Review: It was an okay read for me
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2014
I liked the premise of the story. The characters were interesting and fun, and the plot was good. It had a fair amount of cursing and other language that I didn't appreciate, and I could have done without the sex scene, which to me detracted from the story. I skipped over that. There were also a few editing issues, which detracted from the story: the airplane "shuttered to a stop" (instead of shuddered), "you teased me mercifully" (I think she meant mercilessly or unmercifully), "his pecks" (instead of pecs). I felt it ended a bit abruptly. I thought it needed a little more to finish it off. If you're looking for a short Christmas romance, you might like this.