Review: Someone take away the thesaurus!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 22, 2013
I wish, (oh how I wish) I could have given this book five stars but I simply couldn't. The story line was actually decent. Somewhat predictable and unoriginal but I have a weakness for the hot rich guy and I could read these kinds of novels over and over again.HOWEVER the writing style was so MADDENING!To the author: PUT DOWN YOUR THESAURUS! ugh. Your overuse of "big" words was so distracting. And maybe it wouldn't have been such a big deal but it didn't match your characters. NO ONE talks like that, especially some thug. One line was street talk and relatable, and the next sentence was filled with words only a 60 year old English professor would use.So PLEASE, with your next book, use that thesaurus sparingly. It was hot don't get me wrong but it could have been SOOOO much better especially if I didn't have to keep a dictionary close by.I'm a fan of your cover BTW.