Review: Captured by the Dark Lord (Dark Lords)
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2014
The story was good, but not great because it was too short. It says it is 125 pages. However the story is only 58% of the book. So not sure if that 125 pages covers all the excerpts for her other books. However even with that said, in this story as in the only other book I read she puts 3 lines of space between each paragraph, so cut those pages down to even more. Also to show she is pulling something over on you, her excerpts only have one line of space between the paragraphs.  I do not really consider her an erotic writer. Her scenes are not very descriptive, and there is usually only one maybe 2 actual sex scenes. The rest of the scenes are more of a quick little tease than sex. With all that said I like her writing though I like more sex in my erotica books, but this story was way too short. Not enough time between the two and it seemed rushed. I just do not understand how we have all these writers that write about 30 - 80 pages and then charge you way too much money for it. First of all that is not enough time to develop anything. I will read ones with 120 - 200 pages, but even those do not have enough time to really develop a good relationship between two people. Anyway if you do not care it is rushed, and you are paying high price for very few pages then go for it. This is basically just Beauty and the Beast told a little different. The possible dream thing was stupid, and easy enough to figure out that wasn't correct. Why I say it was stupid is she never explains how no one remembers that her father was abducted and she went to trade herself for the his release. I do not believe he could use magic outside his little domain. So magically everyone has amnesia and thinks something else happened. Then she mentions that the sister has disappeared, but ends the book with not knowing if she is found. If I have the order right in this series she pops up in the third book “Ensnared by the Dream Lord”.  If I did not realize this was a series and the books were actually all related I would not have been happy with that. It just seemed like it was randomly put in the book for no reason. Not sure if the second book is about her other sister. Do not remember her name and at this point did not care to go back and figure it out.Sex content low/medium