Review: it's a mixed review
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 4, 2010
i disagree with the other reviews in that i liked the story and plot elements. it was a little loose in areas but in all solid. i agree that the erotica fell apart both in description and logic... leo wouldnt need to do what he did, the story didnt need it - almost like author needed to try and write this kinda scene even tho the story didnt need it or that it "fit".  it didnt. i also did not like that jaden let his mate go. ending could have been infinately better and still left plenty of suspense for duncan, moira, and jaden's tale.