Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
In "the challenge of exploring venus ," the author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit

despite the dangers it presents . becauce in the text it says at paragraph eight

"striving to meet challenge presented by venus has value , not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself , but also becauce human curiosity will likely lwad us into many equally intimdating endeavors ." this proves that we should try to get to mars .

there is even more evidence . In paragraph four it says " Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once beeen

the most earth like planet in are solar sytem . " this just further shows the imense reasearch value .

theres even more prove . in the artical at paragraph 2 it says " often referred to as Earths "twin,"Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of denisty and sise , and occasionally the closest in distance too. " showing are planets similer history .

in conclusion all this eveidince points to even though it will be hard we show try to reasearch venus more .

Score: 2