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According to the article, fellow citizens are imformed about the advangtages of limting cars. As it says in the artcle "As a result, 70 percent of Vaubang' familes not own and 57 solid a carpercent throw a cow."I'm much happier his way" "All of our development since World War 2 has been centered on the car, and that will change" says David. Not only were they focused on the car, that was all that mattered at the time. Not only were the people trying to make a change "An offical of Transportation for America, fast- growing coalition of hundreds of groups in the United States, who were promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars. Mr. Goldberg added "How much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid." in the United States, the Evironmental Protection Agency is promoting "car reduced" communities"

Not only are they trying to reduce and/ or limit car useage "After days of near car pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Cars are not the only ones taking act in this "On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plaes were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day. Backing down wasn't an issue because according to the article "Almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to Reuters. Twenty-seven people had their car impounded for their reaction to the fine". The article also states "Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline." Buses and taxis?"It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and textis permitted for the Day without Cars in capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog"

The article not only states "The day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Begota in the mid-1990s. it has seen the contruction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American city, according to Mockus, the city's mayor." but it also states the end of the car culture. "New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those a new pirorities, as do a proliferation of car- sharing programs across the nation. A study last year found that driving by young people decresed 23 percent between 2001 and 2009"

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