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Students in class are often mistaken for having different emotions than what they actually feel. This new software can have both advantages and disadvantages. Here is my opinion on the subject.

First, the good side of this new software being used in schools. If the software is accurate, it can be used to detect certain students who may be thinking about suicide, hurting another person, etc. It can possibly also detect if a student might be using illegal drugs or alcohol. It will detect students who may need help with work or other things.

However, there are some downsides to this software. It's mainly because of invading anothers privacy, like if a student is having thoughts about another they have feelings for. If it is inaccurate, it can be extremely bad for students. If a student is just angry at family problem, the software might say they're suicidal or are planning something bad.

Those are my thoughts on this new software. I personally don't think its a valuable use for students in school mainly because of privacy.

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