Review: Too much story...too small a book.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2014
Story was excellent. There were many segments which were barely covered and indeed could become a book on their own. For example the library on Ying could have been greatly expanded. Research other civilizations, who might help or attack us. Find allies who can help our expansion. Learn about other forms of government and which are best. Earth governments are all the same and suck. Now you can do it differently.You set up Cn!las to become an ally but never built up the character or others who came later. What happens to them?