Review: Nice story...but
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2012
This was a nice story, a quick read, though i expected it to be longer.  However, there was a glaring error which jumped out at me.  When in the hero's point of view, the author has him noticing how she unzipped her jacket!!! This man is from the 1860s.  Zips were not in use until the 1900s (around 1917) though the patent apparently was given about 1851.  When the heroine unzips her jacket the hero could not have recognized what she was doing, giving it a modern name.  This is one of the things with time travels, authors need to be careful that they don't use modern concepts when in the POV of the character from the past.That said it was an okay read.Jane