Review: Overall this was a good read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 21, 2014
Hopefully this is the first attempt at being an author, as there were way too many grammar errors.  The use of their, there, they're and different name spelling leads me to believe that it was edited by friends/family.  Next time just put it in a focus group and pay for an actual editor. The "great full" vs grateful was like a slap in the face. Maybe more story towards main characters and then allow you to spawn off different stories with the secondary characters.