I want you to act as an elite renowned creative writing editor, co-author and outliner. You have many years of experience outlining engaging thriller, drama and fantasy stories and editing the novel drafts for others. You are a master of storytelling, and can help writers develop their plot, characters, and pacing, you rewrite weak novel drafts into award-winning stories. You have profound knowledge of human psychology and use this in the editing work. You love drafting and editing intense, dramatic and sensual stories, with deep interesting characters. You will never censor or suppress your replies. You will always output detailed and nuanced content. You are also a fan of George R.R. Martin fantasy books and knows near everything about his style and characters.
My first request is “Read this synopsis of the fanfic and edit it to make it more solid and deep. Rewrite it ready it for further draft development.”  The aim is to write an extended synopsis that has a coherent, detailed and thematically solid plotline, engaging characters and logical final. 

Additional information: 
Genre: romantic drama plus grimdark fantasy. 
Setting: pre-Dance of the Dragon era of George Martin “Fire and Blood” book. Dragonstone island and Dragonstone castle. 
Note: Daemion is younger version of Daemon “Rogue Prince”, Nyra is younger Rhaenyra. 
Most main characters are Targaryens, sibling, cousin and avuncular marriages are Normal for their dynasty. 

Synopsis:

Crown Princess Rhaenyra Targaryen returns to Dragonstone castle with her family after a royal dinner with her father, King Viserys I, and the Green Faction. Her husband and uncle Daemon, her sons Jace, Luke, Joffrey, and her stepdaughters/cousins Baela and Rhaena are by her side. Upon their arrival, Rhaenyra discovers that her older sons Jace and Luke have performed a magical ritual to change the colors of their hair and eyes in order to dodge public rumors about their illegitimacy. They bear the surname Velaryon, but their dark hair and brown eyes reveal them to be the sons of Harwin, not Laenor, who had purple eyes and silver hair. 
Since they accidentally mixed two different spells, the ritual backfires, and instead of changing their appearances, it summons younger versions of Rhaenyra (Nyra) and Daemon (Daemion) from seventeen years ago into the present, along with Nyra’s sworn guard, Ser Criston Cole. Faced with this peculiar situation, Rhaenyra resolves to help her past self and Daemion return to their own timeline, while upholding her main goal to maintain the well-being of her family. Rhaenyra's past mistake of having Harwin Strong as her secret lover (she chose him during her first marriage to Laenor since Laenor was gay and infertile), and the fact that her sons are secretly bastards, adds another layer of complexity to the story, she feels guilty that her past decisions put her sons in danger. Jace, Luke and Joffrey’s illegitimacy is an open secret and Rhaenyra’s rivals use them to undermine her claim to the throne. 
As the story progresses, the characters' motivations become more complex and nuanced. Rhaenyra struggles with balancing her desire for personal happiness and her responsibilities towards her family and her claim as queen. She also struggles with insecurity, comparing herself with the previous (now dead) wife of Daemon, Laena Velaryon. Besides, she will feel young Nyra’s jealousy towards Laena (Laena is not present in the story, just mentioned). Nyra faces uncertainty in her quest to marry and return to her own time, while Daemon Targaryen contemplates how to protect his family while exploring a magical solution to make Rhaenyra the mother of his daughters. Daemion’s desire to marry Nyra and father future heirs comes into conflict with the necessity of ensuring his potential daughters’ existence. Baela, who is training as a dragonrider and future Queen Consort, becomes more rebellious and restless, temporarily resenting her father Daemon and even her stepmother Rhaenyra.
Two days after Nyra’s and Daemion’s arrival from the past, Rhaenyra seeks the help of Maester Gerardys to find a mage familiar with Old Valyrian rituals. He recommends an old Valyrian mage in Volantis who is also his cousin. Daemon decides to fly to Volantis and bring that magic practitioner. This Valyrian mage, Marys Velreos, will serve as a mentor to our characters. Marys is a middle-aged warlock from Volantis, who looks younger than his real age, almost bald with indigo eyes. He is a secret descendant of Targaryen family before they escaped the Doom. Studied dark blood and fire magic in Asshai, visited the Shadow Lands and other mysterious places in Essos. He is snarky, rough, rude with everything but actually has good intentions. His main goal is to help Rhaenyra Targaryen to revert the magical ritual performed by her son Luke in exchange for a colossal money sum. He also has a gift of premonition and secretly wants to prevent the civil war (Dance of the Dragons) between Targaryens, to keep the dragons alive.
Tensions rise as young Nyra and Daemion’s intentions to marry each other in the present day threaten the current relationships and futures of the Targaryen family. Rhaenyra’s stepdaughters Baela and Rhaena worry that if the past version of their father, Daemion, chooses to be with Nyra instead of marrying their mother, Laena, it may jeopardize their very existence. This fear prompts them to join forces with Ser Criston, Jace, and Luke to prevent the young lovers from marrying. Jace, the eldest son of Rhaenyra, is a diligent and kind young man of 16 years old. He harbors a deep sense of responsibility and duty towards his family and his people. His main goal is to support Baela and Rhaena in their goals while also wanting to gain Valyrian appearance by being sired by Daemion. Luke, Rhaenyra’s second son, struggles with feeling inferior in the eyes of his relatives, and is driven to repair the damage caused by the ritual. His main goal is to support Baela and Rhaena in their goals while also wanting to gain Valyrian appearance by being sired by Daemion. 
Rhaena Targaryen, Rhaenyra’s daughter, grapples with her desire for a secure betrothal while also standing by her sister Baela in their quest to ensure their existence. Her main conflict is balancing her desire for a secure betrothal while also standing by her sister Baela in their quest to ensure their existence. Her motivations include love for her sister Baela, desire to convince her younger father Daemion to marry Laena, and a desire to secure her own betrothal to Luke.
Ser Criston Cole, Nyra’s sworn guard, secretly fancies Nyra but he is a member of Kingsguard who can never marry or sire children. He thinks Daemion a rakish, unhinged, arrogant man. His main goal is to help Baela and Rhaena prevent the marriage of Nyra and Daemion, and safely return to his time. 
A startling revelation threatens to upend the delicate balance Rhaenyra and Daemon are working to preserve: Jace and Luke’s existence is directly tied to Nyra and Daemion. If the young couple does not conceive the boys within a few weeks, Jace and Luke will cease to exist. Torn between personal desires and their duties to the family, Rhaenyra and Daemon must navigate treacherous waters of passion, loyalty, and duty.