Review: great
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2014
Nice cover and a great story. However, it could do with a bit more work - I'm giving it a FIVE star rating because I was really captivated despite the following gripes - I hate it when the pov changes partway through a story - either do one thing or another - in this case maybe you should have gone the 3rd person route. Punctuation needs attention. artiste=cabaret dancer - you mean artist as in one who draws.