Review: Not So Bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2013
I decided to read this book despite the previous reviews. The story was actually pretty good and the plot was unusual. I agree that the dialog needs work. I am not one who requires perfect regency language but the "um", "ah", and "wows" were a bit irritating. Removing the unnecessary and inappropriate expressions would do much to improve this book.