Review: Quit horsing around and get an editor!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2013
Many months ago I read a portion of this book when it was offered as a teaser.  It didn't compel me to purchase the complete book; but when it came up on the top 100 free, I picked it up and completed it.  Just as with the portion I read months ago, this edition is rife with errors, omissions and brain farts which are annoying and could be cleaned up with competent editing.  The story line is flawed, and the problems the female protagonist has with her brother are totally unbelievable and, in fact, laughable.The author does write fairly hot sex scenes but uses the same descriptors again and again which gets old and makes each scene a seeming rehash of the last.  Also...what is it with the writers of erotica today???  This book, like many many others in this genre, has a male protagonist who is painted as a person "you don't want to cross"; you know, when he says "jump" you better jump if you know what's good for you.  I just don't get it...in today's world of erotica, it seems men are borderline rapists and actual abusers, and women love everything these "alpha males" subject them to.  BBBbbbaaaaaRRRffffff!!  God, give me strength! Two stars for this far-fetched horse's ass of a story.