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Did you know there was a face on Mars? We have known the face was on Mars since 1976. This could tell us that there is other life on other planets than just Earth.

The text in paragraph one says, "An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cmeras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia." This shows that they found something that looked similar to a face on Mars. But the text in paragraph eight states, "Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform." This shows that they assumed that there was life on Mars just by seeing that landform that looked similar to a face.

The evidence from paragraph eight shows that you can't always believe what you read anywhere, because it may not always be true. People just saw something that looked like a face and assumed it was, but didn't really know.

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