Review: Too Short
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 3, 2013
This was a ridiculously short story.  The time lines jumped way to quickly.  In addition, this was labeled as short "erotica" story.  It's missed labeled.An erotic writer should label the body part as it is, calling body as "front" or "back" was not sexy enough for me.  In addition, even for a short story there was questions as to what happened to the characters in that time.I enjoy short stories to help "fill in" when you need a quick light, needing to escape every day read.  Unfortunately this was not one of them.