Review: Wandering Chuckler!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2013
Can a person be chuckled to death by too much chuckling whether it's softly, loudly, quietly, or just plain old chuckling? I think there might be a few others words to use instead of chuckling, let me list a few from Thesaurus.com.....cackle, chortle, crow, exult, guffaw, hee-haw, laugh, smile, snicker, snigger, sniggle, teehee, titter babble, blather, burble.... just a few.Ok, now that I indicated (without chuckling I might add) what I didn't like.. let me point out what I did.This book was a level above the first book in the series (New Dawn: Wandering Engineer) in that the story had better depth, the characters were developed a bit more, and while there was a lot of things being fixed (definitely not as much as the first book), it still seemed to move in a forward direction from beginning to end. The ending... some like endings like this, some don't. I think it's ok once in a while, but should be used sparingly as most readers like the details of a book answered. For example the questions of Who, What, When, Where, Why.... If you propose a question in the book (not openly of course but in the writing - such as: Who is out to kill the good guy? Will the good guy prevail?- etc, make sure you answer them as fully as possible so as not to disappoint the reader. This also helps to flesh out your own story so you won't make credibility mistakes later.Anyhow... good job on book 2. I look forward to watching as your writing improves and your story develops.