1 This section is passable However one concern some sections are way too long and might be uncomfortable for some readers to navigate I suggest you shorten some sections 2 Mostly everything seems to be sourced well However the whole introduction paragraph is not and some facts like the flagbearer are not as well 3 N A 4 N A 5 N A 6 I think you should add 2 3 more images to the article Some parts are just full of writing a picture needs to be put Although the above issues are minor I am unable to pass you at the moment and will wait till you fix the above to decided on a pass fail TalkContributions