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The jouneys of being a Seagoing Cowboy aren't always easy.

The waves toss your boat, and the animals are not easy to handle, but the joy you feel when you help people who are in need, all of the rough times are worth it.

On the sea, you are able to help people by loading your boat with cattle, horses, and many other animals, because the people are in need of these animals.

When you deliver these animals to places such as Greece, Europe, China, Crete, Italy, and many more exotic countries, you are able to see the amazing artifacts that are located in these places.

While sailing on the Atlanic Ocean, you encounter different oceanic animals.

When you are able to see their beauty in person, ot helps you appreciate different life forms.

You also appreciate your own life becuase you realize that people are less fortunate, and you are blessed to be able to help them.

You see the uneducated, and you want to help.

While continuing your journey as a Seagoing Cowboy, you become aware of all the problems in the world.

After I served my time as a Seagoing Cowboy, the awareness stayed with me, and I lead my family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.

I share knowledge of the sea, and the students become aware of the problems and want to make a difference.

You learn to cherish the people who are around you, because at any given moment, something bad, or good can happen.

On one rainy night, I was serving as a watchman and after I made my hourly report to the captain, I slid down a ladder, and landed on my back.

My heart was racing as I slipped toward an opening if the ship.

A small strip of metal caught me and I was relieved to be alive, but in pain at the same time.

I cracked my ribs but rhe crew, my friends, cared for me when no one else could.

These are the dangersof the sea, but the rush you get when you see the less fortunate people smile, the dangers shrink to the size of a pencil shaving.

If you do not appreciate helping people, the oceanic life, friendship, learning, and teaching, once you become a Seagoing Cowboy, you will, and always appreciate these traits.

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