This should withstand critical examination, alternative perspectives, people who like to pull key phrases apart and examine their content, facts gathered unselectively from the evidence and so forth. The proof of this resilience comes from exposure to panels and others, or merely debate at informal gatherings. Many iterations are needed. Indeed, ensure that they mean anything to others. People are often embarrassed to admit that they have no idea what for example, empowerment means in any but the most general terms.
New industries spawn jargon, usually because they have yet to clarify what matters.
So say so. Try adding the negative in front of verbs in sentences in whatever statement you have written. It tells nobody anything about options. Cut the text until it bleeds. Find what really matters.