Review: Could have been awesome
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 14, 2013
All of the books in this series are lacking in some way; especially considering the price of them compared to other books this length. This one really could have been the best in the series though! I'm so disappointed. The main characters were great and the plot was set up nicely. The bad guy was even awesome. Then...brain fart? I don't understand at all what happened. It's like the author just wanted to kill it off and be done with it after setting up a great story. There wasn't even an altercation with the bad guy...and what happened to "pounding you through the bed"??? The one entire sex scene (that actually turned into sex) was a paragraph. I believe it ended with both characters saying 'that was great' and going to sleep which was about how I felt at the end of the book. Seriously! Please re-write the 2nd half of this book, add another 100 or so pages, and send me a copy. I've bought all of this series and keep waiting for the price to be worth it but I am yet again let down. The series has so much promise too...please fix it or at least charge half as much for the stories.