Review: Good story, abysmal editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2013
The story was captivating and compelling.  The tension between Heath, Joey, and Grant scintillating.  Unfortunately the total lack of editing forced me to reread and mentally correct almost every paragraph.  It becomes exceedingly frustrating to be in the flow of a good story only to see words are missing or incorrect pronouns.  As an example,  He watched her face as she tried to pull herself out of morass of pleasure he knew she was feeling, and focus on him.  At the moment her eyes met hers, he almost gave up.  But he needed to be sure, to know she was deciding to this and not have any regrets.  Spell check will not solve missing words or mixed up pronouns.Miss Schroeder, you have crafted a sexy story, but please have another pair of eyes check your writing before it is submitted.  Take pity on your readers.  It also seems unfair to expect payment for a book with such an abysmal lack of editing.  Since there are no half stars, I gave it 4 stars, but in truth only deserved 3 1/2.