Review: Pretty good read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 28, 2013
This was a pretty good read for this genre.  This author attempts to include more character development in her erotica and for the most part succeeds.  I hate reviews that spoil the story, so I'm only going to speak in generalities.I enjoyed the unique story line and the conflict presented in the plot development.  What I felt needed work was a little more realism when the characters interacted, and the ending, which was intentionally left hanging to entice readers to buy the next installment, was really abrupt.  I'm inclined to buy the story anyway, I don't need to be manipulated by leaving the end hanging in such an unsatisfactory way. Authors please try to add more detail around the erotica.  I like a funny or revealing dialogue in my stories.Still, overall, I recommend it for alternative romance readers.