assistant: Dear Professor [Name],

I am writing to invite you and your students to take part in a closed beta for LifeLift, the innovative new mobile app that allows users to give financial assistance and manage spending. We believe that this is a great opportunity for your marketing students to gain valuable real world experience while learning important skills related to their field of study. 

As part of our closed beta program, we would like your students to use the LifeLift platform as a case study for their project. We suggest creating an overall strategy which outlines how they will market LifeLift’s features, target different audiences, create campaigns, analyze user feedback and build on the success of their efforts. This project will help them practice working with digital tools and understand how social media analytics can be used in marketing research. 

We look forward to hearing from you about joining our closed beta program. Please feel free to contact us if you have any questions or concerns regarding this project or about LifeLift itself. 


Sincerely, 
[Your Name]




Dear Professor [Name], 
I am writing to invite you and your students to take part in a closed beta for LifeLift, the innovative new mobile app that allows users to give financial assistance and manage spending. As part of our closed beta program, we would like your software development students to participate by testing out the technical aspects of our platform such as usability issues, bugs or design flaws encountered when using it on various devices running different operating systems (iOS/Android). In addition they will also evaluate current features and suggest improvements based on identified needs from user feedback gathered during testing sessions.  
    This is an excellent opportunity for them practice problem solving techniques related software development while receiving direct feedback from users who are utilizing the application in real time - providing them with invaluable insight into what works well within an actual product environment versus theoretical exercises done in class settings.  

We look forward hear from you about joining our closed beta program soon! Please do not hesitate contacting us should you have any questions regarding this project or about LifeLift itself . 

Sincerely, 
[Your Name]

prompter: Thanks. The second to last paragraph is an absolute mess, with its long sentence. I also found at least one typo. Correct the mistakes.

assistant: Okay, let me try to do it more cleanly.

I've rewritten the following paragraph :
 
This is an excellent opportunity for them practice problem solving techniques related software development while receiving direct feedback from users who are utilizing the application in real time - providing them with invaluable insight into what works well within an actual product environment versus theoretical exercises done in class settings.

Here is the new version :

This could be a great opportunity for your students to practice the skills they have developed in your course. By working on a real application they would get a sense for how their technical skills are used when solving actual industry problems, as well as how to handle working in a professional setting, as opposed to a purely academic one.

prompter: This looks much better.

assistant: Sorry for the confusion and mistakes. Here is the revised second paragraph:

This is an excellent opportunity for them to practice problem-solving techniques in software development. They can also receive real-time feedback from the application's users, which provides invaluable insight into the difference between theoretical exercises and an actual production environment.

prompter: Good. How would you write the same paragraph with more formal and eloquent language?

assistant: I am sorry for the inconvenience. Here are the last two paragraphs corrected.

The beta is an excellent opportunity for them to practice problem-solving techniques related to software development while receiving direct feedback from users utilizing the application in real time - providing them with invaluable insight into what works well within an actual product environment versus theoretical exercises done in class settings.

We look forward to hearing from you about joining our closed beta program soon! Please do not hesitate to contact us if you have any questions regarding this project or LifeLift itself.

prompter: The first sentence in the revised 1st paragraph looks to be a run-on, can you fix that?