Review: Not so sure about this book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2013
I liked the story but did not like how it was told. First, the story was written in the present tense which makes no sense to me. If it's a story, doesn't that means it has already happened so shouldn't it be told in past tense? Secondly, the romance between Devin and Gabby moved super fast. He made her his girl the first night they met and they consummated their relationship on their first date - the second meeting. Furthermore, the author had an annoying way of commenting on the actions of the characters, for instance, he wrote "that was a boss player move." REALLY?The story reads choppy in some places and some of the dialogue sounded juvenile and corny. I did enjoy the twist in the storyline. The series has potential but not so sure I will be reading book 2. The author's literary style was kind of irksome.