Review: It needed an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 19, 2013
The story wasn't bad per se.It did have, however, quite a few errors, continuity issues, and holes that broke the flow of the story because I kept stopping and rereading to make sure I had read the word/sentence/etc... correctly. And towards the end, the 'plot' was too juvenile.The story was free, so thankfully I can't complain about spending any money on this.