Review: Needs editing and very little story line
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2014
First, "bellow" is shouting very loud, and "below" means underneath, they are not interchangeable.  When dealing with the word "to or too" , if you can replace the word with "also" use "too".  Yeah, so not edited which makes it difficult to read.  Also boring.  They're together, she runs away, they're together, and on and on.  Really very little story.  Could have had her run away half as much and actually finished the book instead of leaving it as a cliffhanger.