Review: Good plot, terrible execution
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2013
If a story is good but there are a few editing errors I usually don't comment as it doesn't detract.  I do not believe this book was either edited or proof read, if it was they should be blacklisted.  Abundant spelling errors, characters names being changed (as commented on in previous reviews).  Chapter 16 goes into great detail about the divorce of the major police character (Stark) due to his devotion to his job then Chapter 31 states that he had never married as he was married to his work.  I believe the author was trying to end the book with a sharp twist to the tale but it failed miserably, reading more as if he had changed his mind two thirds through the book.  The plot was good and could have been developed into a really good read - this was not a good read.  The writing was amateurish and the plot badly executed.  I admire anyone who has the tenacity to write but please, please proofread and edit before publishing.  I finished the book simply to see how bad it would get.  Would not recommend.