Review: Editor needed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2012
I liked the story, but was constantly distracted by editing issues. Improper use of quotation marks and other punctuation were most prominent, and I was totally baffled about the title of "Outsourced" when there was no outsourcing referenced in the story. Outsourcing is when a company uses a 3rd party (foreign or domestic) to provide services that are normally done by employees. This company just RIF'd, not outsourced. In any case, I really like the poem, highly creative and I'd be more than willing to up the stars on this review if the editing issues are addressed. Keep writing!