Review: Good but needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2014
I would have given this story 4 stars, but dropped one due to editing issues.  In so many places the verb tenses were wrong. It was annoying and distracting in addition to sounding awkward.  That said, the author has talent, and the storyline was pretty good. I really liked the male characters in the story, but Marklynn was difficult to connect with. I also really hated her name and it's shortened form, Markie.  The story had a bit more procedure than suspense, but was still interesting.