Review: Not Bad, Just Okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
Well the cover is convincing, but the story not so much. The plot and character development was just barely developed enough to keep my going. The story was predictable, but most are it is how it happens that pulls us in, and this at least did that for me.Monica has run away from home and an ugliness there that was her life. In tow she brings her twin siblings Jack and Sarah who are 17. She works odd jobs and pick pockets so that they can exist. We get the impression that they are pretty impoverished yet they live in a two bedroom apartment. This just doesn't make sense to me. If you are that broke have a hard time keeping a job and can barley make your bills wouldn't you live in something smaller. Yes, I know I am being picky, but there were other things in the story that just didn't seem consistent with the circumstances that they were in at times. A back story in certain parts of the story would have been helpful for the plot and the characters.I did really like Seth he is the hot officer that is sent to investigate and catch the pick pocket. Yes, he finds her and they fall into lust/love. He is super protective and sweet with Monica and her siblings. Monica is a tough girl who is fiercely protective of her siblings, and willing to take them away from the ugly and care for them.The story was just *shoulder shrugs* Okay.