GA review see here for criteria It is reasonably well written a prose b MoS It is factually accurate and verifiable a references b citations to reliable sources c OR It is broad in its coverage a major aspects b focused It follows the neutral point of view policy Fair representation without bias It is stable No edit wars etc It is illustrated by images where possible and appropriate a images are tagged and non free images have fair use rationales b appropriate use with suitable captions Overall Pass Fail Specific concerns I m assuming no pictures are available correct Source for the last parts of the third paragraph of service career What makes a reliable source Your retrieved on dates for the web sources are borked I tried fixing them but they looked worse after my fix so if you could fix them so they show the day and month as well as the year I ve put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I ve brought up Feel free to contact me on my talk page or here with any concerns and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed If I may suggest that you strike out check mark or otherwise mark the items I ve detailed that will make it possible for me to see what s been addressed and you can keep track of what s been done and what still needs to be worked on