Review: Engaging writing style saves this unfinished tale.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2014
Warning - this story has no ending! It just stops mid-action leaving the poor reader hanging there wondering what the heck just happened. Wow, talk about trying to wring every penny out of the reading public -- now authors are setting us up to charge for excerpts. Ugh! So glad I got this when it was FREE - I would have been so angry to have spent money on this. The story was cute and I like this author's writing style, it's quick and quirky. So, other than the non-ending, what I didn't like is that the hero of the tale is not much more than a cardboard cutout. Since the story is told in first-person POV of the heroine, we never get to see any of hero's internal thoughts and that was a problem for me. He was just this perfect, handsome, uber-rich, mannequin. If the second part of this tale is ever offered for FREE, I'd probably read it. Otherwise, no thanks, I'm not paying for something I can read in an hour and doesn't even have an ending. Shame on Avon.