Review: Reallly good short story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 12 8, 2013
This short story, as far as I can tell after reading it, is about a man lusting over a woman that he really wants; but she's also lusting after him at the same time and he doesn't know about this 'till one of his cousins tells him so. He then goes to where she works to pick her up and thats when things started heating up... in the kithen...I really did like reading from the male point of view which, to me, was a very nice change from the traditional female point of view of this genre.I also thought the two main characters of this story was well thought out in a fluid storyline which can become the base of a much larger story.