Review: Loved the story that grammatical errors didn't bother me much
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2011
Like others, I too noticed the grammatical errors/bad editing, but I didn't find it was so terrible to actually stop me from continuing to read. Since I enjoyed the storyline itself & since I'm not gramatically perfect myself, I was able to overlook them, though I did have to reread some sentences to "get" it. For that, I took 1/2 star off.Compared to other published erotica, the sex scenes here were shorter, but I'm the type of person who gets impatient with lengthy foreplay that I tend to skip pages to get to the main event, therefore this story actually works for me.Another 1/2 star off for the several flashback scenes wherein the heroine's imperfect body was described over & over again. After they've fallen in love & been sleeping together, I would like to think the guy could now marvel on how wonderful his girl is without mentioning her extra pounds. I got tired of reading the same thing over & over again.In spite of the above, I enjoyed the story so this book is a definite keeper for me.