Review: it was ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 10, 2013
I finally finished that last installment of the loyalty and respect series. Although I enjoyed parts 1-4 I think it should have ended in part 2. I say that because parts 3-4 was about Tania being locked up in a house as basically a sex slave while Nico did as he wanted. I didn't like how Tania was stuck on stupid and was portrayed dumb as pop rocks! To me the author didn't know what to do with the Smoke character so he went from being a loyal friend to a deranged crazy person. At first Smoke desperately wanted to know if baby Mina was his, then suddenly didn't care about the baby. It was just too far fetched. I know it's fictional but Author Drea Delgado you were really reaching just to say you finished a part 4! I want to read more of your work so for that I will continue to read and review your work, good, bad or indifferent. What's next?