Review: Short on length and plot but a lot of heat
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 7, 2012
A dangerous storm, all alone in a big house, and neighbors who have wanted to do you for awhile ... what more does a single mom need to get some much needed action?  That is the "plot" of this short story.  The idea is good, but it seems to be taken way over the top.  The woman on woman portion was well written as you felt one woman's passion while also sensing the other's hesitation.  Once they both let go, it is very sexy encounter.However I felt the story lost something when the husband called his neighbor a MILF and a cougar while wanting to have sex with her in front of his wife.  While I usually prefer the stories to have a little dialogue as well as the sex....this conversation would have been better left unsaid.  The ending seemed rushed as well...maybe more about the feelings that had to be running in the neighbor's mind?Not a bad read, the sex scenes are scorching and it is a good fantasy read.  I just would have liked some better dialogue, especially from the man, to complete the story.  Three and a half stars.