Review: Hot and Sexy
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2014
Natron not only has a love for football but playing kinky games, and he finds his perfect little girl submissive in Carmen, an artist he hires to do his portrait. The intimacy and connection they immediately find in one another is palpable and hot. I did not like that he took his fury and frustration on her with a belt to her backside once, which was a bad and irresponsible Dom move, and this was never mentioned again. He had no remorse and there was no conversation about it. In RL, even if he's a sadist, a Daddy Dom ultimately loves to care for his little girl and considers her more precious than anything, so it just seemed out of step for both of them that nothing emerged from this incident to either bind them closer or cause a tear in their relationship. Their communication about scenes and internal issues was sparse throughout.The sex and BDSM scenes sizzled on the page, mmm, very sexy, and I liked that life circumstances interfered with their happiness and that they had to work to fit their dynamic into life and romance in general. It added a good amount of dimension to the story  If the third person had been more subjective and through the heads of the MCs rather than a distant narrator's, I think it would've allowed readers to get a more intimate glance into the deeper feelings that emerge in a real Daddy Dom/babygirl lifestyle, or even just regular D/s. For instance, a babygirl's anticipation and excitement for all things Daddy, not just erotic pleasures he can give, but guidance, help with growth, discipline, special treats, authority, nurturing in and out of bed, and more was not ever truly developed or expressed in a visceral way. I felt that the natural dependency development and submissive inclination that should be there in the mind and heart of a babygirl wasn't ever shown because the introspection was not detailed or intimate enough to see that transformation.I enjoyed this story overall though, so that's why I gave it five stars. I loved that is was interracial and that it incorporated the frustration an athlete would feel when their whole future and livelihood is threatened by an injury. That felt very real and intertwined brilliantly with the romance and made his connection with Carmen deeper overall, in that he was able to see her as a counterpart and solid partner in life and not just a hot little plaything he can get kinky with in bed. This had an equal amount of spice and plot content, and I would say, it's a good introduction to this specific D/s dynamic. The way it's written with care makes it not too icky or weird for people unfamiliar with it.