Review: Very sweet, and very well-written
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 30, 2013
I really enjoyed reading this story.  The characters were sweet, and I did not see the surprise coming.  It was a good job, hiding THAT in plain sight.  Like the other reviewer, I want to hear more about Mark, and I would not mind reading more about these two when their lives go on.I found no errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation.  That was a wonderful change from most of the "free" erotica.  This is just a delightful little story.