Review: The love triangles got to be ridiculous at times and I ...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
At times during this series I wanted to slap everybody!  The love triangles got to be ridiculous at times and I just felt like Kenneth and Nicole went through a lot of unnecessary drama to arrive at a happy place.  The lack of communication and trust is what hindered them.  I hated Joshua and his interfering in their relationship and a lot of times Kenneth appeared very weak.  He had too much going for himself to allow so called friends to mess up his relationship for so long with Nicole.  I must say she was more of a good person than me because I don't know that I would've endured all she did and stayed anyway!  As far as the editing, Lena you must get a reputable editor to edit your work.  There were so many errors in these 4 novels that at one point I didn't think I could finish.  In order for me to continue purchasing your work you must correct all of these errors.  At one point in the book the author is referring to Jasmine and Patrice but puts Jasmine and Nicole?????  Many grammatical errors as well just poor editing.  I would've given a higher rating but editing is very important to me and this one really missed the mark!