Review: The Worst Thing I've Read on My Kindle So Far. . .
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 13, 2011
unfortunately, it was also the first thing.  I was still in the process of reading "regular" books when I got my Kindle and was eager to start something.  This short story seemed to fit the bill - and it was free!!  I can see now why it was free.Terrible.  No story or character development, no background, ambience or setting.  It never gets off the ground before it just ends. Not a creepy concept at all, nothing scary, nothing believable, nothing worthwhile here.  If Mr. Scribner had taken a little time to develop some plot, you could almost get to where you dislike the parental characters, but instead you are just left with a big "WHY?"WHY does this story exist at all?  Love my Kindle, but will definitely be leery of the free stuff from now on. . .