Review for 10.1186/s12876-022-02117-z (2022)

Reviewer’s report
Title: 
Post-operative gastric outlet obstruction of giant hiatal hernia repair: A
case report
Version: 
0 
Date: 
29 Nov 2021
Reviewer's report:
PEER REVIEWER ASSESSMENTS: 
RELEVANCE - Does this case report make a contribution to medical
knowledge, have educational value, or highlight the need for a change in clinical
practice or diagnostic/prognostic approaches? 
Yes, this report contributes to medical knowledge
CASE DESCRIPTION - Are the details of the case sufficiently well described to
understand the patient's symptoms and course of treatment? 
Yes, the description of the case is sufficient
DIAGNOSIS/INTERPRETATION - Based on the facts presented, are the
diagnosis, interpretation, and course of treatment medically sound?
Yes, the work described is medically sound
DISCUSSION OF THE CASE - Does the discussion appropriately analyse the
importance of the findings and their relevance to future understanding of disease
processes, diagnosis or treatment? Has an adequate literature review pertinent to
the case been included?
Yes, the case is discussed fully in the context of the literature
OVERALL MANUSCRIPT POTENTIAL - Could an appropriately REVISED
version of this work represent a technically sound contribution?
Maybe - with major revisions
PEER REVIEWER COMMENTS: 
GENERAL COMMENTS: The case report describes an unusual and interesting
patient. The description is detailed and accurate, and the authors have outlined
the novelty of this patient.
REQUESTED REVISIONS: 
P9 L1 - Post operative GOO secondary to lap hernioplasty - the GOO was not
secondary to the surgery, but the underlying anatomical problem. This should be
corrected.
The manuscript needs significant improvement in grammar and writing style. A
few examples are listed below.
Abstract - 
In generally considered that more than 30%
Defect well-performed were far from perfectP3 L31 - Thoracic cage- 
Do you
mean thoracic cavity
P3 L34 - Is referred to - ? do you mean defined
P4 L12 - Not relieved obviously
P4 L15 - in local hospital - "at" the local hospital
P4 L25 - Blood routine - Routine blood investigations revealed
P4 L34 - urine routine tests - Routine urine tests
P4 L40 - Huge shadow
P4 L45 - presence of "a" giant
P4 L50 - Patient received the surgical treatment - patient underwent 
P4 L55 - When she lay in a supine - in the supine
P5 L1 - The giant - A giant hiatal hernia
P5 L37 - had diets or not - independent of meals
P5 L54 - So we had to operate again to make the gastric outflow unobstructed -
needs to rephrase
P6 L9 - gastrointestinal tract was smooth - rephrase
P6 L26 - occupying about - accounting for
P7 L9 - Surgery intervention - surgical intervention
L7 L31 - mesh reinforcement or not - irrespective of using a mesh?
P8 L9 - Scarcely under-discussed- this double negative means the total opposite
P8 L14 - well-performed - need to rephrase
P8 L22 - So huge
P8 L42 - Radiological imaging modality of barium swallow - needs rephrasing
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