Review: Interesting concepts but not too gripping
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 3, 2011
This was alright and interesting enough to keep me reading, but not gripping enough for me to look at what else the author has written. Within 3 days of finishing this story, I had to review it to remember what it was about.  I think this has a lot of potential and, if developed better, it would be an awesome read.