Review: The story line is good but the writing lacks....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 18, 2013
It starts a bit like 50 Shades of Grey and while that wasn't the best book ever written, it was written better than this one. At least there was a flow and you knew where you were and who was in the room. There has to be sentences missing from this book. The only clear thing in this book when you are reading it is which century you are in because it says so at the beginning of the chapter. Otherwise you jump from one room with four ladies conversing, to a different room with 2 guys in it having a different conversation with no distinction when reading that you have moved scenes. It simply doesn't flow. With some more words it would have been a better read, making it a decent story.