Review: Main problem--wanted story to go on!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 23, 2012
This short story was one of the type I really enjoy. It started out strong and kept going--but took time to develop the characters, not easy to do in a short story. There was even an unexpected event, also difficult to squeeze in.My one complaint: I would have preferred this to be the first chapter in a longer work. I'd gotten interested in the characters and their lives and wanted more story. It could be the first chapter, although it did end at a good point.