Review: Good story, but needs editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2014
As with the first book in the series, this book needs editing.  It is fraught with grammatical and punctuation errors.  I was flabbergasted to see 'buku' used for 'beaucoup.'  REALLY?  The 'romance' feels contrived and the main character frequently just seems hormonal and volatile in a pubescent manner.It would have been nice to have the definition of a 'Dentelle' reiterated.I did enjoy the references to the location, which I am very familiar with.The author might want to check into some online author groups (just google "author critique groups") for input.  Ms. Bowhay spins a good yarn, it just needs some polishing.