Review: Decent story plot
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 10, 2013
Over I have to say I like the story, but while I did like it well enough it really didn’t stand out in my mind as anything truly exceptional, at least not yet.The biggest problem I had with this short story is that it is “just” a short story.  If it had been longer, and/or fuller development, I would have enjoyed it far more.I do hope that the writer continues the story, because I do consider it to have a lot of potential, but the first book really didn’t make use of that potential.Two things that I would ask Jennifer to be aware of, one readers want a full book, and two if you do continue this series please be careful about falling into clichés with your story.  Uniqueness brings Raves, clichés bring Rants.Good Luck