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In the artlicle "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author talks about the good and bad things about Venus. The author suggest that studying Venus is worthy despite the dangers presents by showing us safe and scientifically producitve options that we should consider thinking about. It would not really hurt us if we give it a try.

Even though Venus is not safe we can come up with safe technology to make Venus a safe planet. In paragraph 5, the author states, "NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would alllow scientist to float above the fray." This illustrates that instead of being with the danger below on Venus we could use some type of jet to make us float over the hostile conditons. Also, paragraph 5 says, "Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditons, but survivable for humans." This text tells us that even though Venus is a safe place, we could adapt to it and survive. If something goes wrong we can use products that scientist develop to make it a safe place.

Scientifically products could help us be safe on Venus. In paragraph 5, The author states, "some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber stimulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions." If scienctist keep developing these type of things they could make electronics last longer. Also, the author says, ''Systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces." This illustrates that if we put the right materials on a electronic it could be more resistant to Venus's harsh conditions. If we dont take risk, we are going to stuck with the the same things.

If we never try then we are going to be in running around in a circle. In the last paragraph, the author says, "because of human curiosity will likey lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors." The author is trying to tells us because of human curiosity we've been able to acomplish many things. Lastly, the author states, "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovtation." This shows that we should always accept new challenges and not be afraid.

In conclusion we should take on the challenge to go to Venus. Safe and scienctific products should helps us develop life on Venus. Also, we should use natural resources like solar pannels and things of that sort.

Score: 4