Review: Completely disappointing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2013
I wanted to like this book, I really did.The characters were likable.The premise was o.k.But the writing was atrocious!  I couldn't even finish it.It was that bad.To the author:Please, please, please stop using "and she said", "and he said", "and then she" and the ever-popular "and then he".And give this site a shot: http://homeworktips.about.com/od/englishhomework/ss/diagram.htmIt will show you how to diagram a sentence, so you'll know how to construct one.