Review: So much potential, but......
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2012
The story had a lot of potential however the writing style killed it.  There was too much descriptive writing except where it was needed, the sex scenes.  The author "told" too much of the story instead of letting it develop with dialogue and events. This made it difficult for me to read.  Even with the low cost of the "Hot" series, I won't buy another story.  Too bad because I can see so much potential in this author, if she just changes her writing style.