Review: Good story, but....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
Needs a bit more editing.I really enjoyed the story line and the characters. I would have given a better review if the flow had not been interrupted by editing mistakes such as poor phrasing, misuse of "lie" and "lay" and "to" and "too"' and "there" and "their".  These types of mistakes should not be in a final copy. A few typos can be expected, but basic grammar and spelling should be correct. Also, there is some strange word usage that almost seems like the author pulled out a thesaurus and just looked up a three syllable word that was close to what they meant, but not quite, just to have a different word there. It was a subtle interruption to flow, but it kind of jarred because it didn't quite seem to fit the context sometimes.The above things weren't on every page, by any means, but I did notice them when they popped up, maybe because they WEREN'T on every page and therefore seem like they could have been caught and eliminated with maybe one more read-through.All that said, I would still like to see how the story comes out. I just wish the editing had been better. I hope the other box sets go on a free offering, as I am conflicted about buying them, but as I said, still a good story.