Review: It's not bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2014
The story was definitely not bad, but it wasn't great either. The editing was lacking, lots of incomplete sentences and starting sentences with 'and, but, and though.' The storyline was good, but reminiscent of other stories that I've read such as Penelope Douglass' books 'Bully' and 'Until You' to name a few. I think the character development was lacking. I never really felt any real emotion to any of the characters, even the main characters. When I was finished I wasn't desperate to find out what their story is beyond this book. The subordinating characters stories were lacking so much that I do not feel any real desperation to read the following books to find out more about them either. Is the book worth the 99 cents that I purchased it for? Yes. Will I read the following books? Maybe, depends on if I come across them or not. I certainly won't be looking for them on purpose.