Review: Characters good, plot a bit confusing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2013
I had high expectations.The beginning was great. I totally enjoyed the main characters. They're so obsessed with each other that I could feel the sexual tension. I liked how they were always provoking each other. What I didn't like was the way the author chose to narrate the story. It's first person point-of-view for both characters, the same events are told by both characters in different chapters. It was a bit exhausting. I know I complained many times, when I read about a single point-of-view, that I would love to know what the other character is thinking, but this is the proof I actually don't. I like to presume, I like not being exactly sure of what's going on.This choice also made the action and the plot almost seem irrelevant. I'm not exactly sure of what happened, if something happened. It all seemed pointless and it went back to the same events from a different point-of-view (and in different states of conscience), giving it a circular structure, while at least the plot should be linear. I ended up liking the characters, secondart characters, I found them funny and entertaining, but the storyline made me dizzy.I am afraid it was a failed opportunity.