Review: On one hand I can understand the high ratings because the essence of the story was poignant and evolved into a sweet love story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2014
This was a very strange read for me. On one hand I can understand the high ratings because the essence of the story was poignant and evolved into a sweet love story. On the other hand, the constant grammatical errors as well as the flow of the story kept pulling me back to reality and kept me from fully immersing myself. The biggest issue I had was the lack of dialogue in the first few chapters. I wholly agree with another reviewer who commented that it was possible to believe that Hudson couldn't even speak during the beginning chapters. Another issue that grated on me was the fact that Hudson's hesistancy toward a lasting relationship with Lia came because of guilt for his actions in war was not addressed until it was a bomb drop out of the blue. I would have preferred not being kept in the dark about this as I read almost the entire book with a feeling of something vital missing from the storyline.Overall this was a good effort, albeit a rated G read for me.