Review: No well developed..
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2012
This is the love story of Marie McCloud and David Lake.  I liked the fact that the book engages you from the beginning and after reading a few paragraphs you know that this the love story of David and Marie.  A good part of the book details all the misunderstandings that happen between Marie and David who persistently pursues her since he knows from the beginning that she is the love of his life.  Marie repeatedly tells him that she is not interested but after spending Thanksgiving together, they tell each other that they love each other.  I felt that at this the book stopped flowing well since suddenly out the blue, Marie admitted to be in love with David, when all along she had so strongly resisted him and his advances.  The ending was also poorly developed.  It left me wondering what else happened since Marie was not quite agreeing with David at the end of the story.  All in all, this a great story that could have been written better