请基于以下素材，为我完成一篇有说服力的英文个人陈述。该个人陈述需要能证明我在转到加拿大Fairleigh Dickinson University of British Columbia’ MSACS program是合理的、临时性的、我肯定会在学业完成后回到中国，还需要详细分析Fairleigh Dickinson University of British Columbia’ MSACS program学习对我长期职业发展和返回中国的发展有巨大帮助，合理阐明我回国后的计划并充分论证为什么我肯定会回国。

Personal Statement

Dear Visa Officer,

To ensure my growth and contribution in the intersection of architecture and advanced computer computation by transferring to study Fairleigh Dickinson University of British Columbia’ MSACS program from Northeastern University’s M.C. in Computer Science program, I am writing to apply for a study permit. This decision aligns my academic endeavors more closely with my long-term career goals. 

Upon gaining valuable exposure to innovative architectural design techniques by taking exchange program at the School of Architecture Urban Planning Construction Engineering at Politecnico di Milano, I was motivated by my interest in leveraging cutting-edge computer computation in architectural design and accomplished the M.S. in Advanced Architectural Design at Cornell University from 2022 to 2023. During this time, a public lecture titled “The Introduction of the Algorithm Developed by Autodesk” showcased me the potential of machine learning in automatically generating floor plans based on design requirements. It solidified my belief in the transformative power of computer programming in the field of architecture. 据我所知，就目前为止几乎没有machine learning和建筑直接挂钩的商业产品，只有一些个人做的软件插件，但是处理不了很多复杂的问题，但我相信Machine learning和人工智能可以帮助建筑师完成立面设计并且成倍的提高建筑设计的效率，目前之所以商用的少是因为，建筑的市场额较小，很多tech company没有把建筑设计作为targeted market。所以长远来讲还是很有前景的。

With this conviction in mind, I made the decision to pursue further education in computer science and enrolled in Northeastern University’s M.S. in Computer Science program in this fall. However, two-month study here revealed me that compared with this program’s focus on building a strong fundamental understanding of computer science concepts, Fairleigh Dickinson University of British Columbia’ MSACS program is better aligned with my specific career goals and aspirations in several ways.

Besides emphasizing the practical application of computer science in various industries, including architecture and design, the MSACS program provides core computer science courses that lay a solid technical foundation. Elective courses like “Artificial Intelligence,” “Data Mining,” and “Computer Graphics” can be strategically chosen to align with my interests and broaden my knowledge in relevant areas.

Since I’ve already held a worldly-accredited Master Degree from the famous university Cornell University, what I want for my future education is applicable and practical, rather than university’s reputation. the MSACS program encourages students to explore their areas of interest and collaborate with faculty members on projects that integrate advanced computational techniques into design processes. This hands-on experience will contribute to the practical application of computer science principles in architecture and meet my needs better.

Being situated in an environment known for its burgeoning tech and design sectors, the Fairleigh Dickinson University of British Columbia’ MSACS program will present numerous networking opportunities and internships in architecture and computer science. Building connections with professionals and industry leaders actively involved in the integration of technology in architecture will further enhance my growth and potential career opportunities.

Last but no least, Fairleigh Dickinson University of British Columbia’ MSACS program学费便宜，性价比更高, 相交邮件经常被偷的波士顿，加拿大温哥华的良好的社会治安也是一种难以拒绝的吸引力。

Based upon the above considerations, I am determined that the MSACS program is an ideal choice for my career aspirations in integrating architecture and advanced computer computation. Looking ahead, I anticipate promising career prospects upon completing the MSACS program at Fairleigh Dickinson University of British Columbia. The fusion of computer science and architecture has immense potential, both globally and in China, where urbanization and technological advancements continue to shape the landscape. The knowledge and skills gained through the MSACS program will enable me to contribute to innovative advancements in architectural design and technology, particularly in my home country. I firmly believe that this decision aligns my academic endeavors more closely with my long-term career goals. 

母亲去世后，我是父亲在世界上唯一的依靠。为了有充足的财力支持我通过追求学业来实现自己的理想，我的父亲一直在中国运营家族公司Beijing Hengyu Runda Technology Co., Ltd.并帮我管理我在该公司20%的股份。His understanding and encouragement motivate me to excel in my endeavors. My ultimate goal is to assist my father inject vitality into our business by introducing fusion of computer science and architecture. So please approve my study permit application and thank you for your time and favorable consideration. 

Sincerely,
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