Review: Series shows promise
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 26, 2012
Really good story and plot, but unfortunate choice of words. WAY too much conversational dialog, and WAY too much repetition of facts. For example, instead of saying something like "I caught him up on all that had happened before he got there", the author completely recaps the whole scene that had just happened. Once would be okay (sometimes the story is more fun in the re-telling), but this happens repeatedly thru the while story... but hey, way to get the word count up, right?The story is real good, and much of the conversation is fun, but after a while all the over-explaining gets too redundant. I am looking forward to the next book, because I am interested in finding out what happens in the next installment, and I can hope the author has gotten over herself with the repeat dialog.