Review: So much really...
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 3, 2011
I am very bothered by the samples hiding as "Free Books" but that is a larger problem. That was 1 star from the score.Another way of knocking this off was the constant push of "apprentice". I get it. I think we spent more time agonizing over how hard and horrible it is to the the daughter of an uber-person in this story than anything else.We know very little of the background, where she is, what life is life, etc before stepping into this anxiety fest. For repetitive introspection, I take away another star.The length was disappointing. We encounter no other characters like the main one, only watch her fumble from a porch, a back room, then in her car. I'm sorry, no matter what the writer of Twitlight would have us all believe, being a clutz or clueless/oblivious is NOT an interested flaw. Do you go out of your way to make friends with and enjoy time around knuckle heads all day? No. People need to quit writing like this. Losing yet another star.All in all this story had less to it than essays or reflections on other stories I wrote in some of my college classes. It felt filled with fluff even to make it as far as it did. I'm not at all interested in reading more about this girl or her family because the author did not really try to win my business. Another star.