Review: Not written well and contradicted itself too much
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2013
I wanted to like this book. I really did. But I just couldn't. Too many reasons. Lets try to explain...Words missing from sentences  and bad grammer do a lot of damange to a story for me. Making me go back and reread just to figure out whats being said is very annoying.Paragraphs would contradict each other. One paragraph would say one thing was happening and the next would say something completely different. Annoying....Also, the word 'snatch' and the phrase 'engorged meat' are NEVER romantic. Killed what should have been a good sex scene.Sorry, I really wanted to like ths book. The lead girl was one I could finallh respect. She didn't mind their dominance in the bedroom but didn't take crap outside of it. I love that she wasn't a doormat and didn't give in just to have her orgasm like so many of the books describe. But I just couldn't give better than 2 stars.