Review: Agonizing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2013
There is a saying that a book should draw you in with the first paragraph - this one never worked for me and I gave it up before I finished chapter one.  There two long sentences in the second paragraph:  "George carried their daughter into the kitchen, arms wrapped tightly around his neck, she was holding on as he lowered her to the ground, her hands sliding across his brown skin.  Rebecca handed him the briefcase, laughing playfully as he pulled her close to him,kissing her repeatedly on the neck, her coffee-colored cheeks taking on a delicate red glow."  Really??  Then later on in chapter one, a police officer appeared in the story who was just not a believable character.  At that point I realized I did not like any of the characters nor the writing style of the author and I had zero interest in reading any more.  The only good thing is that the book was free.  There are too many better books around to waste my time reading any more of this one.