Review: Terrible
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2013
This is bad fantasy schumck, with a turd curled on top. I envisioned something completely different, perhaps a bit of  plot, maybe even a plausible story woven in there ... but what it did have (besides a lot of unimaginitively explicit sex) was a whole lot of nothing. Nada.The first novella, Brie's First Day of Submission Training (or something close in title), didn't give any plausible explaination as to why a pretty and very young woman would even be marginally interested in agreeing to give away a audition tape of herself starring in a solo selfie sex show to strangers who just ask for it, let alone answering and handing over a lengthy sex questionnaire inquiring about her extremely personal information - IN WRITING, TO STRANGERS! [  Stopping here to inject a bit of REALITY into the equation: hasn't she ever heard of the internet?! Geez - how about having that same masturbation tape plastered all over porns sites on the web, from now 'til eternity? Perhaps where a college admissions board, or a future employer, can stumble across it while doing a Google search on a background check for her dream job once she grows up a bit, screws her head on straight and embarks on a professional career?  ] ... After asking ourself all those "whys?" - why she would place herself at risk and agree to give away all that for no rational reason - we then blindly stumble on, continuing to wonder why this same girl would willingly agree to give away no strings attached sex - let alone demeaning sex - to anyone at all, being harshly "graded" (B -) by those same strangers, as she is placed in one publicly uncomfortable situation after another, while on display for everyone watching for that matter? I have to assume that injury or death - or even sheer embarrassment - never entered her pretty little brain at any point, nor the need to consider any type of personal self protection or safeguards of any kind to ensure that she she might live see the light of day thereafter either.This follow up short story, Brie Learns to Obey, continues on along the same venue - lacking substance, quality or even  enlightening us with further attempts at a plot development. However, anyone whose fantasy is to be abused and humiliated publicly, degraded as the cheap sexual plaything by a partner not of your chosing, and taught to passively accept anyone domineering in a sexual situation (whether you find them to be to your taste, or not) then this series is for you.I by no means consider myself a women's libbist, nor a prude - but really, I can see no reason at all why someone would put themselves through anything of the kind: forced to have sex with the types of people you state to be turned off by in an extensive written questionnaire of likes & dislikes; performing and enduring sexual acts you've already stated you'd rather not do, and do not enjoy (again by same written questionnaire); being verbally chastized and degraded for unconscious acts of free will that all people residing in any developed country in this day and age have enjoyed by birth right for many decades, and behaving like a dog in training - taking place in front of a live audience consisting mostly of people you don't like - all this while paying tuition for it like it was some kind of accredited college or university? Eww. Sad enough to make you feel filthy inside for having read it in the first place, and ticked off for having paid for it too.There are plenty of other steamy books out there with the added bonus of an actual storyline that makes sense of the situation(s) the characters find themselves in - without a woman being humiliated, the use of pressure, coercion or force. Check out H.P. Mallory's Jolie Wilkins series for one - it's a fun series, and you'll find one of the hottest fictional characters currently in print: Sinjin Sinclair. (Your welcome - and enjoy!).