Review: good story but lots of spelling errors
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 29, 2013
The storyline itself was very good and the characters were well defined and personalized. However, it really needed a better proof reading by an editor. There were numerous spelling errors and added words turned around which was quite exasperating. I found myself so engrossed in the story that I was waiting for the next mispelled word to crop up and interrupt the storyline. Please Mr/Ms. editor proof read the work. As an aside, a rushed ending on the consequences of the ice rift around the world.