润色如下内容：Ever since I can remember, I recall always wanting to organise everyone and give them certain tasks to do. In fact, even when I was just playing with my friends. I remember how I used to organise all the plays and concerts that we did, and that was pretty often, and to want to have everything close to perfection. From then until now the situation hasn't change very much. I still have the tendency to be on top of things and keep everything organised and scheduled. Therefore, I have decided that Business Administration is exactly what I want to explore. I strongly believe that such a course will satisfy my need  and at the same time develop it and make it better as well. With the appropriate studies I believe that I am capable of becoming a extremely successful employee and customer-oriented manager.

During my university, I majored in Financial Engineering where I was exposed to a variety of courses related to business,finance and so on,which laid a solid foundation for my future study. By studying those core courses, I have mastered basic knowledge in economics, finance, financial engineering, and financial management and received skill training in wealth management, investment and financing, risk management, and other areas.By using computers to establish mathematical models to solve financial related problems, I gained the opportunity to solve financial related problems. For example, I conducted the design and development of financial derivatives such as funds, securities, insurance and so on, risk control and management of investment and wealth management products, actuarial analysis of the distribution pattern of insurance accident losses,which deepened my interests in these fields.My independent learning skills was developed as well by exploring fields related to business administration. Personally,these abilities are indispensable in my master's study because the master's degree will place great emphasis on research ability and autonomous learning ability. Only when the foundation is firmly established can one become more proficient in further study.

After graduation,I work as an accounting in Jinyong(Guangdong) Finance and Tax Consulting Co.,Ltd where I am involving in the company’s tax burden accounting,input tax check deduction,tax declaration and so on. What’s more, I am responsible for assisting the general manager in handling daily affairs and also participating in the company's accounting work. These experiences have given me a deep understanding of enterprise operations and also make me realize the importance of business administration. I am well aware that business administration is not only about managing a business, but also about the art of strategy, leadership, and interpersonal relationships. In my work, I have accumulated rich practical experience, including participating in the daily operation management, organization and coordination work of the company in the position of General Manager Assistant, as well as handling financial statements, conducting financial analysis and cost control in the accounting position. These work experiences have given me a deep understanding of enterprise operations, which has enabled me to better understand how to apply the knowledge I have learned to solve practical problems.
My future career goal is to enter a mid to senior management position in the financial industry, utilizing my knowledge and experience in business management to create value and drive growth for the enterprise. I believe that through further learning and practice, I will be able to better provide valuable solutions for future employers.

Macau, with its sophisticated fusion of Eastern and Western political cultures, provides an ideal environment for studying business administration.I am heartedly grateful for what I have been able to learn through my undergraduate years, but I do not believe that should be the end of my education journey. Knowing that MSc in Business Administration at City University of Macau provides both basic and advanced courses , I sincerely hope to be allowed to study at your university, which will enable me to explore the latest developments in the theory, strategies and practice of business industries.Moreover, the renowned Faculty of Business and the university’s commitment to providing the latest hardware and high-quality education make City University of Macau an attractive choice for me. Lastly, the university’s international reputation among employers and alumni is highly appealing. Studying at such a reputable university is a significant step in my study and career planning. I understand that your university is strong in this area, so I believe that if I am lucky enough to be admitted, I will be able to learn more senior professional knowledge and have access to more quality resources. My commitment to excellence, passion, and background could qualify me as a member of this program and will contribute to your esteemed program. Sincerely hope that I can get this opportunity. Thanks for your time and consideration.