Review: Pretty good read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2013
There were a couple of things here that normally would have bothered me, but in light of the story itself, I was able to look over them. One was the typos, and one point when one of the MCs was called the wrong name. The other was the part where they experienced flashbacks, one for Brady and one for Ryan. Then they each had a 2nd one, which I at first thought was unnecessary, but it did make the pieces fit a little better. True, Brady should've have been up front when they first met, but once you read the whole story you understand why he hadn't been. Ryan pigheadedness was really starting to wear on my nerves though. And I didn't care much for his sister, Ellie. And why was Brady's daughter allowed to have the mouth & attitude of a 21 yr old? All of the little issues aside, I did enjoy this story overall. Sex scenes weren't piping hot, but they were still pretty good.