Review: More Like a Poor Sample
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2011
This story is so short, I was unable to get into understanding the characters or the plot. The short paragraphs made it even more difficult to comprehend the story since this piece of work splits the story in so many small sections without going into any detail. While I could see some effort is put into organizing and editing this short story, the short length makes reading this pointless.