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Venus the "Evening star", Venus is the most closest planer to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Also can help with solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.

According to the article, Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.

According to the article i paragraph 2 , In Venus since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. But this time can be changed.

For example in paragraph 7, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II.

In conclusion, Venus can help with solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Also Venus is the most closest planer to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Don't the planet Venus can one they help us, the "Evening Star."

Score: 3