Review: Awful!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 11, 2014
Let me start by saying I like this genre.  The plot has the potential to be a good story but the author did not make that happen.  First, the book is about twin hybrid shifters who are not only grown men, but also military.  I am a mother of two boys but if I read one more time about how much they love their mommy I was going to throw up!  Every other paragraph was about how much they love their mom, how much they want her to be happy, how much they worry about her,  how much they want their mother's approval, or her forgiveness for doing NOTHING wrong! Gag!  Next, the plot was disjointed, things happening too conveniently or for no reason at all.  There was no character development, no reason for some characters to be introduced and no purpose for their existence.  Even the sex scenes were bad!  Its like they were written by an inexperienced 18 year old boy who thinks all a man has to do is give it to the woman hard and fast then she will have massive orgasims.  I managed to plod through to the end just to see if it would pick up or go anywhere, but then it just abruptly ends!  I understand and have read my share of trilogies but they usually have some kind of ending or at least a point where it makes sense to wait for the next installment.  This one just ends in the middle of a scene!  The next page is a note from the author saying that if you want to find out what happens next, buy my next book.  No thank you! Even if it were free, its not worth my time.