Review: Interesting, but....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2013
It was hard to concentrate on the story because my "willing suspension of disbelief" kept being interrupted by all the typos and words spelled incorrectly.  Some editor didn't know the difference between "discrete" and "discreet" and while that may sound petty it truly interfered with my enjoyment of the story.