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Of the three versions, I like KVL's proposed text the best, followed by Thompsma's. Although Mauna's text is simpler, the wording in several sentences is a little awkward. While I agree with Maunus's sentiment that the texts by KVL and Thompsma are a little dense, I think the best solution would be to ""divide up"" a few of the sentences and pace ourselves a little bit. Both versions seemed ""a little rushed.""   "