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Want to know how it would be to be on the surface of venus? Scientists are trying to work on discovery on this planet closes to earth. Scientist want to be able study this planet because of how well this planet was once the most earth-like planet. They also been wanting to send people to venus so they can go and study the planet. Scientists also have been working on a vehicle to be able to be on venus surface.

Scientist have been working on studying this planet for a while now and it have got worst. This planet was once in the better condition in fact in the article it says "Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. So scientist are still studying while knowing the danger this planet conditions are in.

Scientist have been working so hard to know about this planet and it conditions to know if there a safe way to arive on this planet without any struggles. In fact in the article it says "The national aeronautics and space administration (NASA) has on particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus". Scientist have been trying to find ways for this to happen.

NASA have been studying ways where humans can be on the surface of venus without getting in any danger. So NASA is trying to come up with a way to be able to stay on the surface of venus with a vehicle. In the article it says "Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape". So they have been trying to come up with ways for humans to hover above the surface of venus.

With Scientist studying the planet because it was the most earth-like planet and with scientist trying to send humans to study this planet. Also with NASA trying to make a vehicle to stay 30 mile above surface so it would not be in any unfriendly ground conditions. Scientist are coming up with ways to explore this once earth-like planet.

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