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I personaly don't think this is a good idea just yet. I think it may be to early to have someone just not have to pay attention to the road and trust a robot to get you where we need to go. I know that most people use a GPS and I guess that is considered a way of robots taking you where you need to go, I just think there is too much conflict in having the robot actually controling your vehicle because whose fault would it really be?

I think paragraph 9 has good examples of why it could lead to something bad, because in some states there are already laws against this kind of technology which I don't think we should necasarily push towards. There is also the safety isue into whose fault is it really if you get into a wreck, becuase what happens if you wreck with another car? There are usually three questions: was it my fault, was it their fault, or was it this robots fault? There is no telling what these cars can do if something in the system fails, and how exactly hard are these things to hack? Overall I just don't think that any of us are ready for this kind've risk, but I do see this kind've thing happening in the future.

Score: 2