Review: cliffhanger ending, scattered point of view
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2011
I think I would have liked this book better if it just gave me one or two person's points of view.  Since this seems to focus on Cat and Alek, it would have been less confusing to hear the story from them.  As it is, it switches from girl to girl (four of them, later leaving out Kassie, altogether) to Alek.  A lot of time there isn't much in the paragraph to help you figure out who is thinking.  That said--the story line shows a lot of promise and I am intrigued to find out more.  I really don't like the cliff hanger ending.  I felt as if she thought, hmm, better get this out there, see if anyone wants to read my stuff.  I will, but I am glad this was free, it needs editing, focus, and a real ending, not "to be continued."