Review: Good but too short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2012
I have to agree with what most of the comments have said.  This is a short story so the characters and the plot are not developed as well as maybe it could have been.  Also, I found some things questionable for example, when he shifts, she acts like it's no big deal and when he becomes aroused in the bridge scene, he is partially shifted and she wants him to take her when he's part man/part wolf.  That was disgusting.  All in all it was too short.  And it feels rushed.