Review: Interesting idea,  but not enough character building
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2013
This was a free download.  I felt that the ideas/plot was fresh and original but the way it was written was confusing and it got a bit too bogged down for me.  In the end,  I didn't care about the outcome and even though it was short,  I didn't finish it.  Good concept but the execution could have been better.