Review: 3.5 stars. I wish it had started earlier
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 3, 2013
3.5 stars.I liked the interaction between the main characters. Bret's brattiness was refreshing as Marcus' willingness to cave to it. It's a slightly different take on submission and it breaks a little the rules of the game. It would have been an easy four stars if it had begun a bit earlier. I'm like this, I prefer to see the beginnings of a relationship than the end and I was dying to read about Brat spotting Marcus and Marcus realizing he was stalked. Missing that part of the story left me the impression the exchange of the L-word was a bit rushed. It's a nice story, easy to read and funny at times. Bratty characters are not easy to write because you can risk of making them shallow or mindless, but Bret was focused in his attitude and he was charming.