Review: Great story!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 25, 2012
Loved the story line.  The characters were pretty well developed. The scenery, incidental characters, and ranch life were well described. My only complaint is that the editing needed more work.I didn't notice misspellings, but there were punctuation errors and run on sentences.  However, the story was enticing enough to overlook those to see what would happen next.