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I do not think cattle boating is a good idea.It is very dangerous,and you don't even have to think about why it is.Remember when Luke slid down the ladder,starting to sliding off the boat,but a metal peice caught his pants,and he made it alive with broken ribs?Thats dangerous dont you think?Thats not it eighther<because you sse im justgetting started.What if the metal peice wasn't there,or the metal peice was aiming for his eye or worse?Cattle boating is also dangerous because you can get stranded.For example,what if a giant storm came, and it caused the ship to go off course and you end up in the middle of no where?Also do you remember when Luke said he gets to see a lot of amazing places,well what if you became stranded on the worse places a human can never be?Now what if your food slid off the boat?Or a giant creature attacked the ship.Your life would be over.This is why I think cattle boating is dangerous.Instead of thinking twice about going,you need to think a million times about going,or dont go at all.Thats what I suggest.

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