Review: Not your average alpha male
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2014
Although it was a short story, it had potential that it didn't quite meet. Basically, (**SPOILER ALERT**) man who has a baby that was left on his door step by a woman who he had a one night stand. He and the baby has a car accident and meets woman. They have sex (within the week almost), they have sex, and they have sex. The one night stand returns demanding to see her son. They argue an she exit stage left and the non-alpha and heroine have sex again. Then again.I felt like I never got to know the characters. Instead of all the sex, the characters should've been developed. Like did he work (was the record store ever open). Who was the heroine.