Review: undeniably sexy and mesmerizing eyes
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2014
I found this to be on the on-set to be the typical everyday young, poor, virginal girl.  That meets super hot, hunky, rich guy.  His eyes are 'undeniably' sexy and mesmerizing.This cliffhanger made the story to be more about her brother instead of her and this blossoming romance.  The possibilities this will turn to loving a very damaged man may make the difference.  This cliffhanger makes you want more but will it be enough to push one to take that next step.Part I has lured me in, even with its very quick read.  I found this to be almost like many other short stories that leave you hanging for more but steal a piece back by making it draw out too long.  I feel like its a way to drain the pocket by dropping small bread crumbs and want the reader to follow.