Examples show bullying from both perspectives. Examples are both from news stories and from everyday examples in school. Student provides two examples of bullying. Examples are both from news stories and from everyday examples in schools. Student provide no examples of bullying or just one.
Example is vague and poorly written.
Lists of 5 or more tips each for students, parents, and schools are presented. Tips are drawn from a variety of sources, including personal experiences, and are comprehensive and realistic. Student clearly provides tips of what students can do to fight bullying. Lists of 3-4 tips each for students, parents, and schools are presented. Evidence of research is present, although list could be more comprehensive, realistic, and personal.