Review: too many mistakes
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 20, 2014
sorry, but i just couldn't get passed the errors.  Besides riding on "busses," people from Oakland are A's fans.  When Ally (the 9 year old daughter) runs off to play with Dan's classmate  (the father who just graduated from Quantico), I could not go any farther.  Get a better editor and try again.