Review: OOPSIE!!
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 11 3, 2012
An interesting hypothesis with a lot of action.  But during one of the many mandatory sex scenes, the hero, Will, was called a different name.  Kind of looks like there was some cut and pasting going on -- and while I really don't READ these parts, I skim them to know when I can start reading again, I couldn't miss this!!  I thought of simply telling the authoress by e-mail, but decided a review might be more appropriate.I understand that there are formulas to this genre of writing, as there are to most, but really, it is possible to write a romance without the soft porn.Otherwise suffers from the same problem of many romances -- I don't know any men this sensitive.  The outcome is predictable.  There are some passages that require a real suspension of disbelief.This book needed an editor, which is different from a publisher.  While publishers supply editors to their authors, if you self-publish, please, please find an editor to review the writing.  I bet college teachers, librarians or even full time editors would be delighted to help an author with a good imagination.