Details are skimpy, general, and repetitive. This paper lacks a central idea or purpose. Information is very limited or simply unclear. The organization of your paper is the inside structure-like the frame of a house. The writer provides a clear sense of beginning and ending with an inviting introduction and satisfying conclusion.
Transitions work well.
Organization flows smoothly. The order may not be a graceful fit with the topic. No clear sense of beginning or ending. Transitions are very weak. Arrangement of details is illogical.