Review: Train wreck
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 14, 2014
Ok, this book, is a train wreck. First. It needs an editor that does more than spell check. There are wrong words throughout the whole book, so it reads stilted! For example, My name is Hanah, and most would see me as an average CAUSATION female? huh? There's a lot of this through out the book. Simple fix, would read much better.Second, it's so short and abrupt, the reader is left wondering WTF. I understand cliff hangers are a huge part of selling the next book, but for me, it didn't leave me wanting more. I felt more like, Meh, whatever. I mean, I certainly would never pay $2.99 for 29 pages! That's outrageous. Maybe the author should consider their pricing too. Maybe 99 cents...? But not $2.99. The book isn't worth that!