Review: Fair story needs an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 9, 2013
Some unusual aspects go this story. It's in many ways a typical story of a wife who doesn't realise how her husband has isolated and controls her, but it's mostly well written. Isobel is no ninny - she has a lot of gumption and Jesse is a nice guy. As is too common, the sex is overly detailed and too-soon, which drags my rating  down a bit.The author does need to hire an editor, but I may buy more from her.So many romance authors (Jayne Ann  Krentz, whose books I generally otherwise really enjoy, is a prime example) misuse the word "juncture" when they should use "junction"  - now this author does the reverse. Look it up for yourself!"Grant’s company was at a critical junction"Other quotes"Margaret didn’t think much of a man who would do that to such a beautiful woman." - Oh, so it's OK to do that to a woman who's not beautiful? What's wrong with you, Ms Potchen?"She still hadn’t told a sole about Jesse and didn’t intend to" - Fishy, very fishy.