Review: Creepy but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 7, 2011
The premise of this short story is fun. I enjoyed the use of a Ouija board and found the plot creepy - a murderous ghost haunting a nursing home and speaking to the main characters through the game. Nice.Unfortunately I found the characters a bit flat. I didn't connect with them or like them. I also have a very hard time with the dialog used for Catherine and Rita. It was forced and actually comical at times - times that weren't meant to be funny. I feel the author was trying too hard to make the tween girls sound young and over shot it immensely.I downloaded this as a freebie and feel it was a fun read. It would be even better with a rewrite.