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DHS/T General All Ed For clarity, precise use of the terms “Mobile ID” and The proposed changes by DHS/TSA abi

SA01 “mobile identification” should be maintained the following usage: 

throughout the document. “Mobile ID” is a DEVICE term 

“mobile identification” is a more general t

such as a qualifier “mobile identification d

or a verb form. It should not have 

DHS/T General All Ed For clarity, precise use of the terms “function” 

unnecessary capitalization. 

and The proposed changes by DHS/TSA abi

SA02 “task” should be maintained throughout the 

document. 

the following usage: FUNCTIONS are (1) Enrollment, (2) Identification or (3) Verification. 

TASKS are (1) Data Capture, (2) Signal 

DHS/T General All Ed The terms 

Processing, (3) Matching or (4) Decision 

used for “personnel” vary throughout the The proposed changes by DHS/TSA ado

SA03 document and should be used precisely. the following usage: 

SUBJECT – the person whose biometric 

is being acquired by the Mobile ID device 

OPERATOR – the person operating the 

Mobile ID device, such as a law officer, 

government agent 

USER – a person (or organization) that 

utilizes the output of the Mobile ID device 

FBI –C ge ge Numerous reference to standards 

their application 

throughout the Add reference descriptions to Glossary a

3 document that need defined rename Glossary appropriately 

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FBI-C ge ge Identified numerous acronyms in document not Check all acronyms in document and ve

4 included in Glossary. they are included in Glossary. 

FBI-C ge ge There are numerous “Shall” statements throughout Reword to represent recommendations 

n

6 the document. This is a Best Practice and requirements 

Recommendation document not a requirement 

document. 

ITAL/ 1 ge Today, many Identity Documents (e-Passport, Add the following at the end of page 6: 

1 Residence Permit, Driver License) include some “Another application of Mobile ID devices 

form of biometric feature (fingerprint, facial image). related to the new electronic Identity Mobile ID devices can also be used for the Documents that contain, in a contact or 

verification of the new biometric documents, by contactless chip, one or more biometric comparing a live fingerprint with the fingerprint samples (fingerprint, facial image). Exam

stored in the document chip. In the current draft of of these documents include the new ICA

the BPR document, this specific application is not compliant Electronic Passport and the 

sufficiently highlighted. Electronic Residence Permit that is being 

developed in some countries. By using a 

Mobile ID device, a fast identity verificati

can be performed by comparing the live 

fingerprint of the document owner with thfingerprint stored in the document chip, a

if needed, the captured biometric sample 

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be sent to a central system for further 

checks.” 

FBI-C 1 Pg.7 par. 2 ed Known and Suspected Terrorists s/b Known or Change and to or. 

1 Suspected Terrorists 

FBI-V 1 Page Para 3 ed Extra space after “and” in sentenance that begins 

1 7 “Since there are,” 

FBI-V 1 Page Line 6 ed Extra space after the word “protocols” and before 

2 8 the period. 

DHS/T 1 Para 3 ed Use of the term “biometric” Change “once the biometric is...” 

SA05 sentence 4 To “once the biometric sample is ...” 

DHS/T 1 Para 3 ed PIV is broader that just DHS Change “and the PIV program” 

SA06 sentence 7 To “and across all Departments, the PI

program...” 

DHS/T 1 Para 3 ed Grammar Change “In DHS” 

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1 thousands..” Is this an exaggeration? 

DHS/T 1 Para 4 ed List contains a mix of nouns and verb phrases Change “In the case of fingerprints, this 

SA08 sentence 3- be the result of different scanning resolu

4 use of image versus template, differing im

sizes, or different fingers. Such a variety 

options can result in a general lack of 

interoperability between systems.” 

To “In the case of fingerprints, this may b

the result of different scanning resolution

use of image versus template, different 

image sizes, or different fingers. Such a 

variety of characteristics can result in a 

general lack of interoperability between 

DHS/T 1 Para 5 ed Loosely 

systems. 

used terminology Change “ neighboring” 

SA09 sentence 1 To “other (non-agency)” 

DHS/T 1 Para 7 te Detail level of this material is not suitable for the Move this material to section 3 “Purpose

SA10 sentences “Introduction” (see related comment on Section 3 part of paragraph 3 (or other location the 

3 through 6 paragraph

DHS/T 1 Para 7 last ed Paragraph 

3) 

structure 

editor/committee 

and flow Make the last two 

determine) 

sentences into a new f

SA11 2 paragraph 

sentence

DHS/T 2 Para 1 

s 

ed The term “reliability” may be interpreted differently Change “ and reliability “ 

SA12 sentence 1 than intended in this 

mechanical reliabilit

context (unless electro- To “ and identity reliability “ y like availability, MTBF, etc. are 

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intended). 

DHS/T SA13 

2 Para 2 

sentence 2 

ed List is mostly in adjective form, except the word 

“capture” – check the recommended correction – “efficiency” may not be the best adjective form? 

Change “ capture “ To “ capture efficiency “ 

DHS/T SA14 

2 Para 3 

sentence 1 

te The concept of a BAP is being defined here and this 

sentence can be misleading. The series of SAPs is NOT within each BAP, but within each modality. 

Change “Within each BAP for a particulamodality, a series of Subject Acquisition Profiles (SAP) shall identify progressively more stringent sets of parameters “ To “Within each BAP for a particular moda series of Subject Acquisition Profiles (Sshall identify progressively more stringensets of parameters “ 

NPIA/ 

32 

Scope Te It would be helpful to give some background to the 

SAP levels. A simple reference to where these come from ANSI ....). At the moment these appear to be arbitrary figures. 

Insert Reference to source of SAP score

NPIA/ 

1 

3 PURPOSE 

ST – 1 para, rd 3

sentence 

ed Tense is inconsistent with previous sentences Reword as ‘It has been developed for Go

applications and is intended to be ....’ 

