Review: Who wrote this...and why?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2014
To begin with, this book was confusing; so confusing that I had to stop reading it. For instance one minute you're reading the story as if the narrator was talking about themself; then as if the narrator was telling the story about someone...I just didn't get it. It's hard to read something when it slips from being the character who was actually talking to someone talking about the character..does that make any sense at all? It's painfully obvious that whoever the copy editor (if they even had one to begin with) was didn't even catch the slip up.There were other mistakes too...So many grammatical errors, it just read as if it was a rough draft or something, not as if it was the final draft.I tried my hardest to like this book, I really did...and if it was cleaned up a bit by getting another copy editor to go over it properly, then I think it would be an awesome read ...I had purchased the other books in the series, before I even started reading the first one, that's how much faith I had in the author and storyline. However, as someone mentioned before, some of the parts are not believable in anyone's world and I do understand it's in the authors mind that creates the story, but it has to be somewhat believable, doesn't it? (Unless it's a 'fantasy land' kind of thing)...So please if you are the author reading this review, please take heart, I'm only mentioning these things because the potential is there, it just needs some fine tuning...Your 'Soulful' Reviewer & Editor~soulful~  Blessings