Review: Okay book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 18, 2013
I borrowed this book through my prime membership, and I've thought long and hard about writing a review on it.  The premise had a great deal of promise.  Karina and Brayden both work for NCIS, one in Homicide and one in Narcotics.  Karina's friend is killed after going to a new BDSM club.  Brayden and Karina are sent into the club undercover to see if they can find the killer.  For this book, the two main characters are supposed to both be dominants.  Due to the fact they need them to be a couple, Karina is asked to pretend to be a sub.  She agrees to this, then spends the next 90% of the book fighting over who's in control within the first 30 seconds of any situation they are in.  I found the book okay, not great, but okay.  The plot moved way to fast to cover everything and would have improved if the time had been taken to really focus on the action instead of the Karina's angst.***************** Spoilers Ahead  *********************************8Here's some of my issues with the book.  You have a Domme that was raped and mutilated 10 years ago, that is now a hotshot NCIS Homicide detective.  The Dom, who is pivotal I think to the book, is a hotshot NCIS undercover narcotics officer, but is never really developed at all.  The decision to send them in undercover as a Dom and his Sub, is made within minutes of the murder it seems and the Brayden breaks the news they are going in as partners in practically the same sentence he tells Karina that her best friend was murdered.  Oh, and then in a sentence or two, Karina realizes this might be the same guy that raped and mutilated HER 10 years ago... It just goes on and on from there.The promise was there for a fantastic thriller.  I think so much could have been done with the plot if time had been taken to concentrate on some aspects of characters and not tried to include everyone that the author might be planning books for over the next 5 years.