Review: Best Billionaire Story Yet
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 31, 2013
Finding this book is the reason I read so many other authors in my genre. When something works so well for me, I know there is something in it to emulate to improve my own writing.Here's what works for me in this one: the author has built an environment with believable detail--the behind-the-scenes preparation for a community theater play. That environment helped shape the characters into people I could relate to, especially the main character, which is the point of a first-person style. Raina is open to her sensuality without being a ninny or a slut. Her very real concerns don't stop her from enjoying the developing relationship, but they keep her somewhat grounded and she never forgets that she still doesn't know this man in the way she wants to.As much as I like it, the one thing that keeps it from five stars, for me and me only, is that I'm a bit bored by the billionaire craze. I would have enjoyed this more if Tristan had just been believably well-off. Other than that, I have to say, well-crafted, well-written, smokin' hot sex scenes (loved the phone sex!) and none of the jarring editing errors that mar so many indie authors' work.For the first time since FSOG, which was my introduction to the modern erotica genre, I want to read the rest of the series. Outstanding job, Ms. Falls.