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In my opinion, joining\ participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program is a very intelligent choice for a job. Especially for, someone who likes to travel in long periods of time.

I say this, because being in the Seagoing Cowboys program includes lots of different things such as; caring for animals. Shown in paragraph 2 as it said," UNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys, to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.

Being a part of the Seagoing prevented Luke from having to be drafted by the military. It clearly states in paragraph 4 by Luke ,"When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to keep doing that for my service."

Even through times when Luke was hurt, there was still other things that he could do like play games. As shown in paragraph 7. "One rainy night, after making his hourly report to the captain, he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside." But Luke found fun on board in paragraph 8.

This is why, I think being a participant for the Seagoing Cowboys is a very imortant oppourtunity that everyone should be able to do.

Score: 2