Review: Dont bother
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2013
The first chapter of the book showed a lot of promise ... with action and we got to know the herione a little bit. Then we get introduced to the main character and it just starts to fall apart. What flowed in the beginning became jagged and weak ... extremely sloppy writing. It was like ... ok lets have some filler before we get to the sex scene! I have read some excellent erotic writers ~ Evangeline Anderson and Tina Folsom come to mind. Hire an editor to read your stuff if you want to be credible at all. Otherwise you will end up in the DELETE pile (as you did for me).