Review: Good plot; but again with the horrible editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 24, 2013
This author can definitely pen an interesting read (I'm almost halfway through the 700+ pg book) but LACKS BASIC EDITING ABILITIES!  Homonyms and poor word choice cause the writer to use the wrong word (they're/there/their, then/than, chock/choke, site/sight, through/threw, ridicules/ridiculous just to name a few), they spelled some of their own characters' names incorrectly (Bliant is typed Blaint in at least one spot), they use poor punctuation and wrong word choice while the writing also displays "tense" errors (back and forth from past to present to future).  The errors are glaringly obvious, and quite distracting; HOWEVER, I could still put myself into the story for lengths of time.  If you are charging for your work it needs to be much more close to pristine that it currently is.  M.K. Eidem: If you'd like I would edit the stories you are writing just to have access to the stories for free and a quick nod at the beginning for the effort!