They confessed to each other, bonded and fascinated us all at the same time. My point here is that a scene this well conceived would be difficult not to write effectively. If that's not the case, then you need to work it over until you can. The bank is beginning to bulge. How about sprinkling the projected scenes over our old friend, the three act structure.
Screenplays are big and unruly.
You can get lost in their breadth. Three or four acts help to ground it, make it more bite sized. Finally, it gives you something to go for. Think of each of them as an oasis. Now what, - break it down even further.