Review: Ok story- poor writing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 28, 2012
I bought this one in the bundle (1-3) but wanted to review it separately because whoever gave this a 5 star rating was REALLY mistaken!The stories themselves are okay. Unfortunately, they are chalk full of grammatical, spelling, & editing errors, commonly misused words, & at times the author began a story only to take off in a different direction - as though she had shut down her work for the night & then forgot where she left off. Did she check her work AT ALL? These issues really detracted from my enjoyment & focus of them. Loads & loads of potential that really fell short. Great imagination, but REALLY poor writing ability.