Review: Confusing and needs editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2013
The story started off really well and has a great premise - a magical human in a long family line of matchmakers.But there are too many inconsistencies.Amy is the latest in a long line of matchmaker, all women and all with the surname of Campbell. Given that our  patriarchal society passes surnames down the male line; does that mean that the trait is carried by the males and expressed in the daughters? I'm not a geneticist, but I don't think that's possible.Or are the Campbell women a lineage of unmarried women? Also unlikely, given historical social attitudes.Mostly, though, we have Amy going from ignorance to communing with ghosts - which is apparently not her job - with no learning curve.I got confused and fed up and gave up a third of the way into the book.