Review: This story was released too early
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 12, 2011
Seriously, the ending is weak. The writing was pretty good for a short story but it cannot save a half formed story. A good editor helps with things like pointing out that plot needs more work. I think I might start checking to see if ss writers have longer novels out. If they dont have the discipline to write a full length book chances are they didnt put enough work into a shorter story.