Review: Typo tastic...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 30, 2011
This author makes basic grammatical mistakes, switches storytelling tenses for no fathomable reason, and takes way too long to get her story started. Needs ruthless editing to even be passable.And as for writing like Stepehnie Meyer? Well, possibly, but I would not mean that as a compliment... This reads like a 14 year old attempting to write from an adult perspective.A shame, as I feel like there is a lively style under there trying hard to get out. Ms. Munday needs a few hundred thousand words under her belt to hone her style, and a seriously brutal editor to cut out the extraneous padding.