Review: Staccato
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2014
I really wish I could give this a better rating, but I feel cheated in light of some books I have read in this genre. The love connection between Heath and Sam was hard to believe. I don't feel the chemistry. Even though Sam tried to let us know how it is between them, I just don't get it. The dialogues were lame. The POV sometimes can be confusing. The storyline has potential, but it came flat. The book need some editing. One time the author used 'principals' instead of 'principle'. There are many more. Sometimes it is hard to know who is talking and who is being addressed. The role of some secondary characters were undiscernible. I wonder why they are written in, like Sam's bed buddy.The plot is too generic without anything to distinguish it from hundreds of such in the market today.