Review: Leaves a lot to be desired
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2014
I had high hopes for this story, but for me it kind of fell flat. It just seemed to leave too many gaps in the storyline and unexplained/unanswered questions within the plot. It feels as though it never made it an editor before being published. The story has a lot of potential, and would love to give it another try if the author revised it.