This has my 'I'll point to you if you point to me' URLs. Competitive Assistance for Business mail . While there are overlapping goals in a company, the fundamental perceptions and cognition of sales are different. Self graded diagram B- Needs more detail, like a couple levels deeper. No discussion of dynamics of the system.
Management is an input as well as a process.
Omitted outputs like increased predictivity and reduced headaches. On the good side, management is correctly placed for responsibility, color is used to highlight the addition of models to process, that models change is reflected, procedure vs policy is correct, and some very significant factors of model building are shown. Yes, I criticize my own work, probably harder than you would. I don't know it all, but neither do you - take advantage of my depths of understanding and be better.