Review: KA Fan Fiction
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 19, 2014
This author has talent and fun characters.That said, her writing style is highly derivative of Kristen Ashley. Some sentences, even whole scenes were pulled straight from the Ashley MC world. Yes, I know it's unfair that KA got there first with many of these expressions and scenes, but there it is. Get over it, and write your own original material.Also, get an editor and get rid of all those adverbs. When someone is crying, I know it's sadly. When they wink, I know it's cheerily. Everyone on one page should NOT grin wryly.Also, not fair but heroines who swear all the time--ick. 'S***' is not a sexy word, or one I want to hear during a sex scene.