Review: another good one
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2013
Susan Mallery wrote another good short story.  It got you involved with the characters.  The plot was well written.  I like that it came together smoothly, not like some novellas that start well then rush thru the end. Man meets woman, woman makes herself helpful to be noticed but gets taken for granted. Man trips over his stupidity, misses what is not there looking him the face. Little daughter has to save the day. Man grovels for love. See it has everything needed to make a good story.