I think this post is the sanest one regarding this subject. Overall though, I would recommend your book to an ambitious beginner. Nicely done, well written and clear diagrams. I would like suggestions on what book would be the best for a twister of advanced skill. My weakest points have to be hats and improv.
Any suggestions are welcome.
The restaurant pays me for 2 hours of twisting. I don't hang around the table waiting. Some nights, I barely make it around the restaurant in two hours. The display works in several ways. And I get lots of attention and applause every Saturday.