Review: Hard to read
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 7, 2013
The story had potential but I couldn’t get around the writing style.  Every other sentence had someone’s name in it - seriously.  Though the author seems to have an aversion to pronouns, I have discovered I am quite fond of them.  The ping pong match of names was distracting and ultimately made it feel formal.  What should have been a warm, intimate story felt stilted and cold.  I gave up half way through and skipped to the end.