Review: 3rd generation
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 22, 2012
The idea is clever, but the writing is awful.  Grandma "was stood" in the kitchen???  Arla "was sat" at the table???  I ran with it thinking this was a quirk to make a futuristic story sound different, but then there were too many other sloppy writing errors, proving these mistakes were not part of the story.  Also, the story was too short, not really a complete novel, and should have been advertised as a piece of a book.  It essentially goes no where.  Too bad, because I really wanted to like this.  If the author would take some writing lessons or get a writing coach, she might do much better with her clever story ideas.