Review: No, no
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 11 16, 2012
This free short story just didn't do it for me. I have read my share of short erotica stories and this one does not top the list... at all.It begins with a husband and wife, Damien and Jenny, who are looking online for another woman to sleep with them or at least to help them in their newly married life. They find this woman online, tell her to come over, pay her to have sex with them while teaching them, and then she leaves.First of all, why would a newly married couple need to add some spice up their love life? They just got married! Secondly, the dialogue and sex was horrible. This lady did not teach me any new things about sex that a 14 year old didn't know already. IF I were the couple, I would ask for my money back. It was just not a good read and I do not recommend. Thank goodness it was free.