Thread: Gunpla Battle Saga:  Into the wayward sky

Inspired by my Gundam Breaker roleplay with fellow site member, Xanatos. This is seen as a possible ending where My OC Raven Carter, is fighting his twin brother, Shinji Kazuma, in a winner take all battle to decide who gets to remain in the public eye and has the right to marry, Xanatos OC. Raven recently was in an accident that robbed him of his right eye and his voice. Shinji, by mirror of coin, has lost everything he lived for and blames Raven for it all. Depending on how this is received, I may write an actual story for this using suggested Gunpla and OCs from site members. Featured gunpla are designs from me that Xanatos was kind enough to build in my stead. Thanks goes to them for making this one shot possible. Comments and critiques are accepted in pms only and strongly encouraged as I feel I could improve this with feedback. Also, Raven miraculously starts regaining his voice during the battle. Field 1, Space BATTLE START Shinji Kazuma, Aile Banshee, heading out!! ...... Their gunpla, the Aile Banshee and the Strike Unicorn , didn't take long to start battling outside the large space fortress A Baoa Qu. Both had entered Destroy Mode as soon as they entered the field and had collided with enough momentum to scatter debris from the various Gelgoogs and Zaku drones that both had casually laid waste to in their mad rush for each other. The flash of light was blinding to those watching as the plastic gundam separated by centrifugal force from their verniers. YOU STOLE EVERYTHING FROM ME!! Shinji bellowed, almost beside himself with insanity as he started firing duel beam pistols after drawing them from the hip skirts, YOU RUINED MY WHOLE LIFE!! To Raven, actually defending with his gunpla's shield for once, thought Shinji had fucking lost it. If anything, he felt he'd lost everything when he survived the car crash. Sayaka Kenshi was now with her sister in death, he couldn't see out of his right eye, and he was told he may not be able to speak again. He'd become more broken than he had been before but something kept him going. Something prevented him from shutting down and becoming stagnant. YOU MUST BE JUDGED FOR YOUR CRIMES!! Shinji howled, duel beam sabers from his Banshee's Aile backpack arcing downward to sever the arms of his opponents gunpla when they were blocked by one of Raven's beam saber. .....onna.... Judge..... Me? Raven managed to growl through damaged vocal cords, stunning the medical staff and everyone whom knew of his condition, Don't.... Make me.... Laugh!! The left arm of Shinji's Banshee was severed at the elbow, removing it's shield from play as the Strike Unicorn's wings opened while the Dragoons darted away closely followed by the funnels. They rapidly darted around the Aile Banshee, firing beam shots almost too quicking for Shinji to effectively dodge. All the while the Strike Unicorn aggressively pressed an attack, removing part of the right wing on the Aile backpack as well the beam boomerangs on the banshee's shoulders with duel beam saber strikes. You.... Ruined your own.... Life..... Raven stated firmly, his voice becoming stronger with each word despite having a notable grating edge to it, You used.... And terrified people.... To meet your own ends.... Shinji, resorting to his gunpla's beam magnum and Vulcans, managed to destroy the Strike Unicorn's left leg and right optic before the Banshee's beam magnum was cut into four pieces by the dragoons from the Strike Unicorn. The right vulcans on the strike Unicorn were destroyed but Raven didn't care. Shinji needed to accept responsibility for his failures. He could keep covering for the fucking prick each time he needed the heat taken away from him. He had his own life to live. Terror is not your friend.... Raven yelled, recalling the funnels and dragoons so they floated around him as he snatched two beam rifles from the remains of a Strike Freedom drone while straining his vocal cords, AND I'M NOT YOUR BROTHER!! He activated his Full Burst ability of his Gunpla's backpack, firing everything the Strike Unicorn had At Shinji's Gunpla. The Banshee managed to dodge some, but not all of it. It's backpack was destroyed by the Unicorn's mega particle cannon and the legs were blown off by the dragoons and the funnels. The V-fin was reduced to half by one of the borrowed beam rifles. Plus what was left of the left arm was vaporized. There wasn't much left of it to go around as it hit the surface of the space fortress. Why?? Why must you take everything from me?! Shinji cried, more or less a incoherent mess as he stared into the barrel of Raven's beam magnum. I didn't take everything from you, Shinji..... Raven said sadly, his gunpla only having enough energy for one shot from his beam magnum. I just took back what you stole from Alice and me...... The sound of his beam magnum discharging was heard above Shinji's agonized wail. BATTLE ENDED AN Shinji's mental instability is the main reason why Raven's gunpla came out with significantly less damage. If it is wanted, I can write out a second version where Shinji is less insane and more level headed. Maybe even have Raven lose but that remains to be seem. Hope you enjoyed my second attempt at a fan fiction and a first attempt at a one-shot battle.