Review: Sweet romance, great potential, editor needed
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 1, 2014
Eden was a fun character to read. Her personality type is not the typical female lead I relate to, but her comical inner voice was entertaining. Dom was a sweetie, and I liked all the side characters. The recovering from divorce and 'getting back into the dating saddle' themes were well done and relatable.The book, however, seriously needs an editor. Commas are sorely lacking - including before names... in every occasion where they should be used. There are some Word to Kindle conversion errors (the texted smiley face, for example, appears as a letter 'j')  There are places where there are "author notes" left in the text (ex: chp 12 says "Eden has a drink date with Evan" and then switched back to Eden's 1st person perspective) Though, this may be due to the strange way the author chose to flip to Dom's perspective in the previous chapter after being completely in Eden's voice for all 10 preceding chapters.I don't normally hark on editing, but in this case, it distracted from the enjoyment of the story.