Review: quick and enjoyable but left wanting more
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 10, 2013
I know this was a short story, but I really wish the author wrote a few more chapters. It would have been nice if there was a little more depth to the characters( there's enough to get you to understand what they're feeling) but what I really wanted to hear more about are "the Things". Granted the lack of detail about the "Things" gives the reader's imagination more room to run wild, but I know I would have been willing to pay more for a chance to finally figure out what they were, where they came from and most importantly how to rid of them (my curiosity kept growing and growing).I would recommend checking this story out, but I would really like either Ms. Davis or another talented author/person to pick up the challenge of delving deeper into this great concept/idea and complete a more thorough understanding of what happened prior to events of this story and how the last group got that far (maybe even continuing from where this story ended?).More than anything, it is a work that will leave you thinking about what else could have been done and expanded on. Please Ms. Davis, please go back to this short story and write a full blown book. I would really enjoy hearing more about your interesting plot and the crazy, ghoulishly frightful things that are living in the Deep.  Definitely worth checking out if you love the Wool universe with a darker tone to it.If you want a great read with those dark overtones lying just beneath the surface, check out: silo saga; Great Down Fall by jason Gurley. That story is awesome and has at least 4-5 times the length of this short story. I would like to see this story written like the Great Down Fall.Check this story out. It's only .99