Review: Please! No more commas!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
I enjoyed this story. The characters were interesting, and I was glad the author chose not to name all of them. By the time I was halfway through it would have been too difficult to read if the author hadn't chosen to designate some secondary characters by job or relationship.The overall plot was entertaining. Sometimes it was simplistic, but it was an easy read for a relaxing afternoon.By far the biggest problem with this book was the random use of commas. I am not exaggerating when I say that they were thrown in without any rhyme or reason. It was incredibly distracting. There were also some problems with editing and sentence structure.I would recommend this book to those who can overlook these problems.