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Are you think about joining the Seagoing Cowboys progam? If so,then you should try the Seagoing Cowboys. The Seagoing Cowboys are amazing to happen in anyones life,I believe. The trip may be to care for the animal when they're on board with us but, it's a great,once in a lifetime,opportunity. Let me tell you some facts that may convince you to join.

You may be onboard to care for the animals,like cleaning the stalls,but there is more to it then just that. When you stop somewhere to drop off the animals, you get to sightseeing.When I was a Seagoing Cowboy, I had the benefit of seeing Europe,China,Venice,Italy,and even the Acropolis in Greece. I saw a excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. I went over sea for weeks at a time. Even though the trip was long, it was amazing to see the sights,care for the animals,and,after the animals left,play games like volleyball and baseball in the animal's stalls.

Well,you may have thought that was amazing to hear about, it's better to go and do the adventure for yourself. There are more reason that you should join but,maybe I should let you go join if you let you sign up if you want to. If I haven't conviced you yet, then maybe Seagoing Cowboys may not be for you. I just hope you try to do Seagoing Cowboys and if you don't want to,you don't have to. Well,that's all I have to say,other then, join the Seagoing Cowboys!

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