Review: Seriously gross
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2011
Beck can certainly write -- there's nothing wrong with the construction and flow of the story.  It just was really, really not my thing.I didn't find anything comedic in the story of this sadly disconnected couple.  Their estrangement just seemed sad and pathetic.  Maybe they find a way to connect and mend the rift in their marriage, but this story cuts off at the teaser level and you have to pay to find out.  The toothbrush scenes were anti-erotic and the dumpster sex was just really gross.  I was expecting a bit gross, but I didn't expect "people getting garbage in their mouths" gross.As comedy, it failed for me.  As erotica, it double-failed for me.