DHS/T SA15 

3 Para 1 

sentence1 

ed Incorrect plural Change “ Sections 11 “ 

To “ Section 11 “ 

DHS/T SA16 

3 Para 1 

sentence 2 

ed Usage of “mobile identification” Change “ mobile identification “ 

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To “ Mobile ID “ 

DHS/T 3 Para 2 ed Word choice Change “ including “ SA17 sentence 

DHS/T 3 Para 3 

2 

te The order 

To “ such 

and content of this section should be Replace p

as “ 

ara 3 with: 

SA18 (entire) adjusted. Also, from comment on Introduction, This document is intended to assist the F

paragraph 7, include that text here as shown in law enforcement agencies, DoD, DHS, a

proposed text. other organizations that process and 

exchange fingerprint, facial, and iris data 

biometric data captured and acquired froMobile ID device. Information captured. 

compiled and formatted in accordance w

this BPR and the EBTS 8.002 implemen

of the ANSI/NIST-ITL 1-2007 standard c

be transmitted and seamlessly exchange

with the FBI and other compliant 

organizations without regard to any 

peculiarities of the capture device.2 

Information can be gathered directly from 

fingerprint scanner, facial image camera

iris camera. For those systems requiring 

connectivity with the FBI’s IAFIS or NGI, 

these profiles will rely on the FBI’s EBTS 

8.002 and the ANSI/NIST-ITL 1-2007 

[hereinafter ANSI/NIST] standard that sp

records with field requirements based on existing systems. For those modalities th

not have a defined ANSI/NIST record typ

data blocks data encoded according to 

INCITS/ISO format standards shall be embedded in the ANSI/NIST Type-99 re

When sending transactions to the FBI, D

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systems will have to be compatible with tFBI EBTS to the appropriate level. But, aall DoD biometric encounters are intendebe searched broadly (such as check poinencounters that are only run against locastored/networked watch lists), those transactions will only be required to adhetheir DoD protocols . 

DHS/T SA19 

3 Para 3 

footnote 2 

te The reference to the BFC should be updated Change “ Biometric Fusion Center (BFC

To “ Biometrics Task Force (BTF)“ 

FBI-C 2 

Footnote #2, Page 9 

ed BFC may have changed name to Biometric Task 

Force? 

DHS/T 4 Para 1 list ed The term “registration” should be reconsidered Change “ registration “ 

SA20 item 3 To “ enrollment (or collection) “ 

DHS/T SA21 

4 Para 1 list 

item 5 

ed Grammatical structure – list items are “applications” Change “ Need for verification of identity 

To “ Verification of the identity “ 

DHS/T 4 Para 1 list ed Terminology related to personnel rd Change “ 3 party users (subjects) “ 

SA22 item 6 To “ subjects “ 

DHS/T SA23 

4 Para 1 list 

item 6 

ed Terminology related to personnel Change “ user of the mobile device “ 

To “ operator of the mobile device “ 

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DHS/T 4 Para 2 ed abbreviation Change “ Department of Defense“ 

SA24 sentence 1 To “ DoD “ DHS/T 4 Para 3 te Reference to iris technology is biased Change “Although iris comparison has n

SA25 sentence 2 been identified as a current capability, th

technology is being developed by vendo

and is under consideration at some agen

“ To “Although iris comparison has not beeidentified as a current application, this 

technology has been developed by vendand is under consideration at some agen

“ 

NPIA/ 4 APPLICABI te Iris comparison may not be a current capability in Reword as ‘Although iris comparison has 

2 LITY – final law enforcement but this BPR also addresses been identified as a current capability for 

para military requirements where iris is currently used enforcement applications, this technolog

under consideration at some agencies a

mobile enrolment of irises is already stan

practice in many military scenarios.’ 

DHS/T 5.1 Para 2 list ed Capture may involve more than one sample Change “ sample “ 

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DHS/T 5.1 Para 2 list te The term template is too restrictive Change “reference templates in a databa

SA27 item 3 and generating a resulting similarity scor

each template comparison. “ To “reference templates (or models) in a database and generating a resulting sim

score for each template comparison. “ 

DHS/T 5.1 Para 2 list te This decision description is too narrow Insert at the end of the sentence “ or mo

SA28 item 4 complex decision processing such as 

multibiometric fusion or candidate lists.” 

DHS/T 5.1 Para 3 ed The “Operator Decision” bullet, first sentence is Merge the first and second sentence into 

SA29 second incomplete sentence 

bullet 

DHS/T 5.1 Figure 1 te The figure title is not descriptive of the figure Change “ Functions Over Networks “ 

SA30 content (note the new title uses terminology from 

To “ Tasks Across 4 Basic Scenarios “ the introductory text in para 1 of section 5) Also, 

these are TASKS not FUNCTIONS. 

DHS/T 5.1 First Para ed The term “these” does not refer directly back to the Change “ These tasks “ 

SA31 after Figure list of tasks a full page earlier. To “ The 4 primary tasks “ 

1 

DHS/T 5.1 First Para ed Clarify terminology Change “ workload sharing “ 

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1. Last 

sentence 

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SA33 after Figure 

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star

1 last with “Note: An application...” 

paragraph 

NPIA/ 5.2 Last but ed ‘....the biometric sensor is connected 

3 one bullet interface’ Connected to what? 

via a 

standard Reword as something like ‘...connected 

PDA, laptop or similar processing unit via 

standard interface/ 

DHS/T 5.2 Para 3 list ed The term OEM seems to not fit this context Change “ An OEM device 

“ 

SA34 item DHS/T 5.2 Para 

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4 ed The figure 2 deals with Physical arc

To “ An 

hitecture, not Change 

integrated device 

“ network “ 

“ 

SA35 sentence IDTP 5.2 Para 4 

1 network 

te Is the term “radio” being used properly? 

To “ physical “ 

Remove the ‘radio’ idea. 

2 Fig 2 

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versus a 3-box “component” architecture. The “matching” on the left side of the diagram 

confusion relates to the task being performed by the 

“Processor” 

IF the task is the “Signal Processing” task, then this 

does not agree with the 

left side of the figure which 

shows the cloud before “signal processing” – if so, 

move 

the cloud in front of “matching” on the left 

side. 

