Review: This author has potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 21, 2012
The story is better than just OK but I had to deduct stars for editing, word choice, and the overly simple style. You'll be annoyed by some descriptions that are redundant. An example is: 'He is the Emergency Management Coordinator, he coordinates emergency management.'The author has a good handle on dialogue and character development. Although, his primary living antagonist is somewhat caricaturish.