Review: Way too long
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 15, 2014
This book had loads of potential and a nice storyline. If it had been a third shorter, and less repetitive it could've been really good. As others have said there are quite a few little mistakes throughout the book, which a good editor should've picked up. Strangely I found the second half of the book better executed and it had me feeling some emotion.Basically our main characters have been betrothed since they were both children. The h has been waiting for the H to come up to scratch but he hasn't. The H returned from the war with what would be called PTSD these days and doesn't feel ready for marriage. He really was quite awful to the h in the beginning, flaunting his flirts and trying to get her to call things off. The h really did run after him too, which is a story line I personally hate. I think once all of that was behind us the story improved.