Review: Good story idea, poorly executed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 25, 2012
I think the basic story idea was a good one but....there were so many grammatical errors, police procedural errors and formatting errors it was hard to wade through the book. WAY too much description. When a character was introduced, the author gave a ton of background info - not necessary and it slowed the narration down. The book would have been better about 75 pages shorter. I read the novel in one afternoon because I basically skimmed the entire thing. Too bad - it could have been a much better story.