Explaining my edits The article previously stated Despite having no formal business background a number of prominent Israeli and Jewish American businessmen have visited Pinto for consultation I changed this sentence because grammatically the prior version implied that the businessmen had no formal business background whereas it is Pinto who has no formal business background I also changed the identification of Jacob Arabo Jacob the Jeweler from famed jeweler and convicted felon to just jeweler because the article about Arabo himself does not mention him as having been convicted of anything Although the source cited for the sentence does refer to Arabo as being a convicted felon that does not seem to be relevant enough to this article to mention here talk