Review: nice story but needs a proofer
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 12, 2014
I really enjoy Elizabeth Lennox's stories. You could argue they can be formulaic but her characters are individuals that I enjoy getting to know. However, there are typically huge errors in her book. Nina fluctuates between being Brock's fiancée and wife. The timelines are a but wonky ESPECIALLY leading into this Chloe story. The books have been cleaned up a lot in comparison to her earlier books (earlier books had tons of grammatical and spelling errors on top of storyline mistakes). I look forward to the next one  but really hope she gets a better proofer.