### Human: Here is a summary written by student 569900f5cd8a for prompt 39c16e: '"A perfect tragedy should, as we have seen, be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan. It should, moreover, imitate actions which excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation." shows at least 3 elements of tragedy. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5699bfd8d778 for prompt 814d6b: 'At the end of the weeklong experiment, the teacher began to lose control over the movement and decided to end it. He promoted the students to meet for a rally on Friday to witness a fake announcement by a presidental candidate adressing the movement. There was a blank screen on the channel, and he told the students it was a project. It taught them how many follow movements even when the message isn't morally right. The students, since they fell into the trap, learned why many people in history fell into bad movements and how they can try to prevent it in the present and future.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.884985368582489 and the wording score is 2.0072945533817.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 569ecb490842 for prompt 3b9047: 'The socail  structure of egypt resembled its famous stone pyramids.Smaller, more vauled classes at the top and the larger like the vizer ,or the pharaohs, less vauled  classes were at the base.The bottom of the heap it was mostly farmers and slaves'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.301962052042057 and the wording score is 0.0778567006247517.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56a215a76f10 for prompt 3b9047: '    In "Egyptian Social Structure" by US.Hisotry,org, they explain that the ancient Egyptian system of government was structured like a pyramid. The gods and some pharaohs were at the top of the pyramid, below them were nobles and priests, skilled workers made up the middle class, and slaves and farmers were at the bottom.  "The pharoah directed the army in case of a foreign threat or in internal conflict. All laws were enacted at the discretion of the pharaoh."(USHistory.org 3). The slaves were captured prisoners of war, and they were forced to work on building projects. Farmers, "paid taxes that could amount to as much of 60% of their yearly harvest." (USHistory.org 12). '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.29650950402809 and the wording score is -0.68167457243005.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56a3b8ac33be for prompt 3b9047: 'Farmers tended the fields, raised animals, kept canals and reservoirs in good order, worked in the stone quarries, and built the royal monuments. Farmers paid taxes that could amount to as much as 60% of their yearly harvest—that’s a lot of hay!'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.382272237741744 and the wording score is -1.79549080344932.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56a6cd80e7e0 for prompt 39c16e: 'A perfect tragedy should, as we have seen, be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan. It follows plainly, in the first place, that the change of fortune presented must not be the spectacle of a virtuous man brought from prosperity to adversity: for this moves neither pity nor fear; it merely shocks us. The change of fortune should be not from bad to good, but, reversely, from good to bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.382272237741744 and the wording score is -1.79549080344932.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56b2fb55e2d4 for prompt 39c16e: 'First it should imitate actions that instigate emotions that would normally follow a tragedy. Second , the audience should be able to undertand  and it shouldn't be too complex.  Third,  it should send out emotions to the audience .'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56b896d9ea04 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristole belived that a tragedy should have fear and pity, the misfourante should be said from good to bad, and finally it should be written based off of a complex plan.  '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56c22287c9da for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, they had machines to fill ham with pickle, they would extract the bone in which the bad parts normaly lay, and insert in a hole a white hot iron, the meat would also be dosed with borax and glycerin, after dumped into the hoppers and made over again.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.33953611679328 and the wording score is -1.54820927356056.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56cbbc29c865 for prompt ebad26: 'Some of the ways they would cover up the spoiled meat is 1. they would rub pickled meat with soda to take away the smell. 2. they would preserve it with borax and color it with geltin to make it brown to make "smoke sausage" since it took more time and was more expensive.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0089516182965036 and the wording score is -0.0751240951156572.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56d3aa475c0f for prompt 3b9047: 'The pharaohs was the ruler of Egypt,the vizier was in charge of tax collection.  The nobles and the priests enjoyed high social statues and the farmer and slaves stayed at the very bottom working to pay their taxes.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.376762983040429 and the wording score is 0.547660629074304.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56d93e650d8d for prompt 39c16e: 'it should imitate actions that excite pity and fear, then it should be reversed from bad to good to good to bad and should come out the result of great error, then a plot like an odyssey with a double thread plot  like an opposite catastrophe for the good and bad'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56d9a67c9d09 for prompt 3b9047: 'the article by UShistory. Org  "Egypt social status" explains the social structures of ancient Egypt  by comparing them to the pyramids . The pharaoh their leaders ... where are believed to be human form (2) held all the power. Next in power was the Nobles and the priest the nobles were government and the  priest  God Pleasers. soldiers, merchants and Craftsmen fell into the middle class in which they protected the land and people as well as being creators of goods. and at the bottom was slaves and farmers the largest at least powerful level of the social structure they were the laborers.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.846024830236344 and the wording score is -0.344396609320047.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56dde857f87f for prompt 3b9047: 'Egyptian society had a very interesting type of government all including the Pharaohs, Nobles, tributes which were all under the power of the Pharaohs and were both in charge of keeping the Pharaoh pleased, and entertained... they also had other people like farmers that gave gifts to the Pharaohs aka their gods because Pharaohs were believed to be for like gods that were sent here to look after the people there, and farmers paid taxes with food, and incase of a economical disorder they could have food if it was too expensive for them if they went in war or into a devastating economical hit you also had soldiers which were under farmers and they had to take care of the whole city and look after Pharaohs tombs making sure that nobody got into them, and making sure that nothing was being unfair in their city however many things were still unfair in the city since soldiers thought that they were the ones the lead the city and it kept things unbalanced, and then you have the slaves these people were most likely never going to get out of being a slave, and speaking of which its already pretty rare to move up places in the egyptian goverment especially as a slave so these people were forced to work, and to work without having much food and being tortured these people didn't really ever have a happy ending however in some ways they do because if they die they don't have to live through all the torture that they went through, in other words if you are a slave you better you get lucky and move up to be a soldier to atleast have decent respect in the city, and to be able to go out and do stuff oh and, the wives of the soldiers were kept in their homes, and could not go out they could only go out after the soldier had returned from work or returned from war or whatever they ordered him to do, and its said that women had to wear a metal contraption on their hips so when the soldiers were out for work or were out for war they had to wear these things so the women could not cheat, and if they were caught cheating they would be tortured and killed, and men that wanted to fight other men were forced to fight but if they lost they had to get one of their toes or fingers cut off, and did not get any medical attention afterwards if you did get an infection you would most likely die judging by them not having much medicine to heal themselves or any type of alcohol to disinfect their cuts or anything... in conclusion many of the egyptian societies had pretty weird rules, and governments... '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.903184714969295 and the wording score is 0.295562291927492.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56e229565e16 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tragedy described by Aristotle are the following, the character or plot should not change from bad to good, but from good to bad, the character should suffer or have consequences because he/she did some error of judgement or was weak, and that the reader should be able to relate to the character. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0089516182965036 and the wording score is -0.0751240951156572.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56e4d17ba2cf for prompt 39c16e: 'FIrst he talks about myths or plots and explains ther shoudl be a plot where the tragedy should be produced. Next he speaks about the character and how he or she shall act with the tragedy.  Finally he speaks about the good plot and how the principles fall in place, as also he speaks about the second rank in tragedy and how its rather to be for comedy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.54745434824894 and the wording score is 0.464579669438644.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56ead7581767 for prompt ebad26: 'Factory use various ways to cover up spoiled meat so that they can get rid of them and still get money by it. Like getting rid of the smell by soda so they won't be sour, putting chemicial in them and adding different meat to mixed with. They also color the meat to make it look brown. I say that it disgust for people to do all of that and don't think if it will be harmful for people. At this time, that how factory use various to cover up the spoiled meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 56eae29c467d for prompt 39c16e: 'The 3 elements of an ideal tragedy as described by Aristotle are a well-constructed plot,  a flawed character( a character that is not completely good or bad), and a change of fortune(unmerited misfortune).'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.901921666808857 and the wording score is -0.916547726766798.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 570064569a17 for prompt 39c16e: 'There are three elements that an ideal tragedy should have. First, they should "be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan". They should also feature a good man who experiences something terrible. Finally, they should not be comedic like or else they will be ranked second. