Review: Needed more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 19, 2014
I like this story, but felt that the characters could have been developed more. I didn't feel much of a connection to Amy because I don't feel that I know her, and Max just didn't have the depth I like to see in leading men. I usually end up obsessing over them. He wanted Amy to move in, something he has never done before, but then he was too quick to condemn her without a chance for explanation.  Even Nicky Dunn should have made an earlier appearance, not just in name, to show the conflict. She was never seen with Amy, nor did she have anything contact with her, that we no of, other than offering her a job that was declined. How were we to think, even for a minute, that Nicky was getting information from Amy.My hat goes off to any writer who opens their work to others. It takes time and dedication to create something from nothing more than and idea, or a feeling, but the novella Secrets, Love and Betrayal didn't show me all of those things. I think this could have been a very good story if developed more. Thank you, Alicia Roberts, for allowing me to read your story.