Review: could have been a good story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2013
This is a short story about what happens when a very seriouly injured woman is cured by way of a unique and very expensive virus.  It has potential that is not realized.  Editing errors and plot inconsistencies were distracting.  And the characters were so shallow that I couldn't find any reason to care what happened to them.  Additionally, there were far too many loose plot threads when the story ended.  Yes, I do realize that this is a serial - but at least some kind of resolution was called for.