Review: End of Helen/Karma's story, well written, and recommended.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 11 27, 2013
The conclusion to Karma's story was well written and interesting. I felt like bringing Helen and Paul together at the end threatened the continuity of Hugh Howey's tale, but it didn't cross the line. My mind originally tricked me into thinking that Donald (and not Paul) was referenced in this story (probably because I didn't think that Helen had strong ties to Paul), but this would have been contrary to the Dust tale told by Hugh Howey.  It was my mistake (in my first, earlier and unedited version of my review) that I criticized the author for a Donald/Helen meeting that didn't happen, so I would like to set the record straight. I enjoyed Patrice's stories and I should have known she wouldn't do this to her readers! I definitely recommend it.  Good end to Helen/Karma's arc.