Review: so much potential starting out...
Rating: 5 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2013
I reviewed this "series" under End of the Line.  This is the second in the Arcana series.  The plot was good, the characters were good, nicely developed and the dialogue was more than satisfactory.  The lack of character conflict, exterior forces conflict, and some relatively brief informational descriptions conspired to shorten this piece of literatire.I am so not saying I didn't like it, for what it was I really liked it, but I would love to see the author lenthen this tale maybe with the help of another author.  There has to be some way to expand this story.I loved the world she built and the population is pretty darn awesome; I have desperately tried to find an order form so I could get one of these retired super soldiers out on my space port ( I realize earth isn't on the rim, but there has to be some action over here), but Alas! no luck yet.Bottom line:  I took a chance and I was not so disappointed that I felt a negative review was in order, in fact, my only complaint is that I would have liked to stay in the story for longer.