Review: Too predictable for my tastes
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2012
This very short story is well-written, though I wished the author had shared a bit more about the alternate universe in which the events were taking place.  The perspective didn't quite fit with that of the six-year-old main character - he seemed more like he was nine or so.  The main thing that impacted my enjoyment is that the events were so predictable and that the story seemed to cut off just when it was getting to a point where it would reveal more details of the universe and be less predictable.