Review: Not Very Good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2013
I read the entire book, but it wasn't easy.  I agree with another reviewer about the flow being stilted.  In addition, in at least one instance the author lost track of her timeline and a character went straight into an event where a description of something else happening occurred a couple of pages earlier.  The dialogue and narrative was written the way someone would speak - someone young and a tad immature.  Ginormous and gazillions are not good descriptors unless you are writing for children.  Person and tenses sometimes changed inside paragraphs.  There were some typos and other grammatical errors that seemed to get worse as the book went on.  There was also a rather disappointing lack of good description of the characters.  I had no real idea as to what any of them looked like except for Belle.  The color of their eyes was a big deal.  I also still have no idea as to how old the characters are - especially in relation to one another.  Very disappointing from a much-published author.