Review: Good start, although the story is incomplete.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 28, 2013
The Heroin is annoying and petulant at first but soon she garner's your vote to her side. It has some twist and some unsavory experiences for the heroin. But I like that she's a fighter and doesn't completely give up. This story read as a broken portion of a true novel, I prefer to have the whole novel to read.... this is why I can't give it higher marks. On the plus side you are not left in the dark of why things are as they are, those are explained and integrated into the story well. No problems with grammer or punctuation. And as I mentioned before it is an incomplete story therefore the reader is left on a cliff hanger. What happens next? Over all I liked the story but would like it better complete. I guess I'll have to wait until the sequal.