Review: Started off fine, but began jumping around too much..
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 11, 2013
Fooled again by the first three chapters, but since this was free all I wasted was a smidgen of my time during a flight.After an initial fairly decent premise, the story ran amuck and seemed to rashly segue from one subject or scene to another, leaving this reader without enough vital information to attach to characters or the story.More time should have been taken to build chacters used to lure readers into either loving or despising them. Any emotion drawn from a reader is the mark of a solid writer. For me there was never anything that truly peaked my interest, and the attempt to enhance the story with a bit of revenge just did not work for me. Leaving questions unanswered until I soon stopped caring, along with feeling the author's writing style moved from fairly decent to slapshot, evaporated my interest.My low review comes primarily because I could not finish reading this book - a rarity for me, even when the book is free.