Review: Excellent Start
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2014
The story was really quite good.  The characters were well developed and the story was building nicely.  Then the story just stopped.  There was no climax, it just stopped.  Story lines and characters just left dangling in limbo.This is completely unacceptable even as part of a larger story.  I do hope the author will finish this story.  If the story had been complete I would have given it 5 stars.