Review: great new author
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
Loved it! I have to say this was an amazing read. The dialect even made me read Irish, and the characters were great. The story unfolded really well and the chemistry between Dominic and Bee was sizzling. Would definitely read more of this series.My review:This is a genre I really love. I love angsty romances and this one was full of angst. Author nailed it. I was able to become absorbed into this book and lose myself. Not to say this book didn't have issues but for the most part I was able to ignore them and enjoy myself. I didn't want to put it down which said a lot for me.How well was the book written... Well I definitely felt the Irish from the girl. The guy came across as that...just a guy. His dialogue came across as funny especially when he said Phat and not fat. He meant it as the ultimate compliment but didn't understand it wasn't coming across as a compliment.Character Development. Well as far as building goes I didn't understand why Bee was built up the way she was. She was very insecure and the way she viewed her body was disturbing. The guys in the book were very alpha but liked a strong ass kicking female which pulled me from the insecure way they acted.Story line flow... Story line puzzled me for a bit. At first I was thinking the book would take a supernatural turn since Dominic had a thing for marking Bee with a bite on the neck. The whole mafia scheme though was a bit flat. The real story was the relationship between Dominic and Bee, so the end of the story didn't flow well for me. The part about Trent being alive, and Marco was just a bit off. Then the brothers taking care of them in the end just didn't fit well, they didn't seem like murderers.Overall entertainment value..... I thoroughly enjoyed the story so it earned all five stars. Well worth the three dollars I paid for it. I will definitely read more by this author.