Review: One Of The Worst Stories I've Ever Read
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 28, 2013
I wasted .99 on this book and an hour that I will never get back.  The book is written in first person from both Anna's side and his side -- can't even remember his name and I finished the book a minute ago.  She goes to the gym, loses eight pounds in however many weeks by working out daily, and is a size 20.  Her man is the owner of the gym.  He doesn't approach her for those eight weeks, which we find out in practically a sentence, and then for some obscure reason, he finally approaches her.  He is a werewolf without a wolf and just happens to be so good that he defeated his dad in battle, and he is now the alpha.  I'd like to know how that is even possible. From this background, he approaches Anna in the hall, tells her he wants her, and they go to the gym bathroom, where they have the most interminable sex ever.  It is never ending, and I just wanted to get away from the sleaziness of it all.  (Just shoot me now)  When their episode is over, they declare their love for each other. End of book. There are short stories with substance.  This was not one of those stories.