Review: Updated Review
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 8, 2012
This is an updated review. The book was sent to me as a gift. I gave it a chance despite of my 50-50 willingness to read it. The book was re-edited last August and so far there were only few misspelled words that I noticed, but still not acceptable if you are really serious about publishing your book. It was an erotic romance, with an original story line and interesting characters. There were some scenes and places that were very enthralling for those who are not familiar with different kinds of elaborated and over the top sex parties, yes you read it right sex parties, isn't interesting?. Julian is a male whore, a sex addict and an alpha male, very possessive indeed. It's hard for me to imagine him as an alpha male because his physical appearance was not well described, I cannot day dream about him. As for Heaven, she is an intelligent, well-driven and ambitious lawyer, who will do everything just to get what she wants. She is an interesting heroine who grew up in a brothel, who was hiding her beauty from her big eye glasses and oversized suits because she gets the respect she wanted and by revealing her true looks, she thinks that she will not be taken seriously by her colleagues/opponent. As for her physical appearance what I remember was she has a long wavy/curly hair, big breasts and curvaceous body and that was it. It was so hard for me to connect the characters, the relationship between them started very slow, took 3 years before everything happened, or should I say the real story began. The love story only started where it was almost the end, imagine for a book that has over 700 pages. It says that the book contained a strong sexual content, it was true but the sex scenes were not satisfying, mostly oral sex and showing of breasts and removing Heaven's panty, each climax was always very fast and it felt like every sex was a quickie. I thought the story was lack of depth and continuity because every scene was wrapped up so quickly and then will immediately move on to the next one. It could have been nice if all of them have lingered for a little while, that you can feel you were part of those moments and enjoyed every minute of them. The book did not have a satisfying ending, it just stopped right there. The epilogue was removed because there'll be a second book. Yes, I will buy the second book for me to finally finish the story but I am really hoping that the author will consider all of the readers' reviews and will make us feel well-pleased and satisfied. Overall it was just OK.