Review: IT WAS A GOOD STORY BUT.........
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 13, 2013
The plot didn't really make sense to me. It just all went too fast with no real depth. The author also uses grammar that isn't normal in every day English, words like sullied and whilst. There were a couple others but she uses whilst a lot and it was irritating because it always tripped me up. The Tribe name could've been something easier to pronounce also since its used 2 or 3 times a page. I like when a story is able to be read smoothly. But overall if you want something to read it's good and it is free! The one really good characteristic of this author is the erotically descriptive romance scenes.