Review: Definitely written for a very small niche audience....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2013
....as in only folks in the UK metropolitan areas. This was a tough slog to get through with multiple drawbacks, most of which might have been remedied by a decent editor and serious proofreading. The basic storyline was well thought out and might have been enough to hold my attention but the execution, however, was abysmal and detracted from the basic structure of the story. Seriously scrambled English in spelling, phrasing and grammar--and I'm NOT referring to the Indian patois Samina spouts; slang and terminology known only to those residents of the aforementioned UK metro areas--if you are going to self-publish on Amazon, please recognize that you may be read in corners of the world unfamiliar with British slang/jargon---WHAT does "innit" mean?; sexual phrasing and terminology that is crude at best and so far from "erotic" as to be laughable--most sexual content sounded more like a deviant Gregorian chant: same monotonous, repetitious cadence going on and on....and on..... Might be interesting to re-read if it were cleaned up, the language deficiencies un-muddled and a bit more heat added to the mix.