Review: Mystery and Mayhem!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2014
The story opens with the discovery of Nathalie being found close to death and her sister Lucy missing. Nathalie has no memory of what happened to herself or her missing sister. For all intent purposes it appears a serial killer is at large and the reason behind Nathalie, Lucy and other girls missing. I would of liked more background on the other alleged missing girls. That would of really gave more to the storyline.I found myself confused a few times as the story jumped a bit with clarity on the story itself. Nathalie seemed to 'recover from nearly being killed very quickly with extensive injuries to leg and ribs. Nathalie's mother one time saying she was friends with the detective in the story then asking Lucy for his last name because she didn't remember did not make sense.The killer for me was obvious from the beginning. I read a lot of mysteries and suspense so that tends to happen so it might not be that way for another reader.Over all the story is really good but Nathalie has a leg injury that would of taken longer to walk on than a few days in the hospital and the first day home. Since I have pins and a disc in my own leg I know that standing let alone walking takes weeks even on crutches. She also would need physical therapy for a few weeks and would not be up around on crutches by herself so soon. This took away from the story for me a bit but overall it's still a good story.I think the legal aspects of the story that took place during Nathalie being questioned by the police needs to be researched; having worked in law enforcement the process of arrest and questioning is incorrectly laid out.I'd like to thank the author for offering her book free on Amazon. I'm looking forward to see what the author has next.