Review: It was okay, but could have been better.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 26, 2013
The story was promising, and the characters were somewhat interesting. However, the book needs an editor due to lack of commas or commas in the wrong places, and there were random words in places where they made no sense. At times it made the book difficult to read because continuity suffered in it's story structure. The book seemed to lack the "polish" of an experienced writer. Info dump paragraphs were worded to appear as if added at the last minute instead of worked seamlessly into the story as it unfolded. It was okay for a rainy day read, but I am not personally interested in reading more in the Alpha series written by this author.