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Driverless cars are on an uproar in discussion. There are pros and cons to these cars; pros being that in the text it says, "the cars use half the amount of fuel of today's taxis and buses in the world and that 2020 car companies plan to have these cars being able to drive on 90 percent autopilot".This shows that the cars would be safe. But what about the other 10 percent? That 10 percent are the cons of these cars. What if the technology fails and the driver is not aware or alert, that is a likely accident or injury bound to happen. But in my argument overall, I am for driverless cars.

With driverless cars, air polution percentage would drop a tremendous ammount. Also if technology in the ar weere to fail, then the driver should be aware of the situation and take over the wheel manuelly. and if an accident were to happen I feel as if the fault should be towards the owner of the vehicle. I say this because in the text it says, " Manufactuers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road". So this means that if the driver is not paying attention to the road then its automaticallly the owners fault.

Adding the feature seat vibrations and the announcing of when the driver needs to take over would be a good addition to let the driver be notified to take over manuelly. And, to ensure safety when I refer back to the text it says "special touch sensors make surethat the driver keeps hold of the wheel". This provides assurance that the driver should be aware of their surroundings. Also in the article it expresses how the driverless cars have driven millions of miles total without an accident.

sensors in the cars have been added to make sure that the driver andthe people around them can be safe as possible . The satelite on top of the car signals to show the surroundings. so in my conclusions the cars

Score: 3