Review: Great premise
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 20, 2013
And that is where the complements stop. This is a short novella masquerading as a short story. To get the complete story you will have to pay for 4 stories for the inflated price of $16. Even a long book doesn't rate that high of a cost. This is a short novella! Does the story have promise? I actually think so, but the full book should cost $4-5. This isn't a masterpiece of writing. This is a sex story. The 2 main characters are interesting but lack development. One is a junior realtor hoping for her first big sale. The second is a mysterious tycoon who is the prospective client. That is all the development you will get. I want more for my money.