GA review of Kitti s Hog nosed Bat Thank you for your time reviewing the article so far I was hoping you could give your quick input on the following two things I tried expanding the lead a bit but now the problem I m running into is that it s hard to summarize each section of the article without simply repeating information that appears later I suppose this is a consequence of the article being short to begin with Any advice Concerning your comment about drifting between singular and plural language I m not sure how to avoid this more than I already have I tried to use singular Kitti s Hog nosed Bat the bat or it wherever possible but in some cases I felt it was necessary to instead use plural for nouns like colonies and populations Again thanks for your help talk