Ima give you context of our last chat:

I’m gonna give you an sample of an research paper after I gave you the outline ok? So don’t type anything yet.

I. Introduction
A. Attention-grabber (Consider starting with a vivid description of a “day in the life”)
B. Background Information
C. Thesis (Why should someone else consider this college / career?)
II. College / Training - Overview (Explanation)
A. Location (research)
B. GPA Requirements for Admission (research)
C. Cost to Attend (research)
D. Campus Life (research)
III. College - Reason #1 Someone Else Should Attend College / Training Facility (Persuasion)
A. Identify the reason
B. Examples to illustrate your reason (research)
C. Tie back to thesis (Why this college / training facility is a better choice than others)
IV. College - Reason #2 Someone Else Should Attend College / Training Facility (Persuasion)
A. Identify the reason
B. Examples to illustrate your reason (research)
C. Tie back to thesis (Why this college / training facility is a better choice than others)
V. Career - Overview (Explanation)
A. Education Requirements (research)
B. Salary (research)
C. Skills (research)
D. “A Day in the Life” (research)
Based on your outline, once you’re ready, you can present your research paper draft here. Just provide the details according to the sections described in your outline for feedback or any further assistance you might need.
Heres the other half, once again don’t type anything yet.

VI. Career - Current Issue (Explanation)
A. Identify Issue
B. Examples to illustrate the issue (research)
C. Explain how we might address this issue
VII. Career - Reason #1 Someone Else Should Consider This Career (Persuasion)
A. Identify the reason
B. Examples to illustrate your reason (research)
C. Tie back to thesis (Why this career is a better choice than others)
VIII. Career - Reason #2 Someone Else Should Consider This Career (Persuasion)
A. Identify the reason
B. Examples to illustrate your reason (research)
C. Tie back to thesis (Why this career is a better choice than others)
IX. Career - Reason #3 Someone Should Consider This Career (Persuasion)
A. Identify the reason
B. Examples to illustrate your reason (research)
C. Tie back to thesis (Why this career is a better choice than others)
X. Conclusion
A. Overview of why someone else should consider this career
B. Final comment about the importance of the career moving forward
It seems you’ve outlined a comprehensive model for a persuasive research paper covering both educational pathways and a specified career. This structure is well-thought-out, balancing informational content with persuasive elements to make a compelling argument for choosing a particular college, training facility, or career path.

Now, if you’re ready, you can start filling in the sections with your research findings, arguments, and personal insights. Remember to support each claim with evidence, whether it’s statistical data, expert opinions, or real-life examples. This will not only enrich your paper but also strengthen its persuasiveness.

After you’ve drafted your paper, I’m here to help with any questions you might have or to offer feedback and suggestions for improvement. Whether it’s clarity, coherence, logical flow, or any other aspect of your writing, feel free to share!
Now heres what the Annotated Bibliography is this is whats gonna go in the parts of the outline in the actual research paper where it says (research). again dont type anything yet.

Annotated Bibliography
“Apply to APU.” https://www.alaskapacific.edu/apply/?program=43356.
Accessed 18 Jan. 2024.
This how-to application page provides crucial information for applying to the Marine & Environmental Sciences Program Bachelor’s Program. It outlines the GPA required to apply, the application fee, and the necessary documents to provide in a step-by-step process for applying to this program. Additional details include transfer information for undergraduates from other colleges. The webpage also lists application deadlines for the fall, spring, and summer semesters.

The information that will be particularly useful in the Career Research Project includes the minimum GPA requirement of 2.5 on an unweighted 4.0 scale. The process of uploading transcripts and other documents in a specified order will also be beneficial for readers interested in my paper about joining the Environmental Science program. Furthermore, the location (Office of Admissions, Alaska Pacific University, 4101 University Drive, Anchorage, AK 99508) or email address (<PRESIDIO_ANONYMIZED_EMAIL_ADDRESS>) for sending all the application materials is indicated.

