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The use of the new "facial Action Coding System" is a brilliant idea: also a great use for people who help others. This could do so much good and could also be an advantage for teachers who can't keep their students awake for lessons. Advertisement could be better too; they'll know what we're feeling by our expression.

The "Facial Action Coding System" could tell how you're feeling by reading your facial expressions. This could help in so many ways; as in to help others, to keep students awake in class also for good advertisement. According to the article " Dr. Haung new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code". This could be a good use in society; to know how people actually feel about certain ideas. According to the article " You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy worried, etc." It could be easier to help close ones, even friends to know how they feel. Therapists job would be easier to perscribe meds to people who actually need it. According to the article " Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion)." This could change so many things for the better.

A computer that could read facial expressions could help students do their work and keep them awake when its hard to pay attention to the lesson. According to the article "Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. 'A

classroom computer could recognized when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts." The long dreding classes won't be as long and unbelievably hard to stay awake, if the computer notices when you're falling asleep it'll do something to keep you awake. It also will send a notification to your teacher; if speaking in class is too terrifying. According to the article " The same technology can make computer-animated faces more experssive- for video games or video surgery. 'Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.' notes Dr. Huang. 'So computers need to understand that, too.'." Video games will be more exciting and enjoyable if it has amazing graphics with the facial reader.

The "Facial Action Coding System" has a very good use in this society with the new iphones/Andriod, and also the new consoles. It could help so many people and could do amazing projects. It's a wonder machine and should be published and used.

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