Review: What happened to this book? Bad language explicit sex and bad editing
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 10 18, 2012
Talk about disappointment in a book. I was sad and disgusted that this book turned into what it did. The F- bomb was dropped so much I literally skimmed the book just to get to the ending. Why did the sex have to be thrown in what was supposed to be a young adult novel. This was and should have been marked as mature young adult. I love a good passionate love story but I don't want to be in someone's bedroom. Pagan was described as special with a pure special soul. Why let her change in this book and lower her standards. And her best friend with Matt's soul who was given another chance- really did the author have to go that direction with them too. I couldn't really read much of this book because of language and sex. This book was also poorly edited- at least the pages I actually read were. I will never read another book by this author as it looks like she is really headed to smut city with her next ones. Also not cool to put a preview of a mature book at the back of what was supposed to be a young adult book.I didn't read the preview but I did read the disclaimer about the content. Ugh- I turned all three books back to Amazon for a refund. There are too many wonderful passionate love stories out there to read without cringing every time you turn the page. There are still many people out there just like me who don't want or need more versions of 50 shades. I guess its a way to sell books but not to me. This author has gone a different way and not a good one from her sweet love story "Breathe". Very sad with her talent.