Review: Rip off of JR Ward's Series
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 10, 2011
First lets get to the biggest point.. This is a childish copy right infringement of JR Ward's The Black Dagger Brotherhood.  This is the exact same story as the first of JR Ward's first book in the series only written in a childish manner. Blood lines, mates, previous betrothals, the change being painful, fangs growing in, the fact humans usually feel uneasy around the vampires.. EXACT same story.. so much that if this author made money JR Ward's publisher could sue.. as it stands to be free his publisher can take action against this author anyhow.The character admits to herself that she is a terrible flirt then manages to be astonished when someone she finds attracted to just walks away.  The writing is clearly written by someone with less life experience than the main character should have had at twenty-five. The Geez Louise phrase so could not been said more.  The descriptive words were at times repetitive of themselves, as if the author simply opened up word, and used a thesaurus to give descriptions yet repeated them one right after the other.. very redundant.  The immature behavior of the main character and the "sex" scene blatantly shows the authors lack of real life experience. Statements such as, "squeeze between people just standing about(Seriously?!);" shows exceptionally lack of experience in a club, yes people stand around, no people don't dance all the time.. they have to stop and drink some alcohol, which they don't normally do dancing around. I recall being 25, and if I could dress as a sexy vampire with "stiletto" shoes I would realize that two inches would put me on my toes and standing up on my toes was something I already was.. stiletto's are more than just high healed shoes; I would also have the self confidence to be that sexy, especially if she wore no panties.. the lack of confidence was unrealistic. The vocabulary of the main character went from being able to swear to being too much of a good girl and used phrases like Geez, this was just unbearable.  Add to this the author could not grasp the concept of verb tense usage..Due to the severe copy right infringement of this book I could not even rate it a one but alas I can not give it no stars despite it deserving such.  For a much better read of this exact same story, with more flushed out character, a much more flushed out story line, characters that are believable and an author that actually deserves to be read, check out JR Ward's Series, The Black Dagger Brotherhood.