original: by 8.30 pm he had attracted the attention of the watchman for the maritime service board , james cargill .
simplifications: by 8.30 pm he had attracted the attention of the watchman for the maritime service board , james cargill . 1 . by 8:30 pm , he had attracted the attention of the watchman for the maritime service board , james cargill . by 8.30 pm he had the attention of the watchman for the maritime service board , james cargill . by 8.30 pm he had been seen by the watchman for the maritime service board , james cargill . by 8:30 pm he had attracted the attention of the watchman for the maritime service board , james cargill . by 8.30 pm he had succeeded in catching the attention of james cargill , the watchman for the maritime service board . by 8.30 pm he had attracted the attention of the watchman for the maritime service board , james cargill . james cargill , the person in charge of the maritime service board , noticed him at 8:30 pm .