GA Review Comments Expand the introduction It should be 3 4 paragraphs in length Romania having established contacts with Poland in January February 1919 after Stanis aw G bi ski s visit to Bucharest 2 oriented itself towards a cordon sanitaire alliance against Bolshevist Russia and the newly created Comintern the proclamation of the Hungarian Soviet Republic the German insurrection and the Red Army s capture of Odessa 3 alarmed politicians in both countries Wow that is a long hard to read sentence I ve read it 4 times and I m not sure as to what it says but accepted and supported Polish military transit through its territory Why What does this mean elaborate some According to another of Pruszy ski s reports What are Pruszynski s reports Where was the first for this to be a second The Romanian Army intervened in the Polish Ukrainian War against the West Ukrainian People s Republic created in Galicia in the summer of that year helping the Poles in Pokuttya This sentence is out of place in the paragraph and comes out of the blue The first treaty was the Convention on Defensive Alliance signed on March 3 1921 in Bucharest It committed both parties to render each other armed assistance in case one of the sides is attacked at its present Eastern frontiers 12 and was aimed at containing Russia from 1922 the Soviet Union which had just lost the Polish Soviet War The treaty was concluded for the period of five years Again this is a long sentence that would be better off as several shorter sentences Watch the long sentences The section European Context really feels like a bunch of bullet points without having flow between the sentences