Review: Nothing to hold the attention.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 3, 2013
After reading the other reviews, I decided to give this book a chance. Ms. John's mysteries did not impress me but I thought perhaps a romance would be better. It is not. As with her other works, this novella contains misspellings and many grammatical errors. She still does not have a good editor. In many places she switches her storytelling from first to third person and back again. Unlike her other works, this story has no real plot. There are no twists, no challenges, nothing to grab the reader's interest. It is a straightforward romance with an obvious ending. Even the advertised humor is missing. I am still not sure there was a point to the story.A trite, poorly written work. No charm.