Review: Needs copy editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 13, 2014
The story itself is good, but the story needs an edit. There are formatting errors throughout, dropped quotes and even words, and continuity errors as well (first they were wolves, then they were lions, then they were wolves again). These things eventually caused me to set the book down, a few of these errors I can understand (well not the continuity ones), but they really hurt a good story that I hope to finish one of these days. The writer really needs to find someone who will mark up her errors so she can fix them before publishing.