Review: Gooey sweet M/M short story that packs an important message but fails at the delivery
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 31, 2012
ONE & A HALF STARS-- The plot and idea was very original, the execution was weak. The story tried to make a stand against homophobia and racism which is always great but Riley (on of the MC) could have easily been confused as a woman. And the alludes to "stuff" when describing condoms and lubrication didn't help either. Also the 'country' talk of the supposed Texas locals was laid a bit too thick.And I loathe extraneous crying, albeit from men or women.READERS: Be prepared for a lot of tears and "stuff".