Review: Ok
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 4, 2013
I'd like to give a better review, but there are too many things that take away from the story. Beginning with the author writing in present tense. There are words that actually should be in past tense, but aren't. The story itself is not original. Most stories are not, but the author puts a twist. Not here. Mot enough backstory on Brian. A few places were awkward. Story just ended with no resolution.