Review: Where is the story?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2014
Ms. Webb should probably go back to writing class. Or get a great boyfriend. Or both. I'm sure there is a plot in there somewhere, but it is buried so deep under the constant 'goo' of 'he's so hot,' 'she's so hot,' 'I can't fall in love again, but he's so hot,' 'why can't she accept that I am so hot,' dialogue that the actual story is just too hard to find. Okay, Ms. Webb, I get it. He likes her a lot and wants to have her. She likes him a lot, but has been done wrong so she won't let herself go there. Just let them get on with it and move on to another story.