Review: Baffled
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2013
I'm baffled by the gushing reviews for this book.  I have never read anything before which is so poorly written.  I'm hesitant to criticise an author who has a go, but this book needs some serious editing.  The story was fairly predictable (another billionaire!) and the D/s was unrealistic.But don't take my word for it.  Here is a sample sentence:"My heels clicked on the marble tile as my mind battled between being more nervous about hearing my heels on the tile or standing next to this beautiful man who had invited me to dinner.  It was as if I hung between those two feelings with a piercing thought trying to sandwich between them."The author should get someone to beta read for her at least, to fix some of the syntax problems.