Review: Had potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 25, 2013
This short story was so-so. The main thing is, its just way too short, and does not really ever tell you who or what "THEY" are. Sometimes it is good writing to leave something to the readers imagination, but not in this case. On the positive, it did have a couple of parts that were a bit scary, and if the writer invested a little more energy or time to it could have been a good book.