My name is Natascha Fehringer. I am a teacher candidate at York University. I read your poem and want to let you know how it made me feel. I thought about times when I have felt lost, and about what I have done to feel better. Your poem is very positive and realistic, even though you create a fantasy world for yourself.
Many people feel lost, especially in adolescence, which is all a part of growing up.
Many changes occur to our lives, bodies etc, which contributes to this seemingly endless feeling of being lost. I think your poem would do wonders for your peers and even people who suffer from depression. It offers some hope and a way of coping. I look forward to reading some of your future work. W4W Kim, Very nicely done.