Review: interesting short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 26, 2013
Some beautiful writing in this contemporary fantasy short. Sometimes it's too beautiful, or at least too florid, leaving me wondering what exactly is going on. A lot is suggested but never said, leaving me confused and unsatisfied. I would love to see more of this dragon world; it reminds me quite a bit of C.I. Black'sImmortal Coil (A Dragon Spirit Novel, Book 1). There are some grammatical errors in the story, but not enough to interfere significantly with the reader's enjoyment.