Hello Ratnakar Kulkarni thanks for the swift reply What about this He became a celebrated hero in Britain among most of the people connected to the British Raj 3 but unpopular with most Members of Parliament 4 My reason for suggesting this is that 247 MPs voted to forcibly retire Dyer from duty with only 37 MPs voting to keep him Later a Dyer supporter Carson attempted to pass a motion of mild approval of Dyer but was defeated 230 MPs against approval 129 MPs pro mild approval This suggests that a majority of MPs was against Dyer All this is covered in the reference 4 Please let me know what you think I think adding what I suggest above would balance the introduction yet keep it short