Review: Needs some serious editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 3, 2013
If you're willing to put your name on a book, please, for the love of all that is written, get an editor! Or let your spouse/best friend/mother - anyone with eyeballs - read it before you hit submit. For example the whole town new her husband was cheating on her. New! NEW!!!In my opinion, this story has been overdone. Rich domineering man, smart-mouthed submissive...hmmmm, where have I read that before?