Review: great story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2013
While I like the story the writing begs for an editor. It takes longer to figure out what the author means when there are so many  grammatical  and spelling errors to contend with. I wonder just how literate the author is. I give him credit for his story and imagination. I hope he will put in more time in later efforts or get someone to revise, correct his mistakes and re issue.With that said I'm buying the rest of the series in hopes it gets better.