Review: Cute read... just needs tweaking
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2014
(Sheena)This was a cute Christian romance story. I loved the characters interaction and the journey they went on. I also enjoyed how real they seemed to be with the struggle all Christians have when faced with right and wrong, or my way verses His way. I hate to put a 'but' in this review... butThere were issues with this book that had me rereading pages and chapters. The sequencing of the book doesn't flow. Jack comes into the school just before orientation week. After all the classrooms are set up and multiple Mexican lunches with Angela, Jack has mentions how he is completely enjoying teaching. Then a few chapters later the author goes back into orientation week. There is also the timing of the two parties that do not match up, i.e., at one point they are on the same day, then two days apart, and finally a week apart.The author also forgot to take out a few of her notes. There are sentence fragments that state  “Testimonies for Angela“ and the other that says “Talk about becoming a librarian" and the text goes on to complete these task.I hope that this review will help the author correct her copy. The story is really a great story that deserves to be read and appreciated without errors that are this exaggerated.