Review: Closer to a 3.5 - Could be Great
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 21, 2013
I was in the mood for a ghost story with a touch of romance. This title definitely has both elements. I'd say there is more focus on romance.Ms. James can write nice, friendly characters. I liked everyone. I think I even liked the bad guys. :) There are even a few animals to love.Things started to fall apart for me around 40%. There are so many punctuation errors I was becoming frustrated once I hit the halfway point. The pacing of the story was slow in a few places. Wordy. Wandering. So my rating falls closer to a 3.5.This is a fun romance with a pleasant cast of people and spirits. I sure hope this author discovers an editor and maybe a skilled beta reader to help her tighten things up. She has talent. Her stories are close to being great.