Review: A Nice Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2012
This was not as dramatic of a tale as I wanted. I liked that the male character, Sage, would be attracted to a more "average" female. However, the dude ranch aspect was a little annoying. I wanted more details into life on a ranch. Both Sarah and Sage were likeable, as was his daughter Julie. Overall, good writing, no obvious errors in sentence structure. I would simply "beef it up" more to a heartier story. Overall, a nice read for a few hours time.