Review: Good Read, Immaturely Written & Unbelievable
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 10, 2013
Ok, this book had a great story plot..  honestly kept me interested..  but however it seems like a thirteen year old wrote it.. It needs a better editor badly.. like how many times does the author has to say `he said to me."  Or "He asked me" like ok we know who's talking to who, you don't have to keep reading it...  And another thing I luv good hood stories, but the author made these women so damn weak it was sickening...  Like seriously make a story believable, I rolled my eyes alot during the middle of reading.  The ending was soooo dumb...  not trying to spoil anything.. but why n the world does she want to do that NOW when clearly this behavior has been going on since they been together and she knew cause he was flat out telling her like really...  I hope n the next book they have some backbones...  Would Recommend if free.. Idc if it was only .99 !!!!!