Review: Yawn.....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 16, 2013
This is the second in a series Lucas and Victoria's story. First of all, the editing, word, tense use, and grammar are really bad. I suspect either the author uses English as a second language or doesn't have a basic grammar or spelling check on their computer.Second, it's not a bad storyline (I love sci-fi) it's just kind of hum drum and the dialogue is kind of stilted. Lucas is somewhat superficial, harsh, and mean one minute then in love and protective the next. Seriously he yells stuff at Victoria like shut up, don't f@%#ing touch me and then he's making up for his temper. The steamy scenes were bland.I am having a hard time finishing this I am almost done and don't really care to keep going. Her other two books were better. Grim was her best one, but really none of them were great, just mildly entertaining. I think I am done with this author, time to move on.