Review: OMG - who wrote this?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2013
Who wrote this mess - a 10-year-old? The novel started with such a good and interesting premise, then just deteriorated into a cartoon! I read to about the 50 percent mark, then started skimming - by the 75 percent mark, I couldn't take it any more! I just quit. Note to the author - the word is alone - not ALONG! Two completely different meaning, yet you kept using the wrong word! Also, punctuation goes INSIDE the quotation marks!!! blah, blah, blah." get it? I'm sorry to be so harsh but....this could have been a pretty good story. Instead it was just...stupid.Why or why won't these self-published "authors" take the time to get a critique of their work before throwing it up on amazon? You don't need a professional editor. Have someone read the darn book - the errors are glaring - anyone could see them. Oy, what a mess.