Review: Needed more..
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 30, 2014
2.5 starsI have to admit that the cover attracted me first up and the blurb sounded good, but this novella just fell short for me. I needed more pages, I needed more chemistry between the characters, and I needed more emotion. Cheyenne felt more real to me than Luke and I felt that as soon as I began to feel connected her it just ended. I thought the sex scene was way too rushed compared to the first 2/3 of the novella and their dialogue just didn't flow for me.The premise of this story was really good and it had potential to be emotional, but it didn't give me enough to really be invested in the story.I appreciate that this is billed as an installment, and that you can only fit so much in to 20 or so pages, but if that is the case then it needs to reach out and grab me and entice me to read more. I would much rather have waited and read this as a 100 page novella so I could sink my teeth into it.Curiosity has me wondering what length of novella the author releases next, and to see if we are given more insights into their thoughts about each other so we can develop a connection with the characters.