Review: Disappointing. This author needs to learn the value of dialogue!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 18, 2013
I recently read another work by Elizabeth Finn, "Brother's Keeper". I really enjoyed that story, though I had some reservations about the author's style (see separate review); nevertheless, I committed to tracking down further works.Unfortunately, "Restoring Jordan" was an even more glaring example of the author's inability to use dialogue in a story. I am mystified (flabbergasted, actually) as to why she doesn't learn this basic (and very essential) tool. Her writing could be amazing with this single improvement.In terms of the rest of the story, I found the meeting of the hero and heroine to be rather implausible and I couldn't feel the sexual attraction / tension which was supposed to be happening between the two. Disappointed, to the point that I won't bother with her other, existing works.