Review: Concertino is for music.. not sex
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2011
I feel that this author used a thesaurus simply because another reviewer suggested it.  Not all uses of a thesaurus are needed.. the misuse of the word concertino I think was just to much.  The book is poorly edited and just reading what one wrote could have fixed many of the problems.Next I'd like to add that I don't care how much of a hymen a women has left by the time she is in her twenties hell even as a teenager you CAN NOT tell if she is a virgin by a "popping" or how hard it was to press pass something.  Inexperience in the woman's body and in sex really gets to me.  If you are not grown up enough to know about this subject don't write about it.  Hell as a freshman in high school we were taught in our health class exactly how a woman's hymen works..  If one is female they should know this, if one is male and not old enough to know this they shouldn't be writing sex scenes.Next the in such a short book the sex scene should not span 12% of the book, for one scene.  Either write supernatural fantasy fiction, or write smut.. not very many authors can do this..  This is just another case of how in a short story people fall desperately in love with each other at first sight.. and the name.. really.. people should stay away from the name Isabella or Bella in werewolf or vampire books right now.. gives people a bad taste of the Twilight books, which were NOT good books.