Review: Unrealistic SPOILER ALERT
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 26, 2012
I read this book in just a couple of hours and was disappointed, the story was unrealistic, in the span of a couple of weeks the main characters go through about five or six life changing events and then all of a sudden they are in love and live happily ever after? Character development was poor and the main characters sounded like they were in their early twenties instead of closer to forty. If just one of these events happened to me, it would take months to start to get back on my feet. If the book had been longer and the events had more detail it would have been plausible. I think her daughter dying and her moving in with a guy she had known for two days was the worst part it was like she was talking about a pet dying, she cried a couple of times, decided that there would always be a place in her heart for her child and a week later moved on with her life? If either of my daughters were killed I would be screaming hysterically for days, weeks, maybe even months. Come on now. Rachel you need to develop these characters and really give us something to like about them. The grammar was ok, only a couple errors as far as I could see. Tanner was annoying using her name constantly and the "pretty lady" thing was over the top. Sorry Rachel but you can do better! I was asked to read this book and recieved it for free in turn for my review.