Review: This one might SEAL the deal for you.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 21, 2012
Written as an introduction to the SEAL Brotherhood series, this short tries to compel you to read more of this series.  I say "tries" because for me, it did not accomplish its goal.  I found it to be fairly "cheesy" as it describes the lead male protagonist and his sidekick.  You know, he's a virtual God, far superior to all around him including his sidekick.  He exudes sexuality and every woman who sees him immediately wants him, regardless of their marital status.  Example: He and his competent (but obviously inferior) sidekick are swimming at the beach and are so noticable and fabulous that women, with their pre-pubscent or young teen daughters, crowd around them swooning and applauding their efforts.  Give me a break already!  Couple things like this with silly insertions of his endless sexual fantasies concerning the female protagonist (another Godlike person whom he hasn't even met yet) and "bingo", bring on the Parmesan.  In addition, there are editing issues which, although not fatal to the story, are annoying.  Sorry, but if this short tale is indicative of the writing style and storyline to follow, then it SEALED this series as a NO-GO for me.  Didn't hate it, didn't love it, so three stars is what it gets.