Review: A single scene between a stubborn submissive and his stern Dominant
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 4, 2013
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.Rating: 6/10PROS:- The story essentially encompasses one long scene, with a couple of breaks in the middle. What I liked was that the men don't adhere to the Master/slave dynamic the whole time. When Blake needs his lover, Archer drops the Master hat and becomes his lover.- Michael does a good job with this story of showing the mind games that a lot of Dominants like to play.CONS:- It's so short we barely get any idea of who the characters really are.- There are several kinks here that are not my cup of tea. Humiliation and punishment are the two that come to mind right away.Overall comments: This is decent for what it is--a short work of BDSM erotica. It has the same basic fault that most short works do: just about the time the characters start to round out, it's over.