Review: Not Quite Baked To Perfection
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 8, 2013
This is a short story or novella that should be a clean romance BOOK. The characters are good. The brevity is not.There are some wonderful interactions but the ending leaves a lot to be desired. There are not enough interactions for ending. Plus, the ending leaves two people alone ... without the supporting cast to enjoy the ending as it comes to happen.I highly recommend the author revisit this story, flesh out some of the actions and then, extend the ending so that it will finish in the true "happily ever after" of the romance tradition.When 3 generations of family are involved ... it makes sense to me that they be involved in the ending.This book is like unbaked bread dough... almost there, but not baked to perfection, yet. I'd only recommend reading this if it is revised.Blueprint for Love (Choc Lit)