Review: a caricature
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2014
I like M/M erotic stories with shifters just like the next man but by page two of this shortish erotic short story I wanted to throw my kindle against the wall; lucky for me I treasure my little reader too much, even when reading such nonsense.One of the lovers is obviously submissive, feeble, boyish and sex-starved while the other is all manly, big and alpha-dominant.The submissive is incredibly clumsy and so weak he is not able to fend for himself even though he is supposed to be a wolf-shifter.I would call him a werePUG much more than a wereWOLF but I think that even pugs must have more of a backbone.Finally, grammar is not all that good.