Review: Editing ?????
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2012
The story was quite interesting and sometimes gripping. That is it was when I could get past (not passed) the multiple grammatical misfortunes that occurred throughout. I think there were enough that I would guess one grammatical error every 2 pages.The improper usage of passed and past was frequent.He was stood by the door(We aren't told who is was that stood him there.)This must have occurred at least 20 times.She was sat in front of the computer.For all intensive purposes, it exceeded needs. The phrase is for all intents and purposes.Those are just a few examples: the ones that were so frequent or egregious that I remember them easily.This review also applies the 4 previous volumes in the series.