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I believe that driverless cars are the way of the futrure and we need development them for our community and making everyday lives a lot easier.

In the article "Driverless Cars Are Coming," it states many helpful ways that these cars can make driving a lot better safer and easier to use. Ways like having a human in control at all times and making sure they remain alert and focused; not to mention the advanced technology put into these cars, and time an effort they made to make these cars easy and safe to use as possible.

Driving cars are great, but I would be scared to drive a car I had no control of. What if the steering wheel shortened out and I had no control over the wheel? Thats not the case gladly! These Self driving cars are all not self driving. The cars all have been built for you to have full control over these cars brakes, steering wheel, and acceleration, so you have control whenever you need it.as stated in the article here, "They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skill..." this makes me a lot more at ease to know that ill be safe at all times and in control which make me more for the development for these cars.

I think the developing these cars will be such a great thing for this community. Parents could send kids to school in driverless cars when the technology is there as stated in the article "Long way from the dream of calling a driverless cab to take us wherever we disire, but Sebastian Thrun, Founder of Goodle Car project, believes that the technology has finally begun to catch up..." Think about how much time they will save without having to take their kids to school. Things like that are why we need to develop these driverless cars.

The endless possiblities that we could accomplish with these driverless cars. Think about how you could get in a car and go where you want to go with easy and no effort at all. How safe you would be knowing you have full control if you need it . Thats why we need to develope these cars not stopping their creation, they would be such a great advancement in every day lives.

Score: 4