Review: Made No Sense......
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2014
So many unanswered questions.  This is the story of Emmy(h) and J.(H).  J. is a member of the Sons of Steel MC.  He has just been released from probation.  He is celebrating at a bar with his MC bros and spots Emmy.  Emmy is at the bar because she is rebelling against her fiancé Robert. Emmy has known Robert for 6 months.  In those months he has made her quit college, dump her friends, and controls her every step.  He tells her she is fat and stupid repeatedly.  He is hugely wealthy.  She is not.  It is implied that he is having an affair.  He is rarely home, but when he is he wants her there.  Why?  He does not seem to even like her but yet he wants to marry her and refuses to let her go?  This makes no sense. Of course he is right.  She is stupid, TSTL!  I could not stand her.  J. sees her in the bar and is instantly smitten.  Emmy leaves Robert after he rapes her and instantly runs to J. at the MC clubhouse.  Yes, she runs to a guy she has known for 2 days to protect her.  That sure isn't expecting much from someone you just met.  That made no sense.  The Club is having a party that night.  They are expecting the Storm MC as guests.  They are passing through on their way to a Meet in Maine.  The Storm MC shows up and eventually a fight breaks out between J. and another Storm MC member because he objects to J., who is black, dating a white woman.  Seriously, these guys are guests and they are going to make a stink over an interracial couple.  What century am I in?  Later, after J. and Emmy leave the party, we are told, not shown,  that the remaining 5 Sons of Steel MC had an all out brawl with the 23 Storm MC members to defend J's honor.  Those 5 guys would have been dead.  Again, this made no sense.  The whole Sons of Steel MC made no sense.  Were they a 1%er club?  We are not told.  If they are not a 1%er club then why are they playing hosts to a 1%er club.  Why did the Storm MC have to ask permission to go through the Sons of Steel MC's territory?  Teach, the head of the Sons of Steel used to teach at the prison that J. was in.  I do not think a prison would hire a member of a 1%er MC club.  Once again this made no sense.  A few days later Emmy and J. are staying at a B&B; and out of nowhere J. is arrested for kidnapping Emmy.  Emmy is right there while he is being arrested and does not utter a word of objection.  WTF?  All she had to do is say "Hey.  Stop.  He did not kidnap me".  But where would the fun be in that?  That would be waaay to simple.I could keep on going and going.  This book was truly awful.  Emmy is a pathetic and unlikeable character.  The romance was boring.  The sex was boring.  The story was unbelievable and....boring.  The MC was laughable and....you guessed it...boring.  I also must mention, as a previous reviewer pointed out, that the Outlaw MC was mentioned in this book.  I do not know if this author had permission from the real life Outlaws to use their name, but if she did not then she should take their name out.  If they did give her their permission to use their name then they must be cringing right now knowing their name is associated with such a horrid book.  This book was a loaner.  I am grateful I did not have to pay for it.  No, I would never, under any circumstances, recommend this book.