Review: Writing style is choppy
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 13, 2014
The idea of this story intrigued me, along with the price so I purchased it but  I just couldn’t get into the story.  The author has a very choppy writing style and things just happened with hardly any rhyme or reason.  Days moved through paragraphs and the dialogue between the characters was very unnatural.It usually takes me a day to read a story of this length, but for this one after 3 days my interest is just gone.  I will probably finish the story just to see what big secrets April holds, but the characters are very flat and kind of boring.  I realize that this is the authors first attempt at an e-book, and I applaud him for that.  I am not completely closing the idea of trying his other works to see if his writing style  will develop.