Review: Good read. Rather formulaic. Could use better editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2013
Good read. Rather formulaic.I wished Ellie to be a stronger character, who didn't need rescuing all the time. I didn't believe Carter would carry a grudge that long without trying to find out the reason behind Ellie's refusal to run away with him. I found the mention of designer names on clothing, jewelry, etc., to be distasteful and affected.The book could use better editing. There were several incidences of missing or repeated words, misused words, and poor grammar. Almost all could have been caught with spell check and a rereading before publication.dire STRAIGHTS (instead of straits); alright (instead of all right); whisky (instead of whiskey);"on THE elegant THE side table"; "W ill" and "ye ar" (extra spaces); "own his restraint" (instead of "his own restraint"); "feel you touching TOUCH me"; "caot" (instead of coat); "lawful wedding wife" (instead of "lawful wedded wife"); "got another THING coming" (instead of "think").