Review: Okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 8, 2013
Good idea for a story. Characters need fleshing. Writing needs a lot of work, like subject verb agreement. The use of the word had is sometimes used incorrectly. The word seen is used incorrectly. Interaction between characters go from interested to sex without enough tension between characters to make this story plausible. With some editing and rewriting this book can be good.