Claims in essay lack definition and support. Appeals to logic and emotion are unapparent or nonexistent. Author does not establish credibility. Does not contain a counter-argument. Paragraphs thoroughly and creatively express main ideas.
Transitions are well integrated and enhance the flow of the essay .
Essay is organized in logical manner. Paragraphs express main ideas with adequate transitions. Organizational problems are few. Paragraphs are not connected. Ideas are hard to follow.