Review: dialogue?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2013
I was enthralled by what the story should have brought forth, but the lack of dialogue left me unconnected with the characters. So much time was spent explaining certain topics numerous times as if it were a new book every other paragraph, that I struggled to bond. I wanted to bond, I really did.<insert sad book face here>This has the makings of greatness and I hope the future editions I've purchased will give me the severely lacking dialog so I can connect better. Explanations can be made about ones character and actions but without speaking, I'm at a total loss of grasping and escaping into who they really are.Note: Numerous times dialog started between the main character and a teacher for instance, and then abruptly ceased in the middle of the conversation to go into explanation and the next description.