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I feel that this kind of technology is amazing. Being able to read or emotions by seeing our face is really cool. This kind of technolgy may help in the long run by letting us know peoples emotions and how they are feeling. The technology may also help us find new things in peoples emotions and allow us to learn how they work and what causes them. That is why this Facial Coding System is such a big tecgnological advancement.

With this technology we can figure out what people are actually thinking. It can detect whether or not people are actually happy or if there just faking a smile. Also the Facial Coding System can tell whether or not someone is confused. If a student is doing math homework on a computer and the student doesn't understand it, the Facial Coding System can pick up on that and try to help the student understand the work by showing him a lessonon the work. Also this technolgy can help if somebody is telling the truth. If a person is lying and their facial exprssion changes the computer program can pick up on it and tell you if they are telling the truth. This technology canalso tell if people are afraid of something and need help.

This technology is a great idea and if worked with even more could become amazing. Being able to tell peoples emotions by percentage will help people who are students and just regular people. With this technology we could even make the world a safer place by checking if people are telling the truth or if they are hiding something. That is why the Facial Coding System is so great, and i hope thatit becomes even better in the future.

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