Review: Good writing but..
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2011
The writing is decent but both guys are kind of boring and their romance progress is kind of dull, without much going on. I am fine if they take it slow as I dread instant love and sex. But more emotional conflicts and "meat" in the plot is needed. Maybe this would have been a better read if it is a shorter story. The best part of the story is one of the guy's past which brought a tear to my eyes when he visited his ex. The ex turned up to be the most interesting character even if this tragic figure only appeared in 1 chapter.I too find myself irritated with the 5 year old Beth taking up so much of the story with "daddy this..daddy that.." and really contributes nothing much to the plot. Do I care what the kid is eating or doing or when she sleeps or wishes to go to the park? No I don't. Don't get me wrong. I love to read about children provided he plays an important role like one very adorable 9 year old named Kid inBear, Otter, and the Kidor when it is the protagonist himself.Still I will watch out for this writer because she does write well.