Review: A little rushed (2.5 stars rounded up)
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2014
The story really drew me in during the opening. I felt like it could go somewhere, but towards the middle I realized there was no plot and it appeared the author was rushing to finish.Also the dialogue, grammatically, is incorrect. To the author: when a speaker changes, so does the paragraph.I was hopeful that this would be a nice read. It was free and I read it in about 10 minutes.