Thread: WhiteTiger's writings: update, New stories, High-fantasy with realism, all tag types:

Welcome to my personal writing thread. If you find any thing you like amongst the stories, I hope you do enjoy. Many of these need much further editing though. Summary This is a mythic story involving archaic spirits, set during the height of the Aztec Empire and the consequential down fall as the setting. Here two young shape shifting innocent twins become a sacrifice and then possessed. Follow their journey and see humanity from the eyes of a big cat instead of our own human eyes. NAGUAL Deep in central America, there was a great civilization that, through time came to be feared. This powerful empire ruled all the surrounding territories were called the Aztecs. Their legends, gifts of prophesy, engineering, architecture, mathematics and even astronomy, have yet to still be completely understood. During the height of the Aztec civilization, there was a legendary creature called a Nagual. Nagual, in the Aztec language meant shape shifter but were rarely every seen. During this same time, many archaic gods were worshiped and sacrificed to. Human sacrifice, being the most sacred and powerful of offerings, as well as the letting of human blood, during this time, was also the most commonly employed act of sacrifice, especially for dramatic effects desired. Not all these Archaic spirits of nature got along well, and some even battled to the death. Two of these were the Phoenix, a great bird of air and fire and the spirits of the Black Leopards, creatures of earth and water. In a world full of such spirits, these two were mortal enemies and would frequently engage in battle to the death. when given the opportunity or a random encounter occurred. Residing in separate areas, the Phoenix lived way to the East, when in physical form, and the Black leopards lived way to the west, sleeping in trees all day, lounging about, waiting for their next delicious meal of sacrifice, when in physical form. In legend, the birth of a Nagual was so rare, that it was rarely ever seen, but plenty bragged they had. The rumor was that they could be seen and known by their appearance, for they were unlike any natural human they had ever seen. White, White and frail as glass the are!, one man told the village children while sitting around a fire, telling stories. Living way towards the East of the Aztec empire, most of their sacrifices went to the great Phoenix. Tall and pale and they move like a cat, slow, graceful and yet so beautiful to watch, like spirits them selves they be!, he continued on. Bending down, in a quiet voice, all the childrens ears perked up and he whispered, looking, around suspiciously to tease them, Dont ever look at them in the eyes too long or they will steal your soul!, and then he jumped up, scaring them, and take your bodies tooooooooo!!!!!!!!!, he finished. Dead quiet were all the children, looking at each other, while the rest of the tribe was preparing for bed. The Slightest smirk came from the corners of is mouth, and they all burst out laughing, knowing he was teasing them. After all, all of their people were short, dark skinned, dark eyed and dark haired, how could a real human exist as such, and it not be from the spirit world. With that, he said. Good night little ones and dont let the Nagual get you!!! , as he cackled during their departure to their huts. Several miles away, far to the west, where the archaic spirits of the Black Leopards. As such, they were usually sacrificed to. At this same time a woman heavy with child, twins in fact, but was unknown to her, as she began the early signs of labor. She had tried to keep the pregnancy as quiet as she could, knowing something was different and didnt know what to expect. She took to building a hut outside of the village and living there. Her husband though it odd, since she had already born him four children, all healthy and strong. Why she would act this way?, he asked himself, but he let her be. Women and bearing children was not a mans concern. The night grew long as she labored hard for her child, alone. A day and a half passed in her efforts, bearing the great pains from her labor before she finally felt the need to push. She was positioned well with a receiver already in place, and pushed with all her might, giving birth to a fine healthy baby boy. Leaning up, as her belly was not empty, waiting for the after birth, she screamed in panic, as her new born son was all white! Slowly once again, the contractions began as she heard the cries of her new born, all white son calling for her but these werent after birth contractions, and soon she felt the need to push again and she gave birth to a beautiful identical baby girl. Looking up, she wanted to scream again, as she was also all white and her eyes were wide with panic as both all white babies began to cry for their mother. Leaning towards them, she was stopped by the contractions of the after birth. After that was finally done. She quickly sat up as fast as she could and tied off their umbilical chords, cleaned the protesting babies up and raised each hungry mouth to her breasts to nurse. Quiet and happy they were in the arms, being loved and cared for by their mother, nursing peacefully away, defying her fear and was filled with love