Review: Decent serial killer story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 25, 2014
OK, need to get the criticism out of the way first. This book cries out for a proofreader. I can take a few gaffes in any story, but this one was pretty bad. Having said that, I have seen worse. Much worse. Phillips spell checker works at least most of the time, but sometimes, many times in this book, a word might be spelled correctly, but it's the wrong word. "Connivance" instead of "convenience" for example. Another one I noticed was there were two chapter 95's. As I said, it needs proofread.All right, that's out if the way.I did really like the story. It flows well and isn't too much of a stretch of the imagination. Thrillers are better when they are believable. This one was pretty good. Pretty graphic and the killer was really cruel. A couple of the killings were kind of taboo for mainstream authors, but that's ok. High body count and lots of blood here.The author has potential if he'd hire himself a half decent proofreader!