Review: not nice to fool mother nature - or your readers
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2014
the title story - the reprisal - was quite good.  the follow-on story was just getting really interesting, when it STOPPED! i was prepared for the further adventures of fadi khaldun, but not prepared to buy the rest of the story.  such 'teasers' should be clearly identified, so that a person knows what he\she is getting.  the title story was only 34% of the download, so the other 66% was a story that stopped as soon as it was getting interesting.