Review: Good story, good characters, bad editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
Good story, good characters, bad editing.The plot was intriguing and the characters kept my attentions. The dialog was also good and to the point.The action scenes were mostly pretty good with some interesting twists in them. The ending had a few surprises too including the identity of the Chameleon. The erotic scenes were not overdone which was a nice change in an action book.The biggest detractor was the poor editing job. Misused words such as tale for tail and cyan for cayenne pepper for example were numerous enough to drag me out of the story. Along with enough improper sentence structure where there were missing adjectives or too many were my reasons for a 3 star rating.