Review: Liked it, didn't love it
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 3, 2012
The story flowed fairly well although there were several time jumps that snagged it. The editing was fair but there were too many sentences that made no sense until you figured out what had been meant. I couldn't really get a handle on either Hailey's or Heidi's personalities from either the dialogue or the descriptions. I was angry that the mother didn't seem to get held accountable for deliberately trying to ruin Hailey's life but she just disappeared from the story so the relationship is totally unresolved. The relationships between the characters changed very abruptly and were not really believable but if you don't care about believability then it was a pleasant way to spend some time. I would say to take a chance on this story if it is still free, but I don't think it's worth more than a dollar.