Review: Just missed the mark
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2014
This story had good potential but the author rushed through it and simply fell flat.  I liked the characters, but the author seemed to think that just saying they had sex and he hurt her was enough said (?).  Excuse me, but the interplay is an important part of the genre and the story.  As a reader, I want to be there - that's why I purchased the book.  If you are intimidated by the actions, then write in a different genre, but don't cheat your readers.  I felt the reviews over-rated this book.