Review: Goes off the rails, needs a good edit
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2014
That this story started out as a fanfic isn't hard to believe, but I wish I'd known before I read it. I also assume it's self published because it needs editing (comma placement and incorrect words throughout). It also has the u-haul trope firmly in effect. As if that wasn't enough a ridiculously contrived misunderstanding drags on and on from about the two thirds point, and even though multiple characters tell Maddie the truth about what happened she still stubbornly clings to her hurt feelings. Then a 7 year old child pulls off a flight across country that would never happen in a million years, but not to worry, because we have a happy ending that results despite no discussion about what happened by the two leads. Not content with this though, the author piles on not one, but two ridiculous epilogues. Save your time and money.