Review: ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2013
This second installment shows little development in the author's writing. The story was ok and considering the first book was free, I don't feel cheated on the total length of the two combined.  If the first story had been 2.99 I probably would have purchased the second but definitely not a third.  The writing is not that good.  Like the first story, the main character (the new guy) is doing a very difficult job (in his first two weeks) better than the seasoned veterans and the remaining primary characters still have no depth.There is a great potential for this to develop into a more intriguing story but the author seem stuck on pouring all his energy into Gibson (the new guy). The two stories cover about three weeks in Gibson's life.  The author could have spent some of that time on the world and the characters instead of back to back missions.