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Thread: Making Good Better...

Another question, what happens when your RP partner does not give you something to work at? What if you are typing two para's easy but your partner can barley manage four lines? How do you ask himher to give you more without being mean?
Thread: Making Good Better...

Again, it can very well depend on those 4 lines. Sometimes a post only requires 4 lines while other times, 4 lines is just drivel. It really depends on the scene and situation at hand. Typically when moving from place to place, you require shorter posts or if heavy conversation is occurring, you require shorter posts as well. Again, this isn't a rule. But it tends to happen. I find you don't want to get lost in the world of the 'too verbose' because 1 you'll burn yourself out as a writer and 2 you'll probably either bore or overwhelm your RP partner. That aside, if you find your RP partner isn't giving you enough regardless of word count with which to work from, I'd be forthright with them. Tell them that you see potential and really want to work with them, that you love he story idea you are working on with them and really want to develop it, but you are having trouble moving on from post to post because you feel like you are having problems in determining where to go after you read their posts. Ask them if they have ideas of their own based off their own posts. Ask them to list off perhaps a few ideas so that you can then bounce your own back off of them. Maybe then you can ask them to tweak things a little once you come to an agreement on where things should go and let them know you need things to be a bit more open for you to be able to do things and that you want that with them because you really enjoy the ideas they have to offer the story you're developing together.
Thread: Making Good Better...

How do I make scenes move? What if the plot isn't progressing? How do I change that?
Thread: Making Good Better...

If the plot isn't progressing, you might want to take a step back and see why that might be. Are you getting too caught up in details that aren't necessary or in some tangent of a 'something or other' that doesn't really add anything but just might seem cool at the time. These are the sorts of things that can bog something down from my own experience and oh so seriously cause pace to slow down. Of course, details are a wonderful thing and I'm a fan of them. But there's a fine line of becoming verbose and saying nothing and giving what's needed to make the scene rich while still moving things forward. When it takes a page or more to describe the intricacies of something ridiculously minor that no one save maybe the writer's happiness that it's there..... that is a time you might want to go 'hrmmm, this probably should go'. I know I try to do that in my own writing and try to think about that when writing with others even more so because I so do NOT want my partner to get bored to tears with mundane intricacies that they could hardly care about. Anyway, if you find these happening, get rid of them. And if you see your partner doing it, you might want to bring it up with them in a polite manner. Again, you're a team when you RP and if you approach things in a nice way, people should be more than willing to listen and do what's needed to help make the story the best it can be and the experience the best it can be for those who are involved. Hope that helps.
Thread: Making Good Better...

Also, I should add.... if you get a lot of back and forth that is just circles of nowhere, someone has to break that. If you are the one to notice it, speak up to your partner if you feel the need or make a post that definitively causes things to move out of that cycle. It might mean doing something where it takes your character 'out' a bit, but that's what RPing is. Sometimes you do the unexpected and that means we as writers have to adapt.
Thread: Making Good Better...

I think quality is better than quantity. Personally I'd rather two paragraphs of legitamite material that actually adds to the story scene character developments whatever than eight paragraphs of fluff that I really don't give a shit about. Oh cool, it's a pretty pine tree, but how does that actually effect the story? As for not using She, Her, Winry I try to find a second way to say the same time. Here is an example. Winry cried out in pain as the blade came down upon her shoulder, blahblahblah vs. A cry of pain exploded from her as a wicked blade clipped her shoulder, blahblahblah. Did that help?
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Very well said, CD. Very well said.
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Thank you all if I have more questions I will be sure to ask
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

Lia Wood slowly blinked awake, feeling cold air against her conspicuously bare skin. Except that even with her eyes open all she could see was black. There was a slight pressure across her cheekbones and forehead, as though a cloth were pressing there. In fact, she was almost certain after a moment that she was blindfolded. And her mouth was held open by a hard plastic ball shoved into it, rubber straps tied around her head holding it in place. She was breathing through her nose, and her pulse began to speed up as panic set in, she squirmed and realized she couldn't feel the ground. Stretching her legs out her toes brushed cold cement floor. Her arms were held over her head, rough ropes biting into her wrists and hooked to what must have been the ceiling as she hung in the center of a large room. Of course, she couldn't tell were she was, blindfolded as she was. Instead she simply tried to wriggle out of the ropes on her wrists, but they were too tight and soon she was panting through her nose and hanging there trying to regain her breath. Her short black hair was pressed to the sides of her face by the blindfold and the straps of the gag and of course she couldn't see a thing with the bright blue eyes that were one of her most striking characteristics. Her body was about average in terms of height and weight, with maybe a little extra curve in her hips but not much. Her breasts were about a 38 B, a manageable size in her mind and something she was quite content with.
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

