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The author siad that becaue if we keep on studing the planet knowing more about the planet could be a new. Earth because the sicinets from NASA said " Venus was probaly coverd largely with oceans and could have supported various from life like earth today". But the heat on venus is very high because its very close to the sun than we are its at leat "170 degress fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that se level on earth" NASA has an idea about sending humans to study venus but the way to avoid venus hostile conditions on the surface is to. Hover it about 30 plus miles up.NASA is trying to work on diffrent approches to study venus but nothing has survied over than 3 weeks. Because of the 97 percent carbon dioxide and the avrege temperaturs are avrege "800 degrees fahrenhiet and the atomspheric pressure is at least 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet". Venus is an extrem plant far more than any environment it would be able to crush even a submarine that means that the preuse on venus. is as strong as diving to the deepist parts of our ocean. In conclusion i think that making venus hospitable is not the right thing to do because of the condistions that venus has are very dangers its not worth puting lots of effort into a planet thats very dangers but at the same time is it is because if we do it with time and pastions. We can make things happend but it's going to be dangers.

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