Review: Is this the same author???
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2014
I find it hard to believe that this is the same author who wrote the previous books in this series.  The characters were one-dimensional so I didn't care anything about their love life or whatever struggles they faced.  I realize this is a short story but the previous books in this series were also short stories and yet the author managed to flesh out the characters so much better, especially in the Fire of His Claim.  Making it even worse, the typographical errors were so frequent and so bad that it was difficult to understand what was being said.Please, rework this and give us characters that we can actually care about and please, for the love of all that's holy, get an editor to fix those typos!  I expected way more from this author but this seemed like a rough draft not ready yet for publication.