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I believe that driverless cars can be both good and bad for our world. If the driverless cars are responsive to crashes and quick breaking like they say the cars will be, then yeah i think the driverless cars are a great idea.

The movie industry has been showing us these kind of things such as driverless cars for decades. In the movies you will see flying cars or even driverless cars, so to see Google cofounder Sergey Brin taking a pledge and trying to create such a thing is really incredible. If manufactured right and having the right electronics and gadgets on it, these driverless cars could take over the future when it come to driving or selecting a car.

Back in the 1950's, General Motors created a car that could run on a test track but with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the vehicle. Engineers at Barkley done something like that but with magnets that will "self" drive the car around the track. The only problem with that is the amount of money it would costs to supply the roads with these magnets they are wanting to put in the roads to control these cars. Also having these sensors and so much technology in the car it would not take much for something to go wrong, have the sensors in the car fail and you lose the front end of your car and causes a tramatic accident. So it is just little things that like that can put such a big downfall on a project like this.

Paragraph 9 talks about the laws that are directed to the regular gas, electrical and diesel vehicles, but what about the new driverless cars, won't you need new laws? Of course we will, that is one of the biggest things made in this case about the new cars, because new laws will need to be made in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. Even if the technology fails and someone is seriously injured, who is at fault? The coming of these new cars seem so close, but yet so far away because of all the technology and work that needs to be done to making something like this happen.

People ask if it's a good idea, I say yes. I believe that these will make the roads safer and keep people more alert behind the wheel. As long as us humans don't rely 100% on the cars to take care of us we will be okay. But as soon as we start to let the cars do everything for us, that is when the tragic accidents start to happen and also when people start to sue these big name companies such as Google and Barkley. I say bring on the driverless cars as soon as possible and see what kind of change it does for our world.

Score: 4