Review: good plot, but execution not so much
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 18, 2014
The story was okay. The inconsistences drove me crazy. Sean, Patrick, and Sandra were all best friends who were in the personal training business. It made sense and would have been an easy transition for their relationship to go from platonic to romantic considering they always did everything together. Sean and Patrick always debased Sandra's suitors, and they never did more than casual dating with the women they were with. The issue that irked me the most was in the beginning before Sandra accepted the relationship with both Sean and Patrick. All of the fantasizing that Sandra had of them, the reading of materials dreaming it was them, and then when the opportunity presented itself Sandra is indecisive, even after they told her they talked it out amongst themselves before they even approached her with the idea? Annoying. The threesome's relationship was solid. You could see the love they had between one another, but then there was doubts among one of the men about the menage, but it wasn't clear if it was a past or present issue. The story was lagging a little when it wasn't focusing on the trio. The story should have focused more on the relationship of the three. The sex scenes weren't bad considering it was a menage. The first two intimate scenes were titillating, but after that, the scenes faded into the next chapter. The book actually could have been shorter, and it may have made it better because it would have just been about the relationship or could have been longer and actually explored the good and the bad of the relationship when they became intimate.