Review: Very Well Written Tale
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2012
I had the pleasure of reading this short story today, and I loved the detail. I found the beginning a bit hard to get into- I didn't care much for how shallow the best friend was, but once the girls arrived at their destination I became hooked. The friend turned attentive (i.e. not minding leaving the hot guys when her friend didn't feel well) and the pace of the story picked up. The love interest was well-developed, not rushed. She doesn't tumble headfirst into bed like some flaky characters do, and she was merely looking for The One. Most women, young and old, can relate to that search. I would personally like to see a bit more depth given to the characters, but as this was a short story I can certainly understand the author not doing so immediately. I will definitely be picking up more from this author.