Review: Very good story line
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 28, 2013
Whoever proof read this book should be fired. This story wad fantastic and very believable. Be cause there were so many grammar errors I would not recommended this for first time readers. Because I am an advent reader I was able to see were the story was leading and rather enjoyed. Hat's off to this author you have a VERY promising future. This book just needs a rewrite. Good Luck!