Errors in writing conventions begin to impair readability. While these mistakes do not block meaning, they tend to be distracting. The paper lacks a central idea of purpose. The reader must make inferences based on very sketchy details. The writer tries to cover too much.
Organization is haphazard and disjointed.
The writing lacks direction. Ideas, details, or events are strung together helter-skelter. The writer seems indifferent or uninvolved. The writing is flat, lifeless, stiff, or mechanical. It may be overly technical or full of jargon.