Review: Has potential, but the author ruins it.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 23, 2013
The premise is great - pretty girl down on her luck, supporting her sick mother, working two jobs etc. She meets the Billionaire boss while she is cleaning his office. That story line has the potential to be a winner, however the author murders the plot by having the heroine so awestruck by the hot boss that she doesn't speak to him - yet she is madly in love with him? Then the hot boss gives her a high flying job as his Personal Assistant just because she helped him put a couple of papers in the right order? What the??? As far as he knows she could be a half wit - as they have never actually had one single conversation! If that couldn't get any worse, the author then has the pair in rapturous love!I am fully aware that not too long ago a lady made a lot of money by writing a few books with a dominating billionaire boss, and a pretty naive girl who gets a fantastic job promotion. But if I have to read another half baked attempt at Fifty Shades of Grey I may get cross! I think a rewrite won't save this.