Review: Silly
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2012
The characters are one-dimensional, often silly and inept, while the plot is contrived.  When the author tries for cocky banter, the timing is mostly inappropriate and just falls flat.  Agents are very low tech for a supposed national security agency and even an amateur would know better how to infiltrate a compound.  The author needs to get a proofreader and/or editor to keep her from making grammatical mistakes such as using "course" when she means "coarse", "peel" when she means "peal", "pan out" instead of "fan out" and so on.  I didn't bother to read past a third of the book.