Review: Sadly disappointed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2014
I was provided a free copy of this e-book by the author through the GoodReads M/M Romance Group's Don't Buy Me Love program in exchange for a fair and honest review.First and foremost I must say that this author hit on one of the things that are guaranteed to drive me insane so this whole book was a struggle for me. That issue is I expect the wording of a book to be correct for the area in which I am told that it's taking place in. Why bother telling your readers that these are American characters on American soil and then use British diction. I would have been happy with it had I just been told that they were in England.I should not have read a book filled with arse, bloody, blokes, whilst, smelt, leant, "too right", gobsmacked, motorbike, tidy bin, bums, hanger bars,petrol tanks,etc.etc. And I'm sorry but we have motorcycles with handle bars and gas tanks, we sit on our asses or butts, we have kitchen counters and in America pissed means angry not drunk. Furthermore there are even letters that are put together that aren't even words.... cos & be cos are not replacements for because and recce?? Not sure what that is supposed to mean. I could go own about the many grammatical errors but I will wrap up my rant with just a few well intended words of advice. Please get an american to line edit these books.However, I did give this two stars because I do like the characters, not only Kane and Shawn but most of the supporting cast of characters as well. They all came across as nice guys. However, sadly I must say that was about all that I liked about this book that I'd thought I'd love. Shawn's powers were a little too over the top for the story line for me to find believable because I just kept thinking, "If he could do that then this would have never have happened." Not that they weren't intriguing and cool powers because they were, just a little too omnipotent.