Posits explicit definition of 'revolution'. Includes political and social transformation, with good balance between them. Uses most of the document. Demonstrates command over meaning of documents. Systematically incorporates point of view.
Arguments clearly incorporate multiple causation.
Distinguishes clearly between political and social transformation. Analyzes rather than describes. May include minor errors, but effectively handles major themes. Defines 'revolution' implicitly. Includes political and social transformation, although not necessarily evenly.