Review: Don't waste your money on this crap...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2012
I seriously wish I'd have read the reviews before I wasted my money on this compilation of crap.  The author seriously needs to re-think on his authoring career.  What's wrong with this story you ask?  Hell...where do I start?  The story was obviously self-published because it was rife wtih all manners of grammatical and spelling errors.  The best example of this is inability to use the correct punctuation when used in quotations/dialog--("Yes ma'am."  He said with a smile.).  That was a direct quote from the last page of the book.  It should've read like this:  "Yes, ma'am," he said with a smile.  Sad thing is, it's like this through the ENTIRE story.  Errors like that alone made the story dang near unreadable.  I have to say, this is the worst edited book I've ever seen.  Character development?  Nonexistent.  Every character is two dimensional.  Very little is told about any of the characters outside of how well they're endowed.In one part of the story the comment is made by one of the characters that going percentages of c raises testosterone in the female and it's that reason that women get "horny".  Seriously?  What kind of crap is that?  Considering that testosterone is the main hormone for males, it would've been the males affected first.  And any 2-minute search on testosterone on Google would tell the author that elevated testosterone would lead not to aggressive "horniness", but to phyisical aggression.  Let's not also forget the other medical side-effects such as increased muscle mass, increased hairiness (especially in women) and shrinkage/impotency for males among other things.  Yet in this "story", no fighting takes place, the women don't bulk up like muscle freaks (since this elevated testosterone affects them so much more in the story) and none of the other undesirable side-effects.Gratuitous, poorly-written sex scenes...every 5 frickin' minutes.  At least if you're going to waste my time with serious over-abundance of sex, make the sex scenes worthwhile.  And I can honestly say that you're the first author I've read that describes female genetalia, outside of actual dialogue, using the word "pussy".  Any self-respecting author wouldn't use that term unless it's a character speaking the word.  If I wanted to read about sex, I'd have bought a Penthouse, Hustler or browsed online.  Many times I considered not even finishing this story.  The only reason I did was because I wanted to see just how bad the story could get.  Well, I wasn't disappointed.  It felt like watching that proverbial car wreck...can't turn away because you want to see what happens even when you don't want to see what happens.The author obviously knows absolutely nothing on rank structure in the military, not to mention rules against fraternization.  An ensign (an officer rank) or any other officer for that matter wouldn't be doing the actual maintenance.  It would be the enlisted ranks.  All officers do is supervise/guide.  Along this same line of thought, the author creates a story where the ship is run in such piss-poor shape that stuff craps out every time something even remotely significant happens.  The characters are inept, maintenance seriously lacking and judgement seriously in question.  ANY military vessel/organization ran in this manner would be s$#@-canned in a heartbeat by higher headquarters.  Heck, even third-world countries have better maintenance practice than the crew of the ship in this story.Lastly, the first time I saw the cover of this book I felt that I'd seen it before.  It took awhile, but it finally dawned on me.  The author stole the design from EVE Online.  The 2 ships shown on the cover are the Myrmidon battlecruisers from that online MMO game.  It makes me wonder if the author's asked to borrow EVE Online artwork for his soft-core porn story?The only positive from this book, aside from actually getting done reading it, was that there were some good story elements to the book.  When the author wasn't busy reliving every single one of his fantasies, the story was alright, but not near enough to make up for the rest of the garbage in the story.Bottom line...DON'T waste your time or money on this story...