Review: Could have been outstanding, but needs a better Beta/Editor
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 14, 2013
This book was a lot of fun. I loved the author's voice/dialogue, and her creation of plot and characterization. I chuckled out loud at more than a a few of her snarks and phrases. Everyone in the book was a lot of fun to read about, and that included secondary characters as well.The only problem with this book was the lack of editing that it went through. It was enough that I really would have rated this a3.5 rather than a 4.0. It was enough to slow the flow of the reading. Periods were placed where a comma should have been, and paragraphs not in the proper place so it threw off the perception of who was speaking and about what. Sometimes there were was one paragraph that should have been broken up into two or even three paragraphs. It was to the point where a couple of times I had to go back, re-read, and then determine who or what was the subject. If a good Beta or Editor got their hands on this it could have been phenomenal.Will I read more in the series? Not too sure. Bad editing really sits in my craw, and in this case it drove me nuts as I really liked this story, and alot! I just spent way too much time having to re-jumble things in my head as I read.