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Do you want to travel the seas? Or be a cowboy? or BOTH? Then join the Seagoing cowboys! The Seagoing cowboys help recover their food supplies, animails and more! 44 nations come and join together to form the UNRRA. The Seagoing Cowboys help contries recover from the World Wars.

Once you get on to the ship, there will most likely be a cargo ship of 335 horses with hay and oats to feed them. There are jobs like, feeding the animals, the animails needs to be fed and watered two or three times a day. The stalls had to be cleaned and on your second trip, You might be lucky enough to be a night watchman. Night watchman are soupossed to check on every animal every hour.

When you are a seagoing cowboy, there is fun and adventures. it can take up to a month to get to china and about two weeks to cross the alantic ocean. And, after the animals get unloaded there will be games like, Baseball and vollyball games in the empty holds where the animals were housed. Table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games also helped passed the time when they were on their way back to the U.S.

Being an Seagoing cowboy for Luke was way more than an adventure in his opoion. It opened up the world to him, and made him aware of people of other contries and their needs. If Luke was not to be part of the Seagoing cowboys, he would probaly be stuck with his two part time jobs in an grocery store and a bank and could probaly miss a huge opportunity of going on an adventure. To conclude, You should join the Seagoing cowboys to have a great time with friends, travel,help out contries and especsilly, go on adventures.

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