Review: Very good, but weak ending.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2013
This was a suspenseful short story that had a reasonable premise.  It read well and kept me turning pages to a disappointing ending.  Others may not agree with me, but I found it a shame to have such a good story dissolve in its final pages.  Because of the beginning and middle, I gave it a reluctant four stars.