Review: Started out great but fizzled
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 02 27, 2014
I really did like the first story. Definitely my favorite of the group. The second one I did lose interest in, and the third one was somewhere in between.  I did enjoy the strong female characters and the strong male characters as well. The editing needs some major help. Seeing the word "staid" instead of "stayed" used over and over drove me nuts.  Then there was the switch from first to third person in the same sentence that happened more frequently in the second and third story. I hate to have to stop mid sentence to try and figure out what was being said, but I had to do that several times.  I loved the idea for the story. The heat between the characters didn't sizzle like I hoped it would, but the stories were still good and yes, I would read a book written about Kel, the fourth brother.