Review: Proposal for a Short Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 31, 2013
It was a short story and free. But I feel I should give my review to help the author and other potential readers. I agree with another reviewer that this was more of a proposal for a story then an actual short story. The characters are not developed, except that they are soul mates and have a lot of money. No climax except for sex. It has so much potential but really falls short.  If you can get through writing style it is okay, so I could not say I did not like it. But properly does not disserve the three stars.