Review: It's just kind of Okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2014
I kind of liked the idea of the story, the girl is the sheltered daughter of an MC president. She decides to assert herself when she falls for the town tattoo artist. It's an interesting idea as far as MC stories go, but  that is where it ends. The editing in this story is horrific. It was like reading a bad fanfiction. At one point, Stella talks about how Cadeon smelled but she didn't use the word smelled, she used the word smelt. The definition for smelt is to extract (metal) from its ore by a process involving heating and melting. That is such a ridiculous mistake in my opinion, but that is not the only one. This story is also kind of short and wraps up very quickly and it is really kind of abrupt. No offense to the author, but she really needs to get an editor and give the story another try.