Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The author suggest that studying Venus is a great idea. Venus is Earth's twin. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. Venus is the closest in distance too.

The author says that it has some dangerous heat. "At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit..."

There's no device or machine that can take the heat without melting or exploding. "Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions."

Even though the the heat is dangerous in Venus you can still study it. "Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans."

People can make a machine or device that can resist the heat. "Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to constribe meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus."

The author showed us both the good and bad side of studying Venus. "More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance." Venus could be explored with a machine that uses mechanical parts. "By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces."

In conclusion, the author made great points to prove that even though its dangerous you can still study Venus. Even if its from far distance you can still study it.

Score: 3