Thanks for adding the wider sourcing, that gives the article a much stronger credibility. Do you think you could turn those into WP:Footnotes for further clarity? Not to just dump taskings on you, but it always helps an article, and for any future articles you write it's a good skill to have since it's easy to do while writing your draft, and helps folks know where to verify each fact. Also, WP:MILHIST had a question about his designation and the timeline involved, so if you get a chance to drop in to [Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Military_history#Help_at_Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation.2FRichard_Lyon_.28U._S._Admiral.29_.28first_SEAL_admiral_ever.2C_1974.29|this post (linked)]] and clarify that'd be great. Thanks!