Review: very amature and thus not worth the time
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2013
This has been very badly written It seems that the authors has no idea of how to put a good story together. Here are some examples and spoilers:1-almost every charachter "glides" no one walks or strides or move etc No they glide.2-The action sequences are relayd as if its a 7 year old boy telling about an animation movie he has seen.3- There are so many cliches that i had to stop counting.4-This trained assumed small build girl fights big strong tough trained mercenaries while wearing a rain soaked black cloak which covers her from head to toe and after she had ridden and walked in a heavy rain storm for at least an hour!5- Later she practices in the barn wearing only a little white top and "lace" panties!! What?6-The violence is crude and poorly presented So is the naked ladies in the "bad" bar and the girl's sexual fantasies when she's alone in her room. All rather tasteless and immaturely presented.7- It seems all the humsns in captivity except for the 1 hero, all cry and sob and moan and go insane and soil themselves. Really! You want me and other readers to believe this?While the idea has some merit, I am afraid it was messed up rather badly by the authors. They need to go back to school to learn how to write a novel. Thank goodness it was free and I also couldn't finish it So there is no chance that I will buy any other books by these authors.