Review: Ei-ei-ei-Editor!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
Holy grammar check, Batman! How'd this one not get corrected yet?  Once again, what might have been a promising story was ruined by stupid editing problems;repeated paragraphs, incorrect punctuation, misused words, not to mention misspellings and incomplete sentences.If I could have swallowed all that, I just couldn't buy the heroine, Tamara. Tamara is an intelligent, beautiful woman who got mixed up with a very bad guy after her parents died and he dragged her into a life of crime by abusing her to the point that she is afraid for her life. Tamara managed to sneak away, find a counselor and make an escape plan to get a new identity and get a new start. Unfortunately, before she can leave, her criminal drags her into a huge museum burglary. She manages to turn the tables on him and call the police during the robbery,  but then jumps out a 3rd floor window to get away. This is a terrified woman to jump like that rather than risk her abuser figuring out that she called the police in and got him arrested. Of course, she injures herself jumping like that, but down in the hedge surrounding the museum is a huge wolf who nudges her onto his back, jumps the fence and carries her off, miles away from the crime scene.Now the author wants us to believe that within 5 days, Tamara is so recovered from her abuse that she accepts the concept of werewolf shifters without fear and is falling in love (or at least lustily in bed) with Devin, the strong but caring reluctant Alpha werewolf who rescued her. Not only is she unafraid, but within 10 days, she enters a village in which she is the only human. Only the sight and sound of werewolves fighting for dominance in wolf form causes her any flashbacks to abuse or frightens her in any way.IMHO ,the whole thing didn't wash, or maybe needed cleaning up. I'm not sure. I do know that for me, this book was a wash. I think I'll pass on the rest of this series.Heat factor hot.