Review: much much better!!!!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 7, 2014
Ok so I love that she took the advice from readers and she really stepped her game up. The plot was great. It was good to see growth in Gio and honey. Although some were lost, the story had a good ending. Now, editing was better than the first one but still could use some work. That is the reason for the 4 star rating. I see improvement in this young lady, and I look forward to reading some more of her work. Good Job