Review: Short Free Read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 26, 2013
The story had me until the ending.  I would have given it 5 stars if the ending had been a bit more fleshed out. It wouldn't have taken much, just a bit less abrupt and...well...corny.  A few more paragraphs between the two main characters would have been welcome.  The two are separated the whole book and then suddenly they are together after many years and we don't even get to see them resolve anything...just a wham-bam-marry-me-ma'am type of thing.  It was good for a free book and worth the read, but left me without good closure to the story.