Review: Less sex and more dating could have made this 4 stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2014
The writing isn't bad, but unfortunately there wasn't enough build-up of the romance.  It was just too unbelievable that an incredibly smart, talented, billionaire could have proposed marriage within a 24 hour period of meeting the heroine.  If there had a been a couple weeks of constant dating or some compelling reason (she's a foreigner about to have her visa run out, whatever) then I'd suspend the disbelief I kept carrying as I read the rest of the book.I did like the heroine.  She was independent and wouldn't sell for anything less than his love.  No TSTL moments on her part and actually it was the hero who blunders.  For this, I give the author kudos as usually it's the other way around and I liked that he wasn't 100% perfect.If the author had spent more time on interaction between the h/H before the marriage and less on the sex and describing how hot the H was, I think this really could have been a stronger story.