Review: OMG! Such an irritating read - terrible
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 24, 2013
I have downloaded this ebook a while back along with many others. Just now got to reading it. I just could not wrap my head around the first few pages! I love to read all types of stories, however this one confuses me from the start. The first person viewpoint is even more confusing. Hard for me to keep track on which is speaking and where it ends. I wouldn't mind a little bit more detail and especially the thrills except- there is only a crumble to none at all. I would have loved the author to make some changes, add some more descriptive and help us – the readers- identify who is actually talking and when. Also to show if it is a thought and not continued conversation – which if I had the actual book in hand- want to throw it to the wall.Linda caught cheating – then dies but is not – but the conversation – ugghhh so irritating to read from the get go. Once I am irritated- that is it.Overall, if you are the type of person who is rushed and loves to confuse everyone – then this one is for you. However, if you love a good story- I would have to suggest to pass this one up until the author re-edits this book to be more readable.