润色如下内容：Initially, my interests in finance stems from my family.My parents are both ordinary wage earners who work hard to provide me with better education and living conditions. Their efforts and dedication have inspired me to understand that by studying business administration, I can create better economic conditions for my family and improve their lives. What’s more, my insights during my studies have also prompted me to choose a major in business administration. In high school, I participated in the school's student union and served as class leader. Through these experiences, I realized the importance of management and leadership skills. I have found that I have a certain talent for organizing and coordinating work, and I enjoy working with others to achieve common goals. Therefore, I have decided to develop my interests and potential to a higher level and choose to major in Business Administration in Entrepreneurship.

As far as I am concerned,Business Administration is a discipline that studies business operations and management, covering a wide range of fields, including marketing, human resource management, financial management, strategic management, etc. By studying Business Administration, I have gained a deeper understanding of the operational laws and management principles of the business world, as well as how to respond to challenges and opportunities in the business environment.

At undergraduate level, I have taken a variety of professional courses including marketing, human resource management, financial management, organizational behavior, and so on. Through these courses, I have mastered many specific professional knowledge and skills.Firstly,I was exposed to market research, market positioning, product planning, brand management, and other related knowledge. I learned how to conduct market analysis and develop marketing strategies, as well as how to achieve a company's marketing goals through market promotion and sales channel management,which lay a solid foundation for my further study.Secondly, I knew about employee recruitment, training and development, performance management, and other areas generally. I have learned how to effectively manage and motivate employees, as well as how to build a good organizational culture and teamwork atmosphere.Third, the financial management course provided me with knowledge in financial statement analysis, investment decision-making, capital structure, and other aspects. Most importantly,I have demonstrated positive learning qualities and achieved some results including obtaining scholarships and honorary certificates. For example, I won the Best Group Project in a marketing course, which was recognition of my performance in team collaboration and project management. I also attended some academic conferences and published a paper related to marketing. 

Except the academic performances at university,I tend to develop myself in my spare time.I actively participated in activities related to business administration. I have attended many lectures and seminars to learn about the latest business trends and management theories. Reading various business books such as The Innovator's Dilemma and From Excellence to Excellence not only broaden my knowledge, but also cultivate my business thinking and analytical abilities.Through these activities, I not only improved my communication and teamwork skills, but also developed the ability to solve problems and make decisions. I do believe that these abilities will have a positive impact on my future learning and career development.

As for my career planning,I would like to work in marketing or brand management after graduation. I hope to apply the knowledge and skills I have learned to help companies enhance their brand image and market competitiveness. In the long run, I hope to become an excellent business leader and contribute to the development of the enterprise and the progress of society.

I am heartedly grateful for what I have been able to learn through my undergraduate years, but I do not believe that should be the end of my education journey. Knowing that Master of Business Administration in Entrepreneurship at Hong Kong Chu Hai College provides both basic and advanced courses on finance, I sincerely hope to be allowed to study at your university, which will enable me to explore the latest developments in the theory, strategies and practice of relative fields. I understand that your university is strong in this area, so I believe that if I am lucky enough to be admitted, I will be able to learn more senior professional knowledge and have access to more quality resources. My commitment to excellence, passion, and background could qualify me as a member of this program and will contribute to your esteemed program. Sincerely hope that I can get this opportunity. Thanks for your time and consideration.