Review: Not very well developed, but an it was still ok...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 26, 2013
I would probably rate this story a 2.5 because of the lack of development but because I liked the characters I bumped it to a 3.  The main problem with this story is that as soon as any conflict arises it is just as quickly resolved.  For example, at the start of the story the h hates the H for abandoning her.  She sees him, goes home, cry and then resolves not to ever cry over him again.  The next day she calls him and they are back together.  It was a complete 180 in a page.  The same thing with the OW in the story.  The h had every right to be hurt by the H's actions and it was all resolved with a cry and a quick sorry. This story had a lot of potential but the failure to develop the conflicts made the story fall flat.On the positive, I liked that the H was not a complete jerk.  His transgressions were completely redeemable even if I felt that the author failed to do that.  I would probably pick up another story from this author in hopes that they have given their other stories more depth.