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Do you want to travel the world and help people along the way? Well, then you shoud join the Seagoing Cowboys program! I first joinded in 1945, and I don't regret it. Helping folks, seeing great places, and just having fun. It was amazing! After the whole experience, the whole world was opened to me. You will see what I mean if join the Seagoing Cowboys program.

Now, while at first glance it may look like you just get an excuse to travel the world. Well, it's not. You will still have to work. You'll need to take care of the animals on board of the ship. They all have to be fed and watered two or three times a day. This job can also be dangerous if you're not careful. Heck, I almost went over board and cracked my ribs one night. So, if you are clumsy or don't like the water, this Wouldn't be the thing for you. If neither of these things describe then great!

While the last few things I said may have made you a little uncertain about joining, don't worry. The good things completely overshodow the downsides. First, just seeing the smiles of the people you help warm your heart. Also, you grow bonds like no other with your fellow cowboys. On return trips when the animals are gone, we got to play games in the empty holds where the animals were. The best part about this program was getting to see so many places in the world. From excavated castles in Crete, to the Panama Canal. You'll even see places you never even knew were so beutiful.

After all this, is there even a quostion

if you want to join? Wonderful people, wonderful places. It will be amazing, I promiss you. Many people need help out there, and you could be the one to help them. If that isn't enough think of all the things you could learn, the people you could meet, and the adventure you could have. So, come on, what are you waitnig for? Plese, join the Seagoing Cowboys program today.

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