Review: Good but needs bulking out.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2012
The most detailed part of the book is in the 'short' you can first download. After that it moves too quickly with not enough detail. Almost like a series of bullet points briefly elaborated on.This had the potential to be excellent, yet fell into mediocre. Which is a shame.The scenes within the temple itself were very Indiana Jones, without the detail.If this is revised and fleshed-out I will read again.