Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2014
I give this story four stars for the story--the story was different and good.Unfortunately, the mechanics were really, really, really bad--two stars for grammar/punctuation/word usage or lack thereof!  new/knew; preachers/preacher's; asses (n) (wild donkeys) instead of assess (v); in case is two words; forefront and forerunner are one word; Bible is capitalized; no sense of how and when to use commas, periods, and apostrophes.Ms. Pray, please go to any high school and talk to the English teacher; he/she may be glad to proof your manuscripts for an inexpensive price, if not free.You should be able to write your language as well as you speak it!!  These mistakes are high school level and it's the main reason why so many e-books are so bad!!  Not for the story itself, but for the mechanics of writing!