Review: Warning, Awkward writing ahead
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 28, 2013
If you're so eager for an MC story that you'll wade through an obviously un-edited story, go for it. If you want stellar writing, go read Kristen Ashley and Joanna Wylde.This story has an interesting premise, but Holy Harleys, the writing is rough. The author has talent and enthusiasm, but she has let impatience rob her of the chance to work with professionals who can coach her to make it readable. One reviewer noted that the characters speak like robots. She's right.The action also jumps around like a Chihuahua on speed and the main character HS principal is so unobservant and has so few acquaintances that no one who knows her has noticed that her date also hangs out with an MC in leathers? Hmm, not buying that. If you've lived in a small town, there are people who know everything and can't wait to share it.Hoping this talented author will get some help to make her writing as good as it could be.