Review: Just awful
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 29, 2013
Editing, execution, plot -- there are so many reasons to avoid this misbegotten short story.This short tale is mawkishly obvious (child abuse ahoy!) and immature.  It reminds me of the stories that I wrote in middle school.The editing is terrible and the ending is completely obvious.  The most interesting part is when the author points out the commonalities between his life and that of the murdering father.  Reading that he never murdered one of his children is entertaining/weird.  Thanks for assuring us, author.