Review: Too many inconsistancies
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
As the title states...A.) These women were taken from America, BUT - They use the metric system for measuring things. What? Use of the word trolley in the British version. Here, we call them "cart's", a "trolley" is a mode of transportation for people, not tea sets. Bloody.  Ok yes, some people have taken to using the word bloody for swearing, but very few over here do so. If you're going to use a foreign setting for your book, at least do the basic research (pretty common knowledge if you ask me) to make it believable.B.) These people that rescue them have never heard of earth, but they're using our slang in it's "proper" form. Ok... that's.. interesting.C.) The main lady, Keela... supposedly is getting over a broken heart.  There's not a lot of development there, she seems to be pretty shallow and idiotic.  The story doesn't show very much interaction with Marruk before she realizes she loves him.  What?!?! How is she suddenly in love with a person she doesn't even know?  I'm not a believer in love in first site.  Lust yes, love, no.D-z.) The entire story is just undeveloped to me. I made it about half way through, then I returned the book for a refund.