Review: Character Connections
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 17, 2014
So far, it's been difficult to connect with the characters. Even though the story starts with an antecedent mugging, there is no real connection or result of the event. This might have been one way to better connect with the reader. Instead, it leaves the reader with a Ken and Barbie feeling,  especially with the reference to Ken's running pants. I'm undecided if will read further.