Review: Too short and needs more development for a series debut
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2014
I was a little disappointed with this free intro to the Ruin MC...there was just not enough substance to it and too many similarities to other biker books I have already read. I really wanted to like it more...perhaps if the author had done a bit more research (don't call it a "gang" or have all the "brothers" so dis-jointed...that's not what an MC is about) and developed her characters a bit more, it might have been better. The one night stand insta-sex had no real lead-up and was not sensual but more strange...and I didn't feel the connection between the biker and dog groomer at all. Overall the book felt rushed  and needed an edit or two (incorrect spelling and extra words). Had potential but needed more meaty storyline.*** 3 *** "no sizzle in this bomb" stars