Review: What a waste
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 21, 2011
This had a great premis but missed! It was all over the place and because of the choppy background and dialog, it was unbelievable. Yes the characters were funny and caring , but the writing was not smooth or complete. I think this author can do better based on other stories I have read. I say take a do over on this one and make it a full length novel. Don't bother, save your money for a candy bar at walmart.