The writer tells a story with a strong plot to match the topic in the prompt. Elaboration Many details the describe setting and characters vividly and make all the events easy to understand. Dialogue shows rather than tells about the characters and events.
Word choice is exact and interesting.
It helps create the story's lively voice. The events are told in an order that makes sense, and time-clue words make the story easy to follow. The plot has an interesting beginning that introduces the characters and setting, a middle that develops a problem, and an ending that shows how the problem works out. The writer tells a story with a strong plot to match the topic in the prompt. Those words and details give the story a strong voice.