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Luke wants other people to join the seagoing cowboy program. He wants people to join it so that persons life would change. From the world war 2 he wants to help the people that doesnt have enough food or their house got destroyed. It will help you because when we are done giving our will to that person he or she will want to help other people too. Also he could take care of any animal that is damaged or hurt and he will take care of them when they are shipped overseas. It will be an opportunity of a lifetime for your animal because we will treat them well and give them enough food for them to survive. When you see people treating the animals they will want to be part of the group so he can help other people or animals.

It will be an opportunity of a lifetime because you get to travel overseas and probably see the place that you always dreamed of going to. Also you might want to have the animal you were taking care of because you worked hard on taking care of it. Maybe when your children grow up they will want to be part of the Seagoing Cowboy program. You will be having alot of fun because you get to see some amazing things that you never seen in your life. Also you get to take a gondola ride in Venice, italy you cant say no to that.

When you return from the trip overseas you will never forget about it because you will want to tell the whole world about how much fun you had. When you tell the people how much fun you had hey will want to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Also on the trip back home you unload all the animals you can play volleyball games and other games that will help pass the time. Also you will always remember the trip of a lifetime

Score: 3