February 2006 UTC Your outline looks good to me One point though there s no need to separate every smallest component of a rig into an article of its own or to have a separate article for high speed and low speed mals until the articles grow too big Parachuting is too big at the moment it should be split to several articles However there is no information on malfunctions at the moment so there is no justification for creating separate articles for them just yet 08 56 22