Review: Fast paced short story.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 13, 2014
Fast paced well formed for a short story until the end.I had a hard time with this one. I liked the beginning. It held the proper pace and build up for a short story. The dialogue was a bit cheesy from Lillian's perspective, but only caused minor eye rolling on my part. Realizing it was a set up for the next book the world development even worked for me. It was the ending that disappointed me. It wasn't a bad ending, just abrupt. I felt like it was missing just one more chapter. That being said I wouldn't hesitate to read the next book in the series.