Review: Loved it.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2014
** spoiler alert **This book is seriously need an edit even more than Emerge. Every Chapter's title was messed up. The fonts were all the same size with the story. There was no starting a new page. And the last word of chapters were big as if it was a chapter title.The first book ending left me screaming, so when I started this book I couldn't stop and reached 30% in no time. At first I didn't like the idea of Whitley because when you made the main character hated the mean girl, readers mostly felt the same way. So it took me awhile to get me warmed up to her. Mostly she seemed like a different person from Laney's pov. But I could let it slide because some people acted different when they interact with different person. Once I started to like her there was no problem enjoying the book. I had a couple laughs from this book. Evan was so funny; that disaster date was so hilarious.It hard to believe that Whitley would go dig worm or play in mud and stole a pig. Laney tackled her was harsh. I wondered why Evan didn't talk to her about it.The part where Avery cheated on Zach didn't seem right. The way of the other telling story by tell the action of character was too dragged and it made reader confused. I had to read it twice. And I don't think it was Avery, maybe Kirby was behind it. It wasn't the first time a character being a two faced snake. I hated that the author left it at that. Really want to know the story behind it. Maybe it would be reveal in the next book.I look forward to read Dane and Laney' novella and even though Sawyer didn't appeal me that much but I'm going to read his story as well. There was something behind his playboy act who didn't want to settle down. I really want to see who would be the girl to capture his heart.