Review: Not bad; needs proper editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2012
Paul Moxham is a pretty good story teller.  From that aspect this isn't a bad read at all.  He's just not much of an editor:  The grammar and syntax flaws are numerous and glaring.  It would be a much better story with another pass or two through it for proof reading purposes.