Senseless details
First, to write a proper, encyclopedic biographical article, we should use summary style.  We are not writing a biography, rather we are writing a small biographical article.  Ms. Horton may well have played jacks as a child.  I may even find a source for this information.  Nevertheless, the information is irrelevant and unnecessary for our readers to get a snapshot of who Ms. Horton is today.  The fact that she worked two jobs to pay for flying lessons demonstrates her dedication to her intended profession.  The fact that she worked at a car dealership and a pharmacy, as opposed to a gas station and a supermarket, tells me absolutely nothing.  It does not add to the article, but it does make the article worse.   (talk)