Review: Wait... what?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2014
I totally was with this story right up till the end and then I wanted to throw my Kindle across the room (which would have been embarrassing as I sit in a Starbucks reading this.)The good is that it's well written and mostly well edited. The story sucks you in even if you cannot explain what it is that makes you flick the page. It's a short story, nothing more than that and so I shouldn't be too disappointed and yet...The end is like being doused with ice water. Without giving "the big reveal" away, it's just so useless! it's trite and annoying that we had to go there even though you kind of know it's gotta be something like what you get. it also comes at a horrible time and then? The story just stops. I'm hoping this is one of those stories I hate that's serialized so I'll spend more money on sub-par works. I won't pay for more, but at least it would all make sense.If you can get this for free, it's a nice quick, short story, but don't bother spending even $0.99 for this. It's just not worth it.