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Have you ever wanted to explore Venus? So do the scientists and its very hard to get there because of the heat it gives out. Only the machine gets a few hours to see and what it can but so far we can't get any of it.

So far we know is that Venus and Earth is not that far away from each other and they are close to be twins. In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" it says, " Often referred to as Earth's "twin," Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of destiny and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. (para. 2). It is true Earth and Venus are close together but if the sun explodes, Venus could be our new sun if that happens.

Venus gets it's hotness from the lava thats stored inside. In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" it says, "Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. (para. 3). They have tried everything but so far it's not working.

Its hard to land due to the ground being hot as lava and it can melt the metal and such. In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" it says, "However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. (para. 6). We need to find special metal so we can land safely and grab what we want.

So far this has been a challenge to many scientists and astronaunts. They may call it a very very impossible challenge that can't be beaten. Hopefully we can get the resources so we can explore Venus.

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