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Have you ever heard of Seagoing Cowboys? Well a i'm a Seagoing Cowboy, I help out people that have fell in the ruins. I have shiped a lot of horses, young cows, and mules over the Alantic and sometimes the Pacific. We ship the animals over the sea to help a lot of people. You should join the UNRRA to help other people out, to change their lives.

We think all cowboys should join the UNRRA so we could make people have a better life then be poor. When you help people out you feel extrodinary. Some people say once you help some out you make you day.

I have been to across the Atlantic ocean 16 times and i have been across Pacific once. I still want to go but I have cracked ribs from an accident but it is worth helping others. I feel so great on helping other.

It is a one in a lifetime expireience it takes a month to get to China. It might take a while but it is like you never left because you still feed the cows and horses. The plus to this is you to explore preety places in China and Europe. You get to expirence something you probably have never expirenced before.

These are some reasons why to be a Seagoing Cowboy. I belive that you have a great time. Dont mis this chance because if you do you wont expirence any thing that i did. Helping other people out is something everybody should do for a iving. Helping at least someone could make a hugmungas change.

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