Review: A story that dragged on
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 1, 2013
I enjoyed the premise and the first half of the story, but once it came time for the real character of 'Johnny' (Johanna) to be revealed, the hero, Derek, became and unreasonable cad. There was way too much explicit sex that made the story drag on. It was not crucial to the plot and was excessive. Then the characters began to do things that were not really credible, or else they were incredibly stupid. I have to admit I got frustrated with the end of the book.