Review: The author tried too hard to deliver -- so he failed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 1, 2013
This book has an interesting premise and -- even if it does fall apart at the end (which it does) -- it was a decent effort by an indie author. The problem is that sometimes less is more. In this case, Demaree tries to prove that he's really smart so he overwrites the book. When you overwrite a book, boredom and ennui take over. I had to force myself to finish this. When I did, the ending was so bad that I had to stop myself from coming on and writing a one-star review right away. After a few days, I've calmed down enough to say that this book isn't terrible. That's the best I can say.