Review: Holy smokes! This one freaked me out.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 10, 2012
There is not much I can say, really. This one was weird one for me. And not necessary in a bad way. I did like it. The guy was really creepy. I liked the fact that we got to know who he was from the get go. It made him look like a ticking time bomb. There was the anticipation, when and how he gonna explode.The reason I'm giving 4 stars is because there was that diarylike feeling to the story. I don't know if it was meant for the story to sound that way or not, but I didn't like that. It was ok when it was toled from his pov, but I would have like to see her parts written a little bit differently. There were also minor grammar mistakes, like quotation marks placed in the wrong places or alone hanging sentences. It felt like story needed a little bit more editing. There were som descriptions, which I felt added nothing to the story. Like for example: "I finish my oamlet and toss my bowl in the sink. Then I yank the window open. Cold air wafts in, whirls around the kitchen and stings my cheeks. I close the window, sigh, grab my jacket, and walk outside."But other than that, I liked it. If there is a sequel comming up, I will be reading it.