Review: Nah....it could have been a good solid story, but it wasn't.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2014
It wasn't a terrible story. It was free and a quick read. So it had that going for it. BUT between spelling errors (don't authors have editors and proofreaders?) and the author not knowing the difference between dawn and dusk (really) ...Oh and the entire first "chapter" never even hinted at/mentioned again (so it was pointless). Unless it comes back in part 2 (although I doubt it). Nah....it could have been a good solid story, but it wasn't. No I wouldn't suggest it.