Review: Mediocre story, characters that are not captivating
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 2, 2011
I got the sample because I wanted to see if the writing was as bad as one reviewer said before I bought it.  It didn't seem horrible and we get to see the heroine make her escape.  Intriguing enough. I bought to whole book.Almost immediately the story falls off a cliff.  The heroine seems completely willing to fall for two guys (she's in love within 2 days of meeting them) without any hesitation.  When they start telling her they "won't take no for an answer," I kept thinking she'd panic because they were controlling.  But she just went along.  She went for strong and interesting in the first ten pages to bland and compliant for the rest of the book.The heroes were fine.  They didn't make me sigh or get excited.  They were...fine.Finally, the formating on the book drove me insane.  Long, long paragraphs that tells me the author doesn't know when to break for a thought.  And either the formating is bad or someone doesn't know how to properly separate quotes by different speakers. I spent time going "wait, who said...? oh, that's not right."  Irritating.Probably won't be getting any more in this series.