Review: What the heck!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 27, 2012
I just finished this book and I don't know where to begin.The Good: unbelievably hot sex that is abundant and the Dom/Sub action is amazing.The Bad: everything else. Clearly no one edited this book because as the reader I spent most of my time shaking my head with grammatical errors that were utterly annoying and the Kindle formatting is off. Now to the nitty gritty...the book has no direction. It starts off with the characters meeting again after some time a part and all of a sudden the story jumps back many years and you spend half of the book reading the back story. Once it returns to the present (which by the way comes out of no where) its still much of the same confusion. You want to like these characters but the story itself falls apart. The majority of the book is just sex and as much as I love reading the main characters in coital bliss, for the majority of the book to just be about sex shows an unskilled writer.This book seems to be a collection of unfinished ideas with endless sex. There is so much left out about the characters including the heroine dealing with unwelcomed attention by someone that clearly has an impact and she keeps it hidden. NO RESOLUTION! I wanted to badly to really get to know Lee and Xander but all they seem to do is have sex and Lee is not a strong girl until the very, very end and by then I couldn't care less about her or him.What a shame this book falls flat because there is such great potential but the author must have been too awestruck by the sex (which I admit is absolutely WOW) to actually write a well-rounded story.