Review: Numerous typos and continuing promotion of "girl in need" of being controlled
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
There were many typos in this book and yes, I sent off a lot to Amazon to fix.  Spell check only checks misspelled words, not wrong ones.  A good copy editor would be worthwhile investing in, or even a friend to double check as the errors were jarring.The story has very interesting possibilities, but the continuation of the "girl" being controlled by the studly "men" in her life is not something to advise young women to read.  Yes, she does stand up for them, but in return they tell her what she can do, read, wear, do.  And the evolving line of intimacy is blurring between what do friends do (a big concern for the main character) vs what do lovers do.I appreciate your addressing abuse as it is very needed.