Review: good idea but not enough material
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2013
The story has potential to be so much more. The idea is GREAT! But so many details were skimmed over and it could have gone on much longer. If this was a tease to judge reader reaction then I give it an A+ for a go-ahead. If this is a series then I am very disappointed because this story is only 15pages. Take the time and write the whole story instead of thinking of ways to make more money. I would gladly pay more for a full book (or a series containing the story of each pillaged girl), but what was here just wasn't enough to pay for.