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Would the use of this technology be valuable to read students emotions in a classroom? Here is my opinion on why it would be valuable. I'll also be giving you reasons why some people wouldn't approve.

A reason I believe it should be used in a classroom is that it can help the teacher spice things up in class if needed. In paragraoh 6, Dr. Haung says and predicts

"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effectice human instructor." I personally believe that this technology would be very/ extremely useful to make a change on how education should be. Education has been the same for so many years, I believe we finally have a way to make the school systems realize it's time for a change.

People may not agree with this technology because maybe they don't want their r thair childrens emotions read. People believe that emotions shouldn't be read becaus emaybe that's all they have to themselves now. Either way, this technology could help change thousands of jobs and peoples lives.

Saying that, that's why I believe this technology would be valiable in a classroom.

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