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I agree with the author, like he says studying Venus is whorthy the dangers it presents. I also agree with him, because in the paragraph says that Venus is one

of the brightes points of light in the night sky that means that they are really fascinated to study Venus. The challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. So the travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of immagination and innovation.

According to the article Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Sometimes because of the changes of speed in the orbit we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. Because of the change of speed previous missons were unmanned, this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Some of the qualities of Venus is that is really amazing Venus as a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets. The more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venu's atmosphere. The planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphereric pressure is 90 times greater that what we wxperience on our planet . So that means that these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. Also Venus has the hottest suface temperature of any planet in our solar system. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. According to the NASA, it has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possicle solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.

In conclusion, scientist should go to Venus and keep studying it. Researches are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. Also Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions. The challenge presented by Venus has value, so that's why studying Venus is worth the dangers it presents.

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