Review: I enjoyed it
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2014
Yes, as others have said, it needed editing, but so many Kindle books do, that I don't usually deduct too many stars for that, unless it detracts substantially from the story.  The great thing about Kindle publishing, is that it's reasonably priced for both the readers and new authors, but that leaves us without professional editors.  I'm so impressed by people who have the imagination to write interesting stories, that their lack of editing ability seems somewhat trivial to me.Some have said this story was boring, but I thought it was quite different and interesting, compared to many of this ilk.  I might have given it another star, except that it seemed a little lacking in suspense.