Review: The story held good premise, but the typos and spelling mistakes let the author down.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 8, 2013
This was an interesting concept, but the author's disregard of the editing process was horrendous.  So many errors, I don't think more than a couple ofPages went past before I came across another mistake.  And the author used far too many exclamation marks, which distracted from the overall reading process.  Story-wise, it was a good idea, but I felt the women characters glossed over what they were experiencing far too much, making it unrealistic to believe they could be assaulted and just carry on with their lives regardless.  Unfortunately, this was a good idea which sadly, didn't reach it's full potential.