Review: Fair read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 29, 2012
While the plot had all the mechanics it needed to carry the story convincingly, it all moved a bit too quickly.  I'd rather Cole taken the time to develop it further and let it be a bit longer.  The characters could have been fleshed out a bit more, as well.  Short stories and novellas are art forms in their own right, because all of the elements still have to be in place, just in a tighter presentation.  A little more care taken would have made this a 5-star read for me.Generally speaking, it's well-written and edited, and is steamy, albeit a little too sweet for me.  Cole is a writer to watch!