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The idea on studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite of dangers. Venus is a very valuable planet now that we want to know more about it.

Venus is avery dangerous planet since we know more facts about it and what it can do if we land on it or be near it." Clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere ". " Temeperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric ppressure is 90 times greater than what we experience in our planet ". Venus is a very dangerous plant this can kill you thats how dangeruous it is.

it would be better if NASA would go to venus or something and check what other information they can get about it. " NASA'S possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray ". NASA found this solution on getting more information but its a true risk on doing that.

Other aproaches to study venus is the future. I say it is the future because if NASA gets to study more about it we can find ways on landing on Venus without getting injured or killed. " Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War ll". A machine that can get to venus is and option on studying Venus.

Us the people we have lots of curiosity on everything, and NASA wants to know more about Venus . Our knoledge on getting to know venus is gonna come in handy we can figure something out on getting to Venus without tragedy .

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