Can you read my day9 of my erotic visual novel game and give feedback?

scene bg mc bedroom with fade
    "The sound of your alarm blares through the room. Another Tuesday."
    p "Ugh..."
    "You drag yourself out of bed, throw on some clothes, and head out."
    scene bg campus with fade
    "The morning air is crisp as you make your way across campus."
    show james happy
    jam "Yo, [povname]! You look like you barely alive."
    p "I feel like it."
    show alex
    a "That's the college experience. Sleep deprivation and questionable decisions."
    jam "Speaking of, you see that one guy totally wipe out on his skateboard yesterday?"
    p "Missed it."
    jam "Dude, legendary. He went full airborne, Then not anymore."
    a "It was pretty impressive. I’m surprised he got back up."
    "You chuckle, shaking your head as James reenacts the fall with exaggerated gestures."
    hide alex
    hide james
    "As you part ways with them, you spot Emily walking toward the coffee kiosk."
    scene bg park with fade
    show emily with dissolve

    p "Hey, Emily."
    e "Morning, [povname]. Running on fumes already?"
    p "You know it. Need caffeine to survive this lecture."
    "You both step into the line for take-away coffee."
    e "So... *She pauses, tilting her head.* You still thinking about Friday?"

    p "Nah."
    e "Mmm, sure."
    "She smirks, nudging your arm lightly."
    e "You’re such a chill guy."
    p "How was the rest of your weekend?"
    e "Cool."

    menu:
        "Play it cool.":
            p "Sounds easygoing."
            "Emily shrugs, a soft smile playing on her lips."
            e "What can I say? I know how to relax."
            "The barista calls out Emily's name and she picks up her coffee."
            "She twists away and walks out leaving you waiting alone with your thoughts."

        "Ask about Tyson." if cuck_activate == True:
            p "Did you… meet with Tyson?"
            "Emily tilts her head slightly, her lips curling into a teasing smile."
            e "Why? Jealous?"
            "Her words drip with amusement, like she already knows the answer."

            p "I mean… you two seemed pretty close at the party."
            "Your voice comes out softer than you intended, the thought gnawing at you."
            "Emily lets out a soft laugh, brushing a strand of hair behind her ear."
            e "We talked a bit. He’s kinda fun to be around, honestly."
            
            "Her words linger, deliberately vague, as if she enjoys watching you squirm."
            p "Fun… how?"
            "You shouldn’t ask. You know you shouldn’t, but the words spill out anyway."
            "Emily leans in slightly, her smile turning more mischievous."
            e "Relax, [povname]. We just talked. But-" 
            "She pauses, eyes glinting with something dangerous."
            e "It’s cute how interested you are."
            
            "Your stomach tightens as she lets the moment stretch, like she’s savoring your discomfort."
            
            p "I’m just curious, that’s all."
            "You try to play it off."
            
            "Emily giggles, biting her lower lip as if holding something back."
            
            e "He thinks I’m the 'good girl' type." 
            "Her voice drops just enough to make your pulse quicken."
            "The barista calls out Emily's name and she picks up her coffee."
            e "Funny, right?"
            "With a playful smile, she twists away and walks out, leaving you standing there, your thoughts swirling."


        "Act annoyed":
            p "'Cool'? That's all I get?"
            "Emily raises an eyebrow, clearly amused."
            e "What else do you want, a full play-by-play?"
            "Her teasing tone makes your frustration bubble up slightly."
            p "I mean, you’re acting kinda vague."
            e "Whatever..."
            "The barista calls out Emily's name as she grabs her coffee."
            "She twists away and walks out leaving you waiting alone with your thoughts."


    scene bg lecture with fade
    "You make your way towards your lecture."
    "Class drags on. Your mind wanders towards Jasmine's OnlyFaves."
    scene bg library with fade
    "After class, you find yourself in the library, distracted until the professor posts a new group assignment."
    "The soft murmur of students and the faint rustle of pages surround you as you scroll through the task details on your phone."

