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INT. TRAIN/SUBWAY - NIGHT
A GUY, (mid-20s), stands inside a packed subway train. Holding onto some support. He looks drained, a little sleepy, barely keeping his eyes open. The train moves through the city in a blur, the outside world flickering by. The lighting inside the train is dull and flickers intermittently. The sound of metal wheels screeching mixes with distant rain outside.

EXT. BUSY STREET - NIGHT
WIDE SHOT:
The Guy walks down the street, weaving between people with umbrellas and others rushing past him. He dodges puddles, his pace deliberate but slow, holding onto his bag

EXT. CITY STREET - PAST - NIGHT
Rain pours down heavily. A GUY (mid-20s) is running through the rain, clutching a small laptop on his head, trying to shield himself. He looks rushed, as if he’s chasing something he might miss. A Car passes across from left to right fills the frame (wheels).

INTERCUT WITH:
INT. AIRPORT - PRESENT DAY
Close up of baggage wheels moving fast
A GIRL (mid-20s) rushes through the bustling airport, dragging her luggage behind her. She’s clearly late, darting between people with determined urgency. She checks her watch anxiously as the background noise of airport announcements buzzes around her.

ANNOUNCER (V.O.) (Overlapping) All flights have been canceled due to a technical glitch

The Girl suddenly stops in her tracks, her eyes widen as she catches sight of someone. The noise around her fades into the background. She gazes with a deep expression, as if she’s found something—someone—she thought was lost.

EXT. CITY STREET - PAST - NIGHT
The Guy reaches a busy street signal. He suddenly stops, frozen as he looks across the street. His eyes lock on something—or someone—with an expression of pure wonder and Awe. The noise (rain, traffic) around him fades into the background and a glow appears on his face.(It’s love at first sight.)

INT./EXT. - SPLIT SCREEN
The screen is split into two halves.

LEFT SIDE:
EXT. CITY STREET - PAST - DAY
A GUY (mid-20s) stands in the pouring rain. He clutches a small laptop bag over his head, trying to shield himself from the rain. His eyes are wide, locked onto someone just out of view, filled with a mix of surprise and awe.

RIGHT SIDE:
INT. AIRPORT - PRESENT DAY
A GIRL (mid-20s) stands still amidst the bustling airport. She holds onto her luggage tightly, her eyes fixed on someone in the crowd. Her expression is one of deep recognition, as if she’s seeing someone from her past.

The scene holds as both characters stare intently, their expressions mirroring each other—both filled with intense emotion.

CENTER OF THE SCREEN:
The TITLE of the song fades in, appearing in the center of the split screen, directly between the two characters. The title hovers there for a moment, carrying the weight of the moment, before slowly fading out.

FADE OUT.

CUT BACK TO:
EXT. CITY STREET - PAST - NIGHT
The Guy stands drenched in the rain. A BUS or people rushes past, obscuring his view. As it clears, he sees her—a GIRL in a RED DRESS holding a blue umbrella. She’s looking up slightly, as she turns around a small, private smile playing in her eyes. Her eyes catch his for just a brief moment. 

INTERCUT WITH:

INT. AIRPORT - PRESENT DAY
The Girl’s eyes remain fixed on someone in the distance. Her breath catches in her throat. For a moment, everything slows down—time seems to stretch. Her expression shifts from surprise to recognition, as if she’s found a long-lost love.

The noise of the airport fades back in, bringing her back to reality.

The camera follows the Girl’s gaze to reveal a GUY (mid-20s) standing a few feet away, holding a boba tea. He wears round glasses and has a calm demeanor. He’s mid-sip when he suddenly freezes, lowering the straw as if his heart has just skipped a beat. His eyes meet hers, and he’s momentarily paralyzed, staring at her.

The Girl starts to smile, her expression a mix of recognition and hope, but then the Guy quickly looks away, breaking the moment. He turns and walks away, leaving her standing there, her smile fading.

