Review: Just didn't click
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2013
This book could have been good with editing and some rewriting.  The H and h just didn't come to mean anything to me and I never did get a sense of their personalities.  The writing was first person from various view points of the characters, but the story line was hard to follow as it took a few sentences to figure out who was doing to telling.  Sometimes third person showed up in a first person pov which really threw me off.  Part of my problem was the constant use of the F-bomb which grew tiresome after a while.  Surely during sex there are other things you can scream out at the top of your lungs?  Does the F-bomb have to be repeated over and over?  I'm not  prude, but I do tend to get bored when reading the same thing again and again.  And the storyline of reluctant-relationship-shy H rescuing h from obsessed former fiance is an old one.  The story just didn't gel, but I can see talent in the author so I'm not giving up completely.