Review: Interesting but needs work.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2013
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review for LoP.The premise of the story is good but the editing is awful.  I can forgive typos on every page but not plot flaws and story flow inconsistencies.  It's like the author forgets from one scene to the next what was happening.  The reader is often left with the feeling of "Did I miss a chapter somewhere?".  There just isn't a connection between many events.  I blame this on poor editing.The story starts with abductions by the "Legion" a possibly fanatical religious group that wants to capture or kill all super naturals.  Not really sure of their motivation but they provide the threat and the action between sex and romance.The male shifter is stereotyped as dominant, macho to the extreme, gorgeous and well endowed.  The sex scenes are erotic and entertaining.  Sex seems to play the largest role in all three books.I read all three books because I promised but I could have quit at any time.