Review: Short story-no excuse!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2014
I love reading about MC's & I also love reading short stories, this one though was so rushed it just was not believable at all, nor was there any real build up WHAM YOUR INLOVE kinda books just don't do it for me at all.Madly falling in love and automatically being 'his women' only because she decided she had a crush on him. The whole club just accepts her because of a joyride on his bike oh and the Aunty just has her married over lunch.Going from stranger to old lady within 2 days and you haven't even shared a kiss is a little too fast moving. Oh let's not forget the 'club business (drugs, weapons, murder ect) just being spoken & shared to her (a complete stranger) by everyone including members who just murdered someone too....nope not believing that at all.He's waiting for her to come and see him, they hardly know each other & he asks for her to see him?There was no build up to any kind of relationship, 99% of it was how she was such a great mechanic yet just just dumped her workload both on her first day to go joyriding then the second day to go drink in the clubhouse.The ending had the most detail only so it sets you up to read the next book. Ummm no thanks!