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When taking the action to limit car usage, that sets up many great advantages for you. It provides advantages in many different aspects in your life and also the community. Across the world states, countries,cities, and towns have all decided to limit their car usage and have found many great advantages in doing this.

In German suburbs the action to limit car usage has taken place and people have already taken part of the great advantages. From the text, Heidrun Walter claims "When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way," meaning that her life without a car is better then when she did. Also the fact that not having a car limits on the expenses a person would have to waste. This also influences your money saving and gives you more money to handle more important thing. Further into the article it states "...is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes...Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the united States." This means that cutting off on cars will

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