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Would you travel to a dangerous enviorment just to unravel the unknown ? if your answer was "no", then you are like most normal people. but, the author of "The Challenge of exploring Venus" wouldn't take "no" as a answer. This author believes that the discovery of the true venus , hidden from the naked eye, will benfit the future of science, even with the danger staring them in their face.

The author believes that Venus is special because , it's basically the "twin" of earth, which means they might have had life on the surface. According to paragraph 4 it states "Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth."(TCOEV), Which fueled the minds of the scientists , because they just wanna know what was on the surface of venus. But, with a goal there is also road bumps, one of them is the fact that venus enviorment is crucial. According to paragraph 3 it states venus has a "thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus ... temperatures average over 800 degress...liquefy many metals."(TCOEV), which is extremely dangerous. But later in the article they stated "venus have value...expandes to meet very edges of imagination and innovation" which show that they can gain knowledge in later visits, and advance their technolgy.

The author of 'The Challenge Of Exploring Venus" explaines why studying Venus is helpful in many ways. Even though you might say "what if the people get injured or possibly die"

he provided details of how there is many diffrent ways they can carry out the mission. So, next time that you are setting a just never give up , even if you come cross a challege.

Score: 3