Review: It had potential, but
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2013
the author killed it with too many "thoughts" especially from Angela.  And many of the "thoughts" were repetitive.  The story would have been much better with more dialogue between Isaac and Angela and letting us experience more of the interaction between characters. I would like to have experienced his father's reaction and the conversation between Isaac and his sister about the news. An epilogue would have been a nice bow.