My voice sounds negative or lacks confidence. My conclusion doesn't sum up my reasons or restate my goal. I made at least one mistake in every paragraph. The introduction does not tell my goal. My reasons are unclear and not well ordered.
Every reason needs support.
I don't mention objections. I don't sound as if I care at all about this goal. I forgot to write a conclusion. I made a lot of grammar, spelling, or punctuation mistakes. All Rights Reserved.