Review: Good Idea, Poor Writing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 27, 2013
The idea behind You Got Me is really great. I was looking forward to finding out about Roxy's past and seeing her heal and overcome the awful things she's experienced. Aiden should be a totally swoonworthy hero: he's kind, cares about his family first and foremost, he's a talented football player, handsome, and a bit funny. Unfortunately this story is the exact opposite of well written. Everything is skimmed over with only minor detail, except for the horrific things Roxy suffered in her past. The writing is very juvenile. Aiden develops strong feelings for Roxy entirely too fast and often sounded like a 12 year old boy with a first crush. There are a multitude of editing issues. The whole thing needs to be completely reworked.I wish I could, but I can't recommend this one. :(