Review: Where's the ending?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2012
I thought it was interesting for a short story and would have rated it much higher if it had a real ending. I mean I assume its a happy one but I rather know than assume. I mean the hero was a great anti hero and I would have loved to see more... It desperately needed more. It's also told from his perspective and although the queens actions speaks volumes, it would have been nice to know her thoughts too. The sex scene was lacking though.... all this build up and no foreplay? Though i can see where some might be offended by the slapping in the bedroom, im not. i know that its a common practice in many couples, especially if someone wants to b dominated in bed like the queen wanted. The story really did have some nice elements.  Dardanus is a unique hero worth reading about. Overall though, feel cheated out of an ending. A sequel would be nice...