Review: It had a potential!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2014
If you turned manga plot into a book, this would be the result!Alix Andre DeBenit and Randall Fagan are Hunters, they hunt the demons that lurk in the night.But when they get a visit from a shadowy demon telling them about the "Storyteller" and his ability to rewrite  past doings. Faced with the possibility of a new start, what will they do?Never trust a good summary, it can always go wrong.I wanted to like this book, i really did.The base seemed interesting enough. The performance trough, was inadequate.The main storyline quickly multiplied into various other storylines and you just got overwhelmed by an abundance of information.The key points of the story which where supposed to have an impact, have been done to soon and spoken like it was nothing.Nothing was well planned or carried throughThe characters lacked execution. They were shallow and  not explored enough. There are just too many of them.You have two main characters, explore them, give them substance, don't add more half-assed characters that aren't going to be fleshed out as they deserve.My least favorite character was Mira the happy go lucky dumb little fox girl that actually carries a lot of power.Such a typical manga character, i mentally cringed whenever she was around.All in all, i liked the idea, the potential is there.In the next book i would love to see less manga-like plot and more fleshed out writing.Congratulation to Jessica and Briana on publishing their first book.It can only get better from here!**Free copy provided by author in exchange for an honest review**