Review: Dialogue felt like a speech
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 10, 2013
I loved the cover and I was able to borrow this book from my prime membership. I felt like Marcy was a likeable character but I was not a fan of this writing style. It's very simple and monotonous. For some readers, that issue might be completely irrelevant, but I couldn't get past it. I also felt like the dialogue was just a way to dump information instead of propelling the plot. I enjoy romance novels and I did like 50 Shades, but I always look for a snappy writing style, for example like Julia Kent. Just my thoughts...I had no major problems with the plot, though it's fairly obvious from the get-go who will end up together.