Review: The "Heroine" of this book is TSTL
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 30, 2014
I've read a couple other books by Jasinda Wilder, and I thought I'd give her writing a chance.  What a waste of my time.  I haven't liked any of the stuff I've read and this one is possibly the worst.The first 25% of the Kindle version is spent with Grey painstakingly telling you everything about her life - but I almost stopped reading when she explained how to get from her mother's hospital room to the elevator.  Seriously.A few pages later, she's left for college and about a page later she's in her second year of college.  Then she loses her scholarships (which the author must know nothing about financial aid because it's not even believably written as to why she loses FREE money) and must resort to stripping to pay the bills.  Hmmmmm, okay.  Apparently she's sooo amazing, she does five sets a night and is one of the most popular girls, getting requested for VIP stuff.  YET, at one point in the book, she says "with the extra $1000, I made $1500 tonight!"  Wait - ONLY $1500?  I would think if she's so in demand, she'd be making $1500 every night!And Dawson (stupid name) is so annoying and weak.  Then pair him with whiny Grey and I started skimming dialogue just to see if anything good would happen.Pros-I didn't pay for this bookCons-Weak, whiny characters that are not developed-Boring plot with too much minute detail-No major fallout between the characters (I don't even count Grey "running away" after the two have sex for the first time).  I'd be fine with this, but it makes the story even more boring since there isn't a lot of drama going on.I wouldn't waste your money on this book - it's a major fail.