Review: Very disjointed.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
I'm still shaking my head.  The story was not told well at all.  I get its a gritty biker book, but with all the swearing, better stories lines, phrases and explanations would have really helped in lieu of the swearing.  Also, this version was the edited version, claiming to have been edited for errors, when in fact there were still a lot.SMALL SPOILERSAlong with the typos, wrong names are used in a scene.  From one sentence to the next and I sat there thinking, what she just goes and hits her best friend in the nose when the sentence before she was in a ball with a club whore?Then the h has 2 dogs that are mentioned very randomly throughout the story and while some may not like those side line stories, my problem is that the the h moves from several homes thru the story and arrangements for these large animals are never discussed, but are conveniently located at the house she was in when an attack on her was made and the dogs were there to help her.Then there is this weird thing with the sex scenes at the get-go...most of the time the H's pants are never mentioned being taken off and he is just there in her and what makes it weird for me is that the author takes note to mention the removal of the clothes in most of the scenes, but only the h's.  Only the cut and shirt get taken off most of the time.  It's weird.  I've never read any sex scenes like it.So, I mean I've read worse, hence the 2 stars, but with the examples above and other issues, I was just wanting to get thru the book so I can choose another.I won't be reading more in this series and I won't be reading any more from this author as it is very amateur  writing at best.