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This technology can be helpful and valuable to students in the classroom. Students can use this technology to learn new things about human emtion and how different muscle groups help with aiding showing the emotion.

In the passage Dr. Huang explains how Da Vinci studied human anatomy to precisely paint the facial expression of the Mona Lisa to to show what emotion she is displaying or feeling. Huang also explains if you physically make a certain face to display a certain emotion that you will actually feel that emotion. Technology like this can also help make more detailed and expressive face for either video games or for video surgeries.

This form of technology has countless uses in either the classroom and even more types of jobs and sciences. Being able to teach hman emtion in a hands on way will help with making people and students understand what basic human emtions and how certain muscle groups help in with physically showing these these emtions and how they can be better understood.

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