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The author supports the idea that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers since no spacecraft survived the landing of more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explans why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging plant for humans to study,despite its proximity to us.

One reason the author says this is because the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atomosphere. On the plant's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.

Another reason the author says this is because Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system,even though mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.

The third and final reason the author says this is because even though Venus has its horrible and dangers things on it there are also good reason why we should study it Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like plant in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various form of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.

In conclusion Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. our travels on Earth and beyond shoudn't be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.

Score: 3