Review: OK, I liked it
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 6, 2014
There was a lot to like and a lot to curse about. This was the result of more planning, proofreading, and thought processes than Vengeance...well, OK, what wouldn't be? It had fun action although I agree with other reviewers that the characters we were supposed to like didn't have all that many redeeming features. I didn't like that the BIG EVENT in the middle suddenly showed up - it was this giant break in the story and left me going "Huh?" Also, Ms. Brown continues to have issues with letting us know what goes on in small ways as well; she loves her pronouns and has the bad habit of forgetting that we don't know which character she is talking about.So I sum it up in a nutshell--Ms. Brown has great story ideas and I hope she continues to gain better techniques in transmitting those stories to us.