Review: Could've been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
I'm a little disappointed with the story. I thought she would've grown up a lot more than she did. She still came across as the dim whit. At least when he was telling the story. She couldn't make up her own mind or voice her opinions or emotions about anything in her life. During her part she stepped it up and made decisions that seemed like she was growing.I also didn't like how the situation with James wasn't cleared up. Like what happened to him if there was a different story behind him not being with his wife and son. It was never told why he had the events backwards but it was pointed out. Also what was really going on with his ex and why she fell off or if the child was his or not. I can see his brother becoming another story but I'd doubt I'd read it because she goes into too much detail (I took a shower, started the water grabbed a towel and soap etc.)The story would've actually been probably less than half if every little detail wasn't told. It took away from the story a lot this time because so many things were left in the air. She could've cut most of that and added some detail with the sex scenes. Those were run through and done before they even started. Other than that the story was great. I liked how the wedding went down and also the drama unfolding with him being shot. Everything else came across as fluff.