Review: Great Story and Huge Potential
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 18, 2012
I have finishedBlack Pyramid (Ancient Breeds)and it is a rating nightmare :)  The story is exceptional and the characters are all interesting BUT the editing was poor, in fact it was so poor I contacted the author in the UK and this is part of her response"I am currently working on the second book (Myaten's story) within the Ancient Breeds series. Unfortunately I'm receiving reviews with anger over grammatical errors. I hope to fix this issue and will update the eBook version. Should you like an up to date copy, please let me know and I will gladly send you one."I will probably rate the book as is at least 4 Stars but with a good editor it would be more like 4.5+ and I will be buying the next ones.Bottom Line:  This is a really great book, if you are not too OCD about the editing buy it now and enjoy it since I have no date for the re-edited copy.  It is a bit choppy in a couple of places due to the editing but I was able to follow the story with no real trouble but there will be a jump or two that will make you back up a page to see if you skipped a page:)  The quality and potential for this series makes me hope she has a really good editor for the next book because this is a great story.UPDATE:  I believe this "special" edition is a revised and reedited version and as such should be a bit more pleasing to critical readers.  Loved the story.