Review: It's Okay, But Needs Work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 1, 2012
This cute little fable about the origins of Santa is based on fact.  The story has an engaging message and style.  However, the work needs to be edited, and the formatting needs to be corrected.  On the first page, for example, there are sentence fragments that make the story a little hard to follow.  A little effort would greatly improve this tale.