Review: Totally Unbelievable
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 3, 2013
I downloaded this book, even though it was a part 1, which I hate.  I expected to like it.  Decent premise.  Good idea, but totally unbelievable once the story started.  I was actually okay with it until (SPOILER ALERT) she gets out of the pool, totally naked, and they start playing with their phones while she is kneeling in front of them.  I mean, REALLY?  Seriously?  Forget for a minute that kneeling on concrete is beyond difficult, and think about it.  I couldn't read anymore at that point.  You are asking me to believe that someone who has never done anything in the BDSM realm is going to just stay kneeling while the men in question play with their phones.  Unbelievable.  Since she was too stupid to walk away, I did it for her.  I understand this is fiction, but seriously, don't insult my intelligence.