Review: where is an editor when you need one?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2011
I found the story and characters enjoyable, but about halfway through the book the spelling and gramatical errors became too distracting to really lose yourself in the story.  Pours instead of pores.  Articles missing from a sentence.  Avery, our heroine, is described early in the book as "petite", and a "sweet little thing".By the end of the story she's grown to 5'9".  Her hair is described as "dark", then "every shade of blonde and brown" and "honey with shades of red cherry wood".  It was almost as if someone else wrote the last half of the book, without having really read the first half.I liked the characters, and I may buy more of Ms Kern's books, but she really needs an editor!