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RE Versatile Male Here. Play with me? MM Mail said Here is a bump for you You're an awesome role payer, and I hope our own role play lasts a long long time! Click to expand... Thank you You're not bad yourself lolol, me toooo.
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RE Versatile Male Here. Play with me? MM I like the 'Hard Work' picture. B-But I'm a submissiveuke. DX
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RE Versatile Male Here. Play with me? MM Yami said I like the 'Hard Work' picture. B-But I'm a submissiveuke. DX Click to expand... No worries 3 I'm versatile. We can try something else, if you'd like.
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RE Versatile Male Here. Play with me? MM NEW PICTURES 3 Pictures added new characters.
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Thread: Love Birds

On a dark night, the moon was out in full, the stars were out and in the middle of the sky a dark figure moved amongst the stars. This figure as big as a hous, blacker than night and with great mone spikes moving along its spine was a 6,000 year old dragon. It soars over an unknown city and begins to light down on the tallest tower, as it does so it turns into a man, a warrior really with a chiseled face, and a crimson scar over his right eye, and raggedy brown hair. Around his well toned body built from millenium with a sword his cloak billows around him, standing 6'6 he was tall and as a Dragon Knight he felt safe and secure, even in an era of war.
Thread: Surprise for the Babysitter (me x ffgamer19)

Normally, I find a bath to be relaxing. That night not so much. My parents had gone out to celebrate their anniversary and hired a babysitter. It wasn't the first time my parents had hired her for this I didn't know it at the time but they were very sexually active people and couldn't really indulge at home in-case they woke me up. In a way, it was the babysitter's fault for making my bath a bit less comfortable than normal she was, to be blunt, drop-dead sexy and my wandering mind had conjured up all kinds of images of her while I soaked, leaving me with one hell of a hard-on. Now that may seem simply annoying to some of you but I'm somewhat... gifted in that area. At full-mast, my cock reaches somewhere around the fourteen-inch mark never bothered to actually measure it and about two and a half inches in diameter. Stick that on a fourteen year old boy who was a bit short for his age and you might understand why an erection for me is a bit more than annoying. I couldn't leave the bathroom like that since I'd have to walk past the doorway to the den where my babysitter was watching a movie to get to my room. So I did what any teenage boy with hormones raging more than a psychotic berserker who just found out his wife was screwing half the clan would do. I don't know how long it took me to 'work out the frustration' but I knew it was a temporary measure at best I can recover surprisingly quickly and it would only take a few mental images of my babysitter to make all that work go to waste. After cleaning up the shower, emptying the bath and drying myself off, I wrapped a towel around my waist and headed for my room. Out of curiosity, I glanced into the den to see what the babysitter was watching. Name Erik Reilly Age 14 Height 5' Hair Dark and reaching to his waist Eyes One green, one blue
Thread: Surprise for the Babysitter (me x ffgamer19)

I was in the living room I was laying back on the couch slanted down as I watched the dvd that I had brought from work. I had waiting 20 minutes after I had sent Erik for his bath and bed before I put the dvd on and put it on low and even then I had waited another 10 minutes before sliding my hand down my skirt hem. I had babysat Erik before and everytime I brought a different film to watch and to this day he had never woken up as I watched it but today I was unaware that he had, had an extra long bath so as he came out to say goodnight I had my hand down my skirt one long finger sliding into my pussy as on screen you would see a male with what I thought was a large 9 inch cock begin to tease the girls pussy on the screen. Name Aiya Leonheart Age19 Height 54 Hairstrawberry blond to her shoulders Eyes ale blue
Thread: Surprise for the Babysitter (me x ffgamer19)

As I looked in, I was shocked at what I saw on the screen - Aiya was watching a porn movie. I couldn't see Aiya but presumed she was lying down on the couch the back of which was facing the door, but that barely registered in my mind I was so absorbed by what was happening on-screen. I could feel blood surging into my cock and it started to tent the front of the towel I was wearing. I knew that the guy in the movie had an above-average sized cock, but I could also tell that it was well-below my own absurd size. I stood in the doorway, staring at the screen, as all of this went through my head.
Thread: Surprise for the Babysitter (me x ffgamer19)

I was quickly getting into the movie as well as my pussy started to get wetter and wetter and it wasn't long before you could hear as I slipped my fingers into my virgin pussy causing small noise due to how wet my pussy was after a few moments of fingering myself I was moaning out lightly my eyes closed in pleasure
Thread: Surprise for the Babysitter (me x ffgamer19)

Hearing noise coming from the couch, I slowly walked over to it and saw Aiya stretched out on the couch, eyes glued to the screen and one hand between her legs. She hadn't noticed me yet, too absorbed in the action on-screen, but the sight of her sliding her fingers into her very wet, by the sound of it pussy just made my cock swell even faster, forcing open the towel I was wearing before sticking up almost vertical, a small drop of pre-cum forming at the tip.
Thread: Surprise for the Babysitter (me x ffgamer19)

