Review: Started well, lagged in middle and picked up towards end
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2014
Normally I read a story in one sitting.  I found myself putting this story down numerous times.  The premise was interesting and the story took off at a good clip.  Then once Claire and Hugh made it to their island hide away, the story really lagged.  I appreciate the attempt to show Hugh as educated by discussing great philosophers, but the tension between Claire and Hugh started to lag.  I wanted to say--get on with it!  The NSA agents appeared to be bumbling idiots and Claire seemed to always do something to generate attention.  if her brother is so saavy in the workings of such a super hush hush government group, you'd think he could better direct her in what actions to take.Could have been a really good story with tweaking.