Review: Way too short to charge a price for
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 3, 2011
KThis story is the equivalent of two chapters. I have read excerpts that were longer;I have read too many good short stories to be able to excuse the lack of developmentin story line or characters. There are some wonderful short stories for same pricewhich won't leave you frustrated because it ended before you could make a connectionwith any of the characters. The only reason I am giving this two stars instead of one isdue to the potential it exhibited. This could easily have been a delightful read but it appearsas though the author ran out of motivation. I hate giving bad reviews, but can't honestly dodifferently here.