Review: A very good story, even though it needs a lot of editing.
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 12 14, 2012
This story was really a fantastic story, even if it does need some editing and proofing. Chapter 15 appears twice and there appears to be a missing Chapter where the duplicate chapter is- if the author posted an update, I would definitely like to see the missing chapter. On top of all that; there were also a few spelling & grammar errors that needs to be fixed.After saying all that, I still felt it was good enough for a 5 star rating... that's just how good this story was. IMO- All the errors & missing chapter wasn't bad enough, that it took anything away from the story line itself. The story had a nice flow to it, and it never ever got boring or ended up dragging along, like some of the other free books that I've read in the past.Now about the story line...Bobbi Burke (AKA-Barbara Burke) is the first professional female hockey player in the NHL history books.Bobbi was raised by her father in a house full of 4 older brothers. They grew up playing hockey on one league or another, and sometimes just with each other and their friends. Bobbi had made a name for herself on her college team, which also happened to be on the men's team. After being scouted she joins the Philadelphia Thunder. It took more than winning a few games for the team to get them to accept her, but after proving herself time and again on the ice the team begins to accept her.The Captain of the team Connor Anderson begins to notice her, and in time... he makes her break her long standing rule of not dating a hockey player. These two characters have instant chemistry together, which grows and grows until they are not able to deny the attraction they feel for one another anymore.The other characters in this story are a very different mix of men from all over. They start out pulling silly pranks on her, but she gives as good as she gets. What is more surprising, is that they start to respect her even more....rather than getting upset for being bested by a woman.Would I recommend this book? Yes, I certainly would...errors, and editing problems aside, it's still a really, really great story!