Keep each paragraph focused on the topic of the paragraph. As you write your paper, read the sentences out loud. If they don t sound right, you need to edit them. If the progression of sentences don't make quick sense, then you need to reorganize. If a sentence says nothing or very little, delete it.
Good writers are often great readers.
Pay attention to how other people write. Notice the organization and construction of logic. Occasionally read out loud. Emulate good writers. We have noticed several common errors in you papers.