Review: His Elle....nice title but lacks a story.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 31, 2011
I was caught by the doctor/patient angle of this story and the story was ...okay. Mild bondage,sort of rescue me theme story but the lack of info of his "training/healing" this abused victim left me hanging. If this so called Dom/Doc was this great expert where was that part of the story?It starts out 2 yrs earlier with her office visit of a cut to her ankle (hello...her ankle? Really?)Raped and her attacker cuts her ankle?  If it was a foot fetish I would understand an ankle but ....it wasn't.  Next chaper ...it's 2 yrs later and this Dom/Doc has her as his pet slut....How's that workin? Damaged goods to your pet in 2 chapters just doesn't cut it for me. That should have been your story...or leave off the doc visit thing as basicly pointless and start with them as a unit already...show some "training" or actually use a few of those tools available...what's the point of bringing them out if they are just for show...boring. This needs more research.All stories need a begining, middle and a end.This skips the middle completely.