Review: did I get a different download. .... bc this was BAD WRITING
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 14, 2014
Ok. Whats up with all the good reviews!  Did I get the unedited version. I had incomplete sentences. No punctuation.  Double paragraphs.  The story jumped around and made no sense. The characters were immature.  I got to 50% of this book and said enough. I sent a message to amazon but have not heard back. I want my money back.