Review: loss
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2012
This story is a good read.  There were a couple of parts that were a bit draggy and/or jumped a bit without full clarity.  They were not huge deals though.  There are several minor punctuation errors.  Though, again, not huge deal as they did not stall pacing or cause confusion/rereading.The ending was a bit rushed considering the beginning was so developed and in depth.  There could easily have been 10,000 more words to bring about a fuller closure at the novel pace set initially.The premise was interesting. The intrgral characters fleshed well.  The genre allows suspension issues (nothing of substance) to be minimal.  Even with the final confrontation with the brothers, the scene laid out was acceptable (given genre), rather than hokey.  I find many paranormals /horrors to just wind up with gratuitous bunk.  This one had the paranormal aspect in plausible manner (to this reader) .I recommend the author and this title.Christine