Review: Just Missed It
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2012
I would have loved to like this story, but it was by far too short. There was not enough detail, and the characters were not well-rounded especially Yvonne. I will admit, Zedidiah Stone was the kind of hero I like. He was rough and sexy. He knew what he wanted and wasn't afraid to get it. I couldn't understand why Yvonne felt it necessary to "practice" before she got Zed. To me, this make her sound cheap. I felt like I walked in on the middle of a story. The author left out too much information. Okay, Yvonne had been attracted to him for years. What about him? There were just too many questions left unanswered. I agree with another reviewer: I felt a little cheated for the price. This should not be $3.00. This short story should not have cost more than $1.00. The scene at the sheriff's office was hot, and I will admit that I enjoyed it. The sex scene at Yvonne's house was also good. However, this doesn't make up for the lack of substance in this story.