what would be a good ending for this story? dont write one just tell me a good ending for this that gives it character development
Havilah Walker
9/28/23
Period 2
“Penny’s New World”
Today it was Penny’s birthday. October 17th, she turned 15. She didn't exactly get what she was wishing for though. She wished to be away from all the things that happened at that wretched place called home, Aaway from all the fighting, arguing over the stupidest things, and all the threats she'd hear toward the ones fighting. Just chaos. Every. Single. Night. Never going away, just over and over and over again, like clockwork. That's all she ever wished for, thise one thing. Just to flyget away and never return.
Penny went to school the next day after her birthday. Wwishing , hoping something good would happen on the next wretched day as the day went on. She went throughout the whole day, nothing of light, happiness, or love ever occured happened. 1st period, 2nd period, 3rd, 4th, 5th, 6th… nothing. Until, 
Later that day, she was walking home from school when suddenly she heard a loud “THUD.”! Tto her right, by a big, huge oak tree. 
“What was that?!” Penny said to herself out loud. 
After Penny stood for a minute wondering if she should go see what that jarring soundit was or not, she decided the horrid thingit couldn't make her day any worse or better. So she walked up very slowly, and quietly. All of a sudden, she slipped on the leaves and she fell into a great, big cave-likecave like hole under thate big, oak tree. 
“Ouch!” She exclaimed., 
“Where am I?” Penny sat in the creepy dark hole wondering what the heck just happened. 
After about 15 minutes she decided to get up and explore the cave a little. The cave went deeper, and deeper, and deeper. Penny was about ready to turn back until she caught a glance of a little bit of light a little further down. She went to find out if there was's an opening, or if she hit her head a little too hard when she fell. Counting her steps. 
“One, two, three. One, two, three. One, two, th-” She stops. 
“Wowww”, Penny says in amazement. 
It's unlike anything she's ever seen before. Just like her imagination. 
“It all looks so unreal!” she exclaims. 
With color everywhere it looks like floating, moving jelly, but it's different from jelly, it's like a big huge blob of hot pink, it's smooth all around. Bubbles everywhere, all different colors too. Blues, pinks, purples, oranges, yellows, reds, every color she could possibly imagine was all here. Only hers,all hers,. Penny’s world.
Penny climbed down from the end of the cave and jumped on one of the big pink blobs that was on the bottom. Those pink blobs wereIt was like big an extremely bouncy trampolines, like jumping on a huge piece of jello. Penny jumped and bounced and hopped, from blob to blob, like a frog leaping from one lily pad to another. Penny became so happy, she never wanted to leave, no shouting, yelling, fighting, all happiness could be found in Penny’s world.
Penny decided to explore a little more in her new world, to see if anyone else was there with her, any creatures or people. There weren't any real paths or anything. Her world It was just like a big obstacle course. Penny was just tumbling and jumping through all thoseese obstacles, when suddenly she heard a whining sound. 
“Helloooooo” she calleds out., 
“Iis anyone out there?!”  she holleredsays. 
She stands still waiting to hear something again so that maybe she can follow the sound. “You can come out, it's okay, I won't hurt you.” she says to the still hidden thing. *whines* again. And again. The whining and crying, just getting worse as she waits. Penny finally just decides to follow the sounds. She then peeks around one of the big blobs. “A puppy!!!” she says gasping. “What's your name?” she asks the puppy. “You must have been that loud thud that fell in the cave before me. Well you’re safe now and I'm gonna take care of you.” Penny and the puppy carried on and continued to hop and bounce on the blobs. Penny looked up at the sky, “what do you think those things are up there, in the sky?” Penny asks the puppy. The puppy barks as if he was trying to answer Penny. Penny chuckles, “if only I could understand what you just said.” 
Penny then looks down at her wrist to check the time. “Oh no, I must've lost track of time, it's been hours!” Penny grabs the puppy and bounces across the big, pink blobs as fast as she possibly can, then on the last blob under the cave opening, she takes the biggest jump so that she’d be able to reach the ledge of the cave. she bolts through the cave, then arrives at the opening she came through at. Penny and the puppy climb out. Already out of breath from all the running, and jumping she'd just done, she still runs home worried about how much trouble she may be in. When she arrives at the front door of her house, she takes a big breath, closes her eyes and says, “please don't be mad.” She opens her eyes and opens the door. The smell of hot chocolate chip cookies in the oven, Penny's favorite. Something is different though, she walks through the house, it's not usually this clean, it doesn't normally smell this nice, it never feels this much like a home. Something has changed. A lot. No fighting or yelling, no threats being made. It's all good, “it actually feels happy in my home” Penny thinks to herself. “My birthday wish has come true.” 
Penny was able to live a happy ever after life. With nothing to worry about, just her perfect dream life she's always wanted.