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Hi! This is Luke Bomberger, I think you should join the Saegoing Cowboys program. Not only is it fun, but you are aslo helping the people who's countries been destroyed by the war.

World War || is finally over in Europe, but left countries in ruins. To help

recove the loss such as food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations have joined together to form what is called a UNRRA. The UNRRA hired the "Seagoing Cowboys". Which me and my buddy, Don Reist, signed up for. In my opinon I think that the cattle-boat trip is an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy. You have some extra time too. I took a tour in a excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his back on the way to China. The thing that keeps you the most busy would have to be caring for the animals. They needed to be feed and watered three times a day, but I can't forget to clean the stalls either. I was prepared for this in thanks of my anut Katie, who owned a farm as I was growing up. I would work there as a child. On my second trip to sea, I was the watchman which meant I had to check on the animals every hour. I found so time to have fun. It was when the animals were unloaded. We played games like baseball, volleyball, table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and lets not forget the games that help pass time. Being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than a adventure to me. It opened up the world. I was very grateful for this opportunity. I am more aware now of people of other countries and their needs. That is why my and my family host numbers of international students and exchange visitors for many years. That you know why I think you should join.

Score: 4