This can be intimidating to some. Maybe a change in colors or a background to make it seem more friendly. When using a quote, use quotation marks around them. Using a different typeface is confusing and may lead to people missing the fact that these are quotations, not just writing from the site s team. If so, use them.
Military stuff is a great hook to get people.
These are incomplete, but are linked to from the other pages. You were conscientious about letting people know they were being worked on, but it was vague. I hate to be cutesy, but placing a site construction jpeg on these two pages would probably be more clear. The links at the bottom of each page work, but simply go to an empty page with no explanation as to why. Try the same suggestion as mentioned earlier with the jpeg.