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Meeting a Planet

"Exporing is a way of figuring out what you don't know and what you do know" my father once said to me. If you want to figure out somthing then explore it and find out what you want to find out. It is better for you to explore something then to sit and watch others explore the things that you wanted to explore. In the "The Challenge of Exploring Venus" the author supports the idea of studing Venus is a worthly pursuit despite the dangers it brings by telling the reader all about Venus and how similar is it from the Earth. The author suggest how Venus and Earth are

know to be "twins"

becasue of how similar they are. The author supports the idea of studing vesus despite the dangers it as is by the enviroment that vesus has, the geography of vesus and by temperature.

At first, th author supports his ideas by telling the reader all about the enviroment that Venus carries. The author tells the reader that Venus is like Earth in some ways but it is also different from Earth in otherways. In the "Challenge of Exploring Venus" in paragraph 3 the author mentioned, "A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus." The author tells the reader that Venus has an atmosphere that is almost all coverd in carbon dioxide, which is harmful to humans because they need oxygen to survive not carbon dioxide. The author also mentioned in "Challenge of Exploring Vesus" in paragraph 3 line 3, " On the planet's surface........atmospheric pressure is 90 times grather than what we experience on our own planet." The author suggets a example of how big the atmospheric pressure is in Venus and that humans on Earth won't be able to survive if they will go to Venus. The author tries to tell the reader that scientists should explore Venus even though it is full of dangers by telling the reader all about the enviroment that Venus has.

Second, the author described Venus by telling the reader all about the geography that it has. The author started talking about how Venus's geography matching with Earth a little bit. In the "Challenge of Exploring Venus" on paragraph 3 line 12, " Venusian geogogy and weather prsent additional impdiments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on it's surface." The author tells the reader that Venus also has earthquakes, volcanoes, lightning same as Earth. He compares Vensus to earth and tells the reader how similar they are. The author also mentioned in "Challenge of Exploring Venus" in paragraph 4 line 4, "Venus was probably covered largly with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth." Th author tries to convince the reader by telling the reader how Venus had oceans just like Earth, the author also tells the reader that someday Venus might have supported life of various forms. The author tries to tell the reader how scientists should explore Venus no matter what.

Third, the author supports his ideas by telling the reader about the temperature of venus and how deadly it is. In the article "Challenge of Exploring Venus" on paragraph 3 line 4 the author said, "On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degress Fahrenheit." The temperatures in Vesus is so high and hot that a person won't be able to survive there for even a minute. the author provides an example of how deadly the temperature on Venus is that no person would survive. Another example author provides in the article "Challenge of Exploring Venus" is on paragraph 3 line 9, "Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system." The author tells the reader about how the Venus is th only planet with the hottest surface temperature which is fatal to human beings. The author tells the reader that scientists should explore vesus however he also thinks that it could be deadly too.

In conclusion, the author supports his idea of studing Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present is by describing the enviroment, geogoly, and temperature of Venus. The author really wants to explore Venus becasue it could help people understand the solar system. Earth and Venus ar simliar

which could lead to having new discovies and helping today's geranation to explore more for a better and more advanced future. The author provides a lot of ideas about Venus that would make scientists explore Venus accurately. Next time you meet a scientist, be sure to ask them about exploring Venus!

Score: 4