Review: Good writing overshadowed by ridiculous elements
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2013
Honestly this wasn't that poorly written, I just had a hard time with many of the plot details and it isn't my type of book.  It's a shame because the light way the author weaves in the suspense portion was something I'd enjoy without the other elements.  The book was a little over the top for my taste.  The main character is starting a business with her friends selling bras and things to retailers.  The annoying part (my opinion only) is these ladies in every chapter find some reason to go out in public wearing the bras with little or nothing else.  In one chapter they even parade around in them, at a funeral.  I can't picture any of this happening and seems like such a silly element to have.  Would a restaurant really allow you to dine like that?  Doubtful.  It all detracts from what is otherwise an ok storyline,  If you are looking for a g rated romance this would not be it.