Review: Young Adult
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2012
This was very young adult and at many times juvenile writing. Very immature and at times annoying characters. I started to like Tolan the brother of one of the main characters until he had this love at first sight with another character Julia. They went from fighting to him just grabbing her and kissing her. I think the author was trying for passion but just doesn't seem to get there. The scenes were very choppy and it didn't seem as if the author had a clear idea about the character development. The main character doesn't have anything to hold my interest. Good start for writing but definitely needs some development.