Review: This is not a book...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 9, 2012
..it is a short story. So why are there chapters? It took me all of 20 minutes to read it, add five for trying to figure out what she meant in sentences containing the improper usage of words (like people who try to use big words to sound smart but you can tell they don't really know or understand the meaning of them). A lot of typographical errors for a short story. Ok I don't want to sound like a prude because I'm not, but that kind of thing really bothers me, it's distracting when I'm reading, don't judge me I can't help it.As for the story, it had potential but it was very nondescript. A thesaurus would help her tremendously. The characters were baseless, there was no real info on them other than a physical description more so of Isabella then Donovan, and very very little background.It's a free, quick read, but sorely lacking in any depth at all. I say it doesn't hurt to check it out for yourself as long as you don't have to pay for it and you're looking for a quickie. Two stars just because the plot was original. I just wish it had been longer, more descriptive, and edited properly. (I don't ask for much do I?)