The work may need to integrate a greater number of secondary sources and primary materials, and to evaluate these for their credibility. Attention needs to be given to constructing a thesis, structuring the arguments, and supporting the thesis with research data. Most sources may need to be cited according to the appropriate footnote style. Errors in spelling, punctuation, mechanics, and usage impede understanding. The work needs to include research and analysis of secondary and primary sources.
More initiative needs to be taken in defining the scope and topic of research.
The work needs to integrate a number of secondary sources and primary materials, which are also evaluated for their credibility. Great attention must be paid to constructing a thesis with supporting research, structured arguments, and representation of different interpretations. The work needs a conclusion that is connected to the evidence and which answers the research question. Sources need to be cited according to the appropriate citation style. Errors in spelling, punctuation, mechanics, and usage impede understanding.