Review: Definitely could have been better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2014
This was a disappointing book and on most days I wouldn't have stuck with it and I'm not really sure why I did, it was very predictable but then the same can be said of a lot of romance books but this held so many mistakes, like Willow's maid was originally called Kitty but then it changes to Polly. When Saliha Sultana speaks to Willow in English Ibrahim says " I do not understand your heathenish tongue " yet later in the book he's speaking perfect English. Also Dariq made the observation about Willow " she would satisfy a stone if it had a cock " strange quote I thought hard to imagine how it made it into the final draft of this book.It was a shame because although predictable it could have been a much better book.