Review: Good but Not Believable
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2014
While I did like the story, it just all seemed so weird to me.  Laura was VERY annoying with the way she jumps to conclusions without talking to Dylan and Mike.  Very immature is a better description so I just never could figure out why they wanted her so much.  I also just never really buy the whole hot, in shape guy goes for the fat girl scenario because it rarely if ever happens in real life so trying to believe 2 of those types would go for a self described fat girl was way to much to choke down on.  If a guy likes working out and staying fit, he's just not going to go for a fat girl that eats more than he does.  I liked Dylan and Mike both but I wish they would have explained their relationship better.  Not gay but partners??  I also never understood why they kept the money a secret.  There are other things I found ridiculous but I hate reading reviews where they give everything away.  I wanted to see where the author went with it all but just overall didn't believe the whole story.  I guess the fantasy of 3 for sex is ok for me but when it's written as a relationship, I just can't really buy it being real especially this scenario.  That's just my 2 cents.