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The coming of the future is upon us, and as this new era approaches a plethora of innovative ideas come crashing along with it. One of these ideas is the possibilty of driverless cars. As welcoming as this sounds it has not been totally accepted by everyone in society. The reasons driverless cars should become a reality are mainly because they're safer, more efficient, and more convienient for the driver.

The most important reason that driverless cars need to continue to be developed is that they're overall safer than normal human driven cars. One of the cars, manufactured by Google with the aid of Toyota, is equipped with position-estimating sensors, a rotating sensor (LIDAR) , a video camera on the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor. A car outfitted with this technology can operate at the skill of a human without making the mental human errors. People argue that technology can't replace humans in every scenario, such as roadblocks or the unexpected stoppage of a car in front of you. Technology has already prepared for this and there are sensors in place to alert the driver when human interaction is needed. These sensors include vibrating seats, flashing windshield lights, and other headsup displays.

Another reason that the devlopment of driverless cars needs to continue is because they're more efficient than ordinary cars. Google cofounder, Sergey Brin, envisions a future with a fleet of driverless cars for a taxi system that would use half the fuel of today's taxis, and would offer much more flexibility than a bus. These innovations would save your wallet from the gas station, and your back from the crowded bus seats.

The final reason that driverless cars should be the way of the future is how convenient they are for the passenger. Driverless cars allow the passenger to talk, phone call, text, eat, etc without putting other drivers at risk. Tesla has even reported that a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time should be released in 2016. Nissan, Audi, and Mercedez-Benz have made similar reports for the year 2020. Who's to say more advancement won't be mad in the ever so near future?

In conclusion the reason that the devlopment of driverless cars is a positive thing is because they will improve the safety of the drivers and the road, they're more efficient for your wallet and your comfort, and they're more convenient than normal cars.

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