Review: Romantic?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 6, 2013
Well I sure didn't find any romance in this short story. The plot concept was great. The writing didn't move it forward however. I can imagine this as a novel with this being the introduction, after much editing. References to such things as a Honda Element being so old as to barely have air bags or something like that makes anyone over the age of 16 laugh. It just felt like this wasn't a final draft, more like it was halfway through the revisions when published.