Review: It might be better than this...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2013
This might actually be an OK story; I just doubt I'll get to the point of finding that out.  The lack of editing (when subjects and verbs don't agree or change tense in the same sentence I usually quit reading), bad spelling, grammar issues (lighten up on the prepositional phrases that are everywhere) and (as others have mentioned) somewhat grandiose verbosity is making it awfully difficult to keep myself interested any farther than the 50 or so pages I've slogged through.  It would have been a better 99 book than a $3.00 one and I'm pretty certain I won't be following up with second or third installment of this trilogy.  Overall, it's probably best left on the shelf.