Review: Okay taboo erotica
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 24, 2011
As a kindle freebie, this short story is worth checking out to see what you think. If you're into taboo erotica in particular, this story should titillate you to some degree. For me, it gave a little but not a lot. This is a ten-minute read with some explicit sex going for it, and for taboo erotica, it isn't bad.I do think that the forbidden aspect could have been heightened more. As this story is told in first-person by the stepdaughter, the reader was never allowed into the male POV, and I feel that being privvy to his forbidden thoughts would have increased that taboo feeling of the story. That's what makes this theme exciting for me. I also would have preferred fewer exclamations of "UGGHH!" as a moan of passion.Is it the best of this theme I've ever read? No, but it is a fairly enjoyable stepfather fantasy with a decent amount of heat to it.