Review: Would like to have seen in a full blown story--has potential for it!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 31, 2011
This another one of the freebies that has real potential to be a longer story.  In a few short pages, I felt some connection to the characters and their story line.  Felt like I was reading a process draft to something bigger.  Price was right and worth the read.