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The author is right exploning Venus is dangers.

Exploring Venus is dangers because it so hot for humans. "on the planet surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit," and thats to hot for humas to survive.

Heat is not the only promble on Venus. "and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times great than what we experience on our own planet. these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth." that means the pressure is to strong for humans to say alive for even one minute.

"such an envioment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepes parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals." that show that humans are not able to build a machine that can survive on Venus. which means we still got a long way to go for humans to live on Venus.

Mercury Being the closer to the sum don't mean it's the hotest planet. "Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though mercury is the closer to the to the sun.

" Beyong high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present addition impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning striker to probes seeking to land on its surface." Venus's weather is is dangerus for human kind.

"Venus has value, not only because of the insght to be gained on the planet itself, but also because humans curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors." they saying that even if it's dangerus it won't stop humans for exploring new plceses.

Score: 3