Review: not there yet
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2014
I have read all of the Slavers Wars . I was hoping for the same quality of writing. Unfortunately that did not happen.The two and three star reviewers have basically described the problems.I do have a problem with the character Mason. A bit too Dudely-Do-Right for my taste. He has a gorgeous assistant that he barely notices until somewhere in the middle of the story concedes to have her move in with him. lol.That relationship had a lot more potential to develop Masons character than having dinner at his sisters. My point is this type of character development is this authors style, unfortunately. I hope he reads this and if he writes the sequel takes this into consideration.