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Lukes participation in the Seagoing Cowboys program allowed him to expierence different adventures and visit many unique places.

Also he can take care of hores,young cows,and mules that are shiped over sea and on there way to greece Luke turned 18 which meant he could be drafted for military school.They were on a cattle boat for a trip

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the time he was discharged in 1947 Luke had made nine trips which was the most of any Seagoing Cowboy Luke had fun when the animals were releasted out of their cage the cowboys also played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed

thoses games also helped time go by.

Sea Cowboys were much more than a trip to Luke Bomberger it oped up the world it helped other countries and their needs and to help them survive and to stay healthy

and to have a good life and good choices.

That stayed with Luke Bomberger and it led him to leading a number of internalional students and exchange visitors for many years.

I think that Luke made a good choice to help other people and to take care of animals.

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