Review: Unnecessary vulgarity
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2012
If you left out all of the needlessly "dirty" words, there would barely be a short story here.  And while people can fall in lust, they just don't fall in love like this instantly & go against all their previous behavior.  All in all, I would really only give it 1/2 star -- after the first smutty sex scene I found myself scrolling through the screens, only pausing at actual story.