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Studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite how dangeous it may be. The author states many pros and cons about studying venus. Venus is much like earth. In paragraph 1 it states "Often referred to as earths "twin".

One of the pros is that we could get more information about venus. According to paragraph 8, "... should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation." I personally think that if we found a way to land on venus and study the rocks and gasses, then we could find new things that we dont have here on earth. We will eventually find a way to land on venus and study all the organisms if any. NASA is working on a new ship to send on venus right now. So far it has survived the climate for 3 weeks.

A con is that it can be very dangerous because we have no idea what gasses or rocks venus might be made up of. In paragraph 2 it states "...since no spacecraft survived the landing for more and a few hours." Venus can be very dangerous. We can only see what its made of by studying it from far away. Even with NASA's technology we still have trouble seeing venus up close because of the atmosphere it is made up of.

Venus has many pros and cons, but we will eventually find a way to land and collect samples. Scientist are finding new ways of technology to help with that problem.

Score: 3