RE: my argument
Thank you, that does clear things up. Unfortunately I'm on my lunch break at the moment and don't have time to give you a proper/full response; however as soon as I get home (1am-ish PST) I'll go over what you've given me in detail and give you something that does justice your post. For now I'm going to have to leave it at: Although I still disagree with a few points, I believe that much of what you've said is valid and strong but that it must be reflected by the page in order for the section to hold merit. I think that the section would also have to be reorganized to accurately reflect this.