Review: Short and formula
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2012
{I'm pretty sure there will be spoilers} - It was a quick read, and I like the idea of a physically imperfect hero. But everything is a little 2-dimensional. There's a lot of telling not showing, a lot of themes touched upon but never delved into which could have made it a longer more fleshed out story than this one is. I dunno, maybe we want to have Grant talk to Belle a little bit about how he feels about the accident that left him horribly scarred? But we can't because she's too busy being the damsel in distress and he's being the required alpha to save her...sorry, I was yawning there for a minute.Also, I'm thinking of starting a petition to demand at least a partial refund from Amazon for every romance which includes the phrase "exhaled the breath she didn't know she was holding." That and a whole bunch of other romance cliches are in here. But even if we do know Grant and Belle in only the most superficial of ways, they are interesting and you end up rooting for them. Its just semi-amateur writing, plot and character development.Like popcorn, it's tasty for a minute but not fulfilling.