Review: 3.5 Stars - Good read that would be better with editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 1, 2014
First off let me say I really liked the book. The characters were well developed and fairly believable.  From the sister and brother who were estranged to the cast of team members who were technically gifted the mix is great.What I liked:A story that reveals the technological possibilities that will be available to track via Social Media.  Social Media leaves footprints forever - some of the methods used in the book I am sure are here today - others should follow soon (if not already here).Gadgets - I love gadgets and this book is full of them!  From large airships to small remote control devices - these will catch your interest.The characters - Chloe - the older sister who started the enterprise , Will the previously estranged brother with a military background and some blank spots in his memory were my favorites.What I did not likethe constant use of 'Her' - Sentences that begin with or contain 'Her and I' - proved distracting to me,  The good news in this is less of a bother in the subsequent books.Chloe's way of talking about multiple scenarios in the same paragraph - reminds me of some Type A friends I have - can be hard to follow in a bookThe 2.99 price per Novella - I have three novellas so far which brings the price to around $9, comparable to a standard size eBook from a seasoned, well edited, author.That said, the price did not keep me from buying the next two novellas as they were available when I finished the previous books. -  It may keep me from purchasing the 4th if and when it comes to market.