Review: Good story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 25, 2014
Don't get me wrong by only giving this book 3* it is a really good book with a couple of great storylines intertwined but all the too-ing & fro-ing was really starting to annoy me. Sometimes I felt it was riding along smoothly & strongly then all of a sudden spanners would be thrown in the mix & the story would push along at a hundred miles an hour & that just made it feel rushed & not a natural feel. All that being said I am off to purchase 2nd book so don't let my negative comments hinder you from buying because like I said it is a great storyline & hopefully the author will get better with the pacing of storytelling & minor editing faults