Review: Editting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2014
I really liked the storyline and the dialogue between characters but the internal monologues were very repetitive so it made the story drag a bit. It also had a few editing issues. A few times words were repeated, enough that I noticed it. There was one page where a section is inserted that just completely doesn't go and then it picks up to the correct content again and towards the end there's a big section that's horribly formatted. You can understand but you have to work your way through. It looks like your reading partial sentences, at least on the kindle app I used. I also noticed a plot/characters flaw in that two band members (spoiler*who are both replaced*) hold the same title of bass player... Lastly, I was kind of confused on a couple of occasions because it didn't seem like the plot was in the right order. I reread and filled in the blanks to work through it. Overall needs better editing and it'd be great. I will still most likely continue the series, assuming there is one, regardless of the continuous editing mishaps.