Review: I liked it , but....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 5, 2014
I liked it but the story and the characters lacked emotion.  The story seemed wooden.  Too predictable.  Sometimes the story almost had some emotion then it stopped and become just words on the page.  It would help to have more character development, a little more story development and a lot more emotion to pull the reader into the story.  It's ok, but it could be so much better.