Review: Good book. Could be great book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 26, 2014
The plot was very good. The story had a good pace and it flowed well. There was plenty of action and conflict to keep driving the story forward and keep it interesting. However, this story needs editing. Bad! Misspelling, left out words, grammar issues etc. Also, the words "hey" and "yea" we're overused in dialogue. speaking of dialogue, it was terrible for the first 15% of the story, after that it was much better, like autor found their stride. The author could use more help in character development. Several of the characters seemed to suffer from multiple personalities and switched from to the other through dialogue. So, it's a good book. kinda upset I paid 4 bucks for it, but I enjoyed the plot abd the read. if the author works harder and gets it edited and into the hands of several good proof readers, it could be a great book. One that could be published by a large company like Roc, Del Ray etc.