Review: My rating changed to a 2, darn shame
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 8, 2014
I've only just read the first sentence of the book. What does this mean: "The evening was dragging gloriously to the twenty-three-year- old woman's delight,...?" Initially, I gave this book a one star. My rating would change to a solid three if the author corrected the errors.As per some other commenter, this should have been a good book. The author has a good story and good character development. Among the problems the author has is word choice [I suggest that he discard his thesaurus,] and the use of punctuation. Too many, comma's, and many of them in the wrong place.Another problem the author has is the perception that most people get very fatigued after walking a mile.I did read one awesome sentence in the book. I actually re-read that sentence a few times to savor it.