Review: More examples of why I hate time-travel in my novels
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2014
R.J. is clearly growing as a writer.  Her style is crisp, clean and does a very good job maknig the characters the centerpiece of the plot.  As a reader I have a easy time relating to most of her main characters and the dilemas they face.Unfortunately, R.J. decided to delve into the realm of time-travel with this novel.  And I'll be blunt, adding time-travel to a world with superhimans was in my opinino a huge mistake.  Once the plot reached that point, character development and growth was cast aside by convenient shifts of time and perspective.  Overall the story ended up feeling almost incoherent as it jumped around following characters in two different time streams.I like this series and like most of the characters, but the plot twists in this story were a major disappointment to me.  R.J. had so much story already built up and many open plot threads she could have played with, but instead of continuing one of the established plot themes tried to introduce a new one that was lacking.Great story to advance the series, but otherwise this story was a disappointment.