Review: Weak characters and plot development
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 23, 2012
I had absolutely no relation to the characters. Aya was ridiculously stoic and blasé, Kaleb was overprotective to the point of dictating other characters' decisions, and Mallory was boring. None of these characters had any spark to them. And each main relationship, Aya and Belias, Kaleb and Zevi, Kaleb and Mallory, have already been established so we never really see any build or development in that area.I also found the plot to be have quite a few holes in it. I mean how does Evelyn really mean to carry out her plan? And even at the end when Mallory finds out the big secret she's just like well, ok... sounds good.I don't think I can keep reading this.