Review: Shallow
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 7, 2013
The synopsis has more depth than the actual story. I feel like this could have  been wonderful but it just felt like the author wrote down a few ideas for a story, a plot, a few conversations, the outline, the characters, and before she could put in details to make it more than just thoughts on paper, to make it a story, she published it. I get that it's supposed to be a short story but that doesn't mean there doesn't need to be character development, detail or depth. I just felt like it was rushed and unfinished. It would have been four or five stars had the author taken time and put more effort into her story.