Review: Steamy, yet awkward
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 1, 2014
This book, in places, felt like a few sex scene fantasy write-ups for short stories that were then loosely threaded together by a watered down plot and a female protag who constantly complained about her self - her looks, her age, etc. By the 4th time she brought up her age, I almost stopped reading. The dialogue was stilted in several places. The sexscenes were hot and full of testosterone - almost too much of a good thing. I liked the female protag as a mascot / coach - I just wish she hadn't repeated how old and unworthy of the hot football player she was, every other paragraph.