Review: Felt like two books and two authors
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 20, 2014
The first half of the book was really good. As advertised, however, there were some minor spelling, grammar, and tense errors- which is more of an editorial and publishing error really-.  But sometimes it was a little distracting.The first half was on target and I felt like the story was moving smoothly. On the last half, things sort of fell apart. Characters were all over the place and I was left feeling like I wasn't even reading the same book.Nelly was likeable, but Sadie turned into a real hag. She loved him deeply but anytime she didn't get her way, she hated him. She acted like a spoiled brat and became very un-likeable.Also, Sadie was supposed to read a certain bible verse every night before bed, and she only did it once and it was referred to only one other time. For some reason that inconsistency bothered me.I think if the book would have flowed in the second half as well as it did in the first half, I would have enjoyed it much better.