Review: Good for a short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2011
i liked the concept of the amulet and i enjoyed the story a lot. but i was kind of lost. if he was meant to be good and weld the amulet to save people then how does the whole spying on his neighbor while she's rubbing one out apply. I mean the scene was awesome but that wasn't exactly his shining moment.I do like how he finally came to his senses and saved her at the end and they ended up together. Oh and the girls mother. seriously.  they were kids. i get that you want to protect your child but how are you going to hold something that happened what ten years ago against him now when her daughter obviously doesn't. and the whole date thing. though i agree he was wrong in forgetting and going with becky to his and sam's date but Sam isn't exactly a kid so the mother shouldn't have taken it so personally. he honestly didn't mean to hurt her.maybe i just missed something. oh well.I would still read the second one just to see how things turned out.