Review: Oh this could have been so much better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 6, 2013
The first few pages had me in-it-to-win-it, you know what I mean. And then the rug got pulled out, and I hit the floor with a thud.This story had so much potential to be awesome, but it falls flat.I can't say that I wish I never read it, because you can't complain about something you got for nothing. But I find myself grinding my teeth, wishing that there was more to it.They had an entire month to get down and dirty. Why did it have to happen in the first half hour of them being left alone?There should have been days and days of comical hi-jinx, teasing, sarcasm, the list goes on. And now I'm like :-(I still say, read it if it's free.