Review: Teaser series
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 11, 2013
I'm glad this was a free download.  The characters were not developed well at all.  This fact could be because this download was the 1st 2 chapters of the entire book?  The story of Lori and the Bishop Brothers might be better and make more sense if all parts of the "book" were released as one novel rather than "teasers" or "short stories."  I found Lori to be an annoying character with countless insecurities and completely unrealistic.  The Bishop Brothers were not developed at all.  Being hot, smart, billionaires chasing a girl with ridiculous insecurities is getting to be a repetitive plot in many books.  This is not a series I will continue to read and I definitely do not suggest it to readers ... unless they like super short story teasers that are released a month or so apart.