Review: Sweet Young Fantasy Love
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 21, 2014
Sweet albeit slightly predictable.  Ashton Grace Winslow wants a fun road trip with her BBF LuLu to get away from her controlling politician father. Her father hires ex-soldier, now PI, Dane Woods to follow her.  They find love on the road while thinking they are withholding their true identities from each other. The first half of the book details their trip and how they fall in love. The second half deals with the events once back home and the obstacles preventing them from being together.Dane is honorable, trying to do what’s best by everyone he cares about. Grace is a little nave. (A vacation fling that won’t tell you his real name or give you his phone number so screamed married man or total player or worst case--criminal. Grace was incredibility lucky she’s a book character. In real life it wouldn’t have worked out the way it did.)  Still it’s a cute, sweet story—one you root for the pair to make it work.  There’s steam between them in most love scenes, others are brushed over.  There’s enough drama to the story to keep it interesting but nothing ridiculous or over the top.Grammatically the text could benefit from a good proofreading. Some punctuation issues as well as capitalization confusion (example: Civil War was not capitalized even though it was referring to the American Civil War; Army brothers was capitalized even though army is simply used as an adjective not referring to a specific army in that sentence.) At one point their suggested trip from Nashville to Miami is referenced as taking 9 hours??? The distance between those two cities is more than that.HEA. No cliffhanger. Very complete epilogue. Alternating 1st person POV between Dane and Grace.