Review: Not what I expected
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 17, 2014
The story started okay, but really didn't grab me. It was drawn out and wordy. The constant weaving of thoughts in italics within the scenes stopped the flow and was very annoying. The characters needed more depth and there were too many things that happened in the story that just didn't mesh, even for a fantasy. The concept is interesting but I think I'll pass on any future books.