Period 4 Writing 学会地点介绍的英文写作。 把握介绍地点写作的要点和注意事项。 同步写作 介绍地点的写作 单句填空 1.Your car is out of date. you had better for a new one. (调换)it 2.He earned a little money by serving as a model to artists who could not pay for a (职业的) model. 3.For further information, please (联络)our local office. 4.This MP5 is really dear. I cannot (买得起)to buy it. 5.He (幸存)in the flood, but unluckily his wife was killed. 【 答 案 】 1.exchange 4.afford 5.survived 2.professional 3.contact 介绍地点的写作 最近,某中学英语报向学生征文,题为“New Look of My Hometown”。请你根据以下内容提示,用英语为该报写一篇短文, 介绍家乡的情况并发表自己的看法。 1.气候温暖多雨; 概况 2.近年经济发展迅速,城市面貌焕然一新,高楼林立,道路 宽阔,环境优美; 3.人民生活条件不断改善,不少人搬进新居,拥有私家车 你 法 的 看 家乡人民将更加努力工作…… 注意:1.可适当增加细节,使短文连贯、通顺; 2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 3.词数 100 左右。 参考词汇:economy 经济 New Look of My Hometown My hometown lies in the east of Fujian, with a river flowing through. 1.命题分析 介绍某一地区就是对该地区的大致状况进行描述,向人们展 示该地区的地貌特征、风土人情和历史文化等。 2.布局谋篇 写此类文章应注意以下几点: (1)内容一般包括该地区的位置、面积、人口、历史、气候、特 产等,也可以适当地融入人文风貌,简单介绍当地的文化遗址、民 间风俗、生活方式等。但是一定要抓住该地区的主要特色,这样 才能给读者留下深刻的印象。 (2)要遵循一定的写作顺序。描述该地区的位置时,首先要找好中 心点,再由近及远,也可先总体后局部,或按照一定的时间顺序或 空间顺序。描述时可以适当使用过渡性连接词。 (3)可以适当运用比喻句式。形象的比喻可以给读者展示一幅生 动的画面。 (4)常用短语和句式: be located / situated in; lie in; in the north of / to the east of be famous for / well-known as... be just like...; look like...; can be compared to... It covers an area of / about / over... square kilometers; Its area is... square kilometers It has a population of about / over...; Its population is... The climate is...; The average temperature is... The coldest months are...; It has many places of interest such as...; They make the city a tourist attraction both at home and abroad. 3.写作模板 My hometown lies in .It is a beautiful city.The climate here is .There are all the year round, which makes it look . In recent years, the economy of the city .The city is taking on a new look with .People’s living conditions are improving day by day.Many people have moved . I’m sure people in my hometown will . 4.词汇翻译 (1)位于 (2)温暖多雨 (3)看起来像个大花园 (4)呈现新面貌 (5)搬进新居 (6)使家乡更漂亮 【答案】(1)lie in (2)be warm with plenty of rain (3)look like a large garden (4)take on a new look (5)move into new houses / apartments (6)make the hometown more beautiful 5.翻译句子 (1)那里四季如春,看起来像个大花园。 (2)近年来,该城市的经济发展迅速。 (3)许多人搬进新居,有些人甚至拥有私家车。 【答案】 (1)It’s like spring there all the year round, which makes it look like a large garden. (2)In recent years, the economy of the city has been developing rapidly. (3)Many people have moved into new apartments and some even have cars of their own. New Look of My Hometown My hometown lies in the east of Fujian, with a river flowing through. It is a lively city. ①The climate here is warm with plenty of rain. There are green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere all the year round, ②which makes it look like a large garden. In recent years, the economy of the city has been developing rapidly. The city is ③taking on a new look with high buildings, wide roads and better surroundings. People’s living conditions are improving day by day. Many people have moved into new apartments and some even have cars of their own. I’m sure people in my hometown will still work harder to ④make my hometown more beautiful and our life happier. 文章介绍我的家乡新貌,条理清晰,层次分明,要点齐全,言 简意赅。文中运用了许多恰当的表达,如:①The climate here is warm with plenty of rain“这儿气候温和,雨水充足”;②非限 制性定语从句“...which makes it look like a large garden”, 使用得体;③动词短语 taking on a new look“呈现新面貌”; ④...make my hometown more beautiful and our life happier “……使我的家乡更加漂亮,我们的生活更加幸福”等,使文章添 色不少。 