Review: Seriously needs an edit
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 17, 2014
Although this book was hard going because of the lack of editing, it actually wasn't a bad book! The story is a good one with promise, but the author has a very juvenile approach, the characters seem younger than their 18 years and the centuries old vampire Grey just feels wrong that he acts so immature sometimes? The constant to and fro of the main characters relationship is just unbelievable and could be edited back a bit. But the main issue for editing was the flow of the discussions, you really went for large paragraphs where it was comment after comment without it ever being established who was talking, very confusing! My tip for the author, edit this and rerelease then it will be great!