Review: Good story but needs a good editor!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 12, 2013
The author did a good job on the story line.  He developed most of the characters well.  The story scenario was the first I've seen.  If I could have read the book ( and I read 100% of it ) without the major distractions of editing and spelling, I would have enjoyed it immensely.  In addition to having no paragraph indentations, the train of thought is interrupted by words that don't fit, words that might have fit but for weird letters that made me have to go back to figure why they were so weird,  and other gross editing mistakes.  The author really needs to getan editor who really cares about word usage, punctuation, and spelling.When writing about nautical themes, it would help to have a knowledge of the terminology of the sea and ships.  He calls the deck the ground, which left me scratching my head.  Speaking of the head, on board submarines and most ships, bathrooms are not called bathrooms, but "the head."I hope the author writes some other books, because he has a good imagination and word crafting skills.  But, GET AN EDITOR !