Review: Quirky
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2013
Let me first start and say that I really like paranormal books...but they have to have a good story.  I did read this whole book, but it ws not a quick read as I found it hard to follow.  The story probably has 3 or 4 mini stories inside it, that could be developed into their own book.  There are some good parts, but just as I, the reader, start getting intereste, it goes into a new direction and doesn't come back.  I get that it is UK English vs American English, but that doesn't explain the choppiness and the ranting.  For a free book it was...ehh...so-so.  The only reason I gave it 3 stars is that if the mini plots were split up and developed it could be a good series.  Right now it reads like something a 7th or 8th grade student with untreated ADD might write.  Please pay an editor to read your book, disect it, and redevelop the story that is burried inside.  With a little help it could be quite good.