Review: Vast improvement...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 18, 2013
I have now read both of Mrs. Lewis' books and I wanted to say that I did like both story lines and saw where she was trying to go with the story.  However, the thing that irritates me every time are the errors.  I know that you've said you are in need of an editor, but I would think that you have let someone else read the story before you had it published.  Thank you for not putting this book in ALL CAPS that was a vast improvement.  You also had actual paragraphs this go around, but with the constant name changes and narrative changes make it hard to know who is speaking.  You are improving and I would like to see what happens with your characters in both of your books, Finding Sweetness and Claiming His Mate.  Also, what might help is if you would make a list of your characters so that way you won't change their names midway through the book; you want to keep your readers invested in your characters, the name changes doesn't help with that.  Overall, I did really like the story and would like to see what happens.  I hope you find an editor soon.  Your cause that you stated that the proceeds of your book sales were going to is commendable and I would hate to see that stopped because of bad editing.  Much success to you and I hope to read more soon.