Review: Inexperience of author is very apparent...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 31, 2013
The story has potential but was too cumbersome to read.  The dialogue was stilted and the story didn't flow well.  Lots of grammatical errors too.  If rewritten under a good editor and with a mentor, the story could be more promising.  The characters were not very likeable either.  Riley was too much of a door mat and Jackson was an inconsiderate, unemotional controlling jerk.  I won't be buying any sequels to this one.