Review: exciting!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2013
In one day I completed short stories one and two. I am about to start the third before reading the highly anticipated full novel. The storyline is intriguing. I've bonded with the characters and what may happen in future books. There is a perfect amount of dialogue and explanation to not drag out scenarios.Unlike the first short story, this one did have grammar, spelling and punctuation errors. I can only hope it is corrected in the future with a better editor. I am sold on this author!