Review: Good but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2013
Awesome storyline very taboo in a sense. My dislikes about this book are: If you want to write a book located in America please research American slang..I get Ana's British but she's been here for 11 years I think she'd learn to speak Amercian slang better by now. Same with the secondary characters they're supposed to be from here but speak Britishisms. Research better and that would make a big difference or change locations. Some of the dialogue is choppy and cheesy. A good editor and some polishing and this could be a very good story.