Review: Great Story, Horrible editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2014
The story is well told with captivating characters, good pacing, and thought provoking internal dialogues by the main character. I do not however understand the total lack of editing throughout. Voice, tense and mood are such common right grade mistakes. Not a page lacked in tips, duplicate words, false starts, etc. It seemed at times that the only explanation was the author accidentally published a draft and not the finished work. Despite the hundreds of errors, still a good story. Would love tho have edited it before he published. Simple suggestion...to catch most errors, start at the end and read to the front of your draft copy. Passion for almost anything can blind people to flaws, easily seen by editors and other objective persons.