Review: no connection
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 8, 2013
This book was set in Houston, which is where I live. Other than seeing the author throw out a few streets it didn't seem like they were in Houston. The dialect was completely incorrect, but that's just the tip of the iceberg. There seemed to be absolutely no editing. The story read like a fourth grader wrote it. I felt no connection to any of the characters and the whole thing was cliche. It was about the hood and men cheating and their down women, or supposed. These so-called ballers were wearing Roca Wear, and so on and so on. This story did not paint a vivid picture of anything. I had no feel for who the characters were. I had no feel for their environment. Honestly, this book seems like a rough draft. I read it for free and I hope that the author or publisher goes back to the drawing board. It could be better with some fine tuning.