Review: Could be better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 13, 2013
This book seems disjointed to me. Short little event here, another there, nothing ever seems complete. The characters could be fleshed out a bit more. The place where Cameron and Jake go to her brother's ranch could have been more interesting. There was nothing to it really. Just another little event that could have been made more readable. The shoot out was kind of glossed over also. People got shot and the next time it is mentioned it was two weeks later. The bad guys in this little event, where did they come from, why the grudge against the town? Not much is explained, it just happens.Charlotte could be an interesting character but she is just there too. Where did she come from, what does she look like? What does Cameron's brother feel and why? He just pops in and out at these little events with very little description as to what makes him tick. At least so far into the book.The whole book so far lacks depth with a cast of characters seeming not to matter much except for the two main principles. The story line is interesting but so little back round to the characters makes them feel flat and I found myself not caring one way or the other. As with other stories like this the ending seems predictable, haven't gotten there yet.