Review: Incredibly boring book; whiny heronine; banal story
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 21, 2012
Can't fathom all the 5 star reviews.  I ended up skimming the last half of the book, which would have been better served if a good editor whittled down the *endless* pages of narrative description and moved the plot along with action and snappy dialogue.  Non stop descriptions of what the characters were thinking got old really fast, and I could not bring myself to like heroine - she was whiny and selfish. The plot was of course predictable - girl doesn't tell boyfriend she was pregnant until years later, he finds out he's a dad, gets angry at the girl, forgives her... and then they ride off into the sunset.The one redeeming feature of this book was that for a free read, the grammar, spelling and vocabulary mistakes were not nearly as bad as they usually are in books of this type.