Review: Poorly written
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 20, 2013
The only truly interesting part of this book was the fascinating mystery in the background. That was well done. That aside there isn't much more I can say. The characters were cute but shallow. Words were missing. Words were missspelled. The language was so simple that I wondered if I'd stumbled onto a children's book (but not with the sex scene). The extremely simple sentences didn't hold my attention and halfway through the  book, I found myself skipping whole pages at a time. I think the author could use more vivd, descriptive words, longer sentences, and contract I am to I'm and you are to you're in the characters' conversation. The complete lack of contractions in speech sounded too formal and fake. I hope this was one of my 99 cent or free books!