Ideas are clear and easy to follow. Supporting details are mostly well described. Vocabulary includes some strong and vivid words. The writer's voice is emerging. 4 Essay has excellent organization with five clear paragraphs.
Ideas flow and are clear and easy to follow.
Supporting details are well described. Strong vocabulary with vivid words. The writer's voice is strong, thoughtful and easy to identify. A topic sentence is usually the first sentence of a paragraph and gives the main idea the writer is communicating in the paragraph. A supporting detail gives information that explains the main idea given in the topic sentence.