Review: but I did like the concept
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2014
This story started off slow, but I did like the concept. However, the grammar, punctuation and awkward sentences spoiled it for me. Also the overuse of pronouns confused me and at times, I didn't who was thinking, talking etc. I found myself having to re read sentences often. I'm not a great fan of erotica and the two scenes in this fantasy story just seemed odd to me, but if you like erotica, then you'll enjoy it. The bad guys are scary and well thought out.