Review: Loved The Story, But.......
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 7, 2010
******(3.5 Stars Rating)Cole is a man on a mission to help a friend. Cali is a new woman ready for adventure.  When Cole is asked to protect his best friend's sister, how can he say no?  But when he sees Cali for the first time, not only does want her, but she looks NOTHING like the photo.  Their passion is explosive, and life changing; but someone is out to claim Cali, and if he can't have her...nobody can.I really wanted to give this book a 5 star rating.  I loved the storyline, and the chemistry between Cole and Cali.  What I didn't like was the fact that the author clearly DID NOT proofread this story.  There were so many misplaced and misspelled words that at times I found myself frustrated following the story.  Although I really did enjoy this story, I can't in good conscience not pass on the problems I found.I feel ambivalent about the next story.  Although I want to read the story about Cole's twin brother Conner and Cali's cousin Donya, I can't help but cringe at the thought of how many errors it may have.So I do recommend this story, but with reluctance.  If you can get pass the typos, and focus solely on the story, I think you will find it very entertaining.