Review: Interesting premise and characters. Fraught with errors.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2013
The idea behind the book was cute and the execution of the Alphabet Dating was well handled. This was a difficult book to read. I counted 63 major grammatical, typographical and punctuation errors.For example:"Look" was almost always capitalized even in the middle of a sentence.Names too frequently ended in the "EE" sound: Rani, Yanni, Danni, Lenny, and sometimes changed in the course of the story."DANIELA"/Daniel"nephew's BAT Mitzvah"/Bar Mitzvah (Bat Mitzvah is for girls)."7.30am"/7:30 a.m. Time was frequently written incorrectly (may be a British thing).Sentences that should be two sentences."SCARING"/scarring"SILVER WEAR"/silverware