Review: This author knows how to write a story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 25, 2014
I read the first one and a half books, Patience and Zeke.First of all, it really needs edited. There are several places where the paragraphs are repeated, and that gives you a WTHeck moment.Now, for the story. Zeke and Patience are both so broken. And so young. I rarely read a story about people who are this young, but I couldn't stop once I started. The story is filled with angst and there are times that you just know that one or the other of them are going to end up dead. This is not a fairlytale. It is cold and hard and sometimes you just find yourself wanting to grab them by the face and say "What the hell is wrong with you!!!". It held me, it entertained me, it mad me happy and sad and angry. Would have been 5 stars if the editing hadn't gotten on my nerves.