Meerman, A. D., & Tamaoka, K. (2008). Measuring the effects of intensive instruction on therules of adjective order in English noun phrases for Japanese EFL students. International

Journal of Curriculum Development and Practice, 10(1), 1-12.

Measuring the Effects of Intensive Instruction on the Rules of Adjective Order inEnglish Noun Phrases for Japanese EFL StudentsbyArthur D. Meerman
Kurume University, Kurume, Japan
and
Katsuo Tamaoka
Hiroshima University, Hiroshima, Japan

Running Head: Intensive Instruction in Adjective Order
Correspondence Address:
Arthur D. Meerman
Institute of Foreign Language Education, Kurume University
1635 Mii-machi, Kurume-shi, Fukuoka-ken, Japan 〒839-8502
Telephone:Home:050-1398-1042
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E-mail: arthur_meerman@kurume-u.ac.jp

Abstract
Whereas the order of adjectives is completely free in Japanese, this is not the case withEnglish. Japanese EFL (English as a Foreign Language) students at the university level
experience great difficulty in identifying and producing noun phrases with correct
adjective order in English. This study examined the effect that a brief period of intensive
instruction on the rules of adjective ordering would have in improving student ability tocorrectly produce descriptive phrases. An adjective ordering task for noun phrases wasadministered both before and after the lesson to determine the extent that 81 Japanese
students could correctly arrange three adjectives. The difference in average pre- andpost-test scores showed dramatic improvement which was directly attributed to brief
intensive instruction, underscoring its practical value in current pedagogical applications.
However, neither previous awareness of, nor formal learning experience in English
adjective ordering had an effect on improvement in EFL student ability to orderadjectives.
Keywords: order of adjectives, judgment task, short and long distance disordering

Introduction
A consistent yet often overlooked source of frustration for Japanese EFL (English asa Foreign Language) students is the correct adjective order in noun phrases. Whereas
the order of adjectives is completely free in Japanese, this is not the case with English.
For instance, the English expression, ‘an expensive black Italian bag’ can be written in
Japanese as kookana kuroi Italia-no bakku. This noun phrase can also be re-ordered infive other correct ways, kuroi kookana Italia-no bakku (‘a black expensive Italian bag’),kuroi Italia-no kookana bakku (‘a black Italian expensive bag’), Italia-no kookana kuroi
bakku (‘an Italian expensive black bag’), Italia-no kuri kookana bakku (‘an Italian black
expensive bag’) and kuri Italia-no kookana bakku (‘a black Italian expensive bag’).
However, none of these five expressions is correct in English. The absence of adetermined order of adjectives in their native language may cause Japanese students toexperience difficulty in identifying and producing noun phrases with correct adjective
order in English. In turn, student inability contributes to a hesitance to experiment withmore complex and therefore more expressive sentences. Simplistic, or‘awkward-but-understandable’ sentences and expressions (e.g., “the brown paper plain1

