Review: Okay - poor pacing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2013
For 16 pages, this short story had a slow pace. It seemed to take forever for much to happen. Once the action began, it moved too fast. The pacing was a bit off. But for 16 pages and a freebie, it was okay. If you like horror and slasher stuff, you'll like this. Just a warning though, it's a short read so keep in mind there's not much plot development. You don't learn anything about the two main characters and there's no character development.This idea definitely could be expanded and a real book could be made out of it. It is definitely a short story...