Review: What just happened?
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 01 15, 2012
I don't know that I have ever read a book where there was so little communication between the characters.  The hero just wants the heroine out of there, because she is too "human" and doesn't know anything supernatural.  The heroine is just stupid.  She never catches on to anything that is going on around her-she has a lot of curiosity, then is scared and can't think for most of the book.  She is entirely run by her emotions.  Do they do the job they have to do? No.  Does she ever get into her "powers" and discover what she can do? No.  Did they even train her for what she had ahead of her? No. Even the secondary characters of a witch and her niece (also a witch) are either completely uncommunicative, or just don't know what is going on (a witch, really?)  It was amusing to see the hero describe the heroine as "kickass" and then she just falls apart.  Several times.  Oh yes, and the whole back story was never revealed. What was the problem between the hero and the secondary guy?  We got hints, but that was all.  The other problem with this book was that it was just too wordy.  The same things over and over-the author probably could have cut out about a third of the book and it would make just as much sense.  It had promise, it just never delivered.