Review: Difference between embarrassing and foul
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2012
This is the second of the author's stories I've read, picked up both when they were available for free download.  As with "A Slip of the Tongue," the story could use some pruning.  At least it's not poorly written.  Don't find myself inspired to pay for the author's work, though wouldn't avoid reading more if it were included in an anthology with other authors I'm willing to pay for.