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Venus, also called the Evening Star is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. This nickname is

misleading since Venus is actually a planet. Venus is the second planet from our sun and the hottest planet in our solar system. Often referrd to as Earth's twin, Vinus is closest to Earth in term of density and size, but it's a dengrouse and challenging planet. Venus is very dangerous.

Venus is very dangerous. Why? Almsot 90% carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atomsphere, and the average temperature is over 800 degree Fahrenheit. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though is not the closest to our sun. The atmosoheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Also Venus has weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequesnt lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.

Venus is a very dengerous place to go to. It's the hottest planet on our solar systeam. It has volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequesnt lighting strike. But why we wanna go there? Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth like planet. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largly with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. It may not be easy conditions, but survivable for humans if we found a way to land on.

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