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First I would explain

to them that that martian mesas are common around cydonia,I would probably research important facts to support my claim. I would explain that the "face" is really pilled up rocks that give off the illusion of a person features, eyes,mouth, nose, things like that. In the passage it says "What the picture actully shows is the martian eqivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the american west.A lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa is about the same height as the face, through all the years of research and the uncovering of rocks people started to realize that the face really wasnt there. Scientist took pictures during the years 1976, 1998, and 2001 to give show us what we thught was a face was really a natural landform. On april 5,1998, when mars global surveyor flew over cydonia for the first time, michael malin and his mars obiter camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the origianl photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waitig when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing a natural landform not a face or a alien monument after all. I feel like everyone should look at the facts and lab researchs to fully understand what they thought they sawbecause they were obviously mistaken.

Score: 2