Review: Thirty Seconds Too Long
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 2, 2013
This story started out with a very interesting premise. The end of the world with good guys vs bad guys.It started to go south for me when everyone began getting super powers. One character can heal, another can control minds and still another can change himself into a wolf, a mouse, a horse and an elephant.Then there are the alien angels? Overlords? Manipulators? It was never really explained well.The ending was very confusing. It is a 'what the...' type ending.I do have to say that the characters seemed real and entirely human. The writing is descriptive and quite good.I would tell the author that a spell checker is not a proof reader.There were sentences with extra words, wrong synonyms and many that made no sense whatsoever. Proof read then do it again and again. If you can't do that have others do it for you. It's well worth it and makes the story look like someone other than a fourteen year old wrote it.