Review: Enjoyed the first book looking forward to bk 2
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2013
So I read some of the reviews for this book and they werent very positive, but I'm glad i took the chance w it anyway.  I didn't see glaring editing issues in the book that were really obvious like some reviewers said. The one thing I did notice was that there wasn't an obvious split in dialogue between characters in the story or scene.  They was a few times I had  to stop and re-read a part to make sure I understood who was saying what, or that a scene had moved from the house to the shop and different  people. But it didn't take away from the story.Love  the characters and story line.  Even the age difference between Lyon an  Kat worked well.  In a lot of storylines the age difference seems forced her Jordan keep true to the age differences an  how each would really act.  I also loved that while this was  a bike gang, they didn't come off as the stereotypical bike gang.  That when Lyon was  mad  to face a difficult choice you seen the steps he wen  through to come out on the other side feeling good w his choice.  Loved Lyons mom and dad their relationship with each other was great I just don't understand why the author had em smoking pot all the time. Didn't fit I felt.The only real negative I have is once again this is book 1 in a series, and you have  no idea it's book 1 until you get to the  end. I wish the authors or publishers would start putting in the descriptions or title book 1 of ...  I hate buying Books and not having an ending and then waiting months for more books of that series to come out.