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In my opinion, I think the author is right because if you do not get out of your comfort zone then when will you experience something fun and cool. Never right exactly if you want to do it then do it and don not let anyone stop you from reaching your dreams. What you think of yourself is better then what others think of you. Be you and if you want to try something new like studying Venus because if its a worthy persuit it can be good for you because you may learn new things you have never been able to learn. What if one day they send you into space or Venus to check out you can not be scared because there are times when you get scared and that messes all your plans up and you back out. That can be good and bad, it can be good when you know you will be doing something bad but it can be bad because you will not learn from your mistake. Do not regret things learn from them and thats how you move on in life. LIke the author said in paragraph 8 "Striving to meet the challenge" honestly if you want to become something you have to take the chance and not let anything or anyone slow you do. If you are happy with yourself and what you are going to do be confident and believe in your self ALWAYS. Strive for what you want and if one day you decide you want to go into space and go see Venus then do it because nothing is impossible you are able to do it like anyone else can. Be true to yourself and do what you want.

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