Review: Too many errors to get through this sadly.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 17, 2012
Let me start by being honest and saying I only read the first chapter (which was a while ago, so forgive me not going into too much detail about it).Now I know people may complain that I am giving a low star review to a book based on this small section I read, but I wish someone had written something similar before I bought this, because it would have possibly stopped me purchasing it (I dislike struggling to read a story) and will only state in my defence that I shouldn't be forced to finish a book just to meet some peoples criteria for reviewing.The main reason I quit early on was the writing unfortunately suffers from spelling, grammar and punctuation errors aplenty in just that single chapter and weirdly it read (for me) almost as if it were in a bullet point format (or bullet paragraphs really).The introduction of the lead character was lacking anything beyond creating a 2D figure (although to be fair this have may been expanded on as the book progressed) and it just didn't seem to flow very well for me, particularly with the back injury the main character receives early on and then it's constant, almost awkward/clumsy reminders and references to it hence. Also had to cringe as innocents along the way were bitten/shot only to have their "life [sic] blood" leave them at least 2 if not 3 times in that one chapter alone.Will award it no lower than 2 stars based on the fact I didn't read it all, but do assume the grammar, punctuation et al was an issue throughout the book (I know one should never assume, but I can only do so if the first chapter I read is any indication).Perhaps an editor would make all the difference, but I'm not sure personally I cared for the (bullet point paragraph) style in which it was written.Not knocking the effort for trying and it wasn't an expensive purchase and perhaps any future work from this author will be more polished.