Review: Enjoyable Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 3, 2013
I loved the characters and story.  The author sucked you into each page.I give this a 4 rating simply because of the all the grammatical and spelling errors the editing missed that constantly broke the rhythm of the story.  I went back to previous pages just to make sure I hadn't missed something when a characters name was spelled differently or changed completely as if the author couldn't make up her mind as to what to call them or how to spell their names from one page to the next.  Very distracting.  Shows a distinct lack of a stable storyline.Fortunately, the story is engaging enough to continue the series.  I look forward to starting the next one.