Review: Cute but not enough
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2013
OverallThis is a cute story, but after a lengthy "courtship," the relationship moved too fast for me.ReviewThis story is a fun idea and the characters are loveable, but everything felt underdeveloped. I would have liked to have seen more interaction between the main characters instead of so much happening solely in Jez's head. I realize due to the type of narrative, that's going to happen, but the jump in time kept me from really getting to see a relationship develop. It's hard to understand why these two men are together.The visual descriptions, character interaction, and general storytelling were great, I just wanted more depth.