Review: Like a premature ejaculation...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 12, 2013
it felt like things hadn't even begun and then it was over. Seriously, what was that 5 pages?This little gem has not softened me towards either short stories or erotica - that would be the porn without plot version (neither or which I particularly care for). It was however free so it did present a viable opportunity to broaden my horizons - despite that it was unsuccessful.I felt the story seemed rather pointless in that I didn't feel like I 'knew" and certainly didn't care about the characters. Without the emotional involvement, the sex itself was...meh...reminded me of one of the old circa 1980's porn movies...and I swear I heard the music cuing in my head.The story ends at 62% and the remainder of the "book" is an excerpt from Mine for tonight" which can also be found free, but is part of the "Billionaire's Obsession" series. This work looks like it may make more of a half hearted attempt to flesh out characters and incorporate a story line...but it did nothing for me.Oh well, nothing ventured, nothing gained...c'est la vie!