Review: Writing was OK ... story was weak for me
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2013
Although this was well written for the most part (although, much of the dialog was corny), I really wished the story wasn't so rushed.  I'm really not a fan of insta-love.  After about 2 days of knowing each other they were declaring their undying love?  What's the rush, why not develop that relationship?  There were also plot-holes, coincidences and implausibilities that were too hard to take.  The resolution was so convoluted and sudden, there was no suspense ... and lots of eye-rolling on my part.