Review: Hopeful
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2013
I had high hopes for this story. It started with everything I like in a story: mystery, fantasy, a heroine that's an underdog, and a powerful hero. It started out with a mystery to be solved. Then it kind of fizzled. The chapters are very short. I wanted the story to go on. I wanted to read about intrigue and drama. The author painted a beautiful undersea world in ruin. This captured my interest. I wanted to find out more about this world. I wanted her to learn more about the rainbow people. It has all the potential to be an outstanding story. I gave it 3 stars because I did like the story and because I don't know how to do a half star. Hopefully the author will add more to the story.