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As a sixteen year old girl in the year 2016, being able to drive around is pretty important. Whether it's to go to a friends house, drive around with friends, pick up things for the house, or even driving to and from school. A driverless automobile would make things even better.

Google has had cars that could drive independently since 2009 and have their cars have driven more than hald a million miles without a crash! Although the Google driverless cars aren't truly driverless, the Google's modified Toyota Prius does have position estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the rood, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, an inertial motion sensor, and spinning sensor on the rood of the car. That speaks a lot in safety terms, which is pretty important in America. Being able to ride around in an almost driverless car would be grand because, it would almost solve the texting and driving issue, which is common among most driving teens in the 21st century. The seats are able to vibrate whenever they need to get the drivers attention and needs assitance getting out a tricky situation that the car could not handle on it's on such as roadblock or traffic jams.

Before 2000, there was no way that this technology could have been possible although the founder of the Google Car project had the idea. The technology before 2000 just was not as developed as it was now. In 2013, BMW announced the development of "Traffic Jam Assistant." This makes the car capable of driving function at speeds of 25 mph, but the special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps ahold of the wheel. Even though the car can drive on autopiolet, the driver should still be ready to take over at any time. The Google car has an alert that simply announce when the driver should be prepared to take over. The other options of alert are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads up displays. None of the Google Driverless automobiles are complete driverless yet, but this is a start since the driverless cars can steer, accelerate, and brake by themselves but notify the driver when human interaction is needed.

Most of the driving laws focus on keeps driver, passengers, and pedestrians safe. At the current moment, traffic laws state that safety for all is best achieved by human drivers behind the wheel. This is why the driverless cars are not legal in most states. California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia are the only states who have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous automobiles. This is a good start, but even if the traffic laws do indeed change, new laws will be needed in order to keep people safe in case of accidents. The big issue would be finding out who was the cause of the accident. The driver, or the car?

Telsa has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopolite 90 percent of the time and Mercedes, Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to follow through with driverless cars as well by the year 2020. This is a great start for driverless cars that are not complete driverless. From the vibrating seats to cameras to watch the drivers, Google is soon on it's way to greatness as the continue to improve their driverless automobiles.

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