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When you join the Seagoing Cowboys, you join a year of adventure. When you join, you get to take care of animals like horses, cattle, and more. Soon enough you'll know everything there is to know about taking care of them like feeding, washing, grooming, and even playing with them. "It's an oppurtunity of a lifetime."

Not only do you get to take care of animals, you get to sight see as well. "It's an unbelievable oppurtunity for a small-town boy" says a cowboy named Luke "Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special," he says. So was taking a godola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water." Imagine seeing beautiful cities that you always wanted to see, right in front of your eyes.

And finally, when you join, you get to have fun. On board, especially on return trips after animals have been unloaded, the cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. You can play table-tennis, fence, box, read, whittle, and other games to pass the time.

Becoming a Seagoing Cowboy is more than an adventure, it opens the world to you. Luke says. "I'm grate ful for the oppurtunity, it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs." The awareness will stay with you, and you will feel good for the res of your life.

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