Review: BETRAYAL
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 16, 2012
This part was fast paced.  It was filled with a lot of twists and turns, as well as unanswered questions. This chapter had it all betrayal, murder, and heartache.  I was surprised that this part ended the way it did.  It seems Jeremiah might lose Lucy to his brother Lucas because of his aloathness and indecision.  Hopefully a part six will answer all questions.Suggestion to the Author - This story needs to be wrapped up.