Review: I would like to like these books but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2013
I truly do respect persons who write, as it  truly takes commitment and skill. When a book is an e-book and free, I am much less critical. The fact that that this book goes for $2.99 should mean that somebody actually took the time to edit the book, and checked it for grammatical errors and just plain poor writing. I was truly appalled at the simple words that were misused, the descriptions that were inanely written. I could go on and on.If this were a free book or perhaps the $0.99 that the first book was, I could perhaps overlook the many flaws. The author has a good imagination and puts out a long tale. I just could not get over the misuse of English that was always there! A professional writer needs help with editing, I guess, so please obtain some! Couldn't some one of your family members or friends look this over and point out the issues?Sorry to be so harsh, but if you download this book or it's predecessor, you will know what I am incensed about!!