Review: Nice Story but Needs an Editor ASAP
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 21, 2012
I like the premise of this series, but the grammatical, spelling, and wrong word errors are killing me softly. They were too numerous to overlook so I spent half my time enjoying the story and the other half re-editing it. Also I feel like the author almost ruins the characters with the foul and mean things they say to one another and other people. A small amount smack talk and teasing is fine but they can't have one decent conversation.