Review: Inventive sex scenes
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 4, 2010
A good short story for a reasonable price. Other reviewers have provided the story line, I'd add that I liked McTark's inventiveness in the sex scenes, with a tinge of exhibitionism. Good chemistry between Brian and Amber, their characters had enough depth to make me care about them. The misunderstanding between them was a little out of character for Brian, but you gotta have some angst tension for a good story. I could have used a little more background on Brian. How is a nice, hot, hunky, hung guy like Brian not married or at least involved?