Review: Nice premise, but reads like a porno
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 21, 2013
Yes, I do realize that there is a difference between erotica and romance, but the terminology isn't my only issue.This reads like the script to a porno that nobody wanted to film.The language is stilted, their easy conversation doesn't flow, and there was a typo in the first paragraph.Could have been a fun, super short read, but disappointed on all counts.