Review: Tepid and unrealistic
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2012
The best part of the book was the mystery/suspense aspect. Id bet the author is a woman, because the mc voice drifted into the feminine sometimes. For example , saying something looked like the chair at a obgyn office, or the way the sex scenes were described in general. The sex was pretty boring, bdsm by numbers.  The first person narrative was not authentic- some characters can get away with self describing their dimples as charming or whatever, but those are usually arrogant or winsome, etc. It didn't make sense for this character. The  mc also dropped character esp at the end, his actions in conflict with the type of person we're to believe he is.  Lastly, just about everything in this book was just too convenient, without any characters even commenting on how ridiculously easily things in the mc's life went. I stopped reading at the epilogue. 3-3.5 stars because no grammatical errors, the suspense was interesting, a few characters were sweet. Book would have been better if not 1st person narrative.