Review: Please wrap it up...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2013
So, her sister hoped to marry this guy but he breaks up with her after meeting Marilyn. After this, there's no mention of the sister or her feelings about the situation because it's a short story? Hello. Resolution is required here for readers, even if the author lets the jilted sister be okay with it and realize the guy wasn't meant to be hers. Know what I mean? Other than that, it could be super cute as a short holiday story.