Review: oh my....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 28, 2013
What happened between the intriguing intro that got me to purchase this book, and the writing of the bulk of this story? The intro chapters were interesting. After that it reads like a different author. I wanted to save the intro chapters, then give an editor a machete and let him clear out everything else. Problem is, Amazon doesn't like it when you edit other peoples stories!