Review: Great book!!!! But...Ms. Lace, get an editor or Beta reader! You're the bomb, but the mistakes take away from your talent!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 28, 2014
This author is creative, exciting and always keeps you entertained. But...she clearly needs and editor or beta reader.Lukas and Nicole meet when his company does work for hers. Nicole is a 'b....!' However, she happens to be a single mother to a young adorable child. Lukas is brought into her life through her child.  Nicole doesn't like Lukas and she treats him horribly. Nicole is disrespectful and just down right angry at the world.One night, Lukas is the hero and saves Nicole's daughter from harm's path. Nicole doesn't really thank him, she continues to treat him like crap. Lukas stands up to her and in that fight their relationship begins.They have great sexual chemistry, but Lukas has a lot to overcome because of a death in his family.  He's not willing to concede to the things that Nicole secretly wants, like kids.Nicole does the unthinkable and Lukas is angry. Their relationship struggles from there and one of them must admit how they both feel.Pros:Chemistry. Lukas and Nicole are a hot couple. He pours off the pages.Lukas is an alpha male.Nicole's daughter is adorable.Realistic story line.Plot isn't bad.Cons:GRAMMAR! It's not pretty. This is a 4.5, but I hate re-reading a passage for clarity. Even her synopsis at the end of the book has grammar mistakes. WTH! She's talented. A very talented author, but if she wants to reach the next level she needs a beta reader or editor.Why was Nicole so angry? Never really understood why.