Review: Could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2013
I see alot of reviews calling this a 'lovely story'. The story COULD be but the language used in the sex scenes was too crude for me. The 'c' word in never good and I think a little more mystery would have made the sex scenes sexier. They read like a porn movie would read...not a romance. The story in and of itself was good...I was just not fond of much of the language used in description. It hit me over the head and made me realize I was reading, not enjoying a good story. The Brie series I think had far better writing.