Review: Talented writer but no character distinction
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2014
The writing was very solid and well done. The author is very talented, but for me there was too much drama, too many POVs,  and very little distinction between POVs that distracted from the author's talent. Spider sounded like Willa, who sounded like Hawk, who sounded like...you get my drift. The only person who had a distinct voice was Raven, but only because she was not a very nice character. She was just too bitchy. You can be an alpha without having to sound too judgmental and spoiled. No one had their own feel or presence, and that was unfortunate as things could have been much more interesting. They were a great cast of characters. I also thought that there was just too much going on, and all the time. It was an MC Soap Opera, 24-7. It got to be a bit too much like high school at times.Ms. Browning is a very talented writer, but I just felt that at times that everything was just too forced.