Review: Just wow
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 12, 2014
I hate when I give a bad review because I know the author cares about their work. There were so many typos I had to reconstruct sentences while I read just for this book to make sense. Then there was the fact that the main characters had potential for more depth and development, but it was completely overlooked. All the girl did was complain about her weight and how her past boyfriends treated her, even though she didn't like to talk about it. Also Braxton( the other main character), or whatever his name is talked about himself and how he's looking for a real relationship, yet I found the sex just gross with so many of the metaphors used. It's sad to me considering this could've been a cute short story if more work had been put into it.