Review: Too many characters to enjoy the rest of the story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 26, 2014
Such a strong start and really great characters who meet in an unusual way -perfect! Jacey needs help but does not want to lean on anyone and Derrick shows her he is not going anywhere. I admit he was WAY overbearing until he finally shares things about his past. The only thing I did not like is he does not let Jacey have a real mind of her own. She went from this homeless woman who had to be strong based on the situation she escaped into a nodding puppet.I don't know if she redeemed herself since I could not get to the end. I did scroll to the ending and saw a HEA but I don't know much else.  I also hated Holly, Derrick's "sister". If she said such awful things about me I would not be all nice and friendly the next day but that is just my opinion.I really want to give more stars but after I hit chapter 15/16 I totally got lost. SO many characters were introduced for no reason. There is a group of men brought in to help keep Ms. Jacey (love her) safe but to introduce them all? Here is Hunter, and scary, and A, B, and C, and Q...no no no. Plus we meet another Dom and his two subs and they are all hanging out - too much. I loved the simple plot that had lots of twists as it was very easy to follow but I could not finish because my brain was spinning.I really enjoyed this author it was the first I have read from her and will give her another try. If you can skip over all the parade of characters at the end and focus just on the main story you should be fine.