Review: Lacked a proper ending
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2011
The story had so much potential, and was actually holding my attention...until...What happened? Never introduce people at the end! Especially when they are an important part of the plot. Then you never gave that person any type of background at all? Why not have had her just kill him in the first bloody place? I don't want to give away anything, but seriously? It ended like that? I was left wondering if I accidentally skipped to another book. Yes, the ending is that bad.Did you get bored? I wish you would go back and see this through properly. I wanted to see the relationship between Davey and Cookie be something more. I wanted to see where it would lead. ( In friendship) possibly sparking his memories or persuading him to build new ones.... even if he is dead!You have such potential, in this story and as a writer. Don't hurry endings.