Review: Needs Some Work
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 23, 2013
I think this book has potential to be a good YA story. The plot is similar to Twilight, with enough differences to make it interesting. Unfortunatly, the grammer, spelling and general typos were frequent enought to frustrate my reading. The story is told from two points of view, which I liked, except for the fact that sometimes it was just repeating the exact same conversation twice. My opinion is that a good re-write could earn at least 4 stars(and probably 5 from the intended YA audience).