Review: A powerful story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2014
The story is compelling, but needs consistent tenses in the writing, and the grammar and punctuation need work as well. It's disconcerting to go from past tense to present tense and back again several times in the same sentence. And a few of the word choices made me think the author wasn't making too certain that autocorrect was inserting the right words rather than changing. The potential of this author's storytelling is amazing...she just needs to work on spelling, grammar, punctuation, tense, and consistent usage of the language. Definitely could use a good copy editor!