Review: Could have been a good story but
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2014
if this author ever just writes a story,a full story mind you, it'll be dynamite. instead she wastes her considerable talent writing just enough of her great story idea to hold together the sex scenes. I really wish she'd just write the story. Fill in more about the characters and develop the Tory more. She has the talent and she has great characters. I believe she has wonderful stories to tell. Now it's time to kick it up a notch.