Review: Seriously?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2012
I got to say I am astounded by the positive reviews for this book. They are completely opposite of my thoughts regarding this story. I have so many complaints I don't know where to start but I will boil it down to the fundamentals: essentially I thought the writing style was immature and delivery of the plot was 3rd rate. But I had pegged it to this being the first book of a first time author, and thus forgiveable as surely her writing style will grow as she continues on her writing career. But this isn't her first book; there was no indication that this was the SECOND book in a series. So what I was willing to forgive before I am less inclined to do so now. It was PAiNFuL for me to finish this book, it was so poorly put together. I couldn't connect with any of the characters; they were one-dimensional and superficial. I especially did not care for the heroine. She started out fine but seriously degraded towards the end of the book. She was built up to be this bad-ass but she seemed more like a wimp. Perhaps being the all powerful savior/ruler of whatever was too overwhelming and she couldn't handle it. There's no crime in that, but say it, don't imply it.  Clearly self-published (not a problem) with little editing (problem! Big problem!). And then there were the usual run-on sentences and grammatical errors (I can live with those though it does detract from the overall experience) that completed the wrongness of this story.After seeing all the positive reviews I did go back and try to see what they were all saying but I just couldn't do it. I can't see it. I am very glad this was a free book for me; if I had to pay I would have been so mad because it's not worth paying for.