He uses a lot of imagery as can be seen in his description of the weed-strewn beach that was as firm as a road in passage one. The dialogue in passage two is not at all flowery and sounds like typical speech for a 12 year old, except that Piggy seems to show an amount of wisdom greater than your typical 12 year old. Passage 3 is written clearly and nicely shows emotion while still narrating in an neutral tone without too much involvement from the narrator. Syntax Most of the sentences in The Lord of the Flies are simple. There are sentences that are complex and the occasional compound sentence.
Most characters speak simply and clearly.
Often, they speak fragments and string together fragments and ramble suck as in passage 2. All the speech is written as if it were speech. The first passage contain mostly simple sentences. The second passage contains both simple and complex sentences. In this passage, the speech is somewhat rambling and contains several fragments.