Review: Could have been a little tighter.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 18, 2013
3.50There is a really good story hiding in the history lesson. The problem? I'm still looking for it.The premise of  story is quite interesting. Our Hero Kendra is caught between the world of the living and the "Bosom of Abraham."--an alternate world between heaven and earth. His overall mission is to maintain peace on earth without causing undo harm to the planned events of history. That's pretty tricky since he is constantly being hunted by age old assassins wanting to avenge their masters demise at the hands of Kendra.The first 50% of the book deals with Kendra's genealogy, which is so convoluted, I got lost in the thought pattern. This was the major drawback for the story. The timeline is very disjointed and confusing. One minute were talking about Noah and his son and the next were killing dinosaurs. Confused? So was I.The last half of the book gets into the meat of the story. This part is well written and exciting. The battle scenes are very believable and exciting.Editing. There are some issues that need to addressed to tighten up the story and reduce confusion. Minor, but at times, distracting.Overall, this isn't a bad work, but could do with a lot of rewriting for a better flow.