Review: Plot has possibilities in this short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 9, 2013
This short story was a good read, and apparently the author had cleaned up some of the errors other reviewers have noted.  However, one huge one remains.  The author forgets who one character is and calls him by another character's name.  This should never happen with good proofreading.Spoiler:My digital edition:Loc 395.  Murdered is Lance PiersonLoc.  407  cop says Jonathan was killedLoc.  421.  back to. say Lance had his throat slit.