Suggestions for Improvement Sources There is a lack of citing in the plot Opinions are given about the characters in the character section as they are not backed up by secondary sources Example Van being coined as the ideas person of the group Where is this stated Who claims this Sources are peer reviewed but could use more references to sources of this kind Most citations in the article are referencing the novel itself and linked to opinion Cultural Cross reference section has no secondary source citations Structure I feel like major themes section is misplaced and would work better towards the top of the article Dedications section seems pointless and could be deleted Writing and Grammar Grammatically there are only a few minor errors Commas misplaced chunky sentences run ons I think the plot could use some sentence re structuring but the article isn t too bad Good luck with the page I m sure it will turn out well Grapefr00 t