Review: grammar, spelling, text
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 24, 2014
An excellent story line.BUT...the author obviously has no one proof read his works. If he does, he should fire them, i.e., "then = than, woken up instead of awakened. He hasn't discovered the word "of". Many left out words. Come on Jeremy learn where commas go.Now, will I read more of his work? Yes, probably, because I have acclimated my mind to try to change the incorrect usage to the proper words, commas, etc.Why would I do this? Simply because I like the story line, and it's plausibility.BOTTOM LINE: This is not the most literate work I have ever read, but I like his theme...sometimes "might does make right", and sometimes you just "gotta'" help.If you can overlook the obvious language flaws in his works, and are not overly distracted by them, then I would recommend this series...at least the first 2.