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The Seagoing Cowboys is a part of a group that is called

UNRRA it helps people and animals after the war. the reason you should join is that you are helping people and it is cool to go see other places and different like the Acropolis in Greece and china and europe. there are some ups and downs but it is worth it to see where you can go sometimes you will have to work nights watching the animals every hour of the night you will have to be care full because the dangers of the sea is different than it is on a farm.

It is alot of fun the animals keep you busy and there are games you can play games like boxing,base ball,table tennis,and tournaments on the way over to china or europe or where ever your going they always had fun.

luke was working on his aunt's farm when he was a kid so he was prepared to work daily but he could work all the time luke on night watch hurt his ribs by falling of a slippy later from the rain lucky for a metal strip didn't have him falling over board. Being a Seagoing Cowboy was a live changer for luke he said i'm grateful for the opportunity it made him more aware of other countries and the people needs.

The work on the ship was hard it kept luke busy the animals had to get fed three times a day bails of hay and bag of oats had to pulled up from te lower deck and stallshad to be clean. In august 1945 luke got his first orders. luke said the day of the parcific war ended they got there sign up papers and bored the SS charles w wooster.

Luke never knew his life would change right after his high school gradution but his friend asked him if he wanted to join the Seagoing Cowboys and he couldn't say no so he joind the Seagoing Cowboys and buy the time luke was discharded he had already made nine trips with the Seagoing Cowboys that was the most any Seagoing Cowboy ever had.

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