Just stick to the facts. They should carry their own weight or it's not a story. You're still making way, way too many style and grammar errors. Use your style and grammar references when you self-edit. Drop by if I can help.
Record companies are no exception different.
The Internet is less of a sales tool and more of a marketing tool, said Ted Guggenheim, general manager and vice president of artist relations. MP3s are tools that we use to market our product. Web site attracts customers interested in buying compact discs online. You can t beat it, so you have to play it, Guggenheim said. This proved true for them.