Review: Wish I could rate more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 27, 2013
For the most part this book is fantastic the story, but there are inconstancy's that plague the reader  you can read past them with no problem, but sometimes the inconsistency's are more than you want to tolerate. The grammar has been a little better than most self published books, but the constant running of 2 words stuck together has shown a lack of proof reading. $5.00 is way to much for this unfinished book, I say it's unfinished because of the massive inconstancy's found throughout this novel as well as the constant running of two words together.On the plus side the author has a good grasp of military culture and the insight in to politics is actually pretty good. The authors ability to think and write tactically is really well done, by that it's nice to see the characters use their heads instead of lucking out that so many other authors think is tactics.If the author addressed the inconsistency's in this book and fixed the grammar by putting a space between two words this would be a phenomenal book and well worth the five bucks he sakes for it.I will buy the second book in the series but this book will defiantly need to become a second edition correcting all the problems.