Review: Good potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2014
Abel comes across as too angsty to me sometimes, which is hard to say given what he's gone through, but he bounces back and forth between crying and sexing up everything with a penis. Possibly a valid response from someone who has been sexually abused for an extended period of time, but it wasn't really portrayed in a believable way. There were also issues with grammar, spelling and formatting that pulled me out of the story several times. With a little bit of editing and maybe a revamping of some of the Main Character's characterizations, it could be a pretty good book.