Review: Where do I begin?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 3, 2011
I'm not even sure what bugged me the most! I'll start with 3 books of William and Bryn telling each other "How Amazing" they are! I mean ok I get it ,they are amazing he is, she is, they are!!! Seriously STOP! Huge long paragraphs going on and on about how amazing Bryn is and maybe it's just me she never did anything amazing! WHY WHY WHY is every man in love with her? Let's start with Paul. They went to school together for what a week and he falls madly in love with her WHY?? Then William, ok I get his hang up with her BUT PATRICK??? WTF that came out of NOWHERE!! I mean maybe I could say in book 1 when Bryn and Patrick were on the beach together there might have been something. If that were the case then why was he so furious with her when she left William? Shouldn't he have been happy? Why did he rip her a new one? If he really did love her why didn't he go to Europe with her? Why didn't he tell her then that he loved her? When did he fall in love with her? There was NEVER any build up or reason for Patrick to love her! It was like oh we need a Quasi love triangle and Paul and Patrick will do. The most disturbing thing was after Bryn and William were "United" and the next moring the whole family is gathered around to hear all about William and Bryn having sex! I'm suppose to believe Patrick loves her but then wants his brother to give all the dirty deets of his wedding night? Who does that? What family would gather around the next day to talk about a couple's wedding night? SICK! Eternal Eden started out ok with a promising story line but it went off track by book 2. Last thing I'm going to complain about. Why didn't Charles just tell William from the begining, "Hey son if you want to be with Bryn and have the councils blessing, then agree to be the Chosen One, and they will let you be United". I would think with Bryn's power she should have been an invaluble asset instead they treated her like she wasn't. What about that phrophecy anyways. I'm not sure it ever made sense to me! Was it even really fufilled??? I just have to stop.