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In the story A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves,is about a person who just graduated highschool. He had already been working two part-time jobs. Then his friend Don invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. He couldn't say no. Luke knew it was an opportuity of a lifetime. When they got their,Lke and Don signed up to take care of animals. In 1945 of August, they received their orders to go to New Orleans. They didn't arrive until August 14th.

When they arrived Luke and Don got their seaman papers and boarded the SS Charles W.Wooster, then headed forn greece. This opportunity was good for Luke because he had just graduated highschool. As they headed over sea, they had a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them. Before arriving Greece, Luke had turned 18 which ment he could be drafted for military service. By the time Luke was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips

the most of any Seagoing Cowboy. Luke's carrer was getting farther and farther. He

was happy for his self.

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