Review: Huge Disappointment
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2014
I guess I keep expecting the magic from Bankroll Squad that made me fall in love with this author's writing but it's been missing from his last several books and this is by far the worst.From the very beginning of the story there is too much chaos and too much going on. Veronica is a mess and I disliked her from the start. I know her back story was supposed to help me sympathize with her but it didn't work. There is a lack of character development and desire to cram as much drama into as few pages as possible that just makes for a bad read. Add in the editing errors and misused/misspelled words and all I can say is this is a good rough draft that could become a decent story with development.