Review: Disturbing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2014
MY REVIEW CONTAINS SPOILERS SO STOP NOW IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW DETAILS ABOUT THIS BOOKI can read erotica with the best of them and not blink an eye. However this book bothered me.  Haley is the most naive 18 year old I believe I've ever read. She went to an all girls school and has just graduated. Apparently her mom passed away when she was young, so Haley was raised by her dad and often her dad's best friend William. She even called William "Daddy William."On the night of her graduation her dad throws her a party. Her friend's brother slips a roofie in her drink and follows her upstairs to basically rape her. He knows she's a virgin and he confesses his intentions. William comes to the rescue, beats the guy and has him arrested.Okay, here's where the story just completely lost it for me. Haley wakes up blindfolded, naked, tied down and with William's release all across her chest. Yes, William took her home by convincing her dad he'd look after her and she'd feel safer away from her room. Then he stripped her, tied her down and pleasured himself straddling her while she's still out from the drug. Really?!  She's basically unconscious. And her dad...the man didn't think he should keep his daughter home with him after nearly being assaulted?When she wakes up William talks to her as if she's a small child and she doesn't even freak out when she realizes she's naked or what's on her. In her defense, Haley's had a major crush on William for years. I don't recall exactly how much older he is, but I'm thinking about twenty years older. So she's happy about about them being together. She's also excited that he wants her to only call him "Daddy", especially when he's taking care of her "greedy kitty." Yes! It's exactly what you're thinking and that's the term it's referred to constantly by "Daddy." Then Haley's actual dad agrees to she and William being together. Seriously?! This man is like a brother to her dad and had been like a second dad to Haley, and her father is okay with it. WOW!I don't consider myself a prude and I like reading erotica books, but the Daddy references, the kitty talk and Haley being so naive just felt unbelievable and disturbing. Sorry. At one point Haley even questioned William about something poking her while he was kissing her. Haley's character was just portrayed too naively. To me, had she been a little older and smarter it wouldn't have been as creepy.  But keep in mind, others enjoyed the book and this is only my personal opinion.