Review: This could be great!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
This book has so much potential to become a great read,  first I never want to write a review that makes it seem as if the author did a horrible job because here that's not entirely true!!  It's just a very "choppy" and difficult read. I'm sure if you were to invest another 70-100pgs you'd have a masterpiece. Scenes weren't well written and I got confused by who was who, so many first and secondary characters all interacting at the same time. If you invested a little more time in developing each scene it would be a huge change and much easier read....best wishes in your endeavors!