Review: good read but
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 5, 2013
the story is quite good. the characters well fleshed out. unfortunately it needs an editor. too often as you become engrossed there are those typos. grammatical errors and strange breaks in paragraphs. I returned it once because it was so distracting. but i had to know how it ended. it really didnt. cliffhanger fix it.