Review: good story but needs editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 22, 2013
I enjoyed the characters and the pacing of this book. My biggest issue is that it appears no one even read it through before publishing it online!  It would just take one read through by someone who pays attention and it would be an easier read. There are too many instances of extra words, making the reader stop and figure out the meaning.  Please do some grammatical editing.