Review: Good but TOO much fluff!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
I was really into this book. I kept reading nonstop I just couldn't put it down. I still think the author went into too many little details and if not the book would've been way better. It could've been filled in with other things to create the bond between them all. I was rooting for her and Jaylen but I also wanted her to get over him and move on with James. The problem with James was a done deal for me. I would've tried to make some suggestions but he was just a lost cause. I couldn't wait for Jaylen to step up and it seemed like he did just that. He should've known about the break, no way he didn't so he shouldn't have been surprised. She should've made a way to get to the store regardless of what the mother was talking about. James is either crazy or clueless about what's going on but I think she did him really wrong by not telling him what the deal was. I enjoyed this but so much more could've taken place if the author would've just let go of all the fluff.