Review: Plot's ok
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2013
Alright, the book's story line is not bad. The problems I have with it are that the two characters jump in with nothing for the reader to grasp, all the dialogue between the characters sound the same, and the author is not able to get the reader immersed in the story. Needs a few more edits to get it to a "can't put it down story".  Like I said I loved the story line but couldn't get into it.  I like hearing the characters in my head and picturing the scenes. I couldn't do that with this story so I was disappointed.