Review: It was good, could have been better.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 3, 2012
Overall the whole premise of the story and the plot was good and I enjoyed it, but one thing that annoyed me and I thought could have made the story more enjoyable was the descriptions. To me it seemed the author fell into the trap of telling instead of showing, where for example we could have learned information about the characters as the plot progresses and that would have made them to me feel more important, but instead we were just straight up told what was the background of the characters, what there temperament was, and their drives.Another point that was a let down for me was the romance, especially in the beginning when Saerin and Charinen they fall madly in love and all that were really told is that it happened, that it, even though the fact that there together is a major plot point as the story progresses. I just didn't feel anything for the relationship, to me it just seemed dull and shallow, even though the author was trying to tell you that their love was deep and strong.Though it can be said the plot was good and well developed these points brought me out of my immersion within the story, and made me feel that overall that it was lackluster and a disappointment.