Review: Too many errors for such a short story!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 7, 2013
Did anyone proof this before it was published?  I understand a few errors in a full length book.  I make errors too. But it takes me out of the story when the grammar is bad, especially in a story this short.  I never connected with the characters and don't understand how the H could fall so hard and fast for the much younger h.  I hate giving bad reviews but don't like wasting my time with poorly edited books.  Glad this one was free.