Review: Under his command
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 12, 2013
3.5 StarsJamie is a firefighter, who was use to being a Dom. After a one night stand leads to an unplanned pregnancy he does the right thing and Marries Erica. After 4 years Erica asks Jamie to move out and stops allowing their daughter to visit her in laws. And files for divorce.When an earthquake takes place and they almost lose their daughter it causes them to rethink things. And they agree to try to save their marriage. They take a long overdue honeymoon to Hawaii. Leaving Chloe with Jamie's parents. Some of the things that happen while on this honeymoon are amazing. The fire play was truly amazing!There were parts of this book I truly loved. The fact that they saved their marriage and finally started communicating with each other. That Erica finally made up with her in laws. That they got pass their issues in the bedroom.Having said that there were some major issues that had they been addressed I would have given a better rating. They had been married 5 years total.  4 together and never talked at all about some of the issues. Why was Dani trapped in a building with there daughter? My biggest 2 problems chapter 1 says it is two weeks after 2014 earthquake, what happened to 2013? And the biggest issue. When Jamie and Erica first met for their hookup she said her name was Rickie, when her real name was Erica. I kind of understand if you are into one night stands not wanting to give your real name ... sort of. I can understand even going by Rickie later, but the author jumped from Rickie to Erica throughout the book so much she made it feel like it was the story of one man and two women. It really threw the story off track which is a shame. Because the scene in Hawaii for the sunrise, was worthy of 10 stars!