Review: This book is terrible.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 10, 2011
Not only do you have to suspend reality in order to read this book, you have to know absolutely nothing about MM relationships.William, who has had no contact with his horrible sister for the previous two years, rushes to Montana in order to rescue her from marriage to a young, poor rancher named Martin. It seems she blackmailed Martin into marriage with a false pregnancy( except the marriage never took place). Now that the lie is revealed, Martin's older, wealthy brother, Elijah still wants the marriage to go on or for Katrina to pay $500,000, which she doesn't have. Elijah gives Katrina a couple of weeks to get the money while he holds William prisoner to ensure Katrina returns. Now, William must stay at the luxurious ranch ( with a car and no one watching him) or Elijah will take his only possession, a lakefront,7-acres in Michigan inherited from his father. Reader....fill in the rest. You know how this story will go.My problems include the stilted language throughout the book ( Americans speak with contractions)to the lack of timeline ( William was supposed to stay in Montana for two week yet multiple weeks pass and no one mentions  William's job or life back home). There is no consistency in the story. Williams has not spoken to Katrina in years, but he keeps cleaning up her messes and she knows exactly what is going on in his life. William had weeks alone on the ranch, but he never actually walked around and saw anything! Please! And when did rural Montana have malls and food courts and coffee shops? Legally speaking , there is no way that Elijah could take William's property for a sister's broken wedding contract.Okay, I need to stop now because I am getting irritated with myself again for purchasing this book. I usually refrain from first time novels until there are 5 + reviews. I broke my own rule to my regret. Do not make the same mistake I did.