Review: Needs Reformatting
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2014
I bought this book a couple of days ago and, after multiple issues with the writing and the formatting, I just returned it to Amazon for a refund. This book is so badly formatted that one page ends in a scene description and the next begins in the middle of dialogue, almost as if the book were cut and pasted together. There are also line breaks in the middle of sentences (which I believe you can see in the sample, if you download it.)The writing itself is juvenile at best and the main character is so whiny and self centered that I can't see anyone giving Faith's Temptation a good rating.