Review: Has potential but did not quite get there...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2014
The first chapter was totally my style and it was high fives all around on about page three. The meeting of the two female characters was awesome!Then chapter two arrives, at the time I was so glad the Author did not start with this chapter as it was all so typical and cliché.Unfortunately it just missed the mark. It is a shame as she certainly has talent and with some refinements it could have been awesome. The one liners were a crack up and this kept some parts interesting. Character interaction can be hard to do well but it certainly was good here.We needed more connection with the male lead. I need more than the typical easy over the top description of a hot male. The reader needs to relate to behaviour and let the character build.It was all very 'insta' and it just did not get there.I would like to see the Author get some assistance as I think she has great skills and I particularly liked the one liners that popped out of the main leads mouth!