Review: 4 stars for story 2.5 for writing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2012
This was an engaging ghost story with page-turning potential. I'd say it's in the Young Adult genre for its ultra-clean handling of the romance and simplistic vocabulary.  Although I'm not a romance fan, that's not the reason for the three stars.  There are so many great, evocative adjectives out there, and constantly substituting nouns ending in -ness and -ation is jarring and detracts from the mood that the author is trying to create.  Even YA readers will recognize the root word if you use the adjective properly.  On the other hand, it's mostly (but not completely) free of the spelling, punctuation, and syntactical errors that are rife in Kindle freebies and almost-freebies.  I'd love for someone to get their hands on the story and bring it to life!