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Namu ryoho renge kyo. Leisurely Lead Writers often decide to begin slowly with a description of a place, a feeling, or with a rambling introduction to the narrator or main character. This kind of lead might help to set a mood, build suspense, or create an introspective tone. In the outer reaches of the bay, among coral reefs, and stone outcroppings, reef fish of all kinds abounded In season, schools of kala, akule, 'opelu, and 'o'io swarmed into the bay. Sometimes a lone shark found its way through the coral and rocks to the edge of the beach where we swam.