Review: Mediocre and a HUGE waste of time!!
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 15, 2013
This book should be clearly advertised that it's a short story, a VERY over priced short story!Terrible writing style with all the "telling", and there was nothing sweetly erotic about it. I have no idea what the hell those other reviewers saw that I didn't.All this is a first time sex encounter written in first person from a character that was not very interesting at all, nor was the guy he hooks up with. Hell, you don't even get to KNOW the other guy. The author gives a brief run down about how he came to work at the gym in one very short paragraph!You're also told that they "hit it off" after a few months- I guess- of talking. The author couldn't be bothered I suppose to SHOW us how they developed a relationship. I guess her mind was on how much 2.99 would add up from suckers like me buying this crap story.Trust me...wait till it's free...and even then you will be wasting literally 30 min of your time reading this sorry excuse a story.