Senseless details First to write a proper encyclopedic biographical article we should use summary style We are not writing a biography rather we are writing a small biographical article Ms Horton may well have played jacks as a child I may even find a source for this information Nevertheless the information is irrelevant and unnecessary for our readers to get a snapshot of who Ms Horton is today The fact that she worked two jobs to pay for flying lessons demonstrates her dedication to her intended profession The fact that she worked at a car dealership and a pharmacy as opposed to a gas station and a supermarket tells me absolutely nothing It does not add to the article but it does make the article worse talk