Review: Great story, poor editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 3, 2013
I love the story the author created. This is more than your standard romance read. The characters have history and feel real. The only complaint I have regarding substance, is that I wish she described the characters as she sees them. I like a little more physical description in my books. Oh, and perhaps a bit more character development on the friends.However, there are some issues that kind of got to me. The "L" in look was constantly capitalized . I'm not sure if it was meant to have a meaning to the story, but it stood out and distracted me. There were also some little factual errors, though few and far between and a few grammatical errors. If she just did more more edit, it would be perfect.All in all, highly enjoyable. I probably will reread.