I think the essay really picks up steam at paragraph 3 Then it is very clear I agree that paragraphs 1 2 could use some work and the metaphor is confusing there I would like to see more remedies along the lines of what BoboMeowCat said on the essay talk page I am okay with the Duck metaphor If it look like a duck and quacks like a Duck it probably is a duck Ducks quack And the stuff the COIDuck does will indeed involved a lot of quacking squawking especially towards users who disagree with the COIDuck s COI agenda WifiOne was taken down by 1 rather than proof of COI Thanks for doing this Atsme I really appreciate it Please don t give up and let criticism get to you As Noam Chomsky said early in the movie Manufacturing Consent if I didn t get this kind of criticism I would be worried I wasn t doing my job