Review: OK short story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 24, 2013
This had a decent story line, but it was too predictable for me.  I figured out who Shay was almost immediately and the ending in a general way.  I only finished the story to see just how the ending would be accomplished.  I'd give it 2.5 stars if I could but couldn't justify 3.