Review: Poorly written
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2014
I found this story to be very poorly written grammatically and in telling the story in general.  It transitions from one place or scene to another with no indication of what happened or why.  The dialogue was not realistic at all and kind of cheesy.This story reminded me a bit ofAccidental It Girlby Libby Street.  There are some differences of course but I like that story much better and it is written much better.This story had too much dialogue and too much telling instead of showing.  I couldn't connect with the characters and felt like there weren't any emotions or descriptions of how the main character was feeling.One chapter is entitled one year later and a lot has happened in a year, an unbelievable amount of things.  I understand this is not real life but come on.  I don't mean to sound bitter but the main character also never had any struggles and just knew how to do EVERYTHING which started to become annoying.At several places, I really wanted to stop reading but I made myself finish.