Using following paragraphs: It was never going to be long before Emma would meet her arch-rival Sara for a third time. Left to myself and Sara’s manager Danny, both women would have probably fought once more before the rematch happened, but a group of rich catfight fans had got together to form their own club and they had made an offer to host the match that neither woman could refuse. The match was to be held in a neutral venue and would be funded entirely by this group. Both women would receive $50,000 for taking part in the match; the winner would receive an additional $50,000. The rules were to be simple as well, no rules, no time limit to a knockout. There would be no rounds, no submissions, no breaks in the action; just two powerful, beautiful women slugging it out to decide who was the best fighter.

 

It didn’t take long for a venue to be found; we would travel to Hong Kong where the match would take place out of hours at a private squash club. The fight itself would be held inside the Perspex walled exhibition court where wrestling mats would be put down. The two women and the referee would be locked inside the court with the crowd able to move around the sides of the court to get the best possible, up close view of the action. Attire (or lack of it) had been decided on too; the two women would face each other naked apart from a pair of knee-high converse boots each.

 

We arrived in Hong Kong a few days early to allow time to acclimatise to the sultry, humid conditions. We knew that the squash club would not be air conditioned for the match, so the heat might play a part if the match became a long one, so the more used to the heat Emma was, the better in my view. Doubtless Sara would be following the same plan. Emma also planned to come in a little heavier than normal for this match, reasoning that she could tire Sara out if she made her carry the extra weight around. I wasn’t convinced that approach was the best and was concerned it might backfire, but Emma wouldn’t be swayed from that idea.

 

On the day of the match, we arrived at the venue where we were shown to a locker room for our use. It was about 45 minutes until the scheduled start of the match and with little to do other than lace up her long converse boots, I tried to talk tactics with Emma but I was far from convinced that she was listening to me. She was ‘in the zone’, ready to mix it up in an anything goes brawl; I think her only tactic was likely to be to try and hurt Sara more than Sara could hurt her. Time passed slowly until we were called out into the main room, Emma entering the squash court first while I took my seat in the raised seating area. A small crowd of no more than 30 was crowded close to the walls of the court anxious to get the best view of the action. Emma looked composed and ready as she stretched a little and then leaned against the wall of the court, naked apart from the long black converse boots, she looked a curvaceous powerhouse who was itching to get the match started.

 

She wouldn’t have to wait long either as Sara emerged from a locker room on the other side of the court; the blonde American strutting confidently on to the mats to face Emma. The two women eyed each other across the mats as the MC for the evening started to make his introductions. ‘Gentlemen’ he addressed the entirely male audience ‘this is the ultimate catfight grudge match. It will be fought, not time limit, no holds barred and it will be fought to a knockout; a count of 20 will result in a knockout victory. Out two fighters for this grudge match have fought twice before with each claiming one victory. First of all, on my left from England is Emma Baines. Emma is a former Smythe catfight champion; she stands 5 feet 10 inches tall, weighs in at 172lbs and measures 40E-27-38. Her catfighting record stands at 33 wins and 12 defeats.’ Polite applause filled the room as Emma stepped forward to acknowledge the crowd; the MC continued ‘and her opponent on my right from the United States of America is Sara. Sara is a former Southern Belles catfight champion, she stands 5 feet 9 inches tall, weighs 160lbs and measures 38DD-26-38. Her catfight record stands at 26 wins with 8 defeats.’

With that, the MC left the court, the referee symbolically locked the door, and the fight was on.

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