Review: yes it really need better editing, but, I really liked this book and hope to see Rebecca's story next
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 13, 2013
Yes the editing is lacking and some sentences are confusing. The dialog often reads like stage directions or an actors script,instead of dialog between charachters and sometimes you feel like someone else is giving you a play by play. I found after a while my brain just ignored all thatn and I started to make the mental correction before I lost the momentum of the story.  As so many have said, an editor is needed. Have to give it 4 stars for that. Aside from that I really did enjoy the story.I got sucked in and read it in a day. Than again at a slower pace. I though the story was strong, straight forward and easy to follow. No crazy plot twist that make you say, what. I really liked the charachters. It had a nice ending and left room for sequels, which I hope to see. After all Grim now has a house full of women he needs to find mates for.I want to know how how Lisa the girls and Grim are doing and how Grim will hanle a baby as well as how Abby and Ynyr are doing and will Rebecca and Cullen hook up. Later a prequel on Kim and Wray would be nice to see.