Review: good
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 4, 2011
If i were a big publisher, i would assign an editor to this and clean it up. But i am not LOL. I am a fellow writer (20 books on Amazon)I like to read, i let my kindle read this to me. Well, there are mistakes. Our friend the writer needs to proof read this and not rely on grammer and spell checker, because they are actually a writers enemy, they change the phrases and words to adhere to rules that DO NOT FIT Fantasy.With that said, This is a worthwhile read, so is the second book. i hope to see a third, i will buy it and read it.I read to be entertained and that is what this story is entertainment.I am not the grade school hall monitor so, i wont write hate trash on another authors book. Unless you have written a book (i have published 20+) you do not know how hard it really is. So be nice, say positive things and help the writer grow.