Review: Okay but not great
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2014
There are parts of this book where I think that it is going to turn into an excellent yarn but then things slide back to being just okay.  I am not sure why the plot and the writing quality waxes and wanes, and nor can I suggest ways that the shortfalls can be fixed but only that I would engage in the story and be happy the way it would build only to be disappointed by the weak resolutions.  Perhaps an editor or plot coach could assist in making improvements.