Reviewer’ s report
Title: Effects of Endometriosis on Sleep Quality of Women: Does Life Style Factor Make a
Difference?
Version: 0Date: 12 May 2020
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript aimed to evaluate the correlation between endometriosis and sleep quality and the
study concluded that life factors reduce sleep quality in patients with endometriosis.
I may suggest some corrections:
-line 48: there is a repetition (menhorragia, menhorragia)-line 76: you may correct "that attending" with "that attended"-please pay attention to the punctuation in lines 96-97-98-please correct the sentences in lines 131-132-133; line 142 and in line 188
Finally, I recommend a revision of English
Are the methods appropriate and well described?
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YesDoes the work include the necessary controls?
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YesAre the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?
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YesAre you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an
additional statistical review?If an additional statistical review is recommended, please specify what aspects require furtherassessment in your comments to the editors.
I am able to assess the statisticsQuality of written English
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:
Needs some language corrections before being published
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