Review: Didn't do much for me.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 23, 2011
At 600 locations, this is a short, quick read, but not that scorching hot for me personally. I love menage stories with hot erotic sex, but this menage a quatre falls flat for me. An author really has to write menage well in order for the sex not to come across as rehearsed, that rote tab A into slot B feeling, which is how it felt to me when all the guys were finally in action together. I was really wanting that scene to pull through and to be great because up until that point I hadn't been that impressed with the writing or the eroticism displayed.I feel this story lacks any sort of real, make-you-sweat sexual intensity. Lines like 'his condom-clad c--- rising skyward like a pagan phallic altar' just didn't get me going. I never felt in the moment with these characters, and that's a big let down when erotic fiction doesn't grab me and make me participate. The sex here was almost like flicking through TV channels and briefly catching a glimpse of something only mildly sexy and only half-way interesting. For me, this was not erotic menage at its best.