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Personal Statement: Leadership in Health Care at Trinity Western University

As a woman who values beauty and with my previous experience in international business relations, I collaborated with my mother to invest 6 million RMB to establish Sichuan British Choice International Trade Limited, focusing on importing and selling cosmetics through online platforms. As the General Manager responsible for business expansion and relationship management, I have been exploring ways to inject vitality into our family business for the next few decades. The passing of my father last year, after his prolonged illness and hospitalization, inspired me. Despite his demise, his final experience provided a clear direction for the future of our family business: focusing on elderly care and medical services. Through further research, I discovered that in 2021, the size of China’s elderly care industry reached 8.8 trillion RMB, with a year-on-year growth rate of 22.3%. It is expected to reach 12.0 trillion RMB by the end of this year. Around 2035, the proportion of China’s elderly population over the age of 60 will exceed 30 per cent, entering a stage of heavy ageing. Consequently, the Chinese government is promoting community elderly care and emphasizing the improvement of the combination of medical and elderly care services, one of which is specialized health care for the elderly. Although the market size is massive and the growth rate is impressive, China’s elderly care services currently face various issues, including a lack of professional staff, opaque fees, and low service quality. I plan to lead our family business into the government-promoted community elderly care industry with a focus on medical and care integration. I believe this direction will inject vitality into our family business for the next few decades. Therefore, I intend to fill the gaps in my knowledge and experience in health care leadership through the 2-year Leadership in Health Care Master’s Program at Trinity Western University in Canada.

Trinity Western University, established in 1962, has been rated as an A+ educational institution for seven consecutive years by The Globe and Mail, the largest newspaper in Canada. The quality of education is assured. All faculty and staff on campus are Christians with a spirit of dedication. The mission of the Leadership Master’s Program is servant leadership: creating necessary conditions for organizations and their employees to achieve optimal performance. The program aims to develop leaders who prioritize serving their employees, make ethical decisions, and produce positive outcomes. While profits are important, the program emphasizes empowering employees, learning, innovation, and productivity as the top priorities of organizational operations. Therefore, the Leadership in Health Care program is particularly suitable for teaching managers like me who aspire to lead the integration of nursing and medical services in the elderly care industry. Trinity Western University’s small class sizes (a 15:1 student-to-faculty ratio) will enhance the effectiveness of my learning outcomes.

After completing the Leadership in Health Care program at Trinity Western University, I will return to China immediately and establish a physical health management institution. Seizing the opportunity of the Chinese government’s strong promotion of the integration of medical and elderly care services in community elderly care, I will inject vitality into our family business for the next few decades. My husband, my 2-year-old daughter, and my mother, who will manage the company during my studies, are waiting for me in China.

Overall, my decision to pursue the Leadership in Health Care program at Trinity Western University is driven by my passion for the development of the elderly care industry in China and my desire to contribute to our family business. I firmly believe that the knowledge and skills I acquire from this program will greatly contribute to my ability to lead our family business in providing high-quality and integrated health care services. Returning to China is not only a personal commitment but also a professional obligation to serve my community and contribute to the development of integration of nursing and medical services in the Chinese elderly care industry.