Review: Very Boring
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 26, 2012
I agree with the other reviewer who awarded one star- this is such a boring story! It does have the potential to be a lot better if the author did a complete rewrite (and a professional editor wouldn't hurt either). The story itself has some merits but the writing style is the worst I have read in a long time- it just drags on and it 'tells' instead of 'showing'. The characters are very flat and void of personal development. I advise the author to keep reading romance novels in order to get more familiar with the style.