Review: Was this the rough draft?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2014
There were so many things wrong with this story that I don't even know where to begin. First of all I thought the title was a tad bit misleading, true the main character was a hoe and a few incidents was touched on that proved that. But what it overall lacked was character development and backstory, we had no idea what made Trina the way she was and why she had so much hate in her heart for her parents and sister.Speaking of her sister, The story seemed to go off track when the author began to focus more on Desire instead of Trina. It felt like I was reading a whole different plot by then.In my opinion I felt like this story was rushed and little to no effort was really put into developing it. It was very predictable and the characters actions towards one another was just insane and pointless because they had no motive. The main thing that drew me in to this book was the cover, once in I couldn't wait to get out. I rate it a 2.5