The concepts may be disorganized, and evidence may be insufficient. Some ideas may lack development or be unsupported. On the whole, the C paper is still understandable and contains some good points. The thesis may lack clarity, and the evidence presented in its support may be insufficient or poorly presented. The organization is not clearly presented.
Many errors are evident.
Sentences are so poorly constructed that they interfere with meaning. The D paper does show some understanding of the subject and an effort to establish and support a thesis. Fails to meet the requirements of the assignment. The thesis is never established or lacks unity. The organization is illogical, and transitions between ideas are insufficient.