Review: Lacking quite a bit
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2014
I almost gave up on this book a few pages in, but kept with it until the end to see if it got better.  There is a decent story the author is trying to tell but there are way too many editing errors and lack of information in some areas.  You also get details of something that seems to have nothing to do with the story.  The writing is awkward and when you transition between characters it often backtracks a bit.  I'm still not completely sure how the main characters ended things the first time they met and I wonder why if she had "issues" that she would go to a secluded cabin with a stranger.  Just doesn't make sense.  How did they get from a bar to a cabin so quickly and later in the book the guy seems to know lots of her dreams/wishes that he found out from her roommate of less than a week.  Like I said, the story has potential but needs lots of work.