Review: Interesting mix of suspense, romance, and paranormal
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2011
Kris is a successful video editor in Charleston, South Carolina with two best friends she's made her own family with.  She has a beautiful beach house and a loving fluffy cat named Pegasus.  She also just so happens to be precognitive.  Her visions have never been about herself until she starts sensing that she is being watched, receiving late night phone calls, and finding flowers left at her house and on her car.  Increasingly, she realizes she is in danger, and right then her old college flame moves in next door.Kris is a relatable heroine without going over the top.  She's no quivering violet, but also no Buffy the Vampire Slayer.  Similarly, her love interest is kind and handsome without being sparkly and perfect.  The plot is entertaining and modern.  It keeps the reader guessing without forcing any characters to act stupid.All of that said, Grace shows promise as a writer, but she still needs to work on her craft.  Her plot structure is excellent, but she frequently shows instead of tells.  Similarly, she struggles a bit when first introducing a character, often falling back on the beginner writer's method of explaining hair and eye color before anything else.  Similarly, the book needs more editing for simple grammar, spelling, and typos.Overall, this is an interesting mix of suspense, romance, and paranormal that keeps the reader guessing and interested and shows promise in the writer.