Review: Could have been much better....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 13, 2012
If there had been more of a front and back to this story, i.e. the characters had more time to get to know each other than know that the wham bam was good, then this could been a 4 - 5 star.  I realize there is supposed to be the time limit due to the full moon, but I think this could have been skirted around (the mermaid is partially human during a half moon and he talks to her) - there needed to be more encounters where the relationship was believable.20% of the time I find Pillow's work 4.5 stars.  Other times, like this, I feel it's 2-3 stars when she has not fully developed relationships (don't even get me started on the awful Last Man on Earth).  She is an excellent writer, she just A) needs to make sure there's enough of it  and B) please don't make short change the heroine (that doesn't happen in Call of the Sea BTW) who is supposed to be a kick-ass something in a profession and instead comes across as inept - ugh this happened too often in the Draig/Var series.