Review: Unbiased review from real reader
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2014
This is an all-too-typical indie paranormal:  uninteresting characters, obvious plot, and lackluster writing.  The story takes place in the ordinary world with ordinary people who just happen to have special powers.  There's no world building and the characters lack personalities, so there's nothing for the reader to engage with. Ho hum. The main character is a woman with extra-special powers - now that's novel!- and the plot revolves around protecting her from enemies - again a very imaginative approach!  The writing tends to be rather simple, but at about 25% of the way in it suddenly becomes significantly error-laden.  So:  "those big brown eyes would have peaked your interest"; "the Spina know she is your friend and is probably watching her"; "The more rustic of the two [houses], trees hid its olive green timbers from view before reaching the driveway."  Oh joy.I don't think this is supposed to be teen fiction, but it sure reads as if a teen wrote it.