Review: Intense
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 13, 2013
I read it in one setting. The intense moments never ended. It was lifelike, fast paced, and erotic.If your a grammar nazi then I'm afraid you might not get past a few editing errors. The story itself is well written but commas are not used appropriately. It's very sexual but I didn't mind. There is brutality, and its sexual as well so if you're uncomfortable with that this isn't for you. As an author I applaud the realism and intensity. I understand the lack of proper editing and cultural diversity. I give 3 & 1/2 stars.