Review: Could Have Been ALOT Better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 21, 2014
I'm a little taken aback by the swift progression of the plot, as well as the romance between the two characters. All in all, I liked the concept of this book. However, the execution left a lot to be desired... First of all, the story was very interesting to have the heroine and her stalker actually form a relationship that is not just bad guy/victim. While reading the story I just couldn't really get into it with all of the grammatical errors and switching POV's constantly. It would have "Drake" or "Mandissa" as the title for the chapter, and half way through we would be back to the other's POV without any impromtus. I had to reread the paragraphs a couple of times to figure out who was talking and what was actually happening. Her boss poised a threat at the beginning of the story, but just kind of went away. Then we have Rico come into the picture, and then there little battle is very disjumbled and hard to read. So, now we are talking to a guy named Antonio??? I'm lost...