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Hello my is Luke Bomberger and today I am going to try to convince you and others to join the Seagoing Cowboys program by giving you reasons why you should join, why the seagoing cowboys program is a great program for young adults to help other countries, and details to support my claims in the passage

First I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys because it is a great oppurtunity to go help other people around the country who are struggling for food and for their farms. You could help with rebuilding the town. Also it is a great way to go see different parts of the world you havent seen before. When I had started I didnt relize how much it would be to ride a boat with my friend and go to different parts of the country.

Next I think this is a great program for young adults who want to make a difference and help other people around the world. This is a way for young adults to see other parts of the world. They can go on an adventure to a country in Europe or Africa. It's a way for them to interacted with different people in the world.

Lastly some details to support my claim are to help people who lost many things in a war or in a fight with another country. Many people have lost many things in

wars and riotes or even protest. I took the risk to leave my life behind to go help other peoples lives.

In conclusion you should join the Seagoing Cowboys if you want to help other countries. I've gave you reasons, and details of why you should join and i hope i convinced you to join the Seagoing Cowboys program.

Score: 3