Review: A nice short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2012
The first part of PASSIONATE VENGEANCE  moved along at a quick pace and was very easy to read. The dialogue was good and I didn't notice any editing mistakes. However, a chunk of the story covering the build-up of the romance seemed to be missing. It's like the meat of the story had been cut out from when the story reached a climax with a big confrontation, skipped four months, and then everything had completely worked out in the best way possible for everyone. I'm trying not to give away too many details because I don't want to spoil the story for anyone. The protagonists, Ayla and Seamus, were both very likable and I especially liked that Ayla had a high-ranking position in a "man's" field. Altogether, this was a nice little story when you only have a limited amount of time.