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Is living in venus important despite all the dangers? Well I think yes because just like mars you could maybe get life on venus If It was less toxic. I think scientsis are trying to make life on venus because it's possible.

My claim is that you could get life on venus because it's not to dangerous. On paragraph 2 he says "These dfifferences in speed mean that sometimes we're closer to mars and other times to venus". In paragraph 4 astronomers were saying "Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth". This evidence proves that if scientsis try, maybe we can get life on venus.

To conclude all of this I was basically trying to say that venus actually isn't that bad of an planet like saturn or mecury because it's either too hot or too cold in those planets. But in venus it's kind of right in the middle. So probably by 2025 there could be a chance of living in venus.

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