Each supporting detail sentence has at least two elaborating detail sentences. Each supporting detail sentence has no elaborating detail sentence. Each supporting detail sentence has one elaborating detail sentence. Each supporting detail sentence has at least two elaborating detail sentences. Each supporting detail sentence has three elaborating detail sentences.
Word choice is simple and adds little detail.
Adequate use of words to add details. Word choices inclue trasition words, terminal words and a variety of descriptive and action words. Word choices inclue exceptional trasition words, terminal words and a variety of descriptive and action words. Elaborating Details Closing Sentence Use several Transition Words. Remember periods, capital letters, and commas.