# Foundations and Assessment of Education/Edition 1/Foundations Table of Contents/Chapter 6/In the News/Peer Review Two

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Part 1 - Article Components
Learning Target(s)
Answer the following questions regarding the learning targets:
Is/are the stated learning targets actual learning targets i.e. they state what the reader should know or be able to do after reading the article? ___No___
Is/are the learning target(s) specific? ____Yes___
Is/are they appropriate and reasonable? (Are they too easy or too difficult for ECI 301 students?) ____Yes__
Is/are they observable? (You wouldn't have to look inside the readers head to know if they met this target.) _Yes_____
Does the article provide adequate information for readers to achieve these targets? _____Yes_
Please make a comment about the learning target(s). If you answered "No" to any of the questions above, please explain how the author can improve them.
Comment:
I thought your first learning target was great! It was very clear and specific. You might want to change "gain an understanding" and "be briefed" to something more specific. I don't think your fourth learning target is a learning target. Maybe phrase it "Readers will know where to access additional..."
Grammar and Mechanics Review
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...in the meantime schools are failing students. ADD COMMA BETWEEN MEANTIME AND SCHOOLS
...gets irresponsibility shuffled... CHANGE IRRESPONSIBILITY TO IRRESPONSIBLY
5/5/09 Fox news CAPITALIZE "NEWS"
...achievement (VDOE Press Release, 9/25/08)." MOVE QUOTATION MARK TO AFTER THE WORD ACHIEVEMENT
...this year (VEA, 2009, n.p.)". MOVE QUOTATION MARK TO AFTER THE WORD YEAR
job: to ... ADD A SECOND SPACE AFTER THE :
... now, is ... ADD A COMMA AFTER THE WORD IS
...highly disheartening however... ADD A COMMA AFTER THE WORD HIGHLY
a. Hilary Clinton HILLARY SHOULD HAVE 2 "L"S
Sources
For each source listed in the "References" section of the article, name the type of source (scholarly or popular) and the perspective it provides (research, expert opinion from educator, popular news source, parent organization, personal contact, etc.)
. Popular, popular news source
. Scholarly, expert opinion from educator
. Popular, popular news source
. Popular, popular news source
. Scholarly, research
. Scholarly, research
. Scholarly, research
. Scholarly, educator organization
. Popular, popular news source
List the range of publication years for all sources, e.g. 1998-2006: _2002_____ - __2009______
Answer the following questions about the sources used in the article:
Did the author CITE at least 5 sources? ___Yes_______ and use at least 2 scholarly sources? _Yes_____
Are the citations in APA format? __Yes____
Here are two examples of citations in APA format, one for a paraphrase and one for a quotation:
Constructing a title is both a science and an art, but on one fact all of the experts agree: the title must contain a colon (Lennon, McCartney, Harrison, & Starr, 2007).
Unfortunately impoverished children are often attending “low-performing schools staffed by ill-equipped teachers” (Murnane, 2007, p. 34).
Are all the sources listed in APA format in a Reference list labeled "References"? _No_____
Here is an example of a reference written in APA format:
Bailey, J., & Barnum, P. (2001). The colon and its rise to prominence in the American circus. Journal of American Punctuation, 34(5), 2-3.
Taken together do the 5 sources represent a good balance of potential references for this topic? __Yes____
Does the author consider potential bias in the sources? _Yes_____
Are most of the sources current (less than 5 years old)? _Yes_____
Please make a comment about the sources. If you answered "No" to any of the questions above, please explain how the author can improve.
Comment:
I believe the first two references are in APA format but that the article title should be in all the references you cited thereafter.
Multiple Choice Questions
What does each question assess: knowledge or reasoning (application of knowledge)?
Question 1 _knowledge______________________
Question 2 _knowledge______________________
Question 3 _knowledge______________________
Question 4 _reasoning______________________
Answer the following questions about the multiple-choice questions.
