Review: It had a chance to be great but fell apart.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 27, 2013
Too broad and not enough information. The story jumps about too much. While the main story and characters have a chance to be really something special, the author is too vague and at times drives us away into other parts of the story without reason. It ended too abruptly, and while this is supposed to be something of the author's geneology and family history, it could have been so much more richer and loveable. It had a chance to be great but fell apart.