Review: Short read that cut corners
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2014
I liked this story but felt it was way too rushed. The story ends at 45% of the book and the rest is the first two chapters of the next book. I think the author could have benefited from using those lines for filling out this story.The h jumps right in with how she will act in her second season since first was such a disaster. In the second season she tricks her mother by scheduling a dressmakers fitting when her mother has a previous engagement, so she goes with her maid and purchases two dresses that are more flattering to her coloring.  Of course the change of dress attracts all the men and her dance card is full. She then ignores them to spend time on the terrace with the Earl of Southridge, who has come to London because he decided that he would get married this year.I think this could have been a wonderful story with a bit more polishing and verbage. I don't know if I'll read the next, yet.