Review: CLIFF HANGER ENDING, UGH!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
Let me start by saying this so called book or short story is ONLY 52 pages long.  So knowing that you would think a writer who was any good at all would proof read their own material before putting it out for sale, I mean how long would it take to re-read 52 pages, trust me, NOT LONG... but this material was not even put through spell check much less proof read by the writer.  It is so full of typos.  For a short 52 pages this blew me away how many errors it has.  Granted it is FREE, but it also shows the readers what to expect from this person in future books.  Someone who does not even care enough to use spell check or proof read her own material, just wants to get it out there leave you with a CLIFF HANGER ENDING and try to sale the other books in this series... the next is only 42 pages and she is asking $2.99 for it... what a laugh!  42 pages isn't even worth 99 cents much less $2.99 omg....Here is an example of the typos this has:  (the cupped her cheek with his palm and ran his thumb over her lips.)(A powerful urged flowed through her)  (someone knocked tentatively on the door and then pushed open it open)("you must have a whole heap of questions, and sp do we.")That is just a few, I could point out many more.........but that would take more time than this deserves from me!Okay and if all that isn't enough, the writing of this main character "Naomi" left me thinking of her as a brainless whore, who thinks way more of her own body and good looks than I care to read about.  And the direction this series is going with this abrupt ending is more erotica and XXX rated than paranormal.  I love having sex in the books I read but having two Alpha males share the same mate is not to my liking.... So I will NOT be buying or even reading anymore in this series even if they come up for free.NO I DO NOT RECOMMEND THIS MATERIAL OR THE SERIES!!!This writer has potential to some day be an Author, but first she needs to CARE enough to proof read her own stuff, and use spell check.  Then she needs to learn how to write a series that has likable characters and episodes and not cliff hangers so she isn't scamming her readers....