Review: Needs polishing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2014
The story is good, but certain aspects lack detail. Author wrote great detail on what was worn, what was eaten, but utterly lacking on sexy details like what type of lingerie or sex scenes. Definately needed more. Plus the interaction seemed a little squirrely, one second mad, then crazy sex, then mad? Seemed a little forced. Good read that needs polishing.