Review: ok
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2012
This free short story was rather confusing. It starts off with two men in a room. The man's name is Kokabiel but they don't mention the name of the other man. They are obviously both demons or so it seems. The scene changes and Kokabiel is talking to Lucifer about how she was in love with Her. They keep talking about Her like we are supposed to know who She is. Those two first scenes were confusing. The scene changes and it is a battle scene. Here was when it got interesting. The battle scene was written pretty well and then it was done. It was basically the battle between good and evil. It was Kokabiel against an angel. He kills him, but then feels remorse for him. The next scene was Kokabiel back in his room with the same man from the beginning. The sex scene at the end was pretty good as well but that is about it. This author knows how to write sex and battle scenes. Everything else sucked. That's all.