Review: Difficult to finish
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2014
This book would benefit a great deal from editing from both a line editor and a content editor, and a major rewrite. It mixes past and present tense, has the wrong words in places, (for example, "with" instead of "wish",) and was generally hard to read. The further into the story I got, the harder it was to keep reading.The storyline is dark. It starts out depressing, and gets darker. In spite of the story ending with Rebecca and the man she loves being together, I wouldn't call this a romance. Perhaps that is what makes it "Gothic".