Review: Serious Flaws
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 31, 2013
I started out liking this story.  After the author has become more and more ridiculous I cannot go on, which is a shame because I like the general storyline.  Minor things such as people calling everyone "my liege" I can survive.  Let's see, the princess RUNS everywhere no matter the distance.  She knows at least 3 paradise like locations that no one seems to know about.  During battle Thor fights a 14 foot tall warrior who is 5 times the size of the others.  Does that mean the rest are under 3 feet tall?  There is no mention of the enemy king who ALWAYS leads his army.  Thor and 10 men defeat 1,000 warriors.  No previous mention made of abnormally tall humans.  Eric fights in a 100 day tournament (no city could afford it) to win a bride that has already agreed marry him?  The tourney was to give him his choice of ladies marry but he had already decided on a tavern wench who agreed to his proposal, so why fight?  This kind of poor writing has ruined a storyline of great potential with some interesting characters.