Hello Dwoods1113 This is not a criticism but just a tip use user s talk discussion pages to contact them and sign off your message by clicking the insert signature button second from the right in editing mode That way it comes up as a message for them and they can see who made it and when Thanks With the Advocacy Investing article I think the best thing is to assume that the reader knows nothing about it and has a short attention span like me Separate it into sections use headers and subheaders and structure the article around these headers