Unless you're writing a technical report, avoid technical language. Always avoid jargon. Check and double-check the cause and effect relationships you set up, and make sure all potential confusion is eliminated. In this paper, I will discuss the relationship between fairy tales and early childhood. We must save the whales.
Socialism is the best form of government for Kenya.
If the government takes over industry in Kenya, the industry will become more efficient 4. Avoid merely reporting a fact. Hoover's administration was rocked by scandal. The many scandals of Hoover's administration revealed basic problems with the Republican Party's nominating process. Note that arriving at an analytical thesis doesn't happen magically.