Review: A cute story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 20, 2011
This was a cute story, not great but not awful either. In the beginning I couldn't figure out what a terrific guy like Nick could possibly see in Maddie; she seemed to be nothing more than a spoiled brat. Later you learn more about her and she turns out to be a really nice, if somewhat immature and naive. Of course, since I am old enough to be Maddie's mother (I lived through the original hippies movement in the 60's), I have a different slant than many other readers. Overall, the writing style and the editing were pretty good; I only caught a few spelling mistakes and typos. Basically the plot consisted of girl meets boy, girl gets boy, girl gets rid of boy, and girl realizes another boy who's been there all along is the best one. The dialogue was quite good and if you're looking for a short, light romance, you could do a lot worse than this one. Since it's free, take a chance.