Review: It was well written erotica
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 26, 2011
REVIEW  CONTAINS POSSIBLE SPOILERSIt was certainly hot and the main character seemed to come alive on pages. Of course if we poke about his actions and motivations a little deeper it does not really stand such pocking in my opinion. All his angsting about stripping and sexing? Eh tried to look for the job in another restaurant a little harder Brad? But sure, in order to write erotica he needs to be ready to do only that, I get that needs of the story demand it.And I agree with another review, I just wanted to smack him many times for not kicking Justin out pronto. It makes him look like a loser too in my opinion, or maybe it makes him look eighteen :)And it is definitely not romance, I also agree.