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Limiting car usage has many advantages. For example, less stress on the people who uses cars. When i had a car i was always tense. "I'm much happier this way," said Heidrun Walter, in

In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars , by Elisabeth Posenthal. it was also stated that if you have a car, its going to cost you $40,000 apart from getting a house to park a vehicle in a garge if you own one. In

Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota by Andrew Selsky, it was stated " I;ts a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution, said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza..."

Rush Hour is a main problem on the roads. The traffic is like a chatty person-hard to get by. In

Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota by Andrew Selsky, it states "

In a program that's set to spread to ther countries, m illions of Colombians hiked, biked skated or took the buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. Every person who did drive in any car-free program got a fine. The less traffic the people have the less they have to worry on getting to the place they need to go. "Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital France, after five-days of intensifying smog..." was stated in

Paris bans driving due to smog by Robert Duffer. The less traffic helped the city's air clear and was able to lower the Diesal fuel to disapear in the air.

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