Review: ok but wordy
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2014
This was a good book and I would have given it 5 stars but it was too wordy in places. It was like the author tried to extend the length of the book by adding unnecessary detail. "She reached for the handle of the car and opened it. Sat down in the drivers seat. She took the key an put it into the ignition slot and turned the key. The car started. She reached over and put on her seatbelt. She put the car in drive...." This is repeated just like this over and over. Couldn't you just say "She got in her car and drove to his house." Do we really need ever tern and street she went down? It would have been better without all the useless details.