Review: good writing but NO plot at all
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2012
This would easily be a 4 or 5 star book if there was any plot at all.  It had so much potential even seeing thats theres a whole series, but those book have no more than 50 pages too.  This book is purely sex.  Dane comes home and runs into Charlotte, the girl he loves & left behind 10 years earlier.  She had his son and never told him.  So much the author could do with this plot.  They reunited had sex and more sex, he found out about his son by mistake than went to her to have more & more & more sex.  They had the conclusion in one night and the book ended.  The whole book time period was about a 8 hours, he never even met his son.This was a free book and nice to read but wished it was more.  I would love to read the rest of the brothers stories but they are all $3.99 and I am not paying to read 50 pages of sex when I could just reread this book for free.