Review: Lots of potential -- falls a bit flat
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 14, 2012
Reading this short story made me feel like I was reading the background notes an author makes to do their character background and world-building. It was interesting but I never felt like I got to know the main character. Throughout the centuries that this story entails, there is no depth to the MC. If this was to give the reader a sense of the MC's loneliness, then it doesn't really work. It just made for a flat main character.I received this for free through an offer from the author on a Goodreads forum.