Review: Who's the alien?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 5, 2014
Positive:  The story caught my attention and kept it until the end.  Imaginative plot and very well written.Spoilers ahead!!!!!!Negative:The romance.Silas was a freakishly weird guy who cuts himself and has conversations with his dead wife.  Good prospect, not.  He meets Mel and is a total d__khead.  He is rude and insulting,but she seems to be okay with it.  Next day, he is chased and shot at with some silvery phase gun?  Wait, are there aliens after him?  Turns out they are after the girl.  Seemed totally random that they would try to kill him..  She has some unexplained healing power and heals him, so maybe she is an alien. So Silas is suddenly madly in love with her and declares he will protect her with his life from the silvery gun people who it turns out are not aliens, but are an uber secret government agency. (run on sentence, I know)So Silas is running away with Mel to hide.  And surprise, the bad guys find them.  So Silas all of a sudden has super powers and is able to dispatch all but one of the bad guy by summoning a black hole with his fingers. (Obviously, he is an alien.)  Bad guy shoots him and takes off with the girl.So Silas discovers a tracking device on his car and heads off to the local 7-11 and buys all the fixin's for a super bomb.Meanwhille,  a bunch of man-hating alien fem-bots (These are the real aliens) have hatched a diabolical plan to turn all human men into pussycats.You'll have to read it for yourself to see how it all turns out.My conclusion: It was a convoluted mess, but an entertaining convoluted mess.