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So i don't belive you should have machine in a classroomlike this because i think its unnessisary to have something that tells you about all your students instead of using it on them every day in class to find out what each other are feeling. If you are a teacher you should get to know your students better to know how they feel and what might be wrong with them.

This machine should not be aloud in schools because then if a student was upset about something it might get around and all kinds of kids might come up to them and ask what is wrong with you. I think if you want to know how someone is truly feeling you should ask them yourself and then talk about it. Instead of walking up to them why are you sad, unhappy, and loney. That would just be weird and you should talk to more class mates in schools and learn more about them to find out how they are about every day and what moods they are i most of the time.

This should show that teachers should get to know their student more and find out how they feel and what might be cosing the problem and if they don't want to talk about it then you should leave them alone. If you are wanting to know how a student is feeling you should not use a machine to find out hwo they are feeling you should ask them instead of walking us to them why are you mad.

So I say that there should not be any machine in the school that tells people on how other are feeling and what is wrong with them. It shows no human contact you just look at someone through a machine and it tells you on how they are feeling. You should get to know your students better.

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