Review: It was okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2014
**I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review**Imperfectly, the 2nd book in the Dante's Nine Motorcycle Club series is Leo and Kelly's story. I honestly usually enjoy insta-love stories, they are some of my favorites. This one however, just didn't do it for me because I didn't believe the connection between the characters. I spent most of the story believing that he knew Kelly's secret and that's why he was so possessive and protective of her. I thought that maybe he was helping her in a way by calling her his woman. To realize that he knew nothing, that he just met this girl, trusted her and allowed her free reign at his club and his house...He didn't even get that upset when he found out she was a liar.The height difference bothered me as well...she's 5'3" and he's 6'7" and at one point I googled pics of a very tall NBA player and his short wife to see how the author was able to make some of the scenes work. As I was reading, a few times I kept thinking... "But she's too tiny." I don't know, I guess if he was bending down a lot it could work.And then there was the grammar...the grammatical errors distracted me a lot!  Misspelled words and commas instead of periods all throughout the book...Aside from that, it was great catching up with Declan and Kassie and I am actually happy that Leo and Kelly got their HFN ending!