Review: Awkwardly written, lots of errors and too steamy
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 28, 2013
The way this is written is so odd.  If you pick it up you will see what I mean within the first few pages.  It's almost like a robot is describing a series of events in a very matter of fact way.  It makes it difficult to feel for the characters or fully engage in the story.  There are many spelling and grammatical errors throughout.  These pop up at you more and more frequently the longer you read.For me personally it was too steamy and too descriptive of their sex life.  For some readers this may be a plus, but for me I prefer romance stories without this being such a big part of the storyline..  I found some parts sleazy with a big yuck factor for me.  Like visiting some warehouse club where anything goes and your exploits are viewable by others.  Ewww and yuck for me.You may b wondering why I don't give this a 2 star rating.  I waffled back and forth on that one.  I feel this is a very  middle of the road book.  At least I understood the storyline even if I didn't embrace it.