Review: Nice plot/poor editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2013
Lord James Harrington was a nice character. He is nice to everyone, fair, loves his wife. His seemingly only flaw is his propensity for sticking his genteel nose where it doesn't belong. The story was fine, but unpolished. A couple of passes by an experienced editor would have tightened the characters, plot, and mechanics bumping my rating.