We are concerned that it is very technical. Guideline 1 rationale typo. It is not in the glossary. X. Guideline 1 last sentence is not a sentence. X. checkpoint 1.1 Hard to read and make sense of.
Several checkpoints refer to using operating system conventions.
2.1 and 2.3 seem very redundant to me or that 2.3 is a technique of 2.1. We've been discussing others. They seem redundant. X. 3.6 and 3.7. I think presentation might be more accurate description.