Review: story is ok, but rhyme is rather clunky
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 5, 2013
This is a nice little introduction to the planets, and would probably be best suited for a 5 or 6 year old.  It was longer than I had expected, and my kids were losing interest by the end.This rhyme needs work - the rhythm is "off" several places, and the rhyming words don't always match up, either (Thomas/bus, line/minds, up/awestruck)  Also, some of the words make it hard for a young child to understand (concur, perplexed).