Review: what?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2013
I didn't even know if the person speaking in the story was a man or woman until the last pages. It is a story about a person who lives in the same town as a man who ordered a bride. They're all fat and they make fun of them...then they all lose weight and everyone feels bad for making fun of them. the end.If a child had written this then that would make a lot of sense why the story is the way it is...but it's not written by a child.