Review: Needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2014
I really enjoyed the storyline--I was reading it every time I could find a few minutes. The problem I had was with the lack of editing. The errors were pretty simple such as the author used "there" instead of "their" not just once but SEVERAL times. I always have a hard time getting past the lack of editing. An example was something like "There car was parked there in front...". Huh?