Review: Tiny Alice knocks Gabriel off his fears
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 12, 2011
I really liked Alice's character and enjoyed this story as she tries to seduce Gabriel when she really doesn't have to.  He is already hers, she just doesn't realize it, and neither does he.Gabriel is Alice's older brother's best friend and she has known him since she was 5.  She cannot get him to see her as anything other than a piggy-tailed child, until she decides to aggressively pursues him.  Gabriel has some hidden demon that prevents him from allowing himself to commit to females or to give into his feelings for Alice.  Mostly he doesn't want to hurt her, but it is not just emotionally that he is thinking about.  When he and Alice start spending too much time together and he becomes overly protective of her, he realizes he has to put a stop to their interaction - only Alice refuses to stop seducing him and he is starting to falter.This story made me grin with sympathy and embarrassment as Alice's good intentions of winning Gabriel were gently rebuffed by him.  She knows he likes her, but is starting to think she will never break through to him.  There is a lot of silly talk about the behavior of a 21st century woman and characters almost spitting out whatever is in their mouths in reaction to surprises which could use some revisions.  Also, the dating is dragged on a little too long once we know Gabriel is "the one".  It becomes tedious to drag through to the predictable ending.  I would recommend this, though, as a simple diversion.Would I/Did I buy it? Free DownloadWould I read it again? NoWould I recommend it to friends? Yes