Review: I can't believe I got bored while reading a sex scene
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2013
The length of this story -- and the timing of the sex scene -- makes it a bit dull.  Chris saves Melody from drowning.  Although they are immediately hot for each other, they do everything but act on it for pages and pages and pages.  Melody supposedly has her own cabin in the woods, but she decides to stay with Chris.  We're treated to delightful scenes -- like Chris imagining, in vivid detail, an overweight woman, so that he doesn't become too excited while he's cuddling nude with Melody (it's the only way to warm somebody up, don't you know?).  Chris is such a great guy, huh?By the time they finally get down to business, the mechanics of the act itself seem a bit off.  At one point, Chris has three fingers in Melody, "slips" in a fourth, and murmurs to her how tight she is.  Really?  If you're simply slipping in a fourth finger and still impressed, it might be time to reevaluate how you're judging that particular criteria.  The scene goes on for a while and I just couldn't get engaged.  It wasn't, like some reviewers said, that they'd just met.  I like just met/stranger stories.  It's just that these two were so . . . dull.  Chris is nothing except for a great body.  And Melody . . . well, I never even got a feeling for what type of person Melody was.  While she's talking dirty to Chris, she's thinking that she is acting differently than she normally would.  Well, why?Given the amount of free erotica on Amazon, I wouldn't recommend spending time with this.  By the last few pages, I was trying to get it over with.