Review: I Wish I'd Paid Attention...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2011
...to the other reviews. They weren't kidding. This is bad. Really bad. Thankfully, it's also very short and, best of all, it was free. If I'd paid money for it, I'd be really upset.The author seems to be aiming for the fantasy-romance genre, but it reads like a clunky "Letter to Penthouse," if that letter was written by a high school sophomore with a pocketful of cliches. If you need a primer on how NOT to write a story, this one is your best example.