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The Seagoing Cowboys program has allowed me to go and to experience many adventures. I joined because of a friend, who invited me to go to Europe, so let me be your friend and tell you why you should join.

In 1945, I joined and helped "countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more." Peggy Reif Miller, so we were hired to care for the animals that were shiped overseas. If you join you will be able to help others in need just like I did.

On August 14, 1945 we got onto a boat and headed to Greece. On the trip there

right before we arrived I turned of age, so "I could be drafted into military service," Peggy Reif Miller, but they said to keep doing what I was doing for my service. This just shows how much being in the Seagoing Cowboys program helps countries. Now the Seagoing Cowboys program is work, but it can also be fun. In the empty places that were for the animals we, the other cowboys and I, would play many different games. All the games we played were to mostly help pass the time.

I also had a lot of time to see the places we went. I loved seeing

Europe and China. Please, join the Seagoing Cowboys program, so you can help others just like I did.

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