Review: Great story. Desperately needs an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2014
I loved.this story. It deserves 5 stars,but because of the lack of editing in this book and the last, I lowered the rating to 3. It should be a free or .99book until edited. This book and last-minute I spent time  on EVERY page frustrated by inaccuracies. Ex: you're/your inconsistencies, grammatical errors and spelling, etc. The action speeds along over a VERY short timeline, but the characters act as if certain events were heartbreaking and refer over and over to the pain.... of a 4 hour or less (forced no less) breakup. Also,the book is YA, but in many places is DEFINITELY Adult material.The author has written an excellent story, but I felt cheated for having overpaid for the frustration. I almost quit the book many times, but.. it's worth the read if you can get over what seems to be a very young author who self published without hiring an editor or proofreader. Note to author: hire an indie editor/proofreader. It's (yes, that means it is) DEFINITELY worth your cost. you are a good storyteller, but need help to make these stories great.books.