Review: Possible good story here, but the most poorly written book I've ever read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 23, 2013
I like a good story with a lot of passion. And there is definately a lot of passion here. Too bad the story was so poorly written that I had to rework most sentences in my head before I could move on. (In the future, if you're going to write again dear author, have someone proofread your manuscript! You couldn't write a sentence to save your life!) The author should have made Liam seek out Ella to deliberately ruin her relationship with Lucas. This would have made more sense than the whole everyone else knew who he was and she didn't have a clue; as well as Liam hates Lucas and wants to ruin him. Also, there could have been more development of the relationship between Ella and Liam. Why did they fit so well together when neither of them could commit before? And Lucas was such a spineless wimp I couldn't imagine anyone wanting a relationship with him. I'm hoping the continuation will fill in a lot of the blanks, and that it is better written.