Craftsmanship still lacks. Nice attention to presentation. Firm ideas based on many examples. Creativity is employed. Excellent craftsmanship and above-average presentation.
Choices are extremely well thought out and it shows.
Paper explaining the choices made in restoration Poorly organized and few ideas with very few, if any, research examples to back them up. A loose organization with a few beginning ideas stated. Mechanics and spelling jeopardize the effectiveness of the paper. Well organized ideas supported by 5 specific examples from the research. Minimal spelling and grammatical errors.