Review: It was a good story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 13, 2014
The story itself was good. The edited wasn't the best which took away from the book. I think if the author would've had someone else edit the book it would have flowed more smoothly. Also there were extra details not needed. For example (this is not verbatim) Layla got in the passenger seat of the Ashton Martin. Her mother pressed the gas of the Ashton Martin. She pulled off, etc. I think that was unnecessary. But like I said I did enjoy the story of Lyric.