Review: Started off pretty well, but failed to develop
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 16, 2013
One good thing about this book is that it that it appears to have been well edited for obvious errors unlike many ebooks. On the negative side it wasn't very well plotted. There were plenty of extraneous sex scenes, so maybe it wasn't meant to have an interesting plot. There was something that the heroine should have done much earlier than she did, because there was every reason to do it and no reason not to. This was a main plot device that made no sense. I felt that the author just didn't develop her plot in such a way as to build tension; mostly it just stayed stuck on a few tiresome plot devices and skipped over some points that could have provided interesting conflict.