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Did you know that Venus is the brightest point of light in the sky. Sometimes people look at the sky, they see Venus and they think is just a star. Some people call it "Evening Star" wich is not often use becuase Venus is a planet. Venus is also call the Earth's twin. This nickname is given because Venus is one of the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.

Lately scientists are discusing about making visits to Venus. The article states that "Astmonomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like

planet in our solar system" wich makes them think that long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported forms of life. Scientists know that Venus has a suface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as mountainsand craters.They claim that Venus can sometime be our nearest option for a planetary visit, which is a curcial concideration given to long time frames of space travel.

In conclusion the author of this text has given us proves that, The National Aeronautics and Space Administration well known as NASA has been studying possible ways to go to Venus wich could take a long time. Temperatures there are very high for a human been. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. They had simplified electronics made of silicon carbide wich have been tested in a chamber simulating

the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in the condition they would exoerience at Venus. I strongly agree that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents.

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