Review: a long but basically good read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2013
I had issues with some situations in this story. Mostly with the slave value and treatment of slaves, as well as the sex slave idea. Minor issues. More confusing was the wishy washy fight/ flight/ like situation. If the lead girl was military disciplined, I would expect her to make a decision and stick with it.It's sci fi so I won't get into the suspension of disbelief aspects.It was VERY well edited. There were a few instances of missing words in a sentence. One instance of a mis spelling (author meant to write 'hard' but used 'had').I think the length of the story could have been cut down by taking out a few rambling scenes and repetitions of beliefs already stated by the characters.It was a good story line, with well drawn out characters. I debated giving 3 stars but I have to admit that all elements of a good story were here. Action, emotion, action... And a nice ending that was not rushed. It was not a twists and turns story either. Sci fi lovers should enjoy it.It does have sex scenes, but nothing graphic or erotica.