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I think this Facial Action Coding System would be very helpful in classroom. Since it can accurately read emotions, I think it will be able to benefit students. I thinks the use of this in a classroom is very valuable in a class room.

I'm for the value of using this technology for reading students' emotional expresseion. In paragraph 6, it saids that " A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instuctor. " If the computer could do that, I think many students would be able to understand lesson and effectively learn more. Since the computer would be modifying the lesson to help you, it would be a lot easier to learn than only being taught one way. I also think that if classrooms had this

students will be able to comprehend what they have been taught and do well on test.

In conclusion, I think that this would a very positive outcome if implemented in the school systems. It would probably help improve many grades and students will have an easy time learning. If FACS (Facial Action Coding System) ever becomes official, it should be introduce to school systems. That is why I think this technology would be valuable in the classroom.

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