Review: damn!!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 11 10, 2013
I'm sitting here peacefully reading along - really getting into the story & dam it ended!!  I was not expecting that at all. This story ended way ....way too soon.  The writing had my attention - my full attention !  The last time this happened I was watching the hobbit movie, not realizing it is a trilogy, I was severely pissed.  Just sat for several hours only to see an eyeball open up and knew I'd been had!Ok Eliza you need to revisit this storyline and develope it more fully.