Review: Mildly Dusappointing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2014
I read a Lot of paranormal. Let's face it, I need a twelve step program, I read so much. I initially rated this 4 stars but the went back to 3 because I'm just not emotionally invested enough to buy the next book. if there Is another book? I assume so as it was left, not exactly with a cliffhanger ending, but open ended. This book has some differences from every other vampire, Lycan book out there which set it off to a good start. It had Real potential.The storyline had me invested as did most of the characters. I wanted to feel empathy for Kate but she was very selfish and self centered. Of course, the coven mostly encouraged and enabled that. I totally loved Lucas. There were lots of editing issues. Typos, grammatical errors. Sometimes you just fixed the entire sentence in your head. Annoying and not deserving of a 5 star rating. I don't understand Why I keep seeing so much of this, because most of us would not turn this in to our high school English teacher. Sigh. But the real reason for the reduction to 3 stars stems from my disappointment with a bit of a spoiler......stop reading here if that bugs you. There is a big fight scene that is so totally unrealistic that I was disgusted with it. I Know it's Fiction and Paranormal Fiction at that but apparently I am more willing to believe in a Vampire/Lycan fight than I am fighters stopping to chat and hold Hallmark touchy freely moments in the middle of a battle for life and death. A good story gone bad.