Review: Excellent work!  One major problem though!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 21, 2013
I read this one after I read Starfire.  I'll admit that I've avoided reading this book for a few months simply because of the whole fairy thing.  Why?  Honestly, I don't know.  I guess it didn't tickle my fancy.  But I'm glad that I finally took the chance on this book.  For anyone looking to read this book, I highly, highly suggest reading "Starfire" first so you can get a better background of the protagonist, Vince Lombard, and why he's where he's at in his life.  The characters are fleshed out extremely well and thoroughly enjoyable to read.  For some reason, I especially like Fey.  The plotline moves quickly and has enough detail to keep a reader engrossed in the story.  I honestly couldn't hardly put it down once I started.There is only one major problem with the book.  That problem is grammatical and spelling errors.  Normally, I wouldn't mark a book down a rating for this issue, but the book is rife with these problems.  At times it was fairly distracting.  If it wasn't for the Mr. Lee, I'd have rated this, hands-down, a 5-star rating.  Starfire had the same issues, but nowhere nearly as bad, so I DO understand improvement is being made in this department.  Mr. Lee, please, please, please get someone to proofread your material, someone not related to you who will give you an honest appraisal of your work.  Someone who will give you suggestions for correction, deletion and whatnot.  Poor proofreading is very distracting and could turn off some of your readers.  Don't depend upon spell-checker in whatever document program you're using.  While spell-check will catch a lot of the erros, it won't catch everything.  Errors of this sort give off the wrong type of impression to a reader.  My suggestion is to get a handful of your fanbase and use them as sample readers.I suggest to the author that he revises this story with the correction in grammar and spelling.  It's easy to fix and won't require any major re-writing.