Review: Skip this one
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2013
Why did I not like thee? Let me count the ways:(1) Mary Sue heroine. She's so lovely and talented and speshul and everyone just adores her. Ugh.(2) Unrealistic hero. A Navy Seal and an architect? And so handsome and talented and speshul and...(3) Silly plot.(4) Author writing about stuff she doesn't know about--like karate and architecture--and making quite a hash of it. Would a bit of research hurt?(5) Mild dialogue tag abuse. This was not nearly as bad as it could have been, but it was still noticeable.