Review: FEELS UNFINISHED
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 3, 2013
In general, I enjoyed the story.  The way trouble was caused for the couples was an interesting twist.  I would have liked to have made their arrest and punishment more detailed.  Also, though Lizzy and Darcy are destined for each other, several of their conversations are ridiculous.  They don't resolve their arguments and switch to liking each other/being happy in the middle of heated arguments.  Not too many typos or grammatical errors.