Review: The Amber Diary Review
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 8, 2014
It was alright. A little too short and could have used a few more explicit scenes. But it was free so I thought what the heck. I'd recommend to the author not to describe all the good parts in a few short sentences, such as "they made love every single day" or something like that. Show, don't tell. And I really would have loved to see the two talk after what they've done, or rather, what he did to her. Or even during the act itself. That would have made things much more interesting.