Review: Good Effort...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 31, 2013
This short story was based on an interesting premise, but, unfortunately there was little character development and the sex scene, since this is supposed to be an erotic tale is super duper vanilla.  Nothing wrong with that, but, if your looking for erotica, well keep searching.  If you're looking to just spend money well go ahead and download.