Review: good MC book, but needs LOTS of editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2013
This book had a lot to love and some to hate. I first read the sample, because I have in the past just bought books from the synopsis and have thoroughly regretted it. So with that in mind I read the sample and was instantly hooked! Now I have read a shit ton of books and normally I always find a character in every book that I really cannot stand. That was definitely not a problem with this book. I loved all the characters and thought each one really added to the story. Hem, Shame, Sadey and Mace were awesome characters. Not a single one annoyed me. I could identify and sympathize with each one.This book had so much angst, suspense, some humor, romance and utter sadness. The ending was good, but it killed me, without giving away spoilers, I bawled my eyes out. I definitely recommend this book if you have loved other MC books. Hot guys, romance, suspense, humor and angst. This book has it in spades. So glad a sequel is coming! I would have given it 5stars had it been professionally edited. There are sooooo many typos, and punctuation errors, lucky for the author that i'am able to look past all of that and see a really great story. My advice for the author though is that she fork out the cash to have this edited properly, hell bribe friends if you have to and then update it on amazon. She will be doing herself a great favor.