Review: Decently edited, good tale
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2013
Smooth writing with no editing issues. A well-told story with good personal stakes for the characters, though they perhaps beat their challenges a little too easily. The characters are likable and relatable. The setting and the magic system are somewhat generic, and the combination of iron being rare and cannon existing is a little hard to reconcile. Overall, though, I very much enjoyed it and wished it was longer.