Review: Good, but WAY too short!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2012
I starting reading, liking where it was headed, and in all of about 5-10 minutes, reached the end. What?! Seriously, you just left the reader there? I am hoping, as one fellow 'rater' stated that this is just the beginning of a longer story. It is not even a novella, and calling it a short story is aiming too long too! Very promising beginning though, and I encourage the author to continue the thought.