Conclusion must be at least one paragraph. Conclusion reasserts the viewpoint and gives the essay closure. Although a summary can be an effective element in a conclusion, summary alone is unacceptable. A good conclusion draws meaning, calls for action, projects into the future, or leaves a question for the reader to further explore. Sentences are clear, complete, expressive, and varied in form and length.
Word choice is appropriate for audience and purpose.
Word choice enhances your use of details and examples. Paragraphs are shaped to promote the essay's organization. You may avoid using the first person altogether, if you wish. There are no deficiencies in grammar, punctuation, spelling, and usage. Your essay has been carefully proofread.