Review: Get Ready To Suspend All Belief
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2014
Look, I get it, we read to escape reality for a couple of hours then go back to our real life of, children, pets that need to be let out, dinners that need to be made etc.  I will be honest, I hate this trend toward serialization.  Even writers that I enjoy reading I.e. Beth Kerry can not induce me to buy a serialized book.  I simply wait for the compilation that I know will in evidently be published and buy that.  This first chapter is just asking a reader to suspend all belief and then they wave a carrot to encourage the purchase of chapters to come.  Not sure if these are spoilers so decide for yourself.  Heroine, who, by the way is dressed in J.C. Penny clothing is brought to climax within 5 minutes of meeting Mr. Whitmore, in fact, after the deed she still calls him Mr. Whitmore.  Then blah, blah blah we've read it a thousand times blah, she is now his personal assistant and his secretary is named Natasha....so cliche.  We have the usual clumsy entrance, non disclosure documents, surprise we're flying off to Europe tomorrow so I'm taking you shopping...where haven't I read that hundreds of times?  Mr. Whitmore, our hero, is broody and "has a hollow look in his eyes".  Been there, done that, bought the tee shirt, spilled soup on said tee shirt, now it's a dust rag.  Part one is a freebie, draw your own conclusion, my guess is it ends with her....sheesh I can't even remember her name, submitted her way into his dark, cold heart, his eyes now glow with love and happiness and Natasha is pissed off.