Sentences begin with quotes. Historical figures are referred to by his or her first name. Titles of essays lack quotation marks. Titles of books are not italicized or underlined. There is an abundance of sentimental phrasing.
Specific information is included without source documentation.
In some cases, the parenthetical documentation is incorrect. None of the long quotes are formatted correctly. A student whom I would have asked to write this sort of assignment should have a much better knowledge of English methods of composition than is demonstrated in this paper. F. Please come see me in my office.'' I would assign the F because the paper, which is full of parenthetical references, does not include a list of sources at the end. In my book, that's an automatic failing grade for not documenting sources.