Review: meh
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 4, 2013
The story had a lot of promise, but failed to deliver.  It could have been written a lot better, with richer detail and more character development.  It's also way too short.  Also, the two main sex scenes were practically identical, but another one that was actually different was only referenced.  That didn't make sense.  Definitely not 5 stars.