Review: Good idea that needs reworking
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 15, 2011
This book has a good plot, but needs some help.  In some places it over explains things.  In others it doen't explain enough.  The dialog is short and choppy.  I don't know any 17 or 18 year old girl who calls their parents mother and father.  Everyone speaks very formal.  Its hard to relate.  There are blatent editing mistakes.  I had a hard time following the dialog because there are missed quotation marks in alot of places.  Again its a good concept, I want to know what happens with Kiera, Cooper, and Amanda.