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A claim for against the value of using technology to raed your emotion. Yes people are with this idea. But some are not ok with with it. And some just dont know.

People are with the idea of technology reading the emotion expresion of student. It would develpoing better ways for humans and computer to communicate. But caculating emotions is like math homework. the prossess being when a computer constructs a 3-D computer modle of the face, all 44 major muscles in the modle must move like human musles. Movements of one or more muscles is called an action unit. then this is classified six basic emotion-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness. In fact we humans perform ths same inpressive caculation every day. For instance you can probably tell hpow a freind is feeling simply by the look on their face.

While looking in the mirror. Dose your face expression in the mirror suggest an emotion? in fact these are the instructions for a face that lookis happy. Its all about thouse muscular action units. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a force on. By the way making a happy face in this experiment also make you feel slightly happy. According to the faicial feedback theory of emotion, moving your facal muscles not only expresses emotion, but also may even produse them.

A claim for against the value of using technology to raed your emotion.Yes people are with this idea. But some are not ok with with it. And some just dont know. but at the end i support the idea.

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