Provided individual, group, and family counseling for at risk and mentally disturbed clients. Conducted comprehensive personal history interviews. Defined risk factors and objectives and programs needs. The original resume is nearly 2 pages of dense text. That is way too difficult to scan.
Resumes get only a few seconds scan before a hiring manager makes a decision.
It is in desperate need of bulleting, prioritization and reduction. The fact that it is separated out like this will raise doubts about the relevance of his experience to his stated objective. Use of this format, called a 'Functional Resume,' with skills and experience highlighted separately, is of most use when your experience does not directly relate to your objective. This doesn't appear to be the case, therefore he should have used a reverse chronological format. Planned advertising and sales promotions.