Review: Good Read
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 10 18, 2011
I didn't have much hope for this book, but I was attracted to the character, premise and story. Jaded veteran warmagi trying to live quietly in the country? I'm there.Unfortunately, it needs a *lot* more editing work, particularly the first chapter. It was disjointed and confused, much like a character waking up with a hangover. It took a while to settle into the prose style. It's not as polished as the big name authors like Tolkien, or Jordan.But that's ok. I was hooked by the second chapter. I'm looking for the second book because I want to see what's going to happen.