Review: Ummm....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 8, 2014
This novel started off really good, however I think the author became over zealous.  The characters were well developed which gives the reader the impression that these could be real people.  The hero was excellent.  The author did a wonderful job of showing his progression from the realms of immaturity to responsible adult.  The heroine, on the other hand was extremely disappointing.  The author did a haphazard job on her progression. Instead, the heroine actually seemed to regress into immaturity.  She started out as a level headed, sound decision making, intelligent young woman.  By the end of the book, she comes across as an immature, sexually repressed, low self esteemed dingbat who constantly gets drunk and acts like a fool.  She constantly questions the man's love for her, although he has proved it over and over and over and over, again.  In addition, she constantly play these idiotic mind games with him to keep him chasing after her.  By the end of the book, I was hoping the hero would've found true love elsewhere.The author did an excellent job in trying to be as detailed as possible without going too far off on a tangent.  However, I do believe a lot of the scenes were too unrealistic.  For example, a woman of her age sleeps with her boyfriends, but never has sex with them, nor the urge to.  Most people experience urges during puberty, lol, not that they become sexually active then, but they become aware of their body and desires.  In addition, the continual "almost" sex scenes were unrealistic.  Not sure of any guy that's pretty much "in there" and suddenly stops to go eat dinner.....really!  Entirely too farfetched.The author did a terrible job of ending the book.  The couple gets married and as opposed to having a steamy, loving sex scene between husband and wife, she literally glossed over it as if all this time of them waiting was all for naught.  There were no mention of him loving her, enjoying seeing her climax, etc.  It was just completely BLAH.  And no offence, but if anyone's sex life is as described in this book and you're married, I feel sorry for you, lol.The final point, I believe the author was trying to attempt a cliffhanger at the end and failed miserably because it made absolutely no sense at all.  Only an immature idiot drops out of med school because she's pregnant and a total dumb arse quicks a job without having another job knowing he has a wife to support and they are already drowning in debt.All in all I am glad this book was free.  I think the author needs to realize when she has a good story and end it appropriately without dragging it out with unnecessary drama and diatribe between the characters.