Review: difficult read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 19, 2013
This book felt structured and stiff. Even Coal's seduction left a lot to be desired which isn't supposed to be the case. He's the hero in the book, who saves Faith's life and he shouldn't be so incompetent in the art of seduction. I've always believed that emotions should be visible through the authors writing and not broken down in so many words it begins to read like a dictionary, leaving nothing to the imagination. I'm not trying to be offensive but this book was too flat for me. The story was there but the emotion was absent.Also, it didn't flow because there was no indicator in the change of POV's- one paragraph it's Faith the nest Coal then the next Faith and on and on. It was very confusing.