Review: VERY SAD EDITING
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 14, 2013
To be such a prolific, entertaining author, I was incredibly disappointed with the poor, and I mean VERY poor editing. Almost every sentence was missing a comma, resulting in 83 pages of run-on sentences. Then, when commas were used, they were used incorrectly. There is nothing worse than having to re-read a paragraph several times, and mentally place commas, just to understand the story. It could have been a full length great NOVEL, if the author would have put some time and effort into this book. I returned it, no way was I was paying for this mess.