Tenebrae film Hi I ve perked this up a bit and have added a fair few book sources I ve found all I could on it in google books but most of the sources repeat the same thing I ve asked the original author to add page numbers for McDonagh 1994 in the citations You might spot some minor glitches still or some issues which I d be grateful if you could help fix Some of the quotes might be paraphrased more I think to improve readability in parts but it doesn t now look like a glaring problem as an FA It could still be improved though I ve asked Cavarone if he can find any Italian material from the time of release or anything else Perhaps or could also give it a read and copyedit I was away for several days and have fallen behind I will try to have a look in the next few days hopefully Eric has been there No worries Nope Eric s been busy I think I don t think films interest him much I ll ask RHM22 It s comprehensive enough now based on book coverage but the prose is still not exactly brilliant I think with a bit of polish we can keep it there though I ve seen the film now My only major criticism though would be that it implies that it is something of a masterpiece in the themes section but it was pretty trashy not a spot on Suspiria That s just my humble opinion of course Sandy how is Shah Rukh Khan looking to you now I think it s ready I think RHM22 does too It still didn t get the peer review input I was hoping for though People just seem turned off by him right If you think it s ready we ll renominate The last time I looked at it I didn t see anything serious enough to indicate it wasn t FAC worthy Thanks If people are turned off by him it s only because they haven t seen any of his films yet haha Anyway thanks Sandy