Review: It Was Just Ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 19, 2011
This short story had a lot of potential, but overall it was just "okay."  The author gets you going for the first half of the short story, then it seems like there is a hurry-up-and-finish drive to the end which left a lot of unanswered questions.  I felt like I had wasted my five minutes reading this one.As I type this review, this short story is free in the Amazon Kindle store - it might be worth a shot, and the pricing would certainly be right, and you might even enjoy it.  However, if they do start charging for this one I would strongly recommend passing it up as there are way too many good short stories out there.