Review: good parts, bad parts
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 9, 2012
ok, first, i did really enjoy this story. its a fun twist on the vampire genre.however, there are issues that need to be addressed.proofreading is a skill, and there doesn't seem to have been any. grammar, misspelled words, words that are wrong in context, and i swear words that don't exist like 'psychical'-particularly bad when the word in question by context should actually be 'physical'.while on the whole the characters were very well fleshed out (haha) my big issue would be the main character speaking in the first person at the beginning of the book, how could it be first person when his memory was totally wiped? no mention of returned memories is mentioned.concerning the twist at the end, i should have seen it coming but didn't, not sure if i'm disappointed.the story deserves a 5, but the glaring issues don't, it made it difficult to read in places.the price is good, and i don't regret purchasing and reading this. i will be looking for the second installment.