Review: Good story, poorly written
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2012
This story was good enough to keep me involved until the end, however it could have been a great story with better writing.  The author needs to remove every "had" in the book and then go back and edit it.  It seems that most of it is written in the past tense, sometimes switching to present tense, then back to past tense.  I am glad this was a free read.