Review: Needs Work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2014
I like the storyline of the book; however, it seemed rushed to me. What I really want to know is why a 23 year-old female is in a relationship with a 16-year-old boy. This story just seemed unrealistic. I would see where the author wanted to go with it yet it was not put together completely. There were grammatical errors so I would suggest for part 2 either spell check or use an editor. I look forward to part 2, which I hope shows more growth from the author.