Thomas smelled the girl awaken, the fear the excitement. He hadn't played this game is far too long. Walking behind her he took a cane from the wall of mounted objects. He spoke slowly, to make sure he had her attention So the little mouse is awake, she should have stayed away from my employers crumbs but instead she followed the, and got grabbed by the falcon's talons now she's mine to play with. The an brought the cane down across her ass. He'd do this again and again, until her ass was a mess of violent red welts. That tended to take the fight out of the majority of people. His strong but clean body could keep the whipping up for days His dish water blond hair brushed back. His dark blue eyes taking in every detail.
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

Lia was confused by his words for a moment before realizing that she must have been abducted by the company she'd hacked. Then all thoughts of what she'd done and what was happening were driven from her head as the cane smacked down repeatedly on her ass. She cried out from behind the gag, swinging from the force of the blows. But that seemed to only add more force to them as the momentum of the cane and her own momentum met in the middle with resounding smacks. Tears were wetting her blindfold now, trickling out from under it and down her cheeks. Her mouth was stretched uncomfortably wide by the gag and a little bit of drool slid from the stressed corners since she couldn't close it to swallow.
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

Thomas moved up behind her, licking the tear from her cheek he knew she'd feel his massive cock against her ass. Deciding to see how much conditioning this slut would need, he thrust two fingers into her sex, fingering her hard and fast with the skill gotten only by common use. One hand working her cunt he pinched and twisted her nipples with the other. He wondered if the slut would be wet from the beating, or how much fingering it would take to have her so.
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

She flinched when he licked the tear from her cheek, feeling the hardness against her backside as she did so and shuddering in fear at the sensation. Then he thrust his fingers inside her and she cried out, having never taken more than two of her own slim fingers before. And his were larger and rougher, not to mention she hadn't been prepared at all. His fingers felt like sandpaper against her sex and she gave another cry of pain and surprise as he began to abuse her nipples. More tears slid out as she whimpered, a begging note in the sound though she couldn't speak to ask him to stop.
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

The man chuckled at how tight she was letting his thumb rub up an down her clit. Circling it before rubbing over it. He couldn't wait to slam this little virgins but he had to hold back, to make her feel betrayed by her own body and willing to give in. He rubbed his cock head between her ass cheeks saying, Listen you naughty little whore, I want to fuck you hard and deep in the ass but I' a fair man I'm going to ungag you, and give you a chance to beg for me not too however you yell or scream for help, or cry, you do anything but beg for mercy and I'm going to bet your tits like I did your ass. The man reached out, undoing he gag He rocked her body against his large member. Working the fingers in and out of her sex casually as he said What do you say slut?
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

She whimpered and when he removed the gag she immediately began to plead. Oh god, please don't. Please sir, please... She gasped, tears streaming down her face with fresh frequency. She squirmed slightly against the ropes again, the now-wet blindfold chafing the skin under her eyes slightly already.
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

The man chuckled, it was amusing to hear a woman beg. He truly loved his job, reaching around her rubbed her nipples with just enough force. He wanted this little slut to get wet for him. He rolled and rocked his fingers inside of her sex. His thumb rubbing her clit so hard an fast it was a blur. Even as he suckled and bit into her neck sucking the flesh hard.
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

She gasped and squirmed against him. Please stop! Please sir.. She begged even as her sex began to react to his constant, skilled stimulation. It began to betray her and that scared her into forgetting his warning. Oh god, HELP! She screamed, struggling in his grip as the tears poured fresh. This time with humiliation mixed into the fear that had been fueling them before.
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

Thomas stopped what he'd been doing. Rubbing her own sex juices in her hair he said Too bad, so sad, naughty girls who break rules get punished. Thomas lifted the cane moving in front of her he brought it down hard on her right breast Then her left twice before moving back to her right. Each downward stroke of the cane savage. His full force behind it.
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

Please no, I'm sorry... She whimpered as he came over with the cane. Then she cried out every time he struck her, her breasts bouncing with the beating and tears starting to freely stream down her pale cheeks. Please! I'm sorry!
Thread: To Be Broken [ThomasRHellsing and KrisBeta]

