Review: told as a story
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 2, 2014
While the idea of this novella has merit the writer told the story. instead of letting her characters breath the story. It is very poorly written. I suggest the writer take a lesson from other stories she has read and change this story to be by the characters and let it flow more smoothly. Stop repeating the same thing over and over as well.