Review: Not Trapped by Demon Trap - Overly
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2013
Demon Trap is the fourth book in the Demon Girl series and so far, this has been the most disappointing. Demon girl, Keeley is just not as personable and interesting here as she is in the first three books.It's as though the author is just trying to crank out the books as fast as possible without putting much thought effort into the task. I've heard say that a good story writes itself. It seems that the author just let this story run away on it's own without direction. The story just runs on and on without any point at all.There are numerous editing and spelling errors; many more than in the previous three books. The author's use of the word 'overly' is still irritating and completely unnecessary in it's use. The trick is to say what you mean without using words that have no place in forwarding the thought. 'Overly' doesn't fit. Stop it!In spite of this, I still like the theme of the books and for a YA audience it works... I just think the author can do better for his/her paying fans.