Review: Lovely, short, sexy romance! Loved it!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 12 31, 2013
I was happy to find this little free story. I had an enjoyable little time reading it. Before I get into my review, I remember at least one person complaining about it being too short; however, given the story that Barbara seemed to want to tell, it was a good length. I can't imagine this story told more words; I found it just perfect. I loved Zadie from the beginning; poor thing, one bad thing after another happened. I enjoyed the switch to Tristan's perspective. I loved how the metaphors and themes of their lives matched. Now looking at the length (28 pages mentioned in the details), I didn't expect stunning dialogue or great plot development; I wanted some hot sex, maybe a little romance- basically an erotic version of a "Hallmark movie"- and in my opinion, the author managed that.