In all honesty, this article is probably a marginal nomination for deletion on the basis of Junie Browning lacking notability. A number of TUF cast members got articles, then those articles got deleted when they never really went on to do anything in MMA. That being said, even if we're to leave it up, your suggestion has two problems. One is that Junie Browning is a living person and Wikipedia has certain policies about biographies of living people, secondly, a lot of the stuff you mention is either not externally citable from a credible source or not citable at all. A 'criticisms' section of that nature would be seriously undue weight, the whole concept is just kinda silly. Whatever your personal butthurt is over Junie Browning aside, the article should probably be deleted. Not expanded.