Review: Okay femdom erotica
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2011
This story is told in first-person by a man who orders an escort while in L.A. on business, and he chooses a woman who will dominate him sexually. This woman was completely in charge, telling him exactly how things were going to be as he submitted to his Mistress.To me, this was more light to medium D/s action. There is a little pushing and shoving, slapping, and light begging, but I wouldn't call this hard or heavy. I think I would have liked this story more if the domination had seemed less like obvious roleplay and more like a real, serious Domme at work.At around 200 locations, this was about a 15-20 minute read. There were some typos, and I didn't much like the overuse of repetition in the scenes (up and down, up and down, up and down; holding it, holding it, holding it-- that sort of thing). For me, this was fair erotica, just graphic enough for me to say that it did deliver on some fronts. I did like the sexy female domination of an eager, submissive male, but I just needed that to be taken up a notch in erotic intensity.