Review: One dimensional characers
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2013
This story was a bit too short in my opinion. It felt like the characters needed a bit more building for me to get into their minds and understand them better. I would definitely have liked it if Danny was a bit more explained too. It seemed odd that he suddenly found out what he wanted from Vince. And it felt kind of forced between the two of them. It was a well written story regardless.