Review: a good book
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2013
This was a fun read,but it needed more or better  editing. often a charchter would repeat it's self, for example,Phinnigan sat down."Take a seat." said Asher. Phinnigan sat down.I came across things like this in the story quite a lot, but besides that, this was a very good book. The author has potential, he just needs a better editor.