Review: Enjoyable short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2013
Liz and Nina are teammates on a volleyball team when Liz was struck by the ball hit by an opponent while she was admiring Nina's legs. Later on, when Nina shows concern for her teammate, Liz decides to do something about her fascination by sharing an intimate encounter with Nina. It is Nina's first intimate encounter with another woman.There isn't much more to the story as there is little character development, background information or other such details. However, the author leads the reader into the minds of both women and their emotions and feelings. These are described as well as the physical attraction and sexual encounter.  This is a short story that does pack a lot even though there is a lack of depth to the characters.The pace of this story is also good as it didn't feel rushed as some very short stories can feel. The sex scene is very intense and the reader feels Nina's trepidation and ecstasy at the same time.  However I did feel the build up was a bit hokey-an injury because a plate was sexually attracted to a teammate?  I would have also liked to learn a little more about Liz and Nina but what was written was very good.If you want a short hot erotic read, this is a very good choice by an author who writes lesbian sexual fantasies well.