Review: Well, at least it's well edited.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2013
The story concept here is actually quite good and the editing is better than the norm for indie books, however, the story telling is not. The action scenes are such a mish-mash of conflicting events that they made me cringe. Often several minutes worth of actions take place when something that should only take seconds occurs, as if reality in the novel has slipped into "bullet time". This makes the action sequences feel extremely awkward and unwieldy. I can't recommend this one, and won't be reading the rest of the series.