Review: One of the worst written books ever
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 7, 2013
I must say I am surprised that this author has had multiple number one free books. This read as if a 5th grader wrote it. I had to force myself to finish it, and the story wasn't even that long!The sentences were so choppy an the dialogue was TERRIBLE! A whole conversation in 7 short sentences? Punctuation and grammatical errors were everywhere. There was no obvious segue into the next scene, nothing to tell you that the scene was over and you were onto the next, just BLAM!One last thing, this fella must be a super conspiracy theorist, for he was going to the extreme with the story.I don't give many reviews on here, unless I feel strongly about something, be it negative or positive, but I had to on this one. I love zombie stories, and would even believe that some factions of the government are corrupt, but this whole story was unbelievable. Especially the part that it was written by someone who had been published in magazines before. You would think that for someone who wants to be a writer would have better English skills like spelling, grammar, punctuation...I could go on, but it seems to be rampant with these online stories. So sorry....