Review: Well crafted short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 26, 2014
Kara's Song is a good short story, with a tight, clean plot and nice character development. The character flaws play out in a classic Dom / sub erotica genre with a subtle Oedipus Complex twist thrown in, which was nice. I like character attractions where the characters can't figure out why they are so attracted to each other. It increases the tension between them and I think it mirrors real life, instead of billionaires with six pack abs dominating Vargas girls who didn't know they really always wanted to be dominated. And there are great lines in the story that made it a fun read: "The bondage frees you ..."I enjoyed the story even though I'm not a hard core, classic D/s fan. I prefer it in fantasy roll playing between loving partners seeking a heightened sexual experience that fulfills their partners sexual fantasies. But the interracial theme, the uncommon attraction between a young black man and an older MILF, the graphic submissive training and breeding of the woman makes for a classic kinky BDSM erotic story. Very imaginative.