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The author claims that Venus is a planet we can study, and possibly inhabit someday. Venus is reffered to as earths twin, mainly because it's around the same size, and is just a bit closer to the sun than the earth is. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.Scientists would like to explore it someday.

Venus long ago might have had oceans, and supported forms of life. Similar to earth, it has rocky sediment and includes features such as, velleys, mountains, and craters. Venus also has a thick atmoshoere, of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets that covers the whole planet. The temperatures on Venus average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmoshperic pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here on earth.

The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one perticularly compelling idea for sending humans to Venus. NASA has the idea of sending something, similar to a blimp into the sky of Venus, where we can study the area there. The vehicle would be able to avoid the dangerous ground conditions by staying out of their way. The blimp would be thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exeed Earth levels.

I think, leaving earth to find a new planet would be a great idea. We would find more and possibly alien resources. Meet other life forms and make friends with them, to form an alliance. If exploring Venus will succeed, then we have everything we need to explore possibly another planet. It would be great to take over another planet, and live there with new people.

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