Review: Terrible
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2012
This book lacked good grammar, sentence structure, and was all over the place.  You didn't care about any of the characters, the main character got on my nerves.  She cried at the drop of a hat, she whined, pouted and acted like a teenager instead of a 30 year old.  We had to be reminded constantly that she was yella/yellow/light, why?  Is that your favorite color?  It was a typical story written badly and words were constantly used out of context.  You also gave too much detail.  I was not impressed with this book, it should have been proofread and edited.  Sometimes you didn't even know which character was talking.  I am seeing a lot of these new urban authors who want to write but don't have the background to write.  What you need to do is go take courses in english, grammar, spelling and writing and then write books.  Don't keep putting out books like this.  I'm also noticing with urban authors that they all seem to have the exact same female lead in their books light/long wavy or straight hair/hazel, green, gray eyes and the male lead is usually chocolate or dark skinned with brown eyes, there is no originality to the book characters.  The story may vary but the characters never do.