Review: Good Story -- Needs an Editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 3, 2012
This book has so much promise. The plot is good and it's even kind of eerie at times. I might have been sitting on the edge of my seat had the writing itself not kept pulling me out of the story. There are typos, poor sentence structure, incorrect word usage, etc. But, I think the most annoying thing of all was the word echoes. Well, that and sentences starting with "He saw...", "He heard..." or "He ... <did whatever>". If this novel were edited, tightened up and made to flow smoothly, it would be a good book. Because he knows how to create a story/plot, I'll probably give this author another try and see if the writing is better.