Review: Good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2013
I enjoyed the story very much, but found some things that I think need to be addressed.First off, I'm not a fan of the way Beau and Libby meet. It's just so weird-yes a reason was given that he basically feared for her safety but come on! No one at the party had even tried anything. Needless to say Beau way overstepped the boundaries there.Secondly, a major theme in the story is that Libby has a pretty severe eating disorder and although it is mentioned many times, we do not see her seek help or come to a resolution. I think this issue being the main climatic point in the story would have made for a much better, more realistic plot and storyline.Lastly, I know that Libby really found a connection she was missing with her aunt and also wanted to be close to Beau. But, and this is a big but, a community college (or an AA) is no replacement for a university (or a bachelor's degree) and I just wish Libby had opted for the school that was best for HER and not just the one to appease Beau's fears.Aside from those 3  issues I liked the story and specially Libby. Yes she is flawed but that just makes her real. And same goes for most the other characters. Magan Vernon I hope you consider to address some of these issues in the sequel.  Thanks for a good story. Very glad you're writing a sequel.