Review: MESSY WRITING - LITTLE OR NO EDITING
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 1, 2013
Very difficult to read with all the missing words, wrong words and repeated phrases within a sentence. Bad Bad and more Bad. How can Sasha and Damien be "standing - chest to chest, hip to hip - he is over 6 feet tall and she is 5'2" - ?? Does not make sense. Their first sexual encounter they are at his house in his bed but several times the author called it "Her" bed. Huh??? This is my first and last book by this author. Fortunately it was part of a boxed set of books for 99 cents. I keep a folder in my bookmarks titled "Bad Authors" and this is one of only a very few sorry to say. 2 stars because it was a fairly good story though hard to read with all the errors.