Review: Excellent for a short story.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 01 10, 2011
Honestly, I thought about giving this one a 4.5 but then I thought about my reasoning. The only reason I'd do that is because it was short and sweet. Ok, only because it was short? I can't take off points for it being exactly what it's meant to be. Although, I really would have loved to learn more about Olivia and her lifestyle. It seemed so fun.There was definitely a fun twist at the end that had my gears spinning but it was fun and lighthearted. Poor Olivia always protesting even up to the last scene. I really loved Olivia. She was so exciting and as I said before I would have loved to learn more about her.While I wanted more, I was definitely happy with what I got. I loved the armband myth and legend it, plus the secret message Olivia had with her cousin Ray. It was all in fun and I enjoyed it. I would have loved more of the same but for a short story it was great!