Review: Just kind of blah.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 10, 2013
It wasn't absolutely terrible I like how she tried to incorporate a plot into the sex but it did not work out.This story lacked execution, imagination, character depth, originality, and excitement.Yes it's a short story but that doesn't mean you should slack off. Even the sex was boring. Given the description of the story I thought it would be exciting, primal, and raw. It just read like blah sex.