Review: A bit chaotic
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 30, 2013
The story started ok but then its pretty all over the place. The characters And emotions are strong enough to picture and relate to. However ,  the story is messy with not much depth on building the story as a whole, well. It could be better and if the authir could take more time to develop the story, enhance the scenes and just describe everything in a better pace.Some part of this book are good, and other times it just described in rush. I have no clear picture of what exactly happened.Overall it's seem like a rough draft and unfinished story to me. Not bad just should have been better