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Driverless Cars Are Coming

Manufacturers are making new cars that will be able to run without a human constantly operating the machine. As of now, Google, BMW, and other such companies have been making efforts toward this new era of technology, however

"Driverless Cars" would be more of a danger and problem to our society than good. It would cause confusion with where to place fault in accidents or legal situations, computer run cars would malfunction just like any other computer run technology such as the "iphone", or "MacBook", Drivers would abuse their privelege and fall asleep "at the wheel", and this would encourage drunk drivers to drive, possibly skyrocketing drunken accidents and alcoholosim.

In paragraph 9 under the section entitled, "Wating on the Law", the passage clearly states "If technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?" This is not only concerning but also a very dangerous thought. When we as humans give the liberty and saftey of our lives over to computers that are programmed to do tasks and that do not feel any human emotions, and then one of them kills someone in an accident, who is to blame? The computer, malfunctioned, but the manufacturer and "driver" didn't directly do anything. This type of machine still needs constant attention and alertness of the human within. Maybe even more so than when driving a normal car because the "Driverless Cars," will alert you at random to take over quickly when human skills are needed. People may not be prepared to do so, and in that case, things could take a turn for the worst. The beauty of "Driverless Cars" would cause some people to abuse their privelege and maybe even drink or sleep with the knowledge that the car will drive for you. After all, whats the actual chance that the car will ask them to do something? People will think this and slack off on their responsibilities, causing a very dangerous situation.

Technology is increasing and our future holds many things ahead of us. New cars are being made to drive for us but are we ready to take such a huge leap into this process? A leap that puts our lives in the hands of non-human, compassion-lacking, machines? "Driverless Cars" would cause more harm and more problems to our society than good.

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