Review: hurried
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 11, 2013
This M/M romantic short story sports kind of a supernatural fusion, with many very different supernatural creatures thrown together in a "academy". The supernatural lore is not explained but in this instance it is just as well as it would probably only encumber the plot.The story itself would have deserved many more pages, though, especially to develop the theme of the jealous Art, but also to make the romantic involvement of the leads a little slower and better paced.As it is it is quite hurried with some loopholes in logic and plot.On the other hand, despite a couple of grammar mistakes I could have done without, it is nicely written and pleasant. I would have find it even more romantic if the lovers had been versatile...