Review: Nice story with excellent character tension - terrible formatting and editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
Good character development and story line with sufficient action and suspense.  Candace's mystery is well-hidden revealed only at the end.  The novella must have been formatted from a hard copy in a font that transformed very poorly.  As a scan-reader the split spaces were maddening.  Also quite a few inappropriate word usage that were just wrong.