Review: A trouble to read.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 30, 2013
I like jealous heroes but I find Declan's jealousy unreasonable, stupid and groundless most the times. It seems he has to be possessive and territorial exclusively because he needs the traits common to the OTT hero mold he's shaped with.I've never rolled my eyes so much. This book is full of hot guys, hot girls, holy hotness moments and I was bored. We have all the possible cliché scenes here. Clichés are not bad and I love them but here I find they are not well executed. To be honest I had the feeling this book was a "Beautiful Disaster" fanfiction and when Declan called his sister Abs I was more convinced of that. Then I found the Cristy episode and all the worries regarding Raven's father's job useless and pointless. Raven is boring, Declan is stupid and their connection lacking; after they saw each other 2 or 3 times they are madly in love, he's crazily possessive, she's the queen of hotland and wedding bells ring. The middle part of the story drags on and on. The things started moving on again when the band was getting signed by a label and had to tour but nothing  that happens is enough to save the story at this point. All the second characters, really too many to count, are one dimensional, mere onlookers who don't do anything interesting.The sex scenes? There are few and mediocre at best. The ending is a cliffanger and we find out Finn's feelings, predictable since the beginning to me. I'm not interested in reading the second book but since everyone decerves a second chance I'll do it and see if there's any kind of improvement.