Review: So-so. April in OR
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 4, 2013
Not sure about this one....YES the scenes jumped around too much and I'm not an editing freak but it gets real annoying when the paragraphs jump around and the characters name changes on one line but than back to the correct name, I know I shouldn't do this but I skipped some chapters because of it.Once I started reading this story it did not draw me in but I muddled thru most of it....yes, the characters are black but you know that within the first chapter, that did not bother me but the massive typos/scene jumping did!Last...I hate when someone uses the "CU**" word..it totally turns me off. The sex scenes were also choppy. (Ex: Marcus woke up with Karyn in his arms...Karyn wakes up and smiles at Malcolm.) See totally confusing.