Review: Missing something...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 14, 2014
Hhhhmmm... Well, I had high hopes for this story. Based on the cover and prologue. But it just fell short for me. There was a choppy flow for me. Too many ideas in one storyline. The characters were sort of one dimensional and lacked depth. There was no relationships. No emotions really.There were several confusing areas for me. ~~One, I was confused as to the age of Robyn. The character led us to think in the beginning that she w fresh out of high school, getting ready for college. But then later on it appeared she was 22.She catches her boyfriend misbehaving and then runs off with a guy (Brandon) she barely remember from the diner where she used to work. Then said guy becomes kidnapper and chains both you and misbehaving boyfriend (Jared) in the basement of a house, where she is given an ultimatum for change. I was confused why Jared was brought there after he was knocked out?Third area of confusion for me was regarding intimacy - What was the deal of Brandon wanting her, turning her, but not being allowed to "have" her?Then later he goes on to say - ""I know you how felt beneath me, how you tasted. No other man can claim that."Only to become intimate at a later time... Bizarre!I did think the death of Sandy added to the story - it was well deserved... Otherwise it was sorta on the goodie-goodie side of stories...I also found a few flaws that really popped out at me. One was :"He had several other houses around the west coast, all based around the Big Apple, and it would take the hunters years to find him"...The Big Apple is East Coast... LOL!Still, I enjoyed reading it, I just thought it needed to be developed more with some depth and character details.