Review: pretty good first book
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 26, 2012
This book was cleanly written (for $0.99 kindle standards) and had good characters and plotlines.My main concern about the story was a common theme that went along the lines of everybody but the main character always apologizing and groveling to the main character as he corrects them with unbelievable ease and speed.  I wish the author had put in some clear paranormal effects if it was his wish that we think it was the main character's magical or blessed giftedness which fomented these changes.  But instead it is just left to us to see that everybody who meets this character has his/her life entirely changed in a breath.I'm not *against* that storyline, but the author must make it clear that this is not something that anybody but the main character could do for some supernatural reason.I have a list of incorrect words/fixes here, by location.  Context should make it clear.  Generally it's a you're/your too/to/two, something like that:4635: steel4908: then4990: to5904: Confused he looked4163: Valgannon, lowing his head. ('lowing' is what a cow does)5951: massive creatures he sought4650: You're5923: hyperthermia (hypothermia)4770: heal4855: faters5904: Valgannon who was (comma?)