Review: Good but needs some work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2014
I really enjoyed this story.  It is intelligent sci-fi with an interesting plot and characters.It could really use some editing, especially towards the last few chapters where the lack of editing actually confuses the plot.I would prefer not to see multiple points of view in the same scene as it becomes tough to follow at times.  Also some of the minor back stories are a distraction.But it is a worthwhile story that most sci-fi fans can enjoy.