Review: Goodbye, Morality! What a Waste of Time!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 13, 2014
This book had a good story line and I thought I would enjoy it.  Well, right off the top, two stars for all the typos and the extremely run on sentences and other bad grammar!  Any author who can write, "they've have had...", just being one example of all of the carelessness of the editing process, surely doesn't deserve to be a five-star rated author.  Typo after typo after poor grammar and totally careless editing is definitely not worthy of these five stars!  Another star off for all of the explicit sex involved.  It added nothing to the story line and as far as I am concerned, detracted from the writing!  Just sexual sensationalism which is not needed and could have been handled much more effectively to add to the story instead of detracting from it!  Then, sorry for this, Mr. Eidemak, but all the blood and gore was not necessary, either.  You had the bad misfortune of my coming to the part where the body was fed into the wood chipper and then into a pool of maggots while I was eating dinner...  NOT the best way to make friends and influence readers!  Another star off!. I would detract another star if I could for the ending.  Crime doesn't pay?  Then why does everyone but John come out of this rich and famous?  If you wanted to make a "crime doesn't pay" story, you missed it by millions!  All in all, I would not recommend this book to my dog!  She likes me to read to her, but in this instance, even I didn't want to have to make her listen to the contents of this book.  The story line itself could have been good and in general was.  The rise of a criminal and how he overtook the stock market to the point of being "too big to fail."  Although John did fail, miserably, his compatriots certainly did not.  If they could turn on him and come out like they did, then... why the "goodbye" to morality?  Everyone else had a life of leisure and love, but John...  Just, in my opinion, this is a poorly written book, full of typos, run on sentences, poor grammar, and a total waste of time and effort to read.  I would much rather pay for a good book that I can enjoy than read a free one like this again!  Usually I beware of any book that has such great ratings by so few people.  Next time, I hope to take my own advice more to heart.  I certainly won't be reading any more of your careless writing!