Review: Bad editing mars a great story
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 28, 2013
I've enjoyed this series and was so looking forward to the book. I had to struggle to get through the beginning. I had to struggle to get through the book! Sentences made no sense...when I turned the page, the last sentence was dropped and it picked up somewhere else...characters are in two places at the same time...people teleporting all over with no explanation...and on and on throughout the book. I'm surprised as Ms. Geary is such a great writer. The entire book felt rushed. All these snafus caused a lot of frustration and seriously got in the way of the story. It's a shame because the story itself is a good one. I'm astonished by all of the 4 and 5 star reviews; I must be living in an alternate universe! That being said, I will definitely read future books by this author. I do love this series but someone made an awful mistake releasing this installment without proper formatting and editing. I can't believe I paid for this. It's a real shame, this book should've been a home run...