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In "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author suggest that studying Venus is a worth pursuit despite the danger it presents. Venus is the closest planet to Earth however its easier to see Venus and study this planet. There is differences in speed which sometimes Venus is closer and sometimes Mars. Venus is the second planet from our sun according to the author of ths story. Many Astronomers believe that Venus was once a planet like Earth in our solar system. NASA is sending people to Venus so they can keep studying Venus. On 1800s and 1940s during WWll there was old technology for example like computers. Now we have technology and its very good but can be sensitive. We need to have more adventures. Earth is having drastically bad sea level, the tempeture is constanly changeing, animals are extinging, forest are disappering each day. In other words, earth is dying. Because Earth is dying isnt easy for us humans survivial however this quote says: "Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels" (Venus 1). However this quote proves that Earth isnt in conditions thats why are studying Venus because maybe Venus was once an Earth.

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