Writing like this slows communication and sends the wrong message about the writer. Note the difference in figure 5-4. The other examples of standards in this pamphlet reflect the dramatic difference brevity makes to bring about more effective writing. Notice that figure 5-6 does not look markedly shorter, although it is. This document's legal nature does mean some things cannot be cut out.
Packaging speeds communication.
Although images have been enhanced to improve readability, quility is limited by the condition of the original document.