Review: I Truly Did Not Like This Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2012
I truly wanted to like this book, because I have a lot of respect for the author.  With that being said, I have to be honest.  The positive first.  The editing was excellent and I must give her credit for taking pride in making sure the finished product was properly edited.  I did manage to find a couple of characters I liked.  Chris and Peri were the only characters in this book I found to be somewhat interesting.  For me the story lack plot and substance.  I don't mine steamy sex, however there needs to be more to the story than sex.  The characters were shallow and one dimensional.  Nieva was suppose to be a sexy confident vixen, however she was a total flake.  Francisco and Menchyon were juvenile, the other characters were pointless and didn't add any to the story.  I actually feel they took away from the story.  The sex scenes were cheap, tawdry and pretty much pointless.  About 37% into the story I lost total interest and started flipping pages trying to find something in the story to grab my interest.  Eventually I just had to give up and put it down.  I just couldn't finish it without getting angry with myself to reading it and angry with the author for writing it.  I gave it 3 stars strictly on the editing and there is not an 2.5 option.  I am so disappointed and it saddens me to have to write this review.  I truly hoped it would be good.