Review: Split Decision on This One!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 26, 2012
Let me say, first and foremost, I love this story -- or should I say stories?  It was sweet and funny and I absolutely loved the ending (don't worry, no spoilers).I giggled at Ally's fear that Jack thought she was an idiot or something because she couldn't seem to speak when he was near.  When she spotted him at the station and began to follow him, I just knew something "magical" was going to happen.I appreciated that, although Ally certainly didn't know it, Jack was a little speechless, too, when she was around.  Again, I laughed when Jack realizes the only way he can get to Ally before she leaves the meeting room is to climb across the table!However...Ally's half of the story was so sweet that when I got to Jack's and suddenly it was "F...!" and "f...ing" all over the place, I was surprised!  Was that to show what a "manly" man he was?  I know it's not a big deal to a lot of people, but I didn't feel it was necessary.  It added nothing to the story, and in fact, made me like Jack just a little less; it made him seem a little coarse.So overall a sweet story, but be warned about the language if that bothers you the way it does me.