Review: Needs a very heavy edit job, has fair content. I WANT MY MONEY BACK!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
Fair information in this book. It's just an okay book to read if you are new to eating the foods on a ketogenic diet. Many of the recipes in this book, if you eat only one serving, you will have eaten 50% of the carbs allowed daily on a TRUE Ketogenic Diet.However, it's a very difficult book to read, since it has so many grammar and punctuation errors; ONE annoying example is two separate sentences with just a space between, no period and space. Run on sentences abound.ACTUAL EXAMPLES OF GRAMMAR AND OTHER ISSUES IN THIS BOOK AND A FEW SENSELESS SENTENCES:1. This book aim to provide you...2. "...also for the sake of your organs happiness and a lighter life. When you put fewer loads on your internal system your immunity 'grips the systems'."3. "It is completely a free of danger process. Weaknesses and overloading 'extinct' easily, after the ..."4. TITLE: "Diet CookBook: 10 Days Ketogenic Meal Plan; 'Loss' weight..."5. "...emitted within our body when we our body utilizes..."6. "...people who are used to consume extremely high levels of alcohol."7. "...for weight loss your liver will suffer from less stress and load on it."8. "...starts in which brain burns either proteins or fat for the same purpose, the 'performance given by the brain'."9. "...ketosis at night when you 'feel' strong smell in your urine; there is a waste of ketone bodies."10. "...brain when utilizes fat for the functions, it maintains well constructive approaches in a better way than glucose."11. "...part of the diet and should be done with strict responsibility to reach...losing a bit of your health."12. "...will be good for driving yourself away from tasks requiring energy when you just start it."13. "Take your body a rest and enough time to pick the new diet..."14. "Manage your crave for limitless undesired nutrients needs to avoid in the diet-..."15. "...point might reach where death is possible."16. "...at lower risk of getting mental issues."17. "...also raises depression so this process also keeps you safe from almost all kinds of mental issues."18. "...is much dangerour, slow and silent process than you can think the tightening of the arteries and destruction of normal functioning may give a sudden shock anytime..."19. "...needs to be check about their carb..."20. "...Vitamin E...it is less combined with iron supplements and blood thinning drugs."21. "...a coenzyme is needs to intake 100-300mg per day dose."22. "...Grounded Beef Pie"23. "...way into the diet is fabulous and the results are amazing, so save you from danger effortlessly."Is that enough examples of the need for an edit? I KNOW that when I am PAYING for a book, I expect it to be reasonably well written, and this book is NOT well written.Indie authors NEED to have their books edited because we are paying for the book!!!  Fair content I give it 1 Star. i deducted 4 Stars just because it was written so very very very badly and then blatantly published as is, and because of the fact that I paid for the book!