Review: Not enough to make me come back for more
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2014
This story had excellent editing and technique, but it just didn't have the story line to go with it. My suggestion to the writer; Make the whole series into one book. Teasers don't cut it, and if anything, they discourage readers.At least if I had obtained this story in a full length novel, I might have been able to get far enough into to it actually appreciate it.