Review: A hot story--too short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
It starts out interesting.  I don't like cliche words like sodden and sopping; it's too much information.  It just ends abruptly, forcing you to possibly buy the next few pages and so on.  That is super annoying.  There was a paragraph where the verb tense changed.  I'd love to meet this guy and bring him to my house, however, then have an all night party.  He wasn't enough of a thug for me, though.  I'd like him rougher.