Review: Good story but needs edited
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2013
I enjoyed the premise of The Accidental Sub.  The storyline was believable.  The writing was descriptive but at times a bit repetitive.This could've been so much better had it been professionally edited or even just proof read prior to publication.  There were missing words in sentences.  There were extra words in sentences.  Sometimes "Master" was capitalized, sometimes it was not (but should've been). There were grammatical errors throughout the entire book.The ending was very abrupt.  Definitely not what I would call a "Happily Ever After" but closer to a "Happy for Now" but it really wasn't that either.  I'm glad that there wasn't a  cliffhanger ending but I was disappointed with the way the author ended the story.2.5 stars