Review: Good with reservations on style
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2012
The story and premise were very good. I liked the character development of the main characters. The only thing that kept me from giving a higher rating was the style. I was often jarred by words used in a manner that wasn't right. It seemed like over usage of a thesaurus, placing synonyms rather than ordinary words.Fun series but the excess of modifiers, adjectives and adverbs, and the usage of odd terms interrupted the flow. Which was too bad as I did like the story, an interesting take on alternative beings as well as a young woman doing all she can in an awful situation.Thank you for offering them on kindle.