Review: T.I. Fan!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2014
The storyline is interesting. However, the author stated that two years later, when it was more like four years, since Aaliyah was graduating college. I was lost many times. One being Eron calling Aaliyah on the phone and his saying she was still mad so he stopped by a jump off's house. I had to go back because there wasn't an argument. So how did she get mad?When the doctor's were introduced. They were introduced as one name then it changed to Dr. Brown for one but they were suppose to be brothers. The grammatical errors were too much! Words missing, the wrong words in the sentence and then misspelled words. The college graduation? You don't call different colleges. Names are called according to the college that they graduate from. So Aaliyah was graduating from computer science and Dior from psychology. Two different college disciplines.I'm good with "hood" books but don't write them as though I have no knowledge.  Lastly, I'm wondering if T.I. is paying the author for advertisement?Good start author, but work is needed for your sequel!!!!