Review: A Powerful Punch for such a short story!!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 13, 2013
Hold Me Down Hard is a short 4 chapter novella. You'll definitely read it in just one quick sitting. I'm sure I would have even if it would have been much longer! It drew me in from the first paragraph and didn't let go. While this is an erotic novella, it didn't at all read like cheesy porn. A great job was done in developing the characters quickly. The dialogue was completely natural & Eden and her friends sounded like they'd be fun to hang with. I was laughing out loud just a few pages in.Eden Carver grew up on a farm, but then moved to New York to pursue acting. Developing a major crush on her hunky cop neighbor next door wasn't something she planned, but it happened. There are two dilemmas with falling for the sexy Jay Bennett: 1) he's her best friend - they do everything together 2) she has a few kinky fetishes that she thinks might scare him off. One night her friends convince her to ask Jay to run lines with her. She says that he does all the time. This time, though, they want her to write the script.I'm really so impressed that this was so short, but had so much depth. In just four chapters, I was laughing out loud, feeling the STRONG sexual tension, and experiencing worry on behalf of Eden. The only problem I had was just that it was too short - I wanted MORE!! It was deliciously naughty & heartwarming at the same time ~ an easy 4.5 STARS!!*I received a copy from the author in exhange for an honest review.*