Review: Enjoyable Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2013
The story is great and captured my attention. It could definitely use some tightening up and some good editing and formatting though. I was easily distracted by missing words, punctuation, and so many information dumps that didn't quite fit in spots of the storyline and were unnecessary. This could be a top seller with a little help :) The twists in it kept me reading until the very end.