Review: Well done
Rating: 4 out of 5
Date: 12 2, 2011
Young does a great job of presenting the final minutes of a dying marriage.  The dialogue and emotions seem spot on and the characters she creates in a short space are memorable and realistic.  I found the end a little too cutesy for my taste, which is why I don't have the overwhelmingly positive response many reviewers have had.  Depending on your tastes, this will be either a really good or a great short story.Life doesn't always have a happy ending - expecting that all stories have one is silly.