Review: editing could be your friend
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 25, 2012
i think that this book could have been really good if an editor spent  time chopping out some of the really stupid dialog...there wasn't a ton...and deleted the whole business of her posing for maxim and doing movies. those events added absolutely nothing to the story and frankly made it seem stupid. the woman was uncomfortable with her body yet doesn't even flinch about the magazine shoot? she has never acted yet is offered a part in a major movie without an audition? some things were just over he top, unnecessary to the plot, or just plain stupid. they could have been comfortably edited out leaving a good story behind. also i think there was just way the hell too much going on in her life. the whole emt business should have been left out...especially since later in the book she is completely ineffective when cole gets burned.