Review: A little more effort would have been an improvement
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 18, 2013
The story premise was fine, but the writing was only so-so.  There were some grammatical errors and typos, although they were not too distracting.  This was a short and inexpensive book so I didn't feel I wasted my money.  I did feel that the writer could have improved on the story with just a little more effort.  I ordered another book by the same author when I ordered this one.  My response to that book was very much the same as this one -- it could have been so much better with more attention by the author.