Review: LOVE IT! Would Give This Book 5 stars...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2012
If it were cleaned up a bit. There are some editing issues that are a little distracting. Several times throughout, words are repeated within the same sentence. There was misuse of words like 'there' and their', which is one of my pet peeves. Also there were times where the author would use future tense just out of the blue. That was a little distracting as well. Better editing and a good proofer will clean these things up and once that's done, you've got a real winner.**SPOILER ALERT**I love this story. As someone who is very well versed in the Lifestyle, I appreciated the attention to detail and the story of Scott and Mariana. There were several situations where the story could have gone into the overly dramatic realm, but Vera Roberts kept it real. The fact that these two were so honest and upfront was really refreshing. So often in these books, there's a lot of secrets and deception that you know will come back to bite the main characters in the ass. I'm just glad Vera didn't get boggled down in all of that drama. Trust is the most important thing in a Dom/sub relationship and that was clear from the get go.The best friend, Sarah, is a real piece of work. I love the way Scott handled her proposition. And Mariana didn't beat around the bush during the confrontation. Mariana is one of the smarter heroines I've read in a long time.The love and play scenes in this book were hot and accurate. I was fully engrossed in their relationship. Scott was gentle when he needed to be and deliciously rough when the situation called for it. I really have nothing bad to say about the story telling. I couldn't put the book down until I was finished and I knew I had to go to work the next morning, but it was just that good.I can't wait for Part 3 and the evil ex's return to the story. I'm patiently waiting for the next jewel from Vera. Good job lady!!