Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Factors associated with cervical cancer screening among young unmarri ed Japanese women:  
results from an internet -based survey  
 
Version: 1 Date: 08 Jun 2018  
 
Reviewer: Alejandra Castanon  
 
Reviewer's report:  
Dear Editor,  
Many thanks for the opportunity to read the response to the comments I made on this manuscript.  
The author has responded well to the comments from both the other reviewer and myself making 
the article much clearer and easier to contextualize. I think it would still benefit from improvements 
to the language which could be done in the editorial process  should you wish to accept it.  
I have no further comments.  
 
Are the methods appropriate and well described?  
If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.  
Yes 
Does the work include the necessary controls?  
If not, please specify which controls are required in your comments to the authors.  
Yes 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
If not, please explain in your comments to the authors.  
Yes 
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an additional 
statistical review?  
If an additional statistical review is recommended, please specify what aspects require further 
assessment in your comments to the editors.  
I am able to assess the statistics  
Quality of written English  
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:  
Needs some language corrections before being published  
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