Review: Good story, lousy editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2013
I thought that I found a new Sci-Fi romance author.  I did....HOWEVER, and this is a big however.  As most of the other reviewers noted.  The editing STUNK.  I get that the author is trying to write in a different point of view, but there were just too many wrong uses of grammer to excuse.  If you can get past that...The story line was typical of sci-fi romance.  A planet with a ratio of 200 men to 1 woman, women only have boy children, they don't know how to show love and affection to their men, etc.The primary characters, Lisa and Grim, are likeable, to a point.  Lisa is a mama bear defending her cubs, and showed a very strange acceptance of her situation. Almost a "go with the flow" attitude.  Grim is a scarred warrior, who, because he is scarred, is deemed "unfit" as a male to join with a female.  That is such a strange attitude on a warrior planet.  However, it works for this story.There were parts of this story, especially pertaining to Lisa, that made me want to fist pump, and shout "you go girl". I read the story, got through it.  I would especially like to see the stories of the secondary characters, which were set up in the last two chapters.I think that for this story to be really likeable, the format needs to be changed, totally.Overall, 3 stars for Lisa's attitude and performance