Review: Infantile writing and plot transitions were terrible....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2014
I have a pet peeve with books - if on one page the character says one thing and then the next page (or sentence) contradicts him/herself, and there is no consistency whatsoever, I want to toss the book out.  Unfortunately that would mean tossing my Kindle out as well, so I have to settle for returning the darn thing.I've read this author before and realized, while reading this one, I never finish any of them!  And there is a reason (or more).  The dialogue is practically childish, the characters are in love within seconds and there is no time passage whatsoever before they are are declaring themselves.  I get a character being curious or interested in DD (and other things), there being some sort of conflict that gets everyone all anxious, and some sort of resolution before the HEA, but it was like I read every cliche of every romance genre book all in one with no real thought and no consistency whatsoever.  Characters were all over the place and contradicted themselves constantly.  H was a true disappointment - alpha male swearing on one page he's never leave the h - he deals with issues with DD only to completely do a whiny 180 turn a page or 2 later....then realize his mistake several pages later only to contradict himself a couple paragraphs after that.Totally disappointed, the quality was not there, and won't be purchasing this author again.