Review: Great Idea
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2014
I really think this author has potential.The story is not bad.I believe with an editor or some volunteers the verb tenses could be cleaned up. I don't usually comment on grammar or spelling in my reviews, I tend to focus more on content, consistency and plot; but it was difficult to read smoothly when verbs, present, past, and future tense were all lined up in one sentence.With some TLC this story could be really engaging. I do want to know what the situation will be in Denver, and what happened to the army guys!I would recommend this to people who are addicts for the zombie genre and don't mind perusing for the sake of the story. If you are easily irritated by spelling and grammar errors, this may not be for you.