Review: Reality lacks reality!
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 5, 2014
The story could have been really good except for the fact that the author was all over the board with both story line and characters! She gives to much detail on relationships that don't  need. Explanation  and to little for the ones  were  (the readers) supposed to become involved with. Also Naomi's relationship with Roman was just sappy not romantic.  While I get we're supposed to realize they are the reincarnation of the original cursed  couple she played there love to unrealistic. Yet none of this was enough to grade the story at three stars or less, what blew it for me (SPOILER ALERT) was she was a virgin and sexually abused and didn't notice?  Not when she awoke or her "first time" with Roman? Or how  about  morning sickness immediately after the shift occurred?  As she doesn't know enough about "cat people"  to say this is normal but in today's day and age no woman is that naive to think morning sickness starts the day after having sex for the first time or even the millionth.  I realize this is a fantasy story but you can't  set a story  half in reality and Half in fantasy  without at least making the reality portion believable.  Because ultimately it's the believability portion  that  allows us to fall into and believe the  fantasy portion for awhile! So if Amazon allowed us to give half stars I would have given this one  2 1/2.  Hopefully the author continues and makes future stories a little more believable  because she truly does have a great imagination.