Review: Could have been better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2013
Where to begin....Well, I got this book for free, which is good because I would have been disappointed if I paid to read this story. First off, there were numerous spelling and grammatical errors throughout the entire book which started to bother me. It also had a lot of detail that was unnecessary which was why I think it was hard for me to get into the book. The beginning set up the background for the main character, but the author went into detail about Anne hanging out with her girlfriend, shopping, eating and so on. I felt like it was a waste of time. Without going into further detail....I felt like the story was good, and would have been a better book if she would have left out some of the descriptive detail and elaborated on the story of  Anne and Ben.