Review: Review: Selling His Mansion by Alicia Roberts
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 20, 2013
POSITIVE POINTS:+ The characters seem to be well developed & relate-able to an extent (you can read more on this in the negative section).+ It was a quick read.NEGATIVE POINTS:- The abrupt ending. I did not care for the way this book seemed to end in the middle of a sentence.- Repetitive descriptions. This story would have been much more interesting if the author had only expanded her adjectives.- Poorly constructed sentences. This book repeatedly reminds me of something written as a fanfiction for another story.- Certain behaviors in the BDSM scene did not seem plausible for the characters or the BDSM community as a whole.- I found myself wanting to laugh several times during the sex scene due to the language used and the descriptions given.