Review: An Enjoyable & Funny Saga
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 20, 2013
First, let me say that I thoroughly enjoyed this story.  There were many occasions when I was laughing out loud and I like that in a story.  BUT: there were several continuity problems that bugged me & since I have no way of directly contacting the author for edit repairs I hope she reads her reviews.Chapter 7 @ the Missouri River was the worse. She kept calling Henrietta by another characters name (Hattie) [Loc 1785-1791].  That was sooo confusing. Especially when it was a point of action and I was tripping all over wondering how the one character was getting mixed up with the other. On 2 occasions Phyllis became Millie-huh? [Loc 2205 & another]  Seth's horse went from Tramp to Buck [Loc 1781] and one of my biggest pet peeves is when a character's eye color changes from emerald green to blue [Loc 2620 & 3875].  I know this sounds picky, but rereading the story before submitting is kind of essential.  Is it just me?Nonetheless, I still gave 5 stars. I really enjoyed it even with these errors.