Review: Not terrible, just so-so
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2013
The potential was there. It started out okay, and then just fizzled out.  Nothing really built or got you engrossed.  I agree with some of the other reviewers that everything was just too easy and she went along with everything.  There were some spicy parts, but the wording was awkward.  I know you only have so many words to choose from to describe a man's privates, but "man root"?  It could have used some proof reading and editing as well.  **SPOILER ALERT**  I was left scratching my head. It didn't make sense.  After you "mate" with someone, why would there be a question about whether you wanted to relocate with them?  Of course they forgot to tell her that part before they had sex, but would anyone really say, "Well, thanks for making me your mate, the sex was really great, but I'm staying here."?