Review: Good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
I would buy from this author again provided the story didn't jump around in time like this one. I enjoyed the characters, the plot, all of it, but I hate the time skips type of writing. usually I would give a story like this one star, but the author is very very good. The problem is once I read something, I hate going back in time to read another story about what led up to it, or jumping forward losing interest in the past stories. I like it to invest emotionally, and that is hard to do when a story stops, backtracks, slides forward..  All in all its good. Would have been much better if it went through time normally giving the reader a chance to bond better with the characters. I admit to skipping parts of it. Like if a main character dies, you feel sad then look forward to the next part. Then if you are taken back to his / her death, its like.. I already know hes dead, I don't want to rehash the whole thing now.. lets move on.