Review: Story was good...but here's my points
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2014
A game system based loosely on middle earth Tolkiens world.Anyway here's my points.1. Story was good but very predictable2. Need more details in the people and backgrounds if the writer wants to reach a bigger audience, eg you have to know minecraft or D&D; to know what the creatures look like and to imagine the background3.To add to point #2 more details of the surrounding area in each scenario, if you read Tolkien or the "big writers" they enable the reader to visualize what they are writing about, eg Stephen King as well, books are long but you can clearly imagine what he writes.4. Final battle scene was way too short and the in between scenarios don't seem to flow well, the meeting the old woman was ok because that gave an item.  The town besieged by zombies didn't seem to fit, almost a different story mixed in. That would have been better shorter than making a second book on that scenario and extending it to include the story of how the zombies became etc, was just too long to include in this book, but too short in the book to have meaning.5. The writer certainly has a talent and I think he can certainly improve, I would like to see further and future versions6. Needs to do some more investigation and planning of the book before writing it, to get a good flow and to work out what areas that need more or less detail to flow into the story better.Overall I certainly think the writer has talent just needs the experience :)FYI...I received this book from the author in lieu of a fair consumer review.