Review: CHILDISH...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2014
Okay I guess I'm getting a little tired as well as bored with these kind of storylines. Where the heroine is irritating, childish, standoffish, and plays too many games with the hero. And then you have the hero going over and beyond trying to win the stubborn heroine even though she really isn't worth it. On top of the H/H nonsense you have a storyline that has been repeated to death by other authors but actually pulled the story off better..the storyline being that the hero owns this damn property now and the heroine refuse to leave so she plays all these childish games and tricks on the hero..and like an idiot he just entertains it. This book could have been completed by Chapter 5...if that property is rightfully his and she refuse to leave he could have easily pulled rake as DUKE and got this settled in court within a fortnight. So basically this storyline was ridiculous from the start as well as uncreative. Give us something that *can* plausibly happen. I don't think this author's writing is up to par with my taste in reading.