Review: This missed the mark
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2014
The basic plot concept is a good one but it needed a more competent delivery.  There were some excellent pieces; the abduction, the pirates, the rescue of the trapped sailor, the final rescue. These should have set up a very exciting story. But the author kept loosing the momentum. In between interesting sections, it was as entertaining as watching grass grow.  The main characters lacked consistency and were unclear. Their behaviors and reactions were all over the place. I love him, I love him not. The emotional "struggles" did not connect with actions. A beautiful, cherished young woman does not deliberately ruin herself and destroy her family on a snit. It all just didn't flow  unbelievably. The author also depended too much on gluing a poorly developed story together with graphic, kinky moments.  I won't read more of the series.