Review: Much Better Than the First!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 16, 2012
This was much better than the first book! The realism has been reigned back in and more believable! There were some hard to believe ideas still but it wasn't over the top! I want to read part III and I hope Reese has calmed down and grown up more as most people do who have kids and are married. I still love her character but she needs to calm down a bit! The run on sentences and lack of punctuation made it hard to read in some places so I suggest proofreading at least twice before publishing (This is from a fellow writers standpoint). I am looking forward to Mercedes book! I wanna see why Cortez did a 180 on her out of the blue! That should be interesting! But keep 'em coming, sistah!