Review: Ummmm
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2013
All the five star reviews had me excited for this one, but it wasn't a five for me.  Sex scenes overwhelmed the storyline and I never felt as though I really got to know the guys. No obvious grammatical errors, but I skimmed the sex scenes looking for some plot. A nit-picky thing I noticed was lack of attention to detail. For example, the four year old remembered her uncle's last boyfriend from two years prior? And that same four year old's speech hasn't improved in the interval of the 18 months between the last chapter and the epilogue? Had a good premise but didn't feel as though it delivered.