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In the article said that is dangerous to explore Venus because it has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide and the highly corrosive sulfuric acid clouds it has over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric presssure is 90 times greater that we experience, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, it has many natural disasters like erupting volcanoes, powerful eartquakes and frequent lightning strikes, Venus is the planet that is some how similar to the earth, they can go there but it only have limited insight, the author supporsts his idea telling us many details of how Venus is dangerous to explore and how the NASA trys to explore inventing many objects that are going to work inside the planet, this planet is the closest planet to earth that is why they really want to explore it, in conclusion i think he really support this idea because in every paragraph he tells us how dangerous and how is different to the earth,to explore this planet they have to invent objects that can work there because this melts every type of technology they want to use , explore this planet is very challenging.

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