Review: Interesting Concept but Far too Many Errors
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 6, 2012
The story was interesting; I thought the futuristic setting was the best part.  The whole concept of a society where humans and AI live together like this was very well thought out.However, I had a hard time getting past the many, many errors in grammar, punctuation, and capitalization.  Along with a few formatting issues at the end, they made Nemesis Worm look just plain unprofessional.  It especially bugged me that the author didn't seem to know how to punctuate/capitalize a quotation, as this was consistently done incorrectly throughout the book.  I was also bothered by the unnecessary amount of profanity, which stood out enough to be annoying, much like the errors.The story and setting intrigued me enough that I would otherwise have been interested in reading more by this author, but sorry - I'd rather spend my money on books that use the English language correctly.