Review: BAD STOP WRITING TESS WILLIAMS
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2014
I could not even finish it. It was that bad. I normally finish a book no matter what it is. I just could not with this book.For one thing and I didn't say this about the first book because it was fine, the grammar. OMG it was like a first grader revised it. And I know there writing and they don't know what grammar is. Like Tess please fire your revising person PLEASE.Next is the story line/ characters. The girl (I forgot her name) was not like that at all in the first book. She changed as what happened to her, why is a cry baby (my opinion) she is so dependent on the guys. Like really girl you need some time in the real world. The story line is so hard to follow. I gave up near chapters 16-18 or something like that. I read the ending and I gave up on the book. I just could not read it anymore. The chapters were so long that after a period of time I swear I was going to fall asleep for it.I never fully finished the book I just skipped to the end just to get the book out of the way on my kindle. I just could not finish it, even if you paid me to read it I still would not could not read it again even if it was the ending.I'm not going to read the third book. Even more bad reviews about that. God please just make Tess stop writing Ember. This a bad series for sure. And I read many books. This one is the worst yet out of all books that I will ever read in my life. Just don't buy it. Save your money for another book. Please DON'T BUY THIS BOOK.