Review: Too many ridiculous details
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2011
As for the story itself, the idea was strong and could have been quite enjoyable if not for all the details. As much as I enjoy detailed descriptions of places and people this story had neither. It did however have details about opening the car door, closing the car door behind him, lifting up on the handle so he could open the door, getting in the car and closing the door behind him...I don't need someone to tell me how to open a car door, we all know you pull up on the handle. It is to be assumed that when you are getting out of a car that you're going to open the door. This entire story was detailed well beyond what was needed and was very distracting. It actually ruined what could have been a great story.