Review: Good stories
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 21, 2014
All the stories were good especially the first one. Stories three, four and five had so many errors in them I couldn't understand why a writer of your quality let it happen. The characters were mixed up, the time lines were wrong, there were so many words left out or wrongly used it just spoilt the whole flow of the stories.  People taking their clothes off twice in the same scene and words that were obviously spell check errors e.g. break for brake. So many of them. What a shame. More editing would be in your best interest.Caz