Review: Great book
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 02 4, 2014
As with the first book, I loved this story. However, the book needs to be edited again as there are a number of times where the wrong word is used, punctuation is in the wrong place or words are incomplete. Also, there is an inconsistency between this book and the first one. In the first book, the place outside the Biome she was supposed to get to was 50 miles away and, in this book, it is 100 miles away.