Review: Really cute BDSM story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2013
The plot was a tried and true damsel in distress, running from the mob, takes a job on a ranch as a kinky and always available house keeper.A few scenes were damp panty worthy. The characters were likable, but a little undeveloped. I would have liked to know more about how Maria reconciled herself to her position. Some inner talks was provided but I think there should have been more.This author needs an editor. Spelling and grammar were fine, but paragraph structure was totally absent. Page after page was filled by one single very long paragraph. The rules of dialogue, new person speaking requires a new paragraph, were wholly absent. It was annoying to actually purchase a story that lacked simple structure.I hope the author continues to write. She has a dirty mind I can respect, and the sex scenes were hot, but could have been hotter. With a bit more spit and polish, this could have been a very nice erotic read.