Review: Not bad for a first time effort.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2014
Natalie was a racist snob, that was pretty much the impression I got from this story.  She was not very likeable and her reasoning was very flawed.  Brandon seemed incapable of making a decision and they were both very quick to judge the other harshly.  The story itself needed a lot of editing and their were issues with continuity. I see there is a sequel but honestly I cannot read anymore.  The ending *spoiler alert* was pretty stupid since they had both professed to be too busy to have a child yet neither took steps to prevent pregnancy.