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Exploring venus , scientist beleive that venus is the most habbitable despite earth for life. venus hasnt been examined very much but considering that people could potentonaly live there if needed it would help to search it.

It will cost a lot to resarch and study the planet because you half to build computers that can withstand enough heat to melt tin. venus is worthy of pursuit because it could be habitabal if needed so it wouldnt hurt to take a look at the planet to study. venus has value not only because

of its insight to be gained on the planet it self but human curiosity could likely lead us into many equally endeavous. thought of using computers from the 1940s because they were more lever working instead of transforing info to withstand heat. simplified electronics made of silicon have been tested in the simulation chamber pot with heat.

Venus can from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most light cannot penitrait the dense atmosphere. If our sister planet is so inhabbitabal why are sceintist going there. Because the curiosity of knowing what the planet has in store is interesting to the scientist at NASA.

Venus is our nearst option to live if something where to happen to earth. so it can be important for scientist to study the planet the best as possible. but also has a thick atmosphere at almost 97 percent pure carbon to make atmosphere hard to break through.

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