Review: There are no words
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2013
I love reading erotica. I love menage books. This is one of those books I just yell at.I felt the h was much to stupid. Sex with these guys was all hurried it seemed. No prep for anal sex-come on huge guys, female who has never done this before and you just "plunge" right in? Sex was rarely with all of the men involved even when they were there. You would think they would at least be touching, holding her legs, kissing, stroking. Nope. I had no idea where they were half the time. I don't think she did either.I spent half the book yelling at the h telling her not to do stuff and the other half talking to myself about why I didn't listen when I read another posters review and bought the book anyway.I felt the "flow" was off. Disjointed, no connection between one day and the next. No development of character and plot. The basic plot was good, it just needed more work. A lot more work. This was my first purchase of this authors work. I don't think I will be buying more. If she hasn't got it right by book 6, I don't think it's gonna be worth the wait. For me, this book was not erotic, it was pathetic.***SPOILER***"You're kidding ,right? You are NOT going home with these guys after 15 minutes?""WAIT wha..t?? sex ALREADY? no PROTECTION? YOU DON'T KNOW THESE MEN!"So you are there having sex with three men. AND cleaning their house AND doing all their laundry AND doing all the cooking...and they aren't even buying you presents, lol. Puleeze!NOT worth the money! Really, it's not. Even if all you want are the sex scenes, it's not worth it.