You re doing good work Well done However I think you re rushing For example as an illustration of Olivier s early rise you say what he was doing over a decade after he started which is after the Shakespearean breakthrough described in the following paragraph There s no rush If somebody me posts a dozen questions or objections on the talk page there s no obligation to respond to them the next day Take your time get it right Incidentally here s another question for you We re all familiar with the stern paper who thwarts his son s dramatic ambitions A ghastly example of this stereotype is in the well acted but dreadful film Dead Poets Society In this article though you first say that paper was a stern sort of person and then without explanation say it was he who decided that his son would be an actor This seems remarkable And how about the unusual surname Is it Huguenot