Review: Not bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 20, 2013
This story was okay. It could have been much better with some constructive editing and a bit of fleshing out. So it was a decent story, it wasn't bad. I can see it easily being expanded into a full length novel with some world building and some extra story development. All in all not a bad story but has the potential to be much more.