I ll be back soon. You ll see. Details in this short response are organized into a clear narrative with enough focus for a 3. More information would provide the development needed for a higher score. Response represents a strong command of written language, particularly in its control of dialogue.
Events progress logically from beginning to end.
Word choice and development of ideas remain more general than would be found in a 6 paper. Response demonstrates an attempt to focus on providing a description of the picture. However, there is a lack of elaboration and apparent lack of connection between the details. Events and details are organized into a clear progression of ideas. Events are adequately elaborated with detail needed to achieve a 4.