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Facial Action Coding System is a computer that tells how you are feeling. It would be a good idea to put this in a classroom. I think it would help the teacher find out what makes the student confused or bored. The techer could then change their lessen to better help the students. I think that this would be valuable in a classroom.

The FACS is a unique computer sofware that can tell peoples fellings. It it so good it can tell that the Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. On my own I would have never gesed that the Mona Lisa was fearful or angry. But with the new computer sofewar teachers can know how the students reacht to lessens. The teacher can then realise that the lessen is too cinfusing for then at the moment and then they can find an easyer way to tech it to them. The FACS is so good it can even tell faked emotions. So if a teacher ask them if they undersand and they just say yes to get the teahcer to move on then the FACS can catch that fake emotion and tell the techer that they are still realy confused. It can also be helpful for a teacher to now that the students aer bored because then the teacher can change up her lessen to help the students get more engeged.

The FACS shows us how studding faces can be a good thing. It can also help outside of school. If you are hiring someone you could use the FACS to see if during their job they are happy or angry or anything. It could help you determine who would be the best apicant. The FACS Is a very helpful thing.

The FACS also has some bad things about it. Some bad things about it are that not every computer can do this. Also that for this to be put into schools might make people uncomfortable. It also will cost a lot

of money to put it in a school. For a computer to be able to do this would take years just to manufacture it and sell them. After all of the good and bad things it is a good idea to try and put them in a classroom.

The FACS will help change the way of learning. It will change it for the better. The teachers can use this to help make their lessens more understandable to the kids. The FACS will change the way people learn and teach. It would be a good idea to experiment this in the classroom.

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