Review: Had potential
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2014
This story started with interesting potential, but the author's timeline just didn't make sense. If the main character was having flashbacks to Vietnam I estimate he was in his 50's. The mention of airport security would have brought the date of the story to sometime after 9/11. Airport security as mentioned didn't exist prior to that date. I was also amused by some of the words he used:  guk for gook, grinded (ground?) his teeth, shovanistic maybe chauvinistic. Seems several characters had dental issues since they frequently "clicked" their teeth. I was almost to busy with this type of detail I missed the fact the story was very disjointed, with to many back stories left hanging.It would be interesting if the author would rework this, paying more attention to a complete storyline, instead of seeming to rush just to put an end to the story, whether it made sense or not