Review: Predictable
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 9, 2013
Brady Gates a famous rock star needs peace and quiet to work. Ella Lewis a self published author needs peace and quiet to work. They both book a cabin on the same mountain and wind up in bed. Shocking considering that this is "a sensual romance"That didn't really bother me. What bothers me about this book is the writer's apparent lack of interest in her own writing.  Pay attention when you write a scene. Make the story flew easily. Note that when a person is walked to their bedroom door and is blocked by a guy standing in the hallway while she is lesson against door jam of an upstairs bedroom she cannot run into the hall way to the upstairs room. She just needs to turn take two steps and slam the door.Also "sensual romance" the word sensual means appeals to ones senses psychologically, physically, and especially sexually. I got one was not at all gratified in any way by this book. The main characters though seemingly pleasing to the eye were not detailed enough to picture, both had blue eyes that's it. And when they finally comes into bed together it was campy. They just got naked got into bed and he entered her. No foreplay no orgasms. What kind of sensual reading is that? I like a book that delivers what it suggests and this was lacking.