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Our most awaited moment is finally here! It has been a year that our family is planning to have a grand vacation to Mexico. Since last year, my mom and dad have planned to bring us to the beautiful beaches in Mexico. I am so happy because it is finally happening. I am so excited as well as my two sisters, Maria, and Ivina. 
“Hey! Wake up! Wake up! It is already 5:00 a.m. We have to leave in 30 minutes,” as Maria pulled my legs to wake me up. I hurriedly got up, took a shower, and changed my clothes. I wore baggy pants and a black crop top. 
“Are you all excited? Let’s go! My mom shouted as we ran into the car. Along the way to the airport, we stopped by a fast food chain to get some food for our breakfast. I had pancakes, Maria had waffles, and Ivona had sandwiches. My Lola Ysabela had coffee because she felt cold. My mom and dad just ate toastbread.
At the airport, I could not contain my excitement. It could be seen in my all-smile face. While we were waiting for our plane to fly, we did some mini-shopping. I bought some clothes that I could wear for swimming. At exactly 11:00 a.m. our plane finally took off. 
Oh no! I remembered I have a weakness in plane air. Ugh! I hate it when that happens. But the good thing was I bought what I needed.  I always need the airplane's plastic bag and I also need Vicks Vaporub to make me relaxed. After a few hours, I watched a horror movie that took 1 hour and 40 minutes.  After the movie, I slept for quite a long time.
 As I woke up, we already landed! “Great, this is going to be a blast of a vacation,” I told everyone. “ I am excited to go swimming!” My sister Ivina replied. We went straight to our hotel. We stayed at a five-star hotel that was near the beaches and water parks. 
As we walked into the hotel, we decided to eat at the pancake house. Mmmmm, the pancake tastes so good with all that syrup they added. The chocolate chips were also the best. But, what I liked the most was the whipped cream. 
When we were done with our exceptional and lovely pancakes, we changed into our swimsuits. We got ready for the water park adventure. We wore our favorite swimsuits. We also brought some snacks. 
The city now has a new water park, the staff told us.  On the first day of our vacation, we went there. Water slides and pools are present. Sprinklers are also present. When I tried the slides, it was a bit scary. Once we tried them, we loved the slides already. On warm days, the sprinklers are refreshing. They also had a wave pool.  Every child tried to surf the waves. It was a lot of fun. The water park could get extremely busy. 
Many children and adults, but no pets are allowed. We enjoyed the ice cream at the snack bar very much. They also have donuts and soda as well. 
“This is the best waterpark that we have been to.” my mom said. “I agree,” my dad replied.  The new water park was a hit with us all. The pool attractions, wave ball, water volcano, surfing simulator, and water cascades were the best. 
The next day…
  	It was scorching 24 degrees outdoors at 10:30 in the morning when my family and I decided to spend our second day at the beach. I put my kite in my day bag along with my swimsuit, towel, and sunscreen. For our day trip, my parents packed us some sandwiches, fruit, and cool beverages. I was ecstatic to build sandcastles and play in the sand. I observed numerous other kids having fun and swimming in groups. 
The beach was very clean. What my grandmother liked the most was that it was encircled by tall trees. My sister Maria pulled out a book and settled on the sand behind a tree. “ Come on, Ivina.” I went to the sea with her to play in the water. When the waves made us go up and down, we enjoyed splashing each other with water. We eventually made our way back. Then my sister and I constructed a sandcastle. On the beach, I also gathered shells, which we used to adorn the castle. 
	I ran up to where Dad and Mum had set up a rug on the grass when Mum called out, " Lunch Time," and we sat down to eat the sandwiches, fruit, and a cold drink. As I was looking up, I was amazed to see some rainbow lorikeets chirping away in the tree; they were so pretty to look at that I threw some leftover bread on the grass for them to eat. 
	Oooohhhhhh! What was that? I felt like it was shaking. We were startled by an abruptly strong earthquake and became terrified. My dad simultaneously grabbed Ivina and me and yelled at my sister Maria to leave the beach right away and go to the hotel right away. My mom and grandmother were together running too. We left the beach and were standing in the street in front of the hotel. 
After a few minutes, the shaking stopped. The earthquake had stopped. “ Thank you, Lord.” The words we all uttered. We all went to our hotel room. We thought the disaster had ended but we  were wrong. 
“ The water is rising! The water is rising!” I heard some people yelling. In front of the hotel, dozens of people were shouting as they sped by the street. “Hurry!” My mom was also yelling with fear. My sister Maria started crying. I tried to control myself. My dad and grandmother were hugging. We joined the other people running, moving away from the raging water. One kilometer from the raging sea, we arrived and joined others from all over in a large stadium. 
“ Protect us God. Protect us God. Keep us safe God.” We yelled the phrases all over again with panic and fear.” More fear was felt each time the ground rocked. We could see the water rising higher and higher, almost reaching the stadium’s yard. 
“ Are we going to die?” my sister said as she cried. 
“ Do not say that!” I replied. “But im so scared! My sister answered back. 
“ Sssssshhhhh, my mom hugged and comforted her. “ Everything will be fine.”  
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Lola, Dad, and Ivy are getting so worried that they think everyone is dead, including Maria and Lucia.
 
While Maria and Lucia walked to the hospital, they saw everyone there, like billions of people looking dead even though they were not dead with all that blood.
 
Lola, Carlos, and Ivy are trying to reach the hospital. Finally, Lola, Carlos, and Ivy reach the hospital! They were trying to find Maria and Lucia. While they looked around, they finally found Lucia and Maria. WHERE WERE YOU?! Crying out Lucia, Sorry, darling, we had trouble finding the hospital, said Dad.
 
A few hours later, the water had flown away. It was a really bad flood. Lucia, Maria, Carlos, Ivina, and Lola finally reached a new home and had a lovely day other than a TSUNAMI.
 
When we came back home, we got an alert, Mom! Alert: Coming! Said Lucia, "Coming! Said Carlos, "Coming !Said Ivina, Lola? Maria said, Oh, Lola is out, but what’s wrong, Maria? Said Lucia, a tsunami...
AGAIN?! 
Everyone gasped, oh no LOLA!