Review: Poor Third Book
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2011
The first two books were good in my opinion, although first was far better than the second, which wasted words and pages on background trivia and fabricated castle intrigue. The third book was pitiful, short and with and ending that attempts to trap the readers into a fourth purchase. No spoilers here, but the fabrications are becoming stretched. Flare has taken a stupid pill, and keeps taking them wherever convenient to the author. Same old, "Oh I am so weak now that I get captured but I know there will be a fabricated rescue so it's ok." Or suddenly so powerful that all foes are vanquished, but next day so weak and stupid that Zalustus gets ahead again. Otherwise no tension? Sheesh. The grammar and wrong word substitutions are as bad as the mid thought transfers to the other parties doings without so much as a paragraph separator.Oh. The third book is so short you can't believe it almost stopped in mid sentence.