Review: OK story, Needs Editing!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 18, 2011
I enjoyed the basic storyline, and the characters were decently fleshed out, but the editing errors made it difficult to truly enjoy the story.  Sentences seeming to end without completing the thought.  Supporting characters whose names seems to change midstory, and then back again.  Many basic grammar errors.  While I realize that some of these e-books are published as a work in progress, completed sentences and continuous character names throughout don't seem like too much to ask for.  Hoping the author will take a second stab at cleaning it up so it might actually be worth paying $.99 for.