Review: Good stuff
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2014
Nothing heavy here, a nice and light read.  Pretty standard superhero stuff overall, but the author freshens it enough to make it his.I did find it odd that the main characters seemed to forget all of the other people who were exposed to the meteorites.  Especially as some of them were from the same school.  Some of the choices they made, in particular Cosmic Girl allowing her sister to come along on the trip at the end, were a little out of character.  She had recently been shot (down) by Air Force fighters and decides it is ok to carry along a non-powered person on the flying bus.  This from the person becoming obsessed with keeping people safe.Spelling/grammar/etc wise it was ok.  A few small problems here and there but nothing too terrible.  I would request the author find some way of designating telepathic conversations that occur.  Italics, bold, a different font, something to make it easier keep track of.