Review: Childish writing skills
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 2, 2013
Reading this story from the "hero's" point of view made me feel as if he were a bit on the slow side, or touched in the head.Or maybe it was that it seemed like I was reading a story about a couple of high school kids, just in the way the situations were described.Seriously, it was like reading a teenage boys diary, and he had no life up until this part.Lame, is the most honest way to describe this story.