Review: Too frentic and confusing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 20, 2011
I read a lot of fantasy including romantic fantasy.  I could not get into this book at all.  I liked the concept.  While it stretched my beliefs that these 20-somethings were blackbelts AND into archery AND into sword play and  could sew and do magic...ok, I can suspend some belief to further the storyline. However, the point of view constantly changed and I had no clue who was thinking half the time. There are 4 main heroines and it  was soooo difficult to figure out whose point of view was being told. Also, the book would switch from 'she thought this' to 'I think that'....and sometimes it was the same character.  The scene constantly changed as well.  A character is shopping and next paragraph she is doing something else without any transition.  This constantly changing point of view AND constantly changing location without warning made the book just seem frentic and confusing.  To top it off, many of the sentences are awkwardly phrased and either have unnecessary commas or are missing needed commas.  This just adds to the sense of confusion.  It ends as a ciffhanger and I will not be getting the sequel.  got this for free and will delete from my kindle.