Review: Too short but promising
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2011
Admittedly this was a freebie so I shouldn't have expected anything too fantastic...This short story presented a mixture of paranormal and eroticism but could really have been an interesting full length story, there were enough paths and the characters were clearly defined enough to take them through.As a very quick read it was ok, but as another reviewer mentioned if this had been the end of a longer story it would have been much better and made more sense.