Review: opportunity wasted
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2013
Honestly I do not get the raving reviews.The basic ideas and the general characterization are interesting and fairly original and the pacing makes sense, weaving gradually more and more tension into the plot.Unfortunately writing, not exempt from typos and grammar mistakes, is painfully slow and stilted. Clunky sentences fail to convey the depth of feeling the author is aiming at making for a tiresome reading experience.An embarassing number of awkward repetitions, some of which creating inconsistencies in characters' motives, actions and looks, delivers the final blow to the narration of an author who seems to lack some of the basic technical skills needed to tell a story.