Review: Obviously I got the wrong version
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 14, 2013
When I look at other reviews for this book I feel like I must have received a different version. The story started off well enough where it captured my attention regarding the two main characters.  However, it was not long before I fell off track due to the story being disjointed and kind of all over the place.  The main female character switched from first person POV to third person POV and back again. Supporting characters were added that I felt the author spent way too much detail and attention on.The book is described as erotica and others have referred to it as hot and steamy.  I am sorry I did not get either one of those versions.  There were two scenes that stand out for me: 1) a dream by the main character that was described in such a way that a) you knew it was a dream and b) it was so fragmented and out of place that it could have been left out of the story completely. 2) When the main character and the object of her attraction finally meet- for me there was no connection- so the so called steamy scene felt more luke warm and told in an amateurish way. I have read steamier in regular romance stories.Finally, the ending was horrible. I understand that this is the first in a series but the author ended it so abruptly and with no cliff hanger that made sense.  In one chapter the main character and her object of attraction ended their relationship with no explanation of what happened to the reader being told about some man that she apparently has been involved with then... BOOM... story ends. (This is no exaggeration). I would be okay if this was a true erotica story and the book focused solely on the sex... but that was not the case. I picked up this ebook because it was free on Amazon..enough said.