Review: Needs a proof reader.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 25, 2014
I almost gave up because because the prologue was just a mess with errors and incomprehensible and partial sentences:  "She hopped to bending to absorb surpressing." "the ground knees the impact".  Errors like that cleared up as the story started, but then formatting issues with sentences chopped up with just a couple words on a line, irregular spacing etc. started showing up.  I did get my copy from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review and I checked to see if I received an unedited arc, but I didn't see that anywhere, so I believe I have the same copy one would buy.  I did read Fated Mates which contains Delicate Freakn' Flower by Eve and it had the most errors in that anthology that I noticed, so I'm thinking the author needs a proofreader or two and the problem was not just in my copy.  So, if this pushes your buttons, beware.The story itself was a nice change of pace for me since I don't read many cyborg stories.  It's basically about an evil corporation and corrupt government officials who enslave former soldier who were turned into cyborgs.  When the cyborgs revolt, they try to kill each other.  I haven't read any of the other books in this series, but Seth stands alone just fine.  I enjoyed how we experienced both Seth and Anastasia's present and also their past via fairly long and complete flashbacks.