Review: Deadly Choice
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 16, 2013
I really liked the plot and characters of this book.  The ending punched me right between the eyes (and what saved it from a 3 star rating).  My problem with this book and what all the 5 star reviewers neglected to bring up was the editing.  Wrong words were used: new instead of knew (which any author should know), where instead of were.  There are more but I won't list them all.  Also, ending sentences with ? when it clearly should be a period, all the extra commas that had no business being there and the sentences that were not complete sentences.  I think this guy has GREAT potential as an author and I will check out more books by him because, as I said, I did like this story.  My advice to you Mr. Bradley is ask some friends (who will give you an honest opinion) to read your books and give you help proofreading.  Another alternative is to advertise for Beta readers after you create an author page.  It sucks to keep being pulled out of a story because of errors and interrupts a person's reading experience.