Review: Good story but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 31, 2013
I loved the characters in this story, I loved their weaknesses and their strengths and I liked the menage aspect.  Sometimes I felt a few of the scenes were rushed and I especially would have liked to see more development of the erotic aspect of the relationship among the 3 characters. I think this author has a lot of potential.  But if typos, bad grammar and malapropisms irritate you, then be warned.You don't take "dints" to your pride, they're "dents."You do not get "imbibed,"  you imbibe and become "inebriated"And please review tenses and referring to yourself.  It's not always "I" for instance "He told Sam and I" is so incorrect it hurts.  "He told Sam and ME" is correct because if you took Sam out of the sentence you wouldn't say "He told I" would you?OK, done with my soap box.  I think the reason these small issues stood out so prominently is because I really really wanted to love this book and every time something like this popped up I'd have to take a deep breath and force myself back in to the story.  It's distracting and reflects poorly on what could have been a great book.This author needs polishing but undoubtedly has a good voice.  I've already downloaded a few samples of her other books so obviously the above issues weren't enough to turn me off completely.