Review: Great story in need of editing
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2014
I think this was a great book, generally well-written, but in need of a good editor. A well-crafted story that kept me coming back for more, it bothered me when words were missing or duplicated, or tenses were wrong. I appreciated that it was such a long book for free, so I didn't hesitate to pay for the second volume. As a writer, I appreciate the work, but recommend finding one or two prereaders who can catch the majority of those niggling issues. I look forward to book two.