Review: Elf detective - really good writing but way too short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2012
I RECEIVED THIS SHORT AS FREE REVIEWING COPYOh I loved the premise for this story so very much - as much as elves are such overused species in fantasy, here is something one won't find every day, murder mystery with elf, who I guess counts as private investigator/detective. I hate to sound repetitive but I cannot help it if I agree. I thought world building was awesome, especially for such short story. I thought the characters who end up being together had great chemistry, I just had no clue why they are drawn to each other. This is the case where I also thought the story needed to be longer, because the ideas just were not developed as much as I wanted to see. And another repetition, but for me murder mystery lacked suspense as well.