Review: This is the first I read of this author.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2014
Wow I really don't know how I feel about this story. In many ways I would have to say I was disappointed. This story came up short in too many ways. My 17 year old daughter likes to write books and it was like I was reading some thing she wrote. Only she is still learning. First I felt Sam's farm was more of a cattle ranch than a farm. You take a rich city girl and put her on a farm/ ranch. And you never put in how she adjusted. To make matters worse. In every book I have read no female would live with a man for 7 months. With out another female in the house. Because of her reputation. In Sam's letters to Erica he said his mom made a pink lace spread for her bed. But yet she wasn't their to meet Erica. Sam never tells Erica he has a sister. But meets her act a dance. No explanation there. And what was the point of Marcy that seemed thrown in at the last minute. And then at the end Erica writes her parents 10 months later. What kind of writing is that? Really? And to add insult to any one who is female. Erica writes that she is going to have a baby in eight months. Hello with out a pregnancy test back in that time women had to wait until at two months at most. Before they even realized that possibility. Because they had to make surethat there cycles weren't changing. And that happens to a lot of women. Short story or not. This book seemed just thrown together. Because of a dead line. That needed to be rushed.