Review: SWEET STORY, BUT WHAT ABOUT.........?????
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2013
I enjoyed this book and finished it in one sitting as it wasn't very long, but I felt that there were quite a few "loose ends" in the story as well as aspects of the story which were underdeveloped.I feel that these parts of the story could be redeemed by readdressing them in a follow-up novel perhaps.Some examples are the grandparents who sued for custody - and Jared who never gets to forgiving them with his own childhood issues - but what happened with their relationship was barely touched on.What about Jared's work partner from his previous job - what was his story - is he alive or really dead?  REALLY wanted to know about that and was disappointed when nothing came of it.What about the 'baddie' who was arrested - there is another whole story there that was barely even mentioned, when he and Jared worked together.Just too many things started on but too underdeveloped for me and not given a satisfying and well-rounded conclusion.However, the love story part of the book was very pleasant and sweet.