Review: Loved the story but the errors detract from the reading experience.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 15, 2012
I enjoyed the story here very much. I love a good paranormal mystery with a bit of romance thrown in. The characters are well-developed and held my interest. That being said, the punctuation and grammatical errors were very distracting.  The reviewers who pass over them or liken them to "net-speak" most likely would write with the same errors.  For anyone who does read and speak correctly, i.e. not like a hype-upped under-30 pseudo-urbanite, the many extra commas and such are very grating on the mind's ear.