Review: I wanted more chemistry!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2014
The cover and title seem to indicate a hot romance but it was barely lukewarm.I have to praise the author on not having significant typos or grammar issues which are prevalent among independently-published authors.  So thanks for that... and that got her another 1/2 star... otherwise I wouldn't have rounded up to 3 stars.This has a lot of potential as a full-length novel if characters and their relationships are explored better.  But as a short story was uneven and unsatisfying.  And there are supporting characters that we meet that don't have resolution in their relationships.  And I'm still not sure what the point was of introducing the married grocer.  It was creepy and I think wasn't meant to be, but it was just not well-handled.I just didn't get what clicked between the two characters... and it's even questioned by the characters themselves. But then it seemed like in the next chapter they didn't care anymore, but I'm not sure why.  I wish more of the writing was about the relationship and less about detail on food and that creepy grocer.And the premise for them "breaking up" (although I'm still not sure what relationship they had) was just ridiculous and ending was the most ridiculous thing I have ever read.Proceed with caution, romance readers.