Review: Save Your $, This Is Seriously Unfinished & Half Baked
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 13, 2012
I gotta tell ya, the idea is cute, and the story has potential, but it's unfinished.  It reads as a poem, complete with some nice hand drawn (non-pro) pictures.  It tells the story of three guys who are having their lives ruined by a mobster.  BUT.... you only get to the point where the three guys meet, then it ENDS.Honestly, I kinda thought the $1.99 I paid was a rip off.This is NOT NOT NOT a children's book. I think the author is marketing it on email for children, but I would NOT allow mine to read it.Even as sparse as the prose was (i.e. short!), it also it  seemed to denigrate women as money grubbers and man-women relationships in general as existing only for the satisfaction of sexual needs for the man, and a source of income for the woman.Also, I thought it was silly that they wouldn't finish the word `breast', but didn't have any problem with `erection'.  Hmm..Save your money until the author either finishes it altogether, or for something else.  Anything else.