Review: Not Bad :)
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2014
How to review this one..... Well, I liked the premise of the story, I liked the sequence of events (though I still can't figure out why that frying pan was just sitting there waiting to be used - hubby offered a possible reason, so I've kinda accepted that one, lol). The writing, though, needs some polishing. For me, this reads a bit rushed, if you get what I mean? I feel like the author skimmed through a few bits quickly to get to what they thought were the more fun parts, when even just an extra sentence here and there would make a big improvement.There is definite potential here, though, so I wouldn't mind reading something else by the author.