Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
There are so many spelling and grammar errors, I found it distracting.  The story has potential but the writing is juvenile and diminished by  the preponderance of technical error.  Finding another word for "dopplered" is advisable - it is overused.  I do not recommend and won't be purchasing the sequels.  Sorry.