Review: Surprise, surprise
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 16, 2014
Well, the ending was a shocker, I'll say that. However, like one other reviewer mentioned, the characterization seemed to get derailed.Will Work for Foodis worth reading, only 21 pages and about 10 minutes to read. I enjoyed the story, but expected better editing for such a very short story.Here are some examples -"She was winded and overheated the time she reached the car.""It was took a few minutes for him to take the tea and glasses out to the picnic table""That's was a really good lunch today."Maybe I'll apply for a job with the editor.