Review: why 5 stars..? read on..
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2013
needs editing.. do ALL authors use voice dictating..? it sure reads like it..i agree with others, needs a better ending..which group in their right mind would NOT have a security patrol or at least some sort of security set up.. especially with sean's appropriate rants about now living in the wild west..in all these similar stories i always wind up thinking "shoot the bastard in the back, 'cuz hes coming back to shoot you if you let him go" and while not what happens here its similar..in these sceanarios, NEVER leave the bad guys alive and or able to come back at you..BUT, all in all a very good read.. exciting, great characters, and its nice tp see humans be human in the affection department..i will now await book 2..note to author: clean up the syntax and spelling..OR, re-read your own book but do it when you're rested and undisturbed..