Review: The continuation of book two
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2013
This isn't really a separate story thread from book two of the series. It is the direct continuation of that story. This part of the story is supposed to be an action-thriller but the author's love of minutiae completely suffocates any sense of suspense. Like Fool's Gold, the story ends up being about the day to day repairs and upgrades as well as the political story.Unfortunately, the writer attempts to write in present tense but this creates a stilted dialogue side-tracking a person's suspension of disbelief. The credited proof reader has the same issues with homonyms as the author or the author is disregarding said proof reader's advice. This extends to garbled tenses in the same sentence as well. :)The elements create a book with great potential that fails to realize it's greatness. Overall, the book is a decent read and I recommend the book if you have already read the first two in the series.