Review: Grammar problems abound
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 27, 2012
As with the first book of the series, grammar issues come close to ruining this otherwise good book.This writer has massive difficulties with pronouns. She is constantly mixing up the use of him/himself, she/herself, he/him, she/her, and I/me.It is like hitting a brick wall when this happens, taking the reader completely out of the flow of the story.I even came across one spot where she uses grammar properly in one sentence, then in the very next one, makes a mistake in the same type of wording she just used correctly. Very frustrating.