Review: Deliciously sweet
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 2, 2013
You know a book is good when you stay awake all night reading it. I thoroughly enjoyed the plot and the story and found it to be incredibly emotive. As far as stories go this gets 5 stars from me. The teaser for book 2 gets 5 stars from me too (lol). But damn girl, you need to edit this. It needs a professional editor looking at it because it has so many mistakes. he shuttered on top of her (shuddered). then (instead of than). loose (instead of lose) per say (instead of per se), to name a few. Not to mention a huge amount of grammatical errors in your sentences.As far as love stories go this is fabulous. It's really romantic and heartfelt, and my favorite character has to be Sebastian (dang!!). As I said the story itself gets a full 5 stars from me, the editing gets a 2. Alas, it's a crying shame to give this book 3 stars. Please edit it again. Please. The story is good and should be the best it can be.