Review: Cute, but needs editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 24, 2014
My son and I enjoyed the story. It was simple, and the illustrations were cute. My main concerns were the lack of punctuation and editing. (For example, there was a sentence where the word "I" wasn't capitalized.) My sons are just learning to read, and it's important that these very basic elements are modeled in what they're reading.