Review: Good But Could Be Better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2012
Not truly a fan of 3rd person/1st person storytelling's, this story seemed a bit 1st person introspective at times and therefore slowed in pace when I could have had less description for my senses and more leeway for my imagination. The heroine is a quintessential young adult concerned with self-gratification and materialistic pursuits in many ways but as a coming of common-sense tale she races responsibility to the finish. But seems too easily to relinqish or surrender her character's initially marked independence and this felt forced.It is possible more incidential meetings with a few indepth characters would provide the basis for the rather abrupt character developments and shifts with more clarity of the emotional character she seemed at the onset of the story, overall a good first book from an author with potential.6 out of 10 Bookends