Review: 2,5 stars. Attention spoiler at the end.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 11, 2013
This book screams Twilight fanfiction. The characters' names were changed but Forks and all the rest weren't. If you make the effort to publish a fanfiction try to do it in the right way.This story is not so bad you can't read it but honestly not so good either. I feel that the emotions and situations between hero and heroine are kinda too much rushed. It's just that it all goes from 0 to 100 in a turn of page. One moment she's his nothing and the next one she's his everything. A makeover and new clothes were what he needed to start lusting after her. This is my most hated cliché. And the story is not flawlessly written. Many hole plots. Some parts are cofusing because suddenly you don't catch who's speaking anymore. One moment the hero, then the heroine, then hero's mother. One moment you figure them in a place but a few lines later they weren't where you think they were supposed to be. Some editing is higly required too. The sex scenes are kinda hot and the hero is an over the top kind of hero which I like but here it's not enough to save the story. Anyway the last scene written stuck in my mind leaving me with an horrible and sour taste in my mouth and what I keep thinking once finished the book was not how good or bad it was but that sick scene describing the inhuman way they killed Taylor. He was a villian, acted cruelly so he deserved what happened to him but I'd have done without the gory details.