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Have you ever wondered how the job of a Seagoing Cowboy would be like? Hello my name is Luke and I will tell you why you should become a Seagoing Cowboy. I will tell you the many adventures I had as a Seagoing Cowboy. I will tell you some reasons you should become a Seagoing Cowboy. You might find out that you had the best job of your life.

First, I wil tell you the reasons why you should join the program. It was a unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy, (He mentioned in paragraph 4) not only did I help people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe,China, and Acropolis in Greece which was special. I also got to care for animals (as mentioned in paragraph 6). Helping out at aunt Katie's farm prepared me for hard work but not for the dangers of the sea (as mentioned in paragraph 7).

When I was serving as a nightman on my second trip, I still checked on the animals every hour (as mentioned in paragraph 7). One rainy night I injured my ribs but didn't fly off the ship and though I still couldn't work for a few days I was happy to be alive (as mentioned in paragraph 7). I had a fun time on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The other cowboys and I played baseball and Volleyball in the empty holds where the animals had been housed (as mentioned in paragaph 8). I'm grateful for the opportunity and I t made me more aware of other people of other countries and their needs (as mentioned in paragraph 9).

In conclusion should join this program because of the sight seeing and fun you'll have. You could maybe have fun with the animals you are taking care of. You could have fun after you are done taking animals. You can also go sight seeing. there are so many thing to enjoy if you join the Seagoing Cowboy program.

Score: 3