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In this article Making Mona Lisa Smile the author describes how a new technology is able to identify human emotions. The technology is called Facial Action Coding Sysytem and it allows it to identify human emotion. Also during this reading i will be using details from the reading to show the vaule of using this technology to help find students emotions.

In this article i found some evidence that supports the claim that it should be able to use this technology on students in the class room or anywhere for that matter. People do the same thing this machine does on a daily basis such as people looking at one another to try and find out what there expression or emotions are. It could tell if kids were going to be happy about an assigment or not or if the kids were depressed or upset about something and needed someone to talk too. Dr. Huang says that this peice of technology works just as well as the doctor working pn your facial tissue and muscles to figure out what your emotions or expression are. And the sam technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive and more human like. Also people can fake faces and make you belive they are fine and dont need anything if they don't have this technology which could change that out come that person has on life, with this technology we could help people and get the help they need in time instead of getting to them too late and not helping at all.

In this article Making Mona Lisa Smile I used the information provided from the article to help find how a new technology is able to identify human emotions. Also during this reading i will be using details from the reading to show the vaule of using this technology to help find students emotions. And too my conclusion i think that this would be very helpful in the school setting or any setting that you put it too.

Score: 3