Review: And then what??
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2011
I'm sorry. I just don't get it. The premise for this entire series aside, this story left me wondering why it was even written. So many questions were left unanswered for me. And then it just stopped. I kept going back a page to see if I missed something.Spoiler to the story below.The entire 'naturist' thing I never got. "I detest clothes." I mean, really?Another thing that I have a problem with is how their sexual encounters are described. It is almost as if the writer can see how she wants the characters to be but just couldn't get it right. The scene in front of fireplace that first night was so convoluted that I had to read it three times to picture what she wanted the reader to see. I had the same problem with the other two books as well. Yes, the sex was hot. Don't get me wrong, but the description of the positions just didn't mesh for me.Kayla got upset because none of the guys touched her after she took all three of them at once. I got why the second the scene was over, and she didn't??! I don't get it.I did understand why she got upset at Neil for the spark plug trick but why blame the other two? Why not talk to them instead of sitting in her room and crying all night.When Dave went up to apologize to her, she forgave way too easily. His apology was lame, her forgiveness was lame. And then... nothing.I sat there asking myself how the writer could lead the reader to believe that Kayla would have all three guys at the end of the story and that wasn't what she ended up with.I gave it two stars because the sex was hot. I have read a few stories involving more than one partner. They can be done right and can be described right. This was only about sex, just like the other two books in the series.Reading this was my fault, I know. First time, I didn't know. Second time, I thought I was buying something else. But this time I bought knowing what I was getting into. Never again.I rarely give reviews. Either I like a book or I don't. When I don't, I usually move on to the next one. This premise was so 'out there' that I had to say my piece.