Review: Could have been so much better...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2013
This book went from 5 to 4 stars right off the bat because of the cover. The panties around the knees is just tacky & slutty. (And everyone's doing it) Either put them on or take them off. Who stands in the window with their underware at half mast?The first half of the story was a solid 4 stars. I really enjoyed it. But, after they got to the island things just fell apart. He said if she hadn't come to him he would have gone to her on bended knee to get her back. Then he leaves her, a stranger, to cope with the club scene on her own? And she jumps at the chance to go down to the dungeon with a weirdo she has just met. No, that feels like the author was just trying to kink up a good story to appeal to a larger audience. It's hard for me to believe they loved each other and still behaved the way they did. That dropped it down to 3 stars. After the 2nd club scene it was dropped to 2 stars. That whole scene was disappointing and it was not needed. It simply distracted from the point of the story. Unless the point was to show that she was okay with some other man licking around on her private parts.There was a happy ending. For me, that brought it up to 3 stars again.I am disappointed. I really wanted to give it 4 stars. I just couldn't, in good conscious, do it.ETA: I see the book cover has been replaced. That is worth another star!