Review: Good Story.....needs a little finesse.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 5, 2014
It's a pretty good story.  The writing is a little jumbled at times. If you power through it, you get the gist of it.  The story throws together a pack of different supernaturals working on the same goals.  Human acceptance, and a chance to integrate into human society to prolong their existence.  It's a good concept, and the characters are likeable and fun.  The intricacies of the magic, the contract, and the reincarnations can be frustratingly confusing and inept.  This is why I couldn't give it a 4 star rating.  The scenes involving the contract was exceedingly irritating. What, all of a sudden this park ranger is a lawyer speaking legal jargon?  What made her qualified?  Reading the heroin discuss the contract felt like I was really reading a legal document myself.  It got to the point I was wondering if the author was trying to convince us of the heroin's intelligence or her own personal intelligence.  It is worth a read.  And I will be reading the next installment involving the lovable gargoyle Lincoln.  Hopefully some of these issues I've mentioned will have been ironed out.