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In my way of seing things would be like saying that if automakers are continuing with there job on the assumption of the problem s that they be having problems ahead would be solved because most people are scared to know what's coming up in the future perhaps maybe saying that you want to get projected on 2017 year and their own company have not be successful yet to be doing so many focusing on the drivers. I mean it's their fault that they want to text for example and then the green light turns red and your to busy on the phone or whatever it might be you could crash the car and not having a drivers license would cost alot of consequences that you don't want to have and especially seing your kids grow and they looking at you of how depressed and disaapointed you are with them later you your going to be ending up in jail and your kids probably don't want to see that. And another good point is that driving assisting is really good for you because theres alot of good people in a cab sometimes and you want to be drive like that where ever

you want to go at and i mean thats good sometimes theres traffic but that means you have to wait or whatever instead of having a bunch of friends in a car and be saying hurry up or e.t.c and your rushing to get in a certain way or to get somewhere your being late at like its better to be more positive then negative thats why this world of cars have alot of drama with their pantings and having so much money to biuy a car every 2 years cars need to stop modeling.

On modeling on paragraph six and seven they talk about certain things I was talking about and having low speed on there cars once in for all because there' s so much things that people might certainly do racing the cars with them and having no fear of anything what if one day a person having so much cups to drink and he isnt even realizing of how much hes doing to the people dangerous stuffs like oh my gosh. manufacturers believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe with their techniques or whatever its really something that you shouldnt be doing depending on the situation of the companies bringing cars to the owners and sell them for big money and taking more advantage of the cars because some poeple do past the line selling cars over millions of dollars and the original price was who knows what but less then that so cars need to stop growing in this population no more inventing cars and everyone well be good and less drama i think everyone would of be happy of not having any issues of cars now days .

Score: 4