Review: If this is just erotica then your character descriptions went into too much detail.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 17, 2014
If this was supposed to be erotic romance (which I believe was your intention) then you didn't give enough details.  I don't think the main characters' relationship was sufficiently rooted.  Nothing new about friends becoming lovers.  You just don't give us enough story to see it for ourselves.This is their first meeting offline.  I would have liked to know more about the two of them specifically.  The author described how they met and the circumstances they had in common.  The reader has no evidence of them being friends except because she says so.  It would have been nice to know they were either both nervous about meeting or they had no idea what would hit them when they met.  Instead we get a home run out of the gate.  Not enough story to win the game.The reason I think you meant for this to be an erotic romance .... they do engage in sex a few times but the sex scenes consist of a few vague paragraphs.  If you had intended erotica no one would give a #:7$&@ about the characters except when they came up for air.I don't know if I care enough about the characters to be interested in what is going to happen next.I can't recommend this book.