Review: Too formal
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 13, 2012
The other reviewers were right about the use of language in this book. The author seemed to have a problem with using the word "because" and would substitute it with "for" (ex. She decided to stay home for she was tired).  It made the dialogue too formal and unrealistic in a contemporary setting. Also, some of the conversations between the girls sounded like five year olds and didn't fit within the scenes. I couldn't finish the book.