Review: Great after the first fifth
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 24, 2013
The author starts out with strict 3rd person omniscient point of view, so getting into the story and connecting with the characters was difficult at first. At about 20% way through, the plot twists in a good way and transforms into a page turner. My only other complaint was that the ending is shockingly blunt. I needed a few more pages to let me know what happened after conflicts were finally eliminated.Major punctuation errors.I'd give this one a 4.5 out of 5 of I could.