Review: Needs Edit Overhaul!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2014
I really had a hard time with this one because of the many, many typos, misspelled & missing words and choppy & repetitive sentences. The storyline was okay but I have a real problem with reading things like "little lone" & "ease drop"…I am surprised an author with a series can really think these are actually correctly spoken…they should have been "let alone" & "eavesdrop" these were just way too distracting. It was hard to take seriously or try to get into the story with all those distractions. I expect a little more when purchasing a book. I'm glad this was a free one for me.  Just too many errors to lose yourself in this one. Major editing would really help! Sorry to be so harsh but it's frustrating to an avid reader.