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The reasons you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program is because you see unique places, travel and lots there are lots of oppertunities. You can have lots of fun in this program. It almost becomes like its not a job because there are so many things you can enjoy.

In this program you get to see so many unique and beautiful places. I got to see the Acropolis in Greece which was very special. I also got to see a couple more which are, Panama Canal in china, and a excavated castle in Crete. I think anybody would want to see those places. As you see these you will never forget and make great memories like I did.

Also in this program you get to travel to so many marvoules places. I got to go across the Atlantic Ocean 16 times! Thats crazy! I also went across the Pacific Ocean twice. I also got to go to some different countrys. Right before I turned Eight teen I went to Greece. I also got to see Europe and China. Guess what, I went to even more places! I got to go to Venice, Italy and Crete to. This is a great program for you if you like traveling.

Finally there are so many oppertunities in the Seagoing Cowboys program. You get to see so many places, and see things so many things, and do things you never thought you would as a little kid. It could also change how you act and show respect. After you go through this progam you will be a totally different person. In a good way. It can show you how to be respectful, and whatever else you need.

In conclusion chose the Seagoing Cowboys program. You get to see things you never thought of seeing. You also get to travel all over the world. Don't forget all the oppertunities this program can offer. Come to this program if you want to help our world. Chose Seagoing Cowboys.

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