Review: Could use a little more meat
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2013
No pun intended, the hero is a werewolf though.I knew going into this that with 39 pages it would be a short read. The problem is that the story seemed very rushed, and it was hard feeling any kind of connection between the hero and heroine because there was no build-up or back story. Especially when the story starts out with an oral sex scene between them, in a bathroom, at a special function. Oh, and they're strangers. Granted, the 300 year old hero had finally found his mate, and it's understandable he's going crazy with lust for her. But she has no idea she's his mate, or what he is, only that she's deeply drawn to him, and submits to the sexual encounter.I'm giving it four stars because it's well written, the sex scenes are hot, and in spite of being rushed, I still enjoyed the story. I think the author owes it to the hero and heroine to go back in and add a little more depth to it, though.Tory