Review: not bad
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 26, 2012
This is a short erotic story, surely not even the half of the 41 pages boasted.It is free so it does not really matter, but should it come for a price in the future, take it into account.The intent was that of creating a BDSM setting between a long term gay couple and the author has surely done her research but the story ended by feeling very tame and vanilla. Not bad, not badly written... just tame. Very tame.