Review: Needs an Editor ASAP!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2013
The outline of this story is pretty good - following around the lives of a German tank battalion crew during World War II, and some of the scenes were well-written and plotted and you felt as if you were right in the middle of the action.The Kindle version of this book, however, is in serious need of an editor as there are run-on sentences, the scenes shift from places to place as if a cut and paste happened right in the middle of a current scene that has no context to what you are currently reading, and verb tenses shift from active to past left and right in the middle of a sentence.  I had to quit reading at the 32% mark on the Kindle because it was too frustrating.I picked this up for free during a Kindle promotion and, as I type this review, I see the pricing has reverted back to $2.99: until the editing problems I mentioned have been corrected, I would give this one a pass which is unfortunate: the battle scenes are well done.