The plan is mostly clear and most major points are signaled by transitions and are in paragraphs. There are few minor digressions, but no major ones. There is usually an attempt to link the autobiography to the portfolio. The logical plan of the autobiography is evident. It is signaled by the use of topic sentences and the division of major points into paragraphs.
Paragraphs display unity and coherence.
Transitions are used within and between paragraphs. The autobiography displays a clear sense of chronology. The link to the portfolio is logical and clear. Errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation are so numerous and serious that they interfere with communication. There are numerous minor errors and some gross errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation.