Review: Flawless character development
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2013
Just two little words, "Ask Trevor," sets the tone for this story.Sports journalist Julia Fairchild had interviewed Trevor Wyatt many times. Their relationship consisted of professional interviews with flirtatious undertones; he had even asked her out a couple of times. That was a year ago before he left the NFL and disappeared from the spotlight. The last person Julia expects to run into when her boss sends her to New York is Trevor. The chemistry is still there and they quickly find themselves making out in the back room of a shoe store. Julia quickly realizes that Trevor is even sexier than her fantasies of him portrayed. His ability to seduce with a single sentence is definitely swoon-worthy."Did you want something, sweetheart? All you have to do is ask."The main reason this did not receive a higher rating is that I never felt comfortable in the story. I felt that the pace was unsteady. The storyline jumps around, leaving scenes seem unfinished.However, the author's character development was flawless. Trevor Wyatt is a well-balanced character. While his tendency to get jealous is at times ridiculous, it is offset perfectly by his ability to hone in on Julia's every emotion. Julia is a crazy workaholic that I think anyone can relate to.My favorite thing about this story is the astounding job the author did of giving Julia a support system. I really enjoyed the Thursday night gatherings. Her girlfriends Cindy, Gretchen and Baby, were good for some humorous entertainment. I also see some future stories featuring this unique group of friends.Reviewed by Books, Books and More Booksfor TheRomanceReviews.com