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This story is about a nice yound man named Luke Boberger who has been crossing over to Atlantice Ocean 16 times in a row.

Luke Boberger had no type of a idea about how his life changed every since he has graduation, Luke has worked two part time jobs at the grocery store and the bank. Luke's friend Don Reist invited hin to Europe on the cattle boat Luke couldnt resist to say no so he went with his friend because he new it will be a good thing for his life.After that he went to New Orlands, Luke says '' the day the Pacific war ended''. When Luke and his family lefted New Orlands he turned 18 before arrving into Greece, Luke says '' When my draft board learned that i was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service''. By the time they discharged him in 1947, Luke had made nine trips- the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.

Luke's says other speech that says '' The cattle-boat trips an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy'', '' Besides helping people, I had the side 's benefit of seeing Europe and Chine. Afterwards again here's other speech that says '' So was talking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.'' Luke says it took him about two weeks to cross all the was to Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China couclusion, Luke travled alot it took hime so many days and months and day and weeks to get where he needed to be, Luke became a Seagoign Cowboy Luke says '' it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.'' The End!!!!!!!

In counclusion, Luke was so happy of being a Seagoing Cowboy he says '' it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs''.

Score: 3