Review: How many times can a person be captured?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 13, 2012
Story has an interesting if not original premise. People create vampires for war and then decide to wipe them out only in typical fashion one of them gets away. The plot itself is predictable that in and of itself is not bad as long as the ride is fun. Unfortuanaly I did not find it fun more like immenesly annoying.Good:: Editing was decent with few typos.: Dialogue was good and you did not have any problems hearing their voices.: I like the new names for the creatures.Bad:: First the MC gets captured way to many times I counted 4 before I was even half way through the book, after that I quit counting. It was like the author had only one plot device and used it over and over again. It just go to be a joke I knew she would be captured and would just lay a bet with myself.: The MC is very consistent she chooses the same choice over and over again like a robot. Now that would not be bad if she made the right choice or even was clever but she is not so. It like a person who gets ambushed ever time they enter the bathroom after a while you would think they might look around the corner.:I really dislike plots that depend on the MC being stupid and this book is riddled with that. For Y to happen the MC has to be out of her mind stupid only then can that happen.: The relationships I thought were a little trite and one dimensional.OverviewI feel this book could of been really good if only the MC was given some brains and the plot was written without those huge holes. It comes down to would I recommend this book? No the feeling I had while reading was a lot of annoyance.