Review: Sporadic Plotting
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 2, 2013
This is a very uneven book. I think it was written in installments and it shows. The first meeting of the hero and heroine is hard to swallow. That she bumps into a stranger and minutes later is being seduced by him in a stairwell doesn't make me particularly like him or her. (It was different in "Beautiful Bastard" in that they had actually known each other for almost a year.) The subplots with the various clients and family members aren't tightly woven through the book, but seem forced at times. There are several glaring and irritating grammar problems. For instance, she always writes "drug" when she means "dragged" and "strut" when she means "strutted." Even the dom/sub stuff isn't that great -- more pervy than hot and sexy. I read it, but I was never fully engaged and it certainly wasn't a page turner for me.