Review: Recommend reading, just know that editing needs help
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2014
The rating has everything to do with the style of the writing. I understand the other reviews about the first person narrative; it just is not executed well at all. The story itself is good and the intimate scenes are GRAPHIC and HOT. That being said some of the illustration and character discussion was just awkward, kinda like something that you just wish you never knew about someone. But the author sure can spin a story, just needs an editor to help develop the imagery better.