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Thread: Writing Advice Needed:  Problem

Try leading with a dependent clause. Even whistling, she still felt nervous... Whatever it takes to break up such a sentence. I'm also fond of making it sort of a quasi-internal monologue. She head the shuffle of a footstep behind her. Time to leave!
Thread: Writing Advice Needed:  Problem

Then it's a habit you need to condition yourself out of. We all go through it at some point. As mentioned, you can both restructure the sentences and use different ways of describing the person to address them, rather than getting stuck in a she rut. It can be something as simple as 'the woman,' or something as colorful as 'the honey-haired maiden.' It doesn't have to be inherently fancy so long as it isn't repetitive. If you find yourself stuck in the middle of your post then just complete it as normal while the inspiration is fresh on your mind, but then go back before you submit it and see where you're using certain words too much, see where you could benefit from breaking it up. Not every description should be colorful, mind you, the simple ones are just as important. Do try to not use the same one more than twice in a row though. A decent exercise is doing that with posts you've written recently, things on your current skill level but not completely fresh on your mind. I'll sometimes take an entry I wrote one to four weeks ago and consider how I can improve it line-by-line while maintaining the feel I was going for. Even if I liked how I originally wrote it, Ill force myself to approach it from a different angle and use different ways to describe things just for the sake of conditioning that flexibility. You could also put in some time on www.thesaurus.com if you're stuck on a specific word. Others seemed to have covered this perfectly before I got here. I hope this was more of a helpful addition than a digression.
Thread: Writing Advice Needed:  Problem

I'm going to take Devil's Advocate here There's absolutely nothing wrong with the whole heshe thing in fact trying to find colorful synonyms can sometimes hurt the pace of your story. Not to knock on AsDayFades, but if I read honey-haired maiden where she would work just as well, I think that would take me out of the narrative. I firmly believe that good writing should be invisible in the sense that you want your reader to pay attention to characters and plot, not the size for your vocabulary. It's the same sort of problem when people try to think of alternative phrases for said usually the end result is stilted writing. I think Elmore Leonard put it best in his rules of writing If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it. That said, I do the things I'm arguing against all the time.
Thread: Writing Advice Needed:  Problem

Your point is a valid one. There are times where we can use words to seamlessly enhance the vision being created, but there are also times where it comes off as a mite distracting, even just enough to put a slight bump in the flow. So it's all about knowing when and where. The problem Viola expressed was with an overuse of she that it's easy to fall into a pattern where it's all you use, multiple times in a row, and it ends up being repetitive. In the same way as a too-detailed detail can take someone out of what's going on, so can that. So while they're a standard go-to, it's a question of how to seamlessly avoid their overuse.
Thread: Writing Advice Needed:  Problem

Following is a test paragraph. Maybe we can turn all this good advice into a game. We all like games even those disagreeable bastards out there who read that last sentence and disagreed. Yolanda ate a jalapeno. She felt sick. She thought she would die. She opened the fridge. She couldnt find the milk. She vowed to never eat another jalapeno as long as she lived. Pimp yo transitions, boyeeeee Yolanda ate a jalapeno and suddenly felt sick. She thought she would die while she opened the fridge but couldnt find the milk. She vowed to never eat another jalapeno as long as she lived. Dependent up some phrases Yolanda ate a jalapeno. Feeling sick, she opened the fridge. Unable to find the milk, she vowed to never eat another jalapeno as long as she lived. Get down with creative punctuation Yolanda ate a jalapeno she felt sick. She thought she would die. She opened the fridge no milk. She vowed to never eat another jalapeno. Go time traveling Yolanda opened the fridge. She couldnt find the milk. She had eaten a jalapeno and had suddenly felt sick . She thought she would die. She vowed to never eat another jalapeno as long as she lived. These are examples. Maybe other people can insert more but with fewer double entendres. I dont advocate using all of these in every sentence, but sprinkle some here and some others there and you are on your way to some spicy RP gumbo or equivalently delicious and spicy food. Youll notice that in none of the above examples do I use descriptive language, simile, or metaphor. You dont need those to vary the flow of your writing as they, for the most part, only slow you down as alluded to by Barghest. But like the devices above, they can be used in moderation to great success. If you want to go hard you can even get a style manual. If you do please feel free to come back and drop some of your own advice like its hot. Sentence fragment.
Thread: Dark Sailor Moon RP -Enemies-

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Thread: Dark Sailor Moon RP -Enemies-

I would volunteer but I haven't seen Sailor moon in years and I can't say that I would feel confident that I could really get things just right. If you're desperate for bad guys and don't mind kinda holding my hand, so to speak, through the creation process here then I would be willing to give it my best shot.
Thread: Dark Sailor Moon RP -Enemies-

