Review: Amateirish
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 20, 2014
I don't understand the 5 stars this book got.  It was contrived at best.  No character development, totally one-dimensional, a semblance of a plot and the reactions of all the characters were so stereotypical it was laughable!  I could never imagine 2 rodeo cowboys talking the way the 2 Mc's did!  SPOILER ALERT (maybe)!  Could you picture "Cool dude....a little bonding time is what we need."? Or "Confide in me Matt.."? coming out of a cowboy's mouth?  The dialogue just killed it for me and I gave up at 67% on my kindle.  Maybe I'll go back to it oneday coz it would bug me that I didn't finish a book I had started.  I've run out of options, can anyone suggest a good m/m writer who actually writes about men with men instead of a man with a woman in the guise of a man or even worse as in this case 2 cowgirls.  I don't mean to put this author down but if we readers are not honest in our reviews it does nothing to help the author improve on certain aspects of his or her writing.