Review: Great Story Line, But Had Other Issues
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2012
I enjoyed this book due to the story line and the action.  The story seemed choppy in some areas and did not flow as well as other parts.I understood what the author was trying to portray regarding Carl's attitude and disposition towards everyone else.  He was a loner, didn't want to be bothered and had had enough of society.  He only wanted to be responsible to himself.  Then his world is turned upside down with three new people coming into his life.  An arrogant 14 year old who only has eyes for the porn star, his sister, and of course, Jesse, the 'actor.'The plane crash incident was a little unbelievable with two people surviving, however, it doesn't ruin the story.  One has to tend to overlook some of this in a fiction novel and go with the direction it's taking you.At about 60% on my Kindle, it seemed as though the author was either rushing, or was getting tired from typing, because a multitude of typing errors became very prevalent, even though some existed throughout the book.  Numerous words missing or out of place, punctuation missing or used improperly, etc, etc. It really becomes frustrating when the reader (well, at least for myself) has to interrupt their flow of reading to try and figure out what is being said, or to inject the 'right' word into the text to make it "make sense."The author does need an editor, or at least he needs to take the time to proof read his own work.