Review: Suspenseful but could use some work
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2013
I was trying to decide if this was a three or four star story so I settled for four simply because of the suspense. I was suspecting every male in the book of being the killer because there were really no tell tale signs.The book could use more descriptive statements so the reader could be more involved. I also thought Susan was a big whiny baby most of the time. I enjoyed the interaction between Dave and Susan. I didn't see the relevance to the incident with her father because it seemed to have nothing to do with the rest of the story.