Review: Editing Clearly needed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 8, 2014
This book was obviously written by an adult because of the content, but I seriously had doubts after a couple of pages. The grammatical errors, spelling, punctuation and so on were just horrid. Whoever edited this book clearly did not have the first idea what they were doing or just didn't care.The characters were flat. One dimensional, at best, and the quartet mating seemed to be off. There was no clear meshing that one would expect in a mating story.While the idea has merit, I still feel as if this is just this authors attempt to taking something they've read elsewhere and turn it into something that is theirs because I feel that I've read this story before, albeit a better version.