Review: 15%... I tried
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 12, 2014
I tried SO hard, but I made it 15 % into this book and I wanted to rip my hair out. Gosh. The grammar... Its horrendous. I gave up when it took 6 pages to have a 2 minute altercation. There was an entire paragraph at the end of every piece of dialogue. 6 frickin pages for : 'bump' "Anne is that you?" "Yes, and you are?" "Its me Ben, Lilys brother" "oh yes, hi, I hear shes getting married this weekend..." Etc.This 15% is full of redundancies. Oh my gosh AND!!!! Its as if the writer was getting paid by the number of "and"s she could squeeze into this book. The writing is so bad, I am determined to finish this book. However, I'll only be reading it as I edit it.Yes, this book has made me so mad, I am going to edit it for free and email it to the author as her solicited feedback. I kind of wish it was in print, so I could attack it with a red pen, as to better communicate my frustration.Hopefully, as I finish the story, I can at least return with a positive plot review.