Review: Had potential - will check out the next in the series
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2014
It is not something I would typically read due to the length, however a lot was achieved and it felt a touch longer than advertised.The Authors writing grabbed me right from the beginning, interesting premise and straight into the action.The story needs polish and it did not get me into the zone, there was something missing.Without stating the semi obvious, a well thought out story and this Author would have a winner as the technical details, touch of humour and observation skills are already present.I really think this Author has potential.