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I wouldnt go up there to see it or to go on its planet i would send a drone or omething and study the fed the drone give me.THE only reason ill go up there if they give me a strong enough suit to visit and suplys to visit it. in the story they say itss temperature is hot around 170 degrees fahrenheit its not a easy condition to liv in. They say the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we experience these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth venusian geology and weather prsent additional impediments like erupting volcanoes and powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.

a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere. on the planets surface tempeatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit.I think that is a person try to visit venus without the nessary tools they will die from the atmosphere weather and clouds. more importantly researchers cannot take samples of rock gas or anything else from distance. solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed earth levls not easy conditions but survivable for humans.Nasa possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above fray.The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar feaures such as valleys montains and craters.

It would be a bad idea to visit the planet.I say that because of all the tuff weather of how hot it is and the lightning. They should just leave that planet alone until they have

all the tools to visit the planet. I think if they visit the planet now they would more likely die from the heat and atmospher around the panet and the clouds around it. They would probably last a couple of hours before they die they should just stick with the research they have now and leave the planet alone.

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