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Have you ever seen a picture of Venus, well in this passage it talke about exploring venus. Did you know venus is the second planet from the sun and it is the closest to Earth. Venus is one of the brightest. It's sometimes called "Evening star, because its very bright. It is important to learn about plants such as Venus.

The author stated "studying venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents". The meaning of this means it is important to learn about plants such as Venus so we can learn about it. In paragraph 2 the author stated " Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us". This explains one reason why humans should study the plant venus. Another reason why the author thinks studying venus is important is because " Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like Earth". The author thinks the venus was just like Earth.

Overall the author thinks studying Venus is worth pursuit despite the dangers. NASA is working on appraches to studying Venus.They are using electronic to have test chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface. They're even going back to old technology called " mechanical computers". It was made in the 1800s. These devices caclulate using gears and levers and doesn't included electronics.

Score: 3