This paper is lively, or exciting in some way, or it is a little different from everyone else's. Word Choice I chose accurate, strong, specific words. My words are fun to read. Sentence Fluency Sentences are smooth and easy to read. I fixed my choppy sentences.
Sentences start in different ways.
I have some long sentences and some short sentences to make my paper interesting. Each sentence has a noun and a verb. Conventions I checked my spelling. I checked my capitals, periods, and indents. I gave each speaker a new paragraph.