Review: Maybe I'm not "artsy" enough.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 18, 2012
What's up with all the glowing reviews for this pair of short stories?  After reading them both, I'm sitting here completely bored to tears.  Neither story had a modicum of character development; you get flat, single dimensional characters from start to finish.  The writing was clipped and the paragraphs read like the musings of a junior high schooler.  Amateurish at best.  What's good about both stories?...they're short, so the boredom is over quickly.