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The author supports his opinion very well by giving good reasons why it would be a great leap forward if we were to explore the our "Sister planet." he even gave examples of how we could explore it with even being in such a dangerous enviroment, as he said in the in the story" imagine a blimp like vehicle hover 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape." Even thought it's a dangerous mission if we send more unmaned ships and drones to venus we could find a easier way to send the first human there.

The author also sates some of the downsides such as "A thick atomosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus." And he also states "On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degress fahrenheit." which would be deadly for any human without a special suit. Even though this mission could put

somebody's life at risk is could still be a huge leap forward for space travel and the exploration of the universe. If the world were to ever collaspe unto itself we as a race would need to sutible planet to make our new home, And if we make venus safe for humans in my opinion that would be one of the top choices.

In conclusion venus is a very dangerous planet, but if scientist just study the planet for a long time, We might be able to make it suitable for a man or woman to finally explore the surface of our " Sister Planet." This may take years or even centuries but the author firmly believes that if we just keep sending ships and drones that we can have enough knowlege to explore the planet further.

Score: 3