Review: 3 stars - good debut
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2014
There is a lot of potential in this book, and for a debut I think this is good. The story was definitely engaging. I was captured right from the beginning of the book.  I was able, after adjusting to the writing style, to make an emotional connection with both Emma and Jake (our heroine & hero).  There's lots to like here, Jake is a sexy alpha male and he knows what he wants.  Emma was sweet, loving and understanding.  They were both very likeable.  The supporting characters were great and also very likeable.  I also really enjoyed the underlying suspense and mystery in this story.I did have a few issues though, one being the jumpy POV.  I really prefer books written in first person or limited third person but only when the POV change is clearly shown.  This was hard to read in the beginning as the story was not told from only one or two third person POVs but everyone in the story it seemed...  I find that makes it hard to form the very important connection between the reader and characters.  My other issue was that I felt there could have been more plot & character development...  This was a quick read, and I think being that there was a suspenseful and mysterious underlying plot we could have had a bit less sex and a bit more story...  Sorry, I like the heat as much as anyone but not if it feels like page filler...  Don't get me wrong this author can certainly write the steam but a couple times I was like "really. again?"Anyway those are my thoughts take a look at the other reviews and give this one a try ;)