Review: Interesting premise; disjointed execution.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2014
The ideas in this book have potential, but the author really needed a strong content editor to carve out sections and smooth over transitions between ideas. Too much jumping from one new disclosure to another when the new girl gets to the mountain compound. Too many far-fetched ideas to keep track of. Just not very compelling. Not enough down time and development of story and characters in between radical new disclosures of bizarre super powers, villains, and heroes. Couldn't keep track of all the fastpaced wacky new elements to the story, and not enough character development to ake me care.