Review: Return to Bryn Mairwyn
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 10 21, 2013
This short story is so well written that not enough can be said on its quality.  The only thing wrong is it should be a novel.  It could pick up from where it left off and become a classic in dragon lore.I picked it to read because it was short, but also based on the title.  I am intrigued by legends coming from the U.K.'s history whether Celtic or LOTR, and dragon lore is always fascinating.  Due to the clipart silhouette of the dragon I wasn't surprised where it lead, but how it got there was truly skillful writing and a joy to read.The only questions left unanswered for this short is where Desmond was returning from and why he had left.  The way the story is written the question of why he was returning home and why it was so difficult for him was yet to be answered.  It opens the door for continuation.  It ended after Chapter Three.  Add a very short break-in or introductory prologue of some event or conversation in the past, or the event of his decision to return then continue with Chapter 4 and the novel would be off and running.It would be too easy to tell about this short story and leave too many spoilers.  I think it best to allow the readers to be as enthralled as I was and as excited about learning more of Desmond and his life.  I hope if it should become a novel I find it.  I would own the book on this one.  It's a keeper.