Review: Has Potential, Worth the Read--Expect More From the Author
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2013
I have mixed feeling about this book.  There are many things I liked about it.  To start with, the story is good, keeps your interest, solid action and I like the length--it is a book not a fluffed up short story.  The editing is poor but not that distracting (I expect the editing will improve over time and I'm not a frustrated writer looking for a reason to bad mouth a book).  I will buy the next installment from this author.  The book has plenty of action and science.  My disappointment in the author comes from the less than artful sex scene and needless (juvenile) references to female features.  It was unnecessary and detracted from an otherwise good story.