Review: Enh
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2014
I like the premise,  but the writing style is just not for me. It seemed very choppy, and there were a lot of awkward lines that I stumbled over and had to reread a few times before they made sense. Sometimes the dialogue is too expositional for me. For example, when she explains overhearing her brother, we learn he is going to kill her, and he killed their parents in like 2 sentences. No tension, etc, and makes it really hard to get into the story, for me. It is just too convenient, and is lazy writing, so I call this one a DNF.