RE my argument Thank you that does clear things up Unfortunately I m on my lunch break at the moment and don t have time to give you a proper full response however as soon as I get home 1 am ish PST I ll go over what you ve given me in detail and give you something that does justice your post For now I m going to have to leave it at Although I still disagree with a few points I believe that much of what you ve said is valid and strong but that it must be reflected by the page in order for the section to hold merit I think that the section would also have to be reorganized to accurately reflect this