Review: a lot of tell not show
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2014
I love romance novels, I love football players, and I love settings that are real. I didn't love this book. There was a lot of potential but I wasn't wrapped up in the story - there was way too much telling and not a lot of showing. The dialogue was immature surrounded by a lot of wordy paragraphs. When I read the authors bio and found out that she has been married for 18 years I was shocked - this story seemed to have been written by a teen. The way the characters spoke to each other and Destiny and Troy's relationship was very teen, not college-aged at all. I finished the story but was quickly skimming most up it by 62%. This is just my opinion so read it for yourself. I would to pay for it though.