Review: Good story, flawed book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2014
I've read the first two in this series and I'll probably read the third just to see if Mr. Tongue can figure out he's supposed to be writing, and not just dictating. This product is delivered as written word, but it is obviously the product of speech-to-text dictation with no editorial proofreading. This is a flaw.The product is delivered as written, but the author is not writing. So, this comes across as almost illiterate. If Mr. Tongue wants to dictate an audio novel, I would be interested in listening to it. But, one more of these  computer-generated, speech-to-text goof-ups will end it for me. Bad grammar, bad word choice, etc., etc.Good story though. Too bad about the ugly "writing."