Spot is tired. Jim is happy. Spot fell to the floor, dog tired. Jim swooped Jill up in his arms and licked her neck like Spot might. Already the situations and sentences are getting more interesting.
Active verbs are great tools to use.
Feel free to send them to me . A book is like a man clever and dull, brave and cowardly, beautiful and ugly. For every flowering thought there will be a page like a wet and mangy mongrel, and for every looping flight a tap on the wing and a reminder that wax cannot hold the feathers firm too near the sun. Point Counter Point, ch. God is in the details.