Review: Seriously Needs Editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 8, 2014
The author has some interesting plot ideas, but needs to be more realistic in the use of the plot twists.  I could not complete this book, as I totally stopped believing that the Heroine could pull off the disguise which was central to the plot.  I mean, how many green eyed people are there?  Green is a very unusual color.  Further, green eyes and black hair, approximate height, nose and eye configuration included, are all part of what is perceived about the people we meet.  I seriously doubt that this disguise could have worked for more than a week or two.  Further, I dislike the impostion of the 21st century idea that women should choose to be self-supporting on a society that trained girls to expect to accomplish their goals through marrying the proper man.  An editor would shorten the length of the book, shorten and make more believable the plot twists and greatly improve this book.  The author appears to have decent writing skills and ideas worth development, but this book just doesn't work for me.