Review: Maybe it's me
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2014
The story is interesting and moves with lots of drama and action, but I could not see the connections between characters and chapters and I could not tell most of them apart ... except for the woman. There was only one woman, which I find rather annoying in an adventure story. None of the characters were clearly described or introduced, and I could not tell many of them apart, especially when they just showed up in chapters that moved from one part of the earth to another with no clear description except for the chapter heads. To add to the confusion, some of the characters were called by two different names at times, with no explanation why. It took me a few chapters to figure that out. Ordinarily I wouldn't have bothered, but the author might want to know she needs to do some work on her character formation to make her stories more powerful.