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I think that we should use facial recognition in school. There are many possibilities to what we could use the technology for. We can (like the article says) use it to let computers help us when we are confused. It can also help companies to get their ads out there. We can us it in animation

Computers can help us when we are confused by offering help or changing the lesson. If a computer can see if we are confused then everyone will be helped. Students will be able to know how to do what they don't get. Teachers will be able to see what they need to teach better for the whole class.

Companies can get their ads out there easier based on a person's reaction to the ad. If we smile at an ad we like then the computer will know to give us ads similar to that. If we look upset at an ad then the computer knows we don't want to see it. Finally companiies will have more profit because we see what we like.

Animators can use actual faces to give emotions to digital ones. It would make watching animated shows much more enjoyable. It would really help the animation industry.

In conclusion the expression recognition system could greatly helpmm us all. Teachers and students will be able to give/recieve help. The population will see the ads they want to see. And finally animators will be able to make animations more lively.

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