Review: That Which Left Me Dissatisfied
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2014
I have mixed feelings about this one. There were flashes of brilliance, but overall the writing was amateurish and suffered hackneyed dialog. I am all for a dark, utterly twisted and disturbing storyline, but as a mother, I couldn't get past the denouement. Glaring errors with grammar, punctuation, and misused words/phrases (collage and whales) were a distraction. A keen proofreader and beta would be beneficial. I would love to reread a honed edition. It's ironic that the author chose a publishing company as the setting when she is in need of an editor.