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For the last few years in my life i was a cowboy who rides the waves. Your probaby wondering how that is possible. After high school graduation my freind Don Reist invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I helped out with feeding the animals,watching them overnight,and even taking them for walks when we got to land. It was probably the most fun to walk them though.

A few of the reasons I decided to become a cowboy who rides waves is because i love animals. Any type of animal. I also did not want to get drafted. I turned 18 before going on my first trip(it was to Greece) so i could have been drafted. When my draft board learned i was a helping with the animals they said to just keep doing that for my service. I was REALLY happy.

A few other benifits other than helping animals were going on a huge adventure through Europe and china. I once saw the Acropolis in Greece it was so amazing. I also got to see an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. It was so cool taking a gondola ride in Venice Italy. The streets were water in Venice.

A really good part all alone is the thought of me helping World War 2 victams giving them new animals to replace one who have been killed or stolen by anyone during World War 2. We also helped give food water and supplies needeed to live to again people who suffered from World War 2.

Even though I got seasick a few times it was okay beause i got to see some of the world i would have probably never seen if i would not have joined what i did also i got to spend time with animals which was double amazing. If i had a chance to do it all over again i would because ut was a really amazing thing to do what i love

sincerly-

Luke Bomberger

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