Review: Good story, needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 12, 2012
This was a really good story with poor editing.  I would have given it 4+ stars if the grammer and editing had been better.Ivy had a real story going on and her ups and downs made you want to push her in the right direction. Her mother was a real piece of work, but that happens in life.  And her father created a monster, without really trying.I would like to read more from this author I just hope that they get it edited with the next one.