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In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.The author supports his idea in good ways.One example the author is to use solar power on Venus stateing,"Solar power would be pletiful,and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.Not easy conditions,but survivable for humans."Another example stated in the article,"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines ot last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus."The final example stated in the article states,"By comparison,systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure,heat and other forces.

The first examples shows the reader that it wouldn't be hard for people to be able to gain energy on Venus becasue we could use the sunlight as energy.The first example also shows that it wouldn't be impossible to live on Venus even though it is 170 degrees it is still survivable to people to live on.The second example shows the reader that researchers are working on machines that would be able to give researchers knowledge on Venus that could better their understanding.The final example is to show how the old computers that were made of gears and levers were much stronger than that of todays computers.The author states that,"Modern computers are enormously powerful,flexible,and quick,but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions."With this the author shows their point on why the modern computers would be less useful then the computers made of gears and levers.

From using solar power to gain energy,to creating machines that could stand the harshness of Venus,and from using computers that are made of gears and levers the author supports thier idea of studying Venus very well.The solar power would be pletifula and the living conditions would be survivable.The researchers are working on machines to last long to contribute meaningfully knowledge for Venus.The sytems that use mechanical parts would be more reistant then that of modern electronics.In the end the author shows how important and unimpossible it is to study Venus.

Score: 3