Review: Romping Good Fantasy
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 1, 2011
I very much enjoyed the story here.  Having the magic as the focus, instead of an adjunct, is what attracted me in the first place.  I was not disappointed at all.  The humor kept what might have been a complete downer situation in check.  Like Penny, I was ready to slap him upside the head at one point, for being so dim that he couldn't see what he must become, for all their sakes.The only down sides are in format: the waste of space, requiring me to click to the next page two or three times between chapters and chapter titles, and its severe need of proofreading.  "Passed" when it should be "past" and the reverse are rampant throughout.  Also, "there's" for "their," an "m" in place of commas, and general all around grammar and typing cleaning up would really upgrade the reading experience.Otherwise, good story, easy read.  I look forward to Warmage as a Christmas present to myself.