Review: nice
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2014
Great story but it could do with more editing. I love it when a story is well-researched, credible and realistic. The characters are complex and believable, and the plot is too.Some of the errors that stung me in the eye were -scarred for scaredmadmen for madmanoften confusing as far as dialogue goes - person A's reactions in paragraph with person B's words then several lines of dialogue where neither person is identifiedat lease for at least