Review: A good read for 99 cents. Great characters, lots of editing issues
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2013
So the bad stuff up front: I got this book because it was in the time travel section of romance novels. Not much of a time travel romance really. So the premise of the story is similar to other stories set in this time period. Heroine's family is killed, evil uncle traps her, she escapes, hero saves her but doesn't tell her the truth, he falls in love, so does she, they don't tell each other, eventually they do, they live happily ever after and at the last minute a weird time travel scene is thrown in. There were quite a few grammar errors and misspellings. The book could have been tightened up quite a bit. Lots of redundancy. Stuff was repeated a lot. It was repetative. (See what I did there?) Lastly, on the bad stuff the author used a lot of modern language in what should have been 15th century dialogue. I don't think a 15th century man uses the phrase "WOW" and while "Chomping at the bit" originated from horse lingo, I doubt it was in the 15th century daily vocabulary.All that being said, for the price, I would still recommend this book. I really did get to love the H and h. The author did a good job of developing their characters and the secondary characters. The plot, while typical of these types of books, was unique enough that I wanted to know how it ended. I did buy the next installment of this series.