Review: Short (very short) story...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 1, 2012
As stated by other reviewers, this was a very short story. It can be read in 5-10 minutes. I looked at the author's other works, and she has written many short stories and full length novels. However, these appear to be in the Romance genre. Perhaps she was just wetting her feet a bit in the Dystopian genre with this story. The writing style wasn't bad, but the "story" itself read like a Prologue to a novel. The story opening and background information are provided, but the "surprise" ending is one that should have led the reader to Chapter One to begin the real storyline.I picked this up for free from Amazon. I would have been very disappointed if I had paid for this story, not because it was so short (I have read some very good stories that were only a few pages long!), but because it felt unfinished.