Review: 3 stars = "okay"...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 27, 2012
...and it is. It's okay. I don't want to post a spoiler, but the pivotal moment isn't explained (show, don't tell, remember?). WHY, the reader wonders, does the character see what's on the hillside and think, "...must show her, before..." WHY? I don't get it.It's not a bad story; it's okay. But it felt incomplete. 3 stars.