Review: It just wasn't for me--too many issues I couldn't overlook
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 30, 2013
This story needs an editor in a BAD way, and less stress on the redneck story line in a book titled as "Two Weeks with a SEAL" would have been nice as well. I'm not saying it should have been eliminated altogether, just weeded down to the relevant information. The author also not only used words improperly, but there were whole sections that could have been cut that had no clear tie to the plot line.  I guess a two person narrative droned on for me when the POV characters kept splintering into multiple directions at once. I am not saying there is no hope for this author, but IMHO this book was not completely put through multiple editing processes essential in taking a rough draft to published piece.I am by no means saying that the writer should hang up their keyboard and never publish again, I think there is potential here, but an editor is an absolute necessity to a great finished product.