Review: Great idea
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 24, 2013
The idea for the story was great. The development and the delivery was terrible. I had a villain I wanted to passionately hate but couldn't because I didn't understand his problem. I have a heroine that I wanted to love but couldn't because I couldn't connect with. And the hero's place in the story was unrealistic to say the least. The idea was great but it needs more work.