Review: needs work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
Wow! A paragraph that's a whole chapter long!! Not that I regard a page and a bit as a chapter. With this happening right at the beginning, it put my back up immediately. The author should consider getting an editor that actually knows how to edit. This book is full of mistakes. With some work, this book could get 4 or 5 stars.Weird and wrong words - e.g.rouse for rusethey’re for theirHe tired to scream - I guess tried