Review: Lazy writing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2010
This was just the kind of story that I enjoy reading.  However, I did not enjoy reading this; it was too badly written.  The transitions were nonexistent.  At several points I was confused, and thought I had missed something.  It was as if parts of the story were missing.  Characters moved from one place to another with no explanation.  Simply lazy writing.  Was there no editor to offer advice to the author?  Didn't the author at least have a friend who could read it and point out what was missing?  I will never read anything by this author again, even if it's free.