Review: not a bad first book.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 19, 2014
I liked the plot and characters, in fact I found the secondary characters way more interesting than the main two. They still lack deapth. The story is well thought out and the pacing is good.Now to the flaws, and the other reviewer covered them thoroughly. Modern language, run on sentences, spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc. In short, please, please get an editor and you'll have a decent first book.