Review: Interesting, and unique. Original concept and well written. But WAY too short.
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 13, 2013
Interesting, and unique. Original concept and well written. But WAY too short. Definitely needs to be filled out into entire novel. The ideas here have serious commercial value. I could sell it, I know that much. The characters are funny, the dialogue is excellent, and the pace of story telling is spot on all the way. We just need more story. If you're ever in the market for an editor I'd be happy to work with you.