JerMa88/BMC_Womens_Health_Peer_Reviews huggingface dataset:
Title: Applied anatomy of female pelvic plexus for nerve-sparing radical hysterectomy#NSRH#
Version: 1 Date: 17 Aug 2023
Reviewer's report:
Dear Authors, congratulations for your manuscript. It provides simple and clear anatomical
concepts so useful for gynecological surgeons performing radical hysterectomy.
I suggest some easy amendments in order to obtain a better paper:
- please enrich the introduction section which is to straight, for example cite previous similar
studies investigating pelvic nervous structures (i.e.https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jmig.2019.01.010)
- please state more clearly which anatomical details you chose to investigate in the methods
section (for example, measures, distances, landmark, pathways and so on). And related to this,
please add some more anatomical and objective details of your anatomical study (as previously
suggested, measures, laterality or route of structures expressed in percentages, etc.), otherwise
clearly state you wanted to obtain a pictorial and descriptive description of anatomical structures.
- please check for abbreviations (once inserted, always use them properly)
- congratulations for the pictures which are fantastic. I suggest you revising captions,
abbreviations and direction of the image (several formal errors). Also specify if images are of
a left or right side when hemipelvis are photographed
- please enrich the discussion on the middle rectal artery. It may be a key anatomical structure
also for other surgical procedures despite its anatomical variability which has been heavily
discussed in the literature (http://dx.doi.org/10.1002/ca.24059)
Title: A hypervascular placental polyp after completed abortion: A case report
Version: 0 Date: 08 Jul 2023
Reviewer:  Manal Madany Abdalqader
Reviewer's report:
This case report is well structured overall, and it was found that it adds to current
knowledge, but it needs many modifications that we will point out in the comments
sections below.
The title accurately describe the case as a case report.
The abstract is within the normal length& well structured into background, case presentation
and conclusion.
Key words: At least 5  keywords with the core message of placental poly added to them
In the background:
1. Page 3 line 50-60 , need more details regarding  definition , causes ,  size of  normal polyp
& diagnostic tools needed for the diagnosis
In the case presentation:
I really find it well written , well structured , organized with details in management regarding
the name & dose of the drugs given
In the discussion:
1. Adequate literature review, and the author well emphasize why the case is important,
2.  it was well explained regarding  the management of the case & her follow up
Conclusion
No major comments regarding the conclusion
Title: A hypervascular placental polyp after completed abortion: A case report
Version: 0 Date: 14 Jul 2023
Reviewer's report:
dear author ...
this manuscript explain  one of the rare but important problems post- delivery , which comes in
need  for  endometrial scrapping curettage thereafter . it is mentioned in your manuscript that
Ultrasonography and CT scan can differentiate between endometrial polyp and AVM., this is
not always possible , in your  doppler ultrasound figure , for example it is not easy when AVM is
closely adherent to the sub endometrial tissue . please  clerify this point  . you can also mension
somthing about the pedicle artery sign if present  which is linked to  endometrial polyp.
best regards
Title: A hypervascular placental polyp after completed abortion: A case report
Version: 2 Date: 14 Aug 2023
Reviewer:  Manal Madany Abdalqader
Reviewer's report:
This case report is well structured overall
it adds to current knowledge,
The title accurately describe the case as a case report.
The abstract is within the normal length& well structured into background, case presentation
and conclusion.
Key words:written as discussed & required
In the background:
Well structured , appropriate length
In the case presentation:
I really find it well written , well structured , organized with details in management regarding
the name & dose of the drugs given
In the discussion:
1. Adequate literature review, and the author well emphasize why the case is important,
2. it was well explained regarding the management of the case & her follow up
Conclusion
No major comments regarding the conclusion , well written & appropriate
.The article is overall well-structured
• The length of the article is appropriate.
. The sentences are well structured, and there is an adequate flow of
ideas.
• References well , updated .
.The figures well titled and referenced appropriately in the text.
Title:  Prevalence and factors associated with child marriage, a systematic review
Version: 3 Date: 21 Apr 2023
Reviewer's report:
The selected subject is interesting and applicable. However, there are fundamental shortcomings
in your study that needs to be improved.
