Review: A lot of potential
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2012
This VERY short story was offered free recently and is set to be one of a series (Death Walks Through). The idea of a series of stories linked by a character who fascinates us all (Death) is a great one and has a lot of potential. This story, short as it was, had a few punctuation errors and changed tense in one sentence. It could have done with a little more work before release. I would be interested in seeing how the series evolves and would like to see it as a single book rather than very short titles of just a few pages.