Review: Too wordy
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 7, 2013
I would have liked the book simply because of Grady.  But other characters failed to incite any interest because of how they were presented as immature and close to stupid people.The plot of the story was so mixed up.  I liked to believe that it was with good intention from the author to make it more appealing to the readers.  But at some point it became repetitive and twist was added each time.  You might remember the `Old McDonald Had a Farm Song'.  There were some ideas in the story that you cannot just accept.  After 1 week there is no way you can tell if a woman is pregnant... accurately.  How can Jenesa and Linette be stupid about that?  They are both women and regardless if they are both single.  How can Jenesa and Rafaelle not suspect each other if they both know the truth that she is not Jillian and Luca respectively?  Do they really believed that those two people did it blindfolded or in pitch black to not recognize who they are talking to?I skipped a lot of pages because they became too wordy.  Less and less dialogues were made but more of what one thinks and feels.The only redeeming character in the story was Grady.  How I wish that Jenessa just ended up with him.  He is the only sensible character in the story.  But on second thought, Jenessa doesn't deserve Grady so it really is better that she ended up with Rafaelle.  Or would they?  Even to the last moments of this book, Jenessa appeared to be the indecisive and gullible woman that she appeared to be.  One moment she wants to go but declared her love to Rafaelle the next.  Rafaelle doesn't even know if he is in love or not.  How old is he really?  The ending was so abrupt and there are still some grey areas that were left behind.I just hoped the author dwell more on how the two main characters healed after they hurt each other, or so they both believed.  Not fast forwarding 6 months and everything remains to be blurred for these two.