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The computer used to reccognisze peoples emotions uses muscle but the computer is not smart enough to recognize their emotions within their heart and hypocracy,which is the opposite of an emotion,the computer also forgets that there

a talented paople and there are some some people that have mental problems,

and lastly people that get fraustrated when suprised.Sometimes when a comedian makes up a joke,he expects the audience to laugh,but in most cases 30% of the

audience find it funny out of the 100%,but if the remaiming 70% finds out that other people are laughing,they just have to follow the crowd and reduce tension

to the comedian.

From the passage,in paragraph 4,the author says that it's "unversal",but again forgets that there are unique people,just like the left handed people and people

with high IQ.This doesn't make the computer to recognize everyones emotion,

unless being forced to make an emotion,but by this,it makes the unique feel left

out which is a contributing factor to commiting suicide.And in paragraph 8,if faces of paople doesn't lie,what about people with down syndrome and thieves that escapes trials for murder,because there are some murderers that calls the emergency themselves as an acs of deceiving.And as for student,they happily

cheat in the examination,but when the teacher asks"how was it",the student will reply in a sad tone saying that "it was too hard".

In conclusion,i hope i've been able to paddle my boat to it shore,by telling the readers the impossible reasons,why technology can't be used to recognize a student emotional expression.

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