Review: Okay But Too Lacking in Detail
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2013
I liked the emotional journey Natasha experiences, and the content was okay, the masturbating in the beginning was kind of hot, but overall, it was not really all that erotic or spicy. And that's coming from someone who loves spanking. I don't mind short stories, but I still like to be yanked into the created world, however briefly, or to feel something, anything, whether it's the chemistry between two people or titillation within the scene or identification with the main character or heat for myself, and that just didn't happen. Maybe because there wasn't much info given about Hugh, show-wise. Who is this guy, what's he like? In this, he's like a loosely drawn sketch or a movie extra. It was very telly and there wasn't anything between the pair to make it exciting to me as a reader. Everything was too rushed and under-described. The brevity didn't allow for breadth or sparks within the work. If there had been a little more personality or flirty banter, it might have worked better for me, but as is, it was way too sparse.