Review: Potential, but flawed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2013
There is the basis for a very good story here; however, serious editing of the spelling, grammar and dropped words has to come first. Errors like that are like potholes in the road, they stop the smooth flow and make you forget the beautiful view.The ending was speeded up far beyond the pace of the rest of the book, left the reader hanging, and many of the main characters were shallow and two-dimensional.  But the writer has a natural talent that, with a little training, could develop into a gift.  Keep trying!