Review: not bad, but
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 31, 2014
it was somewhat hard to read due to formatting issues - like really really bad.  The story was a quick read, it was ok; luckily it was free.  I probably would have bought it based on the initial write-up, but that write-up waxed poetic.  I probably would have given it a 4, if it flowed more smoothly.