Review: Excellent story, very well told, but hampered by editing and formatting issues
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2014
I hate not being able to give this book four stars, which it the rating I think it deserves based on the story itself.  The pacing is superb, to the point where I spotted one or two nagging storyline issues and forget them one or two pages later.  I may not have agreed with the choice of O’s actions at a few points, but the resolution of those choices was reasonable and satisfying in each case.  Not what I would have done, or think is reasonable, but it worked out.My issue is with the editing and formatting.  I tried the Kindle version on three different readers and in all cases the text flow didn’t work correctly.  In addition, page numbers appeared in the story text, adding to the difficulty I had actually reading the story.  I did spot several issues a good editor would have fixed.If these issues were addressed, this would be a solid four, possibly a five if the story had a fair chance to draw me in as deeply as I’d like.