Review: Too Many Errors
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
The storyline for this was pretty good. Unfortunately, there were a LOT of grammatical errors, and for such a hot adult novel, Caylee seemed quite juvenile. I got about 34% of the way through before abandoning this book. It seemed more like a first draft than a finished novel. It needed an editor in the worst way. The author shows promise. I really though the story line was original and interesting, I just wish Caylee would've been more likable and more mature. 2.5 stars for an original idea and for HOT sex scenes! Clean up the rest, and I'll definitely try Candice Stauffer again!