Review: more of an appetizer than a meal
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2014
This is not my first polyamourous read. This however is my least favorite of what I read.For starters there is a lot reiteration for such a short read. Things the reader is told are repeated in the dialogue. Their is no detail of the setting or characters, I don't need pages of detail, but what Adrian looks like compared to Jake would be nice. Also there is a lot of telling, but not showing. Adrian is the quiet one, but he does most of the talking.In my opinion, when a book is this short it she be very efficient and well written. This book is not.