Review: Dick is running.  You can't see him run, but apparently he is.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 13, 2014
I tried to like this book. I really did, but I just can't. The heroin is supposed to be this hard badass woman, but within 5 minutes of meeting the male lead she's believing every word he says and showing him her soft vulnerable side.  Please tell me how an ex slave, warrior hearted leader of a rebellion... is showing her vulnerability around to anyone who wishes to see it.So, within 12 hours of meeting this stranger, who has shown NO PROOF of anything he says being true, she's off gallivanting the solar system with him on his space ship. Earlier in the book it had said it'd take days to get to the world she is on to find her, so with that being true, it should take days to get back to their planet. She gets on the ship, gets shown her room, aaannd... that's it? The next thing you know, it's right before she meets her sister, and the male lead brings her expensive garments to wear.  So, for days she has had nothing to wear but the clothes she arrived in? No description of the ship, no description of anything.  I guess she must have slept for days.  In her dirty clothes.  Without washing herself.Next nitpick.  She's been raped and beaten for years, and she says to herself over and over "This man can hurt me, all men are bad, all men are not to be trusted" blah blah blah... yet... again, within 12 hours, she's rushing off with a complete stranger. A stranger she is sexually attracted to. It just doesn't make sense in the way it was written.  I now know not to buy anything from this author if the all follow this pattern.  I only spent .99, but I still want a refund.And on and on and on.I gave up. It might be ok to some, but to me, it reads like an outline of a story.