Review: Off the Ice - Great Story Line Needs Edit Work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 3, 2013
I really enjoyed the story line of Off The Ice and the friction between Jake and Nick.  The author pulls together a love story without explicit love scenes that makes it suitable for a varied audience.  The story skirts the hockey theme without a lot of in depth and technical details.  I found the general details worked well to pull the setting and the story together.  The ebook has the potential to be a 4 or 5 star in my book, but there were a very large number of editing flaws.  If you are a reader who doesn't get hung up on the editing bloopers, then Off The Ice is worth reading.