Review: Erotica, fast paced but very short story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 08 20, 2013
OWNED BY THE NAVY SEAL by Leslie North was a fast paced but very short story about a former Navy Seal who had to retire after shattering his ankle and Rita, a single woman who family thinks they must set her up in blind dates. Rita is at a pub with a very boring businessman and Jared is also there with a date. Neither one are into the one they are with, but make eye contact with each other and only a short converstation outside of the restrooms. A chance encounter at a later date leads to a steamy scene in a mens dressing room at a store. Then Jared shows up at Rita's job construction site. This story leaves you with a cliff hanger scene, leaving you wanting more, and hoping another story is soon to follow.I like the story and the heat level between Jared and Rita. I just wish authors would make it into more of a story than leaving you so you have to buy another short story.