Review: Didn't go far enough
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2014
The author had a good initial idea for this story, but fell down on the execution.It's about a young college student with a secret.  A cute frat boy invites her to a party, but betrays her brutally.  Each stage of the story is rushed and there are some elements that defy belief (did she really think the punch at the party would be non-alcoholic?  and, if it was so important for her not to drink, why is she not able to taste alcohol at all?).There is extreme brutality in this story and it is as if the author can't decide whether to dwell on it or skim it, giving the story a strange halfway feeling.  It's too rushed and sketchy for adult readers and it's too graphic for younger readers.