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If you would paticipate in the Seagoing then you would explore a lot and go to different places. A Sea going is a person who takes care of horses,cows,young cows,and mules. I can explain a couple of reasons that you should be a Seagoing. My three reasons to become a Seagoing is that you can explore,working with animals,and it can change your life. Now lets talk about how you can explore if you join Seagoing so when you would join you would have to get to that place meaning travel and when you are traveling you get a chance to see different sightings which is really cool. When you would join a Seagoing you have to take care of animals on a farm and so you would be feeding the pigs or maybe bathing a horse and other but taking care of a animal is a lot of work but it is worth it. Becoming a Seagoing can change your life like it did to Luke maybe you don't have a good job but not a bad job and so if you join the Seagoing right now then you would be free out in the wild and would have the best job because working with animals and a farm is somthing that I want to do right now. So now I gave you three reasons you get to explore,working with animals,and it can change your life so now while your reading this I hope that you decide that you do want to be a Seagoing and I hope that you will enjoy exploring to different places,feeding and taking care of animals,and finally I hope that Seagoing will change your life.

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