Review: 1st Person POV short story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 11, 2013
3 out of 5 StarThis was a short paranormal romance written in the first person from Cassie's perspective.For me there was something missing from this story from the beginning. The story started out with Cassie and her mate, Darren meeting on the night of the full moon to change into their wolf forms and hunt. The way Cassie describes everything is almost emotionless, even cold. There is a disconnection, between the two main characters, at least from Cassie's perspective. They've been mates for at least two years but don't live together and don't really seem to show much affection for each other. For this reader I need to feel that there is some sort of connection between the characters to become invested in the story.While the story itself is good the lack of connection between the main characters takes away from the good parts. This is just this reviewers opinion of why this story didn't work for me. For others it may not take away from what they're reading. ~ Reviewed by ChrisThis review is the property of Chris and not be shared or copied unless by the Publisher or Author or unless credit is given.