Review: Cute but very short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2012
Despite being poorly proofread (using "then" instead of "than" is a sin), this was a cute story which I skimmed through in an hour. Which irritated me a lot. I liked the characters, I liked the premise of the story; I didn't like the way the author appeared to rush through it all ... maybe it's a fanfic thing, I'm noticing a number of books that appear to meet this formula; great characters, sexual tension, tell each other life stories, declare unending commitment and then boom it's over, leaving me wanting to read the same book but with the characters more fleshed out; the backstory better developed (rather that just fleshed out in a brief confession).