Review: morally corrupt leading ladies
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2014
Stop at location 3320, and this is a 4 star short story with potential but no menage. Up to that point, there is a meandering story about a lady, her sister and their mom, all witches. Eventually the ideal boyfriend is introduced, complete with fantasy shopping, makeover, hot sex and outrageously expensive date. The focus though is on the witches.[I consider the next paragraph a warning instead of a spoiler, but a comment disagreed.)Then the leading lady looses her morals and inexplicably becomes the sort of woman who says she loves one man one day, meaning it, he is the only guy for her, then then lies to him about where she is going a week later, goes to guy #2's bedroom, puts up token resistance, has sex with him, and a while later is telling him that she loves him best. Guy #1 barely appears in the rest of the story but inexplicably still loves her. Gag me with a spoon, I wanted to vomit. Wise women don't put themselves in such situations where they will be tempted to make bad choices. She will obviously be having affairs with numerous guys her whole life, and the idiot guys believe her lies of love & faithfulness. Her professions of love are worth a dirty hankie.The 2nd story leading lady spend most of her time complaining about her boss, and has a long standing affair with a married man. She dates him for one year after learning he is married, only dumps him when she gets bored. Disgusting. Accidentally contributes to her boss dying and is way too stupid to dial 911, even though she is standing right next to a phone. If she or someone else had performed CPR, the boss would very likely have lived. So, here is another example of her poor morals: she would rather let her boss die than get him medical aid. Lackluster romance eventually develops, complete with ridiculously rich boyfriend.The 3rd story leading lady loves insulting everyone, particularly customers, and blaming other people for her problems. I had no patience left at this point with such looser, nasty, selfish ladies, and gave up.The author shows potential.