Review: Don't blink or you will miss this one
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 20, 2010
This is a short story but it had some really good elements. Chance's ranch foreman enters him into a contest to win a date with a super model. He wins the contest and goes to meet her. The Supermodel is Desiree. She has been in the modeling industry since she was a teen. She has experienced Gary Coleman style drama with a mother who took most of her money and used her. She is jaded and disillusioned at this point but does not know how to get out or if she wants to. The attraction between her and Chance is there from the start. In a youthful twist they decide to give the paparazzi the slip and run away together to Chances' Ranch so she can get a much needed break.While there, Desiree decides Montana is the place for her. At this point, she is in love with Chance and vice versa but her high profile past comes back to haunt here. Desiree is fun and innocent in many ways. It was nice to see her and Chance get together.I liked the story on a whole. There are editing errors and a few inconsistencies in the story and I really think the end should have been longer so the plot could have unfolded slower. I see Dahlia has been putting out these really short stories like they are on an assembly line lately and that's good... if you relish quantity over quality but I would prefer for her to put out fewer stories that are more fleshed out.Again, the story is good so it's worth buying. Enjoy!