Review: great story, not so great editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2014
Actually I loved this story, unfortunately it was quite difficult to get through because of all the mistakes. I really hope to see a revision in the near future for this book. I was determined to get through it because in reality it is a really great story. It just has too many grammatical errors and even the wrong words in some places. I wanted so badly to give it five stars and will if a revision is completed! In my opinion it is difficult to write in the present or future tense and would advise to stick to past tense because, again, there are too many errors of flipping back and forth, making for an uncomfortable reading experience. Thank you M. K. for the story, it was great I just had to work a little harder for it. In the end I believe it was worth it, and I'm now heading to go purchase A Grim Holiday!