Review: liked it but very short and.....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2013
I like the story. But it was very short and I see I will be paying .99 for each short epidode.  Also needs some editing. I mean this is simple stuff that one read through should catch: for instance, the word "pack" instead of PACT. Also the word "wonder" for WANDER. Unfortunately I have seen this before in other writer's work, the exact same mistakes that anyone with any command of the English language should not be making, and if they do should be able to catch it immediately.That said I did really like the story, although it is barely enough to begin with. I am not sure I will read more because I really don't like paying even 99 cents for such a short beginning to a story. I would advise the author to make the entire thing available in an "Omnibus" edition. When that is done I may read the rest.