Review: A draft of a start of a story - might be good when it is finished, and pilished.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2014
This was an interesting read, but i feel it was published prematurely. The story has a setup of a situation - our hero gets to heaven and it is NOTHINg like what he (and the reader) was expecting. Then ... To avoid spilers i'll say something dramatic happens - and the story essentially just stops. You get the feeling this whole thing (pretty short, BTW) is a teaser, to get you to read the rest of the story, or at least other stories by the same author.Sorry - this just annoyed me.The writing is decent - but you get the feeling this is still a work-in-progrss, a draft.So - if/when the writing is polished, and the story actually has a middle and an end, let me know. Until then - not very close, and certainly, no cigar.And, BTW - the quote from Pratchett at the start, IS really "as good as Pratchett". The rest - not so much.