Review: Lots of grammatical errors
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2012
This book may appeal to readers who prefer erotica more raw (for lack of a better word) than passionate. That's not the reason I'm giving this book two stars, however. Different strokes for different folks, and all that good stuff. I know there is an audience for this style; it's just not me.My main problem with this book is the writing overall. There are too many grammatical and punctuation errors, like "Adam and her got friendly." The lead character also frequently says things like, "Oh, my gosh, my golly gosh, he's touching me." And "Holy, holy moley." The book is longer than it needs to be because sentences sometimes repeat the same information provided in the prior sentence.If you can get past the errors, this is the story of a husband who publishes online erotica geared towards a male audience under a female pen name. As he gathers male fans, he encourages his wife to pretend to be the author and meet the men for sex.