Review: One star is being generous
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 13, 2013
I feel bad being so harsh on a story because i know how much hard work goes into writing but i feel like this author really doesnt give a crap and just wanted to cash in on a niche category of writing because this story is BAD. REALLY REALLY REALLY bad.like refund and I will never read another of your stories bad. I have read fan tic and stories in free websites that were better written and got me hot and bothered. This story just bothers me.First ; the characters. One dimensional and unrealistic. Rene sees our forgettable male protagonist once and he treats her poorly. She is said to be strongwilled; tough and has the gumption to leave their small town. So why does she then go into the shower and masterbate herself into an orgasm after he randomly comes into her house. The story reads more like an outline of a story that the author had planned to fol in later. I have included the outline; I mean "story" below to save you the time and money I can never get back.1. Girl returns home2. Boy wants to breed her (he says to make their families strong and to run the farm but its 2013...having big families to run farms don't happen in 1st world countries...)3. Boy blackmails girl by threatening to tell her vetinary clients she has been using a state incierator to cremated their pets and not the on site one.(really?)4. Girl masterbates in shower5. Boy breeds her like an animal(it actually says that. No showing just telling)6. Book says three months later and she is pregnant with a collar. The end.Granted this book WAS only $3 but then so was the first book of theKindred series and THAT book was in the same genre as this one and AMAZING. I like a little story with my detailed sec scenes. This book had none. It did however mention the ranchers semen was the texture of gelatin and ozzed out her slit for a few days. Um...maybe since the author does not own a vagina he doesn't have a good grasp of how one works and how unpleasant that description sounds to those of us who do. Almost like she has an infection. Did the rancher give her an STD? Gross!He tells her she will be an amazing mother and wife...then the narrator says he wont ever marry her because she is his breeding cow. He breeds her for several days( as we are again told and not shown) on her bed chained up even though she is willing and doesn't protest. Then he leaves for a couple days; cooks her a great meal and chains her to a bench that sounds more damage to her head and neck and wrists.This book is a fail in so many ways.