Review: Ok start to romance
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
This is book one in the truest sense, it leaves all sorts of issues unresolved for the next book. The author needs to go through with an editor and fix all of the verb tense problems, all of the misuses of the word "your" , and the formatting problems that put unusual spaces between letters in the middle of words, especially the name Vanessa which almost always has an extra space after the v, and the missing punctuation-most notably apostrophes and commas. Fixing these problems would make this story less awkward to read. Something about it just doesn't flow smoothly, the dialogue seems stilted and situations are described oddly. "He had both hands on each side of my face".I just couldn't bring myself to love the heroine, Mia, because she compartmentalizes her life and only lets people in when and where she wants them, not when she needs them, like when she's having nightmares, or to talk about why she's having nightmares.  Sebastian seems to have completely changed his life because of his love for her, but she doesn't trust him. Then there's that pesky wife problem of his...so maybe he hasn't changed everything. I don't know if I'll follow this series or not.Heat factor hot.