Review: Okay short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 29, 2012
This very short story, which probably took less than 5 minutes to read, had a surprising number of characters considering it's length.  I found this a bit confusing, and feel it detracted somewhat from my enjoyment of the story.  As you would expect from a work of this length, the characters are not at all developed, and this made it hard to keep straight.  However, I found the idea of using the characters from the board game "Clue" unique, and possibly this is why the characters seemed so one dimensional.  I feel that the idea could be expanded a bit to make a much better story.  That being said, the ending took me almost completely by surprise.  In retrospect, I should have seen it coming, (and I think that some readers will), but I totally missed it.