Review: I like the two guys but is part of the plot necessary..
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 9, 2013
This one is certainly better than all those sex consumed stories out there. I guess this is the writer's debut. She has created two likable characters in Caleb and Logan, who are realistic in their struggles with panic attacks/self imprisonment and alcohol addiction. It is so easy to like these two guys. I really enjoy it when the plot is focus on their developing romance and struggles with their illnesses, even if I feel the part when each started to have feeling for the other could be handled better. However there are parts which fell short. Is the theft subplot involving one unsavory female character necessary ? (A point I agree with the previous reviewer). If the writer wants filler, expand on the guys' pasts, which are interesting from what is said. Another fault is the sometimes "off" word used in an exchange which rendered the meaning ambiguous(Maybe it is my own poor grasp of spoken English!) There are also one or two instances when the guys are abuptly somewhere else. I am not being fussy but I like a smooth flow. Also the conflict between Caleb's uncle and Logan is resolved rather easily. Still I enjoy the story and that part when Caleb had an accident and a clueless Logan just walked away have me glued to the pages to find out Caleb's fate. Will be watching out for this writer.