Attention needs to be given to constructing a thesis, structuring the arguments, and supporting the thesis with research data. The evidence should be connected to a conclusion and to answering the research question. Most sources may need to be cited according to Chicago Style. Errors in spelling, punctuation, mechanics, and usage impede understanding. The work needs to include research and analysis of secondary and primary sources.
More initiative needs to be taken in defining the scope and topic of research.
The work needs to integrate a number of secondary sources and primary materials, which are also evaluated for their credibility. Great attention must be paid to constructing a thesis with supporting research, structured arguments, and representation of different interpretations. The work needs a conclusion that is connected to the evidence and which answers the research question. Sources need to be cited according to Chicago Style. Errors in spelling, punctuation, mechanics, and usage impede understanding.