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Imagine being able to detect how your loved ones are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. New software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries.

This new technology can help others in so many ways.

One Reason is a person's emotional state. Suicides are major

problem in our world today. Victims are usually hiding their emotions to avoid being detected for their feelings. This technology can find out their emotions by using a 3-D model of the human face; all 44 muscles in the model must move like human muscles. FACS(Facial Action Coding System) then can help guardians or anyone get help the victim needs.

Another reason FACS is useful is the lovely world of education.

Students go through school lost or angry for not being able to click on to the lesson being teached. This system of technology can tell if a student is confused in a certain or many topics. Many students are builled for saying they need help or they dont understand what is being taught. The teachers can use FACS to look at the students face and see if the student needs to be explained the lesson over in class or privately.

My final reason I support FACS is in the courtroom. When justice needs to be served it comes down to the jury to decide cases such as murder,rape and other criminal actions. Poylographs (detection tests) are the common tool used to determine if the alleged is innocent or guilty. Polyographs are known to fail,causing the innocent behind bars or the guilty running free. FACS can scan the emotions of the alleged to see if they feel empathy or if they are guilty.

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