Review: Got a little tedious
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 13, 2013
THis isnt a bad story. Cain, nowadays known as Inac, plots the defiling and destruciton of a beautiful young girl, who has a heavenly mission to carry out. Simple, hunh? Not so, the evil one falls in love with the beautiful and guiless Hara. So, that's pretty much the story- how he worms his way into her good graces and then her heart, as, against the advice of every other person in her life, she falls under his spell.The writing is passable. The characterization adequate. Same for the dialogue and narrative. If this had been a little stronger story, i.e. Hara does something, rather than wait for Inac to provide all of the initiative, this could have been a 4-5 star book. Not a bad first outing for a new author certainly.If you are a biblical scholar, or devoutly religious this book will likley get a higher rating from you than what I gave it.I got this for free, so cant complain about the price. Probably a still a good deal at .99 cents or so.