Review: Ok...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 19, 2013
Not bad. Not great. I liked it, but I thought it could have benefited from an epilogue or another chapter or something. It kind of ended abruptly. I also would have like to have seen Jess and Jack do a little more actual bonding. I realize that they knew each other 10 years before, but people can change a lot in that amount of time, and they never really just had a conversation. I understand that it was a short story set to a short time-frame, but I would have liked them to have spent some time seeing if they still liked each other, not just based on before.