Review: 36% non-story filler, lame ending
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
The advertised length is misleading, as the story ends 63% of the way through. Great "lady & vampire modern" setting with well rounded main characters, but it has nothing else goung for it. This short story reads like the author did not know what to do for a climax on either the romance or the adventure plot, and so simply wrote a "happily ever after" summary. The villain does nothing more than pose! Basically, the writing quality steadily degrades rapidly after the free intro. Has two explicit sex scenes.This $0.99 short is an overpriced excuse to push the authors other books.