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Thread: Demons Can Be People Too...when they work at it(AparinaAkumu and wiki234)

She nodded, and followed him as they ordered soon were walking to the fountain again. It took her a moment as she tried to explain, That's why I'm so happy that I found a familiar face. I have very little experience with humans on a connective level, like school or social experience. I know about them, and I know about our shared world, but I don't quite know how to interact with them...and I want to. She rubbed her head a bit as they sat, looking around when he asked if she saw anything she might want to do and shaking her head. No I um... a blush spread across her cheek, I was a bit distracted.
Thread: Demons Can Be People Too...when they work at it(AparinaAkumu and wiki234)

then you might be thinking of something to do.... crossing his arms as he saw her looking around before he started eating. It's not really hard, well accept that you would need someone to help. Just relax then and let's talk about regular stuff. I think that's it's also better then to have that one good friend or just be alone which is me when I didn't really see you. He wrapped an arm around and shook her a bit with a small smile.
Thread: Demons Can Be People Too...when they work at it(AparinaAkumu and wiki234)

She blushed a bit still before nodding and looking around again as he shook her gently. She did smile for him but still took a moment as she pointed to a clothing store. It featured gothic and punk clothing. What about that one? I have to fill my closet even if i never need human clothes. ..and those are a lot like what we normally wear.
Thread: Demons Can Be People Too...when they work at it(AparinaAkumu and wiki234)

of course they are....i was thinking you would more oddly bubbly and be obsessed with cute clothes and maybe a little nerdy... shrugging as he took her hand and went inside. But don't worry about that, this will be fun. Kai looked around wondering what kind of clothes might be there.
Thread: Demons Can Be People Too...when they work at it(AparinaAkumu and wiki234)

Little did he know, there were plenty of cute clothes in the gothica store. She was immediately drawn to a purple dress with torn-up sleeves and another dress that was white with black lacework and looked like a Victorian dress except much too short. It had a very low collar and off-shoulder sleeves. However she'd only get those two dresses before looking to Kai again. Cute and bubbly? I sort of saw myself more like Gaige from the DLC for Borderlands two... she smirked a bit before shaking her head. I guess I could use some more modern clothes...I do have one pair of skinny jeans and some tees at the house but that's about it for modern, everyday wear.
Thread: In the Scarlet Eyes of the Beholder (Tasinga Nightwolf x Viktoff Samson)

The sound of the steaming hot water added to the endless therapeutic properties of this out-door spring. As it were, only one man was in the hot water for the moment. Kaname Kuran, one of the tallest of the night class and certainly the most mysterious. Although he was normally stoic, hard to read, he was different this night with the young moon barely starting to climb the sky. The first sign that something had been different would be his lack of formal clothing. Afterall, Kaname only wore a towel with him into the steaming hot waters. The less obvious, more subtle sign would be his brooding atmosphere and small frown. The tips of his brown hair had darkened around his collar bones as they managed to reach the water when he relaxed in different positions. In the hour he somehow managed to find alone time with this hot water, he transitioned from watching the stars to glaring at the moon's reflection. Some things never changed, no matter how many thousands of times one might glare into them intensely. Kaname's woes were almost as consistent as the moon above him. While he had so much on his mind and the building stress of how little his loved ones really knew about him, this vacation with his friends was obviously a solid break. And yet, he still found time to sulk a little. He was so far away from her, and she was so vulnerable. Surely, she had Zero. But, that guy was far from trustworthy. Not to mention that he was considerably weak. If Kaname could have left someone far stronger, more sympathetic to his concerns, behind to protect Yuki, then he'd find it much easier to relax. And then there was the curious case of Kaien Cross. He was somewhat reliable, and yet Kaname remained uneasy about being so far away with Yuki being in such a vulnerable state. There were things crawling around that an army of nobles couldn't even handle. Such as himself. A dark, fun little thought danced along his imagination as he found a small smile. He'd have to humor himself at this rate, if his gang of friends were going to take this long to join him in the hot water. The reflection of his topless, smiling self would have made for an invaluable picture for the raving mad young ladies of Cross Academy's night school, Kaname wondered just how far his own crew's admiration for him might go by contrast. They were rather reliable and he did find a small sense of satisfaction in practicing his authority over them as the head of the Night Class. But, just how far did some of their feelings go for him? Should he feel guilty if romantic feelings were involved while he kept so much from them? Another thought to agonize himself over, pointless unless he were to pursuit it. Just like his concerns for Yuki. For a girl of her origin, she was almost delightful in her shortcomings as a human. Kaname wondered if he'd be less appealing to the human girls if another pureblood sacrificed themselves to make him human as well. Another pointless thought, but this one was fun to toy with.
Thread: In the Scarlet Eyes of the Beholder (Tasinga Nightwolf x Viktoff Samson)

