Review: Idea was good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2013
The idea of the story was good but putting it to paper didn't work.  I think some reviewers have mentioned grammar, sentence structure, spelling, etc., and those issues were just too big to ignore.  If I had read this book before I bought part 2, I would have never bought it.  I must say part 2 was an improvement over this one.  Two stars for the idea, it was really good.