Review: Too Short!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 2, 2013
I've picked up a couple of Charlie Richard's stories and enjoy them.  They are well plotted, great characters, and a nice spin on paranormal romance.What I don't like is the cost.  $4.00 for 70 pages?I can download authors that are auto buys for a lot less and am guaranteed an excellent read.  For instance The Wolvers Series are all around $4.00 and each book is over 350 pages, the last one out recently is 400 pages.  So yeah when I'm picking a book to read I want a decent price in comparison to what others are offering.I'm writing this review to let the author know a few problems I had with the marking/mating scene.  A moose has blunt teeth they don't have canines as predators do.  So when I read that Noah's canine's lengthened, being a moose shifter, if his mouth partially shifter for the marking bite, his teeth would have been blunt.  He's an herbivore.  So yes his canines could have lengthened but if your in keeping with shifters and their animal, Noah still can bite him, as a human would, but it'd be a difficult blunt teeth bite.  That whole scene was shoved together oddly.  The switch from Noah to Adam during this scene and back and forth had one or the other in a position / licking / holding where they couldn't be doing what they're doing.  It wasn't physically possible.  So either the names were jumbled or the author was daydreaming.  More than one smex scene was like that.I didn't expect those types of mistakes this far into a series.I don't like books this short that cost that much.  So much promise in these stories and while it's delivered, it could be even more wonderful being expanded.  Or even continue on with Adam and Noah and move on to Noah's sister and the moose Alpha to tell their story.  -- Dan's Wife