Review: Please finish the story...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 24, 2012
Sat down and read it in under an hour - about right for 38 pages.You've got me hooked.  I'm dying to know how this finishes off.  I've got a bunch of wild ideas where the story might be headed, but they're my variants - would love to know if any of them are even close to what you are planning.