Review: its got potential
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
I received this book for an honest review and the story itself was a good one. It was your basic bad boy falls for a sweet girl. I do love me some bad boys, and he was a kickboxer, so that intrigued me about this book. However, I do have some issues with it.1. It seems a little choppy at times. Needs more proofreading so the story can flow easier2. It seems a little rushed. One minute Eva is shy and then the next she is all over him.3. I want to know more about the characters background. You don't find out about Nathan's till the end and it was only briefly touched on. Eva's problems with her mom and Jacob need a little more light too them. I want to be able to bond with them and feel all their emotions and why they are the way they are.However, overall the story was nice. It has very good potential to be a great book. I would like the story to continue and I do love the cover!