Review: Not perfect but not bad at all.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2014
This is a pretty good story, certainly not a waste of time to read. The ending has a nice twist that I didn't expect, and the characters, once the story got going, were interesting. I wish the author had fleshed out the story of the bad guys a bit more. Their motivations were unclear for most of the story, and never very compelling. I agree with other reviewers who said that the writing needs a good edit, just a good housekeeping, trimming here and there, and filling out weaker areas a bit. I think this author has a lot of potential to write some really good stuff. This story is almost there, but not quite.