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Crown Princess Rhaenyra Targaryen, a 34-year-old who bears the heavy responsibility of her family’s well-being and her claim as queen, returns to Dragonstone castle with her loved ones after a tense royal dinner with her father, King Viserys I, and the opposing Green Faction. Accompanying her are her husband and uncle Daemon, her sons Jace, Luke, Joffrey, and her stepdaughters/cousins Baela and Rhaena. Upon their arrival, Rhaenyra discovers that her older sons Jace and Luke have performed a dangerous magical ritual to change the colors of their hair and eyes to quell public rumors about their illegitimacy, as they bear the surname Velaryon but physically resemble their true father, Ser Harwin Strong, rather than Rhaenyra’s first husband Laenor.

The ritual backfires due to the combination of two conflicting spells, resulting in the summoning of younger versions of Rhaenyra (Nyra) and Daemon (Daemion), who time-traveled from seventeen years ago. Ser Criston Cole, a dashing Kingsguard knight secretly in love with Nyra, is brought along with them. Faced with this unprecedented challenge, Rhaenyra must ensure the existence of her children and maintain her family’s well-being while helping her past self and Daemion return to their own timeline.

As the story unfolds, the motivations and challenges of the main characters become increasingly complex and intertwined. Rhaenyra struggles with sympathizing with Nyra’s desire to marry Daemion, while fearing the potential consequences for her stepdaughters Baela and Rhaena. Pushed by her love for her children and a secret fear that if Nyra married Daemion her father Viserys might disinherit her in the past, Rhaenyra’s conflict between her desire for personal happiness and her responsibilities becomes more and more palpable.

Nyra, the 18-year-old younger version of Rhaenyra, is driven by her love for Daemion and the desire to be acknowledged as a competent and worthy heir. She is determined to marry Daemion and return to her own timeline but is afraid of living her future self’s fate, causing friction between her and Rhaenyra’s current family.

Daemon Targaryen, a 49-year-old fiercely loyal to his family, must juggle the difficult task of supporting both his past and present family while searching for a magical solution that would ensure Rhaenyra becomes the mother of his daughters in the changed timeline. His love for Rhaenyra and desire to keep his family secure drive his pursuits.

Meanwhile, Daemion, the younger 34-year-old version of Daemon freshly exiled after a victorious campaign in the Stepstones, is focused on marrying Nyra and fathering future heirs, which comes into conflict with ensuring his potential daughters’ existence. Motivated by the desire to start a family, Daemion also seeks validation as Nyra’s prince consort and aims to prevent the Green Faction from taking power.

As tensions rise among the family, Rhaenyra and Daemon must navigate the treacherous waters of love, loyalty, duty, and responsibility for their past selves and the diverse motivations of their immediate family members. The delicate balance of their family’s future and the ultimate fate of the Targaryen dynasty hang in the balance, making every choice and alliance more critical than ever.