Review: Second Book is Second Best
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 29, 2013
I read teh Undertaker by William F Brown and enjoyed it as a good read. I have read the comments here, but obviously my copy was edited although technical points relating to submarines and guns, I wouldn't have noticed errors anyway.  This book has a good story line, which started off at a brisk pace keeping the reader interested and then became boring.  We had too many repeats of the past, too many passages which were simply descriptive and continuously reminded of the guilt Randall carried.  Technically I'm not an authority on deep sea diving but I'm quite sure no captain would have allowed amateurs to dive off his ship.  I try to dismiss some of these points as writers liberty but the rest of this  story needs a great deal of imagination to swallow. Sorry, I can't say I enjoyed the book.