Review: Needs an editor and more likable characters -spoilers
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2014
Spoilers include in this review. I was disappointed that the book turned out to be a dud. I thought it was going to be a good book because of the good reviews and having atypical heroine - she served time in jail and was not innocent. Instead she was an idiot who thought she had to be punished due to what she did to her victim.  That punishment included being abused by a man.  Who better to abuse her then the hero  - a manhoe who occasionally likes it rough. He treats women like something stuck on the bottom of his shoe, including her for part of the story, because his mother left him and his father.  Sure he had a father that loved him and treated him well but that apparently did not matter.  Of course the first sign of trouble in the relationship manhoe runs to a bar and gets a blowj@job from one of the women he would occasionally screw$ when he was in the mood.Another problem that I had with the Heroine is that she preaches forgiveness and being unselfish but she refuses to visit her father who is in hospital because of a heart attack. Sure it was wrong that her parents refused to have contact with her until she got out of prison but if she is forgiving then she should start with the people wholoved and cared for her prior to her incarceration.Also an editor was needed because the amount of grammar mistakes.  They were annoying and detracted from the story .