Review: More development needed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2013
I didn't love it.I felt like this story had so much potential, bad boy saved by a good girl. Unfortunately for me, the execution was just off. There was so much build up, almost too much. There was no real relationship that formed between Estella and Vincent until like 90% of the book. I wanted more between them and less tutoring. I wanted more background on certain aspects of relationships and characters. So many things needed fleshing out, it would have just added to the story. Nate and the money. Seth. Vincent and his brothers. The gang. But what really needed to be there was more between Vincent and Estella. There really was no conflict. No real drama. The story just went along until what seemed to be story time at the very end, and that was it. Very abrupt ending. With more work, the story could have been better.