Review: Better than I expected
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2013
I hesitated in buying this book because of some poor reviews said George was mean. He was distant because he needed to remarry, but he didn't want to remarry. Then Millie lied about her age, therefore, she couldn't be a Christian. He was guarding his heart. It's a nice and simple story, so it gets better than a one. There were a couple continuity errors---- baby is called both Hope and Grace, and time of day  when breakfast is called lunch. Some of the diction and mannerisms are too modern. I'm not a stickler for these kinds of things, but it happened too often and it disrupts the fluidity of the writing. Like I said it was a nice simple story, but I would not have paid to read it.