Review: Disrobed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2013
PLOT: Tracey accidently sees Felicia in the buff when she's changing for a gala they are planning to attend. He suddenly realizes how beautiful she is. Later that night, they go to his penthouse for drinks and end up in bed together.PROS: I liked the original premise. For the most part, it's well written. I liked Tracey and Felicia.CONS: The biggest issue with this short story is that it's incomplete. The author brings up issues that will, presumably, be resolved in a sequel. Felix and Amanda have only begun to plot to break up Felicia and Tracey.The head hopping is rampant in this story and happens often from paragraph to paragraph. The point of view shifts from Tracey to Felicia to Felix to Amanda.It doesn't make sense that Amanda and Felix want to break up Felicia and Tracey since at this point they are only employer and employee.The story is way overpriced. It should be under a dollar.1 - 1.5 STARS: Save your money and skip this one. It's simply too short. There's a lot of internal dialogue, but not much more to the plot than I've summarized above. If the author completed the story and re-released it, only then would it be worth the price.