Review: Short & Simple...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2012
And that's NOT a compliment.2.5 RATINGThis was way too short to really grasp some real umph from. The sex scenes were mediocre at best. I actually enjoyed the poking and prodding more than the sex. Due to complete lack of emotion it was hard to get into. I'm not saying I want to read about complete strangers making love, but couldn't there be some passion involved. Something other than, "Oh yea baby." and "You're so hot." There wasn't even a description of characters in the story, not even of hanging appendages, if you catch my drift. I understand you want to leave it up to the imagination of readers but, I'm reading an erotica. If I wanted to leave it all up to the imagination I would just listen to a recording of moans and grunts. It's the same difference, no faces or bodies to visualize. Just words to read or voices to decipher.The only reason this story is even hanging on to a 2.5 star rating from me is because the writing was good, the story was free, and it took about 10 minutes to read. So I didn't waste time nor money reading this.Advice to Author:Help us out with some description. Describing someone as "...he wasn't a slouch either." Doesn't help. Hair color, eye color, appendage comparison considering it was more than one guy, height, complexion, I don't know...SOMETHING!! I was description starved throughout this book.