Review: At least it was free
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 23, 2013
I have to say reading the reviews I was confused about what this was like. Unfortunately the people who mention poor grammar and writing were right. I thought the concept of the book sounded a lot better than it was. Honestly I won't be buying anymore of the books in the series. The starts and ends abruptly without any real scene development. I mean seriously abruptly. I felt like it ended in the middle of the scene. I guess that was to get you to buy the next couple of books in the series, which I certainly won't be buying. But I think that the thing that drove me the most nuts was the dialogue. Vincent speaks in incomplete sentences and almost broken english. It reminded me of the portrails of indians in the old western movies with awkward half english talking style. I found that to be horrible in this day and age. Although Tess wasn't far behind him in being unable to finish a thought or sentence.