Review: cute story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2014
It was a cute story.  Mail order brides always fascinate and have a HEA.  Charlie's is the youngest of 4 brothers.  He is the one that from a very early age has taken care of his mother and run the ranch.  His father was killed and the other brothers are worthless. With that, he seems a big immature.  I would have thought that it would have toughen him up and matured him as well.  He was somewhat rude and childish in his behavior from the very beginning.  He poked fun at her expense.The bride came to Kansas because she didn't have a lot of other options.  She came to marry one brother but wound up attracted to another brother.  The story was a bit hard to read as the dialogue would switch from one person to the other without letting you know it was switching.  I found it a bit confusing at times and had to reread parts because I thought I was in one characters head only to find that a switch had taken place.  It was a cute story and worth reading.