Review: Better, Still Needs Work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 14, 2012
The second book in this series is much better than the first.  The plot moves along nicely, there are far fewer sub-plots that interrupt the main plot, and in general is a much tighter organization -- and the ship finally gets to be a prominent character.The major thing I have against this book is the overuse of the f-bomb.  Contrary to popular opinion (and Hollywood), the f-bomb is not as common as was used here, especially not in US military officer ranks.  I was in the Army or worked as an Army civilian for most of my adult life, and the f-bomb is not an acceptable term.  I found its use in the book to be seriously off-putting, if not outright revolting in places.  Strongly recommend the third book lose the term -- it adds nothing, and has the potential to lose readers who read these reviews before purchase.I myself will be waiting for reviews before deciding if I'll buy the third book.  I've had enough of the drugs, cigarettes and f-bombs -- the story is not so compelling that I'll tolerate more of the same.For those who are not as sensitive as I am, read the second book.  You'll get your money's worth and more.