Review: Excellent voice that needs to be heard
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2011
A very enjoyable short story with an engaging premise and excellent voice. I really liked the witty view of a potential future our society could fall into that was entirely realistic. I just wish the solution at the end had been developed a bit more. Would love to read more about this character the change he showed was well done. I'd rate it 3.75 stars. I liked everything I read, but felt the ending was too rushed. The "solution" needed more development than a couple paragraphs.