Review: Confusing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 27, 2013
This story takes place far in the future but jumps back to farther in the past without warning. It is at times, hard to follow and has a low character development. It can ramble a lot with chapters that really have no meaning to the story. Missing words, wrong words, words I had to look up. Paragraphs were so long that I had to re-read them to remember what I was reading.In it self, the story would have made interesting reading if one does not get distracted. I would suggest a fair bit of editing, and less over description when writing.A Place of Rest