Review: Sexy but not complete
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2013
I absolutely love any time there's a fuller figured heroine in a story. Throw in a billionaire who is really just a blue collar guy who recently inherited the money? Double bonus for me. I was very excited about the premise of this story but unfortunately it fell a little flat for me. This story wasn't actually a complete novella, it reads more like a serial. There was no conflict resolution by the end and it leaves the reader wanting more. I have no issues with serials but I wish I knew prior to reading that there would be more coming. Also, it felt like some things were skipped over. When we got to the smexy times between Laura and Dylan I kept having to reread passages because I couldn't figure out how/when something happened. Wait, they're naked now? How did they get that way? There was a teaser included for the second story which I appreciated but I'm not sure if I'll continue with this story.