Review: Too much padding
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2013
This story had so much padding it became downright uncomfortable.  As soon as I started Chapter One, I wanted to give up reading. The author went into the minutest detail about irrelevant things, effectively taking away from the story's flow.  Without the padding, this is really a short story.  The issue with the names seemed a bit ridiculous.  Without the padding, I may have given this story a 3.  The padding was annoying, so here is a big fat 1.