Review: A good short but could have been more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2013
I like his writing. I always a have a soft spot for young military gay men. But this should have been much longer to give the characters more justice. Mark initially came across self absorbed, Jase could have been stronger. More thoughts could have been given to the trauma of war and how the two guys worked it out. But because this is just a short, most is skipped. Also the guys seem too young for such a plot line. The last part is a nice touch but it could have been so much more because I do like the writing.