Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2014
Oh good God! Once again I'm alone with my two-star rating. While I did find it to be a good story, it was the execution of it that didn't work for me. All the emotions, scenarios, words, everything - all of it felt forced. I wish I could explain it better. All of it came across as too good to be true; that all the pieces of a puzzle fell in the right place with no jarring of any kind. Then there's the protagonists, Tim and Erin. I'm sorry, but honestly I didn't feel any chemistry or heat between the two, or what the attraction was, all of which I believe is because they both lacked character development. It also doesn't help that I felt both came across as teenagers instead of the adults they are.I don't know why I'm having such a hard time trying to get my thoughts down. How about this - my first thoughts when I finished the novel, "boring," "uninteresting," "juvenile," and "passionless."Considering I'm the only one with a low rating, don't go by what I've written. That decision is yours to make. As for the rest of the series? I'm going to take a pass.