Review: Not a deep story, but hot at some points
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 9, 2013
I admit I do have some interest in BDSM and other forms of domination roleplay, so this story got me interested right away. The author begins by giving a brief bit of information about the lifestyle, and why men or women might be drawn to it. The book describes how she met a man she originally only contacted only via personal ads. Initially she didn't outright mention anything about female domination, but did find someone whose interests and outlook aligned with hers. From this point on the goal of the game was to mold this seemingly perfect guy into the perfect slave.This book seems like it's good for those looking for a little titillation. It details various exploits, often erotic in nature, where the author introduced various aspects of femdom into the relationship. The characterization isn't very good; we don't get to know much about the personality and interests of guy she dated/married, for instance. It's also not that informative about rules and guidelines of the lifestyle. I'd recommend it purely to those looking for be entertained rather than educated.There are some things that need to be fixed. The grammar is sometimes a little weird, and the author sometimes fails to start a new paragraph between two different people's dialogue. Also, there are a few instances of seemingly Randomly capitalized Words.