Review: Finished but not by choice!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2014
To be perfectly honest, if it hadn't been for my Internet going out, I probably wouldn't have read past chapter 3.  Some of the writing seemed out of place and unnecessary..for instance "pedestrians scurrying to and fro" or "she switched her bags from one hand to the other"...these two portions are on the first page and had nothing to do with setting a scene or describing a necessary fact for later in the story.  I could go on with my critique but the bottom line is the author's asked at the end if the readers wanted her to continue with this storyline.....NO!  The idea of the story is great but the execution fell flat.