Review: IT'S OKAY
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 12, 2012
. Alex is 32 years old and was brought up on his family's ranch. Although he followed a career outside the ranch, he still regularly helps out since the death of his father. His brother Seth does the same. The neighbouring family are close friends. Angel the youngest daughter has been in love with Alex for as long as she can remember, but she feels that she isn't pretty enough to catch his eye. Her older sister Priscilla is the tall and beautiful one in their family.But Alex has noticed Angel, he is twelve years older and has been waiting for her to grow up. She is now 20 years old, and Alex can't wait any longer to make Angel his. Angel can't quite believe in Alex's sudden focused attention to her. It's a dream come true. So after seeing him for a short while and giving up her virginity. Why is he suddenly engaged to another woman.The premise for this story is very good, and quite original. The characters are well portrayed and described. Where I had a problem was that parts of the story, which were essential to the plot are literally dealt with behind the scenes so to speak, and the reader is presented with the solution without seeing how it was arrived at. I realise that this is a short story, but the author could have given us more details.But having said that this was an okay read, and I believe that there is a follow-up novella featuring Priscilla and Seth.