Review: Fun Creature Feature (Editor's Review)
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 8, 2013
The story is lots of fun, and the writing is better than average. Plot progression is fairly solid, though there is a long slow section around Chapter 11. Construction is excellent. Grammar, flow, and story elements like exposition are all above average, especially for the genre. However, the author could benefit from an additional editor or proofreader who does fact-checking. For example, throughout the book, the author writes "magna" instead of "magma," and spells "helium" as "hellium." The paleontological sections could also use some fact-checking.  Other than that, the book is lots of fun. If you're a fan of Steve Alten and/or creature horror and the like, this is what you're looking for. I was pleasantly surprised by the quality.