Repository: Bittu5134/ORV-Reader
Pull request #444: 560 to 565
Author: login: VinceBobby123
Created: 2025-04-12T17:22:01Z | Merged: 2025-04-13T04:48:08Z

editing of kkoma's speak  + fixing broken sentence + spacing and minors things


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diff --git a/chapters/cont/554.txt b/chapters/cont/554.txt
index 824fdd0f3..de482d0ea 100644
--- a/chapters/cont/554.txt
+++ b/chapters/cont/554.txt
@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
 <title>554 Episode 1. The World After The End (1)
-Episode 1. The World After The End
 <&>「This is a story about despair that was not read.」
 ***
 After receiving that interesting message yesterday, something surprising happened to me.
diff --git a/chapters/cont/556.txt b/chapters/cont/556.txt
index c2b4103e4..381d03d10 100644
--- a/chapters/cont/556.txt
+++ b/chapters/cont/556.txt
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <title>556 Episode 2. Rewrite (1)
-(TL:From this point on Ch-556 to Ch-602 are Edited MTLs and may have a lot of errors and formatting issues, if you know better translations you can contact me, so you can either wait or you can edit these chapters yourself (◕‿↼) )
+<?>TL: Chapters up to 563 have been corrected and the others are being corrected, enjoy reading (◕‿↼)
 "Do you know what a living thing is, author-nim?"
 ㅡComment from chapter 6 of Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint.
 ***
diff --git a/chapters/cont/559.txt b/chapters/cont/559.txt
index 73b329bc1..f047d1326 100644
--- a/chapters/cont/559.txt
+++ b/chapters/cont/559.txt
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ A sense of dread settled over the entire station. Strangely enough, the horror a
 Suddenly, I wanted to write like crazy.
 <&>「We gained 10 minutes, so 'killing bugs' wasn't all for nothing.」
 If I survive this, I might write the side story.
-[The 'exclusive skill' becomes more active.]
+<!>[The 'exclusive skill' becomes more active.]
 
 ***
 
diff --git a/chapters/cont/560.txt b/chapters/cont/560.txt
index 396156522..bdb2b1e87 100644
--- a/chapters/cont/560.txt
+++ b/chapters/cont/560.txt
@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@ A world line that exists only as a possibility, imagined by the collective intel
 ......
 —What happens if you kill yourself?
 "I'm going to tell you the 'second way.'"
-***
++
 rlaehrwk37: But does that really work?
-***
++
 <!>[There are 16 minutes remaining.]
 "Here's a lighter."
 "Clothes are made of fabric, so they'll burn fast, right?"
@@ -113,13 +113,13 @@ Kim Cheolyang explained to them in frustration.
 "Ah, germs die because their proteins are denatured when they're heated, right?"
 I glanced at Kim Cheolyang with a questioning glance, and he nodded wordlessly.
 A moment later, a small campfire blazed in the center of Geumho Station.
-***
++
 —rlaehrwk99: But by that logic, shouldn't you live because the bacteria in your stomach will die even if you stay still?
 —rlaehrwk24: The stomach is an involuntary muscle, so it's hard to say there was an intention to kill.
 —rlaehrwk99 : Isn't it possible to kill by controlling the stomach with force?
 —rlaehrwk24: The involuntary muscle is....
 —rlaehrwk37: Yoo Joonghyuk would be able to control his stomach with force.
-***
++
 People threw the bodies of dead bugs and other miscellaneous items they had into the fire.
 Kim Cheolyang threw his cell phone case into the fire, and reader ahjussi tore receipts from his wallet.
 Others threw their shoes into the fire or pulled out their hair.
diff --git a/chapters/cont/561.txt b/chapters/cont/561.txt
index 8e908bf5d..5539998fb 100644
--- a/chapters/cont/561.txt
+++ b/chapters/cont/561.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ The people in the room froze in horror.
 Even the big guy was quite surprised, and the eyes of the reader ahjussi, who probably already knew the story, were shaking.
 I was the only one who didn't panic.
 <!>[The character 'Lee Hyunjoo' is freaking out!]
-[The character 'Yeom Baekhoon' is freaking out!]
+<!>[The character 'Yeom Baekhoon' is freaking out!]
 Psychological messages from characters were coming from all over the place.
 Bihyung touched the exact spot where people's anxiety was coming from and disappeared again.
 "T-the kid who survived at the end. She must have killed someone."
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ As soon as I did that.
 <!>[The character 'Kim Cheolyang' wants to do something unexpected.]
 A message rang in your head.
 <!>[The activation conditions for the exclusive skill '⬜⬜' has been met.]
-[The exclusive skill '⬜⬜' has been activated.]
+<!>[The exclusive skill '⬜⬜' has been activated.]
 ......⬜⬜?
 <!>[The character 'Kim Cheolyang's attribute is preparing to bloom.]
 <!>[You can interfere with character 'Kim Cheolyang's attribute blooming.]
@@ -83,13 +83,13 @@ It wasn't hard to understand what those blanks were.
 Just as Kim Dokja had a 'reader' skill, I had a 'writer' skill.
 Skill '⬜⬜'.
 Will what I write come true?
-Since I didn't have much time, I decided to write a sentence in the blank first. The purpose was
-clear.
+Since I didn't have much time, I decided to write a sentence in the blank first. The purpose was clear.
 Use Kim Cheolyang to save me and the ahjussi from the crisis.
 As I concentrated, the sentences flowed out of my head.
 It was natural.
 I'm Omniscient Reader's author.
-narrow eyes (meaning Lee Hakhyun, but Kim Cheolyang didn't know his name yet). This loyalty soon awakened him.
+「At that moment, an unknown loyalty sprang up inside of Kim Cheolyang for the man with the narrow eyes¹ This loyalty soon awakened him.]
+<?>[1] meaning Lee Hakhyun, but Kim Cheolyang didn't know his name yet.
 <!>[The character 'Kim Cheolyang' evolves into 'Judge of Destruction'.]
 "Stop. Don't touch him." (149 characters in total)」
 That's it.
@@ -102,28 +102,27 @@ As far as I'm concerned, it's an excellent double-entendre.
 Huh?
 <!>[Do you want to check the reader's feedback?]
 I nodded in agreement.
-***
++
 rlaehrwk37: I'm getting off
-***
++
 I stood dumbfounded for a moment, then regained my composure. Now was not the time to be shocked.
 I resumed writing my sentence.
-previous life........ (147 characters in total)」
-
-<!>[This story is impossible.]
+「At that moment, Kim Cheolyang realized that he was actually a martial arts master in his previous life........ (147 characters in total)」
+<!>[This story is impossible.]
 <!>[This story's reproduction success rate is 0.1%.]
 <!>[You're running out of probability.]
 <!>[Do you want to check the reader's feedback?]
-***
++
 rlaehrwk37: I'm getting off
-***
-affection towards his own blood that flowed from him....... (143 characters in total)」
++
+「At that moment, Kim Cheolyang realized that he was Kim Namwoon's cousin. The unknown affection towards his own blood that flowed from him....... (143 characters in total)」
 <!>[This story is bizarre.]
 <!>[This story's reproduction success rate is 3%.]
 <!>[You're running out of probability.]
 <!>[Do you want to check the reader's feedback?]
-***
++
 rlaehrwk37: Do you want to die?
-***
++
 I wrote a couple more times like that with no luck.
 After taking one comment punch after another, I was mentally exhausted.
 <!>[There are 30 seconds remaining.]
@@ -148,9 +147,9 @@ The moment I typed the last word.
 <!>[This story's reproduction success rate is 90%.]
 <!>[There's enough probability.]
 <!>[Do you want to check the reader's feedback?]
-***
++
 rlaehrwk37: Oh
-***
++
 I don't know what that "oh" means, but at least it surprised the reader.
 By the way, this asshole, I'll remembered your ID.
 <!>[Successfully recreating the scene.]
@@ -162,7 +161,7 @@ Then.
 <&>「At that moment, Kim Cheolyang stepped forward.」
 The sentence I had written began to come to life.
 "Our faith is being tested right now."
-belief that he had been chosen by God.」
+「Not anyone could do it. But the moment he stepped forward, he was seized with an intense belief that he had been chosen by God.」
 "Faith?"
 <&>「Maybe it was the fire. I could see the fire burning beyond their pupils.」
 That's all I wrote. However, it was enough for an introduction.
diff --git a/chapters/cont/562.txt b/chapters/cont/562.txt
index c2fc8c029..b8bfe1cb2 100644
--- a/chapters/cont/562.txt
+++ b/chapters/cont/562.txt
@@ -1,23 +1,19 @@
 <title>562 Episode 2. Rewrite (7)
 While writing Omniscient Reader, there were a few times when the plot would break down.
-A character would suddenly speak in a historical drama style, or they would forget a skill (or
-more accurately, I would forget it).
+A character would suddenly speak in a historical drama style, or they would forget a skill (or more accurately, I would forget it).
 I apologized to my readers and made changes to save the day.
 But what I did this time was impossible to fix.
