Review: Too many mistakes
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2013
Maybe I should reread Duchess by Chance because I certainly did not agree with the other reviewers but then I am too lazy to do that right now but I can certainly see now what they mean. The language does not comply with the time frame of the story and the author sometimes seem to skip a few weeks or months and does not complete what she was telling. I believe it highly unlikely that an earl would marry a mare servant but it is a good angel.Why does the Earl not call on the Bow Street Runners to help him and what does he himself do to safeguard the Countess? What about the money the Countess likely inherited from the former husband? And a wife would never ever go to her husbands bed and definitely not on her wedding night.It is not a bad story at all but the author needs to get her fact right and learn more about her chosen subject.