Review: Okay Read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2014
My first read from this author. I gave 4 stars because of so many grammatical errors. I don't usually read short stories especially this short even when they are free, by the way thanks for the gift. The storyline was confusing but what I got out of it you were calling Sean a sperm donor because he wasn't spending time with his daughters. The story ended in a cliff hanger because even though the car hit her she didn't have to die. There could be more written such as getting Joey for rape but I guess that's why it's called a short story.