Review: Tepid to Lukewarm - could have been so much better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 8, 2013
This is a very choppy, disjointed rough around the edges read for the readers who are familiar with Kristen Ashley and Joanna Wylde.  Viper's Run may have the hot love scenes involving m/f/m/f/f etc., but this $3.99 book is worth $.99 at the most.I got the impression that the author was writing down the ideas in book format rather than gathering the thoughts and then putting those thoughts in a more cohesive format for a smoother read.  Overall, Viper's Run was okay and a tad bit better than Razer's Ride.  I borrowed Razer's Ride and the scenarios/situations in that book were all over the place.I did take exception to the female character, Winter Simmons, who suffers a near fatal attack and ends up in the one place she didn't want to be and that was at the home of the Last Riders.  Being confined to a wheelchair and to be held against one's will is so many ways wrong, it's not romantic or hot.  Winter was in a two year one sided (her) relationship with Viper (Loker James) before she even knew him as Viper and honestly ladies, if you're in a two year relationship and the other person is reluctant to share aspects of their life with you, it should serve as a MAJOR heads up that it's time to terminate.It's not until Winter is brutally attacked that Viper has a change of heart.  The basic concept for the stories is okay, the execution needs to be worked on and improved.  I'll forgive the numerous grammatical error and misuse of punctuation marks if I see signs of improvement.  I just hope the third installment of the Last Riders reads better than the first two installments.