Review: Very odd detached writing style
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 15, 2014
Luck and honesty get Karin an internship at Emperor Technologies where her plan is to stick it out for six months to gain a reference while there she comes into contact with CEO and billionaire wiz kid and playboy Ryan Wilde, Ryan has been receiving some bad press lately revolving around models and sex, pressure is being applied to have him removed as CEO. As explained in the blurb a sham marriage deal is struck at the end of the allotted time the marriage will be annulled and Karin will receive ten million dollars.I really liked this story, the characters and everything apart from the strange almost robotic writing style, you have to read it to fully appreciate what I mean but throughout the book Karin is referred to as 'the intern' 'the engaged intern' 'the young girl' 'the young woman' 'Ryan's wife' 'the young wife' and Ryan as 'the CEO' 'the young man' 'the young CEO' 'the young billionaire' 'the youthful billionaire' etc it makes it very difficult to read and become involved with the characters.I'm not giving anything away since we know from the blurb they get married but this is from their honeymoon sex scene "Ryan builds an intensity that the young woman has never felt in her life" I can't for the life of me understand why it's written this way, it's Karin his new wife and this is their first intimate scene why refer to her as the young woman it's so remote and impersonal, this happens throughout the book it's bizarre, if it wasn't for this and the fact that it needs proof reading this could be a very good book.