Review: Loved the romance/erotica!  Ahhhh!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
Although I bought the Omnibus Series, I am going to review these(briefly) one by one. This book didn't dazzle me. I didn't hate it, I didn't love it. I found myself unable to put it down at the beginning, especially after Michelle "changed" Aaron. Lets face it, if you indulge into an erotica novel or series, you want EROTICA. This was rated X, not XXX like most erotica lovers like to read. Myself being a FSOG lover (guilty!), my standards might be high when it comes to full blown love-making scenes. This book, at that aspect, just didn't do it for me. Towards the beginning it was okay, and it just got worse- not terrible, just downgraded.Next- I thought there could've been a more exciting and pulsating way to Aaron's death, leading to the reasoning Michelle changed him. I felt that to be somewhat dull, but once again- I didn't hate it.I found myself discouraged when Michelle didn't explain what happened to her previous master, or did she? I missed something? Which leads me to my next little complaint, I was confused often throughout the story and found myself shuffling back through pages looking for answers. Michelle's previous master mystery, the character reference "the Predator", and how in the hell didn't the police tie the murders to Aaron or Michelle? Those points of the book, or lack there of, where confusing to me.I wasn't a huge fan of the torture Michelle inflicted on Delia at the end, either. HOWEVER, this scene DID engulf me and I found myself hoping that it would lead to something else more exciting, which did not happen. The way Delia approached Aaron at the end with the "we should talk" speech was somewhat corny (especially sending a friend for her). Michelle "sneaking in the door behind her" was boring, too. I was looking for more of an exhilarating scene where they fight or even make a insanely freaky erotica scene together- SOMETHING!Now for the good parts (no, I wont be a Negative Nancy this whole review):I DID enjoy Aaron's story when he was describing his parents. I DID enjoy Michelle being so thorough when training Aaron. Michelle and Aaron's feeding techniques are on point, they do not harm anyone or anything and Leudke also tied in some erotica in that aspect. I loved how Aaron is tied to Michelle, and she is his master-forever (unless he is killed or she kills him). This puts an interesting twist to the story and put some conflict in this particular story, and I hope in future stories it remains a problem. They cannot be in daylight and are stuck in a room with each other too often, it seems. Logically, you can only stand being around someone so often and for so long, as well as tying them together mentally in each others minds, that bears an issue. Aaron also got "I love you" out of Michelle, which I was hoping for- although it seems that he forced it out of her... so maybe that'll be part of a story line for a future story, we'll see.I give his particular story a 3.5 and although I cant give that rating on this particular sight, I don't believe it is worthy of a 4. So a 3 it is. I'm interested in reading the next 3, hoping they are more what I'm "looking for".