Review: Exceptional with some flaws
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2012
First off, I thoroughly enjoyed this book from cover to cover. It was action packed, likeable protagonist and a hateful group of antagonist.  It moved along very quickly with a very cohesive plot line and the cast of characters was introduced at appropriate times.So, where did it go wrong?  First, you are really going to have to suspend reality to get into the whole premise of the book - superheroes and villains that control the WHOLE world. It's almost sci-fi in its dependence upon the impossible being possible.  Second, as so many of the ebooks, it's in need of a good editor.  Too many grammatical and typo errors for an accomplished writer.My final gripe is the ending - the story is nicely paced all along, maybe a bit long in parts but just barely, and then all of a sudden, the ending wraps up in three pages!  I would have much preferred a couple more complete chapters to nicely tie things together and to answer some questions that are left behind.  Maybe a sequel is being planned?If you're a McDonald fan, or just a fan of action packed thrillers, you will not be disappointed in this book.  IMHO, Critical Error by McDonald is a better book but all his writing is easy and enjoyable to read.