Review: Meh...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2013
First let me say this author is in desperate need of an editor...wrong tenses (often) a few misused words and my favorite...the inability to use the correct personal pronoun.  (That last one is RAMPANT!)  So if those are things that ruin a book for you, be prepared!However I think this was a great story line and could have been awesome with just a bit more polishing.  It's a great premise and has the potential for a lot of sequels and I'm really curious to find out more about the Morians.The heroine was (supposedly) military but having lived my life around military women I gotta tell ya...NO.  Just no.  Secondly, the author mentioned the h's promotion at least 50 times.  I get it, we're all proud, way to go...now move on.  ESTABLISHED!Then there are several instances where the writer seemed to lose track of what she'd just written mere moments ago.  (Here's an example where the writer is setting up a moment when the H's years of combat training take over so he can rescue his beloved)  "The fear was gone."  Followed immediately by "Terror moved him faster than he had ever moved before."  Well, then the fear is not gone.  This maybe irritated me more than it should have but in the midst of a raging battle it completely distracted me from the story and left me grinding my teeth.Lastly, toward the end of the story it seemed like the author was rushing to the finish line, I felt hurried along and then...fizzle...it's over.