Review: This "book" took me ten minutes to read and nothing about it made me care enough to consider buying the next installment
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2013
I'm not crazy about installment-style writing, but I'll buy and read them if the story sounds interesting. The one thing that can make this style of writing successful is that you HAVE to develop your characters and make the readers care about them enough to keep buying and keep reading.That doesn't happen here. Lindsay is one dimensional and boring (what does she even look like?) and JB is a douche bag.I imagine that they both have redeeming qualities and that they may show up in future installments, but I couldn't care enough about these two characters to find out.