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You should join seagoing cowboys, because it is a great opportunity to travel and help others. I think it's a great time to not only care for yourself, but care for others. If you love animals this is a great job for you.

You should join, because your helping the people affected by World War II. I got to do a lot of stuff while I was on the boat. We got to take care of animals. It was a new thing for me. After we would drop off the animals we would have played baseball, volleyball, table-tennis tournements, fencing, and boxing.

That is why you should join the seagoing cowboys. This is a lifetime opportunity to do this. Don't miss out on this. It makes you aware of the other countries that have less than you or not enough to live on. It makes you grateful of what you have, because not everyone has a television or a cell phone. So it just makes you thankful of your surrondings. Then you can have exchange students because your out of your confornt zone.

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