Review: dont bother
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2012
I downloaded this book because I thought it sounded interesting and it fit my budget, free.  This is the most disappointed I have ever been with any book I have ever been with any book I downloaded on my kindle.  It is filled with inplausable events(really, two sixty year olds that barely talked in high school, have not seen each other in forty years get it on with in a couple of hours of meeting back up.  the police hot on the trail of a serial killer know the next victim and decide to eliminate the police protection to one cop.  I mean I am willing to suspend my disbelief in a lot of books, but there was just way too much the author asked me to do in this book.  character development was non existant.  the author works under the delusion telling me what they have done and what they are doing is character development.  We want to read what is not there and it takes a delicate hand, which the author lacks.i know this was free so i should not complain, but this is a reveiw andothers want to know if they should waste their time(thats for you bob who felt the need to respond in a rather pissy way)  and speaking of that I also read the dark carnival before this not knowing it was by the same author.  I wrote a review pretty much saying the same thing I did here.  I was the first one since september to reveiw that book.  THE NEXT DAY was checking to see if mine posted and there above my reveiw was a glowing review of the book that was pretty much a defensive response to my reveiw.  coencidence(sp), i think not.learn from reveiwers.  you have great ideas.  i do not think anyone is going to deny that fact.  work on making it more believable and your characters more than prototypes and you will really have something.