Review: poorly written and confusing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 19, 2013
.99, I thought I would be getting a deal even if the writing was not the best.  Well, I can't finish the first book.  Actually, I can't finish the second chapter.  The writing falls into the "telling" and not "showing" type of writing, and it is badly done even so, as the main character's actions are contradictory, confusing and lacking in sense.  Also, conversations are badly done, punctuation is badly done, and the lack of editing is extremely evident.  I could like what's here if it weren't so jarring to read; the ideas and some moments of the writing are promising.