Review: Needs to be edited however good storyline
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2014
Hoffa Hoffa Hoffa.... I was on the fence about leaving this review. It was hard to pick a rating given alllll of the label dropping (some spelled incorrect) grammatical errors, punctuation errors and wrong word usage. I click on a couple words in my kindle to go to the dictionary and they were not even words. The whole time reading this book... my mom and I called each other a total of 37 times.... conversation was basically "where are you"..... "did you catch this or that error?"..."go to this percentage..." The conversation should have been "girl what did you think of that part?".... "Are you crying,".... "Do you love it" etc.....I loved the storyline and the characters, I even loved the graphic nature of the payback but you seriously need to pull this book down, have it PROFESSIONALLY edited and place back on Amazon. I will not let this deter me from reading your work in the future, I promise you that but please pull this book down. I will go into more detail on FB in your inbox. I am also hoping for a part 2 I want to see Angel find happiness versus living with all that pain physical and emotional.