The Time article is about the naming of the controversy and includes both Swifthack and Climategate though Climategate is in the title I think an argument can be made that Climategate should go into the lede without Swifthack but I would not be opposed to including both with Climategate first Now later there is already discussion of etymology of both terms so there is no need for the Climategate etymology discussion in the second paragraph that should be removed in favor of the extended discussion further below that section by the way should probably be trimmed but that s a different discussion