Review: short story, deux ex machina ending
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 5, 2011
This is a short story that moves along fairly well, until the last few pages when suddenly everything winds up solved in a highly improbable manner.  The heroine and hero are slightly unconvincing, but might have held up better if it were a longer book.  Amazon really needs to make  clear which kindle "books" are short stories, and writers have to be better at writing them.