Review: Needs a LOT of help
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 19, 2013
This book has all the earmarks of being good.  It really does.  However, the author chooses to float in and out of narrative and thoughts from the characters with no compunction or indication that is what is happening.  After going through 10% of the book I realized it was taking more work to read than it deserves, so I stopped reading.Perhaps if the author found someone to EDIT her book and point out that thoughts might work better in italics than as narrative this book would be something many people would like.