Review: Not worth the money paid
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 8, 2011
I liked the first few pages of this, then I kept running into the kind of grammatical and spelling errors I would find in a fanfiction by an inexperienced writer.  The one that was the last straw:  gravelling instead groveling.The story has almost direct quotes from Twilight by Stephenie Meyer: "You don't know how long I've waited for you."  Ugh.It's another story where the narrator speaks to all this time that's passed but in reality it's been less than a week or two.  Things that should be dealt with in detail are glossed over.  The other reviews speak to how it's a great story etc, but I just don't see it.  Maybe it'll get better, but there are so many other books to be read out there that are good that I can't spend the time hoping this one will get better.