Review: Hmmmm
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 17, 2013
If you like in depth descriptions, you will love this book. Me, I kept skimming ahead to get to the story. The way the US became the way it is in this author's world could have been set up in the first chapter instead of all over the place. Just when I became pulled end to the story, off this author went, again, with more in-depth facts I cared nothing about. It felt like a history lecture....well lots of history lessons that dragged on and on and on chopping the story into bits n pieces. With these "books" being a little over 100 pages, I felt like I had only received maybe a chapter full....or two, of story and the rest was dribble. Solo, seeing their are two more "parts" of this book available, I downloaded samples of each and dog on it they were even more wordy with facts than the first. I had hoped the author had gotten out all he needed to explain Mark's world in the first book but nodes. I suggest to the author that next time, if he is deciding to write more, that he explain the world as it is in the beginning of the first part if it is important for him to go into detail. Paraphrasing would have been awesome. I gave this three stars due to the imagination of this author in the world he created. It's extremely creative a his narration of it is, well, history book proud. I don't know if this author has written before but I will check to see because I'm interested in seeing how he would craft a different story. As I said, his talent is evident but this book is lacking flow feeling like it's mostly history, well written history of his created world, and just a taste of story.