Review: Story would get three stars...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 5, 2013
...but the author and/or editor need to go back to grammar school. The basic grammar mistakes gave me a raging headache while I strove to find out what happened with little Ethan, the only character I felt anything for. Alright is two words, all right? There has the word here in it...location, location, location, here and there. Their is the possessive pronoun for something belonging to two or more people. They're is the contraction for they are. Your is the possessive pronoun for something that belongs to you. You're is the contraction for you are. Then and than were used interchangeably. A reader should not have to pay to be the editor of a book. Really? Shuttered used when a man shuddered in the throes of passion?I'm giving the author a second chance and will read about Sebastian, a more interesting character than big brother Henry. If the free sample is well edited, and the rest of the book is riddled with basic grammar mistakes, I'm going to cry bait and switch and review all the author's books with one star. If this is a hobby for the author, then her books should be listed only as FREE.