They say people can't see ghosts unless they believe in them. Maybe that's why Momma and Poppa can't see me. I still keep trying to think of the best way to handle the accent. It feels like we really need just a hint of the Southern accent rather than so full-tilt. It settles down for the rest of the piece and I found myself reading quite naturally, in the voice, I think, that you intended.
Accents are so tricky.
First off, the reason why the southern accent isn't all that constant throughout the story is that some parts I would really get into the story and write non-stop and forget about it. You asked me what I'm reading lately. Well, my absolute favourite author is Ann Rice. I can't even describe how brilliant I think she is. That is my favorite of hers.