More information on the Open Book is available. Copyright 1994, the National Academy Press. Keywords, machine extracted. Top 50 words repeated twice, next 100 once, plus phrases. The style and presentation of the plan would benefit from extensive revision.
Poor writing is responsible for much confusion in the present draft.
The writing is too often convoluted, syntactically difficult or incorrect, and often employs words in a technical context that have no precise technical meaning. A second problem is weakness in the logical thread that should connect monitoring objectives, needs for information, and protocols for data collection. These three elements are present in the draft, but they do not follow as necessary to make a clear argument for the collection of specific kinds of data. The use of addenda in this plan is ineffective, fragmenting the plan and separating items that should be together. The information within the addenda should be integrated throughout the body of the plan.