Review: Decent story overshadowed by repeated grammar mistakes
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2012
The story premise is an intersting one, but as a reader I was repeatedly brought out of the flow of the narrative by grammar mistakes.Like in the first two books, the writer exhibits no understanding of the proper use of the words he/him/himself, she/her/herself, I/me and they.Also, the use of the word 'floor' in particular is often misplaced, with jarring results. One cannot look down at the floor unless one is inside!If an editor was paid, get a refund. If not, get some grammar lessons.K Young, BA English Lit.