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 Ethnic Taiwanese Imperial Japan Serviceman 

I noticed you were working on the above new article, and I tried to make some edits to improve (in my opinion) the grammar and other things, but since you are still making changes yourself, there were edit conflicts. So, I have decided to wait.

If after you're happy with the article, you would like me to look over it and perform a copy edit, please reply on my talk page and I'll be happy to do so. This isn't meant as a criticism of your spelling or grammar, just one or two issues of style that I feel I could help with. talkstalk "