Review: Good first book!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 19, 2013
I loved the cast of characters and the story in general and this series could become very intriguing. Where this story breaks down is in the editing and grammatical errors and the plot seems a bit pushed along at first. The characters start a relationship stemming from a one night stand, so the "getting to know you" banter is missing and the first couple of scenes between the H/h feel more like hook-ups. The subplot in the book could have been fleshed out a bit more and the POVs had a way of slipping as well. All these technical errors can be corrected in the next book. This was a good start to the series