But I don't know how - other people, especially people on here, will react to it. I just want to tell you what we - did and see how you feel about it. The purpose of a workshop, of critiques, is to help the writer - improve. The way we were taught to do this is similar to bio-feedback. Then it's up to the writer to decide whether or not to change anything.
Writer has notion, captures part in words, and reader reconstructs from the words.
Terribly hard for the writer to guess what the reader will construct, and terribly important. So what you are talking about is feeding that back to the writer, to let them know what the words did. Egads, I hope I'm not coming across the wrong way. Guess that's just - a problem I have to get used to when using the computer. But, as you suggest, feedback helps correct that.