Review: Fluff novel but still ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 16, 2014
typical fluff novel- chick lit, romance and hot supernatural beings (although when are they ever not).  standard plot- girl become vampire, falls for vampire Prince, etc. slight twist- girl is half demon as well with a foul mouth angel and a badly dressed fairy as companions. aside from the use of over dialogue (yes, characters can talk too damn much in a book) and the over cursing the book was ok. I'd cut a lot of the needless talking and bad one liners, which distracts you from the plot, and axe most of the cursing. we get it, Pam has a potty mouth but can Pam form complete sentences without a curse word? the book has potential but still left a lot to be desired. I see the talent the author clearly has but it's lost in the need to overshare.