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This new technology could be very helpful for teachers in the classroom.It can help so many people in so many different ways. In the classroom outside the classroomand just in life imprarticular.Nowadays its hard to get honest responses from people because they just dont trust others.But with this device i believe tht since the person already knows or has a clue of how this person is feeling they'll share more about what is going on.

If you use this device in the classroom it will help teachers see where their students are happy and not so happy. Teachers can learn more skills from this cause most the time if the student is happy with the subject they will understand it an be able to get one step closer to perfecting it. Instead of teaching it and no one understanding how to do it.Kids dont speak up sometimes because they dont wanna be made fun of or critisized for not knowing how to do something.So they often just give up and fail. But with this you can pull that student to the side and let them know that you understand and your their to help them if they need it.

Another way this can come in handy is it can save a persons life. You never know what people are going through in their life their mind could be anywhere. To the point that they wanna take their own life or even worse someone elses. With this if u scan someones face sometime and it comes out as zero percent happy,sixty percent hatred,twenty percent mad , and twenty percent sad. Something could be going on in this persons life that a counselor could talk to them or even get them some kind of help before they do something that they will regret for the rest of their life.This device can be very valuable and believe this should be used in other places. for greater success,protection of others , and a better life .

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