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Technology has come a long way from when it first began, not only does it have positive outcomes, it is also very helpful in this new era of technology. For example some individuals find it very hard to express themselves verbally and emotionally in today's world, with a new invention that could help one express oneself, emotions could become much easier to handle. A teacher may find it hard to make their students engage in learning, a computer being able to read the emotional expressions of students is one of the positive outcomes that could not only help the teachers, but the students as well.

If a student was having trouble expressing and explainig thier feelings, they would want some sort of "way out", by this I mean that if such a computer was used on an infividual to understand what they feel, expressing emotions would be much easier. Teachers not only have to teach a certain subject, they also have to find a way to make their students get engaged and make a connection with them to help them understand. Dr. Paul Eckman created FACS (Facial Action Coding Sytstem) by associating emotions with the characteristic movements of the facial muscles. If this system was used on students, a teacher would have a better understanding of how students feel during a certain subject or exercise.

Although others may argue that with this sytem being used, one might not feel as safe internally or mentally because their emotions would be constantly tracked on a computer where anyone can see it; they must see the positve outcomes that may follow by using this procedure. For example, many people struggle with understanding algebra equations or literary questions, with the help of this new system scientists could decode all emotions that we did not even know existed.

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