Review: Tweenie
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 24, 2011
This series appears to be aimed at preteens.  The character interaction is simplistic in the extreme. The physics are impossible until the psychics are fully developed.  The laws of motion do not apply in his universe.  Everybody loves everybody, there is no subterfuge and the plot is linear and predictable.  I would like the author to work on the aforementioned items.  He is also in dire need of a proof reader.  Misspellings and grammar problems seem to get worse as I work through the series and become a distraction.  Note to author:  It is WORST case scenario, not WORSE case scenario, you need to research the distinction.  A decent read, I will complete the series.  Hopefully this author can develop.