Thank you for the welcome. I will try and contribute where possible. My main forte is checking references and ease of writing. I review and edit history books for a living and I cannot bear to see long drawn-out sentences or poor grammar. Also it would be good to see if the friction between you and LK can be resolved. You both seem keen to produce a good article but the current atmosphere will not be conducive to that goal. That comment is aimed at both of you, as it does seem to be a little six of one and half a dozen of the other on intial review. I will try and get up to speed with the more complex parts of references. I have worked out the edit history links fairly easily (squared brackets) but it seems a bit more complex for book references. I will read through the guides. Thanks again for the welcome.