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Its about a face on mars. Viking one saw it. The face showed up on a lot of articales. Nasa tried to cover it up. It happened 25 years ago.

Everyone thought it was cool. It was pretty famous. It showed up in books, magazines, movies. It was everywhere. Everyone wanted to see it.

There were shadows that made it look like an egyption pharaoh. They thought it was just the ground on mars. It kind of looked like a human head. Everyone thought the face meant their was life on mars. Nasa tried to cover it up.

It has become a pop icon. They thought it was bona fide evedince that there was life on mars. Nasa would hide it then tell the truth. The defenders of NASA want an ancient civilization on Mars. They thought the face was an alien artifact.

They want to believe theres life on Mars. NASA didn't want to tell anybody. The face is a very popular icon. They took a photo that was ten times sharper then the orginal. They thought alien markings were hidden in the haze.

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