Review: Unbelievably convoluted
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 04 17, 2014
Before I say much, I should mention that I was only able to get through about 60% before I couldn't take it anymore. There were so many characters, so many subplots, and so much strange dialog, that it made my head hurt. I gave this a try because it was really cheap, but unfortunately it was ridiculously confusing. The main characters were making no progress with the mystery or their relationship. My only positive comment is that it was well edited with no typos.