But Mulgrew is not the only star. The film also stars Samantha Eggar, Shani Wallis and Marty Ingels. The point is, the story becomes more newsworthy when all the major names are listed in the first paragraph. The names of the stars strengthen the release. By including the names of all the major stars in your lead, you increase the interest in your film and a reader's desire to see it.
Stimulants are the key to effective writing, whatever the form.
The statement is factually correct but not compelling. Note how much more intriguing the suggested story becomes. A final thought. When we enter the field of journalism or public relations, we become professional writers. This means that when we write something, our first draft is seldom the final draft.