Review: Great story, but needs more editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 24, 2012
I thought this story sounded interesting.  I enjoyed the storyline.  There was a lot of repeated talking/explanation of the gobblygook of what Kevin discovered and wanted to produce in vast amounts.  Figuring most of it was made up anyway, I wasn't keen to read all that, but I did enjoy the book.It reminded me of the baby on *The Family Guy*. . . Stewie is always having these random violent dreams and that's what this seemed to be.Kevin is a brilliant 5 year old who plots for his end result. By the time the book comes to a conclusion I believe Kevin is 18 or 19.  18 was the last mention of age, but time seemed to have passed. Throughout the book there is stilted talking and discussion, drug use, sex and a blind eye to a lot of things that don't matter to Kevin. . . it seems pretty on par with the age of Kevin as he progresses through the book. He is loyal to those he loves and with  his motto of "Don't F--- With Me" is serious about his loyalty.  Cussing, drug use, rampant sex (once Kevin actually has sex) and not really caring about the "big picture" of things.Marcel is more of a conscious for Kevin.  He is the one who questions some of Kevin's deeds. It's nice that there is a moral conscious in the book.Natasha, Jenny and other women are high power women who have control of various divisions of Kevin's world businesses, but they are also there for sex too. It may be because they are protective of the inner circle and it's hard to make trust worthy friends when you're rich and powerful, or because they author is demonstrating a teen's interest in surrounding himself with beautiful women who are sexually open. Either way, that part did rub this woman reader the wrong way.  It's hard enough for a woman in business to be taken seriously, without the bossmen always thinking they can have sex with them whenever, where ever.The editing on the kindle version is sometimes hard to read, due to beginning, but not ending, quotes and things of the like.  I find that with plenty of Kindle books and rack it up to the system, rather than always being the author or publisher.