Review: goodish
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2012
I got this free book after reading the 5 star reviews... sigh. The djinn are not a new original concept. I really hate to break it to you all. There are so many plot holes, I fell through several. The first being... do wha? when did she have time to fall in love with this dude ????(who chained her and she's been scared of for the two or three times she's talked to him.) I simply didn't believe her.. or the fact they had some love involved in there. This is a series book, so as per usual a million questions were left unanswered so you have to buy the next book because there is no ending. Ok, I get that but the fact that you have to suspend all belief to believe how she ends up in a juvenile detention center well.. it's beyond belief.I won't get into the grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors that are obviously requiring a serious editor. Sigh. I had high hopes for this "series" and unfortunately it just didn't get to it's full potential.