Review: OK, but
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
These are characters you've encountered before. They don't quite make it beyond two dimensional. That the main character is a fund raiser for hospitals, who's name is Charity is too cute. Even though fund raising for a good cause, I was put off by how easy she makes it look (it's not in my experience) and how much money she spends to make money. As others have noted, editing is sloppy, which I find both annoying and insulting. Thankfully, this first fragment was free. While Amazon says its 170 pages, it took about 2 hours to read, which feels like a novella to me. As stated, this is Part 1. It ends on a cliffhanger. The next part is $4. For one, I shall spend it elsewhere.