Review: Not as Good as I expected
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 10, 2013
I was so disappointed with this story.  Too bland, two short, too predictable. There were no twists or turns to the story and I kept waiting for it but it wasn't very interesting.  There was no time to even develop much about the two main characters. I was expecting a whole lot more.  You see, the first novel I read was "The Honeymoon Cottage (A Pajaro Bay Mystery Romance) and I loved it, it was everything this book is not.  I'm glad I got this book for free because I would have been upset if I'd paid for it.  Yes, I know it says its a short story but, I guess from now I will steer clear of them since this one wasn't worth the time I invested in it.  It really needed to be a longer story, then maybe it would have had enough time to develop some kind of depth.