Review: Not Bad...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2014
This short story was just that, a short story. It felt to me like a Polaroid picture as you shake it the picture develops, but then it falls apart as you are just starting to get into it. I enjoyed it, but it could use a little work, at times it felt like a kid trying to tell a scary story to us, then an adult trying to tell a scary story, and then it just felt like a good scary story without a good follow through. Thank you for this, and keep up the good job, entertaining for sure, but feels choppy at times, but overall a good read and worth checking out. I want to read more of this guy's stuff.