Review: Emotional but Fell a Bit Flat
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2013
The beginning of the short novella was very emotional for me to read, and I could feel the pain and grief that the heroine was experiencing.  It was very vividly written and in stark detail.  The part that was a bit flat was the BDSM scenes and such...I think that this could have been better served as a longer story to flesh out the emotional responses between the Dom and his sub.It was well written, and I will be looking for more by Ms. Nelson.