Woods, Andrew W. and J.R. Delaney. The heat and fluid transfer associated with the flanges on hydrothermal venting structures. Earth and Plan. Group 5, You each wrote pretty good sections. You need to integrate your goals and approaches and cut down on the repetition in your future group writeups.
Some measurements can address more than one scientific issue.
The spelling needs checking in some sections. Please cite your references in future writings. It may help to make some decisions that focus your proposal, particularly regarding what you will measure and why. One approach may be for you to sit down together and pretend that a diking event occurred. Pretend you can get perfect data.