Review: Stupid and so unbelievable, door mat, weak and no pride or self respect.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2014
Where do I start.  Spoilers.How about stupid.  If the guy next door has already beaten you and told you her was going to rape you, you go outside in the middle of the night to burn things.  Really, she was just carrying a knife and walking back alleys to avoid him and then you write that, stupid and unbelievable.  I knew it was going to happen before you wrote that scene.Unbelievable.The guy who left her for years, ignored her and never helped, she wants to have sex with him not even 24 hours after being beaten and attempted raped.  Pleas, you had her thing about sex with him and upset he didn't like her books as she laid the cut up,bleeding and beaten.  This is a joke.  Come on, a women is not going to be thinking this crap.And what a couple of days she's all better and having sex with him, she has no trauma because everyone always treats her like trash so it's ok.And after just being told the guy who beat you is not going to get into trouble, that's ok let's have sex.God I'm not even a third of the way into the book and this women has no self respect or pride.  The way you write her is a shame that anyone ready this book wants to be here or find it romantic.  It's sick.You want us readers to like these men and women who had no problem allowing her dad to beat her.  I'm so confused, I thought the whole point to a story is that we are supposed to like some one.  You have these bikers who don't like innocents being harmed but they didn't have a problem Turing their backs on her for years and could care less that she was beaten and almost raped.  Why do you want me to like any of them?Wait a second, another cop touches her and now she feels dirty?  Really.  And the Texas ranger see the cop "touching" her and does nothing.  Again really.  She doesn't want to be treated like trash but she begs him to have sex out in the open with people around.  She doesn't want to be one of the whores, then stop dressing and acting like one.There is to much sex and not enough story.  Dear God over half the book is nothing but sex, where is the story.  I was skimming most of the book because either boring or predictable.  I'm not a fan of stories where it is ok to beat and rape women.  I like to read about real men who protect and respect women.  Even after making her the old lady, it was still ok for others to treat her like trash and the other brothers didn't care.