Review: Very frustrating to read
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2012
This was a frustrating short story to read. While the writing is not bad the flow of the story is all over the place. I actually enjoyed the way Knight's writing felt at times, but then the story would speed up suddenly and it no longer mattered. The relationships in this practically sprang out of nothing and her connection with Benji felt premature and childish due to the speed at which it developed. Also the over use of brand names was extremely annoying and was just too much. I also question the main character's thought process and if she had any sort of common sense.I do give her credit for trying to breech the subject of peer pressure but the execution could have used some work. Especially since the main character is not all that good at resisting anything.It takes a lot to frustrate me to the point of regretting the free download but this one managed it.