Review: Hot sex, but painful dialog.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2013
I liked this story well enough.  The sex was hot, and that made this story work for me.  But the dialog was so stilted I wondered if the author had to pay somebody five bucks every time she used a contraction.  She was certainly stingy with them.  There were some casual sentences that read so formal I thought they were the begining of a profound declaration.  Overall, I liked this story enough not to regret the three dollars I paid for it.