Review: Great Story .... But
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2014
Great Story ... But someone needs to re-read their work more closely. It seems that this writer is giving too much time in trying to create his story and not enough time to properly re-read and edit some of his many, many errors throughout this story, especially when he switching from one character's POV. This is an exciting series. After reading all seven of this writer's e-books, he failed miserably and wholeheartedly in his revision process before going live with his e-book. There are so many misspelled words or misused of words, either he can't see them or just rely 100% on his wordprocessing program to tell him his words are okey-dory. Alongside the spelling errors, there's any incorrect or improper sentences. I think it is great that he continuing this series with Thad Torin's son, but what's hard to read is this writer failed miserably in his character's separation of identity or POV.Bren is a great character where his life is differently from his father's life. Yet, the writer still maintain this ignorance of a teenage boy, just like he did with the first six e-books with Thad.I just hope that this writer will take the time in the future to review all his books and make some revision. I know I would enjoy this book more AND change my rating if he would do that. Maybe the writer could use a beta-editor. Just look me up, dude.Good luck with your other e-books.