Review: Whatever happened to proofreaders
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 29, 2013
This book was ok, but not nearly as entertaining as the other Native Sun books. It could have used more Antonio and Mark and less errors.  I found myself bogged down, and rereading parts due to errors.  Wrong words and left out words really marred my enjoyment of this book. Have all of the proofreaders on earth either died or been kidnapped?  The cavalcade of errors from Indie authors is starting to wear thin with me. I'm starting to see why books by seasoned, best-selling authors cost much more. I also found myself somewhat bored with all the banter.  At times, there was no there, there.  I devoured all of the Antonio books, but I had to make myself finish this one.  I really don't see me reading another book devoted solely to Shimmer, Inc., unless once again Antonio and Mark are there.  Their appearance was the only thing that saved this from a 2 star rating.