Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
That the author did good job at explan the evidences like he saws,

"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a veicle hovering over venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditition by staying up and ount of their way" That it is imported to study Venus even if it dangers.

Venus ounce look like earth, like "Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long age, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." That it tells us that it you'st to be livible.

Venus is a challenging planet to study like it saws, "numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us." Venus is a challenging to travel to even if it so close.

Traveling to Venus isn't imposible like it saws, "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginatin and innovation." It is posible to trave to Venus.

Venus is a challenging planet, that we like to study about and learn how it was formed.

Score: 2