Review: What Is This????
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2014
This is less than a short story. It may be an introduction to a series, but it is at best a commercial tease. That it was represented as a novel or even a novella is misleading. There's nothing here. If I write one more sentence my review may be longer than the "book". It certainly took longer for me to write the review than than it took to write this piece of fiction and I undoubtedly put more thought into it. Scene One: young Amish man in barn milking cow, somewhat resentful to be a "charity case" and has to help the women. Scene Two: gawking at town's prettiest girl at the "sing". Asks his friend to invite her to buggy ride home. She says "yes". Scene Three: on said buggy ride he awkwardly backs into a marriage proposal. She says "yes". THE END