Plus, Meredith is right on target with what she said. No one can answer this question for you, whether they say yes or no. It's your ball. From personal experience I can tell you that 'Sleepless' came to me after many failed attempts and a decision about whether to quit or not. Till then, be careful about being a slave to all this technique.
Readers respond to emotion.
But for pete's sake, if it's just driving you crazy and you don't think it's worth it, step back a while and trust that the right things will happen either way. It just means right now. All Rights Reserved.