Review: Action packed with a bit of romance
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2013
If your looking for an action romance this is a pretty good book. There is so much action in this book that there are very few scenes of down time. Not a whole lot of dialogue between the hero and heroine other than directives to stay safe. It seems that we missed the portion of the story in which they fall for each other- that takes place before the book starts when the characters first meet and the book doesn't really revisit that.There were a few editing problems that other reviewers mentioned. The heroine takes the gun out of her bra twice in a row even though she obviously didn't put it back. And there is a shooting scene which I won't give away but has similar issues. Also fighting  scenes use the term "karate chop" a couple times which seems like a pretty simplistic term for an action story.And last but not least.The use of paragraphs to make a point.Instead of words the author seems to use new paragraphs to make a point.A lot.I thought at first it was  my Kindle.But then I checked my iPad.It's there too.Once in a while works but this is on every single page.Every one.It's distracting to say the least.Overall the book wasn't a waste of time and though it wasn't what I was hoping for it was still a decent story.