Review: No emotional build-up
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2014
We know why we read these books, the not sex.  But I do want some feeling as to why these people are so in love.  For them it isn't just about the sex, it emotional.  But the problem with most short stories is that the reader is plopped down in the middle of these relationships and we have no time to feel what the characters are supposed to be feeling.Then there was the heroines family.  Not well done.  I think the author is capable of writing a good story but she make it impossible to believe the situations because it had to be rushed.  Not well done.