Review: Good story - needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2013
Hunter's Beginning is a fantastic story. The plot is interesting and kept me hanging on to find out what would happen next to Kile. There were times when I laughed myself into stitches - Eric's comeuppance at Gorum's hands(?) was a prime example. The introduction of Kile's friends Vesper and Kaza added depth to the story as well as a lot of comic relief.So why only three stars? Poor spelling, missing words, failure to be able to differentiate between plural and possessive forms and general lack of proof reading. I found the story engrossing and so it was really annoying to be jolted back to reality by errors which could easily have been fixed by simply re-reading the story! At least it wasn't overpriced.