Review: An OK short story - but that's all
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 5, 2011
Thin plot that rushes to an obvious conclusion, potentially interesting but totally under-developed characters, and hasty sex scenes. Basically, if you expect just a short story, then maybe the high ratings are reasonable -- it's an OK short story, and would hold up adequately in many erotic story collections. If you think you're getting a novel, or even a novella, however, this is a disappointing offering. I dumped it from my kindle - nothing I'd ever bother rereading.