Review: 1st Person Present.....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 10, 2012
The author desperately needs to learn to write in first person present tense...or any other present tense.  All the "she had woken the next mornings" and "she groaned as she had remembered" were almost unbearable to read by the time I got to the fourth chapter so I had to take a third break from reading the book.  There were even a lot of sentences with multiple hads/haves.  Also, this plot is an update to a harlequin romance from the 70s, so really isn't original (not saying the author ever read it, but the 2 Greek Shipping company guys with the 2 British sisters and the mistaken identity while the real couple are free to runoff and elope is a book I read way back when people actually were rich from owning cruise lines.  Which brings me to the implausibility factor.  I read these books for fun, fantasy, escape, so I don't have too much issue with the fact the plot really was extremely unlikely, but coupled with the writing, it just made the flaws more obvious.I got this book for free but would not recommend anyone actually pay for it.***I read some of the other reviews which suggested the book was edited a few months ago....I only got it in Sept. and it was definitely not edited.