Review: STOP the descriptions
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2012
I liked the first book, it wasn't a 5 star, but it was better than a 2 star!  This book is so incredibly cluttered with descriptions of everything.  I don't care about a kid peeing in a bottle, just say he did it and leave out the description of it or better yet, the kid peeing in the bottle had nothing to do with the book, leave it totally out.  I'm so confuddled with all the different characters in this book.  The descriptions just go on and on and on about things that I just could not care any less about, pages and pages of them.I've lost track of the original characters and not sure why there are so many new people in this book.  The book is cluttered with stuff that just isn't needed for the story line.  Feels to me like the writer was trying to fill pages with words and that the words didn't matter, he just wanted more and more of them.  Half of this book could be left out and it would be a much better book.