Review: Well, that was disjointed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2014
The story skipped and I found myself turning back pages to see if I had missed anything. Then there's the whole, appallingly common confusion of "it's" and "its." Folks, they're not the same. Anyway, there's nothing original about the plot and it could have been better executed. That said, it has potential. The author needs to add meat to the bones.