Review: A good story turned bad
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2013
The story of Michael and Taryn, INVITATION TO LOVE started out strong and fizzled out so fast, I did not even know when exactly it became flat.The premise was great - a single mom with twin girls trying to keep things together and protect them from meddling ex in-laws. A successful man who has everything except love.There were so many opportunities for conflict, to raise emotions and then find resolution (I actually found four instances) but the author never took the readers anywhere and continued on the one dimensional story telling.***Spoilers****Gosh, how can Mac, Taryn's father in-law who had been described as bad ass actually just crumple so fast. There was not even a fight. Michael did not even have to flex a muscle.Taryn came out as a shallow woman by accepting David's attention. And then when Michael finally decided to go alpha on him it was off camera.In fact, all the good conflicts were all off camera. And that's the reason why I'm giving this book a one star rating.This book is PG 15 due to situational drama and some sexual content. There is only one sex scene and it very brief and not graphic.