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Who ever thought that a computer would be able to tell you how you are feeling? I know i never thought this would happen, but again technology gets better and better everyday. The use the technology that allows people to read the emotional expressions of studnets in a clssroom is valuable because, it can help the teachers think about what they can do to make that student student have a better day, and it can help teachers learn the different facial expressions that connect with the certain emotions to help them determine how a student is really feeling.

The use of this technology would be valuabe because, it can help teachers think about what they can do to help a student. The use of this technology can help decide whether a student really understands the work given to them of if there just lying becuase they don't want to ask questions because of what others might think. For example when I looked at the painting of Mona Lisa I thought that she wasn't a happy person but, I realized i was wrong the first sentence of the first paragraph stated that " She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgustedd, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.

The use of this technology can also be valuable because, it can help teachers learn the different facial expressions that connect with certain emotions to help them see how a student is really feeling. This may be able to help teachers stop altercations from accuring because the Facial Action Coding System will allow the teacher to see how angry or upset the student may be. For example if a person is really angry the system will dectect that.

Overall the Facial Action Coding System would be very valuable.This article has helped me to be able to detect certain emotions a peron may have. This system would give teachers better understanding about how students are feeling.

The use of this system can help techers better students and help teachers determine how a student is feeling based on their facial expression.

Score: 4