Review: I can't remember how many times I wanted to abandon this work, but...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2014
As others have stated, the editing is about the worst I've ever encountered. Does the woman even know what a comma is?  At times I thought my IQ was dropping as I read. LOLThere was something compelling about the work that encouraged me to stick with it, even with the confusing, disjointed beginning.  The characters were great and the storyline very enjoyable - a solid 4+.Please invest in the assistance of an editor!