Review: Good, but strange...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2013
I liked the writing and the author did a good job with the characters but he needed to have the book professionally edited.  As an editor myself, the one thing that bugged me the most was the story took place in the US, and the characters were American, yet the author used his brittish slang.  They dont mix.  The main character wouldnt "smelt" anything.Whether in the US or the UK, that word is horrible grammar and never, ever used by Americans.  If you're going to set your story in the US, the slang needs to be American.