Review: Awful ***SPOILER***
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 1, 2014
Okay maybe this would have been a better story if not for the run-ins, improper use of punctuation and not knowing how to use past tense and present tense in wording, basically everything about sentence structure you were taught throughout school.Then you have the two main characters Mason and Ava. Mason, who has a coke problem and I swear to god the addiction just appeared from no where because I don't  remember it being mentioned anywhere in the book and Ava who breaks up with Mason every other page because she can't trust him....I mean really, you can't trust a mobster with a coke problem...really. But that's not even the half of it because Ava then goes and cheats on Mason with his sisters  husband, but she can't trust him. WTF??? If I ever read the words "I'm so sorry baby I'll  never do it again" it will be too soon.If you are a writer getting an editor is pivotal to your profession otherwise you end up with this crap. I'm saying that all books in this series should be free because if the author isn't going to take their job seriously then they damn sure shouldn't be charging people for this. It's almost insulting to the readers and in my honest opinion Amazon shouldn't even sell it.