Review: A Short Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 27, 2013
When I agreed to read this book and do a review, I did not realize that her, what I thought to be novellas, were actually a series of short stories.  I read it in an hour and although it was described by the characters as being passionately in love with each other, the character were not developed and their loving actions were more tell than show, and not particularly new nor exciting.  Since I had not read the first book, I knew nothing about Marcus' brothers and the author did change tenses a few times.  It would be my suggestion that instead of running these as 55 page books, that she put them all in one novel.  Since she has aspects of  a good plot if she develops it, I will give her three stars.I was given this story and asked to do an honest review.