Review: Editing editing editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2014
Smelt instead of smelled? Really? For the love of all that is holy, please hire a proofreader. Add in the fact your stories are over priced for the length and it makes it difficult to recommend to others. The story isn't horrible and would be worth the effort of fixing and expanding into full length novels instead of short stories.