Review: Not much plot
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2013
I liked the beginnings of an interesting plot and purpose that was begun in the first book of the series.  I bought the second book in the hopes of finding out more of this plot, to see it advance enough to make buying the series worthwhile.  Instead what I found in Book 2 was a lot of sex, a lot of heroine fighting her own feelings, hero fighting his own feelings, and tho at the beginning I liked both charaters, by 30% nothing had happened but a lot of angst, and I was fed up.The purpose of a series is to tell several stories that are connected --- a series plot, too large/detailed/convoluted to tell in just one book --- and the job of the author is NOT just to tell that one couple's story, but to ADVANCE THE PLOT. otherwise there is no reason for a buyer to keep on purchasing that series.The author really, really needs to realize that it is a fierce market out there, and that you have to work good to get and KEEP your loyal readers, or they will just go on to someone else's, better-written, books. You don't get a free pass, just because one book was promising!  Please, please, please - advance your plot.  Keep me interested - no, enthralled! - I WANT to read your work.