Review: Good story line
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 25, 2013
This had to be written with a voice recognition program for typing.  There is no other way you would get this many wrong words that sound similar, but don't mean quite the same thing.  Multitude of errors, but if you can get by that it is an enjoyable story.A good proofreader would have improved the readability 300%.But with all that, I really enjoyed the story.  Light reading, yes.  Not David Weber, John Ringo, or Eric Flint to name just a few, but the author told a good story.I would buy another story from the same author as long it is priced similar to this one or he gets a proofreader to improve readability.