Review: Being generous with 2 stars
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2014
This book was underdeveloped and simply unrealistic. The only redeeming quality that garnered 2 stars was the content at the end of the book. It's a cliff hanger that would have left me excited and expectant but for the poor character development. When I say poor character development, I mean that many of the characters acted and responded in ways that the author had not developed them to. I believe the author has an interesting story to tell but the writing, and inconsistencies of the characters take away from what could be a really good read. Take more time to organize your thoughts and have logical segues. I see the potential.