Review: a difficult read
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 14, 2013
It is hard to put my finger on ONE item that caused me to stop reading this work.  The author's writing style was awkward; I had difficulty understanding many of the paragraphs - so just skipped them.  The development of the relationship between Oliver and Mack was most difficult to understand; maybe I was expected a more logical connection between these two characters.  For me, this was a difficult read; I would not recommend it to anyone - with or without an editor's intervention!  It deserves "no stars;" however, I am limited to giving it a reluctant one star!