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This Facial Action Coding System would be a great things to school to have. Imagine this you are sitting in class on your computer and you start to doze off, what does the program do? It reads your face and realizes that you are dozing off, so it makes your lesson much more fun by including more hands on activites or throwing in a joke to do with your lesson or an educational game.

If schools actually used this people would love it. We wouldn't have to use certain programs like IXL, Aleks, and, Kahn academy. No one likes those programs besides the teachers because then they dont have to do as much work, now dont get me wrong here im not calling all teachers lazy but some of them actually are.

This is why the Facial Action Coding System would be great for all ages not just highschool level or middle schoolers. Everyone would enjoy this. I think im going to do a research project over this and maybe I could change some peoples minds about it. Everyone loves fun every once in a while, it dosent have to be all the time either.

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