Review: A sweetly (pun intended) erotic story with a real-life twist
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 9, 2012
This is a story of a relationship brought closer through the shared joys of dominance and submission. It's not just a story of a power exchange, but of an emotional exchange as well. It's a very intimate story as well, taking place in the home, between two people who clearly love each other very much. There's no public humiliation involved, no club scene, and no exaggerated fetish lifestyle. The story begins with the domestic banality of doing laundry, and ends with the domestic eroticism of melted chocolate in the kitchen. More than that, it's a story that explores life on the other side of the fantasy, with Neil taking care of Marie afterwards (something we all too rarely see in BDSM fiction).As for the writing, it's sharp and crisp, conveying an immediacy to the scene. The characters are so wonderfully developed that you really come to care for them, and to enjoy the scene with them. It's also a very hot read, with lovingly detailed descriptions of just what Marie must endure as the hands of her beloved.