Review: Mr. Thomas has a great imagination . . .
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2014
I really like these Jess Williams, Bounty Hunter, stories.  However, Mr. Thomas, in his rush to get new books out on Kindle, feels that messy writing and punctuation is okay.  UGH!!WRONG!!  What happens is that the reader is taken out of the story to stumble over additional words that should have been deleted and repetitive words that do the same thing.What is this "implied" crap?  Jess never implies anything.  He says what he means.  I would like to see words like:  said, replied, asked.  Mr. Thomas, read Will Henry, Charles G. West or Ralph Compton.  And what's with this "ass" in your books a thousand times?  Why?  How about writing "shoot him in the gut or between the eyes, etc.?"Another issue I have is why all of a sudden did Jess begin drinking whiskey and using foul language?  Let the other bounty hunters do this, but Jess thrives on keeping a steady hand and a level head in his line of work.  Let him drink beer and use decent language as you wrote in several books in the beginning of your Jess Williams novels.I'll keep reading your books, Mr. Thomas, and continue to stumble over unnecessary words.  You have a wonderful imagination.  Get a proof reader.