Review: Needs work but has potential...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2013
I love Indie authors I think it's wonderful to put your work out there for us book lovers. This being said...I'm becoming very aware of typos, grammatical errors, misused words, and poor and/or wrong punctuation in these books. This being one of them. Site should be sight waste should be waist. Punctuation where there's not supposed to be any and please use CONTRACTIONS it makes the dialog sound so robotic.This is a decent story but it's very contradictory if I was raped and never had another sexual encounter since or before said rape I don't see myself  screwing the first hot guy I'm attracted to, Ian's that's not just the only example. This whole book I'd full of them. The attempts at conversation between H/h is sadly boring, immature, or just awkward. It's weird to me and hard to follow because of lack of editing . I think this book would have been better if Sebastian wasn't 31 he acts likes he's 20 Mia acts likes she's either 50 or 16 . It's like there's 3 different stories but nothing flows. This could be a good book with a lot  editing and changes to the dialog and storyline it's self.