Review: Good story but very sloppy writing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 10, 2013
I would give this book a five star rating if the mechanics of the writing were better.  The story is very scary.  That this scenario happens with the black boot feds, Americans should take note.  The odds of it happening to you is slim but as time goes on and the government gets more power, the odds increase.  If you've ever publicly voiced a negative opinion of the feds, your odds of getting your door kicked down in the middle of the night goes up.  And yet most Americans are content to drink their beer and watch football.  Ignorance is bliss until it all goes to hell.This author desperately needs an editor.  When an author uses commas in place of periods, "their" instead of "they're", and runs on sentences, I cringe.  There is no excuse for sloppy writing.  It makes me think that the author doesn't care and that leads me to challenge the actual story.  Instead of enjoying the saga I find myself editing the book as I read.  The reader shouldn't have to work on the mechanics of a story.I enjoyed the story.  I would have enjoyed it more had it been well written.