Review: Just Okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
I feel like there could have been more characterization of the two MCs in order to make this story more involved and more interesting. What I mean by this is that Isaiah fell a little flat as a character for me because the things we saw him doing throughout the story seemed contrary to the character information that we get from Sean. I could have been okay with that if there had been more story line or more explanation that led us from one to the other, but there wasn't. I also felt like the history between the two men would have been the perfect setup for providing a flashback so that the reader could actually see what happened with them, but instead it was all expository.The story line and characters were interesting, but it all could have been more thorough and made for a great story instead of a mediocre one.