Review: The Path Home & Learning to Fly
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 20, 2012
Jess Mountifield has made a fine effort at creating a fantasy world of humans and half elf/half human.  The Path Home seemed to just be starting when it ended suddenly.  The story needed to be rounded out with a little more of a plot and maybe some romance to spice things up.  All in all, The Path Home is a great beginning to an intriguing fantasy.Learning to Fly is another excellent beginning to a story that needs more of a plot and perhaps more characters.  Maybe if Christopher had been a suitor, rather than Liza's uncle, or if Liza had someone else interested in her romantically (only if she learned to fly).  The stories need to be a little longer and somewhat more involved --- that would keep the reader glued to the story.  I would not hesitate to buy this writer's work again.  She has a knack for getting the reader's interest.  She just needs to make them a little more "filled out".