Review: Too fast
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 23, 2012
The story is there but there is no character development and it seems too fast for them to fall in love. This first book should have been spent developing the characters quirks and personalities, get the reader to love and hate them, but I feel like it was a summary instead. Sorry but this first book should be free and not even worth 99 cents.Yes it's a rip off, from 50 Shades to every other series that tries to write about a dominate business man and his virgin/innocent sub. Been there read that, not wanting to waste time and money reading it again.Your publishers should have warned you about this, because from reading other reviews everyone feels the same.  I didn't even finish the first book BC it's too similar and it goes way too fast like you are rushing to write.