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I dont hinkmthat a classroom computer can tell that a student is mad, angry , fustrated etc . But stated in the apragraph the author said he belivees it do . And i say it doesnt becuase in the paragrph they staed that this computer was in labs also says that there working on it so it coudnt be in a classroom.

Also, They didnt have all the moods stated in the first pargraph they it cant see fustration but it did say anger. And not every computer is up to date with the one that shows this kind of things . Im postive there is not one in the school labs that i attend . Last but no least , they sated in the paragraph that even if u try to make a fake smile they will no by the muscle in your face i say you will need more than i school computer to do so.

In conclusion, technogly to do these things are not in schools more like labs or muesums or somwhere special for a

device like this and i will love to use it one day.

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