Review: It has potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 29, 2014
First, this really bugged me and nearly caused me to miss half the story: You get the first chapter, then an excerpt from a completely different book.This story has potential. It really does. But just when it starts to get interesting, and begins to make sense, it's over. I gave it three stars because the story itself is good, but it's a good beginning of a book.Hopefully the author will finish it one day.