Review: Great potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2014
This story has great potential and with further development it would be a great read. I like the characters and their interaction, but at times they seem phony for the age group that they are meant to be representing. The actual story was enjoyable to read, but left me with questions rather than the feeling of satisfaction I get after a good read. There is no explanation for how the aliens or whatever they are got to the town that they are in, and there is also no back story on how the kids even know of their existence. These facts would add quite a bit of credence to the story. There are multiple grammatical errors which at times made me stop and question how this could have gotten by an editor, or even a friend of the author who may have read it for her prior to publication.I think that with further work this story could be a really great read, but right now, it was just okay for me.