Review: Abandoned this read
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2013
So, I re-tried this book after and came away with the same conclusion, there was a whole lot of telling without saying anything, which is my biggest pet peeve in novels. I can forgive small errors and grammar if there is good dialogue, there is none in this book. My other complaint is that there are so many random details thrown out like "engaging the engine" and "engaging the seatbelt," but minor details like what the mansion Jason owns looks like are not there. The fact that there're is a whole scene surrounding a pair of shoes and we don't get a description of the shoes, ridiculous.The bad:Aviva comes across as an immature annoying heroine. I found her quirky personality to be grating. who has to be forceably taken to the spa by her best friend the day before her best friends wedding? Wouldn't said expensive spa be used to famous celebrities?Jason, what does he see in Aviva? Don't tell me he likes her, show me why.Characters eyes "bugging out" I really wish another description was used to display a shocked reaction by a character, because in my head I see a cartoonish version of this.The good: "sister-friend" I like this saying.Overall: this series is not for me..