No more than one paragraph unrelated to the focus. Adequate introduction and conclusion. Mechanics Complete sentences with some sentences demonstrating effective coordination and subordination. Prose is clear for reader's understanding. Level 3 1.2-1.9 Development Focus is vague, either too general, too narrow, superficial, or indirect.
Thesis statement is missing or difficult to find.
Body supported by few facts, examples, etc. More than one paragraph with inadequate support. More than one paragraph not clearly related to the focus. Underdeveloped or inappropriate introduction and conclusion. Transitions often lacking or inappropriate.