Review: Good story --Unlikable Hero
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 10, 2014
This is book 2 in the V.I.P. series. I loved the first and was excited for this one. However,  it definitely falls short.  The story and plot were phenomenal! Most of the characters were well-written and fleshed out except for the hero. In the beginning, I liked Kaden's character. As the story progressed,however,  I most definitely did not.  *mild spoilers* Even after knowing what Sawyer went through,  he was too pushy and overbearing. No, she wasn't raped but she had been through a traumatic experience and his whole demeanor towards her was sickening.  During these times, I felt the author did not stay true to Sawyer's character from what we had previously learned about her. No way would she have put up with his crap! Also, 'those particular'scenes with Ax did not ring true with the heroine's character.  The story itself was excellent but I did not like the hero. Another thing, the heroine's actions did not match her personality.  The submission thing could have been handled differently and still been true to form.