Review: Too bad there's not a 'less than 1 star' rating
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2011
Don't waste your time. This isn't even long enough to qualify as a 'short story' but worse, the writing is terrible, the characters completely unsympathetic, and it's clear the author is shooting for 'cute' but the story itself is painfully stupid and not even close to believable.You only live once - the 10 minutes it will take to read quickly through this 'story' is 10 minutes you'll never get back.  Don't do it - free or not. UGH - I'd rather pull weeds.