Review: great story- needs editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 20, 2014
At the 70% mark the editing got really bad and marred a great story. I find Elizabeth annoying but am enjoying her and Gabriel. He is controlling and manipulative but Elizabeth can be really callous about her own safety.Good read, excellent characters and was well written except for the latter third.Read it. Worth the ride.