Review: Proofread and edit!!!!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2014
The first thing I have to say about this book is that the author did a terrible job with the writing, ALOT of run on sentences and not enough commas, you couldn't tell exactly what character was talking because all the sentences ran together. I also think the author went a little overboard when it came to all the sex stuff, it was just too much too unrealistic. My final criticism is the end  wasn't good, for the book to be so long then the author just let it drop.