Review: good story lines
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2014
This is a collection of books, the first in the series. I thought the story lines for each were unique and interesting. However the books by author Peebles had poor use of the language, adjectives especially, and it really detracted from the stories. For ex: "he uttered lowly" - is that even a word. Also certain words were used repeatedly, ie smirk, which also took away from the drama. I would have loved to edit these because the story itself has promise.