Review: Entertaining
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2013
I enjoyed Aaron's short offering, and while I'm sure the purpose was to invoke more of a sexual response, I honestly found myself annoyed. Not with the writing, because it was assuredly on point. No, I was more annoyed with the lead character Yolanda. I didn't like her from page one and I suppose one can construe that any way they like, but she was opaque in her shallowness. Even at the end with outcomes as they were, I felt nothing for her. No remorse, no sense of loss, simply a shrug and "oh well,". I want to again commend Aaron Bebo for penning a great story and of course this will probably not be the last offering I read by this author.