Review: Drawn out...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 24, 2013
This story had potential, but the author just drew the story out so much that I found myself skipping over a lot of the details just to get to the dialogue.The characters were written well but Natalie is hella annoying and it just comes across as extremely immature.  Even after getting what she wants from Brandon she still complains. I mean there was nothing Brandon could do to keep her happy long enough before she was over analysing it.  It just makes you want to hurl!!  Brandon was very well written although immature as well, his character was no where as annoying as Natalie.  He seemed to have grown into a man, but you can't say the same for Natalie.I read the sequel to finish the story and it abruptly ends as well.  Don't know if I will waste my time with the completion of the story because it looks like it will be a while before it comes out and I have already lost interest.