Review: In serious need of editing. Good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 17, 2013
This is a good story but if you're put off by errors in word usage, misspellings, and tenses along with double words and words just left out... you won't appreciate this book.  That being said, if you are like me, and can overlook those flaws then it's a good story.  Long though.  This author needs either an editor or a beta reader to help her with all of the issues listed above and to try to narrow down some of this story.  She unnecessarily continued to go over the same ground throughout the book. I will say though that I've read both books by this author.  Her latest book entitled "Grim" is very good, has the same issues as this one, but was a more advanced and well thought out book.  This author has potential.