Review: Readable, but...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2013
First off, I'm glad this was free.  The author must be raking it in if she's getting 99 cents for 50 to 70 pages for each volume.  That said,  the characters and the story badly need to be fleshed out.  I have a hard time keeping track of who is saying what just by their names.  No personalities whatsoever.  If each installment was longer and written the way it is currently, I probably wouldn't have finished reading it.  I'm currently up to volume 4 and so far nothing has improved.  I do hope the author takes more time writing her next series so it is actually interesting.