Review: More editing needed
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 24, 2013
This story had good bones. The potential was there and the storyline and characters were interesting. The issue was with editing/proofreading and structure for lack of a better term. There were too many instances of the incorrect spelling (homonyms and homophones being used incorrectly) as well as a lack of punctuation or clear demarcation between sections leading to confusion about who is talking or thinking what. With some work this could become a much better book. For now I don't know that I would recommend it as I found it jarring and frustrating to get past the errors to get to the actual story