Review: ok story but could be better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2014
ok let me say first that overall I liked the story line here and I liked the characters, Raine was a strong woman who was very loyal to her sister. Diego a typical biker guy , he has past issues, don't they all:),, what I did not like was I felt like this book had a lot of what I call filler,, I want the bones and meat of the story , I don't want 3 pages of her walking from the front to the back of her house, I know we need background info but with this book I found myself skipping over parts because I got bored reading it and wanted to get to the good stuff. Also this book was riddled with errors and not just misspelled words but sentences that did not make sense, missing periods or comas, there were several times when I had to reread the sentence a couple of times to figure out what it was suppose to mean. I really hope this author gets better as she writes more, again I felt this story had potential but it needed more.