Review: Sweet, but a bit annoying, too
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 10, 2013
Part of this is a sweet story, and part of this can be annoying. Zack's dementia concerning"telling" his son that he and Mark are in love is annoying, and mostly dragged out far too long. Zack's general insecurities start out as tender concern but go on for so long that I quit caring. The story needs the services of a good editor to reduce the verbal clutter and possible provide some focus and clarity.