Review: Yummy chocolate!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2013
I have to agree with the other reviewers that it was too short. The sex was off the charts and well written. I would have liked a little more depth and a longer story because each of the characters were interesting and intense at times. I hope the author takes more time and rewrites this as a normal length novel. There are so many things left undiscovered and really deserve exploration and closure. This has the potential to be a really hot and 5 star worthy book if it is reworked and made longer. There is no need to change the first encounter as long as there is more to the story. Right now it comes off shallow and unbelievable but I get the whole intense first sight and lust feeling that has more under it.