Review: It is a good beginning
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2014
A fan of sci-fi and military novels, this is a lot of one and a little of the other.It is a good beginning. As first chapters go, I have seen poorer efforts. As a stand alone book, chapter, short story does not work. It needs the rest of the episodes. It is engaging enough, it tickled my curiosity, but no further.Essentially, it begs too many questions to make me commit to the rest of the story. Is the Prime a bad guy? Is the Prime an undercover good guy? What happens to the heroic pilot? Did she died a heroic death or was she rescued? All good questions, well set up and reasonably structured to make you curious. But, to me, I want to be entertained, not lured. Therefore, although good, I wish it had some closure. I wish it worked with me not to get me.Check it out and, if it hooks you, you will probably enjoy the rest of the episodes.