Uh first sorry I meant Guy not Jay And second you posted your note on my talk page under the Marshack heading where a separate article about her that I didn t edit was being discussed so yeah I didn t know which text you meant I m editing lots of articles in addition to Rockefeller I asked you politely to clarify so thank you for clarifying As for your advice I followed bold revert talk the problem is that the editor who made 6 reverts in a day to the text would not The text in that section could indeed stand expansion but I was trying to come up with the fourth point that you left out consensus by posting something that communicated what I think must be communicated but was carefully worded and referenced so as to perhaps last more than five minutes on the page So if you have something to suggest about the specifics I m all ears But I was not playing games with my question above to you so you didn t need to respond as if I was