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Thread: Day at the Beach

He let out a low groan as he felt her warm wet lips surround his cock, his hips already starting to thrust up slowly and gently into her mouth, trying to encourage her to slide more of himself into her mouth. His hands went up to her bikini bottom, a little shaky from nerves and from all of the pleasure she was giving him, but he reached over and slid the strap aside, revealing her pussy as his hands gripped her firm yet soft ass. He leaned his head up and gave her pussy one nice long lick. He was making sure to be slow and gentle, lapping up her juices as he soon found a soft small bump, figuring it to be her clit. Kevin decided to start to swirl his tongue over it, licking it in soft slow circles before sliding his tongue deep inside of his mom's pussy, hoping he was doing a good job of pleasing her
Thread: Day at the Beach

Sharra moaned onto her sons cock as he began to lick her soft fold and moaned harder as her son found her clit. She began to bob her head faster and sucked harder aiming to please her son just as much as he was pleasing her. She then reached and started to softly toy with his balls and squeeze them in her hand adding pleasure to what she was doing to him. She let his cock out her mouth and smiled back at him. keep it up hunny, But don't just pay attenuation to a woman's clit explore her folds... she said before going back to what she was doing.
Thread: Day at the Beach

The faster she went the better he felt, and Kevin didn't know how he had lived without this sensation for so long. The vibrations from her moan made him feel even better and he was sure that he needed to work harder to make her moan even more. As soon as he heard her suggestion his hands went to her ass, his fingers finding her folds as he spread her wet lips apart a bit more to have better access to them. His tongue dived deep into her pussy, wagging his tongue around to find the best spot before pulling it out and lapping over every inch of her that he could find. Within no time his cock was throbbing hard, but he was trying to hold out, Kevin wanted to make this last as long as possible.
Thread: Day at the Beach

She moaned louder as her son began to hungerly open and dig himself into her wet folds, his father had never done this to her and it felt amazing, ashe then took her son deeper into her mouth deep thoughting him as she bobbed her head faster up and down his cock as she played with his ball's she felt the sign's of his rising and needing climax. she began to work harder as she bucked her hips into her sons face, Pushing him deeper into her wet pussy.
Thread: Day at the Beach

Kevin was working hard to breath normally, he had never done anything like this and the flow of her juices made staying in control hard. When he felt his member slide deeper still into her mouth he had to stop playing with her for a few seconds just to let out a long loud groan. He knew he was going to cum and within seconds he breathed out a low, Mom... before shooting out a huge load of his cum. He did not want to be the only one to finish though, his tongue sliding as deep as it could inside of her as his index finger gently pressed back up against her clit, rolling over it and massaging it slowly, hoping to give her the same results she gave him.
Thread: Day at the Beach

Sharra blushed as he finally unleashed himself into her mouth and began to swallow it all drinking every drop her son gave her dont wanting any to go to waste, She the took him out her mouth panting gasping as her son quivkly began to try andf make her cum as well. It was working his efforts quickly brought her to climax and she cried out almost creaming as her juices flowed out of her and onto her sons face, Coating him in her slick love juice. She fell atop of him panting softly still stroking his cock. Good boy... You pass your first lesson... she panted out.
Thread: Day at the Beach

His entire body shuddered as he came, not expecting it to feel that much better than when he masturbated, but this was an entirely different experience. Within moments of cumming he felt her cum as well, the rush of liquids made him lap up her juices even faster, just trying not to choke on any of it. He was not as skilled as her though and he had to let some dribble off of his cheeks as he panted for air. The feeling of his mother collapsing on him from pleasure gave him more confidence and with that same tired panting voice he said, More...I want more. He sounded a little greedy as his hands went to her ass and gave it a firm squeeze. Can I fuck you mom, can I put my cock inside of you? One of the only good things about being a young virgin was that he was ready and eager, his cock still twitching for attention.
Thread: Day at the Beach

She panted and layed there atop iof him catching her breth, and almost went wide eyed as he asked for more. more? she said looking back at him and then back to his cock and looked at it in almost awe. oh wow, He just cam but he still wants more? she mostly asked her self, and then blushed as he heard him ask to fuck her. well.... I.... I dunno.... I mean... she then thought for a moment, She was teaching her son how to please a woman... but she was realy fertal at this time of the month. She sighed and then looked back at her son. Fine... But just tnhis once ok? Also ill let you cum inside me. she then fliped over to her back and opened her legs wide. She reached down and opened her slit for her son and pointed with one of her fingers to her love hole. You fuck this hole ok?
Thread: Day at the Beach

