Review: I could handle the controlling hero, my issue was the heroine
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 29, 2011
I loved the premise of the story and it started off well. The writing is excellent and the authors work is polished nicely. Kudos for that. The sex scenes were well detailed and fairly hot. For me the story and my rating for the story are simply based on personal preference.I liked the alpha male, sure he was a little over-the-top controlling, but he softened and he became likeable. Heck, even when he was a little much I still really liked him. An awful lot of using the word "babe" though, that got a tad redundant. But overall, I really liked himThe heroine I simply couldn't bring myself to care about. She seemed too meek and fragile. I understand her issues with the relationship, but... come on now... she bordered on whiney for me. I prefer strong heroines. Heroines that may be flawed, but you still liked them. This heroine, I just couldn't bring myself to care about.