Review: Intriguing story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2012
I didn't know this was the first chapters of a larger book. I found it intriguing and wanted more. The story line is fast paced and keeps you wanting to know what happened next. I haven't purchased the full book because I found the writing and wording to be a little clumsy. It is fine for a short story, but I'm not sure I could do a whole book.