Review: Hottness
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2013
** spoiler alert **NetGalley free readGood short story. Well written and HOT! Eden is an actress with a crush on her best friend and neighbor, Jay. Who just happens to be a cop. Eden likes things a little rough and is a bit of an exhibitionist. She's scared to tell Jay how she feels about him until her friends prompt her to entice him by helping her with her lines for a part. Her lines happen to be lines she's written.Jay on the other hand has a thing for his sweet and, what he thinks, innocent neighbor Eden, from Iowa. When she asks him to run her lines with her, he's shocked an the explicit nature of the roles. But soon they are acting out their desires instead of the script.The problem is they need to communicate with each other. Jay thinks she's some innocent farm girl who needs slow loving. Where as Eden thinks they may have ruined their friendship and he will think she's a deviant.Once they are on the same page, you can only imagine what will happen.Nicely done.