Review: Typical Debut
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 27, 2013
The saving grace of this novel was the plot. The story by itself was actually very interesting. Unfortunately everything else was rather lacking. The characters were two dimensional and the writing was actually pretty terrible. There were huge gaps in the time-line of the plot. The prose could have been written by a talented high-schooler. The dialogue left much to be desired. In my opinion, this author can craft a decent story, but needs a good editor or writing club to proofread and make corrections. Grammatically, the book is sound, but stylistically, this author has a lot to learn. Buy it if you find it for free.