The writing contains virtually no grammatical or mechanical errors. A Commendable Achievement. This paper has a clear purpose that is logically and adequately developed. This paper does not dazzle, but the writer is thinking and writing well. There may be faulty logic or insufficient support of the central point.
Some paragraphs require a clearer focus.
The language and sentences are sometimes awkward. Occasional minor grammatical or mechanical errors occur but do not impede clarity of expression. Serious sentence errors such as comma splices, fragments, or fused sentences are extremely rare. The paper represents a good draft rather than a polished piece of writing. The writer has a main idea, but fails to express it adequately.