Review: Great plot, writing style not so much...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 6, 2013
This story took too much time to get going, but once it did it was a really good plot.  In the hands of the right author, this could have been a blockbuster.This author's writing style was not to my liking.  I know Kindle books often have a lot of typos and wrong word usage, and this book was no exception.  But that was minor compared to the actual writing style.  I will call it stream of consciousness for lack of a better term.  There were numerous sentences strung together, one after another.  A character's thought processes would just be dumped out, no punctuation or anything to guide you.  Sometimes the scene and characters would change completely with only a new paragraph to tip you off.I made it through the book, and I'm not sorry I read it.  The writing style frequently took my attention from the action, but the plot made this book worth the read.  I will call this a two-and-a-half star, but I won't be purchasing any more books by this author.