Review: Very good, just needs some editing
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 08 7, 2013
Pros:One of the better dragon fantasy stories I have read thus far.  Solid world building and characters.  I think the story was strong enough to take its place in the straight up fantasy genre if it dialed down the sex scenes.  As it is now I would recommend it only to friends interested in romance first and fantasy second.Cons:This story was so good, it was even more painful to see all the misspellings and errors.  Case in point, I never realized how many times the word "shining" could be relevant in a story until it was misspelled and reading "shinning" again and again and again started to feel like water torture.  The author is killing her potential (and the English language) by not getting an editor to go over her material.  Since this is kindle, an edited re-release should not be a problem.