Review: Liked it but didn't love it; 3 1/2 stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 28, 2012
I must confess that I was disappointed in this story after reading all the five star reviews. For one thing, the editing was really bad, especially the misuse of quotation marks in the dialogues. I realize that this story is a parody but I find it very annoying to listen to people who sprinkle the word "like" in their sentences; I found it equally annoying to read it. I had a great deal of difficulty in visualizing what was happening in the story and I found it hard to suspend my disbelief in many places. I would give Mr. Kerrigan high marks for originality and inventiveness and there were definitely scenes that I thought were entertaining and amusing. Therefore, I would recommend this book with qualifications.