Review: Why? Why? Why? Why?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 23, 2012
The Playboy's Proposition didn't actually come until the book was half over. Then is was so indescript that I almost missed it because by the time he finally propositioned her, I was bored and confused.**************************Spoiler Alert********************************************What was the point of opening with the Merry-maid outfit when nothing ever came of it? How did Sheyna (a commoner) attend the same school as Jace (the mega-rich kid)? Sheyna referred to Jace as her boss, he referred to her as a co-worker; which was it? Why would Jace bid on her in an auction then turn the trip into a sexual harassment seminar for his hotel chain? And how was he exempt from sexual harassment charges when, as her superior, he sexually harrassed her? Why were Sheyna's brothers even in the story? They added absolutely nothing to the plot.Why was Sheyna still questioning whether they were actually attracted to each other at the 62% mark on my Kindle? And after they'd kissed, fondled, etc. and she'd had 'relations' thinking of him, she still wasn't sure they liked each other?The whole proposition thing was a complete letdown. He wanted to own her mind, body, and soul, but she took over and they conducted a seminar in between sex sessions. Also, if he owned the hotel chain, why weren't they in the best suite the hotel had to offer?Why did this seasoned author not have a few of her friends read and critique the book before pushing the send button to publish? If she did and they told her this was wonderful, they are not her friends. Heck, I would have done a pre-read for her because she does have skills. Why did this seasoned author not employ a good editor? At one point, two whole paragraphs were repteated verbatim in addition to other editing issues that took away from the story.I'm sad to say that after reading this book, all I have are more questions and no sense of satisfaction for having devoted my time and money to this installment. Sad to me because I loved 'Say My Name'.Angie, girl, what went wrong?