Review: A bit of a grind
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2012
The story was okay, but not all that exciting.  The premise is what got me interested in the book, but the story really never came together and delivered on what it promised.The characters weren't fleshed out enough, the story very predictable, and the book is filled with cliches that make it nearly comical.The book is in need of a thorough editing, as it's filled with typos and grammatical errors that detract from an enjoyable read.If you boiled down the story a bit, it would probably have much more punch.There's a good story in here, it just needs to be worked on to bring it out.