Review: If I wanted an editing job, I would get one!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 10, 2013
This could have been so good, but it seemed as if someone dropped commas into sentences that didn't need them and took out the ones that were needed. There were so many mistakes in this book that I would have been embarrassed to claim it as my own. "a few feather"  "solder" instead of "soldier" "Her face tear streaked her arms dirty" is supposed to be a complete sentence. "Marion" or "Marian"? "George" or "Georg"? There were hundreds of mistakes. There are hundreds, not twenty or thirty mistakes, but hundreds. Save yourself and demand a quality book.