Review: Could net finish!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
There might have been a good story in this mess, and believe me, I tried to find it. I mostly skimmed the text but finally gave up at the half-way point. The story jumps around too much, it's from multiple points of view and there is WAY too much back story. Good stories are about conflict and moving the story forward. Back story stops the action cold. I skipped it. Just not a good read.