Review: More dysfunctional than romantic......
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 2, 2011
This story was so not for me!  I downloaded the free chapters and enjoyed meeting Becca and her new friends Ally and Billie, but when I downloaded the whole story and kept reading, the romance became disappointing and the ending - tragic.SpoilersBecca and her friends unknowingly call a ghost named Alastor into Becca's new home.  Alastor was killed by his wife 100 years ago after returning from war mentally scarred and drowning his memories in alcohol and women.  Becca discovers that she looks like Alastor's wife and can remember their courting and murdering him.  She falls in love with his ghost and her feelings for Alastor prevent her from falling for a real boy named Jonah from school.This romance is dysfunctional on so many levels that it really was agony to read.  Even though Jonah's character was not flushed out very well, I was still wanting Becca to choose him and for Alastor to give her up.  Although Becca's longing for Alastor was romantic at times, the pure weirdness of loving a ghost she could never touch and Alastor's obsessive behavior over her was not.  Really, I thought that maybe Alastor's ghost just needed to be forgiven by Becca's body and he would find peace in death.  Then Becca would be able to refocus her own feelings on to Jonah, who seems like a great guy, and live her own life.  After all, it has been 100 years, she is not the same Becca that Alastor feel in love with anyways.  Not. What. Happens.  In the end, I just felt sorry for Jonah who was going to be hurt again by these two dysfunctional people that I really don't even like.This story had many misspelled words (ex: take for talk)that do lend to some momentary confusion. I never take off for editing, just warning those who can't take bad editing.Would I/Did I buy it? Yes (.99)Would I read it again? NoWould I recommend it to friends? No