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Have you ever wanted to be a seagoing cowboy? In this essay I will give you the pro's ,and con's of being a seagoing cowboy. I will also have evidence from the text to prove my statements.

Now there are good thing's about being a seagoing cowboy. Like you get to see different places as stated in the text, "Beside helping people, I had the side beneifit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,"Another piece of evidence from the text states, "So was taking a gondala ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.

There are also some bad thing about being a seagoing cowboy, Like getting ingured on the job. This evidence from the text explains why you would get hurt on the job "One rainy night,after making his hourly report to the captain he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. Luke's heart raced as he shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal along thge edge stopped his side, keeping him from flying overboard into the dark

Atlantic."

Another piece of evidences from the text states "He was happy to be alive. But he couldnt work for a couple of days because of cracked ribs"

In conclusion, I think both of these paragraphs show some pro's and con's of becoming a seagoing cowboy. Now let me ask you again, Have you ever wanted to be a seagoing cowboy?

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