Review: Long on the erotic, short on the romance
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 5, 2013
Ok, the positives on this story are several.  I love the secret baby trope, always have, always will.  The story isn't long enough and that's a good thing.  Readers wanting more isn't a negative.  The hero is sexy, the heroine is sexy, and they like being sexy together.  They're both tortured with their reasons.Why I like it instead of love it?  The sex.  I'm a huge fan of sex, I am.  Even when it's rather dirty/erotic, it's not bad.  But these two people's desire for each other seem way over the top considering their emotional life toward each other.  Is it due to the short story style of this novel?  Probably.  Additional pages might have filled us in on the romance part as much as it did the erotic part.Overall, the author did a fantastic job of leaving readers wanting more.  If this is an accurate sample of her writing, I'd like to read a longer, more developed story.  I'm certain I'd love anything else written by her.