Review: Pleasant little story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 19, 2011
There is a good concept lurking in the middle of this uneventful piece, but I think the writer couldn't decide whether it was fantasy or a story with morals. Not that one or the other can't coexist. The stage was set with two strong characters of Faldon and Selina, with Faldon bearing a curse, which makes him untrustworthy to his own people. The thing I found most confusing was how they travelled to and from hither and fro, to the extent that I didn't know whether they were coming or going. The end was unexpected that I will grant you, but it deflated the story a little, because it had taken so much time to get there.