Review: Author will mature along with main character
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2013
I think the author has the makings of a potentially very interesting character.  However, the author's story lines need to mature alongside his character.  I found the plot too easy to anticipate.  The overall story was a little too unbelievable, even for fiction, for the coincidences, and would have enjoyed a little more mystery surrounding the characters.  It was an Ok read, but would probably be better suited for a younger reader, somewhat along the lines of the Hardy Boys.The overall story showed promise, and the author, in some places, showed that he had done research to support his characters.  The action did move along at a good pace.  I look forward to seeing the future development of the author and his character.