Review: Needs a good re-edit!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 2, 2013
Based on my enjoyment of Scott's "Kevin Conner trilogy" I decided to give this book a go (even though I'm probably not the target demo). For the most part, I wasn't disappointed. The characters (especially Carlos and Amy) were engaging and well thought out, and the plot was enjoyable (though the beginning pages are a little slow-paced as Scott "sets the stage"). My biggest gripe is the book needs a complete re-edit. Characters names are switched in multiple spots, whole paragraphs get repeated, and various grammar and punctuation errors interrupt the flow of the action.That said, I still recommend this book and look forward to the next (and hopefully, better proofed) installment.