Review: Needs editing.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 15, 2013
This novel has potential, but needs serious editing and attention to formatting.  I liked the descriptions, some of which I found quite funny.  The problems with formatting got in the way of being able to easily read this, as did the constantly changing viewpoint.  Frankly, because of the changing viewpoint I had trouble following the narrative.  I think the writer has talent, but has trouble organizing her work.  With editing, I think this could be an interesting novel.