Review: So much potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2013
After the reading the reviews I was really looking forward to this story. I was very disappointed.  The story had so much potential but the author killed the story with the writing style, repetition and sex. You have  pages and pages of the repeated thoughts of Keyonna and Nick, plus descriptions of what had already happened. For me the story is so much more enjoyable when the author lets the readers experience the details with dialogue and the interaction between characters as the characters themselves experience things. This 162 page story was more about the sex between Keyonna and Nick than anything else. If that is what turns you on then you will love this one.  If not skip it.