Review: Good read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 20, 2014
I'll start off by saying that Alpha males definitely do it for me...but I had issues with this one. I felt like every time Amy got emotional and/or angry, Dean would just shut her down. I'm a highly emotional person myself and get pissed when I'm made to feel bad about expressing my feelings, or that what I'm feeling or thinking isn't important. I felt this happened to Amy quite a bit. His trust issues cause him to make snap judgements and she takes off after he kicks her out.Apparently, he "regretted his behaviour that day, wanted her forever"... but I must have missed that conversation because I never once read that he said to her "I'm sorry." I got that he really was sorry and wanted her back. But that's only because I was privy to his inner thoughts as he was doing all he could to find her. But he never told her that. I got it, but it didn't seem believable that she would get it. So, it just came across as him just wearing her down with his constant presence and would go along with anything he said just to get some damn space!However, having said all that, I quite liked the general idea of the story. I liked the other characters too and am keen to find out what happens next. I also like the writing of this story. I was never bored (frustrated maybe, but not bored) and the story moved at a steady enough pace for me. (Just would've liked to have seen a bit of grovelling!)3.5-4 stars