Review: It's Okay but very short on development - more like 2.75
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 9, 2011
After downloading 3 short stories/novels, all with 4 star ratings, only one actually lived up to its rating and this story was not it.I didn't hate reading the storyThe sex scenes are explicitCharacters never drew me in enough to care whether they got their HEA or notNever drew me in enough to go on with the seriesCame off more like a general outline for a more developed story with just highlights of elements to be explored - seemed unfinishedWhile I don't expect a best seller for only $3.99, I have read too many short novels that are better developed and actually pull the reader in and some for a much better price.  I guess that I'm just tire of paying any money for undeveloped stories or novels - I don't care how "HOT" some people think they are just because the author threw in some explicit sex scenes - under developed stories are still under developed stories.