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To begin with, In the story Luke Bomerger traveled the sea and and went to many diffrent countries.His friend,Don Reist asked Luke to join the UNRRA with him.

Luke couldn't say no.

First,I would like to say who likes to go out on sea and visit every country to help out and solve their problems?I do that every day, when I got out of high school My friend asked me if I would like to join the UNRRA(United States Relief and Rehabilitation Administration).I said yes and my whole life changed right in front of me.Since then I been traveling the seas,caring for animals fedding them bathing them sometimes more than once.I work on a farm helping my aunt Katie.At that time I was going to China, It tooks two or three weeks for me to reach it.

Next,I had a fun time on ship,especially on return trips,I had the highest amount of trips than my partners.44 nations joined in to help the "Seagoing Cowboys"World War II ended in 1945 we had to fix every thing befor we can go out in sea I had two jobs before I Joined the UNRRA.I had slipped and almost fell off the side of my ship,but,I was saved by a piece of metal.

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