    "A quiet cough draws your attention."

    show reginal at center
    "A thin, bespectacled guy with neatly combed black hair gives you a small smile, shifting the strap of his backpack."
    r "Hey, looks like we’re grouped together. I’m Reginal."
    p "[povname]. Nice to meet you."
    
    "His voice is soft but clear, the kind of guy who seems like he never forgets a deadline."
    "You shake his hand briefly, noting the firm but polite grip."
    
    hide reginal

    "You exchange a few pleasantries before opening the assignment outline on your laptop."
    "The project seems straightforward—an analysis report, due in two weeks—but it’s clear there’s a lot of work ahead."

    show reginal at right
    r "So… any thoughts on how to tackle this?"
    "He adjusts his glasses, leaning slightly toward you with a focused expression."

    menu:
        "Suggest splitting the work evenly.":
            p "We could divide the sections and work on them separately. Less hassle that way."
            "Reginal nods slowly, tapping his fingers against his notebook."
            r "Efficient. I like that. Just, uh—"
            "He pauses, hesitating before adding."
            r "I’m pretty solid on research and data analysis if you want to handle the presentation part."
            p "Deal."
            "You both settle into a comfortable rhythm, sorting through the workload with ease."

        "Offer to handle the harder sections.":
            p "I don’t mind tackling the tougher parts if that works for you."
            "His eyes widen slightly, as if surprised by the offer."
            r "Really? That’s… cool of you. I can handle formatting and references, then."
            "He offers a grateful smile, his posture relaxing a little."
            r "I’m a bit of a perfectionist, so you won’t have to worry about the details being sloppy."
            "You nod, feeling a bit more confident about the group dynamic."

        "Let him take the lead.":
            p "Honestly, I’m cool with whatever approach you prefer."
            "Reginal blinks in surprise before chuckling softly."
            r "I didn’t expect you to be so laid-back."
            "He shifts his weight, already pulling up additional references on his tablet."
            r "Alright, I’ll outline the key sections. If you’re fine following along, this’ll be easy."
            "You can’t help but smile at how quickly he takes charge. At least you won’t have to stress over planning."

    "As the conversation flows, you learn a little more about him."
    "He’s a computer science major, obsessed with coding competitions, and surprisingly funny when he relaxes."
    r "This isn’t your first group project, right? I heard half the people disappear by week two."
    p "Hopefully, we end up different."
    
    "His laugh is quiet but genuine."
    r "Same. Let’s not be those people."

    r "By the way, if you need high-quality images for your part, I’ve got a decent camera setup."
    p "Oh? Into photography?"
    r "Yeah, mostly as a side thing. Portraits, event shots, that kind of stuff. Pays better than you'd think."
    "He shrugs, but there’s a hint of pride in his voice."
    p "Nice. Bet that comes in handy."
    r "It does. Plus, it keeps me busy outside of class."

    "After finalizing your initial plan, you both exchange contact info."
    r "Shoot me a message if you want to brainstorm later."
    "With a friendly nod, he gathers his things and heads toward another table, leaving you feeling optimistic about the assignment."


    scene bg mc bedroom with fade
    "Later that evening, you're hanging out in your dorm with Jasmine."
    show jasmine at left with dissolve

    "She’s sitting cross-legged on your bed, scrolling through her phone while you lean back in your chair."

    j "So... I’ve been thinking more about that OnlyFaves thing."
    "Her tone is casual, but there’s a hint of curiosity beneath it."

    if jasmine_of == True and cuck_activate == True:
        p "Yeah? Any new ideas?"
        "She glances up from her phone, biting her lip thoughtfully."  
        j "Mmhmm. If I do it, I want to do it right. Quality photos, good lighting... you know, not just blurry selfies."    
        p "Makes sense. Presentation is everything."    
        j "Exactly! But I’m gonna need someone to help take photos if I want them to actually look good."
        "Her playful smile tugs at your heart as her eyes linger on you."

        p "I could—"   
        j "Mmm, tempting… but I’d probably distract you too much." 
        "She giggles softly, stretching her legs out."   
        p "Fair point."
    
        j "Maybe someone who knows what they’re doing? Like an actual photographer."

