Rewrite the content as you are a foreigner who got the duolingo 90. Fluent english, concise, logic. I am ecstatic to share the news that I have gained admission to the ESL & Bachelor of Business Administration at Brock University. If my student visa is granted, I will begin classes in September at Brock University in St. Catharines, Ontario. Please find attached the receipt issued by Brock evidencing that I have paid the first-session ESL tuition of $3,625 to secure my place at Brock University. 
My first two years of secondary school were spent at Hebei Zhuozhou Middle School. Since the epidemic hit during these two years, I have no recollections of what a normal school year was like. The mandatory enrollment in a politics course was the worst requirement in my opinion. My lack of interest in politics was compounded by the fact that the instructor and textbook presented controversial political proposals without providing any opportunity for inquiry or discussion. My preferred method of learning is active engagement with the data and knowledge presented to me, rather than passive assimilation. I told my parents about my worries, and they took my concerns seriously. We both agreed that the educational prospects are finest in North America, so we worked together to find a way for me to participate in the OSSD program and finish my high school career at Rosedale Global High School. The past year of studies has provided me with invaluable experiences that have reinforced our conclusion. 
Given that I was already preparing for the Ontario Secondary School Diploma (OSSD), it made sense for me to attend a university in Ontario for my undergraduate studies. The timing couldn’t have been better when I received my acceptance to Brock University’s ESL & BBA program. Since my English skills are not yet proficient in listening and writing, I will need to complete two sessions of ESL study at Brock before starting my full-time degree courses in September 2024. The professional program will cover the basics of economics, accounting, financial information systems, financial management, management decision making, organizational behavior, human resources, strategic planning, and marketing. Emphasis is also placed on communication, analytical, and computer skills. After gaining a solid foundation in these fields during my first year, I will have the opportunity to choose the specialization that aligns best with my personality and skillset. Additionally, I will have the option to select electives from other disciplines. I plan to make full use of the university library’s resources to expand my knowledge and participate in practical and extracurricular activities to integrate myself into the local environment and experience Canadian culture. I believe that both the IELP program and the undergraduate Business Administration program will pave the way for my future career development.
To provide a brief overview of our family’s current financial status, my parents have strong ties to the community and hold prominent positions in their respective companies. My father is the General Manager at Zhuozhou Fengshuo Weiye Fine Chemical Co., Ltd., holding a 70% stake in the company, while my mother is the administrative department manager at Zhuozhou City Yanyang Trade Co., Ltd., serving as the Legal Person for the corporation. They have a stable annual income totaling RMB300,000, excluding my father’s shareholder dividends. For my education, my parents have set aside RMB 500,000 in two-time deposits from the Agricultural Bank of China. Additionally, we have provided two of our family’s most frequently used account statements, which show an average balance of $2 million over the past year. Furthermore, my father has made investments in stocks and has achieved impressive returns, demonstrating his investment experience. Our family also owns a house, the ownership certificate is attached. To conclude, our family’s financial situation does not present any cause for concern.
I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to read this, and I genuinely hope that you will be able to assist me in achieving my future goals.