Review: Yes, up in flames
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2013
The story was quite good plot-wise. I had difficulty sometimes following which character was saying what because direct speech was not usually given its own line for easy following. A lot of swear words were included, which were unnecessary. I didn't appreciate the 'lack of editing' the author proudly apologized about at the end (Got this in January 2013). It made it seem like a rush for sales. That should not be done to the readers you are depending on for sales and word-of-mouth ads. 3 stars. It's OK. And there's a scene where he really needed to take a bath but fell asleep. Yucky.