Review: The ending, really that's the problem...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2013
Wow, the ending is what people are so up in arms about. The writing is what people should be talking about. I'm sorry I think this is a great basis for a story with awesome potential but an editor needs to take a look at this book and do a lot of correcting. Contractions are VERY important! I felt like I was reading a pre-teen book had it not been for the "intimate" scenes. I'll buy the next book just because OF THE ENDING but really this book should have finished off all together differently so people wouldn't feel compelled to read the next one. I am just a person that hates to leave something unfinished.