Review: A tad too much info-dump?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 21, 2014
A nice simple read.  A few conversation repetitions that could have been done without.  I couldnt understand why people kept phoning up to make a time to meet to pass on not-that important information when it could just as easily have been divulged in that phone conversation?  Likewise, I felt there was a lot of forensic info dumped in large chunks pausing  story flow .... was this all  padding?  Also, as another reader has said, some transition paragraphs were poorly managed.  And it would have been nice to have had a bit of a touchy-feely romance - there was no emotion here.  Heavens, this is twenty-first century - coyly closing the bedroom door on a  bit of nighttime romping is embarrasingly nineteen fifties-ish writing.  Still, all in all, an intriguing enough read to keep me going through to the end.