Review: Good story/ poor editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 12, 2013
I really did enjoy this story...... & would have gladly given it 5 stars except for the rather poor editing. If a professional proof reader was used please find another they are terrible. The story line was what kept my attention even though there were so many silly errors, repeated sentences, incomplete sentences, words used incorrectly like using than instead of then, ridicules instead of ridiculous, not just once but right through the book. But I did enjoy the story itself, it is just rather off putting to have to re-read a line or try to figure out what the end of the sentence was saying, but again the story itself I found worth while. Hopefully by the time I get to the next in the series these errors will have been sorted. I really do hope so.