Review: Interesting premise, glacially slow, and poorly translated.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2012
This looked like something I'd enjoy, but boy was I wrong.The story is ridiculously slow, with lots of extraneous detail that just bogged it down.The writing is also pretty poor - the credits give a translator, so it seems that's not the original author's fault, but it makes for an irritating read.With a total overhaul of structure and a good copyedit, this could be good. As it stands, it's really not good at all.