Review: Where to start....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2013
The story is great. The characters are great as well. I fell in love with Bailey and the fact that she is a survivor of so many tragedies at so young an age really draws you in. Beckett, his three brothers and his parents are a great addition to the story.There are sooooo many editing mistakes that I am being super nice by giving therating I have.Some examples are (but certainly are not all inclusive)Throughout the story the interchangible use of then and than incorrectly!!! Commas need to be used!!!! There is a Christian mentioned in the story when that character doesn't exist in the story. Halfway through the book, the dialog is between Beckett and his father, whose name is Roark. Yet,the father is called Addison throughout that whole scene, what the heck? It's the "innocence you both EXUDE" not elude. Waste not waist....Author must hire a professional editor and re-release.Great story if you do the corrections!!!!!