Review: Good start - Keep writing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2012
Jason,Good start for the series, although I kinda got thrown out of my suspension of disbelief when you mentioned Kevin not making it from the Pirate (or whomever they were) boarding party attack then when all the fighting was done Kevin was on the bridge with the rest of the crew smiling.Anyhow, other than that and the fact that it needs more depth and a lot more pages, it's a good start. It's not really a novel.... more like a novella.Thanks for inviting us into your story.John.