Ethnic Taiwanese Imperial Japan Serviceman I noticed you were working on the above new article and I tried to make some edits to improve in my opinion the grammar and other things but since you are still making changes yourself there were edit conflicts So I have decided to wait If after you re happy with the article you would like me to look over it and perform a copy edit please reply on my talk page and I ll be happy to do so This isn t meant as a criticism of your spelling or grammar just one or two issues of style that I feel I could help with talkstalk