Review: Wasted money
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 14, 2012
The book appears to have been written by a twelve year old and edited by his little brother. Mixing modern terminology (like "multitasking") and and this genre of fantasy creates a recipe for disaster. The characters are unbelievable and poorly evolved. The plot is typical for the genre as are the characters. The writing lacks the skill to set the book apart from being just a rehash of various fantasy novels. Some of the problems of the book may just be a lack of proof-reading, such as appearing to use adjectives as nouns. A good writer's group might actually be able to help the author turn the book into something readable.