Telling so much about a business venture that it seems like a sales pitch. If your friends are interested in your business, put them on your business mailing list. This way, they'll receive separate mailings that keep them up to date on your ventures. For both parents and children, let everyone create their own brag list. Hard to read text.
People have trouble reading long lines of type, no matter how interesting or fun it is.
Increase the page margins to at least one inch on each side. Every other sentence ends with an exclamation point. Let your writing and content share your enthusiasm. Save them for the punch line or surprise ending of a story or joke. Miscellaneous Notables Balance vacation and trip news with everyday news.