By Sarah J. Farber Return to Eternity , Victor Thorn. I never communicate with all of those entities in one day, let alone in less than an hour, but if you read Victor Thorn's Return to Eternity you'll have the chance to read about all of them in one sitting. The idea is that by using a multi-media presentation along with words, you can achieve more than simply writing alone. The CD is a series of frames or slides centered around the text, which is white text on a black screen.
Some words are in red and function similar to web links.
By clicking on the highlighted word, you are taken to a series of six or more screens that show you the subtext behind the words. The result is unsatisfying. Once her shirt has been removed, the fiery woman undoes her bra, then continues to dance in place as she unpeels her tight black slacks with lurid hurriedness. Pubescent boys have more eloquent fantasies. Like this passage, Thorn's prose is weighted down with unnecessary and often awkward descriptions that completely fail to bring in the reader.