Review: A GREAT STORY BUT MANY GRAMMAR AND LEFT OUT/MISSPELLED WORDS.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2014
This was a great story but there were many errors, left out words and words that made no sense as you read and this was a definite turn off and changed this rating from a 5 to 4 star review.I loved the story idea and I loved the characters in the story.  I did however have some reservations for the actual plot.  I could not decide if this was a modern day story or one from the 1800's.  I had a problem with a modern day girl going off to the wilderness to live with two alphas, which is also a plot I have never seen before.  Sometimes two Beta's or two regular members of the pack but two alphas sharing one pack and one mate seemed unlikely. The two alpha's were so radically different in their contributions to the pack as a whole was the one thing that made me think this might be a viable arrangement.I think it is worth reading, the time and the price and I think lovers of the gene will really like this one, but the author needs to have a better editor review her work before offering it for sale.  Read and Enjoy.