Review: Amateur Effort
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2013
This book is extremely difficult to read. It is rife with errors (grammar, spelling, punctuation, tense) that really detract from the story. The dialogue is stilted and unnatural, and the characters are shallow, therefore never allowing you to completely get lost in the story. It also does not flow well. Rather than develop the timeline in a fluid way, the author will start a new section or chapter with a fragmented sentence about how much time has passed (e.g, "2 days later"). The whole thing is just sloppily and lazily done, at an elementary level at best, and so chock full of errors and mistakes it is embarrassing. Do not waste your time or money on this unpolished book. Not recommended.(We've got to do better!)