Review: very vulgar
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 25, 2014
Sorry but this started out interesting until your choice of wording talking about the human anatomy is gross!  Why do you writers have to tarnish lovemaking this way?  I heard enough of what I read, chapter five was the clincher when you used foul words to talk about the male organ and worse when you used an even more foul word expressing making love.... What happened to imagination and good clean words?  I will not read your books again!