Review: Cute, but too short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 24, 2013
Complimentary copy provided by author/publisher for an honest review.I literally read this while baking cookies this afternoon. Cute novella about former college football star-turned sports blogger Jake Dublin and the object of his desire, lawyer Sophie James (aka Elevator Girl), who happens to be moving into the same building as Jake.Jake was endearing, he seemed to have a good time with the banter with his readers, but Sophie was a bit much. She wanted to play it cool, especially given her previous relationship, but to just jump full steam ahead was a bit much. I'll admit, I didn't think that was who she was related to when it came out (I thought she was related to the Hutch dude from early in the story). The big misunderstanding was too much; how was Jake to know who she was related to?The story could have been so much if the author had developed the characters a bit more and maybe added another 2-3 chapters. Overall a cute, quick read.