Review: Son'x?  At least he didn't name him Screech.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 8, 2012
It turns out that quality dialogue is the hardest thing to write.  Everything else about this book is generally fine.  The setting is fine, the action scenes are fine, the characters are generally fine.But the dialogue isn't fine.  Also, "Yea" is pronounced like "Nay" - hence, "Yea or nay,"  The word the author is looking for is "Yeah."  Given that this word is used every two lines, it gets to be distracting quickly.  Cut it out entirely.  I know that the author wants the guy to sound like a teenager, but that can be done without unpolished dialogue.So there.  Polish the dialogue, and aside from the cringe-worthy superhero names, not a bad book.  But a lot of polishing is needed.