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The Challenge of Exploring Venus. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, these three planets are very simuler. Often referred to as Earth's "twin". But Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers study. I mean Venus is dificault to a there and study. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket's Venus. In article dais, on the Venus's surface, temperatures average over 800 degree Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our Sun. This mean, we can go live there, because Venus has hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. However, NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. But I think its impossible to study Venus. I mean NASA will not succeed this project. Because, Venus has 800 degrees surface temperature, and almost 97 percent carbon dioxide in their air. So Venus is dangerous and dificualt to study.

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