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Have you ever asked yourself what it would be like to drive a driverless car? Think of all the things you do in a normal car. Well guess what you won't have to do several of these things in a driverless car. I think that driverless cars should absolutely be developed to make our world better. You won't ever have to worry about breaking, steering, or having to use too much gas because guess what the driverless car does it for you but also cuts on gas amounts. These cars should also be developed because they are much better than the normal cars we use today that emit pollution and other harmful things to our environment. Also these special driverless cars will offer us warnings incase of any dangers out in the road. So why not develope a driverless car that can not only keep us away from breaking and stearing but also help the world by reducing the amount of gas used throught the world.

Have you ever wondered what it would feel like to drive a driverless car and not having to move your foot to brake or your arm to steer, or even have to pay for so much gas? Well the driverless car eliminates all of these things. Infact the

only time you will have to steer or break is incase of an emergency or warning when driving. These cars should be built because it allows us to relax when we are cruising on the roads without having to move an arm or leg unless an emergency or warning is occuring on the roads. Also these cars will automatically break for us without moving a single muscle. They will also steer without having to even lift our arms. These are just three of the many things the driverless car may offer to us that regular cars won't ever do.

These cars should not only be developed because of its amazing abilities that offers us but also because it helps our environment. We all know what regular cars do to our environment. We have all probably seen the effects of it throughout the world, but what if I told you that if these driverless cars were created they would help out our environment much more than regular cars. Driverless cars won't just help the environment by reducung air pollution but it will also cut the use of gas. We wont have to pay those exagerated prices for gas anymore with the driverless car since they will only need about half or less gas than regular cars use. So why not pay for less gas with the developement of driverless cars.

We all probably know that those who have experienced car accidents many of them could have been avoided if we just had some kind of warning or notification. Well what if I told you that if we developed driverless cars we will have a warning or notification if we were to get into some kind of accident. Yes you may not beleive it but the driverless car does this for your. You may have to take control of the driverless car but it will atleast keep you away from any accident. How the car works is that it has small touch sensors that detect whether the driver has to take over when navigating through a work zones or around accidents through a notification. The driverless car just announces it to you so that you know when to take over. Sometimes it may also use heads-up displays. It all depends on what driverless car you would to buy when they are developed.

Have you ever asked yourself what it would be like to drive a driverless car? Think about all the things you would have to do in a regular car and then think about not ahving to do any of these in a driverless car. I think that driverless cars should be developed because it will help our world be a better place. You wont ever have to worry about breaking, steering, or having

to us too much of gas. The driverless car does it all for you but also cuts the amount of gas used. The cars should also be developed because they are much better than the cars we currently use today that emit pollutants to our environment and other harmful things. These cars also provide us with warnings and notifications when cruising on the road. The major thing about all of this is that driverless cars should be developed and replaced for regular cars if we want to make our world a better and more greener place.

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