Review: 10% story, 90% sex
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 6, 2014
So if you want a quickie with a blackmailing alpha billionaire, this isn't a bad one, but don't go in expecting any kind of real emotional connection between the two of them (although the author throws in a bunch of romantic talk at the end, even though it's all based on lust and there's been no indication that Kyle wants her other than for her body), or even any tension leading to the build up.  I prefer more build-up to the climax personally... all the story happens within the first 10% of the book, there's very little interaction between the characters and then BOOM...oh andSPOILER ALERTHe set her up.  And apparently ruined himself and his entire brand just to have her in his bed.  Which seems really stupid since he was all "I could smell you on the first day we met" (and yeah, he's not talking about her perfume), so it's not like he didn't know she was attracted to him.  That was the point when I decided that, even though the erotica wasn't bad, I wasn't going to be trying any of this author's other books because the plotline in this one pretty much was sucky cliches all the way through where there actually was any plot.