Review: Very enjoyable
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2014
I really enjoyed this story and would like to rate it 5 stars but must, regrettably, give it only 3. Admittedly I'm a stickler where it comes to vocabulary and grammar. I found several instances there incorrect words were used, one being 'autonomously' where it should have been 'anonymously.' This cannot be attributed to transcription error.But, to me, the most glaring error was DNA being found in cut hair. Most people know that in order to find DNA in hair samples it must come from the follicle. Certainly someone educated and sophisticated enough to be elected president would know this.However, to be fair, I found Mr. Pirog's writing overall to be very well done. The main character was well developed and very likeable and the mystery and suspense were well maintained throughout. I look forward to more from Mr. Pirog who, with growth and maturity, should become an excellent author.