Review: Underweight Book Needs More Meat
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 13, 2013
Sex:1 When trying to write erotica I hear the good authors tell me you need to show your audience not tell them. Use all your senses to make the reader want to keep reading. Well that did not happen here. There were to many pages of non-dialogue and telling of a story. I didn't feel any need or flush, that I normally get when reading erotica. The point of erotica is to titillate. This made me annoyed.Plot:1 What Plot. The teaser book behind this one had more plot and I don't read horror or suspense. Yes I know erotica doesn't have plot sometimes. Its like a porn movies with a script. But sometimes you get one that has both and it rocks. Just not this one.Overall Enjoyment: 1 No enjoyment what so ever. I think this is a perfect example of what not to do when writing. Use the interactions between character or even the environment to move the story along. I want my 30 minutes back.