Review: Word choice and editing is important
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2014
In a deadly game of 'catch me if you can', Scarlett finds herself in a treacherous predicament. Broken down mentally and physically by her fiance, DEA agent Stacy Wilkes is the norm but she loves him anyway and would do anything to prove it..even helping him reel in Warren Xavier who is a street hustler. But Stacy isn't the only one dangling bait. Geiha and her ruthless crew are gunning for him too. When a series of unfortunate events reveal many connections and plots, treachery takes on a whole new meaning.From the jump, the plot caught my attention but that quickly faded. I can't explain other than it was not well written. The word choice and the grammatical errors took away from this engaging plot. I tried to find connection with the characters and their many interactions but I couldn't. Also the various scenes were so fast and all over the place; one minute I would finally be getting into reading something interesting but then the description would not go in-depth to convince me of what I was reading. I don't think I will be reading book 2.