Review: This book was a bit wooden, to me.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2012
It wasn't a bad story, per se.  It's just that the characters and their dialogue was too stilted for me to believe actual people were actually talking.  And while I'm not anti-faith, I didn't care for being browbeaten with it so much.  The final paragraph of the story irked me.  I know it was ended that way to have impact, but the impact didn't quite make it, so it was just... I don't know.  It didn't quite get where it was meant to go, though.I'd say that if the author went back and did a bit more developing of the actual characters, and more precisely, the dialogue, this would be a great story, a really good book.  It just isn't *quite* there yet.