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Even though some may disagree with the creaction of these types of cars because they may be dangerous, but disagree i prepose that the making of these driverless cars be made.

In the story it begens to tell you in detial that for some cars, they may already have similarities to the driverless cars such as, in 2013 BMW's annouced the development of the '' Traiffic Jam Assistant ''. The car can handle driving functions at the speeds up to 25 mph. Also they can steer, accelerate, and brake by themselves, but they dont require the system knowledge to notify the human driver when the road ahead requires hands-on contact for directions.

For manufacturers they consider using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver. In consideration for some driver this may come in use, because some car accidents are cause by sleeping at the wheel, texting, or on the cellphone talking. This system may be of some use to businessmen who are constantly on the phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety precaustion.

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