Review: Ok but editing problems
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 7, 2014
This story was just ok for me. I read the authors book "Love Show" and totally fell in love with the story and characters. I just was disappointed somewhat with this book. First off I am not sure this is entirely the authors fault but the formatting was off on this. Additionally, I found major grammatical errors.- Sentences strung together with commas instead of periods/new sentence; run-on sentences; short, choppy sentences; tons of punctuation errors.- Missing words (especially prepositions and articles)- Missing quotation marks (made it hard to follow the dialog)I was not impressed with Hunter. Personally, I didn't fall in love with him. It seemed his only saving grace for Pippa was he was easy on the eyes. He was a man whore to me.I did finish the story - even with all the formatting and grammatical errors. But, the story was just ok to me. It is a one-time read for me.I am not saying not to buy this book- just be for warned.