Review: Oh boy...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2013
I love cozies and the characters are fun. My problem with this particular book, haven't read any others in this series, is that I found the continuity from one paragraph (not chapter) to the next very disjointed. It just did not flow. After the 2nd chapter I decided to ignore the numerous typos and clichés, and continue reading to end up skimming, after finishing chapter 3, through to the final chapter. I just couldn't stay with it. The story by it's writing alone dragged on to it's predictable ending where having skimmed the majority of the book I still knew the characters involved. This could probably become a very good series with proper editing, tempo, and above all continuity.