Review: ummm...okkkk...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2014
I was very fond of the first book. While there were some errors, I still felt like the storyline was great and could bring potential. But with the second book, I felt like I was reading a bad play. The use of "in the now" point of view would have worked if the author had not of put everyone who was speaking before the sentence. I got to the point where I found myself skipping words, then sentences, then whole pages just to be done with the book. The use of the character's name became overbearing to the point I just didn't want to read the book anymore. The "in the now" point of view just made it much worse. The story could have went well considering the plot line, but the author made the story unbelievable and almost forced to an extent. I look forward to reading the next installment to see if it gets any better. 2 stars