Review: honest review
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 5, 2013
Ok I'll keep the review fairly short. (Below you can see my updates from goodreads if you'd like).As I mentioned, this book needs to be re-edited by a PROFESSIONAL.I have never read a book (even books I didn't finish) where I could not feel any connection to the characters.With this book I really had to drag myself to finish the last 30%. I don't know if it was lack of depth to the actual story or the (semi-formed) character development but one (or both) were lacking.I don't want to come off as rude to this author or anyone for that matter. I'm just an honest person and I know that can come off wrong especially in the sense of something written so... To the author I think this was an ok debut novel, however I hope you take all reviews and suggestions as ways to help you improve your work in the future.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------20.0%  "I feel ripped off right about now. The first 10% was fine, which is the sample, then after I purchased the book I keep reading and now there are all these editorial issues that make me think the author just made the sample really well edited to make me think the rest of the book will be edited just as well....not a way to make fans on your debut novel, hopefully it will get better."44.0%  "Wow how many times can you mention how special a girl is? I guess I'm just not seeing what's so incredibly special about Allison, maybe it's the lack of character development (although not as bad as other books)."44.0%  "Ok one more thing for whoever else has read this book does anyone else find it disgusting that Hailey thinks its hot to find Allison and HER BROTHER Liam grinding on eachother while making out? That's gross...."70.0%  "The statement "your different with her" is repeated so much omfg I'm getting highly annoyed."80.0%  "Wait is the name Jerrica or Erica?"