Review: Not Worth it
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2012
The first chapter drew me in, but after that I noticed that the writing had no depth nor finesse and the characters were thin. Like another reviewer, I'm confused by the high ratings that this got, but everyone's taste is different. I started to regret my purchase soon after reading chapter one. Thank God I didn't pay more than 99 cents and that was too much. There were too many descriptions that made the writing seem amateurish and the inaccuracies were annoying. Even for 99 cents, the plot could have been better developed. When did they fall in love? There was no emotional connection established between the characters. I was baffled when love was mentioned because there was no love. The relationship wasn't even properly developed for them to be in love. And just like that it was over. Rushed. The villianess confessed and the hero and heroine are off to Gretna Green in Bromley's carriage. I've read better written 99 cents novellas. This was definitely not worth it.