I don't like the way the text was written. You should have organized the policies by company, and also used appropriate labels for each bullet point you wrote. For example: ### Microsoft: * Privacy policy: (...) * Data collection: (...) * Controversies / scandals: (...) * Privacy in products: (...) ### Apple: * Privacy policy: (...) * Data collection: (...) * Controversies / scandals: (...) * Privacy in products: (...) **Overview:** (...) Please follow my suggestion and improve your answer. **Use appropriate markdown or I will downvote your reply**.