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Would you like to go to Venus? Venus is the second planet from the sun which makes it easy to see it's a beautiful sight but is still dangerous. The author stated that "Venus has proved Challenging place to examine more closely". There are many examples of the dangers of Venus.

Venus is not a safe planet to land on or to get near and the author explains why with two reasons. Venus's clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid is dangerous and is why we cant go there. The author stated that " On the planet's surface, temperatues average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosperic pressure is 90 times greater than what we expierience on our own planet". Venus has the most hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. An example of this is when the author says "Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.

The author says that it is dangerous to travel to Venus because of the Surface temperature and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The author makes some good points on the dangers of going to venus. After reading this do you still want to go to Venus?

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