Review: Somewhat Improved
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2014
The second in this series and somewhat improved from the first.  Still needs significant editing and still problems in time frame of novel.Cozies are supposed to be a slow easy read but this is just too slow.  Too much information is being presented about too many characters.  With that being said many of the characters are still two dimensional and predictable.  There was a fairly good story in there somewhere just waiting for a good editor to find it.  I find that odd as her new series doesn't seem to suffer from any of these problems.