Review: Original story.  Good dialog.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2012
Typos were my only negative complaint.  Some words did not change into the format cleanly and so the reader got to play guessing games with the intent.  (Ex.  that 'was' must have been a 'what' for the sentence to make any sense at all.)Otherwise, wonderful characters placed in believable situations, with witty or snarky or delightful things to say.  Laughing out loud does occur.  Reader should be warned to not drink soda or milk while reading.