Review: Enjoyable short story
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 07 2, 2013
Yes, it IS a short story,but an excellent one.  Although I would enjoy reading more about the characters, I felt there was a recognizable end point to the story.  Unlike other reviewers, I didn't feel short changed or cheated by the ending.  This story was on my Kindle for a while, and I intentionally started reading it when I was crunched for time, so a short story was perfect.  I would give more credence to the negative reviews if they were focused on content rather than length.  Get real, readers!  It is admittedly a SHORT STORY, and a FREE one at that! Don't read the preview of the author's upcoming book if you find it objectionable,and don't base your review of this story on the fact that the teaser is included.