Review: Is this a joke...?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2014
The amount of grammatical errors alone is astounding- I have not seen so many misplaced words since youtube started the beta for automatic subtitles, it's really that bad- and that's without getting to the past/present tense switching back and forth. I normally wouldn't let this keep me from a good story, but I'm halfway through the first chapter and it's making me cringe, desperate need for an editor/beta aside, it's like  if the author was drunk while writing... Just listen to this:"There was a short pregnant pause when Captain Fairchild seem to stare into space. It was broken by Rufus jumped into Sterling's lap, impatient after being ignored so long.""Quickly Cecilia enter the carriage and prepared to help anyway she could. After many tries the finally got Sterling in the carriage with a minimal amount of damage"