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The challenge of exploring venus may sound dangerous to humans but also intersiting to explore. Maybe could see why its called "twin" or how its like in venus. In the text it shows how earth and venus are alike "venus is the closest planet to earth in terms in density and size".Knowing is almost alike to earth seems worth going and risking to land on venus or at least try too. They say that its hard to land on venus cause of the heat and the carbon dioxide

in the text it says "a thick atmophere of almlst 97 percent".

It may cause some danger for humans but we could invent technolgy to go to venus and land safe without somthing bad happening. NASA says they are planing to visit venus and not land on it they plan on flying above the fray.This could also be somewhat safe for humans and they will still see whats its like on venus. In the text it shows how this could be possible "NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray" . Also another reason it could be possible is because in the text it says jets fly over to get away storms this means they could fly above the fray of venus. And also us humans can torlrate some temperatures before it gets too hot in the text it says "still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit" "but survivable for humans ". This visit has pros and cons it could be a good idea and also bad for humans

Score: 2