Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
The way the author suports his idea is good enough to understand the danger and consequences of it. starting off on paragraph 1 the author let's us know that venus is

the secound planet from our sun. He also let's us know that venus is simple to see from distance but its every challenging to examine when you're closely. The author lets us know earth and mars are is other door neighboors. The author tells us that venus is hard to examine being close to it due to high tempeures.

The author also tells us that there haven't been a spacecraft that has touched down on venus for more than 3 decades. The author supports this with saying that spacecrafts only survive a few hours. meanig that venus is a very hot planet which makes it hard for humans to study it. NASA is working on electronics made of slilicon for us to be able to study venus.

The author supports the idea in every way he could when he said it was challenging for humans to study venus. He let's us know why and how he mentions in paragraph 3 that the atmosphere is thick of almost 97 carbot dioxide.

He also tells us that tempeture avarage aare over 800 degrees fahrenheit letting us know humans can't suprt that type of tempeture. He also calls out some solutions on how humans could live in venus but he let's us know that the conditions would be bad but that it is survivable.

The author let's us know in parageraph 7 that NASA is working on simplified electonics made of silicon. And that the ones that have been made have lasted about 3 weeks in such conditions . He also let's us know that another project is looking back to an old technolgy called mechanical comuters. He explains that these computers were used back in world war ll they were very important he let's us know that it did not require electronics at all he explains mddern comuters are more delicated. what the author is saying that these computers are resistant compared to the compiuters we use now in days the author explains his view and supports it in every paragraph.

Score: 3