Review: Looking a bit more plot for this naughty girl
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 27, 2012
I've had this short story on my Kindle for awhile, it was a freebie. Thank you to Alexx Andria.Landry is the typical stereo type bored house wife who is cheating on her sexually boring husband when a night of steamy sex with Derrick her bi sexual-bestie, "who is a very interesting character by the way" ends up going bad at a club when they meet with a Dom and his submissive. The result is Landry is hired to be a secret sex agent the next morning(much as I want to believe this, I dont know we will see after I read book 2) The sex is steamy and it's very good writing but over all the plot needs more spice and storyline, to feel real. I hope that makes sense.I will say this after reading this first installment I will not pay $2.99 for a short story of 21 pages for parts 3,4 and 5, I believe the author needs to come down on the prices of each installment or put the entire series together for a reasonable price.