Review: some issues but story was good.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2013
I like the story and the ideas within.  A few things got me.  *The author needs an American beta reader to pick out where he subsutes English words into an American character.*This didn't bother me to much but might get annoying to someone not used to or know the volcabulary. I can't wait to see where the author goes next with this story.Recommended :)