Review: Is there a spa limit?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 3, 2014
I like the story. Really. But why end so abruptly? The story has no resolution, and I guessed there was to be a sequel. The end page says there is a story using the same setting but is not a sequel.  Therefore, from now on edit your story to fit the number of words you are given. This had the makings of a 5 star s.