Review: Not bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 8, 2014
The premise of the story was good. There were some issues. The dialogue was stiff. One reviewer referred to it as sophomoric.  The story needed to be developed more...less telling more showing. Had difficulties with  the tone of some of the conversations. Couldn't tell if they were serious or joking at times. Also there were minor editing issues. Romance felt contrived and not real. Overall, story had an interesting plot and was unpredictable at times but this story could have been much, much better.  Story development lacked depth.