Review: Nice try...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2014
I really hope the writer didn't quit her day job to do this full-time.  It was like a teenager, armed with Google, set out and wrote a novel.Any potential this story had was decimated by immature characters and generic dialogue.It was .99, but I feel like I overpaid.There really isn't enough time to get into everything, but I will say that I think L.P Dover could be great in this genre... someday.  The characters behaved and spoke like they were teens or barely in their twenties when they were supposed to be much older.  I found some of the plot unrealistic mainly because of this.The story could could have done with a few more drafts and a better beta/proofreader.