Review: Well Written and Erotic
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 11 20, 2013
I liked this story.  The characters relate well to each other.  The basic premise is familiar - two team mates discover they share an attraction while sharing a hotel room - but the characters are fresh and relatable.  The story is well-told with good flow and good word choices.  It's never crude or crass like some erotica but really gives a sense that these characters would play out this situation.  The pacing is great with a well-timed rise, sustained sex scene, and a hint of what's to come after the story ends.If you're interested in this story, please look past the negative reviews.  Some claim the story is full of errors - I only noticed a few typos that hardly interrupted my enjoyment of the story.  Some claim it was unoriginal, quickly thrown together, and should've been longer.  The length was fine with plenty of detail and exactly what a short story should be - a short, cohesive story.  I thought the characters were more three-dimensional than those in other erotic stories I've tried to read.  The deftness of the writing shows me that the story was edited with care, not simply slapped together.It was well thought out, well written, and I look forward to reading more of Harper Bliss' work.