Review: not bad for a free read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 25, 2011
Two of the things I enjoyed most was that it had a cool premise to it and the author took care to ensure it was properly polished before putting it "out there" for people to read.  The heroine was likeable and despite the first person perspective I still enjoyed the boyfriend and daddy characters. Despite being short it was still somewhat satisfying.I didn't care for the dads melodrama at the end, it made the scene less sexy for me. I also agree with the other reviewer the ughhhhh and excessive moans got distracting. Almost too repetitive.All in all for a free read by all means give it a shot, its decent overall.