Review: platypire review
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 19, 2014
The message of this story was a good one, but it's execution wasn't done in a way that was easy for young children to understand.  There were lots of grammar mistakes too, which made it difficult to read to my child.  The formatting also needs work.  The pictures and text didn't fit well together.  Lastly, the pictures were not bad but they distracted from the story is a bad way.  I don't think we will be reading this one again unless these issues are corrected.