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What is Venus and how can we konw what it is? A Venus is sometime called the "Evening Star" and it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. The studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because of how it said in page 2 "the Earth, Venus, Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds." The plant Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. In space terms humans is ometimes right around the corner in space ters humans have sent numerus spaceraft to land on this cloud draped world. In Venus there are thing that we need because in page 3 it said " On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit."

Why are we trying to go to Venus? We are trying to go to Venus there are thing that need to have. In page 5 it said " Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape." It's trying to said it that how can we go there and can we live in that plane. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth. The time have come that we need to see what is out there and see if we can make it happen and try to make a different for everybody.

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