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Would being in a driveless car be fun? yes, but its also dangerous. Let me tell you why. Say you had a bad day or something and you just want to get rid of the pain and your only coping skill is drinking,

but you don't want to drink at home. So you drink in the car. why? because for one you don't like drinking in front of your children an why not drink in the car it gives you silence from all the loud noise the kids be making at home & you don't have to drive because the car drives itself. Okay so you stop by the liquor store and buy some 1800 remy and vodka. Now you in the car slowly drinking your problems away, temporarily though because everybody knows alcohol & drugs is not a permanent solution, But you in the car drinking and the more you drink the stronger the urge of wanting to kill your gets. You won't stop because you feel like you can drown the feelings in alcohol but out of no where you hit a big 18 wheel semi and you die. Moral of the story is if that car wouldn't have never been driveless that person probably would still be alive and at home with his kids, But since he wasn't trying to show his children bad habits and he bought that new driveless car. He felt like he was safe enough but you can never be to safe. remember that.

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