Review: Could be so much better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2013
This book was really long and I think the descriptions and jumping back and forth took away from the story. The book is good but it could have been so much better if certain parts could be deleted. I got tired of all of the back and forth between Brandon and Natalie, it was just unnecessary and it got confusing after a while. There were sentences in this story that lasted for an entire paragraph. Certain parts read like a poem and other parts were in 1st person. It's sad because a good story line is there but you just have to find it between way too many pages.