Review: Short Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 18, 2013
this was a fast read for sure.  It starts off pretty good, but needs a few more details in places just to clear things up a bit.  And the elusive Oliver is mentioned a few times but not really introduced. I feel like this story could really use a little more depth.  It was an ok read and i am very glad i got it free.