Review: Not bad, needs work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2014
This story needs a lot more world building, it is a short novella, but much can be done if 50 pages more were included, there are random information dumps that lead to nowhere. It's very hard to feel empathy for the leads AND I really dislike 200 year old paranormals mating 20 year olds, said that, where is this set? The author uses many anglicisms, Mum, arse, whilst to name a few, is this story set in England, Australia?I don't know if I will buy next books in the series