Review: Not good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 16, 2014
I loved the cover of this book. I didn't know what it was about before one clicking.This book needs a good editor, asap. The setting is in D.C., I assume America, but the author is clearly not American. Half way through I found myself reading with a British accent, because the phrasing doesn't make sense otherwise.  This plot has been done so much that to do it right, it has to be so so good. This was weak and so instant love it's off putting. It started out with promise, but quickly became annoying. Bummer.Switching point if view mid chapter or even paragraph is so confusing. Most of the sex scenes you have no idea what she's feeling until he says "oh you're this..." or she's getting off. She follows him around like a puppet and the first thing he does is spank her. She doesn't gasp, feel outraged, turned on. There is no emotion in that scene from her. How do you connect with a character like that?