July 2006 UTC Yes Let the Fa commenting begin We have five versions some based on others What we need are comments about accuracy NPOV and verifiability Comments of Mcconn s version Comments on Fire Star s additions Comments on Samuel s version Comments on Kent8888 s version Refactored from above section I like Kent s version but find it a bit skimpy and lacking in needed citations Comments on Tomananda s version Refactored from above section This is a highly controversial topic and since all my previous suggestions were rejected by Falun Gong practitioners I am willing to approve this modified version Using Kent s paragraph as a base this version cites all the needed sources and manages in a short paragraph to cover the basics It also hints at the controversy about who exactly will be eliminated in the Fa rectrification without trying to give an answer so that people will feel inspired to read further in a daughter article 00 46 24