Review: NEEDS A LITTLE HELP
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 11, 2013
There was nothing I found offensive in the book. It was a pleasant way to while away an hour or 2, although it seriously needs a thorough going-over--missed quote marks and grammar like I might have expected from some of Cia Leah's characters in the narrative. However, this doesn't strike me as an extremely well-though-out book. ***SPOILERS AHEAD*** How could Susan have BEEN 2 months pregnant--let alone KNOWN for 2 months she was pregnant--by Christmas if she and Breed had never even seen each other until early November and up until 1 week before Thanksgiving he still hadn't kissed her? Maybe Breed's just not the jealous type, but Cia Leah's time frames left me wondering. Susan also expressed the wish right before Thanksgiving that Breed confide in her. I never saw that it said he did. It seems to me that a very little bit said would have conveyed his confidence in her. All in all, the book is not too bad.