Review: Not really a strory
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 31, 2013
A short story should have characterization, plot and resolution.  This has characterization, but nothing else.  There is no plot, just a lot of kids running around.There is also the rather odd fixation on why the kids were called cupcakes.  I could understand if the kids alone were questioning the rather common term of endearment, but at the end the adult voice of the narrator is still not sure why they were called cupcakes.Two stars instead of one because the writing is very very good.  I just wish there had been a story here