Review: Don't quite get it...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 14, 2014
I suppose the story had potential, but it just fell incredibly short for me.  Not even the first couple of pages which I guess were supposed to set the stage for what the life of a male escort in Vegas is like, felt like anything other than overstating "the obvious".  Enter the female lead in the story and it's just more of the same.  The "banter" between Jace and Adrienne, with the exception of one or two funny lines, just seemed to be incredibly infantile, and I found myself rolling my eyes more times than I care to count.  The sex, again was just repetitive and obvious, I get it - Jace has a huge one.  We get to read about his enormous size over and over again even though, I'm guessing he wouldn't be able to afford the penthouse apartment in the best hotel if he didn't have it..  I know writers are supposed to have a great attention to detail, but in my opinion, it should all allow for the story to flow seamlessly and in a way that it make sense, unfortunately, I found this was not the case for Ms. Lucero - throughout the book there was way too much unnecessary detail - a lot of walking to the kitchen to get a bottle of water from the stainless-steel fridge, the "sterling silver" appliances, and going to the bathroom to pee and brush my teeth and wash my hands..This is just an example of what makes this book very difficult to read.  Seeing that there are more books in the series coming up, I hope that Ms. Lucero takes some of this into consideration. I honestly can't imagine being the only one unhappy with this book for these very reasons.