Review: Disappointing after the first book in this series.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 25, 2014
I enjoyed the first book in this series, I didn't love it but it was a nice read - enough for me to go with the second book.  Well, I'm sorry I did and I won't be purchasing the final two books in this series.  Bottom line... poorly developed characters and storyline.  I never felt the connection between Jeremy and Ava.  The storyline left to many holes and questions.  I get that there are other books in this series and I get the whole "mystery" situation with Jules.  But characters that were specifically related to this story were pulled in but then left hanging.  I feel the sister situation should have been resolved, one way or another - what we got was not a resolution.  And then the part of the story when Ava leaves Jeremy's house after their fight and gets lost for a complete day and nobody knows and it never goes anywhere.  What was the point?  I don't get it, I kept waiting for that to come back and play a part in the plot and it NEVER did.  Now, I'm not a huge critic about editing and this is the least of my complaints about this book - but seriously there were words missing, misspelled, and some really poor grammar.  Please have someone look it over.  Now to my final and biggest complaint...  I paid $3.99 for a book that was over at 83% in.  REALLY?  17% of promos for other books.  Can't say I appreciated that a whole lot.  I definitely would NOT recommend this series.