Review: Get an editor, please!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2013
I thought the premise for this story sounded quite interesting, but I just couldn't get past the hack job of an edit.  Please don't insult your readers by not caring enough to check your work thoroughly.  I couldn't cope with the mess and quite frankly didn't finish it, which rarely happens as I'll usually "stick it out to the bitter end" once I've started reading something.  I'm afraid I'll never know if the work lived up to its potential.  Such a shame.