# Fragment of a Novel Written by Jane Austen/Notes

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4. being induced by Business to quit the high road, & (toil erased) attempt a very rough Lane, were overturned substituted for were on quitting the high road, & toiling up a very long steep hill through a rough Lane, overturned
8. half rock, half sand added above the line
10. a House for the House
11. first required to take that direction for required to turn that way
15. to pass by for to pass two minutes before He had grumbled & shaken his shoulders so much indeed, and pitied & cut his Horses so sharply for grumbling so much indeed, & looking so black, & pitying & cutting his Horses so much
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6. not his Masters written above not the Gentleman's own (but only not is erased)
7. had added above line indisputably become considerably worse for indisputably & evidently become much worse
10. passed erased before left behind expressing (saying erased) with a most intelligent (and seeming erased) portentous countenance written over as Bad as it had been before the Change seemed to say
13. could safely proceed for had ever thought of proceeding
16. Travellors beleived found themselves at first only shaken & bruised erased before Gentleman
​18. at first added above line
21. soon added above line
22. in a few moments erased after of it and added above line after obliged
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2. self erased before congratulations and to his wife & himself added above line
13. the for a before neat-looking
14. appearing erased after Cottage
15. peeping out from among wood, and erased before romantically among wood added above line
20. neither over & not erased
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1. from erased after coming
2. had for having
15. & very erased after salutation
19. assistance for service in any way
21. one or two of added above line
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5. best over better to erased
8. a favourable for the best possible
15. him for any his Partner erased before if he
17. rather added above line would prefer the attendance of his Partner for would have his Partner by preference (Miss Austen neglected to alter would to should)
20. can be with him for will be there
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1. for added above line before Excepting
12. though over either erased
14. stay added above line
20. whether you may know it or not added above line
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3. only yesterday morn$^g$ in London added above line
8. a added above line before Partnership
15. with a good humoured smile added above line
20. this Parish erased before Willingden for having (I have erased) over having erased
21. Sir added above line, and erased, after lived here
22. Sir erased after Man & Boy I think I must have known of such a person, at least I may venture] without ever hearing (and never heard before written above line and erased) of the existence of such a person before. I think I may venture (therefore added above line and erased) at least (at least added a second time, above line, and erased)—all cancelled
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3. To be sure for Though to be sure
9. Sir added above line
12. and that added above line before My Shepherd
14. peices for bits
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10. last added above line
12. when added above line was (being erased) in the over in erased
14. One is never able to be complete anything (be inadvertently not erased) for Nothing able to be completed
16. you know added above line
17. and accordingly satisfying for I satisfied
20. I added above line
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1. Scrape for awkward Predicament
13. you know added above line own added above line
17. air & added above line before immersion
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8. service to you & this Lady over use to service erased
15. it will be better for us for we had better accept this kind offer
16. he erased before turned
18. in order added above line
21. rise to added above line
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3. home added above line
5. my for the
9. itself added above line
11. the favourite spot for the most favourite
13. favourite erased before coast
14. promising to be the most chosen for consequently the most likely to be chosen
21. the wonder! for amazing to me!
