Review: needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2012
It was a sweet story, but the grammatical errors drove me nuts and also a lot of incorrect present tense and past tense usage.  Please refer to the Grammarist compliments of Google -Aisle vs. isleAn aisle is (1) a passageway separating seating areas; (2) a passageway for people to walk through, such as in a grocery store; or (3) a longitudinal division of an interior area. Aisle is sometimes figurative, especially in politics, where it denotes the imaginary dividing line (based on the real one in the legislative chamber) between parties.An isle is an island. The word is often used for small islands, but it is not incorrect in reference to big islands (for example, the main islands in the British Isles are big).I don't believe there was an island in the horse barn.