Review: Erotic Short Told in Overly Clinical Manner
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 16, 2013
This is an erotic short told in two different styles.  The first half is told in a light modern romance style.  Pam is a divorced woman in her mid 40s trying to make a little money during the holiday season by playing Mrs. Claus.  The first day she mistakes Ed's age and is surprised when the man playing Santa is around her age. For the rest of the month leading up to Christmas each of them come in a little early and stay a little later talking.When they finally get together, the language abruptly changes.  Granted they did know each other for awhile and were obviously mutually attracted.  The problem is I was not expecting the language to shift so quickly.Even with the language shift I probably could have adjusted if the "action" sounded passionate, instead it read clinical.  Once all the "buttons" had been stroked, licked or otherwise touched upon, then on to the climax.I truly enjoyed the first part of the story, I had no issue with them hooking up.  I just didn't get that tingly feeling while they were doing it.  After awhile I was thinking of England.While I would give this writer another try, I can't recommend this.