Review: Too many holes.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 2, 2014
A short story should be tightly written.  There is a lot of potential here. For a novel.  There are far too many holes for a short story.  This feels more like partial work on a story that was then thrown together in a way to make a few bucks than a real attempt to write a good story.  It was not worth the price.