Review: Really good story when read all at once
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 30, 2013
Ok pros and cons. I really did enjoy this series. The only things that kept me from loving it, was the poorly worded dialogue and the intensely repetitive use of their names. I mean come on! How many times can you read John Taylor and Kelly! There's just never a need not to use pronouns. It was just very distracting . The dialogue was very poorly done. Nit in what was said, but in how it was said. This could have been a 5 for me, but it just missed the mark.