Review: needs less male crying...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 06 12, 2014
Male lead cried way to often...badasses don't cry that much. Once, maybe twice...no, only once would i have accepted it but it got irritating after 2. I couldn't accept his man card after the third time. It also got long winded on unimportant parts, I'm all for joking around and character camaraderie but some of that stuff took up way to much ink. It distracts from the main story too much and too often. I see promise in the series so I'll give it a continued shot as long as the author improves.