Review: Enjoyable read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 27, 2012
The story is pretty good, although I didn't find it too believable that "the fat man" would pursue Keza back home.I also found Keza's characterisation rather inconsistent - the woman she was in the first part of the story didn't at all match up to her later character. The story would have been more interesting if she stayed in character throughout, but by accepting her character switch, she was still someone to like.Chase was an attractive hero showing believable character development from his past to the man he became.The story and the world-building were good.