Review: A step up from Invisible Justice...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2014
You can tell the author improved, but there is still some fairly major problems imo.One, the author seems out of touch with how teenagers think and act. There were a bunch of times I just rolled my eyes because they acted in either an excessively "goody two-shoes" manner or in a unrealistically competent one.Two, I did not like Jade at all. She comes off as a totally dumb flake. Her powers were obvious long before the cast figured it out, and they are so abusable that I was shocked the group wasn't more suspicious. I kept expecting her to be an antagonist or something. Plus, the absolute insult to our intelligence by having her not know how babies were made. I wanted to seriously facepalm during that scene. That ties back into #1, as any teenager with access to a computer gets the full picture pretty early. I'm seriously hoping she turns out to be just faking being so dumb later.It's not all negative though. Its still a fun(if simplistic) read. I look forward to Tandem Justice, assuming it ever comes out....