Review: Good storytelling but in need of editor...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2013
3.5 starsLisa Miller is kidnapped from Earth by aliens. She’s distraught because her two young daughters have been left behind. One of the male aliens agrees to return with her to Earth to retrieve her children as long as she agrees to partner with him. He’s astounded to find Lisa’s two children are females since they’ve become rare in the Tornian Empire.The plot and storytelling is great in this book while the characters are interesting and engrossing. This book would have been a five star read for me, but it is in need of good edit. There are heaps of misused words, punctuation and grammar errors. I also had problems with the present tense, which was very awkward. This is a shame since the author is obviously a gifted storyteller.