DHS/T 5.2 Figure 2 ed Labels could be more precise Change “ One Architecture “ 

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SA37 To “ One Functional Architecture “ 

AND 

Change “ Two Implementations “ To “ Two Physical Implementations “ 

AND 

Delete “OEM” from 1-box illustration 

ITAL/ 5.2 Te The use of non integrated devices, where the At the end of 5.2, add the following 

2 biometric capture device, processing unit, 

communication hardware, etc. are not integrated in a single device could be unpractical (think about all the cables that will be required to power and interconnect the devices) or pose security issues (if wireless connection between the individual devices is used). Allowing non integrated devices in the procurement of Mobile ID devices will open the doors to improvised solutions that, even if they satisfy the technical requirements, could prove to be unusable in the real use conditions. Thus, the BPR document should recommend the use of integrated devices. 

“Preference should be given to integratedevices, since the use of two or more different devices (such as biometric captdevice, processing unit and radio) could unpractical (if wired connections are usepose security issues (if wireless connectare used). This is especially true for handdevices. For devices installed in cars, it iacceptable to have a fixed installation of processing unit and radio device, while tbiometric capture device is connected (ua wired or wireless media) to the processunit to allow its use outside the car.” 

DHS/T SA38 

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item 7 

ed Security term used twice - redundant Change “ transmission security “ 

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DHS/T 6 Title ed The titles for section 6, 7 and 8 should all be Change “ Mobile ID Fingerprint Devices 

SA39 aligned. Recommend the style: 

“Mobile ID (specific modality) Capture Devices” 

To “Mobile ID Fingerprint Capture Devic

DHS/T 6.1 Para 1 ed The table has 3 categories, not just the two cited Change “ capture and interchange categ

SA40 sentence 4 here “ 

To “capture, interchange and security categories “ 

DHS/T 6.1 Para 1 ed The rearrange the sentence structure to avoid the Change “The enrollment function should 

SA41 sentence 5 singular form of “image” concerned with acquiring a very high qua

image. “ To “The enrollment function should be concerned with acquiring very high imagquality. “ 

DHS/T 6.1 Para 1 ed Reference to 378 format is inappropriate – any Change “4 or 5 using M1 378 format sho

SA42 sentence 6 fingerprint capture used for enrollment (378 or not) 

should be subject to the same quality criteria. 

not... “ To “ 4 or 5 should not... “ 

NPIA/ 6.1 Overview – ed ‘For that reason, image captures with an ....’ Would read better as ‘For that reason, 

4 st 1 para -

last but one sentence 

images captured with an...’ 

NPIA/ 

5 

6.1 Overview – 

st 1 para – 

3rd 

te Replace stored in the database with just “stored” as 

it might not be always stored in a database could be on card or locally. 

Reword to “Unacceptable matcher performance due to poor quality enrolmeimages stored”. 

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L1 6.1 Ge The desire is not to notify the user if image quality is Change from: 

1 less than NFIQ 3. It is to notify the user if image For completely self-contained mobile dev

quality is not better than NFIQ 3. Vendor algorithms the image quality must be performed on 

that ensure NFIQ level 2 should be acceptable. mobile device. For fingerprint capture, th

mobile device must be able to measure t

fingerprint image quality with the NFIQ 

algorithm. The mobile device must alert t

user if a poor fingerprint image was capt

(worse than NFIQ 3). 

To: 

For completely self-contained mobile dev

an image quality check must be performe

the mobile device. For fingerprint capturemobile device must be able to measure t

fingerprint image quality to ensure NFIQ 

3 is met or exceeded. The mobile device 

must alert the user if a poor fingerprint im

was captured not meeting or exceeding 

level 3. 

Sagem/ 6.1 Table 1 Te Table 1 should be expanded to have SAP Level 25 Propose SAP Level 25 with Minimum Im

2 with Minimum Image Dimensions of .8 x .8. Dimensions (WxH) of .8 x .8 and SAP Le

for Moderate Identification to 25+ (Sectio

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impression size. Capturing additional surface area 

for larger fingers will increase accuracy (e.g., thumbs). In addition ,SAP level for Moderate Identification in 

Table 3 (Section 6.5.5) should also be modified to 

25+ 

FBI-V Table 1 Sim # of ed Missing space between to and 3 

3 Fingers – 

50 

FBI-V Table 1 Sensor ed Extra period after “F” 

4 Cert. - 50 

DHS/T 6.1 Table 1 Te All SAP levels included in this document adhere to Insert a note, marked in the cell for SAP4

SA43 the overall principle that higher SAP levels are more and Maximum Compression Ratio. 

stringent requirements leading to higher accuracy. NOTE 2: The progression from SAP 30 tOne exception occurs in this table. SAP 40 in the maximum allowable 

The “Max Compression Ratio” row, for SAP 30 compression ratio could be viewed as a 

moving to SAP 40 changes from 10:1 to 15:1. This decrease in requirement stringency, but 

is in the “less stringent” or “less accuracy” direction. justified because of the 3-fold increase in 

minimum image area. 

It is recognized that this compression is probably 

appropriate given the image area increase from 30- 

40, but it none-the-less deviates from the overall principle, and should be so noted. 

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6.1 Table 1 Fingerprint sensor 60 has the W & H reversed - it 

should be 3.2 wide by 3.0 height 

Fix it 

DHS/T SA45 

6.1 Table 1 Ed The security item “Secrecy Supported” is not clear 

as to its intent, and is not aligned with the title of 6.4.1 

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DHS/T SA46 

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NPIA/ 6 

Table 1 Security ed What do these last two rows really mean? 

Secrecy supported - what is ‘secrecy’? Authentication supported – authentication of what? 

Add explanation of what these rows mea

DHS/T SA47 

6.1 First Para 

after Table 1 NOTE sentence 1 

te The “BAP level” term seems inconsistent – should it 

be “SAP levels”? 

