In 1000 words, i am to write a M.Sc. dissertation proposal on Cybersecurity Framework Evaluation, where i am to Analyze and compare different cyber security frameworks like NIST, ISO 27001 etc. and make recommendations for implementations.

I am to use the following structure

Project Title: Do not worry if your project title may slightly change as the project evolves…

Problem you are seeking to address: You should aim to concisely describe the problem you are trying to solve / investigate; by addressing the following points that are listed below in this template (aim and scope; project objectives; … testing and evaluation; ethical considerations)

Aim and scope: 2 – 3 paragraphs; provide links to the literature when necessary to bridge the identified gaps with your project’s aims towards these gaps.

Project objectives: 2 – 4 bullet points.

Expected project outcomes: 1 – 3 paragraphs including a description of your proposed artefact and the statement of the way(s) in which your artefact will help to overcome (some aspect of) the challenge identified in your problem statement.

Brief review of relevant literature: This may just be a list of resources (such as databases and journal articles that you anticipate referring to). However, it is better if you practice correct citation and referencing style, describing how you intend to use these resources and why these are likely to be useful to show that you have actually read them!

At least 10 references – no maximum number. References are not included in the word count limit.

[optional] References: You may decide to have a separate section here just for your references so that you can practice using UWE Harvard standards of referencing. These will not count towards your word limit.

Testing and Evaluation: Statement of how you plan to test and evaluate the success of your work (1 paragraph minimum).

Ethical considerations: Are there ethical issues related to the project? Are you collecting primary data – if so, how is it being collected, stored, and is there a retention / destruction plan. Have you consulted with your group advisor on this? Have you perhaps modified your original scope as a result of ethical considerations? (The length may vary, but this should be a minimum of 1 sentence).

Project plan: Gantt chart or similar to visualise the next steps in your project.


For this, i have written the following.


Title: Assessing the Impact of Cloud Computing on the UK’s Financial Sector
Problem you are seeking to address:	Technology and regulatory pressures are putting pressure on the UK's financial services sector, which is a critical part of the nation's economy. With cloud computing, institutions can innovate, scale, and become more cost-effective (Marston et al., 2011). The move to cloud-enabled solutions is, however, fraught with complications, including data security concerns, regulatory compliance issues, and migration risks (Sultan, 2011). 
To fully understand these challenges and gauge the extent to which cloud adoption has reached the financial sector, it is imperative to conduct a detailed analysis of the industry's cloud adoption level. In the near future, cloud adoption is predicted to continue to grow according to Honor & Millard, 2018. 
Aim and scope:	This research aims to perform a detailed analysis of how the UK's financial services sector is leveraging cloud computing technologies. This study will assess how widespread cloud adoption is in finance, examine the specific advantages that firms attain, and examine any barriers that prevent a broader adoption. The increasing digitization of financial services could generate innovation and growth through cloud computing (Iyer & Henderson, 2010). In addition, the study will develop a comprehensive understanding of cloud service models (IaaS, PaaS, SaaS), deployment types (public, private, hybrid), and their specific use-cases within the financial sector. Cloud computing's strategic importance in financial services, and its impact on operational efficiency, compliance, and customer engagement will be researched in this study (Armbrust et al., 2010).

There is a perceived hesitation to adopt cloud computing due to concerns about data security, privacy, and compliance with financial regulations (Jansen & Grance, 2011). Study scope includes dissecting aforementioned barriers and providing a framework for navigating the strict regulatory landscape. The research will examine how financial firms can use cloud capabilities and comply with regulations such as the General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (European Parliament and Council, 2016). By exploring paths for enhancing compliance and security in the cloud, this exploration aim to reduce apprehensions surrounding cloud adoption.

This study is expected to produce a set of recommendations tailored to the special needs of financial services in cloud adoption.

Project objectives:	To quantify the adoption of cloud computing within the UK financial services sector.

To elucidate the empirical benefits and value drivers of cloud computing in financial services.

To identify and analyze the challenges and barriers to cloud integration specific to the financial sector.

To propose actionable strategies and recommendations for accelerating cloud adoption.
Expected project outcomes:	As a main outcome of this project, a detailed report on cloud computing in UK financial services is anticipated. In this report, quantitative adoption rates of cloud services will be presented, cloud technologies will be classified, and the effect that cloud technologies are having on financial organizations will be evaluated. Using performance metrics such as operational efficiency, cost savings, agility, and customer satisfaction to evaluate cloud adoption patterns and trends, this document will assess the correlation between cloud strategies and performance metrics.

Additionally, this research will result in a set of best practices and strategic insights customized for financial industry players interested in harnessing cloud computing's benefits. These insights will cover how to navigate a regulatory environment, securing data, and ensure compliance with industry standards like the GDPR and FCA. As a result of this, financial institutions will be able to make informed decisions about the cloud models and services to adopt, as they maintain data confidentiality and integrity.

Finally, it is anticipated that actionable policy recommendations will be provided to industry stakeholders and regulatory bodies to help ensure a safe and efficient adoption of cloud computing in the financial sector. These recommendations aim to increase financial institutions' confidence in utilizing cloud technologies by addressing perceived barriers and providing a clear framework on how to overcome them. Through collaboration and shared understanding, the project will enable communication between the financial industry and cloud service providers, alleviating reservations and ensuring the UK's financial services are more competitive and innovative.
Brief review of relevant literature:	To understand the technology's applications in various industries, the literature review begins with foundational texts that discuss cloud computing's fundamental characteristics and service models (IaaS, PaaS, SaaS) (Mell & Grance, 2011). It will then focus on literature about cloud computing in the context of financial services, demonstrating how the technology fosters innovation, operational resilience, and customer-centric services (Sultan, 2011; Iyer & Henderson, 2010).

Key studies will be examined, including those studies discussing the regulatory challenges and data security concerns associated with implementing cloud solutions in highly regulated environments, such as those in the financial sector (Jansen & Grance, 2011; Hon & Millard, 2018). There will be a significant focus on the complex interplay between technological agility and compliance with regulations like GDPR and FCA guidelines during this review (European Parliament and Council, 2016; Financial Conduct Authority, 2019).

In addition, the literature review will incorporate insights from industry reports and white papers (Morgan Stanley, 2019; Deloitte, 2018), which provide real-world evidence of cloud adoption barriers and benefits. The resources will be essential for identifying the cost savings, scalability options, and enhanced competitiveness associated with cloud computing, as well as the operational risks involved.

Testing and Evaluation:	The proposed study will employ a mixed-methods approach to test and evaluate the research findings. To identify patterns, trends, and correlations between cloud strategy and business performance indicators within financial institutions, quantitative data on cloud adoption will be analyzed using statistical methods. Using triangulation, quantitative results will be corroborated with qualitative data, such as interviews and case studies. To assess the credibility of the recommendations provided by the study, participant feedback and expert evaluations will also be critical. By evaluating the practical applications and potential outcomes of the recommendations in scenario analysis, the effectiveness of the strategic guidelines developed will be tested.
Ethical considerations:	In particular, sensitive data will be handled in a strict manner and research participants will be anonymous. Due to the highly confidential nature of information in the financial sector, any effort to collect primary data will be conducted with the utmost discretion, to ensure compliance with GDPR. Informed consent will be sought from all participants, clarifying the scope, purpose, and intended use of the data. All sensitive information will be protected during the data analysis process by stringent security measures. All collected data will be stored securely and will only be accessible to the research team.



Now, i am advised to change the title to "Assessing the Impact of Cloud Computing on the UK’s Construction Industry"

As precisely as possible, Generate what i should add (change) and tell me where to include all these.
Thanks