How can I write an essay and create an application that the admissions officer can't refuse ( in business terms: Offers So Good People Feel Stupid Saying No) to get into top colleges using persuasion science and copywriting and direct response and the advertising science? Some things I heard are to reverse engineer the question and get inside the target's(admission's officer's head and list out everything going against you(low unweighted gpa 3.42) and address those objections and tell a good story while selling to the target by highlighting the benefits the university would gain from you?

UC Prompt# 6(max 350 words, at 349 right now). Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom.
From the moment I folded my first paper airplane at the age of five, my fascination with flight was ignited. Watching my creation gracefully glide sparked countless afternoons of meticulously designing and enthusiastically testing models. This early curiosity propelled me into high school chemistry, a subject that initially mirrored the intricacy of flight.

Under Mr. Foster, my chemistry journey flourished—like the day he dissolved a chicken drumstick with piranha solution, transforming shock into fascination. Another time, he used gas laws to navigate an egg into a beaker, further igniting my passion for chemical reactions and their real-world applications.

However, the AP Chemistry class at my school fell short of my expectations. Instead of giving up, I wholeheartedly embraced the challenge, diligently delving into online resources and virtual labs to master the material. Earning a 4 on the rigorous AP exam demonstrated my unwavering dedication and ability to overcome significant academic challenges.

Outside the classroom, my love for flight matured from origami to aerodynamics. Inspired by Scott H. Young’s “MIT Challenge” and “Ultralearning,” I pursued engineering and CAD design. I collaborated with passionate friends to build a modified tricycle go-kart, overcoming challenges in sourcing specific parts and adapting to a pre-built frame, which deepened my appreciation for teamwork and creative problem-solving.

This blend of chemistry and engineering is crucial to my aspirations in aerospace engineering. Understanding materials science and chemical reactions enhances my approach to aircraft design and sustainable aviation technologies.

I envision developing innovative eco-friendly aviation solutions, such as electric propulsion systems, that significantly reduce environmental impact without compromising safety or efficiency. At the University of California, I plan to leverage my interests by joining the Aerospace Engineering Society, engaging in research on sustainable materials, and pursuing internships to contribute to advancements in aerospace technology and drive meaningful change.

From folding paper airplanes to excelling in self-taught AP Chemistry and building a go-kart, I’ve learned that passion and perseverance transform curiosity into achievement. These experiences have equipped me to tackle aerospace engineering challenges and fueled a lifelong desire to innovate in a field that has captivated me since childhood.