Review: I'd love to give Gabe a try!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2013
Gabe was such a likable character - he appeared to be some normal down to earth guy, yet had that tattooed rocker bad-boy side...and down right kinky in bed! Best of both worlds!Some of the dialogue and phrasing the author used were down right hilarious! Both main characters had distinct voices.Some points I had a hard time following when point of views seemed to change from more first person to third person. I love seeing multiple POVs in stories to get insides all the characters, but with this one, the pronouns kept changing. First we'd see Mel's thoughts (I should...) then suddenly it was "Mel walking to the car...) Just not what I'm used to as many of my recent read didn't bounce POV as much.My biggest problem with this book...how quickly it ended. I was reading on my kindle wondering and what is going to happen with Mel and Gabe while he on the road and suddenly the book was over. WHAT??? Way too short! I'm hoping the next will be longer with a more defined climax.I really did like this book. It was hot in all the right places. I just wanted more more more of Gabe and Mel. Why was it such a short story!?!