Review: Seriously pissed off ending
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 23, 2014
Ok pretty good book. Esp for 99 cent special. Super duper annoyed that it ended where it did. I thought I was buying a complete story. But no. The other books are 9 & 10$ with only 200 to 240 pages, so I guess I won't be finding out the rest of the story unless the price goes down.There were several typos and grammar errors, which I can over look. What I don't like is seeing grown ass women using ass every other word, talking like they are 15.There were some questionable paragraphs such as the main girls talking about not being able to go out any where, then in the next sentence saying they were going shopping....maybe an oversight, IDK.Women having abortions and surgery, then getting up and like nothing happened, little far fetched. I get they are " gangsta" but not super hero.I liked the story, would have given it more stars but to many weird typos and paragraphs that just don't jive.Another thing.....about the baby. She's not related by blood, the father was killed off, (he was the son of the partner, which we never hear anything about!!) So I don't get that whole scenario!! Should have left that alone, very disturbing.