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So an invention to see exactly how you feel emotionally? Well personally I think this would be a great thing to put in schools. Give us kids more hands on learning. This could detect if a student is bored or confused, making it easier for teachers to teach. With this students could learn so much more, because with this you could tell when a teacher is loosing a students interest and switch up the teaching act to something fun, like a discussion or hands-on learning.

I believe that this should be put in schools all around. It would most defenetitily help the teachers gain and keep the attention span of their students, because they would know their emotions. It would also help with counsillers to get students to talk so they feel better and can be receving more information while they learn vurses holding a grudge against a friend or ect and thinking about that during their class and blocking out the teacher.

Some might think this would be a bad idea because some students are already invested in their learning and are fine with it the way that it is. Well this could detect after a change is made to a classroom that some students still are not happy or new students are not happy, or they are confused with the new teaching methods. So either way it would be a win - win, because the teacher could know some students are confused and are not happy with that particullar teaching method, and this could help the teachers find a way to keep all kids on board, so their not confused or at least as much as they were before.

So as a conclusion I think this would be a huge benefit to schools and help with the recemindations of schools. this would also be a great help because, more students will graduate because they are now paying attention in their classes.

Score: 4