Review: Wonderful, but needs proof reading
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2013
Such a great story except for all the misused homonymsPLEASE hire a competent proof reader - it is so incredibly irritating to be jarred from the story by such errors, and, what's worse, careless writers are teaching these same errors to  their reading public.For example, "tale ends of summer", providence should be province, "mantel of authority" should be mantle, a cat bears (not bares) kittens.