Review: Not Mina's Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 18, 2014
I was starting to get into Mina and Delgado just went in another directions. Maybe it's a set up for the next book. I guess I'll stick around to see.Note to Author: Good ideas but I think your writing would be more credible if you would be more descriptive. Read some good works of fiction and really start to compare your works to others. Not to imitate but simply to perfect your craft. I will continue to support but I expect to see growth. I hope to see progress. Good Luck! Keep at it!