Review: Felt too rushed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 9, 2012
There was just too much going on in too short a space in this story.  The author used a lot of words telling us about the great nature of their love, but there wasn't enough to actually show it.  I felt as if there were too many elements designed just to manipulate my emotions and make me feel as if I'd read something deeper than it actually was.