Review: Didn't even finish reading it..
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 9, 2013
I got to the second part and the story contains vampires. That's when I quit reading. I'd already suffered through the simple writing and lousy punctuation of the first part; throwing vampires into the mix was more than I could bear. The lousy punctuation was primarily an absence of comma's where necessary.I'll give the author his props about having a good idea in the first part and a good character as well. That's all I can say that's positive.