GA Review This review is transcluded from Talk The Cookery Book of Lady Clark of Tillypronie GA1 The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review Reviewer I m on much more familiar ground with this article than with the last of your GANs I tangled with I wrote much of the two WP articles on Elizabeth David and her books so you can set me down as another foodie I blew the dust off Mrs David s Spices Salt and Aromatics in the English Kitchen and can tell you if you d prefer to add a page reference instead of the link at ref 17 that ED s mention of Lady Clark s Thick Parmesan Biscuits is on pp 230 31 of my copy the Grub Street 2000 reissue ISBN 9781902304663 Some comments Lead Lady Charlotte Clark dear me you ll upset those strange but harmless souls who sleep with Debrett under their pillows I nearly wrote that they slept with Burke s you mustn t call her Lady Charlotte unless she was the daughter of an earl or even posher nobleman As her father was a commoner she was Charlotte Lady Clark the cook Elizabeth David she was a cook of course but cookery writer as you describe her later in the text seems a better description Context You tell us practically nothing of the Clarks There is a Times obituary of Sir John dated 14 April 1910 which I can send you if you haven t got online access to The Timess archives which tells you more than enough for your present article They lived for some years in Turin the last person named was Henry James and I think you should write The Clarks lived here to avoid ambiguity Blockquote the parenthentic dashes should be either unspaced em dashes or spaced en dashes and not hyphens Book I don t for a moment suggest that you must do it but have you considered putting the list of contents into two or possibly even three columns Easier on your reader s eye I find Approach Zucchetti la Piedmontaise there is an extra set of closing quotes here Modern an inspiration for the great Elizabeth David WP OVERLINK at this point well travelled diplomats wife I see you have faithfully transcribed the original in which there is no possessive apostrophe I m not sure what to suggest here It s too minor a matter for a sic I think the MoS gives you licence to add the missing apostrophe silently You may like to consider In the first Holt blockquote the quotation marks should be doubles not singles In the second there are more hyphens that need replacing with dashes Last blockquote more quotation marks that should be doubles not singles Notes Courgettes or Zucchini capitalisation really wanted here References There are several mentions of Frere 1909 but no bibliographical details of the work in the refs citations section They are included earlier within the main text but I think they should be repeated here with the refs You should add OCLC numbers for both editions there too WorldCat will oblige The links to the Find My Past site should include the subscription template You might standardise on either page or p in your book refs Compare e g refs 13 and 14 To my mind the bibliographical info for ref 14 should include the ISBN or OCLC if for some reason there isn t an ISBN Page ranges ref 6 and date ranges ref 14 should have an unspaced en dash rather than a hyphen and I should say the hyphen in ref 7 ought to be a spaced en dash Ref 15 page number lacking I can get this from the British Library after Christmas if it s a problem Ref 16 The Spectator should be italicised as the TLS is in the previous ref Most of these are easy fixes but I really would like the biography to be addressed given that suitable sources are available