I agree that the Powdered Toast Man mention should be made as it s perhaps the only example of Zappa collaborating underneath another artist in a field other than that of music And no the Grammies aren t a fucking objective indicator of legacy give me a break They re an objective indicator that a certain performer pleased the suits responsible for shitting the little awards out nothing more nothing less Beethoven managed quite a legacy without Grammies thank you very much Or great Grammies for that matter That said you re dead on the article is in a bit of a messy state to put it mildly I believe a lot of the strictly stylistic errors have to do with the fact that a significant potion probably even a majority of contemporary Zappa fans hail from non English speaking countries c f Zappanale Then there re the copy editors and casual drive by editors whose sum total of Zappa knowledge can be summed up as guy who took drugs and ate shit on stage By all means let s work on a re write