Review: Shows great potential for an enjoyable series
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2012
Like other readers, I thought a lot of questions should have been answered to make the story line more "believable" (yes, even in fiction I want to believe it could be true). If Lucy's store really wasn't making much money, how did she afford to hire someone to help while she played detective? Did she have the store already when she was working at the newspaper? If so, who ran it? If not, how did she afford to buy it? The unveiling of the murderer was sort of anticlimactic. "Uhm, yeah, he made me mad so I killed him." I of course liked the fact that a dog was a main character.It was an enjoyable read. I'm going to be watching for more from this writer, as I think that with time and guidance she can become a real force to be reckoned with at the top of the heap. Although a few typos and other errors were noticeable, it was not enough to interfere with the storyline.