Review: good start that left me wanting more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2013
good start that left me wanting more. Interesting concept but was very short. I'm glad it was free, I don't think I would have paid for how little there was. It felt too abrupt and unfinished to be a stand alone novella. All parts should have been together for there to be any character development. This just felt like the first few chapters of a book. Good writing tho.