Review: $2.99 for 26 pages of what????????
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 20, 2014
I am sorry, I do not like to put down authors,and I was going to give this another star,because i though that it was the author's first book,but when I saw that she has written other books I could not give it more than a 1 star. Paying this much for 26 pages of what basically is nothing is a rip-off big time. The heroine is a librarian who sees a raptor in a tree by her apt. balcony and is mesmerized by this raptor.She is 36 and lives alone and has no friends but she rushes home every day just to make sure the raptor is there.Then one day she comes home and hes not there,he is not there for a week or two and she becomes very depressed.One day she comes home and a bird is laying on her floor obviously injured almost dead and she was going to call animal control but she fears they will kill it and she just can't so she takes care of him, A few days later she turns to her couch and realized that there is a naked man on her couch.She starts to call the police but the eyes look familiar so she doesn't.The man can't talk and is naked with a sheet most of the time,she rushed home every day,then one day he begins to talk,Turns out he has been having dreams of her while in his raptor state so he has flown for years looking for her and one day he sees her,but he doesn't think that she would accept him as he is a human/bird,but of course she does,they have sex which he seems to understand and he asks her if she will be his mate,she says yes,The End. there that is the entire story and you didn't even have to pay $2.99 for it,and it would probably take you about 10 minutes longer to read than it did to read my review.Thank goodness I got it free or Amazon would have been hearing from me till they got tired of it and gave me a refund. This is only the 2nd of over 3000 books on my kindle that I have deleted and the only reason I gave it 1 star is because you can't write a review without at least 1 star.I might maybe try another one of her free books at some point to see if this was just a fluke because she has other books out there,but I will not pay for one just in case they are all this bad. And to the author, I apologize,I really and truly do try and find something positive even in a bad book because I know that writing is very very hard and Im not saying you should give up,however you could have a much bigger audience if your books had a storyline longer than 26 pages at a dollar a page and well had a storyline period,I may try one of your free books again maybe sometime in the future because I love erotic paranormals but this was not that erotic and the paranormal was ok but wasn't a whole lot of the story because there really was no story. Sorry