Review: Nice story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2013
I liked the idea and the chemistry between Nice and Alden but the writing and flow was disjointed. It had great potential but was not a complete smooth picture of telling Nice  and Alden's love story. Nice try. I suggest your editor do a better job of looking at spelling and grammar as well as the ease of flow. I really liked Alden and Peggy. This story is incomplete and needs more closure to be better. Too much stuff unfinished and unexplained.