Review: Clearly Says It's 24 Pages
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 26, 2013
Great googly moogly, I can't get over the number of people whining and giving 1-star reviews because they say this is too short when the product details very clearly say it's 24 pages.  Additionally, many of those people admit they got it for free; if you get something for nothing and you don't like it, you smile and say "thank you", just like you do when someone brings that nasty corn casserole to a funeral.  One of the only 1-star reviews I agreed with questioned what kind of man would send a woman down a flooding storm drain to rescue a cat.Having said that, I would really like to see the relationship in this story fully developed.  For example, the story only touches on the "dislike" between the characters -- the description, though, led me to believe they really hate each other.  The dislike is pretty one-sided.  I liked the hero's character (well, except for the whole sending the woman down the storm drain thing).So I'm giving this story 3 stars.  If things were a little more developed, I'd go with 4.  So come on authors; win me over with the next one.  Come through on the promise of this story.