Review: Good story but...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2014
The author really, really could use a proofreader that isn't a friend or a computer.  Among the many errors were mixing up homophones (effected instead of affected, tact for tack, etc.), using 's to make words plural , and confusing the words its and it's.  The author can write a good story, but the glaring grammatical errors were hard to overlook.