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Driverless Cars

Should driverless cars be developed? Google cofounder Sergey Brin has envisions of the future with a public transporation systems where fleets of driverless cars form public transport taxi system. Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. Driverless cars should be developed.

One reason why driverless cars should be developed is because it's safer than a human driver. In the passage the author states,"In the 1980s, automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes". These sensors are advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids. The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels reducing power from the engine, allowing better response and control than a human driver could manage.

Another reason why driverless cars should be developed is because it's not completly driverless. In the passage the author says," The car can handle driving functions at speeds up tp 25 mph, but special touch sensors make the driver keep hold of the wheel. The car also notifys the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.

Some people might say driverless cars should no be created, their wrong. Not only is it safer, it's also half the fuel of today's taxi system. Also driving in a fun way. In addition it offers more flexibility than a bus.

In conclusion driverless cars should be developed for many reasons. For one it's safer, cheaper on gas and it mimics the skill of a human at the wheel.

Score: 3