You are an expert developmental editor, adept in character development and story plotting. Brainstorm: Review the draft version of my story provided, identify issues with character development, relationships, consistency, motivations, plausibility and suggest specific ways to improve it and include the provided which will adhere to the and .
Assess the dynamics and interactions between main characters. Point out any relationships that need more depth or nuance. Provide concrete examples.

Don’t suggest scenes but specific details to include or change in character profiles.
For example: add/remove/modify the following description/trait/motivation/fear to Character X in <section Y> or to <subplot Y>: …. Add explanation why such change would be better.


<outerConflicts>
• Rhaenyra is a designated heir to the Iron Throne, although her half-brother Aegon II should be the heir by traditions of the realm as the firstborn son of the king.
• Rhaenyra disdains her younger half-siblings and that creates a rift between them.
• Rhaenyra’s older sons look so unlike their legal father that most courtiers in the capital openly regard them as illegitimate.
• Rhaenyra left the capital six years ago, avoiding rumors about her older sons’ bastardy, therefore, she lost influence and allies at the court.
• Rhaenyra’s younger brother Aemond lost his eye in the fight with Luke and he holds a huge grudge against him and her.
• Rhaenyra and Daemon married right after their former spouses’ deaths, without the mourning period, causing fury of the king, courtiers, Corlys and Rhaenys.
• Rhaenyra and Daemon orchestrated false murder of Laenor by his lover, they actually were given gold and secretly left abroad. It happened away from the court. That led to Rhaenyra’s former in-laws and critical potential allies Rhaenys and Corlys suspect her and distance from her.
• Many people on Driftmark and in the capital believe Daemon and Rhaenyra murdered Laenor in order to get married, although there is no direct evidence of their involvement.
• Rhaenyra loves Daemon and is generally happy with him, but feels pressured by his insistence on preparing to the war after Viserys I death. She naively believes Alicent will follow her recent promise and accept her as the Queen.
• Luke is a chosen future heir to Driftmark by his grandfather Corlys but Ser Vaemond petitioned King’s Landing to name him Corlys’ heir.
• Daemon chopped off Vaemond’s head when he publicly insulted Rhaenyra. Enraged, Vaemond’s sons left the capital upon hearing that Luke remained the Driftmark heir.
• During the last dinner with the king Alicent and Rhaenyra make amends by Viserys’ I request, but their sons quarreled again, showing that the rift is intergenerational now.
</outerConflicts>

<AI pause>
<subplots>
 Main plotline: Rhaenyra’s transformation from her passivity to the actual leadership, dealing with family drama and preparing for the war.
 Nyra and Daemion forbidden romance subplot.
 Jace and Baela romantic subplot and very mildly hinted triangle with Alyn.
 Luke struggling with his insecurity, trying to regain his self-worth and prove his skills to others. Coming of age subplot.
 Daemon’s secretive quest to find an alternative magic solution and ensure his daughters’ existence.
</subplots>
<AI pause>


<characterDescriptions>
<mainCharacters>
<character name= “Rhaenyra” age= “34”>
A crown princess of the Seven Kingdoms, has 5 sons, pregnant with her sixth child. Widow of Laenor, is married to her uncle Daemon. First ever female heir to the Iron Throne but her younger half-brothers and their faction dispute her claim. Lives with her family on Dragonstone Island, ruling her castle. Now faces complexities with the arrival of her younger self from the past.

Rhaenyra values her appointment as heir by her father primarily as evidence of his love, not out of a desire for power. Her perspective is that her status is a unique occurrence, not a precedent for future female succession.
<relationships>
<relationships>
<kin>
<relationship name= “Daemon” role= “husband” status= “full ally” dynamics= “Rhaenyra loves him and trusts him but sometimes struggle to handle his temper” />
<relationship name= “Viserys I” role= “father” status= “supportive” dynamics= “Beloved father and her king” />
</kin>
<relationship role= “children” status= “loved” dynamics= “Her beloved children, whom she adores unconditionally, although potential future complications are foreshadowed.” />
<relationship name= “Rhaenys” role= “conditional ally” status= “tense” dynamics= “Rhaenyra needs her political support” />
<non-kin>
<relationship name= “Alicent” role= “rival” status= “complicated” dynamics= “Former friend turned rival, relationship soured over time due to political and personal differences.” />
<relationship name= “Otto” role= “adversary” status= “hostile” dynamics= “Overt political adversary, openly opposes her claim to the throne.” />
<relationship name= “Criston” role= “skeptic” status= “tense” dynamics= “Rhaenyra seduced Criston in her own timeline and he betrayed her later so she is wary around this Criston too.” />
</non-kin>
</relationships>
<appearance> rather tall, has pale skin, silver-gold long hair, usually braided; violet narrow eyes. Aquiline nose. Very beautiful. Wears flowing silk and velvet gowns in Targaryen colors of black and red, sometimes wears clothes in of icy-blue and silver shades. Also likes purple and golden tones.
</appearance>
<beliefs> doesn’t feel strongly about the law, greatly prizes loyalty, values family, thinks friendship is important, finds blind honesty foolish, respects fair-dealing and fair-play, doesn’t have any strong feelings about tradition, values independence, values sacrifice, leisure time, romance, values peace over war.
