Review: Fast Moving Sci-Fi
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2011
This is the second book by this author that I have read.  I received this book free in exchange for a review.  This book seemed to flow better, in my opinion, that "The Virgin King."  The plot was more understandable, but things moved way to fast.  I think the author would do well to learn how to slow down and be more descriptive.  The continual jumping around between planets made it hard to keep up.Also I feel like there was far more sex in the book than was necessary to the plot line.  The author could have easily kept it cleaner, once we knew the female character used her sexuality to get her way, there was no need to be so repetitive.The book was also full of spelling and punctuation errors, which I realize happens when there is no formal editing process.  Still, I think the author could have had someone proof read it to help make some corrections.Overall, interesting concept, but it could use some work to be improved to increase readiability and understandability.