Review: fooled me twice, shame on me
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 17, 2012
The first book in this series is okay, with some new ideas and some pretty good character development.  The second book is terrible.  I got this book, the third in the series, to see which way the series would go, and sadly, the terrible writing continues.  These books feel like they are written by a twelve year old boy that has never talked to a girl, imagining how high school will be when all the trampy, Amazonian cheerleaders realize how great the small, shy boy is and try to get him into the sack, never feeling jealousy toward the trampy cheerleaders lined up at the door, waiting for a turn. Being an creative twelve year old mind, high school becomes a magical kingdom, the tramp cheerleaders become tramp Noblewomen, and thinking hard to remember the quadratic formula for an Algebra quiz becomes thinking really hard and creating a magical yacht, described in incredibly boring detail. Unfortunately, stupid high school dialogue does not change as well, and the wizards and swordsmen say magic is so 'Awesome' and 'Cool'.The story teeters about, never going anywhere but somehow ending the mess after not much happens.The kindle edition is full of mistakes, and if the book were any good, this would detract from the story.Also, how many times should a character stick their tongue out at someone? I guess that, if you are twelve, this probably happens all the time, and this is why it happens all the time in this book.Don't waste your time.