Review: Needs a little work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 28, 2013
While the premise for this story was a good one - there were lots of what I felt were not really logical happenings. First of all, I had a difficult time believing that Miguel was able to just talk Sheri into marriage as he did. Granted, she didn't have family or a typical job, but to marry a total stranger and fly off to a new life in another country is not really believable. There were other issues in the book - the way the babies were hardly any extra work, the way Sheri knew about the switching of the sperm by the sperm bank yet Miguel didn't -- too neatly written up. The story was sweet but needs some tweaking.