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Cars are becoming a big issue in the world due to the pullution weakning the shield around the earth, Not to long ago Florida had a increase of 1-3 of sun light Permanetly, due to pullution weakning the surface it was the first increase i've encountered during my life on the planet, also to adress how most countries and states are now making days and events, for example how Vanban's family's have a result of 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars and also 57% sold a car to move their, one person spoke nad said 'When i had a car i was always tense, im much happier this way said hheidun walter, a media trainer and mother of 2. Vauban Completed in 2006 is exmaple of  a growing trend in Europe the united states and elsewhere to separate suburban life from auto use as a component of a movement called 'Smart planning. All of our development since World War II has been center on cars, and that was the downside of the pollution in the sky today, when more cars are made, then even more pullution will be traveling the sky today and breaking our sun shield some companies are really cracking down on this to help the earth.

Paris is even enforced a aprtial driving ban to clear the air of global city,  with even number or even odd number license pltes were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine 31$ , almost over 4.000 drivers were fined according to reuter's, Twnety seven people had their cars impounded fo their reaction to the fine,congestion was down 60%  in the capital of france, after five-days of intensifying smog rivaled beijing,china which is known as one of the most pulluted city due to its population of people their, cold nights and warm days cause the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions, disel fuel was blame since france has a tax policy that favors disel over gasoline, (Gasoline runs out faster than disel). Diesel make up 67% of vehicles in france compared to a 53 Percent average of disel engines in  rest of western Europe acorrding to reuters.

It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and tais permitted for the day without cars in this capital city of 5-7Million. the goal is to promote alterative transportation to help the pollution in the sky to cool down or go down a bit, the turnout was  a large despite gray clouds dumped occasional rain showers on Bogota,but the rain hasn't stopped people from participateing, it's a good opportunity to take away stress and  lower air pollution said businessman, the day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in bogota in the mid-1990s it has seen the contruction of 118 miles of bicycle. parks and sports centers has also have bloomed throughout the city  uneven pitted sidewalks ahve been replaced by broad smooth sidewalks, rush-hour-restruction have been dramatically cut traffic and new restarunts  and upscales,

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