Review: The revised edition review
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2013
When I first read Lord Fool, I thought it an ok novella/short story. But, was quite disappointed with the errors in spelling, editing and the ending being so abrupt.That said, Ms. Muir has done something never heard of before, by me or an Amazon Rep I spoke to. She took our reviews to heart and rewrote the story. I did not find any errors and the ending was extended and very satisfying. To date, I have read the new story twice and can not remember how or what in detail I disliked in the first writing.This is a sweet, clean tale of a poor woman that is being shamed by her money hungry step-father. Hate, to give full spoilers but to say he gets his just rewards is an understatement. He gets the justice he deserves. And the highest bidder for Miss "Aphrodite's" virtue is a huge surprise I did not see coming.Lord Fool turns out to be anything but. He is definitely my definition of hero. His actions in the fire, actually both fires, are tear jerking. I bit my nails to the quick praying that all would turn out right in the end. So much I wish to say but would spoil the short tale.Ms. Muir has packed quite an intense tale into a short space. A feat that is difficult but well done. It is quite a sweet and honorable tale with some very funny happenings. I think the duel was one of my favorite scenes or maybe the robbers. And there are definite twists as to whom to really trust.  Also, I normally do not continue reading samples of coming books. However, I went straight into the excerpt of the Blood for Ink and purchased it immediately after.An offside note, due to a Kindle issues downloading the new version, I had to contact CS at Amazon. While working on the problem I explained what the author had done, and the Rep said he had never heard of an author taking time to listen to the reviews. I must say this is definitely a change from the reaction of some authors.Please, if you have this book, download the free updated version. I do not believe you will be disappointed.