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You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you will be able to see many sights, and you do not need to fight in the war. You will also help many people by doing this job. It is an unbelievable opportunity for many people to in joy helping people.

you can also tour places all over the world.

being a seagoing cowboy is much more than an adventure it is also a lot of work. you will also find time to have fun,especially on return trips after the animals have been unloaded. The UNRRA hired us seagoing cowboy to take care of horses,young cows,and mules.

so far I have told you about all the good things about being a seagoing cowboy it is also dangerous.

On my second trip I was the night watchman my job was to report to the captian every hour to tell him how the animals were doing one rainy night I was making my hourly report

I slid down a slippery ladder and craked one of my ribs

That is only some of the resons to join us sea going cowboys.

The other resones you will have to figur out your self.

Score: 2