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Have you ever wanted to travel the world? Well guess what , I did whenever I was in the Seagoing Cowboys program.

It allowed me to see the world like I never thought I could .

It was in August of 1945, me and my friend Don Reist received our orders to report to New Orleans . We arrived on August 14th the day the Pacific war ended . We both got our seaman's paper and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster we where headed for Greece . And aboared that ship was the cargo of 335 horses ,hay,and oats to feed them .

Being in the Seagoing Cowboys allowed us to be able to see the world while we where headed for the the places we where suppost to go . What the Seagoing Cowboys was, where assigned to take care of horses , young cows , and mules that were shipped over seas. It also put me on a lot of unique adventures and also a lot of many unique places.

I had turned 18 before we arrived in Greece and that meant I could be drafted for military service . When my draft board that I had been on a cattle-boat trip , they had sais to me "Just keep doing that for my service " . By time I was drafted from my draft bored which was in 1947 I had made nine trips in totall , And that is the most of any Seagoing Cowboy

It was worth my time to be able to take those Nine trips . I was in Europe and also China . But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was my favorite of all time . It was also very fun to take a gondola ride in Italy , Venice

the city with streets of water . Being inn the Seagoing Cowboys

was one of my favorite things you can say different but I loved it .

Score: 3