Review: 2.5 stars. Too rushed.  Spoilers in the review.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 2, 2013
The basic idea is not bad and the writing either, but the story is too short and some key points are rushly addressed or not at all in my opinion. More than once I've had the impression that the characters know things we readers don't know but we are talked about them and at a certain point I checked to see if there was a previous story to the book to be sure I was not missing something. For example when they talk about Axton's involvement with Gabriella (Brie) or Gabriella's cousin Alexis. It sounds like there's a backstory to be aware of. When Nick finds out that Emmie is pregnant they never talked about how to go on, what kind of relationship they are in and even the other bandmates, that are like big brothers ready to be killed for her never confront Nick or Emmie, ask what's going on  or address the topic of her pregnancy. There's no comunication. It's like nothing happened for anyone and all keeps going on like before but, well, there's a baby now you know. Nick is not always present and while she goes to doctor appointments he has some fun on the beach with random girls. Not only he seems disinterested but some of the so called big bros don't see anything wrong in it, partecipe in the fun and this knowning their beloved Emmie is pregnant with his baby.No one that says "What the **** are you doing? Which are your intentions towards our precious Em?".I'd have rather had the story to follow a linear path without the pregnancy and then the explaination of how it occured. From the beginning you get that Emmie hasn't a sex life or an active one, later you find out she was a virgin, so the pregnancy, even if predictable given her symptoms, strikes you from out of the blue before you are explained when, where and how she got pregnant. The story is not developed well sometimes.Actually Demon's Wings guys' protectiveness in certain scenes was adorable. The premise of the story intriguing.The epilogue was cute.This story has holes but honestly I'll keep an eye on this author. Maybe longer stories, with more character development will make her potential become actual.