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In the pasage "Seagoing Cowboys." The article states that Luke said that "His friend

Don Reist invited him to go to europe in a cattel boat,Luke couldn't say no." He also said it was a opertunity of a laftime and that he couldn't pass it.Luke thought it was a really good opertunity so he took it and he was off to being a "Seagoing Cowboy" with his friend Don.They traveled great distances across the world.He traveled across the alantic more then any other person in the UNRRA because, he loved his job.

Also luke said that he got to help animals. Luke traveled around to china and a few other places to help them out because, a war had just endend.Luke was one the many people apart of "UNRRA" wich stands

for "United Nations Relief and Rehabilitaion. Luke loved his job he said

"besides helping people and geting to see europe and china was amazing.They took animals and people back so they could be safe and ok. They gave them medical treatment.

Luke really liked being a "Seagoing Cowboy" he is an insperation and he showed that helping people is in amazing thing to do. He also show that even being from a small town with enough heart and leadership you can achieve amazing goals.He also went across the alantic ocean a numerous amout of times.He did it the most out of all the "Seagoing Cowboys". He loved to help animals and people . At the end of the day he got the job done. Luke went on this huge adventure

all because he went with his friend on a cattle boat and he had an amazing adventure.

Score: 3