Review: Might Have Been Better as a Novella Instead of a Short Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 23, 2012
Without getting into spoilers, this was a intriguing story.  More of a Hitchcock Thriller than horror, but that takes nothing away from the story.  My only issue is that the lead character makes assumptions and accepts them too quickly. The story needed more proofs of what was really going on.  Not necessarily an explanation but enough data to actually come up with a theory.  I think if the author expanded the story a bit and delayed his epiphany it would have been a five.  Even with the above criticism, it is still a good read.edited for duplicate sentence.