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Venus is one of the closest planets to the earth. It is called the "Evening Star" according to paragraph one. It was refered to as Earth's twin because it is almost Earth's size and density. Venus also has on of the harshest conditions such as surface temperature, weather, and pressure. These are some reasons why NASA hasn't been able to land or stay on Venus.

It is worth going to Venus? It is worth going to Venus because NASA thinks that at some point in history, Venus was a planet like Earth. Venus shows that it has valleys, mountains, volcanoes, and craters. This planet can show us what happened to it and what might happen in the future to Earth. Some might think that it is still dangerous to go to Venus.

It is dangerous to go to Venus although we have already tried Venus is on the most interesting planets to go to because of it conditions. If we can land on Venus and examine it, we can study what type of rocks it has and why it is worth it. If it has minerals that are stronger than Earth's minerals, we could start a minning expedition to it. NASA has tried but failed in many ways. They have tried making probes that try to show images of the planet but can't because of the dense atmosphere.

The atmosphere is one of the reasons we haven't been able to land on the planet. The atmosphere is think and is compossed of mostly carbon dioxide. It also has deadly lightning stikes that have destroyed some drones that tried to land on the surface. It is a big risk but might be worth it. Most of Venus hasn't been explored and it might be interesting going there.

In conclusion, going to Venus might be dangerous but might also be worth it. This planet is one of the most interesting ones in the galaxy because of its atmosphere. It is also interesting because we don't know what is on it. Venus shows characteristics that are close to Earths and it might be worth investigating what happened on the planet. Venus has many clues to what might happen to our planet if we don't take care of it.

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