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The author in ¨The Challenge of Exploring Venus,¨supports the idea that studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. Venus is a planet in our solar system and the second planet from our sun but also sometimes referred to as Earths ¨twin.¨ Venus is close to Earth my density and size and occasionally by distance.Not one spaceship has touched Venus in more than three decades and because of the issue of the missions being unmanned and no spacecraft survived the landing. Studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger because astronomers are fasinated and NASA has a compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.

Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because astronomers are fasinated by Venus. In paragraph four it says ¨ Astronomers are fasinated by Venus because it may well be once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar sytem. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.¨ This means Venus could have been a planet that was more like our planet Earth and had similar features. Similar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. This features that Venus has means that at one point Venus could have been a planet just like Earth is.

Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because if NASA is compelling an idea for sending humans to study Venus it might work. In paragraph five it says ¨NASA´s possible sotuion to the hostile conditons on the surface of Venus would alow scientists to float above the fray¨ This means scientists would be able to float above the fray with NASA´s possible solution. In paragraph six it says ¨Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to out knowledge of Venus.¨ This means researchers will work on inovations to make machines last very long and can last for them to have as much information about Venus when they get back to Earth ground. NASA is also working on other ways to help on studying Venus. For example in paragraph seven its says that ¨ some simplified electronis made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulated the chaos of Venus suface and has lasted three weeks in such conditions.¨This means that they made eletronics with silison carbide and tested it in a chamber to venus and lasted three weeks.

Venus is a worthy pursuit to study because NASA has compelling ideas and astronomers are fasinated. NASA did a test of silicon electronics that lasted three weeks and astronomers say the planets surface has similar features as Earth. The author is right on studying Venus.

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