Review: Potential, but needs more...
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 13, 2013
This book should be listed as a Christian fiction, be prepared for all main characters to be Christian.  Throughout the book the characters pray together and have God direct their lives.  If this isn't your preference, then move on.  If this is your preference, then look closer.The book was edited and had a fairly well-laid out plot.  The primary premise was the winding road that our H/h took to finding out that they loved each other. They both had underlying angst that kept them apart, but the angst seemed forced. I was never really pulled into the book and never became attached to the characters. The main character, a undercover female FBI agent, was supposed to be educated and yet the writing for her character kept dropping the "g" and other letters in her dialog. This was when she was no longer undercover and I think this was supposed to indicate her Irish brogue accent but just made her seem uneducated as it wasn't brogue.  There were also lots of characters that just showed up with minimal character development. I think they came from other books and therefore were not developed in this book.  This made the characters very flat and 2 dimensional if you hadn't read the other books.The writing of the book was OK but not great. It was primarily dialog, texting conversations and thought processes with little scene development. Scene development was primarily stating what the female lead was wearing.  I got this book as a free Kindle read and I would not pay to read this book.