Review: Good stories bad editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2013
This is book three. Book one was a good story with likable characters but very bad editing. Book two was the same but the editing was better. Now comes book two with a very good story but the editing has gotten worse. When Andrew is stepping down from a coach he suddenly becomes ''she". Later some one is looking at someone else "in disbelieving" not in disbelief. Instead of "suspected" the truth about something someone is "expected" the truth. One of the characters thinks "nah" to herself instead of no and the last line is "Ditto, my love". Ditto? Really? In a historical novel?Okay, now that I have expressed my displeasure with the sad state of editing in this electronic world I will say that I do really enjoy the stories. They are entertaining, passionate yet clean and have enjoyable characters. I'm just so tired of grammatically reconstructing sentences.