Review: beyond boring
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2014
I am sure that if I could force myself to continue reading that at some point a story would come together.  However, trying to get past the short choppy sentences in the beginning make that possibility and impossibility.  An example: "  With the other hand, he provided her with two more tissues.  She thanked him and took the tissue paper from his hand."Who cares how many tissues she used, tell us something that relates to the story.