Oh, no, it turned into a 'formulaic script'

Rating: 3/10 (4 March 2015)

It started with one of the most important moral issues of the world's relentlessly coming futuristic robotic hi-tech future. And it had the potential to hit me, to improve me (like Neil and Anna sang in the opening of the 87th Oscars) - just like one of the old 1990s best. And then: a disaster! It developed in a highway car chase, a helicopter downtown chase, and a fall from a skyscraper, miraculously survived, without the help of Spiderman or Batman!
How it would hit me (my version):
When they escape, they manage to connect with the real Sarah Jordan. They find her gravely ill in her house, explain to her what is happening, and she tells them to run away and hide, while she will be calling the police and the media. Whether she actually did that, remains to be seen. The two clones arrange a meeting and separate, Six Echo goes to the house of the real Lincoln, but it turns out that he is a real jerk, just like in the actual movie, and calls the henchmen, instead of the authorities. They attack and mistakenly kill the real Lincoln. 6 Echo remains in his house, acquiring his identity. The henchmen are now off for 2 Delta. She awaits on that swing, and she is thinking about sick Sarah Jordan, and her small child (put several good flashbacks) - waiting - after having used the Internet, trying to contact with media (isn't there free media still there, in this futuristic America?) Unfortunately, they manage to track her, because of the card she is using to connect, and instead of the journalists she awaits, she sees the coming henchmen. Now she realizes that there is no escape, starts crying, bends down her head (this would absolutely break me), and finally surrenders to her fate.
Carrying Jordan Two Delta (or beautiful Scarlett, in my own view) back to the killing center, the black paramilitary starts to develop a little bit of a crush on her (who wouldn't, for beautiful Scarlett - even gays and straight women would). He says to her: "What did you think? That you can escape? You shouldn't even try, you didn't have a chance! You're a clone, not a human being!" To which she replies: "At least I'm going to save a life! While you are just a killer!" Only that, no more conversation.
Then they can show how she is being sedated, while crying and trembling, although they shouldn't show additional Repo Man style surgical details, to avoid being rated R.
Then the black guy (who already has started to have second thoughts about this Nazi stuff) goes in the morgue depository, where the remains of gutted Jordan Two Delta are awaiting to be incinerated for further cover up. He looks at her remains (still beautiful in death). He has some flashbacks of the things he has done and witnessed, including the way the black football player clone (The Green Mile convict, good role!) was dragged down to the operation room, while in horror, realizing what is happening. Then he looks again at the gutted body (beautiful Scarlett, with serene face), and finally snaps! He goes through the building with scary determination, a cold stone face, and accompanied by some bad, alarming music, bursts in the cabinet of the main culprit, this spectacled modern neo-tech Dr Mengele, and shoots up (and all over) him, Sarah Connor's style (although she couldn't kill the computer scientist face to face - this one, however, knowing what they both have been doing recently, empties his whole magazine, in Dr Mengele's spectacled face, torso and a**).
And then: another change for the better, hope finally arrives: it turns out, that the FCSA (Fascist Capitalist States of America) is not that fascist, and still has democratically elected, conscious and responsible political power; it turns out that there is at least one communist thing there: a free uncensored public access to the Internet (so 2 Delta call worked, although too late for her); it turned out that the real Sarah Jordan also called the police, and after they made some checks, they realized something is smelling about this corporation, up to the clouds, and needs urgent intervention; it turns out that corporate media has not forgotten yet what made Americans great in the first place, i.e. FREEDOM. Yes: freedom! So media helicopters and police helicopters finally arrive, to liberate this concentration camp, built in the land of the free, and the home of the brave.
And you could keep the scene with the clones exiting freely outside. Although what would they do in the Arizona/Nevada desert - go to Las Vegas to play the casino? These people are badly misused abused brainwashed victims, they need years of counseling and therapy!
Of course, in order for all of that to work, you would need to remove idiotic moments, like stupid Steve Buscemi's comic relief. I mean: how can I know that private military contractors - merciless killer henchmen - are coming to murder me in a cover up, probably within minutes, and still have time to explain to a potentially retarded 15-year-mind reserve parts clone, about which is the suitable dress (unless, of course, I have already ridden a multi-megaton nuclear bomb, like a toy horse, while onto the surface of an asteroid, and while on a mission to save the Earth). If I was in such situation, I would c**p myself in fear, not do the comic relief.
Epilogue: The actual (now cured) Sarah Jordan, accompanied by her small son, enters the premises of a green, calm graveyard. There, she approaches a tombstone with a name and inscription: "Jordan Two Delta. A HERO: SAVED A LIFE". And she puts some flowers.
It would be like a nuclear shell exploding. It would cut through the heart. It would make young brainwashed Americans think. Instead of that: another formulaic script. What a pity!