Review: Great sorry, but some small advice offered
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2013
[...]You really should read this sweetie! No such thing as "lied down". Also change tourane (no such thing) to terrain. Otherwise, I love the story! Sometimes the writing is so eloquent, and sorry, but I see the word lied out of context and I want an eraser so bad. You did come up with a different concept and I applaud you! I look forward to more of the story. Please don't let my pet peeve mess with your imagination, just watch the spelling, grammar, context, and you will do great things! Here's to your very bright future!