Review: Intriguing but shoddy formatting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2013
The formatting on this book is awful. Paragraphs bleeding together and everything scrunched up makes it hard to follow. I put it down twice and nearly deleted it from my kindle in sheer irritation. However, I gave it a chance.I like her main character. She's clever and real and I'm rooting for her to grow. Her best friend is inconsistent and shallow, and could be mostly edited out without affecting the storyline.The pacing of the book and the plot are interesting and oftentimes fascinating. It ends in an abrupt fashion with no clear resolution, which annoys me as I am intrigued enough at the premise to see the plot through but irritated enough by poor editing and the terrible formatting to hesitate to purchase the second book.