Review: Not fast paced enough
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 03 6, 2012
I struggled to finish this novel. Half way through, I almost stopped reading it. The second half of the story is much better than the first. There just wasn't enough action to keep the story moving along. I even found myself growing bored during the sex scenes. This could have been a much better story if it were shorter. I never thought I'd feel that way since I tend to like epics much of the time. There were at least two instances of head hopping, which can get frustating for the reader.Morgan had a neglected childhood, but it wasn't bad enough to give him some of the internal struggles he had. This was a mismatched pair. Monica needed a even tempered, non-threatening kind of guy. Morgan was way too domineering for someone who had been in an abusive relationship. I always try to look for something good in every book I read, but I just had a hard time with this one.