Review: Needs some proofing and editing, but not a bad story.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2013
The characters were pretty good. The story kept me interested and reading, but the spelling and grammar errors kept pulling me out of the story.  There were sentences I had to read a couple of times to figure out what the missing or strangely spelled words were supposed to be.  There was an interesting, if not somewhat unbelievable, twist with the mother, but I didn't feel her behavior was ever explained.  The reason the hero had so much money to throw around was a hasty explanation in the middle to end of the book.  Also, the whole reason they lost communication with each other wasn't explained reasonably.  The writer put in a pretty good effort, it just needs some polishing.  I got it for free, but I would not have been happy if I had paid for it.