Review: HORRIBLE GRAMMAR & PUNCTUATION!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2012
This book was extremely hard for me to read. The grammar, spelling and punctuation was horrible. A lot of times, there were no periods to end a sentence and commas were misplaced throughout the whole book. Not only that, but the wrong spelling of words were used (their vs. their, wear vs. where, etc). The story line was JUST OK, but it's very hard to find anything realistic about high school girls who are spending thousands of dollars on clothes almost weekly, yet don't have a job, wealthy parents or boyfriends (initially). The book was also too long. Based on the plot, the book could have gotten started, climaxed and been over with hundreds of pages earlier. I won't say the author has no writing potential (considering I am told this is her first book), but investing in a good editor would have made this book 10 times better.