Review: Good Writing -Weak Plot
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2014
This is a well written and edited short story; and it is short. The difficulty I had with this written work is that it's entirely predictable. The second one reads the title and the first few paragraphs where the protagonist presents his complaints, you know exactly what's going to occur. Would like to see this author-editor tandem put together another story with less predictability.