Review: Cheesy and Unclean
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 30, 2013
Okay the unlikely way that Karin gets her highly coveted new job, I'll cut the author some slack on that.  It seemed awkward in the beginning of her new settings, almost embarrassing to read.  The uncomfortableness just increased for me, when the sex scenes pop up.  I've been married for years, so sex is not unknown to me,  but geez, way too much over the top when it comes to the writing of these.  And the language?  Did you really need to use the "F" word quite so much?  My final "complaint" is the phrasing.  It went from describing things in a natural way to " when the young intern makes her way back to her space.."  "The young intern this and the young intern that".  This is done time and time again.  I found it really irritating and it disrupted the story, mixing in her own thoughts and then the impersonal The intern bit. Ryan also got some of the same treatment with "The young CEO" and "the young billionaire" written into sentences, just to name a few.  He doesn't get as many as Karin.  Maybe I should just change my rating to"1 Star"  because I am going to dump this story. There were a few things that were good but too deeply hidden in the rest of the junk.  I never want to see this story again.