Review: Needs fixing...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2014
You get four very short stories here. The ideas behind them are pretty good, but the mistakes in the writing completely take over. Usually when a new person talks, it's on the next line down. Not here.Full stops in the middle of sentences, commas in the wrong place. Just too many mistakes throughout.Just a shame really as the cover looks great. If someone could correct all the mistakes I would probably give it 3 stars.