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Studying Venus is worthy pursuit, traveling is fun, but, have you ever explore to a whole new plante? If you haven't then you should. There's alot of beneficial for exploring planet to planet. Venus is the closet planet to earth from time to time.

Its also the shineast planet at night. At night when you look up to the sky, you see the moon right? Beside the moon there's alot and alot of stars. But do you realize that they're only two stars that shine so bright, the brightest ? They're the brightess stars beside the moon. What more crazy is that both of them are not just stars,one of them is planet, the planet venus.

Even thogh

i've never been to any other planet than earth, i can tell that venus is actually really dope. You can even see venus from earth. and it look soo close to the moon at night, its probably close to the sun too but we cant see venus during day time.

Although no one lives on venus, Venus got quite alot of things like earth. Venus got surface of rocky sediments and includes familir features such as velleys, moutains,and craters. Venus is like a twin to earth, they got so many things in common,if only were able to live on venus but theres a thick atmosphere of alomost 97 percent cardioxide blanket venus.

Venus is also very hot,Human would definitly not survive on venus cause of the heat. Even though Mercury is closer to the sun, beyound high pressure and heat,Venusian geology an weather present additional impediments like erupting colcanoes,poweful earthquakes, and frequent strukes to probes seeking to land on its surface.

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