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The author suggest that studying venus is a worthy pursuit depite the danger it persents. No one has travle to Venus in over three decade. In order to know what up there we need samples in which we can't get. venus is in unknown planted that we seem to know half way a lot about. Of course scientist want to explore venenus that why they are in the process if created a simlater to reach venus.

Venus in the earth are closer then you might think. Venus the close planted in earth terms density and size, and occasionally the close in distance too. Earth, venus and mars are our other planetary neighbor. If you think about it venus is like right around the conner. So close but yet so far venus is way diffent then earth,and mars that why it hard to travle there.

The danger of venus. Numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans ro study, despite it's proximity to us. The atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus which is very danger for us human to go upon on. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though mercury is closer to our sun.

Venus is a dangerest plantet but want to be explore the most. More importantly, researchers cannot take sqample of rock, gass or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand venus would need to get up close and personal depite the risks.

On the other hand scientists even discussing faurther visits to its surface. Long ago, venus was probably cover largely with oceans and could have surpported various forms of life just like earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. furthermore. Returning to venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making a mission both safe and scientifically productive. Not easy conditions, but it survive for humans.

Venus and a dangerst and also the safest place to travle. Venus is a mystireser place that makes your mind qustion the world around us. If we get to experice venus on day then why not mercury, or pluto these are a unknown planted that we a the people need to intise are mind on. We need to explory tyhe unknown of the world and around us. what can't america can't. the unknown is closer then you might think.

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