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The facial action coding can be used in good ways and in bad ways. It can also be all up in peoples personal bussiness and maybe people don want that and dont want you knowing all about their life.

The technology is getting too advanced and people are starting to feel uncomfortable because they cant hide any secrets or any feelings that they have because the technology is getting so advanced that one day someone will make sonething that can read your mind or etc. This machine can only be valuable on some occasions like when someone says that they want you to know their emotions and how they are feeling then they will tell you theirelves you dont need a machine to do it.

Becuase then you will be all in their business and people dont like that. They want their personal space and they want their thoughts to be kept to theirselves without the whole world knowing or people knwoing what is wrong with them and what their thoughts are. This machine does not need to be bulit because people can just tell you how they feel you dont have to go make a machine to knwo.

If they wanted you to know then they can tell you theirselve.

People can use this machine uncontrolbaly and it could get out of hand and share more things then it was suppose to and that could make people feel uncomfortable and not so happy. Also if other people found out your secrets and things they can get spreaded and start rumors and other things that can be bad for you.

I would not want this machine in my life because i dont want people reading everything that i have and everyday because its my buiness and if i want to share it then i will. I want to keep everything to myself and not let anything get spreaded around and make my life worst or bad because of it. If you want people to have good lives then you dont need these kind of things in the world.

Score: 3