Review: Very Short and I mean short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 20, 2012
This reads like an introduction to his world. If this had been a real book I would be raving but instead it is a short story and that leaves me feeling a little let down.Bad- Short really short- Magic is complex and even with the whole story as an introduction to it you are still left with a lot of questions and not a real understanding.Good- Characters are interesting with memorable qualities and voices.- Unique magic if really complex- World seems interesting and could be very cool- Did I mention it was shortOverall I liked the story and thought it was well written with very little typos. The characters were interesting and fun and I thought the plot although short was fun. Here is the problem he is writing another in the same world with a different main character Marc who does feature in this story. Overall again I enjoyed it but it really should of been developed into a full book then it could of glowed like gold.