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Venus is often referred to be Earth's twin. They are different distances from the sun, but astronamers have figured out that Venus may of been able to have many life forms just like our planet earth. For example is says in paragraph 4 Venus has some features that are simular to Earth's such as Venus has a rocky sediment surface, and also have very familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and even craters. All spacecrafts that were put on a mission to land on Venus where failures, but with each failure we may get a bit closer to getting to our goal of getting to Venus.

Venus is very much worth the dangerous pursuit. Venus is a facinating planet such as Earth, since earth is now the only planet with perfect temperature for life and Venus apears to of had the same ability to have life on it as well. We all have therorys of why Venus got the way it is to day and is no longer able to have life on it, but the only way to get on answer is so try out best to get there to do the research. Such as we did to Mars with

the rover "opportunity." But Venus is going to be very tricky to get on since there is so much carbon dioxide and Venus's average range of surface temperature is around 800 degrees Fahrenheit (Paragraph 3) and the apmaspher can crush and liquefy a submarine.

With all this information I hope you see my reasoning for thinking Venus is a very fasination planet to explore in the future years, But as i said it will be very dangerous and absoulutly take an extream amount of time before we acomplishment it. After it is done we can cellibrate, even know the only people that will be cellibrating will probably only be the scientist that did it.

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