I think that'd add more evidence to your paper. Your evidence is too limited right now. I think a more detailed discussion is needed. Sources sited are from the section itself. Your first two quotes from her are good.
People can distinguish the difference between the two titles.
Your quotations are introduced with appropriate signal phrases but to identify the page number, you only have to do the parenthesis and the number, ex. Organization and Style 1. Your arguments are organized well. All you have to do is back it up. In the examples you gave, you should get back to how the title is connected to the example, therefore, gives evidence to how the title fits the section.