Review: potential but no
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 9, 2012
This had potential.  The writing was good and the bare bones of the plot was there.  However, overall, the story had major problems.  As others stated, jarring personality inconsistency of the heroine did not make sense.  Also, the main plot to prevent the hero and heroine from being together was flimsy and, therefore, both frustatrating and kind of idiotic.  There needed to be some better reasoning and complexity to make it work.  One of the characters losing it came out of left field and was like a reverse deus ex machina to provide a bang at the end.  As with all e-books I read these days, this one is also in dire need of a good editor to handle the synonym/malaprop problems --- something that annoys me enough to hate an otherwise decent book --- and, perhaps, could have advised on the character and plot problems.