Review: I Want More
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2012
This is a solid series. I came back this morning looking for more titles in the series, and was thoroughly disappointed that there weren't any.I love the characters (especially Geo) and their development is solid; the plots are entertaining, too. One point of confusion stems from Sloane's age, when comments are made about having a houseful of kids because we know she has already gone to her 20th high school reunion. That seemed a little off to me, since if she's already 38, it's unlikely she's going to be able to have more than one or two kids which is then not a house-full, in my opinion.Past that, there is the editing. It could benefit from more. There are some basic errors where possessives are concerned and those for me always take away from the overall.I'm especially put off when there are long thanks to book clubs and numbers of beta readers and a book is still riddled with errors. That's not the case here, but if you've been reading any of my other reviews, you'll know that I will usually really dock a review for errors. This is also my first review for a title that I'm not reviewing for a publisher, so that also reflects how much I like this series. If it weren't for the grammatical errors, I would have given it a 5.I, personally, don't mind more than one perspective in a book, nor do large words bother me. But the grammar always gets me........... if you can read past those for good plot and lovable characters, you will probably really enjoy this series.