Review: Cute & Fun - how I wish Amazon allowed 1/2 stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2014
I agree with many of the other reviewers - this story IS slightly disjointed, doesn't progress seamlessly, has some questionable grammar & has an abrupt ending.  All of those faults doesn't negate my opinion that this is a cute, fun, cheerful sort of story.  Another author (or Ms McMann (?)) could have written a more intricate, detailed, 'richer' story that I think would easily have been a 4+ star novel.  It's a very quick read & that means if I make comments on the plot  I'll spoil the story for others.  It's really a 3.5 *  but ...... ;). The price is a tad high, I did  enjoy the story, the authors style & the potential.  Ultimately the purpose of a review is to give others information about purchasing the story (or not). I'm a P&P addict who reads quickly so this story was read in about an hour.  Even so I don't feel unhappy about parting with my time (or money) for this entertaining little read.