Review: Nice try but no cigar
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 24, 2013
I debated about whether to include this in my Listmania list of "Quality Taboo Erotica." (http://www.amazon.com/lm/R2SFG98MD0Q4A0/) and finally decided against it.  I like the premise - a teenage girl babysits for a couple having marital problems and ends up having sex with both, including three-ways.  It's the first time the couple have had sex in a long time, and it reminds them how much they love each other.  The sex scenes are excellent and the writing is more-than-respectable English, though the author seems to have abandoned proof-reading toward the end.The problem is that the first half of the book is description that does nothing to advance the story.  There's way, way, WAY, too much description of the family and the children and yadaa, yadda, yadda.  I skipped or skimmed my way through most of the first half of the book.  It wasn't because I was dying to get to the sex scenes - I like buildup.  It was because I was waiting for the story to start.In summary, I give this a "Nice try but no cigar" rating.  I'll try something else by this author.  Maybe she does better with shorter stories.