Review: Muddled, But Diverting
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 8, 2013
I enjoyed this short story with its very entertaining concept, though I was sometimes confused. The author needed to do a better job of making the reader understand what she meant in places. The writing is somewhat awkward at the beginning, but improves substantially. This story would improve with editing involving the author reading it out loud it hear where it lacks a natural flow. The author could definitely stand to increase her occasionally limited vocabulary. Still, it's a novel, interesting story that I enjoyed despite the flaws.