Review: Had a hard time
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2013
I did not read this story all the way through. The stilted way everyone talked nd the way Ms Webb felt the need to define everything that people said or felt was distracting. It created a barrier for Me to really get into the story. I skipped to the end and, still finding the same structure/flow issues, I was glad I had skipped to the end. Disappointed.