Shiki didn't look his best, and while Kaname was quite familiar with his lack of expression, the male before him seemed quite tired. Contrary to popular belief, the creatures of the night had to sleep sometime. Typically, they slept during the day so they can attend the night classes. Perhaps the mahogany red haired boy wasn't sleeping? Why wouldn't he be sleeping? Kaname couldn't imagine it. What was disturbing the younger vampire? It couldn't be father issues, the pureblood tried to narrow it down with little success, one would imagine there wasn't much of a development in that area and he didn't detect too much of a problem there before. What sort of relationship going south could have caused the blue-grey eyed male to seem this beaten up over it? Did he put that much emotional stock in the others? it was hard to tell. I'm here because the others are concerned. Kaname started, his red-brown eyes running down over Shiki's body. The same eyes would climb back up the yellow sweater to the other male's eyes. The expression on Kaname's face would rarely if ever be one of play, but this time he was noticeably more serious. Brooding at times, it wasn't unusual to find Kaname looking serious. This would seem different, his eyes narrowed a little, but not in pity or disgust. He was confused, a little worried himself. I've been told that you haven't left your room in two days. Would you mind if I come in so we can talk? The ancient man of powers unimaginable had been incapable of crafting what might be the most likely scenario that lead to this situation in his head. Surely enough, he's thought of hundreds of possibilities, but there was no telling if one of them might be it. Kaname stepped closer, carefully. He didn't intrude any further if the smaller male showed any signs of direct physical stress to his actions. However, he could smell Shiki's blood and that was starting to concern him more. The younger male wouldn't be in a good position if he would try to close the door on Kaname. Many opponents have tried to out maneuver Kaname before. They had tried to have trapped him or escaped him with many unique and intricate methods. A door would most certainly not be the most successful attempt.
Thread: About Narrative Styles and Metagaming

Hello! Lately Ive been talking with one of my fun RP partners about the writing styles we use in our scene. Then Ive looked up a bit and come across a blog which precisely categorize what Ive been thinking about pretty point on. Im not very experienced in RPing, so it was interesting to learn that the way Ive been writing had an actual name or category of sorts. I couldnt find that blog again, but will link to it if I can, although Im sure its pretty common knowledge to the experienced players out there. Ive learnt that two common ways to write a post are using narrative and immersive styles. I guess what I do falls into the narrative style. Its a bit hard to explain, but I usually write my posts as an all knowing narrator, while limiting MCs dialogue and actions to what they know ICly. Though, that immersive style as its named, uses a more, well immersive approach, explaining things through what YC already knows, as in writing their inner thoughts. I admit, its more fun to read posts written that way for me. But sometimes it could also cause confusion. For example, in dub-con or non-con themed RPs, one can wrongly assume that when a character doesnt like how things are going in a scene, it also means that its player also feels the same. Or worse, it could be the opposite. I know that can be easily prevented by a simple OOC message, but still. One more thing, I also dont like writing fighting scenes in a RP, or I can say Im not good at it. Mostly because I cant help but get afraid of godmodding. If Im going to lose it, thats ok, since in these terms, losing is pretty safe and easy, if that makes sense. And if MC somehow starts to gain the advantage unlike whats planned, I usually hint at a weakness of hers to give an IC hint at my partner within the narration. Yeah, it breaks the immersion, but sets things back on track. Apparently, theres a name for this as well. If I got it right, its called positive metagaming. I knew what metagaming was, and it being a no no in the community. Using OOC knowledge to your unfair advantage, not much different than godmodding really, which I too unfortunately suffered from in the past. But even godmodding can be necessary in some cases. Like, while doing scene transitions, assuming your partners character following yours. I dont know if there is a term for it as well though, like positive godmodding, haha! Anyway, I was wondering how the other users handle those situations. And their thoughts about positive metagaming and occasional godmodding to move the plot, and if those are even ok to do in a RP. And Im also curious about peoples writing styles. Also, feel free to correct me at points I got wrong.
Thread: About Narrative Styles and Metagaming

