Review: good but unreal
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 21, 2013
I have no qualms with the writing. Actually, I found it pretty good. The dialogue was fine, the characters were alright. It was just the lead up to sex. The transition (if there even was one) was so abrupt and quick, I wasn't sure what happened.I mean, I get it. Moon does weird stuff to werewolves, but up until the point (at night mind you) he was fine. Then two seconds later and it's like "NEED YOU NOW!" Really?I just glossed over the sex because, well, I wasn't interested as much. It was kind if boring to be honest. But I read a lot of erotica, so that's just me.Overall it could have been better with a little more characterization (but I understand it's short) and transition scenes. The almost rape scene was also a little too much for me. Simply because I was like really? With all the people in the club, cramped full, horny and drunk, you want the willowy human?But whatever. I would still recommend it for a quick read if you're bored. .