Review: Gave one star because these books need to be in one novel not frustrating short stories
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 5, 2014
The author has great potential for novels in stead of just short stories with characters that continue their story from one short story to another short story. This review also covers Dominated by the Billionaire, #2 as well.Although the author has great writing style and plot, the story loses great potential by being split up into several books. Not only is that tactic used way too many times with the newer authors but she charges too much for the following short stories. Seriously $3 for each following part, yeah not happening. If the author combined all short stories into one novel then I would pay to finish the story. OK do you see what the negative factor is with this series?Now onto the review of the story itself.At His Command (Dominated by the Billionaire, #1)The short story was well thought out, sexy and hot hot hot. Robert the billionaire knows what he wants and goes for it. Pam is unsure of herself and once she is in the presence of Robert in the executive elevator, which she shouldn't be on, she finds herself all hot and bothered, Robert takes care of that in a heart beat when the elevator stops suddenly. They have sex and he's all domineering, elevator works again and then he's gone.On His Orders (Dominated by the Billionaire, #2)Once again this short story was thought out but ended up being nothing but a tease for book number 3. It's been three days since the incident in the elevator and Pam hopes that she didn't lose her job. When she shows up to work there is an envelope on her desk causing her to freak out and hope it's not her pink slip. Once she rounds up the courage to open the envelope she is surprised by what's inside and goes on her way to the required destination. Pam is even more surprised by what is awaiting her at the destination. She does what she was requested of and then is sent on her way back to work.....then bam end of story.