Review: Has great potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
This book has the potential to be a really great read but it needs some serious editing which is why I only gave it 3 stars. "Was stood by" is used over and over in the book and it does tend to detract from the story line a bit as my mind struggles with this obvious grammatical error. "Parked up"???? You either park or you don't. Not sure how you would "park up". There are some minor spelling errors but not enough to detract. Mr. Summer get yourself a good editor to take care of some of these minor problems and I have no doubt that you'll be very successful. I would definitely recommend this book as Adrian Hell is an interesting character.