Review: content was ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2014
I got this book with my prime account.I really loved this story. I loved Bree she was such a great character and Will wasn't half bad either. Their chemistry was fun to read about and for the most part this wasn't a ton of angst like these books can be. It was just a genuinely cute story. And honestly there's a chance that I would consider reading more if this became a series.But the problem is while I can get past some words being misused here and there as the book went on the lack of real editing became really evident and really distracting for me. It wasn't just a word here and there anymore and trying to decipher what was trying to be communicated in some of the sentences was tough. I highlighted one example "When he had unbuckled the vest and let it drop to the floor he conceded to her menstruations." This particular part of the book had nothing to do with her time of the month. There angels instead of angles and other spelling issues like that too.If there is some good solid editing in future books I'll gladly read them but I could never justify spending more for these books than most of the competing books in the market place and having really shoddy editing like that. For 99 cents I could forgive it maybe. I'd probably still complain but it's an easier pill to swallow for $4.99 not so much.