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New Planet, New Home

"It is hard to leave something that you really loved." my mom stated, Rebecca Sulayao. Here, in this case it is really hard when the things they get used to will going to be dissapeared or gone. When something gone they need to get or find another one. They can find the same as like this or just like a duplicate of it. But, in this case leaving home or finding new one was hard. Because, all the memories are there. Finding a new one was hard they need to transport all the things that they left in there home. In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author suggest that studying venus is worthy to pursuit despite the dangers it present because it is same as earth, human curiosity, and the planet Earth will dissapeared after how many decades.

First, In some cases planet Earth and Venus have some similarities. The Venus has some good nature too. In paragraph 3 it said there that "On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet." It explain here that the planet Venus has more atmospheric pressure than Earth. Also, In paragraph 4 it said there that "Long ago,Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Eath." it explain here that even the scientist discovered that the Venus and Earth have same similarities and the nature of Venus can supported life.

Second, because of the human curiosity the scientist want to know what is going on to our neighbor planet. In paragraph 8 it state there that "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." It explain here that the people should not make a story. They should know their limits when it comes to imagination and telling story that is not true. In paragraph 7 it said there that "NASA is working on the approaches to studying Venus." it explain here that because of the curiosity the NASA or the scientists that work on that try to explore things outside the Earth. Since the people are curious on what is happening on some planet they used technology. Because of the curiousity they used some technology and invented new one that has many gears so it can reach the Venus. But because of the heat of the Venus the gadgets they invented was not working. It will work in how many decades then after that it will crashed again because of the Venus temperature.

Last, the Earth will slowly dissapeared after how many decades. It is hard when the Earth dissapeared.That is why the scientist try to investigate new things outside our Earth. They trying to figure out when or where the people will live after the Eart dissapeared.They should examine fast as they can so the people can move on different planet. Because who one knows when will planet Earth will explode. In paragraph 1 it said there that "Venus is the second planet from our sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely." It explain here that they trying to figured out the Venus. Because the Venus should have same characteristics as Earth because if not the scientist should try to search more information on other planet. It is hard to examine something when it is new. In paragraph 2 it said there that "Often referred to as Earth's "twin" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of densitity and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too." It explain here that this a good sign because the people need the same characteristic as Earth have. Until now they still working on it they try to figured it out more so as soon as possible the people on Earth can move to Venus.

In conclusion, The planet Earth and Venus have same similarities. While Venus is more on danger because of the characteristics and material of it. Still the process of exploring Venus was still on process. The human curiosity lead the scientist to search more on what is outside on Earth. The Earth will exploded after how many decades because of the global warming and the people on Earth should evacuate as soon as possible. Life must go on even if we are living on different planet!

Score: 5