Review: I considered poking my eyes out.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 18, 2013
First of all,I didn't realise this was a vampire story until Benji came in and I finally looked at the title...yeah, it was a free book.First. "She pulled out her Maybelline eye shadow, ah blah insert 'designer' label here and there..." Come on. There's detail, then there's wasting 3 pages pretending to know what designers are "in". In the first 10 pages I was already regretting reading this. Sadly, I have this thing about reading the whole book once I've started.Second. Is this real life? Sorry, but people really don't peer pressure others to smoke and drink anymore. People also don't almost die on a Ferris wheel and NOT have the whole town know about it, let alone parents.Where the author needed detail, it wasn't there. Where there was detail, it wasn't needed. Like, who is Benji? This girl was anxiety about disobeying her parents yet jumps on the back of a bike with a complete stranger and falls in love within minutes? It'd maybe be believable if the author had gone into what was in her mind, instead of a 2 word blurb about why she's disregarding every stranger danger warning out there.Obviously, I couldn't stand this book. The author writes like a 14-year old who got held back in kindergarten twice. As much as I hate Twilight, you can't beat it, especially with this.The whole vampire/teen gi stories are played out. rls love