Review: Enjoyable read, but not a full story.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2013
I got this book for free on Amazon, but my review is based on how I felt after reading it and was not influenced by price.I enjoyed the interaction between Jamie and Erica and the scenes between them were well written and flowed well.  The intro to fire play was new to me and I always appreciate something different and can understand the psychology behind it for a firefighter to enjoy such an method.The negatives is that it wasn't really a full story, it just dealt with their belated honeymoon and their trying to reconnect as a couple.  That's where the negative comes in.  4 years together and just the lack of communication about sex was the whole reason for the split and just talking about that solved the problem? Way too simplistic.  How can you live together for 4 years and never talk despite guilt on each side for how they got together.If you just want a couple on vacation having sex this will do (but there's hotter out there).  If you want a fully developed story, you should look elsewhere. All in all, I enjoyed the short time I spent reading Under His Command and am interested in a possible story about William and Dani.