Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Men's Awareness of Cervical Cancer: A Qualitative study  
 
Version: 1 Date: 31 May 2018  
 
Reviewer: Lalini Rajapaksa  
 
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The corrected submission is an improved version. However, my concern about the sample still 
remains.  
From the information supplied it appears that the total sample originated from one seed, hence 
the sample is predominantly a group of university educated christian men. How you could/would  
interpolate from this to the larger population has to be addressed  in the discussion.   
There is a repetition of the last sentence of the abstract. this has to be deleted.  
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Yes 
 
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No 
 
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Yes 
 
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Needs some language corrections before being published  
 
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