Review: Pleasant Surprise
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2013
When I read the first book in this series, I was appalled that someone could got to "print" with so many flagrant mistakes. This author does not know the difference between an objective and a subjective pronoun. That's fine. Get an editor. Please. Or here's a clue, when you're typing in Word and it underlines your sentence in green, that means something. You might want to explore that. Wakefield #2,  as opposed to #1,is an entire universe better in it's structure. The pacing, indeed the basic storytelling is just better. Towards the middle of the novel, I was mesmerized. It was great One can tell towards the end of the novel where the author began to hurry. As she did so, she devolved. There is an easily corrected mistake, or several, in every line (not just sentence). Again, even self publishers need a "proofer."After the first book in this series, I'm not sure why I bought the second. Penance for all my past grammar mistakes? I know however why I will buy the third. Good story. Maybe by number 5  or 6 this author will have found an editor.......or grammar check?