Review: well written
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2014
The story is well written.  Descriptive dialogue and atmosphere.  The most jarring is the gratuitous juvenile sex.  Really, a starship commander comparing boyfriend endowments with a subordinate contractor?  And groping another senior officer in sick bay?  There's a galactic war going on and the writer spends time on high school hormones instead of on mature relationships and respect?  Let what takes place behind closed doors be a fade-to-black imagery left to the reader.  I guess the rest of the series already is written with youngster toilet humor already in place.  I won't be paying to read that.