Review: THE PLOT THICKENS
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2013
In this second episode, Emily is fitting into university life well. She still wonders about Henry, he's a mystery that Emily is desperate to solve. What few things she does know tell her that he's not going to be interested in her. He's obviously very rich, a member of the mysterious GT's, and his friend Sebastian Dinote appears to disapprove if Henry even looks Emily's way.Then to Emily's horror she has a blackout at the polish cafe and Henry jumps in to help. Taking her to his doctor. While Emily was in the alternate world, she meets a young boy called the Emissary, he seems to appear to protect Emily from the misery makers. Then a young girl gives Emily a warning.I was sent all four parts of this story by the author to review. In this second episode Emily has more interaction with Henry. But everything else is still a complete mystery. We are no further along in finding out who or what the misery makers are. Or the elite group the GT's. now there's a new unknown the Logician. On to part three hopefully nearer to the answers.The writing of this story is smooth and descriptive. The characters still have to be fleshed out a bit more. But that's probably deliberate on the authors part to keep the reader in the dark a bit longer.