Review: Edit edit edit grammar grammar grammar
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 30, 2013
This book was so difficult to read. The grammar and misuse of words was atrocious.  The word is conscience not conscious.  It was used incorrectly in so many places.  As for grammar - clearly the author does not understand the past tense.  The use of "had began" "had woke up" and so many other mistakes was annoying and distracting.  As for the story, it was all over the place and sometimes confusing.  And at times fairly ridiculous.  For example, the book says repeatedly that this is a small town where everyone knows everything, yet for two years she didn't figure out what was going on.  While I admire anyone that can write an entire book, some easy fixes would have helped this one.  For example, doing a grammar check would have been an easy way to improve this one.