Review: While I like biker books
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2013
I really didn't like this one. It really needed a heavy hand on the editing. The points of view switched so often that it got mind boggling. At times you weren't sure who was actually saying something until the end of the paragraph. The spelling ... The misuse of one word for the other dotted the whole book. Run on sentences, commas where they shouldn't be and some just missing. The editor should be shot >< The story was basic, but has promise. To me, the hand H came across pretty strong, but the author could have bred more life into them without stinting on words as she did. She hit the right formula with the possessive older hero and younger more innocent h who had the traditional tragic past she had to get over, but It could have been better if the editor had hit it first and the author had gotten advice on the characterization before publishing.Also, be warned, the book just ends. No HEA, nothing. No talk of the next book. It just ends.