Review: GREAT STORY.....BUT NEEDED AN EDITOR.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
I loved this story. The Author has a wonderful imagination. The plot, and characters were spot on. However, I give this book 3 1/2 stars. Why? The book is hard to read. Improper word usage errors, characters that got renamed in the last couple of chapters, and punctuation errors as well. There are so many errors, that by the time I finished the book I had a headache. Please get an editor, is all I can say.  I think that if you do get an editor, the world and characters you created, could be turned into a series.