Review: About Right
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 19, 2014
The moral of this story rings true.  The method to get there is suspect.  As I have stated in previous reviews, Chris has displayed a remarkable understanding of the military mindset.  Some of that came through here, but not to the extent that was evident in previous works.  Everything came to Steve without  effort.  Transforming Mars within months of gaining the shuttle and starship, Heinlein grows on the moon in an unrealistic pace, asteroid colonies, etc.  This work could have been three books  if the pace had been mote realistic.  I would have rather spent my time to follow this story in detail over several books rather than have it crammed into one effort.Chris,breathe, tell the story, don't rush to  get somewhere, let the story unfold at it's own pace.Edward.conway@earthlink.net