Review: Still love Lizzy & Julia..
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2014
I'm not sure how I feel about this one. I love and read both Lizzy & Julia's other works and this wasn't as good as their other stuff.This was basically an intro to hopefully a much better story, because there really wasn't much of a story here at all. Lots of repetition, and the division between serving class and elite class powers didn't make any sense at all. Almost seems like this was quickly slapped together. Both authors are capable of much more.On the plus side, the editing showed improvement.I would still recommend this short story intro. Hopefully the story will pick up. Both authors have the power.**Side note: someone please tell all writers that there are so many more ways of non-verbal communication besides simply 'eye rolling'. It's lazy, unimaginative, and annoying to repeatedly have everyone roll their eyes all of the time. Honestly, I've never in my life seen an adult man roll his eyes, as too often happens in books.