instead. Looking at the boy, she said, Your name shall be Tenoch., then glanced at her new baby girl, she said, Your name shall be Tepin. Looking at them one by one, she was selfless in her conviction and love, yet knew from instinct, not to share the news of them or their birth. As such, for the many years to come, she raised them away from the village, telling them the baby had died at birth and accepted her behavior as a deep mourning for her loss. As the years passed, they grew tall, taller than others of their kind and so pail and frail looking. Noticing a strong connection between them over the years, she asked her two hidden beautiful twins, Why do you not speak too much to each other?, Tenoch, her growing son looked at his mother quizzically. We speak to each other all the time mother it is just you can not hear us. We can hear each others thoughts and we can talk to each other without using our mouths to one another., while pointing to his head. Stepping back a bit, their mother was almost frightened, but then looked at their gentle, loving ways and knew it was alright. So in tune with the forest, they were, she knew it was alright. They wouldnt even eat any meat she brought them over the years. What they had kept from her was their ability to shape shift into any living thing they saw around them and as such, knew what it felt to be that animal or bug or bird and so would never ever eat them. The years passed, one after the other, until finally, their mother was getting older and they needed to start looking for their own food. At about the age of 17, out looking for roots and berries and such to eat, one of the older village boys spotted them and ran as fast as he could to his village. They shifted into monkeys and took to the trees until they made it safely to their home. Hearing the news, their mother had already made it there before them, and unknown to them of her presence, they shifted into their normal human state. Holding back a scream, they looked at her helpless with their large blue eyes, white skin and long white hair, begging with their eyes to forgive them. No time was given to them for that, as the village leader and a group of his warriors, including her husband arrived at her hut and standing backk in fear of what they saw. Looking at his wife, her husband said, Is this why, for all these years you have chosen to live out here, to hide these abominations!!!, he roared at her. Getting down on her knees, Please, please forgive me. They are our children and I love them and had nor have I the heart to hurt them in any way. Please take the time to get to know them. They are so kind and gentle. Look at how pale they are and tall and frail. They have no strength in them, only compassion. Looking with disgust at his wife, No, no, no, these are NOT my children. You have committed adultery, laying with a demon and these are the offspring of your evil union!!! You are no longer my wife nor the mother of the children of the village! Nodding in agreement, the leader of their tribe looked at her and said,You are banished forever from our tribe. Next, looking at the twins, he said, Tie them up and take them with us. I know why they are here and what their destiny is. With that, she gathered her things. crying deeply as any soul could, she walked into the jungle as they watched her walk off alone. The twins were tied up and dragged tightly into the center of the village. All present came out to look, watch and stare at these two Naguals, caught, tied and gagged, knowing they must be evil or the chief would not treat them so. Standing in front of them, he declared to the whole village, soon the great time of sacrifice is coming for a good season of rain, good prey and good crops. These two have been sent here as a sacrifice to the Great Black Leopard twins spirits that lives in the trees. All nodding in agreement, the crowd gathered behind them and the chief, as they walked the great distance to the sacred tree of the Leopards and the sacrificial grounds. Covered in sweat, their long lustrous white hair matted and their tribal clothes torn on their frail bodies, blindfolds were put on them also, as the chief did his ritual for permission to enter. One of the twin black panther spirits looked over to the other and said, Mmmmm, it is about time dinner got here., as they waited and watched them bind the frail twins to the sacred tree. Backing out with all respect, praying for the blessings asked for, the last thing he saw before entering the jungle again, was both the twin black leopards spirits jumping down from the tree and approaching them. Ooooh these are different!, one said the female of th two, to another, Can you smell it? And one for each of us this time too!. The second black leopards spirit stopped in his tracks as he approached them, and told the his litter mate and sister to stop too. She did as he suggested. Smell them, really smell them, he said and they drew close smelling every inch of their bodies. Tenoch and Tepin could feel the mighty claws on their shoulders and feel their hot breath upon them as they smelled their face and then their bodies. Your are right my brother. These are not NORMAL sacrifices. These are NAGUAL!!!, SHAPE SHIFTERS!!! , the female said. Yes, that is why I told you not to be brash and to hold your hunger. These