Review: Disgusting
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 29, 2013
It was really good until he decides that she deserves a spanking for being economical during wedding plans. No one mentions the price of the dress she decided not to buy. Is this written by a teenager? It's a little creepy that he can spank her over any transgression he deems spank-worthy, and there is no safe word. This is not BDSM; there isn't even anything erotic about the punishment. I must have read the description wrong, because I thought this story was going to contain romantic spanking; in my opinion, it contains borderline abuse. She is afraid of being given orgasms, because she does not like to lose control. That's a pretty serious control issue. Nothing is done to work on this problem, other than to state that the problem exists. If she's going to freak out and hide in the bathroom after every orgasm, that's going to get flipping tedious.