Review: Over the top (bad)
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2012
Characters were stilted, no real chemistry between any of them. Over the top descriptions that were way too 'in-your-face' of what they want to do to each other, w/ little follow-through. People would not talk to each other like they did, even in a suspended reality kind of way. The character's came across as shallow, needy, and just a bit 'mental' in my view. All four of them!This wasn't really a true menage, in a sense. There was Kate/Tom & Mike/John. With what came across more like partner swapping than anything else. Kate & Tom invite the other two to play, permanently. That's what I got.The suspense was also overdone & convoluted and required an intro to characters you care little for who may be a set up for a future series - which I will not buy. The time spent on this could have been better spent developing the main characters instead.Very annoying read. I had to make myself finish it. I also agree with another reviewer, it was choppy.If you want to read an enjoyable foursome menage w/ suspense please read: Playing Four Keeps by Kris Norris - sooo much better!