Review: 93 pages: not long enough to get into feelings and background
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 9, 2012
Elaina Ruiz has spent the last 3 years taking care of her ailing mother until her death, this is when Elaina starts college. Exhausted she comes to visit her aunt where she meets Raul Vega a dominant man who immediately desires her. But as she only is a freshman he believes her to be only 18 and not 21, therefore too young for him. But still reason is not enough to keep him from staking his claim and getting very angry when a guy her age, Trevor flirts with her. Elaina is captured by the dark 30 year old man, but is also very afraid of his possessiveness and macho attitude so she hides her real age to protect herself. But when he finds out that she is old enough for him and a virgin there is no way out anymore for any of them.93 pages this is how long it takes Mrs. Lynda Chase to tell this story. And I have to admit I was happy that is wasn't much longer. I got the impression that she likes to describe. Especially the description of the two main characters seems unnatural. Then the characters themselves: I understand her motivations to avoid him but I don't understand him at all. There is no insight in his past, nor in his present... so he lacked in depth and after thinking about it: she as well because I read about her and her fears but I didn't feel anything.I have no problems with alpha males only when I don't feel any sympathy or even hate towards any character... well than I have a problem. Also I like to read sometimes an erotic tale period but then I need something hot and a bit more special then here. And the end was for me just too much happy end.I have to admit that I am not sure if I'll try some other work of this author because the more I think about this book the less I enjoyed it.MBTM