Review: Good start for a new author
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2014
This was a very good start for a new author. I didn't agree with two of the reviewers in regards to editng; very minor issues here or there, but nothing that even more experienced authors haven't had in their books (reading and then re-reading the same thing over and over I am sure blinds one to minor faults).I thought that the storyline was extremely solid; the main and well as secondary characters were well done and the plot lines well executed. I certainly hope that we will be reading more about the Skulls (have a feeling Taz is next, but I hope Aero gets his as well). The author went into great detail but not so much that it weighed the story down. Very good job at describing the inner-working of an MC club as well.**Possible spoiler**As to Ben trying to kill her and then the fast make up issue? Hmm...I believe that we would all like to think that we would kick a guy out after having him lose such faith (and at the expense of our own peril) , or at least make him grovel a bit more (or even at all as she allowed him full access), but the quick resolution didn't perturb me all that much. I think ,most of us would have done the same.**end**I was a little upset at how narrow-minded Eva was about Linda. She wasn't acting like a disbeliever as much a juvenile. Nice to see that she re-deemed herself(somewhat).So why did I give it a four instead of a five? I thought that the sex between Ben and Eva was BORING. I mean, really, really boring. There was absolutely no fore-play, and Eva had a strange view about oral sex. She even went so far as to call being in doggy-style as being 'dirty'. I liked that she was shy and that Ben had to work at her here and there, but the prize he got seemed like no prize. Funny that it was the woman and not the man who wanted a wham-bam-get it over with- slam. I only cooment on this as this book is in the Romance section and not plain Fiction section.  If the sex had been more than luke-warm and a tad more sensual this book would have rocked out. As it was....Will I read more from this author? Hell yeah. Even the tepid sex won't stop me (though it will take a bit of the pleasure away). But if the author is going to write for more of the MC members the sex is going to have to be kicked up quite a bit.