Review: Needs a lot of work
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 28, 2013
Definitely sample before buying. I got this as a free read and was very disappointed. I don't want to be negative because at least the author tried. This book needs a whole lot of work. Writing is an art and there are certain things that are necessary to the framework of a story.  The author shows promise but appears to not have a grasp on the basics taught in English 101.  Definitely invest in some writing courses and then try again. I never want to discourage a budding author so I'll just close by saying the effort was there but did not add up to a cohesive story.