Review: Bet it could be better....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 5, 2013
Good story but quite a few spelling errors and writing errors, needs better editing. The thought of saving yourself for marriage is a good thing and she did it until she was over 20, so was a little surprise when the writer suddenly change that thought and have it taken away by a non-love man, she didn't even mention who the guy was. Poverty mixed signals.