Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Your eyes can play tricks on your mind when looking at something you don't know if it is really there. Anything can be created. Also anything can be a lie. I'm argueing that the face on mars is just a natural landform.

I have numerous of claims about the face on planet mars to be a natural landform. First off how de we know that aliens are real, has anyone actually touch or seen one in real life. Then we have craters falling everywhere that must of happened to fall and make a face on planet mars. Then what if the rover on mars is messed up and the camers are not working correctly. Finally have scienctist ever tried using diffrent times in the day.

The article "Unmacking the Face on Mars" has many evidence to support my claims. One od the things the article said is that " Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh."

Another thing the article stated " Afew days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a " huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving illusion of eyeys, nose, and mouth." After that they said " Thousands of anxious on JPL website revealing... natural landform.

I'm argueing that the face on mars is just a natural landform. So, dont believe everthing you see. Anything can be created. Anything can be a lie.Believe in your self do you think it is real?

Score: 2