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A lot of arguments can be made after reading the article "Driverless Cars Are Coming". It is actually a very interesting article to read.

A lot of people would actually like the idea of having self driving cars.

Me on the oher hand, not so much.

I completely disagree with the idea of having driverless cars on our roads.

Having self driving cars seem cool as it is, but they can pose many dangerious threats and safety concerns.

First, there's always the possibility of the cars malfunctioning at one point.

The article says that the cars can accelerate and brake by themselves, but what if that didn't happen because something with the car went wrong?

It can put

civilians lives in danger if that were to happen.

Secondly, when the driver is waiting for his or her turn to take control of the car, they could really get bored and lose focus on the road.

So when the car alerts the driver to take control of the car when the driver isn't paying attention, it could lead to a minor or severe accident.

I know the article said they can put on some sort of entertainment to make sure the driver doesn't become bored, but there's still a possibility of that malfunctioning as well.

In conclusion, I really disagree with the idea of having driverless cars.

The idea may seem to captivate many peoples interest, but there are too many risks that come with this idea.

So to limit the amount of future possible accidents, I would say it's best for our safety to just leave cars the way they are now.

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