"::Hi, and thanks for coming to the talkpage. I see you're a brand new editor, so please don't be offended or frustrated that your edit was reverted. This is a fairly normal part of the BRD cycle and article improvement. ""Properly integrated"" was specifically a reference to the addition of the phrase ""...and wrote that..."" which is , technically, improper grammar. That can be fixed quite easily, and we can add a ref (source) if you provide info about which edition and page number you're quoting from. However, there are 3 other editors involved in this discussion and before making any further changes to the article itself, they need a chance to respond to the discussion and the changes that you've proposed. Especially when an article has reached FA status and is considered one of WP's best, we need to be sure that every single change we make is an actual improvement. It may seem slow and cumbersome, but in the long run it seems to work. Thanks again, and happy editing.  Tropics 

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