Review: There is a chuckle on almost every page.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 19, 2014
In this story, you have a couple who are in their 40's somewhere. It was hard for me to picture them in that age group, because they were a lot like a couple of fumbling teenagers."Do you have condoms?""Uh, no. You think there might be some in your sons room?""Oh, duh, of course my son has some." She says. "By the way, I don't normally do this."One particular paragraph had me rolling over laughing. And I quot;"What say we lie down and get it on." This was not a question he asked."I thought you'd never ask." Honey, he didn't!This guy is clearly not spontaneous at all, and it apparent in the way he must announce his next move, as if she could not read or understand body language. And let me tell you, you'd have to be a drooling veg not to be able to read a mans body. LOL!"Let's make love.""Yes, Let's do."OMG, the dialog is just comical.