Review: Great story line but needs MAJOR work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 8, 2013
I loved the story line of this book. A kid whose abusive father forces him to become a Neo Nazi, causing a huge problem when he falls in love with a black girl. I thought the story was good. It could have used a lot more details and more major character development. I think this author has promise and potential but she needs to pick up a grammar book ASAP. I'm use to a few mistakes in some of these kindle books but this book was by far the worse that I've come across as far as grammar, syntax, sentence structure, especially quotation marks. She needs to either hire an editor, learn how to write with the help of a great writing book, or take a few classes. If she does this then she will be an excellent writer. Hope the second installment is written a lot better.