Review: Corny and cliche
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2013
I found it to be very corny, and you could definitely tell that he could read her mind way before he even told her. And he called himself an alien? He doesn't know what that means, and he has to have a name for his race, to him she is alien like he is an alien to her.There were numerous other corny parts, and the story itself felt a little flat, as well as rushed and short. As for the battle scene, I felt like it wasn't put together well, and the way that the villain thought swung back and forth a lot, and didn't make much sense.I would not recommend it, unless you prefer corny, short stories.