Review: Excellent Storyline and Compelling Characters
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 3, 2014
The story drew me in and the characters were interesting and likable. I wanted to know what would happen and so kept reading. Then why only three stars? The dialect often got in the way of the story; it would have been less distracting for the dialect to be in the dialogue but not, as it was written, in the narration. Also, there were a number of grammatical errors that could not be attributed to typographical issues, errors such as "for he and her" and "lose" for "loss." These detracted greatly for the story. The author is highly creative but desperately needs a good editor.