Review: Difficult to Rate
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2013
The story line is good. The editing was bad with missing words and incorrect grammar and punctuation. The sex scenes were written from a woman's point of view. It would have been better if they had been shorter and some scenarios were just fantasy, such as the one in the jeep.Wyatt starts out male and masculine but as the story continues he adopts more and more feminine roles and attitudes. By the end of the story he's just a stand in for a woman, male bits or not. It's unfortunate because the way this book was written indicates there will be several more books to this series and I've lost all interest in reading any more women-in-the-guise-of-men stories.It is a shame, because the story line was good.