Review: So many things wrong here
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 28, 2013
***This review was written for the original story Head Over Wheels. I have not read the revised story.I'm not going to list everything I didn't like about this story, but here is a word of advice to the author and any aspiring authors out there: do your homework.US medical students don't work 80 hour weeks. They don't take care of patients on their own. They NEVER aspire to a residency out of the US. That is actually the Kiss of Death for a medical career.There were some good parts. I really liked the Jewel's friends and family. They were sweet and compassionate.The prose was awkward and over-explained everything. Much like Jewel's obsession with making sure she really really really liked Indigo before their awkward and not-so-hot romantic liaison. The set-up of Jewel as a jewelry thief in her own department store was contrived. In all, I felt this story was all melodrama and little drama.