Review: Falls short, changes type of story, not worth buying
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 23, 2013
The 1st part, "My Billionaire Master:  Indebted to Him" was GREAT! - In terms of hot dominant bdsm sex & it was FREE.  So I went ahead & purchased the whole series expecting it to continue in same vein.  It instead turned into a washed out 50 Shades wanna be which was so Not in Keeping w/the 1st part it was like reading a different series.  The 2nd part had a sex party/orgy w/mfm, mff, & voyeurism/exhibitionism but was so interspersed w/lead female whining that she wasn't/didn't want to be his whore (hello! paid for sex, duh!) that it ruined the scenes & the 'story' & 'purpose' of the party didn't make sense & was out of character w/original start of story.  The 3rd & 4th parts were pretty much w/o any bdsm except for a punishment-withholding orgasm & then leaving her alone in room overnite (not my idea of a good time, so not hot), again w/so much of her "I just wanted him to love me" crap that it  was totally annoying & all further sex was boring or too peppered w/internal angst ridden dialogue.  I gave it  2 stars instead of 1 because the 1st part was good.  Of course, it all depends on what you like & why you want the book - but either way, for the sex or for the story, neither made sense, lacked continuity & fizzled out big time.  Lacked believability which I wouldn't have cared 1 whit about if it story continued on loaded w/more exciting dominant sex but as it devolved into a choppy 'love' story that lack of believability mattered & fell short.  Really disappointed w/this trend I've noticed by a lot of writers here that give a great 1st part free to sucker you into buying the full series only to find a bait & switch.  I think if this writer kept her male lead more in character & kept on w/the tone of the 1st part it would've been an awesome series for hot sex (which is what I wanted & expected).