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I think the facial action coding system enable computer is not good to be in the classroom because ... why would you have something in there that can be wrong i dony know why people aways think computers will always know it all because they dont.

People in this world always going off on what people say or showing them computers dont always be right , i would never go and get a computer to help me with my problems because they dont know everything plus why would you want it in the classroom anyway , someone can come steal it or anything you never now a days people is doing all types of stuff

But again i think it will be good for to be at school because when the students walks in the classroom they can just have them come to the computer and scan them to make sure they are having a good day and nothing is bothring them. Also they should check them when they come into the classroom because they probaly can be having a ruff day and just going to a hard time , but you can make them happy when they walk in the classroom ny, for example"

using the zygomatic major and different musle , the risorious ". But to be honest i really think its not a good idea because why you have a computer trying to sovle people problems when you can just have them talk to someone about it , it dont make sense to have extra stuff to help kids when its a soical worker there. They need to do something better with they money at the school instead of trying to by nonsense and bring it to the school. All tho they trying to help the children out and make them better or whatever they trying to do its not not worth paying alot of money for a mixed emotion computer when you can just send them to they soical worker .But the moral of the story is that no i would never but this comuputer its a good brand to the school and all but i would just not get one.

- but we all know i would never get one of these computers

-This is what i think of the Facial Action Coding System Computer

-Hope you liked my essay guys

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