Review: A good story. Poor editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2013
This is a good story.  Long enough to get a feel for the characters, and a real plot line. Its a very simple story. No twists or turns.  Lots of hot sex. Rather graphic and long scenes. After you hit one and figure out how long they are, you skip pages til you get back to the story.Its not a 4 star story, but it is more than 3. I'd rate it higher if it werent for all the editing errors.Lots of editing errors.  Mostly auto correct use. 'Of' instead of 'or'; 'him' instead of 'his'; 'there' instead of 'their', and some just plain wrong words, missing words, and extra words.  But they didnt cause me any issues outside of noticing them and supplying what was meant.Note to author if you write another wolf story:A new moon is the opposite of a full moon.  They are NOT the same thing. Since you used them in this story as a timeline, it makes a 2 week difference.You mention the MC is/was a law student but did not clarify. Not an issue, but we need to know where the story takes place. I am guessing Canada, but Australia and United Kingdom are possibilities(centre vs center; tyre vs tire; colour vs color).  It may come into play if you write a series, as laws can vary from one country to another and your MC is dealing with a land issue- was trespassing an issue? It could be a greater crime in one country than another.Its written in large tyoe, so its not as long a read as you may think.