Review: Predictable and poor dialogue
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 13, 2011
My biggest problem with this book isn't even that it's predictable, the dialogue was terrible. Olivia stutters, mumbles, repeats herself and ums a lot. I don't mind that story lines don't have anything new, but the lead guy was just blah. On that note though, I liked Sophia and Sylvan. I think I mainly read the rest of this book to see their development, and then read Hunted.ALSO, and stop reading if you don't want any of the story to be spoiled, but what is this mating fist? It's talked about as growing so large at the base that they won't be able to unattach for hours yet he's still able to move in and out of her to continue having sex? Is sex different for them, cause that just didn't make sense to me.