Review: Decent story - but be prepared to have to fight to find it
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2014
If this is the corrected manuscript, as the author states in the description, I can simply not begin to imagine how bad it was before.While the story itself was decent, the incredibly poor translation has removed what was good and left a jumbled mess in its place.Early references to the damage caused by the Plain Crush (Plane Crash), and constant continued references to Crushes (Crashes). Explosions in the water causing 'Gazers' (Geysers) twice in the same paragraph. Complete and utter confusion as to tenses. Homonyms confusingly done right for pages, then almost shockingly wrong.Sentence structures that may be literal translations of the source tongue, yet here constantly leave the reader to pause needing to untangle the meaning from the chaos.I have made it 3/4 of the way through so far, and if anything the mistakes are becoming worse and more prevalent. Currently I am embarrassed to admit I purchased this and I am seriously considering shelving the ebook until some later revision comes along.