Review: Sweet, but tough to review
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
The idea was strong and the storyline moved in a very sweet and sexy direction.  I just hoped for better regardless of the mixed reviews.However, it was difficult to read with all of the grammatical and vocabulary errors.  I agree that some phrases seem written by a teenager or self published, new author. This novella would be greatly improved by a strong and thorough editing. It was necessary to skim read through paragraphs so that the errors didn't ruin the story's flow for me.I will look for future stories from this author, hopefully she will get a good proofreader.