Review: I just couldn't read it.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2013
In my opinion, the writing was so stilted with grammatical and syntax errors that I just couldn't get into the story. What I read was interesting and had a lot of potential to be a great story but that is only half the battle.  The author has an excuse i suppose because he's foreign but this story is in desperate need of a editor. Maybe after its been edited, I will try again.