Review: Aside from technical issues......I LOVED it......period.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2014
I don't rate on lack of an editor - NOT if I was able to follow the story-line.  In this case - yes.....an editor would have helped improve visually, and in some misuse of words.  Doesn't bother me though.Why?I jumped right into the story and followed it to the ending and wasn't taxed one little bit in keeping up.  I was entirely entertained and found the story very well conceived.  It's a first novel and to me this means that the novels that follow this one will get better with each subsequent entry.Paula Marinaro has no issue with her creativity in creating a story that is engaging and heartfelt.  I've read dozens of this same type story in the past year and this story was NEVER boring.  I even took my Kindle to the gym because I wanted to keep reading to see what would happen next.  I applaud Ms. Marinaro for a very well written first book and I hope others will follow.  I hope to read more in this series as I found characters I care about and want them all to have their time in the KINDLE HOT-SEAT.Well done dear authoress.  I can ignore typos, misuse of wording, etc.......because the story itself is fabulous.  Keep going....it'll be a wonderful ride for us readers!