Review: 5 Star Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 16, 2013
I'm really torn on this review. While the story is good and the world the author has created is fascinating, the editing was soooooo bad that it really interfered with my enjoyment of the book. There were mistakes on what felt like every page! Urgh!A few examples of what was rampant throughout the book: "Lisa walks pasted..." "Risa was certain you to accept her offer.." "bodies crumb and fall.." "she puts them were..." "their planets as weren't rich..." "Abby will be questions that..." "she eyes widen..." using the possessive princess' to indicate plural instead of princesses; incorrect usage of too, to and much, much more. Then there was the whole trying to write in the present tense. Wow! That really sucked.That being said, the story was actually good. My attention was held throughout and I felt fully vested in the story. I didn't skip any pages and was disappointed when it was over. That seems something of a miracle to me and is a testiment to the fact that this author has talent.I would recommend reading this only if you think you can ignore the nonexistent editing AND you are looking for a sweet LOVE story and not a hot romance.