编辑以下审稿意见的第三段，以使语言更为正式: “我认为本文有点混乱，在某些地方表述不够清晰。还需要更多的细节和说明。”
我认为本篇文章稍显混乱，某些地方表述不够清晰，需要更多细节和说明。
In my opinion, the present article appears rather disorganized, with certain sections lacking clarity in expression. Additionally, further elaboration and detail are necessary.