Review: Could have had more stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2014
The Demonsouled books are exciting.  Great storyline and plot.  BUT they are difficult to read due to a huge lack of proofreading and editing,  A spell check program helps but it cannot correct.  There are way too many bits left from a change having been made.  And a number of redundant phrases appear.  Find someone other than yourself to proofread and edit.  I often find myself reading what I thought i wrote rather than what is actually there when I proofread my own material.  It appears Jonathan Moeller has a similar problem.