Review: Much editing required
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 31, 2013
The story is a good one but there are so many errors I could not really read the book. I generally don't give a review in the middle of the book but, I made a serious exception here. The flow of the basics who what when where and why are so jumbled you barely knew whom anyone were, not to mention the fact the context and prose where disjointed. The book has so much potential I'd it is edited.