Review: Poorly written
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2013
I had difficulty even finishing this one.  The formatting of the entire story was off.  There was no spacing, indents, paragraphs, etc  and I found it difficult to read from that standpoint.  If if were only those issues, I could overlook but the story lacked any substance the writing wasn't that good.  I felt as though we didn't really get to know the characters - point of view jumped around too much for my liking and the dialogue was very unrealistic.Will not purchase anything else by this author.