Review: Great Story but Needs Editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 20, 2014
Loved the story telling and interesting dialogue between these biker dudes and their old ladies. The relationships where raw and the women had this cute but with attitude manner that befits this type of life style. The alpha males abound in this tale with their marshmallow centers and family first ideology that grasped my attention. Bikers can still be mean but lovable and in this story they are all that.My chief complaint with this book was the grammatical errors and omitted letters that were frequent and sometimes annoying. But I do like this author enough to invest in future books because her diamond in the rough writing shows real promise. Hopefully she will take her readers criticism and constructively finesse the next book as I'm sure her popularity will soar if she does. All the components are here in this book to make it a 5 star read if only the author had not rushed the release and done some editing before hand. Such a shame about that........