Review: it was okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 23, 2014
the story was okay but the writing could have been better.  There were far more details about insignificant things than were necessary.  For instance, Edie explains that she's emptying her refrigerator when she leaves Sydney and goes on to say that there wasn't much there because tomorrow is grocery day.  Who cares!!Also, a lot of the story that Edie tells included information in parenthesis.  A lot of it.  And we see "her words" in parenthesis repeatedly.  I found the writing dull.