Review: A sci-fi Harlequin rip-off of Gladiator
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 31, 2013
It was a good story, but the dialogue was too cumbersome. Also the space battles weren't really researched. None of it really made sense ( I know it's sci-fi, but space is huge, and you write about kilometers). And what's up with the soft porn scenes? This whole thing felt like a space based Harlequin romance that was ripped off from Gladiator. I mean really, you've got hand pulsars, rail guns, and the best you could come up with for a weapon that makes a crew piss themselves is a nuke? If you want to write about space battles, then you should check out David Weber for staters. the editor should be fired. You could have done so much more with this storyline.