Review: sad but boring book about a depressed girl
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 18, 2014
I wish I enjoyed reading this book but I didn't.  The grammar left a lot to be desired.  The book needed a good editor.  A minor thing but drove me crazy was all of the !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! marks, not even during appropriate times.It seemed like it took forever for something to happened.  Until it did, it was h, Harper doing mundane things likereading  a book, doing her homework, going to sleep, sleeping late and working at the bar.  We got to read mutiple occasions of having feet that were swollen because she stood too much, tired from working at the bar, needing a cigarette to escaping and smoke outside, how she liked the bands that played at the bar or they sucked, how she did not like the boxing events at the bar etc.She had a running monologue about those things.  Then we kept being introduced to all these characters who never had much if any impact on her life.  There were so many hot looking men we were introduced to that ended up having nothing to do with the story.  Until she finally met and starting hanging out with the H, she hung out with no one, she was totally alone, hence only getting her running monologue about her boring days and nights.  It was beat over the readers head that she was depressed, that she had nightmares, that she had a tragic past, that she was lonely and had panic attacks.  I felt sorry for her but totally uninvolved in her story.  That is an unusual reaction for me as I usually get caught up in stories including sad ones.  I will admit that I did not care what happened to her in the past and I stopped reading the book before it ended.