Review: Loved the story, hated the terrible editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2013
Again I am dismayed to be giving this author a 4 star rating. Her story is compelling and her characters are fascinating. This is a great example of a gifted storyteller with a terrible need for a professional editor and publisher. It makes me sad that the author is forced to offer her books on Amazon for free, due to the terrible quality of the writing. If this book was professionally edited, and a bit more content added (it seemed rather short) I would happily pay $10.00 for it, and further sequels.My best wishes to this author because I feel they have a true gift at crafting other worlds.