Review: Needs editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 15, 2013
I found Eva to be a Wallflower, and Garrick to be...a word I cannot say....What was there to like about him? He had no endearing qualities, and performed no redeeming actions.There were problems with verb tenses, and I don't even know where to begin with the punctuation issues.Having said this, I think it was a good story. It has potential. I advise the author to pull it and publish an edited version. It will be well received.