Review: Unusually bad
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2011
Even for a free book, this was unusually bad.It is in dire need of attention from a copy editor.  The author seems to have a special aversion to commas, as dozens and dozens are missing in places where you would usually expect to see them.The story is choppy and rushed.  Characters are barely introduced and important parts of the story are never fully explained (Why is Liam going to high school with humans?  Why exactly do the Seelies hate Jensen and her mother?  What exactly happened to the Principal?  Why did Jensen have the ability to lie when no other faerie could?  Where is Jensen's mother and why did she do such a poor job of preparing her for her life?  What exactly happened at the party?  Why does Jensen hate Zoe's sister so much - just because she doesn't like her?).  The books seems to assume a level of familiarity with faerie legend and backstory.  Key concepts and terms are thrown about and never explained.  I felt like every third paragraph or so was just mysteriously cut from the book  - that is how cut-up and incomplete the story was.  It's like the author took an anti-exposition pledge.