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I was in for a great jurney when my friend asked me to be apart of the Seagoing Cowboys. I could not say no, I knew this would be an oppportunity of a life time.

In world war ll the crew had to go to Eurupe. The UNRRA hiered the Seagoing Cowboys to work for them. We took care of horses, cows, and mules that were shipped over seas.

In August 1945, we recived ordres to report to New Orleans. We arived on the 14 of August. I turned 18 before ariving to Greece. I was discharged in 1947. I was now traveilng the high seas, I had to feed all the animals and clan all of their stalls. On my sencond trip I seved as a night watchman. I had to check on the animals every hour. When I made my report to the captin he slid down slippery ladder on his backside, a strip of of metal stoped hime from sliding, but he could not work because he cracked his ribs.

This was an amaizing experince for me and it may be for you if you are into what I was, so I encurege anyone to experince what I experinced. I am greatful for the opportunity that I had. You should be too.

Score: 2