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So i am going to tell you about my adventures. I was super excited when Don asked me to go with him. I was almost like a cowboy pirate. The first time i went on the cattle boat we went to Greece. We got all of the 335 horses in the gargo along with all the hay and oats to feed them. It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China.

I turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. “When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service.” By the time he was discharged in 1947, I had made nine trips—the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.

“The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy,” he says. “Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,” he says. “So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.” Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.

Score: 2