Review: Falls short in more than one way
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2011
I'd actually give this 2 1/2 stars.  I found the editing as much a problem as the first two reviewers and it's good that this book was free or I might have been thoroughly annoyed.Where the book failed besides the editing was the length.  There were a few too many things going on for it to be so short.  And I'm not really sure why it's called City of the Damned because the next book is also City of the Damned but takes place somewhere else.  So just how many Damned cities are there?It's a freebie and sometimes you take the good with the bad when  it comes to them.  Not a complete waste of time, but not a really good use of it, either.