Review: Let down
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2014
There was quite a bit of character development, but that was not enough to support the story. In fact, I think the character development was one of it's downfalls.If this was to be considered an erotic short story, there would only be a tiny bit dedicated to that purpose. The rest was centered on establishing Corey's character. Or lack there of.Corey was a huge disappointment to me, because I can't see any smart woman landing in her situation.One; if she knew she got her job based on how attracted her boss was to her, how could she (with any morals) accept the position? Well, Corey is not too proud to put out for a good job. So sad.Two; Then finding her boss in a compromising position with his secretary not being enough to smarten her up? I am sorry, but I can't like characters who have no common sense or morals.A good woman would make her potential mate work for her affection. Not just give it up because the pay is good, regardless of attraction. To be honest, this booked lacked realism, and played out like a bad porn. On top of all that, Lucas seemed like a jerk, not worth sacrificing pride and self respect for.