I mention an objection but don't answer it. My conclusion is not strong enough. I made at least one mistake in every paragraph. Try Harder I never stated my goal. My reasons are unclear.
Every reason needs more facts and examples.
The order of my reasons is confusing. My audience might not like the way I sound. I haven't answered possible objections. My conclusion does not sum up my reasons or restate my goal. Too many mistakes make my essay hard to understand.