Review: not sure what was going on with the story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2012
Sigh...I'm rather disappointed with this story because the description made it sound really good, but the actual story was...messy at best.1) The story jumped around too fast. One moment they're mad, the next they're fine, the next there's some misunderstanding, the next they make up, etc. it just continues like that and I didn't see how anything got resolved.2) There was no real reason why the characters fell in love besides physical attraction. And I don't even understand why David would have been attracted to Marie, since he's suppose to be a big player and she seemed like the shy bookworm. The author didn't describe what would have made her so appealing. It just sounded like David thought it would be fun to seduce the nerd and see how wild she could be. But then somehow falls in love with her, which didn't make sense since she just freaked out at him and called him a liar. But then she falls in love with him too after she was convinced he was a no good liar.3) I couldn't believe that the characters were in their 30s. Their reactions seemed more like people in their 20s. (I can let this go a bit because maybe I just have a certain perception of what people in their 30s should be like).So ya, I finished the story but it dragged on and I couldn't wait to just get to the end to see what happens so I could stop reading.