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Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy is an amazing opprituinity.

You can see some of the most amazing things that you never thought you would ever see in a million years.

Joining means your putting yourself in a postion that you have to take seriously, but of course you need to make sure you have fun along the way.

If you join the Seagoing Cowboys you could see Countries like China, Europe and more.

In pharagraph 2 it states that when you become a Seagoing Cowboy you take care of horses, young cows, and mules that are being shipped over seas.

You'll make new friends along the way, too!

Pharagraph 7 explains how Luke, a Seagoing Cowboy himself, was ready for this hard work mostly because he helped his aunt on her farm as a boy.

Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy changes a persons life.

When they see all the amazing sights: caring for the animals and, how they are making new friends, and caring for others.

If you join you will see how much being a Seagoing Cowboy may change your life.

By taking on the responsiblitiy of taking care for the animals and others.

It could just change your life too!

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