Review: I hate to write a bad review.....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 30, 2013
I truly hate to write a bad review! I understand the incredible work it takes to write a novel. It's basically the author's baby - then some nobody comes along and blasts it. But I just gotta throw out my opinion! This is not my first, nor my last book by this author. She really has talent. Her writing flows wonderfully. My problem was totally with the characters in this one. When I read, it's my form of escape. I want to be absorbed in the story and become the characters - especially the leading lady if romance is what I am in the mood for.  I did not want to be Baya ! (Watch out for spoilers) at first, I liked our leading lady. She was button cute and her snarky attitude was hilarious. What happened? I became increasingly embarrassed for her!  It just became too much and I couldn't finish the book! Example 1 - she cries and begs Bryson to kiss her?!? Seriously ? I get that he was "holding himself " back from her and all that but I don't want to be that girl that Baya was. Example 2 - Bryson continues to sleep around (gross) she walks in and a slutty girl leaves his room half naked - he comes out, touches her -  he smells like "sex" (eww ) and is sweaty - the  girl smashes her to him kissing him goodbye and she wants him in that moment? Example 3 - the fake eyelash scene! Bryson has another girl hanging all over him and Baya tries to dress to entice him? She just keeps throwing herself at him! I don't want to be Baya therefore I did not finish the book. I want a heroine that thinks a little more of herself than that!