Review: Can I finish?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2014
Skyla, etc all ( even the sometimes funny, ridiculously wordy Tad) are reduced to one and two word swears in lieu of solid writing. Cop out! This is an adolescent book, and VERY disappointing that Moore gave up on witty dialect in favor of a quick swear every time! JUST SH$T! Is the new Skyla Speak used to create space for more action??? Ah, no.If the juvenile language and immature writing isn't enough chapter after chapter, let's look at plot...at 50% we have had 2% war, and 98% The Love Square/Talk about Chloe Fest. (again, no action against the murder of the FATHER) Better still, Skyla flaunts her skank manner, bouncing between and in front of Gage, Logan, and now in the running, Marshall. One more time...is Gage a dark God/beautiful specimen with dimples you can fall into? Is Logan a Golden God? WE GET IT Moore...everyone in the book is perfectly striking! Wait, we got it 5 books so.Oh, haven't heard yet? Skyla hates Chloe...and realisticly of course they are STILL in the same house. Of course Skyla rants in her mind over and over, never acting even after seeing Chloe walk into the woods carrying a severed head! Her father's killer lives in her house now, and Skyla does NOTHING?! ok.....GAGE, now he can't be trusted. Now can magically share visions. (Did I mention the huge story gaps?) Of course he is subtly protecting Chloe . I am over him, and am team vote HER, SKYLA, off the island!!!!!Yes, even people vanishing into the thin air of the overly described, perpetually foggy island that weeps rain EVERY CHAPTER...people coming back from the dead AGAIN ( because that is new -not)...mother Lizbeth seeing her dead husband and angelic wife to wake the next day and say...oh it's a dream...even these supposedly new events are just more of the same, yet now poorly written!If this is a total spoiler, be thankful. I kid you not...even TAD is on repeat, and the book is going nowhere. The MIRACLE will be me finishing the book, not a faction war win. I have never been more let down by a series in my life!