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In the passage "Driverless Cars are Coming" gives plenty of examples of why and why not driverless cars are a key step to the future or why they should be left out. In my oppinion, it should be used as a stepping stone for a brighter future in mankind. It shows what a terrific upbringing that these cars could have on society, and with flaws that can be fixed over time.

These cars have shown that they can be a safe option for drivers. Driverless cars still need assistance on certain occasions such as "pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues." But those are minor complications that can be solved with a little development. Driverless cars have also been able to drive for quite a long while without a crash. ''Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.''

Of course, part of being a safe driver is paying attention to the road, but even in a driverless car, mistakes can happen and the driver should be ready to take over. There are even developments in that area as well, with manufacturers " considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver." The camera would ensure that the highest amount of safety is provided and shows that all precautions are being taken to make it completly safe.

In todays society, technology is more advanced than ever, and that means that these cars can be developed and tested more than ever before. "Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mecedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020." With that part of the Article, it shows what is yet to come, and all this development is coming along and is right around the corner.

With all developing products, there is always something holding the product back from devoloping at a faster rate. In this case, it happens to be that driverless cars are illegal in most states. "In most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars. California, Nevada, Florida, and the Istrict of colombia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi autonomous cars." With this blockade of where this product can be driven, also shows where it cannot be sold in the area as well. Without the legalization to use these vehicles, Compaies will run out of the needed funds needed to develop their products to make them safer and more efficient. If a legalization happens, a revolution starts slowly after.

Score: 4