Review: What did I just read?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
Where do I begin? This book had a lot of promise, however it just failed to deliver for me. For this book to be focused on a stripper and have really hot sex scenes, the author used weird terminology when speaking on private parts. The areas were referred to as candy shop, Brown sugar treats, melons, and my favorite "chocolate boom shocka locka booms". I mean really, what the hell? A lot of parts in here were too juvenile for me, at least the way they were written. One line towards the end really bothered me saying "...took awhile for a person's poverty mentality to leave despite an abundance of present riches"... I really threw my hands up in frustration at that one.There was way too much going in this book, how it went from one revelation to the next, I just felt like it was all over the place. Maybe if it had been broken up into like a short series or I don't know, but it was a lot. I had to skip every other page because I could not wait to be done with this book!Now I admit this book had its moments, but unfortunately for me the bad moments outweighed the good. I had really high hopes for this book, but I was really disappointed especially with how the epilogue was written; not as though it was a part of the story but more like a side note for the author.