General comments Great job It was really well done I liked the introduction since it was really informative I checked out the Wikipedia page for Elymus Lanceolatus to double check that no information was repeated A lot of your information was new and informative but some things are repetitive if this is the page you are adding to For instance both your sandbox and the Wikipedia page for Elymus Lanceolatus state that the grass comes from western United States I would double check that information is not being repeated Your citations were good and everything flowed I like how you used multiple citations to further some of your points Grammar In the sentence This may indirectly help human food consumption as E lanceolatus may improve soil health I would change one may to can References Third paragraph what is the reference for this Elymus lanceolatushas specifically been used for animal foraging Though E lanceolatus does not produce a nut or berry product it can be consumed by grazing animals Is it with the first citation I wasn t sure