Review: Would've been better as a novel
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 26, 2014
This wasn’t a bad story but I feel like it would’ve been better had it been a full length novel.  I felt like there were too many different plots that the author was trying to fit into such a short story that it became hard to follow.  Not so much that it was confusing but that the author didn’t describe any one thing enough for me to feel connected to the story and its cast.