private string GetNewValue(Deal deal, KaskoModificationsInBasket modification)
{
    if ((KaskoModificationCodes)modification.ModificationListForKaskoCode == KaskoModificationCodes.PersonNameOrBirthDateChange && modification.ChangePath == "Driver.Subject.IndividualEntity.Person.LastName")
    {
        var driversNames = deal.AutoDeal.Drivers.Select(d => d.Subject.IndividualEntity.Person.GetFullName()).ToList();
        return string.Join(", ", driversNames);
    }

    if ((KaskoModificationCodes)modification.ModificationListForKaskoCode == KaskoModificationCodes.PersonNameOrBirthDateChange && modification.ChangePath == "Insurant.Subject.IndividualEntity.Person.LastName")
    {
        var insurant = deal.GetInsurantPerson();
        return insurant.GetFullName();
    }

    if ((KaskoModificationCodes)modification.ModificationListForKaskoCode == KaskoModificationCodes.PersonNameOrBirthDateChange && modification.ChangePath == "Owner.Subject.IndividualEntity.Person.LastName")
    {
        var owner = deal.GetOwner();
        return owner.GetPerson().GetFullName();
    }

    if ((KaskoModificationCodes)modification.ModificationListForKaskoCode == KaskoModificationCodes.InsurantOwnerIdentityDocumentChange)
    {
        var identityDocument = modification.ChangePath.Contains(nameof(deal.Insurant)) ?
            deal.Insurant.IdentityDocument : deal.GetOwner().IdentityDocument;
        return $"Серия: {identityDocument?.Series} №: {identityDocument?.Number} дата выдачи: {identityDocument?.DateIssue?.ToString("dd.MM.yyyy")}";
    }

    if ((KaskoModificationCodes)modification.ModificationListForKaskoCode == KaskoModificationCodes.AutoTsIdentityCardChange)
    {
        var tsIdentityCard = deal.AutoDeal.TsIdentityCard;
        return $"Серия: {tsIdentityCard?.Series} №: {tsIdentityCard?.Number}{(tsIdentityCard?.DateOfIssued != null ? $" дата выдачи: {tsIdentityCard.DateOfIssued.Value.ToString("dd.MM.yyyy")}" : string.Empty)}";
    }

    return _pathManager.GetValueByPath(deal, ModifyPath(modification.ChangePath)).ToString();
}

        public PrntKaskoAdditionalAgreementViewModel GetKaskoModificationAdditionalAgreementViewModel(Basket basket)
        {
            var agreement = new PrntKaskoAdditionalAgreementViewModel();
            var deal = basket.GetKaskoDeal();
            var auto = deal.GetAuto();
            var drivers = deal.AutoDeal.Drivers;
            var insurant = deal.GetInsurantPerson();
            var tsIdentityCard = deal.AutoDeal.TsIdentityCard;

            var modifications = _queryService.GetByExpression<KaskoModificationsInBasket>(
                x => x.Where(m => m.BasketNumber == basket.Number));
            var agreements = _queryService.GetByExpression<KaskoModificationsAgreementsInBasket>(
                x => x.Where(m => m.BasketNumber == basket.Number));

            var needToPrintRiskDegreeChangeAgreement = modifications.Any(x => _riskDegreeChanges.Contains(x.ModificationListForKaskoCode));
            var needToPrintDriversListChangeAgreement = modifications.Any(x => _driversListChanges.Contains(x.ModificationListForKaskoCode));
            var needToPrintAutoRegistrationChangeAgreement = modifications.Any(x => _autoRegistrationChanges.Contains(x.ModificationListForKaskoCode));
            var needToPrintAutoStartChangeAgreement = modifications.Any(x => _autoStartChanges.Contains(x.ModificationListForKaskoCode));
            var needToPrintInformationChangeAgreement = modifications.Any(x => _informationChanges.Contains(x.ModificationListForKaskoCode));

