Review: Badly needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 13, 2012
The story was interesting. The characters were well drawn. Unfortunately, the flow of the book came to a standstill with missing words or the incorrect usage of words i.e. affect for effect; lay for lie; sat for set; plus others more blatant. I wish I'd made a list.Grammar errors: "A intense heat";"Where did he wait at?";"Each were" instead of "Each was", etc.Many questions asked in the story were not answered. I won't list because it might be a spoiler.If these types of things don't bother you, perhaps you'll enjoy the book.