Review: Author needs a new Editor
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 10, 2013
The story premise might have been alright if the author had fleshed it out.  The characters, however at least seemed to show some effort. The editing was also extremely bad. The missing and misspelled words in addition to misused adjectives and verbs made the writing disjointed and often confusing. While I am not a perfectionist and can enjoy a story with a few mistakes, there were way too many for my comfort. These two very important aspects made the book almost unreadable to me.