22. or Time for & Time
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1. a Country for any Country
2. sure to added above line
3. as I dare say you find for I dare say you find it so
12. experiencing for feeling
15. Nursery Grounds for laying out Gardens
17. those regular for the regular
19. who are a blessing everywhere, excite for excite not only
21. and diffuse for but diffuse
22. sort for kind
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3. one erased before place
9. totally added above line
16. must soon find themselves for I have no doubt will find themselves in the end
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10. One complete, measured for a measured
13. saving a whole Mile for that
19. lying, as it does for situated
20. a bleak Moor added above line
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10. (pro erased) yeild over grow erased
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1. Why, in truth Sir, I fancy for I fancy, Sir
3. that line for those lines
11. is quite of my opinion & thinks for quite agrees with me in thinking
15. (turning round towards erased before (two
16. (who erased) followed over attended erased
17. now seen added above line
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2. every thing that was proper for & did what was proper
3. recommend for enforce
10. the Carriage being now set up, was discovered to have received such Injury for it was now ascertained that the Carriage was so much injured
14. therefore added above line
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3. For a whole fortnight the Travellors were fixed at Willingden for The Parkers were the Guests of the Heywoods a fortnight
4. M$^r$ P.'s sprain proving (being erased) too serious for him to move sooner for The sprain was too serious for M$^r$ Parker to be sooner able to move sooner
13. equal goodwill erased before unremitting
14. act & erased before office
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3. on either for in either
6. unfolded for or made known
8. for he was (being erased) over was he was erased
10. his conversation for he
11. unconsciously erased after information
14. on for in
20. quiet (simple erased) added above line interesting only erased after Village consideration inhabited by one Family of consequence, his own, of secondary erased before pretensions
22. some before accidental erased, and restored above line
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2. Land Holder for Proprietor of the Land
3. becoming for being
6. note erased before young Renown for notoriety
13. of a respectable over no Profession erased
21. former indeed for Brothers in fact
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5. his ancle for an ancle
19. prodigious for great
22. last year added above line
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2. remained for was
7. not only those of added above line
8. and added above line before Home
9. also erased before his Mine
10. his Occupation added above line
14. and added above line before his endeavours
18. own added above line before House
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1. air erased after sea
4. bracket erased after spirits
​9. nearly for almost in every disorder erased after infallible
11. In cases erased after Disorder
12. they were equally sovereign erased after Blood They were erased, and restored above line
14. anti-bilious added above line
17. Nobody wanted Spirits, Nobody wanted Strength for nor c$^d$ the most obstinate Cougher retain a cough there 4 & 20 hours
19. seemingly added above line
20. each (?) erased before was wanted
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3. evidently for palpably
7. they erased before their
8. long over very long erased
14. could carry for conveyed
17. old over ol erased
19. eldest added above line
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4. an occasional month for a Summer occasionally
5. a erased before symptoms
6. and over to make erased
10. forbidding erased before obliged
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1. give useful connections or over lead them into respectable Company erased
6. Daughter for young Lady
13. under her Mother's directions for in acting for her Mother
15. & erased before who
20. gratitude for grateful feelings
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1. for her sisters & over & everything else that erased there erased after Library
​5. send for recommend get try (?) added above line before Sanditon and erased
8. as omitted
9. 5 shillings for one night
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16. facts added above line
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2. her history & her Character for names & places, & some hints of Character (though given with the light touch of a very friendly hand) erased after Character
3. were erased before served
4. Hill for Pull
6. who erased before with whom
15. quite erased before an elderly
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22. her conduct for it
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5. greatly for much
8. a chearful, independant, valuable character over to us erased
10. may be entirely for are to be cheifly her want for the want
16. truly admirable for which one admires
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1. now & then, see things differently for see things differently now & then
3. you know added above line
7. wants of Society for Social order
16. he had allowed them to be for they c$^d$ be
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1. these for the
3. Cous erased before Kindred
​13. at hand to preserve their over able by their vicinity, to erased
