Review: WOW!! AWESOME STORY!!!!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2013
This short story was AWESOMELY WRITTEN. It was creepy,sad, and emotional. I really enjoyed reading this.  Some short stories end leaving you half way. This one was a complete short story, if you will. It ended complete not half way. I say BRAVO, BRAVO, to the author!!! I will be looking for other books written by this author. To Paul Melhuish I say,keep writing because you definitely have the talent for it. I recommend this book to any one who wants to read a fast paced easy read that you wont be able to put down. This short story is like a snack before a meal that leaves you feeling full, then you wont be able to eat the meal till later on.