Review: Hot at times, yet oddly disappointing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 25, 2011
This story had lots of promise and it starts off really well!  I like Raelie's teasing and Bryce's reaction, but then he kind of changes.  I expected more "dominant", but he wasn't like any dominant I've read before.  Then, the friends being involved?  It just took a wierd turn and it lost me in the end.  Not what I was expecting.  The sex is good, though and it's nicely written.  I guess I expected something else.