Review: had such promise...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2011
I eagerly started this book because I really enjoyed her other book (For sale: Old Manor House). This story started out with a lot of promise. Towards the middle of the book the story started getting a little sloppy... a few characters were introduced that didn't really have anything to do with the story at all, there wasn't much to the ghost story part of the book and the parts that were, were so short it bothered me. There were introductions to characters that were a part of the story but the conversations held between those characters seemed of little help with the mystery at hand and silly. By the end of the book I realized there were still a couple loose story ends that never got tied up/explained. It was as if someone else had written this story and put Merabeth's name on it or that her publisher said "Hey! I need a book NOW!" because it was so poorly written and hurried feeling. I'm glad the book was only 99 cents!! Being that I enjoyed her other stories I'll def. read the sequel to this and hope that it's better written!! Please Merabeth, just pen romance novels and leave the mysteries to other authors....