Review: Second edition addressed editing issues and has made the story more enjoyable
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2013
Like the novel in question, I have also edited my review.  Few authors go back and edit their work based upon comments left by their readers, thankfully this author is one of them.  Editing issues were addressed, and as a result, the novel now has a much better flow to it.  Character's motives have become clearer, and in general, the format was improved upon and made easier to read.I liked the H/h.  The story features a h who spends most of her time dressed as a young man, finding it safer to travel as such (no surprise).  She meets up with the H while he is being accosted one night.  The storyline was interesting, and the story was well-paced.  It had all of the necessary elements to make it a good novel.As a result of the added effort put in by the author to improve the story, I have changed my rating from a *** to a **** .  Good job!  I sincerely hope other authors follow in this author's wake and go the extra mile to address typos and punctuation errors in their work.  Much appreciated by Regency fans!