Review: ok
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
I didn't realize this was a novella but it was free on amazon. The story has potential but there were just to many discrepancies in the writing. On one page they are naked, the next page she is pulling on his belt and taking his pants off, WTH??? They never say what happened to her car after it was wrecked however she "grabs her keys" and leaves the house???? Very hard to follow, no depth to the characters.