Review: My major issue with this work is that it starts and stops three separate times
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 21, 2012
My major issue with this work is that it starts and stops three separate times. Fascinatingly, each separate start is a really good premise! But its frustrating for the reader because the characters are put back to square one and repetition and redundancy ensues.A second issue, is that the world building is lacking. I don't understand the wolf culture. Neither the old ways or the new ways were explained. So when the twist happened and the wolves went back to the old ways allowing Zan and Brant to be together I didn't really feel an impact. And we don't get more about Zan's background until the end, and it wasn't that much. Lucas seems to be worldly and wealthy, where Zan only finished high school and works at a cafeteria and then a perfume counter. I needed more reasons behind the attraction.Another reviewer mentioned that Brant did not stand up for Zan. He let Lucas walk over him and her and their relationship. Brant did not layeth the smack down upon his brother when Lucas saw them having sex not once, but twice! And the second time it wasn't just Lucas who got a sneak peek! Un unh! And worse, Zan didn't call him on it.I really liked that this was an interracial PNR, but I wish I had known whether there were any other skin tones in the pack? Was it not a big deal that Zan was black because there were other shifters of color? I was constantly thinking about that.