Review: Linda P.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 14, 2014
The plot/story of this book is a good one.  Some editing problems but I've seen worse.  Now for the problems with it.  Lots, and I mean lots, of redundancy.  Like it was either written for a child or an adult that has trouble remembering what was written a few pages back.  It was like the author wanted to make sure the reader understood exactly what he was trying to say instead of letting his book carry the emotion.  I wanted to finish the book to see what happened to all but it was a push to do so.  Some of the events were more in the realm of a fairy tale.  I won't be reading any more of Mr. Ray' s books.