The beginning could be more interesting. The problem is not clear until the middle of the story. Some events in the plot seem to be mixed up. I want to know more. I often tell the story instead of showing it in details and dialogue.
Mistakes make the story confusing in some places.
The beginning is dull and uninteresting. There is no clear problem in the story. Many story events are missing or told out of order. The story just stops without telling how the problem worked out. I haven't included enough details.