Review: The Mating
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2011
PLOT: Lucius was injured by rogue werewolves while performing his duty of guarding his land for his alpha. He ends up on Tonya's land by mistake but once he recognizes her scent as his mate, he follows her home. She takes care of him after he collapses in den.PROS: It began well. The story and character development were moving along. The story was well written. Tonya and Lucius were likeable.CONS: And then they began to talk to each other. And they had nothing to say. Their conversations are stilted and don't flow. Soon after Tonya discovers he's a werewolf, she asks him to leave her house. When he comes back, they have vague sex. The ending feels abrupt.3 STARS: The 3 stars are all for the beginning. The author has skill and I'd be interested in reading one of her longer works.