Review: Even better the second time around.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 3, 2014
There are still spelling and grammatical errors, but I'll give both the author and editor kudos in the story line and the readability of the story.  But both need to understand the use of commas, quotes, double quotes and other of the editing characters of the English language.It's, so far, a wonderful story.