Review: white collar christmas
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2012
This was a well written piece that showed author voice and ability with dialogue and descriptive prose.A female FBI rookie is on assignment as undercover chauffeur for a forger.  Little does she know that the forger is on an undercover assignment of his own type.  As the plot was "outted" rather early, there was no mystery.  And while this was intended as a romance type, the rookies seemed unprofessional in breaking many agent code types related to personal contact with suspects.  Though, there could have been no romance then to develop for the story premise.  It just seemed like she would have failed the training with her allowing such contact with the criminal (on her own).  Perhaps there was some early directives from superiors - but the reader was never enlightened to such - making her actions seem a bit implausible, especially given her rookies status.Though, was good intro to author ability and I am interested in the full of the excerpt provided after the short.  Many will enjoy this short fast read and I recommend getting it while free and saving dollar to invest in longer work of this author.Christine