Review: SMH.........
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 31, 2013
The first chapter was good, it pulled me in but before it ended things started going down hill. I found this difficult to read.The plots were decent but the way they were written was mind boggling.As soon as I was pulled in again I was thrown out the wagon and lost by something that hadn't even pulled me in. I never knew who was talking or thinking and if things were happening in the present or the past.Having to go back and re read every few pages took a lot away from this story for me. I already purchased Like There's No Tomorrow but will not be reading it soon. Generously giving this one 2.25 for Ms. Black's time and effort.Editing...re reading your own work...rewriting and editing again...re reading again was really needed here....Good Luck!2.25