Review: Great Story, Desparately Needs Editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 6, 2012
The story line in this book was fantastic. I was totally engrossed in the story, but thought it ended a bit too quickly for the major investigation that was going on.As many of you have said, the editing was horrible, in fact I think there was no editing done.  As a teacher I would not have accepted this writing from a grade 5 student.But as I mentioned, the story line was great, I loved the book and finished it.  She is a great writer, but get an editor.