Review: Highly Improbable Story Continues!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2014
Ok, the last time the Commonwealth Expeditionary Force (CEF) went on a mission, it turned into a disaster that was only resolved at the last second with some success.  Still, the CEF got bloodied pretty badly and the Commonwealth Council was beginning to question the reason for even having a CEF.  Instead of thinking about the conquences of getting right back into the same situation, they jump at the chance to send the CEF right into the same stupid situation!No one in their right mind would want to intervene in a planetary-wide civil war.  Common sense would have said that the Commwealth should not get involved in a single planet's internal troubles.  So, having done something stupid right off the bat, they compound it by staying too long instead of pulling out as soon as they realized the local government didn't want a reasonable solution.This is a good story about a senseless action.  The writing is fluid and the editing is pretty good for an Amazon ebook.  The characters are realistic although a little young to be doing what they are required to do.  The author does make it sound as if the Commonwealth can't defend itself against Wolfbane, but I think there may be a few surprises in store or the Commwealth won't be around at the end of this series!