Review: Lacking.  Tacky.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 4, 2013
I should be asking for a refund.This book pop up in my kindle and was unread, it was so short and I was in between books that I thought WTH, its dark erotica; it should be a good quick read. I was SO WRONG. I'm not sure how I was persuaded to buy this book (yes... I check my amazon.com account and I did pay for this, and for such a short "book" I consider I paid too much)... OK I'm ending my rant here. Then I checked the amazon.com reviews and I see it's not so bad, so I decided to contribute a bit and help others.This book is lacking in so many ways... I do not consider this erotica. Dark... Slightly.I don't mind short book but writers need skills to develop a believable, compelling and/or entertaining story in a short publication. It's my opinion that the writer drops the ball here.English is not even my first language and I found horrible grammatical errors and typos. This book needs some serious proof reading and editing. Another thing... Am I the only one who noticed that the author name is misspelled in the COVER???I found it tacky that the writer finds a way to named himself twice in the book as a hot writer for ménage.Chemistry in the trio: 2 starsBelievable plot: 2 starsCompelling Characters: 1  starsEntertaining story: Not even a star.Tacky factor: 5 stars.I'm not a fan of giving bad reviews, since everyone is entitled to their opinion, but since reviews is probably why I ended paying for this, I think it's fair for others to have more opinions out there.