Review: It needed more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 6, 2009
I felt this story was too short, too short on character development, too short on descriptions, too short on what this guy actually did and what time period it was.  I know a lot of books don't ever tell you when they take place, but I kept wondering throughout.Why there were trolls and other creatures? What did they have to do with the story?  A lot of questions that were never answered.I had no problem with reading the book, and it is nicely formatted for the Kindle, I just think what makes a so-so book better is lush and full descriptions and making sure the reader knows about your characters.  I thought this book lacked those characteristics.