Review: What a delightful change from the other Submissive/Dominant books
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 4, 2014
Thank goodness! Finally a heroine in one of these tales that isn't a virginal, clutzy child!  And finally a guy who isn't suffering from borderline personality disorder. It was great to read a book about a Submissive who was only submissive to the guy she wanted and a Dom who only dominated when appropriate and who obviously adored his partner.Had there been more to the plot, I would have given this book 5 stars.  Yes, author, you need to flesh out your plots a little more. I liked these characters and I would have liked to have known more about them. More important, I want to know more about the world you are creating here. Too much description is boring, but you need some to help the reader visualize your world ESPECIALLY in a fantasy world. And I would have liked another sex scene in which the partners were more comfortable with one another to see what they could get up to.  Something "creative."