Review: SPOILER ALERT!!!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 27, 2013
Well it was a good story but there were a lot of extremely sad parts. Also it seemed like everything happened way too fast. I have to say that I do have a lot of respect for anyone who writes and publishes stories, it takes a great deal of courage. But I must say that the timetable for this was just too unbelievable. It seemed like everything happened in a week including Maggie telling Ryan that she is pregnant within a few days of them being together. I think the story would have been much better had the author stretched out the story over months or even weeks instead of days.