Review: Too many loose ends
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2011
I thought this story would be a short clean read but found that there were too many factors brought in which only muddied the story and didn't make me want to read a second 'book'.  It had an interesting premise but didn't explore anything in any depth and felt more like the first chapter of a book not a stand alone short story.This author could certainly produce a good quality novel with some editing assistance, the writing was fairly smooth and easy to read and the characters (at least initially) were fleshed out reasonably well.I'll wait and see what else she produces before I scratch her of my authors list.