Review: A great continuation of Denial
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2014
The story is worth 5 stars at points, the romance is probably closer to 4 stars, and the writing is 3.5 stars.I  actually liked the characters more in Desire than when we first met them in Denial. They became more complex and more believable, especially Maya. I really like that the author added the character narrating each chapter to the chapter title page to reduce confusion. I found the story to be even more interesting as we learned more details and find how interconnected all the characters are. I had a hard time putting the book down at all, and now am left with another cliffhanger until the third book is released.The dialogue is a little immature at times, and distracts from the story. However, the characters are admittedly young and naive in some ways, so perhaps it is purposeful. My main complaint is the grammatical or random writing errors. I saw quite a few in the first book of the series, but they were not as disrupting as those in Desire (particularly at the end) and I almost want to give the book 3 stars for that reason alone. I just feel like the editor and/or proofreaders let Miss Chase down by not catching these things, and lessened my enjoyment as a reader.Did I still enjoy the book, yes. Will I be reading the final book in the series, most definitely.