Well let s go through this one by one We should avoid using kiddie like words such as creepy in artices I think For the Collision Chaos entry dismal would be a better word I m also not sure about descriptions such as dreamlike and surreal What is dreamlike and surreal about it And what precisely is rather odd about the buildings in SSBF To me it simply looks as if they are very very densely packed probably because of overpopulation issues I think we should also avoid giving levels too many concrete descriptions such as factory or aquarium because peoples perception of the stages vary greatly You may think that WW is a factory but I have always seen it as a power generation plant Likewise to me TTGF is a hydroponics facility not an aquarium Also we shouldn t use Eggman and Robotnik in the same article let alone the same paragraph The official Wikipedia article is Doctor Eggman so IMO that is what we should use