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 Proposed change 2.1 in 1953 Iran coup article lead 

Aliwiki (above) and Kurdo (here) have both made complaints about the proposed changes that I think have merit, so I'm revising the change so that Iran falling under the influence of the expansionist Soviet Communist ""empire""[7] refers to the US administration point of view and not a statement of fact. The to-be-revised text and revised text are in italics.     
Current wording 
""Initially, Britain mobilized its military to seize control of the Abadan oil refinery, the world's largest, but Prime Minister Clement Attlee opted instead to tighten the economic boycott.Mohammad Mosaddeq and the 1953 Coup in Iran while using Iranian agents to undermine his government.Kinzer, All the Shah's Men, p.3 (In October 1952 Mosaddeq ""orders the British embassy shut"" after learning of British plotting to overthrow him.) With a change to more conservative governments in both Britain and the United States, Churchill and the U.S. administration of Dwight D. Eisenhower decided to overthrow Iran's government though the predecessor U.S. Truman administration had opposed a coup.Kinzer, Stephen. All the Shah's Men. Hoboken, N.J.: John Wiley & Sons, Inc., 2008, p. 3""

""The tangible benefits the United States reaped from overthrowing Iran's elected government was a share of Iran's oil wealthKinzer, Stephen, Overthrow: America's Century of Regime Change from Hawaii to Iraq (Henry Holt and Company 2006). p. 200–201 as well as the resolute prevention of the slim possibility that the Iranian government might align itself with the Soviet Union, although the latter motivation produces controversy among historians as to the seriousness of the threat.""

Proposed change
""Initially, Britain mobilized its military to seize control of the Abadan oil refinery, the world's largest, but Prime Minister Clement Attlee opted instead to tighten the economic boycott.Mohammad Mosaddeq and the 1953 Coup in Iran while using Iranian agents to undermine his government.Kinzer, All the Shah's Men, p.3 (In October 1952 Mosaddeq ""orders the British embassy shut"" after learning of British plotting to overthrow him.) By 1953 both Britain and the United States had more conservative governments and the new US Eisenhower administration reversed its predessor's opposition to a coup, fearing that Iran was in danger of falling under the influence of the expansionist Soviet Communist ""empire"".Little, Douglas. American Orientalism: the United States and the Middle East since 1945, I.B.Tauris, 2003, p. 216. ISBN 1860648894""  

""The tangible benefits the United States reaped from overthrowing Iran's elected government was a share of Iran's oil wealthKinzer, Stephen, Overthrow: America's Century of Regime Change from Hawaii to Iraq (Henry Holt and Company 2006). p. 200–201 as well as the prevention of possibility that Iran might fall under the influence of the Communist Soviet Union.Gasiorowski, Mosaddeq, p.274""   

The reason for the change is the same as the original one and is discussed here 

I know you didn't make any comment on my last attempt but I hope you will find this one is a true improvement.   "