Review: Why must authors short change us in novellas?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 11, 2013
I have read quite a few freebie novellas. Just because it's short doesn't mean you rush. And if it feels like it's rushed, flesh it out a little more. There's no harm in that.This book was rushed throughout the whole thing. I didn't connect with the characters and you didn't get a reason why Laila acts the way she does until almost at the end. Their feelings go from lust to love after one bout of sex. There wasn't anything truly realistic in this novella because of the rushing. Another 15-20 pages would have added just that little bit more and gotten it a 3-4 star rating.