Review: Good Short Story Could Be Even Better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 13, 2012
This is a good short story about two hearts who have been burned before, struggling with the heat of desire and new found love. Can Vanessa and Marcelo trust each other enough to make a commitment after building their romance over the internet and telephone? Marcelo forces a meeting to find out if it is real. The plot is interesting, and I would have liked to have read it as a full length novel. It still has some room for editing, grammatical errors and typos, but the romance and emotions of the story were strongly conveyed. The love scenes were very well done, and discovering the real Marcelo at the conclusion was a nice surprise.This book was given to me for free in exchange for a review.