Review: Excellent menage but other aspects are weak
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 22, 2011
Others have described this book,  it really is a genuine ménage book.  I really did like the three personalities, which were distinct and clear,  you were never confused about who was speaking or what was going on. Also,  you felt that if anyone left,  the pair remaining would be weakened,  which rarely happens in other ménage books I read.  So full points there.Spoilers Ahead...  If you don't want to know more,  stop now...This is a long book - 10,000 plus locations.  But what I want is tighter editing.  I didn't actually believe or care about the insane politician plot,  which made no sense.  I think there could have been other explanations for Luke's reticence and trust issues without making his father psychotic.  And to seriously suggest that a presidential candidate could have a gay son that no one knew about.. it requires too great a suspension of disbelief.I liked the personalities,  but the writing didn't sing.  Also, they had so much sex,  so often,  it just began to wear me down.  So while I believed the relationship dynamics,  I wish the other aspects could have been tightened.