Review: Not ready for prime time
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2013
Note, this is a novella and I finished it in about 2 1/2 hours, it is not a full novel.First, the good; this book is well written from a grammer and language point of view. It reads easily and there are a minimum of proofreading errors. That alone garners a couple stars compared to a LOT of the other Ebook authors out there, so good work on that score.The bad; the plot is exceptionally simplistic and the characters and situation are quite unrealistic. Things happen far too fast, both from a character development and plot point of view. The situation the protagonists are in makes no scientific sense at all, but could have if any attempt was made to explain why several extremely implausible things occurred. I could explain further what I mean, but I;d have to give pretty much the entire plot away as spoilers to illustrate.Mr. McElhaney shows some promise and this book could have been a lot better if the author had restrained himself in several areas.