Review: Holy Narcissism Batman!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2011
Plot/Story/Characters: 4 StarsThis story reads not like a diary, but more like a one-sided directed conversation.  Zara speaks directly to the reader throughout this short story. I realize Zara's supposed to be narcissistic, and she definately IS. She even goes so far as to describe herself physically in the third person. "You will note that she has the much desired hourglass figure, and her large, firm breasts always make a wonderful first impression." I did like how the story ended, and Zara "got back" at her maker.Writing Style: 4 StarsA stream-of-consciousness journal, as Ms. Hilburn has Zara describe the story, is an extremely accurate description of what is found in this story. There were a few too many commas sprinkled through the story, but if you read the story as if Zara is talking to you then I suppose there are commas wherever she would take a breath.-Previously reviewed at RedAdeptReviews.com