Review: Ok, but could have  been better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2013
The story was only "OK" not because of the characters but the writing style of the author.  I wanted to enjoy this Christian romance but it was too drawn out. There was just too much unnecessary detail about the business deal. Too many repetitive thoughts on the part of Sherri and Kavin. Even during the dialogue it would sometimes take 2 to 3 pages of thoughts before the other person responds. I would have to go back and read what the conversation was about.  The story would have been so much better with more dialogue between them.  I like to read a story where the reader experiences events along with the characters, instead of being told about events after the fact.  I had to make myself finish the book hoping that once Sherri and Kavin came together we would start to experience their relationship as a couple.  That did not happen.  More story should have been given to the romance once they came together as a couple because there were still issues. I got the book free.  If I had paid for it, I'm sure I would have returned it unfinished.