Review: Better
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 13, 2013
Let me start by saying I look forward to the next installment in this series.  It reads well, has good action scenes and pretty good tech speak. The second book suffers from a touch of the ailments of the first, that is editing and dialogue. Characters still speak like Abraham Lincoln, formal and awkward, and the voice wanders, losing the reader from time to time. If he hangs in there and continues to improve, this author has promise.