Review: Too short
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2013
This could have made a wonderful longer story.  I so wanted to see what Fell did working with Mary.  I felt left up in the air, with the sex scene being almost longer than any thing else.  I really would have enjoyed better development of what began as a really good story idea.  As it is, the author seems to be writing to just turn short stories out.