Review: Better
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2014
This book had fewer mistakes, but the writer still has a recurring problem. His main character is supposed to have unarmed combat training, but even I would do better in the various fights. Word of advice: if you want something to happen, come up with a decent reason for the happening. Just throwing in the happening makes you look lazy and uncreative.