Review: Could have been a 5 star review
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 20, 2013
I don't like serializations so I waited until the compilation was released.  I truly loved the story and the characters.  What disappointed me the most was the lack of polish this book had.  I counted 5 occasions where the author misused the word drug.  Drug is not the past tense of Drag/dragged...drug is a pharmaceutical.  People can't be drug around...there was also too many annoying instances where this author didn't know when to use Me or I.  A good beta reader would have daughter this as well as an editor.  A self published book doesn't need to come off as a craft project.  This book almost had it all, but it's difficult to take an author seriously when they haven't conquered simple grammar.