Review: ANNOYING AND NOT WORTH THE TIME
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 25, 2012
I have to expand upon what another reviewer wrote about the enemas.  While I might, possibly, barely, understand the first one, there should have definitely not been a second one.  Although the several conversations/descriptions concerning the second enema were not very detailed, adding this scene wasn't necessary to the plot, didn't further character development, and didn't contribute to the story whatsoever.  No one needs to read about disgusting bodily functions/practices in any novel, much less an alledged 'romance' one, even if it is about BDSM.It is also clear this book was either not submitted for any editing or was edited by someone who is not an editor. Sentences not making sense because of one or more dropped words, very annoying mix up of the word "your" instead of "you're" (several times) as well as the author dropping the letter 'g' from practically all the words ending in 'ing'; darlin, willin, gettin, etc.  While darlin wasn't too awful, all the rest made me grit my teeth and want to smack something.The supposed heroine was just plain irritating.  She's purportedly a submissive, but it is made clear she didn't really want to be one or act like one, so why did she get involved in BDSM in the first place?  She either cried or threw a tantrum through the whole book and the hero, a Dom, thought her attitude was cute?  These two characters weren't written like any believable submissive/Dom I've ever heard of.One of the hallmarks of a good book is getting so lost in the story that once you finish and come back to reality, you almost feel like you're in a strange place.  Not with this one.  The editing errors, dropping the 'gs', and definitely the  heroine all contributed to keeping me firmly planted in the here and now.  I kept getting up every few minutes just to do something else more interesting; lauundry, washing dishes, scrubbing the bathroom - you get the picture.Save your money and your sanity and don't buy this book!  At least not until, when, or if the author gets rid of the enemas, gets it edited and gives the heroine a complete personality overhaul.  Tightening the storyline by expanding the plot twist wouldn't hurt either.  As it is, this twist is mostly made apparent near the end of the book and resolved in a few sentences.