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in this article the aurthor belives that we should go and explore venus dispite the damgers. thaey have some information about venus but cant get on the ground because of the weather conditions. the high preasure is 90 times stronger than earth's which can distroy anything man made. The planet might have been hospitable and suport various life forms. it is now coverd in rocks similer to those on earth. they should pursuit the exploration of this planet despite the dangers.

if the scientest ever manage to land on venus there could be new matierials that could help us like stronger matierials than the ones that we have right now. if they manges to build something to make hospitable for humans. this could help us advance in technology and other things. there are many new thing that we can learm from venus. NASA is planing on sending humans to explore venus but the weather conditions are far to damgerous. hovering over 30 miles from the surface is the safest way to stay ther but enables them for reashurching the groung more no spacecraft has managed to land do to the hight temperature and high preassure. with the advancement of technology some day scientest could manage to land on venus.NASA has been working on some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide. these electronics have lasted for 3 weeks in these conditios.

As humans we will strive to meet the callenge in exploring venus. we are curiose on what we could find in other planets. They can find soluotins for the dangers that are faced in venus. we could learn a lot from venus.

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