Review: Good, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2013
I really liked the idea of this story, despite the editing errors. In all the disaster scenarios out there, few I've read talk about events in quite this way. Though, I was concerned our heroes seemed to still behave as though they were in a civilized society. When the grid goes down, so will society... Quickly. There will be many who aren't you stereotypical bad guys but, rather, people just trying to protect themselves... Shoot first... Assume everyone is out to get you, or take what you can for your own survival.Unfortunately, the author seemed to have allowed Microsoft do the editing. At some point the author used present tense to refer to subjects that happened in the past; like MSWord highlighted a sentence as passive voice and the solution was to switch to present tense. I found it distracting but otherwise, it was a good story.