Review: so PISSED!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2014
I read 1&2 over the wknd., las nite I read 3., I must say I'm very confused as to who wrote book 3!, it Seems like you just threw some words on the paper!!! No Proofreading at all!! The story in general was ok, however Istayed LOST Due to typos, out of place wording, etc., & what was the point in bringing MACK BACK & Starting a Story line on him if you were going to kill him a few  chapters later??? It didn't even make Sense!!! Don Q wanted to save his Mama, so no fool would go for a gun KNOWING HE IS GOING TO GET HER KILLED!!! It's like you FORGOT WHAT YOU WERE WRITING!! AGAIN! Cause you stayed Contradicting yourself throughout the book!!! You Even REPEATEDLY CONFUSED VISCIOUS & VENOM!! Then you mentioned some dude Black like he was VENOMS HUSBAND!! When prior to that she had been messing with Cash!!! You totally left the Crazy chick. Taquila out after you introduced her., you forgot ZANE ALREADY MET SHANNON'S DAUGHTER FATHER & the Fact that he was a PUNK! There is no Point in me waiting for book 4 cause any fool can see Mack wasn't suppose to Die right then., just like you forgot Significant CHARACHTER details throughout the book, I guess you FORGOT YOU PUT DIZZY ON THE ROOF WITH A SNIPER RIFLE!!! Ugh!!! You wasted my MONEY!!! Book 1&2 Gained you a TRUE FAN! Book 3 SMFH KILT THAT THOUGHT!!! You need to write that book off as a JOKE & REWRITE IT AFTER YOU PUT SOME TIME N THOUGHT INTO IT!!! Because you truly DROPPED THE BALL!!! Especially Killin Mack AGAIN!!! I'm done with you! I won't waste another DIME ON THIS MESS!!! Ugh! ---KINDALYNN S!!!