Review: Slow Down
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 19, 2012
I found this story was predictable. As the events unfolded in the first 3 or 4 pages, I knew how it was going to end. The author was successful in creating an unlikeable character. I know I didn't like him. He was one of those people (we all know a few) who thinks the world turns only for him, a typical narcissist.There were 3 tense errors, too many for an 8-page story. Examples: "He becomes flush when he realized..." and "He panicked when he realizes...." The third such error won't be quoted here as it would be a spoiler.I don't really have any feelings for the story one way or the other, thus the neutral 3-star rating.There was no coarse language or sexual content in this story.