Review: Didn't quite hit the mark.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 30, 2012
For me Island Ghost misses the mark. The dialogue is not believable. It seems to be an attempt at a hard-boiled, tough guy character that falls flat. The main character, Will, feels cardboard. The back story was hollow, I just couldn't suspend disbelief as the scenarios were too dramatic, overdone. There was no subtlety. It was like being force fed.The physical descriptions were well done.This short story was well edited. There were no typos and the grammar was fine, so it was easy to read.