Review: You got to pay for the sequel
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2011
It's not really an entire story. It's more like the sample you get when you try out other paid works. There's no characterization to speak of or story/plot development. Am I crazy to expect some literature even from free stuff? Of course, I need to pay so I can find out what happens next. I'd have been tempted if I were actually given something meaty, but this is crap, even it I didn't pay anything for it. Let's see: she leaves a mysterious note, gets him to have phone sex and then actual sex in the dark (don't their eyes eventually get used to the darkness?) and then she leaves. Pay up to read them do more of the same, not even erotic, stuff? I don't think so.