Review: Pleasant read but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2012
I must say that the story is quite interesting, and I was attracted to the descriptions of Syria -- geographical and cultural.There is the need of prompt editing for punctuation, especially the use of commas, semi-colons and "--".  I also found quite a few glitches in verb tenses.I do not read Arabic, but I do read French.  It is my opinion that if a foreign language is included this should be with done correctly, especially if a leading vampire is speaking -- vampire leaders are supposed to be perfect.Once the above is corrected I am sure that I could enjoy the story in all its worth.BTW, the story is told in just the right "length." Not too short... Not too long...