However, your ideas are noticeably less sophisticated, insightful, or articulate than is typical of an exemplary response. Your work suggests a fairly solid grasp of the concepts represented by the prompt, but mastery of those concepts is not clearly demonstrated. You have developed an adequate response to the essay prompt, but the quality of your discussion is diminished by several vague, unsupported, or irrelevant points. Don t pad your answers. Repetition and fluff will not be rewarded.
English skills count.