There was a brief moment when he thought she was going to say no, and that this had all been a mistake. Yet as she flipped onto her back he knew what she was going to say, his hand already going to his own member as he began to stroke it, making it a bit larger and getting ready to be pushed inside of her. Kevin climbed on top of his mother, his hand guiding the head of his cock straight to her entrance as he began slowly pushing it inside of her. Part of him wanted to thrust right in, this was an indescribable feeling, but the other part was telling him to go slow, to savor this moment. It did not take long until he had buried himself completely inside of her, feeling the head of his cock press against her cervix before he began to pull and and thrust in again. It only took him a few seconds to find an even pace, his hips pounding into hers and pushing her and the towel further into the sand.
Thread: Day at the Beach

Sharra blushed watching her son get up and quickly places himself between her legs, How long had it been since she had layed with anyone? seeing she couldnt remember she figured it had been a long time. as he pushed in to her tight wet hole she moaned arching hard back. As her son began to trust in and out of her she moaned softly smiling up at him. slow at first hunny.... then start speeding up little by little..... oh god.. your so big... i can feel you pushing against my womb. she cried out bucking her hips to meet his trusts.
Thread: Day at the Beach

He nodded as he slowly began pulling his long member out of her, looking down as he saw it slide out inch by inch. Just as he was about to pop out of her he pushed his hips back forward, thrusting in so he could slide every inch of himself deep inside of her. Little by little he started getting faster, not knowing if he was doing it by choice, or if his body was just telling him that was the best thing to do. His eyes now were focused on Sharra's breasts, mesmerized by them as the rocked bellow him. His right hand reached up as he cupped her left breast firmly in his hand, squeezing it as he leaned down and started to suck on her nipple, occasionally stopping to swirl his tongue around or flick it quickly against her hard bud.
Thread: Day at the Beach

Sharra moaned softly as her son started to find his rythum, He was doing a good job ..... After all, He was always a quick learner. But his question ran thou her ears, And she questioned herself... 'am i realy teaching him how to please me?' She shook her head and then cryed out moaning and arching her back as her son grabbed hold of her breasts. Oh god, That's it hunny.... Keep it up!
Thread: Day at the Beach

He figured a faster pace would be better, from all that he had experienced so far it seemed the faster he went the more pleasure both him and his mom would feel. However he did not realize what too much pleasure would do to him, and unlike masturbation he could not slow down or stop before his release. His hips were pounding into her like a piston now, with no regard to self control. His member was throbbing out of control now, slightly hurting and yet feeling amazing at the same time. He lasted another minute or two before he finally came, burying his cock deep inside of her before releasing his juices. All that Kevin could call out at that point was, Mom...
Thread: Day at the Beach

She cryed out and gasped as her son filled her, Going wide eyed. She should have warned him not to, Seeing today was dangerous for him to cum inside her, But it was to late. She then cried out moan as she climaxed on his cock releasing her juices around his cock. she then layed back panting. Good... Job hunny..... You did... Well.
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

I've had several people messaging me asking on how to become published. My experience is only with erotica, but some of these tips will work, regardless of genre. 1 You've only got one shot to catch that editors interest, so make sure and I can't stress this enough that your story is as error free as possible. 2 Critique partners are your friend. However, friends don't always make the best crit partners. It is best to join a crit group, or ask someone in a writing profession to look over your stuff. 3 Head hopping in the same scene is BAD. Very, very bad. It is so bad, I can't even describe the depths of how bad it is. 4 Start small. Don't think you are going to hit up Big Publishing Company of Many Books and make it in one shot. E-publishers are really picking up and a great way to get in the door. 5 Start smaller. Many publishers have calls for anthologies or certain submission types out. It is a great way to get your foot in the door and a reputation to help bring about bigger things. 6 Show, not tell. A big indicator that you are telling instead of showing is if you use words that end in 'ly' Example softly, quickly, thoughtfully, etc 7 Social networking is a must. If you want to take writing seriously, you need to be taken seriously. Blogs, twitter accounts, and other social network sites are a must for getting known. 8 Believe it or not, if a publishing house is interested in you, they are going to Google or some other search site your butt. If you spend all your time complaining or bashing on above mentioned social sites, you are going to get passed over. Moral Always be professional. 9 Research your desired publishing house before you submit. Stick to their guidelines on their submission page. Get a feel for what their authors have to say about them. Like any company, some are better than others. 10 DON'T EVER GIVE UP. Rejections happen. They are a part of life. Look at your work objectively and try to see it through their eyes. Was your prose a little funky? Was your submission something they don't accept. Don't get angry. Get motivated. I hope the above tips help. If anyone would like me to give more details on a certain tip, let me know and I'll work up another post on that particular tip. I wish you all the best of luck! D. F. Krieger
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!!!!! for this. Very helpful indeed. Do you have any tips on the writing front as well? Meaning, what sorts of things do you do to help keep yourself motivated to write, how do you deal with deadlines and does that affect how you write or the quality in which you typically write? What sorts of things inspire you? Do you find it hard to finish up a story especially if other ideas pop into your head andor if you hit a spot in the story that might be harder or, yes, somewhat boring to write? How do you cope with that? XD Yes.... I have lots of questions. .
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

