Review: I'm done...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2014
The title was misleading. This was a lousy love story. I think this was a free ebook... thank God for that. I read love stories for their HEAs. This author's name for me will be synonymous with books to avoid. See I could chalk it up to the author feeling their way around as a writer, but this story had so many opportunities to improve itself but it just seemed the writer was determined to avoid the plots and dialogue to make it really good but instead they chose to dummy down the girl with stupid indecisiveness. Even Eve Rabi's books of depressing, humiliated, and pathetic heroines that win out in the end are better than this mis-titled wannabe love tale. The only thing correct is he gets a dishonorable discharge. A love story? Not. It was kind of confusing trying to see where the writer was going for the lead female's love interest. So my disappointment is a 'hated It'.I realize this is a lengthly comment, but I initially I stayed well past my bedtime to finish reading this LOVE STORY. I had blind faith that this ebook would end as all love stories should... 'my bad'. Now I have to read another ebook to literally wash out my brain of this one.  To the author of any future ebooks, if it's to be a love story it should kind of represent the title or at least the genre.