Review: Such A Letdown!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2012
I really enjoyed the first two books in this series, and was excited to read the conclusion.First I have to say that all three of these books are riddled with typos, grammatical errors, and various miscellaneous mistakes. Those are annoying, but don't necessarily take away from the story.However my main gripes are how the author kept going off into tangents with storylines that really weren't part of the main plot and then served no purpose to the rest of the story. i.e: The part where Tommy is in a traffic accident. It made no difference to the rest of the book. It could have been a great story line if it were left to develop more and caused more conflict.Actually, that hit the nail on the head. I felt like this entire book was majorly lacking in conflict and the author goes off on storylines that could and should be developed more, but never get finished.Like the Anna/Tommy storyline or Thaddeus helping Anna with the formula for her perfect mate. What happens? How do those stories develop?The ending to the book also left much to be desired. It really left you needing more...and not in a good way. So much more could and should have been told about Keegan and Rourk and what happens after their wedding. Instead of a feeling of completion and satisfaction we are left with many unanswered questions.In my opinion, there were just entirely too many loose ends in this book that were not properly tied together or finished.  I truly hope that Ms. Crane will consider writing one more book in this series to help the fans get some closure with these characters. I don't feel like the end of the book properly did them justice after a very strong and enchanting start to the series.We not only need to know more about what happens with Keegan and Rourk, but Anna and Tommy, Lauren and Tristan, and of course, Thaddeus.There is a supplemental short story that compliments the first book, "Coexist". It is called, "In The Mind of Thaddeus (Short Story)" and it is a nice supplement to the story, which really should have just been a part of the first book in the series. It does give you more insight into what was going on in the beginning though.