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Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because scientists believe that one day humans can learn to live and adapt on it. Venus may have well been the most earth like planet in our solar sytem. Although Venus has it's own challenges and risks, scientists are still discussing further visits to its surface. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus.

Venus is sometime call the "Evening Star", because it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. In our solar system Venus is actually a planet, the second planet from our sun. Venus may seem a pretty simple planet to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has been proved a very challenging place to study closely. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closet in distance too. Venus is a very difficult planet to study and that is probably why not a single spaceship has touched down on it in more than three decades.

Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenge planet for humans to study. What's challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. A thick atmosphere of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. The temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit on the planet's surface. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times larger than what we expeirenced on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans have faced on Earth.

Despite all the challenges and risks, why are scientists so fascinated by this planet? They believed that long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans. Today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has faamiliar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Scientist somehow believed that Venus could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.

With all the challenges and risks, Venus is still and will be a worthy planet to study because one day us humans can live and breathe on it. One day it can be exactly like Earth. They don't call Venus Earth's twin for no reason. Despites the danger it presents, Venus is a worthy pursuit.

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