Review: GOOD STORY - BADLY FLAWED WRITING
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 12, 2013
I really hope Edward Crichton reads this. I read to the end of this book and you show promise of being a good author; but, seriously man, you really, REALLY need the services of a PROFESSIONAL EDITOR. I don't know enough about ancient Rome to criticize the historical accuracy/inaccuracy of your book but your vocabulary, grammar, punctuation and spelling are execrable. These errors alone take much away from the enjoyment your book. I would give you 4 stars for the story but am generously  rating it overall with 2 stars. Your English teacher would probably give you a FAIL!