Review: Not her best
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 22, 2013
They were some very distracting things, because I live in a rural area that has wild animals. Very, very, persnickety items that probably wouldn't matter to most people.SpoilerEve makes a big deal about how small this brown bear is, but that would still be at least 180 lbs. She makes a big deal about how big this wolf is, but that would only be about 100 lbs. She frequently writes in a way that makes it seem like, in their animal forms, the bear chick is no match for the wolf dude. Also, the bear chick is attacked by werefoxes, and says 3 foxes can take down her bear. Foxes are less than 20 lbs. Also, she kept saying the bear was running, yet described the movement as lumbering, which kept pulling me out of the moment.It's a great story, and I love it, but those errors were crazy distracting. They were brought up at important times and sort of moved the story along in a couple places. I know it is absolute nit picking, but just a heads up for the people who are like me.