Review: could have been great
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2014
The story was a good one. I like Christian books esp those about the rapture BUT  I Absolutely hate it when an author switches tense throughout a book! Take a writing class for Pete's sake!! Plus...He waived good bye? Trauma he had went through? Proof read!!!!Had a little trouble with a person constantly flip flopping between Shaun and Davis, often in the same paragraph-stick with one name please esp when there are 20 people to try and keep straight.  This would have gotten 5 stars if the author had just picked a tense and stuck with it.