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This essay will be in the favor of using the Facial Action Coding System to read students emotional expressions. As proffesor Thomas Huang explained from his statement about the Mona Lisa painting results "She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry"(Huang paragraph 1). All of this information was founded from the new Facial Action Coding System, a new software that can actually calculate accurate emotional expressions. Using the same tactics as Leonardo da Vinci who studied anatomy that helped him study closely facial muscles and exprssions, proffesor Thomas Huang used that information to create the new software.

Not only can this software tell us the emotional expressions of a painting from so many years ago it can also help students today. From the predictions of Dr. Huang about a computer installed with the new software "A computer could recognize when a student is beoming bored or confussed, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrcutor"(Huang paragraph 6). This statement explains how this could improve our education system and keep students on track. That's how new softwares like the Facial Action Coding System can help.

In conclusion to this essay on how the Facial Action Coding system would benefit schools. In the article Dr. Huang predicted that the new software system can detect how if a student was bored or confussed by their facial expression. In that case the system would modify the lesson plan to keep the student on track and focused. It could also be sued to detect sadness or depression which can lead to possible self harming or suicide but with the system it can all be prevented and help the student get the help they need.

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