Review: So done!!!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 23, 2012
I have forced myself to read each installment of this outrageously priced serial. My ratings went down with each successive installment. This was perhaps the most stolid installment in the series.Francesca goes to London to find out about Ian's alive...but superbly schizophrenic mother... surprising and angering him with her presence. After willingly submitting to him, she allows him to punish her and then brutishly eff her as an additional punishment. Please note that at this point, my Google Nexus was in peril of being thrown across the room because I cannot believe that a modern young woman would accept that behavior. The scenario wasn't sexy at all and no amount of convincing could make me believe it was.Then after they get back to Chicago, Ian pretty much ignores Francesca while she *tear...tear* suffers from him loss. Seriously?!?!? The man treated her like a trained puppy and she missed that?!? Ok, moving on...the "surprise" party that Ian threw in her honor was a hackneyed attempt to prove that he still cared about her. Again...Ian calling the shots and Francesca followed right along after him. Trained. Puppy. The confession of love and the abrupt ending was probably among the worst that I have ever encountered in my fiction reading...especially after such an extended buildup. The story just ended! Not concluded....ENDED! After making readers wait since July, this was the best ending that Ms. Kery had to offer?!?!?I am sorry...but I am one completely unhappy and unsatisfied reader. My suggestion is to go back to the drawing board. Rewrite this story into one complete volume and with a suitable ending or at least an epilogue so that readers don't feel cheated and gauged!