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The Challenge of Exploring Venus talks about Venus itself, its attributes and other signifying parts of venus. "Evening star" is a nickname given to Venus because its one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Venus is the second planet from the Sun even though its has proved a challenging place to examine more closely.

Venus is also called the Earth's twin because its the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. Its right around the corner, many spacecraft has been sent to Venus but no spacecraft survived the landing or more than a few hours. A thick atmosphere of 97 percent Carbon dioxide blankets Venus, even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The author supports the idea due to many reasons because he learning about another planet is true. For example, he said "NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. They are using these old devices called "MECHANICAL COMPUTERS" made years ago in the 1800s and used in the 1940s during the World war II. The computers are the only options we have left as of now to help us get to know more about Venus, so we have to use the devices because the modern devices are too delicate for situations like this. They thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but modern computers are really powerful, flexible and quick but they are too delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions. By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure and other forces.

In conclusion, I would like to add that there might be some probability that years ago, Venus was covered largely with oceans and other various forms of life just like Earth. Venus still has some features that are similar to Earth's. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.

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