Review: Painful
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2014
One reviewer compared this novel to a Nascar wreck...maybe not quite that bad, but it was impossible for me to read.  I made it through 15% and just quit.  I won't repeat some of the other glaring issues pointed out because there is no point.  Misused words, attitude about women and how they would behave while under the stain of the world being assaulted by nature, ugh.  Yes, I'm sure crawling off for a one night stand with a survivalist is on my list of the first thing I want to do....if the world was ending.The story premise is not bad but editing could make it a lot stronger and more readable.  My suggestion is to listen to the book read.  The errors will jump out.  Conversation is conversation.  Women are multi-dimensional and not just walking plastic dolls.  Cops don't make suggestions about love lives....unless they are friends or you're getting beat up.Just too many problems with this book for me to continue.  Sorry