Review: I was happy because it’s 3rd person.  Good for sex.  Average for story.  Bad due to jumping around in time.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 19, 2014
I enjoyed the two main characters: kick-ass Lilli and hunky smart motorcycle gang leader Isaac.There’s a lot of sex.  Most of it is rough and wild with pain.  But it’s not abusive or BDSM.  If you’re in the mood for sex, I think it’s good.  For me, I wanted more story and NOT to have a stupid/careless action during the main crisis.There were two stories.  1.  Lilli arrives in a small town on a mission to kill someone.  2.  A big city drug lord is planning to move into the area and eliminate/kill all competition which includes Isaac’s motorcycle club.  At the end, story 1 is resolved, but story 2 is cliffy - to be continued.  The cliffhanger was not bad because not much time was spent on story 2.  It was background set up for the next book.As to story 1:  I liked the relationship and several things they did.  And there was a happy ending, but it was not a fulfilling feeling.  Isaac did something stupid/careless which caused a problem for Lilli’s mission.  I did not get to enjoy Lilli’s kick-ass abilities.  That was the main thing in my mind after the book.I hated the jumping back and forth in time.  The author interrupted the main story several times to tell the back story about Lilli - about her parents, what she did in the army, etc.  I would have preferred hearing that entire story first, all in one piece, except for the one part about why she needed to kill someone.  That one part could have been done later.I wanted the author to clarify what work Lilli was doing.  She would get an email giving her a project.  She would spend hours on the computer.  Then she would email her results to someone.  I wanted to know what she was doing.  I don’t think it was programming or hacking.  I am guessing she did searching or maybe translations since she spoke several languages?The main business of the motorcycle club was transporting meth into midwest cities.  This provided money for the club to support local businesses and residents.  I do not encourage this, but I didn’t mind it as a plot.  It was something different.DATA:Narrative mode: 3rd person.  Kindle count length: 4,386 (252 pages).  Swearing language: strong including religious swear words.  Sexual language: strong.  Number of sex scenes: about 13 (includes rear door activity).  Setting: current day Signal Bend, Missouri.  Copyright: 2013.  Genre: contemporary romance with some suspense, motorcycle.