Review: Good story- unfulfilled potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 20, 2013
A good story and interesting plot line, although a bit choppy in places so I was constantly flipping back to see if I missed something (nope… points just weren't clarified). I liked the premise for the story and I would love to have had the author build up the background a bit more. Ends a bit abruptly, which I find annoying.