November 2009 UTC It is now six days later I got a little bit impatient and went ahead and made some changes myself As you can see I wikified it some that is I linked this article to some other articles and took out explanatory phrases that then became redundant made some of it more NPOV and tidied up some of the grammar and punctuation Please don t just replace my edits with what you already had as you did the last time If you disagree with my interpretation and implementation of Wikipedia practices by all means let s talk about it here We should be able to come to a reasonable compromise 00 46 22