Review: Two Very overweight detectives solve a good friend's murder.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2014
I would give this story one half a star if I could have done so!!! The two very overweight detectives had three BIG meals a day and described each meal completely, and their snacks in between the meals. It seemed to me the story was about the consumption of food rather than finding the murderer of their Mentor and long time friend! To me this story drags so slow I almost stopped reading it several times. Also they did not proof read this story very well. Many typing mistakes. Also Mr. Demaree used entirely too many conjunctions. Such as I've instead of I have. Many made the reading difficult. The plot was interesting but not enough plot and too much eating!!!  My apologies to The Author.Sylvia in Sugar Hill