Review: Started as Great story, but please get a better editor (said ...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2014
Started as Great story, but please get a better editor (said with respect, after reading several of this author's ebooks).Examples - Reins are used on horses, while the monarchs reign. Mixing characters in several places & the convoluted plot twists, with no continuity from the first book..sort of annoying. Mark wants the company, but also Bethany, Greg is SWAT who moonlights as company security & the Glenda thing was transparent from Chapter 2. This didn't work & I was sorely disappointed.