Review: Good Story, needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 25, 2013
The author is doing a good job of developing the characters and I find the story line interesting.  So 4 stars for story.  However, there are just enough typos and language misuses that I border on stopping reading.  The story has kept my interest though.  A couple of examples: use of deft(handy with your hands) instead of deaf(can't hear) use of leaper (someone jumping) vs leper (someone with a disease).  Use of maybe when he meant may be. Many other examples throughout the book.  So two stars (close to one)for the editing, hence an average of three stars.