Review: a fresh take on ménage
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2013
I love Kelly's books, and she has delivered again. The novel offers more structure and story than most ménage plots. It felt current and plausible.I would have given the book 5 stars except for a few editing details. There were some concepts that got played out pretty quickly. The guys talk about comparing 'sizes' at least 3 times in the first part of the book. The word "cripes" is way over used. There is a whole lot of "chest tightening" that occurs, and I got a bit tired of reading about her at the farmer's market so often (yes, we know she has to set up... And wait in customers... And stay til she runs out). I find these details a bit distracting.Also, you can really tell Kelly is setting this up as a series, which is great. I think she tried to introduce too many characters whose roles were too small though.Regardless, a really enjoyable read!