Review: Good character development, needs more science
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 30, 2014
The characters are fairly well developed, but a little cliched at times. I would like to see more technical explanations of the science involved with the drive and weapons systems to more fully develop the whole universe encompassed by the storyline.And did anyone proofread this before publication? I kept having to stop and re-read sections that had improper punctuation, word tense, misspelled words, incorrect or missing capitalization, incorrect character names, etc.