Review: An interesting read.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2013
The story line was well structured but there were problems in character development and the use of the English language. At moments, I didn't know if I were reading a young romance book or something for 18+.I thought it was strange that everything was in the present tense even when it was grammatically incorrect. The typos took away from the story. Yes I am being harsh. There were some excellent points showing the incredible potential of the writer. It was brilliant the way the author continued the sisters' jealousy by matching them with bodyguards who happened to be twin brothers so the rest of the world thought Emma, the albino, was dating her sister's boy friend. This was also a great advertising stunt. I am repeating myself that the story itself was superb but without the proper character development, the reader cannot see it.Had the story been longer, the author would have been able to expound on Emma's character. Emma is intelligent, vibrant, and has a great vocabulary. Is it realistic that she depends on her little friends that she has created in her computer? As moments, we see her as a child at others, she is a best selling author who writes a book in 24 hours.Jackson is also portrayed in a dark light due to the lack of words. More explanation is needed. Once again character development is the week point to a story which has potential of being a great book. If the author were to re-edit the story, and develop his characters, he would not have to change the plot.To be consistent with my comments, I am giving this book 3 stars.