Review: Wonderful Story - Hate the Typos
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 3, 2011
First, wonderful story. Loved Jayson, Kamdyn, Halo, and Devlin. All great guys. Loved Trystie as well. I couldn't put the book down because I had to know what happened next. I definitely recommend this book.Second, I only recommend this book if you don't mind fixing everything you read. You constantly have to pause to change wording from present to past tense as the book is actually written in. You also have to add words that are missing. The book starts out great and then I think the author forgot which tense they were writing in. Also, the author needs to learn the correct form of words. As someone else mentioned "threw" for "through". It's that way through the WHOLE book. She uses it as he went threw the door when he through his shoe. That's not really in the book, but you get what I mean.Still, I gave the book 4 stars because other than fixing it in my head the whole time I was reading, it's still a great and captivating story.I will be glad to edit for you if you ever need it. Would love reading your work period.