Review: Could have been a 5 start book, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 28, 2013
I enjoyed this book, which surprised me since I'm not into this genre, but it was a fast moving book that propelled you to want to keep reading.  I give it a 3 star rating instead of a 5 because of all the grammatical errors, such as writing personal instead of personnel, she instead of he and he instead of she, plus a lot of missing words.  There were also some run-on sentences, and sentences that were clumsy, but all in all this book is worth the 99 cents.  Mr. Yates has a lot of talent, an extremely creative mind, but he needs a better editor to improve the flow of his work.  Kudos to you, Mr. Yates, for making me jump out of my comfort zone.  Despite the lower rating because of all the grammar stuff, I truly enjoyed this book.