Review: "Said the Spider to the Fly"
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2014
Take one 18 year old virgin, mix with rich powerful man.  What do you get?  Instant chemistry and something that feels wrong.Personally, I like my H/h to be equals in a relationship.  Unfortunately, I didn't get that here.  I got a girl who has had her self esteem stomped on.  A girl who mistakes lust for love.But the worst part of this "book" is that it ends in a cliffhanger.  While the author may call this book 1 of  a series, it is actually the opening chapters of a serialized novel.  It doesn't work as a short story.During the sex scenes I felt icky, all I could think about was this is supposed to be a successful man in his mid twenties.  He knows that the girl has no experience and nothing to compare his intense reaction to her, to me it shouted predator, predator.The following came to mind:“Will you walk into my parlour?” said the Spider to the Fly,'Tis the prettiest little parlour that ever you did spy;The way into my parlour is up a winding stair,And I've a many curious things to shew when you are there.”“Oh no, no,” said the little Fly, “to ask me is in vain,For who goes up your winding stair-can ne'er come down again.”All I could wonder over and over, was how was she going to come out of this.I don't recommend this story.