Review: A packed short read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2014
Considering this book is only 35 pages, it certainly packed a lot in.There was plenty of descriptions about people and the scenery at the office party, which I didn't expect because of the length of the book. The banter between Richard, Scarlett and Alice was clever. If I hadn't of known the title of the book, I would have thought Richard's indiscretion would have been with Scarlett.There were 4 sentences I didn't like in the whole book. These were:"He thrust his tongue into her molten depths" (I don't think any woman would like to have her lady parts described as moulten depths!)"She had a spiced, tangy flavour" (Never tasted a spicy tangy muff unless it's during crisp play lmao)"Ughhh....so-so tight" (Tight is good isn't it?? Not ughhh)"Withdrawing his softening arousal from her still vivacious channel" (Vivacious = attractively, lively and animated....clever pussy! And channel is just a no no lol)They lost the book a star!All in all, it was an enjoyable read and worthy of 4 stars just for the amount the author managed to fit in and that it was well written and flowed nicely.