Review: Too long
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 20, 2014
It was ok. Entirely too long and I started to skip pages just to be done with it. The drama between Lucky and Carlos became redundant after a while. I swear the girl couldn't stop crying to save her life. Shasona was a tramp and trash and didn't like her character at all. I will read part 2 if it is not as long as this one. A few grammatical errors which really bothered me. If you are going to price a book this amount please take the time to spellchecker or pay for a good editor. Otherwise not really a bad book.