Review: Didn't Particularly Care for this Short Story
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2014
The story is about a teenage girl named Olivia who is upset about moving to San Diego to live with her dad and stepmom. Once she arrives in the neighborhood, she meets a cute boy who catches her attention.The short story is written from the perspective of a teenage girl, but I don't know any teenagers who talk the way she does. The words she uses sound outdated or rather the way adults think teenagers talk. Whenever she spoke, it came across as inauthentic and distracted me from the actual story.The story ended so abruptly it didn't seem like there was a real conclusion. The story doesn't really go anywhere. I wouldn't recommend this to anyone. Even at 26 pages, it's still a waste of time.