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The author thinks that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it has. The planet Venus is the second planet from the sun. Venus is made of almost 97 percent cabon dioxide and has very corrosive sulfuric acid as well. At one point Venus even had a rockey sediment in which invloves valleys, mountains and also craters. The author very much compares this planet to ours, the earth.

The author thinks that the planet Venus is worthy of pursuit dispite the dangers it has because he thinks it is simliar to Earth. On paragraph 2 he states," Often referred to as the Earth's "twin," venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus ,and Mars, our other planetary neighbor orbit the bus at different speeds." This shows that the author thinks that Venus is very comparable to Earth because of the density and size of Venus. He also stated in paragrapgh 3, " On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we expirence on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encouter On Earth, " In This paragraph he explains how Venus is way hotter than Earth, but then he later on states how we would still be able to survive in these conditions.

Although Venus is not the only one to compare to Earth the author decides to mention it many times throughout the article that venus is the sister planet to us.

Overall the author tends to very much compare Venus to earth quite often. In which is why he thinks it is worthy to explore even though it has its own dangers as well.

Score: 2