Review: three and a half, actually
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 25, 2014
Good story, for the most part well told. Well told enough to read at night in bed instead of sleeping. However--and it is a big hoewever--the book is in dire need of editing. I do provide such services (lfc04e at my dot fsu dot edu), but there are many others and a good editor is worth her weight in gold! There are times when the story has clearly been changed and a small part (a pronoun or verb tense) has been forgotten. There are times when errors are merely basic editing issues. But the inherent errors make the intentional "mistakes" that make the story work disappear, and for avid readers, they are disruptive.