Review: I liked it, but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 1, 2011
The story really needed to be longer, just as I'm starting to get to know and like these characters, they're gone and the story is over. And yes, a few plot points could have been fleshed out more, it would have made the story so much more enjoyable.The author is definitely a good writer, they just need to write more!