Review: The story rocked in any century, but the search for an editor goes on...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2013
Where to begin? "The Crusader?" Well, as the prequel, it was good, but "Kingdom Come" was great! What wasn't to like? The editing! For such a well-thought out story, I was very disappointed at the effort that went into polishing up the story and making it a seamless read. As the reader, I invest my time and often, my money, into a story, and I would like the author to value that time and money, and provide a worthy product that not only embodies thought, but execution. When one takes the time to build characters that are as rich as Rory and Kieran, one should exercise the same commitment to the refinement of the prose.Having expressed my feelings, I will not provide spoilers for this book, since it's better to approach it without bias. Suffice it to say, that the tale is a rich love story that defies the boundaries of time. Read "The Crusader", first, then read this book, and if you want to smack Rory more than a few times, you'll be in good company!This book is recommended highly, with the aforementioned reservations.