BAD BAD punctuation I mean WOW The ideas are there but they just aren t put together correctly at all Learn the difference betwixt a comma and semicolon and others might take your seriously Did you happen to step foot in an 8th grade classroom You can t be a native speaker of English if English is your 2nd or 3rd language I completely understand but jeez dude PLEASE learn the difference between a comma a semicolon cause it really hurts me and probably others to read your writing