Review: Good technology, decent story.  Where's the editor?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 18, 2013
I'll reprise the common gripe:  The editing is *terrible*!  I thought the author would have caught the hint after the first book's reviews, but that wasn't the case.  The plot is OK--single story line, but a lot of action--and I would have traded a battle scene for a bit more character development.  The view of technologies is innovative, with a number of though-provoking ideas (with the exception of quantum entwining of photons; sorry, can't buy that one).