Review: I'm glad I tried it.....BUT....
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 30, 2014
My father was a traveling salesman and could tell a great story; of which he had plenty. BUT....he had to add every detail to the story and it made me and my brothers crazy. "Dad, get on with it".....that's how I feel about this book. The plot and characters are well done and keep your interest. BUT.....does he really have to describe every outfit they wear, every aspect of every room they walk into. Do we really need to know what kind of crown molding the room has or exactly how high the chandelier was? Do we really need to know the designer of every piece of clothing the characters wear? No, no we don't. Mr. Sullivan needs to cut back on the detailed descriptions of everything. I kept flipping the page until his fashion runway commentary ended and the story picked back up. Again, the story is great and I'll be looking for Book 2 and hope he's learned that longer is not always better.With all that said I think you'll enjoy the originality of the plot and the characters......a great surprise ending, too.