Review: Could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 7, 2013
I gave this 3 stars only because I thought that it was funny in places. I felt like the writer thought that throwing the names of our genitals in the story in the most crude way made it erotic. I would have probably liked the plot more without the writers descriptions of the sex scenes.I also found it annoying that the character seemed so naive about basic things at her age and in this time such as how to use a computer and not knowing the proper name for using the internet. I would expect a little of that if she was older, but not for someone so young,And what was up with all the gosh and golly up in this piece? I think with a little bit more editing this would have been better, but what am I to expect from a book that I got for free?