Review: struggle
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 6, 2013
This book was a bit hard to read. At times the story seemed rushed, but then you felt overloaded with details. The storyline is good, but I think it need more finesse to be more believable.  I think that was what made it a bit difficult. A 16 year old that had a self made empire.  I think if she was a bit older it would have worked for me.  I think that some parts of the book are redundant.  She keeps stating certain situations over and over and other parts of the storyline are barely mentioned. I think if she could have took some more time with this book it would have been much better.