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Is studying Venus worthy despiting the dangerous it presents? Studies are doing whatever it takes to land a spacecraft on Venus despiting the downfall they had for more then 3 decades.I believe that studying Venus can lead us to something more about Venus.Three reason why I believe studying Venus is worthy are it's a planet that we know was once covered with water, we need to learned more about the others planet surrouding our planet, and more knowledge will developed.

First reason studying Venus should continued on is because it was once surrounded by water. Which mean plants could possibly grow in that plant."Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analougous to those on earth." This reasons showes that studies should take they're time and go deep into their studying of Venus and find more reason to see if it's possible for humans to started their life in Venus.

Second reason is we need to learned about the planets that are closer to our planet because dangers can occur to our planet if we don't study about the surrouding of where we are."Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms- humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world."This showes that Venus is very close to Earth and anythig can happened if something was to happened in Venus.

The last reason is more knowledge will developed."Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge." This showes that researchers and coming up with different type of machines to be place on Venus.

In conclusion I believe that studying Venus is worthy of our time because Venus can be the next planet for our next generation to live on. We also need to learned more about the surrounding of where we live on in despite of any dangers thing we don't know where they come from.

Score: 3