Review: Pretty much what I expected from a NN shorty
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 8, 2014
Short stories always jump right to the meat of it, so I expected that much. But what was with that huge build up? And then then the even bigger let down?This alien race seemed very interesting, and and I would have sacrificed the the steamy erotica for the story behind Kortal and his adventure with hiding his races secret. But in walks this chick on a mission to find her missing sister. And instead of adding to the story, she took away from it.In the end, she doesn't know what happened to her sister, and is content with making herself believe that her sister is in the same position she winds up in. It don't matter that she'll never see her sister again, because I don't think she will ever be untied from that bed.