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In the article ¨Making Mona Lisa Smile¨ by Nick D´Alto Computers and technology are getting so advanced to the point where they can tell you how you feel based off your facial expression and emotions. The computer can even tell many different emotions from just one picture.

In stanza 1 the technology allowed professeors to find out that the Mona Lisa isn´t all that happy she is also 9% disgusted and 6% fearful while being 2% angry at the same time. This is so amazing because this is possible from 3-d constructed computer models which can recognize and define all

44 human like muscles in the body if they look normal. Some of the ways the computer can tell your emotions is or example, ¨Your frontalis pars lateris muscle raises your eyebrows when you´re surprised, your orbicularis oris tightens your lips to show anger¨. The computer has also learned 6 basic emotions which are Happiness, Surprise, Anger, Disgust, Fear, and Sadness. If you go home and try to make a happy face in the mirror you can easily see the muscles that are making you smile but what you didn´t know is that when you fake smile it actually causes happyness which can actually make you for real smile. Even with the cool technology most people wouldn´t want their day to be changed just because of how they´re feeling.

In conclusion the computer technology is so advanced nowadays that a computer can tell how you are feeling at anytime but do all people want that I say no if people are in a bad mood they probably have a reason to be in that mood and they don´t need a computer to try and lighten up their day.

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