Review: Oh, for an editor.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2013
This has a LOT of potential.  But it rambles, and a there are a lot of loose threads, like what exactly Cal's baggage is, and how did Jordan happen to acquire a teenage son, and the ending is more than a little abrupt.  And do Thomas and Kody have something going on?  The author has a light, appealing style, but it could be more polished, and the story just plain needs to be tighter.