Review: What a shame, it could have been good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 28, 2012
I'm not sure where to start.  This should have been a good book, but it wasn't, it was nearly the opposite.  I read it through, even though I wanted to put it down so many times.  The storyline was interesting, plenty of action, relentless evil badguys who stayed in character.  BUT the mistakes were awful.  I'm being harsh, and for the $3.00 I paid I should take it easy, but I won't.  REALLY, the writer may have a talent, but she cheapens her work with mistakes.  The mistakes in the book were not minor, they were glaring and all too frequent, and from start to finish.  Dikes for dykes, doctor Hauser instead of Dr. Hauser or even Doctor Hauser, Jo became Joe and then Jo again, and of course 'there' as oppose to 'their' or 'they're'.  Everyday spelling errors that a quick click of spellchecker would have resolved.  And of course as one other person already wrote of,  come on, how the @!#1% do you screw up the Lord's Prayer.About mid-way through the book there was a huge jump from one scene to another.  I reread that part three or four times wondering what the hell happened.  It may be that a chapter was accidently deleted from the book.  (This does happen, check out One More Bridge to Cross - paperback edition).The smug raccoon who excused the writer for the book's endless mistakes, you must be a friend of the writer, there is no excuse.  The writer/editor should have cared enough about the end product to take the time to clean up the obvious stuff.  Sloppiness made this book a headache and a two star offering.