It is not at all hard to read and the lede is elegant and excellent It may not suit your taste though And BMK s lies are a personal attack I will defend myself As for collegiality if BMK s behavior is an example of what you regard as collegiality then you don t understand what that word means If you or he has a problem with the article I strongly suggest you offer your ideas one at a time for discussion in order to reach a consensus before making changes That s my idea of collegiality