Review: Hot, Sexy Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 22, 2012
Really enjoyed most of this story. Katie Cramer does a great job setting the scene, and I have to say, having looked at her author page it was hard to not picture her as the heroine, Lisa. It seems that Ms. Cramer focuses on married, mid-30s women in sexy adventures, just the sort of story I love. She does a good job of creating a believable character, even if some of Lisa's constant doubt and indecision slows the story down. The bit in the beginning with the husband and the kids was very well done and set the stage of who this woman is nicely. When we get to the action it's hot and vivid, some of the best I've read here. There were some dialogue elements that made me roll my eyes, but that's pretty standard for erotica. I don't think anyone will mind. There's a point where Lisa is gripping the bedpost while...something...happens and it's insanely hot. Only a couple things kept me from giving this 5 stars. The most important, strongly disliked the ending. Didn't really square with the rest of the story and who I thought Lisa was. I think a lot of readers may have a problem with the ending. The other issues are more minor. To divide something so short into chapters seems a little silly and breaks momentum. And my other quibble is that $2.99 is way too much money for something that's not even 12k words. As good as it was, it should have been priced at $1.99 at the most.