Review: I really want to like this book.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 5, 2013
This is my newest Kindle Serial. I am in the process of reading the first episode. It's a little hard to get into. the lead character seems to have some mental illness issues.Just finished the first episode. This might end up being ok. I believe I just need to get use to this authors writing style. I am curious to see what happens next.episode 2. Still not too sure about this book. I am going to continue it just because there are a few humorous moments and the story seems to be going somewhere interesting. It is a little raw though. The language and the adult situations.There is entirely too much detail at times. You really dont need to tell what kind of frozen dinner you are making and everything that is contained in that frozen dinner as well as the temperature it is to be cooked on. Just say the man threw a frozen dinner in the oven then ate. The same message will be given.episode 3. improving. left off at a cliffhanger of course.episode 4. I actually do see real potential for this writer. I am really wanting to like this book but it is becoming a chore to read. Entirely too much description. The police detectives brag on themselves entirely too much. There is no need for them to continue pointing out how well they believe they can do their job and how invested they are in their job.There are so many things i would like to point out and use as an example but that would be too much info and could possibly ruin the story for others.One thing that is really bothering me, no breaks in the scenes. You can be reading along and then before you know it, you are in another scene with no break at all.I have one more episode left. IF I read it, it will be only for the fact that I have invested so much time in it so far.I have brought my rating down one star since my last review update.Ok, just finished the final episode. I am finally through. I am sorry, but this is just bad. I have tried to be as positive as I can but this is just bad. Honestly, I believe if it had been edited properly it might possibly have been ok. It's like a long winded short story if that makes any kind of sense at all. As I said before, entirely too much detail.I just couldn't wrap my head around the thought of someone writing about a guy that just starts out all of a sudden killing people and then decides to kill his own children.I am very torn over this book. Parts of me definitely sees potential in this author. I see where he has several others published but I wont be reading them anytime soon.I am going to stop at this. I wish this author luck. I am being very generous with this rating.