Review: Smart, actually 4.5 stars
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2013
Erotica, which this short story definitely is, isn't reknown for its plot lines or character development. This novella breaks that mold. Other than a couple of moments that tested my ability to suspend my disbelief, (as a cop, Roni takes her criminal lover on surveillance instead of calling for back up so she can take pictures with her phone of the criminal behavior...um, do know how bright phone screens are in the dark?  Like a flashlight!) I thought the writing was great. And it was actually edited!  No distracting grammar or spelling errors. Roni and Mateo (I love that name) had awesome chemistry. Hot.  Anyway, for those times I'm feeling like reading something naughty, I will seek out Ms. Cole again!