Review: Not a Book
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 10, 2011
I received this "book" for free, so I thought long and hard about how to properly review it.This story has a lot of promise, however, it's not a book. The last page is an utter cliffhanger--there is no ending and, as far as I'm concerned, a book can finish with a cliffhanger but it also must present SOME form of satisfying resolution. The author would have alleviated this problem by simply stating that Book 1 is a lengthy 10-15 chapter free preview. I also had trouble believing Elaine and Nick's relationship--we're told what it is, but it's never demonstrated WHY it should be like this.