Good I looked at those revisions and they are a step in the right direction Something else closely related occurs to me about the scope of the page Obviously there are other mathematical models of neuronal activity in epilepsy in the scientific literature To some extent you have defined this page to be specifically about this model But again since this is an encyclopedia article rather than an article in a professional journal it would be more appropriate to broaden the scope of the page to include other models as well There could be a section about modeling large scale activity resembling what there is now but there could also be sections on more localized model circuits and so forth Again the key idea through all of this is that the page is a Wikipedia article and not an article in a journal The more the page can be brought into line with that expectation the better it is protected against deletion