Review: If this were my life, I'd commit suicide!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 24, 2013
First the writing.  While not many grammatical errors, the writing was extremely stiff.  At times it felt like I was reading a text book on being a rich man's mistress.  There is not a hint of passion in this writing--imagine Ben Stein narrating.Second the story.  This book is all about money.  He can control me if he gives me gifts and then life is wonderful.  He can give me a curfew and I'm okay with that so long as he gives me something with a really well known name tag and a high price tag.  And that's the first half of the book.  The second half of the book, the author randomly throws numbers out for what everything costs.  $65,000 per night for a hotel.  $120 million dollar home.Here comes spoilers...if you can spoil something that is worthless except for a time waster.The male lead changes mid book.  The second male lead, Julian, kidnaps the female lead, Cheryl, because he is rich, belongs to a secret society, and wants her.  Then he insists she will fall in love with him, and proceeds to control her every move to the point where she can't even have a clock.  I found this funny because he gave her an IPhone, but she continues to complain about not knowing the time.  She finally gives in and has sex with him and suddenly it's love.  It had nothing to do with the $12 mil he transferred into her bank account.End of spoilers.