Review: Thankfully I got this on a free day.  It's just not good
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 10, 2013
I'm always looking for good zombie horror stories, but for every one good story, there are about 10 bad ones.  This, unfortunately, falls in the latter category.  Some interesting ideas are ruined by a lot of contrived, unnatural dialogue that just doesn't sound like the way  real people speak, or the typos ruin it.  Example (grammatical errors are his, not mine):"What is wrong Max?" Stewart asked."Ah nothing, nada, just my workout clothes kind suck, but given the alternative, I will take 'em."This is very pedestrian writing, and I'm not sure even another proofreader going though this would help.  You can fix grammar and typos easily, but you just can't fix bad writing.