Review: Badly in need of editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 19, 2014
The poor editing really takes your mind off the story. I liked Jake and Annie, and if (and it's a big 'if') the author improves her writing, I'd like to see more of them. But there were too many instances where the reader just says, "Oh, come on now!", like when Annie goes out to the farm alone. Real people just don't react or do some of the things these characters do.