Review: Great start
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 09 23, 2013
This is a short beginning to the big story. I found it had a good start but I think there should've been more about the characters to make u care about them before to much started happening.The man is told he has cancer and not much time to live. He instantly begins Making plans to go locate the sons he has not seen in years and who are now grown up. He want them to know that he loves them. I`m wondering what will happen once he gets to see his sons face to face? Will they want anything to do with the ranch or the new family? Also can the father and sons pick up from where they left off many years ago? I think this story is off to a great start and I can't wait to see what will happen next.