Review: Fantastic Story-But....
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2012
I loved this story. It was moving and had a little bit of everything. BUT, OMG I couldn't believe this was released to the public without editting. Seriously! What 10 year old let this pass their desk without serious red penciling?  There wasn't 1 sentence that didn't have an error of some kind.  And make up your mind, is it Muira or Muria. Appalling! That said, this would have never passed with a D- in Composition Writing Class due to the extensive errors, but I did like the story and on that merit alone I gave it 4 stars because I couldn't reward a 5 due to the lack of edit. Read the next in the series though: Another Lifetime.  Still had some errors-but by far better in that department though not in content.  It takes place 30 years later.  Shorter @ 229 in comparison to the 564 pages of this book, but worth the read.