Review: good tie up of the story, writing still too amature
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2013
I was hoping that after over a dozen books under their belts, the Morse sisters would have mastered the art of writing at least to a respectable level.I was  unfortunately disappointed in that regard.  The villains, I think spent too much time watching Austin Powers movies.These two have what I believe is a talent for story telling, however they need to expand their grammar and, for Gods sake more editing.The run on sentences and the redundant wording could use a good editor.Please, please, please go take some proper courses on writing, or at least just read more of other authors works to get a better grasp on the inner workings of writing 101That being said, there is much promise for these two