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The article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" Describes the wonders of a new technology known as the Facial Action Coding System, which enables the computer to identify human emotions. This article brings to light the idea that this could be useful in a classroom environment to make computers more effective in teaching lessons as it could recognize if the student is bored. This is a good idea, because not only will it keep students on task, it will also encourage students to pay more attention in the future.

The main reason this technology could prove useful to a classroom environment is, as the article states, the fact that the student's computer could notice if he/she is becoming bored or confused. This allows the computer to react accordingly to grab the students attention just like an effective teacher. Keeping the student focused on the computer makes the lesson more through and easier to learn.

Some may argue that the computer can misunderstand or even tricked by false expression. However, it says in the article that by studying how the muscles act when revealing a normal vs a fake smile, the computer easily identified what a fake smile was. This renders the use of fake expressions obsolete, allowing the computer to affectively teach and recognize student needs.

In conclusion, this technology is may not only keep students, it will encourage student to devote more time to their education. The tech will not only recognize genuine sign of boredom and confusion, it will also identify whether it is being decieved or not.

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