Review: got super involved ('cause i'm sensitive like that lol) and then ...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2014
This definitely has a lot of potential. I was reading, got super involved ('cause i'm sensitive like that lol) and then BAM "Want to know what comes next"???? So, here I am 'cause I want to find out what happens hahaha. There were some errors that were annoying, like she was talking to the the main dude, but called him "john" (her ex's name). I wish that he had stayed a little longer. 'cause falling in love after one week of sex sex sex….is a little unrealistic. What you're feeling isn't love, it's lust…..but I still want to know how it ends!