Review: So-so
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 7, 2014
This story has a lot of potential. However, the British/maybe Australian terms are just off-putting. No one from California who moves to Montana says "natter", "sat in a 4", etc. No one from Montana says "a thousand clicks" or uses meters for measurement. It would have been better to have the main character be from whatever country the author is from. There are also numerous editing errors. If you can get past all of that, the story itself is fairly decent. I'm just glad I got it when it was free.