Reviewer’s report
Title: 
Evaluating the Effect of an Educational Program on Increasing Cervical
Cancer Screening Behavior among Women in Fasa, Iran
Version: 
1 
Date: 
11 Nov 2020
Reviewer's report:
- The manuscript needs language, grammar and syntactic editing. The English
language usage should be checked by a fluent English speaker.
- It is suggested to present the structure of the article at the end of the
introduction.
- The necessity and innovation of the article should be presented to the
introduction.
- A flowchart should be added to the article to show the research methodology.
- Sections and sub-sections should be numbered in order.
- More suitable title should be selected for the article. Title should decrease to
10-12 words.
- The abstract should state briefly the purpose of the research, the principal
results and major conclusions. An abstract is often presented separately from the
article, so it must be able to stand alone.
- It is suggested to add articles entitled "Avabratha K. et al. A Study of Maternal
Breast Feeding Issues during Early Postnatal Days" and "Lin An et al. GRIK3
rs490647 is a Common Genetic Variant between Personality and Subjective
Well-being in Chinese Han Population" to the literature review.
- The major defect of this study is the debate or Argument is not clear stated in
the introduction session. Hence, the contribution is weak in this manuscript. I
would suggest the author to enhance your theoretical discussion and arrives your
debate or argument.
- More suitable title should be selected for the table 3 instead of "Comparison of
Pap smear behavior before and three months after training intervention".
- Following, you will find some new related references which should be added to
literature review:
Hambardzumyan & Hayrapetyan. Differential Diagnosis of Malignant
Melanoma and Benign Cutaneous Lesions by Ultrasound Analysis;
Zare, H. Effects of Salvia Officinalis Extract on the Breast Cancer Cell Line.
- Page 9: the following paragraph is unclear, so please reorganize that:
"Considering the women's low knowledge level and inappropriate performance,
proper training and interventions seem to play a pivotal role in enhancing their
knowledge level and promoting their participation in the Pap smear test for
prevention of cervical cancer (15)."
- Much more explanations and interpretations must be added for the results,
which are not enough.
- DOI of the references must be added (you can use "https://crossref.org/").
- It is suggested to compare the results of the present research with some similar
studies which is done before.
- Please make sure your conclusions' section underscore the scientific value
added of your paper, and/or the applicability of your findings/results, as
indicated previously. Please revise your conclusion part into more details.
Basically, you should enhance your contributions, limitations, underscore the
scientific value added of your paper, and/or the applicability of your
findings/results and future study in this session.
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