Review: Disappointed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2013
I read this in less than an hour. I continued to read it only because I realized how short the story was. I kept hoping for something better. This is a short story - not a book. I wouldn't even call it a novella. It could have been a good story. However, there was not enough depth to the characters, too much telling and not enough showing, and the story line was a bit unbelievable. If the author had expanded on the characters and the story, it might have been a good book. At the end,I wondered why on earth I bothered to read it.