Review: Great story, mediocre characters, awful editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 12, 2014
Great plot and premise. That's what made this story enjoyable. This author has real potential. I would definitely read another book from his series. But hopefully future characters will take on more depth and the actual writing will clean up! For example: pick a tense! Past? Present? You tend to mix them a lot. It's annoying. Commas? They are everywhere! And often in the wrong places. But overall, great story! I would recommend this book.