Review: Much Too short
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2012
This is much too short even for a short story.  It would serve much better as a prologue or a first chapter of a longer story rather than a stand alone.  However, it is well written and you are eager to see what happens. Then it just ends.  I think this author has a great future ahead of him but he needs to expand his ideas.**Disclaimer:  I received this in exchange for an honest review.