Review: Awful and amateurish
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2013
The story and premise start out really good.  But as the story progresses, everything gets all crazy: weak characters, horrible pacing of events, poor (and sometimes just plain ol' stupid) dialogue, severe/extreme events and circumstances arise and the author skims right past them with little detail and emotional impact to the characters, etc...Some events unfold and are told well, but for the most part, it seemed that the author had a great story in mind and it came out "all-over-the-place."  The message was unique and interesting though, and i love the originality behind having the main character being a gay teen with a loving home/family. But the book itself was not told in a very cohesive, relatable, or gripping manner throughout.  It was a waste of money to me.I was extremely disappointed with how poor this turned out to be.  I figure this must be the author's first time writing a ficitional story like this.