Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2013
This story had potential.  It was way too predictable in some areas but completely random in others.  The choice of the main characters name.....REALLY????  I think the biggest missed opportunity with this story was that it looked like it would be about an MC but you get virtually nothing about the MC.  All of the potential drama and excitement that could have come from a story line in the MC was just missed.  It seemed like the author may have figured it out because right there at the end, there was MC "stuff" but it was too little too late for me.