Review: Another viewpoint
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2013
I don't like writing reviews, but I had to respond to the first review listed for this piece. Although she has some credible concerns about the apparent lack of an extensive talk on limits and safewords between the two men in the story, sometimes those things do get brushed aside in passionate situations, both real and fiction! And the dom's insistence on honesty and keeping one's word was realized near the end of the story. This wasn't an insta-love story, but a relationship that can evolve past the insta-lust that gripped both men, leaving the story on a hopeful note. And sex scenes can be a matter of taste; I personally found them to be more realistic and fun than the last reviewer did! Sex can feel mechanical and odd until a touch becomes an ignition point and both parties get swept up into the moment, so nothing in this story seemed out of place. This story is about an inexperienced dom-to-be who finds a subby context to his pleasure, while the practiced, older dom rekindles a buried interest in bottom play, and I see this story as a growth in Miss Dare's storytelling ability and imagination.