Review: Not really a short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 16, 2014
This is not really a short story, it is the beginning of a book.  It was well written and interesting, but it didn't end, it just stopped.  What I don't like it that it was NOT billed as a sample of a book, and that is really what it was.  I would have liked to have known what happened next, it was an interesting idea, but I don't like being manipulated into thinking I am getting something I am not, when it was just a come on to get people to buy a book.  Be upfront and let people know what they are getting!