Review: Good Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2014
This is my first story by Ms. Baeli.  I was impressed with the writing and tried to overlook a few typos.  "Rain Falls" was witty and had enough substance.  I compliment Ms. Baeli because it was an entertaining plot.  There is one observation - why was India so detached from everyone?  Yes, the disappearance and presumed death of her father was a huge factor but the story indicated she was always cold and unfeeling even as a child.  What happened to make her withdraw from humanity?  Tegan was a kind and caring soul and was neglected by the person that should have been her fiercest protector.  Her mother was a cruel and vicious woman, to bad Ms. Baeli didn't see fit to included a paragraph were the mother received her "just rewards"!  I look forward to reading more of this author's work.  Notwithstanding my praise, I guess fellow reviewer, Jakbak, (February 18, 2014) and I picked up on the author's message about "There are some cheap-ass MF's out there", referring to people that return ebooks to Amazon for refunds.  I take exception to this because the author forgets that there are circumstances for every action.  I have purchased over 420 ebooks (and can prove it!) from Amazon and have returned three.  One because it was actually purchased by mistake; one because I relied on the "five stars" people gave it and assumed the reviewers were truthful - only to begin reading and noticing six grammatical and typos in the first two pages!; one because, I assume, the author was being deceptive and claimed it was a sequel to a prior story.  With the exception of a few added new sentences the story was almost word for word like the prior story.  So, the stones Ms. Baeli threw out in her story didn't even grazed me, but may I suggest leaving personal messages for an otherwise adequate venue.  3.5 Stars