Review: Short and a bit too juvenile
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2014
This short story came across to me as being written by a teenager.  The conversations struck me as some I would overhear in the hall of a high school.  There wasn't the feel of the Regency period.Eris (apparently no main character can have an every day sort of name) is a young woman who is supposed to be blunt and out-spoken.  Escaping from some boring fellow she accidentally sees a couple in the moonlit garden.  The gentleman comes after her when she attempts to slip away.Cian is a titled gentleman and something of a rake.  He is intrigued by her frankness and her looks.  This was all it took to reel the man in. He arrives at the next social event and kisses her, sealing their fate.In short order by presents himself to her father and asks for her hand.The story is too short for any character development.  This is a quick read, not complicated and pretty forgettable.