As any serious writer will tell you, re-working your story, and reworking it again, and again, is truly what makes a good story great. Get as much objective feedback as you can from others whose opinion you value, then formulate a plan of attack and go to work. The art of revealing information through moments, not words . Being able to visually articulate what's in your head onto a page is one of the hardest parts of the whole process. And finding someone who can help you make those moments work is even harder.
Great screenplays are the fuel that fire the engines of success .
It takes more than just having a script to make it in this business. It takes a great script. Getting a screenplay to that level takes nurturing, development and, above all, collaboration. As a working professional I know how difficult it is to get honest, detailed, and constructive feedback. In an industry where today's P.A. is tomorrow's guy or gal with a three pic deal, nobody wants to risk alienating themselves by being brutally honest about your script, which is where collaboration comes in.