Review: Eh...I wouldn't have paid for it.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2012
The story had promise but the characters were extremely unrealistic in their responses to stuff. The conversations tended to turn really dry (so they were inconsistent throughout the story) and much was repetitive. The internal dialogue was lackluster and didn't completely pull me in. There wasn't actual growth of the characters throughout, the only sign of growth was the swelling of a abdomen, not once but twice. There was really no coming to grips with the loss they shared, and the female lead was very immature in how she dealt with situations. That was annoying. There was no real romance or intimacy between the characters, and they, in my mind, were more like awkward cousins with crushes on each other then a hot and heavy, meant to be couple.The writing was pretty sound, the formatting consistent. The cover cute. The title not really selling it.Overall, I wouldn't read it again but I wouldn't completely turn my back on the author. I might try the first 5 chapters of more of their work before giving up on them completely.