Review: Has A Few Issues But Not Bad
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 1, 2014
Several have noted that this book seems to have a lot of typos and miss used words.  Indeed that is true but it also isn't a bad story.  The author needs to find a good proof reader.  Then she needs to invest in having the book professionally formatted.  That perhaps is it's biggest flaw though not one that I used to review it's content.The formatting simply makes it less fun to read and really draws the eye to the errors in proofing.  I tried it on three different readers and still had the same problem.Additionally it should be noted that the author is Australian.  There is a difference in phrasing between US, Canadian, Australian and British Authors though all speak and write the same language.  It is the old people separated by a common language issue.  I had a hunch when I started reading this one and it was confirmed by tracking her down on the internet.  Though that does not account for all incorrect words used (wine for whine etc.) it does account for some of the phrasing issues.The author has promise and the concept of the book is interesting.  Hopefully she will continue to grow in her story telling and find a really good proof reader.  I would also advise her to get a better cover this one while kind of cute also kind of goes with the formatting.