Review: Good Potential but too many problems
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 4, 2013
The story had the potential to be very good BUT there was so much wrong with it. First there were just so many spelling errors (defiantly instead of definitely etc...)that I often had to re-read sentences to make sure they made sense. Then there was very little chemistry between Emma & Marc. It's like they felt a connection and then bam they're in love. I didn't feel a connection to the story but with editing it would at least be ok.