Also I don t want to slow you down on FA but it sounds like you re thinking about heading there after a final copyedit and some additional references I would suggest waiting for a bit as the article still seems pretty choppy to me I took a stab at the navigation section tonight rearranging sentences for paragraph flow but didn t get very far without doing additional research The article is comprehensive and duly referenced but I think it s still missing the elegant narrative that characterizes a feature article prose is engaging even brilliant and of professional standard Because it s been written by so many editors over many years it feels a bit pieced together and I think we have some work to do in creating an engaging narrative about the river Missing citations etc are something we can deal with during the FA review but I think it may help to work on the general flow of the article before going up for FA I ll help out as I can