Review: shows promise but falls short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2012
The premise of this series shows promise but the writing technique falls short. The author continuously switches from present tense to past tense sometimes in the same sentence. The story feels like an outline or a summary rather than a completely written book. It could be so much better. I should also mention that it should be spellchecked and edited.