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A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves

Luke Bomberger wanted people to join the Seagoing Cowboys program

because you help young cows, and mule that were shopped overseas. So Luke and his friend Dan signed up for the Seagoing Cowboys program.

Luke and his friend Dan got their orders received so they can report to New Orleans. So after that they boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster they were headed to Greece. They had 335 horses and alot of hay and ats to feed them on the way to Greece. Luke and his friend Dan wanted to join the Seagoing Cowboys program because they could help all the animals that were shipped overseas and that were hurt. So Luke and Dan helped all of the animals and got the better. Luke was happy because he also got to see the Acropolis in

Greece and he also got to take a gondola ride in Venice.

When luke ws almost arriving in Greece he turned 18 which meant he could be drafted in the military services. When Luke's draft board learned that he was on a cattle-boat trip they said why don't you just keep doing that for his service.When Luke was part of the cattle-boat trip it was an unbelievable opportunity for someone like him. He said "besides helping people he got to see Europe and China. The exciting part was that he got to go to Greece and see the Acropolis and go on the gondola ride in Venice.

Luke got a job as a night watchman. His job was to check on the animals at night time. When he had the job as a night watchmen he slid down the slippery slide on his backside and cracked some of his ribs so he couldn't do his job for a couple of days. Luke said "it made him more aware of

people of other countries and their needs.

Score: 3