Review: cute, but belabors the point
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 16, 2011
This was a cute story and the author has a strong voice, but the book could use some more editing. There were a few typos and grammatical errors, but what bugged me more was the way the author tends to go on about something long after we got the point. For instance, Kait is surprised to learn that Liz is Ethan's sister. Then a little later she reminds us what a crazy coincidence that was, then she quotes a lengthy newspaper article that had that information in it and we can see for ourselves why she didn't pick up on it when she first read it, but then she proceeds to explain to us what we just saw for ourselves, then she follows that explanation with one more "I had no idea that Ethan even had a half sister." Okay, we get it. Move on, please.