Review: Um......what?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 8, 2013
Bad editing, I can forgive.  Spelling and syntax errors, I can forgive.  However, I can't forgive ridiculous characters.  The characters, all of them, were under developed and uninteresting.  Frankly they did things that made no sense.  Stockholm Syndrome is one thing, but forgetting that you were kidnapped?  Not trying to escape?  Sleeping with your captor within minutes of being kidnapped?  I don't think so.  By the way why did she have to be kidnapped in the first place?  What's with the unnecessary supernatural element?  Enough questions, they're giving me a headache.  Don't read it unless you want an example of what not to do when writing a book.