Review: Breathe
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 12, 2013
This was a good story it had a beginning a middle and a conclusion. It wasn't confusing to me at all. You just have to open your mind up a little that's all. The only draw back is the grammar and sometimes it was off. This is why I am giving it a 3, otherwise it would have been a 5, sorry.