Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The auther well supports his idea by giving us detals and information like the Venus is called the " Evening Star" in the story is says that the venus is one of the brightest point of the light in the night sky" also it says" that the different speeds means that sometimes we are closer to mars then other venus"

earths pervious mission was unmanned maybe this explanes the issues in more than three decades,

A think armospjere on the planets surface 97 percent carbon dioxdie blankests venus. the auther it letting us know the reader that the challenge of exploring venus it that their are many dangers that they dont know but that they shouldnt worry about them. in the story is says " our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doudts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation"

The auther tells us that NASA is working on other approaches to study venus for expamle it says " some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the choas of venus" . back then in the 1800s those devices were first envisioned and played an important role in the 1940s during the world war one.

After reading this passage i think that the auther did good in evaluating his idea of venus he he gave us details, information, and what the devices were used in the past and that it was used in the world war one venus it that their are many dangers.

Score: 2