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Having driverless cars will better mankind in a number of ways.

From safety to gas usage; there are more positives than negatives to driverless cars.

The advancement in this technology will contribute to the many unimaginable human feats that have once been called impossible

First, safety is the main factor for these cars.

Some of these self driving cars at the moment have a radar attached to the roof of the car to scan the area around itself do determin if it is safe.

When the car deems there is a problem it alerts the driver.

Also having a car that can drive on its own does not mean you are free do not pay attention to the road because there are light displays that can turn on instantly and that will require the diver to take control from that point.

This meaning a driver texting and driving can be caught off gaurd if not paying attention to the road as they should.

As the passage states in paragraph eight "In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.

Next, with the advancements that these self diving car manufacturers have mad over the short amount of time that they have there is no telling what they can improve on with more time.

Given more time theses companies have a chance to have a car drive on its own one hundred percent of the time.

The passage states "There was no way, befor 2000, to make something interesting." They are talking about self driving cars.

They go on to say that they didnt have the technology (radars, computers, mapping) to do so. The fact of the speed in which these advancements have come show promise.

"So just how driverless will the cars be in the near future?"

Last, another key factor with these self driving cars is the amount of gas consumption.

Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a future with a public transportation system where driverless cars form a taxi system.

He believes that the cars would use have of the fuel of today's taxis.

If what Sergey says is true he can change the world by conserving gas by applying these cars to nations around the world.

The begginging of selfdriven cars just shows humans how far we have come with our technology.

There are problems and improvements needed to be made but they dont outwiegh the many positive aspects of having these cars.

Selfdriving cars are the the future today.

Score: 3