Review: Good idea...Bad writing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2012
The storyline drew me in, but the writing is really bad.  There are so many grammar and editing errors that it gets annoying.The writer jumps from first to third person so irregularly that even she can't keep up. Midway through the book the tenses start to be mixed within the same sentence. I know that is probably an editing error, but it is still confusing and annoying.Some of the situations are implausible and the characters don't have enough depth to elicit my sympathy. I found myself shaking my head at their stupidity.The writer has talent, but she could use some help. The book has a lot of potential with a little bit of work and a lot of editing.