Review: 'Who do we think we are...'
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2014
#3 revisits Dylan as the Runaway Bride that rushes to the airport to profess her undying love to Angel, reminiscent of (How Stella Got Her Groove Back).  Life carries on as they reunite and elope and begin life as a loving married couple complete with their baby.  Of course, Dylan always has something extra going on and it spills over and pulls Angel in as he fignts his wife's battles and demons as well.  Billie is adjusting well even though she's constantly dealing with a spiteful ex and also for her marriage to Knox.  Once a deeply buried secret resurfaces...Billie must fight or fail, there's no middle ground with this situation.  Families, friends and alliances are severed but are they reparable or damaged for life?#3 was a drawn out tale that should have been presented in a different format.  Instead of a sequel, I feel that the author would have had better execution if it had been penned as a continuation.  Building from the foundation is more effective and received by your seasoned readers.  Being that this was more Billie's story than Dylan's anyway. The best part for me was the ending, although it felt as if it was plucked out of the air.  But the description and telltale signs of Dylan's condition was very informative and may help someone.  Dylan's insensitivity to Angel was the most consistent item in her storyline. With more development and depth, this had the components to be a great read, but once again, the ball  was dropped.  I felt as if the author struggled immensely with this storyline as I notated that there was a lack of verbal conversations and a oversaturation of narration.  Too many copycat scenes that could have been orchestrated totally different to establish the author's signature stamp.  Repetitive and forced scenes along with the inconsistency of everyone's dialect.  One scene with the twins had everybody talking ebonics...wtw!!  Dylan even lacked all of her quirkiness, which was a factor that I enjoyed in the previous novels.  Keisha Ervin has been in the game for far  too long to continue to have misspelled words and editing issues.  I would suggest more concentration and effort in future endeavors.  AND IMPO, it was overpriced.  2.88