Review: Good story, poor editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2012
I was very happy to see Rast and Nadiah's story come out.  What I wasn't happy about was the rampant typos in the book.  In one place, Rast is referred to as "RAT".  I know that this story is less expensive than her other stories, and I know that she publishes these on her own...and I really haven't read anything lately that didn't have at least one or two typos, even from the major publishing houses...but there were enough that I was really annoyed by them.I liked Rast and Nadiah's storyline, but it was pretty buried among the old characters' side stories and the new characters setting the stage for the next book.  Kat was the only one that didn't seem to get much play time, only acting as a food-gopher for Olivia (and can that be dropped please?  No more about her weird pregnancy cravings!).  And I have never seen a phrase so overused in one book as "You're so bad", which the women seemed to say at least once every time they were together.Overall, the story was decent but coupled with the editing and too-much-information about the other characters (an update is cool, but why do they have to take over everyone else's books?), I couldn't go higher than a 3 in the rating.  Good but not great.