Review: The McKinnon stores
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2013
I read some of the other reviews and it seems the basic consensus is the same. . .good plot, good characters, bad grammar and spelling.  I couldn't tell whether the story took place in the 15th century or the 20th century.  Too much of the terminology was 20th century and that took away a lot from the 'historical' aspect of the genre.  I am currently into the 2nd book and the young daughter of Nic and Morgan responds to a comment with "Ya, think?" definitely not a good choice for the year 1499.  As one of the other reviewers said, "There are other, more time appropriate words to use."  Having said that, I do like the characters and the plot.  Get a good proofreader and someone with a good background in ancient Scottish history to keep things in balance and the author should have a great series going.