Review: has some good....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 11, 2013
Ashleigh is a widow and the owner of ANT (Ashleigh Nicole Thomas) Communications.  One of her biggest clients is Maxwell, who really enjoys being on stage and performing in front of a crowd.An opportunity crosses Ashleigh's desk that she sees as being something that Maxwell might be interested in. She sets up a meeting to let him know about it and to see if it something that he would like. They both to agree to travel to Vegas in an uncover method to see the venue and such.Maxwell spills the preverbal beans to Ashleigh about him having feelings for her and they both begin explore feelings for each other.Will they ...?  And what about the Ashleigh's employee Lisa, what is happening with her? And is Ashleigh really a widow?  And the ending...My thoughts:This is one of those stories that has some good but mostly bad points to it. I am just going to break it down as gently as possible.The author seemed, at least to this reader, that she was unsure what direction she was going to write the book because one paragraph she used the word "manhood" and that term is used in mainly contemporary romances. Then in the next paragraph she used "cock" and that is word that is used in erotic and erotica books.  That continues on here and there thru out the book with a variety of word.I agree that this book is fictional but does the word PROTECTION mean anything. I mean Ashleigh's deceased husband was a player who had multiple affairs and Max was with who...The dialogue between Ashleigh and Maxwell after they "hooked" up is too cheesy... Babe, love... ugh I could go on... Seems like every blooming time that they communicate back and forth they have to add a term of endearment to the sentence (*face palm moment). Then add some of the sappiness that should provoke other emotions that didn't...The flow of the storyline seemed like it was rushed or missing something information or et cetera... There was some sections that it seemed that the author was trying to force in or add something that done in bad timing.While other areas while in other areas it was ok or good.I really dislike saying anything bad about a book because I know that it takes months for an author to write a book and they pour all that got into writing something but...Reviewed by Beckey**free copy provided for honest review**For more reviews visit weloveking (dot)com