Review: Could have been interesting, but . . .!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2014
this could have been a really interesting story, but it was so poorly edited that whatever inherent interest it had, was overwhelmed.  the time lines were totally mixed [think a plate of spaghetti against a wall] and there were so many misspellings, poor grammar and just rotten editing, that i was very happy when it just ended.  i might have liked to know what happened to the one who survived, but not at the cost of reading any more of this.  as for being scary, i think mother goose has scarier stories.  do not recommend.