Review: Decent Short Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 11, 2011
This story had a good premise and I liked the characters.  It was a little unrealistic that she did not know he was a famous ball player for such a long period of time.  Even people who do not follow sports know who some of the players are especially if one is an MVP.  This lost a stars for the unrealistic aspect.The story was short and greatly condensed but it was a comnplete story.  It felt slightly rushed and if it had been longer, maybe we would have gotten to know the characters and some of the people in their lives better but I did not think anything major was missing from the story being told.  Took away a star because story felt a little rushed.