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Thread: Restocking (w/AnnoyingNoob)

The wait was horrible, and it only became more and more agonizing as feeling returned. She slept when she could but was frequently woken by the jolts. She decided that, for the sake of sanity, each pulse meant that three hours had passed. She had no idea whether that was true or not but having something to focus on helped ease her mind. Near the end of her ordeal though it hardly mattered. The tingling in her nipples, her vagina and even her tongue kept her on edge. It came in waves first she became aroused, then she felt the feeling fade, day in and day out the cycle continued. She had wondered how she hadn't starved or died of thirst but chalked it up to the IV in her throat fairly early on. Then the man finally removed the IV's. They hurt coming out but it wasn't so bad. When he asked her if she was ready to see herself again her heart sank. Today's the day then. She waited a moment, expecting him to continue without an answer as he always had but when he didn't she slowly nodded. She nodded but her eyes said otherwise. Today is the beginning, the beginning of... something. Maybe I'll finally be rid of this gag. She would have smiled if it were possible. Sometimes the little things help a lot.
Thread: Restocking (w/AnnoyingNoob)

He looked down at her for a few moments, then shook his head. You know... most people are so used to thinking of humans as the baseline, the default, that they fail to realize those regards in which we are extraordinary. Durability, for example. Hardly anything on the planet can endure and recover from injury like a human. Except, now, for people like you. People who have been modified and rebuilt to withstand whatever our customers can throw at them, then get right back up and welcome the next with a smile. He leaned down next to her. You're probably wondering why I'm telling you this. It's so you understand, that suicide is all but impossible. Bite your tongue, slit your wrists, you won't bleed out. Not before we can find you and save you, anyway. You'll just suffer until you're healed. And then you'll suffer more. Are we clear? He reached down to remove her gag. As he did, his fingertips lightly brushed her skin, and that slight sensation was far more intense than it should have been.
Thread: Restocking (w/AnnoyingNoob)

She listened quietly, her heart only sinking further the longer he continued. Not even something as desperate as suicide could end this now. And suffer more. How exactly? This was already her own, very personal hell. As he removed the gag from her mouth, she quivered. Oh God no, he couldn't have- Things had just gone from nightmarish to hellish. She opened her mouth to respond but stopped short. She couldn't risk it. If he had changed her voice... well, she might have to find out what was worse than this hell. Instead she nodded mutely, avoiding eye contact.
Thread: Restocking (w/AnnoyingNoob)

One by one he undid the straps, relishing the feel of her skin under his hands. Where before she had been coarse to the touch, now she was so soft he felt as though she would melt under his fingertips. When her straps were removed, he took her by the wrist pulling her up from the metal table and into a sitting position. He didn't expect much resistance she had barely moved in days, and although the electrical jolts had kept her muscles from atrophying among their other purposes he figured she was probably still too wobbly to run or fight effectively. And with the sensations she must be feeling from his firm grasp, well... he took her other arm and hauled her to her feet.
Thread: Restocking (w/AnnoyingNoob)

She almost cried when he undid the straps. It had been so long since she'd been this free. As he pulled her up she felt an intense... sensation run through her. It was too intense to really come to grips with in any way. She would have sworn she had felt nothing if she hadn't trembled at his touch. As she was hauled to her feet she made her best effort to stand, her legs trembling. So much so that she was sure she would have fallen without his help. She bit her lip, struggling to at least look like she could stand on her own, more for her own sake than anything else. When she was satisfied that she was standing she looked at the man and nodded again.
Thread: Restocking (w/AnnoyingNoob)

