Review: Free Short Story (first thing read on Kindle Fire HD)
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2014
I'm not sure what to make of Hallock's "Dead Doughboy Walking". The set-up is lacking, the characters aren't developed, and the ending is rushed (especially considering how languid the section on the interactions between Cecil and Horace is). It was free and not terrible, but without some greater context to the concept (I assume there is one if Sojourning Souls means anything), it isn't worth recommending.