Review: Interesting plot line, inconsistent characters
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 16, 2013
There were many parts of this story that I enjoyed: the beginning was wonderfully exciting and drew me right in; a host of interesting secondary characters; the futuristic setting, various heart-stopping events, and a hero who was an alpha, but learned how to temper his dominance. What I found very frustrating was the fact that Hallie was so strong, smart, and capable in the beginning, yet she bowed to Vicious within 2 days. I hated everything about the "party" scene. How could this woman who never wanted to be owned by a man, agree to be treated like an animal? And for Vicious to use her sexually in public, when he had told her she wouldn't have to do that...well I can't see how that is earning her trust. Like others have stated, the sex actually was too much after a while and quite redundant. I am hoping that in future stories, the female characters will remain strong far longer than Hallie did. And that the price of these stories becomes more reasonable.