Review: Way too short... A ball, a kiss, a dress, a blurted proposal then BAM end
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2013
The characters could have been elaborated on and the story extended as this seemed a glimpse of a couple chapters rather than rounded. Each main character is endearing but the story behind each not allowing the reader to become more endeared with them. What is Jack and Addy's story? Their last could have been used to build upon. Addy alone being so bold could have been elaborated on and lengthen the relationship between her and Roan. The story behind Roan's disfigurement brought out more... So much opportunity for the reader to entwine with them. Maybe even an epilogue to at least extend these two strong characters and push a forever after an appease the reader with a glimpse into their life after the declaration.