Review: Interesting short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 4, 2013
This was a interesting short story. It was free so I figured if i didn't like it I didn't lose anything, but time reading it. Because there was not a synopsis I was not sure what to expect. It turned out to be an attention grabber from the beginning, quickly reached the climax, and ended just as fast as it began. The only complaint I have is it should have been a little longer. As soon as it got to the good part it ended with a cliff hanger. If the author decides to turn it into a full novel I really want to see character development because this short story leaves many unanswered questions.