Review: A great story But needs proofreading
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 10, 2013
The storyline is very believable and the author made sure there was plenty of visualization.  My biggest complaint was the grammatical errors and poor punctuation.  I had to reread some parts, figure out what a "torch" was, and sometimes there was too much of a good thing.  By that I mean she gave too much of a description that did not need to be so lengthy, ie board rooms & the furnishings.  I really enjoyed this book and hope others can still enjoy it as long as the proofreading errors can be overlooked.