Review: ... from Book 1 to 2 and that is the poor editing. It is frustrating reading something where you ...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 4, 2014
One thing is consistent from Book 1 to 2 and that is the poor editing. It is frustrating reading something where you have to keep re-reading or do a self-edit (takes forever) - I started highlighting the errors and found 30 so I stopped counting. The story line is good (at least it was not as drawn out as the book 1). A bit annoyed with the references to everyone's nick and abbreviated names - often times then named used in reference to someone was so confusing (come one there are six sisters). I do love the camaraderie, conflict and closeness of the sisters - this is really the saving grace to this series for me.