Review: a bit more please
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 6, 2010
What I liked about this story was the wonderful descriptions of the world around the main female character. I loved the dominance aspect of the book. What let me down was the modern use of sex terms in what was described as long past Arabia. The other thing that let me down was the awfully quickie love scene, though wonderfully dominant.. for a virgin it would have been a bit much and she should have complained...she didn't...or he could have been gentler with her her first time and a second round of sex with lots of rough dominant would have been more believeable and fit with his feelings and attitude. Lots of promise though and would read another book by this author. There is talent here.