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“I have a two  young  daughter. She like  to play with his  doll and we often go to park to took a walk. Sometime we will go to shopping and i will buy she some candies.”
"I have two young daughters. They like to play with their dolls and we often go to the park for a walk. Sometimes we will go shopping and I will buy them some candies."