Review: Better than most
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 6, 2012
As an engulfed-type reader, finding tense issues or poor grammar pulls me out of the story and leaves me sad I can't enjoy what the writer has given me. I just wonder why most erotic fiction has to be so poorly written and edited.This was pretty good and worth the read, but still a bit stilted in text and not always grammatically correct (but miles better than that awful 50 Shades trilogy).  Beyond my little peccadilloes, the excitement and tension between the characters is palpable, but I think she jumped into bed with the party host a little too fast.She's got great potential with a better editor!