Review: A little thin
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 25, 2013
I liked this story.  The romance is pretty simple.  The only obstacle is a possibility that an old friend still has feelings for the girl.  But the other guy has already moved away and there's really no tension.  It's a sweet story with a few sparks between the characters.But the secondary plot between the guy and his dad is underdeveloped.  He comes to town to do a job and "prove himself."  Other than occasional general fretting, we don't read much about this until the dad returns for the big confrontation.  I would have liked a bit more about how he came to the conclusions he shares at this point.