Review: Good start to the Vicki Peterwald storyline.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2014
The Plus:  This was a good start to the Vicki Peterwald storyline.  It tracks Vicki's story from about the time of her brother's death until her return to High Chance following the "Voyage of Discovery."  It was interesting.  We get to see how she develops during the time spent under the tutelage of Admiral Kratz and occasional mentorship by Kris Longknife.  She's much more sexual than Kris Longknife, even bisexual, apparently.The Minus:  It's apparent that this story did not go through the usual editing process.  Be prepared for the mistakes (word usage/forms/missing words) prevalent throughout.  Minus one star.  I'm not sure I'm comfortable with the added sexual content. Though the discussion does tend to end at the nipples, there does seem to be a lot of nipple-centric content.  Minus another star.  (3 remaining).