Short Lifespan costs -10 per level. Sonic Blast costs 20 points. Lightning costs 20 points. Major Patrons have Racial Status 5. Change the reference to a Major Patron in the second paragraph on the page to a Powerful Patron.
Humanity actually has two reputations.
Jacob Demwa was born about 290 years ago, not 210 years ago. Under Advantages and Disadvantages for the Brothers of the Night, Amphibious now costs 10. DR1 Fur costs 3 points. Two extra arms cost 20 points. Reduced Manual Dexterity x2 costs -6 points.