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Many people are debating over wether the " Face on Mars" is a natural occurance or if it was allien made. Some people think that NASA is trying to hide there findings so NASA defended themsleves and said they wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars. Nobody will ever belive the same things but it has been shown that there was no allien activity on Mars

Conspiracy theorist believe there was alliens involded in the makeing of the "Face on Mars". Sceintist have taken pictures to prove that it was a natural landform and their were no signs of alliens. Even when people said the camera had bad quality NASA took another picture with a more advanced camera. When NASA got their second picture back it showed the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms that are commom around the American West. Even if there were alliens that created this why would NASA keep it a secret they stated they want there to be a civilization.

This shows that NASA was not hiding anything and that there was no actual proof of allien life on Mars. Without proof of life then nobody can conclude that the " Face on Mars" was made by alliens. NASA has more evidence than a conspiracy scientist would. Wether or not the sceints had reason to back up their theory it would most likely be weak because NASA's evidence is based on research and not a working conspiracy.

Score: 3