Review: Fill In The Plot! Dang!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 12, 2014
It's a shorty story, I get it, but there is no excuse for flipping and flopping and stepping on the gas in a story just because it isn't long, and that is exactly what the author has done here. The story started off pretty good, but by the second chapter she started to rush to the point the story became wild, unbelievable, and predictable. Much more could have been done here to make the story flow. All of the things put in for plot twists came off as nonsense with no explanation for why characters did things, what preceded certain events, because there was no vision into their thoughts for one.Slow down and take your time to finesse your story. Short stories deserve and require everything that is involved in a novel. Forget what you heard, short stories aren't excuses to cut corners and do it 25% of the way.Oh yea. A note to readers: this short book is part of a series.