Review: A very action-packed story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2013
I received this book as part of a Member Giveaway from LibraryThing.  This is the second book that I have read from this author, and my comments for this book is about the same as for the other. There is great promise here for this author, as he does a good job with plot development and action. This story starts a little slow at first, but gets faster in pace, and some of the action sequences are very exciting. The book needs editing for grammar, sentence structure and spelling. I would also have liked a little more character development, there was very little back story for any of the characters to help the reader become involved with the characters. I would also suggest to the author to tighten up the dialogue and vocabulary to make it a little more sophisticated, even for a young adult novel, the dialogue seemed a little immature and choppy at times. I did love the time period of the setting, I am interested in reading this author's next work, and look forward to the sequel to this novel.