Review: ok, but aggravating
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2014
Ok, I have to say it really BOTHERS me when writers don't pay attention to their own details.  In chapter 2 our main female character has blonde hair.  Then in chapter 5 she has brown hair, then back to blonde in a later chapter.  No mention of her changing it.  Now on to the story:  our characters are "supposed" to be strong and independent, yet they are constantly proving otherwise.  When the story reveals a drug addiction in one of them, I threw my hands up in frustration.  Really??? He's successful, brilliant, and addicted??? The story reads like a jump across shifting sand.  No solid direction or believability.  Not interested in the sequel.