Review: Very good story :D
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2013
This was a pretty good story. I read Knight Fall which was a short story that covers how Kelly and Rick meet. I liked it enough that I bought this story.Kelly is an artist. She's pulled in to Rick's world and is a bit overwhelmed by it. She's very poor (barely scraping by) and he's very rich. Regardless of her feelings of not fitting in to his world she falls for him rather quickly. At first things are great between them but once they get to Vegas and he gets pulled away for meetings she runs in to a number of situations that makes her unsure where she stands or if Rick cares for her in return.Rick is a good guy. He does try to hide something from Kelly but he doesn't realize how it would affect her. Yes he should have been more straight up with her but I still liked Rick a lot and was rooting for him. He really cares for Kelly but as with many men, he suffered from a brief bout of relationship stupidity. He does his best to make things right and comes through for Kelly when she needs him.Kelly & Rick's relationship issues were actually made worse by the interference of a couple of people. There's major drama but it ended well and I liked the story. I will say that my major complaint is I wish they'd spent more time in the story on growing Rick and Kelly's relationship a bit more. I enjoyed this story and may try other stories by this author.