Review: Fair story smothered in poor editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 6, 2014
I can't believe that only one reviewer (so far) mentioned the large number of errors and editing fails. I marked 47. Not the least of these was the use of "taunt" instead of "taut" three times. Many of the errors were just careless writing/editing with word endings missing, or added where not needed "he realized his mistaken.", "his misplace anger";  Additional words, "Then I will then bandage...". "They would sooner KNAWEL off their own paw..." "God must SURLY love me..."In addition, the similarities among the names of the women was confusing. Bella, Ella, Eva, Eleanor, Esme, Emma,I could go on but I refuse to. These fails detracted too much from this story.