Review: Could not make it through!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 21, 2011
I gave it a good try - the premise was really good but I could not make it through this one. The plot moved very slowly and really needs an editor to cut out some very poor dialogue and extra information that is not relevant.The dialogue sounds very stilted and written at most at a high school grade level and that would be a stretch.The main character Chloe is from California yet many British words for things which she would not use.Main story is sidelined by the relationship angles. She loves 2 guys - Tristan who has a unique story and Oliver - less interesting. Both of these guys are Ok with her not being able to make a choice. Much time spent developing this but again every time Chloe texted one of them it's in the book, if they don't text back, it's in the book, lots extras that detract from the story moving forward.Got to 60% done on my kindle then gave up/