And Now For Something Completely Different I know you watch at least the Manson girls articles and I ve dabbled a very little bit on them tonight More so on Tex Watson I revised some of the language as it pertains to conversion to Christianity It seems like on criminal biographies whenever this is mentioned it has been worded as claimed to be a born again Christian but on non criminal articles it isn t couched in skepticism I considered this and I m thinking that the claimed wording adds a level of POV judgment to the statement that wording of reported wrote published etc does not I tried to reword it to lend a more neutral tone Does this ring true to you