Review: Short romantic story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 6, 2011
This novella starts with the heroine at 13 years old, not comfortable with flirting and feeling out of sort. First kiss.The story then takes you to her prom night. Second kiss. Flash forward a few years. Third encounter. It made me feel like a time-traveler on speed. It's certainly an interesting plot idea and the protagonists are very nice but I missed all the in-between character development. It was like reading the end chapters, having skipped the story itself.The language of the first pages almost turned me off reading the novella. I understand it worked within the story-line but I personally don't enjoy slander and vulgarity. Call me prude. Good thing it only lasted for a chapter.I would have given this four stars but for the ending which was abrupt, illogical and, although some will find it sexy, was not something I envision the heroine would actually do at this point of time. A few more chapters would have greatly helped the final denouement.