Review: It was okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 27, 2013
Nice story...but it could have been so much better if the author challenged herself and explored the world she only hinted at and the characters instead of going right into the lightly themed BDSM sex.Erotica Romance, can be so much more than kinky sex...and I find it sad that authors don't care to explore much beyond that. The character Sev sometimes came off as feminine...and I wanted him to grow out of the "timid lil mouse" persona he has going. I get that he's submissive, and despite how he grew up he had an "innocent" quality to him, but really he needed some depth.The other main character,Demetrie, was your typical "mysterious darkly handsome hero". Unfortunately, he came off as flat in my opinion...like I said above, would have been nice to get more depth to him. And it would have been nice to get more a background on his family life as well as the true story behind his father and his lover....and it would be nice to "see" what this society thought of the hero being so "rebellious" as we are often told.Anyway it was a good free read. Better than most out there.