Review: 4 stars for dialogue, 3 for everything else.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2013
I love the sparks between the main characters.  I double love their back-and-forth.  She's funny, feisty and has a big personality. He's tough, funny...and sweet. But what kept taking me right out of the book is the fact that he must be the most inept "security" guy ever. Every time she gets in trouble, it's because he zigged when he should have zagged, or he let her have her own way despite common sense. He's always in the wrong place when stuff is going down. But it kept the story moving along and didn't annoy me nearly as much as the author's love affair with the word "snicker".  It may seem trivial, but I am barely exaggerating to say she uses it on every other page, several times a page. Every time I couldn't help wonder whether big, bad former SEALS would really "snicker". What was wrong with "laugh"? To balance out my annoyance, all of the women were constantly "giggling". It made me pause every time.