In the body of the chapter, divide your information into useful topics and give each section a descriptive heading or title. Try to be as thorough as you can with the information you currently have. You should be sure to include all of this information as this reflects issues that your informants consider to be the important ones in their economic lives. Note how Nayacakalou livens up his otherwise dry presentation by giving examples of specific incidents, using quotes from people, and his own experiences. Keep in mind that people most enjoy reading about these specific kinds of things, as long as they're written with a general point in mind.
Good writing requires several revisions.
Strive to achieve a good balance between data and analysis. Data and analysis should be mixed and integrated with one another. No less than half to two-thirds of your chapter should be devoted to data. Resist the temptation to throw everything into your paper just because you collected it. If something is not very revealing or doesn't connect well to what you are writing about, omit it.