Review: good short story, but dissatisfying ending.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 11, 2013
This 22 page short story was a well written and interesting tale, but the ending was not, in my opinion, a logical outcome based upon the events of the story; a surprise ending is one thing, but this ending was not consistent with the flow of the story and seemed a bit too contrived.  Having said that, the first 90% of the book was good enough that I would still recommend it as an interesting read.  Perhaps another reader would like the surprise at the end, but I just found it a little bit hard to comfortably digest!