Review: Unbelievable and dull
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 6, 2011
I found this short romance unbelievable and dull.I'm not sure how the two main characters fell in love.  They only knew each other four days and they hardly spent any time together.  Attraction I can understand.  Love just didn't make any sense.Unbelievable can be overcome in a romance, but this was just very dull too.  The characters were just so good - unrealistically, relentlessly, unceasingly good - and nothing much of interest happens to them.Maybe if this had been a full length novel the author could have made the love story more convincing, the characters more than one-dimensional, and inserted some action or real conflict.  There was conflict, but the resolutions were telegraphed so explicitly to the reader that you never feel the impact of it.