Review: An Author to Watch
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
The story instincts I found in this book were awesome. Kept me enthralled throughout, though the writing was incredibly rough. I kept thinking it might be better in third person, but then I'd change my mind. First person, and then hopping back and forth between the two main characters is fine, there's just a whole lot of telling rather than showing. I want to read the rest of the series, but that will have to wait.