Review: The story idea was better than the execution
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2013
There were a lot of typos in this book, enough to be constantly distracted by them.  The writing style didn't quite work.  The dialogue seemed kind of stilted to me.Leah was pretty annoying.  A drama queen who constantly overreacted.  She was always running away when something happened.  When she mentioned that she was more mature than most girls her age I LOL'd!  Not true at all.Chase was completely perfect to the point of being unbelievable.  I really think any 22 year old guy would cut his losses over all the girlfriend drama.  Especially when that girlfriend comes with a kid in tow.It seemed rather convenient that Leah always had an available babysitter, and it made Caleb seem more like a plot point than an actual character.It seemed rather rushed and some important parts were kind of glossed over, like the situation with Leah's mom.It does end on a cliffhanger, but the sequel is out.