BACK TO:

INT. AIRPORT - PRESENT DAY
The Girl watches him go, her expression now tinged with disappointment. The first look she gave him conveyed something deeper, as if she’s certain they’ve met before, and perhaps more than just a passing acquaintance.

The camera stays on her face, capturing the faint glimmer of admiration mixed with the pain of missed connection.

FADE OUT.

EXT. CITYSCAPE - NIGHT
The camera moves in to reveal both the GUY and GIRL standing apart in the rain. Girl have umbrella, guy having bag staring at each other from across the lot. Their eyes lock.

A wide shot reveals the two of them standing apart, thunder strikes.

They look away from each other, turning their heads toward the sky.

INT. AIRPORT - CAR RENTAL AREA - DAY
The GUY collects car keys from a rental agent.(while collecting keys he is happy normal - he is happy with others but not with her later on in the car) As he walks back with keys he pauses, looks back, and sees the GIRL sitting on a bench, holding her luggage, texting on her phone.

ON SCREEN: “All flights canceled. I really need to get to my brother’s wedding. Please help”

The GUY hesitates, then slowly turns toward her.

The GIRL sees him, smiles, and gestures with her hand, asking if she can join him. He gives a reluctant wave back.

CUT TO:

(Reveal Later)He turns back with a slight smile on his face.

EXT. ROAD - DAY - CAR SCENE:
The car speeds down the highway. The GIRL glances at the GUY driving, who remains focused on the road, ignoring her gaze. She looks away, texting on her phone again.

TEXT:
“Started. On my way.”

Drone shots show the car passing through vast landscapes, iconic views, indicating that they’ve traveled miles.

INT. CAR - DAY
The GIRL notices the GUY’s backpack sitting between them. She tries to move it to the backseat. He shoots her a serious look, snatches the bag, and places it on his lap.

CUT TO:

The GIRL looks disappointed but remains silent. The journey continues.
Third time: (Later/optional) (Drone top view) girl trying to pull the bag towards her guys pulls it towards him

EXT. ROAD - DAY - CAR SCENE CONTINUES:
The car passes a family playing with a dog on the side of the road. Both the GUY and GIRL turn to look at the dog at the same time, in a little slow motion. The dog also glances back at them as the car moves on.


EXT. ROADSIDE RESTAURANT - PRESENT DAY
Car stops at a restaurant. 

Couple silently eats their food. Waitress slides in some silverware./chips 

CUT TO:
INT. ROADSIDE RESTAURANT - PAST NIGHT
FLASHBACK (NIGHT):
The couple grabs the silverware, sits in a restaurant, laughing and celebrating their dog’s birthday. Candles on a cake sparkle as they share joyful glances. The cake sparkles blend into fireworks lighting up the night sky.

EXT. CARNIVAL - NIGHT (PAST) - MONTAGE 
Fire Works Shots - couple looking at each other blushing  fireworks in the background. 

FLASHBACK (CARNIVAL NIGHT):

GUY gives the GIRL a piggyback ride under colorful carnival lights.

EXT. PARK ROAD - DAY (PAST) - MONTAGE
Couple Signing and vibing for the songs played in the car.

EXT. SUNNY FIELD - DAY (PAST) - MONTAGE
The couple plays with their dog in a sunny field, laughing as they make the dog jump over a rope.

EXT. CARNIVAL - NIGHT (PAST) - MONTAGE 
They ride a carousel, their faces filled with joy, laughing as they spin.
THE COUPLE RUNS, HAND IN HAND, LAUGHING THROUGH A BUSTLING CARNIVAL SCENE.
happy young couple walks back happily reaches home opens the door.

CUT TO:
INT. MOTEL ROOM - PRESENT DAY
Couple entering a hotel room the girl with the bags and the guy with his back pack. In the present, the GIRL lies down on the bed, while the GUY takes the couch. Silence fills the room.

CUT TO:
FLASHBACK:
The couple sleeps together on a couch, fireworks visible through a window, as they cuddle happily.

