Review: surprising
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 04 3, 2014
I enjoyed the story in general. The story was well written with interesting characters. The characters, though well developed, somehow did not have enough depth of feeling. The characters seemed detached from actual feeling. It might be because they were not human and that is part of the story. I found I continued to read the story looking for more depth of feeling so I could care more about the characters. In the end I was disappointed because there was not enough passion in the strife, love, and triumph that the characters experienced. I think this story could be epic if given more feeling... It deserves it.