Review: could have been so much more
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 2, 2013
it was a quick read and did not have enough depth. liked the idea of some f the punishments, but it was rushed. and some arts were confusing. I should retread a section of a story for one reason only, it was hot and had to read it again because... wow! um, read some lines again because it was kind of confusing. but like I said, liked the idea though. will read their work again, I liked their writing style, next time more to the story. that magic stuff was unneeded fluff or nt fluff enough.