Review: Great Story But Please Develop More!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2013
I thought the story was great at its foundation but I was a little annoyed at a few things. One thing that bothered me was how easily the main character was to have homosexual sex. I think to make it more believable the author should have inserted more history for this character. No one has Homo sex if they are not at least bi or even curious. Characters like this perpetuate the stereotype that sexuality is only pertinent and inevitability flexible based on what one has to gain. I also think the story cut off too soon. Just as it was getting juicy it cut. There is definitely more story here. Oh and the girlfriend is just so distasteful. I know the aim the author is going for with this type of character, but once gain character development is a must. Where we supposed to hate her, feel sympathy, empathize? Make it clear by developing her, what does she feel and why, what is her history. Why is she with him? How did they meet?  One last thing I wished would have been written better was the sex scenes with the men. If the author isn't into that then leave it out cuz it shows that it was rushed and lacks sincerity and most of all passion. There are other ways to make his exploits juicy without sex scenes.I look forward to what Bossay comes up with next. I see great potential!