Review: There are just a few plot holes and issues with the plot.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 25, 2014
*Written By Jill Bradley*Annabel Wells is a very normal girl, she waitresses at a coffee shop and she hates her job. She has a best friend who is really more of a frienemy. The book opens with her being dumped so her friend and her go out on the town for a night of drunken fun. She gets drunk and decides to walk home alone and on the way home a large black cloud attacks her. A dragon named Crispin saves her. Dragons seem to be humans that have the ability to breath fire, and have some enhanced sensory abilities, but that’s all I can really gather. After the attack, Annabel has to stay with the Dragons for her safety but she continues to get attacked by the black cloud, which they are calling a demon. Then, after having a lot of potential the book just kind of ends. No questions answered, you don’t know what’s happening with Annabel, you don’t know if she is safe now or not, just…stops.***********PLOT: 3 StarsFun story!! This book does short really well. It makes you love the characters, root for them, and give you tons of mystery and intrigue in a very, very short amount of time.  I’m impressed! There are just a few plot holes and issues with the plot. Most of these issues could be fixed if the topics were just elaborated on a bit.WRITING: 3 StarsIt started off with hilarity and moved into some fun action. It seems a bit rough around the edges, like it needs a bit more editing to catch some of the errors like, “I’m going swim.” There were times when the point of view changed. It was sort of third person focusing on Annabel, but occasionally you would suddenly get incite into another character’s thoughts. It was kind of awkward.COVER:  5 StarsBeautiful! I love it! Mysterious and intriguing! The egg on the front is hatching with light flowing out of the cracks. It’s very full of energy.CHARACTERS: 3 StarsFrom the very first paragraph I knew I was going to like Annabel and her friend June. They seemed just like my friends and I complaining about idiot guys and just trying to find something real. There are times when you want to smack Annabel, because she is too nave. She gets trashed and then walks home alone. She lets a complete stranger know exactly where she lives, and she goes and stays with a big group of strangers at their house, just because they said that she should. Strange