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Earth's twin venus is one of Earth' closets planet

Earth,venus and mars are planetary neighbor orbit the sun at different speeds

astronomers are fascinated how venus well once by the closeis

earth like planet in the solar system astronomers are saying that venus was probably covered largely with oceans and can suported life

NASA have a idea for sending humans to venus so they can study the hostile conditons on the surface of the planet

secientists can make a blimp like vehicle so it can hovering over the roiling landsacpe the conditilons of the planet it wll not be survivable for humans .

they can use a ship to see venus far above the plant so they do not have to send humans in to to the survivable part of venus lf they send a vehicle in venus the vehicle can not

send photography or any video back to the secientists becuase the unhavetbe conditilons.

lf they use a mechanical computer they ware use back in 1940 during world ll the computer can run with no elerctronis at all most modern computer are powerful to today the mechanical computer only use gears and levers and do not have tpo have enteteny

lf we have one of the project done we can make are way to venus

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