Review: Messy and all-over the place. Not for me.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 29, 2013
1.5 starsI loved the concept behind this story, but it lacked in its execution. Nothing like what I was expecting.Elizabeth was all over the place in her head. I felt like I was on a carrousel ride. She went over the same things over and over and over again. Then there was her attraction to Hunter. Er, stalkerish much? I couldn't deal with it. Sorry.Hunter wasn't that bad. A bit messed up in the head with a penchant for escorts, he was okay enough. To tell you the truth, he didn't inspire me much and that right there should have been my first warning.The story didn't feel complete to me. There were a lot of unnecessary details and ramblings that took me away from my place in the story and for some reason I could never get into it again.Sadly, I'm not sure what the hell was happening. This is what I know:1. Hunter got framed for something and was having nasty sex with the woman who framed him.2. Elizabeth has a fight with her friend and he runs off and gets into an 'accident', but his parents don't want to pay for his care so she comes up with the idea of selling her v-card to pay for it.3. While Elizabeth is 'training' at the brothel, Hunter continues to have the nasty sex with the woman while investigating what's going on.4. Hunter buys Elizabeth's v-card for $10 million (*rolls eyes*), but doesn't cash it in right away (*facepalm*).5. After he does cash it in Elizabeth is captured and held hostage.The details of the framing and the capture were all lost on me and I think he proposed in the end, but I can't be sure, I just wanted to get it over with as soon as I could.