Ⅰ.语法填空 A recent survey 1. (show) that a quarter of 2. local workforce is 3. (employ).For some, the rent for the house is too high for them 4. (afford) and some are even 5. (starve).6. (fortunate), the government has taken measures to solve the problem. 【答案】1.shows 2.the 3.unemployed 4.to afford 5.starving 6.Fortunately Ⅱ.话题写作 先将下面几个句子翻译成英语,然后连成一篇 50 词左右的小 短文。 1.到目前为止,在一些社会组织的帮助下,很多失业工人很幸运 地在郊区找到了工作。 2.这听起来相当令人鼓舞。 3.他们相信只要努力工作就能买得起自己的房子。 【参考范文】 So far,with the help of some social organizations,a great many unemployed workers have been fortunate to find their jobs in the suburbs.It sounds pretty encouraging.They believe they can afford to buy their own houses as long as they work hard. 本课时核心部分是“介绍地点的写作”,思维导图如下: Ⅰ.完形填空(核心素养:思维品质)(建议用时 15') When I began my high school years, I was quite interested in biology. I read lots of books of my father’s about animals, and I learned so much about such things that I was very 1 with myself. One Sunday afternoon, I was 2 with friends about animals. I said that the whale was a mammal (哺乳动物), but they 3 . Finally, we turned to a 4 for help. I knew I was 5 , so I hoped that the teacher could 6 I was right. My friends were eager(渴望的) for an opposite answer. We asked her 7 the whale was a mammal. “No, the whale is a fish,” she said without a moment’s hesitation(犹 豫). You could have knocked me down with a feather. My 8 was hurt, and of course I lost the 9 , but that wasn’t the main reason I was too 10 to speak. I still knew I was right, which 11 the teacher was wrong. Not only was she wrong, 12 she was completely ignorant (不了解的) about something that I thought was 13 knowledge. But she was my teacher and had taught for a long time. Everyone 14 her and no one else thought she could be wrong. Before that, I hadn’t thought that grown-ups could be 15 . And this 16 shaped the way I viewed people as I grew up. Whenever I found that if anyone treated another person 17 too much respect and admiration,I thought, “ That’s 18 . ” From then on,I had no 19 for authority (权威)blindly. Through this matter,I got an idea that everybody has his 20 , even he is a great man. 【语篇解读】再伟大的人也会犯错误,我们不应该盲目地相 信所谓的“权威”。 1.A.angry B.satisfied C.interested D.disappointed 2.A.meeting B.working C.arguing(争论) D.staying 3.A.trusted B.disagreed C.accepted D.agreed 4.A.worker B.scientist C.farmer D.teacher 5.A.clever B.right C.incorrect D.stupid 6.A.prove B.find C.promise D.hope 7.A.how B.why C.if D.when 8.A.stomach B.mind C.pride D.leg 9.A.argument B.game C.result D.test 10.A.foolish B.eager C.serious D.surprised 11.A.meant B.suggested C.admitted D.decided 12.A.and B.but C.as D.or 13.A.special B.normal C.correct D.common 14.A.missed B.liked C.believed D.knew 15.A.wrong B.interesting C.sad D.happy 16.A.nearly B.properly C.greatly D.mainly 17.A.with B.for C.on D.to 18.A.wonderful B.silly C.fortunate D.true 19.A.idea B.respect C.choice D.question 20.A.energy B.patience C.shortcoming D.trouble 【答案与解析】 1.B “我”读了许多关于动物的书,了解了很多知识,所以“我” 对自己感到很满意。 2.C 根据文章内容可知,“我”和朋友就鲸是哺乳动物还是鱼类 这一问题发生了争论。 3.B 根据语境可知,朋友不同意“我”的观点,因此用 disagree。 4.D 于是我们去找老师请教。下文多处出现 teacher。 5.B “我”知道自己的观点是正确的。 6.A “我”希望老师可以证明“我”的观点是正确的。 7.C 我们问老师鲸是不是哺乳动物。 8.C 老师的回答让“我”的自尊心受伤。 9.A 当然“我”输掉了这场辩论。 10.D “我”对老师的回答惊讶得说不出话来。 11.A “我”依然确信自己是对的,这也就意味着老师是错的。 12.B 老师不仅错了,而且是错在了“我”认为是常识性的问题 上。not only...but...“不但……而且……”,为固定搭配。 13.D common knowledge“常识”。 14.C 因为她是老师,大家都相信她。 15.A 在发生这件事之前,“我”从来没有想过大人也会犯错。 16.C 这件事在“我”的成长过程中大大地影响了“我”对人的 看法。 17.A treat sb with sth“以……方式对待某人”,是固定短语。 18.B 当一个人对另一个人盲目相信时,“我”会想那真是很傻 啊。 