Review: Really good story...but needs editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2012
As the title of this review says, I really liked this story, but unfortunately it is not a complete product because it needs editing.  Like any other book there were pros and there were cons. Pros: It was funny! The characters were often very funny, and exhibited a range of emotions and actions that allowed the reader to appreciate and understand them as flawed and imperfect, but still likable. And the core dynamic between Leila and Tucker was cute and hot, I liked them together. On the con side, at times the story felt a bit unfocused at times with secondary plots involving family members and best friends. And that is where we get to the cons. I thought the real story was about Tucker and Leila finding each other, and how they deal with being unintentional newlyweds. But when the story delved into some of those other side plots, and the awkward business with the ex-girlfriends and the stalker, it was a bit distracting. I felt like it took away from the really good stuff with Leila and Tucker. Also, if this story gets edited, it would definitley be a 5 star read for me. There were just so many misspelled and misused words that it took away from how good the story was. Regardless of the cons, I did enjoy this book, I actually stayed up all night to finish it, and I'm looking forward to Nickie's story. I hope that this review will catch the author's eye and that she will find it helpful in some way.