Review: Hmmm?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2013
Where do I start with this book, I wanted it to be so much better then it was. The downfall of the story was  sentencing structure and the major grammar flaws, I found myself rereading the same sentencing trying to figure out  what they are trying to say. I couldn't  tell if the story was to be in first, second, or third person I was just baffled at times while reading. I got so frustrated I just wanted to get the story over with. The poor editing really took a lot way from this story, and that's disappointing because It had so much potential. The story transitions had me confused throughout, I found myself trying to figure out where we at and what's going on.With that being said I thought the story was great when I got through unscrambbling sentences. There was no shortage of drama and kept you wanting to know what was going to happen next. I enjoyed both sisters stories although they made a lot of mistakes I still like their characters. I loved Alonzo because he really loved Arie. I wanted to like Tee but he made it really hard with the way he handled Carmen and Maya. Overall I thought this was good book and would have  been great if the author just went back through and edited a lot, some of the mistakes I cam across was to hard for anyone to miss, it really took away from the book. I'm still looking for to part 2 and can't wait to find out what happens in Carmens and Aries life.