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You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because if you like to help people, in this program you will help them by getting supplies for them. If you also like animals, you will care for them and seem them everyday. If you like being on water this is a great program for you. The animals will be on the boat for you to care for them. Also you

will be traveling a lot to get the supplies.

It is also a great way to learn a lot of things. You will learn how to take care of the animals and learn about the places you go to. Taking care of the animals is not the only thing. At night you will take shifts and switch to be a watchman. Every hour you will check on the animals too see if they are okay or to just feed them. Also you will walk around the boat to make sure there isn't anything dangerous out there.

In the meantime if you are just waiting you can have a little fun on the boat. You can play baseball and volleyball with the rest of the people on the boat. Also you can play table tennis tournaments, fenncing, boxing, reading, anad whittling. Then when your done playing, you have to go back to work. You can have a lot of fun just by being on a boat.

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