Review: Plot too complicated, motives not explained
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2014
I received a review copy of this book for free in exchange for an honest review.In The Author, Ryan Milligan purchases a modest home on Mulberry Lane, a stark constrast to the well-protected, gigantic mansion he lived in before his wife and kids disappeared. He tries to cope with the past, with his wife leaving him – voluntary or not – and with the pain haunting his heart. He wants to continue work on the novel he started about his family’s disappearance, the police’s inquiry into his private life, and how eventually he came a suspect.But the more time Ryan spends on Mulberry Lane, the more he thinks something is wrong. Very, very wrong. A local recluse behaves very peculiar toward him. Objects in his house start moving, items aren’t where he thought he left them, and the cellar door creeps open in the dead of night. His manuscript starts changing all on its own, as if someone else is doing the typing. A serial killer stalks the neighborhood, targeting young women.What’s the connection? And can Ryan find out before it’s too late?I understand what “The Author” was trying to do. I mean, the plot starts out pretty creepy, and the readers get the feeling they’re in the middle of a horror novel. Doors opening up at night, objects moving on their own accord. The plot screamed horror to me. It was also in the horror section on Storycartel.Unfortunately it isn’t horror at all.It’s a psychological thriller. I feel kind of cheated about the whole set up as a horror novel, only to have it turn out to be a psychological thriller then. And what a complicated thriller it is – so complicated there are some gaping plot holes. Or maybe just things that could’ve explained better. And in the end, the story barely makes any sense.Without spoiling it for anyone, here are the burning questions I was left with at the end. Why go through all that trouble for something so stupid? Who the heck would set up such a scheme if it could’ve been a lot simpler? And who killed those young women and WHY? And would anyone really kill so many people for such a stupid goal?I felt more frustrated than anything else by reading this novel. It’s like, the author started off with a good plot idea, but then got all of these side ideas, set up a puzzle that’s barely understandable, way too elaborate and quite frankly, doesn’t make any sense, and then couldn’t see the forest through the trees anymore. The plot ideas were okay, but mixed together, they didn’t match. Nobody would go through so much trouble for such a stupid goal. There were plenty of other ways to achieve their goal (and with their, I’m talking about the antagonists) that didn’t involve such an elaborate, complicated ruse.The writing was okay, the characters were somewhat all right – although I could’ve gone without the insta-love between the protagonist and a married woman – but the plot was too complicated to be enjoyable. I usually don’t mind complicated plots, but they have to make sense. And they need to be explained. Here? Motives are highly questionable, character behavior seems over the top, lots of things are left unexplained, and it barely makes sense.