Review: Intriguing... I wonder where this story could go
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2012
Faith, by David Adams, is a short story (about 10 reading minutes) about how faith gives hope.  Written in a sci-fi context, a young girl is consoled by a religious leader after her mother's death and disposition in some type of prision or refugee camp.  Well-written, with an unforgiving conclusion.My only suggestion would be the addition of a sentence at the very end, as follows:"Then the doors of the Palace opened, and Tami saw the outline of her mother, arms outstretched, waiting for her.['I have faith,'] she repeated, throwing herself into her beaming mother's welcoming arms."I'd add... "The heat was intense."BUT... that's why I'm a reviewer, not a writer.