Review: Wait . . .  What?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 6, 2012
Let's see first off this book was so bad I couldn't even get through it, I'm at 63% and I can't bring myself to waste anymore of my time on it. With that being said here's what I can tell you about what I have read--there's no character development, Ral all but rapes Ariel in the first chapter, he's not really a sexy leading man with his razor sharp teeth which kinda makes the "love" scene a little scary, he talks like a caveman but is some super strong intelligent alien race. Ariel, while I could see would be some frightened girl is pretty much a shell she has no personality and falls in love with this Alien who rapes her and finds she just loves having sex with him, here I can only say . . . wait . . . what? There's too many poorly written sex scene don't get me wrong I love a good romance and I appreciate well written love scenes but these were lack luster and seemed to come on every other page. Also once they make it to his home planet the author was not very creative, the world consist of three colors, I love red, purple and black but the whole planet in this three color palette is boring. She also seems to like the words snarl and growl they were used far too often, using the same words over and over again makes reading this book tedious. I got this book for free had I not and actually spent the way too high asking price I would have returned it when I hit the fifth page on my kindle. There are way too many good self-published authors out there to waste your time on this book.