Review: Falling for a possibility
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2013
This book had definite potential...The story was...not 100 percent cohesive.  I would have liked this to have been a longer book that actually delved more into Sterling.  I liked how Torie character developed, but would have liked to see a bit more for her character too.  I did like how the story was told from various point of views, I love stories that do that, but like another reviewer said...there was too many pov's to be easy.  I am not usually bothered by grammar and spelling...but the errors in this one were just too many...there were too many omitted words (I dislike having to stop and figure out which word is missing) and wrong forms (you're for your for example) of words.  I would love to see this go thru a more thorough editing.  I could not find anything in any of the characters, other than Starr, that I could really sink my teeth into...Starr was the one I really could get into.<<<<SPOILER>>>>>I liked how Torie did leave Sterling....and that is like real life...sometimes you do have to leave a situation like that..it is all you can do...Here is where I would have loved, LOVED to see more of Sterling's story.  There is so much here that didn't get written. I wish I could have read a little of his struggle.I liked how Torie and her mother mended their problems, and how Torie's mother was finally able to accept Torie for who Torie wanted to be.  I didn't like that part, but I think I get why it was done that way.I adored Starr and hope that she gets a book...maybe with Sawyer (who by the way, I also liked..probably more than Sterling...but Sawyer is going to have his hang ups too I imagine). All in all not a terrible read, but not the best either.