Review: underdeveloped
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2013
Thomas and Anne were relatable characters. It was a short story that had a slow build-up that fizzled at the end. *Note to the editor: The repetitive spelling error of using "each other" as one word was distracting and thus ruined any small enjoyment I may have had for the latter part if the story.