Review: Not good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 23, 2013
The plot was good but the execution, oh boy!  A few things that made me question the age of the author and whether someone actually read this book before it got the nod...(Spoiler alert maybe..) a detective responds to a call out for vandalism of a vehicle.  He had no idea who the perpetrator was and therefore had no reason to be there except the author needed to introduce him to the case.  Surely a uniformed officer could have read the note realized it was important, handed it in as evidence and this way introduce Ty(detective) to the case which would have made it a little more realistic.  Then we get to the serial killer and it just gets worse.  All the evidence points to Brodie being stalked by a serial killer yet there is no protection given to her by either her brother, best friend or even the police.  Makes no sense at all.  I'm one of many who don't really care for insta love in romances and this one really takes the cake.  Kyle meets Ryan for the first time during a night out at a club with Trace and there's insta lust.  By morning it is uproot the life that you have in another city and move in with me as I can't live without you kinda love!  It's as if the author didn't have the patience or the inclination to work Ryan into the story so that the characters could get to know one another and then fall in love.  It's not as if the author ran out of pages to work with as the story ended at 93% yet again on my kindle with the rest of the pages dedicated to upcoming books.  Having said this I really liked all the characters but feel they would have fared better with a more skilled author.