Review: A distressing story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 14, 2014
This is not the type of story I like to read.  The writing style is simple and clear with nothing extraneous added to the story, but it was more like an edited journal of mad writings by an abuse victim.  It was emotional and the sad part with the baby was hard to read.I find erotic parts in any story unnecessary and distasteful, but some readers like it.Reading the abuse in the beginning made me put the story aside a day before getting back to it.While it was a bit outlandish in how the main character, the abuse victim, spoke of it, there was a hint of a good story. It was like a detective story told from the victim's point of view.Its weakest part was the main character's approach to her ex, especially at the end.  She wasn't as level headed as she should have been at that point, gloating too much, giving away too much, and not taking the opportunity of his mention of the baby daughter to accuse him out loud and shower him with words more appropriate to those circumstances, so the three stars. And some editing is needed.It was given to me in return for an honest review.