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According to the article "Driverless Cars Are Coming," companies have been working on cars that need less human control; earning these cars the moniker "driverless." In my opinion I am against the development and distribution of these vehicles. Having driverless cars would,promote the lazy characterists of drivers, be hazardous on the roads, and expensive to produce. These cars should not be at the top of companies developmental lists.

A driverless car isn't really new to the world, as the article states "Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009." If the idea of driverless cars isn't scary enough, add to the equation the idea that it is under "specific conditions". When would be the ideal time that someone would need to switch a car to autopilot? The production of these cars will make drivers lazy. Many car accidents are at the fault of a driver not paying attention, and add a person behind the wheel of a "smart car,"

or a car that can drive itself and that number will multiply. We can't let people get comfortable with the idea that a car will prevent them from having accidents.

The production of smart cars could also be hazardous on the roads, the article states that " The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone." These "sensors," or danger detecting devices and other computerized appliances that help these cars function, may not always be reliable. What could happen if they weren't properly installed and malfunction? To many cars today that aren't smart cars get called back to factories for complications, adding more fancy attractions is a lousy idea.

Another reason why the production of these cars is a horrible idea is money. The very same reason why the production of the "Smart- road systems," did not work out. How much of our tax dollars are going into this industry? This is money that we don't have to be waisting on an advancement that is not needed. This new breed of car is going to do nothing for the economic standing of the world. Companies are producing these cars at our expense and then not making them available to the average person. Companies like," Merceds-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020." Then who are they going to market them to? The people of the upper class will be the only ones with smart cars in their possession.

In conclusion, I believe that the production and distribution of smart cars is an aweful idea. Having driverless cars would,promote the lazy characterists of drivers, be hazardous on the roads, and expensive to produce. The number of accidents would increase, technology is completely unpredictable, and we simply do not have a firm economical standing to be producing these vehicles. I believe that we should be using this money to improve other, more important things, like the educational systems.

Score: 5