He also shows how these fears acted as motivation for joining the church. The following paragraph could have a clearer and stronger topic sentence. The entire premise of Christianity is founded on love. Not surprisingly, this is the area Churchianity has perverted most effectively. These commandments did not come with a qualifier.
Men see color and sex and judge according to the outward appearances.
No matter how perverted, watered down or abused they may be the fact remains that the validity of these principles are still the same. She's not just writing this because it's a class assignment but also because she has something urgent to tell us based on her response to the reading. The Fire Next Time. Volume 2 of the Norton Anthology of Amercan Literature. Northon , 1994.