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Helping other people is a good way to be close to a alot of people.

In this story, Luke Bomberger is a Seagoing Cowboy.

He learns that in the Seagoing Cowboys program made a big difference to him because he has been helping people and also having fun at the same time.

He is convensing people because he said that he was greatfull for such an amazing time to be a Seagoing Cowboy helping people and even getting to play games. I think that Luke is helping people to be a Seagoing Cowboy because the awareness stayed with him and many people who join can have the same feeling as Luke.

Being a Seagoing Cowboy can help anyone around the whole community.

Luke told his family about the Seagoing Cowboys and now that his family knows his family can go and tell other people about the program. In the seagoing Cowboys there are many things you can do sucha s sports and otheres. People and kids as they grow up they can plays sports and have fun while they work.

I think that being a Seagoing Cowboy is a good way of doing something and helping people at the same time. Being a Seagoing Cowboy must be hard.

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