润色如下内容：Financial decision influences both individuals and organisations and an understanding of finance seems to me to be one of the most important ways in which resources can be generated and managed. Individual decisions of saving or spending, business incentives, even government policy is based on finance. I believe a degree related to finance will help me excel in many different fields of work including accountancy, business, economics and management. Coming from China, a developing country with a fast pace, I have been inspired by the concept of microfinance in a book I read.Dr. Yunus’s unconventional approach to lending money to entrepreneurs who were too poor to qualify for a traditional bank loan have motivated me to seek a financial degree so that I can have a career which can make a positive difference in people's lives.

As a student with accounting background,I have learned a variety of courses such as Managerial Economics,Macroeconomic Policy and Performance,Financial Accounting,Date Analysis and Optimisation,Financial Decision Making and so on,which has laid me a solid foundation for my further study.I am also interested in exploring relative academic field,so I have abundant research experience based on what I learn. When finish research paper on An analysis of the determinants of the price of small cars in the Northern Irish used car market, my aim was to provide verifiable insights that can act as a guide to new participants in the Northern Irish used car market and better inform the opinions of experienced used car buyers. Together with my group members, we then completed a multivariate regression including all the independent variables to find if together they have significant explanatory power in determining the price of a used car. Personally, I benefited from the academic process,ranging from academic improvement to group cooperation.Based on these experiences,I believe that I can make some contributions to the field I like. 

Except what should be learned,I tend to explore the area about finance in my spare time. For example, I would like to read various books so that I can know more about financial world as well as some attracting examples. Among all the book I read, Financial Crises and Periods of Industrial and Commercial written left me a deep impression as it treats capital as a complete set of economic action models and the author creatively introduces the operational laws of capital from five perspectives, bringing me a different perspective.What’s more,I pay attention to financial news,especially those about corporate business,aiming to learn cutting-edge operations from successful practice. 

During university,I was fortunate enough to have an experience of home business where I ran pancakes and fruit delivery with friends in the United Kingdom. During the process, I was able to apply what I learned into practice. For instance, except managing the operation of the platform, purchasing raw materials and dealing with customer demands,I knew about market and cost control.Additionally, this experience helped me to become more confident and to get experience of working in a team. Sometimes it required me to socialize with all sorts of people from different backgrounds and ages and to handle situations in a professional and mature manner. I believe that this would help me adjust to a business environment.However, I realized that there was more to learn if we would like to make the home business into a company. 

I am keen to extend my knowledge, skills and understanding while learning from others and working with them. I feel that postgraduate study is definitely the experience which will help me to do this. I am aware that the world of finance, business and economics is ever changing and my chosen degree subject will prove to be challenging but I look forward to overcoming those challenges.

I am heartedly grateful for what I have been able to learn through my undergraduate years, but I do not believe that should be the end of my education journey. Knowing that Corporate Finance MSc at Queen Mary University of London provides both basic and advanced courses on education,which collectively constitute the most dynamic sector of the cultural economy in London. I sincerely hope to be allowed to study at your university, which will enable me to explore the latest developments in the theory, strategies and practice of various industries. I understand that Queen Mary University of London is strong in this area, so I believe that if I am lucky enough to be admitted, I will be able to learn more senior professional knowledge and have access to more quality resources. My commitment to excellence, passion, and background could qualify me as a member of this program and will contribute to your esteemed program. Sincerely hope that I can get this opportunity. Thanks for your time and consideration.