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whould you send someone to explore venus with the technology that we haave

right now? the author of the article

the challege of exploring venus made some

very import points about

why

we sohould explore venus.

the author believes that even. that is worthy exploring venus using old tecnology and new tecnology for example. the mechamical computers, NASA's idea of the ships and the new materials that were being testes

firt of all the author explains the old technology that is used ti be use in

during

the 1940 word war two by making

calculations using

gears and

levers. no electronic were needed for this computer. the only problem would be that the the computers are very delicated when is put to extreme conditions.

secondly the author mentions an idea that NASA

has that he explains could

to very useful for exploring venus.

the author

explains that venus has a very high temperature but the vehicle would hover

30 miles over

from

the surface of venus where is would

avoid bad graounds. this idea that

NASA

has come up

to its

a good way

for humans

to vivit

and explore venus.

lastly the author believes

thea venus

is not

to

diferent from earth

and

in the right conditions

humans could

be living is venus. the author

mentions how scients

believed

that venus.

is the

is the planet

with the more like earth

and how

it could posibly at one

time had

oceans

research on venus

could also explain

that venus

at one

point

could

have and

maintain

life forms this is why it would be wortly for humanns

to explore venus because it could posibly be the nex

earth

in conclutions

the author

brought many points of why

we sould keed on good

undertanding about the exploration

venus.

Score: 2