Review: Good story terrible editing and proofing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
The story line over all is good. Should have spent the money and/time to hire a good proofreader and better editor.  I will be reading the second book to see if the storyline gets better and proofing/editing has improvements.  Good luck to the author on her future endeavors.  I think she could write and produce a 5 star book.