Review: again
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 13, 2013
The intro to the series was great(those 2 pages..), after that it just fell apart into a debauchery of words and thoughts that were incredibly incoherent.  The dialogue between characters is profane for no other reason than the author felt the need to swear constantly.  There is no character development and the author acts like you and the characters should be interested in someone that you just met 2 pages ago that dies. The one character that had a long introduction was nothing more than a run on paragraph that took up an entire kindle page and made little sense at all.  Honestly, I feel like a high school kid wrote this as a report for an English class and probably received a D, and than self published his work without the grade.To the author:Learn some character development, read some Terry Goodkind or George R.R. MartinLearn to describe a fight/action scene, try some R.A. Salvatore novelsRead some other books in this genre, perhaps Joseph Talluto's White Flag series or Robert Kirkman's Walking Dead comics/novelsYour intro was fantastic(book 1), the follow through was abysmal.