Review: Give it a chance
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2014
I had to push through the beginning.  The parts where there are no character interaction could be edited down a little, I believe.  I agree with another reviewer that some of the secondary characters were a little out there and sometimes 'gross', but I got the point that this was supposed to be gross for the main character, hence the mentioning of his gag reflex being effected.Sometimes a paragraph would slip into the perspective of Hector and it threw me a little off, but at some point I found it kind of endearing.  Don't know why, as this is usually a big pet peeve of mine.Overall I liked it enough that I was smiling at the end.  I funny, loving, humorous book always did it jobs, I feel, if I am smiling on the last page.