Review: Could use a Cast of Characters list...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 30, 2013
I have to say that I haven't looked at the corrected version that I *just* downloaded, but I have to say I'm glad. It's an entertaining, if busy, story, and it's quite funny in spots. I did find myself forgetting who was who and married to whom quite a bit, and there were loads of mistakes. I hope that's been fixed; if not, I'll update this the next time I'm online.