Review: Lacked something
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2013
This was a quick and easy read. There were a few problems with the plot though and ultimately they got to me. The H tells the h right at the outset that love wasn't included in the 'fake' fiance part of the story. Not a few pages later and the h was in love with the H. The author tells us that the H has a reputation with women and that women are always throwing themselves at him. Not much later and the h was doing the same thing. I think the story was too short to develop these themes properly and I didn't find the love story all that believable. Also as another reviewer said, as a journalist the h had no discretion when it came to giving away secrets.