Review: A great start
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 5, 2012
The story definitely hooks you from the beginning. It only took less than thirty minutes to read the whole thing - so perfect for reading during lunch break or waiting for an appointment - but I was intrigued to find out what happened next. My only complaint - this book needs editing. One example, commas not being placed inside quotation marks. Despite the lack of a good editor, I look forward to reading the next installment with the hope the spice factor picks up. :)