Review: Was a fun quick read for younger teens.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2013
Overall I enjoyed the story of this book, it didn't have much action in it or even romance really. It had enough going to keep me reading, but will say, at the  mark I was waiting for something else to happen, and it never did, kind of a letdown really. It was wrapped up nice with a fairytale ending I guess.The main characters were not really developed a lot, I never got to that point where I fall in love with them, I did with Cody, but even he got a bit chessesy at times. But not too bad.The odd man out, Chase, I never got a chance to like or not, he was a big issue in the story, but was not developed very well. I have a hard time pinpointing what was missing. Just something was missing for me.Its still a good quick vampire read for young teens I think,I didn't dislike this book, but was unhappy with some inconsistencies in it, and a few things that were repeated that got on my nerves. The main one is through the whole book the word Moment was capitalized no matter how it was used. Even when used in a normal way, it's almost like if you're in Word and you do the find and replace, like that was done, and everyone was changed to start capitalized. (ok, so there is like 4 out of the 34 uses of that word that are not capitalized, did a Kindle search) It bugged me, lol. That was the main grammar error of that type. Other issue was the way these vampires spoke, sometimes old like, and other like little kids in this day and age, the main characters are teens for real, not 150 that look like a teen. The world is different, but not explained well.I do recommend like I said for young teens, and anyone who wants to read a quick sweet vampire tale that is a bit different. I was captivated for the most part to not stop reading, until about  when it got stalled out to me.I give it 4 stars. I liked it, but not a favorite to me.I was provided this book from the author for my honest review.You can read an excerpt at my blog for the tour, link is in my profile.Michelle @ Michelle's Paranormal Vault of Books