Review: incomplete
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 7, 2012
This short story is supposedly part of a yet to be published serial. It seems related to another work by the same authorMayan Nightswith which it shares two characters (leads there, sides here) but it is not clear how the story will move forward.Based on the supposedly Mayan prophecy about the world ending in December 2012 it is a realistic but not depressing read.Writing is professional, the plot reasonably tight, characterization accurate enough. Narrative tension is there and the M/M romance element is relevant and pleasing enough.Yet it is hard to escape the feeling of having read a fragment which is not self contained, as if this were part of a much longer book torn from its binding.