Review: Strong plot, original and fun dialogue, and awesome characters
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 2, 2012
2.5 StarsBlood Heavy started out very promising.  It has a strong plot, original and fun dialogue, and awesome characters.  But in the end, it just didn't feel finished.The main thing that stood out to me, and what kept me reading, were the characters.  They were strong, well-developed and really kept me intrigued.  Jerry/Daniel (the main character has two names, and I'm still not sure exactly why) was witty and easy to like.  He always had a snappy comeback line even when things got bad.  More than once, I laughed out loud.The main drawbacks were the editing and eBook formatting.  There were many tense, POV and overall grammatical issues.  In many cases, I found myself re-reading paragraphs to figure out whose head I was supposed to be in.  There were times were the POV was jumping from one person to the next within the same paragraph.  This along with poor formatting which broke off paragraphs mid-sentence or cut out half of a word, left me confused a lot.Overall, the storyline, although at times unorganized, was fast-paced and entertaining and the characters really kept it going.  Would I recommend it?  If you can overlook the editing issues, then yes.  Blood Heavy was engaging and when I wasn't confused or frustrated with the editing, I was enjoying it.