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In the expert "Coyboy Who Rode the Waves" there is a point in witch readers might whant to participate In the the Seagoing Cowboy program. Damaged town make diffrences in our lives. If you help you will suceed in helping others. If you help others people will also succed.

Helping others is a good thing and if you can make a living out of it you will feel even better. Luke said "I am greatful for the the oppritunity"(paragraph 9.)You will also be greatful if you are in the Seagoing Cowboys program. when you dont have to work you have free time to do what ever you like. You could play table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and wittling.

When you join the Seagoing Cowboys program you get to travel to many places. Luke whent to many places he said "So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy , a city with streets of water"(paragraph 5.) If you join you can also go on many adventures. When you join the program you will see how the world has turn up side down and will whant you to help even more.

Joining the Seagoing Cowboys will offer you many new experiences. When you join you can site see and hangout in your free time. Every day bad things happen and if you join you can help. Joining the Seagoing Cowboy program would be the right thing to do.

Score: 3