Review: A short horror story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2012
This is a old, short, horror story. The storm is well described, but the four main charactes feel a little stiff.Typically, when people are stuck like that with nothing to do, their mind wanders and worries. Will my boss figure out I have made a mistake? Did I remember to shut off the oven after baking the lasagna for this vacation? Will my mom heal from that broken hip? Will I be stuck to help her? Am I a terrible daughter to feel like this?Describing their thoughts and random worries help us understand them as people. Also, there would be an interesting counterpoint between the silly worries in their minds and what awaits them in this story.Next, I would like to read a longer story by the author. Or more short  stories.