Review: Silly
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2013
Silly is about the only word I can think of for this book.  The author tried too hard to make Nate and Beth fit stereotypes, which made the book awkward.  Beth acted more like a child than a woman adverse to her new surroundings.  EVERY word which Nate spoke that ended in "ing" was shortened to "in'".  Anna and Beth's speech also didn't ring true with the word "um" being completely overused and their dialogue not that of Boston bred ladies.  However, with a little work and varying sentence structure, I think this could be a really cute book with an interesting plot.