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The Face on Mars is something that is just an opinion of many people .There is no proof that this is real. The Face is something that people assume that aliens made it.

In paragraph twelve it says that the landform was common to the Middle Butte, which is on Earth. So, maybe the lava carried to Mars and created the same shape,which is probably at the same time .

In paragraph nine ,they said it wasn't an easy target to look at . Maybe, what they were looking at wasn't correct. They might've saw it wrong and just guessed what it was.

In paragragh one , the planet Cydonia

was two miles away from Mars .Maybe

Cydonia and Mars had once crashed into each other and created a weird shaped. Years later the shape wore off and created a human shaped face.

People can't prove that aliens made the Face ; they can't even prove that aliens are real. You can't assume anything until you know somthing about it . They may have all the picture and other details , but that doesn't answer anything. They don't have that fact of what really happened.

The Face of Mars is just something to keep people busy and on the edge of their seats . Even if it was real they wouldn't tell us . The Face was formed by posibbly by a collision or the lava like the Middle Butte .

All of the things that scientist say is based on opinions . They stated very few things that were actually facts . The Face maybe somthing else , it's not just what we see , niether

what's really there.

Score: 3