Review: Pretty good read but needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2013
Overall I liked the both books in the series but they definitely needs editing as there are numerous misspelling, wrong usage of words and way too many exclamation points. Exclamation points have their purpose but they lose their meaning if used as frequently as the author does in these books.I liked the characters and the female characters were all strong and self sufficient which is always a plus to me as I can't stand weak characters, especially feminine ones. At times the characters didn't seem to act or react in a way that seemed real but overall they were likeable and believable. I was bothered that several of the key characters seemed to fade away by the end of the book and never really returned. I assume they will reappear in book 3 but it seemed like the author forgot about them or split the book down the middle and used the other half as book three.I don't want to sound too critical as the author has potential and writing skill but he definitely needs to fine tune things a bit. The book had a steady pace and I didn't feel lost or bored reading it but I would like to see the author really look at punctuation, editing, etc in the next book as that can sometimes make or break a book and I would hate to see a potential talent like his go down the drain. I would probably have given the book 4 stars but for the numerous typos, grammatical errors and excessive use of exclamation points.