Review: I couldn't take anymore!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2013
The beginning started off really interesting and I was drawn in and decided to download it. Soon after, it took a wrong turn for me. I understand the idea of confessing to someone who's dying and will never reveal your secret, but it was just too much detail for someone who only had a short time to live. The next thing that drove me absolutely crazy was the author starting every sentence with Jeffrey! Back in second grade a teacher would mark your paper with all types of red marks for starting each sentence with the same word and that's exactly what these sentences reminded of--elementary school. Over and over it was . . . Jeffrey put her in the box. Jeffrey put the box on the cart. Jeffrey pulled the cart to his Escalade. Jeffrey used his key to open the door. Jeffrey, Jeffrey, Jeffrey! Ugh, it was so irritating that I could no longer bear to read. I deleted it from my kindle and moved on to something else.