Review: Pretty Good
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 21, 2012
Good story, lots of originality, and the few intimate scenes were hot. Bottom line, this was a free kindle book, at least when I got my hands on it, and you can't ask for anything better with that price tag.I read a few other reviews before writing this one, and have to echo things that I saw in 1, 2, 3, and 4 star designations.I thought the story was good, and I especially liked the concept of calling forth the weapons from their arms. That was original, at least in my experience, and gave me some good imagery to work with.I liked the warriors and look forward to their stories. I'm a huge fan of the BDB series, and anytime I get a chance to read about rough and edgy paranormal men, I'm almost always going to be a fan.Since I'm also a writer and value feedback to can help me to improve in future books, I can offer some ideas that I saw others express, as well. The main thing that made the two main characters a bit hard to relate to at times was the repetitive streams of conscious we were privy to as readers. Quinn and Grace have their hangups and hopes and dreams, but the same themes from these facets of their personalities were overdeveloped. I still thought the story was great and liked the characters, but perhaps more background from their past or ideas about their future would have cut back on the redundancy of their inner monologues.Liked Lily and wished lots of things for Ana that might be revealed in future books.In the end, I can recommend this book with enthusiasm, especially given the fact that it is free. I don't see why anyone would complain about anything when the book costs nothing and provides hours of entertainment.