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In the artical

the author talkes about the studys on Venus and its danger. The author also talks about the similarity between Venus and Earth. In The Challenge of Exploring Venus the author suggests that studying Venus and the danger it presents is important.

In the story "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author suggests that studying Venus is important. In the

artical the author says

"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions." In the

artical the author also says "Long ago, Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. ... The

planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters." Both of these two quotes show how the author fealt about the studyes of Venus.

In the

artical "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author suggests that studying

the danger Venus presents is important. In the

artical the author says " Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface." in the

artical the author also says " On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet."

The both of these quotes shows why the author thinks it is important to study the

danger Venus

presents.

The

artical "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" is about exploring new places and geting more knowlege. In The Challenge of Exploring Venus the author propose that studying Venus and the danger it presents is important.

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