Review: Good story, but needs editing badly!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 7, 2013
What a shame that Melissa Jones didn't have anyone read this before publication. The story had fine elements, but the lack of continuity in dialogue, lack of proper grammar and punctuation was unforgivable. I would love to read the next book, but couldn't endure the pain. This should have been edited and reduced to half-length.