Review: An honest review...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2014
I really wanted to like this book because I was a fan of her first book, Love Script, but this one fell short.  The price which is rather steep so I expected a great book but I was quite disappointed.  I love long stories that captivate a reader but this one was long with no point.  I grew tired of hearing about the nightclub business and how Thandie promoted this and that for Elliot Richards.  I did not understand the point of some parts like when she met the football players at the beach and then brings them back to the club only for Elliot to bring them to another event.  Her two co-workers were annoying and immature.  As mentioned earlier, I was a fan of Nick and Laney from Love Script but the part of them in the club was so out of nowhere, it literally made no sense.  If there was a clear indication in the other book that Nick and Laney would be down for what happened, I would not have been that annoyed but it did not seem authentic at all especially since Laney would have been pregnant.  I do not see super Alpha and possessive Nick letting that particular situation in the book happen and I did not see Laney who was rather sweet and not sexually outgoing doing that either.I will give this author another chance because her first book held so much promise.