Review: Some nice elements, but they don't add up to much.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 14, 2012
I really wanted to like this one. I felt the writer really tried to make this story atmospheric and to establish an atmosphere of foreboding, but never quite succeeded. I was also disappointed by the quality of the writing, which was unpolished at best. I couldn't help but notice several small but distracting errors in grammar and punctuation, such as the improper conjugation of the verb "drink." Like many others I note that this writer has confused "breaks" with "brakes." I'm sure I sound pedantic but these things really pull me out of a story. I did like the cover art, however.