Review: Good, but felt a bit precious
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 1, 2012
This author has a lot of promise.  She has obviously put a lot of thought into the characters and the plot of the story.  I appreciated some of the observation that went into it, but overall the story felt overworked and precious in a Creative Writing class kind of way.The best way I can put it is that I really felt as if I was reading a short story that was the result of lots of work by the author . . . I didn't that smooth flow and immediacy that I like to feel in fiction.