Review: Need the whole story!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 26, 2013
I understand that this is a short story, but I didn't except to get only two thirds of it. The whole storyline was building towards them going back to their home planet and starting their new family life. Then they get on the spaceship, make a couple podlets, and it's "the end". There should have been another twenty-five pages about getting to the planet, what it is like there, and their podlets being born. Heck even if it was just an epilogue and ten more pges fitting in that info. I really enjoyed the aliens and Kyle and Chloe's interaction with them. I will check out the next story and see if it has the rest of this one in it. If not, this will be my last srory I buy in this series.