People will continue to have first opinions, and all you can really do is show them you truly are. Or the trashy snot you think you see walking down the hall is respectable and kind. It is surprising how at first you have people put down the girl and than it ends up being you. I think more examples of what people have said will be more descriptive. I completely understand your point of view.
Many people make judgemants before they actually get to know the person.
I think if you are a little more descriptive your paper will be great.