Review: Great idea, badly written
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
I loved the summary.  So I bought it.  And now I am a sucker.  How the heck did this author manage to make this story boring.  I can appreciate that as a novella, the story and the characters need to move at lightening speed but...I needed a little more of the man protagonist.  Had he been watching her for years?  Yearning for her hot, slick body under his own.  Did her brother send the protagonist to teach his sister a lesson (if so, eww)?Not memorable at all.