a storage unit.

To sum everything up, There are just to many downsides io having a car in your Life. Cars are way to expensive, Cars are harmfyul to our our already fragile enviorment, and cars take up valuble space. " All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, And that will have to change. " The real question is, Will you make the change?

Score: 3