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The Challenge of Exploring Venus, why is it hard for us to explore. Venus is challenging becasue the surface of its planet has 97 pecent of carbon dixoide and the temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and also has volcanos, powerful earthquakes, and freqent lighting strikes. Venus is like Earth's twin beacuse back in the day Venus had large oceans and could have supported various forms of life. Thats why it's hard for us to get on that planet and study it further more. The three important themes in this passage is that why are scientists discussing futher more vists to this planet, why is it challenging for us to get on that planet, and how Earth and Venus are alike or twins.

One important theme in the passage is that why are scientists discussing futher more vists to this planet. "Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth and Today the planet has familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.(author,4)" The scientists believe that Venus can have life on that planet and possible live there. It did have what we have today like oceans, mountains, and valleys. This is important beacause one day we could

have planetay visit there.

One important event in the passage is that why is it challenging for us to get on that planet. "The planet's atmosphere of almost 97 percent is carbon dixoide blankets Venus and also the temperature average is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.(author,3)" This planet is bad to visit because it has like eruting volcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frerquant lighting strikes. This is important beacuse the planet is going to be a challenging planet to get on.

One important theme in the passage is how are Earth and Venus alike or twins. " Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.(author,2)" Venus could of had life on that planet beacuse it it had oceans and other stuff like our planet. This is important beacuse it is almost like our planet.

How are Earth and Venus alike or twins, why is it challenging for us to get on that planet, and why are scientists discussing futher more visits to this planet, this is the three important themes in the passage.

Score: 3