Review: Broken Story Line
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2013
This was a very confusing story. I had trouble reading it entirely and even understanding what was going on.The characters didn't seem completely thought out. The story line was broken and all over the place. This has the potential to be a good story if the main problems where fixed. I liked the setting and the type of characters and such, but everything was too scattered to really understand and/or enjoy.