Review: Good MC story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 5, 2014
Elayne DiSano has written a well balanced MC story with just the right amount of grit, a great, rough around the edges alpha hero who has some serious issues, and a heroine with a her own problems. They crash into each other, literally, and then never let go. I also really liked her secondary characters and hope that they get books of their own.I took off one star for the lack of editing. There are a ton of typos, obvious auto correct type errors, and some grammar issues. She also has a problem in several places with the format of the kindle file which was distracting. I urge the author to invest in an editor for those problems as well as to help her tighten up the story. She writes well, tells a great tale, and only needs a bit of polishing to be world class. I look forward to more from her in the future.