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Should we wait for the future, or try to advance to it now? I for one believe we should take a leap in advancement, by allowing production of driverless cars. In the past these have all been unreachable feats, but as of now we have the technology needed to create them.

Driverless cars are not any more dangerous than regular cars, because they will never fall asleep while driving, or be intoxicated, and they most certainly won't text and drive. These are some of the leading causes of death while driving. Wouldn't it be great to be able to just relax in a car instead of having all the stress of focusing, and dealing with other drivers?? What is the extent of driverless cars? Would we one day be able to sleep for work while our car picks up our friends and famly for us? As stated in the passage Sergey Brin envisions a future where self driven cars work like a taxi. We may not be to that stage yet but as of this year (2016) Tesla is releasing a car that can drive on its own 90% of the time! This may all sound far fetched to the older generation, who doesn't trust or rely on technology as much as we do, but is technology really bad thing? I see technology as progress and if these cars become a regular on the road then we will be progressing towards a better future.

Are there down sides to this? Many people say yes, and there may be in the beginning, but after these cars are all tested and widely released i do not think you will have to worry about as many malfunctions. People are worried about what if it malfunctions and i wreck? Well ask yourself this how many times have you been in a wreck in your life, and it was because you are with a bad driver? You would no longer have to worry about that because these cars won't drive wrecklessly. If you are still worried about them malfunctioning then you are thinking short-term, because there will come a time when we have perfected these cars and they rarely malfunction, my guess is probably less than half as much as humans wreck. As hard as im trying i don't believe there will be any more faults with these on the road with them than without them.

These are just a few of many reasons as to why i believe we should have these cars. I hope you can see the need for them as much as i do, if not now in the near future. We better start making some new insurance plans, because the future is on it's way!

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