Review: perfect
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2014
This very short M/M short story is Ms Shiloh at her best.She has this unfortunate habit of creating dismaying fantasy worlds where much is dark and hopeless and it detracts from her fantasy romances as it does here as well.And yet this time she manages to create a perfect small jewel, extremely concise but not lacking. The story may be predictable but its beauty lies in its simple, neat language and in the carefully paced progression of feelings between the two leads.Other reviewers say it could have been longer. It could, but it needs not be. An annoying name switch is the only mistake I detected.