Review: Wheres the rest of the story?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2013
I realize its a short story, but it doesnt go anywhere.  I thought i had read the 1 st chapter and was anxious to see what happened next. NOTHING, what a let down, this could easily have lead to an in depth longer interesting story, a bit far fetched, and impossible, but interesting.  Dissappointed that there was so little substance, a big build up and then flat.