Review: DNF. I just couldn't... wanted to love it.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2014
The story line I really really liked and it had a bunch of potential, but sadly I had to stop, I just couldn't go anymore. And it's very long, so I could not do it for like 400 pages. I got to 23% and had to stop, I was just too annoyed. 1- What kind of mother leaves their kid with a complete stranger they meet in the hall or his brother or a strange woman that works for Matt?... I understand she is tired, exhausted, on her own , young, etc... but come on... I would NEVER leave my daughter alone with any man I just met in the hallway 15 minutes ago... so that was a huge put off.. also their relationship jumped right into it, maybe if it progressed it would of been way better. The grammar and errors were very distracting and the author needs to learn between they are and they're and etc... basic things... and she says she doesn't drink and Matt asked her like 2-3 times after the fact if she wanted a beer or wine or etc... is he deaf? does he want to get her drunk and take advantage? I didn't get that from his character, but still... it was weird and awkward... so over all I just couldn't finish, maybe I will try again in the future and see if by any miracle it gets better, but sadly I doubt it. If things were differen't I felt it could of been a really good story. But fell very very short. Again, story line had potential... maybe some people will love it? but I just couldn't and I always try and finish a book as a respect to the time the author put into the book, but it has happened maybe 3 times where I just couldn't or I would want to gouge my eyeballs out.