Review: jumped around
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2014
I'm going to have to go back and read the other one, because I thought it was better but maybe I don't remember it right.  This story jumped around a lot and there was no character development.  I think it had a lot of action, they were going from one crisis to another and really never seemed to get to know one another.  I would have liked to have seen their relationship develop more and get more involved with them.  I think if the writer slowed down and took the time to develop the story, character, and relationships there would be no stopping her because she had some great ideas.  She was too busy cramming all of this into the book to pay attention to those things.