Review: Good series and geting better!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
The rating is four stars because nothing is perfect.  That's not to imply that this installment isn't very good (it definitely is), only that there is almost always room for improvement.The author has evidently taken to heart all the many complaints about proofreading his work before releasing it for publication.  Certainly there are a few obvious mistakes here and there, mostly such as spelling errors and misplaced punctuation, but the finished product is greatly improved compared to previous efforts.  I liked the way he treated technological advances on both sides of the conflict and the explanation of why population pressures forced the GD forces to use robotics the way they did on the battlefield.  I also liked the way he had the American/Canadian forces exploit weaknesses in that battlefield tech.  The issues in the GD high command and how they prosecuted the war was also a good way, in my opinion, to keep the story moving well.  The back story of Jake and his position in the Militia was interesting, as was the political infighting in Washington.Mr. Heppner, what's next?  Liberation of the Heartland?  Retaking Alaska?  Running the Asians out of Mexico?  A new President?  Whatever it is, please don't tarry since many of us are waiting to see what happens next.