Review: A fun, progressive read that is highly entertaining!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2014
The Eclectic Prince was a fun read for me.  The author definitely has a creative side to him which comes out in his writing.  The story was a fun one that mixed together a blend of supernatural with a pinch of sci-fi.The premise was good and the plot was strong, but the execution missed just a tad bit.  I feel like the author could have spent a little bit more time on the editing and word usage.  The story falls flat at times, but then becomes filled with intense, fast-paced, action for brief moments.  The plot and sub-plots are fun and imaginative, but sometimes the writing gets choppy so the reader gets lost.  The character development is great which brings the book energy and something that the reader can relate to, but again this sometimes gets lost in the plot.  These are all elements that can be fixed with a really good editor.This is an outstanding first piece of work from Caspar Vega.  He definitely shows that he has the raw talent to make a name in this genre someday.  He does not lack in imagination or desire, just in an editing team to back him up.  With just a little bit more work The Eclectic Prince could easily be a 5-star read.I am sure that we have not seen the last of Mr. Vega.  Inspiring work!