Review: Editing and Proof Reader Desperately Needed!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2014
I purchased all three books in the series based on the favorable reviews, however, after reading Love and Justice I have to concur the editing or shall I say the lack thereof, is horrible. I started reading Between Love and Dishonor with hopes the editing would improve, only to discover it's as bad if not worse than the first installment. I made it thru 70 percent of Love and Dishonor only to get frustrated with the story line and having to re-read every other paragrah. I understand this is a work of fiction, but to have so many people trying to sabatoge the characters relationships and going to the extreme to do so, REALLY is a bit much. Too much back and forth with the characters and the storyline was all over the place. Sorry, but I won't be reading Atar'd nor finishing Love and Dishonor; makes my brain hurt! Ms. Grant on your next book, PLEASE do a better job with editing. These books should only cost 99 cents. Do understand, I've read plenty 99 cents Kindle reads that were really good with no gramatical errors.