Review: for a first novel......
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 21, 2013
for a first novel, I give this author credit. The story started out seemingly written by a cild in junior high school. Very elementary, undeveloped. But as the author warmed up, the plot grew, the characters grew. I didn't think I could finish reading it, but then it started to move in action and plot intensity. This author shows great promise! Could really use a lot more experience with writing though. I hope he keeps up the good work. Very good first novel. Thank you