Review: Wonderful!!!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2014
I love the story of Chelsea and Xander. There is no denying that it started as very intense sexual attraction between two people afraid of serious relationships. Breathe For Me is sexy, fun, heart-warming, and surprising. Natalie Anderson knows how to write heat, love and genuine emotion. The story was believable, not too much drama and just enough passion. I laughed, I cried, I rejoiced. Loved it!!!All that said - the story is five stars and beyond but I'd like to note to non-American authors - if you are writing a story that takes place in America and the characters are Americans, for the love of literature, please use words Americans use. It didn't ruin the story for me, but it was distracting. Americans don't ride lifts, we ride elevators. We don't use words like bloody or jolly. We don't ask people, "How are you getting on?" and we don't "get up to" things. We don't live in the big smoke, we live in the big city. Rarely do our men call us "love" or "darling" - they say "babe" or "baby." We don't go on holiday, we go on vacation. We don't go to university, we go to college.  And for the sake of all things sexy, we don't wear knickers - we wear panties.  That's all.