Review: looks, 4...dance,1.5
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 19, 2013
I like the basic story and the concept, but I'm trying really, really hard to just read and ignore the punctuation. I am a prolific reader, and therefore maybe a little overly critical...I'm hoping the author put in for an extra large order of commas for his next story so that he doesn't run short like he did in this one. Nice charachter developement.