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Sharing Our Future with Technology

Driverless cars will be more of a negative thing for the human race, because they spy on you, lead to distractions, and would add on to the idea of the "robot takeover".

Driverless cars would not be a good thing because, yes they do the work for you but they will be spying on every move you make in the vehicle. In the article it says that "Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver". That is in invasion of privacy. A person's car is like their second home. There could be a time where something need to be said and left in the moment. Not recorded for later use.

Another reason the Driverless Cars are not a good idea is because people would get bored in a car waiting on their turn to drive. Humans usually try to preoccupy themselves when passing the time by and waiting on other things. Driverless cars would in a way increase the risk of accidents because people may try to text or do something that will distract them from paying attention to when they are being signaled to take over.

The last reason that the invention is bad is because, the cars could be a great addition to the "Robot Takeover" that is so popularly expected. A great amount of developement has to go into these cars, because they are driving themselves so they have to be really smart. They could possibly turn into the expectation of the takeover that will put humans to end. It is not smart for humans to create something that will demolish us.

The idea of driverless cars is a bad idea because you would not have private moments in the car anymore, they lead to distractions, and could possibly be a factor in the end of all man-kind.

Score: 4