Review: Being Responsible
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2011
The story offers a fun way to talk about manners, and self control, and the reason to use them. I felt editing was needed over all. Rhyming and rhythm are not necessary, especially if the message is clear. But if you must, run it by someone, have someone else read it aloud to you... it doesn't flow well. The pictures needed more work. It seemed the readers weren't considered worthy of the effort they were asked to put out.