Review: Started great and then . . . THUD!!!!!!!!!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2014
This had a really strong start and I really liked the main heroine. When we're first introduced to her, I thought: This is a woman I want to learn more about. That lasted exactly one more chapter. I think the problem is that the story is too rushed. It really needs another 100 pages to flesh out the characters. The heroine has spent years away from her pack and then spends five minutes with her ex, has sex with him and essentially immediately decides to move back because she can't live without him. We find out "why" she left -- but it's so contrived and forced that it's almost a comedic moment. Then we find out something that throws her perception into doubt and that's even more laughable. Like I said, I liked some of the book -- but it's really rushed beyond belief. It's pretty clean for an indie. A few typos here and there. I might have tried one of the sequels if it focused on the same couple again -- mostly because we learned so very little about them in the first book -- but that doesn't appear to be the case so I'm done. Seriously, though, if the author would just add 100 pages of actual plot to this, it might be something great.