Review: Passing gas was the highlight, and I HATED  that.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 24, 2013
First, let me say that I do see some talent in this writer. At first I thought all the negative reviews were wrong. Could it really be that bad? Well, the truth is that it is that bad, because the author needs to discover a four-letter-word: EDIT.Chick-Lit Saved My Life (book one, no less) starts out with great promise. I was enjoying the idea of this inner monologue from a comedic heroine with a gun pointed at her... It had the possibility of moving on to some tremendous action that brought in other characters and plot twists. However, I read just as far as I could, and nothing else ever happened besides ramblings that included her delight in passing gas in elevators. That was something I could have done without. It added nothing to the character and turned me off to anything else she had to say. Did she do it to some pompous villain who we learn deserved it after some revealing scene of conflict? No. There is nothing there.My advice to the author is to find out what this story is about before she adds another page. EDIT!!