Review: Not exactly bad, but not really good either.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 16, 2012
For the first time in my extremely long erotic reading life, I had to skip the menage sex scenes in a book. Which really was bad since it was the main reason I chose it. I prefer my menages to have the m/m be involved with each other, so this story seemed to be perfect to me when I read the blurb. But goodness me, the scenes read like really bad cyber sex interactions. The sentences seemed to not flow together, which took me right out of the sex scene. That should not happen when sex is involved.The story itself was good, which is why I kept reading, but this writer had a hard time when it came to the characters voices, especially when they were speaking to each other.The word please was used so much that my kindle froze as I was trying to keep track of the number of times it came out of the mouth of the heroine.Also, please lose the amount of !!!! (exclamation points) that for some odd reason was put at the end of almost every utterance leading up to and during the sex scenes.I really would like more stories starring these three, but not until the writer gets a thesaurus and some more experience in writing about sex.