Review: Pretty good but
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2013
This was pretty good. In fact when I started it I was excited about how good the writing was. There was the switching POVs quickly that at first was confusing and I just tried to ignore it. But what bothered me the most was that there was too much sexual tension. What I mean is that its there and it just felt overdone. There was the ridiculous amount of misunderstanding and so much fighting. Sometimes I had to wonder how old they were. It was like they were teenagers instead of adults. The jealousy was over the top and that became annoying as well. I only say that because it felt like it never ended. One step forward two steps back. Let the misunderstands, the fighting and jealousy begin again. I wanted suspense and it took forever for to be any. Overall I liked the writing style but the bickering drove me nuts.