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I think theAuthor should have a good evidence to study venus, firs is that Venus is the hottest than the solar system, Venus stopped some of the natural damages and Venus would allow a scientist to float above the fray.

First, reason is that the Venus is more hot than our solar system in the pharagrah it say " Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to our son" This mean that Mercuery is closer to our sun than Venus, but however Venus has the high temperature of hotttest.

Second, is that Venus weather impediment some of the bad of the natural destroys, in the pharagrah it says " Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eruptin volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes" This mean that Venus have a good weather to stp those natural destroys that probably could cause a big damage to our planet and kill many poeple.

Last, reason is that would allow scientist to float above the fray the pharagrah it says " travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, not easy condition, survivable for humans". This mean that if wnat to travel to VEnus you can fly and also you can survive all of the dangers that are in Venus planet.

In conclusion, Venus is the hottest planet than our solar sytem, Venus stopped some of the natural damages for human, and Venus would allow a scientist to float above the fray, this reasons are why the Venus planet is worthy.

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