Review: meandering drama
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2014
This is mostly a meandering interpersonal drama about a young lady recovering from trauma. She was attacked & nearly killed by a crazy ex, who is staking her. She spends much time with a friend's child, and her cute dog. Late in the story a lackluster alien romance is added. Not gritty / real, more of a dull day of this and that feeling.This is the sort of story where 40% of the way through the male interest has yet to appear. My major objection is that despite the real threat, she never lifts a finger in self defense and never buys a weapon. Idiot. Instead she depends on the magic appearing cops, like my 5 yr old saying that in case of fire, stand in the middle of the room and wait for Superman to save you. (No more Superman for her.) Insta pregnant on first try adds to my disgust.Great grammar for self published.Don't pay more than a dollar.