Review: Good Story, Bad Editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2014
Love's LIttle Surprises was a pretty good book.  The storyline was great and the characters were pretty interesting.  However, I was sorely disappointed by the editing of this book.  I have had the pleasure of reading a few other books from EA Hunt, and I was shocked by the careless (as well as countless) grammatical errors in this book.  There were times when it seemed the storyline was completely out of order.  One moment the characters will in the present, then the next moment they were reminiscing about something that happened in the past. There was nothing indicating the transition of the storyline.  It was very confusing to understand what was happening with the story.  I felt like the story wasn't ready to be released.  As much as I enjoy reading EA Hunt's books, I would strongly encourage her to edit Love's Little Surprises, provide the readers with a little more background on  Anya, Zora, Jeri, and Jean Carlos,  then rerelease the updated version.  Again, Love's LIttle Surprises was a good book, but it has the potential to be a great book with a little more editing!!