Review: Great story, but . . .
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2014
Great story, What it suffers from is the writing style.  The author I think is using a free association narrative for the book or he just leaves out A, I, or We in places where they need to be.  This makes most of the sentences from the Captain's narrative feel like you must have missed something and cause you to go back and reread the sentence.  Also the use of the male title for everyone really leave wondering who is who.Where this may work in a real navel vessel it really leaves you wondering who these other characters are in a fiction novel.  I can't get to know who Mr. Garcia is when the captain calls her a him but then the write in the next line refers to o her as a her.  This really throws off the minor characters and leaves you not caring about them at all.Like other have said a very fresh story, I do love the captain, its nice to have one who is not from the James T Kirk or Honor Harrington mold.