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The author explanes how venus is most like earth and could potentaly help us. They tell us that venus may have once had life like earth and they could learn from it. They tell us that it is also the closest in size and closest compared to the rest of the planets. Venus may be able to help us some day we would just have to find a way to study it better. They may have an awnser.

Venus is they Earths sister planet compred to the ret of the planets, and no im not just saying that because it is blue. Venus may have had life once. Sientest are trying to find more and more ways to study this planet because we may be able to learn from it. This planet is the closest to us, for most of are orbit at least. Venus has always been an eye catcher because of how bright it is, this is were it gets is nickname the "Evening Star" but dont let that fool you it is still a planet.

There is one problem with are sister planet though. She is hot! The avrege temp ther is 800degrees or over. This has proven to be an isue because humans are not used to this kind of weather. Send robots you say, well we have tryrd that to but 800 is just the avrege. We have sent robots and probes and they will melt. When mettle gets that hot it will just melt away and then that is just a waist of money. Thats just if you can make it past the storm that strikes everything that makes it past the atmetheric clouds.We have found a solution, for now at least. Think of a blimp,now think of one for space. They want to take a "space-blimp" there and hover a long ways up. The higher you go the colder it is.

Venus is a place we may not get boots or wheals on the ground for a while. With the heat and the storm. For now we will have to setle with sky picturs. There will be a day somone figure out a way to get there. we may even go back in time to the onld ww ll computers, who knows. Some day somone will figure it out, its just a matter of time. Just look at everything we have done in the last hundred years.

Score: 3