Review: Better than previous
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 5, 2013
I enjoyed this more than Pole Dance, but it still felt frustrating. Dex and his issues were just a bit forced. Exactly why did he keep panicking and running out on Leila? And the most unbelievable part was how easily Leila let him come back after the last desertion. We see a relationship getting serious in a short time, and then he vanishes. I can't imagine any real woman I know NOT require some groveling. Or a LOT of groveling. There were also issues again with typos and such in the text.