Review: Paranormal romance short story: fabulous but with discontinuities
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2014
This is a short story, so any plot summary gives away too much. Suffice it to say that the setting is modern day, he and she both have a few special gifts, and chance brings them together. Her personality is so fun that reading about her is a delight. The romance is hot and convincing; and the paranormal elements hold your interest.There are unfortunately some glaring writing errors toward the end , where it reads like the author accidentally deleted a few pages, and the ending is ridiculously abrupt even for a short story. I would be more upset, except that the beginning of the story is pretty fun.