Review: proof reading required
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 15, 2014
Good story premise but the errors throughout drove me crazy! I can overlook grammatical errors butwhen the author messes up her own story line count me out. For instance: *spoiler toward the end of the book, when Lance was in town looking for Jess she said she wanted to act normal and go to the diner to work and that she didn't want to hide at the ranch because she didn't want to lead Lance to Murphy the dog. Cole and Murphy agree as long as Cole can take her and drop her off and pick her up from the diner. Next scene Murphy is at sheriff's office telling everyone that she is at the ranch safe with all of the ranch hands. Cole comes back and says she drove out to the ranch by herself and that he watched her go like this was the plan the whole time. *Another spoiler: "When she (Jess) was done, Lance pushed her against the wall and used some of the twine to tie her own arms behind her back. It cut into her wrists, but that was the least of her worries. 'Now get me the money' Jess made short work of  retreiving the cash from the safe. 'Here it is. Every penny. Now just go. You can tie me up if like.' " First her arms are tied behind her back but she can open the safe, gee whiz I knew these woman had to be flexible to please 2 men at a time but that's just crazy! Then after miraculously opening said safe she politely tells Lance that he can tie her up again, or double tie, or untie or..... oh I don't know I am so confused.All in all I think that this author just needs to take a little more time to proof read her work or get a friend or someone else that will edit for her. (I assume that this is self published, if not she needs to fire her editor)