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DHS/T SA48 

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last sentence 

ed The term “user” may be incorrect here. If the 

information is to be used immediately to make an additional capture attempt, then the person to be 

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informed is the “operator” 

DHS/T SA49 

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(entire) 

ed This material is all image quality related. Consider 

moving it to 6.1.2 at the end 

Move entire paragraph to 6.1.2 at the en

NPIA/ 

7 

6.1 Last para te A key benefit of image quality assessment is to 

provide feedback to the operator. It is therefore always best practice to have this function on the 

device, even if a more rigorous quality assessment 

is also done elsewhere in the system 

st Insert after 1 sentence – ‘However the b

practice recommendation is that an initiaimage quality assessment must be done provide feedback to the operator during tcapture process. In most cases, this funis best located on the device, although fuquality assessment may also take place elsewhere in the system.’ 

DHS/T SA50 

6.1.1 Para 1 

sentence 2 

te Wording does not include the function of verification Change “ interoperability and identificatio

accuracy “ To “interoperability and verification or identification accuracy “ 

NPIA/ 

8 

6.1.2 st 1 line ed Change ‘effects’ to ‘affects’ 

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sentence 

ed Use of effects versus affects. The word ‘affects’ is 

more appropriate to use versus effects which signifies “to cause to come into being” [MerriamWebster] 

The quality of the captured image affectextracted feature accuracy. 

DHS/T SA51 

6.1.2 Para 1 list 

item 1, sentence 2 

te The blanket statement “Minutiae do not provide 

interoperability” needs to be qualified. SAP 5 is not an image interchange, and PIV is by definition interoperable, making this statement false. 

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remedy. 

DHS/T 6.1.2 Para 1 last te The third list item is not an image quality and Delete the final list item 

SA52 list item feature accuracy topic, so does not belong here. (Editor may consider inserting elsewhere

st NPIA/ 6.1.2 1 bullet ed Poor wording 

recommendation as to where.) 

Suggest something like ‘To support 

9 interoperability, best practice is for the m

device to capture, compress and transm

Also – and more importantly - this section overlaps finger images, rather than the extracted 

considerably with 6.3.1 – Image v Template. Do minutiae. Even the use of MINEX certifie

we really need both of these sections? extraction algorithms will not deliver the s

degree of accuracy (for interoperable systems) as can be obtained through the 

of image data. In addition, accurate feat

extraction is CPU intensive, especially w

poor quality images, and is best done re

nd NPIA/ 6.1.2 2 bullet ed Change ‘can 

from the 

be compressed’ to ‘should be Change to 

mobile device. 

“should be” 

10 compressed’ – it is a recommendation. 

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11 feature accuracy – it should be in 6.3 – ‘Interchange 

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ITAL/ 6.1.3 Te It is said that “four fingers should be considered as Delete the first sentence in the bulleted l

3 an operational minimum”. It is not clear if this 

relates to the enrollment phase or to the verifycation/identification phases and this is not in line with Table 3, par. 6.5.5 where, in some use cases, two fingers are acceptable. The guideline for the number of fingers to use should be left in Table 3 only. 

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13 dependent (see Use Cases – table 3). It depends 

on the size of database being searched, the mode (identification / verification) and how the results are to be interpreted. What about enrolment – are 4 fingers really a acceptable as a minimum? 

fingers to be used depends on the Use c(see Table 3). However tests have showthat using 4 fingers rather than 2 results order of magnitude reduction in errors’ Note – is ‘error’ really the best word to ushere – what sort of errors are we talking about? 

IDTP 

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6.1.3 rd After 3

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Te Unless common finger numbers are recommended, 

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th Suggest a 4 bullet stating that the 

recommended fingers to be captured are finger numbers 2,3,7, and 8 

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DHS/T 6.1.3 Para 1 ed Clarify the term “accuracy” Change “ effects the accuracy “ SA53 sentence1 

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item 1 

te The scope of this statement should be limited to 

“identification” 

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DHS/T SA55 

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item 2 

ed Punctuation – add hyphen and period Change “ middle index “ 

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DHS/T SA56 

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item 3 

ed Grammar Change “ that do not large “ 

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L1 2 

6.1.3 Bullet 3 Te Need to correct verbiage. “Images that do not large 

enough to contain the complete finger print may reduce the accuracy. “ 

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6.1.3 Final bullet ed Grammar - Images that do not large enough Reword – The use of image sensors that 

not large enough to capture the complete fingerprint may lead to a reduction in accuracy 

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4 sentence more appropriate to use versus effects which of data captured for each finger significa

signifies “to cause to come into being” [Merriam- affects the accuracy.’ 

Webster] 

FBI-C 6.1.3 and Pg. 17 Ed Are the statements included in sections opinions or If facts, quote where the facts were deriv

5 6.1.4 facts? and include in reference section. Such a

FpVTE reference. 

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4 not have sequence errors. “Fingers captured one at a time may hav

sequence errors”. 

DHS/T 6.1.4 Para 1 list te Frequency of sequence errors is overstated Change “Fingers captured one at a time 

SA57 item 1 sequence errors. Fingers captured in a 

stressful environment have more sequen

errors. “ 

To “Fingers captured one at a time are m

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DHS/T 6.1.4 Para 1 list ed This seems too editorial Delete list item 

SA58 item 2 OR 

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5 10 ppi depending on the sensor certification. resolution is 500 ppi +/- 5 or +/- 10 ppi, 

depending on the sensor certification, as 

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6.2.2 Title ed The titles in 6.2.x should be precisely aligned with 

the row headings in Table 1 

Change “ Minimum Image Size“ To “ Minimum Image Dimensions (WxH

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DHS/T SA62 

6.2.5 all Te This states “should” but the table 1 has this as a 

requirement? 

Change “ should “ To “ shall “ – 2 instances 

NPIA/ 6.2.5 Sensor ed No reference to appendix F in doc Consider adding a link to the FBI’s webs

15 Certification 

DHS/T SA63 

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sentence 

ed Term used for minutiae – “detected from an 

image”? (see same issue in 6.3.1 paragraph 4) 

Change “ detected from “ To “ extracted from “ 

DHS/T 6.3.1 and varied ed This text almost always used “SAP level nn” not Change “ SAP 5 “ 

SA64 6.3.2 “SAP nn”. 

