Review: Great entertainment in a small package
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2012
The brevity of this story reminds me of a story from the original "Twilight Zone" TV series.  I think I would also have enjoyed this as a longer story, but everything was covered, and drawing it out would have added words, but probably not much more.  Part of the impact was the concise, to-the-point telling, leading up to the ending with a twist.  I would be happy to have more stories like this to read when I wanted something for pure entertainment that doesn't require large blocks of time.