Sounds great and in keeping with Jesus's character. Jesus forgives sins. Jesus doesn't condemn. Jesus is all loving. Jesus is such a nice guy.
Problem is, it's wrong because it leaves out some very important words.
This is what's needed after the first part of verse 11. Jesus did not condemn this woman to death, and scared off her accusers so that she didn't face judgment from anyone else. Jesus's forgiveness is not a license to sin 2 it is not an excuse to keep doing what you'd been doing, it is not a justification for anything but turning away from sin after you've come to Christ. Lack of condemnation here also does not mean that this woman is off the hook in the long run either. She's still up for Judgment Day like everyone else.