Review: Didn't miss any cliches here
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 22, 2013
Overall the story was fine - single mother with adorable daughters meets a Navy SEAL when he and his team rescue her young daughter when swimming. After that, think of every plot ploy and it is here as the story goes on and on and on. There are better military romances out there. The book was free and I would have been annoyed had I paid for it. The ridiculousness of the finale that sealed my feelings of the book. Note for authors: you don't have put everything into one story. Without giving too many of the spoilers, here of some of the things encountered : annoying ex-spouses, cheating ex-spouses, murdering ex-spouses, ex-spouses who marry bad people, car accidents, hidden treasurers, tragic death, step-children, an heroine who has such a high opinion of herself she wants to open an art gallery just to sell her art, and terrorists... I could go on and on.