Review: Hm....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2012
I didn't like this free short story when I first started reading it. It was written as an online chat dialogue. When that finished I realized that the writing was much better and the garbage chat dialogue was basically just that. No one writes proper on chat anyway. I really had many, many mixed feelings about this book.It starts with a girl named Mandy who has an online best friend and they have cybersex all the time. Mandy doesn't chat on him with any other cyber friend. She stays inclusive (lol). Mandy's step brother, Brandon, finds out about the guys she is talking to and tells her to be careful because there are a lot of creeps out there. Mandy doesn't listen and tells Brandon to relax. A random person then private messages her saying he wants to meet up with her and Mandy thinks it's her brother playing a trick with her and agrees to meet up with him even after her brothers warning of staying away from those creeps.I don't want to ruin the ending but let me point out that the entire time reading the book I pictured Brandon as a roommate - NOT a step brother. I think you should as well. I recommend for those looking for a mystery in an erotica as well as a lesson learned!