Review: Nice Effort
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
I give this book a 2.5 star rating.  In this very short read, the main characters Aaron and Tiffany re-unite after barely knowing each other in high school and fall in love.  The plot idea was a good one, but the story needed much more development.  SPOILER ALERT:  In a nutshell, Aaron had a secret high school crush on Tiffany who was a couple of years older.  They meet at the gym and start a friendship (a very brief friendship) that over one weekend turns into love and results in a marriage proposal.  There is a villain who tries to come between the two - but her attempt is not believable and leaves the reader with tons of questions.  The story was too neatly written (making the characters not believable), needed better editing (words missing, misspelled etc.).  I would encourage the author to continue with her craft, but I would suggest that she get some test readers to give her some feedback before publishing in the future.