Review: grew increasingly more absurd
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 29, 2012
Jaden could have easily been female and this story wouldn't have changed, which is a big pet peeve for me in mm romance. Also, though the beginning was tolerable if one suspended belief and thought of it as a uke/seme tale, the character actions towards the end didn't make sense given who we are told they were. I also hate when much of the conflict could be resolved with a simple conversation. Didn't really enjoy this but the writing was okay (though the story was lacking) and there were no grammatical errors so 3.5 stars. Also the sex was pretty hot.