Review: A poorly written effort
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 16, 2011
This book is so poorly written it was painful to try to read.  It's riddled with typographical errors and misspellings of the it's for its variety.  The prose itself is clumsy and awkward, and lacks rhythm, complexity and the other factors that make an author's prose style pleasant to read.  In short, it's very amateurish -- like bad fan fiction.  This author desperately needs to hire a good editor to work with her on her writing style because no matter what her pals are telling her, it needs great improvement.  I can't comment on the storyline as I never got that far, but I did wonder why her 17 year old heroine would be wearing silk around the house during daytime.If it weren't in my kindle it would be a wallbanger.  If I could get my 99 cents back, I would.