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I truly believe that as a human race, we need fully driverless cars. I feel like we need these cars for many reasons. All the time on the news you hear about someone who was innocent get hit by a drunk driver, or someone who was texting and driving. Face it, we are all humans, and no matter what the law says we will still get an urge to talk/text and drive, or drive under the influence of alchol or another type of drug.But with self driving cars we can still do these things, exect we will have the car to drive and keep us safe. I believe with all self driving cars there will be very few accidents per year.

One of the problems is even though we need to change to fully self driving cars in the future, it will be very expensive for all of the car companies to fund this project. Also, not every human makes a good earning to afford these cars, which will be very expensive. Then if the customers dont buy the cars, it could potentionally put these major corporations out of buisiness. To also put something else in perspective, lets think about repairs. Lets say your car won't start, will you take it to a shop? Or will you have to manually find the

problem. One good question is will these cars need to be electric for all of the functions to fully work? Or will we able to stick to gas?

I personally believe, these corporations should either find a way to inexpensively produce and sell these cars, or

stick to the cars we have now. Because not everybody can dump there old car and go out and buy a new one. Also, lets say we all have to go to self driving cars. Right now there are billions of cars on this planet. We would produce so much pollution to recycle those cars, plus we would have to dump all of the non-recycleable parts. If we do happen to go to all self driving cars, it would be incredibley expensive, but it would also create lots of jobs. But these jobs would all depend on how the car was built, and what would be needed in order to keep the car fully safe and functional.

Score: 3