Review: Fun read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 15, 2013
I chose the book because it was free and because it looked fun. Although many of the other reviewers are correct about the need for editing in timeline, consistencies, etc., I have to say that I was able to enjoy the story anyway. It had the feel of a light, quick read because of the lack of deep character development. Outside of falling in love with each other and Jaydon deciding to step out of the spotlight somewhat in the future, there was no other development in the main characters. As expected, the mission is wrapped up by the end, somehow entangled with a stalker of sorts. Kind of an interesting twist although not much focus was put on it. Rachel's best friend, Cameron, is quite funny and enjoyable to read. I liked the sexual tension bubbling between them. I had hoped that the book would include their story, as well, but ultimately I'm okay with reading their story stand-alone. I appreciated that there were not a lot of typos and misused words. However that said, the timing of the whole story taking place within only a few weeks was difficult to ignore.I recommend this book to anyone who is just looking for a cute story that won't take much time or energy. Maybe a beach book. It won't engage your mind, it won't make you cry with the characters. But it will make you laugh occasionally at the dialogue.