Review: Really odd, immature writing style
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2011
This could have been an OK book, but the lack of proper sentence structure was distracting and the characters weren't developed.  I just finished reading it and couldn't even tell you what most of the characters' names were.Run-on sentences are a pet peeve of mine, so of course the sheer number of them bothered me.  I do understand there are allowances made when people are conversing, but this author seemed to specialize in run-ons that were part question, part statement, yet ended with a question mark.  Definitely confusing and distracting.I couldn't quite get into the supposed attraction between Ethan and the main character (whose name escapes me).  They don't know each other, then all of a sudden there's a "relationship" -- with the girl very dependent on what Ethan tells her to do.I also had a difficult time visualizing what was going on.  I have a pretty good imagination, so I can usually picture a scene as I'm reading it; however, as things jumped from one place/event to another, I couldn't really get a feel for a "look".This reads more like a first draft by a young writer than a finished work.