Overhaul I ve spent hours editing the article with Paul Masvidal this afternoon He did not do this himself as he did not want a conflict of interest to occur although it isn t specifically forbidden for folks to work on articles about themselves as long as bona fide secondary sources are the basis so I walked him through all changes being bolstered by refs I purged extraneous cluttered info and added various wikilinks and refs There is no OR Some of my edit summaries will be meaningless as they are in jokes I stuck in there in error as I spent the afternoon using one screen for editing with around 10 open windows including skype I ll continue working on this as time permits Hope the article has been improved Cheers