Review: Short story that dragged on way too long for me
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 2, 2012
The story started out good, but i lost interest 2/3 in.  There were some funny parts and I love the H/H together.  I also liked the ending.  However, the build up to the deflowering dragged the book down and I lost interest way before the sex scene. I got way tired of reading about them traveling to see each.  And call me weird, but I actually prefer stories where the whole losing one's virginity isn't "planned" out; I prefer when it just happens in the moment.  This book have promise, but it ended up being just okay.