Review: A good solid story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
This is a very good story with some characters, especially Art, that we can really appreciate.  The "Will" is certainly a magical force that is interesting albeit not well explained as to how it works, but this helps it get the characters through some tough times.I did find a few typos/spelling errors and the story had a few unnecessary sidelines and story loops that were not exactly finished.  The ending was a bit hurried and there was still time to bring us more without drawing out the story. The typos and unfinished arcs as well as the ending kept me from giving the book 5 stars.I shall continue to keep track of this author and pick up other works.  Solid 4 star reading here with this book.