Review: story okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 29, 2014
Though this short story was written well, I once again found that I didn't like certain characters. Sophia was not on my like list. I've read too many stories with this same theme, the pathetic woman who kept a child from their father and a father from their child. And Frank's mother was no better and had the nerve to jump on him about getting back with Sophia when she was on the wrong side of it too by not telling Frank about his son. Both women made me sick and give bad press to women. And Sophia's lame ash excuse of that's what she thought he'd want - pahlease! That man was trying to get a business up and running you stupid beyotch is what my response for her was. And for his cousin to go along with it and marry her rather than tell her to woman the hell up and do what was right, I want him to have a woman keep his child from him so he'd know just what he did if it weren't for a child being deprived.