Review: Worth consideration
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 21, 2012
The plot line of this novel was incredibly interesting.  It has potential.  A woman running from corrupt small town politics stumbles into a life or death situation, is rescued by a stranger, falls in love and deals with the corruption successfully.  With the help of a super heroic lover.However, while the plot was strong, grammar and syntax was difficult to read at times.  Character development, motivation, etc. was present but felt extremely rushed to the point of unreality.  Timing suffered due to hamfisted, rushed, writing.  Several times I wanted to edit this novel myself and re read it afterwards.Point being: I wanted to read the story (based on the plot).  I am glad I finished the story.  I will read more from this author.  With some serious editing this could easily be a five star novel.