Review: GET AN EDITOR!!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2013
GET A BETTER EDITOR!!!I would have rated this much higher if there weren't so many typos and inconsistencies. Unlike some of the other harsh critics of this book, I liked the main character. Yes, there were a lot of clichés (the gay best friend that does hair and shopping like a pro, the clumsy heroine, the gorgeous nice guy. To be honest, I read books like this as an escape from the real world and I love those characters.My biggest issue was the timeline. For example, there is an engagement party on a Saturday. The next thing you know she is commenting on how work was weird the next day. What?!? And it wasn't a rare she happened to want to go in on a Sunday to catch up on some work...the whole office was working. It's like the author forgot it was supposed to be Sunday. This happens multiple times. Not to mention that there was supposed to be three months between the bridesmaid announcement and the wedding. By the timeline that was actually used it was less than two months. Now I know that when you have a novel spanning three months you're not going to write about every single thing that happens. I'm going by the author's words...the next day, a few days later, that evening, etc.I seriously considered only one star on this one, but I did like the concept and enjoyed the actual story. I will not be purchasing the next in the series unless Kindle has it added to their free books section (where I got this one, btw). There are just too many problems with the editing for me to do that.