Review: Editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2012
The others in the series were far better than this one.  The editing was not great.  I had a hard time following when I read, "He put her shirt on and turned to him to let him know...." It was supposed to read, "She put her shirt on.."  There were times when the names were mixed up and I had to re-read to get the jist of the paragraph.  Frustrating.