Review: Some typos and some other things distracted from the story.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 20, 2013
I was all set to snuggle down with a lap robe and an apple and enjoy a nice Christmas story.  I liked the first story in a lot of ways, however the typos and some errors in sentences were off putting.  The second story about Dora was well thought out, but the idea that a birth can be celebrated and weeks later another child is born, was concerning.  Most of us know it takes about 9 months for a new life, not weeks.  The fact that he said they were both ten years old, would have been better said the birth was celebrated and nine months later the new baby came.  Then the story would have made sense.