Review: This story had great potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2014
But it was too choppy and short.  I don't want to give away the story so I'll just say that scenes weren't finished before continuing on to the next. There wasn't a smooth flow.  Lady's emotions were changing back and forth from each scene from anger to lust.  That was understandable to a point, given what she was experiencing.  Had the characters and story been developed more this would have been a really good story