Review: The Wrong Kind of Whine in This story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2014
I finished it, but goodness, it felt like someone was driving nails in my head as I did.  I love reading about emotional men, but even when men are emotional, they should still be men and not written as women with a penis.  This story was just poorly written.  The subject matter covered in the story was intense, and if the author had crafted the story appropriately it really could have been a captivating storyline.  Unfortunately, this was a miss, not a hit.