Review: Oh dear, that paragraphing!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 1, 2013
I would have given five stars rating if the paragraphing had been done correctly.  Doesn't the author know that it's a new para each time someone different speaks?  -  it seemed to be non-stop joined paragraphs.  The story itself was good and the Bran character showed just the right amount of vulnerability.  Holden and Alix however came across to me as somewhat cold and unfeeling.