Review: Disjointed, Often Senseless
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 31, 2012
This was very clumsily written.  It has very poor phrasing, a disjointed plot, and descriptions are sadly lacking in style or value.  It has patchy, sudden scene changes that don't make sense.  There is some gory content.  The author adds plot elements suddenly, for no apparent reason.  Situations resolve themselves too conveniently.  I hated the really poor proofreading.  It was also impossible to find any chapters or find my place to go back to reading - - the table of contents was missing.