Review: For The Author....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2013
Every time you publish your work and it's not the absolute best that it can be, you are thumbing your nose at your readers. The grammatical errors are astounding just like all of your other work. I know because I've spent my money and purchased all three. Your editor should be fired. Spell check should at least be catching some of these mistakes but they are not. It leads me to two conclusions: either you need a better grasp of the English language or you simply don't care.You ask for forgiveness for the errors in your book inside your Disclaimer and state that people read your work for entertainment purposes. I can't read your work and be entertained when I don't even know who's talking in your opening sequence, which takes place in a hospital. The hospital scene isn't even believable because of how the doctors are talking! There was no set-up nor did you create the atmosphere or the setting for your work.I'm sorry to give your work a bad rating. I really am but this is not ready. Please find another editor. All writers should work to perfect their craft. A creative writing and English class would be a great resource for you.Other than that, you don't hold much respect for your readers. I hope it's not the case but I can't come to any other conclusion. You should be competing for one of the top spots in Urban Fiction because you are good but the errors are regrettable. I'm very sorry.