Review: Five stars for the story and one star for editing/simple english knowledge.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 13, 2013
I think Amazon needs to begin using a similar rating system to the one that Audible.com uses so I could have given this story 5 stars for the plot/story and character development and 1 star for presentation.The story was very entertaining.  I was engaged and liked all the characters right away; even the villains were entertaining.  The author engaged me right away and kept me engaged throughout the book.  I am even looking forward to reading more from this author in hopes of finding out what happens to the rest of the women.The problems lies, as so many have already said, in the editing and the fact that she writes in the present tense.  This author would benefit from a basic English class as she doesn't know the difference between similar words and at times uses completely incorrect words that sound the same as what she was trying to say.  The book is also written in the present tense which is very difficult to read.  I found myself constantly translating what I was reading into what the author meant to say.  There were also very simple mistakes that even the most basic read-through by the author would have caught such as one character's name changing for about a chapter and then changing back again.  I recommend that she use beta readers if she can't find someone to proofread her books for her.I sincerely hope the author takes the time to fix the errors in this book and releases a corrected copy. The book is worth it.  For those of you, like myself, who usually pass up books with reviews stating poor editing, I recommend you try the book anyway.  The story was worth the agony of translation required.