Review: A fascinating murder tale
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2014
This fascinating short story of eighteen chapters totaling fifty-five pages is jam-packed with interesting characters involved in a murder mystery. The killer is Ryan who is for some reason fascinated by beautiful Tammey even though he is gay. Ryan lives with his mother who is a prostitute and a drug addict. Ryan’s mother beat him and otherwise neglected him. When he grew older, she let him stay in her house because he gave her money. Ryan made money by having sex in the streets with men.Ryan has homosexual relations with David who promised to pay him twenty dollars. When David mocked him and refused to pay, David stabbed him. Then a man who had just had sex with his mother accosted him on the street and offered him $200 for sex. Ryan agreed. But when this man mocked Ryan and made remarks about his mother Ryan stabbed him.  Now, he thought, since he had killed two people, a third wouldn’t matter, so he suffocated his third victim.Ryan then went in search of Tammey. When she saw him, she ran. She was able to reach a police station and ran into the arms of Gabriel. In contrast to the feeble-looking effeminate Ryan, Gabriel, a detective, was muscular and good looking. He was very successful in solving cases, and he was well-liked by fellow officers, although his wife had left him.It is at this point that the interesting chase begins. Gabriel is fascinated by Tammey and has sex with her. He finds that Ryan has a police record.  Gabriel is adopted and does not know who his biological parents are. Neither does Tammey. these facts complicate his search for Ryan. Readers will enjoy discovering the details about what I sketched and find out what happens next.