Review: Really bad and I'm 29% into it
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2013
I'm going to write this as I go because I have a feeling I am not going  to get far into it before I give up.  First, I paid $3 and I wish I hadn't.  Next, I am having problems with just what period of time this book is written in.  Sometimes you feel like it is the 1800's and then they talk of the internet and on-line dating so what is going on.  Get in one period and have the characters live in that time.A rancher with several sons decides to get them married so the  ranch will continue in the family and he will have some grandchildren plus the influence of a good woman on the ranch.  So he runs an ad and our heroine answers and crosses the country with her teen age sister.  You would think they were on a wagon train the way she acts.  Also, she is wearing a heavy overcoat to impress her future husband and it is scalding hot in the Texas sun.  I would think he would think she had lost her mind!  Didn't get that.  She acts like she has no brain at all.  Now, she had an abusive boyfriend that she is running from.  Had a job and a car, supporting herself and her sister.  However, she acts like she is in Victorian times and she has to fan herself to appear fragile.Now the truck breaks down in the middle of nowhere.  He tells her he has "broke a wheel".  How does one break a wheel on a pick-up truck in today's world?  Break an axel, get a flat, etc. but break a wheel?  What is it on the buckboard and the spokes broke?Dumb.Then, in this massive heat she wants to take her overcoat off but she refuses to even seem like she is undressing in front of this guy.  Really?  You would have a heat stroke before you would take off an overcoat in the middle of the vast Texas lands than take off an overcoat  Are you nude under there?  Otherwise, get real.I'm fast getting to the point of giving up on this one. so if it will save you some money, good.  Don't buy this one.I gave it about 5 more minutes and it just got worse, not better.  These men were acting like they were out of the old west and lived in a barn.  In today's age, I really don't think a group would act and be as stupid as this group seemed to be.  This one is really bad and I don't see any hope for it.  Won't be buying anymore of this author's work. OR believing some of the reviews.