Review: Sex is okay but........
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 16, 2014
HOW CAN MS. BRIER GET THEM IN THEIR IMPOSSIBLE POSITIONS TO DEAL WITH THEIR SEXUAL ENCOUNTERS? Some of them you can see where they were thought through but just enough of the others were enough to drive you crazy. Even Yoga couldn't help with these.  Again, there are ideas thrown in there that could take you down a very interesting path but she (Ms. Briers)  just stops. I would love to see her pick up her book 1 month after she wrote it and read it as if it is a new book maybe then she could see just what she is doing by the constant leading you in one direction and then BAM dead end, forgotten train of thought. It really makes it tough reading.No depth to her characters. Even a little would help a great deal.This story starts out okay but Ms. Biers gets herself lost. She knows what she is thinking but she forgets to bring us along. It would be a good idea if she would get a peg board and write details about her characters then intertwine them through the story line constantly checking to make sure it flows so we know what she is trying to write. In one area a 17 year old lycan is heading to a party, meets a vampire, (hi, you are my mate let's have sex and bond. Oh by the way we should tell my brother) sex up against the tree in the forest. yeah I know different world, different rules but still that could have taken up more then a paragraph in fact that could have been a book 2. Again the author has a sense of humor so why hide it. She leaks a little bite out every once in a while. Too many directions and not enough words used to aide you.I think Ms Briers is trying to push out too much without thinking/reading what actually she put on paper. If there is a proof reader do your job if not hire one; if you have an editor I would seriously think about getting someone different. You have what it takes you can see it in parts of your book so work harder on it or get REAL help. I could see Nicky Charles taking these ideas and making them into at least 5 books of more then a 100 pages. Read some really good books like Nicky Charles and see how she tells her stories. I gave it a 3 because I didn't want to completely pitch it into the fire. It have some good parts. Read it I could be off base but I don't think so.