Then tell them what you told them. The trick is to get them to read it all without realizing they read it three times. It slows the action. Don't edit yourself. Everyone needs an editor.
All effective writing is edited.
The Gettysburgh Address was an exception. But you're not Abraham Lincoln. Who is the subject. Whom is the object. Don't use a word, don't use a technique, don't use a form of punctuation unless you are convinced it's right, and that it works.