Review: Needs a lot of work
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 25, 2013
A lot of things are wrong with this book.  For one, there are a lot of obvious grammar mistakes that would have been eliminated if someone took the time to proofread it. There are missing quotes, incorrect punctuation and missing words. Also sentences are jumbled together and at times it is unclear who the speaker is.Another problem I have is with the story itself.  SPOILERS. The main character is an idiot. Among other things she stays with the cheating and abusive "hero" and allows herself to be treated by crap by others as well. The hero has sex with other people while they are together. The hero told her that he had to screw, in his words, a "hog" (which he received an award for) because it was expected of him by his fraternity brothers. He seems unable to keep it in his pants.  The heroines theory is that he has low self esteem and screwing is one of the things he is good at, that makes him feel better.  Cry me a river.  The hero according to the heroine, forces her to have an abortion when he gets her pregnant. Also he gets mad at her and ends up seriously hurting her on two separate occasions, including running her over with a car.  But those were just mistakes. She breaks up with him for a minute but then cannot help herself and goes back to being with him.  Her roommate lies to her, treats her poorly and lets frat boys stand in line to screw her and yet the heroine is willing to hang out with her. In my opinion the person who has the most issues with low self esteem is the heroine.  I think we are suppose to feel sorry for her because she is a nice person and people treat her so poorly. Unfortunately I didn't.  She just irritated me.  The only thing good about the book besides being free is that it was a short and eventually I finshed reading it.