Review: A good attempt but not good enough
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
premise as old as time- innocent girl, a hardened man. Characters,plot and direction of the story could use a lot more development as well as an editor. For example, more time could have been spent describing the characters pasts, developing their relationship. The suspense and fear factor could have been more pronounced during the "she's being threatened by an old nemesis scene." If as much descriptive license was given to the characters and plot as the sex scenes this book would have been twice the length and ten times more appealing. sex scenes were hot but repetitive. Some made me cringe then say Wow. A wierd but great attribute of this book.