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As a scentist who works at NASA, I claims that this Face is a natural lanform made by the Mars land. I claims that this Face is a natural landform becuase first, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the orginal Viking photos. So, after taking the picture, with the best camera that exist at that time, scientist proved that the Face was a landform after all.

Secound, since the people did not believe that it's a landform. They took another picture again and Garvin says," It reminds me he picmost of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho." Which is just a landform on Earth. Before they took it, te picture that 1976 people took was just so blurr that they don't seem to know what it was and thought that it look like a face because of the shadow that makes the eyes, mouth, and head.

Third, the only reason that the people think it's created by an aliens is because at that time, they didn't have a better camera than we do right now. So, when the better camera took the picture, it shows that the Face was a butte or a mesa, which is a landforms common around the American West.

Someone who disagree with me says that it was an alien marking and that it

was hidden by the haze. But, here is why they are wrong. First, there is no such thing as alien. Second, 10 years of orbiting Mars, we still haven't seen alien or other life forms that came back for the " mark."

Conclution, I cliam that the Face is just a landform. Altough I think the Face was pretty saspesus.

Score: 3