Review: unbelievable
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2014
Ally has just broken up with her boyfriend and finds a handsome man at a club. I can't say too much or I will spoil the story for someone but I was not impressed by this book. The story line is just not believable at all. What woman would act like this?With that being said, this book needs some serious proofreading. Too many commas, words that don't work, some words are in past tense while others are in present tense, two sentences when there should be one, etc.This part of the series was short which would bother me if I had enjoyed reading this. Thankfully it was free at the time I downloaded it.I won't be recommending this to anyone.