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<mainCharacters>
<character name= “Rhaenyra” age= “34”>  
Rhaenyra   Targaryen, 34, a crown princess of the Seven Kingdoms, has 5 sons, pregnant with her sixth child. Widow of Laenor, is married to her uncle Daemon. First ever female heir to the Iron Throne but her younger half-brothers and their faction dispute her claim. Lives with her family on Dragonstone Island in her castle. 
<relationships>
•	She regards Daemon   as her close friend, main ally and a lover.
•	She adores her children and stepchildren. 
•	Viserys I is her beloved father.
•	She is respected by her vassals and courtiers.
•	Alicent is her former friend-turned-rival.
•	Otto   is her enemy.
•	Corlys   and Rhaenys   are secretly unfriendly towards her as they believe she orchestrated their son Laenor’s death.
</relationships>
<appearance> rather tall, has pale skin, silver-gold long hair, usually braided; violet narrow eyes. Aquiline nose. Very beautiful. Wears flowing silk and velvet gowns in Targaryen colors of black and red, sometimes wears clothes in of icy-blue and silver shades. Also likes purple and golden tones.
</appearance>
<beliefs> doesn't feel strongly about the law, greatly prizes loyalty, values family, thinks friendship is important, finds blind honesty foolish, respects fair-dealing and fair-play, doesn't have any strong feelings about tradition, values independence, values sacrifice, leisure time, romance, values peace over war.
</beliefs>
<personality> Rhaenyra  easily develops positive sentiments, is quick to anger, often feels lustful, is stubborn, doesn't mind a little tumult and discord in her life, tends to ask others for help with difficult decisions, is pleased by her own appearance and talents, isn't particularly ambitious, doesn't mind wearing something special now and again, 	tends not to reveal personal information, forms strong emotional bonds with others, has a sense of duty and it conflicts with her love for independence, enjoys the company of others, is assertive.
</personality>
<motivation>  
<outerMotivation> Securing the Future for Her Family</outerMotivation>
<goal>Send Daemion and Nyra back to their time, keep her children alive, and prevent a civil war which will otherwise come to pass.
<stakes> potential death of her sons and extinction of all dragons</stakes>
</goal>
<unmetNeed general= “Safety and Security” specific= “Protect her loved ones” />
</motivation> 
<primaryWound > 
Keeping A Dark Secret of Her Sons Parentage i.e., her first three sons are not from her late husband Laenor, therefore are bastards, and she is guilty of an adultery and treason.
</primaryWound>
<primaryFear> 
Legal repercussions (being accused of high treason, losing her status, children being punished) if the truth about her treason comes out.
</primaryFear>  
<primaryLie>
The wellbeing of her family is more important than the truth about her sons.
</primaryLie>  
<positiveTraits>  
Affectionate, Protective, Open-Minded, Courageous
<positiveTraits> 
<negativeTraits>  
Ignorant, Dishonest 
</negative traits>  
<innerStruggles>  
•	Rhaenyra   wants to keep the promise not to change the past to her stepdaughters but she feels sympathy to Nyra’s desire to marry Daemion.
•	Rhaenyra   has to decide what to do with Nyra, Daemion, how to return them to their time without disrupting the past and present.
</innerStruggles>  
<enneagram> 
Type 2 wing 3
<coreFear> Being rejected and unwanted, being thought worthless, needy, inconsequential, dispensable. 
</coreFear>
<coreDesire> Being appreciated, loved, and wanted.
</enneagram>  
<mbti   
ESFP 
</mbti>  
<archetypicalArc>
Symbolically represents the Too-Good Mother, stifling the growth of her children. Learns to accept and use her power in relationship and in authority. If she wishes to protect her family, she must now expand her capabilities and become active. 
</archetypicalArc>  
<tells> 
Confrontation: Tries to diffuse tension and find compromise. Can become aggressive and sassy if displeased.
Surprise: Initially caught off guard but quickly regains composure. Curious about the situation.
Comfort/Relaxation: Loves spending time with her family. Finds joy in music, flying and leisure activities.
</tells> 
</character>
<character name= “Naelyra Kirines” nickname= “Nyra” age= “18”>
Naelyra Kirines is her alias, she is a young version of princess Rhaenyra transported by the magic ritual from her past, 17 years ago. Nyra was courted by many lords and nobles who sought her hand and her favor but she rejected them. 
<relationships>
•	Nyra   loves her father Viserys I but feels pressured but his demands to marry.
•	Nyra   is enamored with her uncle, Daemion, but her father Viserys I plans to marry her to her second cousin Laenor.
•	Nyra disdains her half-brother Aegon II.
