Review: interesting story could have a bit more depth
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2013
I enjoyed this story and have already started the next.  That said I think there could have been more time spent developing the conditions of this future Earth, some of it's history, giving it more depth and a better foundation for understanding Terracorp.  Having a bit more information about the characters as they evolved would have given them more depth as well and made their transitions less abrupt (Moravian.)  Everything was just a little to flat except the story line which is interesting and certainly worth the read.