Review: Explicit Male on Male Erotica
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2012
The author's warning of "implied sexual content between two men" needs to be changed to "explicit sexual content between two men". There is nothing implied about the erotic scenes in this short story.The style of writing is that of a beginner. The dialogue is stilted. The story just does not flow very well at all.With that said, there are some genuine sparks of potential within. I believe the author has an interesting concept for an erotic short but it definitely needs polish.