Review: Could've been 5 stars : (
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2014
Good story. Not at all a favorable writing style for me.I am an avid reader. I prefer 3rd person perspective. Because I enjoy paranormal stories, I've forced myself to deal with the frequently used 1st person perspective that sadly seems to overwhelm the genre.However, this story was just too much. It was written with a 1st person perspective, but every few pages the author switched characters!The constantly changing perspectives interrupted the flow of the story and made it really difficult for me to make any kind of connection to anything that would create lasting emotional responses.I read for relaxation & imaginary & consequence-free adventures.I do NOT read to feel frustrated and angry. Unfortunately this changing perspective style of writing frustrated me instead of providing a brief escape from real life stress, which ultimately made this story a failed venture for me.I am disappointed because I enjoyed the story and I would like to know how it ends.Unless the story were re-written in an easier style to follow, I do not feel I will seek out any further writings from this author as the I found this writing style too disconnected, and irritating.Perhaps this story will suit other readers who do not mind this fragmented style of writing. Unfortunately it was not for me.The story was interesting. I recommend it to those who do not mind changing perspectives as they should enjoy it.