Review: Loved the story...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2012
This is a really nicely written story - I liked the characters, the humor sprinkled around and the action, as well as the gore bits (Charlie Charlie!).It's nice to read the story from different perspectives, that keep escalating to the part where all fits nicely together.Unfortunately, the commas are an issue, but in my case because many sentences became too long and seemed to badly need a comma, and in my head I would read those twice and check where the comma should be...But as the author says, and I agree, the story is so much more than punctuation, and I cannot let that taint my opinion about this being really a good book - will definitely read the sequel!Thank you for a great story ;)