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In a cowboy who road waves Luke Bomberger just finished highschool and is managing two jobs for himself to get money for some reason and then his friend offers him to ot to Europe with him and know world war two has ended in Europe and many counries were left in ruins and the 44 nations joined together to make the UNRRA(united nation srelief and rehabillitation administration) and the UNRRA hired the seagoing coyboys

to ship cattle over to countries in need Don and Luke sighed up.They recieved there orders to report to New Orleans by August 14 the day the pacific war ended and then they got there semans papers and boared the SS Charles W.Wooster and they headed toward Greece with cargo of 335 horses plus hay and oats to feed them on the way there. Luke tuned 18 and was know old enough to join the military when my draft board came

was on the cattle boat trip and they said i would just keep doing that for my service by the time i was discharged i had gone on 9 trips already in two years i had gone on 9 trips the trips were unbelieveable all the

sights thta i came across it was crazy at wha i saw

the men who i was with we also played games when we were coming back to america wed play tennis,boxing,fencing,baseball, volleyball and many other types of sports aswell.But being a seagoing cowboy had much more to it it opened my eyes to a vast world and it made me more aware of other peopl and countries and there needs .And that

awareness stuck with him and he hosted a number international students and exchange vistors for many years.

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