Review: Mediocre
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2014
This story could have been so much more. We didn't learn enough about any of the characters and  they lacked emotion. It was different in that the man out west had his sister screen potential brides for him. It screamed for an editor or someone to proof it. There are way too many issues with missing quotation marks and punctuation. Personally, I also didn't care for all the short, choppy sentences.