Review: My least favorite in this series
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 10, 2013
I did not like this book. For several reasons.The back and forth between the different POV was confusing. It wasn’t always clear when starting a new section, who was doing the talking. I wish that Eri (the author) would have divided the book differently. I don’t mind all the POV, but I wish she would’ve jumped less between them all the time.There were also a lot more grammatical errors and slip-ups this time with changing of names ect. Normally, I don’t comment on grammar since I know I’m not the very best at it either (English is my second language after all), but this time I felt that the errors were disturbing the flow of the story. I understand that the author has done it all herself, including the editing, but once in a while, it might be a good idea to have someone else proofreading.This time we get a small glimpse of the alpha couple, but also from a new couple from the pack; Thomas and Julia. Julia isn’t from the pack (and I won’t tell her story). I have to admit I did NOT like the way their story unfolded. I wanted to reach out and slap Thomas more than once, and frankly I don’t like him – at all. I found him arrogant, too self-conflicting and ungrateful. He doesn’t want a mate (or the responsibility), but he don’t mind jumping at every chance he gets to have sex with her. At the same time he wants to protect her from harm, he hurts her in the worst possible way, by telling her that she is unwanted, and he would rather be without.So, no. Double Call of Desire wasn’t my favorite book in this series. Far from it.