Look the thing is and I m not being arrogent here I have been dabbling in GA s lately and have looked at a bunch of others which I haven t touched It doesn t have to be perfect cause I know it s not just good And I know the 2 things needed the other bunch of stuff with the lead is redundent as a bunch of GA and I ve seen one on FAC not having links in lead However if you look at the review I m not familiar with whitewash or Madien in a sporting context for both as I know the historical context to whitewash sorry but we may differ here on views but this is not Wikipedia for the specials Also I am an accedmic undergrade so I know all about dumbing down to a point but linking basic terms for a non english speaker that s a bit too far especially since this is and encyclopeia for English speakers If your reading it and review it then a comprensable level of English would be presumed by even the most unassuming English native Personally I do not want to stick with what he has said and rather have a clean break and have a restarted review by someone with a capable level of English