Review: The cover was the best part of this.....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2013
Review originally featured on Bookluvrs HavenThis review is going to be short. My frustration from the first novella that I read is at an even higher level with this installment. Either my newly edited version didn't take, or the edit still needs some major work. Grammatical and spelling errors gallore. It's distracting and infuriating. It ruined the story for me.Once again, the cover is stunning. Probably the best part of this book.The references to 'Twilight' were lame. My eyeballs are tired from all the rolling, even for someone that enjoyed reading 'Twilight'. I was looking for a lot more originality.Though I enjoyed Alice's character, Loki was not endearing. His jokes and constant arrogant flirting quickly got old. But I have to say that towards the end of this story, I started to like him, just a teenie weenie bit.I can't say that I detested this installment, but it wasn't all that impressive.I keep hearing from reader friends that the series does get better, so I will keep it going.