Review: Too many grammatical errors and story too disjointed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 13, 2014
Story development good, but needed more backgound to understand characters' motivations/emotions.  Grammatical errors added to  the disjointedness.  A bit unbelievable for females to be victimized so many times--over the top.  With all the built in proofreading tools available in word processing, there is no excuse for the sheer number of errors--several per page.  Proofreading tools might not eliminate all the errors, but would be a huge improvement.  With some work, these books could be much better; storyline tightened up, better understanding of characters actions and reactions, and better flow by reducing errors.