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This teachnology is the new technology that can read whether the person is happy, sad,angry or fear. It said when you open up a computer and something pop up that make you smile the technology will give you more of that. Although, this teacnology is useful i think to some students it might be valuable because if they study about art they might think is useful and valuable to them. On the other hand some students might think is not valuable because they are not intersted in this techology and they might feel unsafe around it.

This technology Is useful in a way because it detect how other people are feeling,even when they are hideing their emotions. Facial Action Coding System can be helpful to the FBI because it calculat emotions and when they have a case where they dont know who is the cimial they can use this technology to help them out. Eventhough they person might not look like they will be the cimial but if they try to use this technology it might help them figure it out faster. In the article is said "Most human communication is nonverbal,including emotional communication. So computer need to understand too." Although, computer is the techology in our everyday lives it such be able to read our emotion. This teachology will work for the students who are going to study in the art file.

Facial Action Coding System could go through your private system which some students would not wan't that to happen. If it could read your emotions it could read through you system and how you think and feel. Some students will think is invase of private area. Some students will feel unsafe around this technology because they feel like it know how to read your mind and how are you thinking. Students ahould feel safe when they are in school and around the technology in school.

Therefored, this technology should only be in a art classrooom or to the students who want to use it. It will help some students but in another hand some students will feel unsafe around it. Although, this techology is useful and valuble it should only be allow to the students who want to use it. If all over the school use this technology the school might get intouble too because what if the students dont want to use it and also their parents dont like it; the school could get sue for that. So therefore this techology should only be allow to the students who want to use.

Score: 3