Review: I've lost interest
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2014
I don't do a recap of the story in my reviews. Just opinions.After reading the first book I decided to give the second one a try despite the grammar and vocabulary errors in both books. The characters were starting to get formed in Book 1 and seemed interesting enough to want to see how they developed. Sadly they don't. People from history or legend was the back story for most of the characters, and yet it didn't contribute to building the readers feeling of connection with them. They felt flat. If anything, it made you wonder why all these infamous people were chosen and then a nobody was picked to join them. She didn't fit.The main character is ridiculous---immature and not smart enough to be a woman I cared about. The instant love story made no sense.  A woman who was abused since childhood would have a few trust and intimacy issues to work through. Her ridiculous back/forth of "He's a Great Guy. He did bad things, he's a Bad Guy. No, he's Good", was tedious. They were all bad--did bad things. That's how they became Hellhounds! The world building was spotty. After 2 books I still had no idea what the house they lived in really looked like or where they lived. Good idea for a story, but not enough solid material to support more than 2-3 stars.