Review: Idea- decent, Actual story- not so much
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2012
It has already been said in the other reviews, but I thought I would put my two cents out there. I picked this up free because someone I trust to suggest books said it was good. I will second guess every other suggestion she makes from now on.The story idea isn't bad. I think, done by another author it would make an excellent novel. I had so much trouble following who was thinking, and what was really happening, versus what might be happening that I got angry. A lot.The abuse that so greatly affected the heroine while in captivity didn't seem to translate to being beaten until bruised by the man she loved? I could go on and on about the spanking in this story and how inappropriate it is at times, but I'm not going to. A few other reviewers have already said it.