Review: Great story but loses points for grammar and spelling
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2013
3.5 StarsMost of what I have to say about this story is summed up in my review of Primrose Court Apt. 205 as the spelling and grammar errors are about the same as they were in the first mini story.  I do appreciate that all 3 short stories revolve around each other and we basically get to see the viewpoints from 3 different people while they go about their lives in the Primrose Apt building.  This one was probably my favorite out of the 3 short stories because of the serious effed up factor to it with the main character.  The main character is going through some pretty heavy stuff but he has no idea that through all of his dark planning and preparations it will mean nothing because zombies don't care what your plans or priorities are.  I also find it interesting that it doesn't bother me at all that the stories just up and end without finding out what specifically happens to the characters.  I love stories where we get a brief peak at a character's life while the veil is pulled back and then just as quickly the curtain drops and we are left wondering what happened.  I will definitely be reading Don of the Living Dead, which this story was a spin off of.  If you aren't sure if you're going to want to read the actual novel then you can read the first 2 or 3 chapters in any one of the Primrose stories as 50% of the story (according to my Kindle) is actually a peak at "Don" so only 50% of the Kindle length is actually the Primrose story.Author has some potential so I will continue watching out for his work.  I just wish more time was spent on spelling and grammar so I could've given this a higher rating.