Review: 3  stars.  Erotic short story was well done with good character development.  Sex scene was hot.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2011
FIGHTING FAIR by Anne Calhoun.STORY BRIEF:Natalie and Shane have been married for several years.  Shane is a workaholic on his way to making partner in an investment company.  Natalie is frustrated that they never spend time together.  She makes an appointment with a marriage counselor.  Shane is 30 minutes late for the first session.  A few days later Shane meets Natalie after work and takes her home.  Natalie is angry.  Shane insists they play one of their early games, Hide and Seek.  Natalie reluctantly agrees.  The winner gets to be master in the bedroom.  Shane plans to win the game and her affections.REVIEWER'S OPINION:I had trouble deciding between 3  and 4 stars.  My main problem was that it was too short.  I prefer longer stories.  But this was pretty good.  It was different.  I think it's easier to write a good short story than a good long story.  I'm glad I read it.  There is one long, drawn out sex scene with alpha guy totally as master.  He ties her hands, spanks her, and uses some toys.DATA:Ebook story length: about 40 minutes.  Kindle count story length: 591 (118 KB).  Swearing language: strong, including religious swear words.  Sexual language: strong/erotic.  Number of sex scenes one long one.  Setting: current day New York City and Summit, New Jersey.  Copyright: 2011.  Genre: erotic contemporary romance.