Review: Sorry, Didn't Work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2013
Maybe 2 1/2 stars, the writing was decent,,, but....Follow the Money  -  Initially, the story seemed to be interesting.  However, it wasn't until 50% that the story seemed to move forward. Interesting, maybe. Entertaining, no. I know that a "main" character doesn't need to likable, but he should be at least believable. This guy was a "dunce". A college graduate, attending law school, interning at a corporation, doesn't seem to have anything "between his ears". Other characters that could have helped with the story weren't developed very well. Basically, the main character ruined the story. A story that seemed to have potential, fell flat. The writing was ok, but the novel needed a "lawyer" for an editor.  Basically, could have been good - but, wasn't.  I think I'll pass on the next book.