Little checksum analysis. Identification of intrusion method is OK, but mis-estimates clock skew between IDS and victim host. Semi-detailed time line, references some files that are not shipped with the submission. Summary report is very short, perhaps too short. But the essential information is there.
Files overall are relatively rough material.
Technically he is on the right track. Excellent technical analysis, great point in advisory.txt. Especially liked the PERL script for the decryption and the data pulled out of swap. Also, more information on how you obtained the data would have been helpful.