Review: Good job ...
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 06 26, 2014
The hardest thing to do in a short story is to make me fall in love with the characters.  Most of the time it's just "wam bang thank you man" straight to the action, but not this time.  I liked the build up and the back story.  I really found myself rooting for Brad, hoping he would be a good guy.  I still wanted more, more about Brad's mom, more about the bullying and more about the romance after the secrets out.  A couple more chapters and this could have been 5 stars.