Review: Good short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2014
Read this story through Story Cartel. Very well written story with great characters. Really think this would have made a great novel instead of novella. Seemed like big parts of the story were missing to keep it under a certain length. really would have liked a little more to the story only because I was enjoying it so much. Maybe a sequel?