Review: Great story - unrealistic timeline
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2014
Second book in Marina's story. I am uncertain what to say, I am confused with a really good story and the reality of this all happening within the timeframe that is given. First Nate was in the hospital for a long time and didn't speak to Marina once!? I can actually see why he wouldn't want to but it's very unlikely. Then when she gets him home he immediately says this is how it's going to be, take it or leave it. And within one day she has completely submitted herself to him, with reservations, but she still did it. A bit unrealistic. Granted this lifestyle is not new to her since she owned a brothel so she doesn't need as much instruction as others but she has never been a sub before. Does that mean it will only take a day for her to step into that role? This all has me a little unsure what else to say.But this is not reality and my review is not based on whether this could actually take place or not. I still get swept away in the excellent writing and story-telling. This is why I gave it 4 stars. I am very anxious to see what will happen. If the last series is anything to go off of, Serena is good for many story twists in the next 2 books. Great story