Review: Wanted to love it, but....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 9, 2013
I wanted to love this story. First off, I traveled to Italy for a 17 day tour about 10 years ago. It was the best time of my life.This story does not do justice to the country.Second, the story in itself is laughable. I couldn't get into the characters emotions and it was so fast paced I kept wondering if my kindle skipped downloading a few chapters.Third, there were a good amount of editing and typographical errors. Some made me re-read sentences. That's annoying.Fourth, the ending. First off Brianna complains that she can't do a relationship LITERALLY pages from the end of the book. The next thing I know she's boarding the ferry and heading back to Tom. There was no explanation of her change of heart. Just she gets a text from her employer and skip to a few pages on Tom and then she shows up. Did my Kindle misquote? Did I skip an entire chapter? I don't know.I did finish the story, I hate leaving things unfinished. But this story was a chore to get through. The romance was just meh and the plot holes were so large the author didn't even bother trying to fill them in. I felt as if this story had more depth it would've been more a novel and not a novella and a little more well rounded.All in all,  I wish I could give this story a higher star rating, I hate leaving negative reviews, but I can't. At $2.99 I feel it was a waste of money. And this is the first time Entangled Publishing has led me astray.