Paragraphs have a sharp focus and include carefully selected evidence. Sentences within paragraphs are linked by tight logical connections and effective transitions. Any source materials are clearly subordinate to the paper's own purpose, which is elaborated with stylistic efficiency and even flair. Documentation, when needed, conforms to all appropriate conventions. The thesis statement takes a clear stand and forecasts the topics to be developed.
Paragraphs are unified, and supporting details are sufficient and relevant.
Any source materials are subordinate to the student's own stand, which is developed clearly and purposefully. Documentation, when needed, conforms to most appropriate conventions. Sentences are linked by logical connections and adequate transitions. Sentences show variety. Wording is relatively concise and appropriate.