Review: Far too many editing issues
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2014
While I did enjoy all four of the stories in this series, the outrageous amount of typos and incorrect words made me crazy and were very distracting.  The word ladder was used appropriately but was incorrectly spelled as "latter" later in the same paragraph. The writing style was a bit stilted, especially the dialogue. A number of situations seemed forced and unrealistic. I cringed when one of the male MCs asked a female MC if she was being emotional because of a "womanly" problem, and he was her boss! He called her Darlin' even though he was supposedly worried about being accused of sexual harassment.With that being said, I liked all of the characters and enjoyed each story and how the relationship between the brothers evolved.