Review: Very hot ans sweet short story :D
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 7, 2013
4 starsThis was a very good story. The story was hot and sweet and I liked Reno and Raven.Raven has been in love with Reno since she was a kid. He's her best friend's big brother and her big brother's best friend. She's aware that he wants he but tries to push him away because he's a Navy SEAL. Her father was in the armed forces and it caused issues between him and her mother and he ended up dying in the line of duty. Because of this she's determined she can't get involved with Reno.Reno let Raven push him away for year, even though he loved her, so she'd have a chance to grow up and mature in to the woman he knew would be his (since he's 6 years older than her she needed some time to catch up). He finally decides it's been long enough and that he's going to get Raven to admit her feeling for him and start their future together.TBH, with their history there's not a lot of buildup so it gets pretty steamy pretty quickly. The emotions are there though...it's great to see big, bad Reno get all soft and sweet with Raven, knowing she's his one and only and worrying about winning her over. Reno uses sex to break past Raven's initial defenses and as things progress, he gets her to stop pushing him away as he pulls out her feeling for him and admits his feelings for her. Then he just has to convince her that being together is worth the risk of his job. Fortunately Raven stops living in the valley of DeNile and the story ends really well.I really enjoyed this story. It was short but very hot and sweet. I really liked Reno and Raven and was happy to root for them. I'd recommend this story. Thumbs up! :D