Review: Not impressed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 25, 2012
There was virtually no plot to this one. I get that it's a short story, but still I would like a little character development and a plot. Even a bad plot is better than no plot at all. The writing was good when it came to the sex scenes, but I couldn't even enjoy those becasue the double spacing was driving me nuts!