Review: Uh what?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2013
This was a quick read for me, and quite frankly very badly written.  It was so beyond believable.  This is an alpha jaguar, yet he defers to others what is right?  THAT makes no sense.  AND defers to one who was changed not born!!!!  I agree with other reviewers: I'm all for curvy women reads too, but these two were so beyond dumb!  Why is it that the first conversation wasn't about what he is?  Why the big freaking secret?  Communication before you jump into the sheets!  My other issue was her over obsession to being so old.  Shoot then I should feel ancient at my 37 years too?  Wow she makes it seem like she's 50!!!  Then there is her obsession with this guy being so young.  Uh, it wasn't outright said or refuted by him, but yes this is a spoiler: he's immortal. Yes there is a part in this that makes absolutely no sense at all: I may live forever, but I'm not immortal.  Celia Kyle, darling immortal is forever.  NOT meant to be said as immortal is not killable, think you may be confused what immortal means. DEFINITION to Immortal:  Living forever; never dying or decaying.  I know some tend to change what immortal means so they do have some way to die.  But in this story the history is so vague but the follow through on what is stated is poorly done.  They are either immortal or live very very long lives.  And just to have this out there: Like most seem to point out Immortals do have some way of death too.  So I'm just really confused and will argue about this age thing. I just felt there were so many contradicting words when it came to discussing how long Jag-weres live.  So really he's got more age on her which he states.  So many plot holes and there is an almost very young writer feel to this ebook.  Very rushed, very corny, and so beyond bland.  I really wish this could be re-written to flow better.  Such great potential and the added flavor of Paige's cats was great.  I wish I could give this more, but this story did not paint a story that was believable.  The characters were so very immature and should have had some better characterization.I hope the author understands, but I'd strongly advise re-writing this.  Some scenes were very very corny.  I really wish I could have liked this more.  Read at your own risk, I guess?