I agree with and MrX insofar so that the introduction rambles and says nothing and the rest may contain irrelevant material I propose that the intro is shrinked to approx 3 paragraphs reflecting various opinions on what is catholicism The proofs for this or that opinion should preferrably be moved into the main text And we should remember that if the text NPOVly reflects what the World thinks about Catholicism excluding the individual churches then we ve done a great WikiDeed Said