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Venus, they say is our twin planet. Earth and Venus are close in density and size. Venus is sometimes easy to see from Earth. The planet is very diffilcult to study closely. NASA one day wants to have human life on Venus. One day maybe life will be better on Venus than Earth.

NASA has been trying to get a spacecraft to stay on Venus more than a few hours. "On the planet's

surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit." As stated in the story. Venus has carbon dioxide clouds over the planet. "The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such a valleys, mountains, and craters." As stated in the text.

NASA may have more imformation on how one day Venus could have humans on the planets in the furture. The story states that " Many reasearchers are working on innovations that would allow our mahcines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowlege. More information will lead NASA to more ways of getting infoamtion of Venus and possibily a camera up there to see what the planet looks like. A lot of people are curious about the twin planet.

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