Review: Sloppy work
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2013
I might have given it one and a half stars but that is not possible. It is not all bad but oh so badly written. Even I with English as my second language I can see that and both the hero and heroine are wimps driven by their lust for each other.How is the Hall run and by whom? How does the heroine get around from tenant to tenant? Does she walk or ride? And who is speaking to whom. Oh, there are a lot that does seem to fit together. Sometimes the author writes ... "at the site of ..." where she actually means "at the sight of". Sloppy! She really has a lot of hard work to do before she can make a reasonably good book out of this.