Review: Book 2 was somewhat better, at least a faster read for me. But there is still the problem of the narrative
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 19, 2013
now switching between the 3 characters of Holden, Olivia and Quintus. Sometimes it is hard to know which character is speaking. The pace of the story is slow and I still had to take frequent breaks.The editing, or lack thereof, is still a stumbling block with missing words, articles, nouns and prepositions and awkward sentence structure.The story is now being driven by the fall-out from Olivia's death and Holden's attempts to go forward with his own life. Olivia is also trying to deal with her death and her need to try and become what she was destined to be.I am going on with Book 3 because I am curious to know what happens to Olivia, Holden, Quintus, Femi, the guardians and the jenni.