Review: Not so hot writing, awesome story.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 17, 2013
First the bad, then the good.The bad: The writing wasn't great. It was skeletal, missing a lot of important bridgework between scenes and actions. The characters weren't nearly as fleshed out as they could be, and the grammar was a bit stilted in places.The good: the characters were, in fact, awesome, and the story was very well thought out. I liked the premise and the plot and the ending was awesome (Childs'  comment had me rolling.) Assuming that the writer will get better with time, definitely looking forward to more of this.Basically, while this has flaws it's still really good and future stuff from this author is likely to improve at a steady rate.