Review: Boring and not well developed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2014
I thought I would like this one, but it was very disappointing.  The whole story was just boring for me.  Unlike some others, I did finish it.  I did finish it mainly because it was fairly short and I started skipping some of it.  There were some grammar issues for me, too.  This is a huge turn off when people don't do a good job with editing.  Though an editor is credited, I think it could have used another pass over.  Example:  Your back instead of You're back.  Makes the sentence not even make sense if the right word isn't used.  I know this is a common mistake for many people, however if you're going to write and publish a book you need to know the difference and use the words correctly.  These kinds of errors are distracting to those of us who care about the use of proper grammar in what we choose to read.I also thought the book was repetitive and the interaction between all the characters was shallow and boring.  There were parts where the author just told the story like it was a timeline - Adam went here and then he did this.  Sophia did this and then she said this.  It was just boring.  If it had been developed, the story could have been better though the writing needs some improvement.  Decent idea, lacking execution.