Review: Blah
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2014
The first red flag with this story is on the first page, where the author bothers to point out that it is an “unedited” story.  Why would you do that?  It feels like a lack of respect, especially when the majority of the errors in this story are so basic that you wouldn’t even need a professional editor to catch them.Other than the terrible editing, this story is your basic “alpha woos his reluctant fated mate” story, with the slight twist of his fated mate being a werecougar rather than a werewolf.  There is a plot, but it comes in a distant second place to the sex scenes.  It’s strictly okay, but the slapdash editing makes this one to avoid.