Review: I'm nitpicking
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 26, 2014
Okay, the story is decent and the concept is fun. But I honestly cannot get past the methodical adjectives. I know that sounds crazy, but it's like someone once told the author to add one adjective before each noun and he took it far too much to heart. I think that, with some practice and the help of a professional editor, this could end up being a pretty good book. It's just not there yet.