Review: Intriguing, but lacking
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2013
I was really excited to read this...but I feel as though I was built up, only to be left standing.While the story line gets intriguing towards the end, it seemed to be a built stilted, and would "pause" (for a lack of a better term), stutter, and move forward.I understand that novellas and short stories are just that, but I wasn't hooked until the last chapter or so, when it abruptly ended.I was a bit disappointed.Not terrible, and one can't complain because it was free, but I still would have liked just a little more.