Review: Not bad smut for young people
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2014
This book is written for young people, and I am not a young person. The author is a poor writer, but when it comes to talking dirty and raunchy sex scenes, she has it down!The things I liked were that the 20 somethings in this story were, for the most part, solid, mature, dependable and responsible. They talked about pregnancy prevention and they were in love with each other before they slept together. No insta-love. I liked the characters, and really wanted them to find happiness together. All the young people in the story were nice and I liked their connection and committment to each other. I'm glad that all of them can be so open and honest about sex and what they like.What I didn't like is that the story is written in first person, and the author frequently changes tense in the same sentence! She could REALLY benefit from grammar classes, or have her stories proof-read. The mistakes are detracting from the story. The other problem I had was that the author repeated herself. It felt contrived, like she was trying to stretch it out to fill up pages.There's more sex than story in this book. If that's what you're looking for, you've found it.