Review: A very short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 15, 2011
I thought this was a book and was disappointed when I reached the end  after 15 minutes of reading. This could be a good book if the author would fill it up and make a decent plot and develop the characters.The way it is now as a story I do not see the point of it . Things are mixed up as if she sat down and just made her thoughts into sentences and then decided this was a story.  I do not see the point of this unless you want to read a very short story.  I gave it two stars as there was potential to a good story .I was given a complimentary copy to review.