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Venus is a planet closes planet to earth. You can get insight on the Twin planet of Earth that does share most features as earth

and unsafe to go.

Getting insight on the twin planet According to the text,'' Studying for Venus, at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above from a ship orbiting safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most form of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.

Venus planet share some features like Earth. In the text it states,''

The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and ncludes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. At thirty-plus miles bove susurface,temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit but the air pressure would be close o sea level on earth. Venus can be the nearest option of a planatary visit. U can learn how hot it is in venus because its very close to the sun .

Learning about a planet that is high risk that gives you true insight on the planet next to us , where you can see in the sky

is an interesting exploration where its likely to be unsafe to visit.

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