Review: Great premise, but not much done with it
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 4, 2011
The premise of the story - a corporation secretly has access to a time machine, and suprisingly is using it ethically, is great.  However, the twist ending left me underwhelmed.  In addition, there seemed to be some pieces missing in the middle.  The writing style was good and engaging.  I think the story has a lot more potential than is currently reflected.