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I'm against the value of using this technology to read the emotional expressions on students becuse by being able to detect exactly how other peole are feeling even when they are trying to hide thier emotions. That new technology for that software would be wasted the people in this world don't care about how they fell.Like last year i read science found out why people get mad for the littiest and the dumest

thing in the world it becuse peolpe got no real probles to be mad about

to me it look like people get dumer every year. Becuse

how

people be do the dumest thing by just wanting people to look what they are doing then

they do the same so back to the technology that make you see emotions

it sound like good idea and people well see it on the news but

the nology would be still be wasted people will start to care but later on no wouldn't care like all ways all so becuse of that you would loose money and time.So all that work will be for nothing.

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