Review: Had to put it down
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 3, 2012
I feel bad about writing this review because I have never had to give such a bad one.I have also never had to give up on a book on page 5 because of the horrible writing/lack of editing. I've had to read too many paragraphs over to make sense out of them because the wording, incorrect (or lack of) punctuation, and grammatical errors were so frequent, it was distracting from what the author was trying to project.I'm usually not hard at all on writers who have SOME issues with errors but this is the worst I've run across. I think the biggest problem is the author is trying to write like talking...most of the time in run-on sentences. In addition, the language used makes me think that the writer is a juvenile in high school who's rough draft needs serious polishing up from a teacher.This could be a great piece of fiction but needs an editorial cleanup crew in the worst way.