Deletion of BAE Systems Electronics and Integrated Solutions

Comment: Do we really need this nomination?  I think not as it fails to engage with the topic per 
Stance: keep
Cited policy: Wikipedia:Articles for deletion (WP:BEFORE)

Comment: It ''is'' badly written.  I tried to purge the article of #Solutions|"solution"-speak, but have apparently been reverted.  "Support Solutions" isn't English for a dry dock; as far as I can tell it means nothing at all.  If kept, that kind of |patent nonsense needs to be vigorously scrubbed from the article.  In its current state, it probably does qualify for speedy deletion as advertising, regardless of notability
Stance: comment
Cited policy: Wikipedia:Manual of Style (WP:WTA||WP:NONSENSE)