Review: Poorly Written, Repetitive, Boring, Not Worth Reading
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2014
Even free, this is not worth it. I had to force myself to finish it. This is full of annoying grammar errors. It has a glut of commas, as well as other punctuation errors and misused words. It is not creatively written. He uses other writers' descriptions instead of creating his own, when there are any descriptions at all. Explanations are sketchy and characters are forgettable. Names of characters are unoriginal. There are no strong women here; Grandma sits down and cries whenever there is a difficult situation. The kids aren't allowed to do much, and what is accomplished is unexplained and unbelievable. Like another reviewer, I don't understand how anyone could give it more than one star.