Review: Good Story, Iffy Ending, But Really Needs an Editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 4, 2010
This was a very good story that was very hard to put down.  Using the Baen criteria for science fiction, I found the technology, characters, and situation believable.  I got the Kindle version of this book for under a buck, and I received a heck of a lot more value than a dollar.  The ending left a lot to be desired - it was as if the author suddenly decided he was done and quickly wound it up - it left me and others hanging wanting more: more of a conclusion of what happens to everyone, should we believe there will be a sequel, etc.?I took away one star as this book is in serious need of a proofer / editor.  Many times with the Kindle version there were missing words, incorrect spelling / syntax of words among a few problems.  That's annoying in a novel (and anywhere else) and makes you stop and lose your concentration.