He nodded back and, putting a hand under her arm which was just as intense as the touch to her wrists, if not more so he guided her to a large mirror sitting nearby. He smiled at her reflection. What do you think? Practically the only thing recognizable were her freckles, and her own eyes peering out of this face in the mirror. Her crooked nose had been fixed, her lips were fuller and pinker, and her cheekbones were higher. Her tangled brown hair had been replaced with a full head of glossy auburn locks. Her hair was not very long yet, but far longer than it should have grown in the time she'd been restrained. Her skin under the freckles was still pale--paler, even. But those features were practically unchanged, compared to her figure. Her limbs were not much thicker, but instead of scrawny and stick-like they were now toned and elegant. Her hips were no wider, but they were rounder and smoother. Her breasts were nearly twice as big, plump and tender, and her rosy nipples seemed perpetually erect. The man examined her reflection as well, as though he was seeing this body for the first time and not been watching it form, making it form, day by day. You'll make a killing out there.
Thread: W'oh Mum! Me & Assume 18+

It had been about two years now since Tibby got a divorce and things were really getting difficult for her. She had been single all that time and craved for a touch or even just a look from another man. She felt unsexy and wanted to feel differently. Finally she decided to change just that. Gone were the baggy jumpers and in came the tight jeans and low cut tops with a new found look on life. Today was her day! Sitting in the kitchen in her new sexy nightwear she ate breakfast.
Thread: W'oh Mum! Me & Assume 18+

Tim was relaxing in his room, it was a Sunday which meant no school for him. Sighing, he couldn't help but dread the fact that he had school tomorrow. Though that wasn't the only thing that was on his mind. Tim had noticed things had been getting a bit hard for his mother, it was just something that he knew was off. He couldn't put his finger on it, but she didn't seem to happy. Tim figured that she had gotten over the divorce, after all it was two years ago. But it seemed like she hadn't. Stretching in his bed, he had just woken up. Gazing out the window there was a storm pouring. Rain all day, he thought to himself. He wore a white v neck shirt, and a pair of blue pajama bottoms. Getting up from bed, he made his way downstairs for breakfast. Like his mother he had dark black hair, but besides that he had most of his father's features. Heading towards the kitchen he rubbed his eyes, he could hear his mother eating breakfast. Hey...mom?!!? he said jumping as he suddenly saw what she was wearing. Her tits were completely out, and the black nightwear seemed so short that if she were to stand her ass would be completely out. What are you wearing? he asked confused, this wasn't like her at all.
Thread: W'oh Mum! Me & Assume 18+

Oh this? she said as she pointed at the new nightwear. As she did it looked like she was pointing at her large breasts instead. I was tired of feeling ugly and decided to wear something sexy. From now on I'm going to be more sexy and be more sexual! The only man I ever slept with was your father which is pretty sad. What do you think of the nightie? Does it make me look hot?
Thread: W'oh Mum! Me & Assume 18+

Tim couldn't believe how big her breast were in that top, shaking his head, he knew this wasn't right. Though he finally realized what was wrong with her, it seemed she wasn't feeling pretty. I don't think I should be judging whether you look hot mom, you're my mother.. Tim said as he made his way over to the table, grabbing some cereal as well as a bowl, he poured himself some as he began to eat. He couldn't help but shoot a few glances at her chest, though he tried his best not to look.
Thread: W'oh Mum! Me & Assume 18+

It's ok sweetie you can tell me. I can keep a secret. I just want an honest opinion about how I look. As Tim ate his cereal Tibby noticed him giving her chest a few glances. She smiled and responded to it. So you like looking at my breasts in my new outfit? Don't be shy I saw you looking. I don't mind you admiring them. After she spoke she placed her hands on her breasts and gave them a playful sqeeze. So do you like big breasts then?
Thread: W'oh Mum! Me & Assume 18+

Tim blushed dark red as she caught him looking at her breast. He couldn't believe she was actually talking about that. Tim did enjoy it, but he didn't want to admit it. After all she was his mother, he figured nothing would come out of this, and he realized how wrong it was. Apparently she didn't. He was about to speak when he suddenly remembered how down she had felt. Sighing, he gave a nod. You look really nice in that outfit..okay mom? He had hoped that the compliment would keep her quiet.. But should you be asking your son what parts of a womans body he enjoys looking at?
Thread: W'oh Mum! Me & Assume 18+

