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When you are a seagoing cowboy you have an amazing time playing games and you also get to help people in need. Plus you get to go to see placesyou dreama bout at night saying that "im going to go there when i grow up." Some details from the text that support this statement are

Luke also found time to have a grate time on the boat especially on the return trips after the animlas have been unloaded they played baesball, volleyball, table-tennis, ect. In empty holds where they kept the horses and animals to pass the time.

"Besides helping people I have had the side benifit of seeing Europe also China. But seeing Aeropolis in Greece was special" he saids. "So was taking a gondola ride in Venice Italy, a city with streets of water."

It opened up the world to him. " I'm grateful for the opportunity." he said "It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs."

In conclusion when you are a seagoing cowboy you have fun help people and go places it is the most ultimite job there is.

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