Review: For His Desire
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 31, 2013
For His Desire fits the story, as Michael took control from the beginning and Elena developed a desire to please him. Both characters needed more development and they started to negotiate the relationship of Dom/sub but didn't finish it. The story needs more details to tie it all together and a better presentation of the BDSM elements, plus some editing; it sounded like a first draft rather than a completed story.