Review: Started well
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 31, 2012
This started really well, with the  revelation of  a Husbad and  Father's  realization  he could no longer  deny the truth of his  sexuality. It  was approached  well in the  story , with both  ups and  downs of the news to the  small community.His  run in and  eventual attraction to  Zane,[ a young man caring  for his  two  younger  siblings] flowed well. Shortley after  it  became a  bump and  grind  fest. Now I dont  mind  hot sex, and  there  was plenty in that, but it  really lost  [ imo anyways] the  story within the  story, that  could  have been  played out  better.  I liked  most of the  characters  in the  book, they  came  across  as  real up to a  point, but despite my  yaoi infested heart; I  just felt the  plot disappearred.  It  became  just one  paragraph  of  plot  with  excuse to  fall into  pages of  sex scenes.I found the  ending to  be anticlimatic, and the  predictable. I also have to admit the  continual  term  " hon" bothered me. That  was  easily  forgiven but I liek plot with  yaoi unless its  well drawn [ manga with humor ]teehee.I  would  probably try the  authors  other offerings  eventually.... later  tho, it  left me  to cold to  look for  a while.