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Studying Venus can be a worthy pursiut despite the dangers. Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky and the nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. It is also the second plant from our sun. '' Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.''

Studying Venus may despite the dangers it presents but it also is a worthy pursuit because scientists are still discussing futher visits to its surface even if it is inhospitable. In the text it states'' Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.'' This shows that it is worthy because of the reputatation and is great to study for. The text also states'' Astronomers are fascinated by Venus becuase it mat well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.'' This shows that the planet surface is a good planetary visit and its mission is safe and scientifically productive.

The dangers of Venus may include the surface temperature, its high pressure and heat, the erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes. In the text it states'' researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.'' It will be a challenge but the researchers are working on innovaitons that would allow the machine to last long enough to contribute to there knowlegde of Venus.

Even though Venus had its dangers it still strives to meet the challenge becuae it has its value and it also will human curiosity will likely lead us into mant equallt intimidating endeavors. This is why scientists are still willing to study Venus because it is worthy even though it has its dangers and is inhospitable.

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