Review: Loved It!!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 25, 2013
Ok, I just finished Viper's run and was not sure what to expect after reading Razer's Ride.  This was so much better.  I loved Viper and how hard he worked to regain Winter's trust.  The only problem I had is the same problem I had with the Razer's Ride...the writing style.  It seemed a little better in this book, but still needs some work.  It's hard to read a book when all the character's talk like robots.  *SPOILER*  Also, the bad guy in this book was another unknown.  We didn't know him, what he was about, or even why he did what he did.  The same thing happened in Razer's Ride, and it's very hard to get invested in a story that you have no information.  This bad guy just pops up out of no where...and no reason for what he did.  It didn't make sense, and took away from the story.However, I loved the biker chicks from the other MC. They were Kick A**, awesome, and funny!  I liked them a whole lot better then the women who were in the Last Riders.  If it were the 60's or 70's, this wouldn't be a MC Club, it would be a free-love hippie commune...that is all these women do, have sex with the other members, getting indignant when the h says no way does she want to be whore like that.  I totally sided with the h...no way would I want to be a whore like that either.  However, the biker chicks from the other MC are possessive of their men, and will take out anyone who touches them.  Plus, they kicked a**, literally.I am looking forward to reading Shade and Lily's book...keeping my fingers crossed that the robotic word voice is almost gone, and the story more fleshed out. I can see this author growing with each book...and am enjoying it!  :-)