Copyright Copyright is in the author's name. Send mail to P.O Box 618, Zephyr Cove, NV 89448. Send FedEx or UPS deliveries to 674 Riven Rock Rd. A. Editors always desire well written stories. Beyond that obvious simplification the best way to gain an advantage over other submissions is to read as many books as you can that are produced by that editor or line to see if your work is similar in tone and feels in harmony with their other books.
Some submissions have no internal or external conflict, but are just a nice love story unfolding.
Category romance is normally internal conflict driven, our editors prefer both internal and external conflict which is what our longer word count is meant to encourage. Reveal early on the conflict that must be resolved by the end of the book. LionHearted prefers two points of view, the hero's and the heroine's. Excessive use of passive voice, pages and pages of narrative without dialogue. Spelling and grammar errors, and poorly constructed sentences.