Review: Please edit this short story
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
Wow, first off daryle-seems like the author just put some random letters together to create that name. Secondly, the grammar is terrible! When characters speak, it's "blah blah blah." Not "blah blah  he said. It was free and glad I didn't pay anything for it or I would have requested a refund. Don't waste your time on thus poor excuse for a story.  Couldn't get past page 4'