Review: Amature writing and horrible editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2013
This story line has been done before but I think I still would have liked it,,,,,,,,,,,, if the author tried a little hard to make the story better. If I had to guess then this was probly the first book she has ever written and didn't put alot of effort in.The editing was even worse. There was letters missing and misspelled words. Comas were always in the wrong place or not in the correct place. Quotation marks around the wrong sentences and again missing from the correct sentences.She also had a really bad habit of jumping between characters. She would be writing from Kenna's point of view and the next thing you know your reading from Wyatt's point of view but you don't realize it until half way down the page.The charcters didn't seem real either. They don't talk like normal people talk, almost like non-actors reading from a script. And when the characters are talking they continually repeat the others name which gets super annoying.A big waste of time!!!