Review: .99 cents stories aren't bad
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 7, 2011
I enjoyed this one, but I had to keep telling myself this is a 23 yr old woman not a young girl.  I found it hard to believe she was this innocent  (and it got old fast) in this day of the Internet.  Of course her upbringing and environment maintain her purity, but mentally the female came across as a bit too naive.  She had friends and she used the net, so...The male wanted to keep her safe and for himself.  The way he stalked her around the kitchen--I kept hoping she poured some cold water on him to cool him off.  Overall I did enjoy the story and thought it more than worth the price.