Review: needs a more believable plot
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2013
The heroine is plucky and the hero brave and loyal but too much of this story was beyond the pale in believability. Too much like wish fulfillment to be truly convincing or enjoyable. I certainly couldn't do a better job myself, but I get the impression that the author ran out of plotting or editing steam about half way through the book.