Review: Good core, but needs help
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2013
These stories had a good storyline, but little romance, if that is what you are looking for. Also, it struck me that it could have been written by a high school age person; the writing is very choppy and in Chapter 4 of the last story, the author mixes up the names of the romantic partners, putting the wrong guy with the girl in more than one place. These stories deal more with removing someone from a cult, and non-English becoming Amish, which can be an interesting story line. I was just disappointed because the writing needed lots of proofing and much editing. Still, with practice, this writer could be good. (Note: I am not usually one to complain about the proofreading, but this one needed help. Sorry!)