Review: needs a lot of work
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2013
(This book was given to me on a read for review basis by the author.)I'm not really sure how to review this. This story is broken up into four parts and after reading the first two, I do not want to continue on. I feel so horrible because I know that the author put work into this, but it just isn't my cup of tea.The premise for this story is an interesting one. It has a lot of potential, but it needs to be refined in a major way. I feel like the author knows the major points that she wants to hit, but needs to fill in the details in between. There are a lot of unexplained things and it jumps around so much that it is kind of hard to follow. I don't like that fact that the love story goes from 0-200 in no time either.I hope that Milly Silver takes time to go back over the story to polish it up. It has great potential, but it is just missing a lot.