Review: wanted to give it four or five stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 7, 2014
I enjoyed the story but couldn't get past all the proofreading errors. There were spelling and punctuation problems throughout and that detracts from the story. I'm glad it was free, and the story hooked me enough that I'll probably pay for the next part in hopes that the editing gets better. If not, I don't see myself finishing the series no matter how good the story gets.