I relegated this to a subsection of Edit War On point Combining many things in one revision is generally good After one reversion for cause however split it up icon what s that about that has been fixed Black Bishop capitalized why that persists I don t know anything about wikipedia blacklist policy nor practice except how our organization article NAMBLA handles this ref 9 The three paragraphs in question need work No self reference narrow this edit or broad blacklisted by Wikipedia is permissible The matter of those two sentences belongs in a Note at best The first and third inserted paragraphs need to be rewritten anyway P S The next paragraph Delany has identified needs relocation to follow the divorce move up four paragraphs