Review: Bland story that needs a good editor.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2013
I'm not sure what is going on with the other reviews for this one - I struggle to understand how people can put 5 stars to a book that is, at the very least, in need of significant editing.The entire story is told as a third-person narrative. I have no idea who the narrator is, because that's never revealed. Hence, you get everyone's viewpoint all at once. Coupled with this, the tense changes all over the place. It's amateur and it's incredibly annoying.The plot, itself, is not a new one, but it could have been interesting if it had been well done. Unfortunately, it just wasn't.I found nothing 'hot' or 'spicy' about it. The intimate scenes were less heated than your average M&B; novel from the 90s.Sorry to be harsh, but this one is nowhere near the five stars the early reviewers are offering up. Obviously, try your luck and let me know if you honestly believe otherwise.