Review: Interesting storyline, just needs editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 8, 2013
The storyline was enjoyable with a good bit of interesting characters.  I would have liked to have seen a little more conflict though for added realism.  My main suggestion would be that it really needs editing.  It seems that the author misused their and they're each time, used contractions for possessive nouns and vice versa, and had some strange misspelled words such as grouse instead of gross. Otherwise it made for a quite enjoyable read and I'd probably buy another in the series