Review: It could be good....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 8, 2013
I like the premise of the book and it has potential - but this is definitely a case of "telling" not showing. The sentences are so short that it comes off choppy and juvenile; similar to what you would expect of a junior high student. I could not read past the first few pages it was bugging me so much. There is potential though if the author would use more sophisticated grammar and work on showing the action to the reader rather then telling the reader what is happening and what the characters are feeling. Good try.