Review: Interesting but some editing needed
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 12, 2012
This is an interesting story where the personality and moral fiber of the main character is slowly revealed in ways that kept me interested in what happened to him.  However, there was too much introspection and too little action.  I wasn't looking for what I'd normally consider an action story, but the movement of this story was very slow in places.  Also, the book would have benefited from a final spell check that would have picked up the regular mix-up of "ie" and "ei" words ("theif" for "thief" and "thier" for "their"), and an editing eye that would have caught things like "sermon on the mound" for "Sermon on the Mount" and "where" for "were".  The author has a real problem with homonyms, especially using "taught" for "taut" -- a mistake that happened multiple times.  I'd like to give this book a solid 4 stars for the well-done story but feel 3.5 stars better reflects the results.