Review: Good start to a novel but
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2013
Where's the novel? 30+ pages, no sex (at all) until the very end, and then it stops abruptly not long after the two start kissing.  I am sorry if anyone sees this as a 'spoiler' but I felt it needed pointing out for all those who read the title and expect something they won't get.I thought long and hard about how many starts to give.  I would have liked the story if there had been more.  And I considered giving this just a one star because of the misrepresentation (this was not an erotic novella).  And when I looked at book two, which costs $2.99, all I would get is another 34 pages of the story! I have no problems paying for a good book.  There are many times I have order a freebie as a first book in a series and willingly paid $3, $4 or even $5 for each book thereafter to finish the series.  But what Hunter is doing with this story is just not right.Put the story into one book - don't rip your readers off by charging such high prices for another 30+ pages, or by misrepresenting what your reader is getting.  It's unethical. Quite honestly, Ms. Hunter, two stars is generous (please feel free to see all my other reviews - you will see I am honest with my opinion and give credit where credit is due and have never given a book such a low grading before).