Review: Too Unrealistic
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 13, 2012
I'm glad this was a free ebook at Amazon.The Good:The very unusual opening, gives the book a unique beginning.Bear shifters aren't as popular as were-wolves and were-tigers, so it's a refreshing change of pace.The Bad:Some of the phrasing reads awkward or flat out doesn't work, like to the point of completing keeping me at arms' length instead of losing me in the story.Lora seemed a bit flat to me, too flat for a main character.I've used guns before. I've shot everything from a double barreled shotgun, to a 9MM. Unless Johnnie's handgun was a.44 Magnum {which will not fit in a shorts pocket}, it will only piss a bear off, even if he hit the heart area of the chest, the bear's skin is tough... so the bear running off bleeding profusely and the blood spattered on Lora's shirt was too fake to me.