Review: better than the first book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 20, 2011
As far as content goes the second instalment of the series was a big improvement over the first book. The story was moving along fairly well until the second cliffhanger.I am begging the author, please go through these books again and at least fix the typos if nothing else. When a book is written with typos and grammar errors like this one is it really reduces the effect the book has on its readers. I know personally I would have enjoyed it much more if I wasn't constantly having to re-read sentences because of missing words etc.As much as my reviews may have sounded a little harsh, I only mention these issues because they are easily fixed. If would be a shame to allow a series to be less than it can be because the author doesn't feel the desire to proofread the work before publishing.All in all so far it isn't too bad of a series considering it has been free so far. Will I read the third one when it comes out? Dunno, maybe if its also free.