Review: Okay short story. Could've been better.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
I think this could have been a better novel with this story line. Woman is "kidnapped" by her own sister & sister's boyfriend with the "plot" to hook up kidnapped sister with boyfriend's brother. There could have been more to this story; it is difficult to believe that any kind of relationship between the two "victims" could develop within 24 hours, but this is what happens at the end. Story should have been longer & involve some sort of "retribution" against the perpetrators (the boyfriend's family-mother & cousins-were in on the whole plan & were entirely for the ridiculous plot; I do not see anything "romantic' about being kidnapped & being held against one's will, even if it involved one's sibling)!