Review: Interesting, but needs work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2011
This appears to be an early work by this author.  The story is somewhat disjointed and there are a lot of grammar/spelling/word choice errors.  It would benefit greatly from a good editor.The story plot was interesting, but a lot was left unexplained. The writing definitely needs some time to mature.  I liked the main character, Rae. Though she was wishy-washy about some important issues, for the most part she was a strong female protagonist.  The secondary characters were not very well developed.I think this author has a great deal of potential. I admire her imagination. With a little education and editing, Ms. Fletcher could be really good.