Review: Don't blink or you might miss the conflict...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 25, 2012
The story starts when the H comes back to town after he had abandoned his family and his supposed love of his life 10 years ago.  My problem with the story is the same everyone else had.  That same day, wait..no...that same hour that he returns, he is already having sex with the h.  I am not exaggerating.  There is a point where one of the characters tells the H, "get ready to grovel" which made no sense since the h went from throwing a wrench at the H to having sex with him in less than a page.  She put up even less resistance to him taking up with the h as if nothing had ever gone wrong.  I suppose if the story would have had some development, if there would have been some actual conflict to the story, perhaps having the h actually stick to her guns for more than a paragraph it would have been a good read.  Unfortunately,  this is just another generic story where H abandons the h, H moves on with his life and other woman while the h chastely waits for the H to come back home and quickly takes him back with no fight whatsoever.  The h is your typical doormat but the H does seem remorseful.  I wouldn't waste my time even on a free read.