Review: So much potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 4, 2012
This book left me wishing it had been edited by a professional.  The writing is light and fun and the plot was good.  Unfortunately there were too many characters telling the story.  Each had redeeming qualities that could have been developed making the reader care about the character's fate. Yet it would have taken too many pages to keep it light. I believe a few story lines should have been left out and more time spent digging into the personalities of a select few.  In my opinion there were many odds and ends which didn't need to be told and many that did and weren't.This book has great potential and if rewritten could be quite successful. I liked this writer well enough I will check back in a few years to see if she has developed her style into something wonderful.  Offering it for free was a good idea and I hope the reviews help her work on becoming a better story teller.  Unfortunately, I would not recommend this particular book to anyone.