Review: Not quite right
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 20, 2012
I was very excited to read this book based off the description. However, the editing was very poor and the story itself did not flow very well. I tried to get into the story and hoped that things would pick up but I honestly felt like I was reading a journal and not a novel. Sadly I was not able to finish the book, half way into I realized that the remainder of the book was going to have the same issues and I could not continue to read it. I think that the author has potential but he needs to continue to work on his craft and use a professional editor.