Review: Another short story, not worthy of being published as an ebook.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 2, 2014
This "ebook" is merely a few pages of writing hoping to find someone willing to pay for it who doesn't check the length. This is written by a good author, but this particular item, while currently free, does not warrant being upgraded to an actual purchase for cash. Please expand this and make it a full length novella or book. Personally, the first person doesn't work in this for me. Think about a total rewrite of this concept as an erotic novel in thirds person.