Review: Disappointing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2013
I loved the first book and was really looking forward to reading the second and third books. What a let down. Books 2 and 3 contained a huge amount of errors which made them unpleasant to read. It felt as though they had been rushed through without being properly edited. The time line was off, characters were continually misnamed, continuity was non existant. The voice of the story in the 3rd book kept swapping from Fran to John and it was often hard to follow who was who. I think the story is basically good, so if the books could be fixed up by a decent editor, they would be much improved.