Review: Needs some work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2014
I have read a lot of this author's books and this is only the second one that I have some issues with and they are the same as the other book.  I am in agreement with some of the other reviewers-there is a lack of editing. Once again, I find I have to reread parts because of missing words.  What bothered me more was that I think the author was trying to have too many elements in the story without developing the most important one-the H/h relationship.  She did a good job of setting up why Maggie is leaving the planet.  She also did well with describing the new world.  SPOILERS:  I can't help but wonder, what the heck happened to the story of Mark?  The ex wants Maggie dead then we hear nothing about him.  Will he come up in a future book? All of a sudden we are involved in the alien captain infiltrating the planet.  Too many bad guys.  Then, Etor and Maggie are pissed at each other and he decides to leave her alone for a few day. She is insistent all through the book that she doesn't what a relationship.  When they see each other after those few days, she says she's sorry and all of a sudden, they are mated!!  WTH?? Did I miss something?  Did a chapter discussing her change of feelings get left out?  It left me very confused. I would like to see a follow up done but with some of these issues resolved.