Review: Good but long...
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2014
Good story, but wordy.  The author should take his own (as stated in this story) advice "...10 words are too much when 5 will do..." Prolonging each characters "thoughts", especially the main character, was tedious.  I actually skipped paragraphs to get to the end of the story.