Review: It was for free
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2014
To me it seemed that the author could not decide what kind of concept of Alpha to go for. I can accept that not all Alphas are into using their physical power to resolve conflicts as Corey chooses to do towards their neighbouring pack. And I get it that the most would be confused if they reacted to a different sex than they had expected. But in this story it was treated sort of "wobbly". Corey reacts as an insecure person and runs when he discovers that his fated mate is a male. As Alpha he should stand firm, never mind the shock he had just received. Being clever businessman does not make you an Alpha. Devin is described much more like a traditional Alpha. I wonder how is their relationship meant to function when the public Alpha is described as a submissive in the bed? The way of  writing in itself was quite good, hence 3 stars.