Review: liked the story, author has potential.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2014
Liked the story. This author has the potential to become a very good writer. The biggest need in my opinion is better development of the "alien environment and the humans reactions to the new environment. For instance, how big is the starship, (length, height,and width)? How many decks? These women are exposed to many new things and will be as amazed, confused and bewildered and the Aliens are about humanity. Non of that is developed. I look forward to seeing how this author develops her writing skills in future stories.