Review: A valiant effort, but really nothing going on here.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2013
I'd like to give proper credit to an author who puts in the effort to write a story of this length, but that's about the best I can say. I've read worse.Colorado has a zombie outbreak. A few people survive and wander around cooking and sleeping and making friends. There's a story line but not much happens.The writing was OK at best. I've read worse but the grammar mistakes are prevalent and annoying. Flipping from present to past tense over and over, excessive use of parentheses, using then instead of than, and lots of did go, did find, did see instead of went, found and saw.I got to a point where I skimmed through the story just to see how it ended. It didn't end because it's only part one of a series but there needs to be some kind of action and the grammar has to be improved if Darby hopes to keep selling these stories. Better luck on book 2.