Still TOO MANY QUOTES For instance take a look at the Richard Feynman article despite the fact a lot of the things he has said are extremely interesting and resemble his character well they don t need to be quoted verbatim so long as what he was saying and it s importance is quoted For instance instead of writing out his entire monologue in which he describes motion and it s relevance through a joke can easily be surmised by also used humorous methods of relating material to the real world ref When i was in university i was told an important fact even when quoting small texts Don t just dump a quote into a text which seems to be going on here If you see the article for instance there is Pat Barker in the third novel in her Regeneration Trilogy The Ghost Road suggests a reason for these problems but Rivers himself although he may have had some idea of the causes does not appear to cite them fully in his writings However in Instinct and the Unconscious he also states that he had at least begun to realise the cause Now it can easily be said Suchandsuch noted that blahblahblah ref due to his tone ref blahblah ref rather than quoting exactly what he has said in a long drawn out fashion Also is nt there a chance of the quotes that are almost a page long being something that represents a POV as well as non wiki grammar No offence intended