Not dialogue but behavior Watching behavior . When the behavior is correct, even a deaf audience will understand it. Where the values are, behavior of words. Whole element behavior , lift it off pages. Whole scene should be about behaving .
Words match with behavior .
Why are those extra words , how to make the words work, make it into behavior , repetition of words. Can't be planned behavior . You only recognize emotions from the face , voice , behavior , etc. Has to be funny to watch. Don't play radio.