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Wouldn't you want to be a cowboy who rode the waves? We call them the "Seagoing Cowboys." If you said no, I think I can change your mind!

Don't you care about horses, young cows, and mules? These poor animals need your help! Just sign up, so that you can feed them, bath them, and make sure they get plenty of rest. It must've been a long trip for them when they were being shipped overseas. Maybe some of them got seasick!

Haven't you ever dreamed of traveling the world? You get to go everywhere when your a Seagoing Cowboy! You can find beautiful views of sunrises, and sunsets. Imagine the amazing photos you could take. You can get some good selfies, too!

This job dousn't just give you the sence of adventure. It dousn't just give you the sence for caring for animals. It really makes you think about what's happening around the globe. It shows you the feelings of others. It makes you aware of what some countries need.

If you are a kind fellow, this is the job for you. If you need money, well of course you need this job. You may even save lives with this job.

Score: 3