Review: PLEASE proofread & edit this book!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 19, 2013
This book had a good story line with great potential yet it was spoiled due to the huge number of errors and extraneous, annoying things (like all of the hashtags). It looks as though no one proofread this book before it was put out to the public. There were some phrases that were just so obviously off that I became frustrated. I kept notes of the worst mistakes to illustrate how ridiculously obvious they were but accidentally deleted them. I was able to find 1 example that was not as bad as others which was, ".....the edge of orgasm cliff and get ready to push me off the image".  "Image"??? Brooke, you get pushed off a cliff's, "edge"!  Things like that were very distracting to me, devaluing the story. In the same paragraph as the example just mentioned was the following ridiculous line, "as we entered the nether...of our nether regions". The author did have some good metaphors but phrases like this one felt like the author was trying too hard (and failing).  I think this story could be good IF there was a lot of editing and proof reading.