Review: Immature
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2013
One of my pet peeves is a heroine that continuously acts immature and selfish, while everyone around them acts like they've done something wonderful.An example: Daeton, an 18 year old wear-bear, is in danger.  Fierce guards and huge wolves are assigned the sole duty to protect her as they travel.  They meet renegades who demand a toll.  The guards are planning to pay the renegades, but Daeton jumps off her horse & runs up to the renegades, ignoring her guards, yelling that they won't pay them & they'd better let them pass "or else".  She instructs the guards & wolves to rally around her & the renegades run off.  So, Daeton ignored the guards, (who were trained to know how to handle dangerous situations) and does whatever she feels like doing, which puts everyone's life in danger.  Instead of the guards and everyone being angry, they all compliment her on how brave she is.  Surely, there is no braver female in the realm.The story was riddled with similar immature actions that we were supposed to admire.  I had trouble reconciling the author's audience.  I understand that the heroine was 18, so maybe it is targeted at a teenage audience, but the writing style seemed more geared toward 13 & 16 year olds.The sex scenes were more of the same writing style.  They lacked depth and interest.To be fair, it was only 99 cents. Just don't expect more than your money's worth.  In fact, at the time of this review the first book of this series "A Curve of Claw" was free.  Try reading it, or something free by this author, to see whether you like her style.