premise: <hypo> had it not been for timely access to a stroke specialist (and getting the clot-busting drug tPA) via telestroke technology.Is the story compelling and engaging? Expert storytellers say the greatest stories have some kind of conflict in them.
hypothesis: <hypo> should be "For example, instead of simply describing the benefits of telestroke technology, tell the story of a 45-year-old stroke victim who might have been unable to talk to his wife and kids again"