Review: Excellent story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 22, 2013
Though the story was well told the grammar and spelling left a lot to be dispersed. Maybe translation is lost when it goes electronic, I  can't believe no one is proof reading this. Also, the story left off in a really bad place.  You're expecting the next sentence but it's the end of the book. Can we end one phase before beginning a new one?