Review: Odd
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2012
This free short story just didn't do it for me. I found it rather awkward actually and it shows that guys think more with their lower head than the one on top of their shoulders. It was written well enough, but I think the author could have done a little bit more with it. If there was a second book, I would understand. But there isn't, so I just don't know what to think.Ryan, a single man, divorced twice, is lacking some love in his life. That is until he finds a note on his car, receives a Facebook message and a creepy phone call from some random girl named `M.' They end up having phone sex. I can't imagine what kind of guy would do that with someone he doesn't even know. Then he decides to meet up with her and have sex in a pitch black room. I shook my head when the guy showed up to the sleazy motel. I thought this was going to be a good erotica gone bad. Sort of like a praying mantis taking off her mates head while they have sex. But that didn't happen. I think the book would have been better if that happened - just saying.This story is basically phone sex, then crappy real sex. Would I recommend you ask? No. That's all.