Review: Good beginning, but then off the map
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2012
I received a complimentary of this book for review and started off with high hopes.In the beginning, the characters are engaging and well-defined, and the storyline seems clear. After that, the waters become quickly muddied, and the characters become monotone and the whole story becomes quickly out of sync.While the intent was clear from the beginning, I'd suggest some restructuring of the dialog, and a bit more editing. I had skipped ahead in the story, hoping to pick up the thread, but there wasn't anything there for me to grab ahold of, telling me that it was time to stop.I'd like to revisit if there's another review in the works, but as it is, it was just too difficult to get through.