Review: Good Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2014
The story was good.The writing was good enough to keep me interested.The seemingly random use of commas, switching past and present tenses within the same sentence, paragraph, etc, some bad sentence structure and a few other grammatical errors kept throwing me off.The technical errors, such as ships in space slowing due to loss of acceleration, lose of control because a controlling surface (wing) was damaged (in space), appeared frequently -- and changed later in the book.It looks like the writer did not want to put in the effort of researching even basic things.There were a couple of inconsistentsies that looked like the author simply forgot a small detail from earlier in the story.The story was good enough, and the writing style interesting enough, for me to buy the next two books at the Kindle price they were selling for. If the prices were a little higher I would have passed on reading the rest of the trilogy.I am currently reading the second book of the trilogy and the writing has improved some, but is still in need of some better proofreading and editing.Based on the story alone, I would have given five stars. Improve the writing and future books may rate that.