Review: rough draft
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2013
I have read a lot of end times accounts. This one is in dire need of a good human editor. For example, the misuse of site and sight will not be picked up by a spell checker. It reads like it was written by a talented, but uneven, high school senior. Some scenes are well done and others are sketches. Verb tenses is are was maybe random.Character development is uneven at best. Still, I liked the innovative sketch of the Anti-Christ.  The 'mark of the Beast' is also innovative. Perhaps the sequel will improve.