Review: Evil vs. Evil (everybody is killing everybody)
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2013
The book needs a good copy editor, not for grammar/punctuation, but for content and flow. The story, although a little silly at times, is not bad. I noticed several inconsistencies that should have been addressed. The author also overused cliches and certain phases. Seemed everyone was always furrowing their brows. The most irritating thing I found was the excessive detail given to every characters' attire, body build, hair color, style, length, glasses or no glasses, shinny shoes or scuffed, even minor characters. It read like a "first" novel, which I believe it is.I picked up the first 3 in the series when they were each offered for $0.99. Hopefully the author's writing skills improved with the second book. I did see some talent. It just needs to be nurtured.