Review: Decent first Superhero ebook
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 13, 2014
While not as polished as Wearing the Cape and other self published superhero fiction the adventures of Cosmic Girl prove entertaining enough for the price. As mentioned by other reviewers there were some plots holes and the characterization felt lacking except for the three characters the story usually focused on. I felt that only Beth, Brittany, and Micheal were fleshed out enough. This was still a very good attempt at writing a self published novel though and it's steps above what you find in the "free" section. Still the author might want to think about reducing the price so he can attract more readers. I get the feeling the 3.95 price is keeping some people away. Here's hoping he keeps up the writing since I have a feeling this is someone who will only improve with each ebook he releases.