Review: Poorly written and edited
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2014
Where to start?  First, I got so tired of all the grammatical errors (misplaced modifiers - "Jon and Rudy walked into the store and he greeted the shop owner".  Who?  Rudy or Jon?) missing words ("He knew from the this was going to be something special."  Start?  Did you mean "He knew from the START...."?)  Letters missing, and so forth.The plot itself is truly unbelievable: a 12 year old raises himself and his 22 year old mentally challenged brother? No one notices and the Sheriff is in collusion?  They live on Rudy's disability check since the house is paid off, but both Ellis and Rudy's parents died of prolonged illnesses including hospital stays.  Where did that money come from?  It's just too far fetched.I won't be moving on to the remaining books.  This was a real miss.