Review: Just Bad
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 1, 2013
This could have been really good, but it wasn't.  The writing was boring and repetitive:  "curtain of moisture" was used every time someone cried (that's just one example of many).  The plot was ridiculous, even with a main character having magic that was not fully explored even for a short.  I love fantasy, but it needs to be supported and backed up to create a reality, and this didn't.Spoiler Alert:The main female character has a boyfriend back home but keeps thinking about this guy she hasn't seen in years since her father broke them up.  The first time they see each other (in YEARS, remember) he proposes to her with a beautiful diamond ring and she accepts.  Riiiiiiiiight.  Even being magical, he just wanders around with a ring waiting for the time when she might come back?End Spoiler Alert