Review: Good story if you don't read too critically.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
I chose this story because it had good ratings, if not very many. Unfortunately, I was disappointed. The plot of this story is nothing new; heroine and hero fighting the forces of evil. . If your looking for a framework for the main characters to be going at it like bunnies, and you can overlook the likelihood that normal people (vampires, human or otherwise) would just jump in the sack and form an instant relationship given the plot of the story, then this story is for you.Unfortunately, I expected a bit more from a book I paid for. Even after reading the entire story I don't really know what a Telkhine is, except that the heroine is one! Character and plot development is a shallow, but I've read worse. At times during the story the wrong words are used (which at least invoked a rather amusing visual: "Then she crumbled to the floor." - I think you meant crumpled, Susan) or words were left out of sentences - these are things a good editor would have caught.I know this takes place is a supernatural world where things like Telkines (whatever they are) and vampires exist, but where the supernatural meets the real world, it needs to be beliveable. How is beheading by small, dagger-wielding female even believable? I can barely trim the fat off a piece of meat with a short knife!