Poor English and moreover poor ANY language: unclear 

This is so short and so full of mistakes that it is rather hard to follow. Does he have one thesis in law or two theses? Why would anyone have two theses in the same field? Why is there insistence on this (location of MA thesis in law, location of PhD thesis in law) when he is mostly known as a historian? Are there ISBN and links to those for his books?

This article needs serious reworking.