Review: Interesting Premise, A Few Technical Issues
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2014
I did enjoy reading this short little story, however, there were a few technical issues which held it back from getting 5 or even 4 stars. My first complaint is the copious use of exclamation points. I've heard that a good book will only use a handful for the whole novel, but in Star Guild, I found as many as half a dozen on each page. I emailed the author about this, and he said he was looking into doing another edit. Besides that, the story itself was enjoyable. I wish the author would have included more backstory, as at times, I didn't really feel like I knew the characters well enough to get truly involved. Basically, with a little more editing, this could be a really enchanting read.