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Having this technology available for students in the classroom would help inform the teacher or instructor if the student is having trouble with online work and could easily be known with this software.To back up this claim,the text provides the statement"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored".Having this software could also help young doctors who are wanting to be in the medical field, just as the state texts "the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face all 44 major muscles", menaing that this technology could easily make the learning of human anatomy much more easier to learn and to understand.

This software could easily turn around the boring day for a student with just knowing their facial expressions,having an instructor change the way they teach to help students be more active and more drawn into their education is what we want.When Dr.Huang says" then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor" just goes to prove that with this software, teaching would be more effective than before due to the educator changing how they teach to better fit the needs of a student while still helping the rest in their own ways.With this technology in class teachers will also be able to tell when a student is lying about a certain thing such as turning in their online homework, this software could help and inform the teacher that the student is lying and have this problem resolved.

When talking about students in a classroom and with this technology I instantly think of doctors and anyone else in the medical field.This software could help us better understand the human anatomy of the face and could make the new upcoming doctors more advance than those who didn't have the chance to learn with this new software.Of course people could learn the facial expressions through this software even if it wasn't in their time, but I believe in human interaction or face-to face so to call.We as humans already do this calculation everyday when we meet up with friends or family,as stated in the text " in fact we humans perform this same impressive calculation everyday" meaning that even before having this technology at hand, we already had an idea of how someone felt just by their facial expressions but of course with this technology we can better understand how someone is truly feeling.

Score: 3