Stylistics Thanks for your email I m glad you appreciate my input The proposed ammendments are fine Go ahead I wasn t sure myself about the phonology heading The main point of these paragraphs seems to be about the stress placed on particular syllables so word choices is probably a bit too general but can act as place saver By the way you might like to have a look at the literary language article As far as I can see there is a confusion here between literary language of the sort you are addressing on the Stylistics article and the conventions of written language as opposed to spoken language I m sure you could help them sort it out