Review: Okay, whew, ,hard to read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 19, 2014
This could have been a good story but it didn't flow to smoothly. There were foo many errors, not enough commas, and to many words that did not fit or were spelled wrong. It ended with a cliffhanger and I would love to read the rest one,it is really a good book. I wish I could have given it 5 stars.