Review: Unbelievable!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2014
This short story would have been much better if the characters were more believable. Mel, as the deceive, is totally out in left field with her sleuthing abilities. She's on good terms with the police as well as members of a motorcycle gang, now really. Perhaps a 10 year-old child would like this tale. I'd put it by the Nancy Drew Mysteries series as a short read.