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Venus is our second closest planet to the sun. But we do not know what Venus actually looks like. Like in paragraph 4 Venus could have been once like Earth. I could have been filled with oceans, plants, trees, and even mountains it could be

anything just like Earth. But we don't know. Yes it would be nice to explore Venus. But what risks will it have.

In paragraph 5 it states " NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus". They are wanting to study to see what it has. Yes Venus is one of the hottest planets more than Mercury. And yet we are wanting to risk in searching and seeing what Venus actually looks like. Venus can also melt any kind of metal. Yet we want to risk because of our curiosity.

In paragraph 7 it is saying that once ago Venus had better electronics. But to actually know. They were more advanced then our technology now an days.

I feel that the need and the curiosity that we humans have could take us to success of it could take us to be faliures.

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