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Dear senator ,

I write to you because I believe we should keep the electoral college . There's so many reasons why I believe this would be better for the goverment and for the community . Yes , I understand the college is old and out dated but it is what has picked our leaders and until now I believe it has been very effective . The electoral college avoids the problem of elections . Even though we can not control who the electors vote for , I still believe it is a more effective way and it avoids plenty of unessary conflicts .Although we are " not voting for the president " we are " voting for the electors " . This is what had kept our country running for centuries . voting for the The electoral college avoids the problem of elections in which no condidate receives a majority of the vote cast. The electoral college is the most effective way to pick our leaders .

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