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Venus is worth pursuiting despite the dangers it can present. Venus is the closets planet to earth in idensity and size and occasionally the closest in distance too.

First, some people often referre Venus as Earth's twin."Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth."(paragraph 4). NASA and scientist would want to pursuit Venus. Venus could have been like Earth long ago.

Second, Venus has some appereances like Earth."The planet has surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters."(paragraph 4). Venus could become like Earth again in the future.

Lastly, Venus has the same elements but higher."A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere."(paragraph 3). Having the same elements would want scientist and NASA to explore Venus

Venus is worth pursiuting despite the dangers. If Venus is similar to Earth, Scientist and NASA would do anything and come up with something to try and be able to explore Venus.

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