Review: Another author caught in the trap
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2014
This installment was very disappointing for me. For the most part I have been able to overlook the editing issues. I tend to give the indie authors a lot leeway in this area. The books are often cheaper because they don't incur the cost of professional editors. But I do wish she would learn to use paragraphs more effectively.In my opinion with this installment the author has made two huge errors.The first is to distributed the story among too many different subplots. Having several subplots wouldn't necessarily be a problem if they were interesting. Unfortunately I only found three of the subplots interesting enough to keep my attention. In addition, I felt that the characters' dialogue was tedious and unimaginative. I feel that Jordan seems to be rambling to create additional pages just so she doesn't have bring the story to a conclusion.The second issue is bringing in several characters that if the direction remains, will render the original primary characters meaningless.I am being vague here because I don't want to ruin the story for those who decide to read it. If the next book brings the series to a conclusion I might read it. But I doubt that will be the case.