Review: So-so read.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2014
Semi-colon, period, apostrophe. Learn them, know them, use them!!The book had a decent enough storyline, but needed details fleshed out a little more. And the editing was atrocious. Author should hire at least a junior high-schooler to edit...could not do any worse! At times (many), I felt like I was reading a script from one of those movies where the teenage girl character talks so fast and there are no breaks between the words and there are twenty subjects covered all in the space of one breath.Simple grammatical editing and spell checking would have enabled me to raise the review to 3 and a half. I wanted to like the book, but every time I was almost there, it slapped me down again. Good first attempt, hope the author learns more before he graduates elementary school...