Review: Some freebies are good freebies and some are not
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2012
This book was definately a not good freebie.  My first thought as I was reading this book was that English was not the authors' first language.  The dialogue was sooooo stilted and then I realized it was so stilted because no one used contractions in their speaking.  We live in a world of speeding things up and contractions speed up speech....I will instead of I'll, can not instead of can't just makes the dialogue not authentic.  Considering the age and history of the H/H this book needed a faster pace.  The fact the Kip (or rather as one typo referred to him as CRIP...what a hoot) was still afraid of his mother opens up a whole can of Oedipal  issues.  I will forget this book in a couple of hours.....I have gotten many freebies and would have paid for them....this one cost me nothing but time wasted.