Juris, the noble monk is currently in control of Golem. He reflects upon the recent events that led to his situation. Show here a cascade of arrows both bouncing off his stone skin and some imbedding themselves in the ground around him. I'm not going to kiss your butt and say it's great if it's not. No one improves by being coddled, and the average level of writing in comics is so abysmal that we can't let it go on without trying to raise the bar.
Writing is harder to evaluate.
That's the goal. I'm not kidding. Starting to write, figuring out your whole story, and following through are the biggest hurdles any new writer faces. Putting it out there for review takes stones, and not the kind used to build a Golem. Never underestimate the strength your story can gain from tossing around well-known concepts like the Golem.