Review: Pop culture style vampire story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 27, 2014
Whew. A difficult read. The plot started out excellent but the story development unravels quickly. Switching point of view from character to character is shaky and confusing. Missing alot of details. Author shoves the story to the end with a lack of finesse. Exclamation point overuse. Sentences, especially dialogue is unnatural and awkward. Disappointing.