Review: Translation, please
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2013
Obviously English is not this writer's native tongue. There are good translators out there, hire one.If you can get past the stilted, unrealistic dialogue there's a nugget of story. Unfortunately, most readers won't work that hard, not should they. My suggestion to the author is really listen to the way people talk, and emulate that in his writing. The promo boasts a book written in the style of a famous mystery writer. It's not true. Comparing yourself to someone who has earned their fan base is sleazy.  Keep working on your craft and develop your own, true voice.