Review: Cute story that needs a little editor/proofreader's touch. Pictures are way too small for Kindle app.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2013
The story was really cute about a duck and a barnyard full of animals facing a tornado.Some things could have been better defined, like I went back to the beginning of the story to figure out, "Now was Willy a duck ora chick?" I didn't see it in the first few sentences. So then I thought I'd look closer at the pics. But they were too small, and I couldn't enlarge them on my tablet. The cover image is big enough, but Willy isn't in the cover image, although he's the main focus of the story.And at first, when they said Maebelle was missing, I thought she was one of the chicks. So a little better definition and/or better images to help the flow of the story and eliminate the confusion.None of that kept me from liking the story, though.Very cute.