Review: Lots of Magic
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 1, 2013
Lots of magic, not too much teenage angst, and an actual plot, though it did get muddled at the end. Actually a long book, not the usual short story for free. Would have given it 5 stars except it got way too ambitious at the end and added a lot of extra story line. When editing, it would be better to take out 20% of first half of book, then develop the part they added in at the last minute.