Review: too short for the price
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2013
I gave it 3 stars because it was an acceptable read. It had a story line that could be followed, and only one or two minor editing faults( extra word in a sentence type).If it were in printed format it MIGHT be 20 pages.I hesitate to call it a romance. There was no emotion involved. Using movie ratings, it would be PG. Nothing descriptive.I believe this is the authors first published work, and as such I cut it a lot of slack. It needs to be fleshed out, and characters need to be developed. If I were the author I would make it free, to get feedback and use this to create her next story.