Note two occurrences to be changed 

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DHS/T 6.3.2 Para 1 ed Terminology clarification Change “ data format standard “ 

SA65 sentence FBI-J 6.4.1 

1 

Ed Recommend 

To “ data 

deleting this section or simply referring 

interchange format standard“ 

1 to section 10. These requirements are not specific to fingerprints, but rather are a part of an overall 

FBI-J 6.4.1 

security strategy as outlined in section 10. 

te Suggest we reference specific sections of NIST 

2 DHS/T 6.4.2 Para 1 

FIPS 140-2 instead of a specific algorithm for maintainability of this document. 

ed Abbreviation DSS used here only and not defined Spell out DSS 

SA66 sentence 1 

ITAL/ 6.4.3 

te While it is important to define specifications for the Replace the first sentence of 6.4.3 with: 

6 sensors and the data formats used for the the Mobile ID device will contain a biome

interchange of data between the Mobile ID device database, its format should be defined b

and the central system, it is not strictly required to Agency so that it can support the functio

define a format for the database contained in the that are to be provided by the device and 

device, since this does not affect interoperability. accordance to the necessary security 

The database format should be left to the agencies requirements (if applicable). An example 

and their contractors to define. 

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Database Format is shown in Table 2”. 

? 

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as 

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8 Sagem 6.4.3 Table 2 Te Format Identifier should end with a null character Format Identifier: “BDB\0” 

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‘\0’ to properly reflect 4 bytes. 

2 Te Format Version should end with a null character ‘\0’ Format Version: “010\0” 

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2 Te Database length should be 8 bytes. Database Length: 8 bytes 

8 Current SD technology allows for 32GB [SDHC]. 

Database length should allow for future increase in 

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2 Te Number of subjects should be 4 bytes. Number of Subjects: 4 bytes 

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2 bytes [~65k subjects] is too small. 

2 ed Biometric data should be the one encrypted, not the Move “Encrypted with AES-256” to align 

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2 ed Make Table 2 consistent with other tables. 

Biometric Data field Include column titles “Size” and “Value” f

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efined by the Provide further expla

columns respective

nation on Biometric 

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13 electronic identity documents verification. Many 

Governments are in the process of issuing public tenders for the procurement of devices for the control of e-Passports and it is required to provide some guidelines. 

category (mild, moderate or severe risk) can fit. 

DHS/T 6.5.2 Para 1 te The root word “identify” is used here, excluding the Change “ identification “ 

SA67 sentences 

1 - 2 

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Environme 

st nts – 1

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identification is not made – be that through biometrics or other. 

sentence. 

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Environme nts – 3rd sentence 

occurred’ does not make sense. matches to see if a true match has occur

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Environme nts – last but one sentence 

functions ...must met AppF Specs.’ It is only the sensor that is certified to the App F Spec, although that in itself is not guarantee of ‘quality’ 

and replace with ‘fingerprint sensors for enrolment and identification in a severe environment must....’ 

DHS/T 6.5.2 Para 3 te Fusion techniques for improved verification Change “ Increased confidence for 

SA68 sentence 3 accuracy are not limited to “multi-modal” such as 

fingerprint plus face. The use of multiple fingerprints, or both iris samples is most properly referred to as “multi-instance” fusion. 

verification functions can be met using mmodal biometric verification. “ To “Increased confidence for verification functions can be met using multi-instan(e.g. 2 or more fingers) or multi-modal biometric verification. “ 

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sentence 

ed spelling Change “ Irag “ 

To “ Iraq “ 

DHS/T 6.5.4 Para 1 te Enrollment does not “provide” access control Change “ Enrollment examples would b

SA70 sentence 2 providing...“ 

To “ Enrollment examples would be preparing for future... “ 

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table. 

DHS/T 6.5.5 Para 1 ed “Provide” used twice in sentence, and the Change “ provide aggressive image size 

SA71 sentence 1 “aggressive” aspect applies to the Severe risk 

cases. 

quality requirement needed to meet the different security risk levels... “ To “ indicate aggressive image size and 

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NPIA/ 

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Implementa tion – Table 3 

ed The use of BAP levels in this doc is not very clear. 

Are the numbers down the LHS of Table 3 the BAP Levels? – if so it would help to put this in the column heading. 

Define clearly what is the BAP level. Is it Column 1? 

ITAL/ 6.5.5 Table 3 Te During the previous meeting, ITALDATA proposed In Row 8 of the Table (Use Case: 

7 to revise this table, in order to allow the use of SAP 

Level 10 devices for identification (see comment ITAL/3, page 18 of the previous meeting comments), and also other agencies noted that they are already using this kind of devices for identification. It was agreed that the entire table had to be revised: however the revised Table 3 does not include the proposed change. We propose to allow, at least as an interim solution, to be removed in the future, the use of SAP Level 10 devices for identification. 

Mild/Identification) change the SAP Leve10+. 

ITAL/ 6.5.5 Table 3 Te In rows 2 and 5 of the Table (Use cases: In rows 2 and 5, in the “# of Fingers” colu

8 Severe/Identification and Moderate/Identification) it 

is recommended to use four or more fingers. Some AFIS System only use two fingers for identification 

replace “4+” with “4+ if the receiving systis able to manage four fingers, 2+ otherw

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(and cannot use more since they have only two fingers in the search engines). The number of fingers in these use cases should be “4+” only if the receiving system is able to manage four fingers. If not, it should be possible to capture and transmit only two fingerprints, also to avoid unnecessary bandwidth usage. 

DHS/T 6.5.5 Table 3 ed The layout of this table as 9 numbered rows is not See alternative layout – at the bottom of 

SA72 as intuitive or informative as a 3x3 arrangement, 

which would allow visual scanning across and down to see the changes in SAP and number of fingers by either constant function or constant risk. NOTE – this style if adopted should be used for all modalities. 

comments. These two tables could be combined into one, but it may be too busThe second table could also be purely narrative clauses, no table. 

