Review: EDITING!!!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 31, 2014
I review quite alot and always found those reviews alittle nit-picky,like,I got thru it and there was not that many issues. What can I say about this book? It was kind of insulting how much problems there was with the editing ,if there was any at all.I support independent writers and mostly read them but I will,even after buying the sequel(slightly better editing)to this because I did like the premise and the charecters. For me to complain re: editing? it has to be BAD. I almost feel like the author just writes to get it out and does not even care how this would never do in a "real" book.It is a shame as I said story and charecters and writing are good but the quality of the written word is just an insult. Prob would not buy another book from this author but again I gave 3stars as I did like Zak and Bethany. also,come on the will be a #3 but not with Keely(someone we got to know and love in both books)but 2 completly new charecters? again author seems not to care for her readers opinions.