Review: TIme better spent
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2014
This book needs editing. The head hopping, with everyone having a POV, drove me crazy. Not done in fiction and someone should have told the author this. It's dizzying trying to keep everyone straight.The writing has potential, but there are serious craft issues, which distracted me from the improbability of the story.