Review: Stilted dialogue, amateur writer.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2014
Wow, haven't seen writing this bad in a while.  Dialogue looked like it was written in a high school writing class.  The basic outline of the story is good but the writer's technique is horrible!  Did I mention the misuse of exclamation points! Free was too much.  I also wonder if the writer is trying to capitalize on the Lacy Steele books  with the choice of name for the character.And what's up with all the one line 5 star reviews?  Author's friends?