Weak use of transitions. Sentence structure and vocabulary tend to be simple and repetitive, but there are few mechanical errors. The paper is comprehensible and presents some ideas which are related to the topic, but there is no development. No sense of voice or individuality. The writer makes no apparent attempt to select, elaborate or order information.
Sentence structure is weak and repetitive.
Transitions are omitted or inappropriate. Vocabulary is limited. Frequent mechanical errors. 1 Attempts to address the topic, but there is little clear content. Often extremely difficult to comprehend.