Review: Good story, poor grammatical tenses
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 20, 2012
Good 1st try. The story was entertaining & I liked the characters, for the most part. The guys could be a bit TOO domineering & I wanted to smack them around a few times and then give the heroine a wake-up slap to the head as well.Despite some rather, minor, character issues, the story was fairly good. It was a bit choppy in grammatical tense changes & the author seemed to have issues with present/past & present perfect/past perfect. At first I thought it might have been typo's but no. She continued to have the same problem through out the book. It almost seemed like she couldn't quite determine what voice she wanted to speak in and that is distracting beyond belief. I'd just come across one such issue and try to get back into the story & it would appear again.