Review: I Liked It, But Felt Like Something Was Missing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2011
This one is a well-written short story, with one exception I will discuss in a sentence or two.  I think the author does a good job of having you understand / relate to the characters and the plot, which can be difficult to do in a short story due to the word length: you had better be good, fast.  However, the ending was rather abrupt and left you hanging a bit, which probably could have been resolved with another paragraph or two.All in all, I thought it was good and entertaining but left me feeling as if something was missing.