Review: Too Short but Otherwise Sweet
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 5, 2013
This is a promising setup for a story but the tale barely gets rolling before disaster strikes.  By disaster, I mean the first installment ends.  The author may do better to advise readers this is an episodic tale rather than a short story, but I liked the kids and I thought the backstory was nice.  Hopefully in the next episode we will see some more of the plot unfolding.