Review: Decent start, wishing for something more though
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2013
It was a good start and had all the hallmarks of a book I could really enjoy. But the problem for me came from the ending. It was too abrupt even with the necessary fast pace of a short story for me to feel all that excited about it. I'd love to see these two in a longer work where we really get to see their relationship and how things have grown for them. The ending could have been left off and I think it would have been a better short.