Review: Storyline good but major problems otherwise
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 19, 2013
I just don't understand why so many books have not been edited. Do you not at least have a friend who could catch most of the problems? The story is good, but it is so distracting to read over so many spelling and grammatical mistakes. Anne was spelled differently throughout. Too/to mistakes were common. Words were left out. So frustrating!The sex scenes were redundant and not very attractive. The wording throughout the book was awkward, too wordy, and passive. There were tense changes throughout.It's such a shame to have written a book, which is a big accomplishment, only to have not even gotten a proofreader, much less an editor, to help ensure that the story flows well.I am not trying to offend or upset you (the author), but I hope you will get help before publishing another book.I love to read - editing would be a fun job to me, so surely you can find someone who could do it.Fellow readers:  if these issues are not a deal-breaker for you, I would suggest you go ahead and read the book.  Like I said, the story is good. The characters are likeable, and the setting is refreshing.This book just needs a little help.