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would you have a drigerless care ? what if its not safe or something mouthfunctions on the car. google and a whole lot of car companys are thinking to make these driverless cars. But they really should not make these cars because in the generation we live in these cars are either going to cause many deaths due to the people that dont care about life. what if the car gets in the wrong hands that can mean multiple deaths. On top of the deaths these cars are going to be very expensive.

the county is already going through money problems as we speak so think if they bring these cars out. were going to go into a drought as a country people will want the cars so now there doing anything legal or illegal to get them. the cars also are not safe in paragraph 9 its telling me that if i buy one of these cars i could crash or anything can happen. Because google hasnt even put everything in place for safety of the car or driver. The state doesnt have laws for the car or cant even tell if we are at fault for crashing the car thats also in paragraph 9.

there are pluses

to this car though dont get me wrong. it may not be safe or proven to even drive by itself completly yet but the work that they are doing on it to upgrade it sounds nice. if we can have these cars up and running fully without any problems i might just look into it. for now i think they should work on getting more sensors in and on the car so it can be proven to drive with no driver helping park or go through busy streets.

my complete thoughts on this car is it looks and sounds nice. i would have one in 2020 if i get the chance to eperince it. but they have to fix how safe the car is because it sounds cool it can watch you to always make sure your not a careless driver and you can be in the car with your friends without having to drive or get tired.

Score: 3