Review: Too short for my liking, but it's a sweet story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 15, 2013
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.Rating: 6/10PROS:- The setting/occupation of the main characters is one that I know nothing about, and I found the details here and there about confectionaries interesting.- There's a good depiction here of someone admiring his love interest almost to the point of worship.- The sexual payoff is pretty good. Espinoza establishes that Josh wants Peter but is afraid to act on his desires. So when Peter makes a move, the resulting scene is long and slow and detailed.CON:- Like most short stories, this one fell flat for me because I couldn't help comparing it to what it could have been if the characters had had more room to develop.Overall comments: The guys here are sweet, and for readers who like short stories, this one's probably a good choice. It left me wanting more.