Review: Bad, Bad, Bad
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 22, 2013
I purchased this book because the plot sounded interesting and it was free. I can see now why it was free and do not know if the other two people who reviewed this book actually read it. I would rate this book in the negative if I could, there are so many things wrong with it. Where to start...the book is set in the U.S. And with no reference of the characters being foreign words like jumpers were used in reference to clothing, and characters kept calling each other mate among other specifically foregone dialogue. There was a lot of misused words that caused you to have to read the sentence again to get it. I consider myself pretty lenient when it comes to spelling because we are all human and make mistakes, but it was like this book was written in one go and published without being proof read at all. At times there should have been an I there was an A. This is not a love story at all, there is hardly any talk of attraction, a few kissing scenes but it was all weird and was not what I consider a whole story. I kept reading hoping it would get better and towards the end of the story the main characters name was replaced by a side character....seriously, this story is about Elle and Crash, not Alice and Crash. I will never get the time back I spent reading this awful book, maybe the author should look at it again, revisit and revise or just scrap it and take some writing classes. I don't mean to be rude and if this is a strong passion for the author then she should take my advise and take some writing courses. Good luck on any future endeavors and may they be better than the last.