Review: It was ok. It needed another page, or an epilogue.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 10, 2013
This was a nice short story with a few flaws.The good: loved the characters, even the secondary ones. For such a short story, they were well fleshed out.  The plot was a variation of cinderella, but cute enough to be ok. I did enjoy reading it.The bad: abrupt ending, no real payoff for the reader. If there was even one more page or an epilogue, I would have given it 4 stars. There is also one scene in the book that I did not like. The couple has sex in the conservatory the first time they meet, without even knowing each others names. It was within minutes of knowing each other. That was not ok in that time period, it shouldn't be ok now. I don't find that sexy, its skanky. For this book, I tried to overlook it, because the rest of the story has a more sweet tone.Overall: Cute story, very quick read. I got it free on amazon special, it was worth reading.