Review: Makes no sense
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2013
I loved the first two pages, but then the rhyme became forced (things and queen, do not rhyme). There is no such thing as "out of sort"! (She means out of sorts, but had to change the words to nonsense to fit the rhyme). What does "make stead" mean? How is a kid supposed to understand a story when it makes no sense?The story is ok, but the rhyming does not work at all. It might work better if this author just told the story she wanted to tell?I preferMustachio Gets Kidnapped (Mustachio and Puppy Grace)which is written and illustrated by a 7-year old and has a very creative story as well as a good moral to the tale (helping those in trouble).