Review: Flat
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2013
I liked the quick start but it seemed rushed. I did like how they put their original assessments aside and took the time to get to know each other. I would have liked a little slower pacing so that there was more depth. I was angry with the heroine for flying off of the handle because Ethan wanted to take a job that would ensure a good start to their lives together. Yes it was dangerous, but she blew way off the handle and didn't even hear him out. He eventually didn't take the job but who is to say that there won't be resentment because she pretty much paced an ultimatum that was a bit much. She came across as bitchy instead of strong and independent. I have to say that this is a much better read gramatically and plot wise than some of her other short stories.