Review: Crossover
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
I'm sorry but this might be a bit long(Waring little spoliers). I've read this book a couple of times,the first time it was a fine book. Now that I've read It again,it's not. First off in the beginning it seems like the author is the main character recording what happened, but she constantly changes from third person to first person. Also there was lots of spelling errors, no period/question mark/exclamation point/e.t.c. she has also not used the right ending point, or not used an 's' at the end of words that require a s. Such as "thousand little cotton ball." Or "couple of beer". I've noticed that even if the main character(Hayden) is new to the world the author Is trying to create she does not do anything to help besides occasionally healing somebody. She spends most of the book sleeping,talking,being with jasper. She's supposedly is a 'natural' at fighting but she only really fights twice in the book. I think she's meant to be a powerful heroine, but she Cries to much and is in bed being in pain, she has to much 'I love you' and 'I'm so worried/sad' emotion. The author has plenty of creative-ness going on but crams it all together while providing excitement for a few pages, but chapters dull. Of course Hayden has never had her life seriously in danger with out her fighting girlfriends, muscled guy friends or as always sexy, muscled well fought boyfriend or 'mate's a  he's called. Personally I never catch mistakes or anything but the story of the book, and even I caught them. That covers the book I think.