Review: Good Theme But Needs More Development
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 20, 2014
I received a free digital copy from storycartel in exhange for a review.This book had great voice, and the theme is good.Belaboring of the character's points was too much and it slowed the pace at too many points in the book. I felt that her dialogue were repeated in different ways without moving forward. Some of the sentence structure was awkward, and I was distracted by the lack of needed punctuation and correct formatting.This book has potential because the theme is good, people can relate to the character regarding self-image, and the ending was cute. Overall, with some polish, and more character development and setting, I believe the book can be incredible.