Review: Fantastically ludicrous  for so many reasons
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 19, 2012
I am stunned by the really  good reviews. They could bowl me over like a rock, they came out of nowhere, and they boggled my mind. This book is so filled with trite cliches, it could be used to teach students what not to write. Unspeakably atrocious grammar mistakes, spelling errors, misused words. Constant, ineffective, pointless shifts in point of view (yes, Dear Author, I'm speaking to you). Characters LOL stupid. Plot mind-numbingly predictable. Graphic sexual scenes LOL ludicrous as they shift diction constantly for names of genitalia and sexual activities. This is clearly self-published: no editor in his right mind would risk his reputation on this tripe. Too bad we can't subtract really but then that kind of honesty might scramble amazon's reviewing algorithm.