Review: Nothing Extraordinary - I Was Disappointed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 16, 2012
The idea of a first-time lesbian encounter is exciting enough, but the story just didn't have any unique flavor. I didn't find myself captivated by the characters or the descriptions of the sexual encounter and had a tough time finishing this short read. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing too distracting - it could use a good proofread. I'm not completely scared away from trying another story by this author though. I have a feeling this was just a mediocre work and will hopefully not be an accurate indication of the author's abilities.