Review: Good but Not the Best
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2013
The story continues that started in Existence, but now the game has changed. Yes, Pagan chose Dank but now she has to fall in love with him all over again. Her soulmate has come back into her life. Jay was meant for her. The powers that be want to see if she really loves Dank enough to let Jay go without having the memories of Dank, Leif, or Gee. Dank has to start over in winning her love.I cannot stress this enough. Do not read this book until you have read the others in the series. It is important as nothing will make sense if you don't. Okay, that being said...This story was hard to get into only because in my mind Pagan was in love with Dank and now suddenly she isn't. The truth is that I didn't like this one as much as the others, but don't get me wrong. It was still a great read as more about the characters were revealed. Leif shows up for a bit, making trouble of course. When does he not, though I still like him for some reason.As I said, the story was good and the characters got deeper. There is a lot more sex in the book now that Pagan and her best friend are eighteen. Instead of sexual tension, they are graphic. Understand that by graphic, I do not mean explicit. By most standards, this book was still very clean. I just want readers to know that it is more present in this book as is the swearing. F-bombs are dropped quite often compared to the other books.Now, most books I get as ARCs and such which means I don't mention editing and formatting. I purchased this one, so I have to comment. The editing is not done well at all. I found the wrong names used, incorrect punctuation used, and the formatting was bad. I understand that when converting to ebook, things can happen, but these were beyond that. It distracted from the story way too often.I have to point out something that I have not in the other books and am kicking myself for it. The lyrics written in the book are beautiful. I wish I could hear the music that accompanies them. The author is real talented in that area, and I enjoyed reading it.If you've read the other books, you have to read this one and see how the story ends.Note: I purchased this book with my own funds with no expectation of a positive review.