Review: Potential spoiler alert. Good story but
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2012
There were a lot of typos. A really good editor is needed to fix the typos and the too frequent switch between first person and third person narrators. There were also times that certain facts were inaccurately stated between the narrations.  But the biggest issue was the amount of fantasy used at the end to discover and protect the missing star. It was totally unbelievable which limited my enjoyment.