Review: Hot, sweet, but a little too long in all the wrong spots
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 02 12, 2012
I'm not sure if it's a 4 or a 5 star book but I decided on five (I am not known for my generous nature) as it's a re-read for sure. A definite keeper and one i will recommend. I would rank it as similar to Rough Canvas by Joey Hill which was a book that I loved.Good emotional development, nice characters and great scenes. My only beef-- which was actually really irritating-- was the amount of time given to back story and subplot.Our two subs did not meet their new dom until 15% of the way into the book. That is WAY too long. I was skimming and bored until that point. We are waiting for them to meet. And waiting...and waiting. Their back story contributed nothing to the story (they're happy. They got together easily and are happy. I get it!)In the middle is another homage to subplot. 5% of the book spent on a conflict that while good was way too long. If 15% of the book had been cut out I would have considered this book perfect.