Review: I loved this book, but please, please, please...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2013
Have the book editted before going to publication!!The grammatical mistakes in this book were minor - but consistent:Use of a question mark where it was a statement.Use of a period where it was a question.Apostrophes in the wrong place or missing entirely (possessives).Phrases are not sentences.Sentences should end and new thoughts should begin new sentences.I have some minor quibbles with the story... Jenny is from Wyoming, and makes fun of some "Brit-speak", but also speaks as a Brit herself at times. Some of the work interactions were "odd".  I think much of these issues could have been pointed out by and resolved with an EDITOR!!I should give this a lower rating because of the editting issues, and if an editor had tightened up the story and cleaned up some of the "awkwardness", it would have been perfect. As it stands in this form, a recommended 3.5.  If you can roll with the above issues, you'll probably like it, too.I read this on my Kindle (picked it up as a freebie) and would love to buy a hard copy for the home library so the kids can read it, but with the grammatical issues, I can't offer it as an example of a well written book, and for that I am sorry...  Please advise if the book is editted at some point so I can purchase a hard copy for home.  Thanks.