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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author does not support his idea of how worthy it is studying Venus very well, even though he makes some good points that would convince some people that it is worth the time, he also states some dangerous conditions that would be way to extreme for most people, especially people who have never been to space before.

The three biggest factors that would make most people not even thing about visiting Venus is the temperature, the gravity pressure, and the natural disasters it has to offer. The first factor would be the temperature you would feel on Venus. Our body temperature is 87.5 degrees, the author states that the average temperature on Venus is over 800 degrees. Even with the space suit, our bodies could never stand that much heat, combined with the reality of being on a different planet would be to much for a person. The second factor that would make Venus not worth the time is the pressure that gravity has on the surface. In our planet, we can handle it because we are used to it, but the gravity pressure on Venus is 90 times greater than the pressure that we experience. That would be way to much force being pushed down on a human being especially, if they don't weigh that much. The final reason supporting the fact that the author does not give enough evidence to go to Venus are the natural disasters. Since Venus

looks most like Earth out of all the other planets, it experiences the same natural disasters we experience which includes: "erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes". If the spaceships that the people sent up there didn't survive then we wouldn't survive. The author, and also the rest of us are lucky that the ships that didn't survive had no people in them. These resons make it clear that the author idea of Venus being a "worthy pursuit" is false.

So why is this important, this is important becuase in the future, they might actually consider sending people up to Mars and risk putting their lives at stake. Until they are able to send ship up there with no people in them and have a success, then Venus should not be explored.

Score: 3