Review: Can't make it through this one, it  Needs an editor
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2013
I'm usually one that can easily look past editing issues for a good plot but as far as I could see this had neither element in place.  From the very first chapter the book switches back and forth between first person perspective then third.  This kept happening even within the same paragraph.  Their are typos and grammatical errors.  In addition kindle formatting is off causing extra spaces in the middle of words.  I was bothered and annoyed by the dialogue.  Sorry I can't think of something positive to say.