Review: Should be released as an entire novel instead of by chapters
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2014
I'm glad this "series" is available as my monthly freebie with my Amazon Prime. The characters are not well developed. This fact could be because this download was chapters 4 and 5 from the completed novel. The story of Lori and the Bishop Brothers might be better and make more sense if all parts of the "book" were released as one novel rather than "teasers" or "short stories."  I'm going to read the next installment because I am curious to see if the story develops and maybe I'm jumping the gun thinking it is strictly chapters based on sexual tension.