Review: An O.K. Start
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2014
This book read like a first draft. I'm surprised it was actually published. Besides the many editing errors, the story was underdeveloped. I imagine I could learn to care about the characters and their trials if the author put more time into developing each aspect individually and then collectively. I don't think I'll be checking for the next book by this author, or even the publisher. It must be understood that work product represents every entity involved in putting the product out. But I must say, as a first draft, this is excellent and I can see the makings of a great series, that's why I gave the book 2 stars. I hope the author takes the time to truly develop Keya and Trey if their story will be next, or Slim and Gabby. Whatever the plan is, extra, unrelated eyes need preview it before publishing.