Review: pleasant surprise
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2011
Usually one finds a lot of grammatical errors in a $0.99 book, in this one I remember just one. This is an excellent book. I'm giving it 4 stars only because of two howlers that caught my attention and dragged me out of the story. Both concerned the electric motorcycles. There should be no reason to kick start an electric motorcycle. You turn it on and drive. And since they are electric, the motor is not turning when parked so it should not be vibrating against the leg of the person sitting on it. It seems the author described the motorcycles as electric then forgot, and described the behavior of gas driven motorcycles. I think the fact that everything else is so good made me a bit angry that the author could make a mistake like that.Never the less, I'm buying his other book Birthright. I'm looking forward to more from this writer!