Review: Interesting Concept in Fantasy
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2014
The first thing that struck me about this short book is that it is written in first person with a present perspective.  That means it transports you to Immortaland in the here and now.  Descriptions of the realm are detailed and any person that enjoys video games will enjoy it because it acts like you are entering a magical video game with wizards and heroes that can have their hearts desire.  There is very little dialog in the book, but the author does an excellent job of descriptive writing. It takes you from place to place with the main character, a bewinged, male hero personage, where each location has a different attribute as if you were moving around a video game. It takes a few pages to get used to the point of view, but once you do, you will find you are eager for someone to develop this book into a game.