Review: Needs  a little more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 7, 2011
Just got this story free and finished it in no time. It's a small bite of erotica, seeming more like a very short scene ripped from a longer work.I loved the hero, all rough and tumble looking with the longish brown hair, deep brown eyes, and tats all over that hard body. Brody is very yummy, especially if you go for the bad boy who's really a sweetheart.This short has a good idea and hero behind it, but at 232 locations, it's too brief, not allowing me enough time to get warmed up. I would love to see this made into a more developed short story.