They sound cumbersome but after only a few links you and the reader will get into a rhythm and together discover some astounding stuff. Don't twitch or gasp no matter what happens . Also try to keep the author from twitching or interrupting. Avoid any words that might destroy the magic . We humans are obsessed with discerning meaning in chaos, online and elsewhere, and tend to discern it whether it's there or not.
Reviewers are often too polite.
Each one has a different explanation of why, and a different recommendation for how to remedy the problem. In everything you are about to experience, there is no right answer. Whatever you think, is right. I'm going to sit with you during the review, and I might suggest areas to explore. However, I'm not usually able to answer questions about the text.