Review: very Interesting idea with some fixable pitfalls
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2014
I have a habit of downloading many free books to my kindle and then reading as time permits. Oftentimes days or weeks go by before I isolate a book to read. More times than not I have no recollection what it was that compelled me to download it. That said, this novel, mainly because of its title, is one I really wanted to enjoy.1. The timeline of the story could be more pronounced. More than once I had to go back to see just how much time had passed between chapters. It should have been obvious to the reader.2. The author lost my interest in the story the moment she decided to bounce between characters.3. Additional editing and more careful formatting could have been used. Conversion to ebook format could be the cause for many of these potholes.4. The dialogue came off "canned" the further I read into the book.The book had a host of great and compelling ideas. Unfortunately by the 32% mark enough interest was lost to compel this reader to skim.I hope this honest review of my experience with her book helps this author. I think she has a great "eye" for what could be really fascinating sci-fi.