Review: Not bad, for a freshman release.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
This is a character driven story set in a PA scenario. Focusing more on the journey than the state of things due to 'the pulse.' I found the story to be engaging. I stayed interested enough to finish it, because I wanted to know more about the characters and the resolution of the primary conflict.  The author also left plenty of references to other issues that could lead to more stories and further character development.The writing itself is still unpolished. There are some brilliant passages, as well as some that are 'choppy'. Some of the story transitions could be smoothed out, causing less confusion. There are some grammar and typo errors, but not so many as to detract from the enjoyment of reading.Overall, I liked the book and will read more of the author's work. I give it a positive recommendation for trying it out, as long as the price is right. It's worth a couple bucks to support a fledgling writer - if you enjoy this type of tale.To the author: if you'd like a "constructively critical" eye to read your work, prior to public release, I could try.