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Exploring Venus

This article is about if is dangerous to go to explore venus i think is dangerous because if you go to venus

how they will survive without knowing how is the surface in thier and how he will be able to come back because does people at Nasa they want to know what you see at venus.

Venus is the closes planet to earth in terms of density mars is also close to earth. It coult be something that it will be dangerous like it said on paragraph 3".A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus" so that means that they will need to challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sullfuric acid in venus atmosphere.

They will need to do some kind of a vehicle or something that came keep you save for the atmosfera like it said in paragraph 5 it saying that the National aeronautics and space administration has a particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus that surface of venus will allow scientics to flot above the fray. they got on idea of a "vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape".

Nasa have to work of some kind electonics that made silicon cardide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions it says these in paragraph 7. The temperature will be at 170 degress fahrentheit. nut the air presure it will be like close to that sea level on earth, the power of the solar it will be not thateasy because plentiful and radiation would not exceed earth level.

In my opion i thing that will be some kind of dangerous to send people to explore venus becuase we are not sure what kind of danger that will be in there in other way it will be cool becuase if the mission is success they will get more knowleag of that they see but for that they will need to work hard to tray to get does person back to earth. They need to create something that need to keep does person save in were they are and not all depents of the work in depents of they gay that is going to travel to there.

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