Review: A tiny little prelude
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 24, 2011
This is basically a novelette introducing one of the leading female characters in a much wider post-apocalyptic survivor saga which has seven main characters.Alexa leads a small group of six men, all completely devoted to her, as they struggle to survive the harsh terrain and mutations while searching for any survivors of the group calling itself "Safe Haven".They trek, they camp, they battle sand, wind, and mutants of various types before reaching the dead ocean, which apparently needs to be tackled next.Two things detract from the story - the lack of an ending and the need for a professional editor with a spell and grammar checker close at hand.A good concept at heart, but needs some work in the telling.Amanda Richards, October 24, 2011