Review: ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2012
I do not get the raving nor the disparaging reviews.This short story is well thought of, even if the amount of coincidences -the perfectly identical twin brothers, the true and the fake liasons, the gay boss, etc- that pushes the plot forward is quite staggering.Disbelief suspended writing is neat and the rhythm tight. The characters are perfectly if not entirely (this being a short story) outlined.The ending, even if it is a satisfying HEA/HFN, is not believable. People hit square on the head more and more times will have too much of a headache and feel too ill to have sex in any way. Also the details of the undercover mission ring a bit off not to mention the disparaging comment the undercover cop makes about Troy and left unchallenged: Troy might be useless as an undercover but it was not his choice and he cannot be blamed for not being an a**-kicker.On the whole this short story could be revised but it is not bad. As a freebie it is a perfectly allright read.