Review: dark dark short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 11, 2012
The lenght was good, the second two parts gripping but I had to force myself past all the dark dark.  While I realize it was a stylistic choice I think it was overdone t the beginning.  Would have seemed stronger with less repeating.  Word choice in super short fiction is very important.  All in all I think the author has a gift.