Review: It was okay, but...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 17, 2014
I took a chance reading this story and it was a good concept.  I applaud the author for writing a multiracial romance.  To be honest, there's not that many white men/black women stories even though out society is moving towards multiracial families.The story was good.  What I didn't like about it was the fact that it needs a lot of editing.  There were grammar errors as well as missing punctuations.  As a quick read, it works, but it leaves the reader unsatisfied almost.  Like I wanted to see more of a romantic dance between the two characters.  The chase, to me, is the most erotic and satisfying element of the story besides the sex.All in all, as a quick read, it's okay.