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Throughtout history times were different, technology was not advanced and emotions were hidden. People adjusted, became comfortable with their current situtions and never knew how others truly felt. This lack of knowledge lead to wars,confusion, and dispositon in our schools, states, and government.

Using the Facial Action Coding System in the classroom will be very affective. Not only will it help the students, it will improve lesson plans and become a positive impact.

Using the Facial Action Coding Systems in the classroom will be very affective. Teachers will now be able to adjust and intervene with their studnets who don't seem to understand the lesson plan. Also this creates exposure and can appeal to studnets emotions in a sympathetic way. Having the data and capability to intervene with students is vital because you never know what a kid pehaps maybe goign through. As instructors it is not always about the job but how can we successfully make this students day better. This tool can prevent school shootings, bullying and even slef harm. Just a simple acknowledgement can go a long way. In many ways this can have many beneifts.

Futhermore, this device can be used to change the atmosphere of the classroom. You may be asking what do you mean by this? Changing the atmosphere of the classroom simplying means to make the students feel safe and comfortable. For example the student maybe struggling in a particular aspect of the lesson plan, using the Facial Action Coding System can define the emotion of the point where the student is a flawed at. Using this evidence can be a tool to help the student so that in the future they may understand. In the text it says "The facial expression for each are universal'. This portrays hows each feeling is connected to one another in order to make a change. The text also says "... individuals often show varying degress of expressions'. So perhaps the student may not feel what it says it is still good to have that information.

Lastly, this device can not only help the students but the teachers as well. The teachers are the leaders of the classroom. With this infromation teachers can use this information to better help th students. The device as the text says can "signal mixed emtions". It can captivate and expose what relly happens in the classroom. Teachers can often check on students to see how they are doing on a personal level. Having this information can potentially cause students to expond on issues and seek ways to get help.

To be brief, this tool can be affective and used in a positive way. It can be valuable to a great range of areas that need to be touched on. As a developed society we have all the knowledge at our fingertips. Let's implement these things to make our students and teacgers happy, our classrooms more efficent and safe and be a tomorrrow for our future.

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