# Foundations and Assessment of Education/Edition 1/Foundations Table of Contents/Chapter 8/Experts Take Sides/Peer Review One

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Part 1 - Article Components
Learning Target(s)
Answer the following questions regarding the learning targets:
Is/are the stated learning targets actual learning targets i.e. they state what the reader should know or be able to do after reading the article? __Yes_
Is/are the learning target(s) specific? ___Yes_
Is/are they appropriate and reasonable? (Are they too easy or too difficult for ECI 301 students?) __Yes_
Is/are they observable? (You wouldn't have to look inside the readers head to know if they met this target.) ______
Does the article provide adequate information for readers to achieve these targets? ______
Please make a comment about the learning target(s). If you answered "No" to any of the questions above, please explain how the author can improve them.
Comment:
Grammar and Mechanics Review
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"Fools!" (His clenched fist striking the lectern before him.) "We must prepare today's youth for a world whose terrors are etched upon ancient clay tablets recounting the fever-dreams of the other gods—not fill their heads with such trivia as math and English. Our graduates need to know about those who lie beneath the earth, waiting until the stars align so they can return to their rightful place as our masters and wage war against the Elder Things and the shoggoths!"– Fictitious Arkham school board member, Charles West. (NOT LISTED IN REFFERENCES)
The American school has traditionally served all young people in one neighborhood and aims to develop local community(IT SEEMS LIKE MAYBE SOMETHING IS MISSING) awareness and to offer the acquisition of knowledge and skill in all areas relevant to an adult citizen.
. In Japan, the curriculum has been as standardized and external as any in the world, with prescribed textbooks as well as national content; though, student assessment is still left to teachers.(MAYBE THESE TWO SENTECES SHOULD BE IN DIFFERENT PARAGRAPHS) There has been a movement to encourage more individuality and student choice since 1992 with the introduction of life environment studies in primary schools to encourage creativity and independent learning.
Beane feels that schools have an obligation to promote democratic social integration. In place of a capitalistic, competitive structure, the classroom should be based on democracy, diversity and equality. (THIS IS A QUOTE SHOULD BE IN QUOTATION MARKS AND CITED )
. "This has weakened academic quality in general, and made the federal government’s grip on the education system tighter. Local control over education is always better than centralized federal control. We are extremely concerned by any calls for nationalized standards, especially since it is unclear what room would be left for educational freedom, or how homeschoolers will be affected." (NO CITATION FOR THIS QUOTE)
There's the inkling that if the federal government gets more involved that things( MAYBE USE A MORE DISCIRTIVE TERM) will just get worse, but they're(THEY'RE ? MAYBE TRY -THE CURRICUIUM ) certainly didn't get any better in my scholastic lifetime in the state’s hands.
3. Bill argues that different states and different school districts all being on their own programs makes it nearly impossible for those children to keep up in school. He also believes there needs to be a national core base of knowledge that all Americans share so that people in our country can read and communicate intelligently. What is Bill most likely an a proponent of?
A. The Communism Party
B. A national curriculum
C. Free ice cream and zombie costume holiday, every second Saturday (SATURDAY SHOULD BE CAPITALIZED) of the month for all eternity
D. Keeping schools the way they have traditionally been
Sources
For each source listed in the "References" section of the article, name the type of source (scholarly or popular) and the perspective it provides (research, expert opinion from educator, popular news source, parent organization, personal contact, etc.)
.scholarly : expert opinion from educator
.popular : popular news source
.popular : popular news source
.popular : popular news source
.popular : popular news source
.popular : popular news source
.popular : Encyclopedia
.popular : popular news source
List the range of publication years for all sources, e.g. 1998-2006: _NA___ - __NA___
Answer the following questions about the sources used in the article:
Did the author CITE at least 5 sources? ___No____ and use at least 2 scholarly sources? _No___
Here are two examples of citations in APA format, one for a paraphrase and one for a quotation:
Constructing a title is both a science and an art, but on one fact all of the experts agree: the title must contain a colon (Lennon, McCartney, Harrison, & Starr, 2007).
Unfortunately impoverished children are often attending “low-performing schools staffed by ill-equipped teachers” (Murnane, 2007, p. 34).
