Review: Could have been more stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 22, 2013
Didn't love it. Didn't hate it. It could definitely stand to be edited. My biggest issue with the book is the fact that the main female character is supposed to be a huge Bob Marley fan. Both songs the author mentions are most definitely not songs of Bob Marley. Don't worry, be happy is by Bobby McFerrin, and the other song is by Inner Circle. Both songs were written and released years after Marley's death. The author uses parentheses often, which i found unnecessary when the words between the parentheses should have just been included normally in the paragraph.The lack of formatting without indents also made it a bit difficult because it went from one scene to the next and I got lost a few times.There could have been a bit more history with the main male character Jackson as well. I didn't feel like I really got to know him.