Review: Super Short, Kinda Sweet
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2012
This was a super short story, but pretty enjoyable, nonetheless. When it starts out, you aren't exactly walking in on the middle of a story, but the characters have some history that the author explains as the story is unfolding. The H and h are young (early 20s), and you definitely get that sense. My first impression of the H is that he's kind of annoying and immature, but something about his forthrightness worked for me anyway. The h is young and a little whiney, but again, that worked for me too because she seemed like a nice enough person and her friends were fun.The basic premise for the story is a good one; I would love to see this fleshed out into a full length book because the characters and the plot have the potential. As it is, in a short story format, it's a little bit predictable, but it's good, fun, light reading.