Review: Mail Order Millie
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 26, 2013
I saw potential in this story but it was too quick and there was no character development or conflict. George came across as a bit stern and unfeeling but I did learn to like him toward the end. I think it would have helped if there were a few paragraphs from his perspective now and then. The writing needed to be a little more descriptive also. It felt at times like you were just reading the events of the day like what Millie was making for dinner and what she was doing, etc. I probably would have given it 2.5 stars if I could.