Review: Decent...but could use a bit of work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2013
This is a fairly cute little story of a hell hound bringing a sarcastic vampire and a sexy demon together. All in all, this story was pretty enjoyable... However, it was absolutely riddled with typos and poor sentence structure, which I found very distracting. The author obviously has some talent... yet, its obvious she's in BAD need of an editor. While I did enjoy this story, I will have to admit that I won't be going out of my way to read the author's other works. If I happen to come across another free one I might download it but I certainly won't be paying money for any of miss McBrayer's other books due to the poor editing.