Review: Coombe's Wood left this reader disappointed...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2010
The story itself started out with some interest for this reader.  However, much of the word usage errors, evocation of emotions and storylines that didn't feel true to form dogged down the storyline for me.  Word usage such as executor instead of executioner, scared for scarred and vice versa.  Conversations between the main protagonist and antagonist that just didn't ring true or feel "real".  The second occasion of fastwalk appeared to be the protagonists first time and inspired the main character to react in ways that just didn't seem in any way real or believable.  I had high hopes for this story with all the high reviews but it was my most disappointing read in quite a while.  I really battled between two and three stars.