Review: Fun YA novel
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 31, 2014
Loved this one.  I thought the dialogue was great and I had a smile on my face the entire time.  Since this is the only book this author has written I am however going to give some constructive criticism because i want her to get even better. First, the author needs an editor.  There were too many grammatical errors, tense problems, agreement issues and word choice mistakes.  Second, while i loved the interaction between Molly and her friends as well as the two main characters, some of the secondary characters could have been fleshed out better particularly the guys. Third, i thought the novel ended a bit abruptly and there could have a been bit more development of the story/characters at the end.