Review: Not Good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2014
Lots of mis-used words and typos, and very little action. Tediously detailed descriptions of things and surroundings without moving the action along. It came across as a boring diary rather than an exciting clash of cultures.  When you start skipping whole chapters to find something interesting, the story is in trouble. I gave it two stars instead the 1/2 star it deserves, because I do think Emma Daniels can improve. Hopefully, she'll find a good editor who has no problems with normal grammar and will use a big red pen to cross out whole pages of needless descriptions and encourage dialogue and action sequences.