Sentences are clear, complete, expressive, and varied in form and length. Word choice is appropriate for audience and purpose. Word choice enhances your use of details and examples. Paragraphs are shaped to promote the essay's organization. Use strong verbs and specific nouns.
Tone is more formal.
This, and the remaining essay, is written in third person. There are no deficiencies in grammar, punctuation, spelling, and usage. Your essay has been carefully proofread. During revision, you have read this essay out loud to yourself to catch errors. Your essay is 600 minimum to 800 words maximum or approximately three pages.