Review: So...I bought the whole thing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 17, 2012
I was intrigued by the story idea and the draw of a good yaoi story. Most of the reviews were positive, so I went ahead and bought the first chapter, and bought all the other chapters afterwards. Was it worth it? Well, not exactly. I'm a bit angry at myself for paying about $20 for the entire thing. You shouldn't sell stuff like this in just short chapters, and I do feel like its overpriced for what I consider to be a okay yaoi story. It was an enjoyable read, however the character development was disappointing and I felt as though besides our two main characters and Brainbox, the rest of the characters were dull and not needed. The story itself is incredibly weak, and for what I payed for this I expected a lot more. Also, I was a bit upset to see that there was quite a lot of cussing in this. Now I know that yes, some people do cuss a lot, and maybe to some people it would add to the story. However I felt like a lot of it took away from the story. The sex scenes in this were honestly the best bit of this.The fact is though, I wouldn't tell someone to buy all of this. If you've got money to spare, and you want a slightly enjoyable read, then go ahead and buy this. But honestly, I would recommend something with a lot more substance to you and not this drivel.