Review: Incredibly disjointed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 21, 2012
I usually enjoy novels set in this time period. This one is incredibly disappointing. It is incredibly disjointed, reads like several pages have been ripped out of each chapter...little flow from one scene to the next. The worst two (by way of example) are the two cave scenes. Young Braeden is deciphering cave drawings....quite a bit of descriptive language, okay.And then it ends. NO TIE IN to the story line at all, past present or future.Ditto for the cave markings left by Patrick for his wife "so that she knows she is to wait there" and the ones "from the past" which he deciphers when he meets up with her.And then the book ends, literally.Hard to tell if it's just bad writing, incoherent writing, or incoherent editing. Don't spend the money, even if it's free.