Review: Great potential, disjointed execution.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2014
There is a good story here. Beneath the repetition of the ways witch's use magic, beyond all the time driving or eating and the jumping from subjects to subject. The main characters need to be fleshed out, there is to much mystery involving every character with no development. The heroine has some very childish moments and reactions. There were a few grammatical errors but only one that pulled me out of the story. I will try the next book but if these issues are not better that will be it for me.