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What is Venus? Some people called the "Evening Star," but not, Venus is actually a planet. It was nearby Earth but they have a safe distance between them. Venus had the hottest temperature of any planet, and human can't near the ground in Venus.

Venus had the hottest temperture of any planet in solar system, there had no any living things can survive. According to the article, "On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet...... Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system," The temperature average of the suface of Venus is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times more than Earth. Venus has the hottest surface temperture of the any

planet in the solar system.

Human cannot near the ground in Venus as the temperature and air pressure. According to the article, "NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray...... At thiry-plus miles above the suface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close that of sea level on Earth." As some possible solution to the hottest temperature surface of Venus, the

National Aeronautics and Space Administration allow the scientists to foat above the ground...... On the 30 or more miles above the surface, the temperature still at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit like toasty, but the air pressure was close to the sea level on Earth. Those are not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.

Venus had the hottest temperature of any planet, and human can't near the ground in Venus. It has many hostile conditions for human to survivable. If the temperature of Venus is more lower, human may stay at the new planet.

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