Review: This story is...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 24, 2012
Bullsh*t.  It was amature writing at best. I gave it 2 stars simply because the bones were there even if the flesh was lacking. I started to give it 3 stars out of respect for the author but she obviously does not respect her readers. I'm 40% in and can go no further because it's giving me a headache. The writing is disjointed and passionless. The descriptions are trivial. This is not a romance not sure how to describe it. BTW alpha males don't say they're alphas they don't have to. I suggest a rewrite. I commend you for having your own publishing company but hire an editor or find one that's honest.