Review: Choppy, at best
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2013
So choppy in fact that I couldn't stomach finishing reading the work.  Timeline is fractured and the "hero" is manic-depressive.  It wasn't even okay, but also not the worse thing have read either.  Cannot comment about the grammar because frankly, I couldn't get that far into the story.  The title of the work did its job; it did in fact tempt me and now I am thoroughly disappointed.