Review: Good story but needs a good editor.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 14, 2013
I think this could be an amazing story but it needs to be rewritten and edited. Names confuse the crap out of you. Author tells way to many stories at one time. By the time you figure out who everyone is the story is almost complete. Melanie Nilles you have an amazing story in your head but please get someone to straighten it out.