Review: Not an 'A'...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2013
Edward Coburn has created an interesting pair of psychic detectives, and plans to carry them through the alphabet (after the Airplane, Bagel Ate a Burglar, then a Crossbow, etc). I like Adam and Bagel and the other characters enough to give episode B a try, but I agree with one of the other reviewers, who commented on the repetition. Coburn's characters discuss what they're thinking, doing, eating in excruciating detail, and it just makes the story drag. The narrative sections are also often tedious. Some tighter editing would have helped. I hope the writing sparkles a bit more in the next book, otherwise, I won't make it to C....