Review: Interesting premise,but poor execution
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2013
I thought the  premise of the  book was  interesting. I forced myself to finished it because  I wanted to find out what happened but I probably won't be buying anything more by this author.The writing as  a bit awkward and amateurish. Lots of telling and little lead up. Information that should have been given in an entire scene was  summed up in a sentence  or two. The entire story seemed like a summary of scenes instead of a well paced and  planned story. The dialogue seemed a bit stilted and odd, too.There is a major potential in the idea of this story, but it needs to be told better.I think it would help a lot if the author took this story to a creative writing class and allowed the teacher to guide this  outline into a polished and well executed book. I think it could be awesome.