Review: I enjoyed this book and its sequel for the story... BUT not...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 6, 2013
the lame ending where all these people with huge problems solve them all and live "happily ever after."  And not just ordinary happy, but spectacular happy, perfect lives with never another problem!  Also, the two heroes purposely destroy an old lady's life -- simply because they don't like her -- and they're still the heroes!  How ludicrous is that?But my big problem was the awful distortion of the English language and punctuation.  I have read about 80 kindle free or less than $4 books, and although this was a problem in most, it was never bad enough for me to complain about, till now.  It is that bad."He wrapped his kissed the side of her forehead."  Yes, that was a sentence.  What does that mean?  There were words left out and words added where they shouldn't have been.  English is obviously a second language for this author.  This is fine if you have it proofread.  One glaring weakness was the author doesn't know the difference between "that" and "who."  This type of sentence occurred perhaps 50 times:"I glanced at Amber that was still glaring at me.""I glowered at Theresa that went scurrying behind her.""I looked at Jenny that rolled her eyes.""WHO," author!  "WHO," not "THAT."  Who refers to people; that refers to things!So in a two-book series of about 1400 pages,  irritation and frustration accompanied the experience of reading a good story.  I would have read some more of this author's books if it were not for this major annoyance.