Review: One star for original characters but that's about it
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 26, 2014
Woefully under-developed because it was a short story, the author lacks the authority of prose to fill in the gaps and paint the story.  Usage of abbreviations and colloquial terms was almost painful to read.  The relationship between the two leads seemed forced and though they were sympathetic characters, by the end of the tale you feel yourself not caring if one of them had fallen into a frozen lake and died.