Review: Comical sex scenes
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2014
***Amazon wouldn't post my original review so let's try this one ** First off let me say that I would give this 0 stars for all the sex scenes but I'll get to that later. The plot was decent and I am sure the author put some time and effort into this book. With that being said, the alpha male desperately needs to STOP with the ridiculous sex dialogue.....for example.."oh baby, say you want me to suck your ni**les, um, ah, yes, say it, say it, I want you to suck my ni**les" And the unbelievable woman who is supposed to be a decorated major...in special forces??? are you kidding?? She is weak..weak...weak..with her ex-husband, with her dad, she's just destined to be alone..**sigh** poor thing. The straw is when she looks at Dameon and says she's doesn't know what to do with his package because he is so masculine..WHAT??? She doesn't know where to stick it? Seriously?? Anyway, I read these sex scenes to my co-workers and they thought the same thing. Comical! There is another review on here that sums it up.....sounds like reading a sex manual.....could've been a good one....won't be reading another one.