Review: Improved
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 6, 2014
Still a lot of silliness, but the writing has improved.  "Past" and "passed" seem to be a grammatical challenge for this author.  Several misused words, but improved from the first book.  Had I not bought them at the same time, I'm sure I would have given up on any additional books by this author.