Review: Warrior's of Darkness
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2014
The story and concept was very good. Interesting. Could be a really good series using the other characters for their own stories. But.... Ms Roth needs to work on her characters a lot more. There were times while reading this book that I just wanted to stop reading it and just start reading another story. I had a hard time forcing myself to continue reading this book. I hate it when authors have the potential of having a great story, only to ruin it by making the H/h stupid. Make them think, say or do something completely out of character for them, for how the author set them up to be. I spent a good portion of my time while reading this, rolling my eyes and shaking my head. It is so aggravating...frustrating to sit down and start reading a book, really starting to enjoy the story, when the H/h start to ruin the story by opening their mouth. Or, the author puts them in a completely ridiculous situation that leaves the reader feeling annoyed...appalled...disgusted. Example. How on earth could the author possibly think that writing a scene where the H/h are in a room with their grandmother, grandfather and a few friends, after a fighting scene, hug each other (not a problem), start to kiss each other (still not a problem), end up with the hero on top of the heroine, her  unbuttoning and pushing down his pants, past his butt and then grabbing his penis and stroking him while he starts bringing up her skirt?  And then the grandmother smacks him on his butt while making ridiculous comments to the grandfather (one being that she would like to see the hero turn over so that she could she his penis in order to compare it to what the hero's grandfather's penis would look like) all while the heroine continues to stroke him off as she is laughing.I was thankful that this scene was almost towards the end of the book, because if it had been towards the beginning or middle of the story I would have stopped reading it at that point. Throughout this story, while reading it...and enjoying portions of it, it seems that the author would seem to just loose her mind or think she was being funny or something and have the H/h behave or say something out of character for them - as shown from the above example mentioned.This was a difficult book to review because I did enjoy the work she built and the story itself. I just couldn't stand the H/h most of the time. Which is too bad, they could have been made into a great kick butt team.