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In the artical "Making Mona Lisa Smile" the author desribes how a new technology, named the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) , makes it possible for a computer to "calculate" our emotions. The first subject that this was tested on was Mona Lisa. You might be thinking, but that's a painting how could that be done. To that I say, that is how well it performs. It is so good it can tell in paintings. Think about it, facial reconization systems are already made. Now, we have an emotion reconization system. I'm all for it. Professer Thomas Huang should keep making these.

I'm all for it, for some reasons. For one; it's said that the demonstration is suposed to bring a smile to people's faces, just as Dr. Huang said.

For a second reason, it can help us in classrooms. Huang said that the FACS, in time. would be able to tell if the students are bored and or confused. Which then, would let the teacher know to switch things up or help the students understand the assignments better.

Finally, moving facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.

In conclusion I think that the FACS is a good thing to bring to the factories.

Score: 2