Review: Amazing, Sugary Read but just too short...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2014
I fell in love with the title and blurb. This story had the potential and would have made a helluva sexy and amazing story if not for the length of the story. It is very very short. The ending was so abrupt as well. When I got to the end of it, I thought there was an error while downloading! I really really wished it was longer. With such a short length, the development of the characters and story just isn't satisfactory.The characters are compelling and have a story behind them. I enjoyed how Bailey is submissive yet not a doormat, she is independent; unlike most BDSM stories where the submissive just seems so submissive, it's kinda irritating. I also love that Bailey runs a bakery and is a curvy woman, yet isn't bothered by it. As you can tell, I love Bailey!One thing I didn't like was how Aiden kept running away, and then returning, and then running away again D< It gets irritating. Like dude, you're a dom, make up your mind and stop sending mixed signals. Plus there is no absolute HEA as well, so I'll classify this as a short, intense hot read.