Review: a short story with a porno movie feeling.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 5, 2013
I really enjoyed this short story. I wish you would have developed the beginning a little more. I needed more details toward the ending. I loved the story line. My heart skipped a few beats. My jaw dropped too the floor! Go Meka. Lol.  Please turn this into a Novella and clear up a few needed details. Good job.