Review: Not quite sure how I feel about this one
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 13, 2012
The characters were not fleshed out and the dialogue was very wooden.  Oh, and the kid sounded too much like an adult to sound like a kid.  I liked the concept but I think it needs a little more work.  Two stars because there is something about this story I liked although I can't put my finger on it.