Review: Inconsistent and choppy
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 15, 2013
This very short story seems rushed. I would have loved to see more character development. Parts of the story did not add up. For instance, I thought Kyla had family eager to take her in?Why did she end up at the group home? It seems far reaching she would move in with Grapehead so quickly considering she did not even appear to like him.This story seems unrealistic and leaves much to be desired.