Review: Choppy at best
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 16, 2012
I would like to start off by saying that I did not finish the story. Maybe it radically improves but I just could not finish it. Between the choppy writing and even more choppy flow of the story I could not get interested enough. I understand that the author wants us to not really know what is going on, what's real and what isn't but in my opinion it wasn't very well done. The main character was so whiny and irritating I found I didn't really care if anything was real or a massive head trip. After the tenth or twentieth paragraph of him whining about his job and wife I said forget it.