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 570c842a42fc for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle believed spoke on his opinons of an "ideal" tragedy. A few elements consisted of the beliefs that most tragedies should be followed by a complex plan, they should be fearful, and they should feature a villian, or a main character that contributes to the plot. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.125751720745657 and the wording score is -1.05037185557272.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5710cc46b18b for prompt 3b9047: 'The egyptain system government was based on how much you were valued and how much money you have. And being smart. "Working with the vizier were scribes who kept government records. These high-level employees had mastered a rare skill in ancient Egypt — they could read and write." Since it was a rare skill it was very hard to become in the top of the pyrimiad. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57199a0bb727 for prompt 3b9047: 'Pharaohs are at the top of the social pyramid because they were thought to be god like. The pharaoh directed the army and created all laws. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.07261303201737 and the wording score is -0.999628686402458.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5719a4bf010d for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would us or cover up spoiled meet with various ways, such as on paragrapgh 1; canning it, chop it up into sausages. And also in paragrapgh 3; cut up into two thusand revolutions a min flyers and mixed with half a ton of other meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0024657138419762 and the wording score is -0.04543859410258.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5723a8dfa526 for prompt 3b9047: 'the different social classes were different because they had middle class, 1st class, and poor. If you were poor you could always change your class by saving money and changing the path for you generation.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.62764732431351 and the wording score is -0.125597133679325.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 572ef36209d5 for prompt ebad26: 'They could put it in pictke jucie or they will preservr it with broax and clolo it with getaltin to make in brown. Not only that but they will sometimes not cover it. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.27288887429254 and the wording score is -0.670294229737815.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 572f7d9179fe for prompt ebad26: 'The way they would cover the spoiled meat would be by covering them in packaging then calling it to grade A meat. They would also pickle the meat so it would cover the smell of the rotten meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.248807738780381 and the wording score is 0.383460058821202.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5736bc5763f1 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy, according to Aristotle, involves the following: misfortune of a man who is neither good nor evil,  a change from good fortune to bad, and the misfortune should come from an error made by the character. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.329894369598999 and the wording score is -1.1419925453865.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 574369ff8f20 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy must have a relateable hero, a singular plot, and a plot where the hero's own human flaws cause their demise. This is exemplified by Aristotle's description of the ideal tragic hero. Paragraph 2 states, "There remains, then, the character between these two extremes — that of a man who is not eminently good and just, yet whose misfortune is brought about not by vice or depravity, but by some error of judgement or frailty. He must be one who is highly renowned and prosperous — a personage like Oedipus, Thyestes, or other illustrious men of such families." It's imperative to understand that the protagonist of a Greek tragedy and their qualities are some of the defining traits of a tragedy. The protagonist has to speak to a common humanity within the audience in order to have maximum emotional appeal and impact.  The audience will only be distressed at the events the hero is subject to if they can cry with him and relate  to them just like any person. If the protagonist is either someone incredibly saint-like that never makes mistakes that result in conflict or outrageously and comedically evil that succeeds because of their malevolence, the audience will not be able to see themselves in the hero because such drastic personalities or situations rarely happen in real life. Because the fundamental plot elements seem fantastical, the audiene will feel more removed from the play and will not feel the pain as the hero feels it when they fail, or the triumphance when they succeed. The best way to make a hero human to the audience is to give them nuance. Like most people, the tragic hero should generally strive to do good but get caught up by their own mistakes like pride, anger, lack of judgement, etc. so that they aren't bad people but still accountable for their mistakes. It's essential to make tragic heroes essentially common men that the audience already identifies with (such as honorable nobility who are still humans without any special or divine powers) who have relateable motivations and qualities that cause them to fail due to their own actions while still being sympathetic people. Since this reminds the audience of themselves, it will feel all the more tragic when they suffer, which is the point of the tragic play. In order to have the optimal amount of misery, the plot should be singular. This is discussed in paragraphs 3 and 4, which state, "He must be one who is highly renowned and prosperous — a personage like Oedipus, Thyestes, or other illustrious men of such families. ...In the second rank comes the kind of tragedy which some place first. Like the Odyssey, it has a double thread of plot, and also an opposite catastrophe for the good and for the bad. ...It is proper rather to Comedy, where those who, in the piece, are the deadliest enemies — like Orestes and Aegisthus — quit the stage as friends at the close, and no one slays or is slain." This text demonstrates how one single serious plot is necessary for a proper tragic play. A true tragedy must have the complex protagonist endure general failure as well as the associated physical and emotional pain due to their own incorrect actions, and this should be the only plot point in the play to prevent distractions. On the other hand, double plots  often resolve positively without events like major character death or conflict. The idea that the protagonist does not have to endure any of the consequences of their actions and suffer as a result is the complete antithesis of a tragedy. As a result, the audience does not reach catharsis because there are no emotional stakes if everything is fixed by the end. Therefore, they have no lasting negative emotions pertaining to the play.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 3.36999122260667 and the wording score is 3.89794064266612.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 574be436c242 for prompt 39c16e: 'It should be  a complex plan that also excites fear and pity, change of fortune presented must not be the spectacle of a virtuous man brought from prosperity to adversity.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57519ef9a9a7 for prompt ebad26: 'For ham, it would either be pickled more, had the bone takin out, or mixed with other meat. "It was only when the whole ham was spoiled that it came into the department of Elzbieta. Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions- a-minute flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference. " - 4'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.264198440931508 and the wording score is -1.25021232938379.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 575c0d5d0f90 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle said that 3 elements of an ideal tragedy are it should have not a simple but a complex plan, it should imitate excite pity and fear, and lastly, it should follow plainly the changes of fortune.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.125751720745657 and the wording score is -1.05037185557272.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5760c84d5295 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tragedy, as described by Aristotle, are that they excite pity and fear, tell the story of a "man who is not eminently good" (who is like the reader), and that man faces severe misfortune due to a mistake. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.602425328608776 and the wording score is -1.03984302149413.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 577ea72fa1d4 for prompt 814d6b: 'The experiment took place at Cubberley High School in Palo Alto, California, during the first week of April 1967. Jones, finding himself unable to explain to his students how the German population could have claimed ignorance of The Holocaust, decided to demonstrate it to them instead.  Jones started a movement called «The Third Wave» and told his students that the movement aimed to eliminate democracy.  Jones himself wrote a detailed account of the experiment some nine years afterward and more articles about the experiment followed, including some interviews with Jones and the original students. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5791d20032bc for prompt 39c16e: '3  Elements of an Ideal tragedy described by Aristole is that it should be made with a advanced plan , In that advanced plan it should Copy things like Fear & Pity, something tragic & the change of fortune.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.595939424154249 and the wording score is -1.01015752048105.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 579231541d84 for prompt 3b9047: '   Back in ancient Egyptian times there was  a class set up thourgh the pyrmamid so they were basically set up like a pyramid. The way that they had ben set up is the kings at the top the goverment and nobles and priest were in the middle and the slaves and the army was at the bottom. The way diffrent social class were involved with the goverment is by "The Viser ensured that taxes were collected. Working withe the Viser were scribes who kept goverment records" The other goverment was the nobel aims  which were nobles and priest and the soilders supervised the peasnt and the farmers and slaves. The people at the bottom where"Slaves and farmers" and  farmers tended to the fields and slaves  to be forced working on building projects. This is how there social system is made up.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.04865408447307 and the wording score is 1.29288913937796.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57951288d397 for prompt ebad26: 'Factory, the family had a first-hand knowledge of the great majority of Packingtown swindles. For it was the custom, as they found, whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage.  '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57997d5fe0b6 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory had multiple ways to cover up spoiled meat. One of them may be to chop it into sausage or to can it. The txt states, "Whenever meat was so spoiled it cold not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage." (Sinclair Par. 1).  