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In the artical " Making Mona Lisa Smile," It talks about an intracit software that is able to detect the emotions of someone just by their facial exspression. For instance they used Mona Lisa, they were able to detect she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent discusted, and 2 percent angry. This software could be the begining of a whole new era. We could implament this into shools, webcams, security cameras and much more! We could use this to make more money and make people more happier in general.

I beleive if we evole this around a classroom atmostphere it could better the students of america. We could detect if a student isnt likeing a subjest, loving a subject, or just doesnt care. This program could work if we installed a camera in the fron of a classroom, Every student should be looking toward the front of the room anyways and should focus on the teacher. She could then look at the software on her computer and see if she needs to teach the material diffrently or with more inthusiasm

If she sees she is teaching something and most of the kids are unhappy, she could implement more activites change the tone of her voice, or even change the subject and come back onther day This software could be valuable for our future generation and make things easier to see what teachers need to change, or what the students should change. Overall this would benifit the shools of America and could make the educaion apect much more respectable.

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