Review: It charges out of the gate, then stumbles...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 6, 2012
The development of a new life, albeit artificial, is a ripe topic for sci-fi.  In Imperfect, a tiny flaw, one atom in a mix of billions, makes a hunk of processed silicon differ from its "fellows".  And then... the story is over.Promising, but much too underdeveloped for even a short story.  So what?  Now what?  That's the hard part of writing, making a coherent structure, and not just developing a premise.