Review: Good read but not great
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2011
Tory is a new employee at Ethan's company. When Ethan's security team learns that someone is sabotaging his company Ethan is determined to find out who the culprit is.This was a good story in that it has suspense and a little drama all while the main characters are trying to find love. I really like that in a story.What I didn't like about this story is the how the author main female character was made too perfect. Looks hair attitude personality. Not a single flaw at all.Is it realistic for a person to be able to be sitting in an interview with an HR representative and the CEO of the company come in and said person tells the CEO off and still gets the job even though she wasnt totally qualified in the first place.And then there was the issue of her clothes. Her business work skirts were so short that her vajayjay was almost showing when she was sitting. And even though she was habitually late for meetings somehow that wasn't her fault either.She even jumped into a domestic dispute and beat the man up for beating up his girlfriend and then a few days later she dived into the street to save a little boy that was chasing a ball from being hit by a car. (OVERKILL on the perfect female character!)At some points Ethan came off as too standoffish and Tori seemed young minded although I think the author was attempting to make her seem mature.Also the ending wrapped up way to cliche'. Like one page they were apart and the next he's begging his love for her.Overall the story line was good and interesting .The love scenes were very tasteful and there is enough story to make it worth the money but some points just fell a little flat for me.