Review: Not for me, but promising
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 4, 2014
Not my cuppa. It started great, and I chuckled several times, because it is funny. Truly funny, which is rare.  This author has talent.  Written in 3rd person POV, the perspective shifts naturally from the Hero to the Heroine. The book is primarily set in Hawaii (Kauia).However, the sex felt VERY poorly timed. It came on much too soon. Insufficient emotional / relational development.  I didn't buy into Sheri coming onto Sam so strong.  After knowing him for one day,  Bam! She's pulling him into a full-on half-naked kiss in the hallway,  and the next day dragging him into the shower with her.  I am also not a fan of female masturbation scenes. Don't want to read about it. Does nothing for me.I don't mind swearing, but dislike profanity. Both Kellie and Sheri used it in everyday situations.Sam and the babies. Loved them. I loved those scenes, like when Sam washed Jeffrey in the koi pond and created baby clothes from his Titans T-shirt.Decent writing. I didn't notice any typos. Good dialogue. I wasn't assaulted by endless and repetitive internal dialogue, either. We got just the right amount of Sam's or Sheri's thoughts, regrets, guilt, etc.  (yay for that!).