Review: Just okay
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 25, 2014
I thought the story had great promise. I even enjoyed the preview of the book that is why when it went on sale for .99 I purchased it. But then I guess I lost the story. I felt like the authors were trying to build a relationship out of thin air. A few texts, 2 chance meetings and what??? There was a lot a drama for about a minute and then on to the next drama. I could actually tell that 2 authors contributed to the story because it didn't exactly flow well. I had to reread some parts to figure out where I was at. There were a few ex's thrown in, a night with a girl that never happened. Like I said drama but it wasn't complete. This story could potentially be 4 / 4.5 stars IF the book was edited better and the "drama" was built on and explained better. It could have been a beautiful love story but it fell short when the story didn't "finish" the things happening. Trace was a beautiful character but his "life story" that he "hid" was kinda just thrown in at the near end. Her secret was big but I felt like it could have been a great way for the story to go but no, a pay off and then a promise of a beat down and still the guy talks and then??? I'm not sure what exactly happened after that.  I always hate the payoff angle. Because 'you know' how it ends up. It's too expected and way over done in books these days. Although this story should have been a different type of love story; it ended up being the same. No true reason for the connection, insta attraction; we can't be together, we're together, we're not together and now THE END. Just predictable and unconvincing.