Review: Too short...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 3, 2013
This was a story that had a l lot of potential to be great. But way too short. I would have loved to see Dane meet his son, Jayden. It could have done wonderfully as a full length novel. It would have been better to see a little groveling from Dane and earning his way back into Charlotte and Jayden 's lives. Throw in a little life saving action and it could have gone a long way to being great. Seriously, my only complaint is that it was too darn short.