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The evening star is the brightest points of light in the night sky however this nickname is misleading since venus is actually a planet it is close to the earth sometimes and mars also but people that have tried to go visit venus and tried to study about it have not made it back in about 3 decades so its really hard to study venus no spacecraft has survived landing up there more than a few hours because there is a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets and is even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid and on the planets surface the temperature is average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet these are dangerouse positions for the astronaunts because they will not come back and venus is closer to our planet but how is it so hot there and its not even close to the sun but NASA is trying to send some of its people up there so they can study more about it and hoverboard around it and venus is almost the same like earth they have a bunch of similarities they both have mountains and valleys and the canot even sample rocks or anything it could be a rick by putting something from another planet that. NASA on the other hand sent something really smart that they thought would last a while but only lasted three days in venus.They bult a mechanical part that was stong for gas, pressure, heat and other forces.

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