Review: Did enjoy
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 8, 2014
I liked this story, but it needed to go deeper with character development and the storyline as well.The main characters had little conversation -- the heroine had been advised by her father not to be alone with her employer.  So, how is it they fell in love?  He was good looking and she was passable in looks.  She was kind hearted and he wasn't as stern as he originally seemed.Then there was the scene of her changing clothes while he was in the room -- even if she was behind a screen, it wouldn't be something a proper young woman would have done.The story had a Jane Eyre flavor but it wasn't enough.