Review: Good Story....lots of twists,but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2013
Loved the story, it kept me guessing, but the outlandish sex talk and poor editing was distracting.  I normally don't ding the author for minor editing issues, but in this case the way the story was written.....editing was crucial. There was a lot of the being told from different points of views....so the wrong pronouns, et al was just distracting. Then there was the corny sex lines, i.e. when Jamilla was having an orgasm she said, "...it's a Cali-fornia earthquake." What??Also, I was just Looking for an interracial romance,but this one had paranormal intervention at every possible moment, an adoption and a long lost twin, the main character being the product of a secretive, interracial union, twin dying from a drive by, marrying a con man who was a bigamist and married to a white woman and apparently using his member as a "weapon" and all I was thinking was....you have to do and go through all that to get involved with a white guy??!! Really?