Review: Looking for fantastic - didn't find it.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2014
I thought with all the four and five star reviews that I had found a great new author to read. I realized this would be very short story when I picked it up on my kindle.I was distracted immediately with the improper use of verbs and all the grammatical errors. While I managed to get to the end of the book because it was so short, I didn't find anything regarding the characters that warranted the reading of the story. I sincerely hope this author's other books are written better than this one. But, I won't be picking up another one to find out.