Review: Good Plot - Needs Editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2014
This has an admirable heroine, an Army nurse in WWII. Her adventures and risks are interesting and I would have preferred more about them. Her two romances take up too much of the book and are often trivial. A thorough, experienced edit would have deleted a lot of this material and moved the plot forward. I skipped a lot of this. Also, the text has too many errors in punctuation, missing words, and paragraph formatting.