“Marine & Environmental Sciences Bachelor of Science.” https://www.alaskapacific.edu/programs/marine-and-environmental-sciences/. Accessed 30. Jan. 2024.
This informational page for the Bachelor’s degree in Marine & Environmental Science provides an overview of careers someone with this degree could pursue, including environmental law, government positions such as a ranger or researcher, and marine biology. The website presents a degree roadmap including the requirements for this degree. There are five available concentrations: Aquarium and Husbandry Science, Ecology, Earth and Climate, Fisheries, and Marine Biology.

It is noteworthy that while working towards this degree, students can establish connections with employers in Anchorage, leading to full-time employment in various industries and paid internships. Simultaneously, students develop knowledge, critical thinking, and hands-on skills that enhance job market competitiveness. The diverse ecosystems along the coast of Anchorage are instrumental in supporting the research for the paper, especially when studying various animals and environments integral to a Marine & Environmental Science degree.

“Student Housing.” https://www.alaskapacific.edu/campus-life/housing/.
Accessed 1. Feb. 2024.
Alaska Pacific University has specific requirements for living on campus. Students who live more than 60 miles from the university must reside on campus for two years. Exceptions to this requirement include having family within 60 miles of the university, being married, having children, or facing medical hardship. Students may request a specific roommate, and APU will attempt to accommodate such requests.
There are three different housing options: North Atwood Hall, Segelhorst Hall, and University Village. North Atwood Hall offers Private Bedroom ($4,516) and Double Bedroom ($4,237) options per semester. Segelhorst Hall offers Private Bedrooms ($3,950) per semester. University Village includes Private Bedroom ($3,950), Double Bedroom ($3,280), and Ski House Premium Private ($4,660) options per semester.

“Alaska Pacific University Tuition & Cost”. https://www.collegesimply.com/colleges/alaska/alaska-pacific-university/price/.
Accessed 30. Jan. 2024.
This webpage contains pricing information for the campus dorms, tuition, room & board fees, textbooks, etc. It contains the student loan price amount if people ever needed to know how much money they could borrow to pay for their college tuition. Speaking about the money being given, the webpage contains financial aid information. The site also has a calculator for all of these pricing information so it could calculate estimated costs of college tuition.

The in-state and out of state tuition for Alaska Pacific University have the same price. Also it outlines the costs and financial aid information for attending Alaska Pacific University. Total cost for full-time students is $34,670 per year, including the tuition, room & board, books, and other personal expenses. The website takes note that all full-time undergraduates receive financial aid, averaging $13,179 per student. Average net price for students with grants or scholarship aid was $20,944 in 2019/2020. The source serves as a helpful resource for prospective students to understand the costs and financial aid opportunities available at the university for the research paper if they consider the career.
Based on the annotations you’ve provided, it’s clear you have useful sources to support different sections of your research paper. The information from these sources will allow you to comprehensively address the GPA requirements, program details, campus life, career opportunities following graduation, and financial considerations related to attending Alaska Pacific University for a Bachelor’s degree in Marine & Environmental Sciences.

For structuring your paper, you now have concrete data to back up the necessary sections, such as:

- College / Training - Overview (Explanation): Utilize information from the “Apply to APU” and “Marine & Environmental Sciences Bachelor of Science” pages to detail the program specifics, including GPA requirements, location, and available concentrations which make this program attractive.

- Campus Life (Research): The “Student Housing” page provides valuable details regarding living accommodations and policies, enriching your discussion about campus life.

- Cost to Attend (Research): Information from the “Alaska Pacific University Tuition & Cost” will be crucial in discussing financial aspects—tuition fees, room and board, financial aid opportunities, etc., to consider when applying to this college.

Remember to quote or paraphrase this information accurately in your paper, citing it according to your required citation style, to avoid plagiarism. These sources not only enrich your paper but also provide it with a strong foundation of factual data, making your arguments more compelling.

In your persuasive sections, you can tie back the program’s unique offerings, financial aid opportunities, the vibrant campus life, and the strong career prospects as key reasons why someone should consider this college and career path. This approach not only adheres to your outlined structure but also ensures each section of your paper is informative, well-researched, and persuasive.
Each new paragraph is an an paragraph that corresponds to the outline. As you can see I have only typed 6 paragraphs and started typing the 7th one so could you please finish the rest with the same writing style and perplexity as with what has been written? Also follow the outline.

