Review: overplayed and forced
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2013
I chose this story because I like the authors other works. But I have to say this story was boring, overplayed, and forced. I felt like the characters were unbelievable and the way Noah acted about the funding... I was just like: "really?"It seemed like someone gave her a plot and said: "write a story for this."That being said, I love her style of writing and I still think she did a good Job with the story.Were some scenes distracting and detracting to the over all theme? Yes. But those same scenes were the ones I found forced, e.g when she rushes over to his house after he gives her funding back, when he pulls her funding for basically no reason, etc.Were there good scenes that made me laugh? Definitely; e.g when the old guy is looking down her blouse, when she sees Noah and he has dogs, etc.It got 4 stars because I know she's done better. The length was fine, character development was okay, and overall I would recommend it for some one with 15-20 minutes to spare. By no means my favorite, but not even close to being my worst story.