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Imagine how it would be to live in a different planet besides Earth. How everything would be completly different from what we live in today. How they way you live and do certain things in a regular basis would dramatically change. Scientists are now studying the planet Venus and they want to conduct experiments on how to ge there and what it would be to be there for days.

Venus is the second planet which makes it challenging for scientist to study because in the recents years they have sent spacecrafts to venus but none have had any luck. They usually will only last a few hours before it stops working and none of them has landed in Venus. It has been stated that Venus has very high temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we normally experience here on our own planet.

Studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers that come along with it. Scientist could be studying Venus for years and years and their caculation could still not be right even if they are certain it is. They have been wanting to send humans to Venus and see how it is but they aren't sure yet. They could have proven that if a human steps on Venus nothing bad will happen but they could be completely wrong and not know that. Another good reason on why they continue to study is because Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Eath-like planet from our solar system.

In conclusion, I believe they should continue studying such an amazing planet but I don't think it will be worth it to send an actual human being not knowing the concequences of what will happen. I would prefer them send someone who already how studied everything about Venus and send the exact person and hopefully be able to come back with more gathered information and help scientist know more about Venus.

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