Review: i think i like it
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 16, 2013
The story itself is intriguing what with the Marys, and the plants and the animals and the characters. The style, the voice if you will, needs some work. Each sentence reads like a separate paragraph, which gives the story a very deliberate rhythm. I almost think I like the narrative in that style.The dialogue...needs some work. Alright, the dialogue needs a lot of work. Still, I like it enough to read more. I'm interested to see how this writer develops.