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Finally, driverless cars are coming. It seems as if the human race has been waiting for driverless cars for ages. Driverless cars will make a huge difference in the number of deaths caused by car accidents. In the passage it states that the stearing wheels in these cars would have motion censors to make sure that the driver has his/her hands on the wheel. I feel as if driverless cars would be a much safer way to travel. The author of "Driverless Cars Are Coming" made a very good point by stating that these cars will be very safe, for example: the car will be able to alert the driver when there is an accident ahead of them or when they are getting ready to back into something so the driver would be able to avoid getting into an accident.

Driverless cars may seem like they take the fun out of driving, but do they really? When you are driving a car you have to very careful to avoid any accidents, sometimes there is no way that the driver can avoid getting hit or hitting someone. Driverless cars are getting many censors, as stated in the passage, that will alert the driver when they are at risk. I am sure that these cars will not be able to drive themselves through every obstacle or protect drivers from every accident, but at least the driver would know that they are safer in a driverless car than they woud be in a car that would not alert you when you are at risk. In 2013, BMW announced the development of the "Traffic Jam Assistant." This car can already alert the driver when they need to take the wheel because there is a work zone or an accident ahead of them. Knowing this information, the driver would know to slow down to keep any human out of danger. Driverless cars would be a great way to keep many humans safe.

The author of "Driverless Are Coming" has valid points when stating that driverless cars would be a lot safer. Knowing that there would be many censors telling drivers when they are in danger would make lots of people more confident to go out and drive. A car that can tell when you are falling asleep or when you are about to come across a work zone would be great to have with all of the wreckless drivers this earth has today. Everyone wants a car that can keep them away from getting in an accident. Driverless cars need to come quicker, because we need more humans staying safe.

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