Review: Have read better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 25, 2013
I have to say that I was a little disappointed in reading this book. I thought the writing was a little choppy and some what thrown together.Conversations and who was speaking got annoying.I reread a few sentences about 5 times before understand what it was ment to say.Much of the beginning parts dragged on and on. Abby I really didnt like her,actually none of them well except for Sara.I didnt like her at all in the begining just like all the rest but she actually becomes the only character I did like and was not selfish.The mother seemed to only care about Abby what Abby was going through,what Abby was going to do and who Abby was with/dating,her feelings and the fights with Sara she laughed and threatened but never seemed to care really about Sara.And the way they talked in front and to their mother seriously??In all Honesty I read the first 40% or so then started to really get bored and annoyed with it.Im not one to quit a book unless I just cant stand the story,so I pushed on but really just skimmed through the rest till about 85% then the story kinda becomes some what back to a bearable reading level.The "love story" here is just meh and Abby annoyed the heck out of me.Abby was more messed up than her sister who was supposed to be the bad one .. I got tired of the Yo Yo relationship and feelings.Firsts of all its hard to like a book when you cant stand the MC! If it werent for her sister I probably wouldnt have made it as far as I did before skimming.Also the time lines are off .. Slight spoiler but not really..Mother & father divorced,Father remarried which all came about by an affair the dad was having with a "client" that Abby walked in on IN their home.. yeah OK!Anyways they now have 2 kids.. Unless the oldest of these 2 kids is NOT their dads then he is way to old to be their brother or the "client affair" was going on a lot longer than was told in the story.Anyways all in all it was just ok.Of course it has a HEA but it was pretty cheesy actually.