Review: Good Story Idea but Needs Work!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 12, 2012
The storyline was cute, but it was so short that I never felt very invested in the characters.  It didn't feel believable to me at all that they suddenly were in love.  The author kept saying the characters had been falling in love over the past three years--well show me, don't tell me.  Give some examples of their moments together leading up to this Christmas.I think if this had been expanded into a novel, it would have been more enjoyable.  It seemed like a rush job to me.  There were even a few typos in it!  Overall, a nice story for Christmas, but it could have been better written.