Review: Predictable ending
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2011
First of all, I could see the ending as soon as I started reading.  It was quite predictable.  The story itself was a little too bizarre.  It felt like someone telling me about a dream they had that wasn't even particularly interesting.  I had higher hopes after reading the reviews. Also, from a published writer I would expect better than "Whose there?"  The sentence should be "Who's there?"