Review: Gosh
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2012
My very first read on the Kindle (although not my first review)! The description drew me in and I was excited to begin this book. The excitement remained as the story unfolded, until I could no longer read any further and removed it from my Kindle and cloud.Let me try to explain. The story was a brilliant idea. Catchy, interesting and something I haven't read about before. It had the potential of being fluffy - check, girly - check, and romantic - check. Three good things to draw any person who wanted a slightly different twist to a Romance.By the end of the first chapter I was disappointed and annoyed at the heroine of the story. She was, in a sense, whiny. Not only did I dislike the main character, the grammar and punctuation put me off. However it took me a good 3 more chapters before I gave up and could take no more.