Review: Needs a lot of work
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2013
The author definitely needs to finish this book.  She should develop her characters more including (and especially) her main characters.  The story reads like a young kid's daydream where she is the hero and has this sexy boy who is totally in love with her, and everyone in the story has really awesome powers but there's no real purpose in any of it.  A lot of what happens in the book seems to have no purpose and does not follow any logical sequence.  They stop at her old hospital and no one is there - no explanation of why.  There was no reason why her old boyfriend was pretending to be someone else and how he got his "father" and her mother to go along with it.  The boyfriend said he pretended to be someone else to help the main character but that explanation was completely inadequate.  The author rushes through her story without putting any effort into making the story understandable and readable.  This story may appeal to very young people who can put themselves in the place of the main character but as a mid level to high school teacher, I wouldn't recommend this to anyone.  There's is an implication of a sexual act that doesn't belong in a younger reading level book and yet the reading level is way too low for high school.  I hope the author spends some more time improving these books, developing characters (make them real and readable, not using sentences that seem to occur in the author's mind).  There's lots of "he said" "she said" but you have to struggle to figure out who is actually talking and since the punctuation is missing or erroneous, it's difficult to do.  The ending is completely less than satisfying, without any closure at all.  It seems like she just got tired of writing and said "ok, the end".I agree with a previous opinion that this one is worth the price but not necessarily the time.  I will not be paying $1.99 for the next book as I do not think it is worth it.  Although, I would like to read it if the author rewrites the story with better development of story line and characters.  Promising but not as is.