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In 2018 many sutdent's are having difficult's in studying, paying attention, and learning. A variety of school's do many thing's to provide and to catch the student's attention but sometimes it doesn't help. It's not the school's fault if the student's don't want to be their due to reason's because they have other options they can do. In grade's k-8th grade should use the new microsoftware that they came with becuse I believe it'll truly help them since they're new learner's. Since they're young and the teachers should motivate them and grasp their attention. But during high school student's should already know by then that it's going to be difficult but they should learn somethings by themselves. So not everything should be handed to a new generation.

Throughout the past year's there was a high percentage of high school drop outs and it's possibly because of the learning enviroment or due to other related reason's. Reading through this passage by Nick D'Alto did tons of research on creating this system to tell a persons emotion's. Although, this will help the teacher's alot to recognize what to do different in a teaching matter. To know whether to teach this way or another way to grab your student's attention so then they'll be in a better teaching enviroment. But the cost will be really expensive since they barley came out with this invention so tyring to provide that to many schools will be very hard to install. Also installing even more technology in a school since many schools have alot of ipads, macbooks, or laptops etc.. will not help

that much.

We can find out by other research another way to get student's attention. Tecaher's go through many years of college not just for the topic they're teaching but for pychology too so they understand kids and teenagers that they're going to be with.

Score: 3