Review: Good writing but story leaves you hanging
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2013
The writing was good.  No real issues with grammar or editing. The big mystery that leaves a reader hanging is what exactly is going on.  It is not a cliffhanger but the story seems incomplete at the end.  It is  unclear whether this short story is meant to be one of those pieces (prequel, sequel, side story) that a writer puts forth to accompany another longer  more fully developed book.