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I think that people should join Luke's participation in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I have four reasons why you should join and you will have fun.You will get to go places to help in the seagoing program.

If you join the program you will get to go to places you'll go on boats. If you never been on one then this could be your first time riding one to the other side of the Earth. One place you'll probably go to is New Orleans. You'll like it if you never been to a different state or different countries. You will get to help people all over the world.

Second is that if you join the program it could be an opportunity of a lifetime. You can miss out a lot of fun stuff people would do if you don't join the program.

Not just the people that join the program would like it. The people that you are helping would like it because you are helping them and taking care of them. Imagine you needed help I know you will like it because someone is taking care of you. So you should join the progarm and help people or animals that need your help.

Third is that you can meet people that are from World War II you'll get to help them the ones that got affected from that war. If you join the program people would like to join too if you tell how much fun it is and how much people your saving or helping. You can invite your friends to come with you too and you wouldn't be alone with no friends it might be better if you bring a friend along with you, so that you have someone to talk to at the trip.

Last is that your encouraging people to come join the program. You might end up getting on tv so that people all over the world can see what you are doing to other people or animals. If people see you what you are doing maybe they might want to do that too and would want to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. One animal you will probably see on the ship is 335 horses with enough hay and oats to kept them fed.

There are my reasons why you should join the program you will have a lot of fun. I know I am having a lot of fun helping and being part of the program. I hope you join the program if you do. I will help you and how this program works you can also bring a friend if you want. It is your choice to bring a friend along if you want to, if you don't bring a friend i will help you to get started for the first three days because you'll know how everything works before the fourth day. See you there at the program if you join the Seagoing Cowboys program!

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