Review: Good plot
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2013
The author had an interesting plot that kept my attention.  However, I thought the author needed help with proof reading and needs a thesaurus.  There were sentenced where someone is said to have screamed or yelled or whispered responses.  The word screamed and the word yelled and word whispered were jarring as used in the narratives.  It almost seemed as if there were two different people writing the book.  I enjoyed the plotline but felt the book needed a bit more polishing.