Review: A real fine story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2014
I really enjoy reading historical romance stories, especially when the characters are as unique as normal people can be. This story has it all, a frisky mail order bride that's not afraid of robbers, the handsome rancher to marry, an 'Annie Oakley' for one sister and 'Scarlett O'Hara' for another!Truth be told, there are too many unique characters and not enough story to fit them into. It's like eating beef stew without the beef, but filled with artichokes, celery and shrimp! There's a good storyline here, which kept me reading, but the writing is awkward and the conversations don't flow well.Still, as this author develops her style learns about timing and developing the characters and storyline, her stories could become ones readers seek after. I'll keep my eyes open for her next chapter of The Troublesome Mail Order Bride's Family!