Review: Could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2011
Another story with a great premise.  I just thought that the characters kind of lacked character, the men weren't alpha males, what kind of man upon first meeting a woman immediately offers money for sex??? He didn't have enough confidence to just talk to her, take her out and see where it leads? Granted for her it came at the perfect time.  The men in the book seemed very immature, from their conversations with each other to the middle school back stabbing, in essence they were all lame and corny as hell.  I loved the storyline in itself, but the characters turned me off, I found nothing sexy or engaging about them, it was like they lacked self confidence or something. This would have been a great read had the male characters especially, had been stronger.