Review: The story line that wouldn't end.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2012
If there was a riveting story there, it took the author 81 mind numbing chapters to tell it. Honestly, my eyes glazed over at about chapter 60 and I could sum up what had taken place by then in ten minutes. Sean Fox is not your smartest hero and the plot to this becomes more and more unbelievable as it goes on, but it starts with the fact that there are two guys named Sean Fox who are identical. One is murdered and the other returns from combat. And it goes downhill from there. While you know they have to be twins who were not aware of the others existence, the author waits until chapter 70 or somewhere thereabouts. Its a long drawn out experience in which the story line moves slower than the action which fails to keep you turning the many, many pages.