Review: Needs Editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 10, 2014
A virgin stripper? (again!) A super rich drop dead gorgeous billionaire who frequents a seedy strip club on the bad side of town? (really? Is that what billionaire's do?) Virgin ordered to masturbate in a church and does? Virgin capable of multiple orgasms from the get go? Many sentences are written ALL IN CAPS!!! (With a number of exclamation marks.)A good editor could help, I think. But honestly, this book needs some serious re-working and a plausible plot.