Review: Two stories okay . . .
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 13, 2014
Immortal OpsI didn’t like that it started off with Peren pining for someone else.  On the other hand, I loved Captain Luke.  I loved his in charge dominant nature.  The story took action right away and Luke was immediately protective of Peren.  The mating, plot and conclusion made this a good story.  I am moving on to the next installment.Critical IntelligenceRio is a womanizer.  I feel after you meet your mate you shouldn’t even think about other women or men in a sexual way.  Also, Missy is giving him a really hard time to even attempt to get to first base with her.  Missy is way too friendly with her ex-lover (Eadan).  What they called dancing together was more like foreplay on the dance floor.  I don’t care of this story; Rio is a man ho but wants to get violent if Missy talks about a past lover.  When he finds out she’s not human and works for PSI, he starts throwing accusations at her.  I don’t like him at this moment.  I almost stopped reading while they were at the safe house; Rio is an a hole.  I didn’t care for the sex scenes, Rio likes to ram it.  Could we give more thought to our significant other’s physical pleasure please?  I don’t like their relationship; Rio keeps putting his foot in his mouth about his past women and hurting Missy’s feelings.  But then she forgives him pretty quickly and they have sex.  At this point, I stopped reading the story and went to the next one hoping it was better.  I started Radar Deception then felt I had gaps in this story because I didn’t complete Critical Intelligence.  So, I figured I would skim through the rest of this book.  I was happy to read about Missy kicking some butt and showing the guys what she’s made of.  Rio and Missy’s relationship got better after some clearing up about their past.  Although, when Rio ask her to no longer see Eadan (past lover) she basically told him don’t make me choose because you will lose.  Some mate she is…Not!!Radar DeceptionMelanie and Green felt an instant connection when she and her friends were kidnapped by the I-Ops for their protection.  Despite this, she had sex with Green’s brother Lance.  I don’t like this right off the bat.  Now that Lance is out of the picture, the author is trying to make Melanie out to be a good girl who is worthy of Green.  But the fact still remains that she is a ho who couldn’t keep her legs closed with men in the past and she just made it worse by doing his brother.  On top of all that, she has two souls occupying her body.  Melanie and Elizabeth, Green’s dead wife from fifty years ago.  I’m officially disgusted.  I can no longer read this story.  I will try the next one, hopefully it’s much better.Strategic VulnerabliltyI didn’t expect much from this story, because who wants to read about a were-rat!  When I think of shifters, I think of Lions, Tigers, Panthers and Leopards…all the alpha dominant creatures.  Well lets just say, I was wrong about this story.  I think this one was the best in the series.  I loved Wilson’s instant protective instinct towards his mate.  I loved that they both wanted to protect each other from their imprisonment.  You could feel the deep connection between the two main characters.  This was a good story and definitely kept me interested.