Review: Pretty good short story :D
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 11, 2013
3.5-4 starsThis was a pretty good story. I liked the characters and it's an enjoyable short story.Seth is a good guy. He made a deal with the Archangel Michael 1500 years ago in which he agreed to fight demons and the like for Micheal in exchange for immortality. After all this time, Seth is beginning to get tired of the constant fights and wishes he wasn't immortal any more. He's attracted to his next door neighbor but never felt free to approach her because of his life. When he finds out he's eligible to become mortal again, he's very interested. The only problem is that a Succubus has targeted the next door neighbor Seth is attracted to, Camille, and is possessing her in order to get to Seth. He has to take care of this issue and try to save Camille.Camille is a nice Southern lady. She's a sweet woman that's not very experienced with men. She's attracted to her next door neighbor, Seth, but he's never asked her out and she's too shy to ask first. Unfortunately for Camille, she gets possessed by a Succubus that's intent on taking Seth's soul.Seth has to avoid being captivated by the Succubus in Camille for 24 hours and then the demon will go back to Hell and Camille will be safe. This isn't as easy as he'd hoped as the demon is very tricky and seductive. Fortunately, Seth is able to come up with a good plan that keeps him from setting her free of giving in to her even if he wants to. Things don't go perfectly but Seth is able to resist and the demon is sent back to hell. Once Camille is back to herself, she proceeds to show Seth just how much she likes him and wants him. They have a hot celebration and start seeing each other seriously once Seth becomes mortal again.This was a pretty good story. I liked Seth and Camille seemed nice (although we don't get to know her very well since a good portion of the story she's possessed). Since it's a short story it wasn't very in-depth but it was still enjoyable and worth the read. :D