Review: Sloooow.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 5, 2013
As I write this review, I wonder what book other reviewers were reading. While it had several things going for it (a promising "world" good English, spelling, etc. and some promising characters, most remained two dimensional and the pace was agonizingly slow. I almost gave up on it many times. It finally picked up about halfway through to end on a cliffhanger. While not unexpected, it's still annoying and a bit like rubbing salt in the wound of my largely wasted time. The only character that was reasonably well developed is Eva. The young heroine is an unsympathetic, boneless, pitiful girl for no apparent reason. Her erstwhile swain is tepid. A full star is due to decent writing and editing as far as language, syntax, spelling, etc. While I really think this should be a bare minimum expectation, it  is not in many e books so I acknowledge it. But the first one's free, so decide for yourself. I will not be investing money or further time in this series.