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Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.

First studying Venus is very challenging because of the temperatures and the atmosphere. In paragraph 3 the author says " A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxided blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the cloud of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Veus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything hmans encounter on Earth;.." (Paragraph 3). This is important because is telling us how Venus conditions are far more extreme than anything humans can encounter.

Another important point that makes Venus hard to study is the weather. In paragraph 3 the author says "Beyong hig pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequesnt lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface" (Paragraph 3). This is important because Venus having earthquakes, volcanoes and frequent lightning strikes makes it very hard for someone to go there to study it.

Lastly studying Venus is challenging because researchers can't take any samples of Venus from a distance. In paragraph 6 the author says " Rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges." (Paragraph 6). This is important because not being able to take samples of rocks, gas or anything from Venus makes it very hard on scientists to find out forms of getting to Venus without having anyone in danger.

Finally, exploring Venus is challenging and dangerous.

Score: 3