Review: Um....
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 11 17, 2013
As a erotic story-it was good. And I normally don't pay attention to grammar-but this annoyed me so much.  It's like the characters never ever started their sentences with I and that bothered me so much. Like they would say, "Have to go" and then the other person would say "Can't let you go. Have to stay..." This made the story less enjoyable