Review: Good story but...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2014
You really have to come up with a better descriptive term for when someone is nervous, worried, sad, happy.  Than Biting Their Lip.  I stopped counting at twenty...That said, pretty well written, Rowens character development could have been better.  A little far fetched, with the happiness and ending, but their I hope you're so right.  All in all a good read.  Thank you.