Review: Such potential.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 10, 2014
This book could have been 3 1/2 stars if it had been edited. I don't mind a few spelling or punctuation mistakes but the entire book was littered with mistakes.  So many that it made reading the book very difficult.  The plot was pretty good but it needed honed up...maybe having a few independent readers could have helped to clean up the storyline and helped the author to step back and rethink how certain plots may have been developed a little better.  Independent readers would also have been able to point out the one part of the storyline that was unrealistic.  If the plot had been reworked then that part of the storyline could have been really good.  Also there is no mention of a follow-up book....or at least when there might be the release of a follow-up book.  With a huge cliffhanger not knowing when a follow-up might be released is very frustrating.