Review: Good story line with a desperate need of English 101
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2013
This author has something to offer the world but is in desperate need of learning how to put these words in proper sentence structure, using hyphenation, typing and spelling. I am wondering if her computer has spell check on it. Alarms, bells and whistles should have gone off in her head as well as the editor or proof reader. Paragraphs start with a capitalize word and it continues to go on and on till it stops. All most every third word is hyphenated, there are no periods, comas placed properly, semi-colons when needed, etc. This is very distracting BUT please try to get past it because the story is good.I gave her a 3 because of the story. It had enough to offer the price of the book; it was entertaining and that is what I was looking for. I read paranormal for entertainment which once I blocked out the poor English 101 I was able to be entertained so for that this author earned the 3 rating.