Review: Not Quite In the Moment
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 7, 2013
I read a book just to read.  Yes, I have read many with typos and grammatical mistakes, but still enjoyed the story.  This was not the case.First, if you are going to venture to use a foreign language, please use the correct spelling.  "Exactement", hence not "Exactament".  This is learned in the second year of French class, but there are great online tools for translation.  Also not everyone may know a foreign language, so you may want to add a one line synopsis.Secondly, I found myself skimming a lot.  There's only so much of a strong woman that you can stand.  It just didn't work for me.  I can be very strong, but being in love doesn't make a person weak.  For me personally, I just could not relate.Lastly, ** Spoiler **, The threesome vision didn't work.  There was no need to throw it in.  I feel like so much of this book was dialogue that just ran on and on just so there could be another sex scene.  I have read quite a few BDSM and more research should be done.  If you're going with that genre then go full on and do it well.So, I give this book 2.5 stars.But I will say, kudos to the author.  It takes a lot to dream a story and put it to paper.  This just needs to be polished a little more, but I'm sure that comes with time.  Good Luck!  I'm not going to slam the author and say I would never read another book by they author.  Never is a permanent word and the only permanence in life is Death.  I'm not ready to go there.  Happy Reading!