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Venus is a grat place, we should explore it becosue we need to see othere plants and if they are living things on them. How can we make our lifes better. There is a lot of things we can do we can test the ground for acide and othere thing and see if we can live on it. Earth is not going to keep going like it is now, becosue of poloshtion and othere facter's. Venus thick atmospher of alomst 97 percent carben dioxide, is something that can be use by our people to do things.

I belive that going there can help us know more about life if there is othere live can we use them to help us, can they solve our proplems. The average is over 800f so it will be hard to get there but we can do it we can hlod tother and do it. We can use the sun to make power for earth and so we need to go there.

We need more money and resores but we are not working to it, nasa need to fund a porgiact to get there. The planet id rocky and sediment and includes familiar features so we need to use evrething they have to our better, we are not doing that at the moment we need to get there firest.

NASA is trying to send people there so they need people's help and money to get us there and back, people need to know about how it is helpfull to us to get there we have coles of faters to them so we can also get some of there things to make eath better then it is now.

Earth is great but we dont have evrething we need there is alot of things we are missing, and we need them we need heat. We have it but not as much as we need.

They also have storems that are realy big and can kill any of our people and our things, so we need to find a way around that. We both dont have the same air they dont have oxegen and that's what we need to live, venus does not have the most imporent thing needed for us to live as hummesn.

At the end we need more money more man power more people welling to do this and mak us better to get this done. We all need to work togeth as on people, and get this done, with all the heat they have and all the power we can get from that who knows what we can do on earth becouse of it and all thegreat thing we can do when er get there.

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