Review: Falls a Little Short of its promise
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 18, 2014
I did not feel connected with the heroine, I'm not saying that she should have been stronger, based upon her upbringing and what she went through when she arrived on the hero's planet.  I felt very distant from her.  I sympathized with her, but I could not fall in love with her or the other characters.  Everything seem superficial, as if the author did not bring out the the innermost parts of each person clearly.It is obviously set up for further "Warlord" books as a series, hopefully, the characters will be better developed.