Review: This is a short story but I really like the idea behind it
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2014
This is a short story but I really like the idea behind it. I think the author needed to spend a little more time working the details, descriptions and emotions into it. Generally though, the plot was good, the characters likable and the sex hot. I'd LOVE to see the sex described more with a lot more emotion and maybe even more words between the couple. Overall I really enjoyed it.