Review: I wanted to love it...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2013
I liked that, for such a short story, the author tried for character development even though the heroine was a cliche and I didn't feel that her love interest ever became "real" for me.  But I can see that the author tried and I appreciated the effort.  Also, the author obviously has a large vocabulary as she introduced, sometimes awkwardly, words that you would normally never see in a romance novel.  (Cachinnation?  I had to look that one up.).  This book could have benefited from some serious editing.  There was this big reveal about the heroine's career to her love interest - twice.  As short as this story was, you would think someone would have noticed that.In the end, this is a romance story so it is about the characters and the love and I just wasn't feeling either.  I don't feel I was cheated since it was only $2.99 but this was a purely forgettable read.