Review: Likable characters
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2014
The characters are enjoyable.I read it in full but it dragged in the middle and there are three instances where I went back and had to reread because of confusion.  Two of these instances were direct contradictions of the story already written and one was simply due to a lack of clarity.  The author seems to have a fondness for the word shall in one area of the story.  There are instances of spelling and use of the wrong words but an editor could help immensely.The story and characters were engaging and I would probably give this author another chance.