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The author descided to take a trip to Venus and explore it but he said that he had to face some problems why on Venus because the lack of oxygen and other human resourceses that humans need to stay heathly and alive.

My first reason for why the author said that Venus is hard trying to explore. The supporting detail i had is that earth has enough carbon dioxide so we can live but then if we go to Venus. Venus only has 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. So then if we were to try to live there it would be tough due to the lack of carbon dioxide.

My second reason my why the author says the dangers it presents. The second detail is that in article is says " that an environment would crush even submarines. So it would be pretty bad there due to the effects we get form the water.

My third reason why the author says that Venus is dangours. In the article it says its get way to hot there for a human can stand the heat. In the article it says" On the planets surface temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the temperatures average over 800 degress fahrenheit and the atmosperic pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience.

So that is why i think the author wrote what he wanted is becasue he wanted to show people that Venus is dangerous so people can also see what are the deifferences that earth and venus have.

Score: 3