Review: Needs help
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2014
The character development was lacking and inconsistent. Both leads were self-centered and naive about their own roll as a liar and the effect their lies had on a potential relationship between them. 'Clueless, they're both clueless!' came to my mind while reading several scenes, and at one point I wanted to reach through the screen and slap them both. Needs more depth, and an experienced copy/content editor, and could be a good book.Also, the copy I was reading through my Kindle Cloud Reader had formatting issues throughout. The text kept going from normal to xl. Made me feel... O.o