Review: It had potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 31, 2013
I liked the story and I liked Colin and his brothers.  What I didn't like was the heroine.  The way she was written made her seem very immature considering her age.  Really, she didn't realize he was proposing, and she didn't realize she was at her own wedding.  It was too long, and at times it was unclear who was speaking.  The descriptive were poor and the short paragraphs seemed to lack dimension.  I'd like to see it rewritten.