Review: Great effort
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 8, 2012
A really good read. And well worth a few bucks despite the gripes mentioned by other reviewers. Criminal that this was for free. I would happily pay a few bucks for this kind of story. Dear author - next time make us pay for all your effort!  Plot was great if a bit derivative and simple in parts. Pacing was very good  Characters were likeable but a little uneven. Hard to imagine in command of a starship but easy to like! Please keep it up!  Allow me one minor obsession - why does EVERY sci if story these days have to be a trilogy?