Review: really good but short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2014
This story would make a good Lifetime Movie. It's very good, and I enjoyed the development of most of the characters. However, it is hard to believe Sarah would go so far as to set up the crimes that develop. Her husband was strict, but he wasn't abusive. She was weird, but she wasn't psychotic. The ending didn't leave me satisfied, but the author did a nice job of tying up the loose ends. What bothered me was that David did not mention the cigarette butts or the sand on his mom's slippers. However, it must have been those things that David mentioned to the detective which led to her arrest.