Review: make up your mind
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2014
Is this a story about a British girl in America or a bunch of Americans who like to speak like Brits?  I found the dialog in this story a bit off putting because I don't think there are a lot of Americans who talk the way the author has them talk. I get that Ana is British, but people in Virginia don't "ring up" their friends. Sorry, it was just a bit distracting reading this VERY long book with unrealistic dialog.Also, I like smut as much as the next person, but holy chafing, Batman! I don't know how that chick was able to walk from doing it so much! And I don't know that we necessarily needed the graphic details EVERY time the did it, either.Unless you have never read a whodunit before, you'll figure it out immediatelyThere was a story in there, and when all the smoke and mirrors got pushed aside, it was an ok one for free, but be advised that like it says, this  is just part 1, so in order to get to the Happy Ending, you will more than likely have to wade through mindless pages of the same sex scenes, as part 2 is told from his point of view.