Review: Read this to your love partner. I dare ya!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 26, 2013
Don't read this on the bus going to work, because everyone will wonder why you're wiggling in your seat. The good looking guy in the business suit sitting across from you will wonder why you keep darting heated glances his way. This is a very short, but erotic read. There's a storyline, and I agree with another poster, should be expanded into a least a 50,000 word novella to give this idea room to flourish.