Review: Weak 3 stars.  It kept my interest, but I was annoyed.  Careless writing.  Some stupidity.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 20, 2014
In four scenes I was confused and frustrated, and kind of angry at the author.  The author was not clear about what was happening.1.  B (bad guy)  G (good guy)  F(Friend):  They are talking when all of a sudden B pulls a gun and shoots G.  Then F walks up behind B, and B falls over.  What happened?  Was B shot?  If so who shot him - G or F?  Or did F hit B with something?  Later we are told B was killed.2.  G is hiding in F’s remote cabin like in witness protection.  F brings his family to the cabin to join them for a visit.  Bad guy arrives in the middle of the night.  F walks outside to see who it is and gets shot or hurt or something.  We don’t know what happened to F.  Later F gets up and helps G, then F collapses.  That whole scene was too vague.  Also it was stupid.  I don’t know if G told F about the danger, but he should have, and that would have made F more careful - do not walk outside when killers might be coming.3.  Autistic boy almost never speaks.  But in the final major crisis he says “Free Twenty-one” to wake up G when a bad guy arrives.  What did Free Twenty One mean?  It wasn’t explained.4.  In the final scene with the killer, I wanted more details about how he went down.  I wanted to see his resistance efforts and what part of his body was shot.I mention stupidity in item 2.  But there is more.  When the cop is running and hiding from a killer, you’d think the cop would keep his gun nearby.  But he doesn’t.  When he needs his gun he can’t get to it because it’s locked in a drawer in another room.What was good?  I liked the psychic thing going on between the two main characters.  They could talk to each other mentally.DATA:Narrative mode: 3rd person.  Kindle count length: 5,153  (314 pages).  Swearing language: moderate including religious swear words, but rarely used.  Sexual language: none.  Number of sex scenes: 4.  Setting: current day mostly Washington and California.  Copyright: 2011.  Genre: romantic suspense with a little paranormal.