Review: Good, But Not Great
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2014
First off, I enjoyed the story, it was pretty well written, and it kept me interested. That being said, the language was a bit much at times, and it was a bit hard to keep up with at times, but overall, it was good, and I enjoyed it, and would like to read more by this author. Keep up the good work, and remember have a plan of structure and a target audience that you are trying to reach, and keep it within those limits, thanks for the good story, can't wait to read more.