Review: either have more sex or more plot. 1 or the other...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2013
Another short story that would be nothing without the fornication.It wasn't completely awful, but it did feel rushed. So instead of phrasing things differently or allude to sex, more emphasis was put on the sex at the expense of the plot.I would have liked it better if it had chosen to do one or the other, certainly not both.