Review: The Rookie
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 11, 2012
Imaginative with good descriptions, great baseball feel, but I don't know that this worked as well as some flash fiction I've read, but since I am a baseball nut I'll accept it as it is. I grooved on the old yellow Frisbee. That was a super touch. I guess the reason I didn't go gah-gah over this is because there is so much more that might go on both ends of this story. It left me wanting much more. Nice writing.