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Venus called (Evening Star), is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Is misleading since Venus is a planet, is the second planet from our sun and is simple to see from the distance; is the closet planet to Earth in t erms of density, size and occasionally in distance too.

On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet also, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to the sun. The Natonal Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's have the possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray, at thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at arounf 170 degrees Farenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea lovel on Earth. More importantly, researches cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.

Many researches are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to out knowledge of Venus, NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.

Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation, however Venus onse of the importants planets because it's like Earth where we live almost the people of the universe, we need to working and contribuate eith the NASA and take care of them.

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