Are all the sources listed in APA format in a Reference list labeled "References"? _Yes__
Here is an example of a reference written in APA format:
Bailey, J., & Barnum, P. (2001). The colon and its rise to prominence in the American circus. Journal of American Punctuation, 34(5), 2-3.
Taken together do the 5 sources represent a good balance of potential references for this topic? __No__
Does the author consider potential bias in the sources? __No____
Are most of the sources current (less than 5 years old)? __No Dates available for most sources_
Please make a comment about the sources. If you answered "No" to any of the questions above, please explain how the author can improve.
Comment:
Although short on citing sources those missing were most likely over looked. The use of scholarly sources was light, maybe the use of scholarly or trade journals could have been considered. Maybe one more source for the Adversaries could have been used.
Multiple Choice Questions
What does each question assess: knowledge or reasoning (application of knowledge)?
Question 1 _knowledge____________
Question 2 _knowledge____________
Question 3 _application__________
Question 4 _application__________
Answer the following questions about the multiple-choice questions.
Are there 4 multiple-choice questions? _Yes__
Do they each have four answer choices (A-D)? __No__
Is there a single correct (not opinion-based) answer for each question? _No___
Do the questions assess the learning target? _Yes___
Are the questions appropriate and reasonable (not too easy and not too difficult)? _ Yes__
Are the foils (the response options that are NOT the answer) reasonable i.e. they are not very obviously incorrect answers? _Yes__
Are the response options listed in alphabetical order? _No___
Are correct answers provided and listed BELOW all the questions? _Yes__
Please make a comment about the multiple-choice questions. If you answered "No" to any of the questions above, please explain how the author can improve the question/s.
Comment:
No's were only because of question #4 and not being in alphabetical order
Part 2 - Ratings
LIST and EXPLAIN your rating for each of the four criteria.
Importance:
I rated this article _4__ for importance because...Although based on researched information, the rest of the information fit into the 4 category
Interest:
I rated this article _3__ on interest because...although tis will be debated for years to come it is not a new idea and
Credibility:
I rated this article _3__ for credibility because...I felt that more scholarly sources could have been used
Writing skill:
I rated this article _5__ on writing because... very few erros and stayed on topic
HIGHLIGHT SPECIFIC POINTS IN THE RUBRIC that apply to the article.
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Wiki Article Rubric
criteria
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4
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How important was the information presented on this topic to you as a teacher education student?
Covers key ideas crucial for future teachers to know
Based on researched information.
Highly relevant to current educational practice (*this description may be less applicable for some topics such as history of education)
Provides an excellent overview of the topic including relevant research, educational practice, laws and litigation. Includes in-depth discussion of at least a few selected key issues.
Includes ideas relevant to future teachers
Mostly based on researched information.
Applicable to today’s schools
Provides a good general overview with relevant information and discussion of a few key ideas
A couple useful points; some irrelevant information
About half of the information is the author’s opinion.
Some out-dated information; may not reflect current practice
Good information is included but the paper yields a partial /incomplete understanding of the topic or key issues
One useful point
A few facts but mostly the author’s opinion.
Most of the information is irrelevant in today’s schools.
Focused on unimportant subtopics OR overly general with few specifics. Important information is missing.
Information is not relevant to future teachers.
Information is entirely the author’s opinion.
The information is obsolete.
Only irrelevant details or common knowledge. Lacks any substantive information.
criteria
5
4
3
2
1
How interesting was the article to read?
Sidebar includes new information that was motivating to read/view
Visuals (headings, colors, fonts, pictures, etc.) enhance the article by making it easier or more inviting to read
Multiple perspectives are considered and discussed
Mostly new information/ideas
Insightful interpretation & analysis are evident throughout the article; a clearly stated conclusion synthesizes all of the material presented.
Points are clearly made and elaborated on with compelling examples.
Sidebar includes new information that enhances understanding of the topic
Visuals add to the article
At least two perspectives were presented
About half of the information/ideas are new
Interpretation and analysis is provided for 3-4 points in the article; a reasonable conclusion based on this information is stated
Some good points are made and explained.
Sidebar includes new information related to the topic.
