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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author says Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Venus is on of the brightest points of light in our sky which we can spot on quickly. It's also the second planet from our sun. Venus is also the closest of earth in the size and density too. Venus goes in different speeds when orbiting the sun so sometimes we're closer to Venus and sometimes we're not and closest to Mars. It's been more than three decades that any spaceships has touched Venus. Almost 97 percent carbon dioxidein , over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our planet. Hottest plants in our solar system. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcalones, earthquakes and more disasters we have on earth too. NASA wants to send humans to study Venus. Which I think is going to be hard. If they will make it back or if they'll even get close to the planet Venus.

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