Review: The Job Offer
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 1, 2013
I really enjoyed this story. I thought the characters were well developed and other then the over-load on descriptions I thought it flowed well.I think the story would have been better if the characters had not known each other previously. I think Anne should have been visiting her family inn like she was and he was there with his family for his sisters wedding like he was but I think the past relationship was unnecessary. It's unbelievable that they've known each other since she was nine and they never knew each others real last names. Also I though Chelsea wasn't necessary. I thought their first meeting in the real world should have been at the St. Claire facilities.Also I thought the conversation where she asked him if he thought their relationship was just sex and his reply, that they agreed it was just the week they were both at the inn. Then him telling her about the two times women had tried to trap him by claiming pregnancies knowing he had unprotected sex with Anne at least twice should have been rewritten. That was totally unbelievable especially as he was thinking to himself in the next paragraph that he wanted her to realize they had more then just sex going for them.All in all I enjoyed the book