Review: Fun read, has some issues
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 09 21, 2013
I really enjoyed this book. I just love it when power and morality conflict so nicely. I'm sad there's no second book out, nor an author page for me to register for new publications by the author :(I do have some criticisms though:1) Swear words. Use them or don't use them, but never ever replace them with stars. Lame.2) General editing was poor. Lots of overly long paragraphs, overuse of parenthesis, and even direct violations of the reader contract. By this I mean, things like the word "unprintable" and "(i.e. suspended animation, please check your dictionary)," should never appear in a story.3) I'm very confused as to how it can be that someone who just died and was resurrected never once thinks about his past life. Nor does it make much sense to me that the main character instantly forms a strong attachment to Heliona.So how can I still give this 5 stars? It's good anyway and I'm hoping for better in the sequel :)