Review: Failed Potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 6, 2012
This story had a lot of potential, but didn't quite live up to it. With so many characters, it should have been longer. Or if not longer, then everything should have been seen through the eyes of the main character (the old woman). And yes, I knew it was 5,000 words.Also, if some of the problems below had been cleared up, it would have been a much better tale.* It needed better editing.* The characters needed better development.* POV kept veering from character to character to omnipresent.