Review: Good Story But Needs Work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2012
This is the story of Robert Jenkins, a man haunted by something in his past and now, with a marriage that is falling apart, and possibly murder. But we don't know. It could be hallucinations, he could be possessed, he could be insane or this could all be a dream.The problem for me with this book is the story jumped around too much and there were some grammar and spelling errors combined word usage that did not flow with what Eugene was trying to impart. The basis of the story was great and with some work and some structural editing, this story does have a chance to be better. I wanted to feel something for Robert but all I was left with was confusion. Also Samantha and Lori were not developed enough to feel anything for the characters either. Yes the ending did wrap things up, but I am stubborn and stayed to the end. Some readers I don't think would get that far.The positives were the idea of the story. Absolutely loved the idea and where it was trying to go. Eugene has all the right elements to make this a truly creepy tale.