Review: Unimpressed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2014
This short story really tended to shy away from everything. When Parker would swear it wouldn't be included, that was just a little too clean of a script for me. It was annoying that many scenes were fades and most of all that the intervening two weeks from when they slept together are not remarked upon by. The veep t of either character. Even a few sentences would have done the trick, like saying thatshe threw herself into her work but that had the opposite effect keeping her every thought on a relationship that could never be until he opened up. Or something from his side drawing the parallels between his life and that of the accused teen in his case or even going over everything with his partner, showing that he's finally opening up (like his partner wouldn't ask about the hot redhead from the bar that he took home?? Come on!!). Something  needed to be put in there even with it being a short story.