Review: Could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2013
This read needs a serious editor. The missing words in a sentence occurred way too often. I actually had to read some of the  sentences a few times to try and make sense out of it. The story line had potential but fell short. I think with more time and effort, this read could have been so much better. The abusive relationship part of the story was full of flaws but the characters were well done and other parts of the story were pretty good.When a writer fails to properly edit a story, it comes across as a lack of effort.