19. always erased before lived
20. very erased before principally
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4. had he for if he had
9. Lady D. has granted him for he holds under Lady D——
10. we shall over will erased
15. being erased before having the fairest for a very fair
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1. and long & often enjoyed] deprecating the idea of a Companion, defying & l enjoying erased
4. on that head, she had been erased after relations
6. House for Hall
10. secure for restore
17. Character for young Woman
20. described for delineated (and not with erased after described
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7. promptly & added above line
15. being in erased before London principally added above line
16. very added above line there resident there erased after Cousins
18. & whom she was determined to keep at a distance, she had over she had erased
20. there erased and restored above line
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3. reputed for proverbial
5. calling for called
7. not added above line
9. all the over great erased
10. which is left 'hanging'
15. a added above line before spy
​17. persuaded for induced
18. for the rest of her stay added above line after home and erased after offer
20. a added above line before very
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3. beyond her expectation over were erased
22. a added above line before situation
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3. merit (sweetness erased) over unpretending manners erased
9. steady conduct for good Judgement unassuming erased before gentle
18. having for she had
19. she was become erased before that Loveliness
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4. close by for in front of
6. Orchard & Meadows for Ground & Orchards
8. such a over such any erased
11. old added above line
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4. you know added above line
8. Hill for ascent
9. the heart of erased before Sanditon modern Sanditon added above line we shall soon catch the roof of my new house; my real home erased before a beautiful Spot
16. & added above line before without
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3. a little for the little
4. & a Crescent is a building that always takes erased after we shall
6. very erased before name joined to the over will give us choice of Lodgers erased
​8. In a good Season added above line before We
12. at it added above line
13. a great deal of erased before something
19. in fact added above line
21. having erased after without the constant Eyesore of added above line, and as an Eyesore erased after formalities formalities for formality
22. or the yearly nuisance of its for or its occasional
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4. and added above line before We and erased now (or here) erased after well off
5. as ever we were for as we used to be
13. on the Hill added above line about us erased before in the course
14. The Growth of my Plantations is a general astonishment for My Plantations astonish everybody by their Growth
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6. as proud as can be for so proud
7. How Grave she will walk about with it, and for It will be delightful to see her walking about with it, so gravely.—She will
12. now erased after bathe
18. at all for as we did
19. those for our
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5. with added above line
7. this Gutter for this Pit
11. by (any erased) one over if one erased
12. which do more mischief in a over should pour through the erased
13. when they do arise over which do more mischeif erased
​14. experiences for knows
20. get (deal with erased) all our erased before go
21. Stringer for Salmon
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4. beyond a doubt added above line
6. Help for encouragement
9. often wanted for forgotten
15. old erased before the Stringers
16. be added above line before easily
17. I hope erased after satisfied
19. & says added above line
21. out of erased before left
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3. He pretends to advise . . . Improvements added between lines
7. of & to us, all for of his eldest B$^r$—& to his Eldest B$^r$ &
8. Most Families . . . to say anything for A young Man of Abilities & Address, & general ease of manner Miss H.—who says anything
12. In ours, it is Sidney; who is a over Sidney is erased
14. and with great powers . . . only fault for very lively, very pleasant—living very much in the World—& liked by every body
16. I wish we may (I should above line, erased) erased before He is here
20. fine thing for for credit to
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7. neat added above line
8. original erased before Sanditon
9. Hill for Down
12. and whose Height ended in for but whose Top was
18. overlooking the Sea erased after Down where . . . looked for added above line
​15. winding more obliquely for wound
16. gave for giving
18. formed for forming
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1. delight for great pleasure
6. were actually erased before two Females
11. through the upper for from the open
12. Blissful for exhilarating
20. might for must
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3. during added above line
4. Summer for Season
6. and for but
7. would not let them be for c$^d$ not bear to have them
8. the shore added above line
11. William for old
14. at a Shoemaker's added above line
15. This is new . . . a month ago added between lines
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3. former Days for old erection
9. (to be watched above line) by M$^r$ Parker their d erased before by M$^r$ P.
