Review: Fun and Flirty
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2013
This was a sweet short story.It tells the tale of Hanna and Rachel 24yr old twins fresh out of college and starting the next chapter in their lives. I liked the girls immediately, Hanna was the free, outspoken one whereas Rachel was more reserved and quiet.I liked that it was set in the Hollywood Hills and it was quite cool imagining the parties and clubs the girls went to. This story focused on Rachel and the up and coming Hollywood actor Kyle.As the story was only 60 odd pages, it's difficult to capture a relationship in that time, therefore Rachel felt herself falling for Kyle almost immediately after the first date. I'm not saying that doesn't happen but for me I would have liked to see the slow progression of their relationship.I liked this book and will certainly read on (the author plans to release a new novella in the series every month) The only thing I felt when reading was the language at times felt a bit formal. Nothing major but enough for me to notice, a lot of did not and could not instead of abbreviating it and I sometimes felt it stilted the flow of the dialogue.This was a fun, flirty short story. ~Ava