Review: Good read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 28, 2013
Story was nice. Good characters. Good writing. It was a little long in my opinion. Too much inner dialogue. And, the writer slipped into using words and phrases that were too literary. For example, in a sex scene the characters are described as having 'paroxyms of feelings'. The word conflicted would have done nicely, and would have connected with readers better.