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I really think you should partcipate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. It can be really fun to do. It is really fun for all of the seagoing cowboys because you can take care of the animals while everybody is gone.

In the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation or UNRRA hired "Seagoing Cowboys"to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke and Don signed up, you can sign up, too. Also in the story, it says that you can only be 18 or older to sign up to be a Seagoing Cowboy. Also in the story, it says that being a Seagoing Cowboy was more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. Luke had a good time and he had an adventure and he saw new things. Why you can't have an adventure just like Luke.

Anybody can have an adventure and get to see new things, I'm just trying get to let you see things that you never seen before. Working as a Seagoing Cowboy is really fun. I really hope that you sign up so you can take care of the animals that are probably extinct. I wish I was there to sign up,but I hope you sign up. Who knows, you'll probably be on T.V.

Score: 2