Review: Disapointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2013
After the awesome start of the first book, this one falls away short of how good of a writer/story-teller she really can be. First off there are so many errors it's laughable.  Some sentences just blow your mind with the wording I even copied and pasted them in my editing program to see if there were incorrect, ok there, weren't, but there were considered weak and poorly constructed one of these is on the very first page. Second in book one they guys lived on 50 acres now they live on 100 acres what the hell gives...  Three at the end of book one Alyssa was three months pregnant when the call came in to help the relo- group so you're telling me it took three more months to get the plan in place I don't think so nobody or a group would leave someone asking for help to escape abuse for three months.