Review: Kids swear constantly, Mother swears, and the Editor was apparently drunk...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2013
The book had potential. Hey! The cover was great! But whether it was the absolutely awful editing or perhaps English wasn't the authors first language (?), the language was stiff and unrealistic. I wish those things had been better, otherwise the story was one with potential. Still, I got the feeling that this book should have included more of the storyline and would have been better if the second book had been part of the first. It was worth reading because it was free. But at $4.99 each for the next four out of the full five books in the series, I think paying a total of $20.00 for the grammar errors and the hideous editing (actually omitted words, misspelled others, and the punctuation was terrible), is too much to ask. Re-editing and rethinking the stilted language would certainly make the book easier to survive. I think this could have been structured much better.