We are connected to technology. Computers, television, and cars are all the result of technology. It can make our lives better, however, it can be bad if it s used for negative purposes. The last sentence of each paragraph should be a concluding sentence. You have good ideas, but you should include more examples in the body of the essay.
Businesses also benefit from the internet.
They can reach a global audience with their products and services. In addition, they can go online and examine their competitors' products, services and prices. The benefits of technology are numerous. Your final paragraph should summarize your main ideas and include your view of technology. You have not done that.