Review: I like it, but...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2013
This story was good, had some unrealistic and unbelievable reactions by Charlotte, a woman left broken, alone and pregnant, to the irresponsible and egocentric father of her child, Dane.  The plot was good and had a lot of potential, but what should have been more detailed and given the characters more time for a healing and forgiving process, was rushed and left too many questions unanswered. Charlotte should have stood her ground for a while and made Dane earn her trust again. Instead, even though we were made aware of her soured feelings toward Dane, she fell right back into his arms with not enough respect and a motherly protection for her (their) 9 year old son.The promise of more to this story and the added stories of Dane's three brothers do, however have me interested enough to read more of Hart's writings.The book was well written as far as literary, but has too many holes in it. That's the only problem I see with the story, is not enough time and grovelling on Dane's part, which I have no doubt he would have done well with, and that Charlotte would rather fall for the one man that could destroy her once again and leave her heartbroken, than protect her son from living the same heartache his father put her through so long ago. Had she learned nothing? At least make the man crawl on his knees and beg over and over again before jumping in the sac with him so forgivingly.I'm a sucker for series, so I want to give this one a chance and give it four stars.~CB