Every piece adds something to the whole. The writer is beginning to define the topic, even though development is still basic or general. The writer seems to be drawing on knowledge or experience, but has difficulty going from general observations to specifics . Ideas are reasonably clear , though they may not be detailed, personalized, or expanded enough to show in-depth understanding or a strong sense of purpose. Support is attempted , but doesn't go far enough yet in fleshing out the main point or storyline.
Details often blend the original with the predictable .
As yet, the paper has no clear sense of purpose or central theme. To extract meaning from the text, the reader must make inferences based on sketchy details. Information is very limited or unclear . The text may be repetitious , or may read like a collection of disconnected, random thoughts. The organization enhances and showcases the central idea or storyline.