Review: Mediocre at best
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2013
A predictable romance and lack luster love scenes.  I actually found the love scenes a tad bit bland so I skipped them.  And I like to read erotica too. It's just the love scenes seem forced and unrealistic. Overall, the writing seems stiff and unnatural.  The words flowed awkwardly.  Not the best but not the worse thing I've read.  Maybe more editing would help.