Review: Needs an editor - one proficient in the English language.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2014
This book has a good concept.  The characters are interesting, and the is dialogue pretty good, too.  The story is well-plotted, interesting, and moves along quickly.  That being said, I agree that there is work to be done.  Ms. Beery really could have used an editor.There were problems with word usage, which included homophones, word forms, etc.  Also, transitions, articles, and pronouns were occasionally missing.  Plus, in at least one instance, the "I" viewpoint switched without an initial clear indication of who "I" had become.