Review: Good story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2012
Interesting short story.  I like the story line but in some places I had to remind myself that its a work of fiction.  There are some things that would not happen realistically-speaking.  'Suspension of reality' is how another reviewer put it.  I don't want to say too much as it would give the story away.  I liked the main characters and I wish this was a longer story.  Oh, and the ending could have been better.