Of course I need to silly. I'm your Mum! So what do you like about my breasts then? Is it because they're big? As she spoke her nipple had popped out unknown to her. She stood up now and walked to the counter to pick up her tablet. She looked at it for a bit before speaking again. I've been looking at local orgy parties and thought about going to one to see what it's like. What do you think?
Thread: I need help with comma usage

While it's good to break up the lengths of sentences, too many commas seems like a silly concern. I have some trouble with bearing on in a single sentence occasionally, myself, but I find that more closely resembles how I actually talk. So, I guess my advice would be, do you. It's also worth noting that this is a 'second draft' problem. Sentence structure is something that an editor can fix without your intervention. First concern should be putting your ideas on paper.
Thread: I need help with comma usage

Two things with comma's I was taught if you are speaking and have a pause, its a comma. If its a break, like a complete thought, a period. With lists I was told that you do not use a comma before the last item, even if there is an and, though that now seems to be reversed. Not sure if that is where you get the and issue from. Like you I try to keep one comma in a sentence, unless its a list. I don't find the need to string that many thoughts together usually, of course there are exceptions. It all depends on what you are trying to say. Trygon is right, editing is often the best way to clean up writing. I usually get my thoughts down, do a first draft and then do something else, come back fresh and do a second draft. That way you can look objectively at what you have down. With the sample there would be a few things I would not do, such as starting sentences with But or And, but overall it looks fine.
Thread: I need help with comma usage

Thanks for your opinions! This is actually a second draft, believe it or not. I wrote the chapter in August and I edited it a few days ago. I don't think I am very good at editing my own work. This is why I wanted a second opinion, because the first person who talked to me about it told me that he felt like my sentences were run on sentences due to lack of comma usage. That sentence right there is an example. This is why I wanted a second opinion, because the first person who talked to me about it told me that he felt like my sentences were run on sentences, due to lack of comma usage. The second comma, does that really make a difference? Because I can read it the first way just fine even if it wasn't me. Also I don't remember when I started starting sentences with but and and...I know that's something that you shouldn't do but I think I started reading other fictional works and saw other writers doing it. At what point does it just become a style of writing vs grammatically correct?
Thread: I need help with comma usage

Second comma there should probably be a semi-colon. You already have a complete thought, and are adding supplementary information. Best advice I would give is if you really want to make effective use of punctuation is review a grammar book.
Thread: I need help with comma usage

I can't really comment on comma usage as I tend to have far too many, rather than not enough, and am sure I commonly misplace them. Except for the one before and, which in Australia we're taught as being the correct British English usage, but differs in other Countries, and I've found writing here with those who mostly use American English that I now often leave it out. As far as starting a sentence with And or But, etc, goes, I've always been told that it's okay, and a quick google search led me to this Its Fine to Start a Sentence with a Coordinating Conjunction source And, but, and or are the three most common members of a group of words known as coordinating conjunctions. The question about whether its grammatical to begin a sentence with and, but, or or is actually the question of whether its grammatical to begin a sentence with a coordinating conjunction. Heres what some of the big usage guides say on the matter. The one that seems to get quoted the most is the Chicago Manual of Style, which says There is a widespread beliefone with no historical or grammatical foundationthat it is an error to begin a sentence with a conjunction such as and, but or so. In fact, a substantial percentage often as many as 10 percent of the sentences in first-rate writing begin with conjunctions. It has been so for centuries, and even the most conservative grammarians have followed this practice.
Thread: I need help with comma usage

Thank you for your input Mr. Quixotic. I find it's much easier to start a sentence with but instead of And or or. And even then, it's usually character dialogue. I'll do what boyo111 suggested as far as looking up a grammar book. I would have done that before, but I was more concerned with what bothers a reader rather than what is 100 percent grammatically correct.
Thread: I need help with comma usage

