Review: Slllllloooooooowwwwww start.....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 19, 2013
I'm amazed at all these great reviews. I read the first chapter and gave up. Why? Because it was SSSLLLLOOOOOWWW! A good book needs a great inciting incident. NAILED started with all back story about the two main characters. It should have started with the discovery of the body. The back story can always be woven in later. Several reviewers mentioned foul language. I didn't encounter any in the first chapter but....I wish new mystery writers would do some research, and spend some time with law enforcement officers. Most swear little if at all. They are husbands, wives, mothers and fathers just like the rest of the world. I spent several years at a sheriffs department and rarely heard anyone using profanity.