Review: No plot?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2014
This short story seemed to have quite a bit of filler in it, and I'm wondering if that's because it meanders in search of a plot.  I realize it's supposed to be a prequel, but I still think there should be a developed story arc.I'm kind of surprised that other reviewers have not mentioned the cover.  It does not look professional to me.  I thought the vague large item just above the woman's shoulder was a computer on a desk.  It wasn't until the end of the story that I realized what it was supposed to be.I borrowed this via the new Kindle Unlimited program and am really pleased with this new service.