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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.

The author says that Venus can be our nearest option for a planetary visit but

there are many challeneges to get to Venus, he says " Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size." he says that one day we can go to Venus if we feel like goign into an adventure but one of the dangers that the author mentions is that "The weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes . " This means that Venus is a planet full of danger

and that there are many things that someone can risk just by visiting.

In conclusion the author doesn't say many good reasons of going to Venus one of them is

that we should go to Venus because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimadating endeavors, but we can't just invest all the money in the project just because human the curiosity, with all the money that the program is going to invest in the project with can help people, we can make more jobs, businnesses

to give people the opportunity of having a job and having a bit of money on their pockets.

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