Review: Odd - very odd.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 2, 2011
Generally speaking I prefer if someone has a negative opinion they should keep it to themselves, but WOW this one was weird.  It was difficult to read and in some places I felt like the author was trying too hard to use words they might have discovered in a dictionary.  I get the feeling this author might be from another country (just a strange way of stating things).  The ending was a little bit of pleasure and a lot of pain.  I was confused by the fact that one woman had to drive the car - he parked at all the stops he made, so why did she have to drive?  The contraption they used was interesting, but made me wonder if there is such a device for folks that like sexual pain or was this the author's imagination at work?  Hummm...don't know.  The premise was interesting, but I'm thinking this author needs more time to develop and study before publishing (there is some potential there).  The other reviewer stated that this was a very short story...I'm sorry, but it wasn't short enough for me.