Review: Interesting but cut short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2012
The reviews of this story intrigued me so I decided to give it a try. For the length, the characters are fairly well defined, and many of the scenes are short so it covers a decent amount of time.As for the general storyline, I was left concerned for the mental well-being of the main character. The scene where she worried about doing everything exactly like her mother-in-law to the last scene where she's more concerned about having baby Daniel to herself than protecting him by giving him safety of a father just screams either unstable or ridiculously selfish. I simply cannot imagine where this has a good outcome for either the mother or the baby.