Review: Look elsewhere for dialogue!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2014
The author chose to use the protagonists endless, page-filled thought processes to progress and tell this story, so if you are looking for dialogue or even pages of meaningful conversation between the main characters, it ain't in this book.  I prefer to read a book where both the dialogue and the action of the characters tell the story, I should be the invisible person who occasionally is privy to their thoughts, but they should not be telling me the story. Also, the few instances where they, Lance and Samantha, did talk - the way he talked was a letdown, it was just juvenile. From Sam's thoughts, I was expecting a bit more formality in his speech. I honestly skipped pages, which is a shame cause it wasn't bad. I just need more from a book and this didn't deliver.