Review: Good story telling marred by errors in judgement.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2013
I agree with Mama (another reviewer) . The writing is competent, but the setup and self-image of the woman is pathetic (and unfortunately all too typical). Throw in the Alpha guy and you don't have much novelty. I did enjoy the writing, in spite of this, but that came crashing down with the ending. This 'book' is more accurately a chapter in a longer story, and discovering this was the biggest disappointment. I read book '2', as well, and that suffers from the same cliffhanger chapter ending format. I think I'll stop reading this here.