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The author is givin a good suggestion about studying Venus , because like myself i dont know that much about Venus and i feel like we should study it. Thats because i feel like we should know about this plannet on are earth no matter how dangerous it is. The author made some good statements about it like Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Even though Mercury is closer to our sun like how is that possible . Also a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. These are all important things i think myself should know and everyoone else who doesnt Venus seems to be a very important plannet on are earth that people barely know about . When we should know about it. Not a single spceship has touched down on Venus in more than 3 decades like why hasnt anyone went there to check it out see if anything has changed see if theres anything new about it thats another reason people should start studying it we dont know anything about this plannet no one has seen in over 3 decades thats a very long time. NASA is the only system working on studying Venus.In the 1800s devices were envisioned, and played a important role in the 1940s during World War11 . All these things we didnt know about Venus because of the danger because no one hasnt seen it in over 3 decades this is all the reasons why i agree with the author.

Score: 2