Review: great way to get fleeced
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2012
Great story. I love the tips for preppers and the things to look out for. Its a bit far fetched how the gods of fortune seem to shine out of the protagonists bum. (Two guys do not take down that many deer in one sitting).  But. Its fiction and I don't mind the lead character being a baddass.  The writing is so fluid and well thought out that you get sucked in and fifteen minutes later your at the end of the book; wanting more.  This is why its not five star for me. 39 pages then I need to insert another dollar!WHAT!I feel like I'm on vacation with my kids at some tourist trap arcade on a raniy day and I have to keep feeding tokens into a decrepit old ride every two minutes to keep my three year old happy.  Toby is either a mean SOB or a marketing genius. If this style of selling a story takes off I will be truly un happy.  As it stands I will not read past December just on principle, which makes me sad since I would love to see how it works out.  Even though I realize one of the "journals" is 79 pages or something like that. I need to take my stand. If it comes out in one volume one day I'll buy the whole thing but I feel the author is not doing himself any favors making people log in every 15 - 20 minuts to purchase another entrt, especially thoes of us who want to get lost in a good book for several hours. Which with the rich tapistry that is created here would be easily done.