Gabor Racz You know Doc a BLP isn t a journal entry It s a biography Why do you want it to read like a science paper It s one thing to create dry scientific articles about drugs and such but this is a BLP FA criteria clearly states its prose is engaging even brilliant and of a professional standard That doesn t mean dry and scientific Your addition of the template with an edit summary that reads this article has serious issues isn t very helpful Why don t you point out the issues instead of templating a GA article Your the medical professional or is there a reason you are refraining from editing and trying to improve this BLP