Review: really
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2014
Ok first I want to say that I really enjoyed this book.. How ever, there was way to much rap entwined in the book and sometimes you couldnt tell the story from the lyrics and that was not good so leave out all that TI i get they are suppose to be hood girls but come on now as a female we really dont do TI all like that Imlike hime but lets have a little reality in the story. Heck most men dont eve listen to him like that where is the R&B with out the lyrics please and how do you go from 18to 25 in a couple of chapters. We should have seen how the relationship between Eron and aliyah played out bit to go from saving her to them being together for some years is crazy.. Again I did really enjoy the story but slow it down its ok to have a book with more than 250 pages if you have to stretch it to 350 that is ok but you are moving this story way to fast and the ending really so niw that you have my attention please dont take 2 years to put out book 2 that is the quickest way to lose readers they forget about it.I really love all the couples though i gave you 3 stars and please please proof read before you put a book out that is like the worst thing in the world to pay money for a book and have to figure out what it is saying Im a proof reader if you need some one to do it sonyaf9093@yahoo.com