Review: Short Romance
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 8, 2013
I want to be upfront and say that I read this solely because its free. In the beginning I wanted to like the story, there were several opportunities for the author to add in a little drama and a little suspense but it just wasn't there. The premise of the story was pretty good but due to the lack of detail, it wasn't great.Bailey a young and caring women whose taken custody of her niece, looks to the child's father for support.  sounds reasonable...only the Steven (billionaire) had no objection to a women he's never met claims of his fatherhood. Really? No man just accepts anyone's words of him suddenly being a father (not in this situation).  After Bailey and her niece move in..the story gets a little creepy. The man who fathered a child with Baileys deceased sister is all in 2 days trying to fill her up in the hallway...GROSS!  Bailey, having grown up in a religious household, as briefly mentioned, manages to let this billionaire, have his way with her, touching and fondling her. Clearly she lacks self respect. No matter who or how rich a man is, he should show respect.The "romance" (more like raunchy) was sporadic and random. His immediate lust for her was off-putting and her weird sense of innocence made the story just bad. I generously gave it two stars because the story really did have potential to go somewhere and the characters, if developed properly, really could have been interesting and well-rounded.