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Althought many peope believe that venus is far away from earth, venus is the second planet to earth. When reading the passage you come across to the word "misleading" you start to wonder if the words provided to us is a word that no one knows.

In the article " The Challenge of Exploring Venus" he used personal experience to inform the readers that venus is a planet and not a star. In the article paragraph 5 it talkes about how what space administrations are trying to figure out how to test venus and what the whole story about it is. In the article it is said that if people haven't seen it, its because "numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study. despite its proximity to us". When ready this, its telling us that its not only a challenge but its not possible for somone to land on venus and research what it is that we cant touch ground.

In the article "The Challenges of Exploring Venus" although many beleive that venus will never be know and seen, venus is the second planet. For that reason building and advancing technology is the best way to see why humans cant go to venus and what is causing all the hottness. Although venus may have so many negative effects with beign to hot and to far to not have the technology needed. At the same time venus has some positive things aswell like"striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors". With this being said not only is valuable but its giving humans timtation to the point at one point things will change over time and venus will been explored.

Overall venus is one of the planets most known not becaues humans have exploreded but because its the planet most wanted, in which humans cant really see or be in. throughtout years technology will continue to advance and expirements continue to evolve.

Score: 3