Review: A little corny
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 10, 2013
Ok a lot corny. Too many times I rolled my own eyes at the over exuberance of the characters. Everyone finds their mate within a week is a little, a lot, unbelievable. And I love happy endings, just a bit much even for me. Not the best I've read of this author's writing, certainly not the worst.So glad that editing improved in her books, though still a lot of room for improvement. The usage of too versus to, possessive use of 's versus plural s, word usage like your and you're, some spelling and capitalization issues still need addressing. The dashes have calmed down to a dull roar and I appreciate that.