Review: Ridiculous
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 24, 2013
This is the second story that I've read by Kevay (Best Night Ever, one of the most terrifying erotic stories I've ever read, is the other).  It's better, but still not all that great.Rose is driving away from her life with her terrible boyfriend when she picks up a hitchhiker, Heath.  They are immediately attracted to each other and, after talking about his ex for a "couple of hours" (what a turn-on, am I right, ladies?), they decide to check into a hotel and see where the night takes them.  So far, not so terrible, if not awesome.  The night in the hotel is kind of sketchy (although this story skips some of the stomach-churning details that made "Best Night Ever" so traumatic it still includes some details that didn't need to be there -- like, can we just assume they cleaned the vibrator between using in different orifices without being explicitly told?), but fairly standard for erotic fiction.The ending is a bit of silly fairy tale fluff.