Review: Decent writing, terrible storyline
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2014
Good grief I had to make myself finish this. Tori and her Nanna were both so annoying and honestly both of them were stupid. I'm so tired of tstl heroines. Who in their right mind asks a creepy bartender to dance just to prove a point? I felt that the story was also too long and very predictable. Lastly the hero Matt broke one of my rules by kissing and rubbing on a waitress right in front of Tori. Seriously just made me sick. I'm not sure what she was to him cause I found myself skipping chapters but that's not cool in my book and it always makes me wary of the actual romance. I don't even think that would have been so bad had the story itself been better. I did not believe in H/h love. To me it was just lust.