Review: No respect for the reader!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 27, 2014
This is the second book in this series that I have read. Besides the lack of character growth and Cindy's creepy relationship with Mac, the editing speaks of an author who doesn't care about the reader.I started cataloging the errors, but gave up after a bit. There are style, grammar, and punctuation issues.  But the most egregious problems include missing words, misused words, and incorrect character references. At location 1138 "Mac showed no response," he should have shown no response as he wasn't even in the scene...it should have been Mattheus.  This happened more than once.I do, however, thank the author for putting this book out there for a free download, as I found this on Kindle's top 100 free books list.