Review: Good story, technical skills need work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 25, 2014
I really liked this story and the characters.  I want to read more from this author, and hopefully read more from these characters.  that being said, the grammar and technical writing skills are atrocious.  if these things are critical for you to enjoy a book then do not choose this one.  if the story is what you are looking for and you can overlook the rest, then you will enjoy this.fortunately, writing skill can be learned and improved while the story creating often cannot.