Review: A good introduction...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2013
Mary is an artistic soul and virgin from California.  We are introduced to her as she is driving across the country to her new home in Hollywood, Florida.  The reason for her cross-country move?  The inheritance she received from her mother.  Including a bar, house, car, dog, many cats, and most notably, an adult store, "The Fetish Box."Part one of "The Fetish Box" is an introduction to Mary and the men she meets when she moves to Hollywood.  Max is an aggressive man who asks for what he wants - which is Mary.  And John, who is the strong and silent type, commands her to give what he wants.  But first, he makes her an offer to teach her everything she needs to know to run her mother's sexy business.The introduction is great, but it is just that.  This is the most incomplete first in a series I have ever read.  It wasn't enough to suck me in, although I'm tempted to read the second book merely because the first cuts off right at the sex scene.  It certainly made for an awkward ending to book one.While the length was too short and the content too little, I did enjoy the characters in the story.  Camden isn't a brilliant writer, with some editing errors as well as changes in point of view throughout the book.  I certainly think it makes for a decent introduction, but serves as little else.  It could have been condensed some and made into a first chapter of a book.  As a stand alone, it fails.This is not a book that I would recommend unless the reader likes a slow get-go and is planning on buying the second two books.  It isn't the most compelling erotica I've read.  Nor does it rate on my top fifty list, but maybe the second book could change my feelings.