Hi there Noosa I m Cryptic C62 one of the online ambassadors for the outreach program Sageross gave us the heads up that your class had started working on articles in sandboxes which is great I looked over what you have so far on the Niqab in Egypt and here s some ideas for how you can improve it Add a brief section explaining what a niqab is and how it differs from the hijab and the burqu Add links to relevant topics see this edit for a sample Copyedit to remove typos and avoid inconsistences such as the italicization of some Arabic words but not others Start playing around with the footnote system for references It s obvious from the notes you ve left talk about niqab and bombing that you intend to expand upon what you ve already written so some of the issues I ve mentioned may work themselves out as you continue to edit Keep up the good work