Review: Definitely a 'serial' read...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2013
It has potential. Some of the dialog, and different POVs were a bit disjointed, and at times confusing. I think this story could use a good editor as far as organisation. I do like the cover illustration, though.I see where the serial will have potential, but so far, not quite enough to pull me in as much as the blurb had me hoping for. I will read the next part of the series to see if it smooths out, but as it stands, there was not enough 'meat' to the story to keep me hooked. It was very interesting to learn about this condition, though, and this is definitely a new approach to the m/m genre. I am curious, due to the main character's condition, as to how he will actually be able to 'have' any kind of human contact/relationship.As far as the secondary main character, I have not seen enough of him to really like him very much yet. The two secondary characters are entertaining, though. I guess at this point, I am glad I received this as a free-read.