Review: liked the story, hard to read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2013
Overall, I liked this story.  I almost gave up halfway through simply because of how bad Carrie was treated.  I felt sick to my stomach reading her story, but it really made you feel for her and thus not hate her once she committed adultery.  I was perturbed by the ending, as another reader mentioned how Hawk brought a whore into his house to live there and then Carrie went and kicked her out and took over. I guess it is a testament to the power of forgiveness, but it didn't sit right with me.  I never quite warmed up to Hawk and felt a lack of the full chemistry needed between the characters.  The Endless Sky is a MUCH better book by this author and I definitely recommend that one above this.  Also, the editing in this was pretty poor and there were periods all over the place that didn't belong, so it chopped up the reading.