Review: SEMI-DISAPPOINTING
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 9, 2013
HOMECOMING is mostly a sweet little romance with a very predictable ending - except for the lengthy and detailed sex scene in the middle. This by itself would have earned it four stars, and it is a quite readable romance. But the need for better proofreading cost it that fourth star. Since this is a Kindle book, I must use percentages rather than pages: at 51%, instead of having the character "dying to hear" something, we read "dying to here." And at 62%, we read "He'd never let on that he much he'd hated his inability . . ." This sounds like a rewrite halfway done. Proofreader needed, dear author!