Review: Snooze-fest
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2013
I tried erotica years ago and was bored to tears...felt like I was reading someone's laundry list of sex acts. Snooze.This was no different, except worse because the sex acts that weren't boring, were being perpetuated by men described as unattractive, unclean, oh and brutal to boot (not the sexy sort of brutal, but the actual "Oh s*** this is highly unpleasant, horrifying and painful" brutal)...so not my idea of any sort of fantasy lol!! And I am totally into the whole non-consensual thing...but not this...I don't know WHAT this is supposed to be...The plot was practically non-existent; although the original premise is a good one, it just got lost (entirely) in execution. It was a bit like, as they say in fan fiction; porn without plot (and sadly, really bad porn, at that).  I had to skim, because there was no way I could justify wasting the time it would take to read every word. The characters were under-developed, and the "hero" was weak and ineffectual. (I get that may be the likely case in real life, but..."Hello...fiction...something I read to get away from the often sad reality of real life"!!!