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Do you really think the new software the "facial action coding system" works? As crazy as it sounds, the answer is yes. By scanning your face you'll be able to see the muscles that move on your face to decide the emotion you have. Techology today is greatly advancing and advandcing fast.

It all begins when the3-D computer scans your face for all 44 muscles.That way they can tell you what mood your in. In the text it says " For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above the eye) rasies your eyebrows when your suprised". This quote connents to the claim becuase it gives you a visual on what muscles describes your emotion. Dr. Paul Eckman believes theres six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and saddness. Each characteristic has a movent of the facial muscles. Theres a differerce between expression and emotion. expression is just the face you make at the moment your doing somehting. emotion is how you feel. In the Text it says " Its all about those muscle action units. The computers can even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. In the real smile, the Zygomatic major( muscles that begin at your cheek bone) lifts in the corner of your mouth". This relates because it explains how the computer can tell the diffence in between a real smile and a fake one.

Through all the information, do you think the "facial coding system" works? It tells you about the muscles that moves in your face. Also it explains that the computer and about how it scans your face with a 3D computer model. Plus the fact that computer can tell if your emotions are fake. Now since you have a little more information about how all this works you can decide if its true or not. Technology is getting better theirs no end on what scienists can do these days.

Score: 3