Review: ehhh...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 13, 2012
I usually can overlook the typos on self-published books, but there were so many, that I found it difficult to follow sometimes or had to do a re-read a few times.  The female lead's Cinderella existence was too much - anyone raised that badly would realistically come out warped.  I think she needed to be more of a beauty for me to believe that the male lead would have this instant lust for her - she just sounded so ordinary.  Maybe if he had been exposed more to her sweet personality, then the attraction would have been more believable.It also didn't make sense to me that she was fine with trying to make ends meet for her family with the garden out in back, yet didn't even attempt to make something with her talent (trying not to create a spoiler here).I'm giving this 3 rather than 2 stars as the bedroom dialogue was definitely hotter than most books in this genre.