Review: Doesn't work for me at all
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 8, 2012
20% into the book and I'm skipping ahead looking for the story.  Too much internal dialog about nothing (apparently) important.Lots of arcane dialog with "thee" and "thy", it's overdone and in places done wrong.  It's also inconsistent, in a world where people talk like that they wouldn't have an internal dialog like "...borderline racists, but that was purely fight talk.  Taunts did not signify an actual meme".Not enough going on in the story to continue with the book on the off chance there is a plot hiding somewhere there.