Review: I strongly suggest an editor for this book
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 28, 2014
I am a supporter for new authors and most of the time I would give a book a chance, also I am a very patient reader. But if I have to read a paragraph 2 to 3 times just to get the gist of the part of that book then I guess I would draw a line on that. Events can jump from one to another in as little as a few lines that just confused the heck out of me. Conversations between characters and the internal monologues of the characters are most of the time mixed together. A lot of times, I have to read the whole paragraph and figure out the conversation part and the part where each characters is just thinking to themselves. I made it about 27% of the book and I could not handle it anymore. There are words that does not make sense in the sentences or words are used that has the right meaning but is not appropriate to be used in that sentence. I strongly suggest an editor. The story had  potential but it needs more depth. Whatever else the book needs I could not say anymore because I could not get myself to finish reading it.