Review: Nice sweet story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 14, 2014
A novella is such a difficult length to write.  Ms. Williams does a really good job, although I think a couple of things could have been brought up sooner--like what happened to Katie--because it became a distraction while reading until I finally got to that part.The character development was nice, but the eleven year old girl was a little over the top with how she acted and what she did.  Too mature.  And there seemed to be a lack of interaction with one of her uncles.  I was also confused about Haley's mother and what happened to her for 90% of the novel.  A little more upfront information would have been nice and stopped the nagging questions I had about the story as I read.