Review: Underdeveloped and awkward
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2014
I like the story concept of mail order brides and this story has an interesting plot. The exception was the writing was a bit underdeveloped and awkward. Between 'scenes' there is simply a line telling the reader where the next part is taking places instead of being lead into it with descriptive writing. With some effort the story could have been much more. I felt as if I was reading an outline or the authors notes instead of the finished product.Characters have nothing special to recommend them, average and underdeveloped. I'm an avid reader and I am disappointed in this book. Editing was also poor.