Review: DARK AND REALISTIC
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 12, 2013
This has a decent story - but it's obscured by confusion.  The narrative switches back and forth between the two different sets of characters a bit too abruptly which sort of bogged down the flow of the story for me.  The story is frightening in that it could very well happen.  The two sets of characters are diametrically opposed - - the haves and the have-nots, the smooth and the rough, the good and the evil.  It's interesting to see how it all plays out.A few editing errors were a bit off-putting - - like the boy at the fundraiser being eleven years old on one page and then a few pages later referred to as ten years old.  Little things - - but jarring.I guess I was naive in hoping for a happy ending.  Gritty realism won out.