Review: His Voice, His Command
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 06 21, 2011
First off, I have to say that I loved this short! Being someone that has a deeply personal love for the BDSM life style, this was a very tame version of that lifestyle. It was a step by step progression of a woman that `paid', yes she paid for the BDSM experience therefore *whispers* It is not rape if you pay for it and say "Dominate me hunky Master man." The book had great pace for me. I could really get into the woman's thoughts. I loved that we really didn't know their names; it made it mysterious and gave it almost a role play vibe. It was a perfect example of an introductory experience of that D/sub lifestyle.I understood her inner struggle and the urge to fight back at the words "Master and slave". He laid it out for her, said this is what we are doing to do, this is how it is going to be, and I'm fairly sure the woman had a safe word if she wanted to stop. Unfortunately, that was the one mistake of the author, she made too much of a situation that seemed like a `no way out.' For me I got it, I could tell by the dialogue that this was all set up and I'm sure if she cried out RED ' save word, the guy would stop!I want to say that if you are curious about reading D/sub erotica that this is a great way to put your feet in first and experience it from the `role play' point of view. But reading the other reviews on this book, I have a feeling that most people didn't get it. I would recommend this to anyone that loves BDSM. It was a short and I knew that I would not get emotional with the characters, I would read it as a quick scene and either be left going `eh' or going `OH YUMMY I liked that one!' I really liked it, I rated it a five stars without even thinking about it!I think Vonna wrote a great quick short, which I enjoyed very much, being a fan of this style of kink in erotic fiction. I will be looking up more stories by Vonna!