Review: Lacking
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2014
I dislike intensely to make someone feel bad...especially an author who has worked hard.  I will apologize in advance for my criticism.  It is just my opinion.  This story  was immature in writing form.  The dialogue was stilted and repetitive at times. The story line had promise.  I did enjoy reading most of the story and I hope that the author only gets better with more stories.