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In this article, they are explaining how technololgy is helping find emtions in pictures. In my opinion, I think it would neat to be able to think what a person is feeling in a pictue. They came up with this new software called Facial Action Coding System, that has promising application for a variety of industries. The Facial Action Coding detects exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emtion. I personally think this tool would be vauble in all types of ways.

One of my first reasonings for this vauble tool is it could help teachers at school. A student could be looking down and not doing work, something could be wrong with him, and she could easily find out what the problem is by using this tool.

Maybe even a friend is super happy or even super sad but doesn't want to talk to you about it , with this tool you'll understand and find out.

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