Review: I actually enjoyed this story...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 24, 2012
but serously, editting! the first part of the book was okay. Only a few typos, the kind I make so a little more forgiveable: you when it should be your, etc. But the last part, wow. Their editor must have figured that we got that far therefore we would finish it regardless. A misplaced apostrophe changes everything! We'll and Well mean very different things, as in demanding "We'll have you" when asking if they have seen her. Rampant confusion by the author over the difference between your and you're. This story does show  promise though, despite timeline discrepancies. Good first effort. Imaginative story. Interesting hero.