Review: So much wasted potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 02 19, 2014
This story started out good and had a lot of potential, but then it fell apart. Still, I tried and read to about 90%, skimming most of it since I just couldn't get into it, and then returned it for a refund. You have to truly be disappointed to suffer through 90% of a 5000+ location story to give up, but I did and it was because I knew the ending didn't matter to me. I didn't like any of the characters and I didn't care what happened to them. Kerry started pathetic and improved marginally by the end, but it was pointless. I think the author was going for a story like Riley Hart's Broken Pieces, but these men did not grab you, did not make you root for them and did not make you love them individually, as couples and then as a ménage. I didn't see/feel connection between/among the men. It's also unclear whose story this is. The man you see on the cover with the cuts on his side is Malcom, the Dom in the relationship, but his and Charlie's story is told in 3rd person while Kerry's is told in 1st person. Frustrating and confusing. It's well-written and if you can identify with one of the men you might like it. There hadn't been any sex among them by 90% in, Charlie and Malcom had a couple unimpressive sex scenes, so you probably get the ménage scene towards the end if you're lucky. The author came up with a good premise and can write, but the execution ruined the story. I will give this author another chance, but I cannot recommend it.