Review: a good sweet story BUT.........
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 23, 2014
I was constantly wanting to butt the heads together of the two main characters! For goodness sake if they had just talked to each other a lot of their misunderstandings could've been cleared up real quick. Communication guys, it does work!!!!!The story started out real well then just went side ways, a pity, it kind of spoiled it for me because I really did like the characters and most of the storyline so I took off a  couple of stars due to the frustration I felt reading it. I also felt sorry for the other girl it was rather poorly done of him I thought. Not what I call a gentleman or a hero. Another thing that I felt was badly done was that the author seemed to forget the name of the dead brother in law. On one page he's called Val on another further along they are calling him Gerald????? A little confusing!