Review: needs reduction and POV work.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2014
Sensual/sexual content more than I appreciate in books and point-of-view transitions were too jarring.I'm agreed with other critics that there's a lot of potential to the author, but he would be well served by reducing the 'sensual/erotic' aspect and focusing more on a single POV.