Review: good short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2011
Spoiler..First off this is a very short story so do not expect more.A young man lost the long of his life (Carly). His perfect soul mate. The story jumps through the years after Carly's death. He remarries Tab but things are not the way they had been with Carly. While his and Carly's relationship had been as easy as breathing he and Tab are always fighting. He comes to the conclusion that he wants to fight for his marriage with Tab only to have Carly appear to him in a dream stating that she had died before her time and if he wanted her she could come back to him. One week later he finds his wife collapsed on the floor. I wish I could tell you more about the story but its so short that anything more would totally ruin it for you.Cons= The author is constantly using I. Now dont get me wrong the story is in first person but just about every sentence starts with I. Also... im kinda old school in that I think short stories need symbolism, this one has none.