Review: NO DEPTH TO THE CHARACTERS
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2014
This author has potential to be among of some of the better ones but does she listen to the readers? OH HELL NO!! Story after story she writes with a decent story line and every once in awhile she will throw in a sentence that indicates a really good surprise on the next page but it just turns out to be a brain fart. This is one of those stories. She needs to listen to her followers.  You have to correct the sentence structure, put in the proper words, and put in the proper noun, ie. he  instead of her. She has a lot of them. I was always taught that you didn't have a one sentence paragraphs, that she does a lot too. Hello Ms. Briers there are readers out their that like what you start out with but you lose them along the way. I always complete a book but there are times I wonder why I do it. If you can get past the improper grammar, poor sentence and paragraph structures, the in ability to know when to start a chapter, and no depth to the characters then by all means read this book. There is a START of some humor to bad she stop and hides behind her insecurities. Hire a new proof reader/editor if you don't have one then get one in the long run it would be worth it for your readers. Try some classes in self esteem. Ms Brier has the ability to put in some humor, some suspense, and a decent story line but really needs to work on making them stronger.The main characters are basically a fae and an alpha. He doesn't like them (faes) and she followed his orders to leave his town. He, of course, decides that she is his mate. Read on to see what happens there. Yes, they end up getting together in the end but there are several turns and twist to the story but this could have been so much better if we had more information about the characters. I could even seen this as a tri0logy. Starting with the Alpha, second of Doug and Lisa and third Mike and Paula or starting with Mike and Paula, yup I like that one better. lol Even J,K. Rowling wrote book 3 first. Look at what it did for her and she will probable never write another book.