Review: A let down
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2013
An interesting premise, but poor editing; missing words; apostophres used when the word was a plural... So, moving past the poor editing, I found the H's past lover and the h's apparently amazing likeness to that socially unacceptable lover to be a rather poor contrivance for an obstacle between the h and H. I would have enjoyed the story more if the author had used another mechanism, because even I, reading the story, was thinking 'yeah, right...' when H tries to convince h that she's not a socially acceptable understudy for the woman he really wants.Shame, a promising story ended up disappointing.