Review: Nobody Likes A Whiner
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 24, 2013
The premise for this book is a tried and true one. Girl and boy are best of friends. Girl sleeps with boy. Boy has been in love with girl forever but she's the only person on Earth who doesn't know. This story took FOREVER to reach a happy ending though. There were several pages full of descriptions and backstory that were repeated several times, unneccesarily, I might add which added to the length of the book.The heroine, Bayleigh had a really bad relationship prior to getting involved with Dane ( or was his name Josh because his bff called him that at least once), the hero. She knew he was a great guy but kept pushing him away. She whined and daydreamed constantly about being afraid to fall in love. I don't know how her bffs (their names kept changing too) or her family put up with her insecurities for so long.I could have given the book two stars because the editing was poor. The names of characters changed quite a few times. There was entirely too much detail at times and this added to the overly long book. The story should have been short and sweet. I found myself skipping whole paragraphs just to get to the end.