Review: Good Basic Story
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 24, 2009
This book has a good basic storyline.  However, I found the writing to be of a rather jerky and staccato style, especially in the descriptive areas.  It was rather difficult to follow at times as it jumps around a bit and with the formatting problems (quite a few) I found myself trying to figure out where I was in the story. It took me longer to read than it should have because of that. Reformatting would definitely help you keep track of what is happening. I did feel that there were a few things that could have been left out of the story as they really weren't incorporated into the storyline very well, just seemed to be thrown in because you have to be explicit about some things (x-rated).  Thank goodness for the fast page turnings on the Kindle! Even with all this, I still wanted to keep reading to find out what happened.