Review: disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2013
After reading the enjoyable "Lion Hearted", I must declare myself disappointed with this second instalment in this loosely connected M/M fantasy series.The ideas are there and are good, characters are potentially likeable but writing is painfully disjointed. Paragraphs do not flow into the next, every transition is rough.Narrative tension is fleeting if not entirely absent, feelings are clumsily overdescribed, the love between the leads is unconvincing.A thorough revision might be in order.