Review: umm ok
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2014
For a short story it was straight and to the point. I liked the no nonsense of Roni and I thought Mateo was quite alpha male. What made this story less than 5 was the believability? I was seriously doubting the emotions of the character. I felt I missing something or didn't understand what happened between them.