I made clear revisions to the paragraph and posted it below Its only minor mind As grunge came into being from a hardcore punk scene and was highly influenced by the genrea a whole it is believed by some that grunge is a variant or subgenre of hardcore punk In the video documentary Hype there is a scene in which a guitarist implies that grunge is essentially the same as hardcore punk by plays two riffs on his guitar claiming one as punk in reference to hardcore punk and the other as grunge This has caused debate about the similarity of the two riffs and the similarity of grunge and hardcore punk as a whole Still insert Welsey and or Leyasu s contribution here In my eyes it reads a little better minor gramma fixes and sounds a little less POV Suggest this has a template for whatever else is added