Review: It was okay,  not Horrible
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2012
Before I even read the book I knew I would hate the storyline,however I wanted to give a fair review.  With that said it wasn't as bad as I initially thought it would be, however there were a lot of issues with the story. It was depressing and I read for entertainment.  I probably wouldn't read another book by this author, however it wasn't a horrible for a debut.  It started off pretty good, and I really thought...wow this is a page turner, however it became so redundant. There was one part I know I read twice.  There was too much emphasis on the clothes the characters wore.  I don't care about the clothes the characters are wearing and that turned me off.  By the way, Rainbow and Forever 21 are not high end department stores, they just have cute clothes that are cheap and fall apart quickly.  The characters were shallow, immature and a little too ignorant for my taste.  There were editing and grammatical errors, however they did not totally distract from the story. I felt like the story was too long and too dysfunctional.  The ending ruined the whole story.  There were no redeeming qualities in any of the characters.  The author does have potential, however less is sometimes more and would make for a better story.  I can not recommend this book, however it was not horrible.  I'm just glad I got the opportunity to read it for free