Review: Sigh
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2013
Super nice people wake up to find zombies everywhere. The super nice people find other super nice people and hide out in a building they find. Nothing much happens, a lot of meals get cooked, dishes washed, couple zombies are killed. The super nice decide to head for another town to seek help, the end.  Alright then lol. Plenty of potential for a good story for here but it goes no where. A major constructive criticism for the author, stick to one tense while you are writing please. Example: Tim walked to the woods and gathered wood for the fire. Tim stands and looks and seeing a zombie and walks over. That's being generous because it was more like this: Amber grabbed a bottle of water and drinks it's, smiling to herself. I was like oh my God I can't stand it. Copy editor, other set of eyes and a rewrite and this story could have potential.