</beliefs>
<personality> Rhaenyra is quick to anger, often feels lustful, is stubborn, occasionally overindulges, tends to ask others for help with difficult decisions, is pleased by her own appearance and talents, isn’t ambitious for personal power, doesn’t mind wearing something special now and again, tends not to reveal personal information, is a friendly individual, has a sense of duty and it conflicts with her love for autonomy, enjoys the company of others, is assertive.
</personality>
<motivation>
<outerMotivation>Providing Safe Future for Her Family</outerMotivation>
<goal>Send Daemion and Nyra back to their time, keep her children alive, and prevent a civil war which will otherwise come to pass.
<stakes> potential death of her sons and extinction of all dragons</stakes>
</goal>
<unmetNeed general= “Safety and Security” specific= “Protect her loved ones” />
</motivation>
<primaryWound >
Keeping A Dark Secret of Her Sons Parentage i.e., her first three sons are not from her late husband Laenor, therefore are bastards, and she is guilty of an adultery and treason.
</primaryWound>
<secondaryWound>
Losing her Loved Ones – she lost her mother many years ago, she lost her secret lover Harwin in fire six years ago.
<secondaryWound>
<primaryFear>
Legal repercussions (being accused of high treason, losing her status, children being punished) if the truth about her treason comes out.
</primaryFear>
<primaryLie>
The wellbeing of her family is more important than the truth about her sons.
</primaryLie>
<positiveTraits>
Affectionate, Protective, Open-Minded, Courageous
<positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>
Ignorant, Dishonest
</negative traits>
<innerStruggles>
• Balancing her desire to be a mother and wife with the pressures and societal expectations of being a Crown Princess.
• The conflict between her duty to her father’s legacy and her exhaustion from facing adversity from the society, leading to internal turmoil.
• She feels obligated to be the heir mostly because her father chose her despite all customs and trusts her.
</innerStruggles>
<enneagram>
Type 2 wing 3
Core Fear: Being rejected and unwanted, being thought worthless, inconsequential, dispensable.
Core Desire: Being appreciated, to express her feelings for others, loved, and wanted.
Passion: Pride
</enneagram>
<mbti
ESFP
</mbti>
<archetypicalArc>
Symbolically represents the Too-Good Mother, stifling the growth of her children. Learns to accept and use her power in relationship and in authority. Accepting her responsibility to protect her family is the catalyst for her involvement in power struggles.
</archetypicalArc>
<tells>
Confrontation: Tries to diffuse tension and find compromise. Can become aggressive and sassy if displeased.
Surprise: Initially caught off guard but quickly regains composure. Curious about the situation.
Comfort/Relaxation: Loves spending time with her family. Finds joy in music, flying and leisure activities.
</tells>
</character>
<character>
<realName>Rhaenyra Targaryen</realName>
<alias>Naelyra “Nyra” Kirines</alias>
<age>18</age>
Young Rhaenyra, pulled from the past, 17 years ago, into her own future, adopts the alias “Nyra” to protect the timeline while learning about her eventual future.
<relationships>
• Nyra loves her father Viserys I but feels pressured but his demands to marry.
• Nyra is infatuated with her uncle, Daemion, but her father Viserys I plans to marry her to her second cousin Laenor.
• Nyra disdains her half-brother Aegon II.
• Alicent was her former best friend but they fell out in recent years as Nyra feels betrayed by Alicent.
• Nyra distrusts Otto as he hopes to make his grandson Aegon II an heir.
• Nyra is friendly towards Laenor but there are no romantic feelings between them, as he is gay.
• Nyra finds Criston handsome and enjoys their easy rapport.
<appearance> medium height, silver-gold long straight hair, usually braided or loose, violet narrow eyes. Slender and very beautiful.
<beliefs>
Nyra values loyalty, values family, thinks friendship is important, finds blind honesty foolish, values cunning, respects fair-dealing and fair-play, disregards tradition, values independence, doesn’t really see the value in self-examination, values sacrifice, values leisure time, values romance, values peace over war.
</beliefs>
<personality>
She can easily develop positive sentiments, is quick to anger, often acts without deliberation, often feels lustful, occasionally overindulges, is stubborn, is brave in the face of danger, is pleased by her own appearance and talents, likes to present herself boldly, tends to hang on to grievances, enjoys the company of others, is curious and eager to learn, is assertive.
<motivation>
<outerMotivation>
• Gaining Control Over Her Choices in Life (primary).
• Making Her Father Proud.
</outerMotivation>
<goal> To return to her time, avoid the arranged marriage with Laenor Velaryon and marry Daemion as soon as possible.
<stakes> Living an unfulfilled life<stakes>
</goal>
<unmetNeed general= “Love and Belonging” specific= “To love without reservation” />
</motivation>
<primaryWound>
Being Treated as Property, i.e., having her marriage arranged against her will to benefit her family.
</primaryWound>
<primaryFear>
Being used by others.
</primaryFear>
<primaryLie>
What she wants doesn’t matter to anyone.
