Review: A Nice MM Romance Short
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2012
This Kindle short is a cute little romance. I thought it was going to be erotica, but it wasn't. I downloaded it when it was offered as a freebie. I believe the author intends to keep it free as a sample of her work.Ben Hammond has a few problems. One, he is overworked. Two, he's trying to overcome his shyness and meet a cute guy he keeps bumping into at a local sandwich shop. And finally, he thinks he may be going mad because items around in his apartment keep moving.I found this Kindle short nice and inventive. Ms. Harper has a subtle sense of humor that I appreciated. The ebook is very well edited - one of the best I've seen in a while. The story of Ben and Tom is nice, but I wish the author had brought me deeper into the story and character emotions. It all seemed a little distant. I know that some readers and book bloggers dislike 1st person narratives, but I feel this story may have benefitted from that point of view.I definitely enjoyed Tomfoolery enough to consider checking out some other titles by this author. The humor, creativity in the storyline, and the clean editing brings it up to a four star read for me. A nice little Kindle short.