Review: Way too long!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 25, 2013
Not only is this book too long, it ends in a CLIFFHANGER (although the next book is already out).  Way too much time was spent on mundane details like what Dani was wearing and what her makeup/hair looked like.  Seriously, this book could have almost been cut in half.There were some typos in this book, not an excessive amount, but enough to be distracted.  There were also weird comma placements in the book.  The thing that annoyed me the most was where the author didn't start a new paragraph when a different person was speaking ("Do you want to go to dinner?" "Let's go get pizza.").  It was beyond distracting!  The book lost a star automatically because of that.Dani apparently has a magic vagina.  It's the only explanation that makes sense.  She's a horrible person who treats people like crap.  She supposedly an outstanding business woman, but she snarls at her employees when there is turmoil in her personal life, she frequently stares into space (instead of working) while thinking about her sex life, she drinks (gets wasted) while working and she has sex while working (no, her profession isn't prostitution).  She's completely unprofessional and acts like she's 16, not 25.  She gets drunk and makes a complete fool of herself several times.Corey is a total doormat.  A hot doormat, but a doormat nonetheless.  Dani treats him like crap at every turn, and not only does he take it and keeps coming back for more, but he's constantly doing sweet things for her.  Even when Dani is dating another guy (while still having regular sex with Corey), he keeps coming back!  I can't root for a guy this stupid, come on!I'm still not sure what to make of Ollie.  From the book description, he's supposed to be a main character, but he's barely in the book.  Dani thinks she still in love with him, but the first two times she sees him (after 7 years), he's a total douchebag!  If there is supposed to be some kind of Dani/Corey/Ollie love triangle here, it was a pretty big failure.There are also Dani's grandparents.  They were really confusing.  Grandpa was fine, but I couldn't tell if Grandma was supposed to be a villain or not.  She treated Dani like crap a lot, but Dani seemed to take it, so I was left scratching my head about Grandma.SPOLIER ALERT!!!!!!After what seems like years, the end of the book finally comes and Dani (even though she says she's in love with Corey) decides to dump him and run.  But before she leaves town, she decides to start making out with Ollie, and that's where the book ends.No way am I reading the next book about these losers.  I've made up my own ending:  Corey finds a nice woman to marry, and Dani gets hit by a bus on the way back to NYC.  The end.