Review: A Very Good Dark Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2014
This was a little surprise for me but I must say I did get a bit confused when it went to part two. Lana Martin was kidnapped and beaten and raped by a psycho. The only problem that I had with this book was from the time Lana was kidnapped and almost dead it jumped right into how she was living a few months later. I feel this could have been built up a bit more and it just didn’t feel connected to me. The connection between Tink and Lana oh boy there is some hotness going on there and can’t wait to see where this goes. The Second Part wasn't as dark. Lana was coming to terms with her need to submit and having a relationship with Sergio which met some of her needs but not the darker needs. I wanted the book to explore more of the slave master relationship that Lana tried to force on Sergio. She purposely disobeys him just so she can feel the sting of his hand or a paddle on her bare behind. I enjoyed read this book although it could have been longer. This was a good story for a first time author. I am looking forward to reading the next book of this series.