Review: What Happened to the Editor?!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 24, 2013
What indeed happened to the editor?  It really is a shame because it's actually a pretty good story.  The characters are well developed.  The story line is intriguing having to do with parallel timelines.  The main character finds himself back in 1976 with an opportunity to do things he wished he had done the first time he went through that time period.  It then explores all of the ramifications of what what happens if he does follow this different path?  It's well written, but the editing was totally none existent.  Didn't even require a professional editor, a 6th grade student would have helped.  The writing suffers from caps in the middle of sentences; endless typos; gramatical errors; minor things such as "then" when it should have been "than".  All this contributes to significantly detracting from the reading experience.  I read the Kindle version so I dont know if the hardcopy suffers from the same issues.  It definitely ends setting up for a Time Flying II.  If it weren't for all the mechanical problems I would have given this four stars.  I liked the story, but reading it was so frustrating.