Review: entertainment book, worth the time
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2011
I read some of the reviews, some are mean and pissy, but still on the target.This book is about the authors dream fullfillment, ok, great. What the hell else is writing a fantasy about??? Well, give up? iT IS ABOUT YOUR DREAMS AND FANTASY THAT IS WHAT YOU PULL FROM! As a fellow writer (W. Shane Wilson here on Amazon and elsewhere.) I write whatever strikes me, (See the wide variety in my list of books.) So this book and the next two are the author's personal fantasy, so what, this was enjoyable to read. (I am not a fan of the twilight books, I read and own them all, they are the same sentence repeat 75000 times, all four books could have been compressed in to one good one. (See Steven Kings review, it is insightful and I agree with it).I think this book and author are worth the time and read. The story is well, completely unrealistic: So here is what she did wrong or just left out. Explain where all the excess weight and tissues went, because this character is not magic, she is flesh, therefore, the fluid, tissues and so on has to be explained my dear, or as others have pointed out this is fluffy and wishful thinking.Kellen should have killed Mike or Al should because Mike is a human and by your set up laws must be silenced, yet, they let him go, no MAN WOULD LET A WOMAN HE LOVED BE THREATENED AND MANHANDLED : ESPECIALLY AS A VAMPIRE AND LET THE BASTARD LIVE COME ON....Seriously, guys are base creatures and protection and rage are something they are born with, and Kellen is a blood drinker, Mike would have been dead on the floor.I purchased the second two books, because this story is a heck of alot better than Witches of Santa Ana, which is real crazy with chacters than border on completely retardation (they say they love and cant live without each other and then do everything they can to do the exact opposite of that.) This story is even keeled and flows, i enjoy it much more and so should all of you.NOW: for the good:This author had a good idea with the explanation of how Vampeens and true vampires are established, and the % idea was very clever (well done.)I have been married to the ONLY WOMAN i have ever truly loved and she can finish my sentences and after 23 years she still brings the beast in me every single time i look at her. She is my true love and my honest to GOD soulmate (this is damned rare) i have never actually met anyone who has found this other than me and Arlene. Anyway, because of this, i write and read about love in a very specific way, both physical, emotional and the etherial bond that makes no sense but, when it is right, it is so intense it burns you. So, this author is coming along and has some idea of what that means, once again well done.NOW: EXPAND ALL OF IT and explain away the holes in the story in future books and keep writing, do not let anyone change that