Review: Fell flat
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 19, 2013
This was a loooong novella the concept of the story was good but as I would start the next chapter with the hope that something finally exciting would happen I was disappointed the story was very long winded I found myself skipping paragraphs just to get to the end the main characters started off great but by the middle lost my interest giving it 2stars because the foundation of a great story was there just  not the execution.