Review: Fell Short
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2013
This book started out strong and I was immediately pulled into the story. But then it started to drag in the middle. By the time I got to the end, I was forcing myself to finish. The story was so dragged out that I stopped caring. I think it could have been better if the characters had been more dimensional. Especially the male lead. He was just a big, macho, military guy who occasionally quoted his relatives from the south.This writer definitely has potential. They just need to learn to portray deeper characters and how to keep the story fast-paced. I'm not sure if the author had an editor, but if they did, they should try to find a more thorough one.Again, I think this author could do very well in future books as long as they continue to educate themselves on writing. I don't think this book should have been published, but since I got it for free, I won't complain.