Are there 4 multiple-choice questions? __Yes____
Do they each have four answer choices (A-D)? __Yes____
Is there a single correct (not opinion-based) answer for each question? ___Yes__
Do the questions assess the learning target? __Yes____
Are the questions appropriate and reasonable (not too easy and not too difficult)? __Yes____
Are the foils (the response options that are NOT the answer) reasonable i.e. they are not very obviously incorrect answers? __Yes____
Are the response options listed in alphabetical order? __No____
Are correct answers provided and listed BELOW all the questions? ___Yes___
Please make a comment about the multiple-choice questions. If you answered "No" to any of the questions above, please explain how the author can improve the question/s.
Comment:
I believe there are supposed to be 2 knowledge questions and 2 reasoning questions in the multiple choice questions. I had trouble answering question #4; the answer was not very clear to me.
Part 2 - Ratings
LIST and EXPLAIN your rating for each of the four criteria.
Importance:
I rated this article _5__ for importance because...it was very well researched with timely information and provided highly relevant points to consider.
Interest:
I rated this article _5__ on interest because...it was very well laid out and multiple viewpoints were presented. The information was new and the conclusion wrapped all the presentated information up well.
Credibility:
I rated this article _3__ for credibility because...I believe the title of the articles should be referenced. The sources were all appropriate.
Writing skill:
I rated this article _4__ on writing because...the content of the article was very well written. I would rate the article a "5" if the learning targets and questions were more clear and aligned a little better with each other.
HIGHLIGHT SPECIFIC POINTS IN THE RUBRIC that apply to the article.
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Wiki Article Rubric
criteria
5
4
3
2
1
How important was the information presented on this topic to you as a teacher education student?
Covers key ideas crucial for future teachers to know
Based on researched information.
Highly relevant to current educational practice (*this description may be less applicable for some topics such as history of education)
Provides an excellent overview of the topic including relevant research, educational practice, laws and litigation. Includes in-depth discussion of at least a few selected key issues.
Includes ideas relevant to future teachers
Mostly based on researched information.
Applicable to today’s schools
Provides a good general overview with relevant information and discussion of a few key ideas
A couple useful points; some irrelevant information
About half of the information is the author’s opinion.
Some out-dated information; may not reflect current practice
Good information is included but the paper yields a partial /incomplete understanding of the topic or key issues
One useful point
A few facts but mostly the author’s opinion.
Most of the information is irrelevant in today’s schools.
Focused on unimportant subtopics OR overly general with few specifics. Important information is missing.
Information is not relevant to future teachers.
Information is entirely the author’s opinion.
The information is obsolete.
Only irrelevant details or common knowledge. Lacks any substantive information.
criteria
5
4
3
2
1
How interesting was the article to read?
Sidebar includes new information that was motivating to read/view
Visuals (headings, colors, fonts, pictures, etc.) enhance the article by making it easier or more inviting to read
Multiple perspectives are considered and discussed
Mostly new information/ideas
Insightful interpretation & analysis are evident throughout the article; a clearly stated conclusion synthesizes all of the material presented.
Points are clearly made and elaborated on with compelling examples.
Sidebar includes new information that enhances understanding of the topic
Visuals add to the article
At least two perspectives were presented
About half of the information/ideas are new
Interpretation and analysis is provided for 3-4 points in the article; a reasonable conclusion based on this information is stated
Some good points are made and explained.
Sidebar includes new information related to the topic.
Visuals are included but have minimal effect
One interesting or new perspective is presented
A couple (2-3) new ideas or pieces of information
Interpretation/ analysis is included for a few (1-2) individual sections, but there is not a conclusion that synthesizes the information presented.
Points are made but may not always be adequately supported or explained.
Sidebar repeats what is already in the article
Visuals are somewhat distracting or not included
Only the “typical” view or one biased perspective is presented.
