Review: Barely got my toe wet
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 4, 2011
The writing in this very short piece of erotica is understated and romanticized. I do appreciate the author's way with imagery, but when it comes to erotica, I really need that romantic element to be balanced with enough carnality. It doesn't have to be hardcore or gritty, but it does need more passion and more sex.This story reads almost like a very brief scene from a slightly sexy romance novel- somewhat flowery and curlicued and without much real action going on. This story definitely wasn't the kinky slip and slide of water fetish I was expecting, and it wasn't the type of erotica I generally prefer. For me personally, this erotica was too short, too shallow, and not nearly erotic or even sexy enough.