Review: Didn't Understand.....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
I stayed up to 2 am reading this.  Like another reviewer stated, I skipped a lot of redundant text.  I got annoyed with both characters at some points.  Jana for being in a love/hate state with Johnthen.  And Johnthen for being so closed off and secretive.  I did like how he was starting to 'try' being in a 'relationship' with Jana.  But I never got the feeling that he told her that was what he wanted.I found it difficult to stay focused.  The characters didn't grab me.  The situation that Jana was in really bothered me.  SPOILER, I mean, who in their right mind would stay with a room mate after they slept with your ex boyfriend?  Especially when said ex boyfriend jumps into bed with room mate right after breaking up!  And the room mate is supposed to be a good friend.  If she was Jana's definition of a 'good friend', I wonder who she counts as an enemy?It just wasn't a polished piece of work.  I kind of wished that I hadn't downloaded it and wasted my time!  I won't download the rest of the story either.  I can't see this storyline getting any better.  I've read other reviews on the next instalment and some other reviewer felt that the questions presented in the first half, weren't all answered in the second.  So I'll skip it and save time and money!