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In the article of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", it is suggested that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite of thinking the dangers it presents with it. It is also been refers to as the Earth's twin due to density, size, and even distance. Even with Venus being called the "Evening Star", the dangers is still out there. Still, NASA is working other different kinds of achievements on studying and learning about Venus.

"Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to oland on its surface." This explains almost everything that could happen in Venus. No one particulary knows what even is on Venus, only for a fact that it is one of the hottest surface temperature of any planet in the solar system. "Therefor scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks." This explains how almost scary it is to ACTUALLY learn and study about Venus. A LOT of things can happen during the mission to Venus.

We can still make an mission to Venus but that is going to take out A LOT of us. More safetiness and equipment is required especially if you're going to a planet that has the hottest temperature of any planet in the solar system. It is interesting to see how scientists are going to work on the mission to Venus, and especially their safetiness towards it. We can still work, discover, and learn new things about Venus. It is definitely going to be a wild ride to Venus.

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