 "Let's praise the germs who made a significant sacrifice for us."
-It's not enough that I've had a profound impact on the cult's religious views, but I'm also involved
-in the re-emergence of the Ten Evils.
+It's not enough that I've had a profound impact on the cult's religious views, but I'm also involved in the re-emergence of the Ten Evils.
 "Oh— germs, germs, bacterias."
 What the hell have you done, Lee Hakhyun?
-The reader ahjussi next to me was clapping his hands with the wrong beat, unaware of what was
-going on.
+The reader ahjussi next to me was clapping his hands with the wrong beat, unaware of what was going on.
 <!>[Your influence in this scenario area is significant.]
 <!>[The 'view of life' you spread dominates the religious views in the area.]
 I wondered if I'd rather be on the wrong side of the tracks and be a villain.
 It was not a wise idea.
 "Oh— the great sacrifice of the germs."
-If I ran into Yoo Joonghyuk while doing something like this, I would be decapitated with a single
-blow.
+If I ran into Yoo Joonghyuk while doing something like this, I would be decapitated with a single blow.
 <!>[The character 'Lee Hyunjoo' believes in you.]
 <!>[The character 'Im Baekhoon' believes in you.]
 <!>[The character 'Yeom Youngcheol' believes in you.]
@@ -25,42 +21,33 @@ Still, I didn't feel too bad that everyone believed in me.
 I've never had so many people believe in me in my life.
 <!>[Most of the incarnations in the area are moved by your words.]
 After one hymn, the tension eased, and people sat around the campfire in a circle.
-
-A few people sipped canned drinks from the vending machine, talked, and prayed.
-"Isn't this supposed to kill germs? Lactobacillus acidophilus is also a bacterium. I hear no one
-makes it to the intestines alive."
+A few people sipped canned drinks from the vending machine, talked, and prayed.
+"Isn't this supposed to kill germs? Lactobacillus acidophilus is also a bacterium. I hear no one makes it to the intestines alive."
 "Where were you going, ahjumma?"
 "I was just on my way to pick up my son's yogurt. What about you?"
 "I had dinner plans with my girlfriend."
-"Well, that's funny, because I was just on my way to go to see the chicken restaurant I opened
-with my wife, and then this tragedy......."
+"Well, that's funny, because I was just on my way to go to see the chicken restaurant I opened with my wife, and then this tragedy......."
 Others handed me a canned drink and said.
-"Bacteria are also living things, this is the first time I've realized it. Wow, young people are so
-smart."
+"Bacteria are also living things, this is the first time I've realized it. Wow, young people are so smart."
 "You should study well. Where did you go to college?"
 I didn't answer, just smiled meaninglessly.
-With a speech by Life Leader Kim Cheolyang, both religious and non-religious people had a
-strange look on their faces.
+With a speech by Life Leader Kim Cheolyang, both religious and non-religious people had a strange look on their faces.
 They say that religion is a drug to overcome death, and maybe that's true.
 However, not everyone was high on it.
 "Are you all crazy? There's a surefire way to live, but you're going to let it go?"
-Not surprisingly, it was the big guy. He had something like a pipe in his hand; I didn't know
-where he got it from.
+Not surprisingly, it was the big guy. He had something like a pipe in his hand; I didn't know where he got it from.
 I couldn't see him for a moment, then I realized he'd been searching through the station for it.
 "If you want to get fucked, get fucked alone."
 The people's faces tensed as the weaponized big guy approached.
 "Wait a minute, what's wrong with you? You burned your socks earlier."
-"Naive assholes. You really believe it's killing if you kill something you can't even see or tell if
-it's dead or not?"
+"Naive assholes. You really believe it's killing if you kill something you can't even see or tell if it's dead or not?"
 "Well, so what?"
-"Have you forgotten what that monster showed us earlier? The surest way to get out of here
-alive."
+"Have you forgotten what that monster showed us earlier? The surest way to get out of here alive."
 The big pipe pointed at the people.
 "Kill someone here, and you'll be sure to live."
 <!>[The constellation 'Monarch of the Small Fries' is chuckling.]
 I think I know what's going on.
-
-Apparently, one of the constellations encouraged him.
+Apparently, one of the constellations encouraged him.
 I looked at the big guy and activated [Character List.]
 <!>[The exclusive skill 'Character List' is activated!]
 +
@@ -71,38 +58,30 @@ Sponsor: None (one constellation is currently showing intereset in this person).
 Exclusive Attributes: Gangster (general), Ex-convict (general)
 Exclusive Skills: [Dogfight Lv.3], [Bluff Lv.3], [Intimidation Lv.3], [Headbutting Lv.2]
 Overall Stats: [Physique Lv.7], [Strength Lv.7], [Agility Lv.6], [Magic Power Lv.1]
-Overall Rating: This is the boss of the 'Cheoldoo Group[1]'. Characterized by a hard head, he has
-a powerful headbutting technique.
+Overall Rating: This is the boss of the 'Cheoldoo Group[1]'. Characterized by a hard head, he has a powerful headbutting technique.
 +
 The boss of the 'Cheoldoo Group', Lee Cheoldoo.
 It wasn't until I read the description that I realized who this guy was.
 Come to think of it, there was a group called 'Cheoldoo' at Geumho Station.
-The Cheoldoo Group's boss wasn't in the original story of 'Omniscient Reader', but I had created
-a setting for it.
+The Cheoldoo Group's boss wasn't in the original story of 'Omniscient Reader', but I had created a setting for it.
 I took a step forward and said.
 "Don't panic. We're in a group, and he's alone."
-No matter how many weapons Lee Cheoldoo had, or whether he was the Cheoldoo Group's boss,
-he couldn't fight against twenty-one people.
+No matter how many weapons Lee Cheoldoo had, or whether he was the Cheoldoo Group's boss, he couldn't fight against twenty-one people.
 But Lee Cheoldoo didn't let up.
 "Whoa, wait a minute. Kill you all? I only have to kill one of you. From these 27..."
-As he scanned the faces of the people, one by one, as if he was picking out the weakest bug, he
-glanced in my direction.
-"Let's be honest with each other, you're all scared to death of believing that bastard too, aren't
-you?"
+As he scanned the faces of the people, one by one, as if he was picking out the weakest bug, he glanced in my direction.
+"Let's be honest with each other, you're all scared to death of believing that bastard too, aren't you?"
 Lee Cheoldoo laughed lightly and slapped his pipe with his palm as if he understood.
 "First ten people. Stick to my side, and I'll take responsibility and save you no matter what."
 He took another step forward, adding.
-
-"The rest of you, be prepared to die."
+"The rest of you, be prepared to die."
 Everyone took a step back as Lee Cheoldoo approached.
 Kim Cheolyang panicked and shouted.
-"Don't listen to him, everyone. We've already won the right to survive! There's no need to fight
-unnecessarily!"
+"Don't listen to him, everyone. We've already won the right to survive! There's no need to fight unnecessarily!"
 Then, the enraged people shouted in unison.
 "That's right, you killed the germs too! You can live if you stay still, why are you doing this?"
 "Maybe you don't get it yet, but it's okay now? You can live because you killed the germs."
-Still, killing bugs and germs together created a sense of camaraderie, and the unity of the people
-wasn't bad.
+Still, killing bugs and germs together created a sense of camaraderie, and the unity of the people wasn't bad.
 <!>[The incarnations in the area are united.]
 <!>[The influence of the religious view is growing stronger.]
 Lee Cheoldoo scratched his ears in disbelief and became irritated.
@@ -117,17 +96,14 @@ However, no one was willing to step forward.
 As he searched for a target, Lee Cheoldoo's eyes landed on the man closest to him.
 Realizing that he had been targeted, he called out to the surrounding area.
 "H-help me, please! Help me!"
-But no one tried to help him. The crowd quickly backed away like a swarm of bugs that had been
-discovered.
+But no one tried to help him. The crowd quickly backed away like a swarm of bugs that had been discovered.
 Lee Cheoldoo raised his pipe as if he knew that would happen.
 <!>[The character 'Kim Haemoon' is panicking!]
 "S-save me! I'll stick with you!"
-
-Character Kim Haemoon. He had been passive ever since he killed the bug.
+Character Kim Haemoon. He had been passive ever since he killed the bug.
 Lee Cheoldoo said fiercely.
 "No, I don't need you anymore."
-"Please, please! I'll give you 100 million if we get out of here, I can even send you the money
-right now!"
+"Please, please! I'll give you 100 million if we get out of here, I can even send you the money right now!"
 Lee Cheoldoo frowned as he thought for a moment.
 "100 million. Then you decide who to kill."
 Kim Haemoon looked at the others with trembling eyes.
@@ -135,24 +111,20 @@ The first person he looked at was the ahjumma who said she was going to give her
 She was the first to run away when Lee Cheoldoo turned toward Kim Haemoon.
 <!>[The character 'Lee Hyekyung' is terrified.]
 "W-why are you looking at me! I have to live, my child is waiting for me!"
-Kim Haemoon's head turned to look at the man next to her. It was the young man who had dinner
-plans with his girlfriend.
