Review: Entertaining and Exciting
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2011
I enjoyed reading this YA thriller. It has a fast pace without being hectic, and a narrator who's a believably wavering between spunk and teenage angst. The plot is strong, well structured, and plausible.  The writing is smooth and flows well.  I liked especially the narrative voice, which is consistent and real.My only real quibble is with the punctuation. I found the bizarre dialogue punctuation - commas where conventional punctuation rules require periods - distracting, and sometimes it spoiled my enjoyment of the story. Maybe more varied body language (beside head-shaking, shrugging and frowning) would also be good.