Review: Decent story, but.....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 21, 2013
The story itself was pretty good. The ending, though, sort of leaves you hanging. I can deal with that, but I would be hesitant to read more by this author. The reason (and I really am not trying to be mean) is the startlingly atrocious grammar, spelling and word usage. This book was plagued by run on sentences and wrong words used. For example, the author must learn the difference between loose and lose! If one is going to go to the effort of writing a novel, it would be a good idea to master punctuation, capitalization and proper word usage.  This  author, in my opinion, has potential. However, she needs a refresher English class before writing her next story.