Review: Irritating!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2013
The story is fun and I really enjoyed the characters ... However, I found the task of having to purchase the next volume after less than 200 pages annoying!  I know the author said the book, as written, is quite lengthy ... but it could have been split into two, or even three, volumes instead of SIX ... and the price point could have been a little less.  I kind of felt cheated paying $3 and $4 for a "novella".I must add, tho, that of all the e-books I have been reading lately, the editing, spelling and misuse of words is very minimal in this series ... so far!  I have found a few grammatical errors, mostly words left out of a sentence, but not many.  Thank you for that!!January 7, 2012Okay, I take back that last statement!!  I just finished Book 3 and there were countless grammatical errors.  It drove me nuts.  On one page alone, I counted at least 5 such errors ... not misspellings ... just extra words that shouldn't have been there, left out words, and incorrect punctuation throughout.The authors ... not just this author ... should either hire an editor or ask a literary friend to review the book before publishing.  It's very annoying to try to read what would otherwise be a very fun, new concept with good characterization, only to have it severely flawed by something so easily fixed.I will finish the "House of Grey" series, but don't know that I will attempt to read anything else by this author unless I hear that he has done his due diligence and had his books edited.  Hence, I'm marking this down a star ... from 4 to 3.  It's too bad, as I really am enjoying the story and would like to read the "Harmonics" series.  Can anyone tell me if that has been edited?  Thank you.