Review: Sweet enough romance...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 17, 2013
So many things didn't add up in this book it made it hard to reach that place where I could suspend disbelief and enjoy the characters. For instance, his son was 16. One place in the book mentions that she had been 17 while his wife was pregnant with the oldest son. That would put the heroine's age, at the very least 32 years  old. But she goes on to say no one has ever touch her with such care, after he touched her cheek, and she never before felt lust or longing. REALLY!?! And she's in her thirties, not 15? That's either incredibly weird or incredibly sad. Especially since everyone with a pulse seems to think she's the hottest thing to ever hit the town. All males between 12 and 112 can't keep their eyes off her. Her relationship with the hero is  a bit off, too. She supposedly hated him, but within 3 days was "all over that" and making out with him like a teenager, which it actually felt like she was a teenager rather than a female executive in her thirties. I wish the people were developed better and the children were more than just props. I give it solid two roller...meaning I would roll my eyes in annoyance at least twice a chapter. But since it wasn't twice a page, I give the book three stars. I did continue reading it. But if two and a half was an option, I'd probably go there. After looking at the other reviewer's reviews, it would appear that someone enlisted a fan club to review this book. When the majority of reviewers have 2 or more books by the same author and just a few reviews, there's a better than average chance they're either paid for or solicited. I find this extraordinarily annoying, so I took off a star for that.