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The new technology called Facial Action Coding System classify peoples emotions by using avanced technology. This technology can help students find out why they can't focus or why they are having trouble learning new things.

Facial Action Coding System can classify a human emotions better than a human can classify another humans emotions. In paragraph seven the author asks "Does you expression in the mirror suggest emotion? Can your lab partner recognize which one?" Facial Action Coding System can show which emotion and how much of that emotion is felt. Facial Action Coding System been tested on the Mona Lisa and has shown that "she's 83 percent happy,9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry". No human can classify every percent of every emotion a person has. Facial Action Coding System construcs a 3-D computor model of a face and analysis fourty-four major facial muscles to find out which emotion and how much of that emotion. Those forty-four muscles must move like a human muscle.

If students could have this technology in a classroom they could find why they can not focus or if they are depressed. If the students can be diegnosed they can go to counciling, get medicine, or get tutoring to catch up on work or help them focus. Facial Action Coding System would help students get better grades in the long run. This is why students need Facial Action Coding Systems in the classroom.

Score: 3