Reviewer’s report
Title: 
Challenges and opportunities associated with cervical cancer screening
programs in a low income, high HIV prevalence context
Version: 
0 
Date: 
16 Mar 2020
Reviewer: 
nasrin abdoli
Reviewer's report:
This article is a good idea for women with cervical cancer.It can be useful in the
area of prevention.
This is a good case for women with cervical cancer.
Challenges and opportunities to reduce the burden of cervical cancer in a low
income, high Write about the use of research prevalence context
Dear author
One of the merits of a specific study is the screening of cervical cancer in
women. This is one of the significant strengths of this project. However,
alongside these merits, some weaknesses need to be improved.
Changes should be made as follows:
Topic: Use the screening program instead of the word challenge and opportunity.
Abstract: How long were they studied over several months? Specify the
sampling method. How long was the study period or several months studied?
Conclusion: Write about the use of research
Keyword: Extracted from the subject. So, Cervical Cancer, HIV prevalence, low
income
Introduction: At the end of the introduction, the necessity of more thorough
research is written.
Methods: Delete the data word in the headline. Just the method is enough. Select
the study sample as a chart. Or the form of the search strategy. Report according
to PRISMA guidelines. Inclusion and exclusion criteria are brief and orderly.
Results: First, report the number and age range of the sample studied. Then give
a brief overview of important demographic variables. The demographic
information of the research participants is reported in the table.
Also, List the main themes and sub-themes of the causes of cervical cancer in the
table. In one column: Write the main themes and in the other column the side
themes.
Discussion:In the discussion section, we first refer to the list of key themes and
evidence from other studies, In this study, the discussion requires editing.
Are the methods appropriate and well described?
If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.
Yes
Does the work include the necessary controls?
If not, please specify which controls are required in your comments to the
authors.
No
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?
If not, please explain in your comments to the authors.
Yes
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you
recommend an additional statistical review?
If an additional statistical review is recommended, please specify what aspects
require further assessment in your comments to the editors.
Not relevant to this manuscript
Quality of written English
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:
Needs some language corrections before being published
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