The Student Plan divided people into categories. The climate on campus is the problem. Expectations should be outlined more clearly. Both plans' main focus is people of color and women. It is not just the job of the resource center.
Recruitment is a missing element.
Reading the plan, one gets the impression that the campus will accommodate people once they get here, but there are no plans to recruit. We assert the standard notions of what blocks admission retention but do we know which and what is most critical and can we then focus on the most important barriers. Identify what units can do, what schools and colleges can do and what the campus can do. Replace can with must or ought . Gets antibodies up.