Review: Good storyline but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2014
I couldn't get past the many, many grammatical errors. They really threw me, and I found myself rereading a certain paragraph over a few times because it just didn't read right. I finally stopped reading about halfway through. I was a little bummed, because I really think the story itself had a lot of potential, but it wasn't worth it to me to finish.