Words are used incorrectly. Sentence fluency Writing has flow and rhythm. Sentences are built well for expressive oral reading and adds interest to text. Writing has flow and rhythm. Sentences may lack expression for oral reading to add interest to text.
Writing is pleasant, but lacks rhythm.
Sentences are efficient and grammatical, but sometimes stiff and choppy or repetitive. Text can be read aloud but not musical. Writing may be choppy, incomplete, rambling, awkward or monotonous. Sentence structure may sound unnatural. Text is difficult to read aloud.