Review: 3 3/4*** OPEN LETTER TO AUTHOR
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2013
You are a fabulous story teller.  Despite all of the spelling and grammar problems, I was drawn into the story from the very first page.  I could not put the book down until I had finished it - and turning into a zombie the next day from lack of sleep was no fun!You definitely have the talent for character and plot development, for making an imaginary world seem so real.  PLEASE, PLEASE do the readers and yourself a favorite and find a GREAT EDITOR.  Not someone who is going to stroke your ego and then do a half-a*s job - but someone who can help you get to the next level - an editor and beta reader that you can depend on to tell you the nasty truth and not worry about hurting your feelings.  Instead of just being a good book - this could have been a GREAT book - easily.  Too many people will and are turned off by misspelling and poor grammar usage.You have the talent and creativity - you just need to present a more professional, polished piece of work.