Review: A Short One
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2011
This story didn't do too much for me. As stated in the other reviews its a short bit of erotica and really more of a scene than a complete story. There was nothing wrong with the author's ability as a writer but for some reason the story just wasn't anything special for me, maybe because it was more a scene than anything else there wasn't any opportunity to build tension between the characters or get any sort of depth, I'm really not sure but it's free so I'm not complaining.