Review: Interesting but draggy at times
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2014
I like the premise. I like the cover. I do find that the narrative drags sometimes and the grammar needs some work. I don't think the grammar is as bad as it could be. It's certainly not as good as it could be either, though. With a little polish, this could be really entertaining. Right now there are pockets of entertainment surrounded by boredom. It really is a mixed bag.