Review: I'm Giving it 2 Because At Least....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 26, 2014
I wasn't overwhelmed with every dysfunction that is stereotypical of biker romance within this one book.  So yay! ( Expectations are way too low...) I liked the idea of this, and like another reviewer said the first couple of chapters were good and drew me in.  Thank goodness it was free!  It reminded me way too much of Kristen Ashley, and I was burned out on her "all alike" heroes books ago.  Dialogue the same, for some reason anyone remotely affiliated with a MC can only communicate in fragments.  Not one...even the doc can form/think full sentences.  This had potential (or as much as MC's can have at this time), however fell short.  After awhile I just didn't give a d***.  I realized that this book became a low star rating for me when the H or h would do something and I would start to have an emotional response....like "stupid girl/boy, no..." then I deflated mid thought and was like whatever.I did not like how the author nicely tied up the separation, I thought really?  After all that, all he had to do was talk about his past (no apology IIRC) and she was like, Yay! Dream family back on!  What?!?!? But what about... Then I stopped and said whatever, just end already.  And boy, could someone have used an editor...but whatever.I was spoiled by good Kristen Ashley books in the beginning, then became disappointed when I realized the lack of character dimensions/plots used in MC.  I have tried other authors, but was just as disappointed.  I think I need to find another genre.