Review: Worth the wait
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 20, 2013
Vito and Erin are definitely my favorite characters so there's some bias going on here with my rating. I enjoyed their story though. It was well paced and the relationship progression felt very natural. I adore how Vito adores Erin. I wish the story were longer, but it was a satisfying read. I hope there's more to come though. As for writing, it has improved a lot, but the editing needs a little more work. There were some typo's and grammar/writing issues (contractions and sentence structure). I wish the dialogue offered a bit more variety as well. As far a plot, I think readers will be satisfied. I personally really enjoyed Erin's point of view on what she's been through and how she's dealing instead of running.