Review: Good Story But Needs Work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2013
The story is great. The idea for the story is different and it's interesting but the writing needs work. The book lacks a cohesive joining of paragraphs to blend the story together smoothly and there are parts that are unclear and hard to understand.I think if the story were re-worked, it has the makings of a good book.