Review: The Tycoon's Tender Triumph
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2013
PLOT: Chloe has been in love with Sam Marchant since she was in college. But she's been avoiding him since she found out that he was seeing other women. But when her father falls off the roof, she returns home to help him and there's no avoiding Sam.PROS: It starts well and I was interested in the plot at the beginning.CONS: The author doesn't know the difference between "your" and "you're." It was used correctly only once in the entire story. There were also other minor editing issues. There's head hopping from paragraph to paragraph. Chloe's eyes change from brown to blue during the course of the story.I found the story implausible as it went along. For some reason, Chloe was using her money to repair her father's house until her Sam pointed out that her father had the funds to do it. Sam helps Chloe with a detailed business plan, but without knowing what type of business it was she wanted to start. When Chloe is at the diner, the owner immediately wants to display her photos. She found the diner when she was lost but she easily finds her way home. For a billionaire, Sam has an extraordinary amount of free time.The scenes between Sam and Chloe quickly grew redundant and boring. Each time they talk, she avoids telling him why she's afraid of him and then walks off. These are the main conversations since Chloe spends almost no time with her father. By the end of the story, I just wanted it to be over.2 STARS: I've read several of Elizabeth Lennox's works. This is my least favorite.