Review: Good story premise
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 25, 2013
Bought all three books.  Writing in 2nd edition book one is great.  In book 2 it is okay, in book 3 it still needs editing.  The overall story was great, but sometimes the story line gets a bit muddled.  If you keep reading, it will eventually make sense.  I paid for all three books after reading book 1 1st edition.  I am not sorry that I spent the money, but hope the author will get the 2nd & 3rd book edited and revised