Review: okay read for free book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 14, 2013
I got this book months ago for free and did not read it until now. For being a free book, it was okay. I don't think I could recommend someone paying for it though. my main two problems were:-the chapters were very short and jumped between the male and female lead characters. I felt disorentiated at times from the jumping as it would back track moments or long into the story, so there was ALOT of retelling.-the end just happeneds. It is like it is missing a chapter or something. The action is building, and then just stops. I know this is a technique in YA lit to have cliff-hangers, but unless you are really good at it, don't do it. And indie authors have to be especially wary because there are not the editing support staff to make it work. Even in big publisher books, sometimes it does not work. It leaves the reader feeling cheated. I just paid for this book (I didn't for this one, but it is no longer free, so anyone buying it should know) and then it is not a complete story and the author expects me to pay to finish the book by buying the next one.my rating is a 3 because I got it free- otherwise I would have rated it lower.