Review: Edit, edit, edit!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2013
This book needs serious editing. There is too much repetition and misuse of words. (Cohorts instead of cahoots, for example. And per say? Really?) I also felt the writer does not have a good understanding of the age group she is working with. Fifty-three year olds are not as decrepit as she makes them out to be and not likely to be wearing french-twist hairdos. The villains were a bit too stupid to be believed. Background information is presented in such a circuitous way, the reader has no idea what the point was. Aggie moved from England to Palm Springs to be with her daughter. No. wait, she moved with her friend Betty because of Betty's cousin. Betty's cousin and Aggie's daughter both happen to be in the same place. Aggie moved and bought Betty a condo (so she would move, too?) The writer needs to figure this out, write it down and refer to it from time to time.