Review: Good story, bad editing issues.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 13, 2013
Would have given it a 5 star review if not for all of the spelling and grammatical errors along with some structural issues effecting the content of paragraphs.  They interrupt the train of thought as you read the story.  I find this irritating.  Please get a good editor to assist with this.  The story line was very interesting and I will look forward to the 2nd book.  Hopefully, it will present the story better through proper editing.  I will see about any additional books based on improvements in the 2nd.  Best wishes.