Were there any tips I've given that need to be further explained, such as showing versus telling? Head hopping? Don't be shy!
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

Great advice! I have been out of the writing loop for sometime and want to get back into it, it seems I'm cranky when I'm not being creative!!! Have u ever gone through a slump like that? Where you realize you haven't written in dsys or even months? If so how did you get rid of the pesky writersblock-itis?
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

GiaNoir said Great advice! I have been out of the writing loop for sometime and want to get back into it, it seems I'm cranky when I'm not being creative!!! Have u ever gone through a slump like that? Where you realize you haven't written in dsys or even months? If so how did you get rid of the pesky writersblock-itis? Click to expand... I hope your find your way back into the writing loop. Yes, I have gone through such a slump. I wrote a 21k novel in 8 days and it gave me major burn out. When I submitted it, I was still full of the need to write, but simply couldn't focus on what to do next. My husband literally rolled a die and used it to choose my next work from a list of ideas I'd made. Now, to get past writer's block is a different subject. I've found that writing something, anything, helps. Even if it's paraphrasing events in a journal, a lengthy e-mail to a friend, or an RP reply. It helps kick start my brain. Try reading a book while thinking what you would do differently. If nothing seems to help, then stop even trying for a day or two. You may need to take a step back and let your mind de-clutter. Different things work for different people.
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Thanks so much for the tips, I will give it a try. Rp-ing is a good start! The last project I had definitely burned me out, and was kinda lost as to what to write next, just came back from the basement where I had a notebook hidden in a box which I should have had easily accessible! with a bunch of ideas written in it, gonna see if I can make some sense of my chicken scratch and work it out from there! Thanks again! WriteMood said GiaNoir said Great advice! I have been out of the writing loop for sometime and want to get back into it, it seems I'm cranky when I'm not being creative!!! Have u ever gone through a slump like that? Where you realize you haven't written in dsys or even months? If so how did you get rid of the pesky writersblock-itis? Click to expand... I hope your find your way back into the writing loop. Yes, I have gone through such a slump. I wrote a 21k novel in 8 days and it gave me major burn out. When I submitted it, I was still full of the need to write, but simply couldn't focus on what to do next. My husband literally rolled a die and used it to choose my next work from a list of ideas I'd made. Now, to get past writer's block is a different subject. I've found that writing something, anything, helps. Even if it's paraphrasing events in a journal, a lengthy e-mail to a friend, or an RP reply. It helps kick start my brain. Try reading a book while thinking what you would do differently. If nothing seems to help, then stop even trying for a day or two. You may need to take a step back and let your mind de-clutter. Different things work for different people. Click to expand...
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

I been wanting to start writing a story I have in mind. Being a big horror fan its good and all but english not being my main language can get in my way sometimes. I understand english compleatly and I can have a conversation with a native speaker anyday . However there are sometimes that I get stuck on how to say a sentence and cannot find the right words for it, any suggestions for those times?
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

BlackRose said I been wanting to start writing a story I have in mind. Being a big horror fan its good and all but english not being my main language can get in my way sometimes. I understand english compleatly and I can have a conversation with a native speaker anyday . However there are sometimes that I get stuck on how to say a sentence and cannot find the right words for it, any suggestions for those times? Click to expand... I promise you that with English being my only language, this happens to me as well. Sometimes its hard to find the right words to say exactly what you are trying to say. Writing it for readers is harder. I have a couple of things I do to help. 1 A thesaurus is my best friend. If I need a different term and that's hanging me up, I'll look up other words that can fill in for it. Or, do a synonym search through your internet search engine. 2 Play with it! Yeah, that's right. PLAY. Write the sentence down on a separate piece of paper in different ways. It helps. She stared at the blood-stained wall with a gasp. --Not good With a gasp, she stared at the blood-stained wall. --Meh A slow moan of terror emitted from her throat when the wall came into view. Blood, still wet and sleek in it's vivid shades of red, stood out in stark contrast against the white surface. ---YAY By writing something down various times, you break out of the mold that your mind has locked itself in. You start looking for new possibilities. I hope this helps. D. F. Krieger
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

Thank you it does
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

3 Head hopping in the same scene is BAD. Very, very bad. It is so bad, I can't even describe the depths of how bad it is. Click to expand... God, yes! I love Bernard Cornwell's historical fiction but he does this all he time, and it drives me up the wall. 10 DON'T EVER GIVE UP. Rejections happen. They are a part of life. Look at your work objectively and try to see it through their eyes. Was your prose a little funky? Was your submission something they don't accept. Don't get angry. Get motivated. Click to expand... I don't know about you, but I find getting a personalized rejection as opposed for a form almost as encouraging as getting a piece accepted. I say this because I know some aspiring writers who get discouraged over personalized rejections because they don't realize that nearly every submission gets a form rejection or ignored outright.
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

