However, the experiment has one glaring, inexcusable omission. Results Observation of 16 marked male crickets showed that the number of matings per day varied among individuals. To see if the environment affected the number of matings, I placed leaves and grass on the peat moss in half the containers. The increase of matings may be due to the receptiveness of the females which appears to increase under more natural conditions. Cross out the three sentences that don't belong in the results section.
Discussion Use a coherent, logical organization.
Start by drawing attention to your major findings. The data presented here indicate that honey bees are responsive to ultraviolet light. When confronted with food in cups of varying colors, they overwhelmingly chose the one that emitted UV light. Cross out the two sentences that don't belong in a discussion and tell where they do belong. Compare your results with your original hypothesis and the work of other researchers.