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Thread: To Become a Queen (with raizu kagurai)

RE To Become a Queen Sarinah was growing breathless, her eyes darting threw the darkness. Hearing the calls of the owls over head. The race of the deer,elk,moose whatever was startled by her presence here. Intern it frightened her. Her breath sucked into her lungs. A sounding crack echoed through the darkness. Making her jump. She knew this was her fault that she was caught out in the dark unfamiliar territory. Biting her lower lip she pressed on. Not wanting to stay in one place to long. Her eyes slowly adjusting to the darkness around her. Hands guiding her. Unaware that what truly frightened the large herbivores was something that was stalking her from the moment she had entered the area. Even her as her breath fell in soft rasping breathes from her ruby smeared lips, her heart hammering within her chest. She didn't know what was after her, he was silent. Knew the forest the way she did not. It wasn't till a deep, and rough voice pierced the darkness. Making her gasp and jump. Turning to the direction of the sound. Her heart picking up a notch as she looked around her frantically. Who...Whos there She called out, walking backwards till her back came flesh with a tree. Each snap of a twig made her flinch, and jump. Her hand seeking one of her daggers at her belt.
Thread: To Become a Queen (with raizu kagurai)

RE To Become a Queen When she found herself backed into a tree, a hulking dark figure approached her, her adjusted eyes allowing her to make out a dark figure with the upright position of a man, but held the furry, elegant figure of an animal. And when the figure stepped into the opening of the trees, allowing the moonlight to shine on him, the voice bellowed again.I'm the ruler of this forest, the one who defends it agaisnt the will of man and their filthy raids and lack of respect for the wilds. Once in the light, the hulking beasts form came to light, standing on what looked like hind legs, his muscular form covered in fur, dark grey fur from head to toe. Along his large hands were claws he used to tear through his prey and underbrush of the forest. Finally, his face looked exactly like the native wolves of these lands, only it held a fiercer, and more human look to it.What about you? Who might you be?He asked, standing a foot from her, keeping her where she stood by leaning over her a bit, letting his hot breath smack her beautiful soft skin.
Thread: details,details,details..

Okay since I see a pattern repeating itself I thought maybe I could post a bit about adding details in RP and why it matters. Lets say you are doing a plot and you bring the guest into your house..they have never been there and have no idea what the rooms look like. To make the story flow they need to know what is in the room they see, furniture, try to describe what it looks like. Does it have windows? Curtains? What colors? Otherwise they can say they laid down on the purple leopard skin velvet sofa, that to you is not there.. but since you did not describe the room then they really have no idea what is and is not in the room. Now in continuing the need for details, when describing yourself or other people we also need details. This is better Her hair was a pale golden color and fell to her shoulders in tight ringlets, her eyes were black as coal and cold as ice. Her skin was like cut marble pale and cool..she had on a flowing black dress that had a slit to her hip, and a deep v neck that showed off her round firm D cup breasts. Than this She has blonde hair and black eyes and had on a black dress. I know that I can not be the only one that thinks this way.. and one last thing.. when doing an adult scene details are still important. This She kissed him softly her lips pressed to his shyly.Her hands reaching to press her palms to his chest. Her black eyes locked on his blue ones. She steps backwards leading him to her bed without a word, the bed is a king size and it soft, almost to soft.It is covered in black silk sheets with several large body pillows. Not this She kissed him and led him to the bed. Do you see the difference details make? They pull the others into the story, when doing a text based RP like this there are no characters in a game to lend to the description of where they are so you have to make the scene for them in their mind. Try this if you wish, sit down and look at the room around you, then write down the details in a notepad or word document, then have a friend that has been in your room read it and see if they can tell that it is actually your room. The details make it more real.. I hope this is helpful and that it makes some of you understand why you need to add detail in the story. Good luck and have fun..
Thread: details,details,details..

Details are very important for a start a room can be used to describe the characters personality they walked in to the bedroom, the walls covered with rock band posters, the bed a half made mess and a pizza box sitting on the floor so you get this character is young without me even saying his age and you get that he is a slob and you get that he is most likely male lol. So all of that from the description which was pretty basic. Same as physical appearance, it surprises me that I have to always ask what my partners character will look like, the way they look, their name, to me I try and build personalities around these descriptions, which is what annoys me about getting a photo of some 25 y.o when the character in question is a single mother of 38, Melissa looked at her curvy yet tight body in the mirror, she was bigger than the women in the magazines but men still looked at her as she passed them in street, she thought about the young guy who hit on her yesterday, was he really out of her league? She put her long red hair up in a bun and decided that no, no, he wasn't out of her league and she would call him after all, she put on her black stilettos to highlight her killer legs and gave him a call. So in 2 lines you get a full picture of what they look like and how they feel about themselves. Also comes in handy when writing a love scene, what is my character making love to? Not just physically but emotionally? By bringing your character to life you will have a far more interesting and engaging RP and avoid the one liner trap which most of us hate.
Thread: details,details,details..

