Review: Too short
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 10, 2013
This wasn't a book. It was a short story. Too bad. Could have been fleshed out into an interesting novel. As short stories go, it is so short, you feel like u just read a random chapter in a random book. I didn't even get to feel any emotional attachment to either character. It is like the author is afraid to actually have to develop characters and a plot. Too bad. The author has the right tools, he just needs to learn how to build something with them.