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My essay on the article "Driverless Cars Are Coming" is against the development of driverless cars because they are not safe.

Car development has come along greatly, but driverless cars are not the way to go. If someone's driverless car breaks down it will be extremely expensive to replace the parts necessary for function. Driverless cars also would take jobs away from working citizens such as; Cab drivers, Pizza delivery specialists, Postal workers, and Truck drivers. IN THE ARTICLE, it says "GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.", but if the vehicle's system malfunctions the commands necessary to announce to the driver to manually operate wouldn't function properly.

Driverless cars can be very dangerous. When one is using a driverless car, he/she is putting his/her and their passenger's lives in hazardous conditions. No one should take that risk.

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