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Studing venus is not a worthy pursuit despiting the dangers it prevents, becasue it is dangereous, it can kill anything that lands on it, and becasue it is not a healthy planet. "Venus is one of the biggest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amature stargazer to spot." "In our solar system, venus is the second planet from our sun."

Venus is dangerous because in paragragh two it calims that each previos mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. This issue exapins why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors to study, despite its proximity to us. A thick atmosphere of almost of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfiric acid in Venus's atmosphere.

Why it kills things that land on Venus is becasue on the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times grater than what we experince on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreame than anything humans encounter on Earth: such an enviornment would crash even a submarine accustomed to dividing to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.According to paragragh 3 its aslo notable, venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though murcury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seekignto land on its surface.

NASA has one particularly compeling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditons by staying up and out of their way. At thirty plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenhiet. but the air pressure would be close to that od sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radtiation would not exceed Earth levels. not easy conditions but survivable for humans. Claimed paragragh 5.

Acording to paragragh 4, long ago venus was probably covered largely with oaceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet's surface is rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountians, and crators. Many resaerchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last longer enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. Paragragh 8 claims our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.

Score: 4