Review: Revised but still has misspelled words Kindle version Jan 2013
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2013
I purchased this series because it stated it was revised and on sale for $2.99.  However, there are still misspellings throughout the Kindle version and I have listed them as follows:  Location 500 "feeing" should be "feeling".  Location 540 "was" should be "what". Location 611 "business" should be "businesses". Location 711 "her" should be removed from "her hers". Location 761 "speaking" should be "you speaking".  Location 773 "Oh" should be "Of".  Location 787 "mother" should be "her mother". Location 801 "desert" should be "dessert".  Location 802 "desert" should be "dessert".  Location 931 you? should be you?".  Location 1156 "Let should be "Let's.  Location 2035 "then," should be "them,". Location 2430 "his barriers" should be "barriers".For the most part this first book of series was a little bit slow and Rana was like a broken record in the drama department.  I don't know what lines were added to extend this version of the seriers but I bet it could have been edited for the repetition sentences used by Rana which slowed the reading down in my opinion.