Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Luke enjoys the oppoutunity to be a Seagoing Cowboy. According to the text it states that Luke said, "I'm grateful for the oppourtunity to be a Seagoing Cowboy, I think a lot of people will enjoy the chance as well". According to the text it aslo claims that, it will be a fun ride while on board, it has activites such as baseball, volleyball, tennis tounmates, fencing, boxing, reading and whitting.

While reading the text it states that Lukes life has changed by joining the Seagoing Cowboys program. He helped people beacause the affect of World war II. The text states that, During the war it wasn't alot of food, water, most of the shelters was not sturdy. Thats when Don signed up.

When Luke turned 18 he had finally arrive to itally, that means he can aslo get drafted by the military. While in the military he had made 9 trips in the course of 9 years.He had helped alot of people during this process. He went to china and the great wall of china and helepd during that process of people starving being hedydrated and alot more.

While on the ship he had to feed all of the animals. Clean up for them. Water all of the plants,and make sure all the bales of hay and bags of oats are still good. On the second night he was on night patrol. he had to guard the ship and make sure the coast guard knew who he was. Comming to my conclusion i think Luke enjoyed this oppourtunity and will love to come back if he can.

Score: 2