Review: Okay plot, not a fan of the story structure
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 21, 2011
The plot is good, but I felt the decisions made by the author undercut the enjoyment I could have gotten from this story.By having the entire story narrated from the POV of a character who isn't too bright and doesn't have too much information, a lot of the unique aspects of the story are completely underused.  Zombies are sprayed with various fruit-smells, but we don't really know why or what they're trying to accomplish.  A new kind of zombie (?) is emerging, but we just have too little information to fully appreciate what the author has imagined.I felt as if the telling of the story was somewhat muddled as well -- I spent a bit too much time trying to figure out where things were happening and who the characters were.