Review: 5 stars for story, 4 for title confusion, 3 for missing episode
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2014
I loved the story. The sex scenes were believable and didn't have me cringing over poor verbiage, or struggling to figure out who put what part where. This book has a great plot and was very addicting. Kudos to you Ms Babylon for creating an erotic romance that held itself up with more than cheesy gratuitous sex.Here's my only small sticking point, and it doesn't have to do with the writing. You have both Reagan and Wulf's parts of the story published, then you have the omnibus. I'm sure it's a marketing ploy to have them titled differently, but it was a bit confusing before I figured out that the Billionaire's in Disguise Episodes 1-9 were Rae's Secrets and The Dom's Secrets rolled into one. It may be just me, but there you have it. JMHOGreat start to a writing career and I will look for more from you Ms Babylon. I appreciate the fact that you offer your books as bundles because I like to read a book from front to back as opposed to small installments that fill my Kindle with tons of titles to keep track of.As an editor myself, I also appreciate your use of spell check. The fact that you understand the generalities of sentence structure and story flow were a decadence not often found in new self-published authors, so thank you!Post edit: had not begun episode 6 yet when I wrote my initial review, so I was disappointed to later find out that there was no episode 7 in my copy. It says, "Episode 7 here," but there is no text after it. Please fix ASAP!