Review: great debut
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
This book is a 3 1/2 for me only because I felt like I was on one of those rides at the fair where you start really slow and jerky then you go really fast then go slow and jerky again. Since this is a debut novel I did enjoy it more than I had thought I would.The story was great in some parts and drug on in others. For the length of the novel I felt there was to much build up and not enough action and then the ending just happened. It started out slow and Moses and Max were all business and this took up most of the first half of the book. Then came the relationship which lasted a couple of days and then the ending (which I won't give away here).I think King has the potential to take her writing and make a very exciting story if she would keep the pace the same all through the book. If she wants a fast paced book then make the whole book fast paced and if she wants to take it slow and build up the characters then by all means take it slow. That's only my opinion though however I did enjoy reading it and I just might try the next one as well.