Review: Great read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 1, 2014
I enjoyed reading this book. I did not see the reason to have a prequel and this. It should have been one book for 3.99, not one for .99 and then 2.99. This can be read as a standalone but continues to answer more questions in the next book that I do think is a great idea for a second book. Too much for one book. I look forward to reading the second but am not frustrated to do so, as in other series.Criticisms with spoilers.When Ryder left, I think Jani could have written it better. It was almost as if she wasn't sure what she wanted to write. I got the point but it could have been written better. Then when he comes back, I understand her taking him back right away but she should have left and made him come after her and prove himself a little more. If you weren't in his head for some of it then you would have thought it was only about sex. Had a 5 star potential but just fell a little flat in those two areas but was still really good.Other things that took away from the story a bit for me. I didn't mind him calling her a bitch but sometimes it was too much. Also, him going on and on about how attractive her cousins were and even a little in the end with the step sister. I get a guy looks at women and it doesn't bother me but after he knew Lexi was her cousin it got a little weird for me sometimes but it was still good. I would not have minded at all had it not been a relative but that is just my opinion.