Review: Good but not great....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2013
2.5 - 3 starsIf you're afraid of dirty words etc and alphacavemanpullthehair kind of men then this is NOT for you...The way it reads is hard until you get used to it - it just needs some paragraphing separation and editing - the writer gets the hang of it after a while and starts putting little star dividers between paragraphs which makes it easier to read and distinguish between what characters is talking - but it doesn't last long and you are back to guessing.If you can get past the age difference between the leads while still disturbing its quite a typical love story. Although I don't understand why he has to pierce her within 24hours of taking her v'card and then thinking of tattooing her...I mean - the poor girl had to no say in anything and sorry but that is f'ed up.Im all for the alpha male thing but this was just overboard.Also she acted liked a s*x starved teenager...oh wait - she was!!! By the end of it - I was annoyed and was skimming over the steamy scenes - which there was wwwaayyy to many - and that's saying something!!The Lyon family is funny - the parents were the best - I loved their banter.Lyon himself was a little overboard - I don't he had to be written that way.Kat/Angel - was not a fan of hers. I couldn't connect with her and she came off too...pathetic - really the only word I can put to describe her.The whole biker concept was a good background - cant really go wrong with that.Overall a little disturbing and over the top