Review: Her Dark Angel - This could have been a fascinating story - but it's not.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2014
Feels as if it were written by a high school senior. Verb tenses mangled at times. The sex is okay, if also very high schoolish, but the dialogue is stlted at times and the internal dialogue of the heroine very repetitious.Too bad. The idea of an immortal who has been the avenging force of a god joined with a powerful witch has many interesting possibilities beyond calling him from Hell to be revenged on a cheating boyfriend - another very immature, almost childish goal. I'd give it 2.5 stars for good spelling and a lack of typos, as well as the barest beginnings of a compelling concept, but nothing really happens in this story.