Review: Good start, enjoyable
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2013
I did enjoy this book, but there were some odd elements that kept me from really liking it. The story started strong. The first half of the book was splendid, heading into the five star category. I enjoyed the opening with Wulf's men and the confrontation with Peiter. I enjoyed the early chapters with Chalcy and Sam, then the issues with Ray and then Wulf showing up. Wulf's crash course on the modern world was very entertaining. Then it got complicated with Ray, Marcus, Wulf and then Chalcy's mom and that's when it floundered a bit for me.There was a large info dump with Chalcy's mom, and then the prose seemed to become sporadic. Large chunks were either edited out or never written in, giving the story a very disjointed feeling. It almost felt as if it were struggling to find its genre (sweet romance vs erotic romance).There were some moments that pulled at my heart strings a bit and there were certainly some very entertaining moments and all of the characters were interesting and fun to read. Though I am not sure I will be continuing with the series, I recommend that you give this first book a try at least.