Review: A bit disappointed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2014
Let me begin by saying I love Avery Gale and her books.  I have ready alot of them and have enjoyed every one.  When I first read the Masters of the Prairie Winds Club first Book, I was very excited for the series to continue and when I found this book last night I was thrilled.  As I read the book I was tempted to return it to Amazon and a huge disappointment.  The first half of the book is very rough & disjointed, the time lapse between incidents is all run together.  Half of the paragraphs you don't know who is talking, so many typo's that I had to keep re-reading to figure out what was being said and by who.  One paragraph had Gracie and her Doms getting ready for a scene and the next it was a couple weeks later all in one paragraph.  I was over half way through the book before it smoothed out enough to make sense and get interesting but its still jumping time without making sense.  Avery Gale either rushed through this one or someone else wrote it on her behalf as it isn't near the quality of her other books.The story began as the first book left off which is always great, I think the story line itself is great but so very disappointed on the quality.  between the typo's, the time lapse within the paragraphs and story and the way it bounces around really leave me not enjoying the story.  I have less than 20% left to read and if it all comes together in this little bit that I have left, it will be a miss-mash of an ending and be very unsatisfying.