Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The author supports his idea

very well. Why? Well let's get into this shall we. The author has already suggested that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Yes it is dangerous to study Venus but it is a good planet to study their is so much information that is unknown to us until we have been knowledged by it.

The dangerous of studying Venus and exploring it is how close it is to the sun. How close it? It is the second closet plant to the sun yes venus is a planet in our solar system as we know part of a galaxy. Venus is like a twin to Earth. Why? Well in paragraph two it states that " Often

referred to Earth's " twin". Venus is the closet planet to earth in terms of density and size, occasionally the closest in distance. Venus is a interesting planet to study because it is one of the brightest point in the sky at night.

" Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds". Sometimes we can end up being closer to one planet then another. What is crazy is that there is people that have been up to Venus and landed on it with spacecrafts. Exploring Venus like landing on it etc. On the other hand is not the best idea. Why? However it is good to observe and study from a telescope the not so good idea would be to try and land on it because of the dangerous it has actually brought to scientists. " No space craft survived the landing for more than a few hours". " Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades!"

Venus is a worthy place of studying but on the other hand it comes with a small or large price. Venus is dangerous and should be kept at a distance to study. There is harsh chemicals in the atmosphere like sulfuric acid. Aswell as Venus is so hot that the tempatures average is just over 800 degrees Fahrenheit so think of when it's not on average. " Venus has the hottest surface tempature of any plant in our solar system ". Scientist have been discussing further visits to the surface but is that a good idea? No! Well because how many space crafts have made it back not as many as there should've been all the spacecrafts should've returned but did not. So that ends up telling me why would you wanna risk it all to go see a planet that is highly dangerous, because I know I wouldn't put myself in that postion.

At the end of all this and my reasoning for why I think the author thinks that Venus is a worthy idea of studying is because it is as long as you keep your distance from it. The author still suggests that there are people wanting to go up there is wild because of the dangerous that it can cause. Venus is an extrordinary place to explore but isn't the safest no one can outstand being on something at 800 degress Fahrenheit but if you want to explore Venus then go for it because there is always hope and chance that you can make it back now there is new, faster, safer technology that can help you out for going on a trip to Venus. You could be able to study Venus at a distance like hovering over it or flying over it. " A vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendy ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. So at this point in time yes the author is right that " studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents".

Score: 4