Review: Get past the editorial messes to enjoy awesome story!!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 02 20, 2014
At first the horrid sentence structure, missing words, wrong word choices, etc., were very off-putting.  But the story!  Oh the story!  It is an amazing story and totally unique.  Pretty soon I found myself just skipping over the many editorial messes (you can actually get used to them if you're willing) and getting deeper into the story. I stayed up until the wee morning hours until I finally had to give it up and get some sleep. First thing the next morning, I grabbed it and finished reading.  HEA complete, I was able to go on with my day (smile).I believe the author will go back and fix the many things that are wrong but if you are willing to ignore the mistakes, I believe you will be completely satisfied with the story and look forward to more books in the series. I already have several characters whose stories I would want to read.  Oh, BTW when you start, don't go looking to see if you missed a book in the series. You didn't. It may seem out of order but the hero's brother has a story yet to be told this Spring 2014 that seems like it should have been first.  When you're done reading, you will see why it didn't have to be first.  Give this (at this time) badly edited story a chance, it is so worth it.