Review: Cheesy story, simplistic writing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2013
Free relationship advice: if you're thinking your boyfriend is about to propose, don't spend lots of time kissing other guys.  Jacqueline may be a social worker AND her younger brother's legal guardian, but she still comes off as a shallow twit.Frankly, this was a silly story and the writing needs a lot of polishing.  We're reminded waaay too often that Jacqueline & Alex's are still mourning their parents.  The dialogue is stilted and cheesy, although at least there are not a ton of grammatical and spelling errors.examples:"As Alex made slurping noises, she said, 'I'm glad you're replenishing your body fluid, so you don't become dehydrated.  You had to lose a lot of water from sweating so much.' " (Kindle location 197)" 'Thanks for suggesting we come here to dinner.  Their Mexican food is delicious and authentic.' " (Kindle location 349)Don't bother with this proposal.