Review: Ok for a free read, but I'm not impressed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 7, 2011
This one got mixed reviews, but I figured what the heck, it's free. Im not through the first chapter yet and im not sure i want to read more.  It's not horrible. Believe it or not I've actually read worse. But the author does a large amount of telling instead of showing. For example, Ty will often tell us how Gwen was feeling rather than the author showing us through Gwen's actions and expressions. Typical beginning writer mistakes. The characters as well were unfortunately cardboard cut outs, and some of their actions poorly motivated, IOW unbelievable. No chemistry between the characters either. Unfortunately I won't be looking for anymore of this author's works. Had I paid for this, I'd feel cheated.