They misspelled my name, but other than that, it's a pretty good showing. In deference to our rights agreement, the story will be removed from this site until February, when it will be replaced with the soon to be published version, which has a better ending. My Book Short Stories, etc. Throw me a bone. No written material on this site may be copied or otherwise redistributed without the author's consent.
Personal copies are, of course, permissable.