Review: Not that good of a read.......
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2013
I was looking for something new to read, came across this book. From the book description to the cover, I thought it would be interesting. Well, this story didn't do it for me and I really wanted to like this story, but it failed.The story is a bit slow, a little action in the beginning, but nothing that will make you want to dive in and stay up reading all night. This thing or relationship between Londell and Vicki wasn't thought out well. One minuet she's recovering from what happened to her and the next minuet she's sitting on his lap calling him baby. While reading, I didn't feel the emotion or any intensity between the two characters; never! Vicki describes her feelings for him, but the story is lacking build up, affection and inspiration to allow the readers to also fall in love. I usually fall in love with the characters, but Londell, I feel like I hardly know him and he's like the main character. I didn't get the chance to like him or dislike him. Don't get me wrong, the words are there. Both characters express how they feel for each-other, but there's nothing behind the words, because the story gives you no passion.Londell saves her, then trains her to be this different person. They have sex and after sex, Vicki wakes up the next morning thinking about her feelings for Londell and finds herself entertaining the "idea" of giving him a shot at a date???? Didn't she just have sex with him the night before???The story continues to drag all the way to the very end. I skipped through this story a lot, because it was a bit boring. I usually don't write many reviews, but I had to for this one, because I was a bit disappointed. I feel like this story could have been great. The editing is good, but sadly the story fell flat, because it was missing  important readers interests, which are passion and suspense. A reader needs one or the other, as for me, I need both. Hopefully the authors next story will be better. Would I recommend this story to anyone; probably not.