Review: Very good start, get an editor and I'll look forward to more from you...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2014
I find this book an excellent start for a series.  Bryant, excellent technical discussions, very good character development and very good story line.  However you really need an editor to catch your slips and mistakes.The story is full of mistakes where you don't transition well between chapters, actions and characters.  For example, you introduce a character named Hendriks and you later call him Cameron without connecting the first name with the last until two chapters later.  Later you have the characters on the modified shuttle talking about a sleep break and the next paragraph you have them approaching the Hyper Bridge with no transition.I really like the way you write you have  a lot of potential, please get an editor.Now, this really reads like an attempt to rewrite the "Cadet Magnum" story by another author.  HOWEVER, Mr. Waller has a potentially better handler on the entire writing process.