Review: I have a problem with this....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 7, 2014
Ok, so I knew when I read this, that it was only the first part of a Novella (which I have a love/hate relationship with because I feel like authors are trying to wring more money out of me by dividing up ONE book into 5 - but that's a complaint for a different day).My main problem with this book is that the two supposed main characters don't even have a conversation until 69% into the book. And it's basically two clipped sentences in a bar. That's it. One whole part done, and we have one 5 minute conversation. Yes other things happen and yes a story is developing but no I don't even feel like the main story has even started and this book is done.The first part was free so I can't complain that I wasted my money, but I can say that even though this has the potential to be a real raw down and dirty emotional story, I won't be around to find out. I probably won't buy any other books in the series. I can read full books for $0.99 and I'm afraid to buy 15 minutes of reading and get nothing out of it, so I'm very skeptical about purchasing book 2.Maybe if one day you can buy all 5 novellas in one set for say $1-$3 - then yes, I'll definitely give it a read. If you like to torture yourself and keep buying a few chapters at a time - then you might enjoy this. Just a heads up - these aren't happy carefree characters, or a happy fun story. The two main characters have had their share of tragedy and the story is about their struggle to keep going despite what has happened to them.