Sounds pretty good go me I m not really that familiar with all the various politicians and journalists who were assassinated Also the millions was just from the source that the article currently cites I think the and led to should be changed to that led to that way it sounds like the demonstrations led to the withdrawal rather than the assassination which may have but only indirectly by way of the demonstrations Also maybe add prominent Lebanese before the politicians and journalists at the end just to make it clear that they were in Lebanon and that they weren t like local mayors and such if that makes sense