Review: A Three Star Read
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 7, 2014
I didn't actually like this story until I got to about 70 percent of the way in. I thought the heroine wasn't much of a heroine. She seemed so weak and too easily entered into the "deal" with Mark because she lacked self respect. I didn't really see him as a Dom at all. He just seemed to be using her for his own sexual benefit for thirty days and not truly "training" her to be submissive. I felt sorry for her and just didn't trust Mark. Towards the end though, the story got interesting with Lynx/the hostile takeover, and things made more sense. He helped break her down so that she could change her persona and outlook on life. I get it. It just was an okay read for me.