Review: love sustains and cures all
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2012
The idea of love conquering is typical of, and expected in romances.  For that aspect, readers won't be disappointed.  The overall message follows the genre.The writing ability lacks some of the smooth transitions between scenes that make a romance hold a little tension - even when predictible.  The flow is somewhat choppy in parts with jumps of thought with stilted or bad pacing in some parts.  The idea is similar to many done, just not as well done.  Still, not horrible attempt.Issues :I marked 42 locations which had errors related to grammar, punctuation or story consistency issues.  It needs a repass for editing.It is not bad, not great.  Some who care nothing for believability or mechanics in story telling may enjoy this short.Christine