Review: Good first novel. It has potential
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2012
I agree with most of the 3 and 4 star review comments so far. Very intersting plot. Good character development. At some points I became very frustrated with the characters and the situations, but later I realized that the author had to develop the scenes this way in order to stay true to who the characters really are. It's not your typical sci-fi, dystopian romance but that's because both charater's are a bit naive with relationships.The writing is good but could use improvement (the third person POV is very shallow and there are a bit too many adverbs and passive sentences). But there is definite potential in this author and hopefully she will gain experience and learn from her first novel to keep improving.In any case, the story was good enough to keep me interested until the end, which for me equals an entertaining read.