        "The thought clicks in your mind immediately."
    
        p "You know... I met this guy today, Reginal. He’s into photography."
        "Jasmine raises an eyebrow, intrigued."

        j "Photography, huh? Is he good?" 
    
        p "He seemed legit. Was talking about lighting setups and editing, way more technical than I expected."
    
        j "Hmm… that could work."
        "She taps her chin, already scheming."

        j "Would it be weird to ask him?"

        menu:
            "Encourage her to reach out.":
                p "Nah, go for it! He’d probably be down. He’s kind of a nerd."
                "Jasmine laughs, rolling her eyes."
                j "Yeah, I’m sure he’d love to be my personal photographer. Guys are so easy."
                "Her playful tone lingers, but you can hear a slight thrill in her voice."
                p "If he’s down to help, why not?"
                j "I guess it wouldn’t hurt to ask."
                "She stretches out, sending you a sweet smile."
                j "You’re being so cool about this, babe. I kind of expected you to freak out."
                p "What can I say? I’m supportive."
                "Her laughter fills the room, blending with a buzz of excitement hanging in the air."

            "Express hesitation.":
                p "I don’t know… having some guy take pictures of you like that feels kind of weird."
                "Jasmine tilts her head, giving you a curious look."
                j "He’s not just some random guy if you know him. And it’s not like I’m shooting porn... just cute, flirty stuff."
                "Her casual tone does little to ease the tightness in your chest."
                j "Besides, you’re cool with it, right? You said so earlier."
            
                p "Yeah, you’re right. I trust you."
                "Her smile softens, and she reaches over to squeeze your hand."
                j "Thanks, babe. That means a lot."
                "Even as the conversation drifts to other topics, a faint unease lingers in the back of your mind."

        j "You know..."
        "She stands up, her movements slow and deliberate, savoring the moment. The hem of your hoodie—the one she always steals—rides up slightly, revealing a tantalizing sliver of smooth skin."
    
        j "Most guys would be freaking out right now. Their girlfriend wanting to post pictures online for strangers to see..."
        "She stops in front of you, her hands resting on your shoulders. Her touch is warm, fingers trailing down your chest in a way that makes your breath hitch."
    
        j "But you..." 
        "She tilts her head, a sly smile curving her lips."
    
        j "You’re so supportive. Almost like… you’re into it."
        "Her voice drops to a whisper as her lips brush against your ear."
    
        j "The thought of all those guys… looking at me. Wanting me. But knowing they can’t have me."
        "Her hand slips under your shirt, her nails lightly scratching your skin. The sensation sends a shiver down your spine, and you feel your cock twitch in response."
    
        j "Or… maybe they can."
        "The words hang in the air, heavy and electric. Your heart pounds in your chest, body reacting to her teasing words and the way she looks at you."
    
        j "Damn, someone’s getting excited, huh?"
        "Her hand slides lower, fingers brushing over the growing bulge in your jeans. You can’t help but groan as she cups you through the fabric."
    
        j "Look at you… so hard already. And I haven’t even done anything yet."
        "With practiced ease, she undoes your zipper, slipping her hand inside your boxers. Her fingers wrap around your cock, and you let out a shaky breath as she begins to stroke you slowly."
    
        j "Tell me the truth…" 
        "Her voice is sultry, breath hot against your ear."
    
        j "Do you like the idea of other guys wanting me? Imagining what they’d do to me?"
        "Her hand tightens slightly, thumb brushing over the sensitive spot just under the head of your cock. You can’t hold back a moan, and her grin widens, clearly enjoying your reaction."
    
        j "I think you do. You’re getting off on this."
        "She increases her pace, strokes becoming more confident as you feel yourself leaking into her hand."
    
