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 Yoko Ono 

Hi. You recently GA reviewed this article and quickly failed it. Could I suggest that you put it on hold instead so the nominator has a chance to fix the issues? Although I also reviewed and failed it, I was hoping that the work on the article would eventually lead to a pass. The major issue at the moment I see is there are still unsourced or questionably sourced bits, but hopefully those could be fixed. What do you think?  (talk) (cont)  "