Review: No Romance, Just Sex
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2014
Not at all what I expected from the preview. The story starts fine and that's what is presented in the preview, but as soon as Dakota and Samuel meet they start with the sex. And the sex is ridiculously written. I doubt that any man or teenaged boy would ever be so uncontrolled and sexually charged as these two supposed adults.There is no story, just words to take you from one sexual event to the next. There are grammar and context errors, incorrect entries such as the live red lobsters in the kitchen, with banded claws, Real lobsters are red after they've been cooked and green or brownish green when still alive. Someone wanted to write about men having sex and thought anything would work, I guess.Not worth keeping and I returned it.