Review: Not effective
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2013
In something as short as flash fiction, where every word has to count, I simply don't get the point of repeating "dark" as many times as the author does at the beginning of this story.  Once you get past the annoying repetition, you have some pretty standard description and a "twist" ending.None of it really worked for me.  It came across as something written for a school assignment.