Review: ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 10, 2013
I read this book, but could not get into it. There were to many missing pieces for me. And it was like paragraphs were missing. One moment the guy is out doing stuff, the next he is hugging her. I think there needs to be more to the story so it can flow well. Or better editing. This book had a lot of potential.I am am not a writer and love the job you all do, but who ever beta read or edited the book should have realised that some area did not flow.Thank you for the time you took to write your book.