Review: So much wasted potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2013
The premise sounds interesting, the characters are good and the story could be awesome but sadly it isn't so due to the lack of consistency and horrible editing.  The book starts slow, gets better, slow again, suddenly I am very interested, then slow again and in the end I am left saying "that's it? am I missing the end?"  The book as-is sucks but with a good rewrite it has the potential to be awesome.  The author does have a great imagination and I was impressed with some of his ideas, it just needs to be executed better.I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for a review.