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In this world everything is built up around people with mixed emotions,so the thought of being able to see how someone is emotions is an amazing thing.

The reasoing for this is that it can lead to the explanation of why people do certain things in life, such as killing, other things.This also good because of you will ik whether to talk to a person and you can know how they are feeling.

All of this is can determine different this refer to to the world but think of a world of achieving happiness. The reason why this this could happen is because of the fact people do like others to notices that they are sad or are feeling down. So they might try and find something which makes them happy so that they could change there emotion. And if its known that a person not happy they would try everything they could do change that.

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