Review: Intro
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2014
The one thing I don't like is the grammatical errors. Sometimes there are two people talking in quotes within the same paragraph. You have to pay attention to who's speaking.I love the grandmother's goofy attitude. She has a funny perspective on things. "As long as people can still surprise you, it means you're not dead.The story is interesting. I can't wait to read The Next Best Thing.