Can you proofread and critique the below DDLG / CGL personals ad I'm planning to post? My name/location/age will be in the title so it's not in the ad itself. Also we can assume the target audience understands some acronyms like TPE, aro/ace etc
The ad posting format is markdown but I will paste it in code tags to let you analyse correctness of the formatting

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I want to be transparent with you from the very start so I'll lay everything out with a dealbreaker table to see if we are on the same page:

|  | **Preference** |
|---|---|---|
| **Relationship/Sexual Orientation** | Monogamous, not ace/aro. demi/gray is ok (I'm intimacy first too) |
| **Gender** | Female (if trans, pls be post HRT/voice training & present fem) |
| **Have/Want kids?** | **No** | **No** |
| **Vices such as alcohol/smoking/drugs/gambling?** | **No** |
| **Religious?** | **No** |
| **Body** | Thin/Slim/Skinny/Slender/Lean (plus sized girls you're amazing!!) I prefer small girls personally knowing it might be shallow, but it's just what I'm drawn to and I'd want you to feel desired and appreciated |
| **Language/Communication** | Fluent English and willing to voice chat on discord every day |

# Dynamic & Roles

The roles and dynamic we will have is going to be an emergent thing. You don't know me and I don't know you of course so we have to discuss everything in depth. With that said as a starting point I've always have been a nurturing, mentor/teacher figure, someone who geeks out about you and is your calming force and a guiding hand my dear potential partner. Dom drop / caretaker burnout is real thing though so please be prepared to sometimes take care of me too, I'm not interested in a one-way dynamic because I don't think those can stand the test of time.

Worth noting I have a tendency to problem solve. (_I'll fix you™️_) I'm very easily drawn to eccentric, intense people that are totally opposite of me. If you have ADHD/BPD that would do it lol

I'm also incredibly analytical and honest to a fault but **I'm no sadist**. So if **you're looking for a strict daddy that will punish you for sake of punishing you I'm not really a good match**. If you're into stuff like operand conditioning (punishment/rewards), behaviour modification, TPE etc That's awesome! I'd stress though that it's important to me that it all this happens organically rather than something forced and isn't all just an act and theatrics. Same thing goes for roleplay, I'd prefer something real than us wearing masks. This also includes covert submissives which really just are after wish fulfilment rather than being genuinely emotionally vulnerable. **I'd like us to have a genuine long-term relationship not a kink only thing**.

## Conversations and some topics of interest we could get into:

- Mental health/Psychology if you ever wanted to be deeply understood or psychoanalysed you found the guy
- Philosophy/Spirituality, same as above but with a more humanitarian twist, heck even astrology can be fun
- Relationships/Emotions/Intimacy, what have you experienced so far? What does a "good" relationship entail?
- Tech/Gaming, yes, I enjoy Stardew Valley and Minecraft too, well except I build nuclear reactors and robots in the latter
- Alt and J-fashion, we can talk aethetics, fav coords or I can make believe hypnotize you are wearing something idk
- Voice / Music, used to be a voice trainer and can go from throat singing to uwu, let's hop on VC and I'll teach you 

Okay, phew haha. If you're still with me after all that believe me... it's so rare to find people who want something serious and share these values, so making it this far you're already special to me ❤️

I wonder what you could be thinking and would like to know about me right now so far... Maybe why I don't want to have kids? Well, that's a complex topic so I'll share one perspective that reflects values that are important to me in relationships as a whole.

I'd like to be with someone who **chooses** to be with me just like I want to choose them and only them to invest myself into. See with babies they don't _choose_ you, they're completely dependant and stuck with you, they can't just... walk away and leave when it doesn't feel right haha. Most if not all of our coping mechanisms in fact come from that early childhood period where we had to use whatever strategies we could to get by and survive. Of course that's just life and so it's common for people to have kids because they want a sense of meaning or legacy in their life. "The kid ought to take over the family business or follow a prescribed career path that's good for them" that's common. But I personally don't feel comfortable with having such pre-determined expectations for someone before they're even born, and I'd rather focus on the present and the future with my partner.

You're different though. You have your own experiences, likes and dislikes. We can have deep conversations together about our needs and dig into our hearts and minds. Draw boundaries, build something mutual, resilient, vulnerable, genuine and when you attach yourself and cling on to me, you'd do it because you'd know it's something you want and something you _chose_.
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