Review: Fell Flat!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2014
I purchased this book because I really liked the premise when I read what it was about. The story started off great and then fell completely flat after Emily and Paul's night together. There was not a main focus to the story line. The story lines focused on everything  from Emily trying to deal with the lie she told Paul, Emily trying to delve into the world of BDSM, Emily trying to reunite Paul with his father, Emily trying to deal with her mother's problems, etc. Emily was just trying to do too much which made the story lines all over the place!  Also, I've read a lot of BDSM novels, so I didn't like the fact that the author spent so much time taking up pages and pages explaining every little detail about BDSM when I'm already familiar with the genre. I felt Emily's introduction into BDSM was a waste of page space and reading time because it just went on and on, plus she was practicing with a different Dom. Also, I hate it when authors use the writing style of emails and text messages as communication between the two main characters! I want my hero and heroine to have face to face interaction, and not be kept apart for a good portion of the book only to communicate through emails and text messages. Also, I didn't like the author's writing style of going back between the past and present.