Review: Reads like an outline for a larger work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 16, 2013
I enjoyed the story, it was a quick read.  The characters were just too nice, too perfect.  No sense of distress or real excitement. The 'ending' was too quick.  (Oh we're sorry, we didn't know, we will fix it, snap fingers it is done.  The plot was interesting but should have been fleshed out more.