Review: ummm
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
I title this review ummm, simply because I was unsure how I felt about this novel.If I may, I start of with the editing. There were a few issues, such as missing the " a few times at the start of conversations. Only at the end when it ended with " did I realise that someone was speaking.The Chapter titles, are also dated, and there were a few mistakes, especially towards the end, when the events in Venice happened on a saturday, but the final 3 chapters were labelled Sunday, when it was obviously still Saturday. Things like that get to me.There were a few other things, like Jana "removes" her panties in front of the fire, when John had taken them off her five minutes ago in the car.It's all probably minor, but I'm a stickler for details.It was a long read, or took a day, which is a long read for me (I like long, gives me my monies worth), and there weren't too many twists and turns.I think the blurb likens this novel to 50 Shades of Grey, which I have read, and hated, but there are some similarities. Mainly in John's background, how he is closed off from the world, has money etc. Also, in their own way, the men are trying to help out their girls in their careers.The book ends, not so much with a cliff hanger, but with questions. For that I would probably pick up the next one to read.We know a little bit about John from this book, but there are huge caps which I imagine will be taken care of in the next instalment.