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My position on driverless cars is I think that the idea of getting into a car and your not controlling it is very dangerous. What if the car brake and you cant control it.?And I feel that someone can get heart or even worser Die from a driverless car.

In the article it says, The driverless car can steer, acclerate, and brake themselves. I feel that people should not trust these new cars cause the car can easily brake or you bump something and the car go out of control.

In 2013, BMW announced the development of ''Traffic Jam Assistant.''. And It says that it's a special touch sensor that make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. Now I like that idea that it's a button that you could push to keep the driver to control the wheel. I like that idea because if the driver fall asleep the wheel will keep control. I can honestly say the driverless car will be a very risky decision to choose. It's okay because the car can atleast steer for you if you need to answer a phone call or eat a snack.

In paragraph 8 in the article it says, Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? If the driver is sick or has a broken leg or something the car can go to the store or wherever the person want the car to go. But then again how is the car going to get the items or whatever the person needs its difficult. But I believe that the cars they have now are perfectly fine they dont't need to be making cars that will probally get us injured.

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