Review: "The Temptress"... how could you not fall for her
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2012
"The Temptress" is a short story by author Jack Gallow. This Kindle e-book was a 87 Kb download and was free (normally $0.99) at the time of writing this review.I would place this work in the thriller category with touch of horror (if you'll pardon the pun) thrown into the mix.Please note: the author contacted me to let me know this work would be free on June 04, 2012.<spoilers>Our nameless stalker has finally made a commitment... after night upon night of spying on his luscious victim, tonight he has finally gathered up his courage and will meet his 'love'. Unfortunate for him, he's not the only stalker.<end spoiler>Some thoughts on "The Temptress"...1.) a story that quickly grabs your attention and holds on.2.) impeccable pace and timing... both elements are a must to have a great short story.3.) the author has an accomplished descriptive style that gradually ratchets up the edgy,  creepy tension as our 'hero' reaches the point of no return.4.) use of a different font to indicate what the main character was thinking... adding to his character development.5.) cover art... stunning in its simplicity, choice of colors and the font used for the title.Conclusion:A short quasi-horror thriller.Well written and skillfully told... plus the perfect length.5 Stars.Ray Nicholsonraynicholsonsreviews@hotmail.com