Review: Breakfast In Bed
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2013
I was very pleased to read/review the erotic short story, "Breakfast In Bed" by R. Zimmerman.The writing was very good, although, it was extremely short in length.  As a personal preference, I feel the author couldhave developed the characters a little more, but I am aware how difficult that is to do in a 600 word piece.The author has stated that this is his first erotic piece, so there's definitely a lot of potential for him in this genre.  Hopefully Zimmerman will expand on this in the future.