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(CNN)  While football fans were dumbfounded earlier this month when referee Mark Clattenburg failed to award a goal to Tottenham Hotspur midfielder Pedro Mendes, a small German company was quietly pleased. Clattenburg's failure to see what was as shown in replays  clearly a goal from 50 yards, infuriated followers of the English Premiership game against Manchester United. http://edition.cnn.com/2005/TECH/01/14/spark.football/index.html  14:30, 20 October 2007

The first reference is a personal opinion of Julie Clothier, not a neutral match report. You cannot insert opinionated material into a biography of this kind. You can talk about ""possibly missing a valid goal"" but not that he definitely did, as he was making decisions based on what he saw, not what we saw. The second reference appears to be valid, and should be included when you re-submit the item into the article, in as neutral a tone as possible. Thanks.  (chew)(do) "