Political funding in New Zealand Maybe that some of the text that you removed was indeed commentary however this edit did not improve the style of the whole piece I would have preferred a more careful approach to the piece with a welcome critical warning as to give some source for specific paragraphs that you feel did lack them After this undetailed and general clearance that unnecessarily removed a lot of underbrush from a text which had been written with a lot of care maybe not in all respects I do not know how to procede There certainly won t be any edit war