Review: Telling
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2011
The author needs to work on NOT telling every detail--I would suggest hiring a proofreader and/or asking a few friends to proofread/critique it because, as it sits, it isn't an enjoyable read. I felt nothing and the characters were flat.I gave this short story 2 stars for 'I don't like it', although the cover is fantastic.