Review: Delightful story!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 6, 2012
I really enjoyed the storyline and characters in Dakota Trace's, Nisey's Awakening. The bad experience with Derrick at the start leaves you with the knowledge that the horrible protagonist will return....yet I didn't feel he was the worst character but Nisey's mother...what a hard assed bitch. Nisey and Caelan' relationship as Maister and slave though a little predictable in it's development was still individual and beautifully told. The Gaelic endearments I loved, having mixed with folk from the emerald isle and heard such terms as Gra, which when said makes a person feel special; though the other terms were knew to me.  Some beautifully tense scenes were described where release is postponed or withheld plus equally erotic scenes of build and release for both characters and it was obvious the relationship was meant to be. The on off potential relationship between Josh and Kalindra leaves them as the main characters for a future novel as their situation is unresolved.One thing that annoyed me is the amount of grammatical errors, word additions or omissions throughout the story...I was itching to edit it from beginning to end. I hope Dakota realizes this can annoy and put off readers and has her future work properly edited. That withstanding I have still given it 4 stars for a lovely story.