Precise nouns and modifiers create pictures in the reader's mind. Familiar words and phrases communicate, but rarely capture the reader's imagination. Still, the paper may have one or two fine moments. Attempts at colorful language come close to the mark, but sometimes seem overdone . The writer struggles with a limited vocabulary, searching for words to convey meaning.
Persistent redundancy distracts the reader.
Jargon or clich s serve as a crutch. Words are used incorrectly , sometimes making the message hard to decipher. Problems with language leave the reader wondering what the writer is trying to say. The writing has an easy flow and rhythm when read aloud. Sentences are well built, with strong and varied structure that invites expressive oral reading.