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<code>private Collection<FeedbackResponseComment> getFeedbackResponseCommentEntitiesForSessionInSection(String courseId, String feedbackSessionName, String section) { Map<String, FeedbackResponseComment> FeedbackResponseCommentList = new HashMap<String, FeedbackResponseComment>(); Query q = getPM().newQuery(FeedbackResponseComment.class); q.declareParameters("String courseIdParam, String feedbackSessionNameParam, String sectionParam"); q.setFilter("courseId == courseIdParam && " + "feedbackSessionName == feedbackSessionNameParam && giverSection == sectionParam"); @SuppressWarnings("unchecked") List<FeedbackResponseComment> firstQueryResponseComments = (List<FeedbackResponseComment>) q.execute(courseId, feedbackSessionName, section); for (FeedbackResponseComment responseComment : firstQueryResponseComments) { if (!JDOHelper.isDeleted(responseComment)) { FeedbackResponseCommentList.put(String.valueOf(responseComment.getFeedbackResponseCommentId()), <START> responseComment); <END> } } q.setFilter("courseId == courseIdParam && " + "feedbackSessionName == feedbackSessionNameParam && receiverSection == sectionParam"); @SuppressWarnings("unchecked") List<FeedbackResponseComment> secondQueryResponseComments = (List<FeedbackResponseComment>) q.execute(courseId, feedbackSessionName, section); for (FeedbackResponseComment responseComment : secondQueryResponseComments) { if (!JDOHelper.isDeleted(responseComment)) { FeedbackResponseCommentList.put(String.valueOf(responseComment.getFeedbackResponseCommentId()), responseComment); } } return FeedbackResponseCommentList.values(); }</code><technical_language>Break higher level? i.e. (</technical_language>

Target:
private Collection<FeedbackResponseComment> getFeedbackResponseCommentEntitiesForSessionInSection( String courseId, String feedbackSessionName, String section) { Map<String, FeedbackResponseComment> feedbackResponseCommentList = new HashMap<String, FeedbackResponseComment>(); Query q = getPM().newQuery(FeedbackResponseComment.class); q.declareParameters("String courseIdParam, String feedbackSessionNameParam, String sectionParam"); q.setFilter("courseId == courseIdParam && " + "feedbackSessionName == feedbackSessionNameParam && giverSection == sectionParam"); @SuppressWarnings("unchecked") List<FeedbackResponseComment> firstQueryResponseComments = (List<FeedbackResponseComment>) q.execute(courseId, feedbackSessionName, section); for (FeedbackResponseComment responseComment : firstQueryResponseComments) { if (!JDOHelper.isDeleted(responseComment)) { feedbackResponseCommentList.put( String.valueOf(responseComment.getFeedbackResponseCommentId()), responseComment); } } q.setFilter("courseId == courseIdParam && " + "feedbackSessionName == feedbackSessionNameParam && receiverSection == sectionParam"); @SuppressWarnings("unchecked") List<FeedbackResponseComment> secondQueryResponseComments = (List<FeedbackResponseComment>) q.execute(courseId, feedbackSessionName, section); for (FeedbackResponseComment responseComment : secondQueryResponseComments) { if (!JDOHelper.isDeleted(responseComment)) { feedbackResponseCommentList.put( String.valueOf(responseComment.getFeedbackResponseCommentId()), responseComment); } } return feedbackResponseCommentList.values(); }