Review: Reading it made me dizzy
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 14, 2012
This could have been a GOOD book! The plot was there it just got...lost at times. There were gaps. Huge gaps. And more typos than the law should allow. It was crazy. It was disappointing and frustrating to have to fill in the blanks yourself or just assume that this happened since you've made to this part. There too many names!!! Names with no "faces" or personalities to go with them. Before I read the book there was a review that said there were too many street names. That's true, too. It's not like the author give environment/neighborhood or the people much of a personality.  They don't go in depth or nothing. I hated, hated, hated the fact that everybody was just having sex so "freely" with ABSOLUTELY NO protection, not a one time. Condoms weren't mentioned once. That just freaked me out. But in the end, I guess the author did give a message on that subject. Now, the ending was just disappointing. I guess the goal was for it to be a cliffhanger and that's why everyone is looking forward to part 2 but it was just random. It was another example of one of those holes in this story. Like I said the story is there, the book could have been GOOD if it was written better. Maybe it needed a different or a better editor or something but I can not honestly say that I'm looking forward to part 2. There a few unanswered questions that I don't even think will get answered if the second book is written the same way that this one is. The only plot that I would be interested in is Myesha, her baby, and her new boyfriend.