Review: Keep falling for the okey doke
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2014
It's crazy reading this series. It's like watching a bad train wreck. You want to look away, but you just have to see how big of a mess the accident will make. This series could be great if it wasn't so rushed. These multiple story lines are confusing. Italy is a dummy and the story just makes no sense. She claims to love Deuce yet she dates his peoples, and if that isn't bad she has a baby by him. Still, Deuce wants the slut. Italy is still keeping her first daughter a secret and it just doesn't make sense. She keeps having these kids and is perfectly okay with living without them. Money kidnaps her and she becomes cool with that too. She never knew the man, but suddenly she has a bond with him. Never mind the fact that he wants to kill her man. Never mind the fact that his goons beat her to get the baby from her. Why is Money still breathing after what he did to Lyssa? Then this Hassan character, I just never connected with him. He fail for Italy out of nowhere. She was pregnant and everything. They had no history and yet he just had to have her despite all the drama it would cause. Yeah right. Little twists and turns were just thrown in and seemed too far fetched to make real sense. Yes, the villains will plot, but in real life it's usually for weeks. months at the most. Not two years. The notion is just silly. Honestly the entire book was silly, and I'm done reading this series.