Review: Only fair
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2012
I loved the basic premise of the story which made it worth finishing despite comical misspellings and use of modern language which is a major turn-off for me.  As another reviewer wrote, we read all about their feelings but the characters did aa poor job of expressing them to each other.  Glad it was a Kindle freebie.  Sorry.  Try again with an editor and proofreader.