Review: Very good story, but.....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
I really liked this story. The characters were so real and believable. The author did a great job with taking you on this roller coaster ride of emotions with the couples in this story. Like most stories I've read in the past, I have my favorite characters. I loved Brandi and Stacy. I loved how when Brandi was at the end of her rope, she hung on. Her character makes you just want to take her in your arms and hug her. Stacy was the true definition of a strong woman. I loved her attitude. She had her goals and beliefs and she didn't bend for no one. I liked Jason too because he was a really good guy, but even some of his behavior disappointed me. With saying that, I totally understand why he was doing some of the things he did after finding out. I hated the decision he made in the end. Kenneth and Malik were pretty decent guys as well. Trae, Lena and Vanessa, those three could rot in hell for all I care. All three were selfish and uncaring people who did things that for me were unforgivable. Now, the reason I gave the story 3 stars is because of the grammar errors and misspelled words. It took longer to read because at times, I had to go back and read sentences that were so badly written that I didn't understand the first time. I mean, you spelled San Diego as Sandi ego. Not sure if you meant to do it that way as a joke, but it makes you seem like a very uneducated author. I know that's not the case because the story was wonderful. If there is going to be a second book, I'll definitely be reading it. Hopefully you'll have a better editor.