Review: Good story, needs editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2013
Truthfully, this is more like 3.5 stars, but I liked the story enough round up.  I thought it was quite clever the way the author wove a single storyline through three couples. Each "book" followed one couple. But the background story continued through all three couples.  Each story got a little longer and more involved.This story needs a good editing and proof read. There were a number of incorrect words, missing commas and such. There was a distinct overuse of the word instead. Instead I would suggest reworking the sentence. See what I did there. There were sections where the writing was smooth and then sections where it was awkward.I think this author shows promise. She had good story ideas and the characters were reasonably well developed given the shorter length of these stories.  I'm not sure why the cover indicates a story that would have taken place in the 1800's when this was a modern romance. UPDATE: the cover has been changed since I posted this. The new cover is much better.