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Luke Bomberger went on many adventures. He helped cattle animals and people in need. On his adventures, Luke saw many historic landmarks. He saw things such as the Acropolis in Greece and the Panama Canal. On his way back from his trip, he usually played games. He had a fun time.

Luke Bomberger had two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank. One day, his friend, Don Reist, invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime. To help countries in need to get food supplies, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) and they hired "sea cowboys" to help countries in need. It was 1945 and the end of World War II in Europe when Luke and Don signed up to become a sea cowboy.

In August 1945, Luke and Don received orders to get a boat in New Orleans. They boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster and headed for Greece. On the way, Luke turned 18, which ment he could be drafted for military service. When the military found out that Luke was a sea cowboy, they decided to let him do that for service. Luke went many places such as Greece, Crete, Panama, and Italy. He spent the rest of his life at his home.

Sea cowboys get to go lots of places, according to the text above. Luke went to places such as Panama and Italy. Why don't you sign up to be a sea cowboy? Sea cowboys get to travel the seas and see different places. Sea cowboys help people. Sea cowboys travel. I don't see why you shouldn't become a sea cowboy.

Sea cowboys helped many people in the 1940's. Luke Bomberger traveled many places and helped many people. He is a legend among the sea cowboys. Sea cowboys got to see many places and different countries. Sea cowboys helped the military. Sea cowboys got to go down the Panama canal and ride on boats through the canals in Italy. You should become a sea cowboy too.

Score: 3