Review: Engrossing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 9, 2013
I really liked Dade's review and second the comments he/she made.Another good read with likeable main characters.This book, like the others I have read needs some careful editing:There were too many incorrectly used possessive apostrophies.Some words used incorrectly:if I were taking the mess she wouldn't tell me anything else - should it be taking the piss? Location 734A few elements of the plot stretched belief e.g. concerning Kerr's father. I can't go into detail because it would be a spoiler.Another odd bit in the plot: A girl Sarah is mentioned three times in the story and we are given to understand that a certain character is her father but he never mentions what happened to her - she is just left dangling in the plot.Aaand:  One of the girls is tricked into going with the killer would she leave her younger sister to go home by herself to an empty house?I would love to know what the author meant at location 493 - sold themselves out to Home Office bureaucracy.