Review: Not Enough Story to Bite Into for My Tastes
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 13, 2011
Super short, it took me maybe a half an hour to read if that. It had great potential but was so short that it couldn't really be developed at all.  The writing was pretty well done and I enjoyed the characters.  I just wish there had been more story.  Sometimes a super short story is totally complete but I didn't feel that was the case here.  I enjoyed the longer story that I read by Ms. Chance much more.  I would love to see this author write more longer stories because I do like her voice and writing style and super alpha characters.