Review: Could be good, but.....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2012
This could be a good book and a good series but one simple thing is preventing this from happening. I don't know if the problem is caused by the author, her typist or Amazon but someone needs to learn to hit the tab key at the start of a paragraph and at the end of the paragraph place a period. Then hit the return key one time only and hit the tab key for the next paragraph.  No indention and the mutiple blank lines make this book appear to have been written by a child who knows nothing about writing.  It is almost as if multiple blank lines were inserted to take up space so the page count would be higher.  Some proof reading instead of relying on a spell checker would also be advised.