Review: Sexually inhibited characters in poorly structured, amateur writing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2012
Synopsis: "Once again, her body twitched as she felt Sarah's warm hand within, moving in and out, driving her wild."Just as well Sarah was copacetic or I would be really ticked off at spending my money on yet more amateur (poorly punctuated, badly structured, unedited), sexually inhibited (and otherwise) completely implausible, boring lesfic schtickuff... Sheesh.I didn't think I could finish it... but for a while I skimmed, looking for bits about Sarah. Well, that got old pretty fast, YAWN - this boring book went on and on forever and ever amen and they all lived happily after the moon in June and daffodils everywhere, bla, bla, bla.What really irritates me is that I bought it on the basis of all the good reviews of this and other 'novels' by the award-winning (!!! Unbelievable!) Sweeney. We surely do set the bar low...