Review: I absolutely LOVED this story.  The EDITING, however, leaves a lot to be desired!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2014
This is a great story.  The characters are engaging; I can see them in my head.  My mind kept wondering which actors would play each character the best. It was just very difficult reading due to lack of punctuation marks and misspelled words.  Run-on sentences are one thing.  Run-on sentences with sections that needed commas made me have to re-read them a couple times to understand.  Add in words such as "you're" and "your" compounds the confusion.  But all that is easier to deal with than the edited sentences where words were either removed or added into the sentence without altering the sentence to make sense is ridiculous!I am going to read the sequel to this book but I will think hard on purchasing anything else from this publisher/editor.