Review: Nice story but loaded with misused words, and more
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2012
The story was good and I enjoyed the characters, although they were a bit one-dimensional and often their dialog was stilted. The problem was misused words, poor grammar, and typos were so numerous (I stopped counting at 23) they overshadowed the story. The worst of the goofs: "quaffed" hair instead of "coiffed" hair; 2. "fermented" trouble instead of "fomented" trouble; 3. "bare" instead of "bear" Please, Ms. Cooper, get someone with good English skills to proofread your book. Once that is done, I'd increase the stars to 4. You are cheating yourself and your readers otherwise.