Reread your story. Use this rubric to help you decide which parts need improvement. Check the sentences that describe your story. An interesting beginning introduces the characters, the setting, and the problem or situation. The middle shows how the characters deal with the problem.
Events are in order.
The ending shows how the problem is solved or the situation turns out. Dialogue and details make characters, events, and setting real. I made very few mistakes in capitalization, punctuation, or spelling. The beginning could be more interesting. The problem is not clear until the middle of the story.