Review: good story line that needs a bit of shaping up
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 16, 2014
I can't really decide whether this is a 3 or 4 star book and unfortunately Amazon won't give halves, which would be convenient for us readers and reviewers.  The idea of there being a Great Wolf that has been looked for over the last hundred years is intriguing to me.  I like the werewolf and vampire books, but it was hard to mix the two together in this book.-Why are there no other females in a pack like this?  There is Pru and Dolly until Shaynie comes.-Why was Shaynie sent to this pack exactly?  They never really give a definite reason and we know little to none about her past. She seems like just a random extra that was thrown in to annoy Pru.-Speaking of Pru, she has all of these dreams and intuitions but we don't exactly see them coming to fruition.  Like how she right off says she knows she will kill Parker soon, but through the whole book that never happens.  Then she knows something is up with Shaynie, but nothing comes of that either.-What does Arien want with Pru?  We know he wants to know who the Great Wolf is and all, but it sure seems like he has a thing for Pru, and somehow Allie finds out.  How exactly did she find out?-Josie just disappears off of the face of the planet.  Who knows what happens to her?I just have so many questions about the characters in the book!  You don't want to leave an awful amount of questions and open ends even in a series.  It makes it hard to read and a little on the unbelievable side.  This novel just needs some cleanup work.  The idea is great and it could be a five star book easily with some work!One more strange question: Is it the Legacy of Kilkenny Series, The Legacy Series, or the Legacy of Kilkenny Saga?  I was confused on that point after looking at the other books in the series.