Review: Its ok - a bit corny
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2014
It was a free download, I finished it.  Some of the characters weren't developed so well and some situations were very unbelievable.  The ending was abrupt and somewhat unsatisfactory.  I got a laugh when the author described the main character watching a male perform "fellatio" on a female in the Game of Thrones TV series...should have done a little research on the subject there...Good idea for a short story, just the execution could have been better.  But it was free, and there is a LOT worse up on Kindle, so a quick read for 99 cents is probably worth it