Review: Can't decide how I feel about this one
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 6, 2012
I have mixed feelings about this story.  While it was good and there were some different aspects to the standard pirate fare, there were other things that made me crazy.One of the things was in the very begin of the story the author sort of lead you to believe that Lianna was street smart, but illiterate, when she looked at the Serpent Madallion and thought it was "too bad she couldn't read a word."  Then about 40 pages later she is reading a newspaper article and later telling Zane about her mother teaching her to read.  All this caused me to look back to see what I had missed early on.  I HATE THAT.  I don't want to spend what precious time I have for reading thumbing backwards trying to figure out how I missed her being able to read.THe rest of the story went smoothly, some what.  I found I couldn't like Sadie and it made me crazy that Zane persisted in allowing her to stay on the ship.  She was a traitor to him and crew for Gods Sake.  I don't care what else she might have been, she was a canniving little trouble making traitor and she should have been thrown overboard.Basically I really have mixed feeling on this one and I probably would have given it a 4 star review without all the things that made me nuts.I say buy it if it's still under $2.00 but beware there are some rough spots, if you can get by them you'll probably like the story.