Review: little story, much sex - correctly billed as erotica
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2012
This starts out as a decent short story, there is some character development before the sex starts.  However, in a way, this detracts, since the characters as I understood them would never have fallen in love, and/or into bed, so quickly.  Even a couple of sentences to mention the passing of time would have helped.  Good little time waster though, correctly billed as erotica rather than romance.