Review: Good stories - needs editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 13, 2014
I've really enjoyed the stories in these books.  However, the editing leaves a lot to be desired.  I found the following errors in consecutive pages:  driving - should be driven, has - should be had, where - should be were, resting - should be rested, doesn't - should be didn't.  This is just a very few of the editing errors.  There seem to be more errors in Lasting Pride.One of my pet peeves - not just with this author, but with many others is the word "taut" which means stretched tightly, no slack.  It amazes me how many times I've seen it spelled as "taught" or "taunt".