Review: This story has possibilities with some good editing.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2014
The story is interrupted by editing errors quite often. The use of numbers for dates coupled with spell-outs show the story wasn't edited. Also, there were a few language syntax errors. The author may consider his audience and skip the "sophisticated" words. They are story stoppers...along with the poor editing. The author definitely has good story telling ability, but not in this one.