Review: Great start!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2014
I knew this was short, and still swore when "next page" got me nowhere. I love when I'm so happy reading that the end sneaks up on me. It was easy to get involved with this story, because I liked Ineeka immediately. The dual stories in her past and present develop her character well and quickly. The end of this part opens a can of worms that has the potential to be an great story. Very promising start, and I'll be reading the next part. Probably immediately.