Review: Just OK as a Freebie, Pass if They Start Charging
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2011
I'm not too sure what I read - the author gets you going and builds you up for 98% of the story, then the end comes and you just go, "huh?"  To put it in perspective without providing a spoiler, you're reading along and starting to enjoy what you're reading, then it appears the author got tired of writing and crafter a fast ending.As I type this, the story is free in the Amazon Kindle store.  This took about 10-15 minutes to read, and I generally like my short stories to have a good story and ending, with a sense of completeness at the end.  As a freebie, it was fine but if Amazon starts charging for this one I would give it a pass.