Review: It's Pretty Much A Love Scene
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2014
I really enjoyed this short story.  It's really well written.  But be aware that pretty much the entire story encompasses one love scene.  Although the website lists the page count at 23 pages, you should know that the actual story ends at around 60%; the rest of the book consists of previews of other works by the author.  The story begins with Maurina lying naked in a hotel room, awaiting the arrival of her boyfriend, Owin, on their one year anniversary.  Maurina and Owin are in a BDSM relationship, where he is the Dom and she the Sub.  While awaiting Owin's arrival, Maurina thinks back to how she and he first met, and the reader is given a cursory view of structure of their relationship.  The entire rest of the story describes the ménage sexual encounter between Owin, Maurina, and the anniversary gift he got for her.  The love scene is hot; the interaction between Owin and Maurina sweet, giving the reader clear indication that their relationship is about more than just dominance and submission.  I'd say this book is somewhere between a 3 and a 3 1/2 star read...what's there is good, but a little more in depth background of the couple would have made it so much better.  Bottom line, I enjoyed it and would recommend it as a worthwhile read, so long as you're not looking for a fully developed story.