Review: Multiple points-No SPECIFIC SPOILERS
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 11, 2014
I don't want to throw specific spoilers around in my review, so let me say that, in general, when you have a no-nonsense female type of character that had to scratch and claw her way to the top of the business world, she would never be passive and not fight back in the days immediately following someone trying to take it all out from under her. Next, this same type of strong female character would never allow a total stranger unlimited access to her house her life, as well as the lives of her children, without knowing anything about him. Both of those things are out of character for that type of female personality.Now, with regard specifically to Morgan's Chase 1, when I stopped at the end of the book, nearly mid-thought, to find out that the "rest of the story" would be continued in part 2, I was frustrated. It didn't seem so much a part 2 as a way to break one story into two books. Then I found out that there were 9 parts of Morgan's Chase at a total cost of twenty-three dollars and decided I would quit at my free sample for some of the reasons I've listed here. I just don't think the characterizations in #1 are worth continuing on, though I do see incredible potential in this author's writing. I think the author just needs some mentoring on how to decide what is in the character's personality and what is not. Yes, they are HER characters, but if, for example, you have a character that is a total aggressive alpha male in business, but he goes to work and is too afraid to reprimand an employee, well, that is out of character for his personality. That is the case throughout this book which makes it really unbelievable, therefore, I would not recommend this book to other readers.