Ideas are grouped in paragraphs, but the transitions are not always smooth. The document's format is acceptable. The sentence style is usually correct, but the text contains some awkward sentences. While the grammar is usually correct, there are some errors in complicated sentences. The text contains some errors in punctuation, capitalization, and spelling.
Diction is generally effective, but some wording is imprecise or inflated.
The document could be more concise. The author does not consider who his or her readers are and what they know. The organization is ineffective. The paragraphs do not develop one main point. Details do not support main points, or the main points are not supported by details.