Review: I love a story with alpha males and athletes!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 25, 2013
I love a story with alpha males and athletes and you can't go past a combination that includes an Aussie volleyball player!This was a nice story with a few things really going for it: Gareth is gorgeous, Gareth's mum is fabulous, David is wonderful, it has a public coming out, there's humour, there's hot sex...There were a couple of things that I found mildly annoying (that's probably not even the right word, they were more just things that stood out). Firstly Gareth's Australian accent - it seemed more New Zealand than Aussie (eg. 'Understend' for 'understand' and 'yis' for 'yes'). Plus it seemed he overused 'mate'. Yes, some Australian's say mate but not all the time and it sure didn't sound right in the middle of a sex scene! And the description of David just seemed too stereotypical of the effeminate gay man - hand gestures, swaying walk, high voice, tight clothes, bright clothes - I loved his nature but for some reason wanted him to be a bit more unique.The ending was a bit of surprise and it's a shame the story ended there. I wanted to read more of David, Gareth and Edge's story!