Review: Good but needs work
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2012
First of all let me say that I really liked this book. There is a lot of action, and the plot keeps you reading to see what happens next. I have enjoyed each of this author's books so far and plan to buy more as they come out. That said there are some problems with this book. The biggest and most glaring are the grammar errors. There are missing words, and words switched around in the sentence. At times I was force out of the story to try to figure out what I just read. This happened a lot. This really interrupted the flow of the story and kept me from giving it 5 stars. The other thing that irks me about this book is the temperament of the main character. Without giving out any spoilers, if I had taken the abuse Jake had for that long I would have snapped and gone on a shooting spree. There is a reason why he does not do so, but it bugged me none the less. This happens in a bunch of this author's works. With these faults I would still recommend picking up his books. While the need for an editor is glaringly apparent, the book is worth while on its own merit.