Review: good story - wish it was better
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 13, 2013
This story could have been really good with a bit of polish. It had good flow but the handful of typos were annoying. The intro was a bit lengthy for a shorter story. Another reviewer commented on the lack of character development and I agree.  The one negative reviewer had a point, the new guy was just a little too lucky.  Regardless of the(minor)flaws, I enjoyed the story.  For me it was a bit like ghost busters with robots instead of ectoplasmic whatevers and without the humor. I'm definitely picking up the next in the series.