Review: The writing was impersonal
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 28, 2013
The only way to hook a reader is by making a story not only engaging but relatable. An author can only do that by writing it in the voice that enables a reader to do so. But this author failed in that. She kept on referring to the heroine as the 'young intern' the hero as the 'CEO' and even the lawyer as the old head lawyer of the company. It's so impersonal and standoffish that as a reader i feel pushed out of the book and it should be the exact opposite. Because of it i feel dissuaded to keep reading therefore stopped.