Review: Ughhhhhhhhh!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 7, 2014
Ok. I rarely if ever throw down a bad review on a book. And it is hard for me to be so malicious. It is not in my nature. But I have too. Because this book made me become so annoyed I almost didn't finish it.Lady, there is something called spell check.... Use it. PLEASE! Obviously, this book was never read by a legitimate editor, or it would not have been published in this state. Grammatical errors everywhere. Fractured sentences. A run on sentence that, about had me delete the whole damn book. Punctuation, not sure this author knows how, or where it is needed. But it is. There is nothing more frustrating in a book that over use of words, in the book "However", was used so much. I wanted to smack the author with a thesaurus. It just ruined the whole book for me.Characters, there were many, namely the under developed Louis, who chases a girl across the pond. Then to have two highly improbable kidnap scenarios occur in the plot line. The list one was the only one that was deemed plausible at all. The two main characters, appeared well developed. Though at times I found Gabrielle annoying, constantly reflecting on her terrible life. We get it. Move on, and only use those reflections in certain circumstances. When you do, don't go on and, on about it. We get it she was abused. A reformed rake is always an interesting character. Jason, wore so many hats in the book, I was not sure what to think. From rake, to man child, to buffoon. The swing of this characters emotions, actions and thoughts, could make a person motion sick.The plot line was good. It could have had better time lines. More detail. It would have been better served with more authenticity. It kept reminding me of a book I had already read.In other words. Don't waste your time or money on this. Especially, if you are a true book lover.