Review: Fluff-less
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2011
Actually this is one of the better romances out there because it lacks the fluff.Jane's crazy about her childhood friend Lance but for some time, he's excluded her from his life while he hangs out with the "cool" crowd.  Now he's asking for her help in transforming him from the nerd that he is so that he can ask pretty Tiffany to the prom.  Jane's heart sinks but to spend time with him, she tells him she'll do it.  When they go out looking for "cool" clothes for him, he treats Jane to lunch and she sees that as a date.  He still brings up Tiffany and her heart drops.  At what point will she tell him "Enough is enough" or declare her feelings for him?Romance writers would do well to follow the lead here and be original.  Limit the fluff.  And by all means, nix the dead parent sob story.Ya, 4 stars for originality.  And decent story.