Review: Amazed at the high reviews
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2012
This book is said to be a part of a "dramatic western romance series" and after reading the whole book still don't see the western part of it. If a sub-character who owns horses qualifies it as a western, that would be it.Too many grammatical errors for such a short story. One that stood out as especially annoying was the need to capitalize China when referring to a tea cup. That may sound trite, but if you're going to go to the trouble of writing, take the time to find an editor or proofreader.Lack of character development is generally an issue in such a short story. However, I've seen many authors who can pull it off so you feel you know the characters, their backgrounds, etc.. This one didn't do it.It should be noted somewhere that the books in the series should be read in order. Too many unanswered questions that may (or may not) be found in previous books.I should have been forewarned when there was only a one line description.