Review: Very short and didn't grab me
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 8, 2012
At 624 locations long, this is more of a tease than anything.  While the explicit language didn't bug me as much as others, it wasn't something that really drew me in either.  I didn't have a strong connection for the hero, and while I have no issues with what her (it? them?) do to the waste of DNA that attacked her, it didn't leave me with much interest in picking up the next part and seeing where things went.I got it while it was free