Review: Okay read
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 3, 2014
Decent storyline but the execution is choppy, no flow and blah.The writing is inconsistent and immature. The h Harley is of course LOVED BY EVERY MALE in this story and for Bikers they sure are weak wowsa. There's sentences that don't make sense. I know the author isn't from the U.S. but if your going to write a story based in the U.S. my suggestion is to do your homework and get the lingo of things right. An MC does NOT call their cut a half coat...just one of the many odd descriptions of things.The story is fast moving and choppy. The dialogue at times is so over the top unrealistic and cheesy.There's NO sex in it and it ends in a cliffie.... for those who might want to know.This book could be good with a lot of editing and the author's growth as a writer.