Review: Too rushed, so-so story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 1, 2012
This had potential. Not very original, but a lot of stories are recycled, so that aspect didn't bother me. The story was too short, however, and everything felt rushed. The sex was the best thing about it, because everything else felt too hurried along.It didn't really seem believable that Dane was hopelessly in love with Charlotte yet never looked her up in ten years. Nor did it seem plausible that she would raise his son without ever telling him. I don't like it when an entire plot revolves around one absurd, highly contrived event, like the one where her father came to the rendezvous early and sent Cooper packing before she arrived. If he loved her, he would have sought her out before he left to ask if what her father said was true. If she loved him, she would have gone to his brothers to find out where he was so he could explain himself. This nonsense becomes the misunderstanding around which everything else evolves, yet they continue to avoid discussing it for far too long. Annoying!