Review: A promising book that is ruined by lack of editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2013
The book starts slow and if you can get by the weak premise for her being on the ranch in the first place, and the fact that no one would allow her on a ranch unless she told them why, then you might call it a fairly good read. I was confused by the amount of research that obviously went into the book only to have so much of it be incorrect. The word is filly, not philly, and it's a bridle, not a brindle. And no one uses five different brushes to wash a horse. There is so much wrong with the grammar and spelling that it takes you out of the story again and again. As a person who has professionally reviewed over 200 books, my advice to the author is to pull both books, pay for a good copy/content editor to work with you, and then re-publish clean, edited stories. You're only hurting yourself by publishing such sloppy work.