1. Abstract is incomplete and needs to be revised.
2. Based on the objective of the study and the presented results, the introduction should be
revised. For example, related factors to CM were mentioned as an objective while, but you didn't
mention anything about it in the introduction.
3. the main shortcomings refer to the study's method and design. In the method session,  why
did you include incidence in keywords when you wanted to assess the prevalence? In the study
objectives, there are not any keywords related to factors affecting CM while you considered
it as an objective.  PICO should be defined one by one in this study.   The homogeneity of
the included papers should be assessed and reported to prove the consistency of the included
articles. Certainty assessment (CI) should be reported in the data presentation. The risk of bias
assessments should be presented for each included study. When did you conduct the search?
4. Based on the PRISMA checklist the whole parts of the manuscript should be revised especially
the method and the results.
5. Discussion is too long without coherence and solidarity.
6. Conclusion is incomplete and does not follow the results of the study.
7. the manuscript should be edited for English language.
Title: Practice of Non-Institutional Delivery and its Associated Factors among Women Who
Gave Birth in Southern Ethiopia, 2022
Version: 4 Date: 08 Feb 2023
Reviewer's report:
My general recommendation was
-Rephrasing of the  sentences was mandatory
-Correcting the grammatic errors
-Improve the readability of the manuscript
- Appropriate spacing
- Appropriate spelling
- Rewirte the introduction part in showing the magnitude and severity of the problem, known
and unknown factors and strong justification of the study
-Clear about the source population, study population and study participants
-Avoid the repeated sentences in method section
-Please be sure about the distribution of the data to report mean and SD
-Rewrite the discussion section and rephrasing and extensively improving the readability is
needed
-Provide the strength and limitation of your study
-Do not include non-significant finding in you conclusion section.
-Sure about references style of the journal
Title: Practice of Non-Institutional Delivery and its Associated Factors among Women Who
Gave Birth in Southern Ethiopia, 2022
Version: 7 Date: 11 Jun 2023
Reviewer's report:
Thanks for your commitment in revising the commented sections in your manuscript. You have
rigorously revised the comments. I have some further comments.
Abstract section
-Your recommendation was general. Be specific toward the amenable factors that the concerned
body must work. For example, what was expected from concerned body to improve the
knowledge on labor complication?
Introduction section
-"In 2017, as a result of non-institutional deliveries and other related factors, 462/100,000 and
11/100,000 live births died in both developed and developing countries, respectively". Recheck
this statement.
Methodology section
-Please rewrite study period
-"All other respondents to each kebeles were interviewed." Not clear sentence.
-Bivariate logistic regression was used to test the association between independent and
dependent factors. Is bivariate logistic regression is used to test the correlation?
-Multivariate logistic regression was used to control confounding factors and to identify
associated factors (cross-sectional studies). So, please use appropriate word (not predictor).
General recommendation
- Improve the readability of the manuscript by paraphrasing tool or rephrasing tool.
Title: Signatures of necroptosis-related genes as diagnostic markers of endometriosis and their
correlation with immune infiltration
Version: 1 Date: 25 Jun 2023
Reviewer's report:
This manuscript focuses on the necroptosis-related genes of the endometriosis. The authors have
done a bioinformatics analysis in this study.
Several issues are recommended for further improvement:
1. The potential biomarker should be verified using the endometriosis tissue sample.
2. In the Discussion section, the first two sentences, laparoscopy rather than sonography, are the
most commonly used in diagnosing endometriosis.
3. Other than the bioinformatics analysis results, we expect
to see the experimental data on the relation between necroptosis and endometriosis.
Title: Signatures of necroptosis-related genes as diagnostic markers of endometriosis and their
correlation with immune infiltration
Version: 1 Date: 29 Jun 2023
Reviewer:  Andrea Etrusco
Reviewer's report:
I read with great interest the Manuscript titled " Signatures of necroptosis-related genes as
diagnostic markers of endometriosis and their correlation with immune infiltration”, topic
interesting enough to attract readers' attention
Although the manuscript can be considered already of good quality, I would suggest following
recommendations:
- I suggest a round of language revision, in order to correct few typos and improve readability.
