Review: alpha a bit to mean
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2011
First off, this author has done an excellent job of her writing. It is carefully edited and obviously she took time to make sure it flowed well together. I think you will either love this or hate it though. I love love love an alpha male, but Travis is a bit beyond alpha male and just plane mean at times and instead of just being really possessive and strong, he tends to be mean and forceful. For example the line "And when you get back to the house, you better make me something real sweet for dessert, because i want something for all the goddamn trouble you're causing me". He says this after she was worried about him and so brought him a lunch to where he was working and then grabbed her to make out and she pushed him back when it went to far.Like I said, i love an alpha male, however he really looks at her like she owes him, and I don't like that. She should not have to trade sex for him helping her out. I think she is a great character with depth and character, but I would think she would be afraid of him and not feel any desire.I do want to stress again that the writer does an amazing job of writing, and some may really love this story, especially those that love the alpha male, but he was over the top in meanness for me.