Review: Nice try
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2013
It was a nice try. And a good idea. But waaaaayyyyyy too flat and shallow. A sixth grader could have written this story. No depth in the characters OR in the plot. A short story doesn't have to be a lame one. If this author would put an ounce of effort into the story, there would be real potential!There were a couple inconsistencies too. Like she would contradict something a character just said or did. I won't even bore myself with relocating examples. I just felt like the author had short term memory lapses here and there, and would write a detail that would contradict another. Hello?!?!