Review: Don't waste your time or your money
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 18, 2013
Unfortunately, I purchased the whole series without reading the first one.  Now I have to struggle my way through the other books.  The storyline itself isn't a bad one.  It's the writing style and the characters.  This book is literally full of sentences like "I will talk to you later", "We are going to bed now", "That is not what I want to do", etc.  Hello, ever hear of a contraction?  It made the writing seem horribly stilted and dated.  And I couldn't really bring myself to like any of the main characters.  Connor came across as some sort of nerdy, spastic dweeb, and  Nate, while sexy, was an ass.  From the first, he was unnecessarily mean, and although I have nothing against pet names per se, the sweethearts and the baby(s) were WAY overdone.  And come on....Erin was strong enough to have the guts to run from her husband and change her identity, but is constantly crying and carrying on like some kind of weakling.  She annoyed me to no end.  Not to mention how do you fall in love with someone who has been nothing but cruel to you?  Nope, didn't buy the relationship and didn't enjoy it.  Even the sex was uninspiring.  I really expected hotter sex scenes from the way these books are marketed.  And it was so blatantly obvious who the bad guy was from the first time we read about him.  As added insult, the book's full of typos.  It's not quite 1 star, but it's damn close.  Don't bother.