Review: Disjointed Needing Extensive Editing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2014
This story is in Desperate Need Of An Editor for story construction, transitions, descriptions, spelling, grammar, punctuation, and errors galore. As to the plot, well, good try but it was disjointed, lacking a depth of research of the history and setting. It would help if the author realized that the distances she wanted the characters to cover was next to impossible as set up in that time period. She did do some research on sailing, but it stopped there. Descriptions were insufficient to convey the plot along. Sometimes she simply glossed over an important transition to get to the point where she had more interest, leaving the reader wondering why bother to set up the previous scene.It was a good premise lacking in execution.