Review: Good story but weak editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 27, 2013
This author has a promising future.  Invitation to Love was a pretty good book but what happened to editing? And what's with all the v's between the chapters? The erors were so annoying it was distracting. I hope the author looks at the reviews because she/he has a good handle on how to pull the reader in. I hate to be negative, but the whole way through, pass was used when it should have been past and letters sometimes missing.  I thought feelings and descriptions were very well expressed. Proofreading imperative!