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Venus, sometimes called the "Evening Stars," is one of the brightest points of lights in the sky, making it very simple that even an amateur stargazer spots it. The nickname Venus is very misleading because venus is actually a planet.Venus is very easy to pin point because of how obvious it is.Even though Venus is very dangerous I will be discussing how it is important to study venus despite the dangrs it presents.

As many messions failed NASA did not give up.They came up with one particular idea for sending humans to study venus. in pargraph 5 it was " NASA's possible solution to hostile condtions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray." As dangerous that sounds it is a good idea becase its just like airplans flying over storms. A vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid many things such as the bad ground condtions. This new idea that NASA came up with gives a better chance for humans to servive while studying Venus because the air pressure would be closer to the sea level on earth. Even thought it would not be an easy condtion it would defentity be survivable for humans.NASA's

new idea is very worthy because it may give scientists limited insight on ground condtions but thy would have a better idea of Venus because it would be very dangerous to get up close and personal, even thogh scientists can not take samples, this new idea still gives them the option to study venous more and take closer pictures.

In conclution, studying Venous may be a huge challange because of the many failed missions, but the new idea NASA came up with may get them to where they need to be. As dangerious as it seems NASA's new idea is not an easy condtions, but more survivable for humans. however, scientists would not get as much insight as they would like but they will get a better idea then before, they will learn more and actually survive.

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