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Imagine someone sitting in class on the computer doing work that is just is not getting their attention. Now imagine a comuter that is aware of this and changes the lession up to catch their attention all based off of one's facial expressions. Interesting right? A new technology, called the Facial Action Coding System, can identify someones facial expressions based on how the muscles in their face are. This type of technology can be very useful in classrooms all around the world, and even benefit kids learning. The computers can tell when someone is getting confused or bored, It could modify the lessions to capture more attention and benefit the instructors.

The computer can tell when someone is getting confused or bored.

The technology could modify the lessions to get more attention.

The system can help benefit the instrutors.

There can and will be concerns out there about the new coding system and how it will affect the children in a negative way, however this type of new technology can help students grow and adapt to the technology of the world. That being said it can also be just as effective in the classrooms as well. Dr. Huang, the inventer of the coding system, notes that most human communucation is nonverbal, including emotion communication, so computers need to understand that to. This states that computers are learning from our emotions so it can improve to our standards and the standards of the children.

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