Review: Author shows promise, needs an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2013
This is part of an interconnected series of short stories (the other two areZombie Tales: Primrose Court Apt. 205andZombie Tales: Primrose Court Apt. 305).  They don't have to be read in any particular order, as they tell the events of the day from the perspective of three different people who live in the same apartment building.What is interesting about the stories is that the zombies appear relatively late in all three of them.  This story is about a young man having the worst day of his life . . . and that is before the zombies show up.  I found it the strongest of the three stories -- probably because it lacked some of the elements of implausibility that kept me from getting totally into the other two stories.I am pretty sure I read some earlier stories by this author that are now no longer available on Amazon.  If this is the case, he is developing quickly and I think he shows a lot of promise.  One issue that will need to be addressed is the number of typos in these stories -- it is simply unacceptable.  With some careful editing, I would gladly pay for the author's work.  Truly character-driven zombie fiction is rare.