Review: Well written and interesting!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2013
This 33 page story tells the story of a marriage on shaky ground that the couple hoped to fix by moving to the country.  At first, it seems as though they may have found common ground and rekindled their relationship, but that isn't really true.  When hungry children start to appear out of nowhere, they tend to shine a spotlight on what is wrong with their troubled marriage.The story was well told with beautiful descriptive phrases, but the ending, unfortunately, seems a bit abrupt and left this reader somewhat dissatisfied.  Except for the problem with the ending, it was an interesting story for 32 pages, but kind of fizzled on page 33.Overall, I would recommend this story to anyone who would like a well written and somewhat sad story.  Perhaps other readers would not have the same problem with the abrupt ending as I did.