Review: horrendous grammar
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 13, 2012
Horrendous grammar, really interferes with the story.  One example, just 2-3 pages in:"Signing off on the last farm records, a shouting erupted from the hallway."Also, the characters are cardboard.  They lack the kind of life that, for example, Mary Balogh's have.