I am happy to look at any thesis and writer s outline or map you have done.
Some students begin best by practicing introduction strategies.
Your goal is to prepare your reader to grasp the thesis you want to direct your paper. Sometimes the best way to articulate the thesis is to start writing and the best way to start writing is to begin with a beginning of some sort. Remember you can always change it. Start by reading Chapter 6e of your textbook. Here are some Introduction stragegies from MIT .