Don't be afraid to re organize if that's the best plan. You're almost ready to start writing. As your next to last step, you'll make sure each idea has a picture to go with it. A picture might offer an example, an comparison, or just any concrete specific to connect to your readers' everyday imagination. Looking back over your basic organization, locate or make up at least two concrete examples for each main idea.
Work gives more than just income.
Such examples can make readers visualize how work could give more than just income. Now it's your turn. For each main idea, make sure you have at least two pictures. Use memories or just make up hypothetical examples and specifics. You're almost done, and you're going to thank yourself over and over that you did this step.