Review: Letting Go - a good start for a short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2012
This story shows so much potential! There is still some editing to be done though. I found way to many uses of 'Then' or 'And then'. There were also many sentences that began with 'She'. However, once you moved past that, the story was an excellent tale of the loss that occurs when a partner dies. This story explores how when a person refuses to accept the death of another, they are effectively trapping that soul to a ghostly plane. Excellent concept and I can't wait to see what else this author comes up with!