Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Magnitude, trends and causes of maternal mortality a mong reproductive aged women in 
Kersa Health and Demographic Surveillance System, Eastern Ethiopia  
 
Version: 3 Date: 17 Sep 2018  
 
Reviewer: Reviewer 2  
 
Reviewer's report:  
 
"REVISION ASSESSMENT FROM THE ACADEMIC PEER REVIEWER:  
 
Has the  author addressed your concerns sufficiently for you to now recommend the work as a 
technically sound contribution? Yes  
 
Reviewer comments: The authors have sufficiently addressed all the issues raised in my previous 
review. In particular, they have provid ed references for the data used in Figure 6 as well as 
countries with higher maternal mortality ratios mentioned. Also, they have strengthened the 
Discussion on the possible reasons for the very higher maternal mortality ratio in 2011 compared 
with other y ears. In addition, they have improved on their referencing of the manuscript and the 
grammar of its text. "  
 
 
 
Are the methods appropriate and well described?  
If not, please specify what is required i n your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Does the work include the necessary controls?  
If not, please specify which controls are required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
If not, please expla in in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manus cript or would you recommend an 
additional statistical review?  
If an additional statistical review is recommended, please speci fy what aspects require further 
assessm ent in your comments to the editors.  
 
Not relevant to this manuscript  
Quality of written English  
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:  
 
Needs some language corrections before being published  
 
 
 
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