I'm not sure if I'm making sense, so I'll just shut up now. You developed Jackson's character very well, very real. Great story, there. I loved the ending. I believe that men were made one way and girls another.
Men have more physical strength, girls have a bit more tenderness, and that's how it is.
Plagioclase I enjoyed this. The character of Mike puts Jackson in his place, showing him that there's more than one way to look at something.