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LET PEOPLE BE FREE

Luke Bonberger had no idea that his life will change soon.So he started to think about it then he new what to do.But he new his life was going to change soon when he graduaed from high school. So he friend don Reist invited him to Europe on a cattle boat,but Luke couln't say no but is new it was aopportunity

Then they went so he had to do alot of thing like cheak on the animals once ahour.Luke cross the atlantic Ocean 16 times but he got use to that.Then it was world war 2 was over europe, and many countries were left in ruins.So to help thoes countries give them more food, animals, amd more thens.

People should always be free in eat in live from as long as they can because they don't nothing to peole to hurt them like that.People need to stop the fighting in the killing to beating on there kids.It's not fear to kids if they are getting hurt on all the after

kids are self in sound not getting hurt or betting,

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