Review: Good story; Poor writing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 4, 2013
I am giving this book 2 stars because the story has great potential. In the forward, the author states that he knows the grammar and spelling are terrible, and he does not want to hear criticism of that; he just wants us to enjoy the tale. I think this attitude is a mistake. If he took the time and money to have someone knowledgeable edit the book, it might be a 4 star version. This is only the first part of a series, and I am not likely to spend any money on another one.Grammar and spelling do matter, and though he claims he wants to learn and improve, which is admirable, he should give his books away for free is he values them so little.Good luck, Mr. Reeder. You have a good imagination and the potetial to be a good writer.