Review: Not a bad story at all
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 31, 2013
(mrs.featherpicker reviewing)The description was fairly accurate I think. It did have the drug cartel connection, it did have mystery and suspense and lots of little heartbreaks along with the hope of true love winning out. While I couldn't make up my mind if it wasn't more of a "teen" related book and since I'm probably old enough to be most of the characters grandmother, I still pretty much enjoyed it. The description said that it was an "updated, cleaned up" version (I guess meaning it was cleaned up from the spelling and grammatical errors) I still found a good many of them more so towards the last half. Still, I think the friendships that were formed were believable, the fact that the young Heidi managed to grow up and truly find herself and values along with it made the story well worth the read. The only thing that bugged me a bit was while the love that formed between Heidi and Camdon seemed plausible, the lack of "protection" mention was left completely out. Whether it was just a thought between them or the actual consummation wasn't described (thank you! wasn't necessary) it was not negated either. Oh well, possible that it wasn't a fact, just a thought.I think this author did a pretty good job with the plot, the characters and the story line itself. Just a better editor and proof reader will help greatly.