Review: Disappointed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2014
The plot was great.  The writing was snappy and amusing.  The characters (except for the villains) were charming -- all four of them -- the hero, the heroine, Sir Galahad and Mimi.So why not a 5?  Because of the raunchy, too too cutesy sex scenes.  Not once, but twice, the fun filled plot was interrupted by descriptions that are absolutely unnecessary to it.  Why?  It may appeal to one kind of audience but, believe me, there are just as many readers who have imaginations.  A subtle description is enough.  They don't need five or six pages and then another five or six pages of descriptions of sex acts.  Imagination is more powerful and detailed than description.  Trust your readers to get the point.  Trust your readers to fill in the gaps.