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Ah Venus, the planet who happens to be the second closest to the sun, is the hottest planet we know right now. Dispite Mercury be the closest to the sun, Venus proves to be the most troubling planet to learn about. No spacecraft survived more than a few hours on the land over there. Ever since then, Venus is left alone, but.. What if there was a chance Venus was like Earth at one point? It is often called Earth's "twin" after all. I shall state my opinion on this matter on this very essay.

Is Venus a worthy pursuit despite all of their dangers? Is it truly worth it? Yes and no,

this is rather difficult to explain. In one case we will gain more knowledge of it, but is there more to say about it? We, humans, are very curious in nature. Wether you like it or not, Venus will be explored in the future. The worth will be difficult to determine as of right now, but perhaps we will know later on. Then again, knowledge is knowledge.

So where is my proof you may ask? Well, NASA is a big one for sure. They are trying to get photos, samples of rock, gas, and literally anything else, but it is rather difficult from a distance. Doesn't help that Venus's atmosphere is not all that friendly either, photos and videos can't do much with that. But that does not stop NASA to make technology to survive those difficult conditions. They were even thought of in the 1800s!

Basically, I do believe we will explore Venus someday. It may be a challenge, but it did not stop us from going to the moon back then, right? WE will get past more intimidating endeavors in the future.

Score: 3