Review: Could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2013
This book had the capability of being a four star easy, fun, read.  This doesn't have a deep, thought provoking or eloquent highly technical writing style, but I was not expecting that when I decided to read it.  I wanted a light read with developed characters that I could connect with, a setting I could picture myself in, and an entertaining plot.  The setting never formed (it seemed an after thought or as it was mentioned in passing).  The 2 main characters or romantic interests had the ingredients to be something unexpectedly good, but never got there.  Any descriptions were very shallow and floated on the surface and you could never get an emotional connection or feel any emotion from the characters.  When there was an emotion the author told you and didn't describe or illustrate it.  For example, you would read confidence in italics or anger.  I would prefer to rage along with the character or be feel the confidence.  The plot started out of the gates strong and was what kept me reading.  Good build up and then fell flat.  Almost as if she knew the beginning and end but couldn't quite develop the middle.I don't regret reading it but I won't be reading the others.