Reviewer’s report
Title: 
"I expected little, although I learned a lot": Perceived benefits of
participating in HIV risk reduction sessions among women engaged in sex work
in Uganda
Version: 
1 
Date: 
27 Feb 2022
Reviewer's report:
PEER REVIEWER ASSESSMENTS: 
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objective)?
Yes - there is a clear objective
DESIGN - Is the current approach (including controls and analysis protocols)
appropriate for the objective?
Yes - the approach is appropriate
EXECUTION - Are the experiments and analyses performed with technical rigor
to allow confidence in the results?
Yes - experiments and analyses were performed appropriately
STATISTICS - Is the use of statistics in the manuscript appropriate?
N/A - there are no statistics in this study
INTERPRETATION - Is the current interpretation/discussion of the results
reasonable and not overstated?
No - there are minor issues
OVERALL MANUSCRIPT POTENTIAL - Is the current version of this work
technically sound? If not, can revisions be made to make the work technically
sound?
Yes - current version is technically sound
PEER REVIEWER COMMENTS: 
GENERAL COMMENTS: 
This is a new manuscript, titled: "I expected little, although I learned a lot":
Perceived benefits of participating in HIV risk reduction sessions among women
engaged in sex work in Uganda, which is reporting findings from a study
conducted to qualitatively describe the perceived benefits of an evidence-based
HIV risk reduction intervention that was implemented as part of a combination
intervention tested in a clinical trial in Uganda among women engaged in sex
work. Overall, the paper is very nicely written and provides a solid introduction
and methods section. 
The one part of the paper that needs to be addressed is that
the qualitative findings do not completely match with the intervention activities /
content. 
The intervention was specifically designed to increase communication,
problem-solving skills, and self efficacy related to safe-sex behaviors and
substance use, and yet none of these are discussed with any depth in the results
section. Further, the intervention incorporated many of social cognitive theory's
social-cognitive mediators within the HIV prevention context, including
male and female condom use, communication skills and building social support.
However, from this list, only condom use was reported on. The authors point out
that one of the central tenets of social cognitive theory is self-efficacy. Self-
efficacy is achieved by incorporating into sessions content on triggers for risk
taking, communication skills to negotiate safer sex and substance behaviors, and
goal setting to generalize new skills into everyday practice. However, this term is
not even used in the results section of the paper. 
I think the paper is strong, but
would benefit from reporting results that are specific to the content, structure and
format of the intervention that was delivered, and a discussion of how the
content of the intervention that tried to impact the hypothesized mediators (ie.,
the social cog constructs) was perceived and integrated into these women's future
behaviors.
REQUESTED REVISIONS: 
Please see comments above. 
Overall very solid paper.
ADDITIONAL REQUESTS/SUGGESTIONS: 
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