Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The author in this story supports his details really well by telling us how

good this idea is how we should go to venus but first he tells us what the dangers by going to venus is like. In paragraph 5 he says in venus the farrenhiet can go up to 800 degreese and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater what we feel in earth. venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers we can have another planet for trash or another planet to live in for ourselves. the author even gave us a claim how we are already coming with a plan for sending devices to venus in the land of venus . do we really want to live in a planet were 50 percent of the ocean is plastic and trash what if later in the future our nieghbors are gonna be platic. one scientist did a test on somebody and they found out they had 5 percent of the body was a bit plastic what if later we dont have no where to throw out garbage away we can move to a new planet venus bit dangerus but woudlt be all bad .

Score: 1