Review: Short story, but still disappoints.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 20, 2011
I love short stories; I love the wow factor of them. But a short story must be tightly written; each word must serve a purpose. This story failed to deliver. The little twist at the end seemed to me to be self-serving, a cheap trick, and no reason is given for the main character's demise. No, not everything has to be explained, but there needs to be logic, especially in a short story, or the suspension of disbelief never occurs.