Consider these suggestions, which identify ways to tighten writing, use words with precision, and provide the appearance of complete work. Note that suggestions are listed in alphabetical order. Advise, advice Advise is the verb form.
Advice is the noun form.
Although, while While implies time. Only use the word when you mean to imply a time sequence. Otherwise, use although. Avoid overusing bold type. If you use bold too frequently to catch readers' eyes, the phrases in bold will compete with one another for users' attention.