Review: erotic menage: fab scenes, poor plot
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2014
Modern day setting, a woman moves into a house between two hot werewolves who want her. This is the sort of menage where there is no conflict between the two guys, and she is befuddled by the whole paranormal aspect. Strong and convincing attraction between her and the guys.Most of the erotic scenes are excellent, as are a variety of other interludes. (Ironically, the best of the erotica is MF.) The overall plot development suffers by comparison; don't expect much from the plot, or how we get from point A to point B, or the climax, or the great paranormal reveal. My gestalt opinion is that the author has strong potential but rushed to publish. She needs to spend lots more time revising and editing and improving her books, until the whole thing is as good as the free intro.