Review: Interesting plot, poorly written.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 19, 2014
The plot of this tale was interesting, it would have made a great story if the writing was not so greatly lacking skill. The editing, if there was any, was insufficient. I am not an editor, yet I believe that I could have done a better job. There were too many places where the wrong word was used. Too many places where the prose was labored. Too many places where the same information was repeated with different wording. Too many places where I found myself asking, Who talks like that?