Review: DownLow Baller I and II- Needs Editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2014
The editing was terrible. I couldn't focus on the story because of all the grammatical errors. The story line had promise, but using the wrong names, the repetitive phrases and the constant jumping around took a lot away from the story. I hate to leave a book unfinished, so I plodded through. The abrupt ending felt rushed and left a lot of loose ends.