Review: Great story!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2012
First, let me say that the author did a fabulous job on crafting a tale with a great story-line and believable characters in just a short space of time! Second, while I thoroughly enjoyed the story, the numerous typos and formatting issues was a little distracting. A few times I found myself wanting to stop reading but the fact that it was a short story, and a good one at that, kept me clicking through to the end. Perhaps, next time, a little more attention to detail will be paid. Also, I felt that the author was a little gratuitous in her use of profanity. I understand that some people feel it's necessary to use it to make their stories more authentic. But sometimes less really is more. It was for those two reasons that I gave the book a 4-rating instead of a five. But if I were judging solely on story-line, hands-down, no doubt, a solid 5!