Review: Silly details spoiled a possibly good story - 2.5 stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2014
This book had the makings of a great story but for unknown reasons, the author messed it up by including stupid elements. At times it reminded me of the way Rachel van Dyken writes, which I loathe, as if it were meant to be funny but it isn't. I think that the h being accident prone could have been amusing if it hadn't been overdone. I also thought the h swearing after an incident was perhaps funny the first time but the author overdid that too and when she swears publicly in London, I didn't think it believable. Anyway I only mention a few of the incidents to give the reader an idea of what to expect. The book was clean. Not sure if I'd recommend this one.