Review: Good story idea gone bad
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 8, 2014
I really like this book in the first chapter,but then it began to quickly fall apart for me. It's not that I am not open to the idea, it's just that the story becomes hooky and totally unbelievable. First, you have an evil person killing a good person and then the good person becomes an evil spirit who seeks revenge on All women? Come on!  It would have been much more believable if the evil person dies and comes back hating everyone.Then you have another women who has studied occult to the point of professionalism and she kills herself because she doesn't know what else to do????I am sorry to sound cruel,but I believe a review should be totally honest to help other readers. As I have said it's a good story idea. I would suggest to this author that he pull this story off of Kindle and rewrite it so it is more believable and fix the grammar problems too. Then it will be a really good story."