Review: The story didn't deliver on the sample's promise.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 4, 2014
The sample drew me in, and was excited for what was to come - however what I got wasn't as good as I had hoped. The potential was  all there, but then things started to feel rushed and things were disjointed. I had to read back a couple times to u understand what was going on with some of the POV switches. The  ending didn't give me much closure, an  it felt forced.