Review: Heroine too perfect
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 29, 2013
It was hard to get past so many errors. They were in almost every paragraph.  It is easy to forgive a few but when there are this many, the story doesn't flow well. I was constantly having to go backwards and mentally correct and adjust to what the words should have been.  It seemed an intelligent concept but needed so much correction.  I loved King Grim, loved his brother, the Emperor and his lady, loved the two little girls, but their mother, Lisa, seemed more like a stepford wife and not a realistic character.  She didn't really get angry or raise her voice or have any problems at all adjusting to being kidnapped, taken from Earth, submitting to a man she's never met and being made queen to an entirely new planet of people. She was not believable.  Most  women would have had so many problems adjusting to what she was put through, but she seemed too perfect.  I would also like to read the Emperor's story, from the beginning and without so many errors.  Was there a separate book about them that I missed?