Review: Don't Bother, Even if it is Free
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2012
I'm a bargain reader and rarely put down a book; even when other reviewers talk about poor grammar and editing I can generally look past those things and just enjoy the story. However, with this story I read about 40% and couldn't go any farther. The main characters were trite and insipid, hardly developed at all. The story felt like a short story that was stretched and pulled forcibly into a longer novel - unsuccessfully. The dialogue was even starting to get on my nerves and as I said before I have a high tolerance for bad writing (because mine is terrible) but the story was also so poorly developed that I couldn't finish it. I wish I could remove it from my kindle so I didn't even have to see the cover there glaring at me. Don't bother with this one - there are plenty of other bargain series that are much much better - such as the Caged series, and Danika Dark's books.