Review: Loved this story...LOVE this series!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 5, 2013
I love this series! I love all of the characters. I love Drake and Mags' story as much as Devi and Seth's story, and most of all I loved how most everyone who was prominent in the first story stayed involved in this story rather than fading way to the back or disappearing like happens in other series. Actually, scratch that, the best thing about this book is we get a HEA for Drake and Mags, but you just know there are more stories to come! These people are so awesome, I want to be a part of their makeshift family! Love, love, love! I did miss the tattoo parlor peeps, though it seems they were kept involved here and there and will come to the forefront in future installments! Can't wait for Cris' story!!I would give this 5-stars is it weren't for one thing...the editing!!! For the love of God, please, please tell me the wrong copy was uploaded OR have someone else edit the next book! For a second book, I am flabbergasted at how awful this book was in the editing department. I am far from an English teacher and could not diagram a sentence to save my life, so the fact that I notice the errors to where it is distracting is saying something. Words missing, punctuation missing or randomly placed where it is not necessary, phrases repeated where it didn't seem they should have been, again with the 'your' instead of 'you're', and there were several times in the book I had to go back to re-read conversations to figure out who was saying what. I could be more forgiving of a first book, but this is the second, and I would have to say the errors in this book are worse than the first. While I will eagerly await the next installment and hope there will be several books to come, again, p,ease fix the issue of all the errors, so I can read without so much distraction! I am certain My Misery Muse and Faith will be added to the short list of books I will happily re-read.Also, have someone change the synopsis! This does NOT happen 2-years after MMM or the age of the kids in Faith does NOT match the synopsis. It happens like 11-12 months after MMM since the author says Quinn is 6-weeks old within the first couple of paragraphs on the first chapter, and was newly preggers at and of MMM! It also mentioned Jaks being newly five which also does not fit this story being 2-years later since he turned 4 toward the end of MMM.I can't be the only one who noticed that.