Review: Good story, but needs editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 20, 2013
Normally I'm not picky about editing or grammar in a book. However, this book has so many editing errors in just the first chapter alone. It was very distracting when I was trying to read the story. Half the sentences don't have periods at the end; or commas to make the sentence make more sense. And the different people talking is in quotes right next to each other in the same paragraph.  So you have to re-read the paragraph to figure out who said what.That being said, I did enjoy the story. If an updated version is released that fixes the editing problems I would probably read it again.