Review: Did Two Authors Write This Book?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 22, 2012
Alright... I am in the minority here with this book.  The first third of the book was great. It was original, exciting, suspenseful, and action packed. The main characters were getting fleshed out and they seemed to be on there way to being well developed, dynamic personalities.  We have a strong female lead Ciera in love with a human cop, Mitch,  who is trying to stop a serial killer. We have Dane, in love with Ciera, and want nothing more than for her to want him back, even if he has to lie and manipulate to do it.  Sounds great!  Then at about  oh 1/3 of the book it's like there was a new author. The book got very Twilightish and the characters did a personality 180- especially Dane and Ciera. ****** POTENTIAL SPOILER  ********  Dane turned out to be a manipulative and backstabbing vampire, intent on getting one prize- The girl. Then all of a sudden he is some lovesstruck fool, waxing poetic about how he will do anything for her if only to achieve her happiness.  Ciera for over a century wanted nothing to do with Dane romantically, then instantly she loves him too... But loves her soulmate more.  Thus begins a sappy overthetop love triangle. ********Also I agree with another reviewer that there were no transitions between our main characters thoughts, so without warning your switching POV. Not confusing but annoying.  This did not happen though till the half way mark.  It started out so well then the dialogue and characters actions were like a soap opera. Did two different authors write this book? Sorry with such a strong beginning I could not finish the book.  Read about another 50 pages after the turning point and gave up.