Review: Just not working for me.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 19, 2014
Okay so I decided to give this series another shot. This installment was just around 35 pages, very short. And I found myself battling the same issues I had with the first parts of the series.I have to say that I am annoyed with the overuse of the exclamation points. I can't seem to capture the moments in the dialogue because of them. They are everywhere! <---- purposely placed.Add to it that David is a complete Dbag that is manipulating Grace beyond anything that resembles caring or love. And although Grace seems to take part in the pleasure and it might just be exposing herself to a side of her sexuality she had not embraced yet, she is still not doing for the right reasons.David and Grace return from the DIning Club and he stays away from her until their next visit. But in this time he seems to have no problem with the idea of taking part in activities outside of his relationship with Grace. Now I get it, while they are at the club Grace is certainly being pleasured by others outside of David, but hell he made the rules.Between his manipulations, Grace's unhealthy desire to go against her own instincts and allowing her craving for David to love her be the driving source of participating I am not finding this really sexy. I am interested and secretly hoping that Grace dumps him, but knowing that she won't. I just can't seem to not read these, but not for story or the sexiness.