Review: It needed to be shorter
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 19, 2012
This is the 5 th once upon a time travel story I've read by this author. This one is the longest of them all too and probably my least favorite. The heroine was a complainer and a cryer and had no backbone. The hero, on the other hand was gentle and although he shouldn't be even trusting. My heart melted at the way he defended her from Matilda. Some of Leah's actions as well had me frustrated and how convenient that that everyone else didn't think to give her something to write with in order to communicate. And how convenient that he seems to understand her gestures yet doesn't when she later bravely tries to warn him! His reaction near the end was expected but of course Leah as usual goes to crying and giving up. One of the few saving graces is Muffin who always has me laughing whenever she pops up. Overall it was an okay read but I was disappointed more than anything since thus far I've really been enjoying the series. Maybe things could have been cut out to make this a shorter and more enjoyable read like the last ones I've read. Still will look out for anymore once upon a time travel stories, I'm addicted to Muffin! Lol