Review: lacking in substance
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 21, 2012
It was short (not a surprise as it was 99 cents), but there was still a lack of development detail that I have found in other short novels or even in short stories.  This lack of development made it harder to suspend disbelief over the time travel and the acceptance of a woman from 2012 to the changes in everything 200 years earlier.  There were elements of "My Fair Lady" and touches of sci-fi, but not enough development to satisfy the many questions.. Just a few more sentences in the right places could have made this a five star story.