Review: The story is ok
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2014
Ok...The first book was free and I 'was' really going to stop reading it because of grammatical errors and some redundancy but the story was interesting and by the end of the first book I wanted to see what happened to the characters. The 'second' books grammar and spelling is even worse and I don't believe these are accidents.  If someone is 'psyched' they aren't 'siked'! ..... vicious  was viscous  and an armoire was spelled armour.  Believe me these errors are not few or far between.  However,  I will say that the story was good enough that I purchased the 2nd book.  So..Raven...continue writing, but please get a dictionary and thesaurus!l