Please refine the following reference letter in English:

Dear Admissions Committee,

As the CEO of Beijing Shishang Design and Architecture Consultants Co., Ltd., I have had the pleasure of working with Yao Sun as an architect in our design department. I am writing to recommend her for admission to the Master’s program in architecture at your esteemed university.

Despite only working at our company for three months, Yao Sun has demonstrated exceptional talent and professional knowledge while assisting me in creating detailed architectural and interior design plans. One notable project she contributed to was the “WOW New Home” program, which involved renovating a small alleyway residence spanning only 20 square meters. The layout of this house, with three surrounding walls, resulted in poor ventilation and lighting, making daily life for the family extremely inconvenient. However, Yao Sun creatively addressed these spatial constraints in the conceptual phase of the project. By incorporating the clients’ needs and the actual conditions of the house, she designed multifunctional furniture that maximized the use of the limited space, meeting the needs of the family of three. Yao Sun divided the house into a public area (kitchen and living room) and a private area (bedroom). The living room, still embodying the concept of multifunctional spaces, featured foldable tables and sofa beds, serving as a gaming area, dining area, and a bedroom for older family members. In the private area, Yao Sun cleverly extended the space underground to create a mini loft bedroom. Additionally, each area was separated by partitions, providing individual spaces for the couple and their two children. She also effectively utilized the limited space to accommodate a bathroom, toilet, and washing machine within just two square meters. To address the problems of lighting and ventilation, we installed two skylights on the roof and replaced the western wall with a glass door, allowing maximum sunlight to enter and natural airflow. The transformation of this “old and dilapidated” dwelling into a “warm and sunny house” was highly appreciated by the owners and generated significant online response after the program aired. Throughout the entire project, I observed Yao Sun’s ability to seamlessly integrate client needs with the project’s reality, translating complex concepts into practical architectural designs by applying her construction experience in the field.

Yao Sun has impressed me not only with her strong learning ability but also with her diligent work attitude. Before joining our company, she was only proficient in drawing architectural blueprints. However, within the short span of three months at our company, she quickly learned to create other specialized drawings such as socket layouts and lighting plans. Although she initially struggled with interior design, she would often present multiple alternative plans and promptly communicate any new ideas to me. She always evaluates my suggestions critically and selectively incorporates them after careful consideration.

Furthermore, Yao Sun is optimistic, cheerful, and possesses a team spirit. She actively engages in team activities and enjoys playing pool with colleagues during leisure time. In fact, she is the best female player in our studio.

Based on Yao Sun’s exceptional talent, strong work ethic, and excellent interpersonal skills, I have no doubt that she will thrive in the Master’s program in architecture. I highly recommend her for admission and believe she will contribute significantly to the academic community and the field of architecture.

Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Sincerely,

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CEO, Beijing Shishang Design and Architecture Consultants Co., Ltd.
Ph.D. in Architecture, Central Academy of Fine Arts
Executive Vice President, Cultural and Tourism Committee, China Urban Development Research Association
Jia 8, CaoChangDi, Chaoyang Dist., Beijing, China
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