Review: Good plot but annoying characters
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2013
I thought the basic plot of this book could have really taken off. However, the insecurities of Brandi and Reno got to the point of being downright annoying. "Does he or she like me? Maybe, I should just forget about showing an interest in him or her. Gee, should I tell him or her how I really feel?" Ugh! Midway through the book I wanted to smack them both upside the head!My advice to Nicky Charles is to stop dwelling on the insecurities of her characters. No one can be that insecure and it makes them totally unbelievable. Not to mention annoying since the book could have been much more interesting if she had taken their relationship in any number of possible directions.I'm now reading The Mating and it's not quit as bad. Nicky's writing style is different and creative and it's really too bad that she spends so much time having them wonder about feelings rather than putting her energy into developing interesting plot twists.