Review: Storyline not believable at all
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2013
This story was riddled with problems for me.  While the author's writing style was nice in spots, the story lacked any believability.  And while it is fiction, I have a hard time wrapping my mind around two friends who are so close that they will want to have the same woman AT THE SAME TIME.Besides this, the sex scenes didn't seem to flow; there was almost a mechanical aspect to the writing that was very disctracting.  It was almost clinical.  The author tends to change styles - from sensual to downright nasty!  I wasn't sure which style of writing the author was more comfortable with.  Dialogues was all right in spots but the overuse of the word "baby" began to grate on me.Probably will not purchase any more of this series.  May wait and see how the author develops her talent and then try other stories at a later time.