Review: Bad Editing Dooms This Story...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 13, 2013
I'm not usually really picky when it comes to editing. But in this book I found it REALLY detracted from the story. Made what was supposed to be scary, laughable at times.For instance, here the Grim Reaper carries a "cycle" (bicycle or unicycle? I found myself wondering)instead of a scythe(or sickle), which is what he is usually pictured with. A bit later on, the criminal was "on the lamb" (as in a cute four legged little sheep) not on the "lam" (as in escaping from prison). That made me giggle, as I pictured this ruthless killer riding around on a baby sheep.It's too bad, with a decent editor, this book could have been alot better.