Review: Could Be A Solid 4 or 5 star book *if*
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
The editing was done. The wrong words or words spelled incorrectly break up the flow of the story. Plus, during the story... there was a constant line of 2012 and the author's name... on almost every page... or, at the very least, that's what it felt like to me.Because the story kept being interrupted by the extra line... and because of the errors, I can only give this story a 3 Star rating, due to the constant interruptions that meant I couldn't get a true feel for the flow of the story.It looked like it would be a cute story. It needs a bit more work and some major editing. Then, I think it would be a definite 4 or 5 star book.The book I downloaded... for the reasons I mentioned, I can only give 3 stars. I wish they'd waited to share until they cleaned it up a bit. I might have really enjoyed the read.