original: the hot metal straightener slid easily through the hair , causing less damage and dryness than previously-used techniques .
simplifications: the hot metal straightener slid easily through the hair , causing less damage and dryness than earlier used methods . the straightener slid easily through her hair and caused less damage and dryness . the hot metal straightener slide through the hair causing less damage and dryness than previously-used techniques . the hot metal straightener slid easily through the hair , causing less damage and dryness than previously-used techniques . the hot metal straightener -lrb- the device used to the flatten and straighten the hair -rrb- move smoothly & easily through the hair , causing less damage and dryness than previously-used techniques . the warm metal straightener slid easily through the hair , causing less damage and dryness than previously-used techniques the hot metal straightner moved smoothly easily through the hair , causing less damage and dryness than previously-used techniques . the hot metal straightener slid easily through the hair , causing less damage and dryness than previously-used techniques .