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Do you feel safe in your cars hands? The article "Driverless Cars Are Coming" states various positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Why are the manufacturers waisting there time on something that might not be possible with the technology we have now, and be more productive with something that needs improved. I believe that car manufacturers should stop the developments for these cars.

first off, what if the technology isn't their? What if it's something that can never be their ? I believe that manufacturers of anything should be using there time to work on something that they know can be done, not something thats a fanticy. Even though some people may think that the technology is right around the corner, thats what they've been saying for the past 5 years, i think it is time to try something else.

secondly, Even if the technology was there it can be modified, hacked, ect. What is stoping someone from hacking into this technology while your driving and causing you to crash ? No matter how many firewalls, roadblocks, or obsticles you put in technology it can be easily broken. For example, there have been cases of people hacking into peoples private files and bank acounts . If someone is capable of taking over any car they want, how would you feel if it was your car taken over.

Last but not least, what happens if the technology fails? Like it says in the article whos fault would it be. Why open the possibility for a huge law suit that could cause someone thousands of dollars. I belive it would be a much safer world without "driverless cars" .

In conclusion, how do you feel about these driverless cars? Would you rather have the manufactures work on something that is possible and not a life time fanticy, or Do you want to put your life at risk with the possibility of not being able to control your car, And do you want to possibly be in a lawsuit that could cost you thousands of dolars ? I didn't think you wanted to either.

Score: 3