Review: Should've read all of the reviews!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 8, 2012
I was so looking forward to reading this story. The description made it sound so good, and even the first couple of reviews said it was a great read. I was more frustrated than anything. The plot is a great concept, and there were parts that had my attention and I was excited to read more. The grammer I can over look, I can figure it out. I can't figure out why in the beginning of the story the main character speaks of her first sexual experience as not going beyond her tongue touching him. Then a couple chapters later she says that her first time was painful because she tensed up. The last straw was when she refered to flashlights and then switched to referring to them as torches on the same page. It's as though the author didn't remember what she wrote before or didn't proof read before printing.