Review: Pretty good first work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2014
First off let me say this is not normally my style of scifi. This is way more of a love story and that part is well written. I have a few quibbles with the units of measurement especially all of the space distances. He constantly uses single kilometers and even meters to describe the difference in distance between objects. Action scenes were written well, wish there were more but it would have taken away from the story. Also a professional editor would take this novel to the next level. Just minor errors in commas, word usage.