Review: Short romantic/erotic story that fits the genre but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 6, 2014
A romantic/erotic short story. Part 1 of 4. Quick entertainment. Nothing new or original but if you like the genre, this may work for you. Fast paced & the events happen very (too?) quickly. The events happen so quickly that it affects the story's credibility at times. The same story, same length could have been more probable by adding words like, "a couple days later", or "a month passed". You don't get bored but you don't get to "feel" the story either. If you like short books that are sexy yet not too heavy in detail, this is a good choice. If you like a little "meat on the bone", a little more content, you may want to skip this one. The characters are very Fifty-ish: Young, plain, poor, virgin sales clerk meets gorgeous, insanely rich, over confident 27 year-old man. Man, instantly becomes obsessed with girl & hot sex ensues. I was on the verge of maybe being a bit teary eyed at one point but the scene got cut short before the emotions played out fully. Serena Grey has potential as a writer, she just needs to work on adding more detail and not rushing events too much.It took me just over an hour to read the entire book, including the teaser to book 2 at the end. I'll read the sequels if they go on sale.