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Studying Venus is worthy despite,because Venus could also be like earth. Venus can have water as earth does. Vanus is greater then what we experience.Mars,and Venus can all be alike Earth. In this next i will be supporting my claim.

Exploring Venus would be excellent for us. We could have an other world to live on.The author states that "Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life." The author also states that "Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system." These quotes will support my claim.

One day people will find Venus as earth.Venus will be like earth one day,so as mars. The planet Venus once has water, but it has rocky sediment,valleys, and mountains. The challenge for Venus to become the next earth will be hard. I choose the best quotes to support my claim that studying Venus is despite.

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