Review: Could have been alot better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 8, 2014
Homocidial was a story that could have had a lot more potential if it was focus more on the story then the sex scenes. There were some inconsistency in that made you question the writer and go back and  re-read what you read to make sure that you were reading correctly . Again the storyline was somewhat developed but the sex scenes overshadow the story for me… There were some strong points but not many….Despite the storyline being weak the characters where well developed. The Author makes you feel like you actual know these characters, and you can feel the pan and the things that they go thru… So to me that was this authors strong point was his character development…..