Review: Decent story, no editing or proofreading what-so-ever.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2014
For an example of his writing, check out his bio (at least until he fixes it). Missing words, missing letters: as an example instead of the word "Investigation," which is what I assumed he meant to use, he used "Instigation." That's just one of the many things that could have easily been found if he had proof read his own story. My advice to the author? After you write it, read it out loud to yourself so it forces you to read each word.