could you make this sound more proffesional "Syd how works at a different district and loaction was at the store there she had also made comments to another manager about her attire that night. she had also raised her voice about me not getting a drink to the window in time when I was patiently waiting for them to be done with their work. That was where I needed to be. I said "thank you for helping" and " i'm sorry" with no response. which the accommodations stated to use gentle communication which then i felt scared and talked to bella afterwards."