Review: short story bleck
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2013
Sorry. As an aspiring writer I try not to write bad reviews. But maybe I had too high of hopes. I didn't realize it was going to be a five minute story. It would have made a cute novella or even novel but this was basically an outline. ***Spoiler***Girl runs late, guy spills her coffee, another guy helps her, girl goes to park, sees a runner save a kid, girl almost gets attacked for helping a homeless man, man who helped her after coffee saves her and carries her upstairs...the end. ***End spoiler***All the food analogies where distracting and frankly I didn't get it. It was written but I felt like it could have been longer.