Does not seem as if you are an expert Uses language and vocab. effectively. Lets the reader solidly know what you are talking about. May present ideas in an unusual or surprising pattern which is still effective Organization Confusing brief, poor organization Has intro. Weak or missing transitions. Has intro., body and conclusion but not clear.
Arguments are list with no connections from one to another.
Has a clear introduction, body and conclusion. Clearly organized and flow from one to the next with no gaps or redundancies. Presents a flair for persuasion, using interesting ideas presented in an original way. Details May contain irrelevant or incorrect information. Unclear ideas, no reflection May contain irrelevant or incorrect information.