Review: Disappointed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2014
I read the description and reviews, but I have to say, this was a let down.  The concept is good, but the writing and character development are poor.There were too many sentences ending in a preposition; perhaps that's nit picky, but it bothered me to see a published work lacking real editing.  I'm not an English major, but even I can see the glaring errors.The story felt hurried and even the main characters lacked depth.  While there is mention of Ollie's parents, it led nowhere.  There is a conflict that is never truly resolved, instead it's glossed over.  Overall, I've read better original fiction online for free.