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In "The Chellenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. He goes on to talk about how Venus used to be just like earth, and it preparing us for further adventures.

Venus used to be just like earth so now scientist want toknow what Venus is like now also how earth will end up and try to find thing to see how long Venus has been like this maybe to even see aproximatley how long Earth will last. " If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing further visits to its surface? Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may very well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covnered largley with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, Just like Earth today."

This quote shows how they are so curious becuase Venus used to be just like us. And since some believe in other living being then exploring Venus could be a huge break through is we find anything about there being an ocean or any sign of life, because that would mean that there could be other life out there now.

Humans are very curious creatures. We love to get into things we aren't supposed to starting at infantry. Well scientist are big kids with big toys that can do big things and they are smart and alwasy are wantig to learn more. So whos to tell them that they cant go check out another planet and make history? The author says, "Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also becasue human curiosity will likeyly lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be liited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." This quote is showing how even though things are dangerous, as humans we have this curiosity this strive to go beyond what out limits seem to be. Venus is one of those limitaions that we have and we are still trying to land on it and get to know it better. For furture reference doing this with Venus will just further prepare us to more crazy hings that our amazing mids think up one day.

In conclusion exploring venus is very worthy

pursuit despite the dangers it presents because this is preparing us for the furutre and helps us learn more about the solar sysytem we all live in and may very well help us continue a very long journey in the future.

Score: 4