Review: Falling
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 20, 2014
I wanted to give this story four stars, but I couldn't because of the editing problems. There are many missing words in the sentences, and periods where there should be commas, which caused sentence fragments. The storyline was good, but rushed. Considering the differences in the two main characters upbringing, their romancehappened too fast. It lacked the beauty of slowly embracing their love, considering Bobby Jack's body is covered with racist tattoos. It was a good read, but I wish it was a longer novel.