Review: clean romance
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 10, 2014
This story had a fairly good plot for a short story.  However the relationship between the main characters didn't develop so much as was forced into the short time constrains of the story.  If the Marshall had stayed during his recovery from the first injury a little longer to allow them to get to know each other them falling in love would make more sense.  Just needed a little editing and it could have been an even better story.  I would still recommend this story to anyone who wants to read a clean romance and I would read another story by the author.