Review: A strange little story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2012
This is a short story. It was... readable. I thought it started out very well, feeling like you were being told a story as a kid. Then it became very disjointed. As if written to an outline without the necessary transitions and fleshing out the characters.The witch explained the WHY of her adjustments very clearly (in general, not the exact adjustments themselves), I thought, but it seemed as if for the majority of people it was a hassle and very few found something good out of her adjustments.It was different. Nice ending, everything neatly wrapped up.Just didn't really do it for me, but it's definitely finishes on an awkward enough note to make you think. So it's worth it to read for that, I suppose.