He added his changes to mine. Word showed his changes in a different color, so I could see what he suggested. If you use this procedure, you'll be able to keep track of all of the files and changes. However the writing appeared flat, despite his great opening paragraph. Fortunately, I had a simple trick of the trade up my sleeve that would liven things up and not offend him.
Quotes make a story come alive.
Technology changes so fast that even if you've been using a computer for just five years, you could have disks and files you can no longer read. I changed it to a somewhat less wordy sentence, adding quote marks, an attribution to Daniel Will-Harris, and a final sentence that rounds out the quote. We have a better solution to preserve your pages for posterity, and it will be fun for everyone. Daniel thought so and kept it. I usually hate it when people rewrite my releases.