Review: edit much? apparently not
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2012
i couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. it opens with a sex scene with two guys. the author mixes up their names repeatedly. i took this as a bad omen and decided not to read on. for crying out loud if you are screwing up that early on there can't be much hope for the rest of the book.