Review: Intense Beginning.  Useless End.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 26, 2011
The beginning is intense.  The capture of the Omega and his submission is seriously intense reading.  Then?  It ends.  It is as if the author spent all his/her creativity on the beginning and had nothing left over.  The book really just ends.The issue with the father?  No real settlement there.The little alpha that goes running with the omega?  When the bad guys try to kidnap the omega, suddenly the little alpha disappear.  Nothing.  Strange.The omega has no interaction with the pack, which he is supposed to nurture, etc.  Odd.And the attempted kidnapping?  Seriously?  The alpha had people all in the area doing surveillance and no one saw these guys before the omega went for a run?  ~eye roll~  And how did the kidnappers know the omega was going for a run that day?There were just so many issues like that . . . facts thrown out there with no set up.Moreover, the omega doesn't even know he is an omega or what that means.  No one seems to tell him.  He is supposed to figure it out.There is a whole paragraph about how they get to know each other.  Literally, a paragraph, showing emotional growth and falling in love.  Argh!The ending was frustrating and disappointing because the beginning was so intense.  This book needed almost an additional 50 pages just to tell the story.  As others have said, it's too short in that no true story was told.  It could have been amazing if the author had put as much attention in relationship building between the omega and the alpha and the omega and the pack.This is a story about intense sex . . . Read the first 20 pages and then stop.  The rest is unsatisfactory.  I would love to see this author rewrite this.