- It would be interesting to discuss the results of this study in the current scenario of novel
insights into molecular mechanisms of endometrial diseases, which could help to choose tailored
management and future directions.  Authors could discuss possible applications of these findings
in patients with endometriosis, proposing future directions. (I would be glad if the authors
discuss this important point, referring to PMID: 36833105 and 36979434)
Considered all these points, I think it could be of interest to the readers and, in my opinion, it
deserves the priority to be published after minor revisions
Title: Signatures of necroptosis-related genes as diagnostic markers of endometriosis and their
correlation with immune infiltration
Version: 1 Date: 29 Jun 2023
Reviewer:  Giorgio Bogani
Reviewer's report:
In my opinion, this topic analyzed is interesting enough to attract readers’ attention. The goal
of this study is developed and validate multi-gene joint signatures to diagnose endometriosis
and explore their biological roles. I think that the abstract of this article is very clear and well
structured. Nevertheless, authors should clarify some point :
- The authors should discuss the possible use of new strategies for the evaluation of endometrial
diseases, considering the application also in the management of endometriosis and possible
future directions. For example, you might consider using artificial intelligence, especially
radiomic analysis of radiological images. (In particular, I suggest this article to get deeper in
the topic PMID: 36553988)
- To date, the management of endometrial diseases had an important evolution. The authors
could discuss the topic of this study considering recent evidences about molecular and genetics
advances in endometrial disease. I suggest authors to read and insert in references the following
article:  PMID: 36983243)
Therefore, I think it might be of interest to readers and, in my opinion, deserves priority to be
published after minor revisions.
Title: A critical review: Developing a birth integrity framework for epidemiological studies
through meta-ethnography
Version: 1 Date: 14 Jul 2023
Reviewer:  Audrey Vidal Pereira
Reviewer's report:
The manuscript presents a proposal to structure a birth integrity framework for epidemiological
studies, analyzing quantitative and qualitative data from a critical review, whose articles were
analyzed through a meta-ethnography / content analysis.
The authors were able to carry out the proposal of structuring the concept called “birth integrity
multilevel framework”. The results are based on updated references and meet the objectives
proposed by carrying out a theoretical movement to indicate a conceptual model that seeks to
associate aspects that involve the structural condition for carrying out care, the organizational
culture of care, the provision of care and the subjective expectations of women in relation to
childbirth.
The approach used for data analysis is also adequately presented. The theoretical support, with
emphasis on the use of the concept of intersectionality, is in accordance with the thematic
complexity addressed in this review and indication of the theoretical concept. However, some
points for adaptation are suggested:
Indicate in phase 1 the steps of selection of the study having as design Preferred Reporting Items
for Systematic Reviews and Meta-Analyses extension for Scoping Reviews (PRISMA-ScR).
Check whether among the categories prepared by similarity (14) there is the possibility of
regrouping. For example, category 5 is related to 7; and category 8 with 11.
Regarding the six fields, highlight the category of gender from the perspective of power relations
(meso and macro-level, meso and macro-latent level, meso and macro-manifest) that also
determines the a birth integrity framework, being a concept that crosses the analytical process
of the study.
In the discussion, it is suggested to emphasize the relationship between the findings in the
review and the recommendations of the “World Health Organization. WHO recommendations:
intrapartum care for a positive childbirth experience. 2018”.
As this is a study that proposes the support of a concept related to a complex and multifactorial
theme with structural and subjective thematic groupings, it becomes necessary, after 4.1, 4.2
and 4.3, to include notes that make mediation / triangulation of quantitative and qualitative data.
To this end, the theoretical-methodological perspective of mixed studies can be used as a basis,
such as: Creswell, JW. & Clarck VLP. Designing and Conducting Mixed Methods Research. 3ª
edition.  SAGE Publications, Inc; Second edition (June 22, 2010).
And finally, is suggested to authors prepare a revision ready for acceptance.
