Review: Well.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2014
hmm. well, I finished it and I can't normally finish the vast majority of free kindle books because of typos and poor writing. There were no typos to speak of and I truly enjoyed the characters. Though if I had to offer criticism- some of the writing seemed unpolished and repetitive. But at least the foundation is there. I also don't normally read anything along the lines of Fifty Shades and I was unaware how "erotic" this would be but I cared enough about the back story and the characters to see it through. Though repetitious, I also found some of the dialogue hilarious... Good first? effort.