Review: Undeveloped to begin...full circle in the end!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2013
I wish the author had gone back and revised the beginning book of this when she finished it because as the book progressed, her writing was so much better. I felt the initial start of the relationship between Georgia and Ben was undeveloped and there was way too much narration, instead of dialogue between the characters. But towards the end as Georgia revealed more about herself to Ben, it was through dialogue, not narration. Dialogue allows a deeper connection for the reader to the characters. The author knows her hockey, I will say. Growing up in a hockey family and having dated hockey player's in my younger  days, there is a certain culture that goes along with the sport. I would have liked to experience the action and intensity of Ben actually playing hockey, scoring goals, taking penalties, getting into hockey fights. There is no better rush than that. Hopefully her sequel will let the reader experience the actual hockey side of the book.