OK here s the source on why I proposed the latter addition of a few more words Now where s your reference for your proposed addition An encyclopedia could do with non outrageously biased sources to back your POV And when we can both back up our points with sources this 3rd paragraph may finally be set But since I can back up my proposed addition of a few more words with a source this comes back to the original point why do you object to it and what are you basing it on