Review: UNWORTHY P AND P VARIATION
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2013
This story is so untrue to the original characters. Got a third way through and closed it up.  The writing was lacking in style and flow.  The scene with Darcy and Elizabeth at the billiard table seemed to have been written by a group of high school boys sitting around drinking beer.  The author acknowledges involvement by her family and men in particular but I question why men would review this trash written by their daughter or sister or aunt.  There was too much sex and it got old and the scenes were just a repeat of an earlier scene. I wished the author would have used more compound-complex sentences.  The writing at times was at a mid-school level and there were some sentences that made no sense.  The author had many mistakes in grammar and spelling.The author should write this smut using other stories and certainly not P