Review: Ours...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 16, 2013
My Thoughts:I am loath to give a bad review but I must say that Ours was a C-story shifter read. There were a few editing issues -- misspellings and missed words. I was actually surprised that the book was not self published with the number of errors it contained.I felt as if the story took on a trite flare with the cousins being named Zack and Jake Bear. My first thought when reading was, "Obvious, much?"I did not like that the men broke into Sandy's house and "took" her while she was sleeping. There was no courting; no allowing her to get to know them first; and nothing reminiscent of them showing any care for her at the onset. They were only concerned with their pleasure and imposed their wants and desires on Sandy. Sure, she woke up and was an active participant later on but it felt too sexual assault-erish at the start.The story's pacing was fast and furious. Most of it felt rushed and shallow including the serial killer angle which could/should have kicked the story up a notch and added an interesting depth. Sadly, that story element fell flat as well because it felt contrived.Overall this story was a fairly mundane read and not my cuppa but not completely unenjoyable.