Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 29, 2011
This story started well, but it is too short, with too many unaddressed issues. I think if this were developed into a full length book it might be good, and the premise was interesting. The author writes with good wit. I might be persuaded to read something else by the author, if it were full length to show case his talent. This story seemed to be missing a middle part, with only a beginning and an only vaguely related ending.