Review: Get a new editor!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2013
The story itself was pretty decent...but Oh MY.....the editing was HORRENDOUS!!!!  Part of the way through the book, the word "time" was capitalized everytime it appeared.  Then there were words missing, cut and paste errors, and words in sentences that didn't even make sense.  Ms McMahon...I sincerely hope that you take your editor to task on this one, because they did you NO favors!!!  I almost gave up part of the way through, but wanted to see how the story ended...as painful as it was.