Check for correctness, organization, and comprehensibility. Make an appointment at HIB 200 with a writing tutor. Reading In the article The Joy of Old, Charles Rembar, a lawyer, tries to convince the reader that the best age to be is Old. He cites such advantages as half fares on buses and trains, special treatment, extra time to do things you enjoy, and added wisdom. The thing to do about middle age is to skip it.
Middle age is signaled by larger belt size and muscles turned to pudding.
Youth, a larval stage revered by advertisers who use it as a selling tool, ends unexpectedly too soon. The best course is to go directly to Old. Old assuming reasonably good health has many advantages. Our language tells us this. No one ever speaks about younger and wiser heads.