Review: Pleasantly surprised @ 3.5 stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2014
I downloaded this read because I thought the premise was interesting and it was free. Since it was a short read I honestly was not expecting much. Although it started off a bit choppy, the author did finally settle into the writing and the story moved along very well. There were some typos and grammatical errors but not enough to detract from the story. I would have like to know more back story on Audriana's mother and Max's relationships with his ex-wives.  The author mentions the house keeper and includes some details about her physical appearance and his past wives not getting along. I did feel like there was more about that but it was never followed up so I was not sure why it was mentioned.  I do wish that the ending was less abrupt and had included an epilogue. All in all it was an enjoyable read and I have recommended this work to others.