Review: Good BDSM with a Domme story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2014
This was a good story but to be honest I had some problems rating it. I gave it 3 stars but since I'm not typically in to reading about Dommes (I had to read something "out of my comfort zone" for a challenge) I wondered if I rated too harshly. Maybe I should have gone with 4 stars but I had to go with what felt right for me...others might feel it should have been higher.Montana is a Domme who owns a bull breeding ranch. She used to ba married to a rodeo cowboy (who was her sub) but he cheated on her (frequently) and she dumped him when she couldn't deal with his infidelity any more. Now she's joining a BDSM club local to her but only wants temporary subs and isn't looking for an emotional connection that may get her hurt.Clint is the manager of a BDSM club and he's a natural sub. Clint was involved with a Domme years before and was serious about her but when she left him for another sub he was heartbroken. The fact that the other sub was a woman caused Clint to doubt his masculinity on top of the heartbreak. Since then Clint has only had physical encounters with strange Dommes at out-of-town clubs (to ensure he doesn't make a connection).Montana comes to the BDSM club as a possible member. She was referred by another club owner (from before she bought her ranch and moved here) that Reese (one of the club owners) knows so she has a pretty easy time getting a membership. Montana and Clint meet right off the bat and there's a sizzling attraction between them but both are wary due to their past experiences and avoid getting too close. Montana can tell that Clint's a sub and she wants to approach him in that manner but he quite clearly has raised walls against Montana so she doesn't push. She ends up taking a sub from the club that looks like Clint and tries to accept him as a replacement. Meanwhile, Clint wants Montana badly but keeps his distance because he's unwilling to take a chance. This goes on for a few weeks until they're both invited to a friends for a BBQ. The attraction between them is intense but they're both still fighting it. Clint ends up giving Montana a ride home and they end up having a "session" that night but it doesn't go to far and the walls are definitely still up. They decide to try night together the next week and it goes very well between them but it also cements the budding emotions between them but sends Clint running for the hills. This causes some drama but fortunately Clint is too hung up on Montana to be able to stay away and they manage to work things out and start a HEA together.This was a good story but wasn't quite my thing. Outside of the Domme thing, my only real complaint was the ending. It ended up being an insta-love thing and the story's conclusion seemed a bit rushed to me. I liked Montana, she was a pretty good character. I liked Clint too but got a bit frustrated with him letting fear rule him as much as he did. Outside of that it was a good story and would probably be very good if you're in to Dommes.