Review: Beatiful but a little too contrived for me
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 13, 2012
I think Harper Fox is an amazing writer and very often in her stories you have to suspend disbelief in order to enjoy the beauty of the emotions going back and forth between the guys. And I definitely agree that she conveys angst and yearning beatifully in this one, but all the events that lead to their second meeting just felt a bit too contrived for me. Sam could not get another job, really? Surely he could have try to find something before jumping with his eyes closed to this one?Oh and their initial misunderstanding could have been avoided too and I am still not sure why Lauro just could not tell Sam what was really happening.3.5 stars.