Review: Interesting story line
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2013
I'm an avid reader who will read almost anything that can't crawl away fast enough. Because of the storyline I am glad I picked this book to read. It was engaging following Kile's journey. It would have been ever so much MORE engaging if the author had used any kind of spell check software or had any proofreading done. Waive/wave, aid/aide, passed/past etc, etc just drove me crazy, as did the varying tense usage within a single sentence. All that aside, I am going to buy the next book, just to continue the journey with Kile...hopefully as she grows and learns to be a Hunter, the author will also grow into his craft and find that the use of proper English and grammar only improve a pretty good story. I am no English major, but I'd volunteer my time to help proofread to help save someone else's sanity...Yosemitejim@msn