Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Individual -level and Community -level Determinants of Cervical Cancer Screening among  
Kenyan Women: A Multilevel Analysis of a Nationwide Survey  
 
Version: 1 Date: 05 Jul 2017  
 
Reviewer: Johannes Berkhof  
 
Reviewer's report:  
 
The paper has been very much improved.  
 
A last point from my side is that I do not see why separate Table 3 and 4 are needed.  
 
Only the fixed effects in the right columns of Table 3 and 4 are discussed by the authors, so the 
two right columns of the two tables can be merged into one new Table 3.  
 
The ICC of the models without commmunity -level characteristics can be presented in the text if  
the authors feel these estimates are useful.  
 
 
 
Are the methods appropriate and well described?  
If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Does the work include the necessary controls?  
If not, please specify which controls are required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
If not, please explain in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an  
additional statistical review?  
If an additio nal statistical review is recommended, please specify what aspects require further  
assessment in your comments to the editors.  
 
I am able to assess the statistics  
 
 
Quality of written English  
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:  
 
Acceptable  
 
 
 
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