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This new software, the Facial Action Coding System can tell if you're trying to hide your emotions. The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. The computers will know if you're hiding your true feelings which is pretty cool. It's amazing when you move your muscles it would know what your emotion is. People hide they're feelings because it's either they don't have no one to talk to. So when the computers know your true feelings there could be some people helping you. For an example, when you're confused in a class when the teacher is teaching the computer would know that. Some people are afraid to go up to a teacher and ask for help. That's why it's a great idea to use some technology. When the computer knows that your confused the teacher would know and he/she will come up to you and help you. Having this system would make things better. It would be easier to figure out who's confused or not. Plus the teachers wouldn't have the blame if a student doesn't understand what's going on. I feel like the other students in the classroom would think having this system would be great. This new sofare actually works. They tried it on Mona Lisa and she was about 83% happy, but also 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. In the Making Mona Lisa Smile article it states, "The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do." I think it's a great idea to have this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. The students will get more help and they will understand better. They wouldn't have to be afraid anymore to go up and ask for help because the computer system would let them know.

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