Review: Rambling and Disjointed Story - Had to Stop Reading
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 28, 2011
This was free in the Amazon Kindle store, which explains the two star rating.  I don't understand all of the non-verified Amazon purchased 5 star reviews as they must have read something different than what I started.This is a rambling "something" that is all over the place, and I had to stop after 17% through the Kindle version.  I have no idea what point the author was trying to make except something about death, and the frequent references along the lines of "wait, I'll tell you about what is going to happen later" became annoying fast.  After 10 minutes and 17% of the way through, I couldn't "wait" any longer.As I type this review, there are over 150 short stories available for free in the Amazon Kindle store.  I'd pass this one up and concentrate on the others.