Review: Annoying
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 5, 2013
This book seriously pissed me off. The author, if you can even call her that, was trying too hard. While reading this I felt like she was trying to hard for her book to sound"smart". She was throwing out too many big words that normally 14 year olds would never use. It's like she was writing this story and then the dictionary vomited on it.Also the main character is terribly annoying. She only mourn for her mother for 5 seconds and then she moved on to her revenge. I did not feel connected to any of the characters on an emotional level. I also noticed that the author have 5 other parts to this story which is just a cover up to make it seem that she has written a lot. Even though this short short story was free, reading this was a waste of time...