Review: Needed it to be Longer Than 4 Chapters
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2013
I find it very difficult to review 4 chapters of a book, as that is all you will get from this download. In regards to the lead characters I honestly can’t describe Jeremiah, as you learn nothing about him, other than he loves to dominate his partners sexually, remind you of anyone? With Lucy you do get some background. Her parents died while she was in college so she was forced to drop out. She is a shy woman who feels completely ignored by the world and seems somewhat lonely.When she starts as a temp at a new company and runs into her “dark green eyed man” in the elevator everyday it becomes her highlight and she plans her day to be there at exactly the same time to ensure she sees him. A month into seeing him they are left alone in the elevator for the first time. What starts is a dominating Jeremiah taking her up against the lift doors and in various other places. Initially considering her lack of confidence, experience etc Lucy is ashamed of her actions, sleeping with a man whose name she doesn’t yet know but thrives on her new found exploring sexuality.Having to purchase this in chapters, there are 7 and counting, I don’t think I will be going too much further with this saga as nothing frustrates me more than chapter by chapter releasing of novels by authors/publishers. In addition I see similarities to 50 Shades, as you may when you realise who Jeremiah is and what he requests of her, just not as well written and frustrating as at least when you bought 50 shades you got a book, 3 great books not 7+ worth of chapter by chapter releases. Having read some of the reviews to the latter releases I know I wont continue, as the story appears to strengthen and then go down the gutter