Review: Alpha male falls for submissive twink
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2012
This was a cute story. I liked how sufficiently broken and scared Lark was of Declan and I liked how Declan had to essentially woo Lark since Lark was so damaged.The story is a nice one in a way where it leaves you with a bit of a smile (at least for me). Although the conflicts within we're not very extravagant they fit the story to match with the characters. I loved the fact that Sarah, an abused little shifter girl, was such a big part of the story but ultimately thought the story, especially Declan's 'accent' was not very consistent. Also, if Rainy and Cliff were not born in Ireland or ever visited, why do they have Irish accents? Wouldn't they have their way of speaking as those in Colorado do? Just a nagging thought.Overall, I enjoyed the story. They always start off very good, IMO, because they don't just hop right into the sack. There's always a little reluctance on one of the mate's part which I really enjoy because it means the other mate has to work for it. These books are becoming addicting, though. I already want to start the next one.