Review: good start but falls short
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2013
The story is a okay one. Not original but has some twists that a good. However, the writing is stilted and the time line off. It takes 3 weeks for the main characters to come to the very predictable conclusion when the author could have extended this with ease. There are also mistakes in the story. At one point the male lead is described as wearing jeans and a button down shirt and miraculously shrugs off his suit when they arrive at their destination. It starts out much stronger then it ends.