Review: If the shoe fits.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2014
There was a bunch of things I liked about the story and some I didn't like so much. I liked the overall concept and mystery of the story. It was intriguing and new. It drew me in from the start and held my attention until the very end. It was very short, I wish some things would of been longer. Like the relationship with Kate and Ben. I felt a sexual connection with them, but nothing more. I wanted more. Jane was really sweet and I see she has a book of her own. I will probably read that! I hope more Ben and Kate will be in there. The ending was good, but I needed more. If there is no more I wanted where their lives went, what did Kate decide to do. Stay or go? did they continue their relationship? I just needed more. It was overly good but I felt it lacked in many areas. The writing was good and it was mysterious and had an interesting story line. And some didn't feel very realistic, even in a small town. Who would let a complete stranger live with them just for room and board? I wouldn't. I get it's fiction and makes the story. But I felt it could of maybe been handled a better way.Kate was home on a summer vacation and she is hanging out with her friend Jane when a stranger catches their eye. They get to talking and they realize he needs a place to stay and a job. There are no jobs in Winter so Jane and Kate offer up room and board in exchange for fixing up her grandmothers house. But Ben has secrets and Mrs. M  see's right through those secrets. Kate and Ben get real close and he tries to push her away for her own safety. Then Ben is arrested and all the little lies and secrets come to light. Will Ben be free again? will his past haunt him forever? and can he and Kate ever have a chance at a future? you will have to read to find out. It was a good, short read. And for free, why not! it wasn't amazing, it lacked in some areas, but I enjoyed it and I will give Jane's story a chance and maybe anything else from this author :-)"If the glass slipper fits, Snow White, it's not my fault."