Review: Good story easy to follow.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 8, 2012
I liked the story. I liked the idea. I think the errors were a little distracting but I admit its 10 times better then I could have done. That said, I wish the ending wasn't so abrupt and without little more information on the world being reviled as the fog went away and more information on the fog itself. Good story overall. I think worth a read. I enjoyed it.