Danny Green article peer review This article on UNC basketball player Danny Green has several strengths First the information presented is very neutral and empirical only statistics and facts are used to describe Green Also it is very straightforward and comprehensible I have a fairly good idea of what kind of basketball player Green is just from reading the article However it would be helpful to learn a little more about Green s background childhood recent news and or quotes by him or about him etc It would also be improved with the addition of a couple of pictures of Green playing basketball to go along with the bio box on the right side of the page The article also fails to mention Green s father who has many times gained as much attention as Danny and is a very significant story involving Danny that is not included in the article Lastly almost all of the information provided about Green comes from one source obviously the article would be better if there were a few more sources for it Sscline