Review: Difficult to rate
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2014
This story seemed choppy, words were missing, incomplete thoughts and very difficult to read in my opinion. Words seemed to be picked to sound good but they didn't fit in the sentences. Three times the author used "face turned black" what does that mean? I wanted to like the book, and I think with an editor and more background information earlier on, it could be a good book.