Review: Great story but typos and tense issues
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 10, 2013
Loved the story and I read a LOT of space romance books. The only issues I had were the repeated reasons over and over about why they took females from earth.. . Once is enough already. Made me think they copied it in a few times for filler.Also not sure who's fault it is but the tense issues and typos had my brain jolting to a halt repeatedly. Examples:The instead of theyWe Instead of wereWords that should have ended in ed did not etc.etc.etc.Almost felt this was by a very good writer who's first language was not english.That being said I really did enjoy the story which made the other issues much sadder in my opinion.I would still buy this book again but hopefully after it is re edited.