Review: Too Prurient and Not Enough Plot
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
This story has plenty of hot bedroom scenes, but the plot is undeveloped. It reminds me of a Harlequin novel, because of the racy bits. There are hints at more subplot regarding the needlework group, but they are never explained in detail. The socially responsible activity is nice, but also very sketchy. I do not sympathize with either character, so their motives just don't ring true, especially hers. She doesn't seem to have the strength to stick to her good intentions, and the story seems to move in different directions at random. Neither he nor she seems to have any morals at all. I rated it just OK, because I expected the sleazy parts, even though that's not my favorite style of fiction. If you like a happy ending, and a romance not requiring thought, go for it.