Review: All Over The Place, Non-Sequiturs, Way Too Many "PEACHES"!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2014
I really don't know where to begin.  Okay, I guess at the beginning.The first book wasn't too bad.  While there were still more than a fair share of awkward writing and stilted conversations, there was a plausible plot and somewhat developed characters.As the books progressed, though, the writing got more awkward, people's names and descriptions changed from paragraph to paragraph (auburn hair or brunette?), and syntactical errors started to appear.And then the grammatical errors.  ALL the grammatical errors.And then everything sort of fell apart.  The stories started to be just plain ridiculous.  The characters were caricatures, the plots were painful and the dialogue stretched the imagination.Even drunk, people just don't talk like they do in Ms. Hamilton's stories.But I stuck it out.  Why?  Because as a writer myself, I learn from the mistakes of others.So, lesson learned.  Don't write like Ms. Hamilton and don't buy any more of her books.