            agreement = new PrntKaskoAdditionalAgreementViewModel
            {
                IsPreview = !_notPreviewStatusTypes.Contains(deal.DealStatusCode),
                IsMultidrive = deal.AutoDeal.IsMultidrive,
                PolicyNumber = deal.PolicyNumber,
                PolicyDate = deal.DateStart.Value,
                ChangesStartDate = deal.ChangesStartDate.Value,
                RiskDegreeChangeAgreement = new PrntChangeAgreementViewModel
                {
                    IsVisible = needToPrintRiskDegreeChangeAgreement,
                    Number = needToPrintRiskDegreeChangeAgreement ? GetAgreementNumber(agreements, ModificationAgreementNames.RiskDegreeChangeAgreement) : null
                },
                DriversListChangeAgreement = new PrntChangeAgreementViewModel
                {
                    IsVisible = needToPrintDriversListChangeAgreement,
                    Number = needToPrintDriversListChangeAgreement ? GetAgreementNumber(agreements, ModificationAgreementNames.DriversListChangeAgreement) : null
                },
                AutoRegistrationChangeAgreement = new PrntChangeAgreementViewModel
                {
                    IsVisible = modifications.Any(x => _autoRegistrationChanges.Contains(x.ModificationListForKaskoCode)),
                    Number = needToPrintAutoRegistrationChangeAgreement ? GetAgreementNumber(agreements, ModificationAgreementNames.AutoRegistrationChangeAgreement) : null
                },
                AutoStartChangeAgreement = new PrntChangeAgreementViewModel
                {
                    IsVisible = modifications.Any(x => _autoStartChanges.Contains(x.ModificationListForKaskoCode)),
                    Number = needToPrintAutoStartChangeAgreement ? GetAgreementNumber(agreements, ModificationAgreementNames.AutoStartChangeAgreement) : null
                },
                InformationChangeAgreement = new PrntChangeAgreementViewModel
                {
                    IsVisible = modifications.Any(x => _informationChanges.Contains(x.ModificationListForKaskoCode)),
                    Number = needToPrintInformationChangeAgreement ? GetAgreementNumber(agreements, ModificationAgreementNames.InformationChangeAgreement) : null
                },
                Auto = new PrntAutoViewModel
                {
                    RegNumber = auto.RegistrationNumber,
                    OriginalKeysAmount = auto.OriginalKeysAmount.ToString(),
                },
                Insurant = new PrntInsurantViewModel
                {
                    LastName = insurant.LastName,
                    Name = insurant.Name,
                    MiddleName = insurant.MiddleName
                },
                TsIdentityCard = new PrntTsIdentityCardViewModel
                {
                    CardTypeShortName = tsIdentityCard.TsIdentityCardType.Name,
                    Series = tsIdentityCard.Series,
                    Number = tsIdentityCard.Number,
                    DateOfIssued = tsIdentityCard.DateOfIssued.GetValueOrDefault()
                },
                Drivers = drivers.Select(d => new PrntKaskoAdditionalAgreementDriverViewModel
                {
                    FullName = d.Subject.IndividualEntity.Person.GetFullName(),
                    DateOfBirth = d.Subject.IndividualEntity.Person.DateOfBirth.ToString(),
                    DrivingExperienceDateStart = d.DrivingExperiences.Last()?.DrivingExperienceDateStart.ToString(),
                    SexCode = d.Subject.IndividualEntity.Person.SexCode,
                    IsMaried = d.Subject.IndividualEntity.Person.IsMaried,
                    HasChildren = d.Subject.IndividualEntity.Person.HasChildren,
                }).ToList(),
                Modifications = modifications.Where(x => _informationChanges.Contains(x.ModificationListForKaskoCode)).Select(m => new PrntModificationViewModel
                {
                    ChangeName = m.ChangeName,
                    NewValue = GetNewValue(deal, m)
                }).ToList()
            };

            return agreement;
        }


У меня сейчас изменения по водителям выводится не корректно:
1. Стороны пришли к соглашению считать верным по Договору страхования:
В разделе ФИО водителя: Бульбар Анастасияа Геннадьевнаа, Лобачевс Викторр Викторовичч, Бульбаа
Екатеринаа Олеговнаа
В разделе ФИО водителя: Бульбар Анастасияа Геннадьевнаа, Лобачевс Викторр Викторовичч, Бульбаа
Екатеринаа Олеговнаа
В разделе ФИО водителя: Бульбар Анастасияа Геннадьевнаа, Лобачевс Викторр Викторовичч, Бульбаа
Екатеринаа Олеговнаа

Надо что бы либо была только одна строка с измененными фио через запятую, либо в каждой новой строке была только одно фио