Reviewer’s report
Title: 
Use of community-based interventions to promote Family Planning use
among Pastoralist women in Ethiopia: Cluster randomized controlled trial
Version: 
1 
Date: 
12 Oct 2020
Reviewer's report:
The subject of this article is very crucial especially for pastoralist communities.
In addition to this, the manuscript has some important limitations regarding its
structure and clearness.The most important problems are listed below. 
Methods :
"Sample size determination and sampling procedure" and "Randomization"
Sections should be located behind the "Study setting and period" section.
The section "Any change to the trial outcome after trial commenced" should be
at the end of the Method section.
The Statistical Analysis section should be written in more detail.
Result:
This section is very complex and difficult to understand. There is no harmony
between the table, the graph and the text. Tables and figure numbers are not
referenced in the right places in the text. This section should be rewritten
Table 1 and Table 3 can be combined. It is not clear for what purpose Table 2 is
given, it is not enough to refer to this table in the text.
In the Findings section, the results in lines 391-399 were obtained by which
analysis?
Discussion: This section is a bit long. It can be more fluent and shorter with a
more beautiful English.
Compliance with 
Refrences spelling rules should be reviewed.
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