Review: It needed a pinch more...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2013
I liked the idea, but felt that there could have been just a little more to bring us into the story. Maybe a girlfriend that comes looking for him after he is consumed? Something. I felt detached from the events, rather than pulled in. It was still worth the read. I will keep my eye out for more from this author.