Review: A Rough Choppy Story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2013
This was a rough read. It had interesting characters and a good setting. However sections of it were hard to follow or disjointed in meaning for casual reading.For example ***SPOILER*** were the villagers on the churches side? I don't think they would be so why were they defending them?Lastly there were a lot of "show don't tell" issues that made action scene feel too matter of fact.