Review: Not one of Jane Porter's better efforts
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2014
This book was 2-3 stars.....it's rare I put a book down, especially a free one, but this one was it. The characters are initially engaging. There is no emotional development in this romance. All of the sudden, they are in bed planning their lives together. Troy goes from "I'm never getting married" to "gee, she's a smart book girl, let's have kids in Marietta, Taylor"........this is a book that is all about infodump and Marietta backstory and nothing about "story".........introduces engaging characters, but sentence structure is weak, punctuation errors abound, and there really is no love or tenderness here, not even interesting dialogue. As far as POV, Troy thinks like a sappy romance writer......we're told his big and imposing and strong, but his POV and dialogue sounds like lady gabfest lines after too much wine. ........give me more Brock and Harley ,please.