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he has to parttime jobs and he is on a ship going to another place to the bank and his jobs are bank and he works at q grocery store and he just graduationed last year and he is making alot he is on a ship right now with animals and we are playing games like tennis pingpong and baseball he is a cowboy he got saved by a brick and he had to go home because he has broking ribs when he hit the brick he broke his ribs his name was luke he was a hard worker he is still now but he arivved in greece when he was 18 to see his family and his dad lives in greece to but on the other side and it took him 4 hours to get there and 10 hours to get back because they stopped alot and then he went to go see his gmaw she live ine day away and it took them two days get back because they stayed the night it was not fun because they did not have breakfest and they had no tolits so we had to go to a storento go and get food because that place sucked there was dead mouse in there it was nasty i almost puked...

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