Review: Didn't Quite Make It
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2014
The story starts well and moves slowly. The relationship is just shy of Insta-love and then begins the irrational emotional swings. Both MCs are emotionally damaged and each is unwilling to listen to reason, trust, or give the other a chance to explain. Who does that? They each go from "I can't live without you" to "I can't tell you how I feel" fast enough to make your head spin. The only tension in the story is caused by the unwillingness to talk to each other. I finally just quit - annoyed and a bit bored with the whole story. I don't really care how it ends.