These are comments that I feel would help the quality of a revised version. Thus we are engaged in an ongoing process, not a final evaluation. We will try to identify strengths and weaknesses of your style, argument, logical construction, and organization. You must start with an abstract that clearly tells the reader what you will do and your major conclusions. Despite considerable theoretical analysis, no one has found a way to show that kin recognition is genetically programmed in honey bees.
Induced abortion is considered a male reproductive tactic in horses.
I argue that the evidence for it being a female tactic is equally strong. I then give several reasons why females may have more to gain than males by aborting fetuses early. Follow your abstract with a brief introduction that gets the reader focused on your presentation. Be sure we can tell where the abstract stops and the introduction begins. You should use headings to separate sections of your paper, or try to do it with the structure of leading and ending sentences.