Review: Pandering and lost focus from book one
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2014
This series started off delightful and promising, but this second installment feels different.I loved Andrew in book one, even with his arrogance and snark you still liked him. In this installment, he feels like a completely different person and the time lapse is really just days. He was such a sex addicted jerk, I couldn't find any redeemable quality to make me root for him.Aubrey is young and naive, we knew this from book one. Somehow though she seemed pathetic to me in this sequel. Ready to drop to her knees for the almighty Andrew who constantly belittles her and whose single focus is sex with her.This sequel is short, but it felt like all they did was have sex. There was no real movement with the story or his ex-wife or even Andrew and Aubrey's relationship. The abrupt turn between them at the end was a "well, duh" moment. Only in the brief epilogue at the end of the story has any new information or story progression.I feel like the direction the author was moving in the beginning was different, before her immediate success. Now it feels like she is pandering to the brainless mommy porn groupies. Give us a rich a&$hole, make him dominant with lots of "cock" and sex thrown in...#1 hit.Not sure I will keep reading. It's no longer aimed at me, I actually like a story with my "cock".