Review: A "Too" Star for Creativity
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2014
As already noted by several reviewers, the book was filled with grammatical errors, as well as almost a complete lack of adherence to normal formatting rules for structuring new paragraphs.  Sentences having nothing to do with one another blended into each other so routinely that you had to read them 2 or more times to "place" where the action being described was actually occurring.  Then, there were the repetitive "sex scenes" - which so overused the "c_ck" word - that I felt sure the story (given its other shortcomings) must have been written by a teenager.My "too" star rating (as opposed to what maybe should have been a one-star rating) of the book is due primarily to (1) the somewhat novel subject-matter of the book, (2) the accuracy of my review title in illustrating the book's grammar problems would not have worked with a "one".