Review: Not really believable
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2013
I know you have to suspend disbelief with these stories but this one crossed the line I think.  It was just so rushed that the normal build of connection between people didn't happen so when they pledged eternal love after one night it just ruined the story for me.....sad because it is good quality writing and the story has enough depth that it could be drawn out a bit more i think