Review: Very disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 31, 2013
I was looking forward to reading the stories - especially as they got good reviews.  Unfortunately the 1st story was so poorly written I won't read the rest.  The story is very herky-jerky.  Where was the editor?  One minute the characters are in one place, and the next paragraph they are somewhere else.  I kept double checking if I'd skipped a page (I didn't).  Were paragraphs left out?  If you want a well written story, skip these.