Review: It was... ok...
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 20, 2012
This was a cute little story, but it seems that some areas are very detailed where others, it's just too little. There's not much development in the characters other than Lily and Colton. You meet them, they play a part, some more than others, but there's no point in some things even going on.. Like, what did David being a half brother have to do with the story? Nothing. Just random things here and there. A little fine tuning and it would have been better.