Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
How would you like to join the Seagoing Cowboys,I think you sould join the Seagoing Cowboys because you get to go all around the world. you can also have lots of fun.

First I think you should join Seagoing Cowboys bacause you can go all around

the world. For example, the subtitle states "Luke Bomberger had been over the alantic ocean sixteen times and the pacific two times. Another example says in paragraph 4 that when he was discharged in 1947, Luke Bomberger had already made nine trips that was more than any Seagoing Cowboy. Luke was only eighteen when he first went to Greece.

Lastly, I think you should join because you can have lots of fun with your friends. In paragraph 8 the text talkes about how they had fun after unloading animals off the boat. They did thing such as playing table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and more. Also games helped pass the time.

I think these paragraphs should have inspired and persuaded you to join the Seagoing Cowboys program.

Score: 2