Review: Not sure what the funny parts were supposed to be . . .
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 30, 2013
Although this was touted as an erotic story with funny parts, I think I missed the funny parts.It's a pretty straightforward story about a M/M/F threesome with a good amount of detail.  It worked less when the author was attempting to plot (the two escorts already had great paying jobs, why would they jump ship to work for somebody with no contacts or experience), but whatever.It gets the job done even if Mann does attempt to be a little too cutesy at times.