Review: Good idea for a story doesnt equal 5,4,3,2 stars
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 10, 2014
Okay, I agree with  one commonality of the reviews. "Good story". I can't believe reader's give this book 3 stars when it is riddled with mistakes. It is so evident when she stops writing and then comes back because she repeats herself over and over. That made her page count longer but ruined the storyline. The grammar and syntax are atrocious so much so that I just gave up trying to understand what she was writing. The book needed an editor or at the very least the author needed to 're read what she wrote.R