Review: Huh?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 23, 2013
After I read the other reviews i thought maybe they were wrong. It's just their opinion but no, they are right. I downloaded the book it was a freebie. I wanted to read a romance novel and I don't know what in the hell is this. I believe this was a first draft, a rough draft. The book was written it seems purely in external dialouge and when you write a book in third person it clearly has to have internal and external dialouge. In the first chapter alone, i met Elizabeth who the book is about( I only know that because i read the synopis) but i knows absolutely nothing about her. Then you meet Metris' (who is that) I still don't know. Sidney, Don, Karen and i don't know why they're there. When I still doesn't know Elizabeth and she is the protagonist.Then there sentences like this: Later that evening. The wedding was amazing.HUH? Or the 2 hours later and the three hours later thing. No, stop it. I don't want to discourage the author but no, the best author is a reader. A reader knows how a book suppose to flow and i think she needs to readjusted some things, clean this book up. Get a plot. character development, read a book from a favorite author so she can see how a proper book is structure.