Review: Good story, a few pet peeves, 3.5
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 14, 2013
I really enjoyed  this, especially the action and characters. I did have a few issues though.First there was way too much use of italics for emphasis on random words. There were bare any pages that DIDN'T have them. That many italics gets distracting and yanked me out of the story as I tried to put emphasis on those words in my head.The author also tried to avoid over-using character names, but the way she did it could be confusing at times. Referring to a character as "so and so 's sister" 6 times on a page is clunky.Overall I really enjoyed this and definitely plan to read more by this author, I just feel a fee things could be a bit more polished.