Review: Glad it was free
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 27, 2013
I got this for free from Amazon.  And I'm glad because as I read it I realized I'd read the exact same story about a year ago when it was Twilight Fanfiction.  Found a copy of the original (Guarding Bella Swan by coachlady1[I assume that Harper Bentley and coachlady1 are the same person]) and compared it and yep, the same except for most of the names (I say most because there were still some Twilight character names like Jacob, Garrett, Ephraim).It's an okay story.  Needs some more editing to tighten it up.  From someone who reads hundreds of fanfics you could tell that it was written as a chapter by chapter story.  I do believe any stories that follow will not have been previously published as fanfiction and I may take a look when the next one comes out.