Review: Cute fluffy fun!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
It’s been awhile since I’ve read a good shifter story, and I’m glad I hopped back on the bandwagon with AN ALPHA’S PATH. It was cute and fluffy and fun. I had a pleasant time reading this short story, but a few irksome hitches took away some of the enjoyment, so I figured I’d point them out for future reference.The first problem I noticed stems from my own personal issue with the grammar used towards the beginning of the book. Is it just me, or was the first part of the story stilted in some way? It seemed like the author didn’t use contractions as much as she should have in the first part for the story. This made the dialogue seem way too formal than it should be for a paranormal romance. (I may be completely wrong about what made the writing seem awkward. This is just what I noticed; if you found something as well, be sure to point it out in the comments!)Second, the sex scenes were sexy in regards to Kade’s extreme(ly hot) potty mouth, but that's kinda where it stopped for me. The sex scenes were overly descriptive and almost clinical. Thankfully, I was more interested in the character’s relationships than the sex, so it wasn’t a huge biggie, but for others it might.All-in-all, it was an adorable story, and for $.99 it can do no wrong. I will be purchasing the second book in the series as well. I'm super excited for Jasper's story!full review on onecurvybloggerreview.booklikes.comOne Curvy Blogger x