Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Successful conservative treatment for massive u terine bleeding with non -septic 
disseminated intravascular coagulation after termination of early  pregnancy in a woman with 
huge adenomyosis: ca se report  
 
Version: 1 Date: 12 Jan 2020  
 
Reviewer: Jae Young Kwack  
 
Reviewer's report:  
 
Thank you for your response.  
 
There is some additional recommendations for more qualified report.  
 
1. In line 43 " due to the excess fibrinolytic system"  
 
"excessive activation of fibrinolytic system" or "excess fibrinolysis" would be more natural 
expression.  
 
 
2. In line 90, CRP needs to be expressed as " C -reactive protein (CRP) ( &lt;0.5mg/dl) "  
 
 
3. In line 98 -99,  For some readers, familliar expression is AST and ALT than GOT and GPT.  
 
I think that the value of GOT and GPT is in normal range and not essential to show disease 
progress.  
 
It was not mentioned in the previous labarotory data and I recommed deletion of GOT and GPT 
if you can, because there are too  many labarotory contents.  
 
 
4.In line 197 -199 
 
I suggest additional comments, that conservative treatment can be considered in the case of 
"women who wants to conserve her fertility".  
 
Are the methods appropri ate and well described?  
If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Does the work include the necessary controls?  
If not, please specify which controls are required in your comments to the authors.  
Unable to assess  
 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
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Yes 
 
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manus cript or would you recommend an 
additional statistical review?  
If an additional statisti cal review is recommended, please speci fy what aspects require further 
assessment in your comments to the editors.  
 
Not relevant to this manuscript  
 
Quality of written English  
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:  
 
Needs some language cor rections before being published  
 
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