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when someone driveless on cars so people can't buy them so they won't get money to pay for the cars so it can like when somebody is like looking at them driving cars. So it effeat them by trying to get cars so when ethey see that they can't get them cars are drivingless to other people they can get to pay for the cars for when tghe cars. Get people to buy them it's going to be hard for them to get one that they want for their self so when people get their cars they always want they can alll ways pay for them if they have to get one if they want if you look at somebody with a car you would say i want that car to but if they don't have no more you can't do nothing to get the car you want in your life for cars it's going to be hard for them to come up with something they want to do for them so when it come to cars you can't get your mine off of it till you get the car you want.

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