Review: Ok SHORT story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 17, 2013
It is a good SHORT, very SHORT story.  Unfortunately, with tax I paid $6.08 for a story worth about $1.99.  In the future I will no longer buy books from this author that does not have a page count.Now on the story, it's good - not great - just good.  To me this feels like an early work of this author re-released.  The concept of the story is good - it's outline good.  It's choppy, lack clarity in the voice of who's telling the story and overall feels very rough draft.  It reads like the author wrote a free form story and then came back to edit.  It only went through one edit and that edit was done by the author who is too close to the story.  I struggled reading this because there were words, sentences, thoughts, concepts missing.  I really wish this story was read and edited by someone other than the author.  This book needed guidance to turn it from a good concept outline to a great story.I recently found this author and read her "Heart of Texas" series and was impressed.  However, after reading this book... I think I'll pass on all other books that doesn't have 10+ (honest) reviews.