Review: Badly needs an editor
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2013
Since it was free, all I lost was my time. The author appears to have been raised on bodice rippers and tried her own hand too early with no preparation. Even her adverbs made me cry. "He ravaged her slowly." Does "ravaged" conjure up the adverb "slowly"?Worse than the writing is the editing. Hardly a paragraph without a misused, misplaced or extraneous word. The mistakes are so glaring that I doubt she ever read the final draft. BTW, her book "The Gift" is just as bad with all the same errors.Gillian, please take a night course in creative writing and submit your next work to an impartial friend for, at the very least, a quick read. You'll save yours and, more importantly, the readers' time.