Review: Good story but needs polishing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2013
I actually enjoyed the characters a lot. I was able to connect with Ryan, Brady and Ellis easily and enjoyed the simple, yet fun story line. The only real complaint is the editing job! (or lack there of). It Became a real distraction and sadly, I found it difficult to concentrate on the rest of the story. If this gets cleaned up a bit, it'll be a really good read for sure!