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Venus is a planet that is in our solar system they called the Evening Star is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, venus ir eatrh twin venus is closest planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. venus´s reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximimity to us. A thick atmosphere of almosst 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. this mining that venus humends can not brid becouse of the carbon dioxide blankets and the temperature average over 800 degress

fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. NASA possible solution to the hostile condition on the surface of

venus would allow scientists to float above

the fray. the NASA are making tinks to know more about venus and what venus have more on his panet. NASA work approaches to studying venus. for example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus´s surface and hve lasted for three weeks in such conditions. another project si looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gaind on the planet itself, but also becouse human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. but this how is venus and how the NASA and other peolpe are finding what is venus what is in venus and if humends can life in ther is so much thinkg that we need to know about what is out said of the earth and what can do to us. but is good to know more abut other planets that we do not know.

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