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Luke Bomberger had crossed the Atlantic Ocean sixteen times for people who were affected by the war.One rainy night he had been working on the ship and the ladder was slippery and he had slipped and flew across.There was a opening he had landed there he was lucky that he had not landed in the freezing ocean.Luke's job was to check on the animals every hour he also had to feed and give bales of water to the animals every hour.Luke also had fun on the ship he had played lots of games with his friends he had made while he was on the ship.After the war there were hardly any food left in Europe.Luke had turned eighteen while heading over to Greece after the war to help on the ship that was in Europe.Luke had made nine trips while on the ocean.It was 1945 and many countries were left in ruins after the war had ended because of the shooting and the cannons that been in the war in Europe.Luke had a very strict boss on the ship so he listened so he wouldn't get put in the bottom of the ship.Luke had returned home he was so happy that he was back home with his family.His parents were happy too.One reason to join the program is that so if you want to be in the navy you can be on this ship after a month or two you return home and you have be 18 to join this program.

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