Due to the poor characterisation, little plot development and poor writing style, much of the story remains disjointed and texture uneven. Her story becomes unbelievable. For a young woman to have gone through so much, you would expect at least a deeper probe at the social problems and issues. Lesbianism, dysfunctional families, satanism, unloyal friends, premarital sex, prostitution, pimping, mental illness, unwanted pregnancy, abortion, exorcism . So many issues at hand, so poorly conveyed to the reader, you really wonder if she did really go through all these.
Events are poorly detailed, emotions scarce, people plastic and one dimensional.
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