Review: Disappointed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 6, 2014
I agree 100% with Kathy I. I would never try to put down any writer's work after they had the courage to put it out there for others to read and critique. But I was not a fan of this series. From the first chapter I had trouble making myself read on. I even stopped half way through for a couple of weeks. But made myself finish it tonight so that I could keep my promise of writing a truthful review. The main idea was very good. But the story line wasn't there. Also the characters' speech patterns and personalities were not consistent. And the editing was very poor. From the misspelled to grammar. That doesn't mean you shouldn't read it and form your own opinion. This does not mean the author is not a good writer. This is only a review of one of her books. Maybe with better editing this could be reworked into a good read. The foundation is there.