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I think this idea of driverless cars would be mostly positive and would benefit the world extremely. How i see it, is that people are trying to make the best of things while on Earth. This new thing that might possibly be coming out, could be the start of our next big industrial revolution.

The proof that I have that explains it will be efficient is from Google cofounder Sergey Brin. He says, it will use less gas, be more flexible, and change the world. The driverless vehicles that he envisions use nearly half the gas of a regular taxi and still be as efficient. That would mean less polution in the world and would benefit us and the Earth as a whole.

A second reason he says will be useful is that it will be able to fit more people on rather than a bus let alone a taxi. This would mean more people would be able to fit into one vehicle at a time. If this could really happen, then this could potentially increase the population in America.

The last benefitting reason for this state of mind would be the vehicles changing the world. It could possibly motivate the world to become more futuristic as you could say and more technological. Meaning this can possibly start an extreme industrial revolution.

With all of my detailed proof, I think having driverless cars would benefit the world, as we call home, efficiently. Looking to the future is something we do quite a lot, and if these vehivles are the future, then I'd be glad to ride in one.

Score: 3