Review: Repetitive
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 26, 2012
The underlying plot of this book is great. I liked it, not your typical western or historical read. My problem lies with the repetitiveness. Repeating the same description of the Burnett home. "She'd never stayed anywhere as nice as the Burnetts' home. It was a mansion compared to some of her temporary homes" The author uses this more than once. We learn so few details of the characters past, and then they are repeated, instead of something new learned. A little fine tuning, and this could be a 5 star book. The author has a flair of describing the emotions and setting scene, but apparently doesn't know much about editing or filling in the blanks. There are places where a 1 is used instead of I. Simple editing.