Review: Dissever (Unbinding Fate Book One)
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2013
I love sci-fi and have been reading it for over 50 years however I was dazed and confused for most of this book and I had to ask my self why ? It was basically well written, except for some typo's and sentence structure, that left one wondering who or which character was being referred to. It was during that last reference that I realized that it wasn't connected well, developed coherence that didn't leave one adrift when changing gears, so to speak. It's not that this isn't an interesting concept or fast paced at times, intriguing in the subterfuge or any of that, it's the glue holding it together is not consistent and a little too far  out there for its own good. Perhaps in the second book all of the problems will be resolved, as I see great promise for this author despite the trials and tribulations with the publisher that already happened, before I was able to receive a decent copy to review. I give the author A for effort and a 4 out of 5 on my scale due to the murkiness and typos etc. Great promise and I would add this to my library on the bet that within a short time we will have another monster in the sci-fi community amongst us.