Review: Predictable short story with many errors
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2012
This story is about Jack and Holly who had been married for twelve years before getting a divorce.  Holly initiated the divorce, and Jack isn't sure he is over it.  Unfortunatley for Jack, Holly is about to walk down the aisle with Lyle. Can Jack win the woman he still loves back even though it's her wedding day?  Read the short story to find out.The problems I had with this story were the many errors throughout.  One key sentence in the book was oddly worded.  I'm not sure what the author was really meaning by this one . . ."If there was even one doubt in his mind concerning her fiance, then Jack still had a chance."What difference does it make if Jack had any doubts?  He had plenty of them concerning Holly and her fiance Lyle.  Shouldn't that read something like this instead . . ."If there was even one doubt in her mind concerning her fiance, then Jack still had a chance."There were a few mistakes like that in the story.  They greatly interrupted the flow, and were distracting.  With only six small chapters it seems like editing should have been fairly simple to catch the errors that ended up in the published product.I'm giving the short story 3 stars because the writer shows promise.  Otherwise the story was just alright.