Review: Better as a novel
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 11, 2013
This is a short story with an interesting concept however I felt the author didn't have a clue what to do with any of it.  It was just too short to be well developed.  There were plot elements that were introduced and then rushed through in order to get to the end of the story.  More character development would have helped improve the story as well.