Review: Worth 99 only
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 16, 2013
First off, I didn't so much mind the story being told from Matt's pov, just would've been nice to sometimes know how Lance was thinking or feeling. 2nd, while there are typos and grammar mistakes, it's not too bad. One thing that did bother me was how they kept going back & forth between talking like cowboys and talking like city boys. A bit annoying, and with Matt's made-up language added it was made that much more irritating. And sometimes they spoke to each other so flowery you'd think it was 2 women talking. And when Matt explained why he was so rough around the edges, I expected him to tell Matt that he was merely fighting the attraction (because that's what he'd said), not only because of his past. And Lance was terrified if horses? Really? Also, there was not enough conflict, not even with Lee, and we never find out what the world will think of their relationship. An okay read, better towards the end.