Review: Ok plot with explicit sex scenes
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 13, 2014
There are two things that really get to me.1.  Timeline holes/plot holes2.  When authors rely on sex and sexual attraction to convey romance and love.  Example:  He walked into the room and her pulse pounded.  His scent drove her mad and her panties soaked.  Then she knew she'd do whatever he asked.  Another example:  (Explicit/graphic description of sex) The way they melted together.  She knew she was in love.Craziness.  While I have had my share of whirlwind experiences, the way his 'largest endowment pistoned in an out of me' didn't necessarily prove his love.  Nor does passionate sex in an office in the middle of the day.  I just feel like some authors rely on the fantasy a little too much and the plot suffers for it.That being said, I found this story intriguing.  The heroine had a really messed up family with family secrets and blackmail to boot.  The hero was your typical Alpha male complete with revenge plot and brokenness.It was alright.  But if more had been put in the plot than said scenes, it could've been better.  Oh, and there are points were it feels like your reading the middle of a rewrite, and they forgot to delete some entries.This author had a lot of promise, just cut back the graphics.