Review: Excellent Storyteller~Lousy Editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2014
I really enjoyed these three stories. But...Don't you hate it when a review starts that way? You know, that passive/aggressive remark that sets your teeth on edge? Well, in this case, it's true.These are excellent stories, all three of them. But Ms. Mondello is in dire need of a good editor. I cannot speak with any certainty, but it appears she self-edited these titles. They are full~~and I mean FULL~~of spelling errors, syntax errors, grammatical errors~~all of which speak to what a great storyteller she is. Were she not, I'd have stopped reading about twenty pages in. But the pacing was such, and the hook was good enough, that I found myself bouncing off an error and right back into the book, which is uncommon for me.Believe me when I say you'll love these characters, love these stories. If you're like me, you'll love them enough to absolutely HAVE to know what happens!Three stars for what would have otherwise been five star reads.