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Join The Seagoing Cowboys! by Xander

Huge waves crashing and hundreds of scared cattle. This is my job as a seagoing cowboy. I want you to join the Seagoing Cowboys because you get to visit exotic locations, you can have fun with other Seagoing Cowboys, and you get to help people and animals.

First, you get to visit exotic locations and see places that you probaly wouldn't see any other time. You can see places like Greece or China. You can see historical places like the Acropolis. These places can be dangerous though because of the war going on so you can possibly injured or worse, killed.

Second, you can have fun with other Seagoing Cowboys or by yourself. You can play sports like volleyball or baseball and many other sports. You can also do fun things by yourself like whittling. The trips to get the animals can be very long and boring and you won't get that much free time only on return trips do you get free time.

And third, you get to help many people and animals. You help hundreds of people get their cattle back. You help save hundreds of cattle from getting killed. You have to clean the animal's stalls and be in very dangerous storms.

You should join the Seagoing Cowboys because You get to tour many exotic locations, You can have fun with other Seagoing Cowboys, and you get to help many people and their cattle. You can help hundreds of people get their cattle back. So join the Seagoing Cowboys today!

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