Review: Had promise, but....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 1, 2013
The story had a lot of promise. Although well written, there did seem some parts where the story seemed to skip and went straight into something else. I found myself sifting back to see where I had missed it. I hadn't. Whole weeks and even months were just left out. As I said earlier, despite that, the story had promise and again, was well written by the author, but, and this is just my personal preference, I just could not like the "hero", Black Moon. That is in no way a reflection on the author. I just did not find anything about him attractive. At all. From his physical description, which seemed more boyish, than warrior like, to his CONSTANT anger, hatred, bitterness, temper tantrums, moodiness, sulkiness, running off in a huff...good grief! The guy was more like a moody teenager than a romantic hero and warrior. Even his own tribe had no respect or liking for him. I liked Katie to a degree, but, she seemed far more of a parental figure, than a heroine head over heels. I guess if you like that sort of arrangement with a moody, belligerent, mentality of a teenager, kind of guy, and a woman who is content to constantly baby him, then this is the book for you. Not my cup of tea. Black Moon just made me cringe. Honestly, I just wanted to smack him. I finished the book only because, I kept hoping it would get better. I kept hoping there would be a turnaround in Black Moon's character. It didn't happen.