Review: Too many grammatical errors
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2014
I think the story line was pretty good but there were way too many grammatical errors.  It was to the extent that it made the story hard to follow at some parts.  The speaker would change without any indication due to misplaced quotation marks and no indication of who was saying what.  The scenes would also change quickly where I would get confused as to when the character made it to another place or where they were. The tense and person would also change within the story which really got under my skin.  I believe that the mother was bipolar and I would have liked to have known more about her character.  I agree with the other reviewers that the story seemed to first focus on the daughters but the mother appeared to be the main character, however, we were left in the dark about many of her actions.  I really wanted to give the book higher scores but grammatical errors within a book can not be ignored....it's a book.