Review: This book had an editor?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2012
Basically, this is a good story, but it is unfinished. The author is creative. The characters are likeable. And the action is enjoyable. It is easy to see why many people rate this book four or five stars. I would like to read the whole thing if the author ever rewrites it and cleans up the many errors. It reads like it is only a rough draft that was never fleshed out and tweaked. But I am sure the outline was well thought out. After getting through 59% of it, I was so distracted by the choppy writing and grammar and spelling errors that I decided to quit wasting my time.