Review: Repetitive
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2013
The reviews of this book were intriguing so I paid the 7.99 ridiculous price but like I wrote I was  intrigued. The premise of the book is actually good. A young virginal innocent girl writing her elicit  fantasies on the web under a false name. Unfortunaley for Devan she has a crazed fan Conrad who takes it upon himself to reenact her fantasies with her. He kidnaps her and emotionally terrifies her and excites her. Devan escapes Conrad finds a cabin in the woods. She stays there for refuge and Vaughn the owner and popular muscian comes back sees her and determines that she is a crazed fan. Up to this point the story is good  but then Conrad comes back and terrifies and sexually enthralls them both. After awhile the story got so repetive how many times can you act out a sex scene. I wanted to delve more into the story why was Conrad this way and why did he think it was okay to kidnap Devan and by extension kidnap Vaughn. The reader does get great insight into Devan and Vaughn but Conrad was the mastermind of abduction and we learn nothing about him. Varlan Krylon has created an interesting story very well written just too long causing it to be too repetive.