Review: Good action, needs better editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 6, 2012
The action scenes in this book are really good.  The editing is really poor.  The use of the wrong words in so many cases is really a stumbling block.  A good book makes you forget you are reading and comes to life.  That doesn't happen when the wrong words, wrong tense and even wrong type of expressions are used.For example, right off the bat, vile vs vial, their vs there vs they're, pray vs prey, seen instead of saw.  Using expressions that are popular now disrupts the "historical" aspects of the story.  People probably didn't ask "Are you okay?" during the time of the story.One last thing, having Shania sound like Frankenstein was not a good move.  She sounds like an idiot!If you are a new author, then I congratulate you and encourage you to keep on.  Your style is fresh and the action moves along well.  You need to double check word usage or hire a good editor who can make the story flow better.