Review: Ok
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 17, 2011
The story was ok, but I was under the impression that this was going to be a steamy, fast read.  It's about an admirals daughter who is a lawyer by day and a stripper by night (hence the cover of a naked girl in a butterfly G-string).  The free download I received had very little steam.  Almost no love scenes at all in fact.  And there were so many non sequiturs that at times I was very confused.  One minute she is with her love interest at home, and the next she is in court, but without the leading sentence that takes you there.  It was as if entire sentences or paragraphs were missing.  As for the fast read, it was 28 chapters long, so you judge if that is a fast read or not.  Overall, I thought the book had good characters and a good story idea, but it was unfinished, and was missing a lot to keep in the plot.