Reviewer’s report
Title: Intention to quit water pipe smoking among Iranian women: A qualitative directed content
analysis
Version: 0 Date: 18 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Akmal El-Mazny
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this interesting study "Intention to quit water pipe
smoking among Iranian women: A qualitative directed content analysis".
However, I have some comments and recommendations:
Comments:
Title: 
- Is appropriate for the content of the article.
Abstract: 
- Represents a suitable summary of the work.
Article content: 
- The design, methods and analysis of the results are appropriate for the study.
Conclusions:
- Are justified on the basis of the results of the study.
Recommendations:
Introduction:
- Be focused; emphasize the gap of knowledge.
Methods:
- Emphasize the sample size.
Results:
- Present only relevant data.
Discussion:
- Justify the differences from other studies.
References:
- Update some references.
General:
- Revise language, grammar and syntax.
Are the methods appropriate and well described?
If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.
Yes
Does the work include the necessary controls?
If not, please specify which controls are required in your comments to the authors.
No
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?
If not, please explain in your comments to the authors.
Yes
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an
additional statistical review?
If an additional statistical review is recommended, please specify what aspects require further
assessment in your comments to the editors.
I am able to assess the statistics
Quality of written English
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:
Acceptable
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