Review: very slow beginning....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 2, 2014
The first book was entertaining to me, which made me want to quickly read book 2.  I was a bit disappointed because the beginning annoyed me.  I was beyond tired of Samantha's back and forth emotions and her wanted to have sex to "feel" better.  Once I got past that part (which was painful) I was able to get throughout the rest of it, while at the same time skimming to the end.  I skimmed because a lot of it was repetitive apologies, "I love you" , and annoying sentences.I like a book to flow when when I'm reading it.  That's one of the things that keeps the readers attention.  Shantel Tessier's writing style was little too proper.  For example, one of the characters would say "I could not believe he did not tell me", instead of saying "I can't believe he didn't tell me.  I'm well aware of the importance of proper English, but because we naturally talk in a different way, I had to go back over sentences to give it some slang (so to speak) so that it would flow as if I were watching a movie.  This was also a problem with the first book, and I had hoped she would correct this.I would recommend this series because it is in fact an entertaining read.  Especially book one.  I hope that book 3 doesn't disappoint.  I've been disappointed in trilogies lately because many authors struggle to end the series with a good vibe causing their fans to think twice about any other novels they put out. .99 isn't bad to consider giving a book a try and if an editor picks up this book and make a few corrections, it could definitely be well worth more.