Review: can't beat the price
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2011
Although a little MORE conversation would have helped a lot, I thought the short story was well written.  Wish there had been more interaction, verbal and physical, between them. I was confused as to his actions at the party afterwards and I think less attention should have been paid to their friends and better spent on the main couple.  She came across as a sweet, hard worker and he was portrayed as a strong,good guy who was really nervous and sensitive around the female.  He also had a premature side and the author should have written an extra page or two allowing him to redeem himself. Just my opinion.