Review: Poorly written
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2012
This was a mess of run on sentences and repetativeness- it could easily have been a third of the length given the number of repeated descriptions, back tracking and re-hashing of events.  I really didn't care for the characters; the "hero" was pretty clueless for a worldly, debonaire billionaire and the "heroine", who is described as selfless, beautiful and sweet is really kind of a doormat with no self-esteem.