Review: Erotically great short story!
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 05 15, 2012
This was angst ridden-ly good. This was a poignant short story of two like souls finding each other. We meet Eve, a sheltered, naive, nineteen year old who is not allowed at all to have a life. Her father rules her under his thumb and she accepted it. She glances a "punk" guy, Van, making a little illegal transaction over her backyard fence and is intrigued.You can see where the story is going...can't you? I adored both characters. There are barely any typos, the author has a knack with her words. She had her characters react and talk like every day life.I couldn't put this book down and read it one sitting.My one gripe is her father...we barely saw how evil he really was. also the way her father reacted in the last chapter...it just left a sour taste in my mouth. It was not where I though he would go.Other than that, I enjoyed Van. He was so sweet and just...he will make you melt.