Review: The worst ever editing and the story isn't much better
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 10, 2013
I am on Ch 15 bk one and had enough. I got this for free, if you paid for it ask for your money back. This book had additional material added TWICE (2009 and 2011) after first print in 2004. It makes the errors that much worse that no one caught them. Strike three.Two whole chapters are repeated (13 and 14), half the time you can't tell who is talking. One girl, Emma is engaged to a man who tried to win Vanessa and Emma's sister is engaged to the Hero's brother and no one has told her that her betrothed tried to win another woman. How ridiculous.The violent beginning should have clued me that this is one horrid mess of a tale. Plus using twenty words when five will do. People get up and leave a room twice.. now I ramble. Just not worth the stuggle to continue trying to read it. Wish a no star option was available.Further, I just re-read the description and I am insulted that this set of books was considered equal to Ms. Heyer. The raw violence and sex "yes, she panted, as she reached for his cravat..." would not be found in her books, I know since I own over 21 of them. Further, the description of book two states the girl would be better off dead! What kind of romance is this junk.Edited for a word error.