Review: Good story, Bad editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2013
Good story, that could have been a great story if somebody actually bothered to check out the (military) facts, and the repetition of scene after scene (boring) writing, yes indeed! A shooting contest with a shotgun using balloons floating on Gitmo Bay, yea right, give me a break. I was in the Service for 22 years, and have been to Cuba many times, and I never saw that one!Next time I hope the author has someone, or more than one person check the draft; again though, decent story, just a lot of repetition, and some of the Military fiction, was really FICTION!