Hoary the work you ve been doing on the Surrender article is good but something is bothering me You have repeatedly tagged things as vague that could be trivially fixed with one or two google searches The above paragraph for example It was a reference to K ki Hirota I didn t know that at first but I figured it out with exactly 1 google search Ditto this that I fixed earlier searching for that quote on Google Books produces exactly one hit with a page number Please spend a minute checking google before tagging the article