Review: Where was the editor?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 30, 2013
This was a very poorly written book.  It was inconsistent in the tense in which it was written.  I felt as if it was a high schooler's first attempt at putting her thoughts together.  More like an outline instead of a completed book.  As for editing, I don't think there was any.  If this writer paid someone to edit it for her, she got taken.As for the storyline,  it had real potential.  I found it interesting.  I liked the characters and the plot was predictable.  I did finish it but cringed every time I read either an editorial mistake and/or a change in tense.I would suggest the writer go back to the drawing board, use the same story line and clean it up.  It could be a very acceptable piece with the right attention.