Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
This is right because the use of this technology put

smiles on people face and make people 83 percent

happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2

percent angry. The main point is that the person feel more

happy than sad, and also this gave human a better way to

communicate with computers like it says in the article,

"Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing

better ways for humans and computers to communicate." I am gald that scientist found a way for us to

communicate with the workd around us.

This should'nt be hard for us because us human

pefrom this in our daily life, like the article proclaim. This

is awesome beacuse the world will feel beter with a lot of

smily faces and every feeling happy about themself and

every body else around them, and there will be no

violence, there will be no argument, and the world will be a

better and peaceful place, a place where dreams come

true, and place where everyone is happy, a place where

we can xepress our feelings to each other and work things out.

work cited

D'Alto, Nick, "Making Mona Lisa Smile," Carus Publishing

Company, November 2006.

Score: 2