Review: Just didn't work for me
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2013
Erica is a mechanic and has to go pick up Drew when his Ferrari breaks down in the middle of nowhere. Erica runs the shop her dad left her when he died and she is trying to keep it from going under. Drew is a spoiled brat who is used to getting everything handed to him. Turns out Drew is a witch and is from a powerful family. His mom cuts him off and lists him as a "rogue witch" there by giving other witches the opportunity to hunt and kill him. He is trying to figure out what to do when other witches start showing up. In the meantime, Erica tries to help him out and give him a place to stay.Erica was annoying. Her main story is that she is overweight and has body image issues. I hate this in a story line and I wish there would have been a description that read "this chick hates her body and will complain about it for 80% of the book." Erica is insecure in herself, but wouldn't you know it magically at the end of the book she's completely okay with everything.Drew is a giant Dbag with a tiny d*ck. I get that in a book the main guy can redeem himself... but you can't come back from a midget c*ck. Drew is spoiled and selfish and keeps calling himself a "playboy." If I ever read the word playboy again it will be too goddamn soon. Drew's attitude does change and he does redeem himself, but I spent so much of the book hating his sorry a$$ that I couldn't just change my mind about him in the end.The sex in this book isn't the worst I've read. There are three scenes I think, and for 140 pages they are pretty detailed. I was just so over Erica's insecurities and Drew's ego that I couldn't enjoy the sex no matter how hot it was. Plus he had a baby d*ck so I wasn't getting off on it.I think if this book had left out the whole witch story and just done a normal one I might have gotten more into it. I don't dislike paranormal, but it felt like there wasn't enough time for the author to fully explain what was happening on top of their love story. I think if the body issues would have been thrown out this book would have improved immensely. As it stands, I couldn't identify with any character and I never felt any sympathy or connections. Don't waste your time.Mistress L