Review: A bit all over the place
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2014
It started strong, then the book completely fell apart at about halfway point. The dialog completely stopped making sense. I mean, in one scene, he's kissing her, and literally the next paragraph he's leaving. Nothing in between. Needed editing for clarity, because I sure as heck was confused about what was going on, and then quickly stopped caring.