Review: Second chance at life and love needs an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2014
3.5 STARSThis is a very touching, second chance at life, romance story. Lou and Jay are both looking for a fresh start, while dealing with their past. They both learn to trust each other, and use their love to overcome fears and the unknown. This book includes steamy sex scenes with graphic descriptions.This was my first book by MJ Nightingale. Even though I had not read the other books in the series, I did not have any difficulty following the story line. The author provided just enough background on the other characters without being too distracting with the current story line.How can this book rate higher? I was slightly disappointed in the lack of editing in this book. Many times I saw open quotation marks, which appeared to be the biggest editing issue. However, I also noticed erroneous words that should have been deleted. As a reader, I am able to look past errors here and there. But in this book, there were so many it was distracting.