Another method would be using pickle to take away the bad odor to make it smell good as new. The text states, "They would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to eaten..." (Sinclair Par. 2). '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57a8f0c420aa for prompt 39c16e: 'In aristotles writing he says what the ideal tragedy is. He says that it has to have a sad ending. He states "It is proper rather to Comedy, where those who, in the piece, are the deadliest enemies — like Orestes and Aegisthus — quit the stage as friends at the close, and no one slays or is slain". He was saying that a happy ending is more like a comedy and that the ending should be sad. He also says it should follow the downfall of someone who is neither good or bad.  So we don't feel pity for the character or so it doesn't satisfy us. And finally it should focus on one problem. Aristotle states"A well-constructed plot should, therefore, be single in its issue, rather than double as some maintain". He is saying that it should focus on one problem to make it easier to understand.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.0821053681179 and the wording score is 1.30142886955607.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57af3ebd4521 for prompt ebad26: 'Some of the ways that the factory would use to cover up the spoiled meat are chemicals, rubbing on soda, and pickling it which saved time whole processing. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57c243f988c6 for prompt ebad26: 'The workers would inject a very strong picke into meat to get rid of odors. "the packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor"'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.595939424154249 and the wording score is -1.01015752048105.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57c64523247c for prompt ebad26: 'The factory used many methods to cover up the spoiled meat that they used. First they would rub a spoiled peice of meat with soda to remove the smell and got rid of it as soon as possible. Secondly, they picked meats by injecting picling juice into the hams, but if the hams were spoild they would inject a different, stronger pickling juice into the ham to cover up the smell and the flaver of the soiled meat as shown in this quote, "And yet, in spite of this, there would be hams found spoiled, some of them with an odor so bad that a man could hardly bear to be in the room with them. To pump into these the packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor—a process known to the workers as 'giving them thirty per cent.'" Another way the workers would get rid of odors if the rot was situated around a bone, is that they would use a machine that removed the bone and replaced it with a white hot iron. Lastly, the workers would take all meat that was too rotten to be fixed with any of the other solutions and grind it up to add to the sausages.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.62709400252487 and the wording score is 0.791410606014851.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57ca77019802 for prompt 3b9047: '   Ancient Egypt aranged its classes into a pyramid. At the top you would see the higher valued roles, and less valued roles at the bottom. These roles could change but it is very difficult to move up, as it says in the text.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57d4aad66e97 for prompt 39c16e: '    The ideal tragedy should include a multi-dimensional conflict, a neutral character's mistake, and that character's fortune turning from good to bad. A conflict that only has one tragic trait is not a tragedy, since it will not have enough dimension to provoke the emotions within an audience that are associated with tragedy, since this kind of conflict "never satisfies the moral sense nor calls forth pity or fear" due to its basic nature ("On Tragedy"). Therefore, the writer(s)  should include multiple traits that build up to form the many different pillars that make a tragedy, since tragedies rarely occur because of a single tragic trait. To follow this conflict outline, the main character in a tragedy should be neither good nor bad, and their misfortune should occur due to a mistake that they've made. This is because "pity is aroused by unmerited misfortune, fear by the misfortune of a man like ourselves," meaning that it will be easier for the audience to feel pity and empathize with a character if they can see themselves in that character's shoes ("On Tragedy"). The character's fortune should also change from good to bad, since this will reflect the same pity in the audience that was aforementioned. When it comes down to why the target feeling is pity, that's because pity is the leading feeling that audiences have when reacting to tragedies. After all, tragedies are defined as "great suffering, destruction, and distress," and these types of situations always have emotional consequences (Oxford Dictionary). If a tragedy is unsuccessful in provoking the emotions that come with tragedy, then it clearly would not be the ideal tragedy. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 3.50322573269907 and the wording score is 3.63812632907257.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57de55b62570 for prompt 39c16e: 'In the first section he says that " A perfect tragedy should, as we have seen, be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan". what he is saying is that sometimes the best tragedys are the ones that the readers are least to expect. this can easily be done by having a build up of some specific characters and have the audience thinking the end will work in the favor of one of the most beloved people in the plot. this is even done in modern times with shows like Game Of Thrones, it in its self pretty much proves his point because the end of the show took many people by surprise and they werent happy with the outcome. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.423472474001539 and the wording score is 1.21273059980121.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 57f443ac0741 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave, as Ron Jones called it, was meant to be a simple social experiment focused only on his class of 30 students. The Third Wave gained followers and strength so quickly most likely due to the insecurities of high school students. All that teenagers want is to fit in and be included. So when students began to see Jones' kids doing their exclusive salute in the halls, they would feel left out. This insecurity along with natural herd behaivior of humans, would cause the kids to want to join the group. However, after just five days, the experiment needed to end.  The students had taken too much pride and were too involved in The Third Wave for it to continue without the students giving up all sense of identity.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.87366601633223 and the wording score is 2.80127712895514.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 580799688bfb for prompt ebad26: 'They would stuff spoiled meat into casings and give them different labels. "...they had what they called “boneless hams,” which were all the odds and ends of pork stuffed into casings; and “California hams,” which were the shoulders, with big knuckle joints, and nearly all the meat cut out; and fancy “skinned hams,” which were made of the oldest hogs, whose skins were so heavy and coarse that no one would buy them..." - paragraph 2. This shows that the workers created their own filthy process of covering up the spoiled meat and exporting it. They categorized various spoiled meats and stuffed them into different casings.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.25256674445746 and the wording score is -1.05425534667234.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 580911f52d2d for prompt ebad26: 'It was only when the whole ham was spoiled that it came into the department of Elzbieta. Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions- a-minute flyers,'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 580d2857420a for prompt 39c16e: 'A perfect tragedy should, as we have seen be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan. It should, moreove imitate actions which excite pity and fear this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation. It follows plainly in the first place that the'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5836dc6f8296 for prompt 39c16e: 'A tragedy must be arranged as a plan. It must imitate emotions as it is only a step in life and will not last forever. They must be accounted for both the good and the bad. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.01297281430117 and the wording score is -0.66433982719293.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 583c75957289 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave was a social experiment designed to reveal the effects of mob mentality. A teacher named Ron Jones started the experiment by transforming one of his classes into a totalitarian environment. As time passed, exposure to the authoritarian class caused students from other classes to join in, wanting to fit in with their surroundings. After a few days, the movement expanded from the initial 30 students to over 200 students, and students had started to report when other members failed to follow the rules (showing their desire for superiority). In the end, Jones felt that he was losing control of the experiment since the students were becoming increasingly involved, so he revealed to the students that the entire Third Wave was just an experiment to show how people wrongly justify unmoral actions by connecting them to their pride and patriotism.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.48834052634457 and the wording score is 2.26253443544153.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5849ca23a44f for prompt 3b9047: 'Egypt's system of government had a social structure. At the top of the social structure was the pharaoh, the king of Egypt.  Right below the pharaoh in status was the nobles and priests.  After the nobles and priests was the soldiers that fought in wars. Then at the bottom of the social structure was slaves and farmers.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58644c3fc054 for prompt 814d6b: 'Mr.Jones in a way trained them and if they got something wrong they would have to do it again until it was right. This engraved that thought into the students heads Until they just started doing it by memoring sometimes without even realizing. In paragraph 2 it says "Jones started the first day of the experiment emphasizing simple things like proper seating, and drilled the students extensively until they got it right." This helps tell us that if the kids didn't so a simple task correctly they would do it over and over until it was ingrained in their minds.  Mr.Jones had to stop the experiment because students stared taking it way to serious. In paragraph 3 it says "Jones was surprised that some of the students started reporting to him when other members of the movement failed to abide by the rules." The kids started to tell on each other trying to get others in trouble for not following "the rules."  Who knows how far some of those kids might have taken it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.79311613037701 and the wording score is 2.04362539737376.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5869c580181f for prompt 39c16e: 'As described by Aristotle three ideal tragedy elements include a complex plot, a change of fortune from good to bad, and  a character that is not good or bad. Aristotle describes these elements when he says "A perfect tragedy should, as we have seen, be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan." and "The change of fortune should be not from bad to good, but, reversely, from good to bad." and "There remains, then, the character between these two extremes — that of a man who is not eminently good and just, yet whose misfortune is brought about not by vice  or depravity, but by some error of judgement or frailty." What Aristotle shows when he says this is that three ideal elements of a tragedy include a complex plot, a neutral character, and a change of fortune for the worse.