HI Sarah.  First, I changed from Gfwesq when I realized my husband was still logged in.  We are not sockpuppets, and I would never attribute what I say to him.  Thus, I changed it.  I wish there were some other way of identifying independent users than this, but I don't know how.  

Second, I removed the sections that were factually untrue and that were judgmental and inflammatory  including where I quoted the same paragraph to show the author's bias.  This is per the WP:Bio guidelines as the tag says on the talk page.