Review: Cute, short, over-priced m/m/m story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2014
Ms. Lain is a good writer and the editing of the book is excellent.  I don't remember noticing any typos or grammatical errors.  Because the story is so short, everything happens in a whirlwind - including an almost instant HEA.  While still a good story, it could have been excellent at twice the length (and the same price.)The story content is about 989 of the 1183 locations in the book - the rest is made up of table of contents and ads for other books in the series.  The 84 pages advertised includes the ads; the actual story content is about 66 pages.  At $3.99, it is way overpriced.I'm an avid reader and would buy many more books from Ms. Lain and other writers at Etopia Press if they were priced more reasonably.  The publisher is clearly more interested in revenue per book rather than increased sales volume.  That's a business decision that they make; I wish they'd choose the other route.I rate the story 3.5 to 4.0 stars, then round down to 3.0 because of value.