Review: Could be better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 10, 2011
First off, for 99 cent this book is a steal! Lol there was plenty to it for 99 cent so money well spent.I didn't like the way she wrote the story. It didn't flow naturally...it almost seemed forced at times. Kind of like a history book that's just telling you the facts of what happens versus weaving a story.S&M; is deep into bdsm..more so than most books and the author tried to delve into the many different levels and context of what The Lifestyle is all about. The sex part of story left much to be desired for me. I think most people would find these very steamy but her writing "modified 69 position" isn't hot. it's just words. Also, for a man of Scott's age he had quite the stamina on him. very unrealistic but this is fantasy...*Slightly spoilerish*S&M; II picks up from part I after several months later. Scott as gone awol and Mariana is missing him and upset that he hasnt bothered to call/text or even say hi since she is cleaning his house. Yet she knows he has been there because she does little things to get his attention. The explanation for why he was mia was pure crap and glazed over. They then fall into a sort of relationship yet there are really no feelings. The author failed to convey any form of emotions between the two other than hot (not) sex.