Review: Mixed emotions
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 19, 2013
Loved the story line....but there were holes in the plot that left me confused.  Like why did she want to go there to get away, nothing ever spoke to why a girl who was totally city would decide to run to the "wild west"  This could have also done with some editing by someone who wasn't in love with the comma or at least knew where to use it.  There were so many over used and misplaced commas in this book, I'm sure the author's keyboard has a key with nothing left on it!  When I read I sort of do it aloud in my head, which means I take a breath where it's indicated by the punctuation, and I nearly hyperventilated through out this offering.On the bright side, I loved the characters and the way they progressed during the story development.  They were a perfect compliment to one another.All-in-all it is a good, light read without getting maudlin or going off on sexual tangents that some authors seem to be overusing in the self-published world these days.  Some indie authors should be writing for Penthouse!