Review: Good story, so-so delivery
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2013
I liked the book Bad Girl Lessons.  I liked the plot and the story and the characters.  Evie and Jackson were great.I didn't like the poor punctuation and poor word usage!  Let me step up on my soapbox again!  Stories are the commodity you are trying to sell.  Therefore, punctuation, spelling, and word usage (all the ways you can use your words) are your tools!  Become expert with your tools and your commodities will be excellent and sell much better and readers will love them!  You, Ms. Donavan, confused good with "goon" and sea stars with "see stars" and that's just what I could remember as I sit here.  There were others.  OR HIRE A PROOFREADER!  That's why I gave it only 4 stars instead of 5!On the up side, keep on writing!  Hire a proofreader and continue to spin stories!