Explain how he uses each analogy in his argument against compatibilism. Then present his overall argument against compatibilism. Important Areas Needing Improvement State your thesis at the beginning of the paper. Many people had no identifiable point anywhere in the paper. Obey rules of paragraph formation.
New topic requires new paragraph.
Support your claims with arguments or reasons. Don t just insert a quotation and do nothing with it. Discuss the meaning and significance of the quotation.