Review: Not Quite What I Expected
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2013
While I love a good cowboy story, it needs to be more than descriptions of sex to BE a story. This one just doesn't make it there. There is a story but it's mostly one of sudden happenings. It was has to find a thread that tied it all together. I did not get a real feel for either Chaz or Peter. Somehow, they just remained a vague image and never became real. The story reads like a first attempt, not like a skilled author.