Review: Thoughts While Reading Omega Dog
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
Are nurses in charge of wards in NYC hospitals called "sister?" I thought that was a British term, which I've read is even going out of use there.The author is from England...when you are writing about events in a country you aren't from, be sure to get the little details right.Another little niggling thing...he searched the Filofax under K and found Beth Colby's name. Why did he look under K, not C? There could be a reason, but none was given.I'm enjoying the story now, but there are a few too many proofreading errors...some minor (ups for cups, forgetting to capitalize Beth) and some major (confusing the hero's name with the assassin's).Oh, dear...he did it again. Now the villain is pursuing himself. I would never let that kind of error get past me as a proofreader!Mildly entertaining story. The one sex scene, while not overly graphic, felt gratuitous. I prefer a little bit left to the imagination. The plot was okay and the resolution was pretty clever. I wasn't surprised by the final surprise.There were just too many proofreading errors to give more than three stars.