Review: Ok for a short story if you want sex not a good book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 29, 2013
It was ok for a short story. The problem with short stories is that they end before one gets really into them. I would not read any more of the series at this time. The characters needed to be expanded and for the reader to be able to get to know them. I felt they were just people in a book not characters I could connect with. In the beginning I found the  book hilarious. The enemy General had to be standing pretty close for her to get that reaction and yet they both had field glasses . She had never seen his eyes before,  How she saw them this time when they were both looking through field glasses beats me. Then she h as s. To run to the shower and . Sexually relieve. Herself. His reaction was just as far opp it. He could  suddenly mind join with her in her pleasuring herself. Boy were those binoculars good. There was no real story just a continual sex orgy. I got a few good laughs out of the bits I read.