Review: would benefit from major changes
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 20, 2014
The author tries to do way too much in the plot.  It's really confusing, and all the constant changes in the storyline take away from the depth and strength of the characters.  I didn't like the beginning of the book- it was not believable at all, even when taking into account this is a fictional book.  The author clearly has some very interesting ideas, but she tries to jam too many of them into this book, which resulted in their development being superficial.