Review: Dissapointing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 9, 2014
Could be a good story if the author would use the names of his character instead of the words "The Latter" when talking about more then one character in the same  paragraph. Över and over he refers to someone as the "Latter" instead of using their names. At times I noticed it 3 and 4 times on the same page, to me it is very irritating. Also the end was at total let down, all through out the story the bad guy was one of the worst bad guys ever, killing people russling cattle and you name it and at the end the good guy and the bad guy shake hands and all is well..."PUKE" As bad as this guy was no way would anyone just shake hands and call it good. Come on get some writting imagination....