Review: Great story, horrible editing!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 24, 2013
I love Ms. Saints' books, including Jared' s story, but the lack of editing almost did me in.  Missing quotation marks, commas inserted Willy-nilly, and periods where commas should have been.I hate being pulled from a story.  If it continues, she'll lose me as a reader.