Review: interesting but errors are distracting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 10, 2013
The plot to the stories are interesting - they'll keep you reading but sometimes just out of frustration so you can find out where the thread ends. The thing is some of them feel contrived, like the author couldn't find a way to end the story so copied another. They all end pretty much the same way. You can tell the later chapters were written to remedy the missing information from the main story.There are so many grammatical and punctuation errors, however, that it's distracting at times. The writer has talent but needs serious help in manuscript preparation.