Review: Could have been really cute, but the end really ruined it for me
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2014
This was very, very sappy.  The story had promise even with all the sap, and I was even putting up with the main female character being so insecure and completely unable to make up her mind, but it was hard to take her as a good mom (and therefore a likable character) when:1.  The hotel mixed up her suite reservation with some random guy, and without doing ANY checking whatsoever into this guy, she decides, with her two very young children, to share the suite with him because he's going to foot the bill.  Seriously?2.  She's on a vacation to spend time with her kids and get away for a bit, but pushes through to finish some chapters to submit EARLY to her editor.  Again, seriously?3.  I'm not giving anything away as this is stated in the description, but as she goes to great lengths to pretend to be this guy's girlfriend so he can win his ex back, SHE NEVER TELLS HER CHILDREN IT'S ALL PRETEND.  I didn't realize this until the very end of the novel, and it's the reason my review is one star.