the German troops moved the POWs westward into Germany in order to be clear of the Soviet advance from the east in order to avoid the Soviet advance Peter and George walked through an opening in the prisoner compound fence and ran towards Frankfurt in the hopes of reaching the American lines to check I read this as they left the compound literally ran towards Frankfurt and were then presumably quite quickly picked up After surviving the bombardments in Nuremberg the POWs were resettled in a camp near Munich You could simplify to After surviving the bombardment the POWs the Nuremberg context is established in the previous paragraphy However they were given the opportunity to return to Nuremberg as wounded soldiers to obtain treatment 20 The POWs agreed to return to Nuremberg because it was closer to the American lines They were given the opportunity to return to Nuremberg however as wounded soldiers to obtain treatment the POWs agree because it was closer to the American lines It would avoid repetition and be a little shorter Juskalian was flown to Paris France where he would present himself at the military post and request financial assistance he presented himself active vice conditional An officer who was already acquainted with George s older brother Richard Dikran who knew George s older brother When asked if he was related to Richard George responded by saying Richard was his older brother and upon hearing this he was given all the provisions he needed I thought this seemed overly literal long How about George confirmed that Richard was his brother and he was then given all the provisions he needed the staff and faculty of The Infantry School I don t think the The needs a capital here but happy to be corrected While at the School he availed himself of the opportunity of taking airborne training and qualifying as a parachutist While at the School he took airborne training and qualified as a parachutist shorter