Review: Could be better.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2013
I loveFalling for Archie (sweet gay romance)andMoths and Men (sweet gay romance). This one however falls short. There is just too much sex and fawning over each other in the romance even if Kale and Holin are likable enough. The writer should have focus more on the world building as this is a fantasy. Again the typos are annoying here. However there are parts which I enjoy. The dragon slaying scenes are well done especially the last one when the guys take on an eggs laying dragon. The writer's sympathy for the killing does come across. I like Kale's bond with his two horses and Lini, Kale's faithful horse, is quite a scene stealer when this fiesy horse is mentioned. I do have a problem with the way the story ended. It should be much tighter if the writer does not intend this to be a series. Introducing a secondary character who seems to have a more solid role in the story then not following through in the plot is just odd. At the end not up to the standard of the two contemporary romances I enjoy so much.