Review: So many mixed feelings
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2013
First I have to repeat what many have alredy said: THE .99 CENT EDITION IS JUST A PREVIEW. I like short stories but I also want them to be complete. I think there's a glith because the kindle said there was plenty left in he book until suddeny the progress just shot up at one point.  There is a second edition for 2.99 that I assume is the full thing.As for the story itself:Pros: Hot and steamy with funny dilogue and just kind of ridiculous in a good way.Cons: Not well written and lmost seems like a teenger wrote it. Also the characters are all trashy and the main girl is a complete skank. In a weird way though it al becomes ridiculous in an entertaining way.Not sure if I'l buy the whole thing. I feel a little put off that the description tried to say it-s a short story when it's really jut a part of a story. Also while I'm not a grammar nazi the book had enough errors to be distracting even if it was entertaining.