Review: Quite a sweet read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2013
This was a short and sweet read. I'm at a loss to put my finger on what exactly didn't work for me so I'll make a list of positives and negatives:***Spoilers***What I liked:1) Honourable H and quite a sweet h. The H doesn't take advantage of the h's offer to become his mistress in return for his help.2) The H marries the h before he sleeps with her3) Well researched and accurate in terms of detailsWhat I disliked:1) The fact that H kills the h's fiance but still goes on to marry someone else even though he's so in love with the h. Why on earth did these two not elope or make some extravagant gesture to be together. After the H's wife dies, he makes no move to contact the h even though he knows she's never married. He says he can't risk having his heart broken again. Newsflash, she didn't arrange her betrothal, her father did, therefore she didn't break his heart. He had no excuse for avoiding her.2) Silly spelling mistakes and typos3) TSTL move on the h's part to follow the H back to her castle. There was no logical explanation and of course she ends up in trouble. I was so aggravated at this point because it wasn't realisticI must say I'd have to read quite a few reviews before buying the next in the series.