Review: Shows promise
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 25, 2012
This story would have been great... if the author had bothered to edit it. I'm not usually one to harp on a few mistakes, but it happens so frequently that it REALLY pulls the reader out of the story. I found a mistake on just about every page. Unfortunately, I feel that these small tales could have pulled me into the author's full length novel, but I found myself too annoyed to consider it. If the author is reading this... PLEASE EDIT!! Your work shows great potential!