Review: Book needs an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2014
I have to agree with many of the reviews.  This book lacks any sensible editing.  Punctuation marks are helter skelter; i.e. quotation marks at the end of a sentence that isn't a quote, name mixups, etc.  It really became annoying.  I'm not sure if it was edited at all and found myself wanting to edit it.  Not sure if the others in the series are like this, but if they are, I am going to delete them from my Kindle.