Review: 1 for quality, 5 for story
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 15, 2013
Don't get me wrong, the story is great.  The proof-reading, or rather lack of it, ruins the plot.  You're reading along and suddenly your brain screams "WHAT?"  You have to go back and read that sentence again, and possibly a third time to try to understand what is actually meant.  Some instances...His face was as white as chock.  ?? chock??  Presume it should be chalk.He put his arm around her waste.  ??  waste??  Why would he cuddle her garbage?Incorrect words are used constantly like 'what' instead of 'with', 'calvary' instead of 'cavalry', 'swordsmen' instead of 'swordsman', and the list goes on.I'm very surprised that Amazon would sell a book of such poor quality.