Review: Wow! Unexpected
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 18, 2014
Ok. Where to begin? An editor was needed. For example, "see" instead of "sea", but I could get over the typos. This author threw everything into this story....virgin, fast love, alpha male, damsel in distress, saving the world from evil, wanting immortality, eluding to werewolves, ridiculously rich, amazing sex...even when the h has a broken leg. I could go on, but the extremely ridiculous and immature fantasy just made me laugh. This 26 year old guy was a billionaire, self-made at that. He did not seem to have any mob connections, but had no issues gutting his enemies like fish. I have to think that this book was written for teenage boys who have delusions of grandeur. They can get the girl, save the girl, save the world, have freaking hot sex with the normally shy girl, but a freak in the bedroom, and did I mention she gets pregnant as soon as they have sex. No one even considered birth control for a 17 year old girl. I can't say anymore. This could have been an amazing story, if written by a Violetta Dubrinski, but it was just too unrealistic. Purchase only if you like unrealistic hot sex, but not if you are looking for a good, well thought out read.