Review: Really, really awful
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2011
So many of the other reviewers have really captured EVERYTHING that is wrong with this thing...its hard for me to even call it a book. The characters are stilted, the pacing is almost unbearable, the sentence structure is monotonous, the dialogue is cringe-worthy and even some of the vocabulary is just plain wrong. I debated panning it as it's a self-pub, but to someone else's point, we need to be real here to counteract what looks like the author's friends and family giving this awful thing five stars. It's misleading to the consumer public. Read  J.R. Ward, Lara Adrian, or Alexandra Ivy if you want good vamp books. This isn't even close. Don't waste your $0.99 or your time.