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Is exploring and studying Venus a great idea? The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Human curiosity has gone beyond on willing to do anything to find out how Venus was created and find out the purposes it has, and to also collect any natural resoures it has to study them.

Venus is a challenging planet to study but it is the closet one to Earth. The author compares these two planets by their density and size, including the distance. They go on explaining why it is hard to study Venus by describing the weather and geology, and comparing to Earth's impediments. In paragraph 2, it states, "... not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades..." meaning spacecrafts don't even last more than a few hours there because there are possiblities that they might get destroyed and lose researches.

In paragrapgh 6, it states, "... researchers are working on innovations that would that would allow machines to last long enough..."

This is another reason why researchers work hard on inventing machines that are capable to last in Venus to collect data and resources to bring back on Earth to study them. The author goes on telling us that some electronics have lasted three weeks in that condition and they don't require electricity at all unlike modern devices that are sensitive to extreme physcial conditions.

To sum it all up, Venus is a worthy pursuit

despite the dangers to study. This rises up human curiosity in wanting to learn more of Venus. They will take any risk to get close and learn what the planet is made up of and what to use to get information from it. It is proved to be the challenging planet to oberserve closely and why it is risky to do this misssion.

Score: 3