Review: A real disappointment
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 22, 2013
I was able to get past the spelling errors (opening sentence: kerb instead of curb), but the jumping around between characters was really confusing and annoying.  It seemed to take forever to sort out who the people were and what they were doing.  If you're not familiar with British slang, that, too will be a hurdle.  Very disappointing, poorly written.