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Three reasons Luke joined the SeagoingCowboy program was to help countries recover from the damage that happened in World War two. Another reason is so he can help the people that was hungry and their houses got damaged during the war. Also to take care of the aminals that they hade to transport by boat.

When Luke and his friend herd about what happened durin World War two they want to heip those countries that where ruine. So him and his friend Don signed up to be Seagoing Cowboy. Also in 1945 Luck and his friend Don received their orders to report to New Orleans. They arrived August 12 the day the Pacific war ended. They also got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W.Wooster.

The same day Don and Luke got their seaman's papers they got on a boat and headed yo Greece with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them. The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy he "says. When Luke was feeding the animals or something he almost fell over board but it was a good thing a piece of metle saved him. Luke wouldn't be able to do anything for a while because he has some broken ribs.

Conclusion: Even when u get hurt never give up on something u want to do or what your doing. Also it is good to help others if they need it or when they are hurt thats when they need you the most. Just like Luck and his friend Don they both went all the was to New Orleans to help others. They didn't think about themselves they thought about other people and there lives. Even tho Luke got hurt when he was on the boat on thing he didn't do was give up.

Score: 2