Review: Could be a better story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2013
I liked that this story has MCs whose ages are over 35 and that it deals with the vagaries of dating, but the story could have been much better. It really needs an editor! Misplaced punctuation, incomplete sentences, incorrect grammar, and just poor writing plague the reader throughout the story, including stupid homonym mistakes such as using perimeter where parameter should have been used. It could have been a contender...