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 The email controversy is in the wrong section 

My bold edit was reverted by  and I was directed to previous discussions. In addition to what I believe were improvements to grammar and sentence structure, I moved the email controversy sections to the bottom of the U.S. Secretary of State section, where it seems to belong - (see this version )

I'm puzzling over the reasoning for having an oddball miscellaneous section called Clinton Foundation, e-mails issue, and other activities. (sort of like ""Monkey, grapefruits, and things found on a Chevrolet"", to my ears). This was previously discussed here Talk:Hillary Clinton/Archive 25#Location and section header relative to emails controversy. I'm pinging  and  who were involved in this previous discussion. From a reader's perspective, I find it jarring to read about this relatively major controversy outside of the context of the part of Mrs. Clinton's career in which it happened. - MrX "