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venus is the second planet in our solar system. This is the closer planet to the sun before earth, wich is the third one. this planet has many interesthing things like any other planet in our universe, many interesting things to explore, many interesting things to know about it. we can explore many

things. For example we can know about his temperature, weather, and if there is life in it.

The author's idea is well supported since he tells the differents things that venus have. He tells how dangerous Venus is, if humanity is able to live there, or what is the temperature in it. he gives details about how some types of experiments that the (NASA) did. He talks about how the (NASA) created a technological thing created with silicon, to see what was the reaction to the planet, or how long was going to be able to still working. the machine lasted for 3 weeks in good conditions. but the (NASA) didn't have enough, they wanted to send people to Venus so they could investigate what else does this planet would have.

"The national Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularry idea for sending human to tudy venus. to study the hostiles conditions of the surface.

Venus has a lot of dangerous things such as tornados, radiation, highest temperatures, bad weather etc. the NASA things that even with that it can be survivable for humans. "solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans." humans have a lot of curiosity to explore things, no matter what it is or what is the effect.

Humanity doesn't have limited imaginations. and technology just keeps getting better wich helps humanity to do things that we cant do by our self, or together. That's why technology is very

important in our future, because is what we would need always no matter what we do technology is alway going to help us in one, or many ways. this is what has helped humanity with the investigation of venus and what dangerous things it has.

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