Make this article more fluent naturally, this is the output you gave, you couldn't do it well. Shorten this article, discard unnecessary things that are not suitable for business life, add new things. I will tell you the purpose of this message, do it accordingly. I will send this message to one of the human resources of allianz company in linkedin, allianz company organized a program called "futuremall" and it did this through a company called patha.dev. Patika Dev sent technical test and English exam and I passed, but I was eliminated in the interview. Now, by sending this message, I want to convince them that I actually deserve the job and I'm trying to convince them to interview me.

Writing:

Hello Mrs. Irem,

I applied to the Allianz My FutureAll program through the Patika.dev website. I successfully completed the technical test and the English exam, but as a result of the interview, I was not accepted to the program. I am aware that there may be more suitable candidates among the applicants, but I thought I was very suitable for this program. It's been a while since my graduation, but I didn't waste this semester, I also interviewed with good companies, I came to the last stage 5 times in total, but I was not lucky to start work.

I don't know if you were involved in the evaluation, but I'm wondering why I didn't get accepted. Is it the little things that make an impact? When asked about the start date of the program, I replied in early June, that doesn't mean I don't know the exact dates. I said several times that I did not know the content of the program because it was not specified on the program's page. I reached the site through a Google search, I signed up for the site specifically because Allianz caught my interest. Later, I realized that the educational content was shared on Instagram, it was also written in your post on Linkedin. But I gave such an answer because I referenced the main page on the path.dev site. After the interview, I didn't start working on the relevant content on patika.dev because I thought we would progress in the program together, instead I continued to develop myself from different sources. I have not completed the projects I have done, but this does not mean that I will not complete the projects during the program. I don't do a lot of uploads because I don't get questions about Github in interviews. Instead of completing the projects, I wanted to learn piece by piece and focus on OOP, SOLID, System Design, Operating Systems, Algorithms. There are a lot of source tutorials on the internet, anyone who wants can say that he has done the project himself.

Frankly, I was a little disappointed. The company in my focus was Allianz, and for this reason, I slowed down my negotiations with other companies. Insurance was one of the few domains I wanted to work in. The technologies used are the ones I want to advance. I am interested in software engineering, but I do not want to work with the latest technologies unless necessary (I can learn if necessary). I think that there has been a transformation in the IT side in the recent period, such changes are made from time to time when necessary, so what I want to say is that I am aware that software engineering serves the business flow and finds solutions to its problems, I can work in this job without getting bored. I do not expect a high salary, it is enough for me to have an above-average salary and stay that way. The fact that Allianz is one of the largest companies in the world and that it is a global company also attracts my attention. I saw a high fit here and thought it was a company I could work with for a long time.

I couldn't get accepted to My FutureAll program, but I saw that you have an internship program called Codebooth. Since I am a graduate, it is not possible for me to apply, but if you are interested, I can work for 1 year with the minimum possible salary. I think I may get an offer in the coming weeks, but I would prefer a higher salary to work in a place that appeals to me. Since my internships are lacking, I can see this period as a long-term internship. I started applying for a job about a year ago, but since I graduated in September 2021, I don't want it to take any longer, I will make a decision by the end of next month. I graduated from Istanbul Technical University, Department of Mathematics Engineering, completed my military service. I have no difficulty in learning new concepts about software, and I am ready to work hard to be successful. I have completed the technical test and the English test at My FutureAll, if you are interested we can have a face-to-face interview.

Sorry for the long post but I wanted to give details. Yours sincerely