The composition addresses the assignment with clarity, originality, and careful thought.
Transitions are clear and logical.
Sentence structure is varied and interesting and integrates the kinds of structures that the class has been using. Errors in spelling and agreement have been eliminated through careful editing. Vocabulary is varied, well-chosen, and appropriate to the context both in meaning and in style. Weaknesses do not impair comprehensibility. Essay is comprehensible and quite competent but needs more attentive editing.