Review: A Hot Mess!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 9, 2013
First let me say GREAT story, but the book was not proofread at all!  Why would the author not make sure it's done prior to publishing? It was written all caps, run on sentences, NO spellcheck, and one of the brother's name changed mid story!  Why would a new author do this?  What a great way not to sell books.  Fix the errors and this would be the start of a great series.