Review: good read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 14, 2014
I was given this short story in exchange for an honest review.I liked the story and the premise it was based on.  I just think the characters could have been more developed - it would have added to the story.  It is a good mystery but has some grammatical and punctual errors. This may cause some people to have difficulty reading it, but would definitely like to read more from the author(s).