When they tattoo my limbs with names I realize that my life Is to be cut short By territorial markings. I liked the undercurrent of what the human race is capable of, how it sometimes doesn t appreciate the simple things in life. You have made your point with well-chosen lines, with a direct, yet subtle approach. On the surface, the poem has one meaning, but it is rooted in something much deeper. The last lines are especially noteworthy.
All good poets go for walks.
Thanks for sharing your discoveries. Have a good week at school.