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Evening Star, this nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. Venus is the second planet from our sun. As Earth’s “twin,” Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance.

Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.

A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus’s atmosphere. On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.

The author wants us knowing why we cant land on venus or why venus is so great to learn about, we can learn so much about it and why scientest are so amazed about it. They have a theroy that Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.

Even though, Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions.

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