Review: Needs More Editing.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2014
Very chopped up jumped around too much.Historically speaking there were more than its fair share of errors.  (Very poorly researched)All of the characters are weak! No time taken to build the characters. Barely given a description of what they looked like.The settings/background lead one to believe that this too was not researched either.Much of the phrasing was modern language and not the time period. A for instance.Law men did not have name tags on uniforms back in the time period of this book. Most did not wear uniforms. Uniforms didn't come until later.American Indians did not have BLUE EYES. Full bloods today do not have blue eyes. American Indians were and are brown eyed race.If this is a back story perhaps Ms. Yoder should have her editing team go back to school and learn history.Very disappointed in this story compared to others.The over all effect of this book was a political message over spiritual message crammed in a weak story.The up side was that I caught it today free. I would have been quite upset, had I paid for this. Will not be buying the book to follow. Its sure to be slung together too. Sad really.