Review: Claimed
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 7, 2014
liked it. I went ahead and clicked the 2nd one. It's hot. It's got a great plot line. BUT there are quite a few mistakes and it needs a little bit of fixing throughout. There is some incorrect word usage, missing words, a sentence or two that just makes no sense, etc. It's not anything major or hugely widespread but when asking readers to pay $2.99 for part one of a 9 part serial- then those 60 some odd pages should damn well be perfect. These are not perfect, and I'm not sure I'm happy with that $2.99 for this book because of it. HOWEVER it still is good overall and I did buy the second. I must admit- I felt a heck of a lot better paying only 99c for book 2 though.I also LOVE Natalie's reaction during and after the press incident. I'd have broken down and cried a lot faster than she did!