Review: I was mystified by this story.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 26, 2011
Everyone that's reviewed this story at this point has given it 5 stars and rave reviews. Maybe there's something wrong with me but I found it a bit lacking. I figured out the bad guy pretty early (despite it looking like it was someone else). I did find it charming for Daniel to call his organic brain dysfunction "George." It helped him cope with his new brain limitations. The fact that the brilliant student was felled by an organical problem, in fact, this was the most poignant part of the story. While I appreciated the unconditional acceptance of Daniel by Jesse, I wish there had been more of their relationship portrayed. I realize the mystery was of primary importance but I would have liked more refelection about the characters and what made them so compatible. Yes, there's an HEA but I think the story ended too soon.