Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The author in the story "The Challenge of Exploring Venus"

has many reasons why studying venus is worthy pusuit despite of dangers. One of the many reasons why studying venus is worth it is that as in paragraph 2 "it's earths twin and it is occasionally the closest in distance too."

Another reason why we should go to Venus is that there are still things yet to be discoverd. As the excerpt says in paragraph 4 "Long ago, Venus was probably coverd largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life". It would be worth studying venus to find out if there really is signs of water because if there was water that means that more than likely organisms living in the water and that means there would be life on Venus.

Venus is also very dangerous as in paragraph 3 Venus has "A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide", "The planets surface, tempetures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on out own planet."

Although Venus is a dangerous 800 degree Faherenheit, 97 percent carbon dioxide planet it still may have had water and life at one point and time long long time ago.

Score: 2