Review: I liked it a lot
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2014
despite the fact that thisbook needs some work, I really liked it. Alot of the problems that other reviewers had with this book would be fixed with some decent editing and a bit of a rewrite. Yes, there is a bit much about the guns and ammo and military jargon, however its really nice to see military presented even semi accurately, usually they are either evil or a bunch of buffoons. And personally I thought the characters weren't bad.Reading a lot of these type of books has really pointed out to me the value of a good editor. There are grammer and tense errors galore. Some things should be explained more for those of us with no military knowledge, and perhaps the non-British, and some things could be expanded on.  I am assuming that the more recent, more expensive version is the full one, so no more story ending in the middle. Which you really can't complain about since it is a teaser, although it should be free, partial books should not be even 99 cents in my opinion. It's just common sense. You get better reviews and more of them, people are much more critical of what they have to pay for, even a tiny amount. And as someone who browses and buys a lot, more reviews even so so ones is something I look for.But the fact is, despite ts problems, I want to read more. And that is the most important thing. My advice to the author is keep writing just get someone to edit for you. And for the reader, well, we shall see, after I read the full version...its worth a try I think.