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New technology can be helpful to us. It can telll us when it is going to rain, it can tells us how long the Great Wall of China is, and it can even tell us about the would's population. There is no doublt that we have came along way from our acienters, but I doublt that we need a system that can identify our emotions. We do not need technology that can tell us student's emotions in a classroom, it would not make the world a better place.

The use of technology telling us student's emotion is useless, we do not need this in our world. We can easily use cameras to watch each student's reaction or emotion in a classroom, we abousloy should not spend billions of dollars on technology like that. The author states " your orbicularis oris tightens your lips to show anger", that is not a fact at all. Many people are able to to get angry without tightening their lips, they are able to hide their anger. The author also states that they have trouble describing each emotion, which means people could get confused if they are trying to read other people's emotion.

We should not spend billions of dollars on this type of technology, it is not useful to us. It will not make our lives easier, it would only complicate it our lives. We should be putting our time and money on technology that we do need such as making drinkable water or cars that do not use fuel. Those are technology that we do need. If we actually did want to read student's emotion in a class we could easily use cameras to study their actions and reactions in a classroom. We could also make them draw or write their emotions out. They could express themselves. We are not moving forward if we are using new technology to try and read student's emotions in a classroom.

Score: 3