基于英文信息，完成一篇700个单词以内的英文Personal Statement，要求：
1. 向加拿大签证官分析说明为什么我Xiaoliang Liu必须在现在这个职业发展关键点到加拿大Laurentian University学习BMBA
2. 在详细说明Laurentian University的BMBA课程会如何帮助我实现在中国的职业目标的同时，论证为什么完成Laurentian University的BMBA课程后我一定会回国
3. 分析我在中国的哪些约束力会吸引我回国：
Laurentian’s BMBA program invites Chinese professors to implement the teaching plan for the BMBA program. This not only strengthens our international cooperation, but also provides more studyoptions to our future students. The Bilingual MBA is a full time and on-campus master degree program. In all, there are 15 MBA courses in the program, with the first 5 courses in Mandarin (course content, class discussions, and labs and soon) and the last 10 courses will be taught in English. Before students start this program, they are not required to submit an IELTS record (or equivalent) because students will enroll in accelerated English for Academic Purpose (EAP) training simultaneously with the 5 MBA courses taught in Mandarin. The EAPtraining is provided by Laurentian University. All courses in the BMBA and EAP will be offered onLaurentian’s campus, in Sudbury, Ontario, Canada. Graduating students will graduate with the same level of English language proficiency as currently admitted students, and all students will receive the Laurentian MBA degree parchment upon successful completion of the program.
Personal Statement

Dear Admission Officer,

The new business landscape is transforming the way we live. WeChat, Alipay, and various major life and social platforms like Little Red Book, Meituan, and 58 Tongcheng have become ubiquitous in society, shaping overwhelming trends. The allure of this industry is irresistible to me. I aspire to become a professional manager for a new business or an innovative entrepreneur, capable of creating new value in new ventures. My goal is to develop a strong vision and keen opportunity awareness to identify growth points for future ventures. Recognizing that the BMBA program at Laurentian University can equip me with the necessary knowledge and skills to succeed in my entrepreneurial ventures and leadership positions, I have chosen to pursue the BMBA program at Laurentian University (LU) to further enhance my capabilities.

In my pursuit of becoming a professional manager and establishing my own business to provide innovative products or services that enhance the quality of life, I have gained valuable experience and learned important lessons. Through managing logistics projects at SINOPEC International Petroleum Service Corporation, Shanghai Hongxin International Freight Co., Ltd, and Beijing Orion Energy Technology Development Co., Ltd, I have acquired the necessary competencies to tackle complex issues and understand the importance of building customer relationships to gain long-term value. This led me to transition to marketing roles, where I honed my skills and gained a competitive edge. Working as a Marketing Pre-sales Engineer at China International Technology Intelligence Cooperation Group Co., Ltd provided me with insight into the operations of new technology ventures and the demands of the Chinese market. As the Marketing Manager of Beijing Beautiful Life Advertisement Co., Ltd, I gained hands-on knowledge of brand building, market strategy implementation, and promotion, further strengthening my ability to adapt to changing marketing conditions and diverse cultures. While these experiences have been valuable, I recognize that they are insufficient to meet the demands of the industry. This is why I am targeting the BMBA program at LU, as it will enable me to further develop my “soft” skills and professionalism, preparing me for my future entrepreneurial ventures.

It is important to note that my commitment to providing innovative products or services to improve the quality of life is not just an idea on paper; I have had two entrepreneurial experiences to support this aspiration. One example is my successful establishment of the Shisha Bar project. Through partnerships with several bars, revenue-sharing agreements, and the introduction of a cocktail delivery service, I transformed the project into Beijing Enjia Box Catering Management Company, which achieved a monthly turnover of RMB 140,000 and occupied 200 square meters of business area. These experiences as a Venture Partner have given me a unique perspective on managing new ventures. However, the lack of overall business administration knowledge contributed to the decline of these ventures. To address this gap, I require a higher-level view and a deeper understanding of the business context. Thankfully, LU’s BMBA program will enable me to build competencies in key functional areas and provide the comprehensive education I need.

