Review: Awesome story, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2014
I will say that the story was pretty awesome: two friends going to university to study science discover an unidentifiable object that keeps changing course so that the computer can't place it correctly.  They have really no clue what it is and must ask someone for help...  Then things go a little crazy.  The author really knows his technology, and explains things in a simple, easy-to-understand way which really helped me out.The reason it's three stars is because I felt a lot of the narration could have been removed.  The detail is spectacular throughout the book, but that's the thing: it's with the whole book.  I feel like everything the characters did or felt or heard was put into so much detail, and some things they did that might be important were not.  It was good, but I think it's important to know which events to limit this to.  Also there were mistakes, mainly grammar but including spelling.  The story itself was a great sci-fi, I just think the layout of the book could have been much, much cleaner.