Review: Enough for Me.....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2014
Nico saves Tania from her abusive mother only to subject her to more.Editing needed...far too many exclamation points used throughout this whole story. For me an exclamation point is used when one is excited or shouting ...at least that's what I learned in third or fourth grade.Exclamation point...an important expressive tool THAT CAN EASILY LOSE ITS EFFECT THROUGH OVERUSE. Never use one if another punctuation mark would be just as effective.The story that was being conveyed was okay.....improper use of punctuation (!) took away from it for me....It seemed as though the characters were overly excited about everything or were shouting all the time.2.75