Review: A FUN PARANORMAL STORY
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2014
Category /Genre:  Paranormal Romance, Romantic SuspenseReceived from:  A.T. Mitchell (in exchange for an honest review)Recommended for:  18+ due to sexual content and violenceGrammar/editing:  C – average writing, needs more editingThis is a stand-alone, paranormal, BBW romance story.This was a fun paranormal read.  The first time I’ve read of were-bears (and it definitely won’t be the last).  There were some minor issues, but otherwise I really enjoyed this story and I’m glad the author contacted me and asked me to read for him.  I hope he will contact me for future stories.I also haven’t read many BBW books, mostly because I am BBW and can be a bit sensitive to what words are used.  I had only one line in this book that bothered me.  One line isn’t enough to turn me completely off – so it is excused.  If the author wants to know which one, he can contact me.This book needs some serious editorial services or a really good beta reader who will assist the author with grammar and word usage.  Unfortunately, the improper word usage did interfere with the story flow and pulled me out of reader head-space and back into the real world to figure out what was meant.  It is that loss of head-space that pulled this to a four crown read instead of being a five.I would love to read some more from Mr. Mitchell and hope that he will again invite me when he next releases.