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In the article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" by Nick D'Alto, he talks about new technology that can identify human emotions. This new technology, the Facial Action Coding System, is not relevant for children in classrooms because it is not needed, a disruption, and not trustworthy.

Although, the Facial Action Coding System in unique it is disruptive to a class. The article says that this new system could help kids with their learning by "recognizing when a student becomes confused or bored." The computer would then have to alert the teacher and disrupt the class while learning and everyone then would be confused. There would also be computers all around the class and kids would most likely pay more attention to those instead of their lesson.

All of this new technology seems cool but can people trust it? This computer "constructs a 3-D computer model of the face" and from that it base a persons emotions by facial expressions. That is not something people could really trust. A person could easily smile and really be sad but the computer thinks the person is happy because they smiled. The computer also only know happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness but what about other emotions like depression? There could be a flaw in the system and could label people as "confused" and have their teacher think they don't understand a lesson in school even though they do.

This technology is not really needed at all. The article says, "humans perform this same impressive "calculation" everyday," what is the point of having a computer do a job that a human can easily do? This new system is more of a accessory than it is a help. People would just be paying for something they could do themselves.

The article "Making Mona Lisa Smile" by Nick D'Alto talks about new technology called the Facial Action Coding System. This new system is not needed for children in classrooms because it is disruptive, not needed, and not trustworthy.

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