Review: Not bad but not great either
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2013
So I liked the premise behind the story, but something lacked. First the editing really needs to be looked back over, that put me off. Normally it doesn't but things like confusing your characters names, or forgetting that she had changed her clothes started to bother me. As well as just simple grammar. The character shifts also were a bit confusing also.Overall I liked Laurie & Jake, but the little things made my rating go down.