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In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" they had a computer software they can tell how she was feeling when she took that picture. Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute ... Had created this software on detecting people on how feel when they take the picture.

The new software that they are making is getting better and better as the world goes on,like this new one"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal," so humans can a old picture of some wonder what they feeling was so take a picture then proof the faces scanner do te rest of the magic. Like they did on Mona Lisa.

On how to use the new software step 1 raise your lips at the corners of your mouth, step 2 then squint your eyes slightly,to produce wrinkling("crows's feet") at the corners of your eyes. step 3 Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks up,toward your eyes u can do this at home and you can see how u where feeling that day and .

So we know that we can scan some face and pick up how they are feeling because of the muscle on your face can tell you everything you need to know about the person cause the software they just build tell you all about so next time you wanna see whats wrong with people you this new software they just invented.

In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" we leared about a new software that can identifed on how you was feeling also u can go back into your old stuff and figure out how u was feeling too which is great cause no we get to know if people was lieing and stuff. This great new discoveres is going to changes lives in the long run.

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