Review: Lacks a good hook
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 13, 2013
The characters aren't all that engaging at the start, and this story quickly bored me.  Sadly, while the idea is good, the author just don't get me interested enough to care about the plot.It was a disappointment, because the premise was good, but the writing didn't live up to the promise made in the description.