Review: Mysterious beginning, but would improve with an increase in length I believe.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 9, 2013
I found it hard to understand the storyline and felt it could have been shown more clearly at the end of the story. Perhaps it was due to having a problem with shorter stories ,it takes me a while to get the drift before it is finished. Had it been longer it would have had time to develop the plot more fully.Sincerely,Late starter.