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If you like to help people out the Seagoing Cowboy program is one you must join. There are many great reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys so I thought of two reasons why. The first reason you should join the Seagoing Cowboys is because It's a good chance for you and others to help the people that are in need. Another reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys is that you get to explore and learn new things along the way,and according to the author It could be a opportunity of a lifetime for you.

According to the article the author said "Luke Bomberger had no idea that his life would change soon after his high school graduation" and "Luke couldn't say no. He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime." The author also says "But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him" and "It made me more aware of people of othert countries and their needs."

Being in the Seagoing Cowboys could be amazing for you. You not only get to help save lives but you also get to explore and learn new things along the way. Not only do you get to do that but you also have the chance to go to many places and meet many people and the impact it has on the world is just amazing. Those are all reasons why you and your friends or family should join the Seagoing Cowboys.

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