Review: Wordy, slow
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 12, 2013
Although the premise might be ok, the stories are slow moving and wordy (as others have pointed out). For instance, it was frustrating to read paragraphs of thought between lines in a dialogue.  There were also some inconsistencies in the stories and parts were unrealistic.  As well, beware that the first story has some horrific behaviour, not suitable for the younger reader.