Review: Strange word choices and reactions
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 27, 2013
Although I enjoyed this story, I found myself distracted by the poor editing and strange phrasing used by the author. Her verb choices don't always fit with the actions being described, so these occurrences took me out of the story each time.  I was, also, confused by the pains the character had at times.  For example, she's riding a horse to escape the wolves and she complains of an ache in her side for what sounded like a short, but fast, ride out of the forest.  I don't think a pain in my side (and no, she wasn't injured there) would be my focus at the time.  At times, Scarlette's actions seem to be unrealistic based on what's happening, and I did wonder how long it was going to take her to figure out who her enemies really were.I got this one for free, and I'm glad of that, but I don't think it deserved some of the negative comments made by other reviewers.