Review: disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 23, 2014
The Pack Wars Boxed Set Definitely not for your average romance reader. I believe it should be classified more as erotic paranormal stories and not a adult romance series. In my experience, erotica is more about the "bedroom time" and less about a story, which is how these read. Lots of holes in the plot line. I was disappointed by these. They really needed either more beta readers or an editor or something. Several conflicting statements and scenes. Almost as if written by different people depending on the page you are reading.The stories have awesome potential, and as such it was disappointing to see them fall so flat. All three stories have extremly detailed sex scenes, where as there are times in between where the stories almost read more as a rough draft/rough plot sketch.I was willing to let things slide with the first book, however by the time I got to the third it was almost as if the stories and scenes had been copied and pasted with a few tweaks of names and a few details. I really hate leaving a bad review, but there were WAY to many things that could have been so easily fixed with good editing, or even beta readers.So this series/set gets only two stars from me.review posted on bookaddict29.tumblr.com