Review: The makings of a truly delightful series
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 17, 2013
Wonderland - Open for BusinessThis book has the makings of a truly delightful series. The story starts off well, is very imaginative and creative, you are quickly absorbed into the tale.  I was disappointed when it came to the end and will be eagerly awaiting the next book in the series.The characters based on "Alice in Wonderland" are delightful - I especially have a soft spot for the White Rabbit.  I am particularly eager to find out exactly what part the Mad Hatter is still going to play and I am still trying to fathom out who Arys is.What a fine combination of mystery and fantasyHowever it is sad that the author did not have it properly edited, it is unfortunately riddled with spelling errors, most of which appear to be typing errors rather than misspelt.  I would have tried to overlook this but for the very poor grammar."So she stepped back inside of the shop" should be "stepped back inside the shop""Each" of the men "were" at least six feet or taller"  "Each" is singular so it should be "was" or otherwise "All" the men "were""which he had left deep long slices in" should be  "in which he had left deep long slices"These types of errors appear too frequently, so I unfortunately cannot give her as good a review as I would have.