Review: Erotic Fiction
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2014
“Seeking the Succubus” is a work of erotic fiction. It is told in the first person by a woman (Gwen) who believes she is a vampire.  She works as a ‘therapist’, meaning her role is to sexually satisfy the men of the clan in the Scottish highlands.As the story evolves, a man called Lucus attempts to rescue Gwen but this fails. They are imprisoned together and she learns the truth about her past and who she is.The author, Emma Jaye is a capable story-teller and although “Seeking the Succubus” has a simple plot, the story rattles along at a good pace. The dialogue could use some work. The characters are developed adequately.I had several issues with this novel.  The main one was that, although we are being told the story by Gwen, the point-of-view shifts constantly. Suddenly the story is being told by an omniscient narrator. Then it switches back to Gwen in the next paragraph or two. This was very confusing.The book needed more proof-reading before being published.This is not my normal reading genre, but I’m sure Emma has a strong following of people who enjoy her work.