Review: Should have been better
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 28, 2013
Time Flying was a very imaginative, creative effort. Be aware that there will be at least one more in the series. The ending is confusing and abrupt and needs more explanation. There are many typos e.g., thill for thrill, sailers for sailors, songs for sons, sodtly for softly, to name a few. A spell checker could have caught most of these and a grammar checker also was needed. The author had a case of "dyslexic phrasing" where word order was reversed or confused. In addition there was one very unnecessary anti-Semitic rant where he compared Jesus to Palestinian terrorists as opposed to Israeli bulldozer drivers. In fact, since Jesus was Jewish, he got the analogy wrong.In spite of these problems and a bit too much description of airforce battles, it was a good novel and kept my interest. I will be buying the next book.