Review: Had a hard time connecting with this story - contains spoilers
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2013
This review can be found at The Armchair Reader.The first thing I want to say is if you're coming into this book thinking it would be a real sports story, you won't get what you expect in this one because it follows Nicco through his journey to finding love in Parker but doesn't contain many scenes regarding the actual sport.I liked Parker because he was so innocent, naive and vulnerable. He comes from money but he's not an obnoxious spoiled brat. He's very sweet, dedicated to soccer and just wants a simple life where he can be himself. I adored the fact that he blushed so much at the littlest provocative comment. I found it so cute. Nicco is a different story. I won't lie, I didn't like him at all. He's arrogant, stubborn and doesn't give a crap about anyone else but himself. He does what he wants to and won't care if someone objects to it. His reaction to Parker is instantaneous and intense. The lust he feels for Parker consumes him to the point he can't stop thinking about Parker. However, Nicco is a sex addict and he'll take that lust out on anyone.The biggest issue I had with this story is that the blurb is very misleading. Coming into this book, I was expecting some intense sexual tension of enemies with a lot of sports related scenes, showing the rivalry between Nicco and Parker, the aggression and face offs for the same spot and ultimately the soccer season that they play together in. Unfortunately, that is not what this book is about and you don't actually see any of those scenes but are told about them in just a few short paragraphs throughout the story.To be honest, I didn't like a majority of it because it is so focused on showing Nicco's sex addiction (which is not mentioned in the blurb and considering it is SUCH a huge part of the book, I have to wonder why). I struggled to get through at least the first half of the story because Nicco would do anything that had two legs, even indulging in threesomes and orgies with women and men. I will say that while Nicco does have a lot of sex, thankfully most of it (especially with the women) were either glossed over or fade to black. Even with that, however, the constant talking about his conquests and how many he did last night, the orgies he partook in, the soft flesh of so and so grew extremely aggravating and annoying. I kept asking myself, "Why is this in here? Shouldn't we be focusing on more of Parker and Nicco?"A lot of the book revolves around that aspect of Nicco and I can't say that it endeared me to him. It made my opinion that he was selfish and couldn't understand the concept of monogamy nor be able to uphold it even more intense. It also made me think that even if he did get into a relationship with Parker, that he wouldn't be able to keep it in his pants long enough to not break Parker's heart. Regardless, the physical showing of Nicco's clubbing and conquests took away from the actual Parker/Nicco story, IMO. By the end of the story, we are told and somewhat see the love and supposed devotion (as I said, it's hard for me to believe Nicco won't cheat eventually) but we didn't see the lead up to this love and devotion. Out of the whole story, Parker and Nicco only spend maybe a third of it actually together that we see. The rest is either told to us (such as the time they spend on the field, their teamwork together and this long vacation they took) or of Nicco and Parker getting some action from other individuals.Personally, that is not something I'm fond of. I like to SEE the development between characters but this book didn't have any of that until the very end and I found that disappointing. I wanted to like this book but it started off really bad for me because I don't appreciate seeing to this extent how much of a whore a character is. I want to see the connection between the main characters not between ONE main character and other people. We aren't shown the connection between Nicco and Parker until very far into the book and at that point, many months have already past between them, none of them where we see them together and this happens more than once where weeks or months pass without us seeing any of what I believe were crucial moments to these characters relationship. More than anything, I really wished we had seen them play together on the field, during practice, at a game, anything to show that not all these boys have is lust because the emotions of love they share, I didn't see and couldn't FEEL.In the end, I will freely admit this isn't the type of story I like. I prefer to have stories that focus on the emotions that characters share and seeing them NOT on the physical releases of the flesh. Readers that enjoy books that have layers of sex and decadence will enjoy this but if you're looking for a story about sports and love, this won't exactly fit the bill. I will say that while I didn't enjoy the story as a whole, there were pieces that I adored but those happened at the very end and by then, not enough was focused on that to lift my overall opinion. Still, I encourage readers to make up your own mind about this one because I know others will enjoy it much more than I did.One last thing I want to say is that this book seems to be somewhat of a spin-off of another m/f series by this author. I say this because a few times it was hinted that we should already know a side character's background and having looked up the author after reading this book, I can say that some of the secondary characters have books of their own in other works by this author.