Ideas are reasonably clear , though they may not be detailed, personalized, or expanded enough to show in-depth understanding or a strong sense of purpose. Support is attempted , but doesn't go far enough yet in fleshing out the main point or storyline. Details often blend the original with the predictable . As yet, the paper has no clear sense of purpose or central theme. To extract meaning from the text, the reader must make inferences based on sketchy details.
Information is very limited or unclear .
The text may be repetitious , or may read like a collection of disconnected, random thoughts. The organization enhances and showcases the central idea or storyline. The order, structure or presentation of information is compelling and moves the reader through the text. Thoughtful transitions clearly show how ideas connect. Organization flows so smoothly the reader hardly thinks about it.