Review: Editing needed
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2012
Ok, so I'm twenty percent into this book on my Kindle and the author has Embers's eyes hazel, then blue now green. The story line is good but the author seems to have forgetten what eye color she actually gave the character. I read the first book and it had one repeated paragrah, which I over looked.I plan on rating that book a five. I'm continuing with this book and maybe I will rate it higher once completed.I completed the book and I must say, even though there were discrepancies in the beginning. It still was a great read, so I corrected the previous rating from two stars to five.