Review: In serious need of editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2014
I really enjoyed the first book and became invested in the characters' story. I bought it without previewing it first and that was a big mistake. There were so many grammatical errors that I couldn't  concentrate on the story she was trying to tell. It felt like the book was written by two different people because the author could beautifully describe mansions, and outfits but misspelled simple words like "since" and "goodbye".  I know there's a good story hidden in there somewhere. The book could use a good editor and possibly some beta readers. I don't think I'll be buying the next book.