Review: not bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 6, 2014
the typo in the first few words pulled me up "alex put his gym back on the bench"......the swapping of pov ....... which of the "other man" were we talking about here.  and the overuse of that phrase, and"buddy", cos, you know, we just two guys hanging. but all in all an ok story.(there is cheating for those of you who are squimish. have read reviews where that is an issue) . some good editing and this would hold up better. liked both m/c and happy they found a hea together. writing in itself was good just jumbled.