Review: Needs editing....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2013
The rationale behind the basic story is improbable, but OK.BUT: this book needs some tough editing. There is: improper grammar, spasmodic incorrect uses of the apostrophe, a few sentences make no sense at all and some of the dialogue seems forced and unnatural... The tale features the `hero' using the `first person' dialogue and others in the `third person' - which you can get used to after a while when it changes between chapters but it's disconcerting when the dialogue is in the first person, and the next sentence uses the third person....