Review: Just Didn't Like It
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 6, 2014
This story started with a promising beginning.  By the end of the first chapter I was on my way to buying the next installment and then she ruined it.  I was okay with grammatical errors - not happy, but they weren't completely jarring.However, the main characters' inner dialogs, the switching back and forth between the hero and heroine, and the cheesy conversation completely changed my mind.  The kissing and sex scene was lifeless and ridiculous.  I didn't feel a connection between any of the characters. Maybe it gets better in subsequent installments, but I'm just not convinced enough to pay hard earned money to find out.