Clear evidence or research. Visual aids are well done and are used to make presentation more interesting and meaningful. Letter Unacceptable 1 Needs Improvement 2 Proficient 3 Advanced 4 Many errors in business address of congressional representatives. Greeting is inappropriate and is punctuated incorrectly. Writer struggles to identify reason for writing.
Writer states no facts or examples to support the position.
There are many grammar and mechanical errors. Writer does not communicate problem and solution. Letter is rambling and redundant. Letter is rude and demanding. Conclusion paragraph has none of the required elements.