Review: It's a serial, not a novella-you've been warned!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2014
It's a serial, not a novella. Now, that being said, the story thus far intrigues me and I want to know where it's going. It's too soon to say if it's going to be great, there wasn't a lot to go on, naive girl runs from abusive/oppressive religious freak show home and winds up seeking refuge among bikers who will help her hide and get new identification. The tone leads up to believe she will be paying them back in "sexy time" to quote Borat lol. The initial words from the author advising readers, nay warning them that the Amazon toolbar filters filthy words and suggests we search for books under erotica...well that leads me to believe she published this short blurb to gain/alert a wider audience to her works. Sounds like there is a lot of erotica to come, with this part one being the teaser. Some of you may want to wait for more installments to be published before you start reading. However, 99cents for 22 pages may make for a pricey series. The author needs to consider writing longer installments with the future publications or she may lose me, after all I can get a complete novel for 2.99-3.99 and get the full story in one shot. The writing is quality! My only complaint is length and price.UPDATE: PART TWO IS AVAILABLE!!!! THIS IS NOT TECHNICALLY A SERIAL. Part two completes the story, a little over a hundred pages combined...and its scorching hot hot hot. Still a little short for my taste, but it's a complete story now and a good one without a cliffhanger after book two.