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The author does support this idea because in the article it talks about how even thogh it is going to be a challange it is dueable and you can survive under these condicions. Even if they will be lots problemes it will be safe but it wont be easy due to tempetur diffences and diffent radiation levels.It is also the brightest point in the sky and is the plant to have the most similarites to the earth.The arthor also knows that they have diffent tempetures and it is not safe to travle by foot the author still aproves about this idea about going to venus.

Even if some oceans liquefys many metals they can make and invent new types of metal to help go into oceans and also even though it is no safe to go on foot veicles like jets cat go above storms and rocky floors. Also solor power will be plentiful for powering every thing because of how bight it is on venus.It is also a good idea because people are upgrading and making old parts better by making the resist mor and last more time in these conditions.

The tempurtes in venus is an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than the earth but even with these temeptures you can still be able to survive and they are also more extreme than anything we encountered on earth.The author also says that us humans should not be scared of taking risks and should expand to meet very edges of imagination and innovation.They are also working on making thins like cellphones and tablets more resistant to be able to be used on venus or outher places.

The authors opinion is that it is a good idea even if it is not easy and every thing is alot diffent you can still be able to survive on venus.Some diffences are tempture,weather,terrians and every thing is similar but more deadly on venus than on earth .There might be alsot of bad things but every thing can have a souloution like with stoms you can use somthing like a jut and be able to go above the storms and moutains and in the water you can make strong more resistant metals to go under water.So what the author said is we should not be sacred to take risk and should just go for it and try and maby it will all be fine and go well.

Score: 3