Review: The case of the hiding commas....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2014
First, the author needs a basic course in the use of punctuation and sentence structure. I had to read the same thing over and over just to try to figure out what the heck she was trying to say.Next, boy meets girl, they fight, have sex, and decide to get married...of course it is love, they are so hot for each other what else could it be?Oh, yeah. missing sister and back from the dead wife? Could have been good, but too much poor writing to plow through.