Review: Good but could have been better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 4, 2013
I have read just about every single Motorcycle Club romance put out on Kindle.  I think this story sets the stage for a first time author to start an interesting series.  I also think the story line had much more potential than revealed in the book.  These are my major thoughts about this book: Beware of the spoilers if you have not read this book.1) The background information on the h killing her father of her 18th birthday is too vague and didn't seem like enough to feel sympathy for the h committing murder.  Lots of parents are "controlling."  A little more detail there could have made me feel more sympathy for the h.2) I really got tired of the h running away so many times. I mean she had run all over the world for six years and although she said she found herself, she still kept running. And I got tired of Dawg being so beta. I'm sure there will be many to disagree with me. I understand the h's fragile mind regarding control but it just got to the point it was almost like silly teenagers.3) I would have been more satisfied just to read about Brick/Lanie and the other characters without the tiring melodrama of the H/h going on and on and on. I loved Brick/Lanie's relationship and I liked Bear/Ella.  In fact I think I really connected more to every character in the book better than the h/H.  Would love to read Brick/Lanie's story. Loved Brick and Vlasco as mentors.4)  I really had a problem with the book ending. I mean how in the world do you justify feeling alright about the club killing, torturing people, selling pot, laundering money, etc, etc but go off the deep end because they traffic "conflict" diamonds.The last but by far not the least is the number of editing errors, words out of context, phrases that don't match a bad ass American MC like "sat off" the bike.  There were so many words out of context that I noticed and when you pay $3.99 for a book, you expect to see better editing.I would probably rate this book 3.5 stars and I look forward to reading the next book in the series.