Review: If words were used correctly, then it would be much better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2013
The story idea is great - I'll give it that much.I would have to read it again to be able to pick out all the errors though. It really felt like words were being picked out because they sounded good, not because they actually fit by meaning. I don't think that the fact that it's a teenagers diary is any reason for it either. I ended up skimming over the words that didn't feel like they fitted just so i could read the story. It's a shame too, as it really is quite a good premise and tale. I've got the next one on my kindle but haven't the heart to pick it apart just yet ...