Review: Great story. Too many errors
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2014
I really love this story. however, it's very distracting the amount of errors in the story. especially towards the end. having to read and re-read the paragraph over and over and still not make sense really sucks. I kept sayin to my self. is that a complete thought??? where's the rest of it?.. I almost want to read it again just to highlight the errors.