Review: Brazen, and needs editing, but a good storyline when you sit down to read it!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2013
http://bookwormbridgette.blogspot.com/p/a-patriotic-whore-by-matthew-kadish.htmlI received this book as a review request from the author and at first glance I thought to myself "What a horrid name for a book" but I gave it a chance anyways, considering that age old saying not to judge a book by its cover... Let me get this part out of the way however, this book is not for the faint at heart. This is most assuredly about SEX. While the scenes could use some more elaboration and could have been made to be more explored in details, there WERE indeed quite a few sex scenes. Enough to make it an NC17 book.  At first, I was very unsure about the dialog for this book due to many new age IM and Texting shorthand and quite a few teenage familiar acronyms including but not limited to "ZOMG" and "O rly?". I really had a hard time really digging into this book and being able to take the time to enjoy this book due to the shorthand used. I feel that not only did it dumb down Blaire, but also made the author's writing style a bit downrated by default. I was able to understand most of the book's shorthand however, it felt like this was more of a story that was being told via text message or maybe more like you were reading a journal of someone in Blaire's position. However, with the psychology taking you in circles, if you did not pay close attention, one could get lost easily.  There is potential and the story-line is very promising, but I would consider using a different editor!