Review: ridiculous jumble of words, real and made up
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 4, 2013
This offered an interesting premise, but the story merely borrows from a few other writers who already wrote along these lines. This could have been a fun read. But the writer needs to delete at least half its words. The other half need to be arranged in English word order. Some of this appeared to have been done with prescriptive text.I'm thinking the writer needs to stick with her day job. Not even a good editor could redeem this book without totally rewriting it.