Review: Had potenial!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2014
But... all the CAPITALS and exclamation marks!!!!! were so distracting from getting into the story. This author (I feel) can write and has potential but by highlighting the capitals etc throughout her story she made Mr R seems overly aggressive and then he would do a complete flip which didn't make sense.Ms Kohl read (if you haven't) Cherise Sinclair's "Club Shadowlands series" she writes perfect alpha's and control's her hero's with extreme precision and intelligence.