I've left a comment. I would be interested to see how the article ends up. I have some formatting recommendations, but there's little point in worrying about them before a major edit. I also had a look at the history of the linked Wikispecies page(s), and I was amazed. Stho002 reverts edits, and then protects pages to keep them in his preferred state. Here he would be stripped of his admin bit for that, and it looks like he's done it more than once. I recognise that the Wikispecies community will be unwilling to castigate its most prolific editor, but evidence like that speaks for itself. He was briefly de-sysopped there before, and has been blocked, for edit warring and personal attacks, and further warnings were given in the last month. It doesn't bode well.