Review: Plot somewhat ok but book needs serious work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2013
Very hard to like any of the characters in this book. They are all extremely immature, and the dialogue reads like a group of thirteen year olds are speaking. I agree with everything the other 2 star reviewers have said: huge plot gaps (Ivy keeps talking about how awful she was in high school? Huh? Everyone seemed to like her), unrealistic events (not telling her parents about the abuse, going to meet her ex), etc.The only reason I gave it two stars and not one is that the author at least got most of the basic grammar and vocabulary right, which made this less painful to read than many free books. With a major rewrite and a good editor, this would be worth reading. Skip it otherwise.