Review: get an editer
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 29, 2013
Sorry, but these are short, and I mean short stories, called a series, that are all about sex with just a brief smattering of a plot. Anybody can write about sex. But this author could not even come up with a decent plot? I noticed that all the books in this series are all very short. Why aren't these being sold at the price of novellas? I'm really disgusted with the lack of character development, scene development, and the shortage of all other descriptives that are usually included in a book. These are not books. These are little ditties, using sex as the marketing modality. Please, take down the price of this garbage to about 0.25 per short story and you might get some takers. But after they read the first one....I doubt you will have enough money to buy a loaf of bread. By the way....hire an editer.