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Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it persents. Do you think the Venus is worthy despite the dangers? In my opinion, I dont think it's worthy despite the danger. I will tell you why the author believes that studying Venus is worthy despite the dangers.

First reason, is because their air crafts never made it to Venus, that helped them find out that Venus was to hot and that's why the spacecrafts never made it up their. In they text it says, "Humans sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world .....but all were unmanned." Another reason, is because Venus is so hot for humans to be on because it will burn them to death. In the text it says, " On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit." The finally reason, is because the radiation can kill a human. In the text it says, " Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed earth levels."

This is some belifes of why I think the author thinks that sudying Venus is worthy but dangerous. Their are pelnty of reasons why the author thinks this is very dangerous for humans. At the same time all the dangerous stuff helps them find out the information that they have collected today. This informations is only helping us identify things we never knew before that may some day help us in the future.

Score: 2