With my extensive experience in operations management, market research, solution development, and team management, I am just one step away from realizing my dream of establishing a new business that provides creative products or services. The BMBA program at LU will effectively integrate my knowledge and skills, advancing my ideas from concepts to commercial reality. I sincerely hope to be granted this opportunity, and I am confident that I will succeed.

Sincerely,
<PRESIDIO_ANONYMIZED_PERSON>
Statement of Financial Support
Dear Visa officer,

We are writing to provide additional information regarding the financial support for Xiaoliang Liu’s studies at Laurentian University. We, LIU Guibao and HOU Wenmin, are Xiaoliang’s parents, and we are financially contributing to his education to showcase our significant family ties. Although Xiaoliang has sufficient financial capacity to pay for his studies, we believe it is important to provide him with additional financial support.

As outlined in the study permit application for the Student Direct Stream (SDS), we are required to provide a GIC and proof of payment for the first-year tuition fee. However, we have prepared more than the required amount, and the details are as follows:

Part 1: Guarantee Fund: CAD162,698(=CAD49,375.90+RMB416,336.59+USD26,590.73)                                                                             
Guarantee Fund-1: CAD 10,000 GIC purchased by Xiaoliang from Bank of China (Canada) on 2023-08-25
Guarantee Fund-2: CAD 39,375.90 (=CAD 28,375.90+CAD11,000) first-year tuition fee Xiaoliang prepaid to Laurentian University on 2023-07-28 & 2023-08-01
Guarantee Fund-3: RMB 416,336.59 under Xiaoliang’s name in China Merchants Bank with value date on 2015-07-09, accumulated from his income over the past year
Guarantee Fund-4: USD 26,590.73 under Xiaoliang’s China Merchants Bank with value date on 2021-09-16

Part 2: Back-up Fund: CAD1,272,843(=CAD35,000+USD530,517.42+RMB2,796,653.92)                                                                             
Back-up Fund-1: CAD 35,000 deposit under Xiaoliang’s name in Standard Chartered Bank
Back-up Fund-2: USD 151,369.53 deposit under Xiaoliang’s name in Standard Chartered Bank
Back-up Fund-3: USD 379,147.89 investments under Xiaoliang’s name in Standard Chartered Bank
Back-up Fund-4: RMB 1,495,557.63 deposit under Father LIU Guibao’s name in Industrial Bank
Back-up Fund-5: RMB 245,231.29 investment in stock market under Xiaoliang’s name
Back-up Fund-6: House Property Certificate for private Garage-1 in Beijing with market value about RMB350,000yuan
Back-up Fund-7: House Property Certificate for private Garage-2 in Beijing with market value about RMB400,000yuan 
Back-up Fund-8: Vehicle Registration Certificate for private car bought in 2019 with RMB 305,865yuan

Both our son Xiaoliang and we couple enjoy incomes in Beijing, China. As the Marketing Manager for Beijing Beautiful Life Advertisement Co., Ltd., Xiaoliang enjoys income of RMB348,000yuan/year. Father LIU Guibao enjoys pension income about RMB 102,524/year. Mother HOU Wenmin enjoys pension income of RMB 96,101yuan/year. Hence, the family’s total income is over RMB 546,625yuan/year (=CAD101,500), which have been verified by the relevant employers and supported by transaction records issued by banks. We still have RMB 198,625yusn/year income even if our son Xiaoliang left temporarily for his study in Laurentian Unviersity, which is sufficient to cover our good living in Beijing, China. 

Xiaoliang’s study in Canada will do great favor to his future career development in China. Having travelled so many countries, Xiaoliang knows well what he wants and what is good to him. We trust his choice and decision, and strongly support his study in Canada. We sincerely request that you approve his application and your favorable decision for our child Xiaoliang will be highly appreciated.

Sincerely yours, 

<PRESIDIO_ANONYMIZED_PERSON> (Applicant’s father)                 HOU Wenmin (Applicant’s mother)
Sep. 6, 2023