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in firts part venus is literally the "twin" of earth and this maybe is posible but we need to think more clearly about this,have the same stadistic maybe have the same materials with the propiedes.

but is too danger,so the only solution is wait,wait an develope suit and resources to help with this,because is big risk make this,because th air and almosphere is danger for all human with a normal suit.

but maybe "the sister planet" is posible to habit and use for help the human and his history?, maybe yes but right now : no because we dont have the resource and posibilities to make something right there,and the moment we need to search one one option for make this theory or more better to say : suposition.

right now the NASA have informatio for make more investigation and search more ways to get something or any result in the prosses about this "challenge", so is imposible arriva venus? , no but actually yes.

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