Review: Needs editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2014
By the end of chapter 2, didn't feel like continuing d story any more. I try not to be hard on writers, after all, it's hard work but this story from what I've read is unrealistic and doesn't set d right tone for the fast pace it's going. Not only does it sound like a first book but also a first try. Hope d Author works on it. Sorry for d bad review but it needs work.