Review: Well done!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2013
I found this short story quite enjoyable. Right off the bat the reader is thrown into this world where magic is real and things may not always be as they appear. I felt the world building was strong and the story kept me quite engaged throughout. I grew to like the characters and the pace felt natural. Overall I would be pleased to see the story of the main characters continued and to learn more about this world as it feels like it has quite the potential.