Review: Good story, poor editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 16, 2013
It's a good story, a bit strange in places and the editing is pretty bad.  There are several spelling and grammar mistakes, not enough spacing between moving from one time frame to another and it can get a bit confusing. Lalla is trying to find out who murdered a homeless guy and puts her own life in danger with her snooping as she is one of the suspects - at least for one of the cops, her boyfriend keeps trying to get her to say yes to his proposal and her dad has decided to rekindle his own love life and she is trying to run a business - busy girl! There are other books in this series, but I won't buy them, if they turn up on my free list I might get them, but the editing is so bad it has put me off.