Review: No build in the relationship
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2012
This is a very short story.  I read in less then a hour.  I don't mind that but the buyer should be aware that you are getting a very short story for your money.I liked the concept.  The main characters are stranded on the side of the road, trying to find their way into town together.  The problem is there is not transition between being annoyed with one another and wow your so hot.  There is no build in their "relationship"  They go from gripping and being annoyed with one another to oh look a cabin, wow and a bed.  There needed to be more of a build between the two characters.If you like a hot read, this book will provide that but if you are looking for any kind of realistic build in the relationship and plot, probably not the book for you.