Review: In need of an editor
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2014
I love these stories but the author has to edit these books.  The use of soar instead of sore, is an example of word misuse that is through all of her books.  Missing words are a problem.  The stories are cute and predictable.  It's just the same story, different names.  But once you read one, you want to finish the family saga.  Anyway I urge the author to development a better plot for her next set of books.  Guy meets girl and falls in love in 10 seconds is old.  And please take pride and edit your final work.  I think I'm going to go back to reading books by established authors.  I read for pleasure and I don't want to have work while reading.