Review: Torn
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 2, 2014
This one had me torn.  First, she need  to hire a proofreader.  I saw many grammar and spelling issues.  The spelling could be innocent typos but a proofreader would have caught them.  Now the story,  decent.  Wasn't really a story that caught my attention and it was  way to short..  I like short stories but not ones that takes  me fifteen minutes or less to read.