Review: good story but
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 13, 2013
Bonnie writes a good story with a plot that moves along at a good pace, brings new and interesting characters.The story would be improved with less of the teenage girl sex. If this is written for a teenage reader than there is way to much of the sex with boy friend. If it is written for an adult audience than skip the sexy teenager  and develop the plot a little more. Overall a good story.i