Review: Good story but distracting typos
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2013
The author jumps right into the story with this fast-paced, paranormal erotic short story.  I did not initially know what direction the story would take which kept me wanting to read more.  I could visualize the characters, especially during the steamy scenes, and feel the intense emotions (and naughtiness) directed toward each other.However, the number of typos (like my heading suggests) greatly detracts from the essence of the story.  I caught at least 22 of them that could easily have been removed with standard editing.  One glaring error was the main character's name.  It changed from Nicole Caldwell to Nicole Walker and back to Nicole Caldwell all in the first third of the story.  (Her love interest's last name is actually Walker.)I think the author has a good imagination.  The typos (your vs you're, form vs from, sent vs scent, learning vs yearning, wracked vs racked, etc) sometimes overshadowed the talent that Vivian Blackwood could portray.  Invest in a proofreader and you would be set!  Overall, I enjoyed it.