Review: Good idea, Needs Work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 14, 2013
Too many typos, both in spelling and plot.I just never really connected with any one character, nor evenas a group.  Skims over how the plane group survived the four yearsafter the crash, and why did they never figure out that while the planewas a great 'home', it also made them sitting ducks, which led to theirdownfall.Not enough info about the valley group, either. Just the telling that theyfound a cave and lived there in relative safety.  I could not feel muchfor any of them, b/c I didn't get to see them adapt to the circumstancespast the crash.Needs more info, depth, and spelling correction.  The idea was good, though.It's what made me download this while it was free.