Review: Good story, but seriously lacks editing/proofreading!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 18, 2013
As others have already mentioned, I found the book to contain a great many grammatical and spelling errors, along with poor choices of words.  It makes me wonder if the story was dictated and never read by the author!  The idea of self-publishing is fine, but the author needs to do the requisite work to present something polished.  This book is lacking that polish.