Review: Cute, but very short!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2013
I downloaded this as a freebie and knew it would be short, just not 30% on my kindle short! I didn't bother to read the next "preview" or whatever else comes after the end of this story. I also felt the ending was very abrupt and just stopped. I would have prefered a bit more than "Could this be love at first sight? No! But maybe on second sight!" Overall I thought it was a cute plot and would have enjoyed having a bit more plot development and character building.