Review: Amateurish
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 23, 2013
I bought this second book in the series by mistake. The first was poor but this was even worse. The language was stilted and amateurish. E.g "as I have promised you all your life, I am in your corner. It is getting late. I have to go. "Puh....leeze!!!The Theron's are 'going extinct' ?!"We are no longer at war at present but it is DETRIMENTAL (?!) (surely ESSENTIAL ) that we find women to bear our children or there will be no more Theron Warriors. "They are apparently going to avoid this fate by kidnapping FOURTEEN (14) women?Sorry. As far as I'm concerned the whole thing's rubbish.