Review: Amateurish and disjointed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2011
I am surprised that everyone before me has given this book five stars.  I found that the storyline was rushed, moving the character from one place to another without her ever initiating anything.  The heroine was not really much of a heroine.  She didn't have much initiative of her own and she was constantly the victim.Secondly, the writing was simplistic. The sentence structure needed work to make it interesting.  Almost every other sentence started with 'I' and the dialogue felt choppy, without any of the intonation that you'd expect from real conversation.Overall, I wanted to like the book because of the reviews, but I couldn't. I gave up reading it before the very end after yet another jump in the storyline.  In general, the idea might have had merit, but this needed much more work.