Review: How old is this author? 12?!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 2, 2012
Story idea is good, but poorly executed. It reads like it was written by a hormonal 12 year old boy. Sentence structure is poor. Verb tenses are confused. The story contradicts itself. Spell check isn't perfect!  It often puts the wrong word into text in the guise of correcting spelling. ....sigh....  The story has promise but needs alot of help.