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Emotional Expressions

Professor Thomas Huang has created a revoluntionary computer that can read a person's or a picture of a person's emotions. For example the computer has decoded the expressions of Mona Lisa. She is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Computers that can see if you're bored or happy can really affect what you see on the internet, especially with students learning. On the other hand, teachers and students will want their privacy while they are using the internet and using technology like these computers might cause a problem. Using technology to read the emotional expressions of student in a classroom is valuable because it can keep them on track with things that can interest them by looking at their emotions and show if how the way the are learning is positive or not.

Paying attention in class while watching documentaries and videos can be challenging for most students. Watching documentaries about the things they learn in class can be very repetitive and boring. Technology created by Thomas Huang can help students be on track by suggesting education related videos or documentaries. The computer will read a student's emotional expression and will see if they are bored or happy. If the student is bored, the computer can suggest a similar thing, but suggest a more interesting way of learning it. All this technology can really help a student by making them more focused on what they are learning at the time.

In school, teachers ask students for feedback on what they teach. Students, most of the times, give honest feedback, but on some occasions they give out false information. Using the technology created by Thomas Huang can help teachers see if they need to make things more interesting or keep it the same by their facial expressions. As time goes on, teachers will be able to make their lessons or homeworks be more engaging and more fun for the students participating. This technology can help teachers get specific feedback and fix their lessons depending on that feedback.

Privacy is valued in many places around the world. Schools like to keep things private on the way students learn and the way they process things. Students and teachers have different ways of learning and teaching. Computers that can read your emotions, facial expressions, and see what you're doing might not be liked by

students or teachers who want their privacy. The students might not want people to know what level of learning they are on and teachers might not want people to see the way they teach because they could get criticized. This technology might be appreciated by some people, but can be disliked by other people too.

Using technology created by Thomas Huang to read emotional expressions can be valuable to classrooms because it can show if they are interested about what they are learning at the moment and see if they are learning it in the way they prefer to learn. Students can be easily distracted or bored. Being able to see if they are statisfied can help the computers suggest things that would make them be more interested in. Teachers can also see if the way they teach is having a positive influence on them with their facial expressions. Although having computers that can read your facial expression is interesting, privacy has to be included in the conversation of putting these computers in classrooms. Using this kind of technology can be beneficial to the future of kids and classrooms all around the world.

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