Review: Stilted Dialogue and One-Dimensional Characters
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
I was barely able to finish this book due to author's poor sentence structure, pacing, and the atrocious dialogue.  It reads like an elementary school student's first attempt at writing a story.  It needs a serious over-haul from an experienced editor.The story itself was lacking as well, as the characters had little interaction, and no real chemistry aside from what the author told you they had.Give this one a pass. You won't regret it.