Review: I'm having trouble coming up with anything positive to say
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2013
First, our narrator is an idiot. She steals 250,000 dollars then proceeds to almost lose it on at least two occasions. In all honesty whenever faced with choices she seems to pick the worst choice available at every turn. I felt no chemistry at all between her and the hero. Then there is the unprotected sex. In this day and age, there needs to be at minimum a passing reference to birth control or a condom. The lack of these things is in perfect accordance with the stupidity displayed by Dani throughout the book. I don't actually mind that she stole the money. We are told why she needs it but the explanation isn't logical. She wants to finish school, she's almost done so she takes the money and runs? How exactly does finishing school fit with that? She wants to pay for grandma's treatments, but this important relationship only exists in the abstract. She doesn't call her grandma on the phone or go see her. At one point a child who she claims to care about is on a dangerous situation and she doesn't want to call the police because it might create bad consequences for her stolen money situation.On the editing/grammar side, we have a character whose name is spelled two different ways,  a city name misspelled on multiple occassiins, improperly used words and some very clunky phrasing.Apparently book 2 is coming. There is not one thing in this book that would encourage me to read it.