Review: Disjointed and confusing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
I hate giving a negative review as I know how hard it is to write. Also, I believe every story is an honest effort by the author to share a gift with the readers. Having said all that, I cannot find anything to like in this story. There was no logical flow of events at all. Yes, I am fully aware that this is fiction but still, a modicum of sense and an iota of logic is expected. There was no flow to the story at all. I felt like I was reading a poorly written diary of a teenager at best. Sorry, skip this one altogether.