Review: sweet story, a few editing mistakes
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2014
Sweet story. I was a little put off at times by the presumptiveness and ordering-around we saw from the male lead, but he really was a nice guy and well characterized. There was an increasingly-stalker ex, who popped up at random points and seemed forgotten in between (but maybe that's realistic, if you're not scared of the guy yet). The editing mistakes (extra word, typo, etc) were few but enough to annoy a grammar nazi. There was a lot of description of clothing - not long descriptions, but you always know what everyone's wearing. It wasn't quite over the top for me, but for someone who likes a quick pace and doesn't care about clothes it'll get old fast. Overall, I enjoyed the story and would recommend for someone looking for a quick, fun read.