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Do I support the use of the Facial Action Coding System to read students' emotional expressions? Yes, I do. I support it because I think it could help teachers with their lessons by knowing if students are confused or bored. If teachers knew these things then they could adjust their lessons accordingly to make students more interested and make it easier to understand. It could also help with teen depression because schools would be able to help if they knew something was bothering someone.

Use of this technology in the classroom could help teachers and students in many ways. The biggest way is teachers would know if the sudents dont understand things or are bored and not interested. If teachers knew these things then they could adjust their lessons accordingly to make it easier to understand and more interesting. This would increase student grades and moral if they could understand things.

Another thing the use of this technology could help with is teen depression. Students are often afraid to talk to someone about their depression. With this technology, teachers would be able to see they are depressed and can talk to them. This would lower the teen suicide rate drasticly.

The use of Facial Action Coding System technology in the classroom is, in my opinion, a great idea. It could so much for students and teachers. By teachers knowing if students are confused and changing their lessons to help them understand, students would be more successful. Also, being able to detect depression would help students and then teen suicide rate.

Score: 3