Review: Needs an edit or five!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 10, 2013
The story premise might have been alright if the author had fleshed out the characters, however there didn't seem to be much effort.  The editing was also extremely bad.  The missing words and incorrect word endings like 'ed' or 's' made the writing disjointed and often confusing.  While I am not a perfectionist and can enjoy a story with a few mistakes, there were way too many for my comfort.  These two very important aspects made the book almost unreadable to me.  The only reason I gave the book two stars (**) is for the obvious effort in storyline and the fact it is the first book by this author (to my knowledge.)