A few responses Some of your comments may be on target but they re rather general I don t think I can really have an informed opinion about some of your suggestions until I start seeing some actual edits from you that show exactly where you want to go with things You don t seem to be familiar with MOS FILM s suggested organizational structure for film articles This article while not perfect is in line with the guideline while a few of your suggestions for reorganization are not I suggest that you review the guideline and perhaps come back and offer a modified strategy and some edits Related to that while there may be many ways to improve the writing in the Plot section it is fully within the MOS FILM guideline for length style and proper introduction of characters and actors It s brevity in particular is unusual to new film articles and it should not be significantly lengthened In terms of plot the track team s repeated appearances would probably add unnecessary detail and length to the section Plot sections are not intended to be a blow by blow of everything that is seen in a film