Review: Disappointed
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2014
Lynn Tyler's Pack Mates is an auto buy for me.  Although I don't usually write a review before I have finished, I am at 70% and struggling to get through it.  My biggest issue and complaint: grammatical errors!  The other books did not have these kinds of mistakes and this book is riddled with them.  Almost one every page!  It is exceedingly frustrating to find these when all it takes is one last read before publishing.  Or better yet get an editor!  I'm happy to volunteer :)The story itself is unsatisfactory.  At 70% I can't really tell you what the underlying plot is.  Other than perhaps setting the stage for future story lines, Michael and Justin are still trying to jump START their relationship.  Yes at 70% the two MCs are still trying to get the relationship going!  I have no issues with a book's only drama being emotional angst....as long as it is well written emotional angst.If the last 30% redeems itself in terms of the plot, I'll come back and amend my review.  However for me at this point, this story appears to be a rushed, choppy, disconnected book whose sole purpose is to provide a foundation for future story lines.  Which is really sad that Michael's story didn't get its due.