Review: editor could have saved this
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 14, 2013
here's the deal. this writer has imagination and is able to tell a good story but writing it?...not so much. there were spelling errors, wrong words used, no contractions, and an odd fomality that didn't fit the contemporary setting. in addition there were inconsistancies that a good editor would address making this into a really good story.