Review: holding on-only just
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 18, 2013
What a terrible shame. Finally a book of decent length, a great story line, but the dialogue is ABSOLUTELY HORRIBLE. Cringe inducing, childish and nonsensical sentences held in almost every set of speech marks. Almost painful to read, only the promise of a great story making it possible to keep reading. Please-read what you've written out loud before publishing.