Review: Light and Fluffy - Intriguingly Fun
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2014
Janet McNulty has created an interesting character for her Mellow Summer series.  Two Ghosts is a cute little book for light reading – I finished it in about 2  hours.  If you’re into the macabre, don’t bother, for this is not that kind of paranormal.  If you want a lot of details on ghosts, look elsewhere.  If you just want to have fun, then you should get acquainted with Mel.  She’s fun.As for the prolific author, I wish Janet could learn the proper use of objective case pronouns.  Here’s a quote from the book:  “…he told both Kyle and I…”  Janet  made this error at least four times.  Here's a hint:  Take out the other person’s name and say, “…he told I…”  That is not only awkward, it’s incorrect.  The verb "told" requires the objective case pronoun "me."  The same rule applies to pronouns following a preposition.Sorry to complain, but that is such a common mistake.  Otherwise, the book is rather clean and well written, although the paragraph structure sometimes makes it difficult to know which character is speaking.  One awkward sentence amused me, as follows:  “…a woman in a scantily clad summer dress.”  Huh?  Was the dress scantily clad – or the woman?If you would like to proof material before you post it, please contact me.In spite of my nitpicking, I enjoyed the book enough to give it four stars.