Review: Good but could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 19, 2012
A good first book. I would have gone up to a four but the author's punctuation was pretty bad. This distracted from the story. The dialog was stilted as well. Those are my negatives. I did like the plot. The characters were believable and you could root for the good guys. I would buy a sequel. I just need a comma or two put in the right spot.