Review: Jackie Barbosa wove a realistic and dynamic plot
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2014
I loved this story.  However, I was disappointed that it was so short.  This plot has the makings of a long novel and has twists and turns that could keep a reader's attention for the story's duration.  Please, Jackie Barbosa, consider expanding this great story into the book it deserves to be.  You are a great writer, explore your options and loose your talents in the expansion of this book.