Review: Try Again
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 22, 2013
This author shows some promise but has a ways to go.  First of all, bottom line one should do a better job of proofing.  There were numerous typos as well as grammatical errors.  I will give some latitude for the grammar as I am going to assume that this person does not speak English as a first language.  The storyline kept me going, although it should have been cut.  It was much too long-winded in parts, which led me to skip over passages.  I think if this author keeps at it they will improve over time so I can only give this effort 2 stars