Review: Very disappointing !
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2013
The problem with short stories is the plot devoleps so fast that writer doesn't take the time to develope the characters well.  In this story the hero seeks his revenge on the herowin and her family.  At their first meeting the H & H are very cool to each other then before you know it they are in each others arms . I didn't think the story was very plausable. It is a very old plot line . Also there were a lot of garmatical errors i.e. two words run together.