Review: Does size matter??
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 11, 2013
Ok, so the Line count was 167, so I'm not sure if it even counts as a short story. The premise was interesting, but there is really no story here. What is here is put together well but it just seems to begin and then there is no more. This isn't a whole story or even half, it's as if someone jotted down an idea with a few teenager like lines of dialogue. Wait to either pick up for free if you really feel the need, otherwise steer clear until a whole story is delivered.Sorry, only 1 star is deserved for an interesting idea .