Review: Much better editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 22, 2012
Very interesting ideas as to the way magic could be used. I am glad to say that the grammatical errors are very much reduced in this book over the first one.The story is a bit spotty on the flow. In some areas it is a bit disconnected. Also in describing the townsfol that the readers met in the first book were described exactly word for word as if a copy/paste form were used. At times i did get confused since it seemed that the author forgot what she had said  in previous chapters with the interaction of the characters, Also, and this may be the intent as to the characters personalities, but at times they seem to be brave and self confident then all of a sudden it is like we are seeing a whole new character with the same name, as this person turns into a meek mouse in the same type of situation.This is just a persoal note. If these books are to be for the young readers, keep the bedroom scenes out. I don't feel it added anythng to the story that couldn't have been there with just the fact  of the waking beside each other.