Parts of these clippings are crossed off with pencil. Pages two and three of the newspaper clipping has a lot of the transcript crossed out in blue ink. The five page carbon form has typed text but a lot is crossed out with pencil. These are the inserted pages Jim Bishop prepared to go in the original text. It is hard to tell if by crossing off sections if he used these parts in the book or if he was discarding them.
Some pages have corrections that had to have been done on the original.