Review: good story..needs an epilouge
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 24, 2013
This was a cute short story.  I fell in love with Ben and his ability to provide unconditional love.  I love a man with integrity and not a lot of baggage.  His ability to build Amelia's self esteem was priceless and warmed my heart.  It took me sometime to warm up to Amelia, she did not come across as very warm but I understood her fear due to the terrible tragedy she had to endure.  Once Amelia let her guard down something beautiful develops.The story needed more development; it would have been nice to read more about the budding friendship.  I was shocked when Ben said "I love you".  I suspect if there had been more build up and a bit more tension I would not have been surprised.  The ending left a lot to be desired; just when these two seem to find their rhythm the story ended abruptly.The premise was good and the story held a great deal of promise that I would love to see finished in a full length novel of this story.