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The challenge of exploring venus is dangers to study. They should not do that challenge of exploring, because that is really dangers. That could hurt people and it can kill you. The author is tell not to do it. Author explain what happen there and what inside there.

That venus is really hot thing. The venus have carbon dioxide. Venus hae 97 percentof carbon dioxide. Then there other thing that can hurt us which is acid. The acid is not normal thing what we used. The acid is really highly corrosive sulferic of acid.

Venus is really hot place, it almost hotter then sun.The venus temperatures average is over 800 degrees. 800 degrees is hotter then what we have in summer, 3x hotter then what we have in the summer. Venus is powerful pressure. The atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater powerful.

The conditions far what humans encounter on earth. It could diving the deepest part of oceans and can happen metals liquefy. Not only that can happen, also notable because venus is the hottest temperature of any planet in solar system. That why author try to stop people to go by and study for it. Then he told us it dangers just because all of that.

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