Review: Not Bad First Effort
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 13, 2013
This novella has all of the earmarks of the beginning of a fair writing career for Mark Dawson.  The plot concept is not new, but Dawson is able to paint a good picture with his words.On the downside, he needs the services of a good editor.  Some of the errors are really pretty glaring.  In one scene Milton is in a hotel room.  He takes off his shirt and proceeds to rinse his face.  A couple of paragraphs later Milton takes off his coat and tie.  There are other errors, the use of "of" when the author wants "off", using "plane" when he wanted "plain".  Typical of too many of the ebook authors today, editing via spell check.