Review: Great story, not so great grammar....
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2014
Mr. Spoor- for God's sake it is "dining room" NOT "dinning room"!!!!!!!! You give credit where it is "due" not "do" and if something is "seamed" it is stitched together. The word you were looking for was "seemed".The story is very good the writing...not so much.