Thanks Nadiatalent your comments are helpful and I ve made another try at the Social issues text below adding in new references for the first paragraph and placing the reference for Indonesia at the end of the second paragraph an oversight on my part before In this second try I have also made some changes to the wording of the first paragraph so that it is accurate to the references The new references for the first paragraph are studies on Malaysia and Indonesia I ll provide quotes here so that you can see what they say about palm oil production s social impact 1 Socio Economic Impact Assessment of Palm Oil Production The data showed generally positive financial and socio economic consequences of oil palm adoption in the immediate surroundings of oil palm estates In terms of industry and economic opportunities OPCs oil palm communities feature more wood based industries and a higher numbers of shops minimarkets and hotels 2 The local impacts of oil palm expansion in Malaysia According to respondents the primary reasons for shifting from traditional livelihood activities to oil palm cultivation were higher returns for oil palm due to perceived high prices 43 3 and perceived ease of managing oil palm plantations 30 Generally oil palm has brought positive impacts such as increased income secure employment and improved access to social services However involvement in oil palm has also caused many local communities to move away from traditional practices See also the table of results on page 11 which lists Increased income More steady or reliable income Education Better access to transport services Health facilities Accommodation as survey respondents perceived benefits of palm oil production For the point about landholders being able to participate in the cash economy I think the existing reference works Here is the quote the authority has set up a number of joint ventures with NCR native customary rights landholders Under these agreements local title holders are paid a dividend ensuring that part of the profits flow back into the community Oil palm is a valuable economic crop and provides a source of employment It allows small landholders to participate in the cash economy and often results in improvements to local infrastructure and greater access to services such as schools and health facilities In some areas the cultivation of oil palm has replaced traditional practices often due to the higher income potential of palm oil However in some cases land has been developed by oil palm plantations without consultation or compensation of the indigenous people occupying the land This has occurred in Papua New Guinea Colombia and Indonesia In the Sarawak state of Malaysian Borneo there has been debate over whether there was an appropriate level of consultation with the Long Teran Kanan community prior to the develo