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In the article "Driveless Cars Are Coming," the author tells both the positive and negative aspects of driveless cars. If I had a choice weather or not I wanted to get the car I would say yes. This is because it brings something new to the world, it proves your with a lot of safey sensors, and it shows that some things you see in the movies can come true.

The ways this would be bringing something new to the world would be because all cars would be able to drive on autopilot 90% of the time, it would keep more people safe and all the different sensors will keep people focused on the road. This could make some laws we have today change. The young teens would have a bit more freedom to drive. This smart car could really change the world.

The biggest benefit regurding safey would be all the different sensors that come along with the new smart car. In the text it states that on the toyota prius they use sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video carmera mounted near the rearview mirror, and so on. There's many I could include but the idea is that it keeps you safe.

Score: 2