Review: Great story, needs better proof reading
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2012
I have really enjoyed each of these books.  Each is a contemporary story, in the same setting, with a different character taking centre stage in each book.  And each really is a story, not just a romance.  To make each story stand-alonable, a resume of other stories is given, which I found slightly irritating, as I have read ALL the books!  I also was slightly distracted by spelling and punctuation.  'Breaks' were used rather than 'brakes' - a spell checker will accept either, but you cannot bring a car to a halt with 'breaks'!  To break a sentence into parts, commas should be used, not semi-colons.  And don't get me started on apostrophes.  An s at the end of a word can signify a plural or a belonging.  If it is a plural, there should be no apostrophe!  And you put an apostrophe before the s if the word is singular, and after the s if the word is plural, unless it is a word such as children('s).  I would expect someone who writes books to have a grasp of basic English grammar.I have awarded the stories 4 stars;  they would have got 5 stars but for the grammar.