Review: Why do I do this to Myself?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2013
I was not impressed at all with Fate Interrupted part One, but I wanted to give the author another chance. There are so many problems with this book it makes my head spin.There is a great difference in writing that matters and writing just because others can. Being a good writer is not in everyone and just because you can self-publish does not mean you should.The storytelling here is simply awful- as in totally unbelievable. I found that how the villian finally 'gets is' pretty far fetched. Dean and Evy are annoying in their love- which sounds just as bad as it truly was. I found that they did not really have a relationship- news flash, sex is not a relationship. It was like they were teenagers or young adults who just discovered sex for the first time and could not get enough. Ug. While some books are done this way for a certain reason- there is no real develpment of the characters and this is the second book and final one in the series. I don't buy it. Give me something besides the sex and the whinning beacuse 'I lost the love of my life'. And to top it all off, everything in the end is nicely wrapped up and made me want to vomit. Neither one of them really deserved how the book ended, I wanted them to sufffer- and I never want that. The characters were just annoying with their inability to look beyond their misfortunes, do what they want regardless of their consequences and dig on others who are trying to carry on.As far as the minor-plots, they were subpar at best. I did not care enough about her pot smoking brother-in-law or her younger, equally sex obsessed sister. Also, all the bakery problems, who cares??? This story is takes placed in the now and I mean who opens a bakery with this economy? But I digress...Overall, I will not read anything else by this author.Warning: Language, Sexuality, Drug Use