Do not jump around in time unless you order your details in a clear sequence that makes sense to the reader. Supporting paragraphs must each begin with a clear, underlined topic sentence. All other sentences in that paragraph must be relevant to the topic sentence. The paragraphs are well developed. Conclusion must be at least one paragraph.
Conclusion reasserts the viewpoint and gives the essay closure.
Sentences are clear, complete, expressive, and varied in form and length. Word choice is appropriate for audience and purpose. Word choice enhances your descriptive details. Paragraphs are shaped to promote the essay's organization. There are no deficiencies in grammar, punctuation, spelling, and usage.