Review: Barely there with zero continuity.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 28, 2011
The idea is good, and the story is interesting - that's the two stars worth for me. Jack and Char, separately, are respectable characters. But every other aspect of this novella was confusing, disorienting, and lacked smooth transition for the reader.The chapters and scene changes are jumpy. When reading this, you just need to accept what's going on and kind of find out later the 'why' of it all.The whole fairy-goddess part seemed cheap and not at all as holy or gaia-like as the characters' respect for the fairy. The goddess is described between a diva, a brat, and the holy mother. It just doesn't seem as legitimate as the reader is lead to believe.I feel like it could be improved upon greatly. There was potential, but squeezing all these feelings and character motives and instant romance took its toll. It cheapened it.It's a short, entertaining read, I suppose. Personally, I'm left uninterested in continuing the series.