Review: Weak story, grammar issues
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 4, 2014
This book just isn't very good. The writing is juvenile, there are numerous grammar mistakes, plus, it's written in 3rd person present tense. Sometimes that's okay, but in this case it's just completely wrong for the story. The plot itself was your typical PNR menage story - nothing original. Luckily, I got this book as part of an anthology and only paid $0.99 for all ten stories, so I don't feel like my money was wasted, but this was easily the weakest story in the group.