Review: Could have been better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2011
This book was disappointing to read because it had the potential to be great. The biggest let-down was the inconsistencies in the story. The 'voice' of Nisey & Kalinda changed in the latter part of the book. A year-long feud is fixed in an hour long conversation. A hate-filled Hillary suddenly stopped hating. Nisey started using high protocol before starting her training yet was ignorant about a safe-word. Nisey had been trained by a highly respected senior Dom for 1 year yet didn't know how to talk to other Doms. And who has parents that refer to their daughters boyfriend as her 'Master'?????? The whole book had weird inconsistencies like these which detracted from the story. Another annoyance for me was the amount of angst in the story. It was like reading a soap opera with kink.