Review: Good story line but not fleshed out enough
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2013
I was hooked by the first two chapters and settled in to have a good read. In spite of the fact that the story line was very good and should have been an extra ordinary book, I found that the first person telling of the story left major holes in the knowledge of what was happening.There were many times when I had to go back and reread several paragraphs to understand who was saying what to whom. There were also times when the exact same paragraph was repeated to describe a part of the story. I felt that the author could have easily given the reader more information so that the chapters would flow more easily. I have decided not to order the next two books. I am disappointed as I thought I had found a new author to read.