Review: Werewolves, Vampires, and Demons- where will this author go next :) ?
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2013
I found this on a "free erotica" list and couldn't resist. The blurb drew me in: werewolves & vampires! Seeing that it was a short sample, I settled in for an enjoyable, quick read and Ms. Embers provided. I was enthralled with the struggles (both external and internal) that Caroline and Raphael share provided for a tense and amazing romance. The reason that I give her a 4 instead of a 5 is that I feel she would have done better to have at least one beta reader suggest places where she could have tightened her language, said things in a better way. I hope to continue in part #2 and find that her writing has improved. I'd really like to see what happens with Raphael's uncle and "the games."