Review: Ehhh!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 29, 2012
The first half was pretty good, but after that I had a hard time staying focused--I think that might be true of the author as well. Overall good writing, but the editing was VERY weak, Cut and paste errors that left sentences without, or with mysterious meanings. I think Ryan accepted the challenge to write this story, but was not really up to the task. I don't know that I could have done any better. I only paid .99 cents for this full length novel, so the monetary investment was negligible, but the time--too valuable to waste--sorry I did.