Review: I should've remembered...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2014
...that Ms Louise's writing is amateur, at best. I've read something of hers before, but I'd forgotten. Honestly, I'd expect better writing from a high school Creative Writing student. At the very least, proper grammar, spelling, and word usage. Has she ever heard of editors?Because the storyline sounded interesting, I bought it. About half a page in, I groaned in annoyance. If it hadn't been on my Kindle, I'd have run for a red pen. To give it a fair shake, though, I read the whole thing. Oh, for those couple hours back...The story telling would perhaps be good for children, 7-10, though unfortunately, the dialog isn't even that mature. And finally, nothing in this story gives me the impression that Ms Louise knows anything at all about the societal norms of the period in which she set her story. Beyond this mention, I won't even go into the uncharacteristic behavior of her characters.All in all, a waste of both time and money. Don't bother.