Review: Great story; bad editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2013
I have seen this book on my recommended books but passed it by until now.  I'm glad I finally got it.  If you liked the Kindred series, you'll like this book.  I love that the heroine is strong but not your typical "stick thin, kick ass" female.  She is a regular woman with children trying to do the best she can.  I also love that Grim, although a strong male, has his insecurities.  They have to deal with the same issues any new couple do plus some.  I hope the author continues this series as I'd love to read more about some of the characters introduced.  Having said all THAT, I agree with other reviewers that some serious editing and revising need to be done- change of tense, lack of proper punctuation and wrong word usage-could have sunk this book. As an elementary school teacher, I would have been all over my students for some of the mistakes in this book. I find that a lot in ebooks. (Just so you know, I had to edit my review and found 3 word usage errors in this small post. THAT's why editors are needed.  :)  )