Review: Love it - despite some things !
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2014
Overall, I really liked this book. And will definitely be purchasing the 2nd book.  Love the story-line and all the characters. I have this thing for bad boys; I stay away from them in real life but I love them in fantasy land (my books). You really do get to know and feel all the characters and definitely open doors for stories about the other four of the "Five".What I didn't like: The way their 2nd meeting was described (Nathan and Carter). I do not mind the instantly falling in love/lust with each other but there was a lot of rambling in the way the author described it, where I felt Nathan lost some of his suave. It was an overkill with describing Nathan's feeling and whereas Carter came off more passive about the instant love. Another thing I'm very weary about is Kyle's relationship with Carter. It takes away from her and Nathan's relationship and makes me sometimes doubt Carter's commitment to Nathan. If the author does not mention Carter's "I love you Nathan" then you as a reader have doubts with the way Carter interacts with Kyle. I need more Nathan and Carter moments and less Carter and the other 4 moment. The flirting with everyone is all fine but the wavering sexual thoughts between both Carter and Kyle... Not Cool! At first it seemed one sided but through out the book it seems as if the author maybe hinting at sexual feeling from Carter toward's Kyle. On top of that, in the beginning of the 2nd book Carter does not remembers her sexy, gorgeous fiance and thinks Kyle and her are together, hmmm I don't like where that is going.