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In the Challenge of Exploring Veuns the Author studying Venus is worthy putsite why does he/she think's so here's why "Venus may as well have been the most earth like planet in our solar system" that mean Venus might have had the same

Atmosphere as earth such as runing water and sunlight if we keep on studying this we could have another planet just like Earth.

Scientists have been studying Venus and they found it's a lot harder than it looks to get to Venus the reason is because "a thick Atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blanket sulfuric acid is in Venu's Atmosphere" not only do they have to worry about that if they send a Spacecraft it wouldn't make it pass Venu's Atmosphere and even if it did make it pass Venus Atmosphere it won't surive that long.

Many has tried to make it before us but we never made it the reason i know this is because "humans have sent numerous Spacecraft on this cloud-draped world each pervious mission

was unmanned, and for good reason, since no Spacecraft Survived the landing for more than a few hours" we have never seen the whole view of the planet because we have never made it.

Reason to why we are so fascinated by this planet is because " long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth" that means if earth somehow decides to stop working we can probably break through Venus clouds and somehow find a way to live there it might take a hundreds of years for us to get pass Venus clouds but we also have think about about how are we going to get that many people on one Planet.

in conclusion we might be able to break through venus thick clouds and not die because if a Spacecraft can't survive that long then who say's we can but that doesn't stop us. We could make a thing for us to breath on Venus just like earth but we won't know until we keep on studying the Planet who knowns what could be on Venus it could shock the world but we won't know until we get there.

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