Review: Editing issues remain
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2012
I really enjoyed this story, and the characters were very believable. It's hard to capture that age that teeters between adolescence and adulthood. It was heartwarming, funny, and sweet. All in all the other reviews were spot on.However, i'll have to give 4-4.5 stars because of serious editing flaws. Two small ones were the use of every instead of ever, and a missing period between nine and They. An absolutely unacceptable error was location 1355 where editing notes remained in the paragraph. It totally threw me off and will likely keep me from re-reading. I hope this issue can be addresses and corrected copies provided to those who purchased this book.  It is unfortunate because I would love to rate it higher, will be reading more from this author, and will be looking out for a sequel though the ending is poignant and perfect as it stands.