Review: Shift happens
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2014
I liked the concept of the story line and the developing relationships within but this story was so poorly edited I had no choice but to score this at 3 stars.  What could have been a 5 star review gets lowered by the stops when you had to figure out what is going on because the sentencing in some areas were atrocius.  These editing issues made the flow of the story choppy at best so I was left with no choice.At first I didn't like Whitney I thought she was the spoiled rotten rich brat and Kalmin had an attitude as well that left ambivalence.  I had to continue reading just to see if these characters improved.  I was very happy to know that they they did improve.  I also liked how they both denied that they had a relationship and that they would harm one another.