Review: Promising new writer
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2013
I will put down a bad book and walk away.  I have put down books this poorly edited before. This one was interesting enough that I wanted to add some author encouragement. Good enough that I bought the next book, but it still needs a good beta reader and some minor edits.  The occasional repeated paragraph, some absolutely lousy sentence structure, missing pronouns... All there.  But.  A very interesting premise about earth progress through a dystopian era and into first contact, without all of the grandiosity that some authors give it.  Very interesting galactic culture and a fair plot line.  Needs a little better characterization, but hey, not alone here...Gotta suggest you read it, or at least take a sample.  Part of the reason I like Indie authors is you can watch them grow.  I think this guy will.