Review: All aspects of a good story covered in a shortie
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 27, 2012
This short story of two soldiers working in a counter-terrorist unit has a little of everything...violence, intrigue, romance, comedy (if smart aleck comments can be called that) and of course sex.  The characters Lee and Fox do have history with a previous encounter that is never described fully but plays a crucial role in the story.  The hostage situation seems a bit over the top with no talk and all shooting.  Then the sex in the safe room between Lee and Fox...they believe they will DIE yet use a condom?  The SWAT leader rescues them but seems to be clueless on what went on between them?  Just some of the seemingly unrealistic aspects of this story.BUT...that is what makes this story so good.  It is an escape from reality.  Many readers of romance or erotic stories want to escape the real world for awhile and this story helps the reader do just that.  It was a very entertaining and enjoyable read.  No matter it isn't the real world.  In this case...I'm glad it wasn't!