Review: 4 1/2 stars for this little Hell raiser.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2013
This very short, well written story was an enjoyable diversion for the few minutes that it took to read it.  With negligible editing errors and excellent descriptive text, there is little to find fault with in this one except...there is no suspense, no mystery no clever twist which catches you off guard.  "Why not?", you might ask.  I'll just say, read the description AFTER you read the story if you are looking for a modicum of surprise.