Review: Great concept
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2012
The positive: I like the concept behind the story and, with some editing, the rest of the stories in this series could be really good; in fact, with a little editing this story could be much better.I felt the characters were believable and well developed (mostly).  I liked how snotty Lord Dracula junior became when he transformed from street rat to royalty. I also liked the fact that these were "real" vampires that actually killed people with little remorse.The negative:  misspellings and errors in sentence structure definitely get in the way of the story.  There are simply too many of each.  Above I mentioned that the characters were well developed -- there are some instances that defy such a comment.  For instance, there is no way that Tracey Jensen goes from a dufus lab technician to secret-government researcher.  I am sorry, but that was a little too unbelievable.  Also, I find Ed's character unnecessary.  I also don't understand how Ed can be so angry about what happened to his partner to really not caring at the end of the story.I received this book for free from Amazon.