23 25 13 30 March 2015 review of submission by 76 21 41 198 This was my first whole article and I based it on the existing articles in the venture capital category that have no flags associated with them To the best of my ability every statement is sourced from a notable publication and I do not see any statements that would constitute an advertisement There are other articles in this category that definitely look like ads e g Blah Blah is a visionary company I would love to know how to change this article to avoid advertisement in order to resubmit Thanks 76 21 41 198