This makes me sick to my stomach. The rooms and the whole motel looks like it has never been cleaned before. The pictures on the walls are crooked with big globs of dust all ove r. As people walk through the pool area, they grin at those seated, and make rude comments to the Desk Clerk and those in the pool area. I think that you need to make sure that your paper is accurate and in order to do that I think that you need to look at something from a good and bad point of view.
Different people see different things in different ways.
That is why I did what I did. I f ound that it was very difficult to observe something that you know well. It seems hard to try to put something down on paper when you know it well, so it is hard to get really descriptive with things. I know that I tended to leave basic descriptions out, like the colors of the walls or the colors of the pool water. These basic things you tend to leave out thinking that everyone knows that is what it is like.