Review: No Depth....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
This author should just stop writing books in the MC romance/erotica genre.  She appears to know nothing about the MC world.  Her novels suspend belief to the point of outrageous ridiculousness.  There is no depth to this story or its characters.  We start with Lainey, our h.  She is a 19 year old girl/woman, whatever, who is trapped living as a, well simply put, housekeeper/employee for her step dad.  They live in a trailer in a small town.  Lainey wants to escape this stifling world she lives in so she comes up with a simply brilliant plan.  When the Devil's Due MC comes riding into town she is going to go to them dressed like a street walker and offer herself to them in exchange for them taking her with them.  Like I said, simply brilliant.  She must pay the Devil's due first before she is aloud to ride with them.  Cade, our H, and I use that term very loosely in regards to this gem of a guy, warns her that she does not want to and should not do this.  She says she has no other choice because her step dad is abusing her.  Cade says okay then proceeds to screw her up against the bar wall.  He then goes to the other MC guys and tells them she is cool.  They tell her the price she will pay is to have sex with the MC guys right out in the open while others watch.  Lainey lays herself out on a table as three men fill every orifice of her body while the other MC guys, including our awesome H, watch.  Lainey is loving it.  She has multiple orgasms.  This is the first time she has anal sex and she handled it with ease.  She loved it.  What an awesome h.  You go girl!  She is in.  Cade claims her as his for the time being because she still has to pay her dues and pass the test with the Prez of the MC.  Seriously?  Time for more gratuitous sex.That is the premise and opening act of this, OMG could you please shoot me now, MC book.  It is sad to say that the, wow this sure suspends belief, beginning of this book was actually the best part of the book.  What follows is convoluted and hollow.  There is no character development.  Cade was a cardboard character who was anything but a hero.  He was a wimp.  Girl, if you need saving, do not count on this guy.  He will throw you to the wolves, as he did to Lainey, not once but twice.  Now let's talk about Lainey.  In a nutshell, all she talks about is how horny she is.  She is always wet and clenching her pu**y.  Even when it comes to women.  You go girl!  You're my kind of gal.  What about the MC, you ask?  Can't tell you much.  We are told they are a MC....And I mean PERIOD!  That's it.  Again, no depth.  This book was really just about sex.  That is fine.  I like sex.  Unfortunately I also require a good in depth believable story and likable characters to go along with the sex. This story had neither.  In regards to the story itself ?  If I went into that aspect of the book, this review would be pages and pages long.  There was nothing redeemable, believable, or likable about it.  There were so many holes, contradictions and WTF moments I just wanted to press the delete button on my Kindle.  But, this book was a loaner so I valiantly, yeah I deserve a medal, carried on and finished it.  So, in closing, if you like books about sex with no substance that completely suspend belief, then this book is a winner.  I do not. No, I would not recommend this book.