Review: Good story but...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 7, 2013
I enjoyed the characters, however what did Vicky do back wherever she came from. I seem to recall a vague allusion towards a lawyer? The story line was a nice complexity with excitement. Why and how again did Vicky have knowledge on how to use a gun, city girl?Omg! Could there have been more sex scenes? (Notice the sarcasm.) I like a good sex scene but there comes a point when you think, say, sigh, "I get the point already!" I started skimming the dialogue just to see if they'd finished yet... here..nope not done...now? Not yet... aw! Finally!So I know everyone has been ragging on the terrible editing, but it is very distracting. I had to skip pages because I couldn't read another fragmented or run on sentence, and no, hyphens are not another form of punctuation. They do not replace a good comma, period, exclamation point, or question mark. I think someone needs to go beat their English teacher for not teaching you the difference between possessive and plural. "The girls bowling" is a very different meaning than "the girl's bowling." A lot to be said for good writing grammatically will make this book that much better!