Review: lacking editing and really just too long.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 12, 2014
I think the title says it all, I read the preview and enjoyed it so I bought the whole book but unfortunately as soon as I was out of those first few chapters a serious lack of editing became apparent. I can handle a mistake or two every few pages but there was paragraphs that I could not understand because of changes in tense or I was unable to decipher who was speaking. The book was also way too long. Don't get me wrong I will not buy a book under 200 pages but the story just dragged on and on. There was not defined peak in the story just a bunch of small one strung together loosely.I do want to say that there were part in the story that my heart break for the heroine and those parts were the only thing keeping it above a 0-1 star rating. I felt emotion in those little selections but most of the book did not hold my overall love.