Review: Good story, horrible editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2012
The story line was fine, but the editing was horrific.  Does anyone read these books before they are epublished.  One review complained about excessive commas, but that wasn't nearly as distracting as the wrong word use througout the book.  I couldn't figure out if it was bad grammar or horrible typos.