Proceed with caution before expansion A few thoughts Good that is giving us warning of more material to come but I would urge that we look over the recent changes first and digest them before making major additions There is one apparent contradiction introduced into the first paragraph of the lead the reintroduction of a sentence which we agreed to cut and a misspelling in the text The section on Writing Style has a lot of good material but in a jumbled order and is out of proportion to the article as a whole more like a set of notes than the careful essay we are capable of The subsection on Shakespeare needs a lot of editing to make it cohere All the best