Review: Please hire an editor!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 29, 2013
Storyline - 4 starsEditing - 2 starsThis story was fresh, well-plotted, nicely paced, and had excellent character development, particularly for a novella. Unfortunately, it also had prolific spelling and word choice errors that were very distracting and broke the flow of the story - things like "you" instead of "your", "trialed" instead of "trailed" and "ally" instead of "alley".  I'm sorry, but it's just not possible to step around the corner into an ally for a kiss and that mistake was made repeatedly so it was obvious that that's how the author thinks "alley" is spelled. The further I got into the story, the more sympathy I had for my old high school English teacher for having to read and grade papers like this. I was itching to take out my red pen, but I don't think my Kindle could handle it.  Erin Knightley is obviously a talented author but no one can be good at everything. I hope she hires a good editor in the future so her wonderful stories can shine without the annoying grammatical errors.