Review: So many mistakes. A good story gone wrong
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2014
this person needs a better editor right now. so many misspelled words to the point that it ends up changing the meaning of the sentences. I feel like the writer lost their way at some points and had to find it again. I appealed to this story because I'm from NYC and I love Harlem. but it didn't feel like a Harlem based story. this has great potential but has to be redone. I don't think I will be buying book two at all. it's not worth paying for it yet