Review: NOPE -need A LOT of EDITING/PLOT DEVELOPMENT
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2014
1.5 -2 StarsI'm NOT ripping this book apart or will go into depths why it wasn't for me; but I'll mention the main things that weren't working for me.I'm somewhat disappointed because I know Bella Jewel's biker books were awesome but this book,nope, it was the total opposite. The story made no sense; the characters actions made no sense; their thoughts/feelings were out of the blue and the book lacked on cohesiveness. I was scratching my head several times because so many things were left unexplained.The book needed more time to develop; more time on editing; just more of everything. The ending -I was shaking my head because it made no effing sense.I still don't understand why William did what he did. His purpose taking 13 girls makes no sense at all and didn't get explained. Why is he speaking a foreign language?? No explanation their too; not even when we get introduced to his family or flashback into his childhood - it was a copy-cat of Pepper Winters' Q in my opinion and left a sour taste in my mouth. Plus, in the beginning #13 knew he speaks Romanian and then towards the end she asks him what language he's speaking -like really ?? These were the things that made me shake my head and bugged the hell out of me.And #13 *sigh... she was just all over the place and nope, she was nothing for me at all. Her thoughts, actions and desires came out of the blue and didn't fit the surroundings or the situation she's in.William wants to help the ladies? His method is weird and sooo wrong. What was the reason for the beating, or killing #6 ?? But yeah,he never meant to hurt the girl -riiiight! My had a great workout with my eye rolling.So nope, this book was NOTHING for me, and it needs A LOT of editing so the plot makes sense.Authors, please take your time to write a book -rushing isn't the right place while writing a book!! I highlighted so many quotes that made no freaking sense but I'll spare you with it. I pulled through and finished it so that no one could say I'm missing out on something but to be honest, it was a waste of my time where I could have read a great book from my own tbr.Maybe dark romance is NOT Bella Jewels strong side because as I said, her biker books rocked.