Review: Harsher edge, not a romance, ageplay with heavy corporal punishment!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 03 3, 2013
A very good ageplay story centering on a woman who goes through some trials and ends up with a guy who is her "Papa" as well as her husband. There is the requisite Nanny who is female who also disciplines and spanks - although in this one there is not real explicit f/f action as far as sex. The normal teasing. I cannot believe I am saying this but this trope is already fully fleshed out in this genre - the guy with the female nanny who trains "little's" so I actually deducted a star because this is now becoming so common it doesn't have a freshness to it. On the other hand the punishments are harsh, fairly well described, and the sex is really well written.I am a huge fan of characters who can talk and tell the submissive/"little"/etc what is happening, why it is happening, and who make the sub say back things that would cause them to blush or be humiliated. Something about authors who can handle dialogue like this really makes me enjoy the story more. That is distinct from a Dom/Top who calls the sub a humiliating or derogatory name which I hate and which automatically pulls me out of the story. This is different - because the thought of being helpless, being told what is happening and what is going to happen, just ratchets up the tension so well when it is done well. This one has it in spades.Fans of The Submissive Bride, The Little Miss Books 1-4, and Deakeny's Bride will most likely enjoy this one. Warnings include harsh punishment with various implements, enema's, and the fact this is not really a romance. If you are looking for love you're in the wrong place although there is caring it is primarily driven by the role each one plays so no declarations of undying love, chocolate, or fancy dinners!