Review: Way to short
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 10, 2013
I loved the short story. But I was done in 20 min. Great start in the writing biz you will be great. I am looking forward to hissideof the story. Try to make it just a little bit longer. As you grow in this your books will flow like water. Just don't become one of those authors that just can't close a book and make 7 book series that we have to wait a year apiece to find it what happened. Great start.