Review: where do I begin?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2013
This is horribly written. The author goes back and forth between 1st person and 3rd person point of view which will confuse and infuriate you, every Transition is like a bad gear change, and it has NOT been proofread at all! I mean, the ideas a great one, but it's completely fumbled and mishandled. Even the sex scenes wrote like a boring instruction manual! I think this writer should go back and take another creative writing class...or three!I wish I could give this a quarter of a star, because I would. Please, go back to the drawing board and proofread before you decide to bestow your work on us!