The revision of your third feature will serve as your Final and will count 20 percent of your course grade. The story is clear with no technical errors. The lead is appropriate for the content and captures readers' interests. The appropriate questions are raised and answered or at least identified as important. The appropriate number of sources are consulted and used well in the story.
Language is refreshing and concise.
A sufficient number of sources are used, and the shortcomings are only minor. Overall above average reporting and writing. Minor technical errors suggest need for further polishing and supervision, but there are no major errors that bring doubt into overall competency to get facts straight. Not quite level required for publication. Below average work.