Review: So much promise but needs tightening in all aspects!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2014
This has been done before but surprisingly there is an appeal to the characters and plot that gets you in.  For this reason and the price I gave it a four star but it needs a lot of work.  It is too busy far too quickly and it takes away from character development.  The falling for each other at almost first sight between Lucius and Persephone is spoiled because their characters are not well defined.  It still works but is missing something.  Though he starts out yummy he get lost amongst all of the other characters and their stories.  We like her but Cori makes her almost look stupid so she fades into weakness very quickly and not just because she believes a liar but because her personality fades.There is potential and I am hoping that the next book has been looked at carefully because it is three times the price and I am undecided about following through.  I did like Jude very much so it is tempting but his dialogue at times and thinking detracted from what could be a captivating personality.  Will this carry through? All that is needed is a little tightening up and this book could be four star and more.  Let's hope the next book has been given that treatment. I will be looking out for the reviews.