Review: Biker vampire meets amnesiac, singing waitress
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 3, 2012
"Vampire Awakening" contains a decent story, but it's overwhelmed by many grammatical mistakes and misspellings (ascent vs. assent, into vs. in to, and whisp vs. wisp, for just a few examples). Much of the writing is awkward and forced me to pause in order to attempt to ascertain the author's meaning. In addition, there are more than a dozen instances of whole sentences that are chopped off and just end with an ampersand.The story is summed up in my review title. I would have rated it a three, but the amount and variety of errors made that impossible. There is a bit of a twist at the end that I did not see coming, and I appreciated that. The sex scenes had potential, but are marred by the awkward writing overall. With some simple editing, this book could improve.