+Kim Haemoon's head turned to look at the man next to her. It was the young man who had dinner plans with his girlfriend.
 <!>[The character 'Jeong Hancheol' is looking around.]
-Jeong Hancheol quickly looked back and forth between Kim Haemoon and Lee Cheoldoo, and
-gave a small, friendly smile.
+Jeong Hancheol quickly looked back and forth between Kim Haemoon and Lee Cheoldoo, and gave a small, friendly smile.
 "Can I be on your side?"
 Kim Haemoon's head snapped back to the middle-aged man beside him.
 <!>[The character 'Ji Hyungdong' is freaking out.]
 This time, it was the man who said he opened a chicken restaurant with his wife.
-I walked over to him, thinking it was a bad idea. The time limit was about to expire, so I had to
-drag it out somehow.
+I walked over to him, thinking it was a bad idea. The time limit was about to expire, so I had to drag it out somehow.
 But when he saw me, Ji Hyungdong pointed at me.
 "I-If you're going to kill someone, kill him! He made this whole thing happen!"
 At first, I thought I had misheard him, but then people started chattering around me.
 "That's right. He made the situation like situation, he should be held accountable."
 They were obviously friendly people until a while ago.
-
-"W-why are you looking at us like that? He's not wrong."
+"W-why are you looking at us like that? He's not wrong."
 "What's wrong with you, young man? Fight. Fight and win."
 "At times like these, you step up like a man!"
 My breathing became stifled, as if I were the bug trapped in my pocket.
@@ -169,41 +141,31 @@ Avarage physique, strength and agility of 7.
 I wonder if I can beat him.
 <!>[There are 5 minutes remaining.]
 Let's just hold on for five minutes.
-I looked at Kim Cheolyang for the last time. He looked at my pupils and made a complicated
-expression.
+I looked at Kim Cheolyang for the last time. He looked at my pupils and made a complicated expression.
 <!>[The character 'Kim Cheolyang' is very troubled.]
 <!>[The character 'Kim Cheolyang' is a person whose 'sentence' you wrote yourself.]
 <!>[You have a very good understanding of the character.]
-I didn't have [Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint], but Kim Cheolyang's internal thoughts echoed in
-my ears.
+I didn't have [Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint], but Kim Cheolyang's internal thoughts echoed in my ears.
 <&>「There are three people who have influence in this station right now.」
 <&>「Me, the narrow eyes man, and the big guy.」
 Kim Cheolyang's eyes quickly switched between me and the big guy.
 <&>「If I don't stop him, he'll die.」
 <&>「I don't think he's going to listen to me.」
 <&>「If I don't succeed, I'll.......」
-Quickly changing his posture, Kim Cheolyang took a step away from me with the people and
-shouted loudly.
-
-"Don't move rashly, everyone, stand back. God's emissary is about to get redemption(代贖) for
-us."
-Kim Cheolyang is a man who fears his power being threatened. If he can't stop the beast anyway,
-he'd rather take advantage of the situation.
+Quickly changing his posture, Kim Cheolyang took a step away from me with the people and shouted loudly.
+"Don't move rashly, everyone, stand back. God's emissary is about to get redemption(代贖) for us."
+Kim Cheolyang is a man who fears his power being threatened. If he can't stop the beast anyway, he'd rather take advantage of the situation.
 A way to strengthen his position and justify my death.
-"No matter how insignificant, a life is a life. Right now, God's emissary is going to sacrifice
-himself to atone for killing the bacterial brothers. Let's all say thank you."
+"No matter how insignificant, a life is a life. Right now, God's emissary is going to sacrifice himself to atone for killing the bacterial brothers. Let's all say thank you."
 It was ridiculous, but the people's eyes were already filled with madness.
 They, too, had agreed to sacrifice me for their own survival.
 Jeong Hancheol and Ji Hyungdong whispered as they retreated.
-"Germs are living beings, you could have just looked it up on the Internet. It's not like it's a big
-deal. You'd have figured it out eventually, right?"
+"Germs are living beings, you could have just looked it up on the Internet. It's not like it's a big deal. You'd have figured it out eventually, right?"
 "Let's not get into this, let's stay neutral. There's a reason he's so upset."
 I was still calm.
 <&>「No writer is ever surprised by their own words.」
-Lee Cheoldoo's shadow was cast on the spot where the others had retreated. The feet that had
-been relentlessly trampling on the bug turned toward me.
-"If it's decided, the rest of you get lost. I'm only going to kill this asshole, as promised. Hey, get
-out of my way."
+Lee Cheoldoo's shadow was cast on the spot where the others had retreated. The feet that had been relentlessly trampling on the bug turned toward me.
+"If it's decided, the rest of you get lost. I'm only going to kill this asshole, as promised. Hey, get out of my way."
 People at a short distance were beaten on the arms and legs with the pipe.
 "Aaaak! My arm!"
 "Don't be stupid, come over here quickly! Only one person needs to die!"
@@ -211,6 +173,8 @@ The terrified people quickly ran to the scenario barrier.
 Just like that, everyone was far away from my side.
 <!>[There are 3 minutes remaining.]
 Only one person, the one person who hadn't run away, was still with me for this ending.
+
+***
+
 Author's Note
 There are two chapters today.
-
diff --git a/chapters/cont/563.txt b/chapters/cont/563.txt
index cb3eea73b..de0b4b413 100644
--- a/chapters/cont/563.txt
+++ b/chapters/cont/563.txt
@@ -9,13 +9,11 @@ No, I forgive him if he didn't.
 Screaming like a wild boar, Lee Cheoldoo lunged at me, aiming for the back of my head.
 I threw myself as hard as I could and crashed into him.
 "Ouch."
-Lee Cheoldoo dropped the pipe, slightly shocked. However, due to the weight difference, he
-didn't fall.
+Lee Cheoldoo dropped the pipe, slightly shocked. However, due to the weight difference, he didn't fall.
 In the next moment, I saw Lee Cheoldoo's golden teeth shining white.
 "You're like a hero."
 Lee Cheoldoo lightly pinned down my arms and then headbutted me in the face.
-Luckily, I remembered seeing the Headbutting skill in the [Character List], so I reflected my
-head back, but I was still shocked. My vision spun and my knees sank.
+Luckily, I remembered seeing the Headbutting skill in the [Character List], so I reflected my head back, but I was still shocked. My vision spun and my knees sank.
 When I came to my senses, Lee Cheoldoo was already mounted on top of me.
 I opened my mouth to speak, pretending to be as calm as possible.
 "Lee Cheoldoo, leader of the Cheoldoo Group."
@@ -24,43 +22,31 @@ His eyes widened at my words.
 "Are you planning to be a murderer for the rest of your life?"
 "You asshole......."
 Lee Cheoldoo laughed unpleasantly and whispered in my ear.
-
-"Wouldn't that be better than dying?"
+"Wouldn't that be better than dying?"
 <!>[There are 2 minutes remaining.]
-Instead of replying, I turned my head and scanned my surroundings. In the distance, I could see
-people watching. Some were crying, others were praying.
-Kim Cheolyang was singing a hymn with them. Oh worms, germs, and whatever, they were
-celebrating my death.
+Instead of replying, I turned my head and scanned my surroundings. In the distance, I could see people watching. Some were crying, others were praying.
+Kim Cheolyang was singing a hymn with them. Oh worms, germs, and whatever, they were celebrating my death.
 "Are you laughing?"
-Frowning, Lee Cheoldoo grabbed my throat with both hands. With a crack, my breathing was cut
-off in an instant.
+Frowning, Lee Cheoldoo grabbed my throat with both hands. With a crack, my breathing was cut off in an instant.
 I suddenly realized that there was no one in this story that I knew.
 <!>[There is 1 minute remaining.]
-There was no righteous Lee Hyunsung here, no Yoo Sangah stepping up for the weak, no Lee
-Gilyoung collecting worms. There was no Jung Heewon standing up to villains, no Yoo
-Joonghyuk going insane from repeated regressions, and.......
-The oxygen supply to my head was rapidly diminishing, and my entire body felt weak. The
-moment my vision went dark, I heard a dull noise. Through my blurred vision, I could see Lee
-Cheoldoo staggering.
+There was no righteous Lee Hyunsung here, no Yoo Sangah stepping up for the weak, no Lee Gilyoung collecting worms. There was no Jung Heewon standing up to villains, no Yoo Joonghyuk going insane from repeated regressions, and.......
+The oxygen supply to my head was rapidly diminishing, and my entire body felt weak. The moment my vision went dark, I heard a dull noise. Through my blurred vision, I could see Lee Cheoldoo staggering.
 Behind him, someone stood holding a pipe dangerously.
 It was someone I knew.
 Someone who was more ordinary than any of the other Omniscient Reader's characters.
 A man whose only familiarity with the world was the novel he had read for ten years.
-My protagonist, who was actually a coward, but had risked death for those he loved time and
-time again.
+My protagonist, who was actually a coward, but had risked death for those he loved time and time again.
