Review: A smooth read and well paced.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 13, 2013
Sometimes the scenes are too short and the plot is a little fragmented, but overall a funny story line and good read if you are into screenplays. The writer has a good grasp on writing dialogue that has good pacing, doesn't carry on or seem out of place. I would say edit the action lines of the script to be more descriptive of surroundings and character appearance. Also set up locations better, especially in the beginning. I didn't feel grounded on why and what is taking place. But horror movies are notorious with that.As far as the subject matter, yes the first act or is a bit overblown with the 'stoner' humor, but as it goes on it progressively turns more into a character piece. A story about stoners, but still a story about personalities. However, I would like to see more emotion come through while certain events happen. While it is intended to be a comedy, the ending has somewhat of a deeper meaning to it, or at least that can be inferred.Yes it's in screenplay format. The preview clearly shows it and it shouldn't be negatively reviewed because of it.