Review: Great for a 1st time reader of erotica
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 03 12, 2014
The author did a stellar job in his description of events as well as people. I could wholeheartedly relate to being at an office party where you aren’t that particular about the people you work with. He was also pretty detailed about physical characteristics (color of eyes, hair, skin, measurements) along with the type of clothes the characters wore. The pacing was consistent and there were no visible errors in punctuation, grammar, and spelling (or any that would deter from the read). The conflict, particularly between Alice and Scarlet, was believable and timely.Despite that liveliness, there were a few elements which served as party crashers.For a story of its brevity, there were way too many characters being presented at the beginning that really had no purpose towards the end. Unless the author is going to revisit some of them in a later installment, then the amount of supplemental characters should be decreased slightly.Although the heat was tastefully painted, the events leading up to the development was quite predictable.Verdict: Overall, I give Sweet Temptations: The Babysitter a 3.5 out of 5 (I wasn't swayed enough to round it to 4 stars).This is a very descriptive write, and it has a bit of spice without being in your face, hardcore porn. I can definitely see this for one just starting out in reading erotica. For me, I prefer my writes a little more original in context and characters.