Review: Guy's just don't talk like this
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2014
Unrealistic and horribly written. There is such overwhelming detail that has no relevance and the details often make no sense. As an author you have to trust your reader enough to not describe every action in detail but allow them some imaginative leeway. No one needs the finer details of making coffee described in detail including what hand they are using to make the coffee. Ridiculous! This is all acting as fluff as the author can pretend that she wrote a book of good length.The characters are terribly written as well. Men just do not talk this way to each other, nor do they cry at every instance. And Paul's weird potty mouth is just awkward and distracting. He goes from gentle hearted crybaby to foul mouthed idiot is the space of a few words.This book isn't worth it even though it's free! Don't waste your time downloading this tragic piece of writing.