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Using technology to read the emotional expressions of students is not a very good idea. We all have bad and good days. But there is no reason to use the technology to read students expression.

Some kids would perfer to be left alone when their feeling sad. Others dont want to be bothered when mad. When kids are sad or mad it can be easy to tell. or when someone is happy. They have a big smile on thier face and the smile isnt being forced by them, they're actually smiling.

"Dr. Pual Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happines, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness." These six basic emotions can tell alot about someones day. If they seem sad you can guess that something bad happened. If mad, they probably got into a arugment with somone. "For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightnes your lips to show anger" If you are aware of what peoples expressions do you are going to be able to teel peoples emotions.

Therefore

we do not need a computer or technology being able to read students emotions. You can simply ask them how they feel or try to read their expressions.

Score: 3