Review: Not worth a read - Forgettable, forced and boring.
Rating: 1 out of 5
Date: 07 29, 2011
This was an extremely short story, and it seemed as though the author felt she had to speed up the action and the course of the relationship between the two main characters so that she could get them to have sex as soon as possible.  Too bad the sex scenes were so boring - if half the pages wasted on the sex scenes had been used to develop the characters in a way that would make their relationship even vaguely believable to the reader, then the sex scenes would have had more heat and the story might have held my interest.I read it only two days ago, and I can barely remember what it was about.  I actually speed-read (and sometimes just skipped) through much of the book, even though it was so short, as it did nothing to draw me into the lives of the characters.  I just didn't care about them at all.  It was not offensive, just rather too "high school creative writing class."  And a C-, at that.