Review: Steamy, Sexy & Hot
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 25, 2013
I didn't realize when I got to review this story that it was a short story. But that being said its not a bad thing that its a short story. I would also say if your not a fan of Erotica's than this is not your story. It's fast paced and hard-core. Right off the bat you can tell both the main character's Jay and Eden both like each other but their both afraid of telling each other that they like one another. They don't want to ruin their friendship by taking it farther. Also Jay's past with his sister holds him back from telling Eden how he truly feels.Eden though is determined to show Jay that she's not all innocent and that she really likes Jay. So devises a plan to show Jay how much she likes him.By the end of the story it definitely left me wanting more and wishing that it was longer. I would definitely recommend this story to people if you like Erotica's and Role-play's.