Review: There is some great potential here!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2014
I always have a tougher time reviewing short stories because (much like many of the authors) I can't help but want to know what happens next. This story in particular left me feeling that way. As I read the first half, it felt disjointed and clipped. Then, as I began to realize why it felt that way (and REALLY start enjoying it) it ended. There is a lot more of this story to tell, and it has some great potential. I hope I get to read more of it at some point, because the premise is pretty damn cool.