Review: Disappointing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2014
While the concept behind the story was solid. It was the execution that was lacking for me. Erica was just disappointing. Her constant flipping in her decisions was giving me whip lash. I really liked Johnny and he seemed like the ideal guy. Sean and Bam were awesome supporting characters. But the chemistry between Johnny and Erica just was not there.Also, many aspects of Erica's life were just unbelievable. How she got the ad meeting, Frank broke his confidentiality agreement multiple times and yet nothing was done, Erica was just immature in her behavior and while Donovan tried to make her into this strong female heroine, Erica came off as ridiculous.Over all- I skipped over many aspects of the story that just seemed to go on in order to up the page numbers. Namely- the play -by - play of the games. Would I read any more of Donovan's books? No. Did this one entertain for a few hours? Yes