Review: Well written, the plot had some holes
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2012
I liked this short novel, ok to read one time. Didn't love it though.The characters are likable; a bit too much honey, but I can live with that. No blood or bad guys, I like it.What I found very hard to believe is the ending... if it had ended with the first kiss, I would have given it a four stars. But...SPOILER HERE - skip if you want to read itThe guy proposes before giving her the first kiss... that is just not believable. Not for people around thirty.The second element with coherence issues isSPOILER HERE - skip if you want to read itThe guy has a heavy emotional luggage with his mom dying too young; this woman makes him feel like his mom made his dad feel, and he doesn't run for cover afraid of another death.If you don't mind the rush and can look beyond the coherence issues, it is a nice story to read, fun and lighthearted.