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Seagoing Cowboys Program

" I need a job. But I don't know what I want to do." Come join a program.

Thereis a

program that is called the Seagoing Cowboys program. This passage will tell you what the Seagoing Cowboy program is, and what you could do if you joined.

If you like animals, or just want a job. Come join the Seagoing Cowboy program. What we do is take care of animals that were shipped over seas. Some of those animals were cows, horses, and mules.That means that you would have to go overseas, but you would aslo get to go to the most amazing places in the world. Including Greece, Europe, China, Crete, and Italy! Not only do you get to go there, but you would get to see the Acropolis in Greece, get a tour of the castle in Crete, and take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. You would aslo go on the Atlanic Ocean and also get to expeirence cool things.

I don't know about you, but ever since I have started this program I have had so much fun! I was working at a grocery store and a bank, but now I do the best program anybody could ask for. I love it and you would to if you would like to join!

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