Review: Needs Work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 3, 2013
I am not sure there is a nicer way to say that this book was disaster. It was very hard to read or to understand. Mr. Hurley was all over the place with his writing. I had to go back and reread a page or even a chapter thinking I had misread something. The idea for the story was not a bad one, but he needed to organize his thoughts more. He would go from one thing to another leaving you completely at a loss. The story became a little more organized toward the end. From chapter 49 "The Surprise Visit" to the end was easier to read. Because of this I gave him three stars. Good Luck Mr. Hurley on your next book.