Review: Five and two--averages out to 3?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 4, 2013
Five stars for the story, two for the formatting. I really enjoyed the story, got completely engrossed in the characters and was delighted with the ending. However...to the author, a heart-felt suggestion that I hope you will accept in the spirit in which it is offered: PLEASE hire, adopt, marry or borrow an editor to clean up the spelling, punctuation and grammar errors before publishing!! I got derailed so many times trying to figure out just WHAT you were trying to say that I almost gave up. An editor will also catch the use of words that sound alike but have very UN-related meanings., i.e., coward used instead of cowered. I'll leave you to a good dictionary to figure that one out. Keep writing--you have a good sense of story and that's one of the most necessary functions for a writer. I may even try another one of your books.