Review: Needs some help but worth reading
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 8, 2013
This is the first novel by this author, who is not a native english speaker.  I mention this because that is where the trouble is.  This novel has great bones to it.  Lots of interesting characters, a lyrical world and a clear good/evil battle.  But the flow needs work.  There are times it is choppy and other times where you really wish she had gone into more back story.  A prequel or prologue would go a long way toward fixing this in the way the tale is told.  I am sure the next book in this series will be stronger as the writer grows into her talent.  She has a vivid imagination but needs a good strong editor to help her find her feet.  Bravo and keep writing