Review: Great short story!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2012
Hym and Hur are immortal, kind of like Fates, in my opinion.  They have the power to change things and controls things for humans, and they enjoy pulling pranks.  This story starts with Hym and Hur sitting in a diner debating what to do to Los Angeles.  Does everyone get bad luck for a day?  How about good luck?  What will it be?  Death enters the conversation and it changes the stakes.Archie is an artist, starving so, as it seems.  Archie loves Sarah, but Sarah is concerned about money - stable money, and Archie's lack of it.  And now it looks like Archie is the target of Hym and Hur's "game".This was a fun short story.  It is definitely a one sitting read.  But any story involving Death, himself, is sure to be a good one, right?  In Hym and Hur Death is a bit of a sneaky character, you know how he loves loopholes!I don't want to give away too much of the story.  Between the blurb and this post, you kind of get the gist of it.  It's very interesting and a good read.  I'd even be interested in seeing this story made into a longer story, the characters were that intriguing.  The authors writing style is very imaginative and definitely kept my interest throughout!