Review: Needs Editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2014
This book is in desperate need of editing.  Wilson uses incorrect tenses and she is prone to cliches.  The repeated use of he/she swallowed hard; golden eyes; tears, tears and more tears is distracting and takes away from the classic romance plot of how rehabilitating a home often rehabilitates hearts and lives.It's disappointing because Wilson displays real talent.  I would purchase from this author again, she knows how to tell a story and create attractive, interesting characters.  But if I found as many cliched passages I would likely return for a refund.