Transitions are well integrated and enhance the flow of the essay . Essay is organized in logical manner. Paragraphs express main ideas with adequate transitions. Organizational problems are few. Paragraphs are not connected.
Ideas are hard to follow.
The lack of organization detracts from meaning. Errors are few and do not detract from meaning and readability. Errors detract from the meaning and readability. Some sentences are awkward. Essay may not have been proofread.