Review: Trying EXTREMELY too hard to mimic 50 Shades of Grey
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 17, 2014
The entire trilogy is actual a pretty decent read. However, it's very annoying that the writer has chosen to use uncommon, difficult (for the demographics who will read this story) wording throughout the entire serious. What's even more unattractive is that a lot of the vernacular is used incorrectly and in the wrong tense!!!!! It confuses the reader and makes for a less enjoyable read. I understand that you were inspired by the 50 Shades of Grey story, but write the story for the ppl who will read THIS series.