Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Evidence: is we could help younger kids like teachers do and might want to become a teacher in the future. We could also use the experience as we get older in jobs or with our own life style. this like a prospect that we use to our advantage. It could help some us be less likely to become criminals. It will probably be one of the best things that could happen to certain students.

Score: 2