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In 1976 NASA's viking 1 space craft, while looking for possible landing sites for its sister ship, spotted somthing that looked like a human face. Although the face on Cydonia may look like it was a human face, when the first picture of the face was taken, cameras were not advanced enough to see what it really was. Although you may say that NASA is trying to is trying to hide evidence of life on Cydonia , many other scientist also believe that the face was just another Martian mesa. Also the discovery of alien life would benefit NASA.

NASA unvieled the image of the face to the public for everyone to see. Face became a pop icon, It starred in Hollywood films, appeared in magazines, and on radio talk shows. Very few of the scientist believed that the face was an alien artifact, it

became a priority for NASA

when in 1997, Global Surveyor

MSG arrived on cydonia NASA said they would photograph the face as soon as they could get a good shot at it. Another time on April 5, 1998 Another global surveyor flew over Cydonia and got a picture ten times better than the original Viking picture. The picture revealed a natutral landform, the face was a butte or mesa, landforms that are common around the American west.

This evidence shows that there was no alien monument after all. The face was simple what the Scientist thought it was when the picture was first taken of the face in 1976. IT also shows that the theorist were wrong about NASA wanting to hide the evidence that there is life on Cydonia since alien life would actually benefit NASA.

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