Review: Dialogue become excruciatingly boring!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2012
The plot of the story was very promising.  The first several chapters kept me interested and I couldn't wait to see what happened.  But that was where the problem lie.  I felt like a waited and waited and waited to see what would happen.  About half way through the book the dialogue became utterly boring and I didn't think I would ever reach the end. When I did reach the end, I felt let down. The grammar was pretty bad so if you are not able to overlook errors you might not want to even try this one.