bag”), are the all-too frequent result of this lack of confidence. While such incorrect
expressions may suffice to convey the basic point the speaker is trying to make, they arenevertheless incorrect from a grammatical point of view. As such, the issue of correct
adjective order is no less important in composing correct and natural sounding English
than other semantic or grammatical errors (e.g., subject-verb disagreement) upon which
instructors generally focus.
It takes a great deal of practice with and exposure to a foreign language before
students can confidently express themselves using what often seem, at least initially, tobe arbitrary rules and constructions. The daunting task of English language teachers inJapanese classrooms is to promote students’ ability to do so in one of the most
homogeneously non-English speaking environments in the world. Surprisingly, while
there are a host of formal guidelines, reference materials and practice exercises
available in both print and electronic media, rules as to the correct order of adjectives innoun phrases are not a formal component of Japanese junior or high school English
curricula.
Meerman and Tamaoka (2006) found that the extent of disorder among adjectives innoun phrases determines the ability of university-level EFL students to correctlyinterpret a phrase as being either correct or incorrect. This 2006 experiment focused on
student ability to passively identify rather than produce noun phrases with correct
adjective order, and raised the question as to whether the ability to create such phrases
could be successfully taught through existing classroom approaches. The present study
takes up this question, by focusing less on cognitive processing and more on thepedagogical potential of intensive instruction. It explores the question as to whether or
not the ability to correctly order adjectives preceding a noun – inherently an instinctive,
semantic task – can practically be taught as a component of existing EFL curricula.
The intentions of the present study were two-fold. First, the current ability thatJapanese university students of EFL have to recognize and produce English nounphrases exhibiting correct adjective order was assessed. This was done using nounphrase adjective arrangement tasks, which required students to correctly re-order aselection of disordered adjectives preceding a noun which they were intended todescribe. Second, this study aimed to determine the effect that intensive instruction on
the rules of adjective ordering would have in improving student ability to correctly
identify and produce more complex descriptive sentences. This study therefore
attempted to gauge the success with which a seemingly intuitive ability can be taught
and learned as a practical skill.

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Order of Adjectives in English Noun Phrases
Native English speakers consistently exhibit a seemingly innate ability to identify or
produce noun phrases with correct adjective order. Few, if asked, will attribute theirability to do so to formal instruction, let alone be able to recall if and when theyreceived such formal instruction in their own schooling experiences. Ordering
adjectives instantaneously and correctly seems to necessitate intuitive, semantic
reasoning rather than the ability to recall grammatical rules. Rules governing adjective
order can be taught and memorized, but not often convincingly explained or understood;
it is near impossible to convincingly explain to learners of the language why “big blackbear” makes more sense than “black big bear”, especially among those whose native
language does not require such a semantic adjective order.
The difficulty inherent in both imparting and grasping this concept is almost
certainly a reason why detailed instruction in adjective order is often forgone,
particularly when longer and more complex descriptors come into play.
There is a small degree of discrepancy among grammarians as to what constitutes
the ‘canonical’ pattern of adjective order (for three examples of popular reference works
offering differing views on adjective order, see Morenberg, 2002; Swan, 1995;
Thomson & Martinet, 1986). The purpose of the present study was not to debate theparticularities or merits of any given grammatical guideline; in any case, thefundamental order of adjectives is agreed upon by most authors. Rather, the present
experiment sought to examine the potential of intensive instruction in one which could
be readily adapted for use in classroom settings at the university level. The order ofadjectives suggested by Swan (1995) was used for both experiment and discussion
purposes and served as the basis for the handout to the EFL students who participated in
the present experiment (see Table 1).
------------------------------------------------------Insert Table 1 about here------------------------------------------------------Adjectives usually appear in direct succession, in a set order according to category
as follows: 1) determiner (e.g., a, an, the); 2) general or subjective observation (e.g.,friendly, nice); 3) physical description (descriptions of size, shape, age and color, in thatorder); 4) origin (e.g., American, Swedish); 5) material (e.g., paper, plastic) and 6)
qualifier (e.g., camping, hunting). Numbers usually go before adjectives and replace
determiners. First, next and last most often go before one, two, three, etc. It is very3

