Review: Eh
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 21, 2012
Story started out pretty good, but gradually lost itself so by the end I just wanted the story to end. I think part of the problem was the time jumps. So of them were minutes, some were weeks. It messed up the flow when I kept reading "three weeks later", etc... I also didn't like how the Dom treated the sub after she had a major loss in her life, seemed so cold for someone who was supposed to have such strong feelings for the sub. And he gets really mad when he finds out who she really is even though they hadn't known each other for long enough to build that kind of trust. Seemed odd.