Review: Inexcusable
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2013
Not only is this book poorly written - it reads like a junior high school writing project -, it is so poorly edited as to be unreadable. Hey, Amazon, don't you guys even look at some of this stuff before publishing it? I seem to be running across this more and more lately, but none as bad as this novella.In one of the first pages, the line appears: "but her look's were really good". Even in junior high English, you should have learned that there is no apostrophe in plurals.And it all went downhill from there. Later on there are whole sentences that are absolutely incomprehensible. Can someone please tell me what this means, or at least what language it's written in:"Boy men knew that each other was aroused..." Huh?Don't waste your time on this illegible and illiterate effort. I'd ask for a refund, but the price was $0.00. I wish someone could refund the time I wasted on it. Don't waste yours.