Review: Great!  (Needs editing)
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2013
I bought this the moment it came out!  It is such a good story, nice characters, great plot.  I really like how the story develops (some mystery but not so much that you're nearing the end of the book and still have no idea what's going on!).  This was just a really excellent follow-up to the first story and I cannot wait for the third!  (There better be a third!!!)HOWEVER...This book needs editing.  I found the last one to be OK (I read it recently, after it was re-edited).  In this one, I found a  homonym issues, a lot of spelling errors that spell check wouldn't catch (because it's a correctly spelled wrong word, if that makes sense), formatting issues (odd paragraph breaks, a chapter title that wasn't the normal chapter text/font), and even a who/whom mistake.  I'm by no means an editor or English teacher, so if I found a good 15-20 mistakes than there are probably more.  Maybe there is some glitch in the process that coverts the text into the e-book file format or something.  Some books seem full of these problems.