Review: Good - could be better, though
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 4, 2014
Okay, first off, I enjoyed the story and I liked the characters. I figured out the villain fairly early, but that wasn't a problem for me.I've become very sensitive to the way books are written, however, and I have to say that the one thing that bugged me about this one was that the dialog was stilted. "I will do this," instead of 'I'll do this." It's a little thing, but it was consistent and began to grate after a while, and knocked me out of the story. There were a few formatting problems (paragraphing issues) but those weren't bad. I know there aren't any perfect books, and I'm willing to overlook stuff. But the stilted language bothered me - people just don't talk like that!This was a four-minus for me; with a little bit of work, it would be a four-plus.Having said all that, I will search out other stories in Bluegrass country!