Review: Needs an editor's touch.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 11, 2013
This book has a nice premise but its a bit raw. The H internally references the h's name, then a sentence later asks her for her name. There are quite a few sentences that just don't make sense at all in their paragraphs.The heat is not allowed to build before they are "mating" on the forest floor ten pages into the book.I do like the way the author let us see into the man's pov,but it wasn't enough to keep me reading ><