Review: Good erotic fiction, like good sex should have plenty of foreplay
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 1, 2013
I loved Marco's Redemption, yes I like the cave man, over the top alpha male but this one was just such a let down. There was no hot preliminary interaction before they get down to it, yeah a chapter of how much he was hot for her and she thought he was sexy but no real interaction. It was the equivalent of sex while still dry. Yeah, I said it. To get invested in it the climax has to have a good lead in or why bother if you aren't going to get satisfaction from it? Yes, it was a short story but this author is good enough she could have done it well in the pages she had.She's a good writer and I'll read others but this one wasn't good enough to recommend to anyone.