Review: Show the number of pages!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 26, 2012
Not bad writing, but I am unhappy that the product page did not indicate this a was a short story. I'm a bargain hunter, and I'm not interested in buying short stories. I guess I should have looked at the kbyte size, but I prefer when the number of pages is listed.Tha story idea itself is OK, and the writing is good, but ends almost as soon as it begins, and the ending isn't an ending. This is more like the first chapter of a novel. It wasn't well crafted as a short story.