Review: Loved  the concept more then the reality
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 11, 2012
So I really liked the idea of this book. Man manipulated girl in a revenge plot that backfires then finds himself wanting to make up for it later and get another chance. Potentially a very good book. And yet,  this book fell super flat for me. There was the fact that the character development was lacking. Here was the way it rushed though parts that really needed more attention. But mostly I could not get past the constant change in character POV!Now,  I like when a book is written with both the male and female POV but this was something else entirely. The POV not only changed back and forth without any  warning,  rhyme, or reason but would change from one character to the next within the same paragraph! So it went, 2 lines from her POV then one from his, 3 from her,  2 from him....all in the same paragraph. It was unbelievably distracting to me. Ive never seen a book done like this.Also worth noting is that this book is NOT as long as the number of pages implies. Every page has large gaps between the paragraphs and even between lines without any reason. Not only does it make an already disorganized and distracting book even more distracting but it also made it so that some pages had as little as 6-7 sentences  on the whole page!So I gave this book 3 stars ( which I think is pretty generous) because I really did like the concept behind it. I think this really had potential but honestly I had a hard time even finishing it.