Review: Quick Christmas read- glad it's free
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2014
A little boys version of miracle on 34th street that takes place in Hawaii.  An interesting story that had lots of potential, but never really gets there. Many plots that all fizzle out. No real character development, chemistry isn't that believable between Kale and Leilani, especially with Kale just ending a relationship days before he meets Leilani. Story content was all over the place. Every page seemed to be a chapter.