Review: Sorry, didn't like this one ...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2014
Ms. Monroe, as I feared, I didn't enjoy a storyline centered around Jimmy Gabrini. He's only 22, his girlfriend/wife is only 23, yet he's expected to be seen to be as tough as Reno? Child, please! He is given the lead in decision making over Reno, Tommy and Sal? Sorry, it just didn't wash. Reno appeared to be a shadow of the man we've grown to know and love in this installment. It was all too much, too soon for this series. It was a little like watching a TV show that should have only lasted one season, but was stretched out over a second or even third season just to make a few bucks.Jimmy's girlfriend was supposed to see through the core of Tommy before Trina does? The book ends with Jimmy marrying her still without gaining much life experience beforehand? Tommy is attracted to her as a 23 year old when past books showed him to be more attracted to older, more attractive women? The only redeeming quality there was that maybe his therapy sessions will add more depth here. We can only hope.Again, are we still depending on Spellcheck to catch grammar, punctuation and spelling errors? Sad, for such an experienced author. With all the books this author has sold, even a college student could be paid to edit this stuff out for you! I'll say again, being readers of romance stories doesn't mean we can't  recognize when stories are well written. Also, storyboarding would help to keep eye colors, skin tones, hair textures, and body builds straight and consistent. I would have given this one star, but I didn't totally hate it ... I just expected something more from you.Please remember to keep the amount of time passing in the upcoming books for Tommy and Sal consistent with what is going on with Reno and Trina, especially if it is intended that you'll end this series with a Reno and Trina story.