Review: okay  read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2013
the story was okay, not too cliched.  there were quite a few spelling and editing errors which were distracting, and sometimes I had to re-read a paragraph  to try to figure out what or who was doing what.  this may not be a genre I like, I guess.  this was the first one I've read in this style.