Review: Meh
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 20, 2014
Thank goodness this one was free.  I didn't hate it, and I understand that because it was short, the development I often look for in my protagonists would be a bit sketchy.  However, the conflict was poorly developed and without any kind of logic (yes, even paranormal stories require a little logic).  The antagonist is so over the top goofy.  The heroine and hero are likable enough, and the tension between the two of them showed a little promise.  Then again, I don't know how many times the word "saliva" should appear in a hot love scene-- I'm thinking never-- but it appeared in this one scene about 3-4 times.  Ew.