Review: Very good erotica! 3 1/2 stars or grade of B-
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2012
COMMITTED: AN EROTIC VALENTINE'S TALE delivered exactly what the title said so it wasn't the author's fault that I missed some signs of tenderness along with the raw sex. For a short story, I thought the character development for Grace and Matt was quite good. I thought the strawberries and chocolate scene was the most erotic and the imagery was so good, it made me hungry. Overall, I'd give this story 3 1/2 stars or a grade of B-.