Review: Crazy Errors!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 24, 2013
I want to say that this book was unfinished, too predictable and unbelievable at times. Re-write this book and let me edit it  for you. I'll do it for free. Just contact me. I hate seeing my sisters and brothers put out mediocre work! I think the author may have been in a hurry but I've got time to edit it so you can produce work that is worth reading. The plot was not well thought out and to ask who would burn down my bakery after you just pissed off your ex and your so called friend, not only was it unbelievable, it sounded delusional. Niayah was ghetto as they come so why you make her a baker? That just didn't seem real. You're on to something though but you should really think about re-writing this book. I can't give this book more than two stars because of all of the typos and grammatical errors. Not thinking about the errors the story had a little something interesting but it was just too short and undeveloped. Don't make the baker, ghetto, a slut, and send her through a tragedy without making sure you paint a picture of how and why she became that way. Don't stop writing.