I seek your help to make it realistic. I realize every organization is different, but I respect your insight and experience, and believe your suggestions would be applicable. As with anyone in the job market, my internal time line is short, so a quick response would be greatly appreciated. A self-addressed envelope is enclosed for that purpose, or if it's more convenient for you to call me, please do. You have my sincere gratitude for helping me to pursue my career goals, Carol.
Most people like to feel valued and needed, to be called upon for advice and information.
Give your friends the opportunity to help.