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I owe you an apology, Alarics - somehow, I did not see your version, which I agree is well-balanced, neutral and in general very good. Rather, I saw cenwin88lee's version, where amnesty international is characterised as ""berating"" Singapore, among other points of contention. I think there must have been a delay between the submission of my edit and its actually being committed to the database (?).   "