The ad may have some sounds, graphics, and text, but they take away from the ad. The audience would not want to purchase the product. Ad contains graphics, sound, text, and animation. Many of these elements contributes positively to making the ad effective. Some of these elements distract the audience.
Ad contains graphics, sound, text, and animation.
Each of these elements contributes positively to making the ad effective. The ad makes the audience want to buy the product. There are no spelling or grammar errors. The profile vaguely describes the product and the target audience. Few things are correctly identified.