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Venus is a plant. Venus is also called the Evening Star becaus it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky makeing it simple for an amateur stargazer to spot. In our solar system Venus is the second plant from our sun. Venus is the closest plant to Earth in terms of denstity and size. Humans sent spacecraft to land on Venus. There were no spacecraft survived the landing for more the a few hours on Venus. Venus is a challenging planet for humans to study because they can not land on Venus with getting killed.

A think atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. The clouds are the most challenging because the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere. The temperature in Venus is an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greather that what we experience on our own plant. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any plant in our solar system.

Long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth. Today Venus still have some features that are analogous to those on Earth. Venus has a surface of rockey sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and creaters. Many researches are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. Nasa is trying to find another way to study Venus.

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