Aiya closed her eyes as she began to feel her climax building quickly her panties were completely soaked in all her juices as her moans got louder and louder as she bucked her hips plunging her fingers in deep and hard as she cried out in orgasm
Thread: Surprise for the Babysitter (me x ffgamer19)

Aiya cried out as I walked around the side of the couch her head was on. If I hadn't been harder than ever from seeing the porn video on the TV and Aiya working herself I sure as hell was now after seeing her cum. I don't know why I did what I did next. Maybe a part of me realised something before the rest of my brain caught up, or maybe just the hormones was what caused that out-of-nowhere burst of bravado not that I'm a timid kid normally I'm just a touch on the quiet side. Enjoying yourself, Aiya? I asked, standing there totally naked with my giant prick pointing towards the ceiling and feeling hard enough to cut steel with.
Thread: Surprise for the Babysitter (me x ffgamer19)

I was panting on the couch the movie still going but my eyes were shut as I slowly recovered from my intense orgasm no idea I had just been watched by the very kid I was meant to be looking after. When I heard him speak I jumped opening my eyes wh-what are you doing upI asked worried at how much he had seen and by the sight of his cock I guessed quite a long time
Thread: Surprise for the Babysitter (me x ffgamer19)

Spent a bit longer in the bathroom than usual, I said, had a bit of extra 'business' to take care of. I squeezed the base of my cock to show just what I meant by 'business' as I moved to stand right in-front of her, the head of my thick shaft level with her eyes. I was wondering what was going through her head after seeing the size of my cock, considering I was considerably larger than the professional porn star in the movie.
Thread: Plot Craving [One off search]

B u m p
Thread: Plot Craving [One off search]

Its a really interesting plot sadly i am not in a dominating mood right now. But i wish you luck on your search and if I do get into a dominating mood i may take you up on this RP.
Thread: Plot Craving [One off search]

Thank you very much Awh, that's a shame
Thread: Humiliated daughter/granddaughter

Thank you for all of your notes. i am no longer in the market for a Grandfather. i lucked out and found a very skilled one.
Thread: Humiliated daughter/granddaughter

catch me on naughty.brainyahoo.com. I am looking for real hot daughter.
Thread: Schlock Horror Game! (F looking for M!)

I'm sorry. My brain just... stopped working at Vampirella. PM and a bump.
Thread: Schlock Horror Game! (F looking for M!)

Bumping with my personal favorite take on Elvira.
Thread: Adopt me?  (M seeking dom female or dom futa)

RE Looking for a mistress. Bump because I edited a few things.
Thread: Adopt me?  (M seeking dom female or dom futa)

RE Looking for a Parter Female or Futa please Bump.
Thread: Adopt me?  (M seeking dom female or dom futa)

Bump with new format. Hopefully get some PMs this time.
Thread: Adopt me?  (M seeking dom female or dom futa)

Bump. Still looking.
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

Bump Not a promising start
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

Bump Herro?
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

free bump!
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

Yay free bump. From a banned person. That's like getting a shout-out from a convict. Maybe s
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

Bump again
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

And that makes 3 semesters down..
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

A bump in the name of science .
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

, ! Hm... Someone?
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

Bump again Now that summer has started
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

Oh Christ summer is boring. Especially since that whole internship thing fell through.
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

Summer jobs are a pain. Glad to have that one over. Free tip for the day MAKE SURE to have really comfortable workboots in construction jobs.
Thread: School Year Entertainment (M for F)

Fuh... My Search for Something to Do has led me here. Which bodes poorly for my attempt at No-Fap October.
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Bumping. I'll keep up my persistence.
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Hm. Had no more PM box space, for some reason s
Thread: Assassin's Creed (Group SRP)

Hmm instead of stabbing the 'victims' with blades... perhaps they stab them with something else? More seriously, I would be interested in participating, I am open to just about any sort of role, so long as I am not dead within a few posts lol
Thread: Assassin's Creed (Group SRP)

And just like that, Sel gave me the idea I need... and it's not even related! Three Assassins are given Recruits to train until they are ready for the trials of becoming true Assassins. However, admist the training, each Mentor and Recruit's relationship deepens to something more than just brotherlysisterly love. We can expand the plot beyond the graduation of the Recruits, having fun during missions and other moments.
Thread: Assassin's Creed (Group SRP)

Hm... I might be interested, but a question Have an era in mind?
Thread: Assassin's Creed (Group SRP)

Lord Dakol said Hm... I might be interested, but a question Have an era in mind? Click to expand... Up in the air until we have three females.
Thread: Assassin's Creed (Group SRP)

