Review: thought patterns
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 25, 2012
This is a fast paced short.  I have read something very similar (title escapes me at this moment) - but this was well told.A fellow is a news anchor set to cohost a holiday parade.  He is compromised from doing the job when something more pressing comes up.I reduced a star due to some issues missed in editing and also a pretty glaring (to this reader) conflict within tale.  There is a "oh God gonna die" type bit - yet it comes from the one this anchor is going after for his purpose.  Due to this fellow actually causing an event - it is not likely (to this reader) he would lament with woe as it read in story.I would give another by this author a try.Christine