Review: Good idea, bad delivery
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 19, 2012
I'm only at about 40% of this book and I am having the hardest time committing to finishing it.  The author uses the past tense and the present tense in the same sentences making it difficult to understand.  I'm having to edit the book as I go along to understand.  I think the book could have been so much better if someone had edited this prior to publishing it.The story itself is kind of boring.  We don't even know that the guy has a son until you get far into the book.  This even after he tells Rissa that he was once married, but fails to mention a son? Then later in the book its like oh and shes met his son.  Wait. What? At the dinner you are led to believe that he divorces his wife, but later its mentioned that hes widowed.  IDK, I think I'm giving up on this book.  I wouldn't buy it.