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Venus is a crazy amazing planet! Striving to study Venus is a great pursuit. NASA has worked on equipment and electronics made with silicon, and have been tested to make sure it is safe. This Technology that NASA is working on will help the idea of studying Venus. Although this may seem risky, There's more projects that NASA has made in the past that could also help the study of Venus. The author supports this idea by explaining all the benefits and some positive, possible outcomes that venus may have for us. Human curiosity could lead us to many equal endeavors.

There is so much to be explored in Venus. In order to get there and discover new things NASA's equipent was tested in an enviornment similar to the one in Venus so that way it is safe. All of the equipment lasted three weeks in those conditions. Despite of the the little time NASA has to find new things on the planet, they would still have to go through difficult enviornments to get to there. For example, the temperature will be hot, around 170 degrees fahrenheit. It's a risky condition but survivable for humans.

Overall, studying venus can be a hard challenge. As time goes NASA will continue to build better electronics to help study the planet. In the future this technology will help the challenging task of studying Venus. The author beleives that it's worth achieving this task.

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