Review: A good historical romance short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2013
I enjoyed this quick little story. It was well written with only a few typos. The author tried to do too much and introduce too many characters in a small space, and in doing so, didn't really do any of them justice. I never felt as if I knew the hero or heroine at all and didn't get the motivation behind their actions or attraction. A lot of things were left out, like the planning of the robbery and the help from friends for the rescue. The villain also wasn't shown to be all that bad, just a competitive rake, until all of a sudden he's burning people alive? This story needed to be longer or have fewer elements, IMHO. The bones of some good characters are in there, they just need some meat on them.Heat factor mild.