Review: Edit me !!!!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 21, 2012
Bad.  Very bad grammatically.  The book has a very good story line.  However, someone needs a dictionary, thesaurus, hooked on phonics...something.  It was very difficult following the story at most points.  The grammar SUCKS.  If the author had bothered to read the reviews from book 1, there should have been some improvement in book 2.  There was NONE.  I don't even wish to bother with part 3 if its going to be as badly written as the first two.