Review: Points off for bad editing (yup, the whole series is like this)
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 13, 2012
This book had a pretty good storyline. It kept me wanting to know what was happening next. The Characters were done very well, and I enjoyed getting to know them.What I couldn't handle was all the grammar and editing mistakes throughout the book (and the series).I can understand missing something here and there, but this was ridiculous. I read this on Kindle, and the number of mistakes made me have to stop and figure out what was really happening.Stentencest hat looke dlike this. And words being spelled one letter off that makes them into other words that do not make sense in context (example: bike-bile, not actually a book example, but similar)There were also a few inconsistencies in the storyline where a character goes and does/chooses something that could not have possibly happened because of things said earlier in the book.If it were edited better this book would have received a 3-4 star rating, but the mistakes were too distracting to make it a smooth read. I read about 150-200 Christian Fiction books per year so I understand what a book should be.