Review: Their Ex's Redrock One
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2013
I like the concept. The execution, however, leaves a bit to be desired. Frankly, Vincent could speak in more complete sentences so that he is easier to understand. But, more importantly, the grammatical errors are horrendous. Wrong tenses and poor punctuation make it hard to follow. Editors are easy to find. Even re-reading your own work could have prevented selling books that are full of mistakes. Am on the second page of the second book in the series and it is even worse. Ms. Anders, you have a good story to tell. Don't let it get lost in the mistakes.