Review: This one's just not doing it for me.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2014
It's been a while since I've read a novel in this genre that I simply couldn't finish.  The story line was interesting, but the lack of good editing made this unreadable for me.  As a dyslexic reader, I get completely stumped when I run into sentences like this one..."In the distant winds constantly blew along the desert floor..."I had to read it five times before I could give up and move past it.  This seems to happen quite a lot in this novel.The characters are interesting enough, but not well developed.  The Tally-Whacker commander didn't seem realistic in his goals and the way he went about trying to achieve them.  I think I got nearly half way through the novel before I decided that the time I was investing in reading it wasn't paying off for me.