Review: Steamy
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2014
Khai L. Bayne has weaved a creative paranormal story with all the elements to capture your attention—suspense, high emotions, sexy (Oh, yeah), steamy (Oh, my God), heat scorching sizzling where you burn and blush like you need to jump in the cold waters off the coast of Alaska (Hell, yeah) and nail biting tension. I loved Artisyn’s strong alpha female character and how she commanded her team of four men both inside and outside the bedroom. I felt for Theodore who was trying to right his wrong with Artisyn, and I was sad that life didn’t work to his advantage.As far as the writing, there are areas for improvement. Throughout the book there were either words missing or repeated in the same sentence. This tends to slow down a reader. Another proof of the book would be well warranted. There were also instances where there were several people in a scene and at times I couldn’t tell who was where. Some characters even appeared out of nowhere and I had to go back a few pages to see what they were doing or where they came from.Overall, I’m interested in the next book as the ending indicates. Finally, I was extremely moved by the dedication of this book. Authors do put in an enormous amount of heart and soul into their writing and it’s the people around them that ride their journey with them.This book is not for the faint-of-heart. So reader take note of the author’s warning.