Review: Not polished but a good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 21, 2013
There is a good story here but it has some issues with continuity and plot logic. The breaks in the narrative on occasion are jarring, and a few characters that you would think are key, appear and disappear abruptly. Dialog is all over the place. Sometimes done very well and at other times not so much. For its faults its probably a 3 star book at best, but the imaginative story arc rates much much higher. It really needs another clean up pass and a price drop to the $2.99 neighborhood.I did enjoy the story and will buy a sequel, but not at the $5 price if the writing doesn't improve.