Hey Gerry What I find to be disconcerning is not so much the language but the quotation marks MOS guidelines highly discourage this for good reason it is not encyclopedic language I d like to work with you in constructing a nice first sentence The an v the argument is pushing around semantics and doesn t really help what I was trying to fix with the presentation of the article I agree with you in theory and disagree in methodology and language I saw through the history before I edited the article that you contributed greatly to the subject so if you can provide something more constructive than unacceptable I d be more than happy to listen read If not s okay as I have no vested interest in the subject other than maintenance of the project Happy editing to you talk