Review: Where does one start with plot issues?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2013
I don't even know where to begin.  First, when your life is being threatened are you REALLY worried about how sexy and hot the person is who you hope is saving you is? (Yeah, I know, quite a sentence--but I don't ask people to buy my prose.)There was way too much ogling and thinking about sex and trying to have sex and too little plot development.  And how stupid are these characters.SPOILER ALERT:  Hey, when you're a COP and a D.A. perhaps you should CHECK the CREDENTIALS of people who come by to take your only witness.  And what was the Sherriff's issue (he clearly had one) with the "heroine"?  We never go into that in the book at all.  I mean, c'mon, yes, you have to investigate everyone but seriously?I could go on with the ludicrous plot events that were just there to be silly.On the other hand, a better book than I have ever written.  I suspect that this author, with a good editor, could do something good.Try a little less of the sexual thrills and more character development and plot.