Notes The article is informative and appears to be well cited but the citations could use cleaning up or perhaps a change of format to a standardized style When reading the article it is un clear whether any of the citations could be turned into external links those that can however should be I added internal links links to other Wikipedia articles and removed the orphan article tag as well as fixing a line indentation issue in the third paragraph I m going to watch this article because I feel it has real potential it just needs citation and formatting work