DHS/T SA73 

6.5.5 Table 3 row 

#2 

te Terminology for multi-modal and correction in 

function to IDENTIFICATION 

Change “ multi- modal biometric verificatTo “ multi-biometric fusion for 

identification “ 

DHS/T SA74 

6.5.5 Table 3 row 

#3 

te Terminology for multi-modal Change “ multi- modal biometric verificat

To “ multi-biometric fusion for verificat

DHS/T SA75 

6.5.5 Table 3 row 

#5 

ed Capitalization not needed Change “ Mobile Identification“ 

To “ mobile identification “ 

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Page 22 Table 3 ed “enrol” should be enrolment in No. 4 and No. 7 

DHS/T SA76 

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sentence 2 

ed Plural needed Change “ Device“ 

To “ Devices “ 

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after table 

ed “Device” should be “Devices” 

DHS/T SA77 

7 Title ed Use same form for all titles Change To “ Mobile ID Facial Image Ca

Devices “ 

DHS/T SA78 

7.1 Para 1 

sentence 1 

ed Usage of “mobile identification” Change “ Mobile Identification “ 

To “ Mobile ID “ 

DHS/T SA79 

7.1 Para 1 list 

item 2 

ed The purpose in this entry is purely the Identification Change “ Mobile Identification “ 

To “ Identification “ 

FBI -V 13 

Page 23 th 7.1 – 4

para 

ed Need space after “30,” 

DHS/T 7.1 Last Para ed The term “user” may be incorrect here. If the Change “user” 

SA80 last 

sentence 

information is to be used immediately to make an additional capture attempt, then the person to be informed is the “operator” 

To “operator” 

NPIA/ 7.1 Overview – ed The para starts with ‘As is the case with Make this section (and iris quality – 8.1) 

21 final para fingerprints, the mobile device must ......measure 

face image quality’ However, for fingerprints measuring image quality in 

consistent with fingerprints (6.1) The requirement is for the operator to be provided with (real time) feedback on the quality of the captured images. Common sense says this is best done on the devic

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the device is only one of several options for measuring quality. (But note my suggested rewording) 

but it doesn’t have to be. 

DHS/T SA81 

7.2.1 Para 1 

sentence 1 

ed Usage of “mobile identification” - capitalization 

unnecessary 

Change “ Mobile Identification “ To “ mobile identification “ 

DHS/T SA82 

7.2.1 Para1 

sentences 2 and 3 

ed Avoid the term “user” when referring to the Operator 

of the device – 4 instances 

Change “ user “ To “ operator “ 4 instances 

DHS/T SA83 

7.2.1 Para 2 

sentence 1 

te The requirement for “ear-to-ear photograph” is not 

included in Table 4, there is no corresponding entry in table 4 entitled “Camera Focal Length” 

Create an entry in Table 4 to include this concept (editor or designate authorized tcompose entry for next draft) 

NPIA/ 

22 

7.2.2 Camera 

Controls 

te What is ‘Auto Contrast’? Surely this should be 

‘Auto Exposure’ or just plain ‘Auto’ 

Replace auto contrast with ‘auto exposu‘auto’ 

DHS/T 7.2.2 – entire Te The titles in 7.2.1 through 7.2.7 should be aligned The editor or designate is authorized to 

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SA84 7.2.7 and 

Table 4 

with the first column terms in Table 4. Note the “camera” used in 7.2.x while “capture device” is used in the table. Also the order of appearance should be consistent. 

harmonize these entries. 

DHS/T SA85 

7.2.2 Para 1 

sentence 1 

ed The term “user” may be incorrect here. Change “user” 

To “operator” 

DHS/T SA86 

7.2.2 Para 1 

sentence 1 

te There is a disagreement between this “auto 

contrast” and the table entry – capture device controls, that addresses auto gain, auto shutter,... 

Harmonize this clause with the contents the table (not sure what is the correct solution) 

NPIA/ 

23 

7.2.4 Photo 

Image Format 

te Current FR algorithms tend to work with gray scale 

images. Will this still be the case in 2010? 

For a document looking toward 2010 I wsuggest recommending colour over G/S. 

FBI-V 14 

7.2.4 Ed Need to add “minimum of” to the first sentence 

FBI-V 15 

Table 4 ed Table is missing top line and has a blank row. Also 

should use lower case “pxl” in the row inter-eye distance (col 40 & 51) 

DHS/T SA87 

7.2.4 and Table 4 

Para 1 sentence 1 

te This paragraph cites “in compressed format” but the 

related table entry “Capture Device Color Space” does not speak to compression 

Change here or table 4 to deal with (or nimage compression 

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DHS/T SA88 

7.2.6 and table 4 

entire te This paragraph has no corresponding entry in Table 

4 

Either delete this clause or create an entinto table 4 to address this topic 

DHS/T Missing Te By comparison with the fingerprint section, this Determine if these are needed here. If s

SA89 clauses section is missing two sections, the parallel to 6.3 

Interchange Requirements and 6.4 Security Requirements 

the editor or designate is authorized to prepare new text for the next draft. 

Sagem/ 7.3 Table 5 ed On Severe Enrollment USE CASE example, Remove last sentence. 

14 remove last sentence “Enrolling all fingers provided 

additional search capability”. Sentence not applicable to face. 

DHS/T SA90 

7.3 Para 2 

entire 

ed This material is better suited in the Overview Move entire paragraph – insert as the firs

paragraph in 7.1 

DHS/T 7.3 Para 2 ed Use of the abbreviation ID is not accurate – change Change “Capturing facial images provide

SA91 sentence 2 to authentication, or possibly 

identification/verification? 

non-contact form of ID for situations “ To: “Capturing facial images provides a contact form of authentication for situatio

FBI-V Table 5 ed Use case in No. 1 and 7 reference fingerprint and it 

16 should be face. Also, No. 4 and 7 should say 

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DHS/T 7.3 Table 5 title ed “Format” is not the 

correct term Change “ Format“ 

SA92 

NPIA/ Table 5 Face Use te This section does not 

To “ Function “ 

appear to have progressed 

24 DHS/T 7.3 

cases since the last draft and still references fingers. 

