Review: I Desire More!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2014
Omg! "What He Desires (Luna #2)" is such an improvement on "For the Night". Not as much sex in this book as the first (kinda disappointed) but that is because it was more about Jocelyn's choice to marry him and the consequences that came from that decision. The few sex scenes, however, were very enticing, sexy, vivid, and well written. There were a few grammar issues, but nothing that can't be fixed easily or that would take the reader out of the scene.This second book in the Luna series definitely shows the growth of Violet Haze as a writer. The writing style of "What she Desires" is so much more fluid than in the previous book, which makes this one seem shorter by comparison (it's a little longer actually). I love all of the constant twists she throws in her novels.It was great that this book focused more on Jocelyn's emotions rather than just the sex--but two weeks...I felt her pain--which helped develop her character more. The dreams were a great way to show her fear and love without just spelling it out. Very creative.Tobias's family is awesome. Very nice touch. Jocelyn's friends stepping in as her surrogate family was great too. I wish I knew more about why Jocelyn has never been in a relationship or never even wanted to sleep with a guy more than once, but I'm sure that'll be addressed in later books. Because of the dreams I thought that possibly she had a great love once and her father disapproved, which caused their falling out...but Jocelyn killed that theory lol. I wish the books were longer (I guess I'm greedy and impatient) but, like Tobias, Violet Haze likes to build anticipation and leave the reader guessing.Definitely recommend this book, more for the romance lovers out there than the erotica enthusiasts, but still a great read overall. READ LUNA #1 FIRST OR ELSE THIS BOOK WONT MAKE SENSE!