Review: Story isn't bad, but.......
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2014
The story isn't bad, but if you're looking for accuracy, skip it.The story is set in post-apocalyptic USA. However, Derek is British and uses British terminology and spelling throughout. "Bleeding/bloody" instead of F*** and the like. Then there's his calling the tube on a tank the turret. Derek, the turret is the whole mechanism that rotates. The tube is what you had Harris crawling on to stuff the grenade into during the big attack on the city.Even worse, there are numerous grammar errors. Derek, you need a better editor. May I suggest me next time you decide to publish? My rates are low.