Review: it was wayyy too short : (
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 21, 2013
I can't stand stories that has potential but the writer seems to get bored ( rushed finishing) or the writer try to squeeze a story into a sequel when a sequel isn't really necessary. This story was ok, I thought the erotic parts were a little lame, it wasn't enough description for me. I also thought it was too short. Yeah I'll read part 2 when it's free, I wouldn't pay for it. I am anxious to see if leeka is really pregnant & if he's the dad. I enjoyed the story. I thought it was way too short to allow me to get to know the characters.