Review: Good but...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 3, 2014
...Not as good as the first one I read...'My First Love: First Edition'. However, it was better than the second on I read; 'My First Love: Beginnings'. I was a bit confused as to what order to read them in, hope I was right. (Lol).Anyway, I was a bit put off by the many mistakes and typos, just as I was with 'Beginnings'. They both felt like rush jobs to me. The first one was by far cleaner than these two, almost as if more time was taken with it to fine tune it.However, Mz. Giovanni has held my attention once again and I anxiously await the next installment and/or another story. As I said she has a great gift of an imagination and I believe she will go far (especially if she hires me to do all or part of her editing..Lol). In any event, whether I am hired or not, I still see great potential in this author and she will still remain one of my favourite authors of all time.Btw. Was Trevor (I've always loved that name. It reminds me of someone I had a crush on back home) a white man or a light skinned African American? (Because of his blue eyes...Good Lawd))...Imagine the shock value if he was indeed white...verses what she's always been used to..makes for a very interesting storyline...(smile)....Especially with the baby...(Wow)...*I'm not being picky here...I just feel like if you're gonna review something, you have to tell the good and the bad. People don't mind gushing about a fantastic read; going on and on about what they liked. Well, I feel that the same should go if one had the opposite feeling, without of course being nasty/catty. (I hope that's not the impression I left on this review). A synopsis tells briefly what the book is about so there's no need for me to go over that; My job is to say how I feel about what I'm reviewing and that's what I do...So please don't shoot the messenger. Thanks*Blessings!Your 'Soulful' Reviewer...~Soulful~