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Is technology able to read the emotinals sxpression of students? The technology is diffferent when they want to test it on paintings that have been here for more then a a couple of years. The emotional edcpressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can tell you alot about the students with in minutes of it.

We perform these same impressice calulations everday. When you tell a friend about your feeeling by the look on her face. Some people can tell that when you are upset or even more. It depends on the people. Da Vinci stuided human anatomy to help him painy facial muscles precisely enough to have emotions in the paintings. The new softwat stores similar anatomical information as elctronic code.

when you look at the mona lisa it brings a smile to your face. It shows you how much a computer can do. The computer knows when you are sad and happy. It's like a dog knowing when you are upset or happy.

Not everything should be abe to be on the computer alot of things aren't even on the paper. It's all online. It take a lot of emotions. When you paint monia lisa you are puting emotions on the way that it being painted. It can be different on every painting but it shows more emotions then having it online. When working online with emotions. When it's online it not how it done. The computer is doing with what some people want. Emotions shouldn't be read by computer becuse they do mess up and someone would have to fix what the computer picks out. emotions should be painted or drawed out on a paper not on a screen that you can easily delete. When on paper make a mistake then easer it. It shows maybe using the coumputer's can mess what they want.

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