After having set a definition go on to describe how your page meets these criteria. You star to go into it later in your paper by telling about the complexity of the links and the bad choice of picture. You explain why you use clearity as a criteria by going into depth about the complex links and image maping. It is easy to get lost and bored within the site because there is more than one way to access the same information and it seems that you are stuck going back to the same page often to access new material 7. I think if you include definitions and explain the relevence of your criteria then your rebuttal will become clear to you and then you can address them 8.
Sentence structure needs to be looked at in a few places.
You lose meaning due to the length and complexity of some. There are a few obvious erros also like repeated words that could easily be cleared up with another rereading. The best part of your paper is your voice. It is easy to read because the sentences are short but not choppy. The paper literally reads itself.