Review: Impenetrable
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2013
I read 4 and 5 last night and this morning and then reread 1 and  2, so  I decided to go ahead and get 3 even tho I really didn't like that Cobra was willing to screw someone other than his mate. I didn't skim, but read the whole thing. It does not make sense that the first two stories go on about once mated the male doesn't stray, but here in 3 the leader no less keeps badgering Jago and Piper to let him "impregnate" her. I don't give a rats tootie what u call it, he would still be cheating on his mate(who on earth was betrayed by the rat bastard senator with her three illigitamate children, so is especially senitive to her man and fidelity, or infidelity as this case would be). And Piper even asked him how he would feel if his mate screwed another male. He didn't answer, just looked pissed. But he still kept after them about it over the next few weeks. Other than all that garbage, I really enjoyed Jago and Piper's interaction and if not for Cobra (which by the way several other males in their first "must" didn't have a problem "impregnateting" their mates so WTF) this would have been a five star short story. Hey, please make 6 longer and cost less to make up for one thru five being so short and costing so much. So if u can ignore Cobra since u've been warned, I recommend this story to those who liked the other four and want more of the world building.