Review: Would like to have given 5 *****
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2013
I would like to have given this read 5 ***** however the same mistakes from other books I have read by this author continue to repeat themselves. I had written this author off and after the first two books I read, but since this book was gifted to me I decided to give it another try. There are many grammatical errors and poor sentence structure. This author really could benefit from a good editor. The only reason I rated this book 2 ** is because of the potential the story line had. The story line was good and I saw where the author wanted to take it; however, it was a very vague storyline. There is definitely some room for improvement. I would like to see more character development as well as storyline development for part 2. These are the same mistakes from the other books as well. I will try this author once more, but please step up the quality of writing. Other reviews also complained about the same issues as I have. This should worked on because people only want to pay for quality work not less than quality.