Review: this has to be one of the worsts endings ever...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 13, 2012
The story had potential - I liked "hercules" and "aphrodite" from their first conversation and liked their obvious chemistry. But what was that rushed, confusing and unsatisfying ending? The story need to be fleshed out more and I wouldnt really called this a novella - more of a short story. It could have been so good had the author taken the time to really think about where to take this story and how to go about it. Sadly, its just a great big disappointment.UPDATE: 03/26/13 I re downloaded since a new revised version was made and its way better. Still a rushed ending but a lot more satisfying than I remembered. This ending is no longer one of the worst.... I first gave it 2.5 stars, now with the revisions I give it a 3.5.