Review: what has jerry been smoking!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 3, 2012
Young love or lust... plays terrible tricks on your mind... or does it?I almost felt like I was spying on the central character... wanted to like him but wasnt upset with the ending!not sure I ever want to see stains on the wall or smell patchouli oil again....ending was a bit too abrupt for me... would have like more explanation as to why?good short story tho!