Review: good debut
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2014
good story though I wish I did not have to wait for the sequel. I found myself getting tired of being so naive, but that's part of what made the story good. I did like the twists and connections that the author put in the story. I give this story a 4.5 because there were a few editing issues that shouldn't have been overlooked imo.