Review: In desperate need of editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2013
This was a b/s story with an abrupt ending. There were missing words, misspelled words, wrong choice of words, and excessive use of exclamation points!!! Despite all that, I thought the concept of the the story was interesting, so I was hopeful that the storyline would overshadow the poor writing. I was so wrong. The conflict was resolved too neatly and the happily ever after ending was rushed, but thank God it's over.