Review: Excellent, Exciting Story.  Grammar still imperfect.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 11, 2012
The book and the series deserve a 5-star rating for the quality of the story.  Book 3 continued with incredible amounts of action and development of the antagonists.  My only real concern was, again, grammar.  Sentence structure needs work.  I felt in some cases as if the novel had been dictated and not typed.  Many of the grammatical phrasing errors are things that one might hear and disregard in a tale revealed by a speaker, but they are somewhat irritating in a textual format.I highly recommend the series but can't in fairness give it the 5 stars it otherwise deserves.