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Going to Venus without any complications would be a dream. To travel there and just be able to land on it's surface without any damage would be a miracle. If you're travelig to any planet it's going to be difficult, but if you're travelling to Venus that's a whole other story.

The author knows the dangers and problems that could occor, such as: the temetures being too extreme, the time it would take to get there and the limited insight on ground condistions. But dispite these problems he's still finding ways to pursue the idea of people goung to Venus. Theyr're working on a new study that has to do with silicon carbinate electronics, and putting them in a chamber to simulate the effects of the surface on Venus. The electronics only hold up to three weeks, but they still haven't given up. They've even started to look back at mechanical computers, these use levers and gears to opporate. They've been looking at these again because, you couldn't bring a normal laptop or computer up there because the temetures are so extreme.

In concussion, I think the author does support his idea. He gives reason why it would be dangerous, but also tells us that it would be worth it. The author says that the dangers and doubts shouldn't limit us, and we should be using our imagination for what could happen in the future.

Score: 3