Review: Good Story, But Needs Editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2014
I'm not really a fan of first person stories, but if you chose first person, you need to stick with it. This was not always the case in this book. In addition to that, there were several obvious grammar errors.Despite this, I did enjoy the story. There wasn't a whole lot of depth to it and it doesn't inspire me to want more by this author, but the story was worth reading.