Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 21, 2013
The story, as it seems set to develop, is not that bad, but the writing put me off. It is very unpolished and unappealing, and more than once I was tempted to give up reading. The dialogues are flavourless, and even the sex scene left me cold, due to lack of strength in the writing. The story ended in a cliffhanger for no reason other than it was obviously divided into several parts (sold separately) and turned into a money maker.