Review: Had potential but poorly executed...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2014
This story should have been written as one story instead of three since each of them was relatively short.  The author's writing style is a bit choppy for my taste and the story was lacklustre in its entirety.  Since the story only spanned three days it was unbelievable and had zero character development.  As a character Gemma just came across as an entitled bitch initially and did nothing but steam roll herself into Brandon's life.  Once again...unbelievable.  the concept of this story had potential but failed in its delivery.  Also page numbering is deceptive since spacing and font sizing was very large.  All in all I can't recommend purchasing this story unless it is $.99 or less.  Definitely not worth the $3.99 asking price.