Review: needs work the story is great
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 27, 2012
but the author wrote like it was a narrative for a movie not even like in the 3rd person.  the editing needed far more work and was a bit disconcerting when tenses of the words were not used properly... The story itself was good but needed more punch if the editing were tightened up and the book read more like the characters were interacting with each other instead of like someone was peering down at them explaining what they were doing it would have been better.