Review: Great hero ... but story needs further development
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2011
Description: Soon-to-be single mother, Bonnie Gabrielle, is just about to pop, when a sexy Special Forces soldier, Conrad Lewis, literally lands in her front yard. When they get stuck together weathering a hurricane, they end up creating a quiet storm of their own.The Good: I would have loved to have read this short-but-sweet story when I was pregnant. The concept is great, and there's nothing sexier than a man that knows how to handle in the bedroom and in the nursery. What a great hero.The Bad: See the Editing issues section. Also, the premise was good enough for a longer story, and the characters deserved more development. As a short it felt rushed and underdeveloped.The Naughty: Steamy sex, explicit language.Editing issues: Lots of grammatical errors.Publisher: Dahlia Rose UnscriptedLength: ShortFinal Grade: C+Happy Reading,Theodora from IRbookreviews.com