Review: One of the worst beginnings
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 18, 2013
I've read a lot of books and usually the sample is a good hook. Most authors know to start a story pretty good to reel readers in. This author however missed that part in writing class.This book had one of the worst sample's I've ever read. The writing is horrible so I can only image how the story progresses. Again, the writing is horrible and the author's obsession with ethnicity is a trip. The hero is even olive skinned so naturally the heroine is guessing what race he is because he can't just be a white dude with a Kate Middleton Darque Tan. The heroine's best friend is a flamboyant African American who makes out with a Latino man in a club. The author refers to him as the Latino and Latino hottie and Latino man way too much. It was as if she had a list of tokens and needed to mention every color she could.Besides the exclamation points and italics to show the heroine's thoughts which in most books are stupid. "OMG! Why is my body shuddering at this man I don't know sultry voice" lady please.Awful beginning so that almost always = a horrible book.Overall: READ the sample and if it sounds even a little bit ridiculous and bad DON'T BUY IT.