Review: Pretty good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2014
For a first attempt at writing this author has created a good story. The characters and the ranch are interesting. There is humour that does not feel forced and lots more yet to tell. What I am not crazy about is at times the main characters dialogue is overly sweet. I encourage the author to keep on with this storyline. I will read the next one. Good luck.