Review: Cute story, but too blotchy to follow.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2014
I would have rated this much higher, but there was so much content that was repeated(the same few sentences or paragraphs were repeated when advancing to the next page no fewer than nine times within the first ten percent of the story), or whole chunks MISSING(content was skipped/missing no fewer than seven times within the first ten percent) that made it extremely difficult to make sense of.