Review: should have been edited by a professional
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 26, 2013
I could not have progressed more than five minutes into this book when I became totally turned off by the poor grammar.  The author skips from past tense to present tense back to past tense, all in the same sentence!  As some other reviewers have stated, this could have been a sweet little story, but the mangling of grammar, syntax, and spelling was just too much.