unlikely that anyone would use more than two or three adjectives in a noun phrase, savefor in cases of emphatic verbal expression.
The Intensive Lesson for Teaching Correct Adjective Order
This experiment considered the extent to which student understanding of adjective
order in noun phrases may be improved through a period of intensive instruction.
Essentially, the experiment consisted of a pre-test, a short lesson, and a post-test. The
pre-test examined understanding of adjective order prior to instruction; it can beunderstood as having effectively measured the general abilities of present-day Japanese
university EFL students to correctly describe something in detail (i.e., to correctly use
more than one adjective prior to a noun). The difference between pre- and post-testscores was interpreted as being indicative of improved understanding resulting directlyfrom the brief instructional period. Noun phrases items in the pre- and post-test weredifferent than those used in the intensive lesson.
By the end of the lesson, students were expected to be able to produce (both orally
and in writing) descriptive noun phrases which exhibited the correct order of adjectives.
Actual classroom materials required for the lesson included 3-4 large pictures, 2-3 small,everyday objects and a one-page handout containing a chart with rules and sample
phrases modeling correct adjectives order. An outline of the particular approach taken in
the six-step, 70-minute intensive lesson plan is provided below.
1) Warm Up and Introduction (7-10 minutes)
Students were asked to call out adjectives beginning with the letters of the alphabet
from the letters a through z (active, beautiful, creative, etc.). This can also be done withnouns (e.g., things they saw on the way to school).
2) Introduction of topic (7-10 minutes)
The instructor introduced actual items for students to describe. The names of these items
were written on the blackboard, and students prompted to describe it using as many
suitable adjectives as possible. The instructor wrote these on the board as they werecalled out, placing increasing numbers of adjectives before the noun in the ordersuggested by each responding student, to produce long (and awkward) sentences on theboard. Students were asked to vote if all, some or none of the sentences were correct,
yet left in anticipation of the answer.
3) Pre-Test (12-15 minutes)
The pre-test was administered with students being told they had as much time asnecessary to complete the task (this did not exceed 13 minutes). Sample questions of4

noun phrases are shown in Figure 1 (see all 21 items listed in Table 3).
------------------------------------------------------Insert Figure 1 about here------------------------------------------------------4) Intensive instruction (12-15 minutes)
Students were given a handout (see Table 1) with a rule chart and sample phrases
modeling correct adjectives order. After the categories were explained, students wereasked in turn to read the sample phrases written on the handout (with pronunciation tips
are given when necessary). Looking at their handouts, students were asked tore-consider the correctness of the two sentences which were written on the board earlier.
5) Whole-group practice (5-7 minutes)
With the rules governing adjective order in front of them, individual students considered
three or four photos of different items (see example, Figure 2) and repeated theintroductory activity, being coached to correctly describe people, places and things
being shown to them. Choral repetition followed each correctly ordered suggestion.
------------------------------------------------------Insert Figure 2 about here (bike)------------------------------------------------------6) Post Test (10-12 minutes)
Same as an example in Figure 1, but with items presented in different sequential order.
MethodParticipantsParticipants comprised 81 undergraduate students (50 females and 31 males) at
Hiroshima Shudo University, located in Hiroshima City, Japan. All were native speakers
of Japanese, with ages ranging from 23 years and 1 month to 18 years and 1 month. The
average age was 19 years and 3 months with a standard deviation of 10 months on therespective day of testing. Two additional questions are asked to these participants
regarding (1) whether they have known existence of adjective order, and (2) whether
they have learned adjective order at school. Based on responses to these two questions,
81 participants were divided into three groups: 24 participants who have been aware andhave leaned adjective order, 28 participants who have been aware but have not leaned
adjective order, and 29 participants who have neither been aware nor learned adjective

