Review: Meh. It's better than renal failure, but what isn't?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2013
Besides the other flaws already mentioned, I found the author jumped from action to exposition dump, to suddenly telling me what happened "after a long while they had passed through some woods, and though we're being chased, continued upon their way to grandmothers house, having risen over hills and more hills."The bad writing kept pulling me out of the book.The protagonist, is a twit and hard to relate too. He had a day to hang out with people and plot strategy but never had time to tell them this awful secret he heard that effects everyone.Most of the players in the book make huge leaps based upon assumptions and intuition, almost as if they read the book.  It was weird how of all the courses of actions available, they discovered the obscure plot at the same time. I wish I had. Discovered a plot that is.