Review: Needs more editing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2014
I received a Kindle version of this book for free on LibraryThing in exchange for an honest review.While it seemed that this was supposed to be a nice feel-good story, miss-spellings and bad formatting distracted me from really enjoying the story. The text only covers about half of the left side of the screen, no matter how much you decrease the font. This interrupts the flow of the story and makes it extremely annoying and aggravating to read.When looking for the book on my Kindle, I noticed that the book is actually titled “Alice Jane Maybank” instead of “Alice Jane West” like the name on the mobi file and the LibraryThing giveaway.While I think that this story has the potential to be a 3 or 4 star, I think that it is currently a 2 star because of all the problems that detract from it.