Review: Probably would have enjoyed this story more if it had been longer
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 19, 2013
Mistletoe Mischief is a super short story. It starts off with Marissa at the zoo with her daughter and her class. She was substituting last minute and as the story opens Eric shows up late to be a chaperon. Marissa and Eric's daughters are friends and so they all hang out all day. Marissa is attracted to Eric, but she has a lot of hang up and projects her ex's shortcomings onto him. She is so wishy washy. One minute she is all he is great! The next he is the worst! Just like my ex!! It was a little annoying and Eric can't figure out what is up with her either.Of course everything works out with the two, but it is kind of sudden. This is one where I feel like if it would have been longer I would have enjoyed it more. It was like suddenly Marissa was all sorry for being crazy, and then the end. Epilogue a few months later at Christmas and we are done. It just felt a little rushed all of a sudden at the end.This review was originally posted to [...]