Review: A Little Work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2013
So, I haven't finished the book yet, but I will update the review when I am done. The book has a good premise, but I think it needs work. In the book you go into too much detail into simple things that don't need explaining. You also use the word for to much and the way you use it is strange, no sure if its a cultural thing or not.  Also, there is a part in the book about the bread tree that switches talking about the pastor to talking about the lead character. You really need to correct this. Again I will update once I have completed the entire book. I rarely write reviews and hope that this constructive criticism will be taken as such (constructive).