Review: hopeful for the next
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 30, 2012
This is an extremely short read, if you blink your eye you miss something.  I wouldnt even consider this a novella/ shortstory is even pushing it.  I was disappointed that Kade and Melanies story was so short. I really did like the idea of the plot, but there just isnt enough meat and potatoes. The characters were likeable, even if some of the dialogue  reads like a bad porn movie. I would think that since Kade is the heir to the pack that there would be more story to tell. The editing was bad, I had a blank page between chapters that made me go back and make sure I had the whole book.  Everything was rushed between the characters, which made the story really annoying at times. I have ordered worse books so I wont complain considering the price.  I dont know if Ms. Ryans series gets any better, I will say Im tempted to give the next installment a try.