Review: Feeling let down
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 6, 2011
I don't like the way the author keeps adding sub-plots without resolving any of them. In this installment there was nothing learned or resolved within any of the threads that the author started in book 2. Also, the length is quite short. It took me about an hour to read the whole thing. I had assumed that the price jump to 2.99 meant a novel. Instead I paid more for less than I received in either of the previous. My advice to the author is to spend more time honing the story. If you are going to string it out, you have to give us crumbs to keep us interested. I think it has a lot of potential, but you need to do the hard work of the craft of writing (which is re-writing).