Review: Great Story, NEEDS A GOOD PROOF READING/EDITOR!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 10, 2012
I enjoyed the story, it had all the elements of a good romance, man and woman come together, conflict, misunderstandings, seperation, coming back together, more problems.....  BUT, there were so many errors that could have been prevented if only it had been proof read.  Some were as simple as the author did a find and replace and must have said replace all, without specifying full word.  When the main characters name is found embedded inside other words... simple editing would have made this so much easier to read.  Even spell check should have caught those.I would read this story again, if it were to be edited and updated.  Most likely would rate five stars then.