Review: A great read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 11, 2014
I really liked this story. I found it compelling and entertaining. A nice mix of intrigue, drama and sensuality. I like Malcolm as a leading man and love interest. He is a sympathetic and yet has just the right amount of swagger you want him to win the girl in spite of the complex situation. He never came off as a home wrecker. Danielle also had me in her corner despite my earlier doubts.Four stars instead of five because of Jon and Jasmine. I hope for a sequel and I hope in said sequel Jon is put in his place. He is not a good father, he is a decent father. Nor do I care that he is putting a road block between Malcolm and Nicky. Malcolm will be his step-parent and a good one at that. He has no right to set a limitation of that nature. How will Nicky have a relationship with a sibling of Malcolm and Danielle's if he can't be around Malcolm. Hope Danny really deals with that and doesn't cow tow to Jon's jealousy. He was a shitty spouse.I also hope we've seen the last of Jasmine's meddlesome whining and hysterics. That is no best friend.There were some issues with editing--typos and such, but nothing that detracted from the overall enjoyment of the story.