Review: 1/2 Stars A little hard to believe
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2012
I normally like this authors books.  I did like this one (kinda), but I had problems with it.  Authors should do research on anything they don't know, and this was not done!First Callie suffers from Superwoman syndrome - you know she looks like Rachel Hunter and cusses like a sailor (except when trying to look more feminine and says like stink) is a computer genius, and a sniper, every single guy in the book envys the hero and wishes they had her.2nd - Technical Issues - GLOCKS DO NOT HAVE SAFETY'S!!!!!!!!!!!! Writers do this all the time, not every flippin gun has a safety to "flick off".  And the book said on more than one occasion they flicked it off, the trigger is the "Safety" if you don't pull it it will not go off.3rd - Who french kisses someone passionately right after they vomit - GROSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't care why - Just EWWWWWW.4th - If your gonna make Callie so kick ass - can she 1. feint less 2. not be dizzy all the time 3. not vomit so much 4. if she is going to do all this, can she not always tell everyone what a bad ass she is.5th - Sniper spotters are normally with the Sniper, they are not a separate sniper themselves in a different location.  If they are sniping they are not spotting b/c oh yeah, they are shooting bad guys too.  PS - the action it takes to vomit would not allow you to easily and calmly snipe right after.I finished it, it did not start super getting on my nerves until the final 16% of the book. Then it was kind of non stop hard to believe, before that it was occasional.  I love Alpha males, and our guy started out with a bang, towards the end I think Callie was the boss.  I did not like Callie by the end of the book, the weakness' the author gave her to make her either more delicate of believable just made her come across wrong.  I think this could have been a great book if there was any believability.Ok - with that out of the way this was an ok book, if you don't know much about guns or military tactics, or the size of large anacondas you will find this an enjoyable fast paced read.  I did actually finish the book, but I would not re read or purchase another of this series.