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Using technoloy to find out about people emotions can help parents, social, workers, and teachers. On the other hand it can make kids feel uncomforable. most kids don't like to talk about their problems. However kids need to let people help them anyway they can.

Using something good to help children with their problems is a big need in this Country. The computer has an facial action coding symstems to see the six emotions that humans have. One of them attracts all the facial expressions you do throughout the day. Each exprssion is always being compared to a normal face. Also the computer can tell when you're in a bad mood a or in a happy mood. Therefore many people in the world can help each other be happy. Parents take their children to Doctors or therapists so they can get all the help they need. Many kids suffer from school because they are moody, or they are depressed from something.

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