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Firstly,we need to discuss about the beautiful strange planet called Venus.Though it sound dangerous in many ways.It's important that we discover new things about the planet Venus.It is so fasinating to know that we can make a friendly surving visit to venus one day.Hopefully it's soon because I would love to know more about our neighbor planet Venus.

secondly,from the author point of veiw about Venus being great for visitation despite being looked at as a hazardious zone. Well it may be true in a way but making the effort of visting it would'nt hurt a thing. the ways of living on its planet is not wrong because the way it was informed by the author was wonderfully done and by the way it is important to discover new things on an unknown earth neighbor the planet Venus.

Then,finally shown on the passage the author talked about Venus being a challenging stage of any living things .Because it was estimated to be hotter than earth.But the fact that it was known for danger seem less dangerous now.Yes Venus is livable place showing the result of thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide on the blankets of Venus.And it's good for growing crops and the end result is great.and that's why I agree with the author satement.

Score: 2