Review: Promising book...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2013
...but some of it falls short.  My issue, as is usually the case with indie author books, is word choice.  Whether more editing is required, or if the author chooses the wrong word, I can't say.  Finally gave up about halfway through "Pale Man", when I read, "...the man's hard-soled boot caught his wrist in a viscous upward soccer kick."  Pretty sure that should be "vicious." Just one example of many that I saw.As I said, the author has promise, but more attention to detail is required.