Review: Great plot ... Needs a Bit More Craft
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 21, 2012
Description: When Assistant DA, Wynter King, finds herself being hunted down by a mob boss, she turns to her ex-fiance, Crowe Hanson. But can she take shelter with him without losing her heart to him all over again?The Good: This novella is well-plotted, and I love that the heroine is a strong woman with career ambitions. It was a very satisfying and complete read. I didn't even remember that it was technically a novella until I sat down to write this review.The Bad: Though the narrative was tight, other craft points weren't quite there yet. The story as a whole suffered from stilted dialogue and clumsily-written action, which at times made it hard to understand what was happening during the higher-octane scenes.The Naughty: Erotic.Editing issues: 2 typos found.Publisher: Sugar and Spice PressLength: NovellaFinal Grade: B-Happy Reading,Theodora from irbookreviews.com