Review: Potential
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2013
I like this story and wanted more from this author. I went on to read the next book and was disappointed that Green Eyes lost her baby from Lone Eagle. However, I was capture and was drawn into the story like I was apart of the scenery. There were some events that I would of done different if I was in her shoes. Like the possible death of her white husband. I would of have Lone Eagle take me to the place where she thinks the man that got killed was her husband. As a wife myself, I wouldn't assume so quickly my man is dead. I would investigate. I would have made sure the stranger take me to town. I would be suspcious of an indian man if I lived in that time. Of course it was like fate that brought them two together and Green Eyes didn't question or fight it. She became apart of the Sioux culture and then married Lone Eagle. She then discovers her white husband is really alive. Hard to decide between two men after you've grown emotionally attach. However, she makes the decision and thus ends the book.Dancing Fawn and Little Elk's story after Destiny's Bride was just as good.That being said, I gave it four stars due to the grammar and spelling mistakes. I was able to get Destiny's Bride for free but paid $6 for White Heart. When I pay money for a book I expect NON-literture mistakes and a professional editor to back it up. These two and probably more from this author have many of these mistakes. That is why I refuse to buy any more of her books. If they ever come up for free, I would deffiently download them on my kindle!