Battle of Britain honors Copy edit from my talk page Re your revert of BoBr do you disagree in suggests the sinking was a byproduct rather than an aim It does to me which is why I changed it at all By suggests it was a direct consequence or objective I don t feel really strongly about it tho so I ll leave it if you do The use of conjunctions and interjections is such a minor issue that I also don t have a horse in the race just tried to make an awkward statement read a bit better Saying the battleships were sunk by an air attack would be fine just as much as ships sunk in an air attack by bombers would also work As I said it s a Comme Ci Comme a issue FWiW