Review: Ehh...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 20, 2014
I'm glad I read the prequels first, because I might not have moved on to the rest of the books in this series.  When I started reading this book, I immediately recognized it as a novice writers first crack in the literary world.  There are serious time line and story planning issues.  A screen might be described as a week ago only to later back track into it only happening a day ago.  This happened more than it should have.  Which leads me to believe that she changed direction in her story line and for got to edit changes through out the book.  The constant description of the hero is an ear maker for authors used to submitting weekly/monthly chapters to an amateur writing site.  Plus, the pace of the story was incredibly slow and for some reason the hero and heroine act like 13 year olds passing 'Do you like me? Yes or no' notes.  I get being oblivious to another person's feelings, but COME ON!  After spend half the night sexing each other up, usually someone starts to ask where this relationship is going.  I mean, seriously.Humph...  That being said, besides everyone being asiningly stupid, the story had potential.  And the later stories are much much better.  Why someone would include a one side phone conversation when it's the heroine speaking is beyond me.So I will continue reading and try to understand we're these prequel stories fit in.