Review: It is hard to add anything
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 7, 2013
Basically every one has stated my same thoughts. There was potential here and I hope the author will take it to heart and rewrite as the basic storyline is interesting. My biggest issue with wording is I suspect the author is not a US native, no offense intended. Just I have never heard of a jug of beer only by pitcher, even when I was in Seattle. And in our culture it is very rude to tell someome you just met what you make and ask how much they make in a year. Just two examples out of many. Also, beer is bad for diabetics and two glasses of oj and a burger would spike her the other way. But, it is nice to see someone show diabetics leading a normal life.