After two absences, I cannot recommend that you receive credit for the course. A An excellent paper that gives a strong sense of the writer's voice and holds the reader's interest. The writer seems always to keep in mind the audience and purpose. The paper is well organized with good transitions, and the writer supports generalizations effectively, using vivid examples. The writer keeps the scope of the paper narrow enough to handle.
Language is vigorous.
The writer has taken some risks. No fused sentences. No objectionable incomplete sentences. No dangling modifiers. No extraneous or misplaced material.