Review: Stop on a Dime!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 2, 2014
This author has a knack for character development, unfortunately, the characters don't fit their role in the story. Denali might be a high school football coach and Sandy might be a 3rd grade English teacher, but they are not detectives and their work ethic would never cut it in the real world. That aside, the story line started off with potential, but the connection between homeless men dying and Russian Mafia didn't fly with me. And why did they blindfold Sandy when they took her to the warehouse when they already knew they were being watched by the Feds? Why did they even bother kidnapping Sandy in the first place? Moreover, to pull the whole story together the author had to use a psychotic twist, that was weak to say the least. The ending at the airfield was very anti-climatic. Oh, let's not forget Eddie Sanchez, the detective wannabe. Oh wait a minute, he is a detective and afraid of his own shadow. If I worked for the APD I would be embarrassed to be depicted like these characters.One more thing, the formatting was off, which might have been caused by the conversion process, but it didn't explain the spelling or grammar errors which were much more prevalent in this story than the author's first. Someone got lazy...