Review: Unfinished novella
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2011
My thoughts on this bookPros:Good and original storyQuick readUnexpected twist in the story when young Sallis used the Gift at the endCons:Young character, Sallis, too mature for his years.  Not believable!Sometimes the author's style did not make sense, no logicNot clear whether the author is reaching a young audience or more mature audienceEnded too abruptlyTowards the end of the story, language did not flow smoothlyReader had to guess that there will be a continuationA good author should be able to confuse the reader with the story, but not the style of writing.  Two different approaches.  I hope you understand what I am trying to say here.Good luck!