Review: Dull and a Waste of Time
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2014
There was nothing interesting in this story. The adjectives were repeated over and over such as, "she wore a simple tweed skirt", "it was a simple sofa" or "Her purse, a simple...".The dialogue assigned to a person was unnatural such as a male detective, in describing a dead female's body, "... revealing her ample breasts ..." or a female in describing another female, "...her shorts revealed her long legs. ".The story was lame as well as the dialogue. In addition, there were many spelling errors. Don't waste your time on this one.