Review: Good story, but badly needs proofreading
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 11, 2012
This author knows how to tell a story.  He moves back and forth in time, and does a pretty good job of it.  It is incredible that someone who can do that is unable to keep from making a ton of word choice errors.  It is mostly using homonyms instead of the correct word, but it does distract from the story.If this author can connect up with someone to proofread, he should be successful.