Review: not impressed with author
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 20, 2013
I am very puzzled about what I really think of the book.First the good things.The author had an excellent story.The line of the story kept me on the edge of my seat and I could not put the book down.The Bad parts of the bookIt was written awfully.The author was rushed.It was in many parts very cheezy!!!!!  really cheese. Sometimes the characters would say thing to each other that I could not believe they said. Cause it is so not what you say to people around you cause it is very cheezy.There was no depth in the book. She could have expanded so much more and made the book a big best seller.Everything was just so easy in the book. Problems were solved immediately in 2 sentences.The only reason I finished the book was because the line of the story was really good.If I can through  my opinion in I would tell the author re-write the book!!!!! cause you have a very good story but all the rest sucks!!!!