Review: Really good plot
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2012
The beginning of the book was pretty good but when it got into the time travel in the same house on a parallel field, I'm afraid I got confused trying to keep it all straight.  At one point, I put the book down but was determined I would finish it.  I had to go slow, maybe it is just me, but I was having a hard time keeping all the parallel people, times, rooms in order.  I would think I had it all in order only to be really reading about the other time.Don't get me wrong, I loved the plot of this story, I could never have thought of something like the author did, it really was quite intriguing and had a lot of thought put into it.  What got me is that it was back and forth and I couldn't keep up with the flow of the story so I wasn't really able to enjoy it, just give it the evil eye.If it were written in a manner to make it read clearer and flow smoother, to me anyway, I would give it a higher mark.  It has alot of potential to be way better than it is.