Review: Could Have Been Better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2013
Know your subject. With the access available via internet, it is stupid to write that Americans are made redundant. They are not - Americans are fired, dismissed or laid off. Brits are made redundant. And the sun does not rise before 7:00 AM in February, in Montana so Jay did not wake at 5AM to sunrise.The story line was good, if a bit choppy, and character development was good.