Review: OK
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2014
This wasn't so much a short story as a single protracted sex scene. There wasn't enough to qualify as actual plot and since it's the first in a series there isn't anything resembling an ending. But for a single erotic one-shot it was all right, as long as you don't mind dominance/submissive sex and are willing to overlook the fact that there is some questionable manipulation involved. I easily looked over such things and enjoyed it well enough. Nothing to rave or rant about.