Review: If only the writer has given this one more thoughts.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 17, 2011
This one has potential but I was left disappointed at the end. I wish the writer has given more time to the developing master/sub bond between Wade and Josh. If length of words is a problem, getting rid of the BDSM scene which has nothing to do with the two protagonists would be one answer. Or is erotica a must ? Their dom/sub bond is also not convincing. What do we expect when these two only meet after 60% of the story. Sure they already know things about each other through e-mails but to start their bond on the very day they meet, come on! I like Wade and Josh and wish the writer has given the story more thoughts! It is all the more disappointing when it shows the writer could convey emotions pretty well.