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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. We think that Venus is like similar with earth but the one differnce is that it is hotter than the Earth. Venus is a amazing place to live but you can not live any longer period of time than a few hours.

With out question, we think that Venus is similar to earth but the temperature in Venus is hotter than earth. The similarity to Earth with Venus was not only the distance, also the density and zise too. It stated "Venus is the closet planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closet in distance too" ( The Challenge of Exploring Venus section 2). The problem to that is living in Venus would be really difficult, that even the spacecraft can only survive for about few hours and not more than a decades. In shows in the aritical "since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus section 2). It tell us how Venus was similar to the Earth and how long you can you live in Venus.

In conclusion, that venus is more than amazing place to live but the problem is you can only live there for a few hours instead of a decades. That Venus is really similar to Earth but you can not live in Venus for really long. You can not live in Venus for a long time but you can visit there.

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