Review: This Book Will Make You Twist and Shout!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2014
Rating:  4 StarsThis book was much better than the first book "The Erotic Dark"!  Book two continues with the ongoing life on the Plantation with our foursome, Lydia, Preston, Gabriel and Kruin.  Things are going good until Preston becomes ultra possessive and jealous over Lydia.  Because of this, Lydia finds herself on the outside doors of the plantation and away from the dark trio.I was a member of Team Preston where I was rooting for him to get his act together and be with Lydia or for all four of them to live a happy lustful life.  I did not get my wish!!!  This story went completely sideways on me!  There were a few twists and turns that I did not see coming, which kept me really engaged in the outcome of the story. Preston is my anti-hero in the story.  He is very complex and I hope in a future installment we can find out why.  We learned some of his childhood, but it appears there's more there that has not yet been revealed.  As for Lydia, she has some serious issues with being out of control and I'm curious to know why.  I'll say it again, the storyline and where this series is headed is very creative.  I'm totally engaged and I want to see how things go.  Secretly...Go Team Preston!!! (I just love an anti-hero).Why Not 5 Stars?As mentioned in my review of book one, the sexual descriptive writing was horrible.  However, I did notice that it was improved in this book.  I said improved, not resolved completely.  There were a few times where the clinical body part words were used.  I still think more use of the actual words would make the sexual descriptions more erotic.  Again, much improved from the first book, but could use just a bit more tweaking.