Review: Great story!  POOR editing...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 25, 2011
Let's start with the good... This was a good story line!  There were some parts of the story where I felt like the plot was underdeveloped, however I am hoping that the author will fill in the gaps with a sequel.At her hometown in Florida, Trystie feels like an average teen, with average problems and an average life.  Tragedy strikes and she is forced to move to Connecticut to live with distant friends of her parents.  The moment she walks into her new room, she knows that her life will be drastically different.  As much as she resists it, she realizes that it won't be an entirely bad thing.Instead of being treated like a 'plain Jane' as she was at her old high school, here she is treated like a novelty.  People can't seem to stop staring at her, talking about her, or hitting on her.  She soon realizes Kamdyn has an electric affect on her and she feels extremely drawn to him. He is the guy every boy wants to be and every girl wants to be with.  He is handsome, funny, and affectionate.While she is best friends with Jayson who has more than just "friendly" feelings for her, she fights her feelings of attraction to him because she feels that she is somehow betraying Kamdyn.It's about midway through the book before any real aspects of the paranormal become evident in the story.  After that the story takes a lot of weird twists and turns that includes yet another high school boy who can't keep his hands off of Trystie.  Halo seems very sinister and in her dreams she sees him with girls that start to go missing and turn up dead in the woods that surround her house.  Yet.... she feels drawn to him as much as Jayson, but not as much as Kamedyn.By the end of the story there are no less than five guys that want to be Trystie's one and only.  That being said it was a very long book with interesting surprises and many funny moments.  You yourself fall a little bit in love with all of the guys that are after Trystie and hold at least a little bit of her affection.I would not recommend this book for anyone under 15, due to INTENSE sexual moments that never include actually having sex.While the story was great.....The editing in this book was some of the poorest I have ever seen.Mrs. Stotz, if you ever read this review I would like you to know that I really liked your book!  If you ever need someone to read the next one to check for errors....I'm your girl!  :)