Review: Too much hurry
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2014
So, I usually like to be positive in my reviews, but I have reached a point after reading so many of these stories where I can't stop myself from saying this: EVEN IF, the plot premise is marvelous, the development needs to be there or else the story flops!I liked the idea of the story: a nice and unusual were-snake rescues some werewolf pups and recruits the help of a werewolf he knows to help him find out why they were left there. The pups are cute in their behavior and there are cute moments, but the bonds all around were formed too quick. The relationship between the two adults took what... two seconds?...look, if you are doing a short story is better (at least in my opinion) if the characters have a certain history that can make them fall into bed that quickly make sense.