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is talking about

Venus where the author suggests that studying this planet is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. In this article you can see the description

of Venus , its has a nickname

called the "Evening Star" ,

is a place to examine more closely , which is a vantage for the scientists.We have numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a

challenging planet

for human to study .But its a planet with

diferents things that make it

a planet diferent to our planet , but interesting .

A point that the author used to support

the idea to study Venus was that Venus is closest planet to Earth, and has similar things as the author said " Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and

occasionally the closest in distance

too. "

But its has diferences

like the temperature , in Venus is 90 times greater than our planet and the author said " These conditions

see more far extreme than anything humans encounter onEarth."

The author

make a questiosn

himself that says " if our sister planet is so inhospitable , why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface ?", so what that's mean ,its mean that the Venus planet it's not a good place where humans can be survive

about the temperature and the health in this planet .But Venus was probably covered largely with oceans

as the Earth .

We have the NASA's ideas about sending humans to study Venus ."NASA's possible solutions

to the hostile conditions on the surfac of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray ."

they said too

that the solar power

would be pentiful and radiation

would

not exceed erath levels , not easy conditions , but survivable for human . NASA work on approaches to study Venus

like electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulation the chaos Venus's surface .

In conclusion Venus a planet interest to the scientists , beacuse Venus has many similituds and diferences about the temperature , few life and others

and with the NASA's ideas its most interesting . this challenge to study Venus has value , not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet

itself , but also beacuse human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors , thats mean it can be a good work and study for humans in

our planet , because Venus is a interesting place

that make us imagination and importance for more imformation .

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