Review: Eh- could have been worse
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
I've read many a novel where the story was disinteresting. This book was such. It was slow to build, heavy with flowery language and the female protagonist hardly likeable. She came across as arrogant and pedantic, hardly in any affect of charm. The male lead was morphing too much in description for me to get a good bead on his character. And I had several issues with the suspension of disbelief. The overuse of certain words became more annoying as the story played out. In fact, it was only the last two chapters that I could begin to enjoy the story, probably because that's when the plot began to cinch up and indications were good that the end was near.Don't mistake me...the writing wasn't horrible, but too lacking, in my opinion, of things that would have made for true entertainment. Give the heroine a flaw or something! Too much of perfection can be worse than not enough!