Review: okay
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 29, 2014
It's great to see a new take on vampires and vampire hunters. This was a good story that could have been made better with a little more editorial care.The dialogue is often confusing in that words and reactions of the two or more participants in the conversation are in the same paragraph without actually identifying the speech with a 'he said' or 'she said'.Wrong words like - wined instead of whined.