Review: Good but not great
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2011
This story had a lot of promise, like able characters,a good premise and lots of chemistry between the characters. Unfortunately, it is poorly written and on a few occasions I found myself rolling my eyes. It isn't a bad read, but there are better stories for your money. I hope the author takes another stab at revising the story.