Review: outstanding issues
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 27, 2012
For the most part I liked this story, but I had a enough issues that I felt I could not give it a higher rating.Keelin has a special gift. Sometimes she sees what is happening to another person while she dreams. It is like she is in their head, experiencing what they are, feeling what they are. While visiting American relatives, Keelin starts experiencing the nightmare that is happening to a runaway girl. She discovers who the girl is and approaches her father, Tyler. Understandably, Tyler is skeptical and believes this is a scam. Keelin is persistent and Tyler is desperate. Tyler figures even if this is a scam, she knows enough to maybe be in on what has now turned into a kidnapping. Keep your friends close and your enemies closer he figures. As they spend time together, inevitable feelings develop between the two of them and Tyler gradually begins to trust Keelin.There are four secondary characters, all of whom have it in for Tyler. One of my main problems with the story was that these were not all resolved. Some very big issues were left unfinished, including the whole family reason for Keelin travelling to America in the first place. The ending felt too rushed. The author wrapped everything up in a few paragraphs without resolving some of the major plot lines. With all the running about and initial mistrust, I was not convinced that there was enough between the h and H for them to have fallen in love, never mind be talking about their HEA. Overall, the story felt incomplete in a number of ways.