Review: Good Potential ruined by mistakes
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 21, 2013
I usually can overlook the imperfections in a story but this book was the most confusing piece of literature!  At the beginning of the book (after the epilogue which should have been a prologue) , the first chapter said "18 months earlier" but it turned out that it was FOUR YEARS LATER!! The timeline wasn't the only aspect of the story that was confusing.  Avena would think about memories but you never knew what was going on.  It was like the author assumed we would know the background of the memory so she didn't write it into the story.  The premise of the story had great potential but it read like a really REALLY rough draft.  The author should pull this down and let an editor get a hold of it.