Review: could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2013
The story started out great. There were minimal editing issues and I enjoyed the characters. However unfortunately the characters didn't develop as the story progressed and I started to loose interest from the lack of emotions. It felt like what little emotion portrayed was forced. Also I felt like parts of the story were out of place. I have trouble with books where the main characters fall in love and share their love before the conflicts are all done with unless those conflicts are started from the beginning of the story.