Review: 3.5 for the story line, and a 4.5 for a good start at what could be a really great series!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
I definitely liked this storyline, but I felt that it had a much greater potential to be something more. The story felt a little rushed (especially the reuniting of the couple--sorry for spoilers guys), and I feel like Ms/Mrs. Pierce could've elaborated a little more about everything. I wish that we could've seen more of Arryn and mind struggle concerning Shann. There wasn't really any real interaction between the two characters, besides them having smoking hot sexual relations :D. (Again, don't read this if you don't want spoilers)We just kind of find out that he doesn't believe her and yadi yadi yah. I even felt like the main hero could've been Eliam (i think i spelled his name wrong), due to the fact that he was mentioned much more often than Arryn was! Uh, hello…something is seriously wrong with that picture.I am, however, satisfied with the purchase and book overall. There weren't many grammatical errors, if any (that I read--then, again I was kind of half asleep reading this), and for that, Ms. Pierce I AM ETERNALLY GRATEFUL TO YOU. I am excited and anticipating the second book about our hero Eliam. I hope this next one is just as good and BETTER then the first.