Imagine that you are the most respected literary editor and critic. Fix the mistakes and shortcomings in this storyAct 1: The World That Was
What once had been called beautiful is now naught but rubble. The sky is gray, the air suffused with dust and debris. People, once thriving, now suffer in complete chaos and darkness. Humans invented and used a weapon so powerful it thrust their world into another dimension. This new world changes constantly and unnerves the human mind until insanity is achieved. Only the creatures of this new world manage to adapt, and some even become intelligent.

Act 2: The Owls Take Charge
The most orthodox of these creatures are the owls. They keep tradition and history alive in their own memories. Owls have a memory so superlative they remember all changes taking place in the world, even predicting future changes by identifying the “spiral of time.” They are the leaders of their world. The elders of the owl race rule over all the creatures of this planet.

Act 3: Enter the Raccoons
The second most important creatures are the raccoons, driven by insatiable curiosity and fine motor skills. Thus, raccoons become the planet’s best mechanics, adapting human technology for animals, programming human robots (androids), and even engineering bionic prostheses for themselves and other creatures. Their lively and mischievous disposition, always entrancing with their humor, lets raccoons adapt faster than others to their constantly-changing world. Raccoons inhabit motorhomes and constantly traverse their world, as they are required in widely-different places. Their influence makes them the second most powerful creatures on the planet.

Act 4: A Love Forbidden
The protagonist is Soven, an owl. One day, while out exploring, he meets Marusya, a raccoon girl. Instantly drawn to one another, Soven and Marusya fall in love, an impossible love between creatures of radically different backgrounds and species. They plan to elope, despite their respective families’ objections.

Act 5: The Conflict Arises
When their families discover their secret love, they forbid them to be together. The love between two creatures of such different kinds creates a fissure between the owls and raccoons, which can escalate into a full-fledged war, threatening to unbalance the planet.

Act 6: The Stolen Device
To make their escape, Soven and Marusya steal a device the raccoons have created, which can stall the constant changes in the world. Only the owls can direct it to the right time and place because of their ability to predict changes in the future.

Act 7: The Journey
Soven and Marusya must travel through the dangers that surround them to create a future for themselves.

Act 8: The Wise Owl
Guided by an old wise owl, Soven and Marusya discover that their forbidden love could bring peace, allowing both races to survive the ever-changing environment.

Act 9: Collaboration
With the help of Marusya’s R2D2-programmed robot and Soven’s android valet, they modify the device so that it can easily be activated and used. Together, they present it as a symbol of their love for each other and their desire for peace between both races. At first, there is resistance from both sides, but they realize that they both need each other to survive and thrive in this world.

Act 10: Creation of a New World
Using the device, they slow down the changes in the world and build a new world where both races can flourish. Soven and Marusya become celebrated heroes with their forbidden love becoming a symbol of hope for their world. Raccoons and owls begin to work together in creating a new future where peace trumps conflict.