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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", many points are made as to why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. In this essay, I will explain each one and why it is reasonable enough to still try to understand Venus.

First, there are many dangers on the planet Venus. In the text it says "A thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus." This fact would make it almost impossible to breath on the planet Venus. It also says "On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet" This explains that Venus is unhabitable. However, scientists are still discussing further visits to the surface. In the text it explains "Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system." Long ago, Venus probably had the ability to support life, seeing as many scientists believe it once had oceans just like Earth. The text states "Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth." This explains that despite Venus's dangers, it could still be partly habitable if further discoveries are made. NASA is working on finding ways to study Venus. The text says "some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions." This is explaining alternative ways scientists can study Venus without worrying about the dangers.

In conclusion, Venus is still considered a worthy pursuit despite it's dangers because scientists think it was once similar to Earth and still has the chance to, one day, be habitable and support life.

Score: 3