Review: Terrible!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2013
Oh my goodness, I thought this story was terrible.  The writing, the grammar, the word choices, etc.  None of it was working for me.  Molly speaks like someone out this time, not at all like a 19th century widowed rancher.It's a short story, thank goodness. The characters aren't developed and the whole story seems disjointed and reads as a rough draft rather than a final copy.  It's in desperate need of a good editor.  Some of the descriptions and situations made me laugh out loud.  At one point Molly describes her lover's penis as 'bumpy'.  Sexy, right?  :)  I really felt like I was reading sex scenes written by a virgin who likes porn yet has never experienced any of it, personally.  It really came off as juvenile and lacked any real feeling.The happily ever after at the end seemed rushed and silly, not at all believable.  I am surprised at all the praising views of this story, because it is easily the worst thing I have read so far this year.  It's very rough - definitely needs some work.Cherise Everhard, February 2013