Review: silly and inconsistent
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2013
I thought this one was just silly.  I didn't dislike the story because it was short or underdeveloped.  That isn't the problem here.  I found the story well-developed for a short story and the conflict wasn't too complex.  Here I thought Genevieve to be silly and inconsistent as a character.  The romance wasn't believable and the situation Genevieve was in was...well...silly.  I wish I could go into more details but since my issue is with the plot and it's a short story, saying anything would give everything away.  Suffice it to say, Genevieve was not for me.