Review: wish there had been more of a plot...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 30, 2013
I like good sex in a good book, but there has to be a plot... I want to see character development, growth, I want something to happen, a twist or turn maybe, a struggle besides those that have little more to do with sex. This book has very little if any plot, and even the sex was sparse, not sure why another review said it was porn as actual sex was far and in between. The writing was not error riddled, it was easy to read, and flowed okay, but I'm not sure I appreciated how she labeled each persons POV before going on, that got annoying after awhile. For .99 it was okay. I got bored several times reading about, coffee, exercise, Hong Kong, banking, psychology... blah blah blah.It could have been a better book had there been some kind of plot, had something actually happened to produce questions of, "what happened?" or "who?" or at least "why?" And the characters where hard to get a grip on... a little shallow. It took me a few days to flip through 70 pages...