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Lukes point of veiw of convincing others to participate in the seagoing cowboys program was sotomething that luke wanted to do and he wanted to try and inspire other to also participate in the seagoing cowboys program. And enjoy it as much as he does.

The passage states," It made me more aware of people of other contries and their needs''. The passage also states, " And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. So those are impotant details to support my anwser. So that proves why luke point of veiw of convincing others to participate in the seagoing cowboys program.

The author also states,'' But being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adveture for Luke Bomberger.'' The author also states, '' It opened up the world to him.'' So that are some more important details. So that proves why luke was convincing others to participate in the seagoing cowboys program.

Even though it may take alot of time to go places to places many people may not like having long trips. The text states,'' It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the united States and a month to get too china.'' THe passage also states,'' They took cre of animals and bales of hay and bags of oats had to pull up from the lower holds of the ship. So those are some more details. So that proves again why luke keeps on convincing them to participate in the seagoing program, if they didn't want to they didn't have to.

So that's why it's really lukes idea and kind of there's to choose from . So that's my anwser for the question and there's many details in the passage that's support many anwsers.

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