Review: Saucy Read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 15, 2011
Bram can't believe his luck when a nameless `goddess' approaches him and takes him to paradise.This story started hot and didn't let up until the last page. The opening almost had a mysterious feel to it: who was this woman, was she even real? You know Bram is thinking the same thing, but when she disappears you're asking more questions. It's almost a relief when Bram runs into her again and learns she works in a Laundromat to pay her way through college. Things really heat up between them but no matter what happens between them she won't reveal her name to Bram which I think really added to the mysterious nature of this story. Just when you thought you were figuring out this character, you learn she's got an ex-lover who's stalking her which adds yet another mysterious element to the story.I would have loved to see this story longer just to see what happened to Bram and his goddess. Bram comes across as sexy and seems to really care for this young woman. The author does a good job of not making Lipstick on your Collar seem like it's just sex between these two. The dialogue is great and the pace perfect for this short story which in fact is about fifty pages long (the copy includes a bonus story by Inez Kelley and another by talented author Dee Tenorio)If hot, steamy stories are for you, I'd recommend Lipstick on his Collar.Originally posted at Whipped Cream Reviews