Review: Good Story; Poor Execution
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 5, 2013
This book had the potential to be a great read. But incredibly poor editing and too many "eureka" events that were unsupported by solid plot design took away from the story's strong points. I read the entire book because I was interested in finding out how the plot ended, but I was disappointed in the fact that there were too many unsupported plot twists, and was terribly frustrated by the spelling and grammar mistakes. Carson has great potential, but he'd better hire a book doctor for his future work. In fact, he should do a re-write of Foreign Deceit. In its present form, it discourages readers from buying more of his work.