Review: good free intro, then lazy writing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2014
90% of the author's effort went into the fun intro. You know the writing adage, "show, don't tell?" Well this book does it backward and all of what ought to be climaxes or important events are brushed asside. It is nearly as bad as, "The villain is caught red handed." To be fair, the author used three or four tomes as many words for that anti climax. Another example is "they told each other they loved each other." Really! Totally 3rd grade stuff.The author has done good works, this just is not one of them. Not worth your time if free.