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The developement of the computer cars are not a good idea. We have yet to find out if these cars are safe enough to have our family in them. These cars are supposed to warn you but what if they don't warn you on time and you get in a car crash. It is better to just drive your own car and be much safer than to have a computer car.

For one these computer cars are not safe enough I don't feel like. The only thing that people know are that they will drive for you and warn you when it is time to take the wheel. What if the warning does not come fast enough and you get in a car crash. How do you know that your family is going to be safe while driving this car. We dont know that. They are supposed to do all these kind of test but if they have to do so many test than what is the point of even making them. Also by not doing this project it could safe a ton of money.

By driving your own car you could be a lot more safer. You have total control of what your car does but in this new computer car you really don't. All you have to do is just type in your location and it will choose your path for you. Driving your own car will help you keep you and your own family safe. Also when you do get involved in an accident with these computer car no one will know whose falt it is if it is the manfacturers fault or yours. By not having these computer cars it can safe you a lot of much more money if you are ever invovled in a accident.

In conclusion it is better to be safe than sorry. The devolpment of these cars do not need to happen. It is okay if they help out a little bit but having a computer car tak over is not such a good idea as all og these car developers think it is. Lets keep our family safe and lets not build these computer cars.

Score: 4