Review: Did not finish, story not for me
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2014
Sav's first sexual interaction with Antoine could have went better than it did. There should have been more suave seduction from Antoine. There was no suave just direct demand, she did it without much of a fight, that was a turn off. The way that scene went and the way they both reacted just did not sit well with me. I was at 21% went I quit reading. I didn't think the story could turn out any better after that scene.Good thing I only wasted 99 cents on that read. There is nothing wrong in the writing sense, it is that this story was not for me.