Review: Unfinished business? more like the never ending story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2013
Where to start? There were amazing parts to this book but the author tried to cram so much conflict in to make it interesting that I had to check to make sure I wasn't reading the Book of Job from the bible. I mean jeesh, if I was this heroine I would have joined a convent. But the main problem with this book is that the author NEEDS to hire an editor!!!! Please I beg you!!!! I really like the characters she creates, they are engaging and you grow to care about them and want to find out how it all ends despite the modern dialogue, grammar mistakes and issues with characters timelines and Redundancy. MINOR SPOILER: One minor point that for some reason really stuck in my craw, one of the characters named Rafe was introduced as a surgeon, then later on the author makes a comment that he is a retired Navy SEAL. Finally she mentions that he is 38 years old. There is no way that the guy could be an experienced surgeon and have done 20 years in the military, particularly as a SEAL. It was unneeded.But as I mentioned, despite all that, I did like the characters and thought that the author brought some unique ideas to "how time travel works" that I haven't read from other authors out there. For .99 cents it's a good summer read but don't feel bad if you want to skip some pages.