Review: No character development, no plot, no resolution
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 17, 2010
Not much happens in this 200-location teaser. A rich playboy falls for a model, who then goes missing. There's possibly foul play. And that's all we get.I dunno - it felt like it might develop into a murder mystery. Is this supposed to be the beginning of a book? Because it is definitely not a stand-alone story. Even though it's free, I think most people will end up deleting it. I did.