Review: Not a Fan of First Person Stories
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 22, 2011
Very rarely do I really like first person romances, I like to get inside all of the character's heads and I can't help but feel the author is just being lazy when they resort to first person. I was constantly pulled out of this story because of the use of first person, every description and action just didn't flow and sounded more like commands than natural observations or movements. That aside the story wasn't terrible and it was short thankfully but I didn't find it particularly special or funny. I did find it a little unbelievable and naive of the main character to think this guy was her soul mate after spending a few hours with him where they basically didn't talk but hey apparently that's her thing. This is definitely more of a suggestive romance than anything spicy or erotic and the whole thing is over fairly quickly with the usual romance misunderstanding causing the characters to break up only to end in a song so there you go.