Review: Mediocre
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 22, 2011
The story is predictable, the sex is mostly dull, and the characters aren't interesting.Actually, in some sad ways, the book mirrored real life, but in a shorter period of time.  One episode of hot sex, then dull sex and within a couple of days there was no sex.  Wow, just what I was looking for in a erotic short story.There are also the requisite editing problems.  Along with the common problems, the editor failed to correct a sentence where the wrong character is named.  That kind of mistake really breaks the rhythm of a book.