GA Review This review is transcluded from Talk Fire Station No 23 GA1 The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review Lead Built in 1910 it was also the Los Angeles Fire Department s headquarters until 1920 and the residence of every fire chief from 1910 1928 this can be reworded in it s current state it does not flow maybe Built in 1910 as the Los Angeles Fire Department s headquarters until 1920 and serving as the residence for the department s fire chiefs or something like that When it opened it spawned a political firestorm due to the ornate interior and expensive imported materials used in its construction It has been called the Taj Mahal of firehouses these can be made into one sentence somehow as they are closely connected I feel the lead should give a brief short reason why the station was close and what is the current state Controversy over the station s cost and extravaganceonly 26 feet 7 9 m wide but 167 feet 51 m long long is this talking about length in height or what The main floor was an arcade stretching from Fifth to Winston Streets with stalls for ten horses repressed vitrified brick walls of white enamel tiling and pressed steel ceilings 21 feet 6 4 m above the floor Other There is no explanation as in why it closed That is one main reason that needs to be elaborated I feel the sections could be named and organized differently like so History Construction controversy Operation Museum Controversy of restoration I recommend rewording shooting into filming location as that sounds as if a shooting occurred there GA review see WP WIAGA for criteria Is it reasonably well written A Prose quality B MoS compliance Is it factually accurate and verifiable A References to sources B Citation of reliable sources where necessary C No original research Is it broad in its coverage A Major aspects B Focused Is it neutral Fair representation without bias Is it stable No edit wars etc Does it contain images to illustrate the topic A Images are copyright tagged and non free images have fair use rationales B Images are provided where possible and appropriate with suitable captions Overall Pass or Fail