Review: Not a story.  More like a chapter.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 18, 2013
I bought this thinking it was another book, but it is more like a description of a scene.  It describes the main character's reception at his girlfriend's family's gathering and that's about it.  It builds tension but doesn't do anything with it.Shame on the author for touting this as a short story.  Shame on the author, also, for hiding the fact beneath a wall of text.