By PhD Audrey Vidal Pereira. Associate Professor at the Fluminense Federal University,
Niterói, Rio de Janeiro, Brazil.  avpereira@id.uff.br.
Title: A critical review: Developing a birth integrity framework for epidemiological studies
through meta-ethnography
Version: 1 Date: 28 Jul 2023
Reviewer:  P. Rodríguez-Garrido
Reviewer's report:
It is a pleasure to read a manuscript that complies with a structure that helps the reader to situate
himself in the study phenomenon.
The introduction is clear and emphatic in pointing out the underlying problem, as well as
arguing the need to systematize and unify the terminology. The methodology is clear, orderly
and precise, it provides sufficient elements to replicate the study. In addition to meeting the
criteria of methodological rigor for a critical review of the literature and a metaethnography.
The results provide interesting findings to deepen, however, it is not possible due to the length
of the manuscript.
The only thing that, in my opinion, is not well researched, is related to the genesis of interest
regarding the integrity of birth. The authors point out that it was in 2010 by Browser and
Hill, however, at the 1985 meeting in Fortaleza, Brazil, a group of interdisciplinary experts
worked on general recommendations for a positive childbirth experience. I suggest reviewing
this information to provide further background to the study  (https://www.who.int/publications/
i/item/WHO-RHR-15.02).
Title: A critical review: Developing a birth integrity framework for epidemiological studies
through meta-ethnography
Version: 3 Date: 12 Sep 2023
Reviewer:  Audrey Vidal Pereira
Reviewer's report:
After a thorough review, it can be identified that the authors inserted suggestions, enriching the
quality of the text presented. Therefore, in agreement with the editor-in-chief of the journal, I
indicate approval.
Title: A systematic review of menopause apps with an emphasis on osteoporosis
Version: 2 Date: 25 May 2023
Reviewer's report:
This is a very interesting study that was conducted to evaluate the content and quality of apps
designated to address menopause and osteoporosis.
The quality of the apps was assessed using the validated Mobile App Rating Scale (MARS) . It
would be important to have a table with the scores for each app  and domain separately. Specially
because one aspect of this apps that is critical is the quality of the information. Even when the
authors stated that none have peer-reviewed information, it would be important to know how
they scored individually in the information quality or at least home a better explanation of that
domain
Title: A systematic review of menopause apps with an emphasis on osteoporosis
Version: 2 Date: 17 Jul 2023
Reviewer:  Rita Ismail
Reviewer's report:
This is a great Systematic Review. However, some points need to be modified or added.
- Eligible criteria (page 5 line 9). The inclusion criteria: the apps are in English.  Thus, the authors
do not need to put the exclusion criteria if the app were not in English.  Apps that were not in
English will be automatically not included. Please delete the statement "the exclusion criteria
if the apps were not in English".
- It will be better if the authors provide how many percentages of osteoporosis content are in
each app including topics that are discussed or measured.
Title: Perception about human papillomavirus vaccination among middle adolescent school
girls in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia 2023: qualitative study
Version: 1 Date: 19 Aug 2023
Reviewer's report:
I read with great interest the Manuscript titled "Perception about human papillomavirus
vaccination among middle adolescent school girls in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia 2023: qualitative
study" which falls within the aim of the Journal.
In my honest opinion, the topic is interesting enough to attract the readers’ attention.
The authors should clarify some points and improve the discussion by citing relevant and novel
key articles about the topic.
- I suggest another round of language revision, in order to correct a few typos and improve
readability.
-  Inclusion/exclusion criteria should be better clarified by extending their description.
- I find it interesting to include a reference to risk factors that influence the recurrence of
high-grade cervical lesions (see PMID: 36992282) and to the long-term outcomes of patients
with cervical cancer treated with minimally-invasive approach compared to the "classic" open
approach (see PMID: 37149905).
Considering all these points, I think it could be of interest to the readers and, in my opinion, it
deserves the priority to be published after minor revisions.
