Given the job opportunity as detailed below, critique the cover letter. The job description: "Home (/) > jobs (/jobs) > event communications assistant ft
Key Responsibilities:
Assist in organising and executing events according to the DBAV’s Event
Agenda.
Coordinate with internal teams, external vendors, and other stakeholders
to ensure successful event execution and communication efforts.
Assist in maintaining relationships with sponsors, members, and
stakeholders, providing excellent customer service and support.
Help in the creation and implementation of communication strategies.
Handle day-to-day content updates on social media, newsletters, and the
website.
Assist in maintaining consistent and effective messaging across all
platforms.
Support in managing relationships with DBAV sponsors, members, and
vendors.
Handle logistical and administrative tasks related to event planning and
communication activities.
Assist in compiling reports on the effectiveness of communication
strategies and events, suggesting areas for improvement.
Report to the Events & Communications Manager.
Qualifications:
Event & Communications
Assistant (FT)
Dutch Business Association Vietnam
(DBAV)
| Ho Chi Minh city
Full Time Posted: 1 month ago
7/9/24, 1:59 PM Event & Communications Assistant (FT) | Dutch Business Association Vietnam DBAV
https://dbav.org.vn/jobs/event-communications-assistant-ft 1/5
Bachelor's degree in Marketing, Communications, Event Management, or a
related field.
1-2 years experience in event planning, communications, or a related role.
Strong organisational and multitasking skills, with the ability to prioritise
tasks effectively.
Experience with social media management, Canva design, and content
creation is preferred.
Excellent written and verbal communication skills, with a keen eye for
detail.
Ability to work well under pressure and meet deadlines in a dynamic
environment.
Fluency in English & Vietnamese."
The cover letter: "Dear Ms Tam and the Dutch Business Association Vietnam (DBAV)’s Hiring Committee,

When I first envisioned my career, I imagined a bridge—one that connects diverse cultures, fosters economic development, and drives social impact on a global scale. The Event and Communications Assistant position at DBAV offers a unique opportunity to be part of constructing such a bridge, and I am thrilled about the potential to contribute to this mission.

At UNICEF, I collaborated with global youth advocates on initiatives aimed at societal improvement. One significant milestone was engaging in dialogue with Ireland’s Minister of State at the Department of Foreign Affairs, which underscored the crucial role of effective communication in advocacy and public affairs. These experiences have enriched my understanding of international relations and the power of collective action, preparing me well for orchestrating successful events and maintaining robust communication channels.

As a senior student majoring in Digital Marketing at RMIT University Vietnam, my academic journey has equipped me with creative strategy and organizational efficiency. Leading the media team in our university’s volunteer program (RED) honed my multitasking skills, allowing me to manage multiple stakeholders and deliver coherent, impactful messages. These skills directly align with DBAV’s need for high-level coordination and effective communication.

DBAV’s role as the principal voice for the Dutch business community in Vietnam presents a fascinating landscape where different economic, cultural, and policy interests intersect. I am particularly drawn to the opportunity to work with various stakeholders and get an in-depth understanding of the bilateral business and trade between Netherlands and Vietnam. I am eager to leverage my background in event management, communications and my experience in advocacy to contribute to DBAV’s mission of fostering an improved business environment.

I believe that my proactive mindset, coupled with a communication and project management background, positions me well to support the event organization and execution, and subsequently the broader goals of DBAV. I am excited about the possibility of being part of your esteemed organization and contributing to the dynamic and impactful work you do.

Thank you for considering my application.

Yours sincerely,



Dinh Kieu Nhi"