Review: Choppy writing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2013
This needed to be smoothed out.  The writing moving from scene to scene was choppy.  Sometimes it was difficult and I had to re read the passage again to get the gist of it.I did find it hard to believe that Veda made such an impression on Will that he remembered her four years later!It had potential, but it ended up being amateurish.The two free stories to entice you....Don't bother.  The first one dealt with adultery and the bride knew she was making a mistake.  She however was a 'Christian woman'.  Yeah right!  Guess she didn't read that adultery is bad at Exodus  20:14 where it states: "You must not commit adultery."I couldn't stomach it and was so glad it was short and over.  The ending was a total cop out as well.The second story dealt with another 'Christian woman' bitten by a werewolf.That was ok, but the ending sucked BIG TIME!  Again for sweet mercies, the story was short.IMHO, skip it.  Sure you are getting 3 stories for one, but they aren't worth what you are going to pay!