Review: Akward and Klunky
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 12, 2013
The book is a good premise but I couldn’t get over the writing style.  There are times when the author explains something that’s so obvious to the reader it doesn’t need explaining (Example they’re trying to escape and running for their lives and he explains why  Maggie is taking her high heels off, really?  Do you need to explain you can’t run in heels?), parts are just a bit unbelievable (Example he breaks a steel lock with a screwdriver) and the dialog is awkward at times (Example: one of the characters asks if he can speak, in most realize cases the answer would be “Sure” “Go Ahead” or just a nod but in this case it was “If you wish”).  I also felt some of the action scenes were hard to follow and over too quickly for the amount of action that should be in them.