Review: Good premise. Interesting locale and characters. Badly needs editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 21, 2013
This was an interesting story about a subject not often explored. The characters were fully developed and felt real. I finished this book while slowly getting more and more angry at the editing fails. Not a one of the 24 reviewers mentioned the numerous grammatical, typographical, and usage errors throughout the book. Obviously this lack of editing doesn't bother all readers, but it stops me cold in my enjoyment of the writing. Even Spell Check would have caught some of these, including the words repeated in a sentence.For example:left out wordsextra (repeated) words**** [SAID] / [should have said]"I"/me"A quick phone callS"/call"TOW the line"/toe the line"found was around when he was"/?????"HER life"/your life."Neither of them CALL"/neither calls"IS truly IS"/it truly is"COMPLEMENTS"/compliments (three times)Spelling:"EXTASY"/ecstasy"ROZY"/rosy"EGGZACKLY"/exactly"RACKED"/wracked"JIVE"/jibeThe book was free for me, but needs a lot of help before it is ready for sale at any price.