Review: Missed the mark
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2014
This could have got there but it didn't. Aside from the terrible editing - first error in the very first line! - the story was just so blah it left me empty and wanting. A couple of times throughout the story I thought "oh yeah, this is better, it's actually going somewhere", but then the author would kill it in the next paragraph. The writing wasn't atrocious although it was poorly edited (by the way it's whoa NOT woah.) I just felt this story was another one of those 'free' books put out to hopefully sell more books in a series. But an author needs to realise if they want to sell anymore books in a series, their free offering needs to actually offer something. The ending was quick and weak and I felt ripped off and as if I'd just wasted my time. I know how hard it is for an author to put themselves out there with a book but I was really left wondering if this was something they truly believed in or just a hope that it would make them a quick buck. Sorry, but it wasn't for me.