Review: Very catchy and intriguing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 24, 2013
This is only a few short pages, and then BAM!- The epilogue. So if you're thinking you're going to get something the length of a novella or longer, you aren't.The length aside (I was really put off that it wasn't longer because it was so interesting!) I loved the main character, Sam. I love characters that are witty, snappy, and have grit, and she has all that in spades. The best part I think is her humor. The dialogues were well done and seemed very natural, and there weren't any American English grammar errors I could detect- so that was great =) I can't stress enough how difficult it is to read a story (free or not) and get snagged on a grammatical or spelling error every other paragraph. Thank you Ms. Halpin, for not having any in this short story! It's a relief for sure.As for story line, I can't say if it lacked or not since we were only given a glimpse of the overall picture of Sam and her life as an insurance adjuster but from what I could tell, all the necessary ingredients are there. What little plot there was to this oh-so-short story, was well executed and unfolded well enough to not leave me with any questions.Will be buying the next Witches book because I need a little more Latino Pyromania in my life.