I know I forgot something. 1 to 12 points TUP barely accounts for student learning. 13 to 17 points TUP is focused on stakeholders, including, but not targeted specially, on student learning. 18 to 20 points Focus, tone, and general feeling is that this TUP is meant to help students learn. 1 to 12 points Hard to know what the writer is trying to express.
Writing is convoluted.
Writing fairly clear, perhaps a bit wordy. Few words misused or misspelled. Few grammar and punctuation errors. Writing is crisp, clear, and succinct. The writer incorporates the active voice when appropriate.