Review: way too many mistakes and way too wordy
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2014
This was a really good idea, but it falls short.  The characters are not as three dimensional as I feel they should be for a book like this.  It took me a long time to even tolerate Joey.  It needs a better editing job.  It's too long, there are far too many words, and there are some serious mistakes.  I found myself skipping paragraphs and pages just to finish it.  Then, it ends in a cliffhanger.  No, sorry, not interested in another book.  Maybe after some more writing experience, as the ideas are good.