Review: Cute..
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2013
Cute story. I think it may have worked better if Leo was 25 like Carly. I can't imagine a 30 year old saying some of the things he did and with exclamations at the end. Also when Leo was telling Carly his side of what happened with Skylar we didn't need to go through all that again we already read it from Leo's POV it was  4 pages of rehashing and unnecessary to the story.I did enjoy Carlys character though she was sweet but was learning not to be a doormat anymore. It was just too short for any real character development.With some editing and maybe make the book a  little longer it could be alot better.  There's define potential from this author.I'd actually give this 2.5 stars.