Review: Has Potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 16, 2012
This short story is an improvement from the last one I read by Rod Harder. Although still short this story is longer than the four page erotic story I previously read which allowed Rod to put more detail into his writing, however, I would personally prefer a little bit more.The use of dialogue worked well in this book to add a bit more depth to the characters and helps to absorb the reader into the story but the characters are still rather thin and a longer book would allow the reader to connect more with the characters and overall create a more successful book. There is still a lot of room for improvement (especially on the editing side of things) but this is an ok story that shows potential.I received my copy of "The Tycoon's Lonely Queen on New Years" from the author for my honest review.