Good work The article has progressed and we are very close to listing The areas that need attention are a Building the lead to give an appropriately detailed summary of the article sufficient to provide the general reader with a satisfactory overview this is the priority b Trimming some unnecessary detail c Including some detail on the other men arrested this is minor and I wouldn t quibble if it wasn t done I think all this is quite achievable in a few days and I m willing to help out on the work I would hope that the article can be listed before the end of next week Tea time