In these tales, immigrants succeed through hard work, dedication, and a little luck. As idealistic as the story may seem, I have been fortunate enough to experience its reality in the life of one very important man. His example has had great impact on my personal expectations and goals, and the manner in which I approach my own life. Instead of launching immediately into a list of this man s excellent qualities and admirable accomplishments, this introduction lays the foundation for a comprehensive look at just why the man had such a profound impact on you. It also places the most importance on the American Dream, as is fitting in an essay like this one.
Art is a reflection of one's self-identity in the most unaffected manner.
Because art is very personal, it has no right or wrong. The type of art that has influenced me most is music. However, it moves on to a very boring and stilted structure in the third sentence. It says, This is what it is like to be me. Let me take you to my little world.