Methods describing the activities to be employed to achieve the desired results are clearly stated. 18 to 20 Methods describing the activities to be employed to achieve the desired results are clearly stated and comprehensive of the proposal's components. It is hard to know what the writer is trying to express. Writing is convoluted. Misspelled words, incorrect grammar, and improper punctuation were evident.
Writing is clear, but unnecessary words are used.
Meaning is sometimes hidden. A few words are either misused or misspelled. A few grammar and punctuation errors have been found. Writing is crisp, clear, and succinct. The writer incorporates the active voice when appropriate.