Review: A little more polish and this could be better.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2014
Overall this short story was good. I liked the basis of the plot. I think some of the dialog could be adjusted to sound a little more real but I completely understand that it was a short story and not meant to have lengthy descriptions and dialog. I really liked when Rissa was being pulled into the mirror. It was fast paced and in the moment. I think that was the best scene of the book. The ending confused me.  Without giving away any spoilers, I think a little hint at what happened that caused the events at the end would be nice so it doesn’t come out of nowhere.2.5 stars. It was good but I think with a little more time it could be a lot better.