Review: It was great.....until the end.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2014
This is a well-written, well-developed story with the wrong ending. It was very anti-climactic and things the MCs talked about that you expected to be at the end, or even in an epilogue, wasn't there. I'm not real sure what went wrong here because both MCs are great, the story set-up is mostly well-thought out, the villains are just right and the tension/love/angst is compelling. It's like watching a great basketball game when it comes down to one winning shot for your team and it looks like it'll go into the basket, it hits the rim, starts to go in and then a wind comes out of nowhere and the shot is missed. I'll probably re-read 95% of this story because the relationship that develops between Adam and Sage is beautiful, especially with all the obstacles and family drama thrown at them, but I can't bring myself to re-read the ending because, while there is a HEA, it's just the wrong way to end it.