Review: In the Future, there is no Punctuation apparently!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2013
This was a good book with an interesting story in which the story was realistically developed.  BUT...... it lacked proper punctuation!  The author REALLY REALLY needs to invest in some qoute marks.  It would make the story flow so much better.  A sentence like: Touch me she said. sounds and looks so much better when it looks like this:  "Touch me", she said.  Run-on sentences with character movements and descriptions smashed together was extremely annoying.  This should be a four star story but the grammar is that bad.  Buy this book please so the author can go get some qoute marks in bulk or grammar lessons!  A for effort, F for grammar, equals C experience.  The book is so cheap because it doesn't include grammar.  That's extra; even for Amazon Prime Members.