Review: Good story, bad editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2012
I see no reason to write a 30 paragraph review that over-explains the book the way too many people on here tend to do. It's not necessary. Stop it.The story was well thought out. It was long enough to hold my interest for a good while, and fast paced enough to keep me involved in the plot.That said, the editing was terrible. The author would use the same word in multiple consecutive sentences to describe different scenes and objects. Several times, more than two dozen, he would have words that had no relation to the item he was describing or he would use an incorrect form of the word he was trying to use, i.e. effect/affect.He also needs to get a handle on writing dialects. The supposed regional speech differences were an absolute train wreck.All in all, I'm very interested to see how his work evolves. The talent is definitely there, there just needs to be more attention to detail.Buy it and enjoy it.