Review: Not so good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2014
I read the first story in this series and it showed great promise in the characters and the storyline.  It, too, was only a dollar, so I was able to overlook so many mistakes made, such as missing punctuation, missing words, or even words that didn't belong where they were.  I was hoping that this story would improve on such mistakes.  It didn't.  If anything, it was even worse.  So many mistakes that the story doesn't flow well and I was constantly having to correct them as I went along.  This became quite irritating.  Also,the lead heroine, Rosalee, was hard to like.  Note to author, a little sarcasm goes a long way.  The hero, Adam, was immature and vain, so maybe the two deserved each other.  I don't think I'll be buying any more of this author's work, even for a dollar.