Review: Not the best
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2013
The plot was good and entertaining; however, the format of the book wasn't the greatest.  She didn't go into detail for the majority of the story but rather stated one very short scene and then skipped to the next.  The action in the basic "scenes" reminded me of what how a play would be written with very basic background detail.  If you can get past this and don't forget it is a free book and short, then you can get in to the story.  The plot is actually pretty good but just underdeveloped.  If the book were longer, I think it could be good.  Hopefully she writes more expanded stories because they could be worth the read.