Review: Edit please!!!!!!!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2012
Wonderful characters and plot, but difficult to read because of editing issues.  Sentences were chopped up and made reading tiring. I would have to read the beginning of a paragraph, then the second half of a sentence would show up and then I would have to skim down to find the beginning of that sentence somewhere down the page. Then try to figure out what order they were supposed to be in.  Also words cut off at the end of sent. Yep should be sentences, but it just stops mid word.