Review: Good book, few issues that missed being 5 stars
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2013
The good: I really, really enjoyed this book. The first 75% of this book was a 5 star book, beyond good! The main characters are really really well written. The plot and execution are also very good. This book reminded me of a Judith McNaught, with a lot of emotion and good storytelling. The storyline made sense. The pacing of the story was good full of action, it was interesting, just sexy enough, and the actions of the characters made sense.The bad: The last quarter of the book seemed to lose steam, as if the author got off track or didn't know how to finish. (A loose end involving kerwyn that is not mentioned, The situation with their parents was over the top, a story that began to drag are all examples of things that bugged me)OVERALL: It needs a bit of reworking to be truly unforgettable. I was impressed but then disappointed that it was so close to being incredible! Also needs an epilogue, as the ending is short. I would definitely read more by this author.