Review: written by a juvenile?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2014
The overall story plot was ok.  The writing style was a bit weird.  I got the impression that the author was very young and perhaps inexperienced herself.  Although the grammar and spelling editing was fine, some fact checking would have been helpful.  No one in the US refers to a bachelorette party as a hen party. That is strictly the British empire.  A 21 year would not be an intern doctor.  A few odd errors here and there.  Also, the hero, at 30 and a billionaire was portrayed as rather naive and innocent himself, which doesn't ring true.  With a little more maturity, this author could have potential.