Review: Was this written in an hour???
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2014
Never had I read a book with such glaring mistakes in grammar and punctuation.  If that weren't bad enough, the author (and I use this term loosely, VERY loosely)  seperates the characters POV out in sections,  but then often forgets to do so throughout the book.  I'm no perfect english major here either, but nor am I a published author and these mistakes were bad and often.Examples of horrible writing:A) In 3 short paragraphs Glazov uses  Kathleen's name in general conversation not 3, not 4 but get this-7 times!  3 of those times were in 2 sentences.B) The  "  "  was missing when a person was actually speaking, so much so, that you had to back track because you thought the character was thinking, not speaking.C) 3rd grade misspelled words....Glazov hits Kathleen's soul of her foot with a ruler....don't you mean SOLE?D) Sentence structure was wrong many MANY times.  This is an example of Glazcov's threat (and I'm not kidding here)...."I want to hurt you, if you do not obey I will hurt you".  WTH?E) Impossible sex positions....OK I TRIED to imagine this position in my head, and LOL, I can't do it.  Glazcov has her bent over a couch and while standing has his one foot pressing into her cheek while he pounds her....if this possible,  it must sure as hell be uncomfortable, and not just for her...LOLSeriously, I don't know if the 4 and 5 star ratings are friends of the author because I simply don't get it.  The story was chopped, massive time jumping ( meet, marry, pregnancy, birth) all crammed into 81 pages. Serious waste of my time and money.  Do us all a favor and rewrite this drivel, because it is seriously pathetic that you can't or won't take another hour and proof read and correct this mess you call a "book".  Real quick to charge 2.99 though.  This is the worst book I've ever read, as I don't care about a little misspelled word here or there, or even a few errors, but there were so many I just couldn't get into the story at all.  Terrible.