Review: One Very Scattered Chapter
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2014
Very immature, juvenile lit sounds as though it were written by an eighth grade drop out.  Poor grammar throughout, very disjointed story line, for example;  all in one paragraph, the illegitimate triplets were 3 years old, then suddenly, 5 years old.  One of numerous mistakes throughout this chapter.  Sounds like an overly dramatic story concocted in the imagination of a very immature and uneducated teenager.  This first chapter was free.  There is no way that I would pay to read chapter two.