Review: Great story, but editing  problems in the last half
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 31, 2013
Ruined has an original story line, great characters and lots of fast paced action and twist and turns that kept me on my toes!  I am looking forward to the next installment.My only complaint is that there were several errors in the second half of the book.  Most had to to with the point of view getting screwed up.  For example, if it was Jax's point of view he would say 'he' rather then I, or Jax rather then I.  If it only happened once or twice I would not have given it a second thought.  I don't expect low priced, indy books to be perfect, but there were so many of these errors, it got distracting and frustrating.  I hope the author will fix the errors to save future readers the aggravation.