Review: Could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 25, 2012
WARNING: Spoilers withinThis book was just OK. I enjoyed the reading and the idea was interesting but the author didn't spend time to address everything they brought up in the plot. A great example is right at the beginning of the book, our protagonist Kevon meets a dying man and recieves a sword to bring to somewhere. This person is identified as a member of the warriors guild and yet when Kevon arrives at the Warrior's Guild in Easton, he doesn't ask one single person a question about the sword. Not one. It seemed to be an important detail that was just dismissed. The author also seemed to have a bad habit of either killing or disappearing characters he didnt want write about anymore.I think this book could be much better with some editing and rewriting or for .99 cents.