Review: love the universe but needed another editing pass
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 9, 2013
Great addition to the Elfhome story arc, from a new perspective. It's a very tight short story--great characters and storyline--but it suffered from a sloppy editing job: Missing words and/or letters from words, bad verb tenses, etc. One more pass through a good editor would have raised this up to a five star short.