Review: It reads like a middle aged man's fantasy..
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2011
Unfortunately the 'good bits' weren't good enough to make it fun.  It also suffers from rapidly changing thought processes, disjointed transitions and random additions.  Attempts at describing local flavor came off as superficial and flat.  Anatomical activities don't actually seem all that likely.Seriously, if you want to read about a guy and two gals...well, isn't it great if it's a middle aged guy who is in great shape due to being a several year vegetarian, who is still thrilled with his wife of 23 years  because she so rapidly lost her baby weight and her b*****s are still big and gorgeous?  So, lucky that his wife's old friend from work (WAY too much expository thinking to himself to get these facts across) who, by the way, only has smaller b*****s, remembers the randomly thrown in fact the couple are nudists.  The friend who takes them to a nude beach, reveals that certain piercings make the aforementioned body parts much hotter, whose wife thinks it's great her husband finds her friend 'interesting' (and thank goodness the wife's friend has lost that extra bit of tummy she used to carry around), and well gosh, it's really great the wife seems to think the piercings are hot too wink wink?Please, next time just leave out the fluff and the overdone internal musings that only serve to give an excuse to have the characters indulge in sex.  Give it a paragraph, then write the sex.  That is the point of this type of story so don't waste time on a not-so-compelling backstory and cut to the chase.  And try to  make it at least moderately interesting sex.  Better yet, make an interesting story WITH the interesting sex.Sigh.JTG(edited to add two missing words...can't type apparently)