Review: Up & coming author
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2012
Mr. Scott does a great job of telling the story in a short & concise manner, but needs a bit of help. The writing is often choppy & disjointed, with short sentences stuck at the ends of a paragraph, almost as an after-thought, when incorporating it into the paraqraph would have been the better option. This is particularly evident in the description of the boat. He gives a smooth, flowing description, but several sentences later mentions there is a glass bottom.Clean that up, fix typos such as "by the grace og God" (which I'm sure was NOT the actual quote), and this would be much better.