Rate the following essay on its writing, argument, and language skills:
Venus, sometimes called the "Evening Star," this nickname is mis leading since Venus is actually a planet in out solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun.

Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. Earth, Venus, and Mars, the other planetary neighbor orbit the sun at different speed that means that sometimes we are closer to Mars and sometimes to Venus.Venus is a dangerest place to go because the landing is not very good, humans have send spacecraft but they can't survived the landing for more than a few hours, in Venus is also too hot is the hottest surface temperature in our solar system, with a temperature over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and 90 times greater of atmospheric pressuere. Astronomers have curiosity for Venus because it's more like Earth in out solar system.

In conclusion I think that the author supports his idea by saying the good and bad things about Venus and it's worthy to study Venus.

Score: 1