Review: Adolescent writing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 21, 2012
The book starts with an interesting premise. But I found the writing to be rather adolescent. The plot was simplistic and  the end seemed like it was close to where the story should have begun. I also have a pet peeve about idiots who use the word calvary, when they mean cavalry. Clearly there is good reason this author self-published. If I were a publishing house editor, I wouldn't touch this until it were properly polished into a good novel.