Review: Not sure I read the same book!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2013
I'm not sure I read the same book as the other two reviewers here. This book was a mess of spelling errors, and punctuation mistakes and that's just to start with! I have a problem when you have a character like Chloe who is supposed to be in an abusive relationship with someone even to the point of being raped and then not 2 hours later she is wanting to have sex with her college mentor who she knew from this sex club where he rescued her from a bad scene with said abusive boyfriend. There was so much going on in the start of this book that my head was spinning! I made it as far as 40% on my Kindle before I shut it down and requested my money back from Amazon. I like to take chances on new authors and especially ones who are trying to self publish but this author needs to find an editor or proofreader ASAP. Everyone seems to be jumping on the Fifty Shades of Grey bandwagon and unfortunately not all authors have the writing skills to pull it off. Sorry everyone it just wasn't that good!