Review: It was okay
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
There was a story here and it could have been something great but it wasn't particularly engaging. I had hoped for more substance even with the length of the "book" but there were too many holes and not enough story development. However, there is a potentially great little weekend romance story here but the author just missed the mark by skipping over all of the important relationship building dates and conversations that I assumed the character had during those long car rides out of the city and during that lunch they had or even in the office running into each other. There just had to be more interaction than what the story depicts for these two to fall so madly in love with each other; especially since his sister could tell something was off about their engagement. This really has the potential to be a 300 or 400 page book if only the author had given more time to explore the characters emotions and not left so many plot points uncovered. I still want to know about Royston's childhood and how he learned his business skills as his sister mysteriously hinted at their origin but Miranda never asked Royston. All these loose ends leave me feeling annoyed.