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The Facial Actiion Coding System, also known as FACS, shows a persons emotion through the way they look. This machine caculated the Mona Lisa painting as 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. This machine was created by a man named Paul Eckman. Eckman classified six basic emotions---happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness---and then associated each with characteristics. So in my opnion, this machine can read someones emotion.

This machine uses video imagery in a real face or in a painting, such as ther Mona Lisa. FACS can tell someonme your emotion but your frontalis pars lateralis muscle. This muscle is raised when you're surprise or happy (above your eyes). It can also show if your angry but checking out your orbicularis oris, around your mouth, this gets tighten when you of course, start getting angry. We humanas can calculate our friends emotion by just looking at them, when they are happy, sad, et., but we can't do it to people who we just met so that's why the FACS machine is good.

By just squinting your eyes a little bit and and rassing the sides if your mouth you are smiling. But nayone can smile and be fine. FACS can show if someone is angry or sad or showing onther emotion when us humans can't tell. Just barely raising your eyebrows you can be surprise something happen and no one would know that you are. Or if you're starting to get stress thiis machine could show it help and someone can help you release your stress.

This machine can do a lot of things by us just simply looking at the camera. Facs can help us release our anger when no one knows we are and help us talk about things. This machine is a great invetion and Paul Eckman did an amazing job creating it.

Score: 3