Review: not the best example of the series
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2013
I'm a long-time fan of fluffy sci fi (various types of space opera, some of the space mil fic, etc.), and of this series. Further, I generally like the idea of releasing novellas (or chapbooks), such as the previous one "welcome home, go away". This one, however, doesn't seem like it was adequately and objectively reviewed and revised before publishing it.  There are fairly fundamental rough edges (apparent timing issues, anachronistic elements, POV issues, etc.).  The author can write well; I think he's reasonably talented.  This is simply not very well polished. And the price seems too high for what one gets. Something this short, disposable, and not terribly well written might be a value somewhere between free (to spur sales of the series) and 99 cents.