Review: sigh
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 6, 2013
this story could have been really good and should have been, but it just wasn't. I was so distracted by the middle school level writing, that I just dumped it. try adding substance instead of description on tiny things that mean nothing in the story and never will. you don't have to hit a certain # of words here like you did in school for essays.