Review: Somewhere between 2 and 3 stars...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2014
I've been wanting to read these books for a while. But with the reviews that have been posted for the book individually I was skeptical. Luckily the author bundled the first 3 and then they were available through the Amazon Lending Library. I feel like the lower ratings for this bundle and the books individually are more accurate than the high ratings.The book has potential for sure. Who doesn't love a hot, rich, tattooed, pierced, motorcycle riding alpha bad boy with a kinky side?!But the stories need some serious editing. The switching of POV was distracting with out some kind of symbol or title that it was changing and I often had to reread a few sentences before I realized what had happen. Spelling, run on sentences and paragraph formatting could also use some work. The only other thing that bothered me was the lack of flow, the story seemed forced. Especially with the sex scenes. I'm sure they should seem hot, but I just couldn't connect with the characters and feel the heat. It seemed monotone.Overall the book seemed like someones first attempt at writing with a good story idea that just fell short. And I'm glad that I didn't actually waste my money on it and got it for free.