The list of sources is complete. There are very few spelling, punctuation, and grammar mistakes. Sounding Stronger Parts of the report are well researched, but others aren't. Though adequate, the introduction and conclusion are boring. Though well ordered, the report needs better transitions.
Most paragraphs have topic sentences.
Some paragraphs stray off the topic. Some need more facts and examples. I give an opinion or two that should be deleted. I need to make sure that my quotations are written accurately. My list of sources is almost complete.