 <&>「Kim Dokja.」
 Once again, I heard a dull noise, and Lee Cheoldoo roared and drove his fist into my face.
 As I coughed up blood, Lee Cheoldoo chased after Kim Dokja.
-I rubbed my eyes, and the back of what looked like Kim Dokja disappeared, and I saw reader
-ahjussi running away.
+I rubbed my eyes, and the back of what looked like Kim Dokja disappeared, and I saw reader ahjussi running away.
 <!>[There are 40 seconds remaining.]
 After catching him, Lee Cheoldoo snatched the pipe.
 I wiped my lips and ran.
 <!>[There are 20 seconds remaining.]
-Looking at the pipe he was wielding, I wrapped himself around reader ahjussi and rolled over. A
-sharp pain shot through my back.
-
-I heard Lee Cheoldoo shout.
+Looking at the pipe he was wielding, I wrapped himself around reader ahjussi and rolled over. A sharp pain shot through my back.
+I heard Lee Cheoldoo shout.
 "You crazy bastard! I'll kill you!"
 <!>[There are 10 seconds remaining.]
 "You psychopathic bastard! Now everyone is going to be killed because of you! Everyone—"
@@ -85,46 +71,36 @@ The startled reader ahjussi shuddered and muttered.
 "Huh......?"
 Beyond Lee Cheoldoo's giant body, the desolate landscape of Geumho Station was revealed.
 The first thing I saw was the Life Leader Kim Cheolyang.
-He was saying something to me. I couldn't hear his voice, but it wasn't hard to imagine the
-words.
+He was saying something to me. I couldn't hear his voice, but it wasn't hard to imagine the words.
 <&>「My God.」
-I then looked at Lee Hyekyung, who was bringing yogurt to her son, Jeong Hancheol, who was
-meeting his girlfriend, and Ji Hyungdong, who was going to run a chicken restaurant with his
-
-wife.
+I then looked at Lee Hyekyung, who was bringing yogurt to her son, Jeong Hancheol, who was meeting his girlfriend, and Ji Hyungdong, who was going to run a chicken restaurant with his wife.
 I wanted to ask them.
 <&>「Does anyone here know the meaning of '1,863'?」
 Kim Cheolyang's head exploded with a puff.
 <&>「Of course, no one knows.」
 Starting with him, people's heads exploded everywhere.
 Lee Hyekyung, Jeong Hancheol, Ji Hyungdong.......
-The characters' heads were disappearing one by one, as if they had never existed in the first
-place.
+The characters' heads were disappearing one by one, as if they had never existed in the first place.
 I staggered toward Kim Cheolyang.
-Looking at the empty space where Kim Cheolyang's head used to be, I tried to recall his face,
-which was already hard to remember.
+Looking at the empty space where Kim Cheolyang's head used to be, I tried to recall his face, which was already hard to remember.
 But I couldn't.
 Because I never described their faces.
 They were not used in 'Omniscient Reader'.
 People who were set up in advance, but never found a home, and remained just as settings.
 <&>「Cult of Life.」
-In the setting, the 'Cult of Life' was a cult that recognized only those they designated as 'life', and
-slaughtered everyone else.
-Lee Hyekyung, Jeong Hancheol, and Ji Hyungdong...... The same was true for everyone in this
-story.
+In the setting, the 'Cult of Life' was a cult that recognized only those they designated as 'life', and slaughtered everyone else.
+Lee Hyekyung, Jeong Hancheol, and Ji Hyungdong...... The same was true for everyone in this story.
 <&>「The people in this zone become part of the 'Cult of Live' in every round that they survive.」
 Those who have not been recorded will never be recorded.
 They will remain a 'setting' here, unread by anyone.
 <&>「Just because someone designed them to be evil.」
-I looked over to see reader ahjussi mouth open in disbelief. The scenery of Geumho Station was
-imprinted in his eyes.
+I looked over to see reader ahjussi mouth open in disbelief. The scenery of Geumho Station was imprinted in his eyes.
 Looking at him, I thought.
 I was being thought.
 <&>「I want to write a novel.」
 The blood that spilled covered the entire station like spilled ink.
 Everywhere I looked, there was no one left alive but us.
-
-Slowly, my legs became weak.
+Slowly, my legs became weak.
 The reader ahjussi muttered in disbelief.
 "How can this......."
 "......."
@@ -132,23 +108,18 @@ The reader ahjussi muttered in disbelief.
 I answered after a pause.
 "Yes."
 In truth, halfway through, Operation Germ had been doomed to failure.
-No matter how I thought about it, there was no way the constellations would find this
-development amusing.
+No matter how I thought about it, there was no way the constellations would find this development amusing.
 Still, I didn't let them know.
-With that, Kim Cheolyang, the Cult of Life members, and Lee Cheoldoo didn't appear in the
-story.
-I don't know about the rest of the world, but the history of Geumho Station won't be much
-different from the main story.
+With that, Kim Cheolyang, the Cult of Life members, and Lee Cheoldoo didn't appear in the story.
+I don't know about the rest of the world, but the history of Geumho Station won't be much different from the main story.
 <&>「There is only one survivor in this area.」
-I looked up at the ceiling. In a blinding flash of light, Bihyung looked down at me. His
-expression was one of genuine admiration.
+I looked up at the ceiling. In a blinding flash of light, Bihyung looked down at me. His expression was one of genuine admiration.
 Looking into the dokkaebi's story-drunk eyes, I muttered a classic Yoo Joonghyuk line.
 "Fuck the Star Stream."
 I knew what was about to happen to me.
 I could feel the blood trickling down the back of my head.
 <!>[The will of the <Star Stream> is looking at you.]
-This goddamned world, which only shows what the constellations want, is so contrived in
-directing.
+This goddamned world, which only shows what the constellations want, is so contrived in directing.
 That's why my head will explote after everyone else's.
 <!>[A few constellations are looking at you.]
 <!>[The constellation 'Monarch of the Small Fries' is looking at you with amusement.]
@@ -156,8 +127,7 @@ I tried to ease the rising terror of death.
 I'm not scared. When I die, even this fear will be gone anyway.
 I looked at reader ahjussi one last time.
 "Ahjussi."
-
-His hands shook as if he knew what was about to happen to me. Tears pooled in his eyes.
+His hands shook as if he knew what was about to happen to me. Tears pooled in his eyes.
 "Oh, no, mate. No."
 I wanted to survive, at least until I met Kim Dokja, until I saw the hero of my story.
 But maybe.
@@ -179,16 +149,14 @@ I'm dying because I haven't proven my worth.
 That's why I was surprised.
 Why.
 I'm not dead yet, am I?
-***
++
 rlaehrwk37: Looking forward to the next chapter.
-***
++
 I snapped out of it.
-I wiped the blood dripping from my head. It was a cut I got from Lee Cheoldoo earlier. Luckily,
-it wasn't too deep.
+I wiped the blood dripping from my head. It was a cut I got from Lee Cheoldoo earlier. Luckily, it wasn't too deep.
 My mind became clear again. My breathing and pulse were normal.
 <&>「I'm not dead.」
-
-Why the hell?
+Why the hell?
 <!>[You have cleared the first scenario.]
 I looked down at my bloody palms.
 I hadn't killed a bug.
@@ -199,8 +167,7 @@ But how.
 <!>[You have earned 1,900 coins.]
 <!>[You succeeded in killing in a unique way that no one has ever attempted before.]
 <!>[A few constellations marvel at your killing strategy.]
-When I turned my head, I saw ahjussi's face, and as if in disbelief, he was crying and holding my
-hand.
+When I turned my head, I saw ahjussi's face, and as if in disbelief, he was crying and holding my hand.
 As I looked at him, I realized what had happened to me.
 <!>[The <Star Stream> has acknowledged your unique way of killing.]
 <!>[You incited people with false information, only for them to 'kill themselves'.]
@@ -219,23 +186,17 @@ As I looked at him, I realized what had happened to me.
 I turned my head and saw my reflection in the screen door.
 He was asking.
 <&>「Did you really not see this coming?」
-Kim Cheolyang, the member of the 10 Evils who existed only in the setting, did not survive at
-Geumho Station because of this man.
+Kim Cheolyang, the member of the 10 Evils who existed only in the setting, did not survive at Geumho Station because of this man.
 I knew who he was now.
 He was the owner of Geumho Station before Kim Dokja came.
-A man who freely used propaganda, manipulated people, and formed a 'group' in the shortest
-
-amount of time.
-An incarnation that had survived some rounds of 'Ways of Survival' and ascended to the top of
-the Ten Evils.
+A man who freely used propaganda, manipulated people, and formed a 'group' in the shortest amount of time.
+An incarnation that had survived some rounds of 'Ways of Survival' and ascended to the top of the Ten Evils.
 The reason why this man is a character with narrow eyes that I have never saw before.
 It was because I never described his appearance.
 Because this character...
 <&>「"I love them all, except for guys like......."」
-Because he was the only one of the many characters in the whole Omniscient Reader that I didn't
-like.
