Review: Reader Alert!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2014
This may have been a good story if it had been written by someone that had even a modicum command of the English language.  I got a headache trying to discipher the run own sentences, misspelled words, improper usage of past and present tense, and the list goes on.  These errors were so distracting that the storyline, or in this case, the lack of one, got lost in the translation.  I would hope that this author would invest some time with a dictionary and a thesaurus before attempting her hand at the craft of writing, for anyone's pleasure, besides her own.The above being said, I would also like to add that the synopsis was the best part of this convoluted non sequential tale.  Soooo, read the synopsis and do not make the mistake of using any of your hard earned coins to purchase this rendering.