Review: Great Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2014
I loved the story line, BUT I hate when author's don't proof their work before it is sent to press. This story had a lot of missing connecting words. I can see that an author in their haste to write the story line as it flows might miss some words. Sometimes your brain goes faster than your hands. But, it is absolutely necessary to have a friend or someone with some objectivity to read the item and indicate that words are missing. I'm not even picky when it comes to proper punctuation, but a lot of missing words cause the reader to have to continually re-read to absorb the author's true meaning. That being said, I just purchased the sequel to continue the story of Zach and Bethany.