Review: Oh so BAD!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2013
I have gone from thinking that my kindle is the best gift I've ever received to realizing that it is the delivery method for my addiction.  I spend an obscene on books because I read 1 to 1 1/2 books a day.  I'm a fast and avid reader.  I saw all this to illustrate how BAD this book is.I got this book for free thanks to amazon prime and I'm upset I wasted my one free book a month on this.  I'd be really made if I had paid for it.  It was so bad I didn't finish it.  I always finish books but I couldn't get past the poor writing and the storyline was so generic it didn't hold my attention enough that I was willing to overlook the really horrible writing.First, there is nothing wrong with conjunctions.  This book made me think of Data from Star Trek: The Next Generation.  The writing style was like something you would expect Data, who never used conjunctions, to write if he were trying to communicate with a new planet and the people on the planet were uncivilized and had limited language.  This was like something that belonged in an anthology from a class of English as  a second language writers.  The word usage was so simplistic that the story did not flow, at all.  No one talks like that. No one thinks like that.  As I read along I kept saying to myself "seriously."I usually give authors 2 chances.  I usually start with an early book by an author and if it has room to improve I read something later, figuring the author might get better.  This book was not the first in this series.  I will NOT be giving this author a second chance.Save your money.  Heck, save your free amazon prime book for the month.  Read something else; anything else.