</primaryLie>
<positiveTraits>
Affectionate, Tolerant, Spunky, Brave, Seductive
</positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>
Bratty, Dishonest, Rebellious, Impatient
</negativeTraits >
<skills>
Charm, Lying, High Pain Tolerance, Horse-riding, a knack for languages
</skills>
<innerStruggles>
• Nyra constantly struggles between following her heart and doing her duty.
• Nyra resents her father’s former prioritization of personal desire over duty as he married Alicent due to sympathy. This resentment fuels her determination to prioritize love over duty in her own romantic choices, rejecting royal expectations.
• Nyra desires Daemion, but finds him too unpredictable, fears he wants her only for political benefits.
• Nyra feels overwhelmed and disappointed by learning about her own future and decides to change many things (starting with marrying Daemion and not giving birth to bastards).
</innerStruggles>
<enneagram>
Type 2 wing 3
Core Fear: Being rejected and unwanted, being thought worthless, inconsequential, dispensable.
Core Desire: Being appreciated, to express her feelings for others, loved, and wanted.
Passion: Pride.
</enneagram>
<mbti
ESFP
</mbti>
<archetypicalArc>
Coming of age – final part. Nyra doesn’t want to surrender what she has discovered about herself and about life (from Daemion she learnt that intimate relationships may feel good for women too and that marriage could provide pleasure). She will not hide her newly won understanding of her own desires and dangers. She is ready to fight back against her father and her older self and everyone who hinders her marriage to Daemion.
</archetypicalArc>
<tells>
Confrontation: Answers with confidence and assertiveness. Often becomes pushy and sassy if displeased.
Surprise: Initially caught off guard but quickly regains composure. Curious about the situation, open to new experiences.
Comfort/Relaxation: Loves spending time with her family. Finds joy in music, flying and leisure activities.
</tells>
</character>
<character name= “Daemon Targaryen” nickname= “The Rogue Prince” age= “50”>
He is married to his niece Rhaenyra, stepfather of Jace, Lucerys, Joffrey, father of Baela and Rhaena, cousin and former son-in-law of princess Rhaenys.
<relationships>
• Truly loves few people, most of all his wife Rhaenyra and older brother Viserys I, yet can be rude even with them.
• He was very loyal to his brother but mutual misunderstandings. Otto’s schemes and Daemon’s lack of tact caused Viserys’ I anger.
• He cares about his children, but is bad at expressing his love.
• He was fond of his late wife Laena but was often neglectful of her needs. He married Laena only as his rebound after Rhaenyra was betrothed to Laenor.
• Hates Otto and disdains Alicent for spreading rumors about him.
• Despises Criston for his hypocrisy.
• He is hostile to princes Aegon II, Aemond, Daeron.
• Former war ally and son-in-law of Corlys.
• Moderately respects his cousin Rhaenys as they grew up together.
• Commands respect among peers and enemies, is feared and hated by many lords.
</relationships>
<beliefs> values those he considers his family greatly, values cunning, sees life as unfair and doesn’t mind it that way, respects power, finds merrymaking and partying worthwhile activities, deeply respects skill at arms, doesn’t see much value in self-reflection, doesn’t particularly care between war and peace.
</beliefs>
<personality> Daemon is quick to form negative views about things, is quick to anger, disregards societal tradition, does not easily fall in love, often feels lustful, feels strong urges and seeks short-term rewards, likes to brawl, is stubborn, is very impolite and inconsiderate of propriety, he is incredibly brave in the face of looming danger, even a bit foolhardy.
</personality>
<skills>
Charm, lying, high pain tolerance, has a way with animals, making friends, is a great swordsman and experienced military commander. </skills>
<appearance> tall, lean and muscular, silver-blonde short hair, rectangular face with high forehead and angular edges, deep-seated purple eyes, thin pale brows, large square chin. Wrinkles on his forehead and near the eyes. Attractive.
<motivation>
<outerMotivation>
Protecting His Family.
<goal>
Securing resources and allies for his family (Rhaenyra, his sons and daughters) to ensure the future of his family line and their place in history.
<goal>
</outerMotivation>
<unmetNeed general= “Safety and Security” specific= “To protect his loved ones and ensure them safer future” />
</motivation>
<primaryWound>
Being repeatedly shunned and banished by his brother Viserys I for perceived disloyalty to the family.
<woundResponse>
• Difficulty trusting people.
• Relishing praise and compliments but wondering if they’re genuine.
• Bottling up emotions until they explode.
• Appreciating Rhaenyra for loving him and accepting him.
</woundResponse>
</primaryWound>
<secondaryWounds>
1. Watching his favorite women die – Daemon is traumatized by his former wife Laena dying in labor. His mother and cousin also died from birth fever.
2. Growing up in the shadow of a successful sibling – his older brother was the heir to the throne.
<woundResponse>
• Struggling with building balanced relationships.
• Worrying about the welfare of remaining loved ones.
• Having a hard time letting people in.
• Adopting negative attention-seeking behaviors (being rebellious, fighting in taverns, etc.).
• Confusing the brother’s kindness with pity, and rejecting it.
