Review: Wasn't much of a story
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 21, 2013
Talk about a story that was a waste. Let's see, first, you have the return of bad boy Dane Mackenzie to his home town. He's been a world traveler as a reporter and in the author's own words, "a man with appetites" including leaving many women with broken hearts in his wake. Now, isn't that a man we all want in our life! And, Charlotte "Charlie" Munroe, the pregnant girl left behind 10 years ago, doesn't even put up a token fight when Dane returns home. Within 10 minutes of seeing the man who left her behind "to make something of himself", Charlie is having sex with Dane on a desk in her office. No "Where have you been? Why didn't you ever come back? Did you ever try to find me?" Nothing, nada, zero accountability of Dane. And, to add insult to injury, there is a second book to continue the story! Give me a break! This story was 50 pages long- how can you continue a story that just began? What a ripoff!