Review: Contrived story, confusing writing style
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 21, 2012
I don't review many books.  Mainly because the writing of the "free Kindle books" can be anywhere from fantastic to terrible....and a large percentage are in the "okay to terrible" range.  So I don't bother reviewing them.This book is an interesting story, so far.  I haven't gotten too far into it yet but I am enjoying the characters.  But here is why I am writing this (in case the author ever reads her reviews.)  There is a line which reads "She'd talked once..(to someone).....who was an avowed athiest.  He'd said that he could see more of God when he looked up into the trees........"The author must not realize that an athiest would not see God anywhere.  An athiest doesn't BELIEVE in God.  So ... this is just one of those....errors....so frequent in free Kindle books.Update:  I have now finished reading this book, and do not plan to read any others by this author.  The writing is just....strange.  There was a scene where hero watches heroine come out of the lake naked and dripping.  Then the next scene was heroine deciding to strip and go into the lake.  The timeframe made no sense, and this was not the only instance in the book.  It was not consistently written that way (the way some books keep going back and forth and you understand what is happening because that is the style of the book.)  This book is NOT that style.  It is just poorly written.  And the story was very contrived.