Review: Cheated
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 13, 2013
A very, very short story indeed!Although Heloise Merrill and Lord Blythe are very good together,their association is much too short.I was lead to believe by the reviews that this would be a sizzling,passionate book, and much longer than it proved to be. There is only one passionate scene and that fairly tame, and although the relationship between the two is tied up nicely,(that is to say there is an ending as befits a book of this genre,I suppose,but it comes out of nowhere) it leaves the reader wanting! Wanting more of a story, and more of an ending!To me, it seemed as if the author began her story with good intentions, but ran out of fuel much too soon.Had the author worked at the story-line a bit more, and made it a full length body of work rather than a short story of 61 pages, it would have been a much more captivating read!The cover is also quite misleading.Not money well spent!