Review: Badly needs both an editor and a proofreader
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 16, 2013
The 2 is even part gift. Stilted and troubled as it was, I was amazed to see the author give credit for multiple editors, proofs. I see very little of their work. I agree that the story had potential but the spelling, etc., should have been caught.Did the later books get less stiff and error-prone?