Review: Legacy Sinking
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2013
I rarely put down a book before finishing it, but this one wins the prize.  I fear Mr. Scollins was trying so hard to be a fiction writer that he didn't realize how seriously his use of English needed editing.I must give some examples :~  "the pistol impregnated purse"  ( what would the babies look like !?! tee her )~  "something to keep her brain from wandering"  (gads, a peripatetic brain ?!?  ugh )~  "winter would start to creep into the fold "  (fold?  What fold?  In with the sheep?)~  "a rush of fright zapped into her spine"  ~ "the thrill floored him with delight "~  "like the aftermath of a hammer strike on a bell, the waves of ringing galloped through her ears and reverberated into her bones.I do admit that I got some chuckles from this sophomoric , too-eager-to-be flowery prose, but in the end I had to quit the Legacy altogether.