Review: Greene's Riches
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2014
I try to find a positive in everything I do but I find myself reluctant to write this review. But a promise is a promise.  Here goes-  I was very excited to have the opportunity to read and review a copy of this story from the author because I love to read and frankly flattered to do so.  Though the story had a good premise and was very sweet it was also very wordy and the editing was awful. Words were in the wrong places or not there at all. Thousands of adjectives and filler words were running around Willy nilly with no real purpose. Dialog was juvenile and stilted.  The author took forever to get to the point.  I'm sorry to say I couldn't finish it. Maybe it was just me but I just couldn't .  If the book was edited and slimmed down considerably then it would be a fine story I'm sure...