Review: Just so-so.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 25, 2012
An odd short story in that it spans more than 3 years in ~23 pages. This means a lot of information is glossed over, leaving too many questions unanswered.  Numerous vague parts.  This would be much better as a full novel, it seems too much like a teaser as is. The scientific mentions of transfection need work, as they are overly basic. Well-edited as far as typos and such. I downloaded this story for free, I would be disappointed had I spent the 99 cents for it. The product description does not really match the story I read--I was expecting something a bit different.