Review: ok start..
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 11, 2012
I'm going to be break this down into pro's and con's...(spoilers ahead please be advised)pro's --the story is well written with few editing errors... big plus.-interesting characters and good development-cons- predictable- I was not shocked at all by who the antagonist turned out to be.. infact i knew the moment the protagonist said " he didn't know anyone else with that kinda money but him" well if he didn't do it.. than obviously that leaves 1 other person.- The flashbacks scenes .. (I could have done with fewer of those..) I get the man was not over mourning his daughter and that he carried a great burden of guilt over it but it really didn't make any sense to me why everyone else blamed him as well,(it was an accident..) it's not as though he set out that night to inflict harm on his daughter. Everything else is completely logical and the characters are logical. (ie. why can't they bring out the herb, why arick is doing what he's doing) I believe in logical characters who are not dimwitted for plot purposes.- I had to labor through some of the plot... I understand not everything is high action sequence but some of the plot driven elements just took longer than I hoped.Overall, its a good read and I'm looking forward to finding out what the heck happens to Khan.