Review: Good story but...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 28, 2013
I liked the story but had I known it was yet ANOTHER cliffhanger, I would never have purchased it. ASo, there were so many misspelled words, punctuation mistakes, sentences & whole paragraphs that did not make sense. In some sentences, I would read one character's name when the author quite obviously meant another character. Just so confusing. It jumped around & some parts weren't explained well or at all. Characterspersonalities weren't fleshed out enough so I had trouble caring for the characters or the relationships between them.