Review: not enough depth......
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 9, 2012
When authors write erotic fiction they forget that we want to connect w characters. Authors rush to describe sexual situations without providing the depth readers look for in the read. Go back and read ur work. Every great novel provides the reader with the ability to absorb the character and take in their personality. Make me feel it.The step daughter's character was unnecessary and read like pedophilia more than eroticism.