Review: Embarrassing.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 18, 2014
The hero, Gil Howard, is my main concern in this novel. His actions border on perversion. He wants a physical relationship with an underage girl. He goes into her bedroom and through her drawers, almost taking a pair of her panties as a souvenir. Perverted, right? He isn't very intelligent. He can't speak proper English. And grin. OMG, everybody in the book grins, but Gil grins in nearly every scene and situation he's in. He must have grinned a hundred times in the book. Ms. McGriffith needs to invest in a thesaurus. And his constant grinning in any situation, plus his actions towards a girl that, by rights, he shouldn't even be looking at because of her age, gave me the impression he was just a dumb, perverted idiot. He had no redeeming qualities and when he was around the heroine, I actually worried for her safety.