Review: Disappointed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 24, 2014
A haunted restaurant/bar is the scene of a grisly suicide and Detective Waters is keen to get to the bottom of it. Bartender Ashlyn had been dating the unfortunate victim but she knows more than she is letting on.A haunted building, a mysterious suicide, a romantic thriller...should have been great, right? For some reason, it wasn't. After reading [book:The Pit Stop|16083604], this short story was a let down. We are pretty much told from the start what happens, there is no tension whatsoever and the abrupt ending was painful.I have given this two stars for the simple reason that I know the author is better than this and she is now using it as a prequel for a full novel. That is promising...