Review: fun beginning
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 31, 2013
This series may turn out to be truly entertaining, but for my tastes a few things were irritating. There were several "realms" each either richly or sparsely described, but all with different flora and fauna that were either named but not described, or named and described, and this plethora of named things in the developing story line was distracting. Someone needs to share with the author that there is no such word as "disorientated" the word she should have used was "disoriented". The poor usage would have been less noticeable if the word had been used less frequently. The mystery behind the stone is too easily guessed by the reader.I probably won't follow the series further, but this is not bad for a free book.