Some of my language isn't right for my audience. The conclusion won't motivate anyone to take action. Mistakes sometimes make my argument confusing. Turn Up the Volume I forgot to state my goal. My reasons are weak or unclear.
Every reason needs more facts and examples.
My argument needs more organization. I repeat myself. I haven't mentioned possible objections. I am shouting at my audience, or I just sound bored. The conclusion doesn't restate my goal or reasons.