Review: I like the story line but the characters could have more depth.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 14, 2010
I enjoy the beginning of the story. I like the thought of an impoverished cowboy burdened with a child finding love with a doctor. But more could have been given to their relationship development. Luke is supposedly straight all his life. More could have been expressed before these two men get together. Granted this is a novella but this is not my first from this writer. Jan Irving is capable of injecting more emotions and conflicts between her guys. And the words seems sparse in parts. A good read with a sweet story but it could have been more emotions driven to make it more moving.