Review: Entertaining but a lot of inconsistency
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 7, 2014
Overall, I enoyed the story.  The characters were endearing and well developed.  However, the book is in desperate need of an editor.  Although there are numerous grammatical errors, what I found most distracting were the inconsistencies.  At the beginning of the book, the heroine states she is 29, and then later she says she is 26.  Also what happened to the fuzzy little pet.??????  He crash lands with them on the planet, and is happily chirping away as they are led into the forrest.  He is never discussed again.  Effort was made to make this little guy a part of the story and then poof, he is gone.