Review: I Liked It Better than the prequel
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2014
When I read the prequel I felt disturbed that it wasn't  a story by an episode. In See You in Hell Demelza Carlton has fleshed (ha. ha.) her characters a bit more. This felt like a complete story here. In the beginning Mel continues her job in H.E.L.L. with some reservations about her boss Luce. In the middle Luce does seem to have been positively identified as Lucifer by an angel sent to help Mel out, but Mel has some questions about his lack of what she feels is "evil". In the end, it seems that Mel has identified that Luce is in love with her and she thinks she has fixed things.But I wonder. In the story, there isn't much different between angels and demons. There is as much subtle deviance and outright lack of self-control on both sides. I wonder if the author knows her theology or is just having fun with a story. If she knows her theology then she knows that Lucifer isn't a demon at all (which explains what happens when Mel touches him). I hope this is true because it could make it interesting if "The Great Deceiver" is actually just holding his cards close to his chest, so to speak. And Mel is in for some serious soul-searching.I received a free copy from storycartel in exchange for a fair and honest review.