Review: OK for free but needs a lot of editing/rewriting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 16, 2013
Like many other reviewers, I saw a lot of weaknesses in this work.Inadequate world building, 1-dimensional characters and a WHOLE lot of literary shortcuts taken.I got a free copy for review, and it was enjoyable enough once I put down my editor's red pencil, but I am glad I did not pay for it.