Review: A ghastly literary work!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 9, 2010
Ctales Publishing should hire me as an editor.  My qualifications?  Let's count them:1.  I understand the proper use of commas, colons, semi-colons and periods.2.  I understand that, when conversing with each other, people do not say "I am" or "it is".  They say "I'm" and "it's".  This is especially true in high stress situations.3.  When writing, I know to identify the subjects of a scene with a break in text or a completely new chapter.  The writer tended to shift to new scenes by starting new paragraphs with zero indications that the scene was shifting.4.  I can frigging spell!!!!  More specifically, while using any decent word processing software, I recognize the significance of the red, squiggly lines under words.5.  Notice, there are zero run-on sentences in my review.I truly enjoy post-apocalypse-world stories however, if this is what passes for acceptable writing, I weep for our literary future.As for the characters, Dora, Tim and Mary would not survive more than a week in my zombie bunker.  I'd shoot them in the knees, throw them outside and ring the dinner bell. All three would make acceptable zombie bait.  Please, don't think me cruel and heartless; I'd graciously end it before they turned.Paige could stay because she became an asset over time.Does anyone know what Mike's fate was?  I lost track of him during the confusing combat scenes and run-on sentences.