moved from My talk page This was cut and pasted here since it applies to this article Could someone please tell me where to post the information I have put in the Japanese alias article That wording for the notice about Wikibooks Please help improve this article by removing or rewriting the how to content which may qualify for a move to Wikibooks is confusing If I remove the how to nature of this article I can move it to Wikibooks I want to leave the how to nature and post this somewhere My apologies for inappropriately posting it there Hi Can you tell us which article you want to edit and what kind of thing you want to add Thanks for your reply Sorry I should have internal linked that I want to edit the article Japanese alias I have posted the need for sources myself However the other two warnings at the top of the page in addition to a This article or section is written like a personal reflection or essay and may require cleanup warning appear to have come up automatically I would like to resolve these issues Cheers Rewrite the article to have a more neutral tone Phrases like The best way to determine an alias is to take several months read more like a how to than an article See WP BETTER for more information as well and his otters Broken clamshells Otter chirps my own opinion on this I hope you don t decide to take it elsewhere it has the beginnings of a good wiki article Don t be dismayed by the boxes at the top Most people here want to make the encyclopedia better and are posting their thoughts on that basis Ok there will always be a few that disparage anything but ride with it I am now going to read the article more fully and post further comments when I have I sincerely hope that will help you develop the article I will post them in about 10 mins from now Thanks for your help and your encouragement Are those warnings appearing automatically or is that someone s judgment If the latter I would be glad to consult them for advice too If that is possible please let me know how Wiki on Re warnings who I ll check into them and get back to you shortly In the meantime here s some hastily written scribbles Lead that is the first bit before the purpose section starts Explain what is meant by an alias use synonymns for alias don t repeat it Remember the lead should not contain any info that is not in the body of the article it s a summary Which is why I suggest leaving it until last write the whole thing THEN make the lead to summarise the content The wikihelp says to use the article title in the first bit but I have edited it some Thanks Re Alien ID from a quick search I can t find an article about alien registration cards I m very suprised Maybe there is one There should be You shouldn t need an external link If not I d be very tempted to create one Even if just a stub saying what they are where to get one ku office etc why it s a good idea not need passport etc But search thoroughly first no point re inventing the wheel Yea this surprised me as well I will let you write it Needs to explain more about kanji katakana for foreign names Link to WP articles on japanese alphabet etc Those are linked to WP aren t they User t