Review: I'm not lying! This is one messed up novel!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2013
When it comes to kindle version of books there seems to be a lot of books that lack editing. This book was no exception, in fact, it is probably the worst I've seen. Just horrendous.I'm reading and I will see a random "r" or "t" in a sentence. It's not even that the T or R is separated from a word. No. It just decided to tag along and hang out with the rest of the words on the page with no purpose whatsoever but to make you stop and wonder what it is doing there. You continue reading....next page...then you see the words like "too" which is suppose to be "two."  Oh, but it doesn't stop there! There was also the misplaced and missing quotation marks.Now about the story. I think Onyx said it perfectly " they were involved in some type of sick menage a trois." I was left wondering what the heck I was reading. Shane was literally getting pleasure from both Andrew and Paul at the same time. If it wasn't for all the incidents that happened to Shane I'm sure it would have continued the entire book on some level. I honestly just want to read something else to get it out of my head.Shane is 21 years old and lives in the basement of her house that her Aunt has taken over. She has no one in her life except for her best friend Evan. Then she meets Paul who we are told is 35 and then later 33 who she is instantly attracted to. So many mistakes in this books it unbelievable. Anyway, she then later meets his younger brother Andrew who she is also instantly attracted to.Shane agrees to basically have Andrew's baby while being married to Paul and they both will be able to give her some form of sexual pleasure.Maybe it is me but this book was too unrealistic. First, she has her Aunt and family trying to kill her. Then she has her father's side of family trying to kill her. She ends up in the hospital on 3 separate occasions from incidents that could have killed her.This book did not need two group of people trying to kill Shane. Unless this was a 2 or 3 part series I don't see the point in it. It was just way too much and just not believable that so many people wanted her dead and that she even survived so many times.Shane was also way too forgiving and nonchalant about certain things. I don't understand how she could even care about her family after how they treated her. Then Paul and Andrew she was way to forgiving with all the secrets and lies they hid from her. When she found out who her father was....it was almost not even a big deal to her.Honestly, this book was some type of soap opera. Even her siblings! The sister was with the brothers and the father's all because of money. Then the explanation of why she was still around was just ridiculous. So she was dating her sister's ex's. Then the weird brother. The whole brother/sister thing was just crazy and too far fetched. Everyone was just conveniently around.Shane realized that her family was attempting to murder her. She keeps it a secret! How smart! She basically finds out all these small details and doesn't tell a soul. Who in their right mind would keep something like that a secret when you have at least 5 or 6 people who you can trust? She had the brothers, her father, her friend Jeremiah, and even her lawyer!If there is anything good about this book and why I gave it 2 stars it is because of Paul. I did feel teary eyed about him. I didn't hate any of the characters. I just don't believe this book was edited at all and the writing could have been better. I don't agree with both brothers being in bed with her. I didn't understand why so many people wanted her dead and the sibling thing was too far fetched and unnecessary. Even the little baby thing at the end with Paul....what a miracle!(rolling my eyes)Andrew was interesting and funny a lot of the times. I wish the book focused more on him and Shane. I really didn't like the involvement of all three of them having sex and no one had a problem with it! Also, there was too much of everything going on and some of it just didn't seem realistic.