Review: POTENTIAL, BUT . . .
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2014
There were many clever ideas in this story that could have made a good novel.  However, the grammar nd spelling were atrocious.  The author rushed through all of her ideas rather than taking the time to develop them more fully.  The storyline of the argument between Darcy and Bingley had potential, but was glossed over.  The idea for the wedding of Miss deBourgh and the plan to take her money was also good, but could have been developed much more thoroughly.  The one thing that was hard to swallow was the job Elizabeth took as Georgiana's companion.  She was a gentlewomen and had no need to work.  They were far better ways to resurrect they relationship.  I wish the author had taken her time with her story and really needs to find a better editor/proofreader.