Review: a fun read, but Dee-Ann - please get an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 29, 2012
You need one to take care of basic grammar and spelling mistakes such as "you're column needs...", "movie premier", etc. There are plenty of them and it did slightly spoil my enjoyment of what was a fun and entertaining read despite the commonplace standards of the heroine getting her pick of designer frocks and being gifted them, and her being told by the male interest "I love a woman who speaks her mind". My fault for reading too many of your novellas I suppose but the repetitiveness irks.Also please when your character is eating you never tell us what it is - a small point but it would add colour to say "he fixed us some broiled salmon steaks" rather than "he fixed us some dinner", or "I had a BLT sandwich at my desk" rather than "I had a sandwich at my desk".Keep writing, you've got the imagination, just take care of the sloppiness. I look forward to your next opus.