Review: Another enjoyable Will Cannon Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 11, 2013
Each of the Will Cannon books that I have read on kindle have been good stories.  I was afraid that an circus setting might be a stretch, but this concept fit well into the western novel.  Another good B-Western type book that can be read in an afternoon or evening setting.  For story would give a 5 but for some of the writing style and for some format errors in the kindle version I got I gave it a 3 for an average of 4 as posted.The author continues to use "stock footage-stock dialog" throughout the book.  I have noticed this in other Will Cannon stories.  The dialog needs to be varied up a bit.  Also again the dialog between characters is run together and it is too easy to get mixed up on who is speaking to who and makes one have to go back and re-read to make sure they are getting the right message.  Also several times in this download the left margin continues to move from page to page until you are down to about 3-5 words per line, then back to full page and then again a slow shift of margins.  This was somewhat annoying.So far the Will Cannon books I have read have enough action to keep the reading engaged, and keeps the gore and explicit things to a very palatable level so I will continue to obtain and read more books in this series.  With a little more polish and attention to detail and formatting, these "novelettes" would be 5 star entries.  Sadly we don't have the old poverty row studios to pick up these stories and fill a good 60 minute movie of the Will Cannon series.  They would be better than most new programs found on TV.If you can forgive the errors and some stock dialog...you have a good story to explore.  Good guys win again!