Review: Good Storyline
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 4, 2013
This book did offer a good storyline but I almost didn't get through it because it was so badly written.  There were numerous (too many to count) typographical and grammatical errors, which really did take away from the story. I give the author credit for her effort but for your next book please invest in an editor or throw a reading party with your girlfriends. You'll find it's money well spent. I felt the story could have been better had the characters not been so ghetto.  Zaniyah was a pretty girl who owned her own business but one would never guess that about her because her character was so ghetto and ignorant it condradicted her intelligence. The book would have been just as good if the characters were portrayed with some intelligence, being upwardly mobile, young African Americans with street saavy & swag. I am really getting tired of seeing black people portrayed as loud, ignorant, violent and ghetto on TV, in films and in print (it's really gotten old). Kane and Kierra were both nuts. Loved Nasir and Sanaa. Not sure I'll be reading part two but I would like to see the author's growth, so maybe, just maybe I will.