Review: I loved the story!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2014
This was a wonderful story.  Yes, there were mistakes, but it was still a good story. Even NY paperbacks have mistakes. No book is completely mistake free no matter how you edit it or have it edited.This author shows such promise!  Work on showing instead of telling, but keep on writing!  You have what it takes and writing more and more makes you a better writer.  Good job!