Review: good characters, story not too logical
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2014
I liked the main characters, both nicely masculine.  I liked the sex scenes, though one was kind of a do-over which felt a little false.  Expanding the story beyond their little microcosm would've been good.  But the story was kind of like a house of cards, individual pieces work, but the whole thing rested on underpinnings that didn't make sense.  Also, the start of the book keeps going back and forth in time, telling you there are things you don't know, but slowly stringing them out for no reason.  It is an annoying construct, which the author thankfully moves past later in the book. There are some tragic aspects to the book, which the author tries to explain given they are wolves, but I think a good editor would've been really helpful in structuring the book and making it more logical.