Review: No more editing errors
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2013
I read the version that was revised and clear of editing errors so no complaints in that area. I agree with another reviewer that this story was too short. In fact, book one and two could have been combined instead of offering two short novellas. The characters were very lightweight but it was the story line that held my interest to the very end and made me buy the second book. This is perfect if you want a fast but good read.