Review: Too fragmented.....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 25, 2013
This story comes across as rather fragmented.The multiple scenarios and plots sometimes do not gel, they are just too contrived and push the needle on the readers' credibility meter far too far. .The author also has a habit of changing the name given to characters ….One character may be referred to using several different descriptions; such as the lead called ‘Leopold’ or ‘the consultant’, or ‘Mr Blake’, etc…..Still, it’s not a bad read for the price.... free….!