Review: Needs A lot of editing work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2014
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Thank you to the author for his generosity.The premise pulled me in, but I soon became disenchanted.The good:-The author shines a light on bullying.-the vampire/human relationship is reversed (kick ass female vamp w/underdog human)The bad:-I feel no empathy for Jonathan despite the horrible amounts of bullying he goes through.-Thorn has no depth, and we are not even given any hints to her history, only a vague reference that she is very old.-The whole book is riddled with errors, enough that they continually pulled me out of the story.The book can be better, if the problems are fixed. As another reviewer noted, a developmental editor is needed to bring out the potential the book offers.