Review: Writing needs work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 4, 2014
The story is good. The writing...not so much. It is very choppy and EXTREMELY descriptive. Don't give me every step the guy took to open the safe. Just say "he opened the safe." I'm sure the length of this book could be cut in half by removing a bunch of unnecessary sentences. At about 25% there was a sex scene. Quite possibly the worst sex scene I've ever read. The only reason for it was to introduce new characters. These characters could have been introduced in another way.I didn't feel any chemistry between the main characters. I considered not finishing the book, but I wanted to know who the bad guy was. I had my suspicions early on, and I was right. I guess I didn't need to finish it. Apparently this is part of a series. I will not be continuing on.