Review: Undeveloped
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2014
There is a good idea here, but the author doesn't do a lot with it.  The story jumps from scene to scene, as if he's only interested in the thrills.  There's nothing wrong with that, but if you do that . . . well, you'd better provide some good thrills.  The ending was very predictable.The editing is awful.  This reads like a first draft.