Review: better then the first book, but not by much
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2013
Set aside the obvious errors in grammar, the story was good, but instead of being a alien outer space romance, the characters rarely left earth.  The writing is long winded and not well thought out.  An example of this is when the main character went to the airport to catch her flight to Italy and is snatched coming out of the bathroom.  I'm not sure just how much attention you want to focus on the main character taking a pee, but to mention it more then once in the same way is a bit much.  The majority of the story is focused on the fact the main character has money, and getting everyone around her involved with the distribution of her cash rather then developing an actual story that moves from one issue to the next.  There is never really a conflict in the story, she gets kidnapped outside the public toilet, accepts her alien spouse, gets rid of her billions of dollars, sleeps with her alien spouse, then returns to the ship.  These authors have potential, but right now it feels like they are writing for their high school lit. class, immature and under developed.  I'd like to suggest to the authors they find beta readers that will give them honest critics and find a text to speech program, there are many free ones out there, and listen to the story they are creating rather then reading them.  This will give them a different prespective of their story and help find the errors in spelling and grammar.  I would also like to point out that these books are over priced for the qualitiy.  Unknowingly, I've spent over 10.00 dollars for two books that were extremely low quality and far from professional.