Review: The writing is not up to the standard of a six dollar book.............
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 10, 2013
The premise was interesting. The characters were well done. The H was nicely portrayed, and so was the h, and even if she was a tad juvenile. But I did like her, none the less.The stoiryline was not too bad. So what did i have an issue with? I just felt that for six dollars the book should not have felt like a 'movie of the week'. The actions scenes, and in particular the fighting scenes, were borderline ridiculous. They had an almost Power Ranger feel to them. If  the author wants to keep writing in this genre then she neds to read more action books and see how people write a fight scene. And I think that good action scenes as well as good love scenes are probably some of the hardest things to write if one does not one to come off as seeming silly or ignorant. If the fight scenes had been different this book wold have been a smash. Also, the price really does have to come down a bit...even some of the 'bigger names' rarely price their books that high. So for a 'newbie' who still needs a bit more polish that might be something to consider.Would I recomend this? Not sure. Wil I read more? Not too sure about that either. I will wait to see if a third book comes out and how people rate that first.