Review: what a relief it's over
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2014
I keep hoping for improvement. The premise is good but the way the story was written was so prosaic. It's lifeless. It's like listening to a bored husband and wife. It's like reading an essay written by a teenager. Even the dialog is so childish. Not much depth.To you, potential reader? Don't even bother.