Review: Cute Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2013
I read the reviews before reading the book seriously wondering with such mixed reviews if I should bother to read it. However, I figured why judge a book by other's opinions since I've read books that received a 2 Star and found them enjoyable. So I moved forward. Throughout the story there was numerous grammatical errors, nothing to completely discount the book but it would make you stop and reread a sentence ruining the seamless flow. One of the complaints from another review was that the geographical locations were all off. Being that I live in Florida the geographical inaccuracies were annoying but you never know maybe in the universe the story is written in Tampa, Fort Lauderdale, and Miami are a hop skip away. Beyond that my only complaint is that when you get toward the end of the book the author makes little slip ups about things mentioned in the beginning. The story ends rather abruptly and in fact I thought my Kindle malfunctioned. The end and resolutions seemed rushed. The story has great potential with a little more editing. All in all the story was cute. If you are able to look past everything mentioned above to the story itself (as I was) I would say it is quite worth the read. Just be mindful of those issues... maybe the author will update it soon.