Review: wonderful new world, great story, horrible comma usage
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2013
The title hits you with the worst right up front. I loved the world; the story was a wee bit predictable but with enough twists to keep it interesting; and it had good, strong, interesting characters--even if I wanted to smack the heroine once or twice, because communication is good; all good, in fact, but the punctuation. Someone needs to smack both the author and the editor with a book on punctuation usage, preferably a couple of times. Some sentences were in dire need of commas, others had a plethora of unneeded onedA follow up with a list of sound-alike words (like the difference between passed and past) would be useful, but nowhere near as necessary.