Review: Lots of potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2014
To be honest, I was really enjoying this book, but there are two major issues that kept me from offering more stars: 1. The characters' constant fluctuations. How can they not know they are in love? How can they be in love and never talk about children? How can they seemingly share more with friends than with each other? and 2. This book needs some major editing. In the beginning, the errors are minor, but about half way through and toward the end, they are relevant enough to interfere with reading. I'd be happy to help!