Review: I Liked This Fantasy Adventure
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 12, 2012
This story takes place in a land called Teldine.  There is a cobalt flower that consists of 4 petals and the heart of the flower.  The heart is supposed to belong to the king and the 4 petals each go to a Champion.  There are 4 Champions-the peoples champion, the king's honor champion, the justice champion and the land champion.  In the beginning of this story the peoples Champion is ordered by the king to fight the king's Champion or some orphans will be killed if she refuses to fight.  The king's champion, Rydan, ends up killing the people's champion, Natena, and she has given Rydan her petal so he now possesses two of the petals (even though he broke his own).  The king also gets killed accidentally by the justice Champion and it is discovered that the king did not possess the heart of the flower.  Thus begins a journey to a land called Delnic in search of the heart of the flower and the true king/queen.Overall I liked this story.  There were a lot of characters in this story and they were introduced fairly early on so it took me a little bit to figure them all out.  I didn't like the character of Rydan because he is supposed to be a Champion but he comes across really poorly.  He always says the wrong thing and he cries all the time; however, he does seem to have good intentions.  I liked the character of Natena the best as she is strong willed and at the same time she is a lady.  This could have used another proofreading as there were a lot of words totally missing and it was just a little distracting.  My actual rating would have been 3.5 stars but I did like it which was a 4 star rating on this site.I received this ebook free through LibraryThing member giveaways in exchange for an honest review.