Review: Not sure...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 27, 2013
I enjoyed the story, somewhat.  I am not a big fan of insta-love, and this is an example of that.  Daemon mentions that Kelly was 'different' to other women that he knows and he wanted to get to know her better.  But what did he see that made her 'different'?  As far as I am concerned, they didn't spend enough time together for each other to 'discover differences' with the other.Kelly had one boy friend Gary.  She spent 7 years with him. She has an epiphany and realises that he isn't what she needs or wants, so she takes steps to pursue her needs for a change.  I wanted to read about how she did that.  How did she make the break?  Did Gary try and contact her in that time?  How did she explain herself to him on why it wasn't working for either of them?It just jumped to her meeting with Mr Scott and melting!  Sure she nailed him with a door, but apart from that introduction, I couldn't see anything that screamed 'take a chance on me for a relationship'!  Maybe more will be explained in the next instalment?  I don't know.  I do know, that more back ground information would have rounded the characters out and made the story believable.Then the spelling...  Mr Scott has a commitment 'phobe'.  Not phoebe.  There was also a mistake with Sasha's name by being typed as Tasha.  It threw me for a minute and I had to go back and re read in case there was another character I missed!Will I check out the next instalment?  Yes.  There was enough teaser supplied that makes me want to see what happens.