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do yall ever wonder if its worth trying to study venus despite the dangers.well i think it is not worth trying.first no space craft ever survived landing.second the coulds of venus are highly corrosive sulfuric acid.and last there surface temperatures are around 800 degrees fahrenheit and atmospheric pressure 90 times greater.

first no space craft have ever landed and survived.its because sometimes where closer to venus and sometimes to mars.we cant force to keep losing money for the space craft if we cant land.what make you think we going to land right now if no one has ever done it.the more we keep trying the more money and maybe people we going to lose.

second the clouds around venus are acid and dangrous. what happens if acid get in the space craft it could mess up some of the stuff.do you think some of are space craft are made to block acid.or if the acid gets in and gets on the people inside.your risking people lifes to go study another planet.

last but not least the suface temperatures are 800 degrees and the pressure is 90 time greater.is space craft make to take that much temperature.would that much temperature do anything to the people inside the craft.what happen to all that pressure that is being force on the craft.would the space craft survive with all that pressure on it.

so do yall ever wonder if its worth trying to study venus despite all the dangers.i still think its a no for me.with all that force and high temperature on the craft.and the acid and dangerous clouds.and last that no space craft has landed and survive.i think its not worth how about you.

Score: 3