Review: Not for me
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2014
The writing is choppy.  I have given it a chance but half way through the book I am abandoning this one.  First of all Chapter 3 to Chapter 4....I was like ??????  I mean Chapter 3 just abruptly cut off on the dance floor to *poof* they are at a company picnic and she if flirty with her ex while she has Cooper there to make him jealous. But, she always is perfectly willing to go hot and heavy and make out with Cooper.  Too many thoughts not written well which made me have to re-read and try to understand.  And Afton's automatic assumption that Cooper is a teller at a bank instead of something more.  He tells her "I work at a bank" and the first thing she says is "oh you're a teller".  Again ????  And I was in contant disbelief that he let her believe he was a teller and just so happens lives next to a rich neighbor that doesn't mind loaning him tuxedos and his sports car *every* time he has a date with her.  Was just too unbelievable and choppy to finish.