New FAT Crusher. Amazing product prevents fat from forming. The rest of it works except there is no guarantee. I would make it more interesting and cut down on redundant statements. I would drop the return address part and the payment method.
People already know how to pay for something by mail.
They also know if they want the product they will need to leave an address. I would also elude to how many recipes they would receive. If at all possible give exact figures. Perfect gift for students and busy people. Insane Bob's College Cookbook.