Review: Good writing
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2012
Very short, but enjoyable read.  It's a first person short-story with a sweet and predictable outcome.  Hey, it's not a whodunnit.The narrative flows very naturally and well.  You become attached to, and sympathize with  Kelsie immediately.There is a feeling of rushing through the story, but then again, it's a pretty busy day for the heroine.Sorry if this sounds more like a critique than a review, but I'm a bit partial to character development and I feel the author does a good job in a very few pages.Gee, and there wasn't even any sex in it!  It's way harder to write character development than to describe body parts.  Sorry, went off on a tangent.I'm going to look for other books by this author and I think I'll buy one to see what she can do with more pages.