Review: Flat and undeveloped story
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2014
This is third and last free story I downloaded from this author. I love the subject of mail order brides, the old west and cowboys so you would think this would be a no brainer. Not so. I finished the story just as I did the other two, shaking my head at the lack of plot, the silly characters, just the overall 'Why was this ever written' question. The story was as strange as the others.