Review: Could be Great
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 2, 2014
With a little more polishing, this could be a great book or series.  The idea behind the story is interesting and the action throughout the story is good.  The characters need a bit more.  They were likeable, but have the potential to be loveable.  There also seems to be some inconsistencies within the characters.  The hero Rebecca is logical, smart, and quick at some times and then a complete idiot at others.  For example, when she is not allowed to see Ashley for what seems like months on end and does not throw a fit for quite some time, even though she is quite attached and protective of the little girl.  Other than those little things is was a good novella with the potential to be a great book.I received a complimentary copy of this book in order to review it.