Well my opinion s worth exactly what you paid for it since I ve never edited that article But I m not sure why this needs to be analyzed within the COI framework at all This doesn t appear to be about someone pushing for their specific acupuncture clinic or whatever so it s not clear to me that this is any different from any other general POV pushing case I suppose the issue I have with the COI related discussions I ve come across lately is that they all turn the conversation from one about edits to one about the interests of the real life person behind the edits Those interests are difficult to identify often unverifiable and not always easily stuffed into the COI box