Review: Had great potential but the execution left much to be desired
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 20, 2013
The idea behind the story wasn't new, but it was anything but boring. Their animalistic need for one another drove the first half of the story, and it was hot! The story was pretty good, up until the 48% mark then it kind of went downhill from there. The plot remained decent with it's fair share of legends and mythology, and the main characters had no idea what was even happening to them. The intensity of their chemistry/connection was severely diminished with their circumstances that were keeping them apart until the last few pages of the story. There were a few dream sequences in which they had sex. I suppose their initial meeting left enough of an impression on me to care enough about them to hope they'd find their way back to one another, but the flow of the story was choppy in some places that I just wanted to get to the end.The first half of the story was easy to follow, but after the halfway point, all I had were questions and I was left confused over other bits of information that I couldn't even concentrate on the story anymore. I hope the author considers getting a little help from beta readers or an editor before releasing the next book, if there is going to be a sequel. This story had potential, but there were just too many problems with the execution to simply overlook them. For example:You can find my full and extensive review on Goodreads: [...]