Review: Good story but needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2012
The story concept and plot development were good. The author jumps around from character to character and time period to time period, which is a bit confusing but it does come together more or less in the end. One problem I had is that it spends way too much time on lengthy descriptions of things that don't matter. There are some plot problems as well. If it wasn't safe to go outside wouldn't people check periodically to see if things had changed? If technology wasn't destroyed, wouldn't people all over the world be trying to get in touch with each other to figure things out - and to take advantage of the situation? And how many people would have to survive to maintain our technology?