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As the author explains the idea of studying the planet Venus and how dangerous it can be because of the hot temperature, the author supports this idea of traveling to Venus and observing it by providing ways to study Venus safely. Dangerous as it sounds, according from the article, stating that it can melt almost anything due to the hot temperatures in Venus and the poisonous gas that covers the atmosphere, the author still believes that travleing to Venus is a good idea because it can enhance our future travels and overcome obsticles.

According from the article, Venus is a very hot planet that is around 800 degrees Fahrenheit on average, meaning that no spacecraft can survive the landing at all. However, the author believes that spacecrafts should hover around Venus to obeserve the thick atmospehere and temperature. On paragraph 5, the author states, "Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way." This supports the idea of studying Venus, as it shows that flying or hovering Venus wouldn't be a bad idea.

In conclusion, Venus is a very hot planet and has a very poisionus atmosphere. Therefore, traveling to Venus and observing it would be a very difficult task to do. However, the author has provided ways and evidence on how to study the planet Venus safely. Suggesting that hovering over the planet would be a great idea to do, humans can finally see and observe the planet Venus up close. In addition, the author believes that this can help our future travels and the dangers should not prevent us from going any futher more.

Score: 2