It was goog, but...

Rating: 3/10 (23 November 2018)

It was goood, but the story I wrote about Alice was more in keeping to the original. My little effort is called Alice in Wonderland Christmas. I hope you enjoy reading it.
Chapter One
Into The Abyss
It was many years later when Alice had her next adventure, and whilst she was quite surprised to be having one at all, after the passing of so many years, she was even more surprised to see that she was a child again, no older than when she had first entered Wonderland and slipped through that fascinating Looking Glass.
"How curious," she whispered, trying to recall the child she had once been.
"You took your time getting here," said the White Rabbit who suddenly appeared in front of her.
"I beg your pardon?" Alice replied, remembering how rude he could be, if he felt so inclined.
"I said you took your time getting here. You should have been here fourteen years ago," the Rabbit huffed indignantly as he began hopping quickly away from Alice.