Review: unbelievable
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2012
This snippet (don't blink, you'll miss it) does not even come close to short story.  It SHOULD be noted somewhere that this is NOT a book, but it is not indicated.  The description lays out a case that set miss Molly on her career.  So, one expects the case, its paces (some clever work and some things that confound a new "detective") so we can endear the character to us and see how /why the lass becomes what she becomes.  So we want to read more books with this detective. It was misleading to read the snippet as a case. But, say one is willing to forgive the length and the questionable mislead.  Fine.  Move on to other issues then...The tale itself has errors.  Unless it was typed on an ipod or kindle or some android device - there is no excuse for errors.  A work this short should be scrubbed clean of punctuation and /or grammar errors.Miss Marples, Sherlock Holmes, heck Sonny Crockett have to be jealous of the ability this Molly has at solving a crime and the determining the culprits without one single hitch.  Elmer Fuddled wants to hire Molly to catch "that pesky wabbit" he has been chasing for decades.It is just totally an unbelievable tale /case from beginning to end (including the 10 paragraphs in the middle) .No mystery, no thrill. It is quite a bad advert for a mystery series.Christine