Review: I have to say...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2013
I have to say that this is the 2nd book I have read by this author I wanted to give the author a chance to redeem herself.  The author has potential but there is defiantly room big room for improvement.  I don't think her editor or proofreader is on their job.  The author has great ideas and the plots have been very interesting to read but they are scattered and contradict themselves.  One chapter or paragraph it will say one thing but then turn around and say the complete opposite of what was said or started in the previous chapter or paragraph.  Sometimes you don't know what person is speaking or being spoken about very confusing if you don't concentrate and think about what was said before a reader shouldn't have to concentrate that hard it should flow easily and your imagination of the characters should come in play not your know of writing.  When one pays money to read a story it should be on point if this was free then there is nothing I could say because the person was spending their time to write but this is something that the author wants to be paid for and the quality should be better.  Like I said nice ideas but poorly executed for the audience to read.