Review: Magic Out of Control!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2011
This short story is about a teenage girl looking for friends and hoping she can increase her use of magic. A friend from school comes over to help her and she hopes the girl won't be finding her collection of teddy bears too juvenile. Her father keeps buying them for her and she just doesn't have the heart to tell him she doesn't want any more of them! She wanted the one so much because it connected her to her deceased mother.With the attempts at magic... the spell goes wrong and the teddy bears come to life and start attacking the two girls!Enter her handsome and very highly gifted in magic brother....A magical UNDO spell by him saves her from a terrible fate of being killed by teddy bears.Unfortunately, her handsome brother also then walks off with the girl she was hoping would become a friend.It was a good, easy read and a great short story for young adults.  A little awkward in spots... the writing could stand some polishing.Remedial Magic