Review: Stumbled...........
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2014
First let me say that I LOVE KASSANNA'S writing, I give her mad props for taking on another genre.  I feel that in order for writers to grow,we as readers have to be completely honest with our reviews.  That being said, was the book the greatest book that I have ever read, no it isn't; but is it a good read, yes it is, does it have potential, yes it does.  I don't give away the plot of a story in my review, as I feel that it unfair to any prospective buyers, but I feel that there could have been more character development in this book.  I wanted to know more about these people and their lives, I wanted to really connect with them, and I couldn't, something was just a little off. I wanted to know what was going to happen with this young "family";there seemed to be a lot of questions sill left on the word document that didn't make it to the book.  Just as things were starting to develop the book ended...Imagine my surprise when I kept going back to see if I had missed something.  I also don't know if Kassanna used the same editors and proofreaders as she does with her paranormal books, but there were too many grammatical and spelling errors for someone who does this professionally....did they take away from the book....a wee bit, but only because I am used to such superior writing in her other books.The potential that this book possesses is unbelievable, and maybe consideration should be given to a re-write.  My reviews are just "My Opinion" and we all view books differently....is it really a 5....no, but the potential for being a 5 is there.....