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Imagine a computer being able to read your facial exprssions to be able to tell if you were board or confused at school. Then that computer being able to take that data and improve your learning experiance at school. Well based off of Dr.Huang's research collaboratrion with Prof. Nicu Sebe from the University of Amsterdam, that might happen soon. They were able to find out the Mona Lisa's facial expression using a brand new computer software from Prof. Thomas Huang.

It is said in paragraph 1 "Dr.Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate." Which is great news.

This Is great news for schools because; it will make learner better for students who are having trouble in class. According to Dr. Huang in paragraph 6 he pridicts; "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or boared, Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor." This could also help with non verbal communication, and emotional communication. Shy students wouldnt have to be quiet and have unanswerd questions if we brought this technology into schools.

In conclussion, this technology would be a major break throug in class rooms and the world itself. Teachers would have closer bonds with students who are having trouble learning and that would improve test scores and the learning department itself. "The facial expressions for each emotion are universal." is what Dr.Huang said in paragraph 4, which he is right, it could be used in video games, the medical field, schools, and our everyday lives.

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