Review: Enjoyable
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2012
This short story is actually pretty good. Compared to the description, this wasn't what I expected at all -- there's a huge twist in the story and it's awesome.The reason this gets 3/5 stars is because the ending was abrupt, and although it made sense, the pacing changed so much at the very end that I couldn't rate this one higher. If the ending had been drawn out a bit more, and the overall story was a bit longer, I would have enjoyed this more.