Review: Okay if you aren't looking for realism
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 6, 2013
While the dynamic between the couple was realistic, everything else was just so hard to believe.  Strippers just don't decide to have sex with a couple for the price of a lap dance.  Even if they did, they wouldn't be allowed to do it in a club on the Las Vegas strip (I don't know if there are even clubs on the strip -- at least not on the main strip like described in this story).  The nagging sense of unreality kept me from fully enjoying the tale -- readers who are comfortable with less realistic fare may still enjoy this vividly-told m/f/f story.