Review: The first one star review I have ever written
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 17, 2014
I normally don't believe in leaving negative reviews.  I come from a place where I want to build up the things I love, rather than put down those things I do not.  After much thought, I've decided that this review needed to be written.  It is very clear to me that the author is in need of some feedback that will help her future writing (since I see she has several books already lined up). This book is underdeveloped.  It is riddled with typos and errors.  She used the term (in some form or other) "boots crunching" 13 times in the story and "narrowed eyes" 27 times.  I picture everyone walking around with loud boots and squinted eyes.  She used many Aussie slang terms and the story is set in the United States.  Just having an American beta reader would solve that problem.  Bottom line, I don't think she cared enough about this story to take the time to develop or edit it.  Now for the biggest problem I had, and this is a doozy.  This book is way to similar to the Undeniable Series.  If there were one or two similarities, I could believe the coincidence.  There are at least 8 major similarities (I actually counted more) but this will give you the gist.The Following are true about both Angels in Leather and the Undeniable series by Madeline Sheehan1) Female lead is the daughter of a MC president2) Female lead falls for much older man who happens to be the president of his own MC and has beef with her father (that's actually 3 clues in one)3) Female lead adored Male lead as a child4) There is a character whose face is badly scarred.  Despite the scarring, you can tell he was beautiful.5) Male lead has a club whore on the side named Miranda6) Miranda has a heart to heart with the Female lead (in the kitchen) about the male lead.7) Male lead asks (on more than one occasion) "You want it hard, or you want it slow?"8) Character has a sexual deviation (due to past abuse) where he can only have sex with women who are or act unwilling.As I said, one or two similarities I can forgive, but this is way more than things in the same genre having similarities.  My advice….SKIP THIS BOOK and buy the much better written ORIGINAL story.  To Bella Jewel, instead of pumping a book a month out, why not take your time, think of your own characters and situations, get a good editing team, and put out a quality product.