Review: Loved it
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2013
I really liked this short story. I'm definitely downloading the second part.I love the character development. This story was quite deep for being a short story and I enjoyed that greatly. And the sex scenes were hot which was another bonus. The story was written well and I definitely will read more from this author.The only thing I did not like about this book was some of the scenes seemed to jump and didn't really mix with what happened. And the ending sort of did a super time jump out of nowhere and that confused me to no end. But, I'm glad to find out that there is a second part that might help out with that.