Review: Lost Potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2012
This story could have been so much more than it was.  We have a woman who's living alone on a farm, having left behind her city life to embrace solidarity and enjoy nature, but begins to be tormented by her backwood neighbors who are one note villians looking to terrorize a helpless female.The story left alot to be desired as I began reading, we had our hero Michael who as wolf had watched over Laura's house with his pact, a shifter who had chosen to stay in wolf form until he comes upon the lonely female farmer, we learn that he has watched over her from a far for quite some time and battled the urge to return to his human form, one vicious event makes the decision for him.I felt this entire story was to stilted and rushed through as if the writer possibly wasn't sure where she wanted to go from one scene to the next, so I never felt the connection between the two main characters and the fact that the hillbilly villians are dealt with and aren't worried about again, especially about the possibile consequences or any questions, was pushing even the fantasy aspect to far.This story had potential, I just think it got lost somewhere along the way.