Review: Please hire a proofreader!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 4, 2013
Good storyline, great concepts. Let me state up front that I can't wait for the next book, in spite of what I'm about to say.. Where the hell did you learn grammar and capitalization rules??? Any eight grader could make this book better just by proofreading it! I'm honestly stunned by some of the weird capitalizations in this book! Please find a proofreader. I would even volunteer to help you out with the proofreading.