Review: The story needs work
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 5, 2014
The plot has potential but needs work.  The story did not flow well.  This felt like a rough draft that you would write in high school and only made the bare essential corrections on and left other errors.  I believe that this could be a cute book with some work.  I apologize for sounding harsh.  However, I would hang onto your money.