Review: Good idea, not so great execution
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 12, 2012
The plot for this story was pretty good.  It is typical fantasy but told in an interesting way.  What bothered me was the execution.  The author brings you out of the story by telling you, not showing you.  She can't seem to make up her mind what voice to tell the story in, switching from 1st person, 2nd person, present and past.  It is rough and kills the mood sometimes.  I gave it 3 stars because I wanted to finish it for the plot.  However, it does leave a lot hanging for the next book.