Review: Needs some work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2014
This is a good example of a book needing an editor to bring the story together, fill in gaps, and correct the numerous punctuation and spelling problems.Note to author:  multiple uses of 'all ready' instead of 'already'.  Also, you can substitute 'recalled' or other words for 'remembered' where you have short sentences with each having a character 'remember' different things from his life.  Was a bit irritating.Has the potential to be a good book if you can bring it all together.