Review: And again
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2014
First of all I just want to say that I still like this author and I still like his stories. Enough said.Second thing, improve your writing skills Laurence Dahners. Seriously, people with as many books should have improved their skills by now. Even people who use the English as their second language should have gotten significantly better at this point. Again and again, I find myself editing the sentences in my head as I read to make more sense. Sometimes whole words, as many as six and parts of entire paragraphs can be removed to improve the flow and fix the grammar. I hate the overly complicated sentences, like the author was trying to express themself and didn't know how to say it. And don't use the word "obviously" while explaining something. Get a thesaurus.It is quite clear to me that the author uses an automatic spellchecker on his books ad hoc, but fails to follow up in his editing after the computer gets done rebuilding his work. You know something is wrong when the world "ix" is placed in the middle of a sentence for no reason. Also, it is incredibly annoying for the main character to timeout and explain what they are doing and why during the action sequence when none is needed.I still love the stories and am looking forward to the next one. And yet, I still have this urge to rip the pages out of my Kindle and work on it in Microsoft Word.