Review: Good for a free short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 5, 2013
This mm short story was wonderful for a freebie. Characters were well portrayed and interesting, plot had so much potential. Now, because it is a short, author crammed in there so much that the whole novel would have been done out of it and because it is a short some plot twists to get the story moving were very contrived. I still liked it though.3.5 stars