Review: Good Sex - Missing content editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2012
The erotica scenes sizzle nicely. But the whole series could have used a content editor. I believe the writer is a pantster (writes by the seat of the pants). Items are introduced when she realized she needed them, but she did not go back and weave them into the story so you feel like a bandaid was applied rather than a whole story skin.Also to keep things from moving too fast - sometimes the characters make a decision, then backtrack like they never made it, and then remake the decision. Not the normal method for storytelling - but very true to life - so it didn't feel "unreal", but did feel like poor content editing.The other thing that annoyed me was the poor formatting of the paragraphs for the Kindle format - paragraphs were randomly indented.With a good content editing and a formating editing, this would be a great erotic series. As it is, the sizzling descriptions make it a good enough read for its genre. (so-so)