Review: HOT! Just wonderful!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 30, 2013
Couldn't wait to read this story because of how much I loved Hers (Seven's Story)... And it didn't disappoint. I couldn't put it down. Loved it.I'll start  with the bad...I don't normally get into biker stories. But this one made me want more.. BUT I wanted to see Chrome and his gang and that side of things. Also, I have to say I thought there would be at least some f/f since there was in Hers but there wasn't so that felt a bit like a let down. Last, I would've liked the story to be a bit more developed in a few places to get to know the characters a bit more.Now for the good... I LOVE the way Dawn writes. It's smooth and sucks you in. The naughty scenes are hot as hell. This is exactly what Erotica should be written like. LOVE the dirty talk that so many people are afraid to use.Overall 4 Pens for writing. 4 steam for heat.. I could've used quite a few more of those hot scenes.