Review: Well.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 14, 2012
Umm....Well, I like the Erins's work... but what can I say?1. Here I was, waiting for exciting  to happen, when BAM. It ends.2. What was the big deal about the SC thing anyway? Mothwing's allowed to believe what she wants to!3. Pouncetail wasn't alive when Stonefur was so why did he say that he remembered him?4. Mistystar wasn't there when Stonefur died so why did she think, "the memory of him (Blackstar) killing Stonefur was too sharp"?5. Willowshine is older than Dapplenose (an elder) so why is she described as " tiny" and "young"?You'll find more mistakes if you read this book.Amberstar.(JAYFEATHERS AWESOME!!!!!!!!;D)