Review: Some things I liked, some I didn't
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 6, 2012
There were some things I liked and some things I didn't with this one. I thought the story itself was good, the sex scenes really really well done. It's written 'first person' from the woman's point of view, so there was actually a good character development from her perspective.As for the bit I didn't like: I think there needed to be more information about the handsome police officer. Lot's of development form the girls perspective, but not very much from the guys perspective. .  so I think the author could have done a bit more with that.Overall, a really enjoyable short story, and I hope the author does a sequel with the same people!