Instead of the usual quick pace created by such writing, the reader must pose and take the loaded associations he creates. The book must go through a second edition. Then, readers may enjoy a well edited work. The current edition reads like a cake baked in a hurry. It may be sweet but the icing could have been better.
Nothing is as distracting as a missing word, a repeated expression.
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