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I think that we shouldn't use the technology to read a students emotional expresions everyday in a classroom at school. It should just be used playing a video game and using technology that advanced coud be more fun for the game heads.

Using technology that advanced in the classroom could distract students by playing with the technology or just not having intrest for the lesson but intrest for the machine. But using it could help the teachers to make sure that the students are understanding the lesson and are not confuesd with it or even bored. The students can interact with the technology more and want to invent something of their own one day to make the children happy like this facial expression technology made them. Or even start something to get rid of the technology of this day. The process of doing everything could also take some time away by having to constuct the 3-D model. Having all of the major muscels on the 3-D model will also help by knowing when the students are faking something just to get through the day. Having the classroom facial expression reader could be embarssing for some students that are quiet and don't like to interact with the classroom.

Faking a smile could help sometimes but having to force to do one everyday could affect a person and how they feel about life. The technology can affect the students at home when they go and tell their parents, aunts, and uncles maybe because of religion or just because of the parent or gaurdians way of raising their children. Also we have to think about if the machine would break down and read a students facial expresions wrong and the student would have to do something they were not expecting to do. The teacher could also be agaist the facial expressions and not want to use it but having to use it, or if the students want to read the teachers facial expressions and it says disgusted and happy for the percentage what would the classroom think of the teacher.

At the end of the day you shouldn't depend on technology to do everything for you when you can understand a person perfectly by talking to them and interacting instead of a technology doing everything for you. Having video games is where the technology should stay at and advance in.

Score: 3