Review: LOL? Hardly
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2013
This story had possibilities. As can happen, hate becomes love. The two immature characters play diabolical tricks on one another in a stupid game of getting even. Each tries to top the other to the point of becoming absurd. The action could have ended about half-way through the book and been funny. It's as if the author couldn't figure out how to wrap it up, so she just kept going. I firmly believe that writers should be able to write and editors should be able to edit. Mara's repetition of phrases like "shards of pain" and "swollen lips" became annoying. Total lack of ability to use objective pronouns was irritating. As I said, the story had possibilities. It's unfortunate that they weren't taken advantage of.