Please consider how your actions may be impacting others at all times. If your cellular phone should ring or your beeper should go off, please remove yourself from the classroom and conduct your business outside the classroom. Sleeping in class rather irritates me. Even though most of you probably work during the day, please try to refrain from sleeping in class. Silently sitting in your chair and waiting to be taught is not acceptable.
Content is clear and balanced.
There are no tangled sentences. A varied length of sentences is present and correct sentence structure is used. The pattern of development is clear and apparent and demonstrates forethought regarding the desired effect upon the reader. The style and tone are appropriate to the topic and audience. There may be an occasional mistake in mechanics .