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Have you ever been to Venus? No, well no human or spacecrafts been able to land on Venus nor have survived. The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and their right, but their not hundred percent right. See, astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. They think of it as a challenge because they push themselves to work harder, come up with new, more safer ways to get to Venus. But, they have no idea of what their up against.

Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus, clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere, and temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, also the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than Earth. Even if any human could land on Venus, once you seek to land there will be erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. And, researches cannot get cloth enough to take samples of rocks, gas, or anything else.

NASA's working on something possible; created for humans to land safely. It's not going to be east tho, long working hours, just working and building something like a vehicle hovering over Venus. Making sure the air pressure won't drop, the spacecraft won't over heat. There's just a lot of things they have to worrying about but, all you need is a little confidence and working as a team. Keep believing that humans will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.

Score: 3