are special, ooooooh so special! They can take the form of any living thing, so are also able to take their bodies and form!, he said enthused, and immediately shed the physical appearance, becoming the archaic spirit he was, and shoved his spirit inside the body of the male, Tenoch. Following suit, the female shed her physical appearance and shoved her spirit into the body of the girl, Tepin. The struggle between their souls was strong but the black leopards were stronger and determined, thus victorious, shoving their spirits out into oblivion. Quickly, changes began to within the now newly possessed bodies of the Nagual twins. Eyes changing from large blue and round pupils became gold and slits and claws and teeth. slowly slithering changes took over as they completely changed their form, yet was not painful to them. Finding themselves in black leopard form again, Aaahhh!, the male leopard said, My name is Tenoch and with this body, we have one hundred times the strength of an human and all the qualities that are feline within us, is also accentuated over one hundred times worth. It also appears they are an absolutely perfect fit as they read each others minds and talked the way we do, before we took their bodies. I know,, said the the female leopard, saying, and MY name is Tepin! I can feel the power flowing through me like nothing ever has before, but we are still in leopard form and I am still hungry. Be patient my beautiful, sexy sister and mate, with these skills, catching prey will be so very easy., Tenoch, now the Black Leopard spirit and Nagal said. Sure enough, their noses told them of a passing local villager a few miles away with his catch for the day, to take back to his tribe. Can you believe our senses alone?!, Tepin asked, but Tenoch was already on the move, fast as lightening through the trees. A few seconds later, Tepin caught up with him, excited from the feeling of the ground under her feet, the smells every where and the wind in their racing faces!. It was amazing to them. Before they knew it, they were there almost on top of him, knowing there was no one else around, and leaped upon him at once tearing into him, consuming every inch of his flesh they could. Suddenly, they felt strange and pulled back from their feast as they looked at each other. Slowly taking shape and moving like liquid their form changed and they both looked again like the original twins that were sacrificed to them. Smiling with great happiness, covered in blood and naked, they reveled in it, and continued to eat and eat until they felt sated. We have the key now brother and lover and mate. Humans and human flesh can keep us like this FOREVER!!!, she laughed loudly, though her voice was small and oh so feminine. Tenoch too, was incredibly feminine but also had the strength the eros of a man. So they both exuded this irresistible, exotic seductiveness that was unprecedented. They immediately felt it with each others energy and began to make savage passionate love together right there. They were so into each other, and the new bodies of each of them, and being human virgins, a strong sense of satisfaction came to both of them, as her small frail looking thighs were open before him and he pushed himself inside her, breaking her hymen in the human way. How wonderful and fascinating, rich and all consuming in was as she reached her peak at the moment he let out a large load of his bodys innocent cum, mixed with the essence of his archaic spirit. Reveling in it, they lay there, holding each other for a long time. Life passed as usual, as it can be for two archaic spirits, in with human form, wondering the jungles. Knowing their looks would draw attention, they remained on the outskirts or wore disguises. Strangers from a distant land, wearing metal hats, chest plates, swords and an entirely different manner of dressing began to be seen. They called themselves Spaniards, here for their Queen Isabella. Taking in information and learning about this place, it wasnt long before more of their ships from the sea arrived, and the conquest of the Aztec empire began. At the same time, a plague was running though the natives killing them in the thousands, as their gold was being plundered and stolen. Seeing this, knowing what would happen, Tenoch and Tepin took large stashes of gold, and hid it in the forest, deep underground where no one would ever find it but them. Along with these Spaniards, or Conquistadors, came their faith, Catholicism. Many were converted and now believed close to the same as the priests did, until one native told them of the demons from hell that ate the flesh of humans, and roamed the forest. Word of the and finally reached the Bishop. He issued the order to capture these devils, abominations to the almighty God, as he put it. That was the beginning of a new era for them and hundreds of years being locked away, isolated in a single, cell and an ending to their old life. Always careful to stay away from the region ruled by the Phoenix, the soldiers commanded to help in the search were finally successful and the twins eventually flushed out by hundreds of the soldiers, surrounding them and were caught and stuck , having to make a choice to fight several of their men or that of the great phoenix, looming over them, watching and waiting for the