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This is why the face on Mars is just a natural landform and was not created by aliens. How would aliens create a face? Unless, it was their face,I dont think that they could create that. It could've even have been one of their faces. This is my argument on why this face on Mars is just a natural landform and not something created by aliens.

First, in the text it says that when NASA ended up getting a picture people were not satisfied becuase they think that there wasn't enough evidence in that picture becuase it was a cloudy time on Mars. They didn't want people jumping to conclusions so they wanted NASA to send cameras out during the time of year when it was very clear. They thought that since it was cloudy and the picture wasn't too clear they think that there was evidence of alien markings were out there hidden.

Second, when they sent out the cameras on a very clear summer day, it got them a better look but not what some of the people wanted to see. In the picture it showed us that the face looked like the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. If scientists are finding common landforms, it is just more evidence that aliens did not create this realistic looking face.

Thirdly, in the text it also gives us more information to back NASA and other scientists up on this face just being a natural landform. It says that Garvin a scientist states that "It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars." If the landforms they are finding very similar to the Face on Mars, is showing more characteristics that are extreamly alike, it is most likely just a natural landform.

I can also understand where the people that think aliens made it are coming from. They think oh well since it looks like a face it must be a face. It also says that in the text that the Face on Mars has become a pop icon. It has starred in many things like a Hollywood film. books, magazines, radio talk shows and even , haunted grocery store checkout lined for twenty five years! So with all of that going on I can tell how you would be influenced with the internet and everything.

These are my reasonings on why the Face on Mars in just a natural landform and not something created by aliens. I hope that I got the point across on why it would be a natural landform. With all of the time, reaserch and even money that scientists and NASA have put into this, that you would just believe them becuase actual reaserch and evidnece is more factual then just some magizine or movie film. We dont even have any evidence to prove that aliens are real and that there was even life on Mars, so why would you want to beleive something that a lot of people are very optimistic and skeptical on? That is why I beleive that the Face on Mars is just a natural landorm.

Score: 4