The introduction and conclusion are boring. I should reorder parts of the report. Some paragraphs lack topic sentences or support. I give an opinion or two that should be deleted. I need to check my quotations for accuracy.
Mistakes make a few sentences confusing.
I did very little research. The report lacks an introduction and a conclusion. The paragraphs are not arranged in a logical order. I have few topic sentences or supporting facts. The writing mixes opinions with facts.