Review: Ditch the 'had'
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 23, 2013
Nice story, to a certain point, at times farfetched, but the verb tense disagreement put me off completely. It was hard to follow the story while stumbling across a myriad of useless 'had'. A piece of advice: Don't rush with publication if you can't afford a decent editor.