Review: Different book ...?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 29, 2013
Am I reading the same book as the other reviewers? Because if this story didn't have one of my favorite tropes--"rich billionaire meets average joe, gets his attitude checked, and falls in love"--I probably wouldn't have finished the book.Most of the technical aspects were okay (spelling, grammar, etc), but one of the basic rules of Writing 101 was repeatedly broken: when and where to switch POVs. Typically, not in the middle of a scene, paragraph, or god forbid, sentence. Garrett and Randy swapped more POVs than bodily fluids, which is not the way I like my m/m romances.It's not entirely Church's fault, though; any editor worth their salt should've caught it before the book was published.The fact that I was able to get through it despite the confusion of having to constantly figure out who I was supposed to be following earns Church 3 stars. Although I'm not sure I would've given such a "blah" story a better rating even if the POV errors were fixed.