Review: Self-publishing doesn't mean you have to do it all by yourself.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
Oh,where do I begin?When you are writing .... choose a tense.  Past is the preferred narrative form.  Present is problematic on a few levels.  It is easy to slip out of the present to the past, it also reads like scene direction in a script.Proofreading is so important that it can make a halfway decent plot unbearable if the mistakes being read could so easily been avoided.  Get three of your most trusted friends to read it.  They would have caught 80% of the ones I saw.Pick a plot, any plot.  You have interracial/menage with BDSM.  AND matchmaking?  There are criminal elements that require a little homework on legal procedures.  Things just appeared in the story without set-up.  BAD MOVE.  On top of this all your heroine has major trust issues and a bestie who also has baggage and you introduce characters halfway through that it appears would be part of the next book in the series but you don't incorporate them deeply enough to make me want to spend money on another book.Pick a genre and a plot.  K*I*S*S.I try not to criticize without reading the entire book.  This was a waste of a good idea.  Good luck on your next endeavor.