Review: What a fascinating alien..
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 1, 2012
I thought this sci fi is well done. It could even be better if the story could be tighten up. The idea of our world being inhabited by aliens tracked and controlled by a government agency is fascinating even if it brings to mind the movie, MIB. Here the writer could have given us more history or background. On the other hand the movie did not give any, lol. Ok so no originality in this aspect. However Noah, the gentle alien, is both refreshing and so original. He is the very reason this story works for me. He is a fascinating being and his experiences since he is stranded on earth and his ordeal when discovered and later kidnapped  is both moving and the highlights of the plot. This story would be even better if Connor is an older enforcer  and more of a hunk. But Connor come across naive and really inconsistent with the type of role he is suppose to play. Then there is the irritating part when Connor is so easily blinded by the obvious that I just have to question the writer purpose in doing that. The story is long and some parts could be edited better to tighten it up. But I do enjoy the writing and as a story written in this mm genre, it is better than a lot out there. As for Noah, if all aliens out there are like him, we have nothing to fear!