Review: Ok writing but lasks substance and proper formatting
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2012
Although the story is an in your face action packed tale, it is riddled with format and grammatical errors. First the story. Well the cover pretty much describes what you'll find within, but the author goes further and creates a story that explores the sexuality of coworkers. This is done in a no nonsense manner with the story being very aggressive and very sexual.Most of the story is pretty unrealistic and the dialogue is very juvenile and unbelievable, but if your in the market for a quick and aggressive tale then this is your book. As far as the typo's, format errors, and grammatical mistakes - yes they take away from the overall product, and yes it makes the presentation worse, but you probably already figured that the book could use refinement by its cover.I suggest that the author makes an attempt to fix the formatting and grammar errors, puts a little more effort into the dialogue and presents the story in a little more of a realistic style. With that done I'm sure both the book and the author will be better for it. I wish him luck in the future.