Review: Well done story, poor editing
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 14, 2012
I am enjoying this series, although I am fully aware of how the Amazon marketers draw you in with the first one free and the rest 99 cents. Each one is a chapter in what will become a full length book eventually, and as such will cost quite a bit depending on how many "chapters." Aside from that, the writing is good and the author develops a good story with lots of hot sex and Domination/submission.If I have a real beef with this series, it is with the editing. There were many typos,and some grammatical errors that were not corrected. From the way the author writes, I'm thinking these were not her errors, but occurred somewhere in the publishing process. This what is so annoying about e-books! If Amazon doesn't start correcting these problems before they get to my PC Kindle, they may just lose me as a customer, and I read a LOT, Amazon! Maybe you should hire me as an editor! LOL!