Review: Not A Bad First Effort
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 11, 2014
I am not sure this would be classed a romantic comedy.  Though there are a few truly funny scenes.  The basic plot is that a young couple are on the verge of divorce when the husband looses his memory (wife clocked him with a wine bottle).  The rest of the story is their attempts at bringing back his memory and rediscovering each other.Simple plot and small cast of characters.  Writer needed a better editor and there are quite a few problems with grammar but they seem to be from too great a reliance on spell and grammar check.  The story is still readable unless you have a low tolerance for those issues.Author does have some good ideas and the flow of the book is not bad.  Characters need a little more development especially the husband. All in all though not bad for a first book.  Author may have promise if she continues to grow in her writing and pays a little more attention to detail (grammar, editing)Pretty much the type of thing you would see on Hallmark.  That also is not a bad thing but should give you a good idea if you will like the book.