Review: Needs editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
This could have been a very good book.  I sincerely tried  to read the whole thing, but was just too distracted and aggravated by the poor writing and/or editing.  Run-on sentences, incorrect grammar and punctuation and the incessant switching back and forth between present and past tense (sometimes in the same sentence) made the book impossible to read.  If it were edited and then offered again, I might try once more to read it.