-I heard the sound of a drum being torn from somewhere, and the lights flickered harshly. I heard
-the sound of something creaking and crumbling.
+Because he was the only one of the many characters in the whole Omniscient Reader that I didn't like.
+I heard the sound of a drum being torn from somewhere, and the lights flickered harshly. I heard the sound of something creaking and crumbling.
 I could tell by the sound alone.
 <!>[Main Scenario #1 — Proof of Value has ended.]
 It was the sound of reality as we knew it crumbling.
@@ -244,6 +205,8 @@ It was the sound of reality as we knew it crumbling.
 <!>[Additional compensations settlement will begin.]
 One episode was ending, and the next was beginning.
 <!>[The character you are currently possessing is 'Demagogue Cheon Inho'.]
+
+***
+
 Author's Note
 The side story is starting.
-
diff --git a/chapters/cont/564.txt b/chapters/cont/564.txt
index 5ea48a25f..044b6e01b 100644
--- a/chapters/cont/564.txt
+++ b/chapters/cont/564.txt
@@ -1,16 +1,13 @@
 <title>564 Episode 3. Protagonist(?) (1)
-Episode 3. Protagonist(?)
+(TL:From this point on Ch-564 to Ch-602 are Edited MTLs and may have a lot of errors and formatting issues, if you know better translations you can contact me, so you can either wait or you can edit these chapters yourself (◕‿↼) )
 ***
 <&>「When you say 'kill', do you mean I have to kill them myself?」
-Although it doesn't appear in Omniscient Reader, there is an incarnation that solved the first
-scenario using 'suicide' in 'Ways of Survival'.
+Although it doesn't appear in Omniscient Reader, there is an incarnation that solved the first scenario using 'suicide' in 'Ways of Survival'.
 Fingersnapper 'Christina Page'.
-A former legal hypnosis specialist at the FBI, she solved the first scenario by brainwashing a
-criminal she was working with into committing suicide.
+A former legal hypnosis specialist at the FBI, she solved the first scenario by brainwashing a criminal she was working with into committing suicide.
 'Demagogy Killing.'
 The way I was credited was similar.
-The characters who believed the misinformation chose to 'take their own lives' because of me,
-and I was credited for an 'indirect murder' for causing the mass suicide.
+The characters who believed the misinformation chose to 'take their own lives' because of me, and I was credited for an 'indirect murder' for causing the mass suicide.
 I wondered if such a murder was even possible, but it happened.
 <!>[The character you are currently possessing is 'Demagogue Cheon Inho'.]
 Perhaps it's because he's the one I'm possessing.
@@ -20,11 +17,9 @@ As I looked down at my bloody hands, I slowly realized what I had done.
 If I hadn't possessed Cheon Inho, what would have happened to the people of Geumho Station?
 <&>「Wouldn't they have been killed by Cheon Inho the same way anyway?」
 If so, was it the writer Lee Hakhyun or the character Cheon Inho who killed them?
-In this world, am I a murderer who killed people or a writer who described the death of a
-character?
+In this world, am I a murderer who killed people or a writer who described the death of a character?
 As I breathed in and out, my complicated thoughts quickly subsided.
-
-[The exclusive attribute is activated.]
+<!>[The exclusive attribute is activated.]
 Now was not the time for moral tension.
 I would encounter people like Life Leader Kim Cheolyang many times in the future.
 I must continue to live in this world by killing people.
@@ -39,44 +34,36 @@ I came to my senses as the messages from the constellations began in earnest.
 I had the attention of the constellations of the 'absolute evil' system.
 Apparently, they had interpreted my 'demagogy killing' in a malicious way.
 This did not bode well.
-This will make it harder for me to get sponsorship from the constellations of the 'absolute good'
-system.
+This will make it harder for me to get sponsorship from the constellations of the 'absolute good' system.
 <!>[The constellations of the 'absolute good' system are shocked by the local tragedy.]
 <!>[The constellations of the 'absolute good' system are moved by your heroism.]
 Huh?
-to save everyone.]
+<!>[The constellations of the 'absolute good' system are impressed by your good intentions in trying to save everyone.]
 <!>[Constellations have sponsored you 300 coins.]
-about.]
+<!>[The constellations of the 'absolute evil' system are questioning what the hell are they talking about.]
 Everyone seems to have their own interpretation of this.
 "Hey...... are you all right?"
 I turned my head to see the worried-looking reader ahjussi.
 "Uh, yeah. And you?"
 "I'm fine. I hope so."
-The reader ahjussi's face was still white. It would be even stranger if he was still sane under the
-
-circumstances.
+The reader ahjussi's face was still white. It would be even stranger if he was still sane under the circumstances.
 I stiffly bowed my head in greeting.
 "Thank you for earlier. You saved my life."
 Honestly, the credit should go to him, not me.
-He fought against the Cheoldoo Group's boss to save me with a physique that was at least as
-good as Kim Dokja's.
+He fought against the Cheoldoo Group's boss to save me with a physique that was at least as good as Kim Dokja's.
 <!>[The constellations of the 'absolute good' system's eyes are shining.]
 However, he was actually embarrassed.
-"No, rather, I am owe you. If you hadn't saved me, I would be lying there too, but...... the germs
-worked for you?"
+"No, rather, I am owe you. If you hadn't saved me, I would be lying there too, but...... the germs worked for you?"
 Ahjussi still doesn't know that I 'demagogy killed' the people of Geumho Station.
 I thought about just being honest, but I figured it was probably better not to.
 "I don't know either, they also killed germs together......."
 "Maybe only your germs died? Although I don't know if that's possible......."
-He seemed to conclude that was the only answer. Instead of answering him, I looked toward the
-bodies.
+He seemed to conclude that was the only answer. Instead of answering him, I looked toward the bodies.
 He interpreted my silence and he quickly added.
 "It's not your fault, you did the best you could."
-The reader ahjussi let out a small sigh, looked at me with a pitying look on his face, and then
-looked back at the dead people and muttered.
+The reader ahjussi let out a small sigh, looked at me with a pitying look on his face, and then looked back at the dead people and muttered.
 "Honestly..... they didn't seem to be good people."
-I felt guilty for trying to deceive a naive middle-aged man, but I thought it was better than telling
-him the truth.
+I felt guilty for trying to deceive a naive middle-aged man, but I thought it was better than telling him the truth.
 <!>[The constellation 'Monarch of the Small Fries' admires your wickedness.]
 <!>[The constellation 'Woman Who Pours Water into a Bottomless Pit' is touched by your heart.]
 Which character does this ahjussi possess, anyway?
@@ -84,8 +71,7 @@ Given his unfamiliar appearance, I'm pretty sure he's an extra.
 Come to think of it, I have the skill to figure it out.
 <!>[The information of this person can't be read in 'Character List'.]
 <!>[This person is a 'character' but not a 'character'.]
-
-I see what the situation is.
+I see what the situation is.
 This man's body is a character, but the man's spirit that's possessing it is not.
 <!>[The exclusive skill has been activated.]
 It was then that a strange message popped up.
@@ -113,8 +99,7 @@ Jiyoon-ah, are you reading a novel in your room again?
 Ahjussi's first comment immediately came to my mind.
 The story about having a daughter must be true.
 Just one more.
-
-+
++
 Jiyoon-ah, open the door. I know you're reading the novel.
 —(Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, Chapter 7)
 +
@@ -138,14 +123,12 @@ He didn't seem to recognize Cheon Inho.
 "He's the villain in the beginning, at Geumho Station."
 "Oh......!"
 "Yeah. That's right, the bad guy."
-He had other nicknames, such as 'the one to be teared to death' and 'someone to burn to death
-with Hellfire', but I didn't say those.
+He had other nicknames, such as 'the one to be teared to death' and 'someone to burn to death with Hellfire', but I didn't say those.
 Ahjussi's face had already turned pale.
 "W-what should we do then?"
 "It's still early, so there's room for renewal, right? What about you? Who are you?"
 "I'm Lee Dansoo...... it says."
-
-That seems to be the name of the person ahjussi's possessing.
+That seems to be the name of the person ahjussi's possessing.
 Lee Dansoo, Lee Dansoo.
 I didn't remember anything off the top of my head.
 By the way, if he knows the name of the person he's possessing, can he see his attribute window?
@@ -162,56 +145,50 @@ Well, technically, I didn't read it, I wrote it.
 I suddenly realized what he was thinking.
 "Don't worry too much. I'm sure they all survived, just like us."
 Especially his daughter.
-She didn't study, she just read Omniscient Reader, so she 100% survived. The old man smiled
-weakly.
+She didn't study, she just read Omniscient Reader, so she 100% survived. The old man smiled weakly.
 "Thank you."
 "Shall we call ourselves by the names we just mentioned from now one?"
 "All right."
 He nodded, his eyes slightly relaxed.
-It wasn't like we'd had a conversation where he'd asked me who was my favorite, but I felt like
-we'd suddenly formed a plausible bond.
+It wasn't like we'd had a conversation where he'd asked me who was my favorite, but I felt like we'd suddenly formed a plausible bond.
