Review: Didn't really flow.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 22, 2013
It all seemed to progress from zero to sixty too fast.  I didn't really feel the connection between the characters.  Grammatical errors were there but not the main problem for  me.  It was kind of dull.  The angle with the crazy ex-wife was thrust Into the story , then it was just lopped off.  Same thing with the ending.  The story just came to a screeching halt.  Huh?