Review: rather amateurish
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2012
despite a modest number of enthusiastic reviews, I found this to be somewhat juvenile and amateurishly written. The editing was adequate, and no major POV bungles or other technical goofs, but a quarter of the way in I found myself wondering if a teenage boy (albeit a somewhat talented one with a good editor) had written it. Your mileage may vary, but I found it to be a collision of plot ideas described from a rather shallow male perspective. Many 0.99 Kindle books are better, as are a fair number of the free ones.