Review: Another Quick and Fun Read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2012
The author's stories are progressing nicely... I just reviewed his previous two shorts and with each release I see him easing into his writing style and his main characters.This is another "Twilight Zone"-esque piece, and another nice plot and plot twist to keep you guessing until the end. His dialogue has become sharper, which is another good sign. He doesn't overburden you with description to pad the word count, and his flow of the story is much improved.The only real problem is the seeming rush to the end. I thought it suffered because of me not getting to know the characters involved enough to have feelings for them once the climax was upon me. There were also a couple of minor secondary info parts that did nothing to move the story along (I won't spoil it, but they are there) and, because of the rush, there is way too much info dumping to neatly tie it up at the end.I'd love to see this author put out a longer short or even a novella-length story because he has great ideas.Armand