Review: The Premise sounded good...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 4, 2012
...then it went downhill.  I have not read any of the author's other books, and I don't think I will.  This one sounded good, but basically it was some bad editing (I'll get to that) and a LOT of repetition.  Just how many times do you have to tell someone that they are being hunted by the bad guy (and they already know they are) before they believe it?  About a thousand times in this book.  This woman was just too thick-headed to get the point, until the another woman told her.  Then it was, "Oh yeah, I get it.  This is a bad situation and we are the good guys."  Really?  She didn't get it the first however many times she was told?  Or was it just when a guy told her? I get that she was a healer, but I didn't need to be beaten over the head with that information.  She was just not likeable. The editing well, I'll give an example.  My favorite was the line where her panties got wet, and two paragraphs later she "wore no panties and was glad."  Oops.  The devil is in the details...and not nearly enough attention was paid to them.