Review: 3.5 stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 6, 2014
I liked the story and the characters, only one or two formatting errors that didn't trip me up much.  I'm hovering between 3 and 4 stars because while there were efforts to flush out the main and secondary characters and develop them, I just felt that something was missing.  It felt to me that there was too much superficial descriptiveness and hopping from situation to situation without really exploring each character's emotions and therefore making a stronger bond between characters and the reader.  The book has potential, but needs something more.