When style questions stymie you, consult your instructor, a friend, or visit The Writing Center in 307 Olin Library. When revising pay special attention to your introduction. Start the paper with a substantive, interesting thesis or question, not a boring one. This paper discusses the evidence for a large effect of monopoly on income. Every economist knows by now that monopoly does not much reduce income.
Every economist appears to be mistaken.
Tables and graphs should be clear. Heavy use of passive verbs bores the reader and often shows that the author is trying to hide. Avoid using a jargon word or a foreign phrase whenever you can think of an everyday English word equivalent. An occasional GNP or CAB won't hurt anyone, but even such a commonplace as GDCF pains all but the most hardened accountant. It is also used to mark off items in series when the items themselves are long.