Review: A very fun read
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 3, 2014
This was a lovely read. The writing was good.  I loved the main character and I liked how the author kept the reader guessing how the love triange would work out.  This is a new writer and I have high hopes for her so here are some constructive cricitisms.  While I really liked how she developed Pepper as a person, in hindisght, I thought the characters of Ryan and Jace were light.  Ryan seemed a bit opaque with little insight into him as a person.  She developed Jace a bit more but he actually seemed a bit whiny towards the end. As well, while the character of the grandmother was well drawn, I'd like to see more interaction with her friends and some sub-plots of these personalities.  Overall though, I found this to be a delightful read and look forward to the next installments.