Review: Shows Promise
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2012
This is a story set in a high school about a group of teachers tackling the tricky business of relationships and love.What's interesting about this story is that the adults tend to act more like teenagers giving it an interesting angle on the typical romance.While it's not perfect (the author could use the services of an editor to help draw out the storyline better and cut unneccessary scenes to make it tighter) I think it shows promise for a new writer and for that reason I've given it four stars.I hope this author continues to write and is not discouraged by the negative reviews so that she can grow her skills and bring a unique voice to her writing in the future.