Review: Suspenseful erotica
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2013
This erotica story was more enjoyable for the suspense than for the erotic parts. The story was very well constructed and the characters convey the right emotions to the reader. The suspense was amazingly well built up. The ending was the only thing that made me feel "meh". It was too abrupt and open. Maybe leaving the story open for a continuation?