Review: Great for free....very short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 26, 2013
This is the beginning, of what I am hoping, is a series.  The story in and of itself is very good--held my attention and I wanted to finish it.  I was not happy that at 67% through (according to Kindle) the story ends...the other 33% are ads/excerpts of other works.  I don't mind when an author uses the last bit of an ebook to promote their other work--but I do have a problem when the promotions are, essentially, half of the actual story length. The whole file is 54 pages, meaning that the story is approximately only 36 pages.For FREE---definitely....but not for more, waaay too short.  I was sad to see that short #2 and #3 are both 58 pages and $0.99.I will wait and see if the author possibly bundles them.