Review: had such potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
Started out alright, from the book summery I was super excited to read it, there was such great potential! By the end, I wish I could have returned it. Needed some serious context editing. Characters were called the wrong name, would say her instead of him, dates and timelines changed through the book, and then I ended up hating Stormy because of the fickle, wish-washy-ness of her character. I HATE leaving bad reviews, and usually am pretty forgiving on editing errors, but this was just pathetic. If the author had someone else read it, a friend even, most of the errors and issues probably would have been resolved. I started out feeling such sorrow and compassion for Stormy, but by the end I just wanted to punch her in the face and save the men from her stupidity!