Review: The writing style HORRIBLE!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2012
Okay I want to start by saying that I liked the concept of the story, a good story in fact. What ruined the whole book from my perspective was the author writing the whole book in what seems to be third person. I usually don't complain about editing on books and just overlook those type of things, but this book needs editing really in a bad way, spelling was not so great, but more importantly a lot of sentences did not even make sense. The author used the word HAD way too much!!! I suggest maybe writing courses maybe? I was surprised this was not her first and only book honestly. The only way this book would have been worth purchasing would be if it was offered for free, in which case it is not and costs $2.99. Don't waste your money.