Review: Meh...1 Star for Dialogue. Deserves NO stars
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2013
I know, writing a review when you haven't finished the book? But I'm having one huge problem with it. Every time a character speaks aka Lily or Ash...they use the others name. Almost every dialogue part has a persons name in it. Its really getting annoying. "blah blah blah Lily" "Ash, blah blah blah" "blah blah Lily"....its getting very VERY repetitive. I can't finish this book...sorry but in real life when you're talking to someone I'm pretty positive you don't say their name each time you say something....Why its gotten such positive reviews is beyond me...how juvenile is the dialogue? Do you people even know what decent writing is:(I really hate to write a negative review. I do. Truly. But when I've read how "fantastic" this book is...and I cant finish it after reading maybe 10 pages? COME ON. I'm glad it was free.Maybe with some editing of the dialogue I could read the rest but I just cannot and will not put up with the repetitiveness. Isn't my cup of tea.