Review: Beautiful world!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2013
Lost in the Seven WorldsThis book had me interested when I first started reading. The world the author creates is very beautiful and unique, and the race of Daevas was very interesting. I felt like there was a lot of depth that the author had flowing through her mind as she wrote this book. I could tell this is just a teaser. I'm thinking that there is a lot more to this story. I felt like the lore was cool, and the author used very descriptive words. I actually had to look some of them up. I kind of liked that though! Most the time it seems a lot of stories are written the same. This had an "old fashioned" feel to it, but without making me bored.Probably the only thing I would say to critique this book would be a few errors in it. The grammar is a little rough in spots. I think the dialogue got a little bit overwhelming at a few parts because there were no action tags or dialogue tags in there. I followed who was speaking pretty well, but I would suggest throwing in a few action tags so the reader can "see" what the charters are doing. Great little story over all!! Very beautiful!