Review: Much Better
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 13, 2013
This book is a lot better than the first book in the series. Chad and Ariel are much more developed as characters. Ariel seems to be a lot more comfortable with her "magical self." Most importantly, the story is more connected and solid. The first book had a lot going on, and it seems like a lot of detail had to be left out in order to fit the whole plot in. This one flows better.My only complaint is that the foreshadowing is too obvious. It isn't hard for the reader to figure out what is going to happen, based on Ariel's thoughts.How she defeats the bad guy is epic.