Review: I don't even know where to start...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 25, 2014
I don't even know where to start with the issues I had with this story. Some of the little details you got wrong. Sir describes himself to Jennifer on the phone as having green eyes, but when he reveals himself they are blue. I feel like after Jennifer was collared she should've called him Master. She had no sense of self preservation, and for the most part no sense. I am too believe she went to a dominants home, to fulfill a fantasy, and has done no homework on the matter to know the true meaning of orgasm control or the like? She was spanked 17 times for her first defense?I'm sorry I was very disappointed in this. I've read better fanfiction on the matter from people who've actually lived it than this story was. In fact if you'd like I'll send you the links, maybe you can pick up a few tips.