Review: chained brides of kindred
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
This story was very interesting as many of her stories are. It is a bout Maggie who is going to a new planet to explore the life forms with two kindred scientist but first she must stop at Yonnie six to make a trade with Lady Popenose. This is where she encounters Kor the recent slave purchase of Lady Popenose. Maggie decides to free him and run from Yonnie six with the slave. Unfortunately she is caught before she can go back to the kindred ship waiting for her. Lady Popenose has her implanted with a slut button and sells her at a local bazaar.The story held a lot of adventure and even romance, but what I did not like is it revolved  a good portion of the story in a sex slave location where woman were beaten and sexually degraded. Also Maggie was so insecure in her decisions about her own life it became annoying. I mean she has two PHDs and her fiancé is a jerk but she feels she needs to stay with him and pass up on true love with Kor a man who risked his own freedom to save her. REALLY!!!The biggest problem I had with the story is not about the story line though. I have noticed in the last couple of her books that the editing really needs to be looked at. She would be writing about certain characters and get their names wrong or just have words missing in the sentence so it did not make sense. This is something the author might want to look into just to fix. I know these are self published as she has written before but there was never a problem in the past books up to book 6. I just think looking into this would benefit her. Especially the name situation. There is nothing more confusing when she is writing about say Maggie and then puts Kats name in her place. This has happened in the last three books things like this.