While your efforts to alter it are appreciated your most recent work still has a number of problems In any event is editorialising it assumes Kerr s and Byng s decisions were wrong it infers Byng was removed from office against his will it infers Kerr was forced from office it infers 3 and 4 were punnishment for having done 2 it is in the wrong section I still maintain the redundant personal consequences section should be dropped and the remainder split as I did