Review: Seriously  needs work
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 16, 2013
I see what the writer is was trying to do, but it falls short.  I don't know if all of the books were written in ALL CAPS, but that was really annoying and what about correct punctuation also there were a lot of grammatical errors to the point where I was getting headaches trying to get through the ALL CAPS an  then trying to follow a story that at times didn't flow well.  One minute the story was being  told from 1st person, then it was third person, then narrative and  then finally a mixture of all three.  I don't know who was the editor for this book, but they needed to be fired.  You can send me the manuscript for the next book an  I am sure I could do a better job with the editing.  I understand that it is hard to write a book and the concept was good but putting it together it was all over the place.