Review: Story could have been okay except for all the errors
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 14, 2011
This looked like an easy read with a fairly predictable story.  The number of errors is so distracting that I find myself reading to look for errors instead of reading the story.Here are some examples:  #1 He "sent" the boy down inside the door.  #2  Knowing her father would "off" her funds and force her back home.  #3 Jack "put" squeezed her shoulder.  #4 If you'd spent less "----" worrying about your own mess of a love life.In this sentence Blevins talks to himself.  How can a proof writer miss that?  #5 Blevins placed fifty dollars on the table in ones, fives and tens.  "Make sure the waitress get twenty five percentage; she earned it", he told "Blevins" as he turns to leave."  In the next sentence Blevins pays the bill for Phelps yet Phelps is still at the table counting the money to pay the bill so who really paid the bill Phelps or Blevins.  This is where I stopped and said this is ridiculous.  I'm not even half way through the book.  I bought a second Paula Graves book but I won't be reading it or reading her again.