Review: Short scene
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2013
This is not a short story, it is a short scene; a short scene with little feeling or emotion. In 26 pages, so much more could have been done: more depth to the character, an intelligent business woman/witch, who becomes enthralled with pain and total submission after being commanded to her boss's presence after a couple of times. She now trusts her "master" to share her with two others?Now, if the erotica is done well, I can overlook a little emotion, but I found this to be flat and not titillating as well.I understand that I received this for free, but I don't appreciate oily ate getting a scene followed by more than 70 pages of advertising for other books. That was very annoying! Also, the author was selling additional scenes as short stories. I would have been really angry if I had actually purchased this.