Review: Boring
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2013
The action was dull. The villain confrontation over in three paragraphs. It lacked cohesion. The point of view switched constantly with no segues. Poor editing: feinting for fainting, found for food... Etc.. There was a single reference to a coyote turning into a man and the rest of the time the coyotes were normal animals under the mind control of the villain. The empathic/telepathic abilities of multiple characters to connect with animals was not explained. Only stating that as each one discovered the ability they didn't question it and decided to use it. The elapsed time shifted constantly: she was at the ranch for a week, they'd only known each other a few days, they'd only known each other a few weeks.It has potential but this was the quality of a very rough draft. It needs proof reading and an editor to make it anything close to an enjoyable story. If it had been 99 cents I might have given it 2 stars but for 2.99 it's 0 star worthy but that isn't an option.