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Many people see driverless cars as the future of the automobile industry.

I am not one of those people.

Personally, I believe that the negative aspects outweigh the positive.

There are several reasons that I have concluded this.

First of all, driverless cars require many different types of sensors and other equipment that is not necessary for manually driven cars, as stated in paragraph four.

These types of technology, such as video cameras and GPS recievers, will likely cause the cost of the cars to be much higher.

Many people will not be willing to pay an inflated price for such a thing.

Secondly, most "driverless" cars actually require that a driver be in the front seat and attentive to the road at all times, like what was stated in paragraph seven.

The reason for this is because there are several situations, such as road construction and accidents, in which the car is unable to safely proceed automatically.

If one of these incidents occurs, the driver will have to take over in order to proceed.

This may not seem like much, but it actually means that the driver will be unable to do a multitude of other task, such as using a cell phone.

Lastly, there are legal issues surrounding this type of transportation.

If a driverless car were to get into an accident, who would be responsible? Would it be the driver, the manufacturer, or even the programmer?

Laws for such a situation have yet to be put into place according to paragrah nine.

This means that disputes between individuals and larger companies are likely to occur.

As you can tell, there are many issues surrounding the idea of driverless cars.

From the price to the legality, it all seems to be more trouble than it's worth, doesn't it?

In my personal opinion, yes. Hopefully I have persuaded you to see it this way as well.

Score: 4