Mallkior De said I would volunteer but I haven't seen Sailor moon in years and I can't say that I would feel confident that I could really get things just right. If you're desperate for bad guys and don't mind kinda holding my hand, so to speak, through the creation process here then I would be willing to give it my best shot. Click to expand... Well to be completely honest this RP is only very loosely based on sailor moon...the enemies, story line, battles is completely different. You really only need very little knowledge of sailor moon. Most of the information actually needed will be provided in an explanation once someone applies and is accepted into the RP.
Thread: Dark Sailor Moon RP -Enemies-

Well alright then. I guess that all I really need to know to at least toss you a rough draft of something is what you are looking for as far as the bad guy's races are concerned. Again, I haven't seen Sailor Moon in... well, probably about ten years. I can't remember if the bad guys were ever given concrete races or if their obviously inhuman forms were left nameless and unidentified. If there are set races then I'll need a list or a link. If not, then I'll just browse a few image sites and let my imagination go crazy.
Thread: Dark Sailor Moon RP -Enemies-

Mallkior De said Well alright then. I guess that all I really need to know to at least toss you a rough draft of something is what you are looking for as far as the bad guy's races are concerned. Again, I haven't seen Sailor Moon in... well, probably about ten years. I can't remember if the bad guys were ever given concrete races or if their obviously inhuman forms were left nameless and unidentified. If there are set races then I'll need a list or a link. If not, then I'll just browse a few image sites and let my imagination go crazy. Click to expand... Uhm I don't recall any of them having set races, it's pretty much entirely up to you. Smiles
Thread: Dark Sailor Moon RP -Enemies-

Moving this to 'interestcoordination' section in groups. Profiles belong in designated 'profiles' section. Thanks.
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Thread: The Fang

Ok, so I realize this is my first journal thread, but I'm going to try and keep up with it, promise 3 As a wolf, this seems very odd that I keep correspondence with humans, but I've no issues speaking with those who wish to keep in happy company with me. However, I must say that I do not tend with those who anger or annoy me. Simply put. As a wolf, I am quite... Different, but I do enjoy reading and writing these fantasy role-plays, though I find myself much more comfortable with MM and FF than with MF. Excuse me if this seems to be a problem but I've never simply had a keen stomach on being in MF. I could rp them.... But I would not rather not do something involving x-rated nature. I am fine with such natures with lgbt couples, but I'd prefer some other plot action as well. Seeing as how the nature of typing with paws is becoming rather tedious with what you humans call an iPad, I believe I shall end this post for now. Until we meet again, friends. WhiteWolfDemon
Thread: (KairIxGooglE) Slutty Kitten.

Tally had arrived at the bar with a few friends as they entered guys came and went and after a while her friends that were out to have a good time had either found guys to play with or had gone home so they could relax for the rest of the night. It was fetish night, Tally's favorit night. She had put little cat ear clips in her hair and had a tail dangling from her waist. The material was soft and flexible and swayed with her as she moved her little skirt flaring as well. Her top was tight and she had a little collar necklace. Her and the group of friends she came with had all decided it would be fun to dress up as exotic animals, hers being a black panther. As Tally drank another shot of whiskey her chest began to feel tight. The atmosphere becoming way to hot and crowded making her take refuge out in front of the doors. It must be that time of the night when the other bars close down and every one meets up here at the 'Dusk to Dawn'. She wasn't expecting as many as had shown up though, and she was definitely not about to handle in on her own in a cat outfit. Once outside she walked a little further from the doors where she pulled a small travel brush from her bag running it through her deep blood red hair, the silky texture gliding through the prongs. Next she grabbed her compact checking her cherry red lip stick, bright green eyes glimmering at her from under dark lashes, She re-glosses her soft full lips and then touches up the smears on her eye liner making herself more presentable. As she went to put her compact away she her the light ting of a beer can as its knocked by a rock, turning to see who's there she looks to see nothing but shadows. As a group of guys made their way outside she took refuge in the shadows herself. Keeping herself hidden by the corner of the building she could hear the thumping music and feel it through the wall. This side was obviously the side that the amp was hooked up against. The cool air was giving her goose bumps now but she enjoyed the sensation as her mind fell into the beat of a popular song. They'd played it 5 times already so she was in no hurry to get back in at this point. A moment later she heard the same ting like the sound of a metal beer can and began to look around and hesitating a moment before digging into her purse trying to find her flashlight.
Thread: Alamore Request

