Review: Good start, but not a story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2013
I teach English and am considering using this story as a start to have the students write their own. Don't get me wrong I understand that this was a prequel so to speak, but it didn't hold any ending. It didn't get me hooked on the characters. I'd probably also have my students describe everyone a bit more. In short, it had the bokes of something good, but seemed rushed.