Review: Fun Read but Crappy Formatting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2012
This was a fun read with likable characters but it was hard to read with paragraphs and dialogue breaking in the middle or run-on, odd words appearing mysteriously, and changes in view without any hint it was going to happen.  A note to the author - edit, dammit!  Also, when you change view or dialog, put some kind of break in ('***') to let us know what might be happening.