Review: Very Enjoyable
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2012
I really enjoyed this story. The central character was as interesting as the rest of the plot, and the choice of narrative perspective and tone was spot-on. I do hope a revision is coming along, as in copyedit and what-not, this story does deserve a good final tweaking. But even without it, still, the story shines though and is very entertaining.