Review: bad, bad, BAD!!!!!!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
The high average rating for this book is definitely misleading - I should have paid more attention before downloading it. Only 12 reviews, and most of them are probably by the author or her friends/family. There were two reasons I even finished this : 1) thankfully, it was short and 2) the writing is so incredibly bad I actually had a few good laughs. The major part of this short read is supposed to be a hot (and loooooong) sex scene, but the result  is just, well, ridiculous. The author definitely has to work on her metaphors. Let me just give you a few quotes: "two deep dimples act like bookends around an amused, white smile" .... "he brushes his lips against the sleeked-down hair on the top of my head, sending thunder down under" ... "He's wearing a shit-eating grin" ... "I realized he had ass-magnets for hands" ... "But his hungry smile launches a dimple attack against my better judgement" ... "his sculpted chest and ripped abdomen" (poor guy) "There's no room inside to feel ridiculous for crying. I'm too full of him to care". Point made, I guess!