Review: just okay...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
The story itself is decent. it lags a bit in places and becomes repetitive but overall enjoyable. However, what prevents this from being a 4star is the editing. It's lacking in a big way.There are many errors with punctuation which brings the rating down a star for me.mI'm quite surprised there arent more comments on the lack of editing! I only saw one other mention the lack of editing, and the mistakes are pretty obvious!