Review: A great start - and I'm not a huge fan of more serial or "3 part" type stories!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 13, 2013
I'm not normally of fan of short more serial fiction (with a few exceptions) but this one is pretty good. Really 3.5 stars but I rounded up. In something this short I don't expect believable - I mean it's fantasy really the whole blackmail thing. In real life many people would just go to the cops - but then you'd have no story right?So anyway Kayla wasn't too bad - clearly there is more history for her we aren't aware of. Gage was suitably alpha and jerkish but there were moments you could totally see his desire and his need. Of course don't like the method but then again back to the blackmail thing....The Doctor in the hospital? No idea. Seemed a bit out of character for Kayla - and don't get the two pregnancy thing -- I guess I'm confused on it.The only part I hated was the whole weekend thing. Having had a child myself in NICU and PICU this didn't really hold well with me whatsoever. I know about experimental treatments and what a parent will do to obtain them -- and so I felt this more emotionally than many might.It is dark but the BDSM isn't too harsh (so far) and the scenes are very good. Looking forward to part 2!