Review: Has good elements but something missing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 3, 2014
Like others have mentioned, this book seems to have some elements missing. Elements are mentioned i.e. best friend, brother Will, Luther's eyes seeming to be very familiar to the heroine, and then none of the threads are finished. Why did the heroine guard her virginity well into her 20s? I think the bones of the story are good, but just needed a good editor to tighten it up a bit, and explain some of these threads.