The sentences should make sense. The paper is fluid, and reads easily throughout. The writing is generally awkward and therefore hard to read aloud. It does not sound natural. There are no glaring errors.
Errors are frequent or serious enough to momentarily distract the reader.
I am looking forward to hearing our band play by themselves as well as with the other bands here at Fort Leavenworth. It's time again for the Talent Show. From the auditions, individuals will be selected to perform for the school on May 29 th . I would also like to wish those of you who are leaving the area, a safe trip to your next destination. Thank you for being part of Eisenhower Elementary and I wish you much success.