Review: great concept
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2014
This writer had a great idea when they wrote this but the delivery could have been much better. The writer hops from one scene to the next and it takes a second to figure out what's going on.Even though this is a very short story (took me about 30 minutes or so to read) the writer could have developed a much better book. Reading this felt as if it had been written by a teenager. It may have but I'm not going to look it up and find out.I would probably give this writer another chance if I found their books for free like I did this one.CST