Review: Simple and Silly - A Confirming View
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 14, 2013
I used the same title as another reviewer because my comments are almost identical to hers.  The story is choppy and transitions are awkward.The bad guys are silly - Vicious people can never be incompetent clowns and people involved in drug rings are never silly - they are vicious.The plot isn't bad, but I think the editors cut and pasted large sections in the wrong place. - Kindle edition.According to the storyline, the drug S2 which was supposed to make superheros out of high school football players, did not help the players at all.  Instead of improving their play, it made them surly, uncooperative, and egotistical.  How is that going to get them scholarships and make them champions?I am surprised to see that this author is listed as a New York Times Bestselling Author.  She sounds like a teenage writer with beginning skills.I gave it two stars because parts of it are good writing and the plot has potential.  I would give it one star because of lack of realism and disconnectedness of storyline.