Review: Good Concept but Lousy Editing!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 23, 2012
The author had a very compelling story idea, and the dialogue was often natural and believable.  The heroin was loveable, and I could have truly enjoyed this book if the author had gotten professional help editing.  I just was not able to get past the butchered syntax, arrangement of narrative and obstacles in her story line!  There are reasons publishers and editors get paid, and all of those reasons are obvious in this self-published book.  The occasional printing or syntax error can happen in any publication, and most can be overlooked.  However, I have never seen so many run-on sentences, grammatical errors, misspelled words, miss-used words and seemingly endless supply of repeated syntax errors.  The fact that all of the characters were somehow reincarnated together into their same persona 300 years later, looking EXACTLY the same yet unknowingly still interacting with one another was totally unbelievable.  The author couldn't seem to decide whether to write a historical romance, supernatural romance, murder mystery, or sex romp.  I finished the book, but it was like watching a train wreck.