Review: Great story, lousy proofreading
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
When the story started I thought that it was going to be a very exciting ride and it was!  An 11.2 earthquake tears across Yellowstone triggering a 9.45 earthquake under Puget Sound that nearly destroys Seattle.  Meanwhile back in Wyoming, the caldera that was Yellowstone National Park blows it top and spews hot ash up into the still dark morning sky.Shortly after this I shook my head as the water filled ditch that surrounds a castle was spelled "mote".  Okay, I thought, spell check didn't catch that although a proofreader or editor should have.  Things went downhill from there...words were incomplete or missing completely.There are great characters and a lot of suspense.  There is also a great deal of factual information about the areas affected and the agencies involved with the reporting and predicting of effects of the disaster.John, I can't wait to read the next book but please get someone over the age of 30 to do the proofreading.