First off cool thanks for making that that s helpful But you see it illustrates my point bullet points are allowed to be jumpy and totally change topics every sentence but paragraphs can t they come of sound a tad schizoid changing topics with each sentence What you need to make paragraphs flow are topic sentences concluding sentences explainatory sentences I could be done it s just not as easy as taking the text and deleteling the bullet points That said there is a prose form that would sound okay and would convey the same content that we could make if people really don t like the bullet points I ll do some askin