Rewrite the quoted email below to create a compelling case in requesting lending for a land loan despite the negatives

"Thank you again for advocating for us, we really appreciate you taking the time to call to get clarification that could help our efforts.
I am confident you have already relayed our conversation to the underwriters, I just wanted to follow up with whatever I can provide in hopes to help present a compelling case for us to obtain a land loan, which we believe will be a turning point in our efforts to rebuild our financial stability.
As mentioned over the years, our financial journey has been a rollercoaster ride, with both highs and lows working through to find our financial position. I understand that our current financial situation may raise some concerns with haveing a low credit score, a relatively high amount of credit card debt, and a negative net worth. However, it is essential to look beyond these numbers and consider the steps we are taking to rectify our situation. Back in 2021 we took the first step in selling our $570k house and purchased a 5th wheel in an effort to reduce our financial obligation and focus heavily on finding a location where we could live within better means on our journey to financial peace. With this we have had the chance to move around the country with the military to explore and we have easily found Augusta checks all our boxes and we want to plant roots. 

We have accumulated, in my eyes, a substantial amount of cash, specifically earmarked for the purpose keeping what we need to close on a land loan. I feel this exemplifies our commitment to ensuring a successful transaction and gives us the means to address our current financial obligations. Our goal is to utilize the excess cash remaining, after the closing, to reduce our credit card debt burden significantly.

Obtaining this land loan is not just about acquiring a piece of property. It symbolizes a fresh start and a concrete plan to rebuild our financial standing. By undertaking this project, we are demonstrating our dedication to making positive changes in our lives and increasing our net worth. We are eager to work relentlessly towards this goal.

In addition to our cash savings, we have elaborated on a comprehensive plan to address and manage our existing debts. We intend to allocate a significant portion of our income to pay down our credit card balances consistently and expeditiously. This strategy will allow us to gradually diminish the negative impact on our credit score while simultaneously strengthening our overall financial health.

Choosing to lend to us may seem like a leap of faith, but we firmly believe that we have learned from our life experiences and financial lessons and have become more financially responsible. We are aware that our credit history is not perfect, but we are ready to prove ourselves through our diligent efforts and dedication to paying off our debts.

Furthermore, I would like to emphasize that the land loan we seek is an investment in our future. With the acquisition of this property, we envision launching a long-term plan to improve our net worth and create a secure foundation for our financial future. We are genuinely committed to using this opportunity as a stepping stone towards attaining greater financial stability.

I kindly request that you reconsider your decision to not lend to us based solely on our credit score, credit card debt, and negative net worth. We assure you that we are fully invested in making significant changes and rectifying our financial situation.

Thank you for taking the time to review our loan request once more. I eagerly anticipate your positive response and the chance to prove ourselves worthy of your trust."