Review: A sweet novella - but some head-hopping
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2012
I had read the negative reviews and to reiterate - this is a NOVELLA - it's a short story. It's a cute one as well and I did enjoy it but there were two issues I did have: 1) the author switches point of view often and somtimes I wasn't sure who's head she was telling the story from so I would have to go back to figure that out. and 2) to go from meeting to a proposal of marriage in 2 days? Seriously? And from a pastor? There was no internal dialogue where you felt like He was hearing from God on this, no real struggle at the impulsivity. On her part - no real understanding of the challenges she would be facing with a man that good looking and wanting to marry so fast. She's not desperate and neither should he be and yet they act that way.  In spite of all that, I did enjoy the story and would be interested in seeing more from this author as she hones her craft.