Review: beautiful love story for young people
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2013
THIS STORY REALLY NEEDS TO BE EDITED BY SOMEONE OTHER THAN THE AUTHOR.  IT IS A VERY EASY READING STORY WITHOUT A LOT OF JUNK WORDS AND I CERTAINLY WOULD RECOMMEND IT TO TEENAGERS.  IT COULD HAVE A LOT MORE ADDED TO IT SUCH AS  HOW THE PARENTS OF MANDY GOT TOGETHER.  WHY DIDN'T THEY STAY TOGETHER?  WHAT MADE BEAU'S DAD DISLIKE INDIANS SO BADLY?  SURELY IT WAS MORE THAN JUST THE BUYING OF A RANCH.  WHY DOESN'T MANDY MEET BEAU'S FATHER?THIS STORY DOES SHOW THE BEAUTY AND INNOCENCE OF YOUNG LOVE WITHOUT MAKING IT DIRTY.