Review: This could have been good.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2014
I liked the  plot/idea behind this story, it seemed like a new twist on things (which I'm always looking for). It could have been real good had it been edited. I don't mind a British author, and a British character can speak in dialect, however the story takes place in America, and all the characters were speaking in a way no American ever would! In addition, there were many grammatical errors. That being said, again, I really did like the story and believe it could have been 4 or 5 stars with this! (Also, I'm not really sure this book needed a sequel, but that's just me.)