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Information Regarding Advertisements

Information Regarding Advertisementsin the Weekend Sectionin the Weekend Section

Companies get great results with advertisements placed inCompanies / get great results / with advertisements / placed

the Hartford Weekly’s Weekend Section. With a readershipin the Hartford Weekly’s Weekend Section. / With a readershipof ten thousand people for our Sunday edition alone, theof ten thousand people / for our Sunday edition alone, / theHartford Weekly will get your business noticed.

Hartford Weekly / will get your business noticed. /Here are some details that you should know:

Here are some details / that you should know: /- Advertisements placed in the Hartford Weekly’s Weekend- Advertisements placed in the Hartford Weekly’s Weekend

Section must be sent prior to 10:00 A.M. on Wednesday

Section / must be sent prior to 10:00 A.M. / on Wednesday

morning of the week in which you want the advertisement

morning of the week / in which you want the advertisement toto appear. Advertisements sent after this time will appear inappear. / Advertisements sent after this time / will appear in

the section on the following weekend. In addition, once thethe section / on the following weekend. / In addition, / once

advertisement is submitted, no revisions are allowed.

the advertisement is submitted, / no revisions are allowed. /We will deduct 10% off the price of advertisements that run

We will deduct 10% off the price of advertisements / that run

for more than two weekends in a row. To find out more about

for more than two weekends in a row. / To find out more about

pricing, please contact us at ads@hartfordweekly.com.

pricing, / please contact us / at ads@hartfordweekly.com. /Thank you.

Thank you. /Part 7 サンプル問題 3-4

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Callum Blunt 9:43 A.M.

Callum Blunt 9:43 A.M.

Hi, Martina. Did you arrive in Denver on schedule?

Hi, Martina. / Did you arrive in Denver / on schedule? /Martina Lukas 9:48 A.M.

Martina Lukas 9:48 A.M.

Hi, yeah. I’m heading to the client’s office right away. One

Hi, yeah. / I’m heading to the client’s office / right away. / Onequick question though: do you have a copy of those sales

quick question though: / do you have a copy of those sales

forecast charts the consulting firm made for us?

forecast charts / the consulting firm made for us? /Callum Blunt 10:03 A.M.

Callum Blunt 10:03 A.M.

I’m not sure, but I can look for them. Are they essential?

I’m not sure, / but I can look for them. / Are they essential? /Martina Lukas 10:08 A.M.

Martina Lukas 10:08 A.M.

I have the figures for our internal forecasts, so it should be

I have the figures for our internal forecasts, / so it should befine, but I’d like to show both sets as a comparison. If you canfine, / but I’d like to show both sets as a comparison. / If you

e-mail them over within the next half hour, I can update mycan e-mail them / over within the next half hour, / I can update

slides.

my slides. /Callum Blunt 10:12 A.M.

Callum Blunt 10:12 A.M.

I’ll ask Devon. He’s sure to have a copy.

I’ll ask Devon. / He’s sure to have a copy. /Part 7 サンプル問題 5-9 ①

下線＆スラッシュ入りスクリプトIsland Creek Books

Island Creek Books

160 Elm Drive, Sacramento, CA

160 Elm Drive, Sacramento, CABook Signing on Sunday, June 4!

Book Signing on Sunday, June 4!

Meet authors Jerry Miller, Sharon Woodman, Maria Jimenez,

Meet authors Jerry Miller, Sharon Woodman, Maria Jimenez,

and Cindy Sanders

and Cindy Sanders

On Sunday, June 4 , Island Creek Books will host four

On Sunday, June 4, / Island Creek Books / will host four

bestselling authors. The authors’ most recent books will be

bestselling authors. / The authors’ most recent books / willavailable for purchase and can be autographed by the authors

be available for purchase / and can be autographed by thethemselves. In addition to signing books, each author willauthors themselves. / In addition to signing books, / eachhold a panel discussion, along with a Q&A session with theauthor will hold a panel discussion, / along with a Q&A session

public. The Island Creek Café will be providing refreshmentswith the public. / The Island Creek Café / will be providing

including coffee, pastries, and sandwiches.

refreshments / including coffee, pastries, and sandwiches. /This will be the fourth such event that we have held at theThis will be the fourth such event / that we have held at thebookstore, and as always, it is free and open to the public.

bookstore, / and as always, / it is free / and open to thePlease join us for a delightful day with the authors.

public. / Please join us for a delightful day with the authors. /Guest lineup

Guest lineup

Mr. Miller

11:00 A.M.

