Review: Nice story ... but!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2014
I've read most of Samatha Chase's books and must say this was my least favoured. The story itself wasn't too bad but a good editor is definitely needed for the version I downloaded. So many grammatical mistakes as well as words dropped by mistake, words duplicated, words that weren't appropriate to the meaning of the passage. Also, authors please don't use a spell check either. Not when they're becomes their (or vice versa) and companies becomes company's etc. etc. Then the usual mix-ups when it comes to the use of pronouns. When to use "I" (as in Erika and I sat down) and when to use "me" (as in there was no room for Erika and me).  These are not quotations from the book but simply examples since I don't know how to cut and paste in an iPad with a Kindle app. It seems every author, every editor is now convinced of the grammatical rightness of "there being no room for Erika and I."  If you have doubts please remove Erika from the example and see what sounds right: There was no room for I, or, there was no room for me!! Sorry about the nit picking lecture, and I am painfully aware that I, too make my mistakes since English is my second language, but these are books and, self published or not, someone should have weeded out the errors before the work was offered up to the public. And I usually do love your books, Samantha Chase, errors and all .. but in this book they overwhelmed my enjoyment of it. Sorry.