Review: Good short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2013
I was given a free copy of this story in exchange for an honest, non-reciprocal review.This is a short story, so it'll also be a short review.I enjoyed this story. It left me wondering what was going on until nearly the end. The main character is searching for about sixty people who have gone missing. He finds a diary, and the entries reveal how they went from a large, enthusiastic party to a small party, barely still moving on.It's not very long and kept things moving well enough to hold my attention.It does need an editor. There were many places I saw that could have done with better word choices or that needed something like another comma. I wasn't a fan of the use of present tense, either.If someone is looking for a very quick read I would recommend it.