Review: GREAT IDEA, BUT NOT WELL THOUGHT THROUGH
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 06 2, 2013
From the book summary I really thought I was going to enjoy this story a lot, but sadly, I didn't enjoy it at all. The plot is full of holes and rife with inconsistencies, the story bored me to tears and it's clear from the vast amounts of grammar errors that this was a first draft which wasn't revised. I really, really wanted to enjoy this story, but from start to end I just couldn't get into it, and there were few to no explanations for most of the characters' motivations. Too much telling and too little showing, too much narrative and no character development - the list is endless. In my opinion the idea for this book has lots of potential and with the guidance of a professional editor, it can easily become a bestseller. Unfortunately, I won't be reading the rest of this series.