Review: Good story idea
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 8, 2013
I really liked the story idea, but the biggest problem was with the writing of Rose's diary.  The diary entries were written as though the author was just writing a second story from 1947, not the way a young woman would have actually written in a diary.  For example, there were too many conversational quotes in the diary entrees.  For an example of great diary writing, in a similar story idea, I would suggest Destiny Ever-Changing by Tasha Ivey.  I think this author will improve with time; in fact a re-write of the diary entrees only would greatly improve this intriguing story idea.