Review: Disappointment
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 10, 2012
I know this is her first book and I commend her for the effort, however, I think she would be better off writing teen novels instead of adult romance.  I felt I was reading a story about an adolescent by an adolescent.  Misty acted like a naive teenager instead of an almost 30-year old woman.  The story has great potential, and I would like to see it after the author matures in her writing enough to rework it.  But as it is, I just cannot recommend it.At the very least, she needs a new editor.  How did so many grammatical errors make it through the editing process?  That in itself was distracting.  I'm only glad it was a free Kindle read.  I would hate to know I paid for it.