Review: i don't care about editing, but the plot is horrible
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2013
this is a space version of a magic sword that beats all enemies. The plot and characters are developed at a grade school level. I hate to be mean to new writers but this was just too horrible. To give peticulers, having a Navy XO lead a boarding party is just down right stupid and irrisponcible! Combat training and Naval warfare and land, in air or space have nothing to do with each other.But i kept reading, magicilly upgrading your ship in a few hours/days outside a ship yard???? really? Sorry too much BS i coulden't finish the book.