Review: Good story idea but needs a better editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 10, 2014
This is an interesting murder mystery that touches upon several themes, including religion, truth, and community. It would have earned a 4 or 5 star rating though with the following edits:* no grammatical errors ("passed" vs "past", really?)* less focus on the detective's alcoholism (took up too much unnecessary page time)* more focus on the female lead's perspective (the story materializes because of her father, you think she would have more of a presence)Overall it's an entertaining read that kept me excited but it may not be up to par for people who frequently read murder mysteries. I'm confident the author could go farther if the above points were addressed and s/he fleshed out certain themes or situations in more detail.