Review: Good story, some editing issues.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2014
I really enjoyed this story. It had great characters and a fun plot. I only have 2 issues: 1) It would have been even better if it had been a bit longer and not seemed kind of rushed. 2) There were some issues with incorrect words being used in places (which instead of with, etc)