Review: Enjoybale
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 15, 2013
The story has its pros and cons.First pros:- the plot is interesting- quick and nice to read- it is just the first part, but it is ending nicely in a way that it can be treated separately without reading remaining parts (so I treated it as short story without desire of reading more)Indifferent (for me :) ):- there are some repetitions and too much explanation sometimes - for me for a short story it made no difference.- the plot is not very revealing - one can find similar plots in other books, but for short story it is OK.Cons:- plenty reviews says that there are many grammar errors. I am not English speaker, read it just for story and didn't noticed them, but if it is true than it is definitely disadvantage.- the story is short (50 pages) and this is supposed to be the first part of a trilogy. But looking on Amazon I can see that it is just first part of first book!!! For me it is the biggest disadvantage. I can understand a trilogy containing of three full parts. But dividing those parts in three more??? For me it is just for selling more books and a bit repellent. Much better would be to make first few chapters of first book for free. I am even not sure if it is not a default for Amazon that you can download first few chapters for free.So closing my eyes on grammar errors and treating it as short story for one evening (even less) I am giving it 4*.