Review: This story is both hot and sweet!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
I have just two criticisms to make.The first is that the story ended way too soon.  :)  Better to be left wanting, though, than to get boring. Still I was disappointed when it came to an end.Second is that rereading with a critical eye or getting an editor/beta reader would be a good idea. You can't always rely on spellcheck because it can't discern usage for those words with multiple spellings. In this case two I recall being misspelled were "heals" for shoes instead of "heels" and "peaking" to mean looking at instead of "peeking".Great story all in all!