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I think that exploring venus pursuit the despite the danger so that people can learn many more things. The reason why i say that is because one is that the beauty of venus from far away, another is that they can't bring things to examine because of the distance and lastly because of the atmosphere.

Reason number is that the beauty of the planet. When the planet is close by us, the planet look so beautiful that even an amateur stargazer would know the place to look at. There are many other names that they call the venus start for example they might call it The Evening Star. But the thing is though the name is not telling us the truth because Venus is a planet and not a start because of the beauty it make it look like a star from far away.

Another reason is that the distance between us and the danger.

Because of that reason we cannot brings things from the planet to us to examine thing because of the distance. when venus is close to us "people have sent numerous spacecraft to land on the cloud-draped world".

Because of the danger no spacecraft have been landed safely more than a few hours.

My last reason is that the atmophere. The atmosphere is 97 percent carbon diaxide. Here the cool thing, the cloud are highly corrosive sulfric acid. the temperatures are oveer the average and the atmospheic pressure are like more than 90 times stronger or greater than earth. These are the reason why people can stay for only a few hours because these conditions are far extreme for the humans and would crush them.

These are the reason why i think that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger. one is because of the beautyness from far away, another is that they can't bring things back from venus to examine it and lastly because of the air and how the atmosphere are like. i think those reason are enough to explore venus again by risking things.

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