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the conditions are extreme anything humans encounter on Earth mi evidence is .Even more challenging are the

clounds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere . On the planet 's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit , no easy conditions ,but

survivable for humans .( parag

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Venus is the seconds planet

from our sun, is so inhospitable atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus have strong solar power and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.

These conditions are far more extreme an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the

deepest parts our oceans and would liquely many metals ,venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes , powerful

earthquakews , and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface

temperatures would still toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit , orbit the sun at different speeds . the planet has surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as vavalleys, mountains , and craters .

mi conclusion is what in venus not is easy survive for we the humans both have technology what help for obtain and survive in venus but is warning.

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