Sentences are clear, complete, expressive, and varied in form and length. Word choice is appropriate for audience and purpose. Word choice enhances your use of details and examples. Paragraphs are shaped to promote the essay's organization. Use strong verbs and specific nouns.
Tone is more formal.
This essay is written in third person. There are no deficiencies in grammar, punctuation, spelling, and usage. Your essay has been carefully proofread. During revision, you have read this essay out loud to yourself to catch errors. Your essay is 1500 minimum to 2000 words maximum or approximately six to eight pages.