Review: okay story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2012
this was my first time reading this author and i almost stopped after the first few chapters because of the writing and the start of the story.  I am all for romance / erotica plots not being too realistic but the beginning where Lilly was 'conned' into spending a week with Clay and than he undressed and watched her sleep without her knowledge was a little weird.  Also, it normally doesn't bother me and I don't comment on the writing or editing but the beginning was hard to read, it felt like a teenager was writing it.  I almost stopped reading.  The story started to pick up when Lilly started opening up about her violent (and sometimes hard to read the details) past and Clay became more caring and loving.  I started to like both characters better and the writing seemed to get a little better.  It did turn into a good stalker plot.  The way Clay's family all stood behind Lilly was nice and Clay really showed how much he loved her.  All & all I am glad I finished the book.  I did enjoy middle to end.  Not sure how much more I will read from this author but I am curious to see if she makes this more a series.  I realize there is a 1st book to Clay's brother Will & his wife Skye.  There were a few other characters like Jacob or Tom who could have their own stories.