Review: Cute book
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2014
I must have looked at the cover of this book 100 times. Then awhile ago I read Taz's book and while I was surfing through books to read last night I stumbled on this and there was Taz's name mentioned. Hmm. So that's when it it me. This is the first book in that series. Needless to say both of the books could be read as one shots.I liked how Ben came in and just kind of unintentionally made himself at home. And I think some folks may have some issues with the believability of that but I felt more like it was bringing me back to some younger years in my own life where that's the kind of stuff that happened. I also fell in love with the house as its own character though to the end of the story I wondered how they ever resolved the Ben and the tiny little shower thing.I had a harder time with the various levels of crime in the book. I've said it now on a few of the books that with my bikers I only need one criminal organization. After that it starts to get a little complicated. Though in this case I could kind of see the point of it.Also there's some bizarre things going on with the quotation marks that made some of the quotes hard to read. I found instead of beginning quotes on the actual quotation there's actually set of end quotes on the non-quotation sentence before. I found it slowed it down my reading trying to figure out where dialog started and stopped. And there were a few misuses of words but nothing that would make me highlight it or claim the book is unreadable.