Review: Ugh not properly executed spoilers!!!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 24, 2014
Ok this was not a bad book but the author seriously need to know how to structure her story development. First when were are introduced to Ryder and Lacey we saw them as two people who knew each other. Suddenly they wanted to sleep with each other.. Bam.. Then she being a "29" year old woman who had a Cold "p___" and first "Orgasm" let him in.. Nope didn't sell,. First off the mention of this being her first time never ever came out only that Ryder could tell because of her female anatomy. Next chapter began with us the readers finding out that she and Ryder are still sleeping with each other thus the insecurities begin as to what type of relationship they have. Again not properly executed. It was hard for me to root for these two characters when Lacey lets her insecurities which were by the way dumb get to her. I mean really we are not in the era of the 60's so them being together because of color was a dumb rationale reason. I found that the sex scenes were not all that written I have read way better scenes, this author just didn't connect hers very well. It was just not clicking with the way she wrote this story. Like for instance when Lacey dumb insecurities were getting the best of her  check this one out ....he was trying to call her yet she refused his called. Next sentence started with him commanding her to be home naked .. I had to laugh at that because the built up just wasn't there.. I found myself reading towards the end and rolling my eyes at the  dialogue of Lacey as to why she can't be with Ryder.. O the kicker is that, he gets to much attention at by to much woman who "wants" him according to Lacey .. Yup folks she broke up with him because he is constantly looked at by woman all the time. And her brother and mother don't approve. For someone who is 29 I find her to be very immature. So with my saying this ..in my opinion read at your own risk!!!