Review: Good idea that fell flat
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2014
This story could have been good with some professional writing and editing assistance. There are multiple grammar and spelling errors as well as story line problems. The story moves very slowly, too wordy descriptions and too many unanswered questions. The ending came out of nowhere, from a man and situation not even mentioned earlier, so it isn't believable. Neither does it fit the story. Not well done. Even free, i'd skip this one unless it was revised and re-issued.