Review: Terrible writing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2014
I picked this book up through one of the sites I follow and don't mind spending a dollar to find a new author. If I'd read this sooner I would have returned it for a refund. The book is full of mistakes and bad grammar. I'm not a purist and a book doesn't have to be perfect for me to enjoy it but this one really was bad. I didn't love the story either. I felt like the drama was all contrived and that Luke's 'condition' wasn't researched properly. As for the h, I wanted to slap her because her story was just nonsense and unbelievable. The author made her sound a bit lacking in intelligence.+++Spoilers+++The h supposedly lends money to bail out her uncle's restaurant when he was going through a bad patch. He is under the impression that she used savings (from where? she always worked for him) and never pays her back even though she still owes the money to her ex. Her ex begins threatening her. We learn that she hasn't paid a sent of it back to him and he hasn't been charging interest. Then the h's uncle gives her the money and she thinks about opening a bakery with it and then paying the threatening ex back. What?? Seriously.I'm really sorry to say but there is nothing to recommend this book.