Review: Editing was awful
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2014
Ok so the story was fine, but very predictable.  New girl in town meets hot billionaire, they lust after each other until it comes to its natural conclusion.  The sex was ok, the flash-backs were ok, but would have been better served to have been a chapter or two in the beginning to build a plot.The editing, such as mis-used and miss-spelled words, was horrible.  Not sure if this was self published or not, but if it was, the author could have gotten someone else to proof-read it first and if a publisher put it out, I think they need to run it back through editing.