Review: Close but no cigar
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 6, 2010
What I liked about the story was Colin, he sounded like a hottie...at least in bed. The sex scene was well done to a point. What was missing was a bit more of a background on at least the two main characters. I felt I didn't get to know them well enough. Secondly, with the amazing varieties of love toys couldn't something a little more unusual been used...or as a second round of lovin' use something a little more creative? A perfect opportunity missed IMO But the author has promise and With a little more work and a wider imagination..don't be afraid to get more adventurous...the author could do quite well. Push the envelope a bit...go for it!