Review: Good story, but needs editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 14, 2012
Being a big fan of regency stories myself, I was so excited to read this ebook. While the story was intriguing and actually had me guessing till the end who Chloe would end up with, the writing itself needs editing. It gets a little better as you go along, but there are instances where the wrong words are used, some words are missing, and some words are repeated when they shouldn't be. I also found the dialogue to be inconsistent with the time period.If these changes were to be made and a second edition of the book released, I would certainly give it a higher rating. I liked the character Chloe and as I said before, it's not quite clear until the end who she ends up with. I've read so many regency romances where you know after the first chapter what is going to happen. No so with this story. I would have liked it to be a little longer and be provided with some more details on the rest of family, especially the father, but it works as it is.An enjoyable story, but it needs to be proofread and fixed up.