Review: Lots of describing - not much connection
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2014
I started skipping at about 22% and kept the skipping up. It was kind of like 'Days of our Lives' - where you could miss chapters and still know what was going on. Lots of unnecessary words.The alternate points of view were not used to the best advantage. In the beginning the alternate view gave away too much. As the book went on the alternate view actually went backwards and repeated the story in a fashion.The author did conversations well, but too much explaining in between (of not much). I did not connect with the characters completely and I found the lead male to have behaviour that did not reflect someone she should be attracted to.Would not recommend this, but with some work this Author has potential.