Review: House Trap
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 17, 2011
This book has a great premise. A young girl get's locked inside a home that has a security system designed to keep intruders out. But, nothing about the security system is really meant for the intruder to be inside the house. So, when she ends up locked inside with her friends little brother and sister, she has to keep them safe from two killers.The start of the story is a little slow and I felt like it could have gotten into the action faster, but once the action started you really want to know what happens.There were a few things that deterred me from really liking this book. First off, there were multiple typos and grammatical errors. This really pulled me out of the story, especially in the beginning when it was a bit slow.The other thing that pulled me out of the story was that it would suddenly switch from one persons point of view to the next. It was confusing and I had to go back and read it over.This story has promise. I really did like the storyline and think that with some editing it could be a really great book.