Review: A great story line But...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 5, 2013
.. would have been much happier for it if she had taken the time to move it along slowly at some point explaining a bit more. It is a disappointment that there were quite a few ads and the link that leads to her on amazon is no good. I loved the storyline, But it could have been smoother than she has it. The characters you can see, but they need a bit more polish to make you feel like you're right there with them.