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Would you want your car to drive itself ? Cars have been around for decades. They've been advancing in technology for years. Everyone loves cars , well almost everyone. I personally don't think it would be a great idea to have driverless cars because Safety issues , expenses , and it would limit new drivers learning opportunity.

Firstly , there might be a few safety issues. Already the cars we have now that are "independently funtioning" need human assistance. In the text it states that " all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills , such as navigating through work zones and around accidents". So just right there tells me that there can be various situations where the driver may not be paying too close attention to the road because the car is supposed to " drive independently" and when the car can't handle the road ahead there could be a accident.

Secondly , expenses are way too much. Making a car already can cost a lot of money but now adding all these sensors and stuff will make them very expensive to own and to make. In the text it states that " Radar was a device on a hiltop that cost two hundred million dollars. It wasn't something you could buy at the Radio Shack. So just how driverless will cars be in the near future?". To me all that money could be put into something more proactive and providing.

Last but not least , limiting new driver's opportunity. Imagine if this was a new "trending" thing in 2025. Kids in that generation would have absolutely no desire to learn how to drive. Already in this 2016 generation we have kids that can't even read a wall clock because technology had caused them to lose the desire to actually learn. With kids not wanting to learn how to drive that's just going to be another life lesson thrown out the door. Me personally , I don't want to see that happen in the world.

In conclusion , this is a risky step to take in my opinion. Although, some people can argue that this would be a great idea for "public-transpot taxi system" and I agree but it just isn't worth the risk. So again I don't think this is a smart idea because safety issues, expenses , and limitations on new driver's experiance.

Score: 4