Review: So-so, but has potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 27, 2013
I thought the first half (ish) of the book was good and readable, not counting a few typos here and there.  The second half (ish), though, made me just shake my head.  I liked the characters in the beginning, but it really felt that they changed too much from one half to the next.The number of characters grew at the story went, which is fine, but Lizzy was completely unexplained and her friend (whose name was odd and I can't remember) was completely unnecessary.  There was a secondary (tertiary?  quaternary?) "relationship" between Javon's sister and a werewolf, which didn't need to be in the book, because it had nothing to do with anything.I don't know about anyone else, but the (multiple) sex scenes between Javon and Abby were hot at first and then got repetitive quite quickly.In the second half of the book, I keep seeing things like "[delete space after comma]" left in the book.  An editor would definitely have helped.  Especially with the dialogue, where everyone was exclaiming instead of simply talking.There was so much promise in the first half of the book that petered out.  It felt like the author had a good idea for a story, wrote a good first half, and then the whole thing turned into a car wreck.Great potential, but needs some help.