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Do you think there should be technology to tell us our emotions?

Well Dr. Haung does and here is my reasons why.

Facial Action Coding System, a new technology created to show us our emotions. Boredem, students have evolved in many different ways such as a likeness in school. Many students get either tired, bored, or confused. Teachers go by the book and do what they have been told to educate and tech students, but most students get either bored, tired, or confused in the subject that the teacher is teaching. We soon to know the reason is why for that, so this is where the Facial Action Coding System comes in work. Its going to show how these students are feeling and what the reason is why they are feeling that way so the lesson could get modified.

Dr. Huang observed artist such as Leonardo da Vinci who studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotion algorithms information as electrical code. So Dr. Huang used what da Vinci did but put in his own way to help out schools for the students so the teachers can see if they are bored, angry, sad, tired, or anything.

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