Review: Short doesn't mean  you can forget the construction
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 17, 2013
We all dreaded going back to school, and this is just what Hailey and Jared are facing in this story.  One last adventure before returning to school.  They hear about Old Man Jacob's coal mine and decide to see if the legend is true.This story would be great to read out loud to a child, but I would not suggest allowing them to read it themselves.  I'm a pretty big stickler on not having kids read things that aren't written properly.  The story is cute, engaging, and the perfect length for a younger reader - but the book really needs a good proofreader.  Someone who knows when to make sure things stay in past tense, how to punctuate dialogue tags, and other common grammar rules.