Review: moving short story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 08 13, 2012
This is a lovely little short story. Premise was good (who doesn't empathize with a woman and her dying child?), tempo was swift but the author managed to fit some very real emotions and even a twist into so few pages.  I loved the bit where a paragraph from the first is exactly repeated in the end only you understand it better.  Nice Work!