text: I love the story. It moves a little fast, so character development is a bit weak. But there are some incredibly detailed descriptions that are very well done. The reason I gave 3 stars is grammar. There are some horrendous errors, like using the wrong tense of there/their/they're and several others of the same kind. Some are simple spelling errors that you must assume the other spelling and meaning of the word intended. It's incredibly frustrating and I've considered not reading based on that. The story is wonderful, otherwise I would rate it much lower than I have. It takes true imagination, planning, and foresight to author a book like this. There is more to writing a book than creativity and vision, though.