Review: Brings back memories
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 08 9, 2011
Short and sweet, this story brought a smile to my face, and memories of first love to my mind.  In this boy-next-door tale, Jane helps her secret crush prepare for a date with another girl.  Well-written, it shows the transformation that happens between the couple as his eyes are opened to the girl in front of him.  I recommend this story to anyone who wants to relive those first pangs of love.  My only complaint is that it was too short.  Well done.