Review: A very good short story
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2012
This 24 page short read gave us an up-close look inside the mind of a schizophrenic. The author chose to tell the story in the first person, a point of view that has both advantages and disadvantages; I do commend this author for trying this tricky way of telling his story. This was a very exciting tale which I truly enjoyed. The problem, in my opinion, came at the end of this story.  The p.o.v. switched to a third person perspective which distracted from the otherwise excellent telling of the story, and made the ending somewhat dissatisfying and confusing.  Despite this possible technical error, I would highly recommend this tale of graphic, psychological horror to readers of this genre!