Review: Needs editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2013
I read the first book in the series yesterday and eagerly purchased the second a few hours ago. The characters are very likable and the story is engrossing.  That being said, I wish the author knew the difference between past and passed, and how to use each correctly. The text lacks proper punctuation and the dialogue  fluctuates between unnatural formality and confusing slang. It has the potential to be a best seller, with a little work.