Review: Coulda been a contender
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2013
This is well written and the premise was interesting. What ruined this book was WAY too many storylines. At last count, six. Each would have made a good book. All of them together in the same one...overkill. The book felt as if you were reading more than one book at once and not getting enough information about what the treasure might possibly be, that would make so many different groups of crooks be willing to kill so many people for. And what the monsters that were killing people might possibly be and what the...oh never mind, all this book did was give me a headache and make me skip to the end after less than a quarter of the book. If you like this kind of convoluted mess, have at, me...no thanks.