Review: Short, Sort of Sexy and Free
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
This was like reading a book in fast forward, the story is layed out and executed lighting fast.  It isn't bad, however could be better.  There seems like the story could be expanded more, maybe some background on Damien would help and the sex scenes can be amped up a bit.  There are a few typos, nothing too major.If this is a first try at a book, there is definitely something here, just try and give us a bit more next time.