Review: I liked the story, but I did not care for the execution.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2014
A book that is 270 pages does not need to be hacked to pieces to get readers. If anything, it has the opposite effect. People get frustrated, and stories get missed. It's not fare to anyone, not even the writer. So why use this marketing tactic, when all it does is infuriate the readers, and keep the writer from making the money the story was supposed to earn?Not just this book, but many, many others here on Amazon.Hardly any one writes about elves... and I was excited to read this book because of that fact. But with the way it was told, in a dream like past tense situation, really robbed the story.IF it were possible to revamp this story, and get it out there to the public, in the exact fashion readers like, then this story could make it big. But here, and as it is, it is sub-par.I do hope that as Cristina Rayne's grows through her story writing, she will consider listening to her readers, and reworking this story, so that it displays all of it's beauty in the light is deserves.