Review: I wasted my time!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 5, 2014
This was awful from the first chapter, but I kept reading until midway through the second chapter, then I couldn't continue. Let me say again, this was AWFUL!!!! I've written better stories when I was in middle school. The dialogue didn't have a natural flow. I also thought Allen was a p***y. He should have ripped those Bears apart the second he had a chance to, for what they did to his little sister. Don't waste your time buying or reading this one. Trust me, you're not missing anything.