Barghest - I'm glad you seem to approve of the tips. I have whose work I'm fond of, and she also head hops like crazy. Before I started writing myself, I didn't realize how bad she was at it. Now, I writhe when I read her writing. Terrible, isn't it? Unfortunately, I've never received a personalized rejection. From what I've heard through the grapevine, getting a personalized rejection in some cases can allow for a revise and resend with a chance of acceptance. If I ever meet an aspiring writer who's getting discouraged, I point out Stephen King's history of rejections..... And now look at him.
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

I've been published several times in conventional fiction magazines, and I do agree, personal rejections are usually couched with a try this and resubmit. And honestly, it's been my experience that such advice is dead-on accurate. Editors have their jobs for a reason. However, the days of a personal rejection are waning, because of how more and more places are moving to electronic submissions, and thus there's a great increase in submission volume, in part because the bozo filter of having to actually print it out in format and cough up a stamp is no longer in place. Nowadays, there's so much input to filter through, it's harder to find time to personally write a note on any given rejection. So treasure the ones that DO come in!
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

You and I must talk. For these are very helpful.
Thread: 10 Tips on Becoming Published

Mistress Legacy said You and I must talk. For these are very helpful. Click to expand... Feel free to either pm me with any questions you might have or to ask them here. I promise, I will answer. And I'm glad you found these helpful.
Thread: Revenge Through Hell (Lord Dakol and Swirl)

What happened? One minute, he was walking down the sidewalk to get to his house, and the next . . . a splitting headache. Josiah Lockhart had a good life. Great family, good job, fantastic friends. He even had the eye of several ladies from both work and . . . well, everywhere else. Now, he was just starting to wake up somewhere. It was oddly hot hot enough to sweat through his clothes. Opening his eyes, he was staring silently at the craggy ceiling, heat waves visibly passing over. It was hot! Ugh... Josiah groaned, sitting up as he held his head, fingers running through the strands of black hair. His glasses then steamed up, and so he took them off and cleaned them off before looking around. He gasped sharply where was he?! Before him was an expansive land of mostly red cliffs and more heat waves. Spouts of fire and lava shot up into the air, only to disappear into the dark depths of the air. Then, without breaking his gaze to the sight in front of him, he peeled off the heavy jacket, exposing the toned and athletic physique under his white dress shirt. He was currently sitting in a small cave, noticing the demoness behind him. Where was he..?
Thread: Revenge Through Hell (Lord Dakol and Swirl)

because I have no idea how to get the photo up without loading it onto photobucket first Crouched on her hands and knees she stared at the male quietly, her red eyes staring at him quietly as he seemed to be coming to. Sitting back on her knees, she watched as he stood up and observed where he was. She had brought him to her own little rocky ledge, amongst all the others. Standing up, she folded her wings behind her back and waited until he turned to look at her. She was not quite sure what she was going to do with this man but she was sure she would have a few ideas. A smile split upon her face, her fangs protruding a bit as she saw his gaze fall upon her. Welcome to hell. Her voice was quiet, but not dark like one might think. It was sultry and young sounding, matching her young looks quite well. Her red eyes gazed down his physic as his jacket was now left in his hand. The earth above had been entering its winter season but down here, here it was always hot. A constant balmy your-going-to-sweat till your dead again type weather. Licking her lips with a very pink tongue she pranced over to him and then over to the lip of the rock they were standing on. Her arms out wide as she turned to look at him. What do you think?!
Thread: Revenge Through Hell (Lord Dakol and Swirl)

Josiah's fingers rubbed his temple gingerly, the migraine slowly ebbing away. His ears then picked up the faintest of sounds, his body went rigid in fright for just a moment before gathering his courage. Turning his head, Josiah's gaze fell upon the young, utterly gorgeous woman that was standing before him, smiling widely. However, his intelligent eyes quickly noticed that she wasn't human. The most noticeable thing about her was the horns that spiraled from her nest of long raven-black hair, and the pointed ears that were front-and-center, along with the red eyes that stared at him. For the moment, he ignored the fact that she was barely clothed, though he couldn't help but look how her figure moved with each step. But his concentration was broken as she passed him, not registering her words as he sat there, wide-eyed at the pair of leathery black wings upon her back. Josiah was in a form of shock and disbelief . . . that is, until he finally listened to her words, prompting an even more shocked expression. I'm . . . WHERE?! he yelled, trying to get up to his feet, but he noticed that his weight felt a bit different. Heavier. Because of this, he fell back onto his ass and cushioned the blow with his hands and the jacket that lay under him. Wh-Who are you..? And why am I in H-Hell? he asked, shock slowly coming back to his senses.