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"The Challenge of Exploring,Venus is a worthy pusuit despite the dangers because based on the article many exploros want to find more information about venus and how it looks.Venus is the second planet from our sun, which mean its very hot,it is actually a planet.Studing venus is interesting but dangerous, its the closest to the planet to earth.Many humans want to research and find more information about Venus, trhey even send out many spacecrafts to land on the cloud draped world.Unfortually they couldn't land any single spaceships.

The Aurthor wrote how dangerously the planet venus is, how hot it is by adding experiences that many spaceships couldn't land there.Venus can be extremly dnagerous to study because,''Our planet's surface, tempeture average is over 800 degree and venus is extreme than anything humans encounter

on Earth.Which venus is extreamly hot because how lose it is to the sun.The interesting details of what venus can create is that venus presents additional impediments like erupting valcanoes which are soo hat.Venus is also rocky,sediment and has many other features.The reason why there are many reasearchers that want to study or find more information on venus is because it's the nearest option

for a planetary visit.Many space administration tried to create many different technology like things that can float around venus,but its not easy conditions but survival for humans ,what this is saying is that they are trying to create something that is safe for the human like a human enviroments.The author explanes how venus can be worthy by him describing how venus has a value because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself.Overall many want to find a way to venus and see what it actually looks like and study it.Many are trying to create like different spacecraft to visit Venus.

Many people want to reasearch the closest planet from the sun and from earth, they want to learn what is more out there.How they look and what they have.But on the side affects there are many bad and dangerous things that can be seen and for that theyre are differnet things that can be created that can be saftly done to see and discovery the different feautures and the weather is like.Based on the artilcle the planet can be seen intersting and big, but many times there can be danger and it can be very hot that us like humans cannot support,but there is always ways we can find to achieve what we ant to dicover and find but it also takes alot of practice and alot of buildings and trys like in the article it said that there was numerous of spacecrafts that were sent but none were able to land.

Score: 3