Review: Paranormal YA Short Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 12, 2011
Her twin's not talking to her. The most popular girl in school has replaced her. Even her sometime boyfriend has his sights set on someone else. In fact, the only person that will give her the time of day is the painfully shy, painfully gorgeous new guy.  But even he's pretty mad that she's hanging around. In other words, the protagonist of UNFINISHED is having a hard time lately. And she's got to figure out how to save her twin from a potentially life-and-death situation.Carol Oates' writing was a little clunky at times, and I wasn't swept away by the emotional impact of sullen-but-beautiful new kid Jonas Darby (though he would make a good character for a longer story!) Still, this paranormal short story is interesting and fast-paced, with a good twist in the middle. Unlike the other reviewer, I thought the ending was satisfying and complete, if a little sudden. Go ahead and download UNFINISHED - you've got nothing to lose!