Review: Decent Story, But Pacing Problems and Lack of Editing Are Distracting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 9, 2011
I enjoyed the premise of this book. With better pacing and a few changes to make the plot more believable, this would have been a five-star review. Unfortunately, the story dragged on in some parts and didn't give enough detail in others. There were a significant number of spelling and typographical errors in the book. I don't mind a missing comma here or there, but sometimes these errors interrupted the story because I had to try to figure out what the author was trying to say. I had trouble believing part of the plot (which I won't mention here, as I don't want to spoil it for others), so that also contributed to my three-star rating.