Review: Could have been really good...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 21, 2014
but there wasn't enough storyline to make it so.  Also, the writing was so bad.  It's like no one did a read through to make sure sentences made sense.  No editors or beta-readers???  I got this book as part of a Romantic Comedy pack.  Not much comedy in this book though... just lots and lots of sex.I liked Jordan and Tiana (as much as we did learn about them), but there wasn't enough interaction for me to feel they had any kind of relationship material there.  Okay, there WAS chemistry, but that isn't enough to carry a believable story.  Good sex does not equal love.The premise of the story was great, and I really wanted to see where it would go.  If they had connected a little more on a personal level before all the sex, I think the story would have been better.  I liked the side characters as well.  I just think the whole thing would be better if everyone was a little more fleshed out.