Review: What a good book!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2013
I really liked Undone Rebel.  I didn't love it, but I'm very glad I downloaded it.  (It was a free download from Ellora's Cave.  Thank you, EC!)I liked Addie and Lane, Lulu and Emory.  I don't repair cars, but I do sew clothes, so I really related to that and the store!I LOVED the BDSM photo shoot.  It wasn't run-of-the-mill and it wasn't terribly intense where I had to read only a few pages at a time.  But when the photo shoot ended, so did the dungeon play.  I felt cheated!  I wanted to read more of that.However--please learn punctuation for writing to English audiences, Ms. Dubois!!  I can't speak several languages like you can; I admire you for that!  But stop writing in so many run-on sentences.  Punctuation is one of the tools of your trade and you need to master it (pun intended!).I plan to purchase the rest of the series; I liked it that much!  I've got to read Lulu's story and Emory's story!!Keep up the good work!