A little to predictable
Reviewed in the United States on June 27, 2024 | Rating: 4/5 | Best Sellers in Kindle Store
so imagine you get dressed up your finest clothing and you’re going to go out to one of the expensive restaurants in town this restaurant is not cheap it cost more money than the average run of the mail place but it’s supposed to have superior food  you get there you have an appetizer you have a meal you have a dessert and you leave feeling like it was average  that’s how i feel after i read this book it was just average don’t get me wrong there were some good parts to the story the beginning was good the end was good but there was far too much predictability i really felt like having i read this sort of similar dragon rider tale before or have i seen these plot points touched upon before  i could see where certain things were going well before they got there not that i predicted everything but too much of this was predictable  no i did not want to give the book 3 stars so i didn’t go that low but it deserves about 35 stars to be honest  for the 1499 i paid for this book digital on kindle it cost too much for the story i got  here’s the funny thing i actually want to read the next book in the series it’s not that it’s a bad story but for 15 it should be a great story and so far it’s just average there is room for improvement the characters are nice i can see this growing into something better but this first book was not a homerunmessage to the authorspoilers follow warning once again spoilers be warnedi always write a message to the author when i read a book that is interesting to me now i am a fan of the dragon writer genre i’m a fan of fantasy and litrpg books so i can get down with any story and i look for the good ones i saw the reviews i saw the price and i was willing to pull the trigger and pay 15 for this story i believe authors should be paid properly for their work i’m a little sad to say the 15 i paid for this digital book doesn’t quite live up to my expectations the plot was easy to follow the grammar was perfect and spot on no misspellings nothing like that instead i found the story just predictable it was easy to see who the heroin would bond with wow there’s a big dragon she’s going to be with him it was unexpected that she would get two dragons there’s a mysterious rebel that wants her dead i bet they’ll end up a couple guess what it happened  now the end was not as predictable i know some people who would’ve thought it was predictable to see him leading a rebellion with the griffins but i didn’t see that coming perhaps because i wasn’t looking for it but i didn’t know what would happen at the end truly however it was easy to see that her mind had been read as soon as i realized he touched her i said dain knows something he shouldn’t it was easy to see he would be the one to break her trust and do something he shouldn’t it was also clear someone would die and the only question was would it be liam or her gf  the world was a nice world to be in the characters were nice characters to read about but they were just too predictable  one final note the love scenes were well written often i read authors who don’t know how to describe passion in a book but this was very tasteful what was repetitive were the feelings that kept being repeated over and over and over and over again there’s only so many times i want to hear how attracted she is to him even when we were given a different mindset at the end of the story man i already knew how attracted he was to her i didn’t need to hear it so many times it was just too much i realized they are young teenagers who really want each other but i don’t need to hear it every five minutes in the booki’m a bit unsure if i will purchase the next book in the series i definitely want to read it since that final scene in the book occurred but i’m a little scared to pay 15 i think the prices for this series needs to be adjusted