Review: Better editing would have made this a 5 star instead of 4 star rating...but really good book =)
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2014
I discovered yet another biker romance that I was able to read for FREE (thanks to Amazon Prime's lending library)...and for the most part I really enjoyed it a lot. I took a star off for...yes, run on sentences and incorrect spelling of words ("passed" instead of "past" used several times) as well as missing words and way too many long descriptive passages that I felt slowed down the story too much. I wanted to just read about what was happening NOW with just enough about the history to give me understanding...when it was all about Raine, Claire, Diego, Prosper and gang...now THAT was outstanding storytelling!This book was chock full of action, romance, sexy alpha bikers with dirty mouths and some predictable occurrences (kidnapping, murders, pregnancy, crazy EX's, etc.) but there was enough originality and fresh storyline that I wasn't bored.If you like a rougher romance, tamer MC action and tough, smart heroines...this is your book. I would happily read another in this series because there are two ladies who did not get their HEA endings and I would love to see that happen! =)**** 4 **** "strong sisters and family" stars