Review: Problematic
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2013
The ideas and story lines are not a problem. The grammar is.  All too often I am jarred out of a scene by things like "Her and I" instead of "she and I", or "I had ran" instead of "I had run".  If this were a first time author I could accept a failure in the proof reading area, but this author has a long list of books to her name.  I researched the publishing company and cannot decide if it is a self publisher, but it does not seem to be a company with editors and staff to assist an author.Miss Fall needs to stop being so grammatically colloquial and realize that not everyone talks like an uneducated teenager.  If she wishes to progress into the realm of "real" author, she must cherish her work enough to display it only in its most perfect form: that means serious proofreading by someone who knows what they're doing.I truly enjoy the innovative stories.  Her imagination is fertile indeed, but reading one book after the other as I have done, really points out the flaws that kill the joy.  I don't know if I have the intestinal fortitude to continue reading such mistake pocked manuscripts.