Review: Good start but unfocused and poorly finished
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 21, 2013
The good: Loved the premise, the set up was wonderfully done. I liked both the main characters. This had the beginnings of being a really good story!Then it all fell apart......The bad:  The story loses its way several times. It jumps around with no clear transition. I never knew if it was an hour or week later. At critical times they stop to kiss, literally when every second counts they waste time kissing in the stable. Part of the story seemed to be missing, the author skips over what should be main parts of the story. The next paragraph is just on to another subject.The worst part of it is the ending. It was a rushed, too neatly tied up ending that did not reflect either the era or the characters involved. It was a let down to have just ended the story the way that it did. I think the author either neared her  word count limit or got tired of writing it.Overall: I give it 5 stars for idea and concept, but 1 or 2 stars for follow through. This book needs to re-write and it could be amazing. I'm sorry, but I do not recommend this book. I'm not sure I would read anything else by this author, even for free.