Review: Fell flat for me.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2012
I wanted to like this story.  The short descriptive blurb makes it intriguing, but sadly the story doesn't hold a candle to the blurb.It's a bit boring, like reading a report.  The characters weren't described enough to become visual to the reader.  They were simply introduced and made to go through the motions.I hope this author finds his voice and tone, while continuing to hone his craft.I will look for his next work of fiction.