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The use of this technology is , identifying human emotions. This technology has classified six basic emotions which are , happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. This new software is called, the Facial Action Coding System.

This technology should be worried about other people, other then students. I say that because there's other people that go through stress and would like to know whats going on with there selfs or having problems.This technology could help alot of poeple. One of my opinons is to have this technology in a class , so students that want to learn this stuff or interested in this stuff should take it. But this technology shouldn't just read peoples emotions without asking. For example , they use this technology with videos games as well , like thats a good use for this technology; so the characters on games could appear more realistic. But this technology should only be in the use, if only the person wants to do it.

Yes , this technology caught my eyes, something I would try and something I would love to learn more , because I would like to see if you're happy or depressed.

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