Review: Chicken Soup for the erotic soul
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 3, 2014
This was okay as the three-star rating above says. It was simply too straight to the point as a lot of these stories are to really care about anything outside of the sex. Speaking of which, it calls to mind something another reviewer had said about another story by this author and that was that breeding erotica was a hard fetish to write about.I have to agree. Think of all of the things people fantasize about and in most cases the last thing most people fantasize about is being pregnant or wanting becoming pregnant. So I do have to compliment Mitchell's ability to make his stories very appealing in the sense that the mere act of procreating can be just as erotic as having sex for sex's sake as we as a species have become accustomed to.Getting back to my original point about this story, though, like I said - it was pretty straight to the point. What starts off as a man wanting to teach a spoiled rich bitch a lesson turns into more of a morality tale with hot, kinky, sex thrown into the mix. It really is as simple as that. This story was really short so if I said anything more I'd be telling the story.If you're not too particular about character development, you won't be too disappointed I suppose. The erotic scenes in this story invoke some very delicious visuals in the mind's eye that make this worth reading.I don't know if he has already, but Mitchell should write a full-length erotic romance novel. I feel his explicit writing style could literally dominate the breeding/submission scene.