Review: Good story, a couple areas lacking
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2013
Tis was a pretty good story, though on familiar lines with many other stories. I likes Sean and Paige as a couple, though Paige was a bit too wishy washy for my liking. My problem with Paige is that she has this man who's been a very good friend for 2 years before becoming the love of her life and some of the way she acted the way she did after being told the secret made me not like her and want Sean to move on to someone else. It's okay to freak out, but she was too much. Two areas lacked for me. Paige is assaulted in the beginning by a former tribe member who is a twin, identical, yet he didn't have the wolf gene? And if he didn't, he was bitten by Sean, but he just disappeared from e picture after he was arrested and nothing heard more about him. One, he should've already had the wolf gene since he was an identical twin and his brother was a wolf. Two, if he wasn't a twin and just a brother who didn't inherit the gene, he would've been made a wolf since Sean bit him, almost breaking his wrist off. Another area I thought lacking is that there was never a connect by Sean to the fact that he was half Indian and from that tribe. His dad was full-blood and he was mentioned in passing on how he came to separate from the pack.i thought he should've been upset at his uncle and aunt for failing to tell him about his people