Review: So-so book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2013
The good: I enjoyed the main characters, and some of the secondary ones. The couple had great chemistry. It was a substantial story, and had promise.The spelling and grammar were well done, it was easy to read.The bad: Parts of it did not make sense. The mystery aspect was not well written. Some of the dialogue was really off, over wordy and cheesy. Their speech was just too melodramatic. A lot of the behavior was also not true to period. The aunt was inserted awkwardly in the storyline, and that whole aspect was just out of place. The last half of the book needs an edit to fix the flow. Also no real ending, as its part of a series. I need a happy ending/epilogue.Overall: better than a lot of the cheaper kindle books. I got it free, so gave it 3 stars, worth reading at that price. I'm 50/50 on whether I would read anything by this author. I prefer more substantial stories.