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The atuhor support the idea of exploring venus by giving details about how we could explore venus. Such details include temperature, preassure and storms. He also says that Venus is the most eart-like planet out there, and it may have had oceans that may have contained life just like earth.

The author states that venus is a dangerous place to visist, because of temperature, preassure, and other weather related problems. " A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere." He says this because humans are used to earh's atmosphere, therefore it would take some time to acomadate to the extreme conditions. Of course the government could always invent something to make the place more habitable. "such an enviorment would crush even a submarine accostumed to diving to the deepest parts of out oceans and would liquafy any metal." There are obviously many dangers to exploring Venus, but the earth is dying , and it is all the human fault for killing it.

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