No problem on working on the article I can do the work as soon as I am done with the two projects I am deep into which means in about 3 4 weeks What I am hoping from you is your honest assessment You are extremely knowledgable and bluntly honest I do really believe if we had more of a pre posting assessment we could avoid many of the problems which routinely plague new articles If as in this case editors seek out honest assessments from knowledgable minds and address those areas of concern which come up it again would help the article quality from day one Greek sourcing I will find you someone I have a friend who teaches Roman history and will ask him I will have someone for you by the end of the weekend They will probably be willing to help you with the nuances of original texting which is not a hugely time consuming task as opposed to writing the article Good luck in straightening out the Punic War articles Thanks again for steering me to the archery issue the more research I do the more fascinating the whole field becomes