Review: horrible!!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 3, 2011
after reading the first part of this story, i decided to read this second part thinking it had to get better.  i was wrong.  jaycee has had a horrible life.  she was gang raped by her step-father and his werewolf pack on her 16th birthday. she escaped and was on the run ever since until her alpha mate decided to claim her after waiting two years to do so.  it turns out that dane's brother mark is also her mate.  then pierre was her mate briefly until he was killed and then dane, mark and remi (another alpha) tricked her into mating with remi with what was essentially rape.  and this was before pierre was even buried.  then for the rest of the 1st story they lied to her, didn't trust her judgement and disrespected her in front of the pack.  all the while telling her they loved her and wanted what is best for her. throughout both parts of the story her step-father is trying to get her back and keeps attacking the pack.  the end of the 1st story is : to be continued. (spoiler alert)  so in the 2nd story when she finally thinks they really care for her they trick her into getting pregnant and she leaves. they follow her and because the bad guys also follow and she fights them after she protects herself and her baby, remi and dane are furious with her and end up spending the nite with 2 women from the feline pack that lives there.  when she comes down from the loft they are rubbing themselves all over remi and dane, who just look at her.  they drag her back to their pack and even when they find out remi's baby was never in danger they are still mad at her and give her the cold shoulder. now this is where i really hated this book, after hurting jaycee time and time and time again, in front of the pack home 2 of the pack females come up to dane and remi and rub themselves all over them with jaycee standing right there.  then they say that they heard dane and remi had spent the nite with 2 other women when they were gone. (i couldn't help but wonder how they had heard that unless dane or remi told the pack) and offered their services for that nite. dane and remi turn and look at jaycee who says she would like them to spend the nite with her, but it is their choice.  then she goes to their room and prepares herself for them and puts candles all over the room.  she falls asleep and wakes up hours later with the candles all burned out and no mates. she puts on a robe cuz she has on a very revealing teddy with strategic cut outs that remi had gotten her before all this had happened, and goes down the stairs to the kitchen.  on the kitchen table are two naked women, with dane and remi's face buried in their nether regions.  they look up and see jaycee devasted and realize she had expected them to spend the nite with her and that THEY HAVE GONE TOO FAR.  PLEASE, HOW CAN THEY EVEN DO THAT TO THEIR MATE? then the story goes on about how they feel so bad that they hurt her so much.  but of course after groveling for two seconds she takes them back again.  i have never read a shape-shifter story, wolf or otherwise, that treated a mate in this manner. i love menage shifter stories, but i hated this one. the 2 stories were filled with pain and cruelity. some of the reviews for the 1st part of the story said how hot the sex was-how can it be hot when they treat their mate like she is just a convient body to get their rocks off on when they are not mad at her?  amazon should pull this story and the 1st part also. don't waste your money on it. i certainly won't be buying anymore of her books.