Review: This review is for the full story, episodes 1-9
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2014
First, don't do what I did...I got this one for free and then bought the rest in two sections instead of getting them all in one.  Silly me.  Save yourself some money and get the Episodes 1-9 Omnibus Edition.WOW!Many little editing issues, none horrible.I did not like the pages wasted on recap, but I understand it since this was written episodically.There was some lack of time clarity and some unaccounted for time (serving as time spacers to advance a particular plot point, but it was poorly done, considering there were 'burning questions'.)  Inserting an empty week was bad planning/execution.It might seem like that is a lot to set aside to enjoy the story, but it really wasn't.  The story is so engaging and (otherwise) well written that the above was easy to forgive.  As a writer I understood why the extra time was needed, but it should have been handled differently and seemed out of character.This story is funny, warm, arousing, interesting, nicely paced and emotional.Loved it, wish there was more to it!