Reviewer’s report
Title: 
Acceptability, simplicity, and relevance of the new Human
papillomavirus/DNA test among 35- year-old ever-married women in a district
of Sri Lanka: Focus group discussions
Version: 
1 
Date: 
07 Aug 2020
Reviewer's report:
Areas for revision
Generally, the English language structuring was very poor, sometimes confusing
the reader on the message and information the authors were conveying. The
paragraphs were not organized and most times were stand-alone. Topic
sentences were barely used.
The whole manuscript needs re-writing and more information needs to be added
to the different parts of the manuscript.
Title: should be made to sound more concise and easier to understand
Affiliations should be corrected by removing the cadre and gender of the authors
Abstract: Apart from other minor corrections, the abstract should include How
the analysis was carried out and assumptions used for calculations and
inferences?
Background: The sentences should be merged as noted
Methods: Should be re-written to help easy understanding and revision.
Sentences and paragraphs should be rephrased to give better meaning.
Results: The results should be categorized into the identified thematic areas for
easy comprehension.
Therefore, this section should be re-written. The paragraphs were scattered and
should be organized. Tables should be arranged in ascending order as they
appeared in the text.
Discussion: Discussion was very poor. It almost resembled the results section.
This should be re-written and more references cited to back up claims. Common
ideas or related points should be put in the same paragraph. Each paragraph
beginning with a topic sentence
Tables: Table 3 was complex and difficult to comprehend. Table spanning 3
pages and poorly arranged.
Simple, easy to understand tables better. Please re-structure this table
Other corrections are embedded in the manuscript.
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