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The author suggest that studing murcery is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present, because it was once covered with "large oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth." Today it still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. Venus is referred to as earth's " Twin." its the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size.

Venus does have dangers to it, humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on it, but no spacecraft survived the landing for more than hour. It has a reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study. its has volcanoes that erupt, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes to probes seekin to the land on its surface.

However scientist are discussing further visits to its surface because astronomers are so fascinated by venus! It may well once have been the most " Earth like" planet in the solar system. It could have supported various forms of life just like earth, Vallleys, mountains and craters and furthermore.

Therefore striving to beat the odds. Venus has value and because of its insight to be gained on the planet itself. Dangers and doubts should be expaned to meet the edeges of success.

Score: 3