Review: Possibly, the dumbest story I've ever read
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2014
Maybe if it had been longer it could have been a passable story but this was just so lame. If it hadn't been such a short story, I would have quit reading it.First, there was no romance. Sarah is thought to be and poses as a married woman in an Arab country. So she makes the first move to kiss the sheikh and then sleeps with him after one kiss? What a joke. Even if you take out the fact that Arab men would have seen her making the advances when she was supposedly married as her being a whore, there is no romance to a woman kissing a guy once or twice and then jumping into bed with him. That's just having sex. Then after having sex one night she's ready to marry him. No romance.The story was not only not plausible, it had no substance. Being a short story is no reason to sacrafice substance. It's just bad writing.I certainly hope this author's other books are better than this. I don't think I would spend any money to find out though. This may not have been a waste of money since it was free but it was a waste of my time. Which is valuable to me.