Review: Lacks spark
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2010
It's a freebie, so I can't be too picky about it. Having read a couple of romance stories that have been free as well, I've got to say that it lacks spark. I really did not get into the story, or imagined the "steamy" parts of it. It has a rough start, as you really don't know what has happened or what is happening. However, I must say that Pete has some good lines in the story, such as "I just don't plan on failure. Success is largely a matter of not giving up. And I'm sure of what I want," and my favorite "nobody can be sure of the future, but I'm sure of us". So, to sum up, not so good, but not so bad either--for a freebie.