Review: Potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 8, 2014
It's hard to rate tales that end so quickly. The author seems to have the potential to scare the reader. It had some creepiness to the story and atmosphere, and i like that. It needed a bit more buildup though. 30 or so pages would have done the trick. 13 pages is too short to really get into the story.