right moment to attack. Dozens and dozens, uncountable, of the white men with skin similar to their own surrounded them. Partially allowing transformation, their claws and teeth were extended, ready for attack, when down from multiple trees, came nets upon nets upon nests. Fighting and tearing, easily breaking through the first layers of the nest, yells in their language were heard as more and more nets were cast on them until they could no longer move. Thinking it wise to retain their human forms, as they had just recently eaten, they were eventually completely caught and tied up. Being dragged for miles, with local villages cheering them on, as they passed by, they finally reached the courtyard of the compound. Hearing them, Brother, what do we do? I am scared!, Tepin cried out to him with her mind. Replying, he said, Dont worry, this is temporary. Just stay calm and we will figure a way out of this. As the Bishop had initially ordered for their capture, he also issued an order to have a great compound was built, with the tightest security measure of their time, to hold, torture and keep the beasts of Satan in. By the standards of the Spaniards in years, it was in the mid 1530s C.E. at this time, and having enough influence over the native and their cultures, they ended up destroying the great bloody reign of the Aztec Empire, as well as any civilizations or tribes they thought might hold gold. Meanwhile, a full scale war had erupted in the spirit world between the water and earth spirits of the Black Jaguars and of the fire and air spirits of the Phoenix. The slaughter was immense and continued on for generations to come, filled with hatred as the Black Leopards blamed the Phoenix spirits for their capture. Finally, hundreds of years later from this time, there would be only one spirit that would remain. They had all killed each other off, the only survivor was a solitary Phoenix, alone and filled with hatred for the destruction of his kind. Inside the compound, after the exchange of the white humans conversation, they were drug to a cell, solid and inescapable and left their in their nets, with no food, or water for days. Tenoch had begun during that time to slowly cut the layers and layers of tangled ropes around him,while telling Tepin in her mind to relax and that he would get her out as soon as he could. Feeling and hearing her tears, he did the best he could when ever the guards werent watching. Later that night, he snuck out of the nets and tore open hers, finally releasing her. Holding each other tight, loving each other like no one could imagine, they sat back and laid against the jail wall. The pangs of hunger beginning to affect them, as they tried to hold on to their human form as long as possible. As the next day broke, the keeper of the compound came to pay a personal visit to the demons themselves, accompanied by a high ranking church official. It was decided that they had been possessed by making a deal with the devil and the devils should be pushed out by torture and then the young people would be burned at the stake for making such a deal. Standard types and methods of torture used The Iron Maiden of Nuremberg The Thumbscrews Breaking with the Wheel Head Crusher Chain Sourges or Chain Flails The Judas Cradle Triangle Branks or Scolds Bridles The Heretics Fork The Saw A Cats Paw also Spanish Tickler Other Articles on Torture Devices Mastectomy Rippers Spider Squassation Strappado Blooding Burial Cleansing Hanging Knotting Stoning Whip Collar Cradle Oven Turcas Water For three days they were tortured in such atrocious ways, as to make any human cry and beg for death, but they were not human and though horrid, crying to each other every night, they withstood the pain as the form of them began to loosen. Finally on the evening of the fourth day, they could hold back no longer and they fully transformed into their Black Leopard forms. As the men filed in to take them to torture the following day, they found not the young people, but instead 2 wild Black Leopards in their cages. The Keeper of the Compound and the Bishop were called in to witness this. The devil must have come in during the night and allowed them escape but they are tied to these two beasts some how, I know it!, the Bishop declared and the keeper of the compound was in agreement. Would it not be prudent to keep the beasts here, so as the devil-children may not wander to far and we may catch them again!, The keeper of the compound suggested. Agreeing with him, the Bishop ordered ordered wild meat and water to be given to the Leopards, not wanting anything to happen to them, lest they lose their connection with the devil children. Without human meat they could not transform, and as such, were kept in the small cage for years upon years. They watched the retirement of the old guard and keeper to the new guard and keeper, over and over again. Peace was only found during all those centuries, when they mated and rekindled their bonds and slept, snuggled together. For over 500 years they were kept there like that, watching the guards change and the keepers change. Hatred for humans, not just hunger consumed them now as the began noticing over those years that the keep up of the compound and the quality of the guards was degrading. They watched yet again, a new changing of