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Driverless cars are coming. They might be reality in a few years maybe a few months. That is a scary thing to think about. Yes the cars provide help to drives, but they also have a few problems that take over the positive qualities.

The cars can be good. For example, in paragraph two, Goolges cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. That is amazing. A car can driven that long by driving itself. Another good thing is in paragraph one, how the cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. if the cars use half the fuel of today's taxis, then their is more money to pave new roads, make better buildings, or develop a plan that helps every one in need.

This idea of driverless cars has been around for a while. Google only made that idea a reality just a few years ago. There has been inventions that made the driverless cars closer to a reality. "In the 1980s, automakers used speed sensors at the wheel in the creation of antilock brack," (paragraph 5). Ten years later, those sensors had develop into a more advanced, which aloud it to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids and rollovers. If those sensors are in the driverless car that google made, then they might save some lives.

Even though, the driverless cars have good qualities, it haves some okay ones. For example, in paragraph seven, how it takls about the special touch sensors make suyre the drive keeps hold of the wheel. What if the drive is asleep becuase they passout or just tired and their hands fall out the wheel, how will the sensors work then? What if the car is approaching a work zone or it is around any accident and the drive is passed out, will the car brake itself or will is just keep driving. lets save the car brakes itself to fast and the driver bangs his or her head against the wheel, the drive could get a concussion, or even worst, die. If the car keeps driving, it could drive to fast and rare-end that car infront of it or hint one of the workers. Then who would take the blame the drive who passed out or the driverless car. The driver did not know he or she was going to pass out.

Driverless cars are coming. Yes, the cars have good qualities that mkae then safe. for example, the seats vibrate when the car is in danger of backing into an object (paragraph seven). Although, like everything else in this world, it has a few mistakes and question that have been answered yet. I am not for driverless cars becasue of the question that still have no answers. I am the type of person who thinks of the "what ifs", mostly the bad what ifs instead of the good. So, I can make up questions that have not been thought of nor answered. Driverless car are coming. We already have the technology for them, someone, like Google, just has to put the technology and the idea together to make the product.

Score: 4