Review: Explicitly...commercialized
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2014
This story reads like a sales catalog, every brand name in its place quickly becomes every expected adjective in its place.  The premise of the story is okay but the country character falls too quickly into the language, lust, and debauchery of the more sexually experienced characters.  Realism fades fast and all you're left with is a great script to repeat during your own sexual experiences.  One more thing, the current fad of making spit and the act of spitting into something highly erotic is as enthralling to me as turning the furniture into erotic characters.  It doesn't work, spit is just spit.