Review: A short story about nothing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 2, 2011
I read a lot of free shorts and this one was a complete waste. The writing itself was fine, no major errors. It was the story that was lacking. Absolutely no character development or description. I don't expect there to be a huge plot in a short book. The basis of this story (guy hired to drive woman around in limo but can't see into the back of the limo as said client picks up various people from redetermined locations for short visits) did have potential it just went in a completely different way than I had hoped. I finished the story shaking my head wondering what I had just read. I normally would say go ahead and read the story if you want a good quick steamy sex scene, but the sex scene in this was terrible.I'm currently reading the author's other short story The Bonds of Wedlock, I hope I can give it a better review.