Review: Great draft!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2013
I liked the story, but it seemed somehow unfinished and more like a draft than a completed book. Some of the story seemed a bit of a reach, for example, when Ben was angry at Anne because he thought she was using him, i have to ask, how did he jump to that conclusion? He didn't even know she was Dr. Jane Conner? When did they have any discussion about a job for Anne? And, Anne was disappointing because she didn't even defend herself to Ben when he accused her.  In any event, I would love to read the book when it's finished.