Review: Could not finish
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 2, 2014
I have seen the good reviews and it puzzles me! So, being in the minority, here goes: This book had great potential but got bogged down in two adult cops playing out a middle school, sappy, overdone romance.  This distracted from and ruined a good story.  I grew so sick of the two cops acting like 6th graders that I stopped reading.  The author went back and forth with these two and therefore destroyed the story.  It  is a terrible insult to the men and women of our security forces.  I was very disappointed.  It also needed editing.  Words were missing, and the book did not flow at all.  Now if  you like adults acting like middle schools kids, then you will like this book.I am more interesting in a good good guy, bad guy story and it's okay if there is a behind the scenes romance going on.  What I dislike is the two acting like middle school kids.  And another puzzling aspect of this book was Agent Brooks, who was supposed to be in charge. But he could not make up his mind when giving orders.  One minute he would be rude and hateful to Hazel and the next giving her permission to continue investigating.