Review: The Boudicca Parchments
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2013
Buried inside The Boudicca Parchments is a good (or at least okay) thriller with a touch of conspiracy and religious history woven in, not unlike what you'd expect from a Dan Brown novel. However, uncovering that story might be too much of a chore. I'll hit on the three biggest reasons.First is the number of typos, wrong words, and other side effects from inadequate proofing and copyediting. Virtually every kind of proofing issue I regularly see was represented, most many times.Second is a tendency to say, "oh yeah, this happened too." What I mean by this is when the narrator  tells us something that happened in a prior scene that we weren't shown at the time, as in this example:"Before Sarit had rushed off after the phone call, she had told Daniel how to log on to her eMail. After she left, he had downloaded the witness statements and pathologist's report on Costa that Dovi had retrieved and forwarded."The oft overused rule of thumb to show, not tell, might apply here. However, even telling in a different place would have worked better. In a prior scene, Sarit received a phone call and rushed off. Saying something like, "Sarit gave Daniel instructions to log on to her eMail and to download the witness statements and pathologist's report on Costa before rushing off ..." would have covered the plot point, but in a more logical fashion. As done, it feels like an afterthought. Like the author realized, "oh yeah, I need to cover this, I'll just explain it now," rather than going back and reworking the prior scene to include it where it belonged.This leaves the reader thinking they're purposely not being given what they need to know in some scenes or that the author doesn't think they're capable of remembering what happened before in the story, which segues nicely into my third major complaint.This was the habit of giving the reader recaps of what had happened that we didn't really need, as in a paragraph that starts, "So far, an artifact trafficker, two policemen and two thugs-for-rent had been killed. There had been two attempts on Daniel's life, one on Sarit's and one on Ted's - as well as a kidnap attempt on Daniel's sister or nieces..." There are times when reminding the reader of something that happened earlier might make sense in the case of a critical event that was likely to have seemed innocuous at the time. Even then, there are much more subtle ways to do that. But this kind of ham-handed recap isn't needed. We've read this far and know what happened. Recapping like this for the reader insults our intelligence. Or maybe this shows a lack of confidence on the author's part and he's afraid that the reader sleep-read the book to this point. In any case, these summaries do nothing except slow down what should be a fast-paced read.If you're able to overlook or get past these things, there is a decent story here. At least I suspect so. But extracting it might take more effort than it's worth.**Originally written for "Books and Pals" book blog. May have received a free review copy. **