Review: Needs an edit
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2014
The stories are interesting but difficult to read as the sentences run together and the speech isn't written correctly.  This makes it difficult to tell who is speaking.  Also there is very little explanations on what is happening.  The author relies on the speech of the characters to move the story forward.  And as often I couldn't tell who was speaking, the stories were very confusing.