Review: Undercover Submissive
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2012
Undercover Submissive had an interesting story line that was well developed and the characters were developed to make an enjoyable story. It was a fantasy of what a true BDSM relationship that is built on trust and communication could be, but not a true BDSM fully developed relationship. Of course they just met and went off on this crazy adventure to rescue the twin sister, so maybe in a sequel the relationship could be developed properly. The suspense of finding the sister, the evil man who has her and the escape added an element of mystery and suspense. The roller coaster ups and downs of emotions of both main characters added to the story too.The number of grammar errors was high and it really needs a good edit. As a retired teacher with more student papers corrected over the years than I want to think about, this is so obvious to me. I did not lower the star count for it because the right editor can fix it easily. The quality of the writing was excellent and it is a shame that the author does not get her work properly edited. She has great potential as a writer if she gets the grammar thing under control.