Review: Solid mystery
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 5, 2013
You will appreciate the list of characters in the foreword section.  There are multiple key players.  It's a solid mystery.  But, If you're looking for a spicy read, you won't find it here.  There is, however, some romance and a well structured plot.  Personally, I would have liked more insight into the main character's thought processes when he was  deciding between his suitors.I found a few typos here and there that were a little jarring; as well as a few verb tense shifts that distracted from the narrative.  That said, it could use some tighter proofing.  An editor would have caught the few abrupt transitions that, while progressing the story, were at the expense of flow.  The abrupt transitions will take you outside of the book for a short while and you'll have to regain your reading rhythm -- at least that was the case for me.I did find myself caring about the characters and hope that there is a sequel.  Perhaps the author can partner with a more experienced writer in this genre to raise the heat level just a skosh.