Review: not bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2013
I have to admit I almost quit reading it.  The writing confused me a bit. I was a little frustrated keeping up with change in person. The grammar and quotation marks were also off sometimes.  Overall the story was great and the plot and layout of events were also great.  So as long as you can overlook the the mistakes it really was worth it for the story.