Review: good story,bad editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 26, 2013
I liked the characters and the story idea though both could have been fleshed out a little more. It's a very good beginning. I spent the $0.96 because the initial story idea is intriguing.The grammar, spelling, misused/misplaced words, gender pronoun agreement, sentence structure and plot continuity are in great need of a proper editor.