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Studying Venus isnt worthy puting peoples life in danger and taking dangers. There is many reasomns why studying Venus is such a good idea. Reason nyumber one is that it is to dangerous for humans or anyting to be going up to Venus. Reason number two is that they have all te equiment but are they ready do be risking a lot of things.

First, studying Venus can be so greatful and amzing but they would be puttin a lot of things in danger just to study Venus. Venus for humans is very dangers. Like the author said in paragrag three, '' Venus has the hottest surface temerature of any planet in our soloar system.'' Despite the fact that Mercury is closer to te sun than Venus is. " Besides the high pressure and te heat, Venus geology and weater present additional impediment like erupting volcanoes, very powerful earth quakes and frequuent ligtning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface."

There for i dont think is a great idea to study Venus. To many dangers and also to risky putting

peoples life in danger just to study a planet.

Score: 2