Review: short
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 31, 2013
Short stories demand an extreme focus for the author to be able to deliver a tight plot and poignant characterization.Fantasy short stories are even worse because fantasy is hardly ever associated with conciseness as it is a genre which usually needs a relevant world-building effort.This very short M/M erotic fantasy entirely lacks this kind of brevity. It reads like the summary of a much longer story, plot, characterization and tension build-up sacrificed to the need of containing it within a limited number of pages.Writing is also hurried and the final sex scene, with its roles rigidly codified -this author has a fetish for Dom/Sub, by the way, which is not to my taste-, is hardly satisfying.