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authors claim on why we should keep on studying so we can land on venus has alot of great idea and points but i dissagree with him. I feel like we should not land on venus anytime soon because its way to risky and its not a habital place. Another reason why we should not

go on there is because its way too dangerous and not alot a people wouldwanna risk therre lives like that.

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the article there is many reasons why they think we should try to land on venus even with ll the dangers. One reason is that they can make suits that will help the with the heat since its 170 degrees on that planet. Also they say that venus used to be

an earth like planet where they think some type of people could of lived there. Lastly landing on venus could give us life changing information about or solar system and it can also give us a technology leap and we could start advancing in technolgy.

In conculsion there are many dangers to visting venus and NASA and other space companies are down to take that risk to see what is on that planet. Even though i disagree with there opinion on going to venus because it is way to risky and people might die. Lastly we might waste alot of money on this project when it can go to many other things that could be life changing.

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