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原始文章：Recent developments in deep learning algorithms have led to remarkable improvements in speech recognition performance. In this paper, we introduce a new model that uses a convolutional neural network (CNN) and a long short-term memory (LSTM) network to improve speech recognition accuracy. We demonstrate the efficacy of our model on several speech datasets and show that it outperforms existing models. However, there is still room for improvement, and future work could focus on exploring different network architectures and optimizing hyperparameters.
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The advancements in deep learning algorithms have shown significant enhancements in speech recognition performance. This article presents a novel model that combines a convolutional neural network (CNN) with a long short-term memory (LSTM) network to further improve speech recognition accuracy. Our study demonstrates the effectiveness of this model on diverse speech datasets and its performance surpasses that of existing models. However, the research findings suggest that further improvement is possible, which could be explored by experimenting with different network architectures and optimizing hyperparameters. This would lead to more robust and accurate speech recognition systems that could be applied to real-world scenarios.