Review: BookWhisperer Reviews
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2013
The Fighter's Block start out with some incredibly powerful intensity. An average good ol' boy coming across a damsel in distress.That was the first chapter of this book, and it effectively reels you into the story. Such a powerful start gave me an expectation for the story to come. Raw potential pours out of this situation, but I unfortunately found some issues with the remainder of the stories deliver. It is evident early on that the style of writing needed some improvement. Readers thrive on spontaneity, but it is important to create the scenario in such a way that readers will be able to able to process the logic and understand through the character. This was obvious once the story began rolling. The second slightly larger issue that I found early on was the delivery of Quinn's story. Point of views through out The Fighter's block were random and mixed causing it to be difficult to follow. Once I had a firm grasp on the this delivery it was an expected transition. The overall story was one that had me captivated, and hanging on the next turn of events. This author has some incredible potential, and I would love see the steady progression of talent in future novels. It would be wonderful to see her excel and overcome all obstacles to create an work of art.~BookWhisperer Reviewer JO~