Review: Not the best!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 26, 2014
So I purchased this book based on the five star reviews on how awesome it was. This is a good example of the rating system on amazon and how it is just not the best. I am sure I will receive a lot of bad comments for not loving this story but it really wasn't spectacular. The story was about boy meets girl and gets angry leaves in a huff and later girl and boy get together for grand true love. It is a lot like so many other stories that I just do not know why so many 5 star reviews. The biggest problem I had with this story is many of the sentences in the story were badly put together.[ Examples:1) I'm not sure why they want my autograph, but I do it anyway because their faces always light up and it tugs at my heart strings to see people like act like that.2) I mean, you left to get away from this small-town s***, so I understand you ignorance.3) I can't stop totally, because if I do, I'll fall.4) Jackson's voice is echoing in my skull like we're in a cavern, but I can't make out any the words.5) I only intended to stop by and work out, not spend the whole day here. But I that's what happened. 6) "Please," I say. I'm so curious about this, especially given his obvious incredible physique and skills. " Just give me something to here."] These are just I few I found in two chapters that were back to back to each other.  This is just bad English and I ignored the first four or so times I found this but come on. It was continuous and obviously this was self published because otherwise an editor worth anything would have found all these mistakes. It became distracting that I had a hard time enjoying the story.So basically the story is not terrible and if there were not so many obvious mistakes I would have given a higher rating, but the errors are annoying.