Review: Promising but falls short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2013
I read this book at the request of the author. The basic premise is interesting. Someone can slip into your dreams, and then derives voyeuristic pleasure from taking you on erotic fantasies.Law enforcement is after him for different reasons. Some see him as a potential asset to solve difficult crimes. Others see him as a danger to national security and want him dead.For some odd reason the author decided to set the story in California, despite his seeming unfamiliarity with the language or customs of the U.S. Consequently everyone uses British English, including slang and idioms. This is very annoying. As for the characters themselves, they are all naive, self-serving and one dimensional. There is not a likable one in the bunch.The story starts out fine, but bogs down a bit in the middle. Cutting 50 or so pages would have improved the action quite a bit.My overall opinion on this is neutral. At anything less than two dollars I would say give it a chance. I will try another book by this  A J Lewis, but I would rather see the next story take place in a setting more familiar to the author.