Review: A Short Worth Reading
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 10 22, 2012
It was a pleasure to read 'The Pit Stop' by Carmen DeSousa. Most readers do not realize the skill needed to write a successful short story, however, once they read this one, they'll quickly see. DeSousa grabs you from the very beginning, adds just enough characters to assist in unfolding her story, while she uses perfect pace (essential for a short story) and realistic dialogue. At the right time she picks up the pace, drawing the reader in even closer as they await the ending. In this case, they will not be disappointed. It's first class and tight...and very well done.I highly recommend this top-shelf short story. "Thank you, Carmen, for an enjoyable read. Keep writin' and smilin'...I'll be checking out your other novels."LeeCarey-author.com