Review: Is This REALLY Part of a Series?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2013
This is a short story that takes place BEFORE the rest of the series.I downloaded this after reading all of the negative comments about it, and I can honestly say that (for once) I understand WHY this got a generally negative review.There were very few times that I laughed. Considering that this is supposed to be a humorous short story, I was a bit let down.I am not one to complain about profanity, and I assure you, there is a lot of it from all the characters. I wasn't upset with that. I was, however, upset with the flip-flopping of perspectives which was not done effectively in this short story.Because I followed every characters emotions, I wasn't really able to connect with any one of them.What stopped me from giving this a "one" was the ending that I did not see coming. It was just so utterly shocking that I had no idea how to react to it. I guess that was what the author was going for in the end...I just had higher hopes for this.