Review: Nice short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2014
Was A nice short sorry but needed to bettered proofed read. Somethings just didn't add up. Mindy was supposed to be raised by her Father and was not very domesticated so I was quite surprised when was sitting and knitting when she never had before. No one to teach her . She was a little to wimpy to be reared on a big ranch with all men. All in all was a fairly good story.