Review: Desperately needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2014
Terrific story; I wish I'd been able to read the whole thing.  The misspellings, poor grammar, and lousy sentence structure caused me to give up less than halfway through the book.  I can't imagine why it got so many good ratings, unless the former readers were as uneducated as the writer is.  Get an educated human proofreader and this will be a good book.