Review: BookWhisperer Reviews
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2013
Watching this story unfold was like a horrible train wreck. Every time Krista opened her mouth more and more lies fell from her lips. I was watching this mountain build knowing that the avalanche was not going to be pretty. There relationship was a little awkward to grasp with the incredibly short length to this story. There was not much time to build the emotional feel that would promise excellent ratings. So, I was left with an entertaining story that holds much potential, but I felt needed a little more work. I would have loved to have seen a littl more attention to detail and the overall building to the storyline. The rush takes away from the stregnth that this story could have had. As with the very last story I just reviewed this was a story that could have used a little work, but I am intrigued highly due to the monumental cliff hanger that it just left me with. My only hope is that this will be a building series, and each and every installment with be a progression of talent and story.~BookWhisperer Reviewer Jax~