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Have you ever imagine a life without your car? I bet not. In there's a city in Germany called Vauban. In this city there's no cars, except for the main thouroughfared, where the tram to downtown Freiburg, and a few streets on one edge of the community. They even ban the owner ship of street parking, driveways and home garages, even by banding all of this you can own a car if you wish, there's a garege along the edge of the development you can by an space for 40,000 along with a home. As a resoult, 70 percent of Vauban's families don not own a cars, and 57 percent sold their cars to live there. "When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,"Heidrum Walter, media trainer and mother of two, as she walks down the verdant streets.

Not only in in Vauban, Germany but even in Paris, France driving is partialy forvident. But in Paris is ban cause of smogs, ther air was so polluted that they decided that by partialy banding driving it would  help clear the smog. They gave a fine of $31 dollers tio any one driving, some people even had their cars taken away because of they way they reacted to the fine.

In Bogota, Colombia theres a festivity ones a day that is called car-free day. You may go to work or school in bikes, skateboards, buses, or walking. People who violates this rule will have to pay a fine of $25 dollars. Not even the rain stop this people to enjoy the event even two more cities of colombia join in Cali, Valledupar.

The U.S.A is were the car culture develop, troughtout the years this fan addiction and love affiar to the cars haven cooling dawn, few cars are bought, geting fewer linces and driving less. The economy is so bad thst there arent that many Americans buying caras and not that many jobs, any ways is not like the unemployed could by a car they don't even have to go to work. But before the downturn the families had two to three cars.

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