Review: 1st party characterization.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 19, 2013
Why cheapen a story by using 1st party character writing. It makes it difficult for me, to read. I see this a lot in inexperienced writing and know to avoid it because I usually wind up disappointed with the story in the end. Just saying, and it's only my opinion. We know how that goes.  So there.