Review: Seemed Forced and Rushed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2012
I read "Ice Princess" because I wanted to see where it was going to pick up and go from the ending of "Wanted."  Again, it felt rushed and choppy, even though one gets the gist of where the story line is going.  I figured the Ice Princess was going to end up being Tanya, however, there really was no story line as to how and why she was being called the Ice Princess.  There wasn't much of a backstory to build that character change in her.The parts of the story involving Sarah and her sister doesn't add anything to the entire story itself, other than we know Sarah is a bounty hunter and her sister was another whore.  Leaving their relationship out of the story wouldn't have changed the end effect.  I felt it, and a lot more, was just filler for the story line itself.  The entire story seemed as though it was quickly written, with quick action scenarios being presented in several paragraphs without building to a climax of exciting and intense completion.  It was like;  "Okay, that part is done, let's move on."This second book was no better in editing than the first one.  Again, the author needs an editor, or he needs to conduct his own proof reading if he continues with his writing.  I'll read another novel by this author, just to give him the opportunity to self-evaluate and learn from these reviews. However, three strikes and he'll be out of my author's list.