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I think the author did a good job of why we should still study venus dispite the risk. He states the risk of sending any maned or unmaned craft to Venus. He says how we can overcome or try to over come these problems.

The author states how sending any maned or unmaned craft ot venuse would be vary risky. He say says that the temp can get up to 800 degrees. hot enfouf to melt parts of a space craft. There is aslo the enourms wight of the atmosphere. The atmosphere on Venus is 90 times the wight of the atmosphere on earth. He says that is more than even the deepest parts of the ocean.

The author also says how we can try and over come these obstcals and get valebile data from Venus. He states an idea about using a hot air ballon like object to study Venus from about 30 miles from the surface. The temp would still be 170 degrees but we could work around that. The air pressure would be coles to that at sea level on earth. There is anether idea about simplified electronics made of silicon. Acording to test NASA did they woulf last up to three weeks. The last much longer than what we use in rovers that we send to the Moon and Mars.

These is why I think the auther did a good job staing why we should contune studying Venus dipite the extrme condations. He says all the dangers we would face trying to send anything there at all. Then he gives ways we can over come these dangers.

Score: 3