Review: DNF
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 18, 2014
This story was done in a different way then all the other stories I have read when it came to romance novels. That had me interested in how this would end. Everything was going okay until I got to the first sexual scene. The telling from both characters were off in the sex scene, plus bad first sexual experience. What I meant was, there was no appeal in how they completed the sex scene. That is when I lost all interest in this story.If only the author would have gave this story more thought and wrote it to be more believable, I would have finished the story. Plus, the author needs to read a whole lot of romance novels before writing stories in the genre, to grab readers attention.The author has potential, but, needs a lot of work.