Review: You can't say the title was misleading
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2010
"His Voice, His Command" is pretty apt-- the guy spends most of this erotic short story flapping his jaw instead of actually doing anything.  Also, while I'm not one to demand elaborate backstory for my porn, I spent most of the story with absolutely no idea where this dude and this lady were, why she was submitting to him, and whether it was consensual, which does affect what I find hot and what I don't.  The revelation of all that at the end was decent and resolved some of the feminist issues I'd been having with the story (though not all of them), but... yeah, too much jaw-flappin' about "take off your high heels, career lady, you exist only for my pleasure" for my personal tastes.Also, you know what's not hot?  When a woman yells "Oh god, kill me!" during sex.(No, I'm not kidding, she actually says "Kill me."  If I were the guy, I would not feel flattered.)