Review: Author in need of an editor
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 14, 2012
The story itself could have been OK, but the author is in need of an editor ASAP.  There were so many basic grammatical errors that it made it hard to read.  I had to re-read many parts just to get a clear understanding.  I eventually began to skip entire paragraphs just to get to the ending (which was entirely predictable).  I am so glad this book was free because I would have been upset if I would have spent any money on it.