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Evidence: After school activities help occupy students time which makes it less likely for them to get in trouble.

Another reason is that students might also drop out or move schools so they can continue playing sports.

If students don't have sports they are also less likely to get enough exercise which could cause more obesity in the school.

Some students rely on sports as a chance to spend time with their friends, so if sports are cut out they may become antisocial and have no friends.

Score: 1