Review: Bad Title, First Novel, Good Author
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2014
My guilty pleasure is a good romance novel.  This is not one, but the author gets better.  Other reviewers noted that the story needed editing and I think Malcolm and Brie were more interesting characters and deserved their own book instead of sharing Rachel and Ryan's story.  I found the author's second book first and it is much better.  They both need more editing and can I say that a book whose heroine is in publishing should not have spell check editing errors.  It is just wrong!I found these characters immature and easy not to care about and felt the author went to far in pointing out what a man whore Catholic he was and what a condescending, Jewish elitist she was.  The moment a man getting a blow job in the room I accidentally walked into said, "Get in or get out" he would go on my 'try to wipe this picture from your mind' list and I would have to boil him before I could touch him.  We got it, really.  That said I will most likely buy the next one because I think the author has something and will prove it to us.