Review: This book needed an editor, BADLY
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 14, 2014
The story had potential, but the basic writting errors as well as gramar mistakes, had you try to edit the book yourself as you read it. That got annoying and it really took away from the story. The main Character started with one name and ended with another and you spent so much time trying to decipher who was speaking that the book became less and less enjoyable. Also, I felt that the main character was a little immature for her age. She almost let a good thing get ruined because she cared so much about what others thought and her assumptions based on her insecurities.