Review: Who Edited this Book?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 30, 2012
I'm glad I didn't spend money on this book. I read it on a friend's kindle. And yes, I'm glad that I didn't spend money.  The story was unoriginal.  The hero was boring.  There were cliche sayings and the same old thing happening over and over again.  It wasn't realistic.  The woman, Andie, or was it Angie, since she was called both, doesn't want Gray.  Then she does. But she resists some more and finally just gives it all up.  I was so annoyed with her.  Andie or Angie also "imagined how Gray was in bed." Gray "imagined how Andie or Angie was in bed."  Characters continuously "popped mints/food in their mouths."  Can we get some creativity please?Don't even get me started on typos and grammar.  Call me crazy but shouldn't an author proofread their book before publishing?