Review: light weight
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 5, 2012
Within the limited but honest scope of light hearted erotica this short story is quite good.The author takes her time in outlining the setting but, in doing so, she slowly increases the excitement.There are only two details about this setting that I have found inadequate:- first the presence of an Italian ambassador in England sets the timeline necessarily after 1861 and I doubt menuets were still danced then.- second two proper guests would never leave a ball so abruptly as they would attract attention and gossip.The sex scene is long and detailed. It is perhaps not as fluidly paced as one could hope but it is nicely raunchy.My only issue with this generally well written work is that it is marred by several serious grammar mistakes which should have been avoided.