Review: Um....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 27, 2014
This book is just choppy and not properly written to me there are too many moments when Lizzy is places and you don't know HOW she got there or WHY she is there. For example the party where she sees Hunter it's like WHY is she even there? No one cares about Sarabelle we don't know anything about her and we weren't even introduced to her to even connect to her to care about her or what happen to her. OK I understand Elizabeth selling her virginity to help Cross because his rich parents won't even put forth the money for their son's hospitalization. However the fact that we find out that Lizzy's best friend Suri has enough money to pay for Cross' medical bills but Lizzy tell her no is just straight up STUPID! So far I'm not liking this book (reviewing as I read) it's kind of all over the place and just not neatly written. There are holes and moments when you be like "Wait, what?" smh there isn't any logic behind Lizzy doing this when she doesn't have to. UGH!!! Ok Elizabeth saying "Holy Crap!" is getting in my nerves!!!!! She has been at Hunter's house for days now, and EVERYTIME and I mean EVERYTIME she wakes up in his house or room. She's all "Holy Crap! I'm in Hunter's room/house". Like UGH! Enough already the repetitiveness use of the word Holy or the phrase Holy Crap is superbly annoying!  No, in my opinion don't get this book it doesn't have that easy flow and the connection from me the reader to the character isn't there. This whole who killed Sarabelle and why she was killed storyline wasn't even done properly you have Hunter running around looking for who killed Sarabelle. Like I said earlier when she wasn't even introduced to us the readers to even care about her or who killed her.