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The author of "The Challenge of Exploring Venus," suggests that Venus is a pursuit worth while to the dangers the planet enviorment presents, and he is right. Venus is known as the Earth's "twin" Because of how simliar it is to our planet. The reason why Venus is called Earth's twin is because astronomers are mostly fascinated because as stated in paragraph four, "once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system." The author continues on paragraph four on how

Venus was mostly "covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth." Which hints in where the author is going with this. In paragraph five the author goes on how NASA (The National Aeronautics and Space Administration.) Has a "compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus." By sending a bimp-like vechicle hovering "30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape."

Letting scientists float above the fray and hostile conditions. But even a vechicle hovering above the atmosphere would not be enough because nothing can penetrate the brightness of the light making videography and photography "ineffective." Also scientists can't just take rock samples they would need to get up close. The author then goes on that rather see them as huge risks we should "think of them as challenges." While that the author continues on in paragraph seven that NASA has been working on numerous other approaches that affective for the studying of Venus. They've been testing electroinics made out "silicon carbide" Have been tested many times in a chamber simulating "The chaos of Venus' surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions." Later NASA tested on more older technology dating way back. They are called "mechanical computers." and were used during the 1800s and during World War ll. The difference is that this old technology doesn't require eletronics at all. It is mostly geared up by levers and gears. The author goes on in pargraph seven on how modern computers need to be more "delicate" when it comes to very extreme weather. The author then goes on and compares how the modern technology wouldn't be able to uphold the phyiscal challenges compared to the mechanical parts which are more effective and more resitant to the heat,pressure, and numberous other forces. By the end, human curiositly would most likely beat the challenges Venus' atomsphere, and many others. Dangers shouldn't limit the imagination many scientists try to make a reality.

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