Review: Just OK
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2013
This is a short novella, and leaves much to be desired. It's a good premise ... deaf, beautiful ward meets gorgeous hunk who was captured as a child by Indians, and will soon inherit his uncle's estate ....  One more sentence and you'll have read the entire novellette. The idea is good ... it just needs to be book-length. The writing is engaging but could use some good editing or an excellent critique group. Lots of promise.