Review: an extra star for storyline
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 30, 2013
The storyline is equivalent for a harlequin romance. However, only one star for the writing.The author needs to learn the skill of using narrative voices; 1st, 2nd, 3rd.  You can't mix them up in one paragraph or even during a sentence.  There needs to be a reason to switch the voice, and to do so without interrupting the flow of the book.Some wrong words were used, and some scenes had no purpose.  An editor would have caught those.