Review: 3 /12 stars.  Promising 1st Fantasy Story from this Author
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 31, 2014
Very unique world building with the heroine being somewhat snake like with no eyebrows/eyelashes and the ability to spout venom.  I question how attractive this would be, but again, give praise to the author for going out on a limb and having a truly different looking heroine.  The hero was on the neanderthal side but not without brains - he was willing to compromise to make things easier for the heroine as she did for him.  This story reminded me of King Arthur and his Round Table knights.  Even though this is a fantasy world, there was something rather believable, realistic on how their relationship built - as one would expect from two very different cultures, they don't gel as a couple right off and it requires effort and understanding from both for it to be pulled off.I did think the heroine was stupid regarding the hair cutting as it's such a small thing.  I think this is what made me take a star off, she would often become  this willful child without regard for the problems she caused for others.  I think it was supposed to come off as endearing, but when I read the epilogue and how she didn't learn from the fall (not to mention the consequences), I was disappointed to read about this TSTL action on her part.  Half star off for the grammatical errors - there were enough where I had to go back and reread a paragraph or sentence.Anyway, I think this author does show promise in writing this genre and hope she writes more.