Review: Flawed editing, Flawed presentation
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2012
Flawed editing:  Throughout the story singular scenes of an individual were turned to plural.  Wondered if English was the writers second language.Flawed presentation:  The storey would proceed thru an action scene, then segue to a previous time.  The way this was done, interfered with the presentation.  I wanted to get thru the crap and return to the story.  Sometimes it was pages of junk back story to either wade thru or skip.  Other than this and a poor climax, generally,I enjoyed the book.