Review: Too much going on without enough follow thru
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 4, 2013
Several immediate issues come to mind: the cover is great, yet has nothing to do with the story. The synopsis of this book covers only the first 15-20% of the book, and there all manner of somewhat overused themes in the rest: love triangle, one night stand pregnancy, mysterious dead sister haunting or maybe she's just nuts...it's too much, and character development lags painfully behind. Also, the h believes her sole mission in life is to crank out babies, which I find a strange belief for a woman with a law degree. Her friends are unlikeable & the h isn't much of a friend in several instances. Also, the "sexy role-playing" lasts about 5 seconds, making it kindof pointless.This book is written fairly well from a grammar & spelling point. The author just needs to stick with a genre and really get to know her characters before writing about them.