Review: bad ending
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 26, 2013
Written well.  Didn't like the ending or the premise of a god committing suicide, regardless of the reason.  They want at least 20 words for this review - why?  Effective communication is passing your thoughts along quickly, more words aren't a help.  I used to teach effective writing and have found great merit in the old KISS formula - Keep It Simple, Stupid!