Review: I'm lost
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 3, 2011
I was trying to get the point of this story, but it finished before I did, so I read it twice, hence 2 stars, one for each read. The metephor didnt realy work for me, Im familiar with the flashes of disconnected thougths that enter my mind, but in a storie I like them to connect, to sum it up, it could have been a writing excesice and little more.