Review: annoyed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2014
I have read 1st book in this pack and am so irritated. It is so badly written it is all over the place.  I had to to keep going back to see if I missed something. Chapter 1 should be chapter 2. Then they were having sex then dinner then more sex and lunch a paragraph later. Heck they changed days. Oh she hung her clothes outside shower, oops step back I thought she was in a bathing suit. Oh so confused. Be consistent in your content. Ie took her shoes off when stepped on beach. Then she had no shoes at hut.  Could not be bothered with the rest. Move this book to end.