Review: Bland and inappropriately written for its apparent intended audience (9-13 year olds).
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2012
This very short story reads like something written by a Jr. High schooler.  With its flat, lifeless characters, total lack of character building and its rather sophomoric writing style, this one is better left to a younger crowd.  Unfortunately, the author decided to include a bit of unexciting sex into the mix which is too graphic for younger readers sooo....  It's not written to adult standards and is too sexually graphic for a younger audience.  In reality...nobody will miss anything if they miss this one.