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A boy named Luke Bomberger life was about to change. He was working in a grocery store and a bank with his friend Don Reist. Don invited Luke to go to Europe into a cattle boat. Luke didn't want to say no because he knew this was the first opportunuity of a lifetime.

World war ll was over in Europe. Many countries were in the ruins and low on supplies and food so 44 nations jonied together. They are called UNRRA. The UNRRA hiring Sea Cowboys to take care of the animals. I was thinking about it. The next day me and Don went to go sign up.It was August 14, the day the pacific war ended. Me and Don got our papers. So we borded the SS Charles W. Wooster with 335 horses and oats and hay to feed them. We were heading to Greece.

I turned 18 when i was still on that boat. I could be drafted for the military service. I was on nine trips. That is the most any Seagoing Cowboy of history! A Cattle boat trips were an amazing opportunity for small kids. i Have been to lots of places like Europe and China but seeing the Acropolis in Greece was tha best. Also the gondola in Venice, Ilaly was cool. Now i know why they call it the streets of water. I also went in a castle in China and marveled the Panams Canal on my wat there.

It took two weeks to cross the Alantic Ocean from the eastren coast to the United States, but the trip to China took FOREVER to get there. It took one month to get there. ONE month. I thought it was a year, but it was worth it

On my second trip i was a watch man. I never want to be one again. I wanted to go to bed. One time i went to go and cheak on the animals becaues that is my job. Anyways i went to give a report to the boss and i slipped down a siplery ladder because it was raining. My heart raced as i was flying in the air. I was heading to open space on the ship. A metal along to edge stopped on my side. I didn't work for a couple of days because i craked some ribs. But that is better than being dead.

But after all

that happened it was really fun on bored. We played Basketball and vollyball. When the animals had been houseed we played boxing, fencing, and table- tennis. But we didn't just play games we sometimes read and whittling.

But being a Seagoing Cowboy was more than just adventures for me i helped my family and i am grateful for the opportunity. It has made me more me think about others and what their need is and to always help.

I am Luke Bomberger and i graduated and i worked in a bank and in a grocery store with my friend Don Reist. Me and him signed up to by a Seagoing Cowboy. That changed my life, and i am glad i did take that oppoutunity of a life time.

I thing the lesson of this story is work hard and don't miss the oppuortunity. because that opportunity could bee a life changinf.

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