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Cars aren't really necessary in a community. They burn gas and pollute the earth very frequently. In the United States, the Environmental Protection Agency promotes car reduced communities. Legislators are starting toact like they are cautious.

One reason the cities without cars are better is because cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. diesel fuel was blamed since france has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up sixty seven percent of vehicles in frane, compared  to a fifty percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western Europe.

Paris typically has more smog than the other countries so that means they have more cars. cars produce way too much smog because of automobiles. we should all just stop driving cars when its not necessary because the earth is gonna become trash because of it. public transit was free of charge from friday to monday according to BBC. Fr the first time two other colombian cities joined the event. A day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Begota int the mid nineteen nineties

Parks and sport centers also have bloomed throughout the city, uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad smooth sidewalks. Rush hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic and new

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