Review: Poor Pixie and her Pebbled Nibbles!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 16, 2014
Poor Pixie is truly poor, impoverished by her mother's addiction to gambling. She has turned to her former guardian and his twin sister (Pixie's one true friend) for help in avoiding debtor's prison. Pixie's best hope is to marry a wealthy man who can cover her family's debts and still have the ability to support Poor Pixie and her high-rolling mama (whist-ful thinking, pun intended). Certain members of the ton take exception to Pixie and her closeness to the former guardian, and Poor Pixie is the victim of their malicious pranks. Worse yet, Poor Pixie's perils and her husband hunt are easily upstaged by her friend's blossoming romance.Editing suffers, as seems to be the norm for eBooks. My favorite blunder in Chills is the "pebbled nibbles" Pixie experiences during lovemaking. Sadly, that was the highlight of the book. Maybe it explains the the title?Gentle Readers, would you be amenable to grading editing on a scale of C, D, or F? You could include your grade and your favorite booboo in each review. Maybe it could mitigate our frustration with lack of editing and serve as a warning to others. "Warning: Pebbled nibbles ahead!"