Review: Good, Could Be Great
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 04 10, 2014
There were several things about this book that I really enjoyed and a couple things I didn’t. Story and characters were great. World building could have been a bit better, but since it use to be a web series I understand the lack.I don’t like to mention editing in reviews (I have my reasons) but I thought this book could be better if it had some more done. The book wasn’t bad but there were some misspelled words, some sentences that could have been written better, that sort of thing. It didn’t make the book unreadable by any means but it did make me a little sad because I think it could have reached another level with just a bit more work.A Goodreads review had this to say and I thought it really summed up my feelings on the book:“Essentially: this story is good enough to make you wish it were better, but promising enough to make you believe it will get there. I am up for the journey.”I will be buying the next book, totally worth $2.99