Review: Loved this as a new series
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 02 26, 2014
The good outweighs the bad.  It is a challenge to include child characters in what is essentially an erotic alien fantasy.  Although these children are really too good to be believable, their inclusion does give us an opportunity to see another side of the male hero.The plot drags a bit in the middle as it builds up to the climactic political crisis.  And the language is often repetitive and cloying.  But the premise is interesting and the author does a fairly good job of world building.