Review: It's ok
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 07 15, 2014
I would have to say it was an ok read.  The storyline jumped from Aaliyah being 18 to 20 yrs old but then she told the paramedics she was 25 yrs old.  I think there should have been a little more character developement and a better editor.  There were so many times I noticed words were missing.  There was also to much sex, I mean I get the gist of the storyline but there could have been more to it.  I'm debating if I will read the next part.  I want to know what happens to Aaliyah next and who hit her but I'm not sure if I want to spend the money.