Review: LOVE IT!!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 6, 2014
First I'll dispense with the criticisms:It was too short and I really would have liked more of a defined timeline and more of Jessica's interactions with her roommates.  Even some more time spent talking about the kids she cooks for and their nanny.  There were many opportunities to make this book meaty-er something substantial.  I was left feeling like I knew Jessica's story but I didn't know her as a person at all.I also have issues with these "serials" or "episodes" that a lot of the independent writers are using.  There is a right and a wrong way to do this. Cliffhanger or no the author should always make the length of the serial worth while and this one didn't achieve that.  I was left thinking: "That's it?"  The ending seemed predictable and I originally thought: "Okay, double life, what's so new about that?"Basically if you're going to make a cliffhanger, try something a little less cliche so the reader isn't left feeling cheated. I almost don't care about the characters enough to continue because there's no mystery left. Why would I end up buying the next in the serial?Well, luckily I was curious enough to go ahead and download the preview of the next in the series and that interested me enough to continue. I will tell you I am pleased so far.Now to the good stuff:Absolutely worth the buy! I loved it! It was entertaining and steamy, plus there were a lot of great lines too. Despite my dislikes of this book I couldn't help but get into the plot of this book.Small town girl goes to the big city to make a new life for herself after a devastating breakup. So she stays with a friend and of course Jessica is introduced to Manhattan nightlife. She decides she needs a one night stand to assert her independence and put the past behind her. Only she finds something more than she was looking for in Nathan Moore her "random" one night stand.Feelings develop between the two and a "relationship" begins to emerge.  But will Nathan be able to commit?A fun afternoon whirlwind of a read. I really enjoyed myself with this one and I look forward to completing the series.