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order. There were no participants responded that they have learned but not been awareof adjective order (this category is illogical). These three groups were compared byusing an analysis of variance (ANOVA) on acquisition scores of adjective order.
Materials
A paper-and-pencil test comprising a total of 21 noun phrases (see details in Table 3)
including three adjectives was used to determine whether Japanese EFL students could
correctly arrange three adjectives based on the rule. To examine the effect of the shortlesson on adjective order given to these EFL students, test items were used twice (before
and after the lesson), with the items randomly arranged in the two pre- and post-tests. To
mix three adjectives, three incorrect orders were used in the pre- and post-test. For
example, the handsome slender Egyptian man was incorrectly ordered three ways: (1)short-distance mixing, as in the handsome Egyptian slender man, (2) long-distancemixing, as in the Egyptian handsome slender man, and (3) short- and long-distancemixing, as in the Egyptian slender handsome man. Each of the 21 phrases was
rearranged based on one of these three mixing orders. The noun phrase article was
kept as the, and nouns were located at the end of all items.
Data Gathering Procedure
The pre-test was given prior to the short intensive lesson on adjective order. Afterthe lesson, the same test with re-arranged adjective phrases was given to the same
participants. Tests items were different from those used in the instruction period. A
correct answer to each phrase with three adjectives for the pre- and post-tests wasscored as ‘1’, so that the test scores ranged from 0 to 21 points with an equal interval of
1. Differences in test scores between the pre- and post-tests were considered as
improvement directly resulting from the intensive lesion. One practice example wasgiven to the participants prior to the commencement of actual testing.
Analysis and Results
The means and standard deviations of the pre- and post-tests among three groups arepresented in Table 2 and visually presented in Figure 3. A 3 (EFL students’ knowledge
conditions) X 2 (pre- and post-test conditions) two-way analysis of variance (ANOVA)
with the last variable repeated was conducted on test scores of 81 participants. The
results indicated a significant main effect of the pre- and post-tests [F(1,78)=297.48,
p<.001], but no significance main effect of three groups [F(2,78)=0.210, n.s.].

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Interaction of these two variables was not significant [F(2,78)=1.202, n.s.]. Thus, results
suggested a significant improvement of 8.10 points between the scores of the pre-test(M=6.67) and post test (M=14.77) regardless of EFL students of awareness and learning
experience on English adjective order.
------------------------------------------------------Insert Table 2 about here------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Insert Figure 3 about here------------------------------------------------------In order to further examine accuracies in correctness decisions for each noun phrase,
21 correct phrases were rearranged in descending order based on improved scores asshown in Table 3. The Pearson’s correlation coefficient of 21 test items between the preand post- tests was not high (r=.174, n.s.), suggesting no clear relations in the test scores
between the pre- and post-tests, although improvement proved to be greatly significant.
All 21 test items were plotted (using nouns of the phrases) on the basis of the scores ofthe pre- and post-tests as depicted in Figure 4. Items above the diagonal line in Figure 4
indicate positively improved scores, of which there were 20.
------------------------------------------------------Insert Table 3 about here------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Insert Figure 4 about here------------------------------------------------------While concrete generalizations cannot be based on the results of 21 noun phrase
items alone, there are a few potential explanations to account for those that showed little
improvement. In this experiment, a chi-square test of independence was conducted oneach adjective phrase for numbers of correct/incorrect and pre-/post-test (a 2 X 2matrix). For example, in the case of young friendly Swedish woman, 29 students
answered correctly while 52 students responded incorrectly in the pre-test. In the
post-test, 64 students answered correctly while 17 students answered incorrectly. A

