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I am against this new technolgy called the Facial Action Coding System. It seems like it doesn't really work and they just make things up. I don't see how it could actually work like that. You can almost never what a person is feeling based on their facial expressions because some people have masks. You just can't say "Oh this person looks really happy all the time" Well maybe their not happy all the time. Maybe their not happy at all.

The text states "She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry." Maybe that's her happy face or maybe it's her "I'm going to kill you face". Who knows. All we know is that she looks happy. Somewhat happy. It's not like she's around to tell you what she was feeling then. Maybe she was just trying to looks ugly for da Vinci because maybe he had a thing for her and she wasn't interested in an artist.

The text also states " In fact, we humans perform this same impressive "calculation" every day." Okay, I can probably agree to that. But still, computers that can calculate expressions seems a little futuristic to me. Maybe in 15-20 years that would be the coolest thing ever but right now, it just seems like people are trying too hard for a big new invention.

So there you have it, I am against this whole calculating expressions computer for now. It again seems a little futuristic. Maybe someday in the future, if it's still an idea I might buy me one.

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