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why studing venus is a valiable and worth while disition. studing venus can give us an idea of other planet habitation if we can come up with the traval. taraforming the planit to fit are needs more might be another problum for another time but if solved than it will be simple to inhabit it.

"venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet" if we can get around this with the info we gather it will put us forwerd in traviling to other plants for habitation.

"venusian geoligy'powerful earth quakes 'and frequent lightning strikes" while this will be a problume to deal with but if we can solve the resone for the whether than we can figher a way to conter it by fixing the problume and macking it habitable.

"systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure heat and other forces" by getting info thew this we can mack it give valuable info to what we can do to get a better understanding on what the planet is like to be able to tarraform it to better conditions

so in conclosion i think we move past the danger and find a way to get peaple on other planet for the sake of expanding what resorces we have we may find rare ors that are common there like we may find tons of maby gems under the surfec

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