Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Implications of male circumcision for women in Papua New Guinea: a transformational  
grounded theory study.  
 
Version: 0 Date: 10 Jun 2016  
 
Reviewer: Joseph De Santis  
 
Reviewer's report:  
 
This manuscript reports the findings of a qualitative study that focused on implication of male 
circumcision for women in Papau New Guinea.  The manuscript is unique, well -written, and 
makes an important contribution to the literature.  I have identified n o areas that need to be 
improved.  I believe that the manuscript is ready for publication.   
 
It was a pleasure reviewing your important work!  
 
 
 
Are the methods appropriate and well described?  
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Yes 
 
Does the work include the necessary controls?  
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Yes 
 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
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Yes 
 
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additional statistical review ? 
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Not relevant to this manuscript  
 
Quality of written English  
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Acceptable  
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