Review: Touching Story but Flawed Execution
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
I enjoyed the story but unlikely scenarios, inconsistencies & poor editing muddied the story. I was laughing at some of the improbable things & actually enjoyed reading it after I recovered from the poor editing. Unfortunately, it appears as though a 2nd grader wrote this book so I won't be buying the next book in the series. Read this book for the story, but know you've been warned. Speaking of series, why not write one book instead of breaking it up into pieces -- maddening!Tanisha starts falling for Logan the "polite kidnapper" because of the way he called her sweetheart while he's on the backseat holding a gun to her head. Come on! She decides to help him b/c she's got nothing planned for the next few days. Don't you want to keep you're job honey?Logan played Tanisha like a fiddle by repeatedly offering her money to do things for him. She needs the money never mind she could go to prison for a long time for aiding & abetting. Briefly she even considered turning Logan in for the reward money.At first I didn't read an emotional connection between H/h just lust. Tanisha's red flag went up as Logan gave her compliments and quickly went down. Well he is good looking & nice even though he chained me to the bed. I'm new to shifter & bear stories, and this is the 1st book I read where the man changes into an animal while making out. Holy moley bestiality! You notice she didn't kiss him probably b/c his bear teeth would have torn her face off. And while enjoying the pleasures from making out, she discovers that she likes the pain from the handcuff.Inconsistency issues & gaping holes.*The 1st time they make out, the lights are on, but when he changes into a bear, she can't see & can only feel & rub his "fury" belly. When they are done, she can see him again.* The manager didn't knock first & opened Tanisha's door to deliver towels, very inappropriate. Usually at small motels, you would have to go to the office to get the towels. Also she or Logan should have put the security lock on?* Logan sending Tanisha to the bank will not work because the FBI would have flagged his box number if anyone asked for it. Plus Tanisha can't access the box because her name isn't on the account at least not in my part of the U.S.* Parks are locked up when closed precisely so people like Logan & Tanisha can't hide there & have bear sex. Besides the cops chasing them know they're in the park, and in the real world would keep looking for them.  I'm not going to say nutthin' about them leaving all that cash in the car while they spend the night inside the woods having bear sex & sleeping on the hard ground.* When I look into my rear view mirror, all I see is the road behind me. LOL Tanisha can see Logan's plane in the sky & more.