Review: Great fun but with serious deficiencies.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 9, 2014
First of all, this is an interesting, fast and fun bit of world building.  I look forward tithe next installment, BUT the sheer number of grammatical errors in this book (principally having at least one spelling error per page) plus a number of glaring logical or reality- related inconsistencies make it a bit of a bumpy read.  A 13-year old who no one will tell even the names of her dead parents when they obviously know? Entering a military academcy in the middle of a year and within 2 weeks being on a winning team of cadets? In 2 weeks learning high-level maths, navigation and, by the way, gaining not one but 3 or 4 spectrals (there were so many that I really don't know how many there actually were in the end).  Please for the next one have someone proofread it and, above all, edit it.  If you can do this, then you will have a great story on your hands and many more satisfied readers. .