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This is very challenging to the people who want to make venus a place we can call home. Many reaserchers or people who study Venus will be testing out materials that can last long for it not to melt or break down into parts, when they try to make it to Venus. and of course it wont be very easy because of the conditions, but can be survivable to human. My three reasons for this is the tempeture, conditions and how the materials will last long enough to survive these conditions. and of course there are pro and cons to this challenge.

When you try to get to Venus it will be a little hot. the good thing is that we can survive that, maybe not for some of use. The bad thing is that if the spaceship breaks down into parts then we all die. That's why we need to make sure that the ship is good. "at thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to the sea level on earth". This to me is very shocking becuase the "air pressure would be close to sea level on earth". (paragraph 5). This would support becuase of high the temp is.

The conditions for this can be very risky becuase you never know wwhat might happen when you get close to the atmosphere. The atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. Anything could happen, it can be unexpected. Some small machine that have ben been on venus and only lasted for a while. " Image of a bimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape".(para 5) This woulld support because NASA has been doing things and discover on what is on Venus.

my other reason is the conditions. the materials can effect the conditios of the spaceship. in world war II they also used computers to help them make the things to

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