Review: Too rushed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2014
When I started this book I was thinking 4 or 5 stars until the abrupt change in Sin and the BDSM detour.  The story needed to be fleshed out a little more and slowed down.  It has a HEA which I am always rooting for, but I just wish the last half was as good as the first half.  It has lots of sex, but the emotion felt forced. If the time was taken to develop their relationship better I would have found it more acceptable.  I am a fan of insta-love so it wasn't that - it just was lacking somehow.  Also, I would have like a better description of Sin and more reference to what Anya was physically attracted to.Some grammar and spelling errors were kind of distracting as well - like several uses of to when too was need and your when you're was needed.  It's nothing a good edit can't fix.