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Do you think that there are emotion detectors or even others can feel your emotions by seeing and copying your emotions? There are multipus diffrent conclusions and multiple diffrent opinions. I'll give my personal opinion, and you can think about yours!

In my personal opinion is that, yes, you can use technology to create a emotion that you are feeling. You can also use someone elses emotion to tell how they are feeling. In the story (paragraph 9) states that a drama coach, makes his actors try all kinds of diffrent emotions to use on stage, so that others believe their emotions are true. In paragraph 1-3, they aurthor explains that there are all kinds of different schools that are using machinery to come up eith diffrent emotions.

The universities tell us that they have a 3-D computer that can detect the emotion that you are feeling. The computer detects all your facial muscles and they must move exactly like them.

That is my opinion of if others or machiens can detect your emotions. I do believe that they can do that. I also believe that they can make others feel the same way.

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