Review: GI Joe and Ebony
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2012
PLOT: Ebony Saunders gets help from a Marine changing a flat tire. The two of them are instantly attracted but she's cautious.2.5 STARS: The writing needs editing, but I knew that from the blurb. It gets off to a good start with lots of chemistry. Their banter was fun. What annoys me about the story is that the hero is called GI Joe throughout. You don't find out his name until the very end. I know it was on purpose, but as you're reading the story, it keeps his character from gaining any depth. The twist at the end, while different, just didn't come off as believable.