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 Plot synopsis cut down 

I have cut down the article from an unwieldy 578 words to a slightly more manageable 299 words. I also the following comments (as suggested earlier by Telsa) in an attempt to cut down on some of the, um, shall we say ""detail-oriented"" edits in the article. If you feel these comments are a little strong, please feel free to edit them as you see fit:









Cheers all, and here's to a leaner, meaner article! phoenix "