Review: too much
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 14, 2012
The idea was quite good.Take one hunky, down-to-earth plumber and confront him with the high-strung intellectual. Sparks are bound to fly. Add a comedic setting, great to freshen up the genre. All good.Unfortunately the author overdoes it. Humorous becomes farcical, gentle teasing becomes sledgehammer.On the whole this is a pity. The story was worth so much more but it needed a far gentler touch. Perhaps a revision? And a lower price?