Review: 2 chapters from the completed novel
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2014
I'm glad this "series" is available as my monthly freebie with my Amazon Prime.  The characters were not developed. This fact could be because this download weas chapters 2 and 3 from the completed novel.  The story of Lori and the Bishop Brothers might be better and make more sense if all parts of the "book" were released as one novel rather than "teasers" or "short stories." I found Lori to be an annoying character with countless insecurities and completely unrealistic. The Bishop Brothers were not developed at all. Being hot, smart, billionaires chasing a girl with ridiculous insecurities is getting to be a repetitive plot in many books. I'm going to read the next installment because I am curious to see if the story develops and maybe I'm jumping the gun thinking it is strictly chapters based on sexual tension.