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Look into the midnight sky, tell me what you see. You might see stars, and perhaps an espesially bright star. This star is Venus, a close planet to ours and one that could have had life on it at one time.In The Challenge of Exploring Venus, the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author makes this statment well, and convicingly. For he presents numorus facts on why it should be explored. He also shows the inpending dangers that go along with this exploration.

The autor states in paragraph 2 "Humans have sent numorus space craft to land on this cloud draped world. Each previous mission has been unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft has lasted for more than a few hours." This here shows that the exploration is risky, but why do we need to explore mars you ask. well heres why, "Astronomers are fasinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like panet in our soler system". With venus having this potental history of possibly containing life, it is very worthy of being explored, for there are many things that could be found on it.

in conclusion, venus is a worthy pursute dispite its inpending dangers, maybe one day we will be able to study venus without the fear of its harmful conditions.

Score: 2