Review: A sweet but shallow little treat
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 23, 2014
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.Rating: 6/10PROS:- The sex is hot, and there’s not much here besides sex.- Leland’s redemptive scene is sweet (if not entirely convincing for me).CON:- Leland’s actions are rather egotistical, which caused me to form the opinion that he was a jerk right at the start of the story. The author does *try* to redeem him later on, but 248 Kindle locations simply wasn’t enough to convince me that my initial impression of his jerkiness was wrong.Overall comments: There’s not enough in a story this short to make me believe in a Happily Ever After. That said, this is one of the least angsty short stories I’ve read lately in this genre, so if you like shorter works, this one might be a good choice for you.