Review: Sweet Romance
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
I enjoyed the overall story but at times it seemed a bit choppy.  It seemed to jump to quickly in time from one paragraph to the next, sometimes from one sentence to the next.  And I found myself with so many questions, such as where was the 4th roommate?  And I can understand wanting to escape from home and go to school across the country to get away from those issues, but if she felt so strongly about caring for her brother, would she really go that far and just leave him in that situation?  And when he asked her about coming home to visit, there was no mention about the fact that it would be extremely difficult being a continent away.  I did enjoy the story itself, but felt it needed to be tightened up a bit.  Edited:  After giving it more thought, I've decided to edit my review a bit.