Review: Breath taking story!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2013
I will be honest with you; I am reading this one again very, very soon. First of all, and I will get it out of the way. It does need some editing – none of it changes the story, but it is unnecessary “noise” in this enthralling story. Regardless, I will give it 5 stars because the story itself is out of this world. These two damage people come together and go through this eternal rollercoaster that I thought I was going to die (I mean it, my heart was beating to no end). The author takes her time in developing the characters and it pays off. I wanted to read more, and still do. But at the end I felt that the story went through all the stages and the author didn’t rush it. Initially, I was a little scare with the Hero, he came out so strong - I wasn’t sure if he was too Alpha, but as the story goes you see that he truly loves this woman - and understand why he is the way he is. They learn to love, and understand each other – with a lot of patience, and misteps.  The sex is definitely hot but it doesn’t interrupt the love story, it enhances it. The passion in this writing bares no comparison to many of today’s stories. It was mature to the end. I thought to give 4 stars because of the editing but the story is too good and I already saw that the author republished it with some editorial corrections. I will definitely read more of this author – she got me hooked.Read it, live it, love it.