Review: Hmmm...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2014
After reading all the wonderful reviews, I downloaded this book and read it almost immediately.  The storyline sounded so sweet, but much to my dismay, the story was not.  I have a few problems with the story.  First and foremost is that the heroine jumped into bed with the hero after blaming him for her sister's death for over a year.  Her trust came a little too quick for my liking. STOP HERE FOR SPOILERS!!!!! After a few hours of Macie helping Rylan break into her sister's, computer, he starts kissing her. She tries to push him away,(not very hard though)  but he convinces her it's okay.As for the sex scenes, they were WAY too explicit. Now on to a question weighing on my mind.  HOW DID KARYN (the sister) hide her laptop in the false bottom of her boyfriend's chest?  Rylan stated they weren't lovers and she had broken up with him.  So she couldn't have had a key to his apartment.  If she brought it over how would she have put it in their without Rylan knowing she put it in there?  Last but not least the author did what irritates me. She threw in words typical people don't use a whole lot.. macie said," You deceived me" when she found out it was rylan.  Then when Macie was trying to figure out weather to trust or not, she thought could I expunge him.Where as I know and understand these words, they are not words I use everyday.  If you're going to use words like these that is fine, but use them through out the book. DONT JUST THROW THEM IN IN THE FIRST FEW PAGES!!! Okay, I've had my say.  Two stars.  One for no swearing.(f bombs)  One for not having any glaring grammar mistakes.