Where technical exposition is appropriate, keep the sentences short and simple. Use humorous anecdotes to demonstrate technical facts. Return to own adventure and push more deeply into the story There is an obstacle and a decision to be made. Describe the decision to show all that could go wrong with the choices. As the adventure ends safely, another small incident again keeps up the cautionary tension, with lessons learned beyond the mere confines of the sport.
Final insight caps off opening observation.
Yes, that's all there is to it, children.