Review: Liked this story, needs some editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 26, 2014
I enjoyed this story. The concept was good and had some hot scenes.There were not a lot of spelling errors like some of the free books. There were a few grammatical errors though.It would have gotten 5 stars except for, aside from mild typing errors, My two biggest issues....1- In the very first chapter she's have a dream with two lovers. Kindly put, Jackson is in front, Jacob in back. well end way through the scene she accidentally swaps their names for the rest of the scene :(2- When she meets Vane, their very first sex scene she gives him fairly hot oral.But then when they are reunited later in the book, he asks her to suck him.. and her response is she's never done that.Might want to fix the inconsistency