Review: Story is good, characters are good, needs basic editing, but entertaining
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 25, 2011
Not a bad story overall. The story is good, the writing itself is pretty good (as far as story telling), but my God, GET AN EDITOR! If you have a friend who was an English major, or who even has a good grasp of grammar and punctuation, for the love of the English language, PLEASE ask them to proofread your work from now on! In some instances the wording was so awkward that I had to re-read the sentence and surrounding sentences a few times to figure out what the author was trying to say.There were also some  glaringly obvious typos, as well as split infinitives, and basic grammatical mistakes. I know the book is 99 cents, but come on, that doesn't mean you can't ask a few people to beta read it. I was interested enough to buy the sequel, but if the books cost more than 99 cents, I wouldn't have bought the sequel due to the typos, grammatical mistakes and misspellings.