Review: teenage  fantasy, no insight
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 31, 2011
This book had to be written by a 15 y/o teenager with fantasies.  He doesn't know women or men.  The writing isn't bad except he needs to get real, even though it is fantasy, this kind is embarrassing for the whole female sex and probably most of the males over 25.  The story parts are ok, except it gets worse and worse, so the real book is only short story length.  I would suggest he grow up before writing any more---or go into porn so his readers could place him in the right genre.