Review: Mediocre zombie book that needs editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2013
I have to admit, I only got this book because it was free.  The cover didn't exactly entice me to want to read the story.  The grinning zombie with bad makeup on the cover made me think this would be a pedestrian effort at best.  But...I decided to give it a chance and, while it wasn't downright horrible (like many of these independently published zombie stories are,) it wasn't particularly memorable either.Here is a very important piece of advice to the writer for his future books.  When you are writing dialogue, it should look like this:"I've been bit by a zombie," he said.  NOT "I've been bit by a zombie." He said.In most cases, dialogue ends with a comma, and the period comes after "he said" or "she said" etc.  Next time have someone proofread your work before you publish it.  This isn't a college creative writing paper here that you're presenting to a teacher. As a free book, it's an okay story that shows potential, but when you start charging money, you'll need to step it up a notch.