Review: Too Short For Much of Anything
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2012
Writing had tons of mistakes in word usage.  No development of any characters at all.  I could not cheer for anyone here because I had no clue about them.  I've read short stories before but damn.  Precious words were wasted on what they decided to order for dinner and Ben & Jerry's ice cream.  Would have been o.k. if it had been free but certainly not worth the $.99.  Sizzle level was a medium with hot potential never fulfilled (and not in a good way).