Review: Megans 4.5 Review
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
Please stop, OMG my stomach hurts so much.  My face hurts so much.  From what??  From smiling and laughing. Heck my finger even hurts from highlighting so much.This book was the best cure for- everything.  Because it has EVERYTHING.It was so amusingly funny, hot, steamy, sexy, flirty!!!!No big secret on to what this would be about, the title itself intrigued me.  Once I started reading, the words had me hooked, along with the characters.  Lucian and Tara.  Holy heck TARA!!!!Tara needs money and Lucian just well needs to forget, needs to be- HIM.  He’s a real Dom just not currently.  They both meet in line for auditions for the reality show Dom Wars and in that line the fun begins. And certainly the highlighting.Lucian is pure man and he knows it. He carries himself to the Dom T.  Tara, geez this girl deserves an award.  She thinks she’s strong and ‘man’ enough to be Dom.  How hard could it be right Tara?!?!?!Their INSTANT chemistry is nothing short of perfection.  She’s studying (on her kindle mind you) to be a Dom because hell who can’t boss people around in the real life, right? Yeah, she has zero clue on what’s coming.“Oh dear God, you are a piece of work. Where did you take classes to be that smooth?”“I am good.”“Plenty of practice, eh?”“Yes. That’s what a Dom does.”“No, that’s what you do. I don’t recall reading where it said you had to take fifty women and…” I wavered my hand in the air, “do…private things with them.”“Use your BDSM vocabulary words. I spank them. Force them to orgasm over and over again. Worship their p***y. Their body. I bite them, f*** them hard and..”“I get it! Jesus Christ.” I wagged the Kindle at him. ” It’s all in here, I don’t need you to recite the whole thing.”But, their chemistry keeps them together because now they are partners in this Dom contest and Tara wants it.  She is the Dom.  But clearly Lucian runs the show, but he does it as if she really is.  He tries to get her to put the little check list down.  The more points they get the closer the hefty pot is.  Her little kisses and simple touches aren’t enough and it’s time to move on to the next.  She makes him…ha wait, he convinces his Dom that she should witness his pleasuring himself.  Her answer, sure I can do that.  Blindfold me!!  Cracked me up!!!! Everything they do she is blindfolded.  What she can’t see won’t hurt her but dear heaven above it will feel good.She decides it time to up the anti, points count here.  Must DO something.  After giving herself an oral pep talk….literally -Just oral. Like… like… puffing on a giant cigarette.  But I didn’t smoke.“Take your time sweetheart but, if you don’t mind, please hurry the f*** up.”I am not a huge fan of insta love connection. Dom Wars was sort of, kinda instant love/lust. They were just two people, randomly put together who clicked.  Who have great chemistry.  He isn’t to macho and even though you know there is more to her story- much more she is the comic relief that makes this story even better than you imagined. His back story also plays a part in why he is the way he is. Now these two secrets are just more like a back story.  There isn’t a 80% holy heck-what in the world-drop my kindle thing going on.  It’s just a matter of fact-this is what happen-and this is who I am now.“Do you have to constantly stare at me?”“Yes, Yes I f***ing do.”“I thought you didn’t do p**n”“P**n? Is that what you think you are? A playboy centerfold?”“Don’t try to lie and say I’m pretty.”“Not pretty. You’re much more than that love. You’re a super nova hitting my world and I can’t turn away. I’m riveted in awe, wondering what the f** is this angel doing in my dungeon?”She stared at me and finally turned, presenting her backside.“Oh God, baby, let me worship your a**. Choose a** worship, I beg you. Or face sitting. Face sitting is worth a lot. We need the points. It’s just pleasure, love and I’m tied up.”“Okay. Okay, okay. I’ll do it. But I have to bathe.”“F******,”“I’m not letting you do that unless I bathe. Ew.”“Can you f****ing hurry.”OH MY GOD I have to stop.  I’ll just keep jabbering on and on and posting my highlights over and over. I read this in one sitting, in literally felt like an hour.All that was positive right?!  Positive always out ways the negative and although I really really enjoyed this story there are a few things that didn’t meet the ‘love’ mark for me.1. This was a super fast read.  And truthfully it’s not all that bad to have been sucked in and it be over in no time but BUT I think it more time involved to the growth of the relationship it would help to concrete the storyline.2. Lucian and Tara both had alternating POV’s.  You didn’t know who was talking until you read a few of the lines to figure out who it actually was. This is clearly a simple fix.3. No epilogue.4. No epilogue.  Yes, I said it twice.  I want to know what’s happened to them.  I’m clearly smart enough to figure out that this is a series and this was ROUND ONE so I expect Round two to be about them as well but TELL ME!!!!!!!! For me an epi ties it up. I need that tie :)So bottom line- I loved this story.  It was light and fun and flirty and had me glued and grinning.  AND definitely ready for Round Two!!!If I had to really pin pick my rating and factor in my negative I’d give this a 4 but being I am a HUGE fan of sexual tension and tons of flirting I have to up that!!** RECEIVED A COPY FOR AN HONEST REVIEW **