Review: The Cabin at the Lake
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 28, 2012
Longtime friends Brett and Julia find themselves alone at Julia's family's vacation house. Brett has tried to ignore Julia's flirting for years in order to prevent any weirdness in his friendship with Julia's older brother, but this time Julia isn't going to let Brett say no easily. She greets him nakedly and Brett has to decide if she's worth the risk.This was just okay, it's short (18 pages) and for this story I would say the length works against it. I like short stories as long as they feel complete, and there really wasn't enough here to leave me feeling satisfied when I finished. I think this story would work better as a longer novella. I'm glad I was able to get this free, I'd probably feel less pleased with this if I had paid money for it.