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i think Venus is a good thing to study about its actually a planet.its the sun planet from the sun.often referred to as Earth's "twin" Venus is the closest planet to earth. density and size , and occssionally the closest in distance too. Mars,Venus,and Earth our other planetry neighbor,orbit the sun at different speeds.the different speed mean sometimes we are closer to mars and othertimes to venus.venus is a value.peering venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safelty far above the planet can provide only limited in sight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere,rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's suface have lasted for 3 weeks in such conditions. Venus would aviod the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of thierway.at thirtyplus miles above the surface,tempertaurs would still tasty at ground 170 degress fahrenhiet ,air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth.

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