Review: Good Story, but too hurried
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2012
I really wanted to be able to give this one a better star rating, but there were things that left me unable to that.While I loved the idea for the story, I think it missed it's mark.  I found, I felt like I was missing out on something that could have been amazing but instead felt contrived and hurried.First Caroline is revolted by Andy because he was one of those filthy Coyote's and all of them were nothing but criminals. Than before you could catch your breath, he was a wonderful guy and she was madly in love with him and defending him to everyone.  I am sorry, but I think a little more time and character development and potential for finding his good qualities would have gone a long ways in making this a better read.Andy on the surface seems like the kind of guy, a great father and one, who any girl could love. On the other hand he, has a miserable track record with the women in his life.  We are lead to believe it's all because of his Crow Indian American hertiage.  I have to question his judgment. Usually, the school of hard knocks sends you into approaching people with more caution.Don't get me wrong there is absolutely nothing wrong with this book.  It's an easy read and I do recommend it.  I just thought it could have used some more fine tuning before putting out there.