Review: It was fast!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 20, 2013
Cute short story. It moved fast, I liked that the woman had real life faults. I liked that she was confident in her sexual capabilities, and not undersuited for her first...I did however think it wasnt very plausible that he would fly from Italy to the states, conveniently knew where she lived, was able to get through her gate and managed to sweep her off her feet. I personally like stories with real life depth and it did kind of lack here, but in a fantasy realm it was perfect!