Review: Good book
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2014
Her and Kasey was a problem and I was relieved when she figured that much out. I was pulling for her and Dominic to be together but of course she had to let it be seeing that he wasn't ready. I thought she was moving way too fast with Zo but he seemed to be the perfect match for her. It seemed like she couldn't catch a break for nothing. I loved how all the ladies put school first even though they seemed like they would all be knocked up after the first couple chapters. One thing that bothered me was the errors in the story. I usually overlook them but when an editor is named it makes me look at the errors even more. I hope the author didn't pay too much for an editor because if so she should get her money back. I understand word count but the context and characters didn't match the words by a long shot. It becomes distracting to the story and takes away from what's going on. It would've been better if the author just left the natural language instead of the "I will, I am, You are" when in reality it would've been more like, "I'm, I'll, and You're".Here it is I thought Zo was the one but he did a total flip. I figured the ex fool was going to still be a problem but he needed to go way worse then he did. Dominic is still my favorite and Howie seems to be the most mature in his relationship then them all. I'm not liking the back and forth with her and Zo but I guess the drama was needed to move the story along. I still don't understand why Nash was there and what the plan was but I guess the next book will fill that in. Can't wait to see what happens with Zo in jail and the surprise waiting for her at home.In all this was a good book with just enough drama and crazy to keep you reading. Can't wait for part 3.