Review: Solving the Crime
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2013
Carmen DeSousa is a excellent writer. I liked this story very much. I like the way dreams interacted with the story. However, after reading the excellent "The Depot," I felt this one lacked finesse in wrapping up the story. In fact, I'm still not sure why the first murder occurred. The reveal needed a more straightforward "here's what happened" moment. Since the author said this story was expanded from the original very short story, I'm sure that's why this one was not as cohesive. Still, I like the author's stories and look forward to more. I'm expecting great things.