Review: Reads like a script
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2012
This eBook was supplied to me free by the author to read and review.I don't know the age range that this series is aimed at but I would think in the children/young adult range. There is lots of potential with the story being made up of two distinct parts, I found myself wondering where I was some of the time I think that I would have preferred a single thread concentrating on the space exploration although there is a good reason for the two threads. While I liked the story and the ideas some of the formatting gave the feel of stage direction and script. As expected the first in a series ended with a cliff hanger, this may be a great success if it develops a cult following but I do not think that there is enough in the first of the series to encourage me to read the rest.