I was hoping that and might have been your edits they looked medical The one about panic and exhaustion I thought may have been an anecdote possibly reported somewhere I ll keep searching for sources I ve copyedited Simon Mitchell a bit and commented at WP Articles for deletion Captain Trevor Jackson calling for a keep on Simon Mitchell You should comment there when you get a moment to spare I ll find time later to see if Captain Trevor Jackson has sufficient notability to justify it but WP BLP1E may be a problem