Review: AWFUL!!!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
I wonder if this author ever really read the manuscript before submitting it. Did no one ever read this with a critical eye? I think I wrote better stories in junior high school. I can't decide if the author was attempting some sort of erotic fiction, mystery, romance, or some weird hybrid of several genres. I can say that I have rarely, if ever, been offended by a book. I found myself wanting to scream at the author throughout reading this. I did persevere to the end with some misguided hope that there was a redeeming facet to the waste of time, energy, and pixels this book represented. In places the grammar would have made my junior high school english teacher cringe. In places the dialogue reminded me of a campy fifties movie along the line of "Gidget". All in all, can I PLEASE have the time I wasted with this drivel back?