Review: Mail order bride
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 4, 2013
This is a short story. The premise is quite nice, but the execution was lacking. A few typos but not bad. Just to me the characters were rather flat and only showed more of themselves at the end. Also, the history of the ranch's name was odd and belief had to be suspended. And the ending just tied up fast. A few more pages of details would improve the lack of depth. This is very much a Christian story which for me is fine.