Review: Not a bad read but the Angels detract from the story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 17, 2013
The Angels in this story dithering around detracts instead of adding a meaningful part to the story. I liked the story immensely, but really Ariel and Michael come off as insecure, bumbling, and less than successful. They had a decent start but after awhile it was obvious the couple in the story should have figured out the Angels were too interested in their love life. If they are angels seems to me they wouldn't have to ask those questions, they should know. Michael suffers from so much self doubt it's nauseating. And then he gets "promoted". Ditch the Angels and the rest is decent.