Review: Deserves an "A" for effort
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2013
So many critics out there, you gotta wonder why people read fantasy story's and then chastise the author for lack of realism.Granted, there were a lot of grammar issues throughout the book, some harder to get over than others. But this is where the readers imagination needs to step in and fill in the gaps.The writing was a bit juvenile in parts, certainly. But you really have to give the writer props for making the decision to write a story (Which is not something you can do in a day), finish it and publish it, and then offer it to the public free of charge. So a lot of the "one star, bad reviews" should not be taken too seriously. Apparently there are people out there that think that something they get for nothing should be of the highest quality. Shameless really, because the story was original and very good, generally speaking. I would recommend it.