It seems great and I know we went trough this already but do we really need to mention Serbian state I know that you and I know what that means but it confuses the reader In books of history which were used in Yugoslavia by the way state that Duklja was first Montenegrin state while a lot of books mention Serbian Of course that term Serbian doesn t have much to do with Serbs today but some people use it to negate Montenegrin nationality and continuity of Montenegrin state that we know today Maybe we should have a section like this two you suggested separate and explain what term Serbian means and that it doesn t have any particular connection with todays Serbian state I hope you get what I want to say beside that to me this is very good Cheers