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As a child I can remember the many times my teachers would have conversations about pollution. I can remember that they would tell to not throw my trash on the grown and to recycle. But they never told me a major  factor which causes pollution. That factor would be cars The following articles: "In German suburb,Life goes on without cars" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, "Paris bans driving due to smog" by Robert Duffer, "Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota" by Andrew Selsky and "The ene of car culture" by Elisabeth Rosenthal. All these articles let us know the effect of pollution and the advantages of reduced car usage. The advantages are great and help reduce the  pollutionin the air.

Less cars can reduce stress on many leves and can also reduce car congestions. In lines 3-4 Heidrun Walter says "when I had car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way." Driving a car is a stressful task and a coasting one also. Having to constantly pump gas into your car to make sure you don't run out in the middle of nowhere. Driving responsibly and safely for your safety and other people's safety. But also getting caught in a congestion can cause stress. Having less cars in the streets can reduce congestion. " congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of france." As stated in "Paris bans driving due to smog" by Robert Duffer. Less congestion can mean less accidents which can drasticly reduce the crude death rate all around. It can also increase safety in the streets.

Less car usage can dramaticly affect the pollution being done everyday. "It's a goood opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution." As writen in "Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota" by Andrew Selsky. The less cars roaming the streets the lower the polution will drop. The lower the pollutin is the better the enviorment will be. Reducing car usage has much more Pros then Cons.

Reducing car ussage has many advantages and perks. It can lower stress as well as pollution. As a bonus it makes the world a tad bit safer. Pollution won't stop in a day but reducing car usage is a great way to start.

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