Review: Big waster of $2.99
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2012
This started out very well. The author has a wonderful sense of style, and the story was for the most part pretty believable (though the venue of having a poor, full-figured girl working in a place that acts like the Wicked Step Sisters and treats her like Cinderella is a tad too over the top, but whatever).The H/h meet. Again- pretty believable and interesting. So far the story was set up nicely. Even had sex in a parking lot- well, ok. Happens at bars all the time, so why not a gas station?Then, everything was thrown out the window and it turned whacked like a blind date gone bad.The h just decides to hop onto his bike and go to Vegas for 2 WEEKS with no thoughts of any kind about anything? That is the reason people win Darwin Awards, and I am all for it.However, what really fried me was it 'to e continued' ending. This short story started out with great potential but just bit the dust after the first quarter or so.Very disappointing.