Review: Interesting story idea but awful delivery
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 23, 2013
Too many grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes to keep a clear understanding.  I felt  as if a Russian woman was telling me a story with only the barest details.  Not worthy of a three except the story could have been great.  My suggestion to the writer is to rewrite this book when they have a better command of the English language!  (Hint: too many; going to the store; you have two too many to fit there.) also there = a place and their is belonging to a person!  I am sorry to be so hard on you but I hope that you can learn and grow and KEEP WRITING.