Review: disjointed and poor editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 12, 2014
Self published or not, you still need to be careful to edit. There were many grammatical mistakes and words misused. "Physic" is a term for medicine in earlier centuries. "Physique" describes a body. The word physic was used several times in place of physique which drove me nuts.  If you are a writer, learn your words and use them correctly. Plus the story jumped from place to place without any segue half the time. She's scared of him, she wants to jump him, she loves him with no points in between. She leaves him and then she's suddenly working as head chef in charge of a huge project that would in normal life take months to organize and it seems as if it's only a few days yet we find out later it's been three months and how did we get there.  Too much confusion and jumping around.  Free was too much to put into this book. I'll remember this author and vow to never waste my time again.