Review: And the snail pace continues...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 14, 2014
I really do dislike rating a book one novella at a time... but, it is what it is... This really is not the best way to publish a story.  The reader loses connection with the characters when they are this spaced out.  I would have liked more from the erotic scenes in this installment, they felt very rushed. I would like more time to be spent with Simone and Elliott as a couple and really wish we would move into the story behind Elliott and his strange need to have his life in order all of the time. Elliott with his OCD and Simone with a carefree... I like it rough attitude is an interesting combination for a couple. I think I went down a little in the rating simply because I really didn't like the whole scene with Aiden and Corinne... Aiden is not an appealing Dom to me...  he is insensitive and self-absorbed and treats his sub like a doormat.  It didn't seem like his sub was enjoying it either so that just sealed my dislike for the scene.  Aiden is definitely in it for himself only and what he wants.  BUT, I love Simone and her confident, forceful personality...  it's a refreshing change of pace than what seems to be the norm in erotica lately. I'm still in this one till the end... two more novellas to go and I hope we get more of the sexy and forceful Simone and I do hope Elliott learns to take what he wants! His hesitation is making me a little impatient!  And I hope that Corinne grows a backbone and dumps the loser Aiden...  :)