Review: Too Much going on!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2013
This probably would have been a great book but it seemed to me that the author had too many people doing too much.  I just felt that the character's could have been developed more with less of them. It took a lot away from the story because while my mind was on one person my eyes were on another.  I just couldn't tie it all together without having to go back and re read stuff.  Also the sentence structure was pretty bad as well, not sure if this was because of a Kindle version or not.  Good luck to the author on the next story.  Nothing beats a failure but a try.