Review: Stop with the rapes and unbelievable story lines.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 26, 2014
I'm so confused.  Does the writer only write stories about 13 year olds getting raped for a year?  Not only that but no one believes the girl?  There are thing called test, shrinks so you want us to believe she told teachers and the social service and no one did anything?  So once again the rapists doesn't get in trouble.  These stories seem more like bad people get away with everything and there is no romance.Second does the writer not know about h.r?  The part of firing people with no proof and the way a partner talks to an employee, please they would of been sued, so again unbelievable.I think the writer could do great if she did romance and make things at least a little believable.Now I read the free couple of pages of the second book.  She is 23 years old, her rapists foster daddy is going to come and take her right out of the hospital against her wishes.  Doctor and nurses listen to him and not her, and really like the first moment he comes around, she would of been screaming at the top of her lungs he raped her.  But no she say anything and the 23 year just get taken right out of the hospital.  She was not a mental patient, she an adult foster daddy has no claim.  Now that is just plan stupid.  You tend to write to much stupid that is so unbelievable.