Review: okay but needs a good editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 19, 2014
The story was okay, but what started off as a great conflict was resolved with no stress at all. Just poof and everything was fixed. The formatting of the book was also very distracting. It was difficult to see when new paragraphs were beginning. The whole book needs a serious edit done by somebody who understands commas.