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The use of the new computer software created by Prof. Thomas Huang, can read you're emotional expressions of students in a classroom would be valuable. The new computer software could be a big help in schools. It could be able to tell how a student is feeling. It could help solve issues- drama- at schools and work places that nobody wants.

In paragraph three, the author tells us how it works. It reads all 44 major muslces of the face. But all 44 of those muscles need to move in the model for it to calculate the persons face. The iPhone X

reminds me of the new computer software. The new computer software is kinda like the iPhone X. The iPhone X has new freatures that include facial reconition and new talking emojis. The new talking emojis move the way the 44 face muscles do. What does the new computer software created by Prof. Thomas Huang do? It reads all 44 face muscles on the human body same thing as the iPhone X.

The computer software can also help with how students feel. If in a situation where they don't know what they are feeling, they could go to the computer and figure it out. I definitely believe it would work. Sometimes kids need to figure themselves out and hope for the best.

Score: 2