Review: Terrible!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 29, 2013
This book was terrible! Do not waste your time or money! The plot is so stupid. Supposedly, a very wealthy girl, Elle, gets pregnant in high school. The father of her twins, TJ, is the love of her life, but she wants him to not get tied down and have a bright future, so she marries another guy who immediately abuses her. She doesn't take her millions and leave the sick jerk no, she stays with the "Bear" for 17 years taking terrible abuse. The spousal rape scene was so gross it made me sick. The real baby daddy is so upset after trying weakly to get her back, that he goes off never coming home to see his relatives in the small town where they live. Yet, when he finally comes back 17 years later and accidentally sees his son, he knows immediately that it is his child, because the young man looks just like him So, his relatives never mentioned that to him? Another example of the dumbness of this book is at one point, Elle, the lead female-I'm not calling her a heroine-is told that the state of Georgia, where she lives, does not allow abortions, which is a crock, but to compound it, later she says Bear forced multiple abortions on her. And, the baby daddy,TJ, is described in some reviews as an Alpha....but he finds out about the abuse then lets Elle and his kids stay with the abuser for 3 more weeks until Bear almost kills "the love of his live." I just read Remy before this one and can you imagine that from him or any other real book boyfriend? No way! To top it off, an editor is badly needed! Writing several pages in all caps is just annoying plus it has numerous misspellings and grammatical errors! This is a rare bad review from me. I usually just move on, but I had to warn my fellow romance readers to avoid this one!