Use this rubric to help you decide. Check the sentences that describe your narrative. The beginning will capture my audience's interest. I present events in chronological order, with helpful time clues. All of the events are important to the story.
Interesting details bring the story to life.
My voice is strong. The ending is a satisfying wrap-up of my story. There are very few grammar or spelling mistakes. The beginning makes a slow start or is uninteresting. Some events are out of order, or more time clues are needed.