Review: Good story, a bit choppy.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 2, 2013
This is the second book in the Twin Lakes series and I have yet to read the first. I'm assuming the first is Adam and Evelyn.I think because this was my first novel it was hard to keep Adam and Aaron straight. I was a bit nervous when Alexandra was introduced as well, luckily, she's not a major character as of yet. I tend to try to read fast and I kept getting Adam and Aaron confused.This novel feels like it's just pieces in a day. It doesn't really read like a novel. I'm having a difficult time explaining this, however, it just feels like snip-its of days all put together. It didn't ruin the flow but I did catch myself thinking, huh, why not spend more time at Thanksgiving or in any situation?Anyway, the story was good. I just thought it was too much hot and cold for me. I mean, no matter what, Noel was always pushing back. I understand what she went through but it didn't quite feel real towards the end. I mean, she was frightened and then she wasn't anymore? Too soon for me.Another thing that got to me was the choppiness of the sentences. They didn't really have a flow to them. I'm not saying I write any better but it was a bit too choppy for me. I'm not saying, I could write any better. The proof of that is in my reviews, I'm just saying I wish it ran a little smoother.Also, is there any book I can start with an actual ending. This left everything sort of up in the air and with a surprise as well. I wasn't really happy with how things turned out at the end.I did like Aaron. He was great. The kind of character you love to read about. Adam and Evelyn seem amazing but I'm not sure if I'm going to go back and read about them or not.I did receive a complimentary book in exchange for my review.