Review: Short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2014
When I read the description I thought it would be interesting. It jumped into current time. The past you hear in their thoughts but you don't get a glimpse. I think I was confused at first wondering why the story started where is did. I wish it was a longer story so we could have see the past instead of just told about it. I felt it would have made a better story so we can feel more invested in the characters love. It is still a good story but it could have been more than what it was.