Review: Simplistic and pat
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2013
Though this story is written competently, the combination of the length and the subject matter is really unsatisfying.  It's basically like a typical "secret baby" (except the baby is more of a kid) romance shrunk into a single scene.  If their troubles are that easily swept aside, you're left wondering why they split up in the first place.