Review: Hard to get past the lack of editing on this one.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2013
I downloaded this book months ago from Amazon and just got around to reading it.  If it was re-edited during that time, then Amazon should have uploaded  the new version for me since then.  If they didn't, and the author isn't aware of it, then I apologize for my review in advance.I understand that this is a debut novel for an Indie author.  What I can't understand is how  a book can have this many errors and editing issues on virtually every page.  Wrong capitals, wrong words, wrong quotes, wrong  plurals, wrong grammar--just... wrong.  And choppy, stilted sentence structure didn't help the flow at all.  I have a bad habit of highlighting errors as I come across them while reading on my Kindle.  I soon got too overworked to continue.  If I'd been using a pen, it would have run out of ink.The idea for the storyline was interesting, though the King Arthur/Merlin aspect was a little muddy; I assume that the world of Avalon will be addressed further in the sequel.  The characters were well developed, although their dialogue tended to be awkward and juvenile.  The plot's action was good, but then was ruined for me towards the end when the Evil Bad Guy did a sudden 360 and all his previous transgressions were forgiven.  The romance isn't bad, but was a little clumsy at times.  The story is reasonably resolved at the end, leaving things open for a sequel.The idea for the book was good (and enthusiastic),  but the writing, execution, and editing was poor.  Shows promise, but needs major work.  Sorry.