Review: The good: the characters had fairly good development
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 3, 2014
This story has a lot of potential, but fell prey to some of the current trends of self-published material.The good: the characters had fairly good development,  the interactions were relatable, the story line was goodThe bad: jennifer's issues were not explained till the end (they would have explained her behavior),  their was no indication of how Alex handled Jennifer's silent treatment or how he went from 'not wanting to be involved' to passionate kisses.I like the story, the chemistry of the characters, and the development of Jennifer and Alex's relationship.But this series could have been condensed, it got long in the wrong places, it didn't have to be a cliffhanger.The serial trend is not good, two to three chapters at a time for the cost of a stort story is not fair.I think I will wait for it to come in a set and offer a bundle price.  This story has such potential, its captivating.With a rewrite and a book deal, it would so be worth buying in paperback and be reread many times.