Review: This was an interesting short story; too bad it wasn't longer!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2012
I was intrigued by this short story from the very beginning.  It is the type that urges along the reader to find out more and actively engages the mind in thinking about things.  I enjoyed this story quite a bit.  Even the end kept me wondering about the next step for Aiden and Jess.  It has everything that makes a story entertaining.  The only downfall to it was that it left me wishing there was more.  I think the dog added a great touch to the story too.  There wasn't much space to develop the characters much, but it was done well.  It was a great quick read that kept me pondering for days about the experiment that caused the destruction.  Also, I found it an interesting note that the destruction of the world from the experiment brought back the ancient use of magic.  I have already started Present Jumper and will definitely read the third and fourth too to see how they all tie together if nothing else!