Review: Nice idea but bad execution
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 17, 2013
Okay I gave it a 3 star because I liked the idea o the book even if it is pretty standard.  However, the writing left a lot to be desired.  First off, this is the first time I ever understood what people meant by bein 'told instead of shown'.  The characters literally said every little thing they felt.  There was no illustration so we could catch the meaning.  This is probably why it came off as ridiculously cheesy and had me cringing trying to read it.  The plot was so predictable that I already knew what was going to happen anyway.  I finally couldnt take it anymore and skipped to the end to read the last couple of chapters.  The book seemed like an author's first attempts at writing where they do not know how to convey emotions with words to bring the characters to life.Another problem I had was how they had to his fiance evil in the end for him to get the balls to justify ending it.  I mean at first she was all shallow but nice.  Now she is a raging, homophobic, bitch.  I mean that was such a cop out by the author.