Title: Perception about human papillomavirus vaccination among middle adolescent school
girls in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia 2023: qualitative study
Version: 1 Date: 23 Aug 2023
Reviewer's report:
The authors presented a study to explore the perceptions of school girls of HPV vaccination in
Ethiopia.
Indeed, the topic is of the utmost importance given the efforts made by the WHO for the
prevention and early diagnosis of cervical cancer and precancerous cervical lesions.
- I find it interesting to include a reference to the screening programs for early cervical cancer
diagnosis (Golia D'Augè T, Giannini A, Bogani G, Di Dio C, Laganà AS, Di Donato V, Salerno
MG, Caserta D, Chiantera V, Vizza E, Muzii L, D’Oria O. Prevention, Screening, Treatment and
Follow-Up of Gynecological Cancers: State of Art and Future Perspectives. Clin. Exp. Obstet.
Gynecol. 2023, 50(8), 160. https://doi.org/10.31083/j.ceog5008160).
- Minor editing of the English language is required to make the work clearer and more readable.
- Authors should discuss  about risk factors that influence the recurrence of high-grade cervical
lesions (see PMID: 36992282).
Title: Perception about human papillomavirus vaccination among middle adolescent school
girls in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia 2023: qualitative study
Version: 3 Date: 01 Sep 2023
Reviewer's report:
I read with great interest the Manuscript titled “Perception about human papillomavirus
vaccination among middle adolescent school girls in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia 2023: qualitative
study.”, topic interesting enough to attract readers' attention
The quality of the manuscript has improved thanks to the changes made. I think it could be of
interest to the readers and, in my opinion, it deserves the priority to be published.
Title: Perception about human papillomavirus vaccination among middle adolescent school
girls in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia 2023: qualitative study
Version: 3 Date: 04 Sep 2023
Reviewer's report:
General comments
Generally, major and critical comments were addressed but few comments which are important
again not incorporated.
Comments Like:
Title page
# There were no Authors detail, and Authors email address in the title page. Not incorporated.
Method part
The participants
# Why you didn’t include all adolescent school girls? Since your study focused on high school
girls.  This question need justification
Inclusion criteria
# Able to communicate orally in Amharic (why not other language speakers? why you didn’t
used translators? Not acceptable ethically)
# Able and willing to provide written informed consent (what does it mean? I don’t think right
way).
Results
# When we write results in qualitative age, sometimes sex should be included like.
A 16 year old school girl said “My mother is working in the hospital. I asked her about the
benefits of the vaccine. She told me that the HPV vaccine can prevent cervical cancer” (FG2P3)
Limitation
# This study has some limitations, cause-and-effect relationship between the diverse perceptions
of the HPV vaccine and their reported implications cannot be established because this is a
qualitative study. Only females who were enrolled in school and who had received vaccinations
were included in our study. As a result, selection bias may exist, and results may not be applicable
to females who do not attend school.  Convenience sampling was used, which would also have
limited generalization.
# I don’t think these are limitations. Because from the beginning, the objective of this study was
not to ascertain or establish cause-and-effect relationship between the diverse perceptions of the
HPV vaccine and their reported implications.
# Convenience sampling was used, which would also have limited generalization. From the start,
how you generalize from qualitative result? No need of generalization.
# I recommend you to remove these limitations
Title: Perception about human papillomavirus vaccination among middle adolescent school
girls in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia 2023: qualitative study
Version: 5 Date: 13 Sep 2023
Reviewer's report:
Thank you for going through the manuscript and the reviewers' points
In my honest opinion, the authors have responded satisfactorily to the reviewers’ criticisms.
The manuscript is well written and falls within the aim of this Journal.
For all these reasons, I recommend the publication of the article, pending the correction of
reference n° 5:
Golia D'Augè T, Giannini A, Bogani G, Di Dio C, Laganà AS, Di Donato V et al. Prevention,
Screening, Treatment and Follow-Up of Gynecological Cancers: State of Art and Future
Perspectives. Clin. Exp. Obstet. Gynecol. 2023, 50(8), 160.
doi: https://doi.org/10.31083/j.ceog5008160).