Review: Good book in need of editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
I really enjoyed this book.  I liked the different character POVs that were used in the storytelling.  I thought that each of the five characters had distinct enough voices and backgrounds that they were easy to tell apart and were engaging, even if I didn't like Dave.  Maybe that was the point, to make him unlikable.The one downside to this book is the editing.  There were quite a few places where extraneous commas were used or there should have been some punctuation and wasn't or a few misspellings.  I find this funny, since one of the characters corrects herself on her own grammar.  I have to admit that when the POV changed from the first character to the second character, I was a little thrown off, because I wasn't expecting it.Overall, the book was really good and if Ms. Frater has gotten herself a dedicated editor, I am looking forward to the sequel.