Review: Absolutely Awful
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 3, 2013
I actually returned this book it was so bad - I have never done that before.  I loved the first 2 books in the series, and had high hopes for this one.  The plot is extremely thin.  A rent boy gets beat up at the club, Seth takes him in, and within 24 hours both he and Allie are hot for the rent boy and for each other. How does that work in real life with smart rich people?  Allie's miraculous 24 hour transformation from strong in control woman who is not even remotely interested in the lifestyle to willing sub to not one, but two men, was incredible as well. I also love that the men wore condoms when giving each other blow jobs, but Allie went down on Seth without one - hmmm.The editing was atrocious as well - homonyms, misspelling, repetitive text, etc.  This book probably holds the record for using the word "hurt" the most times in an average length novel. No one wants to hurt anyone, and everyone ends up hurt anyway - especially the reader, who will be left in a world of hurt if you can finish this.