Review: I have my fingers crossed, I hope Harmon gets better!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2012
This book has many funny lines and some snappy dialog but sadly does not make up for the many dumb things that the main character, Mo, says and does.  I like my main characters funny and clever, but I also like them to be intelligent and savvy.  And any story has to be believable to draw the reader in. Come on, sleepwalking in a see-through nightgown? On a dude ranch?  Hello, this is the Rocky Mountains; she's much more likely to be sleeping in sweatpants and a long-sleeved t-shirt!  Later in the barn, she's too sore to lift her arms to remove (once again) the see-through nightgown, but not too sore to put on a sweatshirt??  Cowboy-boss is waiting for her, looking for her and she's late.  So he says something to his horse and Mo answers.  He didn't hear her approaching?  (Or see her, since he was looking for her?) For me, the problem with this story is that I, the reader, am asked to suspend belief just way too often and Mo is just way too ineffective, so it simply does not work for me regardless of the charming romance. Ms has great writing style, I'm looking forward to a better next book.