Review: Why did I read the whole thing?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2014
I did not like the writing in this little story at all. I believe that most high school honors english students can write a better story line as well as dialogue. There is a definite lack of depth to both the characters and to the plot. This, to me would be the initial story outline to be built into a solid, meaty novella. This author really needs more writing skills before she/he "publishes" again.