Review: Not very well developed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 13, 2013
Yes it's only $.99 but the characters and the situations could still have been better developed.  You need to care about at least one of the characters and I found I didn't care about any.  Just felt disappointed.  I've read many shorter stories that were better written and I know this author can do better. Buyer beware.