A paragraph may digress from its proposed topic. Transitions are present but occasionally may be lacking or ineffective. The paper shows weaknesses in paragraph unity or organization. Topic sentences may be weak or missing. Transitions may not be effective.
Organization is suspect.
The writer does not effectively structure the paragraphs. Use of Sources. The essay shows critical insight into both primary and secondary sources and uses those sources to convincingly support the argument. The essay shows an understanding of both the primary and secondary sources and uses them effectively to support the argument. While the essay demonstrates some understanding of the sources, the sources are not used effectively in supporting the argument While primary and secondary sources are mentioned, the sources do not support the argument or are misunderstood.