Not Yet The writing is a collection of thoughts, observations, or statements of events. Although the writer may write about what he or she knows, there is little or no evidence of reflection on what is written. The reader is left with no particular sense of insight, purpose, or significance. The reader has a sense that the writing is regurgitated, copied, or superficial. The writing shows only surface command of content, ideas, and subject.
Ideas are trite and predictable.
Thoughts or statements are unconnected, perhaps even contradictory. Back to dimensions of writing. The writer speaks directly to the reader in a way that is individual, expressive, and engaging. The writer is clearly involved in the text, has something to say, and is writing to be read. The reader feels a strong interaction with the writer, sensing the person behind the words.