Review: Couldn't finish this one.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2014
So, I made it to 32% and I couldn't read any further.  That's very rare for me, but this book dragged.  I have a few issues-  there was no conflict up until this point.  I have NO idea what the goal is for either Lane or Kat.  What are they working towards?  What do they want to achieve?  Besides orgasms I mean.  She's bipolar at best, waffling between being disgusted by him and being flat on her back for him.  And honestly, I get it...she thinks he's hot...is it completely necessary to give us a completely physical description every other page?  That's immature writing to me.  There were also POV issues here.  The person narrating shouldn't be able to tell if his eyes were dancing with amusement or if his smile looked flirty.  The only things the character should talk about are things they can see or feel.  Unless he's some superhero who can see his own eyes or smile, this is impossible.  I'm giving it two stars because I think she has the potential to write much better than this, that much was clear to me in the small portion I did read.  And I wish she would keep in mind that having well written sex scenes are all fine and good, but there HAS to be a plot to back it up, otherwise they will fall flat.  That's what it did for me.  Show us more plot up front, a discriminating reader needs more than interlocking body parts.