Review: Unusual
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2014
I have to admit, I was a bit disappointed with this short story. The premise of the book was intriguing. Braithius, an angel, does something God has forbidden: he writes about heaven, angels, and demons. This diary turns up in the hands of different people on earth, and even if only a portion of the diary is read, that particular reader has knowledge of the war between demons and angels. It is terrifying to see.In spite of the interesting plot line, I found the story hard to follow. Sometimes it was unclear who was speaking and internal dialogue popped up, here and there, among the third person POV. The punctuation of the dialogue was poor. I have to wonder if the editor of the publishing company even looked at it. So, I'm giving this story three stars, mostly for the idea. I can see this as a series, but the writing needs more work.I was provided this book by the author for an honest review.