Review: getting better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2014
I continued the series because I was between books at the time and I was already familiar if not disappointed with the previous books. But, I could tell the author was getting better with every book he wrote in this series so I gave it another chance.One of the first things I noticed about this book was that I was probably not the target audience , in that me , a 45 yr old male reader who has read books nonstop since the age of 15 was not the intended reader (maybe). I would recommend this series to the young male reader who absolutely loves action , (15-25).  Or perhaps , new book enthusiast .I feel that the author took to heart the criticism he received from the previous books and improved the story greatly. There are , however , still a few criticisms I would like to mention.  The one I found the most obvious was the use of the "All is lost moment". You know , the moment in the book that everything seems to come to a head and the hero seems to be lost forever with no way out  before something happens , accidental or through friends or great skill the hero some how gets out of the predicament.  Well , the "All is lost moment " seems to be 95% of the book , and the rest is just an afterthought . Which is better than the previous excerpts in this series where 100% was the all is lost moment. The other criticisms are simply editing problems (not as bad as other books from kindle).Unlike the previous reviews I wrote on this series , I would recommend this to series to young readers who love action , males 15-25 , or people who still think they are in that category .Improved greatly.