Review: Does need editor, but still good story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 1, 2014
I really like the whole planet lost most or all females to war, disease, poison gas to women:you name it. So of course they need earth women to repopulate their species. True, this book really needs an editor to correct all the misspelled or misused words. And I had to convert all the tenses cuz I hate it when a story is written in present tense. But I've gotten pretty good at that due to some other books being written the same way. This author has potential, but she need either an editor or even just a friend to read the story and correct the problems before publishing. As to the other reviewer saying they had to reread the paragraphs to figure out what the author meant, I had no trouble understanding what was happening the first read through. I recommend this story to anyone who likes this genre and doesn't mind editing mistakes. I will be waiting for Leo's story to come out. Enjoy!