Review: Really liked but could use some editing!!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2013
Somehow I stumbled upon this book from a list of recommendations from Amazon and so glad I read it.  There are flashes of brilliance in Ms. Vaughn's writing.  She has a nice way with phrasing and when the writing flows, you get lost in the story.  But... there are editing issues.  I may be nitpicking but when I read, I don't want to trip and fall over missing words, misspellings, etc.  It takes me out of the story and I have to readjust. I would think the author, who has published so many books, would have an editor or a critique partner who can help with some of the editing issues.Some reviewers disliked James.  I have to admit I am a sucker for an overly alpha male.  And yes, James was cruel and had severe issues that contributed to his controlling ways.  And yes, Noelle was a terrible doormat but as someone who is familiar with that type of behavior, I totally got it.  I really enjoyed the book and totally loved Ms. Vaughn's writing.  Hope she follows up with Simone and Paul's story!