Review: An okay short story.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 11, 2014
Sorry, but I just could not get into this one. Feel bad hurting the author's feelings, for I could tell she tried hard to pull it together. Just didn't work for me. But, hey, we all have to start somewhere. Good try. Not bad, but not great either. Sorry keep writing. You'll get better.