Review: Adequate read
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 3, 2011
Downloaded this short story and read it while I waited for my son to complete his after school course.  It filled the time well enough but I've read much better.  The relationship between the leads was good enough, especially since time was limited within the short story format, but there was no sense of romance.  I found the evil vampire lacking.  I wanted him to be more menancig ... and I was reading this in my car in a dark parking lot as I waited for my son's class to let out.