Review: Unlikeable character, bad mystery
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2014
The main character was just so rude and unlikeable.  Just unbelievably rude and ungrateful.  It felt like the only reason the guy liked her was because she was attractive, which, frankly, makes it a little difficult to swallow.  And then when she "solves" the mystery (I'm going to try to not give anything away here, but maybe don't read if you want no spoilers at all), the ONE clue she has is anything but definitive and could just as easily point to another character or actually to herself! If anything, she actually makes the most sense as the "villain" because she's connected to both crimes and they happen right after she comes back into town.  The solving of the mystery just had me COMPLETELY rolling my eyes. So I didn't believe their romance and I couldn't swallow the mystery. That said, the writing itself is ok and is at least grammatically correct and everything. It is just the plot that falls down.