Review: Perception
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 10, 2014
I wanted very much to give this story a four, but it could use a good editing. Let me be very clear, though: the story was very good. The characters pulled me in, and the errors weren't so glaring that I couldn't finish the book. However, several things happened to rip me out of the story. Things like Zoe saying she would probably never see Noah again after he helped her... Noah often worked in her home, filling in for his mom, so it was likely they would at least see once in a while. There were other things like saying she had no time for breakfast, and five minutes later she was on the public transit with the afternoon crowd. Again, nothing major, but here were other bits like that that made me stop and re-read to make sure I wasn't missing something. I read the prequel and I may pick up the next books, because the story was worth the read. This is one author I will be keeping my eye on.