Review: Terribly awkward....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2013
I wanted to like this story after reading the other reviews but I am not sure we read the same story.  The dialogue was horribly awkward and not at all fitting for 40-something's.  Evie's adolescent fantasies were better suited to a rerun of "My So-Called Life" rather than something from a grown woman.  Don't get me started on Dev's cheesy lines...Overall, a cute premise but the author was unable to deliver.  No offense intended but this story seemed like it was written by a high school student.  This is the first story I have read by this author and it will probably be the last.