Review: Love the plot and the characters, but the more I read, the more it became more difficult to read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2014
I could not wait to read this book after reading "Collapse" -- the first book in this series.  I was not disappointed in the story, and am actually a little frightened at how much of this could actually become true!However, I am a leisure reader, and the grammatical and word usage errors become increasingly frequent, especially in the second half of the book.  This forced me to re-read some sentences more than a couple of times to figure out what the author *meant* to say.  At least on a subconscious level, my 'leisure reading' became 'proofreading', which really defeats the purpose!If I were grading this story as an instructor, I would have thrown it aside before finishing it and given it a failing grade.  Keep up the great story, but please have a few sets of eyes read the story before publishing it!