Review: Short and Over-Priced!!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 4, 2013
The premise of this story had the potential to be great, but it fell short. There were some inconsistencies... one minute the heroine's hair was dark and her eyes were brown, next her hair was brown and her eyes were the rarest of color. Ms. Sinclair, you seemed to be a new writer; some simple advise...If you want to be great, read the following authors: Sienna Mynx, SK, S.W.Frank, Mallory Monroe and Delaney Diamond. You have a good command of the English language; however, you have to learn how to take your readers on that journey with you. We have to see the scene in our mind's eye.Your story lack depth and it was waaaay over-priced, it should have been $0.99c. Having said all that, please do not get discouraged. I would purchase a full length novel of yours with more meat and potatoes. I have not written you off, just giving you some constructive criticism. I have a feeling you are going to get a lot better. Best wishes!!!