Review: Fell flat
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2012
Well, this was a waste of time.  This book showed a lot of potential but fell flat with the writing.  No character building, no world building and the hop-skip-and-jump between scenes left me dizzy.  I have to agree that this book is not worth 5 stars.  I could not fall in love with any of the characters.  I think they might also have been bipolar as their emotions are all over the place.  The almost telegraph style of writing was also off-putting.  If you had to tell a story over and over again - you start with emotion, going into the smallest detail and elaborate on all of your sences ect.  Well, if you had to tell that story for the 50th time, you start skipping events, shorten discriptions and convey it in a bored tone - this is what this story does.  Sorry, but no thanks.