Review: Great Concept
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 2, 2014
I love the idea of this story, the execution not so much. The author needs to work a little harder at using the best word choices. I didn't buy into the technology behind the conflict over food growth between Jay and Reilo, but I'll readily admit I'm no expert. It just didn't come across as valid for me. I wonder, too, if the author unintentionally made Reilo so egotistical: describing himself as "the new expert" and his work as "groundbreaking." Modest people don't talk that way. If it was intentional, I wouldn't care for that character. This was a decent freebie, but it doesn't inspire me to buy the complete series.