Review: Great Storyline
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 25, 2013
The writer has improved since book one but spelling errors don't bother me if the story is good.  He's come up with a great story and I really enjoy it.  Definitely worth buying the book.  He stopped detailing the really weird sexual gimp torture.Dislikes:  While he left out torturing the gimp, there's still a few other creepy things.  I don't mind talking about torturing an enemy for information.  I don't mind a few sexual kinks.  I think what makes it seem so creepy to me is the "oh well" kind of attitude and how the story flips so quickly into Bruce's kinks and fetishes.  Thankfully, there are no more chapters devoted to Bruce's penis size!I really like the basic story of the Blues, two families prepping, and their desire to not only survive but thrive.  I can forgive a lot in a book if the basic story is good.  Obviously I like the story or I wouldn't have purchased the three books.  I'm really worried that the author will make book four about the sexual escapes of the two remaining wives.  Please stick to what you're good at and write the story without in depth and unrealistic sex stories.  You've got talent, a good story, and a fan base.  Give us more about prepping and maybe noticing the new ways the Blues are adapting and evolving.I would've given it 5 stars if the non existent personal boundaries between husband/wife/friends/daughters weren't detailed at length.  Still, it's definitely worth a read!