Review: Taste of Paradise? Not So Much....
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 11, 2011
I guess I am living in an alternate universe from everyone else reviewing this book. Or the quality of IR writing is just so bad that we are now content with accepting stories by writers who really should not be releasing this kind of work to the general public. This entire series is poorly edited to the point of distraction. There is a glimmer of hope for this author, because she does have a knack for story telling, but the character development, dialogue and overall premise of these stories is terrible. The women are crass and I cannot for the life of me see why anyone, let alone 4 brothers, would want to be with the Landry women. The dialogue is amateurish and really stereotypical. If you're going to write a love scene, please do it justice. I would suggest studying some of the erotica greats like Bridget Midway or Lena Matthews. I'm guessing these are self publications because I can't see a major publishing house accepting these stories. Please find a critique partner, proof reader and editor before you release another story. In this recession, people are stingy with their discretionary funds, so the public can be really unforgiving if you're not taking the time to at least proof read the stories. No one wants to waste hard earned money.