Review: Well-written, hot novella
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2013
The Lady Submits explores the submission of Lady Lucrezia Grimaldi in the fictional world of J'Amel.  She is disgusted that her brother has sent Carlo Castellan to escort her to a dance.  After all, it's the Bacchanal, a week of "complete sexual freedom" (i.e., debauchery) in this make-believe world.  Once Lucrezia gives Carlo the slip, her real adventure begins.For a short novella, this story was surprisingly well-written.  Lucrezia's internal struggle with her pride would be relatable for any reader.  Her Master both tender endearments and complete dominance of Lucrezia made for an interesting mix.Ms. Cox has a great command of language and though this novel is a BDSM erotica, she is able to convey sexual tension, desire, and need with words that found in any romance novel.  While the ending was predictable and expected, it was no less satisfying.  For a self-published novella, I found very few errors in editing.5 of 5 for excellent writing, hot erotica, and interesting world.  I don't give five stars often, but many times erotica is not well-written.  Ms. Cox's unique voice was a treat.  The decadent backdrop is sure to provide many more entertaining stories to come.