Review: yes! yes! yes!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2014
I need part 2 asap!Aside from me being pissed at the release schedule & the author delaying part 2 (for this reason I try to stay away from serial novellas), I loved this section. I'm not sure if it's fair to review just one part, because it is only a section of the book. BUT, I will and it's great. It is a pretty unique story, kind of like you've got mail, but dirty, haha. Andrew is a total jerk, but it cracks me up and I love it, and I think thats a testament to the author, for making such an a-hole likable. The relationship and banter b/t Andrew and Alyssa is hilarious and and they have major chemistry. Super hot.there is a cliffhanger ending, which is annoying, but that's to be expected w/ these serialsside note: I don't really get how Aubrey is 22 and just starting her junior year of college, most people graduate college at 21-22. And it is unlikely that she's been held back or is late in credits b/c her parents are crazy about education and would make sure she was on track.[if i were the author, however, I probably would've made all of part one purely phone/internet relationship and ended it w/ her intern interview w/ him finding out about her. This way would allow for more development of the stories/characters and would allow for more of the creative writing that we get glimpses of plus I just wish there was more of the phone/email banter. It would've still been super enjoyable and sexy, and I think readers would be dying for part 2 even more than they are now. Anyway, just my opinion.]