Review: okay story but writing is a little elementary
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 9, 2014
The premise is ok - h goes back home to parents resort while waiting for a job offer to materialize, meets old crush, emotions erupt, add a psycho ex-girl friend, H is rich and cynical with women who are only attracted to his money, h gets job offer not knowing it was from company owned by H. And of course, H thinks h is like all the other fake and user women.Now that sounds ok, right?Well, the problem is the way it was written. At this point in our lives, we have read so many books. And the one thing I'm pretty sure, we expert readers have in common is great imagination. Basically, the writer did not have to tell me that when you hang up the phone, the line gets disconnected. Or that you need a driver's license to rent a car. It's way too detailed. Unnecessarily detailed. It's like the author thinks she's telling a story to kids. Author could have better used those pages to add an interaction between h and her father instead of just a description, and bring more depth to her character. Or an interesting epilogue.But hey, if you can get past that, this would be an okay novel.