Review: Not what I was looking for!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 28, 2014
This story was not what I was looking for and I'm sorry to say I thought the writing was choppy.  I thought this would be a transsexual story and it really wasn't, it had more of a gay theme to it.It was also difficult to follow right from the start, because it bounced from one scene to the next with no development.  I will be honest because of the choppy writing and the lack of theme I wanted,I didn't even finish the story.  I may have gooten better further in, but I just lost interest about a third of the way through.