Review: lacked passion
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 4, 2012
I liked how it started with Alderton mistaking Lella for her cousin and kissing her. The kiss awaken something in him and Im glad he wanted to explore those feelings. But after the fight and the way the story turned, left me disappointed. Although I do like that Alderton is a gentleman through and through (but Lella was a little naive about a possible scandal). But things happened way too fast here. And in the last chapter a month has passed and we are told what has happened instead of experiencing it and this is what makes the story more unsatisfying. Either wrap it up and forget about a month later (especially since the month didnt need to happen for the 6 month solution Alderton came up with) or make the story longer if you wanted your readers to really enjoy this. The potential was there but it lacked passion. Everything was just too formal, too fast and too little. I needed more which is why I found the overall story just an ok read.