Review: Started With So Much Potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2012
This story had an interesting premise, so I decided to give it a chance. By the middle of the story, I was just skimming over parts to get to the end. Paolo is basically a eunuch-lol. I'm sorry, but I'm a woman who loves her alpha males, so maybe that's why I couldn't get into the story as much as I wanted to. The plot twists with Marissa being the mayor were interesting and the fact that she was 'conservative' was an nice twist. The other positive is that this story was well written and few on errors. It was a little long in my opinion, but then again, by the middle of the story I was bored so maybe it just seemed to take forever to finish.