Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 26, 2013
Having downloaded this book expecting to have a really good read, I was disappointed in how most of the story was depicted.There are some laugh-out-loud moments early on in the story, but after that things seemed to go downhill. I didn't like the heroine, because I thought she was a shallow twit. The hero was okay but a bit of a drongo in that he couldn't seem to realise that he had to actually have some training to run a department store.The romance was not convincing in that the characters hated each other, then liked each other and then hated each other again - and nothing had happened between them except - in time honoured fashion - a misunderstanding which could have been cleared up in two minutes. Of course that doesn't happen in romance books!The managers were unrealistic and silly. Far too many typos in this one and at one time the wrong name was used for a character!The premise was good, but unfortunately the script didn't maintain the fun of the first few chapters.