Review: Ok. Too short & too many book excepts
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 26, 2013
This story overall was hot, but short, too too short.At 55% they broke up (mind you they'd only played 2 or 3 times) and they got back together and then it ended at 61% of the book, Location 1275 of 2081.There is light BDSM, because although there is talk of stronger stuff and more emotional aspects of BDSM, at least it's alluded to, but it wasn't actually done. This short story has a HFN with a hopeful HEA.I felt that the author just used this short story as an excuse to include a bunch of book excerpts "bonus excerpts".  In the blurb "book description", they try to present this FILLER as a good thing. It's not, it was very very annoying.There was a total of 9 "bonus excerpts". Including: The dark garden. Forbidden fruit. Temptations edge. Sanctuary. Summer solstice. Possess me. Four Christmases. Four for Christmas. Marley in chains. Not so tiny Tim. -- For me, I felt like there were four excerpts too many. I draw the max limit to five.Seriously, I kind of like Eden Bradley, but I felt like this short story should have been 99 cents.