Review: Updated Review--1.5 stars
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 30, 2012
*****SPOILERS********Edited:Well if your expecting a link or anything to the new updated version (original buyers) don't wait, contact Amazon. I got tired of waiting and emailed Amazon, they sent the updated version to the Kindle within minutes..My initial thought after I finished the completed story was that it didn't live up to expectations... I think the author might have rushed to get the book finished and the updated version uploaded and it definitely showed. The first story was fairly clean of any typos but the second and third parts had quite a few in both. In my first review I mentioned how relieved I was that you didn't have to figure out what the author was trying to say, this was also not true of the second and third parts of the story. I also think the story went off the wall in the second book (Whitney Houston's death is mentioned- I wonder if that was a way to try and make this book feel more contemporary or real life or what?)  I was also let down by the whole prejudice talk, I felt like this was just thrown in there because it is an interracial romance. Nothing was really talked about except the mention of it and then it was just swept under the rug. I still don't agree with the h's decision to be the OW.. Yes she jumped to conclusions and was wrong but it doesn't make her personality likeable that she was willing to do this.I liked Stephano but I definitely wasn't a fan of the h.