Review for 10.1186/s12876-020-01466-x (2020)

Reviewer’ s report
Title: Primary abdominal cocoon with cryptorchidism a case report
Version: 2Date: 24 Aug 2020
Reviewer's report:Line 73-Replace "total gastrointestinal angiography with contrast enhanced CT abdomen with
angiography"-there is no terminology as "total gastrointestinal angiography"
Line 77-80-"intestinal effusion was more dilated than before, the gas-liquid level was elevated, theintestinal lumen had expanded and the intestinal obstruction was exacerbated, appearing asabnormal thickening of the small intestinal wall"- Rephrase and simplify the sentence-There waspersistent intestinal obstruction with dilated bowel loops with air fluid level and abnormalthickening of the bowel wallLine 120-122- "If the patient had not undergone laparoscopy for cryptorchidism, he might nothave had ACS bowel obstruction at such a young age.". Surgery was inevitable for thecryptorchidism, so this line seems irrelevant and doesn't give a clear message what the case reportintends to say.If the cocoon was diagnosed 6 years earlier at the time laparoscopic surgery for thecryptorchidism was planned, does the author want to convey the message that surgery should bedeferred. Rather, given the rarity of this condition, I am of the opinion that this is how it willpresent, if it is missed during the earlier surgery. And even if it is diagnosed at the time of 1stsurgery, one has to go ahead with the surgery for cryptorchidism to prevent future development ofmalignancy.Line 199-201- " CT of the anterior abdominal wall, Sagittal"- replace as- CT abdomen (coronalview) for panel C and CT abdomen (sagittal view) for panel D
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