Review: Don't bother
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 27, 2012
Not sure who did the other reviews, but it's no coincidence that two of the reviewers used an unusal expression "could not hold back outward expression".  This was obviously written by someone for whom English is a second language.  The author certainly never heard of editing, which would be even more distracting except that the writing is choppy, the grammer is inaccurate, and the vernacular just plain wrong.  On a positive note, there seemed to be a good story idea here, so perhaps it would behoove the author to pen it in his or her native tongue.