Review: Worth reading
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2012
I really liked this short story. It was very well written with very good character development for a short. The author was able to involve me in the story virtually immediately, which I think would be very hard to do in a mere 17 pages. The dialogue was natural and smooth. The story was edited well. I found no errors in grammar and no typos.The story was a bit predictable, but it read well and the predictability did not lessen my interest in seeing it through to the conclusion.I have a lot of respect for an author who can bring a story full circle in 17 short pages. Well done, sir!There was some coarse language. There was no sexual content. There was violence.I recommend this story and I would read this author again.