In that case, we'll review the entire document. Sometimes people want long coaching sessions. In that case, I ll provide it. I recognize that, help them feel comfortable, and show that I am on their side. I draw on my teaching experience as an adjunct professor at graduate schools in the Boston area, and as an instructor at numerous seminars.
Typical problems are wordiness, using jargon, and using the passive voice.
The passive voice is generally harder to understand than the active voice. In addition, the passive voice often leaves out important information. The missing information makes it still harder to understand. To boldly go is a perfectly useful phrase. Can t, won t, and so on are acceptable in workplace writing.