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We have many planets in our solar system that we have been to, landed probes on them, or maybe orbited around them. Their are some that we have not explored because its too dangerous. For example, Venus. We cannot explore venuse because it is filled with carbon dioxide. The author of this passage thinks that we can study Venus and explore what it holds.

Venus also know as the "Evening Star" is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky. It is also referred to as Earth's "twin". It has a think atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and has clouds of highlt corrosive sulfuric acid. There are many things to explore in Venus.

Long ago, Venus was covered with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. Today, Venus still has some features to Earth like valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus can be an option for a planetary visit, but it would be hard getting there. But NASA maybe found a way.

According, to NASA, they are finding ways to study Venus. Right now there possible solution for Venus conditons is to allow scientists to float above the fray. There are testing more possible ways.They tested some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide and put it in a chamber stimulating of Venus's surface and been doing this for three weeks in hard conditions. Another thing is going back to old technology called "mechanical comptuers". These played an important role during World War II. They make calculations by using gears and levers. They did not require electronics.

We all been worried about has dangerous something is, but there i always a way to see it. Venus is going to be a challenge to see but we will see insight of what the planet looks and what it has stored to explore..

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