Review: Could have been a good story, but wasn't. Crying for editing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2013
This book has potential, but the poor grammar, spelling, and incorrect word usage just subtracted too much from the tale. If one writes about horses, one should really learn to spell reins (not reigns). The repeated misuse of lie/lay/lain/laid was disheartening. I didn't keep a list but surely a competent editor could locate fails such as these:"'Forty years?' She exasperated." "Luke felt the bottom of his heart drop from beneath him." "Crouching on his HIND LEGS..." Huh??The book was free for me, but I see it is being offered now for a price. If these types of things don't bother you, you might enjoy the story.