Review: needs editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 2, 2014
There were places in the story that even with re reading you knew the author had done a re write. However the story gapped leaving you wondering and filling in the gaps yourself. It was a good story, suspense and a tiny bit of paranormal, but needed editing. Even with the gap issues still an enjoyable read. The gaps weren't bad just made for a choppy segue from car to house, or a conversation not flowing properly, thus a poorer rating from me, even though a good story. An editor or beta reader would help this author greatly and put a polish on someone who really has potential.