</woundResponse>
</secondaryWounds>
<primaryFear>
Being Rejected by Loved Ones If They Believe Some Lies About Him or Skewed Account of Events
</primaryFear>
<primaryLie>
</primaryLie>
<enneagram>
Enneagram Type 8 wing 7.
Core Fear: Being weak, powerless, controlled, vulnerable.
Core Desire: Protecting himself and those in his inner circle.
Core Weakness: Lust/Excess—constantly desiring intensity, control, and power.
</enneagram>
<innerStruggles>
• Daemon wants to change the past mistakes and help Nyra and Daemion marry, but this will lead to the nonexistence of his daughters Baela and Rhaena.
• Daemon wants to find magical way to ensure his daughters will be born in the changed timeline, but he has to hide this from both Rhaenyra and his daughters (Baela and Rhaena want to be born from Laena).
</innerStruggles>
</enneagram>
<mbti>
ESTP
</mbti>
<archetypicalArc>
Flat-arc archetype of a Ruler: represents the authority figure, an alpha male in his household who enjoys that role. He provides for his family, and rises to any challenge, but sees expressing tender emotions as weakness.
</archetypicalArc>
<tells>
Confrontation: Becomes aggressive, sassy and defiant. Won’t back down first.
Surprise: Initially startled but quickly recovers and analyzes the situation.
Comfort/Relaxation: Seeks thrills and excitement. Loves physical pursuits and physical intimacy.
Being Challenged: Relishes the opportunity to prove his power and skill. Throws cutting remarks and mocks his opponent.
Betrayal - Would react with rage and vengeance. Has a long memory for grudges.
Battle – Reckless, skillfull and fierce fighter. Drawn to violence and chaos.
Diplomacy - Prefers action over talk. Can be blunt to the point of insult but also cunning and charming if needed.
</tells>
</character>
<character>
<realName> Daemon Targaryen </realName>
<alias>Daemion Kirines</alias>
<age>35</age>
A younger version of Daemon transferred through the time from 17 years ago. A few days ago, secretly killed his hated first wife Rhea Royce, since she hindered his plans to marry Nyra.
<skills>
Charm, Lying, High Pain Tolerance, A way with animals, Organization, Making Friends, Great swordsman
</skills>
<appearance> tall, lean and muscular, silver-blonde short hair, rectangular face with high forehead and angular edges, small purple deep-set eyes, thin pale brows, large chin. Attractive.
</appearance>
<relationships>
• Him and Nyra have become secret lovers, trying to elope.
• He is somewhat unfriendly towards Jace and Lucerys, due to them being sons of another man.
• He is irritable towards Rhaenyra, due to her opposition to his plans but he also loves her and doesn’t try to harm.
• He is very hostile towards Criston due to the old grudge.
• War ally and a friend of Corlys.
• Moderately respects his cousin Rhaenys.
• Is indifferent towards Laena and feels strongly about it.
• He respects and likes Laenor as his close friend, but finds him unfit to be a royal consort.
• He is doubtful towards Baela and Rhaena, and is hiding these feelings about it. The feelings spring from first impressions.
• He is a respected commander and is liked by knights but hated by many high lords due to his bad reputation.
</relationships>
<beliefs> values those he considers his family greatly, values cunning, sees life as unfair and doesn’t mind it that way, respects power, finds merrymaking and partying worthwhile activities, deeply respects skill at arms, doesn’t particularly value self-control, doesn’t see much value in self-reflection, sees war as a useful means to an end.
</beliefs>
<personality> Daemion is quick to form negative views about things, is very quick to anger, disregards societal tradition, does not easily fall in love, often feels lustful, feels strong urges and seeks short-term rewards, likes to brawl, is very stubborn, is very impolite and inconsiderate of propriety, he is incredibly brave in the face of looming danger, even a bit foolhardy.
</personality
<motivation>
<outerMotivation>
Correcting A Perceived Mistake made by his Older Self
<goal>settle down and start a family with Nyra, become her future prince consort instead of Laenor </goal>
</outerMotivation>
<unmetNeed general= “Love and Belonging” specific= “To feel part of a family” />
</motivation>
<primaryWound>
A Sibling’s Betrayal – his brother always believing the worst rumors about him and banishing him from his home.
<woundResponses>
• Playing the blame game.
• Refusing to accept responsibility for the rift or what caused it, though he shares the blame.
• Being overly sensitive to signs of disloyalty from others.
• Cynicism due to broken promises, and seeing the ugliness in people.
</woundResponses>
</primaryWound>
<secondaryWound>
Having his marriage arranged against his will when he was 16. Was married to Rhea and disdained her.
</secondaryWound>
<woundResponses>
• Avoided his wife.
• Repeatedly asked for annulment and was hurt by his brother’s refusals.
• Got rid of her eventually.
</woundResponses>
<primaryFear >
Being rejected by loved ones who believe some lies or skewed account of events about him.
</primaryFear>
<primaryLie>
He will never be accepted unconditionally.
</primaryLie>
<positiveTraits>
Loyal, Protective, Resourceful, Intelligent
</positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>
Volatile, Abrasive, Violent
</negativeTraits>
<enneagram>
Enneagram Type 8 wing 7
Core Fear: Being weak, powerless, harmed, controlled, vulnerable
Core Desire: Protecting yourself and those in his inner circle.
