Review: Some hot romantic scenes but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2013
First off, I have a serious problem with authors who do not have well edited books.  The second paragraph of the book had me scratching my head trying to figure out what the sentence was trying to say.  There were several other areas in the book where there were definitely words, or just letters missing. How hard can it be to make sure you have a "T" in "the" (missing at location 1853 on my Kindle Fire HD at the beginning of a sentence.)Also--the language was all over the place.  First you read really big words that are not used in today's language.  Then it switches to much more modern language.  Back and forth it goes.  Make a choice!Beyond that--I did like the character of Myriah, and how she decided she didn't want to be like all the other "ladies" of the ton, but wanted to marry for love.  I enjoyed the banter between her and Billy--seemed to be like a brother/sister relationship.  Kit, however, was a different story.  Nice, romantic scenes between them, and I get that he didn't trust her enough to tell her he wasn't really a smuggler.  However, he wasn't totally believable--to me at least.  I especially had a hard time with how he just let Sir Roland know everything he was doing (umm, he kept it a secret from Myriah, but told everything to a total stranger--and the stranger that was trying to force Myriah to marry him?) Also, he just up and decided to pay off the debts Sir Roland accumulated?  Espcially after Sir Roland tried to blackmail Myriah into marrying him?  I was a bit disappointed in that decision, as well.This is a quick read, so I guess if you don't have a lot of time to spend on a book, and don't really care about editing, or complete believability of characters, it wouldn't be a complete waste of time.