Review: Yes, yes, yes
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 01 1, 2014
Ms Cole, you listened to us!!!!  Just burn one more thesaurus, bone up on some grammar and you are on your way to being a great writer!This book was so much better than the first one - Mr Black - why don't you rewrite that one?  Fix the flowery prose and I'll buy it too!I'm proud of you, though; your stories are interesting, just a bit wordy and text still a bit out of character for the situations, but wow, the improvement is astounding.  Remember, the hunk calls his loyal dog, not his effusively affectionate canine quadruped!