Review: 2 1/2 STARS for short story effort
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2012
Okay I have to say this again.  Even really good novelist have trouble writing a short story or novella, as this is called.  The limitation on pages makes it very hard to create any in-depth character development, let alone a stirring plot and still have time for a climax and good ending.  I can't say I've read more than a dozen in my life that managed it well.  This is not one of them.