Review: Stilted writing, premise beaten to death
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2011
This book desperately needs editing as it is obvious that the person who wrote it doesn't have a command of casual English, including how people speak to one another.  Bikers to bookstore owners to witches from another dimension - everybody speaks the same way and it is incredibly difficult to read without being jerked out of the story every few lines and being reminded that you're reading.The story is okay, I guess.  If the mere idea of somebody from another dimension bringing havoc to those she runs into makes you laugh, then you will probably enjoy this story.  If you need humor to come from character development or actual jokes, then you might struggle to find the laughs that other reviewers reference.  How many times can you laugh at a witch from another dimension not quite getting the way things work here?