Review: Great story, lots of errors.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2014
This book has great potential. But, it needs a good solid editing read through. It's not so much grammatical errors, but words missing from sentences, and lots of timeline confusion. Plus, there are just too many characters which left me confused and skimming past certain parts because I couldn't remember who the many random minor characters were or where they fit in. The story is solid and I wanted to love the book. It's a decent first effort but it's definitely not complete.