Review: Um...has potential if it weren't so irritating to read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2014
Interesting story line, though I'm not convinced the author is personally aware of many aspects in the MC lifestyle. Not to mention, the success of a soul mate romance amidst the biker violence, drama, and illegal activities isn't just far fetched, successful shows like Sons of Anarcy failed to even weave romance into its story line after one season. And I feel the need to point out the dramatic licenses often taken by the SOA writers/producers. At least they showcase women who "act" like they're tough enough to survive. This book developed some characters with traits that never became believable, which severs any further growth essential to any plot.Could have been developed into an entertaining read. The absolute worst aspect of this book, however, was its badly constructed sentences, laden with a ridiculous amount of simple misspellings and basic typos, carelessly sloshed together and claiming to be a finished novel somewhere beneath it layers and layers of hot mess. I was increasingly irritated at the disruptive and constant grammatical errors and it became slightly painful to continue reading. Honestly, maybe more like moderately painful:)