Review: What a poor choice
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2014
This story had a good premise and I could imagine it being a really good story.  Unfortunately, the author failed to flush the story out.  It read more as an outline than an actual story.  Charles is a main character yet we never get to know him.  We never are given to understand why a Dom would put with being keep a secret for a year, not telling his friends and having to get blood delivered.  None of it made any sense and the author didn't provide a rationale for any of it either.  It was so glossed over that you don't develop any feelings for either character nor care what happens to them.  I mostly kept reading hoping that something would happen- maybe the father would come back-but nothing.  I was bored.  Not recommended.