Review: A pleasant book
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 3, 2013
Compared to the some of the crap out there this was a pleasant read. I felt that the story was well done and the main character was well thought out. I would buy from this author again. Now having said that, the story was a pedantic and the writing was overly done in that I don't think that everything needed explaining. That is the beauty of reading some things should be left to the reader to fill in. I understand the need to make sure the reader knows your intent as you write. However the short breaks from the protagonist so that other characters could explain the situation to each other(the reader)were a bit off putting. I gave this story 4 stars because I liked the world and I think there is great potential. The magic system could use a great deal of fleshing out as it was kind of simplistic. Overall well done.