Review: Nothing special, but I enjoyed it
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.Rating: 6/10PROS:- Zane is in pitiful condition at the start of the story, but he’s not pitiful himself. He’s hurt and unhappy, but he doesn’t wallow in his misery. I immediately wanted someone to wrap him up in something soft and love on him.- The characters are all three likeable enough, but Randy especially is kooky. His quirkiness amused me.- I’ve read a lot of stories by this author, and the majority of them are about 80% sex. In this story, I was delighted to discover that the physical scenes didn’t start until over halfway through. That allowed for some more character development early on than is typical of Michael’s works.CONS:- Butch and Randy have been together for a while when Zane comes along. I didn’t doubt their attraction to him, nor did I doubt their willingness to invite him into their bed. But I would have liked to see a bit of conversation between the two of them before they actually do the propositioning.- I didn’t find the characters quite believable. Butch is in construction, for instance, yet he says things like this: “you’re pretty young to declare an amnesty on dating.”- Like most of this author’s works, this one could use some editing. Not just for typos; there are some errors in continuity also.Overall comments: This isn’t one of my favorites by Sean Michael, but I did like it overall. It’s very typical of the author’s style, so I can’t particularly recommend it unless you’re already a fan of his writing.