Mr. Miller

11:00 A.M.

Ms. Woodman

12:30 P.M.

Ms. Woodman

12:30 P.M.

Ms. Jimenez

2:00 P.M.

Ms. Jimenez

2:00 P.M.

Ms. Sanders

3:30 P.M.

Ms. Sanders

3:30 P.M.

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FROM: bjackson@islandcreekbooks.com

FROM: bjackson@islandcreekbooks.com

TO: woodman@1writer.net

TO: woodman@1writer.net

DATE: June 1

DATE: June 1

SUBJECT: Sunday’s schedule

SUBJECT: Sunday’s schedule

Dear Ms. Woodman,

Dear Ms. Woodman,

Thank you for your message. After I received it, I contacted

Thank you for your message. / After I received it, / I contacted

Mr. Miller in regard to exchanging time slots. He indicatedMr. Miller / in regard to exchanging time slots. / He indicatedthat he would be happy to exchange time slots with you.

that he would be happy / to exchange time slots with you. /We understand that you need to change to an earlier time

We understand / that you need to change to an earlier timeslot in order to travel to Los Angeles to receive the Nationalslot / in order to travel to Los Angeles / to receive the National

Writers’ Guild Novel of the Year Award. We know you will be

Writers’ Guild Novel of the Year Award. / We know you will bepressed for time in traveling to Los Angeles for the awards

pressed for time / in traveling to Los Angeles for the awards

ceremony after attending our event, and we sincerely thankceremony / after attending our event, / and we sincerely thankyou for honoring your commitment to our book signing.

you for honoring your commitment / to our book signing. /Regards,Regards,

Brenda Jackson

Brenda Jackson

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Purcellville to Create Recycling Program

Purcellville to Create Recycling Program

The Purcellville town council has announced plans for a town-

The Purcellville town council has announced / plans / forwide recycling program. Town council members chose thea town-wide recycling program. / Town council members

basic design of the recycling bins this past week. City tax/ chose the basic design of the recycling bins / this pastmoney will be used to pay for half of the bin purchase, withweek. / City tax money will be used / to pay for half of thethe other half of the cost coming from advertising printed onbin purchase, / with the other half of the cost / coming fromthe bins. Local businesses interested in participating in thisadvertising printed on the bins. / Local businesses interested

project will not only be helping the community put its waste

in participating in this project / will not only be helping theto better use but will also get a lot of advertising in return.

community / put its waste to better use / but will also get a lot

The recycling project is planned to begin at the end of nextof advertising in return. /month. All residents will be encouraged to participate in theThe recycling project / is planned to begin / at the end of next

program, and each household will be given one bin. However,month. / All residents will be encouraged / to participate in

you must first register with the town council to receive one.

the program, / and each household will be given one bin. /This can be done in-person at the town hall or online at www.

However, / you must first register with the town council / torecycle@purcellville.gov.

receive one. / This can be done in-person / at the town hall /or online at www.recycle@purcellville.gov. /Part 7 練習問題 3-4

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Belinda Shields [10:34 A.M.]:Belinda Shields [10:34 A.M.]:

Kevin, do you have a moment? I’ ve got a problem with the

Kevin, / do you have a moment? / I’ve got a problem / with thesoftware I’m using. I have a presentation this afternoon, so it’s asoftware I’m using. / I have a presentation this afternoon, / sobit urgent. Can you or one of the other IT guys help?

it’s a bit urgent. / Can you or one of the other IT guys help? /Kevin Butcher [10:36 A.M.]:

Kevin Butcher [10:36 A.M.]:

Sure, that’s what we’re here for! What’s the problem?

Sure, / that’s what we’re here for! / What’s the problem? /Belinda Shields [10:40 A.M.]:

Belinda Shields [10:40 A.M.]:

I used the CellScape spreadsheet software to make a chart

I used the CellScape spreadsheet software / to make a chart

showing the breakdown of January’s sales. That worked fine,showing the breakdown of January’s sales. / That worked fine,but in order to make the slides for my presentation, I need to/ but in order to make the slides for my presentation, / I need toimport the chart into Turbo Graphix. The problem is that theimport the chart into Turbo Graphix. / The problem is that thechart isn’t appearing in Turbo Graphix.

chart isn’t appearing in Turbo Graphix. /Kevin Butcher [10:43 A.M.]:

Kevin Butcher [10:43 A.M.]:

OK, that ’s strange. Turbo Graphix should be able to read

OK, / that ’s strange. / Turbo Graphix should be able to read

CellScape files without any problems. What format did you save

CellScape files / without any problems. / What format did you

the chart in?

save the chart in? /Belinda Shields [10:45 A.M.]:

Belinda Shields [10:45 A.M.]:

I’m just looking now and the tag reads “.CCS” ̶ is that right?

