Review: too much PARA, too little NORMAL
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2014
Every religion with angels I know of have them to protect human race. Angels who's plan is to eliminate humans are just weird idea. It insults. Reviewers complained about sloppy plotting and too overdone concentration on sex. I'm not "buying", even for free. My time is worth something, too.BTW, I would strongly advise every author to have someone honest, unrelated to fish out the most obvious blunders. From the bio, this author is smart, funny and witty. Being happy with the plot she probably overlooked what this might look like from the stranger's point of view. Most probably this story would be waaaay more palatable for nitpicky weirdos like me if the hero were a "good" demon. Add a little more background and supporting details to satisfy those reviewers who noticed that lack, and voila, a "cool" story. Unless, of course the author aimed for erotica. But then it probably needed more sex.