Review: Very cute.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 20, 2014
For a short story it was cute. I liked the no sexual contents. Of the story. I do think it could have had a better story line about Jack. I we know is that he was a Marshall. Nothing about who he was or what actually drove him to be a lawman or where he came from. You pretty much knew who Ellie was and where she came from. Jack was a person who dropped out of a tree for all we know. And I felt the story kinda zig zag. At one point Ellis passed out. And nothing was said after that. Who found her? She was coming down the stairs and fainted. What was the point when there was nothing after that? And what kind of deputy just leaves a female to a man she never met?  I think he could have walked her to the door and after finding Frank drunk on the floor. At least he could have offered her other arrangements. Instead he just dropped her off. And leaves. And I felt that the end was rushed. She tells Jack about them having a baby. And then it ended. Why put that in if you wasn't going to continue with the story.? But I liked the story. It was a good read for my rainy day....