Review: A bit disappointed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2014
I loved Hawkeye's story in Riding Desire, so I wanted to read more.This is the story of Adele, Mal, and Dorian. Adele and Mal have a history, but things went bad two years ago. When they find each other again, there's a complication--Mal's hot musician roomie, Dorian.The characters are interesting and the story flows well. I like Hawkeye's style a lot, and she does a very good job with shifting POVs. The book left some unresolved issues, which I didn't like, but it wasn't a huge deal.  Unfortunately, there were so many editing errors that some paragraphs were incomprehensible. Not just typos, but continuity errors as well. The story in Riding Desire didn't have these problems, but now I'm gun-shy.So yeah, I liked it, but I won't be back.