Review: Could have been so much better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 19, 2013
This is a good short story with excellent writing and a solid plot. I just couldn't help comparing it to the author's Yden books. It could have been so much better if the plot had been fleshed out more. There was too much summarization. The young couple met and then suddenly they were in love without much to show how they got there. Likewise the villain was found, caught, and dealt with rather abruptly. This author is capable of so much more. Still, it was a pleasant young adult fantasy romance, appropriate for adults who like this genre as well.