Review: Middle ground...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 2, 2013
Should have been 2.5 stars...the overall story was quite good, but it really did need to be proofread.  There are a number of words misspelled and used incorrectly.  I found myself reading sentences twice to make sure I was comprehending what I had just read.  " I hate that this story was written in first person. I found it very distracting to read." I say.  Really first person?