Review: ARC, not really finished version
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2014
Alright, I admit I like this series, Warrior's Wings.  But the level of grammar and spelling issues is absurd.  This isn't an editted and finished version, this is an Advance Reading Copy!  Along with the usual problems for self published writers is the mixup of characters.  The name and sex of the Human Ambassador changed after the first couple of chapters.  The different spellings of names in this series can be attributed to typos, but that was an Error.That said, I do like the main character Aida.  In this short book, we see the setup for her next missions among the Alliance.  The point made by another reviewer about the aliens being too human is valid, but really, for Aida and others like her to accomplish their new missions, there must be points of commonality.  With over a hundred species in the Alliance, humans are not going to get involved with the more unusual races.  She certainly will not get anywhere trying to work with the Ros'El!I like this, but the quality of editting must improve.