Review: Great story,writing style needs WORK!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2013
This series would have made by favorite list if it was not for all the analogies. It simply isn't needed for a story to be told. The things that makes a story great is it leaves something to the imagination of the reader, every action of the characters in the story does not need to be explained. The story line was great but the characters should have been allowed to come to life on their on accord. Remove the analogies and set the players free and you will find a "ride or die" reader in me!