Review: A decent read. Getting better.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 11, 2013
Good Characterizations. Good story line. Unique and not just a retelling of her last writings. Its a hot story for adults. I found the ending to be very good. I was surprised when the rogue was not dispatched. But I did like how the issue was resolved.Editing is still very poor. I hated the use of "glands" in both stories of hers that I have read.Drooling is dripping saliva. Drawling is a drawing out of words based on a areas dialect.Still an over abundance of extra words in a sentence, or missing words, as well as prepositions and personal pronouns being mixed up.Not as bad as her last story. They are not too distracting, and I was able to read over what was there and put in what was intended. But it does get tedious. I can see other readers having more issues with this.At $.99 it is what I expect to pay for the quality I read. If this book were well edited, I would expect to pay $5 or such for it. I would also be rating it a 4 star if it were in print ready form. So take this into account when you are trying to decide if you should get it. The editing is REALLY bad. The story is REALLY good.