Review: I struggled through this story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2012
I have to admit I struggled through this story. For it being what I call a short story (under 100pgs) it took me several weeks to read it instead of an hour or so that it should have taken. I felt like the story was constantly dragging me in the wrong direction and often skipping about. One minute the hero was hating the heroine and then he's in love with her for absolutely no reason. I feel that this story could be good if the author spends some time in the story developing the characters, story line and puts more thought into the plot. Out of 1-5 I would give it a 2Clu's Reviewer - Mespigee