Review: It could have been longer
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 7, 2014
This short story has been quite surprising. When I started reading it, I thought it was quite predictable. And in a way I was right and it was. But then, bam! A twist happens and what you thought was happening just changed. However, it wasn't really thrilling for me and I would have liked to see the story evolve more.