Review: Needs Editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2012
Cora leaves her two children at home to go running and is left to die after a hit and run. This book reads like a first draft. Typos and grammar and tense problems occur on almost every page. I don't want to pay for material that hasn't been properly revised and polished - I read these kinds of "rough" drafts in my writing classes. The story is extremely suspenseful and I found the two child characters both likeable and believable, but there were a lot of loose ends not well tied up.