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There are many ways he supports his idea of "venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers presents". In my opinion i believe the author did

very well giving details and evidence on why he believes venus is worthy besides its dangers. The text states "even more challenging are the clouds of highly coorosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere" ,"on the planets surface, tempetures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own plantet". In those two cited evidence let us know the dangerous parts about venus, that we cant just go and live in venus we could die so many different ways and thats beyone dangerous. He proven very well what he meant by the dangers and very well has caught my attention so far.

The author lets us know that Venus has once been the planet to be the "most earth-like planter in our solar system" . In my opinion i believe that venus sound scary and I would'nt want to go but also the author is making it interesting and im sure i would love to go and discover new things and how if really is there . I would love to see the temperture ,colors ,and also if it is somewhat like earth as they say. The text states "The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains , and craters ", that sounds very much like earth to me. From what I gathered

from his evidence showing that Venus is a worthy pursuit , I would love to see and discover, I would love to see the mountain ,the color of the mountains and how high. I would love to discover if the weather changes ; Rain,snow,foggy,sunny.

The author made venus very interesting and I would love to discover and find out more about it as of now. The text also states "The air pressure would be close to sea level on earth" that is beyond interesting and very crazy how the air pressure can be like our water pressure we experiance now on earth. "Solor power would be plentiful, and radiation would exceed earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans." just imagine all humans living on venus at first and then discovering earht; it would be a big change and very hard for us to get used to earth. If it were that way we could be under water forever since we lived and grew up breathing as if we were underwater unlike earth.

Living on venus would be hard for us to get used to living on earth and learning how the air works . We would have to try to survive, but seeing earth for the first time would be the best all the green grass ,and clean blue water, beautiful colorful flowers everywhere , light blue sky, it would be breathe taking literally. Text states " our travels on earth and beyond should not be

limited by dangers and doubts but should be epanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation" I very much do agree with the author and I also do believe people shall be able to discover new things. People should be warned about what they believe could happen and if the people still choose to go then that is there choice but at least they are living their life and discovering what there is out of earth. I believe the author supports his idea very much both positive thing about venus and bad ; and i personally agree with him very much .

Score: 3