Review: Just 25 pages more.....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 3, 2013
First, let me say I LOVED the first book and was even more excited about the second one because I really loved the characters.  I was so excited about the second book I frequently scouted the author's webpage for information and updates.  I couldn't even wait until it was uploaded to Amazon, the day it was out I bought it directly from the publisher.  I was *into* this book :).  So imagine my dissapointment in reading it.  Don't get me wrong, what author wrote was good-- it showed great improvement in grammar and writing style, the plot was good but the author, IMHO completely missed the characters.  She did not go into enough detail about the characters....all of them, and she completely missed the mark on the BDSM element.  These were two very wounded people, for them to be into this lifestyle required some serious storytelling that the author just did not provide.  That is a shame. For this book to be great would have required about 25 more pages of writing. Those 25 pages would have provided more character development, better flow of the book and better understanding of the characters.  I feel the author was so interested in getting the book out in time she rushed publication.  I would have rather waited until March for the book Jezzie and Socha deserved.  I'm not giving up on Ms. Newton and I look forward to reading more about the pack.  I just hope she remembers faster is not better.