Review: Review: My Package of Paradise by Melissa Craig
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 6, 2012
I really enjoyed this story. It may have been one of the hottest erotic stories I've read so far. Those aspects were very well written to the point where I was glue to the story. I didn't want to stop reading until I finished at least the big moment of the story.Where I feel the story lacked was in explaining the characters a bit more. From the beginning I thought I knew who David was. Then about 75-80% into the book, seemingly out of left field, came a small but crucial bit of information that took me out of the story for a few minutes.Aside from, in my opinion, the slight lack of necessary character background information, the story was enjoyable. The erotic elements were spot on.