Review: ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 12, 2014
This story drags on with a lot of ~I'm fat, you're fat, eat something, I'm a virgin ~blah ,blah, blah.  Es seems very imature all because she has a few extra pounds on her.  The author makes size 16 seem obesely fat and it's just not.Tge story holds lots of mistakes and some details that don't add up.  One is when Estella returns home at 5 am and sees moo is not home.  She locks and chains the door and goes to bed.  How can moo then wake her if the door is chained?All over its ok to read but aggravating in parts