Review: Great idea but fell flat
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 26, 2011
I wanted to like this book, as it had a clever premise, but I found it pretty convoluted. The main theme was so obvious that I wanted to smack the main characters' heads together for being so stupid.  I can't believe all the scrapes they kept getting into for just a short trip.I might have enjoyed this book more had the layout of the book not been so distracting. It downloaded on my Kindle in huge paragraphs without a break in between, so it was hard to keep my place.  Then at a few points, the paragraphs went all clumped together down the middle of the page with poor punctuation and little delineation between scenes. I don't know if this was the fault of the author, but it was very distracting and kept me from being able to concentrate on the book itself.The basic idea of the book was interesting, I just didn't think it was very well-written, on more than one level. And whoever tagged it as Christian romance was hallucinating. For that matter, I wouldn't have called it erotic romance either. The male character just did the same thing to the female character a couple of times. Whoopee....