Review: Say what???
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2014
I try I really did. But come on now it was just to much going on. I do grasp and understand that there are situations that exist and still does in Mia case but to allow all that happen to her in this book was a over kill. The husband, principal and the father in law. Just to much. Then her mind set was still that of a child but yet was written as having employment in a school setting. Then this complete stranger she back and forth with on line meet up and engage. Okay i get that it was a Erotic tale but in my opinion the Erotic was that of a grown man having his way Yes with a woman but she came off as being a child. There mention even a small introduction of a wife and son then nothing. Talk of her and the son going to visit her parents and a nothing more really other than lack of love spoken then their gone. Next I guess this is what made the book Erotic because everything took place really in the home that he share with his Family. But the Say What came when this man put his life on the line. Spoiler Alert: The stranger who name you learn Chapters in is Cobalt. A special train Killer. Yet writes books. Falls for Mia and decide that protecting and rescuing her is his main concern. Man to top it off Daddy that what Mia decides to call him knocks her up. Their on the low right but she gets a call to sub for a class and what she do she goes to work keep in mind she been missing for a few days. After that I don't know. There was 2 different stories being told that Truthfully! take out what was going on with Mia and Build on the action part that would have been a good story. Just hard to believe a Man die for a woman he didn't know. Just unreal and says he rather his son knows that he die a honorable death. What is honorable about what he did? What did I miss. Okay I click some cause I just couldn't stomach most of it but wanted to finish. Like I said the Action was Okay. Smh I didn't understand why he left Mia, their daughter and Son wealthy and left her to over see the children account. What about the WIFE!! It's not like she cheated, left him or anything. But she got nothing. Hold up now the son never meet Mia but knows that she his Daddy baby doll and he has a sister cause Daddy talks to him and told him and that he needed to be at the grave so they all could meet. Lol Keep in mind this is 2yrs after Cobalt been dead. Not to mention there another son Hint that'll be the one Cobalt will allow to live but never tells the young man that he his son.Just to much. Nice try. When two authors decide to do a joint piece it can be a Hit, or a miss. This one was a miss to me Sorry. But will try these two again Minus the Erotic.