Review: Excellent story, very good writer, poor editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2013
I agree with the previous reviewer about spelling, grammar and poor translation from other language to English.  However, the story was excellent and the writer is very talented, so I could only deduct one star.  Hopefully, there will be a follow-up on this story and the editing will be better.  I will look forward to it.