Review: Well written
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 2, 2013
This was a good story and very well written and I definitely appreciate the length. I, however, would have appreciated some expressions of love between Patrick and Rebecca. They each told themselves how much they loved the other but we didn't really get to read them expressing that to each other. This lack makes the non consensual aspect difficult for me. I have read several age play stories and I really feel this one was missing love and consideration