Review: To be improved
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2014
I'm using Kindle books to find new, upcoming authors. At this point, with only two-thirds of the book finished and I'm confused. I feel as if I am reading the first draft of a book. Either this is a big mistake, or the author had some other reason for publishing an incomplete piece of work. From typographical errors to grammar mistakes, I'm wondering why at least there wasn't a professional read-through for typos. Secondly, the entire story doesn't seem to be fleshed out at all. The author jumps from one topic to the next without building most bridges. The overall story line is interesting, but in my opinion, this is the first of several drafts which simply never came to the end product.