Review: Had so much potential!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2014
I really wanted to enjoy this, and I did for a little while. Soon, all the wrong punctuation, wrong placement of quotations, or lack thereof, and missing words, just really irritated me. It was more me proofreading the book, than actually reading.I really enjoyed the story line, and I think if maybe a little more was added to Rainer it would have been great. I didnt like how on one page, he was this controlling, lets do things my way kind of guy, and on the next page, he said sorry, I will do better, and was just done.Also, Pete really confused me. Hailey was very closed mouthed about her past and really didnt make friends. Pete said he loved her, I just dont see how or why he would he say that. If you are a business partner with someone and they barely talk about themselves, how do you love them? Not only that, but he was in her house when she got back home. Did he have a key to her house? I doubt it. It was made so clear that she didnt get close to people, so why would she give him a key? After he told her that he loved her, he was kind of creepy to me. Saying he was going to fly to Detroit to get her if she wasnt home in how many ever days. Maybe it was just me, but he could have used a lot of work as well. Unless he was supposed to come off as creepy, then he was perfect.It really was a good book, if you look at the potential. I might recommend it if I knew whomever I recommended it to, could look past the grammar and punctuation issues. That was the killer for me.