Review: Not bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 2, 2014
Not bad, sort of funny at times, kind of cute. It lacked a bit of substance, and it could have used more events & goings on in between, but honestly not too shabby - I've read worse. It needed a bit more at the end to make it more complete, instead of continuing it in the next book. Overall not a bad story though, and I don't recall any editing errors at all.