Review: Secret Ingredients
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 7, 2012
I am not sure why I like these books as much as I do. Books 1 & 2 contain errors. The to too two seems to be the most prevalent ones. No then than's which are a deal breaker for me. Smooth enjoyable story even when the errors break it up a bit. Question  marks at the end of what seems to be a  statement. Dialog embedded in a block of narrative that ends or doesn't end strangely.  And for me, long strings of narrative that are not my favorite writing style in fiction.  Now with all that said I enjoyed reading these books. Tor is fun to follow even with a touch of d x machina in the story. I like Tor and I like his story.  This is all from Tor's point of view with some hints of darkness in the background that start to flesh out as the book develops.Some proofreading and editing would make this a 5 star book. The grammar issues bother me less than the 2-2-2.  How this reads reminds me of Lowell's Quarter share books. Get a fan or reader to read these books and note the errors and most of these will be gone, improving the reading experience. These are obvious errors but not enough to ruin it. Reading 2 now and I will read them all. This is an indie book so it will have the curse of winning you over quick or losing you just as fast. I really liked it despite the problems.