Review: A Nice Beginning
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 22, 2012
The author has the beginnings of a really nice story.  The worlds in which the story takes place was described nicely and the characters were enjoyable.  I found the plot to be interesting but I would have appreciated more tension in the resolution of the various crisis'.  Once Janis came on line everything was wrapped up easily (although I did enjoy when the story touched upon the moralistic aspect of Janis).The one thing that kept me from rating this higher was (and I am quoting from another review) is the rotating first person narrative.  Each character in the book is given the opportunity to continue the story from their perspective.  While this is an interesting idea, I found it difficult to determine who was actually talking.  It was necessary for the character to drop a key piece of information, such as "...as the code for the logicsphere was running through my head..." or another character had to actually name the person for me to figure out who was talking.  Like I said, not a bad idea but I found it taking me out of the story more than I liked.All-in-all a nice read.  I will give the author's continuation a shot.