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The technology Facial Action Ocding of the System is something was knoe when the people are happy or sad.

And Mona Lisa she at least according to some new computer software that can recognize emotions.

The software is the latest innovation form Prof. Thomas Huang of the Beckman Institute ofr Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, Working in for collaboration with Prof. An the Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam DR. uang and his colleague are experts at developing better wats for buman and computer to communicate.

But all the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer nidel of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like ah human.

The facila expressions for each emotion are Universal observes DR.Huang "even though individuals often show varyng degrees of espresion"(it's like not smilling as broady).

When fact we humans perform this same impressive claculation every day. For instance you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.

And here is when the facila actions emotional act he knows you are a not happy he knows what is going on in your life.

The evidence for to suppor the claims is we need to have experince and whe to know how to use the claims if we know all the information of the claim we go to know how to support the claim.

The introduction of ah boddy an ah conclusion to your essay that it is more of our personallity we have to know was is goin on in our's life in our body because we are the person who knows evrything about our's life not body knows our body not body know what is going on in or conclusion only we knows.

The Mona Lusa demonstraction is really intended to bring ah smile to your face while it shows just how much this computer cnad do imagine ah computer that knosw when you're happy or sad that's why is sometime important thw computer.

And finally the Meanwhilw ,muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palabrearus make crow's-feet around your eyers.( That's instruction #2.) But in ah false smile, the mouth is streched sideways using the zygomatic major and ah different muslce.

But by the way ,did making a happy face in this experiment also make yo feel/ slightly happy and according to the facial feedback ,Theory of Emotion moving your facil muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help produce them.

And know we have ah leasson in this life we need to smile we need to by happy for the resct of our's life we only have one life and we have to smile is not worry was is going on the problems is something normal in the life all the people has problemas or something like that but you need to be happy is doesn't care all the thing bad or the problem's with family smille in this life.

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