Review: This story MUST be edited!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2011
The other reviews of this short work are fairly accurate. The story is decent. The execution, however, is unacceptable... even for a dollar! I have never purchased anything from Amazon that has this level of bad grammar, crazy (!!) punctuation, incorrectly used words and sentence structure, tense and point-of-view mistakes. The author must at least have a friend who would be willing to read this and fix the problems. If it was revised/edited I would say it was not a bad purchase.