Review: Brought low by terrible formatting errors and a lack of editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 25, 2011
A mashup of Xavier's School for Gifted Youngsters, The Matrix, and spy intrigue genre titles, this book should have been 5 Stars! WTH is going on with the lack of editing!? Mr. Rawlins, you should want to smack the snot out of those responsible for all of the spelling, grammar, and ridiculous formatting errors in this novel! Sentences cutting out in thRight? A cursory glance would have caught the spelling errors at least. Even with that near-constant annoyance, you've managed to capture something special, Mr. Rawlins, I just hope that the sequel is given more than the sorry editorial proofing effort this book received. Actually, I think your editors were plotting against you, am I right? That or the consistent errors were a hidden cry for help. I'll have to reread it to make sure that you didn't hide a coded plea in there somewhere. Even with all that mess, I can't give your book less than 4 Stars.