Review: Short but Good
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 14, 2011
Summary:I won't give a summary because Lady Raven Rave's brief summary is good enough. But the story though short is absolutely entertaining.My Opinion:*Maybe a few Spoilers...*When Lady Raven Rave put that only the two main characters could say "I hate you" and make it sound sexy she was right, but I'll also add funny. The characters within the story are well-rounded while not being over-done. In not having Jack be too arrogant when internally thinking and Liz too much of a bad-ass or a scared girl out prove she was bad-ass, the author allowed you to like the characters in a fresh and normal way. Through the thoughts, banter, and dialogue (whether internal or external) a "humanly" normal side to both Jack and Liz was shown. That is something I personally like to read in a character.The storyline is funny, well written, and good. I wasn't so sure when I saw the first page of the story, but as I continued reading it I saw it actually was written good, and that isn't always often when you find a story this short or for 99 cents.Ratings:Entertainment- 5 stars.Humor-- 3  stars.Dialogue-- 4 stars, for the witty and comical, but natural banter and talk.Internal Monologue-- 5, for its naturalness and singular characterization.Plot and Storyline-- 4stars.Overall-- 4  stars.