Review: Deluxe UFO Tour Company
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 12, 2012
This book has a great deal of potential. I bought it because it sounded like something I would really enjoy. While I did enjoy it some - the story was zany and there were lots of wacky characters - it felt a bit over the top to me in a lot of ways and I really felt like it needed a great editor to step in and make it just that bit better.Some of the zaniness got old really quick though - the jokes about Stan's name - the absurdly long and unpronounceable names of all the other characters, the fat jokes about the sumo wrestler women and their scrawny husbands, the jokes about the absurdly high voices of the eunuchs.The dialogue often felt uncomfortable and forced. The details were often repetitive.It is a book that could be great - it really does have that potential with a bit of editing - but in this version it just didn't quite live up to it's potential for me.