Review: No Real Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2014
Tempted is supposed to be an office romance story, however, it lacked the romance. Not to get me wrong, it had a lot of hot sex, which is fine but there was no build up to the story. I like my romances to build up. I found the first sex scene unbelievable. I believe they should have gone halfway and then held back. She said she hated him and the next thing you know she is wanting to be with him...that's not natural. I think the elevator scene is where the story started to go wrong. I would have let her continue resisting, he would kiss her in the elevator and touch her. Build the sex from there, but a full out sex scene lessened the impact of the rest of the story for me.However, I liked the sense of humor, and the descriptions. Jason wasn't very likable to me though.