Review: DID NOT LIKE IT
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2014
It's difficult to write a review for this without giving spoilers. But I may have to give some so you may not want to read further if you don't want to know. What I will say first is, this is not well laid out. The POV switches constantly sometimes in the same paragraph and even in the same sentence. The plot has more holes than a string vest! The reader is supposed to believe that the heroine Britton has been sent undercover to infiltrate the Harbingers of Sorrow MC. Ten years ago Jagger the MC's president and Britton were an item. But after a road accident he left her at the side of the road. She left town she never tried to contact him, or her family her younger siblings were left to just get on with it. As her parents were neglectful. Back then Britton had been 16 to Jagger's 18, ever since that time Britton has been an emotional wreck, vowing to have her revenge. So Britton ran away to join the FBI.Right from their first meeting after ten years Jagger suspects her. He grabs her leaving bruises, he ties her up and threatens her, he's a real peach! His physical abuse continues further into the story, and Britton has more TSTL moments than I care to mention. In the ten years since she's been gone Jagger had taken her siblings under his protection, her brother is a member of the MC a fact she didn't know. Really the FBI wouldn't have had that information at their fingertips. This didn't do it for me at all. Jagger was way too possessive and abusive, and Britton was a complete idiot.