Writer struggles to identify reason for writing. Writer states no facts or examples to support the position. There are many grammar and mechanical errors. Writer does not communicate problem and solution. Letter is rambling and redundant.
Letter is rude and demanding.
Conclusion paragraph has none of the required elements. Some errors in business address. The letter is generally similar to one receiving an unacceptable rating, but there are one or two elements which are relatively well done. Writer states only a few facts and examples to support positions. There are many grammar and mechanical errors.