Review: Good writing... uneven pacing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 19, 2012
Pace is a good writer. And, I will agree with other reviewers that his style of character development, is reminiscient of King. Characterization is what will keep you clicking the Kindle.The problem with this one is that it is very poorly organized and you are bombarded with new characters throughout, who have no apparent relationship to each other. This makes it difficult to follow the story line... and stay interested.The story line itself is very poorly laid out and you are not sure until the very end what the plot is. This also makes it difficult to keep your attention.This book makes a pretty good case for professional editing and review. If Pace had had this opportunity it would have been a much stronger tale, as an editor would have recognized the deficiencies I've pointed out and fixed them.All-in-all this one is worth reading but the overall effort will disappoint you.