Review: Didn't work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 21, 2014
freebie on amazon - strange little novella that doesn’t quite come together for me.  In a novella, with so little time to develop a story, the plotting has to be tight and the characterizations even more so, since your audience doesn’t have the luxury of pages and pages of text to get to know your leads.  Here, there is no palpable connection between the MCs, the heroine is seriously anxious and angry, and the hero has no discernible personality. The sex scene was clinical in nature and I really didn’t see how you could continue with the story, since there’s simply no emotional chemistry.  I don’t think I’ll keep reading to find out what happens next, unless the entire series ends up as a freebie.