Either make two paragraphs or write a more accurate topic sentence. Stop with the questions. Professor recommendations are also unfair. Their subjectivity isn't nearly as objective as standardized scores. The same is true about GPAs.
Affirmative action allows students who have had difficult upbringings to make up for it.
This simile makes no sense. Anyhow, affirmative action is like beating a dead horse. And its it's caused more injustices than its it's fixed. It's not fair to minorities and women, who feel like they don't really deserve to be where they are, and it's unfair to whites , who are rejected from law school and denied their dreams. Schools should find more fair ways to admit students.