Review: Good book. Very different
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2014
ok I liked this book a lot. great story line, good writing but in the case of getting to no a character , I think it should be the 1st thing you do. I was annoyed that Dan was talking about himself committing suicide at such a young age but never finding out why until almost the very end of the book. and bring  up Sandra. he did this bad thing. you never no what until..yes..the end of the book. I think that particular incident  should have been told early on. I'd have identified with Dan a whole sooner which makes for a better book..I think.this book could have been alot better if  that have been revealed sooner.I just couldn't get into his head what was going on with him, not the kick part but why he was like he was, nice, sweet , sensitive, doing the right thing and bringing up memories I had no idea what they meant. as for the plot, storyline, it's good. original. I really liked it. I'd have given a 5star if I would have been able to identify with the character early on. but it had  imagination &  good writing so I'll give it a 4 star.I was offered his book for book club on goodreads but I had it already not knowing so I thank  John Monk anyways for trying to give me copy. a job well done but your next book think about the ppl reading, we identify with the main character you have a great book not a good book.good luck with the writing you have great potential..