Review: Totally not worth my time
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2012
I don't get other reviewers saying this was well written or such a thriller - I totally disagree.  I admit that I am not a fan of paranormal stuff, although in a well-done book it seems to flow naturally and is therefore acceptable.  Sure didn't happen here.  This is the second book in the series, the first I have read, but I won't be reading another.I thought the characters were flat - not well-rounded at all.  The dialogue was boring and the plot line was ridiculous.  The truth is that I couldn't get interested in any of these characters or what happened to them.  There wasn't a build toward a climax or suspense.  If I had been reading out loud, it would have been a monotone.What irked me the most was the terrible editing.  It sounded like it was written by a sixth grader and the editor didn't clean it up at all or cut out the unnecessary parts.  The worst thing was the jumping from past tense to present tense - sometimes even in the same sentence!  As an English teacher, I would mark every one of those errors with a bright red pen.  And, unfortunately, there would be red all over this book.Even when I don't like a book, I try to find the positive and see what it is that other people might enjoy about the book.  Sorry.  I can't find anything here that I can even pretend to like.I received a free copy of this book in exchange for writing a review.