Review: flat
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 7, 2013
This M/M novella is not awful: it is decently written and its plot makes some sense but unfortunately this is all there is to it.There is no narrative tension and hardly any conflict. Characters are bidimentional. What is more there are a lot of unnecessary details and several repetitions while many transitions are too quick or entirely lacking. The setting is hardly made any use of.Sex scenes are not well written nor convincing.I expected a light, romantic read and got rather bored instead.Not recommended, not even as a freebie.