Review: Unbelievably Horrible!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2014
Normally, if I think that a book is less than average, I just don't review it at all.  Unfortunately, this book is in the top five of the worst books I've ever read.  I do NOT understand the great reviews on this site and I'm glad I only paid 99 cents for it. I want even that back.It felt as though the author had created a series of bullet points listing things she wanted to make sure were included in the book.  You'd be moseying through the pages then "bang!" let's bind her hands and show dominant/submissive characteristics. There were others but it's too much effort to list them all. It just felt like these points were pulled from the sky and just thrown in when the author remembered them. This book needed about four or five more chapters to flesh out the characters and maybe then it would have been a three or four star book.  The heroine had to be an idiot though.  Who runs into a man on an elevator (gorgeous or otherwise) carrying a handful of mail and has to be the mail guy for the building. A HANDFUL of mail?!  Seriously?!  I'm guessing mail guys in her world dress pretty well because if he is the CEO and owns the frickin' building, he shouldn't have been dressed down too terribly much, even without a suit or sport jacket.  I love another reviewer's comment that if I carry a FedEx package, then by rights I should be a FedEx employee/delivery person.This book as just a huge disappointment for me.  The only way I made it through to the end was by flipping pages through my Kindle (after about chapter five), skimming to see if something jumped out at me that looked marginally redeeming. Perhaps it will be better for others.