Review: Big disappointment and a real waste of time.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2013
After the first book I was hoping the author would have been able to build on what looked like a good plot adding depth and better character development.  There was a lot of potential and I was hoping the time would be taken to develop the story and maybe get some editing assistance but that was not to be.  Save your money.  I have read much better .99 cent eBooks.Now I am not talking about wrong verb tense or finding "your" instead of "you're" in places,  I am talking about whole paragraphs where the wrong character's name is used in the dialog or where you are introduced to new characters, cities, and terms but no detail or followup is given to help add that character into the plot.There are secondary characters introduced for the sole purpose of "killing" the main character and they seem to die in fight but you aren't sure if they did or not cause the detail of the battle never describes the end.  Its like "where did they go??".There are steps going up the to city described as a marvel but you are never given a description of what the city looks like or how marvelous it is.  Steps don't make a city.Where the descriptions and names of the creatures they are fighting change in the middle of the battle (trolls become orcs).  Again, you are left asking yourself if you missed a page.Wasting time on sex scenes when the plot, background, and character development is totally ignore sadly shows really poor authorship and makes a VERY shallow story!  Not to mention you're left asking "to what purpose" was that tossed in here for?  Describing animal actives at a barnyard in springtime is not writing, its biology and its boring in a story.Dropping this one from my kindle library.