Review: Would have been better had it been fleshed out more
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2014
A Little Bit Cupid is a novella. I don't know why most authors cannot write a good novella. They try and fit a full length story into a few pages and it just doesn't work. I started reading this one and though oh this is actually not too bad. I am enjoying it even though Cal and Phoebe are falling for each other kind of quick. Whatever I am going to go with it.Then suddenly it is Valentine's Day and Phoebe has to get her kiss to save the world. It is just like suddenly everything happens and yey! The end. I would have enjoyed the story if it would have been fleshed out and actually told. It would have been a great if it were longer instead of rushed. There is an art to telling a short story and most authors don't know how to craft it. Unfortunately this author did not have it. It started off so promising, but she tried to fit too much story into too few pages. I would still check out a full length novel by the author, but not another novella.This review was originally posted to Jen in Bookland