Review: Interesting
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 4, 2013
Passion Eternal, a novel in it's infancy, tries to express the growing pains of a young girl named Tina.The reader feels the strained relationship between teenager,  Tina and her single, mother.  Tina's, fascination with a boy named Brad, crashes when she learns that his family is moving. Brad's move leaves her with feelings of, what if and what might've been.  'Life', seems to happen too fast, for Tina and her best friend, Jess.Structure and a defined storyline need work.  This novel is labeled, 'Erotic' but comes across, 'crude' and 'in your face'.  The inappropriate language throughout the book isn't necessary, and I found it offensive and an immediate turn off.Passion Eternal, is a rough draft, that can be worked.  Self published author, Jenn Sawyer has a story to tell, and with maturity, mentoring and practice, a 're-release' of Passion Eternal has real potential.I enjoyed Jenn Sawyer's, emails, and look forward to more.