the guard and an old keeper about to retire himself. It was now in the late decade of the century of two thousand and ten. Being a man of reason in the modern age of two thousand and ten, a devout, religious but logical man, was assigned as their new guard. No more were there four or more guards, as it had dwindled down to one. These are not demons, he said to himself, No matter what the garbage of the records say. These are just poor abused Black Leopards of the jungle, kept here like this for God knows how long?, he thought to himself. Tepin and Tenoch could feel the doubt and care in his heart, and worked on a plan. In the mean time, while off his primary duty, he made arrangements for these beautiful big felines to be put in the best zoo possible, knowing they could not fend for them selves. Each day he grew a bit closer and closer to them talking to them until he worked up the courage to start hand feeding them through the gates. Ever so gently and lovingly did each of them respond during the hand feeds, that that this became a regular routine. He was truly happy and looked forward to going to work each day to see them, as they now would also rub against his hands and arms seeming happy when he walked in the door. There was not a mean, predatory bone in their body and he knew it. The next day, grabbing two extra large portions of meat for them, he headed towards where they were kept and finally, for the first time in centuries, opened the gates, almost having to rip the door open as it had been like that for so long. Sitting between each on them, petting them, they rubbed on him and began their meal. Leaving the gate wide open, Tenoch thought, Tepin, now is the time and our chance! Yes my sweet mate and brother it is. , she said to him calmly and as the guard reached out both his arms again to pet them. At this exact moment, as the guards arms were extended and open, they both simultaneously launched at him and ripped out his throat and ate every scrap of him. It had been so long since their change, it took a while, but before they knew it, they were human again and as beautiful as ever, but covered in blood. We must clean up and find some modern clothes., Tenoch projected to his sister and out of the cage they walked. Looking to the right, Brother, this is the room the men used often to relieve them selves. Shall we see what is in there?, Tepin asked, and they both pushed the door open to find some white thing and another white thing on the wall. Messing with the silver handles on it, they found water came out a spout into that white thing on the wall, a basin of sorts, when they messed with them and in a look of zeal and excitement crossed their faces and they both began to wash themselves thoroughly, cleaner than they had been in centuries. They even managed to find the soap by accident, and used it for their bodies and hair. Oooohhh this feels amazing brother!, she said and Tenoch agreed well with her. Reminding her that next they needed to find clothes, as it appeared no one goes with out those clothes any more. Tenoch chuckled as she said that, agreeing with her observation. Finding clothes to fit him was easy enough as they slipped around the compound quiet and unseen. Many men were withing the walls of it, and the men were taller now and he took one man carefully taking his clothes as he he tucked his long, luscious white hair under his hat that all the men there seemed to wear there. Tepin was another problem, and it took some searching around before they found an office with a small woman behind a desk. Tenoch walked in casually, closing the door, making sure she was alone and attacked her immediately bysimply choking her, careful not to soil the clothes in any way. Handing the clothes to his sister while she dressed in the same office, Tenoh laughed at his sister while he watched her try to get these new clothes on. Finally succeeding, she then stuck her human tongue out at her brother teasing him. Smacking her ass, he said, mmm I shall have some more of that for later., and hand in hand they walked out of the broken down compound, free for the first time in centuries as the setting sun poured on their bodies and faces. Preview Maybe for more story or a future rp? You never know. NAGUAL Bolting from his casual position, when approached by the almost albino fair youth, as he was leaning against his car with such confidence, the man suddenly rushed away from her at a frantic pace, trying desperately to find an exit or an elevator for him to escape. A half smirk crossed her lips as the bright almost white piercingly blue eyes of the predator staked her prey. Running was the best for her. Oh how she loved them to run, so much more fun! Tepin searched out for her twin, Tenoch, with her mind to find his position in the hunt. More hungry than she, he kept back a bit, enjoying his sisters games. They had waited a bit too long to hunt this time and they could both feel the shudders of change wracking their nervous systems and their eyes were just starting to change from that piercingly bright blue with round pupils into black slits bright gold in color. We need to make a quick meal of this one brother, I am too hungry, and so are you. I dont want to change back and I know you dont., she probed in her mind towards her twin brother. Responding