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The science around such a product as the "Facial Action Coding System" is truly amazing and spectacular but should we let it teach our next generation?

No, that is my anwser for the question to be asked on if it should teach children, you maybe asking why, but the anwser is truly simple. The connection between a computer and a human child will not benifit it an any way, but are we asking the right question? I think that teacher would have a much better time using this rather than it having it's job, with technology changing and improving faster than ever seen before this could really help out teachers. Imagine if we had this in classrooms, genuisness is something people inspire to be no matter who you arte you always wants to learn something, but most fall short of this because they are so dis interested in the work. Now imagine if you had a product that stopped children from being bored and distracting themselves or others, imagine if you made something not only ore interesting but responded to you, why would you ever stop learning? And a sence of accomplishment would not only boost your self but could also make you want to learn even more than before, an entire generation of people who enjoyed learning the sky is no longer a limit the stars would be.

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