Review: Good Short Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2012
Ok I see several who didn't like this story.  Maybe it did go to many steps for things the guy did, but I think it was a really good short story.  I also think it has the potential to be rewritten and made into a much longer book / story.  I know I kept thinking quit being stupid hurry up do this or do that.  Sorry don't want to say what an ruin it for the next reader.  To me it was Free and I enjoyed it.