The phrases to avoid are in bold . Downlut believes the Brady Bill trespasses on the rights of law-abiding citizens, and is therefore inconsistent with the Constitution , because it imposes a waiting period on exercising the right to own guns. The Brady Bill goes against citizens' rights. The Brady Bill doesn't fit the Constitution.
People have a right to own guns.
People shouldn't have to wait for their rights, such as the right to own a gun. According to Downlut, people shouldn't have to wait for their rights, including the right to own a gun. Because the Brady Bill makes people wait to own a gun, it goes against citizens' rights and doesn't fit the Constitution. Go back to the paraphrasing exercise.