Review: Had potential.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 29, 2013
The story had potential but a few things really annoyed me. As other's noted, the authors's use of French phrases were often used incorrectly and were used so often, they were a distraction from the actual dialogue. The author used the word "mayhap" at least 6 times which was also annoying. Prince Charming was way too sappy and arrogant to actually be attractive.