Review: SNOWFLAKE #1
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2014
Series:  SNOWFLAKE #1Category /Genre:  Paranormal Romance, Inter-racial RomanceReceived from:  Amazon purchaseRecommended for:  18+ due to sexual contentGrammar/editing:  C – average writing, probably self-editedThis is the first book in the Snowflake Trilogy.  They do need to be read in order.This is a short story (approx. 80 pages) with romance, suspense, and action.  This was a very good story.  The interaction between Logan and Tanisha is sweet, if a little rushed.  Logan is on the run from the FBI.  The government has been hunting, killing, and experimenting on weres for about 100 years without exposing them to the population.  Logan puts Tanisha at gunpoint to drive him out of town, but somehow she knows she can trust him.  Has she placed her trust correctly?This book is free on Amazon and meant as an enticement to purchase the other books in the series.  I suggest completing the editing that has been started on this book.  I spotted one continuity error and a few editing errors in addition to the editing marks that were left in instead of being corrected.  There were also a few places where the same word was used multiple times in a paragraph which I think is distracting for readers.Though I gave it four crowns instead of five, I would like to read the other books in this series, just to find out what happens to Logan.