Review: wow, interesting take on an old story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 12 4, 2012
First off... pay someone to edit this book and re-release it. Second... re-release it. Great story. Well written if you use the syntax clues to get the meaning of the writer. I rarely write reviews because I feel that my own opinion is never truly valued and I would much rather communicate directly with the author.  However, in order to get the rest of the trilogy, I am making sure all can see my thoughts. Some reviewers like to bash authors on grammar and other errors, I simply want to make sure that the author knows that Microsoft Word's spelling and grammar check, just don't work. If you are looking for a good read about a old story, this is it. I picked this book up for free through Amazon and I truly was surprised.  I liked the plot lines and interpersonal communication between the characters.  I think a little less inner dialogue might be better, but that's my personal choice.  I like the flashback scenes. Rarely do they come together well, but this is a great first try.  Most authors use flash backs in the beginning of the story and finish the second half in the current time frame. I would stick to that if I was going to write the second book. I have high hopes for this author and I would compare him to others like  Randolph Lalonde, Nick Smith, and Mike Smith or even Mike Resnick.  Please write faster and take the time to pay for edit ting and formatting.  Those will in no doubt raise the level of writing into the stars. Keep at it, please and I will be sure to look for this budding writer in the future, with high hopes.