Review: Sweet romance with a lot of technical problems
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 3, 2013
I didn't love the book because it was so formulaic. It is the same story as books 1-3. Two people who can't stand each other but who were chosen as a perfect match by a deceased father eventually decide the other is OK, then date, fall in love and commit to marriage by the end. Throw in the mysterious trouble-maker, break-ins, a gun wielding nut case, a life threatening event and you have a DiCarlo Brides romance. That said, I was still interested enough to read it all the way to the end. I liked the characters and sort of got sucked into the story line with book 1. One thing that drove me crazy in this book was it was filled with errors. Use a better editor, please! It wasn't just misspelled words (though there were  a lot of those) and missing words that created confusion, but the book even has a part early on where an event is referenced that doesn't happen until much later in the book. I think there was a rush to publishing before the product was publish-worthy. If you want a predictable, modern-relationship, romance with no descriptions of sexual intimacy, the DiCarlo Brides books are for you.