Review: not tempting
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2012
This book started out Ok.  I'm down with liking someone you think you can't have. But,  my support began to wane right after the first time he callled her "baby girl."  Ick. That'sonly OK if the person is a girl and/or if she is your daughter.  To say it during sex when the woman is 16? years younger than you is double Ick.  I also didn't like how quickly he put her out. After all of his claims of love, he couldn't be bothered to spend some time trying to figure out where she was coming from all of a sudden?  All of the "baby girls" and the poor excuse for a separation just ruined the story for me.  But, on a positive note, there were very few editing issues-no major grammar and spelling mistakes.  Is it asking too much to want a good story with good editing instead of getting one or the other?