Review: I'm going to be 'unfair'--story too short.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2012
This is another short story that doesn't allow for proper development of the characters.  I think that's why so many reviewers felt it was unrealistic.  Action was rushed.  Characterizations were not well developed.  She was a regimented bean counter/scheduler.  He was a goof ball.  Not until the end of the story is it clear that there's more to both these characters than has been hinted at throughout the story. These depths to character are less believable than they might otherwise be.  For all the criticism, this story is an OK read.  As a longer, more developed story, it'd be really good.