Review: Seriously. Rewrite this draft and republish.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2013
Story line? - fine. Needed good editor in addition to proofing. Way too loose.  Tighten this up.Tenses shift back and forth in the same sentence. Constantly, but not consistantly. It appears the author wrote everything in future tense for outlining, then tried to shift to present or past tense. Author needs to put current projects on hold and rewrite this. While I enjoyed the series I am not sure I want to struggle through another book with this level of disarray.