Review: Make it stop
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 26, 2012
That's what I thought to myself as too much information about the main character and her abilities were thrown at me, "Make it stop!"  There was absolutely no reason it couldn't have unfolded at a slower pace.  As is, it felt like the author had this great idea and had to get it all out there before the story could be continued.Main character's best friend...unbelievable.  Tension between characters didn't feel real.  Dialogue was artificial and often plain silly.  Had to stop reading after 12% even though I did find the concept mildly intriguing.