Review: Not Mr. Perfect
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2014
Loving Nate is the story of Leah falling in love with Nathan Moore – who she thinks is Mr. Perfect. Leah literally runs into Nate on her first day at a new job. She falls fast and hard in love and loses all sense of reasoning. The author then offered two alternative endings for the story.Ross definitely has talent as a writer. Her writing is impressive and flows well. Unfortunately, Ross is not much of a storyteller. There isn’t an enfolding of a story in this novella. The character development that should be happening in the novella happens in between the end of the story and the two alternative endings. As much as Leah puts up with in Nate and with the lack of character development, her action before the two endings is not very believable. (I don’t want to ruin the story by indicating what her ‘action’ is.)*I received a free copy of this novella in exchange for an honest review.*