Michelobe wants us to put a little weekend in our week. Of course, relief is spelled with Rolaids. In conclusion, I'd like to say that advertising influences the way everybody lives. The cars we drive, the clothes we wear, and food we eat are all a result of advertising. The opening paragraph has no introduction, merely the thesis divided into two sentences, and the conclusion is a gratuitous restatement of the opening.
Transitional phrases are either non-existent or uninspired.
Details are vivid, occasionally novel, and the point of view and tone are generally consistent, the latter being lightly ironic. Grammatically, the essay is altogether sound. Armstrong Atlantic State University.