Review: The eyes are the window.....
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 8, 2013
Good story.  This was an enjoyable read.  There needed to be a small bit of editing and some reformatting would have made conversation easier to follow.  Lucas with his watchful stare was an intriguing opening.  There were several abrupt scene changes and a bit more character development would have added reading enjoyment but overall a pleasant read.