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The invention of this new device could be helpful in many ways. I believe it could help with studies done on students and how they react to certain activities done online or in class and what emotions are expressed in general. It could also help with preventative measures in children and students that are depressed and can be helped. This new technology is useful and helpful in so many ways. Not only could this new technology be used as a facial decoding system, it could be used to tell what the students emotional status is.

As i said before the Facial Action Coding System could not only be used for study on students but on babies and adults. This device could help with disabled children and adults, children with birth defects and syndromes. It could help them with gaining knowlegde in emotions and how to tell when someone is mad, sad, etc. , maybe even how to properly show emotions.

Back to the idea of reading student's facial expressions, it can be helpful in finding ways to make learning more fun for students and ways to make certain activities easier. It Also makes an impact on how the teachers will do things and teach. For example, special ed students might not find things that normal students do online as easy, maybe they might become frustrated and aggrivated with what they are being told to do. Well this new technolgy can help with figuring that out.

In conclusion, i support the idea of these devices being made and used, they would be helpful in more then enough ways and maybe it might be improved and be even more useful in the future.

Score: 3