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From Luke's piont of view covincing others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.

There are three reasons why you and others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. One of them is taking care of animals, the other one is having unbelievable trips, the last one is the jobs you do and the free time.

The first one were going to talk about are taking care of the animals.

When you join the Seagoing Cowboys program you have to care the horses until they go to a different person.

Another supporting detail is about the cows, you need the cows to get the milk from or what are the others participates going to drink.

The last supporting detail is the mules that were shipped overseas.

Those were all the supporting details for the reason about taking care of animals.

The other reason that were going to support is the unbelievable trips they travel by.

The first supporting detail is about the cattle-boat trips they get when they participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. Also, we get to tour an excavated castle in Crete.

they also marveled at the Panama Canal on there way to China. That is another reason why you and the others should participate.

The other reason you should join is you got to do many jobs so you won't be bored, and you also get free time.

One job you get is being a night watchman you get to check on all the animals every hour.

Another one is cleaning up. You have to feed and water the animals two or three times. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship, and also the stalls had to be cleaned.

Those were all the reasons and supporting details of why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.

There were three things to support my reasons in each paragraph.

That is why people should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.

Score: 3