Review: Ok but needs some editing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
I would assume this is a first book.  It needs some editing.  It changed back and forth between first and third person on the same page with the same character.  Also changed characters with the "thoughts" on the same page. Was difficult to know who was suppose to be having the thought.  This pulls the reader out of the story, which tells me something is wrong with the writing itself.