Review: Cute tale
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 25, 2013
This story is a strange mix of very good and quite weak.  I like the creative innovation of using an on-line matchmaking service run by fairy godmothers.  I didn't much care for using the godmothers as a substitute for being creative enough to write through the difficulties the characters got themselves into.  Despite this I enjoyed the story.  Fair warning - there are lots of errors in spelling and grammar, apparently the author is unfamiliar with the proper use of the apostrophe.  (The horses head instead of horse's head, for example.  I tried to find it amusing that this led to frequent reference to the male lead as Jakes instead of Jake's whatever since jakes is a term for a toilet.)  It was also a bit jarring at times when the strictly American characters suddenly used very English terms.  It is not a bad book but it is a shame that it wasn't brought up to the level it could have reached.