Review: Chocolate is more fun than Snow
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 2, 2011
I am not overly concerned by editing errors. One can expect such in self-published novels. It is easy to read past those. This book was a little better than the first. Character of Liz has a bit more depth, though James and Daphne are still rather flat. We are introduced to more townspeople, making the setting more interesting. The big problem remains in the stilted, archaic language. If the series continues, I truly hope the characters are brought into the current century.  I have hope for the development of this series.