Review: So much potential....Characters should have been in their 20's
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 27, 2014
Ok, so this one was SOOOO tough for me to choose if I only thought it was "ok" or if I "liked" it.  I think if the main characters, Bronagh and Dominic were in college, some of the "Harsh Name Calling" and references to "screwing" wouldn't have been so off-putting.  I mean, this kid is supposed to be a Senior in high school, and no only was he sexually harassing the heroine, but he was calling her horrible names and threatening to "F" her in the school hallway?  HUH??  This is NOT A YA, this is a New Adult and should have been set in a College theme, not a high school.The heroine was more of a crazy bitch the way all she did was throw stuff and the hero, and all they did was fight, but there wasn't really any build up to love everlasting, it was just, "I Hate You" then "I love You"...I would have liked the characters to be more developed, more likeable, more something...I just thought it was more of a cluster-f&$# than anything else.The plot had SO MUCH potential to be something really great, but the setting was wrong, too much beating up on people and fights at school (even the girls beat each other up).I guess with some tweaks in the plot, more developed characters and a setting not in high school (no really...this kids mouth was like "WTF did he just say to her??", I think the story could have been awesome.