Review: Could be so much better
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 06 11, 2012
Stephanie Rowes first novel in the Order of the Blade series held such potential. The reviews told of a great book, highly recommended. I was looking forward to reading a new paranormal romance.Why did I rate her 3 stars? One thing I find very frustrating when reading a novel is the authors inability to keep track of his/her own story telling. I found so many errors, it ruined the flow of the story. For example, leading man Quinn gets off the bed and holds Grace. Next paragraph he gets up off the bed.....how....he already got off the bed! Another example, Grace tells Quinn her sister has powers. Couple pages later she shocks Quinn with the news that her sister has powers. Grrrrr! He has blue jeans, then there black! It's goes on and on.....It's hard to become absorbed in the world the author is creating when there are so many editing errors.UPDATEAuthor Stephanie Rowe - Thank you for your feedback. I uploaded a revised edition which addresses these issues.