Allow me to reiterate whether the intro is clear or the structure logical shouldn t be the issues and I don t think logic is on anyone s mind in this discussion The issue should be whether the random person is going to come away more confused than before i e to whom is the article clear or not If Jza84 reads it over and over I suggest it will remain clear to her him On the other hand the random person looking for answers about the administrative geography of the UK is likely to find it unclear for the reasons mentioned above