Review: If Tomorrow Never Comes
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 14, 2013
Jake, a DEA agent is out to get drug lord Scorpio. During a raid on a drug house Jake found a drug courier hiding in a closet. Her forces her to help him obtain information to bring the bad guy down.  While all this is going on they fall in love.Some spoilers ahead....The original conflict between Jake and Jordan had my attention,  it moved at a fast pace and was almost comical.  But the idea of a top DEA agent actually kidnapping a criminal and the neighbor lady upstairs just playing along was a little much.  Take for instant the drug raid when he discovers her hiding in a closet, none of the other agents or forensics team while searching the house never thought to look in the closet?  I know it's fiction so I kept reading.  The author did a good job in developing the relationship between the two but pushed it too far. Superhero becomes way too mushy (take for incident the final raid, he keeps declaring his love for Jordan even knowing what's about to go down). Jordan's fear of her past being discovered made her run away not once, but twice. Maybe they just weren't the most mature H and h.The book is okay just to pass time but it will not hit my favorites list.I did download this book when it was offered free for kindle.  Like so many free or low cost books on kindle this book could have used a good editor. I don't pretend to be the grammar police but misplaced comas and such were distracting in parts of the book.