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As a child, I dreamed of the future. There has been many movies that were different ideas of what the future of our world could be like. A common idea is the idea of futuristic cars. Cars are a very common way of traveling. They're convienient, and easy to operate. Unfortunately, driving cars does cause a lot of deaths and injuries because there are many accidents that occur. The new idea that is developing is driverless cars, meaning that people do not have to control the car at all times. Many states will not allow driverless cars to be tested, but I think that they could be very beneficial and can do more good than harm to us in the future. Driverless cars should continue to be developed because it will make traveling more convienient, it will save money, and reduce the amount of car accidents.

Driverless cars will make traveling a lot easier and more convienient. When driving to a place that's far away, a lot of times a person has to stop somewhere overnight so they can rest. If they had a driverless car, they can sleep while the car gets them where they need to go. It will cut down the amount of time it takes to get places, which is very helpful. Also, when a person travels on an unfamiliar road it is very easy to make a wrong turn or just go a wrong way. Sometimes, turning around isn't an option for a while which can make it a very stressful and annoying thing. A driverless car would not make those mistakes. The GPS system in them will let them know exactly where to go.

Saving money is something that a lot of people try to do, and driverless cars can help with that. When traveling, you have to stop and stay at a hotel. Hotels can be very expensive, but if someone is too tired to keep driving, they have to stop and stay at one. With a driverless car, a person does not have to stop and stay at a hotel. While you sleep, the car keeps driving. So instead of wasting a huge amount of money on hotel rooms, you can save it for more important things.

So many people die every year because of car accidents. A big reason why is because people do not pay attention to the road while driving, which is very dangerous. Driverless cars can reduce the amount of car accidents. The car drives itself, and if you do not have to be paying attention to the road all the time, a person could text and do other things while they are in the car. Since the car has sensors and all kinds of different functions, it can brake, accelerate, turn, etc by itself. If everyone's car did all of these things, then the amount of accidents will be reduced because cars will be paying attention to the road at all times. It wil not be distracted by a phone or another person; therefore, there should be far less accidents that occur.

How could someone possibly be opposed to driverless cars? They could benefit people in so many ways. Although the development of them would be a long and tedious process, it'd be completely worth it. Driverless cars could even save lives. Continuing the development of them could change our world in such a positive way. I think they shoud continue developing driverless cars because it will make traveling more convienient, save people money, and reduce the amount of car accidents.

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