Review: Death Checks In
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 6, 2014
This was a cute little short story.  Probably a new author and she needs some more practice.  It was missing the mark in a lot of areas and wasn't tied together very well.  There were too many improbabilities.  We expect some, after all it is fiction, but there was just too many instances that were unbelievable,