Review: Horrible editing!!!!!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2011
The storyline is very interesting and that's what kept me reading. Unfortunately, the editing was horrible. There are so many typos, grammatical errors, and omissions that I became frustrated. Maybe these errors took place when the books were revised for Kindle.  I will state again that the storyline (plot) was interesting, would have loved to have some scriptures quoted as examples. Preston was a good example of what happens when you allow the devil to run your life, but Lustray was no better than him.