Review: Good Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 21, 2013
This was a good story awkwardly told. The first rule of new relationships is "Don't talk about your ex." This couple talked about nothing but. I skipped whole paragraphs of negatives. Then, all of sudden, the story switched narrators and we saw his side for a few moments then back to her. I expected this to be two-sided but that was it. One brief sideshow and not another word. The biggest problem was stumbling dialogue. I hope the author will read this out loud someday and see how silly it sounds. This story desperately cried for an editor to clean up the mistakes of an inexperienced author. Perhaps someday the prose will match the imagaination.