Review: Sharing Jewel
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2012
This story itself is good, but the writing needs to be cleaned up a bit more. The beginning was a little hard to get through with the alternation between Third Person and First Person Narrative and the slow pace, but I am glad I pushed through and got to the meat of the story. The flow started out bumpy, but around the middle it leveled out and was hard to put away.The reader's warning is a little extensive as this story is very much a romance with a little side of sexual activity; I was definitely expecting and wanting more. I would have liked more of a finish or at least more time with the sharing.Characters development was good, and the dialog between characters became more natural as the story progressed and at time was humorous. The sexual activity between characters was rather vanilla, but felt natural to the character's personalities."Sharing Jewel" is a good story, but could use a little cleaning up to make it great.