Review: Potential.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2014
Principal characters carry the "lame brain" pose all the way to absurdity and back.  Cosy?  Not really.  The Jose character was the most appealing of the main characters.  His character might be given a larger role.  Smarten up the main characters to make them more believable.  Author has a handle on dialog.