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Venus or called the Evening Star now it can be posible watch the planet for ourselves?

Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, Venus is a important part of our solar system. Venus is actually a planet the author's point is give us information that not all people know about Venus or details like Venus is the second planet from our sun.

One important point is

"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun" and also that present addition impediments like erupting volcanoes. Our atmosphere it is almost 97 percent carbopn dioxide blakets Venus. On the planet's surface. temperatures average over 800 degrees which is more extreme than anything

humans encounter on Earth.

That is not a impediment for humans to visit Venus as the author express in the article " NASA has one particularly idea for sending humans to study Venus and send more details to us so we can have a express idea of how Venus reality.

Another point to demostrate is that " radiation would not exceed Earth levels, not easy conditions but survivable for humans" that what NASA express but the people who visit Venus cannot take samples like rocks,gas, or anything else.

In conclusion that would be interest if the NASA aprobe send all type of people to the Earth, if they aprobe that would be safely because the NASA is working with old technology that is safe to control, and now the human curiosity will be done because we should be expanded to meet Earth.

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