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Have you ever been in a class and the lesson is so boring but the teacher doesnt know and you cant just go up to her face and tell her this is boring? With a new technology called Facial Action Coding System it enables computers to identify human emotions. Say youre in a boring class and you cant tell the teacher its boring, with the new technology the teacher will realize her lessons boring and hopefully attempt to change things up. This new technology could also save lives, say theres someone who very sad everyday but wheneverr anyone asks he asks all cheerful because he doesnt want anyone in his business, you could use the Facial Action Coding System to see if hes sad and help him out so he wont attempt anything awful in the future. With the facial Action coding system we can see everyones emotions from the past like wouldnt you like to see what a past president or any past heroes like Martin Luther King Junior's emotions were?

We're technologically advancing so much to where we are able to make items like the Facial Action Coding System. We have come so far, its honestly amazing what we can do with technology, not only is this new technology very helpful but its valuable and fun for anyone to use. This technology could be used as a serious thing or as a fun item.

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