Review: Full of plot holes and contradictions
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 23, 2013
This book had a lot of threads started that never went anywhere.  It seemed like the author was making it up as she went along, with no thought as to a cohesive storyline.************************POSSIBLE SPOILERS**********************Daniel was a creep.  Apparently, he became a gynecologist to troll for sexual partners.  Gross.  He's all about eating healthy, until he's not.  Then it seems like all his healthy eating preaching had no purpose.  It was little things like this that get introduced, only to be abandoned later, that drove me crazy.  Daniel has some kind of horrible past that is never fully explained, but it seems to include multiple personalities and an extreme case of douchebaggery.  There are a lot of sex scenes in this book.  Too many.  They got boring a repetitive after awhile.Sofia was suffering from a major case of TSTL syndrome.  After stalking Daniel at the grocery store, she decides the best way to make her interest known is by make a gynecologist appointment with him.  Who does that!?!  How about asking him on a date?  They do have a date, where he insults her and she runs away crying (this happens several times).  But she just keeps coming back because who doesn't like a creepy gynecologist who treats them like crap?  After a few times of her crying/running off, I started hoping she'd get hit by a bus.  She has a "job" taking care of her ill grandmother.  But after the beginning of the book, she never spends any time with her grandmother and I guess the reader is just supposed to forget her.  It gets mentioned (completely out of nowhere) that Sofia has 6 brothers and sisters, but I guess they don't visit grandma, or their sister, or want to come to her wedding?Seth and Dara are supporting characters who are given very little personality.  Seth is a con man/loving brother/sleaze bag who wants to sleep with Sofia/broken little boy.  I'm not sure who he was since his character kept changing and was never fleshed out properly.  Dara is an obese Romanian woman who transforms into a goddess by losing her mumu and waxing her eyebrows.  Again, she serves little purpose in the story.And of course Sofia manages to get pregnant, despite the fact that she's on the pill and he's had a vasectomy.  One minute he's calling her a pig whose cheating on him, the next they are buying baby clothes?  I have whiplash.This does end in a cliffhanger, but I won't be reading further.  Truthfully, this should have been a DNF for me, but once I start a book, I always finish it.