Review: Has potential for so much more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 3, 2012
This short story about two people who each have lost cheating spouses to death is lacking in both the eroticism as it seems to be like that impending orgasm...when will it finally explode?  If looking for romance again it seems to go this way as Reggie longs for Clara even as she is carrying her late husband's child.  But this is not fully described or fulfilled either.  The solution would be to lengthen this story to a novel with full character and story development.  It doesn't rate a poor review because of the potential, but it needs more to be a good romantic erotic tale.