Review: I paid too much, and it was free
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2013
Waste of time! Way too many errors and it was just a weird read. The story didn't flow and the sentences were extremely choppy. I cannot imagine why anyone would give this 5 stars. The story idea was good, but the author was not able to pull it together. It was also very repetitive, using the same phrases over and over.