Review: The story was awesome, BUT......
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2013
The author has a good story but the editing is so awful that I just can't rate it any better than I have. There is also incorrect word choice. For example, using loose instead of lose and then when than was correct. In the scene when the brothers and their friend Shea were decorating the Christmas tree, who the heck is Nolan? He seems to appear out of nowhere. There are so many editing mistakes throughout this book that it needs to be redone then released again. I truly loved the story but with all the mistakes it is painful to read.