Review: Boring
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2013
Written fairly well but needs more editing. "Were" and "where" are not interchangeable, and neither are "past"/"passed." Also, "withdrawal" is not a verb so no thanks to the editorial service advertising in the beginning (a relative it seems). Other than that, this story seemed like an English class exercise in description with lovely sensory details that took the rating up to 2 stars, because besides the few language/punctuation errors and the lack of a reason to care about anything or anyone in this story, it was uneventful for far too long.