Review: Juvenile conversations and inner dialogue.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2014
I enjoyed the concept; Romeo and Juliet and trying to figure out if they loved each other enough to make it work due to different backgrounds. Nice story; totally juvenile dialogues and conversations. I found it incredible distasteful the constant references to "bitches" and "pussy".I do not think that a person can read a MC book without those references; however, it becomes tedious and tiresome to constantly read these references either through conversations or internal dialogue. Are these characters adults with some intelligence?  In addition, why is it that female writers need to write in such a way to convey a particular lifestyle?  Being alpha, badass and hot does not mean that they need to be mental midgets and if the author believes that is the case, I do not need to spend my money to buy their book.  Are these terms used, of course; however, excessive use crosses that line of cute and sexy to moron which totally detracts from the enjoyment of the story.I like the style of this  author, minus the excessive use of certain words, and will check out her next book to see if this is her style.  By the way, I hope that the author is not planning a book on Lexi.....do not think that the character can be redeemed.....talk about a total skank.