Review: Good story for Halloween
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 29, 2013
UPSIDE: You think the plot is pithy and motivations contrived, then the story redeems itself with an acceptable ending. I can see this ending in a horror movie, making the audience jump.DOWNSIDE: It felt rushed, particularly the ending, and word choice could have been improved, for instance in one place the smell, "violated her nostrils."Good Halloween story, even if execution could have been better. A quick read before bedtime, but not for those with frequent nightmares.