Review: its okay i give 2.5 stars
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 17, 2014
First of all I want to say that I read "Life" and was very impressed and fell in love with the book and author.Now with this book "In this Life" I was very disappointed and confused, the book seemed to jump back and forth. I don't think the author should have used dates that was confusing here are my reasons why.* April 1977 Freddy takes a beating ends up in the hospital the police ask where the gun came from, immediately Freddy thinks of Marylin. Freddy wakes up in the hospital to find Sasha and Marylin Fox staring at him.*May1978 Freddy runs away from home and is wandering the streets and runs into a R.Kelly singing a song about how he believes he can fly..thats funny because R. Kelly was born 1967 he would have been around 10ish. Next he comes to the aide of an unknown beautiful woman he asked what her name was, wait for it...her name is Marylin Fox, how is that possible if she was in his hospital room in 1977 less that a year ago.* Freddy watched Geraldo Rivera on a black and white television back at the condo, interesting Geraldo Rivera was not on television until 1998,1996, and 2003 how is this possible if the book is in 1977-1978?? Then 3 paragraphs later the book states Sasha put an eight track into the cassette player.* 1978 Freddy and Sasha are driving a 500 Mercedes convertible, that car did not come out until 1995.I was so confused as to what period of time they were in. My suggestion to the author Leo Sullivan do not use dates if you can not weave the story properly. The last 2 chapters of the book were good but I would not recommend anyone to purchase this book it seem too rushed and all over the place, I would like to give it 2.5 stars for the grammar errors.