Review: Melted? Really!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2013
The content didn't work as this was too superficial.  There was nothing in either character to even hint that love had blossomed because they were just so wonderful and it couldn't be helped although we were told this.  It was a superficial plot with an excuse for some action.  It was short, thank goodness, but even that didn't help.  Readers need to connect and this had no connection but perhaps it might work if content is all you want.