Review: Good Story...but needs editing!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2012
Dawlish spins an interesting tale with strong characters...it dragged a bit in spots, but it commanded my attention to the end.  The Kindle version needs a good edit, though.  It had quite a few grammatical and punctuation errors, wrong word usage (e.g, wondered for wandered), and places where words had clearly been inadvertently omitted.  It was a free Amazon download, though, so I can't complain too much.I based the rating on the story's merits alone...not the sloppy editing.