Review: Great Potential - Needs Serious Editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 28, 2012
I couldn't get past the 3rd page of the book -- the lead character refers to himself in third person and it's extemely obvious that English is the writer's 2nd language.  I'm rating 2 stars for the potential of the story -- which would be fully realized with expert editing -- to fix the grammer, syntax and almost child-like writing.  I strongly feel this story is excellent in the writer's native language.  I hope the author will do all of us a favor and get the book edited by a professional.  I'd love to read the professionally edited version of this story.