Review: A good start but too much unnecessary
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
I really wanted to enjoy this story. I enjoy stories were big girls get some loving. This story started out with promise but quickly became over the top. The members of the band were more stereotypical than real. I could have handled that but then the female lead was so weak and pathetic with her negative self image that I couldn't say I felt she deserved to find love. Then there was the question of who exactly she was supposed to be having the romance with. There were three guys who it seemed could have been her love interest but none of them were well developed as more than just a name and looks. I might have even been able to go with the lack of character development since I knew this was a short story but for the author to just switch into the hint of paranormal was too much.