Review: To much planing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2013
TJ I enjoy your books but you do a lot of planning for a war but your plans are all the same when it comes time to shoot it out its pop pop pop and its over, never one where your plans has been give away by a spy or mold. I want to know more about the ones you are going up against and they set you up like maybe get you in a cross fire, don't tell what your plans are and this is where your hook comes in. As it is now we know what you will do. More action and less planning building a dugout is about as dumb as a box of rocks if you were over ran killing you and family would be like shooting fish in a pond once they blew the top off. Dig an escape tunnel to come up behind them. You set up this ambush and let them ride into the middle of town how after digging all the ambush holes how do you shoot them, are the holes dug in the street? You set up for them coming up to your house but it never happen you spent a year getting ready.