The challenge is to figure out where new scenes could go that help the plot or character development. Maybe as you suggest a nice scene adding character depth could be used. So take this opportunity to make it even better and get it to 100-105. Please help Mark Mark, There are a few questions wrapped up in there. First, ideas by themselves from aspiring or even new professional screenwriters are almost impossible to sell to anyone.
Studios buy pitches based on the track record of the writer pitching.
You won't be able to sell it because someone else owns the underlying rights, and although it might make a great writing sample, agents would much rather take on a new client with a script they can actually try to sell than one with just a good sample. So, unfortunately, I would suggest you spend the monumental time and effort that goes into writing a screenplay on something original. After four years of entertainment law in Atlanta and New York, he abandoned his legal career to attend USC s Peter Stark Producing Program. Steinberg has also written a sitcom pilot for 20th Century Fox Television. You also understand that Done Deal has not undertaken to verify the credentials or abilities of any of our volunteers.