Review: Just okay read...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2013
This was a free download.  Obviously something in the description drew my interest and the first chapter seemed like the story would be okay.  I will say up front that I do not like weak minded female characters.  I also don't like female characters that don't have an ounce of common sense.  This one was both.  The inner doubting ramblings take up the majority of the storyline. The rest is taken up by the hero getting his lady love out of one jam after another.  Surprisingly the fact that he falls madly in love with her by day two is not that disturbing to me.  It happens in fiction all of the time and in real life from time to time.  I don't have a clue what motivates either character.  She needs to save her coffee shop because apparently you can't actually start over again in her universe...you can only do something once and then you have to cling to it like a maniac being shot at, kidnapped, kidnapped again and shot at again.  He of course has to cling to her because she says things out loud a lot and he likes that about her.  Her ex boyfriend is just to convoluted to even begin to explain here.  I didn't hate the story.  I actually finished it.  Some basic facts... the lead is drop dead gorgeous and wealthy and controlling.  His lady love is moderately successful and attractive.  The crazy ex boyfriend doesn't seem like someone that could get a date let alone be in a long term common law relationship.  I think that about sums it up.