Review: would have been great if it was a complete story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 30, 2014
The first half of this was good, if a little cliche. The poor girl who nabs the billionaire's eye has been done and done again. Unfortunately the whole thing fell apart when it took a drastic left turn from its plot up to that point and then just ended at 60%. (The remaining 40% appeared to be a preview of the next instalment. I didn't bother reading it.) I'm sorry, but that ticks me off. This is not a complete story. It doesn't end on a cliffhanger, it ends on an incompletion. I was left with more questions than answers and there were more open threads than closed....wait, there were no tied up threads. NONE. At a stretch it could be considered the first chapter of a longer work, but if you take that route then you're faced with having to pay for each and every chapter. No. I refuse. The author can obviously write. I have no complaints in that department, but I will not be continuing this series.