Review: Great storyline if somewhat poorly researched and written
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 19, 2012
Book 2 of this series has a thoroughly enjoyable storyline of the adventures of Reagan and Connor.The plot however mirrored the plot of Morgan and Nic (the main characters of Book 1) right down to the same errors made by the men in the way they lacked honesty in their relationships with their women, or wives as they turned out to be. This was somewhat frustrating.The other frustrating problem was a complete lack of editing. Had the novel been properly edited, or edited at all, it would have been a more pleasant read. As it is it has large errors due to a lack of research of the era in which the novel is set. There are numerous spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors as well. Spell check is not an editing tool in that it will still recognise a word as correct if it is indeed a word even though it is used in the wrong context. As an example, the novel reads of someone wanting to "horn" their skills instead of "hone" their skills. Furthermore many of the mannerisms and behaviour of the characters were not in keeping with the era in which the story is set.All of that being the case, the novel is an enjoyable read.If this Author reads this review, please have your books proof read and edited. They are good enough to be worthy of the expense of doing so.