Review: Good read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 20, 2014
To be honest, I would have given it 5 stars but two things held me back. First, there was an issue of not knowing when things were taking place. Especially in the first couple of chapters. It was distracting to try and figure out how much time passed between each chapter. The second issue was there were things introduced that we're not fully explained or thought out. Like the history with Holly and Mindy, there were repeated mentions of their past but nothing deeper. Same thing with Grady and his wife's past. And Elle, I don't get her part in the book at all. She's there for her dad's funeral then shows up out of nowhere at Grady's house to basically service him and then skip ahead and again she shows up out if the blue to give Holly a little bit of attitude at a club party.... then nothing. It almost seemed like Grady had some feelings for her so I wish she would have had a bigger part and caused some drama or she be left out all together. Again, it felt halfway. Other than that I really liked Holly's character and how she sassed him back all the time and how Grady was towards her when they decided to make a go at it. Can't wait until the next one.