Review: Not worth the price
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2011
I'm guessing the author is about 15 years old.  The precept of the story is what drew me to the story, but it is unevenly written with gratuitous vulgarities.  I don't have a problem with vulgar language, if it develops the character and/or advances the plot.  In this story it does neither.  Within the first page or so I was wondering why this witch from another world knew these very modern society usages.  At no time did the author show (rather than tell) the thought processes of the characters in an believable way.I've read better stuff on fanfiction sites (and that's saying something!).