Review: I want more
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 21, 2013
I really enjoyed this, even though, as others have mentioned, there was little (to no) character development.  I see a lot of potential in this story being made into a longer story, maybe a novella or a novel.I want to know more about Dr. Lee.  It feels like there's so much underneath the character that we barely got to see in this story.Yes, there were a couple of places where a little tighter editing could have been used, but overall, I thought this was mostly well-written.