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They say venus is worth studying because it is closest to earth at some points. Venus has far too extreme climate then any human can survive even more encounter. Venus as they call it is a evening star it is the brightest points of light in the night sky.

Many people refer venus as earth twin it is the closest plant to earth in size and density. They have been many shipps and crafts try to land on venus but many of them are unamed succesfull. they could land but not last more then a few hours. Venus is unsafe for humans because the surface can get up to 88 degrees fahrenheit we would burn alive we couldnt last more then a couple hours there even with extremem gear. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times stronger then what we deal with on earth.

In cunclusion Venus is not really a planet we can land on and begin earth civilazatoin. It is far to extreme for any human. It is to hot as it to dense. Although venus a plant nasa would like to study more and get more infromation about it Technology way advanced now but even then it is nearly impossible for spacecrafts to land and for humans to explore.

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