Review: Lacks that special something
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 15, 2013
I think overall the book was fine but lacked that special ingredient that makes a book a "wow!" for me.  First off their initial conversations appear very awkwardly written.  Even if the dad in the story is handsome I don't think a 1st grade teacher is going to be this flighty.  She seemed almost angry with his son at first which seems out if sync with the the of the storyline where she continuously puts aside her own needs in her quest to be sweet and accommodating.  Other scenes make no sense like moving to her friends house in a matter of hours.  I don't care how little you have moving and packing up an entire apartment that quickly seems unrealistic.  I also felt in the end I wasn't convinced the hero n the story was going to put her needs as a priority against the sons.