Review: Repetitive and lacked real conflict
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
Nothing happened in this book. It was like reading a journal. "First we did this, then we did that, then this happened." I kept waiting for something to happen, but it never really did. Any conflict was handled quickly and never a big deal. It just needed more. The writing was also stiff, wooden. Dialogue had no contractions, but they dropped their g's, and said ya'll. People do say ya'll, and drop their g's, but in the same sentence, they won't say "I am" or whatever. Also, we were beaten over the head with the fact that the fathers were former NFL players. And it was way over the top with the "dude, that's my sister" from David. Just not for me.