Review: I hate to run anything down
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 14, 2013
...but this ficlet wasn't all that good, in my opinion. The premise was good, but the author didn't deliver. It wasn't well-written (it came across as rather amateurish as if the author hasn't been writing long,) it was full of, again, amateurish euphemisms during the love scene, and as a whole, I found it pretty unsatisfying. I'm glad I didn't pay anything for the book as it wasn't worth any cost.