Review: Funny and fun
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2011
This is simply a hoot.Taking one of the stock clichés of the porn industry, the author turns it on its head, giving us not only hot and tender sex, but a wealth of pithy, hilarious observations by working class philsopher Dave, and one or two even by emotionally and creatively constipated Stephen.I love the voices, and it's laugh out loud funny. Short, sharp and very enjoyable. A couple of editing niggles (and some word usage which makes me suspect Ms Vale is an Aussie masquerading as a Brit - or that Dave is) don't spoil an otherwise nicely written short story that works perfectly for its length. Even if you're not really interested in erotica, this is still worth the couple of bucks it costs, just for the giggles. Highly recommended.