Review: Needs a Little Work, But Could be Really Good
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 4, 2013
I was warned by the description that this was a fairly erotic book, but I guess I wasn't ready for the entire first half of the book to be filled with sex. I do believe that sex has an appeal in some books, but in this story it was prolongued and actually interupted the telling of the story.I can't recommend this book to anyone else for that reason, and for the lack of editing as mentioned by so many others.Cut out the grinding sex, get someone to edit and format the Kindle, and you will have a very good book.