Review: Fan of author and her previous books which is why I am so disappointed!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 25, 2014
Loved the authors MC series and expected another fabulous read with this book.  I am so disappointed :(  This "story" lacked so much...too much.  It was underdeveloped.  It was not well executed.  The concept was there but the backstory, plot, conflict and resolution was ...where was it?!  I also just didn't  "get it" or "relate to it;" a result of the above mentioned, I am sure.  I didn't connect with the H and h.  It was short and a quick read.  I felt like I started the book and after a few pages it ended.  If it was a short read but the story was conveyed in that time frame, then I wouldn't have an issue.  This story needed to be developed.  There needed to be a better progression of the story across the timeframe.  There needed to be "more" to the characters.  I needed to "get them" and understand the H's purpose and what he was trying to do, as well as his methods for doing it.  It didn't make sense.  I also needed to understand the 13 women (down to 12).  Was the H trying to help and save or find a lover? How does narrowing down the women (after their past circumstances) for potential lovers fit into the "rescuer" concept?!  He saved them from abuse to abuse them to teach them "lessons?"  Umm...what did I miss?  Just horrible.