Review: Not so good
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2011
I agree 100% with the other reviewers that this story had WAY too many details, to the point of just dumb. We don't need to know that the character opened the door with his left hand by turning the knob to the right and then closing the door behind him by using the handle to push it closed. And the use of "and then", "and then", "and then" all the way through became quite tedious. I was really hoping for a strong ghost story in a short story but ended up being bored. Plus it needed a little editing. Glad this was free!