Review: Decent Short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 24, 2011
I read this short story while waiting for my kids after school. At first, I was caught into the storyline, but as it got over the halfway mark, I started losing the thin'cohesive-ness' of the story line. When I reached the end, I was more confused, than I thought I would be. Everything built up well, but the whole climatic part left me wallowing in several imaginings of how it could have ended; and it felt as if the story never did. If there was a follow-up piece, I am not aware of it. This is a 2nd of this author's I have read, and enjoyed the shorter other one ('Meet the Madfeets') better.