I highly recommend that you use the arch diagram listed above to help you organize your thoughts. Strong level of detail and supporting evidence. Define any terms that a layperson would not understand. Good transitions between body paragraphs. As always, mechanics are 25 points, so I will be looking for proper punctuation, grammar, spelling, and so forth.
Parallelism is discussed in our text.
It is chiefly an issue with series items. They must be as similar as possible in their parts of speech and structure. A parallel sentence can be written in either of two ways here. I like to swim, to dance, and to eat out. When you write a series, especially those that involve series of phrases, look to see that they are worded similarly.