Review: A little silly but entertaining
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2013
I thought this little tale was funny. As a reallife wiccan, it obviously is fiction not like anything in real life but wouldn't that be nice lol.Like other reviewers, I am loath to ruin the surprise in this book.The one thing I would change is the beginning part where it describes the protagonist peeing, which I also noticed is a device in the coming of age story excerpted in the back. I just don't find it attractive, we all do it but I don't need to read about it. At this moment of the story the author goes into some needless details about her wiping and stuff that are a negative mark of an indie author.I'd change it, but otherwise this is a pretty good short story. I thought it was mostly funny not so much arousing.