Review: Less detail, more emotion, please.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
I enjoy erotic & this had plenty of those scenes, but I just couldn’t get into it.  The two guys were aliens with wings that had been altered on their home planet.  During one sex scene, when the heroine was asking them questions about how their bodies worked, one of the guys said jokingly that she just couldn’t turn her brain off.  In the same way, I wanted to say to the author, “Stop telling me and let me feel.”The book had plenty of sex, but for some reason I just couldn’t get into it.  I actually fell asleep reading one of the sex scenes and I wasn’t particularly tired. I just found them difficult to stay focused on.  The dream scene at the beginning was the best part; maybe because in a dream the author didn’t feel she had to describe all the mechanics of their bodies.