Review: Started okay but...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 1, 2013
While the story started fine and seemed to have promise, the whole part about her boss and what he said and did, and her reaction-along with the reactions of her co-workers and especially Drake- just seemed unbelievable to me in this day and age (please tell me that people are not still so stupid and gullible that they put up with this kind of thing anymore!). Couple that with the need for an editor-there were quite a few missing words, parts of sentences that didn't make sense and one point at the end when the wrong name was used-and I couldn't rate this any higher. My rating is more like 1.5, maybe 1.75 stars, but I rounded up to give the author the benefit of my doubts.