Review: Great story, better editor would be nice
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2012
I really enjoyed reading this novel.  The characters are interesting and the plot is different -- I only sort of knew what was going to happen next.  While it was a good story, the writing could use some help!  The novel jumps around a little, there are times when things feel forced -- like they happen just because they are supposed to but don't make a lot of sense.  There are a lot of missing commas, which make it harder to read as well.  The whole thing just felt forced to me, and I wish she had taken the time to flesh things out a little better and make things flow more nicely.  Overall, it was a good book.  I wouldn't spend much on it, but hoping #2 is better.