Review: Needs an editor
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2014
This is bad.  I got through 49% of the book and had to quit.  The writing is stilted and the punctuation is awful.  The author would use quotation marks at the beginning of a sentence then forget them at the end.  I kept having to go back and find out if the person was still talking or if it was just thoughts.  The writing feels like a grade school child is speaking.  And not just the MC, but every character in the book.  Nothing flowed very well.  This is not an entertaining book.