Review: Agree with other reviewers... Pitiful!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2012
There is no excuse for this kind of shoddy work.  It's ridiculous for an "author" to expect others to respect and care about their work when they themselves don't care enough to read through it even once after writing it.Proofreading/editing is a process that exists for a reason.  How can readers enjoy a story when they constantly have to double-take and lose focus?  This book is so full of mistakes, I passed it on to my 9 year old son as proofreading practice for the upcoming standardized tests.  That's how elementary and pitiful the errors are - a 9 year old child can correct them.The difference between "then" and "than", the use of "worst" every time the writer meant "worse", frequently repeating words or leaving them out, dozens of unnecessary commas; this "book" is a collection of all the basic problems we learn how to fix by 3rd grade graduation.Even without the hundreds of mistakes, this story isn't worth the time it takes to download it, much less read it.  It's basically just a prologue for the next book (which doesn't get any better).  It's completely unbelievable.  There's no way to identify with the characters because they're so shallow and inconsistent.I'm trying to think of one good aspect of this story to justify that 1 star we're forced to give... Sadly, I can't.