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Lukes Point of Veiw

If you join the Cattle-boat you could have the time of your life you could see thinges you

never seen before you could go in caslies and see so much stuff I had a great time everyone is nice they all work together and have a good time.

If we get avery thing done we could play some board games. Or when we take the animals where we need to we could play baseball, volleyball, games, table-tennis tourments, fencing, boxing, reading,whittling, and games also help pass the time. You could also hang out with me more. We could see animals we never seen before.

We could go to China and go cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States whole careing animals and having a good time. We could see at night if the animals are ok and have a good time. If one of us are about to fall off the ship one of us could catch one another.

So that is why I think that we could have a good time when we are working and we could have a lot of fun. Made you will come but it is up to you.

Score: 3