Review: Proofread much?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 5, 2014
Good story, but the past and present tense verbiage was very annoying.  Both tenses were used in many sentences simultaneously causing confusion.  I have to agree with other reviewers, it takes away from the story because it is distracting.  Would suggest others to read it knowing it is good story with proofing errors to ignore or re-write as you read.