Review: OK, but should have been proofread
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 15, 2012
I enjoyed reading this book. It was a relatively quick read, however there were too many grammatical errors that just got in the way of this being a better book. As I was reading, every time there was an error I pointed it out and it just ruined my reading. I did like the way that the characters were developed and the story was interesting. Though I think that the hero fell in love a little too quickly and the heroine was just too whiny about the fact that she was his mate. She was also very selfish and the fact that for someone that was so smart she was incredibly dense in the fact that he was not asking her to rush into anything, that he was willing to wait to let her get used to the idea and make the her own decisions. I really did not like the fact that she wanted someone else to make the decisions for her. I really felt bad for the hero and what he had to go through because of the heroine.Though I really did like how patient he was with her. But, overall, it was a good story.