Review: Good story in need of a good editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2013
This is a really good story hiding behind a total lack of editing.  The main character is interesting, the premise and setting has great potential.... but the spelling and grammatical errors are thick enough to cut with a knife!  Also the story could very definitely be tightened up....how many times can you talk about energy budgets and replicators and computer network repairs, after all?  Even with all the jargon and clumsy grammar, the story is enjoyable.