Task: Sentence Composition
Input (English): The story indicated that the device costs around $30,000; and that combined with the costs of surgery, it works out to around $50,200 per year for the two additional years of life that might be obtained. While not essential, it might be reasonable to raise the question of how these costs will likely be covered – i.e. out of pocket, insurance, medicare, hospitals – or some combination. The new trial didn’t produce any mortality benefit at 1 year, and had an increased rate of stroke and bleeding (but less major bleeding and arrythmias than with surgery). These effects were not quantified, however, so it is hard to judge their relative importance. No absolute risk information was provided about potential harms. This may have been the biggest weakness in the story. In the big picture, the story adequately explained that for those in the high-risk category, valve replacement by a “minimally-invasive” procedure “is at least as effective as surgery.” No overt disease mongering, but the story could have been improved by reporting the number of people in the US who fall into the 10% high risk category. Experts who were identified as not being involved in the study reported on were quoted in the story. For those patients who are among the top 10% at risk, the story reported on the results from a study that compared a potential new, catheter based treatment with the existing alternative, which is surgery About 2/3 of the way through the piece, it was mentioned that the device is approved for use in Europe but not in this country, and that an FDA advisory panel is expected to consider it later this summer. The novelty and importance of the new approach was made clear, largely through the quotes of experts. The story does not appear to rely solely on a news release.
Output (English): New heart valve replacement procedure hailed