Review: Overall, a good read.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2011
Overall, it was a good story. The turning point is when the heroine stopped being strong and became almost cartoonish with her naivete of those around her (including the hero). Also, I didn't understand her being billed as a strong determined business woman however she leaves her job in Philly to go to Chicago and doesn't return for weeks and months (oh yeah because she needed a vacation and she's trying to save her business). It just didn't fly because one would have thought she would've been working from the hotel or wherever she was staying. The last straw for me was when she went to the seedy place her drug addict friend was and tried to stand up to the drug dealer. Really? Seriously? Really? That's when I had to put the book down and walk away.As I said overall, it was a good story with a few flaws and grammatical errors. However I did like the story.