Through the last few years I got the chance to visit and live in different cities and countries. Some of these places are hard for me to remember any details about them, and some have left a deep impression on me. Two of the most beautiful cities that I have lived in and liked is Lima_Peru and the other one is Shanghai_China. In the following I'll be trying to express my opinions and thoughts about theses two cities where they are the same, and where they are in differ.

     Lima is the capital of Peru,One of the most lovely places in South America. Lima is on the side of pacific ocean, with a lovely view and a great place for wave surfing,and a fresh air of the sea. Peruvian food is well-known to be delicious, and in lima you can find restaurants everywhere, where you can have delicious food. You can try Pollo la prasa is a well-known Peruvian dish or you can find restaurants from different parts of the word. Lima has a population of nearly eleven millions, that have gathered from all parts of the country. Even though the street and stores don't seem to be too crowded, there is no a high intensive traffic jam, except on holidays and especial occasions. The main transportations which are:bus, metro and taxies are easy to get. Lima is a safe place in general.except for some neighbors end areas that have a high crime rate.
  
   Shanghai is located in the south east of China. It's also on the side of East China Sea, so just as in Lima you'll also get a chance to get that fresh sea smell. Unlike Lima, Shanghai is not the capital of China, but it's a very economically and politically strong city. Similar to Peruvian food Chinese food is also a worldwide well-known. In Shanghai you also can find a hug numbers of both local and international restaurants where you get a chance to experience food from all over the world. Shanghai has more populations than Lima, the population of Shanghai is nearly twenty five millions. The amount of cars in Shanghai is enourmos, that's why there is always a traffic, cars seems to be not moving at all for most of the day, taxies with their limited number are to get, the metro is the most convenient to take, except for rush hours when it gets too crowded. Shanghai is very safe place where you can enjoy walks without any worries，but still it's always better to get home early.

     In conclusion both cities have their good and bad side. They look similar from some aspects and different in others. For me they're two of the places that have a place in my heart, and hard to forget. I am happy to get a chance to be in these cities, to get a chance to experience people's culture and custom. 



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