Review: This is Obviously Supposed To Be Prurient
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2013
As porn goes, this doesn't go very far.  No chickens in the underwear, you know.It's fairly well written, though.  Nice characters, nicely paced, grammatical.  Nothing worse than getting caught up in the  action, and have  the willing suspect of disbelief blown by some fool that doesn't know when to use yours, your's and you're.But it's a shame that it's not kinky.  Lucy in the chocolate factory is kimkioer.