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Imagine a world where people have lost all desire to do things for themselves. With these new driverless cars approaching, our world could end up like that. Although the idea of a driverless car may seem great, it could also be very dangerous. Development of these cars is not the best idea because people will become too dependent on them and technology is bound to have some sort of issues at some point.

Having a car that drives people around all the time seems like a great idea, but the reality of it isn't so great. If people get these driverless cars then they will become dependent of them. Having these cars throughout generations would mean at some point, no one will even have to know how to drive. That could be very dangerous if a car malfunctions. What can a person who doesn't know how to drive do if their self-driving car stops working?

At some point, technology is bound to malfunction. Even the passage mentions that there is a possibility that the technology could fail. If it does, who would be to blame? Could you blame the driver for not knowing how to drive? Or could you blame the manufacturer for making the faulty vehicle? Someone could seriously get hurt. The possibility of it all makes this "dream car" sound even more dangerous than it already does.

The idea of a driverless car seems too good to be true. With something that seems that amazing, there must be some downfalls. In order to prevent some of those downfalls, such as people becoming extremely dependent on the cars and the possibility of the cars' technology failing, people shouldn't continue with this development. The stage they have the driverless cars at currently is a perfect stage. A human should always be in the car and alert in case of an emergency.

Score: 3