Review: Good Read!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2013
This was a good short story.  I would have rated it higher except it really felt like the author rushed through the meat of the story to keep it short.  I would have liked more interaction between the secondary characters to really get an idea of why there was so much tension.  The h's back story needed more development.  I did feel the attraction between the H/h but I did not completely buy that the h was the "one" by the way the H acted.Could have probably used 3 more chapters to help this out.  Must have been good because I wanted more.