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You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys because they help animals that are young and animals that were shipped overseas. They also headed oversea with the animals and they had packed a lot of food for the animals to eat while going overseas. Luke helped alot with the animals because he didnt want them to get hurt or die out on sea.

I chose the claim that you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys because they helped a lot of thing in Europe when World War 2 was over. In the passage it says," World War 2 was over in Europe and many conturies were left to ruins." Also the passage says," To help these countries recover their food supply, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form the UNRRA."

The UNRRA wasnt only helping animals they were also helping people. My evidence to support that claim is," Luke Bomberger crossed the Atlantic ocean 16 times and the Pacific 2 to help people who were affected by World War II." It was thoughtful that Luke did all of those things to save people that were affected by World War II.

Luke made nine trips which was more than any Seagoing Cowboy has ever done. Luke was brave and thoughtful for joining the Seagoing Cowboys. Luke saved many lives after World War II. He didnt save only human lives he saved animals lives too and i feel that was thoughtful.

In coinclusion, Luke was very thoughtful and nice to save people after the War went on. Luke said that being a Seagoing Cowboy is much more than and adventure. The awarness he has stayed with him and now he is leading hus family to a host a number of international students and dexchange visitors for many years. Luke helped people by joing the UNRRA and that was kind and thought i hoped Luke had a fun time doing his job.

Score: 3