Review: Not for the grammar conscious.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2013
I want to read this author's stories, they look fun.  Unfortunately her sentence structure is so atrocious I have trouble getting through a single page!  Almost every sentence is a fragment or starts with a conjunction (which is OK in small doses,but really most of your sentences need to be complete thoughts).  Mixed metaphors and other things we learned not to do in 4th grade abound as well.  These books are for people with no interest in grammar.  Incidentally, a lot if it could be fixed by punctuation.  I am dying to red pen this book.