Review: Okay for a very short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 21, 2011
If you want something short and hot but don't need or desire a fully fleshed out novel then this would probably be worth buying - it was worth the $1.49 that I paid but I would not have paid full price for this because it was very short and for me - it was not a keeper.  But, it could be considered a review of the writing style of the author and for that it was very good.Pros:- Original concept- Story flows smoothly- Good Sci-Fi plot to it- No major editing problems- High "heat" factorCons- Since this was so short, the protagonists fall in lust/love very fast- The villains are mentioned but no interactions take place- World building was good but with it being so short, the reader was left with just a glimpse of it instead of a full view.For me, while I don't reqret reading the story, the novella came off being more of a detailed outline of a good Sci-Fi novel that was put to print before it was fully finished.  The ending was rather abrupt even though it had a HEA.