Review: Eighth grade level writing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 4, 2013
The writing in this "book" (and I use the term book very loosely) is so juvenile, I feel bad even comparing it to some junior high school girl's diary entry about her latest fantasy man.  The only reason I was able to finish this drivel was because it was so short and quite incomplete.  No closure at the end.  I felt like the last sentence should have ended with a "...".  I can only assume that the author wrote a complete story and then chopped it into several very small stories so that she could publish herself as a "multiple book author".  The female lead character is foolish, insecure and desperate.  The male lead character is self-serving, callous and dismissive of the female lead.  I hated the flowery language the author used to describe everything, especially the sex scenes.  It reminded me of those bad 80's romance novels.  I got this book free and even that doesn't save it.  Not worth your time.  I'm not even going to look at her other stories.