Review: okay story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2013
The story  was okay although it reminded me of a couple of horror films I've watched in the past.The writing style is a bit choppy as sometimes the topic changes rather abruptly and there were times when I wondered where in the world the dialogue was coming from as there was virtually no lead up to it.Some of the dialogue was a bit awkward as were the transitions.I finished the story because I did want to know what happened to the main character, but some of the plot was a bit cheesy and very convenient. How many of your friends just happen to know a medium/ghostbuster who specializes in house hauntings?Anyway, it could have been better with a little more development and better writing technique. It wasn't horrible.