Review: Technical errors detracted from story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2014
Again - K.S. Martin needs to find a Beta Reader or Editor that knows basic grammar, spelling, and punctuation.  "I said mom is ..."  Mom is a proper name in this instance, so it would be capitalized.  You wouldn't write "I saw tom was ..."  If you want you say "I said my mom is ..." that would be fine.  This is only at location 108!!!!I continue to buy her "Alpha" stories and I do like them....but please HIRE SOMEONE or ASK FOR A VOLUNTEER, if you don't have time to check technical content yourself!!!!