Review: could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 30, 2013
3 1/2 starsThe book started out well enough and the initial interaction between Nina and Connor was nicely developed, but then the story was dragged out and became repetitive that I started skipping pages just to keep going. The antics (e.g. Nina telling other women off for making eyes at her man) could be considered cute the first time, but became old and childish quickly when repeated. The writing also got sloppy as the book went on as well. Overall, I think it could benefit from an edit and a few cuts. The story was good enough, but just tested my patience as it went on unnecessarily. In a way, it reminds me of the Cross series which started well with Bared To You and then went downhill as it got dragged out.