Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers by, in paragraph 3 and 4. The explanation of the evidence from the artical that supports my calim would be in paragraph 5.

I will also be able to tell you how well the author supports his idea. Which is by, out of all the other paragraphs, he is actually writing all the main ideas and supporting his claim and idea in this whole artical. Also in paragraph 5 it says, "The national aeronautics and space administration (NASA) has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus". Also in paragraph 3 it says, "A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus". Plus, in paragraph 4 it states that (or askes that), "If our sister planet is so in hospitable, why are scientist even discussing further visits to its surface?". In paragraph 1 it states that, "Venus, sometimes called the "Evening Venus," is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple to evem an amature stragazer to spot'. Noe in paragraphn 2 it says that, "Often reffered to as earth's "twin," Venus is the closest planet to earth in term of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too." So now in paragraph 6, it states that "However, peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safley far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rending standards forms of photography amd videography ineffective." Plus, in paragraph 7 it states that, "NASA is working on other aprroaches to studing Venus." And the last paragraph which is paragraph 8 states that, "Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating eneavors."

Score: 2