Review: Quirky-Loki
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2014
Okay at first I was put off by the tone and narration, and the single lined text as if these were headers for a comic book or graphic novel. But the inside story was intriguing enough to keep me reading it. I am sure the writer was influenced by the influx of the recent hero, super mythic gods movies and graphic novels, but there was enough interesting plot twists to keep me reading, hoping it would get better. Overall the story of fallen Loki is sad, weird and yet we hope for much more for Loki and his poor human companion. We kept expecting at each turn a romance to occur, it stops and starts, races about and jumps hurdles from page to page. Left me uncaring if the pair gets together or not.Some of the plot is fun and exciting while others fall off unexpectedly then pick up again or not at all leaving me wondering....I would like to give it more stars and I think if the narration were improved the book would be better. The author deserves more yet the economy of words and stilted often wrongly set tense of narration ruins what is good. Is this a first and unedited attempt? Maybe. Hope the Author tries to figure out just how to narrate a Fun and good story.