Review: Flat and Under-developed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 19, 2011
If this was a short story to draw the reader into the series - it FAILED big time.Nissa goes to a Vampire club because she wants sex with a vampire and to ultimately become a Vampire herself - (maybe because she is lonely, not really explained).  The author tells you that Nissa is drawn to the club and to Hex & Aleron.  The reader is then told after days of having sex in every way possible in a menage that love now exists.  At that point - all I could do was think - well, that's nice - didn't ever feel the love but whatever.I like stories with a high "heat" factor but I also want well-developed plots with interesting characters and interactions.In this novella:- Dialogue was flat- Characters one dimensional- No originality- The plot is ????? - not sure if there is one- Sex scenes read more like a "how to" book than an erotic scene- Rushed HEA - they had sex and then the reader is told that they are in love - didn't really feel itThe short story was mostly pages after pages of the three having sex but I would describe it as just graphic rather than erotic and definitely not sizzling.  If you want a very short "how to" book on a few of the different ways to have sex - then this book is for you.  Not very imaginative but it does contain some of the standard ways found in countless of erotica books that are more original and better developed.