Review: Good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 19, 2013
The story needs editing, there are incomplete sentences and several instances where the action and characters don't mesh.  In one such instance a character leaves and then makes a comment and leaves again without first having returned.  Having got that out of the way, I must also say that lack of editing did not keep me from enjoying the story.  It was entertaining with good believable characters which held my interest so well that I read it in one sitting.  But I have one more comment, the story didn't end, it just stopped right in the middle of an interesting conversation between two of the characters.  I can only hope that this is the author's way telling us that there is a sequel in the works.