Review: No no no
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2014
OMG!!! Seriously?!! The H and h's hormones were like that of a teenager. This story read like a first attempt at a romance. The author forgot little detail like the h working in a cubicle and then a couple of paragraphs later she was shutting the door to her office. She had a boyfriend she loved who died in the middle east and took an erotic writing class to help her move on, but a couple chapters later she telling her boss and loved him. There was no cohesiveness to the story that you could hold to to make the story work. I just looking at the story in disbelief and found myself repeating, "What?". I'm so not interested in the continuing of the "love" story.