Review: Awesome worldbuilding still needed work on tor.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2012
I loved the detail of how everything fit together the characters where like-able and relate-able for the most part. As other reviewers said Tor's self effacing attitude, occasional lack of sense, and apparently being responsible for turning a mostly backward society technologically into something resembling modern if by magical means is a little thick.Meaning to say all this time has past since the world fell apart in an unexplained cataclysm, he can't be the first to have a bright idea. why has nobody else done it before, and you really made him 'that' powerful?Really, to be fair those minor flaws didn't bug me to much just that it was noticed by other readers, and did make it slightly harder to read though not much, cause i was to engrossed in the concept of fields and world manipulation built here.The system is really detailed but the world itself is a little vague. Also if you had an editor for this book fire them immediately and higher a new one.