Review: End's abruptly
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 5, 2013
I felt there was something missing from the storyline. We never find out why Melanie ran out on Connor a year ago after their one night together. The author seemed to mix up her storyline and forget she had told us one thing then the next minute tell us something else. It was hinted at that Melanie had a secret which is why she ran from Connor but then that is forgotten. Melanie had given Connor a false name when she met him but she then says he gave her a false name (Dylan) but then that is never mentioned again and it's all about how Melanie had lied to him.We are told at one point Melanie hasn't had sex for six months, next minute she hasn't had sex since Connor a year ago. The plot is very weak. The jilted lover turning psycho has featured in many a Mills & Boon novel but done much better than this attempt.There is not much dialogue between the H&H; so when they are declaring themselves in love, I didn't really see how they came to that conclusion.Not bad for a freebie but I would have been disappointed if I had paid for it.