No career objective is stated. Career objective is vague. The career objective is stated in a relatively clear statement. 9-10 points Career objective is crisp, clear, and succinct. 6-8 points Content is relatively clear with a few statements needing modification.
Writing is crisp, clear, and succinct.
The applicant's name, address, and phone are noticeable without being overbearing. 6-8 points Name, address, and phone number clearly stand apart from the rest of the text. Some modification to size or format would be better. 9-10 points Name, address, and phone number are easy to spot. Appropriate size and formatting.