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Venus is worthy of studying because it is alot like earth in it's own way. I would guess people study it because it's like earth and they probably can find life or see if life would be able to substain on that planet.

Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. It is close to the sun. It's so close that you can see it from earth. That's because it is the second planet from our sun. On Planet Venus it can get up to 800 degrees Fehrenheit which is life threatning to go there. This planet has the hottest surface temperature of any planet. The reason being is because they have massive earthquakes, Volcanoes erupting, and lightning strikes. Astronomers study this planet still because they believe that it could have once been life living there, and Venus probably had large bodies of water as well as we do here on earth. They say Venus may be our next planetary visit.

This is why Astronomers and other want to explore Venus because it has a lot of cool and unusual things on that planet. If it's life on Venus or Life can be on Venus I would like to go.

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