However, the information delivered is thin and commonplace. Reader is not instructed. Opening is uninteresting to reader. The conclusion is not engaging but is pedantic. Transitions between paragraphs lack smoothness.
Sentences are choppy and show little variety.
Word choice is acceptable but not always precise containing tedious repetitions. Often contains fragments, splices, and misspellings. Reader is not tempted to read the paper again. Idea stated clearly but with little original thought. Few errors have escaped the writer's attention.