Review: The motorcycle theme was more implied than evident in the bit I read.... needs polish
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 8, 2013
Started out reading with a level of interest... But it was all over the show. I had to stop reading before a quarter of the way through. I am not opposed to the harsh biker environment but the actions did not match the words and supposed image (which was more implied than evident).The characters were contradictory and all over the place with their thoughts, feelings and behaviour.Not much of a storyline for that first section I read.Had potential but needs a large polish.Also... Spelling and typos were on average one per page - which I can over look, but one person reading this fresh would pick this up... Give it to the next door neighbour to correct.