Review: Great story line mixing current technology and inner strength
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2014
the story could be better if proofreading was done.  even in the 1st chapter of the 2nd book there are glaring grammatical errors.  The story was great but one loses the depth of emotional ties with the characters when you must ask yourself "What is this writer trying to say or convey" because of grammatical errors.Looking forward to the 2nd book in the series!!!!!