Review: Cute story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2014
This was a fun little story told in a distinctive voice. The characters were well thought out and dimensional, and you can't help but laugh at almost everything DeeDee says. Great dialog!My only real problem with the book was the constant need to interpret continuity problems. There were numerous places where it appeared that the book might have originally be written in third person and not all instances were changed to first person--confusing!--as well as problems keeping the days straight, and with other issues. All of which should have been caught by an editor.So, as much as I liked it, it was really just a draft and needs some more polish.