Review: I've gotten pulled into this series and I do love it.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2014
And now I'm waiting for the rest and I've got a real problem, I'm a speed reader. Michael has a tendency to be a little long winded on some of Williams ramblings and I find myself speeding through it at times. Then I find myself wondering why this character has such a weird and long winded inner rambling. Is this Michael's "Lost in Space" ? Or Williams ? And I am constantly wondering why characters get introduced, but are never written about again. I keep waiting to see if they will be brought into the story later, but they never are. So what's the point ? Don't get me wrong, I have enjoyed this series and I look forward to reading the rest of it. But I sure hope that Michael tightens up the writing a bit. I did go to his website and read about the times that he has for writing. Hopefully with a shorter time to write, the story will be a little easier to read without me having to speed read through the long winded ramblings. Keep up the good work Michael, I have faith in you.