Review: Very weak ending
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 18, 2011
This story was creepy and odd, with a very weak ending.  I don't know what I can really say about it without giving anything away.  If you can get it free or borrow it from someone it might be worth the read, but I wouldn't pay for it.  The only reason this got 2 stars instead of 1 is the story does have some potential in it.  If the author would take some time and work a better ending, along with fixing the grammatical and spelling errors that inevitably come with a free book, this could be a decent read.