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Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The passage states, " humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades". This means that it isnt really safe to go study Venus despite the dangers it presents.

Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. the passage states, " Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather presents additional impediments like erupting valcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface". That means that it is really hot in Venus even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Earth, Venus, and Mars are planetary neighbors but orbits the sun at different speeds.

There is a limit you have to reach in order to go to Venus. The passage states, " peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective". In order to stay safe you have to follow the rules.

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