Review: Cute Story, HORRIBLE editing.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 30, 2012
The overall premise of best friends for life who suddenly realize they are perfect for each other is as cute as it is timeless. It's a fun, fast read. That being said, Alyssa's character is a complete moron. I'm not talking all the usual missed understandings where she doesn't confront her feelings because she thinks her best friends doesn't feel the same way-although that happens often enough. She avoids the situation completely-for months at a time! She is a horrible friend to Beth and Tommy. Doesn't appreciate what she has. The story moves too fast so scene that are supposed to have huge meaning fly by like any other scene. Alyssa and Brent lack any chemistry. The dialogue is weak. There was little to no editing of sentences leaving many passage had to be read twice to understand then some. Did that make sense to you? Kind of, but it was frustrating, huh? That's this eBook. Mix in spelling errors, grammatical errors, too many punctuation errors to count. I don't know why more people rated this a "5" than not. It was priced at $2.99 when I purchased and NOT worth it. Maybe at $.99 I can overlook the huge flaws in story, character development and writing technique.