And this is when I say..... I 3 you both. XD Seriously, I do. I couldn't agree more about details and try very hard to paint the picture in both description of character and environment when I write. I suppose it comes down to the art of 'showing vs telling' to some degree. And it's a difficult art to master. I know I'm still striving to perfect it, though I do think I've improved it from how I used to be. But I digress. Point is, details paint that picture, set that tone, give you that feeling. They let you know what is going on around you, as if you were there...give depth to that character who at one point was 2-dimensional but now has personality and comes alive. It makes everything on the page seem real as if you are a part of the story and world you are reading about. Now that is the stuff I want to read. That is the stuff I want to become a part of. And I will forever strive to perfect my writing to be able to do all of that.
Thread: details,details,details..

Thanks for helping to make my point you 2 at least I know I am not alone on this.
Thread: details,details,details..

I love details, they can be so revealing, but just a word of balance. There can be too many and that can stifle the other player's imagination. I played with one guy who insisted on us being so specific about everything that it just broke up the flow. So yes I agree details are important, but in the right place and in the right amount.
Thread: details,details,details..

Names of places, names of people, names of objects all lend more heft to an abstract world. If your character's going to carry a pistol, have her carry a Beretta 9 millimeter. If your character's having a drink, give him, specifically, a Budweiser or a Screwdriver. Yes, some detail is just filler. It's probably irrelevant how a character's shanks press the backs of his thighs when he sits cross-legged on the ground, or whether she stirs her Darjeeling counterclockwise or clockwise. As for erotic writing She wrapped her lips around it, loving how it tasted and smelled. Great. But, how did it taste and smell? The essence of erotic writing is the details. Period. Without details, erotica is just vaguely sexual. It's the particulars that draw the reader into the scene and make the reader feel what the characters are feeling, both emotionally and tactually. I know this makes me sound all elitist, but I don't like the word smut . Smut suggests writing that's crude and terse, while erotica suggests nuanced writing that entices the reader through pacing and thoughtful detail.
Thread: details,details,details..

Thank you for bringing up the idea of writing versus throwing porn up on the screen. I think that is why I have grown so tired of 'smut'... it became an exercise in fulfilling the other person's sexual fantasies and fetishes, and the entire plot of the story was lost. There was no longer a plot. The characters all seemed the same, and any mention of motivation was met with 'because... SEX'. Of course, on this site if you say 'no smut' you get 'no role plays', heh. One exercise I use to find out if someone has potential as a writing partner for me is to look at their past posts. Is their grammar decent? Do they take the time to develop their character's appearance, motives, and actions? Is the dialogue believable? I've discovered that one of my pet peeves is when people use the exact same character, down to the name, in every single role play. And every role play is the same variation of the same worn out plot. Oh wait this wasn't a rant thread. Apologies. grins But thank you, Faelina, for bringing this topic up. And Loadstar? I'll be watching for your request thread.
Thread: Mass Trouble (Javorek-SweetSin)

See more Thank you. Nyxanna murmured before Holly left and the doctor came in. The older human poked and prodded the maiden with a variety of devices to check her vitals. Nyxanna was more or less okay a little shaken and a little dehydrated was all. So she was administered an IV treatment that was full of vitamins and minerals to help replenish what had been lost during her time in lockdown. After the doctor finished treating her and applied another dosage of medi-gel to the electrical burns around Nyx's neck, she left the Asari alone so that she could rest in the med-bay for the night. Not like it mattered whether she was left alone or not, she couldn't sleep. The med-bay bed was hard and uncomfortable the room itself had that sort of hospital smell that she hated, and this ship was so strange... it was always difficult for her to fall asleep in new places. She propped herself up a bit when she heard the doors hiss open. Then sat up all the way when she saw that it was her rescuer. The human looked so much different out of her heavy armor...much smaller, more delicate definitely a lot more feminine. It was hard to believe that such a tiny little thing had caused such a ruckus inside of the Cerberus facility. Everyone's gone? Nyxanna felt her heart tinge a bit with grief. The scientists she had hand picked were all very talented...it was hard to believe that so much potential had been snuffed out of existence. She took the files when they were offered to her, shaking her head a bit. Max and Tiff? No...not really. They're engaged...they seemed quite nice. Maxwell was much brighter than Tiffany...but I didn't have the heart to separate them and hired them both. Are you sure? Nyx glanced over the files she had already read them before when she had been holding interviews for positions in her lab. And even then, at a second glance, nothing seemed particularly odd. They could always be forgeries I suppose...Cerberus does have enough resources to create convincing identities.
Thread: Mass Trouble (Javorek-SweetSin)

