Review: Fell for the same line twice?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2013
I like short stories, but not so much this one.Too much waxing poetic about the hero without much proof that there should be any waxing and the herione (who isn't supposed to be a dumb blonde) seems to fall for the same line twice with the only reason being she's in heat.  Except there wasn't any heat coming from the writing.