Review: High hopes but left wanting
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 28, 2013
Being caught in a private act while alone in your bedroom is pretty embarrassing... much like this story. There was absolutely no character development, back story, or need for the reader to engage. The female protagonist had several "inner battles" that were nothing more than the author spelling out her feelings to the reader in layman's terms, and her "wounded" hero had no depth and thus no attraction.This was a short story that needs to be doubled in length in order to expand enough for readers to invest any care in the characters.