Review: Platypire Reviews
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2014
I was given this book by the author in exchange for an honest review.First of all, this book was not at all what I was expecting.  Although that isn't necessarily a bad thing, but the synopsis is missing the whole "teenagers caught in a drug ring" bit.  Seeing as this is a YA novel, that's kinda important.  Especially for the parents that are more strict over what their child reads.For this being his first book, I was impressed in a lot of ways.  It was an interesting and captivating story.  Still, it needs a lot of work.  I recommend the author invest in an editor, both for content and the grammatical mistakes throughout the book.  Also, drop the extra exclamation points to emphasize certain points.I had to push myself to get past the first chapter.  It wasn't bad content, but the way it was written made me afraid to continue the story.  Thankfully, the story picks up and it is a much easier (and less painful) read.I would be interested to read more from this author.3/5 Platypires