Review: Great concepts, writing brings it down
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 26, 2012
If you think about it, so many of these self publishing authors have really good ideas. Often though, the execution lacks that quality the ideas deserve.I was pleasantly surprised at the many twists and turns this book took.  I was yet again somewhat disappointed by the writing.  I could feel the author's voice and passion ( that will be more understandable after you read the afterword) yet wished he had had an editor to help tighten it up.  Conversely, and not to give anything away, the ending was a bit too abrupt.So.  It's a good little book, most likely if you read the synopsis you will like the book.  Let's find away to have an editor for amazon books!