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The author supports the idea of studing Venus is a worthy persuit dispite the dangers because it has some similarites to earth.

The similarites to eart are that Venus has valleys,mountains, and craters. They want to study venus to see if it is safe enough for a spacecraft to land and get more evidance . NASA has a possible solution to the hostile conditions on th esurface of Venus would allow scientsts to float above fray.

Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not be exceed earths levels. Not easy conditions but survivable for humans.

To find out more important information about Venus the reseachers would have to have some type of sample but they cannot

take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. To conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would have to get up close and personal dispite the risk. We are not yet able to land and get pieces of the planet because of some risky differences from earth that we would not beable to compet with.

NASA is working on other approches to study Venus, lookig back to an old technology called mechanical computers played an inportant role bakc in the 1940s during worl war 2 these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Systems that use mechanical parts cna be made more resistant to pressure,heat, and other forces.

Dispite the dangers of Venus because its diffrences from earth , our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by these dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. We need to find ways to protect our self on Venus and be able to stay alive if we were to ever land there.

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