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However venus orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide onl limted insight on ground conditions because most forms

of light can't penetrate the dense of the atmosphere.Also researchers can not take samples of rocks or other sources from that far of a distance so there for they need to get a close up of the planet to figure it out.Despite all the risks they are going to have to take like fist off they tested samples of silcon carbide in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus surface.Also lasted three weeks in the experment then they tried a differnt idea that would also work for a amount of time such as mechanical computers wo played a big role in this situation.By comparison the systeams that used mechanical parts the researchers hade to make it look more resistant then what it already was before to heat,pressure,other types of sources.Another fact would be that the conditions of just exposing a cell or even a device could be turned ito acod or heat on venus because of the tempture that is so hot there also I think that should not be our limits I think we could still do alot more proggrese with this types of ideas and planets.

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