Review: Interesting concept
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 25, 2013
I liked the concept, but much of the writing left me confused. Many times I felt as if parts of the story was 'missing', or a scene would 'jump' without knowing how you got to this section. An author needs to write from the readers perspective. Since I'm not in the writers head, I don't know their intent and don't get it when they don't fill in the gaps.  But I did like the story line, and the basic writing was well done.