Review: Interesting Plot Twist
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
AA Pencil starts with a unique premise and reveals the plot with a nice twist at the end.  The way the clues are placed into the story along the way is also nicely done and I had an aha moment when certain revelations were made.  What kept this from being a 5-star book for me, and what I would like to have seen in the writing were some basic things. For example, better use of point of view would have made for a cleaner read and established the protagonist early on. Also, fewer adjectives would have been less distracting. Overall, an interesting story with some good plot twists.