Review: Good Storyline
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2014
I really enjoyed this storyline. I think the author did a good job in developing the characters and making the stories of all the characters presented connect. Also I like the fact that she provides a foreshadow into future installments of the series.In this installment it was nice to see Gabby and Slim recognize their love for each other. In the beginning, I was not feeling how their story started, but about halfway through my interest was peeked. I think learning the background story for Gabby helped me to stop disliking her for the way was treating Slim. Also at the end, when her brother provided more in-depth knowledge about her history that help to explain why Vincent was so adamant about them being together even when she was turning him down. That helped clear up my confusion. Up until that I point I felt like the story was disconnected in some parts.CONS: The editing in this book is awful. There were words misused, words left out of sentences, and sentences that confused me. SEVERAL times I had to reread a sentence to get the understanding of what it meant. That is very frustrating and takes away from flow of the story. I have also read Trust and Believe and it was just as bad. The only reason I am giving this book 4 stars is because I did like the storyline, but in my opinion it should be a 3 and 1/2  stars instead.