Review: An entertaining read...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 24, 2013
I would rate this book, 3.75 stars.In this short story, we have two best friends, Kindrah and Amari. Having been friends since early childhood has bonded these two for a lifetime with an unbreakable connection; or so they believed. But what happens when feelings mixed with unstable relationships get involved? Will their sacred friendship be able to stand through the test of life's trials and tribulations? Or will the save haven they've built within and around one another be infiltrated and destroyed?I loved the storyline, the author did a great job with keeping the interest level at its peak. But...There were quite a few grammatical errors such as minor misuse of words, some misspellings, and poor sentence structure. The narrative switched from first to third person during a few scenes and most times the story seemed fast tracked. Now, although there is nothing wrong with a fast paced story, if choosing that writing style; the transition from scene to scene should be smooth. At times, I found myself lost because the timeline of events didn't add up, often confusing me as to whether we were talking days, weeks or months.Overall despite those things, the story kept me interested and wanting to know what would happen next and because of that reason; I will be reading part two.~Authors Supporting Other Authors Bookclub ~