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There reason why the author says to how he supports the claim is becuase we could have question like these ,"why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?". So thats why we should or theres a good reasson why we should learn what we can from things like these.Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.People who come learing things like this know how and where things goes when comes on to things like this .The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Thats why back then it wasnt easy isnt learing things like this becuase bascelly now everything we look for or eveything we do now is by phone or a comuter or something the back then wasnt there to help as much knowing to what it is and what it dose.So that the why aother would ask how or why we would wanna study this or if it was worth it.

"Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges." its worth so much for you to see how much to learn or how much you get from listening, from it or to it's not just what you can see out of it.Reason would be becasue you wouldnt just know things like this you would know what to expcact what they say.The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?,Theres a lot of reason why its worth studying thiis you have question and you want answers and you cant even figere that put becase of you dont know thow things and becuase you would see things that dont make sense to you.

Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.In teh article it says how things can, be done a other or a onther it aways come to back and how things.It

come back yo what we know at the end of the day.

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