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Apology accepted.  I've had a go at Ain't Miss Bahavian in order to get it down to a reasonable length.  There were one or two sentences that didn't seem to add anything to the plot, which I've left out, but it's still not entirely clear how the different plotlines resolved (if they did).  Is there not a Website that gives plot summaries?   (Talk) "