Review: Good Story...needs editor.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2014
I really liked the story. The characters were well described and I could "see" them as the story unfolded. The grammatical errors are very distracting though, I found myself re-reading parts just to make sure I knew what was being said. Repeated misuse of "she""her""him" and "had" drove me crazy! I would love to see this book re-edited and updated PLEASE.Book read and reviewed by Mrs. Dev-Dave.