Review: Its an OK read but could use some editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 24, 2013
I downloaded this book for free with the other books in the series because I had never read anything by this author and the premise looked interesting. The mythology behind the story was good and the characters were likable but the execution could have been tighter. Elements of the story were repetitive,especially in regards to the feelings of the main characters which were shared over and over in the chapters. The book could have benefited from some judicious editing,some sections were a little long and as a result my interest started to wander. That being said I read the book to experience a new author and while I may never read this particular book again it ended on a cliffhanger and I will read the following book in the series (Betrayed)to see what happens next.And in the end that is the goal of all authors to have people read their books to the end.