Review: I really wanted to like this book.....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2013
I got this book on loan from a friend and all I can say is that I'm glad I didn't spend my own money on it.I have been trying to read this book for over a week and every time I get started, something about the book just irritates me and I can't keep reading. I have actually stopped and completed 2 other books while I tried this one.I have not even gotten to the halfway point of the book, but I think I'm done trying. There are SO many grammar mistakes and missing words in this book that it makes it very hard to read. Not only that, but parts of the book read like they were written by a high schooler.  The inconsistencies in Sedona's behavior are driving me crazy. First, she's this "good girl" who has little experience with guys. Then, all of a sudden, she's watching videos with her roommate to learn how to not be such a "good girl.". I just found that whole scene very weird.Again, I wanted to like this book and I really did give it a chance, but I don't think I'll be finishing it unless it gets a good editor. Maybe it gets better after the halfway mark, but I don't think I can continue to find out.