Review: Story is well-written, but left me wanting more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2013
Technically, this is one of the better free short stories available on Kindle (at least, it was free when I downloaded it).  The author has the mechanics of writing down.The story is thought provoking and I wanted to keep reading to see how it turned out.  When I finished, however, I felt that the author had squandered some of the promise of the story by leaving too much out there.  How was death abolished without creating any other changes in the world?  If death was abolished, why was he warned against killing himself?  Or is "death" just a metaphor for something else the author doesn't explain?