Review: Great story idea but no...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2014
I didn’t enjoy this book. I'm glad that I only paid $0.88 for it. There was too many things wrong with it.The writing was weird. It's the grammar maybe? Using “I am” all the time instead of “I'm” made the language the characters were using so formal. Nobody talks like that. And the rest of the dialogue was too corny and unbelievable. The supposed sexy talk? "….gonna drop a load down your throat?" Oh please. If a guy said that to me I would either pull away in disgust or laugh in his face.The characters personalities changed so quickly I got whip lash. Melanie’s best friend Larissa went from best friend to b***h in a couple of pages. Kade went from Alpha bad boy to whipped puppy dog after one round of sex and don’t get me started on Melanie. The girl was so indecisive I wanted to shake her.I felt like I was reading a book from a first time author who didn’t have an editor.Great storyline idea, but so wasn’t executed well at all.