Review: who says modern women move fast?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2010
I think this started out well and was well written.  It lost me on how fast the female agreed to their plan.  All I got was how attractive these two were.  Other than sexual there seem to be a lack of chemistry--it was just sex.  I just think they move too fast and if they wanted to keep things quiet, the three should have waited to have sex after they got back to the ranch.  As for the little suspense added about the female being afraid of her previous employer's son coming after her, well the man was not going to follow this woman because he was disowned.  This was back in the day and it wasn't like the son could hop on a plane, train, or greyhound--he should've been broke, anyway.