Review: Good read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 20, 2014
This is the second book I've read by Ms. Kenyan and like the first, it was a decent read. The plot flowed and the characters weren't flat or boring. The reason I'm giving this story three stars instead of five is because for one it needed some better editing. The words weren't misspelled but in many places the words were missing spaces between them and more than once the character Sarah was called Sandra. A big  problem I had with the story was that I don't feel like the cheating aspect of the story was handled properly. I don't recall Tobias ever truly apologizing or taking full responsible for his actions. At one point he claimed that he thought it was Marietta (which wasn't feasible) and another point he's claiming it meant nothing. For something that was supposed to a major point in the plot, it got sidetracked by another tragedy and ended up taking a backseat and being summed up within a paragraph or two. Also, I'm realizing that Ms. Kenyan is just horrible at naming children and has an affinity for juniors and people having the same name, lol. Tobbie and Tobias? Really? That didn't really detract from the story, it's just a personal issue I have.  Other than those few things, the story was decent.