Review: I liked the Concept
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2013
I liked the story and love dragons so the idea of a dragon shifter immediately caught my attention. What I truly loved is that he was bound to her via the tattoo. I liked all of the initial interaction between Liam and Ronnie, but admit the falling in love 5 minutes after cursing Devon out regarding his assigning a dragon to her in the first place with no real explanation as to why was off. I think this could have been written better if the idea of him and the attraction was given more time to develop. Another day or two with more interaction between them especially emotionally to show the falling in love would have been less rushed than what actually happened. He was supposed to be a cold, unfeeling black warrior dragon....I can see him falling fast and hard with exposure to the right woman and Ronnie was stronger than most teenagers with the home life she led. It just felt a little forced at how quickly she changed her tune about him. Also, there are some grammatical errors that need to be corrected that were a little distracting.