Review: Interesting story but many grammatical mistakes.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 7, 2012
I found the story line refreshingly different.  However, it was very hard to over look the MANY grammatical mistakes.  They're, their and there were used interchangeable as were words like your and you're.  Then there were several cases of just bad grammar, wrong verbs and such.  Many characters moving in and out of the story created some confusion as well as a story line that kind of jumped around a bit.  But, one of the things I appreciated was that the conflict was not blown out of proportion.  I find so many stories today extremely stressful to read because of constant over done conflict lines.