Review: Sloppy writing and a fatal error
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 28, 2013
I was willing to go along with the narrator of this Key West story, partly for the locale, which I have some familiarity with, but when she hid in a Jewish cemetary and saw a bunch of mourners wearing "yellow beanies" I lost patience. Jews don't wear beanies. They wear kippot or yarmulkas. An obvious omission was that though this was about a boating "accident" there was no picture desciption of the boat referred to and we didn't know if it was sunk, swamped, or retrieved. The speedboat would have been of the Cigarette type. The story just didn't ring true for me. You've got to d better than that.