Review: A poorly written short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2014
I found this story gritty and slightly absurd. The story was ok, it was about death and re-inventing the heroine but the writing was terrible. Pieces of sentences and moments all broken up to somehow say at the end that these two people loved each other. They confess that they dont know why they behave the way they do, so this reader was absolutely confused. The Hero came across as just mean. It was pretty awful.