Review: Interesting!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 25, 2014
I thought the premise of the story was very interesting.  The healing powers through the flames was definitely not what I was expecting and nothing I had ever read about before.  Original!  However, the story was a bit difficult to follow.  New people/names were introduced and I had no idea who they were or how they related to the story.  Although the grammar and spelling were good, I thought the narrative was a little awkward.  "I did this.  She did that. I did the other" - it is difficult to follow someone's thoughts when little scenery or context is introduced.  Overall though, I thought it was a good attempt!