Review: Another decent story, but needs a better editor
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 4, 2014
There are still so many grammatical errors in this third book! The author gives kudos to his editor at the end of this book, but I simply cannot see why. The editor's grammar is atrocious. "... where his body had lay." WRONG!!! The correct verb stance is "... where his body had LAIN." The past perfect of lie is LAIN. There were more errors like this. It may seem like a small thing, but it rips you out of the flow of the story, and ruins the feel. Get a smarter editor, and make corrections!