Review: Do you have an editor?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 28, 2011
I have not read this short, nor will I ever.  I looked at the "preview" that Amazon offers, and in the fifth paragraph, Dane's ride is mentioned.  It is a "rattrap".  While Rattrap is evidently a character from Transformers, a beat up car is a rattletrap.  Did the editor for this book flunk high school English?  Did the author? I couldn't get past it.  It sounded interesting, but for heaven's sake, check your colloquialisms, this is embarrassing.  It was a minor detail, but if a little thing like this is wrong, it's a good bet there a bigger problems with the writing.