Review: Lots of ERRORS are a detraction
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 30, 2013
I think I could give this book a better rating if the HUGE amount of grammatical and punctuation errors were not there. It was a good story line, wonderful characters, and good writing..but the page  after page, paragraph after paragraph of errors made it very hard to concentrate on the story. I think the story DID have too many paths to follow which added to the above confusion in staying with the story line. You get to a part where you think ..okay, this is the wrap up..the ending is near, I see where it is going..and then it takes another turn- another FOCUS entirely, and the story continues ad nauseum. Overall, because of errors and detractions..it was just an 'okay' story.