Review: Disappointed in basic english grammar errors
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 5, 2012
"Why are you jealous?"Why, are you jealous?The two sentences have completely different meanings.  Errors like this occur on almost every other page of the book.  Punctuation is easy. You don't need to have a masters degree to understand it, more like 4th grade English.  It may seem minor, but it occurred too often. Even the misuse of the word "to" and "too" happened throughout the book.  Question marks missing, characters verbiage in the wrong paragraphs.  Its a great story that needs to be edited correctly. I haven't felt this strongly about a book, ever, to write a review on grammar like this. Terrible. I don't care how many 'Italian' words are thrown at the readers, if you don't have a basic concept of English, have someone who know it well review the book. I'm lucky to give it a 3 star, and that was for the content.  Otherwise, it would be a One Star. If it was well edited, I would have went with 4-5 stars.