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I think I need to get people to join because people needs our help and they need food and i need to help the people becauseIi travled all the way from new orleans and

their not that much people and they might die and they are injured animals need to be saved and they need to be warm and take care of and people say no about helping I will try to talk to them about helping and all of that

it is very sad that the people has to deal with that war and thats why i need helper thank you for your time. but one more thing please if anyone just join today I will be so glad those people dont need to be in the war thank you. I got to see venice and greece and germany and all of that it was awful seeing the ruins in the countrys.

I helped people like giving them food and shelter building them homes and giving tthem water food and shelter and I help the animals I took care of them and one more thing i was helping a animal and the ship shook very hard and a piece of metal jabed me in the ribs so I could not work for a couple of weeks.

Score: 2