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In the challenge of exploring venus the author they say that NASA found old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during world war 2. Other thing is that the National Aeronautics and space Administration has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus the NASA's possible soution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. But imagine a blimp like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. Also just as jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms. It also says that if our sisters planet is so inhospitable, why scientists even discussing futher visits to its surface astonomers are fasienated by venus because it may well once have been the most eartrh like planet in our solar system. Also a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. even more challenging are far the clouds of highly corrosive acid in venus's atmosphere. But also on our planet's surface there are temperatures averge over 800 degrees fahrenheit.

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