Review: Something's Missing...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2011
Plot/Story/Characters: 2 StarsThis is a very short story. It felt more like the first couple of chapters of a book rather than a complete story.  It was all about setting up the background for a good yarn, and then it cut short. There was no resolution, the climactic scene was a girl-fight including hair pulling, and there was no character development or growth. Readers were introduced to Zyra and her arch nemesis, then left hanging. It feels like an unfinished story, not a cliffhanger, just not finished. The quest was not completed, no portion of the quest was completed.Writing Style:  4 StarsThe language used was normal for a science fiction novel. It flowed well, and was easily understandable.Overall 3 stars, I wish there had been more to the story it felt so lacking.This book was previously rated at redadeptreviews.com