Review: Loved it before the tense updated, the love continues.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
Wow, just wow.I found Grim and Cassandra quite enjoyable, I've re-read both multiple times already which tells me that I've fallen in love with characters, plot and setting. I tend to ignore reviews that focus not on the story but on editing, grammar etc because I can usually read past those issues (otherwise I would have nothing to read, big publisher or self/indie published).Cliffhangers though...fortunately not in either of these books. I'm very happy that I took the chance on MK's books as well as some other authors that also got slammed for editing.5/27/14 - Updated version with tense change - even easier to slide into the story. Thanks Michelle!Original version - "Admiral William Hale Zafar turns from his command center. At 50 cycles he is the youngest Admiral ever in the Carinian fleet and currently commands the Battle star Retribution with an accompaniment of five battleships as they patrol the border.  He's 7'1" and 325lbs of solid Carinian male, his lush dark hair just starting to gray at the temples and while not long is not cut militarily short.  His startling violet eyes look to Falco."Revised version - "Admiral William Hale Zafar turned from his Command Center. At 50 cycles, he was the youngest Admiral ever in the Carinian fleet and currently in command of the Battle Star Retribution with an accompaniment of five battleships as they patrolled their border. He's 7'1" and 325 pounds of solid Carinian male, his lush dark hair just starting to gray at the temples and while not long, was not cut militarily short. His startling violet eyes looked to Falco."cross-posted amazon, goodreads, shelfari