Review: A Likable Story, but.......
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 18, 2014
This was a personal read for me and won't be reviewing on my blog. To make this short and sweet, this book would have been MUCH better if not for the excessive amount of sexual terms used. They were "out of control". I wasn't sure if Maggie was in love with GianMarco or his d**k. At one point, she called his member a donkey dong O_O...donkey dong? A bit much if you ask me. And then, when is a man's semen is ever termed "spunk"....spunk? what is that?I like Eve Vaughn's work, I really do. But if the rest of this series is even close to what I just finished reading...then I'll have to pass. And that is a shame because the Grimaldi brothers seems like it has such potential. Don't get me wrong, I love my erotic reads BUT there's a difference between erotica and porn. And I kinda felt the scenes and terming here bordered that. I don't want to read porn...honestly I'd rather watch it.So three heels for me. Because the story itself is well written and the plot overall for the series although its quite predictable is really good. Plus, I like her take on Vampires here. They're not cold dead creatures who can't walk in the day. Her vamps actually have beating hearts, warm skin, can eat regular food although they do drink blood and of course they walk in the light of day. Looks like the series is also getting cover updates and possibly some re-editing too.Take away the ridiculous sexual overtures and she could have a winner on her hands.