Review: Where's the Rest?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 7, 2011
I had such high hopes for this short story.  I did enjoy it, but I think it could have been so much better if the author had made it just a little bit longer than the 10-minute read that it is.  The flashes into the past were great, but there wasn't enough of the NOW, and only a slight hint at the future.  Plus, it's the length of a $.99 read, not a $2.99 one.  Josh Lanyon is undoubtedly a good writer, the premise was great, and he knows the ins-and-outs of war.  There just wasn't nearly enough to the story to make me love it like I wanted to!