Review: I didn't see it coming
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2013
This book can benefit with a bit of editing in the beginning chapters as the foul words muttered by girls at fourteen no less; that I feel can be done without and written in a manner with class. Readers can picture in our minds such situations without literally reading the harsh words. It takes an even better writer to give the image to the readers without resorting to using such words.This is a sweet short story that happen in the span of some twenty years between Jen and Drake. Though it would have been nice to have some substance in between their meetings, the book only gave us those four kisses and when they happened. It would have been nice to have the reason why Drake preferred not to stay home and why he needed the money.The ending was so abrupt I didn't see it coming. It was like the writer suddenly lost the drive to write and just ended the story right there on the road where Jen was parked. I mean, you build your love story for twenty years and you end it like that? Come on.The other reviewer was right, if you want something like this in a more complete book, read One Day. It is actually their similarity why I got this book, only it wasn't.A few more chapters to properly lead to the ending would have been nice.