Review: Good Story Bad Writing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2014
I wanted to like this novel, but there were too many faults.  Although I liked the storyline the writing was so awkward I felt embarrassed for the author.  At first I thought the author was just sloppy, but it became obvious eventually that poor education was the culprit here. The choppy sentences, misuse of words, poor grammar and just plain lack of writing skills made it work to read this book.  No joy here.  So sad.