Hi I noticed your removal of text regarding Trainor performing her first music writing effort at a wedding but leaving the text regarding her writing that musical rearrangement I tend to agree what was there was wordy and didn t flow well but I think it may be important that this was performed at a wedding because otherwise it doesn t seem notable Any kid could rearrange music but most would probably not be very good at it and it wouldn t be performed anywhere Do you have any objection to a briefer mention of the wedding performance at age 7 and if not do you have any suggestions on how to better briefly word it