Review: Redo last third
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 25, 2013
Great idea. Started ok. I really liked the strong human who was "alphs" to his small group/family. The secondary characters were interesting. My problem was with Carey's mate Alpha Broden. He didn't seem to think much of his mate or of humans in general. I can maybe probably see the 'weak human' thing, but he never actually saw Carey's strength so we never got to see him change. He didn't have to work at the relationship at all. Also, why ask in the end if Carey would mate with him officially, and why would Carey say no. Broden had already bitten Carey (didn't tell him what the bite meant at the time)and Carey wanted them to live together plus he was having Broden's cat form tattoed on him. Sound permanent to me. I like Ms. Kell's works, but more often than not she finishes weak. Like she runs of of steam, ideas or time. Maybe too many irons in the fire. Quality over quantity should be the goal.