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Where would the world be if we had flying cars? you may ask yourself the pros and cons of these creations. But what if we had cars that drove themselves? would it be safer? how would they be manufactued? what will the future depend on?In 2013 BMW

announced the development of "Traffic Jam Assistan." This car can handel functions up to 25mph.

In the late 1950s, General Motors created a concept car that could run on special test track.The track was embedded with an eletrical cable that sent radio signals to a reciver on the front end of the car. In the 1980s, automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes.Within 10 years, those sensers had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.

"The psychogical aspect of automation are really a challenge," admits Dr.Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver." We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way." Some manufacuers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over--somthing not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way , the in-car system is acutally a safety feature.

In conclusion, driveless cars are much safer that car that have to have a driver .When you thing about the pros and cons you start to see that there are more pros that cons. Even though some states dont agree with the newer technology, in the future we will see these more often than most. So ask yourel again. What is the future going to depend on?

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