Review: Nice story, what About this Mistake
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2012
I enjoyed this very quick and predictable read, love at first sight, second in a series.  I find myself annoyed with a series where something changes or is forgotten between one book and another.  In the first book, this book's hero is nice but not too bright, brings his friend's ex girlfriend to visit when he himself offered his summer house for hero 1 to get away from it all.  A dumb plot device introduced to create the obligatory tension between the couple in book 1.  So that ruined him for me.  In book 2, this one, he starts out portrayed as not so nice but smart.  Anyway, the main blooper that jarred me is a scene where the main characters, heroine and hero so to speak, are saying goodbye and she thinks, I'm never going to see him again.  What about his vacation home, which is located on the small island she and her son and her friend, and his friend from book 1 live on?  If he visits the island he almost can't avoid her. Overall this doesn't spoil the story but hit wrong.  Finally, I'm tired of books where people don't seem to work for a living and have not two weeks but months to hang out.  What happened to the bookstore and play writing from book 1?  This made the characters interesting and ends up as a loose end in ths book.