Review: Really rough
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 20, 2013
This is the first installment in a serial story (it has at least two more parts).  We are introduced to Tiffany, a girl of indeterminate age (at the very end of this part, we find out that she is seventeen).  What does she look like?  Where does she live?  We never find out, as the author doesn't bother to tell us.  We do know that her brother is mean to her.  Her father returns home unexpectedly and he receives a scolding.  And then her father invites her to an unwordly school where she will study with representives from all "five worlds" and meet her (multiple) soulmates.  Is this information surprising to Tiffany?  Did she know there were other worlds?  We don't know, as the author doesn't bother to tell us.  What do the other species look like (other than being totally beautiful, having great eyes, and looking exactly like girls but being boys)?  We don't know, as the author doesn't bother to tell us.The author seems to be setting the stage for a multi-species free-for-all with Tiffany's body as the playing field once Tiffany, her best friend, and her family make it to the "training ground."  It fades out at this point, so I imagine Tiffany and her totally-female-looking-but-totally-male soulmates have all sorts of adventures, Tiffany's brother continues to get what he deserves for being a big meaniehead, and Tiffany continues to just Mary-Sue the heck out of us.The writing is extremely rough in this story.  Basic grammatical principles are completely ignored and the dialogue is beyond stilted (I really should have known, as there is at least one word spelled wrong in the item description).  Strip everything else away and what you appear to have is a basic wish fulfillment story about a young girl being special and desired, a plot that is easy to find in books that are better written and provide better value for the dollar.