Review: Unsure but has something!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2013
It is obvious that the writer is a novice but the story line is reasonably interesting so you can overlook many of the grammatical errors.  It was also free which is always a bonus.  Do I want to continue and know more about Ryanne and Colton?  Not really, but at the same time there is potential here certainly making it worthwhile for YA readers to explore and enjoy. I normally love books for YA but they need to be a little tighter in presentation.I think there are some inconsistencies and the characters are mostly flat and one dimensional but there is promise and I look forward to reviews about the next book by other readers.