Review: I recieved a copy from the author...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 21, 2014
I received a copy from the author for an honest review. Okay...Let me start by saying that the story has potential there are just a few things that don't jive with the tone that this type of story should set.First, things jumped around way too much. It seemed that the story would be flowing pretty well and then BAM you are jumping to a little while later and all the while you feel lost because you feel like you missed something.Second, the story writing was okay when the different characters were narrating their parts, but the dialogue between all the characters was something that you would hear on a day time soap opera. It was way to proper most of the time. I know that when I am writing and email or texting I tend not to use contractions, but reading an entire book filled with none is just crazy. It kind of distracted a little and made the conversations even harder to follow.Third, there were a few situations that would start out in the book but never got resolved or addressed again. Things that didn't make sense to the entirety of the storyline.With all that being said this book does have potential to be a good read but there are some many different directions that you feel like you are being pulled in when reading. Also there are grammar issues but those are minor compared the all the other things.I like that it was told in dual POV. I liked the Nathan and Eva have somewhat of a good chemistry, but that could be built into more. Their characters seemed to be all over the place with their personalities. I like her...I don't want to get close to her...Holy crap I love her but it takes another woman getting in my pants to realize this. I just felt like too many things were going on to really connect with the story.