Review: Very good story.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2014
This is a very good book by this author. I enjoyed the story and the HEA. Good job developing the h as a real woman who was very independent; however, very vulnerable. In addition, even though the H was totally alpha, the author also showed his vulnerabilities, which helped to created this great love story. Great job fleshing out the characters and their history and filling in the gaps..  in addition, hot steamy love scenes. . I think this author needs to work on the flow of her story...way too many paragraphs.  I also do not think that there is a need for italics to indicate speech or emotion. All in all, it was a very good story and hopefully this is an indication of better things to come.