Comments from Kalle Your article was very well organized and thorough Much of the content was fantastic so my suggestions focus mainly on grammar readability issues I saw I divided comments by section Great work Non Profit Housing Development in the United States 1 Missing is whose mission is to provide for the needy the elderly Non Profit Development vs For Profit Development 1 Although it is implicitly implied by their target population it will be helpful to explicitly state why non profit developers business strategy causes them to lack financial and technical resources 2 Cite source for claim Using multiple funding sources is risky because it creates complex financing which can be both timely and expensive Issues During Pre Development 1 Rephrase The major problem with non profit developers to A major problem for 2 Check awkward phrase Pre development is essential for putting packaging a project proposal Ownership 1 Unnecessary colon Some considerations that non profits evaluate before creating an ownership entity include the ease and speed 2 Missing a Also each member has a right to participate in all partnership decisions 3 Rephrase Limited partners are treated differently than general partners where they are only liable for the capital invested to Limited partners are treated differently than general partners in that they are only liable for the capital invested Financing Multi Family Housing Programs 1 Consider providing brief descriptions of each of these programs similar to your treatment of other programs