Review: Editing, Editing, Editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2014
This would be a good book if someone would edit it.  It also needed more background.  It was very  hard to keep track of who was who, especially in the beginning.  The characters were good, the premise was good, but there were waaaaayyy too many errors in grammar, punctuation, and discontinuity.