Review: A fantastic read- but ends at a cliff hanger.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2013
Ok, I really enjoyed this story. Yes, there are editing errors, but they in no way inhibit the flow of the story. There are about 3 instances of wrong word usage, sprayed instead of splayed, is one. If your brain automatically catches and corrects these types of things you will be fine. There were a couple( I think 2) times when the Author used the wrong tense for sentences. Again, a brain adaptation thing.  They didn't take away from the story enough for me to penalize the star rating. This would have been close to a 5 star if not for the sudden cliff hanger ending.I found the explanation for the human war adequate for the story line. I also read how the main character got her martial arts training, and did not need to be told by the author that she is the one to have trained the other women. Maybe it's because I have a martial arts background too, that I know 3 year is usually what it takes to be a black belt. So to me this whole story makes sense, in a sci fi, suspend reality, kind of way. I am going to wait and see where the cliff hanger endings stop before reading any more of the series. That is a serious turn off for me.