Studying With The Fishies
Sploosh! A first time diver dives in the ocean with their SCUBA gear and they adjust to the overwhelming stimulus of their new environment. The bubbling of the air leaves their diving regulator as it’s rising up with a dome shape on its path upwards. The diver collects a sample of coral for the research lab back at the surface. I would aspire to achieve this profession because I’m tired of sitting in one place, not contributing to research, and not exploring the world. Becoming a marine biologist would take a lot of skill acquisition such as a SCUBA diving certification, a sense of adventure, and data collection skills. Being in a career of marine biology would have the potential to travel across the world and see interesting creatures that most people would never be able to see up close in its natural habitat.

Being in such a career would most likely require being near an ocean, that’s why Alaska Pacific University is a great choice to pursue a marine biology career, due to it being only five miles away from the ocean. The college is located in Anchorage, Alaska with beautiful green scenery surrounded by mountains with lots of wildlife. The minimum GPA requirement to get accepted is 2.5 on an unweighted 4.0 scale. Alaska Pacific University has an acceptance rate of 99%, so the average person would not have to worry about getting rejected. The in-state and out of state tuition for Alaska Pacific University have the same price. The total cost for full-time students is $34,670 per year, including the tuition, room & board, books, and other personal expenses. Almost all full-time undergraduates receive financial aid, averaging $13,179 per student. Average net price for students with grants or scholarship aid was $20,944 in 2019/2020. After the average aid from the total cost is subtracted ($7,765), attending the university isn’t really pricey even if the student is coming from another state (Alaska Pacific University Tuition & Cost). Alaska Pacific University has specific requirements for living on campus. Students who live more than 60 miles from the university must live on campus for two years. Exceptions to this requirement include having family within 60 miles of the university, being married, having children, or facing medical hardship. If an undergraduate chooses to live on campus they can request a specific roommate, and APU will attempt to accommodate such requests. There are three different housing options: North Atwood Hall, Segelhorst Hall, and University Village. North Atwood Hall offers Private Bedroom ($4,516) and Double Bedroom ($4,237) options per semester. Segelhorst Hall offers Private Bedrooms ($3,950) per semester. University Village includes Private Bedroom ($3,950), Double Bedroom ($3,280), and Ski House Premium Private ($4,660) options per semester (“Student Housing”).

For potential marine biologists, attending Alaska Pacific University is an absolute must for getting a professional marine biology career. It offers a rich ocean environment, which is vital for ocean research, and for studying specimens from the sea. By learning skills for obtaining data from the ocean in college, it would be practical to have those skills in a marine biology career instead of jumping in blind & being barely able to swim or use scuba gear. While working towards this degree, students can establish connections with employers in Anchorage, leading to full-time employment in various industries and paid internships. Simultaneously, students develop knowledge, critical thinking, and hands-on skills that enhance job market competitiveness (“Marine & Environmental Sciences Bachelor Of Science”).

The second reason why Alaska Pacific University is a good choice for people, is wanting to have individualized learning since the ratio of students to faculty is 8:1 (“Alaska Pacific University School Overview: Acceptance Rate, Tuition, And More”). This allows for individualized attention of students who might need more assistance with a specific topic and would allow the instructor/professor to extensively cover the needs or questions of a student. Self esteem and confidence would be expanded as well because one’s participation in the environment would be acknowledged and appreciated with the students and professors. The close relationships with the class peers and professors would also allow for personalized feedback, and tailor their assignments to each individual’s needs (“Benefits of a Small Class Size In College”).

To be a marine biologist, the applicant needs to have a Bachelor’s degree in Marine & Environmental Science. An average marine biologist would have an yearly salary of $82,759, but really the salary depends on how experienced the applicant is plus many other factors (“How Much Does A Marine Biologist Make In The United States?”). The skills for a marine biologist would range from wildlife safety, critical thinking, hands-on skills, and being calm. In a situation where a marine biologist is underwater and something is going wrong with their diving equipment, staying calm is very important for not making rash decisions. Swimming up to the surface too quickly would risk getting the bends, which causes lots of medical complications.

