Review: Good balance of plot and sex
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 17, 2012
This book had a good balance of plot with sex and character development in the few pages.  It's not a long book so you don't really have much character development.  However, there is enough that this doesn't become one of those books where the author has to just tell you that the characters suddenly realized that they were in love.The sex scenes were well written with good detail.  And seeing as how this is erotica, there was a good number of the sex scenes, but not so many that it's just page after page of sex that becomes monotonous.  Rather, each encounter was different.There are some weak points, which are to be expected in a book this length.  First, I wish the author explained more about Melmanon.  What kind of alien he is, why he thought he couldn't have children, etc.  I also wish there was a little more character development regarding Charity.  The author did a good job of showing how Melmanon came to love Charity.  However, I never got the impression that she really loved him back.  Also, there's the fact that Melmanon had been controlling his natural urges to dominate and terrorize people.  If the relationship between these two are to last, then they need to be honest with each other.But these are just thoughts that I had after thoroughly enjoying finishing this book in just a few hours.