Review: Check Your Work
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2013
I love the colorful images and the story is great UNTIL I get to the part where her pet is..... It will be very devastating to read to kids and will make some cry. It is not a story I would read to kids. You might also want to check your spelling and punctuation. Most sentences don't have periods at the end and I noticed at least six misspelled words. You might want to change the ending and resubmit. Don't make kids cry!