Review: Wow
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2013
First off, there is a bit of the Daddy kink going on here and, while that's totally not my thing, it was actually well done. And it had a point.So, Danny's father is a compulsive gambler; has been for as long as Danny can remember. And Danny grew up fast after his mother left them, having to pay the bills, lie to their creditors, and try to reign in his pathetic father. Now, just turned eighteen, Danny can't bear the thought of his dad getting killed over the $12,000 debt he owns to a skeazy casino. But the casino manager agrees to take Danny, for one month, in exchange for the $12k, and Danny finds himself turned over to the casino's owner, Peter Archer.Once I got past the squick of the age play, it was actually pretty hot. Gamble Everything managed to hit all the buttons - forced chastity (poor Danny, now Daniel, spends nearly every hour of his month in chastity), sounding, caning, enemas, anal plugs, dubious consent...the works. All told from Daniel's point of view, the author does a great job of showing us what Daniel is experiencing instead of just telling us. Excellent, erotic descriptions, as well as showing us Daniel's feelings and delving into how this is messing with his thoughts and emotions. Really well-written for this kind of work, despite the noticeable editing errors.This is kink, but really GOOD kink. A steal at $3.99.