Review: Unless you Love Bad Writing...Stay Away
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2011
Even though this book was free I had some reservations.  Based on the majority of reviews I went ahead and downloaded the book.  The writing was sophomoric and the plot so poorly executed that I ended up skimming the book rather than reading it so that I could say that I finished.  The romance made no sense.  Carly, the bar owner, was dead set against dating military, barely new Trey or Jake, then all of a sudden after spending roughly two days together on a mission (that conveniently only Carly could assist with) Trey and Carly are passionatly in love.  Jake who has been trying to get in Carly's pants for two years all of a sudden is happy for them both. If you took the sex out... I would have believed that it was written by a 12th grader.