Review: Read it, and saw some future witing potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2014
This book (or short story, depending on the way others see it) has some potential for future refrence, but should have been edited by someone with at least minor experience as a writer.  I am not going to say this is either good or bad for someone who is ten years old with that ammount of experience to match.  I can't say when I was ten I had enough writing skill to write and publish a book like this one, but I think it should have gone through spell-check at the least, if not someone with grammar skills.  Since I am only two years older than the writer, and am following a goal to publish a book, I can't say that I could do any better than this, but I can at least say that if the writer follows a goal to publish more books, I would like to see the writer's skill advance over time.  Also, some advice, check the internet for other published books like the one you plan to write before publishing, I noticed that this book's plot showed striking resemblance to the much beloved Warriors series by Erin Hunter.  Good luck. :3Dawnlight of ShadowClanGood luck finding me in the shadows... >:D