Review: Two storylines
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 2, 2013
First half very readable, last third or so, borderline okay. Lots of potential and many things I liked but the two storylines didn't work well together. I liked the main character but the 'romance' seemed superficial and inconsistent with the characters and the dialogue really needed some more polishing.The Border Patrol/police procedural part of the storyline worked quite well for me and seemed reasonably consistent. The Apache myth/storyline  seemed to too separate from the Border Patrol plot and the ending with the focus on a multi-tribe gathering felt awkward and contrived.I'd definitely try a second book if this becomes a series, hoping for a more cohesive plotline.