Review: very much enjoyed, needs editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2014
I very much enjoyed this story and plan to read the next one. The two main characters are well done, as are the secondary characters (though a bit one-dimensional on the secondary characters). That said, the writing is a bit repetitive and definitely goes here and there and everywhere; it's a little hard to follow. There were some major typos. It needs a good editor, but the story and characters are good enough to keep me reading anyway.