Review: Has good start, but...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 2, 2013
Okay, I am mad, but at least it didn't cost me any money this time. Just read this freebie book, thankful for that. The plot was interesting but I wanted to see how she was going to spin. The writing is good, very few typo errors, the plot was understandable, but the dialogue is what made me mad. Wow... a deceitful woman hates her grown decent daughter, because she's (the mother) an awful person and the love interest in the story is stupid too. I was getting to the end thinking "It's going to get better, it's got to get better... aw-man!, it's not going to get better... and damn, how in the Sam Hill did it just get worse?" But guess what... it did get worse. Can a guy be a hero if he plans to seduce and break the heart of a teenager (his 19 yrs. old step-daughter) to get back at his cheating and soon-to-be ex-wife; the same teen he nurses back to health after he knows she's been sodomized against her will?Okay, this story had a great start, but what annoyed me once again were the confusing emotional contradictions. The tone of the book changes. As the reader you get that the wife is a selfish bitch, even to her own flesh and blood... she hates her kid, calls her a brat, allowed her to get sodomized, didn't want to claim her as a child, tried to abort her, dumped her on the grandmother to raise as an infant, and plots her own mother's (the grand mother) demise. Remember, The mother hates her kid, but, then she's worried about her heart getting broken by her soon to be ex-husband? That makes no sense. Come on!  Oh, and the supposedly Good-Guy STILL wants to seduce and break the heart of the teen daughter only to hurt her mother (remember, she doesn't even care about her kid) , keep in mind he knows the girl was raped and is figuring on how long he has to wait to let her heal in order to seduce her. How is he conceivably the hero of the story?! I was like... omg, really??This WAS a good story, but that part that kept popping up throughout the book was annoying as hell.This ruined the story for me... the typos I can deal with, but misplaced emotions and concerns irk me to no end. Hopefully the next book will be more focused and less confusing or have a little more concept of social norms and normal emotional reactions.The author should have made the mother more caring toward her daughter, then her husband's revenge would have been believable. I'm mad cause... I'm not stupid, but the plot IS.