Review: Overdone drama and not enough romance
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2013
The storyline wasn't focused on one or two characters but multiple characters and storylines going at the same time so much like a soap opera.  It was like a whole room of people talking at once and my first response was to tune them all out.  What was really tiring is reading the same repetitive information about what was taking place with each character as input by every character's thoughts. The word "crossroad" was used eight times within the book -- once or twice would suffice.  Character descriptions are really important at the beginning of a story to establish each character's look but when it is repeated over and over again it's just extra words.  (e.g. The description of Angie's "long brown hair" was described again at the 50 percent marker of Kindle book.)  Can't she just brush her hair?  The "Fab Four" usage I won't even bother mentioning how many redundant times it was used.I think I'll be sticking with the Laurel Heights series by Kate Perry for my contemporary romance fix.There were some sentence punctuation errors in the Kindle download but they could be fixed quite quickly.