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Even though Venus is the "sister planet" of Earth and is closer than Mars, it has a extreme environment. Dispite the environment, studying Venus may help us develop better space travel and planet colonizalion in the future to help our human speices as a whole to evolve and adpat to much harsher encironments than we are used to. Venus may help us learn about how the universe, our solar system, and galaxy were made.

Venus might have alloys and metals that don't exist on Earth. Venus might be the first step to colonization of our solar system. It will improve our space craft knowlegde so we can be ready for the unpredictable environments on other planets. Who knows we may colonize Venus then Mars. If we do colonize Venus, the human population will be able to expand without over-populating Earth. With our knowledge of Venus traveling to other planets will be easier, because of the exploration to Venus the hull, or outer plating, of the craft would be able to withstand extreme temperatures, harsh weather conditions and extreme pressure.

Even though Venus is harsh, I believe that we would be able to over come this challenge and be ready to take on the next one head first with a better understanding of what to expect.

If we are able to get rovers, space crafts, and/or people on Venus, it may help us learn about our solar system and if aliens did one live in this solar system before we did and if so what happened to them and where did they go. Venus is still a mystery to us. Who knows what lives down on that alien, unknown, surface. Venus might be a key to unlocking the secrects of our solar system.

In conclusion, Venus is a worthy pursuit despite its environmental dangers that it holds under and in its atmosphere. It may be the first step to the human race as a whole to live on other planets and explore the galaxy we call home.

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