Review: The End
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 20, 2012
I really didn't like this book.I NEVER harp on typos.  This was just bad, bad, bad.  It was painful.  Indie writerand it happens BUT....  if you had read this manuscript ONCE after writing.... youHAD to have seen the glaring errors.  Almost every page.It's LAS Vegas not LOS Vegas.  I saw this four times - one was a chapter header.The switching back and forth between people and places was driving me crazy.  I justcouldn't keep track since most of them were never described.  EXCEPT - Rachel.  Wewere told probably 10 times that she was fat and 30 lbs overweight.Speaking of Rachel.... or is it Sarah??  You mixed up the name.  Is it Barry Hendersonor Henson?Why does everyone eat after traumatic events??  I'm serious.  The world is dead.  Woo hoo!Let's eat.The reference to West Virginia being "backward" was just terrible and uncalled for.I can't recommend this book.