Review: Just missed the mark...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2014
~sigh~ I'm stymied at even where to start with the many problems I have with this story.I guess that I'll just say that I've been exposed to many people with mental illness over the years including family members who are bi-polar yet sadly these guys make them look 100% rational. This was just too disjointed to the point that none of these scenes were believable. And apparently this small little Florida town is filled with almost nothing but good looking gay men.It is obvious to me that the author had plotted out the emotions that she wanted these characters to feel.... sadness, fear, distrust etc.etc. and that she wanted passion and a pull to each other to get them past the negative emotions. However she not only failed to build the bridges that would take them from the negative emotions to the positive but also too quickly jumped them right back to the negative. Not to mention all of the hints at other things such as fraud and embezzlement, to name but two that were not taken anywhere.The only reason for all the things left hanging and all the many characters that were introduced that I can think of is that this is intended to be the first of a series. All I can say to that is I would hope that the author would first find a good, honest editor and go back and rework this book to make the characters three dimensional,believable, likable guys.