Review: A good start but needs more development
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
The characters were well developed with distinct personalities in spite of the story being very short. That's the main reason I would have loved it if the author had given us more in the way of story. The sex scene also left a lot missing in the way of buildup. It wasn't exactly a quickie but it could have been described in such a way that built upon the individual characters personalities. The way the scene was written it could have been any set of individuals participating.