Review: this is a SHORT story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2014
I know this warns you that it is a short story several times but it was still a shock just how short it is. Which was really a shame became the author is very talented and the story although predictable and slightly over done had so much potential!  This story feels rushed and I never really felt a connection to the hero or really even see them falling in love...it was all just too sudden and it cheapness the romance and the authors ability.