Review: Criminal
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2012
This is a super short story. Loaded with flashback's, seen by a not completely coherent lead character. Since he is confused, so was I the reader. Because the story is s short it does get right to the point, and wrap things up. But the shortness of the story also does not allow us to develop any attachment to any of the character's, so I really did care what happened to Teregryn in the past, or the present. We know the elves and humans were at war over the earth, but we didn't really know what there differences were from us aside from environmental love and pointy ears. I think if it had been a bit longer I would have liked it. If the author decides to create a full novel with these character's it could be very good.