Review: The Heart of the Book Is Good
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 28, 2014
I deeply appreciate Joey Bauer's work through his organization, Comeback KIds Ministries. And I'm also glad he shares his practical messages in his booklets. I hope he expands both ministries.This booklet could be considerably better. First, don't center the text; make it all left margin. Easy on the italics; set apart the long Bible passages in other ways, such as double-spacing between sections. Be careful of long paragraphs; shorter ones but containing full thoughts are good. Then illustrate more of your points with stories from your ministry or elsewhere. Stories show and sell.I hope this helps. Anybody in your circle of friends who is a good editor and layout person? Ask for their help.God bless you and those who read your truth-filled booklets.