Review: A spoiler or two...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2013
This story is a historical romance between James and Sheamas. I am not crazy about the m/m relationships in past times due to hypocrisy and prejudices. The was a good story and you can fall in love with these men. I didn't like that the story kept jumping. Here they make love for the first time and Sheamas is scared because he has always been raped and  was always painful for him . The next chapter begins and its a month later and their a couple. We should have grown in love with them through that month. She did this in the beginning as well. We never get to see the meet face to face that first time. They notice each other at a ball and he goes to live with some stranger that he does not know is the same as the man he was attracted to. Key elements to establish depth in your couple is their First Meeting and their Reactions to the other and the process of Making Love and the Falling in Love. You really can not skip those. Poor Sheamas goes three months of torture and no one helps him, I mean come no one goes secretly to get help until a ten year old tells them to. If this was rewritten with the Key elements then it would rate a 5 star.