Review: Wanted to like it -- but it's all over the place
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 26, 2013
I wanted to like this book because the characters were different -- but I just couldn't. This is an example of a book that desperately needs a professional editor. It's not just the run-on sentences, punctuation errors and misspellings that bring it down -- those happen with all indies and can be overlooked a lot of the time. The problem with the prose in this is that it is ridiculously repetitive. If the author finds someone to edit it, I would gladly read it again because of the characters. This is a case of the grammar and errors severely bringing the story down. I actually thought this deserved a two -- but I try not to give anything lower than a three unless I think someone is trying to rip people off. Please get an editor for this, because the characters could be great.