Review: Potential, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2014
More like a 2.5.  It had a great deal of potential until the sex started.  From that point on it was a rambling mess of uninspired, unromantic sex and constant repetition of plot points.  The POV changed in the middle of a sentence or thought so it was difficult at times to tell whose head your were in.  It was impossible to fall in line with the insta-love and the constant use of "baby" drove me crazy. There were more editing errors than acceptable for the length.  It was a shame, because with a little more effort, this could be a really sweet story.