Review: Can we say Editor?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 10, 2013
This story had a lot of potential but between the grammar & small stupid mistakes as in spacing between words was just to much. I could hardly go through an entire page without seeing a spacing error it was ridiculous!Over all the story was pretty good though. The characters were good. Nothing really stood out about the book to me though. The sex scenes were over before they started through out the book that was also annoying. I'm just glad the book was free that's for sure.