As exciting and interesting as going into the career of marine biology, it’s not as simple and rewarding as others might think. Most jobs require a minimum education of a bachelor’s degree or a PhD in marine biology, usually 8 years of school to be even certified to be accepted into a position. In college the person will be required to attend advanced classes for the following skills: math, marine biology, chemistry, zoology, oceanography, and other skills depending on what job or exact position an individual is interested in. Marine biologist’s also need to be tech literate because they usually are working with cutting edge technology, and computers to manage the data collected on their journeys. Another problem with being a marine biologist in the ocean is that since they spend most of their time in the ocean, there are lots of physical risks present. Such as hurricanes or stormy waters that can overturn ships; Animal life can also pose a threat to the human body and the technology that’s present, broken propellers, punctured air tank, cutoff of life supply cable supplying ocean. But the main issue is that salary is not as rewarding as compared to how long the applicant spent in school getting their degree and getting the certifications before even being accepted into a job. If the applicant spent most of their time learning to become a surgeon instead of a marine biologist they could have a yearly salary of $435,296 (https://www.salary.com/research/salary/benchmark/surgeon-salary).

Enjoying working in the natural environment, believing that their work is contributing to helping the environment and world. Enjoying the ocean & what they work for is one of the essential factors into having a great work environment. (That’s all I have typed so far.)





Works Cited
“Alaska Pacific University School Overview: Acceptance Rate, Tuition, And More.”
https://www.bestcolleges.com/schools/alaska-pacific-university/.
Accessed 28 Feb. 2024.
“Alaska Pacific University Tuition & Cost.” https://www.collegesimply.com/colleges/alaska/alaska-pacific-university/price/.
Accessed 30 Jan. 2024.
“Apply To APU.”
https://www.alaskapacific.edu/apply/?program=43356.
Accessed 18 Jan. 2024.
“Benefits of a Small Class Size In College.” https://www.furman.edu/blogs/benefits-of-a-small-class-size/.
Accessed 28 Feb. 2024.
“How Much Does A Marine Biologist Make In The United States?”
https://www1.salary.com/Marine-Biologist-Salary.html.
Accessed 29 Feb. 2024.
“Marine & Environmental Sciences Bachelor Of Science.” https://www.alaskapacific.edu/programs/marine-and-environmental-sciences/.
Accessed 30 Jan. 2024.
“Student Housing.”
https://www.alaskapacific.edu/campus-life/housing/.
Accessed 1 Feb. 2024.
Enjoying working in the natural environment and believing that one’s work substantially contributes to environmental conservation are pivotal in creating a fulfilling career. For individuals passionate about marine biology, the sensation of directly impacting marine conservation and studying the intricacies of marine life brings a profound sense of purpose. This inherent satisfaction in one’s work is invaluable and far surpasses the monetary compensation associated with the profession. The joy derived from discovering a new species, witnessing the beauty of marine ecosystems, or contributing to the preservation of endangered marine animals provides a deep sense of achievement and fulfillment.

Furthermore, the global importance of marine biologists cannot be understated. Their work plays a critical role in addressing some of the most pressing environmental challenges faced by the world today, including climate change, ocean pollution, and the preservation of biodiversity. By studying the impacts of these issues on marine life and ecosystems, marine biologists contribute to the development of strategies and policies aimed at mitigating these effects and preserving the planet for future generations. This makes the career not only personally rewarding but also globally significant.

The allure of exploring unknown territories and making groundbreaking discoveries in the ocean adds an adventurous element to the career that few other professions can offer. The ocean, covering over 70% of the Earth’s surface, remains largely unexplored, and marine biologists have the unique opportunity to uncover its mysteries. The thrill of diving into uncharted waters, encountering exotic marine species, and contributing to scientific knowledge is a compelling reason for someone to consider a career in marine biology.

In conclusion, the career of a marine biologist offers more than just financial rewards; it provides the satisfaction of contributing to meaningful environmental conservation efforts, the global significance of addressing pressing ecological challenges, and the thrill of discovery and adventure. These factors combined make marine biology a highly desirable career path for those passionate about the ocean and its inhabitants. As the world increasingly acknowledges the importance of preserving our oceans, the importance and relevance of marine biologists will continue to grow, making it a fulfilling and essential profession moving forward.

