Review: good story, needs copy edit, needs work on focus.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 7, 2012
There are two problems that desperately need to be addressed I this largely good and nearly professional book.First, it needs copy editing.  Spell checking can not substitute for copy editing.  At a minimum, the author needs to provide a feedback address and accept reader's edits.  One horrific example is when Captain Harrison is referred to as the diseased rather than the deceased during his funeral service. :-(The second problem is one which a professional editor or a good team of alpha readers would have identified.  After the Hero leaves Heinlein, essentially no detail is spared on his management of his ship, but essentially no detail is provided on the development and management of the rebellion.A quick re-read of "the Moon is  a Harsh Mistress" would clarify the problem for the author.Still well worth the low cost, but it could be SO much better.And the author really needs to provide a feedback channel and update the book.