Review: Trying to eroticize a popular song?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2012
I couldn't finish this either, read about 60%, skimmed roughly 20% of the book, and just called it quits after that, probably the last 20%.  Had this been a short story, and not a novella, but a SHORT story, it might have worked, however it wasn't. It was more a porn version of Rupert Holmes "Pina Colada" song and I definitely wouldn't classify it as D/s or BDSM, light or otherwise -- kinky sex, perhaps.Agreed, the characters inability to talk to each other was ridiculous... in fact why would two people who supposedly love each other prefer to give up on a 4 year relationship than just talk?  Rena's issues needed more a therapist than a Dom.  Even when he was fulfilling her fantasies, she was all uptight and couldn't talk.  Additionally, the supposed "hot" sex scenes were repeated over and over and extensively long, making them more tedious than exciting.  In fact, everything the characters did just seemed to be repeated feelings reiterated over and over in repeated paragraphs.Save yourself some time... listen to the song Pina Colada and watch a 3 minute porn movie.