My thoughts asked me to check out this page to get my thoughts on it s status and potential future FA status I promised a mini peer review so here are some of my thoughts There are many sections throughout the article regarding his family I realize that it moves chronlogically throughout the Senator s life but instead of placing the sections convolutedly throughout why not combine them into a general Marriage and family section Instead of Naval training early assignments first marriage and children it could simply become Naval training and early assignments getting rid of the longer title the same goes for Senate liaison and second marriage US Congressman and more children etc while moving the paragraphs having to do with his first marriage and children into the Marriage and family section It should probably go below the Naval traning and early assignments section Consistent citation formats including for book sources either cite them all individually in the text with page numbers or place them all in a bottom References section and write Smith Anna 1989 p 0 in the footnote italicize newspaper names Something that I learned from my friend Wasted Time R Either use the publisher parameter in the template and add two apostrophe marks at the beginning and end or simply use cite news work parameter which italicizes it for you For works by other sources that have been republished you will have to use both parameters wikilinks either link all the publisher names link them only the first time they appear or don t link any at all authors with wiki articles may be wikilinked no blogs I removed one and have seen a few others remaining on the page Blog sources are not always verifiable Citations needed In the entire Keating five section The mention of the Gang of 14 needs a citation as well McCain s attempts at immigration reform Cultural and political image section The Military section in Awards honors and decorations Are there any free photos of the 2000 presidential campaign If so it would be nice to include one In the Second Bush term section the quote Although Bush had threatened to veto the bill if McCain s language was included is strange McCain speaks English as we all know and unless it s profanity or something else being reffered to I m not sure what language the sentence is talking about Above the Cultural and political image section there is one big list of ratings different organizations have given McCain over the years Those aren t his political positions it s a list that goes on far too long and does not communicate as much as should be communicated particularly under the special interests groups section While I think one or two of the views expressed by the special interest groups and the political organizations should be kept this section needs to describe McCain s Republican stance moderate conservative or liberal and views on the pressing issues of today War on Terror War in Iraq War in Afghanistan climate change gay rights illegal immigration economy including taxes healthcare abortion stem cell research etc I realize that much of those have been brought up in the article but they should be made reference to here again because that is the title of the section Get rid of the see also section and the template because it is the same one as that below the infobox I ve made my opposition to elecoral histories sections clear but I am in no position to demand that this one be removed I do however recommend that the format of the content stay consistent two elections are horozontally listed with a scrollbar and colors while one is vertically listed I would prefer them all vertically listed All in all I think this article has great potential and definitely FA worthy when the concerns I ve raised are taken care of Your biggest challenge however and boy do I know about FA challenges is the stablity issue because he is currently running for office I think that can be argued against by the fact that Barack Obama s article is featured and he too is running for president I hope the editors have found this insight useful and please if you have any questions feel free to contact me Thanks so much and good luck