Review: Basic story has promise, but writing is overly simplistic and there are too many errors
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 28, 2013
The storyline has potential, but since it was so short, it felt very rushed.  There were also far too many errors - misspellings, verb tenses not agreeing, run-on sentences, etc.  The dialogue in particular needs work, as the characters come off very stiff.  Nice message about forgiveness buried in amongst all this, but still wouldn't recommend it.