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Smart cars on the way to take over. Many people believe that smartcars are going to over take the automobile industry. some say they wont ever stand a chance. who is right? no one will know until it takes place to see what is going to happen with the smarter cars.

Many people don't believe that smart cars will over take the roads and I do have to agree that they wont stand a chance. Smart cars will not be able to overtake due to many people take pride in driving there cool vehichle and some just enjoy being able to go fast down the highway. With smart cars none of that will be able to happen due to smart cars will drive people where they need to go and the owner wont have to touch a thing while they do it. Vehichles date back to the early 1900's and since that day people havent stopped loving the abbility to take them where they want to go . How do I feel About smart cars? To

me smart cars are very unsafe and unreliable I have been around cars my hole life and 90 percent of the time when something goes wrong with a newer vehichle your best bet is that there is a messed up censor somewhere along the line of the vehichles computer system. Automakers will never be able to fix the faultyness of electrical problems with cars no matter how hard they try and how much money they spend none of that matters, they wont overcome faulty objects.

Until i see the day where cars and trucks can back trailers, drop kids off at school , and go through a fast food drive thru without wrecking, I myself will not trust or believe that smart cars are the smart way to go when it comes to transportation in everyday life .

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