Review: This was a good story. Needs editing. Will read others by this author.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 19, 2013
I enjoyed this story of second chances. It was fun to see the changes in attitude of the major characters over time. I felt that Cade had fully atoned for past "sins" regarding Star. I enjoyed the family dynamics among Cade's relatives. The children were well loved and disciplined.This book badly needs editing, for example:location 1009: "RINGER" instead of wringer.location 1522: "KNEELED" instead of kneltlocation 1604 & 1854: "WERE as if" instead of waslocation 1642: "SHIMMED" instead of shimmiedlocation 1891: "LOOK" repeated wordlocation 1975: "so I came see my new nephew" left out "to"location 2005: "A fragile as" instead of as fragile as