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Venus is one danger for people get in the Venus because scientists said "Venus is danger because it hot".Which is close to sun however Venus was close to sun. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediment like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on it surface.

Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Venus is actuallly a planet and second planet from our sun. Venus is the closest planet to Earth of density and size. Also occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, Mars, and other planetary neighbor had different speeds. The diffferent speed meant that sometimes we are closer to Mars.

If there are no spacecraft then humans will not survived the landing for more than a few hours. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degress Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we experience on our own planet. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, enven though Mercury is closer to sun. Some humans cannot get in the Venus because it very danger, humans may not survived.

The National Aeronautics and Space Administration is one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas, or anything else from a distance. Most importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas, or anything else, form a distance. Therefore, scientists need to understand Venus woud need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.

Mechanical computers were first envisioned in the 1800s and played during important role inthe 1940s during World War II. Computers existing devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Modern computers are enormously powerful,fiexible, and quick. Mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure,heat, and other forces.

Our Earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts but it should be well. Scientists discussing further visits to its surface. Astronmers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Many long years Venus probably covered with oceans and could supported varios from of life.

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