Review: Disappointed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 26, 2014
What started out as the ingredients of a good book quickly became disappointment. Their was no reason for the author not to tell everyone's history of who they were and how they came to be .... in that moment. Instead you read one or two chapters, and he goes back to BEFORE. He jumps around so much that it feels like an amateur is writing the story!! He didn't need to do the story that way to possibly have a good novel....and furthermore, very obvious the author is a first timer (and a man) when he is explaining the girl being pregnant of four months and she can feel the baby "kicking and moving all over" !!! REALLY??? Do your homework Kilroy, or at least a woman's opinion if you're gonna try to write descriptions of something you can't ever experience..