Review: Fun
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2012
This was a very amusing short story about two supernatural beings who make a pact with Death and, of course, things turn out a bit more complicated than they imagined.With short stories, pacing is crucial, and this one is handled well, mixing a good amount of action with characterization. It's just enough to keep the readers entertained, while also telling us a bit about the protagonist. In my case, I would have actually liked to have seen a bit more about them, actually. Where their powers came from and all of that is pretty much left to the reader's imagination, which is fine, but I would have preferred a few more clues.There were a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, but not dramatic enough to put the reader off. Overall, this was a fun story, and one I do recommend if you'd like something amusing and quick to read.