Review: Good story, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 6, 2013
This story has potential however the writing lacks depth and personality. At times, during dialog between characters it's difficult to tell who is speaking. Other times the author switches between her description of the scene to the characters. Suffice to say this book was very confusing and difficult to follow most of the time. The word "flow" would not be used to describe this book.Also the dialog between the 2 main characters when they were on the train was incredibly immature and not the language of a 17 year old and her boyfriend (more like 12 yo kids).Now let's talk about the errors in this book... actually lets not because I will be here all night. Just one more reason this book was difficult to follow. Don't get me wrong, the story was good, just poorly executed. I will buy the 3rd book but only because I'm not a quitter. I'm hoping  the writing is better with the 3rd book.Thank you Miss. James for the adventure.