Review: Ok for a free preview of what could be =)
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 22, 2013
I got this really short story for free and that is what it should be...like an appetizer to get you interested in what could be. I would not ever pay 2.99 for a ten minute short story but I think this one could have potential if it was expanded and made into a full length book to show what would have happened after the encounter, especially with her and her roommate. I can understand a preacher's daughter wanting to take a walk on the wild side but this was only a preview and we need to see/read more than what we got. An ok start though =)