Review: Very rushed with so much potential!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 28, 2013
I am very disappointed in this book, because it has so much potential that didn't get fulfilled. The storyline is good, but the book was completely rushed, with a lot of unanswered questions. For one, it didn't give any background information on any of the characters, which most successful books have. For two, so many grammatical errors; Was an editor even involved? Three, there was no type of action, or anything to support the title of the book. With the name "Dangerously in love" I would think the girl would be doing some type of physical harm or killing. I mean yea a life was lost, but it was nothing she actual did to the person. She was a young girl who just turned 18, who believes she is in love with a older drug dealer whom she had a crush on for many years. Even BEFORE having sex with him...I'm sorry "giving her virginity" to him, she would get pissed off if she saw or knew him to talk to another chick.  Then once the "sex" was over, she automatically assumed they were exclusive. Then some stuff was unrealistic, like how many older mature men, would continue to give his time to a young minded 18 year old, who clearly is psycho? Most guys I know would say "this *bleep* is crazy, I'm not messing with her.Also a huge mistake the author made, earlier in the story. The judge gave dalanie house arrest upon release from jail;but where was the house arrest? House arrest is when you are confined to the house for a certain amount of time, and with an ankle monitor on the person at ALL TIME, to alert the authorities if the person violates the restriction. Soon as he was released, he was out and about house to house, place to place as if he wasn't even on house arrest, and nobody has mentioned it. Then the chapters were so freaking short, that atleast 3 of the authors "chapters" could have been made into one. This chick wasn't "dangerously in love" she was a mentally unstable women, that had a crazy obsession with someone. She needs to be locked up in a mental institution for being psycho. And wtf is up with the rushed abrupt ending? The book coming to an end was totally unexpecting, because I'm thinking the book was actually just getting started. Nothing really happened in the book, and wasn't even long enough to call it a whole book, for it to be a part too. The writer clearly has skills, and so much potential, but she has to let her writing skills grow before she releases another book. I have read short stories, but this story was short, short, short smh. I will still purchase part two, to see what happens, and if some real action and events happen to live up to its title!