Review: Crap that I've just slogged through so you don't have to...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 27, 2014
Although there are some surprises and there are the bones of a good story, the author mucks it up brilliantly with confusion between characters, conversations, aliases, motives which I suspect he thinks creates 'mystery'....There are situations in which there is not enough 'belief suspension' in the world to get you through--the car crash/chase through the coastal woods, the survival of people on the boat that is attacked.  How about that battle aboard the helicopter--and how does one character, hands bound behind his back and with his seatbelt just re-secured by the bad guys--manage to fall OFF the freakin' bench, giving the hero a chance to attack???????Oh yeah, the author needs to lay off the double negatives.  When you're re-reading sentences that are supposedly straightforward again and again to try to make sense of them, it doesn't help to clog your prose with double negatives.  It just further infuriates.I understand that the author has worked hard on creating this 'piece of work' (and piece of work it is), but I advise you to take a chance on reading something else..