Conclusion is present but not clear. No clear direction with no lead or conclusion. Connections are confusing or incomplete. Voice Writer speaks honestly and directly. The voice is natural and expressive and engages the reader.
Writer speaks honestly and directly, but the voice lacks some expression to engage the reader.
Writer seems sincere, but uninvolved. Voice is not compelling. Writing is lifeless and mechanical. Communicates on a functional level, but does not move the reader. Word Choice Imagery and verbs are strong.