Review: Logic problems
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2014
Not bad writing but I have a few problems with the writer’s story logic and knowledge of childcare and medical issues.The brains of the survivor group is a seventeen year old.  Even after being rescued by an ex Navy Seal during the onset of the infection.  The same survivor is a single father that doesn’t seem to know anything about caring for his infant daughter.  The baby is a month old and the Navy Seal cared for the baby since his wife died yet seemed at a loss as to what to feed his infant daughter.In addition to the lack of child care knowledge one of the survivors ends up with two broken legs that end up being casted together….really??  Who did that?  The dumb Navy Seal?  Anyone with basic first aid knowledge knows this doesn’t happen.The adults including the ex-navy seal all look to a teen boy for all decision making.  That wouldn’t happen.  Military types would always want to be in charge.  Add that to another survivor that was a lawyer type….sorry.With all said and done, Navy Seals don’t let boys rule at the end of the world.  People writhe in pain from multiple broken bones…and babies drink formula and have dirty diapers.  The teen’s mother would have been more active in caring for the baby.  After all, she raised the “Great Hope of Zombie Land”Like I said.  Logic is a problem....