Review: Dark Short Story 'but could've been more'
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2013
I enjoyed this read, however there are a few things I would've like to see happen in this book... Wished it was longer, I really enjoyed the dark side to this book but didn't enjoy how the female character keep elaborating on how the beast was kissing 'if you could call it that' & fondling her, how it's cock wasn't going to fit and so on. This book could've been a five star for me if the story had more explanation of the plot. Like why was it her the beast must have and why did he want/wait on her, what did he do while he waited on her to come back to him. Just more details of the plot and more info on the characters in the story would have been a great thing. The dark sides to your story is what kept my interest peaked & hoping that it was going to take me deeper into the plot but was disappointed on that end. I understand that he's a beast and thinking may not be his strong suit but he knew that he wanted to breed her and that she was his, so there is more there than just a beast in need of procreating & marking her as his. I do hope the author chooses to write a sequel to this book and be more in depth with the story! Thanks, Brenda