Review: Watch out for those white vans.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2013
This story felt like the lead-in to a screenplay to me, setting up locale and characters. That's not a terrible thing but it made the story a little disjointed and hard to follow, giving little vignettes of the different victims.The Creep is a psychopath, kidnapping victims and playing a form of Russian Roulette with them.  The reader learns a bit about the victims, even though all are nameless.Decent story but it was just a difficult style for me to read. It definitely could have used some editing/proofreading too.