Thread: WhiteTiger's writings: update, New stories, High-fantasy with realism, all tag types:

RE update A Few short stories added High fantasy with realism, all tag types Tags NA SummaryNotesWas the story and the written records of the potential Judaic culture really what happened. In the past the snake was and in today's language, light and wisdomknowledge were synonymous. Satanael was the Angel of light, and most beloved by God. Ruling the stars, creating physical light and the light of truth or wisdom. What did happen hypothetically. This is literally a probe into playing the Devil's Advocate. The Fall of Satanael Come on, come On!, Satanael urged his closes friend from his contemplative revere he always seems to find him in. You are my best friend and I won't have you missing another beautiful chorus of the angelic host while you sit here thinking., he finished. Pulling him up by his delicate winged feathers, Ouch, ouch Satanael!! That hurts! I'm coming, alright?, Raphael finished. Getting up and out of his his reverie, Raphael fluffs his feathered wings and then smooths them, while also smoothing out his eternal Angelic robes, straightening his long, flowing dark brown, almost black hair. Excited as always, Satanael heads straight through the arches, as the chorus has already begun again. Following his best friend of the four watchers of the towers and the highest ranking of the Angelic host, Raphael and Satanael, head for their secret best spot to listen to the chorus ring all though heaven. The spirit of God always flows deep within their veins, just as it does all through heaven. Their white, almost glowing robes, all the archangels wear, including their other two archangel brothers, Michael and Gabriel, were smooth and flowing, though no wind passed through them in the dimension of Heaven. Looking deeply into Satanael's soul, he could never hold anything back from Raphael, and so finally Raphael asked, Satanael? What is troubling you? This energy inside you seems to always be in the back of your mind and I am the only one of out of the four of us you have not withdrawn from?, Raphael soothingly spoke to his brother, Glory in God, himself, as you are his most beloved, bringer of light and the Archangel of the morning star itself, should bring you never ending peace and happiness. Please do tell me? I promise I won't share it with another. What passes between us, stays between us as always!, he spoke as the heavenly choir was reaching another majestic peak, sending shivers again down their angelic spines. Many things brother bother me. Many things, but this music always brings me happiness. That is why I wanted and needed to share it with you., he replied. Trying to focus from the ecstasy the angelic chorus, Raphael responded, Satanael, you know I am always here for you to talk to and listen to. Please tell me what is on your mind. I am begging you? With a deep sigh, Satanael looked deeply into the eyes of his beloved brother and said, Raphael, am I not the the bringer of light and wisdom, held closest and most dear to God? Of coarse you are! You are the great archangel of all light and even the suns that are countless within the very universe that God has created!, Raphael said with a bright smile. I must tell you something brother, I have doubts and am confused. I have talked to others in the host that feel the same way. We sit here, in bliss while the humans and the great life upon that planet our god created will suffer endlessly. Our god doesn't seem to care unless one of us will go before him and speaks on their behalf, and even then, half the time, he pays no mind. I am discontent brother. I am the light and wisdom bringer. If I were in charge, I would want the world that he has created to be so much better. He has laid down moral laws for his first creations of Adam and Eve, but they blissfully lay in that garden with no idea of the truth or what will really come in the future., Satanael finally told him after so long holding it inside. Things should be natural there and allowed to follow their natural course, with out the interference of God's morality placed upon them. Being the archangel of wisdom and all light, I know these things., he finished. Eyes and mouth open wide in shock, Brother, how can you think of such things. I am the archangel of healing and medicine. I know suffering and I will go before our great God, to speak for his beautiful creations, but we must trust his judgment. He has his reasons and his ways! Wrapping his arm around his brother, Raphael comforted him as tears began to fall down the cheeks of Satanael. I am so sorry to be a disappointment to you Raphael. Please forgive me? I always want to be next to you and with you but I wanted to know if you have ever had these thoughts also?, he asked Raphael. Letting go of his brother, gathering to himself, he answered, Yes, I have seen and I wonder also. Suddenly, full of energy as the chorus reached another peak, echoing through out the entire dimensions, Satanael suddenly looked at his brother and said, ''Then come with me Rapael! Come with me as we over take the thrown of God himself and set about a new order. Many are already with me and we will make both our Heaven and the earth a better place to live in!, Satanael passionately spoke to his brother. Pulling away from him, Tears now began to roll down Raphael's cheeks as he pulled away from his brother, I can not. I understand and know how you feel but my obligation is to our creator. I must, we must follow in accordance with his will. Pulling away, Satanael, looked heart broken as his wings sagged in great disappointment. I have to do this brother. I have to. I am asking you one last time, Please come with us?, he asked him... and a great tear was felt between them in that moment from the shear pain of separation. When we have won, I will make you my closest and highest ranking angel in heaven and you wont have to choose, I promise.!, he said as he laid a reassuring arm over his brother and held him. Waking