Review: An interesting urban fantasy
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 21, 2012
I read about 25% of the manuscript on my Kindle, at which point, strangely, the story set in the secondary world became tiresome. I say "strangely" only because I expected the part of the story in the other world, where the imagination of the writer is more free to create, to be at least equally engaging. But, truth be told, Thomas' point of view was more interesting right from the start.Interesting opening chapters will draw you in with ease, but from there it's a subjective thing to say whether it's good or not. I couldn't get into Liam's story, others  might.3 stars from me for an interesting urban setting and an intriguing idea in a market that lacks exactly that.To the author:What I would suggest to the author is to re-examine the difference between the point of views in the different worlds. You start with two very interesting characters -the senator-to-be and Marugon- and you throw them in the background there on. We connect with ease with them and then we have to deal with two new ones we don't know nothing about -Thomas and Liam. Thomas is swiftly connected to the senator which is a good thing, because you give us more of the senator, but Liam wanders around on his own and Marugon -the interesting character for me- appears only at the scene where he has to kill the good guy. I hope you see my point... :)