Review: Please get an editor!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2014
While the premise of the book is good, there is not much that separates this from the rest of the books in this genre. The story was ok, but felt rushed. A lot of things were expanded on far too much (the HALO jump, for example), but the assault on the bad guy's house was so short I thought I missed something.All that aside, the editing was horrible. I can overlook some misspellings, but corroded arteries instead of carotid? Shoots in place of chutes (parachute). Places where words were spelled correctly, then incorrectly in the same sentence. Grammar and punctuation messed up all over.