Review: Couldn't finish...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 1, 2013
I got this book after seeing so many 5 star reviews. However, this book needs some work in order to be better. I couldn't even get through the book because of the many issues that popped up. First, the book needs a copy editor--there are a lot of punctuation issues. Second, the dialogue sophistication should be amped up. Third, the book should add a bit more originality to the story. Everyone knows the plot of ordinary girl becomes extraordinary through the development of powers and is now key to saving the world, but all the time trying to avoid capture by the others. So, if you are going to do that typical plot, you need to add some new dimension to it--make it exciting. Fourth, the main character needs to get a clue. No one could possibly be that obtuse re:Colton and others. Fifth, characters need to have a reason for being in love. I think a lot of times in books there isn't one, or if so, just related to physical beauty. In short, this book needs some work in order to be great.