Review: I didn't believe it.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 26, 2013
I didn't like this story and the reason was plain and simple, I did not believe anything at all about the heroine, I found her character to be very contradictory. She is described as this nice girl who goes to church, she doesn't like swearing, she won't wear clothes that show her cleavage, because she's not 'that kind of girl' and she gets really upset after kissing someone and becoming the 'rebound whore.' And then she is this girl who makes out in dark corners and has sex with her boyfriend when she is what sixteen? I know people who go to church have sex, but what I didn't believe is that she is described as this goody-two shoes who is horrified at the thought of taking a boy into her bedroom, but yet she will sleep with her boyfriend? I'm sorry but that doesn't make sense to me at all. If you are going to write a character please be consistent.