Review: Not just an orgy?  Try not EVEN an orgy.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 18, 2013
Like the author's other "Naughty Nooner" entries (Lap DanceandDanu, The Return) this reads like a longer story awkwardly cut down to a short length.  Giant blocks of clunky exposition, characters behaving in unexplained ways, and bizarre supernatural flourishes -- these are Painter's tools.  The eroticism, while handled all right, too frequently takes a backseat to the reader having to stop and wonder why on earth the author made that particular decision.This story (which isn't really about an orgy, FYI) is one of the weaker ones in this Ellora's Cave promo series.  There is simply too much plot build-up relative to the action and the bizarre ending comes out of left field.