Review: Enjoyable Hot Story!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2011
I enjoyed this short story, although by the time I was done I was really starting to wish it was longer. I like Lyla's writing style. I thought the short story was very steamy, but I didn't feel like I really got to know Richard or Lauren really well before the story ended. I like to get to know characters and my biggest wish is that I had more time to learn about both of them.