Review: Story had great potential.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 21, 2012
This was a really good story with lots of trials, tribulations and emotion.  The author does a good job of developing the story and the characters.  The story does have both a hero and heroine as well as a "villain" but the story is centered more around Karen.  I found it unbelievable that Karen just all of a sudden realized she was in love with Jim.  That realization could have been developed better.  The dialogue was a bit choppy which kept the story from flowing well.  I could not find a whole lot of information about this author so I would assume she is fairly new.  That would explain the choppy dialogue.  With the author's imagination and creativity with the plot, I believe in time her writing will become more refined and will result in great books.