Review: Maybe It's Me
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 8, 2014
I read all the glowing reviews before buying the download.  I re-read the reviews at 20% of the story and again at 80%.  I wasn't charmed by the author's style. I failed to feel any suspense or horror. At the end I was more confused than fulfilled.  No explanation of Whitestone's true nature other than a thoroughly nasty bloke. Why does he enslave his lovers with a portion? Why did he commit suicide? Alphonse throws off Lucinda only to rescue her with the submissive Miranda who becomes a determined strong heroine. Why does the family hire Serena to want her to go away; no wait, come back, no go away, no come back.  Why does the child get headaches based on distance from the house?  Why is she such a little s*** at a child's birthday party?  Why is one brother a thief?  Sex with ghosts? Sex with ghosts that result in pregnancy??  And I have no clue about Arabella and Edward.  I was happy to see THE END even with so many questions left unanswered.  The room beyond?  Which room?  Beyond what?