Review: Could have done more editing but it's still an enjoyable read!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2013
***3.5 Blakk and Wine-filled Stars!!!***I would like to be honest and say that I am quite torn on whether to rate this a little lower than my 3.5 stars. So, I've decided to start my review on the not-so-good parts for me before I go and share what I liked about it.Why and what didn't work for me?Let me count the ways:- Grammatical errors- Also punctuation marks use (or lack of it)- Most of the time, I find it hard to follow who's speaking and thinking what.It's hard to keep up when I'm having difficulties reading who said what. At first, it was okay but after a while, I was already getting distracted and I keep on pausing for a second to look back and see who among the characters is speaking. Or flinching. Or shouting. Or smiling. Etc. Aside from the missing commas, it can also use some better paragraphing.Now that the bad parts are out of the way…I liked the story!I enjoyed Lukas and Lexi's first meeting and the museum "date". Their love story was dreamy, romantic, intense, hot, and cute but also with insecurities and problems like what Lexi has and what caused their "break-up". I liked how Lukas was protective, loving, caring, and how he wants to provide for Lexi to the point where (view spoiler) which was too much for her to accept and caused her to hurt more than anything.As much as My Most Precious One made me smile, it also made me sad and I appreciate that this book was able to make me feel both. I like how a book can stir not just one emotion from me because when I only feel one thing while reading it, most likely, I am not enjoying. And this one made me feel different emotions.I just hope that there was more to the ending. I just felt like the last couple of chapters after their problem were missing something, like it was sort of rushed or cut out certain parts instead which made it seemed rushed. At least for me.For a free read, this is worth a try! - I got this as *free* on Amazon.