Review: Did I receive the wrong book on my kindle????
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2013
I'm really unsure how this book received an average rating of 4 stars. To be honest, I only reached about 15% of the way and I couldn't continue any further. I hate writing a bad review because I'm not an author and so I can only imagine the amount of effort that goes into writing a book, but the dialogue in "Teasing Trent" was pretty bad.The idea behind the story was good - hero is attracted to best friend's sister and she attempts to seduce him. The corny dialogue was not noticeable at first, but as soon as the sex scene began, the level of sophistication in the writing went downhill. It was honestly like listening to two teenagers losing their virginity and even in my head the voice of each character became dramatic and animated. When I started rolling my eyes and commenting aloud, I knew it was time to put the book down. Just some snippets:"Trent I've been dreaming about this for so long""Look at me. Look at me as I take you"It gets worse. Five minutes after the hero declares he's not the type to settle down, he sleeps with the heroine. Five minutes after that, she is "his" and he is telling her that he has loved her for so long and he would be damned if he resisted any longer.....etc....etc...too sappy for me, but it may work for some readers.