Review: Jonah broke my heart more
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2014
Oh Jonah... I don't know what to say to about him. He has so much built up emotion, it makes my heart break. I really enjoyed getting into his head, because I feel like he's very misunderstood in the first book of the Fate series. We get to see why he never really said anything to Chloe and why he let his brother continue a relationship with her. We also get to see his relationship with Callie, and how heartbroken he is over the death of his Uncle Joey.While reading, I couldn't help but think about what's going to happen to his relationship with Kellan. And it truly broke my heart. We get to see how deep their connection truly is, and I was entertained by their mental conversations. I am a Kellan girl, but i only love him a little more than Jonah. They're completely opposite, and I wish that Chloe could just clone herself so each brother could be happy.What I really love about these characters is that, although they have magical powers, they are only human. They make mistakes, huge, life-altering mistakes. But, Jonah is a young teenager, so it's understandable. I can only hope the guilt and regret that he and Chloe harbor, gets easier over time.The pacing of the story is great for a novella. We get to see a lot of backstory before Jonah gets them moved to California. It isn't till halfway through the story that the brothers get to meet Chloe in person. I only wish Jonah had the guts to talk to Chloe and avoid the huge misunderstanding that causes me more stress than any book ever has. But then again if he did that, we would be missing a huge part of the story, wouldn't we...Can't wait to have my heart broken a million more times with Kellan's novella.