Thanks for this great topic! I despise narrative writing. I've actually ended stories just because the writing was too narrative for my taste. X did this, said this, then this thing happened, they responded by doing this, Y did this, X said that. It doesn't matter if you expand into details or try and set up the environment, it still reads like a crime report. The characters are reduced to tools that are impossible to relate to, the plot seems like a synopsis of an average movie. Its just so boring and non-immersive that I just can't handle them. I try to be as immersive as I can in my writing. I've rarely done fighting scenes but I'd approach them the same way I approach dialogues. I agree to a specific outcome with my partner then we write towards that goal. Due to the nature of these things, I typically expect shorter posts. In the past, I've proposed to partners that we do all the dialogues in PMs first then we get to do portions of them in our posts so that I could write some of his lines and he gets to write some of mine. I don't mind relinquishing control of my characters in such instances. I value the fluidity of the story and it's progression in a reasonable pace. Having to build a post around a singular line my character says then waiting for a similarly written response is boring. The same mentality expands to fighting scenes. I don't mind it when my partner controls my character to facilitate a scene. My only red line is when that writing bypasses narration and wanders into the character building realm. Say that Katie tried to resist your choke but don't say that she hated it.
Thread: About Narrative Styles and Metagaming

Aww, thanks for responding Yeah, did this, said that, afterwards went there kind of narration can be quite boring and uninteresting. Less action and more explanation is better I think. And I usually prefer slow paced scenes. I used to play RPs with much slower pace compared to now, trading a good amount of posts before MC even drops her underwear. But sometimes people get bored of it and stop responding, so I dont do that anymore. Ill give an nsfw example here, so hope thats ok. Instead of reading specific measurements of the opposing characters member, its more fun to figure that out by reading how much effort they spend while trying to fit it in or how strongly they need to pull MC in. Though, I admit, I like to describe that part myself too Though what Ive been trying to mean was different. Lets say YC has two names X Y. ICly YC mentions her first name, but not the other. Then, some players dont include the name their character hasn't heard yet in narration at all. While I, outside the dialogues, dont mind using the second name. I mean its another pronoun. I usually try to avoid having two following sentences starting with a noun. Like if I write a sentence starting with she, that means the next one cant have it at the start, or at least should have a different pronoun like the blonde uppity woman etc. I also try not to start a paragraph with a noun. If I cant think of anything, I just put a dialogue at the start. I hope it didnt feel like Im trying to sound crafty or knowing, since Id be the first one to object that.
Thread: About Narrative Styles and Metagaming

