Review: Disappointing
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 30, 2013
When I first started reading this book, my first thought was, "who is this guy's editor?" The sentences were short and choppy, sentences that could very easily have been made smoother and less disjointed. I found myself mentally re-writing these chopped up lines into a more cohesive structure.Plot was weak, ending fizzled out. Steven Havill and Tony Hillerman are authors this writer should read if he plans to continue writing southwest mysteries. They know how to put it together and keep the interest sharp.