Review: Light, Quick Read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2012
It took me about half the book to get into the story. It was almost too light and fluffy, and nothing much was happening. There were also some editing problems. Jack's constant use of "doggies" for the babies got irritating. "Shin" is not a place on a woman's back, and chocolate fudge pecan pie is usually known as German chocolate pie. From what I've seen, a fractured pelvis is not usually set. It is left to heal on its own or requires surgery. There were several puncuation errors and word misuses, like "not" for "now." The point of view changed suddenly in places, and there were all-knowing comments, such as "Before the interview was over he would know." There was one sentence I never did figure out the meaning. It read, "She opened her eyes and before she said the words, he believed her live." Nothing I could guess made sense with the story.Despite these small problems, I ended up liking the book. It won't go down as a favorite, but it entertained enough for a short time. I appreciated the fact there was no sex or heavy profanity, although things were still steamy at times. It delivered a light, simple read, and sometimes that's okay.