Review: Great story idea, but needs polish
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 20, 2013
I very much enjoyed the concept and execution of this story, but as another comment mentioned, the book is filled with poor sentence structure and grammar errors that show a desperate need for a good editor's help.Despite this fact, I would be open to reading future installments in what could prove to be an excellent series; I only hope that the author will decide to hire a competent proofreader/editor.