Review: Good story, needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 18, 2012
This book needs some serious editing. There were multiple misspellings, missing words, missing spaces, etc., that made reading somewhat difficult at times. I was also a bit turned off by the formatting, which put a space between every paragraph, but this may just be a personal preference that wouldn't deter others. As for the story itself, the plot was imaginative, original and well paced, characters could have been fleshed out a tiny bit more but were decent, and overall there was a good flow. I really did like the story and will be looking into the next book in the series, I just hope that Rune Breaker will be re-edited for the sake of future readers.