Review: Good Storyline
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
TORN begins exactly where TAKEN left off as tormented Mikhal attempts to prove himself as a man who loves Alliana and can control his beast. Since I'd read TAKEN (the first in the series), I was prepared for Ms. Raymond's many POV changes. The typos, formatting issues, misspellings, incorrect word choices (quite when it should be quiet) etc., were still present and in full force.However, a curious thing happened. Since Ms. Raymond writes in multiple POVs, I found myself very interested in two secondary characters, Natalya and Lucian. The growing sexual tension between them not only held my interest, but I looked forward to reading about them almost more than Alliana and Mikhal. Most authors would've kept Natalya's and Lucian's story for another series, but not Ms. Raymond. I almost feel guilty because it's like I'm getting two books for the price of one.Extensive introspection throughout the book occurs just like in TAKEN and several scenes could have been shortened to increase the pacing and action. To compensate, I skimmed through some passages. But for all the hiccups, I remained interested in the storylines. Editing can be learned, but the ability to write an intriguing book that holds a reader's attention requires a great imagination and an innate ability not everyone can master. Although I so wish Ms. Raymond would find a proper copy editor, I'm anxious to read TREASURED to learn how Alliana and Mikhal fare as parents while Natalya and Lucian struggle to deny growing (and inappropriate) feelings toward one another.Please remember, you must be willing to overlook the editing issues and multiple POV changes. If you cannot then I'm not sure if you'll enjoy the book. But if you can, the day might pass you by as you lose yourself within the storylines of these intriguing characters.Focused. Strong. True.