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In the article "Driverless Cars Are Coming," the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. These cars have been thought of in 2009 and have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash. The negative way is that most people will still have to be alert and this will cost more money, and depending on the crash of both veichle and drive we will not be able to fiigure out who has done it.

Most people are having a hard time focusing on the road just because of texting or being on the phone with others. There were positive ways of the driverless cars,but there are limits these cars can face.

There are some positive ways of the driverless cars. In 2009, google cars has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions. These cars read the positive and negative polarity as messgae in the binary code.There were also sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes, they have become more advanced in the pass ten years. Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer. Driverless cars will give the driver more time to text and finish phone calls with others. Also help in keep drivers, passengers, and pedestrains safe while driving in control.

The negative way of observing driverless cars were the price of how much all this will cost, how most people would react, and weither or not whose fault would it be if a crash has happened. Even though these smart-road systems in the beginning worked, the requried massive upgrades to existing roads and that is way to expensive to be practical. These sensors that car needed you would not just go buy at radio shack, but some where at a highly expensive manufacturers. People would need to be alert the whole time. Some signals would be sent out if you needed to address the wheel, such as a viberating seat, announces when the driver need to take over, or flashing lights on the windshield. Manufacturers are trying to set cameras to watch if the driver is paying attention, but means we are being watched and our privacy will be invaded. Some countries are allowing limited use of the driverless car because traffic laws are written with the objective that is only safe if a car has a human driver in control. If technology fails and someone is injured whose fault is it the driver or the manufacturer. Something could have broken and maybe a signal was not given to the driver causing them to crash. It could aslo be the driver was heavnily intoxicated and could not take control of the car.

In conclusion there are positive and negative ways of the "Driverless Cars Are Coming,". The positive side of seeing this is that there will be less accidents. Cars will also be able to drive independently letting us have more time to text or be on the phone. Sensors will be way improved in near future with the brakes and sending us alerts. The negative way of the driverless cars are that America will be pushed more into debt because of the expensive parts that are needed, if there is a crash no one will know who has done it, and how fast will people react to the signals of the car.

Score: 4