Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 28, 2013
The blurb of this book was so appealing and seemed somewhat edgy…I couldn’t wait to read it.  I’m not sure what I can say that won’t make me look like a prude or a buzz-kill but I finished reading this book because I had hopes it would get better.  There were fleeting moments that I was REALLY engaged but most of the time I found myself skimming some of the pages.This is what I struggled with…1. The intimate moments were plentiful but the dialogue didn’t connect with the actual act which made it feel forced.2. The characters were under developed making them seem one-dimensional.3. Coop is tough for me to describe but the best I can come up with is that he grew  a vagina relatively early on in the book.4. Mia, Coop’s love interest is barely in the story.5. The HEA seemed unrealistic and trust me, I can suspend my disbelief but even this was too much, even for me.  If you are going to write fiction…make me believe it.I love a good steamy read and I applaud authors that push the boundaries but it wouldn’t be fair for me to compare this book with others that I have read that are an A+ in the erotica genre and so I won’t.Like I always say, just because I wasn’t able to connect with the story…doesn’t mean that it couldn’t be your next obsession.