Review: Did the author even proof read herself? (semi give away)
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2014
I honestly don't think this author has proof read anything she wrote. Like for instance there is a part where Rhys is sitting in his study brooding over what happened to him and recalled that Ms Pennyworth is who was suspected of tampering with his carriage but he didn't feel like dealing with it because of lack of proof. Okay that's all well and good but a few chapters later Ms. Pennyworth shows up and starts yammering about I can't even remember what. I can somewhat swallow not recognizing someone after 5 years of not leaving your house but having this big pout about his accident and who did it and now all of a sudden he has no recollection of her name? Um..no not cool.Also I CAN"T stand the fact that after 3 days Rhys and Dani fall in love and he drops down his guard and lowers his hood and within 2 weeks of knowing each other they get married.Another pet peeve that showed up in the book is what a coincidence Dani's best friend happened to marry Rhy's best friend!  Seriously I do understand that this is fiction but can this tradition of falling in love in 3 days and all our best friends need to be together end?!?!? Believable fiction would be great.