Review: Book too long...a second was not needed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2013
Had the first book ended differently I would NEVER have purchased this one. I skimmed this entire book. The writing was worse in this book than the previous one. I don't like to leave bad reviews but this writing was just all over the place. Frankly, I had to check back regularly to see "who" was doing the thinking in each section. Drove me crazy! Again not having contractions was an issue for me. I'm not sure what I missed that made this book 5 stars for quite a few people. Maybe I skimmed "too" much. The reason I give 3 stars is I thank the author for the HEA for all characters. I like when a book gets rapped up. Also on a side note I truly believe this author has great potential. She has the ideas; someone just really needs to proofread her work and guide her in more mature sounding conversations. Even the adults sounded like they were 12...