Review: Boring
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 1, 2013
Sorry to say but this story was amazingly boring. It had the potential to be a good story, however, without any real conflict, the story fell flat. The antagonist, which I'm assuming was Kevin, wasn't even memorable. He could have been left out the story and wouldn't have been missed. Also, I noticed some variation in verb tense that was confusing. Basically this story was about two lonely people getting together...Boring.