Review: Good paranormal romance
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2013
This book is written from a British voice, so I take that into account when I say that it still needs editing. The author changes verb tenses mid sentence, has silly typos and some really awkward sentences. The plot itself was decent, although I would have liked more depth and detail on the background of the heroine. The rest of the main characters could have used some more development also. I guess that would be my summation, less sex detail, more character development and plot detail. Otherwise, the bones of a good story are there.Heat factor hot.