Review: Amateur at best; Shallow, plotless, and poorly-edited
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2012
If I had paid more than $.99 for his, I would have felt compelled to give it 1 star.  There was really no plot or character development at all.  The characters were less than one-dimentional, having hardly a rational thought beyond how hot the other was.  The language felt forced.  Honestly, I kept feelinglike I was watching a bad B movie put on by horny teenagers.  It suffered from lack of editing in the worst way.  There were several instances in this short novella where a completely inappropriate word was used.Not only did I not care much about the 1-dimentional characters, I actually hated her best friend.  SPOILER:  What kind of best friend sets you up on a blind date with a werewolf intentionally, doesn't tell you, then expects you to just be OK with it?  Then when you freak a bit about learning of the supernatural and that you are a werewolf's mate, she calls you selfish and tells you to just deal with it.  Then after you are unable to immediately commit your life to a werewolf you just met and spent 1 night with, she stops speaking with you for a month!  Then there's the weird thrown in meeting with the other wolf, who is creepy and wants the girl to choose him over the Alpha hunk, even though she met him for about a minute.  Then when she doesn't choose a mate right away, the 2 males fight to the death (or submission) that same day to win the opportunity to have her.  Then she walks out because it's all too soon, and who can blame her? But then h doesn't make any effort to woo her or get to know her?  Then a month later she decides she loves him, after being in the same room with him for a grand total of 24 hours, mabe, and not having seen him for a month.  She up and quits her prestigious job, of which a big deal was made in the beginning, and moves to wherever he lives to be with him, apologizing all over the place for taking so long to come to the right decision.  What crap.  I hated this on almost evry level.  None of the characters was strong, other than physically.  The girl was a mess and never took charge of anything.  The guy never went after her or made any effort to entice her after the initial night of sex.  The best friend was totally not.  I was just thoroughly disappointed.  I would not waste my money again on this novella.