Review: Are all the editors dead?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2013
Story line isn't bad. If only the author had taken middle school English. and learned what a sentence is. Or even a paragraph, or perhaps had taken the trouble to hire e reasonably literate individual as an editor.It is painful to wade through sentence fragments and fragmented ideas. If edited and made coherent, it would likely be worth reading; I gave up half way through.