Review: Not as Good as the First
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2014
This story has so much potential, but the beginning was awkward. I managed to get through it and the rest of the story was pretty good. Reno and Lori were two hurt people. I was confused on the chemistry between them but I went along with the story. There were a ton of typos and the editing was not as smooth. I could not understand the attraction Lori had after being brutally attacked. Some of the plot just didnt flow as well as it could have.