Review: Gross errors in grammar and word usage. Verbose but slow moving writing style.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2014
I got the book free but I still couldn't get past the first chapter. There were gross errors in grammar and incorrect words used, as well as verbose descriptions of clothing worn, foods eaten, etc. This woman is supposed to be a Reservist in the Marine CORPS. Not the "core" as stated. Other incorrect words used.grab the reigns/reinspinned up stress/pent upDrake and I/meTheir conversation on their first date was unusually revealing of their lives. I find it hard to believe they would talk like that and get so deep into their personal secrets on such a short acquaintance. After reading the reviews and learning that there will be a cliff hanger non-ending, I gave up.