Review: Pretty, but needs revision
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 2, 2012
Pretty illustrations are the main appeal to this book, but the illustrations are very similar for many pages; more variety would be a plus. The story should have been edited; at times it makes little sense. I know that I could not write a cohesive story in another language, so I would have gotten help from a native speaker/writer if I did. I think if the author did so and revised her book accordingly, it would appeal to preteens and teens who like shoujo manga.