Review: It is an odd way to tell a Wonderful story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 25, 2013
This is set as a narrative but it has no details. There is no true character development or interaction. I had to force myself to finish it and Oregon Trail is my favorite story line. What could have been a great book is ruined by horrible story telling. At the end it  kinda rambles on and keeps trying to end then adds more. It reminds me of a very long and wordy poem, Over half the book could have been omitted and it would have had no effect on the story itself. I understand that it is Christian Fiction, but it seemed when ever the author could not transition between on sentence to the next she talked about God in general. The chapters did not flow at all and the whole part with everyone living at the farm was just odd. Not really worth the read, The only reason I gave it two stars is because of what the story line could have evolved into.