Review: He had smiled back his eyebrow lifting.
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 08 14, 2012
This book is full of gems like this sentence. Had is used incorrectly so much that I started to read it out loud because it's funnier that way. If you are a teacher or an editor I believe this book will drive you insane. The story is very interesting. I just had can't get over all of the odd places had that had popped up in the story.(Hope that made you laugh) This is a great book to read for a party game. Everyone takes a shot when you come across the word 'had' used incorrectly. I warn you, do this with people you don't mind sleeping over at your place cause no one will be fit to drive after the second page.For those of you that didn't see what was wrong with the sentence used in the title of my review please find all your English teachers and slap them.He had smiled back his eyebrow lifting. = He smiled back as his eyebrow lifted. or His eyebrow lifted and he smiled back. (Just to name a few)Underneath all this cry for an editor the story truly has potential.