Review: It really is hit and miss with these indie shorts
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 18, 2014
The writing was okay, but I just want there to be more to the characters. We get to know nothing really about Sabastian and Nichole is very 1 dimensional. I like reading hot sex, which you get here, but I also want the back ground. I want to know the characters and what happens with them, at least if it's more then just one sex scene. With some of these, they tease with character detail but never really give it. A little frustrating. It was a quick read, I believe it took all of 40 minutes to read. I understand this in part of 1 of 2, not sure I'll read the second part. For being free it was worth the time.