Review: Lack of editing makes for a difficult read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 25, 2014
Ms. Polos has an interesting story to tell, but grammar and editing problems made for a painful read. A little editing would make for much better flow and enhance the story. The writing level was lower than high school. Understanding these challenges, the story is interesting.  The paranormal elements were not typical, i.e., wailing ghosts, etc., and appeared more demonic. She and her family certainly had a tragic life.Writing 2Editing 2Characterization 3Storyline 4Value for the Money 3