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I worked at a grocey store. Till my friend Don Resit conviced him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I knew it was a very much an offer he could not refuse. An oppritunity of a life time. Being a Seagoing Cowboy helped open the world to me. It made me aware of people in other contries needs.This awarness stayed with me. My family started to help people and we became international and helped visitors also international students.

Would you want to cross the Altantic? This allowed me to experience many adventures as a boy. I got to cross the atlantic from the United States to China.

When I was just under 18 I arived in Greece! I got to help people, besides that I got the benifit of seeing Europe! I also toured a caslte in Crete. Dosen't that sound like fun? If it does Be a Seagoing Cowboy.

Some reason to join this program is that you can help people like I did. Do you help people? You will be greatful for this opprtunity. You will be happy to be alive! Do you like animals? I feed them and helped raise them. You will never be bored you will be busy the whole time. Are you bored some times? You won't as a Seagoing Cowboy.

Things that you will do for fun is that you will have fun wth your friends on borad to play games with you. Do you play games? You can play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed.You can play table tenneis tournaments in the kitchen or dinning room table. You can also play fencing, boxing, also you can read, and whilttle. The games helped pass the time for me.

I did a whole lot when I was a Seagoing Cowboy. I was really active alot. I did many things with my friends. I was really greatful to have that opportunity my friend gave me. There was some regrets but it was all worth it in the long run now my family helps people so it is a win-win. You should really be a Seagoing Cowboy. You will not regert it trust me.

Score: 4