Review: A Game of Two Halves - Knock Out Punch Pulled
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 9, 2013
The first half of this very well written piece of erotica fizzes with steamy action, for example, prior to and during Abby's visit to a restaurant on her first date are absolutely screamingly hilarious passages.  Unfortunately instead of pushing on and really driving Abby into a vortex of psycho-sexual humiliation, in the second half the hero tout court plain vanilla wusses out and proves himself to be less than what he advertises himself to be on the packet.Highly Commendables:1. Superbly written and edited.2. Neat basic story premise.3. Did I mention the first half?Could Have Done Better:1. Erectile dysfunctional second-half ending - but that's probably what most target readers were gagging for, so no biggie.2. Massive missed opportunity to raise the bar set in the first half: for example, Hero Guy signally failed to exploit the Happy Foursome potential offered by Abby's family meal.3. Another 30-40 pages (refer 2 above) would have put this work into Gold Medal contention.All in all, a fun romping read. Neat!