Some paragraphs stray off the topic. Some need more facts and examples. I give an opinion or two that should be deleted. I need to make sure that my quotations are written accurately. My list of sources is almost complete.
Mistakes make a few sentences confusing.
Turn Up the Volume I have not done enough research. The report lacks an introduction and a conclusion. I jump from one idea to the next, without logical order. I have few topic sentences and need more facts or examples. My writing mixes opinions with facts.