Review for 10.1186/s12876-020-01489-4 (2020)

Reviewer’s report
Title: 
Perforation of the ascending colon during implantation of an indwelling
peritoneal catheter: a case report
Version: 
0 
Date: 
06 Jul 2020
Reviewer: 
Research Square Reviewer 1
Reviewer's report:
PEER REVIEWER ASSESSMENTS: 
RELEVANCE - Does this case report make a contribution to medical
knowledge, have educational value, or highlight the need for a change in clinical
practice or diagnostic/prognostic approaches? 
Yes, this report contributes to medical knowledge
CASE DESCRIPTION - Are the details of the case sufficiently well described to
understand the patient's symptoms and course of treatment? 
No - there are minor issues
DIAGNOSIS/INTERPRETATION - Based on the facts presented, are the
diagnosis, interpretation, and course of treatment medically sound?
Yes, the work described is medically sound
DISCUSSION OF THE CASE - Does the discussion appropriately analyse the
importance of the findings and their relevance to future understanding of disease
processes, diagnosis or treatment? Has an adequate literature review pertinent to
the case been included?
No - there are minor issues
OVERALL MANUSCRIPT POTENTIAL - Could an appropriately REVISED
version of this work represent a technically sound contribution?
Probably - with minor revisions
PEER REVIEWER COMMENTS: 
GENERAL COMMENTS: What is your overall impression of the report? 
This is a good case report that warns other physicians that percutaneous
placement of a tunneled peritoneal dialysis catheter should not be done 
in
patients with intraperitoneal adhesions because the catheter can injure the bowel
in insertion EVEN IF DIRECTED BY ULTRASONOGRAPHY..
Are you confident in the authors' description and interpretation of the report? 
Yes and no please see point #8 below. The patient 
developed "ischemic
perforation" in the same area of the original injury that was close at the time of
laparotomy, raising the question of whether it was 
a perforation( inadequate
operative closure) 
that will be questioned. Otherwise this is an educational case
report
Have the authors clearly outlined the need for publication by novelty of the case
or the specific adverse event? 
Yes I think that they have but their last sentence needs to be changed see point
#14 below concerning the adverse event 
Any patient with known adhesions
should not have a percutaneous placement of a peritoneal dialysis catheter!
REQUESTED REVISIONS: 
Suggested changes 
1. title 
page 2 line 7 , page 3 line 12, 
and figure 1 legend -----change "colon
ascendens perforation" 
to "perforation of the ascending colon""
2. Page 2 line 14 change to " because of extensive ascites , we decided to place a
tunneled peritoneal drainage catheter to enable appropriate lung-protective
ventilation ( Authors do you really mean "lung protective ventilation" or rather
"To enable appropriate ventilation"?) Also how was the catheter placed ?
Percutaneously with or without radiographic guidance or by an open
minilaparotomy? 
This needs to be added here, I see that 
later in the text 
it was
placed percutaneously under ultrasonographic guidance - I would add this to the
sentence
3. Page 2 line 17 change to "Notably, there was no pneumoperitoneum 
and
peritonitis had not yet set in". 
4 page 2 line 20 at the time of operation was another catheter placed?
5. 
Page 3 line 2- what is hydropic decompensations"? I would change this to "
refractory massive ascites"
6. Page 3 line 21 change to "We decided to establish drainage of the ascites " 
7. Page 3 line 41 replace "saturation" with " sutured closure"
8. Page E line 44 replace "right postoperatively" by "X days ( or X hours)
postoperatively"
9. Line 46. This sentence needs to be redone. Where was this spontaneous
perforation? If In the ascending colon, then it is 
much more likely due either to a
missed second perforation or to an ineffective colonic closure of the perforation
site-sorry but that is what the reader will suspect. 
In contrast, if the perforation
was distant to the site of drainage tube injury, then define it as such- I am a bit
concerned because most ischemic perforations occur in the ascending colon.
Thus you really need to define where this spontaneous perforation occurred and
that it was not at the site of drainage tube injury. Sorry ( remember that I am
NOT accusing you of this!!!!) but the readers and editor may believe that by
saying an ischemic perforation that you are trying time cover up a technical
injury related to the wrong decision of placing the catheter percutaneously or the
decision at the time of first laparotomy to just close the injury site. 
10. 
Page 3 line 55 add the word "percutaneous " before the word "tunneled" and
on line 56 
end the sentence by adding the phrase "In patients without known
adhesions"
11. Page 4 lines 3 and 4. 
I would strongly suggest that you add 
the phrase " may
have been" rather than "got". 
12. Page 4 line 15 the phrase "ultimate ratio" is meaningless to me 
change to "
the last resort" Be prepared , you also could have treated this patient
laparoscopically to repair the sites of perforation using a tunneled insertion of
the laparoscopy ports.You may want to add this to the discussion but say that
you believed 
that a laparotomy was most appropriate in this patient. 
13. Page 4 line 21 I would change the start of the sentence to 
"In retrospect" and
on line 23 the word "sub-ileus " is not a word
14. Finally I do NOT agree with your last sentence. I think that in such patients
with known adhesions as in your patient, an open insertion of the catheter should
be done by a minilaparotomy and not placed percutaneously--- 
No imaging
technique will be able to define a safe site in these patients with adhesions!!!!!
15. is figure 1 necessary? If so combine figures 1 and 2 into figure 1a and 1 b
cheaper and easier for the journal
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