Review: Good story line, but not well written
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 8, 2011
I read quite a bit of erotica and try to select the books for not only hot sex, but for a well written story. The premise for this book (novella really) intrigued me. I had a tough time getting through the elementary writing. Other than that, the story idea was great. It was an okay short read. Perhaps had the book been fleshed out more it would not have had such a choppy form.