Review: Please Edit This Piece
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2012
The biggest problem I had with this work was switching the names of the firms owners. In 3 circumstances she switched the name of the bad partner with the good.  How irritating.  How did this get by for 13 years.  Yes, the piece was originally released in '99 and no one caught it?  Really?  AND I agree with the other reviewer that noted how sophomoric this story was.  Maybe the point taken should have been her age. Maybe she should have been younger than 27. Anyhow, there are far better stories in this story feed than this one.