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The Mona lisa demostration is relly intended to bring a simile to your face wihile .

People are trying to do new ssttuf with new tecnology but some of this peoiple dont know that some times they do need to have or use tecnology they want to just do things as there way but some times they do need to use tecnology and do what they have to do so they can fix the old stuff and new stuff the monalisa just a little simle but they can fixii it withtecnology and try to do some thinh new they have to look for more tecnology and expressions to be sure that they are doing whta they have to do in expression of the wghat they have and maind.

The doctor said that they dcan fix the or modify the expression or lesson from what they are talking about .

They are trying to said that they want to invent a computer that knows when are you happy and when you are sad or angry and other caind of emottions.

each they there are trying to have new tecnology and new stuff they have to see whats goin on in that they have to do what they have to do.

Other peopl;e dont like to see other people expressions because they get enoy from seeintg them.

They are seeing video games and trying to see what can they do to modofy them .

Seeing you in the miriror each they its like you are trying to see something diffirent that you can see becuse alreddy has the face that you have to see even tho they are not in the same expression ecah day becuse some times your actitud your face your simile arte the ones that can change with aout let you know each day you will hav a expressions that will change your face

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