Review: Unfinished Business
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 21, 2013
After almost completing book one, the McKinnon, I was so involved and anxious to continue folowing the characters that I had purchased book two-but then I got to the end of book one and discovered the time travel segment at the end. I tried to get into book two, but it just didn't pull me in. The fire and attraction between Reagan O'Riley and Connor Holden contributes to a good love story; however I have a problem trying to mesh time travel lovers from the future back to medieval times. The story becomes too fragmented, doesn't blend and distracts from the character's struggles. I believe the book would have stood alone as being very good if the time travel portions had never been added. If you like the time travel approach, then this would be a good book, but if not, then I would not advise the book.