Review: Hold Onto Your Stomach
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 7, 2012
For the most part, I loved this story. I know the horrible things that have been done to animals, and I want to cry at the thought of such an innocent creature being abused. I suspect most readers will be rooting for the killers. (I was!)Two things kept this from being a 5-star rating1) The sisters were overdone. It would have been enough to have them be twin sisters who work together and kill animal abusers without adding the extra part of their relationship.2) The overbearing police captain was developed, then dropped. I know this is a short novella and not everything could be completely developed, but at the same time, it seemed to leave a hole. Just a little bit more to wrap up that plotline would have been enough, but instead, it went nowhere.