Review: Additional story to "The Overtaking" which is GREAT!!!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 15, 2011
This brief story seemed more of a commercial for what is to come.  Nothing really happens, although it is well written.  I read Lieske'sThe Practice Date - (Young Adult Romance)which was also a short story that I did enjoy.  But this story set up some interesting characters and even possibly an attraction, but no plot.The product description really says all that happens.  It is only 18 pages:After Danielle turned eighteen she joined the Dyken gathering force and traveled to another planet to help save an entire race. But after witnessing a young man suffering, she begins to question her people's methods. The lines continue to blur as she finds herself attracted to Shayne, a Maslonian she is assigned to gather. Unsure if her people are doing the right thing, Danielle must decide where her heart truly lies.Why were people being gathered and reprogrammed? What is going on?  There are just too many unanswered questions making this seem like a teaser for an upcoming story.  Is it a story "preview" like a trailer for a movie?UPDATE: (1-6-12) I just finished the story The Overtaking which this is a sequel for and it is FABULOUS.  I couldn't believe how much I liked.  I definitely recommend both the teaser andThe Overtaking (The Overtaking Series)!!!!Would I/Did I buy it? Free DownloadWould I read it again? NoWould I recommend it to friends? Yes?