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The other is presenting the dangerous of venus. Exploring venus can be very dangerous because of high tempetures and air can be like preasure of below sea level. People never make it there becasue of preasure and tempeture its avery risky and dangerous job to do. On the other hand Venus has value not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also intimidating endeavors. scientist still dont know what the safest way to get up there without anyone dying.

But eventually they will have what it takes and will get up there like champions. In the world we are living today anything is possible you can be whatever you want but as long as you try hard and suceed on what your working on. others wont care but these scientist will do there best to explore venus and get every bit out of it.

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