Review: Needs editing!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 7, 2013
Needs editing for sure! It starts strong, you want to know who this guy is but then it goes so slow! I just started, I do hope it gets better. However, I do have to say the gerund is alien to this writer WTH!! and if you are going to write in any other language, first get it right the word is Spanish for pretty here is Guapa, not Guappa!! and with all the French, how about a side translation or something! OK will be back once I've finished for a final verdict!10/2/13 so I couldn't go on but I picked it back up yesterday, it does get better as far as the story, love Landon so far. Flagger Baster is not a word (flabbergasted?) several times in the book already and not everything or situation is a "panacea" did the writer even looked that word up in the dictionary? Google? It's a bit painful at times, but I want to see how this ends...