Review: Cute story, but really poorly written/edited
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 7, 2014
When I first started reading, I had to look back at my records because I thought I had read this already. It seems to start off like so many other books I've read. Annie is working hard to be able to take over the company she works for, but the hot jet-setting heir comes swooping in and has to compete with her to see who ends up with the prize. Will pits Annie and Mitch against each other and the client seems to be in on the game. I think Will is match-making for Annie and his nephew. Mitch is a great guy, and Annie is okay, if a little stiff. But you come to care about them even though the story around them is terrible! A "claw-toothed tub"! On what planet is that even real? The author of this story desperately needs HELP. She made so many mistakes that I almost gave up reading this. The actual story line is good, but the writing is awful. If errors drive you nuts, steer clear. I would have given this book another star if it weren't so poorly written.