Review: Kharma
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2014
Interesting short story. Two things I wished were different was grammar and the ending. The story itself was interesting enough to overlook the grammar issues for the most part. The ending should have been drawn out, and made a little more excruciating. This is supposed to be the climactic finish and it just felt rushed the way it happened, but it was a good short read over all.