Review: Let Me Explain...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
Ok, let me start by saying that the first book was amazing and I read it within a few hrs. There were a few grammatical errors but nothing that took you away from the actual storyline (of the first book). However, I sincerely cannot say the same for the second book I found myself filling in too many incomplete sentences and noticing too many words used in the wrong tense. There is no way that this book was looked over by an editor. I was even disappointed by the storyline I was so confused as to what was going on. There were to many POVs going on, the year jumps came out of nowhere, and misused grammar and punctuation marks. To me it seems like the book was submitted at the last minute giving no time for editing. I honestly had to stop reading about half way through I couldn't finish it. I had hoped for this book to be so much better.