Review: Plot good; writing awful
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2011
The plot line would make for a great short story.  Interesting locale with pertinent historical references added.  However, it is a sad time when I start counting the words in one sentence! I got up to 82 words!!!  In one sentence.  The stilted language was so distracting that I gave up.  It is obvious there she had no editor, as even a grammar school teacher would have red-penned the life out of it.  Give us more of the well formulated characters and less pretentious wording.