Review: A good writer but a not-so-good story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 7, 2013
This story started off interesting but quickly became unrealistic. I think the author has good story telling abilities but this just wasn't a very good read. The Robinhood thing about stealing from the bad and giving to the poor would entail actually giving to the poor so to me I was just looking at a crook. A cat burglar that targets rich crooks? Crooks just like him and his girlfriend? Then there was the voice of the women who tended to sound a like; from his white mother to his black ghetto-fabulous girlfriend. Also, things seemed to move too quickly, especially trusting someone with your deepest darkest secrets.In my opinion these things could have been thought out a bit more to make the story more convincing. For instance, the protagonist story line ended in an unsatisfactory and pointless way and yet the story was long from over which caused it to roam aimlessly until we got to the fairytale end. My advice to the author is to plan out the next book and think of a kick-ass storyline that matches his obvious talents.