Review: Talented author, but proper audience targeting is needed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
The last chapter of this very short book is entitled "The Book Just Kind of Ends", and that really sums up the amount of structure contained in the book. There really is no plot.It doesn't surprise me that readers have been confused as to what age group this is intended for. While I was reading it, I even thought that if the author did adjust the language to a younger age group, he might be quite successful. As it is, we are left with topics that can't possibly appeal to older readers but with language that is not appropriate for younger readers.The author is clearly talented. There are no typos in this short story. The cover is amazing and the silly illustrations inside are great. I'm actually disappointed that this short story is kind of caught in the middle, because I think the author would score if he would make up his mind what audience he wants to target and then make the appropriate adjustments.Anyway, I downloaded this for free and am immensely thankful to the author for the opportunity to read his work.