Not Yet The writer seems indifferent, uninvolved, or distanced from the writing. The writer does not seem to reach out to the reader. The writing may communicate on a functional level, but it does not move or involve the reader. Back to dimensions of writing. The flow and rhythm of the writing fit and enhance the context.
Writing has cadence, sentence structure and length heighten meaning.
Striking words and phrases catch the reader's ear and linger in the mind. Cliches and jargon are avoided, except for effect. If used, fragments work well, contributing not detracting. Dialogue, if used, sounds natural. The language is functional, prosaic, and mechanical.