Review: Review of Teenage Assassin: Episode 1
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 5, 2014
This review covers Episode One of the book Teen Assassin. To my regret, I paid the amount of  2.99 for Episode One. It is an incomplete presentation that should not be sold as one unit. The reader does not connect with the story in that form and no emotion is build up to set the tone or to build the essential suspense needed.  It felt as if  I was reading a procedure manual with explanations of procedures and plans. As reader, I found it difficult  to bare with the writing which appeared not to be  professionally edited.The script lends itself to an audio-visual audience so that the visuals can tell the story,  while a lover of the words as an art form, is left blank and empty. The reader does not enter into the characters' psyche and there is very little dialogue between "the would be assassin" and the secondary characters.  You only experience  the telling of a self-absorbed protagonist who mainly describes her merits. It feels as if many ineffective and uninportant words are used to setup a 10, 000 word Episode One.I have noted that  Episodes One to Four are also available at 2.99 as a combined edition. Episode Two is also available separately in this series of many episodes.Scarlett Jensen Author of [...]