I'd like to apply for this coaching position below, can you analyse my cover letter and offer feedback? Please proofread and offer an updated revision.

The job posting:
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Healthy Gamer Coach
Job Type: Independent Contractor

What you'll do
- Individual Coaching Services and Group Coaching Sessions in accordance with the Healthy Gamer Coaching Manual and Healthy Gamer Curriculum.
- Provide Coaching Services in accordance with your self-determined schedule.
- Provide appropriate documentation for Coaching Services.
- Set and manage your own schedule including the occasional client reschedule.

Who you are
- Have already obtained a valid coaching Coaching Certification through an accredited certifying body such as ICF, etc. OR would like to obtain a Healthy Gamer Coach Certification within the next 3 months.
- Dependable - You recognize that people are counting on you and always do what you say you'll do.
- A present and engaged listener - you don't feel the need to "fix" anyone or anything. You're authentic and approachable.
- Calm and cool in any situation. You have experience dealing with a variety of clients and customers and maintain professionalism.
- Respectful, kind, open-minded and values differences. This one's important — we are seeking coaches who are highly accepting of individuals with a variety of - backgrounds and identities including but not limited to religion, race, national origin, gender, sexual orientation, political affiliation, age, and disability status.
- Sense of service and motivated to create a positive impact
- Organized, follow-through, documentation, effectively manage client scheduling
- You're an incredible communicator both in written and verbal form
- Speak internet and are tech-savvy

Not required but considered a plus if you have a background working with special needs clients and/or are bi-lingual.

Perks
100% remote, you create your client schedule
Competitive compensation
Global reach, connect with individuals from around the world.
Do meaningful (and exciting) work. Our mission-driven start-up is in serious growth mode!
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My cover letter:
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Dear <PRESIDIO_ANONYMIZED_PERSON>,

My name is [name] and I am excited to apply for the position of Healthy Gamer Coach. I have been following Dr. K's content for a long time and listened to most of the interviews, some of which personally helped me, while others were insightful and explanatory when supporting my friends or community members. Now I would like to also give back. For the past few years I've been volunteering across different online communities, advocating for mental health and working with people from all over the world and having some training and professional experience in customer service which make me confident I would do well in this role.

I recently graduated with a bachelor's degree in software systems development and I am done with my studies. While I do not have any formal coaching certification at the moment, I am willing to fully commit to the HG certification and coaching position because I believe it offers a unique and comprehensive approach to understanding and helping both the gaming and non-gaming population. I share the HG vision of creating a positive impact and empowering people to live fulfilling and healthy lives.

The psychology of the human mind and our inner experiences has always intrigued me. Every person is different and unique, and thus special and complex in their own way. They have their own path and trajectory to be understood. It's a real joy to me to listen earnestly to people, see how they work, be genuinely there for them, and see them grow. Sometimes even just reflecting something back to someone can lead to insights.

For instance, researchers in 2013 coined the term SDAM, which stands for Severely Deficient Autobiographical Memory, a rare condition where a person does not vividly re-experience their past. When I came across an article describing this, something clicked and I immediately recognised this in me. It feels like I am trapped in the present moment and while this brought me a lot of heavy feelings at first that I had to process, I came to realize over time that it can be a gift when it comes to service professions such as this one. I am easily able to be truly there in the moment, and give the person I'm with undivided attention, seeing them as they are without involuntary flashbacks, many intrusive thoughts, or images. This helps me to create a safe and supportive space for my clients, where they can feel heard and understood, and explore their own thoughts and feelings without judgment or distraction. I also believe that bringing insights and cultivating moments of enlightenment to others is very fulfilling and rewarding, both for me and for them.

Another factor that might make me unique as a candidate is my upbringing. I immigrated with my parents from Poland to Ireland when I was 10 years old, leaving behind my friends, language, and culture. This experience taught me how to adapt quickly to different people and environments, as well as how to appreciate diversity and inclusion. I have also been on the internet for a very long time and connected with people across the world. I respect and value people's differences in values and different aspects of their identity. Moreover, this culture shock has also given me a deeper understanding of the challenges and opportunities that people face when they move to a new place, change their lifestyle, or pursue their dreams. I know how it feels to be lonely, lost, or misunderstood, but also how it feels to find a new home, community, or a new purpose. I can empathize with clients and help them navigate their own transitions and transformations, and celebrate their achievements and growth.

I'd also like to mention that I have had a lot of experience dealing with a variety of clients and customers, some of whom had complex trauma, depression, body dysphoria, and other difficult issues or requests. I can maintain professionalism and composure, and handle these situations with patience and respect. Boundaries are important and I recognize as a coach I would not be there to diagnose or give medical advice. I also know how to manage my own stress levels and regulate my emotions well, through meditation and my own support network.

In conclusion, I am very interested in and excited about working as a Healthy Gamer Coach and I believe I have the traits and skills to be a great coach. I am eager to join the team and learn from you! Please feel free to contact me through my email or discord (tet.exe) If you have any questions or would like to discuss my application further. I would appreciate the opportunity for an interview and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,
[name]
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