Review: Great storyline, great characters, bad editing
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2014
Having read both Smolder and Burn, I can say that I truly enjoy Penelope Fletcher's writing style.  Her characters made me laugh out loud and I knew them as friends.Constructive criticism note: if I wasn't such a voracious reader and totally grounded in written communication (as a writer and editor) I would have stopped reading at the beginning of the saga.  Lots of re-reading to understand a word (or two) was missing from a sentence here or there, made me sigh but I soldiered on because the story was compelling.  Read and enjoy!Penelope, if you need an editor to edit for FREE, reach out to me!