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Do you ever dream about sitting back and relaxing on your way to work? Many people have. With the new technology that is being improved upon each and every day, that might just become a reality. Tesla projjected a 2016 release for a car that can drive on autopliot for 90% of the time.

I don't want this new technology to be a part of my life. I think it is too dangerous of a concept to just "give it a try." Cars have been driven by humans for over 100 years, that's how I believe it should stay. There are a few states that believe so too, as they have laws that prevent testing computer driven cars there. I think they should continue to develop the technology and get it spot on perfect before I'll accept it. There are also Lawsuit concerns, if there is an accident who do you blame? the one in the vehicle or the people that made the car? That's a little bit confusing isn't it?

Many people believe in this whole driverless car technology, but I say just leave cars alone and continue to let humans drive them to avoid all the confusion. With a little more investigation into the topic and a little more research I believe this could become a smoother process for the manufactures, but as for now leave the cars be.

Score: 3