Review: Bad Case of Deja Vu and Clenching
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2014
Spoiler Alert - The following review contains spoilers, so please do not read if you don't want any spoilers.I read the second version of this book, which differs from the first based on comments from readers of the first version. The second version included story changes to make it appear somewhat different than the "other author's" book in question. I could see strong similarities to certain other books previously discussed in threads about this book. I have read just about all of the MC romance books out there so I have a good basis of comparison.  I just could not get into the book or connect with the characters.  I like a good romance, whether it's about a MC or not, to engage me with the characters, take them seriously and most of all most of all have a story that is consistent with no discrepancies and believable..SPOILERSIt starts out with the h's supposed father dying and her real mother/father showing up at the hospital. The mother tells the h, she doesn't know crap about what happened in the past and leaves a paper with her name/contact information. Now the h was abducted when she was 3 years old and abused greatly until the father/uncle's death. Oh yeah, the supposed father was really her uncle who abducted her at age 3 and turned her over to a drug dealer for payment. Later in the book, the real mother/father are depicted as being devastated by her abduction. Flash back to the cold treatment at the hospital. The book was mostly about sex between the h and Cole, the h and the drug dealer, the h and others. The sex scenes were gratuitous. The term "p**y clenching" was used hundreds of time I think. The h is abducted by a rival club and within an hour the h has sex with two of the rival club members, front/back door action at the same time and she enjoys it, reaching her climax. Thirty minutes (maybe) Cole saves the day killing the other bikers and the h immediately has a "p**y clenching" moment and begs Cole to have sex with her and make her forget. She again enjoys it. Now I'm all about good sex scenes and like erotic stories but the h's sexual appetite just turned me off. There was no character development and a really weak plot. I have read real, gritty MC romances and didn't come away feeling kind of repulsed by a book like I feel about this one.I