Review: A little stunned by other reviews
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 23, 2013
I was charmed by this story. That's not a word used much anymore, charmed, but it applies. There was a surprising amount of character development in 8200 words, and I really enjoyed those characters: Lana had more depth than I expected, Seree was nicely rounded, and their father was terrific. On Smashwords, I'm giving this a solid 4 stars - 5 here, because.