Review: Wish I could give a ZERO STAR!!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2013
WTF! Seriously! I bought all 5 Katzman books together and even though book 4 had low ratings I thought it would at least give you updates of other characters in the series. Well it didn't and previous characters that seemed nice were asses in this book. Even Saris came off as uncaring at times. I agree with other reviewers that there were a lot of inconsistences in this book that were distracting starting with the letter to Rayne's father mentioned at the beginning of the book and the letter to Chellak from Bogden (part of that letter had Hassan mentioned as son and then as brother?). Then you have Rayne neglected and abused his whole life, almost raped, & then to find out his step-mom (& abusers) actually killed his father; only to have Saris talk Rayne into signing a contract with a so-called good guy, who isn't. Then Rayne is verbally & emotionally abused by said so-called good guy and good guy's so-called good family? Also why would Anjali and Marika (who are Elquone as well as bruters) just stand aside while Hassan, Bogden, & Urik all treat Rayne like garbage. In chapter 7 Hassan tells Rayne that Anjali is busy with his and Bogden's son yet in book 5 Unconventional Mate Bogden tells Semyon that he and Anjali have a baby girl. Also speaking of baby stuff at the end of this book Hassan says he's writing their baby girls name in the family book, yet at no time in the book did Hassan or Rayne ever state that the baby had been named and what her name was. Also the book seriously needed an editor for all the grammatical errors; which is a lot if I noticed cause I suck at english comp. Well all I can say now is I'll never buy another Stormy Glenn book. Not going to take the chance of more wasted money. MESSAGE TO THE AUTHOR: Ms. Glenn- those of us who buy your books work hard for the money, so the least you could do is spend the time to actually write a good book and get an editor to review your work. This tripe you obviously threw together in a couple of days is the equivalent of trash!