Review: Broken Premise - Tough Reading.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2013
Something must have been lost in the translation, the problem faced by the protagonist is that his power is both desired, and feared by society. But instead of providing guidance and care to developing "dark" magicians, they are left to do what they wish, potentially risking everyone around them with the possibility of using their powers illegally.  How far a stretch the premise is can be found by reading the free excerpt.  Even with this laborious translation it is obvious that the writer has talent and can tell a story; but this story needs a lot of work.