Review: It felt like big chunks were missing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 22, 2010
I think my only real issue with this story was the length. I love the friends-to-lovers genre, and I loved the buildup to the trip and the first night there. I wish we'd gotten more about what happened while they were there, or even a little "welcome home" nookie when they got home, lol. But what was there was smexy. I liked the chemistry. I just wanted more. It was over and I'm thinking, "Wait... but what now?" I just felt like part of the story was left out.