Review: Good story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2014
I loved the premise of the book but the execution was lacking. I try hard not to be too critical of any author because I admire the talent and drive it takes to write a book. But...the punctuation and grammar were horrible. I can usually overlook these things but I had to reread too many sentences to understand that there should have been a period or two added. In fact, I spent so much time correcting and repeating the revisions in my head that I couldn't fully enjoy the story. That said, the plot was wonderful. A BBW coming to understand and love herself was a great story to read. Too many women dislike the way they look so much that they overlook the many beautiful qualities they have. So YAY Jordan Silver for giving us something different and beautiful!!