Review: Needs more reader involvement
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2014
Interesting, but a little off on character involvement. I don't buy into the submissive lead female falling for the demanding, authoritative Belmont, because she is an independent, self supportive, woman who knows her own mind and heart. I also found the sex scenes very informative, but lacking on getting the reader involved. It's all there in the writing, but it's doesn't draw you in, it's mechanical.