Review: Very Good Second Book, Slightly Flawed
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2014
Lyla Dune again proves to be great at humor, story development and building realistic characters. Some of the particulars are exaggerated--50 ft. spontanious jump on a drawbridge with a full size Harley and landing it safely? Really? The book is also crude with it's detailed  and lengthy sex scenes and ribald old ladies. It cheapens her good writing. Some editing would improve some of the wayward spellings and tenses, but they are not as glaring as a lot of what is being offered in digital publishing. Still there is a tender and touching story that emerges between the salacious offerings to prurient interests.