Review: No Plot
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 16, 2014
I tell my elementary school students that a story must have a problem and a resolution. This story alludes to a problem and attempts to build a sense of foreboding, but absolutely does not deliver. It was like reading a journal entry written years after an event takes place...lacking the excitement of the actual event and told TO the reader  rather than experienced BY the reader.