Review: Good story concept not so great writing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 24, 2013
Although I loved the concept of the story the writing towards the end of the book felt rushed and at times i was confused on what was going on or who you were seeing the event unfolding from. I think if this book is rewritten i would suggest slowing down towards the end and letting the.joutney play out instead of completely skipping the times their on earth and if the author wants to include what happened to the other travelers then add their journey to the story or make a detailed summary of their journey.