Review: Please May I Have Some More?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 17, 2013
I loved the premise of this story and the description definitely caught my interest.  All the reviews were positive and "must read" so I thought I'd give it a whirl.  It was a great story but literally took me like 20 minutes to read.  Way too short.  And the sex scenes seemed like they just kind of got thrown in there.  This novella was long on promise but fell short of expectations.  Don't get me wrong, I knew it was going to be a short story before I even bought it so I'm not complaining about that, I'm saying there was so much more of the story to be told and I feel like I missed out on giant chunks of what might have been an epic read.  If this story line ever gets fleshed out, or rather, completed I would buy the book again.  To anybody considering it now just be aware, you're gonna wish there was more to it.Oh and really pretty good writing, not the usual hash of bad grammar, poor syntax and mediocre language in many of the novellas I have read.