Review: Intense but somehow still lacking...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 1, 2014
The beginning was intense... the middle had me in tears but at some points the story felt rushed. I think the author could easily have added a few more pages to fully develop the story. Some parts where Allyn is shouting at the world & then sort of feels healed afterwards was too clitché. To fall in love within 2 months & actually say those words was too rushed. I think she should have acknowledged that there was indeed some feelings there but the relationship should have been developed further. I missed seeing Faith's reaction to finding out about Michael.... the coincidence was a tad too much. It didn't make sense nor did it add much to the story. All in all this story had great potential. It certainly gripped me emotionally, so 3 stars.