Thomas smirked I believe you, so after your punishment I'm going to give you a chance to prove it. Thomas brought out a small piercing gun, piercing her clit and nipples. He put in small barbell piercing into each because of the abuse with the crop he knew her body would be relatively numb. Thus the turned the vibrators on low. He was planning a trick her body wouldn't register the vibration just the pleasure so she'd think she was getting off on his touches. Thomas could rape the girl easily. But breaking a slave that way meant they were no fun. A living flesh light No Thomas got paid the big money because his girls LOVED being raped. Suggestions teasing they felt pleasure by giving pleasure. Thomas started the first training technique as he said Your going to give me a nice blow job slut if you make me cum before you do I'll even let you go but if I feel teeth I'm going to have to beat you. He undid her wrists keeping them tied together but letting her drop to her knees. Guiding her blind folded face to his hard fat dick He held her one hand on her hair. the other turning the vibrator piercings to high.
Thread: A Little Help? (Slovaris & LittleKitty)

Kirsty walked around her Victroian-style manor, telling diffrent slaves to complete diffrent chores. She watched as they scurried around, unintrested and bored. Walking up to her room, she sat down at her lovely white dresser, taking a brush and carefully combing out her thick blond hair. It fell in loose waves, reaching just a little bit passed her waist. She looked at her self in the mirror, applying a dark red lip stain, and tapping a finger to her smooth porcelin skin. Standing, she moved to her walk in closet, looking thru her many dresses. Selecting a dark purple one, she put it on and looked in the mirror once again. She carefully did the buttons up, the dress showing quite a bit of cleveage. It was sleve-less, and the skirt was full. Nodding to her self, she sat on her chaise lounge, waiting for the new slave that was to come today. An hour or so later, a slave girl knocked on her door, timbly annocing that the new slave had arrived. Smiling in anticipation, Kristy strode down the strairs, making her way to the basmenet where she kept all the new slaves untill they earned better.
Thread: A Little Help? (Slovaris & LittleKitty)

Dante's hazel eyes took in every detail of the extravagant manor. He thought to himself that this was just the basement. The rest of the house would reveal even more splendor. He tried not to be too intimidated. He stood an inch short of six feet tall, but he felt so small in this place. He ran a hand through his dark brown hair and tried to slow his breathing. His heart was racing with anxiety. He had to do it though. He needed the money that this job would bring, if you could even call it a job. Slavery sounded so extreme. As he was staring at the statue in the center of the room, the double doors opened by two young men and revealed the most beautiful woman Dante had ever seen. His stomach did a somersault and his eyes widened, his heart returning to its quickened pace. His jaw dropped slightly, and then he remembered that he was told to keep himself calm and presentable before the lady of the manor, so he quickly changed his expression back to normal and stood up straight. He could feel sweat cling to the most formal clothes he could find. Why did he feel so hot all of a sudden? Why now? He clenched his jaw and swallowed louder than he had intended as the beautiful woman approached him.
Thread: A Little Help? (Slovaris & LittleKitty)

Kristy looked over her new slave, walking up to him and taking his face in her hands. Turning his face to the side, examining it. She turned it to the other side, examining it as well. She pressed her hand into his chest, feeling the muscle beneath it. Her touch was one of someone expecting something they bought. Walking around him, she ran her hands along his back and shoulders, nodding to herself. Walking back and looking at him, she stood straight, watching him. She could sense his nervousness, and with a smile, asked, Your name? She consider diffrent things she would have him do, and decied he would be good all around slave. Examining him once more, her eyes trailed over his body in a more suggestive manor, decieding she would have him visit her bedroom often.
Thread: Elemental Girls

RE Foxy Fuck Five. I'm in. I'll even play a tentacle beast. Thing is I'm not into rape.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Well a few of the girls could have a love interest.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. What if someone's in love with the tentacle beast?
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Well I know the best why my character would consent is through mind control.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. That's a little bit easier to accept. What if the tentacle beast gives her power through screwing her?
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Well I guess that depends on the character. I still need 4 other girls then we can decide what our powersabilities will be.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. What if I play a tentacle best that makes herself look like a human girl?
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. That could work but call me racist I just feel the tentacle beast would be a better villain.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Her father is a villain 3
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Well we can see once I get some more people.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. I'd be interested. Not sure what I'd play, though.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. We totally need one of those super team attack powered by an orgy. Perhaps we summon a giant mecha which fucks us with mechanical tendrils and is fueled by our orgasm?
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. And all the girls have power armor that fucks them while they're using it.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Oh, idea! The girl's costume are all strap-on that tease them while they fight!
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. I was thinking each of us has the power of an element. Water, Earth, Fire, Air and a fifth.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Maybe Oriental elements? Metal, Wood, Water, Fire and Earth? ...That first three makes tentacles easily justifiable, incidentally. Anyways, if we go with the elements idea, I call dibs on water.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Okay I was thinking less focus on the sexual Sex will be a big part of it and a high action and social interaction.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. That would work for me as well.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Oh. Now I get it. Not super sluts but super girls who spend a few hours now and than between each others legs.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Ya but with enemies that use mind control to fuck them silly.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. So sex is a part of combat? Sounds to me like everybody wins.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Ya so Fire, Earth, Water, Air, Lightning sound good for the elemental powers. Who should be the leader? I rather not be the leader. I was thinking about using fire for my element.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Heh, fire-using guygal is usually the leader in this kind of things...that said, I don't really mind who is the leader.
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RE Foxy Fuck Five. Maybe the lightning or air girl unless you want to be the leader.
Thread: Nekos In Heat

