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I think tecknology like this would most defintely help teachers understand whats going on with students. most students are good at hiding their true emotions they will come to school with a smile but really they are feeling depressed.

This tecknology would help teachers read their students better and be able to help with any issues. Why would this be good tecknology to have? It would be great because teachers then would be able to prevent fights allowing more students to be at school instead of suspended or expelled, Would make students open up more if teachers knew what kids were sad and which ones were happy.

I think this could be the answer to school bullying because the kids with the most anger are probably the blulliers and the kids who are felling sad or the ones who are felling fearful are the kids who are being bullied.

This tecknology would be very useful for schools, teachers, and students. with tecknology like this I dont see why every school could'nt be a safe happy enviornment where all kids feel safe and content, and even teachers would feel content cause they will understand how every student is feeling during that class.

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