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In the book of the challenged of exploring venus.

the author suggests that starving venus persuit despite all the density present the venus has many systems that we don't know about the planet of the venus. venus is the our other planetary neighboor orbit the sun at different speeds. {NASA} are trying to studying one particulary compelling idea for sending humans. NASA also studying some simplified electronics made silicon carbie have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such condition. venus is one of the hottest planet in sum orbital. Now the NASA were sending scientific to the spaceship to learn some other planet, what are the different thing from other planet. sometime people called to venus "Evening star", is the one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. in this years,people get a lot of experience from the venus and learn what they have to do with those experience they have, and then use in our Earth. Venus and Mars are hottest planet including in the un orbital. Our planet and Veenus planet are so many differetn and also there was a lot of different thing and weird seen in the Venus planet. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmoshpheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. The scientific travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innvation.

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