Review: It sucked me in
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 02 2, 2014
I was initially put off by the lack of paragraph structure. The book had page breaks but the rest lacked indentations for paragraphs. Very odd. By the time I got used to it, it occurred to me that the formatting error coud be due to my kindle. Hard to say.It took my a while to sort out the protagionis'ts friends and how they related to her but before long I was in too deep and found myself sucked into the story. My favorite aspects were the fact that they were all British and I got an insight into the daily life of a slice of our Uk cousins. So cool. I found them delightful and less superficial than the average "millenium" here in the US.Now...the plot. I wasn't boring, it wasn't heartstopping. Kind of middle of the road for thrillers. It did have one undefinable quality. The author continued to deepen her chatacter development as the story progressed, sucking me in to the point I would wake up in the morning with it on my mind. I HAD to finish. Isn't that the hallmark of a solid read?The relationsip between the two women was so twisted I couldn't figure it out. I wish the author had written a chapter as a flashback using the antagonist's early life with her family. That was a true uderdeveloped horror story and could have added a juicy layer.I enjoyed the author's wrting style very much; professional editing with perfect pacing and feel certain you will find this tiny gem just as enteraining as I did. What more could you ask for at such a bargin price. Thank heavens for the indie authors and their determination to be heard!