Review: No
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2014
It is so choppy. This is essentially fan fiction, which, once upon a time, would be on a website where people share their stories with other people who have a hobby of writing. Don't waste your money. It reads like a rough draft; I am not certain the author proof-read it, due to the multiple times there are missing words. There is no flow, lots of plot holes with missing characters, ages that don't add up, logic leaps.This genre has a lot of rough versions of stories. Often, there are some good stories, where the writer didn't have an editor, so you learn to overlook missing or extra commas, as well as other grammar errors. Generally, they are annoying at first, but you start to ignore them (this is how I feel about SE Smith, for example). But in this case, you have an inexperienced writer, who may or may not have talent, this version was too rough and one dimensional to know for sure, you have a poor story, one that would never have been seen before the advent of e-books. Don't do it.