Review: Enjoyable Short Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
I received a copy of this by the author through the Don't Buy Me Love program in exchange for a fair & honest review.Our two MCs are both dealing with the fallout of one jerk. While Geoffrey is in a very bad spot in his life after having his longtime boyfriend publicly humiliate him. Paul is dealing with his attraction to and feelings for Geoffrey and his anger at his ex best friend's treatment of him.I think the author did a very realistic job showing us Geoff's sadness, doubts and his mistrust of his ex's best friend. As well as Paul's emotional reaction to how his ex best friend has treated Geoffrey. Both of these characters are nice and realistic men.However,I think that it would certainly have benefited from another 10 pages or so, to have been fleshed out a little more. I would have liked to have heard more dialogue that first evening before Geoffrey agreed to take a chance on trusting Paul. As well as just seen more of their romance with smaller time jumps. Just snippets here and there would have been nice.While I enjoyed this short story about Geoffrey & Paul, I do wish it had been longer. These characters are both nice men whom I would have liked to have gotten to spend more time with. I hope that in the future Ms. LeFoy revisits them.