Review: Purchased. then returned for refund.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2014
Starstorm was mildly interesting, but I returned it after getting about halfway through, I just could not stand it any longer. Here's why:1. Character are cliches. No real character development..2. Sadly lacking any type of real military orientation or realilsm. As a  lover of space operas, I know I need to suspend reality a bit, but the battle scenes were poorly conceived, relationships between ranks were fantasies and the behavior of major characters was unrealistic,3. Seems to be intended for a pre-teen audience due to a very simple sentence structure and lack of complexity in the plot.4. Riddled with mis-pellings, run-on sentences and almost non-existent punctuation. I began to feel as if the author, and the editor or proofreader, knows English as a first language, Some samples from just three chapters (keyed in exactly as it appeared in the text; I finally got tired of typing):=====They were coming up one of the carriers and Trey wanted to get it before they got passed it.The fighter bagan to veer off coarse do to its lost engine.As it now turned out, he had the story of a life time.It was larger in sized than a Star Sword.His ship was wreathing from the massive explosion.He then started a semi safe descent trajectory,Their weapons were based on advance ion technology,,,,the first thing they have to do is go discus it...They dawned their helmets,,,to the very rear of the barge were there was a large ramp-style door.They are also scapping together every pilot they can find.I am hereby giving you a battle field promotion...=====See if you can spot the errors! It's not hard for anyone with a high-school education.Needless to say, I will NOT be purchasing any other titles from this author, and would recommend staying away from his work,