Review: editing issues
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2012
I would have rated this book much higher if it wasn't, just as the first 3, a victim of spell check. There were a number of scenes where the names of the characters were wrong.  Most blatently, the first time Hope makes love to the Bearen brothers and, at the end, is called Saige.  Later in the book, Jackson kept becoming Garron, then Jackson, then Garron again in the same paragraph.  I believe the editor or printer needs a cheat sheet with then names of each male-set, their clan and their Arima.  The story changing locatons between the multiple planets and cities is a stong story telling tool, but when the wrong name is used, the reader thinks the location has changed.  I've been following this series since it began, but instead of improving, the editing is becoming worse.