Review: A very good Sci-fi Romance, if you can overlook the editing...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2013
I will corroborate the previous reviews: the editing sucks. Shifting verb tenses, misspellings a fifth grader should point out, blechh. Plus a point-of-view written in the obscure third-person present. EH. But, barring all that, the story is just plain good storytelling, period. The author really gets into the motivations of the alien male viewpoint, the alien female, and the uprooted Terran females. Her worldbuilding is very good, and long story short, you get sucked into the world, its emotions and the political machinations that happen when the two intersect. Plus, it has a really good love story that is believable, not just falling into each others' eyes and instantaneously working all out. The male and female lead definitely have communication problems that they work through. In all, it still is enjoyable, and a very good read. Just let your mind fill in the editing gaffs.