Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2014
I actually expected a story from this book, but instead it was about sex, sex and more sex. Don't getme wrong I enjoy the *OCCASIONAL*,; however it was nearly the entire book. Ther wer perhaps a total of 20 pages that were not describing a sex scene.  Also, get a better editor. There were a fairly large number of grammatical mistakes: verbs left out, incorrect tenses, nouns missing, possessives used when they shouldn't be, etc.... The premise had such potential,. Too bad the writter was unable to come up with a *story*.