Review: Good storytelling, but desperately needs an editor
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 10, 2012
Please, please, PLEASE get an editor! Preferably one who knows the difference between to and too, between were and we're, and that plurals aren't plural's. Some familiarity with basic punctuation would be good too.The story was mostly fine, but Tor's incessant angst and self-pity has become tiresome. At one point I thought he was going to grow up and start dealing with things, but no, a few chapters later he's back to being pathetic.I could live with that - after all, he's still only seventeen, and he has several more books in which to grow up, but I just can't handle the truly amateurish quality of the book.  Orange Cat Publishing should be ashamed of themselves for releasing the book in this state. I won't be buying any more in the series, purely because it's so badly produced.