Review: Crappy delivery, could've really been something
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2014
I know I said I was NOT going to be bothered with another one of these but thanks to boredom and unlimited reads I figured what the hell. I think I finally figured out what's wrong with this series, the author is just not a good story teller when it comes to putting it on paper. It's like she writes and as she goes she has an after thought, plugs it in then tries to keep going. That has to be the reason the story is all over the place all the time, since book one.For instance in this Dinero and Kym getting married but she was already married. We don't find any of this out until different parts of the book when it shouldn't even have been brought up. The whole Olivia thing and all these kids but no one but Killia knows until it's too late.Is is just me that's read that Ali is supposed to be an FBI agent? I don't think the author understands that at some point they have to go to actual work even if they're crooked or not. How is it that they didn't know that these people had been related when Ali is supposed to be so high up as an agent that he never goes in unless he wants to? I mean if Dinero did a check on Nya and found things out how is it that Ali couldn't?I think the author just doesn't know how to sequence the events so they make since when someone reads them. What the hell was the point in going to Columbia? Where did Deuce go? What dumb crap was that about the reason Kym didn't speak up or take her son and mom when she could? Even if Nya is bipolar it still doesn't explain a ton of stuff that was going on and if she's bipolar then surely Killia is.Like I said if this wasn't free I wouldn't have spent .99 on this and I damn sure wouldn't have spent no 6.99 on it. Someone really needs to help the author gather her thoughts because I'm starting to think maybe she's suffering from something. Just reading these I feel like I'm scatter brained myself. Such a waste of good material, if only the author could put it together right.