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Base on what I read Venus is a important planet it is the second from the sun and it's nickname is the evening star and is one of the brightest points of light in the night. Also in this passage I found out Venus is also dangerous and is referred to as Earth's twin. Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth.

Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too. However on planet Venus the surface,temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and and also atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than waht we experience on our own planet.

A long time ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth. The NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.

This passage was helpful learning more about Venus like how hot it is and how big and what the NASA is doing to study it. But I don't think I could live on Venus it wouldn't be safe because of the pressure,heat and other bad forces.

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