Review: Annoyed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 10, 2014
I really like the basic story but hate the distracted writing like where is waldo.  still worth reading but author keeps putting in pop culture references.  edit..  I also don't like the lack of internal consistency such as the treatment of AI's or the crazy use of secrecy when the only person left to determine the classification would be the guy at the top.  The individuals involved in the empire kill, maim, torture their enemies and are given second chances in some cases?  A lot of the authors choices just don't make sense.  Good luck finding good literature.  If I didn't read so much,I think that I would start giving this authors works a pass. One other point.  You can say that someone is smart or that an action is good but if it isn't then it just detracts from the story.  Repeatedly Irons does something that doesn't make a whole lot of sense and then the author says it is great but that simply shows poor conflict management by the author in the story.