Review: A Waste of Time
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 30, 2014
I put it down, never again to pick it up after about the first 5 percent. Mr. Eleazer needs to read a whole lot more fiction before he tries to write it. My main beef is that he hasn't a clue how to write believable dialogue. The dialogue in this book is stilted and unreal. People just don't talk to each other that way. They don't include the other person's name in practically every exchange for instance.