Review: The Wolf Who Loved Her
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 7, 2012
PLOT: When Joni and Ian meet, there's an immediate attraction. But he's a werewolf alpha and he doesn't date humans.PROS: It's well written. The sex is fire hot.CONS: Because it is so well written for the most part, the mistakes are more glaring. There are instances of head hopping from one paragraph to the next. And there's odd word usage. Like where the auther says that Joni has a smile "splattered" across her face. Just odd.Ian decides that she's his mate from one meeting to the next. It didn't come off as convincing.Joni suddenly discovering that she was a witch wasn't believable.More character development wouldn't hurt.3 STARS: It needs to be just a bit longer so that the story unfolds in a more credible manner.