Review: Thinly disguised ire
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2014
Nice illustrations, except for Daniel’s wolf snarl grin, which he wore from the first page to the last. His snarl indicates titanic insincerity. The cause of Danny’s irascibility is oddly not explained.The story was quasi pathetic because it was so simplistic, insincere, and mechanical. English is surely not the authors first language. This book, and none of your other books, even have a Table of Contents.Furthermore, Ms. Yael Aharoni, Congratulations on quitting your Day job to become a writer of children’s books in Haifa, Israel. No one else in the world is making any money as an independent writer of childrens books on KDP. I cannot help but wonder how you are making a living writing for children as your English is so poor. Even good books written in perfect English are not selling, so I have to wonder how your junky books are making any sales.Your books are boring, worthless slaps in the face. I am sure that the other writers, who really need the money but are not getting any, are happy that the money is going to you poor Israelites who cannot afford to feed your own people during Passover. Maybe it will help you Israelites to stop hating the United States for having much more material wealth than other people do. The majority of US citizens are of German decent and surely that must irk everyone over there. Maybe these are the causes of Danny’s unexplained irascibility.