Review: Seriously in need of editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 25, 2013
I try to finish every book I read in this genre, to give it a chance. It was hard to do with this one for several reasons. First, the premise wasn't very plausible to me. I try to overlook that, because as an erotic author myself, I know how difficult it is to get characters into a situation that requires lots of hot sex. So I would have been ok with that.However, the mechanical errors made it almost unreadable. It's been a few weeks since I read it, but I remember being very annoyed that the words "so" and "such" modified all sorts of concepts, without any "that" to follow up. It was very distracting, so much so that (see how you use that phrasing?) I began counting the instances.I hate to harshly criticize another indie author. I know how difficult it is to break into self-publishing on a shoestring, and I know the perils of editing your own stuff instead of hiring it done to save money when you haven't made any yet. I would suggest, however, that this author spring for it.