Review: Comments
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 13, 2012
The basic story and creation of another world is very good, but there is one major distraction for me.  It is the use of slang and juvenile expressions for adult characters. I hope you (Jeffrey Poole),will take these comments under consideration from a new fan in the best possible way. I hope to see you expanding this new world into many more books.