Review: liked it some
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2014
I have to say at first the story was too slow and there wasn't much of a plot.  I also think the book needs some serious editing with the timeline.  I kept getting confused about what day we were on because on one page I thought several days had passed because I knew she'd been home talking to her friend about Matt/Mike and then she would say she'd just met him that morning and gotten caught reading 50 Shades.  There were several instances of the days not making sense.  I found it quite a bit unbelievable that dying his hair and putting in neon green contacts would make anyone not know who he was.  I kept wondering why I was reading this book.  THEN, his trip to Detroit came along, and I was laughing out loud.  I wish the whole book had been like this instead of Lydia second-guessing herself and being woosy.  The ending was expected--hated that it is a "trilogy" especially since Lydia and Matt/Mike are so in love/lust with each other that she's going to end up with his best friend for part two, but I guess that gets back to the point of the two men wanting a new threesome partner, which brings up issues about them I don't want to know about.  I won't spend $3.99 each on the next two books because I'm really not into what is inevitable.  This did have  that humorous chapter or two that made it almost worth my time.