Review: Needs a WARNING
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 19, 2012
WOW...what a turn off. Early in the story (Chapter ONE!), the slutty language, and pet names for body parts begin to surface with regularity. This book needs a warning that the author can only write sleaze in hopes to get a best seller. NOT. I deleted the book from my kindle and my reading list after Chapter four..no sense in reading filth. How about a good story line, well written, interesting plot, and some depth in your characters? THAT is what makes an author. The book also needs some proof reading for spelling errors and omitted words, as well. Nothing worse than reading a book and you have to re-read one sentence three times to decipher what SHOULD have been said because of typos.