Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2013
The writing is just a mess. I hope the typos, bad punctuation, and bad grammar are supposed to be intentional, as if a 17-year-old stereotypical jock wrote the story. But it didn't work for me. I just found it annoying.In any case, there wasn't much story. What was there was OK, but definitely not enough to charge $0.99 for 14 pages.