Review: Pretty good.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 5, 2013
It needs more editing first of all. There were a lot of typos. It has a decent story line, but needs a little refining. The fact that zillael's massive amounts of hair dries in a few minutes is stupid. I mean why? Is that some sort of "super power"? It's an unnecessary part of the story. It's not like she fell in freezing water and would die except that she can dry really fast. It was used in the context that she had just got out of the shower. I will read more books by this author, I want to see I they get any better, because for the most I genuinely enjoyed the story.