Review: It was disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2013
The story wasn't bad.  The flow was a little stunted and there is a definite need for editing due to multiple vocabulary and spelling errors, but the most disappoingting thing was that it felt unfinished.  The ending felt as is Camille just decided she was done writing.  There was no wrap up... it was just ...over.  I was disappointed.