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After the unmasking of thepictures of the face on Mars many people had their own opinions on what created the face and why it was there. Personally I believe the face was not created by aliens and that there was not an ancient civilization on Mars. In the prompt they explained there were shadows that made the mesa in the ground look like it has a nose,eyes, and a mouth.

but there is more evidence like on april 5,1998 the mars global surveyor caught a picure of the "face" that was ten times sharper than the picture in 1976 which had no alien monument in the picture. Then on april 8, 2001 which was a cloudless day on Mars the global surveyor caught a photo using the cameras maximum resolution. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters which is better comapred to 43 meters per pixel in the 1976 photo.The picture shows is the martian equivalent of a mesa or butte which is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on Mars" said garvin. but their were still no signs of airplanes or eyptian style pyramids or small shacks. So their is no evidance at all that their were aliens or even civilizations on Mars.

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