Review: cute story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2014
This is a really cute story for young children but it really needs an editor. Some words are used incorrectly, there are no periods or commas at all, and there's at least one part that makes no sense at all. It's the part where he gets his first job. I'll read it gain if my son wants me to but it could be so much better.CST