Review: Pacing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 21, 2014
I thoroughly enjoy this author's humor. Her "curse conversions" or "swearing subterfuge" has me laughing out loud.  I wish the pacing in her stories was better.  She often has a problem with her segues from sex scenes to plot scenes to scenes that introduce characters for future books.  They don't flow smoothly.If she is writing a series she doesn't have to let us know three books out who our future protagonists are going to be.  The chapters dedicated to these characters would have better served to flesh out the narrative of this book.Maybe the problem is that I don't get into age-play and her books get very close with the petulant pixish spitfire tiny five foot nothing wives who have their uber macho multiple spouses wrapped around their little fingers.This is one of those reviews that probably won't help you unless you read the book and have the same point of view about baby brides.  I do enjoy the worlds of her series.  I just wish the women were more grown-up.  Being feisty and hopelessly helpless doesn't work for me.***updated review: I figured out what my problem is with these characters.  The women are just not sexy.  Again, I'm not an age-play fan.  So I don't see why every single man is attracted to the same type of woman.  For that matter, get one and pass her around.Take a chance with book one of either BDSM series (Prairie Winds Club or Shadowdance Club)  They use the same narrative formula.  Don't buy more than one book at a time.