Review: Great story but needs work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 4, 2012
This book sure needs editing.  It would also benefit from some fleshing out of both the characters and the background story.  Adam in particular did not have a lot of depth, and frankly I didn't like him very much.  In the beginning, he appeared shallow, arrogant and egotistical, and even though his character evolved somewhat by the end of the story, it just didn't feel very credible.  Having said all of this, however, the underlying story was definitely imaginative and interesting, and it had me ignoring my other tasks until I finished it.  The only reason I'm giving it 3 stars rather than 4 is because I think it could be much better if the author bulked up the story by adding some much-needed details and insight into the characters and hired a good editor.