Review: Too short feels incomplete
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2014
I usually like short stories so it wasn't a surprise that I liked this story. But I feel that I could have really loved this story if a little more time had been spent developing the characters. This story has plenty of erotic sexuality and a generally acceptable plot but little character development. The main characters felt two dimensional with the secondary characters appearing totally false. I am pleased to report that this is one of the authors earlier stories and that the problems noted in this story didn't continue in newer stories. As a matter of fact the author is on my must read list which is why I have been searching for and reading her earlier stories. I have to say it is very interesting to see how authors develop their story skills over time.