Review: Made Me Laugh!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 2, 2013
There were a few little inconsistencies (Jesse bought a hand pump at Walmart, but has enough money for a motel room later?), and minor editorial issues (toward the end of the story, Jesse is referred to as Jay), but overall, this was a good read.  And yes, in reality, Gabby should have done more than punch him in the nose when the light bulb went off over her head and she really remembered who Jesse was, but hey, it's a romance; kinda hard to have a HEA if the heroine kills the hero, right?The characters were entertaining and the story had a couple of interesting twists.  I laughed out loud at Russell the Alpaca!  I downloaded this story when it was free, but I'd be willing to pay for more from this writer.