the next morning, stretching his body and large feathers, Raphael heard a huge commotion and the sounds of battle. Jumping up, hair a mess, he flew quick as he could to see what was happening, praying to himself, please don't let this be it. He knew what would happen and didn't want it to be. Sure enough, a mighty battle was taking place as thousands of angels fought two times as many and were being slaughtered and beaten. Hearing a great thunderous sound, he could know only one thing that that sound could be, the great gates of the portal between this dimension and of the dimension that was created by the universe, were being opened as the rebelling angels were being shoved out , to be banned forever from Heaven. Suddenly, the voice of God was heard and as he summoned for Raphael to appear before him. Rushing quickly into the presence of God, he bowed low before him and God said, MICHEAL AND GABRIEL ARE IN BATTLE NOW AS WE SPEAK, PUSHING OUT MY BELOVED SATANAEL AND HIS REBELLIOUS FOLLOWERS. Sadness and determination filled the presence of God and he continued, saying, YOU ARE CLEARLY NOT IN THE BATTLE AND I DON'T KNOW WHY, BUT BECAUSE YOU ARE FREE, ONCE THEY ARE OUT, YOU WILL ESCORT THEM TO THE PARCHING DESERT ON THE WORLD I CREATED AND ABANDON THEM THERE. SATANAEL WANTS TO RULE SO BADLY AS TO BETRAY ME, HE MAY FIND THE RULER SHIP HE SEEKS, RULING THE WORLD I CREATED. IT WILL BE AN EVEN GREATER TESTAMENT TO THE WORTH AND THE SANCTITY OF THE HUMANS I HAVE CREATED. SINCE YOU HAVE NOT PARTICIPATED IN THE BATTLE, YOU WILL PERSONALLY GO AND ESCORT THE FALLEN ONES TO THE PLANET I CREATED, LEAVING THEM THERE IN THE DESERT. LET THEM KNOW FOREVER WHAT IT IS LIKE TO NEVER BASK IN THE GLORY OF MY PRESENCE, FEEL THE LOVE OF HEAVEN, HAVE BROTHERS OR HEAR THE ANGELIC CHORUS FILL THE REALM OF HEAVEN. THE ANGEL URIEL WILL TAKE HIS PLACE FROM NOW ON AND WITH A FLAMING SWORD WILL GUARD THE GATES. Devastated from the words and orders God had spoken, Raphael knew he had no choice. Retrieving his celestial sword, he headed into the battle. Staying on the edges of it, his heart was breaking, but his orders were clear. As the last of the rebellion was killed or pushed out the celestial gates of Heaven, Raphael and a selected few angels slipped through. With his back up against the gate, Satanael stared into Raphael's eyes, pleading for understanding and for the horrors they both had just witnessed. Walking to meet Satanael alone, he looked into his brothers eyes and tears welled up, reflecting from the nebular gasses of the forming stars and light that Satanael ruled. Crying also, was Sataneal. Oh Raphael, it wasn't supposed to end like this! What are we supposed to do now?, both crying and enraged, Satanael asked his brother. Responding, Raphael said, God had ordered me to escort you and your followers to the planet of the humans that you care so much about and if you want to rule so bad, that is and will forever be your kingdom to try to run, in spite of defying the almighty presence of God's will, which will also be on that planet, and all the life he created there. God has told me you no longer will no longer bask in his glory and so your angelic name and relation to God had been withdrawn and you will from no on be known simply as Satan., he finished with, but there was not much conviction in his words, only sadness. Following his beloved brother's guidance, leaving an angelic plant for intelligence behind, within heaven, Satanael, now Satan and his remaining followers took the same footsteps as Raphael and his escort, guided by Raphael and their escort. Now to be know by the name Satan, the ruler of light and the morning star, he would be deprived forever from Heaven, its glory, and its light. This knowledge caused him great pain and he dropped his sword in defeat briefly, and collapsed into a great sadness. Oh my brother, he said to Raphael, It is you I will miss most of all., and reached out to embrace him tightly. Holding him too, while holding back his tears, Raphael took the lead and led them to Earth, to the most parched, dry barren of lands there were on that little planet. Standing a distance apart, Satan told Raphael, I will always love you brother and wish you by my side. As Raphael turned to leave, a single tear did make its way down his cheek, and he looked at Satan and said, And I you brother., as he and the other angelic escort left and returned to the dimension of heaven. Much times has passed for those angels fallen but they also got to know this planet and of their powers here and the making friends wing the multitude of other beings from planet and within the various realms here. This became a nice change and a refocusing of Satan's mind. Unable to find forgiveness for the coldness in the heart of God, he found his way to Eden. Knowing that Adam and Eve should be warned and know the truth and of the knowledge God refused to tell them.. Taking the form symbolic wisdom, a snake, he made his way into the paradise garden. Finding his way into a tree, one day, finally, the beautiful Eve came to pick some fruit and Satan finally spoke to her for the first time. Telling her how much God was really hiding from them and it was their right to know. Eve listened carefully and did what her conscience told her. She ate of the tree of knowledge. Awakened suddenly to everything, she had to share this with Adam. After finally sharing this with Adam, God himself decided to pay a visit to them and saw the influence of Satan and their choices. Mercilessly, as with Satan, he cast them out of paradise and into the harshness of the truth, and out into the planet. Prologue Many many thousands of years passed, human kind, all the beast of the earth, air and the water have multiplied greatly. Taking the blame for so much, over the thousands of years, Satan was and is still resolved to it and did and continues to do what he could and can. To this day, he sits, with the new friends he has made here, but still so very alone, with none of his brothers or sisters by his side.