Review: Less than a short story, more than a couple of chapters...barely
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2014
It's been years since they've seen each other, and the parting was forced by their families...families which have been feuding for over a century. She has something he wants, and for the future of his family, he needs to get her to agree. Will she be as willing when she finds out about his ulterior motive? Since the sparks are still flying, neither is immune to the other at the moment.While the plot is solid, and the writing good, there were two things that bothered me. First, does a story really need to be 50% sex? It doesn't add to the quality of the story when there is so much focus on it. Second, why bother making this a 'short story' when it clearly continues over several more 'novellas'. I would have preferred to have the story all at once. I'm glad this one was free on Amazon, but I won't likely read the rest since they're all $2.99. I'm sorry, but while I like a good sex scene, over half the book is too much and at almost $15 to get the whole story... Um, no thanks.