Review: Rose, Virginia, is in the USA
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 27, 2014
Nothing really new here.  The story sounds like less well edited Dana Marie Bell. My biggest complaint,though, is that U.K. spelling and word usage detracts from the U.S. setting.  "Whilst" is not a common term in the U.S. Offense, not offence.  There are many such minor word differences that pull the reader out of the story. Overall the writing is pretty good, but the author needs to Americanize her writing if she wants her stories to flow better.