Review: Hire an editor and come up with a better story
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
In the first 3 paragraphs, Jude is excited, half amazed, his trigger finger twitched, then he's suddenly bored.He approaches an old man and dog at night, getting close enough without saying anything before he takes the man into thrall by looking deeply into his  eyes. The man is not alarmed at his approach?Then Jude casually chucks the dog into a dumpster. He's a good guy? Leaves the dog to die?I read a little further and found more of the same poor writing and nothing to recommend the characters or story, and gave up.