Twirl Anyway,you're wrong Gayle. It IS better. Your stories always have been and always will. Yeah, as I read through this after it was posted I noticed the 'baby' mistake. Isobel beautifully sad.
Some parts are a bit awkward but sweet all the same.
There were a few grammar problems and I didn't like the use of 'baby' either, but the overall effect was beautiful. It doesn't seem up to your usual standard of writing. If you are 'talking' to the person, you don't need all those facts. They would work better if the story was written in the third person. It's a nice story and all, I just think you could revise it and make it much better.