 But that was the end of our fraternity.
-survivors.]
+<!>[Survivors from the areas 3-4 of Geumho Station: Cheon Inho, Lee Dansoo. A total of 2 survivors.]
 The system message that had been interrupted began to play again.
 <!>[Additional compensation settlement will begin.]
 <!>[200 coins have been earned as additional compensation.]
-Subsequently, Bihyung appeared out of thin air. I didn't know what it was, but it was a sign that I
-
-had finally solved the first scenario's many problems.
-way...... I never thought you could to use the <Star Stream>'s 'directing system' in this way.......]
+Subsequently, Bihyung appeared out of thin air. I didn't know what it was, but it was a sign that I had finally solved the first scenario's many problems.
+<@>[It's really weird. There were some unusual areas, but none of them solved the scenario in this way...... I never thought you could to use the <Star Stream>'s 'directing system' in this way.......]
 Bihyung looked down at me and grumbled for a while, before smiling wryly and saying.
-<!>[Anyway, congratulations, you passed the first scenario with flying colors.]
-I already knew what Bihyung was going to say next. Probably the same goes for the man next to
-me.
-escenario, you're entitled the sponsorship of the 'constellations'. Waahhh! How about it? Aren't
-you looking forward to it?]
+<@>[Anyway, congratulations, you passed the first scenario with flying colors.]
+I already knew what Bihyung was going to say next. Probably the same goes for the man next to me.
+<@>[Now, shouldn't there be a reward for overcoming the hardships? As a reward for the first scenario, you're entitled the sponsorship of the 'constellations'. Waahhh! How about it? Aren't you looking forward to it?]
 We were about to embark on the first key event of 'Omniscient Reader', the Sponsor Selection.
 However, Bihyung scratched his head.
-<!>[Hmm, that's weird. You are not surprised nor confused.......]
+<@>[Hmm, that's weird. You are not surprised nor confused.......]
 Of course not, we already knew that.
 You'll be just like me after you've said the same line a hundred times.
-that will take place.......]
+<@>[If you haven't realized by now, you are incredible weak, and if you are thrown into the scenarios that will take place.......]
 You won't be able to catch a single ground rat.
 I know.
-Bihyung gave his speech with an expression of bewilderment as he saw me yawning, stopping
-only when he heard the constellations' bitter comments.
+Bihyung gave his speech with an expression of bewilderment as he saw me yawning, stopping only when he heard the constellations' bitter comments.
 <!>[A few constellations are tired of Bihyung's explanations.]
 <!>[The constellation 'Monarch of the Small Fries' urges him to get on with it!]
 The constellations twinkled above Bihyung's head, which seemed to brighten at first glance.
 I wonder how many people have gathered for this <Sponsor Selection>?
-<!>[Anyway, the constellations are impatient. Let's get started!]
+<@>[Anyway, the constellations are impatient. Let's get started!]
 It was still very early in the story, so I didn't expect any great constellations to come.
-There's a possibility that a great constellation like Great Sage, Heaven's Equal or Uriel will
-appear to Kim Dokja, but that's only because he was the protagonist.
+There's a possibility that a great constellation like Great Sage, Heaven's Equal or Uriel will appear to Kim Dokja, but that's only because he was the protagonist.
 At best, I'll have the 'Monarch of the Small Fries' or something.
 I didn't expect it.
 I really didn't expect that much.
-
-But.......
+But.......
 It won't be Great Sage, but...... there could be a good constellation, right?
 I had a really hard time.......
 And a screen popped up in front of me.
 <!>[There are a total of 10 constellations waiting for your choice.]
+
+***
+
 Author's Note
 Doki doki
 
diff --git a/chapters/cont/565.txt b/chapters/cont/565.txt
index 2e95b0393..7f37d0ced 100644
--- a/chapters/cont/565.txt
+++ b/chapters/cont/565.txt
@@ -17,28 +17,22 @@ I coudn't tell. I guess we'll have to see who's here first.
 There are a lot of people who applied, and they may not be worthy.
 First up is the 'Monarch of the Small Fries'.
 I expected this one.
-In Omniscient Reader, he was the sponsor behind the acting leader on Geumho Station, Bang
-Cheolsoo. After the beginning, he disappeared.
+In Omniscient Reader, he was the sponsor behind the acting leader on Geumho Station, Bang Cheolsoo. After the beginning, he disappeared.
 In other words, he was not worth considering.
 <!>[The constellation 'Monarch of the Small Fries' is glaring at you.]
 The second was the 'Dragon Lying Down'.
-This one is the Crouching Dragon(臥龍), 'Zhu Ge Kong Ming'. He had excellent stats for a
-narrative-grade constellation.
-
-He must have been impressed with my killing strategy, but unfortunately, I didn't plan on
-choosing him here.
+This one is the Crouching Dragon(臥龍), 'Zhu Ge Kong Ming'. He had excellent stats for a narrative-grade constellation.
+He must have been impressed with my killing strategy, but unfortunately, I didn't plan on choosing him here.
 <!>[The constellation 'Dragon Lying Down' is frowning.]
 Next up is...... Huh?
 For a moment, I thought I'd misread the modifier.
 Third, the 'Sneaking Schemer'.
-I thought it was 'Secretive Plotter[1]'.
+I thought it was 'Secretive Plotter'.
 An imitation?
 Thinking about it, I couldn't recall a constellation with this modifier.
 <!>[The constellation 'Sneaking Schemer' says he's very strong and you should choose him.]
-The way he's talking, he's not even worthy of the modifier. I wonder if he's actually copying the
-'Secretive Plotter'.
-'Secretive Plotter' is an exceptional case, but as Kim Dokja says, it's unlikely that constellation
-with such a poor modifier is a strong one.
+The way he's talking, he's not even worthy of the modifier. I wonder if he's actually copying the 'Secretive Plotter'.
+'Secretive Plotter' is an exceptional case, but as Kim Dokja says, it's unlikely that constellation with such a poor modifier is a strong one.
 +
 4. Abyssal Black Flame Dragon
 +
@@ -46,17 +40,14 @@ I sucked in an involuntary breath.
 Who?
 <!>[The constellation 'Abyssal Black Flame Dragon' came after hearing rumors about you.]
 Abyssal Black Flame Dragon.
-The guy who was the sponsor behind the Black Flame Demon Ruler Han Sooyoung in
-Omniscient Reader, and one of the 'first four' of Bihyung's channel.
+The guy who was the sponsor behind the Black Flame Demon Ruler Han Sooyoung in Omniscient Reader, and one of the 'first four' of Bihyung's channel.
 It's been a long time since I've seen that modifier.
 <!>[The constellation 'Abyssal Black Flame Dragon' tells you to decide quickly.]
-Now that I think about it, he's been all over Kim Namwoon, Han Sooyoung, Kim Dokja, and
-Yoo Joonghyuk before.
+Now that I think about it, he's been all over Kim Namwoon, Han Sooyoung, Kim Dokja, and Yoo Joonghyuk before.
 Then, does that mean I'm also a main character?
 <!>[The constellation 'Abyssal Black Flame Dragon' is cancelling his 'Sponsor Application'.]
 <!>[The number of options for sponsors has reduced to 9.]
-
-Short-tempered bastard.
+Short-tempered bastard.
 I wasn't planning on choosing him anyway, so it wasn't a shame.
 There were still six more to go.
 +
@@ -83,9 +74,7 @@ I checked the last constellation.
 +
 Three question marks?
 Can this be a modifier?
-Just as I was thinking about it, a lightning bolt flashed in my head and the scene of a dark theater
-
-came to mind.
+Just as I was thinking about it, a lightning bolt flashed in my head and the scene of a dark theater came to mind.
 <&>「"What's the identity of the constellation represented by '???' in Omniscient Reader?"」
 Sure enough, the question had come up in <Kim Dokja's Banquet> before.
 I knew the answer.
@@ -102,29 +91,23 @@ One is the 'young Kim Dokja' who appears at the beginning of the novel.
 The second is the 'adult Kim Dokja', who inherits the modifier in the second half of the novel.
 Unless I'm being fooled by a high-level trick, this is clearly the beginning of the novel.
 Above all, the presence of Bihyung and 'Daepong Girls' High School' Lee Jihye proved this fact.
-If it was after the end of the main story of 'Omniscient Reader', there was no way Bihyung or Lee
-Jihye would have appeared like this.
+If it was after the end of the main story of 'Omniscient Reader', there was no way Bihyung or Lee Jihye would have appeared like this.
 <&>「So, does '???' is the 'young Kim Dokja'?」
 Come to think of it, it doesn't make sense.
-Throughout the course of 'Omniscient Reader', 'Young Kim Dokja' rarely interfered in the story,
-except to regress Yoo Joonghyuk.
+Throughout the course of 'Omniscient Reader', 'Young Kim Dokja' rarely interfered in the story, except to regress Yoo Joonghyuk.
 He probably doesn't even realize he's a god.
-And now he's making me a 'Sponsor Application', a man who doesn't even appear in 'Ways of
-Survival'?
