Review: Good story BUT...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 7, 2013
The grammar errors COMPLETELY destroy the flow & vibe of the book! I was on only chapter 2 and I just can't continue right now. When I purchased this edition (part 2) it read on Amazon that there was an editor this time around. Well I can't tell. Shoot, I would love to edit this book myself because of it's potential! But I will not be purchasing another book by this author until she either improves on her writing skills as far as grammar & sentence structure OR proper editorial corrections take place.