Review: Short and disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2013
This is a very brief story and you're pretty much dropped in on the couple as they are in the shower (although some back story is referenced).  Despite the experience of some readers, I actually found this story to be UNrealistic.  I realize there is a school of readers that enjoy the idea that a man can intuit your unarticulated and unacknowledged "midnight fantasies" and turn them into reality without you having to do anything, let's get real.  And the idea that nothing more is necessary than a bar of soap and a murmured "yes" to make all of it happen?  Not likely.It read as if the author either wasn't that familiar with the activity in question or she was intentionally holding back her experiences in order to create a fluffier story.