Review: Enjoyable, want more
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 7, 2011
This enjoyable short story left me wanting more. The description of the Portland, Maine area and Santa Monica brought back memories of living in both places. There were several minor loose ends that I would have liked cleared up. I questioned the timelines in the building of the home, among others.I hope the author will consider writing a full length novel based on Josh and Dana. So nice to have two capable characters able to play nicely with others, not whiny with low self-esteem unable to function in a group.Nice work, keep at it, Alex.