Review: Interesting idea, could use expansion
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2014
First off, a disclaimer; the author provided me with a free copy of the book.I liked the story, and the premise was interesting. However, it felt more like a summary than a story in it's own right. It could benefit from better pacing and more buildup to events.  I would like to see a followup story where the events are expanded upon.