Review: Even for a freebie it's way too expensive!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2013
You know that feeling of being forced to say thank you just to be polite? Or when you were invited to dinner and the host asks if the food was good, and everybody says yes, ( including yourself ) that the food was delicious when actually the food was so bland no one could finish what was dished out on their plate? You were told you'll be served with steak and lobster but got ramen noodles instead, so you continue to sit at the table waiting for the best part of the meal yet to come but you were rushed to leave instead? Well, that's exactly how I was made to feel about this book. I was given a free book in exchange for my time but was expected to give a review with no less than 4 or 5 star rating even if it doesn't deserve it. Why I say this? It's because at the end of the book, ( at acknowledgement ) the author asks to give a 4-5 star so that you can be entered to a drawing for a chance of winning another yet of her free book. Sounds more like a bribe to me, so I say thanks, but no thanks! Those who did give a 4-5 star got 1 positive vote guaranteed, those who didn't ( like me ) gets negative vote the minute it's posted, ( at Amazon USA ) it's a given and it's no brain-er who or where it's coming from. ;) The author's bribe and a pledge into giving another freebie to 4-5 stars reviewer, had one reviewer get so excited and flustered ( what with a chance of getting another freebie ) got so confused she left a review how she loved this book and raved about how she couldn't put it down she stayed up all night, yet gave it a 2 star! Ha ha ha! Even the author was so puzzled by it and left her a comment asking why a 2 star review? LOL!The story lacked depth, too many unnecessary F words, too much sex that got meaningless and so boring, typos galore and oh, get this, Alex Bly's penis size has been emphasized repeatedly. ( supposedly humongous ) So he's hung, okkaay, we got that already so let's move on, next?!The story is all over the place, one moment Charlotte is one tough, cocky, no care attitude if she doesn't lay eyes on Alex again, next minute she can't stop thinking about him and moving in with him next. I can't imagine a hot to trot, super sexy, hot shot lawyer Charlotte, would pull over the side of the road in the middle of the day and masturbate while fantasizing about Alex Bly whom she accidentally run into but hasn't seen for about 6 years. On top of that, Charlotte gets to have sex with him while he's her client, representing him in a law suit, how unethical is that? This is so full of inconsistencies it'll make your head spin, you don't know if your going or coming. ( pun intended ) The end was so rushed, like it just abruptly ended in the middle of nowhere you're left thinking, huh? what? It's not even a cliffhanger, more like it has nowhere to go and just have to end, so the author ended it! Bloody hell! Whatkindofanendingisthat???