Review: Needed more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 21, 2013
An interesting idea, and not badly written, but it felt too unfinished for me. It was like playing cards with over half the cards missing. I don't usually mind stories that slowly unfold, but things just didn't unfold enough for me to have felt this was even a complete short story. It felt more like a prologue to something larger rather than something that could stand on its own.