Review: Good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2011
This was actually a fairly good story compared to some of the other Indie authors I have read. The characters were good, and well-developed, as was the story arc. The writing style was from the perspective of the average Joe.The only thing I didn't like was there were no spaces between paragraphs. I did notice when I did my own HTML test that the  tag acts differently on the Kindle: there is no blank line before  like there is in Firefox.