Review: Okay Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2011
I was not bothered by grammatical editing errors. One can read past that. I did not find an error in character name near the end as mentioned by another reviewer. There were, though, MANY characters with names starting with the same letter. A bit of that was necessary to the plot, but some could have been avoided. My main problem was the stilted language. NO ONE speaks like that. It felt like the author spent far too much time looking in the Thessaurus for dated or overly complicated terms. It slowed the reading, and the book would have had a better flow with more natural language.