Review: For the price, it's ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 20, 2014
Author has promise. Hopefully he will promise his readers to buy an editor before he strikes again! Countless bad grammar, sentence structure, and basic vocabulary mistakes throughout this book. And, a lot of just downright implausible circumstances. I understand it's a work of fiction, but come on! For example, the main character and  his girlfriend managed to drive from the UNITED Center (not, as it is called in the book, the UNIFIED Center) to the Cleveland airport in 6 hours! That's almost impossible to do now, with clear roadways and speed limits of 70 mph! How they managed to do it in the book in that time is just amazing! Especially since just a few days before, they could only go 5-10 mph on those same roads on a sport motorcycle! Also, I'm still kind of confused about the names of the two opposing forces in this book. At first, the bad guys are "The Axiom" and the good guys are "The Union". However, numerous times throughout the book, the bad guys are referred to as Union! That's a BASIC STORY POINT! For Christ's sake, get it right, IT'S YOUR BOOK!!!! Here's another example: "He drove by all sorts of indiscreet buildings that were all uniformly draped by what appeared to be several inches of fresh snow." Do you know what indiscreet means? It means "not having or showing good judgement; revealing things that should not be revealed". How the heck does that apply to a building????