Review: Pretty good short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 25, 2011
I don't typically like novellas because there isn't enough time to build a relationship with the characters. There usually isn't enough time for the story to build and the plot to unfold. I can never seem to become invested enough in the world built and care enough about the outcome of short stories; but much to my surprise this one had a good pace and likable characters that fell for each other fast; an almost love at first site kinda fall.I didn't realize it was the beginning of a series when I downloaded it but the book was written well enough to pique my interest so I will go on.Before I go, one thing that bugs me about some Kindle editions is the poor editing job. Though this one was not as bad as some I've read, it still bothers me that the publisher didn't do a better job with simple punctuation, use of contractions and grammar.