Review: This Review is For All the Books
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2014
I am sooo addicted to Him and Jessica. These stories are short to read, and go quickly, and they remind me of the old Penny Dreadfuls that were popular in the late 19th century. My ONLY problem with the series is that the author really needs an editor, or a better one. He has a problem with tense in his sentence structure and you can tell that he was so intent upon writing, he was not paying attention to past, present, or future tense.I do have a suggestion as regards to Jessica's husband. The author tries so well not to mention His name that the author uses He, Him, and His a lot. I wish that these pronouns had, for Him, at least been capitalised because sometimes I had to go back to read a paragraph to be clear who was "he" in the sentence. Sometimes it was NOT Jessica's husband, and that tended to mess up the continuity of the chapter for me.I will read Taken! 50 but only after Taken! 51 comes out because I read other reviews that hinted at something VERY BAD that happens in Taken! 50.