Review: Cut too short
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
★★★★ Private Party, or when I hired my best-friend stripper for my husband by Polly J AdamsThis is an erotica short coming in around 10 pages. This is an Amazon freebie.It upsets Mel that her husband missed his bachelor party before their wedding. So she plans a surprise for him. But who will enjoy the show more, the husband or the wife?This could defiantly be longer. It leads up to a new scene, then just cuts off.