Review: Tired plot, flawed character development, clichéd, badly needs a good editor.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2014
This is rather simplistic in style, and poorly edited in both a grammatical sense and a plot development sense. The author might have potential as a storyteller and could possibly improve with practice,but at the moment his work is painful to read. The writer has difficulty in deciding on the voice (the POV) of the narrative - it varies. It has unfortunately a rather clichéd plot; this type of revenge story harks back to the era of Charles Bronson and the Death Wish movies. Contains violence and tacitly suborns criminal acts. It is also very heavy on clichés and adverbs in both story and dialogue, there seems to be few the author missed. It is priced at the higher end of the scale for self-published books (from unknown authors), and when you consider that many fine books are priced at $.99 to $1.99, I regard it as overpriced.  At $.99 price level I would regard as better value.