1x1 rp for us OK I am looking for for a person tor do a PM rp with female or male prefer female but male is doable if a good idea is formed i am thinking a vampire deal slightly dark. I do mostly semi lit i get most of the dots somewhere in their unlike this this is just to get a point across it works . i am willing to do all the maybe is on the rabbit hole just no promises on how long they last then. I dont mind short terms or long terms. one sence of smut or a whole story with alot or alittle i work with it all. weeeee ok lets go people
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RE 1x1 rp for us lets go
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RE 1x1 rp for us I make my charactors for the stroy so i general idea is needed to start. I don't normally make profiles but if you need one to keep youtr head from going boom i guess i can slap one together.
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RE 1x1 rp for us I will do one and give you ideas but only MxM and I have to play the submissive one...
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RE 1x1 rp for us DancinMan91 said I will do one and give you ideas but only MxM and I have to play the submissive one... Click to expand... What you got for me
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lets go people
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Here is a bump for oyu. BUMP! I will pm you my resquest thread by females to see if any of my rps catch your eye ok.
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sitting bored
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I am bored as well,I sent you the plot idea for our rp.
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a friendly bump on the head XP
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Hi. I might be interested in playing with you. The following ideas caught my attention Vampiress Human Pirates Royalty Anything romance Father X Daughter Mother X Son older Sister X younger brother I can play as either male or female. PM me so we can discuss details
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bumpage
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lets start i got a whole day to rp unless a hurricane comes
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just waitting
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need an rp anyone
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Would you be willing to RP demonhuman? 3
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lets get the rp started to the top
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Hmm whats tickling your fancy at the moment?
Thread: Enslaved in the bazaar

So...do I continue from here? Or do we start a whole new thread
Thread: Bump in the Night (sacrah and  SpecialKay

Amberlynn walked along the circle, lighting each candle as she went along. Each flame lept alive as she walked in graceful strides till she completed the circle. Her lavender eyes went to the symbols on the ground, as she bent down to gather up the bowl of white goats blood. Also known as human blood. She stepped into the circle, her bare breasts bouncing with each step. she was nude as this spell required, all ecept the small triangle of clothe that cover her sex, but left her ass exposed. Her skin ws dark even with the candle light of the flames licking at her smooth soft skin. Her hair white as snow, a startling contrast agaisnt her skin. She was summoning a demon thus night. One known for sex, so an incubus most likely. But what she hadn't known was that the particular on that she was calling upon, the one that headed her call, was far to powerful for the likes of her. A rise and serve me, creature of the damned, rise and sait my ever ending needs. Her voice was soft, but she continued Join me on this god forsaken plain and know pleasures of the fleshShe concluded RiseShe demanded spilling some of the blood down her dark globes of her breasts
Thread: Bump in the Night (sacrah and  SpecialKay

Ezekiel, god of pleasure taking the throne with force from the woman who had previously owned it. His abilities far superior to her own, but he was cast away into a fairly...odd place banished due to the other gods fearing his sexual abilities that could seduce the women into giving him their powers. An odd sensation flowed throughout his veins, a slight glow appeared on his skin as he felt a person calling him from the depths of his horrible prison. Oh...this woman has no clue what the fuck she's doing.Ezekiel said with a sinister grin, his body began to dissolve as he travelled to her dimension. A large gust of win flowed through the room, all lights blown out as the blood beneath her literally exploded into large geysers of blood, splattering everyone...especially the one summoning him. He stood in the middle of the circle, his stature was fall at least seven feet. His body appeared like a scorched rock, cracks filled with lava as he spoke a deep monstrous voice boomed from his lips. Who dare call me!? Ezekiel god of pleasure and want!?Ezekiel exclaimed his eyes diverting to the woman standing in front of him, her body was almost fully naked, a very menacing grin appeared on his face as his hand shot out grabbing onto her neck as he lifted her into the air. Ah...I see...a beautiful wench to sedate my pleasures after years of waiting.Ezekiel said his member appearing through his stone body, it had a human like texture as a large fourteen inch cock appeared, he could easily maneuver in her body. We shall see who summoned who.
Thread: Bump in the Night (sacrah and  SpecialKay

The sudden rupture of the blood caught her off gaured as it coated everything, including herself. Her jaw tensed as her eyes closed at the sudden bathe of blood, Her once snow white hair, staining a pink in color. She wiped the blood from her eyes before opening them, finding herself staring up at a rather large demon. A smirk spread across her lips, momentarily impressed with herself. And her mentor said she wouldn't be able to do it. Little did she know that she didn't have the control over this demon. it was very much in control of itself. I called youAmberlynn said simply, before he grabed hold of her neck. The movement was fast and sudden, stealing her breath away as he lifted her from the ground. her hands instinctively began to claw at his hands, her eyes growing wide as she stared at the large demon before her. She hadn't expected this. Release me!she ordered as she gasped for air. Her mentor was right, even this she failed to do right. every summon she attempted screwing up, either failled in being brought forth, or they go ampaging and her mentor had to send them back to there domain
Thread: Bump in the Night (sacrah and  SpecialKay

