Review: Needs some polish but. . . . . . . .
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2014
Let's just say right off the bat that I loved this book and its predecessor. There were a few issues that the author needs to address but otherwise I think he has a bright future as a author.1.) Proof read, proof read, and proof read again. Too many misspellings and grammar errors to look professional.2.) As has been said elsewhere, and it's hard to believe that these same mistakes were made through TWO books, please familiarize yourself with weapons and the U.S. Military. AK-47's are the military weapon of Russia, China, and other eastern bloc countries. The rifles used by the U.S. Military are either M-16's or M-4's, both select fire, both 5.56 NATO ammunition. The handguns used by the U.S. military are 9mm Berettas, which are semi-autos, NOT revolvers, and prior to that the military used 1911 Colt .45 ACP semi-autos. The U.S. military has not widely used revolvers since the very early 20th century. Research, research, research!!3.) At first the descriptive terms / home-made clichés the author used sometimes were irritating but as I went on they actually became an entertaining part of the book.4.) The author seems a little backwards and insensitive about LGBT issues. I couldn't care less about that but it might damage the authors career chances so it's something to consider for future reference. I would really like to see this guy succeed.In conclusion, mistakes and all, these books are just fun books to read and they keep your attention. I'm looking forward to the next installment and hope this series goes on for a while. No deep thinking involved, just pure entertainment and that's why I read a work of fiction, as an escape from reality.