Review: Modest story but poor writing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 3, 2012
The basic premise is pretty decent but this story is let down by poor grammar, structure and polish. This is a classic case of a book that isn't ready for publishing. Give it a few more runs with the editor and you might have the makings of a 4* book. I would have given 2.5* but I didn't think it was bad enough for a 2*.