Review: Just Awful!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2012
In the first place, it is a short story, which you are not told.  In the second place, there is no conflict.  The characters meet at a masquerade ball, look for each other, cannot find each other, eventually meet again, go to bed and live happily ever after.  You really do not find out who the characters are or how they got where they are in life.  This is a formula romance that did not carry the formula far enough.  How about a real story with some conflict to be resolved other than looking for each other?  The looking doesn't occupy much time or space in the story.  That is not conflict and it is resolved to quickly.  If it is free, it is ok but I wouldn't pay for it.  One plus is that it appears to be pretty well edited.