Review: Writer goes on and on and on about same stuff - need rewrite
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2013
The writer's book concept is great and treated with normal "Human vs Aliens" emotions.  You understand what it would feel like to be human to awaken on an alien spaceship.  You see the effects that a human has on the Aliens around her as they start to take on human emotions that they have never felt because they see them in her.This writer is a GOOD WRITER but she doesn't edit her stuff.  For example she has chapters and chapters of almost the same information where two chapters would be enough to get her point across.  It is a colossal waste of time for the reader unless you are into very soft core porn.  The Author needs to learn to edit before taking on more books.  Reduce the book to 300+ pages instead of 500+ that are so repetitive would be great for readers.Also for grammarian checkers (which I am usually not), there are many mistakes such as leaving off the last character of words, mixing up personal pronouns (for example: writing from one character's viewpoint who is a woman and the personal pronoun used is male).  There are many other mistakes.I wish she would stay away from trying to map Christian Religious Concepts to her Characters (for example: the suicide happens on "Good Friday - Jesus's death" and the person dies but comes back to life on Easter - Jesus' resurrection) because the book doesn't need it and it only distracts and alienates people who are or are not Christians.  This book is not a witnessing tool in anyway that I can conceive and these concepts should simply be deleted as they are NOT important to the plot.  Yes, they do make it seem as though these aliens have been around us Earthlings a long, long time but trying to map this back to Biblical History would be better summed up as just saying they have been around a long, long time.I don't recommend you read this book until the author changes her editing process unless of course you love to read loves scenes about touching over and over and over...