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When I woke up there was a lot of noise and it was only 7 pm.  My mother shouted, "Celestine, pack your things!" "What, why?" I asked. Confused, I got up. I saw that my mother, whose full name is Adin Lins, was wearing a formal dress as I tiredly walked to her room. I asked my mother, "Where are we going?

"We're going to Paris! Wake your sister and pack. Your father is making breakfast!" my mother shouted.

"Ok, ok, ok!" I mumbled. I woke up and Lily, my little sister, was already up and packing, so I just went to my room to pack.

Afterwards, Lily and I went downstairs for a little breakfast. Dad, whose full name is Joseph Lins, was there in his business clothes. "Are you kids excited?"

"Yes, I'm looking forward eating a lot of bread!" Lily exclaimed.

We had cinnamon pancakes for breakfast.

We waited in the car after finishing our delicious breakfast. After my parents got into the car, we drove to the airport.

We had to wait in a long queue for the plane. It took us an hour and a half to get on the plane. "Phew, we were almost late!" my dad laughed. How long was that going to take? I asked my mum. "About 22 hours - that's a long time. Try to keep yourself entertained." "22 hours?" I mumbled. "I hope this trip is worth it." I sighed. I slept for the first two hours or so. It was lunchtime when I woke up. We had salmon for lunch. After eating, I used my phone to watch videos I had downloaded from YouTube because there was no internet. For the rest of the flight I slept, ate, watched and talked to my sister. I bought some cute Sanrio jewellery when we arrived. Some rose-scented perfume was bought by my mother. It was at this point that I saw Lily trying to steal one of the medium sized Snicker Bars out of the bag I was carrying.

"Hey, stop that right there!

"I shouted.

No, no, no, no!

Lily giggled at me.

I mumbled, "Hugh."

The big taxi arrives after some waiting.

How much longer are we going to stay here? I asked my father.

 

Dad replied, "Three days.

 

Although it was quite short, it was in a beautiful city in a beautiful country! Finally the taxi arrived. We put our luggage in the back. It was a thirty-minute drive to the Four Seasons Hotel George V in Paris. It had soft plush beds, a huge bathroom, a big TV and a balcony! It was so luxurious.

"Oh wow, it's so nice!" enthused Lily.

"Mum said, "Wow, this hotel was worth paying for!

"Amazing!" said Dad.

They were right. This place was so amazing! After dropping our things off, we went for a walk. We went to a bakery called Du Pain et Des Idées. The bread there was so wonderful. It was so delicious that we bought so many! After the bread, we did a bit of shopping for our souvenirs. We went to this shopping centre that is called the Westfield Forum des Halles. There were lots of shops. There were supermarkets, bakeries, cute clothes, cool shops and delicious restaurants! We had a great day in Paris. We went back to the hotel. We changed into our clean pyjamas. After changing, I chatted to my friends on my gadget, which was an iPad Pro. I talked about my day and wished they could be here to experience it with me.
The next day we ate at a buffet called Le Buffet de la Gare. And it was great food! There was pizza and sandwiches and pancakes and everything! In stunning Paris, it was a great start to another day. After eating, we went to Disneyland. And it was so cool! But unfortunately we couldn't go on any of the fun rides. They were being repaired. But we still got to see some really cool stuff! We had so much to see and do! When we got back to the hotel we were exhausted! We slept on the soft beige sofa bed after changing. The next day I was woken up by my dad.

"Wake up, Sleeping Beauty," my dad whispered.

"I groaned, "OK.

I wondered why we were getting up so early. It was 3:00 in the morning. I asked Dad. He said Mum had got an emergency call from work. She's an architect and there was a client who wanted the best architect in the firm to see the building in person and tell her exactly how it should be. That was the reason why we had to leave a day earlier than we had planned. I took a shower. I went to pack my things. Then I heard crying. Lily was in the corner of the room. She was crying.
Hey, why are you crying? My question.

 

"I don't want to go," Lily mumbled.

 

"But we have to, Lily," I sighed. 

 

"Will we be coming back soon?" asked Lily. 

 

"I don't know, but I'm sure we'll have more amazing adventures when we get back home!"

"Yay!" Lily shouted. Lily got up. She went to put her shoes on. She was dressed in comfortable clothes, like Dad. I asked Mum where our next holiday was when we got home. She said, 'Korea, we're going to Seoul. I was ecstatic! It was my dream country! I excitedly told Lily the good news. She was putting on her little pony shoes and eating an Airhead. She just squealed like she'd won the lottery or something. Anyway, that's it.