Review: Loved the characters. Liked the story. Really needs better editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2013
This book spotlights the tragedy of family abuse and the damage it does. It also shows the determination to get away from the bad situation and survive. The story points out the need of the community to be an advocate for abused family members.I thought the characters were believable and well written. The story flowed well except where errors occurred.The writing was fraught with typographical and grammatical errors, to the point that some sentences just didn't make sense.for example:"THINK turkey and tomato sandwiches"/thick"PAIN cans"/paint cansOne frightfully long sentence at location 1605 contained 41 words and still left the reader saying, "Huh?" Maybe it also contained typos. The number of words in a sentence should be a maximum of 24-30, for clarity.