Review: It was "ok" but the dialogue ruined it...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 20, 2011
This was a freebie, and a very quick read.It was a decent story, aimed completely at young adults. But the main characters attitudes and swearing got on my nerves. There was no need for it.The editing for Kindle was also a little off. No paragraph breaks and whatnot to signify that it was the next day/next week, and both characters dialogue ran into each other a few times.It was a nice (although a little predictable) story, which could be found in one of those collection of scary stories books. But what ruined it for me was the editing and the snotty attitude of the girls.2.5/5 from me.