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Venus is sometiimes called the "Evening Star" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. However, Venus is actually is a palnet. Examining Venus is very challenging because of its thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide around it. Even like this the scientists are trying to came close to Venus became Venus may well once have been the most Earlth-like planet in our solar system. We, the humans should pay a vist to our sister planet.

Venus is second planet to the sun but it is the hottest planet in our solar system because "beyondhight pressure and heat,Venusian geology and weather present additional impediment like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface". These are a few reasons why we can't get close to Venus, even though we want to.

The National aeronautics and Space Administration(NASA) is trying to send humans on to Venus. The scientists can peering Venus from far above the planet using ship orbiting and hovering safely can only give the insight of ground on Venus. This is not enough for scientists to really learn what is going on on Venus because they can not get a samples of rock,gas and anything else from a distance.

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