Review: Pleasant but needs better editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 28, 2013
The plot was decent. There wasn't much character development but that's not unusual for a novella. What was really annnoying was the lack of editing. There were periods that should have been commas and vice versa. There were also numerous misused words. Probably the most annoying to me was "a CORPSE of trees" instead of "a COPSE of trees." This seems to be a recurring problem for this author based on other reviews from different stories. It makes her work seem amateurish.