Review: Believable and fast paced
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 7, 2012
Analyzing store of firsthand experiences and inside information keep this story fresh and fascinating.  Excellent character development keeps you involved and wanting to know more about them.  Plot a bit confusing in places, jumping back and forth, but he pulls it all together eventually. Could use a bit more editing to go smoother, but writer shows real promise.