Review: Decent book but atrocious editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2014
I don't like to write bad reviews but I'm hoping the author will take this as positive criticism.  The story was interesting and the characters appealing, but the editing was atrocious.  I'm not sure there was any editing  There is nothing worse when you're reading a book then to have your attention interrupted by grammatical errors as well as wrong words and repeats, and there were many.  It was a bit too long, as well.  I did finish it because I was determined but I won't read the sequel because I can't trust that it won't be the same.