One new idea or bit of information
Information presented with minimal analysis or interpretation; no conclusion or the conclusion is not based on the information presented
At least one clear point is made and supported.
No side bar included.
Visuals are offensive and completely detract from the content
No perspective is acknowledged.
Nothing new.
No analysis or interpretation included
No clear points are made or points appear pasted from other sources without any explanation.
criteria
5
4
3
2
1
How credible do you think the information is?
Required sources are properly cited and included in a reference list in APA format.
Information from diverse sources representing multiple perspectives is included. Several reputable and current sources are cited. The author acknowledges potential bias in sources where appropriate.
Author clearly identifies his own ideas, biases and opinions
Required sources are included; a couple of formatting errors
Information from a variety of sources is included. Most sources are reasonably reputable; bias is acknowledged in others.
It is clear when the author is presenting his own opinion; he doesn’t try to pass if off as fact.
Required sources are included; APA format is not used or has many errors.
A variety of sources is listed but the information primarily reflects a single viewpoint. Sources are reasonable.
The author occasionally (1-2 times) states his own opinion as fact.
Only 4 sources are cited/listed in the references or only 1 scholarly source was used
Sources lack diversity OR information from divergent sources is only superficially mentioned. Some sources are untrustworthy or biased and not acknowledged as such.
Author routinely (3-4 times) states her opinion as fact, ignores own biases.
Missing two or more sources OR sources used but not cited or listed.
All sources and information reflect a single viewpoint. Most sources are untrustworthy or biased and not acknowledged as such.
The entire article is biased and opinion-based without acknowledgment of this perspective.
criteria
5
4
3
2
1
How well do you think this article was written?
Multiple-choice questions (2 application & 2 knowledge) align with the learning targets, assess key points, and are written according to guidelines (see R4)
Specific, appropriate and observable learning targets are stated; the content is clearly organized to help the reader achieve these goals
Captures and maintains attention throughout
All or almost all of the cited information is introduced, elaborated on and explained
Writing is organized, easy to read, and contains few to no mechanical errors.
Multiple-choice questions (2 application & 2 knowledge) align with the learning targets, and assess key points.
Specific and reasonable learning targets are stated; the content aligns with these goals
Captures attention initially and periodically throughout
Most of the cited information is discussed or explained.
The article flowed pretty well and there were just a few mechanical errors.
Multiple-choice questions (2 application & 2 knowledge) assess key points
Reasonable learning targets are stated; the content relates to these goals
Parts of the article capture attention
About half of the cited information is discussed
A few areas were hard to follow, confusing or oddly organized. There were a few distracting errors.
4 multiple-choice questions are included.
Learning targets generally related to the content are stated
At least one part of the article is interesting
Information is “pasted” together with minimal explanation.
Organization was difficult to follow, sentences were awkward and/or there were several distracting errors.
Questions are missing or not multiple-choice.
Learning target is missing or unrelated to content or is/are not actual learning targets
Nothing in the article grabs the reader’s attention
Article is entirely “pasted” together from other sources.
Poor organization, sentence structure and/or grammatical errors made it very difficult to understand the content.
Part 3 - "2+2"
List TWO compliments and TWO suggestions about the article content
Hints:
Focus on the work, not the person
Describe "There is...", "I see.." rather than judge "You didn't..."
Compliments
.I think this is a very well presented article and very well written. It has a natural "flow" to it and ends with a solid conclusion.
.The layout of your article is very eye catching and interesting to read.
Suggestions
.Make your learning targets more specific.
.Make one more of your questions "reasoning" and tie them in more specifically with your learning targets.
The only other suggestion I would make is in your "It's All About Teachers" section, end it at "...the students!" and put the next sentence in your sidebar box.
You can make compliments and suggestions that relate to specific areas of the paper or to the paper in general. I suggest a mixture of both. Focus on what's most important. Of course, you can also include more than two suggestions and more than two compliments. The goal is to help the author improve his/her article. :