Review: Should have been edited more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2012
To be honest, this book had a strong start with the foster-care situation, and I liked the first version of all the characters, and not the "second universe." I could tell after reading this book that more time was spent setting up the plot and the characters, than the ending. About half-way through things start to unravel once the Aunt talks to the main character about traveling and being a "travel agent" of sorts for inter-dimensional travelers. Things got convoluted and spotty the end result just was not that great, ended suddenly and seemed like the author had lots to say but didn't do so great in her efforts in trying to say it.Now I am suggesting a different editor to look at any further works for content. Not one who knows you personally. No friends, a third party to really look at the book critically and help improve the plotline where it stalls and stutters and falls flat. They can cost more money than one wants, but if you are self-publishing yourself, really take the time to produce a high-quality product.I'm not saying this story was bad. Not at all. I am just saying that it needs improvement for cohesiveness and believability. This story is certainly better than some drivel I have downloaded for my Kindle, and I made the mistake for even paying any money for those.So keep trying and keep up the good work.