Personal Statement

Dear Visa Officer,

I am writing to provide a comprehensive statement of purpose explaining my decision to transfer from Northeastern University’s M.C. in Computer Science program to Fairleigh Dickinson University Vancouver Campus’ MSACS program. My aim is to convince you that this transfer is not only reasonable but also highly rewarding, ensuring my growth and contribution in the field of computer science, particularly in the intersection of architecture and advanced computer computation.

My academic journey began with the completion of a Bachelor of Architecture at North China University of Technology from 2016 to 2021. As an exchange student at the School of Architecture, Urban Planning, and Construction Engineering at Politecnico di Milano for two years, I gained valuable exposure to innovative architectural design techniques and broadened my perspective.

Motivated by my interest in leveraging cutting-edge computer computation in architectural design, I pursued a Master of Science in Advanced Architectural Design at Cornell University from the summer of 2022 to May 2023. During this time, I attended a public lecture titled “The Introduction of the Algorithm Developed by Autodesk,” which showcased the potential of machine learning in automatically generating floor plans based on design requirements. This lecture solidified my belief in the transformative power of computer programming in the field of architecture.

With this conviction in mind, I made the decision to pursue further education in computer science and enrolled in Northeastern University’s M.C. in Computer Science program in September 2023. However, upon thorough research and analysis of the MSACS program at Fairleigh Dickinson University Vancouver Campus, I now believe that it is better aligned with my specific career goals and aspirations.

Allow me to present a comparison between the MSACS program at Fairleigh Dickinson University and the M.C. in Computer Science program at Northeastern University, incorporating the real course offerings and program features:

1. Curriculum Focus:

The MSACS program at Fairleigh Dickinson University emphasizes the practical application of computer science in various industries, including architecture and design. While specific courses such as “Computational Design” and “Machine Learning in Architecture” may not be available, the program provides core computer science courses that lay a solid technical foundation. Additionally, elective courses like “Artificial Intelligence,” “Data Mining,” and “Computer Graphics” can be strategically chosen to align with my interests and broaden my knowledge in relevant areas.

Meanwhile, Northeastern University’s M.C. in Computer Science program offers a well-rounded curriculum spanning areas such as algorithms, database management, software engineering, and data analysis. These courses contribute to building a strong fundamental understanding of computer science concepts.

2. Faculty Expertise and Research Opportunities:

Fairleigh Dickinson University Vancouver Campus boasts faculty members with expertise in computer science, providing valuable guidance and mentorship. Although specific research opportunities and capstone projects may differ, the MSACS program encourages students to explore their areas of interest and collaborate with faculty members on projects that integrate advanced computational techniques into design processes. This hands-on experience will contribute to the practical application of computer science principles in architecture.

Similarly, Northeastern University’s faculty members are leaders in their respective fields, offering research opportunities and projects that allow students to delve deeper into computer science concepts and applications.

3. Industry Connections and Location:

Fairleigh Dickinson University’s Vancouver Campus is situated in an environment known for its burgeoning tech and design sectors. I see this as an advantage, as it provides abundant networking opportunities and internships in architecture and computer science. Building connections with professionals and industry leaders actively involved in the integration of technology in architecture will further enhance my growth and potential career opportunities.

Northeastern University’s strategic location in a vibrant tech hub also provides access to a range of industry connections, but the specific opportunities in architecture and computer science may differ from those available in Vancouver.

Based on the comparative analysis above, I firmly believe that transferring from Northeastern University’s M.C. in Computer Science program to Fairleigh Dickinson University’s MSACS program is a well-considered decision. The MSACS program’s applied computer science focus, tailored elective options, faculty expertise, research opportunities, and Vancouver’s dynamic industry landscape make it an ideal choice for my career aspirations in integrating architecture and advanced computer computation.

Looking ahead, I anticipate promising career prospects upon completing the MSACS program at Fairleigh Dickinson University. The fusion of computer science and architecture has immense potential, both globally and in China, where urbanization and technological advancements continue to shape the landscape. The knowledge and skills gained through the MSACS program will enable me to contribute to innovative advancements in architectural design and technology, particularly in my home country.

In conclusion, I humbly request your favorable consideration of my transfer request from Northeastern University to Fairleigh Dickinson University. I firmly believe that this decision aligns my academic endeavors more closely with my long-term career goals. Thank you for your time and consideration, and I sincerely hope to have the opportunity to further develop my skills and contribute to the field of computer science with a Canadian education at Fairleigh Dickinson University.

Thank you for your attention to my application.

Sincerely,
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