Review: cream, cream, and more cream?!!!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2013
The story could have been way better. The editing sucked beyond belief. The word "cream" was used so many times, that if you added it all up together, one half of the book would have been just pages of the word "cream." I think I know Angel's vagina better than my own. The story was more like an ode to Angel's vagina and her cream. Clean up the editing, find another descriptive word besides "cream" and maybe expand on the story and you would have a somewhat decent book. It felt like the British version of Reaper's Property if Reaper's Property had been written by an18 year old girl who has yet to discover a thesaurus.