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How would you like to be walking on the sidewalk and see nothing but automatic, driverless cars. This is fesuable and according to scientists may be the case by 2020. Scientist have long been working on cars that drive themselfs. However fascinating this idea may sound the negative apsects of this far outway the positives.

For example, the cost of the new "smartcars" or roads will be almost unbarealble for the average middle class family.The cars will have to have a bunch of sensors from a rotating roof sensor, to camera a sensor that watches you as the car drives. As the text states " smart road sytems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply to expensive to be practical." However the cost of the new cars is not the only setback.

Why not spend time and money on researching something more important ? Having a fully autonomous car may be nice but isnt a neccesity. Why not cure cancer or the common cold ? Alot of cure research facilities lack the fundng and staff that they need to succesfully find a cure. However if more effort and funding was put towards them instead of

autonomous cars it would help substaintially.

Lastly, what would happen if the car malfuntions and the driver wasn't able to control it ? The car could travel of the road and hit innocent bystanders. It could also hit other cars and cause an expensive, dangerous and, perhaps unviodable crash.Automonous cars could be vary dangerous and In this case having a car that drives itself Isn't such a good idea.

The idea of automonous cars arent bad but their just to impractical . Auotomonous cars are vary expensive. They also contain alot loads of underlying safety hazards. An these are the reasons that i believe that the Negatives of automonous carsb strongly outwieght

the positives.

Score: 3