Review: Formula, and not a good one
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2013
Follows short story erotic formula. - Set up meet between people, woman thinks about relationship, they have sex, hint about future (happily ever after implied).Problems (1) no explanation is given for the setting (the billionaires club), which is kind of required for the first book of a series. (2) characters are not consistent - woman goes from drab to fatale with a change of clothes and man goes from power to crumbling confusion after sticking his pole in a hole. (3) only one sex scene which is vanilla and doesn't have any uniqueness based on the people involved or forwarding the plot.The story needed either more story or more sex. The one sex scene could have been closed door and would not have changed the story at all - or, the sex scene could have been the only thing in the story and the plot would not have changed at all.Giving it two stars because it does follow the formula - it is what it meant to be.Got from Kindle during free promotion.