Review: Great story telling; bad editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 25, 2012
Darman has found fertile ground (Parthia)for his exciting story telling.  His character development is first rate and his battle scenes with Sparticus seem to be well researched and plausible. I would recommend Darman to any reader who enjoys this genre.  I found myself going to Google to learn more of Parthia and Parthians.I gave this book a rating of 4 stars because the creativity and good writing by Darman deserves that high a mark.  However, the reviews of Schwebach and Book Lover are right on target (both gave only 3 stars) in that the editing of the Kindle book was about as bad as it could get.  The editing was totally unworthy of the fine work the author put into this novel.With great trepidation I will purchase the next book on Kindle and hope that Darman has found a more reliable editor.But, you, dear fellow readers, will miss a fine yarn if you do not simply try to ignore the editing and enjoy Darman's story telling.