Review: Intrigued and Enchanted I Was NOT!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2014
I didn't like this book at all Lily got on my nerves & I got tired of her talking about Brandon's looks! She did it too much and it became quickly annoying and took away from the already bad book. The character development and the execution of this book wasn't done properly to me. Lily is a virgin who hasn't done ANYTHING sexual and then she gives Brandon head and he says "A virgin with the skills of a porn star" like smh. Not only that but she gives him head and swallows it! *rolls eyes* Lily doesn't even know Brandon a full 2 weeks and she is already giving him her virginity?! The relationship is not believable nor is the storyline for that matter it's simply too fiction for fiction. While I understand it's a book of fiction give me SOME believability with a little reality, and sadly this book didn't provide that for me.DO NOT READ BELOW THIS LINE IF YOU DON'T WANT THIS BOOK RUINED FOR YOU.**********Spoiler alert**********Ok to write in the book that the guy that attempted to rape Lily and killed her father when she was 15. To break out of jail 6-10 years later (don't remember how old Lily is and don't care) JUST to come and finish the job that he started when she was 15.......is just simply weak writing. I'm not trying to be mean but THAT was the best that you could come up with? Smh see what I mean by too fiction for fiction? Then to top it off he doesn't rape her when he finally kidnaps her he waits 3 days before he even attempts to do anything. Like if you wrote him breaking out of jail with the sole intention to rape her. He wouldn't wait 3 days to do so oh and guess what? Brandon shows up JUST in time before it actually happens and saves the day *insert eye roll* Smh this book was the worse and I'm mad I even wasted time reading this book. This book lacked any originality and believable qualities to even get into the book or connect to the characters.