Review: sweet and funny romance
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 16, 2012
This is a sweet and funny romance. With a male point-of-view, this story offers a unique and refreshing twist on a romance.The story is told mostly through dialogue, which can be tricky. For the most part, the dialogue was done really well. The banter was witty, the flow was smooth, and the language used was very natural. It seemed like dialogue that you would overhear in the real world. My only complaint was that it was easy to lose track of who was talking because there wasn't much "he said" "she said" filler.The alternate timeline scenarios lent an interesting angle to the story. I will admit that sometimes when Derrick was explaining things to Brian I got a bit lost in the circular talks, but other than that it was fairly easy to follow.