Review: Editor really didn't do their job
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 04 2, 2014
I did absolutely LOVE the storyline. There was such great reason behind it! But there was no way I was able to connect to the characters. The story went too fast to actually MAKE a connection. Even the first five pages went too fast. The dialogue was stilted at certain points and there were grammar errors so plainly visible, it was easy to know the editor really didn't do their job with coaching the writer. If more time had been spent on this story, I know I would've given it five stars. Because, again, the plot of the story is wonderful and I've always had a soft spot for stories where the main character overcomes, or attempts to, significant roadblocks that hinder their ability to move forward in life. Please keep writing, A.J. Storm. I want to see more!