Review: Cute Story, Needs Editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 6, 2012
3.5 stars. This is a cute story with likeable characters who pretty much carried the plot for me. It had some glaring typographical errors, which minor editing would have caught and fixed. The biggest of which was the use of Bruce's assistant's name before she was actually introduced, and another on the very first page that made the sentence not make sense. The plot itself was predictable, but this did not detract from the fun of the story. However, some of the Christian elements, though fundamentally correct and not particularly distracting, came across as a bit cheesy. In particular, praying for a biker who wants forgiveness outside the hospital. Though I'm sure that could happen, it did not sound like a biker trait. Overall, a good short read that I enjoyed.