Review: Ok not much to the idea many question unanswered
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 28, 2012
I'm going through a short story binge, so I read this despite the criticisms on the shortness.  It was ok.  I think a larger stand alone novel could have been written expanding on the main premise.  That premise was revealed towards the end and isn't delved in to at all.  The main characters in the story aren't developed either.  Seems to be more of a proposal for a book than a short story.