Review: Oh brother!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2013
The premise of the story is ok if typical. The major drawback that I had is the author's lack of understanding of tense or even English - "wondered vs. wandered". A person wanders into your life, meaning they have shown up such as the case with Jane. Not wondered in which means something totally different. There are several more examples but you get the gist. Plus the writing was really stilted. Combine this with the word usage and you have a book that's almost painful to read.I don't want to knock the author too much. I know it takes alot to put yourself out there but hopefully she ends up with a better editor for future books.