Damn, you must have been serious when you said you were bored! Can you give me lessons as we continue with our story, as my method is more along the lines of, If in doubt, throw one in. The most amusing frustrating part is that they are the one thing I can become completely OCD with, and I've been known to spend an hour or more doing nothing but deleting, adding and moving commas in a reply until I'm satisfied, however, in the end, still really have no idea if the placement is correct. Edit Okay, I'll admit I didn't read all of them the first time around never was good at paying attention in class, and this one just caught my eye CASE 8 Shifting in and out of quotations See more This is also self-explanatory, but make sure to place the commas appropriately. They always go before the quotation mark. Example Ariamella turned to Mr Quixotic and said, Hey, I think you're a turd. Example Sop being a bitch, he answered back, and get out of here. Can you sop being a bitch? xD PS Thanks for all the effort, and I'm sure I'll be referring back to your post, xD
Thread: I need help with comma usage

Thanks Ariamella for adding in examples where I never would have. Nice work. A big part of comma usage is intuitive. Do you feel you need a pause there? Click to expand... This is how I usually see it, much of the grammar I know was beaten into me as a child. I know what good grammar is, but often can't explain it since I have it by ear but not by rote. The pause is the one way I learned how to add one, reading out my writing was one way I was told to do that. If you have to take a breath, its a good way to find out. Dealing with independent clauses though is just something I found you have to learn and be aware of.
Thread: I need help with comma usage

Thanks for the detailed explanation, Ariamella! I have been making a habit of not being afraid of comma usage in my writing so far. I think it's working. That post was very helpful to me as well.
Thread: I need help with comma usage

Mr Quixotic said Okay, I'll admit I didn't read all of them the first time around never was good at paying attention in class, and this one just caught my eye CASE 8 Shifting in and out of quotations See more This is also self-explanatory, but make sure to place the commas appropriately. They always go before the quotation mark. Example Ariamella turned to Mr Quixotic and said, Hey, I think you're a turd. Example Sop being a bitch, he answered back, and get out of here. Can you sop being a bitch? xD PS Thanks for all the effort, and I'm sure I'll be referring back to your post, xD Click to expand... I didn't even catch that! Yes, my bitchy self will sop making spelling mistakes from now on. Lmaooo. You're welcome, Princess Pittooey! To be honest, most people don't really mind reading grammatical mistakes, especially when it comes to fiction writing. I don't read roleplay responses with my editing sense on, and I tend to make lots of comma-mistakes myself when writing RP posts. When I read what you write, I get the sense that it's clean and smooth with little to no mistakes. It flows, as fiction writing should. I don't agree with the person who said it lacked commas. The commas you place are where natural pauses should go. The sentence below is grammatically correct This is why I wanted a second opinion, because the first person who talked to me about it told me that he felt like my sentences were run on sentences due to lack of comma usage. The only reason I would give that makes your text seem like run-ons is that you use ellipses . . . in place of commas. Ellipses show a trailing off of thought or a pause in the text. The pauses generated by the comma is, like boyo111 said, a spot where one would take a breath or have a natural gap if the text was being read out loud. The pause made by the ellipses denotes drama or suspense, and it's a longer pause than one made by a comma. But again, fiction writing is more lax on grammatical rules, and you don't overuse the ellipses. I've seen people put ellipses in place of periods for every sentence, and it becomes extra excessive at that point.
Thread: I need help with comma usage

Oh yeah, I love my ellipses...lol. I really don't know where I picked them up, but it's apart of my style and I make sure that I don't overuse them. For the most part anyway, depends on how tired I am when I write the post. As I used to say in eighth grade along with the rest of the anime girls Dot, dot, dot. I'm super glad I got a second opinion on my sentences, thanks! I also have two followers on my story, so I'm doing something right!
Thread: I need help with comma usage

