Review: Enjoyable, Not Bad at All
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 26, 2013
I liked this story. The character development was good, though I think that Kieren was over-played for the last few chapters. His character seemed to stop growing just to add tension to the story. And I have a couple of recommendations for our British author. Americans back up the car or back out of the driveway. We don't reverse out the driveway.In Florida, we call them the Keys, and we are referring to all of the islands which extend south and west from the southern tip of Florida. Calling your mythical town just "Keys" actually slowed your story, since I kept looking for "the" before it.In the USA, there is a mediocre chain restaurant called Appleby's so it would be impossible for anyone to open their own restaurant with the same name. And if the restaurant was any good, it would be the last name they'd want! Use Google, or try something a little more generic.