Review: Once again, running spell check is not proofreading
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 25, 2013
This is a good story. It does have a weak ending which was not nearly as well thought out as the previous 95% of the book. The author needs to take some of the proceeds from the sale of this, his first novel, and hire a good proofreader. While a lot of his weapons' descriptions are quite accurate, he does need to review his knowledge of the M-1 Garand -- 8-round enbloc clips.I am looking forward to his next novel and sincerely hope he hires a good proofreader to correct the multiple wrong word choices he made in his first novel. We're, the contraction for the words, "we are," is written with an apostrophe between the first "e" and the "r". It is not one word with no apostrophe as it so frequently appears in the work.Secondly, when writing a novel as opposed, perhaps, to sending a text message, the personal pronoun "you" is spelled out, not written "U".  Just a couple of simple examples, but if the author hopes to collect money for his effort, he should at least provide correct syntax and usage in his work.