Review: short but sadly not sweet
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 12, 2011
This really did have potential to be quite a good yarn.  Short and simple but still could have had a nice beginning, middle and end.  Well the beginning was there.  The middle sort of was there but you would have to search for it and then before you know it - you have crossed the finish line.  If only this had been double the length (still a short story) and had some of the other characters padded out and given some substance this could have worked a lot better.  I hate being critical as I understand how much work and effort goes into writing any book.  However, it does seem this started out as a good idea by the author and they then got bored and finished it as quickly as they could.  What a shame.