Review: Ugh so predictable
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 11, 2014
I hesitate to write negative reviews, but in this case it couldn't be helped. The story was completely predictable, it was obvious who "John" was. No mystery there! Lots of grammatical errors drive me crazy, and this book has a TON. In one sentence the author spelled the name Michelle and the sentence before was Michele, as an example. Two sentences in a row! Besides that, the story is short and just leads you to a link to purchase the next book. It didn't even have a real ending, it stopped in the middle of a paragraph and overall just at a strange spot. I'm not against a series, but this was ridiculous. Needless to say, I won't be buying the next one. Disappointed!