Review: Love the characters and the story line the editing was horrible!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 11, 2012
I love the characters and the story line!! However the just like part one the editing was horrible!!! My 1st grader could edit a book better than this. I don't like having to figure out what you mean and who's talking now and having to go back pages before to figure out wtf is happening. Paying .99 was a far stretch and I hope part 3 is released under TEAM BANKROLL SQUAD because if it's not then I'm not going to buy it...I'm gonna go and support the next book that is an official TEAM BANKROLL SQUAD Release presented by our favorite author David Weaver...her official @TBRS release of Duffel Bag Bitches on 12-18-12 and now that she's apart of the family I am sure her editing will be amazing!!!