Review: Extremely poor editing + non-sensical plot = waste of time
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 13, 2014
Just as the title of my editorial says.  I think I would have rather been playing Flappy Bird.  I literally had to skip paragraphs due to misuse of correctly spelled words, e.g.  retuned instead of returned, where versus were, and my favorite, the store clerk originally named Monique (mentioned twice) but had a name change to Dominique by the third mention.  Also, time jumps were not clearly denoted; scenes changes were abrupt.