Review: Good, Could have been Great!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 15, 2012
First let me compliment Mr. Albert for writing a good crime story without gore, bad language, or erotic sex driving the interest.  The plot has the assassination of a high profile political operative as the base topic.  Due to lack of progress on solving the case a local game officer is brought into the investigation and he more or less works through the clues to end of story.Second Mr. Albert's main character Leach is borderline alcoholic and stumbles through a lot of serious poor judgment events. This is okay if Leach is just to be a sideline character, but in my opinion he needs a special something that will make readers root for him and allow readers to walk in his footsteps.Third Mr. Albert needs, again in my opinion, to raise the tension of his story to give Leach more of a pro-active role instead of just matter-of-fact reaction to events as they happen.  I'm not an expert reviewer by any stretch but I know some stories just grab you and pull you in. This one could have but did not.