Review: Poorly written
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2012
I dislike giving negative reviews preferring not to review in those cases but when I run across a work such as this which I paid money for I make an exception. This book is poorly written and is in sore need of an editor.  It should never have been published without editing. The errors in this book detract from the story which otherwise I probably would have found cute.  There are continuity issues, bad grammar, missing connective words, and so many instances where the word "his" should have been "hers" which changed the meaning of the sentence dramatically.  I hope this author learns from reviews such as these. If you want to become an accredited author you must take the time to review and fix your work. Have some pride in what you produce.