Review: Tobias escapes his tormentor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 7, 2014
** spoiler alert **I enjoyed learning about Tobias' choosing ceremony. It is interesting that as Marcus sought to control his son, his control is what ultimately what gave Tobias the strength to escape his tormentor.The point of view was more believable that "Free Four," but I do not like the weak Tobias. I like the strong Tobias. I think this short story was worth $0.99, but not $1.99. I hope the next three stories will better and longer.