Review: Hmmmm...MAJOR SPOILERS!!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2013
I am going to agree with one reviewer who said this had potential. They were together and the book was fun at the beginning but they were not together long and we get told that they talked about all this stuff without them actually talking. Then she leaves and they do not see each other for almost 4 months when he comes because he cannot stop thinking about her. He bullies her into going back to the island where they are married now but she avoids him at every turn. For weeks, they avoid one another then comes a point where he comes home for dinner and we get to see them interact but then he tries to sleep with her and she says no and he tells her she will have to beg before he touches her again. Weeks/months go by and he supposedly acts different by being sweet because he realized he has feelings for her but we get told all this after the fact so we still have no interaction for the readers. After a while, a hurricane hits and he takes care of her because she is scared and then he gets hurt trying to check out the house for damage. She pulls him to safety and goes into distress with the baby. Their baby is born months early and he realizes he loves them both. After 2 months in ICU, the baby gets to go home. We get told how much the hero was there for the heroine but again, no interaction for the reader. They eventually say "I love you" and then it is the end. I do not see how they fell in love but if all these nice things were being done by the hero, then I can see the affection but again, I never got to actually read about him being there and being sweet and caring for the heroine. The heroine told us this so it does not count in my book. It was a good read but wish their was some actual time spent together besides sex scenes with the hero and heroine!!! Then I could believe the love between the two!!! Plus there were some miss-steps. One point in the first sex scene, he says he laid her on a bed then says he looks down at the sofa at her, then bed again. There is a point about her hazel eyes but the they are brown during the first sex scene. There was another miss-print later on but I cannot remember it at the moment. That was only a minor irritation and had no real impact on the book because as soon as it was said, the initial point was made again.