Review: Nice love story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2012
I enjoyed this story. I liked that max was patient for years, waiting for lily to be old enough. However, she wasn't old enough to be drinking champagne on her wedding ight, as far as the law is concerned. Lol. Lily came across as naive and I liked her I experience. I found it. Lil funny the extremes that max was willing to go to in order to keep her "chaste". All in all I enjoyed this story.I would however advise the editor to watch for grammatical and spelling errors.