12. calculated for reckoned fewer erased before and a smaller
17. —but there were the Sands erased after dinner But added above line & the Terrace added above line
19. and the added above line before Tide
20. half-Tide now for half in
21. at added above line before his own
22. at once added above line
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2. he added above line before c$^d$ almost
5. on the Down for of any was a light for was an
​6. standing in a for separated from the Down only by a
7. a very young plantation round it for very young plantations over it
8. about for not
9. the Cliff—which was erased after brow of very added above line before lofty
11. short added above line
16. a little for a small space
18. to added above line before the Bathing
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6. ample, Venetian added above line
11. in Sunshine & Freshness for under a Sunshiny Breeze
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7. But added above line before Perhaps
8. I trust it may for Not unlikely
16. say for guess
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8. two added above line
7. frequently added above line subject to a variety of very serious for at times Martyrs to very dreadful
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1. much added above line 20 for 22
5. which is most unfortunate erased after Profession
10. w$^d$ appear by this letter to have been for had been
14. began for observed
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3. accomplishing between you for bringing about
5. shew for describe
10. at for by before your accident
​16. hardly able to crawl from the (my erased) Bed to the Sofa erased after found me suffering added above line
18. & hardly . . . Sofa added above line
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9. use for application steadily for well
11. six for 4
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6. to be obtained erased after releif
11. know where to apply erased before could soon
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2. and added before Six
3. 10 days together over the last week have erased so little for a little
4. we for I
9. accordingly erased after drawn and added above line
14. trying to suppress (coughing erased) a cough for sneezing
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4. & for —
6. one for that of
8. Girls added above line
12. But added above line
14. as he (concluded erased) finished (it erased) for having finished & refolded his Letter Though I dare say over I suppose if erased
15. w$^d$ erased after Sidney
16. extremely entertaining for very amusing (to laugh at above line erased)
17. & make us . . . together added above line
18. by (possibly for) myself, can see nothing (either erased) in for can see nothing in
19. either added above line before very
22. in (advancing erased) promoting for for
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5. extra added above line
10. quite erased before astonished
13. It is really erased before frightful
16. more for most
17. to one's imagination erased after distressing
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7. own for say
13. p (i.e. poor?) erased before Arthur
22. idle & indolent erased after 20
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3. any prospect and (above line) the slightest plan erased before of engaging
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6. & added above line before as quickly
9. Business added above line
12. Elderly added above line
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1. & added above line before the Sands
4. the House added above line
6. her inner room for the little inner parlour
7. Employment for something better to do
14. such as these erased after than
16. Brown for Henderson
17. M erased before Lieut:
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1. the List was not only for it was not only a List
7. were an ever-ready consolation for was an ever-present source of Joy
8. without delay for immediately
15. with all becoming alacrity erased after List
16. busy in for proceeding to
18. further added above line
21. smart Trinkets for ornamented Combs
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7. she reflected for began to feel
9. for her added above line
11. the very first Evening for the first Evening of her arrival She took up a Book; it happened to be a vol: of Camilla for A vol: of Camilla happened to lie on the Counter
15. so, she turned from the Drawers of rings & Broches for, The (Gl erased) Drawers of rings & Broches must be resisted
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3. & (had erased) been directed thence for whence they were directed
4. her having walked a good mile was erased before Lady D.
20. you & make sure of your for our good Neighbours, & be sure of their
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3. very quietly over without any other species of opposition erased
11. She observed them well added above line
14. & for a after eye
18. being free-spoken for free-speaking
19. about her for in it
22. of welcome for and interest
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1. was for was was
9. a sweetly modest & yet naturally graceful for a sweet modesty yet natural gracefulness of
11. in added above line after see
12. the for as (?) after only
18. whatever Heroine might be most beautiful & bewitching for all the most beautiful & bewitching Heroines
16. on for in before Mrs. Whitby's
17. was from erased before might
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2, 3. Such added above line before Poverty and such before Beauty
12. in erased after herself first added above line before 5
14. be the Lot of for await
21. Denham for Denham's
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17. very erased after Very
21. spend over are said erased
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2. fancy for think
4. But for And about erased after scatter
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6. at me erased after smiles
7. I dare say added above line
8. may be erased after Creature
17. as added above line before all
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11. credit for thanks
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6 & 8. There is no doubt that Miss Austen wrote Chamber-House though it was printed Chamber-Horse in the Memoir
14. my added above line before poor
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4. & I added above line
