Review: Great story!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2013
For as much as I am learning to hate the way some authors write short stories...I actually really enjoyed this one.The bad? It was WAY TOO SHORT! I want MORE! It was a very well written story that grabbed my attention and held me riveted until the end.The good? The entire short story.So if I have nothing but good things to say about this story, why only four stars...Well...only 49% of the download is even the story...I can almost guaranty this. If the author ever took the time to make this into a full length novel, I would probably be five starring this. It was awesome!...Just way too short.