Reviewer’ s report
Title: The effects of occupational pollutants on the reproductive health of female informal street
traders in Warwick Junction, Durban, South Africa –a cross-sectional study
Version: 2Date: 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Bonnie Jerome-D'Emilia
Reviewer's report:
My only concern is the use of the word causal - and this specifically:Abstract - in the first abstract
the word causal was used and the second version of the abstract this was changed to casual - Iwould take that word (both iterations of it) out. Background line 16 -" causal relationship" - isthere truly evidence of causality? I suggest they remove this word unless there is clear proof ofcausality which I doubt.
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