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I think Luke would advertist the Seagoing Cowboys programs as place where your giving back to people and also getting to travel the world to some fun place you might have not been to. Some details from the story to support what Luke thinks is, if you join Seagoing Cowboys you get to help coutries like Europe recover supplies that the people need to live. Also take care of many different kind so of animals and even get to site seeing when your done with your hard work or have free time.

Some fun places that you might want to vist is Europe and China because they different kind of historial and beautiful sites. Before you can get to theses countries one thing you might want to consiter is the different dangers of the the sea. Details from paragraph 7 this sentence is when luke served as night watch man and he slid down the slippery ladder onto his backside. Luke had cracked his ribs and was out of work for a couple of days.

Beside that is only thing you have to be worried about because if you think about the Seagoing Cowboys programs, you are making so many people happy because you are help them get back to lives. Your also changing and benefiting your life. Evidence from paragraph 1 is ",Luke Bomberger had no idea his life would change soon after high school. "So come and join to make your life and our lives a better place.

Score: 2