Review: A Bit Of A Mixed Bag (3.5 really)
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2014
Fractured Man, is in some ways a typical post apocalyptic science fiction novel; however, with that being said, there were various elements of the story that were truly unique. My favorite aspect of this novel is the juxtaposition of the supposed "presapiens" to their technologically advanced "evolved" human cousins. What makes the comparison between these two groups so profound is the seemingly emotionless nature of a majority of the advanced human species. In some ways it reminds me of Vulcans from Star Trek; all work and no play. Meanwhile, the "presapiens", with whom the reader is intended to empathize with, have created tight knit camp communities where trust and other emotions greatly play into their daily survival. Early on in the story we are introduced to the main female character Aleha, who is a scientist of the line of evolved humans. From the get go Aleha shows signs of empathy for her Earth born relatives and whereas I like this about her, I did find it difficult to believe she would hold these views so soon after realizing the presence of humans on Earth. I would have preferred to see more internal struggle with her emotions waring against her upbringing. Aleha was also the only female character in this novel worth being introduced to. On a non-character related note, I did enjoy this novel and the author does display his own unique voice, which is so very important for an author to do, especially in their first book. Lastly, I wish the reader was given more than a tiny glimpse into the reasons for the human exodus, how synthetica works, and more details about the cultures of both species. I look forward to more from this author to see how he develops and grows because I see a lot of potential even if this book isn't quite there yet.