Review: Not believable
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 30, 2012
I had a very hard time believing the reactions to all of this from Heather. I don't believe that someone with her intelligence and personality type would blindly accept so much, especially being an attorney (not reading the contract first - GEEZ). I lost respect for her for not walking away when it was clearly easy to see that Mark, a major jerk, did nothing for her but took so much... and she let him. The writing is not bad other than the strangeness of all of the acceptance of this, on her part and some of the others. I can't see her putting up with so many friends turning on her either. I've read some books from other authors that involved BDSM and they at least had believable characters with believable reactions. This was just too much and just not good enough for me. The author needs to learn how to build better characters who are more true to their personality types.