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Thread: Attack of the 50-Foot Furs!  A Kotep and Miss Macro RP

Katt reached up with both hands, squeezing her breasts together gently to accentuate the pleasure and provide more pressure for the milk squirting out into Nyla's mouth. She gave a shuddering moan when she realized that not only was she giving milk at an incresing rate, but it was making her breasts swell up further. Fumbling a little, she started to stroke and rub one of Nyla's nipples before she twisted her head around with the dexterity of a cat, wrapped her lips around the nub of hot flesh and started to suck. All the while, her tail was lashing back and forth, working its way further into Nyla while they explored their new, milky breasts.
Thread: Right. First chapter thing of a story done, criticize.

Right-o. Before this gets started I must say I'm aware not everything is perfect. Not only is this just a first draft but it is a pretty shitty story, not erotic in any way by the way, but hey it is better then the nothing that's been plaguing me. Hopefully once I get this out of the way I'll be able to get back to writing decent stuff 3 with that, time to copy and paste from word. I hate word '07 soooo much
Thread: Right. First chapter thing of a story done, criticize.

I haven't quite read it all, but from what I've read I mostly like it. I've gotta go to my midnight shit here soon, so I don't have too terribly much time to post, but here's what I like about it. I like dragons, that's always a plus. you portrayed the dragon mythos you chose quite well, which was well, a Beast. From what your character Scarlet believed, they were bestial, primal creatures of fear, terror, brute strength and wreathed in destruction. Your writing did not disappoint in that respect. Your writing style seems to somehow come more alive whenever you're talking about that beast, I'm assuming that's because it interests you more than then soldiers, their pathetic tactics or any sort of chance for survival. Strength is strength, the Dragons wins, neh? Overall, a good story. But some small things I'd like to point out, focusing on the first two paragraphs I believe. It common knowledge that even armies were prone to losing in a battle against a single adult dragon and yet here they were just two squads, granted they were elite soldiers, and they were expected to take on one of the fearsome beasts that had been attacking the local farms that were growing too close to the forest. Click to expand... Your writing did nothing to allude that these men were the Elite. There were no allusions as to their skill or adeptitude in any sort of magics, no prowess of arms. You only mentioned Soldiers, maybe it's just me, but if I'm going to introduce anything Elite into a scenario, they're going to be somewhat like a sore thumb. People know they're good, and when they do, they typically show it. You just seemed to mention this in an 'Offhand' way, to my ears. If I'm merely misreadiing this, then by all means forgive me. It consisted of a full suit of paint less metal designed simply for combat with no cares for comfort and most notably a lack of a helmet. Click to expand... This quote is as pertaining to Scarlets Armor. I don't quite get the image of the armor from the description. You say the armor was not built for comfort, yet full plate in the Traditional englishSaxonBrtinnica style that is most often shown on movies is a very weighty thing. If it's not built for comfort, all sorts of health issues may arise from it's wear, no matter how strong or tough one is. In my humble opinion Scarlet could have used a bit more introduction, but the basis is very well set. And I've got to go. Happy writing, it's good stuff so far.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Alex, put me down, Jasmine demanded, kicking and squirming in his grasp even as he let out a chuckle. Seriously, put me down! I need to go get dressed. Continuing to squirm in Alex's grasp Jasmine finally gave up and slumped over his shoulder like a sack of potatoes. It's about time, he smiled, giving her a small pat on the ass before he began back down the stairs. You are going to spend the rest of the day relaxing, he ordered, ignoring her little huff of outrage before he set his small girlfriend down on the couch. Since Jasmine was only a little over 5'4 and Alex was over a foot taller, she didn't really have much of a change winning any fight with him, but she'd try to talk her way out of staying in the house. I need to go get dressed so I can go take care of stuff, she insisted, crossing her arms beneath her breasts, sulking as he shook his head. Andy, Alex called, standing before Jasmine with his arms crossed over his impressive chest. Even though she was angry with him Jasmine couldn't resist the urge to run her eyes the length of his body, mind filling with scrumptiously nefarious thoughts as she once again noted that the both of them were still naked. Though they'd sent Andy upstairs to get clothing for everyone, Jasmine was sure that, for the most part, everyone would stay completely nude as long as they didn't have to leave. Don't call him in on this, she protested, glaring up at Alex as he smirked. I can't believe you're going to gang up on me, I'm fine, I already told you, she grumbled, beginning to stand only to be pushed back onto the couch. One, you didn't mind when we ganged up on you earlier, Alex chuckled, giving her a knowing look even as she blushed slightly, two, you're not fine. You're pregnant and you have cancer again. That's not fine. Two hours ago you were sick and couldn't walk very well. We fed you, now you're going to relax. While he spoke Alex's deep, rumbling voice went from being playfully lecherous to completely serious and commanding, his beautiful cornflower blue eyes hardening slightly as he clenched his jaw and glared down at Jasmine. Now stop fighting me on this or I'll hold you down and have Andy tie that cute little ass of yours to the couch. Jasmine almost protested but she hesitated as Alex looked down at her and raised his eyebrows challengingly. For a moment she thought about saying something before snapping her mouth shut, glowering for the time being. No matter how much she wanted to fight she knew Alex well enough to know that he would hold her down and he was dominant enough that even if Andy refused to tie her down he'd manage to do it himself. Fine, she grumbled.