Review: too short, too many dangling thoughts
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 17, 2010
The premise was good, and hey it was free. But...the author needs to finish the book. Too many things aren't explained or finished. Minimal descriptions (visual or emotional) which you usually expect in a romance. Lots of talk about why she's never turned into a wolf, and what has to happen for her to turn into a wolf. Maybe I blinked and missed it, but despite the event occuring so she can turn into a wolf, the scene isn't there in the book!  She never becomes a wolf.  (maybe you have to buy book 2 for that?) There are several scenes that just defy all common sense.  This story is Ok for a freebie but don't pay money for it.  I'd like to know if her writting improves in her later books or if it is similar to this.