Mmm, I wouldnt like it if someone else writes MCs dialogue. Occasional godmodding is fine by me as well though. And I think its necessary to move the plot sometimes, at least to move it faster. Even more so if Im playing the down role. I mean how else can you tie someone up etc Oh, youve done the PMing the dialogues beforehand too? Thats the first time I hear something like that. Or more like the second time. I used to RP on somewhere else. It had this system as an option where you rolled dice and had to calculate all those numbers and points. I sucked at that too, but you didnt have to think about possible godmodding or metagaming at least. Yeah, writing multiple characters is a different thing. You need to be more narrative to do that I guess. I think it also depends on the domme and sub roles you play. While playing as a sub, I try to react to every event happening to MC, thus having longer replies. If MC has the top position, I usually go with a more narrative, safer approach, to make sure not to hit a wrong spot of my partner. Its a bit hard to explain. Yeah, the second quote sound better for sure. Its not like youre gonna make YC measure it or anything, haha! Thanks for the input Hey, I just checked that resources link on your signature. Thats pretty useful! I wish I found it before. Would you consider adding something for eye colors too?
Thread: About Narrative Styles and Metagaming

xanaphia said Not entirely sure I understand the differences. Click to expand... Well, you are writing a story. So you are narrating it. Its just that non-immersive posts feel like your being told what is happening in a step-by-step description. It barely expands on what the character is experiencing or what their inner thoughtsfeelings are. Its just a narrative of the sequence of events that are unfolding. Main characters and sub-characters get the same treatment, its just that the main character gets featured more. Adding in the five senses makes the whole thing more immersive. Continue expanding on the character's feelings and your post slowly changes from being blandly narrative to engaging and immersive. If the reader can relate to your character, its immersive. Your first example is very narrative. The second one mentions how your character feels, and not fixate on how the cock is from an abstract, third person point of view. So its more immersive. She looked very sad - Narrative. She felt devastated, her heart was boiling with rage - Somewhat immersive. She glared at him with cold eyes. You fucking bastard , she thought as she fought the urge to punch his throat - Very immersive.
Thread: About Narrative Styles and Metagaming

Physical description of a character is tricky in first person or with a very close third person narrator because people don't think about the essentials of their own bodies very much. I find that the best way to describe a character is through the eyes of another character technically, a foil. Jack wiped steam from the mirror and saw his own hollow green eyes staring back at him. Click to expand... While that's not bad as far as it goes, it's very direct information dumping and it's unlikely that a character a male character anyway - I won't speak for female characters is going to notice his own eye color. He might notice if his eyes were hollower than usual, but he won't notice that his hair is black. A single sentence probably won't be a problem, but a bunch of sentences like that in a row will start to bang on your reader's eyes Jack wiped steam from the mirror and saw his own hollow green eyes staring back at him. His black hair dripped water onto his tanned features and he covered his face with his large, calloused hand. Click to expand... Mirrors are obvious and boring reflections in general... you can't get away with using a store window to squirm around this. They are necessary sometimes, but it's better if you can avoid them as a way to describe a character. If you introduce a second character, the description can get much more interesting. Jill pressed her own emerald earring into Jack's ear to match his eyes. You need sleep, she said, touching his cheek, her fingers porcelain against his bronze. She hoped that was all he needed. She resisted the temptation to sink her fingers into that black mop of his, and contented herself with running her fingers over his rough palm. Click to expand... An outside perspective makes your reader much more tolerant of information dumping, especially if you're making the descriptions do double duty by creating tension and hinting at conflict or desire. In that little passage there are several techniques Comparison emerald eyes Contrast porcelain fingers vs bronze cheek Suggestion you need sleep hollow eyes This requires you to trust your reader to arrive at the visual you're after. Negative Space Jill not sinking her fingers into Jack's hair creates the actual texture and sensation of his hair in the reader's mind. Sensory Description rough palm callouses Some things don't need to be described at all. I don't think I've ever actually described penis length in an RP, and certainly not using inches or centimeters. The mood and texture of a cock is more interesting in a story than its size anyway- brooding, eager, serene, enraged, heavy, hard, silky, etc. And if you need to give a length, these techniques will make it more interesting than anything you can learn from a seamstress's tape.
Thread: About Narrative Styles and Metagaming

