Review: Really creative, had great potential but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 21, 2014
The grammar errors were so basic I shuddered when I found them and I wasn't an English major.  Have all the proofreaders disappeared with the destruction of the Stone?  Does the author not have a friend or two to read a manuscript before submission?  If this will bother you, skip this book.  The circumstances and characters are creative and vivid.  So sorry that it didn't succeed it spite of the creativity.  But there's still time to edit the manuscript. Unless that happens, I won't continue with the series.  I actually felt embarrassed for the author at times.  Please edit this!