Review: the last ride
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2012
This is a very well told short story.  The character is fleshed well in the few short clicks of this tale.This is Dave's story told in short and direct manner.  There is no building up of background as this tale only requires the reader be in the moment.  The descriptive voice gives vivid imagery to the violence scenes.  There is a lot of violence, however, it is not over the top gratuitous type.  It fits the scene.Dave is one his way home for day - trying to avoid the day coming and he is met by a couple of blokes who are able to divert his mind for a time.  This is a well written tale with few editing errors.  It is so short, anything specifically said will ruin plot.This is good advert for author ability related to believable characters, dialogue.Recommend author.Christine