Review: Could have been a good one
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 25, 2011
I thought there was something to this, but as I noticed there were only a few pages left, I suspected it was going nowhere; and i suspected coreectly.  It was like the author couldn't think of anything more to add, so he just ended it right smack at the point where there should be more.  I felt like a teacher looking at the exam of a student who was really doing very well but he suddenly realized there was no more time, so whatever.  It's a pity as I thought it would have been a very good story.