Review: A good premise, but needs a little more
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 8, 2011
I found this to be a clever premise and well-imagined, but I would have liked to see a little more 'meat' on the 'bones' of the story.  A little more depth, if you will...But, as written, it's interesting (though VERY short) and does make you stop for a moment and think.  I particularly liked the ending - somehow both so trite and yet SO fitting!Note on Kindle formatting:  Excellent.  I noted no issues.