Review: couldnt stop reading
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 10 28, 2013
Great story. I felt so sad for Luke after he loses his Mother and then feels abandoned by his father. All through the story you could feel the sense of being tossed away. Not until the end do you truly understand why. I also really liked Jared even with his quirks. When the truth comes out you cant help but hold out hope for his redemption. Even though this was a short story the characters were so well developed that you really are invested in them. I wish the brownies had been explained a little better. I know what they were but why Mom was involved was never covered. I also wish Jared's dad being restrained would have been better explained. The only other issue I faced was an editing issue. The chapter covering Thursday, December 31 is dated 2013. I was paying attention to the dates and wondered if we jumped into the future but soon realized it should have been 1959. Other than that little glitch it was a great read. Can't wait for more from this author.