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Driverless cars are the next representation of the future. With the new and improved technology, 'hands free' cars are the latest, and greatest inventions. Hands free cars can navigate themselves through almost any obsticale, and by 2016, some cars will be "capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time"

The idea of technology driving itself, is a debatable topic. Is it safe? Am I in danger? The questions are endless, but in my opinion, this car is a major improvement in the car industry.

How can this car navigate itself and not crash? The answer is simple, sensors. Their sensors are located around a large portion of the car, and some sensors are capable of spinning all the way around to get a three hundred-sixty degree angle. For example, the text states, If the car is in danger, the sensors will quickly send the car the information of it's surrondings and depending on the situation, it will apply the breaks on certains wheels, and reduce the power of the engine.

The "driverless car" can steer, break and acclerate by themselves. The car itselfs, will alert the driver when they need to apply human skills. For example, when driving down an interstate, you suddenly come upon a crach scene. The scene backs up traffic for a total of two hours. The car will then alert the driver, they need to take over due to the clustration the accident has caused, and the moving the car needs to do.

The problems automakers are currently facing, are believed to be solved shortly. The car itselfs, has "driven more than half a million miles without a crash." I believe this car is safe, and an improvement in the car industry. It offers many opportunities, and can go far in the field of automotives.

Score: 3