Review: So many things…
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2013
Let's just start with the basic of why I'm giving this story two stars.I am usually a very fair grader. I almost never give less than three stars. That's for many reasons, but mainly because I write erotica myself and I know how much a one star or a two star can hurt the author and their credibility.That being said, holy crap this was terrible!I mean like probably the worst erotica I have ever read.Here is why:1) What the hell happened? No I'm being honest, someone please explain to me what this story was about? I think I got confused the second paragraph in. I had no clue who the characters were! It was all sort of like they were just mashed together.2) The names. Now don't get me wrong, I've read some pretty interesting names over the years. But the names here took the cake. Col? Gareth? Bryony?  Just... Pick some names that could sound better. Doesn't have to be normal, but it does have to be at least better.3) She has sex with a dog. He's not a werewolf, he's a dog. He were a collar, he paws at her when he wants something, he is a freaking dog. And sex with dogs is just... I can't even think of a word to describe how terrible it is.4) Accents. I might be American, but I'm also a linguist. I have studied over four languages intensively, and I have friends from the all over Europe and the U.K. But even with all of that, I had no clue what was being said. It all seemed to be in dialect, and while that was interesting, it detracted from the story and made the story weaker.Overall the story was awful. I would never recommend this to anyone. And while I don't mean to be mean (because I do applaud the time and energy the author put into the story), I do believe that there needs to be some serious revamping for this to be even okay.Right now? I'm just really still blown about the whole thing and I confused as crap.