Review: Once again lots of editing problems
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2014
Usually editing problems dont get me down.  I can handle using I instead of me and all those other rules.  The things that I can't deal with are errors that make you stop reading to figure out what is being said.  Once again the problem I have with this author are the simple things - as instead of was.  All of my issues would go away even if she had a friend read it to at least correct the big ones.I will say that I enjoy the story line and her ability to tell the story is good.  Please find someone to read it before publishing