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Some Technology is Bad Technology

Is driverless cars a good idea? I think not. I do agree with the idea of advancing our world, but the thought of diverless cars is a very reckless idea. So many negitavie things can happen with diverless cars. Three of those things are statlite interruptions, operating in new situations, and they will be to expensive.

Just imagine one day you and your family are in the driverless car. Then all of a sudden out of nowhere the car jolts to a stop, in the middle of I-65. The car behind you rams you from the back. You have lost your kids and wife and all you can think is how ? The driverless car company tell you that their statilite connetion was interrupted and their was nothing else they could've done. If driverless cars were made, their would be no way to help someone when the statilite was interrupted. The worst part about that is you never know when or where the connection would fall.

Another problem with driverless cars is how well will they be able to operate in new situations. A diverless car can never be a human or have a working brain. Never will they ever be able to think on their feet such as humans. Humas have the ability to react to things. Will driverless cars?

Altough the idea of cars that can drive themselves is very exiciting, imagine the cost of it! In modern day cars are very expensive. When someone goes to buy a brand new car they are looking at ten to fifthteen thousand dollars. Let's not forget insurance. So how much would a drivercar be? Think is it really worth it?

In the text it says "Television and movies have been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves." I think thats exactly were driverless cars should stay. So many negative thiungs can happen with driverless cars. Three of

those things are statilite interruptions, operating in new situations, and they will be way to expensive. I do not think it is a good idea to start making driverless cars. It is a recipe for disaters.

Score: 3