Review: well written short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 24, 2010
I've read some erotic stories, and I believe this is a well written one, since it does not go overboard like some do. It keeps you reading, wanting to know what's going to happen next, which is always good. The reason why I give 4 stars to this one is that there was something I did not like very much and it is the characters' stereotypes; we have Antonio who is latin, trigueño (or with burned skin), muscular, (you get the picture); and then Jane, who is blond, curvy, and all the descriptions one might think of--like a said: stereotypical. But other than that, is a good story.