Review: Very good read!
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 04 22, 2013
This is a must read. It evokes an emotional response. Characters are VERY well drawn, and they have consistent personalities throughout the story. It was very well edited, and very few errors. Actually, only one chapter, a bit past midway in the story, had errors. Besides one time where the main character referred to her hair as "tresses", there was a mix up with who was addressing whom. It made me stop and re-read, but did NOT interrupt the flow of the story. Do NOT skip this chapter.I did get tired of all the times the main character broke down and cried, but must admit that is the most likely case scenario to her situation. The story deals with a woman coming out of an abusive situation. Its handled tastefully and gives the reader a true to life understanding of such situations. The main characters physical size is a surprise, in a good way. BBW is not apt enough.Heat factor: not much til the last 25% percent of the story. And then its jalapeño hot. As for the "dom" in the title, its mild and not disruptive to the story.Something to note: I highly dislike anything written in first person.  This story is such. It is also written by chapter from all three characters point of view. Its not hard to follow, but it took a little getting used to.I have never read a story that was written quite this way.  It was first person, but it was also "kind of" a narrative.  Again, I got used to it.I so seldom give 5 stars, and as you can tell, I dont hold any of my preferences against a well written story.