The email controversy is in the wrong section My bold edit was reverted by and I was directed to previous discussions In addition to what I believe were improvements to grammar and sentence structure I moved the email controversy sections to the bottom of the U S Secretary of State section where it seems to belong see this version I m puzzling over the reasoning for having an oddball miscellaneous section called Clinton Foundation e mails issue and other activities sort of like Monkey grapefruits and things found on a Chevrolet to my ears This was previously discussed here Talk Hillary Clinton Archive 25 Location and section header relative to emails controversy I m pinging and who were involved in this previous discussion From a reader s perspective I find it jarring to read about this relatively major controversy outside of the context of the part of Mrs Clinton s career in which it happened MrX