Review: good but...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 11, 2014
There were several errors. For one, when did Mercedes get married? There were references to her marriage & divorce but I don't recall either situation. And words were hyphenated unnecessarily, such as one syllable words or 2 letter words. Sometimes the story just jumped into something else. And for Rico to be so hard when she met him, he sure turned soft quick. And the story just ended with no warning. I will probably look for the second part but I won't make a run for it