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Imagine how horrible driving would be if there were no more cars that you drive yourself. There would be more accidents and tragedies all over. People might get lazy and fall asleep at the wheel. The licence bureau might go bancrupt because there is no need for driver's licences. It will be a real horror if this were to happen.

In the article "Driveless Cars Are Coming" the author tells us that " safety is best achieved with alert drivers." I can totally agree with that. It also tells you that in some states it is illegal to even test computer driven cars. That is because they don't want to have any traffic deaths due to driveless cars. Most of the traffic laws are made to keep drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. If there is no one alert while driving how are we going to acomplish that? And even the very few states that do allow driverless cars have limited use for semi-autonomous vehicles.

I don't know about you but if I'm not driving I will most likeley fall asleep. There are vibrators in the seats of driveless cars to let you know when the car requires a human driver, but what if the driver is a deep sleeper and the vibrations dosen't wake him or her up. Because to some people the sounds of being in a moving vehicle can lull them to sleep, and being asleep while driving is to dangerous to risk. Also I don't think technology is ready for a driverless car if it can't navigate itself through road construction like it states more than once in the article.

There will be less people going to get licences if there are driverless cars. Which can take down the amount of money that goes to the licence bureaus, which can eventually cause the bureau going bancrupt. If the licence bureau goes bancrupt then that takes money away from the economy which can put the country in serious debt. If all of this happens then we as a country might plumit into another depression. And you as well as I know that America does not need to go through another depression.

Now imagine that. More and more car accidents. killing off people due to a un-alert driver in a driverless car. People being seriously injured racking up on hospital bills, throwing their families into debt up to their ears. America going broke due to insufficent funds from the licence bureaus. Sending the country into a depression that can last for up to decades. All of that could happen if there are more driverless cars than regularcars that require an alert driver all around the world. Im sure you and I don't want to see that happen. That is why I believe that driverless carsshould be outlawed.

Score: 4