Review: Whilst whilst whilst argh!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 05 7, 2014
I swear this book had the word 'whilst' in it at least a thousand times. I'm almost tempted to do a word count for the sake of curiosity... super annoying. I'm a huge fan of erotica and usually the last person in the world to complain about excessive sex in a book but this was ridiculous to the point of boredom. Six, seven times in a row? Really? And it was the same scene again and again ad nauseam. The H was aggravating... you cannot be an Alpha and cry, becoming a blubbering mess when the memories hit, it doesn't work that way. And the h tries to act like she has a backbone until he puts his hand up her skirt and she loses (or as the book says 'looses') all sense. Even the copious amount of sex couldn't save this one.