Review: The hero was an alpha minus.  something was missing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2013
Good solid story. Very Cinderella ish.Hero underdeveloped.  Too much about the past, the story needed more development at the start of the relationship. I do like a bit about the past, but more interaction in the present might have made this a five star. Hero not loving enough.