Review: Confusing!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2013
The story is interesting and unique. I enjoyed that much. Needs a lot of work though. The writer drifts between a modern setting and a medieval setting. One min the writers using light switches and the next chapter torches and candles. Many details like this need help. There's a whole period that the main character acquires a pet, but the writer seems to forget about the pet. Then it's brought back in....could b a great book with some serious editing.