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Venus is a beutiful start, why? is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky, But the challange of exploring

Venus suggest studying Venus as a worthy pursuit despite of the danger that presents.

Conditions in Venus is challenging because in the article says, "A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the cloud of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere."

which in this conditions are severe problems.

More intersting about, Earth and Venus are so familiar that both have some comparison on each other like in the article says,"Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters." Venus can be sometimes the neartest option for a planetary visit.

Now, in these days NASA

has one particulcarly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus because NASA is working on simplified electronics tested in

a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such condition , but they are gonna do another project

with a old technology called mechanical computers, in the article says, "the tought of devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not requires electronics at all. Mordern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but then to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditons."striving to meet the challenges presented by venus has value because humas curiosity will likely

lead into many equally intimidating endeavors.

Planet Venus is a place that someday woud be similar to earth and that could probility live in venus.even if is dangerous, peole should not give up and expand to meet the very edges of what could possibly humans can do better.

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