Review: Fetching little short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 27, 2012
Wonderful imagery of a natural setting with mood. Author has a way of bringing both setting and characters together to put them into high relief without getting wordy about it. I like his style and attention to detail. He approaches his subject like an artist painting a picture for you. I don't like the title; it needs to be more cryptic instead of pointing out the obvious and spoiling it before one even reads the first sentence. Let the reader awaken more slowly to that conclusion.