Review: Good but could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 4, 2014
That One Time is a standalone Novella that, for its length is good. I will say it got 3 stars instead of more for a few small reasons. My one issue with novellas happens to be that you have to shove so much story into such a small book. And though sometimes you can make it work, sometimes it just makes things feel unnaturally rushed. I really enjoyed the characters of That One Time but felt that their entire relationship was waaaaay too rushed and the romance almost nonexistent in favor of the steamy scenes. I think as a longer novel Marian would have been able to flesh out the characters and their story and made it into something really great that I would have happily rated 5 stars.