Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Do you think

the Facial Action Coding System should be used for student ? I think the Facial Action System should be used for students because the computer can recognize when

a student is becoming confused

bored ,

Helps the computer undersatnd you , and students pay more attention totechogy.

If the students can use the Faical Action Coding System if can tell if the student is bored or confused . The computer can modify the lesson to help the student understand the lesson . If the

student is confused he/she wont learn

anything from the lesson.

The computer can modity if the student is bored and the computer can give the student an more fun or undertanding lesson.

If an student is bored . If an student is bored with the lesson he/she will not learn anything .

If the students use this technology the computer will be able to understand the stundent.

Say a student is having a hard time with the lesson

the

computer can help the stundent . It states in the passage that " Most humans communication is nonverbal , including emotioanls communication , " notes Dr. Huang. It also states "if you smile when a web appears on your screen , a simlar ad might follow . But if you frown ,the next will be different .

Another reason

why computer need to understand you.

Facial Action System should be used for alot of students because most students pay more attention to technolgy. Why not help

the student learn with this new technology it will help the learn more . Student can learn more and have help

if they dont understand the computer can try to show the lesson in different ways for the student. The computer can teach the student like an effective human instrutor. Student can and will learn more with this new techology.

This is why I thing this techology should be used to help

students learn

because it helps the student understand more, pay attiention more , and learn more with the Facial Action System.

Score: 3