Review: Noami or Naomi?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 11, 2014
My wish for 2014 is for good story tellers to do just that. Please don't try and edit your own story or think it doesn't need editing. Poor or no editing makes a great story bad. I am still not sure what Lily's best friend name is. It was interchanged throughout the story. A few grammar errors but I honestly I stopped counting. The grammar confusion and name convinced me that this is not 5 star work.This is a great followup to the first one though. I enjoyed that she didn't re hash the first story. The epilogue was closure; many kudos to the author. The reasons I hit the middle of the rating stars.Long to short it is personal preference if you want to read the story. You have to know your limits on errors verses storyline.