Review: Cute premise
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2014
The opening sentence would have been great...if it weren't for the typo that set the tone for the editing of this book."There wasn't a hit of murder in the air....;" I think the author meant hint..there wasn't a hint of murder in the air.There are several glaring errors...first the protagonist uses her Mastercard to pay for catering supplies, then several pages later says she charged it on her Visa.  She cleans up the teachers' lounge after catering lunch taking all the linens with her.  Shortly thereafter she is bemoaning the cleaning practices of the staff for leaving the dirty tablecloth on the table from the luncheon that she catered.. There are point of view issues in several places--starting out in first person and switching to third person in the same sentence.The story itself was cute and clean, and implicated just about everybody in the crime.