Review: Then what?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 8, 2012
I received this from the author as a promotion. I started reading, and then I read the reviews. I have a distinct dislike of stories that aren't complete. This is a tease - it isn't the whole story, although it is being marketed as a series. While the story is intriguing, there are many major plot points that are skimmed over, and several instances of info dumping. He could have woven information into the story line, but instead, he throws it at you to get it out of the way. His research is painfully evident. The beginning is a little disjointed. There were several parts of the story that I wanted to connect with, but in the end, I was just disappointed.