Review: Good but needed editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2013
I enjoyed the story and twists within and won't bother with retelling the essence of the plot. However, the typos, dropped words, verb and noun disagreement, basic grammar and punctuation errors, slipping from third person into omnipotent, time sequence errors, and finally misspellings that weren't correct for in either American or English spelling were a problem.These errors disrupted an otherwise easy and enjoyable read. Harper is a storyteller with a natural wit and her books would sing if she would get an editor. I'm not sure I'll buy another unless she gets some outside editing.Favorite dialogue exchange:`Good God, is your aunt Lady Leticia Hester?'`Yes,' there came a sigh. `It is very unfortunate but nothing can be done about it at this late stage.'