Review: Good read, but too many spelling errors and poor editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2010
This is a promising author and this is a good read, no doubt about it. An otherwise good reading experience is a bit marred by quite a few spelling and grammer errors. Also there is an error in the author's rendition of the so-called "safety" system of a Glock pistol. All Glocks have a somewhat unique "safety" that does not require turning or clicking something on or off, and the editor should have caught this. These defects do detract a bit from the authenticity of the story. However I do look forward to more from this author, hopefully with better editing.