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Driverless cars are very efficient and should be allowed. I think driverless cars should be allowed because of less accidents, more safety and better driving. That is why driverless cars should be developed.

The first reason to as why driverless cars should be developed is to prevent less accidents. In the article the text talks about how sensors became more advanced since the 1980s. Evidence from the article states "Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger out-of-control skids or rollovers." If humans responded as fast as a computer could then we would not need to develop driverless cars, but we need them to prevent crashes, skids and rollovers.

Now, my second reason is to be more safe. If we develop more driverless cars with computer engineered scanners, radars and sensors there would be no hit and runs, vehicular manslaughter or roadkill. Humans cannot stop as fast as computers do, therefor with the driverless car people would stop running red lights, speeding through neighborhoods hitting children playing and the elderly can cross safe and sound. A computer would also stop you from bumping into stuff , in paragraph 7 the text claims "GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object." That is my second reason why it is more safe to have driverless cars.

The last reason why to prove driverless cars need to be developed is better driving. The driverless car would be a good asset to have drive on a highway or expressway, the sensors and computer interact to prevent accidents on the highway. "Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automative radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and a inertial motion sensor." The whole bang for your buck systematic vehicle will prevent traffic jams, less accidents equal less construction work and less deaths will accur, a intriuging reason to why we need driverless cars developed.

Those are just three reasons why the driverless car is needed but im pretty sure there is more. At the end of the day it is all about safety, proper manufacturing and liability. If the car has those three things why not promote its development?

Score: 4