Review: I wanted to like it more than I did
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 23, 2014
With so many 5 star ratings, I thought this book would be better.  This is a first-time author and the plot device was just too ambitious for her, I think.  She wasn't able to write believably about the brother's "profession".  As for the dialogue and behavior of the MCs, my advice to the author would be restraint.  It was over the top.  The things they said to each other would be unforgivable to  most people.  The things he did to her, to hurt and humiliate her are just too much.  Then there's the age of the male MC-he and his twin sure have done a lot of living for their tender age-just isn't believable.  Having gotten all the bad stuff out of the way, this author shows a lot of potential and some of her dialogue-particularly the inner dialogue of the female MC is laugh out loud hilarious.  I would read another book by this author.