Review: No character development
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2013
I'm all for a short erotica, but there was no erotica to this short story.  This idea could have been turned into a long hot and steamy in depth novel but it was lacking in development.  Skipped conversations and dialogues made you feel left out of the story.  Sex was nothing to write home about, not recommended by me sorry.