Review: Not worth it
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2011
This story was very short and disappointing. Just because the author uses the word 'c*ck' does not make the story steamy. There was no character development, nor was the story line interesting. A grown man decides it's time to move out of his parents' home and into one of his own. Really? Would you find it attractive if say, a 27 yo man told you he was finally moving out of his parents' home. This automatically turned me off of the character. He seemed very immature, from the dialogue between he and his friends, and the way he acted. There wasn't really anything attractive about Treasure, or Soren. They were flat, and I couldn't really get into the story or their courtship. I prefer my men alphas and the women a little more well rounded. The price was aggravating when I realized how short the story was as well. I'm deleting this one from my kindle.