Review: Has Potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2014
This story could've been so much better if the author would've had a professional editing. It kept my interest until the middle where it began to sag. The story never answered the question of what happened to the missing letter. Much to do about the grandfather, and, nothing. Many unanswered questions. I would encourage the author to hire a good editor to help flesh out the story. Not bad.