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The challenge of exploring venus is dangers is because going up to space would need a lot of time to get to venus.But in plus venus is a ever far places from earth and venus is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets even more challenging are the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere.

But now nasa has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. And nasa is finding a possible solution to the hostile condition on the surface of venus would allow scientsts to float above the fray.

but now get more information about venus. Now we talking about getting up to venus but not thinking about

the temperatures would

rise at around 170 degrees farhrenheit . The air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth and solar power would be plentiful and radiation and would not exceed earth levels that the dangers part about getting to venus.

however peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limitedinsight on ground condition because most forms of light canot penetrate the dense atmosphere rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. More importantly. Reseachers cannot take samples of rock gas or anyhing else from a distance therefore scientists seeking to conduct a throught mission to understand venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.

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