Review: What happened?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2013
This book started out great; I started reading own my morning commute, and was so disappointed when I got to work because I had a busy day ahead and knew I wouldn't be able to continue reading until lunchtime. Lunchtime finally rolled around, and the story continued to move along nicely.  However, by the time I picked up again on my evening commute, the wheels fell all the way off; I'm still trying to figure out what happened.I liked all the characters in the story, ad the storyline was a good one.  But I just never got a feel for when Ed fell in love with Amelia. Attracted to her? Absolutely.  But in love with her? I really never saw it.  All of a sudden, he wanted to get married, after declaring he NEVER would.  And I don't want to give anything away, but I thought Amelia's request near the end was really crazy.  Speaking of crazy, as this story progressed, it seemed like the grammatical and punctuation errors also increased.  Ms. Overton, you are better than this. Please, please, please get a good editor to ensure that this isn't an issue in your future novels.I've read other books by this author and liked them all.  This book just came off as a forced, rushed attempt to get a book out, which is disappointing.