Review: Ok little story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 27, 2013
This was ok. I got it for free. I think maybe it's a first effort for the author or an early work?  Some things are inaccurate for the time period but  I'm willing to overlook those things in a work of fiction.  Still, the girls had no chaperones and just went out alone. She ends up overnight at his house and no one goes to get her. Girls did not just stay out all night back then.The big error for me was the author skipped over the hero falling in love. I enjoyed the best friend, enjoyed the butler, and enjoyed the hero and heroine. Good bones but the author could have given the hero a few more scenes to build upon his supposed love. It went from him not even knowing her to having sex. We are supposed to believe he fell in love when they spent no time together and had one conversation?  Then they have sex for no reason that is story driven and lust is love.....when  he didn't even lust for her before?  Author had good set up for short story, and really explained the heroines feelings but we never get to see the hero's develop.