Review: This one is kinda meh...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2013
This had the potential to be a really good story but with every know romance cliche and the kitchen sink thrown it, it was a major letdown.  The heroine was a sweetheart but stuck on a man who was absolutely unworthy of the time of day.  The suspense/mystery portion was good up until a certain point but even that was predictable and even more over the top by the end.I do give big points for decent editing and prose,  I just think the book could have been so much better with more character development, more nuances in the reconciliation - basically the hero sees the heroine again and gets horny so he wants her?-  and better development of the villains in the story.  They seemed a bit cardboard.I also have to question the sincerity of the HEA,  in my book any man who stays with the woman he originally married as long as the supposed hero did and puts up with what he put up with is seriously in love with woman and definitely would not find lasting happiness with the heroine in this story.  All in all it was a great effort grammatically but poor in plot and a very unsatisfying romance.