Review: Disappointed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2013
I have to give this book 2.5 stars. I had high hopes for this book but I was sadly disappointed. Tempest Rise needs an editor in the worst way. In the beginning it didn't bother me but as the book progressed it became worse.The description is what led me to purchase the book and after reading it I'm glad it was free. The dialogue mixed into the paragraphs made it confusing at times. I was frustrated that Lysette could see straight through Prince Roth but any time he or anyone else presented her information against Katar she instantly believed them. I did like Lysette and Katar's relationship when they were together, apart Lysette annoyed me. The ending felt very rushed and I think that a seventeenth chapter would have been better.Overall the long, drawn out war and the poor editing ruined the book for me.