The style en gages the audience and is thought-provoking. Appropriate use of rhetorical questions to gain rapport. It was off professional quality and could be sent to your superintendent, principal, parents, and local media without any changes. It accomplished the task assigned. This assignment is clearly understandable and continuity within the assignment is good.
Paragraphs flow quite well and fit together nicely.
Although some of the sentence structure is awkward or difficult, the message or intent of the author is clear. Portions of the assignment need rewriting. The assignment is not very clear. However, the reader can clearly see the intent of the writer. This assignment needs rewriting.