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I think the driverless car is a good idea and I would approve if someone where to ask me.

I think that having a driverless cars would be good idea for people whose job requires a car to get them from place to place. For example in the first paragragh it states "The cars he forsees would use half of the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world." That tells you that those taxi and bus rides would be almost safer and less fuel costing.

Driverless cars are safer than actual cars with humans driving them. Because there are over a hundred wrecks a day, and with the help of the driverless car that number can go down. If the number of crashes go down with some driverless cars, then they can sell them to people who wants them and make the roads safer for everyone. In paragragh two it states that "Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars has driven more than half a million miles without a crash."That alone tells you that the cars drive better without the full control of the human.

These cars can change the world that we live in today. Because instead of hit and runs the cars would actually stay there if there is a wreck. You wouldn't have to worry about someone being hit by a car, because the car drives by itself. There would be no more people falling asleep behind the wheel and getting into a wreck. Because the car can sence when it's about to wreck and stop itself.

"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver."

Score: 3