Review: Cute Short Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
Not much time to get to know the characters, however, that is to be expected in a short story.  The h decides to escape an arranged marriage.  She meets her knight in shining armor who rescues her and soon she finds herself wishing she had the opportunity to marry him.  She certainly wouldn't be running away from that engagement!  As we read the story, we develop our own thoughts as to who the shining knight really is.  All questions are answered by the end of the story, complete with HEA.  My one concern was that when the H and his servant say his name, it is spelled one way, however, when the h uses it, it is spelled another way.  Members of both of their families have married each other for generations, so wouldn't they be on the same page as far as spelling his name is concerned?  Rather confusing since this happens in the middle of an important reveal.  As a reader, you spend time wondering about the misspelling when you want to concentrate on the special moment.