Review: Bland.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2014
Insecure, curvy female has crush on slightly older army officer.There is angst (on female's part), longing (on the male's part) and a bit of 'mayhem' thrown in, along with the sex of course!To me this story felt pretty mechanical in its telling. As short stories such as this tend to do, there was no room for character development,and even when the author tried to stir something up between the two lovers, it fizzled out so quickly that it was as if it had never really happened at all.Quite bland. Didn't feel it was worth my time or money. Felt more like the author was trying to include every trick learned in ones creative writing class to make this work, but it didn't.