Review: Good Outline But Full of Sloppy Errors in Kindle Version
Rating: 3 out of 5
Date: 01 19, 2012
The author has a nice continuation of this series, complete with some good space battle scenes.  Some of this is a little unrealistic for me to fathom, however, such as the sheer number of space ships that are able to be built over a short period of years.Consistent with my observations of Book Two in the series, there continues to be a very annoying number of spelling, punctuation, verb tense, and other errors in the Kindle version - while there is a prominent mention of an alleged editor on the Amazon web page, it sounds like the editor needs to offer a refund for their services or do the job again.  These errors make you lose your concentration and take away a star in my review. I would suggest taking a fresh look at this and correct these mistakes - most of them are glaring - and get a corrected copy out to the public.