Review: Doesn't truly stand alone
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 23, 2011
This story was okay, but I felt like major pieces were missing (I now see from a review that it is part of a larger story, which makes sense).  If you like your erotica tinged with sci-fi, this might do it for you.  However, if you like workable sci-fi, then this whole "sexual energy cloud powers the planet" thing will probably not work for you.  The motivations of the characters also felt a bit contrived.  Why was he so resistant to being with her?  Why was she so insistent on being with him?  These questions may be answered in the larger work, but the answers are missing in this short snippet.