Review: Great story for a first draft
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2013
Love the story. But man you just can't trust spell check. The wrong words kept popping up. The character names were not consistent either. You don't have to have professional editing but find a retired school teacher, give them a hardcopy or a pdf and let them correct it. This could be a classic if you straighten it out.