Review: Writing Excellent- Research? Not so Much...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2012
Ms. Darcy? If you are into actual critique?  Gillian changes to Jillian on your own website!  This is the 13th Century, religion is not an afterthought but LIFE at this time, someone wondering around undressed would have been raped. Someone spouting about 'phones' having strange things in a carrier? Would have been a witch and? Would have been subjected to the trials of witchcraft.  Gillian was not believable for me, because of the obvious holes in the story.  Which could have been filled with research.  The term "Breakfast" would not have been used in 13th Century England, one would have broken their fast but the conjunction did not happen until later.  Also? Gillian spoke Middle English? She never thought of this? "Pink" would not have been a color term in the 13th Century, another word or term was probably used.I really liked your writing style, but I do not like you did almost no research in a book about history.