Review: I like this author's style and enjoyed this 15 minute story.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 30, 2011
You can tell how long a story is looking at its description.  This one is only 147 KB = short - and it is free.  This author has a nice writing style that flows smoothly to the end.  The subject matter is somewhat dark and Ally pays for trusting Jeremy, but it is an all too common scenario on campuses and this story gives the victim a chance to learn from this mistake.  It also shows the hypocrisy of prejudice.Typical Frat boy Jeremy invites Ally to a fraternity party that night.  She accepts knowing that Jeremy is a "player" but feeling rebellious of the constant control others have over her life.  Ally rejects her friend Hunter's invitation to go camping that evening with the rest of the "pack" and chooses to party with people she doesn't know very well and shouldn't trust.Spoilers:This short story is a commentary on the lack of humanity one experiences when overcome with prejudice.  Although frat boys are known to act like wild animals when grouped together, it is ironic that it is just such a prejudice that makes them act out against Ally ," she is an animal.  Ally may have been born a shape shifter, but Jeremy and his friends are natural shape shifters themselves; changing from human beings into animals when overcome by their prejudice. This story also shows the results of not listening to parental advice and incorrectly feeling adequate to negotiate life on one's own - ultimately trusting the wrong people.  Revenge/Karma are hinted at.Would I/Did I buy it? Free DownloadWould I read it again? YesWould I recommend it to friends? Yes