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Not many people think of all the advantages of limiting car usage. However, I believe  there are many good reasons to limit car usage. Too much car usage is horrible for our planet. We our polluting our air,and killing our planet. Limiting car usage would make an enormous difference, To our plant and to our everyday lives." Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution," Carlos Arturo Plaza states. Putting limits on our car usuage will be better for our health, we will be able to inhale better air.

Limiting car usage will do a lot for us, our atmosphere, and our enviroment. A day without cars is part of an improvement campaign, in Colombia. Their goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. "The turnout was large," source 3 states. "These people are generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing borders" said Enrique Rivera. They made a difference.

In the United States car rates are going down each year, little by little. Sociologist believe the pattern will continue. Sociologist states "it will be beneficial" if the pattern does persist. "Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a shift," said Mimi Sheller. If the rates keep dropping, and car usuage keeps decreasing. We'll be creating a better world.

This movement that could change everything. "A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009." We need to continue working in sure a matter that we are limiting ourselves more and more. Pollution is a problem we should be the solution.

LIMITING CAR USUAGE, should began to occur. Lets work on a better world. We are responsible for the mess, so let us clean it. Lets take care of the world we live in. Less car usuage, less pollution, better world.

Score: 3