Review: What the heck?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2014
This is actually not a bad story. I even read book one and two so far simply because of the story, but geez, please dear author learn how to spell, punctuate properly, and learn the true definition of a word before using it!!!  Almost every page or so there are improperly used words, for example, than when should be then, concave rather than cave, wither when should be writhe, omission rather than admission, you get the idea. It wasn't just once or twice. It was consistently throughout both books. It just takes so much away from the story and frustrates me as a reader. And I didn't even mention the places where entire words are omitted from a sentence or where the same word is used twice, one right after another. Just show some pride in your work please. I will finish this series, but then it's buh-bye to this author.