Topics for Revising Gravity article What was challenging For film s that propose questions about reality and controversy an opportunity is deemed by users to not only post information about the film actors production etc but also to discuss themes present in the movie Drifting away from that note the article itself meets the standards to being a good article There are little to none spelling errors and information is almost spot on with the right dates people and nomination facts But that may be the overall problem of this article is it too much factual based Are people necessarily not focused on the article itself but rather the movie In order to improve not only the article but the revisions to the essay I will focus on how the film can compare to previous NASA space missions Possible Topics for Article Gravity Film Imdb com Factual Errors Scientific Accuracy Stars do not twinkle in the realms of space If you are located on the earth s surface you might witness the twinkling of stars because of the earth s atmosphere When Kowalski and Stone are stuck between cords in a spacecraft Kowalski orders to be let go of and is then sent through space floating away with decreasing oxygen levels This is incorrect because both are in the same orbit so a small tug would have worked to pull Kowalski toward safety When Dr Stone gets back into the spacecraft she initially takes off her spacesuit Two parts are missing Liquid Cooling Ventilation Garment In the film Stone goes through an extreme amount of stress and excitement leaving her to be awfully sweaty underneath her spacesuit However as she takes it off there are no signs of sweat which does not make sense Credit goes to Imdb critic users and rotten tomatoes Rotten Tomatoes com 9 10