Review: This book deserves 5 stars for the great story and how it is told but gets 4 for editing issues
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2012
This is murder mystery story will grab you from the start. Come in for the mystery and stay for the tumultuous love story of Jay and Robert. God, what a roller coaster ride!!Jay and Robert have been together 15 years but what a relationship. However after all this time they have finally called it quits or have they? They are granted a second chance when Jay loses his memory temporarily and he and Robert can look at their life together from a new perspective.The book is longer than most books but worth every single page. So like I said the book deserves 5 stars but won't get them from me because this book has some serious editing issues. For a section in the end, one of the main characters goes from being called Turner to Tanner. Also, while I understand that the author was introducing Spanglish slang there were parts where Spanish translation were done pretty poorly. For example: "for free" doesn't translate into "para libre." It translates to "de gratis." A couple of times I think she was trying to use the word "Hermano" (brother) and instead she used the word Hermione. That was very disappointing and took away from such a great story in my eyes.