Review: The new proofread version is much better.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 25, 2014
I read this this first time and the typos/grammar made my head hurt....  I've re-read the new, edited version and it is much, much, better.  However, this story is scary because if you look around you and pay attention to the news on the internet (not the MSM)  you could envision this scenario happening.  I hope it never does, but as the country is so divided right now, it is highly possible.  I'm looking forward to book 2!