Review: Nice story but too short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 9, 2012
This is a nice story but it could have been much better if it were longer with the characters and situations more well-developed. I would have been happier with them deciding to adopt Charlie's plan and forgetting about the gold. Also, the battle with the bad men should have been written about and not skipped over so completely. In addition, I hated the way (and the sentiment) that the story ended on. However, even with these criticisms, I did enjoy reading this story, and if someone wants a quick, light romance, then they should give this one a try.