Review: Nice ideas, everything else less so
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2013
The book opened nicely and since it was only 99c I've decided to buy it.That was a mistake.The first chapter or two were the best the book has to offer.The plot seems jittery at best. I had trouble believing that 2 different races are bonding so quickly and willing to sacrifice so much for each other.The writing itself was bad - I could keep up with who is where, which fleet does the author refer to and the holes in the plot were too big to believe.The technical side seems half made - the author began to work on it and then started to go all over the place - I got the hull armor and the shielding, but the constant changes in technology between all of the fleets confused me.I don't like to say it because a book is a something that someone/s worked very hard on, but I don't recommend anyone buying this book.