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HEY YOU!, you should join the seagoing cowboy program because. If you would like travelling mabe you hould go with here is why. Also if you like contestes and roff stuff you should go with. Also if you like horuses you should go with here is why.

You can see excavated castle in Crete and panama canal in on the way to china and acropolis in Greece. Also explorer Europe and China , gondola ride Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. Also fed, gron, muck stales that the horses were in.

You can find fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. You can play baseball, volleyball games in empty holds where animals were. Also table-tennis tournamennts, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games to pass the time.

You can also help people because the war put them to rounes and the animals will help them live. Also saves people from dieing and starving. You need to be strong and kind and helpful. That is why you sould be a seagoing cowboy.

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