Review: Find me Mike O
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2014
Okay MikeYou thanked me in the past for my review.The plot of this book was great. The story kept me on my toes.However, you have a big problem once your characters open their mouth.Everybody sounds the same so nobody stands out and therefore nobody ends up being special.You have street people, Fbi agents, cops, etc. All using the same language style, and that's a problem.Plus there are dozens of editing mistakes in this book.Also, unless the narrator of the story is a character and the book is in first person they really shouldn't be  using such bad grammar.I can help you fix all this.I bet you can guess how to find me if you want my help.