Review: Great stories, needs editing!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2014
After reading the first story of the trilogy in the Fated Mates collection I wanted to know what else would happen. Yes in Change Into Me I felt like Lily and Damon's "love" was a little too fickle. Lily wants Damon, but when he doesn't do what she wants him to, or doesn't behave the way she thinks he should she just drops him, that's not a lasting love. She and Damon do become the mates they are fated to be, it just takes a while :)I give Lynn Red kudos for creativity, completely unexpected stories and plots, but the editing was atrocious! Every time the character from the New York Times talks to Lily and mentions how her stories never need any additional work I cringed, because these definitely DID need extra work! LOTS of extra work. I give three stars for amazing creativity, but the poor/non existent editing means I can't fully recommend this, unless you can get past that!