Review: Good not great
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 16, 2013
I found this author to be a good writer. She has some excellent ideas, but she isn't quite there yet safari as fleshing them out. I loved the vulnerability of the hero and heroine in this book. In the first book, Khan seems pretty strong and tough. Murad, on the other hand, is still pretty tough but he is the youngest brother and is not always taken seriously by his older siblings. He needs a mate that he can take care of who will depend on him. Gale is perfect for him. She needs someone to love who will love her and her little kleptomaniac problem and not "return" her. Great ideas but the author needed to flesh them out a bit more. Maybe a prologue of each character when they were younger would have worked like a scene where Gale has stolen again and she hears her new parents arguing as to whether or not they should return her to the orphanage. Murad could have a scene where he is compared to his brothers by someone and found lacking.