Review: Massage Envy
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
I struggled with this extremely short story or rather scene. I don't mind the sex that was decent but I only know English language so it would have been nice to let the reader know what Lissette said in her own language. The writer did a good job with the pacing of the scene but I would have liked to have gotten to know the characters better so I could have connected with them on some level. If this story would have been able to develop beyond this 1scene it would have been so much better.