Review: What In The World???
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 6, 2014
So basically, this author has a very hard time getting her thoughts on paper. The spelling, grammar, sentence structure, and syntax errors were not the worst part. I mean read Chapter 12 as an example of how the author can't get the storyline from her imagination into print. Amanda had an entire conversation with 'her girl' and I will be damned if the author NOT ONCE INTRODUCED US TO 'her girl'...not even a name. The author did this throughout the book. Who is talking to whom? This book is a scatter-brained mess. Do better. I wanted to give a better rating. However, the book was just a confusing mess. Ugh!