Review: Could Have Been Good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 21, 2013
This story had excellent bones but the author failed to hang the prime beef on the skeleton. The plot is intriguing but we learn little about any of the characters and the motivations seemed confusing to me. Why did she have blind sex with a "dick in the dark"? Why did any of them do what they did? Given to an author with better skills, this could be developed into an interesting piece. Any takers?