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These are the resons why you should join the program and be a

Seagoing cowboy. You get to see a lot of new things you never seen before!

You should join the program, because you get to discover lots of

new places. For example, I seen Europe and I seen China. I know this because in the story it states," I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China."

Next,You should

join this program, because you get to see new things. For instance i could of seen The Acropolis in Greece. Also, I toured an excavated casle in Crete at the Panama Canal. I know this because in the story it says," But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special," he says. "So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water." Luke also toured a excavated casle in Crete and marvelled at the Panama Canal on his way to china."

You also should join this program, because you have lots of fun. For example you can play games on the ship. I know this because in the text it states," Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played basevball and vollyball games in the emty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time."

Finally, you should join this program, because it opens up the world to you

and it makes you wanna help each other. I know this because in the text it says," But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adveture for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him. "I'm grateful for the opportunity," he says. "It made me more aware of people of other countries and thier needs." And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years."

Thats why you should join this program, you get to discover new places and new things. You get to have fun and play games. Also, it opens the world to you.

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