Review: Great story terrible writing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 10, 2011
This is a good thriller.  I was reminded of The Day of the Jackal.  Someone is on his way to explode a nuclear weapon in the US and the question is whether he will succeed.  The book is well plotted.  Sadly it is spoiled by some of the worst proof reading I have ever seen.This book contains a language error in virtually every sentence.  The errors are so consistent that someone must have tried to conform to some odd grammar.1.  Plurals.  Most plurals are formed by adding apostrophe s to a noun.  E.g. "There were three car's in the driveway."2.  Possessives.  Most possessives were formed by adding s to a noun.  E.g.  "He opened the Fords passenger door."3.  Past Participles.  The past tense was consistently used as the past participle.  E.g. "have went,"have chose,""have broke," etc."4.  Double negatives.  Some of the best double negatives I have ever encountered are found here.  "They denied they neither built nor flew the weapon."Maybe it is just me, but I found it distracting to read a book that had so many errors in language.