Review: PROOFREADER DESPERATELY NEEDED!!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2013
I was extremely disappointed with the entire book as the basis for the story was intriguing.  There were SO many grammatical errors, almost on every page.  Words were misused, misspelled, and there were several incomplete sentences.This would make a great work book for 5th or 6th graders to learn how to correct the mistakes and how to make better use of descriptive words.I gave it a 2 star rating. One for effort and one for intent but it is so poorly written, it shouldn't get any stars.....This is one I will delete from my Kindle library.