Review: Not GOOd
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2013
The dialogue in this book really messed it up. Am I supposed to believe that bikers, rockers and criminals speaking without using either contractions or slang? the language was so freaking proper that when one of the characters cursed it sounded stupid going with it. The author needs to read a bit more so that she can see how other authors create natural dialogue. contractions are a basic part of any normal person vocabulary therefore because she didn't utilize it when her characters spoke they seemed like people at a freaking tea party playing at being bad guys.