Review: A nice Sci-Fi / romance... but..
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 2, 2013
I honestly wanted to give it 4 stars. The build up of characters was good. But at times, the heroine's was way too pushy for her own good. She was very annoying, I just couldn't see her as a female hostage. Granted she is suppose to be strong and out spoken, but the character reminded me of what a crotchety old woman was like in her younger years. And her language at times was very immature. Referring to her 'tummy' or ...as "I walk like a slave back to..." The ending was by then expected. I did like the sex scenes, the dialogue amongst the females in story was funny, and the plot was cool too. If you (Jaida Fox) ever revise, ease up on the bossiness of Ebony and please drop the bad English. At times Ebony sounds educated then she drops back into a poor attempt at slang. Well, in my opinion. Over all, I enjoyed the story.