Review: Laughable
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 8, 2012
I'm a fan of erotic romance, but this was horrible.  The dialogue was incredibly cheesy and I found many of the scenarios to be unrealistic.  How many orgasms can a person have in one night??  Sheesh!  When she hops into his bed (or onto his couch) it seems she was pretty inexperienced up until then, however, she seems to have the skills of a pro.  I don't want to give too much away for those of you who are still going to read it, but I got about 40% in and returned it for a refund.  There were a lot of grammatical errors and type-o's and overall, it was very poorly written.  Character development was practically non-existent.  I'm having a hard time understanding all of the rave reviews.