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The article is called The challenge of Exploring Venus. The author makes a explaination of how scientists will be able to find a way and travel to venus and adapt our lifes there and being able to live there with no danger and making it possible with technology.

Scientist want to find a way to get to Venus and they are thinking of ideas of making a space ship and having the astronauts fly there and trying them to adapt there lifes there. They are already studying and learning more about venus but they also want to have enough research so that they can be safe enough to know that it okay being there. Also, the atmospheric pressure in Venus is 90 times greater than what the human handle in earth. The temperature in Venus is going to toasty and around 170 degrees fahrenheit. Scientist talked about how astronomers are vasinated with traveling to Venus. Life on Venus would be as close as earth and can be the same to earth because Venus has mountains and valleys and craters. The technology in earth is really getting better but in venus the technology wouldn't handle the heat of venus because its to strong. But they are working so hard and facing the challenges that are coming against them. They talk about how modern computers are more delicate and could be more dangers to the conditions in venus. They are also having to face danger because its more heat and a high temperature for there body.

With scientists learning and pushing themselves to understand more about venus it helps to hopefully have a chance to one day to visit venus and adopt there lifes there and improve there technology. Only time and hard work of research would maybe help scientist visit venus.

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