Review: Nice story but author needs an English class
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 10, 2013
Please, by 60% it was like touching a wound to read the word "had."  Why use the past tense to tell a story that is not in the past?  I don't know if it was my increasing awareness of the terrible grammar or if the author just lost interest in her own book, but by the final third I was cringing and skimming through it.  I will say it's impressive that someone with obviously no formal education in writing has put together an actual book.Take a class Marie you've got potential.