Review: It was okay.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2014
I never really saw how they fell in love. His main attraction to her seemed to be 'Oh yeah! She's hot!' and 'She doesn't want to abort my baby? Well then she is clearly The One.' And even before she ever spoke to him, she was swooning over how attractive and nice he was. Then they started doing sexual things and having sex even though they had barely spoken to each other. I think I would have liked the story better if their relationship had taken just a little longer to develop.Also for being the "Sweeter Version," it seemed to be quite... carnal.