Review: needs weight
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 16, 2013
A military~war short story without a lot to it. Well enough written if a bit florid, but without character development or complications to give it weight. It's a solid subject and there's no doubt this could easily be a true story, rather than fiction; it's totally believable. I just believe there should be more to a short story than reality. So three stars.