Review: Great story BUT horrible editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 23, 2013
The storyline was actually very good and the characters believable.  I enjoyed reading it EXCEPT for the awful editing. Incorrect words were used off and on throughout the book.  Some sentences or paragraphs just made no sense.  In the epilog, for instance, it said a couple (can't remember their names) were in the pool but in the 2nd sentence after that it said the same couple were down the beach walking and the girl (in both places) was in the pool with one guy and thinking that she hoped things worked out for the couple down the beach, which was also herself.These kinds of errors really detracted from the story.  It would have received a 4 or 5 otherwise.