Review: Too Short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2013
This story was well written but too short for the scope that it covered. It involves the coming together of two attorneys, a female state prosecutor and a male defense attorney.There is great tension and great dialogue, especially the court room scenes. You have a good sense of why Bryn is so cold and resistant when Daniel finally notices her. The story needed to be fleshed out more.It would have been great to have some action time with Bryn's mother and sister. The friendship with Tam could have been expanded.The ending was too abrupt for the commitment it suggested.Ms DiPaul knows how to write and write well. She should have expanded on this story.