Review: Frustrating! but still...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 19, 2013
Be aware - when reading the reviews for the books (individually) the titles seemed to be mixed up. Meaning you will find reviews for one book listed under its proper title AND under the wrong titles.The first two books were very enjoyable.The third, while the story was good, overall, the editing/ proof-reading must have been skipped. There were story issues that irritated me. For instance the lead male passes out from blood loss and is helpless, yet he keeps waking up to crack jokes, get an erection and feel up the lead female?! And while he is passed out and bleeding the lead female stops to get randy and rub him down?!As for the forth book... I am TRYING to read it, but have not made it far in to it. Again, it seems as if proof-reading was skipped, and the lead female has gone from crude, violent and disgusting to innocent angel in one stroke.The story jumps two, then three weeks in one paragraph, but the male lead talks about an event that happened before the time jump and says it happened "last night".EDIT: I have since finished reading the fourth book. Fortunately, it got easier to read and better in content.  The editing is still lacking but I am glad I read it and am not disappointed at having paid to do so.The degree of carelessness, incongruity and heavy handedness is frustrating, in the third book, because this author can and has done better. It feels like a bait and switch. You get a great free book, well edited, then you - optimistically - buy others only to find them to be poorly edited, poorly thought out, and carelessly writen.Pity. Still, all in all... I enjoyed the stories, just frustrated by the carelessness.