Review: Good story in serious need of an editor
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 11, 2014
I enjoyed the plot and character development. Brian's growth as a hero and as human being was intriguing. However, this ebook needs an editor who knows the difference between contractions, possessive cases and usage (i.e. word meanings of homonyms - e.g. reign vs. rein). Those types of errors, which occur nearly every other page, proved a distraction from what was otherwise an engaging tale. I'm interested in reading the sequel(s) but the thought of having to fight through the type of  junior high grammar is daunting.