Review: Not fleshed out
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 08 16, 2012
I know it's a novella - but I do think that more character development would have been possible, and would have frankly made it much better.  As it stands now I didn't get the relationship between the two main characters at all.I do think that the author has the talent to develop these stories into full novel-lengths.  Why stop at novella?  Flesh them out and make me believe them.The one man's change of attitude happened so quickly that it left a whiplash feeling behind, and suddenly he's in love with the girl? And the girl is so naive that it's scary - make her real.  She's supposed to be a grown-up adult woman, not a teenage girl.  She can be loving and tenderhearted without also being annoyingly silly and bothersome.So far I've avoided the rest of the Teacup romances by this author, but if they were put out as full novels I might reconsider them again.