I also did a bit of work on putting the references in the somewhat odd format that WIkipedia uses One good rule to use is to include all the information you can title date author so that another editor can verify the information in the source The article caught my eye because we once lived nearby The description paragraph still seems like almost verbatim from the form and we are supposed to paraphrase into these articles I am running out of time this afternoon but it should give you an idea if you havetime to work on it some more The Paul Shoup article itself needs similar work Thanks