Review: good premise but drawn out for too long
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 29, 2012
I like the storyline and the premise. The writing was good, but by the halfway mark I began to wonder when it would finish. I also took issue to her being able to fight and do magic while exhausted all the time. Also, for a girl who wanted to protect her baby, she left her alone an awful lot with someone who she knew was susceptible to demon influence and who couldn't fight her way out of a paper bag. And, she never gave the father a chance. Just threw his vow as a knight back at him all the time instead. Hmm, I guess there was more that bothered me than I realized.