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So the author was thing about he can visit Venus and how he can walk on Venus but Venus it is hot More importantly researchers cannot take samples of the rock gas or anything else from a distance and the author thing about makeing a fly car in space so they can see Venus and they will not give up becasue the work hard and they will do thing other people will not do.They tryed to send spacecraft and that did not work out for them and they see everything in space they can see the sun and the other plantes and they will not give up thay will find a way to land on Venus and they will find out what thing are on that plant and they will work dad and night if they have to and NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus and they

Striving to meet the challenge presrnted by Venus has value not only becasue of the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also becasue human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors Modern computers are enormously powerful fleible and quick but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions by comparison systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure heat and other forces.These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to deepest parts of our oceans and world liquefy many metals.

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