This memo contains revisions of sentences, according to the exercises in chapter 13. Call me any evening, except Tuesday, after 7 o'clock. Revision Call me most evenings except Tuesday after 7 o'clock. Exercise 2 Original Replace main booster rocket seal.
Revision Replace the main booster rocket seal.
Develop online editing system documentation. The system documentation for online editing needs to be developed. The evaluation was performed by us. We performed the evaluation. Exercise 5 Original Joe's company fired him.