Review: Could have been better
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 18, 2012
Being an avid reader, and also adore my short tales, this one was SO very short and lacked character development in order for me to relate or even like the H/h in this story.I felt it would have had a TON of potentional based on the story line but there was no developing interaction between the characters which would have changed my rating on this one. It was a bit far fetched that in less than a handful of meetings they were in love..... yes I know this is romance and fiction but there has to be SOME sort of reality in the mix as well which in this case there just was not.