Review: Good idea, needs editing and spellcheck.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 6, 2012
The idea for this story was good and a bit unusual, however, the misspelled words and poor phrasing got in the way.  It could have been a wicked and fun lunch time read but it stumbled many times.  The use of incorrect words (reign instead of rein when talking about a horse's bridle) was very distracting.  The authors had a great idea for a story.  It could be one that people come up against and how it was handled by family friends would have enhanced the story greatly. These authors need to find a good editor for their next project.