Review: Check It Out!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2013
Very short, good/not great, and questionable.  It wasn't believable to me that Gabriel fell for her so hard when she was disrespectful time and time again. Given a lot of clues that the scene wasn't how either one of them normally did things , and there was not a lot of connection made with each other to set them both so strongly off balance to cause the story to end the way it did. Don't get me I loved the way it ended and the sex scenes, but the end just didn't seem believable.  It's short and hot so definitely read it.