Review: Disappointing & Amateurish Writer Style
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2014
While the premise sounded like this might be a good story, the writer's lack of story telling experience is so apparent that I can't continue reading. It starts well, but the dialog is stilted and the lack of description & detail throughout just left me feeling "lost" with each scene. I hate to criticize any book or author, but had to make an exception with this one. I recommend you don't bother with this one, even if it's free!