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Mom woke Bella, Ella, and Tom up from bed bright and early. The kids all    rose at 8:00 am and made their way to their respective bathrooms. After showering, getting dressed, and enjoying a delicious breakfast, it was already 8:45 am. They quickly grabbed some sandwiches and headed to the park.

By 9:30 am, they arrived at the airport. “How much longer until we get there? Driving to the airport is really stressful,” inquired curious little Tom. “Oh, you nine-year-olds,” chuckled Ella.

After arriving at the airport, they were faced with a two-hour flight delay. They found some comfortable chairs in the lounge provided by the airlines and settled in. “Can you believe these prices? 50 pesos for a bag of chips!” exclaimed Dad, arguing with the cost. The twins, Bella and Ella, along with Tom, decided to take a nap while waiting for their flight.

When their plane finally arrived, they hopped into a cab and made their way to their hotel. The following morning, they chose to have a relaxing day, with no rush to go anywhere. They leisurely explored the area and enjoy their time together.

On their third day in Japan, they visited Nara to feed the deers. “Wow, this deer is so close to me!” whispered Bella in awe. Afterward, they had a delicious lunch at a local market. “I’m so tired,” laughed Ella.

They decided to visit a mall and purchased some souvenirs for their loved ones. They then hopped on the bullet train and took a nap for the whole journey. “Why does traveling feel so slow?” questioned Tom as they traveled from Tokyo to Osaka, which took 2.5 hours. They visited Osaka Castle and took plenty of photos. “How many more photos, Tom?” whined Ella playfully.

After returning to Tokyo, a journey that took 3 hours in total, they settled back into their hotel. On the fourth day, they traveled to Kyoto by bullet train in just 2 hours and 15 minutes. They found a welcoming hotel in Kyoto, where they would spend their last night in Japan.

The next day, they woke up bright and early at 4:00 am to head to the airport. “Are you kidding me? Why so early?” muttered Tom sleepy-eyed. They arrived in Pasig City at 8:00 am and continued their summer vacation.

The kids had a lazy start to their day, waking up at 11:00 am. “You guys really slept in today!” laughed Mom. They decided to have breakfast at a nearby restaurant. “I’ll have the pancake with extra syrup and blueberries, please,” requested Tom. “And we’ll have chicken nuggets and fries!” “I will have the blueberry smoothie,” Bella exclaimed.

“Well since everybody ordered something you get 5 tokens for the games” said the waitress “what if the kids want to play more than five times?” inquired dad “ then you will have to buy in the counter over there” replied the waitress “ well that is a bummer” murmured mom.







EVENTS
BEGINNING
Went to the park
Ate food
Went to the playground




MIDDLE
Went in the car 
Drove to the airport
Put out their suitcase




END
Rode on a plane
Arrived at Japan 

  Went in a cab






STEP 4: DRAFT

After plotting the events in your story and connecting them together so that they flow, the only step left to take is to begin drafting your story.

As you are writing, you may realize that you need to change or add characters, settings, and events, adjust the information in Steps 1-3 as needed and then continue your drafting process.

Think about writing as freely as possible, just letting your imagination and ideas flow as words onto the screen.

When the flow has stopped, edit your work, by yourself or with a friend, and then continue on with the rest of your draft.

Work hard on this piece, and most importantly, have fun with it.

Enjoy!

P.S. Sometimes it helps to title your work only once you feel like you are finished.
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EVENTS
BEGINNING
Went to the park
Ate food
Went to the playground




MIDDLE
Went in the car 
Drove to the airport
Put out their suitcase




END
Rode on a plane
Arrived at Japan 

  Went in a cab






STEP 4: DRAFT

After plotting the events in your story and connecting them together so that they flow, the only step left to take is to begin drafting your story.

As you are writing, you may realize that you need to change or add characters, settings, and events, adjust the information in Steps 1-3 as needed and then continue your drafting process.

Think about writing as freely as possible, just letting your imagination and ideas flow as words onto the screen.

When the flow has stopped, edit your work, by yourself or with a friend, and then continue on with the rest of your draft.

Work hard on this piece, and most importantly, have fun with it.

Enjoy!

P.S. Sometimes it helps to title your work only once you feel like you are finished.
Traveling with family
Mom woke Bella, Ella, and Tom up from bed bright and early. The kids all    rose at 8:00 am and made their way to their respective bathrooms. After showering, getting dressed, and enjoying a delicious breakfast, it was already 8:45 am. They quickly grabbed some sandwiches and headed to the park.

By 9:30 am, they arrived at the airport. “How much longer until we get there? Driving to the airport is really stressful,” inquired curious little Tom. “Oh, you nine-year-olds,” chuckled Ella.

After arriving at the airport, they were faced with a two-hour flight delay. They found some comfortable chairs in the lounge provided by the airlines and settled in. “Can you believe these prices? 50 pesos for a bag of chips!” exclaimed Dad, arguing with the cost. The twins, Bella and Ella, along with Tom, decided to take a nap while waiting for their flight.

When their plane finally arrived, they hopped into a cab and made their way to their hotel. The following morning, they chose to have a relaxing day, with no rush to go anywhere. They leisurely explored the area and enjoy their time together.

On their third day in Japan, they visited Nara to feed the deers. “Wow, this deer is so close to me!” whispered Bella in awe. Afterward, they had a delicious lunch at a local market. “I’m so tired,” laughed Ella.

They decided to visit a mall and purchased some souvenirs for their loved ones. They then hopped on the bullet train and took a nap for the whole journey. “Why does traveling feel so slow?” questioned Tom as they traveled from Tokyo to Osaka, which took 2.5 hours. They visited Osaka Castle and took plenty of photos. “How many more photos, Tom?” whined Ella playfully.

After returning to Tokyo, a journey that took 3 hours in total, they settled back into their hotel. On the fourth day, they traveled to Kyoto by bullet train in just 2 hours and 15 minutes. They found a welcoming hotel in Kyoto, where they would spend their last night in Japan.

The next day, they woke up bright and early at 4:00 am to head to the airport. “Are you kidding me? Why so early?” muttered Tom sleepy-eyed. They arrived in Pasig City at 8:00 am and continued their summer vacation.

The kids had a lazy start to their day, waking up at 11:00 am. “You guys really slept in today!” laughed Mom. They decided to have breakfast at a nearby restaurant. “I’ll have the pancake with extra syrup and blueberries, please,” requested Tom. “And we’ll have chicken nuggets and fries!” “I will have the blueberry smoothie,” Bella exclaimed.

“Well since everybody ordered something you get 5 tokens for the games” said the waitress “what if the kids want to play more than five times?” inquired dad “ then you will have to buy in the counter over there” replied the waitress “ well that is a bit of a bummer” murmured mom