Review: Very good story but THAT ending...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2014
...wasn't the best direction to go in for this piece.Don't get me wrong, it's a good short story read to be sure, and the final turn in the story is unexpected, but unfortunately it wasn't the best twist possible. I cannot explain better without divulging the ending but once John Smith arrives and you understand his obsession, you know precisely how it's going to finish and that hurt the story's ending.