Review: Dog tie-in?
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 18, 2014
Okay, I have to ask....what's with the dog tie-in in this book?  Not only do we have random dog thoughts happening throughout the book, but we have an awkward dog wrap-up at the end.  This book was better than Hearts in Motion in that it wasn't sticky syrupy sweet, but the premise, which was interesting, somehow got watered down and a bit ruined.  If I thought the author was listening, I'd say lose the animal crutch and let your writing stand on its own.  It can but you have to allow it.