Review: cute story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 20, 2013
I liked the interaction but toward the end I found myself editing the story to keep the flow going smoothly. I gave 4 stars for the story being adorable even though the grammar was slightly confusing. I tend to make notes in my kindle version of any typos, grammar, spelling or missing words. Adorable story and I love happy endings. Even though there was no real reaction of Mandy's "test" results from Kip, I'd think he'd have a more realistic (shock, surprise, elation, SOMEthing) reaction, but a "snort." I'm like WTH?! But oh well, the story was at an end and it seemed it was "hurried" to conclude.