Review: Good story!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2013
Love Through the Fire - The Prequel is the first story I have read by Nikki Walker. I really enjoyed the story line. Even though this was relatively short, there was enough character development for me to get a good handle on who the major players were. The love story between the two was also interesting and I could see a plethora of options for how it would evolve in the subsequent installments. My rating would have been higher except for a few issues that brought the project down for me. The overuse of the word simply was bothersome. After the first few times of repetitive use it was forgivable but after a while it got to be too much. Some parts of the story seemed rushed and the conversation between the characters were especially contrived. Realism was lost in the word choice. There were also shifts in point of view from third person narrative to first and second person that broke the books flow. My rating for this story by Nikki Walker is 2.75 - 3 stars. The good of the story did outweigh the bad. I will definitely read another story by this author.