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The Facial Action Coding System can identify human emotions, now we can even see how the Mona Lisa is feeling it can also help with teachers and it is valuable for the following reasons.

I belive this technology is revolutionary because computers and humans can interact with each other, it can see your mood even if you're trying to hide it, scientists and universities are working on this project together. There are a lot of hard workers on this project because there are a lot of muscles working from the human body with the computers. The people working on this project call it universal because it can do a lot of good things by helping teachers by detecting weather a student is bored so they can change the way a of how to

teach in a classrom. We can predict what other people are feeling and that's not always the case with this resource we can know what people are feeling.

In conclusion I belive this is valuable because it can help with the science of emotions and could help a lot of people, it also helps people work with computers and Dr. Huang's algorithims are like a different sort of "da vinchi code."

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