Thank you for the heads up earlier sent me a private mail requesting my help before this was moved to main space and I helped him to re write the introduction section I also pointed out to him in more detail what is missing in the article neutral point of view nonjudgmental language opposing views I spent several minutes to highlight these problems and how they can address it I decided not to fix it myself because I believe the best way editors can learn is to allow them to do things themselves and then we can help to fix minor problems Doing this we make them a better Wikipedian I advised Olaniyan not to move this to main space until the issues are addressed but I m perplexed and disappointed to see that he actually moved the article to mainspace without addressing the problems I expect Olaniyan to fix these problems today per my earlier suggestions and they are free to also contact other editors for advice I will be glad to move the page back to their sandbox if they choose not to fix the problems today t lk to M