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Revolutionary Change

BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! Get up. Get dressed. Go to work. Go home, repeat. what if i told you you could do so much more... For instants, take a stroll. Have a wonderful view of clusterd streets and inhale the polluted air, causedsouly from car usage. "The goal is to promote alternative tranportation an reduce smog," stated in an excerpt from "car-free day is spinning a big hit in bogota," sixteenth paragraph. After only five days with minimun car usage the smog revaled greatly. Ruducing car usage will help not only help the united stated but the whole world as one. The affects of over using cars are showing, limmiting car usage will help the enviroment, and change a daily routine.

"Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layers of air to wrap car emissions," stated briefly by Robert Duffer. According to The Reuters found, "67 present of vehicles in France, compared to 53.3 present average of Diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe."

Clear air for the survival and generations to come would be great, or we could go exinct like other spiceies. Simply because of over doing, and pushing over the limmits. limmiting car usage could help our enviroment. Fresh air being a start. "The turnout was large, despite gray Clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on Bogata. The rain hasn't stopped people from particpateing," said Bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus...."its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air polluting," said Bussinessman Carlos Autro Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife. adding a shortage to car usage could change your whole lifestyle for the better.

Andrew Selsky stated many hiked, biked, and skated or took buses to work during a car-free day, leaving the streets eerily devioded of traffic gams. it  also lowers emissions and improved safety. Parks and sport ceenters have been used more and new restaurants and shopping districs have dramastically cut trafic.

"Although Americans have had a history having a love affair with vehiclesseems to be cooling," a reference  from Elisabeth Rosenthal (End of Culture- paragraph thirty-to).  The limmitations of car usage can drastically change an enviroment,a life, the world. BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! This now means time to change..

Score: 3