Review: Nothing more than sex
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2013
No matter how you look at this one, it is a short story (thank heaven) about a hook up in a woman's locker room disguised as a "mates" love story.This has no work up for the reader other to say that Anna has been coming to the gym for 7 months. Jace and Anna have had one conversation, more of a survey than anything, but suddenly Jace can't wait another moment and basically goes after Anna in a locker room after her hour work out. Anna, who is so up tight about her "fat rolls" won't even shower there because there are peek hole spots in the shower curtains. Yet in a matter of minutes she does a complete 360 degrees, and "loses" herself in Jace, the guy she calls a beautiful stranger.This doesn't work. There are typos and grammatical errors. Give this a pass.