Review: Was this written by two different people?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 2, 2012
There's a strong dichotomy in this book: a super sweet love story and hardcore porn action.  I like both things, but when you try to fit them both into one book, things just don't work out.  I can't believe this was written by one person - one moment, there are two naive and sexually inexperienced people lusting on one another, and in the next scene they are engaged in very intense, and I'd say advanced, sexual practices.  I like such scenes in other books, but they didn't fit with the pictures of Zane and Noah built in the rest of this particular book.  Another thing that bothered me: Zane seemed to have jumped out of a regency romance novel, cast in the role of the young ingenue.  So good, so pure, so sweet.  Plus, he seemed ridiculously over-feminine sometimes.  For instance, there's a scene where he spins in a circle with his hands clasped to his heart and emits a small shriek as he thinks about a compliment he got at work.  REALLY?  I dislike reading about girls who act like this, never mind a guy.  Cameron Dane - if you did in fact write this book - you could have done better.