Review: it was ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2014
Theres something very awkward about the writing in this book."Are you saying that when i take your took, if i take it, that you wont own me body and soul?""When I grabbed you from, I touched your throat. I did not do it on purpose, i swear to you, but i know now who hurt you. he will harm you no more, and i swear to you he has paid for what hed done to you and all the others. as his maker, i will make it my life to keep you from harm from him and the others that seek to find you. of this i swear to you."Its almost like she is using WAY too many words to convey something simple. i just want to start waving my hand so she can hurry up and get to the point, every sentence is like this, so it gets hard to read the book. 0-0Also, i couldnt stand how the character would answer this way."your cat was irate." brock agreed with him.This happened more than once and it got annoying.The story moved too fast, one chapter shes terrified, then they have sex, then they are engaged 0_0It was a little surprising to read about the incest gay sex between father and son (the villains). Wasnt expecting that.also, the villains having so much face time, and having to read how they continually rape and kill, really ruined thre book for me.