Review: This did not work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 7, 2014
The basic story line had wonderful promise and the characters were sound.  The problem was the flow.  Situations just seemed to get stuck in with no believable connection to the whole.  Emma driving difficult, untrained horses with no resistance from the groom simply wouldn't happen. Many situations just didn't fit unbelievably.  A husband telling his wife not to give orders to the staff! What? I love suspense in a romance, especially within a true historical setting. This story could have been great but the choppy situations kept stepping on the intrigue.  I skimmed the last half just to read the interesting pieces.  Editing would have helped a lot. This author has potential. Hope to read her next works.