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Their are many ways to read emotions without the using of technology but we never come close to the real feeling. Many years ago technology was small and it

had limits to what it can do but after so many years after technology has changed through out

the years. Computers now are able to read muscles on any human but can it read the emotions they feel?

Three men have been working on a project called "The Facial Action Coding System".

Dr. Paul Eckman (a psyhologist) is the creator of The Facial Action Coding System. The software was made by prof. Thomas Huang (of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science) in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe(of the University of Amsterdam). The FACS was used to be able to read emotions in percentage. It was able to read six emotions hapiness, surprised, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness due to their 44 major strands of muscles on a humans face.

The way that FACS was able to read your emotions are like complicated math equations. The 44 strands each have different meanings each movement of one or more muscles are called "action unit". The frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyebrows) raises your eyebrows when your surprised and your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. The use of FACS have been use on the Renaissance Painting Mona Lisa by Leonardo da vinci to show expressions that only that she is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angery.

The FACS is amazing and is changing over time and time again being able to read your emotions with accuracy. Will you be able to read emotions with accuracy? or will it be false accusions?

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