Review: Should have been longer
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 6, 2012
Yawn, I felt the story should have been longer. giving the reader more of an opportunity to get to know Alexander Moretti and his motivation for becoming a thief other than his desire to please his father. I felt that his love interest Celeste Anderson was kinda weak. She really had no back bone. She seemed desperate, like she didn't feel secure in her own skin. She had no self confidence what-so-ever. And to have her just fall into bed with Alex upon meeting him was totally unrealistic. She didn't know anything about him. He could have been an Axe Murderer for all she knew. The premise was good, but the plot was kind of weak. I wished the author would had more character development then what she gave us. Not worth the download. No wonder it was free.