Review: Surprisingly Good Read (An honest review)
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 12, 2012
A Hearts On Fire ReviewI'm a lover of interracial romances and like to test the waters with new authors. This is a first time read for me by this author. After reading "For The Love of the Game", it will not be my last. Though the author uses a tried and true plot line, accidental marriage with a case of insta-love, the dialogue was sharp and on point.It did not delve into pure smut (actually sex scenes leaned closer to 'fade-to-black' than of graphic) which was refreshing. Also the characters were endearing, the heroine not shrewish (though there was a scene were was a little worried). Also the author had both characters speak as if they have a brain in their head, they spoke like human beings. It was great to read an interracial love story with out the 'ghetto speak' & unnecessary drama.What held me from rating this story five stars?1) The typo of the friend's name - in the beginning of the story it was spelled Teresa then in the next paragraph it was Theresa. I guess the author decided on Theresa later on in the story. There were minimal typos all around but the little things stick out with me.2)I think if the author added more length to her story, giving us more scenes with the two building their relationship (there were times the story just jumped from point A to point E with out explaining points B-D). If the story had more length, I think it would have been knocked out of the park.I was thoroughly satisfied despite my minor complaints. Great story, excellent character dialogue. I will look forward to reading more of this author's work.