What point am I trying to prove in your imagination I am correcting poor writing and will continue to do so The wording of the sentence Coldplay s early material was seen as reminiscent is just plain bad writing because it doesn t say WHO saw it as reminiscent nor why we should give such credence to this person s opinion If you want to insert opinions into articles you have to specifically state WHOSE opinions they are and defend why they re worth pushing so prominently within an article Take the matter to an admin if you don t believe me