Review: Definite first novel
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2013
I don't wish to bad mouth this since it's actually an ok read so don't take my star rating as an indication of a bad novel. Heck I didn't put it aside which I WILL do if I start a lousy book.Mr Ryan has a very involved story of huge scope which can spell disaster for a freshman novel and unfortunately is also the hallmark of many freshman efforts. He did manage to make if work. My ony issue with this story was that somewhere about half way in, it turned into a 'mens adventure' feel with a hero who never fails, can do no wrong and is much more macho than you or I will ever be and the bad guy was so blatant, I don't know why he bothered with a scene that hid his identity.I'm not saying this is a wrong approach, there's a market for this - it just wasn't what I was expecting. The finale kind of made me feel like I was reading the novelization of a video game with the hero character going up against the boss level character in a battle to beat the level. Your mileage may vary, I saw things this way, you may not. Let your own reading be your guide.All that being said - his writing style is good, it does grab you and keep you going to the end. If you're looking for a rip roaring adventure that literally will take you around the world and to the deepest pits of Hell, read it.I'll consider a future effort by Mr. Ryan to see how his writing evolves.If you've already read this review earlier I mistakenly called Mr Ryan out on using Abraham vice Lot as bargaining with God. (now edited out)Well mea culpa, Mr. Ryan and I chatted and he kindly redirected me to the correct part of the bible Genesis 18: 23-33 where Abraham talks with the Lord BEFORE Lot enters the picture. I stand corrected publicly and gladly. I hope Mr. Ryan keeps writing, I would like to see his style evolve and hopefully become one of my favorite authors in time.