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Luke Bomberger had just graduated high school. Soon after he graduated, his friend, Don Reist, had invited him to go on a cattle boat to Europe. Luke knew he had to say yes, because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.

Some reasons to join the program are to help animals such as horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. You will also get to go to unique places. Some places you might get to go are New Orleans, Greece, Venice, China, and many more.

Luke had turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. "They got their seamans's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece-with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them . "When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service."By the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made 9 trips-the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.

"The cattle-boatr trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy," he says. Also " Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special," he says. These are some reasons you should join, and a boy named Luke Bomberger who signed up, and had no idea that this would change his life.

Score: 3