Review: Predictable and plain
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
I found this whole series very predictable. The author draws from already done stories like Star Trek and a few others. The story was pretty good up until the pyramids were found. At that point I really was getting bored with the old paradoxical story ending. When things go wrong for the good guys in a space military story just pull out the go back through time card and fix it all.Also I found the books or episodes riddled with typos or just plain grammatical mistakes. I could tell when the proofing was done by computer because, for anything at this length the proofing programs are all flawed. This is why I think all books should actually be proof read by a person or team BEFORE the book is published. The way many authors or publishers handle this now days is just plain lazy. I won't read any more books from this author.On a side note; I used a Kindle Fire HD to write this review and the systems proofing is the worst I has seen. Microsoft and even Apple do it way better. As you can probably tell I actually proof read this review because I knew I would make lots of mistakes. The Kindle keyboard is the worst.