Review: This was just OK. Short and sexy but needs editing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 15, 2013
I picked this up as a freebie. It was a very short read, about nine pages or a ten minute read. The story moved quickly beginning with Simone getting ready to meet her online love interest for the first time in person. While I appreciated the quick rundown of events of how they'd met and what had transpired between them leading up to the present, it did come across as an info dump. I think that is the only draw back of a "story" that is so short. The reader isn't shown the relationship progression but rather told, and I have to take the heroine's word for it that she really feels a "connection" with the hero that goes beyond online chatting, sexting and phone calls. As for the plot, I liked the fantasy they engaged in during the concert. It was hot, risque and quite sexy. Unfortunately, there were quite a few errors that were a little jarring, and when they showed up during the sex scene, they threw me out of the action.- There had been many late nights when Simone she had laid in her bed, listening- while she surreptitiously searching the crowd for her Alec.- Her breath stopped when she stopped him sitting at a small table- didn't want to get up, leave his side, be distracted by concert,- His hands moved over waist,- Liquid heat melt her insides and she turned her head to nuzzled his nose.- She moaned into him when cupped her breast,- What they'd shared amounted nothing more thanThe ending was a HFN, with the potential to be expanded upon or reworked into a longer story. I would read another story by this author, perhaps something longer.