Review: Disappointingly short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 18, 2013
At nineteen pages, this short story is not a good deal priced at 2.99. It had the potential to be much better if developed further. The writing was good, except for the author's frequency of stepping out of the character's head to explain things (in parentheses--this irritated me with the frequency he did it in the first couple of pages) and the voice of the character was much too mature to be that of a 12-15 year old. While I enjoyed this quick little sojourn from reality, I would not recommend it to others.