Review: Too unrealistic for me.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2013
I suspect this is a very young and/or first time author, as the writing lacks maturity. I would like to add, however, that it wasn't terrible and does show a lot of promise.For me, this particular story read too much like a high school girl's fantasy. With most romances, there has to be some suspension of reality, but I found myself questioning too much of what was going on to really enjoy what I was reading.Added to that, the author needs to be more careful with dialogue tagging. Dialogue from different characters was not clearly defined and actions for one character were often tagged with the dialogue of another - very jarring for the reader.I couldn't get to the end of this, so returned for refund.Having said that, I can see this author has potential and will, no doubt, develop her skills with time; therefore, I wouldn't dismiss her future endeavours.