Review: It's a train wreck that just goes on and on.....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2014
I read lots of self-published books by beginning authors, and I do take into account their sometimes less-than-professional writing. However, this author has 14 books under her belt and this one reads like a beginning writer's class assignment.The dialogue is so poor, with not a breath of believability, the characters have no character and scenarios are improbable, to say the least. Usually, readers have internal imagery that swirls around in the brain as they read. In this case, the only images I see are middle school drama class actors mumbling bad dialogue as they clomp around a stage.I don't need a story to be Pulitzer material to be enjoyable, but this is undeniably one of the poorest novels I've encountered.