Review: Vanilla menage with a flavor of BDSM
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 2, 2013
Please leave comments on Madam Aus's 3 1/2 sweet pea review at mrsconditreadsbooks.com/index.php/?p=13565OK this was a vanilla ménage with a BDSM flavor thrown in. Which means no MM sexual encounters between the main MC's anyway. (There is some MM between others) The scenes in which Jared and Chris are with Cyn by themselves are actually quite hot, and their together ones are quite good but it kinda leads me to believe that one of the men could have been superfluous.The story had potential and if you like light BDSM and no MM action between MC's and a few MFM ménage then this book would probably suit you but I gave it a 3  rating because of some inconsistencies that I found.Which were, in no particular order, that even though the twins own a BDSM club and definitely want to Dom Cyn, it is not heavy into the scene. Again there was potential for more but it didn't pan out.There is a plot point that gets woven in but instead of being seamless it gets spasmodic. What I mean is that at first it seems to be character driven which is fine in and of itself, but little plot points get thrown in with no real tension being developed even though it should have, which meant that when the climactic twist happens, you haven't developed that nice sense of tension of knowing something is about to happen and the sense of relief when it gets resolved nicely. Again potential for a much more fleshed out story.The characters were wonderful, I quite liked Jared, Chris and Cyn. Loved Scott, Kyle and Jenna, and it was an easy read for the most part, nicely rounded out with a hot scene between Jenna and Cyn and one between Scott and Kyle.