Review: PLEASE... 5 stars?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2013
I gave this 2 stars because someone actual built a story with a beginning, middle and end, I think (as I won't go there to find out).I dislike romance books that have "no" foreplay.  If you hit the reader in the face with the orgasm in the 1st few pages of the book, why waste their time with a badly told story with erratic character development afterwards?  NO, they weren't in bed at page 6, but she was already "enthralled".  And I'm left wondering why a 5 star book!  Kim Harrison-5 star books, Charles Dickens, Jane Ayre, "classics" - A sophisticated, educated, French, vampire, priest does not use "duh" while conversing. A well written character does not slip back and forth from mature, and worldly to pre-adolescent. I've have read so much of this in the characters of new authors I'm beginning to believe that only preteens write ebooks.