Review: Is it just me or...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2014
..did the author confuse the heroine's eyes...in book 1 she described herself as brown wavy hair with wide blue eyes yet in book 2 Vaughn says he is staring into her big brown eyes...Yea not gd for those that actually picture (at least I do) a character with the described features. Anyways not a major concern with the story line which is not bad yet I feel like the H is more of a villain. Keely kinda also gets on my nerves (in a acting tough yet she easily yields to his commands). I somehow feel like there is no character development too, especially with Vaughn. He is very secretive and just wants sex all the time and Keely is just as bad. This story had potential for more on the characters as well as the plot IMO.I would give this book a 3.5 and really, it should of been sold as one book instead of three seeing how each book has a total of 88 or so pages. I personally refuse to pay 2.99 for 88 pages so if not by loan I won't be reading the final book.