Details show originality, concreteness. Sentences show a variety of pattern and are rhetorically effective. Style is authentic and demonstrates that ideas have been carefully analyzed. The essay s central idea is interesting and significant. The organization of the essay demonstrates careful planning.
Details are specific and sharp, there is a concern for showing rather than just telling.
Sentences show a variety of purpose and pattern. Diction is chosen with clear awareness of audience and purpose. The essay has a clear central idea. The plan of the essay is clear with an identifiable introduction and conclusion. Generalizations are supported by details.