Review: Not Bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 27, 2013
I really liked how this story started out. Knowing that it was only 18 pages going into it, I found myself wondering when it was going to deliver the Dominant, BDSM, Erotic Power promised in the description. The author spent a good amount of time getting there, which I liked, but when you finally reach the one sexual encounter it seems very rushed compared to the rest of the story.I was a little disappointed that the handsome fire-fighter who showed up at the scene of the accident turned into such an animal at the station, basically blackmailing the heroine into having sex. At that point everything went very fast. Because this story has a lot of potential, and it really wasn't bad, I hope the author adds a few more pages by slowing down the scene at the fire station so that the hero and heroine have a little more interaction between them before the sex scene.Well written with regard to formatting and editing, I only noticed a couple places where the wrong words were used. I would read more from this author.