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Accoring to the pargraph they are talking about Venus how danger and how hot the surface is and Venus also have the hotted surface even thought Mercury is closer to the sun.

The author should support his idea like saying if we build a spacecraft that can survial for a month in Venus surface we might get to study more and by only sending a machine not sending a human

Venus is the 1 hotted planet even thought mercury is closer to sun and Venus and Mar is Earth neighbro this two planet are the closet planet to Eath in our solar system

Venus is the first hottest planet in our solar system, long ago Venus use to have an a Ocean like our planet Earth, Venus is almost like Earth , it have some feature and NASA also think vehicke hovering 30 or miles above the roiling venusian landscape , like our jet airplane travel ar a higher altitude to fly over many stoem, and a vehicle hovering over Venus would aviod the unfriendly ground conditions by staying uo and out of their way. a t the 13+ miles above the surface the temperature will still be at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit but the air pressure will be close to the sea of level on Earth and Nasa also saying sending human into Venus.

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