Review: Somethings missing...REVISED!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 2, 2014
REVISION: I am revising my post.  This is the very first time I have had an author reply to one of my posts and within a day.  The author has fixed the problems with the download and the story now has all content.  She even had me delete and reload it with no extra charge.  What a courteous thing to do.  I will be sure to look for more books in the future. Thank you Ms Mills for you attention to this problem.  There are too many people in the world who would have brushed the problem aside because they already received their payment.  Let me know when your next installment comes out, I will be one of the first to download!ORIGINAL POST:I read the first two in the series ans enjoyed them.  However, the plots are so very similar and there is a quite a bit of repetition that I skipped through.  The problem with this book (third in the series) is that large chunks of sentences are missing. One second you are reading a sentence and the next you are trying to figure out what just happened.  I believe that the text was in the process of being edited and they stopped.  It makes for confusion and incoherence.  I hope that this will be one of the books that will receive an automatic update if it is ever finished.Now, back to the actual story...as I said, there is a lot if repetition.  If you read the other two books, which you really need to before reading this one, then the explanations of what they are, what their mates mean to them and the bad guys background really doesn't need to be rehashed in each book.  Don't get me wrong.  They concept of Dragon Guards is very entertaining.  I just feel like I am reading the same thing over and over.  This being said, I am looking forward to the next installment.  I hope the editing is better.  If you like The Dragon Kings by Donna Grant and the dragon series by Bianca D'arc, you are sure to enjoy these also.