Review: good read but needs an editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2014
The story could be an absolute page turner... But it needs an editor. This is the problem with electronic self-publishing, one doesn't have the editing services one gets as part of the publishing house process. I am a freelance editor and am available for consultation at lfc04e at my dot fsu dot edu. I'd be more than happy to assist. Good stories deserve good editors.