It is not clear what question is being addressed by the proposal. It is not clear what the outcome of the research might be, or what would constitute success or failure. The question being addressed is fuzzy or ill-formed. It is not clear why the question is worth addressing. The proposal is just a routine application of known techniques.
Industry ought to be doing it instead.
There is no evidence that the proposer has new ideas that make it possible to succeed where others have failed. A new idea is claimed but insufficient details are given to judge whether it looks promising. The proposer seems unaware of related research. The proposer seems to be attempting too much for the funding requested and the time-scale envisioned. The proposal is too expensive for the probable gain.