Review: Good Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 12 28, 2011
Great plot & realistic (paranormal/vampire) conflict, with humans and among themselves. Some of the characters, like Julie & Sandy, more developed than others, like Chyna & Ricardo. Story interesting enough to keep you reading. But the grammar errors! They're atrocious. Get a proofreader, Author: self-published doesn't have to = poor, shoddy quality. The errors are so numerous and egregious that, at one point the protagonist is identified as "Julie" and as "Julia" in the next paragraph then back to "Julie". Come on, Man: don't you know your own characters' names? The errors are so weird, I began to think that English was not this author's native tongue: get a proofreader if you want to be a professional. The story's worth reading, but the incessant grammar errors, carelessness, and weirdly used words will discourage readers & keep ratings lower than the story deserves.