O Brien Argentina Hi I have rescued your article which was in danger of being deleted as a hoax The first bit was fine and could be backed up by sources which I have added but it was a mistake to put in the facetious bits about pork scratchings and his frustratingly sober mind because a that jokey tone isn t right for a serious encyclopedia and b you made them up in WP terms that s original research and not verifiable It was those that made it look like a hoax Don t be discouraged have a look at the guide to writing WP YFA Your First Article Regards