Review: I personally liked it regardless of past reviews
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2013
A lot of people seem to be complaining about how the author crunched the story and left a lot of jagged edges. This is true, but it really shouldn't effect people that way. It is a short story for a reason. Many short stories take place in a days time and really goes nowhere other than the bedroom, at least this couple had some time under their belt.Sub paragraphs would have been useful, but for people like me, who are just as capable of using my own imagination as I am getting into someone else's, I was able to distinguish where they should have been.It is amazing that a space and a "~*~" could really make that much of a difference in a story, that someone would give it a shotty review because they couldn't figure that out.I thought the book was very good myself, and it is a super quick read. But this book is a freebe  with the Kindle App, so I can't see why people are complaining about price.I recommend this book to people with imagination.