Review: Good but could be better
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2013
This book was a good short read. I love the aspect of Dragons, it's something not over done in the Paranormal Romance category. There's also a strong message in this story that I think a lot of young girls could benefit from. There are countless women in abusive relationships, either their own or via a family member. I think it's great that the author brings it to light and shows a character strong enough to stand up for themselves and family. It really was an enjoyable read. The cover is captivating. I love how it looks. Definitely grabs your eye.But, with every book there is pros and cons...Few small editing errors, but nothing too harsh as to take away from reading. The main issue was going from 1st to 3rd person or using the wrong tense of a word. The whole thing felt rushed. There's no real depth to the characters, other than Ronnie's determination to stand up against Ben. I think some better back-story or character development and editing will make this book a 5 star. In no way does it mean I didn't like the book! I really did enjoy this story, just needs touching up!