Review: Needs editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2014
Needs a better editor or lessons in English language.  Died for the word dyed?  Its when it is supposed to be it's.  She has a lot of noticeable errors.  Might as well pay someone to edit for you.  Detracts from the storyline when you keep hitting these potholes.