Review: 3.5 stars - on the fence
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2013
Reviewing this book is a tough one... it's almost impossible to discuss the things that made me uncomfortable without giving away the storyline so I'll attempt to avoid any spoilers. I'll start with this... I finished the first book in an evening and quickly downloaded the second book. There were a few things in the first book that made me uncomfortable but I overlooked them because of the break neck pace and excitement of the storyline. I was thrilled that there was already a second book out. Upon starting the second book things were going great but the story began getting a little too twisted for me. I'm having a hard time mixing storylines of love and Mistress/Master scenarios. By the last quarter of this book I was completely uncomfortbale with where the storyline was going- mainly the last few scenes of the book.And on top of that, there are major editing issues with this book. There were dozens of sentences where I had to fill in a word like "the" or "and" in order for the sentence to make sense. This bothers me because both books had this issue and both books have notations in the Amazon description noting that the new copies have been "edited". I was dying for a highlighter so I could take notes and send them back with all the corrections. I dont normally complain about things like that in a book but they were pretty distracting the second time around.I am mildly interested in reading a few of the authors spin off books because one or two of the characters seemed pretty interesting. I'm going to think on it for awhile before commiting though.