Review: ?????
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2014
I gave this a four star rating, not because I enjoyed the book BUT because being the first erotic book this author has published I had to give her kudos for that!! unfortunately though I wouldn't consider this a erotic or bdsm I'd consider it more of a YA vanilla book. some people that read this might think I'm being harsh, I'm not I'm being honest, in fact I was given a copy of this for my honest review. my biggest issue was there was no connection for me w/the characters she "Suzie's character was contradicting for example; she responds to an ad for a "Sub" and she's never even touched herself in a sexual manor? she's  very,very, immature for someone that works with homicide detectives. "brandons" character, well let's just say it just seemed like he wants a door mat!! and his "Dom" behavior is all wrong!! he's not even close to being a Dom, he's, a mental abuser. that's just a few of the reasons why these characters were not connecting. the biggest negative for me was the SEX! it was dull and not descriptive at all. I've read over a hundred erotic/erotica, bdsm, NA books and not just the ones on my kindle fire book shelf, and this book just didn't meet my expectations where the SEX is concerned. it was "Diet Vanilla" for me. in my opinion when you write about romance,SEX, doms,subs, your readers have to feel it through your page's. it absolutely has to be more "descriptive"  "visual" I'm still going to give this author another chance I'm going to read the final books of this series because I realize she is new to this style of writing, and I'm NOT a hater ((; I do hope the n ext books to this series are more to my liking.