Review: some details were unrealistic
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 9, 2013
I realize this is supposed to be an erotic story and it was erotic.  However, for me things that ring as being unrealistic ruin an otherwise good story.  There is a scene in the book where the main female character performs orally, has her hands tied behind her back, he takes his pleasure with her on the couch (hot scene) but after he helps her up, unties her and says lets go we have a dinner party to attend and the only thing she needs to do is get her coat.  She does not need to fix her makeup, her hair, reapply lipstick, just get her coat?  Very unrealistic to me.  It would not have taken away from the story at all to have had her take five min to fix herself after some hot sex on the couch.