Task: Sentence Composition
Input (English): The story notes how the PulsePoint Foundation’s app is available for free download for both iOS and Android. We think that it would have been useful to put the URLs in the story, though, as well as note that CPR training is available for free in most locations. The story puts the benefits of the PulsePoint app into perspective: “It’s not clear how many lives have been saved,” it states, further hedging: “Patient confidentiality laws often prevent hospitals from disclosing a patient’s outcome.” This is enough to merit a Satisfactory rating–but with several caveats: Harms and downsides weren’t discussed. But with this app being used so widely and in so many cities, isn’t data available? One simple harm is the app simply failing to work. Another harm could be untrained or inexperienced people trying to help and causing harm from not knowing what they’re doing. Do people who sign up to use the app have to prove any sort of competency? Also, could bystanders who respond become hurt? For example, are 911 operators first establishing if the situation is safe for others to intervene before issuing an alert? As mentioned above, no one is sure how well it works to save lives, and the story makes this clear. But it should have gone a step further and clarified: Has any research at all been done? On the same note: Why do more cities keep adopting it? What evidence is being used to convince them to sign up? No disease mongering here. The reader is provided with quotes from Mr. DeMont and his wife, the developer of the app and two of the responders as well as information from unnamed Seattle officials. However, we wanted to hear from an outside emergency medicine expert to weigh in and respond to the story’s information/claims. We don’t think that the direct alternative (no access to PulsePoint linkage to a locale’s 911 system) needed to be discussed. It is clear that the app is now available and for free. It’s clear that this is a feature story about a readily available app and how more people are finding out about it and using it, so we’ll rate this N/A. However, it would have been useful to mention if there are any other apps that work in this way, or not. There is no evidence that the story relies on a news release.
Output (English): APP HELPS SAVE SEATTLE CARDIAC PATIENT