Review: DNF
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 5, 2014
I started Toxic and this was a Did Not Finish for me.  What I got to was that you have Shattered Souls (Rook, Grey, Landon and Cruz) and Twisted Perfection (Kaid, Maisy and Willow)Shattered Soul is a huge success and they are on tour right now and Rook the main singer of SS is a man whore that loves getting high and drinking jack.  He has a lot of issues growing up and for him to cope he drinks and smokes to stay numb. Oh yeah and just screws about anything that walks.  I get it, I really do.  One time too many, he screws the band over and their opening act leaves leaving them to pay for the expenses.  Here walks in TP.  They have been trying to make it big, playing at small dives.  SS sees them, loves them except Rook because he doesn't want to admit he is digging Maisy, signs them on.  Here is where it got lost for me.  I get the whole sex drugs and rock and roll  but for me unless it is done right (and trust me there is a way) cheating is a no no.  You have Grey that loves Quinn (stylist for both bands), they love each other but Willow from TP wants Grey and will stop at nothing to get him no matter that she likes Quinn.  She thinks that Quinn is a sweet girl but Grey is hers and will take him from her.That was all she wrote.  I was trying to give it a chance but for me Willow was acting like a trashy ho.  I was done.  That alone for me is what stopped it.Oh yeah, but Grey wants Willow too but is “really” trying to not let things happen even though he dry humps Willow on their tour bus and blows his load but “he doesn't want to hurt Quinn”Give me a freaking break.Things might have turned around at some point because I know Landon (Greys brother) is in love with Quinn and has been forever and Quinn admits that she sees the looks that Willow and Grey give each other.I get that this is a story, its make believe but I want to be able to believe it and want to continue reading it.There was a lot of point of views going around that at times I was confused on who was talking and who they were talking too.  If there was a break between chapters for me I think that would have been better.I liked the story line, who doesnt love a story about bands that tour together.  I get the whole sexual tension and at times it was very hot but at the end of the day it  just wasn't for me.  To much going on to stick with it.Reviewed by Beggin from Mommys a Book Whore