Review: Silly mistake tarnishes my enjoyment
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 9, 2011
When a writer puts pen to paper... or fingers to keyboard... they are signing a pledge with the reader.  The story they are telling will be true to the universe within the story -- no matter how far fetched.  The story will be entertaining.  AND when you bring up something in the plot, you won't leave it unfinished....Libby Fay, when asked about her parents, replies, No one important.  And Rasyn makes a mental note to find out more later....Only he doesn't.WHY BRING IT UP IN THE FIRST PLACE?????????Cute story concept.  Good writing for the short space allowed.  Can forgive the font issues and lack of spacing between scenes because it's an ebook and they are plagued with those problems.  But HATE the sloppy plotting.  The Author let me down.Finish the story.  Or re-edit.  Please.