Review: Good but could be better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2013
I would really rate this a 3.5 for plot and substance.  It had so much potential that I thought could have been achieved.  I liked the characters and believe that there is a lot of hot alpha males that could have follow up books.  Sam was pretty solid and Chey was ok.  At times she and her BFF were a little ridiculous for their age.  While there were some antics that made me LOL, most of their behavior was suited more to teenagers than 25 year old women.  The most distracting thing to me during my reading was the awful format.  Different font size and type throughout the book.  One page would have small font, next page would have huge font and a different type of font.  Sometimes this occurred on the same page.  Grammatical errors also occurred frequently and words used out of context.  There were quite a few places that the descriptions were superfluous and seemed to be just filler.  I skipped over a lot of those paragraphs.  All things considered, I will check out the next book from this author.  I could tell the epilogue set the reader up for the next book featuring Gabe.