Review: Good story but needs a sharp editor
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2014
The author needs to brush up on grammar, tense and proper conjugation of verbs .  I could understand missing an error here and there but the books are rife with errors.  Not sure what age group the author was aiming for, some character development was lacking and some plot devices were a little tough to believe.  Armed guards keeping students prisoner at a middle school run by a maniacal doomsday prepper principal? With polish and a thorough grammatical editing the story could easily be a four star ranking.  I would encourage the author to work on a revision.