Review: Enjoyable short read, too much exposition
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2014
I liked the meat of the story. The idea and concept were good. The writing was also okay. But there's just too much backstory, infodumping, exposition, call it whatever you want. The protagonist attempts to explain everything to me, like I'm sitting there and he's telling me a story instead of me being inside his head. I suppose without it, the story would be too short so the author attempted to beef up the word count. Unfortunately, this work out to be a detriment to the pacing of the story.I enjoyed it. I just wish it was paced a little better.