Review: Decent paranormal romance/suspense story, needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2014
While I enjoyed the storyline, I was extremely distracted by the terrible editing on this book. On almost every page there are multiple errors; punctuation problems -specifically incorrect useage of apostrophes with plurals and possessives, incorrect words ( ie: peaked for peeked was consistent throughout the story), wrong names assigned to speakers, incomplete sentences, incorrect pronouns and assorted other issues. If an editor were to correct these problems, the story would be much more enjoyable and rate higher.As for the plot, I found it interesting. There was not much new on the werewolf theme, with the exception of twins sharing a true mate, and humans being able to be true mates if they were hybrids of mages or other non human species. I liked the characters of Hunter and Cyr and their care of their relationship with Mia. The happiness they brought to each other despite their pasts was very uplifting. The stalker plotline was well done and had interesting twists to it.  It promises to give fodder for the next book as well, as it brought the issue of hybrids vs. inbreds out into the open. I liked the supporting characters and family members that accepted Mia and recognized her gifts early on, adopting and protecting her as one of their own. I will be interested to see where the next book goes, but only if an editor is brought on board!There is graphic sex and violence in this story along with some profanity.Heat factor hot.