Review: What Did I Just Read....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2013
Oh. My. Gosh. This story could have been amazing, but there was one not-so-small problem. The grammar mistakes in here were absolutely ATROCIOUS. I mean, seriously, every other sentence was a run on!Example from the book (no, I didn't accidentally make a mistake when writing this, it's verbatim): Mia was sat at a table in the middle, it wasn't hard to spot her, her eyes kept falling on me then she'd say something to her friends and they'd laugh.And another one: "Designed just for you that food is and you never needed to share her food, always had fresh meals ready for you I did, you didn't ever appreciate them."There's so much wrong with those sentences! Now try reading a whole story like that! I was about to go insane! Thank goodness this is a novelette!