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The author say's About the Venus's what is diffrent than other planets and is like twin of earth because it has the same density and size it it says in number three.The tempertures are really high 800 degrees fahrenheit, is really hot to live there with almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide.It shows how dangrous is to live there the surface is the hottest than any other planet in our solar system that mean no one one can't live at Venus.

Long ago Venus was like Earth it probably had ocean and clouds and it looked like that Venus has mountians vallys. this is why scientists are looking forward to study more about Venus and its origans it had in the past long ago. NASA are planing to go to venus but they have to on the frey and it would be away to the ground

and condition. NASA they'er testin the matieral if it could last long for venus and if would not melt the matierial they tested is "electronics made of slincon carbide wich lasted three weeks" it been tested in a chamber simulating but they'er looking back on a "to an old technology called

mechancal computers that were mad at 1800s". this shows how they have to choose for their matials.

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