Review: more would have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2013
I thought that this was pretty good. It was well written and well edited. The narrator was amusing. I liked his tone and the way he was sometimes painfully honest about things. The story looks like it will be interesting. Please note the will be. This story is only 21 pages long and ends on what some might call a cliff hanger, though I think that's an abuse of the term. A fairly important event occurs, opening a whole new can of worms and then the story ends on something along the lines of 'well, that's another story.' I always find that dissatisfying, but especially so in a short story.