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I want you! as one of my seagoing cowboy's, Why? because It's a good cause for other people of course but that's not the only thing you can do being a seagoing cowboy.

If you join the seagoing cowboys then not only are you helping people but your also gonna have fun in the procces, Like sightseeing. When you join the seagoing cowboys you get to travel to all kinds of places like china, italy, ireland, everywhere that's been damaged or low on resources you get to go there.

Secondly after you join and finish your first mission on the way back you get to have a fantastic time in the animal stalls (you also get to transport animals but thats next paragraph) just hanging around playing fencing, table tennis, basketball, volleyball, boxing, reading, and whittling but that's all they we could think of down in the stalls. But I bet if you joined maybe you could think of a way to spice things up down in the stall's don't you think.

Finally If you join our seariding cowboys then you also get to take care of all the animals that were transporting for other countries that lost practically everything to ruthless attacks in world war II and the pacific war. It's also a benefit to you guys who loves all animals, hey you can even say they love it when you play and mooooove around with them.

But what I'm saying is that joining the seagoing cowboy isnt that bad but the exact opposit infact I went to many places and still find everything around me interesting and new like the adventure will never stop. Man I really hope I get to see you sometime onboard our seagoing cowboys ship I bet we'll have a great time hanging around.

Score: 4