Review: Somewhat Annoyed with Main Character but good story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 10, 2013
I thought this was a solid and well-written story, especially for a free download but I would have preferred to spend more time on the outside conflicts instead of spending so much on the main characters feelings of inadequacy. To be honest she was starting to annoy me about how she wanted didn't want to share her son with his famous father or have any of his lifestyle affect her son. I liked the idea of the story and I wish I had enjoyed her character more.