Review: Great stuff and not so great stuff for me
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2012
I started this book, and was blown away with the prologue and first part of chapter one. The descriptions were vivid, and had me amazed. I was excited to really did into this story. I can't complain a whole lot because this was a free book, but even if I'd paid .99 I wouldn't be upset. Anything over that, and I wouldn't have been thrilled. First off, the story, in my opinion, was edited well, as a lot of free books aren't. I didn't notice any glaring mistakes. The author also has a really vivid imagination with painting a picture. Her descriptions are wonderful.The reason I didn't rate this story higher is there was too much description for me. There were pages and pages of her thinking in her head, or going over the same thing. I read another review saying they didn't like the thing with her boyfriend, but I liked that. I understand being with someone, and then just falling out of love. It's heartbreaking because you can think one moment you'll be together forever and then the next you let go of that dream. I liked how she didn't immediately jump in with Blake, but that things progressed more slowly and cautiously. I can't stand people falling in love in 2 days. The story itself, though, got boring for me. They walked and talked a bit, but there just wasn't enough adventure to keep me entertained. I think this is worth a download, and I think a lot of people will enjoy it, especially younger teenagers.