Review: Could Have Been A Great Story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2014
This could have been a great story about two great people getting together and falling in love, despite their trials and tribulations. This book kind of fell flat in my opinion. The real meat and potatoes character development was sorely lacking throughout this tale. There are also spelling and grammar errors galore. Then there are those things that just don't make any sense whatsoever. For instance a baby is born. Is it a girl? Is it a boy? Once again, is it a girl? The author would be wise to hire an editor before going to publication. I could have found this book intriguing. The subject matter was great. I love stories of pioneers and their hardships. I have enjoyed a great western yarn since I was a young child. This one just left me scratching my head.