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World War ll was over in Europe and many countries were left in ruins in 1945. To help these countries recover their food supplies,animald and more,44 nations joined together and formed a UNRRA. The UNRRA stands for the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration. The UNRRA hired "Seagoing Cowboys" to take care of the animals that were shipped overseas. Like horses, young cows, and mules. So my friend and I signed up. We think you should sign up too.

The UNRRA was hiring "Seagoing Cowboys". This was a chance in a lifetime. It is good to join the UNRRA,because you help out people. It also helps you see new places you never been to. It helps you see new things. It a chance of a lifetime. You can buy things from every place you go too. You can tour around places. You can explore that new pace and you can also meet new people or friends. Maybe even if friends of your moved somwhere else you would probably go there country and see them.

It takes about two weeks to get from the Atlantic Ocean to the eastern cost of the United States,and a month to get to China. Yes that might be awhile,but you can still do things on the boat. You also have to take care of the animals. You have to feed and watered two or three times a day. There is also a thing called night watchman. The night watchman has to check on the animals every hour. Just because you have work dosen't mean you don't have time to have fun. You can play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds. You could also play table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing,reading, and whittling. The games helped pass the time.

I am just saying that you should sign up. Even though you have to do work you cant still have fun. You can visit new countries. You can tour around buildings. You can also explore the country. You can do many things if you sign up. You also help people if you sign up. By helping ship animals, food, supplies and many more. You wouldn't only be helping one person you'd be helping people.

Score: 4