Review: fun at first
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2014
Adequately well written, fun little story...but it fell apart at the end. It felt as though the deadline came due and the author pulled an all-nighter to wrap up the story, regardless of how realistic it was, or how it flowed with the rest of the book.  I also thought it a strange mix of Christian and secular styles.  On the one hand the "good" brother thinks a lot about God making plans for him, but on the other hand the "bad" brother cleans up his act without turning to the Lord in any way.  I suppose this is not really bad, it was just a little unexpected, and againeft me feeling like the book was incomplete.