Review: Good story but unedited
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 23, 2011
I enjoyed this story.  It is a good space opera, lots of space ombat and action.  Unfortunately it appears to be a poor rough draft.  My suggestion would be to hire a high shool kid who likes to read and gets Bs or better in spelling, grammar and puntuation to proofread the book, that would improve the quality of the writing 100%.  It is a good length story and seems likely to be the first in a series.  I will not pay more than the 2.99 I paid for this one for a sequel unless I am assured the book has been at least proofread to 8th grade standards.  If the author pays someone to edit his books in the future I would gladly pay 6.99 for additional books.