Review: More editing needed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 19, 2012
This book is a good idea that didn't get nearly enough editing. The writing is disjointed, and occasionally it skips around so much it's difficult to follow the action. I would've given it 4 stars based on the story (nothing too original, but not too stale either), but the time-skips are just too much to put up with.