Review: Good try but falls short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2013
This story was just not very well written. The writing wasn't terrible but it was choppy and came across as juvenile. The story just seemed to drag on. The villain sends the h laxative-laced chocolates to keep her from going on a date with the H. Really? Are we in grade school? For a while, I thought I was reading a comic book. Luckily, it did improve somewhat in the second half, but the author had already lost me by then.