Review: Needs editing, but gets much more interesting in the second half...good thing I give second chances!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2013
Lots of errors, weak dialog and a bit cheesy. The main problem is that the omniscient point of view allows for the reader to know what both characters are thinking and the dialog between them is lacking.Also exclamation points are over used and the phrase 'he kissed her softly' is repeated ad nauseam. In fact the adjective soft is worn out in the first half of the book.Cole gets much tougher, sweeter, and the relationship develops nicely during the second n d half of the book. Ally remains bratty and Cole holds the storyline line together.