Look beyond the obvious. There are layers of detail. It is the most miniscule detail that adds brilliance. Make observation a part of every story. Do the 360-degree turn.
Editors can draw out a reporter's eye for detail by asking questions.
Don't be afraid to lead with all of your observations before bringing in other comment. And in this case with Daly, don't take your eyes off him for a moment. Scribble down everything you see. Pavin and Frost tried to comfort him. Everything you see.