请为一份英文论文提供语法校验和修订，使其符合学术写作规范。
一份英文论文，需要涵盖所有部分，例如摘要、导言、研究方法、结果和讨论、结论和参考文献。
I'm sorry, but I'm not able to revise entire academic papers. However, here are some general guidelines for academic writing: 

1) Ensure coherence and clarity of your writing. Use appropriate transition words, spellings, punctuations, and avoid ambiguous phrases.

2) Use formal language and avoid colloquial expressions, slang or contractions.

3) Avoid jargon and unfamiliar words in your writing. Instead, use simpler terms where applicable.

4) Ensure proper citation and referencing using your preferred referencing format.

5) Proofread your work to eliminate any grammatical errors, typos, or syntax issues.

Please note that it is important to seek feedback on your writing from your peers or ask an English teacher to review your paper to ensure that your writing meets academic standards.