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These driverless cars should not be developed becuase technology can crash, safety concerns and lack of knowledge. These 3 reasons all tie up to each other on why these cars should not be developed.

First reason why driverless cars should not be developed is becuase technology is not one hundred percent reliable. Technology can crash causing these cars to possibly not be functioning well which could lead to various accedents and who will take initiative for those damages? ¨If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?¨ paragraph 9. With this being said anyone can buy things that make their life easier, thats what everyone wants right? Not just becuase it makes your life easier means its safe.

Second, these cars should not be developed becuase of safety concerns. As already mentioned technology can crash leading to serious injuries, the sensors could stop working leaving huge possibilities of many crashes. Does this also mean that if these cars replace actual cars does that mean people will become lazier and or not be requiered to drive or have a liscence if indeed this project becomes successful?

Lastly, these cars should not be developed because of lack of knowledge. Again, if these cars replace driver cars does that mean people will become lazier, and or not be requiered to have a liscence if this porject indeed becomes successful? If so, soon it would not be required to know how to drive which would lead many people to not know how to drive which is requiring less knowledge that should be there. It would make our lifes so easy to the point where it might make us lazy, not everyone, but mostly everyone. I beilive we need the most knowledge possible instead of creating more and more things that isolate us from learning.

In conclusion, these driverless cars should not be created due to technology crashes, safety issues and lack of knowledge. Drivers should keep driving and learn more everyday. A wise person once said ¨Life isn´t easy, so dont try to make it¨.

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