Review: Interesting storyline but....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2013
I really like this author's imaginative and detailed take on Earth's history. This story has great potential, but the writing itself is in serious need of help due to strange word usage, grammar mistakes and just general readability. I managed to get through it with a lot of skimming and overlooking errors just because I really wanted to know where he was going with the story. However, I did find the reading cumbersome and sometimes painful. I think a good editor would be an immense help here. A good effort but needs a lot of polishing.