Review: Good story, but agreed that an editor is needed
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 17, 2013
Ms. Eidem, you really need to get an editor or at the very least maybe a beta reader to help you out catching all of the spelling errors, inconsistencies in name spelling, correct word usage and tenses.  It would go a long way to improving this book.  It's very good story and can be improved with correction of the grammatical errors.  Hope you get these issues resolved and I look forward to hopefully reading more of your work.