Review: Hmmmm
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2014
This was a decent story but there were several grammatical errors that just became so annoying. Women vs woman. No use of apostrophes just to name a few. The most glaring mistake was calling the very last chapter a prologue. This is traditionally called an epilogue. The cussing was way over the top especially if one of the main characters was on her way to becoming a college professor.I really don't like to bag on new authors but seriously, if you are going to put your work out there at least find a decent editor.