Learn what you need for a good portfolia, then post your pictures online and have them reviewed by these agencies. It is safe, and inexpensive. If you would like to use this poem on your own web page, please contact the Author. Christinia - I'm sorry, but I feel I must tell you this, because I see something in your work that I can't quite define. I'm really not one to judge, but I see potential in The Darkness, that you did not use.
Poetry is more than meaning.
It takes work to write structured, metered, rhymed poetry. Lots of work. The Darkness has meaning and depth, and I think it's good. But somehow, I see in your words, you can do more. Forgive the frankness.