Review: Both loved and hated it. 3.5 stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 2, 2013
This was a difficult book to rate because there were parts of it that I absolutely hated and parts that were really good.The plot is really interesting although there are a few dramatic elements that don't really need to be there. A more cohesive plot would have been stronger. Eve is a girl who has had an extremely abusive past yet is pretty well adjusted considering what she has grown up with.  Jax is a local rock star who has his own demons and the two together are intense and passionate.  There is a lot of romance, sex and angst with some intrigue thrown in.  There is addictive behavior to battle. The author does a great job bringing the passion and intensity to life. ("Babe, if I was any further with you I'd be in your f*ing soul". Jax)I really didn't find either character particularly likeable.  Jax is more of a majorly immature jerk than an alpha male hot guy and Eve lets him get away with too much.  Some of the decisions they make seem to be there just to create drama and are not really believable. Overall though, it keeps you turning the pages.On the other hand....I have never read a more poorly edited book.  The grammar and spelling is horrendous.  The author needs to go back to school to learn how to use past participles and how to conjugate verbs.  There is also a problem with the formatting.  I don't know if they were trying to make the pages fit or what but there are continual spacing errors that break up the flow of the storyline.  This was all very distracting.  And I don't know if they were trying to use a regional dialect or what but the way the characters spoke was not appealing to me at all.  Between the two I spent as much time noticing mistakes as I did enjoying the plot.  I read a lot of indie books and I am able to forgive a lot of editing problems so when I mention this you can believe that it bothered me a LOT.Whatever faults it has it is an exciting, fast paced read and at the end of the day that is better than a technically well written but boring book.  I am not sure if I would read another by this author but since the ebook is only $1.54 it is definitely worth trying.