Review: An okay short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 19, 2012
This is another short story for the Kindle that I picked up since it was free. This one turned out to be alright, nothing special. There are a few moments where grammar and tense are a little off, which kind of disturbs the flow of the story. Also the conversation had that scripted feel to it since it didn't really flow in a natural sense.The story is interesting even if it really rushed and hurried through. It only took me around 10 minutes to get through this one. If the second one is free I may download it but I won't be buying it.