Review: Needs A Lot Of Work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2012
The plot is good. The writing, however, needs a lot of work.The character development is not very good. The characters are two-dimensional caracatures of what they should be.The main character lived in a human hell from the age of 8 years until the story starts when she is 23. Yet she holds ideals of honor and self sacrifice that are inconsistent with her previous life. She is also extremely nave. Innocence of this type is unbelievable in someone with her background.This could have been a very good story but the writing falls far short of, not only what it could be, but what it should be.I got this ebook free from Amazon. It's worth it for that price.I can recommend this only to people that can manage to enjoy stories with unbelievable characters.