Did someone remove the controversies section? As far as the article matching the structure of The Buddha From Brooklyn, not at all. And I should hope not. It jumps back and forth in time quite a bit. As for following Trungpa's Rinpoche's layout, I don't see anything wrong with that at this point. 
 I removed the quote about her voice because the write-up was for an online seller selling the CD. Wikipedia doesn't link to Amazon.com or similar businesses. When we have something else for an acclaim section we can add it back in.