Review: Clearly not for the weak hearted
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2014
First let me say that I loved the concept of this story.  Alpha male, he protects what is his and makes no bones about it.  I thought it was heart breakingly  touching when he broke up with her.  You do have to love yourself before you can love another.  I thought it was funny, although I probably  would have wanted to hit him when  gave her the flowers.  Again great concept in dealing with weight issues.  The breakdown for me was the over the top possession.  Really, a tattoo on her neck and your father is the governor?  That's wrong on two levels.  But mostly, anal sex got to be too much.  I know every one is different but I have asked my girls and no they do not want 11.5 inches of anything up or near their rectum.  I flinched the first time I read it but then I just skipped those parts.  The paragraph structure needs a little help. Ms. Silver or Mr. Silver, whatever the case may be, please lighten up and/or fix those aspects.  I am an avid reader and I would like to add you to my rotation.