Review: Not up to his other works
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 28, 2013
I like the idea of this book but way to much jumping around and no background no development of the people,One minute the hero is running down tunnels that are crashing in on him, then in a prison cell with members of the Vatican then a woman is smoking and drinking later the hero needs her to help him recover coins from an evil person and we don't know why he is evil or what he plans to do with total evil, why is the hero a hero,  why will all the hero's friends try to kill him for an unknown amount of money why does the Vatican trust the hero and what is the purpose of this very short story.  Why is there no balance in this story.I really didn't care from the first chapter because I was busy re-reading trying to find the segway from one leap to another in the storyJ R Rain, I usually love your stories short or long but this just isn't up to the standards I regard as your writing skills or imagination