I normally don t help with assessing new content The best way to get the material assessed is to follow the steps at Wikipedia Articles for creation and people who specialise in assessing new articles will check it for you Just click on the big blue link that says Create an article now But I would like to offer some suggestions of things you need to do first get rid of all the mark up that is making some of the text big and get rid of the mark up that is making some of it bold And encyclopedia articles don t contain exclamation marks Your article is not written in an encyclopedic neutral way you ve got lots of sources but it reads more like an advertisement than a Wikipedia article Please have a look at articles on other authors to get an idea how the article should be written and how it will appear when completed These are only some suggestions to get you started and I can not guarantee that if you follow them that your article will be accepted