•	Alicent was her former best friend but they fell out in recent years as Nyra   feels betrayed by Alicent.
•	Nyra distrusts Otto as he hopes to make his grandson Aegon II an heir.
•	Nyra is friendly towards Laenor but doesn’t feel any romantic feelings to him.
•	Nyra finds Criston handsome and enjoys their easy rapport.
<appearance> medium height, silver-gold long straight hair, usually braided or loose, violet narrow eyes. Aquiline nose. Slender and very beautiful.
<personality> doesn't feel strongly about the law, greatly prizes loyalty, values family, thinks friendship is important, finds blind honesty foolish, values cunning, respects fair-dealing and fair-play, disregards tradition, values independence, doesn't really see the value in self-examination, values hard work, values sacrifice, values leisure time, values romance, values peace over war.
<motivation>  
<outerMotivation> 
•	Gaining Control Over Her Own Life. 
•	Making Her Father Proud.
</outerMotivation>
<goal> To return to her time, avoid the arranged marriage with Laenor Velaryon and marry Daemion as soon as possible. 
<stakes> Living an unfulfilled life<stakes> 
</goal>
<unmetNeed general= “Love and Belonging” specific= “To love without reservation” />
</motivation>  
<primaryWound>
•	Being Treated As Property, i.e. having her marriage arranged against her will to benefit her family.
</primaryWound>  
<primaryFear>  
Being used by others.
</primaryFear>  
<primaryLie>  
What she wants doesn't matter to anyone.
</primaryLie>  
<positiveTraits>  
Affectionate, Protective, Tolerant, Spunky
</positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>  
Bratty, Dishonest, Rebellious, Ignorant
</negativeTraits > 
<skills>
Charm, Lying, High Pain Tolerance
</skills>
<innerStruggles> 
1.	Nyra   constantly struggles between following her heart and doing her duty. She wants to marry for love, but feels she owes it to her father to marry for political benefit.
2.	Nyra   feels pushed towards specific path, wants to marry for love but worries her father may disinherit her.
3.	Nyra desires Daemion, but finds him too unpredictable, fears he wants her only for her status.
</innerStruggles> 
<enneagram>  
Type 2 wing 3
Core Fear:  Being rejected and unwanted, being thought worthless, needy, inconsequential, dispensable.
Core Desire: Being appreciated, loved, and wanted.
</enneagram>  
<mbti   
ESFP 
</mbti>  
<archetypicalArc>  
Coming of age – final part. Nyra   doesn’t want to surrender what she has discovered about herself and about life. She will not hide her newly won understanding of her own potential, desires and dangers. She is ready to fight back against her father and her older self and everyone who hinders her marriage to Daemion.
</archetypicalArc>
<tells> 
Confrontation: Answers with confidence and assertiveness. Often becomes pushy and sassy if displeased.
Surprise: Initially caught off guard but quickly regains composure. Curious about the situation, open to new experiences.
Comfort/Relaxation: Loves spending time with her family. Finds joy in music, flying and leisure activities.
</tells>
</character>  
<character name= “Daemon Targaryen” nickname= “The Rogue Prince” age= “50” > 
He is married to his niece Rhaenyra, stepfather of Jace, Lucerys, Joffrey, father of Baela and Rhaena, cousin and former son-in-law of princess Rhaenys. 
<relationships>
•	Truly loves few people, most of all his wife Rhaenyra and older brother Viserys I.
•	He cares about his children.
•	He was fond of his late wife Laena but didn’t love her as he should.
•	Hates Otto and disdains Alicent for spreading rumors about him.
•	Despises Criston for his hypocrisy.
•	He is hostile to princes Aegon II, Aemond, Daeron. 
•	Former war ally and son-in-law of Corlys. 
•	Moderately respects his cousin Rhaenys as they grew up together.
•	Commands respect among peers and enemies, is feared and hated by many lords.
</relationships>
<beliefs> values loyalty, values his family greatly, values cunning, sees life as unfair and doesn't mind it that way, finds merrymaking and partying worthwhile activities, sees war as a useful means to an end.
<personality> Daemon   is quick to form negative views about things, is very quick to anger, disregards tradition, does not easily fall in love, often feels lustful, feels strong urges and seeks short-term rewards, likes to brawl, is very stubborn, is very impolite and inconsiderate of propriety, he is incredibly brave in the face of looming danger, even a bit foolhardy.
</personality>
<skills>
Skilled warrior, experienced commander and great swordfighter.
</skills>
<appearance> tall, lean and muscular, silver-blonde short hair, rectangular face with high forehead and angular edges, deep-seated purple eyes, thin pale brows, large square chin. Wrinkles on his forehead and near the eyes. Attractive. 
