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I think having smart cars is a good idia . I think it will prevent people from gettin injuries and getting in a car carsh .but then

there is some pros and cons about having smart cars that are

safer in the roeds .I n my point of view i think we are try to prevent the death rate from people crashing each year .So we are making this world a better place .

I think that the good thing about this cars are that thay dont take up as much fuel.They do prevent injuries from happening.

they made the next reveloution of cars alot safer. The car

lowers down are death rates of car crashes each year .You dont have to stand in trafic no more because it tells you were traffic is.

My negative thought's about this is that some thing can go wrong with this piece of technlogy.They are having a argument about if some body crashes who's responsabilty is it you or the creater. The car

doesn't always protect you from crashing it tells you that you are about to carsh bout it dont stop the car.some people are picky about the look of the car. Thay should test it out to see if it is a safer way to drive.

I feel like they should take thoughs negative thoughts and make them into good ones. But we know that no matter what the futer is gonig to change so they are going to make cars safer. They are going to make technology better then ever .We should be thinking in are safety and thoughs cars could lead to that.make us a better state makes us look better to.

So like i siad trying to make this world a beter place to live on.so i say lets give this idia a try we have to in my opinon . let I siad it prevocts people from crashing . lower death rates in are state makes us look better. i know there is some pros and cons but guy think about your childern they need to be safe to..

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