Review: Needs Refining and Depth
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 13, 2013
The book was o.k. because it was clean with no foul words, but it needed lots of refining. I did like that it was a Christian themed book, and that is why I even gave it 2 stars, but there were too many instances of car "accidents/murder attempts" and places within the story that were serious situations that needed more finishing details. I'm not going to give away the murderer, you but if you don't want any hints of the "action" in this story, you might want to stop reading my review at this point.......I've never been in a car accident that involved attempted murder, but I have been in car accidents and the situation took more than the seemingly 5 minutes it took to resolve everything in this book. On their wedding day Vera had lunch (2 hrs. before the wedding) was rammed by a car in an attempt to murder her, police arrived, took the bad guy away, she drove on to the church where there was another murder attempt (which was resolved so quickly the wedding took place without a hitch) and after they were on their way to the honeymoon their truck was rammed off the bridge into the water yet they swam out and were able to eat dinner before making it to their hotel. Once there someone had cancelled the reservation and they had to find someplace else to stay yet no other attempts on their lives were made during the honeymoon and no purpose for the cancellation was ever explained. Although the author was careful in not using "wedding night innuendo", she wrote an attempted rape into the plot.....REALLY??? I won't even go into the whole "killer" plot and motive, but it needs work. I won't be reading the next book.