Review: Synopsis was the best part of the book.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 22, 2014
I can't say I was surprised by how bored I was as I made myself read this. Sorry, this needs to be revised, seriously. My first clue was that I skipped parts in the sample read. But it was .99 for 96 pages. The only best, good, sexy part of the entire book was when she first laid eyes on the guy. Warning this is a 2 parter, I like 2 partners, unlike other readers... but the first part was soooo boring! Argh! I was like 'this is going to get better...' but it didn't, damn! Well, GD if you consider a revising this, contact me or check out literotica editors, they're free and really good at what they do. This had a great plot, but the erotica was barely touched when they FINALLY did have sex. The mood/tone was too meek. Too much dialogue with other characters. Daniella really got on my nerves. Another thing that bothered me, he's a shifter, you never really played up his abilities beside him shifting. 1. his keen hearing, 2. sense of smell, 3. play up his height, should have given a number to his stature, 4. Ian's the biggest let down, you made her, the human seem more shifter than him, when you made her more aware of him sexually... from his POV she wasn't anything special. When writing shifter love interests you have o monopolize on their ability to instantly recognize their mate... it seems that is where you are going with this. Like I mentioned before, revise, or this is a snoozer, sorry. I'm even offering. I hate for potentially good or even great story to go to waste.Thumbs up on originality.