Review: Amateurish, but free
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 22, 2012
Yeah, it boggles my mind that anyone would give this 5 stars, or even a passing grade.  The characters were boring, the dialogue was as wooden and unbelievable as you are likely to find anywhere, there are editorial issues, and what passes for a plot is just nonsensical.  This felt like a high-school creative writing assignment rather than a novel.  I think the basic idea behind it is good and hope the author continues to expand her craft and give it another go because I think she has a good concept, but the actual product delivered in this instance just wasn't up to snuff.