Review: Ridiculously simplistic
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 2, 2012
This could have worked as an outline or story proposal, however it is a very poor book.  The story is simplistic and the writing is childish. I don't expect much in the way of plot or character development in a short story and I was still utterly dissapointed.  I'm glad it was free and if it hadn't been so short, I wouldn't have bothered to finish it.I definitely don't recommend it and I won't be looking for other works by this author or publisher.