Review: Promising...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 7, 2013
No spoilers...As a first novel this was good. The storyline was really good, however there was a little too much 'tell' and not enough 'show'. It took me two goes at reading it to get past that; I believe towards the end of this novella, that the author picked up on it as there was far less towards the end.If I could speak directly with the author, I would say develope your scenes a little more, you have plenty to do so with. I'd also suggest that the information in the book be dolled out in smaller chunks - this could be done in rewrites.Having said all that you'll wonder why I gave it three stars for. Well all I can say is, read it for yourself. It's only short, but you'll understand me then when I say, I'm looking forward to reading the second story very much. I'm really looking forward to where this author is going to go. As I believe great things will come, this one has promise.