Review: Not good at all
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 09 12, 2011
Man, this book is bad.The style in which the book is written is completely and totally annoying.  Ally is about twenty-five, but her observations are on the level of a fifteen-year-old's (and that being harsh on the teenager).  Everything is written with an exclamation point ("The club was crowded!"  "Ally felt sexy in her costume!").  She falls for a hot guy at the bar, follows him to another bar, and goes back to his place with him.  He then reveals that he is a vampire and she is his mate.  At first she doesn't believe him, but then he is able to put a brief scene from his childhood into her mind and she does (is that really the best way to prove you're a vampire).  The sex scene is laughably mechanical (First he does this, then he does that, Ally feels good, etc).  The story line could possibly, possibly have some potential if it wasn't hampered by such a hilariously inept style and paint-by-numbers characters and plot points.  Fated soulmates, check.  Mating for life, check.  Vampire council, check.  Humans in peril, check.Once you read all the enjoyable vampire books, work your way to the semi-enjoyable.  Don't worry - this one will still be waiting once you've read every semi-enjoyable vampire romance out there.  There is no hurry.