Review: This book needs to be edited to be better.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 24, 2012
I downloaded this book (for free) because it looked like it wouldn't be very good.  I noticed that it only had 5-star reviews that were all posted--at about the same time--by readers who belonged to a group.  Evidently they had all been asked to review this book, so that made me suspicious.The plot may be okay, but there is an error in just about every paragraph so far.  The characters consistently "sit" their coffee cups down instead of setting them.  (Cups can't "sit," they are inanimate.)  The author capitalized V-8 Engine, but not Navy seals.  She wrote Ruth's Chris as Ruth Chris. There are misplaced (or missing) commas everywhere.This effort may be good enough for the readers of Wattpad, which I'm not familiar with, but it's not good enough for the readers on Amazon who (usually) have to PAY for their reading material.Ms. Sampson needs an editor to tighten up this story and bring the writing up to spec.  I think the story could be pretty good if it were just tuned a little.