Review: The first half wasn't bad but it was downhill after that
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2013
I truly was enjoying this book this morning and although it's written fairly simply, I liked the way the author was building the various characters. I was even frustrated when I got to work and couldn't continue reading. Sadly when I picked up the book again, just after halfway, it all started to fall apart.***Spoilers***Basically I liked the way that there were 2 possible H's for the h and the author made us like both of them up until a certain point. I just didn't buy the way the mayor suddenly became a bit of a freak. I had been thinking that I hoped the h would choose him because he was yummy. I still think the author could have left him being yummy but tortured, instead she throws him under the bus. Again up until about 60% of the way through I liked the H because he was in love with the h and determined to win her slowly but surely. All of a sudden he also loses the plot. The writing deteriorated in the latter half of the book and we had some really unrealistic scenarios. What is the likelihood of 2 people involved in the same car accident being in irreversible comas and then having their life support switched off simultaneously?It's a pity that the author let things slide because this could have been a good book.