Review: This story felt off to me
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2013
Anne Tenino is such a good writer, I had high expectations going into this sequel to "Frat Boy & Toppy."  But it all just felt a little forced and a whole lot of flat.  The only part I actually enjoyed was Paul's visit to Frat Boy & Toppy themselves, Brad and Sebastian.  That scene had me missing them and wishing for a whole new story featuring this engaging couple front and center.  I was still charmed by Brad's laid back charm (and quiet submissiveness to Sebastian), and Sebastian's particular way of speaking (yeah).Paul and Trevor, though?  Meh.It's not that Paul was a bad character to invest time with.  I actually like that he's become a curmudgeon because he was wronged by his high school boyfriend.  He's a cynic because his heart was broken.  And I like the idea of his heart healing because he finds love again.  I just didn't care for Trevor that much.  What he did to Paul was awful, and even though he was ultimately remorseful, I felt like Paul deserved so much better.  He needed someone with a beautiful light, joyful energy to nourish his soul.  The sex scenes between the two didn't even have heat.  They were so uninspiring that even Paul questioned why he was apart of them!This story could have been so much better.  Can we have a do-over?