Review: Got through about 20% of it
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2013
I say time and time again in my reviews that I don't mind spelling or grammar errors since I can figure it out from the context.  Unfortunately, this is a book where it's almost impossible to read.  I gave this book an honest try and found it too difficult to read.  From reading the authors bio, his first language was probably not English...  I know it's no excuse for poor writing.This is a "Children's Book" and there is no way a kid would get through this book let alone an adult.The plot seems wonderful, I would of liked if it was more of an adult book, perhaps characters being 20-24yo, but that's just my preference.  Anyways, the plot seemed like it was excellent, but the poor writing makes it impossible to read.  If the author can find an editor willing to fix all the mistakes, he'd have a pretty good story on his hands.Also the price, 7.99 is pretty high.  For an indie author you usually expect to see 0.99-3.99, usually the price drops after its been out a couple seasons.  Paying 7.99 is what I'd expect to pay for an ebook on release day of a best selling author, like Anita Blake series.