Review: TERRIFIC SHORT LOVE STORY!!!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 12 31, 2013
Well I've read your story Just between Us and I think it is terrific.It's too short of course, I would've like to keep reading to find out more about Sam and Ryan. But it was truly a terrific story.What I liked about it was your character profiles were outstanding. We knew what they both did for a living and why they couldn't spend a lot of time together. But also if they did get together how time spent away wouldn't be a problem. Or at least the impression I hadThe insta-wet moments were the best I have ever seen written. You put the reader right in the moment with them. The description and length were perfect. For the car scene and the bedroom scene. Both were just what they were suppose to be hot, hot, HOT!It really was a wonderful story as written but I hate to see a great story end.Thank you for letting me read it. It really was a treat for me. Anytime you need a reader let me know I will be happy to read anything you write.