Review: Better Story, Kinda
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 11, 2013
Hmm OK first obviously there is the erotica side of the book. I'm not really into reading that to much and found myself skipping some of it but one thing I noticed is that it pretty much all involves things from the first book. Almost all things involving sex, for instance the reasons how Alex's relationships work it was all discussed in book 1 so it is really just repeating things. Bacially while in book one the sex had a purpose in book 2 it was really just sex for the sake of sex.Then there is the story which is better or sores depending on what you are looking for. The erotica side was HEAVILY tied into the story in book one, an example is Lorilei getting stronger, that's gone now so the story this time is left to stand on its own. For the most part it does this well, the beginning and parts of the middle can be downright boring at times but there are others, especially the end, that it was hard to put the book down.So basically I would say I found it an improvement for my tastes if not my satisfaction? I personally liked how the story was not so focused on sex but I also feel that the story liked a lot of the impact that the first one had.