re The media conglomerates have a strong financial incentive to minimize and distort public discussion of ACTA both because of their large copyright portfolios and the fact that they could lose revenue from providing information that could displease major advertisers about half of that seems pretty good on wording but the other half might be improved for approachable easy to read language May I suggest something like opponents say media conglomerates have a strong financial incentive to distort and suppress press coverage of public discussion through their own outlets to protect revenue from major advertisers I think the COI could go elsewhere as it s kind of apparent but definitely include it in this article I think you d use the template see also in some press coverage type section for COI where you should expand on commentary about the COI