Review: The premise was okay, but l wanted more backstory with the characters
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2013
The premise of the story was okay. That said there were a lot of grammatical errors and it was frustrating too read! I felt the overall story lacking I needed to know more about Toni's and Ben's pasts and more about Hades. The relationship between Ben and Toni went at warp speed- to me they needed to slow down. I did understand their connection, but I wanted more interaction between the two. I didn't like how she would black out that was frustrating I mean she already knew what Ben was there was no need for memory loss! I do see that probably most of what was left unanswered will be taken care of in the next books. I'm on the fence about continuing the series, though I do want to know what happens with Toni and Ben and what was up with Kevin. I did like the magical and mythological components of the story.