Review: Best public dumping scene EVER!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 7, 2013
This is a really well constructed story. Two people who are clearly perfect puzzle pieces for each other are put into a situation that keeps tossing them back together even though they try to stay apart. Story is unceremoniously dumped two weeks before her wedding and handles it brilliantly!!!! The opening scene is totally worth the price of admission! That same night she learns her estranged father, who's a hot shot crisis negotiator, has had a heart attack and she hops a plane cross country to be at his side. Also at her dad's side is his younger, damaged, dominate partner, Daniel.The chemistry between Story and Daniel is palpable. Their witty banter is laugh out loud fantastic and sharp. The heat level in the bedroom, the car, the stairwell, the lecture hall, is off the charts. The plot is predictable enough to leave a reader feeling cocky about its direction; but the author is clever enough to twist the scenes in unexpected directions that keep you turning the page. Its a fast, fun run. There is a but...But, Daniel is a different man in the bedroom. There's dominant and there's angry. Daniel was angry -rightfully so when you learn about his past. I have issues when sex and anger are mixed together. It makes me uncomfortable because its such a fine line. Take away Story's orgasms and it could've read as abuse. I didn't factor that into my rating because its my issue. I just wanted to note it.