Review: Hard to read
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 25, 2014
It was obvious where this story was going from the beginning and I was okay with that.  What I was not okay with was the writing style.  It was uncomfortable to read.  No one talks this formally and even of they did no one thinks this formally.  I read a lot of books where I want nothing more then the author to correct grammatical errors.  This book onky has a few grammatical errors, which I appreciate, however the dialogue is so stilted that it is difficult to read.  It also makes it seem like the characters don't have a close relationship because people who are close don't talk to each other like this.  It's all very standoffish.  More like a conversation you'd expect in a Victorian era novel but without the clever low key flirting.