Review: It could have been much better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2014
For me, this book would be classified under the I somewhat liked it but it could have been much better category.The good.  I love a jealous possessive crazy in love heroes and Liam certainly is.  Also Harper is not a dishrag.  She stands up for herself and does not easily forgive Liam's mistakes.  Also she did not readily sleep with him, he had to work for it which build up the sexual tension.  In addition, the sex scenes were hot and the book easily kept my attention.The not so good.  The characters were very immature and insecure.  I could easily understood the behavior with Harper because she is young and a college student but Liam is supposed to be in his early thirties.  He acts like a spoiled child when he does not get his own way or when he is upset.  This behavior includes touching other women in front of the Harper  including touching butts and letting them grope him just because he thought Harper rejected his advances or to make her more interested.  It seemed that he worked only because daddy gave him a job and his position at the company as ambiguous.  Also he took off work whenever he wanted.  Like Liam, Harper was irresponsible. Harper attempted to quit her job at least twice and then did without giving proper notice or thinking her decisions though.  Also both attempted to break up with each other for  the stupidest reasons that were based on inaccurate assumptions that could have been easily cleared up with speaking to each other.  Also the plot became a runway train towards the end of the book, with the story line involving the mother.  Harper's decision to have her and Liam go see the mother was beyond stupid.  I will not give more details as I do not want to provide spoilers. Also, I did not find the HEA believable.  Liam and Harper were too hot headed and made too many mistakes not to think that they would keep making them in the future, especially Liam.  I could see him getting upset at Harper and screwing around with other women because he was upset or to get back at her.  I would have felt much better if the book went into the future 10 years as opposed to 1.  The way the book ended there maybe other books in the future.  I am not sure I would read them because I am afraid of what will happen to Liam and Harper.