Review: Wait, this was supposed to be erotica?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
The premise wasn't bad, however the "alpha" male was a pig. Just because he had a rotten home life doesn't make it okay to be a bully. He was a pig when he was a kid and an even bigger pig when he got older. It's nice when a girl with low self esteem can get such a great guy. A dream come true.I've read a lot of erotica and this didn't even get my engine started let alone get my motor running. I found the whole thing kind of, well, sad. Also the there were a lot of missing words and the tenses went from present to past in the same sentence.Extremely disappointing.