Review: Good story with a few editing issues
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2013
The Good: The name of this book gave me pause but ended up pleasantly surprised. Blaire Reese is your typical blonde co-ed but beneath the party girl surface lurks an untapped gift. One of her escapades leads to being approached by the CIA to begin training in a secret sex spy organization. This sounds ludicrous but this plot is well thought out and really holds your interest not sacrificing intellect for a boink fest (don't worry there is tons of sex in this book). This book also featured characters exhibiting a sexual identity fluidity that I personally found exciting and fascinating.The Bad: This writer chose to include an alarming amount of text acronyms that make this an extremely hard book to get through. Some are obvious like OMG; but others have more than five letters. I don't care to use the Urban Dictionary every five minutes just to understand what an author meant to express. Why are you using "srsly" instead of "seriously" over and over again? This erotica aimed at adults who might not know all the latest jargon. I realize the author was trying to "speak" in the voice of the character but typing the complete word would not have sacrificed the intent. I think the overuse of text speak prevented the author from catching a lot of editing mistakes like using "sheik" instead of "chic" or "tho" instead of "though" repeatedly. These editing issues prevented me from giving this book a four star review.