Review: Potential is there...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 13, 2013
The story had potential.  The ideas were great and could have worked well, but it felt like the initial plot dealing with past mistakes was somewhat glanced over.  It was so easily dismissed, which just did not work for the story.  The editing was an issue, too.  Several times I had to stop and re-read a passage, due to misplaced words or punctuation.