Review: Great story, irritating to read.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 13, 2013
The story is very engaging, and hard to put down once started.  Stars are taken off for the lack of editing found. There are numerous misspelled, and inappropriately used words, as well as weirdly placed hyphens throughout this book. It detracts from a smooth reading experience.  I noticed it in the other books in this series as well. In the future I hope someone proof reads the stories before publishing. I usually buy the print version of e-books that I enjoy, but not this time. I can't see spending money on books that are a testament to poor language and grammar skills.  Self-publishing should still include proof reading.  Story A+++++ Reading it C-