Letter is rambling and redundant. Letter is rude and demanding. Conclusion paragraph has none of the required elements. Some errors in business address. The letter is generally similar to one receiving an unacceptable rating, but there are one or two elements which are relatively well done.
Writer states only a few facts and examples to support positions.
There are many grammar and mechanical errors. Conclusion paragraph has only one element. The letter is as good as one receiving an advance rating, but there are one or two elements of the presentation which are less well done. Conclusion paragraph has two elements. Writer effectively uses many facts and examples to support position.