Review: ker-plunk?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2012
The novella was intriguing, the story at times shines...then, at others it is a head scratching - "and why does this matter?".  Character development that has nothing to do with the story or the the storyline ends up muddling a great story.  Case in point, why does the wife becoming withdrawn matter when she appears to be there just to give the main character guilt over his philandering...which doesn't matter because it doesn't impact the story.  The ending was fine, though surprising perhaps those who don't devour horror like I do.  I will say that the one time I really wanted more - what "they" were, and the storyline for the bad guy to be really developed, the author fell short.