Review: Hard to follow
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2013
The story was poorly written, a little scatter brained. It took a while to get into the tempo of the authors writing style, so that you could read the story without confusion. Once you did that, the story flowed better. I gave it 3 stars because the writing and character development could use a lot of work. It seems almost as if the author did not wish to disclose the characters race, but figured out almost 3/4 into the story that it may be a part of the plot. I found that a bit odd. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the plot. If it was written and edited better, it would be a 4 or 5 star read for a romance in my opinion. In the end, I am glad I fought through the book, but I definitely could not reread it. Hopefully it will be edited and redistributed. If the writing style is improved, I also wouldn't mind a follow up of the characters Winston, Mitch, Dionne and Tesanee.