Review: Close but not complete
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2013
Sara's Secret was a book I'm glad I read, but still find myself shaking my head at things. The story of brothers, Nic and Bobby and their `friends' was interesting to read. Each chapter was a different point of view from the characters, this lead to some confusion and also much repetition. Still the story kept my interest throughout.I think this author has a future, just needs a little editing and some plot development advice. There was too much repeating of things not connected so much to the plot, the admiration of coffee for instance. It is one thing to explain why the characters like coffee so much and how they are using it to change their lives, but enough is enough.The same can be said about the language. The book was written in English, and although some of the characters were Hispanic or Cuban, there were way too many conversations held in Spanish. I found myself skipping through whenever this happened wondering if I missed something because of the language change.All in all an enjoyable read.