Review: Should have been an extended middle to the book
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 24, 2013
I truly liked this story.  The author is great with dialogue and characterisation.  An error-free work.  All participants were well-rounded with definite individual personalities.  It would have been wonderful to see more activity/action/romance from middle of book onwards.  This story deserves, in a good way, to be extended.  From the squishy rain-soaked hike up the mountain to the end (not counting the epilogue) everything seemed rather rushed.  Sometimes taking things slower can bring breathing pace not just to a book's characters but to a reader, also.  Congrats to the author on a job well-done.