Review: Well below par
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 17, 2013
I gave these books a 2 for several reasons. They need to be edited. They don't appear to have been. Many mistakes that impact the enjoyment of the stories. The writing is labored and formulaic. Many scenes that I skipped and others that should have been given much more attention. I almost deleted them after reading the first book. But I didn't and the writing did improve a little with each one. The author missed so many opportunities to add interest and detail to these stories. Maybe lazy? I hope that future efforts will be more diverse in story line, historical facts and details, and be tightly edited. I am being generous with a 2. But in spite of this, I do hope the author will continue to write, I think he/ she could work hard, get help, and be a good author.