Review: Well written but...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2012
I enjoyed this short novel (and the first in the series) but I would rather pay more for a longer novel, e.g. I would rather pay for stories 1 - 3 since it takes me about an afternoon or less to read these instead of paying as much as I am per story.  The characters are believable and the story line/plot is interesting.  I noticed there were some grammatical errors which is frustrating (for me anyway) and distracting, also leads me to question why am I paying so much for something that has not been well edited.  I am looking forward to #3 in the series but if it is as short or shorter then #2 and contains as many errors I probably won't be picking up #4.  Overall it is worth 4 stars but the length makes me apprehensive about continuing to follow the series.