Review: could use a revision
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 15, 2013
I have mixed feelings about this M/M erotic high fantasy novella.Setting and characters are interesting, plot is not new but it is consistent and sensible and I loved the idea of mixing unabashed erotica with traditional fantasy (even fantasy authors casting gay characters usually skip on the sex to concentrate on action).On the other hand, beside typos that sometimes disrupts reading, writing is uneven: there are some good paragraphs but sex scenes tend to be flowery and overdescriptive while dialogues and inner monologues often fail to deliver the complex psychological details implied by the author.It is a pleasant read but a revision could make it so much better.