The writer leaves the reader with a sense of how much the writer enjoys camping. Transitions Connect ideas and paragraphs effectively. Transitions move the reader from one idea to the next, and give a sense of time and sequence. Organization Organize logically. Give a sense of completeness.
Paragraphs are in logical order, and focus on one main idea.
Voice Word Choice Use powerful language appropriate for the audience and purpose. Choose words, tone, dialect to create an effect. Experiment with figurative language and sound patterns. The writer uses active verbs and precise adjectives to create a picture in the reader's mind. Sentence Fluency Use a variety of sentence lengths and beginnings.