Review: Very poorly written
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2014
The story had potential, but the grammar, the sentence structure, and no paragraphing to separate the conversation so it was readable...  appeared to have been written by an 8 year old.  Run-on sentences, poor sentence structure, and rambling conversation .... all detracted from the story.  I'm a math major, so if it offended me, it had to offend those with an English background.