Review: Wasn't that chilling or erotic
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 19, 2013
From the other reviews this sounded pretty good for a short scary story but, for me, it missed the mark.While most of it was the ramblings of the poor victim trying to figure out what was happening - it came off stilted.  There just wasn't enough development for me to really care.  For me, in order for a story to be scary or erotic - it must pull me in and be believable.  Also, the sex scenes at the end just weren't that erotic or scary either.I could not help but compare this to Nikita King's - Horror Erotica The Merman, now that is one story that will scare you off ever wanting to be on the ocean!