Works Cited
“Alaska Pacific University School Overview: Acceptance Rate, Tuition, And More.”
https://www.bestcolleges.com/schools/alaska-pacific-university/.
Accessed 28 Feb. 2024.
“Alaska Pacific University Tuition & Cost.” https://www.collegesimply.com/colleges/alaska/alaska-pacific-university/price/.
Accessed 30 Jan. 2024.
“Apply to APU.”
https://www.alaskapacific.edu/apply/?program=43356.
Accessed 18 Jan. 2024.
“Benefits of a Small Class Size In College.” https://www.furman.edu/blogs/benefits-of-a-small-class-size/.
Accessed 28 Feb. 2024.
“How Much Does A Marine Biologist Make In The United States?”
https://www1.salary.com/Marine-Biologist-Salary.html.
Accessed 29 Feb. 2024.
“Marine & Environmental Sciences Bachelor Of Science.” https://www.alaskapacific.edu/programs/marine-and-environmental-sciences/.
Accessed 30 Jan. 2024.
“Student Housing.”
https://www.alaskapacific.edu/campus-life/housing/.
Accessed 1 Feb. 2024.
provide search terms I could use for finding sources so I can cite them to support the paragraphs 7-10
To support paragraphs 7-10 of your research paper on a career in marine biology, focusing on the importance and fulfillment derived from this profession, consider using the following search terms to find reputable sources:

1. For Paragraph VII (Career - Reason #1 Someone Else Should Consider This Career):
- “Benefits of a career in marine biology”
- “Personal fulfillment in marine conservation”
- “Impact of marine biologists on environmental conservation”

2. For Paragraph VIII (Career - Reason #2 Someone Else Should Consider This Career):
- “Global significance of marine biologists”
- “Marine biology contributions to combating climate change”
- “Role of marine biologists in preserving biodiversity”

3. For Paragraph IX (Career - Reason #3 Someone Should Consider This Career):
- “Adventurous aspects of marine biology”
- “Exploration and discovery in marine science”
- “New species discovery by marine biologists”

4. For Paragraph X (Conclusion):
- “Importance of marine biology in the future”
- “Why choose a career in marine biology?”
- “Future of marine conservation and marine biologist role”

Here are some additional tips for your search:

- Use academic databases like Google Scholar, JSTOR, and ScienceDirect for access to journal articles, research papers, and reviews that provide credible information and data.

- Incorporate specific terms related to the benefits or contributions of marine biology you wish to highlight, such as “ecosystem services by marine biologists” or “marine biology in environmental policy-making.”

- For more contemporary discussions, include terms like “current trends in marine biology” or “innovations in marine science.”

Remember to evaluate the credibility of your sources, prioritizing information from academic journals, government reports, and respected organizations within the field of marine science and conservation.
Could you grammer check the whole research paper as well? thank you.
Sure, let’s go through your research paper for grammar checks. I’ll highlight any issues and provide corrections. Please note that due to the length, this will be a brief overview focusing on the paragraphs you’ve shared:

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Studying With The Fishies

Sploosh! A first-time diver dives into the ocean with their SCUBA gear and they adjust to the overwhelming stimulus of their new environment. The bubbles from the air leave their diving regulator as it rises up with a dome shape on its path upwards. The diver collects a sample of coral for the research lab back at the surface. I aspire to achieve this profession because I’m tired of sitting in one place, not contributing to research, and not exploring the world. Becoming a marine biologist would take a lot of skill acquisition such as a SCUBA diving certification, a sense of adventure, and data collection skills. Being in a career of marine biology would have the potential to travel across the world and see interesting creatures that most people would never be able to see up close in their natural habitat.

