Review: Cute girly read!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 12, 2013
Bridesmaid LottoSuch a cute story idea but the grammar/punctuation issues - lack of commas, the abundance of "said's", and the missing words - totally ruined it for me.  I would so recommend writers who self publish - especially ebooks - double check their work before they push that submission button.  Their reputation is on the line.  Perhaps this was an uploading issue that could have been caught/adjusted before the final submission.  If you can overlook that, and are a fan of romance and a delightfully quirky writing style, then this is a fun read with a powerful message ... no matter how bleak life looks, if you believe everything happens for a reason, sometimes making the catastrophe purposeful, life will go on, oftentimes better than you ever imagined.After reading the author's bio, I realized she was writing a girly book/series for a younger reader. My review still stands about the editing issues. With a good editor, I feel this charming read could gain in literary status.