Review: Three stars for writing.. story.. well...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 1, 2013
Hmmm, 2 or 3 stars?  Ok I give this story 3 stars because it was actually an interesting premise and the writing wasn't bad.  However I agree with the other reviews.. the ending was... lazy.  So not a bad short story but an ending that he writers of Lost would be proud of.