Review: I'm returning this book.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
I read in one blurb about your first book being withdrawn and edited by a professional.  I enjoyed the book and immediately ordered the second one.  The second book was good and I immediately ordered book three.  I could not get through the first chapter of the third book and I will be returning it.  I hope you get professional editing assistance.DRUG is defined as a pharmaceutical.  "the policeman drug her up the stairs".  I believe you meant to say DRAGGED.  A professional would have caught that.  ".....let me go back and see where she's  (she is) AT in our process.".  This should speak for itself. There were other items I highlighted in that chapter, but I stopped when I realized I was proof reading and not reading for enjoyment.I read what I could find about you and see you are working on a new stand alone.  I urge you to get it professionally edited, penny wise and pound foolish.  You do have the ability to tell a story, but unless the reader is familiar with your English, they end up either proof reading or just stop reading.  This is not meant as a mean spirited comment, but a sincere hope that you let your talent shine by asking for help where you need it.  You want to write for all to enjoy, not just for those who don't consider good English necessary for a good read.  Good luck.