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I think that the use of this technology in a classroom environment would be a great thing. Some students have a disconnect to certain teaching styles while other students thrive with the same teaching style their teacher is using. All students would get an approach stylized to them if this system was used because the computer could read the facial expressions of two seperate children and either edit the information they are seeing to be more likable by one student but for the other student their could be no change at all if they show no signs of boredom or disinterest.

In paragraph six the author of "Making Mona Lisa Smile" backs this up when he says "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becomin confused or bored, then ith could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor." It would be like having an effective human instructor for each child by planning the lessons around each child individually and showing, telling, or reading them the information in helpful and creative ways that effect each child.

Each child learns in different way and no two childrens learning patterns are the same. If each child had a separate lesson plan each day, trained towards their specific way of learning then we would not see as many children failing classes or dropping out of school due to poor classroom environments. If this technology was added into classrooms across the world each student in each classroom would get their own stylized approach to learning that will help them the most rather than sitting in lecture halls tuning out the lecture or presentation because they are thinking about going outside and throwing around a baseball or a frisbee, with this technology that same student could get a presentation that relates the information to throwing a frisbbe or baseball and would then become more focused because they are being taught the information in an effective and meaningful way to them.

Score: 3