Review: Slow, choppy, uninteresting
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2013
A good editor would have been helpful.  The weak, choppy writing wasn't sufficiently interesting to allow me to not notice some errors in sentence construction and punctuation.  Further, I  got 16% of the way in according to my Kindle and the only feeling I had about the central character and the story itself was annoyance.  Time to put this one own and move on.