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The use of technology is extrodinary as it has shown that it is able to recongize the different emotions that we have. It has also became

discussion about using it in class. And the fact that it could really help in the future is absolutly amazing.

The author has stated the new software has been developed and impoves accuracy in perceving the emotions of others; like Mona Lisa, a subject of Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting. From the article the aurthor provides lots of research from doctors that states it indeed can determind the emotions- happiness to sadness- just because of the characteristic movements of the facial muscles. They explained that its compaired to a photo of a person with a expression thats neutral.

The debate on if this new technology should be used in schools to read students emotions. As a student myself i can personally see why most kids would disagree, but it may help us in the future. All students are different and we all have our own stories so this may help teachers help us. I am not really one that like to raise my hand if I am confused, and I for am not the only one. So if this software is used then it may help a student to get help from a teacher.

Students getting their exact feelings will also save a life. Now a day multiple kids are going through things so if teachers have acess to knowing our emotions then it could hlep prevent suicide. Students have a tendancy to like to keep to themselves and don't seek for help till tits to late. So this new software can be a red flag to the teachers before anything happens. Teachers can get a better understanding if only the saw the signs the student is showing.

So in the end if ther were computer that had a software to read the emotions it could benifit everyone. Not only will students be helped if they have a problem but then there will be a better bond between students and teachers because they can understand each other a bit more.

Score: 4