Review: Great story with too many typos
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2014
McDonald's Worn Out Boots is about the best story I've read dealing with a single individual. Boots (formerly Jeremy) goes around making highways safe for travelers after a series of Coronal Mass Ejections/EMPs destroy the electric grid on earth. It's a microcosmic view, rather than anything grandiose, with lots of violence and some chilling occurrences.The typos involve too much confusion between plurals and possessives, misspelling "Mam" for "Ma'am", and too many commas. Some individual typos as well: "brought apparent" for "made apparent", "oasis's" for "oases", "by dent of" for "by dint of" and "disparage ways" for "disparate ways". Nonetheless, it's a fast moving story and is just the right length. Highly recommended.