Review: Was expecting a real dom-got a nice guy working on Dom status
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2013
Not what I was expecting. Background build up was Okay but the sex, while descriptive, not in a D/s way. This sub often topped from the bottom and if he was a good or half way experienced Dom he would have noticed and not allowed it. ropes were done painfully, it was a bit more in the 'force and control' than D/s.  But as a man, Gabe was hot and could eat crackers in my bed any day.Ashley is left with an unfair slightly earned "easy" reputation in high school but in a small town, memories are long and even after her father dies and she is left the run down farm and her reputation, she stays the course because it is all she has.In walks Gabe, the "boy next door" who helped on her father's farm when days were better. Gabe is 4-5 years older than Ashley and long gone to work the oil fields before Ashley goes to high school.Now he is back, gorgeous and well padded pockets to the property next to Ashley's that he has bought and spruced up.Gabe 'buys' Ashley for a stag party to strip and lap dance and for the needed money, she does it. She gets Gabe hot and he is after her - she puts up no resistance, hesitation is only in her mind, not in her actions, she is desperate for love.  Then they don't protect -Gabe does on purpose and she agrees to continueThey have some hitches in the road but only some of it is explained well, and then she is pregnant and he is proposing.Not enough build up, no real drama, the one spanking is a bit over the top for a first time as any good DOM would have known, and while it wasn't terrible, it was not great either.And, this cowboy, had almost NO strict commands.