Review: Could have been really good but the editing-yikes!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2013
Mind you I read this book after I got a notification from Amazon that the book had been corrected, which makes me quake with horror as to how bad the editing, grammar, etc. was before this.  Examples:  Lady "T" is having a conversation with her son, Colby.  You turn the page and Connor is kissing her on the cheek.  Connor  is another character in the book unrelated to Lady "T" and not part of this scene at all;  Then in one chapter Emily is bemoaning her marriage of one month without her husband, in the next chapter he bemoans his marriage of 15 days without his wife.  There are several more issues like that where I had to reread to be sure I wasn't missing something.  That in addition to all of the missing words, duplicate words etc. really took away from the story.I did enjoy the overall plot and the characters.  I suspect the revisions were made by virtue of a spell check on a computer.  Unfortunately spell check leaves in wrong words so long as they are spelled correctly.  Someone actually needs to read this book and correct it.  If I hadn't liked the plot and characters so much this book would have gotten one star which I think is very sad when a little effort would make it a four star in my book.