Review: Needs better editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2014
This story started out great, then kind of fizzled. Maybe this is the author's first writing attempt because she seems to wander a bit. I didn't like the way it ended; hoping that it straightens out in the 3rd book. Also, there is a character in the book, the BFF's brother who starts out as Matt, then somehow the author starts calling him Mike, getting him confused with another secondary character in the book. I think she could benefit from a better editor, or make up her mind is it Matt or Mike?