Sentence structure 6. The composition's treatment and development of the subject is highly superficial. Mechanical errors are frequent. The composition's treatment and development of the subject are rudimentary. While some organization is present, it is neither clear nor effective.
Sentences are frequently awkward, ambiguous, and marred by serious mechanical errors.
Evidence of careful proofreading is scanty or nonexistent. The whole composition often gives the impression of having been conceived and written in haste. Average The composition's treatment of the subject is generally competent. The composition meets the assignment, has few mechanical errors, and is reasonably well organized and developed. The actual information it delivers, however, seems thin and commonplace.