Review: The start of a very erotic journey
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 14, 2012
I'm very glad that I started reading this story!  I wasn't able to give this a 5 star rating which I will explain below but first I want to talk about what I enjoyed.First of all, I know each section of the overall story costs $.99 a piece once you get past the first one (which I did get for free) but honestly that doesn't bother me.  Personally I feel like each volume is worth that and once it's complete I really won't feel bad about the amount I've spent on it.  I mean really it's a buck a month basically, no complaints here.Erotica is by the far the most dominant theme is this book.  It's not really about the characters or storyline so much as it is about lots and lots of kinky sex.  I went into this story expecting nothing less.  When I want to read erotica, I want to read erotica.  Not relationship drama, not romance, not a love story.  That is exactly what this story is about.  If you're looking for something deep and emotional this is definitely not the story for you.  I basically rated this story a 4 because it's exactly what I was looking for as far as really steamy and graphic sex but it lost that last star because of a couple things that while I was able to get past, still bothered me slightly.First of all, Brie is only 22.  How can you expect to know really anything about yourself for sure at that age?  But she goes to submissive training where she basically decides that she is indeed a submissive, even though she's really almost entirely inexperienced when it comes to sex.  If all I really knew was bad sex and submissive sex then yeah, I'd decide I was a submissive too, but really there are so many different experiences to be had that it kind of sucks to see a 22 year old put herself into that box so early on.  I'm not saying anything bad about people that age, I'm just saying on a psychological level most women aren't going to have any idea what kind of sex they are going to like at that age since most women don't even hit their real sexual prime and heightened libido until almost 30.  I appreciate the effort Brie takes in stepping out of her comfort zone to try something different but it just seems like she is allowing this school to define who she is and I kind of have a little bit of a problem with Sir who slightly seems like he is taking advantage of a naive and sexually uneducated individual.My second somewhat negative comment is around the complete lack of safe sex in this story.  I guess I can't say that I know for sure that none of these men are wearing condoms but it would definitely make the whole idea of a submissive school a little more realistic if they talked about a guy actually wearing a condom for sex every once in a while, especially when you're talking about so many different partners like this story does.In conclusion let me say that I really have been enjoying this story, despite my comments above.  It's very sexy and definitely anything other than vanilla.  Those things listed above are a couple annoyances for me but really nothing that affects the overall story (which is sex, sex, sex, and...uh...oh yeah more sex).  I am going to continue to read about Brie's kinky journey because I've enjoyed it but if you have a problem with any of the items listed in the disclaimer below then I definitely would not suggest this story.Disclaimer:  story contains anal play, oral sex, extreme dominant/submissive situations, self love, sex toys (including plugs and whips), video taping of self pleasure, sex with strangers, sex with multiple partners (not at the same time).