Review: took a nose dive after 70%
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2014
I loved the first 70% of this book! it was well-written, there was a lot of mystery surrounding why the girls were being kept by William, and the premise, while not original, was interesting.Then I hit about 70%, and the story went in such a weird direction.  The explanation as to why William had these girls made no sense and his reaction to Number Thirteen's "betrayal" was ridiculous.  What bothered me the most was Number Thirteen's complete willingness to immediately forgive him, and then the author saying she'd grown so much.  If this wasn't a doormat, weak, and person prone to abusive situations, I don't know who would qualify.The book quickly wraps up in a nonsensical way.I'd give this book 2 and a half stars because I really did enjoy most of it.  The end however was worth about 1 star.  Disappointing.