Review: I really liked the idea of this, however....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2013
Sorry to do this to the writer because I admire people who actually manage to finish a book and publish.  Having said that, this book needed some serious editing.  When the story did involve me somewhat I was jolted out by the missing words, words that made no sense...the title comes to mind here too...see the definition of the word raveled...Now Rare to make complicated or tangled: parts of his argument were all raveled upto separate the parts, esp. threads, of; untwist; unweave; unravelto make clear; disentangleWas 'raveled' really a good choice for the title?  I couldn't empathise with either of the main characters and the dialogue was incredibly stilted.  I've given this 2 stars as I can't give a one star rating for the mere fact that the author actually finished and published this.