Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
In the passage "Driverless Cars Are Coming.

They have been rtying to do this for a wighle.

They have finally figured it out.

,The Release. , The high demand , the more it grew.

The older forms of the car wernt fully driverless. They had to at least be around 25 mph for it to actully work.

They had it to were if the driver is not looking at the road he or she would get a vibration on their chair. Then if that didnt work the car would go into manual and so their for the driver had to take over the car.

It wasn't the most safe way but it worked.

The new car is here. But they wern't flying off the shelvs like they were predicted to. TheIr were around 4-5 states whom bought there merchindise.

They were, Clifornia, Nevada, Florida, District of columbia. theis were the only ones who would actuly try the product.

They were all satisefided and wanted more and more shipments.

So the market was all good. The new car was at its peek and was keeping drivers safe no matter what happend.

The new car was a hit!

The cars were flying out of stock and then they were being even more safe and less deaths by automtives each year.

So now the new problem is the new car laws. So they had to come up with a whole new law system with the new cars.

So thats just what they did.

So tesla had worked out the bugs in their car and will be releasing the line of fully driverless cars in 2016. This one of their bigest hits yet it drives on its own for more then 90% of the time. Soo now they are pretty happy with what has come with the new cars.

The more saftey in the car, the new stoping system, and a whole new line of cars.

The new realease of driverless cars was a hit and more people started to buy them. So the stock of then was higher than ever. So the new driverless car are the thing of the futer.

Score: 3