Review: this was just so bad
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 05 25, 2014
I hate these books about men who try to rescue girls who were kidnapped and pushed into slavery.The relationships that developed aren't real.  They're based to Stockholm Syndrome which isn't sexy.  Even if I'm supposed to ignore this in dark romance, there's not enough here for me to buy the relationship that supposedly develops.SPOILERS FROM THIS POINT FORWARD.There were plenty of plot and content issues that never get properly resolved here.  This is a standalone, so there will never be resolution on these issues for me.  Will the relationship between William and his twin, Ben ever be repaired?  The ending makes no real sense -- all 12 go back to him, even though they know that #13 and William are "together"  And did she really have to be a virgin??  **ROLLS EYES**The author makes a big deal at the end about the girls finally meeting each other and learning their names and backgrounds... when really we should be learning about how they might cope outside of William's "care"... and what of the bullies that permanently disfigured William?  What happened?  That he wants to "teach lessons" presumes that these girls are "bad" when in actuality they were thrust into situations that were out of their control.  It makes no sense!