Review: No depth, didn't understand why characters did what they did
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2013
I understand that this is the first of a four part serial, that's now collected into a single book. After reading this free sample, I'm not interested in reading the rest of the story, because I don't understand why the characters acted as they did.I gave this story 2 stars because the idea behind the story was interesting, the plot was comprehensible, and there weren't any glaring typos or grammatical mistakes.I can't give it any more than that, though, because there wasn't anything else - very little character development, almost no conflict (and given the plot, there should have been TONS of conflict).A sexy and somewhat taboo idea does not a book make. Pass.