Review: Very short and creepy
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 01 26, 2013
The premise was excellent, and I think the only thing which bars me from giving it a full five stars is the choppy almost-screen-writer flow of the language.  I think the story could have used more description in its locations and scenes.  The use of sparse details to avoid lurid shock value is much appreciated - and refreshing - but I see potential into this work being fleshed out a little more.  Leave the ending as it is, though - nicely done.