Review: Otherkin
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 2, 2013
This story was OK, it could have been better in my opinion. I realize this is a short story which is not the issue. I just felt it was part of a story not fully developed. It had great potential. Since this is suppose to be a part one, I did read Tranquility. Still felt something was missing. I myself did not find any grammar errors.