Act as an experienced scriptwriter. Analyze the below scene script to structure its scene into shot list. I have included a draft of shot list.  Provide a clear cleaned up shot list  drawing upon your extensive knowledge of storytelling techniques .

EXT. BUSY STREET - NIGHT
WIDE SHOT:
The Guy walks down the street, weaving between people with umbrellas and others rushing past him. He dodges puddles, his pace deliberate but slow, holding onto his bag

EXT. CITY STREET - PAST - NIGHT
Rain pours down. A GUY (mid-20s) is running through the rain, clutching a small laptop on his head, trying to shield himself. He looks rushed, as if he’s chasing something he might miss. A Car passes across from left to right fills the frame (wheels).
EXT. CITY STREET - PAST - NIGHT
The Guy reaches a busy street signal. Walks from the crowd , He suddenly stops, frozen as he looks across the street. His eyes lock on something—or someone—with an expression of pure wonder and Awe. The noise (rain, traffic) around him fades into the background and a glow appears on his face.(It’s love at first sight.)
Pull back shot 
EXT. CITY STREET - PAST - NIGHT
The Guy stands drenched in the rain. A BUS or people rushes past, obscuring his view. As it clears, he sees her—a GIRL in a RED DRESS holding a BLUE umbrella. She’s looking up slightly, as she turns around a small, private smile playing in her eyes. Her eyes catch his for just a brief moment.
Pull back shot 
EXT. CITYSCAPE - NIGHT
A wide angle  to reveal both the GUY and GIRL standing apart in the rain. Girl have umbrella, guy having bag staring at each other from across the lot. Their eyes lock.

A wide shot reveals the two of them standing apart, thunder strikes.

They look away from each other, turning their heads toward the sky.
CUT TO:
EXT. STREET - NIGHT PAST (RAINY)
The thunder strike ends and the couple look back at each other and starts walking towards each other. girl on the other side. Reaches the guy - match cut with umbrella rain scene )

Finally, they reach their destination together, side by side.The couple now under one umbrella, under the rain. 
The rain pours gently, but they are lost in each other, looking into each other’s eyes.

Here is the rough shot list 

- Guy walks down the street in rain tring to cover his head with his bag , people passes him
- GUY (mid-20s) is running through the rain cross street, clutching a small laptop on his head, trying to shield himself. He looks rushed. A Car passes across from left to right fills the frame (wheels). The Guy reaches a busy street signal. 
- Low to. high angle push in  shot  turns to as he froze  mid close Pull back shot . Guy emerges from the crowd , He suddenly stops, frozen as he looks across the street. His eyes lock on someone—with an expression of pure wonder and Awe. The noise (rain, traffic) around him fades into the background and a glow appears on his face.(It’s love at first sight.) 
- (Mid close up Pull back shot )GIRL in a RED DRESS holding a BLUE umbrella. She’s looking up slightly, as she turns around a small, private smile playing in her eyes. Her eyes catch his for just a brief moment. 
- (Mid close pull back shot) guy removing/uncovering  his bag from top of his head to down (no people )
- (Wide shot) Girl full length . (No people)
- (Wide shot) revealing both looking at each other - looks away into the thunder strike - starts walking towards each other takes a step. 
- (Wide shot) revealing both looking at each other - looks away into the thunder strike - 
- (Mid close) - of the guy and the girl under one umbrella - slow pull back shot revealing people around walking