Review: Ok for a freebie.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 10, 2012
Better than a lot of the freebie stuff.But:Cliched writing, especially about women.Tech which really seems dated, like a 1960's view of the future.  Comms panels!  Um no cell phones yet?A plot which hinges on why the captain did his bad deed, but characters and writing not really engaging enough to make me read about them rather than start paging through to find why the captain did it.  I stopped paging through before I ever did find out.This is all very negative, so I should say that I do think the author has promise.But if it wasn't free, I would think I'd been had