Review: Good vs Evil never grows old
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 8, 2014
Writing fantasy requires of the author to create a world unto itself, preferably complete with annals, geographical features and some sort of underlying threat. In Deep Echoes, the world is Geos, populated by a people who date their years A.C. (After Cleansing), who worship the sun in the guise of Sol, and whose premier armed forces are the Contegons, Geos’ equivalent to the legendary Amazons. Lurking in the background is Babbage, an ancient Artificial Intelligence that wants nothing so more as to wipe out this society built on the cult of the sun. Babbage and his cohorts keep on churning out so called Disciples, fighting robots that constantly threaten Geos, thereby creating a never-ending need for new warriors, such as the elite Contegons.Even further in the shadows is Brya, evil incarnate, and she seems to be the one guiding Babbage. Fortunately, the people of Geos have an impressive protector in Nephilim – even if they don’t know he exists. The author has thereby set the stage for an interesting conflict between good and evil, in this case represented by men versus the machines.To become a Contegon, young girls are put through years of tough training, not only physically but also mentally and spiritually. Belief in Sol is paramount, to question His existence is to dabble in heresy, and when one young girl, Maya, finds an ancient astronomy book, reducing Sol to nothing more than a combination of hot gases, this leads to Maya being brutally “disciplined” as her elders try to beat the heresy out of her. It doesn’t work all that well, and on the eve of her inauguration as a Contegon, Maya decides to escape, leaving behind her distraught and betrayed best friend, Chain. As a consequence, Maya is now labelled The Heretic, and is hunted throughout the country.What follows is a nice combination of a coming-of-age story and a War of the Worlds scenario. Maya stumbles upon Nephilim by chance, and this godlike creature (most apt, given his name) sees in the girl the powers required to save Geos from Brya and Babbage. So he trains her, bestowing upon her the gift of the Cyrus Force, which is a greenish, fiery power that easily blasts a Disciple or two to pieces..Eventually, Maya must shoulder a role in defending a society that has turned its back on her. In the process, she will come face to face with Chain again and reconcile herself as being thought of as Sol’s acolyte, despite not believing in Sol. Several opportunities for tension and inner conflict thereby arise.While Maya is beyond any doubt the protagonist of the story – a tough young woman who sets herself very high standards – it is Nephilim that tweaks my interest. A creature (is he a man? An angel?) of great powers, he also carries a burden of guilt, and one gets the impression he is presently doing penance for things that happened in a very distant past. Most intriguing… And then there is Babbage, the Artificial Intelligence, who struggles with the entire spectrum of human emotions – all due to his programming. Mr Wallace has done a good job of presenting Babbage as potentially good (if evil), and even more so in describing how Babbage’s intellectual control over “himself” unravels as quickly as his plans do.Personally, I would have liked some more backstory; who is Nephilim, and why is he so committed to fighting against Brya and Babbage? What happened at the Cleansing? Why has the Sol civilisation reverted to a bow and arrows approach to fighting, especially when confronted with Disciples that fire bullets at them? Likewise, with the exception of Maya and Nephilim, the characters could have done with some more fleshing out. At times, their behaviour is incomprehensible, and there are situations where the characters leap-frog to conclusions without really bringing the reader along in the thought process, the situation further confused by the numerous POV slips.The author has a fondness for adjectives and adverbs, and this results in an overburdened text, especially apparent in some of the descriptive passages. The action scenes are substantially tighter, and the passages where the Disciples whack their way through the Western Front, thereby commencing their invasion of Geos’ heartland, were very good.In conclusion, this is an entertaining read. The epilogue hints at a sequel – evil is never quite banished, is it? I sure hope the sequel has Nephilim in it!