Review: this book has potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2014
I rated this book three stars for a few reasons. First, while the story is good, it's not special or unique. It has some potential here but it really never hit the mark. Second, this book needs an editor.  Spend the money as an author and hire someone to do this. I don't mean it needs a little editing, it needs it on every single page. Even the characters names changed spelling in a few spots. I think this could be a great book with some input from qualified betas as well. There was also a scene about 24% in that was repeated twice. An editor or beta would have caught that as well.For a first book it was good. With a little more effort it could be great.