5 reasons why your college application essay SUCKS & is getting REJECTED | common app + scholarships
Channel: ESP Daniella
Date: 2022-08-02

I've edited college and scholarship application essays for over 5 years, helped students get into college and win MILLIONS of dollars in financial aid (graduating debt-free), AND worked as a journalist at the national news level. I personally was able to win several scholarships by reusing the same exact essay. Many people get rejected because they KEEP making THESE mistakes.
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TIME STAMPS:
00:00 - My background as an essay / writing expert for college and scholarships
01:21 - Why your writing should be more accessible to read
01:53 - Unbalanced writing with college admissions essays
02:41 - Why your college essay SHOULDN'T read like a resume
03:36 - How to PROPERLY answer the prompt for common app essays
03:56 - A hack to writing a better college app / scholarship essay
04:32 - Should you write about your trauma in your college essays?
05:41 - A lesser known writing technique for college & scholarship essays
06:51 - Why you NEED to have help with your college and scholarship essays
07:38 - How to drastically improve your chances of getting scholarships / being debt free from college

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