Review: some good, some bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2014
Okay, the good...interesting story line, characters were fairly well developed, the last chapter wanted to pull you along to the next installment.The bad...I hate bad grammar and lazy or no editing. Author: there is a difference between lay and lie. Hens lay eggs, humans lie down. When I read "he lay down" all I can visualize is feathers blowing out of the characters back end.In the last chapter the editor fell asleep: water does not gust, it gushes. There were several other examples, but I didn't write them down and now I can't remember them. Oh well.Even a free book should be careful with grammar and editing.