Review: I wanted to like this story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 6, 2013
Great story concept. And great characters. I really wanted to stick with this book and enjoy the ride! But the typos, the run-on dialog, and all the pointless scenes got so annoying, I quit reading halfway through the book. A good editor could have cleaned this book up and made it bearable to read. The author should have believed in her work enough to invest in that.