Review: Couldn't force myself  to finish
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 31, 2013
I was curious about the SEAL tie-in to a rock band.  It didn't work.  In fact, i'm not sure that the author has ever met a SEAL.  The characters were completely wrong..."Hawk's thighs burnt as he tried to match Max's stride".  This was during a dash across a parking lot.  This would have been a piece of cake for anyone in the military, let alone a extensively trained SEAL.  His behavior during the entire book was of a spoiled, very immature acting, very young person.  Max was supposed to be the Captain of a special SEAL's team, and yet played doorman security most of the time.  The timeline on the house was also ridiculous.  He goes to her office 1 day, they are asking for approval to build the next day (that interaction made no sense whatsoever) and then it burns two days later?The biggest issue was that the characters did not behave in a way that made them believable.  Too many inconsistencies to list.  Interactions often became just a series of one-liners.