Review: I want my own Avery.....
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 21, 2013
This book is awesome! No really, it's so good that I laughed and cried and now I demand another. The characters rich story fully comes alive on the pages, you see and live with Luna, you fall in love with Avery and by the end you want nothing more than to hold him in your arms and keep him safe. The best way I can describe this is, if "Interview with a vampire" was the grandfather of "Vampire Diaries" and that book had a baby with "Wench" than you would get "dark genesis"This is the story of an oppressed slave, Luna. She is a woman weighed down by the attention of her master and his son. Seeking solace in a burned chapel she pours her soul out over a stolen bible that she can't even read. Avery, tied to the chapel by his guilt hears her plea and decides to do something about it. Here our story begins...There are some minor issues"The epilogue is a tad confusing and I almost stopped there; it was a string of contradictions; relatives having good luck; they were millionaires, but dying tragically. Not lucky in my opinion. And, I didn't care for Dallas and her flippant attitude toward being rich and having a second sight. I hate people who complain about being rich. And people who ignore their instincts.Dialect is a twofold problem:1. The author is british and many of the words are spelled in the UK manner. I.e. 'realised' rather than 'realized' and meters are used instead of miles.2. Luna speaks in a dialect. This can get old fast; though, I moved past this annoyance easily some of you may not.Grammatical issues:Location 918 "her face a mask of unalderated hated...." Should be 'hatred' or 'hate'Location 3390 "..had succeeding in bringing it to its place" should be 'succeeded'Review is courtesy of Bookdevour  visit my page on blogspot to read about my quest to find my own Avery!