Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because around the world natural disaters and other sorts of things are happening across this Earth we need to help. In the text it says"UNRRA hired "Seagoing Cowboys" to take care of the horses ,young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas."

More people should join the Seagoing Cowboys program becauseit is an opportunity of a lifetime."The cattle-boat trips were an unbelieveable opportunity for a small-town boy. Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. o was taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,and a city with streets of water."

THink about joining the Seagoing Cowboys this way,when you sign up like Luke and Don did it will open you up to more than just going places, joining will open you to everything."But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger . It opened

Score: 2