Review: Loved the tone of the narration.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 31, 2013
There's a few awkward spots in the text that could use an editor to clarify the action a bit, but this story was a lot of fun. Great crazy narration, very graphic, sexual, and convincing. It didn't read like your usual pulpy gore-over-terror horror. The thought processes of the contenders felt realistic for the action. It's definitely on the erotic edge of horror, but not in an overpoweringly over-the-top way.