Review: Story okay, needs editing and research
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 4, 2013
The story was different and had action and romance. However, for such a short book, there were way too many errors with homophones, word usage and formatting than there should have been. Others have already mentioned the glaring errors so I'll touch on the fact tornadoes develop in hours not days. Either the timing was written incorrectly in the story or the author is unaware of what exactly happens during a tornado.