Review: Couldn't finish it
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 30, 2013
I try very hard to finish all books I begin. However, I just couldn't finish this one. I made it to the end of Prince Charming POV portion of the book. Overall, it's very long and I just couldn't connect with the main character after his stint with the carnival.  The book needs editing. There are lots and lots of sentences, paragraphs, even chapters that could be shortened or removed entirely without affecting the story.