Review: Decent Story Poor Writing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2013
This is the second book I've read by this author. I enjoyed the first story but not the writing. Ordered a second hoping the lack of editing occurred only in the first but, no, this was the same. Not knowing the difference between past and passed is basic and just one example of the poor writing skill exhibited in both books. That said, the stories were decent except they had the same formula- past relationship ended due to emotional issue of the female and, in this book, a ridiculous premise that could have been cleared up quickly. Then, hero and heroine reunite due to a villain. In both books all males can only speak using the f word constantly even though they are supposed to be intelligent people. It got tiresome really fast. Sentence structure was poor and some sentences made no sense even after several readings. Author needs a new editor (assuming she even has one.)