Review: Very Unique Story Line
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2012
I do love the story line of Ra's Chosen. This one I had really looked forward to wondering what kind of woman Akori would find. The story of the men finding the one true love is wonderful. But I do see where so much  more could be developed in the story.This is a story of an immortal who is a player with the ladies. He refuses to accept the fact that he is destined to find a mate but when he does see one and he physically hurts from wanting her he finds himself irresistibly drawn to her. No other woman can relieve his pain. He finds himself giving into fate and following his heart.There are many areas of the story where it seems the author missed out on more depth in each character and making them so real. Instead there seemed to be more focus on the sex scenes which are common and descriptive. In fact, I could see these books being much larger novels with rich characters and situations. There is so much potential in them that gets missed.As I said, I love the story and the unique characters. The writer does a great job in making the characters likeable but stops there.