Review: Very Interesting Story.  Could Use An Editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 30, 2012
I read this and enjoyed the idea but am hung up on the HUGE need for a professional editor.  I have zero issues with self published authors (in fact I think they all should be!)  My only concern is when a good idea is released before a quality editor has a shot to comb through it.  All in all the plot is interesting, I like the character... I'm simply having a hard time getting over her constant repetition of "The Dark Thing".  If she would give this to a quality editor with an eye for flow not simply mechanics I think she'd have a winner on her hands.  I gave it 3 stars because of that.  She would have gotten 4 had it not been obviously self published.