Review: Choppy and difficult at times to read.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 18, 2013
The introduction was fairly smooth but regrettably became rushed and stilted about 20% in the book. The plot has merit, but obviously needs more than basic editing. Work needs done on transitions and clarity. I almost stopped reading it became so trite and unbelievable. Happy ending of course, but that is why I like romances. Won't be paying for any of this author's books, she needs to slow down and write properly.