Review: Rushed & superficial
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 18, 2012
I won't go into the story, other reviewers have already done that in detail. My main criticism is that everything about this story felt rushed and superficial. There was no true emotion from Skyla and, sadly there was no romance in her relationship with Logan, her love interest.  I  didn't feel the love, or anger or even the jealousy she supposedly experienced. And I certainly didn't feel her attraction to Logan or her response to his touch or his kisses. The reason was the rushed pace of the writing.For example, the first time Logan the guy Skyla's crazy about kisses her it's described as, " His tongue darts around my mouth, glides across my teeth, happy to be there."  Later another kiss is described as, "He pushes his tongue into the back of my throat deeper and deeper, . . ."  Where is that glorious feeling of first love? Where is the excitement, the heat, the giddiness? It isn't there, and it should be, worse, it could be.  The bottom line is that I found all the characters superficial.There are other problems with the writing and in all fairness there are some positive things to be said about the book, but if I don't care about the characters nothing else matters.