Review: Worth the read! Great storyline!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 23, 2014
Ok,I want to start this review off with.... There are a lot of grammactical errors.I'm not sure if the book went through an editor,if it did,then you need to get new one.This is your first book,I understand that mistakes happen.So I am over looking the grammar,everyone deserves a chance.The story started out slow,I really wanted to chuck the book.But I went to read the reviews to see what others were saying about the book. I saw all the good reports and good words being said about the story and thought ... Ok,just hang in there a little longer.Something must be going to change.So glad I did hang in there! The storyline did pick up and I found myself wrapped up in Joey's life and really rooting for her to overcome her blockage and remember what happened to her so that she could move on with her life.I love the relationship she has with her best friend and now boyfriend Zephyr.I feel he is good for her and truly wants to help her,but she just needs to open up to him and truthful with him.She needs to gain that trust in her self and in him.But then again I can see where her mind is at.She feels that he will love her anymore if he knows the whole truth of her past.I really am looking forward to rest of Joey's story.But I pray that you (Nessa) get yourself a really good editor that will work with you,and get you some beta readers.Beta readers will help you point out any errors so that you can fix them before hitting that publish button.I wish you the best in your writing career because you really do have a great mind for it.