Review: Dont waste your time
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2013
I downloaded this book when it was free from Amazon.  There's a reason it was free, it lacks structure and editing, it's very rough.  This is NOT a romance, it is a lusty multiple sex with male or female book.  To read this story is punishment.  Don't bother.  I skipped ahead and breezed through the rest of the book confirming what my suspicisions said.  The 3-guys (Ezra, Cortez, & Aaron) were forced to rape her when she was a teen and she ended up pregnant with Ezra's child.  In essence, the story and plot could have been really great, only problem is I didn't like any of the people that were the characters.  There were no good qualities shown for any of them.  This isn't a love story by any means, it is a... train wreck.Chapter one starts off roughly.  There is a group of 4 in a meeting talking about an author, 3-women 1-man.  Then somehow in the course of the discussion, the main lady (later found out is Kat Waters) lust over one of her employees.  Gross.  I don't know how old she is but she sounds/acts like a horny teenager.  Then she accidently bumps into her boss and has similar reactions to him.  When Kat gets called out on her leering, she responds much like a non-professional.  How did she get to be a boss acting like this?  So far the office screams of sexual harassment, not somewhere I'd want to work.  I find myself not liking the main character.  Then somewhere in there is a gay man who is offended and leaves, where did he come from, because I thought there was only four in the room?Chapter two, Kat is standing in line to get into a club and mentally degrading everyone else in the line.  If none of those in line are worthy to get in, then what makes her so positive that inside is any better.  Supposedly she knows so much about the clubbing but then states she's never been to any club before.  The book is written in first POV, from Kat's view.  She sounds narcissistic describing herself:  "I...exhibit and aura of power.  I could wear a feed sack and people would stumble from my path."  Then she goes on to mock "Boss" on her being let in.  She talks a big talk to herself, but then once she's in she has to "pull up her big girl panties."  Does she have multiple personalities?Then still in chapter two she meets a dominatrix named Queen where some of the conversations are mixed between Kit & Queen and I couldn't tell who was talking.  Personally, I really don't like Kat by the time chapter two is finished.  The question at this point is, do I even want to read further?  No, I don't want to but it is a book.  Just like a train wreck, I'm powerless to not watch, or read in this case.Chapter 3, I've already figured out the EZ is Mr. Zeitler at the onset of this chapter and it is confirmed by the end of Chapter 4.  Though I don't know why he has to hide who he is unless it is to build sexual tension.  Really hard to do when I don't like any of the characters.  The only emotion shown is lust.  There is no love, desire, or respect with any of the characters.Chapter 5 - What the F?  The scene is something out of a thriller.  She's not freaked out that this man is in her home with his hand over her mouth, then inflicting pain on her?  Uh HELLO... this is psychotic behavior, not the beginning of love.  I would anticipate this guy having a deep freezer full of girls who said no.  This girl is so messed up in the head.  She is obviously not getting anything out of this the way she thinks, so why bother?