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Imagine you feeling that nice breeze,while your on a ship as an Seagoing Cowboy. Being a Seagoin Cowboy is a very fun experience. Why you should be a Seagoing Cowboy is for these reasons you can visit other places, helps experience hard work, and can be fun.

First, You should be a Seagoing Cowboy because you can visit places you never been to. In the text, The author states," Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China." The text also states,"The cattle-boat trips were unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy," he says." This shows that visiting places can be fun and relaxing time.

Second, learning something new and hard working can help you. In the text, the author said,"Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship." The text also states, the author said," Helping out on his aunt Katie's farm as a boy had prepared Luke

for hard work, but not for dangerous at sea." This shows that mistakes can help you later on in the feature.

Last, if your ever bored you can always have fun on board. In the text, the author said," The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed." The text also states, The author said,"Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, games also helped pass the time." This shows that Seagoing Cowboys love playing sports.

Now again if you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy is for these reasons you can visit new places, can experinces hrd work, and have fun. If you wan tto be a Seagoing Cowboy all you have to do is join in and you can do all the stuuf that Luke did.

Score: 4