Review: This book is pretty bad.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 27, 2013
Well that sucked. In terms of story I'm sure it's great. What totally ruined it is the complete lack of ability to write.Paragraph after paragraph of bullet pointed actions. He did this. He did that. He went there.Invest some time and money in a few writing courses. Learn things like showing vs telling and other magical secrets.2 stars because it was only 99 cents.