Review: interesting, but needs work
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 22, 2013
While I appreciate that the story was written for Hurricane Sandy relief (charity), it isn't very well developed. It has a really interesting premise, a crippled Phoenix falling in love with an scarred human, but the writing is rough. There are a number of misused words and the plot seems really rushed. I did really like both male leads, though I didn't think the family deserved the easy forgiveness and unearned happy ending. With a little work this could be really good though. I hope the author (who I suspect is quite young) puts the time and effort into a 2nd edition.