Review: choppy start, but cute story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2014
Have you ever read something and thought "too much detail?" That was how this book started out. It made the first few chapters seem choppy because of a the descriptions. The dialogue as the book progressed got better because there was less place setting and action justifications bogging it down. Cute story, liked the characters, just needed some revising to make the read flow better.