Review: Could have been better....Can Anyone say "Editing Please"
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 3, 2013
This story was pretty good.  However, the editing was so poor I had to literally translate what I thought the author was trying to say.  The grammar was horrendous.  Also, the dialect was bad.  I noticed the author didn't use many contractions.  This made conversations seem stilted and unnatural.  Kinda like the author was writing a paper instead of a book.Before I get comments on my last sentence, I know that it's grammatically incorrect.  However, that's how I would say it as opposed to writing it.....