Review: Good story, horrible editing and grammar!!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2013
This could have been an amazing story if it were not for the horrible mistakes well as horrible grammar. This author has great potential if she would take a English 101 class. I am disappointed that someone with such a great mind when it comes to a story concept,  could let this be published in her name. Correcting the errors on my kindle become exhausting. Don't get me wrong, I liked the story a lot. I just think that someone with such a great mind deserves a better editor and should pay better attention to what is being published in her name. With that said... thank you for the adventure this book offers.