Review: Poor editing/proofing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 24, 2012
I wanted to like this story.  I love basset hounds -- I've had three and my grown son has one now.The plot is good, the characters reasonably formed for a novella and the ending is a nice surprise.However, the incorrect spelling, missing or added words, the wrong words (concious instead of conscience) and one major gaff at location 51 (the male protagonist has green eyes, then blue eyes, then green eyes) break concentration over and over and over again.This would be a much better book if it was cleaned up.  If editing/proofing errors don't bother you, read it.  If they do bother you, read something else.