Review: Fun and sweet story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 30, 2011
Refreshing that a story dealing with male escorts and a brothel could still be innocent and sweet, but that's exactly what this story was. It felt much longer than the file size indicated, so it's a good read for the money, too. I will say that the cover isn't a very good depiction of the characters considering how often Kaz's small size is mentioned in the story. At one point, Jay has to even get a footstool for Kaz to stand on in order to get things to...um...line up. That's a really minor criticism, though. I loved the development of feelings between Kaz and Jay, though. Each of them has all sorts of misconceptions of the other, but they aren't so serious or so overplayed as to make the story unbelievable. This is also very much in the sci-fi realm, but that also isn't overplayed. There are some aliens, alien culture, etc., but the story's not filled with obviously sci-fi-y terms and awkward constructions meant to rub it in your face. Those are really artful balances for most writers in this genre to strike. Well done, K.C!