Review: Needs a Better Proofreader
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2014
I have several books by Elizabeth Lennox & generally enjoy them since the usual plotline is alpha guy meets sweet young thing and of course true love ensues.But, I have noticed small errors that bug me, so that's why I'm giving this one a tepid score. Examples, twice their ages are mentioned when each thinks about the other, but then they ask each other, "How old age you?" Then he asks her son's birth date and she says January. He actually calculates their night together being in September! Either she has the gestation period of a rabbit or an elephant.The big problem is I end up concentrating on the glaring writing boo boos rather than the characters. But, I also have to admit I'll probably continue to read Elizabeth's books, since they are pleasant fast reads. But I do ask that she use better proofers to clean up these silly little things.