Review: Commas, Commas, and a Story.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2014
This story started off really good and I was thrilled I had found a decent book to read.  Then, around the time Taylor saw Adam's chest, things went downhill.First came the ever-increasing grammatical errors.  Then came...the COMMAS.Everywhere, especially where they weren't needed.  Or where they had me reread a sentence several times trying to decipher which meaning to take.I was starting to be pulled from the story more and more as I continued.  Still, intrigued, I continued to read.  It was enjoyable, even if I had a bit of trouble aligning Taylor's new personality from who she was prior to the Adam's Chest event.I really think the Pentagon should look into Adam's chest as some sort of military weapon, rendering all who view it paralyzed.Then there was Bree' s sudden change of personality.  Overall, too many bizarre incidents for me to continue Ms. Bennett's series.  I do wish her success, though.