Review: Not bad for a short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 23, 2013
Mercy was a believable character, in most ways. She's is a nurse who helps her PI father out from time to time.In this short story, Mercy was working undercover at a bar and commented on how much worse her feet hurt because she was on her feet more as a waitress than as a nurse. I've been a nurse for many years. The floor nurses put in twelve hour shifts and if they're lucky they get a thirty minute lunch and can sit down, but other than that, they are usually on their feet so I had trouble believing she was on her feet less.The plot could've been developed a little better and maybe if it had been, the areas that felt rushed would've flowed better.It was a freebie and much better than many of the free books I've downloaded. The author has a good writing style and does create compelling characters.