Review: Confusing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 10, 2012
The yarn itself was engrossing enough, but the author had an extremely aggravating (presumably unintentional) predilection to confuse the reader. The narrative would concentrate on a character and then referring to `he' or him' in the next paragraph - but relating to a completely different character. It may take the reader a few sentences to understand that he is referring to someone else. The narrative could be talking about the `hero', and in the next paragraph refer to `he' but be talking about the `villain'