Review: Amateurish Writing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 13, 2013
This book had potential but the writing style left much to be desired. It was ok at times and than struck with awkward sentence structures that took me out of the story (what little there was) forcing me to correct them in my head. I hate when this happens because it is such a let-down and makes the book totally unprofessional. The sex between the H and h is extremely repetitious where around 70% I started skipping through it; it was just more of the same, and the same, and the same. However, there where things I did like in this book. The author captured the atmosphere between band members, on the tour bus, and at concert events very well. This was entertaining and felt real. Also, sex scenes, when not between the H and h, were pretty hot, especially the MM and MMF ones.*** spoiler start *** Towards the last third of the book, I was waiting for more action with Scott (who I really liked) since his attraction to Brandon was mentioned several times throughout the book, and was also hoping more with Jesse and their living arrangement, either with or without Brandon, but it never came. It just sort of ended and it felt disappointing. *** spoiler end***