Review: Hope the next ones better.....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 13, 2013
I bought the next book before I read this short story, I hope it's better because I am a stickler for details and already had issues with this first chapter. Small things but irritating to me, like"Steel balls" coming from a shotgun (they're lead)And when she got into her "Ford Blazer"..... (Chevy Blazer)It just sounds Iike a 12 year old writing when small details are wrong.