Review: Too Abrupt Of A Conclusion
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 12, 2012
I've read several really good stories of late with a pattern of abrupt endings and conclusions. This was quite a compelling story of first love and novice D/s exploration with an IR twist. Great writing, compelling characters, but a more polished and developed conclusion would have been appreciated. Especially with the character of Nathan, a loose end that I felt should have been addressed. Four stars, overall compelling read, though a more polished and developed conclusion was desired.