A minimum amount of detail and information gets the writer by. Some details or discussion are what audience already know or are distracting. Examples tell rather than show. Discussion relies on a minimal number of sometimes biased sources. F - No focus.
Writer needs more information before they can construct an essay and a thesis.
Writer doesn t know what the thesis is. Few sources cited. A -Mechanics clear, clean. B -Mechanics mostly clear, and clean. F -Overall, more than 10 mechanical problems .and bury the meaning of the paper.