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My journey into research commenced in 2021 when I actively engaged in online
workshops focusing on Analysis and Biostatistics. These courses not only
equipped me with invaluable skills in article writing but also ignited my passion
for delving deeper into the realms of scientific inquiry. Encouraged by my thesis
advisor and professors, I explored various national congresses, immersing myself
in the diverse fields of Orthodontics, periodontology. This exposure nurtured my
understanding of academic discourse and further inspired my pursuit of research
excellence.
In the field of orthodontics, Driven by this newfound enthusiasm, I collaborated
with a revered professor from my university to publish a comprehensive
orthodontics malocclusion book, marking my initial foray into scholarly
publications. Much of my book deals with advanced and up-to-date treatments
Orthodontics has been discussed. In this book, we have collected new treatment
methods that have been reviewed in different orthodontic books. One of these
methods of treatment is aligners, which is closely related to the project proposed
by Dr. El-Bialy. Here I want to explain a summary of aligners and their use and
point out why this proposed project needs to be done.
The increase in the number of adult orthodontic patients has increased the
demand for beautiful and comfortable alternatives to orthodontic brackets. With
the rapid advancement of technology in materials and manufacturing
techniques, today's orthodontic aligners can fulfill this demand for invisible
orthodontics.
Until now, orthodontic aligners were only used for very limited displacement of
teeth and in the final stages of orthodontic treatments. Today, with the research
and advances we have made in dental manufacturing techniques, materials and
software, orthodontic aligners are used in the treatment of more complex
orthodontic problems called invisible orthodontics.
In traditional orthodontic methods, we use metal brackets that stick to the teeth
and with the help of a wire that passes through them, we move the teeth to be
in their proper position. But the aligners are transparent and colorless molds that
are specially made for us in the dental prosthetics laboratory. Aligners are placed
on the teeth and move the teeth with a low but continuous force.
However, there is a need to further investigate the advantages and
disadvantages of these aligners.
On the other hand, Dr. El-Bialy has reviewed orthodontic treatments and their
effectiveness in his articles. One of these articles is "Do orthodontic fixed
retainers guarantee the stability of dental alignment at the end of orthodontic
treatment?". What Dr. EL-Bialy articles have in common with my book is that we
have both examined the types of orthodontic treatments and their advantages
and disadvantages. Therefore, I was eager to cooperate with Dr. El-Bialy in his
proposed project.
In the Field of periodontology, I have published my thesis Applied Sciences
journal titled "Photobiomodulation effect of different diode Wavelength on the
proliferation of Human Buccal Fat Pad mesenchymal Cells" focused on
decreasing healing time of ulcers in the oral cavity and periodontal diseases
through the use of Buccal Fat pad cells.
Enrolling in this program promises an immersive experience where I can deepen
my understanding of dentistry with more details. Armed with advanced
techniques and knowledge, I envision addressing complex medical conditions
with innovative solutions, ultimately contributing meaningfully to the healthcare
landscape.
In essence, I am driven by an unwavering belief that this Master program will not
only enhance my expertise but also empower me to make significant
contributions to the field of dentistry. I am eager to embark on this
transformative academic journey, armed with determination, passion, and a
thirst for groundbreaking research.
Thank you for considering my application. I am enthusiastic about the prospect
of joining the esteemed academic community at the University of Alberta and
contributing to the vibrant scientific discourse within the MSc in Dentistry
Program.
Warm regards,
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