Review: Wham, Bam Right away
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2012
Read most of the story but I absolutely hate it when the h just gives in right away. The thrill of the chase is important to me as well as the sexual tension. But for me there is none of that after the big moment especially so early on in the story. After I didn't care how protective etc. he was. Why should he bother since he got what he wanted before he really got to know the h. The H is an alpha, which I love but the h is a wet noodle. I quit reading before the end of the story. Read Staking His Claim and the Sheriff and the Innocent Housekeeper both by Lynda Chance which have very HOT ALPHAS but the big event doesn't happen until later and there is definitely a lot of tension.