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I personally agree and disagree with this idea. First, i agree because it seems like a really good idea, it will make driving more fun and exicting. Not all people like to drive all the time so why not have a car do your job in driving for you? Its a cool thing to show off, Lots of people are fasinated with this car. Their cars has driven half a million miles without a crash, but you can never be sure when one is bound to happen. It would change the world though. People wil be facscinated with this car and would want to try it out.

I also disagree because, this can be a very dangerous thing to do. You never know what could happen having the car drive itself. It could mess up without warning and bad things could happen such as crashes and wrong turns. The sensor they put inside the car could lose itsself and not see people walking across the street, then now you have an accident. You always want to make sure you and your peers or pedestrians are safe. You just cannot make sure of that with a driver-less car. If a negative thing would happen while driving this car, it would create a bad look on the people who made the cars because, they've said so many positive things about the effects of this car, what it can and cant do, so people are depending on the manufactures to keep their word.

I just disagree because, the world is crazy and you never know what could happen. People could get hurt such as pedestrians, other drivers could lose their car due to accidents, manufacturers could lose their job due to an unhappy customer. It seem too dangerous. This car has its pro's and con's. It could be a fun entertaining thing to do, but you should also worry about your safety.

Score: 3