Review: Good Sci-fi D/s story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2014
I enjoyed this story.  This is about Amanda and her two mates, Roman and Julian.  They are identical twins and ancient Trian warriors.  Amanda has just moved into this new house and she is feeling nervous about being alone.  She goes outside to check the grounds and sees her neighbors, Katrina and Haydn in a discipline session.  It was very hot, but it just didn’t feel like it fit in with the rest of the story.  Later, Julian and Roman rescue her from another Trian male that wants to mate her and then punish her for not asking for help.  Again, very hot, but she had no idea.  It seemed a little too farfetched.  After punishing her, they now are examining her and getting her body ready for her conversion to Trian.  Those exam scenes, the enema, the diapering are very hot.  I really enjoyed it.  Now, I would really like to have some back story about the Trian race.  It would have helped a lot.  I would also like to have a longer story.  58 pages is just too short.  I give this book 4 stars.