Review: Nice Read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2014
This story was given to me free in exchange for an honest review.I'm kind of mixed with this read. It was written well, but there are many questions not answered.The story is about 2 men, Derak a man left with a newborn after a car accident takes the life of his fiancé, and Cole, the twin of said fiancé. I think the biggest problem is that the timeline starts two weeks after the car accident and birth of Kendick. The emotions in the story don't really coincide with great loss of only two weeks. The opening scene of Cole coming to the door and Derak fainting seeing a male version of his dead fiancé, and then Cole goes through the house not knowing his sister is dead, not finding her and then demanding to know where his sister was was just not real. He hadn't seen his sister in five years and he storms into the house?There were also several instances where back story was needed. Places where Cole eluded to something happening in his past and then us readers never finding out what that was. There wasn't much said between the characters about the woman who just died and whom they both supposedly loved. Didn't Cole want to know what his very much loved twin was like these past 5 years that he gave her up for? So there were definately some problems in the story. And as I said if the story timeline was a few years later I don't think it would have mattered as much. And what about the people who adopted Gillian, where was their remorse, and they didn't ask Cole any questions about their childhood and why Gillian had never mentioned him. They seemed like great people, but what the heck?Besides what I have stated I thought this was a nice read. I liked the way the MC's got along after their initial meeting.This just left me with too many questions at the end.