Review: Really good first book!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 21, 2013
For a first published novel I was impressed, I think if this author explores her talent she will go far.Things I liked:1) that we didn't know what Kira was until quite a way into the book2) that we kept finding out new things about Kira, and toward the end even she was finding out new things about herself with us3) this author had her own take on the werewolf thing (born not made/changed)Things I think could be explored more:1) she touched on Jay's anger about his mums death but I think as an aggressive alpha and a male this was a little too mellow2) I think the pack thing was good but I have read better, the best books for pack life I think are the Phoenix Pack series, I don't like the excessive language and over kinky bits so much in those but the way the pack interact is great and the alpha men are truly aggressive, protective and possessive in those books - it sends a shiver down your spine at times!  Maybe the author could explore these as research3) Kira challenges Jay a bit but I think this should get bolder as they explore their relationship in the next book, she can get bolder as she learns who she is and as Jay gets more alpha, it's those heat exchanges that build the intensity of dynamics in the characters of a bookOther things:1) there was a bit of bad grammar to fix - small things though like 'you' instead of 'your' and things like that2) I would like to see more of the 'others' in the next book, witches, fae, vampires, other shifters etc which can be bought in easily with Jay stepping up3) a little more intensity added to the general story would build things nicely, some bits were a good idea but didn't quite come across as well as they could haveOverall an excellent first published book, I can't wait for the second.  A contact for the author would be good, web page or Facebook or something or somewhere to find out when the next book is coming out, I would like to follow this author and see where she goes.