Review: Juvenile but cute, shorter than expected...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 17, 2011
First of all, I didn't realize this was a YA book.  I suspect someone in their teens would enjoy this more, I personally found it somewhat simplistic and formulaic.  Cute at times but not really my cup of tea.It was also much shorter than I expected.  At 933 file size, I was expecting a substantial novel.  It was not.  Fully 23% of the book was previews of other books.  The story itself worked out to approx. 160 pages on my nook (default font size).  It's a short novel at best.Couple of things I notedLocation 212 - "Our numbers in both the class and the club rose from four to five.  A twenty-percent increase."This is a 25% increase, not 20%.Location 2374 - "His neck was muscular, very muscular.  A large vein, the jugular, was pounding in that huge neck."This is something I see quite frequently in vampire books and it always bugs me.  Blood does not pulse through veins, it pulses through arteries.  More specifically, the carotid arteries (assuming you're talking about the neck).