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Think about having driverless cars in the future, it would be nice right? Although, driverless cars both have positive and negative sides to it. It can be helpful, but it can also be harmful.

The first positive example for driverless cars is that anyone can be in the car and they would not have to even be driving, and they can just enjoy being in the car and would not even have to worry about driving anymore. The driverless cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. In paragraph 7 the text states that although the car can do all those things, the driver still needs to focus on the road and pay attention and stay alert to when the driver must take over.

Another example, for why driverless cars are a postive thing is that they have a system that the car reads a binary code so it represents letters, digits, and other characterisitcs to the computer. One example from the story is the BMW announced in 2013. This car can handle driving functions up to 25 mph and the skills it has is that it navigates through work zones and around accidents. Driverless cars can be helpful in that way because therefore, cars can have their way out other accidents.

Although, the cars be helpful it can also cause damge. Think about someone driving and all of a sudden something goes wrong in the car that the driver can not fix. Both the car and driver will be hurt because the technology failed and whose fault would it be? That is why in mostly all states they have a law that it is illegal to test computer-driven cars because anything can wrong in the experiment. These cars can be capable of anything, but they can also be capable of causing any damage.

Finally, one example from the article is that if technology fails while somone was being used to test the car they would not know whose fault it would be if it would be the driver or the manufacturer. Also, mostly all of the states have a law that it is illegal to test computer-driven cars because they know that the cars are not reliably safe. "Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?" says Dr Werner.

Driverless cars would be really fun to have, but it can also be very scary. Technology nowadays has improved, but we do not know if it can be helpful or if it can harm anyone or anything in the future.

Score: 4