Review: Alot packed into alittle
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
I received this book free from Story Cartel for my honest review.I enjoyed this short story that follows the tale of two gladiators fighting for their freedom. In fact I wish I had more background and I could see this as a full novel that has much more time to build the characters, the world, and the climax itself....however even as a stand alone it managed to do all of those things fairly well.One thing I suggest would be to not start with "semi chaste" sex scene...I was confused in the first few chapters of what reality in the book was. It might have been better after a fight as a way to escape the violence.