Review: Good story but ...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 26, 2014
There were things I was hoping would be corrected in the second book.Like the first book there were many uses of modern slang that simply didn't fit the period. Calling togas bed sheets and referring to Cleopatra as a "hard body". Also this book had some editing issues.On the good side it's inventive and well plotted. I think a good, critical editor is what's needed.