Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Perceived seriousness mediates the influence of cervica l cancer knowledge on screening 
practices among female university students in Ghana  
 
Version: 1 Date: 05 Apr 2019  
 
Reviewer: Reviewer 2  
 
Reviewer's report:  
 
PEER REVIEWER ASSESSMENTS:  
 
OBJECTIVE - Full research articles: is there a clear objective that addresses one or several 
testable research questions? (Brief or other article types: is there a clear objective?)  
 
Yes - there is a clear objective  
 
 
DESIGN - Is the current approach (including controls and analysis protocols) appropriate for the 
objective?  
 
Yes - the approach is appropriate  
 
 
EXECUTION - Are the experiments and analyses performed with sufficient technical rigor to 
allow confidence in the results?  
 
Yes - experiments and analyses were performed appropriately  
 
 
STATISTICS - Is the use of statistics in the manuscript appropriate?  
 
Yes - appropriate statistical analyses have been used in the study  
 
 
INTERPRETATION - Is the current interpretation/discussion o f the results reasonable and not 
overstated?  
 
Yes - the author's interpretation is reasonable  
 
 
OVERALL MANUSCRIPT POTENTIAL - Has the author addressed your concerns sufficiently 
for you to now recommend the work as a technically sound contribution? If not, can further 
revisions be made to make the work technically sound?  
 
Yes - current version is technically sound  
 
 
PEER REVIEWER COMMENTS:  
 
GENERAL COMMENTS: The authors have done a good job responding to the previous 
critiques resulting in an improved researc h product.  
 
 
ADDITIONAL REQUESTS/SUGGESTIONS:  
 
There is one minor critique regarding the analytic approach.  The authors rely on a procedure in 
SPSS to perform the mediation analysis.  In this procedure the indirect effect is estimated and a 
95% confidence i nterval is calculated to determine mediation.  Although the approach is 
statistically sound the manuscript would benefit from a few sentences that explai n this approach 
a little more. Not being familiar with this approach this reviewer had to study the on line 
documentation to ensure that the approach was correct.  
 
Are the methods appropriate and well described?  
If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Does the work include the necessary controls?  
If not, please specify whic h controls are required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
If not, please explain in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an 
additional statistical review?  
If an additional statistical review is recommended, please speci fy what aspects require further 
assessment in your comments to the editors.  
 
I am able to assess the statistics  
 
Quality of written English  
Please indicate the quality of language in the manuscript:  
 
Acceptable  
 
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a specified t imeframe. Honoraria for reviews such as this are paid regardless of the reviewer 
recommendation.  
 
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