Review: Steamy snowstorm activity...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2010
Definitely gets points for the steam factor!This is one shorter story that might have been better as a long (so to speak).  The basic premise was interesting and the characters had potential but they just felt a little flat within the constraints of the format.I think the backstory was the best part--however the way the two characters came together here, well not as riveting.  Sort of a Big Misunderstanding idea that was relegated to the background, while the present day Resolution  was a little more like an afterthought.  But in this case the afterthought is what we are reading.  There was also a brief foray into what could have been a I-Am-Man-See-Me-Protect...but it was a false alarm.  Oh well.On the other hand, if you after a quickie read for some explicit steaminess...well this will fit the bill.I found the writing good enough, the premise good enough, and the author gets imagination points, so  I will look at other stories by this author....and if I could I'd be rating it a 3.5.JTG