Review: Too Bad....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2013
You know?  This person can actually write.Not a fan of the detailed descriptions of the animal killings and authors dont need to detail the torture of an animal for several paragraphs.  Completely not needed whatsoever.I say too bad in my title because alrhough this person can write, they didn't feel it necessary to professionally edit the book.  Twice, the word "clothes" were printed as " cloths" and made me realize that it doesnt matter if someone writes well  ....Tons of mistakes and typos take a authors work and downgrade it considerably just BECAUSE of lousy editing. Many instances of bad grammar use.In the year 1876, he had a pioneer woman say she felt like puking.  Sorry, but that's 21st century slang.  Not from the covered wagon days.I also agree with other reviewers about the amount of psychics.  Almost everyone in the story had this ability. Why?Way too much.This writer could really deliver if he/she, got serious and took some classes or got professional advice.  Dont detail animal slayings too much and dont do it often.  You'll lose your female audience.EDIT your work.  If you read this and say you did already, then fire them and never use them again.