Review: Needs some work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 5, 2013
Editing and proofing needed.  The author should have been too  embarrassed to release work where every character sniffed repeatedly.  Surely he could have had them engage in coughing, tearing, blinking, clearing of throat,etc. Please someone fix this. Points given for an otherwise engaging story. Some passages brilliantly written. Promising author.