Reviewer’s report
Title: 
Uncontrolled hypertension among tobacco-users: women of prime
childbearing age at risk in India
Version: 
0 
Date: 
02 Nov 2020
Reviewer's report:
An interesting topic, but suffers from some issues. For example:
Technically, there are some grammatical errors which should be edited.
Introduction
1. 
It would be worthwhile to include some good literature and the existing gaps.
This will help indicate the importance of your study and the need to do it.
2. 
It needs you to explain why you chose women of prime childbearing age.
What is the difference between them and other women of childbearing age?
3. 
What is the innovation of your study?
4. 
What knowledge will this study add to the facts you mentioned?
5. 
Write in a clear and explicit manner the aim of this study.
Method
1. 
In my opinion, it is not necessary to write formulas and how to code variables,
and it confuses the audience more. Divide the method into three parts:
Participants and procedure, Measurement, and Data analysis. This will give
order to the information in your article.
Discussion
On page 3, you write that "we investigate whether women of prime childbearing
age, who consume tobacco products, have a greater risk of being hypertensive
and not having it under control" meanwhile mentioned in the discussion" We,
however, do not study whether tobacco use increases the risk of hypertension".
These two sentences are contradictory. Writing a clear research aim and question
will help you.
Conclusion:
1. 
Determine how your results help to increase science and subsequent studies.
Contributions to knowledge are not clearly indicated. State clearly what practice
implication of this study is for other researchers?
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