Review: Feels like a random bunch of thoughts more or less stitched together
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2014
The story line starts out quite interesting with some rather unusual mixing of alien and human physiology - in a good way.  But the actions of the people are so unimaginative, and absolutely unbelievable that from the beginning the story telling is poor at best.For example and normal intelligence if naive young woman raised on a poor farm does not automatically recognize that an alien with an completely foreign physic is not just some animal she hasn't seen before.  That level of not understanding would require severe retardation with only rudimentary language skills development.The story telling never gets better.  The only consistency is the inconsistency.  For example:  The main character can't go to town for fear that her alien friend will be seen if left alone on the farm by a random visitor, but it is okay to build a bakery next to the house and hire a full staff.I stopped reading half way through the first book because I don't have enough reading time to spend it on a book with such poor story telling and character development.