Review: Great story line with mechanical writing issues
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2014
I have to give this a 3.5. The story line and characters are awesome,  but the grammatical errors and typos were very distracting.  This is an MC in the US but the phrasing and some of the words used were more European sounding. I hope Ms Lake gets a really good editor for the next book, I will be purchasing the next one as I can't wait to see what happens with Cassie and Linc. The steam in the book is excellent, it just needs heavy editing and different wording to come across as a true American culture and setting.