Review: An OK story, but too many mistakes
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 24, 2013
A category romance that might fill a few undemanding hours.Not great and too many errors."Nonplussed used incorrectly" - does she mean unfazed?"There were four or five cars parked sporadically [in a parking area]" - use a dictionary"She rang out her [wet] hair" - ring, ring, wring it out"they'd been pouring over samples" - this homonym is used by so many writers and it drives me NUTS!