Review: free book. it was.....ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 6, 2013
first, as a writer i know how much guts it takes to put yourself out there.  Lots!  what disappointed bted me in this were editing (lack thereof), stilted dialogue, misuse of Spanish grammar (i know .....petty ....but it's 'dios mio' not mi dios), and choppy narrative (personal preference). i would have liked more character development.