Review: it's not the length; it's the lack of planning
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 27, 2012
Everyone understands that a short story is very brief, but that does not excuse the utter lack of development exhibited here. Barbosa could have done a better job bridging the second chapter with the first so that the rest of the story had some credibility. She didn't, and therefore, this just turns out to be hogwash. As usual, she fills up the rest of the download with excerpts of some of her novellas, some are actually good. However, this is a complete waste of time and does not follow through on the originality of the premise of the story.This takes 10-15 minutes to read, which means that it's a waste of 10-15 minutes as it does nothing extraordinary nor add any excitement to the those minutes. Don't waste your time because there are better written novellas that do offer enjoyment.