Who are you going to get to further review I can t imagine that he would be independent from you My guess is that he will be your friend It would be like me supporting my brother s material As for the significance of Veracity you re probably right that the summary was not appropriate The magazine is significant though and I will repost using your suggestions when I get a chance Those suggestions by the way are good ones and I would suggest that you should offer those initially before deleting It would save time and help avoid fruitless tit for tat