FLASHBACK (BLACK & WHITE):
The couple argues in the past. The screen slowly shifts back to color and widescreen as the GUY and GIRL in the present, watch this memory play out. They sip their coffee in silence. stares at each other remembering the past.

CUT TO:
INT./EXT. OUTDOOR PARK / HALLWAY - DAY (PAST)

The couple sits on opposite sides of a park bench/ sofa, not speaking. Their faces are filled with the tension of the recent argument. There’s an awkward distance between them, both physically and emotionally. The sun shines brightly, but it doesn’t match the mood.

Their dog, wags its tail energetically, oblivious to the tension between them. It runs from one person to the other, as if orchestrating a reunion.

CLOSE-UP
The dog grabs the guy’s shoelace and pulls, causing him to shift closer to the girl.

ANGLE ON
The girl watches the dog, a slight smile breaking through her frustration as the dog tugs the guy’s sleeve. He looks up, reluctantly amused.

The dog then runs over to the girl, playfully nudging her, pushing her closer to the guy.

CLOSE-UP
The dog nudges the guy’s knee, physically pushing him toward her. The distance between them closes, slowly, move by move.

Finally, the guy and the girl glance at each other, softening. The dog sits proudly between them.
They both laugh, breaking the silence, as the dog jumps into their laps, uniting them.

CUT TO:
EXT. COZY RESTAURANT - DAY (PAST)
The GIRL sits among friends, laughing.

INT. APT FLASHBACK (TRAGEDY):
The dog lies motionless on the ground, a small wound / blood visible. The GUY frantically calls for the GIRL.

CUT TO:
EXT. COZY RESTAURANT - DAY (PAST)
The GIRL sits among friends, laughing.but her face subtly shows unease. Her phone vibrates on the table. Phone Display: The GUY’s contact with a burden 🏋️‍♂️emoji.
She hesitates, doesn’t answer the call.

INT. APT FLASHBACK (BEDROOM):
The GUY, now bearded, lies in bed, surrounded by missed calls from the GIRL. His contact for her has a broken heart 💔emoji. 

CUT TO:
EXT. MISTY DAY - RECENT PAST
We see the Guy, dressed in a black suit, walking alone through a misty field. His beard has grown longer, reflecting the passage of time and grief. In the distance, a faint fire burns, smoke rising into the sky.

CUT TO:
INT. DAY - RECENT PAST
Girl is shown with many pictures of guys , she scrolls trough them hopelessly and throws them into the air. (as she still has her past love in her mind) Or show the girl in match making/ date with other guy where she is clearly not interested at all.

CUT TO:
EXT. DAY - RECENT PAST - SNOW: A MOMENT OF REFLECTION 
(Match cut the trow of photos in the air to the snow falling flakes)The Guy stands alone in a snow-covered field, bundled up, his breath visible in the cold air. The world feels still and silent, symbolizing his emotional isolation. Snowflakes fall gently, creating an atmosphere of reflection and melancholy. He pulls out an old photograph of the two of them, happy in the past.

CUT TO:
EXT. OUTDOOR CAMPING - PAST
Smoke/fire of cooking. The Guy is happily cooking on a stove, a playful flame rising from the pot.

The Girl grabs a food bowl, the Dog by her side, and signals the Guy to pose for a picture.

GIRL
“Say cheese!”

The Guy kneels, apron still on, while the Dog stands between them. A camera flash freezes the moment in a polaroid. BLACK OUT (cuts with a subtle door slamming sound )

CUT TO:
INT. CAR - PRESENT
A door slams shut, and the sleeping Girl jolts awake. She notices the Guy walking away from the car as it has stopped at a scenic overlook.

She glances at the bag in the drivers seat and hesitates. Curiosity overcomes her, and she reaches out to open the bag.

CUT TO:
INT. CAR - PRESENT
The Girl finds what’s inside the bag: happy memories. She pulls out an old Polaroid of them with their Dog, and a dog collar slips out with it. Tears well up in her eyes as she stares at the collar.

