Review: A Candy Bar in Ohio!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 22, 2013
I wish there was a Candy Bar in Ohio! These were so much fun to read! And I think that this is the first time I've ever read a series where the person the story is set around is NOT one of the main characters!I loved all of the characters and both of the first two books! I liked the storyline of the third book, but I'm afraid it wasn't very well written.  This is why I'm not giving it a perfect score. Spelling and grammar errors, even though they annoy the heck out of me, I can usually get past.  But there were some major contradictions between the first and third book.  I can't say too much without giving some things away, but some of the descriptions don't match. That's as far as I can go.Don't get me wrong.  I read the third book all the way through.  Once I could get my mind around the contradictions, I really enjoyed it. If the author decides to expand from a trilogy to a series, I'd definitely ready more (for instance, why not write about Ellen? Or the chick (can't remember her name) that tried to get Lydia fired? Why she acts like that could be a great story!).All in all, I really enjoyed the stories and thought the author did a great job!