Review: sucky story .... invest in a competent editor
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 27, 2014
this story suck'd. it had major editing issues, zero character development, the characters were somewhat unbelievable--- especially the MOTHER.... the writer failed to explain the mothers sick actions. I don't even understand the title--"GHETTO LOVE" WHERE THE HELL WAS ALL THIS LOVE?! what I read was a story about a truly f'd up individual who couldn't seem to let her loser baby daddy go. the mother's 'job suggestions' to her daughters after committing murder is just dirty!!!!!! what type of mother would want her children ( girls at that) to sale drugs.... ghetto love......NOT!... hot ghetto mess. the story just didn't make any sense. it didn't explain the mothers actions and her mind set. the story was all over the place --- but really not going nowhere. no I will not be purchasing part 2 as I was just too confused by part 1 to waste my time -- not to mention money to read a bunch of gibberish. I read this story months ago and I'm still confused.. maybe if the author took the time out to fully allow readers to get to know the characters with a much needed character development the story probably would've turned out great.