Table 5 Te Content missing, copied from Fingerprint Populate this critical table with face-relat

SA93 DHS/T 8. 

entire 

Title ed The titles for section 6, 7 and 

information parallel to Table 3 

8 should all be Change “ Iris Image Capture D

evices “ 

SA94 aligned. Recommend the style: To “Mobile ID Iris Image Capture Device

FBI-C 8.1 Pg. 

“Mobile ID (specific modal

29 ed References SAP level 30, 

ity)

40, 

Capture Devices” 

and 51 but Table 6 

7 DHS/T 8.1 Para 

SAP levels are defined as 

1 Te The SAP level identifiers are 

20, 

not 

30, and 40. 

consistent with 

Change “ 30, 40 & 51“ 

SA95 DHS/T 8.1 

sentence Para 2 

1 Table 6 

ed The term “user” may be incorrect here. 

To “ 20, Change 

30 & 40“ 

“user” 

SA96 sentence 2 To “operator” 

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not have lines between each row. 

title ed Plural required Change “ Requirement“ 

SA97 DHS/T 8.2.1 Para 1 ed Usage 

To “ Requirements “ 

of “mobile identification” - capitalization Change “ Mobile Identification “ 

SA98 DHS/T 8.2.1 

sentence1 unnecessary 

Para 1 ed The term “user” may be incorrect 

To “ mobile identification “ 

here. All 3 Change “user” 

SA99 sentences instances 

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DHS/T 8.2.x entire Te Entries are needed in this clause to correspond with Call for contributions needed 

SA100 table 6, at least for rows in table 6 that vary across 

SAP level 

DHS/T Missing Te By comparison with the fingerprint section, this Determine if these are needed here. If s

SA101 clauses section is missing two sections, the parallel to 6.3 the editor or

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Requirements 

designate is authorized

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DHS/T 8.3 Table 6 title ed Misspelling Change “ Requirments “ 

SA103 To “ Requirements “ 

DHS/T 8.3 Table 6 te Consider adding rows that address illuminator Call for contributions needed 

SA104 wavelength and illumination intensity 

FBI-V Table 7 ed Margin is cut of on the right hand side or boarder is 

19 missing. Also No. 4 and 7 should be “enrolment”. 

DHS/T 8.3 Table 7 row te The number of eyes column indicates 1+ needed for Change in row #3 “ 1+ “ 

SA105 #3 this use case, yet the SAP level 40 requires 2. Is To “ 2 “ 

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FBI-V Page 31 ed Several extra spaces between words and “re” 

20 Section 9 should be “are”. 

FBI-V Page 32 Para 3 ed Missing “the” between “could be” and “use of”. 

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rd 3

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FBI-C 9 Pg. 32 ed What is the difference between a wanted individual 

8 Bullet 2 and a subject with outstanding wants and warrants? 

FBI-C 10.1 Pg. 33, 34 Ed Editorial Comments such as “unless actions are Statement should be made to follow the 

9 taken to secure this information and its 

transmission, the mobile device will represent a potentially greater risk”...(paragraph 2) should be removed. 

security policy dictated by the biometric database you are searching 

DHS/T SA107 

10.1 Para 4 last 

sentence 

ed The term “user” may be incorrect here. Change “user” 

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para 

should be changed to something like ‘agencies must adopt nationally agreed ...security policies’ Any system is only as secure as the weakest link in the chain. As this BPR is designed to enable interoperability, all agencies should ensure they meet agreed standards, and should not develop their own. 

nationally agreed / recognised...policies”

ITAL/ 10.2 Te The referenced FIPS 140-2 standards are US In 10.2, specify that for US based agenc

9 specific. It could be difficult for a non-US supplier to 

obtain FIPS certification, and some non-US agencies could require compliance to different security standards. 

the FIPS standards are the ones to be uswhile in other countries the agencies courequire compliance to different standards provide an equivalent level of security. 

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Authenticati 

te Does it matter which biometric is used as the 

second factor? Some are more ‘secure’ than others 

Reword as ‘one of which should be a biometric, providing the total level of use

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appropriate or as secure as (say) a user-id / PIN / security policies’ pass

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word 

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rtcard c

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ombination 

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1 

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To “operator” 

incorrect here. Change “user” 

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To “operator” 

incorrect here. Change “user” 

SA113 sentence ITAL/ 10.3.7 

1 

te The concept of “Device 

To “operator” 

Authentication” should be Add more detail. 

10 explained in more detail. Does this mean that every 

Mobile ID device should have a unique ID and that 

the central system should be able to manage a 

“black list” of devices (for example lost or stolen) 

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that are not authorised to communicate with the 

central system ? 

DHS/T 10.3.9 Para 1 ed The term “user” may be incorrect here. Change “user” 

SA114 sentence 1 To “operator” two instances 

and last 

DHS/T Para ed Change “ “ 

SA115 sentence To “ “ DHS/T Para ed Change “ “ SA116 sentence To “ “ 

ITAL/ 11 te It is probably worth adding a Paragraph about the Add paragraph about TETRA and Tetrap

11 TETRA (Airwave) and Tetrapol radio 

communication networks, which are typically used by many Police Forces in Europe and in the World, and that can guarantee a more reliable communication especially during a critical situation, 

when cellular networks can likely become unusable due to technical failures or network saturation. 

FBI-C 11.1 Pg. 36 ed Figure 1 reference should be Figure 3. 

10 

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17 paragraph, technologies such as’ to accommodate future connectivity may make use of wireless rd 3 modes and types of wireless technology (such as technologies such as Bluetooth or Wi-fi 

sentence 802.16/Wimax) connections, cellular data lines, or satelli

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SA118 sentence 3 To “ Mobile ID “ 

FBI-V Page 39 12.3 ed Spelling “tipically” 

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FBI-V Page 39 Table 9 ge Should “a row for Rain” be added to this table? Rain 

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18 XML Part 2 version of the standard has now been 

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NPIA/ A.2.4 Audio te Is this section really relevant to tyis document? 

27 generation What does it actually tell us? 

and 

recording 

Does this meet US user authentication 

requirements? 

It would not be acceptable in the UK, where 2 factor 

is a minimum sec requirement but a biometric is not 

part of that two factor authentication. 

