See the additional comments on writing , below. When you submit subsequent drafts , return your last marked up draft for comparison. This assists me in more quickly returning your drafts. It is your responsibility to ensure that you comply with the law school's requirements regarding number of copies, format, etc. Remember that, in your thesis, your brilliant thoughts do not count if they are not communicated.
Clear writing is best.
Based upon experience, the following tips could improve most thesis drafts. Use active voice , don't use passive voice. Don't write like a bureaucrat. Identify the noun. Use short, clear sentences .