Review: Disapointing...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2014
I have mixed feelings about this book.  The characters are charming, the plot is fun and interesting, however the writing style drove me nuts.  When the book focused on dialogue or action everything flowed well, but when it strayed into description the writing became stilted and quite difficult to read.  I am surprised that with all of the editors and first readers the author mentions in the acknowledgements that none of them mentioned that third person present tense is a horrible way to give description.  While I would love to know where the plot goes I will not be continuing the series, especially considering the price point of the next books.