Please refine and polish the following Statement of Intent:

Statement of Intent
Dear Admission Officer,

My name is <PRESIDIO_ANONYMIZED_PERSON>, and I am writing to express my strong interest in the Laurentian’s Bilingual MBA program. With my educational background and practical experience in educational technology, I believe that this program at Laurentian University is the perfect fit for me to achieve my career goal of transforming my teaching design concepts into successful marketable products.

Throughout my academic journey, I have acquired a Bachelor of Science, a Master of Education, and a Doctor of Education, all majoring in Educational Technology, from Northeast Normal University in China. These degrees have provided me with a solid foundation in educational technology and have allowed me to gain valuable experience in leadership roles. For example, I served as the Minister of the Arts and Cultural Association, where I organized various events and coordinated performances.

Furthermore, during my graduate studies, I had the opportunity to work closely with professors and classmates to organize an annual conference attended by approximately 500 teachers and subject experts from experimental schools. This experience provided me with valuable skills in conference planning and preparation, as well as the ability to work effectively in a team.

Currently, I hold the position of Director of the Acquisition and Circulation Department and the Technology Department at the Library of Beijing University of Traditional Chinese Medicine. In this role, I am responsible for book inspection and management, as well as the development and maintenance of the library’s computer systems and network facilities. I have successfully implemented self-service borrowing and printing/copying services, upgraded network information equipment, and managed the construction of state-of-the-art facilities for the new campus library. These experiences have honed my leadership and project management skills, and I am confident in my ability to apply these skills to the Bilingual MBA program.

Additionally, I have held senior positions in education technology-related companies, such as Beijing Huawen Online Education Technology Co., Ltd., where I served as the Director of the Teaching Support Department and a Product Manager. In these roles, I supervised educational operations, including curriculum planning, implementation, and maintenance. I was also involved in providing guidance and support to students, as well as organizing and teaching in the Chinese learning area during the 2008 Beijing Olympics. These experiences have allowed me to develop a deep understanding of educational design and support services, and I hope to further enhance my knowledge in business and management through the Bilingual MBA program.

The Bilingual MBA program at Laurentian University is particularly appealing to me due to its comprehensive training in business knowledge and management skills. The program offers a deeper understanding of the business environment and market demands, and emphasizes practical applications through real-life case studies and projects. This approach aligns perfectly with my goal of acquiring practical business perspectives and management skills to transform my teaching design concepts into marketable products.

Upon completion of the program, I believe that I will be equipped with the necessary skills to excel in management positions in the business field. Additionally, the program’s focus on leadership development will greatly benefit my career growth and realization of professional goals in the educational technology field. I am confident that the Bilingual MBA program at Laurentian University will provide me with the knowledge and skills in subjects such as marketing, strategic management, human resources management, and leadership that I need to succeed.

In conclusion, I am confident in my ability to complete the Bilingual MBA program at Laurentian University and achieve outstanding academic results. With my educational technology expertise, practical experience, and determination to learn business knowledge and management skills, I believe I can overcome any challenges and make significant contributions to both the program and my professional career. I am committed to utilizing my abilities to their fullest potential and achieving great success in my future endeavors.

Thank you for considering my application.

Sincerely,

<PRESIDIO_ANONYMIZED_PERSON>