Review: Disappointing and boring
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 3, 2011
I was looking forward to another adventure in the world that Dara Joy constructed. I really liked the characters and the history behind them. They had been well written stories.This one started out kind of interesting. A familiar male being hunted by a female hunter. But it lost it's interest, and it's point, shortly after starting.The book is mostly, except for the beginning and the end, sex. It is framed as familiar mating. But all it comes down to is sex. For me, I at least want a story to go with the sex. More of one than in this book.If the author reads this opinion, I have some suggestions. Let someone outside your normal reading circle see what you are doing, and take their suggestions seriously. Go through your past books, and the opinions of them, and see what you are missing in what you are currently writing. If necessary, hire someone. But there are a LOT of fans of your earlier work that would be more than happy to give you feedback. Whether it's on here, WRA or some other site, ask them.