Review: needs a rewrite
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 18, 2011
I decided to read this book because of the description.  The premise was compelling.This book was very slow in many parts.  I felt the author suggested many previously published stories such as THE BOYS FROM BRAZIL, THE DAVINCI CODE and APOLLO 13.  I was often disturbed by the back and forth of the story going from one group of characters to another.  I also didn't like how some characters were introduced toward the end of the book with no back story.  Also some characters throughout the book were left without closure at the end.What I did like in this book was how good the author was at making me want to find out what would happen next. His suspense and action scenes were very well done. I read this book straight through even though I needed to skim many of the slow parts.  This book read like an unedited first draft and would have been a prime candidate for a rewrite.  This author shows promise but needs to tighten this plot.  It could have been great but turned out to be just shy of okay and a bit disappointing.