Review: Amazing Story!!!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2013
I was truly left speechless by this story.  I laughed, I cried, I cheered. I fell in love with all of the characters.  One thing I worry about in short works is Character development, but these characters were absolutely perfect (in their human imperfections) and written to make them believable, real, and loveable despite their problems.  In a piece like this the story must work and be interesting and the author hit it right on.  I've never been to Hawaii but I now feel like I have. I am looking forward to this author's upcoming novel.  More great writing and another great story awaits, I am sure!