flow is missing

Rating: 5/10 (10 February 2005)

The initial stage set as Ben does not want the Independence declaration not to be stolen for the sake of treasure. But eventually Ben steals it from the government for the treasure when he knows the Ian will steal it. It looks as though cage does not want Ian to reach the treasure rather than saving the previous independence declaration. This is a serious flaw, over which the story is moving.

The puzzles seem to be in very high level that only Ben solves every time without anybody nearby attempting to do it.

There is no detailed background given about Ben like what Dr Jones got.

No powerful character nearby Ben to support and lift the image of Ben and speak of him to the audience. That would have given much more impact.

It was so methodical, that even the kiss between Ben and Abigail goes unnoticed. It did not portray bit of romance there.

Very good attempt, but should have been bettered with more liveliness.