Review: So not an adult series..
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 16, 2014
With all the positive reviews I bought this book curious to find a new series that I could get into. While the writing is done pretty well, the substance and maturity level are low. There is no way this should be considered "adult". The heroine is 18 but acts and thinks like she's 15, much is missing from the back story that you never find out about such as how they wind up where they are, and pick pocketing for rent money? Her brother takes several buses to get to school and your telling me she couldn't find a McDonald's that was hiring? And in 4 days time, she has managed to make out with 3 guys on the team, have a crush on the 4th, and describe in detail every curve of the 5th and yet I can't tell you anything about her other than she has long hair.Also, apparently every guy she comes in contact with her in that four day period is completely smitten by her and yet she's living out of two book bags, wearing the guys' on the team's clothes, and rarely seems to bathe. Oh and she takes on a rich socialite with ties to a drug cartel...right.This became annoying quick and was hard to finish.