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Venus is the second planet from sun, and Earth's neigbor. venus is the closest planet compared to Earth density and size . Venus atmosphere is made up of 97 percent carbon dioxide. The clouds are the more challenging thing,clouds are made up of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. On average planet's temperature is 800 degrees Fahrenhiet.

Scientist belive once Venus was like Earth. it had ocean, land,some kind of living organisms. then why now Venus is inhospitable.

Why scientists are stil planning to vist the planet. no spacecraft has survived more than few hours. NASA has plans to send humans to venus, but they will have to float above the frry of venus. To avoid storms and other kind of danger. like airoplanes fly at high alttude to avoid storm.they will not be able to bring any samples of rock because they cant land on the surface of Venus. Can't even take pictures or videos because it is not safe for any metal devices with radio active particles to get in contact with acid. despite the danger of heavy earthquakes, storms, and lighting storms. Still scientists belevie it is survivabe for humans.

Venus is Earth's neibghour and second planet from sun. venus has

higher temperature then Earth's temperature. Venus use to have astomsphore like Earth's. scientits plans to vist Venus despite the danger of heavy earthquakes and storms. still venus has chances for likely hood of survivable atmosphere for humans on venus.

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