Review: Poor story and execution
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2014
I didn’t like this at all. I usually won’t leave a negative review (and say nothing rather) but I am so taken aback by the positive reviews I decided to contribute. The H was not charismatic – sexy yes, but weak, prepared to lie for his deadbeat brother and shouldering blame with his brother’s fiancé (who acted like a hysterical, silly twit). They all acted like teenagers without depth of character or maturity. The h had a ridiculous, vodka-soaked, vicious aunt – I kept waiting for the past to be revealed, where she had come on to the H and was spurned, or she had some huge travesty to cope with, hence her attitude but nothing – no reason for being bitchy except (a) her husband had died and she no longer believed in love and was therefore “sparing” her niece (but apparently she dated half the county soon after his death so she was unbelievable as a tragic h) and (b) the H wasn’t good enough because he was a rancher. His identical loser twin however was great in her opinion – and according to her, kissing the groom is ok, being caught is the problem. This is the aunt the h listens to instead of talking it out with the H, whom she has always loved???The h talking to herself was also outright silly. Half of what she said no reasonable person says, the other half was superfluous or immature. I eventually skipped the thoughts (easy as they were in italics) and found I went on more easily: they didn’t add any value anyway and I was less irritated by missing these parts.Maybe you think this was hilarious but I wouldn’t read more of this.