Review: Interesting story, but the grammar is so bad that I couldn't finish it.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2013
I was drawn in by the story early on - enough to purchase the book - but it just got worse the further I got into the book.  I'm no English major, but I just couldn't stand it any longer.To Mr. Cohen:  Please learn the difference between me and I.  And when to use commas and semicolons - towards the end of the book it just looked as if they were dropped in at random.Using a proofreader and/or an editor would help this book immensely.