Generally, however, the style if flat, and the meaning is not always clear. Choice of words is generally appropriate, but shows little attention to effect. There are some errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Organization is not clear nor effective. The paragraph tends to be incoherent and poorly developed.
Sentences are generally awkward or overly simple and show little awareness of style.
Their meaning is frequently not clear. Choice of words is often imprecise, or inappropriate. There are a number of errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling. The paragraph lacks a distinct beginning, middle, and ending. The paragraph obviously lacks unity and is poorly developed.