Review: 10 stars for story line, ZERO stars for editing & errors! Best ending EVER
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2013
This story had a mammoth amount of potential and for the first time ever I found myself seriously peeved about errors in a book.Every page had some sort of error, spelling, misplaced words, sentences not making an sense, names wrong, (even Hem came up as Him in there) and the grammar..........I'm far from an expert so I have yet to use grammar as a reason for lowering my star ratings, but this book was shocking even I found it extremely difficult to follow with the amount of errors.So many time you'd be reading one of the characters talking but with missing quotation marks ending the tirade of verbal diarrhea the characters seemed to blurt out constantly, I found myself going back and mentally inserting a quotation mark myself so I knew he/she had finished speaking!Mace was horribly annoying, I found myself really disliking her, she was talking about herself constantly about being tough and strong with mumma bear tendencies but when it actually came time to 'man up' she was a sooky annoying princess.I've made it to 80% and figured it was time to check reviews to see if this gets any better!Maybe in a few days I'll come back to this and finish the last 20% but for now my brain needs a break for Mace and all her talking!******ENDING******So I stuck it out and OH MY LORDY am I glad I did, what a brilliant ending.I started this review as a 1 star, upped it to a 3 star but that ending is what gave it that extra star.Such a pity all the typos & poor editing because this could have been a all over 5 star rated book! Fingers crossed #2 the Author gets it right & at least proof reads or pays an editor or something because this was the worst case I've ever come across!