Review: Good Idea, but the Story Needs More Work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 23, 2013
"Separate Lives" is a quick read, and if you start it, you'll probably finish it. It's an interesting plot, but there are few surprises as the story unfolds.  A little more work on the art of story telling would have paid big dividends. One more proofread would have also helped.