Girls were taught into thinking that a scientist has to be masculine. As girls progress in to high school they feel a certain stress or pressure that reminds them it is important they know how to cook, sew and take care of children. They are more likely to choose classes related to a social and family life than to enter physics and chemistry. Here, in these areas, the future is uncertain. No one pushes their daughters into a career like this, rather into a non-risk or safer career.
Craftsmanship is poor.
There are spelling errors and many clumsy expressions. She does not cite sources of her information. She does not back up her statements with specific examples. The writing is vague. She generalizes, and inaccurately at that.