Review: Glad it's over!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2013
I should preface by saying that this book was free for downloading. I'm glad it was free because, though Ms. Hubbard is quite a storyteller, her writing is not up to par. The story was disjointed because it was left to the reader to "connect the dots". The story is full of drama, with twists in the plot to keep the reader interested, but the writing doesn't flow smoothly. There were "holes" in the writing  that  prevented true cohesion. I also didn't feel that the characters were well developed; they seemed almost one dimensional. Even more disappointing, the relationship between the hero and heroine isn't developed, either. I was confused as to why Ethan falls in love with Nicole...simply because she was nice? They hadn't spent enough time together to have the feelings they have by the end of the  book. Speaking of the end of the book, it's quite abrupt. There is no true closure.Additionally, I found this book while searching for erotic romances. There is only one true sex scene between the hero and heroine, so I wouldn't categorize this book as an erotic romance.