Review: Fun read.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2013
Ms. Campbell, writes a good story. The quality is better than most of the kindle "freebies". I have an interest already in gaming and I was curious as to where she would go with the idea. This is a good introduction to her series.Positives - interesting concepts and storylineNegatives - there are many positions (weaver, designer, player, etc) that are mentioned but I felt could use more flesing out. I realize that maybe the author was advised to edit out some of the back story to move things along. Maybe these were left on the cutting room floor.