Review: Thread is a good choice of words
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 03 18, 2012
I started out liking the story and thinking the writing was pretty solid, not that you'll need a dictionary. And I kept waiting, anticipating some action but, alas none was forthcoming and I bailed at 57%, a fair enough time for assessment, in my opinion. The hero's in denial, rightly or wrongly I don't know, that his friend who he hasn't seen in a number of years did something to a teen aged girl. The  girl's on a high school basketball team and quite unbelievably the hero shows up to ask questions and is invited, on the spot, to be an assitant coach. Other implausable relationships "blossom" in a page or two, and the story drags on in this fashion to the point I abandoned it. Oh, the hero does punch out a male high schooler, not in self defense but, again, in inplausable context.I felt I couldn't go higher, even to two, since i didn't finnish.