Review: Good Writing, Weird Plot, Author Has Promise. (SPOILER ALERT)
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2013
I hate giving books that an author obviously worked hard on a bad review. Just because this book didn't work for me doesn't mean it wouldn't work for another.I will say that there are some inconsistencies that need to be addressed. The age of the son jumps all over the place which is the worst. Another, which is a spoiler, I will write about after the break:^^^^^^^Any child left in a car with no way out is going to die after a certain length of time. This is why there are heat warnings and babies/toddlers are in the news from this very situation. While I understand this is essential, this book could be saved with a bit of editing concerning the plot points. Revenge on a zombie? Sure, it's a stretch. It would have made more sense for him to be racing the clock to save his son. A father hell bent on rescue is far more believable. I don't know if the author reads reviews, but I would take a deep look at the story and revamp in order to make an OK book into a stellar one. The author has a lot of promise and could make this story amazing.