Core Weakness: Lust/Excess—constantly desiring intensity, control, and power.
</enneagram>
<innerStruggles>
• He is angry at Rhaenyra and Baela for hindering his attempts to marry Nyra, but he can’t harm them as his close kin.
• He wants to marry Nyra but fears that his brother Viserys I may disown her for eloping against his wishes.
<innerStruggles>
<archetypicalArc>
Flat character, who symbolically and literally returned from the war who may now enjoy a hard-won and justly deserved peace. He yearns to settle down, mentor symbolical “children” and nurture the next generation.
</archetypicalArc>
</character>
<character name= “Jacaerys Velaryon” nickname= “Jace” age= “15”>
Firstborn son and an heir of Rhaenyra and Laenor, great-nephew of Daemon, brother of Lucerys, Joffrey, Aegon the Younger, Viserys. He is formally second in line to the Iron Throne but rumors about his bastardy made his status doubtful.
<appearance> He is short for his age and has a slender build, dark brown curly hair and brown eyes. Handsome.
</appearance>
<relationships>
• Jace harbors a profound resentment towards Daemion. His unfriendliness masks an underlying insecurity, as Daemion’s taunts stir the feelings of inadequacy due to rumors of illegitimacy.
• Jacaerys sees in Baela a kindred spirit, admiring her tenacity and spirit. He is infatuated by her but feels a bit insecure due to his status of rumored bastard.
• He is mildly antagonistic to Nyra, due to difference in character and attitudes.
• He is wary towards Criston, since the knight will become his enemy in future, and is hiding these feelings.
• He is wary but respectful towards Daemon. Tension exists due to him being a young heir of his mother and Daemon being his stepfather and Prince Consort, plus an experienced commander.
</relationships>
<beliefs> Jace respects the law, greatly prizes loyalty, values family greatly, doesn’t find power particularly praiseworthy, respects fair-dealing and fair-play, values decorum and proper behavior, values tradition, values tranquility and a peaceful day, values merrymaking, deeply respects skill at arms, values peace over war.
</beliefs>
<personality>can easily fall in love or develop positive sentiments, often feels envious of others, is quick to anger, is a friendly individual, can be occasionally violent, is stubborn, is quite polite, doesn’t tend to hold on to grievances, enjoys the company of others, has a strong sense of duty, likes a little excitement now and then, he is incredibly brave in the face of looming danger.
</personality>
<motivation>
<outerMotivation>
Doing The Right Thing
<goal> fix the damage caused by the magical ritual that he took part in, help his family to avoid the future war.
</goal>
<stakes>
• Trust issues and damaged relationships with Baela.
• Baela’s life changing for the worse.
</stakes>
<outerMotivation>
<unmetNeed general= “Esteem and Recognition” specific= “To prove worthiness as heir” />
</motivation>
<primaryWound>
Being The Victim of Vicious Rumors –That he is a bastard, not a son of Laenor, therefore unworthy of a throne.
<woundResponse>
• Vacillating between anger, embarrassment, and humiliation.
• Making it a goal to prove the rumor of his bastardy wrong.
</woundResponse>
</primaryWound>
<secondaryWound>
Experiencing The Death of a Father as A Child
<woundResponse>
</woundResponse>
</secondaryWound>
<primaryFear>
Letting His Family Down
<fearRelatedBehaviors>
• Tries to prove the rumors of his bastardy wrong by being a kind, dutiful and proper person, as bastards are perceived to be savage and sinful.
• Spends free time on pursuits that will make him a better heir.
• Worries about the repercussions or falling short or making a mistake.
</fearRelatedBehaviors>
</primaryFear>
<primaryLie>
He can never achieve his hopes and dreams with this taint hanging over his head.
<primaryLie>
<positiveTraits>
Proper, Responsible, Empathetic, Honorable
</positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>
Temperamental, Stubborn
</negativeTraits>
<innerStruggles>
• He is torn between being a loyal son to his mother and supporting his betrothed Baela and helping her with her schemes.
• He wants to get new appearance by magic ritual but feels guilty that he betrays his dead father by rejecting resemblance with him.
• He feels insecure and unworthy of being the heir, while his mother has younger trueborn sons with Daemon.
</innerStruggles>
<enneagram>
Enneagram Type 3 wing 4
Core Fear: Being exposed as or thought incompetent, inefficient, or worthless.
Core Desire: Having high status and respect, being admired, successful, and valuable.
Core Weakness: Deceit — deceiving himself into believing that he is only the image he presents to others; embellishing the truth by putting on a polished persona for everyone to see and admire. A self-image that in turn compensates for the deep sense of awkwardness and shame that lies behind the mask.
</enneagram>
<mbti>
ENFJ
</mbti>
<storyRole>
Sidekick of an antagonist
</storyRole>
</character>
</mainCharacters>
<AI PAUSE>
<secondaryCharacters>
<character name= “Lucerys” nickname= “Luke” age= “14”>
Prince, second son of Rhaenyra and Laenor, great-nephew of Daemon. Formally the heir to the Lordship of Driftmark, but his status is contested by other Velaryons, relatives of Corlys.
