We will not meet as a class on Thursday. Instead, you will find the class plans online for that day. Also, we will discuss this one more time in class, and I'll show again how to solve the problems, but be sure to read the instructions for submitting work to the sharing sites. We can't expect readers to be able to read carefully if the text is one big blob.
Paragraph breaks are essential.
We will discuss this as a class. We will focus on the following features of the drafts, and we will write responses to the writer that address these features. In your response to the writer, list your expectations as a reader after reading the opening. Then read the rest of the draft. Examine each of the body paragraphs of this draft.