Review: With a twist I did not see coming.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2013
I really enjoyed this short story. About 50% in there is a twist in the plot that I really had no idea about and I really thought it added to the story. My only complaint was that the conflict (and I thought the conflict points in the plot were great) were handled just a little too quickly. The MCs were so "adult" about it. Where's the fun in that? They made mistakes, they talked them out and apologized like real grown-ups. I would have loved it if there was a bit more argument. I was angry on their behalf. Me being me I'm sure I would have stomped about a bit more.That being said, I highly recommend this one.This is the second story I've read by this author(I also read the story that is featured at the end and recommend it as well).I will be looking for more by this author in the future.