Review: I don't even know where to begin...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2013
I am giving this book two stars because the story had potential to be so much better and the amount of story you get for the cost was OK.  The story would have been a good one, but it is in dire need of a professional editor.  The dialogue between the characters was just not realistic.  Like the author used the thesaurus to try to make it seem as if she is good with words.  I don't care if you are the average Joe or a member of the top 2%, people don't talk to one another in regular conversation like the author writes.Also, I believe if they would have utilized a bit of research, the character of Charlie would have been more authentic...He is a 37 year old CANADIAN only a bit over one year removed from his home country, but he is written to speak like an American born and raised!  The research would have shown them that, yes Canadians speak English but they do not use some of the same words for everyday things as American's do (ie...we say bathroom, they say en suite).  But the character of Nate was on point with his broken English and just downright "ghetto" personality. <-- (insert rolling eyes here)I am now very leery to purchase anything by this writer/editing duo.  The story had potential but was just lacking overall.