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Future Cars with Advantage

Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore? So of course, the future cars going to be way more better than the cars today. The cars that Sergey Brin will makes would use half of the fuel of today's taxis and will be far more flexibility than a bus. Even though it's too expensive it's worth it.

How much smarter can the cars be? It have postion-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a video camera near the rearview mirror, four atomotive radar sensors, A GPS receriver, and inertial motion sensor. But the most important one out of all that is the spinning senor on the roof. It's safe and fun. People can use video camera when they on a trip, use GPS when they lost or needed to go somewhere that they don't know. This is what we call good life.

Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Because it more fun and safer, and safety is a big concern. Most driving law focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. " Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own." No worry about safety anymore.

Future's cars have way more advantage than the cars now by not needed as much as need today, flexibility than a bus, having a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror. It's also provides more safety which is big concern. Less accident, fun, and GPS, what do we need more?

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