Review: Waste of tome and money
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 2, 2014
I was sucked in by the interesting sample. When I started reading the story, it was only slightly less basic than "See Spot run."  Except this author would have written "See, Spot run." There are commas where they don't belong and sentences with missing commas. Then there's prose such as "He moved with humanly speed."(I presume she meant inhuman speed.) The entire story is so simplistic it's funny.