Review: Interesting premiss, needs some polishing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2014
I'm wavering between two and three stars for this one. I like the premiss for the plot. I feel the plot has fairly good flow and parts have decent descriptions. I believe the author has the potential for much better works as the learning process helps develop the skills necessary for a great read. This isn't a terrible start but it's not a great start. The book needs editing and the characters could use more fleshing out. I received an evaluation copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. No compensation has been or will be received beyond that evaluation copy.