Review: felt like slapping the author for leaving me hanging.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 8, 2012
I would have given the story 5 stars if the writer had not ended the story on such a cryptic note.  It made the story seem as if the writer ran out of time and had to submit the story as it was.  It reminded me of a timed essay test that needs to be turned in at the exact time.The only thing I didn't like was the repetition of certain statements.  How many times did he apologize to Jessica? How many times Did he say the same exact sentence such as, "I told you I would always take care of you or I'll never leave you." That can get really irritating and tiresome.I really liked the use of single father character with a deadbeat ex.  Too many times we forget that not all women have what it takes to be a nurturing mother. I  found the story realistic except for Jessica's involvement but stranger things have happened.