I’m just looking now / and the tag reads “.CCS” / ̶ is that right? /Kevin Butcher [10:48 A.M.]:

Kevin Butcher [10:48 A.M.]:

It should be. It might be that you’re using an old version of

It should be. / It might be that you’re using an old version ofTurbo Graphix and it’s having trouble importing files made withTurbo Graphix / and it’s having trouble importing files / madethe latest version of CellScape. I’ll come up and install the latest

with the latest version of CellScape. / I’ll come up / and installversion. You’ll probably be OK then.

the latest version. / You’ll probably be OK then. /Part 7 練習問題 5-9 ①

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http://www.electronicsjournal.com/costs/

http://www.electronicsjournal.com/costs/

Electronics Journal - Advertising Costs:

Electronics Journal - Advertising Costs:

Full Page$2,500

Full Page$2,500

1/2 Page$1,600

1/2 Page$1,600

1/4 Page$1,000

1/4 Page$1,000

1/8 Page$800

1/8 Page$800

Premium Positions (all full page)

Premium Positions (all full page)

Inside Front Cover$4,000Inside Front Cover$4,000Inside Back Cover$3,500Inside Back Cover$3,500Back Cover$4,200Back Cover$4,200A discount of 10% will be applied to ads submitted

A discount of 10 % will be applied / to ads submitted

electronically, under the condition that the supplied data

electronically, / under the condition / that the supplied data

meets our specifications (see following page). Any data thatmeets our specifications (see following page). / Any data that

requires alterations at our end will incur the full price.

requires alterations at our end / will incur the full price. /Part 7 練習問題 5-9 ②

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FROM: Rosanna Krupp

FROM: Rosanna Krupp

TO: info@ejmonthly.com

TO: info@ejmonthly.com

DATE: January 11

DATE: January 11

SUBJECT: Re: Invoice

SUBJECT: Re: Invoice

Dear Sir/Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam,

Last week, my company, Hathaway Software Solutions,

Last week, / my company, Hathaway Software Solutions,submitted data for a full page back cover ad and one regularsubmitted data / for a full page back cover ad / and one regular

1/8 page advertisement. We received an invoice from you this

1/8 page advertisement. / We received / an invoice from you /morning and I have a question about the total.

this morning / and I have a question / about the total. /The amount to be paid doesn’t seem to include the 10%

The amount to be paid / doesn’t seem to include the 10%

discount for online submissions. Is there a mistake in the

discount / for online submissions. / Is there a mistake in theinvoice, and if so, can you send a fresh invoice for the correctinvoice, / and if so, / can you send a fresh invoice for theamount ASAP, so we can move forward with payment

correct amount / ASAP, / so we can move forward / withquickly? It is important that these advertisements arepayment quickly? / It is important / that these advertisements

published in your October issue, in order to coincide with ourare published in your October issue, / in order to coincide

new product launch.

with our new product launch. /Rosanna Krupp

Rosanna Krupp

Accounts Department, Hathaway Software Solutions

Accounts Department, Hathaway Software Solutions

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FROM: Terry Nolan

FROM: Terry Nolan

TO: Rosanna Krupp

TO: Rosanna Krupp

DATE: January 12

DATE: January 12

SUBJECT: Re: re: Invoice

SUBJECT: Re: re: Invoice

Hi Rosanna,

Hi Rosanna,

I checked your invoice, and it seems the discount for

I checked your invoice, / and it seems / the discount forelectronic submissions wasn’t applied in your case because

electronic submissions wasn’ t applied / in your case /the data submitted did not fit our standard templates. As abecause the data submitted / did not fit our standard

result, our designers were required to make alterations totemplates. / As a result, / our designers were required to makeensure the ads fit cleanly into the page layouts. In accordancealterations / to ensure the ads fit cleanly into the page layouts.

with our policy, the full listed price applies.

/ In accordance with our policy, / the full listed price applies. /If you wish to proceed with the advertisements in time forIf you wish to proceed with the advertisements / in time for

October’s issue, we need to receive the payment in full by 3

October’s issue, / we need to receive the payment in full / byP.M. tomorrow.

3 P.M. tomorrow. /Terry Nolan

Terry Nolan

Electronics Journal

Electronics Journal

Advertising & Marketing Section

Advertising & Marketing Section