Review: What did I just read?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2014
I forced myself to read this in it's entirety. Cover to cover so to speak, and even for an avid reader such as myself that was quite a challenge.The formatting was horrible. The writing sparse and disjointed. I also saw several typos and grammatical errors.The story was even worse. Decent premise about someone murdering women that could be considered too masculine and doing it in a way that was nearly untraceable, but it was carried out poorly. An old detective obsessed with a "case" that no one else believes exists, while being periodically hounded by FBI spooks, and just for fun, there were several chapters about someone known only as "the short man" with some sort of issues of his own with no obvious connection to the rest of the plot.To make matters worse, the book abruptly ends in the middle of a conversation as if there was an error and the rest of it was never uploaded properly. That's not a cliff hanger, that's poor writing.This is not even a full novella, it's a sample. Even for a free ebook, I wish I hadn't wasted my time on this one.