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Would it a be a great thing that a technology read your emotions? Based on the passage the Facial Action Coding System would be a great thing to use to discover other people emotions, but I am against the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions.The three reasons why I am against this technology is because most people don't want others to know, it would change the students' mood, and the others would have their attention to that person emotions.

This technoloy states the emotions mixed into one person but that person doesn't want nobody to simply notice their emotions. For example, students' that are excellent in school don't want their emotions be expelled and want to be a great example to others. People are weak when people found out about their emotions they feel in them. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling by the look on their face.

The emotions being discovered could also put a mood to the classes or students. For example, if a student is feeling bad the other classmates would feel worried because they want to figured out what is going on. The emotions are for each individual to express not to spread around. Especially it could affect others from outside school which keeps the student from studying and staying focus in classes.

The emotions could get people attention. The emotion could get people wonder why this persons' emotion changed or like this. Students are would also want determine the characteristics movements of the facial muscles. For example in the passage states that the muscles above your eyes raises your eyebrows when you're surprised, and other thing is that the area around your mouth tightens your lips it will show anger. Another example is, if a student has a excellent emotions but reality nobody knows if they are happy or sad or the probabilities of being insane.

In conclusion, I am against the claim that the Facial Action Coding System to indentify the the human emotional expression in the school. The three reasons in because people don't want others to know, it could affect the others, and people would like to know the true expression of one emotions. Is this technology for the best in the human society or not?

Score: 4