Review: Good Concept - Poor Mechanics
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 2, 2014
The story development is quite believable but the poor grammatical skills of the author are quite distracting.  Nearly every other page contains one or more grammar errors that often require multiple readings to puzzle out what he really meant to say.  Mr. Row could use the assistance of a good proofreader who is also familiar with proper English usage.  I was interested in this book because, as a naval officer for 23 years, I am very interested in WWII naval history and, as in this case, what might have been if different decisions had been made.  However, I can also say that if any of my junior officers had written as poorly as Mr. Row, I would have required remedial course work for them.