Review: Finished this minutes ago and bought 2nd book.  Good strong female lead, good story, could use more editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2013
The description sounded promising and for .99 it was hard to go wrong.  I enjoyed it very much though the dad-daughter relationship seems a little extreme, but let things fester and it's not unrealistic.The end was unexpected.There are a few spots that could use better editing.There was one sentence that I 'tripped'  over because it said the opposite of what it should have and another place where it fell into either bad grammar or Pittsburghese ("suit needed washed").