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PERSONAL STATEMENT
Dear Visa Officer,

I am writing to address the reasons behind my second application for a Canadian study visa, subsequent to the recent denial of my initial application. The refusal was predicated on the belief of the visa officer that my economic resources were insufficient to support my study plans in Canada, leading to the conclusion that my application was not intended for temporary study.

Regarding my financial circumstances, I would like to clarify that I possess the necessary means to support my education at Conestoga College in Canada, specifically in the 3-month of English for Academic Studies (tuition fee 4834.28CAD)and 1-academic year of Computer Applications Development program (tuition fee 17,958CAD) that will totally cost 35,792 CAD. My financial capability is evidenced by various assets and resources. I have pursued the requirements of the Student Direct Stream (SDS) by purchasing a 10,050 CAD Guaranteed Investment Certificate (GIC) through the Royal Bank and covering the first year’s tuition of 12,882.26 CAD. Additionally, to substantiate my economic strength, I have provided evidence of my father’s current account with a balance of 160,000 RMB, my mother’s investment products worth 162,420.78 RMB, and fixed deposit accounts with balances of 20,757 RMB and 29,000 RMB. Furthermore, I have furnished proof of ownership of three properties valued at approximately 2,056,000 RMB, as well as possession of a private car. These assets amply demonstrate my ability to sustain myself financially during my studies in Canada and my study expense will not influence my parents good living in Beijing, China.

Pursuing the Computer Applications Development program at Conestoga College is a justifiable decision that aligns harmoniously with my previous educational background and career experiences in the field of e-commerce and my long-term career development in China. I have gained a solid foundation in the field of Computer Applications Development through achieving the Bachelor’s degree in Electronic Commerce from Dalian Polytechnic University as well as throughout my responsibilities involving website content updating, website marketing planning, website server maintenance, website process optimization, data mining and analysis, as well as user research professional experience successively at different countries. Now, my current employer Beijing SanJingSanPin Culture & Technology Co., Ltd. plans to expand App business. To update the necessary skills and knowledge to contribute significantly to the upcoming App business of my employer, I am determined to study the CAP program at Conestoga College, which will serve my interests both in terms of personal growth and professional advancement.

The Computer Applications Development program at Conestoga College encompasses a wide range of knowledge and skills, including software development, application design, mobile technology, and database management, which are highly relevant to the needs of Beijing SanJingSanPin Culture & Technology Co., Ltd. as the curriculum is designed to equip me with the necessary technical expertise and industry insights to make a meaningful impact on the company’s App development. I will be better prepared to understand and leverage the latest software development tools and technologies to support the company’s App business with this program. 

My intention to return to China after completing my studies is grounded in strong personal and professional ties. I have a stable job position waiting for me at Beijing SanJingSanpin Cultural &Technology Co., Ltd., where I have been contributing to the company’s success. I intend to apply the knowledge and skills obtained during my studies to further develop and enhance the company’s App business. I plan to focus on improving user experience, optimizing website processes, and utilizing data mining and user research techniques to provide precise and personalized services for the App business. By collaborating with the team, I aim to contribute to product development, enhance user satisfaction, and participate in marketing planning and promotional activities to expand the user base. I aspire to serve as an invaluable asset to the company, enhancing its competitiveness. The digitalization of various industries within China has led to an increased demand for skilled professionals in this field. With my enriched qualifications from Conestoga College, I will possess a distinct advantage over my peers and be perfectly positioned to seize promising career opportunities within China’s thriving technology sector. 

Besides having family and loved ones in China with whom I aspire to live and grow together, I have substantial assets in the form of properties and investments, emphasizing my commitment and intention to continue my life and career in China. 

In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that my economic status is more than sufficient to support my studies at Conestoga College’s Computer Applications Development program. Pursuing this course is a logical step aligned with my long-term career goals, specifically in contributing to my company’s upcoming App business. I have presented data-backed evidence of my financial standing, career plans, and intention to return to China after completing my studies. I kindly request the embassy to reconsider my application and grant me the opportunity to pursue my education in Canada.

Thank you for your kind attention to my application.

Sincerely,

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