Review: Weird editing, jerk hero, doormat wife
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2013
This book could have been REALLY good, if only.........The author spent so much time on the heroes anger that she forgot to make him likeable. He pushed the envelope of the abusive behavior he was so afraid of repeating. He was so angry and so horrible to her over everything, that he was unlikeable. At places in the story, she actually is afraid of him. He wants to make her afraid. I could not find any reason for her to want him.There were also a lot of errors. No spacing between new paragraphs/days/or even different character perspective. There is one sentence where they talk about the big HORSE he is building, instead of HOUSE. Book needs an editor. Also the end is very abrupt. Quick and underwhelming for all the anger and drama in the book.