Review: a book I would have liked as a preteen
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 4, 2013
I appreciated all the hardwork that went into this book and it's precursor. It was lengthy which is great for an Ebook. However, despite the relatively coherent worldview the plot devices were extremely weak. Chert can compel knowledge but only does so when the story needs it. Whenever the author needs to move something along he just writes it in. Other sections serve no purpose. I saw all the strong reviews and was interested but unfortunately it badly needs a rewrite - although a great effort by the mr blink in terms of length.