Review: I really wanted to love it.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 7, 2012
The premise for the book was great, I am apparently more forgiving of typos and grammatical errors than a lot of other reviewers.  My issues with the book had more to do with the storyline.  Grey's big mystery wasn't a mystery after the first mention of it.  There were conflicts with the way Bonnie's character was described at the beginning when compared to later in the book.  Dina just randomly appeared and went from being the older sister to the younger.  And the "romance" seemed unrealistic.  The sex scenes seemed like they were written by someone who hadn't read the rest of the book because it didn't fit or flow with the story.  That bothered me more than anything else to the point that I mentioned it to my husband.Maybe with a few more people helping with editing and continuity the story could have been better.