I think too much has been cut out of the intro A good intro will summarize the entire article and neither leave holes nor provide undue space to any one section of the article The intro will also need to provide a brief answer to the main question on a reader s mind about the subjectin this case that question is what is different between the LDS Church and other Christianity which is not really discussed here In addition compared to other subjects the intro spends far too much time on the church s extra Biblical canon as well as its priesthood structure We either need to strip these subjects or balance them with other summary content from the article I would prefer a little of both