Review: It has its ups, its downs and its in betweens.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2012
From the very get-go, Deeper, Baby! Proves to be an in your face, no-nonsense erotic story. Although the author decides to throw the reader directly into ongoing events, the story begins to pan out and the reader can find their way in short order.Even though the author creates a feeling of a fast flowing story, the fact is that a lot happens around the build up to the more erotic scenes. Troy's patience balances well with Kate's eagerness, and this balance creates a certain amount of suspense for the reader - and when it comes to erotica, suspense can be a very good thing.Overall the story is well portrayed and the writing is pretty good. The author seemed comfortable telling the story and did a good job, well...'laying' out events in a controlled climatic way, all while not allowing the reader to enjoy the story too soon. As for the erotica parts, those sections are painted in a way that incorporates both the erotic aspect and the character depth needed to be more than just pornography. The scenes are described well and the events are explicit without being juvenile.Although I found Kate to be annoying at times, the characters were strong and the story was compelling. A pretty good read for those who want more than a mere quickie but want less of a long tale.A well balanced story.