Review: Bad Writing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 7, 2013
Honestly, I was expecting to find actions that most men who call themselves Doms do.  We tend to glorify Doms nowadays.  I know there's are some good ones out there.  Most are just sleaze balls with an inflated ego. Anyway, that's not what I found.  Actually, I found nothing.  The characters never gelled.  This is another book I have recently read that felt like it was written by a beginner who was a teen.  The language didn't feel adult.  The thoughts didn't feel like adult thoughts.It's a dark read so I was expecting the rapes.  That didn't bother me.  The BDSM, okay it wasn't written as it should be but honestly, in real life, it's all over the place too.  So. That didn't bother me.  The problem here is just flat out the writing.