Review: Had so much potential!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2013
I don't like to give anything below three stars, but this book had so much potential so I'm particularly frustrated with it. I think the most glaring thing for me was how forced the interaction between the H and h was. The tension didn't feel organic and the sex scene definitely didn't feel like it fit. Yes, they bantered and teased each other a lot, which is great, but there wasn't a lot of sexual tension to justify the random sex scene. Anyway, I also wasn't thrilled with how often the author kept making the characters laugh because they supposedly said something funny. I don't like when writers 'write' when something is funny rather than actually 'showing' that its funny. If that makes any sense. Anyway, the book definitely has legs, but I think it could have been better!