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Evidence: Phones nowadays are getting harder and harder to put down. Phones have app stores that allow you to play games, different social media, and Youtube/other streaming content. By having these on your phones, you will also get addicted to playing your favorite game, checking to see what's new or people's status on social media, and seeing what people are streaming about on Youtube or what episode/movie you miss.

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