Review: Interesting story but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 2, 2014
The reason I only gave this story 3 stars was because I was confused throughout the story. At times you didn't know if it was in the present or past memories. The story also felt a little disjointed. I think if the author would smooth the story line a little bit this has 5 star potential because the story is a unique idea, one that I haven't come across before. (And yes there is a HEA.)