Review: a waste
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 11, 2014
I believe every story has great potential. Even this one but it's going to need a LOT of work. The writing was choppy, stilted, and basically made no sense whatsoever.To make matters even worse, this is not a stand alone book. It's only part of a book.I read the entire thing hoping it would improve but it never did. Then, thankfully, it ended.The preview chapter of this author's next book was somewhat better but I didn't finish it. I wouldn't be reading it anyway so why bother?I can only recommend this to someone who is having trouble sleeping.CST