Review: Editor needed STAT!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 9, 2013
Great story premise, good characters...but the writer evidently didn't even check grammar OR word usage during the process. "On slot" does NOT mean the same thing as onslaught. To and too, due and do, bear and bare, where and were and wear...the editing suffered all thru the book, not just at the beginning. One character had a name change spelling in the last 2 chapters. Apostrophes and commas were inserted, or not, where it could make reading continuity hard to achieve. Random words stuck in passages that had nothing to do with the sentence they landed in. This is all stuff a proofreader would have caught.