Review: Good plot, needed editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2014
The characters were interesting and the adventure exciting. However, it was hard to look past the 5-10 grammatical errors I noticed, and I wasn't even analyzing it. From words that were close, but used incorrectly, to proper nouns in lower case to missing commas and end marks, it was hard not to notice. Ifshe wants to be a serious writer, get an editor (or fire the one you have, if you have one). It is hard to take a book seriously with so many errors.