Review: Promising story poor execution
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 2, 2014
This author has potential.  The story is decent even though timelines and plausibility are a huge stretch.  I don't know anyone who can walk 30-70 miles in one day.The characters are well drawn and the action is good.The biggest problem is how poorly it is written.  Too many mistakes in sentence structure, punctuation and word choice.  There are numerous times when the exact same paragraph is repeated.  In almost every page I had to stop and decipher what the sentence really was conveying because the way it was written made no sense.The author should take a refresher course in grammar and sentence structure.  There are plenty of reasonably priced workshops everyone.  He should also research a good professional editor.