Review: Good premise, atrocious grammar
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 20, 2013
I liked the premise of this book. I think the story has great promise; but it's very hard to concentrate on it due to the multitude of errors. There are too many grammatical errors to overlook, the worst of which, was the tenses. It takes an extraordinary writer writing an extraordinary sentence, to make a mix of past and present tense work in the same sentence. Unfortunately Sandra Ross falls short of that, and the effect is mass mayhem and confusion. As much as I want to find out how things work out for Holliane, I doubt it would by worth the money - especially when it's divided into 4 novellas selling at $2.99 each. The author desperately needs an editor.