Review: not bad; left open ended though.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2014
Um, it was a solid story but felt more like a first draft to me. Besides a few typos, there just seemed to be too many holes that could have been filled if the writer had just gone back and edited a few more times. That and the sex scenes seemed almost forced into this suspenseful story. The sex should always be eased into seamlessly unless it's forced or what have you, but reading this it felt like there was the story, and then it was , 'oh, they should have sex now.' It just didn't come off as natural.