Review: Interesting story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2014
Ok, first let me say that this is a story about a polygamous family.  Yes, there is religion, but it is not shoved in your face.  In this community, women are given a vision or a dream about the man they are to marry and they take the name to their bishop and he decides if it is God’s will.  Beth Anne had a vision that she would marry Ben.  But, Ben and her best friend Mollie are already married and they have only been married for three months.  Normally there is a longer time between marriages.  Mollie is very unhappy (to say the least!) about this development and she throws a very large temper tantrum over it.  She gets a very severe spanking from Ben because of it the next time.During the courting period for Ben and Beth Anne, there is anger and resentment between the best friends.  They each do nasty things to the other, but Ben is unaware of the problems.  They have a ceasefire for the wedding, but after that they went back to their fighting.  It got bad, but finally the situation was resolved and they started to become a family.There are really good punishment spankings in this book.  My biggest complaint is that this is a short story and the ending is very abrupt.  I can see from the title that this book will be a series, so I’m guessing that’s why the story ended so abruptly.  I really wish that authors would go back to fewer longer stories instead of lots of novellas.  I would willingly pay more if the story was longer.  I give this 4 stars.