Review: Great short story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 09 10, 2012
A nice little Twilight Zone type of story that keeps you guessing even up to the end. The full impact doesn't hit home until after you've finished reading, and then realize what the ceiling represents -- sort of an a-ha moment a couple hours later. But if I say any more, it will give it away.In case the author follows these reviews -- there was one tiny error, a paragraph where "since" should probably have been "sense."Other than that one small thing, it's clear that the author went above and beyond to put out a good story that is also well formatted.