Review: Dissapointed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 30, 2014
The book itself was well written, but the plot was easy to see, which if you want an easy read, this is a good potential.I do not like to give away plot, but I do like to be up front about a poor rating. At the point in the book the Hero decided how the relationship had to be after everything that had developed between him and the heroine, and then getting the friend/partner of the heroine to help with his "plan" to make her stop loving him, I just stopped reading. It was already getting a bit tedious reading by then anyway. This was not even a good story at building suspense. It just fell flat as far as a suspense, and also as far as the partner was concerned with his "visions" , which should have been expounded upon more to catch the readers interest. I realize this is the first book in the series and it would be considered "world building", but a first book is suppose to floor you and grab you and pretty much drag you to the next book. This book didn't even keep me interested enough to finish and pretty much turned me off with how the relationship was handled. This story had great potential and the villain was better to read about than the H and h.