Review: Good story but could have used a good editor
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2013
I believe this is Ortiz' first book, so I'll definitely make some allowances, but the editing was almost non-existent. Switching perspective in one paragraph, typos, and the occasionally tangent that was never resolved—it takes the reader out of the story. I'll read more of his work, but I'm hoping for better editing next time.