Review: Writing style is juvenile
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2013
I'll give points for creativity of the story. at least it was a little different. But the writing needs work. It reads like a 13 year old wrote it for a class project. The adolescent conversations regarding bodily functions just didn't fit in with the seriousness of the subject matter. Maybe with a lot more training in writing this author will improve.