Review: Well written but predictable
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 2, 2014
I liked the author's style of writing, and I thought parts of the romance evolution were nice.  I have "taken it slow" in a new relationship with much the same success.  I liked the story and writing better than many other m/m romances written by a woman.  The dialogue between the guys was believable/not overly feminine.However, I like more reality to my stories.  First - too perfect! The guys were beautiful, very successful in business, and had very accepting parents, siblings, and co-workers.  Next,  it sounded like they waited until their first night of passion to discuss/discover that they were both usually "tops."  That discussion happens much, much sooner in real life!!  Plus, 7 months into their relationship, thinking they found their soulmate, I thought their reaction to the 3 month, temporary job in the States was not realistic.  "Packing it in" because "long distance relationships don't work" seemed fatalistic and knee-jerk when you think you have found your soulmate.Thanks for letting me give what I hope is viewed as constructive criticism.