Review: Story has a lot of potential
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2013
I really enjoyed reading this short story. I think there could be more to this story if character development was pushed. It would be great to see how CAPT Welch aka "Goldilocks" got to her current status. Although mention in this short story, a separate book would help seal her characters development and could branch off to other short stories in this universe. Overall it's still a good read.