Review: Great formula
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 2, 2013
I think the very first thing you notice when you are reading is this is meant to be two writers? it fused together as one. if there were two people involved at any point i couldnt tell. impressive.the human element is great in this one as you see two characters in the story who come across as very real. there are moments you will identify with them and you can spot those elements that are used by the writers as means for you, the reader, to connect with them. ie ben and jerry's ice cream, the breakfast club. who doesnt love those things? it works because it helps draw you in and for a short story that is what important and that is what makes it work.then the story plunges into the sex. full on, pretty fast and wholly descriptive without any tacky cliche or moments pause. it is confidently written and moves with a quick pulse to it right up until the end. if you want erotica or just a great story then i would say you have found the one you are looking for.