Review: Who proofread this...........a 5 year old?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2013
I thought my grammar was bad.  Maybe I should write a book.  I certainly could do better than this.  A friend who read the book told me how bad it was, and recommended I look it over.  It is even worse than she described it.  Dude, do yourself a favor, and get a proofreader.  Even I could clean this hot mess up, and make it better.  I'm at 9%, and usually I make myself gut out a book and finish it, but not this time.  This is one of 3 books, that are just so bad, that I simply cannot continue.  I have no idea if the storyline is decent, or as you spell it descent, and I will never know, because life is too short to waste my time with this debacle. And for future reference, men wear suits of clothes, not suites of cloths.  Let me shake my head to clear it of what I just read, and move on to something better.  Quite frankly, that will be an extremely low bar to jump.