Review: Did not finish, but had promise
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2014
My fingers twitched for a red pencil at "raven" locks /hair, the endless beautiful man description.  Oy hunka hunka... whatevah.  There were points where the writing showed promise and then she'd go and dress her prose in purple.  It might not annoy other readers, but I hit my limit when she turned him into unreasonable in the training situation.  erm... really?  She also opens the book with a confusing data dump.  The sad thing is, if she was excited about getting published, she really needs to find a new publisher as the editor she was working with allowed the kind of jejeune flaws to make it into the final draft.