Review: Good idea and interesting concepts
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2013
This book was difficult to get through. The story seems disconnected especially the first half. The writing does come together better the further into the book you get.  I never read reviews prior to reading a free book, but will read them after I finish the book, like other reviews I felt as though this book was the rough draft.  I began to question if my comprehension abilities were beginning to fail me.  I am hoping the author will review this book, fix the disconnects, spelling errors and reduce some of the excessive descriptive writing as it got somewhat confusing.  I liked the characters, the author did a good job of letting the reader get to know the characters that will be in the next books.  I enjoyed the plot, it was different then most romance novels.