Review: Poorly executed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2014
What am I not getting here?We have two people who audition for a new pay per view reality series called Dom Wars.  They both think they're doms.  They both have tragic issues in their pasts (why are all the BDSM books like this??) and there's instalove while they participate in this show.This is part of a multi-part series.  There's an ending, but not an HEA.  Not exactly a suspenseful cliffhanger.So many issues.  First, the formatting for Kindle is HORRIFIC.  That, combined with poor grammar, lack of punctuation and unclear sentences/phrases and it was difficult to pick up what was happening or who was speaking.  It's lazy!  Also, this switches POV which made it difficult to keep up.  This may have been better executed under one POV, Lucian's.... Speaking of which...so Lucian Bane is the author, and the main character of the book??  This is questionable on so many levels.Lucian is the WORST DOM IN THE ENTIRE WORLD.  Good lord. There better be a plot twist coming up that explains this crap.The concept was interesting, the execution not so much.