Can easily follow the arguments and flow of the presentation. Well-organized in general. 16 points - Professionalism and performance of the speaker, quality of the media used, etc. Very polished presentation. Easily dealt with any problems that came up.
Visual aids are good, and the presenter had only minor difficulties.
Perhaps a little confusion indicating some coordination problems. Professional appearance somewhat lacking. A few errors or problems in delivery or coordination. Not a strong professional presentation. Clearly could have benefited from more coordination or rehearsal.