Review: 4 stars for the story, 1 star for the balance but for $1 its a deal..
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2014
the tale is a good one but this tale sure could use even a half competent editor and wordsmith..if it was professionally edited it would be a much easier book to read and comprehend..i'm not going to make marginal notes when reading because i read for distraction from the terrible present and enjoyment AND, finally, to learn when one person thinks might be valuable for his (or her) characters to do in extreme situations..in this case the story line is a supernova 500 light years away..it always seems to me these authors use dictation software to right these bucks because the words, while spelled rite don't quite match the context of the story as you can see from my intentional misuse of several preceding words that confuse more than educate..all in all i seriously advise the author to EDIT THE BOOK.. :-)respectfully..maybe have a few others read and comment so as to improve it..if anyone wants specific examples i'll go back, reread portions and do some copying and pasting and edit this review..but you need to ask nicely.. :-)