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In the the challenge to explore venus people go there despite of the dangers of being there. In my opinion I think it is a good idea becouse they get to figure out what could be good to put on the air craft so that hey will be able to there safly and not have anyone left

there and be safe .By going there and researching what to do to they will get and advantage to knowing what would be good thing to look for parts so they are

going venus they are able to fix stuff and know what

could be wrong with it by going there and the disavantage to going there are the many death and the amount of time they have of being there ;there is only 97 persent of carbon dioxide and the

temperature can get to 800 degrees an the atmossher is 90 degrees greater than the the we get in our country and it is one of the hottest planets in the solar system.

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