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.48811053747562 and the wording score is -0.176230740422536.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 586ca1cfa22c for prompt 3b9047: 'Today I will explain the way the egyptians goverment worked using evidence from the text EGYPITAN SOCIAL STRUCTRE by US history. org. I am also going to be explainingthe different social classes and where you would land on the social scale. The social scale was not a scale at all in fact it was actually more pyramid shaped and their was tiers to this pyramid at the top of the pyramid was the pharoahs '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 586f2b01d1db for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave was able to develop so rapidly due to the fact that it was an easy way to do things, they didnt really have to work and think, they followed what Jones told them to do, and due to the strong beliefs of the program the students were intereste, and those who weren't were peer pressured into doing so, creating a massive domino effect, due to this domino effect it might have become an actual movem and deadly, so he had to end it to preserve the rule and prevent civil unrest.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.465598566474011 and the wording score is 0.386492041307172.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5875a8e8b106 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotles believes that tragedy should be a pleasant language, meaning its easily understood by the audience. It must be a clean and easy language that has rhythm and harmony.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.06559038269944 and the wording score is -0.202142312763057.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5879fa4a5f92 for prompt 39c16e: 'One element of a  tragedy is that  it should have  a complex storyline. Another thing is it must  strike pity or fear in its audience. Lastly, in order  for  it to be a true tragedy, it must end negatively.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.551996664583616 and the wording score is -0.637576746238767.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5894170fe8e1 for prompt 39c16e: 'One element of an ideal tragedy as described by Aristotle is that it should not be simple but a complex plan. It should excite fear and pity. And lastly, the change of fortune should be from good to back and come as a result of error or frailty of the character. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58a385bb3144 for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave was developed to elimate democracy . The third wave was able to form so quikly because the students had taken the soltue outside of the class showing other students and the followed them . The expirment was ended because it took life on its own leaving the students to become faithful and displined . He then explained how this can lead people to do horrible things in the states honor .'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.360676413545583 and the wording score is 0.500910513430704.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58a6b11c87b4 for prompt 3b9047: 'The Egyptian social structure was built like a pyramid with the higher social classes at the top and the lower classes that little to no money at the bottom, the slaves being the lowest. Slaves were mistreated as they were tortured and had to do all of the dirty work of the country of Egypt. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.548304076980462 and the wording score is 0.506755353548534.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58af1d628b8e for prompt ebad26: 'Some of the way the factory would cover up spoiled meat was put chemicals over it it make it not smell bad and still sell it to get money.  Another one is they would rub stuff with soda to take away the sour taste and smell. According to the text "Jonas had told them how the meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free- lunch counters". After they rubbed it with soda they would sell it to free lunch counters. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.376373871691152 and the wording score is 0.463618598397948.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58b3dac23af5 for prompt ebad26: 'There were many varous ways the factory would use or to cover up the spoiled meat. Ways were they would insert a white-hot iron in replacemnt of the bone that the bad part layed in for hams. Another example is theyw would put chemicals like borax and glycerin then dump them into hoppers which will ame them better for home consumpption. In the text it states, "There was never the least attention paid to what was cut up for sausage; there would come all the way back from Europe old sausage that had been rejected, and that was moldy and white – it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption." This shows there way of covering up  dirty moldy sausages. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.20516138615263 and the wording score is -0.132403044837851.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58b867dee197 for prompt 814d6b: 'It gew quickly because the students where telling other students about the Third Wave and how they neeeded to join and its was very strict rules to follow. They sluted eachother in the halls even with out haveing to be told by the instructor. It ended to show the students how something can be so mind controlling over people.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58bc85cdf690 for prompt 3b9047: ' In the article " Egyptian social Structures" by Ushistory .org we learn how their society was structured like a pyramid.. While gods are at the top, it is the pharoahs , "who were gods in human form"(2) who controled the land .Next, in the pyramdid are the nobles and preists who control the goverment and are " responsible for pleasing the gods" (p6). The middle class ( soliders , merhcants and artisans) were those  who made and sold goods or protected the land. The largest population is made up of farmers and slaves  who toiled and did most of all physical huuman labor'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.26880717534011 and the wording score is 0.537241357422765.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58c2c5e100da for prompt 814d6b: '   As kids started saluting outside of class more and more kids picked up on it wanting to be in a group. It got to the point where it was growing out of control as more and more people joined. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.718995442188973 and the wording score is 0.423674393912874.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58d47f97fd1a for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave developed by having tough rules and having pride and things like soluting each other even if nobodys there to show.these things showed that they are together in the wave. It had to be ended because it got too big and resembled the Nazi regime and the kids were takin it really serous.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.00194459351196 and the wording score is 0.467502089497559.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58f7502e951e for prompt 3b9047: 'There were 3 diffrent social classes. Lower class, Middle class, and upper class. The lower class got involved in the goveremnt by being a slave for someone and do labor. Being in the middle class you can be involved by being a farmer,merchant,artisan etc. If your in the upper class you can involved by being a slave owner or being a high rank like a priest or noble. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.440019660878631 and the wording score is 1.13326300065856.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58f81aa475f5 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tragedy are to have only one issue, the fortune of the character goes from good to bad, and the plot does not satisfy moral sense.  '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.07261303201737 and the wording score is -0.999628686402458.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 58fcc49dfd61 for prompt ebad26: 'They covered the smell of the meat was by filling the meat with pickles. they would also try to hide the smell with soda. They would try to use machines to get rid of the bones.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.40817975173863 and the wording score is -0.4936034763879.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 593177340aed for prompt 39c16e: 'The 3 elements of an ideal tragedy are described in the passage. it is ideal for it to be simply shocking, which where the reader excites pity and fear. the third passage, claims that tragedies, where the character suffers from human relateable issues, hit the spot for the readers. the third and final tragedy mentioned is for the narrative to have a double plot. two catastrophes for weakness and intense plotting. to put what i wrote all together the 3 elements of ideal tragedy should be either, a simple yet shocking event, human relatable suffering, and double the tragic account with an unsettled ending.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.360676413545583 and the wording score is 0.500910513430704.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 593461dc3005 for prompt ebad26: 'Spoiled, moldy meat would be distributed to the public, unsanitary working conditions. "Meat would often be found sour and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters" paragraph 1.  Schemes were performed by the packers as well, they had what they called "boneless hams," which were all the odds and ends of pork stuffed into casings; and "California hams" which were the shoulders which were the shoulders, with big knuckle joints, and nearly all the meat cut out;"  paragraph 1'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0673181416516237 and the wording score is -0.840382240716719.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 59396998124d for prompt 39c16e: 'The ideal tragedy should have the main character's fortune go from good to bad and this change should be because of the character's decision/mistake. Tragedy can't go from prosperity to adversity and should rather display pity. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 593e9120fce8 for prompt 3b9047: 'The social classes in the goverment were different because at the top were the pharaoh and the pharaoh give orders that the rest of the people have to follow.  Under the pharaohs are the supervisors that made sure everyone is doing what they need to do. and with the supervisors are the scibes and they are the ones that write everything that happens throught the day and report it to there supervisors. Below the scibes are the nobles and priest, there job is pleasingand make donations to the gods. Below the nobles and priests are the soldiers and they are the ones that fight to prtect egypt. IN the text it states, "oldiers fought in wars or quelled domestic uprisings." (Egyptian social stucture, paragragh 8) At the bottom are the slaves and the farmers. They became slaves in the war and they build the monuments, pay taxes, and grow crops. As you can see the social classes in the goverment were different.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.99023612991243 and the wording score is 1.33775971354814.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 594e6310c509 for prompt 3b9047: 'how the different social classes involved the government is, the farmers had to pay 60% of taxes of their yearly pay, the pharaoh appointed a chief minister called a vizier made sure that the taxes were collected. the scribes would learn how to read and write so they could keep government records.