Review: Full Moon Mating
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 18, 2009
This story had great potential. The charecters were well writen. Some of the parts leading to the development of the relationship between Joe  aand Nate felt rushed. The reader is also shortchanged by Nates' increased sense of smell. Really? Joe made such a big deal of potential changes in human mates, then a better sense of smell is thrown in as an afterthought. The conclusion to the Teacher and Roger problems was messy. It felt like the author was rushing to meet deadline, not honoring the story. Editing was also sloppy,do not rely so much on spellcheck. Missed words, wrong words and inconsistant sentences abound. Try harder Stormy.