Review: Storyline Draft?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 25, 2013
Interesting story idea. The first few chapters leading to the Armageddon bring the reader to an interesting transitional point. Then the storyline dies. I have a feeling someone else has taken over writing duties at this point as the plotline stalls and turns pedantic. The rest of this series contains boring repetitions, extreme lack of brevity, padded tangents to character building, and at least different 50 references to coffee. It appears the author(s) published part of the storyline draft instead of the finished, edited, publishable product.I hope the author (original?) Publishes a completed product. It would be a shame to waste a good story on bad writing style.