Review: Can't wait for part 2
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2012
I can't for part 2. I want to see what happens to Brittany, Derek and Dune. I liked the story. It was well written for a short story. It got straight to the point. Now Brittany I liked. She was devoted to her man. She believe in him and trust to a certain point. I felt she was naive to things and allowed Dune to play her for a fool. There were so many clues that he was cheating but she turned to a blind eye to it. I wish had a chance to stand up for herself and tell Derek off. Now Charity is a back stabbing ho. What she did to her cousin was low. She should have put her cousin first. Blood is thicker than water. A man can come and go but family will always be their. Derek is a dog straight up!!!! He had a good woman. He clearly did not appreciate Brittany and took advantage of her. He did not love her the way she need to be loved. I hope in part 2 she gets to confront him and tell him off. Now Dune why??? Did you have to kill her? Dune was a good man and friend. He tried to talk to Derek. He tried to get his friend to end his doggish ways but to no avail. He put the screws to Derek but stuff like comes back to you. He wants to built this life with Brittany but it's based on a lie. Brittany is angry and hurt. A man that she loved and was going to be her husband and a cousin who was more of sister betrayed her in the worst way. He took advantage of that. He clearly did. I can't for part 2 to dropped. Let's Go!!!