I ordered the paragraphs well, but I need better transitions. Some paragraphs need topic sentences or more details. I give an opinion that should be deleted. I need to make sure that a quotation is written correctly. I have a list of sources, but it is incomplete.
Mistakes make some sentences confusing.
Turn Up the Volume I have not done enough research. The report lacks an introduction and a conclusion. The paragraphs are not in an order that makes sense. I have few topic sentences and few supporting facts. The writing mixes opinions with facts.