Review: 2.5 Stars. Should come with a warning for its vulgarity and lack of editor.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 15, 2014
Right off the bat we are thrust into Trace Dakota's life, who is giving new meaning to "wham-bam-thank-ya-m'am".  I liked the dirty talking/rough and tough polar bear up to a certain point.  It seemed to add the story because it was showcasing the character development of Trace... but about 80% of the way through (the stripper scene) the editing just soars right into the literary toilet.  Words were misplaced, names (like Jack White) were written in as "Jack Black", and sentences were constructed as if by a seventh grader (going on and on, jumbled, and awkward).  There was a lot of repeating-  Trace is getting hard, Trace wants to have sex with Candace, etc...  It becomes much like beating a dead horse after awhile.I also have this thing when shapeshifter books are written about shapeshifters who do not SHIFT into their animal forms.  It kind of drives me crazy.  Isn't that what shapeshifters do?  I can totally get on board with their animal instincts and such but it seems kind of... I don't know, like false advertisement?Jenika Snow had everything going for her up until that last 80% when all use for the English language was throw out the window.So, if you can lock your inner grammar Nazi away and navigate through messy writing, have at it.  I wanted to enjoy it but couldn't get past the bad writing.  Totally ruined the reading experience.