Review: Please Proof
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 5, 2013
I found the story to be good and would have given the book 4 stars. However, the typos, redundant and misplaced words, or the use of a noun, where a verb should have been used, such as "bullies" (denoting aggressive characters) where "bullied" should have been used (denoting meek characters) had changed the whole characterization of the peewee hockey team, were very frustrating. I don't know if this was done by the author, the publisher, or was done by however it was entered to the Amazon offerings, but it certainly needed to be proofread before making it available on the Kindle list.