Review: Good
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2012
Finding Home by Cameron DaneI liked this story and how the years passed for Adam and Rhone making them best buds turned lovers.  I liked how you saw the friendship progress and the growth of Adam from a street kid to a successful businessman.  Rhone gave Adam an opportunity when his family kicked him to the curb like unwanted rubbish. It was nice to see how Adam became part of the Quinn team and by extension family.  This story really is about Adam and his struggle with his homosexuality and ever growing attraction to the man that in essence rescued him.Now on to my buts...First is the length 8 Chapters.Second the verbiage to describe their sexual organs i.e. poking pole, piss-slit and nut sack...Seriously;)Third is that I couldn't believe Rhone one minute is vertical and then he pulls a 180 and is horizontal and in love with Adam.  No build up to this part, just bam and they are going at it like rabbits...LOL  I would think it needed more discussion at the very least...but then that's the beauty of fiction;)