Review: Tempest Rise
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2013
Story is excellent and I would love to have given this 4 or 5 stars.  However, insufficient punctuation and grammatical errors detract from a good book--a good story dragged down by a lack of proofreading.  It is obvious that a spell check was done as its proofread; there are virtually no spelling errors.  When you are re-reading sentences twice, so the brain can correct the errors and extract the meaning, the story becomes tiresome and detracts from a book with a unique plot and good character development.  Even the storyline would benefit/tighten up with good proofreading.  Please get someone to proofread this story to reduce the number of errors--it deserves a much better rating than I can give it at this time!!!