Review: I Need To Be Nice
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 19, 2014
I am trying to find the words so that it doesn't seem as though I am attacking this author. This is just a very poorly constructed story. Everything about it is weak. The characters never settled in. Their personalities seemed to alter and switch. The re was far too much backstory that could have been condensed and still informed the reader what it needed to know. There was def Italy no real BDSM/Dominant/submissive element. It was fake. There needed to be a well-researched and then execution of a true D/s relationship. The organization these two works for seemed silly and not well thought out. I. Fact, it reminded me of a comedy of what the ICoS organization is. I'm sorry. It is just not a well thought put, executed story. Not recommended.