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Re Crimson and JMontvale No, everything's not okay, Jasmine said, still glaring at Alex. This neanderthal won't let me up so I can go change and get some stuff done. Neanderthal?! Well that's a new one, Alex chuckled, flexing his arms slightly as he looked over himself. For a neanderthal I look pretty damn good. You should know better than to try getting up right now, you need to relax. Jasmine rolled her eyes and turned enough to look at Andy, ignoring the twinge in her back where she felt the tender flesh of her new tattoo rub against the couch. Hun, could you go get me the Vaseline from the bathroom? While you're at it do you want to tell your brother that he's being a stubborn jackass or should I do it myself? Smiling sweetly at her youngest lover Jasmine couldn't help but let her eyes wander along his body. Though Alex was taller and more muscled Andy always reminded her of a swimmer all long, lean muscle that was still developing but with a baby face. Before she could say anything else, though, Alex broke in. Andy, tell her to stay put, he sighed, rubbing his temples. She won't listen to me but for some reason she'll listen to you. Tell her that she needs to stay here and relax.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Re Crimson and JMontvale Andy looked back and forth between his lovers. He was relieved to see that though they having a disagreement, and were both frustrated, they still held on to their humor and love. He loved them both so much caused a sweet ache in his heart. Andy walked over and ran his hand over his brother's powerful chest as he stood on his tiptoes and kissed Alex's lips with soft passion. Then, Andy turned and gently caressed Jasmine's tummy as he kissed her with the same restrained fire. His kind, blue eyes met hers. Jasmine. I would never order you to do anything, he said softly. I know you're a grown woman and you can make your own choices. I will, and I am asking you to please rest. Whatever you need, Alex and me can get for you, okay? Just rest for a little bit. You're carrying our child and you're sick, and you can trust us to do whatever you need us to do. When he said our child it was clear by Andy's tone that he included all three of them as the parents. Now, I'll do get you some Vaseline and whatever you else you want or need. He grinned a little at both of his lovers. Just try not to check out my ass too much when I go.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Alex had focused most of his attention on Jasmine, but he couldn't help but turn slightly and enjoy the view as Andy walked over to him, His soft glare at Jasmine didn't waver as he turned to look back at the petite woman frowning on the couch, though he was quickly distracted from his stubbornness by a kiss. Wrapping an arm round his younger brother's waist Alex let the younger teen distract him, almost resisting as Andy pulled back but he just chuckled softly and let his brother go, unable to resist the urge to give Andy a playful swat on the ass. Distracting little bastard, he mumbled softly, though his voice held no trace of anger or resentment, instead he seemed quite happy to have gotten the kiss, though he couldn't protest the view from behind as his younger brother leaned down slightly to rub their girlfriend's belly. Jasmine watched the boys with what was almost the beginnings of a smile but she let her scowl return when Andy turned his attention to her. About to push his hand away and argue she was stopped as surely as Alex was by the kiss and she didn't hesitate to return the affection. Setting herself back against the couch as her youngest lover looked into her eyes Jasmine's protest began to melt as Andy asked her to relax instead of ordered. Giving him a gentle smile she sighed and nodded. Alright, she sighed, shaking her head slightly. I'll let you guys take care of me. Enjoying the sound of the words as Andy said our child Jasmine couldn't help a smile, setting her hand softly on her stomach. The butterfly tattoo there rested perfectly on her flat stomach but she enjoyed the thought of how the tattoo would look once she was pregnant and her stomach had stretched, swelling with the life that had come into being with the help of a rainy night and a locked front door. Pulled from her thoughts with a laugh as Andy told them not to check out his ass too much she just shook her head and smiled. I'll make no promises, she smiled. Alex simply shook his head and chuckled, pulling Andy close. I'm not going to promise either, you know I can't help but look. Besides, I'm trying to decide who has the better ass, you or Jasmine? With a grin he slid his hands down his younger brother's back and cupped his ass, giving a firm squeeze but resisting the urge to pick up his love. Since he'd resisted one urge Alex didn't even hesitate to lean down and kiss Andy fiercely, pulling him close to the front of his body before breaking the kiss and giving the boy a playful shove towards the door. Now go get the Vaseline before we get distracted, he said with a grin before plopping down onto the couch beside Jasmine, who'd been watching them with a grin.