Review: Edit please...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 23, 2013
I see grammar mistakes in all sorts of Kindle books.  But when bad writing, poor stories, and math problems are all that you can think of, that means the story is dull.  All through the story the couple hasn't seen each other for 10 years, when she was on her 16th birthday.  Somehow, she is about to turn 28...that makes 12 years.  I was not interested in the story when the age mistake was found, but now it is the main thing i think of.  That means the story isn't interesting.  Sorry...