Review: Good story line, decent execution
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2013
I really liked the idea behind  this story but I felt the execution could have been much better. I mean the h was supposed to be a strong but damaged woman and I kept seeing her as a weak little girl. I wasn't really emotionally attached to any of the characters. And I got so irritated that the author never contracted her I's. It was always "I am...", "I will...“, "I have..." it got really annoying and by the end of the book I was doing it for her in my head. There were some typos, but nothing that serious until you add it onto my previous irritation... overall decent but could have been better.