Review: Mediocre
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 01 12, 2014
It was more of a short story than a book and there was way too much description in the beginning. Instead of weaving the descriptions into the story, they were all at the beginning. There could have been a lot more development in the story about the families. For a short story, it had a lot of errors in it causing the reader to have to figure out what the author meant to say. It had the beginnings of a good story but was not developed and read more like a first draft.