Review: Yes and No!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2014
Ok I'ma  start by saying this is the first book I've read from the author !I Have Mixed Feeling About This Whole Book .. The Storyline Was Ok I Guess ... But I Felt As Though You Put To Much Info in The Little Stuff , Like I Really Didn't Care About All The Cars ... Was We In a Car Show or Nah? And all the Money EVERYBODY had $10,000 ,$500,000 Etc ...But Yea You Put a Lot of Effort In Unimportant Things and Ran Through The Parts Of The Story Where You Should Have Explained.For example ... 1. You Rush through the part when Trey got shot , like if Ryn was so much in love she wouldn't have ran out the hospital when they said he died !2. The whole Rell and Kai thing I think you should have maybe mention that she was a THOT , yea she sleep with Ryn brother Ron but you didn't put no events leading up to her "drugging " him3. Like where did Ressy come from he just was there and she was in love with him and so much over TreyBut I'm not going to say it was a bad read , I read it in a few hours ... I just think you rush over and through important parts , that should have been added ..Hopefully part 2 is way better at explaining the ran through parts ... Hopefully Ryn will stop falling in love in 2 seconds and she would smarting up!!