Review: SHORT STORY
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 29, 2011
This novelette has great potential, but lacks the detail to be called a book.I'am  a sci-fi  fanatic and love to find another good author in this genre, but after reading this work I felt short-changedI realize indie authors sometime lack the funds to have editors and other professional help and I usually over-look small grammar and other mistakes as to enjoy the work as a whole so this is not my complaintI wont be spoiler and relate what I think is lacking in this work, but I suggest rewriting and expanding the details up to a full length novel. Also consult with a military expert, because what is depicted as an affair on board-ship would be taboo to two professional, career minded officers