Review: a good long read. but seriously, you need an editor!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 1, 2013
A good, long read, but seriously, you need an editor!  The story line is really good, a good strong heroine and hero! A little distracting reading in present tense, took almost half the book to get use to it. It is third grade knowledge to know the difference between "then" and "than".  As an example of what it should be;  greater "than", as a comparison.  How about,  "Then", there was you. The whole story has them reversed! Also, commas, they are your friends.