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Personal Statement

Dear Visa Officer,

I am writing to introduce myself as Xiaoliang Liu, an experienced Marketing Manager with abundant work experiences of a variety of industries and two entrepreneurial experiences. With the determination of being an innovative entrepreneur who is capable of creating new value in new ventures, I aspire to develop a strong vision and keen opportunity awareness to identify growth points for future ventures. To achieve my career goals, I must enhance my knowledge and skills in the business field by pursuing the Bilingual MBA program at Laurentian University (LU for short).

Why study MBA at this critical time 
In my pursuit of establishing my own business to provide innovative products or services that enhance the quality of life, I have gained valuable experience and learned important lessons. Through managing logistics projects, I have acquired the necessary competencies to tackle complex issues and understand the importance of building customer relationships to gain long-term value. This led me to transition to marketing roles. Working as a Marketing Pre-sales Engineer at China International Technology Intelligence Cooperation Group Co., Ltd provided me with insight into the operations of new technology ventures and the demands of the Chinese market. As the Marketing Manager of Beijing Beautiful Life Advertisement Co., Ltd, I gained hands-on knowledge of brand building, market strategy implementation, and promotion, further strengthening my ability to adapt to changing marketing condition. 

It is important to note that my commitment to providing innovative products or services to improve the quality of life is not just an idea on paper; I have had two entrepreneurial experiences to support this aspiration. One example is my successful establishment of the Shisha Bar project. Through partnerships with several bars, revenue-sharing agreements, and the introduction of a cocktail delivery service, I developed the project into Beijing Enjia Box Catering Management Company, which achieved a monthly turnover of RMB 140,000 and occupied 200 square meters of business area. These experiences as a Venture Partner have given me a unique perspective on managing new ventures. However, the absence of overall business administration leads to my puzzling in the rapid decline of my two venture experiences. Is it because of the failure of operating or the improper commercialization? Or the lack of new growth points? Or should I blame the effect of COVID-19 or anything else? To address this gap, I require a higher-level view and a deeper understanding of the business context, making it crucial for me to improve my expertise and thinking in business operations. Therefore, obtaining an MBA is an urgent priority.

Why Canada and Laurentian University  
I have chosen Canada and LU for several reasons. Through personal travel and business contacts with numerous countries, I have come to trust the North American education system in Business Administration. Canada's social security and reasonable tuition fees are more appealing to me than those in the US. Laurentian University’s Bilingual MBA holds international accreditation and offers a perfect integration of global business operation expertise with my abundant experiences because its Faculty of Management, as a member of AACSB, is accredited by both EFMD and PRME concurrently. 

Laurentian University’s Bilingual MBA program offers a unique opportunity to enhance my language proficiency and strengthen my business knowledge. The program’s bilingual approach, with the first five courses taught in Mandarin and the remaining ten in English, will allow me to effectively communicate and collaborate with individuals from diverse cultural backgrounds. This global mindset is essential in today’s interconnected business world. Its comprehensive curriculum covers key business areas will ensure me to develop outstanding vision and strong opportunity awareness to workout the growth points for the new venture in time in future. I am particularly excited about the opportunity to learn from professors from top Chinese institutions, not be out of touch with China's economic development strengthens international cooperation. It provides me unique insights into the Chinese business environment, enabling me to become a multinational talent with an international perspective while familiar with the Chinese context. China is currently the largest and most comprehensive developing country in the world, and incorporating these business cases from China’s companies into the teaching of the BMBA has made it richer and, for me who has been firmly determined to return China, more immersive and practical. 

The length of the 16-month LU’s Bilingual MBA program allows me to complete my studies as quickly as possible. Time is the most precious resource as I am eager to return to China to continue my career and reunite with my beloved parents. China is developing so rapidly that I must hurry to complete my BMBA to seize the valuable entrepreneurial opportunities in China.

Career plan  after the BMBA at Laurentian University    
China’s booming economy, immense market potential, and supportive government policies create a favorable environment for business and career growth. As evidenced by the thriving e-commerce industry and the rapid adoption of technological innovations, China has proven itself to be a breeding ground for entrepreneurial success. The new business landscape is transforming the way we live. WeChat, Alipay, and various major life and social platforms like Little Red Book, Meituan, and 58 Tongcheng have become ubiquitous in society, shaping overwhelming trends. The allure of innovative entrepreneur is irresistible to me. After completing my BMBA at Laurentian University, I will return China to become a professional manager for a new business or an innovative entrepreneur, capable of creating new value in new ventures. With my enhanced skills and knowledge from the BMBA program at Laurentian University, I will be well-positioned to leverage these opportunities and achieve greater professional success in China.

My beloved family fully supports my long-term career development in Beijing, China. My parents are eagerly awaiting my return. Their understanding and support motivate me to excel in my endeavors. My ultimate goal has always been to establish a long-term career in China to fulfill my familial responsibilities and support my parents in their old age.  I am committed to using the BMBA to fuel my career growth and create a successful future.



Sincerely, 

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