Review: Good story, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2014
Ms. West tells a good story. I am loathe to write a review like this, but I have to.  Her sentence structure is awful and frustrating to follow.  I often had to read a line and then try to figure it out.  Also, she jumped all over the place in one page....often.  What?  How did the characters get here??  No flow and utterly annoying.  And finally, she gives the MC members nicknames, but alternates between them and their given names so often that it took me half the book to figure out who is who....she uses both names in one conversation....often.  So Caleb is Doc?  Pick one and stay with it....please.