Review: Did anyone edit this?!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2014
This is a fun, fast read, and the whole idea of someone who can only stay awake for an hour of a day - no make that an early hour of the morning - is quirky and original. I would have enjoyed it a whole lot more if Nick Pirog could figure out where to put a question mark, and where not to. Drove me nuts. He also seems to have an aversion to contractions. That's another one of those things that drives me crazy when reading. People just don't think or speak without using them. A lot. There are glitches every so often that have slipped through. Re-writes of scenes still have remnants of their first draft making the paragraph or scene read wrong, missing letters and I think even a sentence ending was dropped somewhere. I lost track of all the errors! If it weren't for this, I might want to read more of his work, but if this is also an example of the finished (polished ?) product, then I'm not so sure.  As this is a kind of teaser to entice readers to buy his other books, you'd think it would have merited a more professional edit before publishing it. If it weren't for the lack of editing, I think I'd have given it 4 stars.