Review: Im glad it was free and short....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2012
A young woman and her cousin befriend an "eccentric" couple and agree on a holiday trip to spain with them. Brushing aside nagging thoughts of something being not quite right the women end up facing a situation far more horrifying than either one could possibly imagine.I was really looking forward to reading this. The cover and description both sparked my curiosity.Sadly, both were better than the actual story.I felt like I was reading a screenplay proposal written by a ninth grader.*possible spoilers*The main characters were known for their uncanny "twin-sense" and being able to just "feel" when they were in danger or if a person is bad. And they did throuout the story feel like something was wrong...but ignored it. After knowing this couple (that made them both slghtly uncomfortable) for only a short time (about 2 months) they agree to a vacation in spain. Within minutes the woman is demanding money for the villa...and while they find it unnerving they both just hand the cash over. Really? No giving it a second thought? They also hand over their passports and a bulk of their cash to store in a safe in the couples room...again..seriously? I think what really botherd me was the end. I won't *spoil* it but it was so wrapped up with a neat little bow that I found myself re-reading the last 1/3 because I was SURE I had missed something. but no. I am glad it was free and only took me about an hour to read.