Review: Needs polishing, more plot, action
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2014
Definitely rough around the edges.  Could really use a grammar checker and spell checker at times.Somewhat interesting main character, though it takes most of the book to get a glimpse of what makes him special.Action and plot seem to be lost in the drive for character balance and development.  Main character spendsmost of book lamenting his plight in life and being overly focused on his feelings.  Left me unsure as to whether I wouldwant to read the next installment.