Review: Good Story, Desperately Needs Editing Help!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 2, 2013
I thought the characters were developed well; the story was predictable but still enjoyable. I liked the development of dual romances- Elizabeth and Josh along with Amy and Randy.  The setting in the mountains of Utah sounded beautiful - makes me want to go for a visit.I was annoyed by the lack of editing, especially the misuse of commas throughout. Also annoying were sporadic/random red text portions. With some editing, it could be a much better book!