Thread: The Pleasure Slave (constructive criticism PLEASE)

The next morning Taal was beginning to reconsider his initial response to her command. Hed had a hell of a night sleeping. Once again he was hungry, thirsty and in need of the facilities. Kalra had laid out food onto the table, which he couldnt reach. He ran his hands through his long hair and sighed. Hed tried to rip it off, but the collar, underneath the soft leather, was made of a lightweight but incredibly strong metal. It could only be opened by Kalras touch. He wasnt the kind to just take orders. Thats why hed had his own ship he was captain he made the rules. Apparently, things change. He was no longer in charge of his life not for the time being. Cringing, Taal slipped the vest off, shrugged his shoulders and waited for Kalra to return. When Kalra woke up she glanced into Taals room. He was sitting in the middle of the bed bare-chested and stony faced. She opened the connecting door and walked in. Come to the edge of the bed. She instructed. Taal cocked one of his eyebrows. Its quite safe. You can come to the edge of the bed but not leave it. Cringing inwardly, he slid to the edge of the bed letting his legs hang over the side, careful not to let his neck cross the barrier. Kalra approached the bed chewing her lower lip shed never touched man before. Taal narrowed his eyes. Hed already noticed that little nervous habit of hers. Kalra let one of her hands touch his shoulder and slide down to his chest grazing the nipple. He felt himself harden instantly. Hed been determined to not feel anything, to hate her, but his damn body betrayed him. Many women had touched him, but never a young lady who was so unsure, it was highly arousing. Kalra let herself explore his chest and arms with a feathery touch. She marveled at his strength, at the soft smooth skin over the steel of his arms. She let her fingers play with the short curly hairs on his chest as she looked up to see his face. He had lounged back, his arms behind him holding him up, his eyes closed. Yesterday you took my breast into your mouth. Why? His head shot up. He hadnt expected conversation. What kind of a question is that? You liked it. I felt your nipple harden, heard you moan. Well, since I have no knowledge of the happenings between a man and a woman, how else am I to learn without asking? She answered, a trifle annoyed that he hadnt answered her question. Because I wanted to, I am accustomed to doing what I want. I like the way women taste. I like hearing them moan, knowing that I am the one who caused them to. Since you had on a dress I had to content myself with tasting you through it. He bit out. So you can gain pleasure by giving pleasure. Interesting, I like touching you. She moved in closer, insinuating herself between his legs, reveling in their strength. Leaning in she closed her mouth over a nipple. She heard Taal groan. She flicked her tongue over it and sucked deeply. Then she switched and licked the other one. She felt his muscles tighten as he groaned again. Do you like that? Kalra asked. No. He lied through clenched teeth. I think you do. That was the same noise I made when you did that to me. Turning to walk out she took in his form again. Ill turn off the sensors on the bed. Behave. Pacing the room, boredom quickly set in again. He couldnt believe how hed reacted. He was master of himself. That little minx may hold his freedom for the time, but she didnt control his body. He had to control his body damn thing had betrayed him twice now. He decided to exercise till his body could no longer react to her presence. He exercised as best as his limited means allowed. Working himself to exhaustion, sweat pouring from him, he finally stopped, took a bath and slid into the sheets of the bed to sleep.