Review: Editing issues set a side, this was a really enjoyable story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2014
As other reviewers have already addressed the editing issues, which I have to say didn't bother me as much as it did some readers, I will not say much about it other then...yes, editing would have been much appreciated. I will say that I was still able to enjoy the story itself. It's a debut novel so I give a bit of leeway to the author and will be reading the next book in the series hoping that the author takes the reviews to heart and understand that the better the book (this includes editing), the better the reviews, the more sales she will garner. I see much potential and I'm keeping my fingers crossed.The positives: It's a lighter biker book compared to some out there and that's what I was in the mood for at the time. I liked how it showed multiple sides of the characters and that major issues took time to resolve. It just made it more believable to me.  I liked Raine from the start and Diego wasn't far behind. The background characters worked really well for the storyline. i loved the scene between Raine and Prosper the first time in the clubhouse.The negatives: Needed a bit more dialog between main characters. A bit smoother transition between chapters would have helped the flow of the story. The last thing I'll bring up is the repeating of a past event.....a couple of times is okay but more then that is over-kill and wasn't needed in my opinion.Overall I liked the book and would recommend it with the stipulation that potential readers be forewarned about the editing issues.