Review: Fell way short, poorly written story for most part
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 28, 2012
I am a very avid  book reader and have been a beta reader for a couple authors. This story was sorely lacking and characters made little sense. First we have Kasie who was written as a woman firm in making sure she was no longer going to be controlled and manipulated and she is kidnapped by her former fiancée. She does not know it's him at first and does nothing but allow herself be thrown into a car with a hat over her head and tied at her neck and she makes no effort to yell, fight and get away! What an insult to women! Then she finds out it's Chay and she does nothing still? Please! She hasn't seen or spoken to this man in eight years! She makes no effort to get away when they stop at a hotel, no effort when they are at the store later, just complaining to the store owner she's been taken against her will, but let's the store owner dismiss it! And all the time in the cabin she complains but let's him get away with speaking to her with attitude when he is the one in the absolute wrong and acts like she doesn't have the right to be upset and mad. Hello?! He committed a federal offense! Not even to mention that he committed a wrong to her. And no one so much as tells him how wrong he is, just is like oh, it he's a good guy and they're sure her dad has his reasons? Pahlease! The story lacked true character and depth. It fell too short of reality. Yes it's a work of fiction, but it still needs to make sense and it is a story of real people, not an alternate world or paranormal scenario. Tis was not a well written book. Thankfully this was a free read. I would have been unhappier if I wasted money on top of time. Free doesn't mean it has to be crap writing.