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Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2014
I have to say I stumbled across this book look for a cheap read and crossing my fingers for a good one! That being said this book had amazing potential but fell short. The editing or should I say "lack of" editing is just sad. There are many parts with words left out of sentences and you kind of just throw your own word in their, heck make it a mad lib! Also I really had a hard time liking many of the characters. Especially the girl characters because the way they are portrayed throughout is unrealistic. The girls in this book are easy and slutty, with no morals at all. Lee the protagonist is dumb as a sack of bricks. She gets treated like trash by Kyle and goes back to him every time. Also the story is VERY predictable. The "bad lasagna" and the "drinking too much" ummm helloooo???? It is very vulgar and not really a "love story" more like a dirty porn.All of that being said, I did kind of like it. Sometimes you just pick up what the author is putting down. I will get the next book just because I don't think you should give up on the story, things can change!