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"Unmasking the Face on Mars"

Was the Face created by aliens or was it just a natural landfrom on the region of the Red Planet Cydonia?

So, many question about the Face and how it was created.

But, I think personally it was a natural landform from the planet ,but my friend thinks it was created by aliens.

In my passage, im going to talk about and convince you and my friend that the Face was made by a natural landform.

The Face, was a natural landform, I know this for a fact. I know this because on April 5, 1998, when the Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) flew over the Red Planet Cydonia.

They caputured a picture ten times sharper then the original Viking photos.

When, they caputured the right photo the first image appeared on a JPL website and it revealed that the Face was natural landform after all.

They didn't find any alien monument that would lead to the Face being created by aliens.

After, all those picture some people were sill not satisified people still thought it was created by aliens.

So, the mission controlled prepared another look to make sure that it was created by a natural landform.

Then on April 8,2001 it was a cloudless summer day on the Red Planet.

The Mars Global Surveyor drew a closer look which lead to what the picture actually showed.

The picture was the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa some landforms that were common around the America West.

A lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa.

So, you see the Face was really a natural landform from the beginning.

After, all that research,pictures,credits, and even second thoughts it still came out to be created by a natural landform not a alien.

Thats my opinion and I supported it.

Score: 3