Review: Interesting story, needs a bit of work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 8, 2011
Zombie Betrayal is a short story. Joe is down on his luck. He lost his job, his marriage is falling apart and even his son ignores him. There are very few zombies in this book. The book is actually about Joe's imploding life. Joe notices certain strange things that he doesn't piece together until the very end 9the zombie things). The author also introduces another character, a writer looking for Joe's story. This is a big add-on with much ado about nothing.  If anything, this is the beginning of a larger story and I look forward to reading it.The story does need some heavy editing and less use of the comma. It is a good second draft but still needs a bit of work. It was interesting and I hope there is more.