Review: Boring With Numerous Typos/Mistakes
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 19, 2014
Couldn't get into this one.  Seemed like the first chapter dragged on and on. It never seemed like it was getting anywhere and while still continuing for a bit, I ultimately couldn't get into it.Too many mistakes and typos to count makes it very distracting as well.In the book the sentence reads:  "Over time Hayes become part of the larger suburbs of London.Should read:  Over time (comma) Hayes beCAME part of the larger suburbs of London.Many instances where paragraphs had sentences that should have ended but ran into each other with commas instead.In the book:  "I, of course, still look nineteen; and will do until the day I die".Should read:  I of course still look nineteen, and will until the day I die.There are too many examples of this to print and even if I did, that would be doing all the work for an editor.  This book needs a lot of work.