Review: too much and not enough
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
There was entirely too much about staying virgins. It's something that could have had one scene to flesh out the characters, but instead became preachy. Some slight struggles to reinforce the concept could add to the story instead of this constant exaggerated intense, and entirely overwritten, battle every time they touched. It also felt contrived given their word play. "I want to kiss you all over your voluptuous body" said at a party seemed odd for two people trying NOT to have sex not to mention that a sentence like that is usually foreplay, not a passing comment.The ending also left a lot to be desired. While one may lay the groundwork for another book, this one was entirely too much build up for NO return at all unless you buy the second book. The entire story was tedious. It would have made a better first few chapters than a book of its own.  It left me unsatisfied and I don't have any urge at all to buy the second book.