Review: SOCIETY'S COLLAPSE:
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2014
WOW! What a turn around from his first novel. The story line has always been really well thought out, but the grammar was horrid. I couldn't keep focused on what I was reading.This time around he has cleaned up the grammar, punctuation, and with few exceptions has gotten it right. Still a couple of "then" when you meant "than", etc, but no comparison.While I could not, in good conscious recommend his first book because of the poor use of the English language, I am VERY HAPPY TO SAY THAT I CAN'T WAIT TO READ HIS NEXT WORK.Way to go Jeremy, you hit this one out of the park...and what GREAT PLOT TWISTS...I sure didn't see those coming!