Review: Liked it for the most part, wished one part was altered/left out
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2013
I have read both the first and the second in the series at the time I am writing this review.  I liked this book, the characters/plot don't have as much depth as others- those aspects could have been beefed up.  I do like how she makes it clear that the main girl character isn't overly attractive or desirable at first glance- instead she is short and curvy, just a tad overweight. The author does something similar in the second book so I think she is making a point that you don't have to be model height and weight to have a relationship with an attractive guy.  I like clean reads and this one was fairly good in that area, it did worry me a bit when the kisses escalated to open mouth really quickly but the author doesn't linger on the kisses too long; the part that kind of jarred me was when the main guy removes some frosting from the girls face and then thinks about a few specific areas on her body he wouldn't mind doing similar things to. It was really just a blip  and that is as far as it goes in the book but I wish she had been a little more vague in where his thoughts were going.  An author can establish a strong physical attraction without details of where minds are going specifically.  I would give it three and a half stars if I could , minus one for the extra details of the physical aspects of the relationship and minus half a point for not enough character/plot development.  I did read the second after this so I was wiling to give the series another glance.  I downloaded this and the second when they were free, don't spend more than a couple of dollars on them.