Review: This needs work but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 11, 2013
The plot is more or less original but the author is obviously a fan of big bang theory and Sherlock. There are some major editing errors, misuses of words and phrases as well as grammar issues. Destiny is not destination, fool proof is not full proof, noxious is not nauseous, and bit can't be used in place of bitten. It wasn't bad though and at least the characters aren't all the same, they had a little personal development. Not a bad story but please get an editor.