Reviewer’s report
Title: 
Training Promotores to Lead Virtual Hereditary Breast Cancer Education
Sessions for Spanish-Speaking Individuals of Latin American Heritage in
California
Version: 
0 
Date: 
16 May 2022
Reviewer: 
Y Chen
Reviewer's report:
- The subject addressed is within the scope of the journal. 
- The introduction section is detailed, but needs a significant amount of
reorganization. It could be strengthened by adding more recent references.
- Please add as sentence or two to clearly recap how your study differs from
what has already been done in literature to ascertain the contributions more
strongly.
- More explanation is needed for where there is a research gap and what the
goals of the research are. The research gap and the goals of the research are not
explained in detail which leads to the reader missing the significance of the
research.
- This raises some concerns regarding the potential overlap with authors
previous works. The authors should explicitly state the novel contribution of this
work, the similarities and the differences of this work with their previous
publications.
- Methods section determines the results. Kindly focus on three basic elements of
the methods section.
a. How the study was designed?
b. How the study was carried out?
c. How the data were analyzed?
- It is suggested to add articles entitled "O. Omotoso et al. Knowledge of Breast
Self-Examination, Breast and Cervical Cancer Screening among Indian Women"
and "Omotoso et al. Practice of Breast Self-Examination and Knowledge of
Breast and Cervical Cancer Screening" to the literature review.
- Some assumptions are stated in various sections. Justifications should be
provided on these assumptions. Evaluation on how they will affect the results
should be made.
- For readers to quickly catch your contribution, it would be better to highlight
major difficulties and challenges, and your original achievements to overcome
them, in a clearer way in abstract and introduction. 
- Some key parameters are not mentioned. The rationale on the choice of the
particular set of parameters should be explained with more details. Have the
authors experimented with other sets of values? What are the sensitivities of
these parameters on the results?
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