Typical poorly written love story

Rating: 3/10 (17 February 2015)

First thing I though was it seemed like a twilight rip-off, then I come back and read it started as a fan written twilight spin off story.
Second thing is it's not porn, don't listen to the others who keep saying that. Likely they have never watched it and on moral reasons are posting bad reviews and giving it 0 stars.
The sex scenes were pretty toned down for what I was expecting, not even full frontal for either actor, just lots of close up boobs. You see more than that on an HBO series. The bondage scenes were pretty short also, a minute or two and they are done and she's being carried off to bed.
It features a fairly poor and uninteresting girl (like Bella) who suddenly has a rich guy from a wealthy family chasing after her (twilight again) who keeps telling her to get away from me you won't like me but come back I want you (twilight story again).
Both main characters were kind of jerks. He was kept telling her she can leave, you wont like me once you get to know me. So she would leave, he would track her down, just about kidnap her then bring her right back. She kept teasing him with that stupid contract. OK change it and Ill sign it, just kidding I won't sign it, yes I will sign it, let me think about it but have sex with me now anyway, I don't like you but I want to make you breakfast and go on dates...
My first thought was, why does he not just hire a girl to serve his needs ? He can get a high class, discrete, strictly business girl that will do exactly what he wants, when he wants. He admits she is girl #16, so none of the first 15 he ever had feeling for, nor they for him ? For whatever reason she was the first one ? Seems unlikely.