Review: Where do I start?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 3, 2014
On a positive note, the plot was original and creative and the characters were interesting. I'm not usually so picky about the lack of editing if it's an entertaining and engaging story. I must make an exception here. If nothing else, please have a few friends proof read and make corrections. Spelling, grammar and sentence structure errors were so prolific that I found it very distracting from the story. It seems that half of authors have engaged couples go to the alter( rather than altar) to marry. Many sentences have complete words missing so you must figure it out as you read along. The editing appears to be nonexistent.For my own personal enjoyment, a story must be believable to be good. There was much in this book that I did not find believable. Darcy and Lizzy got married when she was 15 almost 16? No, no, no. And the happening in the bedroom after Lizzy's accident when she compromised Darcy? This was a young, innocent maiden. I don't care what kind of drug she was given she would not behave in such a way if she had no prior knowledge of such things. This really ruined the book for me and it started off with such promise.