Review: Nice
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2014
This is a short story about claiming your mate with a couple hot sex scenes. There isn't a lot of character development because this takes place in a less than 24 hour period. There are hints that the MCs did some flirting and had some interaction prior to the wolf MC deciding it's time to claim his mate. Given the mythology of the mate-pull, I can see how the human MC was swept away, but I also like that he had some doubts at first about the sincerity of the wolf MC. The writing in this story is a vast improvement from that in the Lonepine wolf shifter story, so I'm pleased that the author seems to be taking the craft more seriously. There are still some things, particularly run-on sentences that need to be addressed, but there weren't many formatting issues, tense issues, word usage issues, grammar issues and spelling issues to detract from the story like in the Lonepine story. Having said that, I think $2.99 is too much for this story, but I throw caution to the wind sometimes, so you might too. As I said before, this author can tell a good story, and given the writing improvements, I will keep an eye on future releases.