Review: Fourth free story read on the Kindle Fire
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2014
There isn't anything wrong with Bivona's "That Special Place", but it does have the feel of a writing exercise.  Part of it may be that the 'fortress of imagination' is repeatedly and only referred to as "That Special Place".  Part of it may be the over indulgence in descriptive on the early portion of the story.  It all seems a little simple, which can be fine.  But here it feels rushed.Not bad.  But I am not sure I would have paid for it.