        j "What if I told you… I’ve been thinking about it too? About all those guys looking at me, wanting to touch me."
        "Her words ignite a wave of heat within you, and you can feel yourself getting closer to the edge. But she slows down, gripping you just enough to keep you teetering on the brink."
        j "Does this excite you, baby?"
        "She locks her gaze onto yours, a playful challenge flickering in her eyes. You can feel the conflicting tides of desire and hesitation washing over you, pulling you in both directions."
        menu:
            "Yes":
                p "I... Y-yes."
                "Jasmine’s smile widens, a victorious glint in her eyes as she leans in closer, her breath hot against your ear."
                j "I knew you would." 
                "Her fingers tighten around you, her thumb brushing over the tip. You gasp as your body trembles under her touch." 
                j "You’re such a naughty boy, relishing the idea of your girlfriend with someone else."
                "Her words send shivers down your spine, and you feel yourself getting closer to the edge."
                j "Maybe I’ll let you watch, just a little. What do you think?"
                "As she quickens her pace, the thoughts of her with someone else swirl in your mind, pushing you to your breaking point."
                j "Let go for me, babe. Show me how much you want this."
                "With a moan of her name, you can’t hold back any longer. Your body shudders as you release, engulfed in a storm of pleasure."
                j "Good boy." 
                "She leans in, lips brushing softly against yours." 
                j "I think we’re going to have a lot of fun with this."

            "I don't know":
                p "I… I don’t know."
                "Jasmine’s smile falters slightly, but she doesn’t stop. Her hand moves slower now, almost teasing."
                j "You don’t know? Or you don’t want to admit it?"
                "Her fingers brush over that sensitive spot just under the head of your cock, and it's hard to keep your resolve."
                j "Your body’s telling me one thing, but your mouth’s saying another."
                "She leans in closer, lips brushing against your ear."
                j "It’s okay, babe. You don’t have to say it out loud. I can tell you’re getting off on this."
                "Her fingers tighten around you, her thumb brushing over the tip. You gasp, your body trembling under her touch."
                j "Just let go and enjoy it. I’ll take care of you."
                "Her soft, sultry words push you over the edge, and you moan her name as you come, your body shuddering from the release."
                j "See? You don’t have to admit it… but I know the truth."
                "She leans in, lips brushing gently against yours, her smile full of secrets."
                j "And I think we’re going to have a lot of fun with this."
        jump after_day9_jas_hand

    elif jasmine_of == True and cuck_activate == False:
        p "Yeah? Any new ideas?"
        "She glances up from her phone, biting her lip thoughtfully."
        j "Mmhmm. If I do it, I want to do it right. Quality photos, good lighting... you know, not just blurry selfies."
        p "Makes sense. Presentation is everything."
        j "Exactly! But I’m going to need someone to help take photos if they’re going to actually look good."
        "Her playful smile tugs at your heart as her eyes linger on you."
        p "I could help with that!"
        j "Really? That would be awesome!"
        "Her enthusiasm is contagious, and you can’t help but smile back."
        p "I mean, I want you to succeed, and if this is what you want, then I’m all in."
        "You lean forward, wanting her to know you fully support her decision."
        j "Thanks, babe. It means a lot that you’re so supportive."
        "She leans in, planting a quick kiss on your cheek, her excitement palpable."
        j "But remember, it’s about doing it in a fun way! I want it to be something we can both enjoy."
        "The air feels charged with anticipation as she brings her playful energy into the conversation. You can tell she’s ready to make this happen."
        "The two of you continue discussing her plans, and you find yourself caught up in the excitement of what’s to come, envisioning the creative possibilities."
        jump after_day9_jas_hand

    elif jasmine_of == False and cuck_activate == True:
        p "Yeah? What about it?"
        "She glances up, her eyes sparkling with mischief."

        j "I think it could be really fun! And I would love your support."
        "Her excitement is palpable, and you feel a certain pressure as she leans closer."

        j "Imagine all those guys out there… looking at me. Wanting me."
        "She bites her lip, and you can't help but feel a mix of desire and uncertainty wash over you."

        p "But… what if it’s too much?"
        "Jasmine's gaze sharpens, and she gives you a playful yet challenging smile."

        j "Too much? Come on! You wouldn’t want to hold me back from something I genuinely want, right?"
        "You can sense her determination, making it hard to push back against the tide."

