Review: Not worth it even being free
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2011
This was bad enough that after the first couple of pages I had to put it down.  The writing flow was just not there.  The text felt jerky as if each chunk was written separately and just crushed together in the hopes they would work.  The descriptions were poor and the main character was just plain dull.  The surrounding characters are like paper dolls staning in the rain - stiff and washed out.I really dislike saying anything bad about something that someone has spent a great deal of time creating and working on but in this instance, the author needs to have a professional editor go over it and explain what is wrong and where, so that he can improve his craft.