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The face of mars has been intresting photo taken in the 1976 times. This specific picture has been causing a stir amoungst theorists and people for over 20 years. It seemed as though the face was to ressemble a human face. NASA has thought this could mean alien life on mars.

The picture taken in 1976 caused the stir in social networking. It was taken in low resolution but at the same time it was a high resolution in it's time of the late 1900's. The reason why this was so intresting to the people, was that you wouldn't see a face on a natural structure. However, some people thought it was just some structure that was natural in its own shape or form comparing it to other natural structures we have on our planet.

The spacecrafts returned back and returned with the photos taken on mars. It seemed now that NASA wanted to take priority of going to Cydonia which was another red planet far away. This was because they had observed the face theorizing that it was facing directly toward this red planet. When the news stirred, NASA had needed to come back to mars to take a better glimpse of the photo 20 years later with a better camera. It seemed when they had come back to mars that the face was no longer alien but some kind of volcanic crator. Some believe that it was just a natural structure that was made in some way or form and others still believed that this was still alien.

Theorists believed multiple reasonings as to why

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