Review: The sort of story that makes you wonder why...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 31, 2013
...you wasted your time wading through it.The writing style is juvenile, the editing apparently nonexistent, the characters one-dimensional and annoying. It felt like reading a 13-year-old girl's fan fiction, full of glaring grammar errors, misused words and repetitive description. Hey, congrats, you used "bonny wee ____", and "loch"-- it's Insta-Scot For Dummies!I actually got halfway through and came back to Amazon to see why I had downloaded this in the first place, and I literally can't believe all the glowing reviews. Please, gentle reader, reconsider before cluttering up your device with this garbage.Need convincing? Direct quote:"And this was her first time, the laird told himself, for she had never been made love to and he would make love to her now, in a tender way that he never had before. He lifted her from the tub to the fire he had stoked and he lay her on the rug and kissed her till she was hot and red and not from the bathwater. Kissed her all over till and was wet and warm and ready."Never mind the run-on sentences and the painfully awkward phrasing, please don't miss the "kissed her all over till and was wet". Guys. The author is getting all hot and bothered writing this crap and forgetting to add words. This is not the sign of a book worth even $.99.