Review: Hmmm...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 10, 2014
It seems I'm not in agreement with others who have left reviews so far.The story started out well, creepy and sad, and I was getting excited. But. The author constantly switches from present to past tense and back again, often within the same sentence. This kept throwing me out of the story, and it happened over and over all the way through.And while the story started nicely, and ended reasonably well, there was a section in the middle, or just after it, that was just blah.For me, it had potential but didn't quite get there.