Review: short and disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 31, 2012
This little novella, or short story, is fair for an hour's entertainment, but not much more. It has one sex scene, not too much to write home about , and hardly any character development, but that's a common problem with short stories. The issue that Hartwell faces, the stutter that made him the victim of his father's bullying and his consequent withdrawal from society as a way of dealing with his insecurity, is fairly realistic and could have been developed into a good story. It seems that the only reason for this story was to get to the little erotic scene and even that's kind of disappointing.