Review: So-so
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2012
Convissar creates a good set-up for a story and then just ends it.  Between all the technical details of dental work and the dentist reminiscing about the past, there isn't a whole lot happening in this story.  What is happening could be described a little better (on the first page, the tongue ring - which actually sounds more like a stud - is described as being "cheap" and then a few pages later, we're told that it doesn't look cheap at all).Overall, I felt as if it was so-so.