Review: Needs Work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 4, 2012
The story plot is a good update to the future of the the Roman Empire and the Praetorian Guards. However the consistent errors in syntax, misspelled words and misuse of their/there, where/were and your/you're are inexcusable in this day of grammar checkers in word processing programs. It also helps if the author has basic english grammer rules and spelling knowledge because grammer checkers are not always correct.The characters are well developed. I enjoyed the story except in two areas that I suspect were ghost written or written by someone about 14 years old. In those areas, the voice changed to that of someone immature. Overall, if you can put up with the spelling and grammer errors, the story is a rollicking good science fiction yarn.