Review: deserves to be better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 15, 2014
Here’s another story that could have been enjoyable if it had an editor. While I think the overall plot premise is interesting and the characters look like they might be enjoyable, the editing is so atrocious that I couldn’t get through it. A qualified editor can fix this up in no time and get a decent version republished. It will help sales.