Review: Unfortunate Lack of plot ..
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 31, 2013
It is very unfortunate that the author could not produce a more interesting plot. She certainly has the skills and knowledge of literature which she continued to display within the story. However, after reading the first book of this series the author spent the first eight chapters in one scene making the protagonists climax more than eight times (on my last count). This was the characters introduction and need I say, Jasmine's first time. The story certainly has potential, a good idea on the plot, but after twenty-two chapter the author still had not moved beyond a two day period nor out of the same scene and I believe the book is thirty something chapters long. This story is not a shirt novella it is the full length story.We all love a good passionate story with displays of passionate scenes and details. However, the book did lack some editing and the story could have benefited from a strong plot with more elaboration on the story's back ground and change in scenery and characters. I was not enticed to keep reading nor move on to another story of this trilogy for fear of continued lack of a stimulating story.