Review: poor attempt
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 7, 2012
While I usually like lengthy novels, I must say I'm glad this one wasn't longer than it's (approx) 20,000 words. It was tough to get through. I found the premise that a 27 year old who has been fighting 47-odd suitors off for 8-10 years would fall for a man and be willing to marry him in less than two days of knowing him a little inconsistant with her character. The premise of the story and the basic plot was good, but I would have enjoyed it a little more had it been longer and better thought out.  And the sexual tension fell completely flat for me - I didn't feel it at all. This has the feel of a first or second draft that isn't quite ready for publication. With some revisions and editing this has the potential to be good but didn't quite hit the mark for me.