Review: worst book ever
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2014
i like buying series when a book looks to have a decent review.  don't bother, with this one, save your money.this has to be one of the worst stories ive ever attempted to read and i dumped it after the first few chapters.  usually grammar or spelling flaws don't bother me too much so i'm not griping about that.  the story jumps and is uneven, tenses change out of the blue, the preoccupation with stupid sex descriptions and references make it even worse.  seriously, how old is the writer, 16?  seems to be quite enamored with his and everyone elses' crotch.  good grief already.  the hero is running for his life int he woods chased by drug lords and he is stopped in his tracks watching a woman pee in the woods who just happens to stand up and just happens to start masturbating in front of him.  oh yeah, that's a normal action.  we all know lots of woman who do that, right?a skilled writer does not have to resort to cheap sex scenes to entertain or educate his readers.  clean it up, fix the errors and it might be a decent story.i want my money back, can i get my money back?