Review: What The Fudge???
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2014
Ok where do I begin with this series...ughhhh...was there a story here???... because I didn't get it...Lilly is in college and comes home due to her mom having cancer...ok I get that part...dutiful daughter wants to help mom...on her way there...she gets into an accident...car hits pole..she walks out of car and sits on hood????....hmmmm ok...she hears bikers and is scared...but when one of them sees her...she doesn't run she stands there like a ditz....again ok it's a story...I'll keep reading...the guy is on his bike...Doesn't get off...but can grab her by the waist and haul her to the back of the bike???...HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE???..again..benefit of the doubt (BOTD)...did someone edit this series???...she states that she gets on bike with pants....but I guess it's a magic bike...because when she gets off...HER SKIRT flows around her like a flower???...hmmmm....again BOTD...the guy Asher takes her on a ride...he takes her to her old school...against a tree he feels her up..kisses her...pulls down her bra...her books are out...and then he tells her TO LEAVE!!....What The Fudge???...he rides off while she stays at the tree still with her clothes half on....hmmmm....ok....moving on...she finds out who he is...ok maybe the story will get better....she stays with her mom for a few hours before she goes to see Asher...he feels her up and goes down on her...she gets shy...and says no to sex....uhmmmm...ok...bad biker guys come...kidnap her...ooohhhh yeah...story may just get better...they lock her up for a week...no food or water...she still lives???...not just lives..but still has strength to scream for food...they bring her greasy food...her body is ok with that???....hmmmm...BOTD...she gets to leave kidnapper twice....and Nothing!!!...she sees Asher..kisses him gets info that is needed for the bad biker...Asher without batting an eyelash gives her said info....REALLY???...more words...more words...trying to be a story without succeeding...Good bikers get into gun shooting war with Bad bikers...Good guys win...cops come and nothing is done???...You guys may have to reread what I wrote...Lilly was KIDNAPPED FOR A WEEK!!!!....Mom never called the cops????....WTF?????....Lilly comes back home with a concussion and brought in by cops...hmmmm.....as a parent...does that sound ok with you???...at least make the story believable....Lilly wakes up and Mom wants to go shopping!!!...then her Mom proceeds to tell het that she knows she is in love!!!....WTF...daughter missing for a week...and you think it's love???...my mom would be whipping my butt for being gone so long....and wasn't she supposed to be there for her Mom..because she had cancer!!!!...what happen to that story line????...story was poorly executed....I was left with huge "UGGHH"...after every book in this series....I would have paid good money for this book to be a novel and not a silly trilogy...and better executed....put more effort to the story....it was rushed....UGGGHHHH.....2 stars due to cover