Review: Great story but James you need a good editor!!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 20, 2013
I truly enjoyed the tale. The battles were amazing descriptive and captured my attention. The characters (albeit there are a lot of them) are intriguing and the intricate web of relationships being developed throughout is a colossal undertaking. As an aspiring author, I can only imagine the size of the outline for this story or its storyboard (depending on your method). I can say, the story was fascinating and kept calling me back whenever I tried to step away for real life. My one and only critique would be that there were several grammar errors. I know how easy it is, especially with a tale of this size, to make these kinds of errors but I believe that a really good editor could help you with this. I know one or two so if you message me on Facebook, I will gladly make a connection for you (not sure what genres they edit but willing to try and help). I am looking forward to the next book. Grammar errors aside, this epic tale has captured my interest and the characters have captured my heart.