Review: Umm....could of been better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 23, 2013
I just wish that the author stayed consistent with her writing style. It is not recommended to write a story in first person because saying I I I and me me me gets vary tedious and obnoxious to read. The beginning started out ok but once Zayla got on bored of the ship it went down hill from there. I just don't think it is believable that Zayla could pass herself off as a boy especially if she has a very feminine body.