Review: PROFFESSIONAL PROOF READER AND E D I T O R NEEDED ~ TOO MANY ERRORS
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2014
WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN A PAGE TURNER EXTRAORDINAIRE ENDED UP BEING A DISAPPOINTMENT in that the book was fraught with a myriad of grammatical and typographical errors, which FRUSTRATED the reading process and DESTROYED what could have been a GREAT book.LOVELY story line although the end of the book seemed RUSHED.Being an AVID reader it would be advisable that as an author YOU Renee Wynn employ the services of an experienced proof reader as well as a professional EDITOR there were too many errors to truly ENJOY THIS BOOK.  I am ashamed for the Publisher Revel Publishing LLC... There should be a REVISION and RESUBMISSION of this book with a free download for those who spent the whopping US$4.02 for so many errors. I shudder to think that the print version is US$13.95...The following is what $4.02 got the reader ~ ...the scent of BACON 'waffles' instead of wafts. A paragraph on page 185 was repeated twice and again the same occurred in a subsequent chapter.  Brody was "in tuned" with his surroundings NOT "intoned."  Then the epilogue says FIVE years later but the oldest son Trey was three and a half. Was the pregnancy for one year and a half?? Then Ashton sent Aiden the six weeks old baby downstairs to have the maid put on his favourite movie before dinner.EVEN the sneak peak "Whisper my Name" with Brody had errors - "she were" no subject/verb agreement... SADREADERS need to leave with POSITIVE long lasting memories of the BOOK as well as the AUTHOR. A total waste of my MONEY... I have read FREE downloads and 99 cents book with FAR LESS errors.