Review: read this review BEFORE YOU BUY, please
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2014
i can't say that i hated the promise of the book or the story.  that being said, i didn't care for the writing.  too stilted..amateurish...fluffy.  too much time spent apart rather than together to form a relationship.  yet another female character i did not care for at all.  hell i was rooting for the ex girlfriend hows that.yes i liked the concept of the story just not the attempt at drama.  it was rediculous and the female character....once again.....just pissed me off and i gave up even caring about her.  i actually had given up on forming any appeal for her when they met.  it took forever and ever for them to see each other and then even longer to even get together which caused the book to drag so much i skimmed waiting for them to even have contact with each other.  for a romance to work there has to be contact...i would really have enjoyed skipping the attempt at high drama and settle for low drama.  shock at the news of old girlfriend and daughter, but a united front.  instead another weak runner of a female that honestly seems to be about par for the course these days....AND I AM SO TIRED OF IT.  honestly these weak bitches explain all the manwhores that are all over the place.  these days it seems i'm always rooting for the hero to forget the bitch and resume manwhoring  seriously that is how far and few between good female characters are these days.ok sorry...for a story that had so much potential.....sexy badass mma fighter.....damaged pretty heroine.....instant attraction  it just fell totally flat.  wait for the next one and hope for better.i would totally love to take this book and rework it for overall finished product to give the story the respect it deserves.