The majority of phrasing seems appropriate. Flow - Minor disruptions in smoothness caused by a few repetitions and deviations from text. Pace - A pace that is beginning to be conversational but may sometimes be too rapid or too slow. Some word by word reading may be present. Word groupings may seem choppy and unrelated to larger context of sentence or passage.
Intonation fails to mark end of sentences and clauses.
Flow - Repetitions and deviations from the text that disrupt the flow of reading. Pace - A pace that is moderately slow. 2 Phrasing - Primarily word by word reading. Little or no expression is present. Flow - Pauses, repetitions and deviations from the text that often disrupt the flow of the reading.