Review: HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 02 11, 2014
This mini-book has a lot of potential to be a good book. I usually do not read short stories but I love to give constructive criticism.1) Please make this a complete novel. Or a complete novella.2) i love the way the story is going. It flows well and it has a lot of situations going on in there between gambino and noelle. Between noelle and  Maizan. Between maizan and casimir and between casimir's crack addicted girlfriend.Overall good read.