Review: All Inclusive in the Magic
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 10, 2013
Even though this work is a short read, the author did a great job with character development and pacing.  I found myself relating to Alissa: from her disappointment in her last relationship to trying to rediscover herself and find happiness. I found myself crushing on Bryan.  He was a delectable mix of attentive, talkative, and flirtatious.  The moments between Alissa and Bryan, at times, took on the vibe of two awkward teenagers:  interested in each other but trying to find ways to go about it without being overly pushy.  I found it very delightful to watch.  The author was more deliberate in terms of dialogue, and I felt like I was part of the scene.The erotic part of this write had a more sensual flow.  The connection between Bryan and Alissa definitely displayed potential for an ongoing romance.  I enjoyed being a fly on the wall as all the fully described passion blossomed.Extended review can be found on The Review Board:  [...]