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Imagine joining a Seagoing Cowboys program. This would not only be awesome, but it would be useful. You should join the Seagoing Cowboy program because it's and expierence, you get to visit many places, and you are helping people.

Now, this is an amazing expierence. You may be thinking,"This is a boring expierence," But, it's not. This is such a great expierence because of all of the things you get to do. You get to take care of cattle, store food, and of course, travel. You will probably get to see many awesome places. Now, this leads me to my next paragraph.

So, the next wonderful reason why you should join is beacuse you get to travel to different places along the way. You probably are wondering,"I thought this was supposed to help you," and it is. This still helps you because along the way you get to learn about new things, and see new things like Europe and China. After you join this program, you will probably never want to leave.

Finally, one of the most importanat reasons for joining the Seagoing Cowboys is that you are helping other people. You may think,"I thought this was about us having a good time," which it is, but you also are doing this to help people. You are doing this to help the people who's houses and towns have been ruined in World War II, this is why you are caring for the cattle, storing the food, and doing all of the traveling. This is obvioulsly the best trip you will ever take in your life.

Obviously, this is a great expierence, your visiting places, and you are helping people, but you are also, having a LOT of fun along the way. Of course you only get to have this fun and excitement if you joing the Seagoing Cowboys program. Why don't you make a difference while having a lot of fun, isn't it what you've always wanted?

Score: 4