Review: Good story, marred by bad attention to details
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2010
I just finished reading "Defending Evil", and found the premise and story held my interest. It was, however, marred by the many grammatical errors, improper use of punctuation, improper word usage (loose instead of lose, many times). I kept thinking of Vince Flynn in an interview I watched him do one time - he told of how he couldn't spell worth a darn, so had an editor who went over what he wrote and put in the proper spelling and punctuation so his books would be readable. It seems Mr. Shea has a talent for writing, perhaps recruiting a person to proofread and correct is in order.