Review: errors get in the way
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2013
This was a good story and the author shows promise but the story had a couple of major issues for me, not the least of which being the awful grammar mistakes throughout the story. I can overlook a few typos but this book is riddled with grammatical errors where the author misuses words and at one point even makes up words. The mistakes literally jumped out at me and I had to often stop and reread passages.A lesser concern was that even though this was story in which the H is werewolf, there is actually very little mentioned about it in the book and the story has almost no paranormal element, if that's what you're looking for. This could have been a very good book but the author needs to seriously consider getting a better proofreader/editor to take it to the next level.