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This author really wants to explor venus despite all the dangers there are. I feel like the author did have his own opinion of still exploring Venus, but he makes the danger sound so huge but tells it to us like it is not a big deal, and also came up with the idea of using technology to find out more about Venus.

Although Venus is the most Earth-like planet in our solar system we have to understand more about it and the consequences and danger of going there. If for example the astronaut really did want to explore the place he would have to know the safety of how it's like over there first or else his family member might not see him back home and would never see his discoveries. I personally feel like they should of said we will learn more about the safety and build things to protect the people going there and exploring instead of saying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author did catch my attention when they said they were going to create a machine, and I strongly like that idea but afterwards he was saying the explorer still had to be around thirty-plus miles above the ground making me feel like it is still dangerous with or without the machine. Like in this quote, "Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades."

In conclusion that is why I think the author did not really support his ideas, but overall I liked how he came up with different ideas during his research of how we are going to achieve the idea of reaching to Venus.

Score: 2