Review: Interesting story with fatal flaws
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2013
The story itself is good, reminiscent of the Harry Potter books. Unfortunately, little or no good proofreading has been done leaving the story filled with typos and grammatical errors that greatly detract from enjoyment reading. Your instead of you're is minor; band instead of banned is a major error.I cannot recommend the book until it is properly proofread and corrected.