Review: Blood Storm - fizzled
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 7, 2012
The Product Description is the best part of this story.  I wish I had saved the time and not read the book.The heroine is TSTL (too stupid to live), she continually contacts the people who are trying to kill them when they go on the run.The hero is damaged and insecure, not a good sign in a hero.  The heroine has some kind of junior high school crush on the damaged hero and she shamelessly chases him throughout the entire book, even though he makes it clear several times he is not interested.  He finally comes around but by the time he does, it seems insincere.So insincere that when the hero and heroine think they might be executed soon, all they want to do is make out.I would think survival would be their highest priority, making out could happen after they have made some effort to insure that they will be alive.My main problem with this story is that the heroine acts so childish and chases the hero so shamelessly.  The premise for the story was very good.  I really dislike the phrase this author keeps using about putrid saliva forming in the heroine's mouth.  That's disgusting to me personally.  I hated reading that.My secondary problem with this story is that the only reason I see for the attraction between the two is sexual.  There has to be more than that.  Sorry, I wish I had passed on this book.