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Driverless cars should not be on the road. This is because if the alerts for the driver falter, stop working completely, or fails to alert the driver of a specific situation it can put them at risk. If the sensors do not work in the car or on the air you could be lead into a direct path of danger. Driverless cars give more security for people to think they can take higher risks, diverting their attention from the road ahead, and if damage to the car or passengers occur the driver would face financial risk.

It is made aware in paragraph two that these smart cars would "alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents." But what if these alerts fail to work? If the driver is distracted it would put them in immideate risk of injury. Relating directly, the cars would have sensors to read specific directions and road conditions from its surroundings. If those sensors are inactive or broken at even one place it could result in injury to many people, leading you into a path of danger.

In paragraph 9 it states that most driving laws are focused on keeping everyone safe, and that saftey is best achieved with alert drivers. With the false sense of security driverless cars would bring drivers would feel they are able to take more risks such as texting, making calls, or sleeping. If they were to do this they would be succeptible to injury or trouble with the law. If the driver were to become disctracted leading to an accident they would be held financially responsible.

Because of this multitude of reasons driverless cars are a huge danger to passengers, pedistrians, and drivers alike. Driverless cars should not be on the road in order to keep everyone as safe as possible.

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