Review: Could've been good but . . .
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2014
I didn't mind that this was short but I wish it had stayed focused on what the story was supposed to be about. The main character (who's name I can't recall at the moment) didn't have her encounter with the neighbor until the very end and then that was left as more of a cliffhanger. So what was written about before that? Something that had absolutely nothing to do with anything. The limo ride and the ensuing exploits left me scratching my head. Not only were the scenes completely separate from what the synopsis described, but most of the time it seemed physically impossible. I had to stop quite a few times because I kept trying to imagine how it was humanly possible for all of those things to be happening at once. It read more like random ideas of what the author thought was hot or sexy thrown together in one, big, unrealistic sexual free-for-all.I really wanted to enjoy the story but I found it to be very disjointed and it introduced a lot of different ideas and storylines that were never fully explained. I  don't mind short, erotic stories but I still want them to make sense and be believable. Unfortunately, this one failed at both.