Review: Stunned with huge disappointment!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 30, 2014
I cannot understand the reviews for this book. There were so many five stars and so much gushing I had huge expectations, but I couldn't even finish it. There was absolutely NO build up to the couple to make me invested in them. They see each other twice, have coffee, talk on phone a few weeks and BAAMM, in love? PLEASE!! I didn't even really know who they were or hardly any background on them except basic stuff, and when she walks in beat up, both men just calmly talk and eat? Yes, Shane's hands were shaking and they said they wanted to beat the guy up, but the writing is so bad you don't FEEL their anger. It's just words on a page. Like reading a newspaper article with the facts. That was my biggest complaint and why I couldn't finish it. Everything I was reading were just words, didn't make me feel any of the emotion of the scene. I have read lots of books that had me crying, heart pounding, etc, jut reading the scenes. With what was happening with these characters, if the writing was good, you should feel something. Then the author would just throw in something like, "I ached down in my pussy" and it was like WHAT !?! Where did that come from?  It just was out of place with the scene.