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Driverless cars have been in production for a number of years now. However, because of some technical issuses they haven't been able to be on the road yet. Driverless cars should be on the road because they are very safe,limit accidents, and drivers can still be in control.

Driverless cars have proven to be very safe. The car has advanced senors that can detect when it will hit something or someone. The driver and passangers would be warned and they would be safer. For instance, sensors can cause the car to apply breaks on an individuals wheels and reduce power from the engine allowing a far better response than any human driver can manage.

As a result of there being more safety there would be less accidents. Since the cars can practically drive themselves humans won't have to worry about hitting anything. For example, the car can navigate work zones and other things that may seem like an obsticle. With the car in control people would worry less about getting into accidents and there would be a less likely hood of any getting injured.

However, if individuals still aren't comfortable of letting the cars drive in certain areas like a work zone they still have the option of driving the car. The car can also warn people when and if they should take over. For example,

GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the car is and danger and that provides as warning for the driver to take over. People still have the option of being in control of the wheel.

In conclusion, driverless cars would be very valueable in this day in age. The people in the car and outside of the car would be save, less people to get injured in accidents , and there would be more control. Humankind would benefit from have cars smart enough to drive themselves.

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