Review: It's NOT a Wrap!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2014
There were a few good stories and a lot of good characters going on in this book, but none of the stories ended! Also, the style of writing that doesn't use indents for paragraph breaks is very disorienting. And what's with all the commas? Were they added for seasoning? Commas in the middle of sentences, commas before the last word in the sentence, commas just willy-nilly for the sake of adding commas! Note to editor, a comma indicates a pause, which is very disruptive when not used properly. If this book had been formatted properly, proper sentence structure adhered to, and the stories had wrapped up, I would have given it a much higher rating. And for what it's worth, I will not buy the next in the series just to find out how these stories ended. That's too akin to blackmail, (comma)