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The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents by saying Venus may have some life on the planet, " Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life." The author also stated that Venus is often reffered as Earth's twin. In terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. It's hard to actually identify if Earth and Venus are similar because no spacecraft has survived the landing for more than a few hours, but Venus does have some features that are familiar to Earth , as stated on paragraph 4,"The planet has a surface of rocky sediemnts and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and creators. Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.

The dangers of expolring Venus is true challenge for a few reasons. The temperatures are crazy hot on paragraph 3 it states, " The temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit." Which is why Venus is the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Not only that but the pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything a humans ecounter on Earth.

NASA will not give up they are working on other approaches to studying Venus. On paragraph 7 it states, " Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested n a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions." They are also looking into old technology called "mechanical computers" that was first invused in the 1800's, and were used in World War ll. Since our new technolgy doesnt last in harsh conditons they had to think of something else. Those are the dangers and problems we have to go through to learn more about Venus.

Score: 3