Review: You need a better editor
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
It's funny how one mistake can set the tone for the rest of the book. In the beginning of the book there is this paragraph:"He hung up the phone, turned it off and flung himself on his bed. He remained there for the rest of the morning. He tried not to think, tried not to understand. The phone rang a few more times, but he ignored it."How does the phone ring if it's turned off?This one mistake took my focus off the story. I found myself wondering what other mistakes I could find. I wondered how many people proof read this story and missed that mistake. It didn't allow me to be engrossed in the story.That said, the story was pretty good. I would recommend fixing the mistake. Then it would have been a 4 star book.