Review: Can there be too much sex in an erotica??
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 15, 2012
I am actually going to say this, but there was way too much sex in this book!! I know...slap me for saying that especially when that is the reason I read erotica!! However, I think in any book when every other page is sex, sex, sex it gets real tired. First, I could not connect with the female character in this book Rita, because her behavior throughout the entire book did not make any sense! I understand that its a work of fiction, but even fiction should pull the reader in so that the reader can connect, understand and identify with the characters. For me,the author missed the mark with the beginning because she could've at least written the meeting between the main characters a bit more substantial than just sex, and unprotected sex (including oral) so one can at least find an excuse for Rita's later decision making. Imagine meeting a guy on a train, can't see his face, have unprotected sex (crazy), he leaves the train but at least gives you his number (how thoughtful), interfering friend texts him (desperate), he invites you to dinner at exclusive club ($$$), you arrive and is seated but is told he wants you to put on a blindfold (WTF), he comes and starts kissing you and throws wine on you and proceeds to have oral sex right there in public (slap, possibly broken bottle over his head), leaves but tells you that if you want to see him you have to be initiated in this exclusive club...interpretation-sex with all the members both male and female(knee to the groin after the broken bottle, twice for good measure!)... but you get the drift.Would I recommend this book...I would because despite my grief, it is written good and flows. For me though it was a big WTF??!!