Review: It needs more world building and structure
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2014
This intro to the series is barely a complete chapter from a normal sized novel. It had several typos (Please authors don't depend in the spell check functions from your word processors sometimes they are your worst friend) and most of all make the idea of your story unforgettable because it's so interesting you want to read more about it, even though it needs work, not because you use the word "cum" to describe an orgasm.