Review: Dissapointing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 28, 2013
Pedestrian writing. Muddled progression. The guys were engaging as individuals and their mutual attraction was believable but something was missing. The author didn't do a good enough job convincing me these guys could stay together forever, which, let's face it, is what we're looking for in a romance novel. The plot about the warehouse and Uncle Harrison was disjointed, and worse, a bit of a snore. Plus, Logan's blue collar grammar was distracting because it was so clumsily written.I give it a three (two and a half if I could) because some of the other characters, Dabb, in particular, were colorful and because  the protagonists' falling in love touched me but overall a wasted opportunity. I really wanted to like this book.