Review: Not bad for a freebie
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2013
The basis for the plot was the protagonists desire for revenge upon the family that had him impressed into the Royal Navy. This plot gets lost fairly quickly which makes the Baron not a believable character. One would think that with all the hardships suffered for so many years, the revenge motive would have been more thoroughly developed. Many parts of the story seemed to also not fit the time period because of the author's use of dialogue wholly inappropriate to that era, especially in English Aristocracy. The text would also benefit from a much more thorough editing. The many, many errors distracted from what would have been an enjoybale story line.