Review: Unbelievable and No heat!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2013
I know this is a short story, but this entire story was soooooo unrealistic and unbelievable!!!  Then to top things off, there was no heat between the main characters (H/h).  There was no "Real" intimacy! There was only one scene when they were pretending to be intimate so they could fool the drug lords(and this one scene was lukewarm at best! They were just doing alot of verbal oohs and ahhhs).  When I read reviews like the ones left for this book, I can only think one of two things.  The author has friends padding the reviews to get a sell, or these readers haven't read the "good" books in this genre from authors like sienna mynx, pepper pace, latriva nelson, etc.  If they had read some of the better developed plots with loads of intensity (this is true for short stories as well), I think the BEST they could have given this was 2 stars!