Review: The Black Fortress
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 27, 2013
The Black Fortress by Jim Melvin is a good story, but it left me wanting. I wanted more descriptions. I wanted more information about the characters. I wanted more about the surroundings. I wanted more interaction between characters. I kind of got the feeling that the story was rushed. It seemed like the author had so many great ideas that he wanted to get down on paper that he neglected some of the art of the story, the details. This short story would make a great novel if those details were added.