Review: Great traditions
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 18, 2012
I enjoyed the heritage that was present in this book.  I liked traveling with the characters through their family's history and the traditions that were represented here.  I think, however, that the plot needs some work.  I was mostly confused between the `then' and the `now' time frames and don't feel they were delineated enough.  I feel it's not quite `finished' and needs a good editor to correct tense and grammatical errors.Typically, I don't review books like this that I consider unfinished however, I felt this one was worth the read just for the development both character and scenes that were put into it.  I really liked reading about the traditions and ceremonies and why things are the way they are in this viewpoint.I would love the author to spend some time editing and then read it again.  I think it has huge potential to be a classic and just needs a bit of polishing.