Yes exactly The material in the lead just summarizes in one brief sentence the later paragraph on Boswell s material That is what the lead is supposed to do On the blog first it does not mention Sergius and Bacchus the subject of this article It s just a general criticism of Boswell s ideas the mere fact that an image of the saints appear on the cover of his book is immaterial Moreover it s a self published blog and not acceptable as a source here Time to move on Your current addition of the Harvey is also redundant as we already say that Boswell s methodology and conclusions have been disputed by many historians and include six citations for it Ironically you are only adding more weight to this particular part of the article t c