Review: Let down...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2013
I bought the story a while ago....I just now read it...all of it...I kept scrolling back and forth wondering if it was a format error of some sort. Nope it wasn't. Imagine my disappointment. The story has a great beginning... The only reason I can come with for it ending so abruptly is there isn't a story. No vision. No natural movement from there on. Or maybe it was too cliche of a storyline to write.