Review: Too short and kind of pointless
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 12 5, 2012
At first I was sucked in. What little there is to this story was well written and interesting. However, it abruptly cuts off right when it starts to get good and some genuine chemistry starts to build between the heroine and the handsome Italian cop. This story comes off less like a story and more like a preview of an actual book being as nothing really happens between the two characters and cuts off right as there is even a hint that something may happen in the future.The ending is so abrupt it actually had me going “wait, what? That‘s it?“Yes, this story was free but it left me frustrated and wishing I hadn‘t bothered with downloading it. Would love to read a more complete version of it though and I would highly recommend the author turn it into a novella.