ah OK If you ever want to approach FAC I can give you a long list most importantly the External link farm should be seriously pruned per WP EL WP NOT inline citations would need improvement and footnotes should be formatted per WP CITE ES Cultural influence is listy the text between split images in the lead would be a problem and there are some WP MSH issues It s probably GA quality though none of those are particularly GA issues GA is seriously backed up by the way and it can take up to a month to get someone to look at the article I don t participate in GA as I think it s a large waste of time Talk