You most certainly are not being pedantic or if you are it certainly isn t a problem accuracy and clarity are important I agree that you are correct that the term rate of health insurance coverage does indeed refer to the number of persons insured However I do think that saying rate of health insurance coverage implies to lay readers insurance rates commonly meaning premiums and that this would be a source of confusion While the wikilink can help to clarify I don t think that readers should have to click it to understand what is meant That said I m not especially attached to the language I added and perhaps I am overestimating the potential confusion So how about this let s keep your language for now By all means go ahead and nominate the article for GA status I just ask that during the GA review we see if the reviewing editor s bring it up on their own and if they don t then we ask them their opinion s as to whether they think it s confusing If others think it s confusing we ll change it maybe but not necessarily to the way I had it otherwise we ll keep it Sound fair By the way I do think the article is a serious GA contender especially given the number of reliable sources you have added over the past week It could still use a bit of copy editing but its substance and sources are right on Great work