Review: 2.5 stars really
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2014
I rounded up to a 3 star becuase of the price.  My complaints are all with the quality of writing.  The author uses the same words in the same sentence frequently:  On the very first page...."the color the same rich brown as the rich wood of the booth."  This happens frequently.  Also the author is really bad about using two different verb tenses in the same sentence and paragraphs.The author also only inserts the thoughts and feelings of Hunter when it is needed (outside of what is communicated in direct dialogue).  At 50% of the way through the story we had only one paragraph of Hunter ruminating on his thoughts and feelings about Casey.And finally, I know it has been a while but if Casey is 25 then it would be his 7th (maybe 8th) year since HS graduation and when was that ever a milestone event that a graduating class was asked to join in to celebrate?  If Casey was 28 yrs old and this was a 10 year reunion, I would understand.The potential is there.  This author needs an editor and or beta readers for the next project.