Review: Loved the story line, but editing sucks
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 27, 2012
I loved the story line, but it really does need an editor. I normally don't take off for bad editing, but I did this time. Otherwise, I would have given it 5 stars because the story moved along at a nice pace. It was a good story. The author has a way of reeling you in. You just have to get past the grammatical errors. Please, please, please get someone to edit your future books and possibly this one too. Then upload again because you are a great story teller.