Review: A little too crazy and rushed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2011
I have to say that even after finishing this story, I'm not entirely positive about what happened.  Because everything in the story was complex and at the same time rushed to make sure it stayed short, this download ended up looking underdeveloped and confusing.It's really hard to give a summary of the plot without giving anything away, but the basic idea is that while a man name Tony is enjoying a night with his friends, he is thrown into another very dangerous world.  He must figure out how to survive in this new world, while also seeing if there is a possible way of getting back to his normal life.This definitely could be classified as a sci-fi plot, and it really does have quite a decent premise.  However, the pace of the story was just too fast for any of the details to be thorough, and the reader will probably get lost halfway through.  Also, the ending was particularly disappointing; although I won't say anything else in order to prevent spoilers.Overall, the story had a bunch of potential and promise, but it was just underexplained due to the much-too-fast pacing.  The story isn't terrible; there are a few redeeming qualities such as the good characterization or the fantastic use of suspense, but the confusing elements and bad ending are enough for me to not really recommend this story.  Some people may like it more than I did, but in the end, I was left wanting much more.WARNINGS - Language, Violence, Peril