Review: This is just okay...if you figure it out
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2011
I have to admit that when the strange things started happening to Tony in the kitchen when he went to get the other bottle of wine, from there on out I had no idea what was going on. No clue what caused this event or if it was temporary or a permanent state.  Not enough was explained, and who Brian was and where Brian came from remained a mystery.I almost gave up on this one, but I kept reading to see what happened in the end and if it explained everything.  Sorry to say that it didn't.  The ending wasn't that satisfying, but neither was the rest of the story.The story was suspenseful, and I have to give credit for that.  It moved very quickly, and at times, too quickly, but I think that's better than reading something that is way too slow.  It seems like the author's basic idea for the story was good and was there, but taking that idea and working it toward a satisfying middle and end didn't work quite right.However, it is a scary and suspenseful short story.