Review: Not bad, needs an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 7, 2011
Bought it because it looked interesting... and cheap.  Hard at times to slog through the bad grammar and syntax - this book is in desperate need of good editing, yet the story grabbed my attention and I stuck it out in spite of the problems with the writing.  Might buy the second; but really hope the growing process for this writer shows up in later books.  A good story in spite of the issues.