Review: The potential is there....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2014
The book had potential. The numerous grammatical errors took away from the story and added confusion. Also, at times it wasn't clear which character was speaking. I suggest losing the slang except for direct speaking from a character, if necessary. I don't need/want to read slang and improper English while reading a character's thoughts or narration. Anyway, Team Rico! :-)