Review: Terrible, reads like a first draft
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2014
While the story may have had some potential (two young women get mixed up with organized crime and the law after they take a briefcase from a man they accidentally killed), the execution is so lacking that it's hard to enjoy the story.  There are so many errors and typos -- at one point, a character's name is changed on the very page where he is introduced.If authors can't bother to proofread their work, they shouldn't be charging for it.