Review: Oh so bad
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2013
This book is so poorly written I don't know where to start.  It is an okay story and that just makes the writing that much more disappointing.  First there is narration then its first person then third person.  If these changes in perspective where one chapter to the next that might be bareable but that's not what is done.  It's not even a different perspective paragraph to paragraph.  The perspective changes in the same paragraph.  Totally confusing.  Next, there is a lack of punctuation.  Can I buy a comma?  Also, there is nothing wrong with conjunctions. This author seems to be afraid of conjunctions and its painful to read.  No one talks or thinks the way these characters do.  It resulted in stilted conversations that are difficult and painful to read.  The author needs a lot of improvement and the editor should be shot.  I try to give an author at least two chances but this book is so poorly written I will NOT be reading anything else by this author.