Review: Great story that needs proof reading
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2013
Very engaging story.  The premise was great, if a bit bleak, and the worlds created are unique and well depicted.  I very much enjoyed the thoughtful, and thought-provoking, quotes at the beginning of each chapter.  The author is a bit of a philosopher, and that depth shows through most of the story.  Where the story needs help is in proof reading.  There are lots of typos and missing words (most likely due to Amazon formatting), and attention to these details would improve an already excellent book.