Review: Better Than The First Book...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2014
First, let me state the bad.  This book needs an editor.  Second, this is a book for young adults.  Yes, this is erotica.  My only issue is that we are dealing with, yet a again, a virgin h.  I am not interested in a virgin's exploration into sex. My bad. It was so long ago that I was a virgin, thatI I cannot remember being one.  I do not want to go through the beginner sex.  The exploration. It's boring to me.  I am not the target market for this book.  That said, I really liked this book.  The relationship between Violet and her father(Bear), and the other MC members?  All good.  The dialogue?  All good.  The love story between Violet and Mac? Beautiful.  He is 24 and she is 18.  See?  Young adult.  This is a 1% MC story.  It is gritty.  You get into the not so romantic side of this life.  I love some reality in my fiction.One thing I really enjoyed about this book was that the sexuality was not just about the H and the h, it was also about the h's father.  I wanted more info(explicate) on his sexcapades.  I do not know if this author intended this, but she made such a beautiful balance between the young, less experienced in sex/relationships, and the older more experienced, jaded relationships, and made them both sexy and erotic in their own way.  I was more interested in Bear's sex life. Yes, old folk do fornicate.I do not know what else to say.  This is a well written book(it needs an editor), for the young adult females.  This is erotica involving a 1% MC.  My favorite genre.  Except the young adult.  I would recommend.  I am looking forward to this author's future stories/books.