Brazil There are serious grammar issues in the text you are attempting to add which make it very difficult for someone to understand what you are saying Perhaps if you added it one section at a time it would be easier for someone like myself to fix it for you I think part or all of the conflict here is grounded in language Are you using some form of machine translation Fine Ok lets try one piece at time I would appreciate if you could show me what can be done in each of paragraphs I pasted their texts plain without references on final of present version of talk page