Review: Needs a rewrite
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2011
There is not much I can write that isn't written in other reviews, other then the fact I don't write reviews.  In fact this is my first.  The story is indeed different.  It is indeed in need of an editor, however this has not something that has bothered me with self published titles on Amazon to this point.  I would say that while the action starts quick enough, it feels disjointed and the sequences just do not feel like they are in the right order.  The writing was to a point where I just couldn't finish it.  I think it may help the43 author to go through and restructure the story.  It feels like the writing was done without any real overall plan and not gone through afterward to check for grammar mistakes or a smooth reading story.