Review: Nope.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 7, 2012
It was so, so hard for me to get past the atrocious dialogue when, two pages in, the hero switched from calling the heroine "my lady" to "honey." Nope. No. Very poorly done in general.The premise was fine - damsel in distress - but everything else fell short. This story was in need of better development, construction, and execution. Don't bother.