The wording of the most recent edit is needs tweaking Reading the source provided Hunter wrote in opposition of a complete withdrawal of U S forces an unreliable Afghan Leadership concerns regarding roadside bombs and what he saw as Obama administration s other shortcomings which he termed mixed messages to American service members and the world And as stated by the Administration in 2012 there are were no plans for a complete withdraw which had changed as recently as recently as this month to possible withdrawal after 2014 Therefore upon closer review the summarization of the source is wrong As for the second part I would say the best way to word it would be something like So in the end I am proposing the following wording In 2011 Hunter wrote in Politico that he is opposed to a complete withdrawal of American forces from Afghanistan and was concerned of the challange of an unreliable Afghan leadership cite news title How to handle Afghanistan author Duncan D Hunter url newspaper Politico date 3 June 2011 accessdate 26 January 2013 After a visit to Afghanistan in October 2012 Hunter returned with a more upbeat assessment stating Frankly I was very skeptical last year when I went last and have been on whether the Afghans can do this but they are cite news title Hunter reports progress in Afghan war effort author Gretel C Kovach url newspaper San Diego Union Tribune date 20 October 2013 accessdate 26 January 2013 The alteration of the quote is keeping with MOS QUOTE