Review: An OK read
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 9, 2012
This is the story of Conner and Faelan.  Conner gives his girlfriend of six months a promise ring and Faelan starts itching and her skin turns silvery after she's been wearing it. It also gives her some other feeling of need, which I won't go into in my review.  I won't spoil the whole story by telling any more.This really did read like the opening to what could have been a novel had it been developed a little better.  There is one explicit scene between Conner and Faelan that just seems much too frantic & needy. The story just ends all of a sudden.  I would have given this 2.5 stars because it has a lot of potential.At the time I downloaded this to my kindle it was being offered free in the kindle book store, which in no way affected my review of this short story.