Review: This might be for you if you like ghost shows.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 4, 2013
I am a major fan of The Haunted Collector and Dead Files, so this really fit right up my alley. The story itself was a five star, loved it. The beginning was kind of shaky, felt more like it was rushed. I don't see someone really rushing in sobbing when they've had at least traveled long enough from the incident to calm down. The middle started to pick up, and I thought the ending was great. The editing was only a little shaky in the beginning. Then again when I get into a story I care less about that kind of thing.The investigator is a little OOC (out of character) at times. I don't see why he would invite someone to stay with him before asking if someone knew another person in the area. That felt kind of weird. There was another instance too with a child's toy that felt unprofessional, but he seems to nail it with his second action. I also really liked the way he handled someone on the phone. It was not an easy phone call to make, and I never really thought about how something like that would be discussed on the phone.Anyhow, great story nonetheless. I'll be watching and waiting to see what Edgar Sullivan does next.