Review: Forced to Finish
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 26, 2013
Well like a few other reviewers, I had a hard time with this book.  I didn't understand all of the hashtags and the run on sentences were unbelievable. I am not an English major, but can see when there is a need to go ahead and start a new sentence.It seems like there is a story in here somewhere, however a good editor is needed for the grammar and flow.  At one point Emma was going to get her stuff from the Omega house while DeAndre of all people waited in the cab.  What?  When she went back outside Skyler was in the cab waiting for her.  Skyler went back into the house to confront DeAndre and the Omega girls about the video.  After the confrontation they left and Skyler was quiet the entire drive home where he kept his hands at ten and two.  Um what happened to the cab??I saw this was Brooke Jaxen's first novel and with a little work it could be so much more.  I also think she needs to let her readers know that although the book is sexual, it is written for a 20-something audience.  One that doesn't have to look up #YOLO like I did. I am 40, but this book made me feel really old after trying to read it.