Review: Cheesy, and not the "sweet" story I was expecting
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 12, 2012
This was a much more sensual story than I was expecting -- based on the description, I was anticipating some circumstance where Sarah catches the Viscount's eye, they flirt madly, and he proposes.  Bedding the virgin was an unexpected turn of events, and of course after a night of sex he now realizes he's madly in love with the shy girl? Honestly, I had a hard time with that scene as it didn't seem believable for either character.  Yes, the pushy friend was a mild annoyance, but frankly I liked her better than Sarah.Additionally, there were some strange typos (1 Viscountobes, and 2 nViscounty).