Review: Sweet story...but a little editing, please!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2013
First, let me say that I enjoyed this story; I loved the characters, particularly Johnny...what a sweetheart! It was also wonderful to see Rich's relationship with his father evolve. So...I definitely recommend getting and reading this book.That said...really, I usually just let misspelled words and grammatical issues slide by, but this time...please, please, get a human to edit your work after spellcheck has a go at it! The most entertaining, repetitive error: using the word "sleuth" when the author meant to use the work "sluice" (or "sleuthing" for "sluicing"). As in..."Rich "sleuthed" through the water, or Johnny has water "sleuthing" down his body. Pretty entertaining, but also should have been caught with a quick edit. There were innumerable other spelling and grammar errors throughout this book that were distracting, but at least this error provided a giggle or two...But don't let this stop you from getting the book. It's a lovely, easy read...and perhaps you can play a game of "how many errors can I catch..." This author, as usual, also has am amazing number of different names to call a penis...very creative. LOL