Review: Great story line, great characters, but writing style could be better.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 9, 2014
3.5 stars. This was a great story. The characters were awesome, the plot was really intriguing, the setting was great, but the execution failed. I know that this is just my opinion, and it kills me to write something negative about a story that could have been 5 plus stars. I love books with different POV. But this book was really hard to follow. It went from one POV to another POV without any warning or notation. Then it would go from a POV to a narrative style. I had to go back several times and reread something just to make sure I knew who was saying it. If this author would have stuck to only a couple POV or flawlessly went into one, this would have been a contender for one of my favorite books, but I just could not get past the writing style. Now the positives. The characters worked very well with each other. This is definitely a story about overcoming, forgiveness, love, acceptance. Hadley had a horrible life growing up. She never knew what love was until Miller showed her what it was unconditionally. His love, patience, and understanding helped her heal and forgive her demons from the past. The little twists and turns in this book were great and at times completely unexpected. Mac helped with a lot of Hadley's healing also. I hope that my review is taken as my opinion, and does not stop you from giving this book or this author a chance.