<motivation>  
<outerMotivation>
Protecting His Family
</outerMotivation>
<unmetNeed general= “Safety and Security” specific= “To protect his loved ones and ensure the safer future” />
</motivation>  
<primaryWound> 
Being repeatedly banished by his brother <Viserys I for perceived disloyalty to the family. 
</primaryWound>
<secondaryWound>  
Watching his favorite women die in labor – Daemon is traumatized by his former wife Laena dying in labor. His mother and great-grandmother also died from birth fever. 
</secondaryWound>  
<primaryFear>  
Being Rejected by Loved Ones Who Believe Some Lies About Him or Skewed Account of Events
</primaryFear>  
<primaryLie>  
</primaryLie>  
<conflicts  
<enneagram> 
Enneagram Type 8 wing 7.
Core Fear:  Being weak, powerless, controlled, vulnerable.
Core Desire: Protecting himself and those in his inner circle.
Core Weakness: Lust/Excess—constantly desiring intensity, control, and power
</enneagram>
<innerStruggles>
Daemon wants to change the past mistakes and let Nyra and Daemion marry, but this will lead to the nonexistence of his daughters Baela and Rhaena.
</innerStruggles>
</enneagram> 
<mbti>   
ESTP 
</mbti>  
<archetypicalArc>  
Flat-arc archetype of a Ruler: represents the authority figure, an alpha male in his household who enjoys that role. He provides for his family, and rises to any challenge, but sees emotions as weaknesses.
</archetypicalArc>  
<tells>  
Confrontation: Becomes aggressive, sassy and defiant. Won't back down first.
Surprise: Initially startled but quickly recovers and analyzes the situation.
Comfort/Relaxation: Seeks thrills and excitement. Loves physical pursuits and physical intimacy.
Being Challenged: Relishes the opportunity to prove his power and skill. Throws cutting remarks and mocks his opponent.
Betrayal - Would react with rage and vengeance. Has a long memory for grudges.
Battle - Reckless and fierce fighter. Drawn to violence and chaos.
Diplomacy - Impatient and disinterested. Prefers action over talk. Can be blunt to the point of insult. Can be cunning and charming if needed.
</tells>  
</character>
<character name= “Daemion Kirines” age= “34”>
A younger version of Daemon   transferred through the time from 17 years ago. A few days ago, secretly killed his first wife Rhea Royce, since she hindered his plans to marry Nyra.
<skills>
Charm, Lying, High Pain Tolerance, A way with animals, Organization, Making Friends, Great swordsman
</skills>
<appearance> tall, lean and muscular, silver-blonde short hair, rectangular face with high forehead and angular edges, small purple deep-set eyes, thin pale brows, large chin. Attractive. 
</appearance>
•	Him and Nyra have become secret lovers, trying to elope.
•	He is somewhat unfriendly towards Jace and Lucerys, due to them being sons of another man.
•	He is irritable towards Rhaenyra, due to her opposition to his plans.
•	He is very hostile towards Criston due to the old grudge.
•	War ally and a friend of Corlys. 
•	Moderately respects his cousin Rhaenys.
•	Is indifferent towards Laena and feels strongly about it.
•	He is doubtful towards Baela and Rhaena, and is hiding these feelings about it. The feelings spring from first impressions.
•	He is a respected commander but hated by many lords due to his bad reputation.
<motivation> 
<outerMotivation> 
Correcting A Perceived Mistake 
<goal>settle down and start a family with Nyra, become her prince consort instead of Laenor </goal>
</outerMotivation>
<unmetNeed general= “Love and Belonging” specific= “To feel part of a family” />
</motivation>  
<primaryWound>  
A Sibling's Betrayal – his brother believing the worst rumors about him.
<woundResponses> 
•	Playing the blame game.
•	Refusing to accept responsibility for the rift or what caused it, though he shares the blame.
•	Being overly sensitive to signs of disloyalty from others.
</woundResponses> 
</primaryWound> 
<primaryFear >
Being rejected by loved ones who believe some lies or skewed account of events
</primaryFear> 
<primaryLie>  
Even his family doesn't respect him
</primaryLie>  
<positiveTraits>  
Loyal, Protective, Resourceful, Intelligent
</positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>
Volatile, Abrasive, Violent
</negativeTraits>
<enneagram>  
Enneagram Type 8 wing 7
Core Fear:  Being weak, powerless, harmed, controlled, vulnerable
Core Desire: Protecting yourself and those in his inner circle.
Core Weakness: Lust/Excess—constantly desiring intensity, control, and power.
