Review: So pissed at the line(?) editor
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 26, 2013
Whoever looked at this manuscript did a grave disservice to this author.  She has some GREAT characters, some GRIPPING plot twists, and a really FASCINATING universe.  But there must be 3 or 4 errors on each page.  Spelling/wrong word, verb tense ( maybe she does technical writing as a day job,  that would explain the constant present tense).  The first time through was painful.  But I persisted because the characters and plot were that intriguing.  In fact, despite the abysmal editing, I've read it a second time, and know I will read it a third.  I just hope an updated version arrives before I do so.  M.K., you go, girl.  You got the stuff, just find a damn editor.