Review: A good story -- needs fleshed out
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2013
It was one of those that came to an end "too soon" -- it doesn't need to be tons longer, but it felt unclear and unlikely at the end.  He decides VERY quickly she's to be his wife.  Making up his mind quickly?  Fine -- but a bit too much unexplored.  definitely promise there - just needs a bit of tweaking for my taste.