Review: Where is the Army?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
You can tell a lot of thought went into the history and foundation of the "powers".  I enjoyed reading the work, there is room for improvement, as others have mentioned. But...Huge hole in the plot, there is no military presence!  Dude you have a segment of the population who can and do kill people with their minds. All the secret services and just the plain old Army are going to want to use these resources.  No government in the world is just going to put this resource in a prison to rot away, you simple can not, because as long as another country is using them, you have to.Even if by some strangeness all the governments, decide not use them against each other (big IF), every bad guy in the world is going to want his own.  These people are the hottest commodity on the planet.