I think there are some good points in there but please see WP TLDR The accusation of whitewashing shows an appalling inability to WP AGF That aside I think many editors are working at cross purposes to their goal A reader who is convinced one way or another re ID or IC or whatever is unpersuadable Those who come here with an uninformed view will immediately recognize an article like this as a partisan hit piece and discount its content accordingly The most important and often overlooked aspect of WP NPOV is dispassion Encyclopedia s should be written in an above the fray non judgmental tone The facts speak for themselves Passionate embellishments only serve to weaken the article and discredit WP