Review: Fast paced read.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 29, 2013
I enjoyed the book.  It was fast paced and interesting.  The main problem was that I had some trouble focusing on what was happening because I was so annoyed with "Dr. Oliver Matthews".  He was referred to that way 90% of the time.  It's an unnecessary affectation and shouldn't be used except to introduce him to a new character.  Invest in an editor.  You're very good.  Your readers and your work deserve better.