Review: I don't know where to start...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2014
Ms. Lynn has created an entire world that has a great potential to be fascinating.But, it was clear just a few pages into the story that this book had not been seen by an editor. I'm not sure what tense this story was supposed to be, nor could I really tell whose point of view I was reading. I read the whole book, and the situation between the pages did not improve. I would humbly suggest that the author pass this manuscript to an editor and work with them to polish this into the wonderful story it can be.