Review: Great hero. Whiny heroine. Many editing errors.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2013
I wanted to love this story, but it fell far short of great. Shelby was immature, whiny, and insecure to the extreme. She caused problems where there didn't need to be any. The hero deserved better.I counted 33 editing errors, and found them very disconcerting. They stopped the flow of the book for me. There were many words missing or doubled in sentences, and other poorly constructed sentences.Wrong words were used, such as "FOWL woman"/foul; "SCARRED"/scared; "VICE like grip"/vise like grip; "intake of BREATHE"/breath.This could have been a better story with a more likeable heroine and better editing.