Review: Clever title and great beginning, but turns silly towards the end
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2012
When I saw this book's cover I got quite the chuckle from the title and as I started reading the story I was really getting into it. I thought the main character was written really well. The author had a very good understanding of the main character and added plenty of internal dialogue and emotional description. By doing such a good job building the main character the reader could become familiar with her quickly. I also thought the main premise was well thought out and portrayed making for a seductive and enjoyable read.However, as the story progressed from a tryst between two female lovers into a threesome between the two women and a man is where the story started to become quite watered down. I found that the added member took away from the seductive and nervously energetic storyline that had developed between the two. When the third was introduced the story moved from a sultry and steamy affair into a juvenile and silly premise. The dialogue became silly and unrealistic and the interactions between the characters erased all the author managed to build in the beginning of the book.It's to bad that the author chose to add another character to the story. For me it caused the story to turn away from something special and made it into another cookie cutter story found in the old nudie mags found behind the convenience store counter.4 stars for the beginning and 3 stars for the ending = 3.5 stars, 4 rounded up.