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As in the article author says that Venus is like an evening star as one of the brightest pioint of light in the sky.As Venus is the second planed in our solar system and humans have proved also that it is very simple to see but when the earth is safe and though it is proved that it is closely to our earth.As the author said that humans who had gone by spacecraft werent that sucessful so the issue explains that thats why no spaceship cansurvive for long time.As VENUS is a challenigng planet for humans because the atmosphere is really bad like almost of 97 percent of carbon dioxide and we humans need greenery atmosphere and also good clmate then only we can survive,as high temperatures around 800 fahrenheit and many things too that can damage the deepest oceans to.The authors says that if VENUS is such an inhospitable planet then why are astronomers trying to figure it out,so then the scientists took out an idea that if we are sending humans then we have to study about venus .As then author gave an example that blimpy vehicles can hover over 30 miles then why not jet airplanes and also jet airplanes can still work in such bad atmoshpere too but the air pressure will be closest to the sea level of earth and also solar poower can work but can hel survive humans.So the scientists were looking up for technologies but they last till 3 weeks that in such conditions,so then scientists came up with the old technologies like the mechanical technology as first humans were shocket but then the scientists said that it may help us with calculations and all and also it does not require electricity to.So, from my side thanks for working so hard our scientists and astrnomers who gets good information from the space and then it is being spread all over the wolrd and how it works and everything.So the more you study the more your mind gets knowledged and thats what i read about venus.As special thanks to author also for sharing a great article.

Score: 3