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Can technology really detect your facial expressions? Well according to the University of Illinois, the latest software from Prof. Thomas Huang of the institued for Advanced Science, can detect your facial expression. With this new software it can change our perspective on viewing our emotions.

With the knowledge of being able to know different expressions it will become much easier for learning envoirnments at schools. "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is beoming confused or bored," Dr. Huang predicts. The software can recognize the expression and can change the lesson to make it a little bit more interesting or understandable. The software can detect your characteristic movement of the facial mucles. Being able to read students expession will make everything easier for the teacher and for the students also.

The software will create a big impact on learning enviornments to create a better understanding of the students emotional expression.

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