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We all know that there many planet in our solar system. Also, we are living one of them and it's our home called Earth. And as we all know that's scientist want to learn about all the planet in out solar system. However, they still want to expand their curiousity about the planet in our solar system called Venus.

First up, Venus sometimes called the "Evening Star," is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it easier for even an amateur stargazer to see. But it's also misleading about Venus, it's actually the second planet in our solar system. But it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.

There are fact about Venus that's show how dangerous it can be. People already try to send spacecraft to Venus, but everysingle one of them can't survive the landing a few hours. After that there is no more spacecraft that's ever landing in more than three decades. It's also have a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Additional challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Then, on the Venus's suface an average temperature is over 800 degrees in Fahrenheit and the pressure of the atmospher pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. But in beyond of high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and eath present addtional of impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful eathquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its suface.

But scientist also believe that Venus was once like Earth now, it had it's own life . Today, Venus stil has some feature that are analogous to those on Eath. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and include the smae feature such as valleys, moutains, and creaters.

Venus also allow scientist to flow above the fray. The height of thirty-plus miles aobe the sufac, temperature would stil be really high about 170 degrees Fahrenheit and the pressure would be closes to that of sea level on Earth. But we can go on Venus but we can't collect any sample because we are too high for the suface from a distance. But scientist also looking back to the old technology called mechanical computer. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and play an very important role in the 1940s during World War II. But since mechanical part can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces than moderm technology.

An valuable reason that Venus is a place that worth a vist to explore is that the planet not only cecause of the insight to be gain from the planet itself, but also because of human curiosity like us will lead into many more knowledge in the future. And it should not be limited by dangerous and doubts but should be expanded to meet every inches of imagination and innovation of a human.

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