Review: Promising...but disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2013
The author had a promising story of interesting characters and showing the love between brothers. I loved how the male lead was falling in love with the female lead's son while falling in love with her. However, the grammatical errors and misuse of words (her vs. she, heel vs. heal) made the reading choppy and interfered with the emotion. They were just too much for me to enjoy and I found myself skipping parts.  I wanted to like it because I cared about the characters and story but just couldn't. I should have quit reading earlier as I just got mad at the author for caring so much for the characters, story, and relationships and so little in the craft of writing.