Review: Needs a proofreader!!!!!!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 23, 2014
Not a bad short, short story, and I'm sure the Irish mysticism will come into play sooner or later.  (Sigh.)But please, I'm begging here--get a proofreader!  I was assaulted by no fewer than five grammatical errors and/or unfortunate word choices ("instinctual"--really?) and I wasn't even looking for them.  If this had been a freshman writing assignment, the grade would have been a "C."