Review: Definite potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 22, 2013
I received this book from the author, in exchange for an honest review.When Crystal and her friends go touring colleges, Crystal knows life will change. What she doesn't know, is just how much. Meeting Gabriel is just the beginning of this spiral of a story. It sucks you in and makes you keep turning the pages. I couldn't stop reading. I loved the story.That being said...This is in need of a deep editing. And at the end, it just didn't quite feel believable. Will I be reading the 2nd book? OF COURSE! I wanna see what happens. But I would love to see this book go through some major edits. Names were out of place. Quotations were missing, or in wrong places. Periods were missing. Sometimes it was a mess. So, on my end, its getting 3 of 5 stars.