Review: It was ok, could have been a lot better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 24, 2013
This book was ok, a solid 3 star. I liked it, but I didn't love it. I thought Rhee was a little unrealistic as a character, mainly due to her naiveté and the constant blushing! No way an MC guy would put up with all of that, even if he did like her innocence. I also found the story too wordy. Why did it take such long sentences to describe something Dax/Rhee was feeling or seeing? I thought a little bit more editing would have improved the story's flow. And my only other gripe (apart from the cliffhanger ending) was some of the language that was used. Turgid? Spurt? Oh lordy, I couldn't stop giggling when I read those during the hot and heavy scenes. I'm hoping the next book in the series is a little better than this one.