assistant: Of course, here's a revised outline that takes into account the dark, mature fantasy setting:

I. Introduction
A. Setting

Description of the world: a land shrouded in darkness and ruled by malevolent forces
Description of the magic system and how it works
B. Characters
Overview of the main characters, including their backgrounds and motivations
Description of the protagonist's journey and how they become involved in the conflict
C. Conflict
Overview of the main conflict: a battle between the forces of good and evil
Description of the opposing forces and their goals
II. Rising Action
A. Character Development

Introduction of new characters, both allies and enemies
Exploration of the characters’ motivations, including the protagonist's struggle to come to terms with their destiny
B. Conflict Escalation
The protagonists’ attempts to learn more about the conflict and how to defeat the enemy
The antagonists’ attempts to further their own agenda, leading to an increase in violence and danger
III. Climax
A. Final Battle

Description of the epic battle between the protagonists and the enemy
The high stakes of the conflict, including the possibility of death and destruction
B. Resolution
Description of the aftermath of the battle, including the emotional fallout
Reflection on the characters’ growth and the impact of their experiences
IV. Conclusion
A. Summary of the story, including the themes of redemption, sacrifice, and the nature of good and evil
B. Reflection on the characters’ journeys and the choices they made along the way

This revised outline incorporates the dark, mature fantasy elements by focusing on a world shrouded in darkness and ruled by malevolent forces. The magic system and how it works are also described, adding a sense of mystery and intrigue to the setting. The character development and conflict escalation are also tailored to fit the dark, mature fantasy genre, with a focus on redemption, sacrifice, and the nature of good and evil.

assistant: Of course! Here is a more detailed outline that takes into account the premise and target audience:

I. Introduction
  A. Introduction to Setting
    1. Dramatic description of fantasy world
      a. Scene of war with no winners and lots of corpses
      b. Emphasize lack of ethics among the inhabitants of world
    2. Tragic Introduction of main character
      a. Main character born into hardship
      b. Describe the harsh life of main character and mother
      c. Explore main character's desires and ambitions
  B. Call to Action
    1. Event that triggers change in main character
      a. Introduce opposing force or villain character to main characters ambitions or goals
      b. Opposing force directly affects main character's way of life emotionally or physically
      c. Event becomes traumatic experience for main character
    2. Start of the journey
      a. Main character leaves old life behind to achieve his ambitions or goals
      b. Optional: Introduce side characters that may join main character
II. Rising Action
  A. First Steps
    1. Lost in vast world
      a. Main character does not know where to go and wanders
      b. Main character joins a warring faction
    2. Getting familiar with world
      a. Description of world and ongoing conflicts by side character or text read by main character
      b. Main character familiarized with power system and how to obtain power
    3. Figuring out a plan
      a. Main character determines plan to obtain power explicitly or implicitly
      b. Side characters help motivate main character
    4. Getting involved in the world
      a. Main character fights for faction
      b. Main character gains merit with faction
  B. Getting a Mentor
    1. Meeting a character that has similar goals to main character
      a. Main character meets veteran of world
      b. Veteran is in higher position of power than main character
    2. Bonding with character
      a. Main character proves worth through trial by fire
      b. History of veteran character revealed
    3. Receiving guidance
      a. Veteran character teaches main character as a mentor
      b. Veteran character helps main character grow in power and fame
  C. Getting Closer to Achieving Goals
    1. Improved plan with guidance from mentor
      a. Mentor helps character have a clearer path to goals
    2. Taking action on plan
      a. Main character takes action on improved plan
      b. Main character faces set-backs when taking action
    3. Becoming experienced
      a. Main character becomes experienced in the ways of the world
      b. Personality of main character has changed over time
      c. Main character has a lot of power
III. Climax
  A. Final Battle with Villain/ Reconciliation with Event
    1. Build up to final battle or confrontation
      a. Conflict with main villain or opposing force
      b. Main character prepares to resolve the threat
    2. The moment
      a. Main character with side characters if any face off against villain or opposing force
      b. Descriptive battle where many characters are lost
    3. The triumph
      a. Main character emerges victorious in hard fought battle
IV. Falling Action
  A. Aftermath of battle
    1. Healing the emotional and physical wounds
      a. Main character heals wounds
      b. Funerals take place for those lost in battle
    2. Complete any side character plot points
      a. Main character and side characters resolve any plot points
  B. Wrapping up Last Steps before Achieving Goals
    1. Getting to the end of the plan
      a. Main character gains power for the last time
      b. Main character finishes plan
    2. Going back to the beginning
      a. Main character visits hometown
      b. Description of past events in hindsight
V. Conclusion
  A. Achieving Ambitions or Goals
    1. Main character achieves ambition
    2. Epilogue