Review: Didn't live up to it's potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2012
Really sorry to say that I didn't like this book as much as I thought I would. I hate writing bad reviews so I'm going to keep this short. The book had so much potential. The concept of the story sounded really interesting but sadly it let itself down. I found that the writing didn't flow and I didn't connect to the characters. They seemed very 2-dimensional. There was also a lot of grammatical mistakes. Normally I can overlook a mistake here and there but there was too many here to ignore. Finally, the love story annoyed me. I can't say too much about it because that would spoil the story for those who plan on reading this book but I'll just say this: Becca really needs to grow up and decide what she wants. She came across as very immature in her attitude towards love and her reaction to the hot guy at school. She fell in love with Alastor so quickly that it wasn't believable. I know there is a backstory (which i won't mention) that is meant to justify the whole insta-love thing but I just didn't get it. I''m not sure whether I will read the next book but I'll see when it comes out.