Review: Story Might Have Been Good, BUT...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2013
This story might have promise, but the editing and spelling were AWFUL!!!  Spelling errors totally detracted from the story and made it hard to read.  For example, times when she is supposed to be WRITHING UNDER HIM became WITHERING UNDER HIM.  These are two different words...and I might add, that they  put a totally different spin on the sexual situation.  Punctuation was bad, too.  These kind of spelling errors and wrong words are all through the book to the point of being annoying.  In fact, the errors in this book are so bad that I almost can't remember anything about the story line.  But, now that I bring that up...I am not sure of a time frame in this book...maybe a week.  They go from not knowing the other even exists, to him believing that she is his the moment they meet.  Other then that, the only other thing that sticks out to me is that when she uses foul language, he always chastises her.  It reminded me of the THIS MAN Trilogy where the h was repeatedly yelled at for cursing.  I hated it in that book, too.So, if you think you can read a book with atrocious spelling errors, horrible puntuation, and terrible editing and see the story underneath, then I say give this book a go.  Otherwise, wait until an updated version come out that has been "fixed."