Review: Editing, editing, editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2013
I admit that I am a bit of a grammar snob, but I try to overlook that when reading books by independent authors. However, there were way too many mistakes here for me to overlook. A word is never made plural by adding an apostrophe and s, "you're" was mistakenly "your" 95% of the time, and some words were so misspelled that I had to try to figure out what the heck the author meant. It was like reading something written by a middle school student. It had potential, but it needs serious editing to fix it.On to the story - I felt like Brody was two different people. Sometimes he was dominant to the point of being mean, and I didn't see the point of that. It was like he started out one way and then the author decided to go all 50 Shades on the reader, and I didn't really feel like it worked. I am not trying to be rude here, this is just my opinion. I won't be buying the second book.