Review: Wow!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2014
Words fail me! I almost had a heart attack reading this story! I think this is about the most erotic story I have ever read.  I am up for almost anything as long as no one is being raped or tortured and clearly, that was not the case here.  It quickly becomes evident that 18 year old Haley is very much in favor of what's happening, and "Daddy" William is not just slaking his lust on the object of his affections but has much deeper feelings. This is a really well written, very erotic short story and I communicated to the author that I hoped she would consider a follow-up story.  She advised me she has plans to do just that. Yea!