Review: Was Okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
While I liked the story, I didn't love it. Same can be said about the characters. There wasn't anything about them that excited me. There was chemistry between Hadley and Miller, but not enough that would have firecrackers going off. There are a couple of scenes where the couple have sex, but if you're looking for anything descriptive you won't find it here. I did think the story dragged on a bit as it felt longer 417 pages. I love reading novels with several POV's. The issue here is that the POV would change from one paragraph to the next. There was no symbol, extra spaces, names, or even a new chapter to show that the POV changed. I find this to be quite irritating.I wish the novel was proofread as it seems only Spell-Check was utilized as there were a few homophones used incorrectly. Instead of "your," "you're" would be used, and so-forth. Not a deal breaker, but still, is it too much for novels to be proofread?