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If you ask me whether I was for or against the development of these driverless cars, I would be completely against it. I think technology is taking over everything, people can't rely on technology one hundred pecrcent of the time, and imagine how expensive it'll all be. These driverless cars could potentially be a good thing, but in my opinion, I don't like the idea of it.

More and More as this generation goes by, we are seeing so much new technology being invented. According to the passage, before 2000, they couldn't have interesting stuff, they didn't have the resources. Now only 16 years later, they're coming out with driverless cars. It's astonishing how far technology has come. There isn't a day that goes by that I don't use technology in my life. Personally, I wish that wasn't true. I'm tired of everyone being so hooked and addicted to the use of technology.

I don't think driverless cars should be the next big thing because I don't like the idea of having to rely on technical work. I don't think people should have to depend one hundred percent on technology. We've all experienced technical difficulties in other devices, what stops the cars from having difficulties as well? Although the passage states that the driver can still maintain the vehicle, I don't want to have my safety within the control of a 'smart' car.

Cars now are as expensive as all get out. Could you imagine the cost of a self driving car? I'd assume it's pretty steep. Futurists have already determined that the 'smart road' idea was too expensive to be practical, so why wouldn't smart cars be just as impractical? Even if the government could afford to manufacture these cars, I'd imagine only the upper class society would be the only ones capable of purchasing them.

My position of being completely against driverless cars still holds strong. We shouldn't need to be so lazy we can't even drive ourselves. I don't think technology is that reliable for our safety. Honestly, I don't imagine people being able to afford such invention. In all, I just don't see the general population benefitting from a driverless car.

Score: 4