Review: needs work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 20, 2013
Okay I liked this book but there were to many flaws that just had me distracted. First the time frame between books one and two was messed up. In book one Christmas and New Years just passed but in book 2 it was like the attack happened before Christmas. Then she gets out right before Christmas and does not want to go back to her old house. A week later New years, she has her best friend, Hannah pick her up and bring her to her house but she talks about their house like its somewhere new. Are you telling me that in a week, Hannah was able to help plot with Gray and get a new house??? It said Gray cried for the second time in his life two dif times and it was actually the fourth time I read how he cried in the two books. Other things that didn't add up, they live in a gated place, how is Raylon coming and going? Lastly I was done with this at 80% and could not figure out why the next 20% of the book was even happening.I think good beta readers really could have helped make this less of a mess. Or perhaps just doing a reread back to back. There was a story to be told I am just disappointed that all of the errors distracted me so. Unfortunately this started to feel like it was a quickly thrown together sequel that had no right being released when it was.