Review: Very Poorly Written
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2010
Don't get me wrong; the premise and story were great, well developed and plausible.  The BIG problem with this book, aside from some Kindle formatting issues, which you can overlook easily enough, was that it was written so badly in terms of grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.I don't think that details regarding what someone does in the bathroom were needed, or one of the accused "scratching" himself, or an attorney pleasuring himself, by himself, they were so unnecessary, that they really detracted from the story and simply didn't belong.The title leads you to believe that right from the start there's a vigilante at work.  I was 44% into the book before the first vigilante act took place, so the description of the book is a little misleading.I enjoyed the book, and it gets you interested immediately and keeps you interested throughout the book.  It had twists and turns, most of which were unexpected, but it was incredibly hard to get past the elementary level of writing.  If you're going to write a book that you want people to read and enjoy, and you want those same readers to "spread the word" to others, and possibly read additional books you might write, for goodness sake, write it well, turn on spell check and proof, proof, proof.  I was astounded at the poor use of grammer, the use of incorrect words, the punctuation was atrocious, and many times I find that reading books written like this almost make you nauseous.I hate to blast the basic writing style, but it is hard to enjoy a book when these things are rampant throughout the story.  The storyline was good, holds your interest and is a fast paced and interesting read.  If you can get past the poor writing style, you'll really enjoy the books premise.  Thank you for reading my review.