Review: More a Twister!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2012
Well, I couldn't read the first one without reading the trilogy. Tori,the middle McKenzie, is this novels female. Like the first book, I wanted to like it...but I couldn't. I couldn't because it was the same book. There was the rich guy, the girl from the wrong  side of the tracks, and a father with flaws and irritation between the father and son. The author was even wrong about the setting. Please tell me where, within an hour of Beaumont, Texas, there are rolling hills,wide expansive cattle and horse ranches. That scenery would be more of the hill country of Texas, but it doesn't exist in Southeast Texas. Mesquite trees grown in west Texas. The author didn't do her homework on this setting. My other problem was the incessant wordiness. The book could have had half the words and still made the story readable. What would take any other author a page to describe a feeling, a place, a person....take this author a chapter or more. This couple, like the first book, are in and out of love more than necessary. I did enjoy the banter between Tori and Matt. Tori is a little feisty. I doubt that I will read any more by this author if I find the third novel about Tara has the same storyline. I am a chapter or two into it and so far so good.