Review: Great idea that fell a little short. Sorry.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2012
Two and-a-half stars.Not a lot to say about this one. There is an excellent story waiting to break-out, but for me, it never materialized. The premise of the book is great for science fiction. You could say the story occurs in the very distant future or possibly a parallel universe. The problems I encountered were the following: no chapters, jumbled time lines, center line formatting and last but not least, the story ends (for the kindle 69%) through. The remaining 31% is spent on what appears to be two more books or maybe one book in an apparent series, with chapters!I don't understand why a submission for the next book is almost as long as the initial work. Let's finish the first story and provide a small tease for the second.I'm sure there are many sci/fi fans that will enjoy this read. Not my cup-of-tea.