Review: potentially
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2013
This is a novella that should have been a novel. It had a great concept and unfortunately that is the only reason it has two stars. Had this story had proper development and a much broader vocabulary, with more description and less typo's I could have possibly given it a higher rating. If it had not had potential to be a great read I would have not rated it all, because that is the only thing for me that saved it. My advice to the author if I knew who she was: develop the characters more, give us a background, be more descriptive, along with a few other things.