Review: Guh!! Too short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2012
I really like this short story, but it was too short. It would have been nice if it was longer and I would have enjoyed it much more. The characters are were defined, but I would have loved to see how it all actually played out. Kind of hoping that maybe the author will write an extended version.It does make a good short story though.