Review: excellent story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 10 4, 2013
I received this story for review and was pleased with it.  The POV was a man's perspective and the story flowed very smoothly.  I was especially intrigued with the hypnosis. Even though Monet dumped Clay like coward I cant help but like her.  I think the fact that Clay had such strong feelings for her spoke volumes through the retelling of this affair and made the reader love her just as well.  It is heartbreaking and fulfilling all at the same time.  What an adventurous story, hope your lip is ok :)  Bravo!