Review: Needs editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 17, 2013
I LOVE the premise and story line of this book. I don't think I've read a stroy from the Dom's point of view, I really enjoyed see him take on this new submissive and the fact that he is not a self made millionaire is refreshing. However this books seriously needs to be proof read and edited. As many of the other reviews state this book is full of repeated words, missing words or wrong words. I am glad that I got it while it was free. I would love to give this book another chance after it is edited.