Review: Good series, but it needs editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 19, 2014
I have enjoyed reading this series.  I like the characters and the story.  They are all interesting.  However, there are things that the author could improve.  For example, we get it already - you've said this or that a DOZEN or more times (just in 1 book) you don't have to repeat the speech about how everyone is equal among the Riss or about how they don't hold grudges or about how they are so peace loving more than once a book.  It makes my teeth clench.  Also, there were some word usage problems in each that could have been cured by a read-through of an editor.  If you're having problems locating one, offer to pay a local high school English teacher to read your novels through and "grade/correct" them for you.  This might be cheaper than you think.  After all, many English teachers love to read and may give you a price break if you credit them as the editor.I would have given your series a higher rating if not for these problems.