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In the passage the author tells how Venus is "a very challenging place to examie more closely." She also explains the imortance of sending things to explore Venus and learning more about our solar system.

In the passgae the suther continually talks about how dangerous Venus is and how it is unfit for life and needs to be studied. She tells us how "no spaceship survived the landing for more than a few hours." This is very dangerous of course! Ninty-Seven percent of Venus's atmosphere is layers and layers of carbon dioxide and the average temperature being 800 degrees, which makes it impossible for a human to live and breath. Why would the author want people to go to the planet? A person could only survive a short amout of time, even with an oxogen tank.

Astronemers have been fascinated with Venus for years and say it has the most "earth-like" quality of any planet with its low valleys and high mountains. Some even think that it may have been filled with oceans and other life at one point.

In other words, in the future, Venus may be a new planet for earth to explore and visit. With new technology and new ideas, we may be able to see the beauty of Venus. In the passage it says that NASA is studing to send humans to venus one day to find new wonders and glories.

The author makes a point that just because somthing is dangerous, doesn't mean we shold not take risks to have more advances in technology and to push our limits and explore new places. One day earth will be so advanced in technology, not only will we be able to explore Venus, but other solar systems as well. In the end, every planet should be studied, not just Venus. Even though Venus may still have mysteris right now, we will have to wait for what the future holds to unlock them.

Score: 3