Review: Awful
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 9, 2012
This book started out pretty well, but went downhill quite quickly.Unfortunately, towards the end, it feels like someone has taken a poorly-written attempt at all-out urban fantasy and smooshed it with an erotic novel, leaving the reader with a confusing mish-mash.Tina is a virgin, who bids on a very hot, masked man at a charity auction, expecting him to finally 'deflower' her (Tina's word, not mine!)He bails on their date, but promises to turn up at her house (Tina has never told him where she lives). She somehow decides to trust him, lets him, and they try to have sex.This occurs a few times. They try to have sex, and they try, and they try. Then, about halfway through the book it emerges that Mitch can't have sex with her because if he does, she'll be Lucifer's slave.Yeah.Oh, and Tina has been psychic all along, which is fine. Then, conveniently, upon learning that Mitch sold his soul to Lucifer over a century before, a very convenient fact about Tina's past emerges that will be everyone's salvation.This book could have been brilliant, if the writing was tighter. I won't be reading the others in the series.