By we I mean all of us involved in trying to improve this article And again it is nice to say I think this section is wrong so I m going to fix it That s great But I can t say if I personally think the changes that are going to be made are good or bad unless those specific changes are proposed So far I haven t seen much in the way of specific proposed changes so I m not sure how any editor can make a statement one way or the other about them Can you write your changes down as dot points Is that a viable way forward