Review: X-mas is nothing, wait until santa finds out.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 23, 2013
Even though Jack was clearly a pervert, and an emotional one at that, he managed to be the only likable character in the story.Holly was your typical stupid kid, Furio, an unshaven brute who had absolutely no personality whatsoever. And santa was a brainless twit.I prefer stories where the female characters have a bit more spunk and motivation. Holly's only motivation was giving it up to a grumpy dog.Santa was witless, and didn't care about the situation he was throwing his daughter into regardless of her protests, and informing him of Jack's perversion. How can santa care about the worlds children when he can't do the same for his own?Furio's lack of personality had me rooting for Jack during the slap fight, at least Jack acted on his feelings, whereas Furio laid back and waited for it to be served to him on a silver platter.A very frustrating story to say the least, but well written. But quality editing can't compensate for lousy characters.