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Careless drivers and car accidents have killed millions on the roads in the past few years. Google cofounder Sergey Brin wants to introuduce the world to driveless cars. Introducing these cars into the world can cause an even bigger distraction on the roads and increase the number to billions of people that are being killed.These cars need to be banned and not allowed to be sold anywhere in the United States.

There are many problems that driverless cars can create,but the first one is safety.These cars are not able to drive themselves.They can only do simple things such as making the car stop,steering the wheel,and accelerating.This means the human driver must stay alert and be ready to take over when a situation occurs.Not only do they have to stay alert when this car is driving by themselves, they also have to be ready to take the blame for anthing that goes wrong with the car.We all know that techonology can come in handy,but if techonology goes wrong and the car crashes into soemone else's car,not only does the driver need a new car,but now the driver has to go to court.

The second reason that these cars should be banned is because it will cause an even bigger distraction on the roads.There are already multiple reasons people are being injured while driving such as texting,drinking, and paying attention to otheres in the vechile besides the steering wheel.Manufactures even said "In fact,none of these cars developed so far are completly driveless."If drivers drive a driveless car they will more than likely want to text,eat,or sleep thinking that the car is going to get them to their destination safe and sound.Drivers expect to be safe,keep children,and the pedestrians safe that's why this car needs to be banned and the ideas of driving a driverless car needs to be put to an end.

The last reason that these driverless cars should not be allowed to be driven in the United States is waiting on the law.Presently,traffic laws are written the assuption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.In may places such as California,Nevada,Florida,and the District of Columibia is it illegal to drive or even test computer driven cars.Even if the United States allows these cars to allowed to be driven the work is still not done.The law would have to be changed and people wpuld have to vote on it,just a longer process of something that can kill billions of people.

In conclusion, these cars don't need to be sold because of safety reasons,distractions,and waiting on the law.People don't need to be in a car that they don't want to drive.Drivers need to understand that people mess up, as well as computers and technology.

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