Review: A Lot of Positives...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 9, 2012
There are a lot of good things about this book. The main female character is adorable. The main male character is likeable. The plot is interesting and somewhat unique. The chracterizations are fun to read.BUT - I had such an issue with the lack of proper grammar. I don't profess to be an expert, but I know that when you speak directly to someone in the written word - you set it off with a comma. Which the author would do at the beginning of a spoken sentence, but not at the end of one. It drove me nuts and really took away from the story (at least for me).All in all - so much potential, but needs some polishing.