Review: I Should've Listened to My Inner Bad Girl....Don't Waste the $0.99!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 22, 2012
I like a little more lead-in story and some delicious foreplay before I get into the kink.  However, this book left me cringing more often than not.  Not from the sex scenes/bdsm/kink.  I was cringing from the poorly written dialogue, and the ridiculousness of parts of the story.  Spoiler alert!- Tessa takes a job, that involves signing a contract, which she doesn't read- this sets her up for some naughty punishment! The part I had issue with, was the brothers were so competitive...they didn't discipline Tessa because she liked it, or even because they were attracted to her.  Any warm body would do, so they could one-up each other.  I have issues with this.  And Tessa ticked me off royally- let me count the ways! She's whiny, pathetic and clueless.  She does everything in the name of her mother (who needs the money for healthcare) but at the end of the story she changes her mind.  So, she'll be humiliated and fondled for money, but once the guy confesses his love, she suddenly decides she can work somewhere else.  She's what I would call a heartless b!%ch.  First she wants romance, then when she gets it, she doesn't want it.  And speaking of romance, that plot wasn't too believable to me.  Anyone that gets off on sharing a woman with his brother doesn't usually turn out to fall in love with her. Oh, he quickly got possessive- but it read as an arrogant jerk marking his territory more than a situation that unexpectedly evolved from sex to love.  Maybe it's just me, but I really had higher hopes for this book.  The BDSM had some hot moments, but they were ruined by Tessa's running dialogue about "Do it for mom! Oh, how humiliating! Wait, are my underpants creaming?!" Ugh...I just had too many issues to enjoy the book.  And it really depressed me, because I SOO wanted a good nipple-clamp scene or a hot naked public display...for shame, Ms. Sinclair....