Review: Great Creep Factor
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2012
Wow, I loved the way this short story both opened and closed.  It held a creep factor to it that made me read and re-read some parts to make sure I'd read it right.  I didn't figure out for a while "who" Jeremy was.  This story had that "Twilight Zone" feel to it.  The only thing I didn't care about was the language.  That is a personal preference.  Overlooking that, and the one little sexual snippet, it was a great story.