Review: It was a nice story but poorly written
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 10, 2014
It had the makings of a great story but the poor writing style coupled with the author's obviously lacking knowledge of football made it a tough read. The author has a very choppy style of writing and the order of character development was poor. It seemed that as thoughts came to mind about what the character should be like the author inserted them into the plot without thought about should it be inserted earlier or does it jive with what was said previously about the character. And even I, a non-football fan, knows that alot of what was written about football teams and the way they operate was wrong.Plus I feel the same way about books as I do about TV/movies....I can get the jist of what a character is saying without the use of profanity. An occassional 4 letter word is tolerable but there was WAY too much serious profanity in this book.Ok when it's a free book but I would not pay money for it. And if the next book in the series is free I MAY get it, but I won't pay money for it.