Review: substandard writing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 17, 2013
Worth the money, and worth the time to read.  Writing is not really the greatest.  Better than I could do, but then I'm not asking anyone to read my story.  It would make it a little easier to read if I didn't feel like everyone was talking like a robot all the time.  People just don't talk like that.  The author tends to use dialog to explain situations and ideas that might be better explained outside of dialog. The situation was interesting and well thought out.  Keep writing.