Review: A very sweet story with a few erotic moments and suspense
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 09 28, 2013
The best part of the story is the fact that the author understands horsemanship.  There are however numerous errors in punctuation with excessive comma usage. There are a few grammatical errors, such as the use of the word through when the word threw was the better choice. The suspense was good, but there were some mistakes in consistency. For example, the heroine is tied to a tree, but is suddenly able to dry her tears and cover her mouth so that the kidnappers weren't alerted to her rescue. I recommend the author have the book professionally edited.