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The author suggestion to still try to visit Venus knowing how dangerous it is very risky. Although Venus has a lot of similarties when it comes to Earth, there are even more differences that play a big part in the visit.

The author's theory on trying to visit Venus it will be very hard and with take time. It would take a lot of time because of the harsh weather conditions and the high atmospheric pressure. In the third paragraph, the author states that " On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenhit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience on out own planet." which provides the exact numbers for what it would feel like compared to Earth and is very dangerous becuause of the extreme temperature and the crushing atomphic pressure.

The author provides more information that it can be very dangerous by stating that even 30 miles above the surface it would be very hot, around 170 degrees but the pressure would be lower. A benefit of visiting Venus is that we maybe able to know if there were anymore human like species or maybe even aliens because of the large amountof comprasions and history believed to be on Venus. One of the last problems is that it would be very hardto get any type of samples because if they got too close to the surface then they would melt to death so what would be the poin tof visiting a place that you may not be able to do actual studies on and may not be able to get more then a picture or video of the surface from 30 miles above the planet unless you take time to heavly prepare and create something to with stand the conditions.

Those are the reasons why it is very hard for NASA to visit venus and why it may benfit our history and future generations to come if we can make the visit even though it is very risky right now.

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