Review: Where's the rest?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 27, 2011
This was a very good story.  BUT, and that's a very big 'but' and also the reason I only gave 1 star is that it reads like a Sample story you'd get off one of the other e-books on Amazon.  At first I thought it was one because it didn't finish, but it is in the right category.  This is all you get folks.The story mentions some paranormal abilities that the Heroine has, but you never actually see them in use.  The end just drops off and you're never quite sure what happened to the other characters except for the mention that everyone arrived safely.  In the very last paragraph the Heroine receives a letter and you can see she's surprised, but you never know what's in the letter, or anything else.  It ends here.There is a note at the end that tells the reader that the Hero and Heroine have other stories written about them, but if they all end like this I'm mot going to bother.  Especially if I have to pay for them.