Review: Hello on heelz
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2014
this would have been one heck of a story if somebody would have edited the book... at times the story didn't make no since and u were confused abt who was talking at other times there was just so many misspelled words.. the storyline was great except the part with the lions. I mean that so unrealistic I couldn't even believe the author put it in the damn story... also I do understand why the author always had to describe what the characters were wearing in every part of book. WE GOT IT THEY HAD MONEY. THAT became very annoying... hopefully the next part be well edited, because I would like to know what happens next..like I said the story is great