Review: Reads like a first draft
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 8, 2013
This book was borrowed from the kindle lending library and I gave it a chance after reading the reviews and the mentions of the story needing to be edited. I stopped reading in the middle of the first chapter because it reads more like a first draft than a finished book and it detracted from the story. This story would benefit greatly if the author would find a couple of BETA readers to help him flesh out the story as well as correct the continuity issues, poor sentence structure and lack of punctuation.I'd give this book another try if the author made the needed corrections.