Review: lacking in spice
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 13, 2013
i'm not exactly sure what was going on here, but I will say a good editor would have helped this author make this a great story. it was difficult to get through and confusing because there were no scene or POV change indicators. Also the plot and the characters were poorly developed making it difficult to relate with the characters. It was like meeting this person you would really like to get to know and making conversation is like pulling teeth because she/he offers nothing to the interaction.This book was flat and  I would like to suggest that the author find an editor or find writing sites and redo this book. It has potential just poorly executed.