Review: Emm, good but some of your verbiage...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2013
I couldn't get into this story. As much as I enjoyed the idea, some of your descriptions made me gag...in disgust. Plus, I know it's a short, but I feel like if it was expanded a bit more, the romance between the main character and Ryan wouldn't seem so unbelievable.