Review: Too many errors .
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2014
This could be a great story with a few adjustments.After reading the entire story I'm still not sure where the story is going.  It just seemed long and dragged out.  I've finally gotten to the end and there was no closure for me.  I'm thinking why would I read a second story.The plot is ambiguous.  Dom and Novi's storydidn't come full circle and I think the circle should have closed completely before the story ended.  Instead they tagged back and forth until the end and still didn't finish the game.  In other words I read an entire first book that didn't tell me what the heck was going on and the lead characters were as undeveloped as the story plot.  It was all suspense and no plot development.Now as for the grammar.  This book must have been accidentally released because it has way too many errors.  Spelling, wrong tense, and just not edited.The story has potential but I think the author needs to include the audience in on the plot more.  Don't leave them stumbling though out the story trying to figure out what's going on and still tell them nothing.