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Driverless Cars Is The Future

The future is coming our way. Many automotive industries have began manufacturing the "driverless car". I believe that driverless cars will bring many positive reactions, and that the idea of a driverless car is very intelligent. Driverless cars will be a good benefits for the drivers and for the manufacturers.

Driverless cars are beggining to be manufactured in many industries. Google already developed cars that could drive independently in 2009, but they are not completely driverless. This is just the beggining of their creation. Google says that their, "cars have driven more than half a million miles without crash". Which is a lot if you think about it no crash in a "million miles", thats incredible. Google's driverless car still alerts the driver during traffic issues and when pulling in and out of driveways, but like I said this is just the beggining of their development later on in time they will probably will have all the minor defects fixed.

Although in the present time there is traffic laws that are written saying that the only safe car has a human driving it at all times, and driverless cars are not allowed in certain places. When the driverless cars are proved more reliable in safety there will be new laws covering their liabilty.

Driverless cars would benefit the driver. The driverless car would only use have the fuel of today's taxi. This is a great benefit in the drivers perspective. They would not have to pay all that gas money, and we all know that gas is not cheap. We waste so much money on just paying for gas when we could be using that money to purchase other things. The driverless cars tha thave been developed can, "steer, accelerate and brake themselves". Which is great this would allow the driver to relax during driving.

The current driverless cars have sensors that can detect danger. Meaning that when the car is driving and it detects something dangerous in its way the car will reduce power from its engine and apply its brakes, "allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone". Meaning that the technology can work that well under pressure while humans cannot.

In conclusion I am fro the development of driverless cars.Our technology is so advanced right now, imagine in the future how good it will be. The driverless car is safe and provides many benefits for the driver and the developer. By providing the driver with less pressure about driving and saving gas money. The developer of course would benefit from all the cars that would be sold. The driverless car is the future.

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