Review: In Love With My Best Friend
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 8, 2014
Improvements noted in sentence structure and content. Few typographical errors remain. Still to many "I" statements. Thanks for few profane words. Plot is believable,but somewhat melodramatic.  Male lead is a bit weak in  comparison to female. I can see and feel through the female quite a bit, but not for the male. I didn't keep the first version. I will keep this version.