Review: A good premise
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 20, 2013
A nicely unusual plot for a sci-fi story.  It was well thought out, with characters that developed well that you cared about.  I was actually disappointed when it finished.  There were several grammatical errors such as wrongly placed apostrophes and incorrect words,  it not enough to stop me reading.  I definitely recommend this-it just needs some editing.