The last sentence of the second paragraph (quoted below) contains a concord problem. In other words, the subject does not correspond with the verb in terms of number. How would you fix this problem. (If you are not sure what concord means, you may look it up in a dictionary or on the internet.)

"This method hold several benefits, including fostering deeper understanding of the material, developing higher order thinking and better preparing students for success in the working environment (Gibson, 2010:609)."

 A. This method will hold several benefits, including fostering deeper understanding of the material, developing higher order thinking and better preparing students for success in the working environment (Gibson, 2010:609).
 B. These methods holds several benefits, including fostering deeper understanding of the material, developing higher order thinking and better preparing students for success in the working environment (Gibson, 2010:609).
 C. This method hold several benefit, including fostering deeper understanding of the material, developing higher order thinking and better preparing students for success in the working environment (Gibson, 2010:609).
 D. This method holds several benefits, including fostering deeper understanding of the material, developing higher order thinking and better preparing students for success in the working environment (Gibson, 2010:609).