Review: Free book, focused on relationship
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2013
Sometimes difficult to follow who is thinking what when the focused character keeps changing, even in third person it alternates between whose head the reader is in sort of abruptly. Might just be me but I found that somewhat confusing.The relationship goes from being distantly, though friendly and familiar, to suddenly madly in love, also a bit abrupt. Most of the story is the characters talking about relationships.Would have been good with more action.