Awkward sentence under Background a The sentence below is very awkward and detracts from the overall merits of this article He also wrote an unpublished Sea Chase story which his wife and editor combined with the stories about the islands renamed Islands in the Stream and published in 1970 2 1 I believe it should be specified that his wife was the editor of Islands in the Stream rather than in the ambiguous instance above 2 My main grief is that it refers to this article in the 3rd person It is just a hastily thrown together sentence that seems pasted from another article it may very well be but I did not check out the citation Please let me know if I m just being crazy August 11th 2011