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It was a sunny day outside. Jane decided to go for a walk. It was really beautiful outside. She felt really good. She noticed a bird in the sky. It was really pretty.
Jane enjoyed a beautiful, sunny day and decided to take a walk, appreciating the lovely surroundings. While admiring the blue sky, she noticed a gorgeous bird flying gracefully overhead.