Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Did the author give alot of details in the story to support his idea. I would say yes he did he have really good details to the story.

Venes is the three plant close to the sun,

also know as the "Evening Star"

and all so know has Earths twin plant. At Venes the plant can get really hot there it

can get over 800 deg, and Venes has some features that are close to Earth's surface such as valleys, mountains, and craters. The plant up in outerspace the plants go at its own speed, some go fast some go slow. But with Venes being the three plant from sun and we can be close or far away from the plant on the orbit.

The bad things about Venes is that there is a 97% of carbon dioxide blankets it. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then out Earths. No Spaceship has touched the plant, cause of the matter. Only a spaceship has landed on the plant for three decades.

The author in the story tells us alot about the plant Venes the air, the plant mase and so on. It gives us alot of facts that make it all sound so true. To me I thing the author did a great job on supporting his idea cause of all the facts he but in it.

Score: 2