Review: This one...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 3, 2014
...didn't hold my attention as much as the first one I read...And I didn't quite understand why there were two different versions of the same story...Nonetheless, there were way more grammatical errors, typos and such in this one...And I found that some sentences didn't make much sense and/or just didn't belong. I definitely felt like this book wasn't as fine tuned as the first one...although I'm really not sure which was the first one written or which one was supposed to have been read first. Was there an order between the two?Ms. Giovanni disappointed me with this one...it just didn't flow right...it really needed some work and I felt like re-vamping it..just to hone in on my craft...I'm still a great fan though...I already know what Ms. Giovanni can do, so one book isn't gonna spoil my views about her writing skills, not yet anyway...*I'm not being picky here...I just feel like if you're gonna review something, you have to tell the good and the bad. People don't mind gushing about a fantastic read; going on and on about what they liked. Well, I feel that the same should go if one had the opposite feeling, without of course being nasty/catty. (I hope that's not the impression I left on this review). A synopsis tells briefly what the book is about so there's no need for me to go over that; My job is to say how I feel about what I'm reviewing and that's what I do...So please don't shoot the messenger. Thanks*Your 'Soulful' Reviewer~Soulful~