Help me I haven t been on this site since I signed up to help in May 2014 and the little bit I learned has clean escaped my brain I ve read the help section reviewed the link directions and I still think I did it wrong I am trying to edit a page Nicky Scarfo Jr at to show the death of his brother Mark which occurred April 2014 per George Anastasia s news article at jerseymanmagazine com After putting in the info I then tried to enter a link to show where I got my information and the edit looks just awful to me Can someone please help me understand the correct way to do this edit The original sentence was During the trial Mark Scarfo attempted suicide on November 1 1988 Mark then only 17 years old had been taunted for years by classmates about his father s criminal activities Increasingly despondent over his father s possible imprisonment Mark Scarfo hanged himself in the office of his father s concrete supply company in Atlantic City He was discovered by his mother and paramedics were able to resuscitate him During the trial Mark Scarfo attempted suicide on November 1 1988 Mark then only 17 years old had been taunted for years by classmates about his father s criminal activities Increasingly despondent over his father s possible imprisonment Mark Scarfo hanged himself in the office of his father s concrete supply company in Atlantic City He was discovered by his mother and paramedics were able to resuscitate him He suffered cardiac arrest and his brain was deprived of oxygen He entered a coma from which he had yet to emerge as of 2008 13 I changed it to read During the trial Mark Scarfo attempted suicide on November 1 1988 Mark then only 17 years old had been taunted for years by classmates about his father s criminal activities Increasingly despondent over his father s possible imprisonment Mark Scarfo hanged himself in the office of his father s concrete supply company in Atlantic City He was discovered by his mother and paramedics were able to resuscitate him He suffered cardiac arrest and his brain was deprived of oxygen He entered a coma where he remained until his death in April 2014 Anastasia George Jersey Man Philly Man Jersey Man Magazine May 1 2014 The link under Jersey Man Philly Man should just highlight those words and instead it comes out like this Rachael O Halloran