Review: Poor Writing, grammar, etc., little plot, trite -
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2014
Sorry, I hate writing bad reviews, but this aspiring author needs to drastically hone her skills, and I suggest joining a writing group and acquiring a group of trusted and qualified reviewers.  From her photos, she appears quite young and so has plenty of time to accomplish this and become a successful author.Besides the quality of the writing there were numerous wrong words used and poor grammar throughout.  Definitely too much tell, Maggie did this, Maggie thought that, Maggie saw, went, felt, blah, blah, blah.  The plot was not much but good enough that if fleshed out and better-written it would make a satisfactory chic-lit light read, which was all I expected.  I finally managed to skim through the entire novella but got tired of marking mistakes.  There was some intentional humor but I got more laughs from some of the mistakes than for the story.