Review: Cute, but so unbelievable. lol
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 29, 2011
The premise of the story was cute.  A little boy asks a soldier to give Santa a note asking for a daddy for Christmas.  The soldier reads the note, looks at the mom, and decides to make the little boy's Christmas wish come true.  As I said, cute intro for a story, however, the rest of the story just happened too fast.  Within 2 days the female protagonist is packing up her bags and moving herself and her son into this perfect stranger's home.  The characters weren't really fleshed out well, they could have used a little more depth and complexity.  I think the author tried to rush the events in the story along because it was short.  It probably would have been more believable if she had written the lovers had known each other prior to the beginning of the story.  Maybe if that were the case the story would have seemed more authentic instead of just rushed.