Review: How demeaning can the author get?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 2, 2013
I thought when I read the description about the female getting spanking would be the erotic sort of spankings. Oh no. There was no eroticism with these spankings. She was spanked for doing the least little thing that may have "risked her safety or well being"!  How demeaning! She was actually treated like a child, as was every other woman in the book! I don't normally take offense from a book, feeling that it's just a story and the author can write whatever they want. But this, I couldn't help it. To think that this is the author's interpretation of what women would find enjoyable. I was honestly appalled at how she was treated. Literally told to go strip and put her nose in a corner until they were ready to deal with her! WTF? And talk about double standards! One scene made me was to scream and thankfully it was at the very end so I could just be done with this horrible book. She paid the bills using her own money because the guys wouldn't allow her to pay them back any other money that they had spent on her when she was broke. They threatened to spank her if she tried again to give them money, so she paid bills instead. So they get all angry with her and send her upstairs to stand in a corner and await her spanking. Then, after proposing marriage and she accepts, one of them puts her over his knee, and just before he wails on her, giving her the hardest spanking yet according to her, he tells her that there s no her and them, only us, and she needs to understand that. Okay, so then wouldn't that mean she could pay the bills with her own money if she felt like it, since it was all of their money?I just really hated this book. Aside from the spankings and general mistreatment, treating a grown woman like a child, hell, worse than a child, there were grammatical errors all throughout the book. Words switched around or left out. This I find very annoying. Edit the book please! So many authors today are self-publishing, which I have no problem with, but please, please, please, have someone read the book when you're done and check for issues. It is so annoying to read through all sorts of mistakes. It's even harder when the book is already ticking you off because of a terrible story like and horrible treatment of the woman.