Review: OK
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 7, 2011
The story was way too short.  It seemed like a middle of a book with no beginning or an end really.  The story ended before thier relationship even began.  WTH. It explained too many thing too much as if the readers didnt already know why he called her "heaven".  As if we are idiots. Ugh. Griffin was a great charactor.  She was absolutley annouying and very childish.  Yes they we're in high school but come on.  Why couldnt she just make up her mind.  Anyway, the book or (short story) was just ok.It could have been great with a little more work.