Review: Needs some good editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 18, 2013
the verb tense was frequently wrong, at least in the beginning of the book.  "doesn't" where the word should have been didn't...etc.I stopped reading early on because this poor editing was so irritating.it was also irritating that the only man to notice that this woman was beautiful was a man made ugly by his scars, and in the reverse, the only woman to seeming notice that the man was handsome was a Plain Jane woman.I know that this is how it usually is in real life, the stud marries the gorgeous gal, and you rarely see the nerd with the pretty woman, or the Plain Jane with a stud muffin.  our society is so obsessed with appearance.  still, that aspect of the book irritated me as well.