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After reading the "Driverless Cars Are Coming" I began to have mixed feelings about self driving cars. As a child I always dreamed about having a car that could drive itself. Just because thats all I saw in movies while I grew up. That gave me an Idea of how cool it would be having a self driving car. Now that I've read about the negative aspects of self driving cars, I have a whole different point of view about it. Let me tell you about it.

Though it would be fascinating to own or see a car that could drive it self; you have to think of the bad out comes of it too.There are many quotes they say

things like " don't let a machine do a mans work". Those who made quotes like that must had a good reason for it. Having a car that drives itself is like letting a computer control you around on the roads, the bad thing about that is if anything bad was to happen you are responsible for what happens.

Even though Google has made cars that are able to controll themselves ever since 2009, without a crash they aren't truely driving themselves. Those cars alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents. That shows how much little machine can do without a humans control. For example, if a person was to own a car that drives itself and got in a car accident they would be the one paying the big bills not the car nor the company that made the car.

Those are reasons why I believe self driving cars should be aloud on the roads. I also learned that just because something looks "cool" or "fascinating in a movie its not always great or safe to have. Not saying car companies should stop trying to build cars that drive themselves, but they should be trying to figure out a way to prevent accidents.

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