Review: More for the "Fifty Shades" crowd
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2013
I readBrie's First Day of Submissive Training (Brie, #1)a while ago and wasn't too impressed.  While it had some good scenes, it was just a bit too fantastical for my tastes.  But when this title became free, I thought I'd check out Brie's progress in the D/s world.Nope, still didn't like it.For readers looking forFifty Shades of Grey: Book One of the Fifty Shades Trilogytype erotica, this may fit the bill.  It's got the full basket of weirdness -- a girl who thought she was plain all her life who is actually irresistible to all men, a richer-than-god male main, and a inability to tell the difference between dominance and emotional unavailability.Sir doesn't seem to want a sub and -- while I missed what happened between them at the training center after their initial meeting -- I can't tell why Brie is so into him.  As another reviewer hilariously pointed out, the nicest thing he does for her in this book is buy her a single tomato.  That she is overwhelmed by this gesture gives you a good indication of what kind of relationship you'll be reading about.I prefer a slightly realer tone in my erotica, so I don't think I'll be going back to check what I missed.  When my main reaction to a male main is "Girl, what are you thinking?", I prefer to keep looking.