Review: ********SO NOT WORTH IT*********
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 20, 2014
Based on the other reviews, you might be inclined to purchase this book.  Please don't.  I truly have to wonder if they read the same book I did.  If the author reads these reviews, I beg you, get a new editor.First of all let me say that I am a voracious reader so while I am not perfect by any means, I do know what makes me cringe, close a book and return it for a refund.  That being said, let me list just a few issues I had.  There were so many basic grammar mistakes it is hard to believe that this was edited at all.  From simple spelling mistakes to word tense there were errors in nearly every paragraph.  Still I pushed on.  Then I had issues with the repetitiousness of so many lines.  Over and over, chapter after chapter the author used the same sentences.  Not only is that boring, it is annoying and it makes for very stilted reading.  I finally gave up trying to read the book.  But alas, I can not write a valid review if I don't finish a book so off I went to borrow a friends copy (She hadn't read it yet).  I won't lie, it took me hours to read this, something that totally flabbergasted me as I can read a 200 page book in under two hours.  The main characters were so decidedly unbelievable, I was hard pressed to force myself to continue.  The supporting characters were just that much better.  The plot would have been decent if it hadn't failed on so many other levels.  I won't bother with attempting to give you a play by play as the top review did, but I will say that the back story took far too long and left so much out you will be hard pressed to say what really happened.  The plot itself was relegated to such a small portion of the text, again you are left with that sense of dumbfounded astonishment.I must admit the errors lessened the further along you got in the story, but that didn't make up for the detractors.  If you are looking for mindless erotic romance, you might be alright reading this, but I would have to say even that wasn't up to par with the reviews I saw posted.  This book left a seriously bad taste in my mouth long after the last page.  The romance was flaky, the menage sex was not really well thought out, The characters were so flawed that they didn't even fit in the role the author gave them, and finally the price for this versus some of the other more well written books made me cringe.There you have my honest opinion.