If you have any comments or suggestions which may help improve this poem, simply enter them on the form below and then press the SEND button. All comments can be seen immediately below this form. Click here to join TYWC if you are not already a member. However I do feel that the flow of the begining of the poem was too long and out of sink with the rest of the versus. The Dream Princess Touched my very soul.
Lies are horrible.
It set out alot of emotion and it also reminds me of not just one but several guys I know.