Review: worth a try - 5 for originality, 1 for editing
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 23, 2012
I struggled a bit with rating this.  5 stars for originality with the whole armor concept.  While story and characters could have been a little better developed, the original ideas were enough to sell me.  Also slightly jarring clash of modern and primitive with respect to technology and character language and attitudes.  Would be good if that could be smoothed out and made a little more consistent somehow.  1 star for the horrible, painful spelling/grammar/malaprop errors.  Please, please get a good editor and re-issue a fixed digital version update.  Also, with a new cover.  The current one is so terrible it really made me not want to give this a try.