Review: Just Bad...  no matter how you slice it
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2013
I appreciate anyone who sits down to write... It certainly isn't within my capacity, but I have to agree that this was just bad. The hero was Dr Jekyll Mr Hyde as he would act alpha male one minute than immediately after have no backbone- often enough I had whiplash. The female lead was all "I have these really terrible things that happened to me, don't touch me" then let Dr Jekyll-Hyde have at her. Didn't get his whole harem thing as it didn't add to the story, and who wants the heroine to be second or seventh in that line! Then "my son died, I can't possible withstand carrying another child" but immediately have repeated sex with no protection against pregnancy (...let alone how many was in that line before me?). Spoiler..... at the very end the heroine turns up pregnant, decides she doesnt want the child but wants to protect it and give it "everything". She comes to the startling realization that Dr Jekyyl-Hyde millionaire extraordinaire will be able to give it everything, but then runs away by jumping the back gate of the house with zero money or resources. I wanted to smack the back of her head and ask "is your stupid switch stuck in the On position" most of the book. Not characteristics readers want for either leads in any story.