Review: Awful on so many levels
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 13, 2014
First there's the abusive, emotionally stunted hero with impulse control issue. Not attractive in the least. Our heroine hasn't got the sense she was born with and goes from zero to lust to love in a page and a half. The secondary characters are just sketches so you don't really get to know them.The premise is interesting, though why anyone would buy that she had to stay on the ranch is a mystery - it just wasn't sold by the author. As with much of the book, it was more a suggestion than a well developed plot point.And then there's the writing. English usage is not this author's strong suit, even accounting for dialect and Texas-isms.  An author mixing up then/than just makes me give up on a story, which this author did, repeatedly, but she had me howling when she referred over and over again to the hero's physic. Honey, the word is physique. Oh my.