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When someone hears the word Venus, they don't think as it as a planet, but it is a planet. It is the second planet from the sun. Venus could led us to an equal intimidating endeavors.

In paragraph 4, it says that Venus may once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus had oceans and life on it like earth does now. It had moutains, valleys, and craters. Now no space craft can survive the landing for more than a few hours, like paragraph 2 says.

In paragraph 5, it says that they might send people to Vensus, but in a safe way. The NASA'S possible solution for it to be safe from the surface is to make them float above the fray. It won't be easy it says in paragraph 5, but it will be a challenge and survivable for humans.

Hoving over the planet can provide limited insight on ground conditions, as it says in paragraph 6. Most light cannot penetrate the dense atmossphere, rendering stanard forms of photography and videography ineffective. They can't take things from distance. In paragraph 6 it says that researchers are working on allowing mechines to last longer to get the meaning knowledge of Venus.

Venus is a planet, but visting it could be dangerous in some cases. Trying to land on Venus and surviving will be a challenge for the people, but they can figure it out so they will survive.

Score: 3