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Have you ever wanted to go on a trip and tour all over the ocean?

Well you can if you join the Seagoing Cowboys program, just like I did. It's an opportunity of a lifetime. "The cattle-boat trips were an unbelieveable opportunity for a small-town boy like me." I got to see amazing places. "Helping out on my aunt Katie's farm as a boy prepared me for hard work." Since I grew up on a farm I love working with horses, and helping people. I also found time to have fun on board.

One reason you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program is that you get to travel to amazing places. Here's two places I traveled to when I was in the Seagoing Cowboys program, Europe and China.I also visited the

Acropolis in Greece, went on a gondola ride in Venice Italy, toured a excavated castle in Crete.

Another reason you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program is because if you love horses, cows,or mules you get to work with them and take care of them all day. You will surely be kept busy, they have to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats have to be pulled up frim the lower holds.

Working in the Seagoing Cowboys program is a lot of fun you even get time to hangout and relax. You get to travel cool places and work with animals. That's why I think you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. It's a one in a life time opportunity.

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