Review: Not a great plot and terrible dialogue
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2014
The only reason I ordered this and read it was that I ordered it without reading the first volume. If I had read that first, I probably wouldn't have ordered the second volume (obviously more to come). I found the writing to be confusing. I'm not a big fan of stories that bounce from place to place, person to person. I couldn't identify with the characters. Too often, I was thinking "WTF?".  Too much "Deus ex machina" plotlines. The writing reminded me of the old serials we used to watch at the theaters where the hero obviously was killed, only to be miraculously saved at the start of next week's episode.I thought the dialogue was so stilted and unrealistic that I almost laughed at times. It detracted form any value the plot may have had.