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Studying Venus would be worth it because what if they find stuff that are amazing but at the same time what if they come across some mysterial creaturet that has never seen before.

First, a dangerous thing that can happen is that if they come back and something bad happen like if the engine of the spaceship shuts down. What if they can"t communicate well with the people on earth like in the article it states "each previous mission is unmanned,and for good reasons,since no spaceship survived the landing for more than a few hours." It also says how why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus for more than three decades. Even if you tried to take a video it is only limited because the light cannot penetrate the dense of the atmosphere,renderignthe standard form of photography and videography ineffective.

Secondly, Venus is a very hot planet which can be over 800 degrees and the atmoshperic presssure is 90 times more greater then what we have experienced down here on earth. like in the paragraph it states " Beyond high pressure and heat,venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes,and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to ladn on its surface." All of the weather happens here on earth which is why they call venus the twin of earth. Although it is easy to see from the point of earth,it is proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.

finally, apart from all the danger it presents,there may be something good about that planet,it is similar to earth it also ahs similiar features as earth. So in the paragraph it states " Today, Venus still has some features that aer analgous to those on earth. the planet has familiar features such as valleys,moutains,adn craters." Even though people can't really manaeg to go down to venus for a very long time like they can in mars,im pretty sure they would find very good things there just more deeper.

In conclusion, venus is very dangeous but it os worth it because we can find very different things from here on earth.Also Venus is very hot,it is the hotest planet on earth.

Score: 4