Review: Interesting story, not-so-good editing...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2014
I've enjoyed the stories in each of the 3 novels in this series, though the stories proceed almost too much "action scene to action scene" without a great deal of insightful dialog.Caine Deathwalker has become aware of his dual-heritage, and that half of his ancestry is dragon. His adoptive demon father attempts to place him firmly within the "heir" role, though there's extensive disagreement within the clan, who see him as a wastrel. As the clan meets, components of Caine's adoptive father's past re-appear, and Caine takes a long journey through time and space to address (this) past. During the journey, he becomes more aware of reasons for his association with the Red Lady...The story definitely needs more external editing and review. There are the "normal" typos (such as "their" rather than "there"), word misuse (such as conscious rather than conscience), and phrases that, because of typos and mis-placement, make little sense. These appear to increase near the story's end, which indicates a rush to conclusion.