Review: Litte bit too sappy, slightly predictable.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 31, 2013
I guess I would say this story is just a little to OVERLY dramatic for my tastes. Two people with a history, a bad one that does eventually get fleshed out as we read the story. The problem for me is some pretty sappy dialogue, a not-well-fleshed-out main story line and a too quick, fix it all at once ending.I like a little more intimacy with a character I'm getting to know, the kind of writing that grabs me by my collar and yanks me feet first into a love em or hate em relationship with the cast. Here, not so much of that going on. The "big secret" wasn't so big, the "main affair" was so full of "My love!, oh! my love. I love you more, I love you MORE" type dialogue that for me it was like a bad commercial with lousy over-the-top actors. You hang up, no, you hang up etcetera.I almost didn't finish it because I pretty much knew how it would end. Predictably safe and sound, blah blah blah. I won't read it again.