Review: I'm A Book Shark Reviews
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 11, 2014
This was super short, but it felt like two uneven halves to me. Thirds maybe. I liked the first part, where she was getting her tattoo and they were both feeling an attraction. I also liked the middle part, after the tattoo (which is all I will say so I don't spoil anything). But the last third I personally didn't care much for. Just my opinion. Maybe it's because I couldn't relate. Or maybe this wasn't the kind of thing I really wanted to read right now. But I figured I would because it was short and I had an hour to kill. Hmm.This definitely could have used another proofreader, as there were quite a few obvious things and then other subtle ones. Some variation where the word 'say' was involved would have been good too. Almost every dialogue tag was the same. I know that I'm picky and some people don't mind that, but I do. Oh well. :o)I didn't think it was time wasted, so that's good. I enjoyed getting to know Harley and Trey, and I'd even like to check out their full book because the idea of what's to come is interesting. I wonder how it will work out.