Review: Author Has Potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2013
At 74 pages, this story is a bit pricey at $2.99. The storyline isn't a romance but a hook-up between a lonely woman and an injured soldier. There's no happily ever after here, but there was potential for a relationship to develop between Jason and Maryann. I would have rated this story a little higher, but it needed a good editor to correct long and poorly formatted paragraphs, spelling errors, switching past and present tense and POV, and too much telling and not enough showing. These are rookie author mistakes that a patient editor could coach a new author through so that nothing distracts from the story. This author has potential.