Review: Good Debut Novel
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2014
I really enjoyed this story. I think my main issue was that It was confusing at times when characters spoke and some of the timeline issues were a bit confusing, and the switching back and forth. A simple name above the chapter or paragraph is something I would suggest so as not to confuse people. The bullying was hard to read about, but it went with the story so it worked. I loved Nero however I'm not sure how many 18 year olds act like he does, and dominate their girlfriends like that, it was reminiscent of Fifty Shades of Grey. He was maybe almost too Alpha for his age? I understand he's grown up like that so its just him. I however did enjoy the story and it kept me entertained until the very end. I look forward to reading your next book.