Review: Good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 26, 2011
The story of Jolee with Silas is good per se. I really liked him as a hero, not your every day perfect/handsome prince. I like Jolee right until I got confused.Spoiler Alert!!!Jolee is stuck inside the trunck of a vehicle twice, where she wetted her pants in each occasion, making her not such a strong heroine. But when Carlos breaks some of her fingers, and possibly have some broken ribs from the punches she recieves, instead of asking Silas to take her to a hospital, she wants to go home?!? To top it all, when she is in labor, there is no description of the pains of the contractions!?! Ok, well I'm thinking she is on drugs to not feel those!! It makes no sense for her to be weak, and when she is suppose to be screaming and in pan, she acts like is nothing. Is like she got replaced by a heroine that feels no pain.