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Have you ever read a book called, "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves"? Well if you have im going to make a argument essay. The argument essay is going to be about, convincing others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I hope you get convinced and join. The two Paragraph will repensent why you should join the program.

Here are some reasons that you might be instered in if you may want to go.The first reason I think you should join because, you get to help things that need help. Another reason to join the program is,maybe if you want to go somewhere in your lifetime but you never get to go,well if you are a Seagoing Cowboy you get to tour a lot of different places.One good reason is that,it's animals in need of your help, it will feel good if you are helping animals that's in need of your help. Last reason is, if you like caring and helpin other animals than you would like this job because it keeps you busy when travaling.

These are the details from the text to support my reason to join the program. My first detail it is about the first reason I stated,in the story it say's,"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs." "And that awareness stayed with him,leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange vistors for many years."The next detail from the passage is about the 2 reason i stated,it says,"Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China."This detail is about the third reason I stated,"But beeing a Seagoing Cow boy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger." "it opened up the wored to him." The last detail is about the last reason,"Caring for the animals during the crossing kept Luke busy.

In my conclusion, if you didn't read the book called "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves." Well now you konow a little somthing about it.

Score: 3