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Existentialism is a philosophy dealing with man's aloneness in the universe.
Either there is no God or else God stands apart from man, leaving him free will to make his own choices. From this basic idea of man being alone in an uncertain and purposeless world, many related ideas have developed. One great worry of existentialist writers is that life is becoming too complicated and too impersonal. People become more and more involved with their work, which is taking them away from their friends, family, and culture. One author prominently known for his work with existential ideas was Franz Kafka.