Review: Could have been better & too short
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 3, 2013
It was a bit clunky & cliched. & then when i was starting to generate a minimal level of interest... bang its finished... hmmm i think if you're going to give the first one away, make it a full book. it gives the author a better chance to tell a story & allows us to get more engaged, if we can... it wasn't nearly good enough to make me want to actually go onto the next one.