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"Venus, something called the Evening Star" is one of the brightest points is the night sky," from this article woudl they make you vistit Venus even though it's extremely dangerous. In the article " The Challenge of Exploring Venus," the author express hsi feeling toward the topic should we vistit Venus, and the author answered yes. I will be explaining why I believe we should vistit Mars and why i agree with the author so much.

My first point I want to bring up is that Venus is often called Earth's "twin", since it has identical density and size compared to Earth. Also fun facts are that siencitists has also shared that Venus has supported life long ago and this is proven by the planet having volcanoes, craters, and weather patterns. These reasons can also help us live on Venus.

And now are some reasons why we shouldn't vistit Venus. Number one is that it has the hottest surface tempurature in the entire solar system this would be difficult to live on. Antoher reason would be that the atmosphere is 97% carbon dioxide this would be a major issus becuase human need oxygen to live and with little oxygen in the atmosphere this would just simply kill us. And my final reason it that weather would be an issuse becuase of high pessure and heat of the atmosphere, erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and lgihting which strike land; none of these would be great to live on Venus.

In conculion what I believe is that we should explore Venus because of it simlarites to Earth and that we could possible live here and expand human life.

Score: 3