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.79954532814419 and the wording score is -0.333977337668508.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5957a3914166 for prompt 814d6b: 'The "Third Wave" developed quickly over a short period of time because of how the kids could swear in other kids and the salutes out of class spread the word and more and more kids wanted to join to be a part of it. The experiment ended because there were too many kids getting involved and it was getting too hard for Ron Jones to control.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.376373871691152 and the wording score is 0.463618598397948.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 596bcaa45674 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed so quickly because more and more people wanted to be involved with the act, and it got to the point where people were almost duplicating.  The experiment was ended because the final message to the students was sent as the last sentence says "After a few minutes of waiting, Jones announced that they had been a part of an experiment to demonstrate how people willingly create a sense of superiority over others, and how this can lead people to justify doing horrible things in the name of the state’s honor."  Telling the students how easily they can almost be brainwashed.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0768775334910716 and the wording score is 0.586913893125279.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 596ebcc71d8a for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would package the spoiled meat with other meats. The factory would even cut up the spoiled meat and turn it into sausage.  They would also rub the meat with soda to take away the bad smell of the spoiled meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.388378742233568 and the wording score is -0.718005416422111.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 597254f7b2d0 for prompt 3b9047: 'the struvte of the anicent egpetin system is that they where had slaves i think and the farmers collected the taxes egiptins could read and they could write.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 597d5cde498b for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed over a short peroid of time trying to elimiate democracy. "By the fourth day of the experiment, the students became increasingly involved in the project and their discipline and loyalty to the project was so outstanding that Jones felt it was slipping out of control."  The expiriment was ended because Jones thought it was getting out of control '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.559070107442079 and the wording score is -0.634924456786451.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5986c1ca060c for prompt 3b9047: 'Everyone in ancient Egypt had a job like a framer, Noble, peasant, priest,  Pharaohs, gods and kings, and much more. Different social classes were involved in this government because a  small number of peasants and farmers moved up the economic ladder.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.62764732431351 and the wording score is -0.125597133679325.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 598b5302760d for prompt 3b9047: 'The higher social classes in ancient Egypt were involved with the govrnment. For example, "Only nobles could hold government posts; in these positions they profited" (Egyptian Social Structure, by USHistory.org). This shows that people who worked with the govrnment profited which means they are high up in status.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.84695068644902 and the wording score is 0.587874964165976.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 598dc99491f2 for prompt 3b9047: 'At the top of the pyramid was the gods.Right below them are the nobles and prist. Right under them are the scribes or the people who would right.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.798338689522021 and the wording score is -0.208678093314985.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5995d5eaa6a5 for prompt 39c16e: '"A perfect tragedy should, as we have seen, be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan. It should, moreover, imitate actions which excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 599b27fc93de for prompt ebad26: 'The men at the factory had many ways to hide that the meat was spoiled, such as taking all of the weird parts of the ham and putting them into casings to be sold. Another way they tried to cover it up, was by mixing it in with all the other meat in a big hopper. They also hid it by pickling the meat to get rid of the odor. "Some of it they would make into "smoked" sausage – but as the smoking took time, and was therefore expensive, they would call upon their chemistry department, and preserve it with borax and color it with gelatin to make it brown." (Paragraph 5)'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.04987634762863 and the wording score is 1.67304857275766.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 59a11283c5d5 for prompt ebad26: 'They would pickle the meat,  "To pump into these the packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor." Wash it,  "It would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption." New meat mixed with old meat,  "Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions- a-minute flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0408895073247213 and the wording score is -1.629328884178.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 59a4eb58579f for prompt ebad26: '"it was only when the whole ham was spoiled that it came into the department of Elzbieta. Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions- a-minute flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference. There was never the least attention paid to what was cut up for sausage; there would come all the way back from Europe old sausage that had been rejected." This quote shows that as for its custom, as they found, whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.382272237741744 and the wording score is -1.79549080344932.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 59ab7383fad2 for prompt 39c16e: 'The three elements of an ideal tragedy are a change of fortune, from good to bad,  a well constructed plot and it should contain a character that people can relate too. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 59ad9e3b4ce0 for prompt 39c16e: 'One element of an ideal tragedy should be  more complex than simple. It should  possess no single tragic quality.  And lastly, it should have a double thread of  plot. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.210613934166593 and the wording score is -0.471414826967448.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 59ae0f235708 for prompt ebad26: 'There are many ways the factory would cover up spoiled and smelly meat. As discussed in paragraph two, the workers would rub the meat in soda to take away the smell. The factory would also dose the meat with borax and glycerin according to paragraph 3. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.831253228303451 and the wording score is 0.550583049133219.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 59f1257496b7 for prompt 3b9047: 'The government of ancient Egypt was a theocratic monarchy as the king ruled by a mandate from the gods, initially was seen as an intermediary between human beings and the divine, and was supposed to represent the gods' will through the laws passed and policies approved.t was important to keep them happy. They could make the Nile overflow, cause famine, or even bring death.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 59f321144f3c for prompt 39c16e: '     An ideal tragedy is best built up by three main parts; a decent person(not particularly bad nor good), an intricate plot stemming from various other situations and a mistake that could've resulted differently leaving the main character at fault for his own downfall in a way to which the audiance can relate.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.387791203829632 and the wording score is -0.584181287616185.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a0518e9d52d for prompt 3b9047: 'Ancient Egyptisan system of goverment in every class were a bit different.  At the top of the prymiad would be the pharoah. My evidence is that they said right below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priest, so i would assume that the pharaoh would be at the top. Next under the pharaoh would be the priest and nobles. The priest and nobles were responsible for pleasing the gods. Right before the bottom of the prymiad is the soldiers.  At the bottom of the prymiad would be the slaves and farmers. My evidence is that they said at the bottom of the social structure were salves and farmers. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.798619471931514 and the wording score is 0.577455692514437.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a15944a02d6 for prompt ebad26: 'The various ways a random factory could use a spoiled meat is by smashing it up and mixing it with the newly and un-spoiled sausages. Then, the oder would come off the sausage and the families who buy the meat and obviously, eat's it.  As it states in Paragraph 1 that "whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage. " They would also add extra pickle to destroy the oder as it says in paragraph 2.  Around the end of Paragraph 3 and Paragraph 4 they listed off many other ways it could be covered up. Like, there would be bread,  poisioned rat, and of course the spoiled sausage all in one mixer or smoker, and then they would put it inside the regular sausage and if it's "special" then they would make people charge extra for it as it says at the very end of Paragraph 5. So in conclusion, there is so many ways to hide the spoiled meat and practices too. The workers probably don't care whether or not the meat is good, they just want to make money off of it. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.95852822975316 and the wording score is 2.22232010034986.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a270647c22e for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave developed over such a short period of time because Jones wanted it to be a quick process. In the text is states, "Jones intended it to be a one-day experiment. Students had to be sitting at attention before the second bell, had to stand up to ask or answer questions and had to do it in three words or fewer, and were required to preface each remark with “Mr. Jones.” Jones's experiment grew tremendously with a great turnout of participents, too. In the text it states,  "After only three days, the experiment took on a life of its own, with students from all over the school joining in. The class expanded from initial 30 students to 43 attendees."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.638413354775127 and the wording score is -0.0025719695585915.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a27442b37c4 for prompt 814d6b: 'The students were really into this movement and saw results which encouraged them to expand, Since they spread the word the students expanded. As a result the movenent got too serious and that's why it had to end.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.564001535126031 and the wording score is 0.544047268581291.