Review: Too many editorial mistakes!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2012
This should have been a better book.  It started off well but deteriorated with every page.  The editing was nearly nonexistent, rendering a number of the sentences nonsensical.  She used "rampant" I don't know how many times in two or three pages. "this thing from this thing" (location 2361) made a lot of sense too.  I was interested in the mystery but found Lexie and Jake to be very undeveloped characters.  We really don't know anything about Jake except his macho, which was overdeveloped.  Lexie's background was not adequately explained.  There was little reason behind most of her actions.  She alternated between being a wimp and being a kick-a$$ fighter.  I didn't get it.  I skimmed most of the last 1/3 of the book because I was interested in the story, not in the characters.  Not very good.