Review: Danger Is Lurking
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 14, 2013
I have never cared for short stories/novellas. I find that most are missing a beginning, middle or end. I am a firm believer that even short stories should be a complete story. This one is cut short in the middle with no end in sight. When I say in the middle I mean that literally in the middle of sentence. I was truly disappointed to find there was possibly going to be a part 2, as I felt like the story should have just continued to a full length, hell it’s only a novella. I was getting into the story and then the rug was pulled from under me with the abrupt "ending."Best friends and roomies Nicole Peterson aka Heidi Potomac aka P and Tamala Brown aka Heidi Zakowski aka Z do almost everything together. They are like family. Some background info was given and I was able to understand how Z came into the life of a vigilante killer. P on the other hand was a mystery not much background given on her other than she was from Brooklyn, NY. I would have liked to know more about why she was a vigilante killer.For the most part I enjoyed the story. I was dissatisfied with the fact not enough details were given on the characters. I need to know more about them, in particular P. I enjoyed reading about the ladies and wanted more or should I say a complete story as it ended too quickly, leaving many questions left unanswered.  Needless to say I was taken back at the end to see "If you enjoyed this novella and want more, go to amazon.com to give your feedback on this story right now!" I was left feeling like if not enough feedback comes the story will be left incomplete. While I was enjoying this novella this is not what I wanted to see in the end.SiStar TeaARC Book Club Inc3 star ratingJan 2013