Review: Frustrating
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2013
I could have enjoyed the story if it weren't for the problems with the editing.  There are repeated uses of "have went" in the authorial narrative (not dialogue attributed to a character).  The fact that "gone" is the past participle of the verb "to go" is not exactly the rocket science of English grammar.  There are also appearances of "sort of similar, but wrong" words -- e.g. "voracity" where the author apparently meant "ferocity" in the second paragraph of the first page of the book. The presentation needs a lot of work before it's ready for public consumption.