Thread: In the depths of Valhalla(Finished, feedback wanted)

Re In the depths of Valhalla For the next few months, Luna repeated the same routine. Work, Asgard, Valhalla. That was all of her destinations. Baldur seemed to act as if nothing was going on with them when they were in Valhalla, but in Asgard, they were madly in love with each other. He seemed to be a different person almost. In all that time, Loki had not made another appearance. However, one day he did. He was waiting for her, standing in front of the entrance to Asgard. ??Loki?? Luna asked with a puzzled look. She remembered she wasn??t suppose to speak to him, but she wanted to know why he hadn??t showed his face for those long months. ??Hello my darling. How is it going with?Baldur?? He asked with a grin. Loki had had enough with the happiness and decided to start some drama just for the hell of it. ??Great. We love each other so much. Baldur is so kind when we??re alone.? Luna said with a smile. Then it dropped. ??But we can??t keep going on like this. I need Odin to know soon?so we can stop keeping it a secret. He deserves to know.? Loki grinned. ??Have you taken your relationship with Baldur to the next level? Or are you still an innocent little girl?? Loki asked, having a hard time not to laugh. ??I want to get married before giving myself to him!? Luna said, folding her arms. She didn??t want her first time to be just any old time. She wanted it to be special. On her honeymoon with Baldur. She knew that she would wind up getting pregnant anyway. So why not be married first? ??You should tell him that then. Then, when he says yes, you will tell Odin. By yourself if you have to. Be proud and say, ??Odin, Baldur has chosen to be my bride!?? Then Baldur would have no choice but to admit you both were seeing each other. However, you can??t tell him you??re going to toast to it. Otherwise, he??ll reject you. Alright?? Loki grinned. Luna nodded. ??You??re right. Its time to take matters into my own hands.? She said, then walked passed him. Loki watched her. ??I think its time to visit Valhalla once again.? Once Luna had gotten to Hods house, she took a deep breath and entered. Hod had been waiting for her as usual. ??Look, Baldur. I know you??ve been wanting to have sex with me for a while, however I feel its best that we get married first. So can we get married?? Hod was speechless. He had fallen so deeply in love with her that he would be willing to do anything to make her stay. Even lie. ??Umm?we can get married, if that??s what you want, Luna.? Hod said with a smile. Luna smiled back and sat on his lap. ??Good. I was afraid you would reject me.? Se kissed him deeply and he kissed her back, both closing their eyes at the same time. Odin had sensed Loki??s presence for the first time in months. It was almost time for the feast, and he figured Loki had come for that. However, he had an uneasy feeling. He only showed up when trouble presented itself. Luna had come in a few minutes after Loki. Loki smiled at her, pretending to be there for emotional support. The poor girl smiled back and sat in her usual seat. Once everyone was there, Odin toasted for tonight, however, unlike every night, this time someone else had something to this toast. She stood, and all eyes were on hers. Loki could barely contain himself. This was it. ??Everyone?I??ve got something to say. I??ve been seeing this man for months, and finally I got him to propose to me.? Applause filled the room, but Odin was the only one not clapping and some of the valkyries weren??t either. ??However, I??m not sure if Odin will approve. He is someone we all know and is sweet, and kind?and loving. Baldur. Baldur is going to marry me!? The room fell silent, and Luna looked at Baldur. His mouth was open, and he looked confused. ??Is this true?? Odin asked, turning to Baldur. ??I know nothing of it, father?Perhaps Luna?needs some rest.? Baldur said, looking at her as if she were crazy. ??Come on Baldur. You said that you would marry me. Did you expect that we would get married without your fathers consent?? Luna asked with a puzzled expression. Suddenly, the big door creaked open, and everyone looked back. Gasps filled the room, and Luna??s eyes were wide open. Baldur stood up, and Odin lowered his gaze. ??There are?two of you?? Luna asked, looking at Baldur and then Hod. ??You don??t belong in Valhalla!? Baldur shouted at Hod. Hod shook his head. ??I??m here to explain things to you, Luna! This was all Loki??s fault! He tricked you, not me! I love you?so please?come back to Asgard with me. We??re in love!? ??No!? Luna shouted as Hod made his way to her. ??I fell in love with who I thought was Baldur! I don??t know you?you snake! I??m not seeing you ever again! You embarrassed me! You humiliated me! Are you happy now!?? Luna shouted and then she ran out of the room. Loki began to laugh, breaking the utter silence. Odin??s gaze shifted to him. ??This was your doing, Loki?? He growled. Loki smirked. ??No. It was that girls. So longing for Baldur that she couldn??t even see that Hod wasn??t him. Oh well. A girl like that?doesn??t deserve to be loved.?