Review: Great Potential ...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2011
Unfortunately I couldn't finish this one. There seemed to be too many mechanical issues with the story.I think it would benefit greatly from a good hard scrubbing from a skilled beta reader and then from an editor.Moxie Mezcal has great potential - her imagination is wonderful. I look forward to reading this again if she decides to polish it.