Review: READ IT!!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2013
Right Now by Jackie McMahonAfter losing the love of her life and a close friend Angelina Moore can't seem to move past her depression so she leaves her small town in Virginia for New York where she hopes to move past her sorrow and have an adventure.  Her best friend and coworker Betty is worried that she is spending too much time alone and takes her out for a little fun. At the club Angelina feels out of place and decides to go home so that Betty can enjoy herself. As Angelina is walking home she is suddenly grabbed from behind, next thing she knows she is coming too in a strange place with a handsome man.Dennis Evers is a billionaire in the communications industry but what few people know is that he is also a secret agent with the CIA. Dennis has been tasked with keeping Angelina from a notorious criminal who is after the ring her grandfather gave her years ago and told her to NEVER  take off, warning that it would keep her safe.Dennis and Angelia are immediately attracted to each other and over the following weeks a relationship develops. For different reasons they both know the relationship cannot last, but each holds hope for the best.This book has the makings of an excellent story. I had a hard time with it because although I love when a story is told from both characters Point of View, this was not made clear and I found the beginning quite confusing not realizing we had moved from Angelina to Dennis in chapter two. Also, this book desperately needs to be edited. There are many places where the authors thoughts do not flow, words are doubled or an idea is not clear from the word choice. I think that Ms. McMahon has a great premise for a series, but I feel she needs to find a good editor.