Review: Sweet plot line
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 30, 2014
Right, let me start with why this book is not getting a higher star rating.Firstly the book needs editing.  Content, line etc. I think especially content editing since the lack of continuity is evident.The change in POV is irritating.  It really, really distracts from the story line.Ok enough of me moaning.The story line is enchanting and holds so much promise.  Even though I think this book needs work.  I also think that if the author puts in the effort she might have a best seller on her hands here.WaAr