Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2013
The story was a jumble of go nowhere characters and inner plots that were left unfinished. There were repetitive expressions like "Are you okay?", which was distracting. The final chapter did not close out the story leaving the reader to wonder what happened to Ken, Greg, Dena, and Jamie. Who was given the funding that seemed so important early in the story? Why was Greg so lovely with Dena?  The idea of the story was good, but the chapters and flow was not thought out very well. A good editor would have spotted these holes.