Review: i love it but here is some advice
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 18, 2013
I finally figured out what I was having a problem with.I love the story. I love the characters. I love the Brit view.However, you do chapter breakdowns by theater of war. Within the theater you switch point of view paragraph by paragraph. You need to either label the viewpoint change or make sure the 1st sentence identifies the change in perspective.I was getting confused on who's view was being presented.