prompter: Improve this Radiohead poem.

Fitter happier
More productive
Comfortable
Not drinking too much
Regular exercise at the gym (3 days a week)
Getting on better with your associate employee contemporaries
At ease
Eating well (no more microwave dinners and saturated fats)
A patient, better driver
A safer car (baby smiling in back seat)
Sleeping well (no bad dreams)
No paranoia
Careful to all animals (never washing spiders down the plughole)
Keep in contact with old friends (enjoy a drink now and then)
Will frequently check credit at (moral) bank (hole in the wall)
Favours for favours
Fond but not in love
Charity standing orders
On Sundays ring road supermarket
(No killing moths or putting boiling water on the ants)
Car wash (also on Sundays)
No longer afraid of the dark or midday shadows
Nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate
Nothing so childish
At a better pace
Slower and more calculated
No chance of escape
Now self-employed
Concerned (but powerless)
An empowered and informed member of society (pragmatism not idealism)
Will not cry in public
Less chance of illness
Tyres that grip in the wet (shot of baby strapped in back seat)
A good memory
Still cries at a good film
Still kisses with saliva
No longer empty and frantic
Like a cat
Tied to a stick
That's driven into
Frozen winter shit (the ability to laugh at weakness)
Calm
Fitter, healthier and more productive
A pig
In a cage
On antibiotics

assistant: Fitter, happier, more productive, we strive,
To live life with purpose, and to thrive.
No more excesses or unhealthy habits,
But wellness and balance as our new rabbit.

Regular workouts at the gym,
And eating well, no more microwave whim.
We sleep soundly without bad dreams,
And care for all creatures, not just our teams.

We keep in touch with old friends and new,
And help others, not just for what they can do.
We frequent our bank, with morals in mind,
And drive safely, with a baby behind.

We're no longer afraid of the dark or the light,
No longer acting like children in sight.
We take our time, with a slower pace,
And are self-employed, in a fulfilling race.

We're concerned about our world, though powerless too,
But with knowledge and action, we can make it anew.
We still cry at films, and kiss with fervor,
Our hearts full of love, as we savor.

No longer empty, or filled with despair,
We laugh at our weakness, and learn to repair.
We're calm, focused, and productive,
No longer a pig, in a cage on antibiotics.

prompter: Some rhymes don't make sense but others are really good. There's room for improvement

assistant: Thank you for your feedback. I apologize if some of the rhymes didn't make sense. Here's an improved version with better rhymes:

Fitter, happier, more productive, we strive,
To live life with purpose, and keep our drive alive.
No more excesses or unhealthy habits,
But wellness and balance, as our new good habits.

We hit the gym and we break a sweat,
No more fast food, but healthy food we get.
We sleep soundly, no more bad dreams,
And care for all creatures, not just our teams.

We reach out to old friends and new,
And lend a hand, not just for what they can do.
We bank with morals in mind,
And drive safely, with a baby behind.

We're brave in the dark and in the light,
No more childishness, we've gained insight.
We take our time, at a comfortable pace,
As we work for ourselves, in a fulfilling race.

We care for our world, though we feel powerless too,
But with knowledge and action, we can make it anew.
We still shed a tear at films, and kiss with fervor,
Our hearts full of love, we cherish each other.

No more emptiness, or despair,
We laugh at our weaknesses, and learn to repair.
We're calm, focused, and productive,
No longer a pig, in a cage on antibiotics.

prompter: very good rhyming but it might be too tame for people in the radiohead or heavy metal community. we prefer a bit more explicit lyrics

assistant: Thank you! 

I'd like to continue improving. Which are some of the rhymes that don't make sense? What would make them better?

prompter: I can see that you used animal imagery as metaphors, but there are some parts that needs improvement. I don't think the "our new rabbit" part makes sense. In the final line, I'm not sure if antibiotics rhymes with productive.

assistant: 1.  I used the "our new rabbit" is a metaphor for regular exercising, but it was a bit of a stretch. How about this:

"No more excesses or unhealthy habits,
But wellness and balance like an abbot?"

It would also serve as word play, with "abbot" being "a head monk" and "habit" also referring "a monk's religious clothing"?

2. I can see that the rhyming scheme in the final line is a bit off, how about I change it to:

"We're focused, calm too hypnotic,
No longer a pig, in a cage on antibiotics."

prompter: 1. "To live life with purpose" - is missing a comma after live
2. "But wellness and balance as our new rabbit." - there is no mention of a rabbit in the poem so far
3. "no more microwave whim" - what is microwave whim?
4. "We frequent our bank, with morals in mind," - this doesn't make sense
5.  "No longer a pig, in a cage on antibiotics." - this ruins what is otherwise the best bit of the poem by being crude

assistant: Fitter, happier, feeling fine
More productive all the time
Comfortable in my own skin
No more drinking, won't give in

Regular exercise at the gym
Three times a week, keeps me trim
Getting on well with my colleagues
At ease, no more anxieties

Eating well, no more fast food
Healthy habits set the mood
Patient, careful driver now
Safer car, baby smiles, wow!

Sleeping soundly, no bad dreams
No more paranoia, it seems
Careful with all living things
Never flushing spiders down the sink

Keeping in touch with old friends
Enjoying drinks, the fun never ends
Checking my credit, being smart
Favours for favours, giving my heart

Fond but not in love, it's true
Charity standing orders, I pursue
Sundays, shopping on the ring road
No more moth killings, water won't explode

Car wash on Sundays, feeling clean
No longer afraid of things unseen
No more teenage desperation
Childishness, no longer a temptation

At a better pace, slow and steady
No chance of escape, but always ready
Now self-employed, empowered and free
An informed member of society

No tears in public, illness at bay
Gripping tyres, baby's in the back, hooray!
Good memory, still moved by films
Kissing with saliva, the passion still thrills

No longer empty, no longer frantic
Like a cat, life's more romantic
Tied to a stick, but not for long
Laughing at weakness, staying strong

Calm, fitter, healthier and more productive
Like a pig in a cage, but not destructive
On antibiotics, but on the mend
The new me, ready to transcend.

assistant: Sleeping while on taxi
Wink to a stranger to say yes
Point with the mouth
walk in the fog
talk with the parrot
smile to clouds
shoulders like springs
listening with the thumbs
tip toeing at the coffee shop
smiling in the dark
humming to the beat
in the zig-zag of a hill

prompter: Okay now using this style, write a brand new Radiohead-style song that touches on the topic of becoming disenfranchised in an ever-changing world