Review: Ghost, but not horror, story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 3, 2011
This is a very interesting short story. At first you start to feel really creeped out, anticipating the worst, then it takes an unusual twist which changes the whole feel of the tale. If that was what the author was going for, he succeeded, but if you want true horror you will be disappointed.Lori is an LPN on third shift in the maternity ward, studying for her RN degree. She loves caring for the babies, and longs for the day she can take home her own baby. But this night she looks up to see a girl who is about 12 watching her and the babies - what does she want?It's a cute read, but if the author wanted the reader to be scared, the story didn't get much beyond uneasy. Characterization is okay for the number of pages, but could have been better. Could be fleshed out a bit very easily. I did notice a couple of grammar errors, but one could have been dialect, so it wasn't too bad. Good way to spend 5-10 minutes.