Review: Badly written
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 11, 2013
The bones of the story are good, but the writing is terrible. A heavy-handed editor is needed. Things really go off the rails in the last third. What kept me going up to this point were the characters - they were interesting. Then both main characters suddenly change, and not for the better. They might as well have been completely different characters - they display none of the traits that kept them going up to this point.