If any dimensions are not present, you must tell me how else they manifest themselves in the religion and why they are not in the ceremony or ceremonies you attended. As this is a take-home essay and you have had weeks to work on it, I will be taking your writing into account in grading. This means you must try to eliminate grammar errors and long, confused sentences. I urge you to write short sentences and use easy words. Overwrought writing annoys me and everyone else.
Good writing is simple and clear.
Here are a few hints for the essay. Describe the ceremony in detail, making sure you carefully address each dimension of religion as it is expressed. Review your midterm essay and learn from it. Review the definitions of the dimensions in the online reader. Make sure you understand each dimension.