Review: "the blond" and "the brunet": I blame the editor.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 16, 2011
This had potential; the premise is silly but I can go along with that for good sex.  This was not. Cliched writing and awkward sex scenes. And 'the blond' and 'the brunet'... I won't even read free slash that uses those nouns to refer to the characters.  What was the editor of this book thinking?  The writing overall is reasonable, outside of the awful 'blond' and 'brunet' references, but the sex scenes lacked realism.