Review: Great plot.....horrible editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
This is my first read by this author. This book would have been a 3 1/2 to 4 star book if the editing (and I use that word loosely) were better. I completely understand where this story was trying to take me but I became so distracted by the poor transitioning, poor grammar, misuse of words, etc that I could not focus on the characters. Again, the plot is good, but editing must get better. Brandon, Majesty, and the crew are characters that are easy to relate to. Sham needs her own story told. S. Giovanni I would like to read more from you but refuse to put myself through the pain of that horrible editing again. I'll edit your next novel for free if you want.