Review: Requires heavy editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2014
The story has real promise, as did the 1st in this series. I bought the 2nd hoping that the author would have improved her writing skills, but no such luck. I managed to squeak through the first book and the premise of the series is a great one, just very poorly delivered. I could only make myself read the first quarter of this before asking for a refund due to poor quality.POV's vary greatly leaving you wondering who is speaking most of the time. The grammar & typos are atrocious. Speaking voice varies from first to third person, sometimes within the same sentence. Thoughts are feelings of the characters are extremely repetitive and often redundant. Author has characters state they are going to do "something" and in the very next sentence they walk away with no follow-through, as though the thought has been completely dropped or forgotten.Quite frankly, it reads as though the author suffers from ADD. "I'm going to have the characters do such & such. No, I'm not. Let's go this direction instead, but let's not clarify it (or even acknowledge I said something different).