Review: Unbelievable
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2013
It's written well, but there is no real story here.  There are no relateable characters or character you should care about.  The protagonist, Logan, is not even described well.  There are no reasons for his actions.  No motivation explained.Why Logan would even begin the process of looking for the granddaughter, especially when the girl's grandfather won't tell him the full story?  Even his own father keeps the truth from him saying he promised his old friend  . . yet forcing his son to go into a dangerous situation with little information.  Why is Logan's father willing for risk his son?  Why does he value the friendship of the girl's grandfather over his own son, especially after someone dies?After several people die Logan's father doesn't seem to have any concern for him.  After Logan is taken to jail, again so little concern despite Logan doing this favor for his father.  It was a very odd relationship and could not be the reason why Logan begins the search.And the investigation?  Completely unrealistic.  Logan begins to look for the granddaughter but he's never met her and is not given a photo of her.  He knows how to pick a lock.  Why?  What is in his background that gives him any experience to investigate?  The author does not tell us.He jumps on a plane with less than 24 hour notice and goes to a foreign country to investigate.  No plane reservations.  No passport.  No visa.  No plans.  No real connection.  Just jump on the plane.  He'll figure it out when he get there, and of course he does.  He's SUPERMAN.  ~eye roll~It's an unrealistic story with a protagonist that remains unknown but who has amazing skills out of this world.  I am willing to suspend belief to read fiction, but not this far.  Well written but beyond that, there is no real story there.