Review: Had potential, but fell short.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2014
This story had the potential to be a great story, however, the author used poor word choices. At times it was too melodramatic, and then, it fell flat. A good editing, and the story would read better. Also, the ending was too abrupt. With that said, I would give the cover art 5 stars. I would encourage the author to continue writing.