Review: This is only half a story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2014
I was hooked on this tale from the opening, much like I was in Immortality, Inc., but at least Imm.Inc. had the decency to be a full novel. This is just a sample, not even a novella, not even a complete short story. I would maybe have given this creative, brilliant writing five stars if it had had a good ending. Or any ending. But I can't really give any positive recommendation to an incomplete piece of work...like trying to rate a beautiful car that you are not allowed to drive. It could be wonderful or the worst piece of trash you ever drove. I felt like I had just read a Steven King novel, with no discernable ending. Should have been a warning.