Review: Terrible editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2014
The story is okay. The editing needs work. This Kindle book reads like an elaborate outline. There is even an editing comment left in by mistake at location 75. Where commas should be there are double dashes throughout the entire book. Paragraphs do not smoothly segue leaving the reader momentarily lost as to where the character is or what she's doing. At one point where the lead character's name should be another character's name is inserted. This is a rough copy of what could be a good book. If you're thinking of downloading it I'd advise waiting until a revision is available.