Review: Pass it by
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 30, 2011
"Checking It Twice" is far too short, even for a Kindle freebie, and reads like something written for a high school English class.  As an opening chapter, or a teaser for a longer story, it might have worked, but as a standalone story it fails miserably.  The characters are entirely plastic and immenently forgettable.I'm not going to comment on the previews the writer included, because I couldn't bring myself to read them.  However, if they're the same caliber as "Checking It Twice" I doubt I'm missing anything.Take my advice and give this freebie a pass.