Review: Editing PLEASE!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
I did it anyway after I said I was not going to read another one. This book was slightly better than the last with all its issues but overall I could really see where she was going with the story. It seemed like they were all over the place, way to much going on without enough detail but like I said overall I could see where the author was going. Good job, just take your time and make sure it flows. P.S. If you're paying to have these edited, FIRE them!