Review: Well done
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 18, 2012
My review of the first book of this series was rather harsh.  Even so, I've kept on reading -- mostly because I really love the characters, and the story is really fascinating.This book shows a DRAMATIC improvement in the editing.  While there were still quite a few noticeable errors in grammar and word choice, it looks to me like much more time and effort went into this one than in the previous ones.I can't wait for the next in the series.Well Done!