Review: Has some talent
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 24, 2013
The sex was good. There was a problem with the 1st person narrative. From time to time the author changed POV and went first person in the husband's viewpoint. This was confusing because I didn't know whose POV I was looking from. She needs to figure out how to do that better so the reader doesn't get confused. I also have a problem with keeping secrets in a BDSM relationship. A real Dom would know his wife - but what the heck. It's a story. Having said all that I think the author has real potential.