Review: I felt like a voyeur while reading this.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2011
I like the way Carolyn Jewel writes.  Her more recent HRs are favorites of mine.  And I ordered this short on Kindle, knowing it was just a story, not even a novella.  But the story is very, very short.  I didn't have enough time to really get to know the H and h before I was watching them have sex.  (It was good sex, BTW, but still...)  This was like the chapter you look forward to in an HR, when the H and h finally come together intimately.  But I needed that "look-forward-to" part, instead of jumping right into bed with them.  So it's 5 stars for the writing but 1 star for making me feel a little like a dirty old lady while reading.