Review: something missing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 29, 2013
I had a real hard time getting into this book.  Ellie's character is very ditzy, childlike and unpredictable.  Seems she does many things that do not make any sense.Spoiler#@$@#####@@@$$@#$#On bella isle she is escaping the man she was working for as governess to his child.  So after that life threatening escape, she takes another governess job?  Seems she would be to traumatized for that.Slade is a to good to be true man of many talents.  He is a ceo of a computer company tht employs 10,000 people.  He has a great build and prior jungle experience.  What a great person to choose because he speaks English.The 2 goons,  i highly doubt that once the revolution started they would have broke into the room.  Sound no longer matters, kick door in, start firing.Ellie falls on the mountain, they spend the night on the ledge. Then a few chapters were burned and don't show up because all the sudden we are in town, the revolt is ended, the bad guy is locked up and our H/h are now perfectly safe.I realize this is fiction, but their has to be a ring of reality in it.Im glad it was free.