Review: Juvenile
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2013
This piece would flunk an elementary school essay assignment. The grammar, spelling and composition are horrible and, worse, inconsistent to the point of distraction. The formatting is flawed.I was able to read only to the second story, "Sex on the Island." The first sentence is 51 words long with five commas and dependent/independent clauses mixed randomly. In order to enjoy erotica, you must understand what the author is trying to say. This author makes that difficult.I got this for free but I still wasted my time.