Review: needs more work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 10 16, 2013
A decent short novella that badly needs content and line editing. There were multiple places where I had difficulty following the story due to the rough-draft feel of the writing and some paragraphs I'm still not certain I understand.The setting's a bit derivative of Harry Potter but not plagiarized, and the characters are original although not developed much. This could be so much better with a bit more work and a professional editor. For now, 2.5 stars, but if an updated version of the title comes out, I'll revisit this review.