Review: Fun, light-hearted read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2014
I really enjoyed this story and was thrilled when I found out there was a novelette from Jack's POV. Unfortunately, I felt like an editor would have been really helpful for this author. There were far too many small details that didn't really help the story move along. On the contrary, it seemed to slow the plot development down. There were quite a few grammar and spelling errors also. Regardless of how strong a story is, if it's riddled with errors, for me, the whole book reading experience suffers. I still look forward to reading more books in the series, but I hope the editing gets better as I go along.