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3. them for others
8. settled with M$^{rs}$ P.—in for in
9. when they came erased after Drawing room
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13. very good for pleasing
19. very erased before fine
21. She for Charlotte
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1. very erased before agreable
2. suspicion for notion
3. would arise for might be implied
9. (simple erased) dull of Fancy for Dull of Mind ind erased before careless
20. and erased before followed
22. merely for only
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2. altogether added above line
9. did him no harm for did not hurt him
15. th erased before all
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6. devoting himself entirely erased after walk & by added above line before addressing
8. Stationing himself added above line before Close side erased after by her
11. to added above line before give
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18. there is added above line to madden for that maddens
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14. him for Scott
19. truly added above line before breathed
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20. of erased before elicited
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19. had learnt to understand for could comprehend
​21. had for could
22. or two on his side over of two of Sir Edwards erased
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10. for for of before going
16. some erased before looks
18. were to erased before united
21. amused in considering for deriving considerable amusement from
22. between for of
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2. strain of added above line
4. discourse for manner of talking
5. immediately erased after arm
6. felt (herself doing erased) that any notice from her was an Honour over had been long used to consider her honour (sic) by any Notice she bestowed erased
9. or a natural for & a
17. every way added above line
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5. with me added above line
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3. find fault with for rip up the faults of
4. Nobody could live happier together than us for We lived perfectly happy together
12. Charlottes for her
15. legal erased before bequest
16. had erased before only
18. it for that
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4. bad added above line
14. a added above line before very fine
15. in his added above line before Address
18. directly saw that for imagined
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14. to repeated inadvertently quite added above line after seemed
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2. real and Landed or Funded added above line
7. And for Now
12. get written twice, one erased
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10. was erased before prepared
15. out for the before Bed rooms
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12. 3 or 4 erased before either
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7. but for & before without
8. & only conscious that Lady D. was still talking for while Lady D. still talked
12. thoroughly mean. I had not expected any thing so bad for much worse than I expected—meaner—a great deal meaner. She is very mean
14. His own kind Disposition makes him judge too well of others erased before His Judgement
15. always added above line before to be trusted and erased in his opinion of others erased after trusted
16. in judging of others erased after misleads him
22. Line for respect
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7. not added above line before tell
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2. till for by
8. has been our Occupation for we have been doing
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9. But added above line before If
11. I dare say it will for it will probably
18. incipient added above line
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2. aberration for aberrations
4. atcheive for encounter
6. delight for ardour
10. indomptible for unconquerable
12. high-toned Machinations of the added above line
21. any opposing Character for his Rival
22. but added above line before Eleemosynary
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5. anti-puerile for sagacious
12. whom circumstances . . . spot added above line
19. since added above line before appeared
22. opposition of feeling & convenience for thing
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8. of the erased and restored above line which were the usual erased before Villain
13. was always more anxious for its for always wished it better
14. than it c$^d$ ever have erased after success
19. owed his erased before read nothing
20. were for was (an interesting change)
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8. our replaced by the and restored
14. He felt that added above line before He
16. The very name . . . fascination with it added between lines
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2. any for some before pretensions
4. mistaken erased before veiws
7. alone added above line after Clara
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12. w$^d$ have erased before felt a strong for some
13. ascertain for know
15. desola (?) erased before solitary
20. st (i.e. stile?) erased before sort
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15. having been for being
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5. could be for was
7. if possible before her for before her if possible
8. did not allow for was too brisk for
11. when for as
17. a moment's astonishment for beginning to astonish Charlotte
22. a great deal of above line, great astonis (?) and much (word illegible) erased
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1. but still more for & great
2. Nothing c$^d$ be . . . wife added between lines
4. How erased and restored (orig. How had?)
6. that added above line before she was
9. middling for middle
10. delicate looking rather than sickly for but rather delicate than absolutely sickly
11. in her erased before with an agreable
12. her manners resembling for and her manners resembled
14. with for there was before more decision
16. without delay for as soon as they were in the Drawing room
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1. better & better for a great increase of the Happiness!
