Review: Good Writing in Adult-Only Psychic Suspense
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 7, 2013
When a young woman, Esme, disappears during her early morning run, her parents turn to their friends to help locate her:  Dad turns to a FBI friend; Mom turns to a psychic friend.  Not believing in Isabelle's skills, the FBI profiler, Mack, works with his training and a professional team to follow clues while trying to not let the very attractive but apparently less-than-honest woman try to distract the media and young Esme's mother from helping him and themselves locate their daughter.  No ransom being demanded, the kidnapper communicates in a manner that communicates a mentally-disturbed mind, providing few assists in finding the well-liked young woman.The basic story is decent, but so much effort is put into the romantic, erotic scenes that the psychic, mystery and suspense almost seem superfluous to the tale's intent.  Though there are a few obvious grammatical issues, the writing skills are evident in the sentence construction, but the story construction is too basic and not well enough developed to reflect the polish this story deserves.  While I would recommend this for those interested in both psychic-based fiction and explicit adult material, the author might be surprised should the chance to revise the tale and really examine the opportunies make this an absolutely fantastic work of fiction.