Review: Sex is hot, plot kind of an eyeroller
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2013
Without getting too spoilery, I'll just say that with this short story you're getting some hot sex between two strong-willed and dirty mouthed mains sandwiched between a rather cliched set-up and a silly twist at the end.Given that the payoff was ALL in the sex, I wish the author had spent a bit longer on the parts that worked.  Just as I was getting into it, it was over.