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The artical is about the planet Venuse. It is also know as the Evening Star or the

Earths twin. Venuse is aover 800 degrees fahrenheite and a 97 precent carbon dioxcide blanket over it. The conditions of Venuse are so bad that they could crush a submarine.

The evedence that supportes this artical is when its talking about how NASA is getting involved. NASA has had an idea to send humans and study Venuse. it also talkes about how they have a blimp like vehicle hovering about 30 miles over Venuse. It talkes about if they sent any vehicle to Venuse it would have to avoid the harsh ground.

Scientst are furthering there study on Venuse because they are fascinated by it. The reason there so interested on it is because it is the most earth like planet in our solor system. The planet has vallys, mountains, and creaters which give it that earth look. It has frequent lightning strikes, powerfull earthquakes, and valcanic eruptions.

When the auther is talking about Venuse he thinks that its still a good idea to study it nomatter what the dangers are. He thinks that our traves from eartth and beyond shouldnt be limited just beause of how bad the danger is or how bad the conditions. that we should be able to exspand to meet the varry edges of our imagination.

In conclusion we should be alowed to let our imaginations run willed. NASA looking ito sending man kind to Venuse. It is the planet that is the ost earth like is several ways. NASA has been studies Venuse for a while now and have found evidene of erth like structures on it.

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