润色如下内容：An occasional opportunity can make you better. As an introvert person, I went to the headquarters of Changsha Yuanda Residential and Industrial Group to work as a business receptionist ,which required communication with the staff of external leaders and bosses, organizing and arranging sales department personnel, coordinating with the meeting schedule of bosses, and managing and operating business activities throughout the park.What surprised me was that I constantly receive affirmation from colleagues and clients in various departments and begin to have enthusiasm for business meeting. When constantly communicating with various personnel for work needs, I gradually realized the importance of communication,which needs a certain depth of understanding of the products being discussed, the market, and both companies to support a two-hour business conversation. Completing a brilliant business conversation is highly challenging but fulfilling.It was also in this job that I overcame my social anxiety and became interested in this type of work,so I would like to equip myself with more professional and scientific theories about business and apply them to my future work.

At undergraduate level, I studied various courses such as Architectural Drawing, Chinese and Foreign Architectural History, Architectural Art, Principles of Urban Design, Architectural Structure, Architectural Economics and so on,which helped me master the skills of designing buildings under various conditions and requirements and gained rich experience in computer graphics and the ability to explore pain points in various background research materials. I believe these abilities are indispensable in my master's studies as these abilities are very helpful in dealing with various learning requirements in the future. During university,I also encountered many difficulties such as academic pressure, requiring a lot of drawing work and continuous communication with teachers, repeated revisions and additions, in order to ultimately produce a complete and expressive design solution. This process was very challenging,but I improved myself in different areas.For example,my communication with teachers and time management skills were improved significantly.Because of all the efforts I put, I obtained the Academic Progress Scholarship in my junior year of undergraduate studies.

Except above achievements,I also played an active role in extracurricular activities,aiming to have all round development. Being a member of editorial department of university press corps,I was responsible for writing articles and assisting my supervisor, the head of the editorial department, in content management. I further developed my personal interest in writing articles and made certain attempts in writing related tasks,which gave me a sense of achievement.Another activity that I took part in an English Assistance Program in remote and poor mountainous areas in Jilin Province of China by editing English textbooks in the form of flash mini videos and actively communicating with the organizer Michael Lamb.I made possible contributions to the community and society,which gave me fulfillment. 

Outside of the academic setting, I have had internship experience as being an intern at Hunan University Design and Research Institute Co., Ltd . I had the valuable opportunity to prepare the text of the reporting plan and participate in the preparation of architectural drawings, participated in project design and finalization.It was through the work attachment that I developed a high level of discipline and professionalism, with improved communication and interpersonal skills, which would be beneficial to building my independent research. I foresee myself engaging in engineering project management at a leading construction or design company and ultimately become an excellent project manager. I believe this programme will help me improve my information analysis, problem-solving, and system-thinking abilities.

I am attracted by the design of Business Management at Auckland University of Technology, which provides knowledge and understanding of current research in the theoretical and technical foundations. Understanding that your university offers a comprehensive range of quality modules, I look forward to continuing my theory and domain knowledge study, supporting technologies and solutions in practice. What attracts me most is that the programme is suitable for students with no business background.The programme will help me better experience practical and innovative ways to adapt to future changes in fast-paced global business environment, and I look forward to experiencing a rigorous and lively academic atmosphere, and a scientific and diverse educational system in a world-renowned university.

My academic and research experience has allowed me to recognize a strong interest in business and management. I sincerely hope to be given an opportunity to study at the Auckland University of Technology, which will equip me with state-of-the-art knowledge of business management. I believe my commitment to excellence, passion, and background could enable me to have the qualification of being a member of your programme and I will be proud of studying at your university as my next academic adventure.