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I say that the auther did do really good supporties his idea .Somethings he says about venus being a worthy persuit despite the dangers is that venius is the closest plannet to the earth in the terms of its density and the size of venus.Venus iand mars orbit the sun a diffrent speeds witch means that we are either closer to mars at times ands closer to venus were not always just closest to

one of them.It

says that " humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world".So that shows that we have sent thing up there.But each of the missions have been unmanned ,and they say it was for good reasons.

They put into detail that "Venus's reputation as a challenging planet fir humans to study,despite its proximity to us". They state that it is challenging to study venus but they have been trying there best and they are getting there.Slowly but there getting there.They know that the atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbion dioxide is over venus.What dosent help with sending spacecraft up there is the thick clouds that vinus has.and that is is 800 degrees up there also.The auther alos states that the pressuer on venus is 90 times greatee that what we have experience on out plannet. The author also states that "that the conditions are far more exstreme than anything humans have encounter on earth on earth". Venus is the hottest surface tempature out of any of the plannets i the universe.(NASA) wants to send a humans up

there to study venus.They thimk if they can get them to just float

above the fray they should be fine.And be able to study venus without getting hurt.

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