Review: Ral's Woman
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 19, 2012
I did not think the story or the erotica was that good. Not that it was horrible just not that good. At first Ral kinda came off as a "me Tarzan" sort of male. Nice looking, but controlled by his male parts. That did change as the book went on. I just did not think the book had much of a story to it. Since there was no story I expected the erotica to be better. However only being a 100 pages is why the story wasn't great. If she had made it longer and added more to the story it would have been a better book. However with a book that is from Ellora's Cave and around a hundred pages or less you can't expect too much even though they charge you like you should.