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Seagoing Cowboys

Have you ever heard of a Seagoing Cowboy? When I was young my friend and I were offered a chance to join the UNRRA, " the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration." I knew it was an "opportunity of a lifetime."

They hired us to help with carrying war animals across the seas. We had tons of fun times, and we hope you can will consider becoming a Seagoing Cowboy too.

First, we got to help many and different kinds of people. We would help

prepare the animals for them and get them ready to go to war. The animals also provided food for countries that needed help through hard times

Second, we would get to see amazing and very unique views. We had the privilige of taking a gondola ride through Venice, Italy. We also saw the Panama Canal and and a castle in Crete on our way traveling to China.

Thirdly, we had all kinds of fun and games onboard. We would play games in the stalls when the animals were gone. We played baseball, vollleyball, table tennis, and many other games to help pass the time.

In the end, I learned my job wasn't meant for adventures. It was an opportunity to explore the world and the people that came with it along with their needs.I was glad we had a chance to help everyone that we could.

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