Review: ~!~ This romance ends at 74%...but at least it has an HEA ~!~
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2014
This story has potential, with a little work. First, it needs editing/proofreading. I can overlook the occasional mistake here and there, but this story just has too many.Second, the situations that we find the H and h in start out as typical and go with the flow of the book, and then I find that they increase until I find myself saying: "REALLY???"Third, the book ends at only 74% on my Kindle. Frankly, I feel cheated. I paid for this book and when it ends and the last 26% of what I paid for are promotional excerpts for the authors other books, that makes me angry. I shouldn't have to pay for advertising. Put in links that I can click on should I choose to look at her other books and then I would know how many pages of actual story content I am getting!I will end my little rant by letting you all know that this book does end with a nice HEA. Thank goodness for that!