Review: Could have been good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 10, 2012
I think the author had something here. Not something incredible, groundbreaking, or even great. Just something that could have done well. Except i feel as though he botched it. In a way its just not long enough, not deep enough or fleshed out. The characters are somewhat shallow but had some potentialThe main thing that drove me insane with this book though? The author is horrible at consistancy. Mainly with numbers, this is a war, a war has armies and the author cant seem to make the numbers consistant. At one point it goes from several thousand, to maybe five hundred to i believe 1500. Near the start of the book the enemey is said to have hundreds of mages but by the end that number diminishes for NO reason.HOWEVER, keep in mind its free, so for that its a good deal.