Review: Too forward
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2013
Alex is independent and can take care of herself while Tommy wants nothing but to take care of her and prove her it's never bad to have a boy as backup. In my opinion this two factors sure made this short story pretty interesting, but I can't help but feel it was poorly written, it could've had more details instead it was to forward. The author didn't wait long to throw you the ending, I felt things were going too fast.