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In the article "The Challenge Of Exploring Venus" the author

has explained and backed up his idea of studying Venus excellently. The author used clear facts of the harms and conditions that Venus has and why we can't just enter without protection. While the author was stating these facts he also was coming up with ideas of what NASA and other scientist are doing to better the chances of human beings going there and studying the Earth-like planet. The author continuously kept stating ideas of what human being could do to study Venus and not once said that we couldnt. The author was also very confident about his idea everytime he tought of one idea another one was on deck, just in-case one plan didnt seem so possible to humans.

In Paragraphs 1-5 the author is constantly stating facts of what Venus

is now and the harms and conditions that it has. Paragraph 3 it stated mostly why humans can't be there to live or just to study. Paragraph 3 stated for example,''on the planets surface, temperature average pver 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what we experience on our planet.'' It also stated, that ''these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.'' He/She is baisically stating that the atmoshere and surface temp. is far more for a human to be there studying or living without ssome use of technology.

As the author states harms and conditions he/she also starts to

think of some ways us humans can build some technology of some sort to get us the information we need from the studyings of this planet. He/She started explaining an idea that NASA has compelled to try to get us over to the planet without being harmed. Paragraph 5 it stated,'' Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles abover the roiling venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.'' In that statement he/she explained that it would risky but survivable for humans.

As i stated in the first paragraph above the author started

using conclusions of how we were going to use the technology and what other idea NASA may come up with incase one plan went left. In paragraph 6 it stated, ''we only have a limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atomsphere.'' this is where the author starts using methods of how the mission will be preformed because of some road blocks we'll run into. Paragraph 7 it stated, ''NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in chamber simulating the chaos of Venus surface and have lasted three weeks in such conditions.''

The author has done a fantastic job wit backing up his idea with

details, facts, road blocks and the way the missons should go. He/She did an amazingly, confident article of how us humans could study venus, if one plan went left he/she stated other plans NASA and other scientis are coming up with in the studying of Venus. The details in this article would surely help scientist out with procedure of studying Venus. I think the author did a fantastic job with supporting his idea of studying Venus.

Score: 4