Review: So many problems, so little time...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2014
This book is a hot mess and is really hard to rate.  The writing was very awkward and confusing.  It sounded to me like it was written by a group of high school girls but then I saw the writer was only 22 so guess that explains it.  There were so many things going on that caused me to scratch my head, thinking "who does that?".  You expected one of the characters to react a certain way in a situation but their reaction would be something totally different that didn't make sense.  The dialog was off too - how many 18 year-old girls who live in a trailer with a stripper for a mother say "whilst" and "amongst"?  All the long, heartfelt declarations of love with her father and stepmother got really old so I just started skimming those.  It felt like "how do I love thee, let me count the ways"!The editing was probably the worst I've ever read and I read 6 - 7 novels a week.  Spelling errors, crazy punctuation, run-on sentences, extra words, missing words, incomplete sentences, grammar mistakes, you name it, this book had it.  And it wasn't like one error per page or something, it was multiple errors in each sentence.  I lost count of how many times I had to edit a sentence several different ways in my head just to figure out what was going on.Harley was the biggest mess of all.  That chick seriously needed to stay single and focus on growing up.  The fact that every time one of the guys cheated on her she wondered if it was her fault was so incredibly annoying.  Even more annoying was how quickly she would take them back, especially Jace.All that being said, I still couldn't put this book down.  I think it had the same appeal that a show like "worlds fattest man" or "woman with three heads" has - you don't want to look but something just draws you in, some sick fascination you can't resist.  I would say there's a pretty good chance that I'll buy the next book once it comes out.