Review: Had potential, but plot got overwhelmed...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 22, 2013
..with the sex.  I like sci-fi erotica because there tends to be more plot, and I like a storyline to go with my erotica.  There might be a good plot here, but the only OK sex scenes kept getting in the way, instead of enhancing the story.  The character development was horrible as well.  Get an editor who can help you figure out how to take the germ of a good idea and make it better.  This was free, so I am giving it 2 stars instead of 1.