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Venus a planet with a varity of things still left to explore even though it's risky and dangerous. That doesn't stop scientist from what they want to know about the planet venus. It's challenging for scientist but their willing to accept the challenge in order for them to know what they want to know about venus. The unknown facts about planet venus leads them on to wanting to know more about it no matter how much the risk they keep pushing themselves slowly and patiently.

Venus is the second planet and also the closest to the sun. Earth and Venus have a few things in common such as density, size, and same distance from each other when the rest of the other planets have different distances from each other. The speed of Venus and Earth are different from each other. Earth travels faster then Venus which sometimes makes Earth closer to mars instead of Venus. For many reasons no spaceships have landed on venus for the last three decades.

Venus has a thick layer of 97 percent carbon dioxide. On top of the carbon dioxide is clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid. It makes it so hard for spaceships to land due to the temperture of 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atomic pressure is 90 times greater then what we can handle on Earth. this makes it extreamly challenging for human to even set foot on Venus.

Scientist won't give on Venus they still continue to find out more about the planet in many ways. Comparing it to Earth and its land structure. Scientist said Venus is the only planet the is similar to Earth knowing Venus was covered with a mass body of water over it making it possible for living things to survive.

Mant experiments and test have been done due to Venus keeping scientist busy with hope to find out something thats worth it all. And scientist will continue their finding out more and more until they finally get to know what they need to know.

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