Review: Good story idea but needed something more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2013
So after reading CONCRETE UNDERGROUND, which I liked even though I didn't quite know what was going on when it was all done, I decided to try this story.  It started off well, with a scene that pulled me in and made me want to keep going.And it was okay.  There were some issues, similar to my experience with CONCRETE UNDERGROUND, where in the end, I wasn't sure what was the truth of the situation.  Likewise with this book.  Add to the experience that I just didn't think the story stayed as strong and compelling as CU was for the most part, and I didn't like many of the characters.  There were parts where the formatting and proofreading weren't so good and at least one place where the character who is gagged suddenly starts speaking without having the gag removed.  That pulled me out of the story completely.I wouldn't completely diss the book, but I can't say I would rate it higher than 3 stars due to its flaws.