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Venus is not only one of the brightest points of light in the night sky but is also one of the most dangerious planets in our solar system. It is the second planet from our sun, it's sometimes referred to as Earths twin. We have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on Venus but not a single one has lasted more then a few hours in its atmostphere. This is why no spacecraft has touched down for three decades on its surface, because of a thick atmostphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide covers all of Venus.

Venus average temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times grater then what we experince on our own planet. Astronmers are still fascinated by Venus even though it's dangers because it may well once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system. Atronmers think that it was covered with oceans, valleys, moutains, and craters, so it easily could have had forms of life on Venus. NASA has a idea of sending humans to Venus, what they would do is having a blimp like vehicle hovering over 30 miles over Venus landscapes to collect information.

Venus is a dangerious plant but it could also a planet that has a lot of potenial of old life forms. But nobody knows for sure how Venus was its still a question to us, until we can see for ourselfs. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.

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