Review: still a good series
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 30, 2013
I think I liked this story even more than the first. Gabby's story was good and got me interested in these women of power and just how they figure in the werewolf world. Michelle's story was better developed, carefully laid and fast paced! If I could make one comment that is negative it would be that becoming overly descriptive about location, items and such....shows a bit of immaturity in the writing. This story had less than Gabby's story but Melissa got bogged down in Michelle's story by describing a hotel room that had nothing to do with promoting the story line...it just got in the way and I skipped it until I picked up the meat of the story. Melissa did this a couple of times but it was annoying none the less. I read voraciously and like a good story and this fit the bill...with a little more editing this would be a great story that takes you on a fast paced ride filled with mystery and suspense. I'm looking forward to the next in the series.