Review: Could Have Been, Should Have Been...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 7, 2013
This is a typical story about people trying to survive the zombie apocalypse.  The setting is the English countryside and the focus is the fates of various engaging characters.  The author has talent and this could have been...no, should have been a good book. But it is not.  At least, not if a reader is bothered by misspellings, atrocious grammar, and word usage so peculiar that the reader must reread sentences to try to figure out their meanings.Misspellings: "...he was being looked after by a notorious drug barren..."; "He was cut short by a voice he so desperately wanted to here."Grammar: "...he...selfishly opened the can and drunk it...";  "...a handful of prisoners had chose to stay behind..."; "They had drove around their town for a while..."Peculiar word usage: "...the prisoners retreated, which forced Jamie and Janine to breathe a blow of abatement as they began to run...";  "she glared at the full bloomed, condensed, suffocating trees, and could see nothing but outstretched branches.";  "He... left the Stile Cop beauty spot with vamoose."Perhaps the sequel will be better written.