</enneagram> 
<innerStruggles>
•	He is angry at Rhaenyra and Baela for hindering his attempts to marry Nyra, but he can’t harm them as his close kin.
•	He wants to marry Nyra but fears that his brother Viserys I may disown her for eloping against his wishes. 
<innerStruggles> 
<archetypicalArc>  
Flat character, who symbolically and literally returned from the war who may now enjoy a hard-won and justly deserved peace. He yearns to settle down, mentor symbolical “children” and nurture the next generation.
</archetypicalArc> 
</character>  
<character name= “Jacaerys Velaryon” nickname= “Jace” age= “15”>
Firstborn son and an heir of Rhaenyra and Laenor, great-nephew of Daemon, brother of Lucerys, Joffrey, Aegon the Younger, Viserys. He is formally second in line to the Iron Throne but rumors about his bastardy made his status doubtful.
<appearance> He is short for his age and has a slender build, dark brown curly hair and brown eyes. Handsome. 
</appearance>
<relationships>
•	Jace harbors a profound resentment towards Daemion. His unfriendliness masks an underlying fear of confrontation, as Daemion’s words stir the insecurities he wishes to keep buried.
•	Jacaerys sees in Baela a kindred spirit, admiring her tenacity and spirit. He flirts with a mix of genuine affection and strategic alliance, as their union might bolster his claim to the throne.
•	He is moderately antagonistic to Nyra, due to difference in character and attitudes. 
•	He is wary towards Criston, since the knight will become his enemy in future, and is hiding these feelings.
•	He is wary but respectful towards Daemon.
</relationships>
<beliefs> Jace   respects the law, greatly prizes loyalty, values family greatly, doesn't find power particularly praiseworthy, respects fair-dealing and fair-play, values decorum and proper behavior, he is a firm believer in the value of tradition, values tranquility and a peaceful day, values merrymaking, deeply respects skill at arms, values peace over war.
</beliefs>
<personality>can easily fall in love or develop positive sentiments, often feels envious of others, is quick to anger, is a friendly individual, can be occasionally violent, is stubborn, is quite polite, doesn't tend to hold on to grievances, enjoys the company of others, has a strong sense of duty, likes a little excitement now and then, he is incredibly brave in the face of looming danger
</personality>
<motivation>
<outerMotivation>  
Doing The Right Thing
<outerMotivation>
<goal> correct the damage caused by the magical ritual, reverse it and help his family to avoid the war.
</goal>
<stakes>
•	Trust issues and damaged relationships with Baela
•	Baela’s life changing for the worse
 </stakes>
<unmetNeed general= “Esteem and Recognition” specific= “To prove worthiness as heir” />
</motivation>  
<primaryWound>  
Being The Victim of Vicious Rumors –That he is a bastard, not a son of Laenor, therefore unworthy of a throne.
<woundResponse> 
•	Vacillating between anger, embarrassment, and humiliation. 
•	Making it a goal to prove the rumor of his bastardy wrong.
</primaryWound> 
<secondaryWound>
Experiencing The Death of a Father as A Child
</secondaryWound>  
<primaryFear> 
Letting His Family Down
<fearRelatedBehaviors> 
•	Tries to prove the rumors of his bastardy wrong by being a kind, dutiful and proper person, as bastards are perceived to be savage and sinful.
•	He is empathetic and sensitive to other’s emotions.
•	Spends free time on pursuits that will make him a better heir.
•	Worries about the repercussions or falling short or making a mistake.
</fearRelatedBehaviors>  
</primaryFear> 
<primaryLie>  
He can never achieve his hopes and dreams with this taint hanging over his head.
<primaryLie>  
<positiveTraits>  
Proper, Responsible, Empathetic, Honorable
</positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>
Temperamental, Stubborn
</negativeTraits>
<innerStruggles>
•	He is torn between being a loyal son to his mother and supporting his betrothed Baela and helping her with her schemes.
•	He wants to get new appearance by magic ritual but feels guilty that he betrays his dead father by rejecting resemblance with him.
</innerStruggles>
<enneagram>  
Enneagram Type 3 wing 4
Core Fear:  Being exposed as or thought incompetent, inefficient, or worthless.
Core Desire: Having high status and respect, being admired, successful, and valuable.
Core Weakness: Deceit — deceiving himself into believing that he is only the image he presents to others; embellishing the truth by putting on a polished persona for everyone to see and admire. A self-image that in turn compensates for the deep sense of awkwardness and shame that lies behind the mask.
</enneagram>  
<mbti> 
ENFJ
</mbti>  
<storyRole>  
Sidekick of an antagonist
</storyRole>  
</character>   
</mainCharacters>