Review: Couldn't even finish it
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 28, 2013
I'm not a grammar Nazi by any stretch of the imagination and am extremely forgiving when it comes to mistakes that can be fixed with editing as long as the story and the writing are good. But this was so choppy that it was difficult to read and not all of the sentences made sense or were even complete. The grammar was so bad that I found myself having to re-read every other sentence just to keep up with the story. The author only filled half a page with words before your have to turn the page, so however long this book is claimed to be cut it in half and take about ten pages off used for the advertising of other books by the author. I'm not sure if there's a story here or not because this book didn't go through even minimal editing. The mistakes that truly made me angry were things that SpellChecker should have caught but the author didn't take the time to even do that. I feel like what I read was vomited out onto the page with very little effort. This is like a half finished first draft that I am so glad I didn't pay a cent for and bought out of boredom.On the up side I think the concept behind the story is good from what I read and I would be willing to read a more developed version that had more effort put into it. I hope that I find this book has been updated and put back onto Amazon to be read. I hope that the author gives me the chance to change my mind about this story.