Review: Editor SERIOUSLY Needed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2014
Fixing grammar isn't the only reason an editor is needed for this story.  It's to fix the story itself.  Rachel and Cody do not have a strong, loving relationship.  She's controlling and doesn't like his job or his motorcycle.  The exgirlfriend shows up at their front door and wants him back.  She dated Cody 6 years ago and it's not really clear if she started stalking him right after the breakup or in the past year.  Cody said numerous times he was going to fix the problem but that only happens in a deus ex machina way.  The ending is contrived to make Rachel happy but one has to wonder how Cody will feel a few years down the road.