Review: would have been better if it was longer
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2014
Dane comes back to Surrender 10 years after walking away from the woman he loves, and he is bound and determined to get her back. Charlotte wants nothing to do with him and wants to protect her son.This was a very quick story. It wasn't great but it wasn't horrible either. It had some great erotic scenes in it but I just didn't connect with the characters at all. Danes reasons for leaving just didn't cut it with me. He gets way too mad when he finds out about his son and Charlotte gets over it way too easy. It just wasn't at all believable to me. The sexual chemistry was great though.If this story had been fleshed out more and had more time developing the characters it could have been really good. The plot was a good one, its just the execution that wasn't so hot.