Review: Perhaps Too Quick
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 25, 2013
The description states this is over 90 pages but I think it was shorter due to paragraph spacing. A fun concept, lovable characters - but it needed more.I enjoyed each element - the twin cousins, Penny's family history, her dad, Lord John's past, Colton's trouble, the magic potion... But nothing seemed supported or developed.**SpoilersI read many novellas and feel this one had tons of potential but it fell short. Due to the lack of supporting scenes, build up or facts, the story's climax (revealing of various secrets) was not particularly powerful.Everything was lightly touched on, including the potion element.It also seemed that at times the dialog and actions of the characters didn't match appropriate behavior of the time period.All in all I liked this book. The author has a fun imagination.