Review: An interesting story.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2013
I often enjoy young adult fiction, and this was no exception.  Overall, the story is interesting and moves along.  Her characterizations are generally good.  The big problem, however, is that the work was never thoroughly proofread.  The result is a collection of errors that seriously detract from the book.  For example, we find "elicit" used for "illicit".  Adverbs are not placed in correct form, and so forth.  The result can be very distracting.  As noted by another reviewer, there are sections which are overly description or just plain overly long in a way that doesn't add to the story.  I expect that will improve with more time working in her craft.