Review: Sweet but stilted
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 13, 2014
I liked this story, but I wanted to like it more. The flow of the dialogue was a little stilted and rushed. I got the emotion, but it either came too quickly or just didn't feel natural. The storyline was good, although a bit predictable. I liked the characters and while I did enjoy the read, I felt like it could have done with a little editing and maybe just smoothing out.