Review: An erotic tale with a twist
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 2, 2012
This free Kindle short story that can be read in ten minutes is filled with sex and may offend some readers who would prefer not to read it. It is well written and moves along in a swift pace. It tells the tale of a woman who sees a dark silhouette on a man standing just outside her doorway that she forgot to close. She is scared and watches him unable to move or call out. He warns her that there is danger in leaving her door ajar, and leaves. She doesn't call the police. Instead, for months, she feels a sense of longing. Then he comes again, warns her, and leaves again. Then months later he reappears, does not leave, and she experiences something she never expected.