Review: Too much explanation
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 8, 2011
I wanted to like this story, but I just couldn't.  The first problem was the same as the previous reviewers have mentioned, too much explanation!  I do not need to be told that when the character gets out of his car, he opens the door, then gets out of the car, then closes the door behind him.  It is excruciating.The second problem is that I just did not enjoy the story.  It is the bare bones of a story (2 stars for the idea) that could be good, but the way it was done is just not at all interesting.