Review: Expected better...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2013
For this book to have a real editor, there were many, many errors that drove me insane! Missing words, incorrect spelling, incorrect verb tense. So many that I just couldn't keep overlooking them. The dialog between the characters was choppy and rather annoying. Short, frequent sentences that didn't flow naturally at all.Timeline issues. It seemed that the author forgot her own timeline. One thing would happen at one point in the book, then a little while later it would happen again. Confusing and made me go back to make sure I read it correctly the first time.Many inconsistencies. Example: The master bedroom was suppose to be the only bedroom on the first floor. They made a big deal of explaining this and referencing it repeatedly. However, about midway through the book, all of a sudden it was now upstairs, referenced several times by all of the having to climb the stairs to reach the bedroom. Another example: Right after the main attack on the female lead by her boyfriend, Jared gets a call from the sheriff telling him that the guy had a long rap sheet. But in the end, when he is sentenced for his assault on her, he only gets five years because he didn't have a prior record.Overall, the storyline itself was intriguing so I can give it 2 stars, but I really didn't like the book and think I'll stay away from this series. I won't give up on the author yet. I have read one other book from her, and it was a