Review: Good story, bad writing.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2013
First, the story was good. But, the writing style was so awkward and cliched it made the characters seem shallow and silly. I hate to leave a bad review but if the author could find a good mentor and a great editor she could have a decent product. I nearly just gave up. Keep trying, but get some help.