Review: Bad enough grammar to deem it unreadable
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2013
Between the commas thrown around where they don't belong, use of quotation marks when not needed, lack of quotation marks when needed, incomplete sentences, run-on sentences, double negatives, improper use/lack of punctuation, etc. this story was a very tough read, and I cannot form an opinion on whether or not the story is any good.I understand that self published authors often do their own editing, but I don't understand why, if they know that English/spelling/grammar is not their strong suit, they do not buy a friend (who IS a grammar guru) a case of beer and ask them to proofread an advance copy? Most of the stories here on Amazon are short and could be proofread in a couple of hours, if not for content at least for spelling and grammar.