Review: Pretty good but needs a LOT of editing !!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 16, 2013
In the "thank you" at the end of the book the author mentions this book as being an "early draft".  I can't think of a quicker way to kill a career!  A draft should never be released. Even if the book is free, which it was. I did think it was a pretty good story.  There was not a lot of swearing, if any. I honestly do not remember. But all the words left in or missing was distracting. The same for punctuation. If we had been told from the beginning this was a draft, maybe I would see it differently. Not sure I if will try this author again.