Review: smooth
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 18, 2014
Many things can go awry in the US foster care system and they often do, but Ms Shiloh manages to deal with the issue -and with racism and bullying- with a lightness of touch that keeps the angst level in this short M/M romance fairly low without losing contact with reality.The love between Luke and Ran happens a bit too fast at first but the author is clearly trying to convey a sense of predestination, of inevitability that is after all the stuff romances are made of.Writing could use some polishing but the story is good and reads without effort.