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Although some might argue and have a different opinin, facial recognition is extreamly valuable in the class room. It can tell if a student is confused with the subject. It is also able to recognize if the student is getting sidetracked or bored, with that information, it can modify the program to better teach that student.

As we advance in the technological feild robots and computers are more capable then they used to be. Computers in the schooling system is not an uncommon thing and it is used as a tool to teach students. The FACS program will be extreamly valuable to students. Every student learns at their own pace, where one student understands it right away another student might have difficulties with the subject that they are learning. With FACS this is no longer an issue, the computer system can read based off of facial expression if the student is understanding the subject or if they're having troubles. With this information the computer system can modify the teaching method or go back over parts that it belives the student is having troubles with. This goes along with if the student is slowly starting to get sidetracked and bored with the computer as most children do. The software can read this and make the subject more appealing to the student to keep them on task so that they can best learn the subject matter.

All around FACS is a very binefical program and it will help a lot of students that move at different paces than others. Teachers can not help every student simultaniosly. With this program they dont have to worry about this because the computer will recognize the emotion of the student and will modify to best fit that student specifically so that they can learn at the same capability as others.

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