Review: Cute
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 30, 2012
Short Version: Fun, cute .... and don't mess with Mom.Long Version: An amateurish parody but still cute. The story lives up to its title. The first few paragraphs are slow with a typical setup I often write myself, then go back and rewrite to change from "defining" the situation to "being" the situation. Had the authors done so this would have gone from a passable short story to truly good.