Review: More editing might help...2.5 stars as is.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 16, 2012
First, the author does acknowledge this as fan fiction, so perhaps my score is a little harsh. I did round up to 3 instead of down to 2 because with edits I might be less distracted. I am unfamiliar with Mr. Ward, but I am a fan of Mark Tufo and hisZombie Falloutseries. The story itself is a fairly cut-and0dried rescue tale. The characters are painted as folks you might expect in the background of Dukes of Hazzard (and I mean that as a compliment...the 'redneck oozes from the pages). So while the characters may be stereotypes, they are well done stereotypes. Some edits, especially in the dialog, would be very beneficial. Overall, it was a quick read that passed the time on a lunch break.