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I agree with using technology to read sudents emotional expressions. It could prevent students from being bored in a class. If we had computers to tell us when were bored and upset it would make our mood change. It would probably change the way you act everyday. You would get tired of seeing you be in a updet mood all the time so you would want to change that. The computers would try giving you entertaining ads or funny ads. They would make it to make you not bored in class and not so tired. They are just trying to make your day a little bit easier. In the passage it said that it looks at the muscles you are using to see what mood you are in. They compared it to the Mona Lisa painting becuase she is barely smiling but looks kind of upset. She could have many moods.

I think it would be really valuable and useful. It would put kids in a better mood than they were. If the computer makes the day a little bit better why not do it. It cant harm anyone it's just trying to show that computers can help kids with bad attitutudes. They are making school computers do this so when kids get to school in an updet mood it can make there day better and they wont be upset all day.

In conclusion i think that the computers would be really useful. There would not be a lot of issues it should run smoothly. Kids are not going to like the idea because they will think that someone is spying on them when it is really just being used to see if your in a bad mood or not. I think they should add these to school computer s and see what kids think of them. Take a vote and see if kids like the idea or completely hate it but, i agree and think they should use them.

Score: 3