Review: Hot, But Too Short
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2012
Katie Cramer is a talented writer, there's no question about that. For the most part, her sex scenes are smoking hot. And she knows how to set a scene. However, in a story like this, that is undermined by a lack of characterization and a story that is too rushed. As a reader, I never really got a sense of why Connie wanted to be what the author calls a "hotwife." (As a side note here, there are a lot of euphamisms for this type of wife-watching story: loving wives, cheating wives, cuckold...I find hotwife one of the sillier ones.) Beyond the fact that she really wants to have sex with her co-worker, we never really get a sense of who she is at all. But when the sex comes, it's hot. Very hot...but then undermined by dialogue that gets silly at times. Be warned, this isn't just a wife-watching story, but a hardcore cuckold story. He doesn't just want to watch Connie, he wants to be humiliated by the experience. So I am of two minds about this story: it's hot, absolutely, but it should have been more. It's really what they call a "stroke story," which is fine if that's what you're looking for. But for 2.99, I expected a lot more.