Review: Don't bother
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2014
This book is just so bad.  The writing is poor, the editing is poorer, and the plot could have been great in the hands of a capable writer, but that writer is not Ms. Starr.Hannah is about as lame an air-head as ever was.  She lets crap happen to her, ends up on dates she doesn't want to go on, living next door to a man she wants nothing to do with, and winds up engaged to him because... she has nothing better to do?  I don't know, really, how else I'm supposed to see the situation.Colt is as big a moron as Hannah.  He never says what he means.  He flips back and forth and back and forth on the issue of Hannah, but we never really see any internal conflict on his part.  This makes him less sympathetic and more of a jack ass.The plot here is thin, and the author tries, but she just doesn't have the chops.  She might have been able to pull it off if this were a short story, but she goes for novel length and it's not good.If Ms. Starr wants to write books, she ought to take a couple of creative writing classes at her local community college.  Things like plot development, dialogue, continuity, and description have to be learned in order to create readable, enjoyable books.