Review: Not enough substance
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 7, 2014
First I would like to say to the author the story has promise but I think that you rushed the story line to quickly finish the book. I believe if you took another look at the book you could really do a phenomenal job with character development. You needed to dig just a little more deeper than splicing DNA from the protagonist (Black) in your story. Also Spoiler Alert! After Black realizes that his DNA was one part of the creation to develop these creatures he offs himself was a little weak.As far as horror stories go it wasn't bad just not deep enough to really give it a higher rating. I found the beginning of the story more interesting than the build up of the rest of the book. If the artist could have kept the momentum of the first chapter going throughout the entire book it would have been a great read.I wish the author well and look forward to other books that show growth in the future!Jackie