Review: Not MG- writing threw me off
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2012
First off this is not MG- there is killing in the first chapter of the book and the second paragraph mentions the main characters "healthy bosom". While the length is short- that does not automatically make something MG. Please be advised parents this is not for 8-12 yr olds.I made it to chapter three before I was first thrown of by the writing. There is a part in the text where two characters are talking. Thrown into the middle of the conversation a paragrpah says something like they walked through the city and talked about A...., B....., C..... and then we are in the middle of their conversation again. It makes you pause and go what is happening?? Then all of a sudden they are getting married not a chapter after they met. It was strange with tons of holes in the plot.