Some ideas are good, but obscured by unclear writing or lack of information. Ideas are developed and illustrate a good understanding of the factors which affect spending Ideas are engaging and insightful and illustrate an excellent understanding of the factors which affect spending. The extent to which ideas expressed in the newsletter are elaborated through the use of specific, accurate and relevant information.
Pieces exhibit an awkward writing style Points are general.
Pieces are adequately written. Some points are elaborated. May contain factual errors or irrelevant information. Pieces are well written. Most points are elaborated with clear and detailed information to support ideas.