Review: Didn't love the writing style
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 6, 2014
The characters were likable and interesting. There definitely should be more female firefighters in stories. I liked the byplay between Nike and Mya. The storyline overall was fine. I am personally not a fan of works in first person from multiple points of view because I think it is incredibly difficult to pull it off effectively. In this case, I thought that Michel's portions were not different enough in tone from Nike's. Overall, I think the writing could have been tighter and less in the characters' heads.