Review: Good book but lots of editing problems
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2014
I enjoyed the plot and the characters Eleanor (Elle) Westin & Clayton (Clay) Trent (Lord Bentley). Clay was a judgemental negative person who hadpretty much been brainwashed by his father & Elle was raising her brothers & sisters and was brought to London for a season by her nasty Grandfather. My frustrations with this book were the editing issues. On numerous occasions Clay was referred to as Lord Westin & I had to go back to double check I got his name right or if I misunderstood the section I was reading. Other errors included "women" instean of "woman" & "disciple" instead of "discipline". I found these errors were distracting enough to make the book not flow as well. But as the actual story is good I would probably read it again.