Review: Excellent start to a story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2014
An interesting slant to weave in the young Prince Albert, an Apache Helicopter pilot too with the overall story, sounds sort of familiar :) . I really enjoyed it but being a short story was over just way too soon. ***Spoiler Alert *** Bit surprised you decided to kill off one of the key nasty/bad guys so early and why he chose to be on his own in the barn with Albert and the girls seemed too strange after Albert had jumped him once before  ** End Spoiler AlertGood details on the weapons as I am keen on military hardware but it could be something that might annoy others,I liked it. Yes, I am keen and ready to read the next one but only hope it is a bit longer as I am such a quick reader.Well done Peter!!