Review: Just plain wrong all the way around.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 4, 2012
This book, # 1 in a series, is simply laughable. The author writes in a rather sophomoric manner, her dialogue is stilted and juvenile, and the lack of editing is obvious. At one point in the story she forgets who is talking and identifies the wrong characters as they speak. There are humorous editing errors as well, try this one on for size: "Frankly, she was ready to dump after the movie tonight but she supposed she could wait until after this weekend". Wow! Sounds like a "pressing" matter which should be taken care of sooner than later, don't you think? After all, 10 out of 10 doctors advise: "when nature calls...answer". In the description of the book, the author has you thinking the female protagonist is a floozy, what with her "always having a hard time saying no" statement; but of course, the author isn't linking that statement with the the title or intent of the book. Misleading! Actually, you can use her written description to get a taste of the fantastic prose which awaits you within.If you are looking for a book which features backstabbing amongst brothers as well as sex by deception--BAARRrrrffff, you've found it! From the lack of character building to the childish dialogue to the simplistic, sophomoric story line, the bad writing and obvious lack of editing...this one, in no way, compels me to want to read the second in the series.