Review: Two Stars Due to Bad Editing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2014
If you are honestly going to put out a book you want people to enjoy, please use a Word Processor that picks up spelling errors.  Then, have someone proof-read it a few times.The story wasn't bad, it stumbled a lot at first, and then had some rhythm of a decent idea going.  I did like the historical facts before each chapter and hoped they would lead into what was going on with that chapter, some did, some did not.I hated, really /hated/ the word 'Yeh'  -- not every character in the book would say that -- A rewrite of this book would do wonderful things for its content.I agree with one reviewer that it would make a better movie, from a filmmaker that could do it justice.  I kinda felt like I was reading a SyFy movie as it was.*SPOILERS  BELOW*It felt really rushed at the end, as the mixing up of the characters Barry and Matt was horrible, Barry did not fly helicopters.  We were also left hanging with Matt and Gloria and did they find each other.  I'm glad that Kathy and Barry did reunite, but as I stated it was all really rushed at the ending.  I have no idea what really happened to the Kim Family, if that fall of Kathy and what was said about the apartments crumbling, killed them all.