Review: Struggled to finish this book
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2014
Let me start by saying you can see the number of stars and I can't even say for sure that I wouldn't rate this a 1 1/2 stares instead of 2, so know going into this review that it's not hearts, rainbows, horses, and blue moons.I really struggled to finish this book, the story was good but the characters and I mean everyone outside of the MC well let me take that back Talon's son and Zara's daughter didn't bother me but everyone else got on my last nerve. They were all very immature (I couldn't believe they weren't teens). And I don't mind silly or carefree but my gosh you are all adults correct. One minute the heroine Zara had no control and acted like a child the next she was scolding everyone for cussing. Zara's best friend was even worse she would fight and argue with Zara's daughter like they were sisters, and Zara's Brother and his partner were just as bad ( I don't know but I don't want to hear about anything that turns my brother on and vice versa) If I heard one more weird nickname for Zara I thought I was going to die.And then  **SPOILERS**  the whole other woman situation was just stupid all around and when I say stupid I mean stupid, Talon owns strip clubs and Zara see's him making out with a woman and she justifiably gets mad (and can we stop here why did Talon let all these woman paw all over him after he has Zara then laughs or smiles when she got mad), then we find out that it's NO BIG DEAL because they are friends and they always kiss after their strip club meetings but thats all that happens oh and its ok because she's a lesbian.......say what  **END SPOILERS**I don't know why this book rubbed me the wrong way in so many ways but it did, the premises was great and I really though I would have enjoyed this book, I love MC books. But this one was a fail for me. Had the author taken this a different route and it actually felt like we were dealing with adults this book would have been great but, it. Just. Wasn't. The bare bones of this book is actually really good but all of the filler and stuffing was just bad.