Review: Good, but can't quite give it 5 stars
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
Surprisingly good! But...there are a couple things that keep me from giving it a full 5 star rating. One: I understand it is translated from German, and some things are lacking in the translation to English.  Mainly just proper word usage in English, and there are some punctuation errors. Run on sentences make the reader have to stop and process what the sentence is telling the reader about what is going on. Two: it lacks  some "polish" in regards to colloquial terms being used quite a bit and the story sounds somewhat like fan fiction at times...again, that may be due to the translation process. Or maybe it is the writer's first attempt at writing a book, and should improve with other books to follow. Overall, I really liked the characters, world building was good, it just mostly needs a little tightening in the editing.