Review: The opposite of TMI
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 21, 2011
I know better than to expect much with novellas, but this one was possibly one of the worst I have read.  The only reason I finished it was because it was so short.  The editing was awful (although I did learn that "direr" is actually a word).  The dialog is written like it is being spoken between middle school or freshman high school students. The story never really gets around to fully explaining why Melanie thinks the way she does and why she seems so shallow. (And is "Gawd" now the accepted spelling for "God"?  I got really tired of seeing it.) Kade is the most whiny Alpha (literally) that I have ever read. Instead of moving the story along, he sits and figuratively twiddles his thumbs for about a third of the story. There were too many coincidences and loose ends to make this a satisfying story. I had a lot of questions left unanswered at the end. If you want to read a long sex scene and skip the rest of the book, not that there was much-go for it.