in the mental link that twins share, he projected casually,I agree, my enticingly beautiful sister. Then after we eat, I shall take with you with much passion! A broad smile crossed her face upon hearing this. She loved sex with her brother as much as hunting and the sex was always best fresh after the hunt and feeding. Dont take this too lightly brother. I never let our food escape but, I also like to make sure and we are too hungry right now to take any chances. Responding in his normal nonchalant way, Tenoch said, Of coarse my beloved sister. You should know better that to even ask. Your hunger is getting the better of you. Relax and enjoy the hunt. Upon hearing this Tepin did relax, ignoring the synapse spasms in her body and began using her senses more clearly, the sight and smell of a black leopard in a concrete jungle. Low riding jeans she wore, very low, and a tight pink spaghetti string silk half length top. Very pale, as if shes never seen a day of sun, making her skin appear almost luminous on her hairless body, that marked both herself and her brother. The only hair they did have was long flawless thick, perfectly straight, silky white hair that stretched down past both their asses. Keen smell, hearing and sight let her know right away he was hiding behind one of the only 3 cars left in the garage. No way out for him, as they had planned ahead of time to ensure their food and any risks of being seen. I can smell youuuuu., she taunted the man hiding behind a black Mercedes. Closer and closer she approached, giggling like a child. The man, working late as usual, an attorney, had no idea what to make of her, nor had he seen her brother. The animal instincts within him told him to run though she seemed harmless enough as she was so lithe, small breasted and fragile looking. Mmmmmmmm You smell sooo delicious. I really would love to taste you. Please come out I am so very hungry for a strong man like you., she continued. Hiding behind the car, he now knew his senses were all wrong. She was just a beautiful horny minx and wanted to suck him off or even give him some of that beautiful little pussy he knew she had inside those low jeans below her perfectly flat stomach. I am always late home from work any ways and my wife never gives me any more any way, why the hell not?, he thought to him self as he stepped out from behind the car, embarrassed that he had initially ran from this beautiful young girl. God, he said to himself, I hope she is at least 18! Following his thoughts as she casually approached him, looking him up and down hungrily he stuttered, Uummm, you are 18 right? Giggling a big with a big smile, she replied, Oh you are so handsome and yummy! You have no worries, I am well over 18 in years., and with that, she approached him close pressing her body into his and began to kiss his neck as he clumsily reach for her small breasts. Finding his cock hard and excited, she paused for a second. I dont want to have to drag his body all the way home. she projected to her brother. Interjecting into her thoughts, her brother said, Sister dear, are you being lazy again? , No I am not!, she sent him, I am simply being logical about transporting the body. Tepin countered her in mid thought, Who cares about transporting the body between the two of us, we are so hungry, there wont be much left to carry home any way and as usual I have brought you a new set of clothes and a means of cleaning you up. You know how your brother loooves to please you as you do me in every way., he finished off with a humorous note in his voice. His hands now freely groping her breasts and the other searching to get her pants off, the change was starting already, Damnit! she cursed her self, and while nuzzling into his neck and rubbing his very hard member, she opened her mouth, with her k-9s fully extended and a mouth full of razor sharp tearing teeth, she bit down into his neck, ripping it open and tearing out a chunk of flesh in the process. Blood pouring from the mans shredded caroted artery in gushes with his heart beat, iy quickened her hunger and the ensuing change. She did NOT want to change. Almost white blue eyes with circular pupils now became elongated and changed color to a bright gold as claws extended from her fingertips. In shock and terror, the man kept backing up, leaving a delicious trail of blood and begged, Oh god no, no, no!! What are you!? Please I have a wife and chiiii, and ended in mid sentence as Tenoch entered and tore his neck completely open. Tepins favorite has always been the viscera and tore into his blood filled cavity, devouring, ripping, drinking and eating as much as she could. In doing so, the spasms of change receded for both of them and they efficiently devoured the meal all the way, until almost nothing but bones remained, only stopping once, being so ghostly pale to looked up smiling at her brother, while bright crimson blood dripped down her immaculate angelic mouth and chin. He was always the best at eating with out getting a mess while eating, but she didnt care. When they were done and full, the would walk home arm in arm, kissing and laughing like two young lovers and he would have amazing sex with her as she took him and he took her in every way possible. Even now, the thought excited her and she ate with renewed vigor.