Review: Is this really a children's book?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 10, 2012
I couldn't figure out what age group this "little Christian" book would interest.The language is stilted and complicated. "Though [the town's] muddy gown didn't reflect the people's feelings." If there had been an illustration explaining this usage, it might have worked. "The breath of the animals kept warm the little baby's fragile body."  Why be so convoluted?There were multiple grammar/usage errors.  Here are a few: "The sweet ringing sound of the bell made the children's heart beat faster;" "it did not spoil this magical marry mood;" "a man and a woman was wandering."There is also the issue of an unfinished story line regarding the homework assignment.  As an experienced reader I can fill in the gaps, but I'm doubting children would get it on their own.I hope the author re-works this story.  The idea it is trying to present is worth reading.