Thanks Your copyedits are much appreciated as is the advice To reply to your points I was afraid that the section about his books rambled a bit although I want to make sure to keep enough of it in Especially in Szigeti on the Violin he reveals a lot about his personal philosophy of music and violin playing which in my opinion is very important for his biography That said I will try trimming it down Yes he was indeed married to the same woman for all those years and as far as I can tell their marriage was a very happy and harmonious one There are some nice vignettes of their life together in his autobiography maybe I ll try to work in a few mentions of domestic life somewhere I had a good laugh at your remark about how I should get academic credit for this especially because just a few days ago my obnoxious Music History professor bellowed Don t ever look up anything on Wikipedia if you expect to stay in this class WIKIPEDIA SUCKS ROCKS after which everyone burst out laughing and I sat fuming Anyway thanks again you are very helpful and much appreciated as usual