Review: Nice story, terrible editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2012
This book could have been quite good.  The story line was entertaining, the characters were likable and the book flowed nicely.  However I was only able to give it two stars because the editing was terrible.  Unfortunately, it wasn't an occasional problem.  Every other sentence had an extra word or the tenses were mixed up.  If the author had just read through the book one time after she wrote it I'd have been able to give it a really good rating.  As it is, I wont be reading any more of her books even though I think she's got a good imagination and writes a good story.If you don't mind having to mentally edit a story as you read, you'll like this book.