Review: Short, but good
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2014
I liked the story, but it was too short.  Maybe if this story longer (350+ words), there would have been more (meat) depth.  The characters had no depth or backstory.  No how's and why's.  Her reactions seemed believable.  I still liked the story.This should not have been serialized, it would have made a nice little book.  The trend to serialize stories is starting to turn me off.  The pricing is also unbelievable.  I am not tempted to buy the next installment, as they are too short.AMAZON, STOP TRYING TO JACK THE PRICES, and give readers some room to find and experience new authors.