Review: Interesting theme
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2013
Kindle Freebie. I picked up this and others on my sweep for free books that aren't from Christian authors (harder than you may think). It was an interesting read. Haze's back story was good, but then he went flat. Denver was likable as was Moses (hmmm?) and Val. Good glitch moment that could explain Christian myth; also part Matrix-y. The Author said he really liked Jensy - I actually found the 'he he hak', or whatever, a bit annoying. He and Cobalt were tossed in early and I was all WTF is this line - but it makes sense later. The dialogue and action were good in spurts, but some more editing would help flesh out this piece. I wonder if Londeners have different grammar rules, but I had a hardish time with some sentence structures. Overall - liked it