Review: Story too long because of two different authors views
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 9, 2012
This really was a good book.  It started off great.  Had my attention from the first chapter and the editing was good.  The plot was also very well written.  My only complaint is the book was too long and it seem like there was more than one author writing the story (I fine out after I finish the book that that was the case).  It should have stopped with the Doctor's and cousin's death.  Raven's part in the story did not fit and then you left us hanging with her.  I think author number one should have written book (1) and author number two should write book (#2).  You can also tell one author like to use profanity and the other author does not (I notice that too, about 2/3 toward the end).  I did however like the book and I did finish reading it.  More importantly, I would probably read another book by the author(s) again.