Review: Did need editing but still good.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 13, 2013
The other reviews are correct, the editing was really bad.  But the story was very good. I loved the whole family . story was exciting it would have been 4 1/2 or 5 starts if not for the grammer and other errors. It didnt take me out of the story too much but it did a little.  I cant wait till the next book in the series.