Review: Not worth the time or money-Needs finishing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2010
Rune witch, Noelle, and Chaos Pagan, Wynn, are definately hot for each other. The attraction and the sex are still ablaze after five years keeping the need for condoms all over the house high. Knowing the power of their sexual heat, Wynn brings home a book on sex magick that will allow the two of them to harness their sexual energy and use it to cast spells.Sounds great doesn't it?Sadly, the story isn't much longer than what I just wrote. It was a ten minute read. Definately a short story. Don't expect a novella. There just isn't enough there to justify my time or the two bucks. Heck, for five bucks I can have a three hundred page novel.So, maybe you are just in the mood for a good, sexy read. Not so much. Yep. They have sex. Most of the pages are rife with sex, but it is vanilla and frankly saying that it is 'hot sex' doesn't make it hot sex. Deets help. Maybe a little stamina? Maybe a little experimentation out of the box?? Heck we are talking pagans here right? Pagans that have been together for 5 years.More than anything I felt like it was an education on magic and casting. It seemed like there were more details about the casting of the spell than the act.I hate to give anything less than 3 stars.  This is a great idea. It just needs to be developed. I don't even think it is worth a free read on a blog. It just doesn't seem finished.