Review: Gray wannabe
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 4, 2013
I couldn't connect with this "hero", Jackson, at all. He blew hot and cold, went from nice to not speaking to anyone on the turn of a dime. He gave Riley no choices about introducing BDSM into their relationship, nor did he care for her after he caused her pain. I thought that the heroine, Riley, read more into the relationship than I could ever see. Even though he helped her dad, Jack still was unstable with her, but she just meekly went along with it.Not my cup of tea. Also, there were a few small editing errors, but not enough to make reading difficult. (ie: "say" for "stay").Heat factor hot.