Review: A waste of time
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 3, 2013
Very poorly written. Amateurish. The person who put down these words is definitely not a writer. To the "author": Take a writing course. Even the most basic free course online would help you produce something better than this. No believable plot, no justification for the characters' actions, and it needs major editing to get it up to a rating of 1. A waste of time, even being free. This is the kind of story that shows just because someone can self-publish their work doesn't mean they should do it.