Review: Okay short story with sweet, mild characters and not enough spice
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2013
This was just okay to me. The characters are sweet and nice and want to go from being friends to lovers, and I do like that in romance, but almost all of this short story (which is about 740 kindle locations) is spent with the h/H thinking about why not to do it, about the longing they feel, about how things will change if they do sleep together, etc. Just a lot of thinking about it, and I was ready for the thinking to be done and to see some real actual interaction on a deeper level. It was a bit like being behind a slow driver in traffic and wanting to press the horn and tell them to get a move on. Once I got to the sex scene, it didn't wow me or really arouse me or make me sigh over the romance of them as lovers. For me, this needs more interaction/dialogue and more sexual chemistry.