Reviewer’s report
Title: Knowledge of HPV and acceptance of HPV vaccination among women in western China: a  
cross-sectional survey
Version: 2 Date: 16 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Catriona C. Kennedy
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Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper. This is an important topic and one of global  
concern. I would like more detail about how the questionnaire was developed. You state this was  
informed by the literature but provide no details of what this means. 
Did you try out/ pilot the questionnaire prior to distribution?
The abstract could be reviewed and in particular the results section synthesised rather than being laid  
out in full as this is repetitive for the reader. The section entitled background reads as the aim of the  
study. 
The response rate was high so it is worth commenting why this might be. Researchers often hav3  
difficulties getting such a good response so are there reasons why this was achieved?
There are some long sentences which require some revision throughout. 
Are the methods appropriate and well described?
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No
Does the work include the necessary controls?
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Yes
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?
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Yes
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an additional  
statistical review?
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assessment in your comments to the editors.
I am able to assess the statistics
Quality of written English
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Needs some language corrections before being published
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