Review: Don't like the ending
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2014
I would have given it a 4 or 5, but did not like the ending. I did like the fact that he proved himself, however, I thought the author should have expanded on the ending. There where parts in the story regarding Egypt was nauseous, the Aubrey didn't expand on it at the end. It would have been nice if Egypt found out she was indeed pregnant. That would have been a better ending. Too much hints in the story but no expansion.