Review: gory and gruesome
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2013
This author has shown that he can write. He has demonstrated his mastery of plot, pace,etc. and the nuts and bolts of grammar, punctuation and spelling. So, why did I only rate this story 3***? Reading Village Americana was like listening to to music that is continually played with the volume cranked up. You can only hear the melody and everything else is drowned out. Village Americana is brutally violent,sexually sadistic, and involves teenage victims. Just because you are capable of writing something doesn't always mean that you should. Sometimes, less is more. Suggest certain things and let your readers' minds imagine the rest. Now let's see you show your skill at utilizing nuances.