Review: Supposed to be a bit silly but...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2014
The book just came off more as annoying than humorous. I think I may have been trying to take it a bit to seriously, but some things like "bizzy" just irritated me.  I don't really mind her being picky. I get that some people are more irritable or specific than others and telling yourself to just not be bothered by something rarely works, so "settling" for something that you consider an issue (even if you have a ton of issues) can end badly.But Cherise just came off as really selfish and inconsistent. She's the one with the really specific scene fetish but she expects the sub to do all of the set up and pay for all the props and costumes (which will get quite expensive and time consuming if she is unwilling to ever repeat a scene). Then despite all the work William put into the first couple of scenes she seemed to just rush through them because "bizzy" was too eager to get it on. Or there's the fact that she gets so angry that he references a scene after it has ended, which was one of her many rules, but she can't be bothered to remember one of his few reasons that no Dom ever accepted him, namely the "doesn’t redden when he’s spanked" bit, and demands that he paddle himself until he's red (and then gets mad when he tries to use blush to comply with her order).But like I said in the beginning, I think I kept trying to take it more seriously than intended.