Review: Painfully bad writing - is there an editor in the house???
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 24, 2011
AAAGGGHHH. I'm giving up after the first few pages. This book is impossible to get through - sounds like it was written by a high school student who hasn't quite learned basic sentence structure and proper use of tense, but imagines he himself to be literate.  In addition to incorrect tense, puncutation, grammar and verb form, the vocabulary and basic writing is juvenile.A few examples:"He looked across at the other three mean, making sure they were ready, they all looked at him in readiness.""...but also any human who took the law into THEIR own hands""Thousands of people go missing every year, many are never found, the Church always suspected that many were turned, but could not prove it or perhaps didn't want to."Don't have time for more examples - have to run and DELETE this from my Kindle. Thanks goodness this was free.