"45, 5 June 2006 (UTC) 

You need to explain why ""We Belong Together"" is a ""universal love anthem"" if you want to use that phrase. 

""Once the studio session was complete,.... confident that the album was complete,"" sounds repetitious. 

Also, ""The composers experienced a lengthy discussion"" is an odd phrasing. Maybe it would be better to say ""Carey and Dupri discussed the melody at length,"" or words to that effect. I don't think that's quite the sense that the original phrase is trying to convey, though.  FreplySpang 
You might be right. I'm going to certainly correct the third and fourth examples, but I don't understand why the second example requires elaboration. — | talk 21:"