Review: Decent with Possibilities, (very) POORLY executed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2013
This short story showed promise, which was what kept me reading it(wasting my time). Unfortunately, it was so poorly put together that it could have been done by a 7th through ninth grader.In places where it needed, even as a short story, to have more detail, it skimmed over the scenes, in other places it used details as a filler to prolong a story line that had it been put together in a fashion suitable to a reader over the age of 16, it Could have been scary, suspenseful, and dramatic in a interesting manor. As it is, this story is dramatic only in that it would appeal to a more immature mind than anyone past their teen years. It felt like looking at a rainbow that is only one color, and not several, as if you are only seeing a tiny piece of what you KNOW 'should' be included.I won't be buying/reading any more offerings from this author. I feel as if I just went to dinner at a five star restaurant and got a plate of sauerkraut and hot dogs, then was  handed a bill for $40.00... ...terribly cheated out of what Could have been a fine (reading) experience.(I got this book during a free promo offering but will avoid any other free books from this author.)