Review: A Different Opinion
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
I was excited to read this book based off of the reviews so I am disheartened to write that I did not care for the book.  The book was all over the place and I could not get used to the style of writing.  I was also annoyed with the fact that the author used tenses (past, present, future) incorrectly.  You have to write in a consistent tense in books or it can ruin a book.The love affair between Carter and Nathan was super fast which took me by surprise that within seconds/minutes of their first face to face meeting as adults, they were making out and professing their love for one another.  Also, why did intimate moments that were between Carter and Nathan have to be shared with his friends?  And although Carter was a bad ass killing machine, she was way too nave to think that Kyle was not that into her and would openly cuddle with him.Pros:It was cool that Carter was a bad assLiked the fact that they met as kids and then later as adultsCons:The author needs an editor that needs to assist in helping her pick a consistent tense to use in the bookNathan and Carter's love affair seemed too inauthentic because it moved too fastNeeds to have a better flow to the story