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In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" the author talks describles how the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify human emotions. It doesn't just help us understand and studied how we feel and how we can "calculate" emotions.

This new technology can help read the emotional expressions of students in a classrom can be extremely valuable. It will give teachers and schools the ability to not just understand students through communication but also through their emotions. "A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...,"(6) This quote shows that the new technology will help teachers and schools have the ability for them to understand if students like or understands an assignment or test. Facial Action Coding System can help extremely will letting them nknow that students need more help or they're just bored of it.

Also, knowing if a student is gulity of something bad they did or understnading if they are in a bad spot in their lives. "Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,..."(6) This quote shows that most humans don't really communication verbally or even thtough emotion. Having this technology gives future insite for schools on students allowing them to help students out more not just in an educational way but in a emotional way. It's hard for student to ask or understand what is going on andnot wanting to say anything. Without students acknowledgement can be more valuable because then they'll know something is going on. Students will try hard knowing someone is watching them or as the new technology is doing, is studying them and their emotions.

The Facial Action Coding System can be valuable to all schools across the national not just for the students but for everyone. We should have this new technology on aboard for a better education.

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