Review: Interesting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 19, 2013
This book was a little hard to read at first.  I think with some editing it could be a great book.  If the chapters were given titles then readers would know when the scenes changed.  It was all over the place.  I thought the story line was very good.Now the way it ended was just wrong.  It was rushed and instead of being a cliff hanger, it just went flat.  I don't know if that was the end of the book, or if there will be a part 2.  What happened to the girls?  It was like as the book progressed, the characters that were in the beginning of the book were forgotten about and never mentioned again.  What happened to Neon, and her mom?  Where are the girls?  Are they on a journey or did they just disappear?  Did Supreme and Walker survive?  Most authors will put a "to be continued" as the last line to let the reader know that there is more to come.  Glad it was a freeby, and if there is going to be a part 2, it better not cost more than ninety nine cents or the author will be disappointed.  I don't think many people would be willing to spend more than that.