Review: Umm no!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 20, 2011
While this book was cute in some ways, it was completely unbelievable (15 orgasms...12 consecutive and uninteruppted... in one night? Really??).  The pacing was way too fast and the characters were not very honorable. Furthermore while Hunter was ok, Raina was not very likeable. This story could have worked if the characters had been fleshed out more, if the timeline was slowed down and spread out and if the heroine had a lick of sense. The 'angry black woman' routine is tired. I like my female characters sassy AND smart, not bipolar. Some morals would be nice too.  There were also typos galore, missing words, extra words. Who proofread this??Speaking of morals, my main problem was....SPOILERS! SPOILERS!! DO NOT READ IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW THE STORY!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>How fast they hopped into bed. Even the initial scene when Raina realizes that Hunter is attracted to her was just inappropriate. He tells her his brother has just died and pulls her onto his lap to comfort her??  Good old fashioned hugs don't work anymore??  Mind you, at this point in the story, she thinks he hates her yet she allows him to, while thinking about how hot he is. Whether or not she and Kyle were having problems, Raina had just found out he was dead.  Plus, she was pregnant with his unborn child! Ok, so she goes home and days later (a week maybe?) Hunter comes by to check on her. They share a passionate kiss and she's practically dry humping his erection through his pants. Classy. Three weeks later he comes by for dinner and they end up having UNPROTECTED SEX, because it's perfectly normal for a woman to hop into bed with her unborn child's uncle weeks after the child's father has passed, WITHOUT TELLING SAID UNCLE THAT SHE'S PREGNANT!  Luckily for her, he brings her to orgasm 15 times in one night. *Rolls eyes*. I've read tons of IR books, tons of erotica, menages, paranormal...you name it, I've read it..so sex for sex's sake is not an issue for me, but this situation didn't flatter the female character. She came off as confused and skanky.So now, they've had sex. She suddenly wants to grow a backbone and start picking fights, only to give in 2 pages later anyway. Attitude for no reason is not sexy! I understood some of her concerns and the background story with her parents did shed some light into some of her decisions, but I hate when authors have female characters act like they're strong only to turn around and make stupid decisions and do whatever the man wants anyway. Why waste readers' time?Ultimately, readers will get their happily ever after and the ending was sweet but the journey there is so not worth the price.