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Dear Senate,

I honestly think we should chnge the elction by popular vote fot the president of the United States because, The Electoral College system, the votes dont exactly vote fot the president. They vote for the slate of electors, then they vote for the president. From my point of veiw it says we all have an right to vote, but we aren't really electing them. The slate of electors are. So whats the point of voting if we aren't really voting? If we change it to wher the election is by popular votes, we are voting for real.

The Electoral College could also be called as the disater factor

! The American people thought they were lucky that 2000 fiaso was the biggest crisis in a century. The state legislatures are responsible for the picking electors. So maybe it was there fault, all I'll tell you this, they were not very lucky. But if

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