Review: Good story, too bad about all the errors
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2013
I think this is a well-written, erotic story and would appeal to those interested in feminization or cross-dressing.  However, all of the typos are distracting and often break up the flow of reading.  Investing in a good editor would probably reap rewards in terms of more purchases and better feedback.