Review: A reasonable war story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 25, 2013
Personally I prefer sex in place of violence to spice up a story.I don't know why descriptions of broken planets and tortured people and soldiers are socially tolerated better than some details of eye candy.The alien psyche was detailed and different yet understandable.  The science wasn't expounded upon but there were some numbers used which I appreciate although. apparantly others do not.There were a few stiff sentences and a few incorrect spellings but I would rather see that than a polished publication - the reason being that the independant author is more likely to provide far out ideas while the polished author is going to be the happy ending and all else expected by the audience.