Review: Had all the elements to be great, but just too rushed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 9, 2013
Warning may contain some spoilersThis book had me super excited. I like stories that follow this premise. Alpha man finds woman of limited experience. Woman grows to stand on her own and challenge alpha male. They both come into their own and of course there is a HEA.This book had all of those elements, but was too rushed.  Marco (alpha male) was seeing someone when him and female lead Natalie started seeing each other. The woman came over, and demanded that Natalie not try anything with Marco. However, with in a couple of pages Marco breaks it off with the woman he was seeing to pursue Natalie. I would have liked the other woman to create some drama since there was build and expectation for her to. Instead she wasn't mentioned again.Furthermore, there was a guy in the book named Kennedy that found Natalie attractive. I wish he would have created more drama with Marco threatened. Instead, again he just went away.There was a potential to make this a series, or a much longer book. Instead the book was rushed, and some aspects were not fully discussed. It left me wondering about a few topics. For instance part of the reason why Natalie went to this was town was to get away from her mom's boyfriend. You read that her mom is having problems with the boyfriend, but then it isn't discussed again until the end of the book where her mom has a new boyfriend. Did the mom find out about the boyfriend trying to get with Natalie?? You don't know. You left to assume, which I don't like very much.Again, I did find this book enjoyable. However I wish it had more meat to it and wasn't so rushed.