Set the tone for the writing. The writing could be strengthened by using an attention-getting strategy. Supporting Ideas Support the topic with details, examples, and facts, without losing focus. Construct sequenced paragraphs. Within each paragraph, the writer gives details to support the character trait on which he is focusing.
Closing Restate the topic in a creative way, leaving the reader satisfied.
Conclude with ideas appropriate for the type of writing. Besides recapping the discussed traits, the writer makes a hopeful statement about how hope can survive amid tragedy. This engages the reader and leaves him satisfied. Transitions Connect ideas and paragraphs effectively. The writing could be strengthened by adding transitions between paragraphs.