Review: Needs work on heroine
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2014
I really wanted to love this book. It wasn't awful. It just could use some work. The plot is great, very action packed, exciting. But, there are some editing errors and Lily just isn't that likable. To me, she's too immature to really like. I think if she matured a little or the author didn't make her out to be so childish, I could really get into this book. When it comes to the action, I was hooked. It was played out well. Wild, he's brutal, full on Alpha male and hot! Though I felt he was a complete knock off of Jax from SOA, he still worked for me. I liked him. I may read the next one, maybe. I'm not out rushing to pick it up, but I am curious as to what happens to them.My rating- out of 1-5:Cover: 5 - it's hotEditing: 3- there's errors, it needs some workPlot: 4 - action packedEnding: 4 - it certainly was a cliff hanger, but I'm not dying to get the next one.That makes this a 4 star read.