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a2f89b005dd for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the government of Egyptians was build like a pyramid, with the highest roles on the top, and the lowest at the bottom, as it says,  "the pharaoh is the highest role in the Egyptian government, with the vizier, below that are the powerful nobles and the priest,  skilled workers like craftsmen, physicians, etc are made of the middle class, and in the lowest are farmers and slaves".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.157459620904918 and the wording score is -0.165811468770997.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a341c6fb9ca for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of a tragedy include a story going from good to bad, the main character not being inherently good or bad, and the downfall of the character being brought on by an error in judgment, something the audience can relate to.  '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.639882183724882 and the wording score is -1.38273829472334.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a3869216ea1 for prompt 39c16e: 'The hero must start in a good position in life but then have a downfall of some kind. It should shock the audience and all heroes must have a quality that leads to their downfall.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a4091a34618 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would use unpleasant parts of pork and beef and packaged it as "canned chicken." People often don't considered what goes into their body before its too late. Paragraph 5 states "Some of it they would make into "smoked" sausage – but as the smoking took time, and was therefore expensive, they would call upon their chemistry department, and preserve it with borax and color it with gelatin to make it brown." It is too easy to trick people into eating anything especially if not careful.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a5385cfb60f for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would cover up the spoiled meat with soda, and pickled. Some meat may even be mixed with borax and glycerin. The meat was very unsanitary due to the conditions of the industry as well, such as sawdust and continuous germs surrounding the food. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.140912434027827 and the wording score is -0.245279067913644.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a5bc830e6b4 for prompt 39c16e: 'It must have a good plot, or else it's not a good tragedy, its characters must be ones that relate to one of the 2 extremes,  there must also be a great performance or illustration of the tragedy. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.07261303201737 and the wording score is -0.999628686402458.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a64396e11d1 for prompt 39c16e: '"for nothing can be more alien to the spirit of Tragedy; it possesses no single tragic quality; it neither satisfies the moral sense nor calls forth pity or fear. Nor, again, should the downfall of the utter villain be exhibited." Basically this means that there shouldn't be an obvious downfall and shouldn't be a story for people to feel sad for the character '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.50004898994411 and the wording score is -0.45727263239584.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a77a1f31be5 for prompt 3b9047: 'Different social classes are involved in the government by contributing to the economy. To start off, the high-class a.k.a. the pharaohs they were there for leadership. For example, " Their leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects." Then the pharaohs have powerful people who are right under them, they are the visors. The visors kept track of everything happening in the kingdom and they knew how to read and write. For example, " Working with the vizier were scribes who kept government records. These high-level employees had mastered a rare skill in ancient Egypt — they could read and write." Next are the Nobles and the Priests, They were known for pleasing the gods. For example, " Only nobles could hold government posts; in these positions, they profited from tributes paid to the pharaoh. Priests were responsible for pleasing the gods." Therefore The priests and nobles were pretty high on the ranks. You would need to protect all the higher-ups so you would soldiers! Soldiers protect and watch over everything happening in the city. To explain, "Soldiers fought in wars or quelled domestic uprisings. During long periods of peace, soldiers also supervised the peasants, farmers, and slaves who were involved in building such structures as pyramids and palaces." Next are the people who were at the bottom of the food chain they were slaves, peasants, and farmers. The three I just listed provided and did everything for the pharaoh and other people who high a higher standing than them, for example, "At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers. Slavery became the fate of those captured as prisoners of war. In addition to being forced to work on building projects, slaves toiled at the discretion of the pharaoh or nobles."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.72366995502716 and the wording score is 0.956654054853448.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a7bfe4c7102 for prompt 3b9047: 'their subjects. After pharaohs died, huge stone pyramids were built as their tombs. re believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects. After pharaohs died, huge stone pyramids were built as their tombs. Pharaohs were buPharilities. Protection was at the top of the aohs were buried in ch'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a80f2f3691e for prompt 3b9047: 'Social class differences come about because of the ideas and values you are surrounded by, the types of social interactions you have at home, school and work.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.63851133466335 and the wording score is -0.911973295233088.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a8a4d36122e for prompt ebad26: 'They would rub it up with soda to take away the smell. The miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, could change the smell or taste however they chose. There would be hams found spoiled, some of them with an odor so bad .To pump into these the packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor—a process called, “giving them thirty per cent.” '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.388378742233568 and the wording score is -0.718005416422111.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a8d9f855cd5 for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave was talking about democracy. It was symbol of being strong and being able to handle anything. Jones was the main part of the movement.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.51923089923094 and the wording score is -0.241395576814033.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5a97390bf466 for prompt ebad26: 'they would mix some of the old meat with the good meat and they would charge two cents more a pound,there were butt ends of smoked meat and the scraps of corned beef that was mixed with the good meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.20457384774869 and the wording score is -1.16978365920044.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5aa1ecb7daca for prompt ebad26: 'Whenever the meat spoiled and could not be used for anything else they chopped it into sausage. In the last paragraph it states, "All of their sausage came out of the same bowl, but when they came to wrap it they would stamp some of it "special," and for this they would charge two cents more a pound." This explains that the sausage was not properly prepared or safe because the workers did not prepare themselves correctly. They carried diseases from rats and lacked the facilities to wash their hands.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.702059143962605 and the wording score is 0.667072432702024.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5ab0274fcb59 for prompt 39c16e: 'A perfect tragedy should  be simple but also have a complex plan. Aristotle says "A perfect tragedy... be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan". It should, moreover, imitate actions which excite pity, and fear. You also need a well-constructed plot. "The change of fortune should be not from bad to good". A good tragedy is those who have done or suffered something terrible. Last it needs to have a good tragedy to have a good story. "A good tragedy is those who have done or suffered something terrible". Something bad need to happen in order for it to be a good tragedy. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.659323023014141 and the wording score is 0.419790902813263.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5ab67acd3588 for prompt ebad26: 'Facrtories all over America would cover up spoiled meat in a variety of ways. They often would rub the meat with soda and various other tactics to get rid of the odor. Such as using, "all the miracles of chemistry... pump into these the packers had a second and much stronger pickle with destroyed the odor"  (Sinclair, 2). The workers also often would douse the meat with chemicals to get rid of the mold,  or put into meat grinders where the smell won't even matter.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.376373871691152 and the wording score is 0.463618598397948.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5abb4b44c7f8 for prompt 39c16e: 'A perfect tragedy should be arranged not on the simple but complex plan. It should imitate actions which excite pity or fear. Finally it should follow the distinctive mark of tragic imitation'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.536299206438047 and the wording score is -0.674868661271524.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5abe8e8401ef for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal  tragedy has the audience feels pity for the character and the story should go from good to bad. It should also not be a vice but by error or frailty.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.20457384774869 and the wording score is -1.16978365920044.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5ac1b119265a for prompt 3b9047: 'The accient Egyptian system of government the king ruled by a mandate from the gods, initially was seen as an intermediary between human beings and the divine, and was supposed to represent the gods' will through the laws passed and policies approved.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.703297984043404 and the wording score is 0.386382478880117.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5ad512186765 for prompt 39c16e: 'One element of an ideal tragedy, as described by Aristolte, contains a main character that is neither good nor evil whose life falls apart because of a mistake that the character makes. A second element of an ideal tragedy is the incitement of fear and pity within readers. A third element of an ideal tragedy is that it features the downfall of a man (character) that readers can relate to as it creates the best effect on the readers as they are able to relate their own struggles to what has happened to a tragic character. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.06555818124081 and the wording score is 1.38089646869872.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5ad5f61af78c for prompt 3b9047: 'The upper class consisted of the royal family, rich people, government officials, important priests, etc. The middle class was made up chiefly of merchants, manufacturers, and artisans. The lower class, the largest class by far, consisted of unskilled  people.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0888824040334871 and the wording score is -0.594710121694779.