Opinions and thoughts unclear. 1 - Only opinions. No evidence to support thoughts and ideas. Assumed role of migrant worker with appropriate dialogue. Used information from web sites to address several issues regarding migrant workers.
Letter is well-written.
Project completed on time. Assumed role of migrant worker, however, did not address all important issues. Assumed role of migrant worker, but very unclear and letter is poorly written. Did not address migrant worker issues addressed in web sites. Project not completed on time.