Review: Book one in what I hope is a long series.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2014
First off, why doesn't this get a full five stars?  Passive verbs.  So much use of the word 'was' bring the action to a crawl.  It's more compelling to read "He was kissing her" or "He kissed her" in a romance scene.  I wondered if the author used so much passive voice intentionally when writing from Candy's point of view, but it ran throughout Black's POV as well.  Ms. Dark's writing will be a lot more stronger with a reexamination of passive versus active voice.This is good writing.  The author has a great way of telling a suspenseful story.  Even if we know what's going to happen, we still care about the characters and not everyone can do that.  The love scenes popped with excitement, the story's ending, while a cliffhanger, also satisfied.I very much want to see more work from this author.  This is every bit as good, if not better, than anything I've read from H. M. Ward.  Also, fans of Twilight, Fifty Shades of Grey, and a host of other sexy billionaire stories will eat this up with a spoon.