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It is a dangers job but so me of them know how to work with it and work their way around it so they don't get hurt at all , and in the text it says that " Modern computer are enormously powerful,and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions " , that was found in paragarh 7.

The venus has the hottest surface temperature more then other planet in the solar

it says in the text that " Venus

has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though mercury is closer to our sun".

Beside all them things the waether

is bad because they have big and powerful earthquakes and scary lightning , and it says that in the text " Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, amd frequent lightning stikes to probes to land onits surface",

Score: 1