Review: The case of the surplus apostrophes
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2013
Plot -- pretty good.  Characterization -- not bad.  Punctuation -- distracting.  The author throws in apostrophes when plurals are intended, moves the apostrophes back in such a way as to turn plural possessives into singular possessives, and thus constantly pulls a person out of the necessary "reader's trance" necessary for enjoying a book.