Review: lost the suspension of disbelief
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 31, 2012
Misused commas and hyphenation are driving me nuts and regularly jolting me out of the story, which is starting to stray into political thriller territory along with a special forces trained scientist who just happens to believe There's Something Out There. Except for the commas, the writing is solid and inviting. The characters are better developed than the norm, and honestly, I'm a sucker for a good Godzilla-type story. But the scientist expecting it, looking for signs of it... ehhh, my disbelief is no longer suspending. Did not finish.