Review: BEWARE!!! Worst possible writing ever
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 29, 2014
I am not in a review swap club (authors swapping 5 star reviews with each other) so this is my honest opinion. It seems to me that a barely literate 8 year old child has written these short stories. If only the author would find out the first thing about the Amish (hint: they do not say, "Oh God!"), read basic info on how to write dialogue, and at least buy a book on the basics of writing 101, and learn subject, verb, object. I found a lack of possessive apostrophes, and a lack of sentence structure.The dialogue is an utter nightmare. Example:"And what's that?" Hannah replied."Can I give you a ride?" Jonathan asked."I'm not sure that I want a distracted man giving me a buggy ride," Hannah joked."I promise to focus on you," Jonathan said."Don't you mean on the road?" Hannah asked."Right. Sorry," Jonathan remarked.