Review: Side by side.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2014
I really really wanted to like this story. It sounded good and I was excited. It starts off pretty good and I am intrigued by why he hates Lance so bad. And then he starts to out of no where have these feelings for him, even though he hates him and was just fighting with him. Then they end up making out in his room. The relationship was weird and moved too fast and it was very confusing and they have no connection at all.  I also feel if he has never been with a man before things would go slower and progress instead of HIM being the one to perform oral right away and being the aggressor. There were  lots of errors and at times they were very distracting. Also the use of words regarding his penis and testicles was annoying. Like his "basket" lol. Please, NEVER use words like this again, it kills ANY steaminess the story may of had, which it lacked there also for M/M.  Also in the same sentence the author used dick, rod and cock... pick a word, please. Sigh, the story just really, really lacked and didn't make sense. If things were a bit differen't, it had potential for sure .