Review: Should have been better
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 3, 2013
This series is one of my favorite indie series on amazon. I've waited so long for this book to come out, but I would have gladly waited another year to see it come out right. It was such a disappointment, it's like it was written by two different people. The plot was poorly thought out and unforgivably rushed. Whole sections were unbelievable or downright ridiculous. The characters were radically different than previous books. It read like a bad first draft with no polish, no editing, and constant typos. The dialog was stale, the action passable but not thought out, the characters one dimensional. It was the complete polar opposite of the previous books in the series. If the author has any honor at all this book should be re-written and republished the way it should have been. It makes me hesitate about following any other series by you in fear that you might get bored and fail to conclude it properly.