Review: Disappointed so far..
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2014
Ok I haven't even finished reading but I'm so annoyed at the stupidity going on thus far, I had to stop and write a review now. Jane is officially the dumbest gangstress ever. She supposedly learned so much watching her dad and now ace but continues to move like she dumb. Making dumb decisions, being alone, not telling no-one even her crew someone is back to kill her and just plain ole sloppy. Leaving people alive who knows all of youbecause someone showed up instead of getting rid of them both then I just finished reading the part where the person finally catches up with her and this is where I lost it. First off why you gonna be alone at the traphouse and pregnant but then have guns and dogs but keep the dogs locked up and no gun on you??? Then I know he heard them big dogs barking in the basement but he gonna tell you let's go in the basement instead of killing her right there?? I mean come on !!! And what's going on with Ace? Even he acting slow.. Now I'm a huge India fan and will continue to read because I'm nosey..lol. but at 54% read so far I must say this is a disappointment so far. I hate when authors insult the readers intelligence and don't bother paying attention to detail. Like as long as there's some actionor drama, we won't notice things don't make sense. Sorry India but you slipped a little with this!!Ok so I finished the book and I have to stick with my earlier review. It was really rushed and had no attention to detail. Like how did J have her daughter at seven months pregnant, yet the baby is almost 9pds at birth?? 9 pds is huge for a full birth but 2 months premature? Really India?? Then she gets robbed again at the house with someone there and again no one has a gun and where are the darn dogs??? Like what was the point of having them..lol?? Next thing you know it's a whole year later and they've made millions already with no heat from church ,which made no sense, yet he gets mad because they send a bottle of champagne to his table..I can't with this one India!!! Especially from one of my favorite authors.. Sorry but I will not be reading part 3. It was already too much money for 100pages then this disappointing. I'm over it.. Next!!!