Review: Very difficult to believe or finish
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2011
I very rarely ever want to just set a book down and not pick it up again. This is one that I was very tempted to do just that with.The whole book is from what is going on in Meagan's head. The whole book. There is dialog as the book progresses, but not much.She goes from seeing this man in "daydreams" to actually meeting him at a coffee shop to guessing that he is a vampire and that he is ashamed of something to going home with him to mystically putting a potion together while he sleeps (she had no idea that she was a witch before this) to becoming some sort of Queen to his King to helping them fight demons with her Goddess magic.The premise is good. It sounded like an interesting story. I usually like paranormal's a lot. This one really disappointed me.There is only one view point. That view point is extremely self involved. And it is too "wordy" when there is no reason to be. This book could have been at least half the size with better editing, and having a second point of view would have made it more readable.The very large leaps in thinking by Meagan, without any backstory to help it, just doesn't work well. She was too self involved and too self important, then turned around and was too unsure of herself. There was no reason to be any of those things, as far as I could see. And, frankly, I just didn't like her.