Review: Conflicted, good Sci Fi writing often leaves out the sex scenes for a reason, it can sometimes distracts readers from the story.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2013
Guys love lesbians...sadly the fantasies we have about them aren't going to happen to even a tiny fraction us.Beyond the sex, the story fascinated me. I like the idea behind it, and would have read it even without the sex scenes. The scenes didn't bother me, they are difficult to place in a book without becoming gratuitous...it's awkward sometimes to  write a book and toss in mental hand grenades and not have it distract readers from the rest of the story.Also Sci Fi is best when an author who can't be convincing with the science behind the tech they dream up, to not attempt to do so. Let the reader figure it out with their own imagination, it bypasses the BS filter readers have.  That was done here...cool tech gizmos, you figure out the science if you want.The few criticisms i have are simple...auto correct is not our friend, it helps before a proofread, but does not negate the need to proofread a second, third, or fourth time, after you stop using it. More story between the sex scenes, it makes them less intrusive to the story line. This story was worth 500 pages, it was only given 270...not more sex, but more story.The best bit...i will gladly pay for book 2. I will send nasty grams if it doesn't come soon...i know, i know! the day job...i hate it when reality intrudes on my fiction!