Review: Not impressed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2013
There was nothing to impress me in this short story. Nothing to make me want to go for the sequels. As a matter of fact, they aren't sequels, but the remaining fragments of the same novella (that was split into three as a money maker). The writing is unpolished and unattractive, the characters are just dumb, the dialogues are even dumber, and the sex scene is so lifeless, it left me cold. I skipped entire pages in annoyance. There's no originality whatsoever in the storyline. There's no storyline at all, if I think of it. I feel I just read another one of the countless works that mercilessly swamp Amazon and condemn good authors to obscurity.