Review: Plus sized book but not a success
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 8, 2013
This is the first 2 Star I've ever written, but I felt I had to.  Usually I rate books as 4s or 5s and ignore the rest.  I read maybe half the book then set it down.  After I read ANOTHER book, I came back and finished it.  Specifics:  The popping up of other story lines weakened the flow of the main story.  I have no problem with MFM IF it helps the story, but the side stories did not add anything.  If the author had trimmed the story down to the main hero/heroine relationship, the book would have been more successful.  As it was I could not buy into the main characters at all.  More words should have been spent on developing their characters.  Maybe the author should focus on each book standing alone.  She can still add in updates on old relationships, or even give them a new book, but don't mix it all together when introducing a new relationship.