Review: Almost a4 star book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 8, 2014
I really wanted to give this four stars. It was a good concept with a plausible storyline and believable characters. It was the editing that killed it for me. Unfinished sentences, switching present tense and past tense in the same sentence, dialogue was chaotic at times and misspelled words. It was just too many distractions from the story. Some of the paragraphs were so disjointed I couldn't tell what was happening or who was talking. With better editing this could be a good book. The plot is relevant in today's society. There are many lessons to be taken from the characters. Drunk driving, living with consequences, drug abuse and learning to accept love. It was all there hidden in that sloppy editing. I don't regret reading it but if bad editing ruins a book for you then I would skip this one.