Review: Sexy, Very Brief, Ends Abruptly
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
The Master Undone is well written, entertaining and sexy. The book works as a stand alone title despite being part of a larger series.Mark's POV is a strong and authentic male voice. This moment in Mark's life is difficult. He's struggling with dark emotions and guilt associated with Rebecca, his former submissive's tragic death. His grief is compounded with worry and stress over his beloved mother's ailing heath. Mark's pain distracts and interferes with his usual ease of dominance and control.Equally distracting is Crystal, the strong-willed and sensual blond beauty Mark can't stop fantasizing about. From their first encounter, Crystal stirs something deep inside of him. Her feisty intelligence, straightforward honesty and defiant assertiveness command his attention. Mark's attraction to Crystal challenges everything he always thought he desired and required in a lover.When Mark and Crystal finally get together, the sex is explosive and raw. The two lovers engage in a sizzling power struggle, refusing to relinquish control to the other. So good. The deliciously descriptive sex scene's length is shorter than I had hoped, but no less pleasurable. Then, just as things are getting gloriously hot, the story ends.I wanted more than a tantalizing taste of these two interesting characters. Novellas are short by definition but The Master Undone is a bit too brief and ends too abruptly to be truly satisfying.I was curious to try Lisa Renee Jones' erotic fiction and jumped into the Inside Out Series with this novella. I'm now inspired to start the entire series from the beginning. I'd really like to get to know Mark and to understand the infamous Rebecca.Complimentary copy courtesy of Pocket Star via Edelweiss in exchange for an honest review.