Review: Going forward
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 11, 2013
I enjoyed this story, it was a good story from beginning to end.In saying this, the author really needs a good editor to critique the story. Yes, there were some errors but it wasn't as bad as some said. Also I noticed the author abbreviated which should never be done in a story, that should only be used in text msg only. I think the author is from England or something because of the slang she used which did not make the story confusing just different.The reason I gave it a 4 instead of a 5 is because of the errors.