Review: Simplistic
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 25, 2014
The storyline was interesting enough, but the actual writing seems a bit immature. Tons of dialogue, which does help keep the reader's attention, but  with none of the description that usually accompanies an historical novel. Nothing flowed. Little use of dialogue tags-"That's right," Jane responded, twisting her handkerchief and refusing to meet John's searching eyes.- so it feels like a constant banter of he said/she said.