Review: Good Read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2013
A strong 3.5. I enjoyed this first story in the Ellery Mountain series. It was insanely predictable, but considering its less than a 100 pages long that was to be expected. Max and Finn are hot together. Fireman and cop? Yep. fantasy material.My biggest ISSUE with this story is: the constant editing errors regarding character names. I.e. Using Finn when it should be Max. Or Josh when it should be Finn. I don't mind a little of that, but when I hit 15% there'd already been at least 20 errors. It makes enjoying the story very frustrating! Please, please, please either have good beta readers, good editors or both.