Review: Good story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 16, 2013
I liked this story. I didn't love it, mostly because of the spelling and grammatical mistakes...I have a tough time getting past them. I also thought the "lingo" (for lack of a better word) was a bit over the top (especially during the sex scenes "her lady box" for example...really?!) All of us have suffered from heartbreak in one way or another and I believe most people could relate in some way to this story. Manny came into Eliza's life at the right time and I had my fingers crossed things would work out for them. I have this story 3 stars instead of 2 because yay!!! it's standalone! That's rare these days, and I appreciate a complete story with no cliffhanger.