Review: so bad it hurt
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 17, 2012
Who in the world thought this was good? I think maybe the authors close friends got on here n did some reviews or sad to say, readers who know nothing of good writing.  Nothing!!!! I wouldnt even want a friend to read this if i wrote it! N to say I was not looking for a mind blower here but some intense eroctica...well this was plain bad! Written in short sentences, like a primate or 3rd grader wrote it. Worst off I could of written this on an off day, fuled up on coffee, n little sleep.  Clearly writing isn't my day job so HELLO this sucked. If you are looking for some hot Alpha action this is not the book. Its honestly more embarrassing then anything...u like it here? No don't. Which way u like it. No please don't. How you do it....ugh! Really dude??? Anywho...if its free check it out but not even one buck is worth it.