Sagem/ A.3.2 Te Section A.3.2 needs to include a subsection on Propose a “Fake Finger Detection” 

21 Fake Finger Detection. subsection in Section A.3.2 

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Suggested description: “Mobile devices with the capability to det

fake finger(s) during image acquisition a

desirable for increased security and integof the device.” 

FBI-C A.3.2.1 ed Finger guides may also assist with reducing 

12 sequence errors. 

DHS/T A.3.2.2 Para 1 ed The term “user” may be incorrect here. 

Change “user” 

SA122 sentence Sagem/ A.3.2.9 First 

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ed Use of effect versus affe

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ct. The word ‘affect’ is more ‘Aside from the recommendations and 

22 paragraph appropriate to use versus effect which signifies “to requirements listed above for the fingerp

cause to come into being” [Merriam-Webster] capture device, other factors that affect 

DHS/T A.3.2.9 Para 1 list ed The term “user” may be 

performance ...’ 

incorrect here. Change “user” 

SA123 item DHS/T A.3.3.1 Para 

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1 ed Usage of “mobile identif

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ication” Change “ Mobile Identification “ 

SA124 sentence 

and 2 

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To “ Mobile ID “ 

identification” Change “ Mobile Identification “ 

SA125 sentence 1 

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A.3.4.3 Illumination te Considering the detail provided for face illumination, 

it is suprising that this section makes no reference to the fact the iris uses near IR illumination. 

Include note that Iris cameras typically require IR illumination 

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A.3.4.4 Mechanical 

Alignments 

ed It took me a while to figure out what this meant. Is it 

an accepted term? If not a short explanation would be useful. 

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A.4.5 te Other documents, in addition to the passport, can 

contain a Machine Readable Zone. It would be better to refer to a generic “MRZ reader”, able to read an ICAO compliant MRZ in all the three different documents defined in ISO/IEC 7810:2003 (ID1, ID2 and ID3). 

Rename the Paragraph “MRZ Reader”. Change the paragraph content with the following: “An MRZ reader, if present in a Mobile ID device, should be able to read ICAO compliant Machine Readable Zonethe three different document formats (IDID2 and ID3) defined in ISO/IEC 7810:20An OCR software should be integrated in device, able to analyze the MRZ image areturn its content in terms of ASCII characters. 

DHS/T SA126 

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A.5.2.1 – A.5.25 

ed Consistency in font for outline titles. Change to Arial versus Times Roman. 

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Page 47 A.5.2.1 ed “life” should be capitalized in header 

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elsewhere in the doc. Consider what this section is meant to ad

30 Considerati Overall it is not 

ons section is 

clear what the purpose of this the document. 

FBI-V B Para 3 ed Sentence does not make sense 

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DHS/T B Para 4 ed The term “user” may be incorrect here. Change “user” 

SA128 To “subject ” 

DHS/T B Para 5 ed The term “user” may be incomplete here. Change “users” 

SA129 To “Users and operators ” 

FBI-C Annex B Responses ed Business practices should dictate officers should 

13 follow standard operating procedures. 

FBI-C Annex B Legal Ed Editorial Comments such as “As the device can Users should develop and follow 

Approp

easily be abused and deemed a violation of 

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14 privacy,” should be removed. Use Policy. 

FBI-V Page 50 ed First two references say “Facialm” should be 

31 “Facial” 

FBI-V Page 50 ed Fourth reference has “20005” should be “2005” 

32 DHS/T Referenc EFTS and ed The S stands for SPECIFICATION, not Standard Change “ Standard “ 

SA131 es EBTS To “ Specification “ 2-instances 

DHS/T Referenc 385 ed This standard is not in the Registry, and is not Delete this reference 

SA132 es referenced in this text 

DHS/T Referenc Form of the references to 378 and 381 are not ed Change references to: 

SA133 consistent with the Registry. es to 378 INCITS 378:2004 - American National As listed in the Registry: and 381 Standard for Information Technology — 9. INCITS 378 INCITS 378:2004 - American Finger Minutiae Format for Data Intercha

National Standard for Information Technology — 

Finger Minutiae Format for Data Interchange INCITS 381:2004 - American National 

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Finger Image-Based Data Interchange Format. 

http://webstore.ansi.org/ 

FBI-C Referenc Pg. 50 ed There are numerous documents and standards All documents and standards referenced 

15 es referenced within the document that are not should be included in the References 

included in the reference section. Section. 

DHS/T Glossary NIST ed .....hmmmmmmm Change “Institute for Standards” 

SA134 To “Institute of Standards ” 

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SEVERE MODERATE MILD 

SAP #FINGERS SAP #FINGERS SAP #FINGERS 

ENROLLMENT 45+ 10 40+ 6+ 30+ 4+ 

IDENTIFICATION 45+ 4+ 30+ 4+ 20+ 2+ 

VERIFICATION 20+ 2+ 20+ 2+ 10+ 

5+ 

1+ 2+ 

SEVERE MODERATE MILD 

ENROLLMENT In field enrollment into databases 

with applications where there is a high risk of loss of life or assets. Some situations may require multimodal biometric enrollment. Enrollment should achieve an equivalent level of quality as if conducted in a controlled environment using non-mobile devices. Enrolling all fingers provides additional search capability. 

Mobile booking: Field cite and release when the violation is not high enough to ensure incarceration until arraignment without bail. 

The intention is for verification later (ecitations) is anticipated or an enrollment is sufficient for a normal tenprint to hit against on a many to one search. 

IDENTIFICATION One to many search against a 

database to identify a subject where there is a high risk of loss of life or assets. Some situations may require multi-modal biometric verification. 

In field Mobile Identification of a subject with questionable or no identification. 

Rapid identification in custody prior to formal booking. (Typically done at the jail intake.) 

VERIFICATION 1:1 match against a credential or 

database to verify identity where there is a high risk of loss of life or assets. Some situations may require multi-modal biometric verification. 

Personal Identity Verification (PIV) Release from custody. 

Court Appearance/Parole/Workhouse, Personal Identity Verification (PIV). 

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