Topic is limited enough to focus well. Assertions are supported with adequate details. Include at least five descriptive details. If you insert emotion, you must show the reader how if feels, not tell about it. Introduction is at least one paragraph and contains a thesis statement which sets the tone for your tale.
Introduction sets the scene and gives whatever background is needed.
Introduction invites the reader in. Supporting paragraphs keep the narrative moving. If you wish to emphasize certain parts, be sure to order paragraphs so that they create such an emphasis. Do not jump around in time unless you order your details in a clear sequence that makes sense to the reader. Supporting paragraphs must each begin with a clear, underlined topic sentence.