Review: Hilariously bad
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2013
How could anyone ever guess that showing up at a woman's workplace every day for a month and staring at her while she worked would prove unnerving?  Our male main has some explaining to do after he totally freaks out the female main with his oh-so-normal courting behavior.  Fortunately, he's mega-rich and ready to do anything to show her how he feels about her (not to mention those breasts).  Plus, he totally did something unforgivable in the past and pretty much has to sleep with her to keep something unspecified and horrible from happening to her.  What threat is she facing?  Pay more and find out!The writing here is terrible in an epic way.  At one point, we're told that the male main gets his hair cut at a salon that is famous for receiving several positive reviews from a magazine that few people had heard of and even fewer read.  What kind of fame is that?Ross seems to feel that a love story needs a lush and lavish tone that doesn't match the way actual humans talk.  It is extremely distracting.  I'm sure that those readers who go on to buy the rest of the story will find out what is threatening the female main, why she was so dreadfully poor and unable to have more than six articles of clothing, what kind of supernatural being the male main is, and more details about how much he digs her breasts.As for me, I was laughing too hard to get too involved in any of these questions.