Review: Interesting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2014
This is definitely an original story idea. I am a firm believer in mind over matter, so accepting the premise of this story was relatively easy for me and it was mildly intriguing.There were some POV issues for me. It switches between characters in an almost first person POV, but switches frequently between first and third person, and also jumps between characters heads a lot. There were also several typographical/grammatical errors, not so many that they impeded the flow of the story, but more than I find acceptable in a story of this length.