Review: No connection with the characters
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2014
There background on the main characters is sparse... so much so that I didn't feel a connection to them. The plot isn't executed smoothly... there isn't enough build up and description. One thing to mention is there isn't much objectionable content in regards to the romance ... probably due to the YA type of writing.Lily and Archer are young 18 and 20 respectively I believe.  After 6 years of separation Lily jumps headfirst into being with Archer and the MC that he's a vice president of... but immediately wants to go back home. Archer wants Lily to leave at first but then gets excited that she wants to try being in the MC. This is done without much dialogue between them. It was just hard to believe in the characters and immerse myself in the plot.