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The invention of driverless cars has many intriguing ideas in cluding the reduction of the use of gas, sensors to alert the driver when to take over the wheel, and a new entertainment system. But, without a driver in control of the vehicle, a driverless car may somehow malfunction and go out of control causing danger to the "driver", passengers, and other people on the road. Also, without an ability to drive, drivers will feel very bored because they would have nothing to do. Therefore, I believe that driverless cars should not be made because of the safety hazards that it could cause and because of the lack of entertainment value.

Driverless cars should not be created for two main reasons. First, without the attention of the so-called "driver", the car may suddenly break down causing accidents and injuries to pedestrians or oassengers in the car. Though cars, like the BMW' s stated in this article have special touch sensors, the driver, who may not be paying attention to the road, might not have time to react to the situation. With driverless cars, the driver may underestimate what could happen if the car suddenly malfunctioned. Therefore, driverless cars should not be created.

Driverless cars would not keep the "driver" aware of his surroundings. The driver would basically be another passenger in the car. As a result, people in the car might start to get very bored. On long trips, like traveling down to Florida, a driver would not get bored because the new roads would keep his or her eyes occupied on the road, and the driver would get to drive on unfamiliar roads, making the drive a little less boring for the drivers. But without the ability to drive, there would be nothing to do on these long trips. This article even admits that the psychological aspects of self driving cars are a challenge becuase the driver might go insane just sitting in a car for a prolonged period of time. As a result, driverless cars should not be created.

Driverless cars should not be mad because of the psychological effects on a person and safety hazards that it could cause. Without the attention of a driver, the car could go out of control without the driver even noticing. A driver would also be very bored just sitting in a car for a long period of time, and therefore, he or she would not like these kinds of cars. We should stick with non-autonomous cars because the keep the attention of the driver on the road and it provides at least some entertainment value for the driver.

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