Review: the second time around this book gets better...editing was a plus
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2012
the second time around this book did get better. My guess is that some editor got to it to clean it up. But, here's a note to the author read some of Thomas Deprima's Galaxies unknown series, in every book the spends at least a paragraph re-explaining who characters are and how they tie into whats happening. People not reading the First book would have a terrible time understanding the second. I went a little crazy having read Galaxy unknown series in the correct order, having found the re-explanation of character annoying. Now, I find that it was the correct thing to do for the wider audience.