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Venus was called "Evening Star", because its one of the brightes points of light in the night sky. Since Venus is a planet, the nickname has been misleading. Venus is the second planet from our sun, and its the closest planet to Earth. Venus has more than three decades that any single spaceship has touched down on Venus, since there's no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus, for more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in the solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Since Venus is hotter than the other planets, people can not live there for high pressure and heat. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like, erupting vocanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Long time ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.

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