Review: Liked it!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2011
This story delivered - what I mean by that is it's a straightforward sexual encounter where the couple meet, have sex and half fall in love.  What I liked was that it is written with more than the usual meager swipe at character development.  The couple starts with an anonymous encounter and moves into a boyfriend/girlfriend experience that I found satisfying.  He calls her sweetheart and is tender, except for when the scene calls for him to be, uh, less than tender.  It's not great literature by any means, plot development is thin and predictable, and the story is nothing new, I could pick it apart if I wanted to be negative.  It's charmingly told, however, and there are no vampires or magic, which is awesome.  Even though I read it in less than 2 hours, I felt connected to the story and cared about the people in it.  Great hot sex and a love story too, which is always nice, told in a modern setting.This is an expanded sample, probably less than 100 pages and rated E (by Ellora's Cave standards) for erotic, explicit sex with graphic language.