Review: needs proofreading, but is readable
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2012
Once one gets past the dreadful editing, this story has some merit.Mr. Darcy is not mentioned at all until Chapter 10, and then the action picks up.  Mr. Darcy falls in love with Elizabeth at age 9.  The problem is, it's the wrong Elizabeth.Eventually Elizabeth gives Mr. Darcy advice on how to straighten out the mess he has made with the right Elizabeth and all ends well.