Review: Unbalanced Relationship Dynamic
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2013
I agree with the other reviewer who said that Danny acts juvenile and Mike treats him as such. The first time I read this story, I didn't notice it quite so much because it had some steamy scenes that kept my attention diverted but the next time I read it, it just felt awkward almost all of the way through. First is the fact that the two men don't really know each other very well and they never seem to try getting to know one another on a deeper level--it's all surface. Then there's an extremely uncomfortable scene involving a webcam that doesn't exactly occur like you might think it would, but it's still really awkward anyway. Then there's an event that happens to Danny while he's at school, and that whole aspect of the story is not handled appropriately at all.I gave this one three stars because there must have been something that I felt made the story worth keeping (since it's still on my Kindle), but at this point I'm not really sure why I still have it.