Review: Has Humor, Has Horror, Has Great Visuals,... just needing a little more polish is all
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 25, 2014
Had me laughing at this passage "With a stop in Alexandria to eat, countless piss breaks, and a record setting seven hour drive that should have only been four hours, we made it to Redwood Falls." Knew something bad was in the air with this passage "Suddenly, she tensed up and her dark, beady eyes rolled up into her head until only the whites of her eyes showed..."Join us," she muttered." Sounded the word 'Charge!' at this passage "I stood at the side door of my grandma's house with my flamethrower strapped to my back at the ready." Just needing to be cleaned up some including the opening sentence of the story that reads "I waited patiently the living room of my apartment." (needs the word "in" inserted) and "It's like be demoted from first class to coach" (Location 152-53) and "I had to find way to stop it" (Location 384) being some of the more glaring misses. Otherwise, an enjoyable horror short and I for one would encourage the author to continue to write more in this vein. Very good book!