Review: VERY GOOD STORY--WRITING NEEDED WORK
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 10 22, 2013
I JUST LOVED THE STORY & THE CHARACTERS.  B U T....THE REPETITION WAS SO ANNOYING. ONCE OR TWICE IS GOOD...BUT ON AND ON LEAVES ME UGH!!!!"STRONG BLACK COFFEE", " RICH VERDANT VALLEY", "HIS WIFE", "HER HUSBAND".  300 PAGES WOULD HAVE BEEN PLENTY TO TELL THE STORY BEAUTIFULLY.A GOOD EDITOR MOST DEFINITELY NEEDED.