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Have you ever seen something so cool that you thoght was out of this world? If not, well now you have. The so called "Face of Mars" is believed to be something made by aliens by many people. Some people think this because it looks like a face. When actually it is just natural landform common around the American West (paragraph 12).

First, I can see why some people believe that the landform is something made by aliens because it is something non common. And never-to-be seen before, something so cool and unimagineable because it looks like it has a face on it. And that some times people just want to believe that there's new and unheard of in the world.

However, in this case it is not true that this thing is an alien artifact (paragraph 6). It is actually "a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West," the author said in paragraph 12. In paragraph 6 is also says, "photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet..." In doing so is shows that scientists provived evidence that the large thing was a natural landform.

In conclusion the "Face of Mars" was proven to be a natural landform, not an alien artifact. Yes, some people may still believe that it was something caused by aliens and thats their opinion. In the future there will most likely be more unimagineable things to be proven wrong by science, and there'll still be people who choose to believe otherwise.

Score: 3