Review: So much wrong, where do I start?! (Caution some mild profanity in review)
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2014
I don't think I've ever read a book, that as I'm reading it, I'm shaking my head and telling myself "this is just wrong". First we have the male lead or the alpha of the alpha's. I believe he views himself as a mini-god. He requires everyone to bow down to him and misuses and abuses the power he is given. Instead of commanding by respect he commands by power. He finds out about a half-shifter and wonders if he should just kill him, his mom, aunt and brother. Like that is normal and okay. He doesn't even know these people, but has no respect for them and believes them to be inferior to him and his kind. Then he meets the family, watches the sons, who just happen to be twins, and is so impressed with their skills, speed, honesty and forthrightness that they are appointed to his personal security team. Their mom is a whole different story. He still doesn't like her, doesn't like that she is human and wonders how much of a danger to his people she is. Who is he kidding, she doesn't even know her sons are shifters. Why would she pose any danger at all. Plus she actually thinks mini-god is hot. She doesn't trust him or his hospital and thinks everyone is not being honest.We find out the mom is in mating heat. For us lesser humans that means she is ovulating. Supposedly she is exuding copious amounts of pheromones and driving the local wolves wild. But hey, mini-god to the rescue. He'll just have sex with her and take care of the problem. Lets not ask the woman what she wants. And what's up with her? She was impregnated to an ass, married to an ass, left by that same ass and raised her sons alone and now we are supposed to believe she is so weak minded that she is going to let Silas literally screw her, possibly get her pregnant and then become an absentee father. She's already been there and done that. Plus all we here is Silas's internal dialog about how he isn't sure he wants half human pups. That will be sooooo embarrassing. So Silas keep your dick in your pants then.I could continue with how poorly this story is told, I am almost ashamed to say I read it to the end. I think I did that hoping it would get better at some point. It did not. I don't know if the further installments of this story are an improvement, but I refuse to spend money to find out.My recommendation is to give this book a pass and wave to is as you go by.