Review: Well Written Teaser
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 5, 2011
An intriguing beginning for a promising book, it's more teaser than novella and it definitely leaves you wanting more. It's free so you can't complain but be warned it is short and if you want a full story look elsewhere. This definitely put me onto the actual book and made me curious about the Goblin King and word the author has created. One thing I found slightly odd but also something that can easily be taken care of in the actual book was the fact that Eliza was 16 and the king I'm assuming is if not more like late 20's at least old enough that it wouldn't quite be legal for them "getting together" if you know what I mean. Still a good little excerpt and the age issue could easily be fixed if it goes more in the romance direction in the full book. Great start and I read it in about 20-30 minutes.