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Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because, our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Venus had once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system, this keeps astronomers fascinated. People are intrested in the topic that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.

The author states in paragraph 2 "Often reffered to as Earth's twin, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally closest in distance too." Despite the dangers Venus has, It is 'Earth's Twin' we could learn a lot about Venus and Earth if we decide to study the planet more. Scientists believe we say that Venus is Earth's twin because it once was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth does today.

The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) is in the midst of finding other ways to get nearer and study Venus. These Astronomers are aware of all the dangers of getting to close to this planet and all the affects that come with studying up close. But for them to truly understand what comes with Venus, they will take the risk.

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