Review: Fell Flat
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2014
This story has the potential to be a really enjoyable story but it fell short of the mark.  The descriptive part of the writing was ok but I felt the conversation of the characters was very juvenile and unrealistic.  Th sex scene between Andreas and Eva was not very believable - there was no feeling or emotion.  Eva's friend, Nicole, is just a loud mouthed, crass person.  Overall, the plot for the story was ok but nothing new;  the execution of the story left a lot to be desired.