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after reading making mona lisa i came to the conclution that i agree with the new technology. this technology can be used for many things,in the story it says "to an expert, faces dont lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a "smileing" politician or celebrity isnt being truthful." this shows that faces can show if someone is lieing or fakeing a smile. if we had technology like that

to show if someone really isnt happy or if there fakeing that would be good to know.

the technology can read many emotions just by your smile. the author said"Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, suprize, anger, disgust,fear, and sadness." this shows that the technology can read many types of emotions. the computer can reall all of your basic emotions includinding suprise.

this computer uses your face muscles to read your emotions. " then associated each with characteristic movements of the face muscles." it uses its prior intelligence of the face muscles to read your emotions. for example it says "your frontalis pars lateralis muscle raises your eyebrows when your suprised."

so when the computer sees you do that it reads it as suprised.

i agree with this technology because we have many uses for this all around the world.

Score: 2