Review: Good story, bad edit
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2013
I enjoyed the pacing of this story. There was a good underlying plot with a twist that made it enjoyable.  I would have liked it if the female MC and male MC had developed their relationship beyond insta-love only supported by physical attraction.The book also would have benefited greatly from a simple copy editor: every time the word silver was used, it was sliver. Each time the MC said, "I could get use to this," I wanted to pull my hair out. There were so many run-up sentences, my third grade teacher would have run out of red ink. With a simple grammar edit, this would be a 4-star book. Potential for 5-stars if a true literary editor could clean up the plot line and story.