Review: Emma's Alpha
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 19, 2013
Emma's Alpha was a quick read at only 60 odd pages. As with most short stories, the pacing was break neck fast and there was no character development or relationship building. Although the story was short it was full of details...too many, in my humble opinion. There was too much information provided in a story as compact as this one. Details were mentioned and kind of glossed over with little explication. Overall, it wasn't a bad read but it was missing a critical element that would have made it a "wow" read for me. Readers should note that the story was written in British English. The limited use of contractions was a new one for me. I'm not sure about continuing the series but would not discourage others from doing so.