No I didn t see your comment until just now I wasn t really thinking of the foreign children section when I made the change but was focused on removing excess examples in the Israeli Palestinian part The Israeli casualties section in particular relied too heavily on listing individual incidents so I added some statistics and information on the overall nature of the fatalities injuries on their side The Palestinian casualties section though it also had too many examples still had a good amount of statistics and general overview so I didn t think it needed more material immediately Where does the almost 3000 Palestinian children vs 180 Israeli statistic come from I don t think that s accurate On how long each section should be I think that when the issue is as controversial as this it is best to just give each side equal coverage