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This article talks about the challenges of exploring Venus , based on this article we can come up with the aidea that it's almost imposible to explore this planet because of too many factors, this planet is the closest planet to ours and NASA has been makind missions and sent many spacecrafts but non of them has survived very long, all the projects to explore this planet didn't work, that's why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.

This planet has a very thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide, and challenging clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid, on this planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the almospheric pressure is 90 times greater than the atmospheric pressure in earth.

Many scientist believe that Venus have been the most Eart-like planet, long ago,Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like earth today. NASA now is working on other approaches to studying Venus. for example,some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide that has been tested and lasted more than three weeks in such conditions, another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers,this devices were invented in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II.

In conclution styding Venus has been a difficult thing, and scientist have been trying too many thing to do it and they didn't work, but they will still trying until they

get more and more information of this planet.

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