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Studying Venus is a dangerous pursuit but could be very helpful for gathering knowledge about the plant and about the solar system. We could learn how Venus works and what the planet could have been like long ago. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of size. It is also the closest planet to Earth and can be seen without any powerful equipment. Venus should be studied in greater detail and can be with the use of the new ideas that NASA is coming up with. I have good reasons why we should attempt to study Venus in closer detail. With new technology we can get closer to the planet, learn how the planet works, and learn what the planet used to be like.

Venus is the hottest planet in our solar system despite Mercury being closer to the sun. What makes Venus so hot is that its atmosphere is 97 percent carbon dioxide, the clouds are made of sulfuric acid, and the temperatures on the surface average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Something else that makes this planet dangerous is that the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth. These conditions are to harsh for humans to explore but NASA has a possible solution that would help us get closer to the planet. We could fly a blimp like vehicle 30 miles above the surface. That way we be at about 170 degrees and air pressure that is like what sea level is on Earth. There would be enough solar power and normal levels of radition so that humans would be able to survive these conditions.

Getting closer to the planet could help us to understand more of how the planet works. This planet has many volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and lots of lightning. If we could get a sample of some of the rock on Venus, this could help us better understand these conditions and what has happened to this planet. Long ago Venus could have been like Earth and this could tell us how.

People think that a long time ago that Venus maybe used to be like Earth. It was covered in oceans and supported life forms. Venus is alot like Earth because it has a surface made of rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus is the closest and most like to Earth and I think that we should explore it to learn more of what it used to be like.

Venus is a dangerous and hard planet to study put I think if we can get close enough to it to study than it is worth the risk. Venus is alot like Earth and it would be cool is we could what it was like a long time ago and if it had life forms on it. We would also get to learn how the planet works and why it is so hot. I think that we should explore Venus more and that we should try NASA's blimp idea.

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