Review: An erotic BDSM novella with interesting story line.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 5, 2012
This was a nice surprise. A well rounded novella written in the first person that was far better than I'd anticipated both from the title and the fact that I was fortunate enough to have this as a free read. It is a story I would be happy to buy in the reasonably priced range. The story is told in the first person, Gabi's story is of blackmail and being forced into apparently agreed acceptance of what is an initially nonconsensual relationship though Ben the Dominant isn't aware of this as it's carried through by Gabi in order to stay in the USA and not be deported back to Mexico, a situation of which she is terrified of. Ben, a rich powerful man and computer techno geek asks if she is there voluntarily and knows nothing of her reality or experiences, neither does he know of her virgin state until he has the physical and visual evidence. Gabi's is introduced to her submissive sexuality in every way possible but this could have had more attention to detail as to recounting Gabi's feelings, emotions and sensations as opposed to happenings. It would have enriched a good story further. English is good and it is edited. Too good for 3 star and in my opinion just hits four stars.