Review: A Very Generous Two Stars....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 4, 2014
This short story had potential, so after reading the preview I thought "Why not for $0.99?" I should have walked away. This was disjointed and strange. I just couldn't get into the characters or the plot.The pop-star, Ebony, was not believable nor was her relationship with her guard Blake. This was missing the background to their relationship and I couldn't get past it. Then enters his buddy Walker who comes out of left field and apparently is a relationship guru and knows just how to fix all the tension between Ebony and Blake...And get this in just a few short days she falls in love with Walker but is still unsure of Blake even though he's been guarding her for years and knows her better, until he has sex with her....Strange.This was too short but it has the potential for more if it had more plot to it or if the threats she was receiving seemed real.  The threats really bother her immediately after they happen and then they're no big deal after that.  Emotionally this does not fly, because once your personal space has been violated there are residual issues that come up: anxiety, worry, fear that it could happen again at any moment. Something!All in all I won't be wasting my time on any more of these underdeveloped stories.