Review: Should have kept going with it. Could have been great
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 15, 2011
I have to say, I have mixed feelings about this short. Although it initialy starts out interesting, it fades in and out as the story progresses.I would have liked to have seen a little more character developement, both in prisoner 392 and the other main characters. The warden would have been a great guy to spend more time on, but alas it was not to be.I really liked the writing style of this author though. It had great flow and the premise of the book was great. How he made such a narrow subject matter so interesting, shows what a great writer he is.I was a little disappointed in the ending, and thats what put me off the story. It seemed to be a rehash of a lot of other tales. The person wakes up. Its always an easy out ,for a writer. Tired of writing it? Just say the person was dreaming, and bam, the story is over. I think he could have made this into a great piece, but as is, its just okay.I will say for 99cents, you really do get a great deal.