Review: Lame
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 7, 2012
While I give the author credit for trying to come up with something in a plane, and while the concept has some potential, the delivery thereof was rather lame.  The character description lacked anything to keep the image within the mind of the reader with the exception of their hair color.  The very beginning references something completely different than what actually happens and there is no segway between the beginning, the meat of the sex, and the end.  While the sex may appear hot, the rest of it just wasn't crafted very well.