Review: Well written and easy to believe characters without an unrealistic sense of an odd couple....
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2014
Can you save a person with sex? This is the question posed by “Demon of Envy,” the fifth “episode” in the Gods of Love Series.  Liv is a fluffy girl who was traumatized by her former boyfriend and generally insecure about her attractiveness level who hasn’t had sex in a long time and Thon is the Chippendales toned, penile enhanced god that has eyes only for her. This, my friends, is erotica.I am going to give Lynne credit for not using any of the time-worn clichés in the sexual novel pantheon. This is an author giving the reader straightforward sex that is hot, raw and pretty well written. I’m no erotica expert but the encounters had an urgency that these sort of written scenes sometimes lack. These are characters we believe want each other and they want each other badly. When Thon’s insertion into Liv’s life extends outside of the bedroom, she’s not sure she really wants him there and that’s where Lynne gives readers an extra level of conflict that given the characters presented make sense in their storyline.We don’t have as strong a sense of the character that is Thon as we do Liv. Perhaps his character was better outlined in a previous book. What is presented works in the scope of this 55 page novella. He and Liv are together not just to heal her but also to heal him. Though the fifth book in the series, “Demon of Envy easily stands alone.“Demon of Envy” is straight up self-indulgent girl porn. If you like erotica, you’ll like this novella. Pick it up today.