Review: "By the ice plains!"
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2014
I felt uncomfortable reading this story. Ruby seemed quite immature. And why do the women always have to be DD? Especially since the women on their planet are flat so most any size would seem like a lot. But the biggest thing that drove me nuts and made it so difficult to enjoy the story? Every other sentence (if not every) started with the guys saying "By the ice plains!" or Ruby saying "Holy moly". Apparently it didn't bother other readers with all the five star reviews. All that being said, I did like that  the guys were a blended family and I did like the plot.  I went back and reread the first story and while they did use that phrase, it wasn't nearly as often. I was hoping for a story about the rescued earth women from the epilogue on that story.