Inadequate understanding of the case. The paper is well focused. The sentences flow gracefully. Words are chosen precisely. There are no errors in spelling, grammar, punctuation, or usage.
Few passages are wordy or imprecise.
Individual sentences may be awkward, but the meaning is always clear. The writing is verbose and often vague, but the main ideas are understandable. There are several solecisms. There are numerous errors in grammar and usage. In your papers, and in your term paper, you should use gender-neutral language, unless the gender of the specific person is known.