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My position on the driverless cars are dumb if you ask me. Because what some people can't afford this car of if it gets stolen. Who is going to get the car back do you any kind of protection and if you car has a malfuction it's not going to be so great. You could die be in the hospitial with major issues going on and the car dealer is not going to care. But if that doesn't happen the gas price's will go up the car might last longer but the gas would go up.

In paragraph 1 it talks about the google cofounder Sergey Brin says "The cars i foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus". "He also believes such cars would fundamentally change the world". Then the 2 paragraph is talking about how driverless cars on movies and television. Have long been fascinated by the driverless cars but in reality the cars have people in them and there in case something does go bad. And if anything they would propbably call emergency people to go help them .

The good thing is they have tried this driverless car thing before and it kind of worked out in the "1980's automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes". That basically meant that there were locks on the tires so if the driver was going to fast airlocks would protect him or if he was about to hit something.

Score: 1