Review: Good premise but still loads of frustrating mistakes
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2014
I have enjoyed the bookThe Yellowstone Conundrum (Is this the end? Book 1)andScorched Earth--Part 1: The sequel to The Yellowstone Conundrum (Is this the end?). And now I just finished part two of the sequel.I really have enjoyed the storyline and the science is believable. The characters are well-defined.But...there were still TONS of errors as in the book and in sequel one: spelling, grammar and more. One example: the author has Interstate 70 running east out of Denver into Nebraska. It should actually be Kansas. Any road atlas would show you that. And I like the pictures/illustrations that the author includes except that on my Kindle Fire HDX, they are not formatted correctly and are almost too small to see.Usually for a story that has this many mistakes, I would rank it much lower. But this is a good story and I am really enjoying it.Readers should note that there are adult language and sexual situations in this series.