Review: East vs West, Sunrise vs Sunset
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
I wanted to give this story 4 stars, but couldn't.  The story moved at a decent pace until the last 3 chapters. Then it took off at warp speed.  It wrapped up way to fast.  A few extra chapters to slow it all down would have been smarter.Also, I could NOT let go of  the whole sunset over the ocean thing.  To the authors, please note:  the sun RISES over the Atlantic, which is the ocean that Myrtle Beach in South Carolina touches.  You would NOT get to see the sun "touching" the Atlantic from Myrtle Beach, in the evenings.  For that you would have to go out west, to the Pacific ocean coastline.  If the authors see this, please try to fix it. It's a horrible mistake, and really does not look good.