Review: Story Okay, Grammar Awful
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2013
The story's premise is not new but the execution was different and I enjoyed that element of the story. What really destroyed the read for me was the word usage and the number of grammatical errors in this book. Where a word should be plural it is singular, i.e. "He take his time." instead of "He takes his time."  "He shout at me" instead of "He shouts at me" or "He shouted at me." It happened so often, I began to wonder if, perhaps, the author talks this way.Whatever the case, she needs to buy the services of an editor before her next book because she has much potential as a writer.