Review: Disappointing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2012
I knew when I got this that it was flash fiction, so I wasn't expecting a novel or anything. However, I was expecting it to be written better. The end did not scare/shock me. In fact, without the author's note I would not have understood what the theme of the story even was. It was a good idea, just poorly executed. Describing everything at the beginning as dark, dark was annoying and sometimes plain stupid. The rest of it read very choppy and was just ultimately disappointing. Thank goodness it was free!