Review: very short, pleasant, holes in plot
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2012
This is quite short.  I get lulled into thinking I'm buying novels for 99 cents, which is true for many, and then I find that I've bought something much shorter.  I do think Amazon should label these short works much more clearly, as it's easy to forget after awhile to scroll down and check the size.Others have outlined the plot, and I don't like to write spoilers, so I'll agree that it is entertaining, with a couple of giant holes in the plot.  Also the motivation of the heroine is inconsistent.I'll probably buy her other 99 cent works, now that I know what I'm getting.