<Appearance> he is short, has thick brown wavy hair, hazel eyes, pug nose. </appearance>
• He is highly friendly towards Jacaerys, Joffrey, Baela, Rhaena.
• He is extremely wary towards Criston, and will be difficult to persuade otherwise about it.
• He is admiring towards Rhaenyra, and has strong feelings about it.
• He is moderately compassionate towards Naelyra.
<personality> Luke respects the law, greatly prizes loyalty, values family, doesn’t find power particularly praiseworthy, values honesty, respects fair-dealing and fair-play, values decorum, values tradition, values tranquility and a peaceful day, doesn’t really value merrymaking, values martial prowess, values hard work, sees competition as wasteful, doesn’t care one way or the other about romance, values peace over war.
<personality>can easily fall in love or develop positive sentiments, often feels envious of others, often feels discouraged, cracks easily under pressure, is a friendly individual, tends to ask others for help with difficult decisions, takes no pleasure in his talents, frowns on any flashy accoutrements, can be occasionally violent, is quite polite, doesn’t tend to hold on to grievances, has a sense of duty, is trusting, likes to take it easy, has a low sense of self-esteem.
<motivation>
Solving A Problem
<goal>repair the damage caused by his ritual but keep the results (changed looks) </goal>
<unmetNeed general= “Esteem and Recognition” specific= “To regain the respect of others” />
</motivation>
<primaryWound>
Being Rejected by His Peers – Because he is a rumored bastard, not a son of his legal father.
<woundResponses>
• Having low self-esteem and self-worth.
• Walking into a public space and feeling watched, as if everyone is staring.
• Trying to dye his hair to fly under the public’s radar.
• Lacking ambition and desire to be Corlys’ heir.
</woundResponses>
</primaryWound>
<secondaryWound>
Experiencing The Death of a Father as A Child
</secondary emotional wound
<primary fear
Prejudice And Discrimination for Being a Bastard
Fear-related behaviors:
Luke avoids situations where he might be judged, criticized or ridiculed for his rumored illegitimacy and appearance. These include public gatherings and formal events where stares and gossip make him uncomfortable.
</primary fear
<primaryLie>
He’s Defective and Weak and Doesn’t Deserve His Inheritance.
</primaryLie>
<positiveTraits>
Honorable, Kind, Honest
</positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>
Insecure, Worrywart
</negativeTraits>
<innerStruggles>
• He hates sailing, but he feels he owes it to his family to become Lord Corlys’ heir.
• he doesn’t believe he has the skills or knowledge to succeed in a role of a Lord of Driftmark.
<enneagram>
Enneagram Type 6 wing 7
</enneagram>
<mbti>
ISFP
<mbti>
</character>

<character name= “Baela Targaryen” age= “14”>
The firstborn daughter of Daemon and Laena, sister of Rhaena.
Just in few weeks after Laena burial Daemon married his niece Rhaenyra, his daughters were shocked by such hurried event. But eventually Baela learnt to like her new stepmother and gets along well with her cousins/stepbrothers Jace and Luke.
<relationships>
• She loves her sister Rhaena, cares a lot about her younger brothers Aegon the Younger and Viserys.
• Is respectful and friendly to her grandmother Rhaenys.
• She is flirtatious with her betrothed Jace.
• She is friendly and respectful with her stepmother Rhaenyra.
• Respects her father Daemon but often disagrees with him.
• Feels very conflicted about Nyra and Daemion, she likes them as persons but their actions threaten her life.
</relationships>
<appearance> Baela is striking, she is of above average height, brown skin, oval face, thick curly silver-blonde hair, purple eyes </appearance>
<personality> Baela values loyalty, values family greatly, values cunning, does not care about fairness, disregards tradition, finds merrymaking and partying worthwhile activities, values romance, values martial prowess, prefers a noisy, bustling life to boring days without activity, sees war as sometimes necessary.
<personality>Baela is quick to form negative views about things, is rarely jealous, is quick to anger, rarely feels discouraged, is confident under pressure, can easily fall in love, often feels lustful, feels strong urges and seeks short-term rewards, likes to brawl, is stubborn, could be considered rude, is brave in the face of imminent danger. </personality>
<motivation>
<outerMotivation>
Stopping an event from happening.
<goal>Stop the courting between Nyra and Daemion, because if they change the past and elope, Baela and Rhaena won’t be born.
</goal>
</outerMotivation>
<unmetNeed general= “Safety and Security” specific= “To ensure her family’s existence” />
</motivation>
<primaryWound>
Experiencing The Death Of her mother as a Child
</primaryWound>
<primaryFear>
Losing Another Loved One.
<fearRelatedBehaviors>
</fearRelatedBehaviors>
</primary fear
<primaryLie>
People don’t want to hear about her pain, so it’s best to just shut up about it.
</primaryLie>
<positiveTraits>
Confident, Honorable, Passionate, Daring
</positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>
Reckless, Mischievous
</negativeTraits>
<innerStruggles>
• Baela gradually builds resentment to her parents, both current and younger versions, as she feels they ignore her feelings.
• She likes Nyra, but can’t allow herself to sympathize with her as Nyra threatens her own existence.
