Review: Punctuation, poor grammar and poor spelling,wrong words used...yikes!!!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 26, 2014
I learned about BDSM but was appalled at such lousy proof reading!!!! This suggests to me that the author doesn't care and for me it just interrupts the stories big time.The use of ".....had went..." drove me INSANE!!!! Never put had went together!!!! Just say went. Impotence is one thing but to use impedance instead is just ludicrous.Apostrophes where they don't belong and what? Was there a sale on using question marks on statements vs a question?????Such lack of care just ruined this for me!!!