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Luke participated in the 'Seagoing Cowboys program' because he wanted to help the other people that had to suffer from 'World War ll'. He also wanted to participate because it sounded fun and he would get to see different countrys. I know this because the article states, "The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy." The aritcle also states, "Besides helping people, I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China."

Luke also participated in the 'Seagoing Cowboys program' because he got to help people and animals. He also participated because he got to participate with his friend. I know this because the article states, "To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more." The article also states, "Luke and Don signed up."

Luke participated in 'Seagoing Cowboys because he was given the change to go Europe on a cattle-boat with his friend Don. Luke also participated in 'Seagoing Cowboys program' because when he was given the change to go to Europe he could not say no to his friend. I know this because the article states, "Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle-boat." The article also states, "Luke could not say no. He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime."

He also participated because he wanted to have fun and meat new people. He also participated because he wanted adventure. I know this because the srticle states, "The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games." The article also states, "But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opend up the world to him."

I think Luke participated because he just wanted to help pther people. I also think that Luke participated because he wanted to have fun and explore. I know this because the article states, "44 nations joined together to form UNRRA." The article also states, "It opened up the world to him. "I'm grateful for the opportunity , " he says."

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