Review: Sloppily written. Not as good as the first one.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 5, 2013
Tons of spelling errors.  Many sentences didn't even make sense.  There are lots of mistakes like, using the word "they" when it should "there" in contractions almost EVERY time!  Very sloppy.  Gives the impression that the author was just trying to get something out there and didn't really care about quality.  I don't know about anyone else but these kinds of things really bother me.  It takes me out of the story when I have to stop and re-read just to figure out what the author meant to write.  A big disappointment since I enjoyed the first one so much. I doubt I'll spend money for the third one now.