Review: Fun read with stimulating situations and banter. Needs a good editor.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 13, 2013
I found the characters interesting, and quirky. The banter among them was feisty and fun to read. While the story was well written, it could have been much improved with some good editing.Such fails as:"the wrinkle BETWEEN your forehead". Can't be between one thing."LIDDED eyes" (at least three times). All human eyes are lidded. Perhaps the author meant hooded eyes or heavily lidded eyes."PEAKED" instead of peeked (twice)."BAD" instead of badly."his eyes BORE into her" instead of bored."LAYING" instead of lying."and everyONE once in a while petting (her) knee" instead of every once in a while."WAIVED her off" instead of waved."HAD rented a car and DROVE north" instead of driven.No other reviewer mentioned these problems, so perhaps they won't bother you. Still a good story and pleasant read.