Review: Needs work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2014
Falls short of dreadful, but not by much. The meat of the story has potential but delivery is just bad. Short, choppy sentences, back and forth between first and third person, missing punctuation were just a few things that drove down the star rating. The characters were one dimensional and the bedroom scene was almost laughable. The whole thing felt too much like a rough draft for a school project.To end on a positive note, these women would have had to have a great deal of courage to pick up and travel to the middle of nowhere and marry a stranger.