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Explaining venus

In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. Venus has so much the reader can learn about like how cool it is, the dangerous part about Venus, and some facts that most people did not know about.

One thing they can learn about is how cool it is. In the text it states "Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetry neighbor, aorbit the sun different speeds." In that evidence it explains that it is not the same but it is still cool for kids to learn about and read about. for some kids if they read it they can tell other people about it because most of the readers wouldnt have know about this.

One more evidence is how hard it is to study Venus. In this paragraph it shows "Peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light can not penatrate the dense atmosphere , rendering standard forms of photograpy and videography ineffective". In this text it tells you why it is hard for them to go up there. "more importantly, researchers can not take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance". They had trouble getting proof of what was on venus, because they couldnt send anything up there.

This essay shows why Venus would be great to study and why it is so hard for people to go up there.

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