Review: Not the best thing I ever read...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 11, 2013
I would have liked to see more emotion than just raw sex and at a lot of times the Dom was almost abusive to his sub. Slapping of the face when she didn't do what he wanted. That is not what BDSM should be about.If this is your sort of thing, that Is fine. I would however go back through and take note of the parts towards the end where Joss can "hear" him from behind her and she "heard" someone enter the room. She is deaf. Not possible.I did like the story behind it all and it did keep me reading until the end. I think with some editing this could be a good read.