Review: could have been.....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 21, 2013
have read and re-read several of cameron danes books  greys awakening, a fostered love, something new.  to see a new title i was excited, though at us$8 and only 1 review.this could have been so much better, whether by an editor removing the over descriptions,  the usage of the same phrasing, word for word, a chapter later.  beta readers should have had the author tighten up, or outright object to some of the depictions (is that their job? i don't know, but i think that first readers should point out flaws in the flow of a story) for me 4 years of friendship & care, there should have been some making love not just effing. every single time.  there was none.i tried to go back too that first sentence that sent me over the edge of over description but i can't find it something about  long black tendril's looping around his soul, or voice like rust, or....maybe i should of kept a notebook of them.i invested an evening, then persevered a morning to get there, to booker & jed's hea.  doubt i will read again.