Review: Grammar disaster
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2013
It could have been a good story, but it was constantly disrupted with missing and misused words. It seemed like no effort was made at proofing. It was so implausible that they would never visit the apartment of the dead family and learn about their lives. There was so much time put into building a romance the story suffered. So much potential wasted.