Review: Really wobbly writing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2014
The first book was a wonderful introduction, and unfortunately much better written than this second installment.  A good portion of the book was confusing, poorly written in the form of inconsistent story line, repetitive or disconnected scenes, and rather non-sensical plot progression.  The author needs to have experienced help in editing and creating a better book.  That said, you just will love the twins, although their beta female makes no sense as the author obviously couldn't get a good "read" on who she should be.  Three nice sex scenes.  Rafer and Lark get all of maybe three sentences - a classic mistake for an author in not keeping the audience up to date with the characters from the first installment.  But for the price of $3.99, I would highly recommend it as a light read, panty dampening, and you know you'll have to get the next in the series because for all my complaints, it's a fun story.