Review: Has good potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2013
I like the story plot, but there was too much dialogue of the lead female character thinking and assuming. I never got the feeling that the men cared for her beyond sex. I took a while for me to figure out she was a black woman. The men were described to the "T," but I knew she had a lot of hair that was bushy or thick.great description of the setting, felt like I could actually visualize the forest. Seemed a bit rushed at the end. I think the story should be revised. but I did like the concept of the characters situation.