Review: Great potential, will watch this author in the future.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2013
Let me start off by saying that the description is somewhat misleading, or a bit vague... not sure which really. Like one other reviewer I was under the impression that I was buying a straight up fantasy novel when in fact it is a cheesy mix of ancient and modern. The story itself seems to be good, but the world is just not believable to me. Could also use a truckload more detail with just about everything...  facial expressions, what people are doing while they are interacting, architecture and layout of the locations visited and so on.That being said, I did find the concept to be entertaining and in line with what I usually like to read. I hope to see more from this author as he continues to improve.