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Hook: The study of stars and planets is part of the NASA and some universities.

Counter claim: Some people at the collage study advance astronomy so they could work on the NASA and evoid any problems.

Thesis: Many plantes in the cosmos have different characteristics than the Earth.

The advantage of studying Venus is important, just like the other planets in the solar system, so the NASA can send drons to explore Venus or Mars.

Unlike the atmosphere of earth, Venus is most percent of temperature and carbon dioxide, it states "A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets Venus."

Studying this kinds of things help to those that look for stars planet to see the differences of Venus and Earth. It's not just the atmosphere, is also for example, the temperature. Carbon dioxide is more higher than the earth's and more plants here.

one problem is that the NASA sends humans to study the all about venus just to see the hostiles conditions of the planet, considerating that there were none of them. Venus was almost like the Earth, but now is all rock and dusty with some risk there, it claims, "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various form of life, just like Earth."

studying the astronomy like venus, it also show the history of other planets and how were they before. The men who travel to Venus leran about the challenges and risk because of the ground's condition, the temperature, atmosphere, anything. A most safe way is that people learn astronomy before travel to Venus. And those who retuned have make reseasch about the planet to study more.

To the finish this, the author is right aboth the study of Venus, so the men could not be in danger out there on the planet. The challenges on venus are more than human being could ever live and learned and survey.

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