Whatever, it is one step closer to the final product. We will read it, ask questions about it, help you focus the ideas and expand the development. At your next session, your revised work will be much closer to the final product. Together we will talk about further expansion and deletion, transitiions between ideas, mechanical problems, and the presentation of the final product. They are wrong.
Effective writing means good ideas carefully explained.
Our interest in The Writing Center is to help you state your good ideas strongly and clearly. Writing consulting takes time, but it is time well-spent. We look forward to working with you and hope that these suggestions are useful.