Review: Interesting story, needs editing and some umph.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
I enjoyed the story, though I felt left out as I didn't know it was part of a series and the author made many references to previous stories. None moved this story forward, so I'm wondering why the author felt compelled to include them.No romance at all, no ghosts, either. The plot was pretty linear, so no major twists. Oh well.Given that this was a previously published book by a known author, I was also quite surprised by the number of typos and grammatical errors. One, forgivable. Two, eyebrow raising. Three, chalk it up to amateurs. Over 10? Just plain sloppy. Add to that weirdly broken lines and other Kindle formatting issues, and it looked thrown together at the last minute.Still, a decent story. Would have been a solid 3-4 stars with better care taken for editing and Kindle formatting.