Review: Could've been very good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2012
I enjoyed this story up until a point.  It was a real fairy tale beginning with the young pregant girl being cast aside and pretty much thrown out of the house but pulling herself up and making a great new life for her and her daughter.  Enter the handsome man who sees so much in our young mother and her business and you have a great romance... Except everyone waits 15 more freaking years to go anywhere with it!Seriously?  15 years of unrequited love while they built up the business?  And then there was the hinted incest.  That just turned my stomach when I saw how far the author was willing to take that little gem!  Overall it wasn't a bad story idea, but I didn't like how it was developed.  Add to that the poor editing and it wasn't a big hit for me.