Review: Great premise but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 27, 2013
I thought this story premise was great and kept me guessing and trying to work out who Francesca was right until the end.BUT the language bothered me. It could just be personal taste, but in the end I found it overpowering and completely distracting. I understand books need to be gritty but I believe the author used too much cursing. I found myself putting my kindle down frequently and walking away. I wouldn't recommend this book to a young adult for that reason alone. I don't want that sort of language being repeatedly put into my children's heads, it's not healthy.If the author is reading this, I ask you to consider a rewrite with that in mind as I'm sure a lot of parents feel the same and I think your audience would grow if that was addressed.