Review: Shoulda been longer.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2012
Most of the time, I'm commenting about how some novels should be shorter, but this one seems like it would benefit from a full-length novel. So much happens in such a short time, without proper development for me to care much. I liked this better than the author's other short story "Redtooth," however. Unfortunately, this story also suffers from bad Kindle formatting (some paragraphs are indented incorrectly). Since this is free, it's not a big deal.