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Humans have feelings. Everyone knows that. We can be happy, sad, angry, grossed out. No one can tell us how we feel. If you look at someone and that person is smiling, we will probably assume that he or she is happy. What we don't know is that she is probably hurting on the inside. Having a software that assumes feelings won't help in a way.

Scientist Dr. Paul Eckman created

a system called FACS. It stands for Facial Action Coding System. By looking at your face it can tell how you're feeling. The system can read " six basic emotions - happiness, surprise,anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-". You're probably wondering how. Your facial muscles show how you're

feeling. You can feel more than one feeling. What if

you feel happy but surpried. Your face wont split in half. One half is smiling while the other half has an eyebrow arched. No that cannot happen. Like people, systems can't tell how someone is feeling.

The FACS system in a classroom will depend on the age group. Why would you need it?

There are countless people who will listen to you express your feelings. Especially in a school. I do not see a pont in computers and humans to communicate. Again, there are so many people in this world you can speak

to why make a system for you to talk to a computer. What is the computer going to do if it see's your faceand

you look sad. It wont do anything buy register that you're not having a good day. Students should be having conversations with a classmate not having their head in their phones, computers, or tablets.

" Most human communication is noonverbal, including emotional communication," states Dr. Huang. I believe that's wrong. People want to talk about how they feel. There are jobs specificaly for talking about feelings. Teenagers are difficult and want to keep most things bottled in so no one can judge or give sympathy. Once they find the right person, they'll talk their heads' off about how they're feeling.

Having this program won't help

humans express how they feel. They will just want to conceal it even more. We don't want to appear weak. If we appear weak then other people will take advantage. I can sleep for 9 hours but sometimes I'll still be tired. The bags under my eyes will tell you that I am tired. You will assume that I did not sleep at all but in reality I slept for nine hours. The system will not give you

an

accurate response to how someone is feeling, it will just assume.

Score: 4