Review: More character development
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 10, 2014
I didn't love this book and I didn't hate this book. What I liked was the twist and turns of the story and that there was story. I read this as a novel rather than individual books because that just frustrates me. At the end all the questions were answered as to the plot twists however there were some areas that I feel need further writing on. It just doesn't seem completed. So if there is another novel coming out hopefully it will be just one book rather than several 20 something pages.What I didn't really care for was Nicole. I couldn't get her going from really good girl from good family to jumping in to a MC club and experiencing what she did so suddenly. It was a little too much, too soon. Honestly, if I was on a Motorcycle with someone I just met and someone was shooting at me - um - not seeing that guy again. It was a little far out for a character to change so quickly. I think that should have been developed a little more. There are also points in the book where she has to make some more and ethical decisions and I'm pretty shocked that a girl with her background makes the decisions she does.Anyway, the book has a good story, some humor, lots of MC club activity and over all it was good but if the realtionship between Nicole and Jase went a little slower and was more developed I would have liked it much better.Again ... some things seem unfinished so I'm wondering if there will be another book.