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Students go to school everyday,and throughtout

their day their mood and emotions can change. Ever wondered what their emotions was? No need to worry anymore there is a new technology that has just came upon us. Its called a Facial Action Coding System which allows computers to identify human emotions. Which is a stupid tool to be used in a classroom.

The FACS or readers reading this know it the Facial Action Coding System in my opinion is a not a tool that should be used in classroom for many reasons why. One of those reasons is that students go through various amounts of emotions in a day. One minute they can be happy then the next minute they can be upset. I feel as if it would be too time consuming for teachers to stop class and run a students face through a computer program to get how they are feeling. That would take away learning time not just for the child that is getting his face scan but the other kids in the classroom who would have to wait while the teacher runs the childs face.In paragraph three we can see that the process might take some time to do when the author says," The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscless this in the model must move like human muscles." This shows that before you can even run the test the computer must be a model of your face which will add on to time.

Also another reason that the Facial Action Coding System shouldn't be used in classrooms is because its not gonna change the emotion of the kid. The teachers spends all of that time scanning a student face to get his emotion for no reason at all. Wether or not the kid is mad,sad,or whatever the case may be it won't change how her or she is feeling.

At the end of the day the FACS should not be allowed in classrooms.It takes away valuable time in the learning enviroment of a classroom. Not only that but it doesn't improve the mood of the child. The Facial Action Coding System is a pointless tool in a classroom because it doesnt help to improve anything or anyone.

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