Review: Nope
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2013
I tried but i was unable to finish reading this book, i got to 62%. Why is that? There are actually quite a few reasons. To start with there is the story, its your basic 'guy gets sent to another world with magic' thing. Its not original but it works, one problem i had was the world itself.Reading the description you might think hes sent to a place where magi and warriors duke it out, where great kingdoms with castles and little farming villages exist. Well if you think that you will mostly correct. There is also headsets, airships and the internet. Yes you read that correctly there is both castles, horses and many other medieval things and the internet.Then there is the characters, they are not bad overall. There are several that are downright fun to read, then there is Eric. Eric starts out as a loser. Picked on, ignored you name it he suffers it. The book seems to try to get him to grow from loser to something else but i didnt see much improvement from where i stopped. The dialogue is painful at times with it sometimes sounding as though you are reading a parody or gag book of some type.The writing does not flow well at all with some things happening out of nowhere or with no explanation or at least not a good one.Finally, and this is something i dont understand the other reviewers not mentioning, is the editting. O M G is it bad. You have ALOT of various problems from typos, misspelled words and just bad sentence structure. I could not go more than a few pages without seeing one or another. Obviously given the above i cannot reccommend this book.