Review: Sex with no substance...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 20, 2013
This short story was just about sex and even that was a let down.  The characters were not developed at all.  The initial sex scene started out ok, but ended just as quickly as it started, leading the reader to believe that the next sexual encounter would be mind blowing.  Well it was not.  It was completely lackluster at best.  This was such a disappointment because the author could have and should have done a much better job with this piece of work.