Review: Dude, where's my editor.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 13, 2013
Okay, so the synopsis and book cover hooked me that's why I decided to read this book. I hear that writing is hard, but WHOA!!! First Grafitto is said like 800 times within the first two pages! Pronouns would be nice. Secondly, yes that sentence structure, grammar, and everything was off. It seriously takes away from the story. I was trying to get into the peanut buttered woman being gutted, but the way I was reading it, I couldn't feel her pain or give a damn about her body.This has the potential to be a great suspense novel, but damn them errors.Just some quick tips:Hit that spell-check at least twice when proofreading.Use to text-to-speech to actually hear how your words sound coming off the pages.Read through itRepublish asap.