Review: Okay!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 11, 2014
First of all, this "short" is only 18 pages so from the beginning anyone planning to read this can't have reasonably expected that it would contain the elements of a full length, well developed novel.  Secondly, for the most part, "shorts" found in the erotica category, esp. those 25 pages or less, aren't know for their plot, character development or originality.  That being said, Last Minute Customer, was your typical one sex scene erotic "short" or "quickie" as I like to refer to them.  Sometimes it's enough to get your motor running but not enough stamina or force behind it to really bring you to completion.  The premises of this quickie was pretty common place, there's no character development and, of course, at only 18 pages, it isn't long enough to have any depth.  I also felt that the sex scene should have been more descriptive. It was a bit bland.  Nevertheless, as quickies go, it was okay as a free read, which is why I gave it 3 stars, under amazon's rating system,  rather than 1 or 2, but I would have been disappointed if I had paid for it.  I did wish that I was the girl though! The 2 guy were mouthwateringly delicious! LOL  Blaze and Zane, yum, even their names are sexy as hell!  Be still my beating heart! lolUnder amazon's rating system:1 star "I hate it"2 stars "I don't like it"3 stars "It's ok"