outdent Wrad thanks for the suggestions You wrote The last two sentences of the first paragraph need to stay as they are in order to provide context otherwise I think it s good The last sentence in the current version of the SAQ article reads Although the idea has attracted much public interest all but a few Shakespeare scholars and literary historians consider it a fringe belief with no hard evidence and for the most part disregard it except to rebut or disparage the claims The SAQ article can t say that all but a few Shakespeare scholars and literary historians consider it a fringe belief when Professor Russ McDonald President of the Shakespeare Association of America one of the largest organizations of Shakespeare scholars in the world says that the SAA has no opinion on the authorship controversy Nor can the SAQ article say that Shakespeare scholars do nothing but rebut or disparage the authorship controversy when the President of the SAA says Oxfordians are members of the SAA and have presented papers at SAA meetings The last sentence has to go You also wrote Without those two sentences the article risks sounding something like Most people think x but there s this new brilliant theory that s quickly gaining ground that thinks y I think the mainstream view should have the final say in the first paragraph How about this version I ve put the first sentence from the current online version back in and reinforced the majority view again at the end and for good measure added the word true in front of author The Shakespeare authorship question is the argument that someone other than William Shakespeare of Stratford upon Avon wrote the works traditionally attributed to him During the past 150 years a number of alternative authorship candidates have been put forward Proponents of these candidates contend that Shakespeare of Stratford upon Avon was merely a front to shield the identity of the real author or authors who for reasons such as social rank state security or gender could not take public credit However the consensus view in the Shakespeare establishment and among the public at large is that William Shakespeare of Stratford upon Avon was the true author of the works traditionally attributed to him The paragraph doesn t need any citations No one s going to challenge motherhood statements of that nature