Review: wish it were longer
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2014
I don't normally give 4 stars to such a short story,but I really liked it,I wish the author could have made it a little longer cause even in just a few pages you get a sense of the charectors.Maybe someday she'll write a longer one and when she does,I will be one of the first in line to read it, tho the story was short,it was hot and it made me think!!! Some people will probably give negative reviews cause its short and mostly sex,but hey its free,try it for yourself and see what you think,I think you'll enjoy it and wish the author wrote more like I did!!