Review: excellent story but needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 28, 2012
I really liked the story itself but the mispellings were a bit irritating to see. I'm not talking about the difference in UK and our type spellings of certain words but there were lot of regular spelling mistakes (like dialing was spelled dialling) and a few words were the incorrect one to use. Excellent story, just needs a major edit to make it an excellent book!