Review: Short and anticipated
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2012
I picked up this kindle file recently during a free promotion.  Glad it was free.While this short file seemed at first to be something interesting, as the story progressed, it became obvious.  The story lacked punch.  It was predictable.  And the ending came up and went, and you scratched your head and wondered why the author didn't do more with this story.  It could'a, but didn't. It was like the author had an idea but didn't do anything more than put the idea down in a word processor.We can all have ideas.  A writer can take an idea and run with it, and make it a story.  This is a file.