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Concluding Statement: Texting and driving should be banned because it is a hazard, and is an alert that needs to be reduced. The first reason for texting or using a cell phone while driving is very hazardous to yourself and the people surrounding you. Texting and driving is the act of composing, sending, reading text messages, emails or making similar use of the web on a mobile device while operating a motor vehicle. Texting while driving is considered extremely dangerous by many people, including authorities and in some places have either been outlawed or restricted. No one should text and drive. Be an example for others and if you need to text or talk on the phone, pull over to a safe place. Set rules for yourself and your household regarding texting and driving, lead by example. Currently there is no national ban on texting or using a wireless phone while driving, but a number of states passed laws banning texting or wireless phones requiring hands-free use of wireless phones while driving.

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