Review: Odd writing style
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2013
This author's writing style is choppy. The story is for the most part pretty good and I did become attached to all the characters. I am engrossed in the story and will continue to read the series but this writer's style is a little different....at times I just skimmed through some parts a little bored. Some parts of the story don't jive and the girl never eats..she is anorexic. Important parts are left out...It's obvious this story was written by an amateur.