Review: Enjoyable
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 12 2, 2010
For a short story this one was great.  I agree with the reviewer who stated that Allyson could be annoying and she could be.  She was strong and single minded and so I can understand how it could be hard to fully appreciate her as I did.  As for Jorel, he was neutered in the book but I don't feel that was due to the Allyson character's strength.  I think the writer, whom I do like, should have found a way to balance the strong personalities into an appropriate meshing.  Having said that it was really good for a short story and I look forward to the Ruby Heartsone.