Review: Needs a little more Magic.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2013
There are fans of Caryn's out there that are giving "HONEST, PERSONAL OPINION Reviews" a hard time.  But, a Strong Author appreciates ALL reviews.  Good and Bad.  I know this for a fact!!!  With that said:  I'm sorry, but I could not finish it.  I got about 25% into the book and had to quit.  So, in all reality I can't give a full review at this time.  HOWEVER, I am going to say this much:  The story "seems" to be good, but the writing is so weak.  I can tell that Caryn is passionate about her writing and what she "tries" to get across, but it just falls too short.  The delivery is weak in itself as well.  I am NOT trying to be rude in any way, but the best way for me to describe this is: It's just lacking in grammatical filler.  I am not one for a lot of nonsense filler but this book doesn't have character in it.  I am sorry to say that unless you don't have anything else to read, then get this.  I STILL think the stories that Caryn write can be REALLY good!  My suggestion would be for her to get an Editor.  (I know it is hard to find one that will except an Author, but with the fan base that I know Caryn has, (Because believe it or not, I am a fan too!), I don't see that it would be too hard for her to get one.)I will try to finish this book, but it will have to be when I have the time to "over look" the short comings in the writing.