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Hi I am Luke Bomberger I would like to tell you about a Seagoing Cowboys program that I went to when I was young I joined in 1945 when war world II was over in Europe and here are some reasons you should come join too.

A reason to go is that you save peoples lives and give them things that they really need.Another reason is that you get to expolar the entire world parts of the world you have never seen in your life by boat . Also you get to become a hero to them by helping your own family and other peoples family . Another gerat reason is you might find your own family that needs a lot of help and you help them that were fighting for you and there family to stay alive . Also you might find young ones that were in your shoes at one time and needs a job to help there family and you help them sign up and you become a hero to them. And the most important reason is that you are helping out the entire world and you will be the best hero you wanted to your family the whole world one day you would like to say I helped that person's life. So why don't you sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program.

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