Review: Confusing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 8, 2013
I don't understand the 5 star reviews that this book got. It clearly has not seen the eyes of an editor. The author makes the common mistake that many young authors make by writng in the first person. Not many seasoned authors can pull it off and most readers find the first person annoying. To compound the problem, the author put the point of view of another main character in the first person too. You just can't do that. I often found myself wondering who the current "I walked to the door," person was. I found the story action packed but superficial, weak character development and no logical sequence to the story. In effect, a mess. BUT... I don't know what it is and I can't put my finger on it...the book does have something. Some undefinable style that might appeal to young adults. The language is rough and somewhat gratuitous but that might be part of (dare I say??) it's charm. I had the distinct feeling I was reading a graphic novel. And there is nothing wrong with that. It takes a certain kind of talent and mind set to do nicely and the author may have captured a glimmer of it, showcasing his own style. I think my 3 stars might be a tad generous but see for yourself. There's a shoe for every foot and I wish the author well with his next book.This book was given to me for an honest review.