Review: Show don't tell
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 4, 2013
I read this as part of my Around the World in 52 books, and I was disappointed that she (spoiler alert) did not make it to Australia yet in this book. Part of the problem is I did not read closely enough that it was a prequel.I think if the author develeloped the story more and "showed not told" the story it would be better. There were some great ideas for characters, but it was not developed. I would have loved more description. My advice is to go back through the book and take time to give more description and develop it more. That way it might lead for more of the other book being sold. I gave it 3 stars bc there is potential there. I would love to see it revamped.