Review: Amusing,.. but
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2012
A better proof reader is needed. At the very beginning of the story (first line) it's pointed out that it's Saturday (and Mercy doesn't like people waking her up early on Saturday.) A about a page or two later - the day suddenly has become Thursday and she's objecting to going to Mass the next day because it's Friday and isn't Sunday.Color me confused.The story is amusing and written with good humor. Sort of a Janet Evanovich light sort of story. I'd like to see a full length book with Mercy since the author has a flair for dialog and oddball characters, with a bit more development we might see some really great stuff.Four stars - timeline adjustment is needed, and I'd like to see a longer story.