Elements of newsworthiness are apparent. Language is correct but basic. There are no factual errors and only minor style errors. This story would need substantial re-writing or editing to be published or broadcast. Elements of newsworthiness are present.
Language is plain with few errors.
There are no factual errors but there are a few style errors. D This story would need to be thoroughly re-written to be published or broadcast. Elements of newsworthiness may be hidden. There may be substantial language usage problems. There may be one factual error and multiple style errors.