Review: This is a very good short story,  but needs more development to get brighter star rating
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2013
What was written was well done. There's no way to have developing plot, just the basic bones of a story when there are so few pages to grab and hold your attention. The story was there and enjoyable. Will be getting more in this short series.Theila