Review: This could be so much better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2014
I'll start by saying that the premise and characters are enjoyable. I love the idea of circus performers as warriors. It's great. And the characters are fiery and fun. But what is it with authors who don't work with editors? At the very least, proofread your manuscript before you upload it. This could easily be a 5 star story if it wasn't bogged down with mistakes, mistypes, misspellings and poor punctuation. Seriously, if you are proud of what you write, why don't you give it the editing it deserves?