Review: Meh - Needs world building
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 27, 2012
It was great for waiting in line. It is about a 20 minute read. It was ok as far as it went but the I was not overly impressed with the writing nor the story itself. I found it to be a older teen book with elements of no suprise. I really didn't care for any of the characters, perhaps because it lacked world building. If you practice suspension of disbelief (beyond what you would for a paranormal story) you will like this short story. Oh, and don't ask for further explanations. Just go with the flow.With a little more world building and character design this could have been a great story but as it is do not expect much. It is an ok story, something to keep you occupied while you wait for the results of your test. I really believe the author will with experience could become a top notch, 'when's her next book coming out' writer.Formating on my kindle was slightly off, but that is far from the author's fault.