Review: torn
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
The story started out with great promise but it soon revealed flaws. Character development was seriously lacking. The only things I truly knew about the characters were that they loved each other and had poor communication skills. The title healing wounds is kind of a misnomer. The wounds were obvious but not how they were healed. Also the grammar really needs work I had to go back to reread passages. The writing was choppy and the flow was broken. I believe if the book was edited by an editor it could have made the story flow better.