Review: Intriguing Plot, but Not Developed.
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 05 28, 2014
The book blurb really got me so I one clicked.  It started strong and I was immersed in the story but at about 20% percent, I realized..wait, how come I just keep reading the same thing over and over again without any story development?  Since this is written in dual viewpoint, the ongoing pattern is him obsessing about wanting her but didn't want to admit it, then her obsessing about him without going anywhere.  The plot has the forbidden and dark feel to it but without anything really happening it totally lost me.  Another thing is the switching back and forth between the viewpoints made the writing feel really clipped and abrupt.  Disappointed.  I think the storyline has so much potential, just needed a lot more development.