Review: needs an editor and fact finder...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2014
Not quite as bad as the others in the series but bad enough....Loved the concept but really struggled with the constant cliches, the factual errors and the serious editing problems. I've read almost all of the books in the series so there is something there but the editing and the trite dialogue and the mushy way the cowboys talk sort of kills it. Incorrect names, changes in character descriptions, commas in the wrong place or not at all, and the cheesy dialogue were nearly too much, but I'm not a quitter and I saw something there too bad it never quite reached the good point. I can't recommend the series at the individual price of $4.99 per book. The glaring errors literally ripped me out of the story time and time again. I'd recommend finding an editor, perhaps a beta team that has medical, BDSM, and other qualified people in it to help the author get the facts straight, and lower the price to .99 cents. $5 is just way too much. I won't be buying anymore in the series...I just can't torture myself any further.