Review: Promising writer but not a great book
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 27, 2014
I rooted for this book to be better than it was the entire but in the end it just wasn't good. It wasn't bad but it wasn't bad.I like how the hero was gobsmacked by the heroine and really liked her attitude and everything else. I also enjoyed the little MMA details threaded throughout the book.The rest was pretty ordinary and not in a "yea! my favorite themes" way.What tipped the romance from being good are these sorts of things:The "I was a nerd but now I am hot" thing always grates on me a bit but I was able to move past that.Repetitions of thoughts and ideas.Her brother is a jerk. I have zero interest in reading a book about him.There was frenzy in the plot. Fast paced can be good but we get little insight into the hero at this pace and less couple time.The logic of the characters is odd and how a cop promotes piece is odder.I will try another book by this writer though. Promise is here.I was given this book for my honest review. So, there you have it.