Review: ...what delights most in this tale is the dialogue...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2013
This is a début story and even though it was way, WAY too short, I liked it.Because of the shortness of the story, I felt a bit cheated in `telling' and I thought it had great potential of becoming a full-fledged novel.However, that said, there was a lot to love about this story, like Colin and Catherine as they discover their true feelings for each other.Ms. Shay did a very good job with characterization, plot and pace, but what delights most in this tale is the dialogue, and not just between Colin and Catherine. I loved it!"Colin took a  deep breath and emptied his glass. The golden liquid stung as it went down.`I want to marry her.' And as quickly as possible, before he lost his control and did something really stupid and outraged the people he loved the most.`My wife?'Colin groaned and dropped into the seat across from John. 'No, your daughter.'`Oh. Because as much as Claudia and I are fond of you, I cannot permit you to marry her.'Colin froze. 'Catherine?'John blinked. 'My wife. I have already married her.' He paused. `And thoroughly consummated the marriage. With evidence.'"Great début, wonderful characters, sweet romance, as well as a fast read for those cold fall or winter evenings that are around the corner.Melanie for b2b