Review: Et to Editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2012
This is the story of David and Noelle. David is a deployed widower with twins who live with his mom and Noelle is the kids teacher. David and Noelle meet when he comes home to surprise his kids. They conspire to have him surprise the twins in class for show and tell. It was really a cute and touching scene which tugged at my heart.David pursues Noelle and they start spending time together, eventually falling in love. Okay, so that's the good, romantic stuff. You know there has to be a villain... or villains! in this story and you would be correct. There were, in fact three...The mother and father of David's deceased wife, who are snobs and elitist. The mother in particular received her comeuppance.The third villain was the editor, who really robbed this story of it truest potential by not fixing its grammatical mistakes. Don't worry, you can read over the mistakes, inserting the proper word or tense or punctuation, but really...should you have to?-Envynone