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Do you think that technology to read emotions is good for teachers and students? I think that the use of this technology would be good for teachers to use for their students. I think that if we had this technology students would not be so bored or disguested at school beacuse of boring or hard assignments. In this essay im gonna tell you why I think that this technology would be good use.

The reason why I think that this technology would be good to use is so teachers can tell if a kid is happy, sad, angry, suprised, disguested, or in fear and then act on how to handle them. In the article the author says that " a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor." If a student is to shy or scared to ask a question to the teacher the computer can pick it up and let the teacher know so they could go help out the student. Say that a student is being bullied but they are too scared to ask a teacher for help beacuse they think that the bully is going to bully them more the technology could pick that up and alert the teacher. The technology could most likely do so much more than i just explained to you.

If you didn't think that it would help out when I asked you the first time, do you think it would help out now? In this essay I explained to you that human emotions explain and could help out a lot in the world. This concludes my essay, I hope that I was able to persuade you into thinking that this technology would help out teachers and students both.

Score: 3