Review: Mr. Hankins Needs a Better Editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2014
I actually like the plot of this story but it was repetitive at times. And he also rambled in some chapters. (But he has talent and a better editor would have fine-tuned those weak spots.) I did find it odd that the main character, Charlie Beckham, Assistant U.S. Attorney twice went into detail about the physique of "Bonz" the homeless man yet didn't elaborate about his attractive fiancee's body. It still held my interest. I wish that Mr. Hankins (&many other authors) did not find it necessary to curse and use the F-word so frequently. My adversity is not because I'm a prude but gratuitous cursing doesn't add to books in my humble opinion. I would read another book by this author with the hope that he'll improve a bit.