Review: It's the 1st part of a short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2013
I found it frustrating that this book was so short. It could have easily fit onto the pages of a magazine. In fact, it reminded me of stories in magazines that I read when I was young. Stores that you would read which ended at a pinnacle moment, then said to find out what next would happen in the next issue of the magazine. It was simply a ploy to sell magazines.I got tired of this nonsense when I was young.Having said the above, the story here could have been expanded with more imagitive details and information in an effort to get the reader more engrossed in this story.2 stars