The rRetail sector is rapidly transforming and that is sure tois projected to show display its highest
growth in the coming five years. Thus, The sector is rapidly transforming , with the current players andnew -entrants prepare are preparing to explore marketfor. the upcoming mMomentous market growththat will result from Growth are expected in the organized retail sector; due to the rapid increaaesing
consumer demand and the availability of real estate.

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Moreover thanksOwing to the increased in reach of mediaa, the abundance of high disposable income,and a availability of variety of brands and services, consumers have become more more ambitious andaware and areonly seeking onlyseek the best. Thus
As a result , both brands and their retailers needto must expand grow and evolve further in order toprovide the right combinations of price, product differentiation, an experience, and service toconsumers.

There are about approximately 200 new malls, 1400 supermarkets, and & 400 department stores
currently under construction in India. Many retailers are approaching with ahave made hugeinvestments, and. Most forecasters say state that this the sector shaltouch towill reach USD$ 500–-700
billion by the year of 2012.

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quality real estate, improved and mall-management practices, and consumers preference bias forshopping of in new environments.

Future Concerns :No difference among the Mmalls homogeneity. This can be possiblycould be countered bylooking atwith specialization.;

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Little Small inventory turnovers and stock availability measures which make it important for
the retailers to enhance their operations.;

No integration and coordination of operations of retailers and supplier operationss.: Efficientinventory practices followed on the auto and auto-componentused by the auto industry could
be ies can implementedleveraged for efficient supply-chain management.;

Lack of supplier responsibility, in terms of delivery schedules and delivering the accuratequantity delivery.y ordered;Ssales tax laws : retailers have face state- level procurement and storage which taxes, whichlead thems to retailers havingmaintain higher inventory. VAT has brought slight ease;eased
this a bit.

Major gaps in areas of supply chain and customer relations, adopted by merchandising,facilities management, and & vendor development. P: proactive training is essential for
addressing these and other developmental areas.

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