Review: Lucky Strike Green was OK
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2013
Lucky Strike Green was an OK book. The alternate universe concept that got the story into an alternate history was good, the characters were also good, except that there were many of them that the book jumped around to. The book needs a lot of editing, not for grammar and punctuation, but for the story line. It is fragmented with chapters on characters that have nothing to do with the overall plot. If they had been left out, no one would have noticed. There are wars going on, but not a lot of action is described. (Maybe I've been reading too many space operas.)  In summary, good concept, but not well put together.