Review: problems
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 9, 2014
The cons far outweighed the pros on this story.  Despite an occasionally likeable heroine and her giant dog (wolf):1) The author needs an editor really, really badly.  All the malaprop/homophone problems were driving me up the wall.  I could barely finish the story it was so annoying.2) Thin on plot.  Generally the story centers around the lovers and their depression until finding each other, then each other, then others finding each other.  Some angst with her mother.  An old high school admirer villain and evil brother.  Nothing terribly intriguing or clever.3) I had a hard time liking the heroine.  She just seemed to act selfish and immature for most of the story.4) No originality.  This same world building/wolf mythos has been seen in so many other paranormal stories and this seemed borrowed straight out of them.