Review: Great story idea
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2013
This was a quick read.  It has a very good story to it. However it read more like an outline of a good story, than a completed, fully fleshed-out amazing love story.  The charactors pull you in, but as there are great jumps in the timeline, the stories of these charactors are not told as much as implied.Where is the great agony of the h of the story having to watch the H go on with his new life in ton?  When and how do they realise they love each other?What does it take for the H to come back to claim his love, what battles or demons did he face in making that choice?  There is nothing there.He just shows up one day.This is a good story that is deserving of a quick read, and even more deserving of a revisit by the author for a proper fleshing-out.