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Venus or the "Evning Star" is one of the well known planets in our solar system.on previous missons to venus not a single spacecraft was able to survive landing for hours.This may explain why the callenges NASA is having for humans to study this planet,eventhought venus is pretty close to Earth.Venus has a thick atmosphere that is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide,that makes it even more callenging for humans to land on venus. Venus surface tempuature is over 800 degrees and the atmosphere is 90 times greater than the atmosperic pressure here on earth. The astromomers are intreged by venus because it is well-know for once having a similar earth-like fetures, to this day astromomers still think that venus could have been inhabitable at one point a long time ago But, for now all we can do is peer over the planet in our space crafts orbiting safly over the planet venus. If we strive to meet the difficult challenge of finally landing on venus we can meet our goal to explore more and beyond our limits.

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