Review: 3.5 Stars Cute and Clever
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2012
(Note: Since I can't give it a half star, I rounded up to 4)Clever concept, good movement. I don't know how long it took me to read, 30-45 minutes maybe? I read it over breakfast and snickered for most of the day.The story clipped along nicely at a good pace without too much repetitive introspection, as I've noticed some authors fall prey to in first person narratives. The gnomes were very well animated. Honestly, I was expecting a rehash of the South Park Underpants Gnome episode, but this was definitely a pleasant deviation from that.Comments for the author: I agree with whichever reviewer commented that he/she thought it would be a dynamite story if written in third person. I'm going to try not to give anything away, but I think an extra 500 words to develop the ending of the story would've been a worthy investment and in a perfect world, an extra 500 words to develop more with the girlfriend would've been good too.-- Emma D, aka Anna Zimmerman