Review: Average =5 for potential and 1 for development
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 1, 2011
This is an edgy erotic novella but could have been so much better if more developed.Interesting plotUltra Alpha malesFragile but strong female heroineInteresting world createdInteresting creatures and charactersGood actions scenesExplicit sex scenesThe novella had all the above elements but unfortunately none of the elements were fully developed.  This novella came off more of a brief outline of a good capture/Sci-Fi/erotica novel that the author never finished.