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Venus and mars are the closest planet to the Earth, and Venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus's is a challenging planet for humans to study. Venus is

challenging planet because the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere, and is challenging because the plane surface has temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheith.

Venus is a dangers planet because the coditions are extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth, what make Venus more dangers is because Venus has the hottest surface temperatures of any planet in our solar system. If people wants to they would not live a lot of time.

''Astronomers are fascinated by Venus.'' Because Venus is like a sister of Earth because has a ''surface of rocky'' like Earth and has too valleys, mountains, and crater like Earth. ''Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.

NASA is studying Venus for simplified electronics, and they are making electronics of silicon carbide and tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface. They are making project looking back to an old technology like mechanical like computers and other techology, like important role in the 1940s during World War ll.

NASA said the phones or table to acid or heat caple of melting are extreme delicate when cames to physical conditiones. ''By comparison, Systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistan topressure, heat, and other forces.''

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