Review: If you're bored and its free...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 31, 2013
I almost hate to give this book a bad review because it had some entertainment value... I honesty believe with some help this could have been a really good book. She had a good idea for the story her execution just left MUCH to be desired!!! She should pull this book; find an Author that has had some success with indi books, and ask them for help! For example when telling the story from another characters point of view you don't need to go through the whole conversation again word for word! When she switched point of views I couldn't believe I had to reread the whole conversation just to pick up a few random thoughts from the other character. Big mistake!!! She also should have developed her characters relationships a little better. 2 stars because it has potential! I don't want her to give up writing I just think she needs some help with her work...