Review: Tons of mistakes! Drove me to distraction
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 24, 2013
First of all, the story is decent, but someone really needs to pay an editor. Plus the author needs to learn a lot more of the English language, grammar, syntax, proper spelling and vocabulary! Lots of terrible, annoying, distracting mistakes with sentences that make no sense where the author was trying to be clever or creative but just threw words together in awful sentences or phrases.  Author does not know the difference between passed and past. Does not know how to pair tenses (past, present, etc.) and sometimes plural use and pronouns are mixed up.The two families being the author's criminal organization was a bit too far fetched. However, reading some of the details of trafficking the protagonist fit with many contemporary and current stories about domestic sex trafficking and abuse cases. This was admirable. Please, hire an editor. Take some advanced English, writing, creative writing courses. Too many works on Amazon are chock full of ridiculous mistakes with no business being for sale without some editorial assistance. Pick someone with a critical mind please, not just your supportive friends and family. Credible details are important. Proper writing is important especially if you're asking for money.