Review: Short, clean, underdeveloped
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2014
The story started out well.  I thought it was going to be very good.  I was pretty disappointed by the lack of depth.  It really was more of a novella.  I appreciated how clean it was, however, everything was very shallow, no real depth.  I didn't care for the personification of the ghost.  I felt the ghost had more depth than the two other main characters.  I would like to see the author give a little more substance.  She seems to have untapped potential.  I read this in 45 minutes waiting for my kids sports events to start.  One of those reads that was very easy to put down. I gave it 3 stars because there wasn't a 2 1/2 star button.Reader L