Review: Potential Here
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2014
With some finetuning and expansion this could be an entertaining story. Its short length is consumed too much by its back story. Not enough happens during the adventure Marcus has in the distant past to make the story live up to its lofty title of "Timeless." For a free download it could make for a sample of the author's additional work, if properly tweaked.