Review: Bwm
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2014
I think this story has good potential. if the author would have focused more on the story and less on the sex it would have been a great story, I guess it was supposed to be a short story, so that's y it felt rushed. Idk if this was suppose to be more erotic or what, but I don't think I want to read anything else