Review: Good story, needs editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 1, 2013
I agree with most of the reviews already here except I don't think the book was quite up to the four star level many others gave it.  Concept Great.  Character development needs work.  Plot is pretty good, could use a couple of sub-plots.  If the author went through and changed 'moral ' to 'morale ' and 'moral. ' to 'morale. ' he could lower the annoyance level by 50% with those changes alone. Then he should look up the definitions of to and too and search out every instance in the book and put in the correct usage.  Then he should follow guidelines for use of number in text. So many other instances of almost right English.  I will still buy his next book and the entertainment is certainly worth the cost of admission.