Review: Not a good story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 7, 2013
I'm not a professional reviewer.  So if you're looking for that...move on.  *Spoilers may be here*It wasn't that the writing was bad.  It was fine but the story was really boring and strange during a good portion of it.  Have you read a book where you start skimming?  Well, I did that multiple times.  The characters were difficult to like.  I thought Sahara, the main character, was very shallow and annoying.  If a women in SoCal did the things she did, she would be killed within a week.  Who meets a guy at the gym and then goes to his house after knowing him for 3 minutes to try his smoothies? NO ONE SMART (or you're looking for a hook up).Sahara then proceeds to choose between two guys that she is dating. Supermodel Gym Guy vs Good looking/caring/chunky guy. I feel she chose the Supermodel guy based on his looks only. When she has inner dialogue about Supermodel guy (Donovan), she always brings up his good looks.  She rarely says anything about his personality (well he doesn't have much of that). She says she loves him but that's not the vibe I got from the writing.The other guy ( Robert ), she says he gets her "emotionally" and she's attracted to him as well.  She seems really into Robert. Then breaks it off with him because she wants to see the Donovan (Supermodel) instead.  It seems like she's thinking with her hooha than her brain. It's just not believable.She meets the Most High Witch, Paris, on the side of the road (literally), then follows her to her Coven without questioning it?  What?!  Paris tells Sahara that she is a powerful witch and wants to train her. Sahara says "Oh, I knew it!" Then proceeds to cry and get emotional. I just cannot/could not route for a character this shallow and stupid.  The date scenes were decent but there really isn't much of a story here.  It could have been so much better.