Review: "edit this," she spat
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2014
Holy typos batman! In the last 5 minutes I've come across so many grammatical and spelling errors that I couldn't take it anymore. "Pocked" instead of pocket, you're instead of your...the dialogue is insanely proper and just weird, every other page has someone spitting their speech (seriously, search for the word "spat"), and the plot makes no sense to me.