The election was won by Jane. Management agreed to our demand. Our demand was agreed to by management. Passive writing is what makes government reports so hard to read. They never tell you who is doing what to whom.
Every word counts Bad writing is a jungle.
You have to cut your way through the tangles. Make every word count. Treat unessential words as an enemy of understanding. There was no doubt but that she was a victim of discrimination. Because There are many thick, expensive books on how to write.