Review: More depth and length needed it felt choppy
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2012
I liked the idea of the story but it felt choppy. One scene was Skye's p.o.v then Shaun then hers back to his without much flow. I understand hormones do silly things but she allowed this stranger into her life and apartment way too quick. I would have liked a bit more development and tension between them. Also both sides of the family seemed to accept things very quickly without question. Not that I needed to see feuding family members but a snotty sister or irritated cousin somewhere to add to actual tension would be nice. Finally started to see a growth in the dynamic and poof the story ended. More length and depth could really make this story shine. Will try another title from this author. The spanking/sex scenes were hot enough but needs more focus on the rest.