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Venus is the only planet that is just like earth. In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author talks about how scientist are stubying Venus. The author talks about all of the dangers and problems of studying Venus, and why we have to do it. The authors supports his idea that Venus is worth studying even despite the dangers by telling how much people can learn from Venus, how astronomers want to explore venus, and how astronomers have already started workig on getting there.

The first way the author proves that Venus iis worth the danger, is stating how much people can learn from it. People already know information about Venus, and if people go to Venus then they would get so much more information. In the text it said "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth."(4). Astronomers beleave that there could have once been life on Venus. If astronomers were personaly there in Venus they could search it and stuby it. So much information about Venus could be found, and so many quetions could be answered. Like if Venus had oceans, or lakes, or if it had mountans and animal. Pursuting Venus would not only be informational but it will let astronomers acheave their dreams.

Another reason the author gives is how astronomers want to explore and go to Venus. There is so much information people already know about Venus because astronomres have already did work, and experiments on it. In paragraph 4 the author said "Astronomres are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system."(4). There are people that want to go learn from Venus, they want to go to find a way and go to Venus. These astronomres don't care about how dangerouse it is, because they are so "fascinated" with this planet they can stuby, thats why they are already on their way.

The last reason the author gives is Astronomers have already started. Astronomres have already sent

spacecrafts to Venus. In paragraph 5 it said "For example, some simple electrinics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulation the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions."(7). Astronomres have made equitmen that mimics Venus's weather. They have already done so much reaserch that they now what is going to happen on Venus and made it happen in a small teast room. Then in paragraph 5 it says "NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray."(5). They alreadt have more than one solution to the problem, Astronomres are already ignoring the dangers and still moving on with going to Venus.

The auther makes very good points in the test on why people should still pursuit going to study Venus despite the dangers, telling how people can learn, how people want to go, and how Astronomres are already on their way. Going to a new planet is fascinating, and inspiers people. Their not going to turn and run away when faced with a problem, they are going to push on and find a slution.

Score: 4