Review: Bailed after 4 chapters
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 11, 2013
Beautiful cover!And that folks, is about all the compliments I have for this one. It's just not ready for publication. I set it down after a tedious four chapters and had absolutely no desire to pick it back up again.After the tiniest prologue ever written, the author gives us nothing to grab onto. We are supposed to be so intrigued by all the coincidences between the two women that we will keep reading to find out this mystery, but the characters behave in totally unrealistic ways, and the "oops I've said something in an old timey way" thing gets real old real fast. We get this nothing introduction to some guy I can't begin to remember the name of, and the flash back to her lost love so "torn up" that she's gone falls flat like a pancake.I'm sorry to be so harsh, but this is a beginning creative writing assignment at best. The author would do well to pull this one and take it back to the drawing board, and don't release it until it has gone through a more thorough review process by some independent readers (not friends).