Review: Wow...if edited this would be amazing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2014
I loved this book the story and characters were fantastic and it could have been incredible but it needed editing more than any other book I think I've ever read, I'm not talking about the odd bit of grammar or the wrong word occasionally I had to re-read whole sentences continuously through out the book, now I read quickly and I can generally skip over the odd mistake but this book had so many it was disconcerting. As Jessica Miller stated in her review the writing was in places stilted and rigid but still I can't wait for the next book but fingers crossed this ones gets edited. With all I've said my four stars may seem generous and I suppose it is but despite its flaws it was a captivating book that I couldn't put down, three and half stars I suppose would be fairer.