Review: 5-Star Story and 2-Star Editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2013
I agree with other reviewers that stated this book had a lot of editing problems (or lack there of). I was mentally using a red pencil the entire time I was reading, which was very distracting. I would have to agree that the story is intense. I loved Alexia and Lukas was certainly an alpha male but, at times, seemed over the top and almost psychotic! That being said I really enjoyed their story and wouldn't mind reading more about them in future. I would have given it 5 stars if the grammar, punctuation and proofing had not made the book so difficult to read.