Review: Grammer gets more atrocious as you progress
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 19, 2013
Numerous people complain about spelling, sentence structure, etc. This entire series is the WORST. Someone else stated it properly, the errors are glaringly obvious. Each and every page contains misspelled words, incorrect sentence structure, and incomplete sentences. It is irritating to be reading along and then have to stop (numerous times) to determine what the author is trying to say and which words are missing. If poor editing is a negative to you, skip this series. Normally I would deduct a star, but this series deserves a two star deduction.Personally, I think the second and third volumes are extremely overpriced.There is something missing from the storyline. It is interesting and there are moments that entertain but the entire trilogy feels incomplete and disjointed.  Your heroine never fully develops or grows up. She is pure as the driven snow and does not fit in the authors world that he has put her in. She has pursued a career that calls for violence yet she abhors violence.  Come on, get real.There was so much potential for this series.  The storyline, dialogue, characters; everything was a plus, but the end result was a continuous washout. I bought the books, even though they were overpriced, to find out what happened.  The more I progressed the more I became disgusted with the wasting of my time and money. There are too many good books out there.  They are just getting harder to find, with everyone throwing five star ratings around.I enjoyed the books but would have loved them if not for the editing.