Review: Didn't care for this one at all....
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 18, 2013
There were the usual editing errors, but the worst part was the story just became plain silly/unbelievable.Spoiler alert:The behavior of some of the characters was just dumb.  The character of Ayan become highly annoying and even somewhat contemptible.  Her suddenly jumping ship and hopping in bed with Liam seemed absurd.  At least if Oz loses his gay love interest he can somehow pursue his "shared chemistry" with the fleshy eel-like thing swimming around psychically being Triton's computer.  The story used to be good, but the author's need to constantly one-up himself has finally jumped the eel.  Heck, the hero of the story (Jonas/Jacob) has become a minor sideline in this unwinding experiment of political correctness and disjointed silliness.  The "Victory Machine" was an annoying distraction in the previous episodes, and become really annoying in this one.  At least it should mostly be over by now, but unless the story seriously changes tack moving forward, I'll never know.  I'm really disappointed in the whole story line now, and am somewhat wondering if I'll even read any future additions...