Review: Could have been better if...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2014
To be honest, if I'd rated the book on the first 65% or so, I'd have likely gone with 4 stars. As it is, I'm struggling with between 2 and 3 stars.  This book needs an editor.  It started with minor problems.  The book jumps from single spaced to double spaced on the same page. Quotation marks are out of place (for example, "I said, ___"  instead of I said, "___).Later things get worse.  When Tae and Devon go on a date, he takes her to the amusement park. He asks her if she likes amusement parks and she replies she does.  Only, they already had this conversation when she showed him around town several paragraphs before.Near the end of the book, Linda says she has to take Tae to the airport in "a few minutes" then makes a date to have lunch with Doc afterwards.  A few paragraphs later, Tae gets a call inviting her to go to Puerto Rico "tomorrow".  Linda eventually takes her to the airport, tomorrow, and then has her lunch with Doc.As someone else said, the relationship with Kinnick and Jerome is completely unrealistic. We're shown nothing about Kinnick that would make him fall in love with her. The reader is shown no redeeming qualities to this character. Jerome meets her over dinner.  Has sex with her when she's "given" to him by her rapper boyfriend, and then we're supposed to believe he's fallen madly in love with her and wants to give her a better life.  Sorry.  No man, especially not a rich and successful one, is going to fall in love with someone who is essentially a free prostitute no matter how good the sex is. Even if the sex were that great, he'd put her up somewhere as his mistress.At the end of this book, I saw there was a preview of a sequel. I have no interest in revisiting these characters after finishing this book.