Review: Wish There Was More
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 10, 2014
What I mean from my title to this review is that I wish there was more to the story. The reader meets a loving and devoted married couple and learn that the husband, Jackson, is wanting just a tad bit more. He fantasizes his wife with another man. I feel that for an erotic, it has the sex (which is well written and has been the steamiest I have read in a long time), but I feel that more about the character dynamic would have made it better for me. I find I like characterization and the relationship just as much as the sex. Sure, we learn about the married couple, Kylie and Jackson, but we don't learn much about the hot black man named Tristan. I feel that there should have been a bit more dynamic between the married couple. There wasn't much to convince Kylie to swing, which I found unusual given her character background. I really would have liked more. More of the couple trying to understand the new lifestyle, more of the sex, and more of the friendship that would (or could) eventually bloom from a swinging relationship. The characters seemed like they've been in the swinger life for years versus the fact of being absolutely new at it. I understand that eroitcism is supposed to be a fantasy brought to literature, but I feel that it wouldn't have changed the content much if there was more to the story.