Review: A very good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
This a very good story, although at times the flow of action becomes bogged down in lengthy descriiptions.  The author is describing a very detailed environment, but at times I'd rather maintain the momentum being developed through the characters.  That being stated, it is still a very good story.  With a little better editing of the occasional obvious mistakes and better flow of action it could be 5 stars.  Have patience with the slow spots and you'll be rewarded with a very good story.