Review: It Just Ends...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2013
I enjoyed most of this short story. The world is interesting and there is a lot of potential for development. The characters are not very well fleshed out, but that is a problem I find in a lot (though not all) YA fiction.And then I got to the end. And the story just... ended. There was a lot of build-up and I kept turning the pages, wanting to find out what happened next. Suddenly, everything was resolved, all neat and tidy. Where was the climax?As other reviewers have said, this story is an outline for what could become a good book or series. As it is, it is just a fragment.