Review: Horrible editing, lack of ending
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2014
This was an elementary attempt at publishing.  The editing is non-existent (uncle's for plural uncles, lack of punctuation for contractions, misspelling of character names, etc) and frankly, a bit painful to read.The story itself is outlandish and over the top.  It's another 'let's see what we can throw at the heroine' type plot.  Our intrepid heroine, Harley, is a complete idiot and is too exhausted to deal with anything at any given time.  Jace, the hero/bad guy started out with such potential then suddenly turns into the stock cardboard bad guy.  Caleb, the other hero is a complete dunce as well.  No redeemable qualities to be had here.Oh, and the clincher- this is another non-ending end.  Yup, another cliff hanger.  What happened to writers writing...oh, I don't know a complete book?  Instead it's a desperate grab to make as much money off the same story as writers possibly can.