Review: I can't believe I actually paid money for this...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 22, 2011
First, I want to say this isn't a BOOK, it's a short story (being too short for even a novelette).  That in of it's self is disappointing considering you must pay for it, but the poor writing makes this story truly terrible.  The inconsistent 'accent' of the characters was distracting, first they used proper English, then Scottish intonations.  The misspellings and grammar were also distracting.  Unfortunately, it was the absolutely horrible writing that earned this story only one star.First our heroine has black hair, then light brown hair, then she has black hair once again.  Our hero and heroine flash between anger and seriousness and uncontrollable passion, all in the space of one sentence and after knowing each other only moments.  And, evidently, we need to be reminded that our hero's shirt is saffron over and over again!  Dialog ranged between stilted to sophomoric to downright childish (and back again) all in the space of a page.  But, I think it was the fact that the story took place over two or three days and our hero and heroine went from complete strangers to utterly committed soul mates in that short time is what stretched the realm of reality too far.Even though the 'book' was very short, I found myself skipping parts just to get to the end.  If this is a sampling of her work I can't see myself reading any other of her books, not with this one so painful to read.