Review: An editor would make a world of difference
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 17, 2011
All in all, for a short story/novelette it wasn't that bad. Great cover, unique little contemporary storyline with decent sex scene. For the most part the characters were likeable enough.Where it could use a fair amount of work is with the editing. I am not a person to notice grammer issues or typos, but I noticed them with this piece. Also, the act of having anal without a condom, especially with a stranger, is baffling to me and since it has been pointed out by other reviewers, I'm not alone in feeling this way.If the author simply went back through this story and did a little more editing, taking into account some of the suggestions of the other reviewers this could be a much better read. Either way, if you want a quick read then for the price, its worth a shot.