Review: I don't know about this one
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2011
The writing style was okay. I had downloaded the story weeks before I read it and had forgotten what it was about. This story went from being a rather light, almost sweet read to a horror story in about 3 sentences and then it was done. After thinking about it for a while,I believe the idea may have been to have a powerful "WOW" ending but it fell short. Being free, I'm not sorry that I downloaded and read it, I enjoyed the majority of the story but the ending could use some work.