Review: Good storyline...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 10, 2013
A good storyline littered with a lot of redundancy. Once you make your point how much someone is in love with another you don't have to tell the readers the same thing every time it's brought up.I think this could have easily been a 4-5 star book if you would have taken some of the redundancy out and maybe given more background on the main characters. After all some of them have been around for thousands of years.Editing could have been better as well. He was in a suit - then in the same scene he is in jeans? A few names were mixed up as well and some grammatical errors too.