Review: Good story! Few problems.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2013
It is an excellent story. There are a few typos. But what kept throwing me off was the use of past tense/present tense, third person/first person. The story would be flowing along and I'd have to stop and go back and re-read a couple sentences because the perspective changed. It would and could be a five-star novel with a bit of editing. I really liked it and had to finish it so I read it in a day.