Review: Could have been so much more.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 24, 2013
I really liked the story line but thought the author could have done so much more with it. It was a very short read that could have been much longer. A few scenes from childhood maybe to help show how close they once were. some from after his father's death, and his attempts to dodge women looking to trap him would also have been good. And then after the marriage, yet again I just cant help but think the author could have made this story a bit longer and kept it very enjoyable of not even more than it was. I also wish we had more of the Hero's POV, You get it up until he leaves for the war. I think knowing what he was doing would have been a nice addition also.Good story, likeable characters, but too short.