Thanks for taking a look and commenting I was wondering whether you could also look at Template Did you know nominations Saint Quentin Fallavier attack It has had some issues and I did a partial copyedit but later realized that while making the narrative clearer I d also made it a bit stronger in terms of who the culprit is I m wondering whether the whole article suffers from this which I guess would be a neutrality issue Is this a problem throughout only a minor issue that s easily fixed And somewhat related I thought there were grammatical issues throughout which is why I copyedited a section as an example Do you think the article still needs significant work Should George ask GOCE for help I appreciate this