Review: Fate is GREAT!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2012
(Sorry for the bad rhyme!)*Also, I don't give much of the story away in my reviews, unless it's important. I'd rather comment on the content.*I liked this story a lot! Especially because the last few I've read were pretty bad. This is what they should have been, and failed so miserably.The writing was good and flowed very well. There were a few typos, but nothing that detracted so much that it bothered me (that's been an issue recently). It's nice to read someone that has an idea of... language, grammar, and punctuation! I'm not a perfectionist, but but when it's really bad it definitely annoys me. And the story flowed pretty well. I don't like it when the story is so choppy I can't stay in it.The Plot was good and interesting, with history about both the pack and the characters that were coming together. There were only a few places where it felt... thin, but it's only enough to mention and didn't draw much away from the main plot.The characters were also pretty well written, with backstory and good friends for depth. There weren't too many details, but enough to portray them as fairly complete people. There are some stories where I care deeply about the characters and some where I hate them because they are badly written. These characters were middle of the road - I was interested, but didn't invest too deeply in them.I think that this could be written into a complete novel, rather than novella. I think that both the plot and the characters could benefit and grow into something deeper. It definitely could be a series.