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Technology that is able to read your facial expression sounds pretty cool until it isn't. Technology like this does not seem very useful in schools. I think that technology like this is actually a waste of time because it can embarass someone at school, cause a problem with friends at school, and some people dont want others to know what they are feeling.

Being embarossed at school for feeling a certain way can cause bullying in school. Some of the much older may think of the person as weak are soft for having being told what emotion was read. Yes, you may be saying well it would also read their emotions too but they might not care. The bullying could get worse with their feelings being read aout loud. foe example, lets say a kid was being bullied for the machine saying he was feeling sad and the bullies are messing with him. He could get angry and cause the problem to become worse then it already was if the machine says he is feeling angry while his bullies are around him.

Friendships could be torn apart from this too. Friends feel a certain way about each other. They may feel like the other is a nusaince and dont see them as a friend. Now imagine that being said to you my a machine and this causes your friends to get made at you. It can pit strain on a lot of relationships to like when someone is around thier girlfriend or boyfriend the machine can say a bad interpretation of what that person was trying to say.

Some people may not want their feelings read out to them. They may be going through alot of pain and stress in their life that they are becoming suicidle. Its really not got to be thinking about suicide especially when this could be a teenager or a child. When their in class they may be feeling wierd about themselves and for someone being able to find out is pretty nerve racking. You might be saying to yourself, well this means it could prevent suicide in adolescents. Well as that is true they might not want people to find out they might want to deal with it on their own which is a tough thing to go through.

Problems like these are reasons that this technology is not important or valuable in school. Its actually a problem for the school it also depends on the bugdet not all schools will be able to afford it. Even though technology is flurishing and becoming more common in places around the world some things like human behavior and emotions should be left alone it is something that makes us who we are.

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