Review: With a little editing....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 29, 2012
This book starts out interesting and gets more interesting as it goes. It does need some editing. Clunky sentences like "and he's made heart thumped in her chest just by smiling at her," and "friends were rare and heartfelt invitations gifts to be treasured" made me stop reading and read the sentence a second time to make sure my eyes weren't playing tricks on me. There is a lot of missing punctuation in this particular title. I think this could be a brilliant book if it were properly edited. The plot is good and the characters are likable. I hope for an update so I can come back with more stars.