Review: Good idea with poor implemenation
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 18, 2013
The storyline proposed had such promise that I was severely disappointed when I started reading the book. In fact, for me, the plot wasn't the problem...of course I didn't get very far into the book. This book loudly boasts that it has been professionally re-edited. If that's true then one of three things happened: 1) the editor was a swindler and took money for a job he/she didn't do; 2) the suggestions the editor made were not implemented; or 3) the changes weren't uploaded.  In other words the grammar and sentence structure were weak. It was so annoying that I couldn't endure more than a few pages. If this author actually does get this book edited and updated, I'd be happy to try again. But, for now, sorry it's not good.