Review: The story was nice, but.....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 2, 2014
I enjoyed the story and went ahead and finished the book when I would have normally stopped because I would have been so frustrated with all of the errors.There are: 1. Missing words, 2. repeated words, 3. repeated phrases and 4. wrong words just to get started. You get the idea though. The editing is terrible and you would do the book a lot of good just by getting a better editor.I liked the premise of the story but for a bad ass biker I think he was all over the "I love you" phrase too quickly. I think there could have been some further development of some of the other characters.