Review: Editing needed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 21, 2013
Please either hire an editor or take another read through before self-publishing. The constant lack of correct punctuation or even ANY punctuation was a complete distraction. Every time I saw dialogue cut off with no period, question mark, or comma, or when I came to a paragraph ending in a comma just made me wonder why I was spedning time reading a book the author didn't even want to read a second time. I have a very high tolerance for errors in self published works, but page after page of the same errors just doesn't pass. There are a lot of good reviews for this and yes, I could see some potential in the plot and characters. That said the lack of editing just drove me nuts.If I am the only one who noticed these errors, please let me know. Maybe my Kindle is broken, maybe I need a new set of glasses. If I'm wrong about the editing, I'll gladly reevaluate my review.