Review: Logic holes cause problems
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 26, 2013
Seeing an error in grammar in the very first sentence is a bit off-putting.  But one soon realises the poor English is the voice of our heroine: a stupid, uneducated and selfish teenager.  The concept is fun, but the author repeatedly stretches suspension of disbelief beyond the breaking point with silly coincidence, illogical facts and plots underpinned (or not underpinned, if you will) by a lack of common sense or feasible reality.  I will not read the next instalment.  However, if I were a 11 to 13-year old girl, I might quite like the book.  It would not be good for my mind, but I might like it, which might goad me to search for other stories of this kind  and lead me to stumble on something better.