Review: Entertaining, but had some issues
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 17, 2013
Overall, the book entertained me but there were issues with the story I just couldn't get passed. SPOILERS AHEAD: Even though it wasn't very plausible, I could still buy Luke and Arabella sleeping together right away.  But with that amount of passion and chemistry between them I just couldn't buy that she didn't recognize him as his alter ego. The second thing I had trouble getting past is Arabella's dad falling in love with Jenny.  It seemed to just happen with little background and was hard to believe since she was technically an accomplice and the ramifications of that were never discussed.  Also, I am not one to let editing bother me, but this one needed a good bit of work, because it distracted from the story.  Despite my issues with it, the story wasn't a bad read by any means and I'll probably read the next with hopes of seeing improvement.