Review: Disappointing and Bad Character Development
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2012
This book was a major disappointment for anyone who has read any of my reviews I truly try to support the self published authors but I feel like a few of them out there have a bad habit of not reading their work before they publish it.I have a few issues with this book.First off I don't know if this author has ever read a romance novel- the choice in words to describe the love scenes are simply cringe worthy I hate the word crotch especially in what was meant to be a romantic part in the book.Second the punctuation is irritating. Not all sentence need to end in an exclamation point and trust me probably 85% of the sentences end with an exclamation, not everything can be that exciting! Lol--super frustrating.Third I didn't really feel the love at all and Jessica is a bad main character and really unrealistic- whose first question to a stranger is "how much do you pull in per annum?" I mean really? Come on.There were too many irritating things to mention I think the story it's self had potential but it completely missed the mark.