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People all over the world would love to travel to Venus; to learn new things about the planet, and what it actually looks like, but it is very dangerous. Venus may be very cool looking and theres so much to learn about it; things you might of not of known. It may be to impossible to tavel to this planet, there are to many dangerous things that happen and it would not be safe. In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author supports their idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author gives so much information about Venus and the dangers, and to study it than to visit the planet is safer.

Even though Venus looks very cool looking and fun to learn about, well it is, but it would not be safe to travel to Venus. The author in this article gives a lot of information about venus such as, the goods and the bads, and why and why not one should travel to that planet. In the aticle "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author states, "Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system." Venus is dangerous, it is very hot and has the hottest surface out of all the planets. The author supports their suggestion by putting out there the fact of how hot Venus is, and that studying Venus is a worthly pursuit.

Venus looks very cool and most people wish they could travel there, but it wouldn't be such a good idea. Venus is very dangerou in many ways and you wouldn't be able to be by it in a spaceship, it's far from fun to visit. Studying Venus gives you a lot more information then to visit and might be able to make it back. In the article "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthly pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports their idea by giving information about Venus and the dangers that it has.

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