Review: Pretty good
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2014
This short story was a decent read. The characters were fleshed out and it was easy enough to follow along. I liked that Kennedy and Ryan got a second chance at love and that everything worked out in the end. I'm giving it three stars instead of five because in the end, I don't recall it saying how Riley's cancer was treated, whether or not they did the bone marrow treatment or used the cord blood. Also I found it stupid that they decided to change Riley's name, at five or six years old, to Ryan junior and call him RJ. Especially since Ryan was already a junior so that would obviously make his son a third. And to make the whole name thing worse, they decided to name the new baby Riley. Like, you already had a kid named Riley, give this one her own name. Another reason I gave it three stars was because the love scenes could've been better. They were closer to fade to black than sensual. It was missing the sexual tension and foreplay and chemistry that other novels of this genre have. Other than that, as I said before, it was a decent read.