Review: A must read, BUT WHERE IS THE EDITOR?!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2014
First of all, I LOVED the stories in these books.  I love a good series, especially a series that gives different characters the spotlight in each book but still incorporates former characters.  BUT..........The time line was all wrong!  I loved loved loved these characters, but when I started to read the second book I realized that the author didn't even pay attention to her own timeline.  Ugh...so frustrating when you get so invested in the characters and story line.Where is the editor?  This author seriously needs to find an editor or get a new one.  There are so many misplaced/misused words and grammatical errors.  There are even careless things such as having the wrong character title for the chapters.  Zeke didn't even have a narrative in the second book, yet in chapter eleven, that's who it claims to be.  It's like she just took the chapter headings from the first book, copy/pasted, and forgot to change the character.  That's disappointing.  In a world with so much competition, authors need to be more careful with things they can control.It's little things like that that made this book a little frustrating.  Like I said, I loved the story!  I would definitely recommend to my friends, but I'd be careful to recommend it to my critical friends who are avid readers.  I read 3-5 hours every day. It's my favorite hobby, and I found myself getting frustrated with the constant, careless mistakes that were being made in the writing.  I'm, by no means, an literary expert.  But I know the difference in "necessary" and "necessarily", for example.  I also know that "the the" is never used and never correct.  That just happens when you're typing too fast.Loved your book Tabatha, but please go back and reread your work.  I want to continue reading books like this!!!!