Review: Boring & Rushed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2011
The only reason I'd recommend this story to anyone is because it's free and so short you really don't have to commit that much time to it.There was nothing original here, which isn't always a bad thing if the story is well done. I found this one very rushed. I never connected with Sara (killing vampires to avenge her brother and friend's murders) or Wyatt (the sexy vampire originally sent to watch her after her brother died & now to stop her vampire killing).  It was unclear who Wyatt is or what his "choice" is - to stop or kill Sara? to date her or leave her?  The "bad guy" was also pretty random & unconnected to the overarching story.I've never read anything by this author, and if she has full length novels, I hope they are better edited than this. Spelling errors, typos & grammatical errors are a pet peeve, therefore, I rarely comment on them in a review unless it's really bad. There were so many mistakes littered in such a short story that it became distracting.