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First, my dad told us that he was going to Singapore for work and that we could come along after a few days! I was so happy I jumped up and down with excitement! When my dad left, we started packing for the flight!   When the day came, we woke up excited as we got ready! Then we went to the car and then to the plane!

On our arrival in Singapore, we were straight off to the baggage claim area! But we were not able to find our luggage at all! We had a lot of conversations with a lot of people before we finally got our luggage! Once we had all of our stuff, we had to wait for my dad to come and pick us up! Finally he came. I got to sit up front! Then it was time for our hotel tour! I was in tears because it was too small and there was no room for all of us! Luckily my dad's boss was kind enough to enlarge our room to fit us all! The next day, a delicious breakfast awaited us! I had hot chocolate that had a burning effect on my tongue! But my mum and dad were having coffee! After a while, luckily, my tongue felt better! After I had eaten and had a drink, I went up to my room in the hotel to brush my teeth! Then I went straight for a drive! Our destination was Universal Studios! When we got there I was really excited to see all the rides, but instead, I only got to see amazing rides and also scary rides, some were really tall, some were really scary, but some were just really funny, but some were boring. Then we did this mummy ride that had an Egyptian theme 🇪🇬! It was so frightening that my mother ran. Away before we even went on, I even cried!! 

Then my dad and I went to this fun water ride and my shoes and I got soaked! After that we went to eat! I got some chicken nuggets. My dad got a burger and my mom got a quick snack! It was so good! After a while of fun rides it was getting late so we went home!

We visited my godmother after a few days. We went to a water park and it was really, really big! It was like a ride of emotions! Most of it was scary, some of it was relaxing and some of it was just perfect! First of all we went to the changing room to get changed into our cute little swimsuits, we also got everything ready like sun cream and our gopro ect!  Then it was off to the water park for some exploration. We had a very peaceful walk until we had a look at this huge scary ride! Mum wanted me to go, but I never wanted to! So I made my godmother do it instead! When she got off the ride, she said it was so much fun and that I should have a go at it. But I'm not going to be fooled that easily! So I had no use for the offer. After a bit of exploring we had a trip down to the lazy river, my favorite! 

We had such a good time!  Afterwards we went to explore more. Until I saw a playground! I begged them to let me go until they said yes! I couldn't stop laughing until we got to that big blue waterslide!

I was scared when it was our turn! Even my mum walked out! I mean, I would have gone too, but my mum promised me 3 squishies if I stayed. So I did! I was screaming at the top of my lungs! It was such a relief to be back on the ground! It was the best ride though if I am honest! It was a blast at the water park. But unfortunately we had to go. But we did get to eat some delicious food afterwards.

  The next day we had to say goodbye to my dad and then we went to the airport with my godmother! We had this delicious chicken. They don't have it here in the Philippines! 
Then we said goodbye to my godmother and to Singapore! And then we finally got on the plane and made it home in one piece. So that's me traveling to Singapore. Thanks a lot for your attention!