Review: Good story, poor editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 9, 2013
I received this book from the author in exchange for a fair and honest review.The world has been on the brink of war since the peace has been made. Now Locke's Coalition is sending spies into Liberty to destabilize Liberty's government and to ensure war does not come to the Coalition. Jaden Stone, orphaned and raised by his uncle, is sent into Liberty. He has not been the best student but he has the strongest talent. Will he come back to the Coalition after he completes his assignment?I liked this story but I struggled to get through it. It should have been edited to tighten the story up. The story could have been told in half the pages. The battle scenes became tedious and repetitive. The romances were unbelievable and could have been left out. They added nothing to the story. At times the logistics were lacking. Sofia was captured yet she is fighting in the battle that was to keep Jaden from rescuing her. The ending confused me. There were two endings written and, instead of taking one out, Mr. Terenna left them both in the book.TALENT STORM is a good story but needs editing.