Review: Good first attempt, but needs work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2013
Since I could find no other book by this author I'm assuming it was her first work? I think it was a good first try, BUT......Although she created two great characters in Jake and Ivy, she did not deliver an amazing love story.Too much emphasis on the sex part of the relationship. Too much they both knew they were meant for each other from the start. Not enough conflict for me. Isolation in that basically it was just them throughout whole book as if the rest of the world did not exist. Needs a better editor and a thesaurus. Spelling mistakes, jumping from what feels like an unfinished scene to the next, inconsistencies, fast ending, and if she wrote that the heroine "rolled onto her toes" to kiss hero one more time I was going to gag.So good first attempt but ultimately unsatisfying and forgettable.