CLOSE-UP: Polaroid image: the couple and the dog, happy.
She wipes her tears quickly and places the items back in the bag before the Guy returns. 

CUT TO:
EXT. ROAD - PRESENT
The car continues its journey, wheels turning over the asphalt.
CLOSE-UP: Car wheels rolling forward.

CUT TO:
EXT. ROAD - PAST
CLOSE-UP: skate board wheels.
The Couple joyously skateboard down a winding road, smiling, enjoying the thrill. The shot cuts between the skateboards and the car driving, intercutting past joy with present tension. (cut to car with a whip pan of skate boarding on road to car moving on road)

CUT TO:
EXT. FOREST ROAD - PRESENT
The car moves through a road flanked by tall trees. 

CUT TO:
EXT. CITYSCAPE - PAST TO PRESENT TRANSITION
The Couple runs happily through the streets in the past, hand in hand, laughing. The shot transitions smoothly to the present with the Couple walking, a little more distant, wearing different clothes, approaching their destination.

EXT. HOME - PRESENT
The Girl pulls out her phone and texts someone:

ON-SCREEN TEXT:
“Reached.”

She waves the Guy off, signaling that she’ll return soon.

  GIRL
optional-dialogue 5 mins epude ochesta please don go away

CUT TO:
EXT. BEACH AREA - PRESENT
The Guy walks ahead alone, kicking a stone near the shore but suddenly comes to a stop.The stone hits a ring box, half-buried in the sand.
His face falls into a deep disappointment, the expression of someone realizing that something precious has slipped away.

CUT TO:
EXT. BEACH - PAST (BLACK AND WHITE TONE)
FLASHBACK (ENGAGEMENT ATTEMPT):
Waves crash gently onto the shore. The Guy leads the Girl by the hand, her eyes closed. He places his hands over her eyes, smiling excitedly.

GUY
(dialogue muted )“Kallu Teravadhu… just one more second.”

He kneels behind her, pulling out a small box with a ring inside. Carefully, he removes his hands.

GUY
(optional dialogue muted)
“Okay, open them now.”

The Girl opens her eyes. Her face shifts from joy to disappointment as she sees the ring. Without a word, she turns and walks away, dropping the ring onto the sand.

CUT TO:
EXT. BEACH - PRESENT
The Girl enters, holding a tiny puppy in her arms. She kneels before the Guy, her face a mix of determination and vulnerability. From her pocket, she pulls out the ring.

GIRL
(optional dialogue muted) (softly)
“will you marry me.” (Tears in her eyes should convey sorry for past and hopeful for future)

A thunder strikes in the sky , both look away into the sky.

CUT TO:
EXT. STREET - NIGHT PRESENT (RAINY)
The thunder strike ends and the couple look back at each other and starts walking towards each other.
As they move, flashes of their past together—joyful moments, sad ones, the journey they’ve taken—play like memories on screen, blending with the present.(only FUTURE shot with kids and dogs running around Guy reaches quickly with flowers in hand and the girl on the other side. Reaches the guy - match cut with umbrella rain scene )

Finally, they reach their destination together, side by side.The couple now under one umbrella, under the rain. 
The rain pours gently, but they are lost in each other, looking into each other’s eyes.

EXT. BEACH - PRESENT
Tears form in both their eyes. The Guy nods, emotional and overwhelmed, as he accepts her proposal. Music swells as they embrace.

CUT TO:
EXT. BEACH - NIGHT
The couple stands together, reunited with a little puppy in between. a surreal and fantastical large blue dog appears in the background, gazing at them with a peaceful, protective aura. Happy vibes all around.

The little puppy looks up at the big dog, both symbolizing a blessing. The couple feels something, their eyes drifting upward.

They look into the sky, sensing the presence of the blue dog as it fades away, disappearing into the ether.

FADE TO BLACK.

THE END.