Review: Good Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2014
The story is good however I found it disconcerting that in book one Nathaniel smelled like lemons and mint and then all of the sudden in book two it was lemons and limes until about 3/4 of the way through.  The story line was good, however there is a lot of grammatical errors which takes me away from the story because I am trying to figure out if it is just a cultural thing or of perhaps the books were self published and did not have  a proof reader.  That being said I really liked the story and will be one of the first one's to purchase book three.  Great author just think a bit more attention to grammatical errors and the characteristics of her characters would help make the books more enjoyable.  Yes I would definitely suggest giving it a read you won't be sorry.  See I have had to correct at least 20 words just from my keyboard screwing up. :)  Read the story and stand in line with me for book three.