Review: Cute story but needs edit
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2014
I had trouble with the editing. Please use double quote marks for dialogue. There were times the word choice was wrong and threw off the syntax of the sentence.  Near the end of the book the grammar problems grew in number.  Finishing the story was a rush job and completing words became lacking. I know this was a free read, but I don't see myself finishing the series.  Author spent so much time wrapped up in the enigma about magic philosophy, which was boring.  She should have spent more time on the fight at the end and maybe have the knight save her and at least get a kiss.