Review: Get real.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2011
This is could have been a really cute story but is so far fetched and over the top in spots that I cannot rate it higher than a one star. The book starts out predictably but then gets nutty once the couple gets to Fla.  I mean come on a house that size with only one bedroom????? Then the stuff that happens between Ethan and Neal.  Sure, like Ethan can really get away with doing what he did. Then the investigation that was so sloppy and should not have resulted it what happened to Tori if the principals were properly questioned but then we would not have had a story would we? Then the quick happy ending that was not believable because Ethan does the job his Security Chief should have done in the first place. I could not have been all that forgiving. Where it really gets lame was playing the race card. Are you kidding me? That was ham handed and totally unnecessary. My guess is this book was written by someone who has never been in this type of relationship. Because if you have you would not have gone there. Lastly we have the usual typos and editing issues that seems to be a feature in these WM/BW books. For once will you authors use an editor. Spell check just does not cut it. Don't insult the book buying public by selling a book in this condition.