Review: Not Ready for Prime Time
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2014
I was interested in the story but I could not abide the writing. This author is no where near ready for an audience. I finished the book annoyed by every paragraph. I felt like I was in my car with my 16 year old niece rushing me through a story. None of the characters where fleshed out (at all). There were traits added to them to tantalize but with zero depth. Skimmed through some backstory for both the male leads that leaves you saying, "And......?" The back and fourth repartee between the characters I surmise was supposed to be witty, it wasn't. It was almost like the author read a how to write fiction book and threw in everything but the kitchen sink and never bothered writing fill in. I sooooo want my money back. I'm actually mad at myself for wasting the time to finish it.