Review: Good but some of the characters actions are difficult to read about - spoilers
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2014
Spoilers: What I liked:  I liked that the H is protective, possessive and jealous when it come to the h.  He is not afraid to show his feelings including telling her that he loves her.  Also he is faithful, he is not with any other woman since meeting her. Also, I liked how he instantly loved the children, wanting to be part of the family.  The characters had good chemistry and the sex scenes were hot.I would have liked the book better if H was not a killer and criminal.  If he made money legally it was not really discussed.  The H killing the "bad" guys, really a rival gang, is described including the H removing h's former boyfriend's parts. Also the h was too violent in her reactions. The first time she meets the H she stabs him and leaves him bleeding in the streets, not giving him a chance to explain that he wanted to help her.  Also, while she feels remorseful afterwards she kills someone in a fit of rage and retribution.  I understand why she reacts the way she does but I still felt uneasy reading about it.  Also, some things were illogical. The H believing that the h gave birth 3 days prior but was underweight and showing no signs that she gave birth is ridiculous.  She did not even look or act tired.  Also, the baby still had her umbilical cord attached.  If it was h's baby then it would have been attached for 3 days.... not realistic.  There were a few noticeable grammar errors.  The book is part of a series and I have not decided whether I will read anymore books.