Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Eliminating t he high abortion related complications and deaths in Cameroon. The 
restrictive legal atmosphere on abortions is no acceptable excuse.  
 
Version: 0 Date: 29 Nov 2016  
 
Reviewer: Roger Rochat  
 
Reviewer's report:  
 
The authors make a persuasive case for expanding contraception and MVA services to prevent 
the deaths of Cameroonian women from abortion. It is not original research. They do not present 
a methodology for their review of the literature. They do not cite the current law or its historical 
origin. They provide a strong case for further qualitative and quantitative research on sex ual 
relations, contraceptive availability and acceptance (and barriers) and on abortion. Moreover 
they express an urgent need to improve sexual education and reproductive health services. If this 
is done, it should be done in a way that is respectful of co mmunity values and with support of 
community leaders.  
Are the methods appropriate and well described?  
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Unable to assess  
 
Does the work include the necessary controls?  
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Unable to assess  
 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
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Yes 
 
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an  
additional statistical review?  
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assessment in your comments to the editors.  
 
Not relevant to this manuscript  
 
Quality of written English  
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Needs some language corrections before being published  
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