Review: More to be desired
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 10, 2013
This story was amateurish. It read like a descriptive writing assignment.  That an insomniac could create her own dreams and prefer to experience life in dreamland rather than  in real world activities was too far fetched for me. Alexis' preference to return to sleep and the man in her dreams soon became her real world distraction. She began dreading work and counting down the minutes until she would return to her bed and her dreams. Add to this, sexual encounters in dreamland with the real life evidence of wet panties upon awakening. Like a dream, none of this felt real. By the story's end,  Alexis' dream man becomes real because of a decision made in her dreamsto declare her love for  him. Her declaration of love then released him from his own prison-existing in other people's dreams.  Unfortunately, this quick story did not arouse any emotions from me but rather I remained detached to the very end.