Review: Excellent story line, horrible editing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2014
The sad part about this book is that this is an amazing story. With a trusted and competent editor it will be a great book. The punctuation is horrible with incorrect usage as well as quotations either being misplaced or missing. Many misspelled words and missing words. The most annoying being at the ends of sentences. You need to get a much better editor because I haven't even mentioned the fact that there is also some cases of the wrong uses of the tense of a word i.e. was, were. I look forward to the next book and hope it is better edited.