Your edits were a slight improvement but they still are poorly written confusing and incomplete For Rossmoor your edit also added a redundancy Who handles policing and fire protection for Rossmoor Does Seal Beach have any influence over Rossmoor besides the Rossmoor Shopping Center What galls me is that you admit that you didn t understand the unique nature of Rossmoor but you still thought that you could edit the article Since you say that you know the individuals involved in Rossmoor at OCLAFCO why don t you have them explain it to you