Review: Slight, fluffy, needs some fleshing out
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 2, 2013
This is a pleasant little diversion, with characters who could become interesting one day. It does, alas, have a certain, by-the-numbers style, with a breezy, simplistic writing style (both prose and plotting) that is laconic and lacks force. Tension does not build. Big events have about the same impact as little ones.  Sometimes it feels more like you're reading a screenplay than a book, or an outline of a book. Yawn, at times. The technical aspects of writing are fine. The parts that make it a craft are missing. This may have some potential, though, and it is fun at times. The tension and back-story that should develop on the characters could be entertaining--but very little of that is here.