Review: Where's my prince?
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2012
What I loved about this novel was that the lead characters were well-developed. They had their back stories and personalities which were clearly reflected within the story. They were believable and thus able to easily engage a reader. I also like the romance which felt right, not forced, so that there's a feeling of the inevitable taking place when events unfold in the story.That being said, it was badly written. The narration was amateurish and stilted at times in huge portions of the book, AND TYPOS LIKE WHOA! Major stumbling block for readers. In some crucial parts - like the one where they each realize they had fallen in love - so that the reader is left wondering, 'really? how do you suppose you came to that conclusion?' It's like the writer is trying to dictate the thoughts and feelings of the character to the reader instead of making them feel it.That being said, the author has a huge potential to be one of those authors the romance world constantly buzzes about, and this could even be the story to do it for her, but it needs some serious revision and proofreading.