Review: Was it a rough draft?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 18, 2012
I was stunned to find this book was written by a professional.  I gave it two stars because I managed to read the entire book, but the story was all over the place, the characters were weak and underdeveloped, and the grammar and punctuation needed a lot of work.  It reads the way I would expect a first rough draft to read.  The story would grab my attention for a couple of pages--then crash and burn leaving me bored, skimming over several pages, and arguing with myself as to whether I was going to continue reading.  It needs a lot of work to reach it's potential, and I can't recommend the book the way it stands.