Schools should not require uniforms, but school dress codes should be strenghthed and enforced more strictly and I.D. badges shold also be required because the benefits people ascribe to uniforms are rather trivial and I.D. badges would do the same job. Figure out what the assumption is that links the thesis and because clauses. Anything that cuts off access to important information on the Internet should not be done. Whole explanation of how various people can decide different things should be censored and gradually, access is closed off. Use examples here such as lack of access to info on breast cancer etc.
Assumption is a problem.
Need a better assumption, which means reason is flawed.