Jody wrote to Jill every day Jill was in the hospital Jody wrote to Jill every day Jody was in the hospital Pronouns must replace actual words in the sentence, not ideas in the writer's mind. Avoid indefinite it, they or you. In a large corporation finance officers know now to turn a profit. In the garden book it says you should plant bulbs in October. The garden book says you should plant bulbs in October.
Place pronouns relatively near to their antecedents.
The two pitchers were from Junction High who led the league in shutouts. The two pitchers who led the league in shutouts were from Junction High.