Review: Short story - not a book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2014
If you read this with the idea that it's a book, you expect more than you get. If you read this as a short story, it's not bad. I liked the characters and their conversations, and I like the fact that Wendy does not just jump into bed with Michael at the first opportunity. I did not like that when they did, there were no condoms, or any discussion about it. The sex scenes were a little clunky, but I've read worse. I loved Miss Andrea and Mrs. Lawrence. The other side characters were okay. The story is predictable and light (and short!).What I REALLY didn't like, was the missing, misspelled, and misused words. I could read this story in an hour. Couldn't you, dear author, find someone to read it and point out errors before you published it? For taking me out of the story so many times to try and figure out a sentence, I deducted a star. The story went from "like" to "just okay."I got this story as part of a collection of what was supposed to be a Rom/Com bunch of books. I like the author's style, but there is nothing original or even really that interesting here. It's okay for a quick lunch hour read. Would I pay more than $.99? No way.