Review: Good short story with a few problems
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2014
This was almost 5 stars, it's well written and the story hangs together well. My problem is that the characters are a little flat and the author sinks into purple prose to get them together. I'm all for as much hot sex as possible but when the heroine starts thinking of the hero in terms of over used cliches I just have to roll my eyes. This author is good enough to fix the problems & I think she's someone to watch in the future. Give this story a try.