Review: no better than a first draft or outline
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2013
This book is another DeleteHow this book passed with it's crazy spelling and grammatical errors is bad enough, but the plot is way beyond simple, the title gives away the end. The love scene can make you laugh with all the unimaginative words and phrases (I think the worst is pleasure slit and pleasure button.)I don't think $8.97 ($2.99 per novella) worth to get the rest of this book.To the author... if it is not your children actually writing this book fix the spelling and grammar, don't make it sound like a 15 yr old wrote the love scenes, put all 4 parts together and maybe you will have 1 book that a grown up wants to read.BTW I do not want the offer at the end to get another free book of yours.