Review: Needs EDITING!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2012
This story could have been really good, as it was my enjoyment of it was ruined by the complete lack of editing.  Spelling and grammar errors are something I am used to and can easily deal with.  This author lost track of the characters in scenes and would use the wrong names all the time.  The author was also repetitive in explaining part of the plot or background of the story.  There were several points where the reader would be informed of something and then the next paragraph, even sometimes the next sentence, the author would repeat that same information slightly reworded.  Very disappointed with the lack of regard or time spent on editing.  I did not pay for this book and I wouldn't even download it free knowing what I know now.