Review: Good but need an editor
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 30, 2013
I enjoyed this story very much.  The sex was hot! I like the lead characters.  The story line is good and I want to read the next one.The one criticism I have  is someone needs to do some serious editing. I would be happy to do it!  There are lots of typos and wrong word choices (dinner vs diner) that for the most part I could overlook, but in some parts it was so messed up I had to read the page a few times to figure out what it should say.Overall, I would recommend, but only if you aren't someone who gets tied down with the grammar or typos!  ENJOY!