Review: Great story, but problem with voice
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 27, 2013
This author tells a great story.But there was a major problem I noticed in volume 2.It makes sense for the language spoken by the hooligans not to be grammatically correct.But when the narrator is giving you details, and nobody is talking the grammar should be tight.Also I highly doubt F.B.I. agents speak like a hood when not around other hoods.The author needs to do a better job making people sound unique.