Review: Great story line, needs immense amount of editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 21, 2013
I can't turn down a free book and many have the same issues. They are great story lines, but in need of a good editor to sort through the grammatical and punctual errors. I was surprised though that words like "hear" being spelled "here". Very sloppy work. Hopefully, this is a very rough draft and will soon be revised.