Please put this assignment in the mail by May 1. All the Best, Tutor The student sent the following note with her essay. Note from Student Dear Tutor, I hope this is what you mean by a piece of persuasion. I know my last essay could have used some work, but I'm not going to say anything about my reasons that could be held against me. Anyhow, hope this one's better.
Strawberries can be sour.
It is true, though. Take the sweetest strawberry you have ever tasted, including the one you snitched from your grandpa's patch last summer, and douse it in whipped cream. The whipped cream is so loaded with artificial sugar that the natural sugar of the strawberry pales to tartness. However, they still manage to taste delicious together. When you first start a writing tutorial, the juicy strawberry of your writing looks perfect and beautiful, and tastes sweet because you have no higher standards to compare yourself to than your classmates' average writings.