Draft Review: [1] For Statement of Purpose for Korean University Application ! [Tired Edition]
Channel: Prewriting [Moribund Institute]
Date: 2019-10-11

Recently,  I’ve participated in three 12 week Education First language programs one in France [Nice],one in Japan [Tokyo], and one in China [Shanghai]. Notably in Shanghai I had the opportunity to not only improve my language skills, but to study the coffee market. Thence I desire to spend a semester at Hankuk University where I’ll be able to improve my business education, study for language proficiency exams, and expand my understanding of the interaction between cultural and commercial life in one of the world's most dynamic countries Korea. In your program, I’ll receive unique course offerings enabling me to spice up my college studies. As a Richard Feynman enthusiast, hoping to better educate myself to be able to help accelerate the rate at which ideas flow; I’m awfully excited to take classes such as Public Policy Practice, Economics, and Marketing all from the Korean perspective. A Korean perspective, likely comparing itself to the world from the perspective of their shared psychological attributes unique to their nation (South Korea), its provinces, and it's individual/s (i.e. the professor/s). 
I have this entrepreneurial spirit not only when it comes to business, but when it comes to my studies. I seek dramatic changes in my studies not in physically (i.e. where I am geographically), but psychologically too (i.e. I seek out professors of varying thought). Dreaming of earning the snazziest of educational resumes. I’ve undergone school in Japan, China, and France there having professors representing the whole gamut of ideas with professors who were Democratic Socialists, Ex-military, Libertarians, and Hippies. 
Looking to accrue more insight into what’s happening in the world. I hope to come by a wealth of educational, entrepreneurial, and philanthropic experiences. Interested in courses such as Introduction to Global Futures Studies, International Finance, and even Society and Government in Movies. Classes that are a driving force for the pursuit of accumulating one’s knowledge base and enriching one’s value. Not only will these courses be a great asset in my academic career, but they will also cross the threshold of academic necessity and enter into academic felicity.
I hold the belief that to learn about my worldly opportunities particularly those germane to someone seeking to work either as location independent worker or in startups abroad. I would have to become accustomed to the risks and opportunities of working abroad such as how do I go about obtaining business contacts, how do I market and speak to particular cultures, and what are the soft and hard cost of starting a business abroad.
Working together with all sorts of folks helps grow the idea pie which in turn accelerates the velocity at which ideas flow. At Hankuk University of Foreign Studies, I’ll be studying business explicitly, but I’ll be picking up Korean culture and how Korean’s think about their outside world through osmosis. Whilst professors, other international students, and domestic students of the university will pick up my ideas and customs through osmosis. As a result of this, we will all undergo growth and come up with ideas conducive to productivity and innovation together.


Regards, 
Harris Murdoch



Prewriting
Learn about opportunities! I want to understand what my opportunities are and what my risks would be - business contacts - how to I go about buying - how to speak  cultural - how to trade - how to eschew cultural faux pas - cultural economics - how to socialise - 
How blank works - government - regulations - cultural marketing - what might work here doesn't there - culturally business acceptable [as a customer and a provider] - 
Location independent  - culturally opporutynty businees persepctive - 
Nomad capitalism  osmosisis - box outside inside box figure