Review: Juvenile writing, so tiresome
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 21, 2012
Amazes me how a book like this gets 5 star reviews, I guess there is a market for anything. Others have said it but I will add my cents worth. Poor editing, lousy sentence construction, stiff dialogue often repetitive and over cooked, no subtlety, incorrect word use - e.g. does not know the difference in usage between "bear" and "bare" hence " he bare a heavy load" Really! Not just once but consistent usage. An 8 yr old could do better. A good plot ruined by lousy story telling. No character development. transparently borrowing from established story lines and technology descriptions but adding nothing. Don't waste your money.