Review: please pay an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 31, 2013
The story idea is fine, I actually like and read a lot of what I call in my kindle "trashy romances". This series, however, became quite a point of hilarity as I would read sections out to my daughter. The writer is what I began calling "a repeater", many times saying the same word or phrase twice in one sentence or pair of sentences. Things like this become annoying when they happen more than once and completely spoil the flow of the story. My other complaint is with consistency. Characters went from standing to sitting to standing again without movement between. I am not an author, just an avid reader but I imagine a good editor or at least a proof reader should notice these things and have them corrected before publication.  It seems to me from reading cheap romances that many ebooks do not have the level of professional servicing that print books have and authors should consider investing in this to enhance what are actually great storylines.