Review: Needs More
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2013
Too many gaps in the timeline, the story was left incomplete... so... um... the author seemed to miss so many chances in the story to make it a real romance. Glad it was free, but even then I still feel cheated by the ending. She never revealed to him that she was pregnant by him. I like the happy ever after stuff, and the fact that they never actually said "I love you," I'm like "really??"