Review: Very immature publishing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2011
I think the writer will improve in time, but she rushed to publish.It is apparent, due to the massive typos and long-winded paragraphs.There is action, full force, nearly each sentence.The story is all over the place and fails to make any type of plotline stick out in the reader's mind.In short, this book has potential, but it simply wasn't ready for publication.Yes, there is a girl in a love triangle, but that is so over-done.The attempt at creating a fantasy world was the best thing this author had going for the story.There were all types of creatures, interacting and causing drama, but the main Heroine Rae~just couldn't fill the necessary duties as Protagonist for me.Again, I do believe this writer will improve in time.  She should keep right on writing!