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Shuold we join The UNRRA

In this passage a Cowboy who rode the waves Luke was a seagoing cowboy. Luke Bomberger is his full name. There are many reasons why Luke Bomberger join the program to participate in the seagoing Cowboys. Luke was a awesome seagoing cowboy.

My first reson i think Luke join the program was because he got to take trips to alot of countrys to help animals. Luke thought it was fun being a segoing cowboy. Luke also found time yo have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Another reason he join the program, because he knew it was a opportunity of a lifetime. Luke help other countrys with thier needs and to provide food.

My second reason why he wanted to be a seagoing cowboy is because he wanted to help countrys animals, and be a great man. Luke claims that the cattle boat trips were an unbelievalbe opportunity for a small-town boy", he says. Besides helping people Luke had the side benefit of seeing Europe and china.

My third and final reason is he made about 16 times he crossed the Alantic ocean,and pacific ocean twice. Luke And Don both signed up for UNRRNA (the united nations Relief and Rehabilition Administration). Don is Luke friend that help him to get to be a seagoing cowboy. Don Resit is his name he invited Luke to go to Europe on a cattle boat. It took them some time to take tips.

Inconculsoin This was a Good passage, I think it kind of wanted me to be a seagoing cowboy but only if i was in back in the old day. Luke was a great

seagoing cowboy he had the most trips of any seagoing cowboy witch was nine trips.Luke liked to help animals he also liked to help people get thier food and he sometimes provides for them witch he does anyway. Luke was Maybe one of the top best people of being a seagoin cowboy.

Score: 3