Review: On real
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 19, 2013
This story is about a demon named Haden wanting to protect and give immortality to his mate caylee. The problem is that caylee is a sexually abused female that has trouble with men touching her. But, also she lives with her uncle who happens to be an abusive man. The beginning to like 50% into the story all Haden does is try to protect caylee from an obsessive vampire. Not the good looking kind but the vampires that look like death.I gave it a three star because I just could not get into the story. To me the majority was sappy I love you stuff which is ok just not every other sentence. Too many editing problems which detracted from the story, and caylee pissed me off frequently with her stubbornness. A bit of stubbornness is ok in your main female character but caylee was ridiculous it made me feel like get a grip girl and pay attention.On the other hand the intimate scenes were very descriptive which I like and once other characters began to solidify the story got interesting. That was the ending half of the book. It's sad to say but I liked the supporting characters more then I did the main  characters. Mia and Joseph were way cooler and attracted my attention more than Haden and caylee.