Review: Terrible editing, sloppy details ruin story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 2, 2011
Good story, worst editing I've seen yet. You can't go two pages without encountering either a glaring typo, wrong word (such as "passed" instead of "past"), sentences missing words, or characters whose last names are changed 3 times in the space of 3 pages. It got worse toward the end. The author also introduces several new characters almost at the end, which makes no sense, especially since some of them die. Has potential, but for the love of the English language, GET AN EDITOR!!!