Review for 10.1186/s12876-019-0933-0 (2019)

Reviewer ’s report  
 
Title: Encapsulating peritoneal sclerosis in a patient after all ogeneic hematopoietic stem cell 
transplantation  
 
Version: 2 Date: 20 Apr 2018  
 
Reviewer: Simon J Davies  
 
Reviewer's report:  
 
PThis is an very interesting case report - which is well presented.  
 
I agree with the patient's diagnosis.  
 
Provides some insight into the mechanisms of EPS  
 
 
 
Minor comments.  
 
Abstract conclusion: "Our case suggests that EPS may be complicated in patents with cGVHD 
associated serositis" - should read "EPS may complicate patients with cGVHD associated 
serositis"  
 
Given the suggestion that the inflammatory serositis led to the subsequent development of 
fibrosis and the development of EPS, it would be nice to mention more recent research in PD 
patients suggesting that intraperitoneal inflammation is very variable in PD, but does seem to 
predispose to EPS later e.g.  
 
 
Lambie MR, Chess J, Summers AM, Williams PF, To pley N, Davies SJ; GLOBAL Fluid Study 
Investigators. Peritoneal inflammation pr ecedes encapsulating peritoneal sclerosis: results from 
the GLOBAL Fluid Study.  Nephrol Dial Transplant. 2016 Mar;31(3):480 -6. doi: 
10.1093/ndt/gfv440.  Epub 2016 Jan 26. PubMed PMID: 26908833.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Are the methods appropriate and well described?  
If not, please specify what is required in your comments to the authors.  
 
Yes 
 
Does the work include the necessary controls?  
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Unable to assess  
 
Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the data shown?  
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Yes 
 
Are you able to assess any statistics in the manuscript or would you recommend an  
additional statistical review?  
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assessment in your comments to the editors.  
 
Not relevant to this manuscript  
 
Quality of written English  
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Needs some language corrections before being published  
 
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