Review: Nauseating
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 23, 2013
Hawthorn Inn is described as a story about a creepy inn. Hawthorn Inn might have been a cute story if it were not full of the same words that fill all the vampire books and all the other FREE books written specifically to desensitize teen readers and keep them from learning about important things. These FREE first books in the series get teens on a track to read all the books in the series. The authors of these FREE first books in the series seem to be in the same conspiracy because they all excessively use the same words and same persuasive techniques. These book degrade literature.Books for children and teens should be evaluated by brainwashing/psychology experts before they are allowed into print or printing.  Books like this one are degrading our children and our language and they seem to be priming our children to engage in war and debauchery. Is anybody else out there evaluating the trends in teen literature? Hello.What is the reason for the hundreds of passive verbs in this book and in all the FREE books for teens? Are the hundreds of passive verbs in this book supposed to convince vulnerable impressionable young readers to be passive people and therefore easier to control?Why am I concerned about how many times the words in the list below appear in the text? Read on.Bleed/blood – 22 – What happens when teens are desensitized to blood? Hint: Think of gang violence. Causes desensitization to blood.damn – 19 This is a word that degrades high standards of language.dead/death/died – 44  Do we really want these words pounded into the heads of impressionable teens? No. Causes desensitization to death.hit – 22 What happens when this word is pounded into the heads of impressionable teens? Teens become desensitized to violence.hurt - 8 What happens when this word is pounded into the heads of impressionable teens? Teens become desensitized to violence and injury.kill/killed/killing – 26 What happens when the K word is pounded into the heads of impressionable teens? Teens become desensitized to killing.monster – 8 Causes desensitization to scary stuff.Murder/homicide – 3scream/shriek – 8 Causes desensitization to screams and loud noises, which have become constant companions.stupid/idiot – 9 These words lower self-esteem. Self-esteem is required to assert your rights and concerns.suck – 1 Teens become desensitized to vulgarity.vampire – 11 What happens when this word becomes an everyday word?