Review: I like the story & characters
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2014
I started this series because the blurb was interesting. Who DOESN'T love a cowboy?  The story was good, but it needs editing. Some of it is the grammar, but mostly it is the changes in wording.  Some sentences are double--they started as one way and the author decided wording needed changed, but some of the original sentence was left in the line.  The other problem I had was the story changing from the author's point of view to the character's point of view. Again, it was like the author started one way, deleted, worded everything another, but missed a few parts to delete.  I thought this was maybe a first book and went to the website.  Now I understand the way the book reads, but I felt beat over the head as to the explanation.  I'm not a grammar Nazi, but point of view and grammar are important for storyline flow.  I'm not reviewing a book as I read it, I'm falling into the author's story and world, losing myself in the characters, etc.  When it's disrupted because editing needed to be a little better, it breaks the concentration and enjoyment.THAT BEING POSTED: It will NOT stop me from completing the series "Love Wears A Stetson".  what I did notice was the novella included in Wyatt's book "Match Made in Heaven" was written and edited better, so it flowed more naturally.  There's still a few of the same issues as typed above, but I want to read the next book.  I am checking availability and prices after this review.Please do not give up writing, you have good stories.  Please check into someone else editing.  I am posting a request for volunteer editors or editing services that can help an author. Anyone?  Any direction?Good Luck and I will be buying your works. also, Amazon offers customers a free replacement of books already purchased if the author has edits/corrections made to a story.  This also keeps buyers/readers up-to-date and happy.I found two new series and a new author to read-Thank you for your talent and work and it will all improve with experience and time. Hang in there and keep writing!!