Review: Rambling with typos
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2012
If you're more into reading a person's stream-of-consciousness thought processes than you are in a mystery, you might like this book.  I found it kind of ponderous and rambling with lots and lots of text that's not really relevant to the mystery.  The typos, grammar problems, punctuation errors, and wrong word usage drove me nuts.  It would benefit from a good proofreader.  Oh, and people are caught PEEKing over a fence, not PEAKing.  That one cropped up more than once.Since I know nothing about inserting images into text for the Kindle, I don't know if I could do better, but it appears that the Chapter headings with their respective quotations in some places show up after the first paragraph of the chapter.  That was a little disconcerting when I thought I was starting a new chapter, but then had to back up to read the first paragraph to establish context.It's a fun, kind of frolicking, chatty kind of book and a quick, lighthearted way to pass an afternoon.