Review: Cute, but could have been better.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 6, 2012
This is a cute story, with a cute premise. I'm guessing this is the author's first work. It could stand with a lot of tightening. It wanders around too much at the beginning, with our heroine wondering if she is going crazy. She refers back to her past (hearing voices again? What is that about?) And the part about calling her doctor and he never calls her back is weird. Why even put it in? I liked Mosey, but his 'voice' could stand some improving. I liked the surprise ending. If the author had asked me, I would have told her to have her critique group read it and make suggestions. It's not exactly bad, but it could be much better, and that's what all authors should aim for--better.