Review: Enjoyable read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2014
At the start of the book Ella is struggling with the loss of her parents and the financial mess they've left behind, she's all alone trying to cope with school then she literally runs into Dace who of course is tall, handsome, tattooed, confident and has money you know the drill it's been done so many times you could argue there's nothing original here but then when was the last time any of us read anything truly original.I enjoyed this book it contained some interesting characters the only one who got on my nerves at times was Ella I just felt her character was off at times and didn't really work, she's too contradicting, wants to stay just friends forever (way too long in my opinion) she's innocent and sweet! but classifies women working in bars as sluts and whores. A lot of authors struggle with a good female character and this is no exception, I loved the relationship between Dace and Daman, in fact it's these two that I liked the most.It also needed proof reading it contains a lot of silly little mistakes, like on one occasion when Dace refers to Angel as Angle but if you can overlook these it's free so if you like a alpha male give it a go.I will be honest and say I changed my review slightly, I always review immediately after reading otherwise I forget. I gave this four stars last night when I finished this because I enjoyed reading it, in fact I read it in one go but while getting to sleep I was thinking back over the book and realised that even though I enjoyed it there was a lot I didn't like, it didn't have any real depth, we never truly understand why Dace is like he is and I really wanted to meet the dad. So I've changed my review from four stars to three which I believe is a fairer rating.