Review: Bad formatting ruined the story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 13, 2012
This could have been a much better story but....the poor formatting ruined it. Sometimes the paragraphs were indented, as they should be...then they weren't! Words or parts of words were missing - did anyone edit this book? The ending was poor - the author never did explain why one ghost was able to banish another and why then? All in all I was disappointed.