Review: Didn't live up to its potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2014
The story is good, the plot intriguing...the author creates a lot of tension, and a nasty villain..but nothing comes of it. As soon as the plot starts getting interesting, she ends the story. There is no confrontation, and all of the tension is irrelevant, really. This story could have twenty pages, honestly. it's unfortunate, because it is written well, but it really didn't have a point. It ends before the climax of the story, essentially.