Review: Okay, but....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 2, 2014
Grammar and punctuation drove me NUTS, an 8th grader should have had better punctuation and grammar than this one did.  The story was okay, BUT, every other day someone doesn't trust the other one.  Just kind of annoying.  I finished it, to see what happens, but then I deleted it from my kind so I'd never be temped to look at it again.