Review: let it be edited a couple of times, then maybe I will like it
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2013
I really didn't like this story, and it needs a lot of work, before I can take this book serious.The characters are weak. There are absolutely no drama, and the attempt to put drama in the story is just pathetic (the end really?) The "romance" between the two main characters is non existing, and even the sex scenes are nothing to phone home about.It became torture to read it before the half mark step, and I think I should get a medal for reading it to the end. I stopped caring for the characters, and hoped there would be a murder (see that would be drama) Sorry Brei :/But what really is the reason for the 1 star rating is all the gramma mistakes! Normally I don't care if someone puts the commas the wrong place once in a while, but in this book it was a constant thing to put it where ever she felt like it. (which caused me to stop up and rereading a sentence to figure out what the hell she was trying to say) The question marks are placed wrong in a sentence, and words are used wrong - like "your" when it should be "you're" (<- this is a general mistake, learn it now please) "they're" when it should be "their", using "of" when it should be "have" (and I really don't understand the mistake in doing that. No one talks like that) and I could continue.If you want to be taken serious as an author the editing is the first step. I don't want to pay money to read something it seems you just spit out, and not caring for delivering the best. The story is a taste manner, while the editing is not. It's a simple thing to be expected to be alright.I had really looked forward to reading this story, but it just fell very hard to the ground.1 star to be nice - I can't recommand this