2. come for here
​3. Nothing else to be done for A case of Necessity
12. which we spent erased after night and as for but
13. so added above line before common that erased before as
15. wonderfully for charmingly
16. She erased (probably) before had no Hysterics had for and
17. within sight of for to
18. the attack was not very violent—(quite over erased) nearly over for they were quite subsided
22. M$^r$ Woodcock's assistance for young Woodcock's help
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1. the Disposal of the Luggage for where all the Luggage sh$^d$ be carried
3. Sam for Hannah unp (?) erased before uncord
5. her erased before being so poor
7. unwilling for afraid for
11. about for over so I for therefore
13. the Terrace, to added above line
16. I am sure erased after Hotel
17. on the Down for in the field
22. affected for stiffened
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13. the Good for two Excellent
14. know them only for have only heard of them
15. You must over My friend Fanny Noyce I dare say you erased
22. Only for But
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5. where for Spot
10. on for as to before the question
​15. th erased before Names
16. There over The erased
21. to receive for for
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4. simple link of connection for connecting link
9. case for question
10. but for But before two days
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2. there added above line after arriving
7. than erased after account
11. all added above line before this
14. us for the English after to make
17. By erased before Whether or added above line before to M$^{rs}$
18. to over But erased
20. am equal for ought
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1. me for my Exertions
7. left Chichester added above line
11. & doing . . . World added above line
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6. quick for hasty The part of the story which was really (most above line) astonishing (to above line) Charlotte most, she could not (something above line, not legible) noticed, she had just given (?) it to herself erased after measures
7. The words for the words of
8. had just passed through Charlotte's (brain erased) mind (and collecting her Thoughts, she replied—"I dare say I look surprised, for I feel so erased)—all written over but she could only give one explanation of the Amazement which she c$^d$ easily beleive to be painted in her face erased
10. that erased before a civil
​11. do added above line before look
13. what Invalides . . . are for that both you & your Sister are sad sufferers (Invalides above line) as to Health
16. appellation for name
22. which will erased before incline
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1. Howe (?) erased before The World
4. not for act
5. no opportunity of (doing erased) being useful (Good erased) escape them for none of their faculties be wasted
10. of use of sic
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4. warmly offered his assistance for particularly urged for
11. of mine added above line after business
19. today for this Even$^g$
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5. some (other erased) Lodgings or other for them
9. the commission for to undertake it
13. No, indeed . . . mere name for Oh! as to your Sisters Dinner cried his wife, that's never any thing more than a name
21. I grant you added above line
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3. is only too much disposed for Food. We are often over is much more likely to eat too much than too little we erased (eats enormously. We above line, erased)
18. so erased before independant
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1. who actually attends . . . Eloquence and for & attends some of the girls of the Seminary, to give them lessons in Botany &
7. however added above line after appearing
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1. ago erased before since
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4. in erased after sensation
6. for themselves erased after complaints
9. a Zeal for for the love of
11. or written inadvertently for of before others
16. an early for a at over to erased
18. their sufferings added above line
20. Charitable for benevolent
22. a spirit of restless activity for the disease of activity
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2. Benevolence for Health, as well as in every inaction of Sickness
10. who for whose before had never
18. she found them added above line
21. it had been added above line
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2. the added above line before Table
7. a peculiar degree over the sort erased
14. excepting for except
16. the several for many
17. at home for domesticated
20. symptoms for signs
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3. the added above line before salts
4. considerable for great
6. him added above line after fancied
12. excepting erased before with
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3. much for most
8. during for for
15. also added above line before opened
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3. been added above line before hitherto
5. what she had done erased before opening
12. seen something for distinguished something of the matter
13. from their window erased before they could and added above line after distinguish
15. its amount for the amount of it
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2. some removals to look for looking
5. next for close
7. civility in wishing her to take his over polite civil offer offering her his own erased
10. much for great
12. his Person as for him for
15. Arthur was . . . no means for He had in every respect a heavy Look.—Yet was not
18. cheifly for very much
19. he added above line before evidently
20. a fine young Woman for a good-looking Girl (well (word illegible) agreable above line, erased)
22. observed with much (gr. above line, erased) pleasure erased after B$^r$
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1. decided for great
2. of erased before some Powerful object over thing source erased
3. him for Arthur considerable for no inconsiderable
5. began even to make for made
13. & invigorating to for for
15. well for much before as anybody
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3. To say the truth for In my own opinion
5. in my (own erased) opinion added above line
15. thought replaced by found and restored above line
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5. walk for take
12. as to for in
13. the Hill is so steep for there is such a steep Hill to get up to it
18. which erased after Perspiration
21. th erased before veiwed
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5. Pot erased after Cocoa
