Review: Nice story over all
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2014
The good: I enjoyed this story. The author did a great job with the emotion Laurent was dealing with, and how the kids behaved. I liked the Nanny aspect of the story too. I especially liked the use of unfamiliar words and then the explanation in the dialogue. It really worked to make the story different.The bad: There is one scene that they go from fighting their attraction and mild kissing to him talking dirty to her. It was an odd transition and I think that was just unneeded. The story also wraps up really quickly with him just changing his mind. Again, an odd transition. I also wish there had been some actual real time conversation with Laurent's parents, instead of just telling us about them.Overall: I thought it was a nice story. They felt like real people, and I enjoyed reading it. Nice addition to the Marietta series.