Review: declation was lovely, but the tension was missing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 20, 2012
The declaration was lovely. But then it got really repetitive. There was no tension. Nothing to be fixed. I feel like McKenna has this talent of using sex to heal and repair souls, but nothing was in need of repair in this story. Well, except Caroly's continued and redundant objectification of Didier. But she flat out asked Didier if her awe of his good looks bothered him, he said no, and McKenna kept typing how good looking Caroly thought he was. All future vignettes should be from Didier's perspective. He's the one that's still growing here; not Caroly. She's flawed, but fully formed.