Review: Untamed Bear
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2014
PLOT: Sydney is plump and not at all Carter's type but after one night of making out, neither of them can stop thinking about the other.PROS: I felt the author had talent.CONS: The story needs to be edited. I decided to give this author a try because you never know when you're going to find a gem. Sometimes I can get so into the story a few editorial errors don't disturb me. That wasn't the case here. The errors make for some confusing moments when incorrect words are used.The story needs to be further developed. Sydney and Carter aren't well developed. What do they do for a living? Why were their discussions about science? What color is their hair or their eyes? And the sex was ... blah.2.5 - 3 STARS: It's not a bad read, but not a great one either.