Review: Promising, but needs more fleshing out
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 12, 2011
Like other reviewers have noted, this is a rather sweet love story set in 1902 Wyoming. A bit of a misunderstanding, crossed purposes and a scary night hiding out from the bad guys. The storyline is promising, but not well fleshed out, and well...needs to be longer and the characters better developed. Opal's a bit too much of a Mary-Sue, Charlie is just too busy getting the wrong impression from everything Opal says and as for the bad guys? There are better ways to tell me they're bad than to keep using scoundrels and cutthroats.I picked this up free on Kindle, but I'd have been a bit upset if it had come out of pocket. Not a bad book by any stretch, but there just isn't enough substance here for me to rate it higher.