Review: The Sheriff's Woman
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 4, 2012
PLOT: Zedidiah Stone gives Yvonne Winters a job as a favor to her father. Yvonne has been ill for many years. After an experimental treatment abroad she's home and well again. Her innocent yet seductive personality has him tangled in knots.PROS: It's well written.CONS: Though well written there are a few errors. Most won't take away from a reader's enjoyment. The most annoying was that Zed's eyes changed from green at the beginning to gray later in the story. His eyes were never described as hazel so I'm guessing the author forgot.I wanted to like Yvonne but just didn't. She was too much into playing games to get Zed. She comes off as manipulative. At the end of the story, I don't know if he knows her at all.The story's too short. They sleep together, two weeks pass, and the story is over. This was at the point where my Kindle indicated that I was 83 percent along.3 STARS: The main fault of this story is that it's too short to convince me that their love was real or lasting.