Review: Good Premise but Inconsisent
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 22, 2011
This story has a great premise and the plot is good but some of the inconsistencies are glaring and this takes away from the readers overall enjoyment.  I was initially captured by the plot-a doorbell, a death and a grieving father but some of the inconsistencies, a math teacher-an English teacher-resulted in confusion and ultimately disappointment.  The story has the potential to be a good one and the characters are likeable and interesting but the mistakes ultimately result in a disappointing read.  I recieved a free copy of this book for my review.