Review: The story wasn't perfect
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
The heroine was a little too wishy-washy for her own good. The hero, Nicholas Powers, was too dominant for my own good. I like alpha men but come on.The story was good. The Cinderella theme did well. Vanessa was the perfect choice in that role due to her own upbringing. Over all, I liked the story but the characters were a little bland. Vanessa spent more time acting like a teenaged girl meeting Justin Bieber than she did a strong, adult, independent woman that she should have been.Her best friend, Rachel, interested me more than she did. Not by much but still.Overall, I liked this book but it could have been better.