Review: really bad editing, cliches galore, forced myself to read half the book hoping it would improve...which didn't happen
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2014
I tried to overlook the character name changes that appeared on the same page Lucy became Annie and morphed back to Lucy in the next paragraph...gave up when the male character Jack said to Lucy ...I know you better than you realize...and her reply...Is that supposed to make me feel better?...followed by his response...Is it working?  BTW:  please look up appropriate use for the apostophe...