Review: Really Disappointed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2014
I could not like this story because it was too distracting to read with the author changing the reading tense throughout this short story. Make a decision how you want to tell your story and stick with it! This may be a new author so it might explain some of the grammar errors, but she needs to work on writing love scenes. They were horrible, just horrible which also caused me not to feel much about these characters. I love western theme stories but this one takes place in Africa mountain country so it's different but could have been better written.