A more logical flow may be provided and followed, explained in this article. There are many valid interrogations made in this article. These arguments are all appropriate at this time, yet to have all of them in the same article may actually belittle some of them. It is suggested that this commentary be divided in two commentaries with a more detailed discussion of three or four arguments per article. As well, other scholarly reports could be used to support and substantiate the argumentation of this worthwhile series of thought provoking points about the electronic Noosphere .
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