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This technology could help students,teachers actually almost every person on the earth ecspecially if they dont want to come out and talk to you usually means there is a reason ,they are depressed, just got divorced or maybe is just having a bad day but you dont know what to say because you dont know what their emotions are and you dont want them to flip out on you, I got the perfect answer use this Facs machine to see what the persons emotions are.

Therapist could use this machine to see what their patients emotions are and it would help the patient open up to the therapist because the therapist knows exactly how the client is feeling.This machine would also be useful in school because the teachers and the counclers could see what each student is feeling and itr would hep the kids who have bad lives at home actually open up and let the school personel know about it and they could get to the bottom of it.

The Facs machine would be an awsome invention to have because it does no harm what so ever and you can use it for good reason to get people who are hard to have a conversation with open up, Therapist and schools could use this machine to make sure everyones mental health is allright and people are not being depressed.

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