Review: it's OK
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2014
I was offered to read this book and review it by the author for an honest  review in exchange for the rest of the series. Well here goes nothong. First thing is they use each others names too much for my liking. Certain words should be abreviated (like I am & I have). The story had a good setting however the story was not written by a seasoned writer. You do have potential for better writing, I would love to read the rest of the story just to see how you have grown as an author. Thanks