Review: A potential jewel
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 29, 2014
I'm a little conflicted about this book. The first and least difficult problem is haphazard editing. There are too many misspellings, so first off the author needs a decent editor.I started out not liking the heroine at all; I don't like drunks in general, but drunks who appear to think nothing of sleeping with a potential customer to make the sale, and a boss who resents the fact that she didn't follow through, almost made me hurl the book against the wall. Luckily, I remembered that I was reading it on my k-fire and refrained from poetic gestures.Eventually, I grew to like the feisty lass, especially when she took it upon herself to make a real difference in the outcome of the story, (vaguely described to avoid spoilers)  although she's still undisciplined, a potentially fatal error, even unfit, in a Darwinian sense, because she has serious responsibilities to the future. Again, a good editor ought to have pointed this out.I think the story, and the series, has real potential, and hope to see a revised edition soon.Lose the drinking; it's unbecoming in new mothers.