Review: Editor needed, and badly.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 2, 2014
This could have been at least a 4 star book, but the lack of editing was very distracting. I loved Caleb as his rough demeanor was very appealing. I thought that Melissa was very cute, and her  great vulnerability wasn't annoying as it can be in some books. No, what I had a hard time with was the poor punctuation that ran rampant throughout the whole book. Commas were almost non-existent, and we all know how a comma can change the meaning of a sentence by having or not having it present. The writing was almost as if it was written in a stream of consciousness; run-on sentences and poor punctuation made the whole thing look and feel like a rough draft. It became like a job to have to constantly re-read or translate poorly structured sentences.The story line and characters had great potential, but the lack of editing ruined things. If this book was to be re-vamped I would read it again, but sadly I am taking it off my Kindle as there is no way that I will read it again with the shape that it is in now. For the price ($4.99!) I expected a MUCH better quality read.