Review: Badly in need of professional editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2013
I found this book for FREE (thank goodness) and even with the bad reviews I picked it up, as the author had written a note stating that a corrected version had been uploaded after the first 3 reviews stated the book needed to be edited.  I can only imagine how terrible their version was as the version I downloaded was just awful, and that was supposedly the newer edited version.  The story itself was OK but the delivery of said story was just plain awful, probably the worst writing of any book I have ever read.  It read like the writing of a 3rd grader.  I feel bad at writing such a terrible review, but authors need to have their books professionally edited, no two ways about it.