It is not necessary that you take the specific advice that a reader gives. Their suggested correction may be good, or you might generate a better one. That's all there is to it. Now you can produce good writing. You must have confidence that you can produce good writing.
Good writing is bad writing that was rewritten.
Spill the beans right away. Don't be a slave to your prose. Outlining helps to get unstuck. Husband your readers. Trust your readers.