Review: Great idea, poor grammer
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 25, 2012
I really enjoyed this imaginative retelling of old fairy tales and that gives them a new and interesting update.  This being said, I am an English major and a published author so grammatical errors really get me.  There were many errors such as improper verb tenses, missing punctuation, missed words, etc.  But all in all, I enjoyed the story.  Very creative and keeps your attention.  Just not easy if you trip over errors and feel the need to correct them.