Review: Okay, Leaves You Hanging
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2014
This isn't a badly written story, even with a misused word here and there.  I did have an issue with a character confessing to his buddy that he's gay and in the very next breath pleading for sex with him. I just couldn't quite buy into the abruptness of it. For free it's an okay read; at the suggested price of 99 cents it would be disappointing since the story cuts off at a dramatic moment. As a stand alone story it would be a rip-off. It's obviously meant to interest readers in parts 2 and 3 which sell for $2.99 and aren't very long for the price. While there's nothing wrong with serializing a novel, the writer has to give value in exchange for selling portions of a book in order to keep the reader hooked. Part 1 here isn't wonderful enough to inspire me to buy the next installments, especially when there are whole novels available for free or 99 cents that are much better.