Review: Dark & Compelling with some flaws
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 1, 2014
I gave this Bella Jewel novel 4 stars because it held my attention throughout and I was eager to see what would happen next. Not a predictable story by any means. Yes, it was dark and gritty, especially in the beginning, Yes, there were some confusing plot twists. But overall, a compelling read.There were a number of moments where I felt things could have been handled differently with better effect to the overall story line. There was more brutality than I felt was necessary. The relationship between Emelyn and William could have developed more as a surprise element to the story rather than William admitting he was looking for a lover out of the scenario... that would have been more effective. It would have worked better if his motives were more selfless and the interlude with number 12 should never have happened. It just clouded the story as well as muddled the connection that was developing between the two main characters.Despite some flaws, this was a book I'd recommend to those who are looking for a dark romance.