Review: ANOTHER AMAZON SHORT STORY
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 6, 2011
This work had potential, thus the 1 star.After slugging thru this story, constantly having to reread the prior paragraph because the author changed the topic without skipping spaces or lines or what-ever denotes changing story-line. AggravatingI can usually put up with typo"s and bad grammar, etc. if its a fun read, but the lack of any detail (I don't even know who the main characters are), just highlights the  nature of this work.If Amazon demands over 20 words for a review, they should demand a specific word count for a novel, or label it a short story and sent it off to Readers Digest.