Review: Needs some work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2014
This is another case of a writer apparently self-epublishing* a first draft without benefit of an editor or proofreader. The characters were flat and two-dimensional. I really had no notion of what anyone looked like. I was never sure what the time period was, either. The plot was interesting and that's the only reason I finished it. I wonder what happened to some of the other patients. The ending was so abrupt. Please, Miss Allred now that you have some years behind you, please revise and revisit this novel. Freshen it with more realistic dialog. Have your characters come to life and not be stereotypes. Add more in-depth descriptions. This book could be so much more!*This may not be a word, but you all know what I mean.