Yet The reader usually knows what I mean. I need to tell just a little more about what is important. The order of ideas or events makes sense most of the time. In and Out What I truly think and feel shows up sometimes. Not Striking The words in my paper get the message across, but they don't capture anyone's imagination or attention.
Some sentence are choppy or awkward, but most are clear.
A number of mistakes in my paper need to be cleaned up before I am ready to publish. What I Want to Say When someone else reads my paper, it will be hard for them to understand what I mean. The order in my paper is jumbled and confused. Yet Me I'm not comfortable sharing what I truly think and feel yet. This paper is difficult to read aloud, even with practice.