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Venus is worthy place to study but dangerous. The reaosn in doing theis is because of the challenge there is. trying to study something with out going for yourself. that is pretty hard to do. One you have the biuld something that will either help your or something that can with so the temputure of Venus. Two the distance of getting there and back. Gotta have something to hold that uch fuel to go there and come home. if a human is going you need to have a food stock for them to last

of the Planet.

Just like when they sent a robot to the planet it had to out a material tthat can withstand the planet itself., But that only lasted two weeks. Now they are try to go for longer the two weeks.

In Conclusion i know that tcan do it its just going to take some time for it to happen.

Score: 2