Review: short and ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2014
I believe this story could have potential. Now I'm not a professional writer, but I love to read, and this story description had me interested. In my opinion I think this story was rushed, there were too many gaps and holes that I thought could have been elaborated on.  I liked the jest of the storyline, but there were parts that I really think needed to be elaborated on.  I would like a little more character development.  I am interested and do like where this may go BUT ... I  found myself getting a little confused throughout the story, it seemed to jump around too much.  For me it was like one situation wasn't explained enough or even complete before something else dramatic happened, and I found myself rereading lines to stay with it.I am a curious person and hate when I don't complete a series.  I will continue on with the follow up and see where it goes.