Review: Pretty Good book.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2013
As the previous person wrote I did enjoy this book although I would have given it a 5 if it didn't read as a person who was in middle school wrote it.  It had some grammatical error and also the author used to many words when she could have used just one word to say the same thing. Kaya seemed like a misguided young lady, yes she had her own job, house car etc,  It just seemed at times she over thought some things pertaining to the two different relationships.  I felt that she shouldn't have wasted so much time on Jamall because for one he had been separated for 1 year but was still married and had a very young daughter by his wife.  If she and Jamall were to pursue a relationship it would be really hard for the both of them because you have a young child involved, and a ex-wife who didn't want to play fair. The Ex alone will make this a difficult relationship. He also would have needed time to let his divorce marinate for a while before jumping into another serious relationship. I just don't feel he was the one for her right now.  On the other hand I thought that Reyes should move out of the friend zone and go to the boyfriend zone with Kaya. Even though he told her the truth all the time about how he felt about different things and made her see tings from a mans point of view, I respected him for that.  I really would be happy to see them together as a couple. I just didn't feel that Kaya and Jamall would have ben successful with each other especially after he claimed that he loved her, then goes and sleeps with another woman. You cant have it both ways. Jamall would tell Kaya that he wanted her in the right way but then you go and sleep with someone else. Kaya will probably never have all of him. Looking forward to reading book 2.