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Driveless Cars are Fascinating

Imagine if a car can drive by itself without any assistment from the driver. The car has all the requirements for driving safely. Wouldn't it be nice for the driver to relax while the car drive by itself? It would be, especially when the driver is tired and doesn't feel like driving or any other reason to not want to drive. The driver can relax and take a nap even when traveling from place to place. Driver can talk on the phone, text, take pictures of the roads or other great things. It is state by the law that no one should text while they're driving but driveless cars makes it possible. Therefore, driveless cares being invented and are in the process of developing.

Driveless cars are fascinating. It would be dangerous if the car drive by itself without any attention from the driver. That is why automakes are working for driveless cars to have sensors to alert the drivers when it needs the driver's assistment. Sensors are nothing new, but automakers are developing more sensors everyday and are considering to make autonomous cars. Automakers will make laws for the safety of the driver and to prevent the arguements between the driver's fault and the manufacturer's fault when someone get injured.

Automakers are increasing the amount of sensors everyday to keep the driver safe. "The driveless car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel." The sensors let the driver know when it need assisment of the driver. For example, GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. Other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays. Automakers are even thinking to use cameras to track drivers. "Manufactures are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road."

From the development of cars to driveless cars, there has to be a change of law in order to keep the driver safe. There also has to be a law that state when the driver is at fault and when the manufacturers are at fault when there is an accident. There are laws that limits the number of semi-automous cars in one state. Many of other states are using this law to keep people and the driver safe. Manufaturers believe that many other state will follow this law for safe of all people.

Automakers are doing their best to develop cars to smarter cars. They're also giving their best to change the law of cars as the cars get smarter in the purpose of the driver's safety. Manufacturers are increasing sensors to alert drivers for assisment. Not only the manufacturers are trying to develop the style of cars, they're also changing the laws for safety of the drivers. If all of these are invented, then it is easy to say that driveless cars are interesting.

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