Review: OK
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2014
I don't like to say negative things about writers, but this story was lacking in plot, the characters were unbelievable and their actions not credible.  I am sorry to say it was a probably  OK to fill in some time, but not something I would read again. The premise had promise, but it didn't develop into anything. The publisher might like to note that there were a number of errors, missing words, misspelled words and things that looked like this was a second draft, not one that had been finally edited. Perhaps that can be fixed.