Review: wanted to love it
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 5, 2013
Was thinking other reviewers were being a bit harsh about the grammar and poor editing but it was really bad enough it made it hard to follow. Lot of repetition and over detailed on things not really important, such as lunch...she took out the bread...etc. The concept and plot were interesting enough to make me want to get to the end,  but as another reviewer said,  I found myself flipping through many pages just to finish it.