Review: Disappointing.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 4, 2013
I don't hate the story, I hate the fact this was not a novel, it wasn't even a story.  It lacked one of the key ingredients, the resolution.  I like the fact that it was only a buck fifty, because it was not a novel, it was a lacking short story that had promise, but not enough promise for me to spend more money on more 'samples', because this is exactly what this is, a sample of a story.The characters showed promise.  The formatting was great and all, but there are good stories out there for sale that are complete.  I can understand sequels, great, but even in sequels there is a resolution that was lacking here.