Holly nods as she lets Nyx have the two files. Cerberus will go to the greatest lengths to turn someone into someone else. For all we know the couple was normal until Cerberus got ahold of them and either forced them into being traitors or they brainwashed them. Holly knew of Cerberus and knew them well, they would kill whoever they needed to get what they wanted. We're going to try hacking some of the Cerberus networks to see if we can come up with an answer. Depending on what we find, it'll either be a rescue mission or a man hunt to find these two. Holly steps back, putting her hands behind her back. If you're not up for sleeping in the med bay, there are dorms on the level above us. The beds are bigger and comfier, if you're looking for more privacy, there's always my room. It's secluded and quiet, I'm not in it much so you're more than welcome to use it. I will probably be in the cargo bay. Holly leaves the offer up to Nyx before walking back out of the med bay, if she needed to find the redhead she could find her in the cargo bay on the lower level.
Thread: Mass Trouble (Javorek-SweetSin)

Nyxanna nodded a bit as Holly told her about what would happen next. She hoped that Max and Tiff weren't really Cerberus operatives...but one could never be certain in this day and age. Cerberus was growing frighteningly strong and bold in their moves. The galaxy was becoming restless with rumors of Reapers and Collectors. While it was mostly just speculation at this point, Nyx was content to just work on her research and keep her head buried in the sand. Who knows, perhaps her amp would be vital to an upcoming war. Or maybe it would just help armies stifle terrorist groups like Cerberus and Terra Nova. The maiden was developing something so revolutionary for all biotics it might be even bigger than the L5 implants! I...perhaps your room would be nice...as long as you have a computer there I can use. The asari said before the human left. If the captain of this ship wasn't going to use her personal quarters, Nyxanna would love to get into them in order to continue working on her amp in private. There were just some more calculations she needed to get down...if only she could figure out a proper formula for humans. She thought she had had the answer in her lab, but alas, it still was not perfected. And so the asari bumbled her way about the ship. Human vessels were more or less all designed the same. It didn't take her long to find the central elevator that took her up to the captain's quarters where she sat down at the desk and began to work.
Thread: Mass Trouble (Javorek-SweetSin)

Holly goes down to the cargo bay where she sits down and works on some of her weapons. She picked up a few mods before the rescue mission and never got a chance to apply them to her assault rifle and sniper. Although she didn't use her guns a lot, she did need them in case she was feeling off with her biotics. Hours pass as Holly works on her weapons then she heads up to her room. She figured Nyx was inside so she walks in and finds her at the computer. Hard to tear you away from your work huh? She asks as she walks over to the closet and steps inside. Are you still working on the amp? She calls out as she begins to remove her casual wear and slides on some shorts and a wife beater to sleep in. Rumors had it that you tried the amp on a Krogen and it killed him, is that true? Like he began to bleed from his eyes then his own biotic rage ripped him to shreds. It was a horrible rumor, but science nowadays was more dangerous with all the energy needs and tools needed to produce such inventions. Tell me, what do you hope to achieve by perfecting this amp? She asks since some would sell it for personal gain and some would try to make a difference with it.
Thread: Mass Trouble (Javorek-SweetSin)

Hmm? Oh...yes... Nyx hadn't even noticed that Holly had come into the room until the other woman had spoken directly to her. She blinked a few times, then rubbed her blue eyes a bit. She'd been staring at the screen for so long, her eyes were starting to get all tired. Hearing Holly rustling about and getting changed, she didn't turn around in her chair, trying her best to offer the human some privacy. That was...an isolated incident. Nyxanna said after a moment. She didn't do well with death. She knew that accidents and miscalculations happened people died it was part of science. But the way that Krogran had bled out and torn himself to shreds...it had been absolutely horrible and had made her want to pull the plug on her amp all together. I was hoping that I could make this amp work for all species, but that apparently is not the case. Many people think that Asari and humans share a common ancestor and that is why our physiologies are so similar. It would explain why the amp works for Asari almost perfectly and for humans decently. Humans are slightly more variable...that is why my amp is not safe to use on your species yet. The side-effects are not as bad as the Krogan's, but I'd hate to have anyone suffer such an adverse effect. Nyx tried her best to stifle a yawn. She actually realized that she was quite tired...but didn't wish to go to sleep yet. Not now, not when she was so close... Though she always felt like this, always felt like she was so close and yet never made any progress. I'm sure you've heard rumors of Collectors attacking human colonies...its only a matter of time before they start to target other species. I want to help... Nyxanna wasn't much of a fighter. She was a talented biotic but she preferred to be in a lab rather than on a battlefield.
Thread: Mass Trouble (Javorek-SweetSin)

