Review: Some great moments and many no so great moments
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2012
There were things about this book that I enjoyed - the chapter titles were a neat twist on Chapter One and so forth. I like the concept of the story - seducing the virgin. Then there were the things that didn't quite work - the dialogue didn't ring true for the characters that the writer described and I didn't feel that was enough reason given to spill your life's story on the first meeting. Things that needed work - why did it take so long to consummate the relationship?All in all, I would read more from this author and just chalk this book up to a good first start.