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We should continue the development for these self driving cars. They could prove safer than regular human driven cars and could reudce the cost of fuel.

These self driven cars are equiped with scanners that have become advanced enough to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids and rollovers. The scanners can use the information to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. Thus allowing for a far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.

Not only can self driving help prevents accidents caused by human error it can also help with another serious problem. While these cars will most likely still run on the same fuel supply as regular cars. If development continues these cars may be able to run on half the fuel of a regular car which in turn could lower gas immesions into the air. Not only will the self driving car be more energy suffient it will also be a more partical means of transportation if development is to cotinue.

"The road to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day." Its only a matter of time until the self driving car reaches it's full potential. As long as development continues and laws are passed allowing the use of these cars. We should be seeing a big change in how we drive our cars in the next couple of years..

Score: 3