Review: Bloody awful.  Writer needs an editor
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 12 20, 2011
The heroine in this novel has the learning curve of a six year old.  No matter how many times she is told something, she does not believe it.  No matter what she is told to do, she will do as she pleases.  Ninny, idiot, fool.  How I can sympathize with somebody without a lick of sense?  Too much repetition of "oh, I must give myself to the villian to save my hero."  After the dozenth iteration, it gets boring.  There was so much promise here.  If the story had been tightened up, the repetition removed, some intelligent motive . . . it would have been bearable.