New paragraph is needed. No new paragraph is needed awk Awkward passages are clear but badly constructed or worded. Rewrite the passage. Add transitions or combine sentences to show the connection between the ideas. Passage needs more specific support, concrete examples.
Passage needs a clear topic, a beginning, middle, and end.
Rethink and rewrite the passage. Editing for Grammar and Conventions agr Faulty agreement of subject and verb or of pronoun and its reference. The stack of letters was sitting on the desk. Ic A capital letter or lower case is needed. Cs Ballet is highly athletic, it requires strength and skill.