Review: i am not one to trash any author i think author tried a bit
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2013
it just didn't think that it was delivered right. The idea is there but i found it lacking. I was really frustrated by the author's redundancy. if i had to read the word "panacea" one more time i was going to scream. Please find other words and revisit your work for punctuation and grammar. the other thing that i was really frustrated about was not just the similarity to 50 shades and Crossfire - but the actual same scenes as these stories on here. in need of new material. i think this story could've been better without copying those others.