This takes away from the story by trying to fill up space. Also, there is a reference to Lott's spokesman. There is a need currently to not be gender specific in these titles. HOW-He hit the people and did not come to court. The source is personal.
Sources are lawyers that are familiar with the case.
The problem comes in the source being people not involved directly, outside sources that can merely speculate and give partial facts. Also, there is no mention of the state that this Montgomery County is in. These are three examples of good articles. The impact of this story is that thousands of people have been killed and mutilated. It has conflict, it is a gurilla war.