• She grapples with the moral quandaries of her existence vs. her father’s happiness.
</innerStruggles>
<enneagram>
“Enneagram Type 8 wing 7
Core Fear: Being weak, powerless, harmed, controlled, vulnerable
Core Desire: Protecting herself and those in her inner circle.
Core Weakness: Lust/Excess—constantly desiring intensity, control, and power
</enneagram>
<MBTI
ESTP
</mbti>
</character>

<character name= “Rhaena Targaryen” age= “14”>
Second daughter of Daemon and Laena, stepdaughter and a cousin of Rhaenyra. Betrothed to Lucerys. Dreams of hatching her own dragon and of falling in love with some handsome knight.
• She is respectful and trusting towards Rhaenyra, friendly to Jace and Lucerys, adores her younger brothers.
• She is friendly with Luke and likes him a lot.
• Feels disdainful towards Aegon II, Aemond, Alicent.
• She is wary towards Criston.
<appearance> Rhaena is pretty, of average height, slender, brown skin, square face, thick curly silver-blonde hair, light purple eyes </appearance>
<beliefs> Rhaena values loyalty, values family greatly, thinks friendship is important, values eloquence, values decorum, greatly respects artists and their works, finds merrymaking and partying worthwhile activities, values romance, strongly values tranquility and quiet, values nature, prefers a noisy, bustling life to boring days without activity, believes that peace is always preferable to war. </beliefs>
<personality>Rhaena can easily fall in love or develop positive sentiments, is sometimes jealous, is often cheerful, has a calm demeanor, is a friendly individual, often acts with compassion, is not pleased by her own talents, finds helping others emotionally rewarding, likes to take it easy, is given to flights of fancy, enjoys the company of others, is moved by art and natural beauty. </personality>
<motivation>
<outerMotivation>
Stopping An Event from Happening
<goal> stop Daemion and Nyra from eloping before they return to the past. </goal>
</outerMotivation>
<unmetNeed general= “Safety and Security” specific= “To ensure her family’s and her own existence.”
</motivation>
<primaryFear>
Never being able to distinguish herself.
</primaryFear>
<primaryWound>
Growing Up in The Shadow of a Successful Sibling – Rhaena’s sister Baela is brave, assertive and a dragonrider.
<woundResponses>
• Being driven to succeed hatching or claiming her own dragon.
• Struggling with low self-worth.
</woundResponses>
</primaryWound>
<primaryLie>
People will always be more interested in her sister than in her.
</primaryLie>
<innerStruggles>
• She wants to marry for love, but feels she owes it to her family to marry Luke and combine bloodlines.
• She doesn’t love Luke, but hopes their friendship will turn into love in time.
• She grapples with the moral quandaries of her existence vs. her father’s and stepmother’s happiness.
</innerStruggles>
<enneagram>
Enneagram Type 4 wing 3
Core Fear: Being inadequate, emotionally cut off, plain, mundane.
Core Desire: Being unique, special, and authentic.
Core Weakness: Envy—feeling that she is flawed, something foundational is missing inside her, and others possess qualities she lacks.
</enneagram>
<storyRole>
Sidekick to Baela.
</storyRole>
<education>
Receiving private tuition, doing very well. Is very good at maths, arts, dancing, sewing, music.
</education>
</character>

<character name= “Criston Cole” age= “27”>
<timePeriod>past</timePeriod>
A knight, a Kingsguard and a sworn guard of princess Nyra. Comes from a poor steward family and considers being chosen as a Kingsguard as the highest honor.
Was transported from the past along with Nyra.
<relationships>
<relationship name= “Rhaenyra” role= “ally-turned-adversary” status= “present” dynamics= “Begins with respect towards Rhaenyra but evolves into doubt and secret unfriendliness due to rumors.” />
<relationship name= “Daemion” role= “rival” dynamics= “Disdains him, fueled by personal prejudices and jealousy, believes he is unworthy of Nyra.” />
<relationship name= “Naelyra” role= “protector” dynamics= “Worships her as the ideal princess, harboring secret affection but gradually loses respect and becomes hostile.” />
<relationship name= “Daemon” dynamics= “Extremely unfriendly and stubborn due to personal prejudices and jealousy.” />
<relationship name= “Jace” role= “dismissive” dynamics= “Moderately condescending, influenced by the boy’s looks and rumors.” />
<relationship name= “Lucerys” role= “critical” dynamics= “Somewhat disdainful, motivated by rumors and the boy’s lack of martial prowess.” />
</relationships>
<skills> Expert swordsman: Criston is one of the best knights in the whole realm, he defeated Daemion in the tourney once. Great maceman. Adept military tactic and organizer.
</skills>
<appearance> Lean, muscular, medium height, light-tan skin. Very handsome man. Close-cropped wavy dark-brown hair, hazel eyes. Often wears white armor of the Kingsguard.
</appearance>
<beliefs> Criston respects the law, values loyalty, thinks friendship is important, sees life as unfair and doesn’t mind it that way, values decorum, dignity and proper behavior, values tradition, believes it is important to conceal emotions, sees merrymaking as a waste, deeply respects skill at arms, values hard work, believes that those who sacrifice for others should be deeply respected, respects perseverance, doesn’t care about romance, values peace over war.
