Review: Erotic short story, part 1 of 4
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 12 9, 2013
Fall Into Love is a hot, steamy tale of a woman (Mona) who has a one night stand with a sexy hunk (Zane) who saves her from falling off a barstool. This is part 1 of 4.Fall Into Love has all the required components for an erotic winner. There's hot sex. There's a man who takes care of the woman he's stolen away from a bar. He's a gentleman. Even with the hot sex. But Zane has a secret and it is this secret that ends the book on a bombshell for Mona.Fall Into Love is very well written. The author has a talent for description. We spend the entire book in Mona's head, but the running dialog she has with herself is real and honest and not over the top.I'm really curious to see where the other parts of this story go. And here's the brilliance of the book. Right now, I'm sitting here envisioning at least four or five possible outcomes for Mona and Zane. Some of those outcomes worry me. I fear that I'll be unhappy with how the story ends. But however it ends, I will read it because now I'm invested in both of these characters. I want to know how Mona deals with her conflicted feelings. I want to know why Zane did what he did. I want to know about his reactions to the questions she's sure to have.This story might be controversial. The actions the characters take might be vilified or justified. But whatever happens, I believe it will be a wild ride.