Review: Savage Instinct
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2013
PLOT:  Aiden has been attacked by a rival pack of shifters. Nydia saves him accidently by hitting him with her car. He convinces her to take him home instead of to the hospital.PROS: It starts well and ends well.CONS: The story needs to be proofread for editorial errors (minor) and for content. Aiden says he was infected in the 80s, but later it says he inherited his pack from his father. Still later it's mentioned that he was born a shifter. His friend Malik is bald in one paragraph, tucks hair behind his ear in another, and then becomes bald again later.While the story starts out interesting, it treads water until about sixty percent. It's boring and repetitious. Nydia and Aiden sit around her house and bicker about nonsense. She's constantly thinking that empathy will only take her so far while he's continually feeling guilty for pretending to be hurt. During all this, they don't share so much as a kiss and it gets old real quick.2.5 - 3 STARS: Over all, I thought that Aiden and Nydia were more likeable apart than together. I didn't really buy that they were suddenly in love since all they did was argue. The middle was so boring that I had a hard time finishing it.