Review: Engrossing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 22, 2011
I liked this one, and my only complaint really is the language was sometimes oddly stilted; something about the dialogue often didn't seem very authentic. The story was interesting and kept me reading ... it was sometimes hard to figure out what Hunter saw in Mark. Hunter's inner world could have been conveyed more fully. But the setting and the plot and the bird background; all very interesting. And the writing was well done (other than that dialogue issue); I don't think I caught any typos.