Review: Action, BUT!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2012
This book was so full of action that I could barely keep up.  What threw me off and aggravated me so much was the overwhelming amount of grammatical errors and some consistency errors.  "Where vs were", "there, their vs they're, threw vs through" - and I could go on and on.  The clincher, however, was how the Lord's Prayer was butchered.  "Our Father who art in heaven.  Hallow be our name.  From kingdom come, they will be done, etc".  I had struggled up to this point but, that did it for me and I deleted it.  Hopefully, her next publication will be better if her Beta readers (if any) and editor are on top of their game.  I would have really enjoyed this book if not for things I mentioned which were too many to ignore.