Review: Good story but poor editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2014
I think both our detectives are getting to need a shrink. More on this later.The story is well written, but there are typos. Wish I knew if it was Amazon at fault for this in the translation to Kindle talk. Sigh.. The story flows smoothly. It is easy to understand and relate to.The characters are well written and described. You can relate to them.Cindy urges Mattheus to meet his long lost Caribbean daughter whom he has never met.  Once he finally decides to do it, he leaves without telling Cindy when he expects to be back. Cindy takes this to mean Mattheus wants to be with the one night stand mother and his daughter rather than her.  She leaves and goes home. She tells her family that she no longer loves Mattheus. In a short time, Mattheus contacts Cindy asking for her help. It seems the mother of his daughter's husband has been killed. His daughter has been arrested for the murder. Mattheus is also looking guilty. Cindy drops everything and goes back to help prove the daughter innocent because he asked her to do so.Soon she finds she is up against a crime syndicate beyond what she ever expected.This story is exciting as all the others are. For me though, it shows how the relationship of Cindy and Mattheus is unstable. Each thinks only the other is wrong. I see it as they are both wrong. I also think they need therapy if their relationship can ever last.I do recommend this story for ages 16 on up.