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In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" the article talks about technology scanning a persons face and reading an emotion. I think it is a good idea and could approve movies,video games and even pictures on the internet. In this case I agree that this is valuable because if you are taking a computer class and doing a project that has to do with a 3d model. You could use the scanner to make your face exactly as it looks and make a 3d model with your face and expression. The system will also indicate muscles throughout your face.

I think the Facial Action Coding System could help with school projects and other daily objectives. The Facial Action Coding System is a system that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. The system can even scan the emotions of pictures. This could scan a picture and see what the person was feeling at the time. The system can sense happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear and sadness.

Overall I think the Facial Action Coding System will improve the use of technology and will be a system that is used a lot. Teachers could teach the kids how to use the system and they could have fun scanning different faces and learn about the system and its features. One downside is that your home PC cannot handle complex algorithms used to decode a certain photo. The system might also

not be able to detect every facial expression because of hair or their traits.

Score: 3