Review: Didn't buy based on sample chapters and here is why
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 10, 2013
The story looked intriguing so I tried out the sample chapters for this book.  I enjoyed the start where Morgan was trying to escape the castle.  However, once it got to the scene with her dastardly uncle, I couldn't possibly keep up.  You would read his words and thoughts, then jump to whichever character he was talking to for a sentence to see his thoughts, then back to the uncle for a couple sentences and thoughts, then to the next character in the room with their thoughts.  It got to the point when every other sentence was someone else's thoughts and was really irritating.  Here's an example:"Welcome home, Lord Brentwood," his housekeeper spoke, yet started at his sudden return.  Darcy was thankful for having spent those extra hours cleaning his chamber in spite of the fact it was her usual day for resting.Brentwood smiled sadistically, feeding off her fear.  She was afraid of him.  Everyone was afraid of him.Too much head hopping for me.  I felt like I was at a tennis match.  If you don't mind this kind of writing, the story might be good.  Just not for me.