Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 21, 2013
I waited for something gripping to happen. Boy loves girl, to the point of stalking and obsessing, girl slowly falls for boy.That's it. No climax, unless you count the sex scenes, no drama, no words of wisdom. Just an immature boy dating a girl who won't publicly kiss him or tell him her feelings. I found them both impossible to like. There was no real depth here. No meaning. Nothing powerful.I gave it an extra star because it was decently written , no huge mistakes in editing, and if you want a dull and drab story this one would be a good one for you.Hope the writer comes up with more stories and improves herself with each one.