Review: Death by Chocolate
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 26, 2013
The story was pretty good, but the editing was terrible.  There were too many punctuation errors; too many incorrect words; one character went from Carly to Marly. I did like Grandma Ellie and Maxine. I couldn't keep up with all the characters, though.  There were too many and they were insignificant.