Hi Hi Mel I am Manas I don t think you would be tracking the names of people whose edits you remove or revert hence I would introduce myself here I was working on the article and more particularly I had written The latter was reverted by you with the comment that it was a personal essay I fully agree with you I am very new to wikipedia and I come from the blogging world where the writing style is more like personal essays My mistakes on wikipedia are more out of habit than intentional or with ulterior motives I would like to change these habits for sure Can I expect some help from you a teacher I would like to be a rather long term serious contributor to Wikipedia Can I request you to tell me the kind of mistakes I made OR some tips for better wikipedia contribution in terms of content and style I know you must be a busy person But just in case you happen to have the time Thanks Regards Manas Garg manasgarg gmail com