Review: Smutty Novel
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 16, 2012
The plot of the book was interesting, but the pace was too slow with lots of obscene discriptions and language to muddle the intrigue. It was heavy with cursing and the erotic making-out and sex were almost pornographic. Another reviewer was correct in that "Babe" is so over-used it becomes irritating. The book was okay for the first fourth, but then it becomes crude and smutty.There were some detail problems, too. Angela wet her hair before using dye, but all color I've used is applied dry and wet as the second step. The main characters also kept asking the same questions later on, and the answer was always the same. Three very good agents failed to wonder if the 3 missing software chips weren't in the 3 new heart pendants Angel's father had made the day he died, even though he had the chips in his pocket at first, but they weren't there later on his body. I picked up on this right away, but it took Angela another day from having the information. The two best agents didn't think of it at all. Can a person shoot another person after a gun is fired at him but before the bullet gets there? I don't think so. And, how did Chase sneak up on a man in a boat after he had to jump from his boat, which had pulled along side, to that one? Toward the end Chase told Angela he would call her at the cabin, but the cabin didn't have a phone, and no one had cell reception there. Even the main problem for the plot seemed unlikely. Could a single software program control the rise and fall of the stock markets of all the countries in the world?I think the book has hope, but it needs to be rewritten with the vulgarities taken out, the characters cleaned up, and the plot firmed up. As it stands now, it was very disappointing and not worth the time it took to read it.