Review: TWO & HALF STARS for erotica short story that ends with a cliffhnager...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 6, 2012
TWO & HALF STARS--Erotic and a nice plotline with minimal editing errors but I'm a little wary of two people meeting and then boom! legs are splayed wide open. And it's also going to be dragged out into another part. Could we just get the entire story at one shot please? The sex scenes -steamy with light D/s but the H's obsession wasn't fully explained and the h jumped into his bed so quickly.**SPOILER-ISH**And the heroine was mugged with a sprained ankle that miraculously healed the next day for romps of sex? It's niggled on my nerves a bit. So other than the springboard open legs and miracle healing of the billionaire's sex...appeal. The story was okay. I'm not sure If I want to read the next part though. I'm on the fence.