Review: Cute story, set in 19th century but 20th century speech
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2014
I enjoyed this story, the premise that Darcy's and Elizabeth's fathers knew each other and Lizzy's father was not poor was an interesting twist. I would have given it 4 stars except for the speeches -  it was very irksome to hear a lot of 20th century word usage (luckily, no slang.) Much of the phrasing and word usage was not from the 19th century but from the very late 20th century - one example is nobody in the 19th century use the word totally as in " I totally understand".  read it with this in mind and the story'll be fine.