Review: Needs work but an "ok" read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 11, 2012
I got this as a freebie for my Kindle, and I'm really glad.  I would've been upset if I'd paid more than a few dollars for this book.  As the others said, it needs MAJOR editing.  There were LOTS of typos and missing words.  Often, the author would refer to a character being involved in a scene with another character.  Two or three sentences later, it would have a completely new character in the place of one of them, and then it would be correct again a few sentences later.  The book was also FULL of name dropping of branded products.  Did the author get comped for all of these? I hope so.  If not, what a waste! That was a HUGE turn off.It's most definitely a Young Adult story.  If the author had gone back and really gotten a little meatier in the writing, corrected the horrible errors, and quit with the brand name "mentions,"  it would've made a superb novel for grown ups who love Fantasy/Sci Fi genre books.Is there a book 2?  Is this a book in a series?  I see no mention of it, yet the ending of this book leads me to believe it is or will be.  I would end up purchasing future books, so it wasn't all bad.