Review: Still a great book, but needed better editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 9, 2012
I did still love Found, though not nearly as much as the first three books. Why?1. I think editing was thrown clear out the window with this one. There were so many grammatical errors that I began to wonder if I would finish the book - they were really hard for me to get beyond.2. I liked the character of Xairn - the ex Scourge, but Lauren I found completely unbelievable. She has just been through horror after horror and yet she acts like someone who hasn't. She only reacts once when her ex employee does something stupid and that was for a few seconds. Plus, her inability to listen to Xairn's fears - which he clearly states over and over and over again, was really annoying.Now, I liked that the Scourge were a D/s race plus it comes out that in the beginning before the male Scourge became real jerks, that the dominant/submissive roles were natural. Over times, the males became real sadists - the AllFather the worst of the lot.The erotic scenes were nicely done. I loved the scene between Lock, Deep, and Kat! Nothing like being the center of a Twin Kindred cookie. And I liked how the author kept showing Lauren time after time in stronger and stronger ways that Xairn meant what he said. (though again - she didn't listen)So, why am I giving this a 4 star rating rather than a 3? Because all-in-all, it was still an enjoyable read and a book I will read again. Plus, the author says she admittedly only planned 4 books, so this was an ending in some ways - though as she wrote it she realized there was a 5th & 6th book out there so those two stories were started in this one. But it did end one major arc.Plus - even with the issues it had, I still recommend it. I hold out hope that she will have her books re-edited and that we can then re-download them in their newly edited states.