Review: What?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 1, 2013
Very much like a true sex fest with no discussion or feeling of more than lust. The dialog is weak and even the sex is not awe inspiring. This was disjointed and had errors in it that made it seem like the author didn't even remember, or bother to proof the paragraph or page before. First there is no couch and then one appears?! This could have been great if some time would have been put into it. There is no excuse to have a bad IR erotic story since there are some rally good ones out there. Not worth it to read for the Raw in inspiring sex. Very weak ending.