Review: Witch who cried...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 21, 2014
I downloaded this book free on Amazon. Oh man, I really wanted to like this one-- great plot, but that was the only thing that kept my interest. Characters were unlikeable: Main female weak and indecisive, Best friend flaky and defensive. There was a lot of unrealized potential in the story, but the author would build a sense of urgency, then suddenly, the characters would say, I don't have time for this, we'll talk about it later. Really? Later? If it were me, I would have been demanding answers now, not waiting until tomorrow. Much of the story felt disjointed and unresolved. Rather than anticipation, I was frustrated and annoyed for most of the book. This could be reworked to a longer novel (the story line is there, and filling some of the holes could make this a sharp piece of work), but as is, it felt lacking.