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So one day my friend Bill and I read a article called ''Unmasking the Face on Mars and we were so interested in the story we wanted to have a debate on the article so we started to have a argument on which the face was a humans face or a aliens face which could it be ? So i went back to look in the article and find details on whether the face was a humans face and my friend went to go find details in the story to see if the face was a alien face or not which could it be ? So i say in paragraph 3 it says that the ''huge rock formation it resembles a human head .. formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose, and mouth.So my friend Bill comes back and says but in paragraph 6 they say a some scientist believed the face was an alien artifact and then i go down to paragraph 7 and read threw a little and i come across it sayin in April 5, 1998, when the Mars Global Surveryor flew over cydonia for the first the time thier camera team took a picture that was ten times sharper than the vikings photos and they seen that it was no alien monument after all. Then thats when my friend bill continued to look for information

and then he says he read in paragraph 8 that no one was satisfied so we continued to debate so it did not end and my friend Bill said that at the end of paragraph 8 they said perhaps said the skeptics thier were alien marking hidden by haze. But after all we did not find enough information to solve our debate so me and my Bill never will know the Face on mars so it still remains a mystery but me and my friend will still continue to try to find information to see if it was a human face or a alien face ?

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