Review: good story... could have been great!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2014
The beginning of the story reminded me of David Edding's Belgariad which is not bad at all, but their are more then enough difference in the characters and story to make it the authors own. Characters and plot development are good and the dialog between characters are at times amusing. Their visit to the elves was not really told and I wish lot more were written about Al and friends during their time in the marines (maybe a short story?) Because of these I felt the author was in a rush to finish the story, this book could have been great!