Visuals are included but have minimal effect
One interesting or new perspective is presented
A couple (2-3) new ideas or pieces of information
Interpretation/ analysis is included for a few (1-2) individual sections, but there is not a conclusion that synthesizes the information presented.
Points are made but may not always be adequately supported or explained.
Sidebar repeats what is already in the article
Visuals are somewhat distracting or not included
Only the “typical” view or one biased perspective is presented.
One new idea or bit of information
Information presented with minimal analysis or interpretation; no conclusion or the conclusion is not based on the information presented
At least one clear point is made and supported.
No side bar included.
Visuals are offensive and completely detract from the content
No perspective is acknowledged.
Nothing new.
No analysis or interpretation included
No clear points are made or points appear pasted from other sources without any explanation.
criteria
5
4
3
2
1
How credible do you think the information is?
Required sources are properly cited and included in a reference list in APA format.
Information from diverse sources representing multiple perspectives is included. Several reputable and current sources are cited. The author acknowledges potential bias in sources where appropriate.
Author clearly identifies his own ideas, biases and opinions
Required sources are included; a couple of formatting errors
Information from a variety of sources is included. Most sources are reasonably reputable; bias is acknowledged in others.
It is clear when the author is presenting his own opinion; he doesn't try to pass if off as fact.
Required sources are included; APA format is not used or has many errors.
A variety of sources is listed but the information primarily reflects a single viewpoint. Sources are reasonable.
The author occasionally (1-2 times) states his own opinion as fact.
Only 4 sources are cited/listed in the references or only 1 scholarly source was used
Sources lack diversity OR information from divergent sources is only superficially mentioned. Some sources are untrustworthy or biased and not acknowledged as such.
Author routinely (3-4 times) states her opinion as fact, ignores own biases.
Missing two or more sources OR sources used but not cited or listed.
All sources and information reflect a single viewpoint. Most sources are untrustworthy or biased and not acknowledged as such.
The entire article is biased and opinion-based without acknowledgment of this perspective.
criteria
5
4
3
2
1
How well do you think this article was written?
Multiple-choice questions (2 application & 2 knowledge) align with the learning targets, assess key points, and are written according to guidelines (see R4)
Specific, appropriate and observable learning targets are stated; the content is clearly organized to help the reader achieve these goals
Captures and maintains attention throughout
All or almost all of the cited information is introduced, elaborated on and explained
Writing is organized, easy to read, and contains few to no mechanical errors.
Multiple-choice questions (2 application & 2 knowledge) align with the learning targets, and assess key points. Specific and reasonable learning targets are stated; the content aligns with these goals
Captures attention initially and periodically throughout
Most of the cited information is discussed or explained.
The article flowed pretty well and there were just a few mechanical errors.
Multiple-choice questions (2 application & 2 knowledge) assess key points
Reasonable learning targets are stated; the content relates to these goals
Parts of the article capture attention
About half of the cited information is discussed
A few areas were hard to follow, confusing or oddly organized. There were a few distracting errors.
4 multiple-choice questions are included.
Learning targets generally related to the content are stated
At least one part of the article is interesting
Information is “pasted” together with minimal explanation.
Organization was difficult to follow, sentences were awkward and/or there were several distracting errors.
Questions are missing or not multiple-choice.
Learning target is missing or unrelated to content or is/are not actual learning targets
Nothing in the article grabs the reader’s attention
Article is entirely “pasted” together from other sources.
Poor organization, sentence structure and/or grammatical errors made it very difficult to understand the content.
Part 3 - "2+2"
List TWO compliments and TWO suggestions about the article content
Hints:
Focus on the work, not the person
Describe "There is...", "I see.." rather than judge "You didn't..."
Compliments
.I enjoyed the opening quote I had to read it a couple times.
.I also enjoyed the creativty you used in the conclusion.
Suggestions
.The use of scholarly sources can make this article more credible.
.Try not to use "things" as a discriptive term. It is a bad habit that I myself am working on.
You can make compliments and suggestions that relate to specific areas of the paper or to the paper in general. I suggest a mixture of both. Focus on what's most important. Of course, you can also include more than two suggestions and more than two compliments. The goal is to help the author improve his/her article. :