Review: slow storyline and poor grammar!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 6, 2013
Proofread proofread proofread!!! I can't remember if it's in this book or the next, but seriously 3 words repeated over and over enough to take up 3-4 pages on my kindle?  That's overkill and probably only needed to be repeated 3-5 times, not hundreds... lead character still hasn't matured much and is always getting into trouble and having to be rescued. I'm tired of her being so pathetic...