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If aliens really exsisted wouldn't we know by now? Reasons on why the mark on mars is not a face, is because our technology, scientific facts, and oursafety. Going into detail i will tell you more reasons on why this is a natural land form.

The mark on mars is a natural land mark, because our technology is advanced in so many ways. First, since the day we have found the mark we have advanced in technology. We have grown, and have more machines that can help determine what it is. Another example is that the technology we have is supposed to determine, and help figure out what certain things are. This example shows that with the technology we have is really advance therefor by now wouldn't you think we could be able to determin what the mark is? Atlast another example would be how the technology we have we can determin weather its a living artifact or not. This example shows that how far we have come since we have found it we would know what it really is. The reason on why the mark on mars is not put there by aliens is because the advancement in technology.

Another reason the land mark on mars is not put there by aliens is because scientific facts. An example would be how scientists can determine weather it is a land form or not. This example shows if the mark can be proven as a land form it cannot be put there by aliens. Another example is that a land mark comes in many different shapes and sizes. This example shows that is can come in the appearence of a face, but that doesn't mean it is one. Atlast is because scientist have already determined what the shape is. In the story it says "that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same heigt as the face on mars." The reason the mark on mars wasnt b an alien becaus it has been scientificaly proven to be a mesa.

Atlast the reason the mark on mars is not a mak from the aliens is because our safety. First an example would be the government would inform us if aliens were proven to be on mars. This example shows that we have a right to know weather or not there are aliens. Next, another example would be because if it can be proven to be something els than we would be told. This shows that if the mark can be identified by scientists that its a natural land mark than it would be told to be a natural land mark. Atlast is because we would be more aware and secure with the world. We would be more frightened and want to keep the world domed and blocked so no creatures are able to enter the world. The reason the

mark is not b an alien is because the world would know by now.

The face (Mesa) on mars has been scientifically proven to just be a natural land mark. The reasons it can be proven is by our technology, scientific studies, and our safety.

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