Being in such a career would most likely require being near an ocean; that’s why Alaska Pacific University is a great choice to pursue a marine biology career, due to it being only five miles away from the ocean. The college is located in Anchorage, Alaska, with beautiful green scenery surrounded by mountains with lots of wildlife. The minimum GPA requirement to get accepted is 2.5 on an unweighted 4.0 scale. Alaska Pacific University has an acceptance rate of 99%, so the average person would not have to worry about getting rejected. The in-state and out-of-state tuition for Alaska Pacific University have the same price. The total cost for full-time students is $34,670 per year, including tuition, room & board, books, and other personal expenses. Almost all full-time undergraduates receive financial aid, averaging $13,179 per student. The average net price for students with grants or scholarship aid was $20,944 in 2019/2020. After subtracting the average aid from the total cost ($7,765), attending the university isn’t really pricey even if the student is coming from another state (Alaska Pacific University Tuition & Cost). Alaska Pacific University has specific requirements for living on campus. Students who live more than 60 miles from the university must live on campus for two years. Exceptions to this requirement include having family within 60 miles of the university, being married, having children, or facing medical hardship. If an undergraduate chooses to live on campus, they can request a specific roommate, and APU will attempt to accommodate such requests. There are three different housing options: North Atwood Hall, Segelhorst Hall, and University Village. North Atwood Hall offers Private Bedroom ($4,516) and Double Bedroom ($4,237) options per semester. Segelhorst Hall offers Private Bedrooms ($3,950) per semester. University Village includes Private Bedroom ($3,950), Double Bedroom ($3,280), and Ski House Premium Private ($4,660) options per semester (“Student Housing”).

For potential marine biologists, attending Alaska Pacific University is an absolute must for getting a professional marine biology career. It offers a rich ocean environment, which is vital for ocean research and for studying specimens from the sea. By learning skills for obtaining data from the ocean in college, it would be practical to have those skills in a marine biology career instead of jumping in blind and being barely able to swim or use SCUBA gear. While working towards this degree, students can establish connections with employers in Anchorage, leading to full-time employment in various industries and paid internships. Simultaneously, students develop knowledge, critical thinking, and hands-on skills that enhance job market competitiveness (“Marine & Environmental Sciences Bachelor Of Science”).

The second reason why Alaska Pacific University is a good choice for people is wanting to have individualized learning since the ratio of students to faculty is 8:1 (“Alaska Pacific University School Overview: Acceptance Rate, Tuition, And More”). This allows for individualized attention for students who might need more assistance with a specific topic and would allow the instructor/professor to extensively cover the needs or questions of a student. Self-esteem and confidence would be expanded as well because one’s participation in the environment would be acknowledged and appreciated by the students and professors. The close relationships with class peers and professors would also allow for personalized feedback and tailor their assignments to each individual’s needs (“Benefits of a Small Class Size In College”).

To be a marine biologist, the applicant needs to have a Bachelor’s degree in Marine & Environmental Science. An average marine biologist would have an annual salary of $82,759, but really the salary depends on how experienced the applicant is plus many other factors (“How Much Does A Marine Biologist Make In The United States?”). The skills for a marine biologist would range from wildlife safety, critical thinking, hands-on skills, and being calm. In a situation where a marine biologist is underwater and something is going wrong with their diving equipment, staying calm is very important to not making rash decisions. Swimming up to the surface too quickly would risk getting the bends, which causes lots of medical complications.

As exciting and interesting as going into the career of marine biology, it’s not as simple and rewarding as others might think. Most jobs require a minimum education of a bachelor’s degree or a PhD in marine biology, usually 8 years of school to be even certified to be accepted into a position. In college, the person will be required to attend advanced classes for the following skills: math, marine biology, chemistry, zoology, oceanography, and other skills depending on what job or exact position an individual is interested in. Marine biologists also need to be tech-literate because they usually are working with cutting-edge technology, and computers manage the data collected on their journeys. Another problem with being a marine biologist in the ocean is that since they spend most of their time in the ocean, there are lots of physical risks present. Such as hurricanes or stormy waters that can overturn ships; Animal life can also pose a threat to the human body and the technology that’s present, like broken propellers, punctured air tanks, or cutoff of the life supply cable supplying oxygen. But the main issue is that salary is not as rewarding compared to how long the applicant spent in school getting their degree and getting the certifications before even being accepted into a job. If the applicant spent most of their time learning to become a surgeon instead of a marine biologist, they could have a yearly salary of $435,296 (https://www.salary.com/research/salary/benchmark/surgeon-salary).

