Review: Okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 26, 2013
I would have rated this book four stars if it hadn't been for all the typos and wrong words. There's a big difference between "wonder" and "wander". It appears the author relied too heavily on his spellcheck function. I had a real problem with the final chapter. It isn't necessary to put a wrap up on the story to make it believable. The author also changed from showing us the action to telling us about it in this chapter. A good writer's critique group could have taken this okay story to a really good one.