Review: Great Start
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2012
This story started off great.  Keisha is in love with her best friend Greg and realizes that she just can't be his friend any more.  She decides to slowly distance herself from him and move on with her life.  Greg takes exception to Keisha's actions and he wants to know why his best friend is shutting him out.Greg arrives in time to see Keisha getting ready for a date and he becomes unreasonable and jealous.  After ruining Keisha's date he comes to the conclusion that he can't stand the thought of Keisha being with anyone but him.  Keisha admits that she loves him and begs Greg to give her one night.  Greg knows that one night will never be enough.Things between them are better than they've ever been before when a misunderstanding with a woman from Greg's past brings up all of Keisha's unsecurities.  This is were the story died for me.  Keisha is a big bad ex-marine and she let some tramp woman that Greg wasn't involved with come between them.  Keisha was so cowardly and whiny that I couldn't finish the story.Greg was great and the only reason I gave the story three stars.