Review: No storyline
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
~~I received a free ARC in exhchange for an honest review~~This is the first book that I have read by Missy Johnson, I am not sure if it will be the last. The storyline was not clear. It took until almost the end of the book to figure out what the story line was all about. Once that was figured out, the story moved right along, but like I said, this was at the end of the book when we figured out what was going on. Other than that, it was how hot Mace is and how wonderful Leeta is in bed.There were also entire paragraphs that were repeated one right after another. I understand that she is from Austrailia, and that words mean different things between two different countries, and maybe that is it, but there were sentences that didn't make sense because of the wording. I had to go back and re-read paragraphs to use context clue to figure out what the word meant, or if I could put my own word in there.If you have read any of my reveiws before, I do not sugar coat anything, I give it to you straight, and I don't hold back. That being said, I feel that this book is lacking any real story line, and the grammer and lack of editing really hurt the number of stars that I give it.