Review: Now well edited, good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2013
This book is now well edited, and there are no more spelling/grammar distractions from an excellent story.  I enjoyed Alyx, and the premise.  However, I get unhappy when anything sold as a whole book does not have a satisfactory ending.  This is clearly part one of a longer story, and not a whole book on its own.  This is particularly frustrating as Alyx does rescue her Marked near the end, and I think the book could have been written to have a conclusion.  Instead, the last few chapters are all the addition of new loose ends.  It feels like the author was so anxious to get us to read the next book that she didn't wait to end this one.