Review: A Good Story, Badly Written
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 25, 2013
Kat does what many girls do--gets pregnant while in high school. Her boyfriend does what many young men do--he turns his back. Unfortunately, so do Kat's social-climbing parents. Kat overcomes all this, finished her education, gets a job and makes a home for herself and her daughter. Flash-forward three years. Enter the hero, Tyson, a very nice man whose skin color and age make him an unlikely match for Kat, but his personality and caring manner make him exactly the right match. This is a love story that could have been much better executed. The use of language, the spelling and atrocious syntax forced me to stop stop reading before I ground my molars down to stubs.Where was this author's editor? Out to lunch? Where was the proof-reader? Or did she even hire an editor or bother with a proof-reader? I sincerely wish I had not wasted my money on this novel. If I'd bought it in paperback, it would have been one of "throw it across the room" books (except I have too much respect for any book to do that). But I'm here to tell any other reader, if you like your books well-written, with good spelling, grammar, and punctuation, don't be tempted. It is this slap-dash, let's get it done and up on Kindle kind of writing that give e-books a bad name.