Review: Mixed Feelings
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2014
This mystery novel presents a problem for me. The author has created an intriguing set of characters, a plausible mystery and has left enough unresolved personal problems to carry over into the next book. This is all good. However, the problems with vocabulary, spelling and English usage grew worse as the book went on. Reading became a race between desire to reach the outcome and desire to shut it down and hit "delete."Some examples:". . .gave them too her""You would have like her.""tired of her continuous plight for relevance""live your days like I?""if I have ever saw them""You haven't drank anything""I wish I was more like mother.""how much he had drank"There are more, but you get the idea. Ms. Ward needs to find a good proofreader. If she does, this could be a very good series indeed.