Review: Story is good, but ending lacks...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2014
I really liked this story. Having a good friend who suffers with endometriosis I could relate with the story fairly well. I know the struggle that goes into getting pregnant.The story itself was good and the characters were well rounded. But I felt the ending was rushed.They fought their attraction.Then they fight against their obvious love for one another.Then all of a sudden he's building a float and asking her to marry?It felt like a wham bam thank you, about face, that I thought maybe a little bit more depth into would have been nice.I did LOVE the whole betting pool. The idea of it was pretty neat (though far fetched that an entire town would be in on it). As soon as I knew someone had taken St. Patty's day I knew that was the day it was going to happen... so that was no surprise either.I AM looking forward to Hawk's story though. I really hope Rebecca puts A LOT of depth into Hawk, because he has such wonderful potential.