Review: Twisted in deed, but needs work.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2013
I was gifted this book in return of an Honest review.The are many reasons for my 3 star review,1. Editing and format issues made reading a bit difficult. I felt like I was reading more of a Manuel than a story.2. The book jumped around so much that I found myself lost and going back and reading the prior pages many times just to see if I skipped a page. The was no consistence in the story.3.I could not define a clear plot. I get that it was based on masturbation, revenge and a twisted mind but I feel there could have been more of a story behind it. I feel if there was more of a storyline and more direction this could be a good book.I realize this is the authors first work and encourage him to continue writing but to go more in depth of his storyline and definitely consider working on more formatting and editing in the future.Melissa Williams Brown