Review: Could Have Been Better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2014
The problems: a police detective who doesn't seem to know how to keep track of his gun in serious situations, lots of filler pages that don't add much to character development or plot, repetitive discussion of the cause of the murder of Rebecca, and some really bad poetry (of course, that was because the character wrote the bad poetry, but still...)The reasons I gave it two stars: interesting storyline when you get past the filler, some decent dialogue scenes, a surprise ending, and generally no proofreading mistakes.  When I read that it was part of a trilogy, I was worried the author would leave me hanging...he didn't, and I appreciate that.  Favorite character: Colinas.I might read the second in the trilogy if it is offered free, to see if the plot gets tightened up.