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Have you ever wanted to do something but you couldn't decide if you should do it or not ? Well I havent , but someone named Luke has ! He can't decide if he should go to this ship and go to China with his friend.I think he should go . Keep reading to find out find out some reasons why he should go to the trip with his friend.

First off,let's start out with good reasons Luke should go on the trip with his friend.Luke can find out things he did't know exested or just plain explore .He can also take a break from his family and his job and relax.

Although,there are some bad reasons why he shouldn't go onto the trip.The ship can crash.They can run out of food.They might aslo get stranded on an island.

Finally,here's a little of what I think he should do and why he should do it.I think Luke should go on the trip with his friend, because he can explore.He can also get smarter by larning about the enviorment and what is around you.

In conclution,there are many reasons why he should go and some reasons why he shouldn't but with the,good reasons,bad reason,and some of what I think I should do and why this all shows why Luke should go on the trip.

Score: 2