Review: Decent book..
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2013
I loved Chey n Embers friendship that was a pretty realistic portrayal of how some bffs act. Sam n Cheys insta your mine LOVE is more like insta lust! This insta love is being soooo overdone by authors at least give the H/h a few conversations before making them be in love. I agree with another reviewer if Chey keep her Vcard for 25 years than without even knowing this dudes name gives it up??? I don't see that really happening but it's a book so whatever....Typos galore in this book, punctuation in wrong places, words that should be capitalized aren't n vice versa. A good editor and some tightening of the story would do this story wonders. Oh and we as readers don't need to know EVERYTHING that's being done worn etc EVERYDAY such as what they wear how they make food etc...The characters were good. The storyline with help could be better I had LOL moments and a few awww too. I don't t