Review: Read more like a rough draft
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2014
This only received a two star rating because there was so much potential in this story, it just needs to be fleshed out.  So much room for improvement.Where is the build up? Without that I cannot connect with the characters and it's impossible to create tension between characters without some background.What happened with her family? Did they approve of her job? Do they know about her attractive boss? What about her friends from New York? She has to still be in contact with them, right?There are so many angles to a story that help readers connect with the characters.  This felt like I blinked, it was over and I could care less about the characters, so I was not persuaded to buy the next "book" in the series.I am glad this was free but I won't be buying any more from this author if this is how she writes.