Review: Review on Revised Edition with new ending chapters
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2014
I bought this novella  few years back, before I began writing reviews. I skimmed through it quickly and then read the updated version. Let me say that I didn't have tremendous issues with the first version, I actually quite liked the 'mystery' of it and having to think about things instead of having it all spelt out. I was also happy with the ending. Anyway apparently this author listened her negative reviewers and tidied this book up and gave a full ending. Hats off to her to paying attention to her readers. The new ending goes into a lot more detail and gives more story. I originally paid a dollar for this novella and I see the price has been increased. Please be warned that this is only a novella.The story is basically the same though, a wicked stepfather auctions off his stepdaughter's virginity and the H tries his best to save the girl. Entertaining stuff because our h is not as helpless as she appears.