Review: Cute, short, and funny
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2013
This was a very cute story.  Since it was so short, one really misses the chance to bond with the characters.  However, if longer, the story runs into the dangerous territory of the Vegas cliche story.  This story was too short to have as many punctuation , grammar, capitalization, and spelling errors that it had.