Review: Unlikeable H
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 11, 2013
I agree with all the other reviewers, this book desperately needs some editing. Page breaks being the minimum. The other thing I didn't like much was the H, he was a bit of a b*****d and quite honestly I think the h could've done better. I'll be honest and say that I'm not a fan of 'secret baby' stories but the minimum is likeable characters. Added to that this was a short story so the author didn't have time to get us to like him so I think she shouldn't have started off making him such an ass. The ending was pretty good and prevented this from being a 2 star book.