Review: Good story but.....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 30, 2014
I didn't realize this was part of a series when I got it as a free download.  The storyline stands on its own, but I finally had enough of Layla insisting on obeying every Dom she finds or runs into, even knowing this one will beat her to death!  Grow some backbone, girl!!My real problem with the book came in all the punctuation errors!!  Did this manuscript ever see an editor? (never mind a proofreader!)  The writer is enamored with apostrophes but can't seem to use a comma in any of the right places!  "You're mum" should have been "Your mum," "dudes, not dude's (for more than one)", and the one that really made me gag--"I had fell..." should read "I had fallen in love."  At that point, I left the book without knowing the outcome and won't go back.  These are middle school errors.  Adults shouldn't talk this way!I won't download/purchase any more of this writer's books.