Review: Poor story, thanks but no thanks
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2011
First of all this story was super short, not well structured and there was almost literally no character development. I get it's a short story but really, most of the erotica short stories I've read on my Kindle lately have at least a hint, but this one has none. Don't waste your money if this one's not free. And if it is? Don't waste your time.***SPOILER ALERT***The fudge thing? Not too bad... UNTIL it got to Mr. Stranger shoving up into certain feminine orifices.... Yeah no...