Review: From bad to worse
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 25, 2012
This story is very poorly written. The sentence structure is horrendous and the book abounds with errors in wording.(((Spoiler alert))) ...the slip slop sounds of her juices and feeling the wetness that was literally dripping down from her and onto his thighs was completely unbearable.Okay, I don't know about anyone else, but the above sentence was just plain gross. There is nothing exciting about this at all. In fact, it sounded like she had urinated on the poor guy.As for bad sentence structure check this one out: It was truly unhealthy and she looked at him and saw for the first time fully realized that she couldn't allow this to become her future.Uh, what?While the story is poorly written, there is a plot going on behind the scenes that seemed interesting. Maybe the author should have left the extreme sex scenes out and focused more on the attempted takeover of a business, the jealous boyfriend, and the planned blackmail.To top everything off, the book ends before you get to learn anything of importance in the above paragraph. There's to be a sequel. I hope the author gets an editor for the second book.Sorry, but I can only give this story a one star.