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This passage talks about the development of "driveless cars". I do agree that thses cars are a good thing for us. Here is why.

First let's talk about the idea as a whole. We are wantingto create a very alert system that is going to prevent us from car accidents. It has been rumored that if this does happen, we will be the last generation to know someone who was killed in a car wreck. How awesome does that sound?

Now let's talk about what features the car will have. To have a "driverless car" we will need a whole bunch of sensors. (Which isn't new. we've had them in our cars since the 1980's.) There will be video cameras, radar sensors, ad GPS, and an inertial motion sensor. These will help the car "think" like a human. The sensors that we have already developed can, as said in paragraph five, detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.

Lastly let's discuss the control humans will have over their "driveless car" if they were to get one. None of these cars that have been deveoped or tested are completly driveless! They are made to steel and brake all by themselves, yes, but they are still going to let the driver know when they have to drive. These cars will not be ablwe to handle construstion zones by themselves. Us, being the human drivers have to still stay alert to the things around us.

I understand that some people may think these cars are not good for us, showing that we are lazy, and not responsible but I think these cars have more positives than negatitves. We are going to use less fuel, the percentage of accidents are going to decrease to one or none, and we are still going to be alert when things are going on.

From leses fuel, to more sensors, i think these human like "driveless cars" are a great idea. I think we are showing how the future is going to look, and we are going to make these successful one way or another!

Score: 4