Cause of death in lead or second graf. Ashes are scattered, not spread. Say conducted or will officiate . Not present . Say died, not passed away, etc.
Funeral services is redundant.
Don't say wake unless there really is a wake. Say visitation is scheduled instead of friends may call. Not Mrs. Bob Smith. Okay to use Mr. and Mrs. Bob Smith. Using the following information, write an obituary of no more than six paragraphs.