Review: Needed some oomph!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2014
The story premise was good. However, it needed better character development. The story also needed better build up and needed more suspense. I can tell right off who the werewolf is, might as well have revealed him. The main issues with the story were the development aspect.The main character doesn't stick in your mind, I've already forgotten her name. What the writer can do for part two is to make sure we know exactly what she looks like, and how she feels about stuff . I need to sense her emotions. I can;t picture or connect with her and i think that's what throwing off readers. It's not the length of the book that's the problem is the way the story was told.Other than that, I smiled and even chuckled a few times. Another thing, that dream should have had a real graphic sexual encounter.