Review: It could be great
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2014
It could be great if it wasn't for so many mistakes,and if the end wasn't so abrupt. We would like to see how their romance evolves. The idea was nice and funny and the characters believable. I liked how she reacted, and other than the rich stereotypical character everything was interesting. I like him, don't take this the wrong way, it's just that meet someone rich and famous has been done so many times...But the author should pay attention to the editing. I'm not English native and I was distracted by so many errors and not only orthograph errors but continuity errors too, and I'm someone who doesn't reall care most of the times, but here it was too much.