Review: Please invest in a better proofreader!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2013
This book had all the earmarks of a delightful romp through the Regency era, however the author needs to consider re-educating herself on the use of commas and periods. What could have been a thoroughly enjoyable read was marred by the overwhelming amount of run on sentences and the inappropriate use of the Oxford comma. This book could benefit from a more thorough editing. The characters were fully developed and setting and circumstance wholly believable, however the aforementioned grammatical errors did not do them or the story line justice. I found it difficult on the developing stories as I sat wishing I had my red corrector's pen at the ready!