Review: Nice love story with twists
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 31, 2013
I really enjoyed the story here and it is totally believable. I gave it 3 stars due to the extremely poor writing. There are so very many words that are missing, words added where they don't belong, and so many words that are used in the wrong tense. I hope that the author gets someone to proof future books before publishing.The characters are great. You totally believe the characters are real and that everything that goes on could really happen in our society today. It is a shame that things like this happen but the author put it all to good use.