Review: Not the author's best
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2014
I agree with another reviewer, this would have been a more interesting story if the focus had been on another couple.Other reasons for such a low rating:- when books are priced north of $7, I have expectations of better editing.  This book had numerous errors where I had to pause and rethink what was being conveyed- there were several TSTL moments with all the characters.  There are pack members whom they know are currently being tortured and they even say aloud "we've gotta move" and then they have 3-4 extraneous conversations that delay their rescue.  If the conversations had been about rescuing the pack members, then okay, but that isn't the case.- Diskant was depicted as a lousy Omega.  He isn't fit for leadership if he can't balance his family life with his Omega responsibilities.  His protectiveness with Ava was too much.  Also I really disliked how easily he and Trey gave up so easily on trying to rescue Nathan - what kind of leadership/pack loyalty is that?  I realize this was an opportunity to show Leigh coming into her own, but the lack of support by the Alpha & Omega was just "huh?"- I thought Cade was unbelievably naive in thinking he could protect Destiny, after he saw what she could do.  His gun is like a pea shooter compared to her power- the book was a rinse repeat of shifters arguing about not leaving their mates, then sex- the book ends on a cliffhangerBased on the strength of the author's other books in this series, I'll get the next one (hopefully it's cheaper) and hope with a new couple, the story improves.