Review: 3  1/2 stars
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2014
The overall storyline and plot are good, but the writing style could use some improvement in my opinion. For the most part, I think it could be solved simply with a good editor.  There were several times in the story where words were inverted, or the  'd would be on the preceding word, these were minor mistakes, but enough to tear me from the story to take time to figure out what was actually meant.  At most points, the story moved along at a comfortable pace, but some parts I would have been really interested in reading were completely skipped, and a few others seemed to drag on too long.  Overall I would recommend if you think you can get past these few issues.