Review: A TOUGH READ
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 19, 2013
**This review will cover all Lyon stories.  I'm a fan of this author both in her published works as well as fanfic.  The problem is, when you cross that line and your asking people to pay to read the stories, everything changes.  While it's annoying and shouldn't ever be a part of a thorough writers story, I expect the grammatical errors, misspellings and mistakes with characters from fanfic, but, it should be non-existent when I'm paying to read it, unfortunately, that's not the case.  Another problem was characters names...on one page a particular character's name is Jared but on the next page, it's Jake - that can confuse the most discerning reader.  In the beginning of their relationship, Katarina marvels at Colton's incredible penthouse apartment, yet, it's not long before they're hosting a BBQ at his spacious residence in the back yard next to the pool house. Maybe he has 2 residences or him and Katarina decided to move to the burbs; either way, that's where you do some background so the reader has a clear picture.  I could go on and on but the bottom line is:  this writer has tremendous potential but the amount of errors will hurt her possibilities for a lucrative future.Let's hope this writer is able to take the more critical reviews and use them to make much needed and necessary improvements to her work.  In the long run, It would definitely be a win/win.