Review: Sizzling Hot Errors!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2013
Cute story, but difficult to overlook the countless  errors. I submitted quite a few, but the task got the better of me.I did like the characters. How could anyone not like Ethan? Sebastian and Henry were sizzling hot! The plot was so-so. There were some parts I think needed more detail, but that's often the case with readers.As a retired English teacher, I know how difficult it can be to edit your own writing. At some point, you must do so. If you're having problems with proofreading, you should pay someone to do the job for you. It's unfair to the reader to have to figure out what you meant to say. In the end you may lose readers because of poor grammar. I know I will not pick up another book by Andria Large. I  regret the decision because I'd like to read about the other Beck brothers, especially Sebastian.