Review: Good Plot, Bad Grammar
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2013
I truly hate leaving negative reviews; I avoid it when I can.  And a 3-star review isn't terrible.  I did like this story, and it had a lot of good elements that kept my interest.  However, I was left with a lot of questions when I finished the book.  For example, why is one of the richest men in the city living in an apartment where the door opens to the outside (as opposed to an apartment building with a lobby, doorman, etc.)?  The walls are also described as being paper thin.  Another question I had was how did Heidi go from being the best friend to being, not only the other woman, but a scheming, conniving gold-digger, as well?  There was no explanation for this, really.I also had a huge problem with basic grammar problems:  "to" where it should have read "too", and other misused words; commas where they didn't belong, or missing when they should have been used; words spelled incorrectly, and so on.  I strongly encourage Ms. Rayne to use an editor.  The editorial issues were extremely distracting from what should have been a great story.  In all honesty, if not for the editorial problems, I would've given this a 4-star review.  Hope some of you will find this helpful.