Enhancing the student-teaching experience through the Internet. Some claims do not seem warranted. For example, I see very little evidence that the environment he created provides more interactivity or collaboration than one can ordinarily get in a traditional classroom. The rationale for showing Web pages in a standard classroom may have some merit, but a more compelling argument is needed. The specific layout and teaching approach are a little naive.
Third sentence is wordy and awkward.
This article does not convince me that this course is that much different. Say something more meaningful. The second paragraph suggests that there is nothing innovative about this course presentation. Third sentence mentions for the first time that you are using the Web in a traditional classroom. Most people would think you were using it in distance education.