Review: Wait for the cleaned up version.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 9, 2013
This could have been a really great story. You have a lower middle class girl who seems honest and hard working. Then you add a series of events that get her to meet a really rich Silicon Valley mogul who is only 7 years her senior. They meet and form an 'arrangement' marriage (you have to read the book for this) which will terminate in one year. This arrangement will leave Karin one wealthy woman when the contract is over. After the 'arranged marriage' Ryan decides he really does love her and they have a honeymoon filled with sex, sex, sex. Okay, I am somewhat okay to this point. Then comes the part that got me. Ryan is thinking he has never felt this way about any other woman, and trust me, he has dated some real strange women. So he takes Karin to a place where they are doing all kinds of sex in one room with everybody watching?? He undresses his 'wife' and has sex on a table with her in front of everyone? So this is the authors idea of true love?I would like to see the author re-write this, exclude the dominatrix room where he strips her in front of everyone, and the choking Ryan uses when they have sex. Write it so there is love and respect on Ryan's part for Karin. I feel that by throwing this stuff into your story you have ruined it.Then, I have yet to figure out who transcribes a story for Kindle, but there has to be some serious editing done here.