Review: Agree with the other 2/3 star reviewers....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2013
Premise sounded good:  Mars needs Women type of story.  Execution was not there.  Echoing what others found problematic:- editing was terrible.  I found errors on just about every page- not enough world building and what was there, didn't seem consistent.  Example:  if they're such an advanced race why can't they cure a sprain or a bruise more quickly?- the h was wishy washy in her feelings, flipping between hot and cold way too much.  I really got annoyed when after 2 weeks away from Earth, she then starts making noise about needing to contact her family whom she claims she talks to daily - uh, why didn't she start making this complaint of day 1 or 2 of captivity?- there was more character development on the villain than about the H!  I knew more about the bad guy and his background than the hero who I'm supposed to care about- the auction part needed some back story or reasoning to help justify it- if the H is the commander of the ship, why is he so powerless against the villain who seems to have incurred enough infractions to at least be thrown in the brig