Review: Ann Smiley, hire an editor for your next book!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 5, 2012
I gave this 3 stars for the story.  There was alot of action, you could not get bored.But, I am so sick of reading a book with a good plot and storyline, and have to interpret the intent of sentences.  Shouldn't there be an ing on the end or why is there and ed on the end of the word, that isn't right.  Those sentences that have a was or a in as part of the sentence that make no sense at all and you spend a few attempts at trying to figure what the author was trying to say, and then you just mark it up to fruitless and continue on with the story.It is a good story, it just depends how bad you want to try to read it.