Review: Random syllables are hyphenated
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 3, 2011
I'm only 20% in, but I have to say the random hyphens are very distracting!  The characters are interesting if stereotypes.  The plot is intricate and mysterious.  The ancient myths are mixed very well with the modern spy tech.But on every page, there are at least 2 very odd hyphens, as if 1 syllable of a normal word shouldn't be there.  The words are formatted normally elsewhere.  For instance, organization appears twice on one page, but one of them is spelled organiza-tion.  Other examples are won-derful, charac-ter, motiv-ate - you get the picture!  The first or last syllable will be separated by a hyphen when it obviously shouldn't be.As this happens on every page, it's very hard to lose yourself in the story!