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Venus,

sometimes called the " evening star is one of the brighest point of light in the night sky making for even an amateur stargazer to spot . in our solar system , venus is the second planet from our sun.

A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets evenus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus' s atmosphere. On the palnet's surface ,tempreature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atospheric pressyre is 90 time greater thean whar we experience on our own plaent.

According to the (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile coditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. imagine a blim- like vehicle hovering 30 or so mile above the roiling venusain landscape . just as our jet airpalnes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many stroms vehicel honering venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way so they prove the venus is like our earth .

In the Inconclusion

striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value,

not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation on the Earth.

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