Technic I could not find ANY newbie mistakes in this map. There really isn't too much else you can say. This map is very good looking. Lunaran obviously spent time layering and trying to achieve the best look for his map. Texturing is fantastic.
Every texture goes with the theme of a warehouse.
All in all, great texturing. Lighting is very good on average, except for some spots under the skylights that look unnatural. Detailing is great, and all fits the theme very well. Anymore people and the map would be a bloody mess. The weapons load is plentiful, most major weapons are included.