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Evidence: Other activities in which students may not be able to participate in such as electives or school clubs may drop the self esteem of students due to lack of friends with similar interests.

this rule might also cause bullying because if someone can't play sports then others will know they have less than a B average.

Getting regular physical activity in a friendly surrounding also helps people who might have had a troubled past.

When others around to support one and other it also brings up the moods of possibly depressed people.

When activities are available it also helps students broaden their horizon by letting them try things they might not have otherwise tried.

it also allows students to meet people with similar interests.

Score: 1