Review: This is not the way to do a short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 24, 2013
I don't have a problem with short stories that are legitimately short because of the story the author is trying to tell.  The issue with this story is that the author is only able to make it short because she cuts out the real heart of the story.Hero and heroine meet and there is legitimate tension.  Skip forward a month or two, and they're in love!  The end of the story is the same way.  You can't create a short story just by cutting out the parts that would make it long.I enjoyed the author's style and I think I might enjoy a full length novel by her.  But I didn't enjoy this at all.