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 Pure Gold Jewellers 

I have moved your article to your userspace so you may work on it at your own pace before resubmitting it to AfC. It is located here.

As far as the article itself is concerned, here are some problems which should be corrected before continuing.
Sources

Your sources are sometimes trivial and do not contribute to the overall article.

 Trivial mention of PGJ, more focused on gold and the industry in general

 Trivial mention of the company, focuses again more on industry and economy. More of a press release.

 Trivial mention of award.

 Trivial

 Does nothing more than provide source for what I've mentioned to be puffery

 About owner, not company.

 Trivial PR

 Trivial PR

Quality of article
Again, things like ""Best Customer Service"" awards are usually considered puffery and are not suited to encyclopaedic articles.

Put simply, this article needs to be more than just a list of company awards. That alone cannot sustain an article.

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