Review: All over the place
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 16, 2014
The book as a whole is a mess. I might be grammar-obsessed, but there were so many miss-spells and so much poor grammar, my head hurts from reading it. The author jumps around the tenses as well, which just pisses me off, and makes me wonder, did she even read it through, before publishing it?The characters are good in many ways, though not awfully original. There are a bit too many story lines going on a once, she should have waited with some of them, I think, it's a bit unfocused, and as this is obviously going to be a series, those additional story lines could have waited until the next books.Poor grammar, spelling and lack of focus aside, it's an okay book. I laughed a few times, and cared some for the characters. Lots of room for improvement, though. I'll keep an eye out for the next book, and hope she's found an editor by then.