Review: Great new author
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2014
I have been so lucky these past six months to find such great new Indie authors who have graced Amazon with their spectacular presence. Ms. McLean is one of them. Solid writing in both storyline and style, and major kudos to weaving in so well the flashbacks (sometimes flashbacks can be a weight around the readers head if they aren't done correctly). Every character (major and minor) were fleshed-out wonderfully, and their stories very interesting to read. This book drew you in from the first paragraph and didn't let you go until the last.Only two minor draw-backs (but VERY minor) in that I agree with another reviewer that maybe the author might want to get a bit more comfortable with writing sex/romance scenes- otherwise this could just be placed in Fiction category rather than Romance. The other is how it looks on Kindle: all compressed. Sometimes it was hard to delineate between paragraphs old and new, but the formatting might be Kindle/Amazon's fault and not an issue with the author.I do hope that the next (of many books for this MC club) will be coming out soon. :) Great job, Ms. McLean!