Review: Extremely BAD
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 12, 2012
Just an example of the poor writing and editing in this very short (thank God)story."Well oh my god"! Tiffany exclaimed in excitement and stun.I struggled through about 5-6 pages of this tripe before skimming the rest to get to the end. Most of the terms for sexual parts was not very intelligent at best and sophmoric at worst.  I actually cringed when I caught some words about her muffin gushing, with muffin the writer's euphemism for vagina.If someone is going to write a book, and hopefully want their audience to pay money for it, first they should at least make sure they can actually put together a well-written story and secondly HAVE IT EDITED!  It is quite clear the author (and I use the term loosely) did not use a dictionary or thesaurus.  I don't believe she even used spell check.  At the time I downloaded this piece of dreck, it was free.  They say you get what you pay for, however this wasn't even worth being free.I'm only giving it one star because I can't give it zero stars.  If I could, I think I would have to give it -4 stars.