Review: Fall Asleep While Reading
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
Loved the beginning of this NA novel. The hero and heroine have such conflict and steam between them, I settled in happily for their story. The writing was good, no problem there.Unfortunately, this author seems to be a fan of soap operas ... because the story devolved into conflict, spun out in long, going-nowhere conversations while the camera panned around and around. The characters never just have a freaking conversation and settle things. They refuse to answer questions, refuse to tell the truth, refuse to reveal their true motivations, and they do this over and over ... the book is about 3 times too long.This plot would have made a great novella.