Review: If not for the cold...I pack up to move today.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 01 8, 2013
This was a well written, funny, and sweet.  There was one spot where there was a word order issue but that was negligible.  I loved the premise and the execution of such a plot.  If I were writing it, I would have stretched it out a little bit longer, and given BW a chance to really show his charm.  I think there were a few more scenes where BW mortified Eva to the town.  And Lynx could have had a little more luck in dating Eva.Plus, I think the reader could have been trusted with Lynx's "superpower".  I was sort of let down when he finally spilled, and I wasn't impressed with how little was said about it since his  ability didn't seem to serve him in any super way.  Had the animals helped him in that sticky situation in the woods I would have been more forgiving.Overall this was a rewarding purchase and I will look for this author's other works.