Review: The editor should be fired immediately.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2013
This is possibly a good book, but I felt like a seventh grade teacher reading a required short story which my student had made her nine-year-old sister write for her. Grammar, tense, and punctuation were either wrong or omitted entirely. My advice for this writer would be to get the book edited, even if by a friend who is good at grammar, and resubmit. A few errors here and there can be overlooked, but this book was full of errors. This makes it difficult to concentrate on the story. I will not be reading the rest of the series.