Review: 3.75 STARS FOR THE NEW AUTHOR
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2014
I believe this is a good story in many ways but I think Ms. Kidd did herself a disservice by break this story into parts.  I took away for the story and it made me feel like she didn't think she could pull off a full fledged story.  This one has many good aspects but the length of the story effected how in depth the author could get.  It somehow cheapen the story and while I bought part to and three I would have been happier if this was priced higher and made into one complete stand alone story.I like Elle Quinn and Lucas but there was just too much unexplained drama in the story that would have been better addressed in one full length story.Read and Enjoy but know that it could have been a 5 star read if the author had developed this story in a more expansive manner and instead of having to stop and then restart as I felt that part 2 and three were not stand alones without any one of the other two pieces.My advise to Ms Kidd is don't worry about selling your next story if you write a wonderful full length story that is sexy, strong and has a well developed plot you won't have to worry that they won't sell.  My advise to the readers is, be sure to give the authors your thoughts and your own feed back.  It will help them to improve and write stories you absolutely cannot put down.