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The author's idea of studying Venus is dangerous. Despite the dangers and conditions of Venus, his idea of sending people close by Venus to study and collect data about the planet is very important for the study of space. But it could be capable to learn just more about Venus in short range of the planet orbit.

Venus was referred as Earth "twin" because the proximity between Earth and Venus are near. In paragraph 2, scientist found evidence that Venus was once can support of life just like Earth. There were some features in the planet surface that can recognize as Earth such as "valleys, mountains, and craters". That is why the author wants to know more of Venus, to study and learn how Venuse used to be like from before.(Paragraph 2)

The idea of studying Venus from the inside through it's atmosphere is very dangerous, because, in the present, Venus "thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide," it's tempature of "over 800 degrees Faherenheit," and the great atpomspheric presure that is greater than Earth, isn't capable for a high tech machine as NASA's rover cannot undergo those conditions. If it did, it would crushed in to a flat or squeshed object, and the metal that is made would liquidfy because of the high heat of Venus. (paragraph 4)

Those are the risk and dangours that scientists and engineers have to know to cunstruct and find a machine that is capable to go into the harsh eviornment of Venus. NASA idea of sending people to study could be possible. In paragraph 5, "NASA's possible solution to hostle conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray." In other words, NASA's solution of instead of sending aircrafts to Venus, they'll send them into Venus orbit, just float on top of the cloads. That is a good idea, but that dosen't allow scientists to collect samples from the surface of the planet. Scientist from NASA is working on materials to make electronics and testing it in a simulation of Venus conditions that "lasted for three weeks," this silicon type material can help on a development on creating a more resistant towards Venus's condition. Working an a secound project, in paragraph 7, scientist try to find a way to turn delicate mordern computers to machines that is "made more to pressure, heat, and other forces," like the divices that were used on the 1940s during World War ll.

With those ideas, NASA could actually create a divice that can withstand Venus conditions in a long-period of time. The author idea of sending people to Venus could be posible. In if they did, scientist who study Venus with the new divices, they could find than just more astonishing information about Venus, but creating hope for doing the imposible and new technolgy that people around the world can use and find new solutions for doing the impossible, like studying Venus.

Score: 3