Review: The worst!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 30, 2013
I reviewed this recently on my Paperwhite but the review hasn't shown up at all. If it does at a later point, apologies for double-posting but I felt it urgent to warn you guys...This is unbelievably bad, it deserves zero stars. And I feel bad for saying that because I'd say the author is probably a very nice person, going by the note to readers at the end offering them a free book if they emailed her etc. Another story of hers (about an angel) which I downloaded at the same time was way better, as if it was written by somebody else.  So maybe this was an older book and she improved a fair bit in the meantime, or got an editor.Anyway, I felt this was incredibly juvenile as if written by a teenage boy (sorry boys) who had no grasp of how to use the present and past tense and constantly switched between them, even in the same sentence! It was just ludicrous.  At one point the author can't even keep straight which friend went in the back room with the girl and interchanges the names.  It's just bizarrely bad; it lacks flow, it lacks cohesion, it lacks anything worthy of being published!The whole thing is like a really bad joke, except not funny; if I were the writer, I'd take this one out of circulation pronto. And I don't wish to give offence but I don't know how the other positive reviews could be objective reviews.  I am deeply suspicious about those!