Review: I wanted to like this book....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 7, 2013
The premise for this book is great! The problem with this book is the grammatical errors! It literally made trying  to read this book almost impossible. If you are an author you should know the proper way to your the word "seen". I am not an author, but I know that "seen" is used in the phrase of "have seen" every time I SAW the word "seen" I wanted to red line and write "saw". The use of "anyways" and "besides" is also a bit much. The issues with the grammar made it almost impossible to read. After reading reviews of other books by this author, her grammar is her biggest issue! Again, I think the premise of the book is very good. The story of Taylor & Damien seemed a little rushed and possibly been expanded upon. I think the explanation of Taylor's husband passing seemed almost like an afterthought once Damien was introduced. Maybe if the book is edited I will try and finish, I just felt like I was trying to reD a book by someone who is a great storyteller, with very poor writing skills. An editor will do you wonders.