Next my gums became sore as my teeth changed shape. Other changes occurred that I hadn t noticed on Olrec. Other people seem to see me as I once was, for which I am grateful. At least I can move among them without fear. On the other hand, I m not certain how long it will be before I can no longer stand living like this and will make my own attempt to attain the heart of an Elathian warrior.
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