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The Challenge of Exploring Venus

In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus", the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the high pressure and extremely hot surface. The author suggests that us human can survive on Venus if there are some innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to bring more knowledge about Venus.

The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has some promising ideas for sending human to study Venus. One of their idea was that if a blimp-like vehicle hovering above 30 miles can avoid the unfriendly ground condition of Venus. But, monitoring Venus from a ship orbitting safely above the planet can only provide so little information about ground conditions. NASA saw the issue and have developed "some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions" (Paragraph 7). NASA was able to see how they can improve such technology to last even longer in difficult conditions. By improving technologies that they already had, NASA can show the world more possibilities of living on another planet, that can help prevent humanity from overpopulation and explore a whole new world.

Overall, despite the challenging condition Venus has brought upon, human curiosity will likely to lead us to more incredible innovations. New innovations can help human adapt in different challenging environment much easier, bringing new possibilities beyond the expectations.

Score: 3