Review: Almost 2 stars but not quite....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 12, 2012
First, as with nearly all eBooks by self-published authors, this book is riddled with errors (spelling, grammatical, and formatting) which made it difficult to read.Second, the sex scenes weren't that great. Yes, there were many of them, and who doesn't like to get pounded by a cowboy? But they were lacking. In this case it is QUALITY not QUANTITY. If the author would have spent more time developing the story and the sex scenes, and cut out half of them, it would have been a better and more STIMULATING read.Third, there really was no explanation for anything. The author apparently forgot that when you mention something you should really follow through with it and explain it clearly. I think that the author, or at least this is how it appeared, was trying to rush the story to the bedroom for a pounding instead of writing the story. There is such a thing as a romance and story without f****ing every chapter. Focus on the story and not the banging.Overall, the cover was the only saving aspect to this story, because let's face it, the abs on the cover are HOT!The title didn't match the story in the least. The amateurish attempt at bondage was more of a joke than an erotic experience. If you were to remove the lackluster sex scenes and develop the characters and story, you would have had a decent contemporary western romance which would have warranted the read, purchase, and more than 1 star.Would I recommend this book to others how it is? No.Would I read more from this author? Eh, only, and this is a big ONLY, the author stopped trying to flood the pages with sex, and instead wrote the romance that this "erotica" had the opportunity to be with clearer direction and proper editing and dialogue.