Review: This is a story that had lots of potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2013
This story should have been a full length novel, with the background story and the potential to go forward from where it picks up. I would love to know how the characters execute there plans and how things turned out for them. instead they focused on their lust and desire, and yeah that's all fin and good, but the back story was very interesting and the happily ever after was nowhere in sight here.Message to the author; Please consider writing this story in a full length novel. Thank you. :-)