Review: Great story, not presented well
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2013
The story concept was good, but several things keep this from being great..The story is broken into 4 very small sections, as if the author was trying to emulate Stephen King's Green Mile concept. This kept the story from flowing as it should. The entire set makes for an average sized novel - and should have been put together as such. The author jumps from time to time, without the good flow of a proper conceived flashback. Then frequently repeats entire paragraphs word for word as if the reader would not remember something that which they just read 5 or 10 pages before. I read the whole set, and as I said, this could be a great zombie story with a surprise ending. But it would need to be completely rewritten in a flowing time line with only a few flashbacks to complete the surprise at the end.