Review: Excellent story.  BAD editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 27, 2013
I really like the story.  However right away I was noticing extra quotation marks where they were not needed, say at the end of a paragraph of prose that had dialogue inside it but the dialogue had already been closed with quotation marks and never reopened.  For the most part, I ignored the extra words and misuse of words...he instead of she for instance.  But when I read the following sentence, it was the last straw.  "We were gonna to clear the place out..."  I will keep reading the story because it's actually pretty interesting.  However, I really think the author needs to get someone to print out the story and actually edit it. For example: Miss Rose smiled at the memory. "Well, your never know.."  Or, "...and I could have told himself not to try to mess with..."  Or "She went to the Martha..."  I could go on, however I want to finish reading it.Okay, on to the positive stuff.  The character development is superb.  I can hear and see these people in my head.  The description of the small Georgia town is right on to this Georgian.  The plot moves along with some side stories to keep things fresh and interesting.  I do hope this author continues to write and understands that what may seem like a negative review is actually intended as more of a constructive review.