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How would the Facial Action Coding System be valuable in a classroom?The makers of this system say that it can be hard to read someones face and how they feel,well the system them made can help do that.It would help alot in schools if they had it because then they could see how the student will react to the work given.When the teachers can see what the sudents like to do and shows what they are good at, they will do that more.Witch will help the students by them getting to do a little more of the work they want to do.

This system can also not work as well as thought to..Well if the student doesn't want to do any work then he will make the face that shows he doesn't want to do anything.That can be bad cause then the teacher won't know what the students will like to do,or how the student will react to the work givein.It can be a waste of money as well to the school system because if they buy it and then it doesnt work out then they just wasted money.The Facial Action Coding System can be helpfull and aslo can be not helpfull.

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