Review: Poking myself in the eye with an ice pick would have been less painful
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2013
This book is atrocious.I have all sorts of snide comments I would like to make  about this book but I'm going to assume it was written by a human being and will try to he nice.First off, this book reads like a 16 year old girl wrote this. The dialogue is incredibly immature and incongruent with the characters supposedly being in their late 20s.  They swear much than necessary and definitely much more than any good Texas man (over the age of 21) would ever think of in front of a lady.  Good news for the author: you will get older and probably mature in which case you will stop writing dialogue like a uteenage girl.Secondly the authors goes into long listing details about surroundings and the way characters look. Every character introduced with a bio attached: he was 6'2" with dark hair and gorgeous green eyes.  Or: the kitchen had a Wolfe range with sub zero refrigerator and wolf built in appliances with cream coloured cabinets and tan granite.  Okay, I'm paraphrasing here but Please don't make me go back into the book to get a word for word quote.Thirdly, the author couldn't keep the book in the same tense and changes from present to past tense from paragraph to paragraph.I could go on about problems with character development and ridiculous force  plot lines but why bother.Even at free don't waste your time.Final note to the author, please find someone more objective to screen your next book.