Review: Better Editing/Confusing Cover Art
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 19, 2013
My comments mirror most of what has already been shared e.g. better editing the next go young (you have a a great ability to weave a story, do not allow grammatical errors to take away/distract from that). However, the book was engaging, enjoyable, and an easy read. Now, here is my one minor criticism. I know the cover art is not binding to the character descriptions but the couple on the cover is so far off from what you described in the book that it really messed up my visual image of the characters. If the cover art can not stay true to the form of your story, maybe abandon actual pictures as it was too extreme of a departure from what you described. For example, Story is described as vanilla complexion (fair, I am assuming) and the male lead has a long wavy ponytail when the man on the cover clearly has a fade. Sometimes it really is the details...