Review: Morningstar - Wading Through Sludge
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 21, 2011
I don't want to discourage the author, because there was a lot I liked about this story ... but a really good editor is badly needed.  There was so much filler "stuff" to wade through that I quit reading and deleted it 4 times.  Then had a change of heart and retreived it.  There were a plethora of odd sentences.  Punctuation was haphazard.  I suppose my biggest beef is that it ended on a cliff-hanger (which I hate) and realized I will have to read two more books to get any closure to the story.Haven't decided if I will continue on.  I probably would if the three books are edited and condensed into one, maybe.Morningstar (Morningstar Trilogy)Added:  It is a disturbing trend that reviewers don't have any history of reviewing and real reviewers get voted down.  Just sayin'.