I loved the title, it was realy intriguing. Geokid Poetry has to make sense. It makes sense to you. Not just because you can't understand poets. This is good.
Poetry is an art.
If it doesn't make sense, all the better. I got the feel of this poem-I really liked it and thought it was very artistic, particularly for your age. Don't let the others discourage you. It's a cute poem, but it could use a little work. Dannie Good poem for someone your age.