Review: Flawed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2014
The action in the story takes place over way too short a time to be believable. The heroine feels justified in committing illegal acts to further her ends, and she's the star of a Christian romance? I found it preposterous that she and the hero would fall in love.  The Christian aspects seemed really forced: she doesn't seem to have much faith, and they're constantly praying for miracles, which BOOM arrive right on schedule. The hero seems to exist to be her human ATM, funding her search for her biological sister, and the pray/miracle seems to make God into some sort of vending machine. Then there were plot holes: how did the villain get a copy of a picture of the heroine that had to have been taken years before she met the villain? Why does the hero so readily believe a stranger who accuses his father of a crime? If the author had had the couple meet in a conventional way (easily done) and have a loving trusting relationship prior to the events of the book, it might have been believable, but the story was like being dropped into the front car of a roller coaster as it's cresting the first hill. You're off and running before you have a chance to say 'Wait a minute, how did THIS happen?'