Review: Interesting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 31, 2013
Ms. Patricks gives the reader a chance to witness a call through the eyes of a paramedic, and I found that interesting and even a bit informative.  I liked the fact she didn't tie us into a full character description, allowing us to imagine more.  While this "story" gave the reader what the writer stated it would - it was not a story, in the full sense of the word and meaning.  It would be an awesome scene in a full short story or novel, however.  I am not disappointed with this piece and will look for more examples from the writer; I just wish there was a plot presented, along with the terrific scene.