Review: Not Impress
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 21, 2014
I might be in the Minority but to me this book lacked character and storyline development. It could of been better had the author elaborated more on Falen upbringing her Trials and tribulation because of the Prologue. That Lil "tidbit "that was written, you know were we learned that two young girls were being abused and ignored by their crack head mom, was somehow forgotten along the way. Are we to assume that Falen and her sister just overcame that and now they hate each other. Fast forward a few years and Falen sister Crystal hates her, threw her out and she has no where to go but to stay with her best friend Toya. Cool but then things just went from ok to wtf!!!  Guys suddenly started seeing Falen because she is "gorgeous" and Falen ignore them because she does not know how "beautiful" she looks. She and JAnay got into a fight and then she has to find some where else to go and Then Tino stepped in. Is he suppose to be her Knight in Shining Armor? Again not properly executed, what happen to courting getting to know you? both him and falen instantly became a "couple" overnight, because he paid for her to stay in a motel and gave her money, they had ______. We never saw much interaction with these two again for awhile until some where in the book. She stumble upon a bag that contain_______. Over night again she and Toya became __________.  Am I to assume this shy nave girl knows how to sell _____. Then they started flossing and buying stuff drawing attention to themselves. Again who taught them how? it was never mention they just knew "how". Everything just went full circle and I did not "get it". This review is based on my reading of this book and this is my opinion and mines only.