Thread: In the depths of Valhalla(Finished, feedback wanted)

Re In the depths of Valhalla Luna couldn??t believe it. Loki had fooled her. Loki had introduced her to someone who wasn??t her one true love. What??s worse, she hadn??t even noticed. She could see minor differences, but she hadn??t even paid attention to it! She was crying in her pillow, humiliated and distraught. How could she have let this happen? Why hadn??t she listened to Odin? There was a small knock on her door. She had been given a private room, so it wasn??t that hard to find her. However, she didn??t want to talk to anyone right now. In fact, she was going to leave Valhalla as soon as she could. The door opened even though she had locked it, but it wasn??t Baldur or Baldur??s fake. It was Vali. Vali had a concerned look on his face. She hated it. She didn??t want Vali to comfort her. She wanted Baldur. The real one. ??Luna. I??m so sorry this happened to you. Loki disappeared once again. Father scolded Hod, but he??s allowed to stay in Valhalla. Baldur wasn??t really too happy about it. He didn??t even know he had a twin brother. Luna, please stop crying. I??m sorry this happened to you. I really am. No one is laughing at you. Loki is the one to blame.? ??You??re wrong! Everyone is laughing at me. To think someone like Baldur could like someone like me. It had to be a trap.? Luna stated, and then put her head back in her pillow. Vali sighed. He wanted nothing more than to wring Loki and Hod??s neck. Hod had no right to act as if he were Baldur. He hurt Luna for his own selfish reasons. ??I??m sorry, Luna. I just wanted to cheer you up. Please, don??t let them get to you. Luna, you??re in a class of your own. Don??t forget that. No one is better than you. So please don??t think my brother or any of us would turn you away for being who you are. Okay?? Vali asked, caressing her cheek. Luna felt a little better, however, she didn??t smile. She simply nodded and then looked away. Vali sighed and then took his leave, leaving Luna all alone again. She wouldn??t stay here. She??d go to Asgard so she wouldn??t have to show her face again. Now that Hod lived here, she didn??t want to be in the same world with him anyway. It wasn??t hard to sneak out of Valhalla even before work. She wasn??t sure where she would live, but she was sure she could find a run down cottage or something. Odin would know she wasn??t in Valhalla and would come looking for her sooner or later, but she wouldn??t go back. Ever. When she got to Asgard, she found a nice inn to stay at and a job being a maid at the exact same place. She would be happy just living as a chambermaid. After a few weeks, Thor had found her. Thor looked more like Odin then any other child. He had a long red beard and wild hair. He was well built and tall. Taller than Loki. She would have liked him better without the facial hair. ??I??m not going back to Valhalla, Thor.? Luna said quietly. She was on break so she had time to talk to Thor. The hulking man sighed, and then adjusted his hammer. ??Luna, are you sure? You always have a place in Valhalla, so?? Thor seemed a bit nervous, like he didn??t know what to say. Luna shrugged. ??I know. I just want to stay here.? She said simply. Thor nodded and decided to tell his father so he would know she was safe. Loki hadn??t showed his face in Asgard or Valhalla thanks to some of their sources. So he was sure she??d be safe for now. ??Alright. I won??t force you to come back. Just take care of yourself.? After that day, Luna hadn??t seen anyone from Valhalla in weeks. Thor had promised that she wouldn??t be forced to come back, and she was surprised he kept his word. However, after thirty-seven days, she found someone in her room she had pushed out of her mind since she had left. ??Who are you?? She demanded after a few minutes of awkward silence. ??I??m Hod. Luna, I??m so sorry. I really am.? ??Get out.? Luna began to look for things to throw. She hated Hod with a passion, and she didn??t want him any where near her. Hod folded his arms after standing up. ??You loved me.? He said quietly. ??I loved who you pretended to be. I won??t ask you again. Get out.? Hod shook his head. ??No. I will not. I love you Luna. So much I can no longer stand being away from you.? He walked towards her and then forced a kiss on her lips. Luna began to push him away but he firmly held her in place. Finally he pulled away. ??You will be punished for this!? Luna shouted, glaring up at him. ??By who? You don??t live in Valhalla, remember? No one is going to punish me for taking someone who doesn??t belong to Valhalla. Someone who loves me no less. And I love her. Trust me, there will be no getting out of this.? He grabbed her and threw her on the bed. Luna cried out and before she knew it he was on top of her again. ??No! Hod, please don??t do this! Hod!? Luna screamed as he began to yank away her dress, making sure she was fully exposed before allowing his length to poke at her, ready to take her virginity. He quickly positioned himself at her entrance and she began to scream. ??Hod, no!? She shouted.