Review: Best book I've read in ages but the editing is woeful
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2013
I am so conflicted about this book. It is an excellent story - quite innovative, unique, surprising, refreshing - with characters that are wonderful. But the grammar and mixed use of tenses and verbs and ..... well, just don't start me. I highly recommend you read Grim but only if you can autocorrect in your mind and it doesn't distract you from the story.Please, please, MK, get an editor - or ask readers like me to help which I would be happy to do. Your story is worth getting out there more but you need to fix the mechanics of your writing first.