Review: ENOUGH WITH THE APPETIZERS...IT'S TIME FOR THE MAIN COURSE!!!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 19, 2013
Normally, I would not even consider reading a novel or novella which is a mere 26-30 pages; however, I was drawn to this story of Malaya and Jared a few months back on AllRomance.com. So naturally, when I saw there was a part two on Amazon, I decided to purchase it.This story is about a twisted relationship between the hero Jared and two sisters. This story has the potential to be great, but if it is not handled with care, it can become "sordid and creepy". The author is travelling a very fine line by allowing the hero to traverse the sheets of two sisters. This is a plot that can "creep" even the most liberal person out. However, the story is still at a point where the hero can be salvaged, providing he does the right thing and call his wedding off.Having opined about the plot; now it is time to take a look at the method that the author, Ms. Cole has chosen to deliver her novel... "In drips". Ms. Cole, at this rate, your novel will cost more than some full scale novels by the time you are finished.  And quite frankly... I find that unacceptable!If you want to be a serious author, you need to take the time and complete this novel. Give us a completed story in one novel.  You have an interesting plot to work with, providing you do not continue to cross the proverbial tangle web with the two sisters. This novel can certainly be your launching pad... if done correctly.Currently, the interracial romance genre is blooming with talented authors. You too can join the ranks of the great, but you have to put the work in. Give your readers something to talk about and we will reward you with positive reviews, and also  recommend your novel to our fellow interracial romance lovers on various forums. You will see the fruits of your labor come to fruition; however, if you insist on serving up appetizers, I will have to take my main course ELSEWHERE.