Review: Good story, crappy length
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 2, 2013
To be honest i think this story has a lot of potential as a full length novel. I'm not one for short stories though and this seemed incredibly rushed to me. What should have happened in weeks or months seemed to happen in 2 days. It's almost a shame that such an interesting plot was wasted on a 15 minute read.