Review: I can't finish it
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 10, 2014
I made it to the 21% mark but the writing is killing me. The only things I have highlighted are things a basic editing job would have caught: "befoe", "I really I began to really live and ...", "Many of the tips have already worked to a tee with me in my daily life.", "The intense desire and drive for the body to get a few good breaths in even leads millions of people to spark up dangerous cigarettes three or more times a day, just so they can get a break, returning their breathing habits to normal and hide behind a cigarette for a few short minutes.", and "I actually have color-changing LED lights in my home that are remote controlled, and feel a heck of a lot better than the CFLs while creating wholly unique color combinations that simulate natural light far better than spiral light bulbs."