Review: Great potential
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2012
As a writer and editor, I appreciate good writing very much and was pleased to see that David paid attention to the details as well as writing an excellent story. Even the best plot and characters can be derailed for me by poor sentence construction or obvious misuse of words.I would suggest that David do more research on police procedures, especially related to possible suspects in a capital crime. I found some of the LE encounters described in the story less than believable.This was a good read and I hope he continues to develop both the characters and this alternative world in subsequent stories.