Review: Initiating a duel, with bad execution.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 10, 2014
In my opinion, there is no such thing as a bad story... Every story has it's bugs to wok out. The way it was described was what took it down for me. The story was described, not told. So I felt like I was reading an overly detailed description of the story.With a little more character development, and a better method of attack, this book could have been a lot better. But it felt forced, and even a bit immature.It seemed that Natalia had a very original, and creative idea in mind, but it was executed badly. The next book may show a bit more development in writing skill, but I doubt that I will ever find out. Round one was good enough for me.