Review: It's got potential but it also stretches credulity
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2014
I've had this on my Kindle for a long time. Since I have a cold, I decided to read it the other night. Initially, I was drawn to the story because of the cover. It harkens to memories of Snow White -- with a techno thriller twist. I thought that was a great idea. I'm not sure how the final outcome stacks up. I don't agree with some of the other reviewers that it's terribly written. There are a few errors, but I think a lot of the nitpicky people don't realize how hard it is to do an entire book and make no errors. There weren't so many errors in this that it drew away from the story. I've seen a lot worse. Trust me. The story itself, though, didn't exactly seem thought out very well. There are rapid swings in the narrative and the book does start out with a jarring opening that should be finessed a little bit. I did find my interest waning at certain points but I held on to the end. As for the end? It's not great. I think there's some stuff that's good in here but I think there's some stuff that's not exactly explained very well either. It's simply okay.