Review: Edit it, please!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 4, 2011
The premise is good.  Tattooing can be very intimate and if the tattoo artist is good-looking, your thoughts may well go in the erotic direction.The execution was lacking, most of it stuff that could be corrected with a through reading from somebody to smooth out the rough edges and fix the typos.  Many of the typos were of the type that would be caught by spellcheck, so it doesn't look as if any attention was paid in this area.One more thing:  My personal opinion is that there isn't much that is less sexy than having unprotected anal sex with somebody that you just met.  I understand that erotica contains a strong element of fantasy, but this just jarred me right out of the mood.  It's about the riskiest thing one can do, sexually.  I would have loved to have seen the author have them negotiate protection as part of this scene.  You'd never go to a tattoo artist who didn't bother to wear gloves (I hope), so why treat sex with a near-stranger any differently?