Review: Good storyline, atrocious grammar
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2014
I can only echo previous reviewers' comments about this author's command of the English language.  Do they not teach grammar anymore in schools, or was this author just asleep at the time?  Why would I continue reading such badly written stuff?  Because the storyline was essentially worthwhile and engaging.  This in itself should encourage the author to get an editor, even if only some friend who did not sleep through their English lessons.  However, I don't think I can stand any more editions of this story in its present condition, so I will not be purchasing further episodes in the series.