Review: Lost me.  Had high hopes...someone to Watch but not this one...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2013
The voice vs. THE FORMULA.  Sometimes I feel bad writing a review for a book I didn't like.  Well, I didn't like this one.  Dull.  Boring.  Typical.  Actually, if I were honest, story lost me on the plane.  What was all that about?  Hasn't writer ever been on a plane?  Wasted words could have been put to better use with Hero or reunion--anything but where they were frittered. It only takes one sentence to establish a relationship and character personalities.  HERE IS WHAT I MEAN, not great example, but..IE: ...and sitting at window seat was her friend who had insisted she have a view of the plane's wing..  Leads reader to:  Heroine's with friend, friend might be amusing, she's not going alone to reunion...etc.  The reason for example-- because the book was windy...on and on...CUT Down on windy waste and put those words into real purpose of story.  Hero and Heroine.Had high hopes.  Read and read, felt like I was reading forever.  Couldn't finish. Thank you for being free. I'll be watching this writer to see when and if she finds HER voice (Because she can't be this dull)  and writes what she wants, incorporating it INTO the FORMULA.Someone to watch.