Review: Good story in need of some polishing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2011
Hemlock and the Wizard Tower is well written and entertaining.I may have an earlier version, as there are quite a few grammar and punctuation errors which detract from the story, as well an an irritating overuse of the word 'that' (sometimes as many as 2 in a sentence and 3-5 in a paragraph). Should the author do an edit to fix these issues, the tale would flow much better instead of bogging down constantly. There is a bit too much telling rather than showing, but on the whole a good effort. I found myself having trouble liking the characters, but then again I have never been partial to female leads - that's just me.I will keep an eye out for future installments, hoping the author works on his craft.