Review: Hero's groveling is non existent
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
Warning/Spoilers/Swearing*********************The author killed this book for me by tormenting me with brutal, agonizing descriptions of painful torments that "heroine" endured without gaining expected justice for her suffering!Throughout the entire book, the author tortured me with vile, atrocious and nauseating scenes of the hero's evil ex girlfriend and her husband who happened to be his friend that both cheated on him hurting the hero's entire family including attempt murder on his child and wife so I wanted to be there for the kill. But what do I get? Just the hero acknowledging (if I can call that?) with no conviction and appropriate groveling that he was the reason all this started at the first place by allowing them to enter his house? to his family life? What the hell? So the heroine is going through a complete breakdown due to attempted rape, threats towards her and her child, drug poisoning and stalking to scare her with a mask of a man from the past that held her captive and tortured her and HER HUSBAND DID NOT BELIEVE HER??? How come he could take his ex girlfriend's and his friend's side even after he was warned about her and witnessed she was trying to sell his intimate moments with his wife on the video to the tabloids? and his wife was pleading to believe him his friend was trying to rape her? I was turning the pages in the hopes of receiving an equal amount of reciprocation from the hero's realization his colossal mistake followed by intense groveling...but I got nothing of the sort!You put me through reading agony with those descriptive scenes and not provide me with appropriate equally descriptive relief? What a cheat of an author! And make no mistake....If you decided to use a writing style involving the hero's total ignorance, naivety and blindness as a plot line that causes all the drama you have to be consistent with the resolution to create a balance..otherwise the "hero" will become "anti hero" in the readers eye! I don't have to be a writer to know that! But I am more than enough of a reader to demand it! It's called integrity. Something this author was in short supply here. The hero made a promise to his wife that he would not go through a movie scene that creates great risk to his life, but still he decided to do it anyway. His pregnant wife literally was begging him not to do it and he so callously ignored her and ordered his security guards to escorted her in a manner of nothing more like a rag of potatoes! He knew there was a great risk of losing his life involved and the risk of loosing his wife his daughter and unborn child, but he was so selfish despite his wife's distress he went through it! How selfish is that?Then shortly after his wife looses the baby doe to the shock seeing the hero smashing his car and evil girlfriend poising her with lies of him being death and when it took long for the wife to recover he called her a "f**** bi**h" accusing her of being weak and pathetic and selfish for not considering his feelings? The very man that was so selfish to go through a dangerous act having no care, no regard to his wife's great distress and potential loss of his family if he not succeeded in the act? Then his wife blamed herself for their suffering and the hero was not even close to be a decent man acknowledging his wrongdoing, his unreasonable mistrust to his wife, his selfishness beyond comprehension and disloyalty by protecting and taking his ex girlfriend's site instead his wife. Where is the justice here? Where is the integrity here? Where is the recompense here? For all the wrongdoings towards his wife? And add more insult the very wife was feeling sorry for the woman that drugged her, tried to kill her daughter, harassing her, sexually harassing her husband and deliberately causing her stress so she could lose her unborn child and existing daughter? just because she was in jail? Get a reality check!!!