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The world is growing and growing as we know it. We are making more cars that could act as phones. But now, someone was actullay brave enough to come up witht he idea of driverless cars. I think the driverles cars are a great idea, more effiecent, and more reliable. Let me explain some of the reasons why.

The reason I think it is a very good idea is because the model would be more safer than the average car today. Today's cars you have to worry about gas, and if you don't have one of those fancy cars you won't know where to go. Unless you have really good phone serve. If we went with the driverless cars it would be more effiecent.

The reason I say that the driverless cars would be more effiecent is because the rate of cars crashes would go down at least 25 percent. You gotta think about it. If the car is already to go all you have to do is tell the car where you want to go and wah-lah, your good to go. If we were to make them the proper way, we wouldn't ven have to worry about drinking and driving or texting and driving. The rate of accidents like those would go down at least 25 percent if not 15 percent. That's when the reliable part comes in.

The reason why I say that the driverless car would be more reliable is because of drunk drivers and careless texters. This way we wouldn't have to worry about them. I mean it's still bad to drink and drive or text and drive but, still it'll keep them off the streets unless the car requires you to drive by hand then we really have a problem

In conclusion, If we make these cars the world would be a better place. We wouldn't have to worry about polution and stuff like that because the car wouldn't have to rely on gas. Also, it would keep the text and drunk drivers off the streets.

Score: 3