Review: New York Climax - anticlimatic
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 2, 2013
Well, the story was well written and grammatically correct. And it was free on Amazon. It was a quick read, both literally and mentally.The story ended on a cliffhanger. I think the tension was almost nonexistent in the sexual situations because the scenes are interspersed with exposition. The scenes were unrealistic, and I wish more had been shown than told. A few things I wish had been deleted were the questions, the repetition, and the adjectives.I did not enjoy this story, but it was compelling enough that I was able to read the whole thing.