Review: Too removed and lacking detail
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 21, 2013
This story is written in the far removed third person of a fairy tale. The writer meticulously begins to build the world and the tone. However, the plot (while good in itself) is really a outline. All the details of developed characters, dialogue,  and love are mere sketches.  We simply have the big moments but we really don't connect or care because we don't get to the layered storytelling necessary.This is a interesting world and the writing is clear but not compelling in terms of romance or fantasy. I think the writer does have it in her, however.I was given this book for my honest review. So, there you have it.