Review: A Good Story For Young Adults
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2014
The story isn't bad, however, it needs to be edited/proofread as in my copy (I'm assuming others as well) when I got to chapter 3, then chapters 1 and 2 repeated themselves.The dialogue was very juvenile with the characters "dropping the F-Bomb" and some random curse words when it wasn't even necessary.  I felt like I was eavesdropping on some teenagers trying to be grown-ups and talking dirty.To me the characters were "too young" and a little pathetic. I couldn't really relate to them. But then again, I'm an 'old broad'.Luckily, for the main characters, they found each other because I would hate for someone to take advantage of their naiveté.