7chi-square test of independence yielded a chi-square value of 30.926 which issignificant at the 0.001 level, suggesting excellent improvement after the intensive
instruction. All results for chi-square tests of independence are shown in Table 3.
Fifteen noun phrases were shown to be improved significantly at the 0.001 level ofsignificance, which surpassed our highest expectations. On the other hand, fourphrases showed no significant improvement. Only one item, indicated by ‘scarf’ (i.e.,the silk colorful thin scarf) did not show a positive improvement (-3 points). The nounphrase for ‘scarf’, however, did not show any significant difference between the preand post-test scores according to a chi-square test of independence [χ2 (1)=0.294, n.s.],
indicating no difference in scores between the pre- and post-test.
Two items (cute pink wool sweater and colorful thin silk scarf) were poorly
rearranged on both pre- and post-tests, with their pre- and post-test scores plotted much
lower than others, as shown in Figure 4. In the case of these two phrases, it is notdifficult to imagine how the adjectives ‘pink’ and ‘cute’ could be confused byparticipants, as in everyday use these two words are often used interchangeably (e.g., inproduct marketing). It is also understandable that ‘colorful’ could be misunderstood as
an adjective of color rather than of subjective observation, not least because of theshared root word. With regards to the phrase, heavy large metal desk, it was by andlarge correctly rearranged on both tests, therefore leaving little room for improvement.
Discussion
A major difference between the present study and previous ones conducted on theadjective ordering theme (e.g., Meerman & Tamaoka, 2005, 2006) is the focus placedon correct production, rather than identification, of phrases containing more than one
adjective. In determining the extent to which intensive instruction on the rules ofadjective order can improve students’ ability to correctly identify and produce more
complex descriptive sentences, it is much more closely connected to pedagogicalapplication than those previous studies.
Japanese university students continue to have little command of the rules outlining
the correct usage of adjectives in English. Student performance on the pre-test showed
an overwhelming and almost uniformly poor knowledge of adjective order regardless ofthe extent of previous awareness or learning experience, with average pre-test scores amere 6.67 points out of a maximum 21 points. Instruction in proper adjective order istherefore clearly lacking in Japanese English lessons. An examination of several
samples from commonly used senior high school textbook series (e.g., Crown, Vista,

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Vivid and New Horizon) suffices to strongly support our claim that the issue of adjective
ordering is not sufficiently addressed in high school textbooks approved for use inJapanese senior high schools. Texts devoted exclusively to grammar are, of course,
available as supplementary resources to students to the extent that they seek them out.
However, the use of such texts is often limited to preparation for university entrance
examinations, and not common English curricula. Japanese students have either 1)
received little or no prior instruction on this grammatical point, or 2) have somehow,
somewhere been exposed to such instruction, yet have not retained it for effective use.
This experiment has shown that Japanese EFL students, at least at the university
level, can grasp and employ the rules governing adjective order upon receiving a single
intensive lesson. Post-test scores averaging 14.77 points (70.33% correctness ratio)
indicated an overall improvement of 8.10 points from the 6.67 points (31.76%
correctness ratio) on the pre-test. This improvement was even greater than had been
anticipated, and shows that it is not impossible to teach the order of adjectives despite
the difficulty inherent in producing such sentences for many Japanese English teachers.
Why, then, is adjective order almost completely neglected in Japanese senior highschool English curricula, when this necessary point of semantic adjective order can soeasily and quickly be taught? The goal of each learner presumably and ideally being toachieve fluency, the order of adjectives in noun phrases deserves just as much attention
for non-native learners as any other semantic or grammatical rule. While students mightsomehow be able to communicate any given point, disordered adjective placement
results in cumbersome expressions which are not only incorrect, but also place greater
responsibility on the listener to ensure smooth communication.
Questions remain as to whether or not retention of rules learned as a result of theintensive lesson can be demonstrated in the long term (remembering that almost a thirdof participants in the present study indicated having previous awareness and instructionin adjective ordering), and how students can be encouraged to internalize andspontaneously produce (rather than arrange) correctly ordered adjectives. One approach
to investigating these questions would include conducting the same test at some point in
the future with the same students. A further, and perhaps better alternative given thelogistical difficulties inherent in achieving the same group of participants for alongitudinal study, would be to conduct one or two intensive lessons, involving more
inductive as well as deductive approaches to instruction. This study employed intensive
instruction based on deductive methods, which may result in a stronger ability to
produce more complex and expressive sentences on written assignments and hence may
be the most significant result of this form of intensive instruction in adjective order.

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Given the remarkably positive results of this exercise, the next step would be to
conduct similar intensive experiments based on a more inductive approach. The link
between inductive instruction and long term retention has been discussed at length
elsewhere (e.g., Herron & Tomasello, 1992). It may furthermore foster students’ ability
to internalize their learning, ideally to respond with intuitive semantic judgment rather
than mechanical grammatical recall. Finally, future research might look at measuring
improvement in oral competence in the same way we tested for reading recognition
skills.
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