Review: Not Falling For It
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 3, 2010
What is happening to this genre?  Maybe the market is finally saturated or maybe it's just that I have read too many m/f/m stories.  Jack, Kane and Dara have been best buddies for several years.  They have a love of snow sports in common and hang out with each other like college buddies.  When the two guys realize that they both have developing feelings for Dara they each begin to wonder how this will affect their life long friendship with each other.  Meanwhile, Dara realizes that she wants both guys and decides on a planned ski vacation to seduce both guys.  The sex is hot, but the emotion of the union is missing.  This seems to be happening a lot with the multiple relationship titles.  Note to authors, this is the component that keeps readers buying your books!  I didn't believe the three were so much in love, in fact, Jack at the end of the story tells Dara that he thinks he's in love with her.  Give me a break!  The two guys were described as major hotties, but they acted like immature young dudes.  Dara was written like a one of the guys type of woman with no real sexiness.  The story did not provide enough background information about the trio's jobs, or families and there was room for more to flesh the story out some.  The ski vacation is sexy and hot but the two guys are not exactly committed to a threesome.  They know that this is what Dara wants but there is a lot of gibberish about not being thrilled to see each other naked, and stupid talk about not touching each other, blah, blah, blah.  I enjoy m/f/m and mm/f stories where these issues are not a problem.  Jack is the main one in this story that has to be convinced to give their threesome a chance and not to give the ending away I'll just say that it was silly and totally a snorefest.  This story needed more plot, more dynamics, more reason for the reader to believe that these people were passionately in love.  Falling Freestyle was very disappointing.