My writing has purpose, makes a point, or tells a story. Every piece adds something to the whole. It s easy to see where I m headed, but there are gaps. My ideas are clear, but I need to get specific. Some of my details are original, but some are predictable.
Information is limited or unclear.
It s hard to figure out what s important here. I picked just the right words for just the right places. All the words in my paper fit. Each one seems just right. My words are colorful, snappy vital, brisk, and fresh.