Review: Reviewed by KyBunnies
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 11, 2014
This would have been a good book if it had been properly edited and line edited before published. Lots of spelling and grammar errors. Sentence structure needs work.  Missing parenthesis, paragraphs have between single to triple indent. Glad this was free not worth paying money for something so screwed up.A few of the editing errors (from my notes & highlights) I found in this book.and I ahall let Read more at location 1111Note: editing error Editpatience for that for that, but I do have a great love for playing it, and get lots of Read more at location 1204Note: editing error Editand laughed,  "I would have given anything to see the two of you going at Read more at location 1518Note: editing error Editincredulous, "You mean you feel out of bed, lass?" Read more at location 1619Note: editing error Edit"I would never sell him if he were mine, Aidan, he is such a bonny beast. May I pet her?" Read more at location 1761Note: editing error stud horse has a sex change Edit"I'll try grandfather, really I will. Goodness where did the time go. Besse will be waiting for us for dinner.  Let me dry off my feet a bit and I'll catch up with you."  "Well, the boys are probably very busy, today being Saturday. They have the day off tomorrow.  Should have been someone there though. Didn't you see Aidan? He talked to us for a bit, then rode off towards the stables on a black stallion. What a beautiful horse. How I would love to own him." Read more at location 1817Note: editing error Bridget and Robert (grandfather) talking in first paragraph next paragraph Bridget and Margaret talking no skip/break Editdon't believe there is any danger of a blood clot., but Read more at location 1935Note: editing error EditYou can come and spend some time with her every day, and I'll get a nurse if it is necessary.  Besides, I don't think the doctor will allow her to be moved at this time." Read more at location 1954Note: editing error what happened to using parenthesis when someone is talking EditAs you know ,the Read more at location 2424In the preview alone there are over 20 spelling/grammar/editing errors.  I honestly do not understand why authors cannot edit a book before publishing.Pass this one by.  One minute I felt I was reading a contemporary romance the next I had a slight feeling it might be historical.