Review: Not for Me
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 13, 2013
This sounded like an interesting plot until I started reading it. Adam, who is stalking Aelissim Davis, saved her from being raped by her fiancé, who later died. Aelissim's uncle sends detective Patrick O'Neil to protect her from Adam. This wasn't exactly what I'd expected from the description, but I decided to give the book a chance. I did begin to like Pat from the very start, but his main problems seemed to come from the way he reacted to situations and obsessed on them. He just couldn't move on, and this didn't seem congruent with the rest of his personality. I didn't like Aelissim at all.In the first chapter, there were missing commas and stilted sentences. "D--n" and "h--l" were used three times each and b---h twice. There was also dialogue like "p-ss off --shole," "getting laid," and "Maybe I should prove him right and shoot his balls off." In addition, most of this was said in front of a 12-year-old boy. No thanks, I'll pass on this one and delete it from my kindle account. I almost hesitated to review it based on reading one chapter and knowing I'll get "no" votes on helpful, due to the low number of stars, but I felt others deserved to know about the problems. I hope this will help some who don't appreciate crude language. I wish someone had told me prior to downloading it. Some authors are starting to warn about profanity and sexually explicit sections in their books, and I appreciate that. It helps save me from downloading something I don't like, and it helps them screen readers who won't appreciate their writing. I'm sure their ratings are higher because of it, and I would encourage more writers to do the same.