Review: Not great
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 28, 2013
This work left a lot to be desired.  I thought the story line to be choppy and YIKE'S, the typos, errors in spelling, use of wrong words, punctuation errors --- I had difficulty following the story line because of so many errors.  Please Mr. Ortiz have your story proof read by a reliable proof reader next time.