Review: Okay story, a little boring
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 25, 2012
The story was okay for a short story and the plot of it was fine, but did need more relationship building and things were a bit choppy. I was okay with the story until got towards the end and Serena lost appeal for me when she was having thoughts of excusing the criminal and even hoped he'd get away because he had flirted with her. WTH. Hello dumb chick, because of him her house was broken into and trashed, she came close to being snatched off the street after her lover FBI agent almost had his head bashed in by the would be kidnapper, not to mention the book was stolen from someone in the first place! She got my idiot award at that point and I was disgusted.i didn't want her with Nick after that.