Review: Juvenile
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2012
I agree with A. Schreiner's review. This story had potential. The first chapter sets you up to believe that the heroine has been avoiding men do to a bad break up. But within pages, she spends much of her time imagining all of the sex she could have with the Warlock Detective and her vampire boss and every other hot man she lays eyes on. As the last full blood fairy on earth, she is supposed to hide her existence from vampires (and everyone else) yet she "accidentally" throws fairy dust at the detective and let's her vampire boss lick her boo boo;) Then she spends much of the book running back and forth between the detective and her boss, depending which one she's mad at. The dialogue between her and her girlfriends is at best, freshman in high school level. The main character doesn't fit the personality that is created in the first chapter. Since it appears that the author wants us to view the main character as a smart, independent woman (or fairy), the "heroine" behaves like a spoiled brat and when attacked, lays there and hopes for rescue. It isn't until the end, when her rescuer has been injured, that the "heroine" finally fights back. The last chapter leaves you knowing that there will be another book. Hopefully by that time, the heroine will grow up!