Review: What a great story!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 3, 2013
I absolutely loved this story.  The fact that it had two love stories was even better (one could be considered "controversial", but it was sweet and loving).I HATED Peyton from the first page, really really hated her.  She was a horrible human being.  However, seeing her change, and change her mind on things that she never had considered important before was really fun to read about.  Mateo was amazing.  I would totally have given this 5 starts...except....Two things, and they were small.  First, there was one piece of the story that I felt didn't get resolved (possible small spoiler ahead-between parentheses--Mateo's original reason for being around Peyton was not revealed to Peyton.)  I felt like that might have been important.  However, that was small.And the second, the editing was very poorly done.  On my Kindle, the "chapter XX" was never on a new page, and that drove me a little crazy.  Also, there were spots were the wrong word was used "Make DUE" instead of the correct phrase "make DO".  There were lots of little errors like that.  Even in the early part of the book there was an entire sentence that was completely repeated in a paragraph.But that did not affect my love of the story.  Great story, great characters.  And for those that are bothered by that, no cliffhanger ending!