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Have you ever wanted to be a seagoing cowboy.

Well you should be a seagoing cowboy because you get to travel the world and you get to work with animals.

I think that you should be a seagoing cowboy like me because you get to travel the world with some of you friends and you can be with animals see some stuff on the way there and help the animals.

I also think that you should be a seagoing cowboy because you can help the people that need the animals thatyou are taking to them.

The text states that luke got to go al around the world and he did it with his best friend.

The text aslo states you can be with other peope and you get to be with animals for most of the trip.

Other people would think that you shouldnt because you uhave to be on a boat for over a month and the boat might sink, Because there are 335 horses on the boat.

The text also states that you will with people that you dont know will be on the boat with you and you have to get to know the.

The text also states that you can fall off the boat and into the sea if your not carfull.

Score: 2