Review: Unfulfilled potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2012
I give this book 3 stars because the writing was excellent, it was an interesting concept and it made me smile several times. However, overall I was disappointed in the execution. I 100% concur with Ann deVries review and will not rehash all that  she has already written, except to say I was really longing to read more about Maddie (the 6 yr old little girl) - she definitely stole the story. I liked the hero, but thought the heroine was a pretty weak and reactionary character. I also did not like the continuous retelling of "pivotal" scenes especially when the author would jump back in time w/o cuing the reader. And while the whole deal with the sleazy reporter was supposed to add comedy I just found it boring and ridiculous. I think the story would have been much better without that character.The second half of the final chapter was cute and so I did finish with a smile on my face. I would be willing to try this author again.