Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The Challenge of Exploring Venus is an article written by an author. The author uses a lot of evidence to support his claim that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.For example the author says that NASA should invent a "blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape"

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is a genius suggestion. This could work because the vehicle would not be touching the hot surface but just hovering above enough for us to even get a glimpse of what the inside of Venus looks like.

The author also states that NASA is thinking of using mecahnical computers. These computers existed in the 1800's and were important in World War II" The new computers would just explode because of the heat and pressure Venus produces. The mecahnical computers would work very well.

The writer did an awesome job of supporting the idea that "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents." I hope these things are invented or allowed so that astronounts can visit Venus and the world can finally know what exists deep inside Venus.

Score: 2