Review: There needs to be a lot more to this.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2011
Everly Drummond, <strong>Inked</strong> (Amazon Digital Services, 2011)Erotic-romance quickie from Drummond. Most of what I would say here has been said in a number of other reviews (too short [14pp.], not enough detail/character development, the female lead makes ludicrous decisions, etc.), so pretty much all I'm doing here is adding my voice to the chorus. Made longer, given some character development (WHY does the female lead make these ludicrous decisions?), this could be something good. As of now, it feels like a very rough first draft. **