Review: Please hold the cheese
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2012
I agree with the other reviewer that wrote that this story reads like a 70s porn. And I really think it was written by a guy, because I don't know any woman that would fantasize about the stuff in here.In addition, it was ridiculously short, and even with that there were proofreading errors:"His hands reaches up and caressed by titties..." and line spacing where it shouldn't be.