Review: Great Start
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2014
The book was hot hot hot! But I became super annoyed at how poorly the hero was treating the heroine. It went on for a few chapters too long. I found I couldn't quite forgive him at the end.There were a lot of inconsistencies that should have been caught by the editor. One paragraph she's holding coffees for them, the next she's making coffee. Another one he hands her a cup of coffee, but suddenly she's drinking water. The little things pulled me out of the story.Great concept, really funny, very sexy. Just in need of a little more TLC.