Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Information Needs of  Young Women Vaccinated agai nst HPV attending Colposcopy: A 
Qualitative Study  
 
Version: 2 Date: 11 Jul 2018  
 
Reviewer: Adeola Olaitan  
 
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An important area to explore and I commend the authors  
 
 
The cohort interviewed appeared unusually knowledgeable. It would have been interesting to 
explore their source of knowledge and the role of social med ia. 
 
 
It is unlikely that the conclusions can be generalised beyond this specific cohort but the study 
makes the point that all communities should be aware of the information needs of their 
populations  
 
 
 
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Yes 
 
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Yes 
 
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Yes 
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Acceptable  
 
 
 
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