Review: Something Happens & You Will Never Guess What It Is!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2011
I loved this short story.  From the minute Marsha "sucked hard to bring in enough air" the reader is sucked into the story.  The characters are engaging and the story is intriguing.  The author effortlessly evokes your emotions and has the reader suspicious and scared; protective and paralyzed.  It is wonderfully done.The author does a fabulous job setting the scene and putting the reader smack in the middle of it. You can feel Chase's hand on your thigh (no, it is not comfortable).  You can hear Mandy's cough; smell the dust in farm house and taste Marsha's fear.  The tension is as palpable as the "tiny needles" that stab Marsha's spine.  You will hold your breath when she does and not even realize it.This short story ends with a stunning surprise that is impossible to predict!