Review: but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 21, 2013
I really liked this ultra short little M/M romance and its HEA but... I feel that, in dealing with subtle, difficult themes such as other people's expectations as opposed to one's own wishes; past teen crushes that come back to torment adults that suddenly feel more vulnerable than they thought they were; insecurities about one's choices that necessarily strike time and time again, a careful watercolour is needed.What we have here is an oil, pretty for sure but a little too obvious, garish...P.S. further editing to remove some mistakes would not have hurt.