Review: This story doesn't seem to know what it wants to be.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2012
I don't want to give away the story for those who may want to read the book, but I felt like this story didn't know what kind of story it wanted to be.  Doesn't start out like a scifi story at all, more like a slice of life kinda thing.  I felt that the character's development added little to the story, and was almost irrelevant for the things to come later down the line.  It was a short story so I read through to the end, but I will not be picking up the second installment of the story.Some of the other things that were annoying about the book:1. Sentences felt choppy, reading in the beginning (before I got used to it) was really difficult.2. The creature as described just felt like it lacked imagination.