Review: Poor Editing and Stilted Writing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2014
I downloaded this book a while back and deleted it without even making it halfway through. The grammar and writing was so poor, I just couldn't get past it. When I saw replies to several reviews that said "all" errors had been removed, I thought I'd give it another try. Nope.Ms. Stanford is in dire need of an impartial editor. Even a local critique group would be beneficial. I'll go a step further and encourage the author to take some time and read her work out loud. I think she'd be shocked and dismayed at the number of mistakes contained here. At 15% in, I lost count. On top of that, the heroine just comes across as an arrogant, self-important witch.When I read that Joshua is a "construction MAGNET", I decided to give up. Ms. Stanford, the word you want is MAGNATE. Still hoping she'd learned from other reviewers, I checked out the "Look Inside" of the second book in this series and found a mistake in the very first sentence.I'll never know if the storyline is any good. I just can't finish it.