This essay is a below average piece of writing. It falls below acceptable college standards. It may partially address the assignment, but it surely lacks any expected insight as to the goal of the essay. Frequently, its writer has not understood the assignment and therefore does not address or respond to a definite purpose. It may express a thesis, but it is likely inappropriately sized for the assignment.
Paragraphs exist on their own without adequate movement.
The language of the essay is flawed. This grade is only given to an unacceptable piece of writing. It has a rich variety of flaws. It may have no thesis or support. There may be flaws of organization and development.