Review: enjoyed it, but it's hardly a story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 30, 2014
3.5I was surprised by this one. I had VERY low expectations, but ended up enjoying it. Despite one character being blindfolded and tied to a pole it managed to avoid feeling like (or being) rape. Amazing that. I liked Christopher's shyness as well as his dominant streak. Hard to imagine the two in the same person, but it worked. I got less of a feel for Logan, but liked what I saw. It well written and fairly well edited.I do have a complaint about it being the first in a series. I seriously dislike serial short stories. If you're going to write the pages anyway, why no just publish it as a book so I don't have to buy each chapter? When it comes down to it, that's what I see a short story series as—a book you have to pay each time you want the next chapter. The fact that it's called an instalment is just semantics, IMO. I refuse to buy subsequent chapters on principle. Then again, it's possbily a stretch to call this a chapter even, it's more like a 29 page scene and little more.As a freebie I enjoyed Hazing Moon, though.