Review: Not good!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2013
The concept of the story was great and its the reason I bought both books in the series.  Unfortunately, what I got was a story that needed a great deal of polishing. This piece has two authors, at the price they are asking for their work, one of them should have taken the time to proof read and edit the story before publication.  Setting the grammerical errors aside, the story had promise.  The characters didn't connect somehow, the plot was basic with little fluidity that left the reader wondering how the characters got from one point to the next. There was no real time taken to create or nurture the main characters relationship and it shows.  After reading the novel I can't even tell you what each character looked like since no description was provided. The male was tall with purple eyes and the female was shorter with curly hair, that is the extent of their descriptions. Overall, I think this piece needs to be editted and resubmitted for the price they are expecting for this novel.