Review: Good story, poor editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2011
The story itself was fine, although it could have used more character development. But I found the poor formatting annoying and that made it difficult to enjoy the story. Missing punctuation, missing quotations, paragraphs that run together, etc. This was being read directly on my Kindle 2G so I don't think the problem is with my device. If this was formatted better I would have rated it higher.