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Sentence Structure
Why do portions of this article sound so unprofessionally written? For instance, ""A new unofficial mixtape ""Guccimania"" has some of his new 2009 singles featured on the mixtape."" Wrong grammar and use of punctuation. Also, I'd like to see ""helped create his popularity"" changed to ""helped to boost his popularity"". I mean, he was popular before that. And finally, ""Soon he was on a lot of guest appearances for artists such as"". I'd like that to be changed to ""He soon started collaborating with many mainstream artists, including"". Does that sound fair?   "