Review: no story line
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2014
Why was this printed? There's no storyline. There's no meat to this manuscript. There's nothing holding it together in a cohesive structure. Nothing with angst thru the story pushing the H/h apart as it draws them together. Nothing to keep the reader interested in the base line wanting the couple to overcome the obstacles and have a triumph at the stories climatic moment. There was no climatic moment. My 8 year old tells better stories. Yes I can quantify my opinion because I am published. I do not get how the author got this in print unless it was self pub. Don't waste your time don't waste your money.