Review: Great story marred by grammar
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 18, 2012
Ok I normally don't get hung up on grammar. I mean really I don't. However here we have an amazing story that gets eaten alive (pun intended) by bad grammar. Here we go...The story from page 1 is gripping. With very little effort you find yourself caring about these characters. You are quickly drawn into a story that is compelling and eerily believable. You find yourself compulsively reading this book because it is so engaging. I really enjoyed it... however...The grammar almost destroys it. I give self publishers a lot of leeway when it comes to grammar but this is bad. I don't care what kind of excuses you want to make in the beginning of the book. Find an intelligent friend to read over it or something.All in all a really good read if you can deal with the grammar. Three stars overall, very fun.