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"The challenge of Exploring Venus" I belive that studying Venus is a big thing . It takes alot of work becasue Venus is another planet you cant live in Venus. scientces till this day dont know if Venus is a good planet to visit. It has proved a very challening place to examine more closely. Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of destiny and size.

Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since so spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. thats explains the issue why not a singal spaceship has touvhed down on venus in more than three decades. Thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. on other planets surface temperature average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and th atmospheric pressure is almost 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet

Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. If our siter planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface. long ago, Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth.

At thirty-plus miles above the surface , temperature would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth. solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survuvable for humans.researchers cannot take samples of rocks,gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientist seeking to conduct a through mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personaldepite the risks. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contrbute meaningfully to our knowedge of venus.

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