Review: edit edit edit edit
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 14, 2012
I'm only 3% into this book and the number of distracting errors is horrendous.The syntax is cringeworhty.Furthermore I tell you, not one time, not two times, but 3 times, this is true.BTW, did I mention the word edit?If this is not a really good story the rating is staying pegged at one.  If it is an awesome story the best I'll give it is a three.  This is presuming the writing errors continue.  If they do not, I'll reconsider.Later:I can't finish this book. The book is written that poorly.This book needs to be gone through sentence by sentence, word by word, and set right.Personally, I give the author and his buddies their props.  Not only for supporting their author friend but for the way he sees them.  Fellow's, that's not enough.[It's smile worthy that he perceives his wife as being that tough.]Mr. Coley, take this book down. Spend the next six months re-writing it. Read every sentence aloud. Then speak each sentence, word by word. If the sentence doesn't sound right the odds are the sentence won't read right. This isn't an absolute rule, as I'm certain exceptions must exist, but generally when I'm in doubt it works for me.