Review: Good story, but too short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 18, 2011
I really liked the story overall and enjoyed it, however adding say 1 more chapter to cover each of the 5 days spent at the contest would have helped bring the characters to life more, and fleshed out the story more. We could have seen more of what went on, (I know I would have enjoyed that, these are interesting characters) and gotten deeper into the story. Perhaps a little more of Margo playing hard to get, drawing out the romance and seduction.For a longer story I would definitely add another star.The author is definitely talented.