Review: Well, could have been written better.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2014
Jump around, an see if you get everything in, that's what this author seems to do. Just can't see people acting like they do as the author presents these characters. Author needs a good friend to read his work and help with story line as well as situation presentation. I know this could have written better, and I believe author has what it takes to do just that.