Review: A short story in every sense.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 14, 2012
I usually don't like short stories, because they never have enough development to be enjoyable or sensical. This is a good example of that. I had way too many questions after finishing, and though the story is funny, it wasn't great. Besides the few grammatical errors and the bad Kindle formatting (some paragraphs are indented incorrectly, leading me to believe the author didn't save the story as a web page first), it's just an okay story. It's free and all, so worth a quick read. I don't really want to read any more stories by the author, though, judging by this story alone.