Review: Good story, interesting idea.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 5, 2013
This was a good story but I would have to say l would have enjoyed it more if it weren't for all the typographic errors. One or two mistakes are easy to ignore but the number in this book made it really hard. To switch the names of the faithful retainer Frank with the terrible brother Frederick was confusing.....especially when Annabelle was talking about giving her coffee house to Minnie and Frank (Fredrick). This happens a couple of times. For some reason the first letter of pronouns get dropped a lot too. Changing she to he. It is hard to read "he hugged and kissed him", and errors like that occur repeatedly. This was really a good story, but if you're like I am a little proof reading would have gone a long way to along it a great story.