Review: I really wanted to rate this higher... but there were a few hang-ups I had.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2014
First of all I loved Eve Carter's other works, but this one was lacking a lot of the depth and development her other stories had. I like the concept of this story... money goes missing; girl has it, fighter has to get it back by conning girl; yadda yadda. Where I lost my attention span was the whole scene where Luke was revealed. Dani figures out it's Luke and Luke all of a sudden declares his deep loving feelings for Dani and goes on to say he doesn't care about the money, he just cares about Dani. Wha, what?! Where in the world did those feelings even come from? It just fell apart for me from there and I actually skimmed the rest of they story to the end. I won't let my hopes down for the next chapter in this story, but please make sure the story line goes a little deeper to engage the reader. (I'm still an Eve Carter fan!)