Review: Not bad, but lacks sparkle...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 18, 2012
I'm writing a review for this one, because I picked it up for free and for the price it isn't bad.The writing is clear, it reads well with little to no typos.The story has great potential, but the characters and events lack that special "something" that makes a story stay with you once you put it down.It wasn't too far off, rather the author seemed to be so caught up in keeping the grammar, etc, correct, they lost the special quality the early chapters held about half way through the book.Rather than ascending in tension to happily ever after land, by its end the story gives you a "that's it... after all that... " feeling.I would also have liked a few more detailed descriptions on the characters appearances and the character of Alex seemed to be thrown in to supply some type of love triangle conflict, that never came to fruition.So Xondra, not bad, but more tension and a stronger, active plot line is needed.Thank you for the free read.