Review: Great storyline and worldbuilding  - 4.5
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2012
I loved this book! Great action and the storyline and characters were well written. Melina Dmitros is the Captain of a starship. The Alliance has just entered into an agreement with the Prime one of the oldest species in space and Melina has just received a call for help from a Prime star cruiser. Going to their help she finds the priate ship dead in space with minimal emergency life support but has to board the Prime ship because she cannot contact them. The priates have boarded the Prime ship Galanti and are trapped by the Prime warriors but the prime warriors are also trapped in their engine room and defending their ship from the pirates.Melina is very knowledgeable of Prime history and has also learned their language from her parents. Melina leads a team into the Prime ship and secures the docking bay. Working her way through the maintenance ducts she is able to reach the prime crew and help rescue the ship - more importantly the Captain of the Galanti recognizes her as his mate and that she is actually a Prime citizen herself.There were many grammatical errors, extra words added but the story was so engrossing they weren't too annoying. I loved the premise and enjoyed the story.