Review: A little more editing would've gone a long way
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 9, 2013
I'd read and really enjoyed Lauren and Royce's story, as well as Prelude - Secrets Exposed. I enjoyed the peek we got of Luke and Julie in "Hot Secrets" and was excited to see where their story was headed. The romance and the mystery were well written, and fun to watch unfold. Overall, It was a good story that kept me interested throughout.I was able to overlook the editing errors in Secrets Exposed as well as Hot Secrets (missing words, misspellings etc.) as they didn't bring me out of the story or ruin the flow. This book, however, seemed to have a few more inconsistencies, missing or misplaced words, misspellings etc. I still enjoyed the overall story, but the errors were a bit more bothersome this time around. Frequently "at", "the", "of" and other words were either left out altogether, duplicated or misplaced within a sentence. A few times an action was repeated within the same paragraph. One instance, the character removed his sunglasses, a few sentences of dialogue were exchanged, then the character removed his sunglasses again. Not the end of the world, but a bit bothersome.I'm not disappointed I read it, and I'd still recommend it, especially to those who enjoyed the earlier books in the series, I just feel a little more editing/proofreading would've gone a long way.