Review: Too many !!!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2014
Just finished Hearts Afire.  I am glad this was free.  The story was okay, the dialogue had too many exclamation points.  It was hard to follow the conversations because of them.  Also, the end of the book seemed really rushed.  I mean, they went from mild flirting on the island, to Jack sleeping with his "friend with benefits" friend (at about 50% into the book), to a rushed let's date, no, let's get married.  Also, there was a lot build of about Carla, Jack's best friends fiancé that was trying to sleep with Jack.  That whole plot line just went away.  What was the point of the build up?  Disappointed.