Review: Eh...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2012
SPOILERS AHEAD, FOLKSI started reading this promising series with high hopes.  I enjoyed book one, and yes, I did enjoy book two.  My problems with it involve the length.  It was less than 70 pages, and I paid $2.99 for that.  Never again.  It's beginning to get repetitive and nothing is happening.  Yes, I know the protagonist survived the blast and wonders if her daughter survived, too.  So she slogs around the shelter...and finds the radio...and contacts a relative...and then there's a knock at the door.The End.I'm sorry, I wanted a bit more bang for my three bucks.  I won't buy any more chapters until I read more reviews, and the reviews for chapter three don't look promising.Sorry, Mr. Kelly.  You may choose to piecemeal out your work 50-70 pages at a time.  I choose to buy what I want to buy.  Please, take a little more time and get the story right before posting it for sale.  Doing this will ensure you MORE sales as your work will be of a higher quality.Good luck, and I wish you well with your writing.  I will check in from time to time to see about chapter availability, too.