Review: Very HOT but too short!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 08 7, 2013
This was an excellent erotic story, but I would have liked to have just a bit more background about the girl's relationship leading up to where the story started and it would have been nice to see how they ended the rest of the night and maybe their first sexual encounter without anyone else around.  Overall this was a well written short story.  Just wish it had been a little longer.