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The reasons of joing the program is first you got to be a great swimer if your on the ocean. Another reasons is you got to be scared of nothing or brave. Also you have to be tough. Beause in A Cowboy Who Rode The Waves luck creaked his ribs beacuse he have to check on some animals and then he fell and he thought he was going overboard but metal stopped him and he was happy to be alive. If you love to travle and be on the sea then this is a perfect job for you. On the job you go to new plarts of the world.

why you shouldn't join is because you might fall overboard and noone might noice that you fell. Or the ship might fail at working and sink and you might not have a boat incase that might happen. What if the ship gets hit and you all start to sink.

Luke said being a cowboy is much more than a adverture for Luke Bombeger. Also being a cowboy opened the world to him and he is greatful for that opportunity of being a cowboy. He also said it make him more aware of people in countries and their needs. When they return home they play game that help them pass the time like baseball,volleyball,table-tennis,fencing,boxing,and reading.

Score: 2