Review: Why all caps?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 23, 2013
Where to start? The book was awful. The spelling and grammar mistakes made the reading an unpleasant experience. I could see a connection between Dom and Novi. Let me give you an example. Ruff instead of rough and Jace found dead in his studio instead of Jace has been found dead. The passive voice was missing in more than once. I don't know if my e-reader had a problem but all the letters were on caps. Also I could separate the inner monologue from the dialogue. The story is mostly told from Dom and Novis point of view, but others tell their story too. And a problem is created. Now there are like 4 different stories and none of them is complete. So if I want to see what is going to happen to one of the stories you are forced to read the next book or books if the author decides to drag things out. If you are considering buying or reading the book I would suggest you not to. It needs to be edited ASAP.