Yoga Edit Hi guys This yoga section is amazing Here are just some main points to possibly improve it a bit I feel like the first sentence is a little redundant as popular and commonplace imply similar things You could probably make this sentence more concise You get back in forth between saying yoga or Yoga with a capital Y I don t know if there is a reason for this but if not then I feel you should keep it consistent throughout the whole text You start one sentence with In the West and then the next sentence with Within the West this repetition messes with the flow of the piece You reference Ashram residence but you should define what this is for people who don t know or maybe even link to the Ashram wikipedia page Meditation Edit Ahhhh this one was so interesting as well Here s a couple points on it You do the same thing as in yoga with switching between a capital M and lowercase in meditation It would be better to stick with just one I also feel like a Buddhist way of being religious could be worded better Maybe a religious competent in Buddhism or something along those lines I can t believe there s a whole wikipedia page for Mindfulness Based Stress Reduction Ha I love it lessening illness sounds awkward maybe use preventing illnesses For secular pieces of Western society such as hospitals and schools maybe say secular institutions of Western society such as hospitals and schools instead Overall this sounds amazing Feel free to don t listen to my edits if you don t agree with them obviously you know the topic better than I do But I love it