Review: Great story, exciting new author (for me), outstanding potential - beware of the the editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2014
The story is excellent but the editing is not.  I would have given it only three stars because of the numerous editing and grammatical mistakes but I found out that Amazon does not sell the latest version of these stories.  I heard from another author (who I had graded poorly because of editing) that they had submitted a new version a couple of months before but Amazon did not use that version; Amazon used the old version.  Enough of that -  just know that there are many, many editing mistakes in this book.  Also beware that the automatic update feature on Kindle does not work consistently.The editing aside, this is a great book and clearly the author has done his homework on or spent time in the military.  I thoroughly enjoyed his historical references as well as his characters.  I will eagerly wait for the next book but only because I must.  If I could purchase it right now, I would.  This should be a part of anyone's collection.