Review: Good Story, Good Price, Needs an Editing Check
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 26, 2010
Overall, this is a very good story and plot - I could believe the scenario - and well worth the 99 cent Kindle price.  I am going to buy the second book in the series to see where the author takes me.As another review said, this one could really use an editor / proofreader to spell chack as well as to make sure the words are on the right context in the sentence as it did become annoying here and there: where vs. wear, etc.Editing aside, this is a good tale and well worth the dollar price.