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Oh, Jasmine's is waaay nicer, Andy told his brother. Some heat came into his eyes and voice as he continued. But I love the way you fuck mine. Andy's hands went first to his brother's strong chest when Alex pulled the smaller teen against his body. He kissed Alex back with blazing passion unrestrained and moaned into his mouth as he felt Alex's hot cock pressing against his stomach and his strong hands squeezing his firm, tight ass. Andy's hands moved down Alex's chest and sides to reach around and knead his big brother's strong ass. The 16 year old was a little lightheaded and breathing hard when Alex playfully pushed him away. He laughed, but the fire came back into his eyes. Okay, bro. I'll go. He took long enough to give Jasmine another kiss, this one longer, but still gentle for his tired lover. Have your Vaseline in a sec. Andy backed up and looked at Alex. He pointed at the growing erection rising up from the soft patch of red hair between his legs. Then, we might need to do something about this boner you gave me. Then, Andy hurried up the stairs. Andy grabbed the Vaseline, and hurried back to the sofa where his lovers sat.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Jasmine watched Andy go with a smile, shaking her head slightly. We're going to turn him into a nympho, she chuckled, shifting her position on the couch so that the slightly rough material didn't rub against the sore spots on her lower back. Even though the couch was soft to the touch Jasmine could feel every stitch in the cloth on her lower back and as she shifted she let out a soft sigh. Before she could find a comfortable position she was suddenly picked up and moved. Noticing how Jasmine was squirming Alex sighed and picked her up, setting her so that she was kneeling on the couch. Just lay down, he said with a chuckle. That way you're not rubbing the ink off the tattoo. Leaning forward Jasmine gave him a soft kiss before she stretched out on the couch, lying on her stomach and resting her head on his thigh. With a slight smile Alex laid a hand on Jasmine's back, beginning to rub soft circles along her soft skin. Feeling her relax he shifted slightly and began to give her a slightly modified massage, working a few kinks out of her muscles until he heard her let out a soft sigh and relax completely. His attention focused almost completely on Jasmine it was a second after Andy walked back in before he lifted his head and smiled at his little brother. She needs a massage, he chuckled as Jasmine let out a small mumble. What I need is a massage and a good show, she smiled, eyes closed as she rubbed her cheek against Alex's thigh before opening her eyes. Looking up at Andy she smiled softly and stretched out. I'm stealing your seat for a few minutes. You can have him back after one of you has doctored up my back. Before she could do it herself Alex had shifted and set a hand softly on her head, running fingers through her hair as he explained how to rub a thin layer of the Vaseline on Jasmine's tattoo. You want to do it or shall I?
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Andy smiled happily at how comfortable his lovers seemed to be. I can rub the Vaseline on, Andy said. You keep giving Jasmine a nice massage. Andy was pretty good at massages too. He had been giving them to his brother since Alex had started sports and weight training. Andy used a light and careful touch to rub the jelly on Jasmine's tattoo. The tattoo was a testament of her love for the Patterson brothers. Andy wanted to get a similar tattoo low down on his belly, just above his pubes. Jasmine had said it would be painful, but Andy wanted his two lovers to see their names there every time they were naked together. he wanted them to always know that his body was for them alone. Andy looked at his big brother with a wicked smile when he was done. Should we give Jasmine that show she wants? he asked. Andy stood up and moved over to his brother. His hands began to massage Alex's chest. Andy kissed his big brother's mouth, sucking on his lower lip for a moment before kissing down his jaw and kissing and nipping down Alex's neck.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Jasmine purred and relaxed under the combined attention from the brothers and she couldn't help but smile as they both gave her a massage, though Andy's was much more unintentional. Almost lulled into sleep she let out a lazy purr and smile as she heard her youngest lover speak, opening one eye just enough that she could watch him walk to his brother and lean down for a kiss. From her vantage point Jasmine was increasingly aware of how much Alex enjoyed his brother's ministrations and she couldn't resist the urge to give his growing cock a quick lick. Sitting up and moving to the other edge of the couch Jasmine curled there happily, enjoying the show. We most definitely should, Alex responded immediately to his brother's question, smiling as the younger teen moved over to him. Happily returning his brother's kiss and setting a hand at the back of his neck Alex let out a soft groan as his brother's mouth trailed downward. Running a hand along the back of Andy's head Alex gently urged him downward, smiling as he watched his little brother work at his chest, breath hitching for a second before he chuckled. You're starting to pick up Jasmine's biting fetish, he chuckled, wrapping a hand around the back of his younger brother's neck before pulling his head up. Holding him immobile Alex smirked and leaned in, kissing his brother possessively and passionately before pulling Andy back. Before I fuck your ass I want you to suck me cock, he said simply, voice beginning to sink into a low growl as he looked his lover in the eye.