Basically' and 'just' are filler words that add nothing to the story. The title is 'cringe-making'. Many non-Christians will stop reading at this point. The story is one block of text. It needs to be broken up into shorter paragraphs, and probably one or more sub-headings.
Readability is the key.
There may be such wonderful Christians in existence, but I have never met one. God in his mercy can speak to anyone through anything. But Christians can fail to communicate effectively if they target the wrong audience with the wrong words. When Angie realized this, she talked to Arif who was good at writing and communication. He highlighted the issues and offered to help check and edit her item.