Evidence of the Claim 1. Instead of just using the example from the book, you can use other examples like from talk shows. I think that'd add more evidence to your paper. Your evidence is too limited right now. I think a more detailed discussion is needed.
Sources sited are from the section itself.
Your first two quotes from her are good. People can distinguish the difference between the two titles. Your quotations are introduced with appropriate signal phrases but to identify the page number, you only have to do the parenthesis and the number, ex. Organization and Style 1. Your arguments are organized well.