Review: annoying
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 17, 2013
This short M/M romance (a short story in length) irritated me from paragraph one:- characters are all unlikeable and stiff, which tends to be a problem in a romance;- dialogues are stilted;- writing is grammatically in order but stylistically clunky;- the author tells too much and shows too little, clumsy introspections taking the place of meaningful dialogues.It was a freebie but I think it is not worth the time it takes to read it.