Review: More for Male Readers Maybe???
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 19, 2011
I'm not a prude. I do sometimes read/enjoy erotica but as the mother of two grown sons, I found this just pushed all my "ewwwwww" buttons for some reason.It is about a highschool aged male and it reads like it was written by someone who is probably pretty young as well.I shared this story with my best friend and we both found it to be the sort of situations that a young male would fantasize about and not something either one of us found at all erotic. It lacks any sort of sophistication to me. It's about a young man who is given an amulet that lets him be invisible while wearing it. There are scenes where he spies on a young woman his age in her room - he gets to watch her masturbate - another scene where he decides to go into a girl's locker room at his high school and spy on those girls as well and gets to see two of the girls engage in lesbian activity.I don't mean to be unkind. The actual writing itself - word usage, grammer, punctuation - was all fine. I also thought the premise of an amulet that lets the wearer be invisible to be unique. As an adult female, I just didn't find reading about teen-age sexual situations to be my cup of tea.