Review: Short, to the point, and very hot
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 2, 2013
Disclaimer: I received an e-copy from the author in exchange for an honest review.This is an erotic short story, F/F, about a woman named Carole who's taking her niece to visit Santa. While standing in line, she is greeted by one of Santa's elves, and they have an immediate attraction. The elf, Helen, slips Carole her phone number, and later Carole agrees to help Helen with a stage performance. And boy do they get a standing "O"! ;)This is the first erotic story I've reviewed, and what a great one it is! It's a short, only 2K words or so, but it's so descriptive, I could picture the scene in my head the entire time. The girls' time on stage was great, as Carole was trying to get through the performance without giving away what was going on inside the costume. However, once they found a room to themselves, all bets were off, and I was definitely fully immersed in their endeavors. When I finished reading, I had to sit back and take a breath, because it's hot, heavy, and in your face! A great erotic short, and I will definitely be reading more of the author's work from here on.5 stars, very enticing =)