Review: Has great possibility but needs better editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2012
Because I love the concept of this story and I found the characters charming and often humorous, I gave this a three star rating instead of the two star I was almost compelled to give it.  The short book description accurately describes the plot of the book and also gives a good indication of how much this book suffers from poor editing.  The numerous grammatical errors, poor word choices and confusing way the verb tense switches from past to future to present were too distracting for me.  It was like reading a bad translation of a foreign book to the english language.  The mistakes were almost on every page and I found myself editing sentences more than just reading them.  I finally gave up half way through it because I got a headache and really, reading a book shouldn't be so much work! I skipped to the end and it looks like the story is set up for a second book.It's a good thing this was a free download or I would have demanded my money back from Amazon. I really hope the author gets a good, professional editor before publishing the next book because a great concept with promising characters is going to waste.  I would gladly pay for this story and any other in this series if it was better edited.