Review: I think it would have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2013
Had the author not tried rhyme because rhyming has to be consistent and this was not so it wasnt a smooth read. The story itself deals with an issue that is certainly common to most women who have raised daughters--been there!--, so it would have been nice had the author written a  story without rhyme.