Review: Bit slow, and a plot rushed.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2013
I'd read somewhere that the editorial on this was a bit shoddy, and typos were a little too common for my liking. It took me only a few hours to read, but the plot didn't really go anywhere. Eden goes to school, sees colours, then finds out she's an elf. Goes to elf land, and that's about it. The plot, if I can say there is one, came to a head at the conclusion in the last few pages, and it could have been drawn out a bit more, but no.I like my stories with a little bit more gut to it.