Review: Still reading this one
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 23, 2014
This is apparently not the first book in the series. Things are referred to but you have no clue what they are on about as none of it is explained. While I don't like books that belabor what went on before, it would be nice to have SOME clue who they are talking about and what the situation is if they are going to keep on referring back to incidents in the past. (ex. they keep referring to Cole who apparently died but is that his child? family member? what?)The entire book needs a serious editing. There are typos throughout and many times appear to have had a "replace" done in the editing software that did not work properly... for instance, you often see things like: back in the eighties80's. There are a few areas where they edited some phrase and both phrases are still there as well. It's a bit annoying. Someone needs to go through it, find all that kind of mess and fix it.If you don't like graphic sex, you'll find yourself a few times skipping ahead looking for it to end which is what I do.The story itself is sort of interesting but waaaaaay too convoluted. Too many interested parties with unknown motivations. And too much thinking, too much talk about his ADD and how it makes him think random thoughts that we are all then bombarded with.  There's too much driving around and nobody ever sleeping or eating yet somehow their reflexes are not muted at all.I keep getting REALLY bored and in my head go yada yada yada and skip skip skip. Generally I read a book a day. I am on day 4 with this one. I am interested and will finish it.. I am at about 90% now... but dang. Hurry up and get to it.Also, some things are just straight up dumb. The bad guys keep finding him.... he's using his own car and credit cards and rental cars that have GPS. Um... HELLO!!! Don't you watch TV or read? This includes a professional NCIS officer who uses her own car and cell phone and then is surprised they were able to track her down. She finally gets a burner phone then uses her mobile internet device on her personal lap top. Um... yeah, that's gonna help you stay hidden.Otherwise, the story is interesting and you want to know who is behind it and what made it all happen.