It is hard to know what the writer is trying to express. Misspelled words, incorrect grammar, and improper punctuation are evident. Writing is generally clear, but unnecessary words are used. Meaning is sometimes hidden. Paragraph or sentence structure may be repetitive.
Writing is crisp, clear, and succinct.
The writer incorporates the active voice when appropriate. Up to 10 points Timeliness Material was submitted more than three days late. Material was submitted up to three days late. Material is submitted on time.