Review: Too many typos, lousy banter, and Marilyn look-alike too gaggy
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2014
The story was okay, but needs serious fine-tuning.  Dump the supposedly "witty" banter because it is just tiresome.  Once her physical appearance was described then drop it.  Suggest introducing it earlier in the story.  Too many characters introduced too fast and really were not necessary.  The book is good for long, boring layovers in airports.