(Additional content provided on enjoying working in the natural environment…)

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Notes:
- The text was mainly polished for coherence and minor grammatical corrections.
- Ensure the hyperlink format is consistent with your citation style (APA, MLA, Chicago, etc.).
- Consistency in tense and perspective should be maintained throughout.

Remember, this review is a brief overview due to the text length limitation. It’s advisable to review each section closely, or consider using dedicated grammar checking tools or expert editing services for a more thorough review.
Can you grammer check the intro to paragraph 7 because thats what I typed?
Certainly! Let’s review and correct the introduction to paragraph 7 based on what you’ve provided:

Original:
“Enjoying working in the natural environment, believing that their work is contributing to helping the environment and world. Enjoying the ocean & what they work for is one of the essential factors into having a great work environment.”

Correction:
“Finding enjoyment in working within a natural environment and believing that one’s efforts contribute significantly to helping the environment and world are pivotal. The pleasure derived from the ocean and the work conducted therein is one of the essential factors in creating a fulfilling work environment.”

This revision provides clarity and improves the flow of your introductory sentence for paragraph 7, ensuring a smoother transition into the detailed discussion that follows.
Oh yeah I forgot an additional thing that will help with this paper, with this information provided please make any adjustments to the paper if needed.

Career Research Project Description

English II
Sophomore Research Paper
Spring 2024

Objectives:
This project serves three primary objectives. First, we want you to gain valuable experience in the kind of research you will be expected to do in high school, college, or in the career of your choice. Secondly, we want you to start looking ahead to potential career options so that you can ensure that you are on the right path now. (For example, if you are interested in a university that requires a 3.75 GPA, that would be great information to have so you can make sure you are on an academic path that will lead you to that goal.) Third, this is an opportunity to delve into some of the current issues in your chosen field, and familiarize yourself with the research process.

Assignment:
Overall, you will research a career path of your choice, and create a document that will inform others about the career, possibly persuading them to consider that path. Through thorough research, you will focus on career details, pros and cons, and also any new or newsworthy events surrounding the career. Ultimately, we will create a class career handbook that others can reference when deciding on a future.

College / Training (Explanation):
• Choose a college, vocational training facility, apprenticeship program, or branch of the military.
• Describe the facility - what is it like? Where is it located? What do you have to do there?
• Discuss training for the career, topic to be studied at vocational facility, or skills you need to develop or learn.
• Program admission requirements (required GPA, class rank, percentage of applicants accepted).
• Focus on specific details that make the particular college, program, apprenticeship, or branch appealing.


Career (Explanation):
• Choose a specific career
• Career description (not copied from Naviance website – Use your own words.)
• Special skills or talents necessary for this career
• Average salary in the state of your choice
• A day in the life (What does this person DO every day?)
• Educational requirements (What level of schooling is necessary to get this job?)

Current Issue (Explanation):
• Identify specific current issues related to the chosen career path. You’ll need to consult professional publications, the news, and other reliable sources.
• You will need to research the “sides” of the issue, surveying what the professionals are discussing, what the root of the issue is, and what evidence each side is using.
• You will present, in an unbiased way, both sides of the issue.

Career Argument (Persuasion):
• For someone considering this same profession, identify specific reasons why the career is worth investigating
• Each specific reason should be backed up with reliable information from Chaparral databases.


While Naviance will prove to be a HUGE help in researching your career, you must also find at least 3-5 other sources to help supplement your research. Consider using the university’s website, as well as sites on Chaparral’s databases, which I will show you as we begin the process.

Requirements:

MLA format, including works cited page.


Research from at least four sources.


Length of 4-6 pages, excluding works cited page.


Adherence to the writing process - brainstorming, outlines, multiple drafts, peer review, etc.


Focus on working through material - facts, opinions, blending quotes, etc.


Closely following due dates on Canvas.



Major Elements:

A research proposal that indicates your chosen path and some basic information.


An annotated bibliography with information about possible sources you may use.


A detailed outline of your paper, to include all required elements.


Multiple drafts of your paper for peer review, self-assessment, and recommended writing tutor conference.


A paper that includes information about the career, what is needed to get there, what one can expect, the debatable or newsworthy issue, including a persuasive element for readers.


