Review: Badly written badly conceived story.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2012
I downloaded this work because it was free.  I dislike it enough to want to warn everyone else away from it.  Why?  The premise of the story is ridiculous.  The story itself is very badly written, with grotesque language misuse, jarringly bad grammar, and a monumentally inane ending.  The whole short story reads like "fan fiction" written by a teenager who didn't bother to do more than run a spell-checker on it before publishing.  Even putting the story away for a few days and re-reading it afresh and may be asking a literate, intelligent friend to read and critique it would have helped Mr. Bailey to make it better.  If this is a work of a mature adult who's actually spent time crafting and perfecting it, then I suggest he find another outlet for his creativity -- something that does not involve writing or story telling.