Review: ....
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2014
No doubt this was a very engaging, sexy, erotic read. Though brief, you do get a great feel for the characters as individuals before their romance begins. I saw where some thought this happened too quickly, but I didn't get that impression. There was enough going on, also with character set up for me, and at the right pacing, where I didn't feel like they were rushed in "closing the deal" The fact that this was accomplished with such a short story, says it all to me.There were some character ticks here and there that I didn't like. But this is mainly due to character personality quirks etc..The things I wish I had more depth with was Jamal You get just enough with him, but I wanted more things to be fleshed out concerning his relationship with Kara More experiences with them, I guess.And towards the end, the way they started talking to one another, the wording didn't sound like them at all. For a brief second they went into 18th century speak, but this was quickly remedied.Also though things were white hot with these two. The chemistry was definitely there, I wanted more intimacy with them. Things weren't what I would call mechanical, but in certain instances they still appeared to be kinda stilted, more on the surface. Which I think this had more to do with how certain scenarios played out & what occurred or didn't occur, during.But all in all I did enjoy this read. If it turns out to be part of a Trilogy or series, I think this was a solid intro to it. I would & have already, recommended this read.