Review: Good Read, But too many typos and grammers errors!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 4, 2012
This started out as a realy good book although it seemed to do a lot of jumping around once I got to the meat of the story. It was entirely too many typos and grammer errors which took  away from the story. I really wish our wonderful black street lit authors would please have someone else proof read these books before releasing them. This author will one day be a great writer. They just need some help with proof reading. I felt that the main person Mercedes was really a uneducated young lady. You and your girlfriends said one thing but you turn around and do another. For instance: Im not messing with no more hustlers!, damn it you get some good d&%k and turn around and marry a stranger, just cuz he can keep you in the lifestyle you've become accustomed too. She saw all the signs of what this man was up to but choose to ignore them. Then you let him uproot your family because he is into some skull duggery. I hope that any ladies especially the young and impressionable ladies take sdomething from this story. There is a message which she told us about at the beginning of the book.  Great book Winter!! Waiting to read book 2.