Review: Thisclosetobeingagreatstory
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2014
It started out well which is why I bought the book.  I loved the idea of the story and the characters but after the first 1/4 of the book it went downhill for me.  The situation with Caroline resolved itself much too quickly which sent the story in a slightly different direction than I had anticipated.  It would have been a much better story, in my opinion, had Edward and Caroline spent some time as the betrothed couple they were supposed to be while Rebecca fought her natural ability to get into trouble which, by the way, seemed more of an afterthought after the first incident.  And then there was the completely unnecessary subplot with Mr. Simons that sort of came from nowhere and was never really given an explanation.In all the idea was great but the execution was lacking.