Review: Somebody didn't do her research
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2014
Ok.  If I were at the beach. I had nothing else to read. My Kindle could receive only one author, this would be alright. Maybe. I found the sexual tension contrived and unrealistic. The male character is not a likeable guy. I say, dump him now, Kylee.But what really bothered me, because I'm small and petty, is the author's insistence in calling Dallas, East Texas.  Where is this author from?  I was born in East Texas, Tyler to be exact. I spent the first twenty seven years of my life in East Texas.  East Texas is Tyler, Longview, Lufkin. Dallas is NORTH Texas.  It wouldn't have taken much research to learn this.  It's a lazy mistake but a big one. The last twenty three, I've lived in various suburbs of Dallas, which is NORTH Texas.  Any true Texan would cringe at this mistake.  I think it's a big enough one to warrant a re-write. If you're going to put Texas in your subtitle, learn the nomenclature, please.And lastly, since I'm already being petty and mean, please learn your pronouns. Subject form of the pronoun with subjective nouns and non-transitive verbs. Objective form of the pronoun with objective nouns and transitive verbs. Pretty, pretty please.Maritahttp://www.amazon.com/Marita-Baxter/e/B00L1CZOS4