Review: I tried
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 2, 2013
As another reviewer mentioned there could be more fleshing out of the story and the ending was too quick. The 'sweet and sexy' description made me want to read it but sorry, just no. This is written by a woman surely she knows what women want to read? The anal play was completely unnecessary and a big turn off. Other reviewers said there wasn't a condom so perhaps there has been a rewrite as there is now. I know it's a fantasy but it would have been better if they weren't both so perfectly beautiful and instantly attracted to each other. The story also suffers from disappearing food (how many times can someone make lunch?) and a disappearing (then reappearing) table.