Review: Huge failure with great potential of storyline!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 13, 2013
When I read the description of this book, it sounded so interesting; however, once I read it, it was a huge disappointment. There were so many run on sentences, it was very hard for me to keep up with the storyline. There were also a lot of typos, and grammatical errors. I tried so hard to get through the first chapter, because the book had so much potential. I am an author myself, and it irks me so bad when I notice things like that. If you are going to write a book and publish it, please make sure you use proper grammar; also,make sure you put the punctuation marks in the the proper space. Whoever wrote this book, is clearly a beginner in the writing field. I am so glad I borrowed this book, because I didn't even make it past the first chapter; that's how disturbing the grammatical errors were. There were so many errors, I couldn't even enjoy the storyline; What a waste of talent smh!