I ve added Lynn to the biography and will use in the Nobel Prize section His description of the accident was readable and is almost word for word the same as Baker s but Baker mentions the leaking CSF and the ruptured liver spleen I ve reworded to show that Mary reported the injuries by using a direct quotation If Lynn is critical of Hemingway s writing it would be helpful to add to the Reception section In his Prelude Lynn ends by admitting that the writing was some of the best in the 20th century or words to that effect The article does not another point of view if it exists Btw here s the markup for Lynn Harvnb Lynn 1987 p