Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The author supports the idea that

"Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents" very well by explaning what we would get out of exploring Venus and dangerous by the challenges Venus would give us.

In paragraph 8 of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author states that " Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." what the author is saying is that we should not stop trying to explore Venus because of the danger it would put our equipment or NASA people in. Instead he wants us to create and think about something that would get us close enough to explore it with out getting in danger. In paragragh 6 of "The Challenge of exploring Venus" the author states that "NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus" as i was stating. The author wants something that would hover arround Venus with out getting in the danger of melting or getting crushed up by the air pressure.

In conclusion the author wants us to think smarter not harder. He wants us to create safer and smarter ways to explore Venus. He doesnt want NASA in danger or wasting more equipment that would just get crushed up and melted by the atmosphere of Venus.

Score: 2