":Sorry for such late reply, while not on wikibreak exactly, I've been busy enough in real life I haven't done any editing that takes time, as your question deserves.  I think the biggest issue with the article is that it makes no claim of notability.  Why does it stand out?  Why is it worth an encyclopedia article.  Please see WP:NOT and particularly WP:NOTDIR.  Although the article isn't the worst offender on promotion by any means, it still looks to be promoting services.  Read the other reviewer's comments, they are very valuable.  All the best,  (I'm no IP, talk to me!) 

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