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I think you should join the seagoing cowboys program because you can travel all over the world, meet a lot of new people, you can even look into many different types of cultures,try new foods , you can even see alot of unique places.

Most importantly you'll be doing this for a good cause, seagoing cowboys dont just travel the world to see new cultures and eat weird types of food we do this to help the people who need us were doing this beacuse they're weak and they need our help to regain there strength to provide for there familys so please join us to help the people who need it, they need you,they need all of you.

In conclusion I think you should join the seagoing cowboys because you will be helping alot of peopkle and animals to gain there strength and do what they do best, so why dont you give us a helping hand in helping the ones who need it most.

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