Review: I Honestly Tried to Give this Book a Fair Shake
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2012
This book has so much potential, but it was a lost cause due to numerous distracting problems. Let's begin with the head hopping. The author jumped between the hero and the heroine's thoughts non stop. I'm talking within the same paragraph! It drove me crazy. It was hard to keep up with who was thinking what. The heroine started out strong and was likable, but seriously, I just couldn't buy into her going from being kidnapped by an Indian who didn't speak English, to being in love with him by the time they arrived to his village. And in love with him to the point that she was strong enough to endure torture for him. By the time I got to their marriage, I just couldn't read another word. I wouldn't normally review a book I couldn't finish, but this book has some serious problems. There are quite a few typos, spelling, and grammatical errors as well. I honestly tried to keep going, but after almost three weeks of picking it up and putting it down, I realized it wasn't worth the effort any longer. I hate to be so critical of a book because I know how much heart goes into writing fiction, but this book has too many issues and readers deserve to know before making a purchasing decision. I will say that I liked the heroine. She was a strong female protagonist. This book simply wasn't ready and needs some serious reshaping.