Review: Out of the Shadows
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2013
The preview was interesting, but unfortunately that was the best part. The writing style was okay, if overly simplistic, but there were a lot of grammar problems that made me wonder if this book was edited at all. Missing words and a plethora of run on sentences meant I had to keep stopping to figure out what it was supposed to say, and that took me out of the story completely. Several of the concepts that the author just dropped in were without background or explanation, and it felt like part of the story was missing. It was like she decided to write a little M/M romance then at the last minute went "Oh I think I'll throw a few words like 'wolf' and 'mate' in to make it a paranormal story, but I won't bother explaining any of them."With proper editing and a lot more thought put into the world building, this might have been a fairly decent story. As it is, I got so frustrated and confused that I didn't even finish it.