Review: Lost Potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2014
Reading this was like reading dictation on a story arc for "what not to do" in a writing class.  The story arc itself was good and the characters were interesting, but the errors were annoying as were all the passive voice and the "telling".  I did read this to the end and regretfully it did not get better.  My suggestion is that the author go back to this story and edit it a few more times. Maybe ten more times.  Since his second book received better reviews, I am guessing his skills are growing. My advice to potential readers is to  read all the reviews here and then the sample before buying.  Luckily, my version for kindle was free.