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Join the Seagoing Cowbaoys program.This story will be about a boy named Luke Bomberger. Luke just graduated high school, His friend invited him to go to the Seagoing Cowboys program. How could he say no, so he went and joined the Seagoing Cowboys program.

It was 1945 Wold War 2, The UNRRA hire the Seagoing Cowboys to take care of the animals on board. "The cattle-boats trips were an unbalivable opportunity". Luke always said. Being a Seagoing Cowboy wasn't all what luke did, he loved seeing places like Greece,China. But his favorite was Acropolis in Greece. Caring for the animals keep Luke bissy. But on one rainy night he slipped on a ladder, a stip of metle saved him from falling over. But even with two cracked ribs he still had fun on the boat.

But being a Seagoing Cowboy was a adventure for Luke Bomberge. It made him more aware of people im other countries and there needs. Well I hope you like that storie about Luke Bomoberger. Also I hope you join the Seagoing Cowoys, If you do i bet you will have so much fun

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