Review: Not All together
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 22, 2013
The story is quite boring and does not gel very well. Seems interesting story, but after about 20 pages, I have to stop. I don't know, may be less of describing what the character is thinking but more of the tones of voices, the reaction, the eye contact, the conversation,.. That show the thought with out being too descriptive.  Sorry.