Review: Plot logic fails at time
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2014
I really wanted to like this book more than I did.  Eva was a really well-crafted character - broken from her mother walking out on her family, strong because the father who loved her made her that way.  Ben was also a really well crafted character - he had a clear code that he lived by and he stuck to it.  Hence the plot problem - Ben would always choose the MC club over Eva, so where is the deep and profound love?The typos and editing problems were quite distracting as well.  I almost stopped reading it about 20% in because the story was difficult to follow because of the errors.  But I stuck with it and found that the overall story was good.Net, the overall plot was good, the characters were well done - if the author got an editor - or even a friend - to review the work before she published, she could have had a 4 star book.