Sorry for such late reply while not on wikibreak exactly I ve been busy enough in real life I haven t done any editing that takes time as your question deserves I think the biggest issue with the article is that it makes no claim of notability Why does it stand out Why is it worth an encyclopedia article Please see WP NOT and particularly WP NOTDIR Although the article isn t the worst offender on promotion by any means it still looks to be promoting services Read the other reviewer s comments they are very valuable All the best I m no IP talk to me