Review: 3 Stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2014
I so wanted to love this book, but there were too many things that threw me off. The premise of the story was great, but the delivery was not. I had to re-read several parts because I never knew who was speaking. I would think it was Caroline, but then the line would say her. Or I thought Klay was speaking and the line would say him. It just all ran together. I understand that Caroline was prideful and did not want to take handouts, but it got a little extreme with her not willing to take the offered help. I got totally lost at one point because Caroline kept saying she could not be with Klay and jeopardize her job, but then the next second they are kissing and saying they are going to try. It was like having whiplash. Yes there were some very good parts, that is why I gave it 3 stars, but overall it just did not do it for me. I think if it had been slowed down a bit and not so many errors, it would have come across much better.