Review: Needs some major editing!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 7, 2012
I sang the praises for the first book in this series, but was disappointed with this second installment.The largest part of my disappointment was the major need for editing.  There are many, and I mean MANY, typographical errors.  On one page alone I counted four simple and silly typos that could have easily been noted and corrected.  The sentences are often choppy and drag on from one character to the next to the point of confusion in some spots as to which character is speaking and why they have so much to say.The second part of my frustration was the sudden lack of plot.  From page one we know that there are people (Vampires) after both Jack and Rylie, but page after page is spent with them rushing down to the street to grab a bite to eat, being followed, rushing back to the apartment building, being followed, going somewhere else, being followed, escaping again...to being followed again, etc.  It went on and on to the point that I had to keep putting the book down and then finally come back to it only to see the same thing happening still.I'm not giving up on this author just yet, as I do actually believe that her characters and the premise of the story has potential.  But, I will say that if after reading the third book in the series, "How to Date a Demon" I find the same editing problems, I don't think I will continue on with this author.  I'm hoping this won't be the case, as despite my complaints, I do feel this author and her creativity has potential.