Review: Extremely Disappointing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 30, 2013
I'm not sure if some of the other raters read the same book that I did. I'll first thank Chrissy for not charging for her book. But honestly that was the only thing good about it. I think the author desperately needs to find a proof reading team or, if she has one, find another team. There are so many errors I'm not sure where to begin. Lets try "He kicked the door off the hinges" then in the next paragraph she locks the same door? They shoot up her truck windows at night and first thing in the morning his mechanic friend delivers it all put back together? (Try and find a truck window in Big Bear, no less overnight!) I could go on and on by opening to almost any page.Many of the lines are just plain corny and many of them don't even make sense where they're used. It's like the author just couldn't wait for the right place to use it so she just threw it in anywhere to get it in. The plot is extremely shallow and parts of it drag on for pages before finally going somewhere. The actions of Taylor and Julie are impossible to believe, even for teenagers. Oh, and what the heck does "Meh" mean?I realize this is the first book in a series and I hope the rest are better thought out and proof read. Chrissy, I hate to hack your book to death but it reads like you just threw something together with little thought or proofing. From what I can tell, behind all of the mistakes there might be a good author in there, which is why I rated it 2 stars instead of one.