Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
To start off Venus would be a nice place to visit or to explore after read the paragraph the author convinced me by his ideas that he has and how he supported his claim.

The authors ideas that he wants to tell

that how theres a planet name Venus and how no body yet has been there and has not yet set a foot. Accodring to the author "These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus.Because Venus is sometimes right around the coner - in space terms - humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud -draped world. Each previs mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades."(The Challenge of Exploring Venus p 2)

What the aouthor is saying is that how only one ship got to Venus but in peices not in a whole and that was 3 decades and still nothing. Another thing that the aouthor has explained how the atmosphere is to high for any body that is a human In this paragraph it says " A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent cardon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planets's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These condition are far more extreme than anything humans on Earth has encounter." (The challenge of Exploring Venus p 3) The aouthor is trying to say how the tempature over in Venus is really bad for us humans like the aouther said "These condition are far more extreme than what we experience than anything human on Earth." these are the reason why people has made it in the planet.

Score: 2