Review: Disappointed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 29, 2012
I expected a lot more to this "book" than what I got. I wouldn't really call this a book. I would call it a short story because only about 50% of my Kindle version is the story. The rest was filled with a taste of what's to come in each of the subsequent stories. This author would have been best served by beginning the book with some type of character intros and then building up to the main plot of the story. Maybe all of the short stories should be combined into an actual a book.Many people have complained that the 50 Shades books are not well-written. I think if they read just this one short story they may actually change their minds. At least 50 Shades has a real plot.I won't be purchasing the "sequels" to this story. I want to give this one zero stars but have to rate it with at least one. Oh well.