Review: Rework and resubmit autho!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 16, 2013
I really tried hard with this book. I really want to finish the book because the plot SEEMS good. However, the author said the caps were fixed but they were not. There are also so many different characters and name changes I keep getting confused. I feel like I am trying to run in mud. It is hard to tell who is speaking and the differences between the families.4 stars for plot-1 star for presentationDear author take this book off the shelves and edit it. This is not presentation ready. Your storytelling skills are great! You lack of preparation in this case was unacceptable. Trust me I have read a lot of books from amazon that needed editing. I usually can get past misspelled words and grammar issues especially if the plot is good. However, out of the 548 books I have read in the last three years this one is the worst presentation I have come across.