Review: Disappointing!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 6, 2011
I was excited to read this novella because I really enjoyed Keara Kevay's short story "The Ride." However, I was immensely disappointed by "Ain't Even Done with the Night." The plot & story line had potential, but it fell short. The characters were one dimensional. They were not well developed and lack depth in my opinion. By no means was there any development of a relationship or chemistry between the Heroine Dianna & Hero Lou. They meet & then started having sex. Their declarations of love and marriage after several days together was unbelievable. I understand that this is a novella and not a book, but I've read authors who had successfully weaved great stories within a short length book; Kevay just didn't accomplish that with this story. This was just a mediocre work, if not the worst. Overall, I had high hopes for this novella, but it left me high and dry. It was a good effort on Keara Kevay's part, but it didn't cut it for me.