Review: Good Story too short of my tastes
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2012
While I loved this book, I wish the author had developed the plot more.  She had a wonderful premise here, but I think she missed a great opportunity to expand the plot and make it not just a good story, but a great and memorable one.The kidnapping and that characters trials would have enhanced the story and Jayce's feeling and reaction to it being expanded on would also have given it more meat.  Also I wish she'd given her bride, Jayce, a more depth and a more active less passive role.  Especially her panchant for animal gentling.I will buy more of her stories. I truly hope she expands the plots in her next endeavors, because, I feel she is a gifted author, who could become a truly unforgettable one.Otherwise I would recommend it.