Review: Cute story line, but...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2011
The story line was kind of cute. But the writing was stilted - one wonders if the author is English from some of the words chosen. Otherwise, it's just too contrived. No one born and raised in the United States would commonly use the word "whilst". And someone needs to take away her comma key for egregious over usage. Jessica, the main character, sounds juvenile when you first meet her and it's hard to believe that anyone much older than her would have wanted to get more than casually acquainted, even if some of her behavior could be excused due to health reasons. Editing, please!