Removal of pov wording A sentence read On the one hand the doctrine of at will employment has been criticized for its harshness upon employees Clyde W Summers Employment At Will in the United States The Divine Right of Employers 3 U Pa J Lab Emp L 65 2000 Emphasis mine I replaced the pov word harshness which may be from a rs Nevertheless it is overstatement at best Tens of millions of workers spend a lifetime with an at will employment not only in the US but other countries with no indication of harshness This is a pov selection of words by an author whose intent is to trigger a reaction in the reader and not to present facts in an objective manner It is media oriented