Review: Great story, great ideas, homophones on overload (That really have been corrected on the update)
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 11 9, 2012
***Updated review***I really enjoyed the book the first time around, however the original story seriously needed a proofreader STAT!Even with the errors - this is a great story with some really engaging characters.I am one who enjoys a good long read that will pull you in and keep you hooked.....this book certainly does that.I also liked all of the different side stories that I believe will be explored with future books in this series.The revised October 29 version has been corrected and reads much easier (once you can get it! )For those that use the Kindle App with the cloud reader - you will have to have Amazon reset this download manually from the server for you as the original revision instructions did not work for me. I contacted Amazon Kindle support chat and they resent the download directly and this corrected the copy I had.  This really has to be done manually (by a human) directly from Amazon - Kindle App users will NOT be able to do this on their own either on the e-reader device or using the  "Manage my Kindle" section on Amazon. (The actual fix took about 5 min to explain and fix and while I was at it, I had them fix several other books that I had purchased by Indy authors that had been updated since purchase time.)