Review: QUICK READ
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
Caroline's branch office had met and exceeded their sale targets and had won an all expenses paid trip to Hawaii, for everyone in the office!  It's there she meets Mark, they have a one night stand. Something that's completely out of character for Caroline. After returning home, and going back to work, Mark has become a fond memory. Until he turns up unannounced at her home one evening a few weeks later.This story is part one, and ends on a cliffhanger. It's very short as well. Caroline is a bit of a control freak, due to her background. Although her backstory didn't seem all that bad to me. Mark we learn about in the latter part of this.This was just okay for me, the writing is awkward and a bit choppy. The interactions between the characters feel a bit forced. The sex scenes were okay, but I have read much better. The second half of the story flowed a whole lot better than the first. I'm not sure that I will read more. I'm getting rather fed up with stories being released in small bite size pieces.