Review: Definite train wreck
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2014
There is a good underlying story here.  It is far more realistic than some of the books of this genre I have read.  However, books one and two are not properly formatted for the Kindle, nor is there the proper paragraphs that should exist making this a very tedious read.There are numerous cases of improper and missing punctuation as well as misspelled words and improper words.  Example: the author uses 'peak' for 'peek' several times.I would like to rate this higher, but the reader is having to do all the work by picking out who's talking to whom.  As such, it is what it is.