Review: Good writing, but WEAK female characters...Women are stronger & smarter than this!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2014
This is my first Dylan Cross read, and although I understood it would be erotica, I was disappointed that the women were so vunerable and apparently brainless. This is why it gets 2 stars instead of 3 or 4. I just can't fathom any time in life when there's a legit excuse to take such abuse from a pervert? That really rubbed me wrong. Women I know are too smart to get into such an awful situation, especially with all the alternatives. I also disliked the lack of female bonds. Each time a new roomie was coaxed into becoming a roomate to help pay accelerated rent, newbie was thrown under the bus to take the brunt of the crude and creepy landlord's sexual molestation. Women need to stick together these days. When the pervert upped the rent, she should have found some other place to stay, not bring in more friends to share the sexual abuse. It's 2014 and there are alternatives, which made this story seem quite sad, especially if younger, impressionable girls read this. Let's give ladies hope and strength by making female characters strong enough to battle any situation. Girls I know would never be stupid enough to deal with this - and if they were into sexual erotica, they'd become hookers for a variety of appealing men, instead of consenting to a despicable, unattractive, brutal landlord.Please note, I will try another Dylan Cross short (this one took 5 minutes to read), because it was well-written. My idea of super sexy erotica is when all partners involved are consenting adults.