Review: There are a lot of errors.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2012
The author needs editors.Aside from the insane amount of errors, spelling, grammar, and ambiguous wording I enjoyed the story. It felt like it was almost a mash of several shorter stories.--edit-6/7--It was almost to long the book could have been ended several times but in the end the length left me satisfied with the world and the book that was left. I am looking at buying the next book but only just because.If the author had felt comfortable enough to give this to a good editor and let them rip it apart until they had a neatly packaged nearly error free version i'd have given it 5 stars. even with the errors i was tempted to go for 4 but it needs work enough that 3 is what it is left with.--edit#2--I'm changing my review i'm adding a star just cause i feel like it..--edit#3--i think i'll add one more star just because its free.