Review: Author needs to hire an editor
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 31, 2013
I enjoy light easy reading. But the author took away that potential. By not proof reading, by not being concise (would repeat what the character  thought / said from the previous sentence to the next sentence). I felt as if she was writing for some one just learning to read - she's giving a play by play. I consider this a rough draft with syntax errors throughout the book.  It was predictable and at one of the turning points, she made the 3 major characters act dumb.  Really? I kept putting this book down. This is the work of someone on the NY Times & US bookseller list?I downloaded this for free on the 24th & saw the publication date was the 22nd. I think she wanted this out before Christmas.