Review: Once again juvenile writing that defies intellect
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2013
I can't understand how this series continues to rate 5 star reviews its characters are so flat and fall apart so easily.Take the actions once the group is inside the bunker. A known military man who has run a guerrilla campaign allows traitors to be armed with them. Then surrenders his own weapons before them, the other humans have time to organize and plan without giving away arms yet Cain's team already has surrendered before Adam even gets back.Then once they exit the know traitors willingly give up their arms trusting a race and person they have never met to uphold their agreements? WTF This is really how the author sees special forces military men and no other readers have a problem with it. I can't begin to explain the number of holes I find in the story and how the author ties his own timelines and characters in knots to make situations he can get them out of. The stories are not organic and seem to lack everything I expect out of a great book.I read this because I was able to get it free and had a plane ride to finish but I would never pay for the story and nothing else is at hand.