Review: interesting idea, poorly executed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 29, 2012
I was intrigued by the premise of this novella, but ultimately disappointed in the final product.The characters are not well rounded. Their behavior and dialogue is very inconsistent. I know this is a mystery/thriller story, and sometimes a character may say things that don't add up, but the main characters are not very believable. No matter how I tried to rationalize what they said or did, I ended up confused and frustrated.The story idea is a good one, but the editing and character development are sorely lacking. It seemed to me that this was a combination of several different attempts to tell the story just patched together. It didn't flow very well at all.This is only .99, and I did download it when it was free, but I would definitely think twice before buying this one. Too bad, because the idea is a good one.