Review: Good story/plot, poor grammar, crude vocabulary
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 1, 2013
Good story and plot, heavily reminiscent of Lucy Monroe's Children of the Moon series (HIGHLY recommend), set in Scotland, hundreds of years (at least) in the past. Mrs. Castle's characters could benefit from more effort and refinement, to better the overall story.Engaging an editor is definitely necessary and PLEASE tone down the foul language used to describe the sex scenes.  In this case, less is definitely better.  Every instance does not require F bombs for the reader to know what is going on.Finally, thresh out the characters a bit more to make them less two dimensional.