Review: One of the stars is for good prose
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2012
I'm glad I got this free. After a promising beginning, it rapidly deteriorates into a series of sex scenes. And we're supposed to believe that two normal decent people, within minutes of first seeing each other, are having sex in an elevator. And later, after a night of sex, they are so "in love" they want to get married (incidentally, the point is made that he never intended to marry because he was cynical about love). This author has a way with words, now if she just works on plot maybe she'll come up with a story worth reading. This wasn't it.