Review: More Detail
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2011
I just finished this story.  I guess one would say that what do you want for $2.99.  Well, if it's published, I expect it to be enjoyable (am I wishing for too much?).  I liked this book (scared you didn't I?).  There were a couple of typing errors, yet a lot less than a number of IRs I have read.  Where the heck are the proof-readers anyway?  If this was a college paper, a lot of the IRs I have read would have gotten a "D."  Okay, excuse me for getting sidetracked.  I did like this story.  I liked the characters -- especialy Brady.  I have to like the man in a love story or the story is a bust for me.  Yes he had issues, yet so did Sarah.  I think the story was well developed and flowed fairly smoothly (despite the typos).  What caused the "three stars" was the ending.  I won't give the story away (you can read the description).  I believe the story would have had more value if the author had included an epilogue.  I, as a fervent romance reader AND an aspiring author, would have so enjoyed reading "what happened next."  The story felt incomplete.  I have read a number of stories like this.  What's up with that?  I believe a love story should cross all the "Ts" and dot all the "Is" before the story states THE END.  An epilogue would have, should have, brought the story to a romantic ending.  I hope that authors who place their books on Amazon take the time to read the reviews and gleen insight into what the reader would like.  Ms. Daniels wrote a viable story, yet, I feel, it would have been better had it been more complete.