Review: Wow, this had to be Jilian's first book.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 6, 2013
Seriously, there are so many errors in this story, you find yourself dizzy trying to keep things straight.List of errors:1. Lana calls her friends mom to pick them up from a party, and mom says she is sending her friends brother, who she has never met. But Uncle Deacon shows up instead. LOL!2. The only indication that Deacon is a billionaire is the car he drives. No insight into his background is given at all, so where do we get the billionaire thing from?3. The story switches from first person to third person, then back again.4. Grammar errors all over the place. Some sentences that were incomplete or repeated themselves. Or repeated themselves. LOL!5. I can only assume that Lana was lying about owning a big dog, because it never surfaced in the story.Otherwise, this book was decent in the way of being a time vampire, and was over far too quickly. But it's free, and a short story to boot, so I couldn't expect much.Warning! Don't get your hope up. Make it fun, and play 'Spot the errors' while you read. It makes it far more entertaining.