Review: getting better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2013
Well the grammar is getting slightly better and the story itself is pretty good and the background story of how the family came into money is original and interesting.However is it that much to ask that the writer at the very least keep the name of his main character straight ?His name switches from Rayland to Roland several times,often in the same paragraph !This is just sloppy writing and the author should have enough respect for the reader to keep certain aspects of the story consistent.