Review: 24%
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 18, 2011
This extremely short story stops at 24%. It is good considering what is there...1 star for creativity, 1 star for being well written. There isn't enough to do much with and if I say anything it would give it away. it's that short. however I'd love to see this as a full length story because there is a TON of potential here. I'm not going to read the 75% excerpt about the unicorn just because I'd RATHER be reading about the firefighter. >_<Immature? yes. :) I'm grumpy, I hate wasted potential.