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venus is our twin planet and it has a variety of interesting festures. the author provides us with plenty information of how we could explore mars.

although the conditions in venus are different

and far more dangerous than the ones on earth there are some ways we could still study the amazing planet of venus. NASA alredy started these expeditions. so far they have failed due to the conditions of the planet, but as the author said there are some ways we could still study the planet. he gives us ideas and tells us that some of the ideas are alredy in progress. like the silicon carbide electronics have been tested and proven to able to ast up to a week in places like venus with high temperatures. a week could be enough for us to bring a smaple from venus where we could study in our labs. also the idea of bringing back old computers made out of gears is good too because they could be made in a way where they can stand the environment venus has because of its properties. also the fact that an old invention like these computers could hepl us this far into the future compared to when they were made is fascinating and should be given a try.

the planet that once could have been another "earth" is worht studying, it could answer a lot of questions and bring some ideas to our world. like the author said "our travels on earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation" he gave us enough ideas of why we should explore this planet. it will be a challenge but nothing we can't solve.

Score: 3