Review: Good Story. Great first novel, except.....
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 26, 2013
The grammatical errors, so, so many.  Those errors were the only reason I did not give five stars. I think Mr. Lock should have been very proud of his first book and I wondered why he did not take the time to fix those things. Very disappointed in that respect. Also, if you need a proofreader, Mr. Lock, I am available.