Review: She said, he said...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2013
I will give the author credit.  I don't remember the last time I read a book that had first person female and male points of view.  It gave the book a different slant.  However, like most indie books, this needs some editing.  There are typos, words are repeated in sentences, wrong words are used, and men turn into women in the middle of a sentence. Ava refers to part of her anatomy at one point more like a guy than a woman.  There were times that Trevor came across as kind of effeminate, even though you know he is not.  He just says things that most guys would not.  Is cute a word guys use at all?  He does, several times. He also seemed a bit too good to be true.  Overall, it was a sweet story without any real obstacles to get in the way of the relationship. A decent read.