Section break for convenience I know Fyslee will agree with you Herd I d like to suggest leaving it out for now and returning when the rest of the article is more settled and it can be unprotected without a new flare up Nothing that happens here or in my sandbox is permanently binding my goal is to improve the style and clarity of the article since I write this way all the time and act as a buffer and moderator between the extremes I can see some potential value to expanding Mary s story as long as it is done carefully Thatcher131