Review: Cute story, steam fizzles, needs an editor
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2010
The general story is cute, the idea of a hotel maid finding love with not one, but two hot men. The steam fizzled about halfway through, which was annoying because it was pretty steamy at first. My greatest complaint is that the author either needs an editor or she really should get her money back from whoever edited it. There were grammatical errors, word choice issues, spelling problems... it was just distracting. It's a promising beginning to this author's career, but I would just prefer that she take the time for some good editing.