Review: Rushed and sloppy
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 17, 2014
It's not to bad as an outline. But the story, characters and plot are either barely touched on or hurriedly blurted out. I understand its a short story but that doesn't mean it should be short changed  in every area. My biggest beef is the time line. Immediately after the ball it's morning, I mean night, no morning. The ball was yesterday, nope still going on: nope yesterday. Even the best writers need editors. If this book had one there should be an opening for his/her job.