Review: Great story, great characters, terrible editing
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2013
I loved the story and the characters so much that I'm not going to hold the lack of editing against it.  It really was great but it needed editing badly.  There were a few cases where I wasn't sure if they misspelled a word or used the wrong word, such as using 'as' instead of 'was'.  It made that particular sentence gibberish until re-reading it a couple of times gave it clarity.Other times, there was be an instance where Vincent and his gf (Stella I think?) left the party together.  Then another couple left.  And then a 3rd couple left.  And then Vincent and his girlfriend would talk about a couple that left... when they were the first to leave??  Just an example of the editing that should have taken place.  There were many examples.That said, it was a very, very good book.  In my opinion, the author should have it edited and re-release a new version for free, then release the 2nd in the series soon afterward.The book is very, very long but I loved that about it.  All too many times I finish a book in a day and wish I still had it to read.