Review: Could Be Better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 27, 2012
I like that there was conflict between the main characters. This is a good story, but I do feel that the story could have been developed more and tightened in some areas. The ending was not exactly believable to me. It seems like it was just thrown in there because the author did not know how to bring everything about and end it. The author could have done a better job with this book.And again, I do like the story line. It just needs to be more believable.