I thought I listed the specific problems on the talk page already? I don't know why you think I'm partisan, as I've posted comments on all 3 wikipedia pages of the NYAG election candidates, asking for revisions to make them neutral, because they all read like PR ads. Coffey's is the most so (based on both the language and the fact that most of it was written by 3 people who did nothing but write the Coffey page and link other pages to it), but all of them have neutrality problems of varying degrees. -