Review: Improvement over book 1
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 11, 2012
rating 3.5While I think this effort was an improvement over book 1, I still don't think it's a 5-star read.  It's too short to develop the characters, taking an average of 40 minutes to read it.  I liked Guy and Elena, but I still feel like the romance is missing something.  There just isn't much build up.  The first time the characters are together, BAM.  I'd like to see a bit more tension, something.  I think this series has potential, and I keep hoping the books continue to improve.  I'd actually like to see a full-length novel, maybe we could get more character development, a bit more romance, not just immediate sex.