Review: Missing Something
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2011
JustJan summed my thoughts up in her review.  I haven't read the books this novella goes with. Perhaps more emotion comes across in them.  I did like the potential for world building and the customs and culture the author tried to include.  Unfortunately the story that should have had me in tears and really questioning what I might do in the same situation fell flat, and had me having to force myself to finish it instead of moving on to something with more depth.I do still have to give props for the world created because it was more detailed than many short stories are and even full novels. It was also a good basis and idea for a short story, though parts were rushed especially the ending. While I am giving it two stars because it was a bit of a numb read for me, I feel like it did have such potential that I would encourage others to give it a try since it is free and decide for themselves if the style of writing suits their tastes, for the series itself might just be much more flavorfull.