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Cars of the Future

Driverless cars are really the thing of the future, alot of people already dont like to drive. Say it has been long day of work or even a hard day of practice. With driverless cars some of your stress can be releived, just put in your destination and boom your car starts to drive itself to the location. The cars use google maps to navigate around, the cars are also extremley smart knowing when to stop and go at lights, knowing to stop at a stop signs etc. I bet your interested in one of these cars right now and who wouldn't be its an awesome idea that even im looking forward to.

Sergey Brin Google cofunder has been working on this driverless cars from about 2009, these cars have been tested to drive over a half million miles without a crash. Although these cars still need a driver, it is mostly for when pulling in or out of parking spots or driveways. But with more work with the cars this problem much like driver needed cars could be a thing of the past. These cars also include sensors which can break for you, tell when objects such as other cars are coming up.

I believe these cars are amazing in pretty much every way, One of the main problem people are worried about is what if you end up in a crash. Who is to blame the company of the car or me. This is something I fell can be fixed easily, with the sensors on the car they basically work like cameras so the people in the accident would first see if either of the people where in control of there vehicle, if one was and it turns out it was there falt the person would be charged the bill, but if neither where in control the company would have to take care of bills, insurance, etc. In the conclussion of the argument even if your not interested in the car you could just take control of yourself if you think you need to.

At the end of the day I beleive that driverless cars are a wonderfull idea, and that everyone should have one. These cars could stop tons of accidents from adults not paying attetion to kids beeing on the cellular devices, just in general bring accident rates down by hundreds. Maybe you dont trust your child enough to drive so you get them a google car and not really have to worry about the saftey of your child at all. So once again I really enjoy the idea of these cars, They could probably one day save someones life, so why wouldnt you want one.

Score: 3