Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Factors affecting cervical cancer screening uptake, vis ual inspection with a cetic acid 
positivity and its predictors among women attending cervical ca ncer screening service in Addis 
Ababa, Ethiopia  
 
Version: 3 Date: 04 Jun 2020  
 
Reviewer: Patricia Villain  
 
Reviewer's report:  
 
Figures to be corrected:  
 
1. in Table 1: there is an inversion between the row «married» and «divorced»,  for the health 
center columns  
 
2.  in Table 2: there is an inversion  between the «no»and «yes » rows in the «ever use of 
contraceptive»row, for the health center columns  
 
3. Correct  the mistake in the percentage of women who gave 1 to 3 live births (sexual and 
reproductive history paragraph in results): it is 68.1% not 79.4%  
 
Are the methods appropriate and well described?  
If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
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Yes 
 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
If not, please explain in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
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additional statistical review?  
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I am able to assess the statistics  
 
Quality of written English  
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:  
 
Acceptable  
 
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