Review: Good Read, Unintentional Laughable Moments
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 11, 2014
This story was good, no denying that.  Why it wasn't great has to do with the unintentional laughable moments.Misplaced commas.Lost letters.Added words.And the best laughs, the improper placement of noun phrases.Unfortunately, the areas of all these errors were not meant to be funny.  They constantly jerked me out of the story and I had to find some humor in them or I would not have finished the book at all.If Ms. Kennedy works on her writing, I think she'll go far.