Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Fertility intentions and the adoption of long -acting and p ermanent contraception (LAPM) 
among women: Evidence from Western Kenya  
 
Version: 0 Date: 15 Jun 2017  
 
Reviewer: Shumayla Saifi  
 
Reviewer's report:  
 
Manuscript is well written and gave an insight to the FP in Kenya. But it can be improved. In the 
methodology section on page 5 line 22 there is a paragraph which according to me should placed 
in introduction part and not in methods.  
You have not mentioned the type of study anywhere in the manuscript.  
You can apply advance statistics to enhance the quality of your manuscript.  
Are the methods appropriate and well described?  
If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Does the work include the necessary controls?  
If not, please specify which controls are required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
If not, please explain in your comments to the authors.  
 
No 
 
Are yo u able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an  
additional statistical review?  
If an additional statistical review is recommended, please specify what aspects require further  
assessment in your comments to the editors.  
 
I am able  to assess the statistics  
 
Quality of written English  
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:  
 
Needs some language corrections before being published  
 
  
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