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Today we are going to talk about the study of Venus is worthy.Because Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Sometimes it's called the Evening Star. But I don't think that Venu is a star! It's the nickname that is misleading it's real personality.

If you

don't know Venus is the second planet from the Sun.Yes Venus is a planet because in the passage it said that"Venus is actually a planet".Venus is closest planet to Earth according to it's size and density.But also sometimes during the rotation it comes close by the distance too.Because sometimes it right around the corner in space

human have spent numerours spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each mission was unmanned and none of the spacecraft

lasted

more that few hours on this surface.

And I think that could be danger for Earth in future. Because it is colsest to planet Earth. And if none of the spacecraft lasted long enough on this surface of Venus than it could effect the Earth if it comes more closer to Earth.Humans need Oxygen to survive but on Venus there is a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. And also the average surface temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenhit, and the atmopheric pressure is 90 times greater than humans face on Earth and as I said before it could be dangerous to Eath if in the future Venus comes more closer to Earth.

So I think we should learn more about Venus and try to protect ourselves from any harm happen in the future from Venus.

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