Review: Based on a dream?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 20, 2011
This story reads as if it were based on one of the author's dreams. It had vague portents of fear, such as in a dream that scares you, but doesn't make sense when you go to retell it.  You remember how it made you feel, but in the light of day, there is no true basis for the fear.Did the author have a weird dream and decided to build a story on it, trying desperately to link events in the dream and make it more than it was? That's how it came across to me. It is by far the dumbest story I've ever downloaded onto my Kindle and will be deleted from the device and the archives pronto.