Review: Has promise
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2013
This book showed so much promise, but .... the punctuation was so, so, so bad that it was extremely distracting. I was unable to concentrate fully on the story due to this distraction, and it took away from the enjoyment.  Perhaps a good editor and more attention by the author would help to rectify this major problem for future books.I really did see great promise in the story-line and found it exciting and would love to read more in this series should this problem be rectified in future issues.