However, the paper would require moderate editing for publication. Errors are numerous or serious enough to be somewhat distracting, but the writer handles some conventions well. Spelling is usually correct on common words. Problems with grammar usage are not serious enough to distort meaning. Paragraphing is attempted.
Paragraphs sometimes run together or begin in the wrong places.
The paper seems to reflect light, but not extensive or thorough, editing. Errors in grammar and usage are very noticeable, and may affect meaning. Extensive editing would be required to polish the text for publication.