What about a situation more like the animus userhandler one from the games. The assassins would be put through the training simulation like the current multiplayer, I guess under the supervision of handlers or more experienced assassins... perhaps with the option of the handlers tailoring the simulation and entering into it. This would solve the setting problem and let people get creative within their pairings, at least. And a greater emphasis on seduction, infiltration, and poisoning as opposed to stabbing might be helpful. Say, the ultimate idea is to train someone to take advantage of the end of Brotherhood and get themselves involved with Desmond's group...
Thread: Assassin's Creed (Group SRP)

Moved.
Thread: Assassin's Creed (Group SRP)

Hey there, if you are still looking for some female characters, i've got one i would love to play in this.
Thread: I would like to know

I would like to know, from everyone that reads my posts andor threads I have made with other people. What do you think of my writing style? I'm slightly changing it as I go because I'm still working on how I use detail. but I need to know, what do you think? What do you think I need to improve on? What am I doing right and what am I doing wrong.
Thread: I would like to know

Alright, the one thing that stuck out the most is the fact that you repeat yourself frequently. This can, unfortunately, sometimes be misinterpreted as illiteracy. Also, cut back on the similes and type, not like how you speak, but how you want others to read your work.
Thread: I would like to know

Okay thanks
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I would actually disagree on the typing as you speak. If you can get a very good conversational story tone then you are very likely to draw people in. Though I think you also need to step back and and think more about your word choice as you tend to start every sentence the same way. It disrupts the narrative. You should try to start each sentence in a paragraph with a different word, not a hard rule of thumb but a good one.
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I'll be honest, I only read the first paragraph and one thing I noticed is the super fast pace of the stoytelling. Be more descripted. Imagine your readers as blind people. Make them see the picture without them seeing it. The way you write, it's like you're just showing the movie sequence and not showing the movie itself. Constructive criticism only my friend
Thread: I would like to know

Thanks for all the good advice. I'll take this into concentration. But do also read my other work. That little thing I wrote was just some little blur that I work. Go though my threads and tell me what you think. Thanks
Thread: I would like to know

I tried to edit your three paragraphs down to a more digestible form. I couldn't do it. The most important advice I can give you at this point in time is write every post and then read it to yourself out loud. As the others have said, you have lots of repetition, poor use of poetic devices mostly simile, and for heaven's sake typos. After reading it out loud, edits should be apparent. If it reads satisfactorily to you, run it through a spell check. Many players consider this an issue of manners. It is unlikely you will put much care into your posts if you don't even bother to spell check. Reading other player's posts help to some extent. Form RP posts tend to be individualistic and conform to different conventions. Still, reading is the cornerstone to solid writing.
Thread: I would like to know

I have the problem with typos. Thank you for your advice.
Thread: I would like to know

If there's one thing I notice, it's that you don't really put a lot of detail into your own character's state of emotion. You seem to simply state what they're doing and not really emphasizing how it's making them reactfeel. From my own experience, this creates a lack of dimensionality in a character. Just my two cents.
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I'll try to do that more, but it's hard when I don't get that back from my partners at times. Thank you
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I'll let you know in a bit. Wish to narrow down the field to any period of time?
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Uh...not really sure, just either role play with me and see some things and then go from there.
Thread: I would like to know

Alright. May I ask if your stated dislike for playing older partners means that you wish to play the younger males vignette in your list? Also, are there any minks you currently have for mm that one should know about?
Thread: I would like to know

When it comes to girls, I'm always the younger one because I can't stand being with guys that are younger than me. When I play males I can do both because I know what a girl wants when it comes to sexual role plays and I read a lot of yaoi
Thread: I would like to know

If this is going to turn into a discussion where you guys are determining an RP, please take it to PMs instead as it no longer is pertinent to ConCrit then. Thanks.
Thread: I would like to know

I'm not sure how it got that way, but it was suppose to be for people to comment on my writing. I should have my partners see this thread.
Thread: Auctioned In Hell [ Google & SugarPlumCoatedGun ]

