Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title : SELF -SAMPLING FOR HUMAN PAPILLOMAVIRUS DNA DETECTION: A 
PRELIMINARY STUDY OF COMPLIANCE AND FEASIBILITY IN BOLIVIA  
 
Version: 1 Date: 29 Aug 2017 
 
Reviewer:  Charalampos  Theofanakis  
 
Reviewer’s report:  
 
Dear Mrs. Fontaine,  
 
The manuscript reflects a useful alternative to cervical cancer screening, especially in regions 
with low socioeconomic profile.  
 
A question still remains though regarding the commitment of th ese women to self -sampling and 
their ability or will to perform it in a proper manner.  
 
There are also some spelling and language corrections that need to be made, as follows:  
 
Page 6, line 29: replace 'and' with 'an'  
 
Page 7, line 56: sentence needs alterat ions, it makes no sense  
 
Page 8, line 2: replace 's' with 'as'  
 
Are the methods  appropriate and well described?  
If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Does the work include the necessary controls?  
If not, please specify which controls are required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
If not, please explain in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an 
additional statistical review?  
If an additional statistical review is recommended, please specify what aspects require further 
assessment in your comments to the editors.  
I am able to assess the statistics  
 
Quality of written English  
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:  
 
Acceptable  
 
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