Review: Excellent Short Story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 20, 2013
Fantastic story; I was hooked within the first chapter and that rarely happens.  I could connect with the lead character right away as we think quite similarly.  As I always say when writing a review, I will not spoil the story for someone who hasn't read it but I will say this; I wasn't disappointed in the ending.  The only issue I had was with how short the story was.  A story with this kind of character should be longer; especially when the mystery keeps you hooked with each turn of the page.