Review: Good Writing-Bad Comic Book!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 5, 2012
This guy can write-make no mistake.  Even the initial plot line was good.  The problem arises when he delves into his fantasies of spys popping out of nowhere to rescue the captured good guys(rangers or raiders along with a nurse), and then the innocent little nurse just happens to have flown a biplane, climbs into a german 4 engine heavy bomber, and not only flies them back near their home base, but pauses after takeoff to also bomb all the other german bombers at the airbase where they stole the plane.  The romantic interludes are stupid too, as well as scenes with the hero meeting all the commanding generals at each stop, where they patiently explain to him(a lieutenant/captain/and major) their war plans.  If he would just have stuck with his good characters, good combat action, and a tight story, this thing would be a Robert Conroy level alternate history:  This guy REALLY needs an EDITOR!  Please keep your ridiculous fantasies/wet dreams/hero worship to yourself, and use the gift you have to write a serious alternate history.  You Can Do This!