Review: Enticing mystery, enchanting romance, needs more editing.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 1, 2014
I found this story to be well told, and the characters to be believable and interesting. I love a good mystery, and felt that the author did a good job of not revealing the killer until the end of the story.I was stopped numerous times by editing fails.wrong word used: "ions" instead of "eons", "pommeled" instead of "pummeled", "her" instead of "he", "coincident" instead of coincidence", "on night" instead of "one night"extra words in sentences:"as if he'd been struck HIM with a stick"; "people SHE who seemed to care about her"I can still recommend this gripping mystery story.