Review: Good story if you ignore the annoying writing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 15, 2013
I enjoyed this story, even though it ends without really ending (there is a sequel) but the use of folksy slang even in the prose was beyond annoying. It is fine to have a character say, "I have a hankerin' to get movin'" but not to have the description suddenly say, Sam had a hankerin' to get movin' on the trail. Where was the editor??? Still, nice story.