Review: great drive but what a lot of mistakes
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2013
The author has created very lively, mostly likeable well drawn characters and although the language etc for 14 year olds was pretty shocking the dialogue rang true.  Anne Marie Frohoff - Please Please get a competent proof reader before publishing your next book - so many bad mistakes where the totally wrong word was used simply because it sounded the same e.g. ball instead of bawl where hysterical crying was involved and many grammatical errors too.  You're and your were totally confused and many times the past tense of a verb was used wrongly.  You can write and I will want to know what happens next but this level of annoying error detracts from your work and spoils the reading experience.