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Many people have joined the Seagoing Cowboys lately. Mostly because of the feeling you get when you get to help someone out. World war II has left many Eurepean citys in shambles and with-out the needed suplies. I am here today to list the good and bad facts about this job.

First of all my time at the job was amazing, fun, and not all work. On your trip there you watch horses, mules, and/or cows. That only consist of cleaning pens, feeding, watering, grooming, and exersizing. On your way back you get to see many epic sights and amazing views. You also can relax and play games like table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games to help pass the time.

Now a bad thing to show you, so you can see its now all fun and games. Once I was night-gaurd and it was raining I slipped and fell feet first down a hole I landed with only a metal rail to stop me from plunging deep into the great unknown.

That feeling of acomplishment is the best feeling ever. Imagine this. When you get there you see hunger people surviving with the clothes on their back and food from the rubble of houses. They smile and you see many kids watch from still standing houses and you smile back as they help to unload the cattle.

Little things do help. There are many little things you can do to help out with this. Things as simple as recycling or not wasting food, its hard to eprectiate what you have untill you see others that have lost it all. I have I've seen people who have been happy and far then lost it all because of war.

I've made eight trips so far and am incuraging you to come helpout with this uphill battle. I hope that I've shown you how important it is to help others, because I have found out that it only takes a simple deed and your on the right track. I hope you will join the Seagoing Cowboys soon.

Score: 4