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Driveless cars seem to be a good idea because all

you have to do is just sit inside and wait until it is your turn. This way people will want to go out more because they aren't really doing anything. I do kind of think they are dangerous because what if the car stops working, people will probably have accident and the manufacturer would be the responsible one for not checking if everything was fine. While the car is driving itself the people inside can be doing other things or just check if the car is doing everything right.

In this story it says that automakers are trying to solve all the problems that might show up and that they are trying to make the cars better. The drivers should be alert or ready when it comes to driving trough work zones or when something happened like a accident. This part of driving is up to the drivers. Depending in where the drivers wan to go they always have to be ready to drive. A warning that the drivers will have is that when a problem shows up the drivers seat will vibrate which means that the driver should be ready to take over. The automakers are also thinking of other ways to let the drivers know when something is wrong.

For example they are trying to make the car have flashing lights on the windshield and head up displays. This is why I think that driveless cars are a good idea because they have everything ready. When something isn't going right the car will let the driver know and all the driver has to do is be ready to take over. Also the automakers are trying to make the car even better by thinking of new ideas to let the driver know when there is a problem. I also think

that this is a good idea because they said that the cars will have cameras to see if the driver is paying attention when the car is moving.

Score: 3