Review: It could read better ...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2013
I usually have great luck with Joyee Flynn's work, but this was a definite miss for me. Everything was great for me, except the most important part of any story: the writing. It was stilted and forced, making the characters come across as flat, one-dimensional caricatures. This one needed a good editor to make the writing flow more smoothly.Better luck next time.