Review: It needs a proofreader
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2014
I really enjoyed this story and the characters as well. I loved the interaction of all the characters with one another and felt that the story was well developed and believable. But the errors! Oh my goodness there were so many editing and proofreading errors. A second pair of eyes, or a third or fourth were desperately needed. I will continue to read the story because I thought it was that good, but I wish Ms. Lewis would proofread her work before publishing it.