Review: Too much in this short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2014
The problem with short stories like this one is trying to do too much, which impacts pace and timing/continuity.Sex scenes were hot.  The chemistry between the two characters is hot.What changes everything is when they go to NY.  This took my rating from a 4 or 5 star read to a 2 star read.  Too many complications and drama without proper set up or explanation.  Which let to an unsettled feeling  of unresolved issues despite the HEA.  Author tried to cram too much into this short story.