Review: I wish the author had paid more attention
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2011
First of all, I did enjoy reading this book. I loved the concept, and there was a lot of effort put into it, obviously. That said, it did have some problems. There were a lot of errors...things like (She finished her burger and then put the empty doughnut bag in the garbage.) Paraphrased that, but those kinds of things break your concentration and make the story less enjoyable.*****Minor SPOILERS*****There were several characters that seemed totally unnecessary like the mailman, and the girl's boyfriend. There was no resolution or purpose to these characters, other than, "Are they the killer?"Sonny(sp?)was totally one dimensional, and I found that I did not like her at all.I liked the book, but hopefully in later works, more attention is paid to editing, character development and detail.