Review: Had potential, but...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 24, 2011
I bought this because I thought the plot had the potential, but it was really just a tried and true idea, driven into the sands of Egypt.You would think that between two authors, one of them would have had an education in elementary writing. I know everyone complains that inexpensive Kindle books can't be expected to be well edited, but come on. Commas aren't just pretty things to be inserted where they look nice. They actually do serve a grammatical purpose. if you're going to submit a manuscript for publication, at least run it through a grammar checker.And I can't say enough here about character development, because there isn't any. The two main characters do, say and think everything together. Mitch and Alex did this, Mitch and Alex did that, Mitch and Alex said this, etc., etc. The supporting characters' main function is product placement to defray the costs of the upcoming "blockbuster" movie.Clearly there is a sequel to this book coming, but it's completely obvious who and why from the get go.Like I said earlier, a waste of time.BTW, "anyways" is not a word!