Review: a quick read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2013
I found I enjoyed this read. Espwcially the corny line near the end about an angel and heaven that made me laugh. I liked the description of the characters and the explanation of events and though it was predictable it was still an enjoyable read none-the-less. I love how the author kept the accent of the scotish highland scottish and that being of an era that was back long ago wasnt used to his surroundings or how to use objects.However what I didnt see in this short piece is emotion. If one sees another cheating they wouldnt be walking around the beach aimlessly, in my opinion they would be angry beyond compare kicking whatever was in their path screaming words about her cheating fiancee and stuff like that. In this piece it was like she cried and found another guy and got over it. The emotion of love for the scottish highlander was mag aka magnificent. I'd ask the author to maybe put themselves in the characters shoes emotionwise. I love the genie how he seemed to just interfere in the kissing scenes made me laugh. and the highlander acting irritated at it. Good work, Angela. Hope to see more pieces of your works soon