Review: Ok
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 12, 2014
It's ok but it really needed to be longer there was so much left out. like did he ever take her back door and did she like it was she confused about her feelings. where there any other boys she was with. it seems like all of this erotica only lasts long enough to get you into it and then leaves you wanting more I'm wondering if I wrote a real story with sex could I publish on Amazon cause I feel there all just getting off once and dropping the story.