Review: Excellent writing, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2014
just as you're getting into the plot, it ends!  This is an incomplete short story!  This is a disappointment.  The description of the story was not clear that this was part of a serial not a series.  To call it a short story is not accurate either because the story is not completed at the end.  As an avid reader, I am very disappointed.