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Discovering neighboring planets and learning what makes up these planets may be the best discoveries that man kind has found. These planets all have flaws of living in some way, shape, or form, but this does not stop scientists from wanting to see what lurks beneath them. The newest mission that scientists and astronauts want to start, is figuring out what life is like on a planet called Venus. Although Venus may be the closest relative to earth, no man should step foot on this planet due to its lethal flaws and the amount of risks needed to be taken.

Similar to earth, Venus more than likely has had life on the planet. Life on this planet could have meant microorganisms or even plants and animals, but facts and evidence shows that living was possible at some point. Even though life may have been possible then, there seems to remain 0 life forms left due to the dangerous conditions, "On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth." Evidence even shows that this environment would crush a submarine and even liquify metal. Any form of life would die off instantly, including our own. The average body temperature of a person is 98.5 degrees Fahrenheit. temperatures on venus multiply that number by more than 8 times. not even the strongest pieces of equipment that our own planet contains would have a chance to withstand those numbers. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration did give a valid solution that could very well be possible, "NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusiam landscape." Studies may think this is the safest route, but the conditions are still not worth risking valueable people's lives. Earlier in the article, the author presented even more impediments such as erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. These natural disasters alone can devestate the trip. Along with all of the cons of making this mission possible, scientists will only be able to grasp a few pictures and key samples due to the fact that they will be 30 miles above the planet itself.

The study of a new planet is always going to be a fascinating sight, but with all of the dangers and doubts presented in the article, The authors points lean towards a useless mission that could put scientists lives in danger. The trip would help earn little to no evidence at all and no human being can withstand the forces that this planet presents.

Score: 4