Review: Would've made a great Twilight Zone episode!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 6, 2012
I picked up this short story because a friend recommended I check out this author.The Lake is a good short story, but a bit predictable. As others have already described the plot, I will leave it be. Though not very scary this short story would've made an excellent Twilight Zone episode. The changes which the main character undergoes throughout the story would have been even more powerful in a  visual medium. Overall, I thought this was a good, well written story. As it is currently free, you really can't go wrong.