Review: Enjoyable
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2014
A different twist and overall the story is good and okay for 99 cents.  I found myself liking the characters - Lord Clay Bentley (Trent) and Eleanor Westin, even though they're both a bit dense at times and this novel is a series of mis-understandings, but the chemistry the author developed between them worked for me as well as the back story.  The sub-plots and other characters had enough meat to make it a well rounded story.The novel is littered with editing problems.  At one point Lord Bentley is called Lord Westin, I had to back track and check what I was reading for a moment and other similar mix-ups, and pronoun and word choice problems (his instead of her, die instead of dye, etc), but you surmount this. There are also some plot continuity problems, but these you can surmount as well and still enjoy the story.I was impelled to keep reading it and read it in an evening, as I was intrigued and entertained enough that I was curious to see how the author would resolve the story.There were some improbable parts to the novel that didn't fit with the time period, but I always take the concept of "historical" when applied to most romances very lightly and I don't get bogged down by it, but if this is a problem for you then be advised.