Review: Needs Work. Could still be potentially a great book.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
Pros:1. Engaging story.Cons:1. Tech is ill-defined.2. Legionaries are pilots? If so they are grouped as a "platoon". Never seen/heard/read about a platoon of fighters. Terminology is confusing. Legionaries start off as pilots and then transitions to Infantry, then Armored infantry.3. Recycled Cover-art. Repeatedly recycled.4. Military terminology/slang grossly misused. Platoon, battalion..etc.5. Lots of horrible spelling/grammar/syntax errors. They, they're, they are. typical rushed book. Quality vs Quantity.6. Half the time you'll get confused if AI stands for Artificial intelligence or Armored Infantry.7. Traveling in space, travel between planets - the amount of time required to transit from one place to another has nothing to do with Space travel, instead, is at the whim of the author. A space battle at a distant system, a ship escapes, reaches another system in a blink of an eye. Then later on a ship that departed this planet is still in "transit" after a long period of time.8. Good example of William Forstchen's Action Stations gone horribly wrong, or Pearl Harbor recycled.If you can put off all the cons, the story isn't all that fubar. Until you reach the point where you are saturated with grammatical errors, then you put the book down. I personally could only read 60% of the book.All in all, seems like an Alpha-stage Novel. With a thorough restructuring and proof-reading, this book could have gotten a 4-star.