Review: great plots.. horrible writing.. lack of romance and humor
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 28, 2014
The plot cloudberry been great. So many, many opportunities for great humor but the author chose a really boring telling. The characters were bland and underwritten. The story rushed. And seems the author mostly wanted to flaunt they owned and could peruse a dictionary for plenty of needless "big words", but then there were so many errors it was hard to muddle through. Like changing Erics last name to porter in the book in one part. Obviously forgetting his name? Forgetting to add words like to, don't etc to sentences made it hard to not be irritating.The book was pretty boring. Too many references to a number of classic books that really had no play in the book aside from a couple of characters names. It seems the author just wanted to "name drop" and otherwise it made no sense. There was room for a ton of romance, humor and wit.. But alas, it did not happen.I don't recommend this book. Nor will I ever read any of the authors books, if there are any. It read more like.. A preteen wrote it. It was a wAste of money and time. There are far more better authors and books out there. I advise against reading this rushed and boring book.