Review: Ok for a prequel
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 12, 2013
This story has great promise, and knowing it is a short story I know there isn't a lot of room for detail. I do think that there should have been something there to build on though. The whining friend was a little much, and as one of the other reviewers said it starts out good but the last half of the book just seems to need more - I don't know if it is detail that is lacking but it needed more of something. Maybe the next book in the series will build on and make it better, but I don't think I will bother with it.