Review: Featuring the letter "J"
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 26, 2014
I can usually keep track of the characters, but in this story, so many names began with "J" that it was confusing:The heroine:  Joal JacobyHitman:  JakeBrother:  Doctor JacobAnother brother:  JeremyLast but not least:  portrait of Jesus on the wall.There were also many characters whose names began with "M".  I forgave that as "M" was a central figure in the plot.  Then the constant misuse of homonyms, as in peel/peal, similar words like inspiration/inhalation, and oh dear, you're and your.  There were several sentences with missing words.  The story line is involved and clever, but my concentration suffered because of these many errors, and taking time to check the notes I eventually made to be sure of which "J" person was active at the moment.  I urge this talented writer to use the services of at least a qualified proofreader, as I would have liked to rate this book at least four stars.