Review: There Was Potential Here
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 6, 2014
This was a fast read, which was both a plus and a minus.  The author has potential and so did the book.  There was a lack of believable details that caused me to overthink.  It is not believable that a very intelligent woman could ever find herself married to and pregnant by a one night stand.  It made the heroine look far less than intelligent.  It is not believable that a wealthy hero could fall in love after looking at a model walk a runway in Milan.  Lust is believable after a look, love, however, is not.  I felt the book needed character development.  It was superficial at best.  I do applaud the effort, and definitely saw the potential.  I'd advise a slowdown on the next effort to give the reader the chance to fall in love with the characters before they procreate.  I'd give this 2.5 stars, truthfully.