Review: OKAY, BUT FAR FROM PERFECT
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 20, 2012
Okay, i have to write a review for this book because i think only two of us actually read the book the person that gave it two stars and me that gave it three stars. I believe all the others either didn't read it or know the author somehow.Let's start with some of the most obvious problems.#1: The spelling and grammar was terrible right from page one or two. I swear by the time i finished the first two pages i already find myself rereading some of the sentences tring to figure out what the author is saying and this will be a recurring theme if you chose to read this book.#2: The storyline sometimes seems lost or forgotten. For example the situation between the heroine and the other fire elementals seems to be the main objective at the beginning of the book but when she meets her guy that storyline is abandoned in persuit of their personal relationship and his relationship with his main antagonist. The author tries to reconcile what was happening with the fire elementals later on in the book but it just seemed like a patch job almost as if she just remembered to do it.#3: There is also the whole problem of the heroine having all of this power and at times not knowing how to figure it out and then all of a sudden doing something with it that just seems out of her character. ***Spoiler*** She is made to seem omnipotent and then gets captured in the dumbest way possible, by walking away with the kidnappers!!! i mean seriously how anticlimactic was that. And that is not the only part that you'll be rolling your eyes at. There is also book being about her needing to be near him to keep from dying and him not wanting to bite her when biting her would have solved everyones problems and allow for better development in the action between the heroine and the fire elementals.***Spoiler Ends***#4: The storyline was a great idea that never reached its full potential. There were some parts i loved, like the romance between the two main characters was really good. Which is why i gave it three stars because whatever the books problems it still had enough for me to finish it. This book is not the worst book out there but it is far from being perfect. And it could have been perfect which is what makes me so sad.