Review: Why I didn't like it...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 30, 2014
Here were the reasons I disliked this book:*There was a sequel. The author failed to mention this on the summary page. I wouldn't have chosen to read it if I had known.*The author's use of Shaddup (meaning shut up), Mfft (meaning unclear) - it annoyed me.*The author describes Cody as charming but on the pages he comes off immature, a jerk, and an idiot. To all the people who gave reviews stating this was a sweet story. SERIOUSLY? The lead males love of body shots comes off as idiotic. He and his firends are supposed to be Navy Seals. Their antics remind me of the guys on the reality show Jersey Shore. Their depiction is an insult to Navy Seals.*Cody's family is wealthy and upstanding, yet they come off as white trash with money. Also, I can't get into a male lead who is basically a Momma's boy. The sister, Jenna, was an idiot who was supposed to work for NCIS. The mother, Stephanie, was the social climbing villain but really she was just manipulative and irritating.*Bridie met the first brother in the beginning. She spent about four hours with him but had such a connection he told his mother she was the woman he wanted to make his wife. If a reader is supposed to believe that the author should have went in to detail about what had been so awesome in that brief amount of time that it would have spurred that kind of connnection.*The sex scenes read like they were written by a sixteen year old boy*I'm not sure an Aussie (the writer) had a real depiction of American high society nor Miami*The ending...really? Give me a break!