Review: Good story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 11, 2013
The idea is good.  The structure is sound.  The story does possess tension.  This author does have potential.  But OMG he also needs a good dictionary or a better program to catch spelling errors.  For that matter assuming the man in this story is virile, doing manual labour, there is no way in hell that he would remove his "undies" to shower.  That word is inappropriate in the context and situation it was used.