Review: Too good, too bad
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 5, 2014
This book has so much potential, and it's such a disappointment that it is done so badly!There is so much that is good about this book. The story is very successful. The characters are fantastic and excellently written. The sex is hot.But the execution is so awful!1. The whole thing is a punctuation nightmare.2. The grammar is terrible, even allowing for the biker jargon.3. There are serious continuity problems. Does he live in a penthouse or a single family home? Etc, etc, etc......4. Scene and point of view transitions are unbelievably confusing. The POV problems are especially frustrating because they would have been so interesting.5. Book one, to about page 300, was the best part of the characters and story. The story began to peter out after that.This is the most disappointing thing I have read in ages due to nothing but author laziness. $9.99 is a very serious rip-off for the quality of the product. Luckily, I borrowed it for free with my prime membership. I will NEVER pay that kind of money for the lack of quality from this author.Too bad, because the author has talent.