Review: To much too fast.  To much story for treatment given.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 16, 2013
Instantly intrigued by blurb.  Even read the 'Look Inside'.  Took book.  Within minutes I became bogged down in pasting that wasn't really needed.  Story probably would have been better for me without Rehash that was explained nicely in first scene. Story went to fast.  Way to fast.  Felt shorted.  Characters cleared up situations with a leaf blower by blazing through explanations the moment they were brought up.  So, if it's still free, go for it.  It just didn't feel complete.  Loved the idea, fresh to me.Well written.  Stars are for the writer, good idea.  Wish you'd have put some real time into it.  No stars for the story.  I felt sometimes like I was reading a comprehensive outline that had been put into dialogue.  Too many ideas for too short a story.  Seriously disapointed.