Review: Author needs help with editing and use of the English language.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2014
I liked the story and cared about the characters. I believe that the author should have employed a good editor to make the story easier to read.Obviously she could use a bit of help with editing. The suggestions below are meant to help rather than to disparage the author's talent to tell a story. They don't include all the fails I found, but I hope they are helpful.LOCATION/ERROR/CORRECTION34/vile/bile634/existed/consisted728/well/will845/catch phenomena/catch pneumonia (MY FAVORITE!!)851/sent/scent942/come up/came up1113/may/made1158/strange/strangely1343/conformation/confirmation1357/tiding/tidying1497/wandering/wondering1557/had already drank/drunk1606/breast...firm/breasts...firmly1848/about...about (repeated)/about1874/walk...climb/walked...climbed2038/starting/staring2338/had first went in/gone in2378/ignoring/ignore2404/had took/takenGood luck with your future writing.