Review: Intriguing Novella
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2013
First, realize this story is only 80 pages or so and appears to be a stand-alone piece (not part of an on-going series). So even with some of my disappointments with not enough character and plot depth, I still gave the book 4-stars, because I’m judging the work as a novella and not a full book (if these issues continued on-and-on in a full book, I would have docked a star).Thoughts & Reactions:- The premise is interesting and a nice twist on the paranormal immortal mythos. In fact, it’s good enough to flesh out into a full book with 3x the pages. Well thought out “rules” for the immortality.- Bryan and Celeste have a love-at-first sight relationship, but at least the author provided enough clues to explain their relationship. However, take away their I’ve-always-known-you-in-my-dreams and then they don’t have much of a basis for their relationship, much less the love-at-first-sight. What really attracts them to each other that they’re willing to risk it all?- Solid writing skills. Yay!- Frustrated the secondary characters were way too quick to accept/believe Bryn’s immortal existence. Would’ve preferred more depth and conflict.- The villain’s evilness and motivations didn’t strike me as real – can’t really put my finger on why. Probably needed more plot time and interactions.A fun and interesting read, albeit quick. I would certainly consider reading other works from this author.  As a matter of disclosure, I received my Kindle copy free from Story Cartel [dot] com in exchange for a balanced and honest review.