Review: Very short story ~ Lots of sexual situations ~ Poor story line
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 13, 2011
Story starts immediately with sex (which may or may not work for you). The focus is voyeurism & light BDSM, both of which are weak and diluted.  For a story that JUMPS right into sex, it should be sexier, more inline with it's subject matter ~ to simply state, it should be HOTTER OR the story should be better defined.  This straddles both, it tries be an erotic story and a sexy hot romp and fails.