Review: An entertaining very long short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 23, 2012
The story is written in first person from three points of view - Linda, the dead ghost, Mike, the boyfriend who killed her, and Trent, the detective that Linda hires to find her body (who Mike thinks is an exorcist.)There is a lot of swearing and foul language in the narrative, but I think it is in keeping with the personalities of the characters. They are crude people.Linda is very vengeful and decides to harrass and haunt Mike. She is creative in her tortures. Mike has made an enemy of almost everyone. Trent is trying to avoid Linda as much as possible and find the body.The story has a very twisted ending.I didn't find the first person points of view difficult to follow. I also was not offended by the swearing. I thought the story was entertaining. I would give it 4 out of 5 stars.