Review: Too short.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2012
This story, as it is written, is too short and had the potential to have been longer. The suspense could have been drawn out so as to engross us a bit more. The story felt rushed. It deserves four stars as the idea was original. I am sure a longer version of this story would go down well with readers. This is a story more for teens, who want everything fast and now.