Review: good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2014
This was quite a good story... I liked the characters.. I like Shawn and Kale.. The author explained the magic and the different packs  without it being confusing .. I do understand what another reviewer wrote when they said it needed editing ... The problem was this author is British but tried to write a book based in the US.. British speaking is different .. Same words mean different things .. Example "pissed" means mad, upset, not getting drunk which is how it was used in the book.. That's what made it were you might have to re-read a sentence to get what she was trying write.. I still gave it 4 stars because I liked the story.. She has set up a good start for a new series.. She introduced a lot of interesting characters and story lines..