Review: Simply... impossible!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2013
I could've enjoyed this book if not for the numerous flaws in the story.  First of all the plot itself is impossible.  I got this book simply because it was free and after reading some SEAL books prior, I thought the other reviews are just there to discourage any reader who may be interested.  I should've have listened.Not a waste of time altogether.  There are some good points that I liked about the story.  Rachel for one is a very determined woman.  Without a push from her friend and she will not be relenting to Hawke's pursuit.  She worked very hard not to get involved and break her heart all over again.  But the good things end there.Now for the impossible and not so good point of the story:1.  Hawke as both a SEAL and a rock star - aren't those SEALs supposed to keep a low profile to be able maintain the secrecy and confidentiality of their missions?  How could Hawke possibly be a rock start without his enemies recognizing some familiarity between him and the SEAL that are after them?2. I can't fathom how Hawke is attracted to Rachel and yet gawk at Rachel's friend more than once.  Far from other lead man in stories I've read where their world stops and ends with the woman they love, no matter if a naked lady is put straight into their path.3. With too many characters and some of them talking all at the same time, I got confused most of the time.  I had to go back few sentences to make out who was talking.  The flow of dialogues was not smooth and is sometimes in chaotic pace.4. The conflict where the main story was built upon did not hold any interesting effect.  In fact, it was very lame and did not hold any realistic touch to it5. It appears that the love story angle of Rachel and Hawke did not put spice to the story and could sometimes be seen taking a back seatFor those who would like to pass the time with a free book, why not?  But a fair warning... don't even expect you will enjoy it.