Review: James, you are a genius
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2012
James, in the online writers posse I've often heard you referred to as one of the standards of excellence. This is the first of your works that I've ever read (my genre' is Science Fiction) and they are right.I was hooked in from the first page. Your characters were hilariously drawn yet still totally believable. that is a killer combination. You made the catholic clerics and nuns very real, my wife grew up Catholic (12 years of Catholic school) and the figures you've drawn remind me of some of her stories of actual people in her life. Bravo!I literally didn't want put my kindle down till I finished. The only problem I saw was at the very end in your "wrapping it up" section. Your POV focus seemed to slip a bit. I had to go back a few times to figure who was talking and how it fit into the narrative; but my then I was thoroughly hooked into your narrative and your characters so I went back and puzzled it out.I highly recommend this as a fantastic read and can't wait for the next novelette in the series.Bravo.