Review: A Dead Story Line, No Heart in it!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 9, 2014
To me this was an extremely frustrating book to even get into.  It started with the assumption I had read the previous novel.  I hadn't.  After reading this book, I don't intend to read another one, either.  As the protagonist begins, I was totally out in left field I guess.  I had not read the previous book and there was nothing to clue me into the entire plot here.  Lalla is the protagonist who only does what she wants, which is to find out who killed an ex Marine with a heart transplant who dies literally at her feet.  If it weren't for x-ray being enabled, there is no way I could have kept track of all of the characters that were thrown around this book.  They were not built up to give them any identity of their own and they just showed up whenever someone else was supposed to be there with another clue, I guess.  Typos were too abundant for me.  The story just lacked any finesse and was a great disappointment to me.  If I had read the first book, it might have made more sense here.  That first book was referred to so many times I almost put down this one.  It was not a stand alone book and should have just been part of a series.  That MIGHT have helped here.  I feel I just wasted time reading this book.  Hopefully you will find it more forthcoming than I did.  The trees that had to die for this to be printed originally were a total loss to such a book as this.