Review: A Classy & Erotic Tale!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2014
Ms. Pahl has crafted an amazing short story! Her prose with the written word is phenomenal. I absolutely adore her writing however, my biggest complaint is the need for better editing to catch grammatical errors. They're a bit distracting. I would have easily given this 5 stars had the editing been better but the tale flowed well. I was absolutely enthralled by Lealin and Marik's relationship. My imagination ran wild with this gem and I loved every minute of it. Wonderful work.