Review: Good read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 22, 2012
Ava is new to town and starting an adult shop that the Sheriff is against having in their reputable town. It was nice how they started out. They have feelings for each other yet end up arguing over everything. It was kind of funny how Ava flirted/teased him to get a reaction out of him. Everyone can tell the Sheriff has it bad but is not willing to admit it. Soon after, Ava is threatened and Seth seems the likely suspect which increases the tension between them.Although Ava in my own opinion is just a little too flirty though most people would just say friendly flirty, it was easy to see she would be good with Seth. The story is actually very close to a 5 star but one of Ava's actions in fact almost made me give this story a 3 rating instead of the higher 4. The story was going so well even when the identity of the criminal was so obvious. That can be overlooked since the romance and the suspense is great. I was able to overlook the decisions Ava made in the past about her past relationships but she seemed like a complete DUMB when she ignores the very possible identity of the antagonist, especially since she is strong in every other aspect. After everything that happened to you are SERIOUSLY going to think a previously violent person couldn't be the one and the same? Even though some of the events seem kind of impossible, with all this technology in the world I think that one person should have seemed even more suspicious. It was kind of like a TSTL kind of thinking for me. This story could have almost been perfect if Ava's thinking and actions were different in relation to the criminal. A lot of times stories like this have plots where the identity of the perpetrator are figured out in the middle and the rest of the story focuses on outsmarting and capturing him/her. I think this story would have been better if it had been written in that way.