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in this article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" it talks about the dangers and harsh eviroment that venus has. Also shows how much of a hard task it is to get their technology up their with out it being destroyed due to the tempertures. The main objective of this article wants to point out that it is trying to studie the planet Venus because of its close resimblence to earth except for tempertures but the density and mass of it.

This article really does have a good point to it considering on how much time and studies go into this planet. one of their plans is to fray above the atmosphere just enough so that they are able to withstand most of the harsh conditions to last a good amount of time. They even tested it in a similar enviroment that they made acustomed to the same enviroment as venus has and it lasted 3 weeks at the most. But their are other things that they are thinking of doing such as they are thinking of using old technology that was presented around the 1940's just because "these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do note require electronics at all." the point that they are trying to make is that mechanical stuff is more durable and modern technology. You see modern technology is flexible, powerful, and quick but mechanical gears are more capable of withstanding the extreme pressure and heat that venus can throw at them.

This planet is very old and it is to say that it once held a hospitable enviroment with oceans and trees and life as we now it. But as you can see, now it isn't doing very well so that is why we want to studie it because of its mysterious past. So as they said " our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." so what they are saying is that the limits are boundless.

Score: 3