Review: repetitive
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2013
Story idea was inventive and could have been entertaining if I hadn't felt like the author was telling the story to a five-year old with sex scenes thrown in for the adult in me.  Descriptions and feelings were repeated frequently - how often do I need to be reminded of Lydia's gender studies degree? It's as if the author didn't trust me to remember the details. If you cut out the repetitiveness, the story would be a third shorter.