Review: The premise had potential, but the author and her editing team let readers down.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2014
The blurb made this tale sound great, but from the first glaring and unforgivable homophone error on the first page, I knew that I'd made the tale into more than it was. It read as if the author had plotted out a longer tale, full of: lost chance at love/another chance at love/the military and how/where the leads would go from here/a homophobic father and the chance of a HEA, but then she used only aspects of all of the former in her tale, making what she'd written, seem like a precis of the actual tale.It did have potential, but she brushed too many things under the carpet - the military aspect, the homophobic father and the 'where do these leads go from here?' aspect, and the tale ended just as the leads should have been getting things out in the open, with nothing but honesty and sincerity between them, given that each has loved the other in silence for over 7 years.With a re-write, with all the various grammatical errors and typos fixed, this could be half decent, but it's not even worth reading as a freebie at the moment, as it builds the reader up and them lets him/her down.Ebook courtesy of Samhain Publishing, in return for an honest review.