Review: Poorly Written PNR
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2012
Had a lot of issues with Leah (immature and unlikeable), Lucien (contradictory behavior - he likes Leah's brassy attitude but punishes her for it in the taming process), and the world - building (comes too late). The last 70 pages were pretty good, but I had to look at the book as a whole. The epilogue was not Kristen Ashley's usual style. A few beta readers, editing, and restructuring may have helped.  The 'prophecies' show potential for future story.  Hopefully, more effort goes into the writing.