Review: Great story, poor editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 4, 2014
I really enjoyed this story. It was well paced with action, suspense and romance.  I did not want to put it down and even found myself thinking about the characters as I was trying to fall asleep (which is always the sign of a good book to me)  Some reviewers complained about the cliff hanger endings of these stories, but I did not see them is the annoying type of cliff hanger.  I get very bothered when a book does not wrap up the story and just ends, leaving me waiting for the next book to have any kind of closure for the story. That is not the case with these books.  Each book has its own story and drama that is resolved by the end of the book. We are left with a little taste of what will be coming, to keep us anxious waiting for the next installment.  I am enjoying these characters and I am glad their story is being told over several books so that I am able to get to know them more and enjoy them more.I would have rated this book 5 stars if it had been proofread.  The writing was solid.  There were not many glaring grammatical errors, but there were TONS of typos! There were many instances of the wrong word being used or words being left out completely.  There were also many times when "he" and "she" were switched around, making it difficult to follow who was doing and saying what.This author clearly has a great imagination and is a talented writer, it is a shame that she did not take time in proofreading and correcting the errors before she published the book.  I am anxiously waiting for the final installment, but I hope the author will take a little extra time with the next one to clean up the mistakes before I pay money for it!