Review: Liked the story, hated the editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 9, 2014
Being an editor for a number of writers, this story was somewhat spoiled for me because of the almost nonexistent editing. Two of the things that hit me: "laying" used regularly where "lying" was correct, and referring to the knife as "kabar" when the actual name is K-Bar. There were missing words/wrong words which made me believe there was no copy editing done. The other drawback to me was in the extreme repetition of actions taken by "the bad guys". The story itself was interesting, but I edit as I read, and the sloppiness bothered me.