Review: unfortunately - agree with one reviewer, this story is weak
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 8, 2012
No plot development.  Two people just meet, a little denial by both, and sex.  I am really glad it was a free-bie.  My time might have been better spent watching paint dry.  I am not giving up ont his author though!You can do it!!!!!!  Write a great free story for us.  Redeem yourself.