Review: Up In Flames
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 14, 2012
Up in Flames is an erotic short that features Rachel, a secretary at a large company that has a crush on her boss James.  While the love scenes are smoking hot I would have liked to have had more plot to the story.  The beginning started out strong.  The short is told completely from Rachel's perspective so while we can see her internal dialogue dictating some of her choices, we never get that from James.The short is only 30 pages long so we are only with the characters for one night.  After a short intro of characters, James and Rachel end up trapped in an elevator.  Rachel is claustrophobic so James distracts her with some erotic play.  I know it is just a short but I would have loved to see a bit more development of the relationship and have some insight on what would happen in the future.Basically I did enjoy this as a short but I would have loved to have more. More James and Rachel together, more details about what will happen etc.  All in all a nice quick steamy read.book provided by the author for the purpose of an honest reviewreviewed by Megan