Review: Great new demon tale!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 4, 2013
This story was such a pleasant surprise to me! I was hooked right out the gate. From page one I was like--Oh, Demons! I'm in this for the long run!I was following the story of Sariel--I have to admit--she got on my nerves from time to time. Yes, the poor sweet thing is tossed into a reality that no one could possibly imagine. And where she would make impressive ground in the heroine department, she could get really self loathing and just fall back twenty steps. She had zero confidence half the time. I kind of blame her up bringing--so in actuality she was written very well as a character. I can't blame her for being down on herself when most people were like, "Oh, its ok little girl," and would just give her a pat on the head and tell her where to go, what to wear, and how to act.She broke some ground for me when she was 'training' I didn't quite get Alexander. By the end I wanted her to tub the hunky shifter dude. Even Mywar was a better option. I think they all saw the 'woman' and not the 'girl' that Alexander couldn't get over.It was a story that broke through my defenses and I couldn't put down. I wanted more and then the book just ended and then I was screaming at the book for more. It just ends! Well, we get a conclusion--I was happy about that. But we got so much implied romantic build up with not even wetting the pallet of the readers--which, I think could have been done better.If I had one complaint throughout the whole story, it was the dialogue. I mean honestly. There were not contractions to be found in the speech. I'm sorry but a chick being college age isn't gonna talk without using slang, and she literally never did! I think the author needs a few stronger beta readers to just refine some of those tiny elements.**I received this review on behalf of the author via Lovers of Paranormal in exchange for an honest review**