Review: Read it because; It's free.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
I have to say, the writing displayed in the story was vivid, and painted an excellent picture. But the picture it painted was not beautiful at all.If we tossed out the gypsy princess, and the sex, this might have been a way batter story. It should have focused 100% on the hero, he was the only interesting character in the plot. And this voyeuristic mystic chic kind grossed me out, Yeah, he knew she was watching them get it on... YUCK. That would have been enough for me to say, "Hey, wanna go find some privacy?"Then there was Justice's need to reflect on her sisters advice. Yeah, because while in the process, I always ask myself what my sister would do in this situation. LMAO! In retrospect, it could have been worse. She could have been out to hit up every Reaper in the community. But Justice floundered the story for me. Not a bad try though.