Review: Nice writing, unpleasant "hero"
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 31, 2013
This is a boy meets girl book.  The premise is the college boy is in charge of more than weekly corporal punishment as the dorm master for a bunch of college age girls who messed up in regular schools.  The boy punishes the girl over and over again based on incorrect or incomplete reasons.  He is an incompetent jerk at his job [in my humble opinion].This series (this is "book 1")seems headed in the direction of most boy-meets-girl stories ... eventually one of the two realizes the virtues of the other, they overcome obstacles and they live happily ever after.  Unfortunately, there is not a sliver of evidence that Scott will ever learn to trust.  Without a personality transplant for Scott I wouldn't wish the heroine's life (Brianna's fate) on any needy bottom I've ever met, no matter how obnoxious the woman.Having said all that Ms. Burns, you write well and the story idea - living with a life long medical condition -- is a nice change from the usual plot in this genre.  Such a talented young woman deserves loving (or simply wise) discipline as much as the next woman.