Review: Lovely story but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 19, 2013
I enjoyed this story a great deal and would have loved to give it more stars but there was an incredible number of instances where the need for better proof reading was glaringly obvious. In this day and age of Facebook and text messaging, there seems to be an acceptance of "creative" spelling and grammar.  The mistakes caused an interruption to the flow of the plot for me. There was even one instance of a character's name being one thing and then several pages later a different name. The first five letters were the same but not the last three. From that point on, I kept waiting to see which was correct. The story was much too good for such silliness.