Review: Hot Mess
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 4, 2013
Revenge is a dish best served cold... provided you can even read it.The story is plain hard to get through because of all the same old self-publishing mistakes: incorrect words (where she 'lye' instead of 'lie' or 'lay'), complete lack of punctuation, constantly shifting focus and no editing whatsoever so you can't half tell what's going on or who's supposed to even be in the scenes or speaking.  Everything just runs together like the stream of consciousness it was written in; no plotting, no structure- just typed as it came to mind.  This one really needs a lot of cleaning up.