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Sould we take on the challenge of exploring Venus ?Venus is a difficult place to explore for a few reasons,It doesnt include the distance as it is around the corner in space terms. We have gone to mars so making to Venus isn't the hard part.The challenges start with its envirment filled with erupting valcanos ,frequent lighting storms, and powerful earthquakes .These combined features make it hard to even land their let alone get close to landing there.Venus being close to the sun isn't what makes it hot,the clouds keeping in the heat makes the temperatures average over

800 degerees.

Another challenge Venus presents to humanity is it's viscious clouds that contain highly corrosive sulfuric acid.The atmospheric pressure in Venus is 90 times greater than what we experience here on earth,that presents the problem of how do we get there.Even a submarine who is acustom to going in to deepest parts of the ocean will get crushed by the pressure.Thats when NASA came up witha possible soultion to the problem,Their solution

is to use a blimp-like vehicle that would hover 30 or so miles above the Venusian landsape

Even thought they are above all th hostility of Venus,They are too far away to do any proper research or

even see through the dense atmosphere of Venus.More importantly,Reasearchers can't do any reaserch on rocks,gas,or anything else from a distance.Without any of that they can not do a thorough examination of Venus and the vist would be in vain.Despite the challenges,researchers

are working on inovations to allow our machines to last long enough.

I agree that the presented challenge of exploring Venus is worthy despite it's dangers.If we get to land on Venus one day it will demonstrate that humans can explore anything they like. if we Complete this challenge human curiosity will lead us to similar endeavors.It would also show how elite our space program is and how it once again will blow our mindes.To landing on the moon to landin a rover on to mars,To one day,hopfully exploring the evening star.

Score: 3