Moused is a vivid term indicating that the cute little critters have had a picnic - with the book forming the main course. They love the glue in the bindings. Shaken means that the pages have become partially separated from the boards. Shaken boards are one step up from detached boards. Normally, writing is a serious defect.
Marginal notes can be an exception if the notes are interesting or written by someone significant.
If the author wrote pointers for Jimmy, that is a very good thing. This book was issued with a dust wrapper. That is the paper cover wrapped around the heavier cloth or leather covered boards to protect them from getting scuffed, rubbed, or sunned. This is also sometimes called a dust jacket, dj, or dw. Scuffing and rubbing are what happens when something hard is drawn across the book leaving a mark.