Review: Needs a lot of work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2014
Needs a lot of workI read three chapters and sadly gave up on the book. Why?1) No line justification2) Bad sentence and paragraph structure3) Way too much telling and random thoughts4) Introduction of characters with zero background. I never knew who they were or why they were relevant5) When only two people are talking, he said, she said, is not requiredThis book is at best, a good first draft. I hope the author finds a good proofreader/editor and cleans the work up. It needs it.Two star push