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Do you enjoy traveling? Do you want to travel the universe?

Scientist have been working on finding ways to travel to other planets near us and then maybe one day travel farther.

Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because, it is one of the closest planets in travel, its weather conditions and its geograhy is the closest fro any other planets.

In our solar system there are 8 planets and the nearest ones to us on Earth are Venus and Mars.

Because they all orbit the Sun at different speeds it would be possible to land a spacecraft on Venus or Mars.

Well, Scientist have done just that, they have landed rovers on both Mars and Venus.

At Mars the rovers were safe and not in any hasrh conditions.

On the other had at Venus the wether conditons are so bad that the rover survied for more than a few hours(The Challenge of Venus).

Even though scinetist have landed some robots it is not safe for people to go.

Thats way we need to keep studying Venus to find a safe way onto the ground for people.

Also, Venus can sometimes be the nearest option for a planetary visit which is helpful considering how long the time frames are when traveling in space(The Chanllenge of Venus).

Everyone wants to at least find a new something to explore.

Even though it is the closest planet the weather conditions are sill very unsafe.

With a 97% carbon dioxide blanket that covers Venus and the temperature being over 800 degrees Fahrenheit(The Challenge of Venus).

With all the hot temperatrues and the unsafe air it would be intresting is scientist found a way to sirvive.

Also, because of the high pressure and heat Venus' weather presents its own challenge with erupting valcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes(the Challenge of Venus).

Every explorer didn't know what was behind their gaze until they went and looked.

Sceintists will find a way to make it possible someday.

Furthermore another reason to study Venus, is it has very simular geograhpic features that show it was probaly covered with water from the amout of valleys and mountains(the Challenge of Venus).

After water drys up it leaves behind evidence, for example look at the Great Canyon.

It is evdient of water forming it.

Also, Scintist can tell it was probably covered with oceans and life forms was the amout of carters(The Challenge of Venus).

Craters make a good habit for animals that need shelter and when a medorite hit the ground all of the chemical in it goes into the ground and helps the envronment.

Like nitrogen, for example, is a chemical that helps plants grow and is found in the ground.

So, in conclusion, as a group we need to keep up supporting scintist with their plans for the future and traveling throgh space. Who knows it might happen in our lifetime or in the next.

The important thing is not to let anything keep us down.

Let's keep moving forward and upward.

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