Review: Author was confused?
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 27, 2013
I'm not quite sure where to start.  The author gave the hero & heroine attitudes and language and ideas that didn't fit the story timeframe, era, or setting. It's bad enough the woman jumped on a train with two kids and went halfway across the country with two kids.  But to have this woman then aggressively asserting her marital rights in a time and place where "good women" behaved well within societal norms, well, that took the story too far.  And then to make it more laughable, the mother of two children was " too tight"  and suffered pain when having sex.  We're we supposed to picture her as virginal?  That was too much.  I quit reading.  Author, please do your historical research OR write a more contemporary novel.  Please.