Review: Just ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 25, 2013
The first few chapters felt jumbled and confusing to me. I had to re-read several paragraphs in order to keep all of the characters straight. There was a lot of action and I really enjoyed that. The main love story was good and it included some sensual and highly sexual content. The other love stories were odd at best. The female in that couple simply jumped out of a shadow, and became an integral  part of the whole story. One character was stripped naked and left alone in a windowless, dark room. Food was brought to her and in the dark, she found the table and a chair, ate and drank...and then wiped her mouth on her sleeve! I've never seen a naked person with a sleeve! The bloodlines of the characters were truely Unbelievable. The taking off with the band of Lakota did not make any sense to the storyline. It was boring and unnecessary. It has the makings of a good book, it just happens to be a case of overkill.