Review: Reads More Like a Scene Taken from a Longer Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 29, 2012
The Wizard Takes a Holiday will only take you three or four minutes to read.  There's nothing wrong with what's written, it's just the story seems to be missing something.  A bit more backstory on the wizard for one would have you feeling his frustrations that a wizard just can't take a break, sit back and enjoy a good outdoor big screen movie experience.  I also don't think the mother of the toddler would have reacted like she does in the story when noticing a strange bearded man she's never met emerging with her toddler from up the hill in this day and age. It's a decent enough way to pass three or four minutes while on a break or something if it's still a free Kindle download, but not good enough to pay money for.