Review: I would read the sequel
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2011
My biggest complaint would be the typos.  They were frequent enough to interrupt the flow for me at times.  I thought Abraham's character could have been fleshed out more.  He was one-dimensional at best and, considering his age, he could have been much more interesting.  I also would have liked more explanation as to why Thereon chose her.  It was sort of glossed over which isn't very realistic.  For a vampire his age, what he liked in Two he could have liked in many others.  I also noticed a contradiction where Thereon says the name of a character, and then in the next page he claims he doesn't know her name.Other than that, I was pretty engaged until about the last 85-90% where it became extremely slow.  I felt like the plot was stretched out at this point merely to fill pages.  It was a little plot surrounded by a LOT of uninteresting filler.  For that, I downgraded it from 4 stars to 3 stars.  Either way, for a free book, it definitely didn't feel like a waste of time. Things could potentially get really interesting for this trilogy.