Review: Unpleasantly surprised
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2013
This story could have the makings for a 10 star novel, but the sex scene spoiled it for me. I read my books on Kindle, so I will say that at 51% I just could not take the sex anymore and exited reading. And then when I exited the story to see the author in order to find the right book to do the review, I see the author is a woman. I have to say I am shocked. A woman should know we do not need a blow by blow detailed report about the act of sex. We already get it Ms. Smith. Illusion is often greater than description.Natalie is one of the 2 main characters in the book. you have her deciding to stay away from Ryan in one part, then a short time later you have her having sex with him. Say what?? At this point, Natalie has developed into a much stronger character and would not be so loose with herself as this. I just can't believe it. Then, when I read the other reviews of what Natalie and Melody will be going through, I have to ask why the author can't make up her mind as to Natalie being strong or weak. She starts as weak and insecure. She grows thanks to Aunt Catherine into a much more secure person. Then she caves to Ryan, and again grows to go through the events with Melody. I am dizzy just writing about it.So, sorry, I can't recommend this book. Aside from the sec Natalie has with Ryan, the rolelr coaster the author has Natalie riding is just too much.