Review: Two words. PROOF READER
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 8, 2012
But a review has to be at least twenty.When I go hunting for new meat in the freebies I know I am going to find some shockers to pique my ire and sure enough.... here I am again.My dear old grandmother would remind me "if you can't say anything nice then don't say anything at all" but even she would have to have a swipe at this one.For fiction to work I have to believe, and that is only going to happen if I can become immersed in the story and that is not going to happen when the author is distracting me with buckets of typos and klutzy grammar. I can't trust an author to take me to another place when their skill with the language is too embryonic to realize that there is a difference between THERE, THEIR, and THEY'RE , or even TWO, TO, and TOO.Sure it was the right price and "what do I expect for nothing?"..... if you put it out there, more than this.Gave up after a week. Reading this book is more unpleasant than pulling teeth. My own. Mr. Smith should stick to writing in his native language.Anymore than two stars comes from a rentacrowd.