Review: Excellent plot, good story, but weak on editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 22, 2012
What I liked was how well put together the story was. The editing was horrible, but the story was interesting enough for me to ignore the grammar problems. Would like to see this writer again, but next time with improved grammar. This person has the potential to be a great teenage story teller. Was happy to have the chance to tell how I feel. Trust me, this was a surprise for me and initially, I was put off by the grammar, but the story grabbed and hung onto me. For those that read this rating I would hope you give the writer a chance and read the book.