Review: reads as if written by a 12 year old
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 17, 2013
Although the author has some interesting ideas as far as technology, and I liked the overall idea, the book actually reads like a the work  of a young teenager. The supposed young teenaged author is obviously well versed in science, but has not yet learned how to write a good story. The author desperately needs a course in expository writing, as currently the book just directly tells us what is going on. "They unloaded the cargo. Then they had a party. The next day they resumed their voyage.,."