You have something really great here. Don't be afraid to play with it. If you do we would love to see what you've done, and if you would like more input, workshop it again. You mesmerize in my body with your hands. The knowledge to read my anatomy has been on your fingertips tongue since the first time you held me while sleeping by my side that night.
Touching palms is pure and crazy has never felt so good.
Somewhere in a backyard bar I found her lying to a bar man waiting for a lay, and I smiled, I'm sardonic. And I cower inside at the escape they bring. And I cower inside the escape they bring I lay on them. I tuck them in they're soiled, but a place to call home. Somewhere in a backyard bar I found her, lying to a barman, waiting for a lay.