Review: Needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 1, 2014
I will start with the positives. I really love this series and all the characters. This was a good story with a nice plot, and Seth was really hilarious. I totally would have given it a solid 4 stars of not for the editing issues. As another reviewer stated, the italics were unbelievably prevalent and many were oddly placed. I had to force myself to ignore all of them and read as though they weren't there. There were also missing words and missing letters in words and misused words. Was it enough to make me dislike the story or stop reading it? No, but it was extremely distracting. I will continue to read the series, but with the hopes that the next stories are better edited and longer. I would love to have at least 300 pages.