Review: Why!? Why did this book do this to me!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2013
I hate, HATE giving this book 3 stars. But I just couldn't give it any higher.Why do I hate that I had to do this? Because the story was awesome. The first scene of these two together literally set my vajayjay on FIRE (um - let me clarify that: not like STD fire, but like everything turns to liquid Fire - in a good non-scented way)The story of how these two came together, the side characters, the backgrounds, everything GREAT!The downside: the failure to edit this book. Usually I don't give a crap. If the flow is right, I don't care if there's a word misspelled here, a period missing there, quotations missing....but this book was just to the extreme. So extreme it had me stopping on certain conversations confused as to who said what and where the conversation stopped and ended. That's pretty bad to screw me up.Also, I didn't like how toward the middle and to the end it did this weird thing that had the story skip forward and then go back and explain how they got to that point. A little here and there is okay, but I felt like this is how the rest of the book was told - and where's the fun in that? If I already know the point to which it's leading to, there's no anticipation to get me there, even if the story gets exciting. That's the point of excitement to lead up to the unknown. I felt like I started reading the book backwards.I eventually just got really pissed off. This book could have been fantastic. It started out that way and the author has the skill and story to get it there.  It just felt parts were written by one person and the other parts were written by a completely different person.