Review: short and free
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 25, 2013
This story wasn't awful but I wouldn't recommend it if it wasn't free. The writing style is very simplistic, to the point that it is annoying. The characters are sort of flat, but they seem to be trying to have some depth and just not succeeding. If grammar and spelling are super important to you, don't read this!When you write about (and in this case, from) a place that is truly a character in and of itself, like Charleston in this case, you have a plethora of information ready-made for you. I feel like the author wasted the opportunity here by just really using the name of the city and making the characters from there just be wealthy. Saying repeatedly that you're a Southern girl isn't really the same as acting like a Southerner.The sex, which I guess is the only point if the story, was bland and sort of lame to me. This is the first in a series, naturally, so maybe if all the stories were together it would feel less like a teenager writing for fun and more like an actual complete novel.