Review: OK story just needs work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2014
This book was just OK.  Not the best that i have read but not the worst either.  A few issues I had were with Daniel, a office worker from England who had little to no experience with guns and became a crack shot once he found guns.  Another issue was the speech.  When Daniel for someone else from England talked they used words and dialect common to England.  Yet when Rob or some of the other American's talked they did the exact same thing.  Referring to U.S. military trucks as a Lorry is great if your from England but found it distracting that the author had American's referring to it also as a Lorry.  Or American characters pronouncing airplane as aeroplane.  Just little things like that I found distracting and disrupted the flow of the story sometimes.