Review: Good idea, marred by very poor writing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2013
The Seventh Age has great promise. But, loses the reader with terrible writing conventions - such as beginning sentences with the word "BUT". While I like longer sentences, there are way too many. Additionally, too many of these longer sentences are run-ons which makes them not sentences at all.Beautiful descriptions of women occurred at least twice. One of them was cloying. I wish the  writer had been more descriptive about the places the main characters visited as some of them are remote - beautiful and severe. I would like to have known more of the backstory. Finally, I concur with many other reviewers,  The Seventh Age would greatly benefit from the services of an editor. The idea is cool, but the execution is poor. The writer shows promise though.