Review: Not Even For Free!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
I have a compulsion to finish every book I start, but it was really hard to finish this one. It wasn't a novel - it was a series of loosely connected plot points that the writer was checking off one by one. This skeleton had no meat on its bones. Description of characters was only cursory - one had red hair, another was tall - not enough to distinguish one from another.  They were all puppets with no motivation for anything they did, so the author just told you. (Remember, show - don't  tell.)Since this was a first book, I'm sure the author will be getting better with experience, but I won't  be reading any more of her work. It was just too painful - and my red pencil doesn't  work on my Kindle.