Review: Mending Fences
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 15, 2013
Very confusing. She's angry, then he is, then back again. No rhyme or reason for the shifting moods, no character development. And there are writing problems, like waiting two chapters before you know how old her son is, which makes a lot of difference in the things he's doing and telling the male character. Other mistakes, like a tornado sky is green not yellow, quoting one fairy tale and calling it another.Very poorly written and needs a strong content edit. I got it free and it was still a waste.