Review: Need some serious editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2013
I mean it has alot of errors to be a short story. I love urban fiction. I think the author has potential. That's why I gave her three stars for effort. She also needs to work on grasping her readers attention. I know writing is a difficult job. I believe over time her stories will improve. Good luck sweetheart.