Review: Have patience, the story is worth it.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2014
Ok, this book is not for people who are really bothered by grammatical errors and changing dialogue. I think part of the problem lays with the fact that the story takes place in Louisiana, and yet, the characters wind up speaking in a British cockney dialect. I can understand why baby blue speaks this way, it is explained she came to America when she was 14. However, this doesn't explain why Dante "Inferno" Page speaks the way he does. Also there many misused words: there/their, sort out/sought out, and countless others.Here's why I do recommend this book, I do like the characters, especially Dante. It does have a good biker feel to it. The plot twists interested me. I do want to know what happens with the other characters in future stories. I especially want to see the conflict discussed in the epilogue felt with in Linc's book. It is my hope the author seeks out a professional editor if she generates some revenue; this book could be 're-edited and published again and it would easily be a five star book.