Review: Pass
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 22, 2012
This book had many issues....1. Formatting is all out of whack.2. Editing is poor.3. The conversations are lackluster at best and half of the time you have no idea who is saying what, and when you do, it doesn't match up to the SHOWN personality of the character speaking.4. It was just overall boring and it was a struggle to finish.5. The author missed the mark and then some.Fantasy and reality were so lost in this book that it made it hard to believe or get pulled into the story.The sign of a good author is the ability to make the completely unbelievable believable and, not saying this is a poor author, this author missed the mark and then some.There was no intimacy between the characters, they were extremely unbelievable in general, it was extremely rushed which added to the unrealistic nature of the plot.Would I read more from this author?No.Would I recommend this story to others?No.