Review: Good intro to M/M/F
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2013
I liked this story, but the beginning was a little hard for me to get pulled into. It felt a little forced and unbelievable, and certain things seemed to happen too quickly for my comfort, especially in the fact that there seemed an insensitivity to one of the MCs.There were some minor edits that bugged me here and there, also, but after the first 2/3s of the story, I finally was pulled in. I enjoyed the scenes with all 3 parties more so than with just two, but all the sex scenes were written pretty well. The little bit of angst put in here and there did help the story seem a bit more realistic as far as what the various parties might feel about the situation, but I can't help feeling that Josh was a little too self-involved for my comfort.The epilogue does help in making the reader believe there is an HEA, which helped me get rid of the 'squick' in the beginning that felt that there was infidelity, which is a big turn off for me. A decent read, and I will be looking at more books by this author.