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The author challenges the NASA and the scientists to explore Venus without worrying any dangers in that planet, which is weird to think about. But I think I know the reason why he says that. NASA and the scientists give a simple job for a Astronaut "Go to the planet Venus, and collect some samples for us.", he/she goes to that planet and gets into trouble that causes him/her to die (sorry). So they have no idea what to do, except the author, he makes an idea to make a ship to hover safely without any danger, and try not to land.

An another reason that he says that, is because he didn't want us to look at a dangerou side, but to like in the curiosity and the imaginative side. Paragragh 8 states that "Our tavels on Earth and beyond shouldn't be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet thee very edges of imaginaion and innovation.". The Last reason I could think of is that NASA could be smarter than today, they could make computers without any electronics at all, they could make a clothing with heating disability, the legs of the ship magnesium, and probably a shield to protect himself/herself without getting hit. The scientists could help with them to probably claim any planet with the brains of a team.

In conclusion, He said that phrase not to be careless of dying for the cause of the World's End, but to support the team. If they complete the challenge, then they could be the greatest (and only) NASA in the planet. If they couldn't do it, then that's okay, we could just live in an another planet or die to live in Heaven. We could support them too with just a little bit of our brain and love. (I'm not a Zombie.)

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