Review: Needs more "fleshing out" to make it believable
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
I usually don't mind short stories and novellas are often great for getting the final story for one of those secondary character couples from another book, but this one just seemed like there should be more. I know some nice guys, but none that would marry a complete stranger. Give her money, a temporary place to stay, a ride, etc. but not marry her...even if she did have a small child and nowhere else to go. The book has some good points and could have made for a longer, well rounded story (i.e. she's still not quite sure he is a safe bet around her child, slowly the attraction grows, the criminal boss stalks her, etc.). It just isn't realistic that two people would be willing to start a life together after 2 days of knowing each other. Then there is the ex-fiance...that didn't quite go how I would expect any woman to react hearing and seeing her finance come home with another woman...So all in all, I didn't NOT like it, but think it could have been better.