Review: Format Disaster!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 7, 2013
This isn't so much a review of the story - but the format it's written in which is downright unreadable. I had to quit 20% in and it's sad because the story had my attention. However the use of periods instead of commas and the annoying line/header placed somewhere in the middle of EVERY page made reading a chore instead of entertainment. It doesn't look as if I'm the only reader taking issue with this and since the is the First book if the series it looks like this would've been addressed/updated in order to encourage readers to continue the series. As it is, I have no intention of trying anything else in this series. Sadly what appears to be a good story suffers due to formatting snafus.  IF this issue was fixed / updated, I would definitely return to this story because I did enjoy what I read before the editing annoyance got to me. Seems to me the publisher/author would push to have their first book of series - you know, the one where the series characters are established, where the seeds of interest are sown to launch to the next book in the series.....*shrugs*