To offer another example, you might be struck that Benedict Anderson's Imagined Communities is pervaded with the language of theology. Indeed, an equally compelling essay might posit that Anderson's language indicates his deep debt to the writings of Walter Benjamin, the early twentieth-century theorist and literary critic who was equally influenced by Jewish mysticism and Marxism. Okay, so if you have never read, nor even heard of, Benjamin, you are unlikely to make this argument. It is not easy to write an excellent essay, but it is also not impossible. Many books or articles may share the same driving question, but they do not have the same titles.
Verbs are good.
Try to get rid of as many of them as possible. In such a sentence, you have not actually analyzed anything, or argued any point. Instead, you have merely made an assertion . Assertions, especially when platitudes, do not support your thesis. You are not going to fool anybody into thinking you erudite, just by writing long, run-on sentences.