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This could be a big problem because humans can't always realie on the technology, because what if there comes to a point where the car doesn't alert the driver on time and the driver cause an accident. Than that would be the problem of the car and to the person who made it. Just if this keeps happening then this is a problem that the manufacture has to solve on how to make it actually work. Otherwise they could be in big problems. Another point could be the electric car goes off limts and gets pull over becaue the guy didn't know it was going that speed, because the driver is going to have confidence on the car and not himself.

This is a problem where humans can't control technology. There is a lot of bad things out there in technology where people can't figure out how to stop it. People build there own creation and not knowing how to stop it either. How are these makers are sure that the car will alert the driver on time. What if there car company that make

these electric cars doesn't work and keeps causing accidents who is there to blame the driver or the electric car that didn't alert the driver in time. Its diffently going to be the electirc car and also going to blame the person who sold the car and where it came from.

If now days people reliae on technology and find everything from technology and not finding it themselves; than that means that the driver in that car is going to feel soo comfortable riding because he is going to realiae more on the car and not pay attention on the road. The driver is going to feel like the car is going to do everything for him. Thats the problem we have with humanity is that we realiea on the technology and not on ourselves. That why i think that having these cars could cause trouble and could also lead to injuries or even death.

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