Review: story line was good but horrible grammar
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2014
As the title says, I liked the plot. Enough that I bought the second book However both the first and second books are filled with an appalling amount of grammatical errors such asReferring to a female character as he.The aliens returned to they camp.The amount of star was amazing.I could go on and on.  Also the amount of detail given was just overwhelming and repetitive.  I found myself skipping over pages and pages.  There was one point in the book where one of the characters was speaking to a large political audience and he thought to himself that he should give a quick summary yet the author spent about 7 pages going on and on about the quick summary.  Mind you this was not spoken dialog from the character...it was for "our" benefit I suppose. I just skipped to the spoken part.What I found funny was that there was maybe several sentences devoted to translating the alien's language which is evolutionarily different than a spoken language even though it is alien. I would have liked to have had more dialog and situations about learning their language.Please get these and future books professionally edited or at least have a friend proof it.  I think the grammar checker in Word would have found a lot of these errors!