Focus may be general. The reason you're writing is stated or implied. Focuses your report. Meets criteria listed for Accomplished and uses strategies not always thought of for reporting. Organization Shows little or no evidence of purposeful organization.
Writing uses a predictable pattern and contains a clear beginning, middle and end.
Writer stays on topic and does not jump around. Has a catchy opening, body gives information and ending summarizes points. May show unusual pattern to present information. Stance Writer does not seem to be concerned with informing readers. Stance is one of wanting to give information but may not be most important to topic.