Review: Good story, bad editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 20, 2012
I really enjoyed this book.  I found the story line to be quite believable and acceptable.  However, I have to agree with other reviewers that the editing was below par.  I make an offer to this author, and to any other author publising on Amazon, to edit their books for a reasonable fee, if they want to contact me.As to the story, it continues the tradition of unknown aliens with slightly superior technology, albeit deficient in other aspects, in which humanity has the edge, attacking without provocation or reason.  I liked the fact that potentially major characters died.  It would have been unbelievable for them to have survived in the situations in which they found themselves.  That was good.  It makes it a bit difficult for the author to find replacements who can, hopefully, save the day for humanity.  But that is for the next couple of books.If the editing were better, this would be a good 4 stars.