Review: The story would have been better, had it been complete.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2013
Now, I am in no way going to run out and buy the next book in this lineup, and the reason for that is because I felt jilted in the first book.... I mean, the first part of the story.The first book here, was 36 pages for freeThe second book is 25 pages for $2.99And book 3 is 28 pages for $2.99That means that after I buy the other two parts of the story, I'll be in it $6 and only have 89 pages to show for it. That is one expensive, hacked up story. At least give me a hundred pages.... make it worth my time. (Nah, not even then)I don't like playing these games with writers, so I refuse to participate.Instead, I will accept and read this free snapshot, and forget about it faster than the time it took to read it.Otherwise, it was well written, but incredibly slow. This part of the book really gave you nothing to grasp onto, just boring dialog and a disappointing cliffhanger with a two foot drop off.