Review: So so, needs editor
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 14, 2013
I thought this book was edited, but it contains many redundant word usages and on page 129, major glaring error, a girl is described as having "sapphire red hair". That seems ridiculous, an editor would have caught that. Red is the only color sapphire can never be. If it's red then it's ruby! Shouldn't any woman know that? You shouldn't use the same descriptive word more than one in a sentence, or use it and use it again fit something else a sentence later. It throws the reader or of the story and makes things confusing. The story is nothing special, I let reviews fool me. It's bland and immature.