Review: Error Everywhere
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2014
I'm really glad this one was free. There were so many errors.  There were several occasions where the wrong word was used (passes I instead of past...)  There were several occasions where the tense changed and the '"hero" was a wuss!  Also, the sales clerk at one of the Gucci store was named Malian, but she was mentioned as Adel?  Also, I am assuming the author is British, but if your going to write a book set in the States and have an American leading lady get the terminology right. For example this author wrote that they ate lunch on his bureua, did they eat in his bedroom?  That's where I keep my bureau. His office was also continually preferred got as his room, what's up with that? Does he live there?  You can be sure I won't continue this reading this story or anything else by this author until she gets a good editor!