Review: not that hot
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2013
This is a super short erotic fantasy following a recently dumped 31 year old lead who ends up vacationing with her parents in Tuscany. They are staying at the home of a 48 year old family friend (Rose). Despite losing her partner, Cat quickly perks up at the attentions of the older Rose and is distracted by visions of Rose in her bikini. It is written in first person from Cat's point of view. Cat is a lesbian and Rose is supposedly straight... or was. Eventually they find time to sneak off from old mom and dad and get stinking drunk and do each other.Technically, I don't think the writing was bad at all. I just didn't think it was too hot. I guess it was just okay for erotica.... I've read better. Every time I read a short work, I realize I prefer novels. I need more of a romance, build up, and character development. I really wasn't that into it... and I guess I'm not used to f/f stories like this. It just seems like the kind of story bisexuals and men like with two hot femmes running around in bikinis and all and saying things like "you dirty cougar." Then again, my ideal story is an erotic-romance by my oh so over-melodramatic lesfic authors, lol... so I just needed more. Though I did appreciate she waited to about halfway through before there was any sex.Then again, it took me less than an hour to read it, lol. Every Kindle page was 2% of the story. And when it hit 80%, the story ended and the rest was just ads for this author's other books, lol. Annoying. But for two bucks, it's kinda hard to complain. You get what you pay for. And still I think I got robbed.So I guess I'm not surprised that this author rewrote the exact same book from the older woman's point of view in Younger Than Yesterday.... I think I'll pass.2.5 stars