Review: cute story, fast read, needs an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2012
The typos in this story were terrible, misspelled, misused, bad punctuation.  I know no one's perfect, and I'm sure my opinions have typos as well, but some of the typos were just weird, like they weren't even words so spell check should have caught them.The story is cute.  The hero is a bit annoying and cowardly, but the story is still cute.  The names made me wonder as well.  Bill Williams, is that William Williams?  and then Carrie Carlton?  Oh well, at least they were Bill and Carrie through most of the story.