Review: concept good execution horrible
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 13, 2013
This book jumps around more than the energizer bunny on coffee made with redbull instead of water. The characters are likeable, however, the author does not show any of the main points where her characters fall in love or become friends.....one minute we see a barely done haircut and then the next time we see the hairdresser Charlie. He is professing love. Then there is apparently a party with a kiss and a sweet love interest with the bosses boss and we only find out about it later like an afterthought. ... hello this is a big deal that impacts the outcome of the whole story. I suggest new beta readers who will be honest about the hard stuff.