We will file the needed papers if we are unable to meet the deadline. New Harmony, Indiana was founded as a utopian community. There is another revision that offers the same theme and symbolism. Another revision offers the same theme and symbolism. All police officers must follow a rigid code of conduct.
Active verbs express meaning more vigorously.
Forms of 'be' lack vigor because they convey no action. Passive verbs lack strength. The generator was destroyed by a surge of power. A surge of power destroyed the generator. Replace 'be' verbs when it causes wordiness.