Review: struggled to finish
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
I struggled to finish this story.  The writing was juvenile I thought with gratuitous descriptions of sex and arousal which could have been better brought across with innuendo and allusion.  The setting for the story was beautiful and of course a nice, happily-ever-after ending is always pleasant--perhaps not realistic or probable--but pleasant.