编辑一篇英文小说的开头段落，使其更加引人入胜。


原始开头段落：
It was a grey and dreary day in the middle of November. Emily had never been a fan of this time of year. The coldness seemed to seep into her bones, making her shiver uncontrollably. She trudged down the street, pulling her coat tighter around her body.
As Emily stepped outside, the chilly air greeted her with a forceful slap. The leaves on the trees rustled, threatening to loosen their grip and fall to the ground. Despite the dreariness of the November sky, there was something about the impending change of seasons that exhilarated her. Emily took a deep breath and made her way down the sidewalk, eager to explore the adventures this new autumn would bring.