Review: Good Book but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 11, 2013
I thought this was a good book. The characters are developed, good story line, and entertaining. However, I don't know if it was the author or the editing but the use of commas was limited; semicolons, colons, and hyphens were non-existent. The worse thing about this book was the use of the incorrect "mines" instead of the correct "mine". I would be reading interesting dialog then the word "mines" would be in the paragraph ruining the dialog! Only once in the book was the word "mine" used correctly. One more thing: twins of opposite sex aren't identical. They only come because of the presence of two eggs. Identical twins come from one egg and share the exact DNA which does not allow for twins of the opposite sex.I would have given the book five stars if it weren't for these mistakes.