Review: lost sight of the story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2014
as the second book in the series I was hoping for more.  I liked the first one and it set the stage for a great series then this was released.  I was actually fine until Asa cried for an entire chapter.  I tried to place it as a 16 year old having trouble with dealing...  But the first book had him grow up! he had to adapt and harden himself.  Honestly it is like the rest of the characters are developing but Asa is regressing.The most interesting parts like the final challenge or wing-game feel rushed and disjointed.  While the emotional struggle (that shouldn't be here at this point) was dragged out foooorrrrreeeeeevvvvvveeeeerrrrrr.*Spoiler*Instead of Asa trying to either be a Man and try to stick it out with his girlfriend or dump he with the idea that he his 16 and wants to play the field.  He dumps her because he is too scared.  Then starts a relationship with a younger girl that never develops.Over all I was really disappointed in the book as a second in a series.