Review: Rushed, not polished
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 9, 2012
I know there are good indie picture books out there.Pirates Stole My Booty (A Silly Pirates Picture Book) (Silly Picture Books)is one I'd point to as being a benchmark. This story is rather mediocre though, and the 'as told by' feel of the story didn't work for us. My youngest wandered away during the reading a few times.The pictures are okay but tiny. Pictures should be more a part of the story than added after. I'd like to see the author give more thought to this. It could be fun.