Review: not a western but good western romance
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 18, 2013
Characters are superb. Writing has strong screenplay traits-- jumps around, with gaps in story, and  unneeded flashbacks.  Characters are superb.  (worth repeating)  Anomalies in background--how does low paid single mother get a nice house that her son does not live in? How can Ring make a profit on mustangs he trains if he and his two employees live in hotel and keep horses at livery bard corral.  the story does not hang together as well as the characters and dialogue deserve.Audience of romance readers can ignore the minor flaws that annoy readers of western novels.