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We cross the Alantic ocean and adventure the world. Amazed at how beautiful and

wonderful everything look. Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy was the opportunity of a life time, I had to take it. Why wouldn't anyone want to join us?As we sail through the oceans helping people and the animals. People all around the world should be apart of the Seagoing Cowboys! The amazing things we do have really inspired me to really show people the real me and you can too!

In 1945 World War ll was over in Europe. Unfortinatly many countries were left in ruins. Of course we had to do something about it. We were asked to take care of the hourses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Of course we did! it took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and one month to get to China. We had a lot of free time exploring the world and trying new things. I found new ways to have fun once we unloaded the animals. We played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals were housed. Whittling, reading, fencing, boxing, tennis tournaments, and games also helped time go faster. It was a great opportunity for me and my friends to learn more about the things that surrond us. Our journey to Italy was wonderful! Seeing the Acropolis was special, so was taking a gondola ride in Venice.

The text says being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than adventure for Luke Bomberger, but a way to open up the world to him. "I'm grateful for the opportunity," he says. "It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs." Awareness stayed with Luke Bomberger. He led his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. I would love to be apart of such a wonderful program!

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