Review for 10.1186/s12876-020-01461-2 (2020)

Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Hepatic predominant presentation of Kawasaki Disease in Adolescence and review of  
literature  
 
Version: 0 Date: 23 Jun 2020  
 
Reviewer's report:  
 
PEER REVIEWER ASSESSMENTS:  
 
RELEVANCE - Does this case report make a contributio n to medical knowledge, have educational 
value, or highlight the need for a change in clinical practice or diagnostic/prognostic approaches?  
No, the findings of this report are well known and/or similar reports have already been published  
 
CASE DESCRIPTIO N - Are the details of the case sufficiently well described to understand the 
patient's symptoms and course of treatment?  
No - there are minor issues  
 
DIAGNOSIS/INTERPRETATION - Based on the facts presented, are the diagnosis, 
interpretation, and course o f treatment medically sound?  
Yes, the work described is medically sound  
 
DISCUSSION OF THE CASE - Does the discussion appropriately analyse the importance of the 
findings and their relevance to future understanding of disease processes, diagnosis or treatment? 
Has an adequate literature review pertinent to the case been include d? 
No - there are minor issues  
 
OVERALL MANUSCRIPT POTENTIAL - Could an appropriately REVISED version of this 
work represent a technically sound contribution?  
Probably - with minor revisions  
 
PEER REVIEWER COMMENTS:  
 
GENERAL COMMENTS: The report describes  a rare case of hepatic presentation of Kawasaki 
Disease in an adolescent; but, this has previously been observed and reported in the medical 
literature several times which is acknowledged by the literature review.  
 
Other limitations in this manuscript, is  that this case report is not novel and does not contribute to 
current scientific literature.  
 
REQUESTED REVISIONS:  
1. The ultrasound descriptions should specifically comment on the gallbladder since Kawasaki 
disease has been associated with gallbladder a bnormalities 2. The discussion should speculate on 
why the hepatic involvement is more common in adolescents and adults then in children with 
Kawasaki disease - why is this so? This is important in distinguishing this case report from the 
previous reports o f this association  
ADDITIONAL REQUESTS/SUGGESTIONS:  
Inclusion of specific gallbladder findings on each ultrasound and speculation as to why adolescents 
and adults present with hepatic manifestations but younger children do not  
 
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No 
 
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Yes 
 
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Acceptable  
 
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