Review: Off to a good start
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2014
This is a good story with a good premise and a good main villain who's related to our MC. Hence, it's a great dynamic set-up as fighting against family usually makes for a great story. There were some things said by this story's villain, who is a lackey for the main villain, that appalled me, but I think it's a good thing that I had such a strong reaction b/c it means I want to be there when the main villain goes down. The two MCs have good chemistry and we meet a few characters whose story I'm interested in reading. The Alpha was a bit possessive and heavy-handed in the beginning, but he has a strong mate who made him realize he could take care of himself. Hence, no strong Alpha with a wimpy mate who acts like a damsel in distress. There are some good sex scenes, though they may be too long-winded, and the wolves can do partial shifts in this story. The reason I did not give this story five stars is because it's too prose heavy. Tapping a lot times on my kindle and still reading prose is just annoying and I recommend the author get a better balance been dialogue and prose for the next story. It's well-written, well-paced and well-priced. Recommend.