Review: Had potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 20, 2014
Very short. Actually a bit too short. While I thought the story had plenty of potential, if expanded upon, as it was, the conflict was resolved WAY too quickly. 'Hey honey, I know I've been gone for 10 years, but why don't we just pretend I never left and jump straight into the sack and live happily ever after!'. I do think that if this were novel length instead of short story length, it could have been so much better. There would have been time to actually resolve the issues without the characters seeming shallow and two dimensional.