Review: I really did try to love it....a
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 16, 2013
AHHH where do I start the pros: the lead man in the book was great,like able. Who wouldn't desire a strong take command guy with good looks and knight and shinning armour syndrome. He was successful unlike the loser ex. The author repeatedly reminded us a of his GOD complex that made any women swoon for him.  Cons:  The villain ex boyfriend was a stretch with the mob chasing him while he chased a ex girlfriend he sponged off. The heroine if that's what you would call her was beyond annoying and made me question why would Dominic really fall for her. She always spoke before thinking and when she did think things she over thought them. Here's a concept... live in the moment you just got out of a sh**ty relationship and a hot rich guy is into you. Carefree... use it love it. no strings.The authors over use of "god like" and killer lawyer adjectives made me skip it after reading it the first couple times it appeared.As I read it felt as if the author was channeling a little fifty's in this story with the first meet love at first sight,clumsy mousy ordinary girl,crazy ex's, lack of trust in the heroine/hero, kidnapping the hero's sister. It was weird and didn't flow for me. And what was with the whole pill/ drugs part?? Most couples would have a conversation, not with themselves, but together as to what the nurse was discussing. This was another thing that added pointless drama that really had no bearing to the original story line.I  hope the author has read reader reviews to clear up for her next two books in the series not to be repetitive with her writing, this book had potential but fell flat of me.