Review: slightly disappointed too
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2014
Like many others I loved book one and it is hard to compete with such a good start.  I do read very fast and one thing I might suggest is a bit more spacing between sections when you are suddenly in another location.  At one point they were talking about a building being a 'palace' and shortly after that we were at a Crystal palace and I had to back track as it wasn't making sense.  If you are going to jump locations a lot you need more than a new paragraph to let your reader know IMO!