Review: What happened to grammar and editing????
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2013
My title for this review might lead one to the think that if you can overcome the terrible grammatical errors you might like the story: wrong.  I have rarely come across a more detestable heroine.  Even if the grammar had been perfect and the typos non-existent, this would still be a most unpleasant book because the characters are not likeable at all.  Seriously, the heroine is spoiled, ignorant, inconsistent, tacky, cries constantly, lacks in any sort of self-control and is wildly immature -- and she doesn't improve by the end of the story.  The hero is sort of likeable but one ends up thinking he is just plain spineless.  Their interaction is just okay in the beginning and then becomes almost unbearable as the interminable "I really love him/her but can't tell him/her because maybe he/she doesn't love me back" story line goes on and on.  Finally, I assume we are told about bad breath, smelly burps, gas and other such realities as a way to show that their love is real and will withstand "real life".  All it did was paint the characters as smelly and unhygienic; more than once these things worked to paint the H/h as less and less attractive and classy.  And I cared less and less if they got together.  Finally, there are loose ends to the story which just shows sloppy editing.  In all, I regret having spent the time on this book.  And I won't be reading any others in this series.