awkward sentencing I went through and edited the article to flow better At the top of the article it says that there are a lot of weasle words I tried to weed those out as much as possible Weasel words are fillers like such as according to etc There was an over use of commas I re worded and shortened sentences so that they wern t so long and choppy I made some spelling corrections The article should flow better now so that the information being portrayed can be easily read and understood Kgroblee