Review: Sweet and sexy but filled with "unintended" errors...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2014
Look, this is a wonderful novella which grabs you from the start and even though it alternates present day and flashback, it's really a tale of two high school seniors who fall in love at the dawn of the 21st Century.  You know there's a HEA on the first page, but getting there is half the fun.  M.J. O'Shea is in her best "sensitive boy child" mood here--northwest milieu, sensitive sweethearts, alternately confused, scared and defiant about their relationship.HOWEVER, Ms. O'Shea, get yourself a proper copy editor and layout technician.  This book's Kindle format is rife with paragraphs that are not delineated--the conversations between Alex and Taylor are often in one paragraph, not separated so that you know it's one answering the other.  And while you're at it, make that an AMERICAN copy editor--one who can spell the word the way we do and also one who does not impose a British accent on some phrases.  Otherwise you will sail right through this heartfelt voyage with a smile on your face.  (One more star would have been granted for a "clean" format).