There are many many problem with your statements First you do not provide a source for your statistical information Second you don t define what you mean by traditionally considered as Islamic people What people What do you mean by traditionally You say that there are women who strictly disagree with islamic attitude to women Who are these women What do you mean by Islamic attitudes to women That s all very vague These are all claims that need to be cited Further the syntax and diction used in your statement makes very little sense to an English reader