Review: So much potential...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2013
The premise was interesting; the execution was poor. The editing and structure was extremely distracting and took away from the story. A beta reader and editor could have helped the author address some of the grammar and timing issues.  If you can overlook over use of dashes, run on sentences,and poor grammar the story has the potential to be engaging. The world in which werewolves and lycans have varying control over their "other" was an interesting premise that could have been delved into more deeply, but was woefully underdeveloped.