Review: Village Books - first book, good start :)
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2013
This was a free download that looked interesting and fun from the description, and I also liked the cover art.  Overall, it was pretty well-written with the exception of a few proofreading errors and what I felt was overused off-beat humor...a little bit of this type of humor goes a long way to keep it light and fun, but using it in just about every other paragraph is too much for me, as well as a few too many witty sexual references, apparently "guy" humor.  Since this was the author's first book, I did give it three stars for him actually writing and publishing the book; Mr. McLay does exhibit writing ability with this accomplished undertaking which is something to be proud of.  I may venture into his other work but don't know that I would recommend this one.