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The solar system has always been a mistory to many people. The unknown can be kind of scary for someone unfamiliar with space. But that is not the case now, scientists have been questioning the planet venus our neighbor in space. Trying to figure out the insides of this planet has proven to be quite difficult.

Always seeking to know as much as we can, humans have proven that statement many time. This discovery might just up at the top with some of the best things ever found. Venus a inhospitable planet, making scientists question it. A atmosphere almost made of %100 percent carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid clouds. The planets surface averaging around 800 degrees Fahrenheit and an atmospheric pressure that is 90 times greater than earths. These conditions are said to be able to crush submarines and liquefy many types of metals. You think this would stop scientists from trying to exsplor this planet, wrong.

They believe that Venus once was like earth. Covered in oceans and supported various life forms. With many failed attempts scientists believe that they will be able to get a unmanned spacecraft down to the surface before it is destroyed by the conditions of the planet. With light not being able to break throught the atmosphere there is no way to take pictures of videos, making it even harder to see. NASA has an idea that instead of going to the surface of the planet they float above it. With a 30 mile long blimp that is maned and would safely sit above the planet and be able to study parts of the planet. "Not easy conditions but survivable for humans". Still not being able to get samples for planet they have managed to think of something that might be able to survive the conditions of the planet for 3 weeks. Made of silicon carbide, these electronics have been tested in a chamber simulating venus "chaos".

Another project they have been working on is an old World War II device, a mechanical computer. Using only gears and levers and do not require eletronics, "these have been made to be "more resistant to pressure, hear, and other forces".

Scientists believe that this planet has value, mostly human curiosity. This planet has been thought to inhabit life long age and have oceans covering the surface. While the risk might be high, what we might find on this planet might be life changing for the human race.

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