Review: Great Story (even with mistakes)!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 15, 2012
This was a great story about Nyla and Dean.  I enjoyed it. There were a lot of missing words but reading along you kind of knew what to put where.  Typos and things such as calling Dean's wife Susan "Shelby" in the next sentence after writing about Nyla's friend Shelby and saying she should have won a grammy for her acting job were a little distracting but over all when she writes again if she has a few friends to read it over and then herself she may find the mistakes.I will buy her next book.