Review: Poignant and moving story, but sloppy editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 8, 2013
Great message with a bit of a twist in the story line to keep it from being totally predictable. What was most disturbing, however, was the careless editing. The grammatical errors and typos were more than distracting. They detracted from the serious contemplation of the writer as master of her craft.It was disappointing.