Review: confused
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 28, 2014
I thought that the amount of stars should reflect the amount of errors that is in this story. While I could believe the circumstances I could not believe the action of what the characters finally did. The beach scene, very erotic, I feel the writer did not take into account the authenticity of people from that day and time. While trying to tell the story the writer forgot their self on the history lesson. The times are WWII and people were not promiscuous as we are led to believe. As I really like the idea of this story I think the writer might want to get the rest of the facts right and present them in a more understanding way. It is a fictional i tonal story and I fully understand that but if you (the writer)are doing a period piece you should do a little more research on the attitudes of the people of that era..in closing, I would recommend this to any that would like a fantasy come true for that day and age.