Review: What a shame
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2012
This author had a great idea and plotline.  Why she chose to chop it into the equivalent of one chapter from a book, I'll never understand.  If you are writing a short story for a magazine, maybe but this is supposed to be a book.  Its not even long enough to be a novella.  So many loose ends I don't know where to begin.  I'd worry about spoiling it but its so short it hardly matters.  Quit reading now if you don't want to know some of the problems with this book.  The main male character supposedly went to Yale but quit because he has a God son he is raising.  You get this is about two sentences.  That's the end of that information.  Then you find out that the female character had a father who cared about her but who never knew her and you don't know why, but apparently it had something to do with her mother. Again, end of that idea.  No development, nothing.  I can only assume that this author had a good plotline and no idea whatsoever how to develop a book around that idea.  Just a shame.  I know I would have liked this storyline written by a good author.NOTE:  Of the three 5 star reviews, two of the reviewers give everthing they review 5 stars.  Come on!  A little credibility issue here.