Review: Engaging and fun adventure
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2012
So I've become engaged with the story itself. It's really a lot of fun, but the proofreading is not good. In some places the editing is so bad that you have to go back to see how the paragraph fits together. I'm not a big stickler for a small mistake here and there, but suggest the author invest just a little for some copy editing.  That being said I have thoroughly enjoyed the story. It's a great adventure and moves along at a good pace. The story is engaging and the characters have really rounded out with the second book. Adam Cain has become more and more interesting as has his unexpected companion who leads the Fringe Pirates and we've gained a lot more story of what's going on in the universe. If not for some really big editing errors that made me stop where I was in the book to figure out what it was supposed to say, I would have given it a 4. Since I've already started the third book I have to say I've enjoyed the series, but like the reader to be aware of the drawbacks as well. If you like a good adventure, this installment in the series will be happy to carry you along if you have a little patience to get through the rough spots.