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On the histories of

Venus they thought t it was a star,And gave it a neakname "Evening star".Ten people got creouse and start studing it,and when they learned that it was the secound planet on our solar system they wanted to land on it.

But it was different than any planet .The surface of the planet was hot even thou venus was the second planet it was hotter than the first plant mercury. it was over eight hundred dgrees fahrenhieit,But even thou it was that hot scientes did'say it was imposeble,insted they they said it was a challenge that is stoping them to not land on venus.

even thou they could not land on the planet they are trying to make some machines that's

strong to land on the planet.Like the item that made the 1800s computers it was strong metal,And they said that maybe that will help them

make it to thier goal.

And espesioly because it's the twin of the Earth they have to study about it. what if we found any criture that live deap in side that unic planet.And like they said "human curiosity will likly lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors".

And yes it is worthy pursiut despite the dangers it presents.if one day they landed. it would be easyer to study the planet more and learn about it's spesial place,and if it was like Earth it will tell us more about our planet and learn more our home Earth.

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