Review: Very Poor Editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 26, 2013
The story was fun and cute.  Very hard to read though, with all of the excessive editing errors.  It was as if it skipped the editor all together.  Too many wrong words, extra words - I found my self backing up and rereading inserting the correct word or tense of the word in place of the incorrect one.  Lot's of He's instead of She's and vice versa. And "one" instead of "won" - really??  I would have liked to give four stars and would have if not for the editing.