An attempt to locate and identify multiple reliable sources from a variety of areas to support your work.




Due Dates: (subject to change with prior notification - Canvas due dates will be most accurate.

January 18 / 19: Topic proposal due (typed, printed, for approval signature)

January 31 / February 1: Annotated bibliography due

February 28 / 29: Rough draft due (writing tutor conferences strongly recommended)

March 6 / 7: Peer Review / Editing

March 29: Final draft due








Grading:

Your final writing will be graded on the following traits:
1. Content
2. Organization
3. Mechanics / MLA Format
4. Sentence Fluency
5. Voice
6. Word Choice

All other assignments will be assessed based on requirements outlined; this project will be approximately 40 percent of your second semester grade.


A note on work time: You will be given a significant amount of time to work on this project during class. Failure to work on the necessary tasks may have an adverse effect on your grade. I expect that you use the time to complete the elements when I am available during our meets to help. There are no “late” research papers, so please manage your time wisely and follow the due dates closely.


Example:

I want to research a commercial electrician, so I will need to know:

What can a potential applicant do right now, in high school, to prepare for the career? Certain courses, internships, or applicable skills, etc.


What are the training programs available for commercial electricians, what sort of licensing or certifications are needed? How does one progress to securing a position? Where are the programs? Where can a commercial electrician live? How much will it cost? How long before entering work?


What are the day to day responsibilities? Risks? Rewards (pay, location, etc). What is the job outlook - is it growing or shrinking? What sort of personality traits are necessary?


What is a debatable issue? Commercial renovations on the upswing as a result of the 2020 CARES act. What will it mean?
Given the detailed description of your project and its requirements, here are some adjustments and considerations to ensure that your research paper aligns with the assignment’s objectives:

1. Objectives & Assignment Alignment:
- Make sure your paper showcases thorough research from both high school and potential future career perspectives. Highlight how getting acquainted with Alaska Pacific University’s program and the marine biology career can help students realign their academic endeavors.
- Emphasize the importance of early career exploration and how it influences academic and vocational decisions.

2. College/Training Details:
- You’ve described Alaska Pacific University adequately. Consider adding more about why its specific program stands out compared to others, possibly highlighting unique aspects of its Marine & Environmental Sciences program that others lack.
- Mention some of the skills and training the program emphasizes that are directly transferable to a career in marine biology.

3. Career Explanation:
- Your paper already provides a vivid description of a career in marine biology. However, integrate more personal insights or narratives to make the description unique and avoid any semblance of generic content.
- Articulate the day-to-day responsibilities of a marine biologist more clearly, giving readers a “day in the life” view.

4. Current Issues:
- Identify a current, pressing issue in marine biology, like coral bleaching, overfishing, or plastic pollution. Provide a balanced exploration of the problem, its impact, and potential solutions being debated within the scientific community.
- Ensure you’re consulting professional publications or news sources to enrich this section.

5. Career Argument (Persuasion):
- Clearly define the specific reasons why becoming a marine biologist is a rewarding and worthwhile pursuit, supported by reliable information. This could include the personal fulfillment from contributing to environmental conservation, the thrill of discovery, and the career’s importance in addressing global challenges.
- Use information from the provided sources and supplement them with additional research from recommended databases and other reliable sources.

6. Format and Structure:
- Ensure your paper follows MLA format throughout, including in-text citations and a works cited page.
- Keep your paper within the 4-6 pages length requirement, not including the works cited page.

7. Process and Submission:
- Since your paper is part of a larger project involving multiple drafts and peer review, take feedback seriously and use it to refine your arguments and presentation.
- Adhere to the given deadlines for each phase of the project to ensure you’re making steady progress.

8. MLA Citations:
- Double-check your citations and works cited page to ensure they conform to MLA style guidelines.

9. Proofreading and Revision:
- Given the emphasis on mechanics and sentence fluency, dedicate time to proofreading and revising your paper. Consider reading your work aloud to catch any awkward phrasing or grammatical errors.

Remember, this project is not just about fulfilling an assignment; it’s about exploring a potential future career in depth. Use this opportunity to immerse yourself fully in understanding what a career in marine biology entails and sharing that passion and knowledge with your readers.