Review: Needed Work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2013
I don't usually write reviews unless I immensely enjoyed the book (5 stars) or it was so bad I wanted to cry (1 star).  In this case, I'm being extremely generous to the author by giving this book 2 stars.  The storyline was good, or it would have been if the book had proper editing.  There were so many spelling & grammatical errors, it was very hard to read.  A lot of the words didn't make sense.  For instance, several times (too many, actually) one of the characters would intend to say "Come on, Katie...", but instead it read "Common Katie..."I also felt that I was reading a third grade book.  Another instance would be.... "They touched pinkies....and she liked it."  (Dick & Jane, anyone?)  For an adult book, it left a lot to be desired.It's really a shame because the story had potential, up until the end where it was so far-fetched I just skimmed the last 10 pages, just to end it & put me out of my misery.Unfortunately, I won't be buying any more books from this author.  Don't waste your money on this one.