Review: It's ok.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 6, 2013
It was an ok short story, enough to pass the time. The love in the story is missing, and since it is a short story there was not enough character development. But overall it was a fast read, good to pass the time, and it was free.It has some grammatical errors, but not too many to be distracting.I liked the short story, I would not read it again though.