Review: Where was the chemistry?!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2014
This book could have used two POV's or something, because I don't get why or how Ryan fell for Rachael.  She was so annoying for most of the book and then the end was wicked rushed (no pun intended):"I love you""yeah, I love you, too""let's be a committed couple""okay - you want to meet my family?"These two didn't seem to work and the more I read, the more I realised they just weren't right for each other.  I would have actually preferred to see Rachael end up with Abe!  The author spent too much time on small details that don't matter and not enough time on the larger picture arc of the book.  Ryan and Rachael have no chemistry, their kisses don't scream 'love of a lifetime!' and I found myself skipping huge chunks of internal monologue from Rachael.I picked up this book only because I receved the second one for free and didn't realise it was a series.  I'm hoping Mike's story is better (though, I'm not holding my breath).  I'm definitely underwhelmed by this author and don't see myself going out of the way to pick up anymore from her.