Review: If poor editing drives you nuts don't buy this book.  If you like a really great story then go for it.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 09 30, 2013
I don't usually mention poor editing because its a tedious time consuming task and very expensive if you pay someone to do it. A lot of beginning indie writers can't afford to pay for it and may not be good at it.  I have no trouble reading a good story with poor editing.  If the story is good enough I don't even notice. This was a WONDERFUL story but I still noticed the poor editing simply because it was really bad.  It seems to be worst in the first couple of chapters though.  For several pages the writer switched into first person writing and then later switched back over again.  That was confusing but I still managed to enjoy what was a very good story,  AS I neared the end of the book I didn't notice any problems at all.  It could have been because the ending was so action packed that I just didn't notice.  I truly cared about the good guys and I really hated the bad guys and I truly feel this read was deserving of 5 stars.  I don't think she wrote a second book to this one but I will be on the look out for one since such a story has so many possabilities to ontinue.