Review: Sloppy writing, poor premise and badly executed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
If it wasn't for the fact that this book was free, I would have demanded my money back for this book. I'm sorry, I know the author has tried hard, but this book is full of cliches, horrid dialogue, a sloppy story and a terrible romance to boot. I think if the story had been fleshed out a lot more, with more consideration given to the reader (and the actual premise), it may have worked but in this instance, I would not recommend this to other readers.