Review: Grammar mistakes interrupt the flow and bring down its enjoyment factor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 27, 2012
I can't emphasize this enough - bad grammar can absolutely ruin a book for me.This writer has massive difficulties with pronouns. She is constantly mixing up the use of him/himself, she/herself, he/him, she/her, and I/me.It is like hitting a brick wall when this happens, taking the reader completely out of the flow of what is otherwise a pretty decent book.I'd advise she either get an editor with a grammatical background or some grammar lessons.