Review: not recommended
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2014
Please do not waste your money or time on this story.  I’m irritated that it received so many 4-5 stars and that I believed those ratings enough to purchase the story. The world building was interesting up to a point, but I didn’t feel a connection with any of the characters, and, I need to feel a connection with characters to enjoy a story.  The main female character, Cara, was not believable and somewhat of an airhead; the author basically stereotyped her own male characters as cavemen, and reinforced the stereotype that males everywhere are basically the same.  In chapter 12, when two other human women are introduced, the story quickly begins a downward spiral and never recovers.  The relationship building between the three women is too fast and is not believable.  I began to feel like I was reading a poorly written teen novel with bad sex thrown in.  I honestly don’t know what happened to the ending.  It was like the author was tired of writing or she was about to miss a deadline.  I wish I could say that I’m going to give the author another chance, but I already feel cheated for paying 5.00.