Review: Starts good but soons falls short .
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 10, 2013
Too many inconsistancies , confuses her own characters to often making it confusing at times . Too many twists and turns in the story lines that makes it actually become unintersting . I have read 91 % of the book and have 3 more chapters I will finish it but I do wish she had nt turned me off by repeatedly using terms like ' baby blues ' over and over or his ' saddle brown eyes ' so often .now the wedding dress is baby blue ... not hard to tell the writers favorite color . I'm sorry this isn't a better review . She does have a few redeeming qualities in her writing and with better proof reading she may have been able to correct all the errors and it would have been much better .