Review: Feeling like it was lacking... just a little...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2013
Billionaire bad boy seeks a change and finds it.  Okay, seems a little contrived of a story, but it was very touching to see a hero appear insecure.I would have loved to give this book a solid 5 stars, but the reason it could not hit exactly 4 stars is because of the heroine.She had one seriously twisted perception of people when it came to her rule of "no second chances"  In fact, her reason behind it was not even supported to give the reader to believe it was necessary.  Then, to only read her wishes that someone would fight for her made it even more unappealing for her character.  I saw this as she was confused on what she really wanted....  did she want a man to fight for his place beside her or be a pushover because she was so adamant over violence?  Either it was the lack of character development or the author's attempt to keep the reader's interest, but it made it difficult to connect to the story.Regardless, if this was a short story (in my opinion, it was), or if she coined this as a novella...  It could have been written a little better.  Credit to her for her efforts, though.  She did write some very touching things in the thread of the story.