Review: The book had so much potential but was so poorly developed
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2013
The story line was great... recent divorced, unsecured almost middle age woman, heartbroken after seen ex with new pregnant trophy wife, let gay friend rent her a pretend lover. So many opportunities for funny situations and shenanigans. Instead, the author wasted so much effort in unnecessary big dictionary words and unrealistic characters that did nothing to the basic story.  She under developed the main characters own story and expended an unnecessary amount of pages in the lesser ones making them ridiculous and absurd.  Instead of laughing and enjoying a good romantic comedy, I became annoyed and deceived  by the author poor effort.I was rather disappointed :o(