Review: okay story, but a bit too cutesy
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2012
This book  is the first in a series, and uses the technique of parallel stories - one presented as the "real" time story of the protagonist and one presented as her romance novel.  It's a bit cutesy for adult fiction, and I kept feeling that she could have used a good editor to punch up the story a bit.  However, I read this one for free and then bought the remaining two books in the series as well as her novel about a mail order bride, so, to be honest, I wasn't so terrifically put off by the technique that I immediately deleted the book!  I prefer romances to do more implying of sexual scenes, and this one fit my needs.  OVerall, not a bad book, and one that gives an afternoon's pleasant reading.