Review: Good Story - Better Editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2014
I would have given the story 5 stars, but as in Book One, there were a number of errors with missing words, wrong words, etc. The main error in this book is that in Book One, the girl that Jacob falls for in the Amish Community is named, Deborah. In Book Two, (this book) she is named, Dina. It was confusing at first. Despite that, the story keeps me reading.