Review: Hmmm....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2014
Let me start of saying this author has a great amount of potential and I think it won't be long before I'll be giving her 'fives'. For a second book I think it was a great effort.  I enjoyed the storyline but do (sorry) have a couple minor critiques. Sometimes the language was a bit stilted, the point was understandable but it didn't seem to flow naturally as mutual conversation. The h was not much of a h, imo. While she was presented as being mature for a seventeen yr old, in too many instances she acted like a thirteen yr old. She also had a bit of a smart mouth, even with men of rank, I just can't see that happening in that time period, most especially by a title less, dowerless, girl without family upper connections.The closer it got to the end of the book the more I was ready for the H to give her up as a lost cause and find someone more befitting his station. Seventeen in that time period was not really that young, many girls were married with children. They also would have been very respectful of upper rank and would not have spoken the way she did to Earls. Most especially not called them almost immediately by their first name.