Review: Poor editing! Poor storyline!!!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 5, 2013
So, I've never actually given a 1 star review before, but this book needs to be edited from start to finish. In the first few pages there are so many errors In spelling and grammar I nearly expired.What idiotic woman lets a strange man into her apartment and has sex with him in the first three minutes? None.This reads like a poorly written, hyper-exclamatory (!!!!), erotic fantasy blog.Author, I hope that you take care to learn your craft before self-publishing again. I'd sincerely consider taking this first episode down and rewriting it, if I were you.