Review: Where do I send my bill?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 12, 2012
I could not get into the story because a slew of spelling and grammar errors kept breaking my reading concentration. Errors started on the first page of the first chapter and just kept coming line after line after line. When I caught myself counting errors, I knew I had problems. When the count reached 35 errors by the end of chapter three, I admitted to myself that I had to give up on the book.Example:"Whipping(sic) her hands on the apron SHE wore, Luis turned to face HIS daughter as she slid onto the stool next to him."Who did what, now?The author uses ellipses generously, often in place of commas and even in conjunction with other punctuation marks. As a writer... who loves ellipses herself... you can understand that I'm loathe to complain about them... but you get my point.I liked the premise, and the story itself may be great, but the chances that I'll complete it as it is, are not high.  I can't enjoy a book that keeps throwing me into editor mode-- not when I'm reading for fun.  After all the notes and highlights I made on the ebook, I felt like i should be charging for my time.I would highly recommend that the author edit and republish the ebook version of this story.I see lots of good reviews for the book, here and on Goodreads and I'd love to get to the story, but I can't.