Review: A very interesting and imaginative short story!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 12, 2013
This story reminded me of something from "The Outer Limits" or "Twilight Zone," both shows that I thoroughly enjoy, by the way.  But when I'm reading something as opposed to watching something, I need more.  I felt that this was way too short for my liking...as if my thirst had not been fully quenched.  Now mind you, I do recognize the author's amazing talent and the fact that the story was very compelling.  Perhaps that's precisely why it didn't quite work as a short story.  It left me wanting more....I can understand and appreciate the way it ended (sorry, no spoilers from me!) but I think this would have been better written as a novella, if not a novel.  Nevertheless, as is, it's an entertaining and enjoyable story that's worth reading.  I will definitely read more from this author.