Review: One Too Many Hurdles
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2012
The story sounds very interesting and in fact, has a lot of potential, but I felt little connection with the characters and could not connect their actions with the feelings they were supposed to be having. There were several annoyances in the story that I found harder and harder to overlook as they kept building up without getting to a satisfying conclusion for the story.For a woman so obsessed with protecting her daughter from her father, who doesn't even know he has a daughter, Olivia seems surprisingly content to let Melissa meet her father's grandfather who is very involved in his grandson's life. It it seems it won't be a problem though, since Melissa's father has been arrested. I'm not sure how that would mean that he would never be a problem again, especially when there has been some indication that the wealthy grandfather may very well disinherit the grandson in favor of the newly discovered great-granddaughter.Anyway, I would not recommend the book and will be eliminating it from my kindle. Frustrating.