Farid Fadel Article Dear Excirial reviewer Greetings from Egypt I have recently written an article about Egyptian artist Dr Farid Fadel however it did not go through Here is the link you asked for I made some amendments to have it written more academically however I would appreciate more specific comments as to how I could make it wikipedia material I would also like to include pictures I took of Dr Farid Fadel s paintings but do not know how to do that I assure you Excirial Dr Fadel is a worthy personage to have on wiki His biography was included in the Who s Who of intellectuals published by Cambridge in 1988 and has been a key public figure in Egyptian contemporary art do google him and see his paintings thank you for your cooperation and hard work I look forward to hearing from you soon yours truly Dalia Preceding unsigned comment added by Those last few edits are definitely an improvement over the last versions and as far as i am concerned entirely took care of the tone and neutrality issue A few extra newspaper sources might be a good thing though since a few of them only make a trivial mention rather then providing a bit more substantial coverage Having said that i ll be leaving it to another reviewer to do another check but so far it looks quite decent to me