Review: Interesting concept but needs development
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2011
Reviewing the Kindle version.This is the second short story by John Carroll that I read this week.  I am a big appreciator of the short story form, especially in the SciFi genre.  There is an interesting concept in this story, but there is very little development.  The hero's resolution of his problem is glossed over in a sentence and what should have been the most interesting part of the story never happened.  Perhaps relating his adventures was 'not his job'?