Review: Thin
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 14, 2014
really, the plot was thin, character development was thin, even the world building was thin. There is so much potential, I really think it could have been great.characters-Goldie is a lawyer, a witch, wants a sanctuary for magical critters, and wants to be tough rather than cute. Except she keeps acting cute instead of tough. There's a ton of room for backstory, but all we're given is a daddy issue and an inferiority complex. Kodi is the story love interest #1, and a were bear. There's history that could build some tension, but it doesn't happen. Love interest #2 is a non-magical detective. He was so forgettable, I can't even remember his name (and I just finished the book). Enough said.Plot- Goldie has to work with detective to figure out who is killing magical creatures. and that's about as deep as it gets. Seriously. Even the fact that the detective knows nothing about magic doesn't add any drama... since that "problem" is resolved after a few pages.World building- again, los of glimpses of potential, but no development.  If your world building leaves your reader with questions rather than helping your reader understand the world of your characters... it's just not something I want to read.