Review: Pretty good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2013
This was a pretty good story, and I rather enjoyed reading it. It would've been much better if the author had concentrated more on the story instead of just making it steamy. There was too much description of sex and nudity which didn't help the story. Move that out and finish developing the story and this would be much better. Still, it is an enjoyable read.