Review: Great story, needs an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 4, 2014
I enjoy supernatural romance and erotic romance novels and I could have enjoyed this so much more. Please, please, please hire a proofreader / editor. There were so many grammatical errors particularly during stressful or romantic scenes it was distracting and frankly, very irritating. And I recommend you purchase a thesaurus while you are at it.  Men, strong military men do not, absolutely do not whine or whimper, werewolf or not. Geez. And the word "moment"  OMG.  In a moment, then in the next moment, the following moment, a moment she would could never forget.  And now it's a moment I won't forget either.  Fix it and you've got a great love story.  Otherwise forget it...