Review: Confusing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2014
The sheer timing in this book is off. The revelations of characters and the character insights are weirdly placed. It seems like this book is a victim of horrible editing. Once you edit you must go back and reread to make sure that the scenes still mesh well. This author really missed the mark.When placing characters in a room you have to be sure it makes sense when they magically appear in another room and these details make it even weirder when it comes to sex scenes. Where people are positioned makes all the difference between sexy and being some sort of pretzel contortionist performer.It's strange how this book kind of teases you through it because just when you don't think you can stand the writing any more bam! she can magically write several scenes in a row that make sense and are well thought out, thus advancing the characters' depth and the storyline. As I said before: a victim of editing, really, really poor editing. I would pass on this one guys.