Review: Excellent story, but weighed down by editing issues.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2013
I have to admit that I loved the story, but found the many missing words from fragmented sentences and references dragged the reading experience down. First the Dragon has "scales shining blue" then they are black. Morgana is referred to as "standing there himself" and the list continues.  I normally read rather quickly and my mind fills in the blanks or glazes over the minor editing issues, but I had moments of pause this time. I was generally entertained with the entire story otherwise and loved the twist of the "Silver". I certainly would recommend this to friends but would like to see another round of copy edit.