Review: Made myself finish
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 15, 2014
Premise is engaging, if not particularly original, but WAY too much narration vs dialogue. Telling vs doing just never holds my attention and tends to slow down the plot. Well-edited with potential. So slow the writing seems immature. I bet the author can address this and produce better results as the clean grammar indicates they are not afraid of hard work.