Review: Had trouble with plot - time for some editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2013
I tried several times to finish this work - didn't work.  I would suggest that the author and the editor get together and do some major rewrite!  There are too many confusing points throughout the work [at least to "almost" mid-point of the work]; I gave up after that.  It was a painful read!SUGGESTION - author and editor schedule a meeting - edit this work, then rerelease.  The concept for the work is a good one; the writing is poor.