prompter: Improve the writing in the following email:

Good morning,

I'm Jane Doe, I'm interested in moving to Canada. My Sister and her husband live in Montreal and a friend of theirs highly recommended you. I'm of French nationality, I was born and raised in Austria, I have Diploma in Computer Science and I worked for 8 years in the sales department in Telecommunication Company.

I'm single and currently unemployed, I would like to move to Canada and live with my sister. I thought to getting a student permit and studying Biology at The Science Academy in Montreal but and after I graduate I apply for permanent residency. But I'm open to other suggestions.

My main plan is to get a permanent residency and settle in Canada. I'm interested to consult with you to find what program might fit me the best and to help me to submit my application.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Best regards,
Jane Doe

assistant: Good morning,

My name is Jane Doe. I am interested in moving to Canada and a friend of family members in Montreal highly recommended contacting you.

I am of French nationality but was born and raised in Austria. I have a diploma in Computer Science and worked for 8 years in the sales department at a telecommunication company. I am single and currently unemployed, and I would like to live with my sister upon moving to Canada.

I am considering acquiring a student permit and studying Biology at The Science Academy in Montreal, before applying for permanent residency after graduating. However, I would be interested to hear alternatives. My overall goal is to gain permanent residency and settle in Canada. I would like to consult with you to identify the best way forward and so that I can submit the best possible application.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,
Jane Doe

prompter: Is "good morning" a good start of the email, also should I include the name of the person I am writing to in the beginning of the mail or is this not necessary (I am trying to be very polite)?

prompter: the person I'm sending this to said that they only communicate through Twitter.
can you make it as a tweet? use @xxxx as their handle

assistant: Dear [Name],

I am writing to express my interest in immigrating to Canada. I was referred to you by a friend of my sister and her husband, who live in Montreal.

My background includes a French nationality, with my upbringing in Austria and a diploma in Computer Science. I have 8 years of experience in the sales department of a telecommunications company. I am currently single and seeking employment opportunities in Canada.

My goal is to obtain a permanent residency in Canada and live with my sister in Montreal. I am considering the option of obtaining a student permit and studying Biology at The Science Academy in Montreal, followed by a permanent residency application. However, I am open to other suggestions and would appreciate your guidance on the best program for me.

I am eager to schedule a consultation with you to discuss my options and how I can submit my application.

Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
Jane Doe

prompter: awesome, thanks!

prompter: can you shorten it and make it fit for a text message?

assistant: Of course. I have rewritten the email to be significantly shorter and more appropriate for a text message format.

Hi [Name], I'm interested in immigrating to Canada and was referred to you by a friend. I'm French, have a diploma in Computer Science, and 8 years of sales experience. Can we schedule a consultation to discuss my options and application? Thanks! - Jane

assistant: Sure! Here is a rewritten version of the email, with a focus on improved writing style:

Good morning,

My name is Jane Doe and I am interested in immigrating to Canada. My sister and her husband are currently living in Montreal and I have been recommended to you by a friend of theirs. I am French by nationality and was born and raised in Austria. I have a Diploma in Computer Science and have worked in the sales department of a Telecommunication Company for 8 years.

I am currently single and unemployed and my plan is to move to Montreal and live with my sister. My plan is to obtain a student permit and study Biology at The Science Academy in Montreal, applying for permanent residency after I graduate. However, I am open to other suggestions.

I am interested in consulting with you to discover what program would best fit me and to help me with submitting my application for permanent residency.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
Jane Doe

prompter: That's not bad, but I need you to add a bit more about my personal qualities that will be helpful for my future employer.

prompter: what is the email about?

prompter: That's a good start, but this sentence is not correct: "My plan is to obtain a student permit and study Biology at The Science Academy in Montreal, applying for permanent residency after I graduate. " Can you try again?