Review: potential to be a great story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2013
This was an ok read by Tia Kelly.  Shelby is a strong and independent woman.  While at a professional ball game with her son, she meets Eric. From Eric, Shelby suffers through a case of mistaken identity only to find out a little more about her past. This story will take you on a journey of the one person who connects the both of them.  Unfortunately, there is not a good flow to the story as it is choppy at times.  If there was a better flow, as the basis of the story was great, it would have been rated higher.I would like to suggest to the author a developmental editor as she has great plots but the flow isn't always what it needs to be for her story.  I look forward to watching Ms. Kelly grow in her writing journey.