Review: Definitely burn worthy
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
I feel like one star books are becoming the norm.The first book wasn't horrible, not good, but not bad. I don't know what I was hoping for in book two, but my OCD has me finishing every series I start even if they are bad. I wish I didn't suffer from this, but sadly I do. So I found myself reading this book.Sara was a tough as nails, tell you like it is character in the first book. In this book that girl was completely gone.PoofInstead we have a whinny, dependent, weak, needy, annoying character. Do I need to continue?? This book starts off right where the first book ended. Sara is taken to Remy's hide out where she is refused access to a phone, a door, basically her freedom. But that's okay. She kinda likes it that way! Right.. She has a warped sense of right and wrong through this entire book. She feels it was okay for Remy to kidnap her, to bargain to keep her, and keep her prisoner for weeks on end. I think Sara actually likes the attention. She likes that Remy has been obsessed with her for years, that he worships her, that he would do absolutely anything for her. It excites her.Disgusting.When she gets bored with that life she calls Jaxon up and asks for him to risk his life to come get her. When he refuses because she sold him out she gets upset with him and decides to start a relationship with Remy. BLAH!!Then she leaves Remy to be with Jaxon again...Seriously???Why Jaxon?? Why??The only character I actually liked in these books is Jaxon. If he had never met Sara his life would have been peachy. She has screwed him over every single chance she gets. I feel if given a few more years she will definitely find a way to screw him over again. But what gets me is the fact that he is loyal, to a fault. He has given his entire being to this girl and is willing to overlook all the horrible things she has done to him.Then there is the fact that some of the scenes appeared to just be thrown into the story at odd times, they disrupted the flow of the book. I would find myself stopping and flipping back a few pages to see if I missed something. It threw me out of the story that I was already having a difficult time finishing. Do I really need the distraction of nonsense scenes?Repetitiveness. It is my pet peeve. I absolutely hate books that repeat and repeat until I feel like I'm being hit on the head over and over. Constantly there were sentences that repeated sentiments or descriptions. One that stands out is:"The quivering coke addict quivered..."REALLY??Cause who would have guessed that a quivering person would quiver. That baffles the mind. That is just one example of what the books is littered with.UGGH