Review: On What Planet...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
Does this plot make sense? Here's what we have in the first chapter:Sabrina (heroine): Newly engaged to Ben but in love with Luke "since she was thirteen years old"Ben: A billionaire, in love with.Sabrina. knows that Luke & Sabrina love each other but is willing to take what he can getLuke (Hero):Detective, also in love with Sabrina, since childhoodIn these first few pages, there's a party, during which we find out that Sabrina & Ben have decided to get formally engaged to see if it will prompt Luke to finally declare his love. Even though all parties are in their 30s now, Sabrina has never told Luke how she feels (evidently he was supposed to figure it out on his own). If he doesn't, apparently Ben & Sabrina will marry because Sabrina really wants children. Ben is OK with all this because he'd "rather have a piece of her heart" than nothing. And as Ben says, "Ben: "I simply can't help wondering if you said yes to make Luke jealous."Sabrina: "Do you really think I'd do something that calculating?"Ben OFFERED to marry her, knowing she didn't love him, and offered her an out at the engagement party for the same reason. And yes, Sabrina, it is calculating to use an engagement to someone you don't love as a kick in the a** for the one you do love!The whole plot was too crazy and convoluted. I couldn't get past it.