Review: Good start
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 8, 2014
So glad she gave this away for free. Not that 99c is a lot of money, but it was really really short...like sample short. My rating has nothing to do with length, I knew how long it was when I started, my low stars are hopefully explained in the next few sentences.  This definitely needs more development, which I'm sure will done in the next ones. At this point I feel like there was no real depth into any character introduced, but lots of 'action', I'm just feeling like it was way to rushed. Now if this wasn't published as is, if it was done with the entire story I may not feel this way....maybe. I see she's released all of the stories as one book and also edited it so it would flow better. I'm considering getting it. Just to see if she's fixed any issues I had or if they are read together it works better.