Review: Plot-driven erotica
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 24, 2011
Be aware that although there is a plot here, this is erotica.  Although the notice at the front of the book stated that everybody was over the age of 18, it did seem odd that every single teenager was 18 or over and that they were having so much casual sex.It's been a couple of years since I was a teenager, but are teenagers really having that many hook-ups that involve toys?  Too many of the situations have a "Penthouse" type vibe, in that they were more like what teenage boys imagine sex would be like.  There was your bisexual girl getting it on in the locker room, but her heart safely belonged to a guy.  There was your girl-next-door masturbating after a shower.  There was a teenage couple losing their virginity scene.  I thought the best scene was the one with the older (not OLD, but just not in high school) couple.  It was the most realistic and least Penthouse Letterish.Even with all that, I did enjoy this book due to the writing and plot.  Jason uses his invisibility in exactly the way you'd expect a young guy to use it, but then has a chance to do more with it.  The level of plot and characterization was unusual for a book in this genre.