18. brought up added above line
16. the murmuring of a few broken sentences of self-approbation & success for in a faint murmur, & a few broken sentences of approbation of his own Doings & prosperity
19. into as gallant a Line as ever for with quite as much Gallantry as before
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9. rather added above line after Dish of
13. very added above line before fine
21. by no means for not
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2. certainly for evidently
4. of for from before his sisters
15. exceedingly pleased for very much obliged
16. there for upon that subject
17. a very bad thing for is very bad
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5. It was rather amusing to see erased after nutmeg grater
6. Glass added above line after Butter and erased
8. accusing . . . declaring . . . maintaining for accused . . . declared . . . maintained
10. and added above line after trusted
18. her Toast for that Toast erased after own
​20. herself for himself
22. almost added above line after scraped off
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7. Earthy Dross for Earth
8. Charlotte could not but suspect him of adopting over He seemed of having (originally to have) chosen erased
9. principally for cheifly
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6. acts on me like Poison and added above line
9. sounds almost incredible for is a sort of thing hardly to be beleived
10. so often that I cannot doubt it for three (several (?) above line) times
21. Soon for Very soon
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11. and the colour rushed for brought the colour
13. much for a good deal of
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16. determing sic
18. totally seperate & distinct erased after Families
20. each for them
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8. advantage for Good
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2. race for family
4. that added above line before the Family
6. were for being
13. period for time
14. another representation for other representations
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4. blunders for mistakes of some erased before of the many
​10. make everything appear what it was not for throw everything into confusion
15. expensive added above line before House
21. beleived herself for supposed
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6. M$^{rs}$ C. D's for her
7. mere for very before trifle
8. of reproach added above line
9. all the following for the next
14. receiving such for giving a home to
15. as for who
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17. such pursuits as for the pursuit of what
18. general erased before admiration
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8. Smallness & added above line before Retirement yet added above line before having
9. in the course of the Spring added above line
10. some erased before the inevitable
11. each added above line after Dresses
20. secluded for retired
21. from for with after celebrity
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12. in Sanditon added above line
14. to added above line before the prevalence
22. been asking for for wanted
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6. soon added above line before found
7. be vain for fail her
9. to have erased before any complaint
12. & if M$^{rs}$ G ever (word illegible) (could therefore above line) erased after Physician
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5. accordingly for indeed
7. with added above line before Drawing paper
​14. an added above line before eye
19. notice for being noticed
20. by habit erased after disposed
22. quitted over went out at this end of erased way for walk his Brothers for Trafalgar H.
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3. round added above line before about
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13. better added above line before mention
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7. for them erased after foot
17. be really at a loss for really be at any loss
18. more added above line before simple
20. earnest added above line
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6. that written inadvertently for than
20. the added above line before sort
21. is for can be
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7. as to erased before then
11. all added above line before out
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2. all erased before over
4. at one oclock for today
7. besides erased before between
13. to hear it for for this
14. if this is the case added above line
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9. their impropriety for the impropriety of them
17. not added above line after they could
19. it erased after up
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11. it was over in the p erased
13. most kindly added above line
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7. with a decided air of Ease & Fashion, and a over with a & very much the Man of fashion in his air erased
15. road for approach at first only (by above line) erased before a broad
16. approach for road
17. (of about a q$^r$ of a mile's length erased) & conducting at the end of a q$^r$ of a mile through second Gates over but ending in about a q$^r$ of a mile erased
19. into for in not added above line before extensive
20. were erased before had
22. These Entrance Gates . . . Boundaries for They were so narrow at the Entrance
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3. an outside for one outside
5. here, & a curve there threw for in one, & a curve in the other gave
6. to added above line after them
9. clusters (rows erased) of fine Elms, or rows of old Thorns for vigorous Elms, or old Thorns & Hollies
10. line for course
12. vacant spaces for intervals
16. over the pales erased after Womanish and added above line after glimpse
20. decidedly for distinctly
21. in spite of the Mist for though at some distance before her
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1. sloping erased before bank
​2. at (?) erased after Paling &
3. Path for track
8. that erased after felt
12. her added above line after strike
14. must not for ought not to
16. of it erased after nothing discerned for seen
17. If Charlotte had not been over she was erased
19. or erased after the two
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6. perfectly added above line before secure
10. by Man perhaps inadvertently for of Man at their back for behind them
12. by her erased after ill-used
19. order & the (?) added above line before Importance
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6. stately for portly
12. represented for was
15. own House for room