Review: excellent story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 1, 2014
I really enjoyed the story line.  it grabbed me from the first chapter.  the first half of the story is completely engrossing.  characters were drawn well.  i felt like i knew them all.  where I took away a star is for the middle which dragged a bit and repeated itself too much.  if the author would streamline some of her descriptions and remove some of the repetitious  discussion, the book would flow much more smoothly.  the end is expected but wraps up very neatly and satisfying.  all in all I felt it was a good read with only a few misused words and very rare spelling errors.  a good editor for content would improve the flow and turn this into a five star read.