Review: cute book but needs serious editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 14, 2013
My daughter thought it was a cute story-she's 5. I also liked it but I have a serious problem reading books to my kindergartener when conventional English grammar rules are not followed. For example, sometimes "treetop" is capitalized and sometimes it's not. Sometimes quotation marks are done correctly and sometimes they are not. I will not read this book to her again unless these errors are fixed.