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The author suggestment of study Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because it is most earthling-like planet than any other planet in the solar system, also we have perfect eqiupment for humans to survive a great travel in the planet of Venus.

The reason that they want to study Venus is because it is the most Earth type than any other planet. In the text, " Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. long ago, Venus was probably covered just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and crters"( 4 paragraph The Challenge of Exploring Venus)

The other reason that they want to study Venus and not knowlegding the dangers because we humans can still survive the climent with good eqiupment. In the text it says " NASA's possible solution to float above the fray. imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes to travel at a higher altitude to fly over many stroms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground condition by staying up ande out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures wolud still be toasty at aqround 170 degrees Faqhrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans" (4 paragraph The Challenges of Exploring Venus). This mean that their is a possible to survive Venus.

In this evidencem, this declare that Venus is very challenging to study from it but, their is always a way to figure out to how to get close to Venus and we are almost close to revealing what Venus could be our second planet of Earth.

Score: 3