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The author think that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because astronomers are fascinated by it. And also Venus is the hottest

planet in our Solar System. It brings curiosity to humans, just because its dangerous doesn't mean it should be limited. The body paragraph will get into all the texual evidence.

The text states, "Astronomers are fascinated by Venus becasue it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system." And since Venus is the closest planet to earth that makes humans want to visit even more. But also the text also states, "At thirty-plus miles above the surface, tempatures would still be toasty at around 10 degrees fahrenheit." That proves that even though you could be so far from the surface it is still very hot to us humans, which is very dangerous but can survive. "Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation."Which is why we should study Venus despite the dangers.

In conclusion, i think that although Venus is basically the most dangerous planet in our solar system. I think that it shouldn't stop us but should want to make us study the planet even more. But find safe ways for us to do so.

Score: 2