Review: I loved this story.  It's gripping, intense, and very different.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2013
I loved this story.  It's gripping, intense, and very different.  It incorporates classic themes, and puts a new spin on them.  The idea that we can make people perfect.  Ostracizing and destroying that which is different.  These are classics, and I loved how the author utilized them in this story.The story started out great.  First, this tension as a young woman interrupts a break in.  What will he do?  Then bam!  Well, I won't tell you, but I laughed.The story has tragedy, romance, government interference, a little bit of comedy.  The only thing I can say against it is it's too short.  I felt a little jarred by the jumped from having just met to being head over heels in love.  I wish there had been a little something in between, a little bit more.  Still, a great little read, and free to boot!  The author said it was always free.