Review: nice to visit Maggie's Grove
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2014
But it would have been better if the writing was stronger. Commas, people. Learn to use them, or at least hire an editor who has the skill. I expect more from a published author like Bell. Also, long expository paragraphs tended to tell, not show, and were frequently repetitive. Sometimes, they were even contradictory.  While I liked Dragos, Mina was weak, and her character never felt solid. All in all, not the best.