Review: Stay away grammar police.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 4, 2013
Let me start with the positives: nice story concept. The characters seem interesting.The negatives however outweigh the positives. This book should have never been published without major editing  and proofreading completed. There is not consistent paragraph structure and its written in all capital letters.The storyline might have been interesting if the reader did not have to spend time overlooking grammar errors, run on sentences and poor sentence structure. The only pages that is error free are the title page and copyright disclaimer pages.This book is as waste of money and hampered my reading enjoyment. If I could have given this book zero stars I would because of the misuse of the English language. I felt obligated to write and warn others about this "book".I hope that Rika Lewis will learn to use the English language correctly in the future. Rika, a writer needs to pick if they would like the story told in first person or third person, by sticking with one style consistently throughout the story a reader will engage and look forward to continuing the saga. In the future please stick with keeping your characters name consistent throughout the entire book (ie. Karrick name was changed to Salir for a majority of the book). Please invest in an editor, proofreader and think about actually getting a publisher who only accepts quality work. Frankly, I find myself asking if this book was published by a family member, close friend or lover. The caliber of  writing doesn't even show signs of remedial English skills.This book could have received 5 stars if the writer used a proofreader, a good editor and the publisher demanded a minimum degree of consistency with word choices.