Review: Fresh and entertaining, but unreadable due to punctuation errors
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 21, 2011
The title caught my interest.  Reading the free sample made it clear it's probably a book I'd enjoy, but I couldn't even make it all the way through the sample because the punctuation is just so wrong.  I really really want to read this, would even buy it based on the little I read, but every time I see a misplaced comma I cringe and the author descends another notch in my estimation.[Please note, all aspiring writers, commas do not go after "and" - I know we talk that way, but that's not proper punctuation; if you're going to go through all the effort to write a book, at least take a gander through Strunk and White.]So please, Dear Author, I beg you, have the punctuation corrected, because I'd really like to enjoy your story [and be able to upgrade my rating to more stars].  An entertaining, fresh voice in the paranormal romance arena is a joy to find, but it's got to be cringe-free reading.