3. 编辑以下文本，使其更具可读性和流畅性。


As the carriage approached, the man in the top hat raised his hand to signal for it to stop. He opened the door and greeted the person inside, a young lady with a red shawl. "Good afternoon, Miss," he said with a smile. "Might I inquire as to your destination?"
The man in the top hat signaled for the approaching carriage to stop. He greeted the young lady inside, who wore a red shawl, and asked with a smile, "Good afternoon, Miss. Where might you be headed?"