Review: Loved it!!!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2012
Loved it! Rhea is a beautiful, divorced, 36 year old woman with a talent for baking, especially with decorating cakes. Despite her hard work, her boss, Paul, only shows discouragement and is unfair in the dealings between her and another employ who seems to take credit for her work. In fact, Paul appears very harsh to Rhea at one point, which didn't sit well with me. It kept me wondering how things would work out with them.Several factors made the story very enjoyable. Although there is mostly, little interaction between Rhea and Paul, hints are given of their actual thoughts towards one another. The truth is revealed in a very exciting manner. Magic is a major part of this story with two secondary characters showing another side to the plot. There is one element regarding these two that could be seen as strange or if given a little more thinking, it might appear understandable to some people. The story does extremely well for the short length that it is given, but it would have done so much better with a longer ending, or at least a more detailed, present form writing for the main characters. The end was written in an original way but right when I was waiting to see how everything worked out for Rhea and Paul, the final sentences seemed like the story was more about the two secondary characters than Rhea and Paul.Overall, I loved it and would love to read other similar stories by the author.