Review: Good Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 5, 2013
A little over 4500 locations, so worth the $4.99 + tax I paid in terms of length.I enjoyed the story and the characters, but the telling of it and the writing were what kept me from giving it 5 stars. I felt there were a lot of grammatical errors throughout the story, which were noticeable. Nothing that truly distracted me from a fluid reading experience, but it is obvious this book needed at least one more read through in the editing process. In terms of the 'telling' of the story, I mean the narration of it seemed a bit chaotic/jumbled. I don't know if it was the British terms or way of speaking that threw me off, but I felt the characters got the short end of the stick.This story was realistic in terms of how Matt & Shane's relationship developed, but how many and the nature of the obstacles they had to overcome were a bit on the extreme side. They said "I'm sorry" more times than they said  "I love you" and had a lot of make-up sex. They had a lot of sex in general, but their teasing banter about how much they want each other is what pulls you into their story in the first place.Do I recommend it? Yes. Will you be up all night reading it? Eh, probably not. Will you enjoy the overall story? I believe so.