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The new technology of being able to identify a persons emotions by their smile could be very useful for many different sorts of things. If teachers everywhere were to have this computer technology to tell the emotions of their students they could find new, better improved ways of teaching their students. Wheather it be a college professor trying to find what their students emotions are to a middle school teacher it would help all around. The new technology can help everyone all around the world in different ways to find different kinds of information about a person. Like their peronality based off of wheather or not they are angry, sad, or just happy. I believe that you would be able to tell alot about a person based off of their emotions.

In the text the author talks about how Mona Lisa's emotions were very different when Davinci had made his master piece of her. It is said that her emotions were 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. The reason I think the new technology would be able to tell alot about a person by their emotions is because the advanced computer can pick up 4 different emotions altogether. One of those emotions are going to have a bigger percentage om the person than others depending on how they are feeling.

I think that the new technology can come to a conclusion of helping eveyone improve the society we live in today. Because every one has different feelings and thoughts about many different things that are going on. If the technology was used to find out how people are feeling about those different things that are going on then they could help to give ideas to make those changes. Then everyone would be able to use their voice and stand for something they think should happen.

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