Review: Could be so much longer
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2013
This story could have been a novel rather than a story. It has enough potential hinted at within the narration and dialog it's a shame the author didn't use it as a base outline for a full novel. Because of the short story aspect none of the characters could be developed and it becomes unbelievable that they fall in love in such a short time and have no real conflict.I hope the author takes the reviews which mention that and fills the story out. I would give it 3.5 stars but rounded up.