Review: Author needs a proof reader
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 23, 2012
I liked the story line very much but was put off by numerous errors that could have been corrected by proof reading.  When you have to stop reading and go back to ask did I read that right it spoils the moment.  The author also repeatedly, explained the faster than light limitations. We get it already.That said the story was interesting, new technology was introduced and the action was pretty much non stop.  Sorry to be so irritated by the little things, but there is no reason a Amazon published text should not be proof read as it would be for a hard copy book by a publishing house.