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Is technology that can read your emotional expressions usefull or valuable? How can this benifit the classroom? A computer being able to read your emotions doesnt seem pleasent, but it could benifit you. Maybe if the computer can tell if your feeling a certain emotion such as anger, it can help settle you down by bringing up something of your interest. Or in a classroom, if a student becomes bored or even consused and the computer can sense that, then the technology could pop up a instructer, to help the student concentrate.

How do you know that a compuder reading your emotons is safe? Studying of emotions have been practiced for decades, mostly starting with Mona Lisa, the painting done by famous Leonardo da Vinci. Leonardo studied human anatomy to justify and express certain emotions on well known art pieces. Emotions can be very unpredictable because people have so many different reactions to certain things.

The Facial Action Coding System, an innovation from Prof.

Produced at the Beckman institute for Advanced Science in the University of Illinios. This technology was made by Dr. Haung and his colleagues. This technologgy was invented to help computers and humans connect more on a personal level, helping the computer undertsand more, and to better help the human. The technolagy can construct a 3-D model of the face in the systen and predict certain emotions by little behaviors that the person does. Such as, rasing your eyebrows when you suprised or interested, and tightening around your lips when your emotion is anger. While some people my be for this, others may feel againt that kind of connection between technology and a person. Others may feel danger with that sense of curiousity. If a computer can sense a ceratain emotion and can possibly change that emotion, you dont know if the computer would cause you to feel worse, or even isolated. There could be a glitch in the systen that could cause danger to the person. Or even a hacker could be able to go through a computer, causing a virus that can make other people look through your camera. With the pros also come the cons, through if this type of technology is used approprietly it could really benifit society.

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