Review: Zombie action
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 19, 2012
If you want zombie action this has it. It also has some very glaring mistakes in mostly grammar and editing. "Sergeant is you saying we can take The Rock back?" I hate this kind of grammar, realizing it is how some people speak. Fine, just can we have consistency in the language of the character? No sign that this Holloway cannot speak proper English until now.Also there is a paragraph of space between each round of dialogue. So the story is really much shorter than it even sounds to begin with. There are many sentences that run on without a comma or period to separate two sentences. I am not a grammar freak particularly but I do like to have an edited story before it gets to me the reader. I can take some errors if the story is good. This story is good but not that good.