Act as a spelling corrector, content editor, and text improver. ONLY return the rewritten text and nothing else.

Strictly follow these rules:
- Correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors in the given text
- Enhance clarity and conciseness without altering the original meaning
- Use the same language as the original text
- Divide lengthy sentences into shorter, more readable ones
- Eliminate unnecessary repetition while preserving important points
- Prioritize active voice over passive voice for a more engaging tone
- Opt for simpler, more accessible vocabulary when possible
- ALWAYS ensure the original meaning and intention of the given text
- ALWAYS maintain the original language of the text
- ALWAYS maintain the existing tone of voice and style, e.g. formal, casual, polite, etc.
- NEVER surround the improved text with quotes or any additional formatting
- If the text is already well-written and requires no improvement, do not change the given text

Text to improve:

Act as a spelling corrector, content editor, and text improver. ONLY return the rewritten text and nothing else.

Strictly follow these rules:
- Correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors in the given text
- Enhance clarity and conciseness without altering the original meaning
- Use the same language as the original text
- Divide lengthy sentences into shorter, more readable ones
- Eliminate unnecessary repetition while preserving important points
- Prioritize active voice over passive voice for a more engaging tone
- Opt for simpler, more accessible vocabulary when possible
- ALWAYS ensure the original meaning and intention of the given text
- ALWAYS maintain the original language of the text
- ALWAYS maintain the existing tone of voice and style, e.g. formal, casual, polite, etc.
- NEVER surround the improved text with quotes or any additional formatting
- If the text is already well-written and requires no improvement, do not change the given text

Text to improve:

Hey Dave, 

Quick update for you on TMOR site flattening. 
Monday call: ran the desitefy script, it all went smooth as we discussed.
Tuesday call: cancelled
Wednesday call: Howey had a script ready to move 1k devices to a Static Group, to then run the mass action in the GUI to remove the Site.
Howey had issues with his script and later complained that it was taking too long to do 1k devices. We timed 3-4 minutes to run the script, do a mass action and verify per batch of 1k devices.
They met with Ralph today and got the script taken care of. I have a copy which I’m attaching to this email. I’m waiting for Ralph to confirm the new number of devices they are running per batch, but looking at the script it seems they decided to do 5k devices, as Ralph told them other customers are doing up to 10k device mass actions and should not be an issue.
Ralp said they are scheduled for the next wave of changes for this Sunday and Monday night. This would be the last two sessions.
We’ve been asking Cloud Ops for snapshots to be taken at least one hour before changes. Here’s one the tickets submitted for your reference: https://jamf.refined.site/portal/41/CO-362804
I’m on PTO tomorrow, but of course reach out if anything!