Review: The money pit
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2014
Yeah, the story was easy to get into, and it was written well. Very few grammar issues, and what seemed like a well thought out plot.But can I say that I will be digging deeper into the series? I would say, "not likely".This first freebie did not offer enough in my eyes to motivate me to continue. For one, it was really, really short. I have read shorter, and turned my nose up at them, but for the kind of story this is, it could have been longer. With that being said, I feel that I can safely assume that all the rest of the books will be equally as long, loaded with one cliffhanger after another, until it has nickled and dimed me to death.And that's another thing. The price is way too high for these shorts. I could pick up a 400 page book with a much deeper story line, and an ending all in one for much cheaper. But here you get:Book 2 for .99 cents 46 pagesBook 3 for $2.99 56 pagesBook 4 for $2.99 64 pagesTotaling 6.97 for 166 pages.OR you can snag the bundle for $5.99Here, I feel that in the marketing aspect, like the writer is expecting more of her readers then the readers are expecting of her. I am old school, and I like my writers writing for the fan base, not the money. And because of that fact, I will limit my collection to this free book and call it good.It was an okay book, so it earned those three stars.