Review: Good story but poor editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 12, 2012
I enjoyed reading SNAP: THE WORLD UNFOLDS very much. It was a light, quick, easy read with likable characters that were easy to care about what happened to them. I only gave three stars because while the writing style was very nice, the editing was poor with lots of typos and formatting errors. Having demons as strong and loyal bodyguards was a fun twist and I liked reading about how Maxie and the other employees reached their positions through hard work and talent and not just because of their looks. I didn't care for the ending; I realize that this book was only the first of a series but I feel that it ended too abruptly. The imagery was done very well and I could see what was happening very clearly in my mind's eye. Overall, this was an entertaining reading experience and I would probably recommend it to my friends.