Review: Meh
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 31, 2011
The premise is a clever thought.  The characterizations are unpleasant caricatures. The ending is an abrupt unfunny, unclever 'joke'.  If you like Seinfeld (which I don't as they whined all the time and were unpleasant caricatures [except for the Soup Nazi, and the tall, gangly, crazy fella]), you might like this portrayal of a stupid, clueless, awkward guy and a greedy, self-centered, heartless gal, and a faceless yet ethical corporation.  I think the premise could be reworked into a much better story, as the author does have some talent - I think he's just learning and could be very good someday (he needs a good critical reader, like an editor).