Review: Nice story, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 25, 2014
I was gifted this book from the author, and in return I will give an honest review.  OK let me start off by saying I liked this book and I thought the writing was good.  From the beginning I was interested with the story of Roommates Ashley and Gabby, without giving away spoilers, this book had an excellent plot line and I really liked the mystery of it all.  Oh and let’s not forget Marco, he was dreamy and certainly one to make this book more enjoyable to read.  What I didn’t like however was how it seemed to drag out too long for my taste.  Ashley annoyed me with how dense she seemed to be, Ben was sweet at first but I grew to really dislike how his character was written, it didn’t seem believable to me, and I had a hard time staying interested in the last half of the book.  Don’t get me wrong I did like it and am not trying to say anything bad, maybe it was just my mood because I see there are other great reviews. If not for Marco and my desire to see them have their happily ever after I would have given a lower rating, but Marco was so dreamy with all his pet names he had for Ashley and how much he seemed to adore her, I couldn’t get enough of that, and wish it didn’t take so long for them to figure each other out.  The Epilogue made it all worthwhile.  I give this book 3.5 stars out of 5..Kim