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The author did a great job to explain "The challenge of Exploring Venus" They said its dngerous because of the sulfuric acid and the carbon dioxide clouds. According to the article it is impossible to land a space craft, because it won't survive. "A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanks venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's Atmosphere. my thesis statement was it is challangeing until you start.

The reason i said that was that NASA knew it was going to be interesting and difficult to explore becuase of how the atmosphere is built. They kept giving example of how diffecult it would be to send a rover to Venus. "but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions. Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable or melting tin" There just saying its gonna be harder than whet it looks like.

in conclusion it is going to be a tidious, challenging and interesting work to get a rover to Venus. In the article it said it was gonna be dangerous but they should keep exploring.

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