Review: Did any of the authors read this??
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 9, 2013
This story is not worth the time to read, even free. I would say it needs editing but that would be generous. Half a dozen authors and nobody picked up on the stiff language, the typos and the sentences that just make no sense? I really get irritated with authors don't even proof read and expect the reader to ignore it. Forget the weak story, when I have to plow through basic writing errors that show little or no respect for the reader I lose interest fast.A few I jotted down before deciding not to do the work for them:location 503; "Tomorrow would be a busy day tomorrow between preparing for the wedding and decorating the large room."505; "The day progressed slowly, Rachel and Ivy spent most of the day in their room, preparing the next day for the wedding." HUH????? So, wouldn't it be wonderful if we could prepare the next day?????The entire story is written like this and it really convinced me to read nothing from any of the authors listed. Please, don't waste my time, even "round robin" stories should be proof read and smoothed out a little before asking others to read it.