Review: Rough draft
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2014
Good story.  Good characters.  Written a bit like a movie.  Some reviewers have decried the profanity, but it was about right for military men.  This book has a lot of potential, but could stand some editing and a rewrite.  I enjoyed it, but felt like it ended in the middle of the story.