Review: Why was this well written again?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2012
There wasn't much character development, description fell flat and seemed cliche, the plot was predictable, and I didn't find the ending a surprise at all.  I mean really, the mark is filthy rich.  Did we need to know his desk chair was "genuine" leather?  So weird, some of the things the author chose to divulge to us, considering how short this was.  Good thing it was free.  I also found myself rereading certain sentences--some grammar mistakes maybe?  There were a few typos, too--extra words, missing words, etc.  Only takes a few minutes to read, so go for it, but only if it is free!