Review: not sure what to say
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2014
This book started out well, but quickly went down hill. The author should have included some back story for Dawn and Vincent. You know they knew each other previously but their history is never addressed.  The romance between them never fully developes. The so called sex scenes were to quick and not very descriptive. They didn't have to be erotic but they could have at least described them kissing or some type of foreplay. The story is short but some short stories I have read are able to give you a full story whereas this story is missing something. Also the point of view changes from paragraph to paragraph towards the end which makes the story confusing. On a positive note, the main characters are interesting enough that you want to learn more about them.  If the author writes a follow up to this story I hope they include more back story.