Review: The power of a correctly placed comma!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 26, 2012
First, I have to say I loved the story and characters.  They held my interest throughout which is the only reason I continued to push through the horrid grammar.  I loved that the book was written from the hero's and heroine's perspective.  Devlin was a great mama, making her way in a difficult situation, and Seth didn't come across as an arrogant rockstar but a man guided by a moral compass.  These two had depth, and I felt the anguish, struggles, and passion between them.  The ginormously huge problem with this otherwise awesome book is the grammar.  That's what knocked it from a 4.5 to a 3 for me.Being that I'm a language arts teacher, I read a lot of bad grammar, but this book is riddled with it.  Edit this book and you've got a winner.  Here's a few things to google: complex sentences, using commas when directly addressing someone in dialogue, comma splices, and run-on sentences.  Also decide on a verb tense. The book switches from past to present.  All of these errors really halt the flow.  I'm not a true grammar snob, or I wouldn't have finished it, but this is a book with such potential!!  Again, edit and you're golden with this great story.