Review: My thoughts...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2012
I'm actually baffled by the response to this installment.  I understand griping about the cost, and, yeah, wanting it longer.  I'm not quite sure, but, if I read correctly, Sara Fawkes mentions on her blog that SMP took over and the next series will be different than these. Preferably a book instead of bitty bits???  I'm crossing my fingers!  Which led me to...Yes, I caved, and bought this installment. Somewhat spoilery, but more thoughts than what I read.  I read something about Lucy and Lucas.  I was curious, a very curious kitty.  My opinion...  Attraction, yeah, but as far as it going anywhere?  I'm thinking Lucas wouldn't do that to his brother or even Lucy for her feelings for Jeremiah.  I think he is envious of Jeremiah because he found someone like Lucy.  I actually think he intends to help him, them.  Then again, I could be wrong.  I hope I'm not.  As much as I love Lucas, I just can't help feeling Jeremiah and Lucy are better matched.  I think what is confusing is in some instances in the book when Lucas looks as Lucy: the word longing gets thrown in there, a lot.  So I'm not entirely sure where Sara is going with this.  I'm hoping its more of a 'kick in the pants' for Jeremiah to open up with his feelings regarding Lucy and not that HE wants to be with Lucy.  And like I mentioned: envy and wanting something like what he's seen with Jeremiah and Lucy.  Then again, maybe he wants her too, but doesn't feel worthy and this will be the perfect opportunity for Lucy and Lucas?  See I'm angsty with wanting to know!!!This is where I understand the lack of rating: the mention of this is the last installment was kind of like slap in the face because it ends in a way that says it's definitely not over.  But Sara clears that up and I won't be surprised if they take a different route with the 2nd part.  The sex was lacking, but the action was packing.  What's wrong with that? It was the climax of the story to some betrayals unraveling.  Not all, which is a good set up for the next book or parts to the next segment.  UGH I hope its a full blown book!  I detest bitty parts, it's too costly!Writing-wise, there were a few errors where words should have been different.  Like instead of: a, it should have been: than (or something to that effect).  Overall?  I thought it was perfectly executed.  Short, but written with a great plot in mind keeping with each part (that will now be published into a book...yeah!!!). I hope we get answers in the next (pretty PLEASE) book, not parts of a book.