Review: Very disappointed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 6, 2013
I was hoping after reading the first three books that the editing would've gotten better. It didn't. This series has so much potential but I became more frustrated with all these new characters when the author doesn't give you closure on other main characters.For instance, what happens to Jacques? He got seriously hurt in book #2, but we never hear about him in book #3 at all. This was supposed to be Sila's right hand man, who protected the family. He watched over Jasmine during her pregnancy. Surely he would've called after the birth of there babies to check in. That really bugged me. Then there's no background on the Bennett family and why they're so against the Patron. These are two of the many issues I felt the author should have brought closure or insight to, but instead brought in 10 more characters.I also became irritated with the word bitch. I get that it's not as derogatory since its a term for a female dog, but it was overkill in the second book and just down right unecessary in this one. The names of characters could be used in lieu of the over usage of the word. Gave it 2 stars cause it just fell short for me while the other two were better. I also felt the chapters were shorter and the story was being rushed without all the necessary details. Many things didn't make sense after the attack and it was hard to keep track of who was fighting who.