Review: Budding Nine-Year-Old's Fun Read!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 11, 2014
I liked this story, and this rating is a bow to a young boy (nine years old at the time of writing) who is striving to make a very early entry into the world of literature -- not for the faint of heart!Would be great, as he gradually becomes one of the most talented writers of the world in the year 2036, (and this book is eagerly snapped by up his fans as an example of his early work) to make his paragraphs less long and detailed, to cater toward the market of readers from ages seven to ten.  Make the action flow easily -- and there's enough action for a boy who has been raised on Star Wars stories, and room for more.  Can cut down on exactly how actions are performed, and focus more on outcomes, which after all boys really want to read about.This review will be similar to the first book in the series that I read, Into the Light: The Portal.