Review: A great menage age play story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 08 13, 2013
Lately I have been reading age play stories.  Most of them are poorly written or so short you have no story or character development! This is a delicious, 245 page read about a bisexual glamazon named Liz, and her two stunningly handsome lovers, Charlie and Josh (who also happen to be brothers) She is dominant with the younger brother, Josh, while she is only occasionally submissive to the older brother, Charlie, but he won't let her top him ever.  They have all known each other since their were in grade school and have a happy, consensual sexual relationship. Charlie loves to play "Daddy" and had had a " little girl" named Lucy living with them for 2 years.  Unfortunately, she recently left Charlie and he was feeling very depressed and hurt telling Liz the "Daddy" role was all done for him.  That was until the Liz brought Sophie home. Sophie is a petite beauty (still a virgin) who delivers mail in the lawyers office where Liz works. She just turned 18 and her life is a complete mess.  Liz is taken with Sophie and tries to help her any way she can, but Sophie is embarrassed by the charity and brushes Liz off.  Sophie hits rock bottom when she has no place to live so she goes out on the streets.  She is picked up by the police while trying to prostitute herself and jailed.  Lucky for her she still had Liz's business card with her.  She reluctantly calls Liz for help.  Next thing Sophie knows she is moving into Liz and Charlie's beautiful home.  What is wonderful about this story is it comes across as very realistic.  Right from the start Liz is up front with Sophie telling her she wants Sophie as her lover and if Sophie feels comfortable, she can also have a relationship with Charlie ("Daddy") and or Josh (Uncle Josh).  Liz also wants to have Sophie be her "little girl".  Sophie's age regression progresses slowly and naturally. Nothing is forced on her and all the "grown ups" only want her to feel safe, secure and loved and this is a recurring theme throughout the entire story. You really feel the love all of them have for Sophie which makes her blossom. At first she does not like Charlie, an ex pro football player who is an announcer for ESPN.  He is mean to her (in her eyes) so she is a complete brat to him.  Of course he is so smitten with her he is right back to fantasizing about having her as his "little girl".  Josh is a smoking hot, dirty mouthed OBGYN who lives in the pool house. His scenes with Sophie are real panty soakers. I love his devil-may-care attitude. As the story unfolds, Liz's character is not as much of a focus as the relationships between Charlie and Sophie and Josh and Sophie unfold.  The biggest worry on Liz, Charlie and Josh's minds is when should precious little Sophie lose her virginity?  And who should have the honor?  Josh calls "shotgun" almost as soon as Sophie arrives.  But who will it be?  When the story ends you feel satisfied and not like you've been left hanging.  A second book would be fantastic.  I would love to see what Liz does to Josh in "the Dungeon".  All we know is that she dominates him, but the author never writes their story into this book.  I would love to see Sophie get double teamed by Charlie and Josh, and definitely Sophie getting taken in her back door by Josh and Charlie AND a nice, kinky, age play scene with "Mommy", "Daddy" and their "little girl", oh and Josh and Sophie playing "doctor"!  The only thing I didn't like about this book was the title and the cover art - it just didn't fit this story.