Review: Editor Please
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2013
Great concept, but an editor was needed for sure.  If there was an editor, a new one is needed.  I received this as a free download and looked at it as a quick fluffy type read and it was perfect for that.  The ending was a bit rushed for my taste but at least it tied everything up and I wasn't left hanging.  I would have loved to see this concept/storyline in the hand of a more experienced writer, I think much more could have been done with the idea.