Review: This Is A Joke Right?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2011
I haven't even finished this book yet, and frankly I'm not really sure I will but I might only to get a good laugh. The writing is ridiculous Flint comes across as a robot and the author can't seem to find any other way to connect her sentences than by using the word whilst. Seriously?! She even uses it in dialogue, mainly Flint's, poor guy, must suck to have no personality and lack any human characteristics, then again he's supposed to be a shifter so maybe she thought she was being cleaver? The writing is beyond amateurish, written in first person, I'm pretty sure the author thinks we readers are idiots since she basically spoon feeds us everything.Here's a little taste of what this book brings to the table:-"No I'll be driving home tonight." He answered.- His reply hit me hard in the face, like a plank of wood.SERIOUSLY!? I could go on with more entertaining tid bits but I guess you'll just have to check out this delightfully dull story yourself. Be warned though, free might be too expensive a price for this one.Okay I can't help myself here's a little more from good ol' Flint:-I'm happy that I got to spend four hours with the beautiful girl who stumbled into the bar, where I play pool. I watched your face while you slept, and I put my jacket over you to keep you warm.Why thank you captain obvious for the update!