Review: Disappointed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 29, 2014
I started out liking it but at 50% I stopped reading when the Alph (Kaden) said "instead of shaking and slapping her, which he was tempted, he pulled her in for a hug." I couldn't go on. Because by now it was like the story was being rushed and the dialogue between them was not very believable. Another thing is when he got mad because the reason she left years ago was because she saw him screwing another woman. I almost stopped there. I think he was too mean and she kept giving in to him. Also, her name was Marala but sometimes the author would use that name or Mara. It would change back and forth either every other sentence or paragraph. Very annoying to me. Others might like this story but I didn't.Mara leaves her pack and has a son by the Alpha. After 17 yrs he finally decides to find her. They argue and he leaves and they make it out like he almost arrives back to his pack and then he's back at her apartment.. She goes back to pack with their son so he can change when it's time.