Review: Confused and  irritated
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
I have several words for the author ~ PLOT, EDIT and GRAMMER.  None of these were done properly. The idea behind the book was good and perhaps a little too lofty for in inexperienced writer but a good editor would have made the book at least look less like it was penned by a junior high story teller.  My suggestion is go back to the drawing board, redo the structure of the book and for heaven's sake hire a good editor who knows their from there and can at least not leave out words in the sentences.Good try but no cigar!