Review: Good story, but.....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2012
it seems as if the manuscript was read aloud to a speech-to-text program and then never proofread. Too many incidents of it's/its and there/their being used incorrectly, capitalization where not needed and other grammatical and spelling errors  (such as "teepee the whole house"made it too difficult to read.