Review: cute story, but really needs help
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 30, 2013
This story has an interesting premise and the main character is really likable and believable.  But I don't think I have ever before read a book with so many errors.  Sentences were punctuated so badly that at times they could not even be understood.  Wrong words were used many times and characters even changed names - ex. at one point Nate became James and later Doug became Nate.  It seems like that kind of thing should have been caught and fixed. There were just too many places where the story became lost because of the confusion.