Review: Dad's not doing the boy any favors
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2013
Needs a lot of work.  Story is pretty much nonsensical, some kind of internal consistency would have been nice.  Maybe a bit of characterization as well.  I'm not expecting great art from a teenager, but if you're going to offer the work for sale it should be better than this.That said, he might be able to make something of himself if he works at it and gets good feedback.