Review: Unrealistic, but not bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 10, 2011
If you can handle the suspension of disbelief necessary to enjoy this story (four words:  identical twins swap places), you'll get a sweet erotic short story.  The author created two characters who - within the unrealistic framework of the story - have understandable motivations and the ending fits with their characters.  There was a little too much non-bedroom stuff for it to be completely successful as an erotic work for me, but some readers may enjoy having more background into the characters.