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"Unmasking the face on mars" this is a natural landform and you can't argue it i'm going to make you believe with these facts your about to recieve. On May 24, 2001 witch was 25 years ago something happended around Mars. NASA's V1 spacecraft was circling the planet, getting photos for landing sites for V2, when it spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous

head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be looking back at the cameras from a red planet called Cydonia. A few days after it was spotted by NASA they unveiled the image for all to see. They noted it was a 'huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human face. Althought few scientists believed the face was an alien artifact, photo of cydonia became a priority for NASA. And so on April 5, 1998 Mars global surveyor flew over cydonia for the first time snapped a picture then times sharper then the originals then later on the web they revealed . . . a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.

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