Review: Good story but......
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 19, 2011
It just really lacked a seamless flow for me.  The bones for the story were there, and the opportunity to make this book really something great was there, but it just missed the mark.  There was a continual jump in time without first giving a good explanation of the present time, and allowing development.  I'm also a bit confused about the genre, not sure if this is romance, or just some form of fiction because Envy and Devyne spent more than 50% of the book apart, which I really just couldn't understand.  There was just so much opportunity to get them back together, and I was just waiting and waiting for it, but it just happened way too late.  I understand this is the authors debut novel and it is a good start, but I think she still has a bit of a way to go.  The novel could also use a bit more editing.  I came across quite a few grammatical errors.  I think though that I would give this author another chance.