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NASA's first time going to mars was in 1976 when they were just going around taking photos then they spotted something on mars. They didnt know what it was at first they thought maybe it was aliens so they took the photo,and a few days later NASA unrevailed the image for everybody to see.

The caption noted a huge rock formation whitch resembeled a human head. the human head was formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,mouth,and nose. Michaels team MOC snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.

the team would have known if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks. You could see what they were.The picture was revailed and they did figure out what it was. it was a butte or messa in the martian's. Buttes or mesas are just land forms common around the Amereican West.

You could actually find the spot that the picture was taken of. The face was found at 41 degrees north martian latitude. It was winter in april of 98 a cloudy time of the year. So it was difficult for them to get a actually good picture of the face. NASA wasnt even out looking for the face. They were just taking photos and thats when the face was shown.

NASA went out again on April 8,2001 thats when they attempted the picture again. The picture came out perfect this time. and that was when the picture of the face was discovered and NASA said that the face was just a butte are mesa. everybody thought it was aliens,nobody would have thought that a fave 2 miles long would be a landform.

Michaels team thouht that NASA made a mistake so they went out and took another picture but this time the picture was 10 times as strong as jsut a regular picture. You could actually see pyramids Shacks anything that would have been there from aliens. They didnt find anything anything strange are anything and they did there research to and thats when they said NASA was right. it was just a butte are mesa. the people on the enternet were shocked.

They said no aliens had to of put the face on Mars. it wasnt landforms it was alien activity. but they were proven wrong when NASA put the picture up for everybody to see. Thats when they beleived that it was just a 2 mile long landform and that the only reason it looked like a face was because the shadow was a illusion that made it look like a face.

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