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Car usage in different parts of the world are becoming non-existant. In Vauban, Germany they have given up cars in hope of having a more suburban lifestyle. Street parking, driveways, and home garages are generally forbidden in this area on the outskirts of Fieburg. Vauban's streets are completly car free. Car ownership however is not forbidden but there are only two places to park in large garages on the edge of the developement. A media trainer and mother of two spoke about her details of this new rule, she stated she is much happier without a car. This will give children around a better enviroment to grow up in because everyone without cars will be outside playing, excercising, and riding bikes. In this new approach to they are making stores in walking distance from your home so you dont even need to use any type of transportation.

Paris also limits driving cars due to bad pollution. People were fined for driving on the roads with a 22-euro fine. These cold nights and warmer days were causing a warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Diesel fuel was to blame since France has a tax policy that favors disel over gasoline. Delivery compaines complained about the stopage of veichles and lost revenue, but due to no one driving around the smog cleared the air.

in Bogota, Colombia they expirenced car-free day where everyone walked, hiked, road bikes, or took buses to work. Thsi was the third straight year where cars have been banned and buses and taxis permitted for the day without cars. The goal of this is to reduce smog in the air.

"The rain hasnt stopped people from participating" says the Mayor of Bogota

A bussiness man said its a great oppurtunity and lower air pollution. People in other countries have also stated that Bogota is creating a revolutionary change and this is crossing boarders.

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