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My position on driverless cars I want them to be made. I'm gonna create an argument for the deleopment of these driver;ess cars.

People imagine all the time about what gonna happen in the future. Will we see floating cars or hoverboards. People wounder everyday what will the future be like well this is what we are trying todo. Make your dreams and woundering about the future come to relife.

Google cofounder Sergey Brin wants to change the future. He envision a future were a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars. Like all the movies and video games have been long fascinated with cars that could drive themselves.

Back in the 1950's, General Motors created a concept car thatcould run on a special test track. Smart roads the special test track where the track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a reciever on the front end of the car. Now tell me this wasn't that cool or not who knew people was thinking about driverless cars long before we had the technoligy todo it but it was all just a concept car. Soon or later without the option of smarter roads the maufacturers had to turned to a smarter cars. But the big question here is how much smarter did the cars need to be?

People are scared to change once they see something new they back away from it. States are banning cars that are computer-driven. I'm here to prove that smart cars are safe to drive. Smart cars are safier than we human's are. When our human race drive we have a chance to get in a car wreck. When we do we put our trust in the car to protect us from getting hurt but what if the car it self can prevent from even the wreck from happening. Smart car could detect and stop a lot faster than humans can it would stop the car before we have the time to react.

Not to say humans are dumb but the smart cars are equal or even smarter than we are. Study shows that when people about to get in a wreck that most of the time when they try to hit the brake they end up hitting the gas peddle not the brake but if you had the smart car. It would stop right there and then before you get in a car wreck. Today we have electric cars yeah they save us on gas but the car can only have so much electric. In a different country people design a road where it charges a car while you still driving it now how cool is that. Law need to stop getting in that way or else we won't beable to grow.

That why we should have smart cars they can save lives. Yeah things can go wrong but even one make mistakes but what you do with them what truely amazing. If someone get in a wreck it'll be the person fault because the car warns you soemthing about to happen. Even in today cars if you get in the wreck

its not the company fault it's yours. it's not the cars fault you didn't pay attention.

My conclusion to my argument is that we should be aloud to test build and drive smart cars may even one day save your life. You may not always like it but it's someone dream to make the future a better place. Like keeping this country safe is your's.

Score: 4