Review: Starts off choppy, but it gets better
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2014
Let me first start off by saying that I am not a fan of books that are written from only one character's point of view and that was pretty much what this was.  There are maybe 6 pages total where we hear from the H, and I felt like this disconnected me from his character.  I have yet to figured out a way to determine this about a book before buying it, but I wish it was disclosed somewhere in the product write-up.  I even went as far as reading the sample, which was misleading because it starts off with a prologue written from the H's point of view.On to the story...the two characters meet and decide to have a one night stand.  That entire first scene, which takes up quite a few pages was extremely confusing for me.  The characters were having a conversation about the upcoming one night stand but they weren't making sense and their emotions were all over the place.  It was like they both had personality disorders and neither one could decide who they wanted to be that day.  I almost quit reading at that point but decided to continue, I'm glad I did because the book actually does get better.  I ended up thinking it wasn't a total waste of time and that I would actually re-read it if it would have included both points of view.  It also would have been nice to get more background information on the characters.  Instead the author eludes to the fact that they have lengthy conversations about their pasts, but we never actually read those conversations.This is the first book I have read by this author and I won't buy another one unless I know for sure what the writing style is.  I probably would have given it 4 stars just for that one change.