Review: A good editor
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 16, 2013
Whilst the story was a pleasant read the novel was let down by the poor English. I initially thought that it had bee written by someone from a non English speaking background and that it was a poor translation.The sentences were poorly constructed and it made the novel disjointed and I found myself editing in my head as I was reading. A good editor is what is required to make this an enjoyable story.