Review: Good story but needs work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 8, 2012
I really loved the idea behind this book but it was lacking in grammar,development and structure. The author needs to sit down with some proof-readers and redo this book. Throughout it the plot was extremely confusing and there were parts that made no sense at all. A good start but no where near ready to be published and read by the populous.