Review: Someone please help the author polish this gem
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 18, 2012
There is a great story hidden in here, but I can't stand "there" when it should be "their." EVERY.SINGLE.TIME.Or ... there is one woman. But ... EVERY.TIME. it says "women."Aside from that, there are a lot of grammatical and punctuation errors.Then you find the errors in "facts." In one chapter it has been five years. In the next it has been nearly a decade. I'm only a quarter of the way through the book and I really want to enjoy it. I think the story is a good one, but I don't know how much longer I can take the errors.The drawback of self-publishing is self-editing. Mike Smith has something here. It's like he found a gem, but he needs someone to help him make it valuable. A good editor could turn this into something awesome.