Review: Needs a rewrite
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 19, 2013
I'm giving this two stars because the formatting, grammar and spelling are fine.The book is really close to unreadable because the author uses present tense to indicate the present action in the book and past tense to indicate the back story.  She should have used the more usual way of writing which is put the past action into another chpter or to separate the two times with a double space.When you have past and present tense in one single paragraph, the book is just headachy.  It seems like it might be a fun read if the author were to rewrite.