Review: This book was better...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 1, 2014
Than the first! It flowed and even thou it is in third person, it did not feel as choppy!It has a good storyline and side characters. The sex is steamy just trying to figure out why this author is so intent on including the condom removal with every scene... Lol? We get it safe sex!Overall I'm glad I went on to read the second and I may try the third, they seem to get better! Just a bit more tweaking and the story would let us feel or imagine, instead of being told it was hot, or sweet, or a pretty day etc.This was a good story far less robotic than the first!