Review: Good story...writing structure off.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
This was a good  story that had the potential to be a really good story if all tenses weren't used in one thought.  Usually that doesn't bother me, but this time it was just to much. With all that said  It is still a three star read.I hope this author gets a proofreader for her next stories.  I look forward to her progression.Past mistakes, New found love, outside forces, forgiveness andd the love of a lifetime. This story of Samuel, aka Slim, and Gabrielle has all the elements for a recommend read. Despite the writing structure this is a good story.