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People who like to go places should be a Seagoing Cowboy because you get to explore things you probably never seen before. Another thing is you get to take care of horses, young cows, and mule that were shipped overseas. You also get to help peope if you like helping people with some type of problem.

If you ever want to go to China or Europe you have a chance to if you are a Seagoing Cowboy.

Plus you can also have time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals have been loaded. The cowboy played baseball and volleyball games in empty holds where animals had been housed.

In 1945 it was World War ll over in Europe, and many countries were left to ruins and to help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to for UNRRA. then the UNRRA hired "Seagoing Cowboys" to take care of the animals that were shipped over sea.

Being a Seagoing Cowboy can change you life for eternal. It can also open up the world for you and make you feel grateful for opertunities like that. I would recomend being a Seagoing Cowboy because it can make you feel good for being helpful in life and one day you won't regret it.

Score: 3