Review: Rhyme is off
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 20, 2014
Forced end rhyme example most and ghosts…should have used singular ghost. In some areas the author just decided to toss out rhyming to suite the story line…butterfly and sighed.  There are also lines that makes no since such as.. She soared like a candle alive with the night. And don’t know why she collapsed at the light. The art is not creative, seems to repeat some items over and over, such as patterns on wings have just a color change. Grandkids sat thru it…but I don’t expect them to ask for a reread.