I did some copyediting I hope you don t mind Here s the review Well written This is a bit of a run on sentence The family enters a magical world and her father insists on exploring and they cross a dry riverbed This is too After Chihiro saves No Face with the emetic dumpling he becomes timid once more Zeniba takes care of No Face so he can develop without the negative influence of the bath house Verifiable with no original research The Music section needs sources The bonus features include Japanese trailers a making of documentary which originally aired on Nippon Television interviews with the North American voice actors a select storyboard to scene comparison and The Art of Spirited Away a documentary narrated by actor Jason Marsden Can you add a citation for this Broad in its coverage Article is focused and appears to cover all of the main aspects of the topic Neutral Stable No edit wars etc Illustrated if possible by images All images look good Aside from these issues the article looks ready for promotion I don t think it s necessary to place this on hold as the issues can be addressed pretty quickly Thanks for your work