Review: Good plot, but not polished work.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2013
This novel has the story line with the potential for being a 4 star book. However, I chose a 2 star rating because the story was extremely disconnected from the events. I'll explain, the writer wrote the book as if she was telling the story, narrating it. The story does not capture the reader if you understand what I mean. It left like I have reading a story of a story, I did not feel part of the story nor was I able to connect with any of the characters.Additionally, there was poor editing on this book and usually I am not a stickler but when a character's name is 'Moore' and the author keeps referring to him as 'more', it's pretty bad. Moreover, multiple uses of 'than' when the author meant 'then'. In some instances the character's conversations where merged into one paragraph and you have to reread the paragraph to be able to find your place and continue to follow along. Also, the author just kept recounting events that already occurred over and over on each scene and just giving way to much extra writing and fillers that where not necessary and just prolonged the story. Unfortunately, for me it was a redundant read. But on a good note, I was able to do finish the story.