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Exploring Venus would be a worthly study because it is the second plant from the sun and it's referred to being like Earth's "twin". According to paragraph (2), They say that Venus long ago had largely oceans and could've supported life such as earth.

Yes, there maybe danger but that shouldn't stop us from inventing something that we could possibly fly to see how it could be if we sent life to another plant. It's so much like Earth because the plant has surface of rockysediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.

The National Aerunautics and Space Administrations (NASA) is thinking about sending humans to study Venus. "Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray." They said imagine if we could fly our jet airplanes at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, then a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. "Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans." Nasa is also working on toher approaches such as some simplified electronics made of silicon cardide to have tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and are having it to last about three wekks to see how the conditions would be.

They also said that there is another project such as looking back to old technology called (mechanical computers.)" If they were used in WWII then why shouldn't we be able to use them now?" they say. The thought of having them here is still a shock but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Having to use a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat is capable of melting the tin. But in comparison, using the mechancial parts can be made more resisant to pressure, heat, and other stronger forces.

Wanting to study Venus has value but not only because of the gain on the plant itseld but also because us humans are curious and would like to travel and see how life would be. Our travles to Venus are expanded to Imagation and Curiosity.

Score: 3