Review: if you take the "hot" out of this story - it'd be zero stars
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2012
I'll preface this review by saying that stories written in first person form are usually written poorly - especially when they're also written in present tense as this one was....The premise of this short story should have been fun but the way it was written took all the fun out of it...I didn't like Emma....She struck me as immature and stupid, making me question why someone so savvy, as Jay is portrayed, would be in love with her...