Review: Mixed Thoughts...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2013
First, The author is a good writer, capable of great detail and surely promises to deliver more great stories in the future but, here are my problems with the book.The very beginning under "License Notes,"  it tells me I cannot ever sell or give a copy to anyone else.  Well...lol, dont ever tell me what I can or cannot do with a book I purchased and now own.  When buying a hard cover/paperback, no one tells me what I can or can't do with MY property.  When it comes to ebooks, there should be no difference.  Things will change or everyone WILL go back to paperbacks and leave the "E" world in the dust.  If this book hadnt been free, Id have gotten a refund.  People have sold their used books for years and years.  Even as things stand now, Amazon has a pull down tab that allows most indie kindle books to be loaned out at any time.Also, so many animals were killed in this book.  Why?  So so very unesscessary.  When the men caught up to Luna at the cave, she goes and shoots all their horses instead of them.  Awful.The book never explains why she snaps the neck of a dog either.Lastly, Luna's supposedly writing down her lifes story in some journal.  The journal is about 90% of the book.  Lunas words are intelligent, articulate, educated and very well spoken so it annoyed me horribly when her spoken words to others were relegated to uneducated slave talk.  "You is my massa and I is no good".Please, you can't have a character speak like that then have her journals the complete opposite.  It just didnt't make sense and was really odd. Some slave who couldn't read must less write, could never have written those incredibly intelligent journals.At least the story was good enough to finish, but the drawbacks kinda made it just so so....