Review: What happened?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 25, 2013
I started this book absolutely loving it. I loved the idea of this on the run for her life heroine working for this Alpha dominant hero. However things quickly went downhill.Here's what I see went wrong:1) The heroine just happens to "know" everyone in the book. And it's all sexually pretty much, or brought on that way. Everyone's just soooo comfortable with having f'd her. It's like "Oh hey Layla darling! Looking good? How's the vag doing? Great? Oh that's just dandy sweetheart! I'll make my appt for next week! Make sure to get it nice and juicy for me!" Uh...yeah.....2) The hero is not so macho. There are scenes where when he's alone or with someone other than the heroine, he's very dominant and in charge. With the heroine it's like he's afraid to step on her toes.3) The WHOLE thing with the heroine on the run from her ex "Diablo". It all boils down to her being a "professional submissive." So every time he get's within voice distance of her all he has to do is say some command and the b--ch falls to her knees and waits for him to take her.4) I thought the heroine, even though all her problems tell you the author wants you to feel for her, was very selfish with the way she was with the hero and she just started getting on my nerves. She basically creates her own problems with this Diablo and "submit" "bend" WTF ever and then needs to be saved. Then she gets upset when she's saved because she doesn't want anyone else getting hurt.5) She's a victim of a violent sex crime however this doesn't change her views on sex, being naked, bondage, dominance. It only makes her not want to get her heart broken again. Umm.....okay....I can beli-no, no I can't believe that. It's ridiculous.This book became so ridiculous that I was literally was forcing myself to finish....and then I just couldn't. I couldn't even finish this book. I'm sorry, I tried to like it, but too many things either didn't add up, didn't make sense or were just plain ol stupid. It was very frustrating because I really wanted to like this book!