Review: Good story, needs an editor
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 29, 2012
This is a very strange and haunting story with much to recommend it. It is a ghost/love story with considerable charm and starts off really well but then wanders around a bit before getting back on track. I liked the story very much but found the narrative style to be annoying after while. Also, the book is in serious need of editing. There are a lot of misused words (it is "past", not "passed" - a mistake made repeatedly - and the author needs to learn the difference between "effect" and "affect".) I try not to be overly critical of proofing errors but some of these were repeated so often they were not proofing errors, they were misuse of language. The author has a good story to tell but he needs someone to give it a good, thorough proofing/editing.