Review: No need for short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 21, 2013
In my opinion I think this short story would have worked better in a longer book / story line.  She could have done a story on how all of the couples were doing, not just one of them.In my opinion, I also think that the sex scene at the end of the story line with the whip went on too long.  That wasn't necessary either and it actually turned me off and I found myself skimming through that section rather quickly.Regret buying it now.  The only redeeming quality was the price that you paid for it on you Kindle.