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So the main question of this essay is if technology that can read emotional expressions from students valuable or not valueble. Im going to say why its valuable to this student cause I personaly think it is a good idea then give my overall conclusion over this.

I think that this new technology they are talking about that can read a students emotion or expreassion could be very useful in a couple of ways. It could help teachers help a student or students if the are doiung well and might be going through something very emotional or hard. It can also help the teachers see what they like and what they don't like or if they are having trouble understanding something that they are reading or seeing on the internet.

More reasons why I think this would be a useful thing is because if teachers ask students how thier day or how was your weekend was because if some teachers ask them they migh tlie and change their action or expression of how they use to have it and with this technology, they can just tell the teacher or an adult of the expression of the student the teacher or adult can go talk to that specific student.

In conclusion, I think this would be very helpful to many schools if not teachers or even possibly parents.This could help students get through what they are going through. But in my opinion, this is a valuable resources.

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