Review: Superior Urban Fantasy! Can't Wait For Next Story!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 12 16, 2012
This is an amazingly well-written urban fantasy by a couple of indie authors.  The writing is understandable, interesting and polished, the plot makes sense and moves along briskly, with enjoyable twists, the background information is explained gradually and naturally, so that you are neither kept in the dark too long, nor overloaded with trivia, the concept is fresh and believable, the action is nearly non-stop, the dialog rings true, the heroine is likable, strong and brave, the villains are menacing and sexy, and there is plenty of mystery and intrigue. I cannot wait to read what happens next.Do not be deterred by a couple low reviews! I read both one star reviews (to date) and the main complaint of the reviewers was that this story is too short. This IS a short story; and it is clearly meant to be part of a series of short stories! Buying a short story and then giving it a bad review is like buying a cupcake and then complaining that it is not a cake.  Helllllooooo???? It deserves to be reviewed on the basis of what it is, NOT on the basis of what it is not.I got this first-of-the-series as a free download from Amazon, and now I am hooked! Not only are the story and writing first-rate, even the editing is excellent. These writers' work is definitely worth spending actual money on, which is what I intend to do, as soon as I send them both a fan letter.What are you waiting for?!  Buy this story!