Review: A good start, but lost it.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 1, 2014
Ok, I got this free for my Kindle and I don't normally give negative reviews but I feel I have to weigh in this time.  I think the story is fine for those who seem to love it, but I had too many problems with it, and I would definitely NOT recommend it for young readers.I have to say, it started out really well.  I got totally caught up in Cassie's character and in her escape at the very beginning.  I was fascinated by the powers she possessed and also her inner strength and determination.  I was also intrigued by Seth and the budding chemistry building between the two and was hoping they'd eventually get together (after many problems and interruptions, of course).  But then the story started losing me and I eventually just stopped reading.My issues were:1.  Too Much Sex!  Good grief, I know I'm old, but give me a break!  Page after page after page of the two main characters having sex with each other - and that's just the "first" time.  I swear I skipped over entire chapters because it got so old.  I'm not against some erotic scenes in my stories, or even some explicit sex, but I don't need to have it described in every excruciating detail for pages on end.  It's good that they fell for each other, but it got ridiculous.2. Yes, it's supposed to be Sci-Fi, but having sex with a girl can turn you into the "Hulk?"  I love a good Sci-Fi, but that was too far-fetched for me.3.  The typos and misused words got a little distracting for me.  The author should proof-read more carefully.4.  Plot holes.  I got lost several times trying to figure out what just happened, but it was never explained.  Events seemed to jump around till I finally gave up.I apologize if you were offended; that's just my honest opinion.  All in all, I think the author has a lot of potential.  It could have been a great story, but I was disappointed in this effort.