Review: I just can't...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2014
I couldn't finish. The main character Caylee, is an idiot. She is reckless, selfish, arrogant, and just plain stupid. Her male counterpart Haden is the only reason I made it to 50%.She refuses to be protected even though she can't protect herself. She should have tons of questions, but yet she asks none. Since she doesn't, the reader is as clueless as she is. The author makes no amends for this. She is constantly in danger and 99% of the time it's her fault. She doesn't care about ghouls, vampires, dragons or anything else besides her personal feelings.Now the story...The author just jumps right in and loses you at the beginning. You sort of have to find your way to the plot and even then you can't be sure. Caylee is Haden's mate. He has been in a platonic relationship with her for a year as her protector and guardian. He must protect her due to her mortal status until he can make her immortal. However due to a recent trauma he is trying to give her time before he has to kill her to give her immortality. Nice set up right? it could have been great but it's choppy and the flow isn't natural. When you see someone turn into a dragon, you should have questions.The character development is almost non existent. You will find out next to nothing about how the main characters know each other, how the villain plays into the story, where the fiance came from, why does she stay with her uncle, how old is she..etc.There are countless questions, 100 ft leaps in character development, and a jumbled plot. Happy reading:)