Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
the author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author suggestion means that its way interesting to study instead of worring about he dangers it could cause. In paragraph 3 it says that the venus are far mor extreme than anything humans encounter on earth such as environment would crush even a submerine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. And he talks about how interesting the venus is. It says venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though mercury is closer to our sun. In paragraph 4 the author says that why are scientist even discussing further visits to its surface. In this paragraph he tells us about how dangerouse venus is to our planet. it says various forms of life on earth. Today venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. Now the NASA are sending humans to study venus. But in paragraph 5 it says NASAs possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. But however NASA decided to work on other approaches to studying venus. There example is to simplify electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the choas of venus surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions(paragraph 7). And honesty my oppinion i think that it seems dangerouse and interesting at the same time but still risky to study abour or examine

Score: 2