Review: original plot but...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 18, 2013
This author is super creative. Her plot was stellar, truly. She could use a team of professional editors though. There were major grammatical issues and a huge lack of understanding in the slang department. Slang phrases that used incorrect verbiage and left them completely meaningless were literally all over the place.There was little to no character development, which is a total bummer because great characters would've put this story over the top. There is a major death at the end of the book and it literally made no impact on me or the story.Overall, good effort, but a good editor needs to bleed this whole thing. Then it could be publishable, in my opinion.