Review: Short on length, and story...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 16, 2011
Yeah, I know it's a short story. I have an English degree from a prestigious university-- I know the difficulties in developing a plot and characters in such a short form. This story has been told before-- two people who are interested in one another are "trapped" together by circumstances-- giving them a chance to explore their attraction. That premise is a yawn- but then again, you don't want the story to get in the way of the porn-- oops, I mean, the romance that is the real reason behind the story. I suggest this story was more porn than romance because the love scene totally lacks finesse. But then again, maybe finesse comes with a price-- and this story was free.