Review: Great Story-Telling, But...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 12, 2013
If you liked "After--Part 1," you'll be happy with this book. Again, there is great story-telling and the characters are engaging. Unfortunately, the editing in the last part of the book is second-rate.  There are misspellings: boney instead of bony; who's instead of whose; eluding instead of alluding. I have not yet figured out the book's next to last sentence: "Feeling a tinge of nauseous creep around in her stomach, Mona retreated to her pallet."