Review: great potential unrealized
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 29, 2013
This story is incredibly well researched. The plot is well composed and has all the elements necessary for a really good book....However, the female protagonist is under-developed as is the male protagonist; the story is choppy, moving from one emotion to another without sufficient development although it's accurate in that teenagers are prone to such dramatic changes. Still, in a novel, such changes need a smoother transition.This story would benefit greatly from the attention of a good editor to monitor the continuity and pacing. I think the raw talent is there, waiting to be developed.