When people do things in unison, it's funny , that is why you avoid it in drama . Act III resolve what everything the audience should know. Look for the selfish motive. How to plan the scene from what is happening. Find the conflict.
Every scene look for two guys in a ring.
If you succeed to well in your mask, there is no drama. Look for the basic drama . Not sufficient difficulty, it lacks drama . If you don't have sufficient difficulty, it lacks drama . Play drama with a lower voice, not way up.