Review: Fun read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2012
All-in-all, this is a fun little story.  I'm generally not a fan of first person narratives, but this one is well done.  I wasn't thrilled that half of this "story" is a teaser for another of the author's books.  A few paragraphs, fine, but a teaser as long as the short story?  Too needy.As well, there are a few typos and the grating habit of using Internetspeak in places.  I'd be fine with that being the voice of the narrator were it consistent.  Rather, the Internetspeak is random, making it a bit more work to read than it needs to be.Hanson builds the story well, develops the characters well, and ends it right before it becomes too much.  It's sexy without completely relying on sex to move the story.  I wasn't thrilled with the trendy assumptions made about Wiccans all being witches, but there you go.  She has a great feel for her story and I look forward to reading more of her work.