Review: Cue the whiney heroine!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2014
I truly enjoyed "Making the First Move"...the plot development, character development, and HEA were all masterfully handled. That being said, I did not care for Melanie at all. She just seemed too intelligent and too old to me to carry so much emotional baggage. We ALL have issues, and they make us who we are - but we'd all be knee deep in Xanax if we didn't put them aside. I might have given her some slack if she had been 18 or 19...Maybe. *LOL*Loved, loved, loved Raine...but doesn't everyone? He made a serious mistake when he was young, but I give him much credit for trying to move past it and use his life to help others. Still not too sure why he was attracted to Mel, and honestly, I believe he was too good for her. She and Jaxson deserved each other. Okay, maybe that's a bit too over the top! LOL!Jasper? Meh. Priscilla? OMG! Mel should have shot her down long, long, long ago....especially after her allergic reaction. She knew. SHE KNEW!Mel had a great support network in her family, but they all could have spent more time talking about their issues instead of avoiding them.I'm acting as though these people are real, aren't I? LOL! The story was just that good!Kudos to Reese Ryan!