Review: Just OK
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 29, 2013
This is far from her best book. Not even close.The main problem is that there are only two notable characters. There are others, but they barely exist for more than a page, and spending full-time with these two neurotics was just not my idea of a good time.The main character, Christo, is a grown man who whines like a spoiled 13-year-old girl. Aside from feeling sorry for himself, the only other thing he spends time at is fretting over losing the job he doesn't even like. The other MC is a rich guy who will not admit he has any wealth and (quite unbelievably) works at an unrewarding office job in order to retain his "dignity". Of course, he's so wealthy, he doesn't have to work, or could work on his own projects, or could found his own companies, but no, he's intent on spending his days at a thankless company as a corporate drone.Plus, Ms. Aaron needs a primary in either editing or anatomy. I have been incredibly impressed by the number of female authors who manage to absolutely nail the gay sexual experience. This is not one example of that. At one point, the author discusses "the sensitive glans underneath the head of the member" (paraphrased to clean it up a bit). Ummm, sorry, but the glans IS the head, it cannot be underneath itself.There are a number of other obvious editing errors that were both distracting and annoying.Personally, I believe that my three stars are generous.