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In my opinoin I think that the Facial Action Cooding System would be very valuable, for school purposes only though. For a few reasons, concering the fact some kids do not like to say things infront of their classmates.

In the article it says "A classroom computer could regonize when a student is becoming confused or bored." Some students are too afraid to tell their teacher that they are stuck on some thing, or that they need help in front of other students. So using this technology not only tells the teacher for them, they get the help they need without being afriad to ask for it. Some kids could be ahead of others, and become bored with the same old work, some kids may be behind and are confused by the work, having the Facial Action Cooding System we could prevent kids from being confused or bored.

Those two reasons are my opinion on why I think the Facial Action Cooding System can be very valuable.

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