Review: Much better than 'The Depot'
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2014
I read this book by Carmen DeSousa after I had read The Depot.  I hate giving books any kind of negative feedback because writing is an art that is as sensitive as a splinter.  In this story I found the plot much better crafted and written it seemed with more purpose/confidence.  It just flowed well and was enjoyable to read.  I would recommend this story to others.  But the author really does need to find a better editor.