Review: Really more like 3 and 1/2
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2013
First of all, Ms. Gale has a good writing style insofar as plotting, developing characters and dialogue is concerned. However, her grammar and punctuation could use work, there were words missing and words that didn't fit into the sentences, and there are several malapropisms that had me chuckling. She really could benefit from finding a better editor. They just don't teach English like they used ter!Sample Malapropisms:"listen to what was usually a bunch of dribble." I think she means drivel; I don't think you can really listen to dribble, although you can certainly see it!"will illicit this response." This one made me laugh. I think the proper word is elicit, as in draw out. Last I checked, illicit was an adjective not a verb, as in illicit sex materials on your computer.Anyway, that aside, I enjoyed the way Ian and Jace dominated Callie. However, I wonder why so many of these books seem to rush into anal sex first thing. That takes quite a bit of trust and would not be one of the first things someone I didn't know very well would do to me if he didn't want me to safe word and make it a hard limit.Ms. Gale has created some interesting characters, and I think I see lots of sequel possibilities. The Navy Seals are really getting a workout as Doms, though, since they became recognized heros after some of their War on Terror exploits have become public. With all the authors who are jumping on this bandwagon, I think there are more fictional Navy Seal Doms than there are actual active Seals. They are right up there with the billionaires! But they definitely deserve recognition far more than most billionaires.Back on the subject of this book, it's not bad. I would have given it a better rating if it was easier to read without getting hung up trying to understand the poor grammar and editing errors.Please, please get a better editor for your next effort, Ms. Gale! You would have a much better product.