Review: Would not pay for this story, and here's why:
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2014
Whether this story works for you depends on what you are looking for.  Maybe it will satisfy some as simple erotica. But I need characters I can root for, an intriguing plot, explicit romantic sex, and good writing.Alder's writing is clean. But the characters are all rather one-dimensional except maybe Vetis, the "un-hero" as one reviewer so aptly put it. Would an evil demon quickly soften and fall in love with his quarry in a relationship based solely on sex? In the context of his character as written, I don't believe so. The incongruities made it impossible to suspend belief, and I didn't find the story romantic, titillating or engrossing.