Review: Great story - wish it was longer and more in-depth, but strong for a short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2013
Delaney is a very broken girl that is moving across the country to start college. Far away from her parents and whatever mysterious event/thing that broke her into pieces. Cole is a Junior in college that meets Delaney (his sister is Delaney's roommate) and quickly becomes infatuated by her.The story focuses on their relationship and Delaney's attempts to heal herself with Cole's help.There are other characters, Delaney's roommate, Grace, and her boyfriend. As well as Grace's oldest brother and his girlfriend.Except for Grace's role, the other people play very small roles in the book.I think if this book was 200 pages longer - it would have blown me away.The 210+ pages was long enough to relay the pain and suffering that Delaney is going through, and Cole's feelings of frustration at the lack of her trust. Although he does realize that he has a very calming effect on her, she still has panic attacks for which she doesn't explain to him the causes.I wish the book was a bit longer, to explore the depths of their relationship. Delaney held out from really committing to Cole for a good portion of the book. Just when I was getting frustrated and wanted to yell at her - she finally decides to trust Cole 100%. If I could change the book, I would have loved to have read more about their relationship and how they worked together on restoring Delaney's feelings (physical and emotional) with Cole. Read through more dates, worked through more panic attacks, etc.  Also, would love to have read more about her relationship with Grace, et al. Also, her feelings of crowds was so immobilizing for her - would have like to see her grow through that as well.That would have knocked this book out of the park. Guess the fact that I wanted more, meant the book was pretty good! :-)The 1 1/2 steamy scenes were well written - not trashy.Both characters (Cole and Delaney) are very likable and strong.It's believable that Cole (a total 'player') and then is ready to settle down with Delaney. After two years of playing the field - it can get old (for some people).This book is simple, sweet and a easy emotional journey. Not too deep. Not too light.The author gives enough insights into Delaney's fears and the pain she is living with, without making us crazy.I really enjoyed this book a lot. Again, wish it was longer so the story could have been told in more depth and extended to see what happens in the future after their declarations of love.Decent epilogue. Ended a tiny bit abruptly.No cliffhangers.HEA.Enjoy!