Review: needs substance and finishing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2013
Alas, yet another "free" download that the author attempts to force you to buy a book.  Stretching 1 book not several parts is ludicrous or teaks more of scheming buyers.  This portion has a good base, no reason it shouldn't have fulfilled.  Could definitely do WITHOUT the pictures.  After all, it s not a child's book.  The readers imagination alone doesn't need a pictorial to create scenes.  That is the job of the author.