British Army Yes it s a hard one to tackle and I think you ve done a fantastic job given the difficulties involved I don t think it s far from A Class but I think if you ever want to take it to FAC it ll need some overhauling In particular you ll have to find some sections to tighten up and once you ve done that I think there are some that could use further expansion Personally I think that the section on equipment should be significantly tightened leaving some room elsewhere but I don t really know Also I was about to add it to the ACR but this is just as good you re missing one of the conflicts in the immediate aftermath of the war and as a matter of fact an area where troops were deployed in East Africa during the war Somaliland See 1920 conflict between British forces and Somaliland dervishes and Hastings Ismay Somaliland which gives a good account of the conflict though just from the perspective of one soldier I don t think you need to do any more than mention the conflict but a good source is if you want it