Review: Did Not Seem Serious
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2014
In general, I found the writing choppy and had a hard time getting into the characters. Told from the view point of Anne, she was a easygoing, easy-to-bully girl who worked hard to support her sister through college. Anne met Mal, the drummer of Stage Dive at a party and he without her consent moved in to live with her. To me, their relationship did not go deep, just a lot of joking around. Mal was the type that masked his true emotions with jest and as a reader I did not get the feeling that his feelings were sincere. Perhaps it would be good to have alternating POVs so that we understand what was going on in his mind especially with regards to Anne.