Review: Good
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2014
The story itself was good. The editing in this one was worse than the last one, the last one had a few but there were times with this one that made you have to go back and figure out who was saying what or what they were trying to say. I hated to whole bdsm scene. It seemed forced and too copied in a way. At one point she went to his house and then she was pulling the bag from under her bed. It was all over the place during the scene. It would've been better had it played out different. I really want to hear more about him though. As short as these are you'd think the author would spend a little more time developing the characters.  I'll see what the next book brings me.