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Have you ever wanted a self driving car where you could sit back and relax well Google cofounder Sergey Brin has envisioned a future public transportation system. This new transportation system will use half the fuel of today's taxis, you will not need to takeover as much, and manufacturers hope to bring in a in-car entertainment and information system.

My position on driverless cars are they give you more time to do other things while on the road. They give you free time to relax and clear your mind when you may not at home. This would also be a huge jump and improvement in today's technology.

The new transportation system will only use half the fuel of today's taxis. In the article "Driving Cars Are Coming", they state "offer far more flexibility than a bus." They believe such cars will fundamentally change the world. You will just get in the driverless car and set your destination and sit back and relax and do whatever makes you occupied.

In the driverless car you will not have to take over as much as a driver. "They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents." The car alerts the driver with a vibrating sensor on the seat, and consideration of flashing lights on the windshield to alert you.

The manufacturers also think by "bringing in-car entertainment and information system" will interpret the fun driving in a new way. These displays would be in a head-up display so hey may be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over.

New cars that are driverless have only been a concept because "There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting." The new driverless transportation system will include only using half the fuel of today's taxis, only needing to take over when situations occur, and will have a entertainment and information system.

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