Review: Not Enough Mystery
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
The problem with this story is that it ended too quickly, as if the author decided it better come to an end and better tell you all they details so you can be done with it.  The usually formula is that once the reader thinks that things cannot get any worse (for the main characters) it does.  This adds to the suspense.  This story needed a bit more suspense.  I might read another by the author because I like to read and he main character has possibilities.