Review: A nice short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2014
I enjoyed this short story immensely.  The depiction of the torn emotions from the main character are vivid and moving.  I do think that it should have been carried through just a little further to hook your audience enough so that they would want to continue to follow the story.  And I thought the bootlicking scene should have been better described.  Obviously the ring masters boots would have been covered with dust and they would not have tasted good at all.  And of course while I liked the idea that she was forced to lick his boots I wanted it to be a humiliating and terrible experience.