Review: THEY are not much.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 31, 2013
This short story was a little silly at times, with awkward writing and inconsistent grammar. Sometimes the author said "towards" and "alright" only to turn around and say "toward" and "all right." He jumps around to different characters' perspective at the drop of a dime, also using unnecessary inner dialogue, but in the end none of it matters. We never find out what THEY are, and the ending is a bummer. There is at least one terrifying image near the end, but for the most part this story needed more and less at the same time.