Review: Short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2014
Jake Mann is a pure vampire that has lived since the beginning of time. He has been protecting Lee anne since her father went crazy and killed her mother and grandmother when she was a child. Now a grown woman she was saved by Jake when in a car accident. But, Jake has fallen in love with her when he thinks she is someone else's mate when in truth Lee anne is Jake's life mate. Together they fight another vampire enemy who kidnaps Lee Anne and inject tainted vampire blood to kill her and in turn killing Jake, since he would not be able to live without her.I gave it a three star because it was a decent read but captivating or difficult to put down. Also, the grammar and 're-constructing of sentences detracted from immersing myself into the story. If the editor fixes that I can definitely increase on the star. Sex was presented towards the end but was erratic. One minute Lee Anne is waking up from a coma like sleep and Jake is trying to talk to her to the next minute his privates are knocking at her door with no interlude on how he got there. I like my sex scenes hot and descriptive like any other person but there needs to be a story line on how they got to where they were not just poof they are there.