You made a good point there. If youre telling the story through YCs eyes and thoughts in a more immersive fashion, describing YCs physical traits must be a tricky one, since YC wouldnt just describe how they look or what theyre wearing to themselves. I guess you can use clever ways to do that like looking in a mirror as you mentioned. But if you assume there is a third person who describes the events, you can do it without much trouble. Id write it like that. Jack wiped steam from the mirror, seeing his own green eyes staring back at him. Click to expand... And see no problem in it. If you had just said, Jack had green eyes. That wouldnt have been good though. And if more sentences like that come after each other subsequently, it certainly becomes more painful to read as you said. Makes you feel like you need to be taking notes. Mirrors can be quite fun if youre playing as a vampire character
Thread: About Narrative Styles and Metagaming

What an interesting thread! Indeed measurements are generally ridiculous unless you're speaking about an autopsy or something. I'm also fine with some godmodding with a trusted cowriter. Nothing big unless it has been discussed previously, and nothing from my offs ever.
Thread: Alpha Blue: Character Profiles

Well here is the basic Character template. All these things are picked or rolled during char generation. Name Species Weapon Occupations Money Background Past experience rolls are included here. Armor Health Level Picture if you want Special Abilities What are you wearing? Replacement body parts hopefully none. Mutations and or Alienisms Equipment Sex Stuff Known Associates Gender Debts Granted not every character will need every field, But you get the Idea. I'll post an example character below.
Thread: Alpha Blue: Character Profiles

Name Danny Fabulous Species Human Weapon Laser Crossbow Occupations Assassin 6 Interior Designer 7 Money 900 Background Past experience rolls are included here. Danny's planet was bombarded artillery and a mysterious swirling portal opened up and transported him to a strange spaceship where his attention to detail has brought him up to sub Lieutenant- third class of the fashion brigade. 1 reroll foe intelligence based dice pool. Since then he has become an assassin for fashion and murders the rich but horribly dressed. There is a full scale man hunt out for Danny and he fled to Alpha Blue. Armor 1 Health 25 Level 1 Picture if you want What are you wearing? Navy Blue, Beige, and Cream Velvet Uniform accompanied by Acid Wash. Replacement body parts hopefully none. Astrological Sign Gemini Equipment Black leather sleeveless jacket. Armor 1 Sex Stuff DomSub play, Woman's Breasts. Known Associates Alpha Beta Fraternity - Old Clasmate, Alpha Complex - Friend of Family. Gender Male Debts None
Thread: Alpha Blue: Character Profiles

Name Esme Cooper Species Mutant Human Weapon Warp Hammer 18 Occupations Technician 2 Money 288bb 4 Astrological Sign Scorpio Background Past experience rolls are included here. 1, 8, 11 Esme worked as a technician, fixing various types of drive cores, hull repairs, and thus has experience both in vacuum, controlling repair drones, and in confined spaces. She has travelled from ship to ship, station to station, and usually stays in space, but the occasional on-planet shore leave happens. The first time she went down to a new planet, she managed to get lost in the deserts of Kal'Gryx, and was found unconcious by a colony of alien photosynthetic moisture farmers. She was then bound and used as a breeding slave for two months due in part to her glow-in-the-dark colour before shore leave was up, and her previous crew followed her locator and picked her back up, between fillings of multiple gelatinous slime babies. The experience has greatly influenced her sexual interests and ability. Currently between jobs, she was dropped off at Alpha Blue to debauch herself and network. Armor 0 Health 3030 Level 2 Picture if you want This, but with more eyes hidden under the hair. night-time glow. Special Abilities What are you wearing? 3, 4, 5, 7, 14 Sexy, skintight, cream, avocado and black bodysuit. Replacement body parts None. Mutations and or Alienisms Mutations 56, 74, 34 6 extra eyes, 4 extra arms, glows green in low-light and dark. Very handy for her work. Equipment Customised tools and belt. Sex Stuff 5, 3, 8 Is especially intrigued by aliensmonsters with interesting body types, especially tentacles. Likes her humans nicely dressed, and with a well-toned behind. Known Associates 27, 7 Is a business partner with one of the higher-ups in the Last Starfighter Guild, has a contract to be one of their preferred technicians for jobs. Gender Female