Review: Timeline issue
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 30, 2014
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review.I think the main problem I had with this book other than the timeline, was that nobody was  really grieving for the lost of life. I found it just weird that Dare who lost his fiance and became a father at the same time is all alone taking care of a 10 day old newborn  in the beginning of the book. There was not mention of his parents in the book at all. The only family that was mention and on page was his Aunt and Uncle, who were also the adopted parents of his fiance. They were on vacation and didn't seem like they grieve for the daughter they lost. I didn't get how people in his life were encouraging him to move on with life with his deceased fiance brother after few months after her death. How they didn't know he existed was bit of stretch because they been place in foster family before and how could a case worker not mention an exist of another sibling to the parent even if the child themselves refuse mention it ? Overall it was good story and the character was likable but I really wish the story began with them maybe a year or so after wife death.