Review: Needs developement
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 14, 2011
As I stated in the Black Moon review, I have read the entire trilogy. I found the characters in this book lacking.  The background of the characters and the plot could have been more fleshed out.  I felt the author had hurried through this book, not taking time to edit or format correctly. I also think it seemed as if the author just didn't take time to make sure everything fit as it should to a good flow. I would have appreciated more information and less sexual exploits.  I believe all three of the trilogy could have been a single book,rather than a trilogy.  I didn't like the use of shorthand text.  Spell out what you mean, and mean what you say.  I would like to have seen the author delve into more information of the different "worlds" we visit in this book as well.  Basically, a little history.  I suggest the author invest in a thesaurus for future writings, and explore the characters more.  As long as this book is free, simply because  I enjoy the back and forth sass of the characters, I recommend anyone who has started the series to continue.