Review: No tension
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 27, 2013
From a readers perspective this book is bad. it is disjointed and the scenes move so fast at the beginning that one barely has time to digest what is going on. There is also a lot of over description. If the world was not so interesting I would be reading another book being that there is very little happening. The plot seemed to be an after thought.From a writers perspective I would recommend this book to learn from. First off, pay attention to the length of scenes in the beginning half, It hops around like an over caffinated rabbit.Over discriptions,be aware of how far one can discribe something until interest is lost.The good guys and the bad guys, are they evenly matched?The pacing the story moves like a raft on a sleepy river. How does one feel when the end is reached?Did the customer who bought the story get thier moneys worth?