Review: Not a Bad Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2014
Not a bad story, but two things bothered me with this story. First, is the constant use of profanity. I'm not a fan of it and I think situational profanity can be used to heighten the tension of a scene, but not over and over again.The second thing that bothered me that even though this is a short story, it didn't have a clear cut ending. I felt cheated by not knowing what happened to the person in the story. Writing 101 says that you must have a clear ending or the readers feel cheated, as I do now.There was quite a bit of melodramatic description. I think it could've been toned down a tad bit and the story would flow better. There were a few typos, but that also happens in most books you see. Overall, not a bad story.