Review: Not bad for a free story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2012
I can understand instant attraction, but I think going from planning to kill her to having sex with her instantly is a little much to buy into. I liked the story well enough, I guess. The whole thing was just a little rushed. And I don't think I want to know what happens to Olivia and Garrick enough to pay $2.99 for an 89-page novella. If the price drops to .99, I'll consider it.