Review: great story bad style
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 8, 2013
Shannon and her angry stepbrother Jared are on the run.  They want to settle in Dolphin Bay. Right away Selena falls for the 2 most eligible bachelors in town, Lucien and Kirk, who happen tp be in a family feud. Who will Selena choose The witch or the alpha werewolf? Can she have either with a jealous alpha panther shifter for a brother?Great story but the writing style... yuck! I don't want to offend but it seems you are writing as both an outsider and in the 3rd person sometimes delving into the first person???