Review: Still just not feeling this series.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 19, 2014
So we are no approaching the last trial before the table 5 option opens. Andrew exposes his hand and David is still unsure if success is what he desires of Grace this weekend.The issues with the exclamation points are still present, this is an issue that bugs me more than spelling errors since my mind can easily over look those. But with an exclamation point at the end of a majority of the dialogue it really messes up the flow of reading. Hard to focus when half of what is being said is being shouted in your head.Still David is not anywhere close to being a likable character and unfortunately unless Grace walks away from him she is a complete mess of a woman. I think I could somehow come to terms with David if there was a glimmer of something, but he is a bit of a sadist and his fear of love is left limp since you have no back story as to why he is not able to commit.