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The Author says studying venus would be worthy despite how dangerous venus is. Exploring Venus would be harmful for anyone who goes there, and its atmosphere wouldnt be the same as Earth. Venus is the closest planet to Earth and is sometimes referred to as Earths "twin". With NASA and scientist striving for Venus, Traveling to Venus will likely lead to many discoveries.

Venus is the second closest planet from the sun and has the hottest surface temperature than any other planet, even Mercury which is the closest to the sun. Temperature that average over 800 degrees and atomsphere 90 times greater than Earth would be harsh and it wouldnt be easy to live on but it would be survivable for humans. NASA has been studying ideas for sending humans into Venus so that they can study its surface, and NASA are also making a machine that would orbit over Venus surface without having to risk sending humans.

With NASA working on visting Venus I can refer that in a decade or two, NASA will get closer to complete landing on Venus.The Author wants the prusuit of studying Venus something that can lead to new discoveries and new lifeform we dont know about yet. Despite the danger venus offers, people will likely lead to theory of the planet itself. With Venus being called Earth's twin and being the closest to Earth, it would likely be the next planet we humans would live on.

Score: 3