Review: couldn't finish it
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2013
as the other reviewer said, the writing itself is not a problem. the story imo is good, but there is something lacking in the translation. it's like a good writer had a good idea but just couldn't make it happen. the heroine was so annoying she was unlikable. there was not a flow to the story. there were no real descriptions of the characters or story building. it is a lot of here and there action followed by some so so dialog and the wishy washy actions of the heroine. it could be good but not in it's current form.