Review: A Waste of Electronic Paper...Negative 5 stars
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 9, 2013
I do not understand how anyone who read this book remotely believes that it was a good story. I downloaded this book for free and honestly I do not even want the book to collect space on my kindle for free. The details of the story conflicted so much throughout that it was ridiculous. First, Brandy had a job at DD&T and then on the next page she was jobless. Initially, the story began in New Jersey where Reggie and Brandy lived and Reggie got locked up in New Jersey and Brandy moved to North Carolina but when he was released he was already in North Carolina?? Even Brandy's current boyfriend Chris had a mother who died at the beginning of the book and then in the end he was talking about visiting her although it'd been five or six years since she passed. Sadly, there were many more discrepancies like these all throughout. This book was all over the place. Brandy is simple minded and it baffles me how a woman can go from being shot and abused and in the next chapter she's playing herself out as a straight up hoe. Even the "erotica" scenes were not erotica but just showcased her as nasty and whorish. The references to God were so out of place and seemed thrown in there to show "depth" to characters who clearly had no depth or development. The book was poorly written as I felt I was reading a children's story because it read as "she did this and she did that" and obviously there was absolutely no proofreading at all. I wish the authors luck in the future but this book doesn't even deserve the one star rating that Amazon forced me to give it.