Review: Much Improvement Needed...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2011
Well this one took me a bit longer to read than most.  I liked the story line, but it didn't really catch my attention until the 21st chapter.  The writing was stiff and often too wordy in places.  Most of the characters were sugary sweet which had my internal voice screaming "LAME!!" several times.  When we finally get to see the villain he comes off as more of a psychotic stalker than anything else.  Some of the "traits" for Chaseyn are contradictory with him being half of one thing & half of another.  (Sorry, trying to avoid spoilers here)  Don't even get me started on the weak, wish-washy attributes of Lia.  Again, I liked the story line of this book & think it could turn into a good series with some major editing.  I'll most likely read the next installment just too see if there's any improvement.