Review: Black Hills needs editor with red pen
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2014
The story is okay, and I didn't find it to be offensively erotic like some reviewers complained.  I did find the lack of attention to grammar and word selection to be severe enough to be offensive.  These were basic mistakes like subject -verb agreement (was and were used incorrectly, went instead of gone, and MANY others). There were dozens of these errors.  If one of my freshman students turned in an essay with this frequency of errors they would not receive a grade as high as a C.