Review: 3.5 stars
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 9, 2013
3.5 Stars. This was a five star read for most of the book. I loved both main characters, and the world felt real. I loved the relationship between Rachel and her brother. The love and protective-ness they had for each other was refreshing and fun to read. Also her dad was awesome, even if he was only shown in flashbacks. This story was very well thought out, but unfortunately one thing killed this for me. SPOILER: To start the "arrangement" of dating for a week, and only a few days in not only do they say they love each other, but to get married to each other within that week? Nope. It made this story that was skirting the unbelievable take a massive nose dive into silly. It killed both characters for me. And that dinner where her brother freaked out? I know we were probably meant to be on Rachel's side, but HELL NO! She sprung this on them, after dating the guy less than a week? And she was angry that her VERY protective brother was worried and angry? I mean come on. After that it was a struggle to read. If this story line had been played over several months, I would have found this book five stars easy.So to close, if you love the steamy sex scenes, love a well written story and don't mind the instant love that doesn't really make all that much sense, then this is the book for you.