Review: Sweet love story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2013
This short story was, as other reviewers have said, abrupt and forced in places.  The 'bare bones' of the story however are very sweet and appealing.  I think the author definitely could develop this narrative and polish it into a wonderful M/M romantic erotica novel.  I engaged with the characters, I enjoyed it very much.