Review: much shorter than the other
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 14, 2011
This story also has potential, as does its predecessor. However it's much shorter and there's not enough detail to "get it" unless you've read the Fury short story. It feels a SMIDGE more complete but only because you have a modicum of backstory from reading Fury. This one cuts off at the end too but there's nowhere for you to go. It has a ton of sex scenes and fighting scenes make an appearance as well. It glosses over what would have been a great plot (well what I imagine could have possibly been a great plot) due to the shortness of length. If you're just looking to read something short and steamy then this will work for you.