Review: Rousingly fun story but desperately needs proofreading!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 3, 2012
What a fun story! The author seems to have a good imagination regarding playing "what if...?" with world events. The plot twists kept it interesting in all three volumes.The reason for three stars instead of four or five was because of what other reviewers have said about poor editing. Most of the errors were glaringly obvious (poor punctuation, repeated words, misspellings) that even a casual glance would show. Some other issues included awkward sentence structure and style gaffes. Didn't the author have spell check and style check turned on in his word processor? After the first few chapters in the first volume I got used to the mistakes, but it shouldn't be necessary for a reader to mentally compensate for such obvious foulups as he is reading.It's a great story spoiled by obvious problems. Mr. Yoshida: PAY ATTENTION!