Review: Interesting plot but needs a lot more work on plot, character and delivery to keep it from falling flat
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 26, 2013
This story/series needed a lot more work before releasing.Characters are flat, one dimensional because there is not enough character development -- main character's inner dialogue was almost nonexistent, nonverbal expression in dialogue that brings us closer to feelings of characters and gives context was totally missing. Plot is annoyingly repetitious, meandering for action/romance--one thing does not lead to another necessarily. I only read this entire series as an exercise to better understand what brings a story to life --and what things can kill an interesting concept! Desperately needs major revising to bring this up to par--DOA and flat!