Review: Much too rushed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2012
This story was a great idea. I started it and was interested in how the author would work out the communication between a werewolf and a deaf human. I didn't get much out of it, to be honest. I got into it, was enjoying myself very much reading, and then the main characters met (a "helpless" woman meeting two huge strangers in the middle of nowhere at night) and they got cuddly that very first night. Really? And the very next morning, they reveal that not only are they werewolves, she is one too! And she thinks it's really cool. Okay, fine, I can admit that if someone told me I was a werewolf, I'd be ecstatic.But then they can't have sex. Then they HAVE to have sex. Then they're in mortal danger, and in a blink all of a sudden the helpless deaf former-human is ordering around a pack hell bent on tearing them apart. What? And all this in how many words? This could have been stretched out and developed into an amazing full-length novel. It just seems all too neat in the end. Everything that was such a huge obstacle just magically turned out to be nothing but a speed bump and the heroine just wakes up one day, her world turned upside down and she's all peachy, going along with the program like it's the most natural thing. Yeah, I don't think so.Oh and the deaf thing? Wouldn't you know it? They can speak telepathically! Isn't that convenient?