Review: Interesting Concept but Fell Short on Execution
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2014
Rating:  2.5 StarsThe premise of the story was enticing.  The Plantation is a safe haven created by 3 guys who needed to get lost from the law.  Lydia has a need to get lost from the law.  She approaches one of the Plantation owners and begs for their protection from the law.  In order to enter their world, she basically agreed to be a submissive to the 3 very dominant owners where they can do any and everything to her (and they do it all!!).  Lydia MUST submit to their will, as she agreed, or she will need to leave the safe haven and their protection.The foursome:  Lydia (submissive, childhood acquaintance to Preston, hates Preston), Preston (Dominant, childhood acquaintance and tormentor to Lydia, lives to torture and humiliate Lydia),  Kruin (Dominant, forceful, the heavy spanker) and Gabriel (Dominant, caring, easy going).This had the potential to be a 4 to 5 star read, but it contained some awful descriptive writing.  If you're looking for a sex read with lots of painful spanking included, this is your book.Why Not 5 Stars?The sexual description scenes were HORRIBLE!!!  Using the actual anatomy body parts language does not make for a good erotic book.  I do not understand how you can have such an erotic book concept (and I mean erotic) and then sanitize the sexual descriptions with cleaner / PC words.  Repeat...the descriptions were HORRIBLE!!!  Looks like there will be a book 2 in the series.  Hopefully the feedback will be applied and we will get some better descriptions!