Review: Run on, run on
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 20, 2014
Yikes. I couldn't make it past the first page of this book. Editor, please, to teach this author the dangers of run on sentences. Every sentence was jam packed with back story and information. If I have to read at the speed of slow and then re-read to make sure I get all that ... I'm done.Also, the narrator is omniscient, meaning it's as if she's looking down from heaven to tell the story. Boring ... I want to be in the heroine or hero's head, please, building empathy for one of them.