Extra information is included in the comparisons and contrasts. Paragraph is indented and punctuated correctly. Paragraph is not indented or punctuated. Indentation and punctuation mistakes interfere with reading the paragraph. Some indentation and punctuation mistakes exist, but do not interfere with reading.
Paragraph is indented and punctuated correctly.
Paragraph is indented and punctuated correctly and appealing to look at. Spelling is correct. Paragraph is not attempted. Spelling mistakes interfere with reading. Some spelling mistakes exist, but do not interfere with reading.