Review: Lacking
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 13, 2012
This free short story was just lacking. I don't really know what to say about it.It starts off where you learn how the man becomes the beast because he never let the woman finish when he had sex with them. He only thought of himself and was a very selfish lover. Belle's brother and friend decide to go to this mansion because it then turned into an enchanted brothel filled with half-naked women who have to stay there against their will. When Belle's brother ventures there and gets abducted, she feels it is her duty to save him. The virgin Bell finds her brother and trades places. She sees unimaginable things done to her brother and she gets locked away in a room conjoining to the beast. Bell then has to tame the beast. (Literally)The beginning of this book had potential but then lost all credibility when the virgin Bell became all dominant and kept poking him with the fire poker - wth? You can read it, if you like, but don't say it was me who told you to.