Review: Pretty good, would read more
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2014
I liked this book and would be interested in reading more of the series.My only complaint... this guy is a college graduate. From art school no less. Clearly an intelligent guy.Having said that... his grammar when speaking is awful. Not always but often. I found it incredibly irritating. My mother is from Philly and a lot of my family but interestingly enough, they all speak perfectly normal English.... some with a bit of a local accent but they don't say things like "he don't know nothing, or he didn't tell nobody" and some of them are not even college graduates.I can understand falling into it from time to time when talking to childhood friends and/or family. I get a little twang myself when talking to friends from the south but it does not cause me to forget all the rules of grammar.The double negatives nearly drove me insane.... even when he was talking to folks who spoke perfectly good English. I just found that incredibly irritating.There are a few typos... more than I would expect to find in a print book. Not terribly distracting but someone ought to take a look at them before republishing.