Review: Good Charecters, but Needs Editing to be a Great Read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 31, 2013
This is a standard genre storyline, reasonably competently written. It shows a lot of promise; it would have been a great read with one more round of editing. For instance, the author can't seem to decide whether her heroine is a pampered princess type who needs to learn self-sufficiently or a tough, no nonsense girl who needs to learn to trust. More annoyingly, the denouement contains one character whose actions are against type and no explanation is given for their actions.  In fact, the author literally has her characters say "I guess we'll never know why that happened."  I've definitely read worse, but there's lots of better books in this genre.