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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venes," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger's it presents because this days most of people are studying on Venus. they are trying to figure it out what is going on. there is lots of things that is very similar to Earth. Venus surface very hot. Mercury is closer to the sun but still Venus surface is hotter. "In Venus, the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venes. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet."

In Venus is more risk than Earth. "Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. The Scientist are trying to figure out that Human can live in Venus. In the past Venus was mostly like Earth and still there are some features are same as earth like Mountains, Oceans, Rocky sediments. Scientist are also trying to make people travel around Venus. There is lots of planets near around us but the Venus is the most similar to Earth.

I think it is a good idea to study about Venus because the Scientist are saying that there are some chances that Human can live there and there is lots of things are similar like water and mountains. I've heard that Earth is going to explore soon so i think its a good idea to start studying about Venus so Human can Survive. I think if we try to figure it out we can live there. NASA are also studying on Venus to get more information.

People also want to know that can people live in Venus or other planets. "Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts butb should be expended to meet the very edges of imagination and innvotion." The scientist are trying hard to get more details.

Firstly they are sending people to go to Venus and bring them back. How safe is it and how was the experience. They did many experiment like fly jet air plane and many others. they got some good and bad results to people survive and objects. "Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vechiles hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth Levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."

Score: 4