Review: Short but good
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2013
This is a very short story (10 minutes or less), with a few minor spelling and grammar issues, but not horrible.It is abrupt and choppy, but works well as an introduction. You get a very good feel, in a hurry, for how things are.I will read the next installment to see how this story progresses.