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I think we should make improvements in our cars. Like the cars that would use half fuel of todays taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. Cars that can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This mean the driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. Manufacturers are also considerfing using cameras to watch that the drivers are remaining foucused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver. If we improve or cars we can be safe on the road. With the cameras we wont be on our phone texting our watching a movie in the car.

People are too lazy these years. We want what is easier but easy isnt always the safest. The downside off all this is money. If we were to improve the cars and the road then it would cost a lot of money. But the smart road can work along with the smart cars. We would need to improve the technology in the cars. Such as the screen in the car. Many accidents happen because the screen went crazy

and the driver had to fix it while driving or else he would make a big circle if he missed the exit. Because we get destracted so easly improvements would be better. Us not driving and waiting to drive would be fine, there would be an alarm or someway of the car telling us that we are to be needed on the road.This can help if we need to rest because of being on the road we can rest while the car drives on its own.

Score: 3