Review: The Storyline Had Promise...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2014
This book had promise, I thought the storyline sounded good, but in the end it fell a little flat for me.  There was a lot of describing what each person was thinking and doing, but not enough dialogue.  It made it difficult to have any feeling toward the characters.  I found myself doing a lot of skimming to get the idea of what was going on, while looking for some actual interaction between the characters. I did see this was the author's first digitally published book, maybe future books will improve.