Review: Good read... but my kindred for an editor
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2011
1. Very enjoyable read, recommended. Looking forward to the next installment in the series.2. Kat is less whiny than Liv and Sophie and more likeable, but Ms. Anderson does still seem to favor a fool as her leading lady. Or maybe the character development piece is a bit of a creative stretch, because I also thought Lock was under-written.3. Sometimes felt the momentum was lost and pacing hurt by cutting back and forth -- to re-introduce Liv and Sophie, or (unusual for this author) to force in a little humor, or to give bits of backstory.  It's a series. The books don't stand alone. Period.4. Glad to see Xairn is being fleshed out and his inner conflicts will be explored. Hope he gets the time and attention he deserves -- he could become a great antihero-hero, a dom battling his learned/genetic sadistic streak.5. Ms. Anderson, I really enjoy reading your books, but dear God, if you plan to self-publish please get thee to a competent editor or find a friend who knows real English, not webglish, to do a final read. The many grammatical errors (you're instead of your, site instead of sight, etc. etc.) are unacceptable in a finished novel.