Review: Oops! Needs serious editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2014
The stories are well conceived. The characters are well drawn and I love them all. The scenes are artfully set. But to be honest the grammar and the occasional use of an incorrect word nearly drove me crazy. The English teacher in me knows not to say, "Give the book to he and I." Similar pronoun placement appeared most of the time.  I found myself wishing I could have done some extensive editing (or that someone had) before this series was published.