Review: simplistic
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 16, 2014
This book was recommended by Amazon, the sample seemed interesting, and it was inexpensive, so I bought it.I was disappointed in the simplistic tone, as if the story were written for children. If it weren't for the explicit sex scenes, I'd say it was perfect for kids.The story is interesting enough. If I had read more in this series I might appreciate it more.It really needs an editor. It is infuriating to try to make sense of the dialog when the wrong character name is used. This occurred several times. Also, the author is inconsistent, even within one paragraph, about whether periods go inside (.") or outside (".) quotes. The correct answer in the US is inside. Finally, she made a hash of the spelling for hors d'oeuvres.