Review: Promising, but falls flat
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 31, 2014
Lots of potential.  Good characters, good basic plot.  Horrible editing errors throughout.  Wrong tenses and missing articles left it hard to read.  I am always saddened when an author takes the time to write a book that could be a complete winner and then doesn't take the time to proof it leaving it flat.  And the excuse that the translation from book to ebook is the problem is lost on me.  Someone can read the ebook translation as easily as the book.