Review: Needs more work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 26, 2012
The premise of the story is a good foundation, but it doesn't seem fully formed. I understood it was a short story, but where it starts out great, the ending feels rushed. It was just sort of "Here's Why, Ok, Done" I wish the author had spent a little more time on this story, maybe developed it a bit more. It would have been a better read.