The procedures section does a fair job in explaining how the sample will be selected, how the design will be implemented, and by whom and by what methods the data will be gathered. The procedures are clear and presented in chronological order. If another researcher wanted to replicate the study, enough information is provided to follow each step. It is hard to know what the writer is trying to express. Misspelled words, incorrect grammar, and improper punctuation are evident.
Writing is generally clear, but unnecessary words are used.
Meaning is sometimes hidden. Paragraph or sentence structure may be repetitive. Writing is crisp, clear, and succinct. The writer incorporates the active voice when appropriate. Up to 10 points Timeliness Material was submitted more than three days late.