Review: Everything happened way 2 quickly...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 13, 2013
This story was a 2.5. It was extremely short and things moved quicker than I think they should have or even remotely possible (even in the world of fiction) and to be honest the ending wasn't even remotely plausible ( in my humble opinion). Saying all that it really wasn't bad it was just lacking. The author has definite talent. If the author rewrote the story making it a novel or novella even i would read it. As it stands now it has no meat to it and even the bread is flimsy at best. Sorry but I'm hungry! Spoiler Alert..........okay, I usually don't do spoilers but I couldn't leave this alone........the hero talked to heroine like three times? Twice very short hallway type meetings and then a couple hours over dinner and when he walks in with her and his sister (who he works with daily)fighting on the floor with a gun he doesn't run up to sister and check on her and he isn't the least bit suspicious of heroine who he hardly knows? It was just that type of stuff and then hero basically gives lecture to sister while at same time saying he would make sure she wouldn't face criminal charges. She would need to try and make restitution for her many crimes. What? The heroine thinks he is letting his sister off to easy but then that train of thought totally disappears when hero checks to make sure she is okay? Wtf? Ugh, come on the title of the book is passionate vengeance but it is without passion and vengeance. She lets it all go in a sec her father losing his business and basic will to live, and her last several years spent working towards vengeance? Doesn't make much sense that she can flip that switch so quickly, but then maybe I'm just an unforgiving grudge holder because even if I came around it would take more than a minute or two. ;)