Review: Crumbs! Learn to write
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 29, 2012
I read the mixed reviews - sounds interesting, but a lot of criticism.So I followed the "look inside" link.The third paragraph has a full stop where there should be a comma.The fourth paragraph, first sentence, mixes past and present tense - "who needed... were convicted... became so... find themselves".The next sentence is appalling: "Each are" instead of "Each is"; "replace it" instead of "replacing it"; "quicker than their sentence" instead of "before their sentence ends".The sixth paragraph has "these citizens believes..."Aaaargh!I cannot go any further!