Review: With Some Real Editing Could Be Very Interesting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 20, 2013
I really wish I could give this a higher rating. The story seemed to be interesting, but releasing this in a rough draft form makes no sense to me. The plot lines were a mangled mess, particularly in the last two tales in the novella. Characters were sometimes hard to follow.On the plus side, the writer has the beginnings of some interesting world-building going on. It is imaginative and would be easy to get lost in. When the plot twists make sense, they are intriguing.I wish to note that I read the 4th Edition of this book and as such, some editing must have been done since the unedited rough draft version was initially released. It certainly needs some more work before I could recommend this to others.I picked this up when it was offered for free on Amazon