Review: should have stopped while the getting was good
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 6, 2013
Cute story, but did not come close to 'the cold king'. Also, someone should have proofed this. If someone claims to have already done so, they should apologise for the crappy job they did, and try harder next time. It is disrespectful to the readers.I'm usually not pissy, but this book could have been so much better. The little faults it had were exacerbated by the repeated broken syntax and sloppy errors in spelling, etc, (which proper proofing would have fixed).I am not happy. Try again, please.