Rate the following argument fragment on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Lead: This essay is about phones and driving. Phones are devices that allow you to communicate with each other. Now modern technology phones allow you to download apps and different types of social media that you can talk to or meet different people around the world.

Cars allow people to travel long distances in a short period of time.

Nowadays cars are being used for everything and there are many different types of cars to help get the job.

Score: 1