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Studying the planet Venus can be another big step for our future. As we get more into the future new technology will come out and more challenges will be faced. Throught life everyone has callenges and I think this is one we should take. Here is some evidence the author uses to support his claim.

The author firstly explains that to get to Venus there will be challenges that we have to face. The author explains that the atmosphere Venus has contains "97 percent of carbon dioxide" this means that the atmosphere of Venus is very horrible for a human being to withstan. We need oxygen to breathe, when we exhale we bring out carbon dioxide which our plants eat. With evidence like this it explains that there is not many plants on the planet of Venus to support life for a human. Also the author states that "the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere" having acid in the air will be a big challenge to face if we want to study Venus.

Another challenge that we have to face that the author states is that the planet's tempatures "are over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience in our own planet." Evidence like this show me that studying Venus is going to be one of the biggest challenges we will face. The author concludes that "Venus has the hottest surface tempature on our solar system even the mercuary is closer to the sun." This shows me that Venus is extremely hot. We have many obstacles to overcome to study Venus but evidence will make it happen.

The author does state what we can do to study the planet of Venus though. The author says "imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the roiling Venusian landscape" this gives me the idea that the author is on to something. If we could possibly be above Venus to study its landscapes or life it would be a huge move for us to study it even more. Another piece of evidence is that being "above Venusian will have the air pressure close to sea level just like earth it could be survivable for humans." If its survivable for us to be above Vensu for such a time, take a look at this. The suthor explains that "some simplified electronics mad of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions" Evidence like this can make us study Venus a lot more than wat we expected.

In horrible conditions, weather or worse we will find a way to study new things like Venus. The evidence that the author states show us that the more we look into Venus, the more information we will find that we need. Despite the dangers in Venus studying Venus with the evidence we have will make it happen sooner or later.

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