Review: Disjointed Storytelling
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2014
The blurb on the book made for an interesting story, but the actual execution left much to be desired.  The characters were one dimensional and the story just odd.  The author needed better editing, grammar and syntax.  It would be a better story if were shortened by at least 100 pages and the story tightened up , more linear and the characters rounded out more.