Review: Needs A Lot Of Work!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 8, 2012
This is the first time I ever heard the story told this way. If the words were maybe written in a larger, softer font to look more child-like, without the typo's, it may have been a more entertaining story. It has the potential to be a 5 star story. Just needs some work.