Research thorough and pointed, beyond the call of duty in areas of obvious concern to the writer. Clear presentation of faith from the outset. Writer is familiar with the sources of his faith and theological concepts. Unfamiliar terms defined. Some holes in argument.
Insights seem scattered.
References show questionable consis tency with stated beliefs or tradition. Paper would have benefited from further research. Some undefined terms. Grave incon sist encies in logic. Incon sistent state ments.