Review: Great Read!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 7, 2014
This action-packed romance held my attention all the way through.  I recommend it highly and will buy more of this author's books.  The reason for the four stars instead of five were technical inconsistencies (insurance doesn't pay for suicides) and another heroine who's stupid acts were explained by "independence".  The heroine did things that a thinking woman would not do, disregarding her safety.  There are possible explanations for this -- shock, denial of reality, depression from the death of her husband.  But the explanation used, independence, isn't realistic.  Being an independent woman does not require rejection of all advice from others.  It requires an evaluation of the potential that others are correct.  The "you can't tell me what to do" concept of a two year old isn't the independence of an adult woman.  The author's grammar is good, but in my opinion, the review of an editor would help with things like suggesting that Sin be given a scholarship to college, possibly for football or some other sport, rather than the payoff of a form of insurance that a broke, single woman fired from her last job would not have.  If she had insurance, it would be through her employer and would cease with her employment.