Compare the two statements to see how similar they are. This can be especially helpful if you wrote a narrative. It will help to make sure that you are communicating your points in the story. Here are some more questions to ask yourself regarding content. Write down the first sentence of every paragraph in order.
Many people think only of mechanics when they revise and rewrite their compositions.
As we know, though, the interest factor is crucial in keeping the admissions officers reading and remembering your essay. When you are satisfied with the structure and content of your essay, it is time to check for grammar, spelling, typos, and the like. Keep rewriting until your words say what you want them to say. Copyright 1998 by Dan Kaufman. Reprinted by arrangement with Barron's Educational Series, Inc.