Review: Enjoyed?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2013
I did enjoy this story.  It started out well with the believable characters and background info. However, after the initial meeting between MC's it felt rushed in the building of depth in the relationship. The characters needed more time to develope their feelings and ideas, even their anxiety felt rushed. There was a point were I thought "no way!" and not because it was an unbelievable scenario, it was just carried out all wrong. That said the story has promise if redeveloped.