Review: Expected so much more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 4, 2014
So this was the shortest short story ever. When I downloaded it I didn't realize it was about lesbians but when I realized it wasn't a big deal because sex is sex. So that fantasy is fine. However, the transition from Toni helping Rachel to having sex with her was nonexistent. Instead of a lead up to Toni being interested it was just there. I had to go back twice and reread to ensure I didn't miss something. The sex scene was good but stopped so abruptly...almost as quickly as it started and then it was over. I know this is free but it should have been a bit longer to really get the hot, erotic feel.