Review: yes, but
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2013
This is probably the best constructed and most organic work by Ms Sunday I have read so far. Its plot is very tight, characterization is always consistent and there are no unnecessary characters or subplots.It is also better edited, even if some typos, wrong words and grammar mistakes are still detectable.Pacing is slow, though. It never drags but it never got me involved.The two leads, relatable though they may appear, feel distant.Writing, though fairly good, is not subtle enough to portray the minute psychological transitions this plot is essentially made up of.As a romance it is still enjoyable  but while reading I kept on thinking about how that particular, meaningful moment could have been better conveyed by different words.