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Revise the following sentences so that the message is expressed in simpler, less technical terms. You can add, change, delete, or rearrange parts of the sentence to achieve clarity. Management has demonstrated its expertise in the commodity brokerage business, and thus the company is viable as a going concern. Competitive pricing structures, the increasing presence of imports, and a projected softening of demand in the industry point to possible profitability problems of the company. I need your feedback regarding devices that will make the deal doable as soon as possible.