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The Venus are not safe, there are the reasion why the NASA are challenging the Venus. The author idea was that studing the planet Venus are to know everything about this planet and show how bad it could be. There are none of the single spaceship has touched down on Venus. There are somthing wrong in the Venus or somthing bad about it.

In the Venus's atmosphere there are the clouds of highly corrosive acid. A thick atmospher of the Venus are almost 97 percent carben dioxide and on this planet surface its was 800 degrees. The Venus has erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. In this peace of evidence in the artical it's shows whats it like in the Venus and how danger its can be or whats it like.

The temperatures of Venus its around 170 degrees Fahrenheit thats means it hotter in the Venus. There are another ways thats the spaceship can be safely its cam be far above the planet not to close to the planets. In this artical the scientists and the researchers how to figer out how to get close to the Venus and the also study about the Venus.

The challenge of Exploring Venus can be dangrause to be there: its can be hotter, the weather, or maybe the tempertuer. The way the Venus can be is like earth; the people say that the Venus and Earth could be alike. In the artical the author support his idea was the Venus is harder to exploring and in earth its like easer, but the earth can had bad weather like Venus.

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