Review: That's all there was?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2014
The story line is intriguing.The characters are interesting. Amiira is approachable and lovely. While vapid and self absorbed she has an honesty that you can't help but admire.Kian however has nothing but dark hair. The author really needed to spend some time developing the main man.The author has a way with pretty prose, however it comes off as very wording because the story was so very short.With that said I really felt like it wasn't a short story so much as a sample. I didn't get enough of the plot to rush right out and buy the rest of the story.I wasn't given enough to even wonder about the lives of the characters.Not sure I would recommend until the whole thing comes out and you have a complete story.the cliff hanger was a complete let down because it felt more like a chapter break than a story wrap.Please keep writing, it can be a fantastic story... it's just not there yet.