Review: confusing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2014
I read this short a few times over because I was confused during several parts. Spoilers ahead!So Mel, the main character, is one if Heaven's agents or something, and she his to interview for a got at the HELL corporation. Of course, I didn't know this until the end. The beginning reads like two best friends doing a mock interview. The word Hell is tossed around, and used a bit heavily hands fly. I mean, I get it, it's Hell.Then when she goes in for the interview she sees all these demons and is a little shocked. Now, up to this point I thought she was a human about to have a major freak out, but the story goes in a whole other direction.My main complaint is the 1) lack of characterization, 2) lack of scene detail (what does the reception area look like? What dies Mel look like?), 3) the heavy handed Hell and demon comments.While the writing itself was fine, the plot, lack of real rising action or climax, super-duper short "chapters" and lack of character development really made me dislike it.