Review: Needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 31, 2013
I read the whole book because I did like the story line.  A good Christian book, in my opinion, does not have to constantly state that the characters are Christian.  It should come out of the story in the character actions and words.  Speaking of the pastors lets you know they go to church.  Speaking of a biblical verse lets you know they read their Bible.As I stated above, the story line was promising.  But a good editor could help the author with the overuse of phrases and the disappearance of two major characters (that could be a start for a follow-up story).  One last thing for the author to remember:  Being a Christian does not always make everything in your life perfect.  Many times it just lets you work out what is most important and it provides you the strength needed when things go wrong.