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The future car

Wouldn't it be cool to sleep while you drive, or even do your hair while you drive? How would you like to just lean back and let your car drive itself? Maybe deal with your kids while on the way to see grandma. How would you like to call an old relative from out of state will going to pick up your kids from school without having to drive? If you don't want to deal with traffic or you just can't drive. If you said yes to any of these listen up.

Google thinks they can come up with a self driven car. It is safe and easy to use. You don't have to do anything, but do we have the tech for a self driven car? Google made a toyota, but it is not self driven. The car stops and drives itself.

There is a problem when needed help it warns driver to take over. Traffic, road work, and Traffic problems. The car also needs driver to pull in and out of the driverway. Other car companies are tring to develope the self driven car. No one has succeded yet.

The tech has came a long way from 1980. The concept were first introduced in Tv shows and movies. Lots of people thing we should drive ourselfs. They have thier reasons to not have self driven cars. Others have different ideas.

Mercedes Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to havecars that drive themselves by 2020. People doubt they would have done it. The futrue is near. The self driven cars will be the greastest thing to happen. The car will be amung us. You can use the time you driven to change dippers, or anything you want.

Score: 3