Review: Uninteresting, Poorly Written, Vulgar
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 7, 2013
This story has very little to do with trains. The author uses very clumsy phrasing. His descriptive skills are lacking; for example, there is a character "seeing the things of a small town." I do not feel involved with the characters or interested in the plot. The editing is poor, and the writing style is disjointed and unoriginal. I object to the vulgar language. There are many unnecessary uses of the `f` word. There is no mention of a train until he finds himself riding one 84% into the book. There are only a few mentions, and nothing about the hazards of jumping on a train. I almost always finish what I start reading, but it was hard to stick with this until the end. The author writes like a novice. The book is too long.