Review: The first poem/prose/story had big tears running down my face!!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2013
FIRST POEM:In my time I have written about 300 poems. In fact when I need to convery something really emotional as a writer I am forced to write poetry. Poetry is the language of the heart and the emotion~ well for me it is. I am not a big fan of traditional poetry and famous poets as in english classes at school I could not understand the big words, and the hidden messages and themes that had mystery in them.This author is like me. She simply opens her heart up and starts to type and as fast as she types her inspiration flows. This is not a rhyming poem "You Where There", it is a simple loving poem of adoration between a child/daughter and her mother. I read and was drawn in right away and watched as the poem/prose/story took me though 30 years of the person life or more, and by the end of the story big fat tears were running down my cheeks.I got this poem and book for 99 cents on Kindle but I would pay someone $10 for it. It was priceless written by a woman and mother who has strong faith in God.Loved it, the first poem was worth my 99 cents and I am sure that I would write two long of a review if I was to review the whole book.If you can't afford it, miss a movie and then come back and buy it!SECOND POEMOh, I just read the second poem/prose/story and wow wow wow. There is a God, and He does the impossible...and the love of a mother and her worst fears coming upon her and gods intervention had tears flowing again. I am having some pretty big things happening with my third book coming out in a few weeks and so I am quite emotional today, but even on another day these poems would really impress me. This book would make a perfect gift to a daughter or a mother or any woman or sensitive new age/Christian guy like me. I swear she is making me into a cry baby today!THIRD POEM:Tears again, oh how trajic. How does one go on when this happens to a mother!FOURTH POEM:Every child needs a mother like this and it is true that there could be no better mother's day present than this!FIFTH POEM:What can I say...my brother beat me up he was so angry with me coming home from hospital. My mother couldn't ever leave me alone with him  with me as i was always hurt by him. Now he is my best friend and he is  hurting real bad fresh from a breakdown and a new mental illness and he is trying to learn how to cope with it. I have had his mental illness for 20 years now and it hurts me so bad to see him in pain that I know only too well. It is true, strong emotions need poetry no matter what that other reviwer says about how you write! Oh BIG tears again!SIXTH POEMLoud chest heaving sobs. Large wracking sobs. It was this same experience for me that drove me into the arms of jesus!SEVENTH POEM:Praying for you my sweet author. There was a time I was going to piss on my fathers grave while people were throwing the flowers. I lived for the day and the shock in peoples eyes when I showed them what I thought of my father and what he put me through. All is forgiven now. A prophet came and told my dad he was a whitewashed tomb and told him to read the book of proverbs once a month, one proverb a day. It says an angry man is a fool about ten times in that book. My father read he was a fool about a hundred times before he broke, repented changed and become a nice man. I have hope for you and I am praying for you!EIGHTH POEMLot of wisdom in these words!NINTH POEMSo sweet!TENTH POEMIt is so sad people have to go through pain like ours!Ten is a good number to stop on. This review is getting a bit like an essay. I failed english and it was my favorite subject. This might not get the most votes this review, but you as an author deserved to hear the truth. And you as readers, if this has not convinced you well, you are hard to convince! lolLove alwaysMatthew Robert PayneAuthor of "The parables of Jesus Made Simple" 222 pages simply explaining the stories of Jesus also for 99 cents!