Review: Exciting and chilling story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2014
Although the basic premiss has been used before, I did enjoy how the author developed this.  I enjoyed the characters, and found them believable for the most part.  This story was suspenseful and kept me on the edge of my seat enjoying every chilling moment.  But, and this is a big BUT, this needs editing.  There were many simple mistakes like using "is" instead of "his", or "he" instead of "the".  And there were many times when paragraphs did not seem to be in place where needed.  But these technical over sites are what the impartial editor looks for.  Had it not been for these annoying goofs, I would have given this a 5.  But even so, I will read more by this author because I think he does have a talent for a spooky tale.