Review: Not bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2014
I wouldn't say this is an erotic romance but an erotica, still not bad. I only had a couple of gripes with the story -1. It's a first-person story, yet the thoughts are italicized. It makes no sense. If it's a first-person story, we already know her thoughts. After a while, it became very distracting.2. There were a few grammatical errors and misuse of words. It didn't take away the story, though.3. The sex scene was interesting to read and I didn't get hot and bothered. Some of the words and phrases used - 'his d was fatal' were a little eye-rolling worthy. After such a buildup throughout the story, I was hoping for more.Overall, I'll give it 3.5 stars. I will read more from the author.