Review: Constructive Criticism
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 24, 2013
I was curious to see how an author wrote about a subject that involved three people in a relationship. I chose Holly's Awakening because of the 5-star reviews across the board. The last thing I want to do is bash and rip apart every aspect of this book.  It really is poorly edited and, I'd even go so far as to say, poorly written. I found myself ready to edit and send corrections to the author. It comes down to the fact that the typos, misused words, lack of depth in the story, and the poor editing makes me weary about purchasing any further books from this publisher and by this author. I truly hope this review is taken more as constructive criticism, that my goal was to simply point out opportunity for improvement, and less of a book bashing or rude criticisms. Best of luck in your future writing endeavors. I hope to be pleasantly surprised at some point in the future.