Review: Great story, ATROCIOUS editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 27, 2014
The "Life After War" series is epic. Angela White weaves an interesting, character driven story. I admire her generosity and imagination. However, in this installment the innumerable errors overshadow the story so much so I actually felt embarrassed for the author. With some issues being so blatantly obvious, I wonder if an Editor even read it prior to release. Entire passages are missing or jumbled. Many, many punctuation, grammatical, tense, and spelling errors. This book is definitely not ready for publication, and yet, here we have it. The stories within are well worth the telling, but faithful readers of this series should prepare themselves for moments of complete confusion . . .