Demonstrates some understanding of purpose and audience. Personal information is mostly relevant. Demonstrates a clear sense of purpose of the document and an understanding of the audience to whom it is addressed. Personal information is entirely relevant to both purpose and audience. There is no evidence of a plan.
Paragraphs lack unity and coherence.
Almost no points are logically related. Events are included with no sense of chronological order. No link to the portfolio is attempted. A logical plan is attempted, but the reader must work to infer it. There are some transitions although paragraphs generally lack a sense of chronological order.