The next sentence is especially awkward. Try a variety of different phrases. Overall, again, I am missing the focus of this piece. You need to try and narrow your point down to a few points or observations. Then, expound on them.
Word choice is also a bit choppy.
Try to make transitions more smoothly. The remaining images . . . You need to choose singular or plural and stick with it. Otherwise, it sounds like he was upset by her passing initially but later found peace at the bar. Break it up into at least two.