Review: Needs a better editor
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2014
The plot was decent, but a bit disjointed at times. The editing, however, left much to be desired.  Too many errors in verbiage.  Intense instead of intents, lost instead of loss, etc. Many parts seemed to be missing necessary details, while others dragged on as if the author was just writing as much filler as possible to make the book longer.