Title: A cross-sectional study on the perceived barriers to physical exercise among women in
Iraqi Kurdistan Region
Version: 1 Date: 01 Sep 2023
Reviewer's report:
Title:
Perceived barriers to physical exercise among women in Erbil, Iraqi Kurdistan Region
Dear editor
Greetings
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this manuscript. The manuscript has good
practical results, but there are some serious concerns about it, which I have mentioned below.
1. The title of the study is attractive and can be used as a suggested program to improve the
physical activity status of women. But so far many studies have been done with the same title.
What exactly is the innovation of your study? Perhaps it would be better to consider more factors
in each of the occupational, economic, social, cultural, etc. components. These factors would
make you have a deeper analysis of the subject.
2. The title of the manuscript is repetitive. The first part of the title is exactly similar to an article
published in 1999, 2006, 2009 , ....
3. The innovation of the study is ambiguous. So far, many studies have been conducted in this
field, all of which have reached similar results. Therefore, it is necessary for the authors to
present the main innovation of their study at the end of the introduction section.
4. In my opinion, very obvious topics are presented in the introduction section. If the topic
is innovative, they should provide a deeper and stronger introduction. For this purpose, the
following pattern can be used:
Opening Hook: Begin the introduction with a compelling statement, anecdote, or statistic
that captures the reader's attention and emphasizes the significance of BURNOUT AND
SATISFACTION WITH WORK-LIFE BALANCE among GPS. This hook should generate
interest and establish the relevance of the research topic.
Background and Context: Provide a concise overview about the main parameters, their
importance in society.
Existing Research Gap: Highlight the gap in the current literature, emphasizing that previous
research has predominantly focused on another topic. Emphasize the need for a comprehensive
approach that considers the interdependencies between related parameters.
Research Objective and Aim: Clearly state the objective and aim of the research. Explain that
the study aims to fill the research gap by providing a holistic framework for performing this
research.
Core Concerns and Research Questions: Introduce the core concerns and research questions that
the paper will address.
Significance and Implications: Discuss the significance and potential impact of the research.
Explain how the study results can enhance the health level of employees. Highlight the potential
benefits for policymakers, and the broader society.
Overview of the Paper: Provide a brief overview of the paper's structure, indicating how
subsequent sections will address each research question and contribute to the overall objective.
Remember to maintain a clear and concise writing style, using appropriate terminology and
avoiding excessive jargon. The introduction should set the stage for the research, establishing
its importance and creating anticipation for the subsequent sections of the paper.
5. What were the exclusion and inclusion criteria in the sample selection section of the study?
6. What were the reliability and validity indicators of the questionnaire used in your study? (CVI
& CVR)
7. What tests have you used to check the normal/abnormal distribution of the data?
8. In the discussion section, a deep comparison with the results of other studies has not been
done. In this section, it is necessary to present a more detailed analysis of the results. For this
purpose, you can use the following template:
Here are the key factors to address in a strong discussion:
Summary of Findings: Briefly recap the main findings and results of your research. Provide a
concise overview of the key outcomes, trends, or patterns that emerged from your study. Ensure
that you mention the most important aspects that contribute to the overall objective of your
research.
Reiteration of Research Objective: Restate the objective or purpose of your research to remind
the reader of the problem you aimed to address or the knowledge gap you aimed to fill.
Emphasize how your findings have successfully addressed the research question or objective
stated in the introduction.
Significance and Contribution: Highlight the significance and contribution of your research
within the broader context of the field. Explain how your study has advanced knowledge,
improved methodologies, or provided valuable insights into the topic. Discuss any implications
your findings may have for theory, practice, or policy in the field.
Limitations: Acknowledge the limitations of your study. Address any constraints or challenges
that may have affected the research process or the interpretation of results. This demonstrates
your awareness of the study's boundaries and adds credibility to your work. One of the most
important limitations of your study is that you did not conduct a longitudinal study and did not
consider the effect of confounding variables.
Recommendations for Future Work: Suggest areas for further research or specific directions
that future studies could take based on the findings and limitations of your research. Highlight
potential avenues for expanding or building upon your work to enhance understanding, address
unanswered questions, or improve methodologies.
Conclusion Statement: Conclude your paper by summarizing the overall significance and impact
of your research. Restate the main takeaway message or key points you want the reader to
remember after reading your paper. Leave a lasting impression by reinforcing the importance
of your work and its potential implications for the field.
Avoid Introducing New Information: Ensure that your conclusion does not introduce new data,
arguments, or information that has not been discussed in the body of your paper. The conclusion
should serve as a synthesis and reflection of the research you have already presented.
By addressing these key factors in your conclusion, you can effectively wrap up your research
paper and leave the reader with a strong sense of the value and impact of your study.
Best Regards.