Review: I wanted to like it but missing words got in my way
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2014
The story seems like it would be good, however, those pesky little words like the, an, a, to are missing in too many places and one thing I can't stand is when I have to put them in because the proof reader missed them.  Please have someone go over your story and help you put in all the pesky little words you missed.