Review: Disappointing. * SPOILERS *
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 2, 2014
* SPOILERS ** ON LOAN FROM FRIEND *OMG!! this book hurt my head to finish. And I think I lost some brain cells. How anyone can rate this book higher than a 3 I will never know. A 3 is being generous and I'm only giving it a 3 because I liked probably 30% of the story and the rest was horrible.. there were more errors than I could count. Many sentences didn't make sense. Lots of the time Melissa was speaking and then she would say stuff like "Melissa and Danny." when she clearly meant Shelby and Danny lol. In the beginning she says her sister is 10 years older then her and then we find out the dirty little secret that her sister IS her mother and how is that possible?? Then we learn her sister was 16. Okay, that makes more sense. But the author needs to pay attention to details she stated throughout the book lol. She needs a beta reader or five and a better editor for sure. And Cutter's sisters husband is the guy who raped her....that isn't even believable.. who marries the person that raped them? so much stuff in this book does not make sense or is not believable. Like when she is hit by a truck then has sex with Cutter when she wakes up and then it ends. Sigh.... there was a bunch of the story I actually did like and enjoy. The story was interesting and had A LOT of potential to be something really good. But the rest like 70% of the book was just, I don't even have words... if there is a second I may read it to see where these two go and PRAY the author does better the next time around, if she takes these things into consideration she has potential to write some amazing stuff. I wish her all the best. This is not meant to hurt the author. Even though it probably will, but I will be honest with my opinion and I want to see more from authors. This was a HOT MESS. It also leaves you with so many lingering questions unanswered. Had potential but fell flat in every single possible way and worst and most rushed ending.."I could be your bandage, "