Review: Good story but could use editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 25, 2012
I found this novel to be an excellent story with some very dynamic characters. I did feel that it read more like a first draft however. There were many places where I felt the scenes were rushed and could have used further development. The book would also benefit from some good proofreading (I read the Kindle version); there were many glaring errors and typos. Despite the sometimes underdeveloped plot lines and the spelling/grammar issues, I read the novel to the end because I very much enjoyed the story as a whole. I look forward to reading more from this author.