Review: a bit of a miss
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 18, 2013
This story had potential...it really did BUT it just fell short for me.  It was a total eye-roller at some points.  I mean who walks onto an elevator and practically starts banging the other passenger...no matter how hot they are.  I think even your common street walker would demand a little more privacy and of course payment up front.  I mean yeah I've been in an elevator with a hottie and THOUGHT about it but I don't know anyone who would actually at on such a ridiculous impulse.  Then there was the whole amnesia thing....ugh....really?  How tender does your head have to be to have a bit of a bump up cause amnesia.  I felt like things were just being forced to happen for the sake of a story.  I didn't feel like the story flowed together at all.  It wasn't a horrible story...just not one that I would have paid money for.