Copyedit July 2011 Hi During the opyedit a few things came to light that may need attention Conception he didn t know when asked by Collinson on the commentary para 3 what is the commentary that is being referred to Filming I have linked some regions which may or not be necessary feel free to revert if necessary Broadcast and pre airing media blackout I have added an explanation of what the Fear Factor is as well as that the Fear Factor website does not have a fear rating as per the beginning of the sentence which describes them not being allowed to see it I hope this was satisfactory but if there are any contentious edits feel free to remove them