Review: COULD HAVE BEEN 4 STARS BUT...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 5, 2014
I really liked this story and adored the child who was absolutely perfect but I couldn't give the four stars it deserves because I didn't like some of the descriptions. E.g. Licked between the hair of his 'behind'. Or the character describing himself in a negative gay slang word in his own thoughts. I don't think a gay man man would really think of himself by that word. The rest was great.