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Our Earth is having a huge change by contamination, gloval warm,etc. Scientists are thinking further by searching life in other planets, this project wolud be a great idea, but this take a lt of time of investigations and stuff like that.

The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents, because we can have another planet in where in which we can stand and life there, astronomers are facinated by venus, according to the paragraph 4 it says " It may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system... Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth", we can conclude that they were talking about finding space to stay there.

The reasons why we junt can go there and set

a new planet is, because of the conditions right there. In paragraph 3 the autor states one of the most significant reasons, it says "Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun... Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface", this the dangerous problem in this project. The planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than

what experience on our own planet.

Scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk. According to paragraph 6 it says " Many researches are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaninfully to our knoledge of Venus" this paragraph let us know that they are working to reach there and looking to survive more time.

Well, this project can change the entire world and our lifes, because if there are life, we must hacve the opportunity to be there or people who want to be in Venus could be. We need more time to improve our experiments and this could be a grat and amazing change.

Score: 3