Review: impurity
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2012
This is a common story premise told with a novel device for a twist on the common to make it something more.A good kid overall manages to make a poor choice one night.  It is true how life can alter drastically, dramatically with just one ill move or choice made.  Many times under such circumatances (peer pressure coupled with juvenille experimentation) it is merely parental interference of social calendar that is price to pay.  Though, there are times the results are dire (just read any newspaper to find such evidence).  In this case, Zach had trouble looking for him while his bad choice created "the perfect storm" for trouble to find him and claim him with ultimate consequence as result.The story was well told and had descriptive imagery that was fairly vivid.  There was an issue related to ellipsis usage that was consistent (leading me to believe authors does not know rule of use) - but I did not take off rating for such as the rest was well edited overall.I recommend this piece when free (I think shorts are good indicator of author ability (or lack of) - but think they are not really worth buying.  So, I would say get this one when free and save the dollar and invest it into something longer by same author - he can certainly write well.Christine