Review: Poor story, also needs editor
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2012
Firstly, this is not really a cowboy story.  Secondly, if the main male character, Alex, had spoken to me the way he speaks to the main female character, Angel, he would have got a smack around the face and shown the door!  For Angel to go all gooey eyed because the obnoxious prat chooses to notice her after 20 years of living next door makes me want to give her a good shaking.  I also do not like being distracted from the [poor] story by incorrect use of words (weather instead of whether, new instead of knew) and bad punctuation - semicolons instead of commas, or simply no punctuation, with impossibly long sentences that thus made no sense!