Review: Really Disappointed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 2, 2013
For some reason I had high hopes for this book, but I was VERY disappointed.Several reviewers mentioned there were few grammatical errors.  Were we reading the same book?  I get automatic kindle updates, so I should have the most current version.When I got really fed up with the typos, I pulled the following from a single page.  The errors kept coming but I stopped with these, because they make my point.  The book was FULL of these types of errors where you have to stop to try to figure out what the author is trying to say."Max's tongue licked at her it with such force it felt like an extra-wide finger", "Max's tongue left clit and headed further south.", "He set the down and placed the lube on the table."In addition to the errors, I didn't like the female character.  The guys came across pretty hot, but the story was just too ridiculous to connect with.