Review: Really wanted to like this book
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 4, 2012
OK, the book isn't that bad, but i just couldn't love it. The story is good and has a lot of promise. BUT, the character development and plot development are simply too flat and one dimensional. The wording and phrases used by the characters are awkward and stiff. Emotions are flat, reactions to events are skewed, muted, and not realistic. At times the writing was so awkward that reading it made me uncomfortable. It just feels "off" to me. Maybe some input and guidance from a good editor would help?