Review: Great Series
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 8, 2014
Mr. Wells,  "Jeffery Mitchell is not going to live to see trail" instead of trial is something you would catch if you read it over.  You have talent and education is just things you learn.  It would be great to take an English course or two.  Your writing is something no one can really teach.  There are very few people who can inject so much into so few words.  Charlaine Harris,who gave us Sookie Stackhouse, used 2/3 of a page.  Laurell K. Hamilton used to be able to write a tight thriller starring Anita Blake before she had to have sex every other page.  They both lost touch with their characters, but you just need to polish your word usage and grammar or get a good editor instead of doing spell check.You may also need a "Come to Jesus" moment for the way you ended 50.  Jeffrey and Hanna are back.  They have groupies and one of them set up and maintained a web site for other serial killer groupies.  Hanna cannot get pregnant and Jeffrey decided they would steal the babies from his brother, but a law enforcement officer was injured and in the same hospital so they went after and killed another family member.  This time Hanna and Jeffrey are not going to make trial.  The manhunt begins, but how it ends will leave you hoping for the next book sooner rather than later.