Review: more stars if longer but way to short....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2013
I read this in well let's say 10 minutes flat..(and I am being seriously generous on the time.) its a short short story, well thought out, excellent plot and pacing BUT way way too short... It's more of a pre blurb rather than a story.. at least to me. If this had been the lead in to a longer story or book I would have raved because it caught my attention, kept me entertained and was funny with excellent pacing. IT IS NOT WORTH THE MONEY. it's more of a rip off but when i have a few bucks to spare I might MIGHT- buy a full book because she has great potential. I hope she rolls this and creates a book worth my money.