        j "I know you're a little hesitant about this whole idea, but think about it. Watching me shine, knowing I’m yours despite everyone else wanting me."
        "The weight of her words hangs in the air, creating a tension you can’t ignore."

        p "I guess… I want you to be happy."
        "You find yourself leaning into her enthusiasm despite your reservations."

        j "Exactly! And just think about the thrill of it. You’ll see how many people desire me, but you’ll still be right by my side."
        "She leans in closer, her touch warm as she entices you further."

        j "You can't deny there's something exciting about it. I can feel how turned on you are just thinking about it."
        "Her fingers trail softly down your arm, and you can't help but shiver at her touch."

        menu:
            "Reluctantly agree to support her":
                p "I guess I can be supportive."
                "Jasmine’s eyes light up with delight, a triumphant grin overtaking her face."
                j "Yes! I knew you would come around!"
                "As she leans in to give you a quick kiss, you can’t help but feel a mix of excitement and apprehension."
                j "You’ll see; it’s going to be an adventure for both of us!"
                "You smile back, caught in the whirlwind of her enthusiasm, even if you retain some unease about the decisions ahead."

            "Express doubt":
                p "I’m still not sure…"
                "Jasmine’s playful smile remains, though a hint of disappointment flickers in her eyes."
                j "I understand — it’s a lot to take in. But I’m still gonna do it anyway."
                "You feel her hand squeeze yours, and for a moment, the warmth comforts you."
                j "Just think about it… I really want this."
                "Despite your hesitation, the thought of her pursuing this makes you feel both excited and apprehensive."
        jump after_day9_jas_hand
    
    elif jasmine_of == False and cuck_activate == False:
        p "Oh? What about it?"
        "She looks up, biting her lip, and you sense that her excitement is coupled with something more."
        j "I’m not gonna push it, but I still think it could be a good idea."
        p "I’m just not sure how I feel about it."
        "Jasmine raises an eyebrow, leaning in a little closer, her demeanor playful but somehow serious."
        j "It wouldn't be anything crazy, I promise. Just some fun photos, maybe a little flirty content."
        "There’s an air of mischief in her smile, but the warmth in her eyes makes it hard to see any ulterior motive."
        p "I get that, but it still feels... risky."
        j "Risky? Like, in what way?"
        "She tilts her head slightly, feigning innocence as she studies your expression."
        p "I mean, sharing yourself like that. What if it gets out? People can be judgmental."
        j "You don’t have to worry about that! It can be totally private for now. Just something for me, you know?"
        "Her words are smooth, almost too smooth, and you can't shake the feeling that she's not being entirely transparent."
        p "But you know how people talk. What if it affects us?"
        j "Babe, I care about us. I wouldn’t do anything to jeopardize our relationship."
        "She reaches over, squeezing your hand as if to bolster her point, and you find yourself wanting to believe her."
        j "Besides, if I find out it’s not for me, I’ll drop it. No hard feelings."
        "Her assertiveness is charming, but again, you sense something behind her confidence—a hint of eagerness she can’t quite contain."
        p "Okay... but I just want you to be careful."
        j "I promise, I will! I'm just exploring the idea. If it feels right, maybe I’ll take a leap later."
        "She winks playfully, and despite your lingering concern, you feel a rush of affection for her adventurous spirit."
        j "Let's just keep it light, okay? I wouldn’t want to make you uncomfortable."
        "You can’t help but admire her determination, even if you’re left wondering about the true nature of her plans."
        "With that, the two of you shift the conversation to lighter topics, but a lingering curiosity hangs in the air about what might unfold in the future."
        jump after_day9_jas_hand


    label after_day9_jas_hand:
        j "Goodnight, babe. Whatever happens, just know I’m always here for you."
        "Her words are soothing, and you feel a sense of reassurance in them."

        "With that, you drift into a peaceful sleep, a gentle feeling of connection binding you both as the night envelops you in its embrace."
        scene black with eye_shut
        call random_dreams
        jump day10