Review: Horrendous!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2013
It's very rare that I write reviews, but this book was so utterly terrible that I felt I had to. Quite honestly, it's not even worth one star. I returned it as soon as I was done with it and honestly, it's not even worth a free read.The premise itself has potential, but the writing and editing is unreadable. There is little to no punctuation and it's told from different perspectives but gives no indication of whose perspective it is, so you frequently have no idea who is saying what, or if they're actually saying anything or just thinking it. It's ridiculous. The characters are unrealistic and unrelatable, the sex is on the same level of really, really bad porn created by people who have never actually had sex, and the BDSM elements are so completely unrealistic, it is laughable and the ending is so abrupt, I thought the book was missing pages. I actually got a headache from trying to figure out which characters perspective the story was being told from, because it jumped around so often, with no notice or obvious signs and it made no sense. The story had no natural flow and the dialogue was painful.Save yourself the money and the headache.