Review: Not Up To Standard
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2011
This story was disappointing.  The link to Club Esoteria is distant and the story conflicted with itself.  (Warning Spoilers)The premise is that our heroine (Megan) desperately wants her two landlords (Jack and Quinn) but they're gay.  We discover early on that the men are actually bisexual and looking for a lady (Megan) to join them.This is fine, what gets me is that they guys are not Doms and are meant to have almost no knowledge of BDSM but are willing to learn in order to give Megan what she needs.  BUT!  From the first confrontation between these three, the men threaten spanking, command her sexually and order her about generally.  What was left to learn???A bad guy/Dom is introduced at the start of the story and makes a reappearance so our heroes can be heroes and save the girl, but it feels disjointed.  In fact the entire story (brief as it is) feels disjointed.Given the depth of development that appears between the characters in the previous books, this story is severely lacking.