Review: Just a mess
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
This story is awkward. The boy likes soccer and he gets a new puppy that somehow manages to push the boy's soccer ball through a little hole in the fence. Then the boys is sad and offended, not a great story for any kid that will be getting a new dog. There is no real plot in the story. The whole thing is full of mistakes, both grammatical and in the punctuation. The book needs some serious revision by a good editor. I am only giving it two stars for the pictures which were actually cute. Anything else, just a mess. Is the story about soccer or about taking care of your dog. You will be just as confused as me.