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The author talks about going to venus and explor it.in this essay in goning to be talking about his ideas and other ideas.he talks about the dangers of gonig the planets atmoshpere and other hard ships.

Venus is one of the closes planet to us at a certian time in its orbit. venus is also known as earths twin becuse both earth and venus are the same size.But venus can

also be called evening star becuse you can see it at night.

Some of the dangers of going to venus is its dangeruos atmosphere.like the planets density and its acidect rain we could send a robot or have a ship fly over and take picters but the clouds are to dense to do it. And we can not send a robot in there becuses of the clouds blocking the signals.

But NASA whants to explore so they are making a silicon carbon electronics. They have usesd what they know about the plant to test the product and it lasted three weeks under the conditions. the tech they whant to use mechanical computeres wich are computers that run on gears. The reson they are making it out of gears is becuse other elictonics can not withstand the heat and presser on the planet.

So after all the things scientist of gon throught to try to go to venus. Going there is still a long ways from us both in technology. And other develpments but the main

reson we want to go to venus is becuse we are cerious about what is there.

Score: 3