Coco had been feeling very strange lately. She had always been a curious little kitten who didn't care for what kills a cat, so she often looks up porns and hentais on the Internet. But these couple days, whenever she sees a or hear something sexual, she immediately feels hot and wet down there. She had a pretty good guess about what's happening to herself, she just didn't know what to do with it. She tried touching herself, often, but the more she did it, the more she felt that it wasn't enough. Wondering if her sister was going through the same thing, she decided to go into Sasha's room and check her out.
Thread: Nekos In Heat

Shasha was going through heat. She knew this by the feelings she was getting throughout her body. She was getting horny very easily and it was getting harder to get rid of the feeling. Shasha sat alone in her room reading a book. Her pink tail was waving back and forth as she couldn't get her mind of how good it would feel to have a guy inside her or a girl making out with her. She had her fingers down her pants rubbing herself when her ears twitched as she heard the footsteps of someone coming to her door. She pulled her fingers out of her pants and continued to read.
Thread: Nekos In Heat

Sasha? I'm coming in! Coco knocked briefly and called out before she went ahead and opened the room dor without waiting for a reply she does that a lot. Maybe it's a twin-telepathy-thingy, but Coco actually felt a tinge in her lower body when Sasha withdrew her fingers from her panties. Once inside, Coco quickly glomped her twin sister by her firm breasts and nibbled her pink kitty ears she does this a lot as well, even before going into heat for a while before commented You're growing bigger each day
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It took every ounce of Shasha's inner strength to not moan when Coco was nibbling on her pink kitty ears. Shasha's tail wave back and forth and she gave her sister a hug back. Really I feel like I stopped growing. Shasha said, she was thinking about her breast size.
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Coco let Sasha go and checked her up. You're definitely growing up! she said, still without clarifying whether she meant height or breasts. Anyways, I gotta ask you about something. she began and, without pussyfoot around, asked her twin sister Are you in heat? I am!
Thread: Nekos In Heat

Shasha smiled at her sister and then the question came and she started to blush. Ummm.... y-yes I am. She said shyly as she stared at her sister. I've been in heat for a couple days now. Why do you ask? Shasha's tail flicked back and forth and she stretched across her bed to put the book back on the nightstand.
Thread: Nekos In Heat

Because I'm as well, silly! Coco giggled as she pounced Sasha once again, this time her hands went straight for Sasha's panties. Since we are twins, I figure these things would be the same... she purred as she slid one, two fingers into Sasha's pussy and started to search for her clitoris. So does this feel good...?
Thread: Nekos In Heat

I'm thinking Tommy could come in after the first orgasm. Maybe he's picking them up for school. They'll be skipping school of course. 3
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Shahsa was in shock at first as Coco pounced on her and felt her sister's hands on her damp warm panties. She started to resist at first then she felt two fingers enter into her pussy and she started to purr softly. Oh... that feels.... good. She moaned her tail waving back and forth as she relaxed a bit.
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Right? Right? Coco grinned as she watched her twin sister's reaction to her teasing, her tails waving as she became hot and wet herself. Do you wanna feel better...together? she purred into her sister's kitty ears while her fingers gave Sasha's clitoris a gentle squeeze.
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Shasha continued to purr looking up at Coco. Ummm... sure we can feel good, together. She said shyly her hips thrusting up as she squeezed her clitoris. Shasha kissed her sister's ears playfully with a small smile on her face.
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Nya Coco giggled when Sasha kissed her ears, then she smiled and kissed Sasha in return...starting from her lips, then her nipples, belly button, all the way down to her drooling lips down there. Say, Sasha... she asked liking Sasha's cunt with her sandy cat tongue. Do you know what's a 69...?
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Shasha moaned shivering as she felt her sister's sandy cat tongue went over her pussy. Ohhhh... y-yes, I know what that is. Shasha said blushing her tail flicking against her sister's tail.
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Do you wanna do it? Coco asked as her tongue ventured deeper into her sister's wet hole, thrusting and twisting as she looked for her sister's little spot of ecstasy. Then we can both feel good together!
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Shasha continued to shiver feeling her sister's warm tongue in her wet hole. She gripped her bed sheets tight as she moaned and purred. O-okay t-turn around then. Shasha said.