Review: & 1/4 Has Potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 21, 2013
I thought this book had a lot of potential; unfortunately, it also had some pet peeves in it.Pick A name for your characters not several.  For instance Viper aka Kane, aka Mr. Tepes.  Hawk/Kaleb, Gypsy/whatever his name was.  This drives me batty.  If these guys are in a MC club they are not going to switch out how they use each others names.  They are going to be MC name only.  It felt like a lot of this book was made up of the names.  I also didn't think the way they spoke overall as characters made it seem believable when the called Cara a pig or B****.  While possibly in character for a biker, these guys to me did not seem like they talked that way enough for that to be the way the referred to things.I liked the way they tied the police to the MC gang.  I liked the back story and reason for everything happening.  It was a fast moving story.  I loved Kane and Cara.  I thought they were really well done.  I would not mind seeing them visited in future books to find out how they progress.Read the book cover to cover, but I don't have a burning desire to see if the next book is out.  I am looking for books that make me die to read the next one.  This did not do that for me.