Review: I was hoping for more
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2013
Let me start saying that the plot is really promising. When I first read the blurb I was anxious to read Picture Perfect. Who doesn't like to read a good romance about a rock star falling in love for a 'normal' girl?But unfortunately the book didn't match my expectations. The author needs a good team of beta readers and editor to help her take her work to the next level.Here are the things that they could have pointed out to the author:1. The main characters are too perfect and there's no real conflict in this story. Don't get me wrong, I'm a fan of Happy endings, but I believe that the Happy Ending must be achieved. The characters must "suffer" to get to that point. And is obligation of the author to get the readers along to the ride. Everything was already there chewed and spit on a plate. It was hard to feel connected to them2. Flynn's POV. I thought I was inside of a teenage girl's mind. Such a turned off.3. Towards the ending of the book, the author throwed in our way a bunch of characters, from another series,that aren't relevant to the story itself. And she never bothered to introduce them to her new readers.4. There. Are. Too. Many. Emphasized. Words. TOO. MANY. It was annoying.5. Flynn is a rockstar but we never see this side of him. He could as well be a teacher.6. The sex scenes were repetitiveI will not read the next book of the series. Not because I don't believe that the author could do better but because the threesome aspect of it don't do much for me.