It is his ability to deal with the situation in a calm composed way that shows us the greatness of the man who is emphasized by Fortinbras at the end of the play. Each student interprets or explains the significance of the action in the opening paragraph. Hamlet's madness or his ability to act. The essays show that the students have thought about the work and understand it. Also, both of the students write clear, well-organized, coherent essays with no serious or basic errors in them.
Ideas proceed logically and are connected by transition.