Word choice and development of ideas remain more general than would be found in a 6 paper. Response demonstrates an attempt to focus on providing a description of the picture. However, there is a lack of elaboration and apparent lack of connection between the details. Events and details are organized into a clear progression of ideas. Events are adequately elaborated with detail needed to achieve a 4.
Minimal response focuses on the topic, but has only barely apparent details.
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