Marsden I generally agree that we don t have to introduce a lot of complexity I just think that the current sentence structure does not necessarily make those two conditions clear Incidentally I think there are at least three common usages 1 support for Israel 2 support for Aliyah as a primary goal the original homeland concept 3 Support for settlement You don t have to support settlements to support Aliyah The second paragraph also does not really discuss that there are many Zionisms which I think is important On the other hand I have to say that I am not desperately worried about the second paragraph so if you strongly object I ll let it go