Review: ok with some rewording
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2013
overall this is a cute story, however one line reads as an inuendo (can't recall it exactly but something like 'his nuts were falling off' in referenc to a pecan pie)  not the end of the world i can rephrase it (with preschool and school age boys the way written would not work)