Review: It Was Just OK
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2011
I wasn't really sure what to expect when I started this story - the Kindle description had me believe one thing, and as I got into it the tale felt like something else.  Then, at the end, we revert back to my original preconception of something about Neptune, King of the Sea, and mythology.If you think about a short story, due to the limited amount of words the author has to grab you into it quickly from the story line to the characters.  This one left me feeling a little "blank" for lack of a better word as the ending literally came out of nowhere and did not relate to the other 95% of the book.As I type this, the story in the Kindle format is free - I would have felt cheated if I had paid anything for it - which explains the three star rating.  If this one goes back to a full price, I would take a pass as there are better short stories to read.