Review: Should have been a freebie
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 13, 2011
This story was not believable at all.  All the great reviews made it sound like a great little story.  It wasn't.  The h was whiny and TSTL.  The H was an over the top alpha brute.  He's supposed to be a cop, but he practically rapes her.  The "blackmail" storyline was really weak.  There wasn't really any chemistry between these two either.  I liked the idea of this short story, but it fell flat for me.