Review: Wouldn't even make a good porn
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 15, 2011
As I was reading this...hmmm,  not sure what to call it since it's not really a book or a short story. For the sake of this comment, we'll call it an SS. As I was reading this little SS, I just kept thinking to myself that it has to get better, there has to be something here. I liked the idea behind the story, I even liked the idea behind some of the sex, but 3 guys is a bit much and it all seemed to be more robotic than romantic. Not only was there no passion or fire, but it was rushed, incomplete and not a turn on in the least. It almost sounded like a teenage boy was trying to write it. Save yourself the time and don't bother