How can we make the Criticism section more neutral The following was forked from the talk page s 7th archive My goal by adding the Kelly and Keating references was to show how other religions might view the INC I understand right now that the section is quite long and needs to be pared down How can we do this I ve examined the criticism section on the RCC and it appears to be similar but maybe there s something I m not realizing here forked by Speak on it