Review: Not bad, but too little character and plot info
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2013
Not badly written, this could have benefited with a final edit to add a few commas and other bits, to make reading and understanding easier.Plot Spoiler - Boy meets girl, boy runs away. Boy comes back 10 years later. Sex overcomes everything.The writer has managed to get a balance with lots of sex, but no gracious vulgarity. There is a story, although it is a bit brief and could have been fleshed out to improve the book. You get an idea of what type of woman Charlotte is, but not really who Dane is.This is 56 pages, if it were a little longer at around 70 more information could have been added to make it a more interesting read, and to encourage the reader to buy other books by the same author.