Review: Average Nice Little Time Pass Story, No Surprises
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 27, 2012
It was a quick read.  It really didn't need the sex scene, because it would have been space much better used for them to get to know each other.  I realize that many shifter fans like the instant knowing of that is my mate theme.  However, even if you know someone is the one, you still have to get to know them, learn their likes and dislikes.  It doesn't all have to be wham bam thank you ma'am.  We can have a little canoodling without the noodling.  Not that I don't like a bit of noodling between people who know more than each other's names.It was a nice story.  However, it needs some reworking.  The werewolves should have been able to smell him, the werejaguar spraying stuff was off putting and an obvious tool used by someone who couldn't think around the problem.As for the Black Moon, I'm still not sure why that is so important.  It's not like the moon isn't still there even if you can't see it.However, even given the above, knowing that it was just a short shifter story.  I got what I expected, but nothing original.  A nice little time pass read.Edited for additional information after reading the entire series.After finishing the entire series I still hold with the above views. However, even though the writing and story quality increases with each part of the trilogy there are still major flaws with each part.  It is still a nice little read.