Review: A Synopsis?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2013
The premise of this short story is intriguing, and the writing shows skill at rendering fantasy worlds. However, the content struck me as more of a synopsis for what could effectively become a much longer story. A lot of the short story is open-ended, and the resolution didn't feel complete. It was hard to connect to the main character since the story was so condensed and covered so much ground. The reader needs more detail and character interaction to truly feel like a part of the story world. That being said, the work of this author shows great potential that will continue to develop with more publications.