Review: kind if boring
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2014
This story didn't really draw me in, if anything I was kind if bored. The dialogue felt a little too grammatically correct, and even after twenty or so pages I still didn't have a clear idea of who Sky was. The story just kind of felt bland. I'm sure others will like it because 1) the writing was good and 2) things were described pretty well. But the characters (for me) were blah.