Review: Kind of Juvenile
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2013
I read the first books in this series and was looking forward to this one. I was hoping the characters would continue to grow and develop and the author's writing would continue to advance, also. This book seemed to take a step back in all phases. The writng was stunted. The dialogue was juvenile at best. The heroes aren't developing and evolving at all. After all of the adventures they've been through, you wouldn't think that they'd still be whiney brats throughout the entire book. Luke, especially, is getting annoying as hell. Every time he talks he seems to whine and moan about something. Also in the first books the author didn't drone on with unnecessary dialogue. This book seemed to go on and on and on with unneeded (and unwanted) conversations. I hope the next book is better.