Review: Distracted by I
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 30, 2012
I may agree that I think you are a promising new author. I did not finish all of your story , as I was distracted by all the I's within the story and caught myself counting them as I read or trying to reword the text with less I's.  I scanned the rest hoping for less I'ing .For me the use of any one word becomes distracting. If you are not distracted by all the I's it has a sweet plot.Good luck with your first novel that is currently in progress.