Review: Not impressed....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2014
Short stories can produce a lot of depth without a lot of prose but this one was just missing something for me.  I liked how it ended but I am not too crazy about spending more than $0.99 on the next story in the serial.I just cannot wrap my head around spending $2.99 on 20 or so pages. That is just ridiculous!  Plus most of those pages are just advertisements for other books.  I always feel cheated by these serial short stories.  Why not just take your time edit and then release the story as a complete full length book and charge $4.99 or $5.99 for it?  Your are more likely to develop a loyal fan base and readers will respect you more as an author.But back to the story...not entirely unrealistic but uncharacteristically accepting. The characters adapt too quickly to their attraction to one another especially Mr. Straight guy Luke. I am so tired of the cliche Trent as well, "typical" strange guy who has never made sense to be a soldier...gay of course because what else would he be and everyone is supposed to be ok with the typical plot.Surprise me for once!!! Make the super masculine guy the one who is comfortable with being gay and open about it.  Authors really have to start thinking outside of their gender roles box.I will not be buying any more of this series unless they are free or maybe if they finally come all together in a reasonably priced bundle.