Review: The author potential. Cute hot read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 4, 2014
While the story isn't in debt, and it felt jumbled sometimes, it was a hot little read. Things in the story bothered me that normally wouldn't make sense, for example, if someone was arrested for auto theft, how where they able to get it out of impound if it wasn't in their name? A judge forcing the husband to sign divorce papers? Doesn't the judge just grant the divorce? Things of that nature needed work in the story, but with some adjusting, this story could have been 5 star. Editing was very decent.