Review: The Order of Shaddai
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 7, 2013
I am giving this book five stars for the story but would only give it two stars for the grammar.  Like using wrong tenses, words that sound the same but are spelled differently like your and you're, threw and through.  Also some words are completely missing.  It's not bad enough to not read the book but was enough to interrupt the flow of reading.  This series is great, Mr.Somers, but get an editor.