Review: Good story, but ending needs work (so does editing)
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2012
Entertaining story.  Hooks the reader pretty quickly.  Moves along at a fairly good clip.  However, the hero in the story acted in a way I didn't like and had I been the heroine, he would have been on probation.  After the apex, I'm used to the wrap-up usually being an epilogue or just a short last chapter.  This author takes several chapters to wrap up the story.  It's like sitting at an extra long red light with a cop on the corner.  It's a little frustrating.  Still, the story was good enough that I continued to book 3 of the series (which also had the same overlong wrap up problem).  The editing on all of these stories was horrendous, though.  Grammar problems and horrid hyphenation issues like pee-red and cat-ching, and hyphenated single syllable words which should NEVER be hyphenated (at least in the kindle version).AMAZON, if you need editors for your kindle books, I'm looking for work.