Review: Not a disaster but pacing needs work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2013
So I read up to the first page of chapter 3 and 40% into the book. I was tempted to suffer through just to give a proper review. But I just couldn't do it. I love the story and could predict where it was going. This story has the potential to get 5 stars but the Author would need to correct the pacing. It felt like Ms. Leigh felt pressure of the page constraints but the great thing about being the author is that you can set your limits. The transition from the present day to the past was choppy to say the least. The interactions between main characters and even side characters isn't endearing to the reader. For an alpha wolf on the prowl Quin feels to be lacking the sexual liquidity a man should have gained in his 95 years. As I mentioned it is the pacing that really throws an ink blot on to this page... all of my complaints can be voided by an editorial overhaul.