Review: Sensual, but very badly written
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2013
There are too many disjointed parts to these stories. It is as if the sex were written and someone thought other things should be added, but no one knew what, so random phrases were put in such as one lady who says she is, "Helping people through my work" - but what does she do - no one tells you.The sensual parts are well enough written, but leave you wondering how the protagonist got there as the story really doesn't suit such activity. These are just disjointed sex scenes and the parts in the middle are so annoying they ruin even the sex.The non sex parts are terrible and this ruins all the rest which is a shame.