Review: A Story of Trust and new love
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 14, 2012
This was a short story, but very complete in its telling and free! The description of mark isn't enough to determine this with a certainty, but I don't think this is an interaccial story (found this story under search in that category). I'm always a little leery of the free reads, even when there are 5 star reviews. I breathed a sigh of relief when I started reading and it was well written without grammatical or editing issues, which is the first plus of many positives with regard to this story.This was a cute telling of a woman who was afraid of giving her heart again and a man who was so open to giving his heart to the right woman.  I liked his character a lot because he was so patient with her while she worked through realization in her own time and was not giving up on his love for her.  He was so well written and fleshed out. The supporting cast contributed to story line without overshadowing the main couple. I see there is mention in other reviews that the twist in the story regarding Mark wasn't really that believable, but because of how his character was written and his outlook on love/commitment made me accept it as true within the context of the story.The only critiques I have are as follow: The first is a decision Amber made with regard to her ex husband which made me wonder if it was the same female lead from the beginning of the book, just strange.  My second critique was I wished there was more description of the island, more history and connection with the island inhabitants, but the author notes she will be writing a book that gives a full look at the island and people which I am looking forward to.