Review: rhapsodic
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 16, 2012
While this M/M erotic short story is not ill written, with several neat paragraphs and a lot of good sexual tension, its premise is entirely far fetched and its characterization faulty.I am not saying it is not possible for two best friends to realise they love each other but the psychological transitions are much too quick and they do not ring true.It was a freebie so I guess it can be considered allright. But with more effort and more pages... (and without all those rather suspicious five-star reviews)...