Review: A+ for Effort....
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 27, 2011
... and almost succeeding. What a wonderful concept for a story. Though I thought it could have been epic, with the topics touched and the pacing, it failed to reach that level. Deeply emotional, though sometimes it was too dramatic, great characters and plot. Some of the grammar was off causing to stop to try and figure out the author was trying to say. The ending left a little to be desired and at times I felt the heroine was bordering on the pathetic. But she redeemed herself a bit. I hope the author keeps writing but I wish Ms Lee would fix that grammar problem and work those punctuations. You'd be surprised how much those help :)All in all, if all those little things were fixed, this author is one to watch.