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I'm not trying to be a jerk here, but this article is unfocused, and it looks like it's got a lot of original research.  I am also a grammar fan, but I don't think Wikipedia is the right place to write an extended essay on pleonasm.  Please, let's try to either trim this article or find some sources for most of it.   motorneuron
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