Review: Mixed reviews, good but editing makes for a very bumpy ride
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 26, 2014
Like in the other reviews, I started this novel very confused. There were times I questioned whether to continue but around the seventh chapter I started to like the characters and storyline and finished the novel. But I've got to tell you the author didn't make it easy to finish. Often I was confused who was talking or whose point of view I was reading, causing me to backtrack or read forward. That, and the grammatical/spelling errors ensured it was not going to be an easy read. I can't tell you how many times I reread sentences and/or paragraphs because the punctuation changed the context. It's a shame as the characters are likeable, the chemistry between them notable, the plot developed, and my interest, once engaged, stayed engaged. If edited, this would be a good novel but as is, difficult to recommend.