Review: Nice story - writing could be better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 4, 2012
I really think the story of these two women is well put together. The idea and the build up is well done.I found the dialogue a bit contrived, which disturbed my reading experience through out the book. If Trin Denise could work on variantions on 'she said' or 'she answered' the flow would be less stiff.