Review: Not terrible, could be better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 11, 2014
I'll start by saying that this book isn't bad, per se.I enjoyed the overall plot and storyline enough to give it 3 stars. But it is a tough read. The subject matter isn't difficult (heavy by design but not difficult), but the writing is difficult.This will sound horrible, but while reading, more than . once I found myself wondering exactly how the author managed to pass high school English. The mistakes are blatant and glaring. There were times I had to reread a sentence multiple times just to figure out we what he meant. I truly believe that with the services of a good editor, this book could have been so much better!Last, even with some hardcore editing, I still couldn't give the book 5 stars. The ending was very abrupt. It felt to me like Jeremiah simply got bored with the project, said "meh. Done" and called it the end.