Don't take it personally. Read the previous suggestion again. Then edit and revise. Come back and reread it. Often, you'll have a fresh outlook, which will result in more edits and revisions.
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Web visitors don't usually stay too long. Use a good, catchy headline. Otherwise, your visitor probably won't read your body copy. Break up your copy with subheads and bullets. If the above advice doesn't work, we can provide a free quote for your project.