Review: Wow, simply awful!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2013
I don't understand the five stars given.  I'm trying to continue reading this book, but the grammatical errors and awful story line is making it really hard, the main character is 25 yet speaks like a teenager and acts even more immature.  I thought the word was probably not prolly,no instead of nah. This book makes me feel like one of those awful reality shows with redneck in the title, who chews tobacco now days? it was gross to picture that. The author throws name brands like she had never heard of them before and all of a sudden she discovered they exist.  I'm at 14% of the book and as I read I work on this review, we all know the main character has been in love with her brother's best friend, but to repeat it over and over it's getting old super fast. Her shivers and goosebumps, awful "we drove like that for probably an hour, silent except for small converstion, the radio blaring in between me changing the stations, the entire time our hands joined over the center console, never parting." This is one of the worst paragraphs I've read.  I will try and finish this awfully written book just because I started it, but it won't be in one sitting that's for sure! This is supposed to be a series, I hope the author thinks her story line better for the next books or better yet, end it with this one.