Review: A CINDERELLA STORY
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
I’m always skeptical when I download the free books. As an author and a contest judge, many potentially good stories get lost in poor writing mechanics. And while some found errors in this book, I must have missed them. I wasn't reading as an author but as a reader just wanting to relax after staring at my own words all day.Aria Hawthorne has crafted a sensuous love story. While some felt the characters were not developed, I have to disagree. In the onset, no they were not and yes, Maribel might have seemed a bit boring. This was a classic Cinderella story we loved as children but in a grown-up world. That is part of the growth as I reader I want to see. Her characters work through emotional issues while building a relationship. While this is classified as an erotica, the love scenes are beautifully done. I wanted to be Maribel Martinez. I wanted to be with Miles Braxton-Worth. I wanted to take care of him… and be taken care of. When a writer can make me FEEL for my characters, she has my vote. I will buy future books by Aria Hawthorne.