Review: It was okay but could be better  POSSIBLE SPOILERS IN THE REVIEW BEWARE!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2013
REVIEW MAY CONTAIN SOME SPOILERSI often really like the stories where one guy does a wrong thing and then experiences change of heart, so I was very eager to read this story. While writing seemed to flow easy overall the story did not quite work for me.First of all Rafe was being a prick for too long for me to start caring for him, because even when his secrets came out, I did not get an impression that he understood that it is never okay to out anybody, not just somebody whom you started have feelings for. But I even did not get an impression that he was that sorry that he was going to do that to Daniel, I think he was just sorry to loose him.It also had too much sex for me - I would much prefer for them to get to know each other better outside of bed as well, in order to make a separation more meaningful, but I guess we were supposed to believe that what they had was Insta!Love. I am not sure about that, because when I was reading it their initial attraction felt more like Insta!Lust, but then the separation was supposed to have more of emotional impact than it had on me, so I am kind of confused here.It is a well written story, but something definitely felt off for me, I wish I could pinpoint better what exactly that something was.