Review: Alright
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2014
This story really had me going.  As I read, I was imagining all of the ways it could end. The build up was so gradual and had me holding my breath at times. How would it end...how? ...how?I thought I had the perfect ending. the one that I would use and that I would find satisfying. The one that would be scariest of all.Well, that didn't happen. It ended with a wimper.So sorry to Mr Smitherd. You have a lot of talent, and can definitely construct a good story. Just remember, don't peter out at the end.