Review: *author please take note*
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 1, 2014
I find this authors books a little hard to follow sometimes. Spelling errors, wrong words used, even using the wrong characters name. But the biggest thing that bothers me, where are the indentations for paragraphs?  New lines for new speaking parts?  It's very hard to read when it's all smooshed together. You can't tell where someone stopped speaking and a new person begins. Sometimes I thought it was a different person but then realized what I read didn't make sense so I had to go back and reread and realized it was the same person. The authors made several references on their Facebook posts about the book being at the editors and proofreaders. Really?  When it comes down to it, I didn't really love this one. It was all over the place. The ending felt completely lazy to me. It was like they ran out of time and said oh Greyson is really a good guy. With that being said I have to read after the ex games and will probably read the next series. BUT for the love of god, PLEASE fix the layout of paragraphs and speaking parts!