Review: FREEBIRDS THREE
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 9, 2014
The third book in this series features Max and Payton. I loved Max, Payton not so much, I found her aggressive tendencies and dialogue which mostly consisted of "one liners" a little irritating.The story was good, and well detailed. Plenty happens,there's romance, drama and lots of sexual chemistry. Characters from the previous two books feature heavily as well. But I had hoped that after the reviews for the first two books commented about the editing, that the author would have addressed the issue. Apparently not! If anything it was even worse in this latest story. For instance the word they was constantly used when it should have been "the" we're instead of "where" in one dramatic scene the word trader was used instead of Traitor, which totally detracted from the drama. Payton has a dog which she calls to heal instead of "heel" all pretty basic stuff, which should have been picked up.