Review: Not even a short story
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2013
A good short story has a plot, charachter development, and makes you care about what happens to the characters.  This really had none of that.  It essentially had only the angst of the "hero" pitted against the unbelieveable devotion of the heroine.  Conflict doesn't make the story, and that was about all there was to this one.