Review: Sloppy and short
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
This book was extremely disappointing, way too angsty and not in a good way. She had all the makings of a good storyline and could have built it totally different. Yet It was chapter after chapter of Jessica and Nathan talking in circles until finally we got somewhere towards the end...the end...too late by then I had already pulled all my hair out after all of Jess's tantrums. Honestly I began to hate her, she seemed angry, childish and stormed off prematurely in every conversation. The book was lacking in content. I was hoping for more discussion about their future and what they both wanted, what they were fighting for to be together. Jess seemed so sexually driven, while Nathan was begging to move forward in a committed relationship which kind of negated her theory that Nate is this manho. Nathan did mention marriage and a baby once which albeit is better, slightly more romantic but still lacking. Then everything ended and skip to a snippet of Nate going on about someone after her from her past...Josh?...the next book sounds good but I hope we get some better content, an actual plot, better love story, marriage, baby, and some true drama minus the angsty crap she uses to fill space. Tall order I know but come on Deborah ....please!!