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Why We Should Study Venus

What is venus like on the surface? In this passage the author suggest that studying venus is worthy pursuit despite the danger it present.Their are risks when trying to study another planet.Their are also material on venus that is the same or earth years ago.Their are also benifit if we can sucessfuly studying venus such as blimp-like vehicle.We should study venus because of the benifit and the technology it can provide us.

Risks, A thick atmostpher of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide cover Venus.On the surface of venus the temperture average over 800 degree fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on earth.Venus has the hottest surface in the solar system.In additional there are erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning.Even more challenging is that it has the sulfuric acid in venu's atmosspher which makes entering the planet challenging for object to enter.

Venus was a earth-like planet long ago.Venus was probaly covered in largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, like earth.Today, Venus still have some feature that are simlar to earth. The planet have features such as valleys, moubtains, and craters.There is also that venus can be sometime be our nearest option for a planetary visit.

Their are some benifits such as having a blimp-like vehicle hovering over the roiling venusian landscape for scientists to study venus.Like our airplane could fly over storms , a vehicle hovering over venus would avoid the unfriendly gound condition by staying up and out of their way.The hovering vehicle can avoid danger.Howerver looking at venus from above in a hovering vehicle can provide only limited insight on ground condition because most form of light can not penetrate the dense atmospher.There are many researchers who are working on innovating machines to last longer on the surface on venus to study it.Venus has value, not because of all the gains we get from it but also from our human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.

Venus have a vary hot surface about 800 degree in fahrenheit.

Their are also risks invloving this expadition such as atmospher pressure.

Venus was like earth a long time ago, Today it still have many features like earth such as valley, mountains, and craters.Some benifits are that we could have a hovering vehicle over venus for sicentists to study it.The author supportes his idea really well saying why we should study venus.

Score: 4