Review: No Character Development
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2013
The story was very rushed and not believeable at all.  If Courtney was as they described her, there is no way that she would have submitted on the very first meeting.  There was very little time to develop the characters, so you don't feel like you actually get to know them.  When I read a story, I want to get to know the character's personalities.