Review: A decent story...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2013
I did enjoy this story.  There were minor grammatical errors such as switching from first person to third person particularly at the beginning of the story.  There were missing words and in one instance I could not decipher an entire sentence because words were missing.  I also am confused as to what happened to Samantha's parents.  She references that they fought a lot but nothing more.  Then alexander comments that it must have been difficult again in reference to her parents.  I'm not sure what he means.  Did her parents divorce or die?  Was he simply referencing that they fought?  If so how would he know that?  Samantha was a temp.  Even if he did a background check on her he wouldn't have details like that about her parents.  While I did enjoy the story I would have liked a more in depth development of the characters.  They seem too one dimensional.  For a quick entertaining summer read this is well worth reading.  But if I had to pay for it I would have felt that I was cheated because the story and characters needed more development.