Review: Reminds me of a bad joke
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 14, 2011
I found this short short story a little off-putting.  The beginning was kind of comic, like a children's book, with the repetion of 'dark dark' over and over again.  That made the ending a rather abrupt shock that I didn't like.  Other than this, there was no plot and no character development - so the whole point was to draw me in to give that shock, and I didn't enjoy it.