Review: pretty good story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 11, 2013
This was a pretty good story. I think the writer could have put a little more thought into the strong bonds that develop between men and women that serve together on a military base. It would have been tough for a lot of them (which was never brought up in this story) to fire on those that had been their friends, even if they had a different opinion about leadership. This story portrayed a lot of them as ruthless killers, not even allowing a chance to surrender to their former "brothers in arms"...not very realistic. As usual, the editors must have chosen to just trust spellcheck to proof read...there were a lot of stupid spelling errors that a 6th grader would have noticed! Overall, it was a good theme, but a little reasonable research would have probably made it a lot better.