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Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. New software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries. Do you ever get bored at school? This technology will help keep you concentrated and excited to do school work. The program is a good idea because it will keep kids from zoning out because their bored. It is a well needed device because, it will help students interested in school and not wake up in the morning and say," I dont want to go to school today."

We humans perform this same impressive "calculation" every day. But a teacher can't do it to every student at once. The program will see if kids are happy, sad, angry, and bored. Then it will change the lesson to adjust to your emotions. Say you were doing a lesson on the computer and it was really boring. The program would see that you are bored and adjust the lesson to make you interested in the lesson. This program would help a lot of students stay interested in schoool.

Some might say it's an invasion of our privacy. It would invade our emotions and some might not like that. But this will help your kids stay interested in school and want them to porsue a career that they want because this taught them what they wanted to do and showed them what excites them.

Score: 3