Review: Okay story, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 14, 2012
The mystery is okay, characters need more rounding out, but the biggest problem is editing. There are duplicate paragraphs, missing verbs and incorrect sentence structures all through the book. The author could benefit by using a good editor. Her story line is fine and even fun, if you weren't falling all over the errors. Too, bad. It really detracts from what would be a nice, pleasant mystery. She could also take a little time to give us more character development which would make things easier to follow and make it easier to get to know and care about the people; the leads especially. The early part of the book gets confusing.