Review: A lot of raunchy sex with a little bit of story...be prepared for a dirty ride
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2014
I was able to borrow this book free from the kindle lending library...so glad because it is not one that I'd want to read again. I looked at the reviews...good and bad...before taking a chance on this one and since I do like a good biker romance, I was willing to give it a chance. There were just way too many mistakes and confusing parts in here to be able to fully appreciate the story.First of all, the POVs switch around so much and sometimes mid page so you aren't really sure who it is until you've read enough to figure it out...SO messed up. Then the fact that it's not REALLY a biker MC...more of a rich guy who likes to build bikes but hangs with a bunch of other bike riders, but does some illegal stuff (like murder)...oh but he's really a community activist, helping out the less fortunate...but he will beat up or kill someone who hurts his woman. Too many things that don't add up...and don't even get me started how a 32 year old man takes an 18 year old's virginity, pierces her everywhere, gets her ink to mark her as his...and she just recovered from the trauma of a beating and near rape.This book also had the unfortunate problem of incorrect chapter order...it's supposed to be a trilogy but part 2 is at the end and it should have been in the middle...so you read the end of the book first and when you are confused and thinking WTH happened and why is it missing stuff...there it is at the END of the book in part 3 (which should have been part 2)...get it?I suppose if you like a ton of hot, sweaty, dirty sex with not so much plot and a lot of one word commands.."mouth", "suck" "strip"...you get the point...then this book is for you.Colton takes the bossy alpha male WAY off the charts...so controlling and he makes his little "Angel" into a human play toy.*** 3 *** "a little too much way too far" stars