Review: Good bones, now it needs meat
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 10, 2014
The story ends and leaves the reader anticipating the next chapter. Some proofreading is needed, but the story is sufficiently good enough that occasional incorrect wording doesn't grate too much. I like that Siobhan is at least the equal, if not the superior, of Fallon and Dearg. Our two heroes lack a bit of depth, but this is s novella after all. I would love to see the story fleshed out with more depth to the characters and fully developed.