Review: A let down
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 17, 2012
A pity, a let down. Come on Williams, you had the makings of a great story in your hands and... you dropped it. First I'll talk about what it does well.The plot had a nice idea, but was done poorly. Characters weren't developed much more. Um... Kelcer was developed more, it was about two people, one good (Flare) and one bad (Zalustus). Also there were a lot more things that Flare needed, a helmet, armor, and a shield. The Church was also developed more, with a lot more secrets, and more darkness.Now, the bad.Mainly, the Plot. I've mentioned before that parts of Williams writing is forgettable, but this is much worse. Whenever Flare is not on screen (figuratively) its just boring. Those moments when you have Heather's group, or Derek's could be so much better. He does it sometimes, with Flare, but with no one else. I may give up the series if the next book is like this, sad but true.Flare is officially restoring the Dragon Order and has learned from a master Sorcerer, only to be captured.Well overall its good, or at least when Flare is being discussed, and has some interesting parts, just messes up the rest, it could be better. Until next time.