Review: Good in theory, poor in execution
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 14, 2011
Characters are two dimensional (that's being generous) and inconsistent. Characters are also extremely unrealistic. If this is due to the phenomena of people writing a book like they would if it were a script, this would be a horrible box office flop, or most likely a really bad straight-to-dvd with no cult following.Parts of story *of course every author just HAS to put in a "twist"* are thrown in pointlessly ("We have a great revelation to tell you! It has nothing to do with the story, but we'll talk about it for 5 pages incoherently and unrealistically!"). Little side bits not very well developed and transitions between scenes are painful. Think Old Spice commercial. No offense to Old Spice Guy.Basically it just boils down to really bad writing and not being able to add all the elements together in a way that gives a good cohesive story. It goes from being interesting (originally interesting premise) to being not cared about at all.