Review: A Fun and Short Read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 18, 2013
Following in the shoes of Reflected Desire, this is another tale about an artifact from the Wicked Little Things shop with Morgan Le Fey as the owner.  While not tapping into any mainstream fairy tales, I did enjoy this story, even though I was a little reluctant to drop $2.50 for a 54 page book.I thought Tess and Kaden played off each other nicely, though I think the author could have added a few more pages of conflict at the end. It was a little too neatly wrapped up to happily ever after.  More challenge/struggle would have been nice to see the characters overcome.  I did not think they developed as nicely as the characters in the previous book in this series.  There was less growth.  Tess didn't really seem to overcome anything and Kaden seemed to overcome his 1000+ year trait rather quickly, but then it was only 54 pages.There were several typos/grammatical errors I came across and one whole paragraph that was completely confusing.  I read it three times and then had to read the beginning of the next paragraph to figure out what the author meant.  A better proofreader would be recommended.