Review: Somewhat flawed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 28, 2013
The story is interesting. Some of the characters are very compelling. Part of the problem for me was that I just couldn't understand Aelissm, the main character. Some of her moods were just inexplicable. I liked the hero, Patrick, better than her. Also, I didn't enjoy the sections that were written from the viewpoint of the villain--they just were too negative and obsessive. I know people are like that, but I don't need/want to read about them. In addition, there are numerous editing errors, and those detract from my enjoyment of a story.