Review: Improbable and convoluted plot
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2014
This had an improbable and convoluted plot.  It was totally unbelievable.  Also there were typos, misspellings, formatting problems,  and the wrong words were used, such as "woof" for "wolf"  and "discrete" for "discreet".  The author would benefit from professional editing in her future books.