Review: In his world?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2013
This is a short story. I was saluted in by the title and the promise of fantasy realized. For the most part, I did get that. However, in story I wondered how much the story made a believer out of me. Although this is the first in a series I felt like it was a bit too untouchable. It seemed there was no real foundation or even a relationship built before there was love. Too many questions flooded my mind.The whole boss seduces his secretary has been done and even though this was a nice twist to the story, I kept wondering do you believe this.