Review: An OK story, but--
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 20, 2012
An adventure story without much substance.  I thought it was plotted well, but it was overrun with typos, cliches,  misspelled words, punctuation errors, and just plain wrong information.  For instance, one chapter's title was NAPLES, but the action took place in Ft. Myers.  The Florida Panhandle was described as being east of Tallahassee.  The word "sun" was repeatedly capitalized, for no reason that I could decipher.  Some more examples:  "Your still here..." and "The boat road so low in the water..."  and "...his breathe smelled bad too" and "the power chord going to the wall...."  Also "Christianity, Buddhism, Judaism, Muslim, and several other faiths...." I think he meant Islam.  Anyhow, this book would have been much better if it had been skillfully edited.