Thread: In the depths of Valhalla(Finished, feedback wanted)

Re In the depths of Valhalla Luna was placed gently on Hods bed. Hod hadn??t had a woman in ages. Even to have one under false circumstances would be okay with him. His hands went to caress her left breast, and she a small moan escaped her lips. This only encouraged him to go further, slipping his hand into her dress so he could feel her skin to skin. Her nipples had hardened quickly, but she placed a hand on his. ??Baldur?this is going too fast.? Luna said quietly. Hod looked into her eyes and realized that this girl was not his brothers lover. She was just someone that liked him and nothing special. Damn. ??Come on. I know how much you love me. I??ve always known. I love you too. So why is it going so fast?? ??Baldur, I love you as well, but I want a relationship with you before we make love.? Luna looked up at Hod and then smiled at him. Hod smiled back, but he wasn??t amused inside. His rod wasn??t either, for it was fully erect and waiting. ??Alright, I guess that??s okay. But I??m always busy whenever I??m in Valhalla, and that means you have to come to me around this time when I??m in Asgard. Do you understand? Plus, father will be upset with us. You don??t want that, do you?? Hod asked, caressing her cheek. Luna blushed and then pressed her lips against his. ??No. Odin has been good to me and I don??t want to upset him more than I already have by leaving Valhalla without his permission.? Luna wasn??t looking forward to that at all. Odin seemed to know everything, so it wouldn??t be a surprise if she got home to him and Hildyr. She??d be scolded like a child of course and sent to bed early. ??Loki didn??t get fathers permission? He??ll be mad.? Hod put his hand through Luna??s soft platinum blonde hair and smiled. Having a woman around wouldn??t be so bad even if they didn??t have sex. It was so empty in the house and Hod had been lonely. He wished he could be in Valhalla along with his twin brother, but that was impossible. Baldur probably didn??t even know that she liked him. He was probably to dense to see it, especially because he was so well loved already he didn??t even have to look. He probably didn??t think about Luna until he actually saw her, but she probably thought about him all day and night. It was upsetting, and Hod was getting sick of the fact that he was in his brothers shadow and he would never emerge from it. Luna looked at him and blinked. ??Is there something wrong, Baldur?? She asked, a concerned look on her face. She wasn??t sure if he was thinking so hard about her or something else, but she didn??t like it. Baldur seemed to be acting strange. Some of the expressions he was wearing she had never seen before. And his speech was off with a slight accent. Or perhaps she was just imagining it. ??No. I??m okay my dear. Don??t worry about me. I was just wondering if you and I could ever get married one day.? Luna blinked and blushed when he said that. She looked away, like she was getting bothered with the thought. ??I mean..not now of course. Just whenever we do what we do. You will conceive my child and we should be married after that. Don??t you think?? Hod looked at her and smiled. She nodded, but was still embarrassed at the thought. ??Oh, I see.? Luna said quietly. Her eyes went to his chest and she placed a delicate hand over his heart. ??I love you.? She whispered and kissed him gently once more. This time he returned the kiss and then sat up. His erection hadn??t gotten any better, and it seemed as though he was pitching a large tent in his toga. ??Anyway, you should leave. I??ve got to return to Valhalla soon, and Loki is outside the door.? Hod turned himself away from her so she wouldn??t see his bulge. Luna frowned but nodded and then got up. ??Alright, I??ll come back tommorow.? Luna got up and then began to walk out of the room. ??Luna. I love you too.? Hod said before she left. Luna looked back at him and smiled, leaving without another word. Loki was right outside the door when she opened it. The visit seemed to be too short. ??Perhaps I will drop you off at an earlier time tomorrow?? Loki asked with a grin. Loki wasn??t surprised that Hod went along with his trick. He obviously wanted a woman in his life, and he would take whatever he could get. Luna still had a smile on her face and she wasn??t listening to anything Loki had just said. ??Luna? Are you listening? Or are you thinking about Baldur?? ??Hmm?? Luna asked, snapping out of her daydream. ??Come on, I??ll take you back home.? Loki said with a grin. When they got back to Valhalla, they had gotton back just in time for the evening feast. Loki and Luna appeared right as the others began to gather. Luna took her seat across from Vali, who was looking at her puzzled. Vali had seen her come with Loki. The Valkyries had their own table, but Luna sat with Odin??s sons and daughters. He thought of her as his own after all. Loki was on the far side of their table, smirking to himself as if he were plotting. Odin suddenly appeared and the huge room fell silent. He took his seat and grabbed his mug of ail and then lifted it. Every did the same thing. ??To Valhalla. Long live the Gods!? He shouted. The room was filled with war cries, however they were all cut short by Odin himself. ??I see we have a guest. Stand up Loki.? Odin said with a challenging voice. Loki rose with a smile, and the room was silent. ??Why did you decide to come back now of all times?? Odin said, folding his arms. ??Come now, Odin. Can??t we put aside our differences tonight?? Loki asked with a smile. Loki knew Odin had figured out he had taken Luna. ??Watch yourself, Loki. This is my home. You have to follow my rules here. Now, everyone. Feast!? Odin shouted. The room began to fill with the noises of clattering plates and laughter. Odin??s eyes were now on Luna. She looked at him and smiled, but Odins bearded face remained serious. ??We will talk later, Luna.? Odin replied. Luna sighed and then began to eat. Baldur hadn??t really said anything to her through out the meal, but he probably knew that saying things in front of Odin and his brothers would cause something.