Review: Nothing Great but Not Terrible Either
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 6, 2012
I'll give this short story a solid three stars for being interesting and mildly amusing. Two stars is for the very inventive and humorous revenge Linda inflicts on Mike. The other star is for the spelling being better than most self-published work. Unfortunately I couldn't give it more than that. I didn't mind the language (on a good day I culd put them all to shame) or the POV hopping. The problem was that most of the characters sounded the same and the story didn't seem complete. Mike says Linda died one way. Linda says she died another. Trent says he thinks Linda is hiding more of the story and even Linda hints at this herself. But we never get to know. When we finally get the truth of what happened to her body (which I thought was pretty funny) I was hoping for a flashback or something of what actually happened. Nothing.Not bad for free but it doesn't really make me want to actually pay for the rest of the series.