Holly nodded as she adjusted her wife beater, Krogen aren't exactly known for their biotics, but I guess if you could get it to work on them then that would be a feat worth bragging about. Holly walks over to her bed and pulls back the covers, bending over to grab one of the pillows and tossing an extra pillow to the other side. I don't take up much space, you are more than welcome to sleep on the other side. Holly was just naturally nice when not in battle, though in battle she could be a major bitch. I heard about the collectors, even read some top secret documents on which colonies they've attacked so far. It's unknown why they're doing it, but there's a crew investigating it. Of course she was referring to Shepherds crew. You can keep working, although you should probably get some rest. I will set you up with a more permanent place to sleep tomorrow. After looking back over at Nyx, Holly crawls into her large bed and lays back, looking up at the ceiling as she always did. She slides her hands behind her head while getting lost in her thoughts, the noise of Nyx working on her amp fading out into silence.
Thread: Mass Trouble (Javorek-SweetSin)

Alright...thank you. I should not be any trouble...I do not really sleep much. Nyx nodded her thanks to the human and then turned back around in her chair. It was true that she was used to pulling all-nighters when it came to her research. Though...it appeared that her stamina was lacking after having spent two weeks in a holding cell. She could only stay up for about an hour longer before her eyelids became so heavy that she could barely keep them open. She sighed softly, so tired that she thought that she was just going to fall asleep in the elevator if she had to go back downstairs. And even then, she lacked the mental capacity to navigate her way about the alien ship at the moment. Well...the Captain had offered her her bed and had assured her it would be no trouble. What was the worst that could happen? They were just going to go to sleep after all. And so Nyxanna got out of her chair was quietly as she cook. She stripped off her labcoat and under clothes until she was left in nothing but a bra and panties for bed. Then she crawled in next to Holly. Although the young maiden started far off towards the edge of the bed, she eventually had managed to roll over until finally she was nestled up against the Captain. Her arms wrapped about the redhead as though she were a nice, warm, stuffed animal.
Thread: Mass Trouble (Javorek-SweetSin)

Holly didn't even know Nyx crawled into the bed until she felt something rub up against her side. Huh? Torn from her thoughts, Holly looks at Nyx and was about to push her off until she saw how comfortable she looked and content. Damn. She mutters before laying her head back into the pillow and looking up at the ceiling again. The captain always got lost in her own thoughts, thinking about the past and different paths she could have taken. One path being Cerberus, the Illusive Man coming to her, or more like summoning her and giving her an offer to join Cerberus. He had promised her wealth, power and the chance to create her own crew. Some would be surprised to know that Holly really did consider the idea, she was moving up the ranks slowly in the Alliance, mainly due to her small size and first impressions she made on higher ranks. Yeah she was a whole five foot four but she is a tough little she-devil. But, in the end she stuck with the Alliance and it turned out to be the best decision she ever made, now being she has her own ship, power and even a few dollars saved away. Yep, it all worked out for Holly, in some ways. After laying in the bed for what seemed like hours but was only minutes, Holly finally falls asleep and while in her slumber she ends up curling up against Nyx. She had her back to the blue woman, her ass firmly pressed against her crotch and her back against the womans breasts. Nyx was much taller than Holly, which made it a better fit for the smaller girl.
Thread: Mass Trouble (Javorek-SweetSin)

The asari maiden just about purred in her sleep as she felt Holly's body press more firmly into her own. She leaned forward, burying her face into the human's silky hair and nuzzling Holly as she dreamt. She always did find human hair quite interesting, as well as their skin. Asari skin felt more like soft leathers...while humans felt like flower petals. At least, the females did. What a strange species humans there was so much sexual dimorphism. Oh and Nyx had a tendency to sleep with her hands cupping breasts. It was just...a habit, not like she meant to do it on purpose. Mmm... Nyxanna murmured as she slowly began to wake up at around 5am, ship time. She didn't want to move, she was so comfortable and there was something so warm beside her and her hands were full of squishy, warm flesh... What...? Blue eyes blinked opened, startled. This wasn't her bed in her lab! Nor was this the cell on the Cerberus station. And she was...fondling Holly in her sleep. Her cheeks turned dark purple as she blushed, trying her best to move her hands and back away without waking up the human.