Review: Too short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2014
The author has a nice flowing style which is very pleasant to read. The story is set in a village and the main person is a young woman who has started a breakfast diner. Her competitor from school has started a breakfast diner across the street.As said, the story was well written but... it was too short. For this money I expected a full story. It was as if large chunks were cut from the book. The main characters were not fleshed out properly and so I could not relate to them at all. The plot was not very complicated.It started well enough with descriptions of how the main character does her job etc. but then it went downhill. A murder happens and the police just walks in and arrests her.  It was a bit unbelievable to say the least.And Zach, the love interest, is nice but also not very fleshed out.I do see a lot of potential for this author.