Review: techno thrill
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2013
good premise, good characters, realistic story set on believable stage.  a few predictible moments, but more surprises and unexpected twists.  not a tired retelling of the same story.needs some good proofreading for errors.  cut a little fat, but could flesh out other storylines to add character depth and sharpen the background.