Review: Leaves You Wanting More
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2012
I was on the fence about Eric's wandering thoughts at the beginning of the story, but then I said, "Well, isn't that how people's mind actually work?" After that, I gave into the pleasure of reading. Overall, he's a fun character.I think there could have been some play on how being a god, he'd never relinquished control until now. Also, the story could have used the light touch of an editor.All that aside, you'll get what you paid for, a short erotic read designed to get the juices flowing.