Review: Good, but Could be GREAT
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 27, 2012
What happens when you look out of the window of your life and realize that the world is crumbling down around you?  That's the question Noelle had to ask herself.  This short story is the answer she chose.  It's a quick read, but a good story.  It's a tale of repentance and forgiveness, a true "pay attention" to those raising young children.  I would have liked to see the story develop more and to get the "what happens next," but even this short snippet is a true demonstration of talent