Review: Good story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2013
This was a very interesting story with many unexpected twists and turns. However, it is very choppy and repetitive at times and needs a good editor to smooth it out. I suppose it could have been done this way on purpose because it is written in the first person from the point of view of a young teenager. But it still tells a good story and can be entertaining.