Review: It was ok..
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 2, 2013
status updates:30.0%  "Why make such a big deal about condoms if your just going to forgo them the next day?"45.0%  "I'm sensing insta-love here and I really hope the story gets better, this seems a bit cliche for me, definitely the same story line used many times before..."Review:***slight spoiler alert***I must say it was ok. There were definitely some writing issues/editing issues from me. In the first few chapters I found the writing kind of weird in the sense that it was written in present tense but used passed tense words at times as well (this got better later in the book but there was still some confusion with American terminology, this is not something that bothers me though, just thought i'd mention it).Ok to the actual story, like I mentioned in my update, the story wasn't original for me (probably because I am an avid reader). I usually rate my books with the additional question of: Will I re-read this book? The answer: No. This isn't the type of book that will stick with me.Let me try to explain why. The characters, I don't think there was enough actual character development for me to fully connect with them, I can't pinpoint what exactly was missing. It seemed as if the question to all their problems was sex. I think half the book was just sex. Then there was the whole condom situation, it was just obvious she was going to get pregnant. The whole Hawke situation I found ridiculous and unnecessary. The fact that Ryan wasn't extremely upset she kept the pregnancy from him, and he had to leave in the middle of the game when he could have gone before or after? (It's not like he found out about it in the middle of the game).Anyway, hopefully that helps, as for a cliffhanger, the story is not confirmed to have finished as at the end it is mentioned there will be one written in Ryan's POV.