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Advantages of limiting car usage

This exert is about the enhancing effects of not using cars. The "smart planning" movement is one in which people have abandoned the idea of using auto-mobiles. the movement probably began because the town of Vauban charged forty-thousand for a parking spot. this and a few other key points cause these people to walk, but also the point of the movement expanding has became another topic to asses.

The movement began in the small town of Vauban. this happened because of the outrageous prices for parking. Although that is a huge factor, there many other topics of the early movement. as a result of the parking situation seventy percent of Vauban's population do not own a car, and fifty-seven precent of the popullation sold there car to move there. "When I had a car I had a car I was tense. I'm much happier this way."(paragraph 3 lines 4 & 5) The people in this town enjoyed the idea and started this movement.

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I found your hairband on my bedroom floor the only evidence  that you've been here before and i dont get waves of missing you anymore its more like tsunami tides in my eyes never getting dry so i stay high drink on days sleep on the nights i dont drink like everybody i do a few things different about myself stuuble and fall with a headspin im null my minds on you  but my hearts just num so am i close to you right now if its over and if theres no cance we'll work it oooouuuuuut oohhwhoa you and I

It ended over you and i and i said thats fine but your the only one who knows I lie im under pressure 7 billion people in this world trying to fit in keep it together smile on youre face even though your heart is frowning but hey now its no good we both know its a cruel world but i will take my chanceees as long as you love me we could be starving we could be homeless we could be broke as long as you love me ill be your platinum ill be your silver ill be youre gold as long as you love me i figured it out i figured it out from black and white seconds and hours seconds and hours it takes time to see it right, i know how it goes i know how it goes from up and down man the mirror he sees things in a different light like us do they ever like us ohhhhhhh you and I!

we dont want to be like them we could make it till the end nothing can come between you and i

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