If I understand your objection it is that too much is written and that he needs a short page like the Hebrew one A short page would presumably consist of his sexual offences and run ins with the law without elaboration That means as it was before a page that in its reductive succinctness omitted the whole raison d etre for his activism which is what got him into trouble and would effectively present Nawi as a drug consuming pistol wielding pedophilic trouble stirrer with several convictions No One writes to sources and there are many Given all the shit thrown his way all of which gets us into WP BLP issues wikipedia at least should give a complete rounded picture such as reliable sources provide As a matter of interest I used as a guideline a dozen articles of a similar typology controversial public figure one of which was Moshe Katsav Most of your objections would apply to those articles which no one however appears to object to for their length citation of reactions eulogies trial details and criticisms One thing you overlooked In the original article there was a a notable amount of elementary disinformation or incorrect information even on such elementary things as where he was born and the sources themselves were victims of sloppy copy and paste journalism I went through what passed RS in several languages and managed to fix information that many otherwise superficially respectable sources wrongly repeat The strength of the article lies in the fact that it now gives a reasonable closely documented overview of the large picture which most sources seem unaware of because they were written hastily and consist in a poorly grounded patchwork of sparse facts It probably now stands as the most comprehensive thing on Nawi readily available on the net though in saying this I will be accused of blowing my own trumpet I certainly don t think that a thumbnail account based on dubious Israeli court judgements this area is highly contested in the general literature on Israeli court proceedings with regard to the area of the West Bank is anyway sufficient to provide a rounded picture of Nawi While one might wish as little to be said as possible that itself is a POV based on one s personal assessment of him as a relative non entity