Review: No.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2013
This is pretty much the worst thing I've ever read, and I've read both Twilight and 50 Shades of Grey.  I don't know what MySpace page the writer got this story from, but he should send it back. It's a short story with a short ending because I suppose the writer suddenly got a text on his "iPhone 4S - 16 GB" and said "To heck with finishing this mess."If you got it for free, you still paid too much.