Review: 2.5 stars
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 11, 2013
Not the worst story but NOT worth another read.While the author's writing was fine and there wasn't really any grammar issues, the plot and the characters were meh.This story was fine for a quick, mindless read but I couldn't really care about the characters. As other reviewers have said, the h was a total pushover and had these emotional outbursts that were just so not realistic. It's like she was having tantrums and the H just coddled her like a little kid. Also, one moment she's shy and innocent but then gets very bold and basically propositions the H. The H was also a jerk. At the beginning he seemed nice and caring but then he had some really low moments, especially once he found the h and discovered her secret and in the end the H didn't even grovel for forgiveness. Oh, she forgave him too easily as well.The thing that I disliked the most was how they supposedly fell in love. I could NOT see how that happened. I think it made more sense that the h fell in love with the H because she admired him and thought he was really attractive (of course). But then for the H, it just seemed like he had lots of fun sleeping with her and mostly because she seemed so innocent in public but was then wild in bed. But then somehow he'd fallen in love with her. It was random and I didn't buy it. Oh, I don't know why he thought she was hot in the first place. She had curves but it's not like she was flaunting them and it sounded like the H didn't even date curvy women anyways. Actually, why does that seem to always happen in romances? The H always usually dates model-type women but then somehow falls in love with a woman with real curves. It's kind of annoying.Anyway, the story was readable but not that good. I definitely wont read it again.