Review: Creepy Little Story with a Twist at the End
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2011
I've read several of Joshua Scribner's short stories over the past two weeks, and this is one of his better - and scary - ones with a hint of earlier Stephen King horror short stories.  It is well-written, and Scribner does a great job of quickly getting you to the point and into the story, which can be difficult to do in a short story due to the word length: you had better be good, fast.  The ending was a little different with a twist I wasn't expecting.All in all, I thought it was good and entertaining and is a perfect 10 or so minute diversion during your lunch break.