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Venus is the second planet from our sun, its referred as earths twin. Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density, size and distance. Venus is one of the brightest stars in our solar system. Venus is easy to spot since its so bright.

But earth wants to study the plant to try to find life. Long ago Venus had oceans and maybe had life just like Earth. But now it's probably to dangerous and I can tell you why.

On Venus the temperature average 800 degrees fahrenheit and the pressure is 90 times greater than Earth. Earth sent mutiple spacecrafts to Venus but they only last about a few hours. Earth hasn't even had a single spaceship that touchdown on venus in over 3 decades. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide the blankets over Venus.

You may think why Earth wants to study Venus even though it's dangerous. If anything happens to Earth. Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary vist.

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