Review: Needs more!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2013
I had a difficult time deciding on a rating. The story was just so short and the author didn't really allow the reader time to grasp on to the plot or characters. What was written was really good, but there wasn't enough storyline. One reviewer said it was one sex scene after another. That simply isn't true. They had sex one time. I received my copy for free, but it regularly sells for $2.99.....it's way to short and not enough storyline for the money. Maybe when the author finishes the complete story she will bundle it together in a packaged deal. I would like to find out what happens next because I like the set up so far and perhaps the next part will be free for a limited time as well.