Review: Good storyline, horrible editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 20, 2014
I would have liked this book but: When misspelled words, missing words, repeated words/phrases within a sentence, and all the simple mistakes throughout this book - take away from the readers enjoyment, the book does not deserve more than one or two stars.  I skimmed through much of the book to get to the story. There were times when a statement/question was made and you had to read more than a page or two before you get to the response to that statement/question. I had to go back to see what was the original statement/question. Very, very frustrating.I had a very difficult time with the character of Ellie. She had three wonderful older brothers  and wonderful parents who all loved her and the whole family would do anything for her... she had everything going for her in every way and yet she was so insecure and lacking in self confidence. It just did not make sense to me.Then there is Finley. Wonderful, wonderful Fin.  Abandoned by both parents and left to take care of his younger brother and their grandmother.  Fin never got to be a kid. And yet he seems so well adjusted and wonderful.  You would think that Fin would be the angsty one here, not Ellie.  There were just too many questions left unanswered in this story along with the editing problems or lack thereof.