Review: Mixed bag
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2013
What a suspense-filled seat-edge, page-turner … until the end where an over-the-top ender turns it into a bit of a laugh. However, the giggles came after I finished the book; while reading, I was caught up in the action. Unfortunately, after the exciting rush, the book comes to an abruptt end and just dumps you off a cliff. I couldn't believe the let down.Most of the time this is a real mystery, but if really has too much romance to be a true mystery. Ugh. Mixed message.A lot of editing is needed, a lot. It seems like no one read this back through even once. The writer needs to study subject/verb agreement especially, with particular attention to the to be verb, elementary stuff really.I did enjoy the book, but I can't help but think how much better it could have been. I am beginning to think writers just don't care to be real authors anymore.