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If you join the Seagoing Cowboys you will have an unbelivable experience you will have gone to places you probably have never been to, see things that are amazing and you have not seen, and even learn about diffrent cultures, and learn the process of the job while still having fun with your crew. Also making new friends along the way, changing the world for the better, changing your personality into a even better one, and makeing you aware of things that you wouldn't have known about before.

Becoming a Seagoning Cowboy will be greatful with some unbelivable experiences like helping countries recover from war and even helping with food supplies, animals,and more.Joining will also let you explore diffrent places like Greece, China, Europe, Venice, and Italy but you will also learn about there cultures like the Greece culture. During this you can also play games with your crew like baseball, volleyball, table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. While doing all this unbelivable stuff you also get to learn the process of the job and that could also help you in your later job. During this all you get more aware of other countries and their needs and that could lead you to do amazing things and inspire the world to do these unbelivable things. These are some reasons to join the program of the Seagoing Cowboys.

Although you risk your life doing this as you can see you do things that you would have probably never been able to do before like learning diffrent things about diffrent cultures while still having fun on the job.You even see the difficultes of the other countries and trying to fix their difficultes by bringing food supplies witch will make you nice and not become senceliss or mean to diffrent people who aren't like you. You also get to visit all over the world like Greece, China and many other places and help change the world for the better. This is why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys.

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