Review: Well....
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 30, 2013
Okay.... mixed feelings here. This started out a little outrageous to me. Not giving anything away, but Dale came off a little bit on the lock your wife and kids away side to me. That kind of turned me off, then Cat wakes up feeling aroused in a strangers house and automatically has to take care of her business because he's so hot..... really? I'm all for short erotic stories but there should have been a slightly different beginning because after pushing past that, the rest of the story was very enjoyable. Even though Dale came off as being quite confused at times he was so sweet and extremely sexy. Cat was sweet even being a bit self conscious, but she was willing to take a chance with this gorgeous stranger. That is until Brian shows up. With his comments on her race and size being overheard and Dale's reaction, she leaves. I loved Ki's part in all this, I loved the way Dale tries to set things straight, and I love the fact that "the big girl" didn't go running back right away. Can't wait to see what's next, and I really can't wait too see what happens with "the rude lady" and "the a-hole". Like I said, good sexy story if you can get past the somewhat creepy beginning.