I'm sure the author realizes that no one needs that large a drive to engage in distance learning, but some of the readers may not. Critic U For Critic U's review, click here . Critic ZZZ I would not publish the commentary as it is now. Need clearer idea of who is writing the piece. It mentions that the person is a social studies teacher.
Main problem is lack of focus.
It takes half the essay to get to the point. It is important to stick to either K-12 or higher ed. I think that the focus should be clear and the essay should get to the point. E.g. an example of a university where a union helped with an intellectual property issue.