Review: Did not like this one...very dissappointed
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 14, 2014
So if I didn't like it why 4 stars (3.5)....because regardless of my opinion it was well written.  I will give props to the authors for this in and of itself.****SpoilersBasically I did not like Ben at all.  He is a Dom, albeit inexperienced and not fully trained.  However one would expect a certain amount of self confidence in a Dom.  He came across as immature.  There were also sooo many inconsistencies with his character.  Example:  he goes over and above for a co-worker with whom he has no vested relationship yet constantly overlooks Scott.  The plot was exceedingly weak.  I mean at what point ever does Scott give the impression that money (having it) is important to him?  Yet this is an issue that drives Ben's actions.  And at the end, after Ben knows how Scott feels about his old life and family, he sends him back?  After declaring love?  And Scott giving his virginity in the manner he did?What little emotional connection there was was all on Scott.  When I read the brief description of Damien, I wanted Scott to go be with him.And the only other complaint I had was that Scott who is an American used UK phrases.  I will note that this happened primarily at the beginning.