Review: Sickly Sweet, Cheesy, & Inappropriate!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2014
Positives:-This story's sex scenes are hot.Negatives:-It's has majorly Inappropriate timing as Jeanie starts up w Mark like basically at the funeral of her (if not loved, companionate) husband. They are doing it VERY SOON after the funeral (don't remember exactly). This bothered me so much that I dropped the story for a few months. Also there's a Very strange BDSM discipline scene (the schoolgirl outfit) with weird play w safewords, where Jeanie seriously needed to safeword for emotional reasons and didn't. Then, they are saying 'I Love You's' with like two weeks if the funeral. Listen-- even if she didn't love the man, he deserved more consideration from his wife and best friend than taking up w  each other at his funeral.-Their love is sickly sweet and cheesy (stupid cheesy, not cute cheesy). Like *she* buys him a ring with 'lots of symbolism'. Such BS.Bottom line, this book would have been soooooo much better with the timeline shifted by at least 6 months. Let her freaking mourn. Everything else would have held up and prob be a 3 or 4 (the hot scenes would have bumped up the star power)... Buuuuut I couldn't get over the fact. That.Her.  Husband.  Just.  Died !!!!The body wasn't even cold when Mark 'swept' in.Bugged me so so SO very much.