Review: Kind of pointless
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2013
No real dramatic tension, characterization is minimal, seemed to be a couple of story ideas slapped together semi-haphazardly.  Attempts at humor in the beginning quickly disappear and we try for a heavier tone, all to no point.  Ending is predictable.  Would normally have given two stars, but appreciated the author's command of language if not the end result of it.