Review: Cute Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2011
I thought this story was cute, but the author could have spent a bit more time with editing and polishing this piece of work. The drawings seemed a bit "rough" to me, as something that was quickly put together. This story is very short too.Now, my concern with this piece (that likely is not the fault of the author but the device I am using) is that I had difficulty viewing the small text on the Kindle. With the text embedded as a picture, it became impossible to enlarge the text, so I had a hard time trying to read the words. Personally, I would suggest having pictures and text on different "pages" to help with the flow of the book.Overall, I feel this deserves three stars because it was a nice read, but would have been better if this piece of work were polished a bit more.