Review: Good story in need of a professional proofreader
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 1, 2013
Review CopyThere is definitely a story here, maybe even a great story, but I cannot in good conscience recommend Dark Curtain with so many grammatical errors.  I'm talking no fewer than 50.  Predominately incorrect tense, but other glaring errors, like using "ridicule" when the sentence calls for "ridiculous" not once, but twice.I liked the premise well enough, "After an attack in the park, Roman loses his memory.  He tries to remember his past as any person would do in his place.  Only what he finds terrifies him.  Is he really the man his family and friends know?"  So when the author contacted me and asked that I read her work and provide a review, I said, "Sure."  What a mistake that was.  I'm not going to say I'll never read another story I'm asked to read, but I will certainly be more selective in the future.One last comment here.  The surprise ending is a gem, but the author needs a better editor and could benefit from a professional proofreader. Remember, spell-check only finds spelling errors.Dark Curtain