Review: This is what happens when your cousins beta read your book
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 19, 2013
Menopause is killing me, I forget what writers drive me crazy and after I purchase a book and start reading all those memories of vapid books I purchased, read and hated come flooding back to me....as this author would say "like a tsunami".  First off..you listed a whole slew of beta readers thanking them....what are you thanking them for?  Is it because no one told you the pacing of this book is excruciating?  The "I hate you no I love you no I hate you" format was ridiculous.  The hero Bass Cole cried more than Joe Gorga from The Real Housewives of New Jersey and then he's dead so I'll get engaged plot line was diabolical.  Bass, Emma and Carter should be on anti depressants, they are most lackluster threesome, because I chose not to read the other books in this series that pertained to other people featured in this series makes me do a dance of joy because I didn't have to read another 8 books only to learn that I should hate all of the rest of this motley crew of characters.  There were several Rut Ro moments for me because of some similarities to the This Man Trilogy.  Give your editors and beta readers a crash course on prepositions, when to use I or me and assorted other middle school English techniques.  To it's credit, this book is better than Benadryl, I fell asleep twice while reading it.  I also believe future purchasers of this book should know this book ends at the 76% mark.