Review: Mixed bag
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 26, 2013
I liked the plot and background to this story, it was unique and entertaining. However, i felt the writing style somewhat lacked. The dialogue was dry and unconvincing at it's best and made me roll my eyes and skim at its worst. The narrative lacked description and had a tendency to gloss over large amounts of time and action. I feel that this could have been more engaging than it was if only the author had taken more time and the writer's golden rule to heart: show, don't tell.