Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Do you think people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program? People should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program beacaue of these three reasons because they would get to go on many adventures, also because they would get to meet new people, and also they would get to experience new places.

They should join the program because they would get to go on many adventures. The text states it was a great adventure for luke.

also if they join the program they would get to meet new people. The text stats "it made me more aware of people other countries". The text also states that lead him to keep meeting new people.

Last if they join the program they would get to experience new place. the text states that they had to go to china. The text also states that they had to ride on the Atlantic Ocea.

And that is why I think more people should join the program. beacause of those three reasons.

Score: 2