Review: Editor reread reread
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 02 4, 2014
The story concept was great. It was not developed fully and poorly executed. It was written with next book in mind. I hate that. Her hero was confusing I am still trying to figure out if it was her brother or boyfriend. Heroine was weak most of the book. She gives her this big hype about being a student and then bam 4 pages later she is all wrapped up in a boy with no prelude and she becomes a follower. Seriously, choose another book to read.I thought the book would be as close as possible to grammar free errors because the author has a degree in Journalism. That is so not so. She used  "worn" when it should have been "warned" plus  numerous other word exchanges where I had to stop and think what she meant because of misuse or just the wrong word or tense. Not fun. Lastly, the most annoying part she repeats herself over and over again and again  as if the  reader didn't just read  her brother was head of security etc...Case in point a degree doesn't make a writer it takes talent and an Editor.