Review: Not worth my time
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2014
Another of these dog books where the author can't write without punctuation and grammatical errors, and doesn't have anything to contribute that can't be read on hundreds of blogs - that few people read at all because it's nothing new.Examples, hoping that this may help the author to improve on his work - or leave writing to real authors altogether:- for grooming you need shampoo and a brush. - which shampoo, which brush, and is that all I need for grooming?? Look, whether you don't WANT to link what I need (although this is an ebook!!), or whether you don't know any details, don't publish a book then. That I need A shampoo and A brush, guess what, that's so obvious that I know so much myself!- your puppy needs special puppy food. - really? Why? And WHICH "special" puppy food, if any?? Again, if you don't know, why write it? Leave it to others then.- the crate must be big enough for an adult dog. - big enough for what, to turn around, to stand up, to sit up, to stretch out? Big enough for what?? Damn it, if you don't know any detail, then don't write it!I could go on forever, but it isn't worth my time. I guess I have helped you more than enough, if you really want you can improve your book now. If you do, I'll be the first to give you a better review!