All noted in kind By the mentioning of crossovers what do you mean exactly If its the is a crossover between heavy metal music and gothic music itself line i removed it because Gothic Metal has nothing of influence from other Gothic Music and the only parts of Gothic music i know of is in Gothic Doom Pre Gothic Metal was meant to mean Before Gothic Metal as in leading up to it because Pre means Previous i think How do you best think that would be changed The Male vocals only got toned down in Symphonic Metal and much of what is in the current version only applys to Gothic Doom and Symphonic Metal with little history of Gothic Metal itself The deal with leaving out Type O Negative is because they are a Gothic Doom band and Gothic Doom is mentioned lower in the article The scene is mostly developed in England and France only due to that being where most of the bands are known play and where Gothic Metal is mroe common It is true that most of the bands come from the more Scandanvian Norway area i am not good with Geography That is the reasoning for that but should it be said that the bands are from one place and the core fan base in another The only reason for adding it was to clear up confusion over the contradictions made by places like The Metal Archives BNR Metal Pages The Metal Observer so on so forth I thought it best to also mention it because more and more bands are walking the fusion orientated path If it needs to be removed so be it That s the reason for each thing in order So you know the reasoning and objective when you make suggestions on how to change it Leyasu