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Hi in luke and i want to tell and try to convince you of seagoing when you go out to sea you get to travel the world,go sight seeing ,and do the things you never did before because when I went sight seeing we did lots of stuff like played table-tennis,fencing,boxing ,whittling and lots more of fun stuff u get to travekl all over the world to places like,China, greece, and lots more,but there are some good and bad parts of traveling like there are lots of animals, it takes along time to get there and also there would be lots of dangers.

But there are some imorpartant things like you get to help other countries with their needs because after World War 2 euroupe was left with great disasters like it`s citys where ruined lots of people died and lots of fammilys lot`s their homes and to help these countries to recover. You woyuld help them with their food supply,and animals,But we weren`t alone 44 other nations joined together to form the (The United States Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) and to join the Sea going cow boy you would be doing these countries a huge favor because whaty if we had a Worl War 3

the people would count on you to help them with this. This is opportunity of a lifetime.

And I hope you`ve considerd joining seagoing cowboys.

Score: 2