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With in this article, there are many arguments regarding the self-driving cars. Many positions for opposing and agreeing with the cars can be seen. I, for one, am supporting the idea for self-driving cars. I believe with enough work, these cars will be safer for the roads, and for their passengers.

"Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids and rollovers." [5] This proves that with enough work, this kind of technology can be improved tenfold.

"In 2013, BMW annonced the developemnt of 'Traffic Jam Assistant.'" [7] This states that the new technology is being invented all the time. We never really stop inventing, improviong, revising, and publishing new things.

With that, self-driving cars will hopefully make for a better commute, with better saftey. It would be a nice advantage to see cars with a function that tests for sobriety, leading to a safer roadway. That, and many other functions that can be implimented into everyday life can make our cars better.

So, would self-driving cars be safer? In my opinion, yes they would. We could possibly have a safer network of roads, and a lesser ammount of accidents, and a lesser amount of fatalities regarding self-driving cars.

Score: 3