Review: Pete & Repeat & Repeat & Pete Again & Again &  -  Again!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2013
I have looked at some of these reviews & find myself wondering if we actually even read the same book. The first 50% of this book could almost be skipped due to so little happening. This book is also told through the eyes of just DD - Why, no clue unless it was to make you hate her which I now do. A new character is introduced as BoB I will say no more other then at least "HE" doe not overly annoy me by saying constant stupid or repetitive crap. This book has been an absolute struggle to finish & the truth is I am not there yet. This book may have the same characters from the first book but it lacks the cohesive flowing original story.This book is so stupid at times that we have DD fantasizing about characters in the book. Now why is this stupid Because it goes on forever... There is page after page of this boring repetitive at best juvenile fantasizing. Not only does she do this often but she starts off doing it for like 10 straight pages. Then the real boring crap starts :Blah Blah Blah we are all good friends Blah Blah Blah they are all my friends Blah Blah Blah I am friends to all of them...Blah Blah Blah Penny really loves Grim Blah Blah BLah Grim really love Penny Blah Blah Blah they really love each other...Blah BLah Blah we are a family Blah Blah Blah they are my family Blah Blah Blah I am family to them...Lets NOT forget the BLAH BLAH BLAH how funny how hysterically funny how laugh out loud funny we are as a group...This crap goes on about how in love Danika & Nikki are, How they are beautiful together, how it is beautiful to be a lesbian for them two - How DD is horny, how DD is really horny, how DD doesn't really have enough time for a relationship BUT she has a family, they love her she loves them it is so HARD to watch how much Grim loves Penny (the reverse) How Danika loves Nikki (the reverse) & how DD is still horny. That is the basically the 1st 50% of this book, along with constantly (as in many many times) reminding us of same things we learned in the 1st book. FILLER NOTHIN BUT FILLER!Even if this book now ends in spectacular fashion like either the original Planet of the Apes, The Mist, or The Usual Suspects it will be too late & way way too little. His first book was too good & way too original to include this as a part of that story. This author looks like he got caught up in his own hype to write such a weak story. Maybe he should have skipped half the filler wrote a shorter book by concentrating more on plot & less of what looks like a punishment assignment - AS IN write 10,000 words by tomorrow & have it on my desk or face 1 month of detention!WELL Thank God (tribute to religious overtones in the book to which I actually enjoyed) I finished - as in Finally! I seriously considered going from the two stars to one but I did not in homage to the 1st book. I am sorry really I am because of how much I enjoyed the 1st book BUT this should have been a much shorter story & actually it was a much shorter story. The 3 way at the end is sooooo long I now hate something I loved dearly. Like so much of this book it just drones on completely flat. Because this review now feels like this book I will end it on a simple question. Do you really think your readers are so stupid that you have to tell them at least TEN TIMES why & how creepy is for a vampire to cry without tears - as if you were telling it each time for the 1st time???