Review: Good enough story but needs editing...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2013
Enjoyed the story and especially appreciated that the author didn't use graphic detail for the violence scenes. The reason I only gave it three stars is due to the need for editing. The example that comes immediately to mind is the consistent use of 'pore' for 'poor'. Maybe this was intentional to indicate local dialect or accent but it jumped out at me as sloppy proofing every time.