Review: I really do not want to make the author cry ...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2013
... please look upon this as constructive criticism. I did not have to take time out of my life to write this and I am certainly not doing it to be mean.You had a wonderful story idea, but it is not finished. You need to take writing lessons at your local college so that you can develop your talent. You do have talent, it would be a pity to waste it.Your story is a seemingly endless loop of stuffing Henry into a box for no apparent rational reason. I understand the book was written for children but even quite small children will want to know why Henry has to go back in the box, especially since it is making him ill.Telling you, and the world this is a great book may make you feel good but it is not doing you any favor.