Review: Great story, but grammar of a 5th grader and no editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2013
Seducing Peaches has elements of romance, intrigue, BDSM, stalking, and friendship. Lois/Peaches and Tom have dark secrets in their pasts which get in the way of their growing relationship causing misunderstandings, mayhem, and disillusion.  Their story is compelling and sensual and held my interest until the very last page.  Unfortunately the editing was totally non-existent and Miss Smith's grasp of basic elementary grammar was at the level of a 5th grader.  I recommend another pair of eyes to read her writing before it is ever considered being submitted for publication.  If not, then I suggest she secure a class or tutor in Basic English 101.