Review: Twin swap
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 20, 2012
Nice romance with an ending that I really liked. There were a few things that kept coming to mind though. I love this type of plot where there is a twin switch and the more conservative twin ends up falling for the guy, however the male perspective is beginning to irritate me a little. Not just with this particular story but I think in general.Austin pays Marci to be his fiancé knowing she's the flirting type, free in her dress style and the way she hangs out with guys. Knowing this, he still chooses her, but later the story seems to alternate between his feelings toward the idea of "Marci," he seems to want her sometimes sometimes he doesn't because of the way she is. So when he begins to see some differences in her character not knowing it's actually Kimberly, I wanted to be able to tell if he actually wanted Marci or not. I know it's weird since he begins to like Kimberly, but to me it seemed like the author kept changing between Austin having wanted Marci and then not. Probably not a big deal for most readers but for me it was since that is one of the issues in the story.One last thing, in the very beginning of the story when Austin and Kimberly arrive at his house, it said that he came out of the car twice but he had never went back in after the first time. I read it over to make sure I was not reading it wrong, but it seemed like a blooper to me.Overall, I liked the story. It could have been better if Austin's feelings in the above mentioned topic were more clearly explained.