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I think that the development should happen because it can be easier to drive. Also i think it can prevent less accidents and save lives. For example, sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individial wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could ever manage alone.

Also, the development should happen because it can be very hepful. For example, In 2013, BMW announced the development of "Traffic Jam Assistant". The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless.

My last reason to have the development is sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their on. Also antilock brakes and driver assistance still seem a long way from the dream of calling a driverless cab to take us take us wherever we desire.

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