Review: Great hero, annoying heroine
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2014
You've read the summaries and some of the criticism about the heroine's attitude toward the military and the author's lack of clarity on military matters, so I won't rehash those. On the plus side, the hero was a drop dead sexy alpha, written as more of a three dimensional character than they usually are. On the down side, there's the heroine who I wanted to smack frequently. To be fair, it's the author's fault (well, of course it is) because she saddles this poor woman with an awful repeating inner dialog that never quits...and did I mention repeats? Over and over and over again? On the plus side for the future it's nothing a good editor wouldn't take care of. I just wish the red pen had been out before this story was published. Overall, it was an ok read...I'll probably try something else by the author, since she seems to be able to put a story together.