Get people talking to each other, instead of spoon feeding another quote to you. Get them talking, screaming, whispering to each other. Don't rush through them. There's immense power in allowing a scene to happen the way it happened. In real life, just as in fiction, there are archetypal characters, rising and falling action, emblematic moments and age-old story patterns.
Most stories have a natural rise and fall.
Once in a while, be willing to rise above the fray and speak with authority and controlled passion. The writer should be in the thick of the action, or rise about it, to speak with power about whatever they have seen.