Review: Short story with promise
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
Carmen DeSousa offers a short crime story here that has plenty of promise and delivers a reasonably satisfying tale.This story tells the tale of two identical murders, twenty years apart and the investigation into solving them. The tension builds nicely, offering a few suspects, but then lets itself down with such a sudden ending that I felt a little robbed (hence the 4 star rating.) I think another ten pages or so could have made this more satisfying and ended better than it did.Overall, a great story and I look forward to reading more of Carmen's (longer) work in the future.