Review: Just awful!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2014
In the first chapter alone, there were so many glaring grammatical errors and inconsistencies that I felt like I was reading an attempt at a novel by an 8th grader. After a while, it seemed more like a bad translation from another language. For example, the word "reach" was used a lot when I think the author meant "arrive", "cabin" I think was supposed to be "office". The wording was awkward, the dialogue was shallow and unrealistic. The author obviously did zero research on airplanes,  airports, flights, America (we have secretaries, not ministers), human interaction,  etc. because it ALL was just so horribly depicted in this attempt at a story. I think the only reason I finished it was so that I would have enough information to put in my review. I am glad this was a freebie. Do NOT waste your money, even if you DO want to waste your time. This author desperately NEEDS a better editor or advisor or translator or whatever.