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The author belives thats Venus is a planet worth of studying. Althought it is very impossible to study this planet from the surface level. Venus has a surface temperature of 800 degrees fahrenheit,and the atomspheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Venus has one of the most hottest surface temperature in the whole solar system. This could explain why it is so hard to have drones on the planets surface.

Venusian geology and weather also present additional challenges like erupting valcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequenrt lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. This most likely caused by the sevear atmospheric temperature or the surface landscape. Reasearchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. Nasa is working on making machanical computuer so our drones take more damage.

Striving to meet the challenges presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on planet itself, but alson because human curiostity will likely lead us into many equllay intimidating endours. This show that Venus a diffacult planet to get information from, has value to be studied. It shows that our reasearcher have a challenge to take on hand. It also shows

we can get new ideas on how to explore this planet. So in conclusion the planet of Venus is worth of the study.

Score: 3