Review: Great Concept Could be the Basis for a Full-Length Novel
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 12 15, 2011
This is a great story to read during your lunch break at work.  To just boil it all down, I really enjoyed this story and I could see it as the outline of a full-length novel.  While the story is technically a science fiction story, you don't have the aliens, weaponry, etc. you have in a lot of science fiction: the story revolves around one man, desperate for a place for his people to live.  The last third of the story has you a little on the edge and, without having a spoiler, the author puts a neat little twist I didn't see coming.  If you're looking for a "perfect" ending as the other reviews of this story were searching for, you will be disappointed.  Life isn't about happy endings, and the author (to me) did a good job.This is a nice compilation to read during your lunch break at work (which is what I did), and the it takes about 10-15 minutes total to read. As I type this review, the Kindle version is being offered for free - grab it now before it has a price on it. I'm looking forward to reading more from James Bailey.