Review: Not bad but not great
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 11, 2011
The author seems to write like they probably speak..they ramble like a high school girl might where you just want to say "stop! slow down!".  I wanted to shorten paragraphs and make them more to the point.  The story is okay but the whole ending needs some serious work. And I hat Melissa...I tried to like her, but she doesn't really like anything about herself so how is the reader supposed to like her.  She's more self depreciating than Bella and she cries constantly!!!  And I know this might be nit picking...but sometimes the vampire is Mike and sometimes Michael. Pick one and stick to it!!!!!!