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if we look back at time in the united states young people were thrilled to be able to drive. but in more recent years studies show that the young in the united states dont really have the same thrill anymore actually there really not interested at all they find alternative ways to get to were there going like public transportation carpooling biking or just good old walking and really its not a bad idea at all if we can get others in the US to limiting the use if there cars it could do the world a lotta good

If you take a look at Colombia for instience they have a day where in bogota 7 million people are banned using there cars for a day they find alternatives to get around like biking hiking walking busses and taxi cabs doing this is a good way to stop air polluion and also to promote alternatives transportation and if people violate it theres a fine of $25 a bussiness man by the name of Carlos Arturo Plaza says "its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution"

in Germany theres one suburb that carry on's with lives without cars street parking driveways and home garages are grenrally forbidden Vaubans streets are completly car free except the main thoroughfare where theres a tram that takes them downtown in this expermintal upscale town on the outskirts of freiburg car ownership is actually allowed but theres only 2 places to park there are large garages at the edge of the development where a car onwer buys a space for $40,000 along with a home due to the outrageous price 70 percent of the families that live in Vauban dont own cars and 57 percent sold there cars to move Vauban in clousion i think if we could all take a page from everybodys book i truely think we could spread awareness and maybe cut down or even get rid of most of the air polution not just in the united states or columbia or in germany...but get rid of air pollution in the whole intire world

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