Review: A very strange story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 20, 2011
Even though this is flash fiction, I expected the story to be better.  The beginning starts out "in a dark, dark house, there is a dark, dark..." and it continues with the dark, darks for quite a while.  I thought that was very much overdone and it sounded like a children's story at first.The middle of the story is better, making more sense, and has some fairly good descriptions of what is in different areas of this house as the narrator describes them.  However, the entire story is very dark, or maybe I should say it's a dark, dark story for sure.The ending is quite surprising and I'm not really sure what it means in relation to the rest of the story.  I think if this was reworked it could be a much better story.