Review: Good story but confusing editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2013
This was the first story I've read by Miss Sheridan and for the most part enjoyed the characters and the plot.  The tension between the four main characters held me until the very end.  The irritation for me came from the confusing editing where names changed from chapter to chapter, from paragraph to paragraph, along with incorrect  pronouns in the same sentence.  This seems to be endemic with e-books; the lack of any sort of editing.  My plea to e-writers is have another pair of eyes read your work before you publish it.  It will save your readers a considerable amount of frustration.