Review: Adults only and HIRE A PROOFREADER
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 2, 2013
This is an adults-only story - some long and graphic sex - but written in a childish way and with so many grammatical errors, some completely incomprehensible."how tragic that scenario would have gone""I've treated you terrible""Stella and Georgina treat Chloe horrible""Though he may be royalty, he shows no signs of regal.""the drive should go smooth.""above the bowl was a pouch looking necklace""The pale of her eyes shifted in an array of colors until two pools of blood red stared at the woman he loved with a deadly vengeance.""with a gnarl of teeth and hot breath""reared in agony and gnarled again"However, although the characters are superficial they still held my interest through a modern retelling of the old fairytale. But I won't buy more from this author as the poor quality of writing is too irritating.Note to author - the preview of the next book due out later this month also shows awful English. How about hiring a proofreader before publication?"were more inclined to live that extravagant""He told me the importance to remember where one came from."