Review: I should have believed the other 1 star reveiews.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2014
I read the preview and the book had promise.  I looked at the reviews and decided 29 who liked the book vs. 3 who didn't, that I would probably enjoy it.  I should have believed those 1 star reviews.  This books needs EDITING.  I am honestly not that picky and don't freak out by an occasional wrong word, or awkward turn of phrase. But there are sentences that don't make sense and I can't figure out what the author was intending.  When the main characters started talking to each other I couldn't tell who was saying what, even after backtracking and reading it again.  The main characters personalities were both bland and indistinguishable.  I got more information about their backstory from the blurb on the books page than in the book itself, although I assume I would have learned more if I had slogged through more than a 1/4 of the book.  Add that to these supposedly 27/28 year old men are acting like teenagers.  The walking around with a boner line gets old fast.  And I can't figure out why two guys who both have their own rooms/apartment have to have sex in the garden shed & break into a barn.This book is not sexy and it's not hot, and the sex is just awkward.  I honestly feel bad for those who think this is a 5 star book because they are missing out on some great fiction.