Review: HOT Short Story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 26, 2013
What a great short story! I have to say, I was quite upset that it was so short. When I was given the ARC, thanks Elena and Malfunction Erotica, I had no idea the length of it or really what it was about. So, I decided to take it on the plane with me to read on my way to Boston from Los Angeles. I had about five to six hours to kill.I laugh now just thinking about it because as soon as the plane took off and I could power up my iPad, I dug in and began reading. It didn't take long at all before I had the book finished and when it got to the last page, I thought my iPad was broken or the whole story didn't load. I was so upset there wasn't more I almost cried. Now let me tell you why ...The story was that good. It was from  a man's point of view and a good man at that. However, his crazy wife cheated on him and was going to try and take him for all he had. Well, he was much smarter than that but so hurt that he wanted nothing to do with women and feelings ever again. Then this hot little Latin momma walks into his store for an interview and BAM! He's hot all over her. It's a push and pull with him. I want her but don't want the relationship but don't want her to be with anyone else.Then they finally get together and I really shouldn't have been reading that in public never mind on a plane. It was sexy hotness and smutty goodness. Um, yeah, I'll never look at a store the same way again. Next time I put my food on the conveyor belt, I'll be thinking of Ardor.Great little story with so much packed in it. Ms. Reyes did a wonderful job and I'm so glad I got to be a part of this. Congrats, Elena!