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Venus is a planet that catches the attention from stargazers to people who work for NASA. Venus can also be seen eassily by amateur stargazers because of it's brightest points from the light in the night sky. Venus can be called Earth twin becasue we have the same density and size in terms.

National Aeronatics and Space Administrations has sent people in space ships to Venus for studies of the planet. Also studying if Venus if it had harsh conditions like, temprature level, radiation level, life forms, and Etc. If hovering or orbiting Venus above safely you can see visable ground and some conditions. Space ships can't fully land on Venus because of density.

Old technology has been big impact on society, inventors, and innovators. mechanical computers help during World War 2 doing caculations by using gears. Now computers can be used for games, research, and personal uses. The same thing when the first moving transportation came it inspired people to innovate more ideas like buses, different cars, planes/jets, space ships, Ect. As you can when the future gets better maybe we can fully discover about Venus.

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