There were 115,607 employees worldwide who voted in favor. You will find the passage in Chapter 5. He wore the ten-gallon hat with pride. Simplify your writing style. Use short blocks of copy, short words, sentences and paragraphs.
Complicated sentences discourage the reader from continuing.
Use the copy to mark on. It's important to label all versions - original, first draft, second draft, final. This will ensure you don't print the wrong version. Don't stop to make changes or take notes. This first read will give you a feel for the whole article.