Review: Whomp Whomp
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 5, 2013
I just finished reading this book and I'm... Hmmm, disappointed.  Is this a young adult novel?  It reads like one.  I just couldn't believe that supposed mature, confident women would respond the way these characters did.  The storytelling is good, it wasn't too painful to read, but the reactions and story development was ... bland.  There were times when there was just too much detail and times when the details made no sense.  This story felt like it came from a writer in the infancy of their career? Ability?  Either way, I'm not bothering to buy the other books.  These kindle free books are getting so annoying with the continuations.  I think that's why most of them are so bad.  The only book that I can recall that was sensationally good and worth the investment of the 2nd book was by Olivia Cunning, Backstage Pass.  However, I will say this, at least I was able to finish this book.  I couldn't even get through 100 pages of the first Twilight book.