Review: Edit, edit, EDIT!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 4, 2012
I oddly found this just in time for the 4th and thought it would be a nice pool side Kindle read. But it wasn't. I can deal with poor editing but not if it's beyond distracting.This book needs to be pulled ASAP and reedited and made more mature. The hero is a 40 something presidential candidate who's a bachelor and needs a pretend First Lady to help him with the public. On paper the heroine is just right yet the author writes her HORRIBLY.I'm not convinced this wasn't a fan fiction. The heroine is a blushing, stumbling, stuttering teenager. She's 30ish yet all she does is speak in halted sentences and she giggles more than Tickle Me Elmo. It's not cute. She's suppose to be this smart and mature speech writer when she comes off like some 14 year old girl on her high school's student council for the first time.Too many exclamation points, too much giggling, too much "Oh my- um-well, - why yes! Of-course! Michael!" she giggled." make this book unreadable.Unless you enjoy cringing and rolling your eyes every paragraph pass this one on by like you're in a float in the 4th of July Parade.