Review: Should have paid closer attention to the reviews
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2014
If you look deep down, this book has potential. How deep depends on whether or not you can look past the rambling, run on sentences, the many, many grammatical and punctuation errors and then try and figure out who was talking. The plot was a little different but had too many things going on that ended up confusing the story. The loads of errors diverted my attention away from the story and I just skimmed to the end to find out what happened.This was more like a draft of ideas than a novel. I don't understand why anyone would put this out to the public without proper editing.