Review: Great Premise -- Please Hire an Editor
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 25, 2014
I really enjoyed the first "Embryo," so I grabbed this one as soon as I learned about it. The author continues where she left off with David and Jill dealing with the fallout from their encounter with Dr. Arnett and Sonny Sears. I enjoyed the red herring the author left near the end of the book, as well as the descriptions of action-packed scenes.The one thing this book lacked was a thorough edit by a professional editor. There are many, many typos. I can overlook a few here and there, but there are so many here that it is difficult to understand the author's intent in some passages.