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Title: Is there a word that describes the unjustified use of a more complex word?
Question: Is there a word that describes the unjustified use of a more complex word?  For example, using "didactic" instead of using the simpler "instructive" when the use of "didactic" is not justified in the context, as it could have been swapped with "instructive" without changing the meaning at all. There are some cases where it might be justified, but in our fictional example it is not.  How would you describe such writing or such a literary choice?

Answers:
sents: text: Obfuscation where the result (intended or otherwise) is to make the meaning unclear. Pretentious if the intention is to unnecessarily create an impression that the writer is more intelligent than the reader.
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/21770/Graham
score: 27
sents: text: Normally you'd say something like "that's an unnecessarily elaborate word".
text: Except for verbose, none of the following are common, but I've marked the very rare: rococo (adj)
text: having elaborate ornamentation wiktionary (rare) baroque (adj) very elaborate wiktionary elegant variation describes using synonyms to avoid reusing a word wikipedia
text: the lure of the abstract describes the use abstract words instead of concrete ones Plain Words (rare) circumlocution (noun) is a speaking around the topic and being very indirect (rare) pleonasm (noun) covers the case of using too many words wikipedia (academic, rare) sesquipedalian (adj)
text: is the use of long words instead of short, only ever seen humourously wiktionary (academic, rare) logorrhea (noun, rare) is using too many words, also verbosity and prolix high falutin' (adj) is a pejorative phrase for "over-educated": "You and your high-falutin' words, just trying to confuse us!"
text: (US, very informal)
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/93471/jonathanjo
score: 13
sents: text: You can call this flowery language .
text: According to Cambridge : flowery ( adj. ):
text: disapproving
text: If a speech or writing style is flowery, it uses too many complicated or unusual words or phrases.
text: Collins says: flowery ( adj. ):
text: full of figurative and ornate expressions and fine words (said of language, style, etc.)
text: One writing coach advises: Avoid “flowery” language at all costs!
text: If necessary, throw out your Thesaurus!
text: Readers are more impressed by the quality of your ideas than your use of multi-syllabic terms.
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/113/J.R.
score: 11
sents: text: You can say that they are using big words .
text: The idea behind the expression big words is that instead of using much simpler and more understandable to the average person words, some people intentionally choose to use words that sound more sophisticated, too intellectual or just clever.
text: Oftentimes, the use of such words is unjustified.
text: The main reason people do that is that they probably want to make themselves sound smarter than they really are.
text: Here's how the Merriam-Webster Dictionary describes this expression: a difficult word used to try to impress someone
text: And it also alongside the definition provides the following example sentence: You don't need to use big words to make your point.
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/6450/Michael Rybkin
score: 7
sents: text: The word pedantic would fit, in the sense of an ostentatious display of knowledge.
text: Edit: Apparently this sense of pedantic is not very well known so to back the sense I mentioned: pedantic , Merriam Webster
text: (sense 2): "narrowly, stodgily, and often ostentatiously learned" pedantry , Collins : "(British English) the habit or an instance of being a pedant, esp in the display of useless knowledge or minute observance of petty rules or details" pedantic , Free dictionary (citing the American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language):
text: "Characterized by a narrow, often ostentatious concern for academic knowledge and formal rules"
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/62966/Erwan
score: 3
sents: text: Such a choice is a matter of tone and style.
text: I'm not sure that I would ever agree that it could be "not justified" as there is always at least a subtle difference in rhythm and flow, and often in meaning.
text: Intentionally choosing or avoiding words with latinate roots, for instance, can be valid style choices.
text: Intentionally choosing a less well-known term can affect style, possibly giving an academic air, or a more everyday feel to a piece of prose.
text: Also, a word's history, via its etymology, can influence how it will affect knowledgeable readers.
text: So I might describe such a choice as "using a more intricate style" or "a more complex style".
text: Style should suit purpose, of course.
text: If the intended audience will not be likely to get a nuance, and may well misunderstand a word, that was a stylistically poor choice.
text: If the intended effect will not be enhanced by a particular choice, that is also poor style.
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/91457/David Siegel
score: 2
sents: text: sesquipedalian
text: To use long words, usually to sound clever, confuse someone or obfuscate a point.
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/43723/BanksySan
score: 2
sents: text: The word bombastic seems to exactly describe what you're looking for, because it implies the use of complicated words.
text: Cambridge's definition:- using long and difficult words, usually to make people think you know more than you do:
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/94998/Ng Oon-Ee
score: 2
sents: text: An answer has already been accepted, but I think a reasonable alternative that comes to mind is jargon , which usually implies unnecessarily complex language, usually specific to a certain field.
text: Using the more complex word outside of that field is almost always unjustified.
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/95034/Brandon_J
score: 2
sents: text: To add a few more useful words: Grandiloquent : Pompous or extravagant in language, style, or manner, especially in a way that is intended to impress.
text: Magniloquent : Using high-flown or bombastic language.
text: Definitons are from Oxford English.
text: (These definitions also indicate pompous, extravagant, high-flown & bombastic as useful words.)
text: I appreciate the irony that these words are themselves grandiloquent :)
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/95037/bewilderex63
score: 2
sents: text: Most of the answers above involve such uncommon words as to be self-referential.
text: A more common idiom only mentioned in @Canadian_Yankee's comment would be any of [ using a ] twenty-five cent word five-dollar word ten-dollar word [There's been a bit of inflation over the years.
text: My dialect still uses the middle one.]
text: They all have the same sense: A long and uncommon word used in place of a shorter and simpler one with the intent to appear sophisticated
answer_details: author: ell.stackexchange.com/users/52137/lly
score: 2

Summary of the answers:
suggestions include: Grandiloquent : Pompous or extravagant in language, style, or manner, especially in a way that is intended to impress.   According to  Cambridge :   flowery  ( adj. ): though one writing coach  advises:    Avoid “flowery” language at all costs!  
The following are possibilities: obfuscation, verbose, elaborate word, rococo, , magniloquent, grandiloquent, jargon, flowery, disapproving, big words, pedantic, sesquipedalian and bombastic.