Review: nice sort. FIX the editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2014
The plot was ok a little soft in places and a few times too sappy. My major issue is the poor editing. Player get someone other than a friend to proof read these. There are sentences as that just miss words and you need to make them up to have it make sense. Ensure each sentence is written in the same tense. Often the flit between past and present. One other issue is keep the gender correct. One minute you are reading about him but her hands oars moving and wage isn't in the sentence. I  continue to read as I don't mind a sappy love story but it will frustrate me.