Review: Compelling story, terrible editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 1, 2013
The story is a compelling one and it kept me turning pages, despite the times when I would question the plausibility of the action.  It seriously need a serious proofreading -- this reads as if it was turned out in a single draft.  I would consider reading more, but it appears the author is in the serial story business, making readers pay for installment after installment with cliff-hanger endings and no clear end in sight.While it was interesting, it wasn't that interesting and when author turns out product that is this poorly edited, I feel taken advantage of.