Review: Good first try
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2014
I liked this book. There was one spelling mistake, but the grammatical errors and punctuation flaws were non-existent which made this book a pleasure to read. Two things I wished more of: a little bit more feel/emotional connection in the love scenes and a bit more of a break/transition between scenes (for example: you would be reading a scene in the restaurant and the next paragraph would be at a totally different scene). This latter did not take away from the overall story, but it was a bit jarring. Overall, good plot, minimal drama, and I knew instantly what would become Pamela's "story conflict". Give it a shot.