Review: Decent story, but there are severe grammar problems.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2013
This story was well written. There were a few parts that defied common sense, but overall, it was a good read. If you like stories where the main character goes from ignoble obscurity to fame and fortune, then this book is for you. The big issue I have with this book is that it is edited poorly--if at all. There were many, many times were the wrong word was used. Descent instead of decent, for example. Many words were either missing an ing or ed at the end, or they were added on when the sentence tense did not call for it. I was pulled from the story so many times because I had to interpret what the author was trying to say. This is a story that could have been so much better if the author had taken any time to edit this book.