Review: Had so much potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2013
2.5 stars...This story had so much potential!  The author really drug out some parts of the story while others were rushed or even dropped. I want to know what the fall-out was for Dani's parent's involvement. And why was there such a big deal made out of Van's dad getting out of jail and then nothing? While I did like Van & Dani's relationship and that part of the story I thought the other supporting material in the book was disjointed, sometimes vague, sometimes overly done.My other pet peeve on this book was the dialog.  The author needs to breakup the paragraphs and story a bit when changing a POV.  I had to re-read so many paragraphs because it didn't make sense until you figured out that she changed to a different character's POV.