Review: massive editing errors leaves you lost at times
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
Good story, repetitive paragraphs from previous books. A mountain of editing errors, and sentences where she changes her mind in mid sentence and leaves you lost. She really needs a second set of eyes reading it so they can point them out. My daughter got so annoyed she stopped at third book. We hope Amazon will have here fix the books at the very least.