Review: The story isn't bad but the editing!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 07 30, 2013
I have to agree with what a lot of the other reviewers mentioned - the author did well for a first attempt but the proofreading was inadequate - the character names needed to be less similar and someone needed to actually read the book and correct some of the more glaring mistakes -Don't give up writing but, again as others said, get your next effort proofread and corrected before you publish it!And, yes, the whole concept of security was overlooked and even the most inexperienced person in the situations these people were in would have addressed that up front.