Review: wish it was longer
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 24, 2012
0-60 in 2.5 seconds.and the ending was quiet abrupt. Aside from that I loved this story. I feel like I knew Craig and Toni. They were developed perfectly. I just wish that the author would have paced herself a bit. I felt the instant attraction but to me their admission of there feelings should have taken just a few more days. I mean, they were talking lifetime commitment immediately. But really I plan on reading this again and again and also suggesting it to friends who would like to read a good short story.Looking forward to reading more from this author.