Review: UNREAL
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 13, 2013
and sophmoric.  The person who wrote this writes as though they are either a young teenager or mentally stuck in that phase.SPOILERSThis "book" is only 8 chapters. It ends abruptly; which is both a relief and an irritation.  At the end of chapter 7 Logan asks her for a date."I have a friend at the Stanley. I wanted to take you on a ghost tour," Logan explained. As soon as it was out of his mouth, he was slightly embarrassed. It seemed like a fun idea, but out loud seemed silly.Zo's face brightened. "I've been wanting to go do things in Estes! So many guests are coming and telling me all these fun things. That sounds really fun!" She started to grow excited.Logan was relieved. He had finally found a friend that enjoyed what he did.Nearly at the end of an alledged romance novel he finds a friend?  Aahh, how sweet.And it gets worse; chapter 8 (the last chapter) states the date was a success and he takes her home.  She asks if he wants to watch tv.  He follows her into the bedroom, where the tv is, and immediately starts helping her undress and they have sex.  Except for a couple of pages all of Chapter 8 is them having sex.  And then------Zo snuggled down into the covers, secretly smiling to herself when Logan's grip around her tightened. She started to fall asleep, and could barely hear him when he whispered into her ear."I take it back Zo. I want love. And I want it with you," he whispered against her hair.AND THAT'S ALL FOLKS.Even if you can get past the childish writing there still needed to be about another 8 chapters.  This book ended really before it had even begun.  Is this story supposed to be the 1st half of a book hoping they could get you to buy the rest of it?If so, it's not going to work with me.  Even though it was free, I'm deleting it from my Kindle.  And it's definitely nothing I'd want to read again (sorry I read it the first time) especially if it's a stand-alone ebook.  Even if it were written much better, it's way too short with no actual resolution.  Certainly nothing to explain or go from finding a friend to hopping into bed and declaring love.