Review: good book terrible writing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 6, 2013
Even though you know a story about a shark park what is going to happen this could have been really good. There is a lot of shark violence but it's not too descriptive. The real problem? Take an English class!! Definitively instead of definitely, their instead of there, words left out of sentences...and if one more person said ya instead of yeah or yes!!I believe the word is selachii not salechii?Story was pretty good though. And I will read book 2...Also.... I read this in a kindle so perhaps the problems are with conversion?  I have not seen a paper copy of this book.