Hmm I actually didn t notice that the second footnote was to The Old Weird America Personally I d just quote Marcus and leave the Dylan quote to Hentoff there as well One other thing I ve been meaning to do Mick is include some decent lyric excerpts You may recall Monicasdude was standing in the way of that and with him presumably gone there s no reason not to You ve done such good work on the article I think you would have the best feel for which lyrics at which points My votes would be A Hard Rain s A Gon na Fall Subterranean Homesick Blues and Blind Willie McTell where each is currently mentioned There s simply no excuse not to have short excerpts from an artist whose stature rests more on lyrics than anything else