Review: It may be entertaining for some, I just couldn't get into it
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 8, 2013
I just couldn't continue after the first 15 pages.  The obstacle I could not get past is the context.  Children do not use terms like investigation, absurdity or the "p" word to describe the male anatomy.  Especially when they are only 7.  The level of reason or rationale was also beyond that of even a genius at age 7 which makes the story start out as not being viable to the period.  In most “stories of old” the populace emulates actual human history in that most can’t read. So how does a 7 years old acquire such a vocabulary.  Not to mention the fact that the meter method of measurement just doesn't seem to fit with the time frame or environment the writer intended to set.