Review: Needs editing and a better heroine
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2012
Just about to get married and pregnant, Victoria discovers that Evan, her fiancé is after her money. She seeks peace at her friend's Jack's cottage.Evan is a troubled character and will do about anything to get money, even putting Victoria in danger. Plagued by nightmares, a difficult pregnancy, panic and asthma attacks, Victoria will need the support of friends, family and even the next door neighbor, Seth, to survive.I did not like this book. The heroine is a weepy mess and can not seem to function an hour without falling apart. Of course, if I had all her problems, I would probably cry a river of tears too. Was it really necessary for everything single thing in her life to go wrong ?All the angst about her relationship with Seth turned me off. He loves her, she's is soul mate, but they cannot be together. She leaves him. She cries (again!). But don't fear, it all turned well in the end but not before Victoria is put in mortal danger (again!).This plot needed serious professional editing. Someone needed to tell the author : these are all good ideas, all the men are hot and good looking but you don't need to pack everything is one book. Pare it down to one major issue, one villain and stick with it. Sub-plots are fine but should not overwhelm the main story line. Unfortunately, this book goes in many tangents with no clear direction.