Review: Rough but Intriguing!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 2, 2014
This was my first time reading Ms. McHeyzer's work and I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed it! Despite the tough subject matter which was fully anticipated, it was still very difficult to me to make it past the first few pages. I had to put the book down and return to it. Even then it was still difficult but I powered through. I absolutely loved the dynamic between Ryan, Mason, and Stella. The play/sex scenes were hot!!! This book was also my first exploration with menage stories. Normally, menage themed reads aren't my cup of tea but this was a well crafted tale.My biggest complaints with the story include the scene when Lucy required medical attention but there was a moment where Ryan was distracted by his raging libido. A parent whose child is in distress could give a rat's ass about sex or sexy thoughts. That just seemed unrealistic to me and for a moment made me dislike Ryan. Also, more time should have been spent on editing. There were a great deal of grammatical errors where it bordered on egregious and detracted from the fluidity of the story. Aside from those things, I enjoyed this book. I would most certainly recommend it to others with a warning that the subject matter isn't for everyone. Well done Ms. McHeyzer, well done. I hope to read more of your work in the future.