19.B 自那件事后,“我”不再盲目地尊重权威。根据上句中的 “ treated another person 17 too much respect and admiration”可知选 B 项。 20.C 通过这件事“我”认识到,每个人都有自己的缺点。 time in the suburb. According to this thing I realized that the neighborhood relationship in the city is pretty different 5. that in the suburb or the countryside. People living in cities are busy with their 6. (employ) all day and they are ignorant (忽视的) of neighborhood relationship. They may not know 7. their neighbor’s names are and even cannot recognize their neighbors in the road. How regretful it is! I think good relationship is very important to us. Good neighborhood relationship can prevent our house from 8. (steal). Once my house’s lock was picked by a thief, 9. (fortunate), my neighbor heard the sound and called the police. This experience let me know the importance of good neighborhood relationship. As the saying goes, “A far-off relative(远亲) is not so helpful 10. a near neighbor.” I sincerely hope the neighbor relationship can become better and better. 【语篇解读】俗话说: “远亲不如近邻。”处理好邻里之间 的关系是很重要的。 【答案与解析】 1.living 此 处 是 现 在 分 词 短 语 作 定 语 , 修 饰 前 面 的 名 词 grandma。 2.attractive 此处是形容词作宾补。 3.neighborhood in the neibourhood“在附近”,是固定搭配。 4.contacting be used to doing“习惯做……”。 5.from 固定短语 be different from,意思是“不同于”。 6.employment 此处需要名词,指城里人忙着自己的工作。 7.what 此处是 what 引导宾语从句,在从句中作表语。 8.being stolen 此处逻辑上是动宾关系,且介词 from 后面跟动 名词,故此处应用 being stolen。 9.fortunately 此处是副词作状语。 10.as 此处是固定短语 not as / so...as...,意思是“不如…… 那样……”。 Ⅲ.短文改错(核心素养:语言能力) (建议用时 10') I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name calling.I was chosen to play the leading role in the play, that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl, I used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encourage me to do so. Now I have changed great.In class, I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may make some mistake. No pains, no gains. Now I am always brave enough overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed in a lively girl.So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face but only in this way can we make progresses. 【答案】 I couldn’t believe my ears when I heard my name .I was chosen to play the leading role in the play, was my dream. As a shy and thin girl, I used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always me to do so. Now I have changed .In class, I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may make some . No pains, no gains. Now I am always brave enough ∧ overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed a lively girl.So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face only in this way can we make . Ⅳ.书面表达(核心素养:学习能力) (建议用时 25') 请按下列提示,以“Pearl in the East—Hong Kong”为题, 简要介绍其基本情况。 地理位置: 1.中国东南部; 2.人口:700 多万; 3.面积:1000 余平方千米; 4.气候:2 月份 15℃左右;7 月份 28℃左右;5~9 月份雨水多; 5.经贸:有“东方之珠”之称,是世界上最大的贸易中心之一; 6.前景:香港的明天会更好。 注意: 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可根据提示适当发挥,使行文连贯。 Pearl in the East—Hong Kong 【参考范文】 Pearl in the East—Hong Kong As is known to all the world, Hong Kong is part of China.It lies in the southeast of China.It has an area of more than 1, 000 square kilometres and a population of over 7 million.It is neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter in Hong Kong.The average temperature is 15℃ in February and 28℃ in July.It often rains during the months of May to September.Hong Kong is well-known as “Pearl in the East”.It is one of the largest trade centers in the world. We are sure Hong Kong will have a brighter future.