Review: Interesting plot
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2014
I really liked the premise of this story, and really liked the first three quarters or so. But on the whole I thought it was a bit too long, and needed some editing. on that issue, I found it quite distracting the way the author jumped from the present tense to the past tense and back again, virtually every new sentence.