They sell everything, they buy everything, they ruin great men and women, and finally they ruin themselves, accidentally, simply by getting old. I think about them. Sometimes I want them and sometimes I worry about them - even though it's not my business to do o. I wonder about them. I wonder if you are the pretty girl in question.
Names are essential.
Hedley is a great name for a character. But Hedley I inspired. So far I've never used it. It's almost too good to use. Ichabod is a disappointed word for disappointment.