Review: Great story with subpar editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2014
The Spacer Clans Adventure series is imaginative, exciting, and well conceived. However, the third installment, Naero's Fury, suffers from a lack of editorial polish with obvious, rampant errors and inconsistencies. The writing is still compelling, but if you are bothered by the stuttering effect of improper tense, wording, or punctuation, and other glaring errors, you may feel frustrated that your $5 didn't purchase the kind of clarity and streamlining one would expect from such a price tag. It needs to be edited again in entirety as there are blatant errors on practically every page. For lack of professionalism, and thus being overpriced, -2 stars.