Review: "You're standing under the mistletoe"
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 10, 2012
And with that great first line thus begins a promising story, I'm just upset it was wasted on such a short story. It was over in what 5 minutes? They way though that West was very straight forward about his intentions with a stranger - Rebekah - leads me to believe this is all we are getting and really with the all too soon declaration, there really isn't anywhere else to take the story. I liked that they were strangers and it all started under a mistletoe but I wasn't too pleased with his declaration that she was the one by just looking at her, without even so much as speaking to her. Just leads me to think it was all based on looks. The elements were there though to make a good novella or full length novel, its a shame it wasn't longer.