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In the article Makeing Mona lisa Smile they claim that she is mostly happy in the painting and that they can tell this by computor software.

I dont think that this is very vauluable for students because some people may feel that they are happy but the computor may say they are diffrent because of the way they controll there emotions.

The computor is supposed to read your mood by scanning facial exspressions but some people have difrent ways of reactiong to the way they feel.

What if the computor had read your mostly hapy but inside you feel that you are angry, sad, or confused. I do think in some places there could be something like this but do not see the use for it in a school.

Most of the time young kids and teenagers will say how they feel and explain why without asking them.

I dont see the need to hae a achine in school for students to be able to tell what there own or someone elses mood is.

The computor could be easly tricked into thinking that your mood is the opposite of what you are actually feeling.

If the computor goes by facial movement then someone could easly smile at the computor and make it think that they are happy. The computor may work in some situations but is thee proof that people cant make a diffrent face to maybe trick or comfuse the computor

into beliving that you are feleng something that you are not.

Although I dont find this computor helpfull in a persons life I do find it interesting.

The computor is obviously very persice when the picture or human displayed to it is actually makeng the emotion they feel or maybe not making any faces at all. But theres nothing saying that it wont read correctly if someone makes a didfrent face or acts a diffrent way thatn they usally do.

I feel that the computor will be pretty neat and may be usefull in some situations. As the technology progresses in the mzking of the computors I think things could possibly change and make to where you cant trick the computor as easly and the computor is always acurate. At this stage I feel it could be very usefull in some situations in the future.

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