Review: Fun Capture Fantasy
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2013
I've been looking for the perfect virgin erotica book for a while now. I've gone through quite a few in my search for that ideal combination of innocence and reluctant attraction on the heroine's side with the alpha confidence, sexual prowess, and dominance on the hero's side. This book absolutely had that it. That *it* that I've been looking for.The sex (the virgin defilement & de-flowering - oh yes!!!), the Dominance and submission, the Domestic Discipline and spanking was perfect (for me).Olivia (Livvie) was just the right side of innocent and kind of bratty, though, at times, her brattiness seemed unwise considering her circumstances. But over all, her rebellions were entertaining to me, as were the punishments.Hayden was dominant - Alpha male all the way. I liked his character. There was some depth to him. It wasn't just "I man," chest pump, and drag the girl into his cave by the hair (though...that did sort of happen, minus the chest pump and dragging by the hair...and the cave). He had reasons for everything he did, like taking Livvie as a captive to both protect her and his people (there was more to it than that...but spoilers aren't my thing). There was some backstory to him. Some history that was potentially interesting.I say "potentially" because I wished for more backstory, more detail and elaboration. I think the world building started out strong, but then deteriorated as the story wore on. The sex and the relationship between Hayden and Livvie were developed well, but the rest of the world building suffered. There were other characters who should have gotten more attention - Simon's story, for example, deserved more detail. It was too vague for me. I wanted more.And then the end gave me whiplash with its abruptness. It ended mid climax - no, not that type of climax - and I was like WHAT? That's it? I won't tell you exactly what happened, cause I don't want to spoil it, but I was disappointed. There was so much potential for the awesomeness of the story itself - sci-fi/futuristic plot was really cool. But there were so many unanswered questions at the end.And even though some of those questions were answered in the epilogue and the story was wrapped up, I felt like so many details were just glossed over that the story should file a report with the Plot Protective Services for willful neglect. Yes, in the book world, that is a crime. A crime committed against your own story is just unforgivable and is punishable by being locked in a room with Justin Bieber and no alcohol.Overall, I gave the story 4 hearts because the sex and D/s did *it* for me. I totally added points for that. If I were rating based on story alone, then it would not be this high a rating. So, if you're looking for some awesome virgin and spanking action, then YES this is a great book for you. If you're looking for some awesome sci-fi/futuristic world building and storyline, then you will be disappointed.Disclaimer: No authors were harmed by the gratuitous application of Justin Bieber in the making of this review.***And if you are like me and love you some Defiled Virgin Action - go to [...] and voila - all the virgin books your heart desires. And, of course, the list will grow as people add to it.***