Review: Very shallow grave
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 14, 2012
The story has a good concept behind it.  It is very shallow.  The characters and situations are not explained in much depth at all.  I think that the story has promise but as I think on it after reading I have so many unanswered questions.  The survivors went to the store to get food.  Ok, what kind of food, what did you find and what did you take?  Then the survivors got bullets.  Ok, bullets, was it for the guns?  Just no detail at all.  I recognize that the apocalypse is told from the perspective of a woman but I am sure that there are deeper thoughts in there.  Not really interested in reading the follow up.