Review: Good, but not great...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
**mild spoilers**The overall writing was very good.  Almost all words (if not all) were spelled correctly, and aside from comma usage, or lack thereof, it was well written.  The author obviously had this edited, or took her time with writing.  HUGE plus for me, especially considering the book is so cheap. :)That aside, I really felt like more character development was needed.  Richard, in particular, came across very monotone-like, and just impossible to connect with.  When it was announced in the book that Richard "loved" Mia, it was like stating that he does, not feeling and agreeing with what you already felt with that character.  I had already started to lose interest over his robotic personality, so by the time I got to the declarations of love, I was rolling my eyes and skipped to the end.  The lack of a connection with Mia and Richard made it impossible to believe in their "falling in love".  I'm still not sure how/when they fell in love, other than reading those words, if you get what I mean.Cameron, on the other hand, why, oh WHY didn't Mia just get him, instead?  His personality was flaky, at best, but we still got a glimpse of his personality.  -Not a monotone, robotic personality like Richard's.  So many times in the book, I found myself hoping she'd finally just let loose and go at it with Cameron, but unfortunately. it never happened.  -Unless I skipped past that part, near the end?Overall, I'd still recommend this as a good read, and definitely see how so many others gave it rave reviews.  I think it would have been amazing if there was more character development, however.  The author has great potential, and I wouldn't hesitate to buy another book of hers!