Review: Another excellent episode, needs a proof reader
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2013
Advent is a bit short in comparison to the two previous books, but I'm not as disappointed by that as some readers are.Balancer is an excellent conclusion, though also a bit short. Unlike some readers, I wasn't upset with the wedding plans - they were part of the story.Perhaps the two books should be combined - after the author HIRES A PROOF READER!There are so many punctuation errors and misused words (the reason I didn't give any of the four books 5 stars).For example, one wears a brooch, not a broach / chaffing = chafing / phenomena is a plural word / you have a capital city, which may or may not have a capitol / affect = effect / harsh censor = censure / preempted = usurped /  sight = site