Review: Needs the services of a U.S. based editor!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2014
This has a compelling plot with unexpected twists, but only worthy of three stars because of the European style of English and colloquial phrases that are awkward for American readers to grasp—especially the use of “whilst,” “learnt,” and “amongst.” A copyeditor based in the United States would greatly improve the readability of this novel.The superhuman feats preformed by Mark Cole toward the conclusion are a bit much. The impossible magnet trick along the outside of the C-130 could have been omitted and with the prevailing winter weather conditions he would have frozen his ass off!!!Enjoy often... John