Review: nice interaction with characters
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2013
Nicely written. Only a very few grammatical errors. Interesting story that kept you involved. Many p&p variations often tend to have me turning through all the rhetoric searching for more dialogue between the characters. This author succeeded in keeping my attention.  A few new characters were nearly a stretch but the story was written well enough to support.