Review: It has the potential for greatness
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2014
While the concept for this series is brilliant, the writing is less so. I would have given 5 stars if it weren't so very tedious to read. Good thing the plot and storyline kept me enthralled.When I started reading the first installment I honestly thought it had been written by a tween, that's how poor the grammar, spelling and punctuation are in Doorknob Society.Well, not the spelling so much as incorrect word usage. Please learn the difference between past and passed, than and then, to and too.But I kept on reading because the concept is that good.And please, while you're rewriting, take it out of first person! It's almost as annoying to read first person as it is to listen to tweens talk.I will continue reading this series because it IS so good, I'm hoping the whole grammar, spelling and punctuation errors are due to the self-publishing rather than the author's fault.