Review: Terrible writing and no real ending
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 25, 2013
The story idea isn't bad, the writing is just terrible! There is a disjointed quality to this that seems childlike, I realize the leading lady is meant to be childlike but all of the story is this way, it makes the characters seem a bit stupid! Don't even get me started on the sex scene, I started to read that chapter, but the constant he/she written throughout was so off putting and un sensual I ended up skipping it. Also it's one of those books with no ending, and a bad sitcom "what will happen next" feeling!