Review: DIDN'T EVEN SIZZLE....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 4, 2010
First off, I wouldn't really even get into the book the way I would have liked from the beginning. The writing was kinda all over the place and the imagery was lacking to say the least. Also, the story is more about HOW they fall in love rather than THE ACTIONS of being in love. Didn't even sizzle. The heroine was a little too fickle for me and he was kinda too man-whorish. Also for 27yrs old, he seems just a bit childish in character. Not because she's a rapper but because he was kind of all over the place. It was also WAAAAAY too long for me. It was kinda drawn out. I mean 90% of the book took place the first five days after they met. Now I see way she couldn't keep track of how long she had known him...I felt like it was longer too lol. Also, who really has unprotected sex with a guy from his background who you know JUST sleep with 2 people within the span of 7 days before knowing you (and no I'm not counting zebra-head). You would think that her character would be smarter than that. I mean the characters actions weren't quite as believable as I hoped for. I was just glad when it was over.