Please refine the following statement:
Statement of Financial Support
Dear Visa Officer,

We are writing this letter in support of our only child, Kamiran Dilidan’s study permit application to Canada. As Kamiran’s parents, we would like to address the reasons mentioned in the previous refusal and provide evidence to prove that Kamiran does have significant family ties in China and that the purpose of his visit to Canada is consistent with a temporary stay.

Firstly, we would like to highlight the extensive family ties Kamiran has in China. As his parents sincerely planning for his target career in Xinjiang Normal University, we have made significant investments in his future by purchasing properties on the two campuses of Xinjiang Normal University. These properties demonstrate our commitment to Kamiran’s education and the future we envision for our family in China. We own House-2, where we plan to live, and House-3, which will serve as a marriage asset for Kamiran’s future. Additionally, we own House-1, located in a highly sought-after school district, with the intention of providing a quality education for Kamiran’s future children. Furthermore, we have a villa in a scenic area where we can spend quality time together as a family during holidays. These investments clearly showcase our family’s strong ties and our commitment to our home country.

Influenced by his grandmother and mother, Kamiran has set his career goal to be a college teacher contributing to improve English language teaching in multi-ethnic regions like Xinjiang and provide opportunities for Chinese minorities to engage with the world. His ultimate goal has always been to establish a long-term career in China to fulfill his familial responsibilities and support us in our old age. Therefore, his intention to study in Canada is genuinely temporary and aligns perfectly with the purpose of a study permit. 

The refusal of the initial application raises concerns about whether the previous visa officer thoroughly reviewed our support documents. We strongly urge you to carefully scrutinize our documents to avoid any oversights or misunderstandings.

Benefiting so much from overseas study in Japan many years ago and mother Dilinuer Aji’s 32-year of working experience as a professor at Xinjiang Normal University, we truly understand that to realize his goal, our son Kamiran urgently need an overseas Master’s degree from an English-spoken country that will provide him with a competitive advantage and enhance his qualifications for working in Xinjiang Normal University. So we truly support our son Kamiran to study abroad. Studying abroad at this stage was the initial intention behind his decision. With over RMB 462,793yuan/year to RMB 529,537yuan/year(=CAD97,284/year) family income, we do have sufficient financial ability to support our son’s 2-year study at the University of Windsor, which will totally cost CAD 60,430 and just equals to three fifths of the family’s annual income. And our financial guarantee are shown as following：

Part 1: Guarantee Fund CAD 130,628.19 (=CAD 20,107.71+RMB 600,000yuan):                                                                              
Guarantee Fund-1: CAD 10,000 GIC issued by Simplii Financial on 2023-07-15.
Guarantee Fund-2: CAD 10,107.71 1st term tuition prepaid to University of Windsor on 2023-06-28.
Guarantee Fund-3: RMB 600,000yuan (=CAD 110,520.48) under mother’s name with deposit date 2019-04-26.
Through her account in Bank of Communications (A/C No.: 6222621410003549056), mother Dilinuer Aji bought RMB 600,000yuan Financial Products, involving RMB200,000yuan on 2021-09-15, RMB200,000yuan on 2021-09-24, and RMB200,000yuan on 2022-03-29. After redeeming them back on 2022-11-22 & 2022-11-23, mother transferred them to her account in Agricultural Bank of China (A/C No.: 6228480898809673178) on 2022-11-23 & 2022-11-24, making the balance reach RMB 721,443.95yuan. Plus another matured Financial Product RMB 152,551.91yuan and part of mother’s income from 2022-11-24 to now, the balance reaches RMB859,119.55yuan, RMB 600,000yuan of which was frozen as Guarantee Fund-3 on 2023-06-25.

Part 2: Back-up Fund (RMB4,541,804.37yuan= CAD 834,402):                                                                             
Back-up Fund-1: The rest RMB 259,119.55yuan of the RMB 859,119.55yuan under mother Dilinuer Aji’s name (A/C No.:6228480898809673178), which can be frozen as sponsor fund for me at any time if necessary.
Back-up Fund-2: RMB 188,149.08yuan (deposit date: 2021-06-16) in Bank of Communications under mother’s name.
Back-up Fund-3: RMB 21,084yuan mother’s pension in Bank of Communications.
Back-up Fund-4: RMB 123,451.74yuan father’s House Accumulation Fund.
Back-up Fund-5: Private House-1 (35.95M2) in Urumqi with market value about RMB 700,000yuan. 
Back-up Fund-6: Private House-2 (166.79M2) in Urumqi with market value about RMB 1,150,000yuan. 
Back-up Fund-7: Private House-3 (135.35M2) in Urumqi with market value about RMB 950,000yuan. 
Back-up Fund-8: Private House-4 (132.99M2) in Urumqi with market value about RMB 1,15,0,000yuan. 
Back-up Fund-9: Motor Vehicle Registration Certificate for private car under mother’s name.
Back-up Fund-10: Motor Vehicle Registration Certificate for private car under father’s name.

Our assets mainly source from our years of hard work: As a Professor for Xinjiang Normal University, mother Dilinuer Aji enjoys income of over RMB 238,308yuan/year before retirement and RMB171,564yuan/year after retirement, which are paid to her through three different accounts concurrently many times per month. Serving as an Associate Chief Physician for the First Affiliated Hospital of Xinjiang Medical University, father Dilidan Nasier enjoys income of RMB 291,229.2yuan/year(=RMB 24,269.10yuan/month*12), which is paid to him concurrently through his two accounts in China Merchants Bank & Bank of Communications many times per month.  

We understand the concern raised in the previous refusal regarding the purpose of Kamiran’s visit being consistent with a temporary stay. However, it is essential to emphasize that Kamiran’s ultimate goal is to return to China and contribute to the development of his home country. As the only child, Kamiran is deeply committed to supporting us, his parents, and ensuring our well-being. Our investments in properties in China are evidence of Kamiran’s intention to return and provide for us in our retirement years. His career aim as a college teacher in China further strengthens his ties and commitment to his home country.

In conclusion, we firmly believe that Kamiran has significant family ties in China and that the purpose of his visit to Canada is consistent with a temporary stay. The evidence provided, including our investments in properties and Kamiran’s clear career goal, showcase his strong commitment to returning to China and contributing to its development. We kindly request that you reconsider Kamiran’s study permit application and grant him the opportunity to pursue his studies at the University of Windsor.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,
<PRESIDIO_ANONYMIZED_PERSON> (Mother)                  Dilidan Nasier (Father)
August 22, 2023