Review: The real horror here is the writing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2012
Oh my goodness. What could have been a decent story was just obliterated by terrible writing. There were so many spelling and grammatical errors that I almost played a game to see if each page I turned would have a new record for the number of errors.If it had been a novel, I would have quit about 20% of the way in. Sometimes short stories can have a good punchline that makes it worth getting to the end. This one didn't.