It is your conclusion. Your tone cannto be too accepting of gee whiz stuff. People may have cute names for things, say bombopolis, but that does not mean there is anything interesting in what they say or the name. Also, you cannot be quoting your professors too much. You will do better to put all names in the notes, and only talk about ideas and argument.
Scholarly work is different from polemic or agument.
We are dealing with ideas, not people, at least here. What to do. I would put all references to names in the notes. Ideas and concepts and arguments to the fore. Bring it forward from your conclusions.