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In "The Challege of Exploring Venus," the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. I think that he is right because earth is a small planet and we need to more space. The people of this planet are too much for it slowly we are killing the Mother Earth. over time people used almost all of it's resorces and sooner or later we will need to find another planet to live on. Yes it is close to the sun, and yes it is very hot. But we as pleople can do it. We put an man on the moon. This is just another step that we need to do. Venus is the Earth's twin, it is closest to its densiy and size. Venus and Mars orbit the sun at diffrent speeds sometimes Mars is close to us and sometimes Venus is.

We have send numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud-draped world. We studied Mars and Venus for years and we can send a spacecraft to get some sempals to see if we can survive on those planets. The Venus atmosphere is almost 97% CO2. The temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. It is way hotter the the Earth bacause it is so close to the sun and it gets way more sunlight then we do. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greaater then what we experience on our own plate. I think that it is to much for us right now but in the future we will find a planet and we will live there.

If we have the technology to explore our soloar system then we can find other living creatures in the galaxy and we can learn from them and to keep evolving.

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