Lucifuge, the one who obscured the light, one of the thirty six High Dukes of the Pit, only behind six Demon kings, one of whom was of course Lucifer., was in a terrible mood. The constant was with the Celestial realm was going well and there had been several recent and promising victories that his fellow Dukes were using as evidence that they were growing ever closer to a final victory against angelic kind. However his own legions had been at the front of a recent counter assault and quite a large number of the demons who served him had fallen when one particularly skilled angelic warrior had charged the lines, the rumor was that her lover had been left behind and she had attempted to rescue him, how a single warrior could literally decimate an entire legion, a hundred of his warriors slaughtered, was beyond him and in his rage another twenty had been executed with an immense amount of torture in order to ensure that the same mistakes would not be repeated. The rage was only compounded by the knowledge that the warrior had been taken alive, not by his men where he could easily have claimed her for his own entertainment but by the warriors of a rival Duke and now she was to be auctioned openly in front of any demon who was able to reach the site. By the time word of what was to happen had reached him the auction was only moments from starting and with an angry snarl Lucifuge had left his tower and flown with all haste towards the site of the auction, arriving just in time to see her wings spread wide and more of her body was revealed to those around her, a massive cheer spreading through the assembled demons. Unwilling to land among the dirty and base crowds he landed on the stage, his wings folding around his shirtless chest in an improvised cloak. Before anyone could react, before anyone could yell for guards to attempt to remove him from the auction stage Lucifuge was standing before the captured angel, forcing her to look into his eyes with fingers beneath her chin. She truly is a lovely sight. He praised her with a small sneer, wondering how she could have felled so many of his men before she was brought down. Five thousand pieces of platinum and a hundred precious gems if you give her to me right now and end this farce of an auction, you know that there isn't anyone here who can match me. It was probably beyond what she was worth but he had a personal stake in this one and didn't feel like letting anyone else get their hands on her. But first... why don't you show the assembled filth where her crucifix is located.
Thread: Auctioned In Hell [ Google & SugarPlumCoatedGun ]

Lucifuge had seen this coming, he had known she wouldn't want to have her crucifix exposed to a demon, especially not such a large crowd of demons before her. Well it hardly mattered because he would see it soon enough when he had her stripped of any clothing at all and took his time to humiliate her. He knew that even his mere touch had to be painful, touching her had caused his hand to itch a little bit but the mild discomfort he had felt couldn't have compared to the pain that she was in from the same simple contact. Oh he would do a great deal more to her soon enough, such a simple touch causing her a massive amount of pain would seem like nothing compared to the pain she would feel at his touch later on, he would touch her in ways that would bring a blush to the face of even the most vicious and perverse succubus. She is a warrior you know. He pointed out with a sigh of annoyance, watching demons move in from the sides of the stage to prevent her escape, he really didn't want to have his property damaged by their attempts to subdue her run and he knew that if he didn't want her in a great deal of pain he would need to take a more direct form of action. If you damage her I will be quite disappointed. He told them in a tone cold enough to make it clear that should he find even a bruise they would all be suffering a great deal. Under his breath he murmured a few arcane syllables and raised a hand, before it appearing a collar of thick dark iron with a chain of a similar material leading from it to his other hand, red runes covering both of them. The collar was something he had picked up a few years before and the spell he had murmured was a way to summon it to him. It had been purchased as more of a collectors item then anything he saw a practical use for, but not there was an immediate one, built into it was an immensely powerful spell that would subdue the powers of anyone whom it was put on. Moving swiftly, knowing that if she had half a chance she would kill the demons who held her, Lucifuge knelt by her and slipped the collar over her neck, watching it snap shut and tighten around her skin until it was a snug fit, the runes glowing brightly for a moment before going dark as they did their work. You can get off her now. He instructed those holding her in place. That collar should take care of her strength at least until I get her home.
Thread: Auctioned In Hell [ Google & SugarPlumCoatedGun ]

Ariel turned her head and whipped the blood from her mouth onto the shoulder of one of the demon's who was practically hoping her off the ground. He was so much taller then her that she struggled to remain on her tip toes. He grunted at her with displeasure as she did so, but she simply glared at him. At least he knows a thing or two about angels. The girl murmured in annoyance. Those blue eyes turned on the man in front of her for a moment and she realised she was casting a spell of some sorts when a collar started to materialize in his hand. Her body tensed and she hissed at the demon who began to get closer to her. Stay away from me, foul beast!! She screamed and started to wriggle around, her head turning from side to side. It took only meer seconds for the collar to be clipped and secured around her neck and once it was on it seemed to make her a little tired and the blond stayed still for a moment, blinking as her physical power left her. H-Hey! Ariel stuttered nervously as the two demons on either side of her began to reluctantly loosen their grip on her and set her down onto the stage. Instantly her hands moved up to wrap around the collar and tug while she made a noise that could only sound like struggle. Get this thing of of me at once! She commanded, snapping her head back to glare at the male in front of her. There was no way she was willingly going 'home' with him. If she had her full strength she could have easily darted into the crowd and ran or even flew away now though, she just felt sluggish and weak, like a insignificant human. The thought equally disgusted her as if she were being called a demon. Ariel placed her hands on her hips stubbornly and glanced around at the demons who had become extremely close to the stage. They were all pushing and shoving and reaching out for her to get a better look or maybe even a touch that would surely put them through exstacy. The woman made a disgusted 'ugh' sound as she looked down around her feet, occasionally stepped to the side cautiously so that no one would be able to touch her this almost distracted her from the man stood before her.