Review: That editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 25, 2014
Okay, let me start by saying this, I liked the plot and romance. Although being a wifey is not a goal to strive for, I did like the gesture.Now why this received 2 stars. That dang on editing! Jeez, the beginning was hard to decipher and I was glad I wasn't, yes wasn't sober because I would have thrown the book away.  Too many people were talking and it was hard to tell who's who since there was no identifying of charcaters. The typos should have been dealt with in spellcheck.  Overall, I could see this being alright lesbian fiction, but get on fixing that grammar.