Review: Good read except..............
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 30, 2013
At location 4959 the author says about Sarah and Meade: "She drew him in and kissed his deeply." My question to the author is where is his deeply? Are they unique to Mars? And should I be offended? This is but one of WAY too many errors, in the book, that spell and grammar check won't find/fix.When will these independent/self publishing authors learn that they need to get a friend or relative (or maybe even pay someone) to proof read the manuscript. Authors note: You can't do it yourself because your mind knows what you want to say and you'll miss a lot of errors that a proof reader will find.The book had a good plot and was well written, or would have been if the errors were fixed. This book is like someone designing a beautiful piece of furniture and then not sanding it before applying the finish. What would have been a four or five became a three because of the annoyance factor.