Review: But on the bright side...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 31, 2013
Okay. Let me try to list these...1: The story itself was really short.It was fast moving and it didn't really take it's time with things. It was as if one page we were talking about one thing and the next we were in another place and P.O.V. entirely. Also the transitions to the next chapters and P.O.V.'s were a little awkward and out of place.But on the bright side...It flowed very well and didn't drag on. I think I really liked how it just stuck to the story and got to the point.2: There was very little detail.I couldn't really engage myself in the story because of the lack of detail in both setting and characters. Also the dialogue was quite plain and at times boring.But on the bright side...It didn't take 5 or more pages to explain the looks of settings or the way a character looked and for that you could be thankful. It explained enough so I was satisfied.3: Lot's of grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.To be honest, the amount of errors in this book was a little ridiculous. I take this was either the author's first book or she has absolutely no experience. At times, I found it difficult to understand what the author was trying to say. And it really annoyed me.But on the bright side...Well, I can't really say there is a bright side to that. But mistakes are mistakes and we all learn from them at one point.And 4: The ending was really predictable.I don't think anyone thought of a different ending to it. I mean there were lot's of hints and of course, well, I don't want to spoil anything but come on. Read it and then tell me you didn't see that coming.But on the bright side...The ending wasn't bad and I don't think it could've ended any better way. I liked it.My overall review on the book was it was a great book! Not worth 5 stars but not any less than a solid 4. I do recommend anyone who comes across it picks it up and reads it because trust me it's worth your time. And plus, it's free. So why not? :)