Review: When Angels Fail - 3/5 stars; a little rough, but has promise!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
This collection of short stories shows a lot of promise.What I liked: the subject matter was interesting and the general mood generally very creepy. The stories are varied and don't pull punches, which I appreciate.What I didn't like: the first story has a LOT of sentence fragments. I almost put the book down at that point (but I'm glad I roughed it out). There are grammatical errors and spell-check mistakes scattered throughout the whole thing - another round of editing is needed.Overall - 3.0/5. I don't think this was quite ready to be on the market, but the author shows a lot of promise! Good luck!