Review: Needed an editor
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 20, 2014
I liked Morgan's A Rookie Move so much that I bought her second novel without reading the sample first.  It does not measure up to A Rookie Move.  In fact, I've stopped reading Slow Burn because I was getting tired of the protagonists simply reacting to each other's physical appearance.  40% through and all I've read is how hot Brody and Zack think the other one is and how they have to resist each other.  Yes, there's coverage of Brody's physical therapy and attitude problem.  But a lot of that is repetitive too!  Since there has been no plot or character development for over 1000 locations, I'm throwing in the towel.  It's well written, but needs someone to edit the repetitive material - I think there is a mystery later in the book.  I would have liked to have read that much sooner.