Review: Plan fell short in execution..
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2014
I just finished the book, but had to write the review.. not for the best of reasons though.  I am a big girl too and I can see what the heroine was going through.The story seemed rushed.  The story had potential but fell short of expectations.  I wish I had read the other reviews prior to purchasing it, but..oh well.Except for looking good and falling for the heroine, we dont know anything about him at all.  The story was not well rounded.  May be the author could've taken longer to polish the story.  Whats with the heroine's best friend?  The banter between them was, I am sorry to say, boring.It fell flat while reading.We get it.  The heroine cannot believe the hero could fall for her.. how many times would it have to be said.  There was more tell than show in the story.  Even though the ending seemed kinda rushed, I was glad that it was over.  If this story is re-written with more thought and substance, I would read it again.  Why was the hero's ex never mentioned as a fiancee I wonder.. I would have liked to see that girl eat her words back.  The hero never confronted his ex about her affair.  Overall it was as if the author was so excited to have written the story without making an effort to read it as a finished product to make the necessary tweaks.