Review: SMIBookClub review of The Dumont Diaries
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 8, 2013
*** 3 1/2 stars ***This series started off so good! I first read the novella of book 1 and loved it so much that I bought the complete novella bundle set. I read it in one sitting . But I easily became annoyed at the shift the story took. I love novellas it's amazing how an author can put so much in these short stories that hook readers . But when a novella becomes a complete novel I think its important to go back in and edit the book to add a little more detail to help with flow or things feel fast paced (which can be good ) like scenes versus a continuing flow of a story. In The Dumont diaries it was so hard for me to connect to Nsthan & Candys relationship and feel their love for each other. One thing you will feel reading the series is the STEAM! My goodness it was HOT. But for me the plot didn't flow enough .-JuewelzSMIBookClub.com