Review: Too good to have mistakes
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 29, 2012
"First Bite: The Wicked Queen's Tale" is a bit like "Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead", making minor character major and major characters minor.  There's an interesting take on the origin of the wicked queen, bringing an ancient story into the mix.  Some familiar characters are here, such as the Huntsman, and there are new characters, too, such as the witch's assistant Fortulla.This tale was nicely done--in fact, this is too good a story to suffer from mistakes like: "Swiftly, silently, for their was no time to lose."  Arrrrrgh!  Ok, ok, I'm a grammar/spelling Nazi and the misuse of their-there-they're makes me crazy.  As does excessive use. Of incomplete sentences.  For emphasis.  Clean this stuff up and this story would be 5 stars.