Review: A good read, but flawed.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 8, 2012
I borrowed this book from the Kindle Lending Library.  It was a sexy story about two co-workers who essentially hook up casually, even though they both have deeper feelings for each other.  In many ways it was a lovely story. The combination of the Hart family (and the sisters) was a great one.  I really felt their connection. I really liked the H - he was sexy, caring, posessive of the heroine, and a great dirty talker. The heroine was also a good character, although she tended to have a very black+white personality with very little grey. It was really all or nothing with her every time.The biggest issue for me was the formatting of the book.  There was a double line between every single paragraph in the book and holy heck was that distracting. I tried changing font size and fooling around with other kindle options, but it just drove me bananas the entire time.But beyond that, I also felt that some of the dialogue was completely flat. It wasn't always that way, but many conversations between the H and h just felt awkward and unnatural to me.  The scene after her dance, for example.  There were a few, though.  And, the main conflict resolution was strangely quick. She decided how it was going to be and it just was.