Review: Witness Protection?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2013
Author seems to have forgotten Maya's age (19) and the story's location (New York) as the two cops she is staying with keep giving her beer and wine. Of course, Ryder has two submissives over the first night she's there and is screwing them all night and his partner, Nate, doesn't have a problem with it. His boss doesn't have a problem when Ryder, 28, starts screwing a 19 year old murder witness who he is meant to be protecting. Apparently, witness protection means something different in this story. The serial killer part of the story isn't bad and the sex is quite hot but overall lacks continuity, has stilted dialogue and weak character development.