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There are many harsh conditions and atmosphere on Venus and NASA still tries to land on Venus. It is because Venus is a planet that is closely related to earththan any other planet. Venus is a worthy pursuit because it could have information about earth and fragments from the meteor. The planet could have valuable minerals or bacteria on the surface.

Venus could have been similar to earth billions and billions of years ago. This is a prediction due to the size and shape of the planet. In the article, the author says, "Often referred to as earth's "twin", ... in terms of density and size, ... closest in distance too." Since Venus is the closest in relation to earth, then the planet should be able to sustain life again. Many experience to try and land on Venus's surface, but many failed due to the harsh conditions preventing them from landing.

There have been many attemps to land on Venus, but the planet is harsh. The planet can become extremely hot and has a thick atmosphere. The weather is another obstical that prevents astronauts from landing. In the article, the author also says, "These conditions are far more extreme ... an environment would crush even a submarine ... and would liquefy many metals." NASA have tested many metal that can survive Venus and have succeed with silicon carbide and has lasted for three weeks. Scientist are still striving to make Venus more sustanable for human life.

So far there has been litle success to see which metals can survive Venus. People are driven to explore Venus is due to their curiosity because it is similar to earth. Even though is is dangerous due to Venus's surface, people still try because it could have critical information on earth or valuable minerals or bacteria.

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