Review: could be the beginning of something very different
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2014
A great short story that could be the beginning of a great series. I liked the spin of a 'grim reaper' as a main character and how it twisted in to the Fae world as well.I think that Kymber was a bit too accepting of Kheelan when he approached her. Maybe if there had been a bit more of a story line into why she thought herself different from other people and why she was accepting of meeting with him to discuss her 'difference". Just a couple extra paragraphs in the beginning.Overall I like the story. It laid roots to what would be a great novel if written thoroughly. I also think that maybe this should of been a 1.5 instead of a 1, IF it were to be a series with #1 being the story of Kheelan's brother. That would of lead into more of the problems that seemed to lead to the hurriedness of 'overthrowing' Kheelan's father.Would I read another of Ms. Bathory's  books....absolutely! So please don't keep me waiting ;)*honest review given by author inquiry :)