Review: Great Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 20, 2012
What I liked about this book was the story and the characters. This is what kept me invested from beginning to end. What I didn't like was the editing. The editing needs work. The punctuation needs work. Go over the book with a fine-toothed comb and don't be in such a hurry to get the work out there. The world will wait for a cleaner version. I loved Rio and Olivia. Their pain and their plights were very raw. This is not a book for younger reader, but more for the more mature. There is a deeper meaning in the book. God, or the universe or spirit, puts us in the right place at the right time. There are no accidents or coincidences. Rio and Olivia came together for a reason and no doubt became the people they were meant to be from this meeting. I enjoyed the book overall, editing aside.