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I think it would be a good idea if they come out with cars that can drive by its self. It could help people while they are busy or something like that.

If they come out with cars that can drive by there selfs that would help a lot of people out. If some on it busy and all they would have to do is get the car to do or go what ever they wanted to go. Another thing is that if the car gets into a accident and there would be no one in the car so it would be safer.

Smater cars would have sensors on they that could tell the car to stop right away. The car would be smarter than the human brain. So there for the car would be more safer that someone driving it. Sensors have been out for a long time since the 1980s so the sensors work really good. Sensors makes the brake stop fater that what a human could. The sensors become more advanced

as the years go by.

Comeputers would run the cars and computers are really smart. The cars can be turned of instantly. The car would have safety featurs installed in it. The lwa thins that it is saver to have these cars. They test these cars out alot to find places that need hlep on.

I think it is a good idea of making cars that can drive by there selfs. It is safer than a person driving the car. Because the car is a computer and the compurter is smater. The law thins that it is a good idea so it could be more safer. So that is why i think it is a good idea. Less people would get hurt.

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