Review: Really wanted more, but overall good
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 19, 2012
This short story had a good pace, but I felt that the story line was not fully developed. As I was reading it, there were many questions that kept running through my head, like why did Blake feel that he was a coward, exactly how old is Blake that Erin should feel that he was old enough to be her father, what war was he in to receive his scars? There were just a lot of missing plot holes to the story that bothered me. I think that this story could have been very good if the story was developed more into a full length novel than just a short story because then I could understand how their love blossomed the way that it did and would not have left me with all those questions. Overall I will say that I did enjoy how excellent the story was in being able to touch the reader. The characters were fully developed and that was great because as a reader it was easy to like the characters and be able to understand their emotions.