Review: Disappointment. * SPOILERS*
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2013
* SPOILERS*Okay so when I read this it sounded good. I LOVE a rock star book. The "will be edited in 2014" should of gave a lot away to me. But I don't mind errors, they don't bother me. But when sentences don't make sense ALL the time, not just SOMETIMES, like at least once a chapter, it's a bit much and it had the most errors I have ever read in any book ever. That was annoying AND distracting. I actually like the first 20-25% of this book. I liked Emily and not taking mess from any men and Johnathan. She put him in his place, didn't swoon over him and kicked his butt for him being a arrogant dill hole. Then he gets jealous some how and busts into her hotel and announces his un-dying love for her!?!?! UMMMM WTF!?!?! they hated each other less than 24 hours ago...how can he love her that quick. His explanation is bull crap and cheesy. And then he tells her he doesn't want to have sex with her. She then BEGS him....even though she punched him, calls him a prick every other name under the sun and never shows any interest in him...then she begs him and calls him baby and tells him she loves him...ummm AGAIN, WTF!?!?!?! then the next day he leaves without so much of a note. Really!? do you honestly do that to your "soul mate" and then he basically dumps her the next day?...ummmm okay..... and how can Emily not know her best friend was on drugs and was GAY!!! 10 YEARS!!! and Stacy...I do not like him one tiny bit, from the beginning he is bossy and an jerk and tries to tell her what panties she can and cannot wear, your her boss. Yes, tell her what clothes are appropriate or not. But panties? get off your high horse, I would of kneed him in the balls if he told me no one wants to see my granny panties. And Johnathan in the start is this big, bad, hot rock star. Six-five and 200 or so pounds and then he just all of a sudden out of no where starts crying to her? nothing in this story is believeable at all. He also treats women like crap and Emily like crap, even though he says he loves her and she is his soul mate. And one minute he can't get it up for head because he loves Emily, then he is boning a girl because low and behold Emily randomly out of no where turns into a lesbian and has sex with a woman....This book is so seriously messed up. I wanted to like this book, heck, some parts I DO LIKE. But Jesus, it was killed. I had to finish it because I never leave a book un-finished. It kills me to write this review, look at my reviews and you will see I NEVER do this. But I am sooo mad, frustrated, let down, embarrassed for this author. And then I find out there is three books!! I read the synopsis and reviews for book 2 and it looks like it does not get any better. The errors are just as bad and she is a lesbian in book 2? and yet she is pregnant with his twins low and behold.....I will NOT be reading book 2. I hope book 3 gets better and the author really sits down and thinks about this. ( and I have just read reviews and she has the hots for the body guard? ummm WTF! I guess I won't read book 3, maybe book 4? why so many books for this horrible series? ) Get some beta readers( good ones) fire your editor and at least try to salvage the fourth book. PLEASE. I truly would love to know how it works out for Emily and Johnathan. I would like to see them together. I would of and would like if this book was differen't and things were differen't. It had sooo much potential. I wish the author the best of luck and hope her nothing but the best. If anyone reads my reviews you know I hate leaving a negative review. This hurts me doing this. But this was TORTURE for me to read...I want to warn everyone. Do not waste your money, whether it is free, 99 cents or 1.99$...do not do it. It was a HUGE let down and I am truly sad by this. I hope Johnathan gets help in rehab and Emily straightens the EFF out...I hope Stacy decides what he is...gay, bi, likes cats, etc.I'm done. I don't want to hurt this author, I'm sorry if that is what this review will do. But I believe in honesty, I am ALWAYS honest when I beta read or read a book. Authors need that. I think this author needs a kick in the butt if she wants to salvage her books or her career. My opinion. Take it or leave it.