Review: beautiful beginning to a story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2014
Loving this story so far.  Erin is sweet, and Weston is a doll.  Hopefully they will give each other the courage they need for the future.  There were a couple of hints to what was coming,  but how they got there was a shocker.  I can't wait for August and part two to be released.  There were a couple of editing issues with her birthdate because it says at the beginning they were all born September 1st then later they say she was born September fourth.  Also, Alder says at 17 she should know how to dip ice cream (or something to that gist) then what is supposed to be a few weeks later Erin says she's eighteen and a half.  Other than that, I loved it.