Review: such bad writing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2012
This is quite likely the worst grammer I have ever come across in a published book. This author consistently uses "new" when she should use "knew" and "to" when she should use "too". She also doesn't know the difference between breath and breathe. These are just some of the more prevalent examples, there were others. I also became tired of all the blushing going on. I searched, and there are 44 instances of the word blush and that doesn't catch all the times people just turn red. The most annoying part of that, is that most of them were the big bad alpha hero who turns into a tiger.The style of story and plot seemed more like a young adult title but there was too much adult content for that to be the case. The story itself had lots of potential. I probably would have rated it four stars if it were not for the nearly illiterate writing.This story ends rather abruptly and is apparently continued in the next book of the series. Unfortunately, although I would like to know more about the characters, I can't bring myself to actually pay good money to read such poorly written books. My advice to the author would be to hire herself a good editor.