Review: Great concept, Awful Characters
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 6, 2013
I liked the mystery surrounding The Gentleman's Association as well as who was behind the murders, but I had a major problem with this story and her name was Elizabeth Young.  Maybe it's because I enjoy the character Jess Harris from the Faces of Evil series because she was so strong willed and confident, but I found Elizabeth Young's character boring and stupid to say the least.  Between her propensity for men who were disrespectful and viewed her as an object and her constant stuttering and bumbling through everything like an idiot, I found this character to be so weak and feeble-minded that I had no respect for her whatsoever and felt like she should go to jail just for being so stupid.  Agent MacBride was a pig.  He sees a video of her having sex and becomes fixated on her from that point on, it was just disgusting.  I found the characters in this book to be unlikeable and was unable to relate to any of them.  As a writer your supposed to make your readers care about what happens to your characters and Debra Web really dropped the ball on this one as far as I was concerned.  I hope the next stand-alone novel I read by her is better than this one because SEE HER DIE was a total disappointment.