Review: Flawed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2013
This book suffers from two major problems. First, the story is told in the first person by a woman. The author appears to be a man and the attitudes expressed are much more masculine than feminine. While writing my master's thesis on the AIDS epidemic, I interviewed dozens of swingers. I met many men who liked to watch their wives with other men but I never heard one woman say that she wanted to watch her husband with another woman -- most certainly not a beautiful, buxom teenager.Second, the sex scenes are fairly hot except that they are narrated in sentence fragments. It reminded me of a breathless man trying to explain why he missed the bus. The other readers, especially the paid reviewers, apparantly enjoyed this style but I did not.This book has been free for several months. Perhaps Jay Whett is reluctant to accept money for this one.