Review: "I Survived"
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 4, 2011
The story "House Trap" is focused around a smart young women whose only ambition is to attend Dartmouth College. She is lacking in all area's of her life except in school since it's the only thing she seems to care about. When she is forced into tutoring the blonde haired, blue eyed snotty rich girl on a Friday night, her life takes a drastic turn and becomes a fight for her life.This novel is both stimulating and suspenseful with action taking place on every page. The dialog between characters has a natural tone which is nice because there's nothing worse than reading dialog that seems forced and not realistic. The novel is written much like I would imagine a transcript of the T.V. show "I Survived" since the main girth of the story takes place between 12am and 5am inside the house trap. The characters are explaining the situation from their own individual point of views which gives the story it's own character. The plot behind this story is spot on and with additional editing, has the makings of a best seller!Since this book was released by the author and not a publishing company, you will find multiple typo and grammatical errors which is to be expected. The story itself also needs to have further background work completed to make the story more well rounded and to connect the characters with the readers more efficiently.I gave this book 4/5 stars because it has amazing potential but definitely needs more work done to it before it's truly complete.All in all, this book defiantly has the makings of a best-seller! Good Job Mike!