Review: Needs Work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2013
I thought this could be a good series but I think it's too late.  In every urban fantasy setting there are differences.  The difference here is that the werewolves are a mess.  In book one the author went out of her way to point out how March couldn't have a normal life because of the rage.  Well that was a big lie.  March is no angrier than any teenage girl.  For being a werewolf March has no wolf side.  No predatory instincts.  She is a victim bumbling about in a no win situation.  The two times March gets angry she should have been fueled by rage.  She wasn't even close.Some parts of this book are skippable and others are laughable.  At one point March invades a feral wolf's territory.  So what does it do?  It shreds her clothes.  Did nobody proofread this book?  The story itself is bad.  It drags and has no point.  The main plot of this book were the foster parents. Who were so horrible the parts with them in it were unreadable.  There is no direction and yes March is 15, she's really naive.  Just doing stupid thing after stupid thing.  I will have to read reviews of the future books to see if things get better.  It's hard to read about a helpless werewolf.