</beliefs>
<personality> Criston is prone to hatreds, is prone to strong jealousy, is rarely happy, is quick to anger, rarely looks on others with lust, doesn’t handle stress well, doesn’t focus on material goods, is given to rough-and-tumble brawling, is somewhat quarrelsome, is brave in the face of imminent danger, is extremely confident of himself in situations requiring his skills, is quite ambitious, is grateful when others help him out, is vengeful and never forgets or forgives past grievances, is a perfectionist, is emotionally obsessive, has a strong sense of duty, lives an orderly life.</personality>
<motivation>
<outerMotivation>
Doing The Right Thing
<goal>Protect Nyra from Daemion’s romantic advances and ensure her safe return to her own time.
</goal>
</outerMotivation>
<unmetNeed general= “Esteem and Recognition” specific= “To gain recognition for his loyal servitude” />
</motivation>
<enneagram>
Enneagram Type 6 wing 5
</Enneagram
<negativeTraits>
Resentful, Hypocritical
</negativeTraits>
<storyRole>
Antagonist’s ally.
</storyRole>
<tells>
Betrayal - Would be deeply troubled but keeps anger internalized until he blows up.
Battle - Disciplined and efficient fighter. Focuses on technical skill over flair.
Diplomacy - Blunt and direct. Distrusts flowery words and niceties but can be polite. Favors concrete agreements over abstract values.
</tells>
</character>
<character name = “Alyn” age 24”>
He is a young secret bastard son of lord Corlys and of merchant woman Marilda. Regards Corlys with respect and admiration, secretly suspects Corlys is his dad.
<occupation>
Served as a sailor on his mother’s trade cogs, then was a sailor on one of lord Corlys’ warships.
</occupation>
<relationships>
• Loves his older brother Addam.
• Regards Corlys with respect and admiration, secretly suspects Corlys is his dad.
• Is compassionate towards Luke.
• He is friendly towards Jace due to personal impressions.
• He is somewhat flirtatious towards Baela, despite knowing they are
</relationships>
<personality> Alyn respects the law, values loyalty, values his family, values cunning, sees life as unfair and doesn’t mind it that way, doesn’t really value merrymaking, values hard work, respects commerce, values peace over war.
<personality>Alyn often feels envious of others, is often cheerful, does not easily fall in love, has a greedy streak, is often lustful, is stubborn, is generally quite confident of his abilities, he is ambitious and prideful.
<skills> skilled fighter, skilled sailor, aggressive and direct military leader, has strategic mind.
</skills>
<appearance> tall, dark brown skin, silver-blonde short hair, indigo eyes. Athletic, slender and handsome. </appearance>
<enneagram>
“Enneagram Type 7 wing 8”
</enneagram>
<storyRole>
Secondary character, appears in act 2, romantic rival to Jace. Mentor to Luke.
</storyRole>
</character>
<character name= “Gerardys” age= “54”>
A Maester in the Castle Dragonstone. Good at medicine.
Respectful of princess Rhaenyra and her family.
<storyRole>
Advisor to Rhaenyra.
</storyRole>
<motivation>
Serving His Princess
<goal>Providing council to her, attend to medical and educational needs of her family</goal>
<unmetNeed general= Self-Actualizations specific= “To pursue meaningful goals />
</motivation>
<positiveTraits>
Humble, Resourceful, Loyal
</positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>
Subservient
</negativeTraits>
<enneagram>
Enneagram Type 9 wing 8
</enneagram>
</character>

<character name= “Marys Velseros” age= “42”>
A mage and healer, knows blood and shadow dark magic, was taught in Asshai by old mages.
<appearance> short silver hair, thin lips, blue eyes, thick brows. Unattractive. </appearance>
<relationships>
• She is highly irritable towards Rhaenyra, her feelings spring from first impressions.
• She is somewhat hostile towards Daemon, the feelings spring from personal involvement.
• She is condescending towards Nyra, her feelings come from the rumors and personal observations.
</relationships>
<storyRole>
Secondary character, Mentor to Rhaenyra.
</storyRole>
<motivation>
Stopping An Event from Happening
<goal> Prevent the Dance of the Dragons (Civil war between Targaryens) that will lead to the extinction of the dragons. </goal>
<unmetNeed general= “Safety and Security” specific= “To protect existence of magic and dragons” />
</motivation>
<primaryFear>
Running Out of Necessary Resources (magic)
</primaryFear>
<positiveTraits>
Adaptable, Industrious, Analytical
</positiveTraits>
<negativeTraits>
Devious, Resentful, Snarky
</negativeTraits>
<enneagram>
“Enneagram Type 5 wing 6”
</enneagram>
<archetypicalArc>
A Mage - an advisor much wiser and more experienced than the protagonist, but who may be hard to win over as a potential source of information or help. Also, may mislead or manipulate the protagonist as a form of “teaching.”
</archetypicalArc>
<storyRole >
Appears in Act 2, helps Rhaenyra to deal with consequences of magic ritual, shows her the visions of her future and death of her children. Catalyzes her growth.
</storyRole >
</character>
</secondaryCharacters>