Review: the things that did not work for me in this books, are most likely things others can overlook.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 26, 2014
This review has been weighting  heavily on me for several weeks now, I have been completely conflicted with my rating and my review, but here it goes...This is probably the most personal review I have written in a while,  the things that did not work for me in this books, are most likely things others can overlook.The book is polished, a beautiful cover, clean writing and great flow.  I will  start on what did not work for me so we can end on a positive note.The main reason for my conflict, the main characters Eddie and Harris.  I just did not feel any attachment too these characters. The sex  felt rushed, and I could feel the authors discomfort in writing these scenes.  Many times Eddie used the word pussy during sex and it just felt forced and awkward because the sex scene did not have enough to support the dirtiness of the word.  My other issue with Eddie and Harris, individually and as a couple,  there were too many similarities to other characters in books I had recently read.  I really needed some unique qualities to Eddie and Harris to  respond to them.I tend to gravitate to the unknown in a book and here is where the book was saved for me; CLAIRE.  She was crazy, think single white female crazy.  Olivia Luck did a great job with Claire.  She was fresh and unpredictable.  I read this book in a day because of her.  I really want to know what she is all about.Overall, I think this is a solid start for author Olivia Luck.  I would recommend this book, and would absolutely read the next book in the series.