Review: Loved this story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 20, 2013
I got this while it was free but I will pay for the next portion. There are a few grammatical errors and misuse of certain words (their vs. they're, for example) but nothing to detract from the product. It held my interest from the first page and continued to do so right to the end. I loved the 'ending' of the story.My only real complaint is I prefer a beginning, a middle and an end. This 'book' would be considered a portion of a short story. It could be expanded in itself to allow more background and mystery but I still gave it 5 stars because it does not overwhelm you with the unnecessary discriptions that some authors provide. It gave enought to keep your interested but not so much as for you to yell "I know what a blasted fork looks like and what it is used for."I strongly recommend this story and recommend to the author to finish the book. I hate buying chapters/portions/sections which seems to be the popular thing to do know. This is NOT fan fiction.