Review: Too Wordy!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2014
This started as a great action story.  The first book had plenty of action, but I found myself jumping from paragraph looking for action. I do not care for the bedroom scenes where we are being shown three kids and four adults all sleeping in one bed and taking showers together and there is nothing going on. Too much time is being spent showing how Debbie expects to die soon, and is trying to find Bruce the right wife for a replacement.  I can figure that part out for myself.  I only saw two really good battles where I would read faster to see the ending. I jumped through the book to find excitement.All that being said, I am looking forward to the next one to see where he will go with government take over.  My advice is to leave some of the personal family situations for us to figure out.  I don't care which woman Bruce picks, I want to see bad guys eliminated.