Review: Dumb. Contrived. Don't bother.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2014
First, this dude is so not a Dom.  Really.  He just isn't.  He cries when he has to flog his "sub" (who is actually a Domme, or not, depending... oh, never mind,) and he only makes her "submit" to, um, pretty much nothing.The premise is so stupid: A company is looking for Doms to be its "face" so a contest is held.  A male and female Dom are paired up and then... one has to submit to the other?  What the heck?  I ... there is just no good way to explain this.And then, of course, the couple falls in love within about 24 hours. I think.  Time isn't paid a lot of mention here.  The "games" are stupid as all get out, the judging of the games is worse, and there's a sort of non-conflict conflict that just does nothing for the story. Well, I guess it does, but it didn't have to. Could have gotten there a lot of other, more believable, ways.The sex is boring.  No, I'm serious.  Borrrrrrrrrrrring.  The writing is only mediocre. Call me a snob, but if you want to be a "writer" and expect people to pay for your books, you should know the difference between "your" and "you're," or be willing to hire a proofreader and/or editor.  Overall, this is a complete waste of money.  Honestly.  Just don't bother.