Review: Good story/Horrible Writing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2013
The story has the potential to be amazing if the writing was better.  VERY confusing and full of misspelled words. It's extremely hard to follow because of all the grammatical errors.  To all my indie authors, please take the time to invest in an editor. Publishing multiple books means nothing if the writing is horrible! Instead of gaining fans, you will loose them and others if they continue to read horrible reviews.Peacesb