Review: It's disrespectful to fob off such poor English on customers
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 31, 2013
Some of the worst proofreading I've ever run across.  Confusion between ' its ' and ' it's '.  Even an ' its' '!  Doesn't know the difference between bail and bale.  He used bail several times then used bale a couple of pages later for the same object.  It's not an 'ultra light', it's an ultralight.  The list goes on and on.Needs an editor to keep the pacing right.  Needs a proofreader even more.  Interesting ideas for a story, but I just cannot keep reading this English class reject's writing.