Review: Good plot but the execution was strangely lacking
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2014
Good plot but the execution was strangely lacking. This was an entertaining read but it lacked the polish I depth I expect from an experienced writer. The plot was intriguing so I was willing to over look some of the bumps along the way and read it through to the end. The 'hads' really drove me nuts in the first two chapters.Tonight, she HAD been fortunate to come across a small convoy of Trivators. They HAD set up a ration station almost tem blocks away. She HAD grabbed a box that HAD been dropped as they unloaded supplies into one of the distribution centers they HAD set up for the humans like her who refused to trust them. She HAD found other packages before and ... She HAD disappeared...The first couple chapters went on this way. I found it really distracting. The book felt a bit rushed to me and I wish the author would have taken more time to show me things instead of telling me what HAD happened.