Proposed redraft As mentioned above I ve worked on a redraft of the current page which can be found here Most of the material is still intact I ve removed sections that are unsourced especially stuff that I don t know to be true and have tried to source refereces for other bits Still needs a lot of work mainly focused on citing the vocabulary and putting main section headings in place What do you think I d be proposing replacing what we have currently with this then continuing work in the main namespace