Review: A little long
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2013
I like the story, but it goes on longer than it needs to.  I find myself thinking, "they are going to visit ANOTHER friend??".  The point is gotten across several fold.  I think the story would be better if they just met a couple friends along their path to becoming friends with the bully.  I don't mind a longer story, but it should be necessarily long.  The extra side stops don't add to the story (IMO).