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In " The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy oursuit despite the dangers it represents. The author gives many supporting details to his claim. He claims that there are dangers in exploring Venus as a whole, yet he also states that it would have a harsh impact on humans if scientists where sent to Venus also. He also claims that scientists should send mechanical computers due to the lack of protection the current technology has.

According to paragraph 3, states, "These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the seepest parts of our oceans and would liquify many metals." This piece of text by the author states how dangerous exploring Venus could be. He starts by stating that humans encounters on Venus would be extremely dangerous because of how dangerous Venus could be. He next gives an example on how if humans sended a submarine that could hold the preasure from the depest of the oceans, in Venus, the submarine would be completely destroyed and melted.

According to paragraph 5, states, " The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus." This piece of text by the author shows how NASA has an idea on how to send scientist to Venus without some problems. NASA states that they can send scientist by a blimp-like vehicle hovering over several miles over the ground yet they would have some dicculty solving the atmosphere problem. This offers another challenge to how humans are able to explore Venus.

In conclusion, the author states that there is many challenges in discovering Venus. Yet he gives many examples on how humans or machines could be able to discover Venus. With these exmaples he is able to state, there would be many other challenges that humans or the robots would have to encouter. These challenges include the heat and preasure of Venus. Also, the carbon dioxide atmosphere sorrounding Venus as a whole.

Score: 3