Ezekiel smiled, his eyes observing the rather gorgeous body of the summoner who had released him from his own personal hell. His grip tightened, before pulling her close, viewing her eyes closely as he stared. She was strikingly beautiful...that would do nicely for his intentions as he heard her commands. She clearly didn't know who was in control...she was so naive...it was comedical really. Are you commanding me!? Your master!?Ezekiel exclaimed, his voice booming louder as he got angrier. He stomped his foot a hellish black chIr appeared under him, sitting down easily as he smiled leaning back with a grin as he lowered her body so her feet barely touched the floor. I'm going to give you a generous offer...I won't kill you...but now...I am your master. And as your master, my first command is for you to pleasure me.Ezekiel said, his erection standing almost fully erect.
Thread: Bump in the Night (sacrah and  SpecialKay

I cant breathShe whimpered as she gripped his wrist. her brows furrowing as she stared at the demon. It was her own fault she was in this mess, she shouldnt of tried it alone. She blinked , her dark lashes painting her dark cheeks briefly before looking him back in the eyes. She notice how he looked her over hungerily. His lust quite evident in his eyes. As he sat down he was able to still hold her up anything just let me breathshe gasped growing fainter as she looked down her nose to find him hardening. she swallowed nervously. never had she seen something that large. She didn't think she could handle him. not without some force or anything behind it.
Thread: Bump in the Night (sacrah and  SpecialKay

Ezekiel nodded, his grip loosened, as he set her down. He placed his hand under his chin holding his head up as he contemplated his first demand, a grin appeared on his face as he snapped his fingers the idea had come to him like a spontaneous storm as he grinned, eyeing her naked body once more with lustful hunger as he leaned back in his chair. Pleasure your master wench.Ezekiel commanded, his voice echoing through the entire home that used to be her own, his erection was large...and he smiled at the size. He smile snapping his fingers to create cocks that floated in midair, the pleasure senses connected directly to him, one was placed under her pussy, two to the side, one at her ass, and his own cock at her mouth. Get to work.
Thread: The Alien Hunters Prize(Sacrah and christian7_41king)

The sun was setting now, painting the sky with a broad spectrim of colors. Anything from yellows, oranges, reds, to lower down in pinks blues and purples. the few birds that were retreat for the night gave there last sing song of the evening as they glided along the gentle breeze. The wind would ruffle the soft Blue locks of one lone Elf maiden that every night around the same time came to this over hang for a time alone from the village. Her ice blue eyes went to the ocean at the base of the cliff. How it to the painting of the sky making it so much more sureal. God had done wonderous work in creating nature, which she held in great respect. Especially being a nature lover. Amberlyn sighed in contentment as she watched the sun slipping behind the snow capped mountains in the far distance. She was a slender being, but every inch feminine, her breast not to large so that they sagged, but where held high and perky beneath the soft dress she wore. It was a spring dress, mainly white, the gown was tight fit till it all the way dow to her hips. outline her slenderness before it gave out to reveal long slender legs. Her features were twisted with worry, it wasn't the only reason to why she came here on this night .Being so far from her home. She was tonights sacrifice to the Alien being in the forest ruins, one in which toment her village, and many thought to dabble in socery, but she in ways doubted that for she was sure the beast was far to reliant to his abiltiy of speed, his strength. Her village were mainly human, and lesser humanoid beings, the village only held three elven, her and two males. And being an immortal creature the elders thought she would have better chance in surviving the ordeals in the Forest. not like the young human women and few beast women that had sacrificed their lives for them. Six women perishing in the span of a few weeks. They found there bodies when the Alien came thraashingthrough the forest like some angry god back to the village few nights after he'd taken them. Their bodies broken and near lifeless and rarely they survived despite her efforts. They all came battered and bruised, and obviously raped. There bodies covered in his seman. Making her cringe. A disgusted shudder raked through her slight frame, her eyes going to where she knew hed come, from the forest closest to the mountains. She didn't want to think of her fate.
Thread: The Alien Hunters Prize(Sacrah and christian7_41king)

Goresh was large and in charge. his nearly nine foot body was black as the night, his spiney barbs along his back and tail made him look evil to the core. he watched from a distance the sacrifice and the setting sun. it was almost a year ago he came to this world, crashing in the forest. he had done what repairs he could, it would never fly again, but he didn't care, he was hated by his kind anyway, he was smarter, stronger and a whole lot faster and he was independent from the hive mind that ruled his race. he laughed at the thought, all where weak compared to him. he then silently started to move towards the sacrifice. he wasn't disrupting anything, he was silent as death. he appered in front of the woman, stareing at her dispite the fact he had no visable eyes. his clawed hand reached out and took some of her blue hair. feeling its silkieness as it slipped out of his hand. he looked at the people behind her as he stood his full hight and hissed slightly as he began to circle the woman taking in her body, it was fawless. he then spoke after a long silence whats your name?