Review: Not a bad story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2012
A few minor grammar errors, nothing major but still should have been caught before publication.  Story wasn't bad, characters felt wooden--not wooden because of what had happened, ie, it didn't feel intentional.  Lot of tell, very little show.  I think the author needed to tighten it up, shorten it a bit; may have worked much more effectively if it had.  Don't find myself inspired to search out more of Trevithick's work, but wouldn't refuse to read it if I came across it.