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If you ask me you've got to be out of your right mind if you let a car drive you . You never know what could happen while your letting this car take control . Very resently there have been multiple accidents occurring where a human has gone to sleep on the road while there '' smart car '' was in control and that was not very smart if you ask me .

First of all ,

I would never put my trust into a car all kinds of malfunctions could occur . In paragraph 9 it states in most states it is iilegal even to test computerdriven cars . Also as stated in paragraph 9 '' If the technology fails and someone is injured , who is at fault - the driver ot the manufacture . '' That statement there should not even have to be brung up . There's a red flag already .

Unless , I know that smart cars are 100 % safe , there aren't any red flags , and it has been tested and proved to be safe you will never catch me inside of one . Just think about it , lets say you and your family go on a trip that is a 24 hour long drive and you decide instead of going to a rest stop or getting a hotel you'll just take a nap inside of the car and let the smart car take control . And as you come upon roadwork the car can't read the road signs ; that would be an accident right there . This car isn't all that smart .

I feel as if no one should be allowed to drive a smart car just yet especially since there are problems still occurring . As I've already stated very resently there have been multiple accidents occurring where a human has gone to sleep on the road while allowing a car to take control . And guess what occurred ? ACCIDENTS . Do to the fact this car does not take on much of the duties humans are able to take on .

As stated in paragraph 10 '' Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved .'' For now in my opinion these smart cars are not safe enough to drive ; I give it about 4 -5 years then maybe automakers will have it all figured out . But until then I am ANTI - SMART CAR .

Score: 3