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Some people have never thought about the plant Venus,but it is closer to our plant then any other plant. The author says why people should explor the plant Venus,but the exploring it will be dangers. The author says that the plant Venus is sometimes referred as Earth's twin. Also the author says that the plant Venus is about 170 degrees Fahrenheit it you go to Venus. Also in the article Venus has never been visted since three decades.

First, the author supports his idea by saying that the exploring will be dangers but not that much. For example if you go to explore the plant Venus there is a chance of you been in danger. Also in our plant the temperatures averages about 800 degrees Fahrenheit and on the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater. Also another example is when the author says "Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eurpting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes" which means that the danger is high. Also the author says "since no spacecraft survived the landing" which means that it is dangers and could have a chance to die.

Second, the author supports his idea by saying that "Venus is Eath's twin". For example Venus is the closest plant to Earth after the sun. Also in the article it says "eurpting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes" which means the Earth has the same things. Also another example is in the article it says "planting and farming can happen" which leads that the Earth you can plant and farm same as Venus. The plant Venus is the same as the Earth,but Venus is more dangers.

Thrid, the author supports his idea by saying that the "plant Venus is about 170 degrees Fahrenheit". For example if you go to the plant Venus you will have a chance of diying. Also in Earth the highest temperature was about 110 degrees Fahrenheit,but in the plant Venus it is 170 degrees Fahrenheit. Also another example the author says that "the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater" which means the pressure in the plant Venus is greater than the Earth's pressure. The pressure is high in the plant Venus,and also it is higher than the Earth's.

In conclusion the plant Venus is very dangers. Also in the plant Venus you can die because of it is danger. Also another reason is that the plant Venus is the Earth's twin they have a lot of similar things. Also the plant Venus is more hotter than the Earth, and you can die in it. Therefor, the author supported his ideas with good information.

Score: 3