Review: Kept me interested. Entertaining story!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2012
I debated on giving this story 4 or 5 stars.  In the end I chose 5 stars because really I couldn't think of anything I'd change about it.  It held my interest throughout, growingly so as the story went on.  I wanted to see what happened and how these three women's lives worked out.  The author did a great job of not making it too obvious.  I knew what I *wanted* to happen, but even up until the last couple of chapters, the author threw in twists and unexpected things that kept me wondering, and reading.  Very entertaining!!  I'm also SO happy with the ending!  :)Mary Campisi does a good job describing scenes and characters.  It's not too over the top, but it's just enough to paint a solid picture, while leaving still some to the reader's imagination.  The only critique I could give is to do another read-through and edit.  I found a couple grammatical and/or typographical errors.  They were few and far between, so kudos to the author on that!  But apostrophes used incorrectly annoy me, and I found some of those.  No biggie...certainly not enough to ruin a great story!  :)