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I'm going against the development of new cars, why because when poeple are driving they are going to do other things, like when the car is driving it's self people will be on there phone and all they will think is that they are fined because the car is driving them so they got nothing to worry about. But at the sametime u need to always keep your eye on yhe road because the compan may lie about how the car really works. Like it says in story not all the cars are driving themself but they do have some that do drive themself but it says that thet still need a human skills around somethings. That's the big problem with them people will not be looking at the road when they hear a car that drives by it's self. This car is going to be bad for teens because we all know how teenages being driving these's day, they don't look at the road they will be on there phone all the time. They even do that with the cars that don't drive themself so now amage them driving a car that drives it's self when it needs a little bit of human skills teen are going to tkae that diffrently.It's just going to make more bad things happend in the world like more accidents because no one will be watching the road even when it says to, because it's a relly bad idea so we should juts leave thing they way it is some thing are not woth messing with.

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