Review: Good but...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 6, 2014
I really liked the story. The story line was great the characters were even better but there was some issues I didn't like. Some of the sentences were just run on and I sometimes didn't know who was talking. Then there was the new paragraphs starting in the middle of sentence. If those things could be fixed this story would be so much better