Review: A bit short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 9, 2013
I thought that this suffered from being just a bit short.  Things just seemed to happen and maybe some more book space in development might have been worth it.  For example, the 'mentor' figure seemed quite inappropriately cruel - surely there was a reason for this, or not, who knows?  However, without development of that character, it just seemed (to me) to make the story a little less believable, whereas if I had known the reason why the character was the way he was, it would have improved the story for me.Worth trying a sample.