Review: I needed more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2012
For a free short story with a bondage party type of theme, I expected more. I wanted the author to make me feel like I was there, but it didn't happen.Jane Porter was a sub who was betrayed by her former Master when she found out he was married. I was glad that she made a stand and left him instead of being his mistress/submissive. You go girl! After that she basically tortures (my use of word) herself into celibacy for an entire year! She plans and attends a party in which she hopes to find herself a new Master. Antonio Villareal was looking was struck the first moment he saw he and knew that he wasn't going to share her with anyone, unless she asked.The sex scenes were pretty hot and I enjoyed reading this story, but I don't think I will read the next one. I do recommend this short story to anyone looking to live the life of a submissive on the prowl. I wouldn't mind going to one of those bondage parties - just to watch though - not to interact.