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Venus is very easy for one to see for Earth. You've probably seen it before, but thought it was a star. Thats why Venus is known as the "Evening Star" even though its a planet. Venus is also known as the sister planet to Earths. Venus is also the hottest planet in our solar system

even though Venus is hotter than Earth, it is explected that at one point Venus used to be mostly made up of water. They have made missions to Venus and with the little futage that they get in the short period of time the the robot can survive on Venus, they can say that it is try the Venus was once made up of mostly water, just like Earth. This is what makes Venus so woth studying. We have yet to find a planet that one day could have look just like ours. There is clear evidence that Venus once has water on its surface and you can tell because of the mountains that have been made and the cayons that look just like ours here on Earth.

With that being said i think that they should keep studying Venus and fining more stuff out about it. It is crazy to think that there was once a planet out there that looks like ours does today. For people in that line of work i know for a fact that this kind of dicoveries is why they do there job and why they are in it in the first place. Even if it is just a small victory like Venus, it gives us all hope that maybe we aren't lone.

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