Review: Misleading Title & Underdevolped
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2014
This title is very misleading. I'm not even sure what the title has to do with the story.The characters were not well developed at all and didn't stand out. As I was reading the story it did seem like it was something that was written off the head as the author went along. I know alot of authors who could do this and pull it off, but this wasn't one.What is Terrence motive for wanting to take his twin brothers child? It made no sense. Like, he came out of nowhere and randomly the child was gone and then him and trina are together and it's very predictable. There were also typos here and there that made me have to reread the sentence more than i would have liked.The detective aspect was rushed to me as well and it didn't make sense that a bunch of cop came to the scene and knew what was happening, but he wasn't arrested... I understand being undercover, but the rest of them aren't. I didn't really enjoy it like I thought I would based on the name and title. It wasn't executed properly in my taste.I wouldn't read book two or three because there wasn't enough backstory or information to make this story real. For this reason I would not recommend buying book two because this one wasn't developed as properly as it could be.