Review: I didn't want it to end!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 8, 2014
This book is better than a 3 star book but not quite a 4. I would rate it a 3.90 because it felt a little similar to her other books, and there were a few things that were not quite right but it was so good I didn't want it to end!I loved Nikki and Daniel. I loved their romance. I loved reading about them. I will write about the things I liked and didn't like I will tell you from now there will be SPOILERS!! So if you don't want to know certain details of the book please do not read beyond this point.Things I didn't like or understand:1) Even though I liked that Nikki was a virgin( don't see many of those) I didn't understand what it was about Daniel that made her want to give it up so quick after waiting so long? I believe it was somewhat explained but I think it needed something more.2) I wanted to read more about their friendship. I didn't like that they didn't have more moments to talk to each other and discuss feelings. I think with Daniel it was a problem but I think the author could have dealt with that in the middle of the book so we could see a little progression with their relationship3) I didn't understand the language spoken by the characters in the book. Sometime it worked and other times it seemed off like someone else took over and started talking through them.4) I didn't mind overly much but the obsessed women thing felt almost a bit too much. I think the story would have worked with with either Luke or Melanie wanting Nikki and Daniel and not both of them plotting to break them up. In fact, I think the story would have worked fine with Nikki and Daniel getting through their own personal issues and outsiders dictating their relationship. I think if it was only that and not Luke and Melanie the story would have been better because we would be able to see their relationship develop over a period of time and fall more in love with them.What I did like:1) I loved the way Daniel loved Nikki! He never put anyone or anything else before her. He never allowed anything she did or anyone else to sway his feelings and I just loved that.2) I loved that Nikki was not annoying like most female characters can be in books. She allowed Daniel to bring his alpha but she also followed her spirit and kept true to herself. Even when she knew Daniel wouldn't like something she did it anyway because it was her. It was nice to see that even when she started becoming selfish.....a few pages later her friend told her she was being selfish and in an instant she looked at herself, her situation, and Daniel and realized what she was doing. Finally! We don't read about a big misunderstanding and an annoying heroine who can't get over something.3)I'm glad the book was about Nikki and Daniel and their relationship from page one. The only thing I would have liked more is if they expressed themselves more to each other. Talk more( they did talk but you have to read to understand)....have deep discussions. I think it would have also been good because we see Daniel become more in need of her and that friendship and it would have been great to see him more vulnerable.4) I liked that Nikki was able to grow. She was able to see her attachment to Daniel for what it was and realize that she may be too attached to him, but she also needs to find  a happy medium.I really want to give it 4 stars because I really enjoyed reading it. It kept my attention and I loved the H/h and want to read more about them, but I don't think it it exactly a 4. Would I read again? Yes! I only wish it was longer!