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Andy happily licked his lips. I love the taste of your big, hard cock bro, he said, his voice not as deep as Alex's but just as hungry. And I love the way you and Jasmine bite me, so I wanted to try to give some of that pleasure to you. Andy wouldn't bite as hard and Alex and Jasmine sometimes did, but where their bites caused him incredible pleasure, Andy worried his inexperience might cause his lovers pain. Andy kissed and licked down Alex's chest, pausing to give his yummy nipples a brief sucking and a very soft bite. Andy's hands began to caress Alex's thighs as his mouth moved down onto his brother's washboard abs. Andy moved slowly lower and lower, licking, kissing and nipping, and his hands moved higher up Alex's inner thighs, seeking the heat of his groin. When Andy reached as far down the lowest part of his brother's lower stomach, he licked his way up the mighty cock he found there. His hands began to stroke Alex's nuts as he licked the very tip, his tongue probing Alex's pee hole for every wonderful taste of precum. Oh, yes, Andy moaned just before his lips moved over the head of Alex's manhood and he took the hot, hard, silky rod into his mouth. Andy moved slowly down, his tongue lashing his brother's cock even as he sucked more and more of it in. Andy longed to have all of Alex's cock in his throat and to feel his nose buried in the musky man scent of his brother's pubes.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Alex smiled and watched his brother work his way down his body. Smile slowly beginning to fade as his breath hitched in his throat a few times Alex let out a low, happy groan as Andy finally reached his cock. Hips shifting up instinctively Alex managed to reign in his urge to thrust up into his little brother's mouth, but he didn't resist the urge to curl fingers in his brother's hair and push his head down a bit further. Breathing growing slightly deeper Alex watched his cock disappearing into Andy's mouth with a small moan. Jasmine, you've got competition, he groaned, cursing softly under his breath as his pleasure spiked for a moment, hips bucking up against Andy's face. While Alex enjoyed the feel of Andy sucking his cock, Jasmine watched the two of them with eager eyes, licking her lips slightly as the familiar tension low in her body began to build. Smiling when she was told she had competition the small woman simply stretched out and hooked a leg over the back of the couch, setting a pillow beneath her lower back as her fingers began to play along her sex, the puffy, pink labia already damp with her juices. I don't mind the competition, she purred with a smile, I'll just have to teach him a few tricks. Grinning wickedly as Alex gave her a look Jasmine just purred and turned her attention to Andy. If you suck hard and close your mouth enough that your teeth press against his cock he'll go insane. When he gets closer to cuming wrap a hand around his balls, squeeze a bit, and give a little tug. He'll cum faster, and if you keep sucking and squeeze his cock he gets hard again almost instantly. As she spoke Jasmine grinned at Alex and purred as he let out a groan. That's cheating, he grumbled.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Andy could see Jasmine's delightful sex as she offered it for the brothers to see. He listened to her words, and eagerly did as she instructed. He sucked his brother's cock as hard as he could, closing his mouth enough to let his teeth rake gently over the sensitive skin. One hand continued to play with Alex's nuts while the other stroked at the root of his cock. Andy's light brown hair fell over one of his blue eyes again as he looked up to his brother's face. Andy wanted to tell Alex without speaking how much he wanted to taste his cum. He wanted his big brother to know how much he was enjoying the taste of his incredible cock.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Before he could say anything to the boy kneeling between his legs Alex felt Andy do just as Jasmine had told him to. Groaning loudly and bucking sharply he didn't bother trying to swallow a curs and moan, eyes rolling back slightly as his entire body went rigid for a second. Limbs tingling he let out a low grunt in his chest and bucked up sharply, forcing his eyes open so he could look down at his little brother. Fuck, he groaned, his balls beginning to tighten as he pushed Andy's head down a bit. The faster you make me cum the longer I get to fuck you, he growled softly, breathing growing deeper as his eyes trailed from the view of his cock in his little brother's mouth to the sight of Jasmine fingering her soaked pussy. Groaning softly from just the visual he barely noticed her grin before she moaned and lifted her hips, spreading her lips wide as she worked two fingers deep into her soaked depths.
Thread: Much Better Then a Cup of Sugar {<Crimson and JMontvale>}

Alex's promise to fuck him a long time and the sight of Jasmine plunging her fingers into her own wonderful depths drove Andy crazy. He began to squeeze and tug on Alex's balls and to suck faster and harder at his delicious dick. Andy hungered for his brother's cum, to feel Alex fuck him and then he hoped Jasmine might let him sink his eager cock into her sultry depths.