Review: Good
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 6, 2014
The story line was good. Characters were believable. The writing lacked quite a lot. Three early male characters names begin with M. Now you may think my point is petty, but keeping them separate was hard. The story begins in present tense, but then switches to past. There are obvious typos that should have been avoided. And, I couldn't help but notice the fairy tale structure and vibe. That was too strong.