Review: ahh just ok
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2014
This is your typical bad boy/good girl / first crush romance novel. It seemed predictable early on. But I manages to finish anyway. I am glad it was free or I would have been VERY disappointed.It was not a total waste of time, it was cute and it had characters that we can all relate to. It did however lack detail. No good mental picture of the ranches or land. And everything seemed to be too short lived. With some detail and more length to the plot there is potential, but it fell short for me. Even the "romantic" scenes were lacking.My other problem was the way the book jolted around. One moment they are at the dinner table and the next moment Scott and or Amanda are somewhere else and it takes a moment for the reader to catch on. (In the process leaving the scene and events you were reading about cut off abruptly with no further mention of them.) It seems even the author got confused because in at least 3 places I could could count she made an oops on the timeline. Example chapter say x amount mo later then Amanda's thinking how it'd been two months and about five pages later (all in the same setting/thought process) saying it had been one long month sense...It made things messy. It was a cute read but I would say there are many other romance novels worth your time and money. And from me that says a lot because I'm not much for romance novels. This one just seems like an oh hum been there done that novel that seriously lacked the passion and beauty that could have made this a beautiful novel.