Review: unfulfilled promise
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
This wa an interesting plot idea, and some of the action inside and outside of the bed was fun but there were a few things that, for me, stopped this being a really good book.First off there were a lot of typos. So many that it was distracting and the miss placed words really broke the flow of readingSecondly the lead character Paris suddenly seems to change her character completely - without real explanation. While you can conclude why this may be the case - it felt like the author just did not know how to address itFinally there seems to be bits missing. A character was possibly injured/possibly not after a confrontation - but it's unclear. What did the characters look like - again it's unclear. Something happened in the big end action scene to mine character - what is unclearThe series has promise but this feels like it needed editing