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Have you been dreaming live in another plane in space? or you even born in there? Some people answers yes, some says no, but surely everyone want to live in the space, to see how beauty the space. And in "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" is a article taking abut the problem between us and liveing in space. Before we know more about our Mother plane-Earth neighbor-Venus had some big problem between us! And let us to find out what is those problem betwen us with the secreat plane-Venus!

For a unknow place, there must have some great dangers with it. So, the temperature and pressure are the great dangr for it. in the Venus, "temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit" (3), what is that mean, normaly, when our oven were abut 400 degrees Fahrenheit, we can easly to cook the pizza, beef... many things we need. But in Venus, the 800 degrees Fahrenheit can easly to cook us to well done! Abut the air pressure, the Venus, "atmspheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our planet" (3), will, the deeper of our ocean pressure even not close to 90 times greater than our living place, already was a non-life place, so you will be like a water mix with dust to die under Venus air pressure.

The next problem is why we have to studying the Venus? There is not only one neighber for our mother plane, "Earth, Venus, and Mars, our plaetary neighbor" (2). So the Venus had such many danger, why we don't study another plane which is Mars were way more nicely to us? But, "long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life" (4) just imagine that, and temperatures with the air pressure would be close to our Earth, and with ocean, similar to our earth! If the weather and pressure were normal, that's mean there must had life born in there!

For it all, the Venus had a lot science reasearch can do after study abut it, form the information we know, imagine the Venus had a, "blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape" (5), it's already an be some beatiful place in the Earth, and from today's rock pices left in there, we may can find some animals bone inside there, to know if they had life, hw they may lks like, or to see their live ways. And, "because mst frms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standering standatd forms of photography and videography ineffective" (6), a lot of things about Venus we're still guesing, we really don't know the more deeper way about it. Just from a few picture and video can't do anything, the value of the Venus are infinite!

The author did really good job of exlaining the fact of Venus right now, it showd us how importance of it with the infinite value of Venus. like author said, "Our travels on Earth and beyng shuld not be limited by dangers and doubts but shuld be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation" (8). nothing in world is easy, and everything we did have danger with it. but we can't just limited by the danger, we fight with it, and the sweet fruits after victry is a dreaming plane were waiting us to live!

Score: 4