Review: A cute and romantic short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2014
This is a short story about Adrian and Hazel. Friends for several years, each had been involved with other people over the course of their friendship. Circumstances have made them roommates - and they are both currently uninvolved. Will they let their true feelings come to the surface?I enjoyed this short romantic story. Adrian's character comes across as a down to earth, friendly man who obviously cares for Hazel. Hazel in turn is bubbly and sweet and has hidden her feelings for Adrian deep down inside so as to not ruin their friendship. The sexual chemistry between them sizzles as they decide to see whether a deeper relationship is possible. Although I would have preferred less emphasis on the fact that alcohol was involved in the relaxing of their inhibitions towards each other, the two of them together were sweet and tender and obviously carried deep affection for each other, making the love scenes believable. The dialogue between them is engaging and humorous, making for a pleasant and well written tale. As the story takes place over one day, the happy for now ending fits perfectly. 4 enjoyable stars!