Review: Very short
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 17, 2014
So, I realize that this is intended to be a short story but this tale is more the length of an essay. It has some interesting characters and a good premise. The length could easily be doubled and this would have the opportunity to develop into a nice little story. It just felt rushed to me. That being said, it was a sweet little ditty, I suppose, but I didn't have any feelings about the HEA ending because I wasn't acquainted enough with the characters.