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The author in "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" supports the idea that studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers and i'm going to tell you why. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. This explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any other planet, even though Mercury is closer to the sun.Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. By comparison systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure,heat,and other forces. Our travels on Earth and beyond shou;d not be limited by dangers and doubts, But should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. The author supported the idea of studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers very well.

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