Review: Hard to follow from the get-go
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 4, 2013
While I can understand opening a story with action, and it's possible I'm just uninformed and the author's style of writing and language is perfectly period appropriate, but I was honestly confused right in the first few pages. Some of the sentences barely sounded like they were in English. Like I said, could be that the author is the extremely well-researched one and has everything exactly period accurate for all I know, but I found the opening so distancing and off-putting, and I didn't feel much of a connection to the characters to make up for it.I see a lot of potential here, but then, perhaps I am not this author's target audience, although I love historical romance normally.Best of luck.