Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Are you struggling with your work? If so the technology to read emotional expressions would help. It could help by knowing if you are stuggling and changes the lesson so that you can understand it ,you just have to look confused. It could also change other technology like video games.

The computer can recognize facial features and tell if you need help or not. "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored." Dr.Huang predicts ( Making Mona Lisa Smile paragraph 6)

The computer could change the lesson so that the student could understand. "Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human Instructor." (Making Mona Lisa Smile paragraph 6)

It could also change how we do outside of school. "The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery." (Making Mona Lisa Smile paragraph 6) It could also change video game faces based on how you feel on them.

Facial recognition technology could help our society not just by changeing schools they also change everything else that has to do with techology.

Score: 2