Review: Fantasy for adults
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2013
Great imagination, my main complaint was that there was too large of a crowd to make it work. Maybe the two wereseals without the husband could have worked. As it was, the feeling was of little intimacy, and of trying to make it right for everyone. It felt as if couple # 2 were in for the consolation prize, and the story got lost in the messiness of the juggling act.  There was a lot of potential for a great romance, and instead of a nice omelette, the reader was served scrambled eggs, partly runny. I hope for more hidden stories, perhaps more of the fae?