Review: Average of 3 Stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 19, 2013
First of all, I want to say that I really liked the story. The idea behind it was great, really. It was the editing and writing style that left a lot to be desired.There were many many times when an extra word was added that didn't belong or there was a word completely missing that made me have to re-read sentences a few times until i could figure out what the author was trying to say.Then, there was the writing style. It was all written in the present tense, first of all. i don't know why that made it feel akward, but it did. And then, the author had a very limited vocabulary. The same word would be repeated over and over when talking about something. This wasn't that big of a deal through a lot of the book, but it was especially disturbing during the sex scenes. They were beyond uncomfortable.So, I would give it 4 stars for the story, but 2 stars for the editing and style. I am averaging it out to 3.