Review: Sweet
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 19, 2013
It was quite a sweet story and I'm not sorry I bought it for an afternoon's read. Made a change to have a male Cinderella, but his protests of not being good enough began to wear a bit thin three quarters of the way through. Also, that she somehow managed to happen upon her husband in the brothel was iffy and not really believable. It was too contrived. I think the author's omission of tying up a couple of loose ends was annoying. Who was the boy in the burning factory and why was the heroine's friend out of sorts--there was a lot of buildup to that and then no answer--not good. Thankfully there were very few grammatical or typo errors, which is always a plus in my opinion. I feel the book lacked fleshing out.No pun intended, because the sex scenes were original, but not tasteful when it came to the use of words for sexual organs. For me they were crude and repetitive. Maybe the author should have consulted a thesaurus for a little variation, but at least it wasn't all throbbing members or petals of pleasure :-)