Review: Other than some editing needed, easy read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 9, 2013
This book needed an editor, a lot of grammar and misspellings throughout, but otherwise it was a good read for older children, over 14 who know what fantasy is.  A good editor will help with this, and perhaps you might want to investigate sites that offer editing for free, or at cost.  Be encouraged! Trisha LindseyPharaoh Memnet