标题：长相思·吴山青
作品原文
长相思·吴山青
吴山青，越山青，两岸青山相对迎，谁知离别情①？
君泪盈，妾泪盈，罗带同心结未成②，江边潮已平③。[1]
注释译文
注释①谁知离别情：一作“争忍有离情”。
②同心结：将罗带系成连环回文样式的结子，象征定情。
③潮已平：指江水已涨到与岸相齐。[1]​译文钱塘江北青翠的吴山，钱塘江南清秀的越山，成天价俯看着征帆归舟，似在殷勤送迎，好生有情。可此际，一对有情人儿正依依江岸，难分难舍，那山却依旧招呼着行人归客，全不管他俩的离情别绪，真个是无情透了。钱塘江水似乎也是无情，这对有情人，同心结子还未打成、定情之期还未说妥，它却涨起大潮，催着行舟早发。可是，当他俩泪水盈眶之时，它也把潮头悄悄涨到与岸齐平；似乎只等着泪珠夺眶而出，它也要让潮水涌向四野一般。[2]​
词牌格律
词牌唐教坊曲名﹐后用为词牌名。因南朝梁陈乐府《长相思》而得名。又名《双红豆》﹑《忆多娇》等。双调，共三十六字，上下阕各十八字，每阕四句，各三平韵，一叠韵，一韵到底。[3]​格律（○平声 ●仄声 ⊙可平可仄 △平韵 ▲仄韵）
吴山青，越山青。两岸青山相送迎，谁知离别情？
⊙⊙△，⊙⊙△。⊙●○○⊙●△，⊙○⊙●△。
君泪盈，妾泪盈。罗带同心结未成，江头潮已平。
⊙⊙△，⊙⊙△。⊙●○○⊙●△，⊙○⊙●△。[4]​
作品赏析
词以一女子的声口，抒写她因婚姻不幸，与情人诀别的悲怀。开头用民歌传统的起兴手法，“吴山青，越山青”，叠下两个“青”字，色彩鲜明地描画出一片江南特有的青山胜景。吴越自古山明水秀，风光宜人，却也阅尽了人间的悲欢。“谁知别离情？”歇拍处用拟人手法，向亘古如斯的青山发出嗔怨，借自然的无情反衬人生有恨，使感情色彩由轻盈转向深沉，巧妙地托出了送别的主旨。
“君泪盈，妾泪盈”，过片承前，由写景转入抒情。临别之际，泪眼相对，哽咽无语。“罗带同心结未成”，含蓄道出了他们悲苦难言的底蕴。古代男女定情时，往往用丝绸带打成一个心形的结，叫做“同心结”。“结未成”，喻示他们爱情生活横遭不幸。不知是什么强暴的力量，使他们心心相印而难成眷属，只能各自带着心头的累累创伤，来此洒泪而别。“江头潮已平”，船儿就要起航了。“结未成”“潮已平”，益转益悲，一江恨水，延绵无尽。
这首词艺术上的显著特点是反复咏叹，情深韵美，具有浓郁的民歌风味。词采用了民歌中常用的复沓形式，在节奏上产生一种回环往复、一唱三咏的艺术效果。词还句句押韵，连声切响，前后相应，显出女主人公柔情似水，略无间阻，一往情深。林逋沿袭《长相思》调写男女情爱，以声助情，用清新流美的语言，唱出了吴越青山绿水间的地方风情，创造出一个隽永空茫、余味无穷的艺境。
作品赏析[英译]
To a woman the sound outlet, expressing her marital misfortune, and lovers of farewell, compassion. Beginning with folk song tradition is inspired to the technique, " Wu Shan, the mountain ", fold down two " green" word, bright color to paint a specific southern mountains scenery. Wu Yue has picturesque scenery, the pleasant scenery, but also read all the joys and sorrows of earth. " Who knows parting? " Break beat with a gimmick to the ancient castle, so a complained, borrow natural heartless contrasting life is hate, so emotional colors from light to deep, cleverly sent out the purport of farewell.
" Your tears, my tears ", a film which, by describing the scenery into lyric. At the time of parting, tears, choke speechless. " Belt knot not ", implicitly said their grief unspeakable details. The ancient men and women love, often with the silk ribbon in a heart knot, is called "the knot ". " And not ", showing their love life the misfortune. I don't know what the violent force, so they have mutual affinity and difficult family dependents, only with their heart and trauma, the departed in tears. " The head of the river tide has flat ", the ship will set sail. " And not as" " the tide has turned, " Yi Yi Bei River water, hate, or endless.
The word art is characterized by the repeated chant, full rhyme, with strong folk flavor. Words used in the song used in the rhythm of repeating forms, produced a kind of loop back and forth, sing three songs artistic effect. Word word rhyme, repeatedly cutting ring, and the corresponding, show heroine, gentle enough to give comfort, slightly without resistance, be passionately devoted. Follow the " Sauvignon Blanc " tune written love between men and women, to help with sound, fresh and beautiful language, to sing the Wu Yue between the green mountains and rivers of the local customs, to create a meaningful empty, endless finish the art realm.
作者简介
林逋[5]​
林逋（967～1028）字君复，钱塘（今浙江杭州）人，是北宋初年著名的隐士。少孤力学，恬澹好古，孤高自许，不趋荣利，隐居于杭州西湖孤山，清心寡欲，几乎不食人间烟火，二十六年不入城市。终身未娶，以种梅养鹤自娱，人称“梅妻鹤子”。卒谥和靖先生。善行书，工于诗。其诗多描写隐居生活，能以疏淡之笔墨，勾画出形象生动的画面。尤长于咏梅，以《山园小梅》最负盛名。存词3首，清丽隽永。有《林和靖诗集》。