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The Face that is on Mars was not made by aliens it's just a natural landform. "The caption noted a "huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth" (NASA 1). The Face is not really a face it just looks like a face. The face on Mars is just a natural land form because it's just a shadow giving an illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth, it's just another Martian mesa just that this one has unusual shadows, and NASA took a picture that the Face just looked like a landform here in America.

The Face on Mars is just a natural land form because it's just a shadow giving an illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. "The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars" (NASA 1). NASA is just trying to get Mars attention. NASA didn't take a really good picture in 1976, but then later on they did and they saw it was just a natural landform.

The Face on Mars is just another Marian mesa just that this one has unusual shadows. "Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh" (NASA 1). The Face on Mars just had wierd shadows that made it look like a face. The Face is not an alien artifact it's just a landform.

The Face on Mars looks just like a landform here in America. "What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesalandforms common around the American West" (NASA 1). It just looks like a landform in America. The Face looks like Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho (NASA 1). The Face is not an alien artifact it's just a natural landform.

Some people think the Face on Mars is an alien artifact but its not. It's compared to many landforms here in America. The face on Mars in the first picture just had really unusual shadows that made it look like a face.

The Face on Mars just had some unusual shadows that made it look like a face. In a better picture it just looks land a natural land form. The face on Mars is just a natural land form because it's just a shadow giving an illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth, it's just another Martian mesa just that this one has unusual shadows, and NASA took a picture that the Face just looked like a landform here in America.

Score: 4