Review: In the middle of 3rd chapter
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2012
I realize that it's unfair to judge a book after only 2 chapters, but I can't go on.  The concept is cute, but the dialog is unreal.  And the editing is horrible.  The absence of necessary punctuation - especially commas - really detracts from the whole experience.  I had to re-read several paragraphs and add my own punctuation to have it make sense.  Sorry I don't have more positive comments.Addendum:  I did go ahead and finish this while gritting my teeth.  It's written as if geared to a 8-10 year old audience (but DEFINITELY shouldn't fall into their hands).  It appeared as though the author was trying to cover all possible fantasies - except, perhaps, the rather lengthy lesson on quantum physics.  And I haven't changed my mind on the rating.