Review: not great
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2014
This is the second book I have read by this author and my criticisms are the same.  The grammar is terrible. The tense and person changes within the same paragraph at times and the scenes jump without any warning or build up.  It makes it very hard to follow the story.  I also feel that there are too many characters too keep up with and the story and characters should be more developed.  The way the characters are described and their actions, more so the parents than anything, do not coincide either. I wanted to enjoy the story, because it does seem to have a good story line going, but it needs some work and a good editor.  I feel like it was rushed and too many ideas were trying to be placed in one book.  I really hated the ending and hate when books end this way.  There are way too many unanswered questions and it's a build up to lead to nothing.  I think it short changes the reader just to have them purchase another book.