+And now he's making me a 'Sponsor Application', a man who doesn't even appear in 'Ways of Survival'?
 Even when he's already Yoo Joonghyuk's sponsor?
 <&>「In that case, is '???' the 'adult Kim Dokja'?」
 Even if I thought so, it didn't make sense either.
-At the end of Omniscient Reader, the 'adult Kim Dokja' had his soul split into molecules and
-scattered into the universe.
+At the end of Omniscient Reader, the 'adult Kim Dokja' had his soul split into molecules and scattered into the universe.
 <!>[A constellation who hasn't revealed their modifier is awaiting your choice.]
-
-A cold tension radiating down my spine.
+A cold tension radiating down my spine.
 "You...... Who are you?"
 I ask, not really expecting an answer, but.
 <!>[A constellation who hasn't revealed their modifier is looking at you.]
 My breathing stopped, and a chill spread through my body.
-With a tsuchuchut, my entire body began to glow blue, followed by a terrible pain as if my spine
-was on fire, engulfing my consciousness.
+With a tsuchuchut, my entire body began to glow blue, followed by a terrible pain as if my spine was on fire, engulfing my consciousness.
 .
 .
 .
@@ -143,15 +126,13 @@ Blood trickled from my nose.
 What the hell? What just happened?
 In my daze, ahjussi continued to shake me.
 "I think I'm going to throw up......."
-"Oh, I'm sorry. I just saw you with white eyes suddenly. What happened with the Sponsor
-Selection?"
+"Oh, I'm sorry. I just saw you with white eyes suddenly. What happened with the Sponsor Selection?"
 "Sponsor Selection......?"
 <!>[There is 10 seconds left to complete the Sponsor Selection.]
 Holy shit.
 I quickly looked at the Sponsor Selection window.
 And then.
-
-+
++
 9. Dog Who Threw Himself Into the Flames
 +
 I wondered what had happened.
@@ -164,8 +145,7 @@ I pondered until the very last second and made my decision.
 Apparently, this world is not the 'Omniscient Reader' I knew.
 I couldn't quite put my finger on it, but this world was twisted in some important way.
 <!>[You haven't selected a sponsor.]
-For now, I felt the need to wait and see what would happen. I could always choose a sponsor
-again later.
+For now, I felt the need to wait and see what would happen. I could always choose a sponsor again later.
 As long as I somehow survived.
 "Mate?"
 "Yes."
@@ -179,10 +159,8 @@ It's a lie, but I had to say it like this.
 <!>[The constellation 'Primordial Cow' is relieved.]
 <!>[The constellation 'Pig Living in a Brick House' asks to be picked next time.]
 <!>[The constellation 'Nail-Eating Rat' nods saying that it can happen.]
-By saying it like this, I avoided the criticism of the constellation that made a Sponsor
-Application.
-
-[The constellation 'Abyssal Black Flame Dragon' accuses you of being pathetic for missing the
+By saying it like this, I avoided the criticism of the constellation that made a Sponsor Application.
+<!>[The constellation 'Abyssal Black Flame Dragon' accuses you of being pathetic for missing the
 opportunity.]
 <!>[The constellation 'Sneaking Schemer' is looking at you with narrowed eyes.]
 Luckily, that was a good reaction.
@@ -196,28 +174,22 @@ I mean, he have done some pretty unusual things, but four?
 "There were some names I recognized."
 "Who?"
 I was a little nervous.
-Still, he had done the good deed of saving me, so there was a chance that if he was lucky, a nice
-constellation would appear.
-Luckily, the Korean Peninsula had a lot of good ones, so even he only got the 'Bald General' or
-'King Heungmu', the initial scenarios would be fine.
+Still, he had done the good deed of saving me, so there was a chance that if he was lucky, a nice constellation would appear.
+Luckily, the Korean Peninsula had a lot of good ones, so even he only got the 'Bald General' or 'King Heungmu', the initial scenarios would be fine.
 "That...... 'Commander of the Red Cosmos'."
 "Aha, Cosmos......."
 I replied nonchalantly, then snapped my head up.
 "'Commander of the Red Cosmos'?"
 "Yes......."
 I couldn't believe my eyes as I looked at the nervous-looking Dansoo ahjussi.
-This was because the star he was referring to was a narrative-grade constellation. Commander of
-the Red Cosmos.
+This was because the star he was referring to was a narrative-grade constellation. Commander of the Red Cosmos.
 'Archangel Jophiel' of <Eden>.
-A constellation comparable to Uriel, who visited the 1,863rd round's world line with Kim Dokja
-and later became the ruler of <Eden>.
+A constellation comparable to Uriel, who visited the 1,863rd round's world line with Kim Dokja and later became the ruler of <Eden>.
 With a single blow of Jophiel's stigma, lower-level demons would be destroyed without a trace.
 "Is she a great constellation?"
 "Yes. She's great."
-"Actually, I don't remember much about her...... The novel has a lot of difficult words, and it's
-been a while since I read it......."
-
-I asked, trying to calm the slightly quivering corners of my mouth.
+"Actually, I don't remember much about her...... The novel has a lot of difficult words, and it's been a while since I read it......."
+I asked, trying to calm the slightly quivering corners of my mouth.
 "And the second one?"
 This time he sounded confident.
 "'Goryeo's First Sword'."
@@ -240,8 +212,7 @@ No, this doesn't make sense.
 Jophiel, Goryeo's First Sword.
 And God of Wine and Ecstasy, Dionysus?
 Who is Dionysus?
-Isn't he one of the twelve gods of the great nebula <Olympus>, and a powerful narrative-grade
-constellation that has sided with Kim Dokja since the beginning of Omniscient Reader?
+Isn't he one of the twelve gods of the great nebula <Olympus>, and a powerful narrative-grade constellation that has sided with Kim Dokja since the beginning of Omniscient Reader?
 No, why did those constellations appear?
 I was happy for him, but I was still a little envious and upset.
 "Who was the last one? No way the last one......."
@@ -249,8 +220,7 @@ I was happy for him, but I was still a little envious and upset.
 Surprise?
 For a moment, I thought about '???'
 Did that option come up for him too?
-
-"It's a constellation called 'Sneaking Schemer'."
+"It's a constellation called 'Sneaking Schemer'."
 It turned out to be the Secretive Plotter imitation.
 Luckily, that last one wasn't a big deal.
 "He came to me, too."
@@ -263,27 +233,23 @@ He sounded strangely disappointed.
 "Well, the Black Flame Dragon and......."
 "Black Flame Dragon!"
 Dansoo ahjussi nodded, his eyes shining like a child's.
-However, no matter how much I thought about it, there was no other constellation worth
-mentioning than the Black Flame Dragon.
+However, no matter how much I thought about it, there was no other constellation worth mentioning than the Black Flame Dragon.
 <!>[The constellation 'Nail-Eating Rat' is frowning.]
 I thought for a moment, then decided to do the smart thing and save everyone's pride.
 "And a dragon as famous as the Black Flame Dragon."
 "That's incredible."
-coins.]
-"And...... There were a couple of constellation on the level of the Prisoner of the Golden
-Headband......."
+<!>[The constellation 'Dragon Lying Down' is moved by your words and has sponsored you 100 coins.]
+"And...... There were a couple of constellation on the level of the Prisoner of the Golden Headband......."
 "On the level of the Prisoner of the Golden Headband......."
 <!>[The constellation 'Rice Cake-Eating Tiger' has sponsored you 100 coins.]
 <!>[The constellation 'Primordial Cow' has sponsored you 100 coins.]
 <!>[The constellation 'Nail-Eating Rat' has sponsored you 100 coins.]
 <!>[The constellation 'Dog Who Threw Himself into the Flames' has sponsored you 100 coins.]
 The Prisoner of the Golden Headband is a strong monkey.
-He doesn't know, but they're probably strong tigers, strong cows, strong rats, and strong dogs, so
-I was not entirely wrong.
+He doesn't know, but they're probably strong tigers, strong cows, strong rats, and strong dogs, so I was not entirely wrong.
 Seeing them rejoice made me feel good, too.
-
-[The constellation 'Monarch of the Small Fries' is looking at you in disbelief.]
-Headband'.]
+<!>[The constellation 'Monarch of the Small Fries' is looking at you in disbelief.]
+<!>[The constellation 'Monarch of the Small Fries' is calling out for the 'Prisoner of the Golden Headband'.]
 ......No way.
 <!>[The constellation 'Prisoner of the Golden Headband' has entered the channel.]
 No, wait.
@@ -294,70 +260,54 @@ No, wait.
 I felt like I could hear Bihyung's scream from somewhere.
 <!>[The constellation 'Prisoner of the Golden Headband' asks where they all went.]
 <!>[The constellation 'Pig Living in a Brick House' says he didn't see them because he was at home.]
-Even as the channel fizzled, Dansoo ahjussi, who was sitting next to me, kept giving me thumbs
-up.
+Even as the channel fizzled, Dansoo ahjussi, who was sitting next to me, kept giving me thumbs up.
