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The face on Mars could never be created by aliens if it had then NASA would

have seen an alien by now this proves that the face had to be a natural cause. Jim Garvin head cheif of science for NASA Mars Exploration Program explained that even he thought it was a natural cause like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.

The landform he is talking about is a lava dome that is an isolated mesa that has about the same length as the Face on Mars. Jim and his workers have made some success in getting some good photos the first time they tried it, it was winter time on Earth so Mars had been covered with wispy clouds that covered some of the face up. The scientists have worked hard but stopped taking photos after two years on April 8, 200l it was summer time so Mars had been the clearest it could have been.

They took the photos with a camera of absolute maximum resolution the pixels comparedto the 43 meters in 1976, they were 1.56 meters in 2001. The truth is, is that the Face on Mars is a natural cause on April 5,1998 was the first photos that the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia. Michael Malin's team took photos ten times sharper then the original Viking photos to prove a natural cause. From 1976 to 2001 the new photos prove with the help of there new 3D altimetry NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft revealed the Face on Mars was really a mesa.

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