Review: Silly, ridiculous, confusing mess
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 16, 2013
I'm 24% of the way through and I'm giving up. The dialog is all over the place. A rock star suddenly being addressed by military rank. Say what? Oh he's undercover. Got it. He's a Navy SEAL. (They would NEVER EVER EVER call each other soldier) the entire premise is beyond far fetched. So far the only thing missing is he's also a Scottish highlander who is a vampire. Still maybe by the middle of the book.Now we are into the other shake your head in confusion plot point. Location. Diablo, Arizona. Hot bed of movie stars, rock stars, expensive housing and terrorism. Where is this magical place? It doesn't exist. Oh there is probably a Diablo Arizona but it's not like in this book. Set it in LA, or Atlanta, Dallas or somewhere plausible and in existence.This book reads like it was written by a group of young women who each wrote a few sentences, the then in a hat, then organized by whatever was pulled out next. Terrible. I give it I've star for effort and another because there is a glimmer of goods story telling. Needs an editor. If the author has one find a good one!