Review: Lack of  Plot - Too Much Sex
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2012
My biggest issue with this story was the lack of clear plot. Take away the sexual situations and there isn't much left. I liked the cast of characters, but after a while, I wanted something to go wrong and it be harder to resolve, because that is more like real life. I do not think his behavior would be as accepted in church circles as portrayed in this book.As to structure, it is full of telling sentences and has multiple cases of head-hopping, often going from one point of view to the next within one paragraph. At first, I overlooked this because the dialogue was good and often very funny, but by the end of the novel, it became wearying. That said, the humor is the only reason I give it three stars. I laughed more than once.From a fiction-writing standpoint, it leaves much to be desired, so I hesitate to recommend it.