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5afe80838586 for prompt ebad26: 'The way the factory would cover up the spoiled meats were in paragraph 2 they said that they rub them in chemicals, then later in the paragraph they said that they have someone put a rion in them.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5b0d9ce9e5e5 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tragedy should imitate actions that excite pity and fear, there should be a change of fortune presented (must not be the spectacle of a virtuous man brought from prosperity to adversity(does not move pity or fear).  Another element is that a bad man passing away from misfortune or prosperity would completely alienate the spirit of a tragedy because it doesn't satisfy the moral sense or cause pity or fear.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0888824040334871 and the wording score is -0.594710121694779.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5b1be4663617 for prompt 814d6b: 'The "Third Wave" took such a short time to develop due to the passion that humans have to conform to what other people around them are doing. This secretely forces people to make bad decisions just in order to fit in with the group. This experiment was ended in such a short time because, "the project was so outstanding that Jones felt it was slipping out of control"(4).  Jones feels as if he has lost control of the experiment and it was time to end it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.17345348599337 and the wording score is 0.752157341963876.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5b4aef1a53ed for prompt ebad26: 'they would rub the spoiled meat with soda to take away the smell , they would pack meat with a stronger pickle to get rid of the awful odor, get rid of the bone where the bad part most likely lays, and chaning the name of it. "Jonas had told them how the meat that was taken. out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters; also of all the miracles of chemistry ehoch they preformed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.408081771850413 and the wording score is -0.420941788403779.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5b5791278dfa for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave was developed as a experiment to show  the students were willing to create a sense of superiority. The reason the experiment ended because it was getting a little bit out of hand'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.456955959104999 and the wording score is -0.0425161740436652.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5b58fd440aa3 for prompt ebad26: 'They used chemicals  which were inserted with a needle straight into the meat. "a machine consisting of a hollow needle attached to a pump; by plunglinf the needle into the meat and working with his foot, a man could fill a  ham with pickle in a few seconds"  Pick;e destroyed the oder.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.648556992552524 and the wording score is -0.54796000605118.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5b70066a6c4c for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy should imitate actions which excite pity and fear. The change of fortune should be from good to bad. This should be a result of some great error in a character.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.536299206438047 and the wording score is -0.674868661271524.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5b8555a1ac2f for prompt ebad26: 'In the story,to cover up spoiled meat they would Cut up by the two thousandrevolutions a-minute flyers, and mix  with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference. There would also  be meat stored in great piles in rooms; and the water from leaky roofs would drip over it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.08650005093846 and the wording score is -0.624505185134912.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5b8cc206ce63 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle claims that for a tragedy to be perfect it needs to be arranged on the complex plan rather than the simple one, and should excite pity and fear. There should be a well-constructed plotand the change of fortune should be from good to bad. There should always be a tragic scene as in someone being slain, particularly by a once close friend. They should not become friends. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5b9fc0612756 for prompt 814d6b: 'It was developed in a short period of time because jones the leader of the experiment knew what e was doing and I time they did everythingthat he told them to do nomatter what and the experiement was enede because the students started to go over board and be too good to a point where he could not handle it so he ended it in hopes of it all stopping.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.35556218334036 and the wording score is -0.955800990817773.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5bb32efe4ef1 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tradegy are different some start of bad then ends in good or some start good and end up bad. One good that ended back was Oedipus which everything was going good until he find out he killed his father and married his wife. And another one is second rank. Which this one it is a type of comedy. In the article the second rank is "those who, in the piece, are the deadliest enemies — like Orestes and Aegisthus — quit the stage as friends at the close, and no one slays or is slain." that mean they turn bad people to good people.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.676259321240509 and the wording score is 0.670955923801635.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5bb5f82fa9f1 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed over such a short period of time because the students felt they were apart of something important and powerful, making them feel good about themselves. The experiment was ended because the students got very involved in the experiment and started calling each other out on things.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5bb7bcf7af2c for prompt 39c16e: 'A tragedy must have a protagonist who is not clealy defined as a good or bad guy but an accident the occurs changes his life for the
 worse.  The downfall of the main character should neither bring pity or fear because the protagonist is not similar to the person reading and the tragedy should not be so dramatic to bring emotions of pity or fear. The downfall of the protagonist should be caused by a great error or fratility, not by a villain or evil force.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5bc8468a4151 for prompt 39c16e: 'Tragedy should include a very complex story. The story should never be simple or easy to understand. Tragedy should also not include a big change in character such as a person going from adversity to prosperity. Finally, tragedy should not have the downfall of a villain, because it does not inspire pity or fear.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.248807738780381 and the wording score is 0.383460058821202.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5bd21e4836f4 for prompt 3b9047: 'back then they had slaves and they were forced to do the work but now if you dont want to do the job you can quit.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5bd94b4067fe for prompt 39c16e: '3 elements described by Aristotle would be plot, character, and the ending. The character is usually a simple man ruining his life with mistakes. The plot is usually complex. And the ending is usually not good. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5be8bca57b0d for prompt ebad26: 'the ways the factory would cover up spoiled meat is 1: whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage. 2: There was never the least attention paid to what was cut up for sausage; there would come all the way back from Europe old sausage that had been rejected, and that was moldy and white – it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption. 3: These rats were nuisances, and the packers would put poisoned bread out for them; they would die, and then rats, bread, and meat would go into the hoppers together. This is no fairy story and no joke; the meat would be shoveled into carts, and the man who did the shoveling would not trouble to lift out a rat even when he saw one'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0408895073247213 and the wording score is -1.629328884178.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c03fce5c052 for prompt 39c16e: 'It must have a complex plot that invokes feelings of pity and fear.  In a way it must also satifsy the audiences moral sense, the main character must then be a mix of good and bad. They must make an error of weakness that causes  their misfortune. It cannot be caused by vice or there would be no pity. Their fortune must move from good to bad and end unhappily.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c0970b67538 for prompt ebad26: 'One of the ways that they covered up the spoiled meat would be to cut it up into tiny pieces and mixed it with other meats. They would also douse it in two chemicals, borax and glycerin, and then put it back into processing. I got this from paragraph 3. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.388378742233568 and the wording score is -0.718005416422111.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c0cdbac25d0 for prompt 39c16e: 'The three elements of an ideal tragedy are having a complex plan, the plot should have one issue, and a main character that is not good or bad but just makes an error of judgment. The plan should have actions that incite pity and fear. The plot should have one issue because the storyline should not go from good to bad for it to be ideal. Finally, the main character should be someone who isn't really good or bad but just someone who has made a bad decision that ends in tragedy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.467721989566616 and the wording score is -0.0856529291942516.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c0d28e3df58 for prompt ebad26: 'They would rub it with soda so the smell would go away. They would also use a bigger and stronger pickle to destroy the odor. They would also extract the bone because that is where the bad part stays.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.00194459351196 and the wording score is 0.467502089497559.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c22066974b5 for prompt ebad26: 'The factories would cover up the odor and mix the spoiled meat with other meat. In the text it says, "  it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption." it also states, "and mixed with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.425248058945738 and the wording score is -0.927076560845392.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c488cbbafa3 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle describes a perfect tradedgy should be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan. Aristotle also stated that it should, moreover, imitate actions which excite pity and fear.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.519752019560955 and the wording score is -0.754336260414171.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c49c3bfa445 for prompt 39c16e: 'The 3 elements of an ideal tragedy described by Aristole are envoking emotions such as pity and fear, a well-constructed plot, and having the opposite catastrophe.  Envoking emotions such as pity and fear using the characters in a complex plot can satisify the audience later on in the story by changing the opposite. A well constructed plot is a plot with a  single issue rather than a double issue and it is dramatic. Having the opposite catastrophe is one of the elements of an ideal tradegy because  it is the weakness of the audience.