Systemic risk I have a couple of suggestions for the third paragraph of Debates and controversies Systemic risk aiming to improve the accuracy a bit The paragraph currently reads with the problem areas highlighted However as all investors in the herd would lose funds in such a situation I d like to tweak the wording a bit to clarify this Also the last sentence is simply a restatement of risks already cited in greater detail above I would suggest cutting to make the section more concise My proposed revisions are below Thoughts from others Cheers Talk