Review: Jessica has it right
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 27, 2013
Dear Author,Some of us are literate and are bothered by sloppy writing. I found things like "for all intensive purposes" instead of "for all intents and purposes" annoying (among other similar errors). As it is used over and over I have to assume you either don't know the difference or don't care.I do like the story and hate being taken out of it by bonehead errors. On the plus side it is an interesting story line and mostly well written. I just cannot, for the life of me, understand how someone can take so much time to write something and then not check for obvious errors that can undermine the entire thing.