Review: Teasers
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 21, 2014
This 4-Book Bundle is full of teasers.  They are unfinished.  Each story ends; "Do you like this book? Be sure to check out other books in this series." Each then lists the titles of Volume 2 & Volume 3 as well as the bundle title that they are in.I had not read anything by this author.  It is a great way to discover her writing style.The first story "Exposed" needs to be edited a little bit better.  There were some typos and and a few other grammatical errors. At the beginning Jeanine was imagining a small family with two children.  "....instead of asking little, Sally, or little Eric, how their kindergarten school day was...."  Two paragraphs later, the author mentions that little Sally is eight years old. Eight year old children are not in kindergarten, five and six year olds are.  I know that might sound knit picky, but that lack of detail really bothered me.I read the first "book" (short story) in about twenty (20) minutes.  I didn't bother to read the others. I do not like unfinished stories.Exposed - locations 27-475Heat InThe Kitchen - locations 487-967Negociation - locations 979-1348Forests Dark and Deep - locations 1358-1765