Review: Hellish Grammar and Fragmented Sentences No Temptation
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2013
This book has wooden characters. It is written in a choppy style with short sentences and plenty of misspellings. Not only that, the fragmented sentences are annoying and distracting. It took me about twenty minutes to read this. I realize it was a short story, not a novel, yet it is this fact which made me even more annoyed that there was obviously a bad proofreader involved here. Don't waste your time on this mediocre bonnet book.