Review: Okay read
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2014
I'm not usually one to complain about grammar,cause if I can follow the story I can adapt. But girl you really need an editor or learn how to write.  Every other sentences had missing words or was out of context. I thought your first book was bad, but this was worst it was hard to follow with all the mistakes. I'm not trying to be mean, but if you want to be taken seriously in the writing game you need to seriously tighten your game.  Having said that you have potential. Please take your time with the next book and make sure what your writing makes sense.