Review: hmmm... interesting
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 8, 2013
This was a decent read, but I did have a few issues... the first being it needed a good bit of editing.  The overall effect of the story is muddled because of the editing, a lot of it was small things like Jesse sometimes being Jessie but there wete a few areas where I knew what he was getting at but the wrong word was used. My other issue is the wrap up I feel like I was left longing. So I'm just not sure. I enjoyed the plot but it could have been a bit stronger of a story