Review: Please hire a proofreader
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2011
It was nice to read more about Shontae and Devon.  I would enjoy reading another book that focuses on them and the rest ofthe characters from "Hot Fun in the Summertime".However, the editing was nonexistent.  I started taking notes when I had about 10% of the book left to read.There were 6 grammatical errors, and many more in the entire book.  In fact, numerous times I needed toreread a sentence several times before I understood what Ms. Brown was trying to convey. There were quite a fewerrors in Hot Fun, also.  Another glaring "incident" (IMHO) was how the use of a particular word or phrase led meto immediately draw a conclusion as to what would happen.I've enjoyed the 2 books written by Chicki Brown, but at one point I wondered if anyone had actually gone backthrough her manuscript to do any editing!  Seriously she needs to hire a proofreader, or fire the one she has!