Review: Removed it from my Kindle after about a chapter and a half
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2011
I really liked the idea of this story, but I was unable to read it to find out if there was anything to it.  It started out very choppy, completely confusing, and just plain not readable. I removed it from my Kindle a little bit into the second chapter.The story starts with a lady burning a barn with animals in it. There are names of people that you have no idea who they are, and there is a thing that I think was supposed to be a ghost, but you don't get clarification on that either. The second chapter starts with more people that you don't know, and goes into attempting to kill an unborn child. At that point I quit. I did not know who or what was happening, and quite honestly I did not care to find out.Sorry to be harsh, but this was not something that I could even pretend to like.  I don't want to read about the smell of burning cows or the poisoning of pregnant ladies.  Great idea; crappy, confusing, gross and harsh presentation.