Review: Erotica
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 15, 2012
Well, this is about the second shortest erotica I have ever read - however the writer does a good job capturing intensity and physical passion...My only gripe is bit of editing needs to be done and perhaps a little more backstory needs to be worked in (is her grandpa dying? sick? bedridden? is he going to walk in on them?? lol)all in all not bad though