Review: First book was better...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 4, 2013
This one didn't do it for me.  For a series, this book went down such a different road and lost my interest.  Not sure why.  The first book (short story) in the series had a few good characters and good character development like I said in my review but this one took a strange path.The large amount of typos kept stopping me from simply reading through the print and trying to enjoy the story as best as possible.  A very big overuse of commas and badly structured sentences.This, like the first book in the series, is also more of a short story, not a full novel and should be introduced as such.  A bit pricey for the quick read.  A little strange that the first book has nearly 50 reviews with 23 of them (at the time of this posting) giving it five stars however, less than ten people go on to read the other books in the series.Odd.