Review: I agree with CarolLynne
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 26, 2011
I keep getting tangled in the Joyee Flynn "crank out as much as you can as fast as you can" mentality. The book description sucks me in but then I discover that there's no substance. Additionally, the editing/proofreading is almost non-existent. I was in a particularly OCD mood while reading this and started making lists of problems. I found more than 20 problems including:- syntax errors- punctuation mistakes- wrong selection of words- compound sentences & long run on sentences- actions that were incomplete or details out of order (for example, ordering drinks to be sent by roomservice but they never arrived)These problems act as speed bumps in my reading proress.If poor editing & proofreading is bothersome to you -- pass this one up.It looks like there may be a sequel already out. I'm going to skip it.