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You should, participate in the seagoing cowboys program because from luke's point of veiw it seems fun. Luke had fun by playing baseball and volleyball games with the cowboys. The text stats the cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. joining the seagoing cowboys is also fun because you get to see different parts of the world. the text also stats it took about two weeks to cross the atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to china.

Another reason why you should join the seagoing cowboys program' you get to see differnt kinds of people. the text also stats it made me more aware of people of other countries and their need. Also it will make your family to host. The text stats and that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. I is also fun because u get to play alot of games. The text stats table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading,whittling, and games also helped pass the time.

This proves that being in seagoin cowboys program

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