Review: What a shame......
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 6, 2013
The author has come up with an interesting and engaging story. This book could possibly have been a big seller. But, no matter how good his ideas are, the fact that the manuscript is so poorly edited ruins the whole thing.Grammatical errors, syntax errors, poorly written portions, confused facts, unexplained jumps from one scene/time to another......the whole thing is just a shame.Mr. Lima, if you paid an editor, ask for a refund of the entire amount. If you didn't use an editor, get one and re-write your book. Your premise is interesting, but the reader's focus is easily lost as a result of the distractions of so many errors.This is one of those times where I was cheated even though I got the book for free. I was cheated out of the time I spent reading it and the enjoyment I hoped to feel after reading a well written and professionally edited book.Shame on the publisher for allowing this manuscript to be distributed way before it was ready.My recommendation is: Don't bother reading ZERO POINT and certainly don't pay for it.