Review: Would have been a great story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 13, 2014
Up till now I have given great reviews for books that I have read and up till now a book has always captured my imagination and even though there may be some with grammatical and spelling errors, its over looked by great characterization and great story line.This book has a good story line, however, the writing was childish, the spelling errors were constant. The holes in the story were countless. One minute she's pushing him away, the next minute she's jumping him. One minute she is a weakling, the next she is strong. It was a bad roller-coaster ride in need of serious editing.Had it been better edited and had better characterization, I would have easily given it a 4 or 5 review.