Review: Fun story, great ideas and development!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 09 12, 2012
I'll keep this short...This is a great story with a great premise. It's well written, well developed and has characters that are easy to grab on to and identify with. Even the author bio was fun.If there is a negative it's the editing. Punctuation, word substitutions... Lots of "there" instead of "their", things like that. Here and here it would hardly even be noticeable but it's everywhere, on every page. Those two issues made reading a little slow in some places because I would somehow confuse context.Buy it, read it, enjoy it. I'm looking forward to the next one.