Review: Needed More
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2014
This is a "WEST SIDE STORY" type of love book.Jackie is a girl from the hood who was dating one of it's gang members.  Nicky is the son of a mafia DON.  Now they have to overcome the obstacles that come from this type of love.I can say that the plot was fantastic!  It was thought threw and implemented well.  The writing was not smooth and transitional.  It just felt chopped up.  It was hard to follow at times.  There was also no sense of ebb and flow.The characters were a bit weak but I still liked what the author was attempting to put into words.  they just needed a bit more depth.  The story line itself was overly predictable.  Even though a reader knows how a book will end, what makes a good book is what happens to surprise the reader until then.