Review: 5 Star Story, 3 Star Quality
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 13, 2013
This is a fantastic and unqiue story, different from what is currently out there, but lacking in quality. The characters are well developed and really pull you in to their stories. The story flows well and moves quickly, and is an ok length for the price.  I think that this author has huge potential, BUT needs to invest in professional editing. The tense constantly changes from past to present throughout the book, there are obvious spelling errors and misuse of words throughout also. With a little bit a research on sentence structure and the correct way to write dialouge along with a good editor this author has what it takes to be great!