Review: It needs polishing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2014
This story was so hard to follow because of all the errors throughout. I loved the storyline, but I spent so much time trying to figure out what the author was trying to say instead of what was actually written. There were extra words and missing words. Verb tense was constantly changing. I felt like the author wrote whatever came to her head without going back and reading any of it to make sure it made sense. There was so much information and the story could have been expanded on and more in depth. I felt like plot lines got thrown at me without any real development. I'd love for the author to go back and polish this book because I know it could be wonderful.