Review: Four and a half rounded to Five!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 09 1, 2013
This is a very short story, a novella. And even so, it had all the things I want in a short story. The lead up to combustion was great. The characters had depth and I found myself rooting for them.Daniel has barely acknowledged Bryn for two years. She's a tough prosecutor with personal reasons for wanting to see the guilty put away. He is a caring man who wants a fair trial for the accused.Once Daniel really sees Bryn, he wants to know about her, but she's not going to just fall into his arms, even though she thinks that might be a very nice place to be. He definitely  has to work for a chance to have a relationship with her.This read very real, not forced at all. The foreshadowed combustion was worth the wait. I would have liked to have seen just a bit more at the end, as it felt pretty tidy, but it was a very nice way to spend a couple hours.Four and a half stars, rounded to FIVE for Amazon.This review, and others, can be seen at:First Page to the Last . com