Review: Distracted by the Need to Edit
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 10, 2013
As I read this story, I spent most of my time making corrections.  I have never read a story with so many grammatical errors.  I saw the potential, however questioned if English was the writer's first language.  There was a good story there, however, I was so distracted by the poor spelling, sentence construction, and the bad dialogue.  I disagree with the readers who gave the generous five-star ratings.  I couldn't get past the poor editing to really enjoy this book.