Review: Terrible
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 29, 2013
This might be the worst book I've ever read. Just awful, seriously. You can tell it is going to be bad very early on. 'She lay naked under the gaze of her loving husband' 'He wanted to touch, feel, and give her his wanton love' 'His thoughts were kind, pleasant and loving'. First. Page. There is no fixing this tripe. The author doesn't need an editor he needs to take some creative writing classes. Sorry this is so harsh but he has to learn some better writing techniques, especially the basics like 'Tell, don't show'. I honestly cannot understand how anyone, other than a 12-year old boy, would ever give this five stars. I do respect the fact that the author finished a book and published it, clearly  he has the drive (many people never even get this far). Now he just needs to get some skills.