Review: Good Story Need to be returned to publisher for editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2014
I obtained Amy's book for free through Book Bub.  I enjoyed it so I decided to buy Emily's story. I enjoyed the premise of the story, I loved Ivan, Dmitri,  Marcus and Amy and I was shocked by what happened with the cats. I was debating how many stars to give this book. This book is in serious need of editing. At one point the author calls Roland- Roman I was confused who the heck is Roman? There are grammatical errors, sometimes it says he and it should really be she, at one point it was Emily talking however the writing made it seem like it was Brandt talking or his thoughts. I am hoping the book is sent back to the author for more editing. I understand that editors are expensive and many Indie authors cannot afford them. I have done beta reading for several indie authors. If the author cannot afford an editor, maybe she can get some friends to Beta read and pick up the obvious mistakes. I would be willing to do it. Amy's books had a few mistakes, however, this book had to many for me to give it more than 3 stars. I was going to give it two however, I realized that was  unfair to the story.