Review: Still too short and superficial
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 1, 2011
I've bought the collection of the first three parts - which together isn't more than about 1000 locations.The single parts themselves therefore are just about chapterlength and this is how they feel - chapters. None ist a real closed novella - they even stop im midaction. Maybe when all ten parts are released it'll get the feeling of a book but not now.The language is simple, the characters without depth, and the sexscenes are average. Jesse is emotionally in kids age...well, you can guess that I wasn't wowed. And is it picky of me that condoms are never even mentioned?Spoiler:Or that I'm annoyed about Mike having the next guy in his hot tub two weeks after he declared Jesse his feelings and now...well, and here ends the story in that moment Jesse finds Mike with the other guy..yeah...next chapter ?