Review: points for theme
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 30, 2013
Intriguing and well conceived, the first book was better written.This second book is is high action, but organization is pretty loose. I couldnt always tell what was happening because the sequencing isnt clear. For example, if you write a first sexual encounter scene, its a good idea to distinguish that scene some way.... It didnt become apparent that sex was going to -or had happened-because the narrative never changed tone or pace .....This would be two stars for lack of clarity, but I do think there is still a spark of potential here. I'll withold judgment until part three.