Review: some nice moments, but not much depth
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 20, 2013
I really liked the bakery setting and the set up of the main character.  Her back story of being from a loving responsible family that set her up for success in life was a refreshing twist on the typical romance heroine who is doing the best she can after surviving multiple hardships of life.  The main story line was fun, but as I read I kept hoping for more definition for the characters and greater depth to the responses they had to the various happening. I think fewer scenes with greater development would make for more exciting reading.  I felt like the resolutions to the various situations and problems were wrapped up too quickly and trivialized by the author.  Even in a fantasy it is important for the reader to be able to make a connection and identify with the characters emotions.