Review: Oh dear!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 4, 2013
I downloaded this book a few weeks ago but have just got around to reading it. When I downloaded it, it had positive reviews(now they are mostly negative!). I also must have missed the part where it informs me it is book one of two.I'm glad I only paid 77p because the storyline was awful. I didn't like any of the characters. Natalie the heroine caught her boyfriend being unfaithful so runs away to Miami to stay with her friend (whose a bit of a slapper!). The first day there, Natalie meets Nolan. He likes her and she decides she will use him to get over her ex but when she gets drunk Nolan refuses to have sex with her (as if!).Nolan wants to date Natalie but she doesn't want a relationship so soon. It doesn't take her long to change her mind even after Nolan informing her that he has been unfaithful within his previous relationships. When they do have sex he checks she is on the pill and then they have unprotected sex. Natalie seems to conveniently forget the problems she had with him being unfaithful!The problem with the storyline is its a bit all over the place. We have Natalie reminiscing about her time with her ex then the next minute her panties are damp (was sick of reading that line) because of Nolan. Nolan and Natalie don't converse much. I was 60% in before she even found out what he was studying at college. Characters are introduced left, right and centre.We are supposed to believe that Natalie and Nolan fall in love (him instantly) but I wasn't feeling it. There is very little emotion. Yes there are some hot sex scenes but they are spoilt when Nolan suddenly decides to start calling Natalie 'Bunny'!!Some parts of the storyline were far fetched. Wherever Natalie is, next minute Nolan just strolls up. Then Natalie's ex turns up in Miami and when we find out why he cheated on her, it didn't ring true for me.I suppose the author has potential. I don't think I will bother with the sequel. At the end of the book it tells us it releases in November but the product description of this book has been updated to say it will be released in May. The book doesn't end on a cliffhanger and they are at a HFN point so I can't see where the author is going to take it with a sequel. God knows why authors are choosing to tell their stories in two or three books. I wish they would stop it. This book could have been told in one book and the story could definitely have done with some editing.