Review: check the word count, the story is o er before it starts.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
22222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222 too,too, too, too, too, two, to,two, too, too, to, two, too, two, too,too,too,to,two, short.this essay had a very good build up but truly left you hanging. Next time I will check the word count. If the author ever gets her thoughts properly edited and assembled this would be a good read. The characters are funny and relatable. The family scenes and action have a dissonance that needs to be rectified.