Review: Not interesting enough
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2014
I rarely rate a book I finish lower than four stars, but this one I did. I kept picking it up at idle times, because the central character was relatively interesting. She was, however, written as at once naive and very aware with respect to the criminal activity that should be the center of the book.The other important characters are relatively interesting but suffer from poor development, and lesser characters clutter the story. The plot is more diverted than driven by the protagonist's coming of age. The bottom line for me is that the book needs focus. This book suffers from about the average level of proofreading issues found in ordinary ebooks.