Review: Too repetitive
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2014
This was a quick read...quick because after a bit I skipped the list of the menus...not just what they were serving, but the ingredients as well, the descriptions of the house that was being rehabbed, the description of the colors in the guest room, the description of her older sister's sex life, etc. The opening, I suppose, was filling in background for those who haven't read other books in the series, but it was too much.It also could use some grammar editing. Sometimes a comma helps the reader.