Review: Wanted to like it but
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2013
As I read the plot I thought great, this will be a cute light read and maybe a bit funny. Daniel, a billionaire pretending to be a limo driver, falls for Lori who is just opening a new coffee shop. His friend, an accountant, suggests they test her by pretending she won a million on a contest. Even though he is aware of his emotions, Daniel agrees to go along with the scheme.Sounds good, right? Yes, but the way the author developed the story line was not so good. So many things happened too quickly to make it realistic. The pace of emotions developing between the two main characters seemed unnatural and I just couldn't connect with any of them. It's a pity, because I really liked the plot.I agree with the previous reviewer that the book needs editing. With this plot and some editing this could become quite a good romance.