Review: Entertaining, but needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2011
The story was entertaining, though the numerous spelling errors and typos were very distracting. A few are admissible, but not to this degree. A fine edit would have gotten most if not all of the careless mistakes.That being said, the story was a fast read. Great for a lazy afternoon reading in the backyard, but not much more. The characters are very flat, and the mystery the author tries to weave around the main protagonist's purpose of the book was more of a withholding of facts that felt more like plot holes than careful planning for future books. Without giving anything away regarding the ending, I will say that it simply ended. The climax was not so much climatic as it was expected, and left the reader wanting. Again, though, something that could probably be remedied with another round of edits and some tweaking on the prose above and beyond the spelling.