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What do I think about the Facial Action Coding System? I think the Facial Action Coding System is a great step in upgrading our tecnology but I just don't think I could see myself ever using it. I don't think it is necessary to have because some people might not want others to know how their feeling that day. In the passage it is saying that you are able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide it, which I think is invasion of someone else's privacy. I just think that someone else's emotions and how they are feeling is for them to know and them only. I think that this innovtion could hurt many people because if someone had a family member pass away and this computer is saying they are 99 percent sad and if someone were to ask them they could get angry or put them in a worse mood than before. I also think this new innovation could work out in our prison systems to help us understand if a murder really does feel remorse for the family or if they are saying it to get the less severe punishment. I also think it would work great in couple theropy or even any group theropy to see if them talking to a counceler is helping them or making it worse.

The Facial Action Coding System could be used as a new and improved lie detector test but only through emotions as said by the author of this passage, "to an expert, faces dont lie." I also think the Facial Action Coding System could work out really great in a classroom because I know from personal experience that when something is hard or challenging then you wish for the assignment to get easier and with the Facial Action Coding System you could do that without a teacher even being there.Another reason I dont think it would be the best idea is because staring at a computer screen all day everyday would eventually hurt your eyes or maybe even worse. That is why I think the Facial Action Coding System could be good and could be bad for the people.

Score: 3