Review: Poor writing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 16, 2013
I appreciate the effort of getting a good cover, so 1.5 stars.As for the story, it started off badly: too many adjectives, too much brand name dropping, and other lazy shortcuts. The author does not understand point-of-view as it relates to writing, and jumped heads like you wouldn't believe. Then, after having a slightly annoying in-the-moment beginning scene, she goes into an incredibly boring, extensive info dump.I can forgive stories with the occasional typo or missing word etc., but not when the writing is so poor as well.If quality and writing skill matter to you, you'll want to skip this one. I tried--I really did (especially since I promised myself to finish all my Kindle reads), but time is too precious; this author needs remedial writing courses to start. Thank goodness it was a free download (and now, happily deleted).