 "Wow, that's amazing, all those big constellations."
 "No, but who did you pick?"
 There were three main choices.
 Jophiel, Cheok Jungyeong and Dionysus.
 All three are amazing constellations, so it was a matter of preference.
-No matter who you pick, you're guaranteed a solid foundation for at least until the mid-game
-scenarios.
+No matter who you pick, you're guaranteed a solid foundation for at least until the mid-game scenarios.
 Suddenly, a halo seemed to emanate from Dansoo ahjussi.
 Upon closer inspection, he was a bit old, but there was an unmistakable gleam in his eyes.
 Moreover, he had read the whole Omniscient Reader.
 Wait, this.......
 Is he the 'protagonist'?
-Just as the protagonist of Omniscient Reader was Kim Dokja, maybe the protagonist of this story
-is this ahjussi.
-The situation was similar to that of Kim Dokja, as there were three big names attached to him
-from the very beginning.
+Just as the protagonist of Omniscient Reader was Kim Dokja, maybe the protagonist of this story is this ahjussi.
+The situation was similar to that of Kim Dokja, as there were three big names attached to him from the very beginning.
 My heart suddenly began to race.
 If this ahjussi is the protagonist.......
 I thought of the first sentence about Dansoo ahjussi.
-
-"Sometimes I thought to myself. What if I were the main character."
+"Sometimes I thought to myself. What if I were the main character."
 Sure enough, I nodded my head in agreement with the exquise protagonist-like remarks.
 "If I were Kim Dokja, who would I have chosen in the first 'Sponsor Selection'?"
-In the first <Sponsor Selection> Kim Dokja received a huge love letter from Uriel, the Great
-Sage, Heaven's Equal, Black Flame Dragon, and the Secretive Plotter, but he made the mistake
-of not choosing anyone.
+In the first <Sponsor Selection> Kim Dokja received a huge love letter from Uriel, the Great Sage, Heaven's Equal, Black Flame Dragon, and the Secretive Plotter, but he made the mistake of not choosing anyone.
 "I was surprised. I would have picked the strongest one, of course."
 "That's usually the case."
-Kim Dokja had read the 3,149 chapters of 'Ways of Survival' that had 50,000 characters per
-chapter, and since he was a madman who memorized them all, he could survive with that choice.
-However, Dansoo ahjussi had only read 551 of the 5,000 characters per chapter 'Omniscient
-Reader', and even then, he didn't understand most of them.
+Kim Dokja had read the 3,149 chapters of 'Ways of Survival' that had 50,000 characters per chapter, and since he was a madman who memorized them all, he could survive with that choice.
+However, Dansoo ahjussi had only read 551 of the 5,000 characters per chapter 'Omniscient Reader', and even then, he didn't understand most of them.
 "Yes...... I just picked the strongest constellation, as usual."
 "I think I know who you picked."
 Dansoo ahjussi smiled and nodded.
-"Yes. I've forgotten a lot of other things, but I do remember the name of this constellation,
-because it's the strongest in the entire novel."
+"Yes. I've forgotten a lot of other things, but I do remember the name of this constellation, because it's the strongest in the entire novel."
 He was suddenly talking a lot, and I felt a little uneasy.
 Come to think of it, ahjussi didn't even remember who Cheon Inho was.
-"Ahjussi. Sorry to disappoint you, but the 'Commander of the Red Cosmos' is the strong, but
-she's not the strongest......."
+"Ahjussi. Sorry to disappoint you, but the 'Commander of the Red Cosmos' is the strong, but she's not the strongest......."
 "I didn't pick the red flower or whatever."
-"The 'God of Wine and Ecstasy' is also a narrative-grade. As you know, above the narrative
-level, there's the myth level......."
+"The 'God of Wine and Ecstasy' is also a narrative-grade. As you know, above the narrative level, there's the myth level......."
 "I don't like alcohol."
 I said, quickly scanning my surroundings and lowering my voice.
 "Ahjussi, I'm Korean too, so I'm very fond of 'Goryeo's First Sword', but......."
 "I'm not such a patriot that I would call Cheok Jungyeong the strongest either."
 "Then who the hell did you choose?"
 Ahjussi's eyes, which felt like guns, flashed with madness.
-"Jiyoon has always said that this constellation is the best in Omniscient Reader. That she'd end
-up getting married with him someday."
-
-Marry?
-"'A man who endured the tradegy of endless regressions and finally saw the end of this world',
-Jiyoon had that on a poster in her room."
+"Jiyoon has always said that this constellation is the best in Omniscient Reader. That she'd end up getting married with him someday."
+Marry?
+"'A man who endured the tradegy of endless regressions and finally saw the end of this world', Jiyoon had that on a poster in her room."
 I suddenly realized what had happened.
 No, no, no.
 No way.
 There's no way a reader of my novel would get that confused.
-But Dansoo ahjussi was smiling confidently, like Kim Dokja who had already broken through
-the [Last Wall.]
+But Dansoo ahjussi was smiling confidently, like Kim Dokja who had already broken through the [Last Wall.]
 "I've picked the strongest one, the 'Sneaking Schemer'."
 <!>[The constellation 'Sneaking Schemer' is smiling brightly.]
 I suddenly began to think that he was like Han Myungoh, who chose 'Lame Trickster'.
@@ -365,7 +315,8 @@ I suddenly began to think that he was like Han Myungoh, who chose 'Lame Trickste
 In the distance, I could see men with pipes running toward us.
 <!>[The next scenario is about to begin.]
 Maybe we'll die before we meet Kim Dokja.
+
+***
+
 Author's Note
 No way!
-모략가 (eunmilhan molyagga).
-


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diff_hunk: @@ -17,46 +17,37 @@ I coudn't tell. I guess we'll have to see who's here first.
 There are a lot of people who applied, and they may not be worthy.
 First up is the 'Monarch of the Small Fries'.
 I expected this one.
-In Omniscient Reader, he was the sponsor behind the acting leader on Geumho Station, Bang
-Cheolsoo. After the beginning, he disappeared.
+In Omniscient Reader, he was the sponsor behind the acting leader on Geumho Station, Bang Cheolsoo. After the beginning, he disappeared.
 In other words, he was not worth considering.
 <!>[The constellation 'Monarch of the Small Fries' is glaring at you.]
 The second was the 'Dragon Lying Down'.
-This one is the Crouching Dragon(臥龍), 'Zhu Ge Kong Ming'. He had excellent stats for a
-narrative-grade constellation.
-
-He must have been impressed with my killing strategy, but unfortunately, I didn't plan on
-choosing him here.
+This one is the Crouching Dragon(臥龍), 'Zhu Ge Kong Ming'. He had excellent stats for a narrative-grade constellation.
+He must have been impressed with my killing strategy, but unfortunately, I didn't plan on choosing him here.
 <!>[The constellation 'Dragon Lying Down' is frowning.]
 Next up is...... Huh?
 For a moment, I thought I'd misread the modifier.
 Third, the 'Sneaking Schemer'.
-I thought it was 'Secretive Plotter[1]'.
+I thought it was 'Secretive Plotter.
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 <title>556 Episode 2. Rewrite (1)
-(TL:From this point on Ch-556 to Ch-602 are Edited MTLs and may have a lot of errors and formatting issues, if you know better translations you can contact me, so you can either wait or you can edit these chapters yourself (◕‿↼) )
+(TL : Chapters up to 563 have been corrected and the others are being corrected, enjoy reading (◕‿↼) ) 
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 <title>556 Episode 2. Rewrite (1)
-(TL:From this point on Ch-556 to Ch-602 are Edited MTLs and may have a lot of errors and formatting issues, if you know better translations you can contact me, so you can either wait or you can edit these chapters yourself (◕‿↼) )
+(TL: Chapters up to 563 have been corrected and the others are being corrected, enjoy reading (◕‿↼) ) 
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diff_hunk: @@ -83,13 +83,12 @@ It wasn't hard to understand what those blanks were.
 Just as Kim Dokja had a 'reader' skill, I had a 'writer' skill.
 Skill '⬜⬜'.
 Will what I write come true?
-Since I didn't have much time, I decided to write a sentence in the blank first. The purpose was
-clear.
+Since I didn't have much time, I decided to write a sentence in the blank first. The purpose was clear.
 Use Kim Cheolyang to save me and the ahjussi from the crisis.
 As I concentrated, the sentences flowed out of my head.
 It was natural.
 I'm Omniscient Reader's author.
-narrow eyes (meaning Lee Hakhyun, but Kim Cheolyang didn't know his name yet). This loyalty soon awakened him.
+「At that moment, an unknown loyalty sprang up inside of Kim Cheolyang for the man with the narrow eyes (meaning Lee Hakhyun, but Kim Cheolyang didn't know his name yet). This loyalty soon awakened him.]
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「At that moment, an unknown loyalty sprang up inside of Kim Cheolyang for the man with the narrow eyes¹ This loyalty soon awakened him.]
<?>[1] meaning Lee Hakhyun, but Kim Cheolyang didn't know his name yet.
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They don't already have a system message tag
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