Review: Enough already
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2012
The good:The idea of the story is certainly interesting.It's easy reading.The writing style itself is captivating.The bad:This I-fall-for-everyone-I-meet quality of Rayla's is getting just a little bit ridiculous. She hasn't had much interaction with some of her suitors, thus has no reason to 'love' them. Her indecisiveness is borderline phony. I think the author has created all these bonds just to drag out the story and make it more "juicy" (it isn't) to make the stories a little longer. Get to the point. The ending was absolutely ridiculous. Sometimes I wonder whether the author herself has really considered where the story is going. I wondered whether she ended the book where she did because she didn't know.In addition, this story has the same punctuation errors that plagued the last one. A lot of commas are needed. A editor should be able to fix that up. Hopefully, they'll get a good one for the next one.The series has a lot of potential. It's worth a read, but it just needs to get on with it.