Review: Captivating, relatable story! I loved it!!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2012
This story grabbed me from the very beginning and held my interest throughout.  It's a really GREAT story with lots of twists and turns to keep it from getting predictable.  I love the concept of the story and the author has an excellent and very creative imagination!  This isn't like a story I've read before (like other stories that are similar to something else).  This is creative, unique, and very interesting!  It's also very relatable, the idea of what we'd do if we suddenly found ourselves at a time in our past.  Would we change something?  It definitely got me thinking, that's for sure!  And all the connections between the characters, throughout time...fascinating!!  Makes me think about my own life and the people in it.  I love when a story makes me look at life in a new way...this one does that!The characters were very well described and easy to relate to.  I could picture each one of them like I was there.The author has a real gift for description and figurative language!!!!  She finds a way to describe things in a unique way that make it so clear, it's fun to read.  Lots of writers could learn from her descriptive style, I know that.  It was descriptive without being too over-the-top or dragging on.  Perfect.My only criticism is there are way too many grammatical and typographical errors.  That's the only reason I gave this story 4 stars and not 5.  The author needs to reread the story and fix stuff.  Words were left out quite often.  Not so much that you don't know what she meant to say.  And as I read I often filled in the missing words in my head (like a missing "of" or "the"...things like that).  Also, she used the wrong character name once in a scene.  It was obvious she inadvertantly typed the wrong name, and it was obvious who it was supposed to be.  But that sort of thing should really be noticed and fixed.All in all, the story itself was outstanding!!  Just be prepared for a load of minor errors as you read.  But hopefully the author will fix those and republish an edited version!