Review: Editor needed badly.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 1, 2013
Editor, or at least a class in English 101 needed asap. I was appalled at after having spent $5 for an e-book to find such poor grammar and middle school writing. The author repeatedly got her tenses mixed up or just used poor English - "they were stood on the dance floor..." , " ...I need to hear it from you guys' lips." The list goes on and on.... The story had potential, but the writing needs to mature as it felt as if everyone was in middle school or ninth grade. The concept was very good, and with a better editor/editing the story could have been pretty great. Unfortunately, for five dollars it was not anywhere near worth it.I hate to say it but I am going to ask Amazon for a refund.....