Review: Tedious & repetitious
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 11, 2014
The cover description is apt, so I'll skip that. Although I greatly enjoy paranormal romances, the writing here was sorely lacking.The major problem is tedious and boring prose. At one point the lead couple literally summarizes everything that happened prior in the book for new people who arrive to help. This scene seems to go on forever. Discussions about defensive plans are endless and amazingly dull. This is the sort of book where you can fall asleep in the middle of a running gun fight, but no such luck as the action itself is nearly always off screen. The author does not try to craft fight scenes, which is probably for the best. The erotica is boring and left me skipping it. There are a ridiculous number of characters, none described in enough depth to be too interesting.No major plot progression problems.