Review: You are amazing, but have slight errors.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2013
Look, I'm not one to crush a kid's dream, you did great Drianne, but , have you ever heard of Erin Hunter's Warriors? Things like the elders den and healer cat and stuff reminded me of it. Cloud died before you got to know him, then all the sudden, the cat has a mate. Also, you went from months to moons, there the same thing. Just a little problem.Otherwise, YOU ROCK! The story WAS a little similar to Warriors, but i love warriors, and i am a bit tired of this Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight drama that drags on and on, this, however, is fast and paced. The chapters are very short and simple. Good for warrior's fans, but i got a bit confused. You used words that i never would be able to. I am writing a book called Butterflies Free to Fly, for my Aunt Vicky, with my cousin Jackson. You used words that I've never heard before! I look up to you, and i  12 and will be 13 in October. You are truly gifted.