Review: Teaser
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 7, 2013
This author shamelessly markets his work throughout the book. This is a creative tactic, but tiresome. I would like to read future books based on the merit of the book I'm reading. That said, I still want to read the next book because this one ends with a huge cliffhanger. There are so many story lines. As big as DMV is, the reality that everyone would be so intertwined is a little far-fetched. The erotic writing was good enough that it kept my interest. Some of it was overdone but that's okay. The book could have used some editing because unless a conversation was going on between the characters the sentences were long, in need of commas, and somewhat hard to follow. There were also typos that were bothersome but seem to be prevalent in e-books today.