The lead s a bit long considering the length of the article which incoporates elements of dancehall nearing its end Clumsy phrasing seems to suggest that the song contains elements of the later days of dancehall The song has also been noted for promoting self expression among women encouraging Aguilera s girls all around the world to shout louder and verbalize their opinions and emotions 11 The reference given doesn t support this it s just the lyrics The critical reception section is a little quote farmy This seems to be the way a lot of pop music articles are written and it s not really a great way to write Smith said x Jones said y Thompson said z It could do with a little bit of restructuring for instance deal with all of the discussion of the lyrics in one place That said Betty Clarke from The Guardian opined that the song rewrites feminism to a hip hop beat isn t really a critical review I m also not really following what s meant by that if Aguilera ever really squared off with her fellow ex Mouseketeer she d kick Britney s ass Is he meaning she would win in a fight If so what s that got to do with this song Why do you mention some charts but not others in the prose Also the fact it went Gold in Aus is important In the video are the women Augilera s friends or just women from the area marking one of the most successful video of Aguilera Clumsy It was also inducted to the TRL Hall of Fame 27 What is this and why do we care Presumably it was released as a single in more countries than you ve listed seeing as it charted as a single There s some inconsistent reference formatting I don t know why there is the obsession with putting both the publication and the company that owns the publication but if you re going to do it do it consistently On her latest world tour Back to Basics Tour she performed a fragment of the song after Still Dirrty 28 Clumsily written will go out of date What is Xtina Web why is it reliable and why are you italicising it Stylus Magazine BBC Music MTV News Digital Spy Sputnikmusic do not need to be italicised Who Sampled Music Notes do not need to be italicised Unclear reliability What is ATRL Definitely reliable Have you checked the charts references you use against WP BADCHARTS I m not feeling the need for the music video screenshot The image caption for the concert pic is straight up wrong that s not what she s performing at all according to the Flickr page Also don t refer to her as Christina File 02 Can t Hold Us Down ogg should really be 25 secs at 64kbps not 26 at 72 Petty sounding perhaps but the GA criteria explicitly require that non free content is used correctly I see from the categories the song was first released in 2002 this could be better clarified in the article Category Sex positive feminism is not appropriate I m sorry I don t really feel that this article is ready for GA status I also made some fixes which included adjusting some very sloppy writing I ll leave this open for now but I worry that the article is too far from GA status to be fixed appropriately in the timeframe