Review: Repeat Repeat Repeat!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2013
This book started off strong but, fell off quickly after the first two pages. I started getting annoyed with how the female repeated herself in her thoughts. It was so redundant. "He just wants a one night stand but, I want more." After the first time you'd think the writer would see that we got the point but, no. It was mentioned in every other paragraph throughout the whole book. Then the dialogue between characters it was so unrealistic. Just more repeating themselves. After awhile I just skipped to the end. But, in the last chapter they were still having the same conversations. The female lead still mentioned in almost every paragraph involving her that she wanted more. I just stopped reading thinking ok we've beyond got the point that you want more then a one night stand give it a rest. Then the male lead, it was the same as her "I know she wants more but, I don't".  Then sex scenes, I can't call them love scenes because it was so crude. I like erotic but, I didn't find the scenes erotic at all just because you use the words p**** and c*** it doesn't make your writing erotic. It didn't make me feel heated at all. I would not recommend this book. However I do think the writer has talent she just needs more work on her skill. Over time I think she'll get better but, this wasn't very good.