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I Am for the use of of Facial Action Coding System . I believe that this technology could potentially engage students in classrom activities for the computer would know exactly what interests them and what doesn't , I also believe this technology can make students feel better understood in the class room . This technology would also encourage students because they wouldn't be doing stuff they don't understand.

My evidence for this claim would be the fact that " A class room computer could recognize when a studentis becoming confused or bored , the it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor." This basically lets us know how the computer uses facial expressions to decode if the student understands the material

or not and wether he or she is engaged or bored as mentioned above .

The use of this technology could bring so many benefits to our society because it would truly allow students to bloom and learn at their best , it would change the lesson plan in an instant to something that suits the needs of each particular student , therefore making it less complicated for them to learn yet still progressing . This technology could make students feel better understood because they wouldnt be forced to do something that they dont understand where as to a regular classroom it would probably take the teacher a few days to change

the lesson plan and maybe at that point the student would be so discouraged becuase he could potentially be the only one that doesnt understand the material .

Therefore I believe we should embrace this technology in schools because while the whole world is progressing the education system hasn't changed a bit . I think education should progress with the rest of the whole world so why not embrace Facial Action Coding System in our schools to make them more efficient .

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