Review: Okay not great
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2013
The story is good and the characters fun but the writing style is choppy and inconsistent, as if the author didnt bother to go back over the previous days writing each time he sat down to write and didnt proof read before sending the manuscript.  At one point Addison is speaking to his mother face to face and presents her with tickets to Hong Kong.  In the very next paragraph shes already in Hong Kong and they are talking over the phone.  No transition whatsoever.  I cannot give this more than three stars.