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Technology to read the emotinoal expressions of students in a classroom would be very valuable but also very not likely to happen anytime soon. While I believe it's a great idea to keep kids on track and keep them actually working; I don't believe it would work as easily in the real world.

There are many problems with the Facial Action Coding System. The first thing would be as stated in paragraph 7, "Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile." This shows that a normal PC can't handle the algorithms. Without this program working on a normal PC schools are going to have to buy certain computers and pay people to maintain them. It's overall not practical or convenient enough. I believe in the near future it will be very pracitical and will be used to help many kids that wouldn't have graduated before graduate.

I believe the Facial Acton Coding System would be very helpful to get kids that dont try and aren't engaged, engaged in their school work. If you can make learning fun for a kid when they're upset or frustrated, it'll make it much eaiser for them to learn. Using these machines so they manipulate your work and change it to fit how you are emotionally will get kids to try harder and get engaged. I also believe the percentage of kids failing and dropping out would change once the coding system is integrated.

Overall I believe the Facial Action Coding System is a very great idea. It'll improve our schools and our country as a whole. But as previously said I dont think we are technologically advanced enough to start using these algorithms and programs, but I believe in the next 10 years we'll start to see this program in schools being used to help the children.

Score: 4