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Would you trust technology to keep you safe? If yes, would you put your family including yourself in a car being driven by technology? Many scientists and engineers are working vigoursly to bring this driverless car dream to reality, which could mean that those very same imaginary cars that drive themselves in the disney movie "Cars" could be on the streets pretty soon. Although, I do enjoy new technology "driverless cars " is a technology in which I don't want to see developed or used. These cars cause more harm than good and so far have not been perfected at all as there is not one, not one fully driverless car, meaning that all of the driverless cars need a human to assist it. Many of these new cars are not ready and really wont be much of an assistance when ready, as they have quite a few more problems with them.

For example, the closest fully driverless car is a Telsa that willl be released sometime in 2016 that can drive by itself 90 percent of the time. Also these cars are not neccessarily the safest either as multiple states have made laws banning the use of these type of cars. The states have stated that they are not completely safe drivers( the autopilet driver) and that it is just not safe to allow cars to drive themselves. Another big controversy that these cars have started the debate on whether the human driver or manufacturer should be faulted with an accident. These are just some of the reasons people should stick to driving themselves around.

So, now do you trust technology to keep you safe? How do you feel about a car driving you around? Well, driverless cars still have quite a bit of kinks to fix in their whole operation before they set out on the road. However, driving on your own and making sure you and family gets home safely wouldn't be such a bad idea to me either. Eventhough these new cars can vastly propel the world futher into future, they are not quite ready to hit the highway.

Score: 3