Make my essay perfect huan writing narrowtive styled and make it to 700words without losing any content of it and fix all the grammar and unclarified sentences. I looked into the tour manager’s eyes pleadingly, but he said, “I can’t hire you. You’re too young! And you don’t have any experience!”

“How am I supposed to get experience if I don’t get hired in the first place?” I thought, as I left. This was my eleventh interview, and I was giving up on becoming a tour guide.

It rained incessantly in Ulaanbaatar. Some people even brought out their long jackets, almost to say that the tourist season was over. I was going through job listings for convenience store clerks when I got a call from an unknown number. “We have an urgent opening,” they said. “You are to lead thirty-five Singaporean seniors. Can you ride a horse?” “Yes!” I answered. Then I remembered that I’d never ridden a horse before. But I was so desperate that I answered every subsequent question with a “Yes, I can do it!”

I arrived almost late on my first day. My new boss, who turned out to be an unsmiling Singaporean gentleman, just pointed to the bus. As I walked into the bus, my thirty-five senior tourists, who were up and about chatting, suddenly rushed to take their respectives seats, as if I was their stern teacher. I sat in the front, and the lady who sitting closest to me turned to be one of the chattiest of the whole group. She pointed to one of her fellow **travelers, and said that he was the founder of the World Toilet Organization, and that even the Mongolian president wanted to talk to him because sanitation is an issue in Mongolia. I tried to introduce myself in Chinese to make a good first impression, but my boss looked at me angrily and then away.

We spent the first few days in Ulaanbaatar, visiting museums and monasteries. Whenever one of my tourists was staring at something in a museum, I would immediately go over and and start explaining. This became such a habit that I even explained things that weren’t being exhibited, including an ordinary stove that was in the Bogd Khan Museum.

Then we drove to a tourist camp in the countryside. My tourists constantly took pictures of what looked to me like boring empty steppes. Going to the country meant that I had to finally face the issue of riding a horse. I was going to brave it out. *“I’m a Mongol. Riding is in my blood. What could go wrong?”* I thought.

it turned out that a few of the more senior tourists didn’t want to go. “”

But then the guide at the camp said, “So if some of your tourists don’t want to go, maybe you should stay? Maybe I should take over the horse riding trip.”

I said okay.

One grandma kept asking me, “Can I vaatar, ya?” I kept smiling at her and scratching my head. But then my boss handed her a bottle of water, and looked at me *angrily.* Eventually, I learned how to ask “ya” too. I didn’t even realized myself and when did I started to talk  “Can I help you, ya?”  like this.  

*One Grandma, who always notice me that I was busy not eating, come give me the leftover food force me to eat. However, my boss was looking furious about it and rejected the food for me. That day, I didn’t eat anything,  I was about to sleep with empty stomach however, that night my boss called me to his house and he said I should eat with him. I was skeptical about his sudden kindness but my stomach didn’t hesitate to eat. It was most delicious ramen ever i had. Maybe because my boss was starting to acknowledging me.* 

It’s really funny to remember that one grandma kept telling me to marry her grand daughter and showing me her photo. *But the real interesting was that she was over 30. I cannot help but to generously reject with blush.* 

Last day of trip arrived when I started to comfortable with my tourists and boss. All of my tourists gave me warm hug and some grandma’s eyes were filled with tears. I didn’t acknowledge myself as a guide however their respond was like slapped me to realize it. Even my boss proposed me another job. I cannot believe what happened. 

After the trip I felt so much joy and relief, thanked god, bought present for my grandparents who were waiting for me for weeks. Giving present with my very first own salary makes me think like I achieved the most honorable prize ever.