Review: I think that this has potential, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2012
I read this, well, novella I guess would be the closest description.  Although it was extremely short, I think that it has potential to be fleshed out into a full length novel.  The concept is interesting but it is lacking in some detail, for instance what is the back story on the character and why do things progress so quickly.  If this could be filled in and explained a bit better in more detail, then I think that it has potential to be a really good novel.  But as it stands, it seems sort of like an outline or short story more than anything else at this point!