Review: Learn to write and punctuate
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 3, 2013
I cannot spoil the story for readers for the simple reason that I gave up after ten pages or so.  The author's use of exclamation points is irritating and his use of only one comma in parenthetical expressions drove me crazy.  Added to that, he adds commas where none should be.  His characters are cardboard and unlikely.  Please, Mr. Smith, take some writing classes or join a writers' workshop, use an editor and then try again.  I returned the book even though it was free.