Thank you Your suggestions are good ones as I said we ll see what Drove thinks I didn t know it got noticed someplace This and Hush were my first 2 articles of any real note I just write to improve the prose where I can correct grammar do housekeeping I don t originate articles at least not so far I ve actually spent what feels like lifetimes shortening and tightening up plot sections all over this place but it s a losing battle for most films as fans will just not leave them alone I understand the impulse this bit is so important to me it just has to be in there explaining why it can t be gets very old very quickly But I do still try Glad to see someone else fighting the good fight TEHodson