Review: Awesome Capture of a Hood Love!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 19, 2014
I'm 2% into this book and I'm ALREADY loving it! (Reviewing as I read) that dang gone Nona is a mess AND an hater! I'm liking Lucky and Ty they are a hoot and Ty is such a down arse cousin. Lol Nice is a fool for how he playing Nona ole stupid self lol this dude Los is a mess smh at him telling Lucky to dead everybody while he got still got his situation with Shyanne. I will admit that the whole virginity thing with _____ was stupid like how you're that old and don't know why you're bleeding after having sex?! Also the quickness with how she lost her virginity was......I don't know it's too quick when she has been described as a diff type of character but I digress. Maybe it's just the defiance in me but I'm not feeling the way that Los be talking to Lucky lol.There are some editing issues(missing words/misspelled) but not enough to take away completely from the book. Ugh! Lucky has become a whiner and it's annoying she is whining and getting upset about stupid things. Oh Lord Ty starting to become a whiner too UGH!! AND Keema too?! I can't with these whining arse women acting like girls lol. WELL! WELL! WELL!!  Lol Lucky ain't no punk!! She serious with them hands beating two skank bishes (in my Future voice) at the same dern time!! Lol and man oh man love will break a negro down!!!!! Lol it's not funny but it's funny as heck lol when them tears come you KNOW it's real lol. #OleCryBabyArseNegro lol LOVE IT! I don't understand Ty being with Douglass at all or how she went from this strong woman to this weak one. Lucky is getting on my nerves she bugging over too much and that is annoying. Either be with the man and trust him or leave him alone and cut out all the extra ish sheesh lol.Ok I can't get over this author's constant misuse of "Ivy League" by writing it as "IV League"!!!!!!!!!!! Because "IV League" as the author writes it is "4 league" in actuality but even if they wrote it I.V League it's still wrong. Smh clearly the author didn't use an editor but Google works just fine and it's free. Ok so Lucky has gotten on my LAST nerve she is whining too much, tripping too much, and acting like a immature child. Smh wait!!! Wait!!! WAIT!!!!! You mean to tell me that this book was THIIIIIIIIIIIIS long to have a part two?!!!! WTF?!!! Smh oh no I don't even care about what happens anymore. Lucky stupid for making Los go to jail for acting like a dang gone fool. Had she just talked to him like an adult then.....smh I'm not going to get started. Ty and _____  almost got on my nerves with back and forth and Ty wilding out. It's like these characters I've come to love turned into immature children.But ah well in my opinion I say get the book it is overall ok. Though I won't be getting book 2 because the author has made the lovable characters become unlovable. It's like at first their maturity level was on point as time went on the characters (the women) went from reading like women to high school girls. Now the author did great with the capture of hood love and the ups and downs of it for sure! However unlike me maybe you will like this book enough to care about book 2 hopefully the author will invest in an editor because they surely need to. Especially if they don't know the difference between your and you're and MAINLY Ivy League and IV League. Now this review is based ONLY on the contents of which I've read and not the author as a whole just THIS book. I'm not getting book 2 however the author's pen game was decent enough for me to buy another book from them outside of this storyline/series. Hope this review is able to aid in your final decision to purchase the book or not.