Review: Fun but not the greatest
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2012
This story was fun and interesting but it was lacking in some areas. The writing was strong and the characters were fun to read about. The only thing that I really wanted was the hero to undergo a little more change. He is macho man and that is fine but the heroine needs him to be more sensetive. He does start coming around but I wanted to see more of it. All in all not bad but it still needs a little work.