Review: Maybe a writing exercise.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2012
The writing is incredibly stilted and wooden constructed from boring 'He did this, he did that' sentences. No personality or emotion, even when the text is describing a towering rage it does it in such a lifeless way that it might as well be talking about seeing a dog named Spot run.In short I could not get into this story at all, the bland just killed any suspension of disbelief or immersion.I hope Marcus Johnson can fix this because there was obviously a lot of effort and fun ideas going into the book but to me at least it was all but unreadable.