Review: Good Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 21, 2013
I enjoyed this story well enough for the first two thirds of it or so, savoring mostly the Jeff North character. I kept picturing a certain young winner of a CBS reality show in the summer of 2012, small, dark haired and extraordinarily intelligent when I thought of Jeff. (Worked for me!) Sam got on my nerves until he started manifesting honest feelings for him, and then I was sold on Sam. The last 30%  of the story was just great! Nice job, overall. However, I would have enjoyed more of a sex scene or two between them. It would have made the payoff even better.