Review: Kind of a stupid story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2014
I wanted to like this story. I even read it the whole way through to give it a chance. But the story was lame, characters very unbelievable, and most of the story was "told" instead of "shown." Rookie mistake. There were moments where I thought it was getting good, but then it would fizzle again. Ugh!Don't tell me Tara is an amazing woman if you haven't shown me HOW she is amazing. All I saw was a woman who isn't very bright and doesn't learn from her mistakes. And Kyle is no better. A very flat character who is not much more than a loser without a job and looking for trouble. Why would anyone fall in love with him?And don't get me started on their "instant love affair!" Please! So unrealistic. It needed much more time to build and grow. Everything was too convenient. Gag!Lastly, there were gobs of typos. Proofread your work!!! With a little work, this author could be good! Just needs some tweaking.