Review: Good start to the series
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2013
I really liked the story itself and give that 4 stars. There were a few things that botherd me enough that I only gave it an overall 3 stars. One was the editing distracted me (incorrect word usage like new for knew, one for won, waived for waved) and some of the sentence structure was off-which had me rereading lines over to comprehend the meaning. The second thing that bothered me was the bad guy at the end came out of no where and really wasn't explained. And third her descriptions of places, events, and fight scenes were way to dragged out and had me skipping ahead. Because this is her first book, I will gladly read further into the series because I hope she'll improve and I like the overall concept of her story. So here's wishing Mrs. Rawlings the best of luck with future writing!