Review: Better and not as dumb as the other book
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 30, 2014
I must say it is good to see a book that looks like it is going somewhere. Still this is the way I read one of these books. If the book starts to go into a ten page side story about a robot dog, I skip it. I they start some insane talk about anything that does not move the plot along, I skip it. I think you have a good idea for a story now but you need to get a good editor to cut out some of the unneeded crap. That being said I think you writing is getting better and I look forward to the next book. It would be nice to have a list of the ships and a picture of them now that they have a fleet.