Review: An okay read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 13, 2014
I love to read  work that will keep you in suspense, At times this read delivered ad others it became repetitious in the plot. The kidnapping and the escapes were  a great set up but at times for me a tad bit unrealistic with no retribution. The plot was a page turner sometime sin a good way and others in a very bad way, The editing was .....  it was follow able but  it was horrible. o Not a hater it just took from the plot for me. There was a couple things that should have been caught before publication like , name changes about the same character, one section it was Par then the name was Pop and it was describing the same character. Another part one of the characters was said to have been killed then in the next the same named character was back and holding a gun with no explanation.  The story has  good potential to be good even great