Review: great story but horribly written at times
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2013
If you can get past the grammatical errors this book has a great story and great potential for additional Beck brother stories. Some parts were completely unnecessary and made me think of that Family Guy episode where Peter writes a book.... completely unnecessary commentary on things that don't make a hill of beans difference. This book has quite a few things like using her instead of she and good instead of well and other nit-picking things but if that doesnt bother you and you're okay with unnecessary description and dialogue then this is a quick entertaining read. I would probably read other books in this series if I knew they didn't have these problems.