Review: A moment of weakness.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 24, 2014
An Amazon freebie I bought in a moment of weakness. I don't regret getting it or reading it, but there's really not much to say about it either.The world building is light and apart from the fact that there are dragons and slavery very little is said. The first person voice narrator isn't strong enough to make it a proper character study either. Nor there is there enough erotica to qualify this as a pwp erotica (not a bad thing at all).One obvious (obvious enough for me to spot it) grammar typo is too much for this short a story. Some of the language didn't sound quite right for the character and had unnecessary repetition in it.