Review: This was a promising young adult romance, ruined by the large number of gross errors in editing. A struggle to read.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2014
The characters were well described and acted age appropriately. I am no longer a young person, but I can remember what it was like,and the author did well in describing the angst and thrills. I found the reading difficult because of the gross number of errors in spelling, grammar, and facts. Many sentences had missing, extra, or misspelled words.Some words you just had to guess what was meant, such as "aguishly". Editing fails: "peeked roof";"Mrs. Wakefield asses me"; "spell bounding"; "Beause"; "mine as well" (3 times); "ringing my blanket"; "beat red"(2 times); "bright read"; "borrowed me her car" instead of loaned or lent; "mopping around". Apparently the Jeep in the story has the clutch located BETWEEN the front seats.A promising story dragged down by lack of editing.