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I think people should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can experience adventures and visit many unique places. Not only that Seagoing Cowboys have to take care of horses, young cows, and mules.

One reason to join us is that you get to help the countries. You help them by trying to recover their food supplies, animals, and more stuff they need to recover. When you go help other countries, you can go to see wonderful places a long the way.

Another reason to join is because you can see a lot of exiting places because we sometimes have "free time". You can just stop by and take a look at it. Like I did, I toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canall on my way to Chiana. The cattle-boat trips are unbelievable.

My last reason on why you should join is that it makes you more aware of people of other countries and their needs. When you join you will know more about people in different countries. You will know how hard it is for them, but you would help them with their food supplies, animals, ect. We also have to take horses, young cows, and mules that are shipped over seas that is our main job.

When I joined it made me more aware of other people living in different countries and what they need. I'm really grateful for the opportunity. I did not only become a Seagoing Cowboy, it opened up the world to me. And that awareness stayed with me, leading to my family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.

Score: 3