Review: So stupid
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2014
How am I to like stupid.I'm so sorry but you have to be joking.  It started out good but then you put in to much stupid and make it unbelievable.Where do I start on the stupid.Let's start with her.She is so stupid, she doesn't tell the truth, nothing but lies.  If she would of spoke up just once the ending would not of happen.He tells her, her dad killed her mom.  All she does is yell and yell, this is when in real life she would of said no and told him.She doesn't speak up and tell them Ryan almost blew up in her car do he did not do it.  No she gets and runs away.She doesn't speak up and tell her dad that Ryan wasn't the one who beat her and tore her clothes.  But this is where I yell b.s.  the first thing she would of told her dad that the man who raped and killed her mom,his wife, was right inside.  Or that he was the one who took her and was going to rape and kill her. But no, she just forgets to tell him.Her car just blew up, she can't leave because she has to finish the semester or wouldn't get credit.  Seriously, do you know how to write anything other than stupid.Now let's talk stupid with him.If she was his women and the person who blew up her, taken her, tried to rape her and hit her, he would not of shot him in the knee.  Not to mention she just told him he killed her mom.  The man who be shot in the head, he would be dead.  You do not mess with the old lady or property and live.You kept the bad guy alive so minutes later he comes out and admits to killing her mom to every one.  But what happens, does some one shoot him, no.  He manages to kill her dad by stabbing him, and is this where some one from her club shoots and kills him?  No.  Time goes by for her to run to her dad and talk to him, for others to pull out there phones to call 911 but no one does anything to the man who just killed your pres?  Oh no, but the stupid gets better.So, now her dad is dad and now the killer has a gun and is going to shoot her.  And still no one from her club is there to shoot the guy.  Apparently, no one from her club cares that the pres is dead and that he killed the pres wife.  The same men who blew up a club house with people in it, you want us to believe none of them would just shoot the guy right then and there.  You did write that the family would die for each other but they apparently who kill.This is what makes the story stupid and unbelievable.  But I'm not done.So his dad runs in and takes the bullet for her.  Wait, did I forget to mention, her mom was his dad love of his life?  So please forgive me but if some one just announce he killed the love of your life, you do nothing.  What was he just standing there watching him stab another man and you want us to believe he didn't even attack the guy?  Shoot him, stab him or even hit him?  No you write the guy did nothing.Other things, her daddy hitting her and telling her she is going to watch as he kills him.His dad, the pres doesn't do anything when his brother undermines him and attack his son, the go.  Oh and the brother can vote out the vice pres, kick him out of the club, say to burn off his tat with out the pres or even take a vote?  Did you even learn about the mc world before you started to write this junk.So both dad were enemies but you write they die as friends.Now where I stopped because it was to much stupid, it didn't deserve to waste my time to finish the last couple of pages.If you are fine with reading stupid and don't care that this is so unbelievable, who am I kidding, I still can't recommend it.  99 cents not worth.  Change the stupid and it would be a good book.