Review: Excellent story. VERY poorly written.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2013
This is a 5 star story, with 1 star writing. The characters, ALL of them, are well developed. The plot is excellent.The punctuation is first grader level. There are missing words, extra words in a sentence, no periods at the end of a sentence, no capitol letter following it, run on sentences, words used in the wrong tense, words with totally different meanings used to convey thought(though vs through vs thorough).Will I read more by this author? YES!I would also love the opportunity to proof read for her, she needs it and readers deserve to get her works in publishable shape :)