Review: New Author With Potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 8, 2014
**I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review****2.5 Stars**I really wanted to LOVE this book. After reading the book description, I just knew that I would. How could I not? Bronson, an MMA fighter/biker and Rowan, a good girl/virgin/college student who is desperate to help her sister. Even the cover was hot! And then I read the prologue...not only was this the longest prologue I have ever read, but at the end of it, Bronson is having what appears to be unprotected sex with an escort.After that disturbing beginning, the rest of the book was just all over the place. Alternating POV's from paragraph to paragraph, and many times it wasn't just the POV's from Bronson and Rowan. There were whole chapters that were from the POV's of secondary characters...many times with no interaction from the H and h. Lacy...Axle...Dolce each had whole chapters. Why?Next, I didn't really feel the connection between Rowan and Bronson-at least not until close to the end of the book. During family night, when Bronson started referring to Rowan as his old lady and later saved her from Dolce. That's when I finally felt something...it was like the incident brought them together. I had struggled with the book up until then, I started to enjoy it a little more after that.And then there was the liver. Still trying to figure out how Rowan drove 26 hours (without stopping to rest), and took a dead body into a hospital. No questions were asked? Did they just cut the liver out of the dead body and put it in her sister? That whole situation was a little weird.Okay epilogue. Glad that they got their HEA.