Review: good
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 24, 2013
This was good. Unfortunately I got the old version. But I could see the potential. There were a few things that bothered me. Such as seducing and having sex with the person you are suppose to be protecting. Not only that but in the beginning Ryder brought over two of his subs and they went to at it all night. Now Im just saying wouldn't you loose your focus. And Maya is in the next room having to listen to it. Then the chief Ryder's boss is all cool with them messing around, just make sure you are protecting her first. Um ok sure. Then there is Ryder and his temper tantrums. I mean come on! Gezz... Yeah under it all he has a big heart but he has a temper and yelled at so darn much. Nate on the other hand was such a sweet heart. He counter balanced Ryders roughness. Maya just got on my nerves. She was young and very immature. Always crying and complaining.What I did like was the banter. The arguing which lead to sexual tension. Loved Nate always being the voice of reason. Loved Nate being a shoulder to cry on. Loved Nate. Maybe I will reread it later with the updated version.