Review: Could have been a good book, but …
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2014
Could have been a good book, but …The author created a great plausible plot that I had not seen before in these kind of books.  For once, the characters were running from something, not to somewhere.The author has a good scenario,  good science,  excellent wordcrafting, good action and movement of the story… then the positive stops.It is as if the author takes a really good story and then goes back and interjects lots of profanity,  great disrespect for God,  his own visions of wet dreams, and phony surfer dude language.It would have been a really good story without all the trash.This book could have used a good proof reader and final copy editor, and someone to advise the author against all the profanity.I know that there are several sequels to this book, but I can’t see me wading thru the offensive language in search of a good story line.As you can imagine, I don’t recommend this book to anyone.