Review: Pretty Good.  An interesting take on the zombie genre that could use a few small improvements
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 16, 2013
I've read quite a few of the independently published zombie stories here on Amazon.  Most of them haven't been very good.  This one was better than most.  It's written from the perspective of a little girl who is writing diary entries, and what you're reading actually looks like it was written on diary pages.  The story was a bit short, and it seems clear that this was written as a teaser to get you to buy the second part.  If it's free, that is fine, but I don't particularly like when authors present their books in numerous installments, when each installment is only about 20 pages or less.  There seems to be a lot of writers doing that these days.I like how the book was presented, with diary "pages" instead of words to read, but it also my biggest problem as well.  One of the things I like about the Kindle is that I can make the text bigger and smaller if I want to.  You can't do that with this book.  On my kindle, the diary pages are very, very small.  The entire page takes up less than 50% of my screen, and the text is very small to read.  If the next installment is presented the same way, with the inability to increase the text fonts, I would be very reluctant to purchase it.  Just some word of advice.  Try to fix this.