Review: Lackluster
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 27, 2011
I'm a fan of other books by James, but this story is barely worth the time.The central conflict is that Keely wants to have sex before they arrive at their honeymoon destination and Jack doesn't.  It's difficult to believe that a couple could reach this stage of their relationship without being able to communicate better.  Based on this story, I would guess this marriage won't last for long.Did she not realize she married a macho guy who insisted on always having things his way?  Did he not realize that she would pout when he didn't do exactly what she wanted?  They aren't even on the same page as to what kind of physical relationship they want to have.  The whole "macho cowboy" thing -- a turn-on in some other stories, was just over-the-top and silly in this story.James does better when she has a longer space to tell her story.