Review: Predictable
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2013
This was an okay story, but it was very predictable.  The story just didn't get developed as much as it should have.  There were details that must have been left out or downplayed.  I had trouble with the story line and some inconsistencies.  Also - a big pet peeve for me - there were quite a few grammatical errors.  I don't understand why some people think that running spell check is enough.  There were enough of these errors to be distracting.