Review: Cute story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 20, 2013
This was a very cute story, although it could use a good editor. The story lines were believable, but there were a lot of unanswered and unexplained things happening in parts of the story. First the author brought up the subject of Lupus, but then sort of dropped it mid-stream. There was a short mention at the end, but only to say that Jaise had tested positive for the disease. I would have like to hear more about what kind of impact that would have on her life from here on out.I also didn't really understand why Colin would go on letting people think he was gay? You'd think he'd want to set the record straight, right?And why would Jake, Jaise's ex- fiance', suddenly want her back when he's already been outted by her, as a gay man?Another thing....Why did Emily's father think she would be much better off living with her brother? It seems to me that asking a lot of his son and his family. I mean if her own parents aren't able to control her, what makes them think their son can?Would I recommend this book? Sorry....but probably not.