Review: A nice lead in doesn't make it to the finish line.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2014
Alex and Dahlia met years ago on the playground.  He's never forgotten her.  Too much has gone on in her life to remember him.He and his brothers agree, this year, to go after the girl next door instead of super models, starlets and other money-hungry types of previous years.  It's a birthday tradition.In this book it's the guy who wants the HEA with someone who doesn't care about his wealth.  I have a few questions.Why does he obviously throw his money around if he wants a woman who doesn't care about it?Why does he approach her in the most creepy way, talking to her young son on the school playground?How old is Dahlia, the same as Alec?How did he make his billions by, what is he, 25?This book is better than A Tangled Web. But it is extremely juvenile, as if logic has no business in storytelling.  Do some research on making your characters more believable.