Review: Good story but needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2014
After a very shaky start the author gets into her stride and tells an increasingly interesting tale.  It is very obvious which sections she feels unsure about, and where she trusts her own storytelling to carry the reader along with her. The core of the ending is good but it gets messy with the unnecessary complications of Mia’s relationship with Peter and reappearance of Chris.I enjoyed it after I’d resigned myself to the multiple errors of numerous types in the writing; a very thorough editing is needed before this chrysalis can become a butterfly.