Review: Good story plagued by horrible editing!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 13, 2013
The story of Shane and Camry was overall a good one. The building of their relationship seemed rushed at times due to the authors loss of continuity. There were many instances where it was obvious that the author had forgotten the time frame in which the story was taking place. The most damaging thing to the story was the horrible editing! The minimal effort put into editing this book is an affront to your readers! We respect your craft by paying for your work and (hopefully) becoming loyal readers. Return that respect by turning out a product worthy of your talent. Incomplete sentences, improperly used words and calling characters by the wrong name-made for a tough read. Right now I would not buy another book by this author. If they do not care enough to present a readable product why would I care enough to give them more of my time and money?