Review: Okay Story with a Quick Pace
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 12, 2012
3.5 stars. This story was a quick read taking me about 30 minutes. The pace of the plot moved quickly, keeping my interest. However, it was almost too quickly for me to ever identify with the characters. The idea that Seamus would kiss an employee smacked of sexual harassment to me, though she seemed to enjoy it. I think in this day and age he'd be in a heap of trouble for it. The ending was a bit too "pat and sweet" for my taste with everything being wound up so perfectly and a bit too as you'd expect it. There was some head hopping, jumping from one POV to the other, along the way. Yet overall, an okay story that I don't regret spending my time on.