Review: Too rushed!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2013
Even if you are writing a short story that is no excuse to rush through. These stories have potential, I like the plot lines, yet there is much to be worked on. I read "Downsized" first and liked it up until the last 75% of the story. Things got too wacky for my tastes. I hate stories that are not believable! I read the next two stories and simply got angry by story three. Please develop your characters, learn how to use a typeface that denotes thought from monologue/dialogue and chose a point of view, establish it early, stick to it or learn how to switch when it is for the story. I hate being confused when reading. It's unnecessary and comes off amatuerish.  The authors are talented but their skills need to be honed. Oh, and not every story needs a happy ending, even romances.