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.467721989566616 and the wording score is -0.0856529291942516.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c540bc4217f for prompt 3b9047: 'At the top of the social pyramid was the Gods in which people worshipped because they controlled the universe; they were called pharaohs. Underneath them was a minster called the Vizier which was their supervisor. Below them was powerful nobles as well as priests; physicians and craftmen were mostly what made up middle class. Not but last least slaves and farmers were at the way bottom of the pyramid.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c6c0c62a43e for prompt ebad26: 'To cover up spoiled meat, the factory would rub meat with soda to take away the old smell, they would also put pickles in meat that smelled bad, so bad it was hard to bear.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c7ec62cd961 for prompt 3b9047: 'Many diffrent social classes are part of the social pyramid and they all work together.  The scribe work with the government officals because they write the laws. Next the artsins worked with the pharohs  by making jewrey and furnicher for them.  The slaves works with all of the classes because they grow and harfisted the crops for the town. Finally the priest worked with everyone to help please the gods. This is how all of the classes are intertwined.  Many diffrent social classes are part of the social pyramid and they all work together.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.702059143962605 and the wording score is 0.667072432702024.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c88f1dd3b52 for prompt 814d6b: 'Ron Jone's made the experiment interesting for the kids but also made it to resemblance to what's happening in the real world. For the kids it just felt like fun they didn't have to do real work, it was like a game. The experiment ended because the students started to get out of hand. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c8ef052a510 for prompt 3b9047: 'the social class  are different because in the secound paragraph  Their leaders called pharaohs were believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.989939722969547 and the wording score is -0.7141219253225.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c9676553f7b for prompt 814d6b: 'Ron Jones began the "Third Wave" by emphasizing small things like proper seating, and the students were drilled if they got it wrong; as the week progressed Jones's class tranformed into a group with supreme sense of discipline and commmunity. After three days students from all over teh school were joining; every member was issued a card and recived a special assignment, students began to report that other members failed to abide by the rules. The program had to be terminated because by teh fourth day the students became increasingly involved in the project and their discipline and loyalty to the project was so outstanding.  In paragraph 4, "By the fourth day of the experiment, the students became increasingly involved in the project and their discipline and loyalty to the project was so outstanding that Jones felt it was slipping out of control." This shows that the reaso why the "Third Wave" had to be terminated was that Jones felt that the experiment was slipping out of control. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.88998321434036 and the wording score is 0.283044353948422.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c98838e39cb for prompt ebad26: 'They would sometimes rub it against a soda can to take away the smell. They would try to use certain condiments like salt and try to de odor the nasty smell with anything they can think of. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.986247135366393 and the wording score is 0.430210174464802.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5c9a4709bd93 for prompt 39c16e: 'Its more of a complex plan that should excite pity and fear. That the man is neither good or bad.  The change of fortune should not go from bad to good , but from good to bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.921624696425702 and the wording score is -1.21361135478513.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5ca0eac97dab for prompt 3b9047: 'The Egyptians were very idolistic because they belived in many different gods. They also belived that the pharohs we gods put in human form. At the top was Pharohs, cheif minister, nobles and priests, soliders, craftsmen, merchants.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.125489530418071 and the wording score is -0.209639164355682.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5ca82ff83362 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle believes it must be a regular man whom goes from where he was to bad. That this act will present the audience with pitty and fear which is said to be the feelings of a tragedy. Also a true tragedy cannot have a happy ending. Instead it should have one closer to that of a comedy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0888824040334871 and the wording score is -0.594710121694779.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5cad94f425d1 for prompt 39c16e: 'A good tragedy should contain a well-constructed plot, and have a good moral character fall into evil morality by bad luck. It should also have imitate actions which excite pity and fear'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.819248357761036 and the wording score is -0.63104096568684.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5cb0bd56b91d for prompt 39c16e: 'One element is to excite pity and fear. This means to add scenes that would shock the audience and give them fear for the people in the play.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.14493363003249 and the wording score is -0.834494799990917.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5cb28287ee08 for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave developed so greatly after such a short period of time was beacuse it started out with a small group of students who were disaplained and were made "better". Then these students would go out into the halls and boast and brag how much better they were after joining the movment. Others wanted to be like this so they started joining the movment. And soon the Thrid Wave was a huge group of kids resembaling Nazis. The experiment was ended when Jones relized that they were acting against eachother to bring eachother down and they were acting like robots under his command.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.12920397042829 and the wording score is 2.05054087095934.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5cb456f546cc for prompt 39c16e: 'It must evoke feelings of pity and fear in the reader; the change of fortune must be from good to bad; a well constructed plot should be it's single issue.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5cbec85cd9e3 for prompt 39c16e: 'There has to be an okay man that has something awful to him, the story needs to be complex, and it should excite pity and fear. No happy endings are allowed. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.558482569038143 and the wording score is -0.667262247251845.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5cc59c0ef71c for prompt 814d6b: 'Because so mnay students were participating in this experiment, other students from school decided to join and see what it was all about. Mr. Jones, the original creator of this experiment, saw that it was getting out of control and decided he had to put a stop to it. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.456955959104999 and the wording score is -0.0425161740436652.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5cc88cf057bf for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle 3 elements of an ideal tradgey were plot, character, and diction. He believed the plot shouldn't be simple, but complex and the auidence should be able to understand the plot of the story easily. " A perfect traddegy should as,we have seen, be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan......[a] well-constructed plot should, therefore, be singlein its issue, rather than double as some maintain. The change of the fourtune should be not from bad to good, but, reverselt from good to bad." He wanted his word choice to be clear for the auidence to understand the characters situation. Aristoteles claims that tragedy should "imitate actions whch excite pity and fear, this being distinctive mark of tragic imitation", basically saying it should imitate actions and not human beings. Tragedy actions represent actions of happiness and unhappiness relations to the character actions.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.91089288257938 and the wording score is 0.705407226320276.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5cd441635928 for prompt ebad26: 'They would mix it with more to blend it in and they would cut out most of the spoiled part and "Insert in the hole a white-hot iron" or they would "rub it up with soda to take the smell away"'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.810573548933394 and the wording score is -1.465819254359.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5cd9295a8d2a for prompt 3b9047: 'The struture in ancient Egyptian system government were involved in social classes by people treating people in a certain way depending on how much money they have, and what class their in, also rules may vary with money or class.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.671590083884143 and the wording score is -0.49817790792161.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5cda98254863 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory depicted by Upton Sinclair used various ways to use or cover up spoiled meat such as filling the ham with pickle juice,  and replacing spoiled bones with hot irons. For example, "saved time and increased the capacity of the plant—a machine consisting of a hollow needle attached to a pump; by plunging this needle into the meat and working with his foot, a man could fill a ham with pickle in a few seconds."(Sinclair 2). Machinery was used to inject the spoiled hams with pickle juice in order to save money. The pickle juice was used to mask the smell and taste of spoiled meat to make the factory more money for less effort. Another example of the factorie's methods is "extract the bone, about which the bad part generally lay, and insert in the hole a white-hot iron."(Sinclair 2). A new device was invented that could remove the contaminated bones of the meat that lowered the quality. The bone was replaced with iron, so the factory could make more money selling "higher quality" meat products. That is how the factory in The Jungle  used  wicked means to cover up and sell spoiled meat at the public's expense to make more profit.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.94145992254606 and the wording score is 1.78884701589237.


### Human: Here is a summary written by student 5ce1fe48bd6f for prompt 39c16e: 'In an ideal tragedy, the character should be someone who is "not eminently good and just"; the person should not be entirely moral, but instead have some personality flaws like normal humans. Further, his misfortune should not be brought from his moral corruption but because of an error or flaw in judgment that leads to his downfall. The last element is that the character of the tragedy must be well-off: "renowned and prosperous".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912.