Review: Jaxyn Is Annoying and Not Likable
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2014
The description of the book was good enough to make me want to get the sample sent to me. The sample was good enough to make me want to buy the book.....an herein lies the problem. This book was just......correction JAXYN was just ANNOYING!!!!! The book will lead you to believe that she is strong and all the other good things that allows you to like the main character. Well that isn't in the case with Jaxyn she was ANYTHING but strong! She is annoying, weak, and just down right feeble! Now Kyden is the typical man whore that all "bad" boys are in books. Simply put this book is your typical "innocent girl bad man whore guy" book about but not typically written in the correct way. The love story and connection between Jaxyn and Kyden isn't even remotely believable! (Here comes an exaggeration but it isn't completely off from the truth) she met Kyden on Monday, and by Wed she is just soooo much in love with him that she is breathing for the both of them.Like really?! How can she love him when she doesn't know anything about him and he hasn't done anything love worthy? He treated her horribly and anytime they had a disagreement or argued he would run away! Being the man whore he is and when he would return she would discard her tears and hurt JUST like that! She forgave him and then went back to being "in love" with him and that was annoying to me. Kyden was continuously bad to Jaxyn and she just continued to take him back. Then towards the end it's written all nicely and neatly in a bow with him being this "wonderful" guy that we're suppose to love. In my opinion skip this book it isn't all that great and you can find better. There were other details in book that didn't add up like Jaxyn's father being this big time mob guy and kills people. But he couldn't keep his eyes on the one guy that hurt Jaxyn as badly as he did.I did like the element of Jaxyn's niece being the little sweet thing she was and having the guys on the floor with her. But other than that....oh! The misinformation about Spade and Ace and their military background didn't add up with the timeframe. Also, it wasn't realistic and I'm saying this because I have a brother in the military that currently does what Spade and Ace did. He has done two tours and is currently on his third and the information written about Ace and Spade isn't again realistic. Moving on to how hard Jaxyn was rooting for Bas'(her best friend) relationship with his bish of a girlfriend, who if she were really his friend wouldn't want Bas with her because she was horrible. But then what really got me was what the truth was behind WHY Kyden is the way he was. The reasoning is soooooooooooooo freaking weak that I threw my Kindle (on the bed of course but still I threw it). The reason given wasn't even a good one! It wasn't traumatic enough to explain why he is the way he is, not even close to an justification. Overall I say don't get this book it isn't properly developed and the content aren't really all that great with reasonable enough explanation for actions.