Review: A little too abrupt for my wife's tastes.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2013
Review from my wife.She felt it was a little too short to be able to fully explore the ideas and twists presented, and that the length made some of the background feel too leading, and some of the twists too abrupt. She said that some parts seemed disconnected from others (Her example was when the main character sees the doll, no sign of recognition, and then, when questioned later, states his recognition. She said it made it feel as though the earlier part was not written as deeply into his point of view as the sections before and after it, when he was concerned for his child, and handling the interrogation.)She enjoyed the fast pace, and the unpredictability of the story, and said it was well edited and had a lot of potential. She was concerned over the effect the twists had on the pacing, and the disconnected nature of some of the details.