Review: Good story needs a proof reading
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2012
I enjoyed the story and felt the characters were well developed.  The last several chapters seemed to drag along, but overall good read.  I get a little tired of a decent story with inexcusable proof reading errors(ie. "she said allowed" (sic), instead of "she said aloud").  I don't know who is responsible for these types of errors which were throughtout the book, but as the author I'd take the time to read it myself and make sure they are corrected.  With a good proof read I'd give it four stars.