Review: Just awful...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 12, 2013
While not even mentioning the typos an the editing gaffes, the dialogue was stilted, strange and more befitting junior high schoolers rather than someone college educated and a captain of industry. Least we forget they are rich and powerful, we are  reminded on every single solitary page. "I changed my mind, I can do that, I'm a billionaire." Seriously, it is that trite and inane. And please, for the love of all written dialogue...learn the proper use and placement of contractions in a conversation. People who speak English as a first language don't use sentences such as: "You need to think about what you are doing." If you're ever in doubt, say the sentence out loud and hear it. Does it sound stilted and choppy? Then there's a very good chance it will when someone's reading it. It was so bad in this book, that I can't even fathom going through the pain and work of reading further installments, let alone paying for something so short, ill conceived and badly executed. To think that it's okay to charge people 3.00 per installment for three short and badly written "serials" is an insult to the people that actually could help you if you'd polish your craft a bit before taking this mess commercial and yourself so seriously.