Review: Changful
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2014
This story started off wonderfully. It was engaging, had a funny story, and the characters were well developed. Everything was moving along: an accidentally sent email and the ensuing "disaster" but that's where things went wrong. It became so fast paced as to loose the story and the characters completely. All of a sudden Lex claims love for Jess and he for her and wham-o he's the perfect man no longer the rabid horn-dog that he described himself as. What happened? The transformation of a "perfect woman" can have on a floundering man I guess.Now if that were the only problem I would have given it at least two stars because with editing and some story expansion it could be a really good novel but there are more and more problems that crop up throughout the story. The author does not distinguish when the viewpoints change and there is rapid shifting during a single conversation. It's disorienting and prevents me from getting into the story because I am spending so much time trying to not only figure out who is talking but who is thinking what.The whole thing was terrible all around and I won't be reading anything else from this author.