Review: For Erotica A good Read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 10, 2011
I have really struggled with where to rate this book because I really liked some of it and really hated some of it. I will list the positive first.*Great book cover. It drew me in, and I immediately clicked on it.*The writing was reallly well done. Lynda edited the book extremely well, and it flowed really smoothly*I liked the side character the lawyer, and think there is potential there for another book.*The alpha male had some things about him that I really liked.*It had a really good ending.The negative for me.*The swearing, there was just to much for me. I don't mind a bit here and there, but there was a lot in this book, and that turned me off.*The sex was a bit to close to rape for me. I love love love alpha males, and even consentiual rough sex, but she was crying and stiff and saying no, and he was still pushing forward, I didn't like that at all. Of course she caves in and gets into it, but he should have stopped before that point. It wasn't just her denying him a kiss and then immediately becoming overwhelmed before they moved on. He had her naked and was slipping inside of her and she is still saying no.*She didn't know what the heck she wanted. She wanted him one second and then was terrified the next, and then wanted him again. She was to wishy washy for me.*He would be rough as heck with her, not even letting her have a few minutes alone when it was clear she really needed it, and then he would call her baby and be all gentle. He was a bit to one way or the other.*I really don't like when characters fall in love in only days. It irritates me because it is so far from reality. I know romance books are not reality and i love that because I want to be swept away into a world I don't live in, but love takes more than days. He was talking about them staying together forever after only being together for 2 days. That is just to much for me.I am going through and redoing some of my reviews, because I really don't like to be negative on a book because something that I love someone else will hate, and vice versa. I think it all depends on what your taste is. I relooked at this from an erotica perspective, which is what it is listed under, and that really raises it, because in the erotica people want a far more dominant male, far more submissive female, and the writing was done really well, so I am upping it to a 4 star.