Review: Cute story but missing cohesiveness
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2013
In this final installment of the Modern Arrangements series you get the relationship of Aiden and Lilly tied up in a happy little knot. This book had some drawbacks that kept me from giving even 4 stars. I thought the first book was too drawn out but was interested enough to read the second. The second book was perhaps the best in the series. Here the relationship really took off and you got the cliff hanger of the unexpected pregnancy.I did like the story surrounding the birth of the twins, despite all the melodrama. However, the incident that broke up Aiden and Lilly was just too over the top. The resolution was all over the place.This third book could have used some serious editing. There were grammatical errors which were frequent enough to become annoying. The last chapter that was like an epilogue just went on and on and could have been reduced by one quarter. You would thing with all these negatives I would have given a two star rating but I did love Aiden and Lilly as a couple and hope that Ms Guber keeps writing and strengthening her narratives.