Review: stiff
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 27, 2013
I appreciate the effort to write something new and meaningful without giving up the raunchy sex and the humour, I really do.Unfortunately writing is rather clunky and the two leads fail to convince me as to why they like each other. Rick is also underdeveloped: he gets the POV for a couple of paragraphs in the first part but that is not enough.A revision, with the help of a good editor, could bring out what good there is in the story.