Review: I could not finish either of these stories.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 3, 2013
Simply Awful!  Awful formatting, awful editing, awful stories. The first was worse than the second. I am rarely unable to finish a book, but I gave up on these. They seemed tedious, lacked substance, and were designed around the sex scenes. I don't know if they got better. These were free, but my time and enjoyment are worth more. I have more books on the kindle, and these were unreadable for me.