Review: Lacked focus, a slowed down story with  way too many unnecessary details
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2014
This book lacked focus. It was a chronicle of the minutiae of life, when someone sat on a chair, when they smiled, when they returned a look, and so on. I think KA's gift is writing from the heart, and that was lost in the absolute nothing that that happened in this book. It was not just repetitive but also the most boring read in a long long time. I generally take KA at face value and don't analyze her world too much, but in this case it was as if everything happened in slow motion, for no reason. Also unecessary was the past relationship with vinnie the old brother of the current Hero, it added a level of discomfort to the story as the heroine did truly love the brother. Weird and unecessary for this story.