Review: Disappointed :(
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2013
I purchased this book because at the time it had only 2 reviews and both of them were 5 stars so I thought I was in for a good read but I am very disappointed. The story progressed extremely fast, the plot line for what I can only assume will be a second book was haphazardly introduced and the characters made blatantly obvious and the main characters in this book were average. The use of crude terminology was ineffective in that it was not used throughout the book and only appeared at random spots and added nothing to the story. Don't get me wrong I have no problem with crude wording as long it as follows with the story but I can't figure out if it was supposed to be used to explain to the reader how raw and sexual certain scenes were supposed to be or whether the author just thought it added more emphasis to that scene. I think this story could be highly successful if it was written to be a longer book with more emphasis placed on character development and exploration and not just a wham bam thank you mam kind of book. Grammatically the book was well written and the wording flowed but overall I was just disappointed. Sorry April :( I will attempt to read another of your books as this was my first introduction to your writing and I just hope it will be better.