Review: A really cool idea - a really awful implementation
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2014
Where do I start?  I put it down in the middle, never to pick it up again.  Action was disjointed, and the situations between implausible and are you serious?  Pleeeaassse.  You could do better.  Lots better.Characters and timelines were weak, imprecise, and disjointed.  Too many stereo types subsituted for real people with real emotions.  Establishing a new country with magic technologies used to buy off other countries?  Ok, that could work - but a replicator to make this happen willy nilly? Too contrived and convenient.  I am sorry - but I could not become absorbed, and that is pretty hard for me.