Review: Good book; Poor writing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2012
This book has an interesting plot, which catches your attention quickly, and I'll get the sequels.At the same time the author should take some writing classes, because her style needs work.  She has a tendency to use words without being quite sure of the meaning.  Grammar and punctuation are also problems: sentences are sometimes incomplete, participles don't so much dangle as slap you in the face, she sometimes changes tense or number in mid-sentence, pronouns are not always used correctly, etc. In fact I found myself wondering whether English was her second language or if she's a victim of our educational system.The story, like I said, is good, and you can always get the general sense of what she means from the context.  A good editor or a good English comp teacher would help her make an interesting, if somewhat awkward, read into a really good book.