Review: Editor Needed for Good Suspenseful Paranormal Romance
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2012
While a good editor would make good use of grammar and the appropriate use of commas, the author has a good knowledge of paranormal exploration and an imagination that creates an intriguing story.  While the poor sentence structure was distracting, the character development was admirable.  Both the primary characters and the less solid minor characters acted to weave a story that will not disappoint fans of paranormal investigation.  A lifetime of ghostly communications prepares Caitlin for a visit to Cornwall, the ancestral homeland of both herself and the family of the story's hero, Thane--and his identical, long-dead cousin, Colin, a resident incubus.  Together with her two close friends and Thane's family retainer, Caitlin explores the old manor house in order to identify and properly address any ghosts that may have lingered from the past.  Good and evil, real and unreal, the house's inhabitants provide adventure, romance, death, life and mystery in poorly-written phrases that provide light reading for the reader interested in a writer that shows a potential for future success with a good editor.