Review: A good first effort.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2013
Young Travis Tufo makes a good first effort with this book. He tells an erie and engaging tale.  A few pointers, however. Too many unnecessary curse words. They detract rather than add to the story. Also, I never did feel a connection to the characters.  Keep at it and really make me love or hate your characters! Read your dad's stuff.  I don't just dislike Mrs. Deneaux, I HATE her! I don't just like BY, I LOVE him! Good job altogether, though. Keep it up!