Review: Ignore the flaws and enjoy the story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 2, 2013
This is an exceptionally good story which has all the elements necessary to become a cult classic.  I really enjoyed it.As others have noted, there are many writing flaws that detract from it being perfect.  I would recommend the author consider a major edit and review.  Examples include excessive use of passive voice, randomly shifting point of view (making it confusing to follow),  and awkward grammar.If you can suspend your irritation at the stylistic flaws, you will find a story that's well worth reading. The characters elicit emotion - positive and negative.  Blaine, the Sherlock Holmes type detective, becomes your hero until...well you decide.  The ending is quite unpredictable.Give it a read and you won't be disappointed.