Review: Hard time finishing it
Rating: 2 out of 5
Date: 09 7, 2013
I'm really confused by all the 5 star reviews. I will admit I liked the prologue; it was effective at getting my attention but the story quickly lost me after that. I felt like I was reading a book written by a young teenage girl writing a book for an English class project who was trying to sound like an adult. Also the male dialogue didn't sound like what a male would say at all! Again, it was like reading a teenage girl trying to sound like a guy. The story took turns but entirely too abruptly and too far fetched. Yes I realize I'm reading a vampire book so realism isn't what I'm looking for, however, the story going from "Oh, I'm just looking for a hot guy and don't want to mate" to within 24 hours desperately wanting to mate with a guy you have known your whole life but just now are noticing? Too much was written about their love and not enough action.