Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
In paragraph 8 he says" our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubs." The author thinks it's a good idea to try and go but he also thinks it's bad becasue you can die. The author even states that it's a challenging place to examine closely.

In paragraph 5 the author talks about (NASA) having a plan for sending humans to Venus. NASA is trying to invent a vehicle that could go to Venus but avoid the rough unfriendly conditions of the ground. The vehicle could float over the storms and manage to get through the 170 degree temperatures. The air pressure would be close to sea level on earth. The conditions are survivable for humans but not easy.

In paragraph 7 it is talking about how NASA is trying to invent other eletronics that are made of silicon so we can get ansers. Looking back at old technology that's called mechanical computers may have a big role. Those computers were an important role in 1940 during World War ll. The computers can calculate thigns that other electronics can't.

In paragraph 3 the author talks about how bad the conditions are. The author states that 97 percent carbon diocide blankets Venus and how there are many clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here. The author also states that the environment would crush a submarine.

In conclusion the author and NASA are both on an agreement to get some more people up to Venus. The author and NASA both state that the conditons are bad but they would love to make something work out. In paragraph 8 the last thing the author points out is the "dangers should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."

Score: 4