Review: Fun
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 6, 2013
Great for young adults who enjoyed Harry Potter. The story is fun,if a little hokey, I would have loved it when I was ten or eleven. I recommend it. I would have given it four stars, but all the errors really bothered me. This would benefit greatly from the attention of a good editor. "your" is not the same as "you're." "passed" was written, instead of "past," etc. There were a few punctuation errors, but they did not bother me as much as the homophones. I thought perhaps I would read the second book, but then in the preview I read "adapt" instead of "adept," and decided I could not read any more.