Review: wonderful book
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2014
I thought this book was excellent. The character development was really great -- there was character growth by both characters but without them acting psycho or wishy washy or super unrealistic. The dialogue and thought processes were some of the most natural that I've read- nothing sounded fake or stupid or unrealistic, which is amazing considering part of it includes bikers and Croatian mobsters. The writing was excellent as well -- at first I had a few problems because I thought the author could have put in the backstory sooner because I was confused about who was who because she didn't explain it for a while, and she could have used some proper nouns instead of pronouns a couple of times. I do agree with a previous reviewer that it probably could have been shorter because it almost started to drag, but other than that, a great first book. Looking forward to more if they're all going to be this good!