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The Challenge of Exploring Venos the author suggestions of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it present beause, it's been more than three decades that a spaceship has landed on Venus. Going to the Venus and exploring it is a very good challenge but then again it would be a waist of whole bunch of things if we sent a space ship and itdont last long. Spaceships be at risk then sending it to Venus because, its the closest planet to us and yet the most hottest planet. "On the planet , tempertures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosheric pressure is 90 times greater that what we experience on our own planet. There are some features on Venus that are that same one that you can find on our planet. "The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar feature such as valeys, mountains, and craters. The challange of going to venus is a mission .

The going to Venus challenge is something you realy want to think about. There can be lost in money and in time. Studys have showed that spaceships can make it there but can't really make it back beause of the conditions in Venus. "Venusian geology and weather presents additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightnig strickes to probs seeking to land on its surface". Venus is a mission because theres a lot of things to worry about. Venus is a whole nother planet with a bunch of diffrent things on it to be discovered.

The Challenge of Exploring Venus is a great idea because a bunch of new things can be discovered. But the question is do we have the right tools, the right spaceship, and the right technology to make it there and back? Yes its easy to say we are going to Venus but can we make it back? Going to Venus is worth it there a lot of things to be discovered. The author needs to add more on how this could be acomplished. What it takes for this to happen?

Score: 3