Review: A few flaws, but a fun scifi.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2014
Review by Nic's wife.I was pleasantly surprised by the story, but there were some technical issues to the writing that I'd love to see fixed, like an over-abundance of adverbs, run-on sentences, and some issues with possessive apostrophes.The world set out definitely intrigued me, though I would love to see some science behind the mechanisms of it, since in parts it read more like a superhero story instead of a space opera. The passages of grown-ups talking about sex could be pruned back a bit, for my tastes, but for the most part the story moves fast. It was a fun read, despite its flaws.