The main things I see are that despite the many citations much is still uncited that a few of the citations are still on GoDot s idiosyncratic style and more generally that there is a lot of rather clumsy writing I m working on these slowly as is Bobblehead but it s probably going to require more than the two of us can give it You might also look at issues raised on the talk page or in the FARC request But if you are back to work don t sweat it I was thinking you might be more available Talk