Review: good effort
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2014
The author shows some writing skill and will likely improve as he continues to study the craft. The storyline is a little tired, lacks tension, and is in need or better descriptive passages and word choices to frame and set the mood for horror. The author would do well to study the craft in depth. Voraciously read other horror writers and books that teach the genre.Keep at it.