Review: Cute book, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 4, 2013
Cute book with nice pictures but the rhyming could be better. For instance, the author uses 'messed' to rhyme but it makes no sense. He messed? Messed what? His pants? That it what it sounds like though you know the author means the little bunny wasn't doing what he should. If you are going to write a rhyming story please make sure your rhymes and sentences make sense.