Review: Short, confusing, basically pointless
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2009
This was a great disappointment. Yes, it was free, at least at the time of this writing, but even free things should reach to a certain standard.The story tells the tale of a group of Sith who crash-land on a mysterious planet. They promptly start fighting against each other while worrying that they might not be rescued or, possibly worse, they might be rescued and have to explain to the uber-boss why they don't have their valuable cargo.With the characters we see in this short story, there's also no one to really root for. There's no real character development, and several of the characters have similar names, which makes keeping track of who's who rather difficult. The action is somewhat confusing and poorly written as well.All in all, this is clearly supposed to be a teaser for a larger work. That's nice and all, but when the larger work comes out, I can just download the free preview text rather than something like this. It's also worth noting that this short story does not make me at all interested in reading the larger work.