Review: Needs Work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 21, 2013
I hate that it's a serial. This story requires more background of the world they live in. It also would have been great to see how Leah ended up in prison and his reasons for doing what he did. It would have added more depth to his character.That being said, it was well written. I pitied Leah ONLY because he didn't seem to get options as conveyed by Gaius later on in the story. I can't pity him as much for other reasons since the reader doesn't know whether the actions that land him in a kinky brothel were malicious in it's intent.As for Gaius, I liked him. I would love to learn his story and am somewhat interested to see how things develop between him and Leah.Intrigued enough to read the following stories.