Hero is clearly appropriate for monster. Hero is appropriate for the monster. No egregious errors or inexplicable or frustrating features of the spelling, syntax, or structure of the essay. Narrative explains everything and does not require guesswork on the part of the reader. While less sophisticated than above, revealing less solid understanding of period and less clear connection between period and monster, result is still persuasive, creative, appropriate.
Hero is still appropriate for the monster.
Any errors or inexplicable or frustrating features of the spelling, syntax, or structure of the essay do not appreciably inhibit my ability to understand the essay. C Competent Monster is less clearly connected with the period chosen. Errors or inexplicable or frustrating features of the spelling, syntax, or structure of the essay may inhibit my ability to understand the essay completely. The core ideas of the essay and the creation of the monster, however, are sound. The hero is appropriate for the monster.