Review: Meh. Liked the first one better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2013
After reading the first part of the story and enjoying it. I noticed a significant difference in the second. Where the writing seemed to flow in the first part, the characters developing quite nicely and the story progressed naturally- this one seemed... stinted and rushed. It felt like the writer was in a hurry to write and it just caused the story and the characters to fall apart for me. It is a short segment to the story. You won't get the whole thing, and I won't be reading any further in the series. It felt like I was reading a rough draft. It needed polishing. With that said, the concept is very interesting, and it had some nice imagery.