Review: Eternal Breath of Darkness
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2012
As much as I hate to say it, I have to agree with P. Ward. Caylee's yo-yoing went on for far too long and got rather annoying. And then bam. She's okay with everything. I do like all the male characters and would like to see where the author takes them. The demon/dragon powers were awesome.  There were some hot lovin' scenes. I just hope next time things aren't so repetitive. As for editing, it seemed worse in the second half of the book.