Ariamella said Mr Quixotic said Okay, I'll admit I didn't read all of them the first time around never was good at paying attention in class, and this one just caught my eye CASE 8 Shifting in and out of quotations See more This is also self-explanatory, but make sure to place the commas appropriately. They always go before the quotation mark. Example Ariamella turned to Mr Quixotic and said, Hey, I think you're a turd. Example Sop being a bitch, he answered back, and get out of here. Can you sop being a bitch? xD PS Thanks for all the effort, and I'm sure I'll be referring back to your post, xD Click to expand... I didn't even catch that! Yes, my bitchy self will sop making spelling mistakes from now on. Lmaooo. You're welcome, Princess Pittooey! To be honest, most people don't really mind reading grammatical mistakes, especially when it comes to fiction writing. I don't read roleplay responses with my editing sense on, and I tend to make lots of comma-mistakes myself when writing RP posts. When I read what you write, I get the sense that it's clean and smooth with little to no mistakes. It flows, as fiction writing should. I don't agree with the person who said it lacked commas. The commas you place are where natural pauses should go. The sentence below is grammatically correct This is why I wanted a second opinion, because the first person who talked to me about it told me that he felt like my sentences were run on sentences due to lack of comma usage. The only reason I would give that makes your text seem like run-ons is that you use ellipses . . . in place of commas. Ellipses show a trailing off of thought or a pause in the text. The pauses generated by the comma is, like boyo111 said, a spot where one would take a breath or have a natural gap if the text was being read out loud. The pause made by the ellipses denotes drama or suspense, and it's a longer pause than one made by a comma. But again, fiction writing is more lax on grammatical rules, and you don't overuse the ellipses. I've seen people put ellipses in place of periods for every sentence, and it becomes extra excessive at that point. Click to expand... The flexibility in grammar rules depends on the context of the fiction. Narrative or authorial voice should be grammatically immaculate with the purpose of keeping your reader from dropping out of the story. If the narrator is a character with a distinct voice, then dialectic or other errors are useful to help create that character. In dialogue the grammar should help create the character so the diction seems verbal rather than written. For example, I would rarely write prepositions according to a style guide when rendering speech. I won't go there, she said, turning away. vs. That is a place to which I will not go, she said, turning away. Ultimately the story is most important and anything that weakens it should be corrected or cut. As Winston Churchill wrote after an overenthusiastic editor corrected a dangling preposition, This is the type of arrogant pedantry up with which I will not put. Winston Churchill never actually wrote that. Posthumous misattribution, in all likelihood.
Thread: I need help with comma usage

I never use punctuation really except and for rp perpouses
Thread: Looking for dominant/controlling F

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Bump for the day
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Thread: Blowjob themed roleplay - MxM (updated)

RE Blowjob themed roleplay - MxM Bump...
Thread: Blowjob themed roleplay - MxM (updated)

RE Blowjob themed roleplay - MxM Updated with my F-List, forgot to add it before...
Thread: Blowjob themed roleplay - MxM (updated)

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Thread: teen baby

jennet came home after a big fight and seen her mom dad and little sister holding baby cloths
Thread: Ghosts of Amity Manor (Krystal x thatguy1)

The manor had laid dormant for almost 70 years. The lady of the house, Krystal Kobayashi, had hung herself in the ballroom after learning of the death of her fiancee and best friend in the war. She had never passed on though, and even though the manor remained dormant, she haunted it, waiting for a worthy soul to come in and release her from her self made prison. The manor had stayed in her family, going to her twin brother Krystoff when she committed suicide, but he held such a connection with his sister that he could not step foot in the manor that their parents built her for her engagement ever again. he kept it up though, wanting it to stay perfect for the sister he had held so dear. He had never really believed that she passed on. When he died at 95, the manor's upkeep fell to his daughter, appropriately also named Krystal, as she was the spitting image of her aunt. Her father had never let her go to the manor in upstate New York, so she was insanely curious now that he'd died and it was her responsibility. She was a world renowned Psychiatrist with a hobby for ghost hunting, and she took her son along for the ride. The two of them were like glue after the mysterious death of her husband, and now it was time to finally travel to Amity Manor, the home of her long deceased aunt.