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The Author says that if our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even disccusing further visits to its surface Astronomers are fascinated by Venus beacuse

it may well once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system. Long ago, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth today.Atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth such as environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to our son. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on it surface.

Score: 2