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Reading faces is something very weird that we have discoverd over time and has changed a lot on how you could approach someone or even look at paintings different now. We can also take this very far with all this new technology that we have and the Facial Action Coding Sytstem or (FACS) we will be able to read paintings and facial expressions so much better.

Professor Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdamn with Dr. Huang and his colleague are high experts for computers and trying to find a better way to communicate through facial expressions. This will be very valuable to people in the future such as people that are deaf or have a little bit of not being able to hear.

Reading expressions is how a lot of people tell if somone is angry sad or happy. Reading expressions can help us in a lot of situatiuons and if we can take it to new levels such as looking at paintings or pictures in museums we will be able to go even further after the date that we will collect. Yes reading expressions is valuable to us and this because the more data we have the more farther we can go.

The best way that we have started this is by just everyday facial expressions. The reason people use that and why it is valuable is because the more people use facial expressios more data we will gather to make more epxressions.

So through all of this facial expressions on how far we have come or just using it in everyday life it can either make your first impression or it could help you in a sticky situation. With all the data we have collected and how much we keep collecting from Dr.Huang and his calluege we will take this to bigger heights and be able to read peoples expressions so much more and that's why this is valuable to us a person but as a society.

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