Review: not what I expected
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 10, 2014
Seems like I'm in the minority here but I need to be honest.For me the story seemed rushed .Parts of it were rather confusing when I was reading and there were a few questions I would have liked to see be answered.Now I understand this was a novella, but I have read others that seemed to complete a story.There were also parts and I feel it was the way it was written that didn't make sense.The fact there was an age difference didn't disturb me too bad I just wish it was written a bit differently.  The way the author portrayed these characters did come out a bit creepy.We never really found out why Kira's father threw Orion out and beat him, I personally presumed it was because of KiraIn that sense if the ages were written a bit differently that theory wouldn't come across as creepy.I didn't like the way the first meeting went either it was just too harsh for what Kira went thru.There were also other characters that I would have liked to hear more about . However that could be another book entirely. All in all it was priced okThe plot in itself wasn't badI just feel instead of a Novella fill in the blanks of the story and possibly explain yourself in different prose and then I would give it 3-4 starsI will however read other stories by this authorHer ideas are interesting. Just because this particular story wasn't my cup of tea all around doesn't mean she isn't a good author.